Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations

 The featured articles of the wiki are articles that represent the best Wookieepedia has to offer. This is not a way to showcase the articles of your favorite characters, spaceships, or the like.


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So just what makes a featured article? Well, we've prepared a list just in case someone should ask that, and it is as follows.

An article must&hellip;


 * 1) &hellip;be well-written and detailed.
 * 2) &hellip;be unbiased, non-point of view.
 * 3) &hellip;be sourced with all available sources and appearances.
 * 4) &hellip;follow the Manual of Style, Layout Guide, and all other policies on Wookieepedia.
 * 5) &hellip;not be the object of any ongoing edit wars.
 * 6) &hellip;not be tagged with any sort of improvement tags (i.e. more sources, expand, etc).
 * 7) &hellip;have a proper lead that gives a good summary of the topic and can be used for the front page featured box.
 * 8) &hellip;have no more than 3 redlinks.
 * 9) &hellip;have significant information from all sources and appearances, especially a biography for character articles.
 * 10) &hellip;not have been previously featured on the Main Page. Otherwise, it can only be restored to featured status.
 * 11) &hellip;be completely referenced for all available material and sources. See Sourcing for more information.
 * 12) &hellip;have all quotes and images sourced.
 * 13) &hellip;provide at least one quote on the article; a leading quote at the beginning is required. Only one quote would be allowed at the beginning of each section at max, although quotes may be placed in the middle of the article.
 * 14) &hellip;include a "personality and traits" section on all character articles.
 * 15) &hellip;include a reasonable number of images of good quality if said images are available.
 * 16) &hellip;pass review by the Inquisitorius review panel.
 * 17) &hellip;counting the introduction and Behind the Scenes material, be at least 1000 words long (not including captions, quotes, or headers, etc).

For more information on what makes a featured article, see What is a featured article?

How to nominate:


 * 1) First, nominate an article you find is worthy of featured status, putting it at the bottom of the list below; see criteria above. Note that a previously featured article cannot be featured on the Main Page again; however, it can be restored to featured status.
 * 2) Others will object to the nomination if they disagree that the article is good enough; they will then supply reasons for doing so, and ways to improve the article (errors, style, organization, images, notability, sources).
 * 3) Supporters adjust the article until the objectors (with reasonable objections) are satisfied.
 * 4) The article is placed on the featured article list and added to the front page queue.
 * 5) Also, if, at least a week after the article's nomination, that article has 5 supports and no objections (or the objections have been stricken or overridden), it will be added to the queue, and will be officially known as a "featured article".

How to vote:


 * 1) Before doing anything, be sure to read the article completely, keeping a sharp eye out for mistakes.
 * 2) Afterwards, compare the article to the criteria listed above, and then either support or object the article's nomination.
 * 3) If you object, please supply concrete reasons for doing so, and how it can be improved. Please cite which rule your objection falls under! Failure to do so will result in your objection being considered invalid.
 * 4) As stated above, any objections will be looked upon by the nominator, supporters, and anyone willing to improve the article, and action will be taken to please the objectors.
 * 5) Once all objectors' complaints have been solved (or the article has 5 supports and no objections after at least a week), the article will be added to the queue and be officially known as a "featured article".

Also remember to add nominated at the top of the article you are nominating.

Every Sunday the next article in the queue will be highlighted on the Main Page as featured, marked with the featured template and removed from the list of nominations. The beginning of the article then appears on the Main Page via the featured article template. Nominees that are inactive for a month will be eliminated from the nominations list.

