Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations

 This page is for the nomination of "comprehensive articles." For a list of "comprehensive articles," see Category:Wookieepedia comprehensive articles.


 * Comprehensive article nominations history
 * Comprehensive article nominations archiving checklist

What is a "comprehensive article?"

A "comprehensive article" is an article that contains all information regarding the topic. Often, "comprehensive articles" cannot reach Featured or Good Article status due to their limited content. This process is intended to recognize articles that contain all relevant canon information, yet are still under the 250 word limit required for a Good Article. The purpose of this is twofold&mdash;firstly, to help users distinguish what is a stub, and what is merely a short article with no further relevant material to be added, and, more importantly, to highlight for the reader when they are reading something that has been judged definitely "comprehensive"&mdash;that is, a guarantee to the reader that whatever they are reading contains the sum total of all available content on that topic.

Nominations and promotions of the Comprehensive article process are overseen by a collective of users known as the "EduCorps," which is made up of the Inquisitorius, the AgriCorps, and various other experienced users who are considered qualified to adequately judge the nominated material.

Lucasfilm Ltd. and its many licensees continue to expand the Star Wars universe. Since new information might become available, it may be necessary to revoke a "comprehensive article's" status. A forum will be used to nominate articles that have fallen out-of-date. Members of the EduCorps will then post a warning template on that page, and a grace period of one week will be instituted in which the article can be improved. If there is a significant amount of new information, it is likely that once updated, the article will become eligible for Good article status, and thereby ineligible for Comprehensive article status.

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An article must&hellip;


 * 1) &hellip;be well-written and detailed.
 * 2) &hellip;be unbiased, non-point of view.
 * 3) &hellip;be sourced with all available sources and appearances.
 * 4) &hellip;follow the Manual of Style, Layout Guide, and all other policies on Wookieepedia. This is, of course, within reason. If a topic only has a very limited degree of content that cannot be divided up into the relevant article sections, it is not required that it follow the Layout Guide precisely. This is to be judged on a case-by-case basis.
 * 5) &hellip;following the review process, be stable, i.e., does not change significantly from day to day and is not the subject of ongoing edit wars. This does not apply to vandalism and protection or semi-protection as a result of vandalism.
 * 6) &hellip;not be tagged with any sort of improvement tags (i.e. more sources, expand, etc).
 * 7) &hellip;have no redlinks.
 * 8) &hellip;have all relevant canon information presented.
 * 9) &hellip;be completely referenced for all available material and sources. See Sourcing for more information.
 * 10) &hellip;have all quotes and images sourced.
 * 11) &hellip;provide at least one relevant quote on the article if available.
 * 12) &hellip;include a "Behind the scenes" section for in-universe articles.
 * 13) &hellip;counting the introduction, the article body, and "Behind the scenes" material, must not exceed 250 words in length (not including captions, quotes, or headers, etc). Any articles exceeding the limit should be taken to the Good article nominations page for consideration.
 * 14) &hellip;if the nominated article reaches 200 words or greater, the nominator must either provide an intro or draft an intro and provide a link to the revision in the nomination, showing that the intro does not elevate the article over 250 words. Exceptions can be made for articles wherein the majority of the text is in the "Behind the scenes" section.

How to nominate:


 * 1) First, nominate an article you find is worthy of comprehensive status, putting it at the bottom of the list below. Nominated articles must meet all thirteen requirements stated above.
 * 2) Add CAnom at the top of the article you are nominating.
 * 3) Be sure to place sign in the "Nominated by" line when the nomination is posted for voting.
 * 4) Others will object to the nomination if they disagree that the article is good enough; they will then supply reasons for doing so, and ways to improve the article in accordance with the established rules.
 * 5) Nominators and supporters will adjust the article until the objectors (with reasonable objections) are satisfied. Objectors may also make alterations&mdash;if there is any reason for contention on a given point, it should be settled in a civil manner in the nomination field itself.
 * 6) Users may not vote on their own articles.
 * 7) There is no limit to the amount of nominations a given user can submit at any given time.

