Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Agen Kolar


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(5 Inqs/2 Users/7 Total)
Support
 * 1) The final one of my noms. Havac 05:26, 2 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Exhaustive and complete. :-P Cull Tremayne 05:22, 3 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) Good.  Chack Jadson  Talk 21:25, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) Thefourdotelipsis 00:10, 10 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 5) Bah! Tiin died first! Hobbes15 ( Tiger Headquarters ) 01:44, 19 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 6) Green Tentacle (Talk) 18:05, 20 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 7)  Greyman ( Paratus ) 16:48, 22 September 2007 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) A few things:
 * 2) * Punctuation: Em dashes are surrounded by spaces. Remove the spaces.
 * 3) * Quotes: Remove excessive links.
 * 4) * Powers and abilities: Provide a source for the statement regarding Windu's lightsaber skills.
 * 5) *Thank you. --Imperialles 13:40, 2 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 6) **First two already addressed, and the third should be within the source given -- the ROTS novel. Havac 18:05, 2 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 7) Incomplete interwiki links. -LtNOWIS 07:14, 8 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 8) *There's really nothing I can do about that. If you have knowledge of these missing interwiki links, please add them. Havac 17:12, 8 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 9) **Fixed. -LtNOWIS 02:18, 9 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 10) Couple of curious sentences and things.
 * 11) * ...revealed himself to Skywalker as Sidious himself. The Republic was ruled by a Sith Lord. Windu ordered Skywalker to... - I don't much care for that middle sentence.
 * 12) * Quinlan Vos had left a hologram of Fenn's death at his hands as a warning from Dooku; after viewing it, the four Jedi came to the conclusion that Vos's fall was a ruse no longer, but, among Dooku's Dark Acolytes, had become true. - This one just fails to work under any circumstance.
 * 13) * And there's a few distasteful moments of repetition, but I'm not going to get all riled up about them. Also, I'm pretty sure that "It doesn't hurt" is non-canon. Thefourdotelipsis 07:47, 9 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 14) **Addressed; see how you like the rewordings. And as there's nothing to explicitly noncanonize "It doesn't hurt," it should be able to stay. There's room for it to be mumbled as he collapses; just not for him to shout it. Havac 17:56, 9 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 15) ***Actually, I'm pretty sure it's canon. It says it in the ROTS novel; also, the audio transcript is analyzed after the duel and is almost certain it is what Kolar said. Hobbes15 ( Tiger Headquarters ) 01:30, 16 September 2007 (UTC)

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