Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Akanseh


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Akanseh

 * Nominated by: - Cavalier One ( Squadron channel ) 10:41, 15 June 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: More DarkStryder goodness

(5 Inqs/0 User/5 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Greyman ( Talk ) 17:04, 18 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) Cavalier One makes me want to explore DarkStryder.  Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 13:46, 1 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) Green Tentacle (Talk) 18:30, 9 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 18:04, 10 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) Toprawa and Ralltiir 14:50, 11 July 2008 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) From the desk of Atarumaster88
 * 2) * "transported between planets," You use a very similar phrase two lines up. Reword or something. (intro)
 * 3) **Reworded.
 * 4) * More of a question than anything, but Akanseh's ultimate actions with that one syringe are unknown? They're not listed.
 * 5) **It's never explictly stated what he did with the syringe, just that he faced the choice to administer it to the prisoner, or face the same fate.
 * 6) * I would de-capitalize Headman, but if that's how the source writes it, then it should be left that way.
 * 7) **Rechecked the source, and decapitalized.
 * 8) *Otherwise clean. I like your work, Cavalier One. Have a Super Terrific Friendly Un-frustrating day. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 20:17, 30 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 9) **Thanks for the review. - Cavalier One ( Squadron channel ) 08:19, 1 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 10) Toprawa:
 * 11) * Can we link some battle article to Mon Calamari's subjugation?
 * 12) **Linked to First Battle of Mon Calamari (Imperial Era), which I believe should be the right one.
 * 13) * I suspect we also have an article for this "mission": "Akanseh learned of a New Republic mission assigned to track Moff Sarne down"
 * 14) **At the moment, we don't as far as I know. I'm working on one off-line since its a big article that covers all four books of the DarkStryder Campaign.
 * 15) * I've created a red link for something that really should be an article. Please create one to kill the intro red link. Toprawa and Ralltiir 00:28, 11 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 16) **Killed. - Cavalier One ( Squadron channel ) 07:44, 11 July 2008 (UTC)

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