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Re:hey
Yes, good. Did you get my previous message explaining that im coming back to the project to head it again, with you leading as well? DC 23:08, 14 July 2008 (UTC)

Thank you
Hey, thanks for the recognition. I hope everything is well with you. On another note, I have been watching your progress around here with interest, and I may actually have a need for your talents/services in the foreseeable future. When the time presents itself accordingly, I will provide you with further details. Until then, keep up the good work. —Tommy9281  ( Peace is a lie ) 19:31, 18 July 2008 (UTC)

stuck ( canon issuses) mining driods
The mining droids on peragus are seemingly simple modles without much of an incentive to attack miners, so what i said was that they were made to belive that organics and unahtorized droids (such as t3 and the miners personal droids not linked to the central computer) were a mining material. The driods were also told that the head and heart were more valuable. last thing is that they were also told that the organics/ other driods were crosswired to think that the mining droids were mineable, so the situation would be to mine or be mined. oh and i also made the mining laser a continuos beam wepon that cuts and drills slowly more than blasts, so its a litttle more grissly. is all this canonical?HK-47 rebuilt 20:50, 12 August 2008 (UTC)

Re:Maladi
Yes...we're almost done with Maladi (thank god). Graestan is probably going to copyedit and source the infobox soon, and all that remains after that is writing a P&T and P&A, and expanding a couple more sentences, especially in the section where the Sith capture Cade. I'd probably say its about 80% done right now, and once those tasks are finished, it should be ready to nominate for FA. Cheers. DC 18:06, 13 August 2008 (UTC)
 * Never mind that. Cade's capture section and the P&T are just about done. All that remains is the P&A, a little bit on the BTS, and a bit more sourcing. If you write a P&A, or at least one of those three, that would everything so much easier. Cheers. DC 20:55, 13 August 2008 (UTC)

RE:Hey!
Thanks, will do. Also I left comments on Kreia's talk page in regards to the name of the article, you might want to have a look if you haven't already. Glad you like my page, cheers. Jayce Carver 18:55, 27 October 2008 (UTC)

Kreia
It appears you're working on the Kreia article and, as I am too, I was wondering if you'd be interested on working on it collaboratively? To me it just seems foolish working on the same thing with the same goals in two separate projects. -- Darth tom (talk)  18:57, 4 November 2008 (UTC)
 * If you're going to change the name, put it through a CT first. It's too big a decision for one user to make. Graestan ( Talk ) 00:53, 5 November 2008 (UTC)


 * Anything in particular you'd like me to start work on? And shall I just edit the sub page? -- Darth tom (talk)  19:20, 5 November 2008 (UTC)

Re: Unprotect
Hey, Kasra :) I've went ahead and unprotected your user talk page as you requested. Anything else I can do for you, let me know. Cheers, Greyman ( Talk ) 20:01, 7 November 2008 (UTC)

Bastila vs Revan image
I uploaded the file you requested, I hope I'm not too late.Image:Bastila_vs_Revan.jpg MIS Tau 1 17:24, 12 December 2008 (UTC)

WP:KOTOR Meeting
Hello Jedi Kasra. Please note that there will be a project meeting for WP:KOTOR at 0:00 UTC (approx. 7:00pm Eastern Time) Saturday, 31 January, 2009. Please click here for further details, including agenda. Cheers  Madclaw Shyriiwook! 00:26, 10 January 2009 (UTC)
 * I'm pretty sure Goodwood will make a summary of what was discussed and give it a place on the project page. Cheers dude :)  Madclaw Shyriiwook! 15:43, 12 January 2009 (UTC)

Darth Malak GAN
Hey Jedi Krasa. I just wanted to let you know that I went through and did some copy-editing of punctuation and other bits and pieces. About the quotes, I agree with you, and since there seems to be some disagreement about including partial quotes in prose, I struck-out my objection. It may be worth your while to take a look at this discussion regarding quotes, if only to be aware of current sentiment. If you would like any help with the article, let me know and I'll be happy to do what I can. Cylka  -talk- 08:01, 13 January 2009 (UTC)