How to vote:


 * 1) Before doing anything, be sure to read the article completely, keeping a sharp eye out for mistakes.
 * 2) Afterward, compare the article to the criteria listed above, and then either support or object the article's nomination.
 * 3) *If you object, please supply concrete reasons for doing so, and how it can be improved.
 * 4) As stated above, any objections will be looked upon by the nominator, supporters, and anyone willing to improve the article, and action will be taken to please the objectors. Do not strike other users' objections; it is up to the objector to review the changes and strike if they are satisfied.
 * 5) There are several ways in which an article can receive the required number of votes. Within a 48-hour period of nomination, only EduCorps votes will count towards the total, although anyone may choose to vote in that window. If four members of the EduCorps support a nomination in that window [0 to 48 hours post-nomination], and there are no outstanding objections, the article can be considered a "Comprehensive article" and be tagged with the template 48 hours after the initial nomination. The talk page will also be tagged with the  template. When the 48 hours are up, any user's votes will contribute towards the total. If two EduCorps member has voted for an article after a week, three regular votes will be required. After the 48 hour period, an article can still also pass with just three EduCorps votes.
 * 6) Once a nomination is successful, it will be placed on the Comprehensive article list. Instructions on how to archive nominations, successful or otherwise, can be found here. Anyone can archive a nomination&mdash;just make sure it has the correct number of votes, has been nominated for at least a week (or 48 hours if there are four EC votes), and that there are absolutely no outstanding objections. If you are not sure how to do this, just ask, and someone will likely be more than willing to help you. Also, if you think you can slip one past us, think again&mdash;someone is always watching you.

All nominations will be considered idle and are subject to instantaneous removal by EduCorps members if objections are not addressed, or at least not answered, after a period of 1 week.

Please remember to archive your nomination beforehand if you plan on taking it to the Good Article Nominations page.

Block 135

 * Nominated by: 501st  dogma ( talk ) 19:27, March 13, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

(1 ECs/2 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) &mdash; DigiFluid(Whine here) 13:36, March 14, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) &mdash; 16:01, March 14, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) Supreme Emperor (talk) 02:40, March 19, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Block 135 was a cityblock on located in the Kesk Cityblock on the planet Brentaal IV. Could you correct this? &mdash;  05:09, March 14, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) *Sorry about that. It's been remedied. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 11:49, March 14, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) Exiled Jedi
 * 4) *Please link to or create an article for the contact.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  22:43, March 16, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) Like a waterfall
 * 6) *You use "circa" on the infobox but use "in" in the body, you should correct that ("around" would be one suggestion). Winterz (talk) 19:13, March 17, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Nuyu

 * Nominated by: 501st  dogma ( talk ) 21:51, March 13, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: I wonder what a major body alteration is....

(2 ECs/3 Users/5 Total)
Support Object
 * 1) Hate tattoos, but the article's solid.&mdash;  05:06, March 14, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) &mdash; DigiFluid(Whine here) 13:37, March 14, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) Supreme Emperor (talk) 15:22, March 16, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) I'm not sure I want to know what a major body alteration is...-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  22:51, March 16, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) --Nightlily (talk) 19:07, March 17, 2013 (UTC) (And tattoos are beautiful!)
 * 1) Winterz
 * 2) *Does the source use "(...) decent living (...)" or was this your assessment? Winterz (talk) 19:16, March 17, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Cei Vookto's first Padawan

 * Nominated by: &mdash; 04:53, March 14, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Yet another anonymous Jedi.

