Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Didina Lippinoss


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Didina Lippinoss

 * Nominated by: Darth Culator  (Talk) 01:47, 26 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Combine one part incredible boredom with two parts aversion to working on more important projects, and this is what you get. Consider it a supplementary article to Acky's upcoming Crev Bombaasa nom, full of wholesome Star Wars Galaxies deliciousness. -- Darth Culator  (Talk) 01:47, 26 November 2008 (UTC)

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie ) 23:54, 29 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 2)  IFYLOFD  ( And now, young Skywalker, you will die. ) 23:46, 2 December 2008 (UTC)
 * 3)  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  13:22, 21 December 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) -  Cavalier One [[Image:FarStar Logo.jpg|20px]]( Squadron channel ) 12:41, 8 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) Toprawa and Ralltiir 04:17, 11 January 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Expand the intro. --Eyrezer 02:08, 28 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) *Ugh. I don't think the length of the article really demands much more intro, given the redundancy it would cause. -- Darth Culator  (Talk) 02:14, 28 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) **Right, that should be more than enough. Good thing there's no redlink requirement because I'm not going off on a Karrek Flim tangent. -- Darth Culator  (Talk) 02:22, 28 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) Toprawa:
 * 5) * Why "apparently?" Can we not just say she was, or otherwise avoid the weasel word? "and was apparently romantically attached to Flim"
 * 6) * Ditto: "What was apparently unknown to Lippinoss, however"
 * 7) * Please kill the assumption. You could just say that he lived well into the next two decades, etc., which by itself implies his victory over her: "it can be assumed that he was the ultimate victor." Toprawa and Ralltiir 02:55, 9 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 8) **All fixed. -- Darth Culator  (Talk) 00:42, 11 January 2009 (UTC)

Comments


 * I find myself wishing we had forum-style emoticons so I could do an eye-roll at my comment above. -- Darth Culator  (Talk) 01:47, 26 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Bang, no redlinks. -- Darth Culator  (Talk) 01:26, 29 November 2008 (UTC)