Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations



This page is for the nomination of "comprehensive articles". For a list of "comprehensive articles", see Category:Wookieepedia comprehensive articles.


 * Comprehensive article nominations history
 * Comprehensive article nominations archiving checklist

What is a "comprehensive article?"

A "comprehensive article" is an article that contains all information regarding the topic. Often, "comprehensive articles" cannot reach Featured or Good Article status due to their limited content. This process is intended to recognize articles that contain all relevant canon information, yet are still under the 250 word limit required for a Good Article. The purpose of this is twofold&mdash;firstly, to help users distinguish what is a stub, and what is merely a short article with no further relevant material to be added, and, more importantly, to highlight for the reader when they are reading something that has been judged definitely "comprehensive"&mdash;that is, a guarantee to the reader that whatever they are reading contains the sum total of all available content.

Nominations and promotions of the Comprehensive article process are overseen by a collective of users known as the "EduCorps," which is made up of the Inquisitorius, the AgriCorps, and various other experienced users who are considered qualified to adequately judge the nominated material.

Lucasfilm Ltd. and its many licensees continue to expand the Star Wars universe. Since new information might become available, it may be necessary to revoke a "comprehensive article's" status. A forum will be used to nominate articles that have fallen out-of-date. Members of the EduCorps will then post a warning template on that page, and a grace period of one week will be instituted in which the article can be improved. If there is a significant amount of new information, it is likely that once updated, the article will become eligible for Good article status, and thereby ineligible for Comprehensive article status.

READ THIS FIRST!

An article must&hellip;


 * 1) &hellip;be well-written and detailed.
 * 2) &hellip;be unbiased, non-point of view.
 * 3) &hellip;be sourced with all available sources and appearances.
 * 4) &hellip;follow the Manual of Style, Layout Guide, and all other policies on Wookieepedia. This is, of course, within reason. If a topic only has a very limited degree of content that cannot be divided up into the relevant article sections, it is not required that it follow the Layout Guide precisely. This is to be judged on a case-by-case basis.
 * 5) &hellip;following the review process, be stable, i.e., does not change significantly from day to day and is not the subject of ongoing edit wars. This does not apply to vandalism and protection or semi-protection as a result of vandalism.
 * 6) &hellip;not be tagged with any sort of improvement tags (i.e. more sources, expand, etc).
 * 7) &hellip;have no redlinks.
 * 8) &hellip;have all relevant canon information presented.
 * 9) &hellip;be completely referenced for all available material and sources. See Sourcing for more information. While this is not required for an article possessing a singular source, it is encouraged, as it provides both uniformity and a good infrastructure should the topic be referenced in any future materials.
 * 10) &hellip;have all quotes and images sourced.
 * 11) &hellip;provide at least one relevant quote on the article if available.
 * 12) &hellip;include a "Behind the scenes" section for in-universe articles.
 * 13) &hellip;counting the introduction, the article body, and "Behind the scenes" material, must not exceed 250 words in length (not including captions, quotes, or headers, etc). Any articles exceeding the limit should be taken to the Good article nominations page for consideration.
 * 14) &hellip;if the nominated article reaches 200 words or greater, the nominator must either provide an intro or draft an intro and provide a link to the revision in the nomination, showing that the intro does not elevate the article over 250 words. Exceptions can be made for articles wherein the majority of the text is in the "Behind the scenes" section.

How to nominate:


 * 1) First, nominate an article you find is worthy of comprehensive status, putting it at the bottom of the list below. Nominated articles must meet all thirteen requirements stated above.
 * 2) Add CAnom at the top of the article you are nominating.
 * 3) Be sure to place sign in the "Nominated by" line when the nomination is posted for voting.
 * 4) Others will object to the nomination if they disagree that the article is good enough; they will then supply reasons for doing so, and ways to improve the article in accordance with the established rules.
 * 5) Nominators and supporters will adjust the article until the objectors (with reasonable objections) are satisfied. Objectors may also make alterations&mdash;if there is any reason for contention on a given point, it should be settled in a civil manner in the nomination field itself.
 * 6) Users may not vote on their own articles.
 * 7) There is no limit to the amount of nominations a given user can submit at any given time.

How to vote:


 * 1) Before doing anything, be sure to read the article completely, keeping a sharp eye out for mistakes.
 * 2) Afterward, compare the article to the criteria listed above, and then either support or object the article's nomination.
 * 3) *If you object, please supply concrete reasons for doing so, and how it can be improved.
 * 4) As stated above, any objections will be looked upon by the nominator, supporters, and anyone willing to improve the article, and action will be taken to please the objectors. Do not strike other users' objections; it is up to the objector to review the changes and strike if they are satisfied.
 * 5) There are several ways in which an article can receive the required number of votes. Within a 48-hour period of nomination, only EduCorps votes will count towards the total, although anyone may choose to vote in that window. If two members of the EduCorps support a nomination in that window, and there are no outstanding objections, the article can be considered a "Comprehensive article" and be tagged with the template 48 hours after the initial nomination.  The talk page will also be tagged with the CA template. When the 48 hours are up, any user's votes will contribute towards the total. If one EduCorps member has voted for an article after a week, three regular votes will be required. After the 48 hour period, an article can still also pass with just two EduCorps votes.
 * 6) Once a nomination is successful, it will be placed on the Comprehensive article list. Instructions on how to archive nominations, successful or otherwise, can be found here. Anyone can archive a nomination&mdash;just make sure it has the correct number of votes, has been nominated for at least a week (or 48 hours if there are two EC votes), and that there are absolutely no outstanding objections. If you are not sure how to do this, just ask, and someone will likely be more than willing to help you. Also, if you think you can slip one past us, think again&mdash;someone is always watching you.

