Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations



This page is for the nomination of "comprehensive articles". For a list of "comprehensive articles", see Category:Wookieepedia comprehensive articles.


 * CAN archiving checklist

What is a "comprehensive article?"

A "comprehensive article" is an article that contains all information regarding the topic. Often, "comprehensive articles" cannot reach Featured or Good Article status due to their limited content. This process is intended to recognize articles that contain all relevant canon information, yet are still under the 250 word limit required for a Good Article. The purpose of this is twofold&mdash;firstly, to help users distinguish what is a stub, and what is merely a short article with no further relevant material to be added, and, more importantly, to highlight for the reader when they are reading something that has been judged definitely "comprehensive"&mdash;that is, a guarantee to the reader that whatever they are reading contains the sum total of all available content.

Nominations and promotions of the Comprehensive article process are overseen by a collective of users known as the "EduCorps," which is made up of the Inquisitorius, the AgriCorps, and various other experienced users who are considered qualified to adequately judge the nominated material.

Lucasfilm Ltd. and its many licensees continue to expand the Star Wars universe. Since new information might become available, it may be necessary to revoke a "comprehensive article's" status. A forum will be used to nominate articles that have fallen out-of-date. Members of the EduCorps will then post a warning template on that page, and a grace period of one week will be instituted in which the article can be improved. If there is a significant amount of new information, it is likely that once updated, the article will become eligible for Good article status, and thereby ineligible for Comprehensive article status.

READ THIS FIRST!

An article must&hellip;


 * 1) &hellip;be well-written and detailed.
 * 2) &hellip;be unbiased, non-point of view.
 * 3) &hellip;be sourced with all available sources and appearances.
 * 4) &hellip;follow the Manual of Style, Layout Guide, and all other policies on Wookieepedia. This is, of course, within reason. If a topic only has a very limited degree of content that cannot be divided up into the relevant article sections, it is not required that it follow the Layout Guide precisely. This is to be judged on a case-by-case basis.
 * 5) &hellip;following the review process, be stable, i.e., does not change significantly from day to day and is not the subject of ongoing edit wars. This does not apply to vandalism and protection or semi-protection as a result of vandalism.
 * 6) &hellip;not be tagged with any sort of improvement tags (i.e. more sources, expand, etc).
 * 7) &hellip;have no redlinks.
 * 8) &hellip;have all relevant canon information presented.
 * 9) &hellip;be completely referenced for all available material and sources. See Sourcing for more information. While this is not required for an article possessing a singular source, it is encouraged, as it provides both uniformity and a good infrastructure should the topic be referenced in any future materials.
 * 10) &hellip;have all quotes and images sourced.
 * 11) &hellip;provide at least one relevant quote on the article if available.
 * 12) &hellip;include a "Behind the scenes" section for In-Universe articles.
 * 13) &hellip;counting the introduction and "Behind the scenes" material, must not exceed 250 words in length (not including captions, quotes, or headers, etc). Any articles exceeding the limit should be taken to the Good Article nominations page for consideration.

How to nominate:


 * 1) First, nominate an article you find is worthy of comprehensive status, putting it at the bottom of the list below. Nominated articles must meet all thirteen requirements stated above.
 * 2) Add CAnom at the top of the article you are nominating.
 * 3) Be sure to place sign in the "Nominated by" line when the nomination is posted for voting.
 * 4) Others will object to the nomination if they disagree that the article is good enough; they will then supply reasons for doing so, and ways to improve the article in accordance with the established rules.
 * 5) Nominators and supporters will adjust the article until the objectors (with reasonable objections) are satisfied. Objectors may also make alterations&mdash;if there is any reason for contention on a given point, it should be settled in a civil manner in the nomination field itself.
 * 6) Users may not vote on their own articles.
 * 7) There is no limit to the amount of nominations a given user can submit at any given time.