(3 ECs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 16:16, March 14, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) &mdash; DigiFluid(Whine here) 18:01, March 14, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) Supreme Emperor (talk) 15:32, March 16, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  22:53, March 16, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) See below please. Winterz (talk) 14:57, March 18, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Could we have the quote that mentions him? I remember reading one when I was read the comic.  501st  dogma ( talk ) 11:51, March 14, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) *Done.&mdash; 16:05, March 14, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) Winterz
 * 4) * Can you be a little more specific about the circumstances of his master's death?
 * 5) **I don't believe the events of Vookto's death are relevant to the character him/herself.&mdash; 19:44, March 17, 2013 (UTC)
 * 6) ***Well I thought expanding the article a little bit couldn't hurt (besides, I just meant like adding a "sacrifice" remark or so), but if you really don't want it, it's fine by me.
 * 7) ****Yeah, you're right. Please take a look the additions.&mdash; 20:09, March 17, 2013 (UTC)
 * 8) *****Thanks for reconsidering. Winterz (talk) 20:37, March 17, 2013 (UTC)
 * 9) * You should be explicit about who mentioned him at the funeral (and if possible, to whom). Winterz (talk) 19:32, March 17, 2013 (UTC)
 * 10) **Done.&mdash; 19:44, March 17, 2013 (UTC)
 * 11) * Windu didn't refer to him directly so it's ;). Winterz (talk) 19:55, March 17, 2013 (UTC)
 * 12) **Done.&mdash; 20:09, March 17, 2013 (UTC)
 * 13) *** Considering this change, the Bts section can reflect the modification as well. Winterz (talk) 20:40, March 17, 2013 (UTC)
 * 14) ****Please take a look.&mdash; 16:20, March 18, 2013 (UTC)

Comments
 * This is pretty trivial so I won't bother making an objection out of it, but is the (Jedi Master) after Vookto's name in the infobox's Master field really needed? Since the Padawan has no other known affiliations besides the Jedi, it's kind of a given that Vookto was his/her Jedi Master (and not a Sith Master for example). Tinwe (comlink) 12:06, March 14, 2013 (UTC)
 * I'd rather not, but if you insist, I'll remove it.&mdash; 16:05, March 14, 2013 (UTC)
 * Actually I also think it's best to remove it as it is utterly unnecessary for an individual that only has Jedi affiliations. Winterz (talk) 19:26, March 17, 2013 (UTC)
 * I guess.&mdash; 19:28, March 17, 2013 (UTC)
 * Withholding Support vote per Dogma's objection; but just placing that as a Comment rather than Object in case I forget. (I do support this article otherwise, though) &mdash; DigiFluid(Whine here) 13:48, March 14, 2013 (UTC)

Zrak system

 * Nominated by:  Stake black   msg 18:38, March 14, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: WP:AST for infinite victory

(3 ECs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 23:41, March 14, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) &mdash; DigiFluid(Whine here) 14:39, March 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) I thought I had already reviewed this article...what the heck ?! Winterz (talk) 19:40, March 17, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  22:46, March 17, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) Supreme Emperor (talk) 02:41, March 19, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Adamar Kirb

 * Nominated by: Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 22:20, March 14, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: The Codex Project begins... !crazylaugh

(4 ECs/1 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 19:19, March 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) My god, not the Codex Project :P Supreme Emperor (talk) 15:17, March 16, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) The Codex Project, CANS incoming...-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  22:59, March 16, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) Winterz (talk) 19:22, March 17, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) &mdash; 05:45, March 21, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * I've never been able to find the Chevin or Duros codex entry in the game. If you were able to find them, you can leave it how it is, but otherwise it seems to me that we can't say that the information is canon. It may just be bugged entry, but if you can't obtain the entry in game its canonicity is unknown. This applies to all three of your codex nominations. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  22:48, March 14, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) **Ugh. Tagged with a Cut and expanded BTS accordingly. Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 15:26, March 15, 2013 (UTC)

Comments
 * 1) I know I've supported, but could you give context on the Cold War, as you did so in the cartel article.  501st  dogma ( talk ) 19:20, March 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) *Done. Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 21:57, March 15, 2013 (UTC)

Adamar Kirb's cartel

 * Nominated by: Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 22:20, March 14, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: The Codex Project

