Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Teek (species)


 * ''The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a featured article nomination that was . Please do not modify it.

(5 Inqs/3 Users/8 Total)
Support
 * 1) Nah-nah! --  AdmirableAckbar  [Talk] 16:21, 16 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Thefourdotelipsis 22:48, 18 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 3)  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  15:34, 21 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) Green Tentacle (Talk) 22:51, 24 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 5)  Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 17:37, 26 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 6) Hobbes15 ( Tiger Headquarters ) 21:56, 26 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 7)  &mdash;Graestan  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( This party's over ) 00:16, 27 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 8) Imperialles 13:55, 27 October 2007 (UTC)

Oppose Comments
 * 1) From the desk of Atarumaster88
 * 2) * Ugh. Numerous spelling errors. Go through and make sure you've taken care of them all please. Or should I say "tokken"?
 * 3) **Taken care of. Three does not equal numerous. &mdash;Graestan [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( This party's over ) 04:35, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) ***That's not counting the ones I noted in IRC or fixed myself. I just got tired of it eventually. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 05:27, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 5) * Fragmented flow in the History and culture section. The prose jumps from subject to subject and does not have adequate paragraph breaks.
 * 6) **I think I've addressed that. --  AdmirableAckbar  [Talk] 16:23, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 7) * Saying in the image caption that Teek is the most well-known of his species is A) OOU B.S. and B) Speculative.
 * 8) **Addressed. &mdash;Graestan [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( This party's over ) 04:35, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 9) * Wait wait. So it's not confirmed that Yeep is a Teek? Um, canon? I demand all mentions of Yeep be moved to BTS unless confirmed.
 * 10) *Have a Super Terrific Friendly Un-friendly day. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 22:39, 16 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 11) **I intend to --  AdmirableAckbar  [Talk] 16:23, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 12) From the Heavily Pounded Desk of Four Dot
 * 13) * You've got two very, very similar images. I'd suggest replacing the infobox image with a full body shot, as it's a better representation of the species. Also, one of Teek running might be nice. ;)
 * 14) **Added an image of blurry Teek, and I've asked Ozzel to get a full body screenshot. --  AdmirableAckbar  [Talk] 15:41, 18 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 15) * "The other Teeks had a normal mouth," - Normal!? Eh?
 * 16) **Addressed. --  AdmirableAckbar  [Talk] 15:41, 18 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 17) *That's all. Thefourdotelipsis 09:58, 18 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 18) History section needs to be separated into a Teek in the Galaxy section. Also some of the paragraphs seem out of order. Also the line about Teeks being discovered but not noticed by Imperial scouts needs to be clarified to make sense. Also mention of the Teek in The Bounty Hunters: Aurra Sing is needed. A pic from that source would be good also. --Eyrezer 02:41, 21 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 19) *Teeks in the galaxy section created. Which paragraphs/sections are out of order? Sentence clarified. Teeks don't play a role at all in it: Aurra Sing is walking through a forest on Endor and there is a Teek sticking his head up in the foreground. They only appear in one frame, and the picture isn't great and is too small to enhance the article, IMHO. Thank you for your input. --  AdmirableAckbar  [Talk] 21:06, 21 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 20) **Looks good. I thought the para about Yeep was out of order, but now in the TinG section is ok. Sentence also looks good. I think a mention of their clothing could also be in order, related to theri love of trinkets etc. --Eyrezer 06:05, 22 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 21) ***Done. --  AdmirableAckbar  [Talk] 21:09, 24 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 22) Did it specifically state in the HoloNet that Teeks were faster than any other species in the galaxy, or just the one's in the race. It's highly unlikely that all of the fast species in the galaxy competed, so I'm not sure that is an accurate reference to the statement. If so, it's fine; if not, amend or remove it.  Hobbes15 ( Tiger Headquarters ) 21:49, 26 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 23) *No it didn't. I've changed it to most other species in the galaxy.--  AdmirableAckbar  [Talk] 21:54, 26 October 2007 (UTC)