How to vote:


 * 1) Before doing anything, be sure to read the article completely, keeping a sharp eye out for mistakes.
 * 2) Afterward, compare the article to the criteria listed above, and then either support or object the article's nomination.
 * 3) *If you object, please supply concrete reasons for doing so, and how it can be improved.
 * 4) As stated above, any objections will be looked upon by the nominator, supporters, and anyone willing to improve the article, and action will be taken to please the objectors. Do not strike other users' objections; it is up to the objector to review the changes and strike if they are satisfied.
 * 5) There are several ways in which an article can receive the required number of votes. Within a 48-hour period of nomination, only EduCorps votes will count towards the total, although anyone may choose to vote in that window. If two members of the EduCorps support a nomination in that window, and there are no outstanding objections, the article can be considered a "Comprehensive article" and be tagged with the template 48 hours after the initial nomination.  The talk page will also be tagged with the CA template. When the 48 hours are up, any user's votes will contribute towards the total. If one EduCorps member has voted for an article after a week, three regular votes will be required. After the 48 hour period, an article can still also pass with just two EduCorps votes.
 * 6) Once a nomination is successful, it will be placed on the Comprehensive article list. Instructions on how to archive nominations, successful or otherwise, can be found here. Anyone can archive a nomination&mdash;just make sure it has the correct number of votes, has been nominated for at least a week (or 48 hours if there are two EC votes), and that there are absolutely no outstanding objections. If you are not sure how to do this, just ask, and someone will likely be more than willing to help you. Also, if you think you can slip one past us, think again&mdash;someone is always watching you.

All nominations will be considered idle and are subject to instantaneous removal by EduCorps members if objections are not addressed, or at least not answered, after a period of 2 weeks.

Wookiee Trade Guild

 * Nominated by:&mdash; priceline negotiator [[Image:Priceline.JPG|20px]] 22:00, June 16, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: 231 words. I think I can get this to GA with a little more content.