(0 Inqs/3 Users/3 total)
Support Oppose Comments
 * 1) Darthchristian   ( Hey! ) 10:11, 7 April 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Themelle444 18:22, 7 April 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) Kylekatarn 09:30, 27 May 2007 (UTC)
 * It's an easy fix, but POVity POV POV POV. .  .  .  .  21:07, 7 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Where?-- Darthchristian  ( Hey! ) 22:21, 7 April 2007 (UTC)
 * "Overconfident", "Deadly", "Swift", "Devious"... .  .  .  .  22:32, 7 April 2007 (UTC)
 * I was able to address the ones you listed above, except for overconfidence. From both sides, it was clearly obvious that she was overconfident. I made it sound more neutral, and it was the best I could do. -- Darthchristian  ( Hey! ) 3:34, 8 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Mmkay, I've made some changes, but the prose is in need of a lot of work. A lot of sharp, short sentences that don't flow well. .  .  .  .  03:59, 8 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Looks better now. I'll work on the sentences.-- Darthchristian  ( Hey! ) 4:11, 8 April 2007 (UTC)
 * The sentences are longer and I made sure they flowed better. Is it better now?-- Darthchristian  ( Hey! ) 4:36, 8 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Enough for me to strike my opposition. .  .  .  .  00:56, 9 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Remove the bullets in the BtS, thanks. QuentinGeorge 08:41, 11 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Fixed.-- Darthchristian  ( Hey! ) 15:12, 13 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Present tense needs corrected. Atarumaster88  21:20, 21 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Get rid of the ref tags in the intro. The source given for "Originally an Empire Youth under Lord Hethrir" is Jedi Outcast which I'm pretty sure is wrong. Speculating about her being from Dathomir in BTS is fine, but I'd like to see it removed from the infobox. Green Tentacle (Talk) 09:46, 28 June 2007 (UTC)
 * Fixed --Eyrezer 09:52, 28 June 2007 (UTC)
 * Needs a general copyedit. Atarumaster88  21:21, 21 April 2007 (UTC)
 * REQUEST: This nom is inactive and should be removed by the Inquisitorius. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 18:32, 27 June 2007 (UTC)
 * Eyrezer just made it active again by fixing one of the objections...  - breathesgelatin Talk 22:38, 8 July 2007 (UTC)

(4 Inqs/13 Users/17 total)
Support Oppose Well, that's basically my critique at this late hour. Hobbes15 ( Tiger Headquarters ) 06:23, 28 June 2007 (UTC)
 * 1) Darthchristian   ( Hey! ) 17:49, 15 April 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Jango Fett107 16:56, 16 April 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) Yeah, I can see it Enochf 23:07, 17 April 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) (In Tem's accent) Looks good to me. Adamwankenobi 03:35, 20 April 2007 (UTC)
 * 5) yeah man! General Mandofett  Wrist Holoprojector[[Image:Mandskull.jpg|20px]] 11:53, 21 April 2007 (UTC)
 * 6) Good to see a major character nom.  Atarumaster88  21:49, 21 April 2007 (UTC)
 * 7) Good article! DARTH SIDIOUS2 18:34, 22 April 2007 (UTC)
 * 8)  Stake black   msg 16:53, 30 April 2007 (UTC)
 * 9) DWolf2k2 16:38, 4 May 2007 (UTC)
 * 10) (nods) Thefourdotelipsis 23:41, 12 May 2007 (UTC)
 * 11) Humbone 13:43, 25 May 2007 (UTC)
 * 12) It's got my vote. Ccneyo 02:33, 26 May 2007 (UTC)
 * 13)  Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 14:31, 8 June 2007 (UTC)
 * 14) Peter5158 21:08, 10 June 2007 (UTC) he has my vote cause he's cool
 * 15) *Shouldn't this be overruled? Hobbes15 ( Tiger Headquarters ) 06:47, 26 June 2007 (UTC)
 * 16) Always good to have a Mando get the recognition he deserves Ryan Fett 4:18, 26 June 2007
 * 17)   Gonk  ( Gonk! ) 00:08, 8 July 2007 (UTC)
 * 18) Looks good to me  &pi;=3 [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] (Click Here To Talk) 13:37, 8 July 2007 (UTC)
 * 19)  Greyman ( Paratus ) 00:35, 10 July 2007 (UTC)
 * 20) Now that Rozatta is finally mentioned before her death occurs. Hobbes15 ( Tiger Headquarters ) 20:04, 10 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Jediknight19bby 21:56, 7 June 2007 (UTC)
 * Unsourced quote. Green Tentacle (Talk) 21:35, 15 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Fixed. -- Darthchristian  ( Hey! ) 12:13, 16 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Quotes in prose, and a few unsourced statements in the BtS, but otherwise, fine. .  .  .  .  22:49, 15 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Fixed. --Jango Fett107 14:54, 28 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Severely lacking in detail to the point where, unless you've read the sources, it's almost impossible to understand what actually happened. Havac 19:11, 22 April 2007 (UTC)
 * I want more sources for the "Weapons" section. -- Imp http://images.wikia.com/starwars/images/e/e5/ATATatarismall.png 06:40, 24 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Fixed. -- Darthchristian  ( Hey! ) 14:14, 25 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Breaks Rule 9; I recall that Jango appears in some Tales stories and those aren't mentioned in the article. Atarumaster88  01:51, 29 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Which ones? -- Darthchristian  ( Hey! ) 18:36, 29 April 2007 (UTC)
 * I know for sure there's a story in volume 6 and a non-canon in vol. 5. Atarumaster88  20:43, 29 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Fett Club is the non-canon. Atarumaster88 16:49, 4 May 2007 (UTC)
 * Fixed. Jango Fett107 18:04, 3 June 2007 (UTC)
 * There's nothing on the Star Wars Adventures Books, and if there is, it's not cited Rules 3 & 9. Cull Tremayne 03:16, 17 May 2007 (UTC)
 * Fixed. --Jango Fett107 18:04, 3 June 2007 (UTC)
 * .In the introduction, the fact that Jango destroyed the Death Watch could be mentioned. It jumps straight from the Mandalorian Civil War to Jango's bounty hunting days, without even mentioning his prison time or the Death Watch's destruction.
 * Fixed. Darthchristian   ( Hey! ) 13:05, 3 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Rozatta is never mentioned at all in the article before it jumps straight to her death. She, and her affiliation with Jango, need to be mentioned before her death.
 * Okay, there's some mention now. Could be more detailed, but I can't be too picky, I suppose. Hobbes15 ( Tiger Headquarters ) 20:04, 10 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Mention the fact that the Infant of Shaa was created on Seylott, so it can be understood why Jango returned it there for safekeeping. Otherwise, it just seems to be a random location.
 * Fixed it. Hobbes15 ( Tiger Headquarters ) 15:55, 11 July 2007 (UTC)
 * In the non-canon information from Tales 1-20, it is not clear whether Boba or Jango killed Larbo.
 * Not really necessary, just me being picky. Hobbes15 ( Tiger Headquarters ) 04:30, 10 July 2007 (UTC)
 * I haven't read The Warlords of Balmorra, but if possible, a little information about how Jango and Aurra Sing captured the three bounties should be added.
 * Not all that necessary either, but it would be better with a bit of detail. Hobbes15 ( Tiger Headquarters ) 04:30, 10 July 2007 (UTC)
 * There is no proof that Mace Windu used the force to move silently to sneak up on Jango and Dooku; if there is, source it.
 * I just deleted the line. I couldn't find the source for it anywhere. Darthchristian   ( Hey! ) 13:06, 3 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Possibly move the Darth Traya quote above the paragraph describing Jango's death. That's just a suggestion, since I think it would look better.
 * Done. Darthchristian   ( Hey! ) 13:07, 3 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Possibly add an image of Jaster's Legacy.
 * Can't. There isn't any room for it.  Darthchristian   ( Hey! ) 13:08, 3 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Okay, that doesn't really matter. Just an idea. Hobbes15 ( Tiger Headquarters ) 17:32, 3 July 2007 (UTC)

