Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Chertyl Ruluwoor (Human)


 * ''The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a featured article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.

(5 Inqs/3 Users/8 Total)
Support
 * 1) I was bored. --  AdmirableAckbar  [Talk] 20:57, 21 November 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Thefourdotelipsis 23:06, 23 November 2007 (UTC)
 * 3)  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  19:03, 24 November 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) --  Darth Culator  (Talk) 03:49, 27 November 2007 (UTC)
 * 5) Green Tentacle (Talk) 00:10, 29 November 2007 (UTC)
 * 6) "She often stood around in a multi-purpose hotel hall, along with several other Corellian residents."&mdash;A NPC? Really? No...  &mdash;Graestan ( This party's over ) 03:30, 30 November 2007 (UTC)
 * 7) Although I shed Mount Sorrow-like tears over her P&T :(. Hobbes ( Tiger's Lair ) 04:28, 2 December 2007 (UTC)
 * 8) Imperialles 17:28, 11 December 2007 (UTC)

Oppose
 * Please rephrase the final sentence so it doesn't read "her final fate is unknown" (or something similar understood to mean that). Otherwise, I'd suggest removing it.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 21:49, 21 November 2007 (UTC)
 * Removed it. --  AdmirableAckbar  [Talk] 22:39, 21 November 2007 (UTC)
 * Cut the stuff about her hairstyle and how Leia used it. Thefourdotelipsis 07:36, 22 November 2007 (UTC)
 * Addressed.

Comments

'''Approved by Inquisitorius 19:02, 11 December 2007 (UTC)
 * As it's pretty obvious this character was supposed to be Chertyl Ruluwoor (Selonian), and in the Bts section you mention this, would it be possible to expand (even only slightly), the Chertyl Ruluwoor (Selonian) article? Infobox/sectioning etc. Just a thought, throw it right back at me otherwise :P Harrar 23:18, 21 November 2007 (UTC)
 * Well, it's not really to do with this article, but I'll be re-reading Wedge's Gamble soon, so I'll try to expand it then. --  AdmirableAckbar  [Talk] 23:22, 21 November 2007 (UTC)
 * Not an objection per se, but the writing doesn't quite cut it for me. —Xwing328 (Talk) 22:57, 5 December 2007 (UTC)
 * I'll see if I can improve it. Are there any specific sections/sentences that you're not fond of? --  AdmirableAckbar  [Talk] 08:52, 6 December 2007 (UTC)