Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations



This page is for the nomination of "comprehensive articles". For a list of "comprehensive articles", see Category:Wookieepedia comprehensive articles.


 * Comprehensive article nominations history
 * Comprehensive article nominations archiving checklist

What is a "comprehensive article?"

A "comprehensive article" is an article that contains all information regarding the topic. Often, "comprehensive articles" cannot reach Featured or Good Article status due to their limited content. This process is intended to recognize articles that contain all relevant canon information, yet are still under the 250 word limit required for a Good Article. The purpose of this is twofold&mdash;firstly, to help users distinguish what is a stub, and what is merely a short article with no further relevant material to be added, and, more importantly, to highlight for the reader when they are reading something that has been judged definitely "comprehensive"&mdash;that is, a guarantee to the reader that whatever they are reading contains the sum total of all available content.

Nominations and promotions of the Comprehensive article process are overseen by a collective of users known as the "EduCorps," which is made up of the Inquisitorius, the AgriCorps, and various other experienced users who are considered qualified to adequately judge the nominated material.

Lucasfilm Ltd. and its many licensees continue to expand the Star Wars universe. Since new information might become available, it may be necessary to revoke a "comprehensive article's" status. A forum will be used to nominate articles that have fallen out-of-date. Members of the EduCorps will then post a warning template on that page, and a grace period of one week will be instituted in which the article can be improved. If there is a significant amount of new information, it is likely that once updated, the article will become eligible for Good article status, and thereby ineligible for Comprehensive article status.

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An article must&hellip;


 * 1) &hellip;be well-written and detailed.
 * 2) &hellip;be unbiased, non-point of view.
 * 3) &hellip;be sourced with all available sources and appearances.
 * 4) &hellip;follow the Manual of Style, Layout Guide, and all other policies on Wookieepedia. This is, of course, within reason. If a topic only has a very limited degree of content that cannot be divided up into the relevant article sections, it is not required that it follow the Layout Guide precisely. This is to be judged on a case-by-case basis.
 * 5) &hellip;following the review process, be stable, i.e., does not change significantly from day to day and is not the subject of ongoing edit wars. This does not apply to vandalism and protection or semi-protection as a result of vandalism.
 * 6) &hellip;not be tagged with any sort of improvement tags (i.e. more sources, expand, etc).
 * 7) &hellip;have no redlinks.
 * 8) &hellip;have all relevant canon information presented.
 * 9) &hellip;be completely referenced for all available material and sources. See Sourcing for more information. While this is not required for an article possessing a singular source, it is encouraged, as it provides both uniformity and a good infrastructure should the topic be referenced in any future materials.
 * 10) &hellip;have all quotes and images sourced.
 * 11) &hellip;provide at least one relevant quote on the article if available.
 * 12) &hellip;include a "Behind the scenes" section for in-universe articles.
 * 13) &hellip;counting the introduction, the article body, and "Behind the scenes" material, must not exceed 250 words in length (not including captions, quotes, or headers, etc). Any articles exceeding the limit should be taken to the Good article nominations page for consideration.
 * 14) &hellip;if the nominated article reaches 200 words or greater, the nominator must either provide an intro or draft an intro and provide a link to the revision in the nomination, showing that the intro does not elevate the article over 250 words. Exceptions can be made for articles wherein the majority of the text is in the "Behind the scenes" section.

How to nominate:


 * 1) First, nominate an article you find is worthy of comprehensive status, putting it at the bottom of the list below. Nominated articles must meet all thirteen requirements stated above.
 * 2) Add CAnom at the top of the article you are nominating.
 * 3) Be sure to place sign in the "Nominated by" line when the nomination is posted for voting.
 * 4) Others will object to the nomination if they disagree that the article is good enough; they will then supply reasons for doing so, and ways to improve the article in accordance with the established rules.
 * 5) Nominators and supporters will adjust the article until the objectors (with reasonable objections) are satisfied. Objectors may also make alterations&mdash;if there is any reason for contention on a given point, it should be settled in a civil manner in the nomination field itself.
 * 6) Users may not vote on their own articles.
 * 7) There is no limit to the amount of nominations a given user can submit at any given time.

How to vote:


 * 1) Before doing anything, be sure to read the article completely, keeping a sharp eye out for mistakes.
 * 2) Afterward, compare the article to the criteria listed above, and then either support or object the article's nomination.
 * 3) *If you object, please supply concrete reasons for doing so, and how it can be improved.
 * 4) As stated above, any objections will be looked upon by the nominator, supporters, and anyone willing to improve the article, and action will be taken to please the objectors. Do not strike other users' objections; it is up to the objector to review the changes and strike if they are satisfied.
 * 5) There are several ways in which an article can receive the required number of votes. Within a 48-hour period of nomination, only EduCorps votes will count towards the total, although anyone may choose to vote in that window. If two members of the EduCorps support a nomination in that window, and there are no outstanding objections, the article can be considered a "Comprehensive article" and be tagged with the template 48 hours after the initial nomination.  The talk page will also be tagged with the CA template. When the 48 hours are up, any user's votes will contribute towards the total. If one EduCorps member has voted for an article after a week, three regular votes will be required. After the 48 hour period, an article can still also pass with just two EduCorps votes.
 * 6) Once a nomination is successful, it will be placed on the Comprehensive article list. Instructions on how to archive nominations, successful or otherwise, can be found here. Anyone can archive a nomination&mdash;just make sure it has the correct number of votes, has been nominated for at least a week (or 48 hours if there are two EC votes), and that there are absolutely no outstanding objections. If you are not sure how to do this, just ask, and someone will likely be more than willing to help you. Also, if you think you can slip one past us, think again&mdash;someone is always watching you.

