Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Hoth (comic) (second nomination)


 * ''The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.

Hoth (comic)

 * Nominated by:Kilson Likes PIE 04:02, 20 April 09 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Kind of a pointless, useless comic. But yet I nominate it? Strange. :)

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)
Support
 * 1)  —Xwing328 (Talk) 03:48, 22 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 07:49, 23 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 3)  Grunny  ( Talk ) 06:39, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) You're right; kinda pointless, but oh well. :P  CC7567  (talk) 06:44, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 5)  IFYLOFD  ( You will pay the price for your lack of vision! ) 23:17, 28 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 6)  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  22:26, 7 May 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Doesn't meet the word limit of 250 words, so it needs expansion. Also, "JF Boivin of the TheForce.Net" is not a critical review so that shouldn't be there. You need to find credible critical reviews, not just some fan's opinion.  Grunny  ( Talk ) 06:48, 20 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) *I expanded the article a little, without the reception section, I got 251 words. Also, could you sugest any credible review sites I can use, becuase I am having problems finding a good site to use, or would it be a better idea just to get rid of the Reception subsection overall? Thanks for the review by the way. Kilson Likes PIE 19:54, 20 April 09 (UTC)
 * 3) **Now 252 words, cleaned up a little more, and removed the questionable "Reception" section. I'm leaving the external link, however, as there's nothing wrong with having it. —Xwing328 (Talk) 03:48, 22 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) It still needs to be expanded, particularly the plot summary. Also, it could written a touch smoother.  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  18:32, 1 May 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) *I tried to expand the summary a little, although it is just a two page comic. Kilson Likes PIE 19:46, 01 May 09 (UTC)

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