Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Vuchelle


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Vuchelle

 * Nominated by: --Eyrezer 03:34, 11 December 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

(2 ACs/3 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie ) 00:36, 14 December 2008 (UTC)
 * 2)  IFYLOFD  ( And now, young Skywalker, you will die. ) 02:02, 17 December 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) Wow, this is actually 250 words? Cull Tremayne 00:46, 19 December 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) SinisterSamurai 06:33, 19 December 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) Toprawa and Ralltiir 20:36, 31 December 2008 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Mention the deaths of the two Jedi and the Judiciaries in the body. All you have at the moment is "some losses" in the intro.  SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie ) 10:04, 13 December 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) *Sure, although I'm trying to be careful just to include information appropriate to a Planet article, and keep it different from the forthcoming Battle article that depicts that same event... --Eyrezer 16:44, 13 December 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) **Ah. Good luck with it. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie ) 00:36, 14 December 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) Toprawa:
 * 5) * Since I'm assuming no battle exists for this skirmish, I think it would be good to create a pipelinked redlink someplace for its future creation.
 * 6) **Actually it is already linked in the intro, just wasn't in the body. --Eyrezer 04:09, 25 December 2008 (UTC)
 * 7) * Can we say who believed this? The Republic? The media? "The last of these fighters was believed to have been caught in Vuchelle's gravity well and burned up on re-entry."
 * 8) **A bit added
 * 9) * Why, specifically, are we guessing at this? "It is likely they are in the same system." Toprawa and Ralltiir 19:02, 19 December 2008 (UTC)
 * 10) **Added a bit of reasoning. Let me know if you think it is too OR. --Eyrezer 04:18, 28 December 2008 (UTC)
 * 11) ***Unless something says that the pirates operated exclusively out of their own system or something, I would just cut it. Toprawa and Ralltiir 23:18, 28 December 2008 (UTC)
 * 12) ****Cut. --Eyrezer 15:40, 29 December 2008 (UTC)

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