Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Veamon


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Veamon

 * Nominated by: Clonehunter(Report your W.M.D.) 02:33, December 2, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: More Dark Forces II mp stuff.

(4 ECs/0 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1) Ayrehead02 (talk) 23:32, December 2, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 21:55, December 5, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  03:41, December 17, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) Supreme Emperor (talk) 06:17, December 17, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) * You don't need to say he's a scout twice.
 * 2) **I think it's needed in context as too his arsenal (per MotS), but the way it was worded wasn't good. I changed it up now, though if you still think it should be removed then I'll remove the second mention.
 * 3) * Given that he's the only current member, there doesn't need to be a category for his species. Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:33, December 2, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) **Alright. Removed the category then. --Clonehunter(Report your W.M.D.) 22:49, December 2, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) No mention of gender at all??? Is he male, or is it unconfirmed? Either way, you need to add an appropriate category.  501st  dogma ( talk ) 23:43, December 3, 2013 (UTC)
 * 6) *Never seen such a use of question marks from you before. He uses the game's more male body, however, seeing that he appears to be some new alien species, I didn't want to jump to any gender conclusions, because we wouldn't know what a female version of Veamon would look like. As multiplayer profiles, they have basically zero bio minus what the MotS Personalities provides us. Also, I didn't know there was a category for unknown genders. Consider it fixed! --Clonehunter(Report your W.M.D.) 15:15, December 4, 2013 (UTC)


 * SE
 * 1) *" Veamon was a scout and a member of a blue-skinned humanoid species that had gray eyes, active during the reign of the New Republic." Can you reword this a bit so he info about the species and eyes come before the scout part?
 * 2) **How is that?
 * 3) * Can you specify that the pauldron was on his right shoulder? Supreme Emperor (talk) 16:33, December 6, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) **Okay --Clonehunter(Report your W.M.D.) 15:51, December 7, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) * Can anything be said about his pants? Supreme Emperor (talk) 02:18, December 13, 2013 (UTC)
 * 6) **I believe that goes under "darkly colored clothing". His jacket received special attention due to the red shape.--Clonehunter(Report your W.M.D.) 22:30, December 14, 2013 (UTC)

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