Wookieepedia:Good article nominations



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What is a Good article?
A Good article is an article that adheres to quality standards, but cannot reach FA status due to its limited content.

A Good article must&hellip;
 * 1) &hellip;be well-written and detailed.
 * 2) &hellip;be unbiased, non-point of view.
 * 3) &hellip;be sourced with all available sources and appearances.
 * 4) &hellip;follow the Manual of Style, Layout Guide, and all other policies on Wookieepedia.
 * 5) &hellip;following the review process, be stable, i.e., does not change significantly from day to day and is not the subject of ongoing edit wars. This does not apply to vandalism and protection or semi-protection as a result of vandalism.
 * 6) &hellip;not be tagged with any sort of improvement tags (i.e. more sources, expand, etc).
 * 7) &hellip;have a proper lead that gives a good summary of the topic if the length of the article supports it. This is essential in articles over 1000 words but may not be appropriate on articles with limited content.
 * 8) &hellip;not be tagged due to an excessive number of redlinks.
 * 9) &hellip;have significant information, especially a biography for character articles. For articles under 1000 words in length, comprehensive detail is required with all information covered from all sources and appearances. For articles over 1000 words, broad coverage addressing all major aspects of the topic is sufficient.
 * 10) &hellip;be completely referenced for all available material and sources. See Sourcing for more information.
 * 11) &hellip;have all quotes and images sourced.
 * 12) &hellip;provide at least one quote on the article if available. A leading quote at the beginning of the article would be preferred, though not required if no quotes are available. Although quotes may be placed in the body of the article, a maximum of one quote is allowed at the beginning of each section.
 * 13) &hellip;ideally include a "personality and traits" section on all character articles if information is available.
 * 14) &hellip;ideally include a "powers and abilities" section on relevant character articles, especially for Force-sensitive characters where said powers and/or abilities are stipulated.
 * 15) &hellip;include a reasonable number of images of good quality if said images are available.
 * 16) &hellip;counting the introduction and "Behind the scenes" material, be at least 250 words long (not including captions, quotes, or headers, etc).

Nomination of Good articles
To nominate an article for Good article status, list it here. Nominated articles must meet all sixteen requirements stated above. If an article has a total of five votes, at least two of which are from AgriCorps or Inquisitorius members, after at least a week since it was nominated (beginning the day of its nomination) and no objections (or the objections have been stricken or overridden), the article will be considered a "Good article" and tagged with the template. The talk page will also be tagged with the GA template. For complete instructions on archiving nominations please see here. Also remember to add GAnom at the top of the article you are nominating.

Star Wars: Knights of the Old Republic

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk [[Image:Anakinsolo.png|20px]] 03:03, 25 August 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination Comments: I think it may finally be ready... NaruHina  Talk [[Image:Anakinsolo.png|20px]] 03:03, 25 August 2008 (UTC)

(0 AC/2 users/2 total)
Support
 * 1) I strongly feel that this is a good nomination. KotOR's article page was in something of shambles several months ago with a badly written, inconsistently tensed synopsis, revealing of plot details at the beginning, etc. The fact of the matter is though, a large amount of improvement has been done since then and it is a much better article than it was then. While I don't think it's worthy of featured article status, I definitely see it as worthy of being a "good article." Niirfa-sa 23:58, 5 September 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) After all my grammatical nit-picking, I think it's of GA standard. Soresumakashi 06:47, 18 September 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) I strongly concur. It's well-written, and it's greatly improved.