Comments
 * Striked my objection, but I still agree with Havac. The level of detail is so low, that if I had never seen or read the books, my perception of the character would be severely lacking. Cull Tremayne 06:18, 18 June 2007 (UTC)
 * As Cull says, the detail could use quite a bit of work. Hobbes15 ( Tiger Headquarters ) 04:33, 30 June 2007 (UTC)
 * Overall, it now looks fixed up enough to be a FA, but I really do think the Rozatta thing has to be fixed, otherwise it throws a huge wrench in the flow of the article. I'll vote for it once that's fixed. Hobbes15 ( Tiger Headquarters ) 04:30, 10 July 2007 (UTC)

(5 Inqs/9 Users/14 total)
Support
 * 1) QuentinGeorge 11:17, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Kuralyov 13:47, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
 * 3)  StarNeptune Talk to me! 16:04, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) &mdash;Grand Admiral J. Nebulax (Imperial Holovision) [[Image:Imperial Emblem.png|20px]] 21:57, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
 * 5) JMAS 22:16, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
 * 6)  Greyman ( Paratus ) 01:17, 17 May 2007 (UTC)
 * 7) Adamwankenobi 23:57, 17 May 2007 (UTC)
 * 8) Yeah.-Darthtyler
 * 9)  Jaina Solo ( Talk ) [[Image:Jainasolosig.gif |25px]] 14:22, 28 May 2007 (UTC)
 * 10) great article AdmirableAckbar 14:37, 8 June 2007 (UTC)
 * 11) -- Eyrezer 06:21, 11 June 2007 (UTC)
 * 12) Hobbes15 ( Tiger Headquarters ) 18:10, 3 July 2007 (UTC)
 * 13) Graestan 17:36, 8 July 2007 (UTC)
 * 14) Green Tentacle (Talk) 21:33, 11 July 2007 (UTC)
 * 1) Green Tentacle (Talk) 21:33, 11 July 2007 (UTC)

