Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Yarin


 * ''The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.

Yarin

 * Nominated by: --Eyrezer 12:28, 30 July 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Only one letter left after this one...

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)
Support
 * 1)  IFYLOFD  ( You will pay the price for your lack of vision! ) 02:53, 3 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) Looks good from where I sit. ~ SavageBob 00:24, 6 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) &mdash;Master Jonathan(Jedi Council Chambers) 17:57, 8 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 00:47, 9 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 13:13, 9 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 6)  Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 13:25, 10 August 2009 (UTC)

Object Comments
 * 1) IFYLOFD:
 * 2) * First of all, merge together some of the short choppy sentences in the intro,
 * 3) * Context for Anja Gallandro.
 * 4) *Other than that, looks good.  IFYLOFD  ( You will pay the price for your lack of vision! ) 02:10, 31 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) **Did the first. As for Anja, I feel that she doesn't really need much context. Going into why she wanted to destroy the spice etc is not relevant to the Yarin at all. I added that she was Human, but not sure what else you had in mind. --Eyrezer 04:49, 2 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 6) Soresu
 * 7) * Repetition of "resmebled" in intro and "occasionally" in bio and appearance.
 * 8) * This may have been another character, but I remember the young jedi knights discussing with someone about the possibility that they recorded the Skra'akan. Could you check whether it was the Yarin? SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 07:57, 6 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 9) **It was that dude but nothing came of it in the book. A bit added.Both should be addressed now. --Eyrezer 04:27, 7 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 10) From the Moffship of Grand Moff Tranner:
 * 11) * "On one occasion he was approached by a Human girl Anja Gallandro... While the girl was unable to secure one on her own..." - why was Gallandro unable to secure a submersible?
 * 12) *Otherwise, good job. Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 13:05, 9 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 13) **Added a bit. --Eyrezer 13:11, 9 August 2009 (UTC)
 * Should the two possible appearances be listed under "Appearances" with the "Possible appearance" template? ~ SavageBob 02:22, 31 July 2009 (UTC)
 * I don't think that is necessary, especially for the Ewoks episode. If the YJK books had been in the opposite order, I would have been more sympathetic, but I don't think it is a strong enough case to add to the Appearances list, even with that tag. --Eyrezer 04:49, 2 August 2009 (UTC)
 * Oh, couple more things. I've moved the cultural stuff to its own section, since we're still fuzzy on how straightjacketed we have to be from the MoS. Also, was the Skra'akan the source of the damage the Yarin's craft sustained? It's unclear from the current article. ~ SavageBob 02:29, 31 July 2009 (UTC)
 * No problem, re the first. As to the second, yes it was. Added a little bit more info. --Eyrezer 04:49, 2 August 2009 (UTC)