Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Unidentified 501st Legion clone trooper (Yoda's saber throw)

Unidentified 501st clone trooper (Yoda's saber throw)

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 17:56, July 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Unlucky fellow

Support

 * 1) Pre-nom reviewed.  Master Jonathan &mdash; Jedi Council Chambers Saturday, July 16, 2011, 22:34 UTC
 * 2)  Kilson ( Let's have a chat ) 07:00, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Kilson

 * Reload the Infobox.
 * Done (but why?).
 * First of all, you forgot the mass field in the original version, and also, when you reload the infobox, remember to delete the extra Eras template. You should only have one Eras template when you are done.
 * Ah thanks.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 17:41, July 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * In the Bio, "After securing the Temple and killing most Jedi inside, the trooper and several other clones..." This sentence makes it sound as if the trooper was responsible for killing multiple Jedi. Please try to rephrase it.
 * Adressed.
 * This is not yet addressed. Kilson ( Let's have a chat ) 04:20, July 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * Meh, I fixed the intro. My fault, now done.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 17:41, July 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * Are you sure that the clone was played by Morrison. Many of the clone troopers are CGI in Episode III, so I don't see how you can say this one was played by Morrison.
 * Stupid TCW. You get used to it. Removed.
 * Otherwise, looks good. Kilson ( Let's have a chat ) 02:41, July 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 08:34, July 20, 2011 (UTC)

Toprawa

 * Can we not upload a new version of the infobox picture to zoom in, or at least focus, on the clone trooper, rather than having to show the entire scene and leaving an unnecessary image caption in the infobox? 22:58, July 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * I saw this and had a minute to spare with jpegcrop: File:DeathByShiak501stTrooper-ROTS.jpg The average border color to use for |imagebg= is #281818, if you decide to use it. N  AYAYEN  17:31, July 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * Thank you very much I added it.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 18:05, July 25, 2011 (UTC)

Jang

 * For chronological correctness, Vader and the 501st did not attack the Jedi Temple after the Order 66 was issued, it was before. In the intro, it sounds like the former.
 * I respectfully disagree. Palpatine gives Order 66 after he sends Vader, but the attack and Order 66 are at least concurrenz. Also Battlefront II clearly states that Order 66 was given and tehn the 501st attacked the Jedi Temple.
 * Same thing for the bio
 * See above.
 * "The Jedi proved to be too powerful for the clones," Too speculative. Please reword.
 * Better?
 * As a side note, I still don't understand these recent clone trooper articles that have "This clone, like Jango Fett, stood 1.83 meters" in the P&T. It seems highly irrelevant for me. Also, please watch your linking. For pipelink links, Lee, I saw a few instances of: Blahs . That "s" hanging outside the brackets needs to be placed within  Blahs . You should know this by now. Other than that, good work.  JangFett  (Talk) 23:53, July 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * For the linking I'll take a closer look at this in the future. For the P&T info, I only know that these info should be there. It seem irrelevant for me to, but I don't make the rules. Thanks for the review.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 18:05, July 25, 2011 (UTC)

GTQ
This might go under the so fix it rule but is the caption needed for the infobox picture he is the only clone trooper in the picture GTQ ( Problems? ) 00:57, July 25, 2011 (UTC)