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Starship manufacturer redlink
ExiledJedi I put all the starship manufacturer redlinks back.--Exiledjedi 23:01, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Gun of Command
I reverted all the edits I made since they were bad.--Exiledjedi 13:41, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

Today's Work
Today, I plan to work on the remaining redlinks in the Arms and Equipment Guide article.--Exiledjedi 13:32, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Wow! I didn't expect to finish this project so soon. I guess I'll find something else to do.--Exiledjedi 15:13, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Today, I am working on the redlinks in the Bloodhawk Down article. If anyone has any comments please leave a message on my talk page.--Exiledjedi 17:45, December 18, 2010 (UTC)

Project Finished!--Exiledjedi 18:46, December 18, 2010 (UTC)

Min Erethen
Hi, you might like to familiarise yourself with our Manual of Style and Layout Guide, I just had to correct some basic stuff in the Min Erethen article. You may check those guidelines and adjust your other recent articles accordingly, and if you need any help, just ask. Happy editing. (: –Tm_T (Talk) 19:02, December 18, 2010 (UTC)

Help
Yeah i want to make a page for all the force powers that don't have pages but their far and few between(ex. Force summon is mentioned under one of the Starwars clonewars episodes)Please help!Donmax 03:05, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Could I have a list of powers that you want to have pages for? I need to know which powers I need to write pages for. And exactly what kind of force summon is this you are talking about? Is it summoning creatures like Silri in Empire at War: Forces of Corruption? I do not believe I saw this particular episode of the Clone Wars. Please elaborate on what you want done.--Exiledjedi 15:21, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Merry Christmas
I will not be working on articles this weekend.--Exiledjedi 00:43, December 24, 2010 (UTC)

College
Since the spring semester started, I have not had much time to do work on articles.--Exiledjedi 23:53, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

Help
Where can i find star wars galaxies card images either here or elsewhere. Please direct me, thankyou and who is Darth Homiiz?Donmax 17:57, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry but I do not know where you can get Star Wars Galaxies card images. Darth Homiiz was going to be in Jedi: Yoda but he was cut.--Exiledjedi 18:19, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

Atlas
Hello, please note that there are no planets listed in the Atlas Online Companion. If you look at the directory page's titles, the Companion only lists systems, rather than individual planets. As such, the Online Companion should not be added to planet Sources lists. Thanks. Toprawa and Ralltiir 00:29, February 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * No problem. It's commonly missed. Thanks again. Toprawa and Ralltiir 00:36, February 22, 2011 (UTC)

Entry requests

 * If you ever need any other information from the KOTOR strategy guides, feel free to ask me as I have them both. The Forum:Entry requests is meant for entries in the The Complete Star Wars Encyclopedia and the Star Wars Encyclopedia.  OLIOSTER  (talk) 21:21, March 11, 2011 (UTC)

Major Project Beginning
I am begginning my attempt to clean up the Category:Technology. Please place any comments or complaints to this work here.--Exiledjedi 16:19, March 17, 2011 (UTC)

Cularin age
Hey Exiledjedi! I've noticed you seem to have access to the Living Force Campaign Guide. Could you please check whether there's any mention of Cularin system's age in the book? Thanks!  Imperators II (Talk) 00:13, March 26, 2011 (UTC)
 * Thanks for looking it up. Could you also please check the Geonosis and the Outer Rim Worlds for any mention of Yavin system's age (indirect mention is also fine) and the Tales of the Jedi Companion for any ancient dates (again, indirect is OK) concerning the Kashi Mer Dynasty? Again, thanks!  Imperators II (Talk) 20:06, March 26, 2011 (UTC)
 * Thank you again! :)  Imperators II (Talk) 14:55, April 15, 2011 (UTC)

For space!
Do you really have Star Wars Gamer 5? If so, you're my savior. Could you tell me what "A Campaign Guide to the Centrality" has to say about the Dilonexa system? Specifically the planets that it is made up of. If you can help me, thank you. NaruHina Talk  07:36, April 29, 2011 (UTC)
 * Thank you! You shall receive commendations after the completion of Operation Centurian Deathstroke! NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 22:03, April 29, 2011 (UTC)

Spring Semester is Finished!!!!!
Now I can get to work on some bigger projects.--Exiledjedi 16:56, April 29, 2011 (UTC)

