Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations



This page is for the nomination of "comprehensive articles". For a list of "comprehensive articles", see Category:Wookieepedia comprehensive articles.


 * Comprehensive article nominations history
 * Comprehensive article nominations archiving checklist

What is a "comprehensive article?"

A "comprehensive article" is an article that contains all information regarding the topic. Often, "comprehensive articles" cannot reach Featured or Good Article status due to their limited content. This process is intended to recognize articles that contain all relevant canon information, yet are still under the 250 word limit required for a Good Article. The purpose of this is twofold&mdash;firstly, to help users distinguish what is a stub, and what is merely a short article with no further relevant material to be added, and, more importantly, to highlight for the reader when they are reading something that has been judged definitely "comprehensive"&mdash;that is, a guarantee to the reader that whatever they are reading contains the sum total of all available content.

Nominations and promotions of the Comprehensive article process are overseen by a collective of users known as the "EduCorps," which is made up of the Inquisitorius, the AgriCorps, and various other experienced users who are considered qualified to adequately judge the nominated material.

Lucasfilm Ltd. and its many licensees continue to expand the Star Wars universe. Since new information might become available, it may be necessary to revoke a "comprehensive article's" status. A forum will be used to nominate articles that have fallen out-of-date. Members of the EduCorps will then post a warning template on that page, and a grace period of one week will be instituted in which the article can be improved. If there is a significant amount of new information, it is likely that once updated, the article will become eligible for Good article status, and thereby ineligible for Comprehensive article status.

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An article must&hellip;


 * 1) &hellip;be well-written and detailed.
 * 2) &hellip;be unbiased, non-point of view.
 * 3) &hellip;be sourced with all available sources and appearances.
 * 4) &hellip;follow the Manual of Style, Layout Guide, and all other policies on Wookieepedia. This is, of course, within reason. If a topic only has a very limited degree of content that cannot be divided up into the relevant article sections, it is not required that it follow the Layout Guide precisely. This is to be judged on a case-by-case basis.
 * 5) &hellip;following the review process, be stable, i.e., does not change significantly from day to day and is not the subject of ongoing edit wars. This does not apply to vandalism and protection or semi-protection as a result of vandalism.
 * 6) &hellip;not be tagged with any sort of improvement tags (i.e. more sources, expand, etc).
 * 7) &hellip;have no redlinks.
 * 8) &hellip;have all relevant canon information presented.
 * 9) &hellip;be completely referenced for all available material and sources. See Sourcing for more information. While this is not required for an article possessing a singular source, it is encouraged, as it provides both uniformity and a good infrastructure should the topic be referenced in any future materials.
 * 10) &hellip;have all quotes and images sourced.
 * 11) &hellip;provide at least one relevant quote on the article if available.
 * 12) &hellip;include a "Behind the scenes" section for in-universe articles.
 * 13) &hellip;counting the introduction, the article body, and "Behind the scenes" material, must not exceed 250 words in length (not including captions, quotes, or headers, etc). Any articles exceeding the limit should be taken to the Good article nominations page for consideration.
 * 14) &hellip;if the nominated article reaches 200 words or greater, the nominator must either provide an intro or draft an intro and provide a link to the revision in the nomination, showing that the intro does not elevate the article over 250 words. Exceptions can be made for articles wherein the majority of the text is in the "Behind the scenes" section.

How to nominate:


 * 1) First, nominate an article you find is worthy of comprehensive status, putting it at the bottom of the list below. Nominated articles must meet all thirteen requirements stated above.
 * 2) Add CAnom at the top of the article you are nominating.
 * 3) Be sure to place sign in the "Nominated by" line when the nomination is posted for voting.
 * 4) Others will object to the nomination if they disagree that the article is good enough; they will then supply reasons for doing so, and ways to improve the article in accordance with the established rules.
 * 5) Nominators and supporters will adjust the article until the objectors (with reasonable objections) are satisfied. Objectors may also make alterations&mdash;if there is any reason for contention on a given point, it should be settled in a civil manner in the nomination field itself.
 * 6) Users may not vote on their own articles.
 * 7) There is no limit to the amount of nominations a given user can submit at any given time.

How to vote:


 * 1) Before doing anything, be sure to read the article completely, keeping a sharp eye out for mistakes.
 * 2) Afterward, compare the article to the criteria listed above, and then either support or object the article's nomination.
 * 3) *If you object, please supply concrete reasons for doing so, and how it can be improved.
 * 4) As stated above, any objections will be looked upon by the nominator, supporters, and anyone willing to improve the article, and action will be taken to please the objectors. Do not strike other users' objections; it is up to the objector to review the changes and strike if they are satisfied.
 * 5) There are several ways in which an article can receive the required number of votes. Within a 48-hour period of nomination, only EduCorps votes will count towards the total, although anyone may choose to vote in that window. If two members of the EduCorps support a nomination in that window, and there are no outstanding objections, the article can be considered a "Comprehensive article" and be tagged with the template 48 hours after the initial nomination.  The talk page will also be tagged with the CA template. When the 48 hours are up, any user's votes will contribute towards the total. If one EduCorps member has voted for an article after a week, three regular votes will be required. After the 48 hour period, an article can still also pass with just two EduCorps votes.
 * 6) Once a nomination is successful, it will be placed on the Comprehensive article list. Instructions on how to archive nominations, successful or otherwise, can be found here. Anyone can archive a nomination&mdash;just make sure it has the correct number of votes, has been nominated for at least a week (or 48 hours if there are two EC votes), and that there are absolutely no outstanding objections. If you are not sure how to do this, just ask, and someone will likely be more than willing to help you. Also, if you think you can slip one past us, think again&mdash;someone is always watching you.

All nominations will be considered idle and are subject to instantaneous removal by EduCorps members if objections are not addressed, or at least not answered, after a period of 1 week.

Please remember to archive your nomination beforehand if you plan on taking it to the Good Article Nominations page.

Offices of the Imperial Head of State

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi (Personal Comm Channel) 05:50, May 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:I hope you'll look the article over.

