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Inuse
While your edit is appreciated, the page currently has a template called Inuse at the top. This template means that someone is currently working on improving the article, and to avoid edit conflicts, no one other than the placer of the template should edit the page while the message is visible. Thank you for your cooperation.  JangFett  (Talk) 17:36, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re:501st dogma edits
Before you edit, please familiarize yourself with our policies. Articles are expected to have an adequate level of proper English, which does include good grammar. Your edits in that article were seen as low quality, and any instances of that in any article will be removed. Also, before submitting edits, please utilize the preview button and double check your work, as this will help you catch mistakes in the article.  JangFett  (Talk) 01:05, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re:
If a vehicle is pictured only, you can use Po to denote it. If it is described, just list it under the Sources section. 1358 (Talk)  21:21, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

File:Jedistarfighter detail.png
Categorize the files you upload. I'm sure you can also use better grammar on the file page as well as use SWE for Encyclopedia links. Thank you. 1358 (Talk)  23:22, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Re: Jendirian Valley
I know it doesn't look the best, but we shouldn't be adding excess whitespace or moving images "between" lines just for aesthetic purposes. Until the article gets expanded, it should be fine.  CC7567  (talk) 03:58, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Re: Wolffe
I appreciate the suggestion, but the article should be fine as it is. The image you're suggesting would only work as a Bts image because it's not directly IU given the four-image splicing, and the current Bts image simply works better because it indicates the conflict that was prevalent regarding his cybernetic eye. I would be happy to implement the image if there were more room, but there isn't at the moment. Thanks though. :)  CC7567  (talk) 01:57, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Re: The Essentail Atlas
If the Atlas explicitly says that, and isn't referring to any other event, then go ahead and do it. Just remember to source the article properly when creating it. Cheers, 1358  (Talk)  19:52, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

RE: vandalism and protection
Unfortunately, I am not an admin so I don't have that power. I've reported him on the WP:VIP page but I can't access IRC at work to get the attention of an admin. <- Omicron (Leave a message at the BEEP! ) 18:50, December 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * I just happened to have signed on to see the VIP posting, so I gave the vandal two weeks to think about what he has done. Proceeding to semi-protect the page...  Trak Nar  Ramble on 18:53, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Plun Kil
Thank you, you did good work. But please post that next time on the CAN page. Below the objections. That's easier for all users to see the status of the article.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 16:04, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Clone trooper
Hey, dogma. I just thought I'd let you know that I archived Unidentified clone trooper (Haurgab). You can nominate it for good status whenever you feel its ready. Cheers.&mdash; Cal Jedi (Personal Comm Channel) 21:00, January 6, 2012 (UTC)
 * I seen that you've addressed the objections, and I'll go through the article again when I get the chance. Cheers.&mdash; Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 23:23, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Feed on the dark side
Yeah I left a source for feed on the dark side, and removed the Needing vertiifcation tag. Why did re-add it?24.193.145.164 00:13, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

Your workbench
Please eliminate those categories, as well the Eras and Nickname templates, in your workbench. Those are for mainspace articles only, and not needed elsewhere, such as user workbenches. To remove them, please place a colon after the first two brackets&mdash;I.e, Category:Clone troopers. For the Eras and Nickname, placing the  html tag will remove them. Thanks,  JangFett  (Talk) 02:13, January 11, 2012 (UTC)
 * Insert the first tag before anything else, then close the html formatting. blah   JangFett  (Talk) 02:33, January 11, 2012 (UTC)
 * Again, please remove those categories.  JangFett  (Talk) 01:05, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re:Plun Kil CAN
Yep. Go right ahead. If you want some ideas of how to format it, feel free to look here or here. Cheers, and congratulations on your first status article!&mdash; Cal Jedi (Personal Comm Channel) 22:35, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

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Who keeps putting that Tremel was spared? I didn't see any source that says that. Can you explain?

