Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Inquisitorius Headquarters

Coruscant tower

 * Nominated by:  Vitus Infinitus  Talk 04:43, February 2, 2018 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Recently updating articles related to the Sith, saw this in an episode guide and just had a good feeling about it!

Support

 * &mdash; Tommuskq  Imperial Emblem.svg ( TAKE A SEAT ) 20:47, February 4, 2018 (UTC)
 * Thanks!-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 20:50, February 4, 2018 (UTC)


 * 1)  QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 16:15, March 15, 2018 (UTC)

Tommy

 * I think there should be a little expansion on Dooku's arrival in AotC, with an earlier link to the solar sailer and the hangar bay. &mdash; Tommuskq  Imperial Emblem.svg ( TAKE A SEAT ) 19:08, February 4, 2018 (UTC)
 * How is it now?-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 19:50, February 4, 2018 (UTC)
 * Great.&mdash; Tommuskq  Imperial Emblem.svg ( TAKE A SEAT ) 20:01, February 4, 2018 (UTC)
 * Hangar is incorrectly spelled as "hanger", which is something you put clothes on (I've misspelled this myself many times). &mdash; Tommuskq  Imperial Emblem.svg ( TAKE A SEAT ) 19:08, February 4, 2018 (UTC)
 * Fixed!-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 19:50, February 4, 2018 (UTC)
 * Perhaps a short sentence at the end explaining that Vader succeeded in killing Jocasta Nu. &mdash; Tommuskq  Imperial Emblem.svg ( TAKE A SEAT ) 19:08, February 4, 2018 (UTC)
 * Expanded upon-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 19:50, February 4, 2018 (UTC)
 * Very good.&mdash; Tommuskq  Imperial Emblem.svg ( TAKE A SEAT ) 20:01, February 4, 2018 (UTC)
 * I'd like you to take a look at the links. Some more need to be added, such as hangar, and Jedi Purge is linked more than once in the history section. I fear this may be an issue with other links. &mdash; Tommuskq  Imperial Emblem.svg ( TAKE A SEAT ) 20:01, February 4, 2018 (UTC)
 * Fixed all I could find-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 20:16, February 4, 2018 (UTC)
 * Perfect.&mdash; Tommuskq  Imperial Emblem.svg ( TAKE A SEAT ) 20:45, February 4, 2018 (UTC)
 * You can't have quotes in the main article text. Either add a new subheading to accommodate it or more it so it's under a pre-existing one. &mdash; Tommuskq  Imperial Emblem.svg ( TAKE A SEAT ) 20:01, February 4, 2018 (UTC)
 * Fixed-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 20:16, February 4, 2018 (UTC)
 * I feel an imagecat in the appearances would be beneficial. &mdash; Tommuskq  Imperial Emblem.svg ( TAKE A SEAT ) 20:03, February 4, 2018 (UTC)
 * Created and added-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 20:31, February 4, 2018 (UTC)
 * Fantastic.&mdash; Tommuskq  Imperial Emblem.svg ( TAKE A SEAT ) 20:45, February 4, 2018 (UTC)
 * Perhaps a bit saying about the building's legends name in BTS? &mdash; Tommuskq  Imperial Emblem.svg ( TAKE A SEAT ) 11:33, February 11, 2018 (UTC)
 * Added-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 18:04, February 11, 2018 (UTC)
 * Date for Plagueis?&mdash; Tommy-Macaroni  Imperial Emblem.svg ( TAKE A SEAT ) 18:07, February 11, 2018 (UTC)
 * Done-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 18:19, February 11, 2018 (UTC)
 * Great, good work!&mdash; Tommy-Macaroni  Imperial Emblem.svg ( TAKE A SEAT ) 18:50, February 11, 2018 (UTC)
 * The old title is still used in the opening to the design section and in ref 1.
 * Fixed-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 13:33, August 9, 2018 (UTC)
 * Please correct your image punctuation.
 * How is it now?-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 13:33, August 9, 2018 (UTC)
 * "where they were greeted by two Kallidahin servants who took Koth's captured newborn and the Grand Inquisitor." Please add some commas. At the moment it sounds like the Kallidahins took the grand inquisitor.
 * Fixed-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 13:33, August 9, 2018 (UTC)
 * It now sounds like the inquisitor was also taking the baby.
 * Reworded-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 18:50, August 9, 2018 (UTC)
 * "when once there," This doesn't make sense.
 * Fixed-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 13:33, August 9, 2018 (UTC)
 * "several members of the Inquisitors," This should either be "several members of the Inquisitorius" or "several of the Inquisitors".
 * Done-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 13:33, August 9, 2018 (UTC)
 * On the page with Vader meditating, he appears to have an office in the tower. Please add this to the article.
 * The office appears several times in the series and looks to be in the Federal District, not in The Works.-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 13:33, August 9, 2018 (UTC)
 * "Vader confronted the two and ignited his lightsaber.[10]" When? In the last panel we only see Vader's shadow. No lightsaber. ' Tommy ' Imperial Emblem.svg ' Macaroni ' 12:49, August 9, 2018 (UTC)
 * Actually, the last panel does show him ignite his lightsaber, while the two Inquisitors appear to be shocked.-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 13:33, August 9, 2018 (UTC)
 * How odd. Of all the online versions I've seen the last panel in the one this image is from, and only features a shadow of Vader's helmet. Oh well, I think we'll find out what happens next in issue 20 anyway. ' Tommy ' Imperial Emblem.svg ' Macaroni ' 14:57, August 9, 2018 (UTC)
 * That's really weird. The next page has an advertisement and the subsequent has the final panel, which shows Vader igniting his saber while the two Inquisitors are surprised with a "To be continued&hellip;" at the bottom right corner of the page. I haven't found the last page anywhere online. I've talked to others and they haven't seen the page anywhere online either. I could send you a picture of my physical copy if you'd like.-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 18:50, August 9, 2018 (UTC)
 * Don't worry, I believe you, although that is odd. ' Tommy ' Imperial Emblem.svg ' Macaroni ' 18:55, August 9, 2018 (UTC)