(0 ECs/1 Users/1 Total)
Support
 * 1) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 17:58, May 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) * See below.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 09:56, May 20, 2011 (UTC)

Object Comments
 * 1) Axinal
 * 2) *The article is currently missing a BTS section.
 * 3) * Also, try to add some context on the information. What was Coruscant? Who was Jaina Solo? What were their careers, and why did they take them on separate paths?&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 15:35, May 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) **OK, I added a BTS section and I added some more context. I also expanded it a little more.Cal Jedi (Personal Comm Channel) 16:49, May 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) *** Better, but now you have intro-exclusive information; specifically, you mention in the intro that Fel was the Imperial Head of State, and that Coruscant was the GA capital. This info must be in the main body as well. Also, take a look at the formatting in the BTS; you italicize FotJ once and leave it normal another time. Also, the wording in the first sentence, "Fate of the Jedi Allies" is a little awkward. Could you perhaps rearrange the sentence? &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 16:58, May 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) * Please fix links so they don't point to redirects; specifically, Imperial, Galactic Alliance, and vidscreen.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 16:58, May 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) ** Imperators got GA and vidscreen, so just Imperial.
 * 8) * I apologize if I wasn't specific enough when I said "context." I'm afraid I think you went a bit overboard with detail, as much of the article as it is currently written is not relevant to the office. We really just need to know the gist of what was said during the conversation in the office, not a history of their relationship.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 17:37, May 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) *I downsized on some of their relationship details to concentrate more on the office. Does it need more downsizing or not?Cal Jedi (Personal Comm Channel) 17:46, May 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) **I'm satisfied, good work.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 17:58, May 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) Imperators II
 * 12) * I believe that the Imperial state that existed in 44 ABY was the Imperial Remnant, not the Galactic Empire.
 * 13) **I disagree; Jag consistently says Galactic Empire, and corrects those who refer to it as the Imperial Remnant.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 17:33, May 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 14) * All the infobox info must be referenced.  Imperators II (Talk) 17:13, May 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 15) **Per CA rules, not if the subject in question only has one appearance.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 17:33, May 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 16) ***It's encouraged, though. (OK, not really an objection, then.)  Imperators II (Talk) 17:41, May 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 17) ****True, it is encouraged, so I'd be okay if Cal wanted to do that. Doesn't matter to me.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 17:58, May 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 18) ***** I added references to the infobox now.Cal Jedi (Personal Comm Channel) 02:16, May 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 19) * The "History" section should begin with mentioning the era during which the offices were on Coruscant.  Imperators II (Talk) 17:18, May 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 20) *OK did I miss anymore redirect links?Cal Jedi (Personal Comm Channel) 17:34, May 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 21) **Nope, you got them all, good work. Just see my remaining objection above.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 17:38, May 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 22) *OK good. Is there anything else that I missed that needs to be fixed up?Cal Jedi (Personal Comm Channel) 18:06, May 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 23) *If you're going to source the article, you need to source the whole thing (except the intro).&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 09:56, May 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 24) *I added the sources to the main article. Did I mess anything up?Cal Jedi (Personal Comm Channel) 14:33, May 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 25) **Nope, nice work. Just note that you do not need the template outside the infobox, and you do not need to list the same reference with the full format after the first one. I went ahead and fixed that for you, just see the history for future reference.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 21:48, May 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 26) Cav:
 * 27) *The History section: the single sentence should be merged into the large paragrapg to create a single paragraph. There are POV issues in the text - calling Bwua'tu a "great" lawyer, for instance. Some context on Tahiri is needed as well, along with the reason for her being on trial.
 * 28) **I think I got it all. Cal Jedi StarForgeSucksGas-KOTOR1.jpg (Personal Comm Channel) 02:07, May 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 29) *Ref tags are not needed in the BTS section for the Allies information as it is self-sourcing. - Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 11:34, May 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 30) **Got it. Is that better? Cal Jedi StarForgeSucksGas-KOTOR1.jpg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:33, May 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 31) Jujiggum
 * 32) *Requires a Conviction update. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 21:01, May 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 33) **I updated the appearances section. But I've been trying to get my hands on a copy of Conviction without success. So if it needs to be expanded further, it might be a couple of days before I can check the book. Cal Jedi StarForgeSucksGas-KOTOR1.jpg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:15, May 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 34) ***Yeah, it'll just need a little bit of expansion. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 14:24, May 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * 35) ****OK I finally got Conviction today, but when I glanced through it I didn't see any mention of the Offices of the Imperial Head of State. Is it mentioned by a different name or did I just miss it? Cal Jedi StarForgeSucksGas-KOTOR1.jpg (Personal Comm Channel) 20:16, June 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 36) *****Appearances are at the beginnings of Chapters 15 and 29. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 20:37, June 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 37) ******How does the update look? Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 19:24, June 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 38) *******You're still missing some information. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 17:20, June 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * 39) *The intro should be expanded a bit.
 * 40) **OK how does that look? Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 19:07, June 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * 41) *Tense/mood issues in the history section.
 * 42) **I'm not exactly sure what you mean by tense/mood issues, but I tried to clean it up a bit. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 19:07, June 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * 43) *The article sectioning should be rearranged to fit with other location status article precedents. For example, you should have a description section, instead of a location or layout section, and the history section should come after that section. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 17:20, June 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * 44) **How does the sectioning look now? Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 19:13, June 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * 45) Exiled Jedi
 * 46) * Linking issues:
 * 47) ** You can link assassination to assassin.
 * 48) ** You can link lawyer.
 * 49) *Otherwise it looks good.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:37, June 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * 50) **Apologies for intervening, but these objections are what we call "sofixit" objections. It would be one thing if there were tons of linking mistakes throughout the article, but all you've objected to are just two links that would be easier for you to fix in a copy-edit than by making objections out of them. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 17:20, June 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * 51) ***Sorry about that, I will do better in the future.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  17:39, June 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * 52) *I will support after all of the other objections have been resolved.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  17:39, June 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * 53) **Great! Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 19:13, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

NTB-630 naval bomber

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 18:08, May 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: ...

