Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/CC-3636


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CC-3636

 * Nominated by:  CC7567  (talk) 07:55, September 29, 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Virtually the last project I can do before Cad Bane bogs me down.

(5 Inqs/2 Users/7 Total)
Support
 * 1)  IFYLOFD  ( You will pay the price for your lack of vision! ) 00:06, October 4, 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 23:18, October 10, 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) Good job, CC.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 14:34, October 12, 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) —Tommy9281  Dark side Master SWGTCG.jpg ( No truth in me ) 05:45, October 29, 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) Excellent.--Sean Red 14:36, December 13, 2009 (UTC)
 * 6)  Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 02:08, January 6, 2010 (UTC)
 * 7) &mdash;  Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 04:14, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Tommy:
 * 2) * In the intro you call Plo Koon both a Jedi General and a High Jedi General, despite the distinctions between the two. This becomes more confusing when you later refer to Anakin as also a Jedi General. Please rework this somehow. I would have done it, but I don't want to screw with the prose.
 * 3) **As I understand it, it's basically the same way that a Jedi Master is still a Knight; the latter is still the former, but it just isn't specified this way as often. I've changed it for clarity, but I don't feel that it makes a big enough factual change.  CC7567  (talk) 05:39, October 29, 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) * See if you can add the last sentence of the P&T to the preceding paragraph somehow.
 * 5) **Taken care of, though they really aren't that related.  CC7567  (talk) 05:39, October 29, 2009 (UTC)
 * 6) * What's up with the redlink in the Appearances section?
 * 7) **A young readers book that I've been too lazy to create an article for. I'll take care of it soon.  CC7567  (talk) 05:39, October 29, 2009 (UTC)
 * 8) *That's all. —Tommy9281 Dark side Master SWGTCG.jpg ( No truth in me ) 05:03, October 29, 2009 (UTC)
 * 9) **Thanks for the review.  CC7567  (talk) 05:39, October 29, 2009 (UTC)
 * 10) Something veeery minor
 * 11) * &hellip;influenced by the fear of death invoked by Ventress's beheading of one of the clones&hellip; Look at the scene closely; Ventress beheads two clones. QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 20:47, November 29, 2009 (UTC)
 * 12) **Eh, fine. Fixed, and thanks.  CC7567  (talk) 20:52, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

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