Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations



This page is for the nomination of "comprehensive articles". For a list of "comprehensive articles", see Category:Wookieepedia comprehensive articles.


 * Comprehensive article nominations history
 * Comprehensive article nominations archiving checklist

What is a "comprehensive article?"

A "comprehensive article" is an article that contains all information regarding the topic. Often, "comprehensive articles" cannot reach Featured or Good Article status due to their limited content. This process is intended to recognize articles that contain all relevant canon information, yet are still under the 250 word limit required for a Good Article. The purpose of this is twofold&mdash;firstly, to help users distinguish what is a stub, and what is merely a short article with no further relevant material to be added, and, more importantly, to highlight for the reader when they are reading something that has been judged definitely "comprehensive"&mdash;that is, a guarantee to the reader that whatever they are reading contains the sum total of all available content.

Nominations and promotions of the Comprehensive article process are overseen by a collective of users known as the "EduCorps," which is made up of the Inquisitorius, the AgriCorps, and various other experienced users who are considered qualified to adequately judge the nominated material.

Lucasfilm Ltd. and its many licensees continue to expand the Star Wars universe. Since new information might become available, it may be necessary to revoke a "comprehensive article's" status. A forum will be used to nominate articles that have fallen out-of-date. Members of the EduCorps will then post a warning template on that page, and a grace period of one week will be instituted in which the article can be improved. If there is a significant amount of new information, it is likely that once updated, the article will become eligible for Good article status, and thereby ineligible for Comprehensive article status.

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An article must&hellip;


 * 1) &hellip;be well-written and detailed.
 * 2) &hellip;be unbiased, non-point of view.
 * 3) &hellip;be sourced with all available sources and appearances.
 * 4) &hellip;follow the Manual of Style, Layout Guide, and all other policies on Wookieepedia. This is, of course, within reason. If a topic only has a very limited degree of content that cannot be divided up into the relevant article sections, it is not required that it follow the Layout Guide precisely. This is to be judged on a case-by-case basis.
 * 5) &hellip;following the review process, be stable, i.e., does not change significantly from day to day and is not the subject of ongoing edit wars. This does not apply to vandalism and protection or semi-protection as a result of vandalism.
 * 6) &hellip;not be tagged with any sort of improvement tags (i.e. more sources, expand, etc).
 * 7) &hellip;have no redlinks.
 * 8) &hellip;have all relevant canon information presented.
 * 9) &hellip;be completely referenced for all available material and sources. See Sourcing for more information. While this is not required for an article possessing a singular source, it is encouraged, as it provides both uniformity and a good infrastructure should the topic be referenced in any future materials.
 * 10) &hellip;have all quotes and images sourced.
 * 11) &hellip;provide at least one relevant quote on the article if available.
 * 12) &hellip;include a "Behind the scenes" section for in-universe articles.
 * 13) &hellip;counting the introduction, the article body, and "Behind the scenes" material, must not exceed 250 words in length (not including captions, quotes, or headers, etc). Any articles exceeding the limit should be taken to the Good article nominations page for consideration.
 * 14) &hellip;if the nominated article reaches 200 words or greater, the nominator must either provide an intro or draft an intro and provide a link to the revision in the nomination, showing that the intro does not elevate the article over 250 words. Exceptions can be made for articles wherein the majority of the text is in the "Behind the scenes" section.

How to nominate:


 * 1) First, nominate an article you find is worthy of comprehensive status, putting it at the bottom of the list below. Nominated articles must meet all thirteen requirements stated above.
 * 2) Add CAnom at the top of the article you are nominating.
 * 3) Be sure to place sign in the "Nominated by" line when the nomination is posted for voting.
 * 4) Others will object to the nomination if they disagree that the article is good enough; they will then supply reasons for doing so, and ways to improve the article in accordance with the established rules.
 * 5) Nominators and supporters will adjust the article until the objectors (with reasonable objections) are satisfied. Objectors may also make alterations&mdash;if there is any reason for contention on a given point, it should be settled in a civil manner in the nomination field itself.
 * 6) Users may not vote on their own articles.
 * 7) There is no limit to the amount of nominations a given user can submit at any given time.

How to vote:


 * 1) Before doing anything, be sure to read the article completely, keeping a sharp eye out for mistakes.
 * 2) Afterward, compare the article to the criteria listed above, and then either support or object the article's nomination.
 * 3) *If you object, please supply concrete reasons for doing so, and how it can be improved.
 * 4) As stated above, any objections will be looked upon by the nominator, supporters, and anyone willing to improve the article, and action will be taken to please the objectors. Do not strike other users' objections; it is up to the objector to review the changes and strike if they are satisfied.
 * 5) There are several ways in which an article can receive the required number of votes. Within a 48-hour period of nomination, only EduCorps votes will count towards the total, although anyone may choose to vote in that window. If two members of the EduCorps support a nomination in that window, and there are no outstanding objections, the article can be considered a "Comprehensive article" and be tagged with the template 48 hours after the initial nomination.  The talk page will also be tagged with the CA template. When the 48 hours are up, any user's votes will contribute towards the total. If one EduCorps member has voted for an article after a week, three regular votes will be required. After the 48 hour period, an article can still also pass with just two EduCorps votes.
 * 6) Once a nomination is successful, it will be placed on the Comprehensive article list. Instructions on how to archive nominations, successful or otherwise, can be found here. Anyone can archive a nomination&mdash;just make sure it has the correct number of votes, has been nominated for at least a week (or 48 hours if there are two EC votes), and that there are absolutely no outstanding objections. If you are not sure how to do this, just ask, and someone will likely be more than willing to help you. Also, if you think you can slip one past us, think again&mdash;someone is always watching you.

All nominations will be considered idle and are subject to instantaneous removal by EduCorps members if objections are not addressed, or at least not answered, after a period of 1 week.

Please remember to archive your nomination beforehand if you plan on taking it to the Good Article Nominations page.

Lexi Dio (starship)

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:19, June 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:TFU CAN for TFU.

