Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Daye Azur-Jamin


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Daye Azur-Jamin

 * Nominated by: -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 13:39, 25 June 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

(6 Inqs/0 Users/6 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Greyman ( Talk ) 18:59, 25 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 2)  Graestan ( Talk ) 01:15, 29 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 3)  Master Aban Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 06:12, 7 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) I always thought he died in Tinian on Trial.  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  22:22, 10 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) Toprawa and Ralltiir 02:56, 13 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 6) Someone queue this mechanized freak. :-P --  Darth Culator  (Talk) 03:08, 14 July 2008 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) I think precedent demands putting Image:Njo_dayeazur-jamin.jpg in the infobox, since it's the most recent canonical headshot and the one that's there is essentially the same quality. --  Darth Culator  (Talk) 23:03, 28 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) *I'm seeing plenty of FAs that don't use the most recent canonical image, because there are other images more suitable for the infobox. This seems a similar case to me. The AJ image is more detailed, he's not wearing a hood, and he's looking at the "camera." -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 23:34, 28 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) **Eh, fair enough. It just seems a bit overloaded as it is, and the current infobox image is redundant if you keep Image:OnlyDroidsServeTheMaker-title-AJ10p16.jpg in there. -- Darth Culator  (Talk) 23:48, 28 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) ***I altered it a bit, and removed the redundant image. Better? -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 20:21, 9 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) From the Lava Refinery of Chack Jadson
 * 6) * Do we have an article for the slime Woyiq used?
 * 7) **Nope, unfortunately. The scene is told from Daye's POV, and he's too dazed to identify it other than "slime."
 * 8) * "...knowing Wookiees didn't live the most quiet lives." Can you rephrase this? A little less cliche and clarity would be nice.
 * 9) **Done.
 * 10) * "...attempting to kill her capacity to fall in love again." Please change this also. It sounds cheesy.
 * 11) **Blame Kathy Tyers for the cheesiness. :-P I've reworded it, though there's only so much I could do with the info provided.
 * 12) * You use "ultimately" in two consecutive sentences; the last two in the Bio in fact.
 * 13) **Heh. Axed one.
 * 14) *Nice article.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 01:38, 4 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 15) **Thank you. And thanks for the review. :-) -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 20:21, 9 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 16) Toprawa:
 * 17) * I'd like to see a little bit added to the bio specifying the anti-energy field deal was meant to be used for stormtrooper armor. The intro specifies this, but not the bio.
 * 18) **Specified.
 * 19) * I'm not sure we need the brackets for the ellipses in your quote. Just the dots should suffice.
 * 20) **Brackets removed.
 * 21) * Can we link a battle to this invasion? "the Hutt homeworld of Nal Hutta was eventually conquered and invaded by the Yuuzhan Vong"
 * 22) **Linked.
 * 23) * Please clarify what this region is. A planetary region somewhere, a region of space, for example? "began investigating the region known as the Cloak of the Sith" Toprawa and Ralltiir 15:59, 11 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 24) **Clarified. Thanks for the review. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 18:49, 12 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 25) ***Glad to help. Toprawa and Ralltiir 02:56, 13 July 2008 (UTC)

Comments
 * More images are on the way. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 13:39, 25 June 2008 (UTC)
 * The only question I have is...was he or was he not redeemed?-- Goodwood [[Image:Redstarbird.svg|20px]] ( Alliance Intelligence ) 09:40, 26 June 2008 (UTC)
 * Read the BtS; it's an RPG scenario, and it's up to the gamemaster/players if he's redeemed or if they have to kill him. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 11:02, 26 June 2008 (UTC)