Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Unidentified Coruscant Police officer (Panza Hondi)


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Unidentified Coruscant Police officer (Panza Hondi)

 * Nominated by:  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  18:36, July 9, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: WP:VG!

(1 ECs/3 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1) Coruscantfan (Talk) 23:20, July 9, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) 501st  dogma ( talk ) 12:11, July 14, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 19:40, August 10, 2012 (UTC)
 * 4) Menkooroo (talk) 01:50, August 13, 2012 (UTC)

Object
 * The opening of the article reads repetitively to me. "Around 32 BBY" and "Around the time of the Battle for Naboo" are the same thing; I don't think it's necessary to mention and give context on the battle if the article can just say "around 32 BBY." Menkooroo (talk) 23:13, August 11, 2012 (UTC)
 * I think that the battle should be mentioned since it provides additional information on when the officer worked/died during the year. I removed the context on the battle per Tope's objection on Panza Hondi.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  03:46, August 12, 2012 (UTC)
 * Looks good with the double "around the" gone. Menkooroo (talk) 01:50, August 13, 2012 (UTC)

Comments
 * Coruscant Police is another name for the Coruscant Police Force, so it should be capitalized in the title.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  18:36, July 9, 2012 (UTC)