Hey Kasra. I did some more copy-editing of Malak and have removed most of the OR and POV issues. I removed the Yuthura Ban quote under the Dark Lord of the Sith section since the quote alone, without any text just doesn't look right. I removed the mention of Bastila in the Search for the Star Forge sub-section since she would need context at that point, and introducing her at that point wouldn't work very well. I also wanted to leave you a list of specific items that need some more work. The article is getting pretty close to having the objections taken care of. Just a bit more work is needed. Cylka  -talk- 01:46, 15 February 2009 (UTC)
 * Karath needs a bit more context. You especially need to explain how it was Malak who gave him this final test of allegiance.
 * Bastila needs a bit more context when she is first introduced in the Betraying the Master sub-section. Same goes for the Leviathan.
 * The Revelation on the Leviathan subsection needs to have more detail. Right now it barely skims over the detail, and a reader unfamiliar with the story would be lost.
 * Many of the paragraphs that come from the Knights of the Old Republic Campaign Guide need to be rewritten into your own words. They are bordering on copyright infringement. This is especially true in the P&T.
 * Make sure that the semi-colon is being used correctly.
 * See if you can merge some of the paragraphs together some more. there are many small paragraphs, and it would be better to get rid of them.
 * In the P&A, see if you can pipelink his Force powers a bit more. As it stands, it reads a bit like game mechanics.
 * Yo need to look through John Jackson Miller's KotOR blog to check his notes to see if he says anything more about Malak in his trivia section and notes.
 * The Bts really needs to have longer paragraphs. It reads like a trivia section too much.

Re: Visas Marr
Hey Krasa. I'm not exactly sure what you mean by working on her article. I was planning on taking her to FA soon, I just wanted to wait until my FAN for Telos IV went through first. I'm still new at the FA/GA nominations and I don't want to put up too many articles up at once. But if you see anything that would help improve the article, I would most certainly appreciate the help. Thanks. Cylka  -talk- 23:47, 21 January 2009 (UTC)

Vacae
Hey Kasra,

You may not be aware, but that particular user has been recently granted a permanent Wookieepedia vacation. You may want to direct your inquiries elswhere in light of that. Perhaps Lady Cylka, who has since assumed authority of the unnamed's current endeavors. Hope this helps. —Tommy9281 ( Peace is a lie ) 16:52, 26 January 2009 (UTC)

KotOR Project
Hey Krasa. If you want to, go ahead. My plan had been to wait until the meeting to bring up the current situation of the Project, but I imagine that that same little birdie who talked to you would like to move things along a bit more quickly than I have been. Either way, I know that you can't make the meeting, but logs and minutes will be posted afterwards. Thanks. Cylka  <span style="font-family: times, cursive; font-size: 13px"><font color=#00A693>-talk- 18:33, 26 January 2009 (UTC) Edit: Reading the above post, I may have been wrong about the birdie ;-)
 * It's good to hear that you are working on all of those articles. I too believe in this project and I hope to kick-start it again. I'm currently working on compiling lists of articles that fall under our project and I'm planning to overhaul the project's page. As to Visas, the reason the was added was because of a few things that I included that haven't been written anywhere else, such as: the Exile doesn't have to regret hurting her, nor does she have to learn Force-sight; the Exile doesn't have to give Visas permission to visit her meditation chambers on the Ravager; the Exile doesn't have to ask for Nihilus's mask; the Exile doesn't have to listen to Kreia's predictions. <span style="font-variant: small-caps; font-family: times, cursive; font-size: 16px"><font color=#008080>Cylka  <span style="font-family: times, cursive; font-size: 13px"><font color=#00A693>-talk- 21:17, 27 January 2009 (UTC)

Re: Atris and other projects
Hey Kasra. I've noticed that you've been editing the articles and I'm looking forward to checking them out this week. I'm a bit bogged down at the moment since we have Force cage under review by the Inqs and there has been a bit of a snag with it, but I should be able to look at your changes in a couple of days, and thank you for those quotes for Visas. I also wanted to tell you that I didn't mean to offend you by taking out the Project editor from your name. I'm not sure if you read the meeting logs, or maybe the discussion didn't come across all that clearly. We talked about the fact that since the project is in a bit of an organizational phase, we would discuss our roles in the project at the next meeting, once everything had settled down and we all had taken the time to think about what we wanted to do. So, it wasn't meant as anything personal at all, and I hope that you didn't take it that way. Also, just so you won't be surprised, I expect to be taking most of the names off of our members list by the end of the week. I left messages with all of the inactive members asking them to contact me as to whether they want to continue with the project. Keep up the hard work you've been putting in so far! <span style="font-variant: small-caps; font-family: times, cursive; font-size: 16px"><font color=#008080>Cylka  <span style="font-family: times, cursive; font-size: 13px"><font color=#00A693>-talk- 08:56, 3 February 2009 (UTC)
 * All the work you're doing is great. I believe some of the other members have left their opinion about Malak's quote. I'm also working on a hardcore copy-edit of his article based on the objections and from talking to the other AC members. I had to remove some of the images, since there were just way too many. Once I'm done with the copy-edit, I'll let you know and hopefully the GAN will start moving again. <span style="font-variant: small-caps; font-family: times, cursive; font-size: 16px"><font color=#008080>Cylka  <span style="font-family: times, cursive; font-size: 13px"><font color=#00A693>-talk- 05:53, 12 February 2009 (UTC)