All nominations will be considered idle and are subject to instantaneous removal by EduCorps members if objections are not addressed, or at least not answered, after a period of 1 week.

Please remember to archive your nomination beforehand if you plan on taking it to the Good Article Nominations page.

Ree Ohr

 * Nominated by: QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 12:15, May 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: A character so obscure, nobody has bothered to create an article for her for all these years. A rarity, to say the least.

(1 ECs/3 Users/4 Total)
Support Object
 * 1) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 15:29, May 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) ~  Savage  BOB sig.png 06:47, May 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) And I am sure there are many more.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  14:22, May 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) Aside from Menkooroo's objection, it looks like a good article.Cal Jedi (Personal Comm Channel) 21:52, May 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) &mdash; TK-999  Era-imp.png( Rise of the Empire ) 18:08, May 26, 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) Axinal
 * 2) * I think some of the phrases in the first sentence should be swapped around, as the way it's written right now implies that the Clone Wars was the site of a battle between the Republic and the CIS. Otherwise, a well-written article.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 16:10, May 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Addressed. QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 14:53, May 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) "Republic female Human" sounds weird. It sounds like "Republic Human" is a type of Human. Maybe reword? Menkooroo 16:48, May 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) *Addressed. QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 18:02, May 26, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

71st Elite Mechanized Assault Group

 * Nominated by:  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 08:42, May 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Star Wars PocketModel TCG unit

(0 ECs/1 Users/1 Total)
Support
 * 1) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 21:51, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Ecks Dee
 * 2) * Very short article; characteristics and history could be merged into the intro.
 * 3) **Again, this is not against the CA rules. He can subsection the article if he wants to. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 21:06, May 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) ***I haven't said it's against the rules; the appearance of the article is just better when half of it isn't headings. 1358  (Talk)  17:35, May 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) * You don't need to bold the subject outside the intro.
 * 6) **Done.  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 16:29, May 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) * Intro-exclusive info.
 * 8) **What do you mean? Please explain.  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 16:29, May 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) ***"an elite Imperial Remnant battle group during the Imperial Civil War." This information can not be found outside the intro. This could be fixed by just merging the sections. 1358  (Talk)  17:35, May 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) ****Tell me if what I've got works. If not I'll rework it to merge it.  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 01:38, May 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) * Please do not use parenthesis in the prose. 1358  (Talk)  14:55, May 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * 12) **Done.
 * 13) Imperators II
 * 14) * In the "Characteristics" section, only the info about the generic century tank can be sourced to the Databank, so it needs to be referenced accordingly.  Imperators II (Talk) 09:25, May 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * 15) **Done.  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 16:09, May 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * 16) *** "The 71st Elite Mechanized Assault Group was outfitted with dark gray century tanks" still can't be sourced to the Databank.  Imperators II (Talk) 16:22, May 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * 17) **** Please check again. You will find that the only statement sourced to the Databank is where century tanks are "Unofficially called TIE crawlers." This is appropriate and, as mentioned in the 98th CANom, is appropriate to identify the connection between the name "TIE crawler" and "century tank."  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 17:34, May 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * 18) *****Fixed per 98th comments.  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 16:40, May 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * 19) Cav:
 * 20) *No era tags?
 * 21) ** tag restored.  Gethralkin  Hyperwave  07:08, May 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 22) *Affiliation is listed as the Imperial Remnant - my understanding was that the Remnant was not officially referred to as such until much later in the chronology. What is the reasoning for using this rather than "Galactic Empire"? - Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 09:53, May 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 23) **Santhe/Sienar Technologies sold the TIE Crawlers to the squabbling warlords trying to conquer Coruscant following the Empire's defeat. That can hardly be said to be the Galactic Empire.  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 07:08, May 28, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

98th Elite Mechanized Assault Group

 * Nominated by:  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 08:42, May 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Star Wars PocketModel TCG unit

