Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Gus


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Gus

 * Nominated by:  CC7567  (talk) 06:20, 21 July 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Read one, read 'em all.

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)
Support
 * 1) Good enough.--Kreivi Wolter 00:09, 22 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 2)  IFYLOFD  ( You will pay the price for your lack of vision! ) 05:11, 22 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 13:28, 23 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) Crystal clean.  Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 01:33, 25 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) &mdash;Master Jonathan(Jedi Council Chambers) 21:05, 25 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 6)  Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 08:57, 29 July 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) The head
 * 2) * It should be mentioned that he yanked the tactical droid's head off. --Kreivi Wolter 20:10, 21 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) **Added.  CC7567  (talk) 21:28, 21 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) IFYLOFD:
 * 5) * Context on the North and south towers.
 * 6) **Again, self-contextualizing, and I don't see why more is necessary.
 * 7) * Tell how Gus was injured in the battle.
 * 8) **It wasn't verified, but I added the bit that he was actually injured.
 * 9) * Why would Cody and Rex suspect that there was a spy? Clarify.
 * 10) **It was Kenobi's reasoning, and he didn't clarify it himself; it was more of a suggestion, hence why it's the "possibility" of a spy. I don't see enough reason to mention Kenobi here because it's not directly related to Gus.
 * 11) ***Well, Kreivi Wolter's Tactical droid 1 (Christophsis) article says that they obtained that info after performing a robolobotomy on that droid.  IFYLOFD  ( You will pay the price for your lack of vision! ) 21:50, 21 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 12) ****I'm familiar with the episode, thank you, but I'm still failing to see how this nitpicking is necessary. If I say that Cody and Rex analyzed the droid, then I have to mention the Jedi, and regardless of whether it helps set the stage for the rest of the article, it's simply not relevant to Gus himself. If you still feel that it needs to be added, please provide me with your reasoning.  CC7567  (talk) 22:46, 21 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 13) ****Well, actually the head didn't revealed that there was a spy, it just confirmed that the separatists had somehow gained the information about Republic's location.--Kreivi Wolter 00:07, 22 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 14) * Furthermore, are Cody and Rex's nicknames really necessary?
 * 15) **No, I suppose they aren't.
 * 16) ***Nevermind; they're necessary because that's what the other clones addressed them as, and it's confusing if there are both clone designations and nicknames in there.  CC7567  (talk) 21:38, 21 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 17) * Explain why Chopper's stringing battle droid fingers together is bad, and explain why Gus thought Chopper was "deficient".
 * 18) **Addressed the former, but the latter wasn't expanded upon, and I can't draw any conclusions without going into speculation.  CC7567  (talk) 21:28, 21 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 19) *Nice work.  IFYLOFD  ( You will pay the price for your lack of vision! ) 21:06, 21 July 2009 (UTC)

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