Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Afsheen Makati


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Afsheen Makati

 * Nominated by: Xicer9 [[Image:atgar.svg|20px]]( Combadge) 04:19, April 12, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: The Grand Admirals are back! (1,092 words)

(5 Inqs/0 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  23:40, April 14, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2)  CC7567  (talk) 05:09, April 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) Nice job. Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 23:29, April 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) Fantastic work.  Jonjedigrandmaster  Jedi symbol.svg ( We seed the stars ) 18:38, April 18, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) Interesting article. Cylka  -talk- 12:47, April 19, 2010 (UTC)

Object Comments
 * 1) Place of death is missing in the infobox.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 17:59, April 12, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) *As stated in the Bts, the circumstances of Makati's death are unknown. That includes where he died. Xicer9 [[Image:atgar.svg|20px]]( Combadge) 18:06, April 12, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) **Ah, sorry.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 18:20, April 12, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) One minor thing. In the intro, when you mention that he escaped the destruction of the second Death Star, can you just clarify that it was Makati and not Kadann who escaped, as the preceding sentence might confuse a reader unfamiliar with the topic. Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 19:39, April 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) *Clarified, and thanks for the review. Xicer9 [[Image:atgar.svg|20px]]( Combadge) 21:04, April 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * A brief mention that Azrakel eventually tracked down and killed the real Kadann wouldn't go amiss. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 16:04, April 13, 2010 (UTC)
 * Added. Thanks for the heads up. Xicer9 [[Image:atgar.svg|20px]]( Combadge) 17:15, April 13, 2010 (UTC)