Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Smoked terrafin loin


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Smoked terrafin loin

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 07:14, February 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Hobbie Klivian-related.

(2 ECs/4 Users/6 Total)
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 * 1) No kidding. QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 16:04, February 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) -Thats all there is? Just as the story of the smoked terrafin loin starts getting epic, it just ends!  OLIOSTER   (talk) 10:28, February 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Menkooroo 16:20, February 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) Intriguingly short for a quality article. :P Just fix Bob's objection. MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg(Whatever) 19:53, February 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) Darth Morrt 08:59, February 26, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) Yum? ~ SavageBob 18:23, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * I don't think that Hobbie's humanness can be sourced to Empire. I think he's just a faceless Rogue in the film ("Hobbie, you still with me?"), with Galaxy Guide 3 identifying him as the "Two fighers against a Star Destroyer?" guy. Menkooroo 16:14, February 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * He was pictured in the movie, so the terrafin test applies. However, I changed the source to the Star Wars Encyclopedia because that identified the Rogue as Hobbie. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 16:19, February 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * As banal as it sounds, I think you need a first sentence that identifies smoked terrafin loin as some sort of food. ~ SavageBob 16:32, February 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * Done. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 20:40, February 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * Better. But is there any reason you're resisting the standard way to set up articles by adding the line, "Smoked terrafin loin was a type of food. In 5 ABY..."? ~ SavageBob 20:46, February 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * With something so minimal, I think it flows better to jast have the one sentence. I'll change it to that if you really want me too, though. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 20:52, February 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * Feh. You were seconded.  NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 17:31, February 26, 2011 (UTC)
 * Could you expand "one day in 5 ABY" with mentioning the next battle or the operation they participated or something? Darth Morrt 23:01, February 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * Done. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 20:40, February 25, 2011 (UTC)

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