Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Citypath 515


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Citypath 515

 * Nominated by: 501st  dogma ( talk ) 15:40, March 13, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: My first nomination for the new voting amount

(3 ECs/3 Users/6 Total)
Support
 * 1) &mdash; 05:15, March 14, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) &mdash; DigiFluid(Whine here) 18:00, March 14, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  17:31, March 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) Supreme Emperor (talk) 15:12, March 16, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) Winterz (talk) 19:03, March 17, 2013 (UTC)
 * 6)  Commander Code-8  G'day, mate 07:11, March 18, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) &mdash; DigiFluid(Whine here) 13:18, March 14, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) * Minor grammatical quirk... This article starts out "A transit route, Citypath 515 was located in Cityblock Kesk-319 ...." To me, that flows rather awkwardly and might read better if it was tweaked to the more simple "Citypath 515 was a transit route located in Cityblock..." However, this is not an objection I feel especially strong about, so I won't mind terribly if you disagree and want it struck. I just think it would read better that way.
 * 3) **Fixed. Thanks for looking it over. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 16:42, March 14, 2013 (UTC)

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