Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Jaccoba


 * ''The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.

Jaccoba

 * Nominated by: Kilson Likes PIE 06:30, 30 July 09 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Goes along with my Tarkov nom.

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)
Support
 * 1) After a copy-edit. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 10:55, 30 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) Looks good after a small copyedit. &mdash;Master Jonathan(Jedi Council Chambers) 04:37, 3 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 3)  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  15:24, 8 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 4)  CC7567  (talk) 00:04, 25 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 5)  QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 20:40, 29 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 6) Toprawa and Ralltiir 01:00, 10 August 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Can you specify exactly where in the DVD Jaccoba's name origin was revealed?  CC7567  (talk) 00:52, 3 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) Objection time.
 * 3) * “…was a Wookiee boy” – I’d like to see this replaced with “was a young Wookiee male”, to make it more encyclopaedic when referring to the sexes like this.
 * 4) * Context on grantaloupe in the intro.
 * 5) * Same as first objection in first paragraph of biography.
 * 6) * Same as second objection but in first paragraph of biography.
 * 7) * More variation between the introduction and biography; I’m noticing several phrases repeated. No major changes needed, just a few variations of synonyms and the likes.
 * 8) * This isn’t so much an objection as a question; could the P&T be expanded a tad to include such things as what he wore, his relation with his father? I’ve not seen the sources in question.
 * 9) **Not really, I added something else to the end though.
 * 10) *That’s all for now. Otherwise, well done Kilson. -- Darth tom Imperial Emblem.svg (Imperial Intelligence)  20:10, 5 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 11) **Your objections are addressed, thank you for the review. Kilson Likes PIE 01:57, 17 July 09 (UTC)
 * 12) Toprawa:
 * 13) * My objection here is identical to CC's. I think it would be best to specify in the appropriate reference note where Jaccoba is mentioned in the DVD set. The audio commentary, etc. Toprawa and Ralltiir 04:15, 12 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 14) * You're definitely missing information from The Complete Star Wars Encyclopedia under the "Jaccoba" entry. Toprawa and Ralltiir 04:17, 12 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 15) **OK, your objections are addressed. Kilson Likes PIE 20:41, 27 July 09 (UTC)
 * 16) ***You have done nothing to satisfy my first objection. And to go along with this, the statement regarding how his name was revealed in Insider 90 to be fashioned after Tartakovsky's son is sourced to the DVD release, which makes no sense considering the statement. This should be cleaned up. Toprawa and Ralltiir 21:48, 3 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 17) ****I'm not sure if you saw my earlier Tarkov nom, but I was told by a friend the origin of Tarkov and Jaccoba's names in the DVD. However, I was unable to confirm it, and Mauser later told me that this was untrue. I was able to find and confirm the said info in Insider 90. Kilson Likes PIE 05:08, 05 August 09 (UTC)
 * 18) *I believe that reference specifies it. I think Insider 90 was the first identification of Jaccoba and Tarkov, but I'll check the DVD again. Darth Trayus  Sith_Emblem.svg ( Trayus Academy ) 19:56, 9 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 19) **Please do check, since the DVD was released in 2005, as I understand it, well before the 2006 release of Insider 90. Toprawa and Ralltiir 21:22, 9 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 20) ***Okay, so his name and name only was revealed in the audio commentary on the DVD. I've included that information in the BTS. The earliest source I can find for his name origin is the Insider issue. Darth Trayus  Sith_Emblem.svg ( Trayus Academy ) 00:52, 10 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 21) ****Thank you for salvaging this nom. Toprawa and Ralltiir 01:00, 10 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) ****Thank you for salvaging this nom. Toprawa and Ralltiir 01:00, 10 August 2009 (UTC)

Comments


 * It's the same with Tarkov; I'm going to have to hold off voting until the CW DVD has been checked. Otherwise, the article won't be confirmed to have proper source coverage. If you need help doing this, let me know, but please try.  CC7567  (talk) 23:55, 18 July 2009 (UTC)

Vote to strike Darth tom's objections (AC only)
 * 1) Objector has not checked them for a while, and they're starting to hold up the nomination.  CC7567  (talk) 21:28, 3 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) Toprawa and Ralltiir 21:48, 3 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 3)  Grunny  ( Talk ) 02:33, 4 August 2009 (UTC)

Vote to remove nomination (AC only)
 * The nominator has recently been blocked from editing for a significantly extended period of time. My outstanding objection is a rather simple fix, though it requires actual knowledge of the source to fix it, and so I cannot fix it myself. If someone else would be willing to look into the objection and fix it themselves, I would be more than happy to strike this removal vote and support the nomination. Toprawa and Ralltiir 21:20, 8 August 2009 (UTC)
 * I'm willing to see this one through the process. I'll catch up with you at some point to get some clarity n your objection- I have a pretty good idea of what your looking for, but I just want to make sure first. Darth Trayus  Sith_Emblem.svg ( Trayus Academy ) 09:24, 9 August 2009 (UTC)