(0 ECs/2 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) Good work again.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  17:24, June 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Nice.  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 00:08, June 13, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Imperators II
 * 2) * Category:Incom Corporation products?  Imperators II (Talk) 18:44, June 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Added.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 08:16, June 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) Exiled Jedi
 * 5) * I would mention the Star Wars: Complete Cross-Sections in the Behind the scenes section. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  17:10, June 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) **Mentioned.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 17:18, June 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) Jeff
 * 8) * Probably a sofixit, but also an odd mistake to make: The databank entry isn't where it should be in the Sources section. Menkooroo 12:35, June 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) **If it should be the last, done.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:53, June 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) *Article is 202 words, which means that per the recent Mofference, you should give it an intro and see if it reaches 250 words. If it does, you'll need to subsection it according to the layout guide on starship classes and bring it to the GAN page. Menkooroo 04:04, June 13, 2011 (UTC)

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Ado Eemon

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 18:19, May 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: ...

(1 ECs/2 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Imperators II (Talk) 20:10, June 6, 2011 (UTC)


 * 1) -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  14:42, June 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * I missed something.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  12:56, June 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) ~  Savage  BOB sig.png 20:55, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

Object Comments
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * You should probably directly mention (and link) that he was a male in the body of the article. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  20:11, June 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Added.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 18:00, June 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) *I am going to look it over one more time before supporting.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  19:25, June 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) Imperators II
 * 6) * Is it specified whether his "private fleet of gunships" consisted of the Heavy Missile Platforms? If it is, "the" is necessary.  Imperators II (Talk) 18:42, June 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) **It is specified, but what "the" do you mean?  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 17:16, June 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) Bob
 * 9) * "Ado Eemon was the male silken-tongued ruler[1] of the Mid Rim[2] planet Caramm V during the Clone Wars.." I think you are trying to cram too much information into one sentence here. The way this is worded, it sounds like Caramm V had more than one ruler, like a female one, or one who wasn't silken-tongued. I'd suggest saying something like "Ado Eemon was the ruler of..." and then listing the maleness and smooth-talking bits later.
 * 10) **Reworded.
 * 11) * Can you find a synonym for "gunship" for at least one of the uses?
 * 12) **Varied.
 * 13) * "beautiful" is POV. Can you attribute this assessment to someone or a group? Otherwise, beautiful article. :) ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 05:27, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 14) **Is it still POV if a source exlicitely tells it so. That's the case here. Thanks for the beautiful review.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 16:35, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 15) ***Not if you say, "So-and-so considered the world beautiful." But apparently not the case here. ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 21:57, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 16) *** Whoops; I thought you had taken care of the POV issue, but it remains. ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 22:35, June 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * 17) ****I thought that too. Killed now.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 16:23, June 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * 18) Exiled Jedi
 * 19) * You need to mention Star Wars: Complete Cross-Sections in the behind the scenes section. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  12:56, June 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * 20) **Added.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 16:23, June 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * 21) * And also take care of the POV problem. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  12:56, June 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * 22) **Killed.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 16:23, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

Third Legion

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 16:43, June 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: After a while, a little bit WP:TCW from me

(1 ECs/2 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) Nice article.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 18:22, June 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) ~  Savage  BOB sig.png 21:55, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Good work.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  17:12, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Axinal
 * 2) * I think the civil war on Balith is deserving of its own article.
 * 3) **Linked.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 17:25, June 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) * Also, the BTS could use some expansion, primarily with the inclusion "Assassin"'s airdate.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 22:30, June 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) **Mentioned.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 17:25, June 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) Bob
 * 7) * Can you say who it was who sent Anakin and Rex? ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 05:38, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) **Added.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 16:37, June 7, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Caramm V

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 18:18, June 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Clone Wars

(1 ECs/0 Users/1 Total)
Support
 * 1) Good job again, Clone Commander Lee-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  17:31, June 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * Sorry, but I thought that SavageBob had said that beautiful wasn't POV.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  12:59, June 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) ~  Savage  BOB sig.png 20:53, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Imperators II
 * 2) * Please note that TEAOC lists star systems, not planets. Also it has established sectors for Mid Rim systems. So please update the article accordingly, i.e., mention the planet's sector, system and coordinates in prose and add correct information about TEAOC to the BTS section.
 * 3) **Ah thank you. All should be allright now.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 17:38, June 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) *** "mention the planet's sector, system and coordinates in prose and add correct information about TEAOC to the BTS section".  Imperators II (Talk) 20:36, June 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) ****Should be allright now.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 16:43, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) * In the Ado Eemon article, you mention that the planet supplied the CIS with HMPs. Add this info.
 * 7) **Added.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 17:38, June 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) * If you've added Category:Republic-aligned planets to the article, this information has to be reflected in the main body and the infobox.  Imperators II (Talk) 20:11, June 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) **That wasn't me, but this info is wrong. Removed. Thanks for your review.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 17:38, June 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) Exiled Jedi
 * 11) * "Beautiful" seems to be a point-of-view to me. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  17:18, June 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * 12) **Please take a look at the discussion about that at the Eemon-nom. The word is exactly mentioned in the source.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 17:23, June 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * 13) *All right then, I guess its okay if its in the source.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  17:31, June 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * 14) Bob
 * 15) * I'm going to have to agree that "beautiful" is POV, even if the OS uses that word. You can hedge this by saying that "it was considered beautiful" or something, but Wookieepedia can't call it that from the authorial voice. ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 22:34, June 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * 16) **Killed.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 16:27, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Kallil-virus jelly

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 07:32, June 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: I felt naked without a CA nom. Now if only I knew what the fuck this was...

