User talk:Clone Commander Lee


 * Old stuff can be found her.

New talk page
Finally found some time to archive the old stuff.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 18:08, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re: MedStar II: Jedi Healer
Hey Lee, I'm afraid I don't currently have the Medstar duology with me; my brother has the books right now and it might be late February before I can get them back. Sorry that I can't help right now. Jonjedigrandmaster ( Talk ) 21:15, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Coburn
Hey, Lee. Would you mind if I take Coburn on as a project? I planned to work on him for a while, and I completely understand if you'd like to write him yourself, but I'd like to tackle him if I can. Thanks.  CC7567  (talk) 07:33, January 7, 2012 (UTC)
 * Sure thing. Are you looking for any quotes at all that involve them?  CC7567  (talk) 19:14, January 7, 2012 (UTC)
 * There's actually a text-searchable version of the book that can be found here. Might save us both some time, since it would take a while for me to get all of them. :P Hope that helps.  CC7567  (talk) 02:15, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

Cookie

 * Keep up the good work!&mdash; Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 23:13, January 10, 2012 (UTC)
 * I don't believe so. I'm using Monobook with Firefox on a Windows 7 and everything looks the same to me.&mdash; Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:11, January 11, 2012 (UTC)
 * Sure thing. I'd suggest that you switch to Firefox, though. It works a whole lot better with Wookieepedia than IE. Cheers!&mdash; Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 16:10, January 11, 2012 (UTC)
 * Yeah. Running Firefox with Monobook seems to work the best.&mdash; Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 16:15, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Sarkli
I got around to fixing all of your issues with the article...DjMack 01:25, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

Near Indosa
Would you mind looking over the Near Indosa article, and if there are no more objections that you can find, could you archive the pages so that I can put the article on GAN. ~ 501st Tup Tcgaotc_symbol.jpg(Communications) 21:06, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re:CC-1993
Lee, I'm aware of the objections, but I cannot look at them at this time because I'm busy. I'll try to take a look at them sometime next week.  JangFett  (Talk) 16:41, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

Haurgab trooper
Hi, since I'ce done some changes to the article I was wondering if you could check it over. The main things I've changed is I've deleted the homeworld note and changed his unit to the Haurgab garrison becasue as I reread the section both the 85th and 14th were part of the garrison, and the 14th did not join the 85th. This means he could have been from either unit. Thanks,--- 501st Dogma Republic_emblem.png( Comlink ) 21:56, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Hello
Nice to see you still at it now that I am back. graestan ( talk ) 06:46, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Sarkli (continued)
Just to let you know I got around to your final objection, but the user who keeps adding the "update" tag for the TCG material won't respond to my requests to help with the source material. DjMack 23:36, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Interest in new WP
I've been throwing around the idea of starting a WookieeProject based on Category:Entertainment. I'm asking around to see if there is enough interest to justify starting it. Would you be in any way interested? MasterFred (Whatever) 17:11, February 17, 2012 (UTC)
 * Since you showed interest in the project, I'm here to let you know that it is now official! MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg(Whatever) 16:22, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

Re:Jet
No problem, Lee. One of the things you can do in the future is use the preview button and proofread your own work. It will definitely help you out.  JangFett  (Talk) 16:00, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Onca
Hey, could you give me some suggestions on how to get rid of "Sorry about the mess" on Onca. Thanks. ~ 501st Tup Tcgaotc_symbol.jpg( Communications ) 18:42, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re:Balith Civil War
On page 124, "Off to War: The Nu-Class attack shuttle is a standard transport for Jedi and clones on Clone Wars business for the Republic. When Anakin and Captain Rex (you can now source it to guide that Rex commanded it with Anakin) are ordered to war-torn Balith to take charge of the Third Legion, Ahsoka is unhappy to find herself left behind, but still sees them off from the landing pad at the Jedi Temple."

A box pointing to the shuttle confirmed that Torrent Company also joined Anakin and Rex. I haven't seen the episode for a while and don't plan on watching it, but it shows another clone next to Anakin and Rex onboard the shuttle. Here's what the box says: "As Anakin says farewell to his Padawan, Rex and another trooper of Torrent Company prepare to take their seats in the troop hold inside the shuttle's well-armored belly."

