Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Yavid


 * ''The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a featured article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.

(5 Inqs/4 Users/9 Total)
Support
 * 1) Thefourdotelipsis 23:06, 22 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) --  AdmirableAckbar  [Talk] 12:08, 24 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) Ozzel 04:45, 31 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) Green Tentacle (Talk) 23:41, 31 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 5) Master Aban Fiolli (Alpheridies University ComNet) [[Image:NewRepublic.png|20px]] 23:27, 1 November 2007 (UTC)
 * 6)  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  16:45, 4 November 2007 (UTC)
 * 7) Napoleon complex. Heh. &mdash;Graestan ( This party's over ) 22:40, 9 November 2007 (UTC)
 * Eh, the little bastard. Greyman ( Paratus ) 22:52, 9 November 2007 (UTC)
 * 1) Grr. Quit edit conflicting me and just queueueue the damn thing! --  Darth Culator  (Talk) 22:43, 9 November 2007 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) I'm not an expert, but I'd say bloodthirsty is POV. There's also a bit of repetition in the intro/main body: "carving out a slice" and "carve out a piece," one of which could be rephrased. "...actually a cell that allowed powered ships" -- I might be reading this wrong, but could that be clarified a little. Also, perhaps a minor explanation of who Teek is? (I know I'm rather biased). Other than those few minor things, I enjoyed reading it. :) --  AdmirableAckbar  [Talk] 15:55, 23 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) *Fixerised. Thefourdotelipsis 23:52, 23 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) Seems like there are a few repetitions of specific words and phrases between the intro and bio (and, specifically with "short in stature," the P&T as well). Might want to reword a little to keep each section fresh. -- Ozzel 04:45, 31 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) In the intro, it is mentioned that he is a general, and shortly thereafter it is mentioned that he became a general. Redundant. &mdash;Graestan ( This party's over ) 17:43, 9 November 2007 (UTC)

Comments

'''Approved by Inquisitorius 23:25, 9 November 2007 (UTC)
 * And on... Thefourdotelipsis 23:06, 22 October 2007 (UTC)