(0 ECs/2 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) --Skippy Farlstendoiro 13:43, June 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Thefourdotelipsis 03:29, June 20, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) * Very good, I'm just not sure that "dismayed" is the right choice of words for the Federation's reaction? Is that how it comes across in Battlefront? I can't remember. Thefourdotelipsis 02:04, June 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) **It was more of just aggravation that an inferior company was not paying their tax. I changed it to aggravation.&mdash; priceline negotiator [[Image:Priceline.JPG|20px]] 02:08, June 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) Fett
 * 4) *Are you certain that you've checked all sources, post-2004? I.e, CSWE, Battlefront's Prima guide? They may have a mentioning somewhere.
 * 5) * Where did this "28 BBY" originate? You keep changing from "In 28 BBY" to "Around 28 BBY."
 * 6) **I changed it to be specific to 28 BBY.&mdash; priceline negotiator [[Image:Priceline.JPG|20px]] 03:17, June 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 7) * In the history, start the section with what the Wookiee Trade Guild was, then go into the whole Taxing.
 * 8) **Done.&mdash; priceline negotiator [[Image:Priceline.JPG|20px]] 03:17, June 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 9) * "The Guild resisted the taxation, much to the aggravation of the Federation," Why did the guild resist to it?
 * 10) **Battlefront doesn't clarify.&mdash; priceline negotiator [[Image:Priceline.JPG|20px]] 03:17, June 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 11) * You mention the Guild built an army to fight against the Trade Federation's army. Did they create their army as a result to fight the droids? Please clarify.
 * 12) **Battlefront doesn't clarify. The Guild just has an army.&mdash; priceline negotiator [[Image:Priceline.JPG|20px]] 03:17, June 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 13) * "[...]began between the Guild's army and the Federation's droid forces, under the leadership of Count Dooku" So Dooku led both armies?
 * 14) **Fixed.&mdash; priceline negotiator [[Image:Priceline.JPG|20px]] 03:17, June 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 15) * The ending of the history is very rough, as you vaguely say "the battle ended because the droids beat the Wookiees." Could you somehow expand the Guild's and their army's role within the battle?
 * 16) **In Battlefront, the battle changes everytime, and especially in the first one, there aren't any set objectives or anything, so there's no set story to the battle. I can't really specify the Guild's role in the abttle other than they were defeated.&mdash; priceline negotiator [[Image:Priceline.JPG|20px]] 03:17, June 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 17) *More to come.  JangFett  (Talk) 03:00, June 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 18) **Please take a look at the changes that I've made. The whole Dooku sending out the droids flows much better.  JangFett  (Talk) 19:29, June 18, 2010 (UTC)
 * 19) Soresu
 * 20) *More detail on the battle is required. I don't remember the specifics of the level, but the size of the Wookiee army can be determined if there is a reinforcement limit, and events of the battle could be extrapolated from the mission objectives.
 * 21) **Reinforcement level, yes. But in the original Battlefront, there are no mission objectives other than the usual (detroying all reinforcements / command post capture). In Battlefront II, there's actually a storyline to the battle.&mdash; priceline negotiator [[Image:Priceline.JPG|20px]] 17:46, June 20, 2010 (UTC)
 * 22) **I added the reinforcements to both sides.&mdash; priceline negotiator [[Image:Priceline.JPG|20px]] 17:52, June 20, 2010 (UTC)
 * 23) ***If I may be excused for butting in here, this is an example of pure game mechanics that don't belong here. If we take the Battlefront reinforcement limits as the canonical size of the armies, then the Republic only had 250 clones at the Battle of Geonosis, which is preposterous. I don't think anything can be taken from the reinforcement limits except that the two armies were of similar size, and even that may be stretching the limits of what is and isn't game mechanics. &mdash; Master Jonathan New Jedi Order.svg ( Jedi Council Chambers ) 20:49, June 20, 2010 (UTC)
 * 24) ****Sorry, but I think I should have clarified my meaning further at the beginning. I think that they represent the minimum amount of troops that were there, not the exact number. I treat it like a mission objective; while it doesn't mean that "only" those events happened, you can at least draw that it occurred. I suppose it is debatable though... SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 05:49, June 23, 2010 (UTC)
 * 25) *Does it actually specifically say that it was dissolved? If it was, it needs to be clearly stated in the History section. However, destruction of headquarters does not necessarily mean the guild was destroyed. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 03:43, June 20, 2010 (UTC)
 * 26) **You raise a good point. I always assumed the Guild was dissolved...&mdash; priceline negotiator [[Image:Priceline.JPG|20px]] 17:46, June 20, 2010 (UTC)
 * 27) ***I took out the "dissolved" part of the infobox.&mdash; priceline negotiator [[Image:Priceline.JPG|20px]] 17:52, June 20, 2010 (UTC)

