Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Huloon (species)


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Huloon (species)

 * Nominated by: MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg(Whatever) 02:22, August 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: First species article. I've recently discovered a hoard of stuff I can CAN and GAN from my numerous sources.

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Support
 * 1)  Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:57, August 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Come sail away in my beautiful Huloon... ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 01:42, August 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Sources list was missing. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 18:44, September 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  04:21, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Object Comments
 * 1) Bob
 * 2) * Perhaps note in the BTS that the OS doesn't say when the Hutts depopulated the planet, so people like me won't wonder why you haven't included incidental info from the Atlas. :) ~ Savage BOB sig.png
 * 3) **I think I fixed it, though I'm not sure what "OS" stands for. MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg(Whatever) 21:02, August 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) *** OS = "original source". :) By the way, you need to mention that their homeworld was Huloon in the article body. And do we know whether or not they are sentient? If so, please mention this too, in both the infobox (under "designation") and the article body. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 17:32, August 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) Exiled Jedi
 * 6) * You mention on the Huloon planet page that they were massacred, please state that here.
 * 7) * Please mention that their homeworld was in Hutt Space.
 * 8) * Please make it clear that the Hutts removed them from their homeworld.
 * 9) * You should mention the pockets of Huloons that lived on worlds outside their homeworld.
 * 10) * It would also be a good idea to say when the planet was discovered by the greater galaxy because the Hutts couldn't enslaved them before that date. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  22:13, September 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) **Just one point on that last one, EJ: Hutt Space had indeed formed before Hutt Space was known to the wider galaxy, so it's possible they were discovered before their general region was discovered by the non-Hutt galaxy. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 17:04, September 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * 12) ***Thanks for the info, SavageBob. I guess the information on when the planet was discovered isn't needed then, since you can't say if the species was there or not.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  17:15, September 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * 13) ****I believe I've addressed all these. MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg(Whatever) 12:48, September 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 14) * Ummm... shouldn't there be a sources section? -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  11:27, September 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * 15) **Someone added it (I'm too lazy to figure out who). I didn't realize one was needed if the entire article was referenced. My bad. :P Anyway, it's fixed.  MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg(Whatever) 12:51, September 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 16) ***Just for the record, that was NaruHina who added the sources section. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:57, September 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 17) ****Ah, well thank you, Naru. :) MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg(Whatever) 15:47, September 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 18) *****You don't get to say "thank you." You don't even ca-ha-harrre. T.T NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 23:24, September 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 19) ******:( MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg(Whatever) 12:52, September 13, 2011 (UTC)