Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations

 This page is for the nomination of "comprehensive articles." For a list of "comprehensive articles," see Category:Wookieepedia comprehensive articles.


 * Comprehensive article nominations history
 * Comprehensive article nominations archiving checklist

What is a "comprehensive article?"

A "comprehensive article" is an article that contains all information regarding the topic. Often, "comprehensive articles" cannot reach Featured or Good Article status due to their limited content. This process is intended to recognize articles that contain all relevant canon information, yet are still under the 250 word limit required for a Good Article. The purpose of this is twofold&mdash;firstly, to help users distinguish what is a stub, and what is merely a short article with no further relevant material to be added, and, more importantly, to highlight for the reader when they are reading something that has been judged definitely "comprehensive"&mdash;that is, a guarantee to the reader that whatever they are reading contains the sum total of all available content on that topic.

Nominations and promotions of the Comprehensive article process are overseen by a collective of users known as the "EduCorps," which is made up of the Inquisitorius, the AgriCorps, and various other experienced users who are considered qualified to adequately judge the nominated material.

Lucasfilm Ltd. and its many licensees continue to expand the Star Wars universe. Since new information might become available, it may be necessary to revoke a "comprehensive article's" status. A forum will be used to nominate articles that have fallen out-of-date. Members of the EduCorps will then post a warning template on that page, and a grace period of one week will be instituted in which the article can be improved. If there is a significant amount of new information, it is likely that once updated, the article will become eligible for Good article status, and thereby ineligible for Comprehensive article status.

READ THIS FIRST!

An article must&hellip;


 * 1) &hellip;be well-written and detailed.
 * 2) &hellip;be unbiased, non-point of view.
 * 3) &hellip;be sourced with all available sources and appearances.
 * 4) &hellip;follow the Manual of Style, Layout Guide, and all other policies on Wookieepedia. This is, of course, within reason. If a topic only has a very limited degree of content that cannot be divided up into the relevant article sections, it is not required that it follow the Layout Guide precisely. This is to be judged on a case-by-case basis.
 * 5) &hellip;following the review process, be stable, i.e., does not change significantly from day to day and is not the subject of ongoing edit wars. This does not apply to vandalism and protection or semi-protection as a result of vandalism.
 * 6) &hellip;not be tagged with any sort of improvement tags (i.e. more sources, expand, etc).
 * 7) &hellip;have no redlinks.
 * 8) &hellip;have all relevant canon information presented.
 * 9) &hellip;be completely referenced for all available material and sources. See Sourcing for more information. While this is not required for an article possessing a singular source, it is encouraged, as it provides both uniformity and a good infrastructure should the topic be referenced in any future materials.
 * 10) &hellip;have all quotes and images sourced.
 * 11) &hellip;provide at least one relevant quote on the article if available.
 * 12) &hellip;include a "Behind the scenes" section for in-universe articles.
 * 13) &hellip;counting the introduction, the article body, and "Behind the scenes" material, must not exceed 250 words in length (not including captions, quotes, or headers, etc). Any articles exceeding the limit should be taken to the Good article nominations page for consideration.
 * 14) &hellip;if the nominated article reaches 200 words or greater, the nominator must either provide an intro or draft an intro and provide a link to the revision in the nomination, showing that the intro does not elevate the article over 250 words. Exceptions can be made for articles wherein the majority of the text is in the "Behind the scenes" section.

How to nominate:


 * 1) First, nominate an article you find is worthy of comprehensive status, putting it at the bottom of the list below. Nominated articles must meet all thirteen requirements stated above.
 * 2) Add CAnom at the top of the article you are nominating.
 * 3) Be sure to place sign in the "Nominated by" line when the nomination is posted for voting.
 * 4) Others will object to the nomination if they disagree that the article is good enough; they will then supply reasons for doing so, and ways to improve the article in accordance with the established rules.
 * 5) Nominators and supporters will adjust the article until the objectors (with reasonable objections) are satisfied. Objectors may also make alterations&mdash;if there is any reason for contention on a given point, it should be settled in a civil manner in the nomination field itself.
 * 6) Users may not vote on their own articles.
 * 7) There is no limit to the amount of nominations a given user can submit at any given time.

