Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Blitzer Harrsk


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Blitzer Harrsk

 * Nominated by: Lord Hydronium 03:37, April 19, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Abbott! Laurel! Burns! Martin! Cher!

(3 Inqs/4 Users/7 Total)
Support
 * 1) ...Cher? Xicer9 [[Image:atgar.svg|20px]]( Combadge) 05:02, April 19, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Waiting for Delvardus... --Skippy Farlstendoiro 06:48, April 20, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) With a name like Blitzer, I expect the next warlord to be named Rudolph. -  Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 09:35, April 20, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 00:19, May 10, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) —Tommy  9281 00:06, May 24, 2010 (UTC)
 * 6) Thefourdotelipsis 03:17, May 25, 2010 (UTC)
 * 7) Looks sound to me, nothing really jumped out as being objectionable, and anything else was something I could fix myself.  Trak Nar  Ramble on 04:43, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Farlstendoiro
 * 2) * Pellaeon is overlinked.
 * 3) **That's what he gets for retreating. Fixed.
 * 4) * Context on Teradoc in his first mention. We do not know wether Teradoc is another Imperial warlord, a pirate, an officer of the New Republic, a crimelord; only that he was self-styled High Admiral.
 * 5) **He is actually called a warlord in the intro mention, but it's added to the body one now.
 * 6) * Consider adding the names of some of the other known warlords in the Tsoss Beacon meeting. Just a suggestion.
 * 7) **They aren't named, unfortunately. - Lord Hydronium 05:46, April 20, 2010 (UTC)
 * 8) *Skippy Farlstendoiro 15:26, April 19, 2010 (UTC)

Comments
 * Added CUSWE link for you.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 22:02, April 24, 2010 (UTC)
 * Made some edits where I felt they were needed.  Trak Nar  Ramble on 04:43, May 25, 2010 (UTC)