Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Ky'lessan


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Ky'lessan

 * Nominated by: Skippy Farlstendoiro 06:05, October 19, 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: An alien species not beginning with an S. I know I'm going to regret this…

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1) Not only does their name not start with S, they can't even pronounce S! You've done it now, Skippy! ~ SavageBob 06:36, October 23, 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 06:23, October 27, 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) --Eyrezer 08:39, October 27, 2009 (UTC)
 * 4)  Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 09:42, October 27, 2009 (UTC)
 * 5)  Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 17:50, November 6, 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Soresu
 * 2) * Just checking the intro quote and the word "thirs". Is that "s" actually in the soure? Since he doesn't usually pronounce "s". Or is this isolated to plurals. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 11:51, October 26, 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) **Yeth it ith. Added info on exceptions for their lisp. --Skippy Farlstendoiro 13:31, October 26, 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) ***I have absolutely not idea what what you wrote means, but I take it you know what you're doing. :) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 06:23, October 27, 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) The Grand Master
 * 6) * In the intro you say Snake-Eyes was the "right-hand sentient" of Bloodhawk, and betrayed his partner for profit; however, in the main body, you never identify Bloodhawk as his partner, nor do you specify that he "betrayed her for profit"; only that he kidnapped her. Remember, no information should be present only in the intro.
 * 7) * Also, "right-hand sentient" sounds a little too colloquial.
 * 8) * Jonjedigrandmaster ( Jedi Beacon ) 21:19, November 5, 2009 (UTC)
 * 9) **Both done. --Skippy Farlstendoiro 07:55, November 6, 2009 (UTC)

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