Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Eddel


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Eddel

 * Nominated by: --Eyrezer 13:00, May 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Classic WEG goodness

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1) ~ SavageBob 19:29, May 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Imperialles 22:45, May 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3)  CC7567  (talk) 01:32, May 2, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) Toprawa and Ralltiir 20:47, May 7, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) Happened upon this while browsing the RCs. —Tommy  9281 20:58, May 7, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Three things:
 * 2) *Intro: "Having been prominent traders throughout the Trax sector under the Galactic Republic, they were decimated in a war against its successor, the Galactic Empire, and as a result, their number was reduced to a few thousand sentients, which were forced into slavery." A lot of commas here. Any way you can reword the sentence?
 * 3) *History: "a pleasant planet" Pleasant for who? This seems a little POV.
 * 4) *Eddel/Eddelians: If the singular form is Eddel, shouldn't that be used as the species' ethnonym instead of "Eddelian"? Examples from the article: "Eddelian starships, carrying Eddelian traders"; "Most Eddelian technology".
 * 5) *Other than that, good stuff. --Imperialles 19:38, May 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * 6) **Changed the first two and discussed the third over IRC. --Eyrezer 22:39, May 1, 2010 (UTC)

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