Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Skirmish on Rekkiad

Skirmish on Rekkiad

 * Nominated by: DarthRevan1173 RevanTOR001.jpg (Long live Lord Revan) 03:52, March 18, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Another for Project Novels

Floyd

 * One thing first: the intro has to be shaved down considerably. Waaaaaaay out of proportion. Do this and I'll give a more in-depth look.  IFYLOFD  ( Floyd's crib ) 04:58, March 19, 2013 (UTC)
 * Trimmed some info out of the intro. Not sure if it's enough let me know if you want more taken out.
 * I'm not sure if Floyd is satisfied but I still think it is pretty big ;). Winterz (talk) 12:48, March 25, 2013 (UTC)
 * Trimmed more info out of the intro. DarthRevan1173 RevanTOR001.jpg (Long live Lord Revan) 18:56, March 26, 2013 (UTC)

Cadeth

 * Quotes. Get 'em. Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 22:21, March 21, 2013 (UTC)
 * Added. DarthRevan1173 RevanTOR001.jpg (Long live Lord Revan) 00:44, March 22, 2013 (UTC)

Not Cade

 * You can add a few more details in the infobox like 1 Jedi Master in participants and maybe Revan in commanders section.
 * Revan wasn't a commander he just created a distraction and added the 1 Jedi Master.
 * Decapitalize the "Unoffically" in the infobox.
 * Un-capitalized.
 * Isn't this like part of the greater mission: Search for Mandalore's Mask?
 * Yes but the skirmish is more about invading Jendri's land than the search in general. I fell the same goes for here.
 * Apologies Revan, but one certainly contains the other. I understand this will slow down your other nom but they correspond with each other. This should be considered part of the search. Winterz (talk) 01:41, March 30, 2013 (UTC)
 * It is in a sense. If needed I can merge whats needed from this article with the Search but I feel I should ask the AC's that already voted on the Skirmish in Dramath's tomb before just merging that article. I assume you wish both articles merged with the search, however I may have misunderstood though. DarthRevan1173 RevanTOR001.jpg (Long live Lord Revan) 20:51, March 30, 2013 (UTC)
 * Merge? Not at all. I mean something like the Desolator Crisis is to some of its minor raids' articles. Winterz (talk) 22:05, March 30, 2013 (UTC)
 * Totally had the wrong idea lol, yea I could do something like that for the Search itself however I don't believe there's anything I can do here, unless you know otherwise. DarthRevan1173 RevanTOR001.jpg (Long live Lord Revan) 01:42, March 31, 2013 (UTC)
 * I believe what Winterz is asking you to do is what I did here. Cade  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg  Calrayn  01:43, March 31, 2013 (UTC)
 * That would make more sense, thanks for the help Cade. DarthRevan1173 RevanTOR001.jpg (Long live Lord Revan) 01:49, March 31, 2013 (UTC)
 * You give numbers in the infobox so you should also give them in the article's body.
 * Added under the aftermath section.
 * I'll continue my review soon ;). Winterz (talk) 12:54, March 25, 2013 (UTC)
 * Looking forward to it. DarthRevan1173 RevanTOR001.jpg (Long live Lord Revan) 20:02, March 25, 2013 (UTC)