User talk:Master Jonathan

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I am not currently accepting copy-edit requests for articles containing significant information from the following sources, as I am currently reading them or planning on reading them in the near future and would like to avoid spoilers:
 * X-wing: Wedge's Gamble
 * X-wing: The Krytos Trap
 * X-wing: The Bacta War
 * X-wing: Wraith Squadron
 * X-wing: Iron Fist
 * X-wing: Solo Command
 * X-wing: Isard's Revenge
 * X-wing: Starfighters of Adumar
 * Allies

Archives:
 * Welcome
 * January 24 – April 29, 2009
 * May 6 – June 18, 2009
 * June 24 – August 28, 2009
 * August 29 – November 19, 2009
 * November 21, 2009 – February 5, 2010
 * February 8 – March 22, 2010
 * March 28 – May 12, 2010

Copy-edit
Could you give Na'daz a copy-edit and a word count ?  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 17:33, May 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * Done. 292 words. Two things: Please watch where you link, as there were numerous links to redirects. Second, be careful of POV. I see several instances where you call someone "great" or "the greatest"; this is POV and possibly speculation unless it is explicitly stated in the source. Let me know if you have any questions. &mdash;Master Jonathan(Jedi Council Chambers) 17:57, May 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * Ah thank you for the edit and the info.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 18:01, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

Anchor
Hey MJ,

I appreciate your tip, but it unfortunately didn't work for me. Thanks anyway. —Tommy 9281 22:37, May 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * Bah, I thought I'd seen it in use here before and that it was a MediaWiki magic word, but it turns out that it's a template and that it was Wikipedia that I saw it on. Sorry. &mdash;Master Jonathan(Jedi Council Chambers) 22:53, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks
Hey MJ. I just wanted to let you know that I shamefully stole your personal js and css, as they are both a great help when editing. Thanks for them. :) -- 1358  (Talk) 16:45, May 18, 2010 (UTC)
 * No problem. The CSS line is indeed mine, but the JS that you copied was originally taken from Wikipedia. I can't find the exact source of the purge tab now, but the edit intro tab can be found here (though I did make a slight modification to that code). Be aware that on the other wiki, you'll need to edit the purge JS the reflect the URL of that site, otherwise it'll try to purge that page here on the English SW wiki. &mdash;Master Jonathan(Jedi Council Chambers) 18:47, May 18, 2010 (UTC)
 * Thanks for noticing me. :) -- 1358  (Talk) 18:48, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

Spongebob Fanon Wiki
I'm investigating a vandal on Spongebob Fanon Wiki with Wookieepedia ties. Do you know anything about this? Squid the Baptist 22:32, May 18, 2010 (UTC)
 * I have no clue what's going on, and unless someone is impersonating me specifically, I don't care. &mdash;Master Jonathan(Jedi Council Chambers) 22:36, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

Rebel Force: Trapped
Hello Jonathan. I was just wondering if you could help me with whatever information there is about Carlist Rieekan in Rebel Force: Trapped. I'm trying to FA him, and the source is currently unavailable to me. Any help would be much appreciated, although I understand if you can't help for whatever reason. Cheers, Thefourdotelipsis 14:33, May 21, 2010 (UTC)
 * Here goes: The Rebels' prisoner, Div, is kidnapped from his prison cell on Yavin 4, and when Luke boards the kidnappers' ship to rescue him, he successfully disables the kidnappers with Div's help, but is unable to stop one from activating the hyperdrive at the last moment, and the ship vanishes into hyperspace. Back on Yavin 4, Leia believes Luke has been kidnapped also, and reports the incident to General Rieekan, insisting that they have to go after him. Rieekan replies that no one knows Luke's whereabouts, and that "I can't authorize a fool's mission." Leia asks if the General is calling her a fool, Han interrupts, Leia snaps at Han, and then the General answers the question with "no". Shortly afterward, Luke and Div return to Yavin, accompanied by ex-Jedi Ferus Olin, who rescued them.
 * Later, Ferus reports to Rebel leaders Rieekan, General Dodonna, Wedge Antilles, and Leia that he has been following the actions of Vader. In doing so, he has learned, among other things, that the assassin X-7, who has tried to kill Luke on multiple occasions, is now looking for clues to his former identity. (When X-7 entered the training program, all memories to his previous identity were erased from his mind and his facial features were reconstructed to sever all ties to his previous life.) Ferus proposes that they slice computers to give the assassin the "clues" that he is looking for and turn X-7 to their side, to which Rieekan, speaking for the only time in the meeting, responds that the Rebels probably don't have the resources for the slicing operation. Ferus counters by revealing that he is "one of the best slicers in the galaxy" (narration quote) and can do the job himself. Ferus concludes the meeting by revealing the identity that he will plant "clues" to&mdash;that of one of his and Div's late friends, Trever Flume.
 * The final mention of the general in the book is unclear. During a mission to Belazura to destroy an Imperial garrison with X-7, who has accepted his "identity" as Trever, there is the following exchange (note that X-7 is not in the room):