Basically see what you can do with the new information given, albeit fluffless :P. Hope this helps,  JangFett  (Talk) 01:55, February 29, 2012 (UTC)
 * Sorry for the delay. Yeah, it says what Jang said above.  CC7567  (talk) 04:26, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

CC-5869
You can see his article on the CWA wiki for the quote. In-game, he appears in the Training Room, just as a non-playable character and nothing else. The quote that he says to the Jedi Knight player character is on the CWA wiki page, so that should be all you need.  CC7567  (talk) 23:48, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

Near Indosa
mind archiving Near Indosa as a failed good article please so that I can put it back on CAN. Thanks. ~ 501st Tup Tcgaotc_symbol.jpg( Communications ) 23:23, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Draa
Hi, since I am updating Draa to Good status, I was wondering something. Since his article is small due to the his brief appearence, should I add something in the BtS briefly saying that Hasbro made a figurine of Draa to sell? I know bigger articles such as CT-7567 will not have this due to the numerous figurines made, but I'm not sure about the less known clones. Thanks, 501st Dogma Republic_emblem.png( Comlink ) 23:21, March 6, 2012 (UTC)
 * I was wondering if you could look over Draa on my workbench and see if you can spot anything major, for example grammar, that needs to be fixed before I move it to GAN. Thanks, 501st Dogma Republic_emblem.png( Comlink ) 23:48, March 10, 2012 (UTC)
 * Permission granted to edit the workbench. Thanks again. 501st Dogma Republic_emblem.png( Comlink ) 01:10, March 11, 2012 (UTC)
 * Thanks so much for thoroughly reviewing Draa. I really appreciate it. Thanks again, 501st Dogma Republic_emblem.png( Comlink ) 15:27, March 13, 2012 (UTC)

Outbound Flight
Hi, I noticed that you own Outbound Flight. I know you said most of your books are in German and I was wondering if that was the case with this one? I need several quotes from it, but if it is in German I will have to find someone else who owns it. Thanks!- Princess  GLG  20:50, March 19, 2012 (UTC)
 * Okay thanks, I'll wait and see what Omicron can come up with.- Princess Era-imp.png GLG  17:44, March 20, 2012 (UTC)

I want to ask you questions!
Hey, Lee,

You've written sixty-five Good articles. That's a lot! Since you've written so many --- may I ask you a few questions about Good articles and Good article writing? Since we'll be putting Good articles on the Main Page soon, I want to write a post on Wookieepedia NewsNet about it. My hope is to let casual readers of Wookieepedia know more about what Good articles are, and I want a few Wookieepedians to help tell them. Would it be OK if I asked you a few questions about your experiences writing Good articles? I'd include your answers in the NewsNet post. If so, let me know if I should ask you here, or if we should do it by e-mail. If you want to do it by e-mail, e-mail me at gradualferguson@hotmail.com. Cheers! Menkooroo 02:38, March 22, 2012 (UTC)
 * Thanks so much! I have two questions for you. They're both about your experiences on Wookieepedia, writing and reviewing GAs. Feel free to make the answers as long or as short as you'd like. I'll hopefully have the final post written in about a week. :)


 * 1) Tell me about your experience writing GAs. Does writing more and more GAs make you a better writer?
 * 2) Is reviewing important, too? Does reviewing other GAs also help improve your own writing?

Thanks again! :D Menkooroo 04:29, March 26, 2012 (UTC)

WC

 * :) ~ Savage BOB sig.png 14:12, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re: Kep-She
I'm sorry, I'm just about to turn in for the night, and I don't currently have access to it. I believe Jang has access to it, though; you could try asking him.  CC7567  (talk) 08:22, April 9, 2012 (UTC)
 * Here you go: "Page 91 - The Malastare crisis scaled after the [Corporate] Alliance hired Sikurdian pirates to seize Malastare's duel tankers. Trench then gathered a fleet of Alliance Fantail-class destroyers and Sikurdian privateers and blockaded the Malastare Narrows, seeking to force a settlement on the Alliance's terms. After attempts to find a diplomatic solution failed, Malastare appealed to Supreme Channcelor Valorum to intervene. Publicly, Valorum demurred. But he also feared that the Alliance might prevail in a shooting war, because the Dustig Sector Dorces were weakened by corruption and neglect. Behind the scenes, he cajoled the neighboring Tyus and Var Haden sectors to support Malastare, funneled credits to Dugs to hire privateers, and dispatched military "observers" to the scene&mdash;including the Jedi Kep-She and a capable officer named Wullf Yularen, who'd fought Skiyrd pirates with the Kwymar Sector Forces."  JangFett  (Talk) 12:51, April 9, 2012 (UTC)
 * Lee, there's some issues with the article that I like to point out if you don't mind. Mainly that Yularen was sent with Kep-She, as said above, and perhaps you could supply a date for the Christophsis battle.  JangFett  (Talk) 17:23, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Kesla Vein duel
Hey Lee, I saw you have First duel in Kesla Vein currently inuse. Would you mind adding the Lost Tribe of Sith resurgence template to the bottom of the page? Thanks, Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 23:20, April 9, 2012 (UTC)
 * No problem :P And yes, you're right: the first duel is up to the point that Tola blows up the speeder/runs away. We don't actually see the beginning of the second duel; all we know is that at some point she gets more Sith reinforcements, attack the Jedi again, and chase them until they flee with Nilitz. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 14:36, April 10, 2012 (UTC)
 * Haha, I'll certainly allow it. :P Here are all of the quotes from that scene:

