Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Alzoc III


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(5 Inqs/2 Users/7 Total)
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 * 1) --Eyrezer 02:00, 20 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Thefourdotelipsis 03:09, 21 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) Well-executed. &mdash;Graestan  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( This party's over ) 02:05, 27 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) Nicely done, Ey.  Greyman ( Paratus ) 20:52, 27 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 5) Cull Tremayne 07:36, 31 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 6) Hobbes15 ( Tiger Headquarters ) 21:17, 1 November 2007 (UTC)
 * 7) Lord Hydronium 22:12, 1 November 2007 (UTC)
 * 1) Shouldn't the appearances and sources sections list where it first appeared, where it was first mentioned and so forth? It's all in the Behind the scenes section, but it should be more clear. --LtNOWIS 05:21, 20 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) *Good point. Fixed. --Eyrezer 01:57, 21 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) The infobox needs to be fully sourced. --Imperialles 16:39, 31 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) *Done
 * 5) "...following restricting after the Battle of Endor" should be reworded.  Hobbes15 ( Tiger Headquarters ) 04:31, 1 November 2007 (UTC)
 * 6) *Done.
 * 7) ** It's still there. - Lord Hydronium 06:53, 1 November 2007 (UTC)
 * 8) ***There goes my credibility. It should be gone now. --Eyrezer 09:04, 1 November 2007 (UTC)
 * 9) "A number of Talz also escaped the planet, found on various worlds such as Feriae Junction, Questal, The Wheel, and the outcast Artists' High Commune on Mrlssi." could be worded better. - Lord Hydronium 06:53, 1 November 2007 (UTC)
 * 10) *THis should be fixed too. --Eyrezer 09:04, 1 November 2007 (UTC)

'''Approved by Inquisitorius 23:48, 1 November 2007 (UTC)
 * 1) A higher quality scan of the Talz village and the Imperial mines would be appreciated. --Eyrezer 20:17, 21 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) *Taken care of! --Eyrezer 01:42, 27 October 2007 (UTC)