Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations

 This page is for the nomination of "comprehensive articles". For a list of "comprehensive articles", see Category:Wookieepedia comprehensive articles.


 * Comprehensive article nominations history
 * Comprehensive article nominations archiving checklist

What is a "comprehensive article?"

A "comprehensive article" is an article that contains all information regarding the topic. Often, "comprehensive articles" cannot reach Featured or Good Article status due to their limited content. This process is intended to recognize articles that contain all relevant canon information, yet are still under the 250 word limit required for a Good Article. The purpose of this is twofold&mdash;firstly, to help users distinguish what is a stub, and what is merely a short article with no further relevant material to be added, and, more importantly, to highlight for the reader when they are reading something that has been judged definitely "comprehensive"&mdash;that is, a guarantee to the reader that whatever they are reading contains the sum total of all available content.

Nominations and promotions of the Comprehensive article process are overseen by a collective of users known as the "EduCorps," which is made up of the Inquisitorius, the AgriCorps, and various other experienced users who are considered qualified to adequately judge the nominated material.

Lucasfilm Ltd. and its many licensees continue to expand the Star Wars universe. Since new information might become available, it may be necessary to revoke a "comprehensive article's" status. A forum will be used to nominate articles that have fallen out-of-date. Members of the EduCorps will then post a warning template on that page, and a grace period of one week will be instituted in which the article can be improved. If there is a significant amount of new information, it is likely that once updated, the article will become eligible for Good article status, and thereby ineligible for Comprehensive article status.

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An article must&hellip;


 * 1) &hellip;be well-written and detailed.
 * 2) &hellip;be unbiased, non-point of view.
 * 3) &hellip;be sourced with all available sources and appearances.
 * 4) &hellip;follow the Manual of Style, Layout Guide, and all other policies on Wookieepedia. This is, of course, within reason. If a topic only has a very limited degree of content that cannot be divided up into the relevant article sections, it is not required that it follow the Layout Guide precisely. This is to be judged on a case-by-case basis.
 * 5) &hellip;following the review process, be stable, i.e., does not change significantly from day to day and is not the subject of ongoing edit wars. This does not apply to vandalism and protection or semi-protection as a result of vandalism.
 * 6) &hellip;not be tagged with any sort of improvement tags (i.e. more sources, expand, etc).
 * 7) &hellip;have no redlinks.
 * 8) &hellip;have all relevant canon information presented.
 * 9) &hellip;be completely referenced for all available material and sources. See Sourcing for more information. While this is not required for an article possessing a singular source, it is encouraged, as it provides both uniformity and a good infrastructure should the topic be referenced in any future materials.
 * 10) &hellip;have all quotes and images sourced.
 * 11) &hellip;provide at least one relevant quote on the article if available.
 * 12) &hellip;include a "Behind the scenes" section for in-universe articles.
 * 13) &hellip;counting the introduction, the article body, and "Behind the scenes" material, must not exceed 250 words in length (not including captions, quotes, or headers, etc). Any articles exceeding the limit should be taken to the Good article nominations page for consideration.
 * 14) &hellip;if the nominated article reaches 200 words or greater, the nominator must either provide an intro or draft an intro and provide a link to the revision in the nomination, showing that the intro does not elevate the article over 250 words. Exceptions can be made for articles wherein the majority of the text is in the "Behind the scenes" section.

How to nominate:


 * 1) First, nominate an article you find is worthy of comprehensive status, putting it at the bottom of the list below. Nominated articles must meet all thirteen requirements stated above.
 * 2) Add CAnom at the top of the article you are nominating.
 * 3) Be sure to place sign in the "Nominated by" line when the nomination is posted for voting.
 * 4) Others will object to the nomination if they disagree that the article is good enough; they will then supply reasons for doing so, and ways to improve the article in accordance with the established rules.
 * 5) Nominators and supporters will adjust the article until the objectors (with reasonable objections) are satisfied. Objectors may also make alterations&mdash;if there is any reason for contention on a given point, it should be settled in a civil manner in the nomination field itself.
 * 6) Users may not vote on their own articles.
 * 7) There is no limit to the amount of nominations a given user can submit at any given time.