All nominations will be considered idle and are subject to instantaneous removal by EduCorps members if objections are not addressed, or at least not answered, after a period of 1 week.

Please remember to archive your nomination beforehand if you plan on taking it to the Good Article Nominations page.

Lexi Dio (starship)

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:19, June 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:TFU CAN for TFU.

(3 ECs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support


 * 1) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 01:08, July 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  21:35, July 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Menkooroo 03:48, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 05:04, July 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 14:38, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) The Force Unleashed II release date is incorrect.  Teff  02:33, June 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *Oops. Don't know how I missed that. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 02:37, June 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Axinal
 * 4) * Are there any quotes available from the novel?
 * 5) **Let me check that. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 13:51, June 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) * The fact that it was an assault bomber during the early days of the Rebellion is currently exclusive to the intro.
 * 7) **Got it. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 13:51, June 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) *** This might be a little picky, but you say "early days of the Rebellion" in the intro. While you specify 1 BBY in the body, it's not entirely clear to the reader that 1 BBY is in the early days of the Rebellion. Could you throw that in somewhere?&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 22:00, June 26, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) ****How does that look? Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:49, June 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) *****Looks good to me. Any luck with a quote, or are there none?&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 10:10, June 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) ******Haven't been able to look yet. I should be able to look for one sometime this week. But I put a request for a quote on the talk page in case someone else found a good quote first. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 19:11, June 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 12) *******How's that quote? Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:51, July 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 13) ********Perfect, minus the comma problems, which I fixed assuming they weren't [sic]s.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 01:08, July 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 14) * It is not entirely necessary to source it, as you did for the history section, but it is encouraged. If you do source it, however, you need to source every bulleted item in the infobox.
 * 15) **OK fixed. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 13:51, June 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * 16) *I added the template for you to italicize the title.
 * 17) **OK thanks. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 13:51, June 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * 18) *Otherwise, nice article.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 08:19, June 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * 19) **Great thanks! Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 13:51, June 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * 20) Super tiny thing: Is the date confirmed as 1 BBY? If so, the "approximately" in the body isn't necessary. If not, then could you add a ~ before the two instances of "1 BBY" in the infobox for consistency? Menkooroo 13:17, July 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 21) *Fixed. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:35, July 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 22) Rubedo - Context on what the Empire was attacking at the Itani Nebula. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 23:35, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 23) *Fixed. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:38, July 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 24) Hold up for one more thing. What your source for 1 BBY? The main article on TFU2 has a source tag on that in the infobox. Merely citing six months after TFU1 for that would place it in either 2 BBY or 1 BBY.  NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 05:20, July 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 25) *Actually it's 3 BBY. Look at the reference. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:12, July 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * 26) Intro states 1 ABY, body states 1 BBY. Please correct as necessary. - Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 09:57, July 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 27) *Sorry, that was my fault. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 14:05, July 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 28) **Take a look at my above comment. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:12, July 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * 29) ***Umm, how did you get the 3 BBY date? The inside cover of the TFU II comic states "The events in this story take place approximately twelve months before the Battle of Yavin". This is 1 BBY. - Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 17:54, July 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 30) ****Yea, sorry about that. I'm currently going through a source hunt with some other users to find a worthy source to use. I think I've found one, though, so as soon as it's approved, I'll change it. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 19:12, July 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 31) *****The source if from the TFU II comic. It's as worthy as you can get since the battle that involved the ship is in it. - Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 19:54, July 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 32) ******The one I was going to use was the one used here. I'll change them both, though, if the comic would be a better source. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 20:49, July 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 33) ******The comic is an official LFL product. GamePro magazine isn't. - Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 12:28, July 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * 34) ******OK changed. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:51, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Namana cream pie

 * Nominated by:  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  18:43, July 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Here comes a pie, Naru.