Oppose **A specialist —either a normal Republic soldier, scout, or scoundrel. Suggest changing specialist and all other cases of it to player instead. There should be no space between specialist and the mdash. 22:32, 17 September 2008 (UTC) **The padawan then follows this map to a krayt dragon's cave and assisted a local hunter, Komad Fortuna, in killing it. Assisted should be assists. **The party baits, finds the beast, and kills it, retrieved the blade from its hide. Suggest rephrasing **The party was leaving the base with droid in hand when they were confronted by Selkath authorities with reports of shots fired within the embassy. Was should be is and were should be are. *Revelation aboard the Leviathan **''The potential students of the academy prove their worth by performing various tasks and gaining prestige. Some of the challenges are martial in nature while others were mental, but all require a certain commitment to the Sith ideals''. Prove should be proved, are should be were and require should be required. **Revan discovers the Rakatans were divided into several tribes. Were should be are. **Revan was able to break Bastila's resolve and persuaded her to turn back to the light. Was should be is and persuaded should be persuades. Yay! I'm done! Have fun fixing the article! Soresumakashi 10:41, 17 September 2008 (UTC)
 * 1) An excess of redlinks and the synopsis needs to be written in present tense.  Drewton  [[Image:Era-old.png|20px]] ( Drewton's Holocron ) 14:14, 25 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) *There is no limit towards how many redlinks can be in a GA. DC 15:50, 25 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) **Additionally, in-universe articles are to be written in past tense, per the Manual of Style. // ~mikah~  01:44, 28 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) **Redlinks I was wrong about then, but a synopsis is always written in present tense. Look at the film articles. Drewton  [[Image:Era-old.png|20px]] ( Drewton's Holocron ) 13:49, 28 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) ***Again, directly from the Manual of Style itself, "All in-universe articles should be in past tense, per 'A long time ago in a galaxy far, far away...'" Only out-of-universe articles (ie, George Lucas, John Williams) should be written in present tense. Despite whatever tense the film articles are written in, if its not past tense, its wrong. // ~mikah~  14:09, 28 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 6) ****This is not an in-universe article. Stylistically, plot summaries for anything almost anywhere are in the present tense&mdash;the MoS doesn't contradict this in any way, because this is an OOU article. "In contrast, articles about books, movies, games, or other real-life Star Wars material should obviously be written from an out-of-universe perspective, but should still be noted as such." Our OOU FAs also use this system, and so should this article. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 14:20, 28 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 7) *****I see what you mean now, I misread what I was reading. So that would be a prominent problem with the article. I'll go ahead and try to fix as much as I can for now. And sorry about the confusion, Drewton. // ~mikah~  14:27, 28 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 8) ******Fixed NaruHina  Talk[[Image:Anakinsolo.png|20px]] 03:59, 30 August 2008 (UTC)
 * There is no mention I can see that the soundtrack was composed by Jeremy Soule --Jinzler 09:33, 31 August 2008 (UTC)
 * Addressed NaruHina  Talk [[Image:Anakinsolo.png|20px]] 06:39, 1 September 2008 (UTC)
 * 1) This does sound kind of strict, but these are meant to be a showcase of our very best articles, so here goes:
 * Trapped on Taris
 * on the Hammerhead-class capital ship, the Endar Spire. Hammerhead should be in italics.
 * When the player wakes, Carth informs him of the situation and that they needed to find and rescue Bastila, whose escape pod had crash-landed somewhere on the planet. Needed should be need and had should be has.
 * and the slums of Lower City. Of Lower City should be of the Lower City.
 * impose a security lock down. Lock down is and should be one word.
 * that has been stolen from them by the Vulkars. Has should be had.
 * Ironically, when they found her. Found should be find.
 * Zaalbar has been captured. Has should be had.
 * The group venture into the sewers, the trio track down and rescue Zaalbar from the slavers. Suggest rephrasing.
 * They Raid the Vulkar Base. Raid should not be capitalized.
 * Afterwards, they return to Gadon and the Beks, they stay the night before going to the swoop race the next morning. Suggest rephrasing
 * At the swoop race, the neophyte racer manages to win the race. Could we just say that the player won the race? There are too many uses of race, and neophyte is a bad word.
 * Before he could accept his prize however, Brejik broke the deal at the last moment, claiming the player has cheated by using the prototype accelerator. Could should be can and broke should be breaks.
 * Bastila breaks free and a fight ensued. Ensued should be ensues.
 * Brejik and his Vulkar thugs could not defeat them and die in the lightfight. Lightfight is defined as a fight where both sides use blasters. Bastila was using a double vibro and we don't know what Revan used. And the sentence needs a full stop. Basic grammar here.
 * Canderous recommends the leader of the party to Davik for hire as a ploy. Last I heard, a ploy was a gambit.
 * It can also mean "trick." NaruHina  Talk
 * Other than that, fixed. NaruHina  Talk [[Image:Anakinsolo.png|20px]] 23:31, 17 September 2008 (UTC)
 * Second Star Map: Tatooine
 * As he and the others left the cave. Left should be leave.
 * Fixed NaruHina  Talk [[Image:Anakinsolo.png|20px]] 22:15, 17 September 2008 (UTC)
 * Third Star Map: Kashyyyk
 * As a reward for their aid, Freyyr gives his only surviving son Bacca's Ceremonial Blade and allows him to come out of exile and was no longer branded a madclaw. Suggest rephrasing.
 * Shortly thereafter, the Wookiees of the village united under their new chieftain, Freyyr, and rebelled against Czerka with the aid of the party. United should be Unite and rebelled should be rebel.
 * Fixed NaruHina  Talk [[Image:Anakinsolo.png|20px]] 22:32, 17 September 2008 (UTC)
 * Fourth Star Map: Manaan
 * The two were the only Human scientists still alive and were trapped in the facility. Both were's should be ares
 * the padawan persuades them to tell him what they knew. Knew should be know.
 * which was responsible for the Selkath's insanity. Was should be is.
 * Fixed NaruHina  Talk [[Image:Anakinsolo.png|20px]] 23:07, 17 September 2008 (UTC)
 * For every question he answers incorrectly, Bastila was tortured. Was should be is.
 * Meanwhile the padawan's pick is able to infiltrate the Leviathan. Suggest rewording padawan's pick.
 * Seeing nothing else that they could do. Could should be can.
 * Fixed NaruHina  Talk [[Image:Anakinsolo.png|20px]] 22:32, 17 September 2008 (UTC)
 * Fifth Star Map: Korriban
 * Are you sure that should be in past tense? NaruHina  Talk [[Image:Anakinsolo.png|20px]] 22:09, 17 September 2008 (UTC)
 * Sorry, my mistake. Both are acceptable. Soresumakashi 06:47, 18 September 2008 (UTC)
 * Crash-landing on an unknown world
 * Though he was required to enter alone, Juhani and Jolee, after receiving a vision that warned them that Revan was in danger, joined him at the last minute against the Elders' protests. Warned should be warn, both was and was should be is and is. Joined should be join.
 * They had the vision before which showed them that Revan is in danger.
 * Revan and the others joined the Republic's assault on the Star Forge. Joined should be join.
 * Fixed NaruHina  Talk [[Image:Anakinsolo.png|20px]] 22:51, 17 September 2008 (UTC)
 * The Star Forge
 * Fixed NaruHina  Talk [[Image:Anakinsolo.png|20px]] 22:09, 17 September 2008 (UTC)

