Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Larbo Nelik


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Larbo Nelik

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 12:56, December 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Another short break

(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1) -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 18:56, December 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  02:40, January 2, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 09:27, January 2, 2012 (UTC)
 * 4) ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 00:59, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Bob
 * 2) * Do we know she was a Podracer during the last decades of the Republic? If we don't, perhaps you should add "who lived during the last decades" instead?
 * 3) **Changed.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 17:08, December 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) * Podrace is coming up a redirect for me, so be sure to pick the correct target.
 * 5) **Better?  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 17:08, December 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) * Can you add a bit of context to BTS about how or why she came up in Wild Space? Otherwise, she seems completely unrelated to the book. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 15:58, December 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) **Contexted. Thanks for the review.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 17:08, December 28, 2011 (UTC)


 * 1) The_Cal_Jedi
 * 2) * "Nelik had a terrible crash" - "Terrible" sounds POV to me. Perhaps a less POV term is needed, or else just leaving that word out would be good.
 * 3) **From what POV is such a crash not terrible. No just a joke, replaced with "massive".  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 14:25, December 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Some people enjoy crashing. :P -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 18:56, December 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) *Otherwise, good work.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 05:09, December 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) **Thanks for the review.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 14:25, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

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