Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Hoggon


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Hoggon

 * Nominated by: Thefourdotelipsis 13:09, 22 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Guest nom for WP:TOTJ.

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Support
 * 1)  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  21:12, 23 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 2)  Greyman ( Talk ) 16:34, 25 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) Ridiculously boring! Cull Tremayne 03:52, 11 December 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) Some TOTJ love. Toprawa and Ralltiir 17:50, 2 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) Green Tentacle (Talk) 18:09, 2 January 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) I think a little bit of context in the last paragraph of the body would be good. Stuff about why Sylvar couldn't kill him, and why she was mad when Hoggon shot Ulic. I know that's not directly pertinent to Hoggon, but it could be a bit confusing if one has not read TOTJ.  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  13:22, 22 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) *I've added a little bit of context there. Don't want to stray too far from the story at hand, but let me know if it's still confusing. Thefourdotelipsis 05:24, 23 November 2008 (UTC)

Comments


 * Omnibuses aren't exactly scanner friendly, so if anyone could oblige, it would be much appreciated. On the subject of quotes, the one required one is there&mdash;if people want more, please, feel free to add them. Anything, anywhere. Thefourdotelipsis 13:09, 22 November 2008 (UTC)