(0 ECs/2 Users/2 Total)
Support Object
 * 1) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 21:58, May 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Bonslywizard  Naboo.svg ( Send a transmission ) 23:42, May 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) * The "Characteristics" section (or rather, sentence) could definitely be fixed up a bit. Right now, it's pretty confusing.
 * 2) **Reworked. How does that sound?  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 16:23, May 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) * The "History" section is pretty confusing also. Change that a little.
 * 4) **Removed. No specific history recorded that I know of, except that they participated in the Imperial Civil War.  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 16:03, May 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) * Only bold the name in the intro. Never the body.
 * 6) **Done.  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 16:03, May 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) * "Century tanks of the 98th Elite were often called upon to lead strikes on mission objectives." Okay, so what kind of strikes? Does the card say?
 * 8) **Removed. A different elite century tank unit was a lead position assault group, not this one.  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 16:03, May 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) * "Century Tanks" are capitalized the first time, but not the second. Which is it?
 * 10) **No caps. Done.  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 16:03, May 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) * Parentheses are almost never used in articles around here, so it would be best if these were removed.
 * 12) **Done.  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 16:03, May 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * 13) *I'll have another look once these are addressed. Anyway, welcome to the CAN page! :D Bonslywizard  Naboo.svg ( Send a transmission ) 00:00, May 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * 14) *Okay, you really changed the article alot since last I checked, so I'll re-review. Bonslywizard  Naboo.svg ( Send a transmission ) 21:33, May 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 15) * Are you sure that this unit existed during the Rebellion era, as the article currently states? Given that they are an Imperial Remnant unit, they could have existed during the Rebellion era, the New Republic era, or later eras. Therefore, you can't make any assumptions about which publishing era they feature in, unless the source dates their existance to a more specific time. If that is the case, then please cite the dating in the article. If not, then please remove any mention of the Rebellion era. --Jinzler 13:55, May 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * 16) **Removed.  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 16:27, May 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * 17) ***Removed the unverified "Era" tag, too. ;)  Imperators II (Talk) 09:33, May 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * 18) ****Oh, yes. Thanks.  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 16:00, May 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * 19) Jinzler
 * 20) * Could you perhaps include some context on what a century tank is?
 * 21) **I thought the link to the century tank article would suffice. It has in the other century tank Assault Group articles&mdash;like the 88th Mechanized Assault Group&mdash;that are nominated on this page. What did you have in mind?  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 04:32, May 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * 22) ***I was thinking maybe just something along the lines of stating that they were a type of attack vehicle developed by Santhe/Sienar Technologies. Given that a large proportion of the article is related to the tanks, I think that such additional detail would be useful here. What do you think --Jinzler 08:54, May 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * 23) ****Minor description put in, including reference to alternate name. Didn't want to go into too much detail. How's that?  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 16:27, May 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * 24) * century tanks of the 98th Elite were more formidable than standard units, such as used by the 88th Mechanized. What do you mean by "standard units" here? I presume this is referring to standard Imperial mechanized units, or something along those lines, but article is currently unclear. Please specify.
 * 25) **The 88th Mechanized used stock century tank units. They would be considered the standard. The 98th and other Assault Groups modified their century tanks to the needs of the particular group they were in.  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 04:32, May 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * 26) * I see that you have now added The New Essential Chronology to the source list. If the unit appears in the NEC, then that might be worth a mention in the "Behind the scenes" section. Also, as there is more than one source you will need a "1stm" template next to whichever one was the first to mention the unit.
 * 27) **Isn't enough?  Gethralkin  Hyperwave  04:32, May 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * 28) ***I see you logic in using that template, but the Layout Guide [Wookieepedia:Layout_Guide#Appearances advises] that the "1stID" template should only be used when a subject is not named in its first appearance and is first identified by a later source. A "1st" or "1stm" template is still needed for the source that mentions the subject first. --Jinzler 08:54, May 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * 29) ****Done. NEC was wrong source though, probably copied over accidentally.  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 16:27, May 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * 30) *I look forward to seeing more nominations from you in the future. And my use of timestamping here is correct, per my comments below :P Jinzler 17:09, May 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * 31) **Yeah, yeah, yeah... ;P  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 04:32, May 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * 32) Imperators II
 * 33) * Again, the whole "Characteristics" section cannot be sourced to the Databank, since the Databank doesn't mention this specific unit.  Imperators II (Talk) 09:33, May 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * 34) **The info about a TIE crawler vehicle being called a century tank can be referenced as per your comment for the 71st. It is important because the miniature is called a "TIE Crawler," not a "century tank," so the official designation has to be accounted for.  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 15:56, May 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * 35) ***Okay, citations have been distributed according to pertinent info.  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 16:19, May 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * 36) ****" 98th Elite Mechanized Assault Group was outfitted with gray and dark blue-striped century tanks" still can't be sourced to the Databank.  Imperators II (Talk) 16:23, May 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * 37) ***** Well, fortunately, that is not the statement that is sourced to the Databank. Please check again. You will find that the only statement sourced to the Databank is where century tanks are "Unofficially called TIE crawlers."  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 17:31, May 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * 38) ****** The common practice is that ref [X] references everything between it and the previous ref (i.e., "The Imperial Remnant's 98th Elite Mechanized Assault Group was outfitted with gray and dark blue-striped century tanks—compact assault vessels consisting of a TIE fighter cockpit linked between two large tank treads. Unofficially called TIE crawlers,"). If you choose to interpret that ref [1] only references the previous part of the same sentence (i.e., "Unofficially called TIE crawlers,"), then the first sentence of the "Characteristics" section is unsourced.  Imperators II (Talk) 21:03, May 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * 39) *******Understood. Fixed.  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 02:19, May 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * 40) Cav:
 * 41) *No era tags?
 * 42) **The is there, but any specific era has been removed per the objections stated already.  Gethralkin  Hyperwave  07:19, May 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 43) *Affiliation is listed as the Imperial Remnant - my understanding was that the Remnant was not officially referred to as such until much later in the chronology. What is the reasoning for using this rather than "Galactic Empire"? - Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 09:54, May 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 44) **The squabbling warlords were no longer the Galactic Empire when Santhe/Sienar sold the century tanks to them&mdash;they were the remnants of the Empire.  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 07:19, May 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 45) ***Here's a good anology: Certain tanks were in use in Europe during a war that, at the time, was referred to as "The Great War." Historically, we do not call them Great War tanks, we call them World War I tanks. Star Wars wikia articles are written in prose that reads in hindsight&mdash;or past-tense&mdash;giving the appearance of a historical in-universe record. The Imperial Remnant may not have been officially defined as such at the time that the Imperial factions began fighting each other (indeed, the war itself&mdash;similarly to Earth's European history&mdash;was called by different names: "The Imperial Civil War," "The Mutiny," "The Time of Destruction," etc.). However, it was what they were in relation to the previous regime that spawned them, thereby making the difference notable. Does that make sense?  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 00:45, May 29, 2011 (UTC)