Re:Form VII

 * Thanks for the info. I've updated the article appropriately. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 23:42, 5 February 2009 (UTC)

Re: Atris
Kasra,

Thanks for letting me know. I do not have time at the moment to start the article beyond some browsing. I'm hoping that during the summer I will be able to get into the article with great detail and clean 'er up. Have a good one. &mdash; Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 01:23, 6 February 2009 (UTC)
 * Figured there was not reason to start a new heading for this. Here's the picture. As for the Darth Traya image you asked for from CSWE, I can't get a decent scan of that one. Probably because I don't own the book, it's from the library, so the page probably is just too messy with fingerprints, nicks, etc for a good scan. -  JMAS  Hey, it's me! 16:52, 12 February 2009 (UTC)

Lightsaber pics
Here ya go. -  JMAS  Hey, it's me! 22:14, 9 February 2009 (UTC)


 * How about Darth Desolous' saber? 72.221.71.121 21:10, 6 April 2009 (UTC)

Darth Malak GAN
Thanks for dealing with the objections so quickly. In regards to your questions left on my talk page: Hope that helps. - Cavalier One ( Squadron channel ) 08:29, 20 February 2009 (UTC)
 * About Karath, I did put down context on him and why he was at the meeting, but did it in the following paragraph.
 * The problem with this is that you introduce Karath before the explanation for his presence. Perhaps shifting the explanation paragraph to earlier in the section may help this?
 * I don't feel that it is necessary to put Camper's involvement in the exogorth project in the "Captured at Flashpoint" section.
 * There should be some mention of his involvement. I'm not talking about going into great detail, but if you mention that Jarael was punished for talking to him, it deserves some mention.
 * "The Star Forge" section already mentions the fact that Malak took Jedi from Dantooine and used them for the Star Forge.
 * Chronologically, however, this event happened a lot earlier in the timeline. There should be an initial mention that he took prisoners during the attack, then revealed later on exactly what he does with them.
 * Also, I did take care of the first name-surname jumbo, but it doesn't right calling Bastila, "Shan" all the time, and it also doesn't it feel right calling Shel "Jelavan".
 * Can't budge on this one, I'm afraid. Shel Jelavan is an FA herself, and her entire article refers to her as "Shelavan". While Bastila is also an FA and refered to as "Bastila" throughout, it was written two years ago before the FA process was tightened. A recent GA that passed review, Black Vulkars, also uses "Shan" as the descriptive name. If you plan to take this through the FAN process, I can guarantee it will be insisted upon.

Hey Kasra. I just wanted to let you know that the source list for Malak isn't actually correct. The Databank entries are always listed last since they don't have a "published" date. Also, articles from Starwars.com are placed in the external links section. I'm pretty sure that's it, but you check out out some of the current FAs to make sure if you like. After those are fixed, I'm sure Toprawa will take a look. Double check your other articles as well. I'll take a look at Revanchist in a little bit. Thanks. <span style="font-variant: small-caps; font-family: times, cursive; font-size: 16px"><font color=#008080>Cylka  <span style="font-family: times, cursive; font-size: 13px"><font color=#00A693>-talk- 15:09, 26 March 2009 (UTC)

Re:Merge

 * You might want to place a merge tag on there, or just go to the trash compactor. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 16:29, 25 February 2009 (UTC)

Lightspeed
Hey, Jedi Kasra,

You may not be aware, but DC has recently taken a permanent Wookieepedia vacation. You may want to direct your inquiries for him elswhere in light of that. With regards to Malak, I will assume responsibility of his objections, but please allow for me to get situated. —Tommy  ( Nine two eight one ) 16:45, 28 February 2009 (UTC)

RE: Legacy WookieeProject
Hey Jedi Kasra :), good to hear you still want to be involved in the project. Its great that your starting work on Cade, but if you look on the Project page you'll see that listed Cade as his individual project so you might want to ask him if he would like to collaborate with you :); I will gladly help with it as well. Did you still want to be considered the Project editor? Since I'm gonna try to appoint some "officers", who can be go to people, such as Floyd is the LotF Specialist, so that can be your position. Also I was wondering if you have any specific ideas for some goals we can have this year? I'm gonna be asking the more active members of the Project this; things like how many FA/GA's we want to have and so forth. Thanks Jedi Kasra :-).  Grunny  ( Talk ) 02:28, 6 March 2009 (UTC)
 * Hey, Kasra. Riffsyphon hasn't been online since the 5th which is why he hasn't replied. I still think it would be polite to wait for him to respond since he did reserve the article, however, you could make a start on it and I will add to it as well, and go over it when you're done :-). Hopefully Riffsyphon will be back soon, and he can reply, but until then go ahead and make a start :-).  Grunny  ( Talk ) 04:21, 18 March 2009 (UTC)