(1 ECs/2 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 16:37, June 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Goes great with nutmeat butter! ~  Savage  BOB sig.png 05:40, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Trembling jelly!-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  17:21, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Axinal
 * 2) *Considering that the only thing we know about it is that it trembled, this is impressive. My only problem is the word "something" in the first sentence, which I find a little too informal. Could that be replaced with "a substance" or something of the like? Nice work, Naru.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 15:49, June 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Since we're using that as a category, I suppose it's OK. We don't even technically know if it is a substance or not. That was a bit of a IRC suggested cop-out in the face of complete ambiguity. This is a whole new breed of random name drop. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 15:52, June 6, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Balith Civil War

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 17:48, June 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: It's Axinals fault :P

(1 ECs/2 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) Always happy to cause trouble. :P&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 19:51, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Look at it this way, we have another quality article.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  11:55, June 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) ~  Savage  BOB sig.png 18:02, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Axinal
 * 2) * Could you add that Balith was located in the Inner Rim (with proper sourcing, obviously)? Otherwise, good work.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 18:46, June 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Added.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 16:47, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) Bob
 * 5) * As with the other articles, please say who sent the dynamic duo. ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 22:37, June 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) **As with the other articles, added.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 16:29, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

All Stars Burn as One

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 18:14, June 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: The Cestus Deception, I present you the official anthem of the Galactic Republic

(1 ECs/3 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1) Nice work. I've been meaning to work on articles related to The Cestus Deception, including this one, but you beat me to it. Not surprising, considering it's been on my to-do list for over a year now. :P&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 18:34, June 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Considering that my brilliantly flawless prose was its base, how could I not? (I kid, I kid. :P) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 23:23, June 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) I'd love it if LFL actually recorded this and released it. ~  Savage  BOB sig.png 05:43, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  19:03, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

Object Comments
 * 1) Seeing as you use CSWECite in the sources, it would be appropriate to do so in the reference as well. 1358  (Talk)  10:02, June 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *Done.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 16:57, June 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Please fill the reference citation template with page number(s). 1358  (Talk)  12:46, June 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Done.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 16:16, June 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) Exiled Jedi
 * 6) * I was wondering, was this song actually played in the book? If it was then I would change the Behind the scenes where it says mentioned to appeared.
 * 7) **Done.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 16:30, June 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) * The same goes for the appearance list for the item. If the item made its appeared in the book then please indicate this by placing the first appearance template. If it was first mentioned in the book, you can easily indicated this as well by using the first mentioned template.
 * 9) **Done.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 16:30, June 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) *Good job, I just wanted some clarification.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  12:42, June 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) **No problem.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 16:30, June 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * Guh. This was mine months ago when I started and never got back to it. XP (:P) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 21:16, June 6, 2011 (UTC)

Ostrine edge

 * Nominated by:  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  19:35, June 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Here is another KOTOR nomination

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support


 * 1) –Tm_T (Talk) 15:22, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) ~  Savage  BOB sig.png 00:25, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

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 * 1) Tm
 * 2) * "An ostrine edge was a type of melee weapon edge used around the time of the Dark Wars,[2]" ... that reference cannot be used for all of this, add the missing reference. (:
 * 3) **Better?-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  15:16, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) * Bts gives an impression that the price of the item meant the player may not find it, maybe mention it's rare beside being random?
 * 5) **Heh, your right, fixed.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  15:16, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) *And this is not obscure ): –Tm_T (Talk) 15:06, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) **Well I just thought if you asked most users on this site about an Ostrine edge they would have no clue about it, but maybe not for some users.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  15:16, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) *And check what I did. (: –Tm_T (Talk) 15:22, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) Bob
 * 10) * It's strange to say it can allow a weapon to damage objects it strikes; presumably the weapon would have damaged those items anyway. Does it make the weapon do more damage than it otherwise would have done? ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 22:47, June 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) **Yeah, I meant that it dealt damage from the cold in addition to normal damage. I fixed this to make it clearer now.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  23:07, June 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * Just to show that I like obscure nominations.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  19:35, June 6, 2011 (UTC)

Dilonexa I

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 00:25, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: "What's your favorite thing about Space? Mine is Space. "

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 * 1) Tm
 * 2) *First, see my copyedit, some whitespace changes. (
 * Uh, please please make some attempt to make these articles less identical, otherwise they're not worth having the articles of their own I'd say. –Tm_T (Talk) 05:43, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) **I'd like to second this. There honestly is no point in copypasting a dozen of articles, only replacing the name. 1358  (Talk)  08:13, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) ***I could add more templates, but I don't think it's possible to say this completely differently 39 times. I'll give it a shot now that you've asked, but I make no promises about complete individuality across the board. About what kind of ratio of article:template would you prefer should I not be able to change it up every time? Also, I've been talking about this for a while and have had to delay it. If you're concerned about something like this, would you mind talking to me before I put it up next time? Nevertheless, I don't think whether or not they are notable enough to exist at all is an issue here. They're planets. If we have articles on jelly we know nothing about, we should have articles on every planet. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 08:28, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) ****I'm not asking complete individuality, you could express things with different words, or reorder bits or... just as long as they don't look each others' clones like they do now. And about notability, I'm not saying they're not notable enough, but having the exactly same text spread thru 20+ (or, as I assume you're plan being, ~40) articles makes not much sense. I know you can do it. And about talking before, I didn't notice these articles until I checked if I had any objections to be struck in this CAN page, otherwise I would have done it. (: –Tm_T (Talk) 09:07, June 7, 2011 (UTC)


