Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Skirmish over Tatooine


 * ''The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was unsuccessful. Please do not modify it.

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Support
 * 1) &mdash; Darthtyler http://images.wikia.com/swfanon/images/1/18/Scuba_Diver.gif Talk 21:46, 20 November 2007 (UTC)

Oppose
 * All of the images are watermarked in some way, shape, or form. Thefourdotelipsis 23:30, 23 November 2007 (UTC)
 * 1) The intro is in need of some better prose and general Wookification. Also, I would recommend expanding on why Solo was returning to Tatooine in the first place. It was more than just going to see Jabba, if memory serves. There's more info on his purpose in A Hunter's Fate: Greedo's Tale in Tales from the Mos Eisley Cantina. I'm sure there's also some content to be found in Rebel Dawn. Toprawa and Ralltiir 07:57, 26 November 2007 (UTC)
 * Also, I'm not sure it makes any sense that the Empire was interested in "a popular bounty" on Solo. That makes them seem like they're bounty hunters themselves, as if the Imperial forces are interested in collecting on Jabba's bounty. I'm pretty sure Solo already had an Imperial bounty placed on him by this time, a topic probably also covered in Rebel Dawn. Toprawa and Ralltiir 08:08, 26 November 2007 (UTC)
 * 1) Infobox not sourced. Writing isn't to the highest of standard either; like T&R said, particularly the intro. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 19:53, 11 December 2007 (UTC)

Comments
 * Um, what exactly does "watermarked" mean...?&mdash; Darthtyler http://images.wikia.com/swfanon/images/1/18/Scuba_Diver.gif Talk 05:14, 24 November 2007 (UTC)
 * Done.&mdash; Darthtyler http://images.wikia.com/swfanon/images/1/18/Scuba_Diver.gif Talk 05:23, 24 November 2007 (UTC)