User talk:Tm T/Archive-2010

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Welcome, Tm T!
Hello and welcome to Wookieepedia &hellip; rest in W.

Vote on Talk:Ahsoka Tano
Hi, I struck your vote on the infobox image vote on Talk:Ahsoka Tano because you only have 29 mainspace edits, 50 are required per policy. Your vote can be reinstated once you reach 50 mainspace edits. Cheers,  NAYAYEN : TALK 10:01, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Luke Skywalker image
Just wanted to let you know that I've added two new options for voting if you want to go take a look. -  JMAS  Jolly Trooper.png Hey, it's me! 16:03, June 22, 2010 (UTC)

Atlas Info
Never used the talk back page before but just in case I posted my response here too:
 * The date of the Big Bang was not identified in the Essential Atlas. Someone else just threw that date out there. The Atlas just says "The galaxy is an estimated 13 billion years old." on page 125. I guess based on currently scientific calculations you could back out the date of the Big Bang considering when the earliest galaxies were formed. Hope that helped.--Darthscott3457 00:29, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Invitation
Hey, TM, I was wondering if you'd consider joining WP:KOTOR?-- 08:55, July 13, 2010 (UTC)
 * That's great that you joined, any contribution to the project is very welcome and appreciated. What are your writing talents, if I might ask?-- 15:28, July 19, 2010 (UTC)
 * Good to hear, there are plenty of articles related to the project that could be potential CANs. When IO started nomming articles, I tried to rush it, and let's just say it didn't end well. Anyway, if you have any other questions or need help, don't hesitate to ask either myself or any other member on here.-- 20:10, July 19, 2010 (UTC)

WP:KOTOR meeting
A meeting on IRC for Thursday at 0:00 (8:00 PM EST) is being discussed here. Please take a look and discuss the time, and whether or not you'll be able to attend. Thank you.&mdash; 19:54, July 24, 2010 (UTC)

Re:Review request
I'd be more than happy to go over it. Since this a pre-nom review, and you are new here, I might show you a couple things to do, and what not. Techniques that I and the other members use in writing articles. As for personal preference, I'll point out those issues and leave them up to you. Are you looking to get this GA'd?&mdash; 04:58, July 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * OK, I'll go over the article with you in a few days, or whenever I get my computer back. It's having screen problems, and is being fixed.&mdash; 08:12, July 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * If you want, let me know when you'll be available on IRC, so that we can go over the article.&mdash; 05:05, July 31, 2010 (UTC)

List of resources
Hello. In the recent WookieeProject Knights of the Old Republic meeting, held on July 30th, it was decided that a list of KotOR-related resources each member had access to would be created for use in conjunction with a new requests page. If you have the time, please add yourself to the list, or contact me via talk page or e-mail. Thanks, SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 09:02, July 30, 2010 (UTC)

Possibilities
Hey TMT, I'll give you a list of characters you might want to work on, ones which you could get to either CA or GA status. Great work on Vossk, by the way.&mdash; 03:43, August 3, 2010 (UTC)
 * Yeah, now that I've got my PC back, I can give you that list of potential articles to get to the GA/CAs. I'll have it for you tomorrow.&mdash; 02:40, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks
Thanks for the advice on my talk page, but when i press preview it basically just shows me nothing diffrent, it just shows the edit view not the view that it regularly looks like. Anakin skywalker resurrected 11:30, August 4, 2010 (UTC)

About to do it myself
I'd just read that she was indeed a canonical member of the Hawk's crew when you reverted my edit. hashtalk 19:16, August 4, 2010 (UTC)

Review for you
I'll review 3C-FD for you, and congrats on passing Vossk!&mdash; 20:35, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Meeting
There'll be another meeting this Sunday at 0:00 UTC (Saturday at 8:00 PM). See details here.&mdash; 09:21, August 18, 2010 (UTC)

