Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Cha Niathal's assistant

Cha Niathal's assistant

 * Nominated by: Jonjedigrandmaster  Jedi symbol.svg ( We seed the stars ) 16:09, April 18, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: another quickie; the only mentions of this assistant are in the two given quotes, so there is no info for a P/T

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1) So clean.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 17:38, April 18, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 00:00, April 20, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) Revise any errors in my copy-edit. Toprawa and Ralltiir 17:38, April 20, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 23:20, April 23, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5)  CC7567  (talk) 23:21, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) She got what she deserved. Her death was an apology for LOTF.
 * 2) * I know generally you aren't supposed to do this, but perhaps the word "individual" should be bolded in the intro. "This assistant served as a personal aide" is really redundant.
 * 3) **I disagree; I don't really feel that it's that redundant, she was an assistant (that's her "profession") who served as a personal aide to Niathal (what she did in her life).
 * 4) ***I see your point. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 00:00, April 20, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) * Is there an article on Cha's trial? Even though it couldn't take place, it was still planned and notarized apparently.
 * 6) **No there is no article, nor should there be one. It never took place, and there is no indication that it was ever fully planned-out. No judge is known, no defendant is known. There would be nothing to put in the article except to say that it was a trial that never took palce.
 * 7) *Other than that, great. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 20:06, April 18, 2010 (UTC)
 * 8) **Thanks for the review. Jonjedigrandmaster  Jedi symbol.svg ( We seed the stars ) 20:21, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

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