Jurgan Kalta
These weapons are only mentioned in the back of the book in a list of all the weapons in the game. Just shows stats and what not, and the misspelling of the carbine is already mentioned, so it seems nothing new.  OLIOSTER  (talk) 20:20, May 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * The power suit is listed in the back of the book with all the other armor in the game.  OLIOSTER  (talk) 07:08, May 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re: Comprehensive article votes
They haven't changed because you didn't change them. You have to adjust them manually when you vote. Jonjedigrandmaster ( Talk ) 18:45, May 19, 2011 (UTC)

Implant Level
I'd treat it as canon in the sense that one needs to train to be able to handle the stronger implants. It's a little like building immunity to poison. NaruHina Talk  03:42, May 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * Just for the record the phrase "Implant Level System" does not appear in the game. The implant levels also aren't mentioned in dialogue, only in items and feat lists. This is just from searching the dialog.tlk file for "implant". N  AYAYEN  17:22, May 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * Implant Level systems are indeed to be taken as game mechanics. The implants themselves are canon, though unless it's Canderous using his cybernetic implants, you cannot say for certain whether a character used one. I hope this helps.&mdash; 17:34, May 23, 2011 (UTC)
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A small hint too
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Wurokkk
Wurokkk has been moved to GAN, so you may want to re-support or review it again. Thanks. :) MasterFred (Whatever) 14:05, May 25, 2011 (UTC)

Fanon warning to IP
You may have been a bit late :).&mdash; TK-999  ( Rise of the Empire ) 15:35, May 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re: Pre-nom
Sure, I would be happy to do a pre-nom for you. It is my job after all. :P
 * The first sentence in the Intro, "An unidentified gold-skinned man was present in Chalmun's Spaceport Cantina, located in Mos Eisley, on the planet Tatooine, when Luke Skywalker and Obi-Wan Kenobi came to the cantina looking for a pilot to take them to Alderaan in 0 BBY." First, we generally don't say "unidentified" in articles as it shows doubt and conjecture. Alos, this sentence reads a bit awkwardly. I would recommend saying something like, "In 0 BBY, a gold–skinned male was present in Chalmun's Spaceport Cantina&mdash;located on the planet Tatooine&mdash;when Luke Skywalker and Obi-Wan Kenobi came to the cantina looking for a pilot to take them to Alderaan."
 * Just as a note, when you say "gold-skinned man" you should instead say, "gold–skinned man". Look at the this page's edit window to see what I mean.
 * In the Bio, "He was seated at a table with..." It's unclear here who you are referring to. Replace "he" with "the gold–skinned being" or something like that.
 * And yeah, as you suspected, the sourcing isn't completely done. You must find sources that identify the species and names of all the different characters the guy sits with. I could help you look those up, if you want.
 * I also made a few minor corrections. Look them over so you get what I did. As for the word count, after you make your corrections, message me a again and I'll see where we stand. If it's short of 250 words but close, I can probably help you reach the limit.
 * That's all I have at the moment Exile. Nice work. Kilson ( Let's have a chat ) 02:14, June 2, 2011 (UTC)

Hey, sorry it took me awhile to respond, I was a bit busy. There's still a few thing we still have to work on.
 * "In 0 BBY, a gold–skinned male was present in Chalmun's Spaceport Cantina, located in Mos Eisley, on the planet Tatooine, when Luke Skywalker and Obi-Wan Kenobi came to the cantina looking for a pilot to take them to Alderaan in 0 BBY." Don't mention 0 BBY twice, you only need to mention it once.
 * Also, you don't need to ref each separate character if they're all the same ref. What I mean is: don't put, "Defel named Arleil Schous,[2] an Advozse male named Bom Vimdin,[2] a male Arcona named Hem Dazon,[2] and a Siniteen male named Pons Limbic,[2]" put "Defel named Arleil Schous, an Advozse male named Bom Vimdin, a male Arcona named Hem Dazon, and a Siniteen male named Pons Limbic,[2]"
 * You're currently reffing "A male with gold–colored skin was in the city of Mos Eisley on the planet Tatooine, during the year 0 BBY, shortly after the Corellian corvette, Tantive IV was boarded by the Imperial Star Destroyer, Devastator. He was in Chalmun's Spaceport Cantina when Luke Skywalker and the Jedi Master Obi-Wan Kenobi entered the cantina, searching for a pilot to take them and the droids, C-3PO and R2-D2, to the planet Alderaan. The gold–skinned being was seated at a table near the entrance to the cantina with..." to source number two, when it should be reffed to source one. You should put source one after "catina with".
 * Finally, I did a quick word count and your article's at over 260 words, so I would recommend putting it up on the GAN page. Also, thanks for the support vote in the WotM, in means a lot to me. Thanks. :) Kilson ( Let's have a chat ) 21:27, June 3, 2011 (UTC)