Sewers
Hey there. I actually wrote the original FA version of the article, though it has since fallen into disrepair. The quality level expected from FAs has also risen, so a good maintenance is sorely needed. I'll keep an eye on your work for now&mdash;I find that too many writers on a project often results in a mess. I would be happy to look it over once you're nearing completion, though! Good initiative, by the way. --Imperialles 16:37, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Zhug brothers stuff
Here's the review requested on IRC:
 * Context on Duro in the intro. Yeah, planet would be fine.
 * "&hellip;against politically connected, rivaling family." I think there needs to be an 'a' after 'against'; not sure however.
 * "After settling to Nar Shaddaa this "family" became collecting money&hellip;"
 * 1) You settle /on/ a planet.
 * 2) Comma after Shaddaa.
 * 3) You can't /became/ collecting money, you can /start/ doing it.
 * "&hellip;enough to take over&hellip;" I suggest you reword that to
 * "During the First Jedi Purge in 3,951 BBY local Exchange crime lord&hellip;"
 * 1) Comma after the year. Remember that in almost every case, a year is followed by a comma.
 * 2) Link to crime lord.
 * "&hellip;former Jedi Knight Jedi Exile the Zhug brothers were&hellip;" Wut?
 * Please find a synonum for "Zhug brothers" in the second paragraph of the intro.
 * These are my intro objections. -- 1358  (Talk) 19:17, September 9, 2010 (UTC)
 * "After settling on Nar Shaddaa, this "family" started collecting money in order to take over their former homeworld by acting as a merciless bounty hunters." This is a bit unclear sentence.
 * Is "this family" refering to the Zhug brothers or the family that was subjected to "violent acts"?
 * "&hellip;started collecting money in order to take over their former homeworld by acting as a merciless bounty hunters." Did they act as merciless bounty hunters in order to take over Shaddaa, or in order to collect money? o_O
 * "&hellip;the Zhug brothers were eager to collect bounty that was eventually devastating to them."
 * What? Was the bounty devastating them? :O
 * -- 1358  (Talk) 14:41, September 10, 2010 (UTC)
 * History:
 * You should probably create an article for the rivaling family.
 * Context on Nar Shaddaa.
 * "..seeking to raise enough credits.." Raise credits? Poor wording.
 * "..and got the Zhug brothers eagerly trying to collect it." Poor wording as well. Perhaps have "when the local Exchange crime lord", and then reword the rest of the sentence accordingly.
 * What Smugglers' Moon? You haven't mentioned that before.
 * Remains. -- 1358  (Talk) 19:20, September 16, 2010 (UTC)
 * "..hunters in there trying.." In where?
 * Always /on/ a moon/planet. ;-)
 * Context on Kreia, Bao-Dur, Marr, and Rand.
 * Bah, Ebon Hawk, not hawk!
 * Hmm, how is Colonel Tobin relevant to the brothers? Seems like unnecessary context.
 * No information on how they were defeated?
 * Please watch your comma usage. -- 1358  (Talk) 14:40, September 14, 2010 (UTC)

Speculation
sorry about that i've seen similar stuff on other pages though like on Satele Shan's page there is speculation that revan is her ancestor so i thought i'd put it on Revan's page also

Zhug brothers

 * and soon after got warned of the bounty hunters on the moon trying to collect the bounty over her head by former bounty hunter and Bounty Hunters' Guild leader Vossk, with the Zhugs being among the hunters Vossk mentioned. - This sentence needs to be broken up.
 * I believe that the brothers say some extra things on G0-T0's yacht, so it may be worth looking into that and seeing if any other information can be added.
 * You can't really say that the Exile infiltrated the Visionary since she was technically kidnapped and brought there. The brothers attacked the crew because she had gone to meet with Slusk and the bounty hunter truce was called off. My suggestion would be to rewrite this section a bit stating that while the Exile was occupied elsewhere, the Zhugs attacked the crew of the Ebon Hawk.
 * Further, the only crew members that are on Nar Shaddaa for certain are Bao-Dur, Kreia, Atton and Brianna. We don't know about the others since we don't have a canon answer as to what order the planets were visited or when Visas joined the crew.
 * Now, I would state that the Exile had business with G0-T0 and that is why she was aboard his yacht. Her companions joined her and that is when more Zhugs attacked. Don't worry about the cloaking device. That only adds confusion.
 * When it comes to Dxun, simply state that it was in the midst of a civil war and that both ships had been shot down in the ensuing battle.
 * In the Bts, you need to explain how and why the Exile's companions were trying to save her. The average reader of this article will be unfamiliar with the details of the game, so must make sure to explain as much as possible, without adding too much weight.
 * The article is looking good, it just needs a little bit more work. Let me know if you have any questions. Cylka  -talk- 09:39, September 17, 2010 (UTC)

Wordmark
Hey Tm, nice job on File:Wordmark-logo.png. I just wanted to make sure you know, though, that the wordmarks can actually be 250x65px, if you wanted to increase the size of your proposed image. - Brandon Rhea  (talk) 00:36, October 7, 2010 (UTC)

Re:Dezanti Zhug
I performed a copy-edit, I'll probably have objections soon. Nice work, though.&mdash; 17:05, October 7, 2010 (UTC)