 * 1)  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 09:26, June 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *Per the comments above and below, How do we know that all the planets follow the naming convention of the 23rd planet? One of them could be named "Bob" and another "Frumwitz" for all we know. I think the fact that they are labelled "Dilonexa (roman numeral)" can be debated, even conjecturally.
 * 3) **Sorry to cut in, but I think that they're fair conjectural titles. It's similar to a naming convention I sometimes use for unidentified characters. Maybe a note in the bts of each article that the planet isn't explicitly named is in order, though. Menkooroo 14:50, June 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) *** I suggest, then, that the articles be renamed, for instance, Unidentified Dilonexan planet 2 or Unidentified Dilonexan planet II, or something similar. That is, of course, if each of the articles can be treated uniquely (see comment below).  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 06:06, June 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) ****I thought about that too, but it's far too cumbersome when we can just name them this way. Unfortunately, I forgot the BTS note I had planned for this, but I'll add it when I overhaul the articles. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 18:17, June 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) * I also agree with the statements concerning the repetitiveness. It may be better to collectively write about the inner and outer planets in two separate articles than to individualize each of them. At least until future material highlights any one of them, warranting a separate individual and unique article. Until then, Dilonexan hot planets and Dilonexan cold planets sound decent enough. As an example of articles about planet groups, see the Six Sisters, of which only Thyrsus is identifiable enough to create a separate article for.  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 09:26, June 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) **Sorry to cut in again, but I disagree with the idea of making one article on multiple planets. As long as Naru writes unique articles for each one, I think that what he's done is justified. Menkooroo 14:50, June 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) *** The problem is the making each of the about 40 planets unique. If there can be a unique individual article for each, then it would be appropriate, but with as little info other than the context in which Lando is involved, whether they are hot or cold, etc., they are basically place holders on the server. 40 of them. Keep in mind that, when a visitor attempts to search for the planet in the Dilonexa system relevant to the story, the relevant planet will not even show up in the tooltip until the appropriate numeral is entered because it will be so far down the list. Also, take into consideration that the planets are only referenced indirectly without being discussed except as collective groups.  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 06:06, June 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) ****We decided a long time ago to have one article per subject. See the relevant Trash Compactor discussion. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 18:17, June 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) ***** Hmmm. Dilonexa inner planet 2 and Dilonexa outer planet 25 or Dilonexa's 2nd inner planet and Dilonexa's 25th outer planet, then? (See below fro better suggestion)  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 20:03, June 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) ******Sorry, I'm not following you. Could you explain? NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 17:43, June 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * 12) *******Naming them using the Roman numeral naming convention implies that they are officially identified by those names. However, that has not been verified by the canon. Therefore, using roman numeral designations seems inappropriate. However, any of the declaring "unidentified" in the name establishes that canon has not confirmed their designations. Following other examples that have been included in Featured and Good Articles, the most appropriate would be to use Unidentified planet 1 (Dilonexa system) through Unidentified planet 22 (Dilonexa system) and Unidentified planet 24 (Dilonexa system) through etc.  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 05:34, June 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 13) ********I think those names are clunky when we could just name them with the roman numerals and leave the BTS note. However, I'll defer if someone seconds you. (Also, don't link to your suggestions like that if you're poviding multiples. It leaves red link artifacts and wanted pages.) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 21:52, June 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 14) *********Well, one particular thing that following the convention as the examples shown above do, is that when a wookieepedian is trying to reference within another article or search in the search box for the 23rd planet, it is a greater convenience to just type the first four letters&mdash; Dilo &mdash;to get the tooltip to help finish the title if the other planets that have not individually been canonized are starting with   Gethralkin ''' Hyperwave 23:17, June 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 15) **********A disambiguation page, then! "Dilonexa (disambiguation)" with a link to it at the top of each planet's article. Thoughts, Naru? Menkooroo 04:10, June 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 16) Bob
 * 17) *Well, while I'm still uncomfortable making articles for planets that are only obliquely referenced like this, I can live with these articles, I think. However, I think this note in the BTS should be changed: "this article's title assumes that the numeral system used for Dilonexa XXIII was constant throughout the star system." Actually, due to the conjecture tag, the article is not assuming this. The Roman numeral I here is just being used as a convenience, so this note should be altered to reinforce that the planet could be named anything for all we know, or else dropped altogether. ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 22:22, June 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 18) *Also, there's a lot of contextual information that could be added based on The Essential Atlas. What larger regions was it a part of? What spheres of influence did it fall under during various galactic conflicts? When did its general region of space become part of the "known galaxy"? I doubt there's all that much here, but it's the type of thing that is particularly pertinent in a planet article, even if all that can be said is stuff like, "by 137 ABY, the planet had fallen within territory considered part of Darth Kraty's empire" or whatever. ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 06:43, June 13, 2011 (UTC)

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 * Excecuting Phase 3 of Operation Centurian Deathstroke. These articles are identical (wanted to make a WP:CAN subpage for this, but whatever). Please leave objections on Dilonexa I. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 00:25, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * I did a similar thing to this a couple of months back for a bunch of random "X" assassins. I just had to make each articles writings slightly different in each case, so it's an OK example of what you can do with these. Vandar Tokare42 (Talk to the hand) 08:24, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * Exactly what I (and prolly Xd) am after, I'm sure there's ways to have the same content presented in different ways. (: –Tm_T (Talk) 09:07, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * Just a query, and by no means discouragement, because I agree that we should have articles on all of these if warranted, but: is each of these planets mentioned by name in the OS? By this I mean, do we see the names of each of these printed out on the page? We tend not to have articles on planets based on a conjectural numbering from a known planet's name. In other words, we don't have an article on Laboi I even though we have one on Laboi II. Does that make sense? ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 16:04, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * I think I understand what you mean. That there are 22 hot planets in the system, then the habitable XXIII, and then 17 cold planets was specified in Oseon. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 01:38, June 8, 2011 (UTC)

Dilonexa II

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 00:25, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: "Space. Going to Space. Can't wait. Space."

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Dilonexa III

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 00:25, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: "Space. Trial. Putting the system on trial. In Space. Space System. On trial. Guilty! Of being in Space! Going to Space Jail!"

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Dilonexa IV

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 00:25, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: "Dad, I'm in Space. 'I'm pround of you, son' Dad, are you Space? 'Yes, now we are a family again.'"

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Dilonexa V

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 00:25, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: "Oh, play it cool. Play it cool. Here come the Space Cops. Here come the Space Cops. Help me, Space Cops. Space Cops help."

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Dilonexa VI

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 00:25, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: "Space. Going. Better buy a telescope. Wanna see me? Buy a telescope. Gonna be in Space."

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Dilonexa VII

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 00:25, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: "I love Space. Love Space. Atmosphere, Black Holes, Astronauts, Nebulas, J-Jupiter, The Big Dipper. THE BIG DIPPER!"

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Dilonexa VIII

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 00:25, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: "Orbit. Space orbit. In my Space suit. Space."

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Dilonexa IX

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 00:25, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: "Oh. The Sun. I'm gonna meet the Sun. Oh no. What'll I say? Hi, Sun. Ooh boy."

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Dilonexa X

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 00:25, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: "Look. An eclipse. No! Don't look!"

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Dilonexa XI

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 00:25, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: "Come here, Space. I have a secret for you. No, come closer. Space."

