Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Battle of Kirrek (Unification Wars)


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Battle of Kirrek (Unification Wars)

 * Nominated by:  IFYLOFD  ( You will pay the price for your lack of vision! ) 04:47, 25 August 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: WP:TOTJ.

(4 ACs/1 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Graestan ( Talk ) 16:49, 26 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 10:18, September 8, 2009 (UTC)
 * 3)  Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 23:10, September 9, 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) Please watch your tenses; writing isn't very coherent when it's switching rapidly between present and future tense.  CC7567  (talk) 07:16, September 10, 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) The final version looks very good. Toprawa and Ralltiir 19:15, October 12, 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Soresu
 * 2) * "to unify the seven worlds of the Koros system" occurs in two sentences consecutively. Please vary it up.
 * 3) **Addressed.
 * 4) * Is the quote in the aftermath section meant to be "your battle meditation"? SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 01:41, 27 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) **Yes.  IFYLOFD  ( You will pay the price for your lack of vision! ) 15:18, September 7, 2009 (UTC)
 * 6) Toprawa:
 * 7) * I notice immediately that there is a discrepancy between this article and the Teta article (currently an FA) over what year she becomes Empress. Considering both of these articles will be status articles, this isn't a good thing. Please figure this out and get these two articles on the same page. Toprawa and Ralltiir 00:08, September 25, 2009 (UTC)
 * 8) **I've checked the Teta article, and the two are now on the same page.  IFYLOFD  ( You will pay the price for your lack of vision! ) 23:28, October 3, 2009 (UTC)

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