Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Polvin Kut


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Polvin Kut

 * Nominated by: —Tommy 9281 Mechnochair negwt.jpg ( Mechno-chair ) 14:33, February 10, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Yaddle's Jedi Master, to change things up a bit.

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1) Of Yaddle on the Master the article from me the vote deserves. Skippy Farlstendoiro 16:28, February 11, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Agree with Skippy, I do.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 23:39, February 11, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3)  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  01:52, February 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4)  Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 17:29, February 21, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) Toprawa and Ralltiir 23:13, February 25, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Objections Farlstendoiro Skippy writes
 * 2) * Suggestion: Bio, 1st paragraph says "lived nearly 300 years prior to the battle of Yavin"; 2nd paragraph says "more than 200 years before the Clone Wars. " I'd rather not see two different time frames in a row; could you reword any of these? (Eg., replace "Clone Wars" with "battle of Yavin").
 * 3) **Addressed.
 * 4) * Koban Gorge must be linked, and created &mdash; maybe even an article on the battle if there's enough information.
 * 5) **Just the gorge, not the battle. There's one on the battle now. —Tommy 9281 Mechnochair negwt.jpg ( Mechno-chair ) 17:06, February 21, 2010 (UTC)
 * 6) * From the quotes I assume the Jedi Council was familiar with Kut's exploits to the point of talking about him in some situation. Can this be added to "Legacy"? ("The Jedi Council openly debated on Kut's background when they considered to promote Yaddle, as Yoda believed Kut to have been corrupted and perhaps having corrupted his Padawan").
 * 7) **It wasn't really like that. They only spoke of him in regard to Yaddle. It was actually only Even Piell doing the speaking, and even he only made one brisk allusion to Kut's relationship with the dark side. They never suggest that Yaddle was corrupted, but simply that training was incomplete.
 * 8) *Article is nice this. Skippy Farlstendoiro 08:14, February 11, 2010 (UTC)
 * 9) **Thank you very much for the review, Skippy. Please advise if anything further is required. —Tommy 9281 Mechnochair negwt.jpg ( Mechno-chair ) 15:43, February 11, 2010 (UTC)
 * 10) In the body, you don't make it clear that he fell to the dark side when he saw Tulak, while you explicitly state this in the intro.  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  01:37, February 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 11) *Addressed. Thanks for the review, Chack. Please advise if anything further is required. —Tommy 9281 Mechnochair negwt.jpg ( Mechno-chair ) 01:45, February 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 12) The Grand Master
 * 13) * A small P&a section, perhaps, as it does take notable talent to become a Jedi Master? (Also, perhaps a mention of his yellow-bladed lightsaber?)
 * 14) **There really isn't enough information to create a new section. I did however include mention of his lightsaber in the P&T. —Tommy 9281 Mechnochair negwt.jpg ( Mechno-chair ) 17:06, February 21, 2010 (UTC)
 * 15) * Could you create an article for the battle in which he died?
 * 16) **Addressed.
 * 17) *And that's all. Good work. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 22:29, February 20, 2010 (UTC)
 * 18) **Thanks Jon. Please advise if anything further is required. —Tommy 9281 Mechnochair negwt.jpg ( Mechno-chair ) 17:06, February 21, 2010 (UTC)
 * 19) Toprawa:
 * 20) * POV here. Please reword/revise: "Though he and Yaddle fought courageously"
 * 21) **Addressed.
 * 22) * What is "immuration?" Neither Firefox's nor MS Word's spell check/dictionary seem to know either: "after more than a century of immuration"
 * 23) **"Immuration," derived from "immure," is the state of being enclosed within walls. I've changed to "incarceration" though to avoid any further confusion.
 * 24) * Same here. Unless a source literally says he was brave, please find a less-POV term, phrasing: "Kut was a brave Jedi Master"
 * 25) **Addressed.
 * 26) * Please at least create a redlink for the memorial bridge named in Kut's honor, and link appropriately in the article. You'll see from the bridge disambig page we have similar such articles.
 * 27) * The BTS explanation about the canonicity of Tales stories seems very anticlimactic in relation to Kut. You could probably add a sentence or two explaining which source first referenced the character outside of Tales. Toprawa and Ralltiir 21:31, February 25, 2010 (UTC)
 * 28) **Addressed. Thank you for the review, Toprawa. Please advise if anything further is required. —Tommy 9281 Mechnochair negwt.jpg ( Mechno-chair ) 23:06, February 25, 2010 (UTC)
 * 29) ***That's it. Good job. Toprawa and Ralltiir 23:13, February 25, 2010 (UTC)

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