Oppose
 * Expand intro, section the Clone Wars...section, and I cock my eyebrow, sah, at the sectioning of the BtS. Thefourdotelipsis 11:33, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
 * Intro and sectioning done. Can't see what's wrong the BtS. It looks crap as a bullet or one massive chunky paragraph. QuentinGeorge 11:44, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
 * Ditch the portrayal subsection. And expand...something. Note that he's the only EU -based character to be in Clone Wars. Previously established. You know what I mean. Thefourdotelipsis 12:09, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
 * Aayla was in the Clone Wars as well. But done, anyway. QuentinGeorge 12:10, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
 * Too cursory in its coverage. It could use a lot of fleshing out. Also, we know that there will be a flood of information on K'Kruhk between now and its actually being featured, so it might be best to hold off anyway. Havac 18:05, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
 * Tell me where it needs to be expanded, and I'll expand it. The fact he is going to make more appearances isn't an objection as we featured Darth Bane shortly before the release of Path of Destruction. QuentinGeorge 21:04, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
 * Havac, look at the queue. Even approving this today would mean, at earliest, it doesn't appear on the front page until April 2008. Plenty of time for his Legacy and Dark Times appearances to be fully integrated in before he shows up on the front page. QuentinGeorge 21:28, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
 * Oh, I'm not objecting on those grounds. Just suggesting that holding off a bit could improve it. But anway, all the Republic stuff, bar Seleucamai, reads like a very breezy overview -- he went here and fought there and this person died, but there's no feel of what happened. Take, for example, the Vos/Viento thing. It says he was assigned to protect Viento, Vos assassinated Viento, he got hurt. It's lacking in substance. Mention the fact that Vos sneaked past him at night. Mention that he caught Quin just too late. Mention that they went over the balcony in the fight and K'Kruhk bounced off an airspeeder and was lucky to survive. As is, it covers everything, but not to the comprehensive level expected of a featured article. Also, looking again, it could use a powers and talents section -- his healing skill could be mentioned there. And I'm also objecting on grounds of image quality now -- putting the Clone Wars crap as his main pic over one of Jan's far more realistic and detailed drawings is a clear mistake. If you want a headshot, find a Jan headshot or crop a Jan full-body shot down. Havac 21:44, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
 * Well, I disagree that his animated depiction is "crap", but will replace with a comic headshot if that is what people want. I was mainly trying to put a bit of variety in, since I'd used all comic depictions in the biography. QuentinGeorge 21:54, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
 * As I side note, some of the detail requirements for these bios seem faintly ridiculous in that we have to chronicle every single step someone takes but, if those are the rules, then those are the rules and I will comply. QuentinGeorge 21:54, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
 * The image from the cartoon doesn't do the article much good. It should be replaced with a shot from one of the comics (perhaps the Dark Times one?). &mdash;Grand Admiral J. Nebulax (Imperial Holovision) [[Image:Imperial Emblem.png|20px]] 21:57, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
 * Jack, I've already said I'm going to replace the image and your antics on the Muun page don't exactly inspire confidence in your ability to spot a good one. QuentinGeorge 22:11, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
 * Additionally, I'd rather you didn't do a "cleanup" of the article when I'm trying to expand the damn thing. 22:14, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
 * Why are you lashing out at me? I give my opinion on the main image and then try to clean up the article, and then you scold me as if I did something wrong. What's your problem? &mdash;Grand Admiral J. Nebulax (Imperial Holovision) [[Image:Imperial Emblem.png|20px]] 22:16, 10 May 2007 (UTC)

'''Objection overridden by Inquisitorius - Inq/K'Kruhk 05:12, 1 June 2007 (UTC) '''Objection overridden by Inquisitorius - Inq/K'Kruhk 05:12, 1 June 2007 (UTC)
 * Karohalva I oppose this article on the grounds that using a Clone Wars Cartoon picture in the info-box is a crime against Star Wars. It sounds silly, yes, but it is true.
 * Please read what I have written above. I am going to replace it, as soon as I find a suitable headshot. QuentinGeorge 22:03, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
 * Oops. Sorry then. What say you just crop a full-body shot? That should be Wookieepedian-legal. Karohalva
 * I have to agree with Jack about the CW image for the infobox. I don't think it's crap, but I don't think it's the kind of image we want for an infobox unless there is no other option, such as with the Voolvif Monn and Foul Moudama articles. I went ahead and cropped the Siege of Saleucami image to just his headshot and put that up in the infobox. Does that meet everyone's approval? - JMAS 22:22, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
 * Eh, I said it's "crap" because a) I don't like the CW animation style and b) it's far less detailed and realistic than the comics pictures. It certainly deserves to be in the article, but it's not nearly a good enough depiction to be his main shot when better alternatives exist. It would be like using this as the infobox shot for Jerec. Or basically, what JMAS just edit-conflicted with me to say. Havac 22:25, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
 * I think this new image is much better. And Quentin, don't lash out at me again. &mdash;Grand Admiral J. Nebulax (Imperial Holovision) [[Image:Imperial Emblem.png|20px]] 22:26, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
 * Oh, please. Don't be so melodramatic. 22:28, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
 * Ok, I don't really mind what image is used, and I'm happy to go with that one. I'm at work now, so I'll do a "Talents and Powers" section when I get home. If anyone else has more they'd like added, please tell me. In terms of images, I think its probably ok how it is now. Less is more. QuentinGeorge 22:28, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
 * Melodramatic? I'm not the one who lashed out at another user just because they suggested a new main image and tried to clean up an article. &mdash;Grand Admiral J. Nebulax (Imperial Holovision) [[Image:Imperial Emblem.png|20px]] 22:32, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
 * This page is not designed for user arguments. Cool it please. Atarumaster88  00:37, 11 May 2007 (UTC)
 * Back on topic, I have (once again) cleaned up the article. &mdash;Grand Admiral J. Nebulax (Imperial Holovision) [[Image:Imperial Emblem.png|20px]] 00:42, 11 May 2007 (UTC)