From the Pasta Bowl of Fiolli: &mdash;  Master Aban Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 22:35, 26 September 2008 (UTC) &mdash; Master Aban Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 17:03, 22 October 2008 (UTC)
 * First off, the article isn't sourced fully. In fact, it isn't even 75% sourced. The first citation I found was the last paragraph of section five. Every section outside of the intro needs to be sourced.
 * I would like to emphasize that this nomination will not be approved by the AgriCorps until everything is source, including the infobox.  Master Aban Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 17:03, 22 October 2008 (UTC)
 * I don't know about the rest, but for reference sections like plot summary wouldn't need ref tags, as they are self-sourcing. - Lord Hydronium 16:51, 28 October 2008 (UTC)
 * Also, the infobox is now sourced. NaruHina  Talk [[Image:Anakinsolo.png|14px]] 01:35, 31 October 2008 (UTC)
 * "While KotOR does not have as much evident cut content as its sequel, Star Wars Knights of the Old Republic II: The Sith Lords, it is still present." &mdash; OR. Reword or find a citation for this.
 * I personally don't feel that qualifys as OR in that it is a lead in to the cut content and we need a separate article for kotor2 cut content. NaruHina  Talk [[Image:Anakinsolo.png|20px]] 03:29, 28 September 2008 (UTC)
 * I strongly beg to differ. If you are inferring or have deduced that this game has less cut content and this is not supported anywhere else, then it is OR. Please find a citation or reword the sentence.  Master Aban Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 05:29, 1 October 2008 (UTC)
 * Is this citation good? NaruHina  Talk [[Image:Anakinsolo.png|14px]] 13:42, 3 October 2008 (UTC)
 * I'm sorry, it is not. If you can find documentation that compares the cut content, then I will allow it. Otherwise, there is no quantifiable way of determining which would have included more.  Master Aban Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 17:03, 22 October 2008 (UTC)
 * Removed NaruHina  Talk [[Image:Anakinsolo.png|14px]] 03:00, 2 November 2008 (UTC)
 * "It features the planet Sleheyron&hellip;" What is it? The game? Sleheyron is not in the game. Reword.
 * Reworded. NaruHina  Talk [[Image:Anakinsolo.png|20px]] 03:29, 28 September 2008 (UTC)
 * "The existence of a cut planet can be also deduced&hellip;" &mdash; OR.
 * Again, it leads into it but reworded. NaruHina  Talk [[Image:Anakinsolo.png|20px]] 03:29, 28 September 2008 (UTC)
 * Same as before: Find a citation or reword. Master Aban Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 05:29, 1 October 2008 (UTC)
 * I did reword it. NaruHina  Talk [[Image:Anakinsolo.png|14px]] 13:42, 3 October 2008 (UTC)
 * I added a lot of fact tags to the page where there was definite missing of citation. Please look into these.
 * Section six has too many short paragraphs please restructure this section.
 * There is no source list. There are many KotOR supplements that are OOU which can be used to further beef up this article.
 * There are two very important ones: here and here.
 * Plus, Chronicles probably has some information as to further development and tying in storylines.
 * Added NaruHina  Talk [[Image:Anakinsolo.png|20px]] 03:29, 28 September 2008 (UTC)
 * Ok, so there is a basic source list. Now, the citations from these documents are very important.  Master Aban Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 05:29, 1 October 2008 (UTC)
 * The plot which is described in section two is very much a play-by-play of the game. While this isn't necessary bad, it is too detailed and only one means of game completion.
 * There is no mention that planets can be completed in any order.
 * From atop the synopsis: "(Note: This is based on the canonical male light side version of the game and assumes that the planets are visited in the order Dantooine, Tatooine, Kashyyyk, Manaan and Korriban. Gender, Force alignment, order of planets visited and other variables can differ depending on the input of the player.)" NaruHina  Talk [[Image:Anakinsolo.png|20px]] 05:20, 28 September 2008 (UTC)
 * Ok, I missed that. My apologies. However, you should use the gameLS and endgame tags as needed throughout the article. The further detailing of this can be left where you have it, but I wouldn't use "Note:" or put it in parenthesis.  Master Aban Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 05:29, 1 October 2008 (UTC)
 * There is no mention that Calo Nord can appear in multiple places, as can Darth Bandon.
 * Addressed in the Alternate Stories NaruHina  Talk [[Image:Anakinsolo.png|20px]] 05:20, 28 September 2008 (UTC)
 * The middle of this section lacks pictures and the ones clustered above are too close together.
 * Addressed NaruHina  Talk [[Image:Anakinsolo.png|14px]] 13:42, 3 October 2008 (UTC)
 * In that case, could you define the "middle" of the article. NaruHina  Talk [[Image:Anakinsolo.png|14px]] 03:00, 2 November 2008 (UTC)
 * There is no section about primary characters. Characters are listed, but not explained with relation to their role in the game. Please see Star Wars: Tales of the Jedi for a good example of how this is done.
 * There is now a budding main character section, albeit still under construction. NaruHina  Talk [[Image:Anakinsolo.png|14px]] 08:15, 11 October 2008 (UTC)
 * Finished. NaruHina  Talk [[Image:Anakinsolo.png|14px]] 23:42, 14 October 2008 (UTC)
 * Honestly, this is just from a cursory look. I really didn't read too much of the article. Once these things have been addressed, I'll be happy to look at it again.
 * Two other things before I take another look at the nomination:
 * There is a lot of information missing from the article about conception, creation and production, supplemental media, and the critical reaction seems to be bare bones. Please take a look again at Star Wars: Tales of the Jedi to see the structure. I really want to see "Conception," "Production," and "(Supplemental) Media" sections. Also, I would like to see the different story arcs to have the seealso template used to link to the various incidents, from Attack on the Endar Spire and Rescue of Bastila Shan to Skirmish aboard the Leviathan and the final battles.
 * I felt it superfluous but I'll try. NaruHina  Talk [[Image:Anakinsolo.png|14px]] 13:16, 24 October 2008 (UTC)
 * Youtube is not a source. Youtube might show a possible outcome, but should not be used as a source. Instead, please cite the game and the scene it comes from. Then, if you feel it is necessary, show an alternate link to Youtube to highlight a possible outcome.
 * Fixed. NaruHina  Talk [[Image:Anakinsolo.png|14px]] 13:09, 28 October 2008 (UTC)

Comments
 * I'm pretty sure the excess redlink template should be at the top of the article, as per wookieepedia's page layout policies. Soresumakashi 06:47, 18 September 2008 (UTC)
 * Moved NaruHina  Talk [[Image:Anakinsolo.png|20px]] 21:07, 19 September 2008 (UTC)

Yeeru Chivkyrie

 * Nominated by:  Pranay Sobusk  ~  Talk to me  17:02, 9 October 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: This is my first GAN, so it's probably not the best article on this site, but I will do a lot to bring this article up to GA standards.

