Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/First Duel in the Iron Citadel


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First Duel in the Iron Citadel

 * Nominated by: —Tommy9281 [[Image:Red lightsaber.png|20px]] ( Peace is a lie ) 14:05, 26 October 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Naturally, in the spirit of Wookieeproject TOTJ.

(5 Inqs/1 Users/6 Total)
Support
 * 1)  IFYLOFD  ( And now, young Skywalker, you will die. ) 23:02, 28 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) Thefourdotelipsis 08:56, 21 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 3)  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  23:07, 13 December 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) Cull Tremayne 16:00, 26 December 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) I can't wait to see that picture on the main page. :-P  Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 20:16, 4 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 6) Green Tentacle (Talk) 19:18, 5 January 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) From the desk of Atarumaster88
 * 2) * "instead grew suspicious of the Jedi's seemingly benevolent swagger" the last few words could use some tweaking, IMO
 * 3) **Should be good now.
 * 4) * "on a path from which there was no return" Some would beg to differ.
 * 5) **Should be good now.
 * 6) *Small objections overall. Have a Super Terrific Friendly Un-frustrating day. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 17:36, 2 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 7) **Appreciate the review, brother. —Tommy9281 [[Image:Dark Side Master TotG.jpg|17px]] ( Peace is a lie ) 02:03, 4 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 8) "He sent the droid off, and then surrendered himself to the intimacies of Aleema's seductive thrall." We're doing romance fiction now? :P Please reword. Green Tentacle (Talk) 19:08, 5 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 9) *Lol, addressed. Appreciate the review, GT. Let me know if more is required, please. —Tommy9281 [[Image:Dark Side Master TotG.jpg|17px]] ( Peace is a lie ) 19:12, 5 January 2009 (UTC)

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