"Who are you?''" "You know me, traitor. And it's time for your companions to die, and for you to be taken to your father for questioning." "Tola Annax." "Your brains haven't seized up completely, Vestara. Now surrender like a good girl. We need to take you back to your father so you can experience only the most carefully thought-out torture and explain which of you cut down Lord Taalon. If you didn't do it, you clearly conspired with his killer&mdash;you're not their prisoner." "He had to die. He was&hellip;changing. He was no longer fit to lead us." "Oh, we're aware of the genetic mutations he was experiencing. Accelerated changes, grotesque mutations&hellip;you might even be acquitted of complicity because of them. If you surrender." "''Of course. Come down here and I'll give you my weapon personally."

- Vestara Khai and Tola Annax

"Have you found Abeloth yet? We have some justice in mind for her, too."

- Tola Annax, to Vestara Khai

Then the duel breaks out. When the Sith are killed, leaving just Tola:

"How about you surrender to our justice?''" "''Some other time."

- Vestara Khai and Tola Annax

Then as Tola uses a cable to climb the ravine, and Ben reaches out to use the Force:

"Not worth it, Ben. Consequences.''" "''I forgot."

- Luke and Ben Skywalker, after letting Tola Annax escape to avoid causing damage to the world by using the Force

Of course, feel free to separate these into smaller quotes as you see fit. I look forward to your nom; let me know if you have any more questions. :) Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 18:18, April 10, 2012 (UTC)
 * A few things: there are a handful of missing links
 * Indeed, I found a lot.
 * You should probably mention in the intro that Annax survived
 * Done.
 * It's probably worth mentioning in the prelude why Vestara was outcast from the Sith, especially since the quote for the duel has Annax calling her a traitor. And in the interests of keeping the prelude short, you can probably remove the info about the alliance; it doesn't correspond directly to this duel, so probably isn't completely necessary.
 * Done.
 * Just a brief elaboration on why she killed a superior officer would be good here. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 14:23, April 12, 2012 (UTC)
 * Better?
 * "Khai dispatched several Sith Sabers to the planet in order to find and capture Abeloth and his daughter as well as killing the Skywalkers." Bit of verb confusion ("killing" is incorrect); and IIRC, Operation: Shieldfall was supposed to capture/kill Abeloth, not Annax. I think Annax's team was just sent down ahead of time to kill the Skywalkers and locate Abeloth for the rest of the Sith in Shieldfall
 * Tweaked.
 * After you mention Gavar Khai, make sure you specify which Khai you're referring to, instead of just saying "Khai" every time, or the reader may be confused
 * Done.
 * Who's the "Keshiri Saber"? (I know; but the reader might not)
 * Adressed.
 * Why is part of the duel not in chronological order? ("Seconds earlier"&mdash;why not mention what happened earlier first?)
 * Tweaked.
 * "Led by the Sith Saber Tola Annax, a group consisting of four Sabers" makes it sound like it Annax was in command of four other Sabers.
 * Done.
 * Their speeder actually exploded after the duel, to help cover Annax's escape
 * Done.
 * The Grand Master didn't convince Kandra to meet with them; Kandra had to convince the Jedi.
 * Adressed.
 * That's it; there are a couple of tiny wording tweaks to make, but nothing that isn't "sofixit"-worthy of me. (I didn't do a copy-edit since you still have the inuse tag up; do you have a preference of whether I do that now or after you nom it?) Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 15:14, April 11, 2012 (UTC)
 * Thanks.
 * Oh, and for the infobox: the mission to Klatooine and Jedi Queen project are concurrent with this duel, and IIRC the Funeral of Kenth Hamner is the last event before this one, so should go in the "prev=" field. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 15:18, April 11, 2012 (UTC)
 * Done.
 * Sorry to message again, but: Trial of Tahiri Veila was actually also concurrent. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 15:40, April 11, 2012 (UTC)
 * np. Done.
 * No problem :) Here's all I caught left: "Both sides were searching for the dark side entity Abeloth, which led to a duel between the two factions." I'm not entirely sure that's accurate; it was part of it, but there was also the fact that the Sith just wanted to kill the Skywalkers and capture Ves.
 * I agree but Annax's question about Abeloth makes me believe that finding her was at least a secondary goal. However, if you disagree I'm fine to change it.
 * Yeah, it was definitely a secondary goal, but it didn't lead to the duel. Her intent to kill the Skywalkers/capture Vestara led to the duel. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 13:00, April 13, 2012 (UTC)
 * It might be enough to just say that Tola ordered her surrender and Ves refused (you could probably remove the bit saying they "exchanged some words").
 * Done.
 * Do we know for certain that the petty officer was only a former petty officer? Could Gavar not have just sent him down for this one mission without relieving him of his duty?
 * That's indeed false, it is only stated that he is a petty officer. Corrected.
 * I think you could put a bit more in the aftermath from the Sith perspective: maybe just give a brief mention that they then pushed forward with Operation Shieldfall. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 14:23, April 12, 2012 (UTC)
 * Better?
 * Link for the confrontation please. :P And yep, a "one-against-one duel" works as a term (usually we say "one-on-one," but "one-against-one" works, too). Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 13:00, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Good article article
Hey, Lee. Thanks again for answering those questions I asked you a few weeks ago. The article that I wrote for Wookieepedia: NewsNet is now on the Main Page of Wookieepedia; check it out! Menkooroo 16:56, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