(3 ECs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support


 * 1) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 01:08, July 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  21:35, July 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Menkooroo 03:48, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 05:04, July 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 14:38, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) The Force Unleashed II release date is incorrect.  Teff  02:33, June 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *Oops. Don't know how I missed that. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 02:37, June 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Axinal
 * 4) * Are there any quotes available from the novel?
 * 5) **Let me check that. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 13:51, June 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) * The fact that it was an assault bomber during the early days of the Rebellion is currently exclusive to the intro.
 * 7) **Got it. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 13:51, June 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) *** This might be a little picky, but you say "early days of the Rebellion" in the intro. While you specify 1 BBY in the body, it's not entirely clear to the reader that 1 BBY is in the early days of the Rebellion. Could you throw that in somewhere?&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 22:00, June 26, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) ****How does that look? Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:49, June 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) *****Looks good to me. Any luck with a quote, or are there none?&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 10:10, June 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) ******Haven't been able to look yet. I should be able to look for one sometime this week. But I put a request for a quote on the talk page in case someone else found a good quote first. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 19:11, June 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 12) *******How's that quote? Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:51, July 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 13) ********Perfect, minus the comma problems, which I fixed assuming they weren't [sic]s.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 01:08, July 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 14) * It is not entirely necessary to source it, as you did for the history section, but it is encouraged. If you do source it, however, you need to source every bulleted item in the infobox.
 * 15) **OK fixed. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 13:51, June 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * 16) *I added the template for you to italicize the title.
 * 17) **OK thanks. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 13:51, June 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * 18) *Otherwise, nice article.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 08:19, June 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * 19) **Great thanks! Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 13:51, June 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * 20) Super tiny thing: Is the date confirmed as 1 BBY? If so, the "approximately" in the body isn't necessary. If not, then could you add a ~ before the two instances of "1 BBY" in the infobox for consistency? Menkooroo 13:17, July 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 21) *Fixed. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:35, July 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 22) Rubedo - Context on what the Empire was attacking at the Itani Nebula. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 23:35, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 23) *Fixed. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:38, July 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 24) Hold up for one more thing. What your source for 1 BBY? The main article on TFU2 has a source tag on that in the infobox. Merely citing six months after TFU1 for that would place it in either 2 BBY or 1 BBY.  NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 05:20, July 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 25) *Actually it's 3 BBY. Look at the reference. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:12, July 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * 26) Intro states 1 ABY, body states 1 BBY. Please correct as necessary. - Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 09:57, July 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 27) *Sorry, that was my fault. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 14:05, July 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 28) **Take a look at my above comment. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:12, July 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * 29) ***Umm, how did you get the 3 BBY date? The inside cover of the TFU II comic states "The events in this story take place approximately twelve months before the Battle of Yavin". This is 1 BBY. - Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 17:54, July 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 30) ****Yea, sorry about that. I'm currently going through a source hunt with some other users to find a worthy source to use. I think I've found one, though, so as soon as it's approved, I'll change it. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 19:12, July 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 31) *****The source if from the TFU II comic. It's as worthy as you can get since the battle that involved the ship is in it. - Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 19:54, July 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 32) ******The one I was going to use was the one used here. I'll change them both, though, if the comic would be a better source. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 20:49, July 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 33) ******The comic is an official LFL product. GamePro magazine isn't. - Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 12:28, July 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * 34) *******OK changed. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:51, July 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * 35) ********It's still saying 3 BBY, sourced to the TFU II comic. Comic states 12 months before Yavin, equaling 1 BBY. - Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 21:07, July 29, 2011 (UTC)
 * 36) *********Arrgghh! I hate it when I miss stuff. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:53, July 29, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Doghouse

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 03:17, July 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Back to Deceived! :))

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) Good.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  15:51, July 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Nicely done. ~  Savage  BOB sig.png 20:51, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Trayus
 * 2) * I know that Korr explicitly speculates that the hijackers are either pirates or mercenaries, but in the article it sounds very speculative: "But some other people, either pirates or mercenaries". It would appear far more encyclopedic to state that "A rival group of criminals, speculated by Korr to be either pirates or hired mercenaries, were there instead..."
 * 3) **How's that?
 * 4) *Also, when you say "there instead" it leaves room for confusion. Where were they? Somewhere on Ord Mantell, or specifically in or at the Doghouse? It would be best to specify that they had taken control of the ship at the drop off point.
 * 5) **Changed. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 17:29, July 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) *You should provide a bit more context on the altercation at the landing pad, i.e., how Korr discovered that they did not work for Arigo, and how he got away. Nothing too in-depth, but a bit more explanation will definitely help.
 * 7) **How's that? Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 17:21, July 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) *Not bad, otherwise. Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 17:11, July 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) Bob
 * 10) * Context on the Exchange.
 * 11) **Fixed.
 * 12) * Did Arigo use the freighter only once? The current wording implies that. If not, change "used by" to "in use by" or "being used by" to imply that this is not a one-off event.
 * 13) **Changed.
 * 14) * Species IDs for Arigo and Korr wouldn't hurt; if they were aliens, we'd almost certainly ID their species.
 * 15) **Fixed.
 * 16) * The altercation between them all probably needs an article: Skirmish at blah blah or whatever.
 * 17) **Got it.
 * 18) * The way things are written seems to be from Korr's point of view, but this article is about the ship. Try to rewrite most of the body chronologically from the POV of the ship: ship lands, pirate guys take it over, Korr comes up unsuspecting, etc. As it stands, the article is kind of confusing and hard to follow. ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 13:56, July 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * 19) **I have to agree with Bob on this&mdash;I've noticed that trend on a couple of your articles. Always remember that you should follow the chronology of the subject, and not necessarily the POV of the book. Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 17:24, July 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * 20) ***Is that any better? Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 17:43, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Hraashi Lool

 * Nominated by: Menkooroo 07:03, July 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Nuthin' in the CSWE.

(1 ECs/2 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) Nice. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:35, July 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Good work as always.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:28, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) ~  Savage  BOB sig.png 14:51, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * I believe that you should mention the necklace that she wore in the picture. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  15:53, July 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) ** Hmmm... I dunno. Unlike hair, eyes, or tattoos, a necklace isn't a permanent fixture, so I can't make a definitive statement like "She always wore a necklace." I guess I could mention it in the second paragraph, but that would open up the door to describing the shirt and suspenders she wore that day, too, which would just kind of be a random tangent. Any ideas? Menkooroo 04:07, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Wait, scratch that. I found a simple and effective way to put it in. Check it out! And thanks for the review. :) Menkooroo 04:13, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) ****That's kind of like what I was thinking of.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:28, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) Bob
 * 7) * Just something minor, but can we really say she had tattoos? It could've been makeup. Simply de-pipelinking tattoo would suffice, but I wanted to make sure there's not something a missed. ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 16:38, July 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) **You're right. I didn't want to definitively say it, so I'm not sure why I pipelinked it. Removed. Menkooroo 11:40, July 17, 2011 (UTC)

Comments
 * Also, I hereby put out an open challenge for other users to write and CAN Lomina Argo and Wuuden Malnic! Menkooroo 08:14, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Unidentified Tatooine astromech droid

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 03:23, July 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Another astro droid for WP:VG!

