Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Namana cream pie


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Namana cream pie

 * Nominated by:  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  18:43, July 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Here comes a pie, Naru.

(2 ECs/2 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1) Comedy. How quaint. ;) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 22:14, July 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 19:08, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) ~  Savage  BOB sig.png 16:21, July 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) Menkooroo 00:46, July 27, 2011 (UTC)

Object Comments
 * 1) The first sentence is a run-on.  NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 19:14, July 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *Better?-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  20:18, July 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Jangeth
 * 4) * Check your grammar  JangFett  (Talk) 19:24, July 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) **Better?-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  20:16, July 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * Does anyone think I need to elaborate about the Bakurans and the Namana plant?-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  18:43, July 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * You should make reference to it as "native to the planet of Bakura" or something to that effect. As for the plant, even though it's not explicitly established that it was made from that plant, the use of the name combined with it being native to Bakura would make a reference to the trees appropriate. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 19:14, July 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * I added a reference to Bakura, how would you suggest I reference the tree?-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  20:16, July 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * "Namana cream pie was a type of pie from the planet Bakura, home of the Namana tree, that was served..." would probably work. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 20:25, July 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * Done.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  20:42, July 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * Remember to source the word "before" to Dining at Dex's. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 19:14, July 5, 2011 (UTC)