Darth Nihilus's Species
If you are referring to what it says in the infobox, I think that for simplicity's sake we leave it as simply human because he was human and then he just became a different form of human. NaruHina Talk  02:50, 7 March 2009 (UTC)

Unidentified Mandalorian Commander GAN
Of course I'll help. We've all put a lot of work in, and I want to go the whole nine yards.--End0 da Baker 23:51, 9 March 2009 (UTC)

Bandon
Hey, Kasra,

Sure, I'll leave some notes about ol' Bandon a little later. I'm actually eager to review him, & when it's ready, I have no problem supporting it. Master Jonathan is a great copy-editor, he's done great work for me in the past, and he'll do right by you as well. Glad to see you still in the game, homie! —Tommy  ( Nine two eight one ) 15:20, 12 March 2009 (UTC)


 * Speaking of which, the article has been copyedited. You did a great job writing the article as there wasn't much that I had to fix. If you have any questions or need anything else copyedited, just let me know. Master JonathanJedi Council Chambers 15:33, 12 March 2009 (UTC)

Bandon notes
Okay, here we go: Once these things are cleaned up, renom it, and we'll be good to go. I admire your perserverance, it's refreshing to still see other editors passionately participating on the site. —Tommy  ( Nine two eight one ) 03:27, 13 March 2009 (UTC)
 * Link everything that needs it.
 * when you say "reconfigured Revan", it sounds like his body parts were rearranged.
 * "destruction of Taris, bounty hunter Calo Nord was slain by a reconfigured Revan, who had in fact survived his apprentice's betrayal, and Darth Malak sent Bandon to find and capture Shan." What does this part have to do with Bandon going after Shan?
 * "When Revan, Shan, and their allies were searching for the Star Forge, an ancient Rakatan space station under Malak's control, Bandon tracked down and confronted them after they had found the fourth Rakatan Star Map." You should rework this so it starts off more from Bandon's POV, rather than someone else's.
 * Remember to use html code.
 * First two sentences in the "The search for Bastila and downfall" section start with "after".
 * "Accompanied by two Dark Jedi, he presumed that they would be no match for him." Specify the "they" and "him".
 * "It is not known on which world Bandon finally confronted Malak's former Master, but the battle fought between him and Revan was fierce." This needs to be reworked. It is okay to say that they fought on an unknown world, or if it actually is unknown which it was, I would omit that part. Also, calling their battle fierce is POV. Find a different way to describe it.
 * BtS needs to start off by talking about Bandon's creation & first appearance.
 * HTML code is when you use * &MDASH;  or * &HELLIP;  instead of "--" or "...". As far as the BtS goes, you at least need to talk about his appearances, who developed those appearances/sources, etc. —Tommy [[Image:Dark side Master SWGTCG.jpg|17px]] ( Nine two eight one ) 14:58, 13 March 2009 (UTC)
 * Again with the BtS, you might also want to mention the information you will find here. When you do, make sure to source it properly. —Tommy [[Image:Dark side Master SWGTCG.jpg|17px]] ( Nine two eight one ) 19:45, 13 March 2009 (UTC)
 * Heh, wrong link. This one should do it: —Tommy [[Image:Dark side Master SWGTCG.jpg|17px]] ( Nine two eight one ) 16:59, 14 March 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) Very good. I believe that you are now in a solid position for a renom. Good perserverance, young Jedi. In the future, if you ever want an eye to comb over your work, don't hesitate to ask, I'm more than willing to assist. —Tommy [[Image:Dark side Master SWGTCG.jpg|17px]] ( Nine two eight one ) 16:38, 16 March 2009 (UTC)

Removing GANs
Kasra, please don't just remove nominations from the GAN page on your own. I understand you meant well per Tommy's advice, but the AC needs to remove the nomination on their own through procedure so it can be archived. Next time, request Tommy or another AC to start an official removal vote. Thanks. Toprawa and Ralltiir 16:55, 12 March 2009 (UTC)

Revan's Planet
Sure, I'll help. I've been planning on doing that for a while now but something always seemed to come up. NaruHina Talk  17:18, 12 March 2009 (UTC)

