Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Force storm (wormhole)


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Force storm (wormhole)

 * Nominated by: Xicer9 [[Image:atgar.svg|20px]]( Combadge) 00:54, May 7, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: POWAHHH!

(4 Inqs/3 Users/7 Total)
Support
 * 1) Imperialles 23:10, May 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Unlimited powah! Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 20:26, May 19, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) Per Tranner. :P  JangFett  (Talk) 21:16, May 19, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4)  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  22:45, May 21, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5)  Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 00:34, May 25, 2010 (UTC)
 * 6) Nothing jumped out at me that needed mentioning or tending to, so it looks sound. Heck of a thing to imagine while listening to the audio, though.   Trak Nar  Ramble on 04:55, May 25, 2010 (UTC)
 * 7) &mdash;  Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 21:07, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) I really want to read, fix, and review this article, but first you gotta make the first sentence of the intro less ridiculously redundant.  Graestan ( Talk ) 16:02, May 8, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) *How does that look? Xicer9 [[Image:atgar.svg|20px]]( Combadge) 02:03, May 9, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) A few things:
 * 4) *Description: "violent vortices of Force energy"; "swirling blue vortices of destructive Force energy" Very similar phrasing in two successive sentences.
 * 5) *Users: "possess the ability to create"; "Darkstaff had the ability to create" Same thing here.
 * 6) *That infobox image is beautiful. Nice article, too! --Imperialles 22:40, May 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * 7) **All taken care of, and thanks for taking a look. Xicer9 [[Image:atgar.svg|20px]]( Combadge) 23:09, May 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * 8) "Bereft of the Force, Rivan was easily slain by a Force-sensitive warrior." How/why was he bereft of the Force? Other than that, excellent.  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  20:43, May 20, 2010 (UTC)
 * 9) *A couple sentences earlier I stated that the Darkstaff had to leech Rivan's Force energy to create the storm. Does it need further clarification? Xicer9 [[Image:atgar.svg|20px]]( Combadge) 21:07, May 20, 2010 (UTC)
 * 10) **Bah, no it doesn't, sorry.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 22:45, May 21, 2010 (UTC)

Comments
 * If the article I linked for the Battle of Almas is referring to a different battle on Almas, please remove it. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 00:34, May 25, 2010 (UTC)