How to vote:


 * 1) Before doing anything, be sure to read the article completely, keeping a sharp eye out for mistakes.
 * 2) Afterward, compare the article to the criteria listed above, and then either support or object the article's nomination.
 * 3) *If you object, please supply concrete reasons for doing so, and how it can be improved.
 * 4) As stated above, any objections will be looked upon by the nominator, supporters, and anyone willing to improve the article, and action will be taken to please the objectors. Do not strike other users' objections; it is up to the objector to review the changes and strike if they are satisfied.
 * 5) There are several ways in which an article can receive the required number of votes. Within a 48-hour period of nomination, only EduCorps votes will count towards the total, although anyone may choose to vote in that window. If two members of the EduCorps support a nomination in that window, and there are no outstanding objections, the article can be considered a "Comprehensive article" and be tagged with the template 48 hours after the initial nomination.  The talk page will also be tagged with the CA template. When the 48 hours are up, any user's votes will contribute towards the total. If one EduCorps member has voted for an article after a week, three regular votes will be required. After the 48 hour period, an article can still also pass with just two EduCorps votes.
 * 6) Once a nomination is successful, it will be placed on the Comprehensive article list. Instructions on how to archive nominations, successful or otherwise, can be found here. Anyone can archive a nomination&mdash;just make sure it has the correct number of votes, has been nominated for at least a week (or 48 hours if there are two EC votes), and that there are absolutely no outstanding objections. If you are not sure how to do this, just ask, and someone will likely be more than willing to help you. Also, if you think you can slip one past us, think again&mdash;someone is always watching you.

All nominations will be considered idle and are subject to instantaneous removal by EduCorps members if objections are not addressed, or at least not answered, after a period of 1 week.

Please remember to archive your nomination beforehand if you plan on taking it to the Good Article Nominations page.

Cassa Hun

 * Nominated by: Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 21:10, January 28, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Project Hero

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 01:10, January 29, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  Commander Code-8  G'day, mate 06:26, February 6, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) CC-8
 * 2) * Missing P&T.  Commander Code-8  G'day, mate 22:06, January 28, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) **Done. Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 00:45, January 29, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) ***The section's good but does the game say he's devoted? Sounds POVish to me.  Commander Code-8  G'day, mate 01:11, January 29, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) ****Removed. Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 01:25, January 29, 2013 (UTC)
 * 6) *****Just a heads-up, CC (and Cade). Cade could have dismissed this objection because when articles are this small, that sort of sectionizing is absolutely unnecessary and the writer can mention those physical attributes well in the Biography.
 * 7) ******Guys, I did not write the above comment.  Stake black   msg 16:28, February 7, 2013 (UTC)
 * 8) Winterz goes shopping
 * 9) *The Hero of Tython isn't linked in the article, sir.
 * 10) **Done.
 * 11) *I'm not entirely sure about this, but you should probably move the "(...) the Jedi Master gave the Jedi armor or an additional lightsaber depending on the Knight's choice" to the Bts section, and correct the Jedi armor part as it's confusing. Did he give the Jedi, an armor or did he give The Jedi armor to the Jedi? Winterz (talk) 14:45, February 5, 2013 (UTC)
 * 12) **Fixed. Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 15:56, February 5, 2013 (UTC)
 * 13) More shopping (there was a sale)
 * 14) *Jedi Order is in the infobox and intro but is missing from the article body.
 * 15) *Even if he only speaks to the player on Carrick Station, is he not still canonically on Coruscant at some point?
 * 16) *A bit more detail on just what his tutelage of the Hero entails is in order. The intro could and should briefly relate something from his biography (him being on Carrick Station). The article reads very rushed, as if it were written to be under 250 words rather than with a sufficient amount of detail. Currently, it seems like you're writing articles with the ultimate goal being to CAN them and not GAN them. Your ultimate goal should instead be to give the articles an appropriate amount of detail; whether they're CA or GA length should be incidental to that goal. Menkooroo (talk) 16:28, February 12, 2013 (UTC)

Comments
 * 1) Is there a reason why one of the quotes is repeated? (last sentence of quote in bio and P&T's one) 501st  dogma ( talk ) 00:52, January 29, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) *Because he has like three lines. Fixed. Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 00:57, January 29, 2013 (UTC)
 * 244 words. Are you sure you don't want to go on a little bit longer and nominate for a GA?  Stake black   msg 15:48, February 4, 2013 (UTC)
 * Not particularly. Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 17:09, February 4, 2013 (UTC)

Unidentified Human Emperor's Voice (3,678 BBY)

 * Nominated by: Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 19:28, January 30, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Project Hero. A Voice of the Emperor who has strangely feminine fingers.

