Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations

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(6 Inqs/0 Users/6 Total)
Support
 * 1) Havac 09:07, 9 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) The blood coming from my eyes after reading this is a price well paid :P  Greyman ( Paratus ) 21:04, 18 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) Blarg! --  Darth Culator  (Talk) 03:16, 25 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 4)  Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 05:43, 29 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 5)  Jaina Solo ( Talk ) [[Image:Jainasolosig.gif |25px]] 22:47, 4 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 6) I Gonkified it, so I'm gonna VOTE, dammit!  Gonk  ( Gonk! ) 23:08, 4 March 2008 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) From the desk of Atarumaster88
 * 2) * Reference 62 is broken. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 16:14, 9 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) **Fixed. Havac 18:16, 9 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) * "Horn's escape from Lusankya, not dead, cleared Celchu's name completely." Reword this, or at least do something with that "not dead" part.
 * 5) **Reworded. Havac 17:39, 14 February 2008 (EST)
 * 6) * "As they arrived, however, he was captured by storm commandos; he attempted to warn off the Rebels. Luke Skywalker, commanding the group, decided to go attempt a rescue." Reword this, it reads awkwardly.
 * 7) **Reworded. Havac 17:39, 14 February 2008 (EST)
 * 8) * The bit about Seerdon is speculation. Remove it unless sourced, and none of this "well, logically, he would have to be," reasoning. I want a canonical explanation.
 * 9) **It doesn't say anything not supported by canon. He was in the unit. The unit did something. It doesn't take a genius to put two and two together. No one's saying he was canonically for sure in it, just that he was in the unit in that time period and the unit did a thing. Battleground: Tatooine doesn't say he's romantically interested in Winter, either; it just shows him saying things which could be interpreted as hitting on her. We use our brains and come to a conclusion. This is less bold a leap than that because all I'm saying is fact 1 + fact 2 = probable but not guaranteed. Havac 17:39, 14 February 2008 (EST)
 * 10) * "The battle went well for the odds against them and the unit escaped, but Fett evaded the Millennium Falcon." Reword.
 * 11) **Reworded. Havac 17:39, 14 February 2008 (EST)
 * 12) * I hope for your sake that starfighter combat is linked here somewhere. Goodwood
 * 13) **It does. Havac 17:39, 14 February 2008 (EST)
 * 14) * "With the cover of the Rogues and the opportunistic intervention of Darth Vader's forces against his longtime rival Xizor, they were able to flee." Who is they?
 * 15) **"...Skywalker went to Coruscant to rescue her with Rendar and Calrissian. During their escape, Rendar..." What you quoted is the next sentence. I've defined they as Rebels to please you, though. Havac 17:39, 14 February 2008 (EST)
 * 16) *You're not even close to the Super Terrific Friendly Un-frustrating day part. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 22:01, 14 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 17) **I didn't really expect to be. Havac 17:39, 14 February 2008 (EST)
 * 18) Imperialles's image objections:
 * 19) * Image:Celchu-Academy.jpg: This one should be obvious.
 * 20) **Rescanned by Red. Havac 01:33, 17 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 21) * Image:Green3Unedited-ROTJHD.jpg: Distorted.
 * 22) **Blame ILM. That's straight from the best version of the film that's publicly available. -- Darth Culator  (Talk) 18:41, 9 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 23) ***Bah! --Imperialles 21:42, 14 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 24) * Image:Tycho Endor.JPG: Poorly scanned.
 * 25) **Rescanned by Red. Havac 01:33, 17 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 26) * Image:Tycho rescues Wes.JPG: Distorted.
 * 27) **Rescanned by Red. Havac 01:33, 17 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 28) * Image:HospitalofDeath.jpg: Covered with distortion.
 * 29) **Rescanned by Red. Havac 01:33, 17 February 2008 (UTC)
 * Image:Celchuunderattack.jpg: Some .jpg artifacts.
 * 1) **Rescanned by Red.
 * 2) * Image:Celchu-vs-Phennir.jpg: .jpg articacts.
 * 3) **Rescanned by Red. Havac 01:33, 17 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) * Image:Tycho-Masquerade.jpg: Scanning artifacts.
 * 5) **Rescanned by Red. Havac 01:33, 17 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 6) * Image:Tycho-funeral.jpg: Distorted.
 * 7) **Rescanned by Red. Havac 01:33, 17 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 8) * Image:Tycho-guns.jpg: Severely distorted.
 * 9) **Rescanned by Red. Havac 01:33, 17 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 10) * Image:TychoCelchu swenc.jpg: Stretched out.
 * 11) **Rescanned by Red. Havac 01:33, 17 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 12) * Image:Tychomugshot.jpg: .jpg artifacts.
 * Image:TychoBilbringi.jpg: Quite distorted.
 * 1) **Rescanned by Red.
 * 2) * Image:BattleofLiinadeIII.jpg: Distortion.
 * 3) **If there's still any distortion, it's Random House's fault. If it's good enough for their marketing department, it should be good enough for us. -- Darth Culator  (Talk) 03:07, 25 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) * Image:Celchu-B-wing.jpg: .jpg artifacts. Some cropping issues as well.
 * Image:Ushersofdeath.jpg: Artifacts.
 * 1) **Rescanned by Red.
 * Image:Celchu-Darklighter-Karrde.jpg: Artifacts.
 * 1) **Rescanned by Red.
 * 2) * Image:Tycho Celchu helmet.jpg: Poorly scanned.
 * 3) **Rescanned by Red. -- Darth Culator  (Talk) 03:07, 25 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) * Image:Celchu-cockpit.jpg: Artifacts.
 * 5) * Image:Tycho-kiss.jpg: Severe distortion.
 * 6) **I cleaned this one up somewhat myself. Still could use Redification, but it's better than many comic scans that have passed FA before. -- Darth Culator  (Talk) 03:07, 25 February 2008 (UTC)
 * --Imperialles 16:42, 9 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 1) *Damn, I meant to mention in the comments . . . I've already asked Red to rescan these images. Though you're going to have to take up Culator's screenshot with him. Havac 18:16, 9 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) First glance, "Antilles stayed behind to coordinate the attack until the last minute while Celchu made sure a shuttle was ready was for Antilles, who wifwhen contact was lost with Antilles."  -- "wifwhen"??? Who to the what now? I couldn't quite figure out what that sentence was actually supposed to say. --  Darth Culator  (Talk) 04:17, 10 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) Redlinks. Darthchristian 16:18, 18 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) *And we should be under the limit now. Havac 00:10, 20 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) I'm going through this bad boy in parts, so consider this Round 1:
 * 6) * Provide a brief description of who Winter is in the intro. "Rebel agent" should probably suffice
 * 7) **In. Havac 05:48, 27 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 8) * Please specify Imp-II class: "Celchu was assigned to the Star Destroyer Accuser"
 * 9) **Specified. Havac 05:48, 27 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 10) * If possible, I would like to see a mention of what call-sign he flew under with the Rogues
 * 11) **Specified. Havac 05:48, 27 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 12) * I don't necessarily disagree with adding this, even though it is speculation, but if you're going to do that, you need to add all Rogue involvement during this time. Service during the Thila campaign specifically comes to mind, which is outlined to a degree in, among other sources I must assume, Galaxy Guide 3: "Celchu was also likely present in the squadron during the time of its campaign against Moff Kohl Seerdon"
 * 13) **I'll take a look tomorrow. Poke me on IRC about it. Havac 05:48, 27 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 14) * The way this is worded makes it seem as if it was a task force, when it was in fact the entire Alliance Fleet. Please reword: "Rogue Squadron was assigned to the Rebel fleet assaulting it" Toprawa and Ralltiir 05:24, 27 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 15) **Source that claim, because we definitely have other Rebel fleet actions going on in that period. Havac 05:48, 27 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 16) Round Two:
 * 17) *Please specify ship class: "destroying their flagship carrier Flurry"
 * 18) **That's . . . deeply extraneous. It just bogs down the sentence in irrelevant detail. If you want to know what class it is, you click on the link. It's not relevant to Tycho what class it is. Havac 22:06, 29 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 19) * Please remove this unnecessary extrapolation: "though he may already have known her from earlier in the Rebellion"
 * 20) **Eh. It's not so much extrapolation, as they clearly know each other. I've made it more clear. Havac 22:06, 29 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 21) * I'd rather see this worded as "They infiltrated the system": "were infiltrated into the system"
 * 22) **Changed it. Havac 22:06, 29 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 23) * Provide a brief description who Isard is: "where Ysanne Isard broke her captives" Toprawa and Ralltiir 18:06, 29 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 24) **Done. Havac 22:06, 29 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 25) *Add "the" before all ship names in canonically-appropriate instances, per voted-upon policy. I'm not striking this until this is changed. This isn't your interpretation or preference, Havac. This is policy.
 * 26) **See policy, from consensus, which was later reinforced. Toprawa and Ralltiir 04:05, 5 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 27) ***Actually, SillyDan, who closed the last vote, has since realigned the MOS to reflect his understanding of the actual consensus that came out of the vote. And it says, "Go with canon." Havac 19:30, 5 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 28) ****To clarify, Havac, does that mean that we go with "the" in front of the ship names that are canonically paired with "the" (which would be most of them, including "the Millennium Falcon") but we omit it in front of ship names that usually don't have it in canon (such as Binder)?  Gonk  ( Gonk! ) 15:34, 8 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 29) *****So far as I can tell. Havac 21:19, 8 March 2008 (UTC)

