Talk:Emon Azzameen

Unsure of Corrections -- Which Brother is Which?
I've corrected the run-on sentences and general syntatic confusion in this article. I admit inexperience with X-Wing Alliance, so I've basically back-engineered this article from the other Azzameen family pages. In many sentences, unclear pronouns made it difficult to determine which sibling, exactly, was doing what. If my editing has resulted in any inaccuracies, I invite someone more knowledgeable in video-game continuity to correct me. Force be!75.71.95.3 00:29, 21 April 2007 (UTC)