User talk:Jack Nebulax/workbench


 * From the desk of Atarumaster88
 * Note: By user request in IRC
 * A mention of his combat experience on a Basilisk is also needed
 * I suppose you should technically add the EaW:FoC Prima guide as a source also
 * Escaped the vessel uninjured, not "escape"
 * Could benefit from perhaps a skills or weapons systems section. Something to highlight what he's good at
 * An image with more of a full-body look would be good. On Taris perhaps
 * I don't like the later life section.	It's really speculative
 * Mandalorian tradition "forbade", not "forbid"
 * Take the quotes off of "personal"
 * And the bit about Travels with Revan . . . we have a gameplay mechanics header template to denote events that might be gameplay. Definitely use that.
 * I'd remove the Vong bit too
 * Take out the speculation on the Vagaari unless it's supported in a canonical source
 * Lots of references.
 * I suppose you should technically add the EaW:FoC Prima guide as a source also
 * Add both the Prima guides as sources
 * Have a Super Terrific Friendly Un-frustrating day. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 23:51, 11 September 2007 (UTC)