Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Andur Sunrider


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(5 Inqs/2 Users/7 Total)
Support
 * 1) Nominated.  Greyman ( Paratus ) 01:12, 25 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 2)  Graestan  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( This party's over ) 01:48, 25 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) I reiterate. Holy crap, crazy FA-ers. Jorrel [[Image:Wiki-shrinkable.png|20px]] Fraajic 02:55, 25 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) Good job. Despite the fact that I'm tiring of TOTJ, I like Andur and Sylvar's stories a good deal. Hobbes15 ( Tiger Headquarters ) 21:48, 26 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 5) Enough with the TOTJ already! Thefourdotelipsis 10:06, 27 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 6) Gotta admit, the Companion info really makes him a more interesting character. Cull Tremayne 16:47, 29 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 7) Bah! Havac 02:05, 2 October 2007 (UTC)

Object Comments
 * 1) From the lair of Hobbes15
 * 2) *Is it possible to get an image of Andur's force ghost near the P&A? It doesn't look there's much space, but if it can be done, that might be a good idea.
 * 3) **Eh, added. I didn't add it originally because Andur looks, even more so than usual, like a little girl when he appears as a Force ghost :P Greyman ( Paratus ) 14:20, 26 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Thanks :P. Hobbes15 ( Tiger Headquarters ) 21:48, 26 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 5) * I have a problem with the P&A. If Andur had already been taught all Chamma could teach him, and Chamma was skilled with the use of a blade and the use of the force, how had none of Andur's powers surfaced? They may not have been mentioned, but it seems to me that he had already finished more than a "small portion" of his training. This might need to be re-written a little; I recognize that none of his abilities appear in actual material, but if he's learned all Chamma can teach, I doubt his lightsaber combat and force skills are dormant within him. I'm not sure how you'd go about writing something so... speculative, I guess, so suggestions are fine.
 * 6) **Clarified. Greyman ( Paratus ) 14:20, 26 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 7) ***Very good fix. Hobbes15 ( Tiger Headquarters ) 21:48, 26 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 8) * Also, in the P&A, you might want to mention that he could become a force ghost. I know not all Jedi could do this, so... it might deserve a mention.
 * 9) **Added. Greyman ( Paratus ) 14:20, 26 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 10) *Feel free to argue with me over these last two. No other problems, though. Enough TOTJ already! ;). Hobbes15 ( Tiger Headquarters ) 04:15, 26 September 2007 (UTC)
 * Long live Tales of the Jedi and the Sunrider clan :) Greyman ( Paratus ) 01:12, 25 September 2007 (UTC)