Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Unidentified assassin (Jurgan Kalta)


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Unidentified assassin (Jurgan Kalta)

 * Nominated by:  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  03:45, June 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: This one is for you SavageBob.

(2 ECs/2 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1) Goodie (: –Tm_T (Talk) 07:08, June 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * Aw, my very own assassin! :) ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 22:28, June 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * 1)  Imperators II (Talk) 18:55, June 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Looks good to me, great job. KotOR for life.&mdash;  02:53, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * Tm
 * 1) * As a start: I would remove "'s enemy" from the article name, what do you think? –Tm_T (Talk) 18:24, June 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) **I agree, done.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  18:29, June 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) * I would like to have something about the timeframe he lived earlier than in the very end.
 * 4) **How is this?-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  20:07, June 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) ***Now its repetitive, vary the wording or remove latter mention of the JCW altogether. –Tm_T (Talk) 20:19, June 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) ****How about now?-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  20:27, June 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) * "Inventory entry"? I would say "item description" or something less game mechanicy. –Tm_T (Talk) 19:23, June 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) **Yeah, that did sound bad, fixed.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  20:07, June 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) * Hmm, perhaps remove the repetition in the Bts too, you could simply say "the item was also in the guide" or something, I would assume it's apparent the guide has the same item description than the game. (I don't usually even mention the guide in the Bts) –Tm_T (Talk) 20:19, June 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) **I trimmed it somewhat.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  20:27, June 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) ***Included, included, repetition. Would it be ok if you just state "the same item description" or such and not reiterating what item and how is that item description relevant?
 * 12) ****Fixed.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  20:40, June 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * 13) * Ah, as it's the very same text in the game and in the guide (correct me if I'm wrong), shouldn't it be Mo for the guide too? –Tm_T (Talk) 20:34, June 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * 14) **All sources are supposed to be mentions only. (I was told not to call it a mention only for a previous nomination.)-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  20:40, June 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * 15) ***I disagree on this: if it were describing the article subject, it wouldn't be mention only like it is now. But I leave this matter be for now. (:
 * 16) * One more, AFAIK the name in the infobox should not have "unidentified" nor "(Jurgan Kalta)" as both are OOU identifiers(?). –Tm_T (Talk) 20:51, June 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * 17) **Do you have any suggestions, because there isn't much else to go on and I'm stumped.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  21:36, June 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * 18) ***Just remove those so it says "Assassin" as it's the only "name" we have for they IU wise. (: –Tm_T (Talk) 21:41, June 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * 19) ****I would like to say that I hav found numerous good and comprehensive articles with this sort of OOU information in the infobox. Just look at almost any unidentified character on the GA list or CA list and you will see what I mean.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  21:47, June 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * 20) *****Apparently there's no consistency nor policy on this yet, I would get rid of those but do as you feel best. (: –Tm_T (Talk) 07:08, June 3, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

The next Jurgan Kalta nomination.-- Exiled Jedi   (Greetings)  03:45, June 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * Hey Tm T, I switched out the mention only in the appearances section for an indirect mention only, and I added an indirect mention only to the sources section. (both of which seem correct to me) Please tell me what you think of this change.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  12:17, June 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * Ye, after reading the item description, it's definately indirect mention only. –Tm_T (Talk) 19:05, June 5, 2011 (UTC)