(2 ECs/0 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) Nice.&mdash;  21:32, January 30, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 14:24, February 8, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Is not "emotionless" POV? Other than that, awesome.&mdash;  20:17, January 30, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) *Nah, the Codex itself uses that exact word. Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 21:02, January 30, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) **Cool.&mdash; 21:32, January 30, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) Could you explain the double meaning you mention in the quote attribution?  501st  dogma ( talk ) 00:25, February 2, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) *Actually, I removed that, since it's pretty much speculation. I had some weird idea that his using the word "voice" was important, but the quote itself can stay. Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 05:46, February 2, 2013 (UTC)
 * 6) You should probably add in the first sentence of the Bts something like "The Human thought to be the Sith Emperor's real face/body" or within those lines, as the remark you make on the section never specified it, only that the Human and (in different lines) the Emperor's face first appeared in the comic and that the novel then contradicted the Emperor's appearance. Winterz (talk) 14:57, February 5, 2013 (UTC)
 * 7) *Done. Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 16:06, February 5, 2013 (UTC)
 * 8) Where in the galaxy is he when he issues the command to Teneb Kel? Menkooroo (talk) 05:47, February 11, 2013 (UTC)
 * 9) *Arglebargle. Added intro as well. Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 17:16, February 11, 2013 (UTC)
 * 10) **Anything more specific? A city, a building? The aim should be to give an appropriate amount of detail rather than just enough to keep it under 250 words. Menkooroo (talk) 12:03, February 12, 2013 (UTC)
 * 11) Are you sure he dies? Ref [2], which is the ref for him dying, doesn't say anything to support that assertion. Menkooroo (talk) 12:03, February 12, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Unidentified male Dark Jedi

 * Nominated by: &mdash; 21:27, January 30, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: "Give in to your anger&hellip;"

(2 ECs/0 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) A Jedi serving the Empire? Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 22:26, January 30, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 00:28, February 2, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) There's an empty Eras template on the article, so you should probably fill it in, considering my comment below. Also if he isn't given any relevant info, that should warrant a tag ;).Winterz (talk) 15:18, February 5, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) *The book does not specify which era the Dark Jedi or the trooper belonged to, whether it was the Rise of the Empire era or the Rebellion era.&mdash; 17:43, February 5, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) **Then you should probably remove the Eras template, at least until this receives the status. How about my second point? Winterz (talk) 18:21, February 5, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Both taken care of.&mdash; 20:41, February 5, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) **** isn't required when is already used, the same as  not being required when  is used. "Picture only" is implied by "First pictured." Menkooroo (talk) 01:10, February 6, 2013 (UTC)
 * 6) *****Thanks for clearing that up, Jeff.&mdash; 03:21, February 6, 2013 (UTC)

Comments
 * Same question as the one below: is the stormtrooper confirmed dead?  Stake black   msg 14:19, February 3, 2013 (UTC)
 * Please see the answer below.&mdash; 00:33, February 4, 2013 (UTC)
 * Can you confirm that he served Palpatine's Galactic Empire? Or is there a chance that it isn't Palpy's? Winterz (talk) 15:18, February 5, 2013 (UTC)
 * Please see the comment above.&mdash; 17:43, February 5, 2013 (UTC)

Unidentified stormtrooper (Victim of a male Dark Jedi)

 * Nominated by: &mdash; 23:22, January 30, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Ouch.

(2 ECs/0 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 23:54, January 30, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 14:26, February 2, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * Might be a sofixit, but please fix the categories. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 23:23, January 30, 2013 (UTC)
 * Can you establish how he ended the soldier's life? "Lightsaber" isn't currently mentioned. Menkooroo (talk) 05:49, February 11, 2013 (UTC)
 * Done.&mdash; 05:59, February 11, 2013 (UTC)

Comments
 * For WP:AMB.&mdash; 05:40, January 31, 2013 (UTC)
 * Are not all stormtroopers part of the Stormtrooper Corps? Perhaps that should be added? 501st  dogma ( talk ) 14:26, February 2, 2013 (UTC)
 * I have absolutely no idea.&mdash; 01:04, February 3, 2013 (UTC)
 * Does the source explicitly say the trooper died? If not, that's OR.  Stake black   msg 14:18, February 3, 2013 (UTC)
 * The caption for the image says this: "A Dark Jedi gives in to his anger, cutting down a subordinate."&mdash; 17:22, February 3, 2013 (UTC)

DRN-592

 * Nominated by:  Commander Code-8  G'day, mate 09:49, February 3, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Since 38 went to the GAN...