QGJ

 * Does "The" in "The Grand Inquisitor" needs to be capitalized in the intro?
 * Fixed!-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 21:44, March 14, 2018 (UTC)
 * In the year 22 BBY, following a duel between Count Dooku, leader of the Confederacy of Independent Systems, and the Jedi in a hangar on Geonosis I think it would be a good idea to specify which Jedi we are talking about here.
 * Added-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 21:44, March 14, 2018 (UTC)
 * Sidious was pleased at the news, as he had achieved another milestone in his plan to destroy the Jedi Order and rule the galaxy, soon stating that everything was going according to plan. Not sure if "soon" is needed here. Sounds weird to me, at least. QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 16:28, March 14, 2018 (UTC)
 * Fixed!-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 21:44, March 14, 2018 (UTC)

Imperators abandoned tower? Coruscant abandoned Imperators?

 * Please get the missing backup links.
 * Done-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 18:22, April 6, 2018 (UTC)
 * You should provide archival dates for the two instances of SWArchive, since the automatically generated backup links aren't working.
 * Could you help me out with this particular issue? I can't seem to correctly make it to display the archive link, I added the full archive link as a placeholder for now-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 15:38, March 25, 2018 (UTC)
 * What you should do is take the original, obsolete link and stick in here. Then browse through the archived versions of the page until you find one that works, copy the archival date from the resulting URL (you'll be looking for the YYYYMMDDHHMMSS part of the URL) and paste it into the archivedate field of the SWArchive template. It's exactly the same as how the Databank template works in the Sources section of this article.  Imperators II (Talk) 15:48, March 25, 2018 (UTC)
 * Fixed!-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 16:47, March 25, 2018 (UTC)
 * Category:Infoboxes with missing parameters.
 * Doesn't show up anymore-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 16:48, March 25, 2018 (UTC)
 * Nevermind, it's showing again. Could this also be with one of the cite templates?-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 16:51, March 25, 2018 (UTC)
 * No. Try reloading the infobox, i.e., going to the source page for the relevant infobox template and copying the template code to this article anew.  Imperators II (Talk) 17:14, March 25, 2018 (UTC)
 * Tried that, still shows up. I may be doing something wrong-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 23:06, March 25, 2018 (UTC)
 * See what I did there.  Imperators II (Talk) 08:44, March 26, 2018 (UTC)
 * Got it :)-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 16:42, April 6, 2018 (UTC)
 * Would it be possible for you to get audio files for the quotes? You could ask Ayrehead for help with the film quotes, at least.
 * I don't know how to get those audio files. I'll ask Ayrehead-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 14:46, March 25, 2018 (UTC)
 * Audio files have been uploaded-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 12:42, April 5, 2018 (UTC)
 * Images should be below quotes.
 * Fixed-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 14:46, March 25, 2018 (UTC)
 * Could you break up the longer paragraphs in "Breaking the Jedi Order" and "Imperial Era" into smaller ones? Remember articles have to be formatted for the Oasis skin now, and long paragraphs look really intimidating and unappealing to the reader in Oasis.
 * Fixed-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 14:46, March 25, 2018 (UTC)
 * Please remove all duplicate links.
 * Done!-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 23:06, March 25, 2018 (UTC)
 * Seven more links remaining.  Imperators II (Talk) 06:49, April 7, 2018 (UTC)
 * How can I find them? I turned on the gadget for it but it doesn't highlight the duplicates-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 02:56, April 8, 2018 (UTC)
 * Maybe it only works in Monobook? I can just tell the links to look for: "Clone Wars" in intro, "Works," "Coruscant," and "Galactic Empire" in "Bringing good news," "Works" in "Breaking the Jedi Order," and "19 BBY" and "Galactic Empire" in "Imperial Era."  Imperators II (Talk) 07:00, April 8, 2018 (UTC)
 * Should be all of them-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 17:09, April 8, 2018 (UTC)
 * Okay, the BTS should be rewritten:
 * The first thing you should mention is that the tower was created for Ep II.
 * Then you should mention when it was first given its canonical name.
 * And only then you should describe the tower's first Legends appearance and history of naming.
 * Done all-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 16:42, April 6, 2018 (UTC)
