Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Crombach Nebula


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Crombach Nebula

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 17:59, May 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: ...and more

(2 ECs/2 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 19:39, June 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) ~  Savage  BOB sig.png 05:24, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  17:23, June 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) Menkooroo 04:09, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

Object Comments
 * 1) Rubedo
 * 2) * Specify its galactic coordinates in the prose.
 * 3) **Added.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 17:59, June 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) * Mentioning Gnaden's death in the nebula should be mentioned.
 * 5) **Added.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 17:59, June 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) ***I'm sure glad we have the Department of Reduncancy Department. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 20:13, June 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) * Mention that that entry in the Cross-sections was reprinted in the CCS.
 * 8) **Added.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 17:59, June 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) * Specify the CSWE entry in the source list. Possibly mention this mention in the BTS.
 * 10) **Specified.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 18:13, June 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) Imperators II
 * 12) * should be used in the "Sources" section and references.
 * 13) **Done.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 18:11, June 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 14) * Imho, something's not right with "The The" in the BTS section.  Imperators II (Talk) 11:22, June 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 15) **Changed. Thanks for the review.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 17:59, June 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 16) * The first two sentences can't be sourced to Revenge of the Sith: Incredible Cross-Sections.  Imperators II (Talk) 18:34, June 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 17) **Fixed.
 * 18) * Publishing years of the works should be added in the BTS section.  Imperators II (Talk) 18:36, June 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 19) **Added. EAOC has no "real" publishing date.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 08:03, June 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * Even if the Online Companion has no real publishing date, it still came after Complete Cross-Sections; the wording of the bts seems to imply that the two were released at the same time or that they have something to do with each other. Can you reword it so that they're clearly separated, maybe putting Complete Cross-Sections first? Menkooroo 04:47, June 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * Done.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 16:12, June 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * I think you should mention the The Complete Star Wars Encyclopedia in the Behind the scenes section.
 * 3) **Mentioned.
 * 4) *Other than that, it's a very good article.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:55, June 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) **Thank you.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 17:16, June 9, 2011 (UTC)