(1 ECs/0 Users/1 Total)
Support
 * 1)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 13:27, February 8, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Everything in the infobox needs to be in the body. You're missing the height, and you might as well link to battle droid and B series as well.  501st  dogma ( talk ) 14:01, February 3, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) *I've put the height in, still not sure how to handle the other ones.  Commander Code-8  G'day, mate 21:19, February 3, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) **Put the B-series and battle droid parts in, is it too awkward?  Commander Code-8  G'day, mate 08:56, February 4, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) ***It's a bit awkward, but it should do the trick. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 13:27, February 8, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) Two first appearances? Fe Nite (talk) 21:29, February 11, 2013 (UTC)
 * 6) *Lol, didn't even notice that! Done.  Commander Code-8  G'day, mate 05:51, February 12, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Atomic blast on Raspar-6

 * Nominated by:  Stake black   msg 17:37, February 3, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: That's all there is to it, really.

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) Did a copy-edit.  Trak Nar  Ramble on 05:35, February 6, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 22:17, February 9, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) 501st
 * 2) * Would a conjecture tag be in order?
 * 3) **Trak handled that for me, thanks.
 * 4) ***Actually, thinking about it, the source explicitly calls it "the atomic blast on Raspar-6". Are you sure it needs the tag?  Stake black   msg 21:22, February 9, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) * How about saying that the blast happened in the Outer Rim, because that's were the sector it's in is located. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 01:04, February 5, 2013 (UTC)
 * 6) **I said it happened in the Tragan Cluster, which is in the Outer Rim. Would you rather have me replace Tragan Cluster with Outer Rim?  Stake black   msg 14:55, February 6, 2013 (UTC)
 * 7) ***You could establish that the cluster is in the Outer Rim to add more context, or you could leave it as is. Your choice. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 21:44, February 7, 2013 (UTC)
 * 8) ****How is it now?  Stake black   msg 21:55, February 7, 2013 (UTC)
 * 9) *****Was the moon mentioned in the Atlas companian as being in the tragen cluster? If not, you can't source to the atlas for that part, as you are doing now. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 13:29, February 8, 2013 (UTC)
 * 10) ******The moon's system was.  Stake black   msg 18:13, February 8, 2013 (UTC)

Comments
 * I cannot give further context on "Stolivea" or "talking fogs" because the author never really says what those things are.  Stake black   msg 14:53, February 4, 2013 (UTC)
 * Some clarification was given in this SH thread: Forum:SH:Monsters and Incomprehensible Gibberish from George Lucas.  Stake black   msg 16:30, February 7, 2013 (UTC)

First mission to Obredaan

 * Nominated by: Corellian Premier Jedi symbol.svg Force will be with you always 22:01, February 7, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: And the Premier returns with something that isn't Battle for Naboo.

(2 ECs/0 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) &mdash; Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 04:14, February 10, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 22:56, February 10, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) 501st
 * 2) * Context on Obredaan and Coruscant.
 * 3) * In the mission section, please state who "They" is, as you were previously just talking about Tiin and Kenobi.
 * 4) * You could probally say that the arms shipment belonged to the Jin'ha. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 00:49, February 9, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) **Voila. Thanks for looking it over. Corellian Premier Jedi symbol.svg Force will be with you always 15:54, February 9, 2013 (UTC)
 * 6) *I don't think that the lightsaber duel part is very relevent to the article. You might want to remove it. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 16:24, February 9, 2013 (UTC)
 * 7) **Actually, I must disagree with you here, dogma. It is entirely relevant&mdash;it is concurrent with the mission and it details what Kenobi is doing before he leaves on the second. Corellian Premier Jedi symbol.svg Force will be with you always 21:11, February 9, 2013 (UTC)
 * 8) ***The duel itself has nothing to do with the event. You could just say that Kenobi was sent, it doesn't matter if he was sparing before. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 21:36, February 9, 2013 (UTC)
 * 9) ****I think this is more of a preference thing. However, having the bit about Kenobi's fight isn't hurting anything, and it does provide some back-story to explain what's going on.&mdash; Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 04:14, February 10, 2013 (UTC)
 * 10) *****Leave it if you want, I guess. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 22:56, February 10, 2013 (UTC)

Comments
 * 1) WP:VG of course. Corellian Premier Jedi symbol.svg Force will be with you always 22:01, February 7, 2013 (UTC)

Chasuka

 * Nominated by: Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 18:07, February 8, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Project Hero's broken 25% completion. Only 358 articles to go.

