Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Plett


 * ''The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a featured article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.

Plett

 * Nominated by: Eyrezer 09:42, 13 May 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Piett, Plett, Platt, Plate?

(5 Inq/2 User/7 Total)
Support
 * 1) Plat Mallar.  Graestan ( Talk ) 03:54, 14 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) No plates. Bowls.  Master Aban Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 00:26, 16 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) I always enjoy reading your articles, Ey. Nice job.  Greyman  @wikiajanitor ( Talk ) 22:41, 16 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) Goodwood  [[Image:Redstarbird.svg|20px]] ( Alliance Intelligence ) 22:49, 17 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) HUZZAH Toprawa and Ralltiir 03:55, 18 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 6) Very nice. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 12:21, 19 May 2008 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) Grass clippings:
 * 2) * Image:Plett's House.png has visible frame.
 * 3) * "Jedi students from the Jedi Temple" is a bit awkward.
 * 4) * "Jedi refugees from the Jedi Temple" is, also.
 * 5) * Linking could use a touch-up; noticed a lot of good possibles. Just a thought; I don't want you to link [[water]] or anything silly like that.
 * 6) *Excellent article. I loved it. Except the Y-wings part; everyone knows that Y-wings are junk. Graestan ( Talk ) 00:50, 14 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 7) From the Forest of Goodwood:
 * 8) * A link to battlemoon might be desirable both in the introduction and body, but it's up to you.
 * 9) **That link is not to a generic class, but to the specific battlemoon of Varn...
 * 10) ***Fair enough.-- Goodwood [[Image:Redstarbird.svg|20px]] ( Alliance Intelligence ) 14:07, 17 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 11) * "they did foil an attempt by Roganda Ismaren, another of the original children" -- You already mention Roganda, so this sentence should probably be amended.
 * 12) **Done
 * 13) ***Thank you sir.
 * 14) *Good article!-- Goodwood [[Image:Redstarbird.svg|20px]] ( Alliance Intelligence ) 07:23, 17 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 15) From the Merciless Hammer of Toprawa:
 * 16) * This sentence beginning the Powers section and the last sentence ending the Personality section both begin the exact same. Please reword to mix it up a little bit: "As a Jedi Master, Plett was proficient in diverse Jedi arts."
 * 17) * The Powers section becomes a bit rough to read with the way sentences constantly begin with "He was able, Plett was also, Plett was also, Plett was able, etc." Please mix it up a little bit. Toprawa and Ralltiir 23:27, 17 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 18) **Both should now be resolved. --Eyrezer 03:26, 18 May 2008 (UTC)

Comments


 * Higher quality images on their way... --Eyrezer 09:43, 13 May 2008 (UTC)