Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations

 This page is for the nomination of "comprehensive articles." For a list of "comprehensive articles," see Category:Wookieepedia comprehensive articles.


 * Comprehensive article nominations history
 * Comprehensive article nominations archiving checklist

What is a "comprehensive article?"

A "comprehensive article" is an article that contains all information regarding the topic. Often, "comprehensive articles" cannot reach Featured or Good Article status due to their limited content. This process is intended to recognize articles that contain all relevant canon information, yet are still under the 250 word limit required for a Good Article. The purpose of this is twofold&mdash;firstly, to help users distinguish what is a stub, and what is merely a short article with no further relevant material to be added, and, more importantly, to highlight for the reader when they are reading something that has been judged definitely "comprehensive"&mdash;that is, a guarantee to the reader that whatever they are reading contains the sum total of all available content.

Nominations and promotions of the Comprehensive article process are overseen by a collective of users known as the "EduCorps," which is made up of the Inquisitorius, the AgriCorps, and various other experienced users who are considered qualified to adequately judge the nominated material.

Lucasfilm Ltd. and its many licensees continue to expand the Star Wars universe. Since new information might become available, it may be necessary to revoke a "comprehensive article's" status. A forum will be used to nominate articles that have fallen out-of-date. Members of the EduCorps will then post a warning template on that page, and a grace period of one week will be instituted in which the article can be improved. If there is a significant amount of new information, it is likely that once updated, the article will become eligible for Good article status, and thereby ineligible for Comprehensive article status.

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An article must&hellip;


 * 1) &hellip;be well-written and detailed.
 * 2) &hellip;be unbiased, non-point of view.
 * 3) &hellip;be sourced with all available sources and appearances.
 * 4) &hellip;follow the Manual of Style, Layout Guide, and all other policies on Wookieepedia. This is, of course, within reason. If a topic only has a very limited degree of content that cannot be divided up into the relevant article sections, it is not required that it follow the Layout Guide precisely. This is to be judged on a case-by-case basis.
 * 5) &hellip;following the review process, be stable, i.e., does not change significantly from day to day and is not the subject of ongoing edit wars. This does not apply to vandalism and protection or semi-protection as a result of vandalism.
 * 6) &hellip;not be tagged with any sort of improvement tags (i.e. more sources, expand, etc).
 * 7) &hellip;have no redlinks.
 * 8) &hellip;have all relevant canon information presented.
 * 9) &hellip;be completely referenced for all available material and sources. See Sourcing for more information. While this is not required for an article possessing a singular source, it is encouraged, as it provides both uniformity and a good infrastructure should the topic be referenced in any future materials.
 * 10) &hellip;have all quotes and images sourced.
 * 11) &hellip;provide at least one relevant quote on the article if available.
 * 12) &hellip;include a "Behind the scenes" section for in-universe articles.
 * 13) &hellip;counting the introduction, the article body, and "Behind the scenes" material, must not exceed 250 words in length (not including captions, quotes, or headers, etc). Any articles exceeding the limit should be taken to the Good article nominations page for consideration.
 * 14) &hellip;if the nominated article reaches 200 words or greater, the nominator must either provide an intro or draft an intro and provide a link to the revision in the nomination, showing that the intro does not elevate the article over 250 words. Exceptions can be made for articles wherein the majority of the text is in the "Behind the scenes" section.

How to nominate:


 * 1) First, nominate an article you find is worthy of comprehensive status, putting it at the bottom of the list below. Nominated articles must meet all thirteen requirements stated above.
 * 2) Add CAnom at the top of the article you are nominating.
 * 3) Be sure to place sign in the "Nominated by" line when the nomination is posted for voting.
 * 4) Others will object to the nomination if they disagree that the article is good enough; they will then supply reasons for doing so, and ways to improve the article in accordance with the established rules.
 * 5) Nominators and supporters will adjust the article until the objectors (with reasonable objections) are satisfied. Objectors may also make alterations&mdash;if there is any reason for contention on a given point, it should be settled in a civil manner in the nomination field itself.
 * 6) Users may not vote on their own articles.
 * 7) There is no limit to the amount of nominations a given user can submit at any given time.

