Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Kastays


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Kastays

 * Nominated by: Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 08:36, 5 June 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Project: DarkStryder

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1) The Plaque looks like a pie. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 22:44, 6 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) Fair enough. Good work. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jujiggum ) 22:50, 6 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 3)  Grunny  ( Talk ) 08:33, 7 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) Nice job. Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 22:41, 7 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) Good to go.  CC7567  (talk) 00:15, 8 June 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Soresu
 * 2) * Perhaps the cause of the fall of the Aaris could be made more clear. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 08:47, 5 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) **Clarified, hopefully. - Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 09:56, 5 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) The Grand Master
 * 5) * In the quotes, I believe that by "translation notes", you mean that the quotes were from Kastays's notes, which were translated by the Imperial scientist. This, however, is rather unclear, and should be changed: maybe to something like "From Kastays's notes, translated by..."
 * 6) **Changed.
 * 7) * "The city" becomes rather repetitive in the intro. I'd replace at least one.
 * 8) **Changed one.
 * 9) * "A scholar of some importance..." Well, was he important or wasn't he? What made him so? This is kind of vague.
 * 10) **It's never mentioned. He was a scholar, he was important enough to have a tower in the main governmental complex, but beyond this, nothing else is known. - Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 21:41, 6 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 11) * Jonjedigrandmaster ( Jujiggum ) 18:01, 5 June 2009 (UTC)

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