Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Quaal Tavier Catharius


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Quaal Tavier Catharius

 * Nominated by: AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 23:19, 3 May 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: I love Alliance Intelligence Reports.

(5 Inqs/0 User/4 Total)
Support
 * 1) Toprawa and Ralltiir 18:26, 12 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) Green Tentacle (Talk) 21:12, 15 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) Very well done.  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  00:54, 17 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 4)  Jaina Solo ( Talk ) [[Image:Jainasolosig.gif |25px]] 14:29, 24 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 5)  Graestan ( Talk ) 21:57, 24 May 2008 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) From the Merciless Hammer of Toprawa:
 * 2) * Your era template doesn't match the infobox
 * 3) **Fized.
 * 4) ***Still doesn't match. :P I'd fix it for you, but I don't know what to source it with. At any rate, I know you'll get it. Toprawa and Ralltiir 18:26, 12 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) ****Hah hah. I got it. :-) -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 18:50, 12 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 6) * Little intro context for the Order, please: "the m'Yalfor'ac Order"
 * 7) **I've added context later on in the intro, but I don't think its necessary for the opening sentence, and adding an explanation sort of mucks up the sentence.
 * 8) ***You're fine. Toprawa and Ralltiir 18:26, 12 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 9) * Your link to Espo Walker is a disambig page. Can you be more specific?
 * 10) **Fixed.
 * 11) * Brief descriptor for Mr. Cracken, please: " which eventually made its way to Airen Cracken"
 * 12) * What lands? The way you transition this into the Rebellion being concerned about the Order makes it seem as though he had respect outside of just his planet. Please specify: "Respected and admired across the lands" Toprawa and Ralltiir 04:22, 10 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 13) **Better? -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 23:06, 11 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 14) ***Good. Toprawa and Ralltiir 18:26, 12 May 2008 (UTC)

Comments
 * If anyone's wondering why I'm not calling him "Catharius," it's because "Tavier" is his family name. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 23:19, 3 May 2008 (UTC)
 * If anyone's wondering why I'm not calling him "Catharius," it's because "Tavier" is his family name. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 23:19, 3 May 2008 (UTC)