Comments
 * I'm curious to know why someone has added the "Unsigned" templates to Bonsly's objections above. While all user comments are required to be signed, this rule has always been interpreted in the context of nomination pages as meaning that just one timestamp is needed to sign all of the objections made by a user at one time. I don't see why things should be any different here. --Jinzler 13:55, May 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * Bonslywizard did not sign his objection vote at the beginning as is standard, so I could not tell who made the comments. There have been several times when comments were made and then other users addressed each itemization so it obscured who was who. Rules for signing comments is outlined in the Signature policy.  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 14:16, May 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * Yes, I am fully aware of our signature policy, but it seems that we have differing interpretations of it. Regarding your confusion, when users make a large number of objections to an article on a nominations page at one time, it is commonplace for them to choose only to sign the last objection. You can thus tell who made the objections and when by looking at the bottom of the listed objections, to see who has signed them. This is compliant with the signature policy, because where objections are made together, they can be seen as one combined comment, and so only one signature is needed to serve them, and this should be enough to show who made the comment. Furthermore, if you take a look at the Featured articles nominations page and the Good article nominations page, you will see that the method of making objections used by Bonsly above is regularly used by many users, including administrators and members of the Inquisitorius. It is therefore a seemingly valid interpretation of the signature policy and is used on Wookieepedia on a regular basis. If you believe this interpretation is incorrect, then I recommend you take your concerns to the Senate Hall. I urge you to reconsider your use of the "Unsigned" template on Bonsly's comments above, because he has done nothing wrong. --Jinzler 14:47, May 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * This topic is perhaps better suited to User Talk pages, as it distracts from this page's purpose. Please leave me a message if you wish to discuss it further. Thanks.  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 16:47, May 10, 2011 (UTC)

Alain (Human)

 * Nominated by: Hanzo Hasashi 20:49, May 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Unit Scrounge

(1 ECs/2 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 15:40, May 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2)  Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 09:58, May 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3)  Imperators II (Talk) 21:46, May 27, 2011 (UTC)

Object

Comments
 * 1) Hanzo Hasashi
 * 2) * I believe there is no evidence that he necessarily fought the 501st during the events of ANH, as the card never explicitly states it, nor does his CSWE entry. Does anybody else believe otherwise? Hanzo Hasashi 20:49, May 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) *Text from his Quick Draw card: fighting against oppression can be dangerous business. Oppressors carry blasters, and so does Alain. I do not believe any of this is necessarily from his POV, and chose not to include it as any new info in his bio. As with above, if somebody else believes otherwise, please respond. Hanzo Hasashi 21:07, May 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) Axinal
 * 5) * In the Personality and Traits, you mention a Hakin. Who is Hakin? I figure this is supposed to be Alian and would therefore qualify as a Sofixit, but I want to be sure Hakin's name isn't there for some other purpose.
 * 6) **Right, that was just a careless mistake on my part, Hakin was another Rebel trooper I brought to comprehensive status. Hanzo Hasashi 14:28, May 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) * Could you tell us what a scrounge is?&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 22:09, May 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) **A scavenger, will write. Hanzo Hasashi 14:28, May 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) ***Nice work!&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 15:40, May 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) Imperators II
 * 11) * Is there any indication that Alain still served by 0 BBY? He could have served aboard Tantive IV at any point between 2 BBY (the formation of the Rebel Alliance) and 0 BBY, and, imho, it would be more accurately stated that way. Or does "by 0 BBY" really cover it?  Imperators II (Talk) 09:47, May 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * 12) **To be honest, I'm not sure. For Precht's nomination below, the user Menkooroo felt that what I had was fine. All I was saying was Alain's service could have been no later than 0 BBY. Hanzo Hasashi 14:29, May 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * 13) ***Imperators see if you like the change I have just made. Hanzo Hasashi 16:06, May 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * 14) **** This probably could be solved by adding something like "at some point before its destruction in 0 BBY" at the end of the second sentence.  Imperators II (Talk) 18:31, May 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 15) *****Added. Hanzo Hasashi 20:21, May 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 16) ****** The date has to be sourced, though.  Imperators II (Talk) 20:24, May 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 17) *******Added. Hanzo Hasashi 21:33, May 27, 2011 (UTC)

Precht

 * Nominated by: Hanzo Hasashi 20:49, May 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Green Recruit

(2 ECs/1 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 22:14, May 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Menkooroo 14:46, May 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3)  Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 10:06, May 27, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Can you give a little more detail in ref [2]? Does the card indicate that he was a recent recruit at the time of the Tantive IV destruction?
 * 2) *His year of service was never given, however, it could have only been 0 BBY at the latest. Should I change it to simply say during the Galactic Civil War, also getting rid of ref [2] in the process?
 * 3) **I think the ref is OK. Maybe just a little more explanation within ref [2] itself as to why it says what it does (something at the end like "Therefore, Precht must have blah blah blah...").
 * 4) ***See if it's better now. Hanzo Hasashi 14:09, May 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) I'd say that ref [5] probably isn't necessary. If it's visually a DH-17 on the card, I think you can just source the card. Like, if there was an X-wing fighter on the card, you wouldn't need to source anything else to say so. Menkooroo 02:49, May 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) *Gotten rid of. Hanzo Hasashi 03:48, May 23, 2011 (UTC)

