Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/TIE/D Defender


 * ''The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a featured article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.

(7 Inqs/3 Users/10 Total)
Support
 * 1) Green Tentacle (Talk) 19:27, 2 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Gah! Information overload! Cull Tremayne 07:23, 3 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) Great Artical  Dark Lord Xander  ( Embrace The Dark Side! )[[Image:MandalorianSymbol.jpg|20px]] 09:55, 3 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) Deserves it. Unit 8311 14:37, 5 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 5) Imperialles 09:28, 6 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 6) Great article. --  Darth Culator  (Talk) 23:22, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 7) Excellent read, very informative.  Greyman ( Paratus ) 23:23, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 8) Incredible! - Graestan  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( This party's over ) 02:56, 8 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 9) Fantastic stuff! Thefourdotelipsis 09:13, 9 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 10) I also recommend we rename this article "The complete and entire details of the TIE Defender and every aspect of it" ;-) Great stuff  Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 21:14, 9 September 2007 (UTC)

Oppose Comments
 * 1) From the throne of Emperor Imperialles:
 * 2) * References: The article contains several instances of references being placed before punctuation.
 * 3) *Role: Some thin paragraphs here. Consider fleshing them out or merging them.
 * 4) *Training: The last four paragraphs of this section are pretty thin. It might have worked if they weren't all very similar. Consider merging them, at least.
 * --Imperialles 21:57, 5 September 2007 (UTC)
 * Training, Role, and references addressed--MIS Tau 1 02:28, 6 September 2007 (UTC)
 * From the desk of Atarumaster88
 * How is the introduction of the TIE Avenger "recent" in an IU setting?
 * clarify "sympathizer non-essential craft" please
 * Have a Super Terrific Friendly Un-frustrating day. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 04:11, 9 September 2007 (UTC)
 * Well, the Avenger didn't come in until after Yavin which was fairly recent. Anyway, I've removed the offending word and rewritten the non-essential craft bit. Green Tentacle (Talk) 12:10, 9 September 2007 (UTC)
 * From the lair of Hobbes15
 * .Over three redlinks. Destroy them! ;)
 * I'd still like the others gone, but it can wait. Hobbes15 ( Tiger Headquarters ) 21:15, 9 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 4.5- "Formerly under the command of General Arnothian, he had intended to use the TIE Defenders to establish himself as a warlord before Director of Imperial Intelligence Ysanne Isard disposed of him...". This needs to be reworded- it seems like Wedge had intended to become a warlord, not Arnothian.
 * A little more detail on how and why the real Isard was killed (4.5).
 * That's all on this one. Very good work. Hobbes15 ( Tiger Headquarters ) 04:49, 9 September 2007 (UTC)
 * Fixed. I'll kill the other redlinks later. Green Tentacle (Talk) 12:35, 9 September 2007 (UTC)

'''Approved by Inquisitorius 21:21, 9 September 2007 (UTC)
 * Personally, I think the atmospheric speed is crap, but it's canon. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 04:11, 9 September 2007 (UTC)