 * You're using the tower's full name in every BTS sentence, which is extremely redundant. Please reword.  Imperators II (Talk) 07:01, April 7, 2018 (UTC)
 * Fixed-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 02:56, April 8, 2018 (UTC)
 * Context for Episode II, and there's a missing comma in that sentence.  Imperators II (Talk) 07:01, April 7, 2018 (UTC)
 * Done-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 02:56, April 8, 2018 (UTC)
 * Context for TCW.  Imperators II (Talk) 07:01, April 7, 2018 (UTC)
 * Added-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 02:56, April 8, 2018 (UTC)
 * I fail to see how the tower's comic book debut is notable enough for a BTS mention.  Imperators II (Talk) 07:01, April 7, 2018 (UTC)
 * RIP, removed-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 02:56, April 8, 2018 (UTC)
 * First sentence says the tower first appeared in the film, which directly contradicts the first sentence of the second paragraph saying it first appeared in the novelization. Please revise.  Imperators II (Talk) 07:01, April 7, 2018 (UTC)
 * Fixed-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 02:56, April 8, 2018 (UTC)
 * Now look at that sentence talking about the novel. Why does it end with a comma? Why do you use the full title of the film twice in such proximity?  Imperators II (Talk) 06:57, April 8, 2018 (UTC)
 * Fixed-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 16:39, April 8, 2018 (UTC)
 * For the "Sacrifice" part, you shouldn't lead with the fact that the tower appeared in yet another source&mdash;that's not notable. Start with the fact that the tower was first identified in the guide for the episode, for which you can then provide the necessary context.  Imperators II (Talk) 07:01, April 7, 2018 (UTC)
 * I don't know how exactly I can reword this. Do you mean to that I should state that it was identified in the Sacrifice guide before I mention that it appeared in the episode?-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 02:56, April 8, 2018 (UTC)
 * Yes. And you don't even need to mention it actually appeared in the episode.  Imperators II (Talk) 06:57, April 8, 2018 (UTC)
 * Reworded. I still mentioned that it appeared in Sacrifice but if you think it's best to remove the mention just let me know-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 20:44, April 12, 2018 (UTC)
 * For the last sentence, the wording "The Coruscant abandoned tower also appeared in [...]" is ineffective and misleading about the fact's notability&mdash;if you look at the Legends page, the building appeared in a whole bunch of other sources other than the film and the novelization, but we're not going to list them all, are we? You should start off with the critical information, which is that the building was provided it's formal name in the book.  Imperators II (Talk) 07:01, April 7, 2018 (UTC)
 * Reworded-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 02:56, April 8, 2018 (UTC)
 * Again, that sentence is now missing a comma.  Imperators II (Talk) 06:57, April 8, 2018 (UTC)
 * Think I fixed it-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 20:44, April 12, 2018 (UTC)
 * Replace all instances of "during or prior" or any variations thereof with "by [date]".
 * Should be all of them now-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 16:42, April 6, 2018 (UTC)
 * Infobox remaining.  Imperators II (Talk) 06:49, April 7, 2018 (UTC)
 * Ah, fixed-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 02:56, April 8, 2018 (UTC)
 * Also in the first ref.  Imperators II (Talk) 06:57, April 8, 2018 (UTC)
 * Fixed-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 16:39, April 8, 2018 (UTC)
 * Please clean up the quotes.
 * Make sure there are no spelling or grammar mistakes, and no extra spacing and such.
 * Done-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 23:06, March 25, 2018 (UTC)
 * Are you sure? I'm still seeing an extra whitespace. "I have good news for you my lord." &mdash; shouldn't there be a comma here?  Imperators II (Talk) 06:52, April 7, 2018 (UTC)
 * Okay, now done-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 02:56, April 8, 2018 (UTC)
 * You still missed the whitespace.  Imperators II (Talk) 06:57, April 8, 2018 (UTC)
 * Write the quote attributions in a consistent manner, providing full names for the speakers in all instances.
 * Fixed-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 23:06, March 25, 2018 (UTC)
 * For the intro quote, only list Sidious in attribution, as it's evident from the quote he's speaking to Tyranus.  Imperators II (Talk) 06:52, April 7, 2018 (UTC)
 * Done-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 02:56, April 8, 2018 (UTC)
 * For the first body quote, it should be "Tyranus and Sidious," not "Tyranus to Sidious."  Imperators II (Talk) 06:52, April 7, 2018 (UTC)
 * Done-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 02:56, April 8, 2018 (UTC)
 * Kraken's rank is unnecessary in attribution.  Imperators II (Talk) 06:52, April 7, 2018 (UTC)
