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Coruscant abandoned tower

 * Nominated by:  Vitus Infinitus  Talk 04:43, February 2, 2018 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Recently updating articles related to the Sith, saw this in an episode guide and just had a good feeling about it!

Support

 * 1) &mdash; Tommuskq  Imperial Emblem.svg ( TAKE A SEAT ) 20:47, February 4, 2018 (UTC)
 * 2) *Thanks!-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 20:50, February 4, 2018 (UTC)
 * 3)  QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 16:15, March 15, 2018 (UTC)

Tommy

 * I think there should be a little expansion on Dooku's arrival in AotC, with an earlier link to the solar sailer and the hangar bay. &mdash; Tommuskq  Imperial Emblem.svg ( TAKE A SEAT ) 19:08, February 4, 2018 (UTC)
 * How is it now?-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 19:50, February 4, 2018 (UTC)
 * Great.&mdash; Tommuskq  Imperial Emblem.svg ( TAKE A SEAT ) 20:01, February 4, 2018 (UTC)
 * Hangar is incorrectly spelled as "hanger", which is something you put clothes on (I've misspelled this myself many times). &mdash; Tommuskq  Imperial Emblem.svg ( TAKE A SEAT ) 19:08, February 4, 2018 (UTC)
 * Fixed!-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 19:50, February 4, 2018 (UTC)
 * Perhaps a short sentence at the end explaining that Vader succeeded in killing Jocasta Nu. &mdash; Tommuskq  Imperial Emblem.svg ( TAKE A SEAT ) 19:08, February 4, 2018 (UTC)
 * Expanded upon-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 19:50, February 4, 2018 (UTC)
 * Very good.&mdash; Tommuskq  Imperial Emblem.svg ( TAKE A SEAT ) 20:01, February 4, 2018 (UTC)
 * I'd like you to take a look at the links. Some more need to be added, such as hangar, and Jedi Purge is linked more than once in the history section. I fear this may be an issue with other links. &mdash; Tommuskq  Imperial Emblem.svg ( TAKE A SEAT ) 20:01, February 4, 2018 (UTC)
 * Fixed all I could find-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 20:16, February 4, 2018 (UTC)
 * Perfect.&mdash; Tommuskq  Imperial Emblem.svg ( TAKE A SEAT ) 20:45, February 4, 2018 (UTC)
 * You can't have quotes in the main article text. Either add a new subheading to accommodate it or more it so it's under a pre-existing one. &mdash; Tommuskq  Imperial Emblem.svg ( TAKE A SEAT ) 20:01, February 4, 2018 (UTC)
 * Fixed-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 20:16, February 4, 2018 (UTC)
 * I feel an imagecat in the appearances would be beneficial. &mdash; Tommuskq  Imperial Emblem.svg ( TAKE A SEAT ) 20:03, February 4, 2018 (UTC)
 * Created and added-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 20:31, February 4, 2018 (UTC)
 * Fantastic.&mdash; Tommuskq  Imperial Emblem.svg ( TAKE A SEAT ) 20:45, February 4, 2018 (UTC)
 * Perhaps a bit saying about the building's legends name in BTS? &mdash; Tommuskq  Imperial Emblem.svg ( TAKE A SEAT ) 11:33, February 11, 2018 (UTC)
 * Added-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 18:04, February 11, 2018 (UTC)
 * Date for Plagueis?&mdash; Tommy-Macaroni  Imperial Emblem.svg ( TAKE A SEAT ) 18:07, February 11, 2018 (UTC)
 * Done-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 18:19, February 11, 2018 (UTC)
 * Great, good work!&mdash; Tommy-Macaroni  Imperial Emblem.svg ( TAKE A SEAT ) 18:50, February 11, 2018 (UTC)

QGJ

 * Does "The" in "The Grand Inquisitor" needs to be capitalized in the intro?
 * Fixed!-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 21:44, March 14, 2018 (UTC)
 * In the year 22 BBY, following a duel between Count Dooku, leader of the Confederacy of Independent Systems, and the Jedi in a hangar on Geonosis I think it would be a good idea to specify which Jedi we are talking about here.
 * Added-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 21:44, March 14, 2018 (UTC)
 * Sidious was pleased at the news, as he had achieved another milestone in his plan to destroy the Jedi Order and rule the galaxy, soon stating that everything was going according to plan. Not sure if "soon" is needed here. Sounds weird to me, at least. QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 16:28, March 14, 2018 (UTC)
 * Fixed!-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 21:44, March 14, 2018 (UTC)

Imperators abandoned tower? Coruscant abandoned Imperators?

