Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Coruscant Security Force Senior Command


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Coruscant Security Force Senior Command

 * Nominated by: Coruscantfan (Talk) 03:53, July 18, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Senior? As opposed to... Junior Command?

(3 ECs/3 Users/6 Total)
Support
 * 1) 501st  dogma ( talk ) 14:08, July 18, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  15:46, August 1, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) &mdash;  16:47, August 1, 2012 (UTC)
 * 4) Tinwe (comlink) 07:52, August 6, 2012 (UTC)
 * 5) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 20:01, August 6, 2012 (UTC)
 * 6) Menkooroo (talk) 04:26, August 7, 2012 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * You're going to need to mention the dates in the body of the article. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  02:41, July 21, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) **Added. Coruscantfan (Talk) 05:48, July 25, 2012 (UTC)
 * 4) * "They were located at the CSF Headquarters in Galactic City on the planet Coruscant." is currently not sourced. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  02:57, July 28, 2012 (UTC)
 * 5) **At some point I created two paragraphs and must have forgotten to add the source. Done. Coruscantfan (Talk) 14:24, July 28, 2012 (UTC)
 * 6) Rubedo
 * 7) * I hardly think it's proper to say this position "replaced" a rank that was held by the leader of the organization 3,000 years before this group was mentioned. Or even that they were "replaced" by Moff twenty years later. That implies direct succession, of which there is no evidence. Succession boxes are not infoboxes and the information therein does not need shoehorning. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 21:17, August 5, 2012 (UTC)
 * 8) **Makes sense I suppose, I've removed the box. Coruscantfan (Talk) 19:23, August 6, 2012 (UTC)
 * 9) ***No, no, the box was fine. It was the prose that was the issue. Succession boxes reflect what we know, hence the use of "Eventually" when we don't know direct succession. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 19:28, August 6, 2012 (UTC)
 * 10) ****But I had "eventually" in there?! :P Ok, I'll put it back... Coruscantfan (Talk) 19:39, August 6, 2012 (UTC)
 * 11) *****I made sure to add "eventually" in the paragraph as well. Coruscantfan (Talk) 19:44, August 6, 2012 (UTC)
 * 12) ******I meant say "eventually" in the succession box, but nothing in the prose. XD NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 20:01, August 6, 2012 (UTC)


 * 1) The succession box should use the |before-years and |after-years parameters instead of putting the dates in the |before and |after parameters. See here for an example. Menkooroo (talk) 22:03, August 6, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) *Done. Coruscantfan (Talk) 04:18, August 7, 2012 (UTC)

Comments
 * You had the wrong template up, but I fixed it. When nominating CAs, use CAnom, not CA.  Also, there are some ref tag errors on the page.  Trak Nar  Ramble on 06:41, July 26, 2012 (UTC)
 * Oh, whoops, thanks for the fix. I also got the ref tag issue fixed. Coruscantfan (Talk) 22:58, July 27, 2012 (UTC)