Comments
 * Would be the longest FA were it to pass. Uh, I mean, it's a really quick read and you should all read it quickly and support. It's no burden at all. Havac 09:07, 9 February 2008 (UTC)
 * Holy crap. This thing is freaking huge. Spelling and redirects check out now, but I haven't checked for link redundancy yet, because the motherkriffer has 730 links. -- Darth Culator  (Talk) 04:17, 10 February 2008 (UTC)
 * Not an objection, Havac, but a little request. Would it be possible to put in links for more of the various battles Tycho fights in? Other than in the Thrawn campaign section, I couldn't find many. In the Confederation-GA War you could have the Battle of Centerpoint Station (Confederation-Galactic Alliance War), the Attack on Toryaz Station etc which atm are not linked, and major stuff like the Battle of Borleias in the Yuuzhan Vong War as well. Earlier on, the Battle of Liinade III isn't either. I hate to think of them being orphaned on Wookieepedia's virtual knowledge map. Also, to remove the Tawaler redlink, you need to put one in for Siron Tawaler. Have a good day. Harrar 14:57, 16 February 2008 (UTC)

(2 Inqs/2 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1)  StarNeptune Talk to me! 04:07, 24 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) Thanks, Star!-- Goodwood [[Image:Redstarbird.svg|20px]] ( Alliance Intelligence ) 00:24, 26 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) Seems much improved now and a good job on an article with not much information on them. --  Riffsyphon  1024 04:08, 29 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) Nice job, Star.  Greyman ( Talk ) 04:07, 14 March 2008 (UTC)