I made one last copyedit, and now I think you're good to go. I'll support when you nom it. Good job. :) Kilson ( Let's have a chat ) 01:48, June 7, 2011 (UTC)

Kae Kwaad TC
Hey ExiledJedi, just letting you know that a new voting option has been created on the Kae Kwaad TC per general demand. Jonjedigrandmaster ( Talk ) 14:38, June 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re:Comprehensive
Thanks for your help. But what do you mean by increment? Cal Jedi (Personal Comm Channel) 20:12, June 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * All right Thanks. Cal Jedi StarForgeSucksGas-KOTOR1.jpg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:35, June 3, 2011 (UTC)

PS-29-3
Hello ExiledJedi, with comprehensive articles, specifically PS-29-3, biography sections are not required unless they fall under 200 words, per the CA rules. Sans the intro, PS-29-3 is 176 words long. I have decided to get rid of the bio, despite your original objections. Please respond if you are okay with that, and if so, I will get rid of the intro. Hanzo Hasashi 03:05, June 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * Over, not under, typo. :O Hanzo Hasashi 03:26, June 6, 2011 (UTC)

WP:KOTOR resources
Hi, wanted to inform you about two pages in our KoTOR project, list of resources and requests. There might be even more useful links for you in our project page, so feel free to familiarise yourself with it. (: –Tm_T (Talk) 05:20, June 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * Uh, and I notice you already did use... this is what you get when not getting coffee. (–Tm_T (Talk) 05:30, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re: Rukil
Sure, I will happily give you a pre-nom. To respond to your question, first, I would recommend FAing after we're done as this article is well over 2,000 words, and to be honest, both the AC and the Inq. prefer that Users FA an article when it's that long. Second, I unfortunately don't have the Knights of the Old Republic: Prima's Official Strategy Guide. If nobody has replied to your posts on the WP:KotOR page, I would then recommend going on the IRC and asking someone for the information. In any case, I have a few pre-lim things you need to work on. Intro:
 * "He had lived a large portion of his life in the village as an Outcast, condemned like his ancestors to live forever in the bedrock levels of the ecumenopolis for rebelling against the wealthy nobles who ruled Taris." In this sentence, when you say that someone rebelled against the nobles, it is unclear whether you are referring to Rukil or his ancestors.
 * "...when the village was led by a male Human named Hendar, his apprentice, Malya, who continued his work because he was too old to do it himself, was the only one who truly believed him." While I know you're referring to Rukil, it's unclear here who Mayla is apprenticed to. Replace the "his" with "Rukil's." Also, it would be better to say, "...because Rukil was too old to do..."
 * You need to expand the Intro a bit to include Revan finding Mayla's corpse and the information on the Promise Land. Adding another two or three sentences, which should probably constitute a new paragraph, would be appropriate.

Early life:
 * For your reference 3, "The New Essential Chronology places the events of Star Wars Knights of the Old Republic at 3,956 BBY, and Rukil says this happened a century before." What is "this"? You must elaborate on this.
 * "However, the rebellion was routed by the nobles, killing millions of people, and the rest of the rebels were taken prisoner, and since the prisons on Taris could not hold them all, the nobles sent them all to the Undercity at the bottom of the cities of Taris." This is a bit of a run-on. You should probably split it into two sentences.
 * "Rukil's hope was to find the paradise to bring his people comfort and bring them out of their bleak existance in the Undercity." Read the sentence and you'll see how you repeated "bring." You should replace the second "bring" with a synonym.

Later years:
 * "...so his apprentice, Malya, a young woman who lived in the Outcast village..." I'm not sure it's necessary to refer to Malya in such a lengthy way. You could simply say, "a young woman Outcast..." Also, as a note, you misspelled Malya's name as "Mayla" and forgot to link to her article. Please be more careful about this in the future.
 * "By this year, Rukil's apprentice, Malya had been..." You've already mentioned that Malya is Rukil's apprentice, so you can just refer to her as Malya here and from now on.
 * The last two sentences in the subsection are a bit out of place. I would recommend moving them in front of the previously mentioned sentence.