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Dilonexa XII

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 00:25, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: "Oh. I know. Spell it! S-P-...ACE!"

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Dilonexa XIII

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 00:25, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: "Hey, Lady, I'm the-I'm the best at Space."

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Dilonexa XIV

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 00:25, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: "Gotta go to Space. Comets, stars, galaxies, Orion."

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Dilonexa XV

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 00:25, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: "SPAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAACE!"

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 * All past quotes from Space Core of Portal 2 by Valve. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 00:25, June 7, 2011 (UTC)

Dilonexa XVI

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 00:25, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: "Dammit, we know! Space. You. In It. WE GET IT!"

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 * Adventure Core of Portal 2 by Valve. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 00:25, June 7, 2011 (UTC)

Dilonexa XVII

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 00:25, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: "Fact: Space does not exist"

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 * Fact Core of Portal 2 by Valve. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 01:31, June 7, 2011 (UTC)

Dilonexa XVIII

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 00:25, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: "Alright, I've been thinking. When life gives you lemons, don't make lemonade. (Yeah!)"

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Dilonexa XIX

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 00:25, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: "Make life take the lemons back! (Yeah!) I don't want your damn lemons! What am I supposed to do with these?! (Yeah! Take the lemons!)"

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Dilonexa XX

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 00:25, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: "Demand to see life's manager! (Yeah!) Make life rue the day it thought it could give Cave Johnson lemons! Do you know who I am?!"

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Dilonexa XXI

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 00:25, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: "I'm the man who who's gonna burn your house down! With the Lemons! (Oh, I like this guy!)"

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Dilonexa XXII

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 00:25, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: "I'm gonna get my engineers to invent a Combustible Lemon that burns your house down! *coughs* (Burn his house down! Burning people! He says what we're all thinking!)"

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 * Cave Johnson and GLaDOS of Portal 2 by Valve. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 00:25, June 7, 2011 (UTC)

Kashyyykian giant weaver

 * Nominated by:  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 05:04, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Arachnophobia!

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 * 1) Hanzo Hasashi 03:28, June 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 10:10, June 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Good job.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  12:03, June 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) That girl is poison... ~  Savage  BOB sig.png 18:01, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

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 * 1) Axinal
 * 2) * Could we get some context on Kashyyyk and Darth Vader?
 * 3) **Done.  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 14:27, June 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) ***What I meant was this: What is Kashyyyk? Who is Darth Vader? Just one or a few words each should suffice.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 14:31, June 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) ****Ah, I see. Fixed.  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 06:17, June 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) * I think the author and release date of TFU could be added to the BTS.
 * 7) **Done.  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 14:27, June 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) *Otherwise, very cool, if a little scary.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 20:03, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) **Thanks.  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 14:27, June 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) No Ref tags outside the infobox. 1358  (Talk)  10:05, June 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) *Fixed.  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 14:27, June 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 12) Bob
 * 13) * Does the original source call it poison? Technically speaking, spiders produce venom. ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 20:51, June 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * 14) **Yes the source mentions poison coming from mandibles. Venom generally refers to toxins that an animal armed with such injects into a victim's skin/body by way of a bite or sting, either to defend itself or when hunting. However, even though poison refers more commonly to a substance that causes biological disruption through absorption, the distinction between toxin and poison is not always observed, even among scientists. In addition, the derivative forms "toxic" and "poisonous" are used synonymously. I will therefore rephrase the sentence to be more correct and still be faithful to the canon material. A caveat: the book doesn't mention the delivery process of the poison, so it could even be that the upraised mandibles spray the victim with the poison.  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 04:48, June 11, 2011 (UTC)

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 * Do not make unnecessary pipelinks for articles that otherwise don't need pipelinking, such as what you did with Kashyyyk. Just keep it Kashyyyk's. For articles that already need to be pipelinked either way, such as Darth Vader, it is your choice whether or not to include the 's in the pipelink, and I'm fine, and have done, both ways. This is just something that always tends to bother me whenever I see it. Hanzo Hasashi 03:28, June 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * Point taken. A habit I picked up from before the was made.  Gethralkin  Hyperwave  09:28, June 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * It would be speculation to say so, but I wonder if these are the same arachnids that terrorize the characters in "Pax Empirica—The Wookiee Annihilation." ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 20:51, June 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * As big as a TIE fighter is pretty big for a spider. However, the Pax Empirica spider didn't seem to be the active pack hunter that the giant weavers were mentioned to be.  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 15:09, June 11, 2011 (UTC)

Troig language

 * Nominated by: ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 05:56, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: New canon from a quiz book. Go figure.

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 * 1) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 22:00, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  22:14, June 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 22:49, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

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 * 1) Impressive. Since Troigs are from Pollillus, I think it's safe to assume that the language was spoken on that planet, even if it's not explicitly mentioned in the book. Do you mind adding that to the article?&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 19:58, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *Like that? ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 21:52, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Works for me, great article.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 22:00, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) Exiled Jedi
 * 5) * Shouldn't Obsessed with Star Wars be shown to be the first mention in the sources section?-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  15:46, June 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) **Why? It's the only mention.  Imperators II (Talk) 15:48, June 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) ***Yeah, but there might be another one in the future, so it might as well be added now for clarification purposes later.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  18:56, June 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) ****Fair enough. Added the 1stm template. ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 20:45, June 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) *****We do not use the 1st or 1stm temmplates on single appearance articles. The Mo tag was correct. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 21:16, June 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) I think that referencing the differences between naming conventions in Basic and Troig constitutes a mention of the language. Or at least an indirect one, depending upon the wording.  NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 21:25, June 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) *Hmm. I can see that. How's it look now? ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 22:18, June 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 12) **Great. :) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 22:49, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

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 * It occurred to me that this article doesn't have an infobox&mdash;and looking over articles like Galactic Basic Standard, Huttese, and Ewokese, nor do any of those. Since there is no language infobox, it wouldn't be fair to oppose this article for lack of one. Still, I think it would be a fine addition to the Wook.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 22:00, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * Yeah, it would be nice. We could crib something from Wikipedia, maybe. ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 06:56, June 8, 2011 (UTC)

Unidentified Twi'lek (Korriban space station)

 * Nominated by: &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 19:04, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Guest nom for WP:TOR, I guess. That Twi'lek that everyone&mdash;not just the smuggler&mdash;ogled in Return.

