Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Radanthus Mandelatara


 * ''The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a comprehensive article nomination that was unsuccessful. Please do not modify it.

Radanthus Mandelatara

 * Nominated by: StarsiderSWG (talk) 16:51, August 13, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Not 100% sure if I should list Naboo as a homeworld or not.

(1 ECs/2 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) Assuming Exiled Jedi's satisfied. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 01:05, August 14, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) There are a lot of bugged quests in TOR as well.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  01:36, August 14, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) 501st  dogma ( talk ) 21:15, August 15, 2012 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * Please mention that he was in Moenia on the planet Naboo in the intro.
 * 3) * In the body, you need to mention that he lived during the time of the Galactic Civil War.
 * 4) * Please creatre an article for the Moenia hotel.
 * 5) * Please mention his beard in the P&T.
 * 6) * "In the game, Mandelatara served no particular purpose. Mandelatara would simply tell players who attempted to converse with him that he was distracted, and trying to remember something." Could you try and combine these two sentences?
 * 7) * Since he stays at the hotel, I don't think that you can say he resided on Naboo. He could have just been staying briefly at the hotel.
 * 8) *Nice seeing you on the CAN page, Starsider.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  17:13, August 13, 2012 (UTC)
 * 9) **Okay, those should all be addressed now. StarsiderSWG (talk) 22:17, August 13, 2012 (UTC)
 * 10) 501st
 * 11) * Context for the Galactic Civil war.
 * 12) * "He was also prone to forgetting things." I am not sure this can be said, as we don't know if his forgetfullness happens often. Could this be reworded?
 * 13) *Otherwise, looks fine. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 23:18, August 14, 2012 (UTC)
 * 14) **Alright. Re-worded things and added context. StarsiderSWG (talk) 14:45, August 15, 2012 (UTC)
 * 15) Heya!
 * 16) *298 words. It'll have to be brought to the GAN page. Want me to archive this nom, or do you want to take a whack at doing it? Menkooroo (talk) 03:13, August 16, 2012 (UTC)
 * 17) **Ha, is that so? Yeah lets go for it. I probably won't have much access to a computer the next few days, but when I get the chance, I can keep looking over the article. StarsiderSWG (talk) 18:44, August 16, 2012 (UTC)

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