Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Darth Stryfe


 * ''The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was unsuccessful. Please do not modify it.

Darth Stryfe

 * Nominated by: DC 03:43, 12 October 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Meh, I was bored. And before anyone complains, there's nothing to add for a Powers and Abilities Section, so it isn't getting added.

(3 AC/3 users/6 total)
Support
 * 1) IT WAS ALL MY IDEA! :P IFYLOFD Talk 03:45, 12 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 2)  Graestan ( Talk ) 05:01, 14 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) -  Cavalier One ( Squadron channel ) 12:23, 20 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 4)  —Tommy9281 [[Image:Red lightsaber.png|20px]] ( Peace is a lie ) 14:33, 22 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) Looks like its going through. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie ) 09:12, 29 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 6) Qui-Gon Reborn 04:35, 21 November 2008 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) From Graestan the Cruel:
 * 2) * Another quote, please.
 * 3) * The caption to the image of Stryfe and Meeshal should be expanded beyond "Captain Meeshal."
 * 4) * A little context for why there were Yuuzhan Vong on Ossus, please.
 * 5) * Graestan ( Talk ) 12:05, 12 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 6) **All of the above are fixed. Thanks for the review. DC 14:30, 12 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 7) From the squadron briefing of Cavalier One:
 * 8) * In the intro - a little mention of his involvement in the destruction of the Ossus Jedi Temple is needed. Also, clarification on why Cade Skywalker was present in the Sith Temple on Coruscant is needed.
 * 9) * Succession box needs sourcing. - Cavalier One ( Squadron channel ) 10:13, 13 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 10) **All of the above are fixed. Thanks for the review. DC 20:56, 19 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 11) Soresu
 * 12) * Fixed some grammatical, tense and spelling errors.
 * 13) **And?
 * 14) * Make mention of his Sith Tatoos.
 * 15) **Done.
 * 16) * Needs sucession box for Hand.
 * 17) **See above.
 * 18) ***No you haven't. It needs a separate sucession box for Hand. You only have one for Fist at the moment. I would do it myself, but I'm hopeless at sourcing (one of the main reasons I review GA's but don't write them.)
 * 19) ****Err...wow...I kind of associated this objection with Cavalier's. My bad, and fixed. DC 00:35, 29 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 20) * I think there was something else, but I've forgotten it.
 * 21) **Okay...
 * 22) **Thanks for the review. DC 20:56, 19 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 23) BtS needs to be sourced that Duursema created him. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 12:09, 20 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 24) *Uhh....isn't that self-sourced by using the general Legacy title? I wouldn't know where to find the exact place where it says that Jan drew him. DC 00:35, 29 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 25) Toprawa:
 * 26) *The opening quote provides no context as to how that applies to Stryfe in any way. Some context would help in the attribution line. Toprawa and Ralltiir 18:02, 29 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 27) **Contextified. DC 19:29, 9 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 28) ***This still has nothing to do with Stryfe himself. How does a quote showing Krayt's brutal methods apply to Stryfe at all? Toprawa and Ralltiir 17:06, 12 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 29) ****Oh...wow...fixed. DC 00:33, 19 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 30) Grand Moff Tranner:
 * 31) *Perhaps a better image for the infobox? The current black-and-white one doesn't seem like a good choice.
 * 32) **That;s the best image I got. There are no other good shots of him.
 * 33) ***There are at least two headshots from his two appearances, I'm sure of that. Maybe a text bubble or two would need to be whitened out, but it would still be better than the current one. Grand Moff Tranner [[Image:Imperial Department of Military Research.svg|20px]] (Comlink) 19:43, 9 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 34) ****Meh...could you upload it then? I don't have a scanner....if not, I'll just ask an image junkie around here. DC 14:45, 11 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 35) *****I don't have a scanner either. But I'm sure someone will upload them for you. Grand Moff Tranner [[Image:Imperial Department of Military Research.svg|20px]] (Comlink) 21:00, 11 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 36) * I think there should also be a very brief mention about his lightsaber, since it doesn't appear to be made of yorik coral like all the other Sith lightsabers of the time. Grand Moff Tranner [[Image:Imperial Department of Military Research.svg|20px]] (Comlink) 22:28, 3 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 37) **That would be speculation, and I can't add it. Sorry. DC 19:29, 9 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 38) ***You positive about that? All the other Sith of the time do have coral lightsaber hilts. Grand Moff Tranner [[Image:Imperial Department of Military Research.svg|20px]] (Comlink) 19:43, 9 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 39) ****Just because it appears to be different doesn't mean it is. If there were some definitive statement about his lightsaber, I would add it, but there isn't. Again, saying that his lightsaber was completely different than any other Sith's at this time is speculation. DC 14:45, 11 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 40) *****Fine, fine, fine. I could be persist about this, but I won't be. ;) Grand Moff Tranner [[Image:Imperial Department of Military Research.svg|20px]] (Comlink) 21:00, 11 November 2008 (UTC)

Comments
 * Nom removal request: Unfortunately, Stryfe is a big player in Legacy 30 and 31, which I can't get anytime soon, so I won't be able to complete the article... DC 22:12, 26 November 2008 (UTC)

Vote to remove nomination (AgriCorps only)
 * 1) Requested by Darthchristian.  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  22:10, 26 November 2008 (UTC)