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) Glad to see R5-D4's still getting work these days. ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 14:33, July 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) I was stuck on that level a long time.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  18:20, July 29, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Bob
 * 2) * I have the same main objections that I do for the R2 droid above from the same source. Will re-review once these have been addressed. ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 13:37, July 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Fixed. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:47, July 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) *** Don't forget the red trim! ~ Savage BOB sig.png 14:19, July 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) ****Got it. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:36, July 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) Ah
 * 7) *Can you make a quick note of how Jaden knew to get the droid (did the farmer tell him?)
 * 8) **Got it.
 * 9) ***New Jedi Order! :P Menkooroo 15:32, July 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) ****Duh! I should have caught that since I'm such a fan of the NJO series. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:56, July 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) *Does Jaden do anything with the droid or with the info after finding it? I'm guessing that that's where the level ends, but if the mission in the next level is based on the info he gets from the droid, a note about that could go at the end of the article. Menkooroo 14:15, July 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 12) **I don't know if you've ever played Jedi Academy, but the missions all just kinda do their own thing. One mission doesn't really effect the next mission too much. So, in this case, the Jedi Order got the droid and then moved on to the next mission. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:26, July 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 13) ***Ah, OK. But! I have an idea. A concluding sentence like... "Jaden was later able to defeat the Cult" or something might be a good idea, as it would give the article some closure and also help establish why the Jedi care about the droid (they wanted to stop the cult!). Thoughts? Menkooroo 15:32, July 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 14) ****Hmmm, check that out. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:56, July 28, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

A

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 21:23, July 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: I can haz an "A" for effort?

(0 ECs/2 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) "A" Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:07, July 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2)  Master Jonathan  &mdash; Jedi Council Chambers Thursday, July 14, 2011, 02:55 UTC

Object
 * 1) From the Council Chambers:
 * 2) * Is Elegos a member of the A clan? It seems to me that a being would automatically be a member of both of their parents' families/clans/whatever a certain species calls them. Unless we know of some reason why he isn't (and I can't fathom why he wouldn't be), then it seems to me that all of Elegos's appearances/sources should be listed too, and the article should then include information on Elego's life and death, which would push this way past the CAN word limit. Or should I get an F in reasoning?  Master Jonathan &mdash; Jedi Council Chambers Wednesday, July 13, 2011, 23:10 UTC
 * 3) **You may have a C, because that's perfectly logical. However, in the source he identifies himself as part of the Kla clan and speaks of the a clan as something he doesn't belong to, saying that it was just the clan his father belonged to: "It is fairly easy for me to transfer a merehis to another member of the Kla clan or to my father's clan, the A clan." NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 23:45, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Seems odd that he would be a member of one and not the other, but if that's what the source says, then it's fine the way it is.  Master Jonathan &mdash; Jedi Council Chambers Thursday, July 14, 2011, 02:55 UTC
 * 5) ****Frankly, after reading the releveant excerpt, I'm a bit intrigued by the maternal/paternal clan concept and how it relates to Caamasi society, but to my knowledge no sources have fleshed this out. Too bad. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 05:12, July 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) *****Cultures are weird, so we shouldn't find it odd he's in only the A clan and not the Kla clan; perhaps the species is patrilineal, yet their naming practices preserve a history of the maternal clan in the name without any suggestion of membership in that clan. As for whether all of Elegos A'Kla's appearances being appearances of his clan, I'd say no. List any sources that specifically call out his clan, even indirectly, but in general, one individual does not a clan make, IMHO. ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 13:44, July 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) Bob
 * 8) *Do we know that "A" was a strictly paternal clan? Or was it just Elegos's paternal clan?
 * 9) **"My markings are common among the Kla, the maternal clan into which I was born" is the closest I can find to answer that. He also says that his uncle Ylenic It'kla was "My mother's brother. We share the maternal line." It doesn't directly address that, but it doesn't seem like the sex of the individual within the clan is particularly important based on the second. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 21:06, July 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) ***I guess what I'm getting at is perhaps we shouldn't define A as a paternal clan, but rather as a clan, and then specify that for this one individual, it was a paternal clan (without stating that it was only for him that it was paternal, of course). ~ Savage BOB sig.png 13:40, July 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) * Context on memnsis.
 * 12) **Added. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 21:06, July 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 13) * Again, I feel it's unfair to single out Elegos as a Caamasi and not Katarn as a Human, so a species ID would be nice.
 * 14) **Added. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 21:06, July 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 15) * It's probably better to spell out when the novel was first published, since it's been reprinted and translated since then.~ Savage  BOB sig.png 13:44, July 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * 16) **That's fine. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 21:06, July 27, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Unidentified Yavin Runner II pilot

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 02:41, July 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:We'll be arriving at CA status in just a few minutes.

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) Please place seats in the upright position and lock tray tables ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 16:08, July 29, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2)  Sorry we are experiencing slight turbulence, please stand by. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  18:16, July 29, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * I think that you probably could determine the eye color for the pilot.
 * 3) **OK.
 * 4) * Also, mention the type of uniform he was wearing.
 * 5) **How's that?
 * 6) * When you say "the swampy moon of Yavin 4" it could either read that Yavin 4 was a swampy moon, or that Yavin 4 had a swampy moon. Please reword so that it is easily apparent which you mean.
 * 7) **See how that works.
 * 8) * Mention his affiliation to the New Jedi Order in the body of the article. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  03:55, July 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) **Got it. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:13, July 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) Bob
 * 11) * You should probably add a reference for the uniform being similar to the ones in the Battle of Yavin.
 * 12) **Done.
 * 13) * Please add categories for species and gender. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 20:02, July 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 14) **Fixed. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 02:09, July 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 15) * One more thing: Is Yavin 4 ever described as swampy? I've usually seen it as "forested" or "jungle". ~ Savage BOB sig.png 13:43, July 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 16) **Hmm, I seem to recall that in one of the NJO books it is described as swampy. But, since I can't remember which one it was, I changed it. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:28, July 28, 2011 (UTC)

Comments
 * I notice that in a lot of your noms, you start with "This [whatever] did [whatever]..." I don't really have a problem with this, but a lot of folks consider "This" as inappropriate to our articles since it doesn't sound like "a long time ago." Pay attention to the way I've bee copy editing your articles, and you'll see how to avoid this issue. :) ~ Savage BOB sig.png 20:02, July 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * I noticed that most other users user "A pilot did whatever" but I thought that it sounded like it was describing a pilot in general rather than this pilot. But, I'll agree with your experience. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 02:09, July 28, 2011 (UTC)

Unidentified Blenjeel shipwreck survivor

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 03:01, July 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Thank the Force, another CAnom. I was beginning to think that NaruHina was going to get them all...uh...ahhgg!!

