Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/First Battle of Felucia (Clone Wars)


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First Battle of Felucia (Clone Wars)

 * Nominated by:  CC7567  (talk) 07:29, October 16, 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Let this sit for too long. Probably the only Season Two battle I'm willing to do (or will get to) for a while.

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1) DjMack 22:59, October 16, 2009 (UTC)
 * 2)  Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 05:00, October 17, 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) Jedi Kasra (comlink) 03:14, October 18, 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) Though I would like to see one that didn't start with "Around 22 BBY, during the Clone Wars..." :P.  Grunny  ( Talk ) 06:03, October 19, 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) *Advice taken. :P  CC7567  (talk) 06:51, October 19, 2009 (UTC)
 * 6) --Eyrezer 01:48, October 29, 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) I think it could be made a bit clearer that Tano finally obeyed Skywalker's orders. The fact that "he ordered her" doesn't necessarily mean she got onto the gunship, especially since she initially resisted those orders.  Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 19:29, October 16, 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) *Addressed, thanks for the review.  CC7567  (talk) 23:26, October 16, 2009 (UTC)

Comments
 * Yes, I'm aware that it's flirting with the 1,000 word count requirement for FAs, but I'd like to see it remain stable without the need for fluff before I take it further.  CC7567  (talk) 07:29, October 16, 2009 (UTC)