I'll continue my review after you've addressed these. Just to let you know I checked the CSWE for any mention of Rukil, and while he does not have an entry, he is mention in the entries on Gendar and Malya. Kilson ( Let's have a chat ) 16:38, June 18, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, I forgot to mention there is no new info. You just need to update the Sources and Bts. Kilson ( Let's have a chat ) 17:10, June 18, 2011 (UTC)

OK, I'm back to continue the pre-nom. Sorry it took me a couple of days, I was busy with some AC matters. You did a good job addressing my previous objections. Here's what I have:


 * Here's something I forgot to mention before. In the Skin field of the Infobox, you have "Light" filled in. While this isn't incorrect, that more common phrase on the Wook at the moment is "Fair" skin. I would recommend you changing this.
 * I think you have over–subsectioned the part that is under the Gamemechanics template. You should combine the three subsections into just one subsection.
 * "The trek took Revan and Onasi to the Undercity where they searched for the Republic escape pods hoping to find Bastila." You already mentioned what the two are looking for in the previous sentence. You should cut out the part about what Revan and Onasi are looking for here and combine this sentence with the next.
 * "After finding that Rukil's apprentice was dead and discovering her journal, Revan and Onasi, along with their new companion, a young female Twi'lek named Mission Vao, returned to Rukil with the journal." How do you know for certain Revan talked to Rukil while Mission and Onasi are with him? It's completely up to the player who is with him at the time, so the way you have the sentence is incorrect. This is also incorrect in the previous paragraph where you say Revan and Onasi talked with Rukil. Onasi doesn't necessarily have to be with Revan at the time.
 * "He also tells Revan and his companions about his father, grandfather and lastly his lifelong search for the Promised Land," present tense here, that's a big no–no.
 * You need to work on word variation. You say "tell" or "told" a lot. Try switching them out with synonyms to make the article read better.
 * "While Rukil was hopeful upon seeing the journal of his dead apprentice, when the Outcast merchant, Igear..." You already referred to Igear as the merchant earlier, you don't need to do so again here.
 * "Revan found the journals of Rukil's father and grandfather in the Undercity sewers and brought them to Rukil, who was hesitant at first to even look at the journals." Is there information to explain why Rukil was hesitant to look at the journals?
 * "Gendar was skeptical at first, but when Rukil shows him the evidence he had found in the journal, Gendar believed Rukil." Again, present tense, you need to watch out for that.

I'm done with the Bio section mostly, I'll continue after you've finished these objections. I have to say, although there are many minor mistakes throughout the article, you've done a good job here. This is bigger than any article I've ever written. Kilson ( Let's have a chat ) 15:42, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

Once again, sorry for taking along time to get back to you. I'll finish up the pre-nom, although I only have a couple:


 * In the P&t section, "Rukil was more of an adventurer in his younger days, searching throughout the Undercity sewers as well as other parts of the Undercity, looking for clues pertaining to its location." What's location? The promise land?
 * Do you know who voiced Rukil in the game. That's important to find out for the Bts.
 * I don't know for sure. Maybe ask the other KotOR experts. Kilson ( Let's have a chat ) 16:36, June 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * I asked about it on the KOTOR IRC channel and Tm_T told me that Rukil's voice actor was not mentioned in the manual. Just an update, I'll keep looking some more. Any suggestions are welcome.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:59, June 30, 2011 (UTC)

Otherwise, it looks good. I'll support after these are addressed. Once again, it's good to see you working hard on a future FAN. When you nominate it, if you need any help addressing objections, just ask. I'm pretty familiar with the character by now. :P Kilson ( Let's have a chat ) 16:16, June 30, 2011 (UTC)

I guess you should nominate it then. I'll support when you nominate, and once again, if you need any help addressing objections, just ask. Kilson ( Let's have a chat ) 20:31, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

Another peek
I've been asked to include information about the greater Centrality in the Dilonexa articles. Could you please look at the Gamer article for me again and tell me if there is any more information on who controlled the system at various points? I put what the Wook already had to say on this in the Dilonexa I article. NaruHina Talk  05:58, June 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * Thanks a lot. :D This should be one of the last steps before I can put it on the GAN. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 18:36, June 21, 2011 (UTC)