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) Good work.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  21:41, July 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 14:37, July 28, 2011 (UTC)

Object Comments
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * You need to mention his fair skin in the body of the article.
 * 3) **Ok.
 * 4) * I just wanted to make sure, is the 14 ABY date from the game?
 * 5) **Yes, I believe so.
 * 6) * Can you determine the individual's hair and eye color? (I am pretty sure you can say what his hair color is.)
 * 7) **I can't really see what his eye color is, but his hair color I think is dirty-blond.
 * 8) * Would it be possible to get an image with the survivor in the center of the image instead of the current image which makes the sand burrower appear to be the crash survivor? -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  15:19, July 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) **Yea, I thought of that. And Jedi Academy doesn't have a screenshot function. But, a friend just told me that there's a cheatcode that lets you do it. So, it will take me a few days to find the cheatcode and try it. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 16:05, July 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) ***I got it quicker than I thought. That's about the best I could do. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 20:49, July 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) ****This is much better.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  21:41, July 12, 2011 (UTC)

Unidentified Tatooine moisture farmer

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:17, July 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:This is the moisture farmer you're looking for.

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) I fixed a couple of minor things, but other than these the article was good.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  21:44, July 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 14:41, July 28, 2011 (UTC)

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Broden Kel Verdox

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:35, July 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Long name for a one mention.

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Support
 * 1) Good.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:35, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 13:57, July 31, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * You forgot to mention his affiliation to the Jedi Order in the body of the article. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  21:46, July 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Actually I didn't forget. I figured that saying he was a Jedi Master would kind of take care of that. What do you think? Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:48, July 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) ***I think it should probably still be mentioned separately.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:25, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) ****Got it. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 16:32, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) Imperators II
 * 7) * Why is the Rise of the Empire era listed in the "Eras" field? What's the source for that? Jedi Academy is set during the New Republic era.  Imperators II (Talk) 10:23, July 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) **In Jedi Academy he's only mentioned as being a Jedi of the Old Republic. So I guess that was an assumption that he was alive during the Rise of the Empire era. Removed. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 16:56, July 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) Evil Clowns
 * 10) *What is meant by the "rest of the Yalarans" ? Ones in the galaxy who weren't hidden on the planet? If that's the case, I don't really understand why that would prompt Jaden to destroy the device. Even if that's not the case, I think a little more explanation is in order. Menkooroo 01:24, July 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) **Try that. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 02:16, July 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 12) ***Better, but I'm still a little confused:
 * 13) ****Are the Yalarans the ancient, primitive race that's earlier mentioned? If not, an article on the primitive dudes should be created. If so, the equivocation should be made clear; explicitly calling them Yalarans on the first mention oughtta do it.
 * 14) *****Got it.
 * 15) ****"The rest of the Yalarans..." The rest compared to whom? Are there Yalarans that aren't wiped out?
 * 16) *****Fixed.
 * 17) ****How does the Cult of Ragnos know about the device? It's not made clear how that follows from the Noghri wiping out the Yalarans. Some sort of cause and effect should be made clear. Menkooroo 02:45, July 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 18) *****Done. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:02, July 28, 2011 (UTC)


 * 1) Bob
 * 2) * Does the source say why this dude wanted to protect the Yalarans? Who was he trying to protect them from?
 * 3) **Hmm, try that.
 * 4) * The Yalaran article calls them a species, not a civilization. Which was it? ~ Savage BOB sig.png 16:13, July 29, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) **Fixed. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 20:35, July 29, 2011 (UTC)

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Hokk

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 02:37, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:No comment until the time limit is up. :)

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Support
 * 1) Looks good.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  21:34, July 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 14:46, July 28, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * If you do not see Hokk in the game, I do not think that you can say he is human. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:40, July 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Fixed. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:06, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

Comments
 * I cannot find any good images to use, so if someone could find one that would be good. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 02:37, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * Given his nature as a character from a video game, you really should have gotten a picture before you nominated him. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 04:54, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * Upon further review, I found that you only hear Hokk and don't actually see him. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 16:11, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * How do you know which character is the one you come in contact with? Does his voice sound like it comes through a speaker or something? NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 22:56, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * You can hear J'aahn's voice clearly, while Hokk's voice is coming through as if through a comlink. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:10, July 14, 2011 (UTC)

J'aahn

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 02:40, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Can't think of anything...

