Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Unidentified Yavin 4 monster


 * ''The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a comprehensive article nomination that was unsuccessful. Please do not modify it.

Unidentified Yavin 4 monster

 * Nominated by: Trip391 (talk) 06:43, January 5, 2014 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Novels and Barn-Burner

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 * SE
 * 1) *Needs a NOTOC
 * 2) **Done
 * 3) *Also, no intro required
 * 4) **Done
 * 5) ***Actually, it is required with an article of this size. I'm getting about 210 words when I use spell check. Please re-add it Trip. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 19:15, January 6, 2014 (UTC)
 * 6) ****Re-added Trip391 (talk) 21:09, January 6, 2014 (UTC)
 * 7) *Any applicable quotes? Supreme Emperor (talk) 04:43, January 6, 2014 (UTC)
 * 8) **Added another one Trip391 (talk) 04:50, January 6, 2014 (UTC)
 * 9) 501st
 * 10) * First of all, the intro is rather short. At least make it two sentences. If that brings it over 250, we can just send it to the GAN page.
 * 11) **Lengthened
 * 12) ***It would be nice it you added that it existed on the moon by 23 ABY.
 * 13) ****Got it Trip391 (talk) 22:53, January 8, 2014 (UTC)
 * 14) * Please note that the layout you are currently using is not meant for non-sentient species. Here is the formal layout, and using it would involve splitting the Description into two sections: Biology and appearance, and Behavior. Please do so.
 * 15) **Split
 * 16) * It should be added to the body that it is carnivorous.
 * 17) **Done
 * 18) * Context on the Lightning Rod, Peckum, the two Solos, and Tenal Ka is needed. Yavin 4 also needs context in the body.
 * 19) **Done
 * 20) * Is this article about the monster itself, or the monster's species? I just want to clarify.
 * 21) **The species, and I based the way I wrote it off of snow monster Trip391 (talk) 06:54, January 7, 2014 (UTC)
 * 22) * When you create the Behavior section, add in there that its habitat is the jungle.
 * 23) **Done Trip391 (talk) 06:54, January 7, 2014 (UTC)
 * 24) *These objections will probably take it over 250 words, but I will continue my review here if you like, and we can archive it when I'm satisfied. Good work. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 00:00, January 7, 2014 (UTC)
 * 25) * Sentience needs to be mentioned in the body and the intro. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 18:45, January 7, 2014 (UTC)
 * 26) **Done Trip391 (talk) 06:02, January 8, 2014 (UTC)
 * 27) * I still think the intro needs to be a bit longer. How about adding mention of Luke's encounter with one?
 * 28) **Done
 * 29) * I think an article should be made for the individual monster.
 * 30) **Like the snow monster article, I don't really think there should be a completely separate article, since most of the information therein would be the same as this one Trip391 (talk) 07:28, January 12, 2014 (UTC)
 * 31) *After you complete the two above, I'll can archive the nom if you like. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 14:58, January 11, 2014 (UTC)

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