(1 ECs/2 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) Comedy. How quaint. ;) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 22:14, July 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 19:08, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) ~  Savage  BOB sig.png 16:21, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

Object Comments
 * 1) The first sentence is a run-on.  NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 19:14, July 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *Better?-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  20:18, July 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Jangeth
 * 4) * Check your grammar  JangFett  (Talk) 19:24, July 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) **Better?-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  20:16, July 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * Does anyone think I need to elaborate about the Bakurans and the Namana plant?-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  18:43, July 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * You should make reference to it as "native to the planet of Bakura" or something to that effect. As for the plant, even though it's not explicitly established that it was made from that plant, the use of the name combined with it being native to Bakura would make a reference to the trees appropriate. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 19:14, July 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * I added a reference to Bakura, how would you suggest I reference the tree?-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  20:16, July 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * "Namana cream pie was a type of pie from the planet Bakura, home of the Namana tree, that was served..." would probably work. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 20:25, July 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * Done.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  20:42, July 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * Remember to source the word "before" to Dining at Dex's. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 19:14, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Gonzo yellow cheese

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 19:14, July 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: I sacrifice my worthless cheese monster to summon Kilson the PIE Eater to the battlefield.

(1 ECs/2 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) OK which one of you are going to take on topato slices next? :D Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 20:44, July 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Good move.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  14:44, July 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Menkooroo 03:42, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Jangeth
 * 2) * Check your grammar
 * 3) **Could you be specific? It looks right to me. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 19:40, July 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) * What does the destruction of Dex's Diner have anything to do with the cheese?  JangFett  (Talk) 19:24, July 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) **Meaning that it was no longer served there after its destruction. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 19:40, July 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) ***Looks better
 * 7) I don't have hyperspace, so I can't check for myself, buuuttt... does Dex's Diner say anything about the Rise of the Galactic Empire or the ceasing of Dex's menu? If not, I don't think "In 19 BBY, following the rise of the Galactic Empire, Jettster no longer used the cheese in his dishes" can be sourced to it. A re-wording to something like what you guys have in the other articles, such as in B'omarr-style pickle, might be a good idea. Menkooroo 14:30, July 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) *Better? NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 19:07, July 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) Bob
 * 10) *The article currently claims that Jettster served the cheese until the destruction of his diner, but we can't really ascertain that from the "Dining at Dex's" article. In other words, we can't say for certain that his menu didn't change at some point between the menu we have in that article and the diner's destruction. I'd probably move the info about the destruction of the diner to another point in the article. ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 16:25, July 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) **Which do you think would be better then? Saying it was "...served before his diner was destroyed" or noting that it was destroyed with the last sentence? I originally did the latter because I thought using the former in all of them might be too repetitive. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 01:48, July 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 12) ***I think it was better the latter way, even though it may end up a bit repetitive. It's best to keep them distinct from one another, but ultimately, repetition won't really apply to the average reader. ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 14:42, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Nebula (hotel)

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:24, July 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Another one of those great things in Star Wars that is small, but worth mentioning.

(2 ECs/2 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1) Looks good to me.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  22:01, July 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2)  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 18:04, July 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) The roof is on fire! ~  Savage  BOB sig.png 13:31, July 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4)  Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 18:35, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Source the quote. Normally I would fix this, but such a significant error should not happen. Nice work otherwise.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 17:45, July 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *Fixed. I usually don't miss such a big mistake. Must have been tired. :P Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 17:59, July 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Rubedo is Reviewing
 * 4) * This article needs a time reference.
 * 5) **Got it.
 * 6) * Is it "The Nebula" or just "Nebula?" You refer to it as both.
 * 7) **Done.
 * 8) ***If the "the" is not capitalized, then the article needs to be moved to "Nebula" because that's not part of the proper noun. Calling it "the Nebula" is equivalent to saying "the Hilton" for a Hilton Hotel. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 06:01, July 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) ****OK.
 * 10) * "Was supposed to be waiting" Was she not there?
 * 11) **Check to see if that's clearer.
 * 12) ***They already knew where Malgus was: in his shuttle. Could you rephrase "find?" Is there some event article that could link to? NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 06:01, July 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 13) ****Check it out now.
 * 14) * "ten-story" needs to be included in the body.
 * 15) **Done.
 * 16) * I assumed because you mentioned the roof access that Korr surveilled from the roof. Is that correct?
 * 17) **Yes.
 * 18) * "He was working with rogue Jedi Knight Aryn Leneer and was looking for something for her to stow away in to get up to the Sith Lord Darth Malgus who was in his cruiser" Could you rephrase this? It's really clunky.
 * 19) **Look better? Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 02:06, July 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 20) * "After the Sacking of Coruscant, many buildings on the galactic capital planet Coruscant were destroyed. But, aside from losing power and a few broken windows, the hotel Nebula was mostly intact." Again, do not begin sentences with "but." This should be in the history section. It isn't describing the structure. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 23:08, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 21) **How's that?
 * 22) * Is that cruiser his personal shuttle? If so, that needs a linkie. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 06:01, July 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 23) **The book doesn't say it is.
 * 24) *To maintain proper chronology, the effects on the building from the Sacking and its later abandonment need to be mentioned before Korr. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 06:01, July 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 25) **How's that?
 * 26) ***Still need to mention the abandonment before Korr.
 * 27) ****Check that. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 03:45, July 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 28) * That it's on Coruscant needs to be in the description. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 06:19, July 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 29) **Fixed. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:44, July 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * 30) Bob
 * 31) * The article seems to be going into a lot of play-by-play territory that is causing it to cover non-essential information that has little to do with the hotel. The final sentence of "History" should probably be scrapped, and the three sentences before it should probably be merged into one that gives only the essential info: that Korr went on the roof to look for Imperial shuttles that might take him into orbit. ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 14:49, July 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 32) **How's that? Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 16:19, July 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 33) *** Better, but I still wonder if we need to know all the background about why the dude climbed to the top. Essentially, it boils down to the fact that he was looking for Imperial starships, and the hotel let him see some. ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 20:02, July 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 34) ****Try that. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 20:54, July 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 35) Trayus
 * 36) * "He was working with rogue Jedi Knight Aryn Leneer, who needed something to use to reach the Sith Lord Darth Malgus in his cruiser orbiting the planet, so Korr climbed to the Nebula's roof and saw several Imperial shuttles in the spaceport that he thought she could use." Can we avoid using the term "something"? Also, why did Korr choose the Nebula to search for shuttles? You need to mention in the description section that it was near Liston Spaceport, and indicate in the history section that he was searching for Imperial vessels from the Nebula because the nearby Liston Spaceport had been commandeered by the Sith. Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 17:33, July 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 37) **Check that. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 19:16, July 20, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Unidentified air taxi driver droid