Comments
 * According to this question and Leland Chee's reply further down the page, the storyline of Star Wars: Battlefront is only S-canon, but the "locations, characters, and technology" are C-canon. That means this article either needs to be tagged with Ambig, or it needs Ambigstart and Ambigend in appropriate locations. I am of the opinion that nothing here falls into C-canon as described by Mr. Chee and that the article should simply be tagged Ambig, but I've never dealt with any ambiguous source before, much less a combination S- and C-canon source like Battlefront. Could someone more knowledgeable about this type of thing chime in? &mdash; Master Jonathan New Jedi Order.svg ( Jedi Council Chambers ) 23:34, June 16, 2010 (UTC)
 * IIRC, if it contradicts C- or G- canon in any way, we need to tag it, but if it jives just fine, there's no need for a tag. Thefourdotelipsis 00:11, June 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * That's not how I understand S-canon. My understanding is that if S-canon "contradicts C- or G- canon in any way", then it becomes non-canon. It's when both there is no contradiction with higher canon and it is not referenced in a higher canon source (both of which I believe are the case here) that it's ambiguous and needs to be tagged as such. At least, that's how I understood it after spending an hour reading through the Holocron questions thread on SW.com to find the one post that I linked above. Did I completely misunderstand something here? &mdash; Master Jonathan New Jedi Order.svg ( Jedi Council Chambers ) 00:17, June 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * I'm not really sure about it, so I'm going to keep the tag off. It doesn't contradict anything right now.&mdash; priceline negotiator [[Image:Priceline.JPG|20px]] 01:34, June 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * This is rather infamously a point of contention&mdash;the only problem I have with adding the ambig tag is that the wording doesn't quite apply to what S-canon is, and the tag, as far as I'm aware, is only used on content from the "ambiguous RPG magazines." Of course, while pretty much everything from Marvel has been referenced elsewhere by now, I can't recall that we ever put any templates on the isolated Marvel content. This falls into much the same category. Perhaps we should have an S-canon tag or something. But as far as I understood S-canon, being "secondary," it's canon until proven otherwise. Thefourdotelipsis 01:56, June 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * Well, Star Wars Tales 1–20 are considered S-canon until referenced or contradicted, and we tag them as ambiguous. It seems to me that for the sake of consistency, we should do the same here. &mdash; Master Jonathan New Jedi Order.svg ( Jedi Council Chambers ) 02:04, June 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * Perhaps, like Thefourdotelipsis says, we should create a template specifically for S-canon sources that have not been contradicted.&mdash; priceline negotiator [[Image:Priceline.JPG|20px]] 02:06, June 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * The ambiguous template is fine. ambig  JangFett  (Talk) 05:25, June 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * S-canon is canon. It simply takes lower precedence in the case of contradictions. Tales ambiguity exists because some are S-canon, and some are not canon at all. - Lord Hydronium 18:14, June 25, 2010 (UTC)
 * OK, I wasn't sure. Thanks for clarifying. &mdash; Master Jonathan New Jedi Order.svg ( Jedi Council Chambers ) 20:44, June 26, 2010 (UTC)

Rorr'hn

 * Nominated by: Thefourdotelipsis 10:57, June 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: The coolest Jedi you never heard of. Someone needs to use this guy.

(2 ECs/3 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 11:23, June 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Lord Hydronium 01:17, July 16, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3)  01:23, July 16, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4)  Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 01:57, July 16, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 06:04, July 18, 2010 (UTC)
 * 6) Assuming that Eyr's objection is satisfactorily handled. —Tommy  9281 18:14, July 20, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Given that his species is not identified, I think you could add some brief description of his appearance to the article. Identifiers such as bipedal etc where applicable. --Eyrezer 01:51, July 16, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) *That strikes me as more suitable material for the species article itself. Thefourdotelipsis 16:09, July 24, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Hepmaga MiOrd

 * Nominated by: Thefourdotelipsis 12:29, June 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Vaguely Kaleesh, perhaps...

(1 ECs/3 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1) --Eyrezer 10:55, June 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 11:24, June 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 18:13, July 20, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) Looks good.&mdash; 18:40, July 26, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) The original source says the Remplish are a clan not a species. Please reword accordingly. --Eyrezer 06:19, June 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Infobox claims he's part of the MiOrd clan, while the article says he's a member of the Remplish clan. Which is correct? --Imperialles 14:31, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Mab Kador

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 18:16, June 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Another from the same sentence.

(1 ECs/2 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 00:27, July 19, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2)  Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 22:10, July 22, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) Good job.&mdash; 18:42, July 26, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Erm.. first sentence doesn't make sense? You might have changed that bit with "the young and eager pilot of the White Panther" at the last minute and forgotten to remove the rest of it.  SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 09:32, July 16, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) *Whoops. Fixed. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 05:56, July 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) Same thing as for Loba, above. Po is incorrect here, as I understand it.  Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 23:32, July 21, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Vetria Scoth

 * Nominated by: Thefourdotelipsis 14:11, June 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Maximum badass.