 * I've significantly changed the article, added more, added a abilities section, etc. Any more objections? 07:33, 11 May 2007 (UTC)


 * Can people please strike objections that have been satisfied? Please? - QuentinGeorge 03:19, 1 June 2007 (UTC)
 * K'Kruhk remembered this and used the concept to help the Jedi evade pursuing Yinchorri starfighters. Can this be expanded? How did K'Kruhk do this?
 * found himself fighting for his life on Yibikkoror. Were they ambushed or what?
 * After their escape. How did they escape?
 * It was in this mission that his Master was killed, battling for her life on Yinchorr. More detail please. --Eyrezer 05:23, 1 June 2007 (UTC)
 * Addressed. QuentinGeorge 05:57, 3 June 2007 (UTC)
 * Can we get some more info on the mission to Teyr. Why were the losses so high? K'Kruhk's fault? outnumbered? Or is it only mentioned in passing?
 * Only mentioned in one comic frame, yet I've expanded it to the best of my ability. QuentinGeorge 10:14, 4 June 2007 (UTC)
 * Nice extrapolation. --Eyrezer 23:45, 4 June 2007 (UTC)
 * The last point I have, can the paragraph introducing the purge survival be made to flow more from the previous paragraph? --Eyrezer 03:27, 4 June 2007 (UTC)
 * How's that? QuentinGeorge 10:14, 4 June 2007 (UTC)
 * Resolved --Eyrezer 06:21, 11 June 2007 (UTC)
 * Nasty little [source?] tag in the powers and abilities section needs to go. Green Tentacle (Talk) 10:33, 2 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Solid article, overall. Fix that unsourced statement in Powers section and I'd be glad to give my support. &mdash;Mir  len 

Comments Other than that, however, the article looks great. Hobbes15 ( Tiger Headquarters ) 18:10, 3 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Aware that it may be short. Would be willing to listen to expansion suggestions. QuentinGeorge 11:17, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
 * Here are a couple suggestions that might be good. But overall, great article.
 * More on Giiett's "trick," and what caused K'Kruhk to remember it.
 * Name the other Jedi who finished K'Kruhk's training, if possible. If he or she's identity is never revealed, than ignore this.
 * Mention that Tholme did not, in fact die. It makes no sense for Aalya Secura to remember him as one of those who died, and then for him to assist the Republic's victory.
 * One unsourced statement in Powers and Traits.
 * Right, gimme a bit to address those. Might take a while, since I've been a bit lazy with RL lately. QuentinGeorge 05:30, 7 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Ok, I've taken care of all of that except for the dang whiphid hibernation thing. Now, can anyone find me Randy Stradley's original post? I can find many referencing it, but not the original. QuentinGeorge 21:04, 9 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Sourced that last thing about the hibernation trance Anything else, people? QuentinGeorge 21:18, 11 July 2007 (UTC)

(5 Inqs/2 Users/7 total)
Support
 * 1) Granted, the text hasn't been expanded very much since being declared good, but it's now fully sourced and illustrated. &mdash;Silly Dan (talk) 02:32, 3 June 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) jSarek 05:00, 6 June 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) Green Tentacle (Talk) 19:31, 24 June 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) Looks good.  Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 19:37, 24 June 2007 (UTC)
 * 5) S'good.  Darth Culator  (Talk) 19:50, 24 June 2007 (UTC)
 * 6) Lord Hydronium 10:28, 27 June 2007 (UTC)
 * 7)  Greyman ( Paratus ) 16:28, 7 July 2007 (UTC)