Comments
 * Same as above with Private Alain. Hanzo Hasashi 20:49, May 8, 2011 (UTC)

72nd Flight

 * Nominated by:  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 19:08, May 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: SWPM

(0 ECs/1 Users/1 Total)
Support
 * 1) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 00:18, May 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) * See below.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 00:21, May 22, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Axinal
 * 2) * If you're going to source the article, every bullet in the infobox must be sourced. However, since it only has one appearance, I would argue that sourcing is unnecessary, but the decision is yours.
 * 3) **Done for all.  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 13:42, May 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) * The article needs a Behind the scenes section.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 22:22, May 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) ** The BTS requirement also applies to your other current CANs.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 22:25, May 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) ***Done for all.  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 13:42, May 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) * I think Trade Federation ought to be listed in the affiliation field in the infobox in addition to the Confederacy of Independent Systems and the Confederate Navy; I'd say probably with one bullet under CIS. Again, this applies to all these articles, unless there's a specific reason you didn't include it. Otherwise, nice work.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 19:14, May 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) ** That would probably work pre-CIS, but the TF and the Techno Union Droid Army and the IGBC all merged their droid militaries into the Separatist Droid Army, and it is difficult to determine which Flights are being represented from TPM to RotS by noting their markings&mdash;unless someone has the time to spend going frame-by-frame to do so. Much like the Retail Caucus-affiliated droid army that Whorm Loathsom commanded, droids are no longer really affiliated with the TF after they are shipped unless they are specifically a TF detachment.  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 23:44, May 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) * One more, applying to all these related articles; intro-exclusive information, such as the fighers' affiliation within the Trade Federation, needs to be added somewhere in the main body.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 19:21, May 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) **TF references removed.  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 07:59, May 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) ***Forgive me, as I'm a bit confused. Is it confirmed canon that they were part of the Trade Federation at any point?&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 01:00, May 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * 12) ****I would have to study the markings of the Flights present on and above Naboo in TPM.  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 01:54, May 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * 13) *****I don't think that's necessary. As long as it's not mentioned in the TCG, it's fine.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 09:58, May 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * 14) ******Nope, they are not identified as TF specifically.  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 07:41, May 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * 15) *******In that case, I would say the article is ready for CA. Nice work, Gethralkin.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 00:18, May 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * 16) ********Forgive me, I was a bit hasty. The fact that they were in the service of the CIS during the Clone Wars needs to be mentioned somewhere outside the intro, perhaps in a History section.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 00:21, May 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * 17) *********Good work. Please address the same intro-exclusive problems to the other articles, and I will support them as well.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 02:28, May 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * 18) **********Done.  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 02:35, May 23, 2011 (UTC)

Comments
 * 1) Not really an objection, but is there no available image? Other articles from the same sources have them, so why not this? Are they unavailable for some reason? - Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 11:10, May 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *In fact, consider this a blanket query to include the other three noms on flight groups below. - Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 11:12, May 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **No good resolution photos have been taken yet of these. We uploaded highres images on our site, but the gallery only needed thumbnails for WizKids' purposes. The other sources that you mention are either higher resolution previews of miniatures by game sites, or that were taken by me for the purpose of uploading here. I am extremely busy, so a photo shoot is not something I can always spend time on. If you know of any images available then, by all means, upload and include them.  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 18:16, May 28, 2011 (UTC)

128th Flight

 * Nominated by:  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 19:08, May 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: SWPM

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 * 1) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 03:24, May 23, 2011 (UTC)

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28th Flight

 * Nominated by:  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 19:08, May 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: SWPM

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 * 1) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 03:24, May 23, 2011 (UTC)

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31st Flight

 * Nominated by:  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 19:08, May 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: SWPM

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 * 1) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 03:24, May 23, 2011 (UTC)

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Nala Hetsime

 * Nominated by: Hanzo Hasashi 22:18, May 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Same first name as The Lion King main female character

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 * 1) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 22:42, May 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Menkooroo 08:50, May 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3)  Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 11:18, May 27, 2011 (UTC)

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 * I think the fact that the full card image features an AT-AT in the top corner is a prime indicator that he fought at Hoth. Also, being in Rogue Squadron and flying a T-47 while stationed at Echo Base implies this as well. Reference to the Battle of Hoth should be included. - Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 14:43, May 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * Written. Hanzo Hasashi 19:56, May 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * Eight days have gone by, and I see you have been active on this website during that amount of time, as well as earlier yesterday and today. Can you please respond to your objections? Thanks. Hanzo Hasashi 14:39, May 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * Patience is a virtue. My online time has been limited by RL issues. - Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 11:18, May 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * It looks like that's the Rebel insignia on his helmet. The Rogue Squadron insignia wasn't created until a couple years after the Battle of Endor. Menkooroo 03:51, May 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * You are right, fixed my mistake. Hanzo Hasashi 15:47, May 21, 2011 (UTC)

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Ururur

 * Nominated by: Hanzo Hasashi 22:18, May 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: "The Sandpeople are easily startled but they will soon be back and in greater numbers."

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 * 1) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 22:28, May 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Menkooroo 16:44, May 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Remember to make sure your BTS tense is consistent. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 04:58, May 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4)  Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 11:22, May 27, 2011 (UTC)

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Offices of the Imperial Head of State

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi (Personal Comm Channel) 05:50, May 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:I hope you'll look the article over.

