Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Armored Assault Tank (second nomination)


 * ''The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was unsuccessful. Please do not modify it.

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Support
 * 1) NominatedOOM-10 13:01, 16 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) After some cleanup, it is fine. Domlith 17:32, 16 March 2008 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) From the Bridge of Chack Jadson:
 * 2) *Add more quotes if possible.
 * 3) *Can the "History" section be expanded at all? Give it a shot.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 19:24, 17 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) Toprawa:
 * 5) *Upon cursory glance, you've got sourcing issues in the infobox and article. I've added tags for you, which you will need to remedy
 * 6) *Additionally, sourcing should go at the end of punctuation, per Wookification. Please address these issues.
 * 7) *I will go through the prose when I've got more time later today, hopefully. Toprawa and Ralltiir 19:55, 17 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 8) ** fixed, I thinkOOM-10 16:55, 20 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 9) ***You've still got unsourced material in the body. Toprawa and Ralltiir 17:33, 20 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 10) ****A helpful user has gone in and tried to source some of this information for you. Please make sure the source is correct. Toprawa and Ralltiir 22:05, 20 March 2008 (UTC)

Comments
 * What Secton(s) need cleaning up?OOM-10 08:16, 17 March 2008 (UTC)