Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Outer Rim Oreworks Market


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Outer Rim Oreworks Market

 * Nominated by:  Holocron Greatholocron.jpg (Complain) 12:27, January 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Just merged from Apatros General Store. The book gives the name as ORO Market, so that's the canon name. tags were used in the infobox, everything's sourced. Needs to be checked from grammatical errors I might have missed. Could somebody leave a message on my talk page telling me why you need to use  tags in the infobox?

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Support
 * 1) No objections here, but be careful of short, choppy sentences. I several instance of this in my copy-edit; take a look at what I did and try to avoid this in the future.  Master Jonathan  New Jedi Order.svg ( Jedi Council Chambers ) 04:56, January 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2)  Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 16:59, January 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Menkooroo 04:30, January 29, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) Darth Morrt 02:55, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * Can you give a timeframe somewhere in the article? That is, in what year the store was in operation?
 * Try to avoid using "this" to refer to an article's subject, even in the bts, unless it's an unidentified something. Even then, there are possibly better alternatives to "this." I fixed this one for ya, but keep it in mind. Menkooroo 12:09, January 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * Fixed.  Holocron Greatholocron.jpg (Complain) 14:55, January 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * As far as I know, the usage of "this" is acceptable in some cases, like when referring to something mentioned in the text. For example, I'd consider "...and decided to use the Marg Sabl maneuver. This strategy was successful..." completely fine. 1358  (Talk)  17:19, January 27, 2011 (UTC)

Comments
 * If this passes, it's the first CA for WP: NSW.  Holocron Greatholocron.jpg (Complain) 12:45, January 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * Damn. I do the infobox refs correctly and fail on the main articles refs instead. Fixed now.  Holocron Greatholocron.jpg (Complain) 03:08, January 26, 2011 (UTC)
 * Just a couple comments: First, to double-check: there are no applicable quotes? None of the characters mention the store in conversation? Also, remember that if an entire paragraph can be sourced to one source, then you only need to add that ref tag at the end of the paragrah; you don't need one halfway through and then another at the end. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 16:59, January 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * Ah, I thought that each tag was supposed to show where the information in that sentence came from, noted for the future. No, there aren't any quotes. All the information comes from Bane thinking about it, nobody actually goes into the store.  Holocron Greatholocron.jpg (Complain) 00:29, January 28, 2011 (UTC)