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:38, July 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:I'm getting a Deceived burner going! :D

(2 ECs/1 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) Good.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:32, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2)  Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 17:49, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * I think that you need some information on what timeframe this droid existed in, inside of the body of the article. I think that I have seen a date for the novel sourced to a blog written by the author of this novel somewhere on wookieepedia. I believe that this information should be found and included. If anyone knows what the date is and knows where it can be sourced to please say so here. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  15:43, July 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **OK take a look now. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 17:55, July 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) Trayus
 * 5) * Can you specify what those peace negotiations were in regards to, or what factions were participating?
 * 6) **Fixed.
 * 7) * When you say the taxi driver carried Leneer to the spaceport, it sounds as if it literally picked her up and walked there. It's nitpicky, but it would be best if you could reword it for more clarity and precision. Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 17:14, July 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) **Is that better? Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 19:19, July 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) Bob
 * 10) * Just a couple of things. First, I don't know that all the detail about why the Jedi chick rode in the taxi is necessary. Perhaps a bit, to perhaps contextualize her shortness with the droid, but pare it down a tad.
 * 11) **Ummm, what part do you think I should remove? The part about her Master? or the planet she was leaving from? Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:59, July 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * 12) *** Well, we've already established that we're on Alderaan at this point, so you could get away with just saying it drove her to the starport and leave it at that. But if you want to keep a bit more background on the reason for her ride, I won't fault you. Just keep it to the bare minimum. ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 20:44, July 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * 13) ****Check that. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:03, July 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * 14) * Second, the card reader in his hand is something that has pertinence to the droid on a "P&T" type level, not a plot level. So, rather than mentioning that important fact about the droid's equipment as a plot element in the second paragraph, introduce it earlier as part of the droid's equipment package in the first paragraph. You can still note later that it extended its hand for her to pay, but I'd like to see the card reader called out as more significant than that one event earlier in the article. Oh, and I gave you a redlink. Sorry. :) ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 13:40, July 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * 15) **OK fixed. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:59, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Doghouse

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 03:17, July 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Back to Deceived! :))

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) Good.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  15:51, July 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Nicely done. ~  Savage  BOB sig.png 20:51, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Trayus
 * 2) * I know that Korr explicitly speculates that the hijackers are either pirates or mercenaries, but in the article it sounds very speculative: "But some other people, either pirates or mercenaries". It would appear far more encyclopedic to state that "A rival group of criminals, speculated by Korr to be either pirates or hired mercenaries, were there instead..."
 * 3) **How's that?
 * 4) *Also, when you say "there instead" it leaves room for confusion. Where were they? Somewhere on Ord Mantell, or specifically in or at the Doghouse? It would be best to specify that they had taken control of the ship at the drop off point.
 * 5) **Changed. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 17:29, July 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) *You should provide a bit more context on the altercation at the landing pad, i.e., how Korr discovered that they did not work for Arigo, and how he got away. Nothing too in-depth, but a bit more explanation will definitely help.
 * 7) **How's that? Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 17:21, July 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) *Not bad, otherwise. Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 17:11, July 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) Bob
 * 10) * Context on the Exchange.
 * 11) **Fixed.
 * 12) * Did Arigo use the freighter only once? The current wording implies that. If not, change "used by" to "in use by" or "being used by" to imply that this is not a one-off event.
 * 13) **Changed.
 * 14) * Species IDs for Arigo and Korr wouldn't hurt; if they were aliens, we'd almost certainly ID their species.
 * 15) **Fixed.
 * 16) * The altercation between them all probably needs an article: Skirmish at blah blah or whatever.
 * 17) **Got it.
 * 18) * The way things are written seems to be from Korr's point of view, but this article is about the ship. Try to rewrite most of the body chronologically from the POV of the ship: ship lands, pirate guys take it over, Korr comes up unsuspecting, etc. As it stands, the article is kind of confusing and hard to follow. ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 13:56, July 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * 19) **I have to agree with Bob on this&mdash;I've noticed that trend on a couple of your articles. Always remember that you should follow the chronology of the subject, and not necessarily the POV of the book. Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 17:24, July 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * 20) ***Is that any better? Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 17:43, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Hraashi Lool

 * Nominated by: Menkooroo 07:03, July 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Nuthin' in the CSWE.