Oppose Comments
 * 1) From the Forest of Goodwood:
 * 2) * Infobox not fully sourced.
 * 3) * Can we get the introduction condensed into a smaller number of larger paragraphs, please?
 * 4) * Tense and OOU issues in the Early Life section.
 * 5) * Choppy prose and small paragraphs in the Sith-Imperial War section.
 * 6) * "After Calixte and Veed celebrated what they thought was Veed's promotion to Emperor, Calixte snuck over to Roal Fel's quarters and informed him to flee." Roal? Also, the second clause should be rewritten.
 * 7) * Small paragraphs that can be blended together in the P%T and Equipment sections as well.
 * 8) * Quotes in prose in the P&T section?
 * 9) *Unfortunately, without knowing that much about the Legacy comics, that's all I can offer.-- Goodwood [[Image:Redstarbird.svg|20px]] ( Alliance Intelligence ) 04:52, 24 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 10) Toprawa:
 * 11) * Per other user objections infobox needs to be fully sourced. Including, please, the gender and species.
 * 12) * Also per previous user objections, no reason, in this case, to have two one-sentence paragraphs. Tack each onto the front and end of the middle paragraphs, respectively
 * 13) * Please reword this: "and she and Veed then plotted to place Veed on the Imperial throne"
 * 14) **Done. Graestan ( Talk ) 04:22, 27 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 15) * Two things with this. First, it needs to be rewritten into past tense; secondly, consider removing this entirely. Is it truly an IU axiom that little is known about her, or do we just know about her OOU because no other sources deal with her past? "Little has been recorded about the early life of Nyna Calixte."
 * 16) **That is no longer there.  StarNeptune Talk to me! 19:07, 27 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 17) ***It is still there. Toprawa and Ralltiir 05:42, 4 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 18) ****My bad. I thought i had removed it. To answer your original question, it's a little of both. I have reworded it.  StarNeptune Talk to me! 19:14, 7 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 19) * Are there alternative reasons why they feel she reached this position? If so, please include: "although some of her colleagues on the Moff Council claimed that she had not earned the honor through merit alone."
 * 20) **That's all that been revealed.  StarNeptune Talk to me! 19:07, 27 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 21) * Please rewrite or remove to avoid improper OOU/present tense tone.: "As far as it can be verified,"
 * 22) * Please avoid weasel words like "apparently." Did she despise her, or did she not? Make sure this isn't too speculative: "Gunn apparently despised her mother"
 * 23) **I was on crack when I wrote that. Gunn is explicity shown to hate her mother. Fixed.  StarNeptune Talk to me! 19:07, 27 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 24) * Having never read these sources, I don't know what's going on here. Please elaborate on why the Empire was approached, keeping in mind articles should be written towards the casual reader: "When the new Sith Order first approached the Empire, they did so through her."
 * 25) **I fixed these (and the following few objections) while trying to focus on Nyna and not the war.  StarNeptune Talk to me! 19:07, 27 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 26) * A few things here. The article could benefit from an explanation of what's going on here; i.e, what were her motives in allying with the Sith? Why were the other Moffs needing manipulation? Who is Roan Fel? "She manipulated the other Moffs into allying with the Sith behind Roan Fel's back,"
 * 27) **See above.  StarNeptune Talk to me! 19:07, 27 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 28) * You give a brief explanation of Fel here, in his second mention. This should be applied to his initial mention. And, you keep referring to him by his full name, which is unnecessary. Just "Fel" will suffice: "In 130 ABY, the Emperor Roan Fel"
 * 29) **See above.  StarNeptune Talk to me! 19:07, 27 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 30) * This ties in with the previous two objections. You just kind of write this assuming the reader knows the details of the S-I war. Don't assume anything. What kind of conspiracy is this? "the extent of the Sith conspiracy"
 * 31) **See above.  StarNeptune Talk to me! 19:07, 27 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 32) * Ditto with the previous objections. Without an explanation of the war, this is very confusing. When did the GA get involved? "...that the Galactic Alliance"
 * 33) * Elaborate on what happened at Ossus, to provide a better explanation of why she is apologizing: "Calixte expressed her disapproval to Darth Maladi about the Massacre at Ossus"
 * 34) **See above.  StarNeptune Talk to me! 19:07, 27 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 35) * At this point, honestly, I'm lost. When and how did Veed apparently becoming Emperor in their eyes? "After Calixte and Veed celebrated what they thought was Veed's promotion to Emperor"
 * 36) **Fixed. 19:07, 27 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 37) * Again, confusing. I thought she was expecting Veed to become Emperor? "she informed him that she knew that Darth Krayt was going to install himself as Emperor"
 * 38) **Clarified (hopefully).  StarNeptune Talk to me! 19:07, 27 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 39) * Please give a brief description of who Antares Draco is: "secretly making his escape with Antares Draco"
 * 40) **Imperial Knight. Fixed.  StarNeptune Talk to me! 19:07, 27 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 41) * By the final paragraph in the S-I War section, I have no idea what you're even trying to say, or what's going on. I would suggest rewriting the section completely, again keeping in mind that if I, a dedicated SW fan, has no idea what's happening, imagine a casual visitor to this site.
 * 42) **I write articles with the intent that the reader clicks on the links provided if they want more information. I guess I shouldn't do that. :P  StarNeptune Talk to me! 19:07, 27 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 43) ***It reads much better now. And yeah, don't rely on links, i.e. other people, to do your writing for you. Toprawa and Ralltiir 06:06, 6 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 44) * Please elaborate on who Hosk Trey'lis is and why he's being interrogated: "she attended the interrogation of Hosk Trey'lis in Darth Maladi's laboratory..."
 * 45) **Fixed.  StarNeptune Talk to me! 19:07, 27 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 46) * Don't assume the reader knows what The Wheel is. Give a brief explanation of it: "After viewing one of Calixte's security cam feeds from the Wheel, they discovered that the Wheel was Cade's last known location"
 * 47) **Fixed.  StarNeptune Talk to me! 19:07, 27 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 48) * If possible, it would be good to specify what she used exactly: "but not before she sprayed him with a gas"
 * 49) * If known, please explain what class of ship: "Corde then proceeded to carry Torlin back to his ship, the Raider"
 * 50) **I'm not good with ship stuff, so I couldn't tell you unless it was specifically stated somewhere.  StarNeptune Talk to me! 19:07, 27 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 51) * You don't explain until much farther down in the paragraph that both of the ships are apparently shuttles of some sort. Please identify them upon their first mention: "She explained that there were two ships parked at the Wheel: one belong to Admiral Stazi of the Galactic Alliance, and the other was a ship that had defected to Roan Fel's faction of the Empire"
 * 52) * This seems speculative, from what I can gather. If you really can't prove that he's dead, don't speculate: " apparently killing him."
 * 53) **That was an artifact left over from the Morrigan Corde article that I had missed. Removed.  StarNeptune Talk to me! 19:07, 27 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 54) * Please reword: "that Gunn was one of the ones who..."
 * 55) **Done. Graestan ( Talk ) 04:34, 27 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 56) * The way this is written suggests that the person who informed Veed is also the one hiring Corde, but it seems like you're referring to Calixte: "Upon sharing this info with Morlish Veed, he promptly hired Morrigan Corde"
 * 57) **Clarified. Graestan ( Talk ) 04:34, 27 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 58) * Where is the Sith Temple? I can assume it is on Coruscant from the article, but please specify: "to remove Cade from the Sith Temple"
 * 59) **Fixed.  StarNeptune Talk to me! 19:07, 27 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 60) * Please explain why she wants these: "that he turn over to her the three dozen Yuuzhan Vong thud bugs"
 * 61) **It is explained a bit later in the article; is this really necessary? Graestan ( Talk ) 02:35, 9 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 62) * In that same sentence, briefly give an explanation of what Black Sun is
 * 63) **Done. Graestan ( Talk ) 04:34, 27 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 64) * Is "predator" a special term to describe his forces/agents? If so, specify: "to pull his predators off the Temple on her signal"
 * 65) **Its referring to the ships under his command.  StarNeptune Talk to me! 19:07, 27 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 66) ***Please specify this in the article. Toprawa and Ralltiir 04:06, 29 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 67) ****Changed to "Predator-class fighter." Graestan ( Talk ) 02:35, 9 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 68) * Naturally, I can assume what you mean here, but please elaborate: "After Veed made some unwanted advances toward her, she left"
 * 69) **~sigh~ Do I have to write a porno? :P  StarNeptune Talk to me! 19:07, 27 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 70) ***I insist! ;) Toprawa and Ralltiir 04:06, 29 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 71) * As Calixte switches off between using her own name and the Corde identity, you alternate between writing from the perspective of either name. For example, here: After she left Veed's apartment, Corde then located Cade's friends..." This is unnecessary, and mildly confusing. When she switches to the Corde identity, don't continue to refer to her as such. Make a mention initially that she has made the change, and then keep describing her as Calixte only. Please rewrite the appropriate sentences.
 * 72) **I have replaced all relevant "Corde"s with "Calixte"s.  StarNeptune Talk to me! 17:37, 12 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 73) ***Nice job. Toprawa and Ralltiir 04:00, 13 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 74) * Briefly describe who these people are that they are arguing with: "Blue and Syn were locked in an argument with Kee and Chak over Cade's ship"
 * 75) **Smugglers. Done.  StarNeptune Talk to me! 19:07, 27 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 76) * Explain what a boom bug is: "and others act as "boom bugs.""
 * 77) **Bugs that go BOOM! Jariah Syn lives for Boom, you know! :P Fixed.  StarNeptune Talk to me! 19:07, 27 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 78) *As I progress through the article, I'm seeing increasingly more instances of play-by-play. Specifically, this paragraph. Please rewrite: "Corde then tasked Syn with keying a specific bug to follow Cade, etc."
 * 79) * You keep placing quotes around the term "boom bug." Unless this is done so explicitly in the source, doing so on each mention is unnecessary: "then to move the "boom bugs" near a hangar"
 * 80) **Fixed.  StarNeptune Talk to me! 19:07, 27 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 81) * Please reword one of the Calixtes: "Back at Calixte's apartment, Calixte was in the middle of taking a shower"
 * 82) **Fixed.
 * 83) *Please note how in this same paragraph, starting "Back at Calixte's apartment," you have five sentences that start off the exact same way. "Corde then did this...Veed then did this...So and so then did this, etc." This is what I mean by instances of PBP, where things get very listy. Please rewrite.
 * 84) * Please rewrite. The use of "Sith" becomes obtrusive: "about the Sith coup in 130 ABY, thus betraying the Sith"
 * 85) **Fixed.  StarNeptune Talk to me! 17:37, 12 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 86) * Inappropriate use of tense. Sounds very OOUish. Additionally, sounds very speculative. Unless the story substantiates this solidly, please remove: "...and as far it is known, has told no one about her identity as Morrigan Corde."
 * 87) **Well, considering that she has kept it even from Veed, who is the person closest to her (well, as close as she gets, anyway), I would say it's pretty certain that no one else knows. It's still too early to say for sure, though.  StarNeptune Talk to me! 19:07, 27 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 88) ***In that case, I would definitely say remove it. This comes of as being rather ORish. This sounds like something that would do better to fit in the BTS, where OR/speculative info like this is more appropriate. Toprawa and Ralltiir 05:09, 29 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 89) ****Removed.  StarNeptune Talk to me! 17:37, 12 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 90) * This just ties in with the previous objection of saying she "apparently" despised her mother. This sentence suggests it was indeed true. Keep uniformity: "For her part, Gunn despised her mother"
 * 91) **Like I said, I was on crack. ~shrugs~  StarNeptune Talk to me! 19:07, 27 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 92) * Inappropriate OOU tense: "Calixte had once stated to Roan Fel that she has had some success in shielding her thoughts from Force users, even though there has been no evidence to suggest she was Force-sensitive."
 * 93) **Reworded.  StarNeptune Talk to me! 19:07, 27 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 94) ***The sentence is still problematic. "has" has a very "nowish" tone to it, rather than a purely past tense tone. Additionally, the final clause referring to no evidence that she is Force-sensitive still lacks the appropriate IU tone. "Calixte has had some success in shielding her thoughts from Force users, even though there has been no evidence to suggest she was Force-sensitive." Toprawa and Ralltiir 05:09, 29 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 95) * And, per Acky's comments below, these two sentences don't do the Calixte character enough credit to warrant their own section. Please move them unto the P&T
 * 96) * You need to provide a source for this information: "As Morrigan Corde, she had two distinguishing pieces of equipment; the first being her comm devices, and the second being her choker containing the holo of her family. Her comm devices were located on her face, and there were two of them: one under her left eye, and the other on her chin. It remains unknown exactly how they functioned."
 * 97) **I remember seeing it in a forum post by Jan Duursema. I'll go dig it up after work.  StarNeptune Talk to me! 19:07, 27 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 98) ***K, I sourced it.  StarNeptune Talk to me! 05:51, 6 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 99) * This is an incomplete sentence: "Nyna Calixte was created by John Ostrander and Jan Duursema was first mentioned in Star Wars Legacy 0."
 * 100) **That was rectified by someone who was not me. Thanks, whoever you are! :D  StarNeptune Talk to me! 19:07, 27 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 101) * Please reword this clause: " which the scene was written in a way in that the reader is the only person privy to the secret"
 * 102) **Rewrote.  StarNeptune Talk to me! 19:07, 27 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 103) * Not really an objection, but there seems to be enough concrete evidence that Calixte is the real persona, since we place the article under that name. Perhaps some kind of explanation discussing this? "but it remains unclear at this point which persona is the "real" one."
 * 104) **We don't know if Nyna or Morrigan (or neither) is her real name. I only put it at Calixte because IU, she is the more public persona.  StarNeptune Talk to me! 19:07, 27 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 105) *Some final suggestions:
 * 106) *Per what I said about the SI War section, no matter how obvious the info may seem, never assume the reader knows what is going on. Make sure you write with the ignorant in mind, explaining who and what things are.
 * 107) *Also, per Wookification, please place referencing after punctuation. I've cleaned these instance up for you. Toprawa and Ralltiir 18:41, 24 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 108) From Imperialles:
 * Image:Nyna Maladi Labo.jpg: Distorted. Get someone (Redemption) to re-scan it.
 * Image:Morrigan holo.jpg: Minor scan distortions at the bottom of the image. Ideally, it should be re-scanned.
 * 1) * Image:Morrigan commdevices.JPG: Needs to be cropped.
 * 2) **Is cropped. -- Darth Culator  (Talk) 13:08, 26 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) *What's the source for the pronunciation?
 * 4) **It's in the BTS.  StarNeptune Talk to me! 05:51, 6 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) * Is it really necessary to split up the BTS section like that?
 * 6) **Not really. Fixed. Graestan ( Talk ) 04:22, 27 February 2008 (UTC)
 * --Imperialles 21:41, 25 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 1) From the Bridge of Chack Jadson:
 * 2) * "Prior to the Sith-Imperial War, Calixte was using the persona of Morrigan Corde, and was working as an agent for Imperial Intelligence." Too many was ('s).
 * 3) **Is this better?  StarNeptune Talk to me! 17:37, 12 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) * The third paragraph of the intro just reads awkwardly. Please fix the prose.
 * 5) **There is no third paragraph anymore. Someone (probably me) merged it into the second one.  StarNeptune Talk to me! 17:37, 12 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 6) * "Little has been recorded about the early life of Nyna Calixte." Should be "little was..."
 * 7) **Removed.  StarNeptune Talk to me! 17:37, 12 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 8) * "However, prior to the Sith-Imperial War, she was using the name Morrigan Corde and was employed as an Imperial Intelligence agent." Rephrase.
 * I, and several others that I have queried on this matter, say this reads fine. Please state what exactly what you feel is wrong with it?  StarNeptune Talk to me! 05:51, 6 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 1) ***Actually, it seems fine to me now.
 * 2) * Why do you all her "Morrigan" sometimes and Morrigan others?
 * 3) **On crack. Fixed.  StarNeptune Talk to me! 17:37, 12 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) * De-link quote in "Sith-Imperial War".
 * 5) **Done.  StarNeptune Talk to me! 17:37, 12 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 6) *"...despised her mother for leaving her and her father and entering into an affair with Morlish Veed." She had an affair with Veed? Where did that come from? Please give context.
 * 7) * "...at his apartment." Is this necessary?
 * 8) **Why not? They could have been at her place, or at a bar/restaurant.  StarNeptune Talk to me! 17:37, 12 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 9) *"Once Darth Krayt had installed himself on the throne after killing Roan Fel's double, he sent Maladi to Calixte's quarters to get the Moff to explain herself." Explain herself for what? Krayt knew about the double?
 * 10) *In "Search for Skywalker", state that Maladi does not know about her double identity. It seems as though she does.
 * 11) * "...then proceeded to tie the still-unconscious Torlin to a chair and familiarize herself with the ship and it weapons." It weapons?
 * 12) **Fixed the minor typo.  StarNeptune Talk to me! 19:14, 7 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 13) * "Corde then tasked Syn with keying a specific spy bug to follow Cade, park another spy bug outside Krayt's chambers, then to move the boom bugs near a hangar at the Sith Temple." Remove one of the thens.
 * 14) **Done.  StarNeptune Talk to me! 17:37, 12 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 15) * No offense, but the prose in the lone paragraph of Aftermath is just bad.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 22:06, 29 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 16) **Better?  StarNeptune Talk to me! 17:37, 12 March 2008 (UTC)
 * Technically, this is still under spoiler warning, so navigate with care.  StarNeptune Talk to me! 04:07, 24 February 2008 (UTC)
 * Good to have you back in action, Toney! :-D Goodwood  [[Image:Redstarbird.svg|20px]] ( Alliance Intelligence ) 04:50, 24 February 2008 (UTC)
 * Neptune, I would suggest merging the powers and abilities section with the P&T, unless it can be expanded; there isn't, IMHO, enough info there atm to warrant its own section.-- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 15:24, 24 February 2008 (UTC)
 * I won't make this an objection per se but the article seems rather...void of life. By life I mean images. You can probably put in one more in each section (minus early life as it's short and aligned with the infobox.) -- Redemption [[Image:Redemptionusersymbol.png|25px]] (Talk) 04:19, 27 February 2008 (UTC)
 * Working on that now.  StarNeptune Talk to me! 05:51, 6 March 2008 (UTC)