 * Removed and added rank to body-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 02:56, April 8, 2018 (UTC)
 * Wherever possible, try to make do with just what the quotes say, instead of adding context in attribution. For example, in the "Breaking the Jedi Order" quote just noting the speakers is sufficient.
 * Fixed!-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 23:06, March 25, 2018 (UTC)
 * Why isn't FacebookCite used for reference 20?  Imperators II (Talk) 09:31, March 25, 2018 (UTC)
 * Did not know about that, added-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 14:46, March 25, 2018 (UTC)
 * Note that punctuation goes inside double quotes.  Imperators II (Talk) 06:49, April 7, 2018 (UTC)
 * Got it-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 02:56, April 8, 2018 (UTC)
 * You missed one.  Imperators II (Talk) 06:57, April 8, 2018 (UTC)
 * In ref 1, please provide a source for Dooku arriving at the tower after the Battle of Geonosis.  Imperators II (Talk) 06:57, April 8, 2018 (UTC)
 * Fixed-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 16:39, April 8, 2018 (UTC)
 * And reword the reference so that it's not using "we."  Imperators II (Talk) 06:57, April 8, 2018 (UTC)
 * Done-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 16:39, April 8, 2018 (UTC)
 * "Breaking the Jedi Order" and "Imperial Era" could use more images.  Imperators II (Talk) 21:25, April 13, 2018 (UTC)
 * Added images-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 22:22, April 13, 2018 (UTC)
 * s "derilect" in Sources your typo or the listed source's?  Imperators II (Talk) 21:25, April 13, 2018 (UTC)
 * That wasn't my addition, I'm assuming it's a typo-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 22:15, April 13, 2018 (UTC)
 * You should be more careful with your referencing. Currently ref 10 implies that Yoda traveled to Moraband after Qui-Gon communicated with him, which you source to Episode I. Also, ref 14 implies that Episode III reveals who founded the Inquisitorius.  Imperators II (Talk) 17:08, April 18, 2018 (UTC)
 * I think I fixed the issue with ref 10, but I'm not sure how ref 14 implies what you say. Ref 14 is for Palpatine becoming Emperor and that he was Sidious, and ref 4 is that he created the Inquisitorius and all. Could you elaborate further on what needs to be fixed and how? Thanks!-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 03:51, April 19, 2018 (UTC)
 * You can only use the ROTS ref for the description of what Sidious was, i.e., "publicly [...]." The rest of that sentence needs to be sourced to a source that says Sidious founded the Inquisitorius when he was Emperor. Also, the "now" in that sentence must go, and you can't actually source the fact that Qui-Gon died "a decade ago" to Episode I.  Imperators II (Talk) 18:57, April 20, 2018 (UTC)
 * I'm really sorry, but I'm still confused about the Emperor/Inquisitorius part. If I change ref 14 to go after "publicly" instead of after "Empire", I would need a different source that states that he was the former Supreme Chancellor and became the Emperor, which Episode III establishes and is attributed to ref 14. The ref that he founded the Inquisitorius is attributed to the Darth Vader comic and is ref 4, so I'm not exactly sure what to do here, I'm kind of lost in terms of what should be changed in respects to that. Removed "now" and fixed Qui-Gon source.-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 21:34, April 28, 2018 (UTC)
 * What you need to do is the following:
 * Reference "Darth Sidious" to a source that says Sidious founded the Inquisitorius (I'm guessing that's Dark Lord of the Sith 6),
 * "publicly the former Supreme Chancellor of the Galactic Republic Sheev Palpatine and subsequent Galactic Emperor of the Empire" can remain sourced to Episode III, and
 * "after the rise of the Galactic Empire and the destruction of the Jedi Order" should be referenced to a source that says Sidious founded the Inquisitorius following the establishment of the Empire and the eradication of the Jedi.  Imperators II (Talk) 14:09, April 30, 2018 (UTC)
 * First step and second step can both be sourced to Dark Lord of the Sith 6. Done-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 14:18, April 30, 2018 (UTC)
 * Context for Coruscant and Geonosis.  Imperators II (Talk) 10:07, May 3, 2018 (UTC)
 * Added-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 15:32, May 4, 2018 (UTC)
 * Can the fact that Geonosis is in the Outer Rim be sourced to Episode II?  Imperators II (Talk) 19:39, May 8, 2018 (UTC)
 * Properly sourced-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 15:58, May 14, 2018 (UTC)
 * Why do you only list the secret hangar, but not the ceremonial chamber, in the infobox?  Imperators II (Talk) 10:07, May 3, 2018 (UTC)
 * Whoops, added-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 14:39, May 4, 2018 (UTC)
 * I'm not sure whether you can actually reference the tower being "old" to Episode II. Decrepit/ruined, sure. Also, I would like for you to add some more detailed description of the tower's appearance, i.e., its general shape and its condition by 22 BBY.  Imperators II (Talk) 10:07, May 3, 2018 (UTC)
