Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Taloron language


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Taloron language

 * Nominated by: ~ SavageBob 23:15, September 9, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: The word of the day is "Soknar."

(2 ECs/1 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1)  SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 05:41, September 10, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Savage Bob has written Soknar great articles since joining this site. Menkooroo 04:05, September 12, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3)  Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 07:32, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) "The language is first mentioned" comes off as a bit odd. I know that present tense is OK when dealing with only one source, but I don't know about "is first". Sticking with past tense might look nicer, especially since there are a couple of other past tense references earlier in the bts. Menkooroo 15:20, September 11, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) *Yeah, I try to stick to present tense for BTS, but publication dates and such make it sound wonky sometimes. I've switched the is to was in this instance. Thanks for the review; I'm glad you didn't have Soknar objections! ~ SavageBob 16:34, September 11, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) Cav:
 * 4) * Although the Taloron Hunters were first mentioned in The Star Wars Sourcebook, published by West End Games in 1987, and the species was first named in Domain of Evil, - a little confusion here; if the Taloron Hunters were first mentioned in one source, how could they be named in the second? Did they go under a different name in the first source? Some clarification is needed. - Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 10:14, September 12, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) **On second thought, a lot of that information was irrelevant to the article at hand (more appropriate to the Taloron (species) article instead), so I yanked it. How's it read now? ~ SavageBob 16:15, September 13, 2010 (UTC)

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