(3 AC/1 users/4 total)
Support Oppose
 * 1)  IFYLOFD  ( And now, young Skywalker, you will die. ) 21:01, 23 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) -  Cavalier One ( Squadron channel ) 16:05, 30 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) Nice article for your first GAN, Sobusk :)  Greyman ( Talk ) 21:16, 5 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) I couldn't resist emerging from depths of the internet to support this because my 1st GA was from Allegiance too...  Aqua  Unasi  22:13, 5 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 1) Hi Sobusk. Nice to see you're trying for a GA. A few things:
 * 2) *In the intro it would be good to mention what Republic Redux is.
 * 3) **Addressed
 * 4) * "In 0 ABY he wanted Rebel Alliance to join Governor Barshnis..." This doesn't quite make sense. I think there might be a couple of words missing. You also should mention in the intro who or what Disra is. At the moment it is unclear.
 * 5) **Addressed
 * 6) * You also need to mention what the "negotiation" is. --Eyrezer 00:50, 11 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 7) **Addressed. Thank you for the review.  Pranay Sobusk  ~  Talk to me  09:32, 12 October 2008 (UTC)


 * 1) From the squadron briefing of Cavalier One:
 * 2) * In the intro, mention should be made of Darth Vader's deployment to Shelkonwa to lead the search.
 * 3) **Addressed
 * 4) * Mention should be made of Chivkyrie's social standing within the Adarian caste system at the start of the biography.
 * 5) **Addressed
 * 6) * What question did Leia pose that caused Disra to leave the meeting?
 * 7) **Addressed
 * 8) * They fled and, against their will, he stayed on his home planet with Organa. - against who's will? did Chivkyrie want to leave the planet as well?
 * 9) **Addressed
 * 10) * Then, he brought her to a tapcaf run by the Mungra Vicria, where he had got her a job before. - do you mean that Leia was working at the tapcaf prior to the meeting with Disra, and that Chivkyrie arranged it? If so, this needs to be mentioned earlier in the article.
 * 11) **Addressed
 * 12) * Context is needed on how Organa attempted to save a child in the night.
 * 13) **Addressed
 * 14) * Context is needed on the catacombs - where are they, etc.
 * 15) **Addressed. Thank you for the review and especially for cleaning up. The things you said are still some weaknesses I have, but I'm working on it.  Pranay Sobusk  ~  Talk to me  20:09, 13 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 16) *Nice to see a new user on the GA page - however, I would check your word usage and grammar. There were several missing words, or words used in place of others that had similar meaning but were not quite correct. Although I understood the majority of the article, other readers may have difficulty. I have cleaned up the article, and encourage you to take a look at the changes to better understand what I mean. This is not meant as discouragement&mdash;far from it&mdash;and I hope you do not take it as such. - Cavalier One ( Squadron channel ) 12:10, 13 October 2008 (UTC)

Get that done, and you have my vote.  IFYLOFD  ( And now, young Skywalker, you will die. ) 02:12, 19 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 1) From the Somewhat Well-lit Bedroom of IFYLOFD
 * 2) * Provide context on who Darth Vader is.
 * 3) **Addressed.
 * 4) * Who are Aurek, Besh and Cresh? Provide context.
 * 5) **Addressed.
 * 6) * Unsourced. Add references to your infobox and everything else.
 * 7) * Do we have quotes for Biography and Personality and traits?
 * 8) **I only found a good one for Personality and traits.
 * 9) * Check the article for spelling mistakes, please.
 * 10) **Addressed. Thank you for the review.

Comments

Darth Stryfe

 * Nominated by: DC 03:43, 12 October 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Meh, I was bored. And before anyone complains, there's nothing to add for a Powers and Abilities Section, so it isn't getting added.

(3 AC/2 users/5 total)
Support
 * 1) IT WAS ALL MY IDEA! :P IFYLOFD Talk 03:45, 12 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 2)  Graestan ( Talk ) 05:01, 14 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) -  Cavalier One ( Squadron channel ) 12:23, 20 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 4)  —Tommy9281 [[Image:Red lightsaber.png|20px]] ( Peace is a lie ) 14:33, 22 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) Looks like its going through. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie ) 09:12, 29 October 2008 (UTC)

Oppose Comments
 * 1) From Graestan the Cruel:
 * 2) * Another quote, please.
 * 3) * The caption to the image of Stryfe and Meeshal should be expanded beyond "Captain Meeshal."
 * 4) * A little context for why there were Yuuzhan Vong on Ossus, please.
 * 5) * Graestan ( Talk ) 12:05, 12 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 6) **All of the above are fixed. Thanks for the review. DC 14:30, 12 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 7) From the squadron briefing of Cavalier One:
 * 8) * In the intro - a little mention of his involvement in the destruction of the Ossus Jedi Temple is needed. Also, clarification on why Cade Skywalker was present in the Sith Temple on Coruscant is needed.
 * 9) * Succession box needs sourcing. - Cavalier One ( Squadron channel ) 10:13, 13 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 10) **All of the above are fixed. Thanks for the review. DC 20:56, 19 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 11) Soresu
 * 12) * Fixed some grammatical, tense and spelling errors.
 * 13) **And?
 * 14) * Make mention of his Sith Tatoos.
 * 15) **Done.
 * 16) * Needs sucession box for Hand.
 * 17) **See above.
 * 18) ***No you haven't. It needs a separate sucession box for Hand. You only have one for Fist at the moment. I would do it myself, but I'm hopeless at sourcing (one of the main reasons I review GA's but don't write them.)
 * 19) ****Err...wow...I kind of associated this objection with Cavalier's. My bad, and fixed. DC 00:35, 29 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 20) * I think there was something else, but I've forgotten it.
 * 21) **Okay...
 * 22) **Thanks for the review. DC 20:56, 19 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 23) BtS needs to be sourced that Duursema created him. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 12:09, 20 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 24) *Uhh....isn't that self-sourced by using the general Legacy title? I wouldn't know where to find the exact place where it says that Jan drew him. DC 00:35, 29 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 25) Toprawa:
 * 26) *The opening quote provides no context as to how that applies to Stryfe in any way. Some context would help in the attribution line. Toprawa and Ralltiir 18:02, 29 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 27) **Contextified. DC 19:29, 9 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 28) Grand Moff Tranner:
 * 29) *Perhaps a better image for the infobox? The current black-and-white one doesn't seem like a good choice.
 * 30) **That;s the best image I got. There are no other good shots of him.
 * 31) ***There are at least two headshots from his two appearances, I'm sure of that. Maybe a text bubble or two would need to be whitened out, but it would still be better than the current one. Grand Moff Tranner [[Image:Imperial Department of Military Research.svg|20px]] (Comlink) 19:43, 9 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 32) *I think there should also be a very brief mention about his lightsaber, since it doesn't appear to be made of yorik coral like all the other Sith lightsabers of the time. Grand Moff Tranner [[Image:Imperial Department of Military Research.svg|20px]] (Comlink) 22:28, 3 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 33) **That would be speculation, and I can't add it. Sorry. DC 19:29, 9 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 34) ***You positive about that? All the other Sith of the time do have coral lightsaber hilts. Grand Moff Tranner [[Image:Imperial Department of Military Research.svg|20px]] (Comlink) 19:43, 9 November 2008 (UTC)

