Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Lucksprite


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Lucksprite

 * Nominated by: ~ SavageBob 22:06, April 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Lucksprite vs. the Tumblebunny trainer: cage match. One will stand. But one will fall. ~ SavageBob 22:06, April 30, 2010 (UTC)

(5 Inqs/1 Users/6 Total)
Support
 * 1) Imperialles 15:47, May 3, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Short, easy read. Toprawa and Ralltiir 20:08, May 7, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 19:36, May 8, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) --Eyrezer 12:03, May 10, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5)  Jonjedigrandmaster  Jedi symbol.svg ( We seed the stars ) 18:05, May 10, 2010 (UTC)
 * 6)  IFYLOFD  ( Floyd's crib ) 23:58, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Intro: "Lucksprites could take great pleasure in carrying out their duties" This implies that using their powers was some sort of duty, as if dealing out good and bad luck was somehow their natural mandate. Consider rewording it. --Imperialles 10:45, May 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) *Fixed, I see. I'll give it a proper read-through soon. Seems quite good thus far! --Imperialles 21:41, May 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) Toprawa:
 * 4) * Since all we're basing the species' height figure on is a visual comparison, can we at least say "approximately" 0.66 meters in the infobox to avoid asserting such a precise figure?
 * 5) * I believe we can use a Hyperspace citation template for Castaways of Endor. Please do so. Toprawa and Ralltiir 16:29, May 7, 2010 (UTC)
 * 6) **Done, done. Thanks for the review. ~ SavageBob 19:55, May 7, 2010 (UTC)

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