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 * 1)  Imperators II (Talk) 20:19, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Still think the reused model should make the Bts. SinisterSamurai 02:44, June 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) I suppose this will do. –Tm_T (Talk) 06:22, June 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) Heh.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  15:43, June 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) GTQ ( Problems? ) 22:11, June 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) Imperators II
 * 2) * I'd say the uniform was black and gray.
 * 3) **Changed.
 * 4) * Shouldn't it be "a Republic corporal"?  Imperators II (Talk) 20:06, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) **Yes, I suppose so. Changed.
 * 6) **By the way, I de-linked black, since the rules allow to link the article simply to color once rather than every specific color. Thanks for the copy-edit and the review, Imperators!&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 20:13, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) ***Whoops, didn't notice "green" was linked to color instead of green. :D  Imperators II (Talk) 20:19, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) SinisterSamurai
 * 9) * This character has the exact same model as Eleena Daru, down to the outfit and the headdress. The only difference is that the lighting is not consistent between the render/display and Return's space station environment. Compared to other, in-environment shots of Daru, the twi'lek is nearly indistinguishable. If this argument doesn't completely void the need for this article, then the re-use of a model should, at the very least, be mentioned in the Bts. SinisterSamurai 00:04, June 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) **I do not see this as Eleena Daru. The outfit, as you mentioned, is the same, something I never would have noticed. However, this Twi'lek very clearly has green skin, and I don't think that's simply a lighting issue. It also doesn't quite fit canonically, with Daru being a close ally to the Sith, but considering the amount of time that passes between Return and Deceived, that's probably not a wholly valid argument. Still, I think the skin color is at least enough to say that this is not Daru, but I can agree with at least putting something like that in the BTS.
 * 11) ***Struck because of below conflict. SinisterSamurai 02:37, June 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 12) * If we are ignoring ducktest policy and determining that this is not Eleena Daru, then we know nothing about this character. She could be a waitress. The smuggler's off-color humor about inspecting troops is not enough to identify the position or affiliation this twi'lek had. SinisterSamurai 00:04, June 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 13) **I think that's fair to say. I'll move the article to Unidentified Twi'lek (Korriban space station).
 * 14) * The republic trooper who did the chastising has an existing article: Unidentified Havoc Squad commander, and this article should link there. SinisterSamurai 00:04, June 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 15) **Are we sure that this is the same person? There are two troopers present. Can we say with confirmation that the corporal and the Havoc Squad commander are the same individual? Thanks for the review!&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 01:48, June 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 16) ***In Return, both troopers are different. One has a big black triangle on his chest, and the other (the speaker), has a knife strapped. The speaker's armor is identical to the Hope trooper. They knife Trooper and the Hope trooper also have the same voice actor. And, when knife trooper removes his helmet after the explosion, we see he shares the same face model as Hope Trooper. SinisterSamurai 02:37, June 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 17) ****Good catch. I was pretty confident that the commander was the other guy, just based on positioning and such, but your evidence is sound.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 02:40, June 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 18) fihgdihgdsho
 * 19) * I normally don't review on the CAN, but this caught my eye: "The model for Eleena Daru, who appeared in The Old Republic's first trailer, Deceived, appears to be reused for this Twi'lek, whose uniform and headdress are nearly identical to Daru's. However, Daru is a Rutian Twi'lek with blue skin,[3] and the two have not been confirmed to be the same individual." Unless it's confirmed to be the same character, this statement is speculation, which has no place within the article.  JangFett  (Talk) 02:10, June 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 20) **Classic case of two reviewers wanting two different things :P No slight to either of you, as you both make valid points here. Jang, since I concur that this is speculation, I will remove it. Thank you for your review.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 02:28, June 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 21) ***Personally, I would have worded it less speculatively. There's a fine line between speculation and observation. SinisterSamurai 02:37, June 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 22) ****I agree there's a fine line, and honestly, there seems to be some inconsistency as to when an observation like that is considered speculation and when it's not&mdash;take, for example, the second paragraph of the BTS in Tynnan, which is a featured article. I'd be more than willing to put that in, less speculatively, if an EC thinks it belongs.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 02:54, June 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 23) Tm
 * 24) * Didn't the Sith attack happen right after the oogling? The article currently presents these two events as rather separate, try tie them together. (: –Tm_T (Talk) 08:38, June 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 25) **Heh, how's that? Thanks for the review!&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 11:47, June 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 26) Bob
 * 27) *"...the smuggler admired her form..." This is obviously what is intended, but can we say it without it being speculative? Could he have been admiring her outfit? Could he have known her from somewhere and was just trying to figure out where? You get what I'm saying, I think... ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 22:25, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

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PTB-625 planetary bomber

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 16:50, June 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Last nom from the Cross Sections

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Support
 * 1) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 21:23, June 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  22:12, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Axinal
 * 2) * This might seem a bit nitpicky, but you mention in the infobox that it was used by the Republic Navy, but in the body you only mention the Republic. Could you add that it was used by the Navy?
 * 3) **Added.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 16:36, June 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) * Also, could you add the publish date for the RotS cross-sections?
 * 5) **Added.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 16:36, June 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) *Otherwise, a nice-looking article.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 23:52, June 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) **Thank you.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 16:36, June 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) Rubedo
 * 9) *Reload the infobox. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 20:59, June 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) **Done. Just that you know it, I hate you for doing this to me. :P  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 16:03, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

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Iyra language

 * Nominated by: ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 02:13, June 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Hurry up with that language infobox, Axinal! :) ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 02:13, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

