Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Celot Ratua Dil


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Support
 * 1) As nominator.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 22:13, 15 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) Goodwood  [[Image:Rebsymbol2.png|20px]] ( Alliance Intelligence ) 21:25, 16 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) Darthchristian   ( Hey! ) 03:38, 17 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) Greyman ( Paratus ) 06:32, 24 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) Graestan ( Talk ) 01:36, 5 March 2008 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) Surely we could get some quotes for this article? Read the novel and he's certainly got some choice lines. -- Goodwood  [[Image:Rebsymbol2.png|20px]] ( Alliance Intelligence ) 14:35, 16 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) *The other thing I forgot. Anyway, added a few I think are good.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 20:51, 16 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) **Goooood, goooood...-- Goodwood [[Image:Rebsymbol2.png|20px]] ( Alliance Intelligence ) 21:25, 16 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) Any chance of breaking the Biography into a subsection or two? "Early life" (as an example), etc.? I always prefer to allow the article's writer/nominator to have the choice for adding those, instead of doing it myself :)  Other than that, it reads well.  Greyman ( Paratus ) 02:56, 18 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) *Done.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 13:47, 18 February 2008 (UTC)

Comments
 * I need to avoid reading this article for spoiler purposes, but make sure you include a BTS. Toprawa and Ralltiir 22:29, 15 February 2008 (UTC)
 * I knew I forgot something. But the BTS...wow, how did I miss that?  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 01:50, 16 February 2008 (UTC)
 * Also, the P&T seems a bit choppy. Can you clear that up? Darthchristian   ( Hey! ) 01:56, 16 February 2008 (UTC)
 * Any better?  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 02:11, 16 February 2008 (UTC)
 * Loads. Darthchristian   ( Hey! ) 03:37, 17 February 2008 (UTC)
 * Hey Chack. Nice article, but shouldn't the stuff about his family be at the beginning rather than revealed at the end? I know that's how it's done in the novel, but we're not transcribing his life in the order that it's told to us. Harrar 22:17, 17 February 2008 (UTC)
 * Yeah, you're right. Fixed it.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 13:47, 18 February 2008 (UTC)