Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/The Lost Twenty: Dooku's Rise


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The Lost Twenty: Dooku's Rise

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 09:33, December 2, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: 2

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 * I think you'll have to source the info about The Clone Wars and 22 BBY to something else, as the HoloNet site doesn't mention them. Ditto the fact that Dooku left the Jedi Order.
 * Can you mention that Dooku had emerged as the Leader of the Separatist movement at the time (with proper sourcing)? That's presumably what his "rise" is about. Menkooroo 16:59, December 3, 2010 (UTC)
 * This goes or all these book noms: I think the way you have it worded is awkward. I'd think something along the lines of "The Lost Twenty: Dooku's Rise was a book that was on sale in 22 BBY. In that year, it held the number-two slot on the HoloNet News bestseller list." Something like that. In other words, I think "was a number two bestselling book" sounds a bit awkward, and I think it's important to not what bestseller list it was on. ~ SavageBob 05:03, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

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