Wookieepedia:Re-featured article nominations/Battle of Grassy Plains

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Battle of Grassy Plains

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 * Last featured on: September 17, 2007
 * Changes since last review: diff

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 * 1) Jeff
 * 2) *Seems like a relic of pre-Inq FAs. Just glancing at it reveals that:
 * 3) **The intro could be a lot longer.
 * 4) **There are too many images crowded too closely together.
 * 5) **The article itself is lacking context in a lot of places and could use some considerable expansion in general.
 * 6) **There's no way that the sources section is complete. Menkooroo 13:05, June 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) Trak is in a reviewing mood:
 * 8) *Overall
 * 9) **I did some minor copy-editing and adjusted some of the image positions (nixing one), but it still could use a bit of TLC, perhaps even a nixing of some more images. As Menk said, it could use more context. My biggest objection, though, is the prose.  It feels choppy and prosey and could do with a very thorough copy-edit by someone with the appropriate sources.  Trak Nar  Ramble on 04:47, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

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