Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Bureau of Scouting and Exploration Services


 * ''The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a featured article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.

(5 Inq/4 Users/9 Total)
Support
 * 1) As nominator. Single-source article.  Gonk  ( Gonk! ) 16:39, 29 July 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Jedimca0(Do or Do Not, There is No Try) 14:06, 4 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) Ozzel 21:32, 4 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 4)  Greyman ( Paratus ) 03:02, 5 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 5) Green Tentacle (Talk) 15:58, 7 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 6) Interesting stuff! Thefourdotelipsis 00:30, 8 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 7)  Chack Jadson  Talk  12:58, 9 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 8) Looks good. Unit 8311 14:16, 9 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 9) Lord Hydronium 21:58, 11 August 2007 (UTC)

Object
 * From the desk of Atarumaster88
 * Missions section looks all jumbled up. Stuff about finding new planets is in the Imperial entanglements section, etc.
 * Rectified.
 * Under Secretary of Scout Services should be linked and have an article
 * In compliance.
 * If Library of Systems and Request for Privacy are proper nouns, they should be linked and have articles. If not, they should be de-capped
 * Linked to articles.
 * BTS should be adjusted to reflect that other literature does exist
 * Adjustment complete.
 * Material in references section does not match the appearances or sources section.
 * Explanation added.
 * Infobox is not ref'd.
 * Ref'd.
 * Have a Super Terrific Friendly Un-frustrating day. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 15:01, 9 August 2007 (UTC)

Comments

'''Approved by Inquisitorius 13:58, 12 August 2007 (UTC)
 * One thing I still need to do is try and get an infobox working. There's not a lot of specific info (names, dates, etc.) but I'm gonna give it a shot.  Gonk  ( Gonk! ) 16:39, 29 July 2007 (UTC)
 * It turns out the NRSS is mentioned in a couple Adventure Journals. But it's not just a Mentioned Only, so I gotta throw in REF tags all over the place. There's also just a teensy amount of content left to include from GG8.  Gonk  ( Gonk! ) 21:38, 29 July 2007 (UTC)
 * I hate to say it, but it's got five redlinks.  Chack Jadson  Talk 01:38, 30 July 2007 (UTC)
 * No, by all means, say it. I've cut it down to two and those last two won't be sticking around much longer either.  Gonk  ( Gonk! ) 02:06, 30 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Needs a longer intro. Green Tentacle (Talk) 11:58, 30 July 2007 (UTC)
 * I presume it is also mentioned in the Scout's Dispatch in SWAJ 6? If possible, I think detailing some of Koren's exploits as an example would be beneficial to the aritcle. --Eyrezer 09:23, 1 August 2007 (UTC)
 * I added a "Notable members" section. Is that kind of what you had in mind?  Gonk  ( Gonk! ) 13:27, 3 August 2007 (UTC)
 * That is what I had in mind. I think it could be expanded more though. Do you have access to the Scouts Dispatches? --Eyrezer 06:18, 5 August 2007 (UTC)
 * I do. I'll add a sentence or two, and let someone else expand Korren's article more fully :)  Gonk  ( Gonk! ) 12:31, 8 August 2007 (UTC)
 * I'd still like to see that expanded more if possible. --Eyrezer 00:46, 11 August 2007 (UTC)
 * I moved a sentence from the intro to Creation since I think it was needed there more. Move it back if you want, but I think the Creation section starts a little abruptly without it. Green Tentacle (Talk) 09:27, 1 August 2007 (UTC)
 * Header refs make me sad. :-( -- Ozzel 20:33, 4 August 2007 (UTC)
 * Me too Ozzel, but that's what I was told to do. If there's a better way, I am happy to listen.  Gonk  ( Gonk! ) 20:49, 4 August 2007 (UTC)
 * No more header refs make me happy. :-) -- Ozzel 21:32, 4 August 2007 (UTC)