Galney (Lady)

 * Nominated by:  IFYLOFD  ( And now, young Skywalker, you will die. ) 03:04, 28 October 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Now we have TWO Galney noms! BWAHAHAHAHA!

(2 AC/1 users/3 total)
Support
 * 1) DC 02:25, 29 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) You sure like to use commas a lot. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie ) 10:04, 29 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 3)  —Tommy9281 [[Image:Red lightsaber.png|20px]] ( Peace is a lie ) 04:01, 3 November 2008 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) DC
 * 2) * Mention in the info that Galney gave the info to her consort unknowingly.
 * 3) **Addressed.
 * 4) * Mention Ducha Galney in the intro as well, and give context to her.
 * 5) **Addressed.
 * 6) * Young Chume'da is POVish. Use other words to describe Allana.
 * 7) **Addressed.
 * 8) * Why did Galney burst out in anger to the GA providing a defense fleet?
 * 9) **Addressed.
 * 10) * I believe you could add a few more things to the P&T.
 * 11) **Addressed. Thanks for the review.  IFYLOFD  ( And now, young Skywalker, you will die. ) 02:20, 29 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 12) **Good article. DC 02:08, 29 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 13) Hammertime:
 * 14) * However, it was revealed that Galney had nothing to do with the assassination attempt, but had unknowingly given inside information to a consort who was a trator to the throne. We've already discussed this "a consort". Who was he/she the consort of? I let you slide on the article creaton for this individual on the Ducha nom, but I'm cracking the whip now.
 * 15) **Addressed.
 * 16) * Also, that sentence could be slightly reworded to read a little better.
 * 17) **Addressed.
 * 18) * Eliminate underlinking. Make sure things are linked once in the intro, and once upon first mention in the body.
 * 19) **Addressed.
 * 20) * Per Soresu up there. You sure do enjoy the use of commas. See if you can't substitute a few semicolons, or reword or split several sentences so that they aren't so long. If you need clarification/assistance, summon me to IRC.
 * 21) **Addressed.
 * 22) * ...Led by Galney's older sister, the Ducha of Terephon. What's Terephon? Only a single word of context is necessary.
 * 23) **Addressed.
 * 24) * You and I have also discussed quote formatting for two-person, single-line apiece exchanges. Please rectify.
 * 25) **Addressed.
 * 26) * I know his significance is probably minor at best, but who is Sergeant Darb? You inroduce him as though we already know who dude is. Was he a Hapan Sergeant? A crewman on the Anakin Solo? Please add a note of context there.
 * 27) **Addressed.
 * 28) * Soon after, the Battle of Hapes broke out. Soon after what? The prom? Christmas? Some context please ;)
 * 29) **Heh. Addressed. Thanks for the review.  IFYLOFD  ( And now, young Skywalker, you will die. ) 18:19, 2 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 30) *Good job, though Ducha Galney was more fun. —Tommy9281 [[Image:Red lightsaber.png|20px]] ( Peace is a lie ) 14:11, 2 November 2008 (UTC)

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Super Star Destroyer

 * Nominated by: VT-16 10:49, 28 October 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Here we go agaaain. I tried to rewrite most of it to simply reflect the various types and their histories, not list all the Executors and what they did. Hopefully it will pass "good" this time. :) VT-16 10:49, 28 October 2008 (UTC)

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 * 1) Toprawa
 * 2) *Many things are not sourced.
 * 3) *The article should include an infobox.
 * 4) *In this instance, intro sourcing is really unnecessary, and should be worked into the article proper.
 * 5) *These lists are really unnecessary. Rather, the article would benefit from a section that enumerates and briefly describes each SSD.
 * 6) *Source list should be in order by OOU publication date; additionally, the Source list seem woefully brief. I'm sure there are many more items, very likely with more information that could be included. Toprawa and Ralltiir 16:09, 28 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 7) *It seems like you're getting the right idea of what I'm referring to. In response to your comment below about each Executor-class ship going only in the Executor-class article, that, respectfully, is where you're mistaken. The significance of this article is its incredibly broad scope of information. It encompasses everything that is considered a Super Star Destroyer, down to the very last ship. For this article to be comprehensive, it should discuss each individual ship. Not in lurid detail, of course, but each one should be given its own brief topic. As an example of how this article could be best sectioned, look at the Rakehell Squadron article to see how each pilot of the squadron is given their own subsection. That could be applied here to each individual ship class, and then subsection by each individual ship of that class. Indeed, this article is going to be very long, by simple virtue of its very broad scope. Also, for the Appearances and Source lists, again, as a result of this article's broad coverage, these lists should identify every single appearance and source in which a Super Star Destroyer appears. That means every Executor source, every Iron Fist source, etc. Toprawa and Ralltiir 17:47, 29 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 8) IFYLOFD
 * 9) *Toprawa got most of my objections, but I do have one little thing. Give context on Palpatine. Who is he?  IFYLOFD  ( And now, young Skywalker, you will die. ) 19:38, 28 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 10) Your joking, right? The article breaks Rules 3, 4, 10, and it has no info box image. It certainly doesn't cover all the sources, it doesn't use all available references, and half the article is a list, breaking the MoS. The BtS needs to expanded, sourced, and removed of all unsourced speculation. I also believe that the info you deleted did more harm than good to the article, which could almost be counted as vandalism, since it was sourced, relevant information. Replace the info you deleted, though keep the info you added as well. Expand it greatly, and fix the numerous POV issues as well. DC 01:08, 29 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 11) Jinzler
 * 12) *The appearances are not in chronological order --Jinzler 22:43, 29 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 13) * SSDs do not appear in The Core of Corruption like the article says, one is mentioned --Jinzler 22:43, 29 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 14) * The Core of Corruption and Jaws of the Sarlacc in the appearances list should have the WizardsCite template, as they are from Wizards.com --Jinzler 22:43, 29 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 15) * An SSD appears in Allegiance, this is missing from the list of appearances --Jinzler 22:43, 29 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 16) *There are many other appearances missing --Jinzler 22:43, 29 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 17) **Please familiarize yourself with the clause, which your middle three objections fall under. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 23:10, 29 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 18) ***Sorry, I have now and I have addressed those issues --Jinzler 21:29, 2 November 2008 (UTC)