(4 Inqs/3 Users/7 Total)
Support
 * 1) Toprawa and Ralltiir 18:41, 8 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 2)  Graestan ( Talk ) 02:15, 9 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) --  Darth Culator  (Talk) 02:28, 10 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) Ozzel 05:21, 10 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) You have a thing for Hoth.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 19:15, 11 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 6) --Eyrezer 10:05, 12 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 7)  Greyman ( Talk ) 19:09, 15 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 8) Good job, Toprawa.  Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 05:31, 19 March 2008 (UTC)

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 * 1) That image is pretty terrible. Can another one be acquired?  Graestan ( Talk ) 01:58, 9 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) *I uploaded a new version with far less artifacts. If necessary, I can upload a .png version instead (better quality, bigger file size). --Imperialles 02:12, 9 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) **Much better.
 * 4) From the desk of Atarumaster88
 * 5) * Intro could use a couple more sentences, particularly regarding Malachite Stone and Clabburn the Younger.
 * 6) **Expanded intro, including the Malachite Stone. ;) Toprawa and Ralltiir 22:25, 18 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 7) * " apathetic treatment of others, especially those who had the unfortunate fate of falling victim to one of his raids". Apathetic doesn't seem to be a proper descriptive word. Apathy would imply he didn't care about others one way or another; your description in the bio might merit a "merciless" or "harsh", but that's just my opinion. I won't argue this one out.
 * 8) **I agree. Someone else changed it to "apathetic." Will change it back. Toprawa and Ralltiir 21:45, 18 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 9) * Similar to above, I'm not sure about "In a word, Clabburn was ruthless, a trait not uncommon among the Mugaari, though he gave the concept new meaning."
 * 10) *Have a Super Terrific Friendly Un-frustrating day. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 19:40, 18 March 2008 (UTC)