(1 ECs/2 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) Nice. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:35, July 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Good work as always.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:28, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) ~  Savage  BOB sig.png 14:51, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

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 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * I believe that you should mention the necklace that she wore in the picture. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  15:53, July 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) ** Hmmm... I dunno. Unlike hair, eyes, or tattoos, a necklace isn't a permanent fixture, so I can't make a definitive statement like "She always wore a necklace." I guess I could mention it in the second paragraph, but that would open up the door to describing the shirt and suspenders she wore that day, too, which would just kind of be a random tangent. Any ideas? Menkooroo 04:07, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Wait, scratch that. I found a simple and effective way to put it in. Check it out! And thanks for the review. :) Menkooroo 04:13, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) ****That's kind of like what I was thinking of.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:28, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) Bob
 * 7) * Just something minor, but can we really say she had tattoos? It could've been makeup. Simply de-pipelinking tattoo would suffice, but I wanted to make sure there's not something a missed. ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 16:38, July 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) **You're right. I didn't want to definitively say it, so I'm not sure why I pipelinked it. Removed. Menkooroo 11:40, July 17, 2011 (UTC)

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 * Also, I hereby put out an open challenge for other users to write and CAN Lomina Argo and Wuuden Malnic! Menkooroo 08:14, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Wuuden Malnic

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:25, July 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:I'm stepping up to the plate Menk! :)

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 * 1) Why are we still writing about this? The [expletive deleted] CAN page is tearing itself apart, and we're writing about a snot-nosed University student and a whining Rodian. Menkooroo 14:06, July 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *Nice Menk. Very Nice! :) Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:25, July 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) The quote is appropriate for some of the news I have read in the real world.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  21:34, July 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) *Yea I know what you mean. :) Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:11, July 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) ~  Savage  BOB sig.png 17:08, July 20, 2011 (UTC)

Object Comments
 * 1) You have taken on the challenge!
 * 2) * Unfortunately, you can't copy and paste others' work. You'll need to write your own bts.
 * 3) **OK rewrote it.
 * 4) * You should probably rewrite the parts of the bio that you kept from the previous version of the article, too. It's always better to write the article yourself, and what was there before was missing some context to boot. Just what the "crisis" is should be established.
 * 5) **How's that?
 * 6) * The "customary to his species" line will have to be sourced to something else, like an Essential Guide or something. Alternatively, you could leave it out. Either way is OK.
 * 7) **Fixed.
 * 8) * He seems an aggressive lad. Could you mention that he swore at the journalist?
 * 9) **I added in that he swore, but I didn't mention that he swore at the journalist per se. He more swore at the Republic.
 * 10) * I think you're right about this character being male, but could you throw in a source similar to the one here? I think the duck test is generally a Human thing, so some sort of added clarification might be good. Menkooroo 16:12, July 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) **Fixed. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 16:53, July 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 12) For great justice
 * 13) *What exactly is the difference between males and female that you observe in the NEGAS? While it is more common in females, males may have hair as well and many females choose to shave their heads to hide their femininity according to the same source. I believe females may also grow spines atop their heads.
 * 14) **I can't find anything beyond that, if you're sure that the females can grow head spines. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:22, July 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 15) ***I'll see if Borders has the NEGAS and check it. May take some time though. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 05:28, July 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 16) ****I'll see if I can find some source also. So, I guess it's up to whoever can find it first. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:01, July 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * 17) *****Never mind. Savage says to leave it out. See below. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 16:40, July 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 18) * What's the source that Corroney illustrated the picture? It's not on the article page itself. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 23:23, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 19) **Hmmm, I thought that I saw that somewhere. I guess not. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:26, July 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 20) ***Oh good. That would have meant that I'd have to go over a lot of articles. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 05:28, July 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 21) ****Joe Corroney did illustrate it, as can be seen here: .-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  20:04, July 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 22) *****Sorry about the bad link, here is the correct one&mdash;.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  12:19, July 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 23) ******OK great. Thanks for finding that EJ. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 16:40, July 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 24) Bob
 * 25) * For a Rodian with no visible breasts, I'm not sure we can claim one gender or another unless the source explicitly states one. Lots of older material (pre-special edition) showed males and females as essentially identical. ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 16:43, July 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * 26) **So are you saying that we should just leave the gender part out? Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 20:28, July 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * 27) *** Yeah, I think from the illustration, it's inconclusive this is a male. ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 14:51, July 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 28) ****OK fixed. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 16:40, July 20, 2011 (UTC)

Unidentified Bakuran astromech droid

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 02:09, July 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:First CAN for new WP:VG.

