Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Brullian Dyll


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Brullian Dyll

 * Nominated by: - —Harrar  ( Cut the comm chatter ) 13:54, 6 July 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: If music be the food of love, GAN.

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)
Support
 * 1)  CC7567  (talk) 23:14, 7 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 2)  Graestan ( Talk ) 00:20, 8 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) Great work. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 03:12, 8 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 12:43, 9 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) &mdash;Master Jonathan(Jedi Council Chambers) 19:28, 9 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 6) --Eyrezer 08:29, 11 July 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Attack of the Clone
 * 2) * "in order that it could be distributed once again to the galaxy": it's either "in order to" or "in order for", not "in order that"; please try to reword or replace it.
 * 3) **changed it to "so that"...not sure what I was thinking.
 * 4) * "the nature of whose work was deemed to be a threat": not flowing very well, and it's not making much sense; please try to reword.
 * 5) **Sloppy as. Reworded.
 * 6) *I don't get the tagline. :P  CC7567  (talk) 23:16, 6 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 7) **It's a Shakespeare quotation from Twelfth Night &mdash; "If music be the food of love, play on." :) - —Harrar  ( Cut the comm chatter ) 23:01, 7 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 8) ***Figures; I don't often read much Shakespeare. :P  CC7567  (talk) 23:14, 7 July 2009 (UTC)

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