How to vote:


 * 1) Before doing anything, be sure to read the article completely, keeping a sharp eye out for mistakes.
 * 2) Afterward, compare the article to the criteria listed above, and then either support or object the article's nomination.
 * 3) *If you object, please supply concrete reasons for doing so, and how it can be improved.
 * 4) As stated above, any objections will be looked upon by the nominator, supporters, and anyone willing to improve the article, and action will be taken to please the objectors. Do not strike other users' objections; it is up to the objector to review the changes and strike if they are satisfied.
 * 5) There are several ways in which an article can receive the required number of votes. Within a 48-hour period of nomination, only EduCorps votes will count towards the total, although anyone may choose to vote in that window. If two members of the EduCorps support a nomination in that window, and there are no outstanding objections, the article can be considered a "Comprehensive article" and be tagged with the template 48 hours after the initial nomination.  The talk page will also be tagged with the CA template. When the 48 hours are up, any user's votes will contribute towards the total. If one EduCorps member has voted for an article after a week, three regular votes will be required. After the 48 hour period, an article can still also pass with just two EduCorps votes.
 * 6) Once a nomination is successful, it will be placed on the Comprehensive article list. Instructions on how to archive nominations, successful or otherwise, can be found here. Anyone can archive a nomination&mdash;just make sure it has the correct number of votes, has been nominated for at least a week (or 48 hours if there are two EC votes), and that there are absolutely no outstanding objections. If you are not sure how to do this, just ask, and someone will likely be more than willing to help you. Also, if you think you can slip one past us, think again&mdash;someone is always watching you.

All nominations will be considered idle and are subject to instantaneous removal by EduCorps members if objections are not addressed, or at least not answered, after a period of 1 week.

Please remember to archive your nomination beforehand if you plan on taking it to the Good Article Nominations page.

Battle of the Gizer system

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 23:22, June 27, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: In which a duck is dissected.

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) Looks good. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 20:41, June 28, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  12:40, July 5, 2012 (UTC)

Object

Comments
 * I'm going on a week-long enforced vacation. Any objections left will be addressed upon my return. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 17:46, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

BTL-S3B Y-wing starfighter

 * Nominated by: 501st  dogma ( talk ) 14:45, June 29, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Found this in Warfare, decided to nom

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) Did a few minor fixes. Good work. Gal-icon.jpg  OLIOSTER  (talk) 14:33, July 4, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  12:38, July 5, 2012 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Annexation of the northern Hutt territories

 * Nominated by: 501st  dogma ( talk ) 14:52, June 29, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Trasemene got too long for CAN, so Annexation beat him to being nommed

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 11:17, July 4, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  12:36, July 5, 2012 (UTC)

Object
 * I see the map and why you thought to capitalize "northern," but that is not a proper noun. It was merely the start of the sentence. There is no political area called the "Northern Hutt territories." The Imperials claimed Hutt territories that were in the north. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 07:05, July 2, 2012 (UTC)
 * Ok, moving the page to Annexation of the northern Hutt territories. There, done. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 12:23, July 2, 2012 (UTC)
 * Judging from the map arrow pointing to it, I would be inclined to say that the annexation was considered part of the Insurrection, so the "post" in the infobox would be unnecesary. However, if the prose says the annexation was "after" the insurrection then that line shoukd be removed from the infobox entirely. It was either part of the conflict or it was not. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 06:15, July 3, 2012 (UTC)
 * Trasemene ended the Insurrection, but the annexation was a direct result of the Insurrection. Would'nt it be okay to leave the "Post-Insurrection" part because it was an important factor? 501st  dogma ( talk ) 11:57, July 3, 2012 (UTC)
 * No, because it was not part of the insurrection itself. It was a big chunk of the aftermath, as in after the conflict had already concluded. That infobox field shoulld not have "pre" or "post" anything. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 18:51, July 3, 2012 (UTC)
 * Got rid of Post, added Reconquest of the Rim as that was the general conflict. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 18:59, July 3, 2012 (UTC)
 * That works. Now the Reconquest of the Rim needs to be explicitly mentioned since that name is canonical. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 20:33, July 3, 2012 (UTC)
 * Better? 501st  dogma ( talk ) 20:38, July 3, 2012 (UTC)
 * It was going to be a quick fix, so I did it myself. I ended up changing the article's structuring more thanI wanted too in the process though, how things are introduced. The issue was that both the Insurrection and the annexation were part of the Reconquest. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 11:17, July 4, 2012 (UTC)
 * Ok, thanks for changing it. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 11:21, July 4, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