Re:Yuthura Ban
Hey Kasra. Sure, I'll help you with anything that you want with Yuthura and Uthar. Once you have worked on the articles, I can go do a pre-nom critical review to see if anything is missing. As for the CSWE, I know for certain that Yuthura Ban does not have an entry, although I am unsure about Uthar Wynn. I can try to find that out, though. Oh, before I forget -- Alek has new information from the latest comic that needs to be added into the Darth Malak article. Anything else you need let me know. <span style="font-variant: small-caps; font-family: times, cursive; font-size: 16px"><font color=#008080>Cylka  <span style="font-family: times, cursive; font-size: 13px"><font color=#00A693>-talk- 21:51, 14 March 2009 (UTC)

Revan project page
Hey Kasra. I just wanted to let you know that I added in colons to the category links on your project page for Revan since it was showing up in the category pages. <span style="font-variant: small-caps; font-family: times, cursive; font-size: 16px"><font color=#008080>Cylka  <span style="font-family: times, cursive; font-size: 13px"><font color=#00A693>-talk- 10:07, 15 March 2009 (UTC)
 * And I removed because they automatically put the article into categories. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 12:20, 15 March 2009 (UTC)
 * No problem. I didn't, but I do now, and have struck. I made a few changes to the section too. I think it looks better. I noticed two more things, though (I'll post them here rather than the GAN page so you don't have to track me down when you've done). You could make reference to the quote in the first bio section; say Alek and Revan were fast learners and wanted to learn more than their masters were comfortable with, and that Alek was a talented Jedi but not as much as Revan, etc. Also, the start of "Recruiting for the Revanchists" could do with more context. Say that the Mandalorians attacked but the Order were slow to do anything about it, and that Alek/Revan disagreed etc. It's already there, sort of, but it could do with more spelling-out for people who aren't familiar with the material. When you mention "Revan's cause" it wouldn't be clear to someone who knew nothing about it what that meant. Good work with Malak, by the way -- I haven't read it all, but it looks good and thorough, and is well-written. You should try for FA when it's gone through GAN, I think. (I'd be willing to give it a runover if you did). :-) -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 16:34, 16 March 2009 (UTC)

Bandon GA
Hey Kasra. I don't think that facial hair counts since it can vary quite easily. As for his Jedi master, I don't think an article is warranted since all we know is that he/she was Bandon's master, nothing else. I would leave it for now. If there is more information later, you can always make one. <span style="font-variant: small-caps; font-family: times, cursive; font-size: 16px"><font color=#008080>Cylka  <span style="font-family: times, cursive; font-size: 13px"><font color=#00A693>-talk- 16:24, 18 March 2009 (UTC) About Bandon being a Sith Lord, where exactly did you find that? In this entry in the CG, he is listed as a Sith apprentice and Shadow Hand, which actually are the same thing, but not all apprentices are called Shadow Hands from what I can tell. I didn't find anything about him being a Sith Lord. He is also called an apprentice in his Databank entry. In that era, there wasn't any kind of Rule of two established. <span style="font-variant: small-caps; font-family: times, cursive; font-size: 16px"><font color=#008080>Cylka  <span style="font-family: times, cursive; font-size: 13px"><font color=#00A693>-talk- 00:17, 24 March 2009 (UTC) I've tried looking up who voiced him at both Moby games and IMDB, but I haven't had any luck with it. Just leave it out for now, and if I find it I'll let you know. <span style="font-variant: small-caps; font-family: times, cursive; font-size: 16px"><font color=#008080>Cylka  <span style="font-family: times, cursive; font-size: 13px"><font color=#00A693>-talk- 16:13, 24 March 2009 (UTC)
 * Well, we have an article for Alderaanian swan, a bird that may or may not actually be from Alderaan. We have articles on places in space that have no info other than that they aere there. We also have articles on other people from comics with no other info than that they were at an even and fought in it. Every individual or thing with any significance at all should get an article. NaruHina  Talk [[Image:Anakinsolo.png|14px]] 16:59, 18 March 2009 (UTC)
 * As you wish. The article name should be something like Unidentified Jedi (Darth Bandon) or something of that sort. There would need to be a tag, and you wouldn't be able to claim that he/she is a Jedi Master. All we know is that this being was a Jedi, and Bandon's master up until sometime during the Jedi Civil War. <span style="font-variant: small-caps; font-family: times, cursive; font-size: 16px"><font color=#008080>Cylka  <span style="font-family: times, cursive; font-size: 13px"><font color=#00A693>-talk- 18:09, 18 March 2009 (UTC)
 * Sure, go ahead with your idea for the article. <span style="font-variant: small-caps; font-family: times, cursive; font-size: 16px"><font color=#008080>Cylka  <span style="font-family: times, cursive; font-size: 13px"><font color=#00A693>-talk- 22:45, 18 March 2009 (UTC)
 * OK, I found that mention in the guide, but I tend to think that it was a mistake on the author's part. All other Sith Lords have Sith Lord written in their entries, while Bandon does not. He simply has Sith apprentice. I would go with his CG entry and DB entry, and put the discrepancy in the Bts, since more sources call him an apprentice rather than Sith Lord. As for the Rule of Two, I didn't say that you said that, but when the fanoneers see something like that written for an Old Republic character, they start using that as an excuse to invoke the Rule of Two for any Old Republic character. I have spent countless hours reverting that sort of fanon, so I just wanted to make it clear to them, rather than accuse you of anything. I didn't mean to do that, and I'm sorry that it came out that way. Next time something like that comes up, I'll leave you a note explaining my actions. <span style="font-variant: small-caps; font-family: times, cursive; font-size: 16px"><font color=#008080>Cylka  <span style="font-family: times, cursive; font-size: 13px"><font color=#00A693>-talk- 15:25, 24 March 2009 (UTC)