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 * 1) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 17:58, May 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) * See below.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 09:56, May 20, 2011 (UTC)

Object Comments
 * 1) Axinal
 * 2) *The article is currently missing a BTS section.
 * 3) * Also, try to add some context on the information. What was Coruscant? Who was Jaina Solo? What were their careers, and why did they take them on separate paths?&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 15:35, May 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) **OK, I added a BTS section and I added some more context. I also expanded it a little more.Cal Jedi (Personal Comm Channel) 16:49, May 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) *** Better, but now you have intro-exclusive information; specifically, you mention in the intro that Fel was the Imperial Head of State, and that Coruscant was the GA capital. This info must be in the main body as well. Also, take a look at the formatting in the BTS; you italicize FotJ once and leave it normal another time. Also, the wording in the first sentence, "Fate of the Jedi Allies" is a little awkward. Could you perhaps rearrange the sentence? &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 16:58, May 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) * Please fix links so they don't point to redirects; specifically, Imperial, Galactic Alliance, and vidscreen.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 16:58, May 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) ** Imperators got GA and vidscreen, so just Imperial.
 * 8) * I apologize if I wasn't specific enough when I said "context." I'm afraid I think you went a bit overboard with detail, as much of the article as it is currently written is not relevant to the office. We really just need to know the gist of what was said during the conversation in the office, not a history of their relationship.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 17:37, May 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) *I downsized on some of their relationship details to concentrate more on the office. Does it need more downsizing or not?Cal Jedi (Personal Comm Channel) 17:46, May 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) **I'm satisfied, good work.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 17:58, May 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) Imperators II
 * 12) * I believe that the Imperial state that existed in 44 ABY was the Imperial Remnant, not the Galactic Empire.
 * 13) **I disagree; Jag consistently says Galactic Empire, and corrects those who refer to it as the Imperial Remnant.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 17:33, May 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 14) * All the infobox info must be referenced.  Imperators II (Talk) 17:13, May 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 15) **Per CA rules, not if the subject in question only has one appearance.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 17:33, May 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 16) ***It's encouraged, though. (OK, not really an objection, then.)  Imperators II (Talk) 17:41, May 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 17) ****True, it is encouraged, so I'd be okay if Cal wanted to do that. Doesn't matter to me.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 17:58, May 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 18) ***** I added references to the infobox now.Cal Jedi (Personal Comm Channel) 02:16, May 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 19) * The "History" section should begin with mentioning the era during which the offices were on Coruscant.  Imperators II (Talk) 17:18, May 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 20) *OK did I miss anymore redirect links?Cal Jedi (Personal Comm Channel) 17:34, May 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 21) **Nope, you got them all, good work. Just see my remaining objection above.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 17:38, May 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 22) *OK good. Is there anything else that I missed that needs to be fixed up?Cal Jedi (Personal Comm Channel) 18:06, May 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 23) *If you're going to source the article, you need to source the whole thing (except the intro).&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 09:56, May 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 24) *I added the sources to the main article. Did I mess anything up?Cal Jedi (Personal Comm Channel) 14:33, May 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 25) **Nope, nice work. Just note that you do not need the template outside the infobox, and you do not need to list the same reference with the full format after the first one. I went ahead and fixed that for you, just see the history for future reference.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 21:48, May 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 26) Cav:
 * 27) *The History section: the single sentence should be merged into the large paragrapg to create a single paragraph. There are POV issues in the text - calling Bwua'tu a "great" lawyer, for instance. Some context on Tahiri is needed as well, along with the reason for her being on trial.
 * 28) **I think I got it all. Cal Jedi StarForgeSucksGas-KOTOR1.jpg (Personal Comm Channel) 02:07, May 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 29) *Ref tags are not needed in the BTS section for the Allies information as it is self-sourcing. - Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 11:34, May 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 30) **Got it. Is that better? Cal Jedi StarForgeSucksGas-KOTOR1.jpg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:33, May 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 31) Jujiggum
 * 32) *Requires a Conviction update. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 21:01, May 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 33) **I updated the appearances section. But I've been trying to get my hands on a copy of Conviction without success. So if it needs to be expanded further, it might be a couple of days before I can check the book. Cal Jedi StarForgeSucksGas-KOTOR1.jpg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:15, May 28, 2011 (UTC)

Gaxxan brain-slug

 * Nominated by:  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  13:40, May 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Should stay on this page.

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 * 1) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 22:35, May 19, 2011 (UTC)

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 * 1) Axinal
 * 2) * The second sentence of the BTS should probably be sourced to the strategy guide rather than the game.
 * 3) **Oops. It is fixed now.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  21:39, May 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) * One question: The Gaxxa article says that the planet was "believed to be the home of the Gaxxan brain-slug." Does strategy guide make any mention of the planet Gaxxa, specifically a possible connection to the slugs? If so, this should be added to the article; if not, I don't think any change would be necessary.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 19:09, May 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) **I do not own the book, but I will try to find out.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  21:39, May 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) ***This isn't a huge deal for me, but it would be nice to know. Would you be able to find out from the entry in KOTOR, sine the BTS says that they were the "same entry"?&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 01:13, May 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) ****I may be wrong, but I think that the statement in the Gaxxa article is derived from the fact that the authors of The Essential Atlas stated their intention to create homeworlds for various unplaced species, based on the implied context of their names. Thus, this would imply that Gaxxa is the homeworld of the Gaxxan brain-slug. However, I'm not sure exactly where the authors said this. I think that a species expert, like Eyrezer or SavageBob, might be able to help you. --Jinzler 10:44, May 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) *****SavageBob helped me through it. Gaxxa is the homeworld of the Gaxxan brain-slug.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:09, May 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) ******Cool, nice work, Exile.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 22:35, May 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) Ecks Dee
 * 11) *The last sentence of the intro (body? :P) should be moved to be the first / merge it with the first.
 * 12) **Done-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  15:49, May 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 13) *"The Gaxxan brain-slug was first mentioned in BioWare's video game, Star Wars: Knights of the Old Republic" The comma before KOTOR is incorrect, as it makes it sound like the game was BioWare's only game.
 * 14) **Good catch, I fixed it.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  15:49, May 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 15) *How exactly can a source be mentioned only? All sources are technically mentions only. 1358  (Talk)  06:54, May 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 16) **Oops, fixed.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  15:49, May 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 17) Cav:
 * 18) *No infobox? Surely there is one appropriate? - Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 11:36, May 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 19) **Yeah, I just forgot to add it after it was confirmed that Gaxxa was its homeworld. Added. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  15:49, May 27, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

