Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Ixgil


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Ixgil

 * Nominated by: SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 06:01, September 6, 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Thanks to Cylka for all her help with my KotOR noms.

(5 ACs/2 Users/7 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 14:24, September 7, 2009 (UTC)
 * 2)  Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 08:11, September 8, 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) Excellent work. More KotOR minor NPA articles please!  Graestan ( Talk ) 13:30, September 9, 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) *NPA articles??? O_o SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 08:50, September 10, 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) --Skippy Farlstendoiro 13:37, September 9, 2009 (UTC)
 * 6)  CC7567  (talk) 22:26, September 9, 2009 (UTC)
 * 7) Jedi Kasra (talk) 14:12, September 12, 2009 (UTC)
 * 8) Toprawa and Ralltiir 23:10, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) The Grand Master
 * 2) * Is there an article for the battle in which The Endar Spire was destroyed? If not, please make one, and link it.
 * 3) **Indeed there is. Done.
 * 4) * "Several days afterwards, the apartments were the subject of a raid conducted by a Human soldier and two battle droids. When Ixgil complained about the Sith's frequent raids on the building" What frequent raids? You've only mentioned one.
 * 5) **Fixed.
 * 6) * Is there an article for the raid on the apartment, (or at least the battle with Onasi and Revan afterwards)? If so, please link, and if not, please create one, and then link it.
 * 7) **Well, I'm not sure it deserves one. While we don't really have a notability clause for the KotOR games, I don't think it's any more important than a myriad of minor skirmishes that appear in the game, none of which have articles ATM.
 * 8) ***Fair enough.
 * 9) *I've fixed these, but be careful of overlinking, and remember not to link the subjects of quotes. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 04:22, September 7, 2009 (UTC)
 * 10) **I will. Thanks for the review. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 06:58, September 7, 2009 (UTC)
 * 11) The statement in the infobox that Taris is his homeworld - is that an assumption that he was born there, or that he was a resident and hence it was his homeworld? I would be inclined to remove it if it is the latter. -  Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 08:33, September 7, 2009 (UTC)
 * 12) *Yeah it is assumed that since he lives there, it is his homeworld, which I guess isn't always the case. I've removed it. Thanks for the review. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 11:20, September 7, 2009 (UTC)
 * 13) Toprawa:
 * 14) * Does this character not appear in some sort in the game's strategy guide?
 * 15) **Ah, well, I've taken a look through my local gaming stores' Prima stockpiles, and unfortunately, it's out of print. Even my... less than legal means failed to turn up anything but the guide for the second game. I am also restricted by my parents from buying things online. I've started an SH thread in the hopes that someone has it. Hope to get back to you soon about this.
 * 16) ***I've moved your thread to the more appropriate KB. Toprawa and Ralltiir 19:42, September 10, 2009 (UTC)
 * 17) ****Nope. Jedi Kasra helpfully checked it up for me, and there is no mention of him. Adn for the other objection, is that satisfactory explanation? SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 00:16, September 13, 2009 (UTC)
 * 18) * Also, the final paragraph of the BTS, about the cutscene dialogue inconsistency, seems entirely trivial, especially since, as I understand it, Ixgil himself does not speak either of the lines. Unless you have an amazingly convincing reason for keeping you can persuade me with, please remove. Toprawa and Ralltiir 22:44, September 9, 2009 (UTC)
 * 19) **While Ixgil doesn't anctually say any of the lines, the quotes in the article are affected. It's there to explain two different usages of the quotes. If you don't think it's necessary, I can take it out. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 08:46, September 10, 2009 (UTC)
 * 20) ***Responding to your last post down here, I would only request that you reword it in such a way to specify that "the quotes found in this article are presented from the actual spoken dialogue" or however you want to word it, so we know explicitly that portion's purpose for being in the BTS. Toprawa and Ralltiir 00:29, September 13, 2009 (UTC)
 * 21) ****Added a little line explaining its relevance. How's that? SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 07:05, September 13, 2009 (UTC)
 * 22) *****Works for me. Toprawa and Ralltiir 23:10, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

Comments


 * Been sitting on this one for a while. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 06:01, September 6, 2009 (UTC)