Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Vindoo Barvel


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Vindoo Barvel

 * Nominated by:  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 23:42, 11 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: My first GA nom under the new system. It's on The Shooter.

(2 AC/5 users/7 total)
Support
 * 1) It's all good. —Tommy9281 [[Image:Dark Side Master TotG.jpg|20px]] ( Peace is a lie ) 01:37, 14 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 2)  IFYLOFD  ( And now, young Skywalker, you will die. ) 01:28, 15 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 3)  Pranay Sobusk  ~  Talk  14:41, 16 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) Interesting character. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie ) 09:13, 17 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) Well written. Good job. Grand Moff Tranner [[Image:Imperial Department of Military Research.svg|20px]] (Comlink) 00:40, 19 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 6) Qui-Gon Reborn ( The ability to speak doesn't make you intelligent. )
 * 7) -  Cavalier One [[Image:FarStar Logo.jpg|20px]]( Squadron channel ) 09:19, 3 December 2008 (UTC)

Object  Pranay Sobusk  ~  Talk  13:25, 16 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 1) Just one question—did he die when he was shot down? Did the other pilots die as well? You mentioned eliminated, but did you mean eliminated from the excercise, or literally killed?  SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie ) 01:04, 15 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) *It was a training mission with powered-down lasers. None of them died. I'll try to clarify that.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 13:22, 15 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) Two small things:
 * 4) * Why do you use brackets in the quote?
 * 5) **The original quote has "he" where Vader is. It makes no sense without context on who he is, so I used the brackets to indicate that Vader is being mentioned.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 13:38, 16 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 6) * Please mention the flight duel against Vader in the intro. I think it's notable enough for the intro.
 * 7) **Added.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 13:38, 16 November 2008 (UTC)

Comments
 * No pictures, no better quotes. The only information revealed about Barvel is on one page in a story Vil Dance tells. And yes, the P&T stinks. But there's nothing revealed (that's explicitly stated) about his personality in the story. BTW, this article is about 450 words.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 23:42, 11 November 2008 (UTC)