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Support
 * 1) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 04:41, July 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:37, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Rubedo
 * 2) * Could you look into the possibility that this character's name is a reference to Soldier of Fortune? If you can find a source saying that Raven did that intentionally, then it should be included.
 * 3) **There was rumor to that, but as far as I can see that is just speculation.
 * 4) ***Do you have Microsoft Outlook working? You can send Raven Software an email about it and see if they respond. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 22:54, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) ****I'm afraid I probably won't be able to check. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:06, July 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) *****Oh well. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 04:41, July 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) * "the dead Sith Lord Marka Ragnos" It would probably be best to list Ragnos's death year here.
 * 8) **How's that?
 * 9) * That he was affiliated with the Imperial Remnant is infobox-only. I think that just because the Diciples are affiliated with the Remnant, that does not mean its individual members are.
 * 10) **Fixed.
 * 11) * Context on Corellia, and probably Coronet City as well.
 * 12) **Got it.
 * 13) * Since he's in the level, I assume it's possible to kill him. That needs to be noted in the BTS. If he was someone that you could not possibly win the level without killing, then that counts as a canon death.
 * 14) **You can do it either way.
 * 15) * Give the name of the company that made the game in the BTS.
 * 16) **Done.
 * 17) * Say why Jaden was sent to Corellia. He wasn't there specifically to save this train.
 * 18) **Got it.
 * 19) * You may put in a pronunciation note because of the apostrophe. (How do you pronounce those anyway? Why are they put in names? Bah.) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 04:50, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 20) **I looked on a lot of different articles and I can't find an example of what you're talking about. Could you please explain better. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:04, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 21) ***For certain articles like Saleucami, Darth Caedus (In the BTS, but should also be in the intro), and Serroco, where the pronunciation may be taken different ways, we use the International Phonetic Alphabet chart for English dialects to say how they are pronounced. Since this character's name may be taken as either "John" or "Jan," I think making that distinction would be appropriate because there is a canonical pronunciation. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 22:54, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 22) ****Ummm, is that how it should look? Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:06, July 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 23) *****Afraid not. I've done it for you. You should do this for Hokk too if it isn't pronounced "hawk." NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 04:41, July 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 24) ******Thanks! Hokk is actually pronounced "Hawk" Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:15, July 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * 25) * Were they not trying to destroy the train by blowing it up? That's not the same thing as "disabling." NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 22:54, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 26) **Done. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:09, July 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 27) Bob
 * 28) *I think perhaps you should mention something about his uniform. Was it typical of the cultists? ~ Savage BOB sig.png 17:24, July 29, 2011 (UTC)
 * 29) **Done. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 20:37, July 29, 2011 (UTC)
 * 30) ***Was his uniform "much like" the others', or identical to the others? The idea of a uniform is that it's uniform from one guy to the next! ;P ~ Savage BOB sig.png 13:59, July 31, 2011 (UTC)
 * 31) ****Yea, got it. ;D Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:41, August 1, 2011 (UTC)

Comments
 * Do not start a sentence with "but." NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 04:50, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reciprocating quad blaster

 * Nominated by: Darth Needham 22:38, July 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Trying to get something in for the Barn Burner.

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Object
 * 1) Cal coming in
 * 2) *There is some infobox-only information, otherwise it looks pretty good. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 23:02, July 23, 2011 (UTC)


 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) *First off this article needs to be source according to the Manual of Style.
 * 3) *Next, I do not believe all the important information is included, just by looking at the databank link,, it is easy to see that not all of the information is included. Please check all of the sources and appearances for more information on the weapon. If you do not have one of the sources perhaps another user will help you, because I only have access to the databank out of the sources and appearances. (P.S. When adding the information from the databank please remember to not just copy it directly from the databank. You need to put it in your own words.)
 * 4) *The article will also need to be sectioned using the Layout Guide.
 * 5) *Once you do all of these things the article will likely need to be taken to the GA Nomination page.
 * 6) *Please don't feel bad about all of the objections I have just given you, if it makes you feel any better, my first nomination had objections that were very similar to the ones I just gave you. With hard work and perserverance I was able to turn my article in a status article, and I will do my best to help you turn this article into one as well.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  23:11, July 23, 2011 (UTC)


 * 1) Nayayen
 * 2) *A relatively large amount of information missing from Triple Zero, summarised here.
 * 3) **Comparison with a Z-6 rotary blaster and a cruiser's cannon.
 * 4) **Mereel using it in the CoruFresh depot raid.
 * 5) **A description of its report.
 * 6) *You should also try to avoid linking to redirects. You can add this to your monobook.css (or wikia.css if using the ugly new skin) to show them in a different colour.
 * 7) *Like Exiled said, you've got a bit of work to do, but it's easily accomplished and will likely reach GAN length. Good luck, N  AYAYEN  17:11, July 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) *Like Exiled said, you've got a bit of work to do, but it's easily accomplished and will likely reach GAN length. Good luck, N  AYAYEN  17:11, July 25, 2011 (UTC)

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Raid on the Jedi Tower

 * Nominated by: N  AYAYEN  13:31, July 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Just a little something to get me back into practise.

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Support
 * 1) Good job.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  13:08, July 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) 짱! Menkooroo 14:58, July 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) ちゃん! ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 14:02, July 31, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * Is there a quote available? I read the comic a while back, but I can't remember for sure how it was mentioned.
 * 3) **Yes, added. I wrote this from memory at the time so after checking the quote I've added a little detail (setting all of them off controllably) I forgot. Thanks for the review, Exiled. N  AYAYEN  11:37, July 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) *That's it, good work.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  03:48, July 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) Good stuff! Just wondering if you can mention the First Battle of Taris in the body, as it's currently exclusive to the infobox. Menkooroo 14:41, July 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) *Done, and in way that doesn't need too much awkward context. N  AYAYEN  14:52, July 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) Bob
 * 8) * Is demolition charge a thing that should have an article? ~ Savage BOB sig.png 17:27, July 29, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) **Personally, I don't think so as we don't hear or see anything about the charges that leads us to believe that there is something different about the charges from what demolition charges in the real world are like (other than the SW aesthetic). N  AYAYEN  19:55, July 29, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) ***OK, makes sense. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 14:02, July 31, 2011 (UTC)

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Battle of Almak

 * Nominated by: Darth Morrt 12:08, July 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:non-conjectural title

