Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/General Grievous's Theme

General Grievous' Theme

 * Nominated by: MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg(Whatever) 17:12, November 3, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: A first for WP:RWM

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 * I feel like more detail is needed --- for any article on a piece of music, particularly in the "summary" section. You mention that the French horns play the main melody, but can you describe what that melody is? The London Voices come in next --- what do they do? What do you mean by "purist form"?
 * Good? MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg(Whatever) 16:26, November 3, 2010 (UTC)
 * Yeah! I think some wikipedia linking might be handy there, though, for things like trumpet, french horn, string part, and maybe a few more things. Whaddya think? Menkooroo 00:31, November 8, 2010 (UTC)
 * Links added. MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg(Whatever) 02:09, November 8, 2010 (UTC)
 * Check out the first sentence of summary --- doesn't seem to make sense.
 * Fixed. I must've read over it. MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg(Whatever) 16:26, November 3, 2010 (UTC)
 * The link for the leading quote just leads to a page with a bunch of photos.
 * I added that quote to the Wook a long, long time ago. I must've been noobish. :P MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg(Whatever) 16:26, November 3, 2010 (UTC)
 * Is there anything on the ROTS DVD about the making of the music? Is there anything else at all that could go in the conception and development section?
 * Nothing that pertains directly to the theme. Just stuff about the music in general, which would fit better on the soundtrack article IMO. MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg(Whatever) 16:26, November 3, 2010 (UTC)
 * Is the opening of the article an intro? If so, everything from it needs to be reintroduced later in the article. Conception and development shouldn't just mention "the theme" --- it needs to introduce what that theme is (remember that the intro is entirely separate from the rest of the article).
 * Oops, I'll get used to that. Eventually. MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg(Whatever) 16:26, November 3, 2010 (UTC)
 * This is a really good start, but I feel like the article needs more info. It could easily be padded up to Good article length. Menkooroo 15:42, November 3, 2010 (UTC)
 * Thanks. c):D MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg(Whatever) 16:26, November 3, 2010 (UTC)
 * The word count is 259. So, do I just move this all to the GA page? MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg(Whatever) 16:40, November 3, 2010 (UTC)
 * Heya! Remember that things only need to be linked to once (namely, Grievous). Also, look out for redirects --- General Grievous and Neimoidian shuttle are two examples. Menkooroo 00:31, November 8, 2010 (UTC)
 * Oh, I didn't know that was frowned upon. Oh well, links fixed. MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg(Whatever) 02:09, November 8, 2010 (UTC)