Re:GAN objections
Hey, dogma. I'll take a look at the article again when I get the chance. Just so you know, please don't leave messages about objections. I keep an eye on the noms and will get to the objections when I get the chance. Cheers.&mdash; Cal Jedi (Personal Comm Channel) 03:08, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

Hi.
Hi. I have a wiki and very little people visit and contribute. Please visit http://clonewarsarchives.wikia.com/?redirect=no.

A1r2c3he5r 22:49, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re:TF-1726
Yes, that TCW article needed an update. However, if you're planning on renominating it, please be aware that you must rewrite the entire article, as it is frowned upon when someone takes others' work.  JangFett  (Talk) 01:03, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Comet quotes
Here are some quotes from the 2nd Service comic. As for the head quote replacement, one of these could work. I'm really not too sure of the second one because most of the time, it was hard to identify the clones in that room, and the "no doubt" could be Spitter. Ozzel was the only noticeable one, if you can see what I mean.  JangFett  (Talk) 02:04, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

"Comet, hold that junction breaker open while I rewire the circuit. With any luck, the lock will reset"

- Spitter to Comet, inside the agrocite processing facility

"Mind your place, trooper. I am your superior officer, and I have friends in high places.''" "''No doubt. We're getting out of here. Let's move!"

- Kendal Ozzel and Comet

Linking
Just to let you know, I noticed you have issues with your linking in the Comet article. If you're going to link something, albeit want to lowercase it, you can simply do seconds, without having to pipelink it as seconds. This goes with Luke Skywalker's as well, which is incorrect. The only time you could pipelink is when you're linking to conjectural titled articles or putting a word, such as "s," within the double brackets. For the conjectural example: Battle of Bomis Koori IV cannot be linked to that, but rather a battle. For the "s," if there's more than two Imperial-class Star Destroyers, this needs to be Imperial-class Star Destroyers (notice the italics and the "s" is within the double bracket.) Hope this helps.  JangFett  (Talk) 16:55, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Edit count
Hey, Dogma. While it's good to see you reviewing nominations on the CAN, please remember to update the vote count whenever you support an article. Cheers.&mdash; Cal Jedi (Personal Comm Channel) 01:35, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

Re:Comet
Sorry for the late reply, but we really cannot assume based on armor, unless it's stated that he was apart of that division. Saying he switched from one division to another without something confirming it is speculation. Until it's confirmed that he was actually part of that Khorm division, you could say he served alongside them.  JangFett  (Talk) 19:42, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

Re:
I'm not much of a fan of promotional images, but I forgot the article is not even a good article anymore. I'll be taking care of his expansion when I have time.  JangFett  (Talk) 17:44, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Infobox titles
Please take a look at the fifth item that was passed during the recent Mofference. You must include parenthetical descriptors for conjectural titled articles. I corrected the title for that Dathomir battle droid, but please watch out in the future. Thanks,  JangFett  (Talk) 23:21, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Uploading pictures
How did you upload pictures? I thought only administraters could? 174.255.0.175 23:17, March 3, 2012 (UTC)22JediMaster
 * Whoops. I wasn't logged in. It really was 22JediMaster 23:21, March 3, 2012 (UTC)22JediMaster.
 * RoutineValor-FC.jpgs 501st Dogma. I'll try to reach 50 edits and then see what happens. Also, no offense, but my favorite legion is the 212th Legion... I didn't need to say that I'd just like to put it out there. Thanks again. JediMaster22 21:47, March 5, 2012 (UTC)JediMaster22

New skin
do you know how to change the color on your page? Jangofett24 22:12, March 5, 2012 (UTC)Jangofett24

RE: Draa
Sure you can do this. There is no problem with adding that information.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 12:46, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Greetings
Whats up?Jangofett24
 * Sorry!!!!!Jangofett24 21:58, March 7, 2012 (UTC)Jangofett24

Your profile says you think clones are awesome. Me to i like the 501st legion the best.