Oppose
 * #Sorry, but as much as it sucks to lose something good for something mediocre, we really should have an in-universe lead quote. :-( jSarek 03:03, 5 June 2007 (UTC)


 * Unsourced image. Green Tentacle (Talk) 15:17, 12 June 2007 (UTC)
 * As it depicts a character only seen in Star Wars Legacy 1: Broken, Part 1, I presume that's the source. Thanks for checking! &mdash;Silly Dan (talk) 03:13, 13 June 2007 (UTC)
 * Nice article but those two [source?] tags in the history section have to go before it can be an FA. Green Tentacle (Talk) 09:36, 15 June 2007 (UTC)
 * See comments. One is probably from Jedi: Count Dooku, the others are probably from Solo Command, Agents of Chaos II: Jedi Eclipse and/or The Unifying Force. Some of you must have those books! &mdash;Silly Dan (talk) 23:52, 16 June 2007 (UTC)
 * OK, sorted, I think. &mdash;Silly Dan (talk) 18:29, 17 June 2007 (UTC)
 * Rather than a list of notable Gotal, can that be changed into paragraph form and placed within the Gotals in the Galaxy section.
 * Also the intro has lots of info that should be in the biology section, such as hair color etc. The intro could also do with some expansion. --Eyrezer 02:16, 17 June 2007 (UTC)

Comments
 * There are still two citations needed in the history section, but I suspect they're easy to fix. The bit about Confederate conquest and the resulting poverty is probably from Jedi: Count Dooku, and the novels in Tolokai and Ta'laam Ranth's appearances sections should have the "joined the New Republic and Galactic Alliance" information somewhere. Some of the motivation for this nomination is to get the Inquisition to track down that info for me.  8) &mdash;Silly Dan (talk) 02:32, 3 June 2007 (UTC)
 * Tolokai appears in the opening parts of Solo Command, I'm almost positive. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 14:04, 4 June 2007 (UTC)
 * Yes, but does it mention that his people are now part of the NR? That's the point I'm trying to cite. &mdash;Silly Dan (talk) 00:06, 5 June 2007 (UTC)
 * Come on, there has to be some quotes. -- Darthchristian  ( Hey! ) 14:43, 3 June 2007 (UTC)
 * Unfortunately, all the quotes I've been able to find in my sources are somewhat dry descriptions in reference books and RPG supplements, or somewhat OOU narration in novels and short stories. I added a quote from narration anyway: after all, we do use a bit of limited omniscent narration on the Dooku article in order to quote his final thoughts, so it's not without precedent.  &mdash;Silly Dan (talk) 00:06, 5 June 2007 (UTC)
 * Yes, but actual article content is different from quotes. jSarek 03:03, 5 June 2007 (UTC)
 * Replaced it with a less interesting but wholly IU quote. &mdash;Silly Dan (talk) 03:13, 5 June 2007 (UTC)
 * I'm sorry we have to take a less-than-ideal IU quote. You're right that the reference book descriptions are rather dry.  I have a few alternative suggestions, which I'll put on Talk:Gotal. jSarek 05:00, 6 June 2007 (UTC)

(0 Inqs/3 Users/3 total)
Support


 * 1) Jediknight19bby 00:24, 25 June 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) --Darthtyler (talk) (HSM RKY) 00:47, 25 June 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) Unit 8311 07:17, 25 June 2007 (UTC)

Oppose
 * Rule 2: POV ("did a fine job"), Rule 1: Not well-written (needs cleanup- "emporor", "thusly" etc.), Rule 7: Needs longer intro, Rule 4: Remove sourcing from intro per Sourcing, Rule 11: Source article completely, especially part about 17 BBY, Rule 1 and 9: Not very detailed. This could easily be longer- no info on shield generator on the mooon and only a small paragraph on the Battle of Endor section. It could easily be longer and more detailed. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 13:34, 25 June 2007 (UTC)
 * Definitely needs a longer intro, which should probably mention the IG-88 sillyness. -- Ozzel 01:10, 26 June 2007 (UTC)
 * Intro should be longer. Battle of Endor section and how the Death Star II related to the GCW should be expanded. Chack Jadson 01:13, 26 June 2007 (UTC)

Comments
 * How could you want it detailed more? Some parts are almost too detailed. The longer intro and removing the sourcing from the intro is complete. I'll work on sourcing it soon. Jediknight19bby 14:47, 25 June 2007 (UTC)
 * You must not have seen some of my pet Featured Article projects. Only 1320 actual words of prose for such a major topic is severely lacking. I like detail. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 15:12, 25 June 2007 (UTC)