(0 ECs/1 Users/1 Total)
Support
 * 1) I tried to get him into an WTS entry once. :( - Lord Hydronium 01:20, July 16, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Are you sure that's a colour picture? If it isn't you can't really prove his eye colour. If it is a colour picture however, you could probably also fill in the skin colour field. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 09:41, July 16, 2010 (UTC)
 * From this. Thefourdotelipsis 16:11, July 24, 2010 (UTC)
 * 1) **Well, I can't exactly tell for sure that it's brown... but if you're confident, I'll take your word for it. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 10:43, July 25, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Shao to Gok

 * Nominated by: Thefourdotelipsis 14:49, June 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: "Even if he did turn up, the guards would be woken by the scraping noise as he tried to squeeze his massive swollen head through the door."

(0 ECs/2 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 09:43, July 16, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2)  23:25, July 20, 2010 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Havidald Guffin

 * Nominated by:  Darth Karika  will destroy your planet! 01:08, July 16, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Hmm...

(1 ECs/2 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 20:58, July 16, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 01:31, July 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3)  23:28, July 20, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Do you know for sure whether or not Guffin was male? You use "he" in the body, but you don't actually call him male and you've left the gender field blank in the infobox.  Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 02:03, July 16, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) *Try now.  Darth Karika  will destroy your planet! 14:05, July 16, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Holding Back the Tide

 * Nominated by: Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 23:49, July 16, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Probably a poor title choice, considering he was unable to do so.

(1 ECs/2 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) --Eyrezer 03:18, July 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2)  06:00, July 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 10:49, July 26, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) A nice run you've got going here. Could you provide some context on what his "disgrace" was? Also, seeing as the HNN is IU, you could make mention of its coverage of the book in the actual body. --Eyrezer 00:44, July 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) *Thanks, check it out now and tell me what you think. Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 02:09, July 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) **Looks good to me. It could also be relevant to note that Gunray was part of the scandle that led to his dismissal, which is presumably part of the reason the two books are being compared. That may be a bridge too far, but is something you might like to think about. The article is also only 2 words shy of the GAN mark now. --Eyrezer 03:18, July 17, 2010 (UTC)

Comments
 * I'm still waiting for its mention from CSWE, but if my memory serves me correctly, there was no new canonical info from it. Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 23:49, July 16, 2010 (UTC)
 * It did. Thanks, MJ. Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 04:38, July 17, 2010 (UTC)

Sluis Van space facility

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 06:54, July 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Long live the CAN! Long live the Random Article Noms!

(0 ECs/3 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Darth Karika  will destroy your planet! 19:50, July 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 23:02, July 21, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) Menkooroo 07:25, July 22, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Darth Karika
 * 2) * Infobox is missing the name.
 * 3) * BtS, last sentence: missing italics closing tag.
 * 4) * Did the facility appear in The Thrawn Trilogy Sourcebook, or was it just mentioned?  Darth Karika  will destroy your planet! 13:31, July 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) Kinda minor, but as the information in TTT sourcebook was just reprinted from the DFR sourcebook, wouldn't it be more appropriate to use the DFR sourcebook as your source, rather than TTT sourcebook? Menkooroo 17:00, July 21, 2010 (UTC)
 * 6) *I suppose. TTT was just the one I was looking at that second, so changed. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 06:38, July 22, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Palmer

 * Nominated by:Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 19:59, July 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Battle for Naboo's red shirt

(0 ECs/1 Users/1 Total)
Support
 * 1) Fixed a number of links, and removed the redundant refs. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 01:41, July 28, 2010 (UTC)