Jangofett24 21:21, March 8, 2012 (UTC)Jangofett24

RE: Draa
Yes, I might be able to help you. If you allow me to edit your workbench, I can give it a copy-edit and leave some objections here. I'll take a look tomorrow.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 00:01, March 11, 2012 (UTC)


 * Review, part 1
 * Intro: I would remove the nickname of Gree and the "senior" before Clone Commander. It is too much context and plus we don't know if Gree was already a senior clone commander at that point. You can keep his nickname in the bio though.
 * Done
 * Intro: Context for the Geonosians.
 * Added
 * Intro: Elaborate a little bit more about the battle itself.
 * Expanded
 * Bio: Draa was one of the many clones of the bounty hunter Jango Fett, born on the planet Kamino to serve in the Galactic Republic's new clone army as a clone trooper: It sounds like Fett was born and trained on the planet. Please reword.
 * Reworded
 * Bio: fought against the Confederacy of Independent Systems as they defended the Republic during the Clone Wars.: Same here. Reword to make it clearer that the clones defend the Republic.
 * Done
 * Bio: Is the name "41st Elite Corps" mentioned in the episode? If not you have to find another source.
 * No mention of it, but since he served with Gree and had the markings of the 41st, I am assuming he is 41st.
 * Please see if you can find a source that the unit itself is the 41st. Hint: Take a look at CC's battle article or the episode guide.
 * Can I source it to Star Wars: The Clone Wars Character Encyclopedia? It's the source that states Gree is from the 41st.
 * Yes.
 * Sourced
 * Bio: The battle took place in 21 BBY, not c. 21 BBY. If you want infos about the general battle and sources, take a look at the FA.
 * Done
 * Bio: Do we know if Draa was in the Geonosis system since the beginning? If you cannot source it, remove it, as it is speculation.
 * Changed
 * Please elaborate a little bit more. You mention him and the others landing on the planet out of nowhere.
 * This remains.
 * Better?
 * Bio: You should mention that Poggle is Archduke of Geonosis. That's more specific as "Confederate Leader" who is in fact Dooku.
 * Done
 * Bio: Please mention that Offee is Unduli's Padawan.
 * Added
 * Bio: facility to destroy its main reactor, an effort that would result in the destruction of the foundry: Find a synonym for one of the "destroy"-words.
 * Completed
 * Bio: Context for the Super tanks. That helps to point out what "ray-shielded" is.
 * Added
 * Good job, but please state that the ray-shields made the tanks invulnerable against the Republic weapons.
 * Done
 * Bio: Draa and a detachment of troopers rendezvoused with their Jedi commanders on the opposite side of the canyon.: How?
 * Added
 * Bio: Did he really use both DCs? I recall only seing him with one during the battle, but I may be mistaken.
 * He used both, When he arives first on Dooku Boot he has a DC-15S blaster. However, when he is marching on the droid foundry he is seen with a DC-15A blaster rifle.
 * BtS: You can use the mistakenly recalled line as quote for this section.
 * Added
 * Checked all sources? StarWars.com Encyclopedia, SW Insiders, the Comics. As a note: You can take a look at the sources list in the battle article. Any mention of Draa is likely in these sources.
 * Started looking through the sources but I'll continue later.
 * Finished collecting sources. Could you take a look at the Clone wars adventure one, because it looks weird. 501st Dogma Republic_emblem.png( Comlink ) 17:08, March 12, 2012 (UTC)
 * Taken care of.
 * I'll continue once you dealt with these.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 10:03, March 11, 2012 (UTC)
 * Thanks so much for the review! 501st Dogma Republic_emblem.png( Comlink ) 14:09, March 11, 2012 (UTC)


 * Review, Part 2
 * Intro: You can still state a little bit more about the foundry fight in the intro, e.g. that they encountered super tanks and their mission was to "cover" the destruction carried out by Offee and Tano.
 * Expanded
 * Bio: In 21 BBY, Geonosis, site of the first battle in the Clone Wars, once again began to produce battle droids for the Separatist Droid Army.: Two problems here. First you need to mention that Geonosis is a planet and also I don not believe that the planet started producing droids.
 * Fixed
 * Good, but please say that the Geonosians produced the droids.
 * Done.
 * Bio: Context for the Ray Shielded Fortress.
 * Added
 * Bio: Context for Droideka and the AT-TEs.
 * Done
 * P&T: His Hasbro entry mentions he carries a blaster pistol. This needs to be added.
 * Done
 * I would recall to ask someone else to give the article another copy-edit. Master Jonathan would be a good choice.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:46, March 11, 2012 (UTC)
 * Good job, I'll give it a final look tomorrown.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 17:38, March 12, 2012 (UTC)
 * Thanks again for thoroughly going over the article. I'll contact Master Jonathan after you've gone over it tomorrow. 501st Dogma Republic_emblem.png( Comlink ) 18:34, March 12, 2012 (UTC)


