Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/CZ-332


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CZ-332

 * Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:20, November 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

(4 ECs/0 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  05:48, November 23, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 13:43, November 23, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) Winterz (talk) 01:53, December 5, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4)  Supreme Emperor (talk) 04:12, December 5, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * "The droid worked with the shop's owner, a Human named Nols, in selling a wide range of first and second-hand equipment, with the pair being able to find items that were requested, but which they didn't have for sale, elsewhere on the Wheel." Could you split this sentence? -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  01:00, November 16, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) **Split. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:32, November 16, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) Supreme
 * 5) * Would you mind rewording the third sentence a bit? Reads a bit awkward to me. Supreme Emperor (talk) 04:31, November 27, 2013 (UTC)
 * 6) **Done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 23:51, December 2, 2013 (UTC)
 * 7) Winterz
 * 8) * Just the usual picky context on the Galactic Civil War, sir. Winterz (talk) 01:25, December 4, 2013 (UTC)
 * 9) **Context added. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:34, December 4, 2013 (UTC)

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