Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Lio


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Lio

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 11:02, August 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Lee continues his bombardment of the CAnom page

(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 15:12, August 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Superb.&mdash;  20:21, August 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) -- 1358  (Talk) 19:27, August 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4)  SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 14:20, August 31, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Jujiggum
 * 2) * Every single sentence in the article begins with "Lio". Please reword some of them.
 * 3) **Reworded.
 * 4) * Are there any quotes relating to him? Does the novel mention him only in prose, or do Kal and/or Walon actually speak about him at some point?
 * 5) **No, the just mention his name together with several others. But this sentence consists from several names.
 * 6) ***So, in other words, Kal/Walon do speak about him, in a sentence naming several other clones? If this is the case, you should still add that quote. It doesn't matter if there are other names involved, too; it still applies to Lio. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 15:01, August 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * 7) ****Added.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:09, August 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * 8) *That's all. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 14:52, August 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * 9) **Thank you.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 14:55, August 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * 10) Xd1358
 * 11) * That Lio was the nickname of a clone trooper can not be sourced to the databank entry.
 * 12) **Fixed.
 * 13) *-- 1358  (Talk) 11:05, August 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * 14) **Thanks. (Once again)  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 13:00, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

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