Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Picaroon C. Boodle


 * ''The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a featured article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.

(5 Inqs/6 Users/11 total)
Support
 * 1) -- [[Image:AckbarSig.jpg|40px]] dmirableAckbar  ( It's A Trap! ) 17:58, 15 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Jedimca0(Do or Do Not, There is No Try) 20:02, 15 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) Thefourdotelipsis 04:18, 16 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 4)  Chack Jadson  Talk  14:56, 16 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 5) Graestan  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( This party's over ) 21:59, 16 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 6) jSarek 00:50, 20 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 7) Cull Tremayne 15:28, 20 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 8) I didn't find a thing wrong with Pic. Brilliant work. Hobbes15 ( Tiger Headquarters ) 01:56, 24 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 9) Green Tentacle (Talk) 18:50, 24 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 10) Now the other one, please ;-) Jorrel [[Image:Wiki-shrinkable.png|20px]] Fraajic 02:52, 25 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 11)  —Xwing328 (Talk) 23:33, 27 September 2007 (UTC)

Oppose Comments
 * 1) From the squalid cubicle of Graestan:
 * 2) *I'd like to note that I gave this the copyedit I promised you as I looked at it. Sorry I was late.
 * 3) **Thanks. I forgive you ;)
 * 4) * "The two easily deactivated the droid, but Katarn managed to kill Gorc, who had underestimated the Rebel agent, who killed him easily." - Awkward. Could be broken up, or wording changed.
 * 5) **Addressed.
 * 6) * "The "twins" moved forward, as the Klatooinian unsuccessfully attempted to release the grip the guards had on him while slowly backing away." - Again, a little awkward.
 * 7) **Addressed.
 * 8) * "Gorc was dim-witted and slow, so, even though he was the smaller of the two, Pic tried to look out for Gorc's well-being, acting as a sort of "older brother" to his mutated friend." - This as well.
 * 9) **Addressed.
 * 10) * "If the two were within several meters of each other, their powers were boosted&mdash;however, their closeness also meant that if one brother was injured, the pain was shared to the other, and every time Pic used the Dark Side he further corrupted Gorc, and vice versa." - And this also.
 * 11) **Addressed.
 * 12) * In the last paragraph of Powers and abilities, you practically beatbox the word "Force." Use some innovative alternatives.
 * 13) **Addressed.
 * 14) * This is merely a request: could just one more image be found?
 * 15) **I have a good image in mind, but I don't have a scanner. I'll try and find someone with the means to scan/upload it on IRC. The picture is from the Dark Forces II instruction manual, about six pages from the end.
 * 16) ***Added, courtesy of Green tentacle. It's not great, but the only other alternative is another screenshot, which would be just as bad.
 * 17) *As is this: could another quote or two be added, to the beginning of the Biography section or the Personality and traits section?
 * 18) **Alas, there doesn't really seem to be any more quotes related to Pic. I'll add one if I come across one, but I doubt I will.
 * 19) * Graestan [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( This party's over ) 02:18, 16 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 20) **Thank you for your comments and input. -- [[Image:AckbarSig.jpg|40px]] dmirableAckbar  ( It's A Trap! ) 13:01, 16 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 21) ***No problem. Thanks for honoring me with the request for a copyedit.&mdash; Graestan [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( This party's over ) 21:59, 16 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 22) From the beaker of Lord Hydronium:
 * 23) * Something in the BTS about the differences between the game and Dark Force: Rebel Agent (Pic's death, the wampa, etc.).
 * 24) **Addressed.
 * 25) *Speaking of wampas, this page disagrees with the article.
 * 26) **Addressed.
 * 27) *Something in the BTS also about how his name wasn't given in full until the Dark Forces Saga.
 * 28) **Addressed.
 * 29) *And let's make this a BTS hat trick: BTS info from Abel Peña's blog.
 * 30) **Addressed.
 * -- Lord Hydronium 09:29, 16 September 2007 (UTC)
 * Thank you for your comments and input. -- [[Image:AckbarSig.jpg|40px]] dmirableAckbar  ( It's A Trap! ) 13:01, 16 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 1) * The event of obtaining one of Yoda's lightsabers is not mentioned in the main Bio, or is it explained how Pic switched over to using a lightsaber instead of a dagger. Yoda doesn't even seem to be linked in the main Bio either. Cull Tremayne 13:08, 20 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) *Added, linked and clarified. -- [[Image:AckbarSig.jpg|40px]] dmirableAckbar  ( It's A Trap! ) 15:21, 20 September 2007 (UTC)

'''Approved by Inquisitorius 19:52, 28 September 2007 (UTC)