How to vote:


 * 1) Before doing anything, be sure to read the article completely, keeping a sharp eye out for mistakes.
 * 2) Afterward, compare the article to the criteria listed above, and then either support or object the article's nomination.
 * 3) *If you object, please supply concrete reasons for doing so, and how it can be improved.
 * 4) As stated above, any objections will be looked upon by the nominator, supporters, and anyone willing to improve the article, and action will be taken to please the objectors. Do not strike other users' objections; it is up to the objector to review the changes and strike if they are satisfied.
 * 5) There are several ways in which an article can receive the required number of votes. Within a 48-hour period of nomination, only EduCorps votes will count towards the total, although anyone may choose to vote in that window. If two members of the EduCorps support a nomination in that window, and there are no outstanding objections, the article can be considered a "Comprehensive article" and be tagged with the template 48 hours after the initial nomination.  The talk page will also be tagged with the CA template. When the 48 hours are up, any user's votes will contribute towards the total. If one EduCorps member has voted for an article after a week, three regular votes will be required. After the 48 hour period, an article can still also pass with just two EduCorps votes.
 * 6) Once a nomination is successful, it will be placed on the Comprehensive article list. Instructions on how to archive nominations, successful or otherwise, can be found here. Anyone can archive a nomination&mdash;just make sure it has the correct number of votes, has been nominated for at least a week (or 48 hours if there are two EC votes), and that there are absolutely no outstanding objections. If you are not sure how to do this, just ask, and someone will likely be more than willing to help you. Also, if you think you can slip one past us, think again&mdash;someone is always watching you.

All nominations will be considered idle and are subject to instantaneous removal by EduCorps members if objections are not addressed, or at least not answered, after a period of 1 week.

Please remember to archive your nomination beforehand if you plan on taking it to the Good Article Nominations page.

Darth Arho

 * Nominated by: Obnoxioussith 13:49, March 10, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

