Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Eelysa

Eelysa

 * Nominated by: Cull Tremayne 03:51, May 2, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: She's a scarecrow!

Support

 * 1) --Eyrezer 12:59, May 6, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2)  StarNeptune Talk to me! 22:26, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

Ah-ha!

 * "Skywalker temporarily lost control of the boulders, the trees and R2-D2 that he was levitating and crashed to the ground." - The phrasing here is a little odd... namely the "and R2-D2 that" part. Could it be tweaked just a little?
 * "Eventually, Eelysa noticed a mysterious task force sniffing around the system," - Sniffing is just a touch too colloquial, I think.
 * Otherwise excellent. Thefourdotelipsis 07:39, May 27, 2010 (UTC)