 * Done-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 15:32, May 4, 2018 (UTC)
 * The 22 BBY, 19 BBY, and Empire info should be presented chronologically.  Imperators II (Talk) 19:39, May 8, 2018 (UTC)
 * Rearranged-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 15:58, May 14, 2018 (UTC)
 * I believe you now redundantly introduce the secret hangar twice in Description. Also it's no longer really clear as to where exactly is the ceremonial chamber located in - the main building? the smaller secondary structure?  Imperators II (Talk) 07:34, May 17, 2018 (UTC)
 * Fixed-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 12:55, May 17, 2018 (UTC)
 * As it is now, the part about the tower's "neglectful state" would serve as a nice bridge between the second and third paragraph of Description. Could you move it either to the end of the second one or the beginning of the third one?  Imperators II (Talk) 19:04, July 18, 2018 (UTC)
 * Done-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 13:13, July 31, 2018 (UTC)
 * Please eliminate all double referencing, referencing sentences or fragments thereof to single sources as necessary.  Imperators II (Talk) 10:07, May 3, 2018 (UTC)
 * Think I got all of them-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 03:43, May 5, 2018 (UTC)
 * The "Sacrifice" image isn't a perfect fit for the Episode II section.  Imperators II (Talk) 10:07, May 3, 2018 (UTC)
 * There was this file- File:Theworks.jpg which was similar to the TCW one but was from Episode II and looks like it has been deleted unfortunately. Added the image of the secret hangar from Episode II instead-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 14:39, May 4, 2018 (UTC)
 * "which ignited the galaxy-wide Clone Wars" &mdash; this can't really be sourced to Episode II, since the film only shows the Battle of Geonosis and nothing else of the Clone Wars.  Imperators II (Talk) 10:07, May 3, 2018 (UTC)
 * Sourced to TCW film-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 14:39, May 4, 2018 (UTC)
 * "following a duel between Count Dooku, leader of the Confederacy of Independent Systems, and the Jedi Obi-Wan Kenobi, Anakin Skywalker, and Yoda in a hangar on Geonosis during the Battle of Geonosis, which ignited the galaxy-wide Clone Wars, Count Dooku, secretly the Sith Lord Darth Tyranus" &mdash; "Count Dooku" gets a bit repetitive here, please reword.  Imperators II (Talk) 10:07, May 3, 2018 (UTC)
 * Reworded-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 03:43, May 5, 2018 (UTC)
 * "Once Dooku had arrived at the abandoned tower's hangar, he was greeted by his Sith Master, Darth Sidious, with Dooku informing his master that" &mdash; both "Dooku" and "master" gets a bit repetitive here, please rephrase.  Imperators II (Talk) 10:07, May 3, 2018 (UTC)
 * Fixed-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 03:43, May 5, 2018 (UTC)
 * "his plan to destroy the Jedi Order and rule the galaxy" &mdash; I doubt this can be sourced to Episode II.  Imperators II (Talk) 10:07, May 3, 2018 (UTC)
 * Sourced-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 16:22, May 4, 2018 (UTC)
 * Please create a category for locations within the Works/The Works.  Imperators II (Talk) 10:52, May 3, 2018 (UTC)
 * Created-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 14:39, May 4, 2018 (UTC)
 * "as he believed that they would be much safer there with his master" &mdash; this makes it sound like Dooku specifically mentioned in the film that the plans would be safer in the abandoned tower.  Imperators II (Talk) 19:39, May 8, 2018 (UTC)
 * Fixed-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 20:44, May 8, 2018 (UTC)
 * Safer compared to where?  Imperators II (Talk) 07:34, May 17, 2018 (UTC)
 * I'd assume on Geonosis or with Poggle but I don't think it's explicitly stated in Episode II.-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 12:55, May 17, 2018 (UTC)
 * Actually, I don't think that has any relevance whatsoever to the tower.  Imperators II (Talk) 19:04, July 18, 2018 (UTC)
 * Removed-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 20:59, July 18, 2018 (UTC)
 * Duplicate links again.  Imperators II (Talk) 19:04, July 18, 2018 (UTC)
 * Fixed-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 20:59, July 18, 2018 (UTC)
 * Description: "that served as a secret retreat and storage for Sith artifacts" &mdash; firstly, this clause causes the already longish sentence it is in to be really run-on; secondly it feels out of place, with the rest of the section strictly talking about the location and layout of the building as opposed to its application (maybe put it in History instead?).  Imperators II (Talk) 19:04, July 18, 2018 (UTC)
 * Moved to first paragraph of history section-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 20:59, July 18, 2018 (UTC)

