Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Mungo Baobab


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Mungo Baobab

 * Nominated by: Green Tentacle (Talk) 23:10, 23 April 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: But she told me she was eighteen!

(5 Inqs/0 Users/5 Total/INQCON 5)
Support
 * 1) Thefourdotelipsis 08:27, 11 May 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) "One of these days, you're going to be knocked unconscious and wake up dead."  Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 11:10, 25 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) Imperialles 18:23, 8 July 2009 (UTC)
 * :| Graestan ( Talk ) 22:36, 15 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) &mdash;  Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 14:35, 22 July 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Four Dot
 * 2) * "From Calrissian, Baobab acquired the nickname "the Wook," a reference to his long, unmanageable beard which Calrissian frequently encouraged him to have styled. After much resistance, Baobab finally agreed." - I kinda get what you mean (Baobab agreed to the nickname), but you could make it a tad clearer.
 * 3) **Actually, he agreed to have it styled. Clarified. Green Tentacle (Talk) 16:10, 9 May 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) * "Upon hearing that C-3PO had been captured during the attempted rescue of R2-D2, Baobab set off to find the droids while Fidge returned to the harem to rescue another astromech in case he was unsuccessful." - In case Fidge was unsuccessful?
 * 5) **In case Baobab was unsuccessful. Reworded. Green Tentacle (Talk) 16:10, 9 May 2009 (UTC)
 * 6) *That's...actually all. Thefourdotelipsis 00:11, 7 May 2009 (UTC)
 * 7) "Mungo Baobab was a Human merchant from Manda who owned the droids C-3PO and R2-D2 during 15 BBY" This opening line of the introduction makes it seem that the most important aspect of Baobab was his relationship to the two droids. Makes sense from an OOU perspective, but not IU. Other than that&hellip; well, nothing. --Imperialles 10:23, 8 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 8) *Reworded. Green Tentacle (Talk) 18:16, 8 July 2009 (UTC)

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