Chronicles continuity
Hey Kasra. I just wanted to let you know that I have figured out the continuity issues with Chronicles, and you can take a look at them here on the project page. I haven't heard anything concrete about the retcon that you mentioned on Naru's talk page. I guess we'll have to wait and see. If you need anything else, just let me know. Keep up the good work! <span style="font-variant: small-caps; font-family: times, cursive; font-size: 16px"><font color=#008080>Cylka  <span style="font-family: times, cursive; font-size: 13px"><font color=#00A693>-talk- 02:42, 21 March 2009 (UTC)

Revanchist (faction)
Hey Kasra. I'm going to give you a preliminary account of the issues I believe you should deal with. I can take a look at the article again after you have fixed them up, in order to polish it up for the GAN page.
 * First item is that I think you need to turn the members section into something that is seen with the Black Vulkars. The Key members would be Revan, Alek, and the Jedi Exile.
 * In the year 3,964 BBY, the Revanchists, who were also known as the Jedi Crusaders,[6] began to come together and scout the looming Mandalorian threat as the Mandalorian and Republic fleets battled ineffectually within the neutral Republic frontier. Revan began to take his followers to investigate the Mandalorian activities on the Outer Rim, without the Jedi High Council's support. - There is redundant information in these two sentences, and they could probably be combined or reworded.
 * When Alek met Zayne Carrick that first time, it really isn't all that pertinent as to what Alek thought of Carrick. What is important is what Carrick's masters thought of the Revanchists worrying about the Mandalorians. That needs to be included.
 * In issue six, the news or something similar, talks about how Jedi have left to fight in the "crusade," and that many of them are already missing in action. You should add this in.
 * In issue eight, one of the Jedi at Flashpoint talks about how they were ambushed at Suurja, and that that planet was the first "outing" for the Crusaders. There is nothing in there about Revan leaving to take a look at Onderon and Dxun.
 * It is in issue nine that we learn that Revan left them to go to Onderon and Dxun. Also it appears that the Revanchists were kidnapped before the battle. Please double check this. There is an important scene between Revan and the High Council in this issue that I feel needs to be detailed a bit more.
 * In issue ten there is more information about Revan having a vision of what the Mandalorians are doing and going to investigate it. He also has some plans for the Crusaders and they will follow him through the tough times. You need to detail some of this a bit more.
 * I don't see them mentioned in issue 14. Please double check this.
 * Issue fifteen talks about the Crusaders scouting around the lines. Also remember that it is probable that the Exile was a scout on Serroco. In KotOR II, Atton Rand mentions she was there. This may be useful to add in somehow.
 * Issue nineteen, Alek talks about how some of them had visions about Adasca's exogorths. Plus there is some more details about the meeting on the Legacy to be found in issue twenty as well. This needs to be detailed a bit more.
 * You need to detail the information from Galactic Republic Defense Ministry Daily Brief KD0092 a bit more.
 * The Council approved his motion ordering the recall, or even detention, of the Revanchists.[14] After Alek, who was going by the alias "Malak" in order to avoid the warrant for his arrest,[15] testified against the Covenant on behalf of the fugitive Jedi Zayne Carrick, he was sent back to Revan and his Jedi with a final warning. - This needs more context. These sentences don't connect to each other very much.
 * I think you need to talk a bit about how the Jedi Council warned them that they would become corrupted and end up like the Mandalorian aggressors.
 * Eventually, in the year 3,961 BBY, Revan found an ancient Star Map on the Wookiee homeworld of Kashyyyk that was left by the Rakata, an ancient civilization that ruled the galaxy approximately 20,000 years earlier. He then discovered a planet called Malachor V - What does this Star Map have to do with Malachor V? These pieces of information need to connect to each other.
 * OK, start with these changes, and I'll look over the article again. I have changed and added some appearances. Make sure that you have all of them. Let me know when you are ready to have me look at the article again. <span style="font-variant: small-caps; font-family: times, cursive; font-size: 16px"><font color=#008080>Cylka  <span style="font-family: times, cursive; font-size: 13px"><font color=#00A693>-talk- 20:48, 26 March 2009 (UTC)