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 * Would the brief class descriptions go in the "characteristics" section? There's already 19 source present. There are not many left that I can remember. Most early sources just repeated info about the Executor much of which is now outdated. But other than that there's nothing else to add. VT-16 20:40, 28 October 2008 (UTC)
 * Added more info on each class in a separate section. Got more sourcing. Removed BtS as it was just opinion. Executor ships by individual names goes in the Executor-class article, not here, that's why they were removed. Hope this is getting better. This is for a good status, not a great one. I don't even know what's required for that, so I aimed low. Don't know what more info I can cram into this that isn't already there. =/ Will do a sourced collage for the info box picture when I have time. VT-16 10:03, 29 October 2008 (UTC)
 * It would be best if you could post these changes underneath my individual objections, so we can discuss each objection respectively. Toprawa and Ralltiir 17:47, 29 October 2008 (UTC)
 * I agree on including every source, but every last SSD mentioned? I hope it's not going to be as broad in the Star Destroyer article as well. That's potentially thousands of ships. Not to mention the cruiser one. I just disagree that this should deal with every individual ship, and not just the broader classifications under the term. I think I'll add the Executor variants under the Executor tag, but other than that, I don't see why this article has to have every single ship. There's no single ships in the frigate, destroyer or cruiser articles. Of course, that could be expanded, but for something like "cruiser", it would be a mini-encyclopedia all by itself. So far, I've only included ships that have a physical particularity about themselves. VT-16 18:33, 29 October 2008 (UTC)
 * VT-16, I understand you might be a little less familiar with the GAN process, but Toprawa is correct in that this article will be quite large, even under the "broad coverage" descriptor. And yes, the Star Destroyer and cruiser articles should, in all reality, be mammoth articles ranging in the hundreds of kilobytes in order to be considered "broad". There is so much information. You can talk briefly about each ship (read:A paragraph or two at minimum) in the history section, but citing the frigate, destroyer and cruiser articles, which are not GA and are in sore need of serious expansion, will not get you anywhere. That's just the way it is, and it won't be changing any time soon, even if it means this article is not GA'd. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 19:29, 29 October 2008 (UTC)
 * No need to take that tone, I was genuinely asking, because I've never seen anything quite as large as what is being proposed, anywhere on this site. (Except for the Palpatine or Anakin/Vader articles, heh.) Either way, did more organizing and found as many sources as possible. Some aren't really locked down with a date, and I need help on those. The Databank and FF ones. I'll leave the mini-bios for later, too tired now. VT-16 21:23, 29 October 2008 (UTC)
 * Sorry, wasn't trying to come off as snippy. But yes, we do have delusions of grandeur when it comes to article size. ;-) And I humbly beg to differ. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 00:40, 30 October 2008 (UTC)
 * Point taken. =X Well, that's certainly something to strive for. I only doubt it will happen for this article, even with having a small mention of every ship, there's limits to how much actual info we've actually got. VT-16 07:49, 30 October 2008 (UTC)
 * @Jinzler: Well, the problem is, I haven't read all the books that might have it, so I don't know all of them. That's why I need help. I've only gotten the ones that are listed on the Executor pages, for the most part, and that's what I know. =/ VT-16 07:51, 30 October 2008 (UTC)
 * VT, if I were trying to make this article a GA, here's some things I'd probably do:
 * Get rid of the collage, and stick with a good picture of an Executor-class SSD. I understand why you'd want a collage in the infobox, but isn't a collage technically fanart?
 * Remove the sections on the individual classes. The way it looks now, there really doesn't seem to be any info in those sections that are all that relevant to the article as a whole, and any info that might be relevant could easily be merged with the other sections. Besides, by just glancing through them, you have some classes listed that have never (to my knowledge) been called SSDs.
 * I'd probably also cut back on the number of images in the article. I could understand why you'd want to keep them, but unless/until you get more info, they just seem to be one on top of the other.
 * To be honest, I don't think this is the type of article that can be made into a GA, but feel free to prove me wrong. And if you need any assistance, I'd be glad to help. Grand Moff Tranner [[Image:Imperial Department of Military Research.svg|20px]] (Comlink) 11:11, 30 October 2008 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the help, but I think T&R meant for it to be structured like that. As for the profile image, it's not fanart if only offical images are used/cropped together (and sourced in the image info), and that's exactly the reason why I chose a collage of different designs, not picking one class only. The classes and singular designs get mentioned for being of the types lumped together as SSDs. I think I will do a similar rewrite and reworking on the SD article down the road, removing the "ships similar to" list. VT-16 11:32, 30 October 2008 (UTC)


 * Bringing this up now, since I don't know what else to add to the article. Any comments, positive/negative? VT-16 08:28, 6 November 2008 (UTC)

Chreeto the Defiant

 * Nominated by: Behold, I am Toprawa, greatest hunter of all realms. Toprawa and Ralltiir 20:46, 2 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Fastest written nom ever. &#91;source?&#93;

