Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Dozoisian shark venom


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Dozoisian shark venom

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 12:28, April 13, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Well...

(2 ECs/2 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1)  501st Dogma Republic_emblem.png( Comlink ) 14:59, April 14, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) Must be the stuff that turned the Joker into what he is. Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 02:40, April 17, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  14:02, April 24, 2012 (UTC)
 * 4) &mdash; Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:05, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) I would mention in the body of the article that it would kill someone if they ingested it. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  12:11, April 14, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) *Done.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 12:17, April 14, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) "...it would fizz, and if spilled, an acid smell, a greenish flame, and a sizzling noise could be seen and heard." - Can you please make this sentence more clear? When I first read it, it took me several tries to figure out what exactly you meant. &mdash; Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:26, April 24, 2012 (UTC)
 * 4) *Better?  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 11:52, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

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