Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Shaliz'Na


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Shaliz'Na

 * Nominated by: --Eyrezer 09:35, September 10, 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Three in a row. An Atrivis sector Project-crossover

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1) 128 available S-pecies after 6 FA or GA, 2 noms. A long list still. But you can feature this one any time you want. --Skippy Farlstendoiro 10:43, September 10, 2009 (UTC)
 * 2)  Graestan ( Talk ) 11:54, September 13, 2009 (UTC)
 * 3)  Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 14:53, September 13, 2009 (UTC)
 * 4)  CC7567  (talk) 05:06, September 14, 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 07:32, September 14, 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Skippy after species beginning with an S
 * 2) * The Shaliz'Na were enslaved by the Galactic Empire, and large numbers of the species became addicted to alcohol. Do you mean they became addicted as a consequence of their enslavement? Or are the events unrelated, coinciding only in time?
 * 3) * The last sentences under History are not ref'ed.
 * 4) *and... that all, I guess. --Skippy Farlstendoiro 09:58, September 10, 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) **I had to get one S species before you nabbed them all! The source is a little ambiguous regards the alcohol. I've tried to reword to more accurately reflect this. Ref added, too. Thanks for the review. --Eyrezer 10:39, September 10, 2009 (UTC)
 * 6) Soresu
 * 7) * The 2nd, 3rd, and 4th sentences all start with "the species". Vary it up. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 07:17, September 13, 2009 (UTC)
 * 8) **Handled. This was one of those simple fixes that reviewers should feel comfortable handling themselves&mdash;we're working together to get these articles recognized! Graestan ( Talk ) 11:45, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

Comments


 * Was their addiction said to be chemical (like Arcona with salt) or psychological? Perhaps it belongs in the biology section, with only the ramifications going in the culture section. Graestan ( Talk ) 11:54, September 13, 2009 (UTC)
 * It doesn't say either way, unfortunately. --Eyrezer 11:38, September 14, 2009 (UTC)