Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Kith Kark


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Kith Kark (+5)
Support
 * 1) Nominated. Greyman ( Paratus ) 21:22, 25 May 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) School of Thrawn 101 23:21, 27 May 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) Yep. -Fnlayson 05:23, 28 May 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) --Eyrezer 23:38, 30 May 2007 (UTC)
 * 5) I just finished reading The Freedon Nadd Uprising...poor Kith... Humbone 00:36, 31 May 2007 (UTC)

Objections

Comments
 * Expanded, cleaned up, and ready to go. Greyman ( Paratus ) 21:22, 25 May 2007 (UTC)
 * Not really enough of a problem to voice an objection, but is the use of ellipses grammatically ok for GA articles? --School of Thrawn 101 22:59, 27 May 2007 (UTC)
 * Ellipses or dashes? I see several --'s, but no ...'s.  -Fnlayson 23:05, 27 May 2007 (UTC)
 * There is one in the second last paragraph before the section labeled "The Naddist Revolt". If it's a concern about if it should be replaced, I have no problem re-wording that part.  Greyman ( Paratus ) 23:11, 27 May 2007 (UTC)
 * Oh OK, thanks. I replaced that with a dash to match the previous dash in the sentence. See if that's OK. -Fnlayson 23:19, 27 May 2007 (UTC)
 * Well, that was my question, really. I haven't really seen the use of ellipses on GA or FA articles and I wasn't sure if it would be acceptable for a GA article to have them within the body of it's text.  It's been taken out, and I'll add my support to this nom. --School of Thrawn 101 23:21, 27 May 2007 (UTC)
 * Looks good, thanks. Greyman ( Paratus ) 23:24, 27 May 2007 (UTC)
 * Sure. I don't think that was an appropriate use of an ellipse.  It'd probably be OK if it was. -Fnlayson 05:23, 28 May 2007 (UTC)
 * An appropriate use being a list within a given example or something to that effect. (ie bats, birds, hawk-bats, hawks, etc...) --192.251.125.85 06:30, 28 May 2007 (UTC)
 * Yea, But I only mentioned ellipse my previous comment. -Fnlayson 07:09, 28 May 2007 (UTC)
 * No no, I was agreeing with you. I was simply providing an example for curious persons to refer to in times of need. --School of Thrawn 101 07:38, 28 May 2007 (UTC)
 * I'd like to see another pic in there.--Eyrezer 23:38, 30 May 2007 (UTC)
 * I agree, but when I was expanded the article I looked through everything that Kith Kark appeared in and I couldn't find anything other than those three. I'll take another look though.   Greyman ( Paratus ) 00:18, 31 May 2007 (UTC)
 * I took another look, but there are no pictures available other than the three I originally put in the article. Greyman ( Paratus ) 12:13, 1 June 2007 (UTC)
 * One more day before a week is up and it can be approved... —Xwing328 (Talk) 05:19, 1 June 2007 (UTC)