Serrian salt

 * Nominated by:  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  04:26, July 4, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Dex's Diner!

(1 ECs/2 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) But is it kosher? XD&hellip;&mdash;  06:00, July 4, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) 501st  dogma ( talk ) 11:02, July 4, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) <- Omicron (Leave a message at the BEEP! ) 00:45, July 12, 2012 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Racsan break

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 21:12, July 6, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: I like it when I actualy find my old projects.

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) Nice work.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  01:29, July 7, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) 501st  dogma ( talk ) 21:48, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Object

Comments
 * I'm going on a week-long enforced vacation. Any objections left will be addressed upon my return. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 17:47, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Battle of Contruum

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 02:05, July 8, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: In which your desideratum is destroyed.

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) Wow, they referenced one of these battles again?-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  04:31, July 10, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) *I KNOW!~ Finding that made my day. :D NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 04:39, July 10, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) 501st  dogma ( talk ) 12:09, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

Object

Comments
 * I'm going on a week-long enforced vacation. Any objections left will be addressed upon my return. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 17:47, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Unidentified Coruscant Police officer (Panza Hondi)

 * Nominated by:  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  18:36, July 9, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: WP:VG!

(0 ECs/2 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) Coruscantfan (Talk) 23:20, July 9, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) 501st  dogma ( talk ) 12:11, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

Object

Comments
 * Coruscant Police is another name for the Coruscant Police Force, so it should be capitalized in the title.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  18:36, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Stewfruit

 * Nominated by: LelalMekha (talk) 00:01, July 10, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Pretty short and silly. But it is comprehensive, after all. :-p

(2 ECs/2 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 19:07, July 10, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) Welcome to the CA food club.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  12:57, July 11, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) 501st  dogma ( talk ) 12:12, July 14, 2012 (UTC)
 * 4) Heh.&mdash;  14:19, July 20, 2012 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) You had me at "silly"
 * 2) * There is a Food infobox and you could throw "Fruit" in there somewhere, at least. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 02:12, July 10, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) **To be honest, I didn't even know there was a food infobox&mdash;very little food articles seem to have it. There you are anyway. (I'm not sure under which parameter "fruit" could go, though...) --LelalMekha (talk) 09:00, July 10, 2012 (UTC)
 * 4) ***It's a newer infobox and you're in rare company with people who bring them to status. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 19:07, July 10, 2012 (UTC)
 * 5) Exiled Jedi
 * 6) * You should mention that it was eaten by Corellians many years before whenever the quote was. We can't assume that they ate the fruit later since the quote only mentions ancient times.
 * 7) **Fixed. --LelalMekha (talk) 09:00, July 10, 2012 (UTC)
 * 8) * Unless the book mentions Lord Nyax as a bogeyman you should probably refer to him in another manner. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  04:42, July 10, 2012 (UTC)
 * 9) **Actually, that's a perfect use of that word. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 05:02, July 10, 2012 (UTC)
 * 10) ***Okay, I was thinking that it was some sort of real-life mythological figure that we shouldn't use in the in-universe section.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  05:07, July 10, 2012 (UTC)
 * 11) Big Food
 * 12) *Could you add more categorys?
 * 13) *Good work, ' ℬiggestℒeo ' (ℳeeting ℛoom)
 * 14) **Just thought I'd chime in and note that there are no more applicable categories. Menkooroo (talk) 17:01, July 23, 2012 (UTC)
 * 15) Small food
 * 16) *"Edible by Humans" is exclusive to the infobox. Normally I'd say "add it to the article body," but is there any evidence for it? The quote just says "children" and "Corellia;" aliens like Selonians and Drall live on Corellia too. Menkooroo (talk) 17:01, July 23, 2012 (UTC)
 * 17) **Well, I most certainly didn't expect that one... Well, Lord Nyax is a Corellian tradition. I mean a folk tale figure of the Corellian Humans. There are aliens on Corellia, granted, but Humans are still the dominant species. --LelalMekha (talk) 17:14, July 23, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

