Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Ackmena


 * ''The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a featured article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.

Ackmena

 * Nominated by: Thefourdotelipsis 08:37, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: And then there's Ackmena. RIP, Beatrice Arthur. Femputer. Golden Girl. Space bartender.

(5 Inqs/7 Users/12 Total)
Support
 * 1) I gave it an in-depth skimming but overall I'm voting in memory of Ms. Arthur. RestInPeace. Darth Trayus  Sith_Emblem.svg ( Trayus Academy ) 10:03, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) Great article; RIP Ms. Arthur.  CC7567  (talk) 17:28, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) Come back soon, I'll be waiting! Green Tentacle (Talk) 22:46, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 23:22, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) She knows how it feels to be a fembot living in a manbot's manputer's world. -  Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 10:53, 27 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 6)  &mdash;Lucius malfoy7  Nute777.png ( Give it up for Lil' 'Soka Tano, ladies and gents! ) 01:22, 28 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 7) R.I.P. Bea Arthur. Master JonathanJedi Council Chambers 01:26, 28 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 8) A great article. Humorous and amorous. Dark Father 11:31, 29 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 9) Goodnight, Dorothy. :(  Graestan ( Talk ) 03:03, 3 May 2009 (UTC)
 * 10) &mdash;  Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 03:37, 4 May 2009 (UTC)
 * 11) Great work, 4Dot. -- Darth tom [[Image:Imperial Emblem.svg|20px]] (Imperial Intelligence)  10:34, 4 May 2009 (UTC)
 * 12) QuiGonJinn There's always a bigger fish. 12:00, 4 May 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Somebody's gotta object:
 * 2) * "based on the life of Alliance war hero, Luke Skywalker.": Specify which Alliance.
 * 3) **Specified.
 * 4) * "due to subversive activities, a curfew was to be placed on the Tatooine system": What kind of "subversive activities"?
 * 5) **Not specified in the source. Thefourdotelipsis 01:22, 28 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 6) * "They eventually formed their own troupe,": Does this troupe have an article? If so, it should be linked; if not then a redlink might be warranted.
 * 7) **Redlinked.
 * 8) * "Their production inspired Myhr Rho, a regular, to start up a tour of Tatooine [&hellip;]" A regular of what?
 * 9) **Specified.
 * 10) * "In addition to her other skills, Ackmena was considered a expert in mixology.": A bit of explanation as to what is meant by "mixology" needs to be added.
 * 11) **Tweaked.
 * 12) *Otherwise very good. Master JonathanJedi Council Chambers 00:06, 28 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 13) **Thanks for the review. Thefourdotelipsis 01:22, 28 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 14) I suppose I'd change the wording in the P&T from its more speculative tone about what Ackmena was like all the time to what she did in these specific instances.  Graestan ( Talk ) 02:18, 3 May 2009 (UTC)
 * Ah, good point. Fixed. Thefourdotelipsis 02:28, 3 May 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) I think some context is needed for Caldera Righim, Teak Sidbam and Myhr Rho.  QuiGonJinn There's always a bigger fish. 20:07, 3 May 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) *They've already got context in preceding sentences. "She tried to get the patrons to leave," "The patrons began to leave," etc. Thefourdotelipsis 22:45, 3 May 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) **I only wanted you to establish their species, as you did with everyone else in the article. I've done it myself. QuiGonJinn There's always a bigger fish. 12:00, 4 May 2009 (UTC)

Comments


 * 1) I see that there are only two images. If you have CSWE, there's a fair Ackmena pic next to her entry.  &mdash;Lucius malfoy7  Nute777.png ( Give it up for Lil' 'Soka Tano, ladies and gents! ) 01:22, 28 April 2009 (UTC)