AV

 * The the name of the industrial zone that the tower was located, nor the fact that it was an industrial zone at all, cannot be sourced to AotC. -  AV-6R7  Crew Pit 15:39, May 17, 2018 (UTC)
 * Fixed-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 15:49, May 20, 2018 (UTC)
 * Complete Locations 2016 has some additional information on the tower: "After Chancellor Palpatine's life is threatened by the rogue clone CT-5555, the medcenter is temporarily shuttered to bolster security. During this time, Sidious moves his collection of Sith artifacts from a dilapidated tower in The Works district, which he fears might be discovered by the Jedi." Said collection is moved to the Grand Republic Medical Facility. EDIT: The tower was also said to have served as a "retreat," and the medical facility replaced it in that capacity. -  AV-6R7  Crew Pit 15:53, May 17, 2018 (UTC)
 * Added-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 01:50, May 20, 2018 (UTC)
 * After having viewed the article in the Oasis skin *shudders*, you should easily be able to slip some concept art into the Bts section. The TCW concept art from the episode guide could work, but you may want to track down someone with the AotC art book and see if it has anything on the tower. It may even go into the design ethos of the tower, which would be valuable for the Bts. The Imagecat could just be moved down as subsection or two. -  AV-6R7  Crew Pit 16:23, May 17, 2018 (UTC)
 * Concept image added, looking to see if there is additional info in the art book. Imagecat moved down-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 15:49, May 20, 2018 (UTC)
 * Have you checked for appearances in canon adaptation like Star Wars Journeys: Beginnings, The Prequel Trilogy Stories, or Star Wars: The Prequel Trilogy – A Graphic Novel? -  AV-6R7  Crew Pit 07:37, May 20, 2018 (UTC)
 * Note: Being addressed privately-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 04:59, May 30, 2018 (UTC)

Comments

 * I will be on vacation and thus unavailable between May 31st to June 18th. I will not be able to address objections during that time as I will have no effective means of doing so. I will be taking care of all raised objections between now to the 31st, thank you for understanding.-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 13:48, May 19, 2018 (UTC)