Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Arhan


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Arhan

 * Nominated by: --Eyrezer 05:14, March 12, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 16:55, March 14, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) A notable article. --Skippy Farlstendoiro 07:51, March 16, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 23:41, March 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) Toprawa and Ralltiir 03:31, March 18, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5)  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  20:19, March 19, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Skippy; we'll eventually end CRO at this rate
 * 2) * Intro: from base-line Humansin What's Humansin?
 * 3) **There was a space missing.
 * 4) * Culture: No section? If you can confirm that Peert was a Human (unsourced in his article), then you can mention that Arhans married Humans.
 * 5) **Peert's species is not identified, although he looks like one and is the only person not to have it explicitly named so probably a good candidate for the "duck" test. If they had childred - ie Arhan/Human compatibility, I'd put it in, but I don't feel it is enough to create a culture section.
 * 6) * History: A notable Arhan was Filice Ginzork. Was she in-universe notable?
 * 7) **Changed. --Eyrezer 17:39, March 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * 8) * Hist: The last sentence flows awkwardly. Could you move it to just before "Filice operated as the Shield's slicer" or before "Filice and Peert lost two of the original members"?
 * 9) **Moved. --Eyrezer 01:05, March 13, 2010 (UTC)
 * 10) *Good job, as always. Skippy Farlstendoiro 09:23, March 12, 2010 (UTC)
 * 11) **Four to go according to CUSWE... --Eyrezer 01:59, March 13, 2010 (UTC)
 * 12) Baseline or Base-line?  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  23:43, March 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 13) *base-line --Eyrezer 00:47, March 18, 2010 (UTC)

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