(2 ECs/1 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 19:21, March 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) Quick, kill the noms before they multiply :P Supreme Emperor (talk) 02:42, March 19, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) DIE!!!&mdash;  03:45, March 21, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * The body of the article doesn't say that the cartel was dissloved by the time of the Cold War. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  23:03, March 16, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) **Done. Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 15:27, March 18, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) *Now that I think about it, the part about Kirb's influence still being felt should probably be in this article.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  14:32, March 20, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Sol Vara

 * Nominated by: Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 22:20, March 14, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: The Codex Project

(3 ECs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1) Fe Nite (talk) 23:54, March 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 00:19, March 16, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  14:29, March 20, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) &mdash; 03:38, March 21, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) Supreme Emperor (talk) 03:40, March 21, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) "Famous" seems like POV. Fe Nite (talk) 16:01, March 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) *... Really? That objection is getting thrown around a lot lately, and it's getting rather ridiculous. The actual definition of famous is "widely known" - which is entirely accurate. Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 17:42, March 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) **Alright. Since "famous" means "widely know" you are correct. I was simply thinking that someone could be famous from one viewpoint but infamous from another. But that is not the case. Someone can be infamous and famous at the same time. My mistake. Fe Nite (talk) 23:54, March 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) Should Duros be linked twice in the body? It would be okay if the main part is considered the intro, but if it's considered the body of the article, than we can only have one linking. Thoughts?  501st  dogma ( talk ) 19:26, March 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) *Fixed. Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 21:59, March 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * 6) Exiled Jedi
 * 7) * Could you link to Brotherhood of the Sith instead of Sith? You will probably need to source this to something besides the game.
 * 8) **Done.
 * 9) * Please mention that Vara's gender was unidentified in the BTS. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  22:54, March 17, 2013 (UTC)
 * 10) **Done. Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 15:27, March 18, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Wurrooba

 * Nominated by: 501st  dogma ( talk ) 11:51, March 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Don't try to steal from this guy.....

(0 ECs/1 Users/1 Total)
Support
 * 1) &mdash; DigiFluid(Whine here) 14:40, March 15, 2013 (UTC)

Object Comments
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) *Could you mention the unidentified gender in the BTS?-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  01:28, March 18, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) Stake
 * 4) *You could add Starwind Chandlery to the Wookiee's affiliations in the infobox.
 * Category:Clerical workers and assistants is probably in order.
 * 1) *Could you use a more formal and encyclopedic term rather than "sequel of sorts"?
 * 2) *Moar context on The Far Orbit Project please (is it a book? Is it TFOP that you're referring to in the following sentence?)  Stake black   msg 09:13, March 18, 2013 (UTC)
 * I'll be gone from the 16th of March to the 23th, so unaddressed objections will be dealt with when I get back. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 11:51, March 15, 2013 (UTC)

Mioe

 * Nominated by: 501st  dogma ( talk ) 11:51, March 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: My 200th article created deserves to be a CAN

(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1) &mdash; DigiFluid(Whine here) 14:41, March 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  01:33, March 18, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3)  Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 14:27, March 20, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) &mdash; 07:04, March 21, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Comments
 * I'll be gone from the 16th of March to the 23th, so unaddressed objections will be dealt with when I get back. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 11:51, March 15, 2013 (UTC)

Labio

 * Nominated by: 501st  dogma ( talk ) 11:51, March 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Here's another nom. Have fun

(0 ECs/1 Users/1 Total)
Support
 * 1) &mdash; DigiFluid(Whine here) 14:42, March 15, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) *Could you reword the last sentence of the body to make it clearer that Labio and the Devaronian are the same person?
 * 3) *Please mention the unidentified gender in the BTS.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  01:35, March 18, 2013 (UTC)

Comments
 * I'll be gone from the 16th of March to the 23th, so unaddressed objections will be dealt with when I get back. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 11:51, March 15, 2013 (UTC)

Morol

 * Nominated by: 501st  dogma ( talk ) 14:17, March 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: I hereby swamp you with noms. Take that Cade.