Comments
 * There are no pictures for him. Toprawa and Ralltiir 18:41, 8 March 2008 (UTC)

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Support
 * 1) Can't believe I got this thing to 1000 words. Toprawa and Ralltiir 08:25, 10 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 2)  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  19:10, 11 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 3)  Graestan ( Talk ) 14:05, 14 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) --  Darth Culator  (Talk) 01:48, 16 March 2008 (UTC)

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Comments
 * Word count at 1,017. No picture of Lenso exists. Toprawa and Ralltiir 08:25, 10 March 2008 (UTC)
 * Clean as a whistle. Very short, though&mdash;were it not for the depth of Lenso's emotional turmoil, I'd say there wasn't enough content. Graestan ( Talk ) 14:05, 14 March 2008 (UTC)

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Support
 * 1) Toprawa and Ralltiir 23:33, 10 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) Lenso and Datch: Rogues Havac didn't have time for. :P  Graestan ( Talk ) 23:33, 14 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) --  Darth Culator  (Talk) 01:49, 16 March 2008 (UTC)

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Comments

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Support
 * 1) Back with another character from the X-Wing series. All comments and criticisms are welcome. Thanks! --Colinmcev 07:20, 11 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 18:21, 13 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) A good read; nicely done.  Greyman ( Talk ) 05:18, 19 March 2008 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) From a quick glance, the succession box at the bottom needs to be referenced like you would the infobox. Names, titles, dates, etc. I'm looking forward to going through this article. It looks good from what I can see :)  Greyman ( Talk ) 14:33, 11 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) *Done. And thanks! I enjoyed working on it. --Colinmcev 14:43, 11 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) From Admirable's Ackbar
 * 4) * You mention, indirectly, the Battle of Borleais in the first paragraph of the biography. I would advise against this, since it assumes the reader has read the intro. The biography should be able to stand alone. If you know what I mean. I would change "...serve him on Borleias" to "...serve him in later years" or something to that effect.
 * 5) **I gotcha. Changed it to later years. --Colinmcev 05:11, 13 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 6) * You mention that he gained the rank of Colonel in the first paragraph, and then that he was a colonel before Yavin in the next paragraph. Same thing with the 181st in those two paragraphs. Please adjust.
 * 7) **Fixed the first one. As for the second, I took the 181st reference out of Early Life and moved it to the first paragraph of the next section. What do you think? --Colinmcev 05:11, 13 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 8) ***Perfect. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 18:21, 13 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 9) * Same thing as the first objection in the last paragraph of "Commander of the 181st." If someone knew nothing about the character and hadn't read the intro, they would be confused by this. I suggest a similar solution to the first objection.
 * 10) **Got it. I'll have to keep this in mind for future contributions. --Colinmcev 05:11, 13 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 11) * Please give Fel a rank or something when you introduce him.
 * 12) **I added a rank. Do you think that's enough? I figured the rest of the background is covered by the Rand Ecliptic reference later that sentence. --Colinmcev 05:11, 13 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 13) ***Looks fine. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 18:21, 13 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 14) * "...remind them we're here" should probably be paraphrased without the quotation marks.
 * 15) **Changed it to "draw attention to the wing." --Colinmcev 05:11, 13 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 16) * "Palpatine, who seemed became familiar with Derricote". Wording is off there. I would've fixed it myself, but I wasn't sure entirely what you were saying, and having not read the source material I might've messed it up.
 * 17) **Whoops. Fixed. --Colinmcev 05:11, 13 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 18) * In "Creating the Emperor's Plague," you again mention events which haven't happened at that point in time. "Derricote developed this particular plague more than two years before engineering the Krytos virus that would be unleashed upon Coruscant." I understand that what you're saying is important, but I would move this that sentence and everything after it in that paragraph further down, to where the Krytos virus is mentioned.
 * 19) **I started to put this in with the Krytos virus section, but then I thought maybe it works better in the last "Emperor's Plague surfacing" section. I thought it worked there better, but let me know what you think; we could easily bump it back up. --Colinmcev 05:11, 13 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 20) ***Looks fine. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 18:22, 13 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 21) * There's a lot of present tense in the P&T. Please sort this out.
 * 22) **I think I got it all. --Colinmcev 05:11, 13 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 23) * I would like you to link everything once in the Intro and once in the main body. Also, you should look for where you can link articles, since I noticed some places where a link could've been inserted.
 * 24) **Done on the first part. As for the second, you were right, I found a lot of things that could've been linked. I think I got them all but if you see any more, feel free to fix them or let me know.
 * 25) ***Looks fine. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 18:21, 13 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 26) *Great work on this. It's nice to see noms from my favorite books, particularly non-Rogue articles. Excellent image choices, too. Keep up the good work :) -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 21:52, 12 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 27) **Thanks! --Colinmcev 05:11, 13 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 28) Toprawa:
 * 29) *The introduction is too overdone. I'd like to see just two solid paragraphs, while cutting off the fat and leaving the most important facts.
 * 30) **I tightened it into two paragraphs. Let me know what you think, and whether you think anything I cut should have stayed in. --Colinmcev 02:52, 14 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 31) ***Can you add a little bit to the second mention of the Emperor's Plague, explaining what became of the project? Toprawa and Ralltiir 02:17, 19 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 32) * This objection may be N/A after your changes to the previous one, but you say that, "after leading the 181st to victory at the Battle of Derra IV in 3 ABY, was promoted to General and given command of an Imperial outpost on Borleias," and then follow it up with, "Before accepting the post around 4 ABY..." I added the 3 ABY for you, but Derra IV took place early in 3 ABY, just prior to Hoth. Something doesn't quite add up to me if he was given the post but didn't accept it until a year later?
 * 33) **I fixed this when I tightened the intro. Basically, what I was trying to say was Derricote was given command of Borleias after the Battle of Derra IV, but he was given his special assignment by Palpatine sometime before he actually assumed command, which happened somewhere between the battle in 3 ABY and Palpatine's death in 4 ABY. I explained this very poorly in the intro, but I think in the article itself it's pretty clear, so I think this objection has been addressed now. --Colinmcev 02:52, 14 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 34) *Do we know what Star Destroyer this was, specifically? Also, was the 181st attached to this Star Destroyer? If so, I would like to see a description of this much earlier in the article: "Upon returning to the Imperial II-class Star Destroyer after the battle"
 * 35) **Unfortunately, I don't believe it is known what Star Destoyer this is. I only know from the Baron Fel comic that there was a Star Destroyer there, it's never identified. If it's too distracting, I can remove the reference to the Destroyer altogether? --Colinmcev 02:52, 14 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 36) ***It's fine. Do we know whether or not the 181st was attached to the ship at all? Or, at least attached to the ship during at mission? Toprawa and Ralltiir 02:17, 19 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 37) *Please remove this clause. This is same thing as saying "It is unknown how she became aware of him...": "It is known only to Isard how she became aware of Derricote and how familiar she was with his Borleias operation"
 * 38) *Minor clarification request: You mean running around hysterically? I also seem to remember that some just lay on the ground lethargically. Perhaps add a little bit? "and they ran began running hysterically"
 * 39) *Can you specify the two names? "a combination of the world names of the viruses he combined"
 * 40) *Please confirm for me that Wedge's Gamble explicitly alludes to this: "and became one of the most notable and prolific uses of biological warfare in the galaxy"
 * 41) *Please remove this unknown: "it is unknown whether the Krytos Plague stored in the Emperor's Plague Storehouse was a different virus with the same name, or whether Derricote somehow smuggled some of the real Krytos virus into the storehouse in 6.5 ABY."
 * 42) *This sentence is riddled with speculation and the same unknown phrasing. I would consider removing entirely if you can't reword this: "The exact whereabouts of the plague she took were unknown, but they were likely protected by Raabakyysh, Tarkona's Wookiee companion who exiled herself to an unknown planet after realizing the extent of her former master's evil."
 * 43) *Please reword this sentence, while removing the speculative "seem": "These reactions seem to be a combination of cruelty, Imperial Humanocentric speciesism and a scientific detachment from his work." Toprawa and Ralltiir 22:18, 19 March 2008 (UTC)