Unidentified Chief of Detectives

 * Nominated by: Coruscantfan (Talk) 01:06, July 10, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Who would want this job in a trillion population city?

(1 ECs/2 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) Looks good save for Exiled's objection. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 12:14, July 14, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  12:36, July 15, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) ' ℬiggestℒeo ' (ℳeeting ℛoom) 00:07, July 18, 2012 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * You should probably create an article for the Bothan ambassador. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  13:00, July 11, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) **Done. Coruscantfan (Talk) 04:44, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

Battle of Sagma (Imperial Period)

 * Nominated by: 501st  dogma ( talk ) 15:41, July 14, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

(1 ECs/0 Users/1 Total)
Support
 * 1) Good work.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  23:20, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Officer's Candidate School

 * Nominated by: Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 17:12, July 14, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: First CAN in a while.

(1 ECs/0 Users/1 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  15:35, July 20, 2012 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * This article might need to be merged with Officer Candidate School. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:48, July 16, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) **Yes I was aware of that article. However, does anything state that was on Carida? It could be a different institution. That school you mentioned trained officers of the Galactic Republic FWIW. Perhaps a BTS note talking about that school, but mentioning no canon source confirms if they're the same? Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 21:56, July 16, 2012 (UTC)
 * 4) ***I don't have the source it was mentioned in so I'm not sure, sorry.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  22:37, July 16, 2012 (UTC)
 * 5) ****It would appear, just from looking at that article, that all that is known is that Carlist Rieekan, Jan Dodonna, Adar Tallon and Crix Madine attended it. I'd say leave them as separate pages unless otherwise proven. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 23:17, July 16, 2012 (UTC)
 * 6) * A BTS note would probably suffice. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  00:01, July 17, 2012 (UTC)
 * 7) **Done. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 00:58, July 17, 2012 (UTC)

Comments


 * For WP:AMB. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 17:12, July 14, 2012 (UTC)
 * Also, should I add any BTS note about real life OCS institutions? Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 17:12, July 14, 2012 (UTC)
 * I think that would be a good idea.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  23:21, July 14, 2012 (UTC)
 * Done. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 03:10, July 15, 2012 (UTC)
 * I know this sounds kind of silly, but you are going to need to source that BTS note.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  12:32, July 15, 2012 (UTC)
 * Done with Citeweb. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 19:47, July 15, 2012 (UTC)
 * I don't think that you can treat Wikipedia as a valid source. Maybe a link to an OCS site like this?-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:48, July 16, 2012 (UTC)
 * Taken care of. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 22:04, July 17, 2012 (UTC)

Kobarian swamp dog

 * Nominated by: 501st  dogma ( talk ) 17:27, July 14, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:These old Marvel comics are just so awesome.

(1 ECs/0 Users/1 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  02:24, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * "They presumably dwelt in the swamps of Kobaria at one time." Could you reword this so it sounds less speculatory? -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  23:24, July 14, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) **The quote in the article contains the only information related to the dog. Is it ok to "speculate" that they dwelt in the swamp at one point because its name is a swamp dog? If not, I'll remove it. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 23:37, July 14, 2012 (UTC)
 * 4) ***I think it would be fine to say that they lived in swamps. Its no different than one of my currents noms which says that a "veggie" omelet contained vegetables with just the name to go by.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  23:49, July 14, 2012 (UTC)
 * 5) ****Done. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 00:55, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

Siege of Zygerria

 * Nominated by: 501st  dogma ( talk ) 20:37, July 14, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Doesn't look like the Zygerrians had much choice in negotiating peace.