GAN Objections
Hey, Lee, just wanted to remind you that you have some objections on my GAN's for Ozurist, Galen Besk, and Vastil that are over three weeks old. I'd love it if you could take a look when you got a chance, and seeing as all three say "More to come", could you check if there are any other errors that catch your eye? Thanks. Cade  Calrayn   03:41, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Updated Ultimate Guide
Hello there, I'm not sure if you have a copy of Star Wars: The Ultimate Visual Guide: Updated and Expanded, but I was flipping through it and noticed that 2242 appears in it. Since he was your GAN, I figured I would bring it to your attention. Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 21:32, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Unidentified Jedi General (Altyr V)
I got the feeling this passed unnoticed, so since you worte this article, would you maybe take a look at my objections concerning the source? Greetings,  Jedi-Meister  »!?« 12:25, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Gungan bouillabaisse
Hello, I was just reading Coruscant Nights II: Street of Shadows and I came across the following mention of Gungan bouillabaisse: "Add to that the heavy, humid reek of open-air cooking, from Gungan bouillabaisse to Wookiee luau..." The soup was smelled by Den Dhur while he was in the Ploughtekal Market on Coruscant looking for a Compressed energy crystal for Jax Pavan to build a new lightsaber. The events of the book occur in 19 BBY. I guess it will probably still be a CA after the update, farewell.-- Exiled Jedi   (Greetings)  01:53, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

Moonseeker is an Aargauun
I actually got a reply from Karen Miller just now (she's been sick) and she said that she was referencing old material, so Argauun was a misspelling of Aargauun. NaruHina Talk  20:52, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

All Stars Burn as One
Hello, I just thought I would tell you that I believe that "All Stars Burn as One" is mentioned in MedStar I: Battle Surgeons as the Republic Anthem. The passage it is mentioned in goes as follows: In the book, Den Dhur hears the anthem play when Admiral Tarnese Bleyd arrives for his inspection of Republic Mobile Surgical Unit 7. Thank you for your time.-- Exiled Jedi   (Greetings)  04:13, August 4, 2012 (UTC)
 * "Over the hypersound speakers came the martial strains of the Republic Anthem's first stanza&mdash;the music traditionally played whenever a ranking officer or visiting dignitary was present."