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 * 1)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  19:52, July 20, 2011 (UTC)

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 * 1) Wow, a real astro droid! How do you get so lucky?
 * 2) *Remember to never link the bolded text of an article's intro (in this case, the first instance of astromech droid). You can link it on the second mention, though.
 * 3) **Got it.
 * 4) *"Unidentified" should generally only be used in an article's title, and possibly Behind the scenes. In the In-universe section, not so much --- just because Jaden doesn't know its name, doesn't mean nobody does.
 * 5) **OK.
 * 6) *Short-forms generally shouldn't be used --- ie, keep up "astromech droid" rather than "astro droid" throughout.
 * 7) **Fixed.
 * 8) *Should the power plant receive an article? It seems like a noteworthy enough location. If so, could it be added to the "affiliation" field of the infobox? That is, does the droid definitely work there? Menkooroo 15:09, July 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) **There you go! Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:43, July 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) Bob
 * 11) *I think you can scale back a tad on the info about why Korr was in the plant. I'm not sure you need to mention Katarn at all, for instance.
 * 12) **OK.
 * 13) *If you're duck testing this droid to be an R2 unit, does that mean we can duck test his manufacturer as Industrial Automaton? If so, add them to the infobox and body somewhere.
 * 14) **Fixed.
 * 15) *Similarly, you can add height based on the stats in EGTD or NEGTD. (This probably doesn't apply for the equipment fields, since R2s were so highly customizable. But I'd guess height holds steady from model to model.)
 * 16) **Got it.
 * 17) *I'm mostly unfamiliar with droid articles, but I think the "plating" field in the infobox is for the droid's paint scheme. At any rate, this droids coloration should be mentioned in the body even if there's not a place for it in the infobox. ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 13:36, July 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * 18) **Done. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:21, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

Unidentified Tatooine astromech droid

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 03:23, July 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Another astro droid for WP:VG!

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 * 1) Bob
 * 2) *I have the same main objections that I do for the R2 droid above from the same source. Will re-review once these have been addressed. ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 13:37, July 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Fixed. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:47, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

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Happy-patty

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 20:05, July 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: The angry machine's archenemy.

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 * Hmm, I wonder what animal it's from... Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 20:59, July 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) Nice work.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 18:36, July 12, 2011 (UTC)

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 * 1) Axinal
 * 2) * Could it perhaps have a food infobox? It could at least show the eras field.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 01:05, July 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Added. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 01:43, July 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) Bob
 * 5) *Since the body has citations, the infobox needs 'em too. ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 20:12, July 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) Exiled Jedi
 * 7) *How about adding the quote where it was used as a metaphor?-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  17:19, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

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A

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 21:23, July 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: I can haz an "A" for effort?

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 * 1) "A" Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:07, July 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2)  Master Jonathan  &mdash; Jedi Council Chambers Thursday, July 14, 2011, 02:55 UTC

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 * 1) From the Council Chambers:
 * 2) * Is Elegos a member of the A clan? It seems to me that a being would automatically be a member of both of their parents' families/clans/whatever a certain species calls them. Unless we know of some reason why he isn't (and I can't fathom why he wouldn't be), then it seems to me that all of Elegos's appearances/sources should be listed too, and the article should then include information on Elego's life and death, which would push this way past the CAN word limit. Or should I get an F in reasoning?  Master Jonathan &mdash; Jedi Council Chambers Wednesday, July 13, 2011, 23:10 UTC
 * 3) **You may have a C, because that's perfectly logical. However, in the source he identifies himself as part of the Kla clan and speaks of the a clan as something he doesn't belong to, saying that it was just the clan his father belonged to: "It is fairly easy for me to transfer a merehis to another member of the Kla clan or to my father's clan, the A clan." NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 23:45, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Seems odd that he would be a member of one and not the other, but if that's what the source says, then it's fine the way it is.  Master Jonathan &mdash; Jedi Council Chambers Thursday, July 14, 2011, 02:55 UTC
 * 5) ****Frankly, after reading the releveant excerpt, I'm a bit intrigued by the maternal/paternal clan concept and how it relates to Caamasi society, but to my knowledge no sources have fleshed this out. Too bad. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 05:12, July 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) *****Cultures are weird, so we shouldn't find it odd he's in only the A clan and not the Kla clan; perhaps the species is patrilineal, yet their naming practices preserve a history of the maternal clan in the name without any suggestion of membership in that clan. As for whether all of Elegos A'Kla's appearances being appearances of his clan, I'd say no. List any sources that specifically call out his clan, even indirectly, but in general, one individual does not a clan make, IMHO. ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 13:44, July 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) Bob
 * 8) *Do we know that "A" was a strictly paternal clan? Or was it just Elegos's paternal clan?
 * 9) *Context on memnsis.
 * 10) *Again, I feel it's unfair to single out Elegos as a Caamasi and not Katarn as a Human, so a species ID would be nice.
 * 11) *It's probably better to spell out when the novel was first published, since it's been reprinted and translated since then.~ Savage  BOB sig.png 13:44, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

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Unidentified Yavin Runner II pilot

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 02:41, July 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:We'll be arriving at CA status in just a few minutes.

