Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Alderaan Ascendancy Contention


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Alderaan Ascendancy Contention

 * Nominated by: Tinwe 09:51, 19 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: I know, the Bts is ridiculously long when compared to the actual article, but I think all the points are valid, so I thought I'd give this a go. :)

(2 AC/4 users/6 total)
Support
 * 1) Count me in.--Skippy Farlstendoiro 10:39, 19 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) Cull Tremayne 21:37, 19 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie ) 09:04, 20 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) Qui-Gon Reborn ( The ability to speak doesn't make you intelligent. )
 * 5)  Greyman ( Talk ) 21:01, 24 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 6)  IFYLOFD  ( And now, young Skywalker, you will die. ) 00:45, 26 November 2008 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) "The mediation team sent by the Galactic Senate resolved the dispute in favor of the Organas, although a marriage was called between the Antilles and Organa families." Is this missing a word? "a marriage was called" instead of "a marriage was called for"? Cull Tremayne 10:10, 19 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) *Whoops. Yes, for should have been there, and now it is. :) --Tinwe 15:13, 19 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) The same source that gives the current birth year for C'baoth also describes him as having a big white beard at 38 years of age, therefore it is entirely plausible that he may have looked 40 or so even in his twenties. Possibly needs to be noted. QuentinGeorge 05:31, 20 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) *Done. I hope my addition is sufficient&mdash;I didn't want to get any more specific as the article is not about C'baoth after all, even though his age and the timing of the contention are closely tied. :P I assume C'baoth was already a Master at the time (though, IIRC, it has not been stated anywhere in so many words). His article currently says he was 33 when achieving (or rather, assuming) the rank, so I would say he must have been at least in his thirties during the dispute (hence the "around 40 BBY" date). --Tinwe 16:45, 20 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) Surely there is a few relevant pictures that can be added, like, perhaps, C'baoth, or the Organa family logo, or even the planet Alderaan? QuentinGeorge 10:13, 21 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 6) *Added all three you suggested. Feel free to resize them or move them around, or even remove one if the page looks cluttered, but at least with my 1024x768 resolution the article looks quite nice. --Tinwe 12:15, 21 November 2008 (UTC)

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