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Support
 * 1) N  AYAYEN  22:32, July 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Looks good.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  13:06, July 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) The quote was unsourced but I got it. Menkooroo 03:13, July 28, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Reading "Praji viewed the walkers..." begs the question; are there any possible quotes at all?  N  AYAYEN  16:49, July 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * No, there is not. The whole article is based on one sentence of the source. Darth Morrt 22:26, July 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) **I'll strike this, as it depends on the wording of said sentence, but I've had an article where the quote given is the entire mention of the subject. N  AYAYEN  22:32, July 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) ***I've added a similar quote, since the source is in-universe. Darth Morrt 09:38, July 26, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Tinker, Tailor, Soldier, Jedi
 * 4) * I think that you should mention the in-universe work, Tinker, Tailor, Soldier, Praji: A Cartel of Genes, and the author, Dr. Gabrel Treon, in the body of the article. You should just mention that a historian named spoke of the battle in, or something else along those lines. A brief mention is all that it needs. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  03:44, July 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) **Done. Darth Morrt 09:00, July 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) Bob
 * 7) * Can you explain reference 3 and how it suffices to support the date? I'd say we need canon sources to support that, not the author's blog.
 * 8) **Sorry to intrude, but it seems to me that a blog stating the authot's intentions should be considered a source.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  15:38, July 31, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) ***The last section of Tinker, Tailor, Soldier, Praji is titled "Inheritance (10-104)." This implys that the in-universe author wrote it in 104 ABY, but IMO it is not clear enough. On the other hand, O'Keefe's states in his blog directly, that the article was written in 104 ABY. IMO, the Star Wars blogs, especially these endnotes-type blogs should be considered official sources, since they state fact that for some reason wasn't included in the source. A similar example is Wallace's blog, where he connects previously unidentified places to new planets of the Atlas. Darth Morrt 17:13, July 31, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) **** I see where you're going, but you should probably cite the article itself in conjunction with the blog so we have a canon source + authorial intent for the date, not just authorial intent. That's the difference. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 19:23, July 31, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) *****Done. Darth Morrt 11:09, August 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * 12) *Also, the date should be added to the infobox, provided we can provide a date. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 14:06, July 31, 2011 (UTC)
 * 13) **The battle took place during the Dark Times, before 1 BBY, but nothing more. Darth Morrt 17:13, July 31, 2011 (UTC)
 * 14) ***Where are you getting the date of 1 BBY for the "dark times"? ~ Savage BOB sig.png 19:23, July 31, 2011 (UTC)
 * 15) ****Mentioning Dark Times, I mean the Imperial Period. The battle of Almak is mentioned in a section titled "A Model Officer (37-1 ABY)", and the last-but-one subsection mentions the battle itself. IIRC, once I was objected that "before x BBY"-like dates are no-no for infoboxes. But maybe I'm wrong. Should I add "Between 19 and 1 BBY" to the infobox? Darth Morrt 11:09, August 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * 16) *****Well, in my opinion, if there's an infobox date, it should be as specific as possible, so if you can establish a range of 19 BBY to 1 BBY, that's more specific and preferable to "before 1 BBY." IMO, anyway! :) ~ Savage BOB sig.png 14:03, August 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * 17) ******Done. Darth Morrt 14:13, August 1, 2011 (UTC)

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Galduran Calrissian's smuggling ring

 * Nominated by:  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  22:45, July 26, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Just a kotor nom to tide me over until the barn burner.

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Support
 * 1) Aside from a small detail, you did a good job EJ. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:38, July 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 19:19, July 31, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Bob
 * 2) * Is there any reason to believe the smuggling ring predated or outlived Calrissian? If not, I'd combine the first two sentences into something like, "A male smuggler named Garduran Calrissian led a smuggling ring in Hutt Space..."
 * 3) **Changed.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  15:44, July 31, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) * I think maybe you have too much context on the Hutts. It should be enough to say they are the indigenous species who controlled the area, not mention that they were sentient or gastropods, say.
 * 5) **You're right, I removed the extra context.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  15:44, July 31, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) * Can you add a reference to the end of the first paragraph? It sort of hangs there right now with no ref. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 14:16, July 31, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) **Oops, fixed.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  15:44, July 31, 2011 (UTC)

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E-11 blaster pistol

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:56, July 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Getting my end of the barn-burner going.

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Support
 * 1) Good job, now I really need to finish the work on my first nominations.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:30, July 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) * Arrrgh, I hate it when I miss something. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:33, July 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) looks good <- Omicron (Leave a message at the BEEP! ) 00:16, July 29, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * Oops, I missed something! You forgot to mention what era the blaster was in use in the body of the article. Mentioning when the guy had the blaster is all it needs. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:33, July 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Got it. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 16:38, July 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Can you be more specific, the days of the old republic are a long time.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:41, July 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) ****How's that look? Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 16:49, July 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) *****Just what I was looking for.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:52, July 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) Bob
 * 8) *Like the other blaster noms you've got up, please state in the first sentence that the E-11 was a gun, a blaster, a weapon, something definitive.
 * 9) **Done.
 * 10) *E-11 redirects to E-11 blaster rifle. However, this article and several others (E-11 carbine, E-11 electroscope, E-11s sniper rifle) show that that's probably not the best situation. Although it's only peripheral to this nom, can you clear this up by changing E-11 to a disambiguation page for all these guns? You should then add a template to the top of the article pointing to the disambig.
 * 11) **Alrighty.
 * 12) *Can you describe Korr as a "former smuggler"? Do we know that he didn't wear an E-11 when he was still smuggling? Please be careful to word the nomination so we don't imply that he never used the gun when he was smuggling.
 * 13) **Try that.
 * 14) *Perhaps ID Korr as Human.
 * 15) **Got it.
 * 16) *Don't forget the "model" field in the infobox.
 * 17) **Got it.
 * 18) *Did he wear it in place of both blasters, or just one of them? It sounds odd if he wore it in place of two, since each would require its own holster. If you mean he carried it in place of the other two (meaning he only carried one E-11 whereas he usually carried two GH-44s), perhaps change to that. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 14:26, July 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 19) **Got it. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:32, July 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 20) I'd just like to point out that although all of these blaster articles that you have nominated do fit the def. of comprehensive article, the ones about the old republic are alikely to be mentioned in the up coming MMO game. While it is comprehensive now, it is likely not to be soon.  I know you could make that case for any article, but I'd wait til the game comes out to nominate any Old republic articles.  It would be better than nominating it now, then having to take it away later.  Just a thought.
 * 21) *OK I'll keep that in mind. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:28, July 28, 2011 (UTC)

Comments
 * This gun appeared briefly so there are no quotes. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:56, July 27, 2011 (UTC)

GH-44 blaster

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 16:14, July 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Ithorian's on fire!

(1 ECs/2 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:56, July 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) 아싸! Menkooroo 14:19, July 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Looks good. <- Omicron (Leave a message at the BEEP! ) 00:15, July 29, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * You need to mention the era the blasters were from in the body of the article.
 * 3) **Fixed.
 * 4) ***Can you be more specific?-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:45, July 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) ****Sorry about that. I think I got it now. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 16:53, July 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) *****Good.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:56, July 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) * Are they referred to as blaster pistols or just as blasters? The infobox says one thing and the categories say another. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:39, July 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) **Blasters. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 16:43, July 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) Bob
 * 10) *For this and the next nom, you never flat-out say that it was a blaster. In this case, it seems a bit odd. Perhaps add a line at the beginning that "The GL-xxx blaster was a type of weapon etc. etc." ~ Savage BOB sig.png 20:23, July 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) **Try that. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 02:21, July 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 12) Omicron
 * 13) * Just a bit unclear, does Zeerid replace dual blasters with a single E-11 or dual E-11s?<- Omicron (Leave a message at the BEEP! ) 14:33, July 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 14) **Fixed. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:33, July 28, 2011 (UTC)

Comments
 * No quotes here either. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 16:22, July 27, 2011 (UTC)

GH-22 blaster

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 19:48, July 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Ancient Wookiees and hokey barn-burners are no match to a good GH-22 blaster at your side.

