Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Unidentified stormtrooper (Victim of a male Dark Jedi)


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Unidentified stormtrooper (Victim of a male Dark Jedi)

 * Nominated by: &mdash; 23:22, January 30, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Ouch.

(4 ECs/1 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1) Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 23:54, January 30, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 14:26, February 2, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) Supreme Emperor (talk) 17:31, February 14, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) Menkooroo (talk) 18:07, February 14, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  22:51, February 16, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * Might be a sofixit, but please fix the categories. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 23:23, January 30, 2013 (UTC)
 * Can you establish how he ended the soldier's life? "Lightsaber" isn't currently mentioned. Menkooroo (talk) 05:49, February 11, 2013 (UTC)
 * Done.&mdash; 05:59, February 11, 2013 (UTC)
 * A couple more: Category:Unidentified military personnel and Category:Unidentified individuals are both used, which isn't necessary, since one is a parent category of the other. Actually, I think Category:Unidentified Imperial personnel would be a better choice than either.
 * Does the JATM say for sure that this stormtrooper serves the Galactic Empire? If so, I think the death field of the infobox could say something like "At some point during the Galactic Empire's reign" or something. I don't think it should be left blank. Menkooroo (talk) 14:12, February 13, 2013 (UTC)
 * Both taken care of.&mdash; 06:28, February 14, 2013 (UTC)

Supreme Emperor
 * Could you reword the first sentence a bit? It almost sounds like it is talking about stormtroopers in general, rather than this particular one. Thanks, Supreme Emperor (talk) 02:46, February 14, 2013 (UTC)
 * Done.&mdash; 06:28, February 14, 2013 (UTC)

Comments
 * For WP:AMB.&mdash; 05:40, January 31, 2013 (UTC)
 * Are not all stormtroopers part of the Stormtrooper Corps? Perhaps that should be added? 501st  dogma ( talk ) 14:26, February 2, 2013 (UTC)
 * I have absolutely no idea.&mdash; 01:04, February 3, 2013 (UTC)
 * Does the source explicitly say the trooper died? If not, that's OR.  Stake black   msg 14:18, February 3, 2013 (UTC)
 * The caption for the image says this: "A Dark Jedi gives in to his anger, cutting down a subordinate."&mdash; 17:22, February 3, 2013 (UTC)
 * Human or Humanoid? Rokkur Shen (talk) 08:15, February 16, 2013 (UTC)
 * The only thing to say is that the trooper was humanoid. Not all stormies were human.&mdash; 03:23, February 17, 2013 (UTC)