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Support

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * "Darth Arho was a male human Dark Lord of the Sith of the resurgent Sith Empire and a Dark Councilor." This would be a lot clearer if you said that he was a Dark Lord of the Sith and a Dark Counciler before mentioning the faction he worked for. It is slightly confusing the way it is currently written.
 * 3) * "...with one goal: to obliterate his enemies." Please reword this somewhere along the lines of "with the single goal of obliterating his enemies."
 * 4) *Is there any information on who his enemies on Ilum were?
 * 5) * "A natural successor to the warlike Darth Vengean, whose death resulted in significant internal strife among the Sith." Currently this is not even a sentence, could you rework it to make it one?
 * 6) *You need to mention the infobox information on his general appearance in the main part of the article.
 * 7) **No, I meant for you to add information such as him being bald/skin color/eye color to the article.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  21:15, March 10, 2012 (UTC)
 * 8) *You also need to mention his apprentice in the main part of the article.
 * 9) **Is there any information about how he interacted/worked with his apprentice?-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  21:15, March 10, 2012 (UTC)
 * 10) *Currently the article does not say when he was living except in the infobox, please mention the timeframe he was depicted in. Just remember to not to use the Old Republic era in the body of the article, since that in not a term used in-universe.
 * 11) **I think I might have confused you, having the Old Republic era in the infobox is fine, you just need to mention a year or timeframe in the body of the article, and this is what cannot be linked to the Old Republic era.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  21:15, March 10, 2012 (UTC)
 * 12) *I'll look over the article again after you make these changes.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  17:50, March 10, 2012 (UTC)
 * 13) *When nominating an article for CA it is important to include as much information about the character as possible. It would be a good idea to check for any information that you might of missed in order to create an article that can be judged comprehensive. You also need to include everything found in the infobox in the main part of the article. You should also try and get an image of the guy as well as a quote spoken by him if possible. Once you work on these objections and 501st Dogma's I will look at the article again.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  21:15, March 10, 2012 (UTC)
 * 14) 501st
 * 15) * In the infobox, 3,641 BBY is not an era.
 * 16) *Please source the article. Even though it is not required by CA stadards, you should get into the habit of doing so.
 * 17) * No mention of his death in the whole article.
 * 18) * Who struck the blows that drove Darth Arho to push for the defeat?
 * 19) *Once you've addressed these I'll look over it again. 501st Dogma Republic_emblem.png( Comlink ) 20:15, March 10, 2012 (UTC)
 * 20) * Darth Arho was relatively removed from the powerplays of other Dark Councilors.Therefore his warlike personality was often used by Dark Councilors against one another- very "clunky" couple of sentences. Try to contect them.
 * 21) * You mention Arho chocked one of his Sith. Why did he do it?
 * 22) **Have now said so. In the game, Arho chokes the Sith, and then uses the Dark Side to make his throat explode. Do you know what this ability is called?--Obnoxioussith 14:46, March 11, 2012 (UTC)
 * 23) ***Truthfuly I do not know what that ability is. 501st Dogma Republic_emblem.png( Comlink ) 19:16, March 11, 2012 (UTC)
 * 24) * Try to put something into the last paragraph about Malgus, since Arho was sent to defeat Malgus.
 * 25) *The article is currently at 254 words, 4 words more than the maximum for a comprehensive. I suggest satisfying all of our objections before you move it to good article nominations.
 * 26) *You will need an intro also when this is moved to Good nom.
 * 27) *Looking better. 501st Dogma Republic_emblem.png( Comlink ) 13:26, March 11, 2012 (UTC)
 * 28) *Maybe write a Power and abilities section. You could put in his use of Force choke and how he made the Sith's throat explode. 501st Dogma Republic_emblem.png( Comlink ) 19:16, March 11, 2012 (UTC)
 * 29) Nayayen
 * 30) *You should mention his appointment to the Dark Council before describing his tenure on it.
 * 31) * Do we know anything more about his mission to Ilum? Is it even a quest that the player can take part in, if so, I'd think there'd be more info to add. At any rate, linking to it (and creating an article for it, even as a stub if need be) would be good.
 * 32) * How did he appear in TOR? Is he mentioned in the Codex; does he appear in a cutscene of the Dark Council; or is even an NPC that takes a role in a quest?
 * 33) *Given that Imageless is an "improvement" tag, please try and track down an image of him. If need be, you can ask either in the Senate Hall or on IRC to see if someone can get a screenshot for you.
 * 34) **I have an image of him, but I am unable to upload on to WP. Should I just go to the Senate Hall instead?--Obnoxioussith 14:46, March 11, 2012 (UTC)
 * 35) ***The first thing you might want to do is check that you've confirmed your email listed in Special:Preferences as you need to have done that to be able to upload. If you have done that then, yeah, either Senate Hall or IRC would be a good place to ask.  nayayen ★talk  20:49, March 11, 2012 (UTC)
 * 36) *As with the others, I'll have another look when these have all been addressed.  nayayen ★talk  23:13, March 10, 2012 (UTC)
 * 37) Jinzler
 * 38) * The second paragraph of the article appears to have been almost directly copied from the TOR codex. This is a serious breach of Wookieepedia's copyright policy; you need to re-write the section in your own words, or else the entire paragraph will have to be removed. --Jinzler 09:44, March 11, 2012 (UTC)
 * 39) **Done, thanks for that advice.--Obnoxioussith 14:46, March 11, 2012 (UTC)
 * 40) *The article is now longer than 250 words and is therefore ineligible to become a "Comprehensive article." However, do not despair, because if you are genuinely committed to improving the article then once you have dealt with the above objections, you may want to consider nominating it as a goood article. If you require any advice or assistance, then feel free to ask myself or any of the above reviewers. Cheers. --Jinzler 19:53, March 11, 2012 (UTC)
 * 41) **Thanks for that advice. I think I need to replay the flashpoint to get some quotes and more detail on Arho and his character. I also think it would probably be good to look at current GAs to see what standard needs to be reached. Thanks for the help.--Obnoxioussith 20:38, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Comments
 * Just a note to the ECs, this has had unaddressed objections for over a week now and so should be archived as unsuccessful soon.  nayayen ★talk  01:12, March 20, 2012 (UTC)
 * I've left a message on his talk page, so we'll see what becomes of it over the next few days.&mdash; Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:20, March 20, 2012 (UTC)

Unidentified Rebel sergeant

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 07:37, March 11, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: "The Marines have landed and have the situation well in hand!"

