Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Trandosha

Trandosha

 * Nominated by:  AV-6R7  Crew Pit 02:08, January 15, 2016 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:A CAN that got too long. The original nomination can be found here.

Support

 * 1) Cevan  IMPpress.svg  (talk)  00:51, January 25, 2016 (UTC)
 * 2) JorrelWiki-shrinkable.pngFraajic 07:22, January 27, 2016 (UTC)
 * 3) Because it's the forests, not the game, that make a world a hunter's paradise!  Imperators II (Talk) 10:55, January 30, 2016 (UTC)

Imperators II

 * I think you should section the article per WP:LG and provide an intro.
 * Done. -  AV-6R7  Crew Pit 23:31, January 15, 2016 (UTC)
 * I don't see where in the source of ref 11 does it say that it was the proximity of Kashyyyk and Trandosha that caused the rivalry of the two species.
 * Cleaned up to be more ambiguous, but I don't care for the wording. This issue will probably be taken care of once I split the article into sections. -  AV-6R7  Crew Pit 14:19, January 15, 2016 (UTC)
 * Hmmm... couldn't the mention of the convor in Missing in Action be interpreted to mean that the bird is native to Trandosha?
 * By that logic, the momong could also be a native life form, as in concept art it is referred to as a Trandoshan monkey. -  AV-6R7  Crew Pit 14:19, January 15, 2016 (UTC)
 * Added. -  AV-6R7  Crew Pit 23:31, January 15, 2016 (UTC)
 * Ref 4 does not confirm/inform that Trandosha orbits a single star like the infobox field does. And adding a source for that (like in ref 2) if you can would be nice.  Imperators II (Talk) 09:24, January 15, 2016 (UTC)
 * Done. -  AV-6R7  Crew Pit 23:31, January 15, 2016 (UTC)
 * Intro shouldn't be referenced.
 * Done. -  AV-6R7  Crew Pit 00:54, January 25, 2016 (UTC)
 * "Dosha" is intro-exclusive.
 * Done. -  AV-6R7  Crew Pit 00:54, January 25, 2016 (UTC)
 * Per WP:LG, info on non-sentient species should be in the Description section, instead. And you could add short bits of context for those creatures, just like you did for Trandoshans.  Imperators II (Talk) 23:50, January 15, 2016 (UTC)
 * Done. -  AV-6R7  Crew Pit 22:16, January 24, 2016 (UTC)
 * Currently, in the intro it is stated that Trandosha was positioned in the same system as Kashyyyk, while the Description section only says Kashyyyk neighbored Trandosha. I believe you should swap the two, since the Description section does not mention that the system was shared and in general it should be more detailed than the intro.
 * Done. -  AV-6R7  Crew Pit 04:31, January 30, 2016 (UTC)

Jorrel

 * Like my objection on Talzzi, some sort of in-prose media identification for Star Wars: The Clone Wars: The Complete Season One would be helpful&mdash;something like specifying that it's the DVD set specifically, not just the season. JorrelWiki-shrinkable.pngFraajic 09:38, January 15, 2016 (UTC)
 * Done. -  AV-6R7  Crew Pit 23:31, January 15, 2016 (UTC)

Ecks Dee

 * Some notes on your referencing: I can see at least one place where identical referencing is used consecutively, which means either one of them is wrong or the first one is unnecessary. Please double-check.
 * I was missing a reference to Journey Through Space. This has been corrected. -  AV-6R7  Crew Pit 14:42, February 12, 2016 (UTC)
 * As for your references 1+2 and 5+6, I'd recommend you go with just 2 and 6 wherever you currently have both. A well-written reference explains the logic without needing to double-reference. Make sure to link properly in your references too. 1358  (Talk)  21:58, February 11, 2016 (UTC)
 * Killed the double references. -  AV-6R7  Crew Pit 14:51, February 12, 2016 (UTC)
 * Linking is still an issue. Everything needs to be linked once in every reference as per WP:S #7. 1358  (Talk)  18:41, February 24, 2016 (UTC)
 * Done. -  AV-6R7  Crew Pit 18:52, February 24, 2016 (UTC)

Comments

 * I don't want to make this an official objection, as I don't want to be redundant, but I agree with Imperators regarding adding an intro. JorrelWiki-shrinkable.pngFraajic 09:38, January 15, 2016 (UTC)
 * It will be done. I am currently trying to decide what pictures, if any, I'm going to add to the article. -  AV-6R7  Crew Pit 14:23, January 15, 2016 (UTC)
 * It is finished. -  AV-6R7  Crew Pit 23:31, January 15, 2016 (UTC)