Object


 * 1) Redshirt poking!
 * 2) * No refs?
 * 3) **Honestly, I didn't source it becasue of just one appearance. Someone else added CSWE. For all I know, it refers to Bravo Squadron. Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 11:36, July 21, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) ***If you want to find out whether something is in the CSWE, all you have to do is ask here.-- 23:13, July 21, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) ****huh, never knew that. Request pending.
 * 6) ****Fully sourced Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 14:13, July 23, 2010 (UTC)
 * 7) * Could you add the fact that she was female to the paragraph?
 * 8) **Yep.
 * 9) *Interesting.-- 23:35, July 20, 2010 (UTC)
 * 10) * Just one more thing, since she seems to be allied with the Naboo, rather than the GR, you might want to change this to a normal character infobox. Otherwise, good job!-- 23:13, July 21, 2010 (UTC)
 * 11) **Infobox changed. Thanks for the advice.Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 14:13, July 23, 2010 (UTC)
 * 12) Soresu
 * 13) * That born field isn't necessary. If you can't be more specific than "before she died", then it's better to just leave it out.
 * 14) * Unsourced infobox items.
 * 15) * Referencing always comes after punctuation.
 * 16) * If you can prove she's Human, then it needs to be mentioned in places other than the infobox.
 * 17) * Double-check for underlinking and redirect linking.
 * 18) * Her ability to pilot the Speeder and Starfighter should be in the P&T.
 * 19) * Provide some sort of date at the beginning of the Bio. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 10:47, July 26, 2010 (UTC)
 * 20) **Article updated. Thanks for checking it out. Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 16:28, July 26, 2010 (UTC)
 * 21) A few more from Sore
 * 22) * The intro should never have information that is mentioned nowhere else. That's why it doesn't need referencing. Also, it should also be a more complete summary of her life, including her involvement in the battle and her death. So yeah, include the intro stuff in the bio, and then expand the intro. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 10:50, July 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * 23) * There is no need to put two of the same reference next to each other, as it is redundant. The sentences ending in "rescue by her comrades." and "of the capital city Theed." could have their refs removed.
 * 24) *Nice work; it's getting there. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 10:50, July 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * 25) **Oh and I just realised that this is actually 260-something words (even longer after these objections are addressed), meaning that it should by all rights be nominated at WP:GAN rather than here. I recommend you take it over there. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 10:55, July 27, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Haserian

 * Nominated by: Eyrezer 03:06, July 18, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: An H species

(1 ECs/2 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 08:17, July 20, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 23:12, July 21, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) --Tm_T(Talk) 11:03, July 27, 2010 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Hewett

 * Nominated by: Eyrezer 03:06, July 18, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: An H species

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 08:17, July 20, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Two minor changes. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 23:17, July 21, 2010 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Inchichtok

 * Nominated by: Eyrezer 03:06, July 18, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: An I species

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 08:18, July 20, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Last sentence was a shocking twist. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 23:33, July 21, 2010 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Imperial Demonstration Team

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 05:54, July 18, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Article spawned by Random Article research

(1 ECs/2 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 08:13, July 20, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 23:42, July 21, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) After some slight tweaks. &mdash; Master Jonathan New Jedi Order.svg ( Jedi Council Chambers ) 02:10, July 23, 2010 (UTC)

Object

Comments
 * There is no "the" in front of IDT per the card. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 02:22, July 23, 2010 (UTC)
 * Ummm... well, that's just stupid, because it doesn't sound right without "the". But if that's what the card says, then I guess we're stuck with it, even if it is probably just a typo. &mdash; Master Jonathan New Jedi Order.svg ( Jedi Council Chambers ) 02:51, July 23, 2010 (UTC)
 * It's not that bad since it's a proper noun. Kind of like Red Squadron (funny how all arguments end up with it being used as an example). You wouldn't say "the Red Squadron" unless the term was inspecific. In this case, Imperial Demonstration Team is a specific organisation. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 06:05, July 23, 2010 (UTC)
 * Per Soresu. Also, "the" wasn't used infront of either Imperial or Emperor's Demonstration Team-related cards, of which there are three from two separate sets. There's no chance it was a typo. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 06:55, July 23, 2010 (UTC)

Toma (Fallanassi)

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 07:03, July 18, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Just the neighbor, nothing to be concerned of.

