Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Fedje


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 * 1) Another short (300+ word) article nom --Eyrezer 06:14, 11 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) Toprawa and Ralltiir 05:19, 12 May 2008 (UTC)
 * Huh, I thought some mention might be made in the Last Command Sourcebook, but no dice. Greyman  @wikiajanitor ( Talk ) 14:44, 17 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 1) Looks pretty perfect to me.  Aqua  Unasi  02:21, 30 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) Yrfeloran 03:26, 30 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 1) Toprawa:
 * 2) * If you could expand the intro at all to make it a short little paragraph, that would be ideal.
 * 3) **Done my best.
 * 4) * Can we elaborate on this at all, or otherwise clarify? I kind of understand, but am not entirely clear on what expansive gestures are: "their typically expansive gestures."
 * 5) **Added a tiny bit but we're not really given any info.
 * 6) * Please elaborate a bit on what the "controversy" was; doesn't have to be too in-depth: "during the controversy over the Caamas Document" Toprawa and Ralltiir 06:42, 11 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 7) ** We actually have an article on the Caamas Document Crisis: would it be a more appropriate link? &mdash;Silly Dan (talk) 16:09, 11 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 8) ***Gave some context and incorporated the crisis link. --Eyrezer 04:06, 12 May 2008 (UTC)
 * Just a note on these "expansive gestures." I came upon the same phrase in That's Entertainment: The Tale of Salacious Crumb last night. In reference to Crumb, the author writes, "'Go on!, go on!' the creature responded with an expansive gesture." I guess expansive gestures are a "thing," of which I am unfamiliar? Toprawa and Ralltiir 21:55, 12 May 2008 (UTC)
 * Lol, I presume it means waving your hands around a lot while you talk! :) --Eyrezer 03:04, 13 May 2008 (UTC)