Wookieepedia:EduCorps/Meeting 24

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EduCorps Meeting 24 will occur on Saturday, May 30th, 2015 at 7 PM ET in the #Wookieepedia-educorps channel on IRC. If you are an EduCorps-only member and cannot attend, please leave notes saying how you will vote on the articles under review.

Enemy strongholds

 * 128th Flight
 * 28th Flight
 * 31st Flight
 * 72nd Flight
 * A Durni Mosaic
 * Dulin
 * Mab Kador
 * Rooks
 * Ubasameir
 * Yanthan
 * Yde system
 * Zug Tassik

New hotspots

 * 132nd Forward Division
 * As it is currently worded, the last sentence of the BTS is speculation. It should be reworded.
 * The Rebellion era is not mentioned in the article outside of the infobox.
 * 224th
 * "Among their ranks was a detachment of troopers known as the Mud-Jumpers." Do we know that the whole group was not known as the Mud-Jumpers? The article currently makes it sound like they are definitely a smaller element of the 224th.
 * Reference 2 needs additional explanation.
 * 38th Infantry
 * From what I can see, the entry refers to the unit as the "Thirty-eighth Infantry"
 * It only says that several members of the platoon were from Tatooine, not most.
 * The source only calls the vehicle an "armored walker" Is this really enough to identify it as a Manka?
 * The entry also says that the walker: "carried the soldiers safely through the harshest battles of the Great War. " This should be mentioned, since it confirms that the platoon survived those battles.
 * 45-x-920p
 * There seems to be a lot of repeat information in the body about the Mistar system. Some of the information should be combined and smoothed out.
 * Why are Abar-12 and the Abar system mentioned in the reference and not in the main article?
 * For that matter, I don't think that the article should mix canon Legends and non-canon legends in the body?
 * A-4P0
 * I'm not sure how it can be determined that he has black sensors/eyes.
 * Do we know he was on comm duty or could he of just happened to answer the comm?
 * Accellerite
 * If it is just mentioned in TOR, the appearances section should have an tag.
 * The use of the core bombs in the Rebellion era is not mentioned in the body.
 * Adah Meborman
 * Reference 1 is insufficient to source the dates provided.
 * Just from the quote, I can tell there is information missing from the article.
 * Veag Gonwa
 * I do not believe that The Old Republic: Annihilation is sufficient by itself to source the date.
 * The release date for the update needs another source.
 * Yortal's Emporium
 * The date cannot be sourced to the game.
 * More information should be included about what Yortal sold at the shop.
 * Zherriak
 * I'm not seeing anything in the original article that links him to the Rebellion era.
 * The full release date is not self-sourcing.
 * Zoa'mon
 * "Bypassing any accepted history or chronology, Direus'pei instead used these famous figures to write a political screed excoriated the Hutts' continued subjugation of the natives of Nal Hutta, the Evocii." The source says this about the work, which should be mentioned somehow in the article.

Answering the call

 * 1)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  05:15, May 25, 2015 (UTC)