Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/88-R Nightscreamer


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88-R Nightscreamer

 * Nominated by: Manoof (talk) 08:39, January 8, 2014 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: 3rd nom

(3 ECs/0 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) Sounds like it'll be fun to ride.  Corellian Premier Jedi symbol.svg Force will be with you always 00:16, January 12, 2014 (UTC)
 * 2) Nice work. Supreme Emperor (talk) 05:01, January 21, 2014 (UTC)
 * 3) Ayrehead02 (talk) 20:21, January 21, 2014 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) A Force user
 * 2) * It needs some work to match the Layout Guide, like what Ayrehead says above.
 * 3) **Fixed Manoof (talk) 09:30, January 11, 2014 (UTC)
 * 4) * Additionally, per the Layout Guide, anything in the intro needs added to the body section.
 * 5) **Since the body IS the intro, do you mean infobox? Manoof (talk) 09:30, January 11, 2014 (UTC)
 * 6) ***Zoinks, yes that's what I meant. Corellian Premier Jedi symbol.svg Force will be with you always 19:24, January 11, 2014 (UTC)
 * 7) ****Fixed. Manoof (talk) 22:56, January 11, 2014 (UTC)
 * 8) * In the body, context on what Ikas-Adno is. You could just say that it was a company.
 * 9) **Fixed Manoof (talk) 09:30, January 11, 2014 (UTC)
 * 10) * Additional context needed on the Nightscreamer in the body. So its a vehicle?
 * 11) **Fixed, changed vehicle to speeder bike. Manoof (talk) 09:30, January 11, 2014 (UTC)
 * 12) * In the infobox, you could probably fill in the pilot/passenger sections.
 * 13) **Fixed Manoof (talk) 09:30, January 11, 2014 (UTC)
 * 14) * Just a question. Does the source indicate specifically when it was used or who could buy it?
 * 15) **No. The handbook came in multiple editions (the one included is the imperial edition), with cradossk saying it has been around for nearly a thousand years. Some chapters were static through different editions (dengar mentions that the first chapter hasnt changed for at least two editions) so i don't think we can be specific about the era? Manoof (talk) 09:30, January 11, 2014 (UTC)
 * 16) ***I think you're right as well. Corellian Premier Jedi symbol.svg Force will be with you always 19:24, January 11, 2014 (UTC)
 * 17) *Nice article. I will take another look at it when these are addressed. Corellian Premier Jedi symbol.svg Force will be with you always 15:15, January 8, 2014 (UTC)
 * 18) **Cheers ;) Manoof (talk) 09:30, January 11, 2014 (UTC)
 * 19) * Okay, one more thing. A link for Chek's in-universe text should go in the body. Great work fixing this by the way. Corellian Premier Jedi symbol.svg Force will be with you always 19:24, January 11, 2014 (UTC)
 * 20) **Fixed Manoof (talk) 22:56, January 11, 2014 (UTC)
 * SE
 * 1) * Can we get some additional context on Ikas-Ando? Is it a company, a person?
 * 2) **Fixed Manoof (talk) 22:28, January 20, 2014 (UTC)
 * 3) * Context on Chentu Chek? Supreme Emperor (talk) 04:01, January 20, 2014 (UTC)
 * 4) **Fixed Manoof (talk) 22:28, January 20, 2014 (UTC)
 * 5) ***Also, just a heads up, pipelinking generally isn't needed to adjust capitalization. You had Bounty hunter pipelinked, when Bounty hunter would have been fine. Supreme Emperor (talk) 05:01, January 21, 2014 (UTC)

Comments
 * 1) Please note that "1st" is only used for in-universe (IU) sources like the novels. Sourcebooks like The BH Code would only get "1stm" (mentioned) or "1stp" (pictured). I went ahead and changed it in the article. Corellian Premier Jedi symbol.svg Force will be with you always 19:24, January 11, 2014 (UTC)
 * 2) *Thanks Manoof (talk) 22:56, January 11, 2014 (UTC)