Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Atrivis sector


 * ''The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a featured article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.

(5 Inqs/1 User/6 Total)
Support
 * 1) --Eyrezer 03:54, 17 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) Nicely done.  Greyman  http://images.wikia.com/central/images/9/9c/Jan.png ( Talk ) 22:31, 18 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) Precedent setting! --  Darth Culator  (Talk) 01:18, 19 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) Thefourdotelipsis 09:32, 19 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) Cull Tremayne 01:36, 21 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 6) Toprawa and Ralltiir 04:06, 22 April 2008 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) Toprawa:
 * 2) * I've created a red link for this Mantooine massacre. I'm willing to bet an article exists, for which you can provide a pipelink. If not, please create an article for this: "yet it achieved infamy due to an early Imperial massacre on the planet."
 * 3) **Yeah, I piped that to the Battle of Mantooine which will be de-stubbed in the coming days. --Eyrezer 04:26, 21 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) * Does Commencement truly say that little is known? Or does information just not exist? If the case is the latter, this should be removed: "Little is known of the formation or early history of the Atrivis sector."
 * 5) **It doesn't say that. Rather I wanted to convey that it is unknown when Atrivis sector was formed, and as such it is not clear that Moltok was "in" Atrivis sector at that point. I'll edit this and more clearly get across the point and when I do, I'll note it here. --Eyrezer 04:26, 21 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 6) ***Edited
 * 7) * I see no mention of the boosqueak of Fedje, which comes from the Rebellion info I gave you. Should be mentioned somewhere.
 * 8) **I've added a brief mention of it in an early section. I'm not sure that an article at sector level needs to make mention of all the plants and animals in a sector, or indeed of all the individuals native to the region; that is more properly the domain of system or planet articles, IMO. Otherwise I will need to also mention the creatures of Despayre as well as the wuppa flower, etc. The boosqueak is described as rare so I have less problem including a mention of that. --Eyrezer 04:26, 21 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 9) * Very minor and quite probably irrelevant, but you may want to include Rebellion's wide array of spelling (errors) for the sector.
 * 10) **Done, and redirected just in case ;)
 * 11) * Also, after looking over this again, this is more of suggestion since it isn't an actual rule, but it would be nice if you could also kill that Generis red link in the battle template. It just looks kind of messy. Toprawa and Ralltiir 20:09, 20 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 12) **Done
 * 13) *Excellent read. Also, I may be able to grab the Rebellion screen shot for ya. Remind me if I forget. Toprawa and Ralltiir 19:56, 20 April 2008 (UTC)

Comments

Approved by Inquisitorius 04:12, 22 April 2008 (UTC) 
 * This is our first sector FA nom, and so is somewhat uncharted territory. I've tried to keep it analogous in structure to our planets FAs, differing where appropriate. Finally, if anyone has the game Rebellion, a screenshot of the map of Atrivis sector would be useful to place in the BTS. --Eyrezer 05:32, 17 April 2008 (UTC)
 * The only recommendation I can think of is maybe moving the "Battles" template into a more pertinent section of the article, like the "History." Thefourdotelipsis 09:32, 19 April 2008 (UTC)
 * I've itegrated it with the main template. I think someone with more template skills could make it look better than it does currently, however. --Eyrezer 04:26, 21 April 2008 (UTC)