Dezanti review
Hey Tm, here is the pre-nom review you asked for.
 * In the intro, I would remove all of the information about Azanti's attack on the Exile and simply call it an earlier failed attack or something similar.
 * He and two of his fellow Zhug brothers survived and tried to kill the Jedi Exile, but died in the attempt. - This makes it sound as if there were more many Zhugs on the ship, but only these three survived. We don't know that for sure.
 * When the Exile was invited to meet the Exchange representative and consequently trapped by the crime organization, the bounty hunters believed that the the truce was off, and began their hunt. - This needs to be a bit more clear. Who was the representative and why was she to meet that individual? What truce?
 * Azanti Zhug and other Zhug brothers eventually attacked the Exile and her companions without Dezanti Zhug on the "Smuggler's Moon" and aboard the Visionary unsuccessfully. - This is a bit unclear. First, only the companions were attacked the first time since the Exile was already G0-T0s prisoner. Secondly, you need to give a little context as to why they attacked the Exile and her companions on the Visionary''.
 * Dezanti stated that he wouldn't fail like the other Zhugs had before him, continuing with threats. - Continuing with which threats? This needs to be written a bit more clearly.
 * The P/T could probably use a bit more context. Exactly why was he disrespectful? Also how exactly did he express his dislike of deal-breaking?
 * These are the biggest issues that I see right now. Let me know when you've taken care of them and I'll take another look at the article. Cylka  -talk- 03:25, October 16, 2010 (UTC)

Re: More of Zhugs
Will do! I'm a bit pressed for time at the moment, but I should be able to give it a go sometime in the next couple of days. Jonjedigrandmaster ( Talk ) 18:55, October 18, 2010 (UTC)
 * Hey Tm, I just wanted to apologize for not getting around to this; for the last month I've been swamped with school work and then I was gone traveling last week, and I just looked and saw that the article passed its nomination (congrats!). Anyway, sorry that I wasn't able to get around to it. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 16:50, November 15, 2010 (UTC)

Unidentified Sith diplomat
Letting you know that I have taken the Unidentified Sith diplomat to the Good article nominations due to it being slightly over the word count for Comprehensive articles. As such, your previous vote has been stricken, so look it over again whenever you have time. Thanks.  OLIOSTER  (talk) 03:32, October 20, 2010 (UTC)

Endar Spire
Any help you can provide I would greatly appreciate. I'm actually going to be without computer for the next week, so if you can do some of the edits, that'd be awesome. I'll still have sufficient access to a PC to look in on the edits, check progress. Thank you! Taral, Dark Lord of the Sith  -Just shy, not antisocial: You can talk to me!- 14:33, October 31, 2010 (UTC)

WotM

 * Seconded, congrats Tm! NAYA   YEN   14:32, November 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * It's been a pleasure working with you. :) 1358  (Talk) 14:43, November 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * Indeed, congrats, Tm :) Toprawa and Ralltiir 17:52, November 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * Congratulations!  OLIOSTER  (talk) 17:52, November 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * Congrats, Tm! You've come a long way in a short time; keep up the good work!&mdash; 17:55, November 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * Thank you all, I'm speechless.  –Tm_T(Talk) 19:09, November 1, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks
Thank you for adding the reference about hair color to Satele Shan's page. I have tried to post references before, but Wookieepedia kept calling me a spambot, so I just didn't try this time.WIERDGREENMAN 15:39, November 5, 2010 (UTC)

Re: Those clones you got
Aww, thank you! Hey, if Wookieepedia's lucky to have anybody, it's an awesome guy like you. :D Bella&#39;Mia 01:35, November 10, 2010 (UTC)

Re:Voting
whoa, that was a horrible error. thanks for the heads up <font color=#FF0000>ASDF1239  <span style="font-family: times, cursive; font-size: 13px"><font color=#00A693>-DISCUSSION- 16:31, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

KotOR meeting
Thanks for taking the initiative in setting the meeting time, I know I'm the Chief Editor and all, but I'm gonna let you start off the meeeting this time, if that is alright with you.&mdash; 23:25, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

g0-t0
why did you delete what i wrote about G0-to maybe it's bad written but it's fact!

IRC meeting
Just to be safe, I'll warn you that I may not be able to attend. It'll be 9:30am Sunday for me so I don't see any problem though, just that it's possible give my schedule. <font color="#208090"> Holocron  <font color="#208090">(Complain) 13:55, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Revan
I know Revan is a controversial and hot topic but what I wrote about Revan's Tomb was true. There WAS a trailer for Star Wars: The Old Republic that involved Revan's Tomb and HK-47 WAS guarding it. At least tell me what the problem was with it. What was wrong with it? Ryumancer 10:09, December 23, 2010 (UTC)
 * Hi, I know of the trailer, but there's nothing that states its his tomb, nor that the HK droid in the trailer is _the_ HK-47 Assassin droid. Better wait some far better sources for such information. –Tm_T (Talk) 10:16, December 23, 2010 (UTC)
 * Hello, can I at least post it if I don't mention the word "tomb" or give the HK droid the specific number? Everything else in the trailer couldn't be argued or debated of not being true.  Ryumancer 06:43, December 24, 2010 (UTC)
 * Better just wait proper source for such information. –Tm_T (Talk) 07:03, December 24, 2010 (UTC)


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