 * No context is given to that mention of Rieekan. That's the gist of it; let me know if you need more details on a particular area. &mdash; Master Jonathan New Jedi Order.svg ( Jedi Council Chambers ) 00:39, May 22, 2010 (UTC)
 * That's wonderful, thank you. A question, though: How does Hostage wind up being resolved? I only ask because in the current article, my section for it ends rather abruptly, and I need a way to wrap it up concisely. Also, I was just wondering how the mission to Belazura is resolved. Thefourdotelipsis 04:02, May 22, 2010 (UTC)
 * On Belazura, the Rebels successfully destroy the garrison, and X-7 is killed by Ferus when he attempts yet again to kill Luke. As for Hostage, I'll need to find time to re-read the book, since I haven't read it in almost a year; I'll probably do so tomorrow and let you know then. &mdash; Master Jonathan New Jedi Order.svg ( Jedi Council Chambers ) 19:35, May 22, 2010 (UTC)
 * Just one more thing... is "Div" his nickname, or an assumed identity? Thefourdotelipsis 06:43, May 27, 2010 (UTC)

Procedure CT
Hey, Master Jon. Just letting you know that we've tweaked the wording of the CT on procedure so that a reply is not required. The new wording features this clause removed from option one: "All users who have cast votes prior to the desired change to be included are directly contacted and have expressed either their approval or rejection of said change by commenting under their vote, or the alteration to the vote is rendered invalid." Thanks. &mdash; Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 19:54, May 21, 2010 (UTC)

Request
Hey, MJ,

When you get a moment, can you run through the Duel on Lehon please? Same terms as always, thanks in advance. —Tommy 9281 20:59, May 21, 2010 (UTC)
 * Done. Let me know if you have any questions. &mdash; Master Jonathan New Jedi Order.svg ( Jedi Council Chambers ) 19:29, May 22, 2010 (UTC)

Request
Could you give Saras Loorne a copy-edit ? Thanks in advance.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 10:12, May 24, 2010 (UTC)
 * Done. Let me know if you have any questions. &mdash; Master Jonathan New Jedi Order.svg ( Jedi Council Chambers ) 03:20, May 25, 2010 (UTC)
 * Thank you.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 13:19, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

Request (big one)
Could you give Komm Karsh a copy-edit, a word count and a review please ? Thank you very much in advance.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 19:10, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

Done. Objections:
 * "By the time Supreme Overlord Shimrra Jamaane the Yuuzhan Vong invaded the galaxy": Missing word?
 * "Karsh was the commander of the Yuuzhan Vong's sole strategic reserve." I'd prefer you rephrase the last three words here since they're currently taken verbatim from the first bio quote.
 * "who presided over the strategic reserve for the Yuuzhan Vong fleet": Again, please reword "strategic reserve".

Currently 772 words. Let me know if you have any questions. &mdash; Master Jonathan  ( Jedi Council Chambers ) 21:20, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

Fixed. Thank you.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 07:38, May 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * No problem. &mdash; Master Jonathan New Jedi Order.svg ( Jedi Council Chambers ) 19:41, May 27, 2010 (UTC)