Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Verre Sydia's husband

Verre Sydia's husband

 * Nominated by: Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 16:46, August 23, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Part 2

(2 ECs/2 Users/4 Total)
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 * 1) 501st  dogma ( talk ) 00:13, August 24, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) This reminds me of the time I waged war against the CAN page with TEA.&mdash; Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:27, August 24, 2012 (UTC)
 * Ah, memories. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 09:51, August 25, 2012 (UTC)
 * 1)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  13:29, September 7, 2012 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) 501
 * 2) * Could you add earlier that Shafu was a former slaver? 501st  dogma ( talk ) 23:34, August 23, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) **Done.
 * 4) * Add that he is male in the body. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 23:46, August 23, 2012 (UTC)
 * 5) **Calling him a "man" is good enough, I believe. Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 00:06, August 24, 2012 (UTC)
 * 6) Rubedo
 * 7) * Calling Zallow "fallen" has undue Dark Jedi connotations.
 * 8) **Fair point.
 * 9) * I was confused as to whom the Rodian is. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 06:43, August 24, 2012 (UTC)
 * 10) **Blarg. Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 14:18, August 24, 2012 (UTC)
 * 11) Exiled Jedi
 * 12) * It's 200 words, you're probably going to need to write an intro. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  22:54, August 24, 2012 (UTC)
 * 13) **Not anymore, I believe.
 * 14) * You're going to need to source the years to something besides the game. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  22:59, August 24, 2012 (UTC)
 * 15) **Done. Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 17:06, August 25, 2012 (UTC)
 * 16) * I believe that the Strtegic Infomration Service needs a little context. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  13:49, September 2, 2012 (UTC)
 * 17) **Done. Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 22:25, September 5, 2012 (UTC)

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