Comments
 * Not really an objection, but I think it would look much better in the intro if you could provide an actual estimate for the lives lost due to the viruses. I remember reading it when working on Isard; I'll look it up and get back to you. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 08:35, 12 March 2008 (UTC)
 * I will check, but if you can find that yourself I'd much appreciate it. The only reference I recall finding so far was hundreds of thousands, if not millions, as I put it, but I think it'd be stronger with something more exact. If you find it before I do, let me know where you find it. --Colinmcev 14:17, 12 March 2008 (UTC)
 * Unfortunately, I can't find the exact reference :(. I suggest you just go for millions, though, if the source says "thousands or millions." -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 21:54, 12 March 2008 (UTC)

(4 Inqs/4 Users/8 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Master Aban Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 01:25, 12 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) Remember doing a bit of work on this article waaaay back in the day.-- Goodwood [[Image:Redstarbird.svg|20px]] ( Alliance Intelligence ) 05:04, 12 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) Schya! Toprawa and Ralltiir 17:56, 12 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) With some fixes made in IRC, good article considering the limited detail available.  Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 19:41, 12 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) Yay for obscure FAs! -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 23:12, 13 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 6) Voting after looking over it might help&hellip;  Graestan ( Talk ) 12:45, 14 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 7)  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  19:23, 14 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 8) --  Darth Culator  (Talk) 02:27, 16 March 2008 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) Toprawa:
 * 2) * The second clause in this sentence, starting a document, reads awkwardly. I'm not sure what you're trying to say: "she also inherited the sacred scroll, a document where her long-dead relative had written a part of the Jedi Code."
 * 3) **Clarificated.
 * 4) * Please remove this unknown phrasing. Additionally, the latter half of the sentence will probably need to be relocated to somewhere more appropriate in the article: "Following this, it was unknown if she returned to wandering or remained on Yashuvhu"
 * 5) **Removified.
 * 6) * Ditto for this same sentence: "It was unknown if she returned to traveling with the assistance of those she met earlier in life or remained on Yashuvhu permanently"
 * 7) **Nixificated.
 * 8) * This sentence has a few issues. First, in accordance with previous objections, please remove the "unknown" phrasing. Secondly, it needs to be reworded to be written in appropriate past tense. Thirdly, unless the source explicitly states that she was possibly skilled in this manner and this is not just extrapolation, it would need to be removed entirely. "Details of all her abilities remains unknown, though it is possible that she was skilled with the ability to create Force illusions"
 * 9) **Reworkified into earlier part of paragraph.
 * 10) *Excellent BTS. Always a treat to read your articles, Fiolli. I demand more! Toprawa and Ralltiir 05:10, 12 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 11) **Thank you, sir! One more to go in the series.  Master Aban Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 15:48, 12 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 12) From the Bridge of Chack Jadson:
 * 13) * Why is it "haz[sic]" in the quote? She's a Barabel, she speaks funny.
 * 14) **Yes, she does speak funny. Nevertheless, it is an intentional spelling by the original author and not a transcription error. This remains because that is proper etiquette regardless of how seemingly obvious, due to her species, such a misspelling might be or expected. Master Aban Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 22:57, 13 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 15) * "...she eagerly learned of the Jedi and sought to join the Jedi Order." Eagerly seems like it's in the wrong place.
 * 16) **How so? I'm sorry, but I don't follow. "Eagerly" is the appropriate type of modifier for "learned" in this instance.
 * 17) ***I see what you are trying to say now.
 * 18) * "With her skill of learning languages, she quickly acquired a facility with Galactic Basic Standard." Perhaps rephrase:"as she was skilled with languages..."
 * 19) **Adjusted the sentence.
 * 20) * You use "wander" in two consecutive sentences in the intro.
 * 21) **Fixed.
 * 22) * Same thing but with "also" in the first paragraph of bio.
 * 23) **Fixed.
 * 24) * "...as she was known to have never had a mate." Why not "she never had a mate"?
 * 25) **Fixed.
 * 26) * "In 28 ABY, Jedi Master Luke Skywalker discovered a series of documents in the Chiss Expeditionary Library on Csilla regarding Valara Saar and her home planet while searching for information regarding Zonama Sekot." Too many "regarding's".
 * 27) **Fixed.
 * 28) * You use "wander" too much in P&T.
 * 29) **Fixed.
 * 30) *  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 14:10, 13 March 2008 (UTC)

Comments
 * Second article from the Yashuvhi-style pasta specials. Refer to the first, Yashuvhu, as needed.  Master Aban Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 01:25, 12 March 2008 (UTC)
 * Not really an objection, but could the image be cropped a bit, to around her waist? It's a pet peeve of mine to have lots of text adjacent to the infobox, and shortening the image would help that greatly. Excellent work as usual, Fiolli. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 20:59, 12 March 2008 (UTC)
 * I don't really have the capability to do that well on my computer at the moment. If someone else can, I'd have no objection. My only comment would be that quite a few articles link to that image, though a better one might be found on the Wizards website to use as the base image. Master Aban Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 22:57, 13 March 2008 (UTC)
 * I had a go at cropping it myself, but everything I came up with looked off. Probably best to leave as is :) -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 23:12, 13 March 2008 (UTC)

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Support
 * 1)  Graestan ( Talk ) 15:27, 12 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) Toprawa and Ralltiir 03:25, 14 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) Pasta bowl fixed via IRC.  Master Aban Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 22:58, 14 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) Some minor corrections made, but an excellent article overall. Good job.  Greyman ( Talk ) 00:27, 16 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) Per Greyman. I also left a non-urgent note below.  Gonk  ( Gonk! ) 14:58, 18 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 6) It's always nice when there's not much left to fix by the time I run AWB over a FAN. --  Darth Culator  (Talk) 15:05, 18 March 2008 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) From the lair of Hobbes15
 * 2) * Source the lead quote, please.
 * 3) **Done. Graestan ( Talk ) 23:45, 13 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) *If possible, add a section name for the first part of Biography, seeing as the second part has one.
 * 5) **I don't understand why&hellip; It doesn't seem to fall under a subcategory. Graestan ( Talk ) 23:45, 13 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 6) ***Personally, I guess it seems weird to have one half of the bio sectioned but not the other. Even something like Early Activity is fine with me. But if you don't think it makes sense to do so, I'm fine with it; it just doesn't look all that great to me personally. Hobbes ( Tiger's Lair ) 01:46, 14 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 7) ****Title added. You're one tough cookie. Have you met Toprawa? Graestan ( Talk ) 02:51, 14 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 8) *Besides that, great article. Enjoy your return to action ;). Hobbes ( Tiger's Lair ) 21:46, 12 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 9) Toprawa:
 * 10) * First quote needs to be sourced.
 * 11) **Done. Graestan ( Talk ) 23:45, 13 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 12) * Just want to confirm this with you. Does Oss Willum putting him back together necessarily mean he had no knowledge of droid maintenance? Seems like possible extrapolation. "However, he possessed no knowledge of droid maintenance,[1] and was unable to repair himself, as was evidenced when Oss Wilum had to put ThreeDee back together following the attack by Bogga's henchmen."
 * 13) **His skills do not include the repair of droids, per the Tales of the Jedi Companion, which I cite for that bit of information. Oss having to fix him simply reinforces this. Graestan ( Talk ) 23:45, 13 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 14) ***Good, good. Toprawa and Ralltiir 03:25, 14 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 15) * Source list should be ordered my publication date. Additionally, you say that he was created for the TOTJ comic, but yet you have him appearing in the first edition to A Guide to the Star Wars Universe, which was published in 1984, well before his first appearance. Am I missing something?
 * 16) **I've ordered the sources, seeing as I added the ones other that TOTJC. Also, it seems the 1st Ed was i error :S --Eyrezer 21:37, 13 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 17) ***Thanks, Eyre. Graestan ( Talk ) 23:45, 13 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 18) * Also, please add a tag where appropriate.
 * 19) **Done. Graestan ( Talk ) 23:45, 13 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 20) * Finally, I have a Star Wars Encyclopedia entry for you. Toprawa and Ralltiir 18:39, 13 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 21) **Ah? Hope to catch you on IRC soon, then. Graestan ( Talk ) 23:45, 13 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 22) ***Information snagged, citation added to article. Thanks! Graestan ( Talk ) 02:58, 14 March 2008 (UTC)