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Support
 * 1) Pullmani Aletheiara Fhtagn Belaqua. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 05:52, June 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 21:21, June 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  22:09, June 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) Menkooroo 17:16, June 11, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Axinal
 * 2) * I'm getting there :P. Yesterday was a looooong day. I have only one tiny problem with this article: In the BTS text you say that the language was indirectly mentioned in GG4; but in the Sources section, you don't have an template. I understand that this is because the language is never specifically named, and thus you couldn't really say it was directly mentioned, but it was still not quite indirect. It just seems# a little inconsistent to me at the moment, but I understand the reasoning behind it, so I am willing to let it go if you don't think there's a better way to do it. Other than that, it's a nice article.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 10:39, June 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **No, you're right. The problem is that we can only use either 1stm or Imo, since there is no "First indirectly mentioned" template. But I think perhaps Imo is the more relevant one here, so I've gone ahead and changed it. Thanks again, and let me know when that infobox is ready to roll! ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 20:44, June 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) ***You can't do ? I've done that with some of my articles, I think. Either way, I don't mind it the way it is. Nice work, Bob!&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 21:21, June 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) Exiled Jedi
 * 6) * Have you checked if it is in Galaxy Guide 4: Alien Races, Second Edition?
 * 7) *Other than that, a very good article.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  12:29, June 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) **Yeah, I did check, and for some reason the line about "F'tral" meaning "water" was cut out. Thanks for the review! ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 20:44, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

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Kuna's Eye

 * Nominated by: &mdash; TK-999  Era-imp.png( Rise of the Empire ) 18:06, June 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: After trade routes come the bright stars.

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Support
 * 1) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 10:25, June 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Good.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  11:24, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Axinal
 * 2) * I understand the desire to avoid repetition, but I don't think it's quite proper to have 1,000 written in numerals and then spelled out fully later. I think it would be better to keep it consistent, even if it's somewhat repetitive.
 * 3) * Planet should be linked somewhere in the article, I'm thinking either by pipelinking "protoplanetary" or just linking it in the BTS. An EC might have a more definitive stance on it.
 * 4) * Also, I think a cropped version of the image on page 189 of TEA might serve as a fair image for the article. Would you be able to upload that?
 * 5) *Otherwise, very nice.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 03:04, June 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) **Done as requested. Thanks for the review!&mdash; TK-999  Era-imp.png( Rise of the Empire ) 08:42, June 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) Hatchet
 * 8) * If the Atlas references a specific mineral-rich protoplanetary disk, I think that an "unidentified" article is in order.
 * 9) **Indeed.&mdash; TK-999  Era-imp.png( Rise of the Empire ) 13:00, June 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) * Is "cognominal system" an alias of "Kuna's Eye system?" If so, shouldn't it be capitalized?
 * 11) **Clarified.&mdash; TK-999  Era-imp.png( Rise of the Empire ) 13:00, June 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 12) * Rather than write something like Kuna's eye system to get Kuna's eye system, it's better to just write Kuna's eye system and then pipelink star system later in the article.
 * 13) **Change implemented.
 * 14) *Why is the thin disk "so-called?" And should it have its own article? Menkooroo 12:46, June 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 15) **It is only mentioned in Ebenn Q3 Baobab's in-universe lesson in the introduction of the Atlas. &mdash; TK-999  Era-imp.png( Rise of the Empire ) 13:00, June 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 16) ***I... don't really see how that answers either of those questions. Menkooroo 04:07, June 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 17) Imperators II
 * 18) * "Kuna's Eye system" can't be sourced to p.192. Rather the appendix.  Imperators II (Talk) 17:32, June 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 19) **Well, p. 192 says that "The disk is full of valuable minerals, and proespectors are frequent sights in the system." However, I'll add the appendix as well.&mdash; TK-999  Era-imp.png( Rise of the Empire ) 17:42, June 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 20) ***My bad, missed that part.  Imperators II (Talk) 18:04, June 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 21) * Page 192 states that "the Kuna worlds are so named because they form part of the Kuna constellation visible in the night skies of Maya Kovel". Add this info.  Imperators II (Talk) 17:36, June 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 22) **Included.&mdash; TK-999  Era-imp.png( Rise of the Empire ) 17:42, June 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 23) Bob
 * 24) *I'm pretty sure this system was introduced in the article "Endor and the Moddell Sector," not the Atlas. This source needs to be consulted and any info it has added.
 * 25) *What source calls it the Moddell subsector? I'm pretty sure it's a full sector. If it is a subsector, what it's a subsector of should be added too. ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 17:58, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

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Hangar 8122

 * Nominated by:  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 08:01, June 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: TCW Webcomics location

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Support
 * 1) Good job, Gethralkin!-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  19:57, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * You mention the facility as a station once, but you do not link to space station. If it is a space station, please link it. Otherwise change it to facility, which is the term you used before.
 * 3) **Fixed.  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 17:16, June 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) * Context on Bormus. Is it a planet? Where is it located?
 * 5) **Done.  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 17:16, June 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) *I also took care of a few linking problems. (Jedi, The Clone Wars, The Clone Wars: Procedure) Try to link everything the next time.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  11:53, June 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) **Oops, you did link The Clone Wars, sorry.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  11:54, June 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) Axinal
 * 9) * I have trouble with the phrase "Gran planet". Compare it with the phrase "Human planet," which to me makes it sound like the planet itself is Human. Could you perhaps say "Gran-affiliated planet" or something of the like? Otherwise, very nice.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 23:37, June 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) **No Gran is big enough to be a planet!!! Fixed. ;)  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 00:03, June 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) ***You've obviously never heard of Jabba the Gran. :P&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 00:20, June 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 12) *Also, would a quote be possible, even if it doesn't mention 8122 directly? I think even the line spoken by the guard, "I can't have you come in here, troops," would be fine.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 23:57, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

Comments
 * The article is currently 190 words, so while it's technically below the 200-word threshold for the necessary attempt at an intro, it might be worthwhile to try sectioning the article a bit to see if it can reach GA potential. This is not an objection or a demand, just a thought.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 23:37, June 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * I will see what I can do. It might be possible, but I can see it easily being a restatement of intro to body, as there is not really a whole lot on the hangar itself. The quote you mention above would probably work. Most of the text was originally in the Bts, though, so it might work either way.  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 00:13, June 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * I'm fine with it as a CAN, so no worries if it doesn't work out. It won't affect my vote.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 00:21, June 13, 2011 (UTC)