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 * 1)  IFYLOFD  ( And now, young Skywalker, you will die. ) 20:52, 2 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) Fixed some double word usage in the bio. Nice work though. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie ) 09:55, 3 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) DC 20:25, 4 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) Nice.  Pranay Sobusk  ~  Talk  20:39, 4 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 1) IFYLOFD:
 * 2) ** Do we have a quote for P&T?
 * 3) ***No.
 * 4) ** Why did the Rodians regard Chreeto as a hero?
 * 5) ***It doesn't say. A reason is loosely alluded to in that he has Rodian medals on his sash, which is covered in the P/T, but no explanation.
 * 6) ** "Flamboyant and boastful, Chreeto, regarded as a hero in his native province on Rodia, led a crew of six other hunters who worked as Imperial retainers in the wake of the Battle of Hoth in 3 ABY to capture fugitive Rebels." Run-on sentence, but a bit awkward in my opinion. I suggest you cut it up and/or reword it.
 * 7) ***That's not a run-on sentence by official standards. I'll try to tweak it. Toprawa and Ralltiir 20:43, 2 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 8) **Good work.  IFYLOFD  ( And now, young Skywalker, you will die. ) 20:39, 2 November 2008 (UTC)

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Treis Sinde

 * Nominated by: Cavalier One ( Squadron channel ) 21:39, 2 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: A non-DarkStryder nom? Shock and horror!

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 * 1) A non-DS nom? Blasphemy!  IFYLOFD  ( And now, young Skywalker, you will die. ) 21:46, 2 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) Nice job. Grand Moff Tranner [[Image:Imperial Department of Military Research.svg|20px]] (Comlink) 12:07, 3 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) Flawless. Great job, Cavalier, hope to see more Legacy noms out of you. DC 20:23, 4 November 2008 (UTC)

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 * This can go FA, but I'm running it through the new GA process first. - Cavalier One ( Squadron channel ) 21:46, 2 November 2008 (UTC)

Ceasar

 * Nominated by: Thefourdotelipsis 05:25, 4 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: The time is just right for an out and out article about a giant thingy like this.

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 * 1)  IFYLOFD  ( And now, young Skywalker, you will die. ) 20:26, 4 November 2008 (UTC)

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Comments
 * Just a quick question: Would this count as a character then? Because if it does, then it needs a P&T. I just want to clear that up before I vote for this. DC 20:21, 4 November 2008 (UTC)
 * It's non-sentient, so I'm not sure what the deal would be there... Thefourdotelipsis 22:08, 4 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Nah, you shouldn't need a P&T.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 22:26, 7 November 2008 (UTC)

Plunk droid

 * Nominated by: Graestan ( Talk ) 04:48, 6 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: The Unholy.

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 * 1) Already copy-edited. Just be sure to update with new episode appearances. Toprawa and Ralltiir 05:01, 6 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) Good article. And also Grae...The Power Of G*NK Compels You! The Power Of G*NK Compels You! NaruHina  Talk [[Image:Anakinsolo.png|14px]] 05:16, 6 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) Plunk, plunk! -  Cavalier One ( Squadron channel ) 13:50, 6 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) --Skippy Farlstendoiro 13:56, 6 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) Plunk. Plunk. Plunk ko kyenga see.  IFYLOFD  ( And now, young Skywalker, you will die. ) 15:22, 6 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 6) It pains me to be seen as endorsing anything Plunk-related, but this isn't an endorsement. Rather, I'm committed to raising awareness of That Abomination that Hath Two Legs Too Many.  Gonk  ( Gonk! ) 01:21, 7 November 2008 (UTC)

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Treasure Trove

 * Nominated by: Toprawa and Ralltiir 07:38, 6 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Empire Strikes Back goodness!

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 * 1)  IFYLOFD  ( And now, young Skywalker, you will die. ) 03:26, 7 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) - You actually made me go and read through the adventure because I became intrigued. -  Cavalier One ( Squadron channel ) 09:02, 7 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 3)  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  22:32, 7 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie ) 09:44, 10 November 2008 (UTC)

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 * 1) SoresuMakashi
 * 2) * Can we at least get a stub on Natejeka. The red disrupts the flow of the article.
 * 3) **Yeah, I was going to get that since she's my next GAN. You should understand, though, that the GAN red link rule is less stringent than FAN and allows an acceptable number of red links in the article. This sort of objection technically shouldn't be imposed for a single red link. Instead, the objector could simply kill the red link if it seems bothersome.
 * 4) * dying from grievous injuries and exposure and holding a datapad. Exposure to what? Also get rid of the two ands if possible.
 * 5) **Exposure to the vacuum leak, as previously established. "Exposure" is generally applied to mean "to a certain physical condition," such as vacuum. I could restate what is already established by writing, "from exposure to vacuum," but I think that's just reiterating the obvious. If you feel this is necessary, let me know.
 * 6) * unsuccessfully chased the Rebel agents away from the crash site. It sounds as if Chreeto tried to chase them away from the site, but failed and the Rebels managed to stay in the system. In reality, he simply failed to destroy/capture the Trove.
 * 7) **Well, I think you're misreading the information. Chreeto never failed to destroy/capture the Treasure Trove. In fact, he had no involvement in its fate whatsoever. He merely staked out the crash site to wait for other Rebels to hunt. So, I'm not sure what your objection is here. I could add "away from the crash site and out of the Hoth system," if that makes it clearer for you.
 * 8) ***Sorry, I mistyped. The last bit should have been In reality, he simply failed to destroy/capture the agents. What I was trying to ask was whether Chreeto failed in chasing them out of the system, or whether he did chase them out but just wasn't able to destroy the ship. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie ) 08:38, 9 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 9) ****Gotcha. Fixed. Toprawa and Ralltiir 05:42, 10 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 10) * the Rebel agents successfully completed the transport's mission by delivering the blaster gas shipment to the Alliance Fleet. I thought earlier it said that the cargo pods were blown out. How could the gas have survived? Mention something about the discovery of intact gas earlier. And elaborate on where it was found, if that info exists. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie ) 08:19, 6 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 11) **Once more, I think you're misreading the information. The article clearly establishes that the Treasure Trove needed to pick up its shipment from Cloud City and never escaped the Hoth system, so therefore it never completed its mission and never did acquire the blaster gas. No blaster gas was involved in the transport's wreck. I've added a little bit to explain that the agents completed the mission by "acquiring and delivering" the shipment. Toprawa and Ralltiir 16:46, 6 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 12) ***Alright, thanks for your explanations. Now that I read through it again, I don't know what I was thinking. Just the one objection remaining. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie ) 08:38, 9 November 2008 (UTC)

Teyora Rekab

 * Nominated by: Thefourdotelipsis 09:00, 6 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Now with more stuff!

