Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Jastus Farr


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Jastus Farr

 * Nominated by: Jedi Kasra (comlink) 18:20, January 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: A victim of the Jedi Purge. Trying to stay busy&hellip;

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1) Very good'n'clean. Xd1358  Talk 19:42, January 16, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2)  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  17:00, January 24, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) Toprawa and Ralltiir 21:27, January 26, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) &mdash;Master Jonathan(Jedi Council Chambers) 20:15, January 31, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5)  Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 22:59, February 2, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) " As they prepared to kill the Dark Lord of the Sith, members of the 501st Legion of stormtroopers..." Perhaps "stormtroopers of the 501st legion instead? Xd1358  Talk 19:36, January 16, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) *Please try it.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 19:39, January 16, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) Toprawa's notes:
 * 4) *Not really an objection, but I'd like to see you avoiding this rather ridiculous style of obsessive-inclusive pipelinking, like Darth Vader and Jedi Master, for example. It's really just unnecessary. Darth Vader and Jedi Master work just fine. Toprawa and Ralltiir 21:27, January 26, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) **I'll avoid this in the future. I just feel that these things need to be linked at the first opportunity.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 21:09, January 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * 6) Why would they prepare for battle? "As Farr and the Jedi prepared for battle&hellip;" It's not very clear why they think they're going to be attacked.  Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 20:15, January 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * 7) *Please take a look at it.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 17:04, February 2, 2010 (UTC)
 * 8) **You'll need to do a better job of formatting your status articles and nominations than that, Kasra. I'm curious how you failed to notice that you've linked the exact same things two sentences in a row. Please fix. Toprawa and Ralltiir 17:53, February 2, 2010 (UTC)
 * 9) ***I apologize, Tope. I honestly don't know how I missed that. Fixed.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 18:00, February 2, 2010 (UTC)
 * 10) **** "Revealed" is reptetive. Also, the exact reason for which Vader was coming isn't very clear. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 18:14, February 2, 2010 (UTC)
 * 11) *****Please try it.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 22:53, February 2, 2010 (UTC)

Comments


 * Thanks to Master Jonathan for the copy-edit.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 18:20, January 15, 2010 (UTC)