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 * 1) Menkooroo 10:51, July 19, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2)  Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 08:09, July 20, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 23:51, July 21, 2010 (UTC)

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 * 1
 * 1) * Is Ialtra a village or a city? You call it both.
 * 2) *" Greatly distraught by this revelation, Akanah was convinced that she would have felt their deaths through the White Current if that were true." Is a confusing sentence --- "that" seems like it's referring to the destruction of the village, which is true. Menkooroo 12:38, July 18, 2010 (UTC)

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Peirs

 * Nominated by: Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 11:21, July 19, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Comprehensive articles: more excuses to nom DarkStryder related articles!

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 * 1)  Darth Karika  will destroy your planet! 20:56, July 19, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 22:09, July 20, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 23:55, July 21, 2010 (UTC)

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Cadinth Oligarchy

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 21:08, July 25, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: We

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 * 1) Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 09:21, July 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 10:29, July 27, 2010 (UTC)

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 * 1) Trayus
 * 2) * "during a conflict between the Republic and a militant secessionist faction, the Oligarchy's loyalty lay with the former." - You link the "militant secessionist faction" to the Confederacy, but it did not yet exist.
 * 3) **The CIS was founded in 24 BBY and this took placve during the Separatist Crisis, just before the Battle of Geonosis. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 06:16, July 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Only according to our article. The databank entry states that it wasn't formally founded until the meeting on Geonosis. Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 07:11, July 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) ****Then what was the fighting during the Separatist Crisis? That's what should be linked and, according to our articlce, that's the CIS, or what would become the CIS apparently. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 07:25, July 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * 6) *****It was with various supporters of secession, not a specific organization or government. And remember, Wookieepedia is not a source. All you need to do is change "militant secessionist faction" to "supporters of secession from the Republic," no link required. Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 08:02, July 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * 7) ******I know it's not a source, but I put trust in it. Fixed on all articles now, though I've left the capitalization the same, per the actual article. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 08:48, July 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * 8) *For what it's worth, the NEC makes it clear the CIS existed under that name as early as 24 BBY. All the Databank says is that the CIS was "formally established" in 22 BBY - but clearly the disparate secessionist groups were already operating under that name, so it should be fine to use it in the article. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 14:18, July 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * 9) **My mistake then. Feel free to re-add the link, but source it. Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 20:57, July 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * 10) * The HNN article refers to the "rally" as an "uprising." You should adjust your wording for accuracy, and link to the uprising.
 * 11) **Was fixed. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 06:16, July 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * 12) * Can you specify that Bodis-Ker Vitan was the planet's watchman?
 * 13) **Fixed. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 06:16, July 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * 14) Soresu
 * 15) * Similarly to Trayus' first objection, "separatist" shouldn't be capitalised, as that would refer to the CIS, which does not exist at this time.
 * 16) **Per above, it does. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 06:11, July 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * 17) ***"Separatist" is capitalized in the actual article. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 08:48, July 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * 18) * Last sentence is long and could be split.
 * 19) **Done. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 06:11, July 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * 20) *Once I review these 5, I will have reviewed all the nominations on the CAN =) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 10:56, July 26, 2010 (UTC)
 * 21) **Woot! NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 06:11, July 27, 2010 (UTC)

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 * Don't forget to CAnom your articles. Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 21:34, July 25, 2010 (UTC)
 * D'oh. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 06:11, July 27, 2010 (UTC)

Saskapeg

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 21:08, July 25, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Didn't

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 * 1) Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 09:22, July 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 10:29, July 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3)  Darth Karika  will destroy your planet! 14:57, July 27, 2010 (UTC)

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 * 1) it's government should be its government.  Darth Karika  will destroy your planet!  23:04, July 25, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) * next time.
 * 3) Basically the same as above&mdash;CIS didn't formally exist yet, note that the Jedi was there because he was the watchman, and link the uprising.  Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 01:35, July 26, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) *Per above.
 * 5) **See above. Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 07:13, July 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * 6) Also same as above with the pro-Separatist thing. This goes for your other noms below too.  SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 11:29, July 26, 2010 (UTC)
 * 7) *Per above. Oh and the article caps it, now that I've taken another look at it. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 06:20, July 27, 2010 (UTC)

