Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Bek-Vulkar gang war


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Bek-Vulkar gang war

 * Nominated by: Cylka  -talk- 21:57, 18 February 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Yes, it is another KotOR nomination.

(5 Inqs/0 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1) In good faith that our arrangement will be carried out.  Graestan ( Talk ) 03:56, 20 February 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) *Some users have mistakenly interpreted this comment to indicate some sort of underhanded deal between myself and the nominator. The message, in fact, was in reference to the nominator's agreement to handle still-outstanding objections despite my vote. Please assume good faith in the future. Graestan ( Talk ) 04:32, 11 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) Assuming Fiolli's objection is fixed.  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  22:48, 12 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) Thefourdotelipsis 03:52, 25 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) Be careful of POV and OR weasel words. &mdash;  Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 02:37, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 6) Good work, Cylka, and thanks to Graestan for adding the last few tweakes.  Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 15:40, 1 May 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Just one thing from Fiolli:
 * 2) * Maybe we can talk about this on IRC if there is a problem, but I think that there might need to be a section or subsection the on Republic officials (namely, Revan, Onasi, and Shan) who became entangled in the war. This could be a subsection under Hidden Beks, or another section with Participants. Your choice. &mdash; Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 14:56, 8 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) **Added a snippet. Graestan ( Talk ) 03:09, 25 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) From the desk of Atarumaster88
 * 5) * The intro seems a little unclear with regards to Shan's status. It jumps from her being missing to her being the prize. Please clarify.
 * 6) **Addressed. Graestan ( Talk ) 02:46, 25 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 7) * Also, it'd be good to note that Revan agreed to race for the Beks in the intro.
 * 8) **Addressed. Graestan ( Talk ) 02:46, 25 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 9) * "Kang would have wanted first crack at the pods." Colloquialism.
 * 10) **I don't see the issue. Is there a particular rule against common figures of speech? Graestan ( Talk ) 02:46, 25 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 11) ***I tend not to use them as much, as it seems less than encyclopediac and colloquialisms vary from country to country, but this is less than a hard and fast objection. I'll defer. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 15:40, 1 May 2009 (UTC)
 * 12) * "the two had a good idea of the situation" vague wording, and I'm not sure what "good idea" is supposed to represent in this case.
 * 13) **Replaced with "solid grasp." Graestan ( Talk ) 02:46, 25 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 14) * It would be good to point out that some of the Vulkars (Brejik) were Human.
 * 15) **Addressed. Graestan ( Talk ) 02:46, 25 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 16) * "the Vulkars were fairly harmless" POV.
 * 17) **As far as I know, this does not appear in the text of the article. Graestan ( Talk ) 02:46, 25 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 18) ***I think it was removed before you edited it. ;-) Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 15:40, 1 May 2009 (UTC)
 * 19) *Have a Super Terrific Friendly Un-frustrating day. Atarumaster88  Jedi_Order.svg ( Talk page ) 16:18, 13 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 20) This might prove cumbersome, but I think Revan's transition from Jedi Knight to Dark Lord of the Sith needs to be touched upon briefly. Thefourdotelipsis 01:02, 18 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 21) *Added a paragraph to the article. Do you want it in the intro, too? Graestan ( Talk ) 03:09, 25 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 22) **No, that'd be too tubby. Thefourdotelipsis 03:52, 25 April 2009 (UTC)

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