(1 ECs/0 Users/1 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  02:23, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * Could you break up or reword the first sentence to improve the flow of the article? -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  23:28, July 14, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) **Mixed around for better flow. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 23:34, July 14, 2012 (UTC)
 * 4) ***I tweaked a few things.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  23:56, July 14, 2012 (UTC)
 * 5) ****That looks a lot better that my version. :) 501st  dogma ( talk ) 00:55, July 15, 2012 (UTC)
 * 6) * Shouldn't the Raids on Tervisses be mentioned in the infobox in the following section? -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  23:56, July 14, 2012 (UTC)
 * 7) **Done. Thanks for pointing that out. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 00:53, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

Raids on Tervissis

 * Nominated by: 501st  dogma ( talk ) 16:54, July 15, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  19:02, July 15, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) ' ℬiggestℒeo ' (ℳeeting ℛoom) 23:58, July 17, 2012 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Wanted Poster: Trandoshan

 * Nominated by: Gal-icon.jpg  OLIOSTER  (talk) 14:52, July 16, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: HUSSVETH-03!

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) HUSSVETH-03? Wha..? 501st  dogma ( talk ) 15:02, July 16, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  22:35, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * I think that you should probably create an article for the Trandoshan. With the information about why he is wanted I think that there should be plenty to create an article. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:42, July 16, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) **Done. Bit of a funny note, an article did exist for him but was deleted as its name was based on speculation. I have recreated it at a conjectural title. Gal-icon.jpg  OLIOSTER  (talk) 22:32, July 16, 2012 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Probably doesn't happen often.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  22:35, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

Invasion of Tervissis

 * Nominated by: 501st  dogma ( talk ) 15:26, July 16, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

(1 ECs/0 Users/1 Total)
Support
 * 1) Nice work.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  16:44, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Organized Crime Unit

 * Nominated by: Coruscantfan (Talk) 05:15, July 17, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Undercover guys

(0 ECs/2Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) 501st  dogma ( talk ) 12:35, July 17, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) Plagueis327 (talk) 02:42, July 21, 2012 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) *You need to mention Galactic City in the body of the article.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  02:34, July 21, 2012 (UTC)

Comments
 * 1) Not that's its realy an objection, but can clone commandos realy be considered clone troopers? 501st  dogma ( talk ) 12:35, July 17, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) *Yes, they are specialized clone troopers. Coruscantfan (Talk) 18:22, July 17, 2012 (UTC)

Traffic Division

 * Nominated by: Coruscantfan (Talk) 06:11, July 17, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Who doesn't love getting stopped by a traffic cop?

(0 ECs/1 Users/1 Total)
Support
 * 1) 197 words-no need for intro! 501st  dogma ( talk ) 22:10, July 17, 2012 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) 501st
 * 2) * Could you link Galactic City somewhere in the body, as it's currently only in the info box.
 * 3) **Done.
 * 4) * Context for Jabi Town? 501st  dogma ( talk ) 12:40, July 17, 2012 (UTC)
 * 5) **Added. Coruscantfan (Talk) 18:25, July 17, 2012 (UTC)
 * 6) Exiled Jedi
 * 7) *Could you provide context for the hostage situation and the riots?-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  02:37, July 21, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

Coruscant Security Force Senior Command

 * Nominated by: Coruscantfan (Talk) 03:53, July 18, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Senior? As opposed to... Junior Command?