The next article in my series of Jurgan Kalta nominations.-- Exiled Jedi   (Greetings)  13:40, May 17, 2011 (UTC)

Phalanx Route

 * Nominated by: &mdash; TK-999  Era-imp.png( Rise of the Empire ) 09:46, May 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Here you are, SavageBob :).

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 * 1) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 17:50, May 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Solid work, TK. Others may find there to be too many M-dashes, but I wanted to break up the very long sentences a bit. It may be better to break them up further if folks don't like the dashiness. ~  Savage  BOB sig.png 19:27, May 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * OK, nice work, TK!  Imperators II (Talk) 18:41, May 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) *Thanks :) !&mdash; TK-999  Era-imp.png( Rise of the Empire ) 18:45, May 27, 2011 (UTC)

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 * 1) Could we just get some context on Cormit and Telupe? I believe that's all I have. Cool article, TK!&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 02:33, May 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *If there's any precedent consensus and authors' comment regarding this issue&mdash;systems that share their name with a planet have that world located within them&mdash;, then I am willing to add it. However, if there's no such thing, then it would be speculation. Also, there's an ongoing discussion about this in the SH.&mdash; TK-999  Era-imp.png( Rise of the Empire ) 09:17, May 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **So basically what you're saying is that, although TEA says "Prominent planets in Chiss Space include:", then gives a list of the planets and then a map showing their locations, connecting the dots on the map with the descriptions of the planets is speculation. IMHO, that goes completely against common sense. Just a thought.  Imperators II (Talk) 16:07, May 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Realistic fanwankery facts added.&mdash; TK-999  Era-imp.png( Rise of the Empire ) 17:09, May 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) Imperators II
 * 6) * I don't think you should pipelink the Catlia and Tenupe systems, because you don't identify them as such in the first sentence. And why pipelink them in the infobox?
 * 7) * The fact that the route began in the Ascendancy's core territory should be added.
 * 8) * I think the route's location in the Unknown Regions and the Wild Space should be mentioned earlier in the article.
 * 9) * I'm not sure if it's really necessary to reference the fact that the route appeared in TEA, but referencing it to page 222 doesn't make any sense at all. I suggest you remove the references 1.09 and 1.10 in the Bts section.  Imperators II (Talk) 16:07, May 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) **Excess refs removed.&mdash; TK-999  Era-imp.png( Rise of the Empire ) 17:09, May 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) * To be precise, "Chiss Expansionary Defense Force staging planet" has to be sourced to p.221, "jungle world" to p.223, "Chiss" to p.221 and p.223 (because the map doesn't give info about the planets' affiliation), and "star systems" to Appendix (p.229, p.235) (because, imho, the map refers to the planets, not systems).  Imperators II (Talk) 21:15, May 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * 12) **Done. Thanks for the advice!&mdash; TK-999  Era-imp.png( Rise of the Empire ) 11:14, May 25, 2011 (UTC)

Comments
 * 1) Bob
 * 2) * Yay, another hyperlane! :) Can you specify how the junction works out with the Vagaari Corridor? It looks like a T-junction, which I think is important to note, since the two routes meeting at Catlia seems to mark the terminus for the Phalanx Route. ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 17:03, May 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Done. Thanks to all for the reviews and diligence!&mdash; TK-999  Era-imp.png( Rise of the Empire ) 17:09, May 23, 2011 (UTC)

Ebon Squadron

 * Nominated by:  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 03:50, May 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: SWPM

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 * 1) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 21:42, May 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Looks good. Smells good. Feels good. Nice job.&mdash; TK-999  Era-imp.png( Rise of the Empire ) 19:29, May 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) I made a small rewording; take a look. I'd also prefer if the article was intro + bts, but&hellip;  1358  (Talk)  06:42, May 27, 2011 (UTC)

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 * 1) Axinal
 * 2) * Could you perhaps just specify that the supplement was called the Imperial Power-up Pack in the BTS?
 * 3) * Also, if the squadron's era is confirmed as the Rebellion era (as opposed to, say, the Rise of the Empire era or the New Republic era), it should be added to the infobox. If not, the tag should be removed.
 * 4) *Other than that, nice work.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 17:54, May 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) **Done and done.  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 18:01, May 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) *** My second objection, regarding the eras, has not been addressed.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 18:28, May 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) ****Oops. Thought I got it. Thanks for the catch.  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 21:21, May 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) *****No problem, nice work.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 21:42, May 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) Rubedo
 * 10) *Excuse me if this is in that PM database (I have dial-up and the specifics refuse to load), but does the card actually say they have the worst defensive capabilites in the Navy or is that just in comparison to the others in the set. If it is the latter, there's no proof that they are the worst in the entire Navy as nowhere near every squad is represented with a figure. That tidbit should be relegated to a BTS note if this is the case. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 01:51, May 29, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) **Sorry, I worded it poorly. They were by no means the worst in the entire Navy in terms of maneuverability and defense, but among the poorest. I have fixed the wording to be more accurate.  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 04:27, May 29, 2011 (UTC)

