Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Gavar Khai


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Gavar Khai

 * Nominated by: Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 14:59, 4 July 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: The Omen wave continues

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1) Nice job, Juicy. Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 16:32, 4 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 2)  CC7567  (talk) 18:51, 4 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) ToRsO bOy 10:05, 5 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 4)  Graestan ( Talk ) 00:47, 8 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) &mdash;Master Jonathan(Jedi Council Chambers) 18:46, 9 July 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) From the Moffship of Grand Moff Tranner:
 * 2) * Seeing as this is such a short article, I think you should include details of the one scene he appears in. If I recall correctly, the slave helping Vestara get ready in that scene is afraid of Gavar - info that needs to be mentioned. Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 15:54, 4 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) **Addressed. I can't find where it says that Murra was afraid of Gavar, but if you can find it, let me know, and I'll add that as well. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 16:25, 4 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) ***My mistake; it wasn't fear, it was confusion. ("The last thing Vestara saw before the door shut was Muura looking at her master with a confused expression on her face.") Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 16:32, 4 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) Getting my feet wet:
 * 6) * Context on Lady Rhea. --ToRsO bOy 06:46, 5 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 7) **Lady is the context :P. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 09:06, 5 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 8) ***And here I thought it was just one link.--ToRsO bOy 10:05, 5 July 2009 (UTC)

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