Sith Magnus
That's pretty interesting Kasra, I didn't know that. That little tidbit would be interesting to add into the Bts, I think, and you could source it to Pena's answer on the thread. <span style="font-variant: small-caps; font-family: times, cursive; font-size: 16px"><font color=#008080>Cylka  <span style="font-family: times, cursive; font-size: 13px"><font color=#00A693>-talk- 21:23, 31 March 2009 (UTC)
 * The link that you gave on my talk page should work fine as a source. <span style="font-variant: small-caps; font-family: times, cursive; font-size: 16px"><font color=#008080>Cylka  <span style="font-family: times, cursive; font-size: 13px"><font color=#00A693>-talk- 18:52, 1 April 2009 (UTC)

Bane/Revanchist
Hey, Kasra,

Yes, I remember you mentioning that before. I am unsure as to how to go about that, but I will figure it out. Thanks for that piece of info, btw. As far as the Revanchists, give me a moment. I'll try to get to it either tonight or tomorrow, and we'll go through it like we did with Bandon. How's that? —Tommy  ( Nine two eight one ) 16:39, 1 April 2009 (UTC)

The Faction
My apologies, young Jedi. If you still want to do the pre-nom review together, I'm here. Other things have me stretched rather thin as of late, but I have not forgotten about you. —Tommy  ( Nine two eight one ) 15:01, 20 April 2009 (UTC)

KOTOR Campaign Guide images
Here you go. -  JMAS  Hey, it's me! 16:53, 1 April 2009 (UTC)

Just as a reminder, you also need to make sure these images get used within 7 days or they'll get deleted as unused images. -  JMAS  Hey, it's me! 18:32, 1 April 2009 (UTC)

Adoption
Well its not specifically stated in the comic, so I think you need to check Star Wars Insider 101 or find someone who has it, because I'm pretty sure something was mentioned in there. Its only uncertain about Skeeto, since Ahnah is Droo's daughter so she's Nat's step-daughter anyway.  Grunny  ( Talk ) 20:55, 1 April 2009 (UTC)

GAN page
Hey Kasra. I have one thing I would like to bring to your attention when you are answering GAN page objections. I wanted to ask you to please properly indent your answers to the objections. Otherwise, if you do not indent them correctly, it is very difficult for us in the AC to make sure that all objections have been striken. We have a policy that even if someone has voted, they need to have all of their objections striken, so we need to double check this. I have properly formatted your answers to my objections as an example. If you take a look at the difference between my objections and Kilson's objections, you will see the difference. Thanks. <span style="font-variant: small-caps; font-family: times, cursive; font-size: 16px"><font color=#008080>Cylka  <span style="font-family: times, cursive; font-size: 13px"><font color=#00A693>-talk- 19:56, 4 April 2009 (UTC)
 * Kasra, if you wouldn't mind reading the following code in edit mode:


 * 1) Objection header
 * 2) *Specific objection
 * 3) **Nominator response
 * 4) * Stricken objection
 * 5) **Nominator response
 * 6) Objection header
 * 7) *Specific objection
 * 8) *Specific objection

&hellip; and so forth. If you'd please, please try to follow this format, the AgriCorps' work on the GAN page and the Inquisitorius's work on the FAN page would be made so much easier. Thank you. Graestan ( Talk ) 23:25, 6 April 2009 (UTC)