Comments
 * There you go, XD. Compacted and concise, intro and bts.  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 09:06, May 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * Much better; thanks. :) 1358  (Talk)  09:38, May 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * Thank you. And thanks for catching the tag I missed, as well.  Gethralkin  Hyperwave  15:57, May 27, 2011 (UTC)

Way of Schesa

 * Nominated by: &mdash; TK-999  Era-imp.png( Rise of the Empire ) 11:56, May 26, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Bob's dream being fulfilled.

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 * 1) Ecks Dee
 * 2) *The Bts is too similar to your other trade route CANs. There is no point in just copypasting the same text into multiple articles. Please reword.
 * 3) **Done.&mdash; TK-999  Era-imp.png( Rise of the Empire ) 11:53, May 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) *"The Phalanx Route first.." I though the article was about the Way of Schesa...
 * 5) **Sorry&mdash;continuity error removed.&mdash; TK-999  Era-imp.png( Rise of the Empire ) 11:53, May 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) *"Chiss Ruling Families—, within" I don't think there should be commas or spaces after an emdash.
 * 7) **Spacing removed.&mdash; TK-999  Era-imp.png( Rise of the Empire ) 11:53, May 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) *Please do not abbreviate the CEDF.
 * 9) **Full name substituted.&mdash; TK-999  Era-imp.png( Rise of the Empire ) 11:53, May 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) *You have two [2] after each other; should one of them be another reference?
 * 11) **Accident; fixed.&mdash; TK-999  Era-imp.png( Rise of the Empire ) 11:53, May 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 12) *Reference 5 has an error: The Essential Atlas, p. i" Page i? 1358  (Talk)  06:49, May 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 13) **Pages around the table of contents are marked with Roman numerals in the Atlas (i-x; non-capitalized). Otherwise, thanks for the review!&mdash; TK-999  Era-imp.png( Rise of the Empire ) 11:53, May 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 14) Axinal
 * 15) *Do you think you could create an article for the civil war in which the "former Ruling Family" fought? Actually, an article for the ruling family itself might be good, too, even if both articles would require conjecture tags. Otherwise, good work.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 00:01, May 28, 2011 (UTC)

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Unidentified musical composition (Wurokkk)

 * Nominated by: MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg(Whatever) 17:24, May 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: I guess this can count for the barn-burner. MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg(Whatever) 17:24, May 27, 2011 (UTC)

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 * 1) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 19:53, May 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Looks good.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  20:20, May 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 00:03, May 28, 2011 (UTC)

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 * 1) ExiledJedi
 * 2) * I'm pretty sure the adventure seed is its first appearance which should be mentioned in the appearances section.
 * 3) *Other than that it looks good.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  20:20, May 27, 2011 (UTC)

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Jrul

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 09:59, May 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: EP3 novel

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 * 1) Wow! I never knew the Girl Scouts were responsible for the crop circle phenomenon. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 18:35, May 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 20:30, May 28, 2011 (UTC)

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 * 1) Axinal
 * 2) * Should the Sources section be an Appearances section?
 * 3) **Yep. Changed.
 * 4) * If Jrul is confirmed male, it should be linked somewhere in the article, as well as added to the categories.
 * 5) **No, simply a stupid error.
 * 6) *Otherwise, nice article.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 10:44, May 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) **Thanks for the review.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 17:27, May 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) Rubedo
 * 9) * You cannot use a quote template in the middle of prose. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 17:58, May 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) **Thought something like that. Fixed.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 18:18, May 28, 2011 (UTC)

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Senin Vant

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 10:30, May 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Maybe expansion possible? Any ideas?

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 * 1) Rubedo
 * 2) * Context on the Battle of Utapau and the Clone Wars. Give a time reference.
 * 3) * You could also explicitly say the Skyforce was the Utapauan air force.
 * 4) * While we're at it, context on Utapau. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 18:49, May 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) **All fixed. Any idea Naru if I can bring him up to 250 words. I added much context, but this stuff is all relevant to him.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 18:59, May 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) ***Deja vu... NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 20:09, May 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) *How do you know if this is a male or female? They look very similar to me.
 * 8) **Said in the book.
 * 9) *Mention the Complete Cross-Sections in the BTS.
 * 10) **Added.
 * 11) *The page in the Cross-section was not about him. Clairify that it was on his ship.
 * 12) **Hope that's better.
 * 13) *His eyes don't look blue to me. They look black. If you include this in the infobox, include it in the article.
 * 14) **Changed and added.
 * 15) *How do you know he was affiliated with the Repuclic? Just because he fought alongside their forces to free his planet, does not mean there was an official partnership. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 20:09, May 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 16) **Agreed.

Comments
 * 1) Has anyone an English version of the Complete Cross Sections to check? In the German version, his name is Senim Vant.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 10:01, May 29, 2011 (UTC)

Tycho

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 10:02, May 29, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Mopping up those small one-mention-articles

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