 * Please get the missing backup links.
 * Done-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 18:22, April 6, 2018 (UTC)
 * You should provide archival dates for the two instances of SWArchive, since the automatically generated backup links aren't working.
 * Could you help me out with this particular issue? I can't seem to correctly make it to display the archive link, I added the full archive link as a placeholder for now-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 15:38, March 25, 2018 (UTC)
 * What you should do is take the original, obsolete link and stick in here. Then browse through the archived versions of the page until you find one that works, copy the archival date from the resulting URL (you'll be looking for the YYYYMMDDHHMMSS part of the URL) and paste it into the archivedate field of the SWArchive template. It's exactly the same as how the Databank template works in the Sources section of this article.  Imperators II (Talk) 15:48, March 25, 2018 (UTC)
 * Fixed!-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 16:47, March 25, 2018 (UTC)
 * Category:Infoboxes with missing parameters.
 * Doesn't show up anymore-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 16:48, March 25, 2018 (UTC)
 * Nevermind, it's showing again. Could this also be with one of the cite templates?-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 16:51, March 25, 2018 (UTC)
 * No. Try reloading the infobox, i.e., going to the source page for the relevant infobox template and copying the template code to this article anew.  Imperators II (Talk) 17:14, March 25, 2018 (UTC)
 * Tried that, still shows up. I may be doing something wrong-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 23:06, March 25, 2018 (UTC)
 * See what I did there.  Imperators II (Talk) 08:44, March 26, 2018 (UTC)
 * Got it :)-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 16:42, April 6, 2018 (UTC)
 * Would it be possible for you to get audio files for the quotes? You could ask Ayrehead for help with the film quotes, at least.
 * I don't know how to get those audio files. I'll ask Ayrehead-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 14:46, March 25, 2018 (UTC)
 * Audio files have been uploaded-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 12:42, April 5, 2018 (UTC)
 * Images should be below quotes.
 * Fixed-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 14:46, March 25, 2018 (UTC)
 * Could you break up the longer paragraphs in "Breaking the Jedi Order" and "Imperial Era" into smaller ones? Remember articles have to be formatted for the Oasis skin now, and long paragraphs look really intimidating and unappealing to the reader in Oasis.
 * Fixed-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 14:46, March 25, 2018 (UTC)
 * Please remove all duplicate links.
 * Done!-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 23:06, March 25, 2018 (UTC)
 * Seven more links remaining.  Imperators II (Talk) 06:49, April 7, 2018 (UTC)
 * How can I find them? I turned on the gadget for it but it doesn't highlight the duplicates-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 02:56, April 8, 2018 (UTC)
 * Maybe it only works in Monobook? I can just tell the links to look for: "Clone Wars" in intro, "Works," "Coruscant," and "Galactic Empire" in "Bringing good news," "Works" in "Breaking the Jedi Order," and "19 BBY" and "Galactic Empire" in "Imperial Era."  Imperators II (Talk) 07:00, April 8, 2018 (UTC)
 * Should be all of them-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 17:09, April 8, 2018 (UTC)
 * Okay, the BTS should be rewritten:
 * The first thing you should mention is that the tower was created for Ep II.
 * Then you should mention when it was first given its canonical name.
 * And only then you should describe the tower's first Legends appearance and history of naming.
 * Done all-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 16:42, April 6, 2018 (UTC)
 * You're using the tower's full name in every BTS sentence, which is extremely redundant. Please reword.  Imperators II (Talk) 07:01, April 7, 2018 (UTC)
 * Fixed-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 02:56, April 8, 2018 (UTC)
 * Context for Episode II, and there's a missing comma in that sentence.  Imperators II (Talk) 07:01, April 7, 2018 (UTC)
 * Done-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 02:56, April 8, 2018 (UTC)
 * Context for TCW.  Imperators II (Talk) 07:01, April 7, 2018 (UTC)
 * Added-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 02:56, April 8, 2018 (UTC)
 * I fail to see how the tower's comic book debut is notable enough for a BTS mention.  Imperators II (Talk) 07:01, April 7, 2018 (UTC)
 * RIP, removed-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 02:56, April 8, 2018 (UTC)
 * First sentence says the tower first appeared in the film, which directly contradicts the first sentence of the second paragraph saying it first appeared in the novelization. Please revise.  Imperators II (Talk) 07:01, April 7, 2018 (UTC)
 * Fixed-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 02:56, April 8, 2018 (UTC)
 * Now look at that sentence talking about the novel. Why does it end with a comma? Why do you use the full title of the film twice in such proximity?  Imperators II (Talk) 06:57, April 8, 2018 (UTC)
 * Fixed-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 16:39, April 8, 2018 (UTC)