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Unidentified Blenjeel shipwreck survivor

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 03:01, July 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Thank the Force, another CAnom. I was beginning to think that NaruHina was going to get them all...uh...ahhgg!!

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 * 1) Good work.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  21:41, July 12, 2011 (UTC)

Object Comments
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * You need to mention his fair skin in the body of the article.
 * 3) **Ok.
 * 4) * I just wanted to make sure, is the 14 ABY date from the game?
 * 5) **Yes, I believe so.
 * 6) * Can you determine the individual's hair and eye color? (I am pretty sure you can say what his hair color is.)
 * 7) **I can't really see what his eye color is, but his hair color I think is dirty-blond.
 * 8) * Would it be possible to get an image with the survivor in the center of the image instead of the current image which makes the sand burrower appear to be the crash survivor? -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  15:19, July 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) **Yea, I thought of that. And Jedi Academy doesn't have a screenshot function. But, a friend just told me that there's a cheatcode that lets you do it. So, it will take me a few days to find the cheatcode and try it. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 16:05, July 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) ***I got it quicker than I thought. That's about the best I could do. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 20:49, July 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) ****This is much better.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  21:41, July 12, 2011 (UTC)

Unidentified Tatooine moisture farmer

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:17, July 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:This is the moisture farmer you're looking for.

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 * 1) I fixed a couple of minor things, but other than these the article was good.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  21:44, July 12, 2011 (UTC)

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Broden Kel Verdox

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:35, July 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Long name for a one mention.

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 * 1) Good.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:35, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

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 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * You forgot to mention his affiliation to the Jedi Order in the body of the article. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  21:46, July 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Actually I didn't forget. I figured that saying he was a Jedi Master would kind of take care of that. What do you think? Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:48, July 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) ***I think it should probably still be mentioned separately.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:25, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) ****Got it. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 16:32, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) Imperators II
 * 7) * Why is the Rise of the Empire era listed in the "Eras" field? What's the source for that? Jedi Academy is set during the New Republic era.  Imperators II (Talk) 10:23, July 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) **In Jedi Academy he's only mentioned as being a Jedi of the Old Republic. So I guess that was an assumption that he was alive during the Rise of the Empire era. Removed. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 16:56, July 20, 2011 (UTC)

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Unidentified Hutt crime lord (Nar Kreeta)

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:30, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Hmmm, even when there just mentioned, Hutt's seem selfish.

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 * 1) I hated this level quite a bit. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 04:52, July 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2)  Darth Karika  will destroy your planet! 15:04, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

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 * 1) Karika
 * 2) * Currently, the gender (hermaphrodite) is exclusive to the categories. It should probably be added to the infobox and body.
 * 3) **How's that?
 * 4) * No quotes from the mission briefing or the mission itself?  Darth Karika  will destroy your planet! 01:12, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) **Not really. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:54, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) ***I found a semi-suitable quote. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 16:15, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) Rubedo
 * 8) * This should be "Unidentified Hutt crime lord (Nar Kreeta)."
 * 9) **Are you sure? Take a look here first. If I remember correctly, it was "Unidentified medical supply wholesaler (Vulta)" but then it was changed to what it is now.
 * 10) ***I'm sure. Unidentified B1 battle droid (Endor), Unidentified B1 battle droid captain (Dooku's frigate), Unidentified T-series tactical droid (Quell), Unidentified T-series tactical droid (unidentified planet). Look at status articles when checking something like this. I need a name made a mistake when he moved that page, but it didn't need "Vulta" in the title at all anyway. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 22:11, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) ****OK. (I just didn't want to be switching several times in case someone else wanted it turned back) Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:38, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 12) *****That's fine. It never hurts to make sure. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 04:49, July 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 13) ******Parentheses are only necessary when more than one article exists with the same title, which is the case for this article and all of NaruHina's examples, with the exception of the B1 battle droid captain. In the case of the Vulta medical person, I dropped the parentheses because they were unnecessary, but incorporated the Vulta bit into the actual article title because "Unidentified medical supply wholesaler" sounded too vague and undescriptive. --  I need a name  ( Complain here ) 15:56, July 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 14) *******This is true, but the descriptiveness of the title is not important, see Unidentified Zabrak patron, Unidentified clone trooper pilot, Unidentified mustachioed individual, Unidentified Neimoidian captain. The planet they're on when seen in a source doesn't defin anything about the character. IIFD, upon further review, I did find Unidentified Naboo artist and Unidentified Naboo merchant, though naming conventions were not brought up in either of their nominations and they probably need moving as well. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 16:59, July 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 15) * What is the nature of his mention if it isn't quotable? It doesn't have to be a very interesting/funny quote.
 * 16) **That's about the best I could find.
 * 17) * Say Raven Software made this game in the BTS. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 05:11, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 18) **Got it. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 16:15, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 19) * Say why Jaden was sent there: to investigate rumors of the gambling ring. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 22:11, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 20) **How's that? Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:42, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