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Support
 * 1)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  13:37, July 29, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) <- Omicron (Leave a message at the BEEP! ) 19:17, July 31, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * Hey, I just found out something today about weapon articles, in the infobox you need to put the model name in the model field of the infobox. In this case, you need to put GH-22 in the model field. You should also fill the model field for the other two weapon articles you are nominating currently. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  03:01, July 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **OK, took care of it. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:36, July 28, 2011 (UTC)


 * 1) Kilson
 * 2) *Can you mention where exactly the Xizor wore the GH-22, such as on a planet or somewhere. Otherwise, looks good. Kilson ( Let's have a chat ) 03:14, August 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Done. Thanks for the review. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:20, August 1, 2011 (UTC)

Comments
 * Or here. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 19:48, July 27, 2011 (UTC)

Swiftcut foil

 * Nominated by: Menkooroo 01:37, July 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Since everybody else is starting early. ;)

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Support
 * 1) Nothing wrong with that. Pre-nom.  Kilson ( Let's have a chat ) 02:29, July 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  03:35, July 28, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Maybe I am wrong, but shouldn't model and type be reversed in the infobox? <- Omicron (Leave a message at the BEEP! ) 22:04, July 28, 2011 (UTC)

Comments
 * The source capitalizes Swiftcut and Tehk'la, but not longsword. Menkooroo 01:37, July 28, 2011 (UTC)

EXP-7(a) Predator

 * Nominated by: Omicron (Leave a message at the BEEP! ) 22:00, July 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:My contribution to the Barn Burner

(1 ECs/2 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) N  AYAYEN  15:11, July 29, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Nice gun.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  17:51, July 29, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3)  Kilson ( Let's have a chat ) 18:32, July 31, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Nayayen
 * 2) * Could the image here not be moved to the infobox with a caption?
 * 3) **moved, not sure how to add a caption for an infobox image. <- Omicron (Leave a message at the BEEP! ) 14:29, July 29, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Rather than have the caption in the image link, you put it after the image with a  tag to put it on a new line. I've done that for you.  N  AYAYEN  15:11, July 29, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) *Nothing else, but be mindful of your linking. The intro in a CAN still counts under the linking rules. N  AYAYEN  13:28, July 29, 2011 (UTC)


 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * You forgot to source the model field of the infobox. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  13:33, July 29, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **fixed. <- Omicron (Leave a message at the BEEP! ) 14:29, July 29, 2011 (UTC)


 * 1) Kilson
 * 2) * You should add another one or two sentences to the Intro. You could mention who manufactured the weapon, how many of them were made, the fact that Batta owned one, and a brief mention of the gun's characteristics.
 * 3) **expanded, don't want to include too much or I feel it would be redundant. <- Omicron (Leave a message at the BEEP! ) 00:10, July 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) ***I expanded it a bit.
 * 5) * You forgot to fill in the Eras field in the Infobox.
 * 6) **fixed<- Omicron (Leave a message at the BEEP! ) 00:10, July 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) * You need to switch the History and Characteristics sections. Characteristics always goes first.
 * 8) **Switched. <- Omicron (Leave a message at the BEEP! ) 00:10, July 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) *In the History section, could you mention a time period when Batta killed that modrol. Also, can you say where he killed, because the way it is written right now, it isn't very clear.
 * 10) **fixed<- Omicron (Leave a message at the BEEP! ) 00:10, July 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) *** OK, here's the problem. The Rebellion era is an out-of-universe term. You need to use something in-universe in the article, like "sometime during the Galactic Civil War."
 * 12) ****fixed to the correct era. <- Omicron (Leave a message at the BEEP! ) 02:19, July 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * 13) ***** You still haven't mentioned where the hunting expedition took place. Once you get that, I'll support. Kilson ( Let's have a chat ) 03:50, July 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * 14) ******Ok fixed. <- Omicron (Leave a message at the BEEP! ) 14:24, July 31, 2011 (UTC)
 * 15) *Overall, I think you could expand this article a bit and bring it to the GAN. We can discuss that more after you have addressed these objections. Kilson ( Let's have a chat ) 21:24, July 29, 2011 (UTC)
 * 16) **think I've addressed all your concerns, not much more to add, the source is only a paragraph :) <- Omicron (Leave a message at the BEEP! ) 00:10, July 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * 17) *You need to reference the first paragraph in the History section. You also had a reffing mistake with the Body reffing, but I corrected that. Look at the edit history to see what I mean.
 * 18) **referenced. <- Omicron (Leave a message at the BEEP! ) 02:19, July 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * 19) * You should give context on a modrol in the History section.
 * 20) **fixed<- Omicron (Leave a message at the BEEP! ) 02:19, July 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * 21) * I still believe you could bring this over 250, but we will see after you make these corrections. Kilson ( Let's have a chat ) 01:53, July 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * 22) **up to 316 words, but that includes all the infobox and stuff. Not sure how to get an exact word count to decide the border between CA and GA. Let me know. <- Omicron (Leave a message at the BEEP! ) 02:19, July 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * 23) ***A word count is determined by counting the Intro, body, and bts. In any case, it seems like the article won't get over 250, so you're good.

