Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Diblen Harleys


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Diblen Harleys

 * Nominated by: Cavalier One [[Image:FarStar Logo.jpg|20px]]( Squadron channel ) 13:27, 3 February 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: I was looking for a witty comment to put here ... but I got nuthin'.

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1) More support votes from me. 11:27, 4 February 2009 (UTC)
 * 2)  Graestan ( Talk ) 23:51, 5 February 2009 (UTC)
 * 3)  Grunny  ( Talk ) 13:26, 12 February 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) Another great article. Cylka  -talk- 06:27, 14 February 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) Grand Moff Tranner [[Image:Imperial Department of Military Research.svg|20px]] (Comlink) 01:54, 16 February 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Maybe put his belief that the Empire was just and that he never tried to find otherwise before he was told by his father in the P&T (Wow, that's a very badly written sentence). And also his outrage at being deceived.  06:19, 4 February 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) *Added to P/T section. Can't believe I missed that. - Cavalier One [[Image:FarStar Logo.jpg|20px]]( Squadron channel ) 09:15, 4 February 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) Graestan the Merciless:
 * 4) * "Thrawn Crisis" needs context in the intro.
 * 5) **Done.
 * 6) * And again in the bio.
 * 7) **Done.
 * 8) * What Derlin's job was would probably help; otherwise it kinda just hangs there, like, "Who is this guy?"
 * 9) **Not actually stated what he does, just that he's part of the Coruscant Defense Force command staff. Added in.
 * 10) * Explaining that the NR occupied Coruscant and the Palace is key to understanding the whole Delta Source deal.
 * 11) **Added.
 * 12) *Nice BtS. Graestan ( Talk ) 05:33, 5 February 2009 (UTC)
 * 13) **Thank you. - Cavalier One [[Image:FarStar Logo.jpg|20px]]( Squadron channel ) 09:45, 5 February 2009 (UTC)

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