Comments
 * WP:TOTJ hard at work.
 * It's... it's back :P! Hobbes ( Tiger's Lair ) 20:17, 12 March 2008 (UTC)
 * Do we not get an article on Unidentified mandolin-like musical instrument? :)  Gonk  ( Gonk! ) 14:58, 18 March 2008 (UTC)
 * Sure do :) Grae already created it at A-3DO's mandolin. Greyman ( Talk ) 15:14, 18 March 2008 (UTC)

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Support
 * 1)  Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 20:21, 12 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) Thanks Ataru.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 14:00, 13 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 3)  Master Aban Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 23:07, 13 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 4)  Gonk  ( Gonk! ) 15:03, 18 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) --  Darth Culator  (Talk) 15:06, 18 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 6) Went through this in IRC. Toprawa and Ralltiir 17:27, 18 March 2008 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) Things Fiolli didn't have time to mention earlier:
 * 2) * "Unlike Organa Solo, who adhered to her word to keep the meetings private, the duplicitous Spaar was already compromising the conditions of his conferences with the Chief of State." Second "already" in two sentences seems a bit awkward. Sorry.
 * 3) **Fixed.
 * 4) * "Spaar insisted that all the Yevetha desired was to return to their homeworld, and Organa Solo capitulated in the midst of the public relations disaster, lowering the shields and allowing the Aramandia to leave Coruscant." I'm not sure what this means, to be honest.
 * 5) **Rephrased it.
 * 6) * "Only one being escaped, a Grannan named Plat Mallar, who managed..." Only one having escaped...?
 * 7) **Fixed.
 * 8) * "Spaar was greeted by thousands of adoring Yevetha, who now viewed him as god-like. His return was nothing short of triumphant, and the general populace of the Yevetha adored Spaar." Perhaps reorganizing the clauses like this: "Spaar's return was nothing short of triumphant as he was greeted by thousands of adoring Yevetha. The general populace showed great adoration, viewing his as god-like." Maybe something like this might be a little less redundant and more smooth.
 * 9) **Simplified it.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 14:00, 13 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 10) ***Thank you, Chack.  Master Aban Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 23:07, 13 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 11) *Nice work, Ataru.  Master Aban Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 05:48, 13 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 12) I never thought I would be able to dig up this old quote... but I underestimated Google's awesomeness: (Dan's 6/5/02 post). I think it's worth mentioning in the BTS. -- Ozzel 10:12, 14 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 13) *Mentioned. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 18:07, 14 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 14) From the Gonk of Gonk:
 * 15) * "As a trivial matter to Spaar, his spy, Ourn, kept him apprised of these details, but Spaar told the Paqwepori consul that the impending threat of war kept him from sending a replacement ship." The construction of this sentence makes it unclear what precisely was a trivial matter to Spaar.
 * 16) *Hopefully I found everything else; this was one of those articles I got too interested in and had trouble remembering to look for mistakes!  Gonk  ( Gonk! ) 13:20, 17 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 17) **Fixed.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 19:18, 17 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 18) From Graestan the Mighty:
 * 19) *Links are not always provided upon their first mention, even in the intro. Please remedy this.
 * 20) * Your lack of pronouns [in the intro] disturbs me.
 * 21) **Two "he"s added. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 14:59, 19 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 22) * "The Yevetha were initially successful and even captured Commodore Han Solo, whom Spaar physically assaulted after the New Republic attacked a Yevethan shipyard, transmitting the feed to the New Republic." – Move the last clause to fit right after "assaulted" and reword the second "New Republic," please.
 * 23) **Cut and spliced. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 14:59, 19 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 24) * "Though horrified, Spaar's brutality&hellip;" Agreement issues.
 * 25) **Agreed and clarified. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 14:59, 19 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 26) * Specify who Sorannan is in the intro.
 * 27) **Gotcha. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 14:59, 19 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 28) * Explain his death a little more in the intro, i.e. how it was done.
 * 29) **Um . . . that is how it was done. Could you be a little more specific. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 14:59, 19 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 30) ***Clarified in IRC. Graestan ( Talk ) 15:19, 19 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 31) * Please explain what Black Sword Command is in a short clause.
 * 32) **Done, I suppose. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 14:59, 19 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 33) * You definitively state twice that he is the leader of the rebellion.
 * 34) **Cut one of them. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 14:59, 19 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 35) * "&hellip;so much so that Spaar knew the details of the supposedly sudden Imperial departure." Can you explain these details a bit?
 * 36) **Done. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 14:59, 19 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 37) * Please differentiate Black Sword Command from Black Fleet in the article, or change one to match the other.
 * 38) **Differentiated with respect to your wishes. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 14:59, 19 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 39) * "to aid Ysanne Isard in the defense of Coruscant" – Please insert a short descriptor for Isard.
 * 40) **Got it. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 14:59, 19 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 41) * "had his chance &hellip; seized the moment &hellip; put their plan in motion" – Reads a bit redundant, and fogs up just when it happened.
 * 42) **Reworded. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 14:59, 19 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 43) *Paret just let all the slaves go? Please explain.
 * 44) **The Yevetha? Yes, his orders were to get all of them off the shipyards and destroy them with his ships. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 14:59, 19 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 45) ***Please describe in the article. Graestan ( Talk ) 15:19, 19 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 46) *Explain how the Yevetha came back aboard.
 * 47) *"including a series of bombs that would destroy Intimidator if it activated its shields" – Did it raise its own shields?
 * 48) **I'm guessing you're not familiar with the source material. The book states that it was a contingency plan in case the Yevetha failed to capture the ship. Since Intimidator was not destroyed and no mention of the bombs going off, it's logical to assume that it did not happen. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 14:59, 19 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 49) ***No, it's passive. I just wanted a mention of how the shields raised&mdash;whether it was automatic or by controllers. Graestan ( Talk ) 15:19, 19 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 50) * The capture of the bridge is described twice.
 * 51) **Corrected. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 14:59, 19 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 52) *"per the evacuation plan" needs some more context.
 * 53) *Please explain what the Duskhan League is, and explain what become the viceroy entails.
 * 54) *Explain a bit more about the developments Spaar noticed on his trip, and the ramifications.
 * 55) *Mention Spaar's journey to Coruscant somewhere before "his entrance was carefully choreographed."
 * 56) *"appearance and demeanor were carefully rehearsed to appear" – Yeah.
 * 57) **Fixed.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 20:59, 19 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 58) *Explain the locale and setting of the private talks.
 * 59) * Aramadia – Is this intentional?
 * 60) **No, and it's been fixed.
 * 61) *Explain the Yevethan Purge, and how the NR was privy to information about the Black Fleet.
 * 62) *Please either create a diplomatic hostel article or call it "a" diplomatic hostel. Or both. ;)
 * 63) *Who gave Peramis permission?
 * 64) *Please explain initially what the broadcast is.
 * 65) *Alpha Blue needs a little background, and the half dozen individuals need to be identified.
 * 66) **Fixed.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 20:59, 19 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 67) *Please expound on the Fifth Fleet's business near the cluster.
 * 68) *"Once the Republic was paralyzed by political infighting &hellip; upon his return" – Not to be used together.
 * 69) **Fixed.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 20:59, 19 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 70) *"who informed him of the Fifth Fleet's redeployment to Koornacht" – When did this happen? Explain a little.
 * 71) *What's the earlier mission you allude to?
 * 72) *The Fifth Fleet seems to have moved again; please provide detail.
 * 73) *Explain what Doornik-319 is.
 * 74) **Fixed.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 20:59, 19 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 75) *"Later, a reconnaissance X-wing pilot blew himself and his ship up near a Yevethan corvette after they attempted to capture him, destroying the ship. In response, Spaar sent the officer in charge home in disgrace" – Clarify.
 * 76) **Did so.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 20:59, 19 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 77) *Which fleet would he send a spy shuttle to? And is there an article for the spy shuttle?
 * 78) *Tig Peramis is explained twice.
 * 79) **Fixed.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 20:59, 19 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 80) *"Solo was taken before Spaar and interrogated, then beaten by the darama." The darama is never explained before this, aside from a fleeting reference in the intro. Please explain at the beginning of the body.
 * 81) **Explained.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 20:59, 19 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 82) *Explain the Fallanassi illusions a bit. Also, explain their role in the conflict somewhat.
 * 83) *Define "breederies." Create an article, if it's something specified in the books.
 * 84) *Confirm Spaar's actual cause of death, or tell me here that K-McD leaves it at that.
 * 85) **It's left at that. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 14:46, 19 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 86) *OR in the P&T. Please remove.
 * 87) **It would be appreciated if you were more specific. Yevethan xenophobia is well-documented, if that's what you're referring to. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 14:46, 19 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 88) ***The word "likely" appears in the sentence I refer to. Graestan ( Talk ) 15:19, 19 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 89) *A quote is linked to an external site, with no listing in the Sources or Notes and references, and no explanation of what the source is.
 * 90) **Do you have MoS or precedent to support justifying a note/source appearance. If it was a source, it would have to be canon, and the author's website is not canon. Adding a reference would only add redundant citations. On the other hand, there is precedent for including OOU quotes from other sources on articles without citation.
 * 91) ***You could add a BtS sentence about K-McD's site explanation, and cite it in a reference tag. Graestan ( Talk ) 15:19, 19 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 92) * Source list needs to be sorted in order of publication date.
 * 93) **Addressed. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 14:46, 19 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 94) *Infobox not fully sourced.
 * 95) **Could you be a bit more specific on the infobox? I see references by everything and redundant sourcing is not in the MoS. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 14:46, 19 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 96) ***Succession box. "None." My bad; sorry. Graestan ( Talk ) 15:19, 19 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 97) * Graestan ( Talk ) 05:44, 19 March 2008 (UTC)

