Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Vandolay

Vandolay

 * Nominated by: Hanzo Hasashi 23:36, March 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: The Empire's latex salesman?

Comments

 * Did I go into excessive play-by-play detail not relevant to Vandolay during the Avenger pursuit of the Millennium Falcon scene? It was the only way I could think of writing it. Please comment if you believe it should be changed. Also in the line "as he (Needa) requested a communications officer to prepare his TIE/sh shuttle to take him to the Super Star Destroyer so he would personally apologize to Lord Vader" the character who is highlighted is called a communications officer in the script. Is that script alone proof he was one? If not, I will change it. Hanzo Hasashi 23:36, March 21, 2011 (UTC)