(0 ECs/1 Users/1 Total)
Support
 * 1) 501st  dogma ( talk ) 14:08, July 18, 2012 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) *You're going to need to mention the dates in the body of the article.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  02:41, July 21, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

Vodokrene

 * Nominated by: Eyrezer (talk) 12:43, July 21, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) Vodokrene, the Bothan version of Vodka. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 12:36, July 23, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  17:20, July 23, 2012 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) 501st
 * 2) * Context for Bothawui?
 * 3) *That's all. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 14:01, July 21, 2012 (UTC)
 * 4) **Done. --Eyrezer (talk) 08:06, July 23, 2012 (UTC)
 * 5) Exiled Jedi
 * 6) * Is it clear from the book that the cases hold Vodokrene? I was wondering if the cases could have been made from the substance. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  22:43, July 22, 2012 (UTC)
 * 7) **I believe it is clear, yes. --Eyrezer (talk) 08:06, July 23, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

Sonic Screwdriver

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 21:16, July 21, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

(0 ECs/2 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) Looks good to go to me. It's got all the info it's likely ever to have and reads really well, giving the reader a good slant on the subject. OtterSurf (talk) 21:55, July 21, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) Sonic the Screwdriver 501st  dogma ( talk ) 11:29, July 22, 2012 (UTC)

Object
 * How bou' use Allston's twitter tweet as the BTS quote why not? Menkooroo (talk) 21:29, July 21, 2012 (UTC)
 * I had thought about it and figured it would seem out of context, but, looking again, I don't think it's so bad now. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 21:47, July 21, 2012 (UTC)
 * One thing. The info box says "Found on: Across the galaxy". Is there anything you can do to make it fit better? 501st  dogma ( talk ) 22:14, July 21, 2012 (UTC)
 * Not that I can see. I'm not writing it as "the galactic disc." Really, it's not "on" that either. It's in it. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 23:15, July 21, 2012 (UTC)
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) *Since the article's subject is from a Fate of the Jedi novel I assume that it is from the Legacy era, but in the article you show in the era tags and infobox that it happened in the Rise of the Empire era. In any event, I think you should mention the timeframe in the body of the article.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  17:25, July 23, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) **Wups. An artifact from when it was merged with the Servodriver. Fixed. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 19:06, July 23, 2012 (UTC)

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 * By the way, WP:LE. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 05:20, July 23, 2012 (UTC)

Battle of Farstine

 * Nominated by: 501st  dogma ( talk ) 22:37, July 21, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Farstine, the home of Frankenstien

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 * 1)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  18:00, July 23, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 19:15, July 23, 2012 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Ingolstadt
 * 2) * "The battle was part of the Five Veils Campaign, an Imperial campaign launched against members of the Trade Federation, led by Customs Vizier Marath Vooro, who refused to..." The mention of Marath Vooroo is an apositive withing an apositive, making this a run-on sentence. Break it up. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 05:38, July 23, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) **Better? 501st  dogma ( talk ) 13:31, July 23, 2012 (UTC)
 * 4) Exiled Jedi
 * 5) * Could you make it clearer that Vooro is captured during a battle? -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  17:28, July 23, 2012 (UTC)
 * 6) **Done. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 17:57, July 23, 2012 (UTC)

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Battle of the Hook Nebula

 * Nominated by: 501st  dogma ( talk ) 17:18, July 22, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:No comment

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 * 1)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  17:29, July 23, 2012 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Rubedo
 * 2) *Could you clarify that the Imperial forces moved from Farstine to the Hook Nebula?
 * 3) *Article for the treaty? NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 06:07, July 23, 2012 (UTC)
 * 4) **Both done. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 13:31, July 23, 2012 (UTC)

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Nourishing Vita-Caps

 * Nominated by: Gal-icon.jpg  OLIOSTER  (talk) 16:51, July 23, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Its got electrolytes, I bet.

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 * 1) 501st  dogma ( talk ) 16:58, July 23, 2012 (UTC)

Object Comments
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) *Please mention them as vitamin caplets in the main article and perhaps create an article for vitamin caplets.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  17:33, July 23, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) **They're never actually called this. I described them as such because of the Vita-Caps in the name. Should I still do this? Gal-icon.jpg  OLIOSTER  (talk) 17:42, July 23, 2012 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Hmmm, maybe just calling them vitamins would be best.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  17:59, July 23, 2012 (UTC)