 * Review, part 3
 * Give a little bit context for the lead quote.
 * Contexted
 * Led by Unduli and Skywalker, Draa and the troops marched to attack the Droid factory head on via a bridge, in an effort to distract the enemy as the Padawans infiltrated the foundry via the catacombs underneath the facility to sabotage its main reactor, an effort that would result in the destruction of the foundry.: Please change of the "via"s.
 * Done
 * He also sported a DC-15s side arm blaster. His helmet sported the color of the 41st Elite Corps, green: Two times sported, change one.
 * Changed one to "used".
 * That's all. Good job.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 13:01, March 13, 2012 (UTC)


 * No problem. Happy to help and keep on the good work.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 17:20, March 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re: Draa
I'm pretty sure it was an error on the guide's part, but you would have to check something like the subtitles in the episode's release in The Complete Season Two to verify it. I'm not sure off-hand myself. Hope that helps.  CC7567  (talk) 06:33, March 15, 2012 (UTC)

Hey
To be honest, it doesn't really hurt to delete the redirect. It was created &mdash; means someone has used that as a search word. Cheers, 1358  (Talk)  15:01, April 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re:
It's just a temporary lockdown since some people are just too stupid to accept this change. It should be unlocked shortly. 1358 (Talk)  20:41, April 1, 2012 (UTC)

Essential Guide to Warfare and Wedge
Could you tell me if the bio for Wedge in the Essential Guide to Warfare contains any new info at all? I can't afford to buy it and can't get it through the library. Since you added it to the article, I assume you have access to it. Thanks in advance. &mdash;MJ&mdash; Council Chambers Tuesday, April 3, 2012, 15:25 UTC


 * I'm baaaaaaack! Another user slapped an update tag for Warfare on Wedge Antilles, and has ignored my message requesting the new info. Could you take a second look through it to see what's been missed? I would greatly appreciate it. &mdash;MJ&mdash; Holocomm Friday, April 13, 2012, 00:41 UTC

Essential Guide to Warfare info for Zuckuss and 4-LOM, if any?
I intend to get the book tomorrow, if I can, but until then... Is there any information in the Essential Guide to Warfare for Zuckuss and/or 4-LOM that I need to be aware of? Thanks.  Trak Nar  Ramble on 03:30, April 6, 2012 (UTC)
 * Thanks! I just ordered the book today, so I'll be getting it next week.  So, it seems to be a bit of regurgitated information that has long since been addressed and essentially a picture-only source?  Trak Nar  Ramble on 03:46, April 7, 2012 (UTC)
 * Thanks for double-checking on that! :)  Trak Nar  Ramble on 03:12, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Warfare
Hey, Dogma, do you have the Essential Guide to Warfare? If you do (or even if you don't), do you want to join WookieeProject Warfare? The Guide has so much info, and it'll take a lot of people to get all of the info into the wiki.

Just sign your name to the project page if you want to join. Thanks! — Cade  Calrayn   03:50, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

WP:Warfare
Welcome! — Cade  Calrayn   16:18, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Stax
Hey there! Stax's CAN has been archived. Sorry for the delay. Feel free to GAN him any time. Menkooroo 02:23, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry
I'm sorry that i created that page... never saw tht we already had one... (Dragon boat freighter) --Biggestleo 22:54, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

Categorization
Just a quick reminder to please categorize your articles. I've tackled your two recent articles for you.  Trak Nar  Ramble on 06:15, April 21, 2012 (UTC)