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 * 1) At first glance, this didn't appear to be over 250 words, but it's 253.  IFYLOFD  ( And now, young Skywalker, you will die. ) 03:31, 7 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) -  Cavalier One ( Squadron channel ) 09:05, 7 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) What? No BTS on the costume shop reflected in the helmet? :-p -- Ozzel 04:12, 9 November 2008 (UTC)

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Eddicus-class planetary shuttle

 * Nominated by: Thefourdotelipsis 11:13, 6 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: And the beat goes on.

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 * 1)  IFYLOFD  ( And now, young Skywalker, you will die. ) 03:35, 7 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) -  Cavalier One ( Squadron channel ) 09:07, 7 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) Very well written. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie ) 09:04, 9 November 2008 (UTC)

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Amm Natejeka

 * Nominated by: Toprawa and Ralltiir 22:38, 6 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Empire Strikes Back. How can one resist?

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 * 1) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie ) 09:37, 9 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 2)  IFYLOFD  ( And now, young Skywalker, you will die. ) 20:10, 9 November 2008 (UTC)

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Augara Jowil

 * Nominated by: Thefourdotelipsis 23:30, 8 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: This may or may not be a WTS nom. Enjoy at your own risk.

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 * 1) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie ) 09:48, 9 November 2008 (UTC)

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 * Just a (mainly) unrealted question. Do we have a policy on whether we should have full stops after image text? It seems that most articles don't have them but there is a lot of variation, even among F/GA's. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie ) 09:48, 9 November 2008 (UTC)
 * I've always done it. I'd rarely see a caption in real-life without a full stop...but I could be very wrong. Thefourdotelipsis 11:42, 9 November 2008 (UTC)

Pello Scrambas

 * Nominated by: Thefourdotelipsis 04:15, 9 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: "You know...that old dude at the start."

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 * 1) What old dude? I don't know what you're talking about. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie ) 10:03, 9 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) I support this fellow and his incredibly well-written background. QuentinGeorge 10:24, 9 November 2008 (UTC)

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Mini-Huvicko/Yuzabi Dowser binary hydromech droid

 * Nominated by: Thefourdotelipsis 05:35, 9 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: It's all about vaporators...and their maintenance droids!

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 * 1) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie ) 10:18, 9 November 2008 (UTC)

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Palleus Chuff

 * Nominated by:  Pranay Sobusk  ~  Talk  14:54, 9 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: I tried one more for GA.

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Oppose  IFYLOFD  ( And now, young Skywalker, you will die. ) 01:18, 10 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 1) IFYLOFD:
 * 2) *In the intro: "In 20 BBY the Galactic Republic government asked him to play Yoda in reality going to a mission to Ithor, while the real Yoda was on a secret mission to Vjun with two Masters and two Padawans." Split up and/or reword this sentence.
 * 3) *"Due to that small size, he often portrayed characters that he absulotely disliked." Why did his small size force him to play characters he disliked?
 * 4) *"Chuff should play Yoda in reality going to a mission to Ithor." This confuses me a little. Is he playing Yoda or going on a mission to Ithor? Clear this up a little.
 * 5) *"He also did not have the heart to answer the journalist's question." Who is the journalist?
 * 6) *The article could use a good copy-edit.
 * 7) *"The Dark Jedi Asajj Ventress heart about Chuff's mission in the media and decided to lie in wait for him, because she knew that a dead Yoda would be a catastrophe for the Jedi Order." Why would Yoda's death be catastrophic?
 * 8) *The prose itself is a bit choppy. Merge some short sentences that distupt the flow of the article together.
 * 9) *"After Yoda had already done four of five" Four of five of what?
 * 10) *Any quotes?

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Juno Eclipse

 * Nominated by: Darth Nikolai 05:14, 10 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: It's past the spoiler period, it's been a decent amount of time, let's make this a Good Article

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Oppose  IFYLOFD  ( And now, young Skywalker, you will die. ) 05:32, 10 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 1) IFYLOFD:
 * 2) *Intro needs expansion.
 * 3) *Unsourced infobox.
 * 4) *Unsourced paragraphs in Imperial Pilot and End Game.
 * 5) *P&T needs expansion.
 * 6) *In intro, context needed on Battle of Callos and Darth Vader.
 * 7) *"It was largely because of her father's distance and his admiration of Imperial service that Juno became the youngest cadet to be accepted into the Corulag Academy at the age of 14." Why would her father's distance allow her to be accepted to the Academy?
 * 8) *More info is needed on the trips to Nar Shaddaa, Raxus Prime, and Felucia.
 * 1) Grand Moff Tranner:
 * 2) *In addition to more info on all the missions Starkiller undertook in the Xbox 360/PS3 version of the game, there needs to be some mention of the missions to the Jedi Temple that he undertook in the PS2/PSP/Wii version.
 * 3) *Context needed on Shaak Ti, Maris Brood, Bail Organa, Mon Mothma, Garm Bel Iblis, etc.
 * 4) *Succession box needs to be sourced. Grand Moff Tranner [[Image:Imperial Department of Military Research.svg|20px]] (Comlink) 12:16, 10 November 2008 (UTC)
 * What is the canonicity of the differences between the wii versions and the xbox/ps3? I authored the bulk of the article and went mostly by the novel which didn't mention the temple at all.Darth Nikolai 19:47, 10 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Per an article on StarWars.com, the temple levels will be playable in an upcoming add-on to the game. Regardless, such levels would still have happened even if they hadn't appeared in the other version or novel. Grand Moff Tranner [[Image:Imperial Department of Military Research.svg|20px]] (Comlink) 20:52, 10 November 2008 (UTC)

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