Dorin and the Exile
Hey Kasra. There is already an article about the Dorin enclave, however it could certainly use expansion. I really don't have any new tips, just add whatever you can from the CG. As for the Exile, I would agree with that she wouldn't be a Consular. But since we don't have any other information, we can only speculate as to whether she was a Sentinel or Guardian, and as such, that would have to go in the Bts. <span style="font-variant: small-caps; font-family: times, cursive; font-size: 16px"><font color=#008080>Cylka  <span style="font-family: times, cursive; font-size: 13px"><font color=#00A693>-talk- 01:13, 8 April 2009 (UTC)
 * About the Exile not being a Consular, I do believe that we can't say that she wasn't. Please see this discussion as to why this is so. I have removed that bit from the Bts. <span style="font-variant: small-caps; font-family: times, cursive; font-size: 16px"><font color=#008080>Cylka  <span style="font-family: times, cursive; font-size: 13px"><font color=#00A693>-talk- 05:49, 14 April 2009 (UTC)
 * Yes, you are right about the forms if the player becomes a "pure Consular," but the problem is when the player isn't one, and this is where game mechanics come in. If the player starts out as a Consular, but takes the Jedi Weapon Master or Jedi Watchman prestige classes, they will learn all of the combat forms. However, on the player stat sheets, the Consular levels are still listed, so therefore, it can be argued that the player is still a Consular. The prestige classes are game mechanics, and this is why, after talking to Ataru, and a couple of others, it was decided that it is unclear, and we can't make the assumption that the Exile isn't a Consular. There hasn't been any official confirmation of which prestige classes correspond to which starting classes. Yes, logically we can say: Guardian = Weapon Master; Sentinel = Watchman; and Consular = Master, but until it is official, we can't make any claims about the Exile. All of this may make a good Bts bit, if it is explained in such a manner. <span style="font-variant: small-caps; font-family: times, cursive; font-size: 16px"><font color=#008080>Cylka  <span style="font-family: times, cursive; font-size: 13px"><font color=#00A693>-talk- 15:32, 14 April 2009 (UTC)

RE: Do you have...
Yep, I have it with me. What do you need? :)  Grunny  ( Talk ) 15:25, 9 April 2009 (UTC)
 * Yeah, I know I changed Azard's article to link to barrier.  Grunny  ( Talk ) 15:27, 9 April 2009 (UTC)
 * Ok, I can do that, though you'll have to wait until Tuesday when I get home so I can scan them. I think I might have a few on my hardrive which I had been planning to use. Before then (to save me some scanning time :P) can you check you're going to use them all, since we don't want a heap of unused images. For example the "Azard kills GA trooper" won't fit in the Azard article, so what do you plan on doing with it? :-)  Grunny  ( Talk ) 02:15, 10 April 2009 (UTC)

RE: Darth Malak GAN
Hey, Kasra. With the Cite web template you need to just read the instructions at the bottom. Some examples are, if it has an author such as the JJM one, insert the address, title, author, date you accessed it and the publisher if there is one into this:. If there is no author like the other ones use this:, inserting the website address, name of page, and the date you accessed it. Also, I have reverted your moving the succession box to the bottom of the article; it is placed before the references per the Manual of Style as a result of this CT. Please make sure you check an article conforms with the MoS before nominating it. Thank you :-).  Grunny  ( Talk ) 16:52, 17 April 2009 (UTC)

Bastila Shan
Hey, i just noticed your post on Cylka's talk page. Bastila Shan is currently on probation by the Inquisitorius. Here is a list of issues with it that Cylka and others have been working on. The next Inq meeting is likely to be held in early May, so any changes to it should be effected by then. Thanks. Graestan ( Talk ) 17:17, 22 April 2009 (UTC)

Re: Darth Bandon GAN
Thank you for informing me that you finished addressing my objections, but please don't leave too many messages on my talk page. I'll get to them in due time.  CC7567  (talk) 17:27, 22 April 2009 (UTC)

Español
Hey, young Jedi,

My page is in Spanish as a tribute to someone very dear to me, who passed away on April Fool's day. —Tommy  ( Nine two eight one ) 21:16, 28 April 2009 (UTC)

Bandon: Sith Lord
Hey Kasra. I'm sorry that it took me some time to get back to you. I had some internet issues and I wasn't able to come online. I think that this is something that needs to go into the Bts since the CG, doesn't have him as a Sith Lord in his entry. He is another one that has mixed information from different sources. <span style="font-variant: small-caps; font-family: times, cursive; font-size: 16px"><font color=#008080>Cylka  <span style="font-family: times, cursive; font-size: 13px"><font color=#00A693>-talk- 02:07, 29 April 2009 (UTC)

RE: Fate of the Jedi e-book tie-in
Hey, Kasra. No, I didn't know, thanks a lot for letting me know :-). And I'll continue reviewing Malak soon I've just had a busy week. :-)  Grunny  ( Talk ) 02:11, 29 April 2009 (UTC)