No Toc!
Hey there! should only be used in Comprehensive articles. It stands for "NO Table of Contents;" any CA that doesn't have an intro shouldn't have a TOC either. Sometimes they show up, and is how ya hide 'em. Menkooroo 11:02, June 19, 2011 (UTC)

Vacation
Hey, I just wanted to let everyone know that I will be on vacation starting the 24th and probably won't be back until June 30th or maybe June 31st. I will have no internet access while on the trip, so I will not be responding to any posts on this page or any objections on my current nomination. I know I am still here right now, but I wanted to give everyone a little advance notice.-- Exiled Jedi   (Greetings)  14:39, June 22, 2011 (UTC) I'm back now.-- Exiled Jedi   (Greetings)  02:04, June 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * Arrrrgh, sorry I meant June 29th or June 30th, there is no June 31st!-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  22:43, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

Guineo
You still planning to nominate Guineo eventually? I've expanded Draag, and I thought it might be cool if we nominated them back-to-back when they're ready. (Feel free to move this message above your notice if you prefer, and have a great vacation!) ~ Savage   22:52, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

Re:Cookie
Thank you for the recognition! :)  Imperators II (Talk) 22:49, July 3, 2011 (UTC)

Twitch
Hi, can you pop in to IRC to discuss about pics of Twitch? –Tm_T (Talk) 16:51, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

WP:VG

 * Congratulations and thanks for joining! If you have any ideas about the Project, let me know! Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 18:50, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Re: Transformers
Done and done. Sorry I missed the note on its talk page, I haven't updated it in a while. DD97 Which bear is best? 18:30, July 14, 2011 (UTC)

Guineo again
Hey, how's it coming on Guineo? I wanted to check in once again to see if you think it's near completion. If not, I'll go ahead and nominate Draag, but I'd still be happy to pre-nom Guineo once it's complete. ~ Savage   15:01, July 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * I just realized I have to get a couple of body images for Draag, too, so it may be a bit before I actually nominate. I may just relent, though, and grab screencaps from YouTube. :( Good luck with Guineo; I look forward to reading the finished piece! ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 15:12, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

Panza and Co.
Heyo. Sorry for the delay. I grabbed an image of Panza Hondi, since he's right at the beginning, but my emulator is acting funny on that level. It seems like every time the camera is pointed sorta Northish, the screen gets filled with glitchy grey wall gobbledycrap. It become practically unplayable past the initial hanger. Let me know if you'd like a different shot for Panza, such as full body or bounty listing or something. I'll work on trying to grab the other two, but it does not look too hopeful. SinisterSamurai 01:09, July 27, 2011 (UTC)

New CANs
Thanks EJ! Maybe we'll catch up to Naru one of these days. :p Cal Jedi  (Personal Comm Channel) 15:09, July 28, 2011 (UTC)

Quad Victor
Hey EJ, since you've already supported my Quad Victor nom, it appears I have met all of your objections. If that is the case, I just want to remind you to strike your objection to my nom, if that's cool with you. Thanks. :) Kilson ( Let's have a chat ) 18:41, July 31, 2011 (UTC)

What's up?
Hey EJ. Just had a question for ya. I'm getting ready to nominate CC-01/425 for FA status, (which is really cool, since it's going to be one of my first FAnoms and the first FAnom for the Project!) Anyway, I was wondering if you had the Prima Official Guide for Republic Commando, and if you do, if you could check to see if any relevant info about the that Clone Advisor is in there. Thanks! Cal Jedi (Personal Comm Channel) 00:15, August 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * OK, thanks anyway. I put Rescue of Rahm Kota on the FAnom just a little while ago, so I'm trying to decide if I want to try to do two at once. Eh, why not? If I can find someone with the guide, I'll let you know so you can review it. Cheers! Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 02:48, August 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * OK, thanks. Here it is. CC-01/425 Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 20:20, August 5, 2011 (UTC)

Promoted articles
Hey EJ, I was just looking at your portfolio, and it appears that your promoted article count is off a bit. You have nine GAs instead eight, and nine CAs instead of seven. You need to keep track of this stuff, it's important. :P Haha Kilson ( Let's have a chat ) 12:39, August 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * Oh, oops. I miscounted. :P Kilson ( Let's have a chat ) 12:59, August 8, 2011 (UTC)