 * For the "Sacrifice" part, you shouldn't lead with the fact that the tower appeared in yet another source&mdash;that's not notable. Start with the fact that the tower was first identified in the guide for the episode, for which you can then provide the necessary context.  Imperators II (Talk) 07:01, April 7, 2018 (UTC)
 * I don't know how exactly I can reword this. Do you mean to that I should state that it was identified in the Sacrifice guide before I mention that it appeared in the episode?-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 02:56, April 8, 2018 (UTC)
 * Yes. And you don't even need to mention it actually appeared in the episode.  Imperators II (Talk) 06:57, April 8, 2018 (UTC)
 * Reworded. I still mentioned that it appeared in Sacrifice but if you think it's best to remove the mention just let me know-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 20:44, April 12, 2018 (UTC)
 * For the last sentence, the wording "The Coruscant abandoned tower also appeared in [...]" is ineffective and misleading about the fact's notability&mdash;if you look at the Legends page, the building appeared in a whole bunch of other sources other than the film and the novelization, but we're not going to list them all, are we? You should start off with the critical information, which is that the building was provided it's formal name in the book.  Imperators II (Talk) 07:01, April 7, 2018 (UTC)
 * Reworded-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 02:56, April 8, 2018 (UTC)
 * Again, that sentence is now missing a comma.  Imperators II (Talk) 06:57, April 8, 2018 (UTC)
 * Think I fixed it-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 20:44, April 12, 2018 (UTC)
 * Replace all instances of "during or prior" or any variations thereof with "by [date]".
 * Should be all of them now-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 16:42, April 6, 2018 (UTC)
 * Infobox remaining.  Imperators II (Talk) 06:49, April 7, 2018 (UTC)
 * Ah, fixed-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 02:56, April 8, 2018 (UTC)
 * Also in the first ref.  Imperators II (Talk) 06:57, April 8, 2018 (UTC)
 * Fixed-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 16:39, April 8, 2018 (UTC)
 * Please clean up the quotes.
 * Make sure there are no spelling or grammar mistakes, and no extra spacing and such.
 * Done-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 23:06, March 25, 2018 (UTC)
 * Are you sure? I'm still seeing an extra whitespace. "I have good news for you my lord." &mdash; shouldn't there be a comma here?  Imperators II (Talk) 06:52, April 7, 2018 (UTC)
 * Okay, now done-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 02:56, April 8, 2018 (UTC)
 * You still missed the whitespace.  Imperators II (Talk) 06:57, April 8, 2018 (UTC)
 * Write the quote attributions in a consistent manner, providing full names for the speakers in all instances.
 * Fixed-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 23:06, March 25, 2018 (UTC)
 * For the intro quote, only list Sidious in attribution, as it's evident from the quote he's speaking to Tyranus.  Imperators II (Talk) 06:52, April 7, 2018 (UTC)
 * Done-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 02:56, April 8, 2018 (UTC)
 * For the first body quote, it should be "Tyranus and Sidious," not "Tyranus to Sidious."  Imperators II (Talk) 06:52, April 7, 2018 (UTC)
 * Done-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 02:56, April 8, 2018 (UTC)
 * Kraken's rank is unnecessary in attribution.  Imperators II (Talk) 06:52, April 7, 2018 (UTC)
 * Removed and added rank to body-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 02:56, April 8, 2018 (UTC)
 * Wherever possible, try to make do with just what the quotes say, instead of adding context in attribution. For example, in the "Breaking the Jedi Order" quote just noting the speakers is sufficient.
 * Fixed!-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 23:06, March 25, 2018 (UTC)
 * Why isn't FacebookCite used for reference 20?  Imperators II (Talk) 09:31, March 25, 2018 (UTC)
 * Did not know about that, added-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 14:46, March 25, 2018 (UTC)
 * Note that punctuation goes inside double quotes.  Imperators II (Talk) 06:49, April 7, 2018 (UTC)
 * Got it-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 02:56, April 8, 2018 (UTC)
 * You missed one.  Imperators II (Talk) 06:57, April 8, 2018 (UTC)
 * In ref 1, please provide a source for Dooku arriving at the tower after the Battle of Geonosis.  Imperators II (Talk) 06:57, April 8, 2018 (UTC)
 * Fixed-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 16:39, April 8, 2018 (UTC)
 * And reword the reference so that it's not using "we."  Imperators II (Talk) 06:57, April 8, 2018 (UTC)
 * Done-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 16:39, April 8, 2018 (UTC)
 * "Breaking the Jedi Order" and "Imperial Era" could use more images.  Imperators II (Talk) 21:25, April 13, 2018 (UTC)
 * Added images-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 22:22, April 13, 2018 (UTC)
 * Is "derilect" in Sources your typo or the listed source's?  Imperators II (Talk) 21:25, April 13, 2018 (UTC)
 * That wasn't my addition, I'm assuming it's a typo-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 22:15, April 13, 2018 (UTC)