Comments
 * Yet another WP:NEGTC nomination. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 20:21, 12 March 2008 (UTC)
 * I can't object with this, because I have no idea where I read it, but I know that somewhere someone (Rostini? Dan?) sais that the reason he has an eye in is hand is because Sutfin thought it would look cool.

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Support
 * 1) -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 00:12, 18 March 2008 (UTC)

Oppose

Comments
 * Obviously, I'll update the article when Jennir appears in future Dark Times issues. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 00:12, 18 March 2008 (UTC)

(1 Inq/2 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) Nominated.  Greyman ( Talk ) 02:40, 18 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) Already went through this. Toprawa and Ralltiir 17:25, 18 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) Excellent.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 19:36, 18 March 2008 (UTC)

Object

Comments
 * Muwhaha. WP:TOTJ keeps on rolling, everyone ;) This is my first FA in a month or two, but expect plenty of more Tales of the Jedi nominations over the coming weeks/months from myself and others. I plan to make you all sick of us once again :P Oh, and recruitment here -- new writers and editors are always welcomed on WP:TOTJ . Greyman ( Talk ) 02:40, 18 March 2008 (UTC)

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Support
 * 1) Goodwood  [[Image:Redstarbird.svg|20px]] ( Alliance Intelligence ) 22:06, 18 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 2)  Graestan ( Talk ) 12:42, 19 March 2008 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) From Graestan the Mighty:
 * 2) * "duel matches" – Can an alternative term be found?
 * 3) **"organized competition" substituted.
 * 4) * "It was during this time that the Upper City Cantina was most likely built, when Tarisian ale became a popular export, and where its famous duels and death matches began." – Speculation.
 * 5) **Expunged.
 * 6) * "Ordo, who had his own plans for breaking the Sith blockade, hoped to recruit the party into performing a raid on the nearby military base in order to secure the launch codes necessary to allow a ship to leave without being destroyed by the auto-targeting laser cannons of the orbiting Sith fleet." – Ponderously long.
 * 7) **Busted-up.
 * 8) * "Four thousand years later, however, the cantina, and in particular its dueling ring, had been rebuilt, as a Gungan duelist named Twitch was the champion during the Galactic Civil War." – Is the cantina itself mentioned in the source material? If not, we cannot speculate that the structure existed.
 * 9) **Eviscerated.
 * 10) * Not a big fan of "he/she." Can we say "he or she?"
 * 11) **Replaced.
 * 12) * "The reasons for this content being cut are unknown." – Unnecessary.
 * 13) **Scourged.
 * 14) * Graestan ( Talk ) 01:44, 19 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 15) ** Goodwood [[Image:Redstarbird.svg|20px]] ( Alliance Intelligence ) 02:36, 19 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 16) More from Graestan the Mighty:
 * 17) * No eras tags?
 * 18) **Whoopsie. Added.
 * 19) * "Barstand" does not appear to be a word.
 * 20) **Fixed.
 * 21) * Image:UCCan layout.jpg should probably have the arena cropped out; it gives the wrong impression as to the location as is&mdash;the game probably located it arbitrarily, but on the Upper City map it would be placed outside the cantina, according to this map.
 * 22) **Cropped appropriately.
 * 23) * The header "Destruction and rebuilding" is no longer appropriate. It could be cut altogether, in my opinion, but this is optional.
 * 24) **Amended; now reads "Destruction".
 * 25) * Refs 3 and 6 can likely be combined with a longer explanation and the link.
 * 26) **Done.
 * 27) * Too many sections beginning with "The Upper City Cantina&hellip;" reads a bit amateurish.
 * 28) **Fixed where appropriate.-- Goodwood [[Image:Redstarbird.svg|20px]] ( Alliance Intelligence ) 04:01, 19 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 29) * Graestan ( Talk ) 03:25, 19 March 2008 (UTC)

Comments
 * And the WP:KOTOR march continues...-- Goodwood [[Image:Redstarbird.svg|20px]] ( Alliance Intelligence ) 22:06, 18 March 2008 (UTC)
 * My WookieeProject is bigger than yours. Graestan ( Talk ) 01:44, 19 March 2008 (UTC)
 * Hush, you!-- Goodwood [[Image:Redstarbird.svg|20px]] ( Alliance Intelligence ) 02:36, 19 March 2008 (UTC)

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Support
 * 1) Nominated.  Greyman ( Talk ) 16:49, 19 March 2008 (UTC)

Object

Comments
 * Continuation of WP:TOTJ. Greyman ( Talk ) 16:49, 19 March 2008 (UTC)

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Support
 * 1) Nominated.  Greyman ( Talk ) 16:49, 19 March 2008 (UTC)

Object

Comments
 * Continuation of WP:TOTJ. Greyman ( Talk ) 16:49, 19 March 2008 (UTC)

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Support
 * 1) Nominated.  Greyman ( Talk ) 16:49, 19 March 2008 (UTC)

Object

Comments
 * Continuation of WP:TOTJ. Greyman ( Talk ) 16:49, 19 March 2008 (UTC)