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) &mdash; DigiFluid(Whine here) 04:02, March 17, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) And the Morol of the story is...  Commander Code-8  G'day, mate 21:22, March 17, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Should probably link armor at least once. &mdash; DigiFluid(Whine here) 14:46, March 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) *Fixed. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 15:18, March 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) Exiled Jedi
 * 4) *Please mention the unidentified gender in the BTS.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  01:37, March 18, 2013 (UTC)

Comments
 * I'll be gone from the 16th of March to the 23th, so unaddressed objections will be dealt with when I get back. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 14:17, March 15, 2013 (UTC)

Gjaddia

 * Nominated by: 501st  dogma ( talk ) 14:17, March 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

(0 ECs/1 Users/1 Total)
Support
 * 1) &mdash; DigiFluid(Whine here) 04:03, March 17, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Should probably link armor at least once. &mdash; DigiFluid(Whine here) 14:47, March 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) *Done. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 15:19, March 15, 2013 (UTC)


 * 1) CC-8
 * 2) *Rebellion era needs to be somewhere in the bio.  Commander Code-8  G'day, mate 21:20, March 17, 2013 (UTC)

Comments
 * I'll be gone from the 16th of March to the 23th, so unaddressed objections will be dealt with when I get back. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 14:17, March 15, 2013 (UTC)

Bron Burs's species

 * Nominated by: Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 17:24, March 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: WP:ALIENS and more Chronicles maquettes

(0 ECs/0 Users/0 Total)
Support

Object
 * 1) 501st
 * 2) * White and blue are disambig pages. You should probally link to color instead.
 * 3) **I thought that is traditionally a matter of personal choice, as long as it's consistent throughout the article. In any case, have pipelinked to color now.
 * 4) * Shouldn't it be added to the infobox that the species was sentient? 501st  dogma ( talk ) 19:30, March 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) **Added. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 19:44, March 15, 2013 (UTC)


 * 1) Savaged&hellip;
 * 2) *A great deal more should be said about the physical appearance. That head is quite unlike any other alien we have, and it needs to be described. Talk about where the spines are, how many of them there are, where the eyes are located, where the nostrils are located and what their shape is, the shape of the mouth and where it's located, the overall orientation of the head as flatter than it is tall, the way it goes back into concentric semi-circles toward the back, the fact that we can distinguish a head and torso at least from the pictures in Chronicles.
 * 3) **So this will probably be above 200 words, then the intro would be needed, which would most certainly bring it up to 250 words. May I also request an image from Chronicles? Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 21:24, March 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Check your Wookieepedia email. I have some images but want to send them via email since they'll need to be cropped and whatnot before being usable. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 13:38, March 16, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) ****From updating that stuff alone, the article is 229 words now, so with a required intro it will be too long for CA length. I request for this to be archived as a failure (or maybe I'll archive it myself), and will work on further expanding it and putting it on the GAN page when I have the time (though at the moment I have four articles ready to GAN). Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 14:03, March 16, 2013 (UTC)
 * 6) *You should also mention that Burs wore clothing and say what that was.
 * 7) *In all, I think there's enough visual information here to break out a lead section and then have a proper "Biology and appearance," "Society and culture," and "History" section, even if the latter is only to talk about Burs. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 20:44, March 15, 2013 (UTC)

Comments
 * I emailed the images to your gmail. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 15:09, March 16, 2013 (UTC)

Nemrileo irm-Drocubac

 * Nominated by: Supreme Emperor (talk) 05:14, March 16, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Another for project novels

