Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Corman Quien


 * ''The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.

Corman Quien

 * Nominated by: Toprawa and Ralltiir 04:30, 17 January 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: More ESB.

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1) Death by tauntaun. 10:04, 17 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) This is indeed my favorite individual article-writing project.  Graestan ( Talk ) 17:16, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) Nice.  Grunny  (Talk) 07:29, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 4)  Cavalier One [[Image:FarStar Logo.jpg|20px]]( Squadron channel ) 12:29, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) Another flawless ESB article by Toprawa. Great job. DC 22:00, 20 January 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) One minor thing: Quien's presence on Hoth proved more valuable than expected when the base's T-47 airspeeders proved difficult to adapt to the planet's freezing temperatures. Can we get rid of one of the 'proved's?  05:08, 17 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) *Done. Toprawa and Ralltiir 05:36, 17 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) Graestan the Merciless:
 * 4) * What's "alpha screen?" Wouldn't it be a good candidate for an article?
 * 5) * "Corman Quien was one of Echo Base's typical scouts." – This sentence should be reworded; as is, it sounds like it bears further explanation, which is not provided.
 * 6) * Graestan ( Talk ) 17:00, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 7) **I thank you for the review. Unfortunately, I'm afraid both of these fall into the category of "I don't know, because that's all the information is provided." Believe me, I would have given greater explanation if it existed. Alpha screen, apparently, is a setting of the surveillance cameras. The quote at the top of the page is all there is to it. As for "typical scout," that's exactly what his CCG card says, without elaboration. I don't know how I would really expound upon that. Toprawa and Ralltiir 17:06, 18 January 2009 (UTC)

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