CC-5869 "Stone"
Instead of the somewhat plain closeup image of Stone with his blaster drawn, what do you think of the shot I replace it with? Still shows him with blaster drawn, but also add further depth by adding the Weequay element as to why he has his weapon drawn. Take a look and if you don't approve, just revert the change. -  JMAS  Jolly Trooper.png Hey, it's me! 02:21, September 25, 2012 (UTC)

RE: Jurokk
Hi. The picture comes from the issues rogue's gallery, called the last stand of the Jedi and showing the Jedi of Episode III. It just includes images and names so there's no additional information at all, so no need to update the article except for the new source. Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:54, October 13, 2012 (UTC)
 * Hi Lee, I saw that your update to Jurokk doesn't at all reflect his attending the film's briefing. Haven't watched the film for a long time, but wasn't he visible in the scene in question, or was he just intended to be in the film, but never made the final cut? If the former, than more updating needs to be done. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 14:37, October 15, 2012 (UTC)
 * Before the retcon, when he existed separately as Unidentified bald Jedi, that's what it said. Also on the Dutch website, Sompeetalay wrote that he attended that briefing from the film. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 00:35, October 16, 2012 (UTC)

Tracer
Hello Lee, I see on CC's Warthog FAN, Tracer is considered dead, but in your article for the latter, he was just considered wounded. I think consistency should be shown for both, either you edit Tracer to reflect he is dead, or, if you feel like his death's not obvious, then convince CC so he can change Warthog too. Also, if you don't think his death is obvious, see if any articles linking to his page also say he's dead, and change them too (possibly the 21 BBY page, or whatever year that comic's supposed to take place?). Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 14:49, October 15, 2012 (UTC)

Omar Toggs
Hello Lee, last week the user Nightlily edited your CA Omar Toggs reflecting that he actually was first pictured in the Bounty episode instead of Revenge. Can you confirm if that's true? I know apparently the holographic bounty list appeared in that episode, but not sure if Omar Toggs was then displayed on it. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 17:48, November 10, 2012 (UTC)

Ando (star) in "The Clone Wars: Decide Your Destiny: The Lost Legion"
Hi Lee! I noticed you have access to The Clone Wars: Decide Your Destiny: The Lost Legion. Could you please tell me whether the star of Ando system is featured in the book (maybe it's mentioned indirectly as "sun" etc.)? Thanks!  Imperators II (Talk) 13:03, December 4, 2012 (UTC)
 * Okay, so it was featured there. Did the sun appear in the skies (was visible there) or was it just mentioned in a conversation or in narration? And, if it did appear, was it during the Battle of Ando Prime? Thanks again!  Imperators II (Talk) 17:10, December 4, 2012 (UTC)
 * Hi Lee! I'm sorry to bother you again, but could you please look up the info on the Ando star for me? The things I asked you in the post above are all that's needed for me to nominate the article for GA status. Thanks again!  Imperators II (Talk) 11:36, December 11, 2012 (UTC)
 * Thanks! And two more questions: 1) was the sun shining during the Battle of Ando Prime, or was it before/after the battle? 2) in which chapter was it mentioned? Thank you!  Imperators II (Talk) 15:43, December 12, 2012 (UTC)
 * I got the info from Jinzler, but thanks anyway!  Imperators II (Talk) 18:36, December 22, 2012 (UTC)

Happy New Year!
Hey, I wanna wish you a happy new year! :) --XXLVenom998 (talk) 10:57, December 31, 2012 (UTC)

Re: Oz and Ringo
They don't have much dialogue (not any, if I remember right), but they're both featured in a significant part of the story. I might be able to get the information to you if you can't access it, but it would be better if you could access it yourself to make sure nothing gets missed.  CC7567  (talk) 22:36, February 7, 2013 (UTC)
 * I'll send you an email with the stuff within the next few days. Please remind me if a week passes and I haven't sent it yet; otherwise I might forget.  CC7567  (talk) 22:39, February 7, 2013 (UTC)

Re: Bulduga
stated that there was something regarding Bulduga's acquisition of Bane's hat in The Complete Season Four bonus features, but it's in the Blu-ray version, which I don't have access to.  CC7567  (talk) 14:16, March 29, 2013 (UTC)

RE: Bulduga
Hello there. Sorry, I only have the DVD set. Regards. Ressor (talk) 11:20, March 30, 2013 (UTC)

Re: Bulduga
Hello Lee! I'm sorry I can't help you much, I only have the DVD versions of The Clone Wars.--LennyF (talk) 12:49, March 31, 2013 (UTC)

Ringo and Oz
Hey Lee, I'll try to review Oz in the GAN redux as soon as I can. I completed Ringo's review.  JangFett  (Talk) 22:51, July 4, 2013 (UTC)

Clone trooper
Yep, no problem. :) Also can't believe I made that careless mistake when separating the personality and traits and equipment sections, oh well. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 04:42, March 9, 2014 (UTC)