(0 ECs/1 Users/1 Total)
Support
 * 1) &mdash; DigiFluid(Whine here) 12:30, March 17, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Resident Grammar Nazi &mdash; DigiFluid(Whine here) 04:17, March 17, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) * Grammar: "represented the planet of Tanjay IV" &mdash; the "of" here is unnecessary. I suppose it's not technically wrong, but it's a grammatical quirk that rubs me the wrong way because it doesn't need to be there.
 * 3) **Fixed
 * 4) * Grammar: "others in the separatist movement" &mdash; While I realize this could be a generic usage of the term, it seems to me that, because it's referring to the Separatists, "Separatist" should be capitalized.
 * 5) **Capitalized
 * 6) * Grammar/Style: I'm not sure on this one&mdash;do we know which is this person's given name, and which is his surname? As it's written now, the quote used cites (what appears to be) his given name, where encyclopedic style should be written by surname.
 * 7) **Something like this?
 * 8) * Style: "others in the separatist movement" &mdash; This should probably also link to something related; perhaps Confederacy of Independent Systems.
 * 9) **Linked Supreme Emperor (talk) 12:17, March 17, 2013 (UTC)
 * 10) CC-8
 * 11) * Needs a Bts and a bio
 * 12) **Like this?
 * 13) *Can you clarify why his death sent a message to Shui Mai haters? And if his death served as a message does that mean it was planned or really an accident?
 * 14) **Does the quote I added give more context, or would you like me to reword that line a bit?
 * 15) ***Some rewording would help, I'm still not sure why he was connected to the CIS
 * 16) *Articles for his wife and children
 * 17) **Don't really have enough information on them to make articles. For his wife, all i could really say was she was his wife.
 * 18) ***I'm pretty sure they still warrant creation anyway, a lot of articles are made by people who are briefly mentioned.
 * 19) * Looking at the Holonet article it says that Palpatine was going to his funeral, probably worth saying.
 * 20) **Added
 * 21) * I don't know why his name is referenced in the infobox.
 * 22) **This is what happens when you reference stuff just before going to bed :P
 * Ok, hopefully all these don't take the article past 250 words.  Commander Code-8  G'day, mate 21:18, March 17, 2013 (UTC)
 * 1) **Thanks for the review. Supreme Emperor (talk) 02:56, March 18, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) *You could link to the Holonet report in the Bts
 * 3) *What conspiracy was he part of that's mentioned in the first quote. Should be mentioned.  Commander Code-8  G'day, mate 05:16, March 21, 2013 (UTC)

Comments
 * Join project novels :) Supreme Emperor (talk) 05:23, March 16, 2013 (UTC)

Brohmer

 * Nominated by: Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 22:40, March 17, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Project Hero brings you even more trainers

(1 ECs/0 Users/1 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  14:33, March 20, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * I believe that you should create an article for the chemical in Quesh's atmosphere that causes it to be toxic so that you can link to it in the article. I believe it was called Quesh venom in the game. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  01:40, March 18, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) **Done. Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 15:28, March 18, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Darb Misken

 * Nominated by: Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 22:40, March 17, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Project Hero brings you even more trainers

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  01:42, March 18, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) Supreme Emperor (talk) 03:34, March 18, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Hasslo

 * Nominated by: Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 00:05, March 18, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Project Hero

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 * 1)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  14:50, March 20, 2013 (UTC)

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 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * It looks like his hair color is black from his eyebrows. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  01:45, March 18, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) **Done. Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 15:29, March 18, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) *** You can mention the hari color in the infobox. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  14:30, March 20, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) ****Done. Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 14:35, March 20, 2013 (UTC)

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Plutonic detonation

 * Nominated by:  Stake black   msg 09:04, March 18, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

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 * 1)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  13:10, March 18, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) &mdash; 03:46, March 21, 2013 (UTC)

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Tig Fromm's starship

 * Nominated by: – Tm_T@Wookieepedia:&#126;$ 12:10, March 19, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Back in business, I suppose, I never managed to find any other source for this ship so here we are. (:

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 * 1) It's good to see you back, Tm. :)&mdash;  07:01, March 21, 2013 (UTC)

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 * 1) Context on Lon Idd and 3PO needed. Nice work, otherwise.&mdash;  03:29, March 21, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) * Added context on Idd, pee-ooh, and for the location of where the laser incident happened. (: – Tm_T@Wookieepedia:&#126;$ 06:29, March 21, 2013 (UTC)

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Color-crawler

 * Nominated by: - Princess   GLG  12:34, March 19, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: First CAN, not sure how good it is.

