Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Duel on Kuar


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Duel on Kuar

 * Nominated by: —Tommy9281 Dark side Master SWGTCG.jpg ( Mechno-chair ) 06:02, January 16, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:A Good article that made it over the FAN hump courtesy of the latest KOTOR issue. The "Indomitable" Mandalore gets PWNED.

(5 Inqs/2 Users/7 Total)
Support
 * 1) &mdash;Master Jonathan(Jedi Council Chambers) 16:36, January 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) You gotta admit, the image from KotOR 48 is sweet.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 15:48, January 19, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3)  CC7567  (talk) 05:40, April 7, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4)  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  20:31, April 7, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5)  Jonjedigrandmaster  Jedi symbol.svg ( We seed the stars ) 21:25, April 13, 2010 (UTC)
 * 6) &mdash;  Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 03:32, April 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 7) Green Tentacle (Talk) 12:38, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) From the Council Chambers:
 * 2) * Is there a reason for listing the Mandalorian warriors and Krath soldiers in the infobox? IMO since they didn't actually participate in any way, they shouldn't be listed.
 * 3) **Addressed.
 * 4) * Is the name "Battle of Kuar" explicitly referenced in any canonical source? Unless it is, this should probably be moved to Duel on Kuar per that comment on the talk page.
 * 5) **Addressed.
 * 6) *Otherwise, great job as usual. &mdash;Master Jonathan(Jedi Council Chambers) 00:31, January 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 7) **Thanks for your help and review, Master Jonathan. Please advise if anything further is required. —Tommy9281 Dark side Master SWGTCG.jpg ( Mechno-chair ) 00:44, January 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 8) * Since the article is conjecturally titled, the literal title should not be bolded in the intro, just the word(s) that best describe the event. Try "A duel occurred on the planet Kuar&hellip;"
 * 9) **Addressed.
 * 10) * There are two instances of "Battle of Kuar" left in the BTS that now need to be reworded.
 * 11) **That's what I get for being hasty, lol. Addressed.
 * 12) *** Still one left: "Anderson used the comic Edge of the Whirlwind, along with the Battle of Kuar,"
 * 13) ****Got it.
 * 14) *That should be it. :) &mdash;Master Jonathan(Jedi Council Chambers) 00:51, January 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 15) **Thanks again, MJ> —Tommy9281 Dark side Master SWGTCG.jpg ( Mechno-chair ) 01:03, January 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 16) or Krath Sith sorceress Aleema Keto&hellip; I know what you mean, but those unfamiliar with the subject material might not. Can you reword this so show that she was a Sith aligned with the Krath? That's it. Good job as usual, Tommy.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 18:05, January 18, 2010 (UTC)
 * 17) *Changed it to "co-commander." See if that's good, and thanks for the review JK. —Tommy9281 Dark side Master SWGTCG.jpg ( Mechno-chair ) 00:48, January 19, 2010 (UTC)
 * 18) **That's good. Great job, Tommy.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 15:48, January 19, 2010 (UTC)

Comments


 * Although I don't find this objection-worthy, please check which capitalization of Plains/plains of Harkul is correct and be consistent throughout the article in using it correctly.  CC7567  (talk) 05:40, April 7, 2010 (UTC)