Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Devidia Vennsiol's father


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Devidia Vennsiol's father

 * Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 20:45, August 10, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Reminds me of Veruca Salt's father

(4 ECs/0 Users/4 Total)
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 * 1) Veruca Salt went to military school?  Commander Code-8  You lost the game! 22:55, August 10, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  14:20, August 12, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) It's all the dad's fault.  501st  dogma ( talk ) 00:27, August 19, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) Gal-icon.jpg  OLIOSTER   (talk) 19:55, September 1, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * This article also needs a reference to the era in the body. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  02:04, August 12, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) * The military school article makes it sound like she did the majority of her charming of men there, while this article says that she started before, which I guess would be before she was a teenager? This seems kind of odd to me. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  02:08, August 12, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) ** Oops, I misread the school article, but the part about here being sent to military school when she became a teenager makes the charming of men still seem rather odd. Is there any explanation in the source? -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  02:10, August 12, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) ***Changed it to boys which what the article says and just as a teenager not as soon as she became one. Slightly less creepy now? :P Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:37, August 12, 2013 (UTC)
 * 6) ****Yeah, much better.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  14:20, August 12, 2013 (UTC)

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