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 * 1) Not bad at all.&mdash;  03:30, March 21, 2013 (UTC)

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 * 1) Stake
 * Great work for a first nom. Couple of things:
 * "Package" is repeated three times in there. Try a synonym.
 * Better?
 * The colored slime can be added to the "distinctions" field of the infobox.
 * Added.
 * Link to the kidnapping of the Solo children. Also, please specify the names of the children kidnapped.
 * Done.
 * Beef up that BtS! More context on The Crystal Star. Is it a book? Who wrote it? The writer is important because he is the one who created the color-crawler.
 * Better?
 * If he is non-sentient as the infobox says, this information should also be on the body.
 * I guess the sources do not really say they are non-sentient only that they are creatures. So, I removed that from the infobox.
 * Context on Leia Organa Solo,  Stake black   msg 13:47, March 19, 2013 (UTC)
 * I think I fixed most of that. - Princess   GLG  14:23, March 19, 2013 (UTC)

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Unidentified Muun ambassador

 * Nominated by: Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 16:55, March 19, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Project Hero

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 * 1) *How did T7-01 find out the Muun was OK?
 * 2) **No idea.
 * 3) *Could you link "Twenty years later" to the appropriate date you give in the note?
 * 4) **Done.
 * 5) *Please remove "unnamed" from the BTS.&mdash; 03:35, March 21, 2013 (UTC)
 * 6) **Done. Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 16:22, March 21, 2013 (UTC)
 * 7) *Nice work, I have become preoccupied with Muuns for some reason. Darth Plagueis, perhaps.&mdash; 03:35, March 21, 2013 (UTC)

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Unidentified doctor

 * Nominated by: Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 16:55, March 19, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Project Hero

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 * 1) &mdash; 03:36, March 21, 2013 (UTC)

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Prudy's father

 * Nominated by: Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 17:01, March 19, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Project Hero

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 * 1) &mdash; 03:48, March 21, 2013 (UTC)

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Prudy's mother

 * Nominated by: Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 17:01, March 19, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Project Hero

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 * 1) &mdash; 03:50, March 21, 2013 (UTC)

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Prudy's hospital

 * Nominated by: Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 18:35, March 19, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Project Hero

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 * Not gonna object to this, but wouldn't it be better to refer to Kimble as such throughout the article, while keeping the note of his nickname?&mdash; 03:52, March 21, 2013 (UTC)

Battle on Amador

 * Nominated by: Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 02:11, March 20, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Project Hero

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 * 1) Dat carnage&hellip;&mdash;  03:53, March 21, 2013 (UTC)

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Amador fortress

 * Nominated by: Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 02:11, March 20, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Project Hero

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 * 1) Ditto.&mdash;  03:54, March 21, 2013 (UTC)

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Krusk

 * Nominated by:  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  14:00, March 20, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: My response to the codex project...

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 * 1) &mdash; 03:55, March 21, 2013 (UTC)

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Haskit

 * Nominated by:  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  14:27, March 20, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Part 2

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 * 1) &mdash; 03:56, March 21, 2013 (UTC)

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 * Even though the sources say she influenced politics on Bothawui, I do not think it is safe to say that she was from Bothawui or part of the Bothan government.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  14:27, March 20, 2013 (UTC)

Ora

 * Nominated by:  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  14:46, March 20, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Part 3

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 * 1) Pretty.&mdash;  03:57, March 21, 2013 (UTC)

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Nebula Forso

 * Nominated by:  Stake black   msg 21:18, March 20, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: WP:ASTing

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Unidentified Zabrak Dark Jedi

 * Nominated by: &mdash; 02:54, March 21, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Anonymous&hellip;

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Unidentified Dark Jedi (Cho sun)

 * Nominated by: &mdash; 03:19, March 21, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Ha ha ha.

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Unidentified Ithorian Jedi (Disarming slash)

 * Nominated by: &mdash; 04:44, March 21, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Gotta love the Ithorians&hellip;

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Unidentified Imperial officer (Ithorian Jedi)

 * Nominated by: &mdash; 05:06, March 21, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Dummy.

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