(0 Inqs/1 Users/1 total)
Support
 * 1) Jediknight19bby 00:13, 30 June 2007 (UTC)

Oppose
 * Could we get a "Romances" section? Chack Jadson 00:25, 30 June 2007 (UTC)
 * There already is one, but sourcing errors meant it didn't show up. QuentinGeorge 01:07, 30 June 2007 (UTC)
 * I haven't really taken a full look at it, but the Shira Brie romance could use a lot more detail, mentioning her transformation into Lumiya and her subsequent relations with Luke. Hobbes15 ( Tiger Headquarters ) 04:40, 30 June 2007 (UTC)
 * IMHO, needs major cleanup Needs to be fully sourced, there is disputed statements and original research, and a few images aren't showing up. QuentinGeorge 01:07, 30 June 2007 (UTC)
 * Coverage of stories between ANH and ESB severely lacking. -- Ozzel 01:15, 30 June 2007 (UTC)
 * HECK NO!!!!!! If you look at the archive, I tried to nom this six months ago. It failed miserably, because the article isn't ready. And it won't be, for quite some time. Almost everything needs expansion. I kid you not. Almost everything needs cleanup. It's not fully referenced. It's incomplete. No offense, but until someone puts the kind of effort into Wormie that Erik did to Palpatine, this article and Anakin Skywalker should be immediately stricken from the FAN page. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 06:13, 30 June 2007 (UTC)
 * I would like this to be FA, but not in the state it's in right now. Unit 8311 16:48, 4 July 2007 (UTC)

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 * 1) Nominated. Jediknight19bby 17:54, 2 July 2007 (UTC)

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 * 1) Bringbacknom!   20:08 2 July 2007 (UTC)

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 * Could use some expansion, and there are way too many quotes. Better sectioning is also needed. Darthchristian   ( Hey! ) 13:17, 3 July 2007 (UTC)
 * The number of quotes is simply insane. Hobbes15 ( Tiger Headquarters ) 19:46, 10 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Per Darthchristian. Chack Jadson 19:52, 10 July 2007 (UTC)

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 * 1)  - breathesgelatin Talk 00:03, 3 July 2007 (UTC)
 * 2)  Greyman ( Paratus ) 04:48, 3 July 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) Jediknight19bby 14:17, 3 July 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) Mir  len  16:28, 3 July 2007 (UTC)
 * 5) Great article. Darthchristian   ( Hey! ) 18:13, 5 July 2007 (UTC)
 * 6) Chack Jadson 00:03, 6 July 2007 (UTC)
 * 7) (copied from old Inq page) It's just now getting nommed?  —Xwing328(Talk) 18:24, 6 July 2007 (UTC)
 * 8) Ozzel 04:38, 10 July 2007 (UTC)

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 * I'd like just a bit more detail from X-wing: Mandatory Retirement. IIRC, Winter doesn't just help plan the assault and extraction- she participates in it. I could be wrong, though. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 13:33, 3 July 2007 (UTC)
 * I'll talk to Xwing328 about this. First, I don't have that comic (I'm waiting for Omnibus 3 to arrive, which it hasn't yet, from Amazon), and second, I'm in France and away from my comics. I'll contact Xwing because he wrote the original text and see if he's willing to help out.  - breathesgelatin Talk 11:32, 8 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Hey! I just responded and will try to help out tonight, but I don't know how much more time I will have. *EDIT* That is, unless Ataru already did what he wanted. —Xwing328 (Talk) 03:34, 11 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Only had a quick glance but Image:Tychowinter6.jpg isn't sourced and can we lose the bullets in BtS? Green Tentacle (Talk) 11:13, 10 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Sourced the pic and fixed the Bts. —Xwing328 (Talk) 03:34, 11 July 2007 (UTC)

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 * I have worked on this extensively with the assistance of a few other users. It is sourced and contains every reference to Winter that I know of, although I have not finished Sacrifice to see if she is mentioned in there.  - breathesgelatin Talk 00:03, 3 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Looks good, Breathes. Nice job.  Greyman ( Paratus ) 04:48, 3 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Nice article. I'd like to see a bit more inline citations in the Personality and traits section, but that's just a personal preference. &mdash;Mir  len  16:28, 3 July 2007 (UTC)

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 * 1) Nominated.  Greyman ( Paratus ) 05:16, 7 July 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Looks good so far.--Goodwood 01:29, 9 July 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) Green Tentacle (Talk) 14:47, 11 July 2007 (UTC)