Comments Just two quick questions: Does the book have any available information on the legal restrictions on purchasing this item? Or does the book have any information on the range of the weapon? If it does I think the information should be added to the article, because I do not think the information should be considered game mechanics.-- Exiled Jedi   (Greetings)  15:38, August 1, 2011 (UTC)

Griff Praji

 * Nominated by: Darth Morrt 09:29, July 29, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

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 * 1)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  11:59, July 30, 2011 (UTC)

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 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * What does the last sentence have to with Griff Praji? Please explain its significance.
 * 3) **They are Griff's relatives. I reworded it a bit. Tannon Praji's FA article mentions Griff and Nahdonnis, too. Darth Morrt 11:45, July 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Much better.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  11:59, July 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) * Could you try and reword the article to make it more from Griff Praji's perspective? -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  18:08, July 29, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) **Done. Darth Morrt 11:45, July 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) ***Good work.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  11:59, July 30, 2011 (UTC)

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Collin Praji

 * Nominated by: Darth Morrt 12:41, July 29, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Another Praji

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 * 1)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  12:01, July 30, 2011 (UTC)

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 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * In the quote Praji is spelled "Prajii". Is this the way the source had it? If it is then please place a [sic] after it to identify it as a misspelling. Otherwise please correct it. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  18:12, July 29, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **It is not a typo, but the plural form of Praji throughout the source article. Darth Morrt 11:47, July 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Ah, it makes sense now.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  12:01, July 30, 2011 (UTC)

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Tyla Praji

 * Nominated by: Darth Morrt 13:42, July 29, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Another one.

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 * 1)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  12:08, July 30, 2011 (UTC)

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 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * Her affiliation should probably be listed as House Praji in the infobox. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  17:54, July 29, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Done. Darth Morrt 12:00, July 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) * Mention the date of the historian's document as you did with Collin Praji. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  17:56, July 29, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) **Added. Darth Morrt 12:00, July 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) * The Collin Praji article also mentions that Praji is a Coruscanti house. Couldn't that be mentioned here? -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  18:04, July 29, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) **Kaikielius was the old homeworld of House Praji, but they relocated themself to Coruscant. In 10 ABY, Praji revenged his family's old enemy, House Vahali and became governor of Kaikielius. It is unknown whether the Prajii returned to Kaikielius or not. IMO, it is better not to mention Coruscant here. Darth Morrt 12:00, July 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) ***Then you probably shouldn't put her in the Coruscanti category.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  12:04, July 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) ****Removed. Darth Morrt 12:06, July 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) Axinal
 * 11) *The infobox sources female, Human, and House of Praji to Tinker, Sailor, Soldier, Praji, while the body sources that information to Nathan O'Keefe's blog. I can't seem to find that information on there. Could you make sure the sourcing is consistent and correct?
 * 12) **Fixed. Darth Morrt 11:19, August 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * 13) *Would Category:Officers of the Galactic Empire apply here?
 * 14) **No, it wouldn't. One sentence mentions that she participated in the Second Civil War (Second Galactic Civil War), and a quote calls her Commisar. Commissar is not necessary a military rank, and she is not necessary Imperial. Darth Morrt 11:19, August 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * 15) *Otherwise, very nice article.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 10:38, July 31, 2011 (UTC)

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Mouth-operated gun

 * Nominated by: ~ Savage BOB sig.png 00:29, August 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: It's officially August 1 (per the Wook's internal clock), so here's my first weapon nom! ~ Savage BOB sig.png 00:29, August 1, 2011 (UTC)

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 * 1) Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:24, August 1, 2011 (UTC)

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 * 1) Cal, coming in
 * 2) * Just a couple of things. First: Is it a laser weapon, or a projectile weapon? In the article you refer to it as a "firearm" and then in the infobox as a "gun" instead of a blaster.
 * 3) * Next, I think that it would be better to say something to the effect of "larger galaxy" instead of "greater galaxy". This makes it sound like the rest of the galaxy was better than Laobi.
 * 4) * And, "a conventional model" doesn't seem to make much sense. What exactly do you mean? Is there any way that you can explain this clearer? Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:48, August 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) **Cool, thanks for the review! As or what it is, we just don't know. This article repeats the total amount of knowledge we have. My assumption would be it's a blaster weapon, but the source calls it a "gun," which could be a blaster or a slugthrower. I'm pretty sure "firearm" is synonymous with gun, and not with only blaster or slugthrower, so I used it as a synonym to avoid repetition. I can change it to "gun" if, for some reason, "firearm" only means one or the other in Star Wars.
 * 6) ***Yup, I think you're right there. Just checking for clarity.
 * 7) ****I clarified a bit based on your comment here. How's it look? ~ Savage BOB sig.png 03:29, August 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) *****That looks better.
 * 9) **As for "greater galaxy," I've used it in tons of articles, and don't think it should be a problem. "Great" can also mean "large," so this shouldn't really be an issue.
 * 10) ***Alrighty.
 * 11) **Finally, "conventional model," I think, is fine. Here, "conventional" just means "the way things are usually done, and, well, blasters and the like are not conventionally fired by a mouth, they are conventionally fired by a finger! I could conceivably change it to "hand-operated model," but I'm not sure it should be necessary. Does it make more sense now that I've explained it? ~ Savage BOB sig.png 02:28, August 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * 12) ***Sorry for not explaining this better, but for this, I didn't really have a problem with you calling it "conventional" model. But is there some you can explain this better? :P I know I sound repititious, but maybe you could somehow say that it was more expensive than a conventional blaster or something. As it stands, it sounds like your saying it was more expensive than other models of this weapon. And that would raise the question of "what other models of this weapon are there?" Maybe I'm just being a pain, but I'd appreciate it if you could clarify somehow. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 03:05, August 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * 13) ****I see what you mean. I just changed it to "hand-operated model" to avoid ambiguity. Try that. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 03:29, August 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * 14) *****That's much more clearer now. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:23, August 1, 2011 (UTC)

Exiled Jedi Comments
 * 1) *If it is not specified as a blaster, why do you have gun redirected to blaster in the infobox? I think this should be changed.
 * 2) *Just a question, but does the source specify that the range is long, or does it just call it a ranged weapon? If it is the former then your fine, but if it is the latter then you should probably just call it a ranged weapon.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  15:29, August 1, 2011 (UTC)

Capturing stick

 * Nominated by: ~ Savage BOB sig.png 01:11, August 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: And another weapon. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 01:11, August 1, 2011 (UTC)

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 * 1) Aside from a very small copy-edit, it looks fine. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:58, August 1, 2011 (UTC)

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Comments
 * Just to let you know, the word count is up to 196 words. While you don't have to create an intro in this situation, I feel that if you added an intro and split the body into a Characteristics and History section, you might be able to get the article over 250 words. It's up to you though. And thanks for your contribution to the barn-burner. :) Kilson ( Let's have a chat ) 03:05, August 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * I get 193 words, but at any rate, if some context is required here or there, I may do just that. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 03:33, August 1, 2011 (UTC)