Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Unidentified Alderaanian stormtrooper


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Unidentified Alderaanian stormtrooper

 * Nominated by: Cull Tremayne 05:59, 17 December 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Stradley does know what he's doing sometimes.

(5 Inqs/0 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1) Pre-nom reviewed Toprawa and Ralltiir 06:35, 17 December 2008 (UTC)
 * 2)  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  12:41, 11 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) Another case of "Topics that Wookieepedia has made far more interesting than they previously were."  Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 06:30, 16 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) As soon as this passes, LFL will come up with a name just so we don't have an unidentified FA. ;) &mdash;  Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 17:25, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) Wookieepedia win, CUSWE and CSWE fail. --  Darth Culator  (Talk) 18:53, 19 January 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) From the desk of Atarumaster88
 * 2) * I can't believe I'm reading this, but here goes. Could you make the bolded title reflect the article's title more? Maybe something along the lines of "This stormtrooper from Alderaan.
 * 3) **Looks weird now with two links in the bolded title, but fixed.
 * 4) * " However, his detachment from the world kept him from taking any drastic measures" Is he referring to emotional detachment or a detachment of soldiers?
 * 5) **Added "emotional" to clarify.
 * 6) * "the two were unaware of the approaching native predators, the Rolk-mangir" How many of these creatures are there? This implies more than one, but that seems to contradict other parts of the article.
 * 7) **They were only directly attacked by one Rolk-mangir, but at least two ended up sneaking up on the two of them. Added a little clarification.
 * 8) * I know it's almost idiotic to ask this, but please contextify Calrissian and Skywalker. At least establish them as the Falcon ' s crew.
 * 9) **Done.
 * 10) *Marvelicious. If you keep this up, this guy will be named in the Newest, Bestest, Fattest, Most Updated Star Wars Encyclopedia. Have a Super Terrific Friendly Un-frustrating day. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 20:06, 15 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 11) **Thanks for the review. Cull Tremayne 06:02, 16 January 2009 (UTC)

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