Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Attack on Rhen Var


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Attack on Rhen Var

 * Nominated by: Corellian Premier Jedi symbol.svg Force will be with you always 19:50, August 29, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: In which something happens.

(4 ECs/1 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1) Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:04, August 29, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  Commander Code-8  You lost the game! 07:08, September 3, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 12:13, September 4, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  14:13, September 4, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) Winterz (talk) 21:52, September 12, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) One thing: it would be nice if you mention the Galactic Civil War by name.  501st  dogma ( talk ) 16:29, August 31, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) *Sigh, fine. Thanks for looking it over. Corellian Premier Jedi symbol.svg Force will be with you always 23:48, August 31, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) Exiled Jedi
 * 4) * Could you combine some of the short sentences in the BTS? -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  22:17, August 31, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) **Voila. Corellian Premier Jedi symbol.svg Force will be with you always 23:48, August 31, 2013 (UTC)
 * 6) SE
 * 7) * One small thing, would you mind sourcing the behind the scenes? Thanks, Supreme Emperor (talk) 13:26, September 6, 2013 (UTC)
 * 8) **Thanks for looking over. And actually, I do mind. It's self-sourcing. Corellian Premier Jedi symbol.svg Force will be with you always 18:17, September 6, 2013 (UTC)
 * 9) Wonderful Life
 * 10) * You make no mention of Rhen Var Citadel on the body.
 * 11) **The focus in on the listening post. Corellian Premier Jedi symbol.svg Force will be with you always 16:15, September 7, 2013 (UTC)
 * 12) ***Lets not be lazy here ;). Article for the listening post and mentions of it and the Citadel on the body. Winterz (talk) 17:07, September 7, 2013 (UTC)
 * 13) ****Right, finally done. I'm just concerned that the first sentence is too wordy. Corellian Premier Jedi symbol.svg Force will be with you always 23:03, September 9, 2013 (UTC)
 * 14) * The Bts could get some more info, like TEA's authors for instance, that couldn't harm ;).
 * 15) **Sure thing. Corellian Premier Jedi symbol.svg Force will be with you always 16:15, September 7, 2013 (UTC)
 * 16) * I'm confused about something. So did the Imperial get to retake the facility or it was destroyed during their attack? You'll have to be more explicit here. Winterz (talk) 15:44, September 7, 2013 (UTC)
 * 17) **I'm confused too. Changed up some wording here, thanks. Corellian Premier Jedi symbol.svg Force will be with you always 16:15, September 7, 2013 (UTC)

Comments
 * 1) WP:VG of course. Originally wasn't sure if this article was necessary. Corellian Premier Jedi symbol.svg Force will be with you always 19:50, August 29, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) Not an objection because I have a feeling I'm wrong, but does it need to be in both the categories battles of Rhen Var and Battles of the Outer Rim since the former category is already within the latter category. Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:04, August 29, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) *That's a good question; I'm not up to speed on the latest categories. Corellian Premier Jedi symbol.svg Force will be with you always 22:32, August 29, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) **I removed the Outer Rim category, since the Rhen Var category is in that one.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  22:17, August 31, 2013 (UTC)