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Rankwin Fopow

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 21:08, July 25, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Start

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 * 1) Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 09:24, July 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 10:29, July 27, 2010 (UTC)

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 * 1) Again, maybe it's just me, but that last sentence sounds a little awkward and could be split.  SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 11:36, July 26, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) *Done. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 06:37, July 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) Take care of the CIS thing and you'll be good.  Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 07:16, July 27, 2010 (UTC)

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Prime Oligarch

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 21:08, July 25, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: The

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 * 1) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 00:44, July 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 09:24, July 27, 2010 (UTC)

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 * 1) CIS thing.  Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 07:16, July 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) As I understand it, being leader of the government doesn't necessarily make him Head of State. Also, I'd advise slowing down and taking a little more care with even these small articles; you forgot the CAnom template and there were several typos. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 14:36, July 27, 2010 (UTC)

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Bodis-Ker Vitan

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 21:08, July 25, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Fire!

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 * 1) I have now reviewed all the articles currently nominated for CAN! :D SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 11:40, July 26, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 09:25, July 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 14:19, July 27, 2010 (UTC)

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 * 1) Trayus
 * 2) * You make it sound as if Vitan and the watchman are two different individuals. Please reword to make it clear that they are one in the same. Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 02:25, July 26, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) **Fixed. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 06:29, July 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) * Take care of the CIS thing, as above. Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 07:14, July 27, 2010 (UTC)

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Kixi

 * Nominated by: Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 21:15, July 25, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Some Fatal Alliance

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 * 1)  Darth Karika  will destroy your planet! 23:14, July 25, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) &mdash; 00:32, July 26, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 03:02, July 26, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) --Eyrezer 00:11, July 28, 2010 (UTC)

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 * 1) Karika
 * 2) * Context on Coruscant.
 * 3) * Do we know what species she is? If not, then she belongs in Category:Individuals of unidentified species.  Darth Karika  will destroy your planet! 22:56, July 25, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) **Done and done. Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 23:00, July 25, 2010 (UTC)

TuskBlaster

 * Nominated by: Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 21:35, July 25, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Colgate for piggies.

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 * 1) After some slight link cleanup. &mdash; Master Jonathan New Jedi Order.svg ( Jedi Council Chambers ) 21:51, July 25, 2010 (UTC)
 * Hey, they gotta brush, too.&mdash; 00:32, July 26, 2010 (UTC)
 * 1) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 03:04, July 26, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Dangit, stole my idea. >:O NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 07:29, July 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) --Eyrezer 00:13, July 28, 2010 (UTC)

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Church of Toydaria

 * Nominated by: Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 21:58, July 25, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Isn't this what Tom Cruise is into?

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 * 1) &mdash; 00:33, July 26, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) I like the ad. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 03:06, July 26, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3)  NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 07:31, July 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) --Eyrezer 00:15, July 28, 2010 (UTC)

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The History and Use of Military Languages

 * Nominated by: Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 23:38, July 25, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

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 * 1) Yeah&hellip;&mdash; 00:34, July 26, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 03:08, July 26, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 07:32, July 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 14:49, July 27, 2010 (UTC)

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Adler Roty

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 08:18, July 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: A fellow logophile.

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 * 1) Once the totally irrelevant Clone Wars description stays out. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 14:48, July 27, 2010 (UTC)

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Saskapeg uprising

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 08:49, July 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: By popular demand!

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 * If it's a conjectural title, it shouldn't be capitalized. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 14:42, July 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * Thank you. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 21:54, July 28, 2010 (UTC)

Jastaal

 * Nominated by: Eyrezer 23:37, July 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: These guys were created by Brian Daley for his old-school Han Solo novels.

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Unidentified Human Jedi (Daluuj)

 * Nominated by: Menkooroo 07:45, July 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

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