Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Qui-Gon Jinn's first apprentice


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Qui-Gon Jinn's first apprentice

 * Nominated by: QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 11:11, August 31, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: I wish they write a novel about this guy or something

(2 ECs/3 Users/5 Total)
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 * Yep, I hope that too.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 12:22, August 31, 2010 (UTC)
 * 1) Menkooroo 13:52, August 31, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Nice.&mdash;  22:09, August 31, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) --  1358  (Talk) 13:39, September 5, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4)  OLIOSTER  (talk) 17:09, September 5, 2010 (UTC)
 * 1) 1
 * 2) * "Since then, the first apprentice was only mentioned in the 35th issue of The Official Star Wars Fact File" ... but immediately thereafter, it's stated that he was later mentioned in Qui-Gon's databank entry. That seems to contradict the "since then, he was only mentioned" --- can you reword it to be a little clearer? Menkooroo 13:25, August 31, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) **Addressed. QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 13:48, August 31, 2010 (UTC)

Comments
 * I didn't want to put this as an oppose in case the author disagreed, and it may just be nitpicking, but I think the picture of Qui-Gon on the left at the same level as the infobox makes the article seem to compressed. Perhaps align it right and bump it up to 200px?  OLIOSTER  (talk) 14:05, September 5, 2010 (UTC)
 * If I do that, it'll appear below the infobox and next to the "Appearances" section, which seems kinda out of place IMO. I could do that if you really want me to, though. QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 16:55, September 5, 2010 (UTC)
 * No no, if you think it's better where it is, then by all means. Was just giving my two cents. Voted.  OLIOSTER  (talk) 17:09, September 5, 2010 (UTC)