Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Sha Dun


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Sha Dun

 * Nominated by:  Grunny  ( Talk ) 05:37, 4 April 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Ambitious Legacy

(3 ACs/4 Users/7 Total)
Support
 * 1) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 08:10, 4 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) Grand Moff Tranner [[Image:Imperial Department of Military Research.svg|20px]] (Comlink) 14:26, 4 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 3)  Cavalier One [[Image:FarStar Logo.jpg|20px]]( Squadron channel ) 14:35, 4 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) Looks good.--Jedi Kasra (talk) 15:46, 6 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) True Kilson Likes PIE 16:31, 12 April 09 (UTC)
 * 6) Excellent. CC7567  [ http://images1.wikia.nocookie.net/starwars/images/thumb/5/5f/Rex.png/20px-Rex.png] (talk) 04:50, 18 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 7) Another good one, Grunny! Cylka  -talk- 09:23, 19 April 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) From the Moffship of Grand Moff Tranner:
 * 2) * Context on Azard needed in intro.
 * 3) **Added.
 * 4) * Parts of the first paragraph of the bio read too much like the intro. Please reword.
 * 5) **Reworded the intro, how's it looking now? :)
 * 6) *Very nice work, Grunny. Grand Moff Tranner [[Image:Imperial Department of Military Research.svg|20px]] (Comlink) 12:50, 4 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 7) **Thanks, Tranner :D.  Grunny  ( Talk ) 13:13, 4 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 8) This is a really small objection, but you forgot to reference the last sentence in the Behind the Scenes section. Other than that, seems cool. Kilson Likes PIE 02:42, 12 April 09 (UTC)
 * 9) *Its self-sourcing: "who appears in the Trust Issues story arc", therefore a reference would be superfluous.  Grunny  ( Talk ) 14:25, 12 April 2009 (UTC)

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