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 * Her motivation for wanting to establish a Jedi academy on her homeworld is covered in more detail in the intro than the biography.
 * Learning to ride a war beast is only mentioned in the intro.
 * "Master Vodo recognized the troubles that his young apprentice was going through, and decided to spend time with Shoaneb and show her that she could not worry about the future, but that she could only trust in the Force. After several private sessions with Master Vodo, Shoaneb began to understand what he was telling her—that she could not worry about the future, and that her expectations for her homeworld were just that." Any chance of rewording that so as not to repeat "she could not worry about the future"?
 * Last sentence of The First Sith War is essentially repeated in Battle of Kemplex IX. Green Tentacle (Talk) 09:56, 11 July 2007 (UTC)
 * I expanded the paragraph about her wanting to establish a Jedi academy on her home, fleshing it out a bit. Added the bit about her learning to ride the war beasts in the article and the P&T (which I originally meant to do :P). I reworded the sentence you mentioned about "the future". And I removed the sentence/info that was repeated in the Battle of Kemplex IX.  Greyman ( Paratus ) 14:36, 11 July 2007 (UTC)

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 * I dedicate this FA nom to Cull, because of this :-P, heh. Greyman ( Paratus ) 05:16, 7 July 2007 (UTC)

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 * 1) Green Tentacle (Talk) 14:19, 7 July 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Excellent. Adamwankenobi 19:48, 8 July 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) Goodbye not good, but this article is. -- Ozzel 21:42, 8 July 2007 (UTC)
 * 4)  Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 15:19, 9 July 2007 (UTC)
 * 5)  Greyman ( Paratus ) 22:53, 10 July 2007 (UTC)
 * I hate to object, but the images are in an incorrect aspect ratio. -- Ozzel 19:39, 7 July 2007 (UTC)
 * They're at PAL resolution (720x576) which is what my region 2 disc plays at. I can resize them to 720x480 if you insist but they look all squished. Green Tentacle (Talk) 16:27, 8 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Resized to 720x540. Green Tentacle (Talk) 21:11, 8 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Looks fine now. -- Ozzel 21:42, 8 July 2007 (UTC)

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Support Object Comments
 * 1)  StarNeptune Talk to me! 19:19, 7 July 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Darthchristian   ( Hey! ) 12:00, 9 July 2007 (UTC)
 * 3)  - breathesgelatin Talk 19:22, 9 July 2007 (UTC)
 * 4)  Gonk  ( Gonk! ) 12:59, 10 July 2007 (UTC)
 * It will definitely have my vote if the Yuuzhan War section could be a little more fleshed out. As it's written now, it's unclear why Jaina Solo was a contender for the throne... Could just use a sentence of exposition here and there in that section.  - breathesgelatin Talk 22:53, 8 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Fixed it up a bit, added why Jaina was a contender for the throne. Darthchristian   ( Hey! ) 12:01, 9 July 2007 (UTC)
 * No lead quote. Green Tentacle (Talk) 11:21, 10 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Remedied.  Gonk  ( Gonk! ) 12:59, 10 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Just being picky, but can we change the lead quote to something that describes her more, maybe a quote thats in the article already? Darthchristian   ( Hey! ) 21:02, 10 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Perhaps the opening quote from "The Yuuzhan Vong War?" Hobbes15 ( Tiger Headquarters ) 21:05, 10 July 2007 (UTC)
 * I was kinda thinking the one near the end of the Hapes/Dathomir Incident. Darthchristian   ( Hey! ) 21:11, 10 July 2007 (UTC)
 * That does look better. Maybe just the first line, though. But it is better than the current opening quote, even with all those extra lines. Hobbes15 ( Tiger Headquarters ) 15:02, 11 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Yea, lets change it to that. Darthchristian   ( Hey! ) 18:35, 11 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Was it ever proven that Ta'a Chume arranged for the Ni'korish to assasinate Teneniel? I just finished Dark Journey, and although I know she was suspected, I'm not sure if it was ever proven. Anyone have a text sample of that? Hobbes15 ( Tiger Headquarters ) 19:09, 11 July 2007 (UTC)
 * From the Isolder entry of the NEGTC: "The Yuuzhan Vong attacked against a backdrop of Hapan intrigue. Ta'a Chume plotted to have Jaina Solo marry her son and become the next Queen Mother. To further her plan, she arranged for Teneniel Djo's death." Also, I think it was stated in the second Dark Nest novel that Teneniel's death was the reason why Ta'a Chume was under house arrest.  StarNeptune Talk to me! 19:50, 11 July 2007 (UTC)
 * I updated a fews things, sourced it and added a p & t.  StarNeptune Talk to me! 19:19, 7 July 2007 (UTC)

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Support
 * 1) Nominated. This article was stripped of its FA status a while ago. Chack Jadson 21:00, 11 July 2007 (UTC)

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