Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Buran Borsil


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Buran Borsil

 * Nominated by: -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 15:19, 14 December 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Former GA. Part of the somewhat on-hold AckyProject GOSS. 1,141 words.

(6 Inqs/0 Users/6 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  20:09, 24 December 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) Cull Tremayne 17:30, 13 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) I have no idea how he was not included in the CSWE. &mdash;  Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 17:25, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) Green Tentacle (Talk) 19:57, 21 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) --  Darth Culator  (Talk) 20:18, 22 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 6) A bit &amp;mdash;y at times, but otherwise fine. --Imperialles 12:20, 26 January 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Do we need the explanation of what a Nord is? Wouldn't that be more suited to the Nord article? Thefourdotelipsis 07:01, 21 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) *Well, I sort of wanted to convey the message that he's three feet tall. Even if it's a species trait and not something unique to him personally, I think it's kind of important to mention it and not rely on people using links to what is a thoroughly uninformative article. It's like if there was, say, a twelve-foot tall inside-out guy who was otherwise pretty plain and boring, I think we should mention his height because otherwise people would think he's just a plain and boring guy, if that makes any sense. The way I look at it, it's something that a licensed author would want to know if he/she was browsing the site, and as it is is the best way to convey the info. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 20:21, 22 January 2009 (UTC)

Comments


 * Not an objection, but could you try to get at least one of the redlinks filled in sometime?  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 20:09, 24 December 2008 (UTC)
 * The last sentence of the P&T seems to suggest that Warren was a member of the Alliance, since you go straight from high-ranking rebels to "Others, such as..." That might just be a wording choice though. Cull Tremayne 17:30, 13 January 2009 (UTC)
 * Reworded it a tad. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 16:41, 20 January 2009 (UTC)