Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Cemas


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Cemas

 * Nominated by: ~ SavageBob 03:31, September 5, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Got to 'em before Eyrezer could. ;P ~ SavageBob 03:31, September 5, 2010 (UTC)

(2 ECs/1 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) Succinct Eyrezer 13:41, September 5, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Menkooroo 14:59, September 6, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) --  1358  (Talk) 04:35, September 7, 2010 (UTC)

Object Comments
 * 1) LOL. Could you specify that the Cemas was in the Crystal Jewel casino at the time of the explosion? --Eyrezer 04:32, September 5, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) *Done! ~ SavageBob 13:36, September 5, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) All of the references to feet are hilarious in their properness. However, I'm not a big fan of the bts statement "This could indicate..." I feel like it would be better off concluding after "The book refers to the individual as an it", and letting the reader draw their own conclusions. Menkooroo 14:20, September 6, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) *I see what you mean, but I think just flatly stating "The book calls it an it" with no elaboration would be confusing to the reader. Is it any better now? ~ SavageBob 14:41, September 6, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) For the sake of short sentences, please merge "They had feet." :D --  1358  (Talk) 18:36, September 6, 2010 (UTC)
 * 6) *Can you explain why? It's the only thing we know about their appearance, so I feel it would be arbitrary to merge it with other material, which pertains to their society and history. ~ SavageBob 19:01, September 6, 2010 (UTC)