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Support
 * 1) Nice work, though try to get the first edition to see if there is any more info. 501st Dogma Republic_emblem.png( Comlink ) 13:05, March 13, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) *There wouldn't be more info. It's just a "the quote was there." NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 17:33, March 13, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) He forgot to call them monkeys. Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 17:07, March 16, 2012 (UTC)
 * 4) Great quote. Hanzo Hasashi 00:44, March 20, 2012 (UTC)

Object
 * The article refers to the sergeant as male, but the character is categorized as unidentified gender. Hanzo Hasashi 15:02, March 18, 2012 (UTC)
 * Fixed. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 03:47, March 19, 2012 (UTC)

Comments
 * Crap. I noticed a mistake after I slapped on the tag, as is my custom. I don't know if he was mentioned in the first edition. If someone has it, please let me know. I'll try to find a copy on Monday. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 07:42, March 11, 2012 (UTC)
 * I can't find a copy of the first editon anywhere. Anyone know a Wookieepedian to ask about WEG books? NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 03:47, March 19, 2012 (UTC)

Unidentified street musician

 * Nominated by:  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  02:37, March 12, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Another mozz box player for WP:ENT!

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Support
 * 1)  501st Dogma Republic_emblem.png( Comlink ) 18:39, March 12, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2)  nayayen ★talk  21:14, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Object

Comments
 * The individuals mentioned in the rpg seed section are the player characters.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  02:37, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Unidentified resort club (Bespin)

 * Nominated by:  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  18:21, March 12, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: The club...

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Support
 * 1)  nayayen ★talk  21:14, March 12, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2)  501st Dogma Republic_emblem.png( Comlink ) 21:34, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Object

Comments
 * The individuals mentioned in the rpg seed section are the player characters.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  18:21, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Unidentified criminal (Bespin resort club)

 * Nominated by:  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  18:21, March 12, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: The crook...

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Support
 * 1)  501st Dogma Republic_emblem.png( Comlink ) 18:40, March 12, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2)  nayayen ★talk  21:14, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Object

Comments
 * The individuals mentioned in the rpg seed section are the player characters.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  18:21, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Unidentified speeder (Bespin resort club)

 * Nominated by:  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  18:21, March 12, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: The getaway car...

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Support
 * 1)  501st Dogma Republic_emblem.png( Comlink ) 18:42, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Object

Comments
 * The individuals mentioned in the rpg seed section are the player characters.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  18:21, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Unidentified rebel group

 * Nominated by: &mdash; Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 02:02, March 17, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:TCW IS OVER FOR NOW! For WP:VG.

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Support
 * 1)  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 11:14, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

Object

Comments
 * I didn't mention the stormtrooper or HJ-377 in the body since I don't think they should be mentioned specifically aside from the Empire.&mdash; Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 02:02, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

Zug Tassik

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 11:14, March 17, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: One of Three

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Support
 * 1)  nayayen ★talk  12:00, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Just needs something about the holo image not allowing skin or eye color identification, so people don't assume he's blue. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 14:22, March 18, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) *Adressed.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:54, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

Omar Toggs

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 11:27, March 17, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Two of Three

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Support
 * 1)  nayayen ★talk  12:00, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) With Toggs, I think it'd be safe to say he had green skin in the body and infobox, but mention that his eye color is ambiguous in the BTS. Other than that, he looks good. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 14:19, March 18, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) *Adressed. Thanks for the review.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 16:17, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

Unidentified bounty hunter (Imperial tip)

 * Nominated by: Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 16:56, March 17, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Hope he gave 15%

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Support
 * 1) Please take a look at my copy-edit for things to look for in the future. Otherwise, great job. It's cool to see these little one-mention, hard-to-find articles.&mdash; Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:47, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

Object

Comments
 * 1) WP:VG. Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 16:56, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

Teronto

 * Nominated by:  nayayen ★talk  11:18, March 18, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: And so begins my mini-spree of Labor Pains articles.

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Support
 * 1) Tinwe (comlink) 14:25, March 21, 2012 (UTC)

Object

Comments

T'gronish

 * Nominated by:  nayayen ★talk  11:18, March 18, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Because it is easy to make articles on near-identical subjects that aren't straight copy and pastes of each other.

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Support
 * 1)  Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 02:03, March 20, 2012 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Please ensure that you add the relevant categories, Category:Individuals of unidentified species, Category:Unidentified gender, etc to these articles. --Eyrezer 19:37, March 20, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) *Added to both articles. Thanks for the review, Eyrezer.  nayayen ★talk  20:12, March 20, 2012 (UTC)

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