(1 ECs/0 Users/1 Total)
Support
 * 1)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 00:50, February 9, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) *Please add a food infobox.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  15:05, February 11, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) **Done. Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 17:19, February 11, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Orthodontia

 * Nominated by: Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 18:07, February 8, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Project Hero. Though actually, if I count the current noms and the ones waiting in the wings to be nommed, I'm at 33.68%, or 317 left.

(1 ECs/0 Users/1 Total)
Support
 * 1)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 00:51, February 9, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) *In the xenopathologist article you say that it is only mentioned in the encyclopedia, so you need to source that Doc was a xenopathologist to the encyclopedia.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  15:03, February 11, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) **Done. Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 17:19, February 11, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Xenomedicine

 * Nominated by: Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 18:07, February 8, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Project Hero

(1 ECs/0 Users/1 Total)
Support
 * 1)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 23:51, February 9, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) *Please split the BTS into two sentences.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  15:00, February 11, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) **Done. Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 17:19, February 11, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Gowix Corporation

 * Nominated by: Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 18:10, February 8, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Arglebargle. See what happens when I try to reach to far into the future?

(2 ECs/0 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 23:52, February 9, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  14:59, February 11, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Katiz Xemir's homeworld

 * Nominated by: 501st  dogma ( talk ) 14:47, February 10, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1) Gal-icon.jpg  OLIOSTER   (talk) 22:22, February 10, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) &mdash; Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 03:49, February 11, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  14:23, February 11, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) Did a copy-edit.  Trak Nar  Ramble on 08:29, February 12, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Battle of Polomie

 * Nominated by: &mdash; Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 23:10, February 10, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:WP:VG

(2 ECs/1 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) What an infernal racket! Everbody, flee!  501st  dogma ( talk ) 00:45, February 11, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) Ahhhh, my ears!-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  14:21, February 11, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) First time in history a battle was won just by noise? Corellian Premier Jedi symbol.svg Force will be with you always 17:21, February 11, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Comments
 * 1) Not going to object over this, but should Rebu be mentioned by his title, the Inspector-General? Corellian Premier Jedi symbol.svg Force will be with you always 17:21, February 11, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) *I don't see why not. Thanks for the review.&mdash; Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 19:14, February 11, 2013 (UTC)

CL69 Landspeeder

 * Nominated by: 501st  dogma ( talk ) 00:34, February 11, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

(2 ECs/2 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1) Good work.&mdash; Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 02:44, February 11, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) Did a small copy-edit.  Stake black   msg 03:38, February 11, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  14:18, February 11, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) Did a copy-edit as well. You had the notes and references section above the appearances section.  Trak Nar  Ramble on 08:27, February 12, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Unidentified Cloud City technician

 * Nominated by: Rokkur Shen (talk) 08:13, February 12, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

(0 ECs/0 Users/0 Total)
Support

Object
 * 1) What Trak can Track
 * 2) *I did a copy-edit and cleaned up some wording and fixed some linking.
 * 3) *I also added the CAnom template for you.
 * 4) *My objection: It needs a Behind the scenes section.  Trak Nar  Ramble on 08:23, February 12, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) **Added. Rokkur Shen (talk) 10:05, February 12, 2013 (UTC)
 * 6) What Menk can... Menk
 * 7) *With CAs that are this short and only have the one non-BTS section, be sure to hide the table of contents by adding the code at the top of the article.
 * 8) *Be careful of using out-of-universe wording in the in-universe section: "this man was seen accessing a scomp link computer terminal within the corridors of Cloud City." Seen by whom?
 * 9) *I always advise against using "formerly" in the affiliation field of an infobox, as the infobox is supposed to represent a character's entire life, not just a snapshot of when we see them in canon. In which case it would be better to list Galactic Empire first rather than last, for chronology.
 * 10) *I think the article could proceed more chronologically --- rather than beginning when he's already defected to the Rebels, it should begin when he's serving the Empire and then go into his defection afterward.
 * 11) *Just calling the Rebel Alliance the "Alliance" is a bit confusing; a more full name like "Rebel Alliance" or "Alliance to Restore the Republic" should be used for clarity's sake.
 * 12) *The Occupation of Bespin should be dated to 3 ABY. The New Essential Chronology is our go-to source for that if you wanna use it.
 * 13) *For characters that look Human, we have an unwritten policy that the duck test should be used. I think that this guy passes it. Menkooroo (talk) 11:56, February 12, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Founding Day

 * Nominated by: Tinwe (comlink) 12:17, February 12, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Just stretching my article writing muscles a bit.

(0 ECs/0 Users/0 Total)
Support

Object

Comments
 * WP:TCW I guess. Tinwe (comlink) 12:17, February 12, 2013 (UTC)