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 * If something is mentioned or appeared in a single source, do not use 1stm or 1st. Simply either use Mo or leave it blank as appropriate. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 05:11, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Hokk

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 02:37, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:No comment until the time limit is up. :)

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 * 1) Looks good.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  21:34, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

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 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * If you do not see Hokk in the game, I do not think that you can say he is human. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:40, July 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Fixed. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:06, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

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 * I cannot find any good images to use, so if someone could find one that would be good. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 02:37, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * Given his nature as a character from a video game, you really should have gotten a picture before you nominated him. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 04:54, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * Upon further review, I found that you only hear Hokk and don't actually see him. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 16:11, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * How do you know which character is the one you come in contact with? Does his voice sound like it comes through a speaker or something? NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 22:56, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * You can hear J'aahn's voice clearly, while Hokk's voice is coming through as if through a comlink. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:10, July 14, 2011 (UTC)

J'aahn

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 02:40, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Can't think of anything...

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 * 1) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 04:41, July 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:37, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

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 * 1) Rubedo
 * 2) * Could you look into the possibility that this character's name is a reference to Soldier of Fortune? If you can find a source saying that Raven did that intentionally, then it should be included.
 * 3) **There was rumor to that, but as far as I can see that is just speculation.
 * 4) ***Do you have Microsoft Outlook working? You can send Raven Software an email about it and see if they respond. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 22:54, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) ****I'm afraid I probably won't be able to check. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:06, July 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) *****Oh well. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 04:41, July 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) * "the dead Sith Lord Marka Ragnos" It would probably be best to list Ragnos's death year here.
 * 8) **How's that?
 * 9) * That he was affiliated with the Imperial Remnant is infobox-only. I think that just because the Diciples are affiliated with the Remnant, that does not mean its individual members are.
 * 10) **Fixed.
 * 11) * Context on Corellia, and probably Coronet City as well.
 * 12) **Got it.
 * 13) * Since he's in the level, I assume it's possible to kill him. That needs to be noted in the BTS. If he was someone that you could not possibly win the level without killing, then that counts as a canon death.
 * 14) **You can do it either way.
 * 15) * Give the name of the company that made the game in the BTS.
 * 16) **Done.
 * 17) * Say why Jaden was sent to Corellia. He wasn't there specifically to save this train.
 * 18) **Got it.
 * 19) * You may put in a pronunciation note because of the apostrophe. (How do you pronounce those anyway? Why are they put in names? Bah.) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 04:50, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 20) **I looked on a lot of different articles and I can't find an example of what you're talking about. Could you please explain better. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:04, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 21) ***For certain articles like Saleucami, Darth Caedus (In the BTS, but should also be in the intro), and Serroco, where the pronunciation may be taken different ways, we use the International Phonetic Alphabet chart for English dialects to say how they are pronounced. Since this character's name may be taken as either "John" or "Jan," I think making that distinction would be appropriate because there is a canonical pronunciation. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 22:54, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 22) ****Ummm, is that how it should look? Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:06, July 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 23) *****Afraid not. I've done it for you. You should do this for Hokk too if it isn't pronounced "hawk." NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 04:41, July 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 24) ******Thanks! Hokk is actually pronounced "Hawk" Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:15, July 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * 25) * Were they not trying to destroy the train by blowing it up? That's not the same thing as "disabling." NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 22:54, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 26) **Done. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:09, July 14, 2011 (UTC)

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 * Do not start a sentence with "but." NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 04:50, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Unidentified spaceport worker

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 16:43, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Continuing on Jedi Academy surge for WP:VG.

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 * 1) I don't see anything wrong with it. Darth Needham 03:58, July 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 18:51, July 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  19:06, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

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 * 1) Rubedo got bored again...so he's back
 * 2) * Move to "Unidentified spaceport worker."
 * 3) **Done.
 * 4) * I've reneged upon my suggestion that you include Ragnos's death date. I think it adds a bit too much info and doesn't really add much to the article. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 07:08, July 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) **OK. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:23, July 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) * Mission to Zonju V Could you verify the tidbit about the meetingplace and add some little not about it in the worker's article? NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 07:29, July 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) **Could you please explain clearer? Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:26, July 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) ***Sorry for being vague. This part: "Korr was to meet the contact in an abandoned outpost three kilometers outside of Zoronhed." NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 01:37, July 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) ****Is that what you were looking for? Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 03:40, July 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) Just one: Who assassinated him? And did anything happen after? Did Korr go after the killer? Menkooroo 14:37, July 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) *Try that. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 17:50, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

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Reciprocating quad blaster

 * Nominated by: Darth Needham 22:38, July 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Trying to get something in for the Barn Burner.

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 * 1) Cal coming in
 * 2) *There is some infobox-only information, otherwise it looks pretty good. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 23:02, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

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