Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Unidentified Muun youngling


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Unidentified Muun youngling

 * Nominated by: 501st Dogma Republic_emblem.png( Comlink ) 21:48, March 7, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Poor guy, splattered on the courtyard floor...

(2 ECs/5 Users/7 Total)
Support
 * 1) Best novel evah! Plagueis327 22:50, March 7, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2)  nayayen ★talk  09:00, March 9, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) Tinwe (comlink) 09:54, March 9, 2012 (UTC)
 * 4) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 17:08, March 9, 2012 (UTC)
 * 5) Poor kid.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  23:51, March 9, 2012 (UTC)
 * 6)  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 09:56, March 10, 2012 (UTC)
 * 7)  graestan ( talk ) 16:20, March 16, 2012 (UTC)
 * 8) Since I apparently f#c%e8 with this.... Also, it's good to have comprehensive articles on ridiculously trivial stuff, because, you know, "working our way upwards." --R5-X41238-G8-R3-3124-D2 16:29, March 16, 2012 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Rubedo
 * 2) *If you have questions about my changes, feels free to ask. One I want to point out specifically though is that unidentified articles are to be started with "A" rather than "This" because people think it works better. Just FYI.
 * 3) **Thanks for the heads up. 501st Dogma Republic_emblem.png( Comlink ) 00:06, March 8, 2012 (UTC)
 * 4) * Context on Caar Damask.
 * 5) **Added 501st Dogma Republic_emblem.png( Comlink ) 00:06, March 8, 2012 (UTC)
 * 6) * "who would eventually be known to a select few as Darth Plagueis." Is this really necessary to this character's article?
 * 7) **Removed 501st Dogma Republic_emblem.png( Comlink ) 00:06, March 8, 2012 (UTC)
 * 8) * Link to Damask clan somewhere in the body.
 * 9) **Done (added before "residence") 501st Dogma Republic_emblem.png( Comlink ) 00:06, March 8, 2012 (UTC)
 * 10) * "Early in his life," This is phrased oddly since it reads like he died shortly thereafter, making it actually later in his lifespan.
 * 11) **Changed
 * 12) * NaruHina Talk Anakinsolo.png 23:25, March 7, 2012 (UTC)
 * 13) **Thanks for the review. 501st Dogma Republic_emblem.png( Comlink ) 00:06, March 8, 2012 (UTC)
 * 14) * Could you be specific in the prose that Hego was using the Force? Was it an accidental use? NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 02:43, March 8, 2012 (UTC)
 * 15) **Fixed. Hego know he had "power" over other younglings then, so it was intentional. 501st Dogma Republic_emblem.png( Comlink ) 01:35, March 9, 2012 (UTC)
 * 16) Lee's charge
 * 17) * Date of death and place of death in the infobox?  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 14:45, March 8, 2012 (UTC)
 * 18) **No specific year given, so I'm not sure when exactly it took place. 501st Dogma Republic_emblem.png( Comlink ) 01:35, March 9, 2012 (UTC)
 * 19) ***Do you know a time (e.g. between 200 and 100 BBY) when it took place? It would be fine if you place just an approximately date.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 12:42, March 9, 2012 (UTC)
 * 20) ****That as specific as it can get. I have not done an age range before, so it might be formatted wrong. 501st Dogma Republic_emblem.png( Comlink ) 21:11, March 9, 2012 (UTC)
 * 21) *****Perfect.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 09:56, March 10, 2012 (UTC)

Comments
 * 1) I'll create the redlink soon. 501st Dogma Republic_emblem.png( Comlink ) 21:48, March 7, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) *Red links killed with the help of R5-X41238-G8-R3-3124-D2 501st Dogma Republic_emblem.png( Comlink ) 23:19, March 7, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) Was he called a "youngling" in the book? NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 02:43, March 8, 2012 (UTC)
 * 4) *Yes, I'm pretty sure he was. I'll check it over later, but if I remember correctly it stated a "Muun youngling". 501st Dogma Republic_emblem.png( Comlink ) 01:35, March 9, 2012 (UTC)