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Re: Rebellion
Sadly, I can not find my copy. Thanks for the offer though, and I'm sorry I can't join you in a game.  Chack Jadson  Talk 13:35, 7 August 2007 (UTC)

2-1B

 * Erm, all of the information you added was in the form of speculation. And the one thing you "sourced" was written in POV, which is a big no-no here. Long story short, none of your edit could be verefied. So any attempts to revert my revert will be met with the same. You'll then get banned for breaking the RRR rule.  Jasca Ducato Sith Council 19:26, 18 August 2007 (UTC)
 * Just for calling me a "mindless, agenda-seeking editor", i'm going to say no. All of that information was wrong as far as this wiki goes. it was not sourced properly, and those links have no place in the article if they are not sourced.  Jasca Ducato Sith Council 19:34, 18 August 2007 (UTC)
 * Then fix it properly. And once again, I don't like being accused falsely; so saying i'm to prideful to contribute to the community is extremley annoying!  Jasca Ducato Sith Council 19:44, 18 August 2007 (UTC)

death star plans
Thanks for notifying me... So all this already existed. I should have checked the article before starting my own. Would you consider exporting parts from the DS article to the plans article? I would do it, although after 24 hours, and I think asking you to start the task until I am availiable again to finalize it.

BTW: I was confused at first by what you meant 'category'. I have to tell you, these are called 'sections' in Wiki terminology. Categories are different things altogether. MoffRebus 23:03, 2 September 2007 (UTC)
 * OK, i'd like to remind you to consider once more expanding the Death Star II plans article with your information and clean up the Death Star II article. MoffRebus 10:58, 11 September 2007 (UTC)
 * I think the cutscene appeared in the correct order, that means after the attack on Kothlis and their recapture MoffRebus 14:44, 14 September 2007 (UTC)

Rebellion
Yes I have played it but never managed to finish MoffRebus 07:19, 3 September 2007 (UTC)
 * Thanks for your invitation. I am not experienced in online gaming and I am too bad a Rebellion player to make an enjoyable opponent but perhaps I will find some opportunity :) MoffRebus 19:22, 3 September 2007 (UTC)

MK-09
Yeah, I did manage to locate that particular quote... I'm attempting to work it in somewhere in that article, and if not there, then somewhere else. Maybe even QotD, who knows? Jorrel Fraajic 03:49, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
 * Hey, thanks a lot. And thank you for the general fixing up you did... it was appreciated. Jorrel [[Image:Wiki-shrinkable.png|20px]] Fraajic 20:30, 22 October 2007 (UTC)

Re: Jar Jar in "Jedi"...?

 * Um, what deleted scene, may I ask, are you referring to that Jar Jar appears in? Toprawa and Ralltiir 01:45, 15 September 2007 (UTC)


 * But if you click here, you can see a youtube star wars episode VI deleted scene video Jar Jar being mention. Darth Haco (My talk) 1:56, 15 September 2007 (UTC)

Galaxy
You reverted my legit edits for Black Sun in which I changed "the Galaxy" to the "galaxy." There has been a concensus track about this issue (http://starwars.wikia.com/index.php?title=Forum:CT_Archive/Capitalizing_%22galaxy%22_-_arguments_against%2C_and_request_for_revote&t=20070713184145) and the result was to stop capitalizing galaxy. Consider this a warning. Now that this was brought to your attention, the next time you revert such changes, it will be considered vandalism. - TopAce (Talk) 15:46, 25 September 2007 (UTC)
 * That's why I brought it to your attention first. And that concensus isn't a new one. - TopAce (Talk) 16:00, 25 September 2007 (UTC)

Excuse me but...
I honestly didn't appreciate your "narcissistic prick" comment about Jack. I think that many would agree with me, and I'll do everything in my power to bring him back. If he does return, please tone down the attacks. Rodtheanimegod4ever 03:47, 23 October 2007 (UTC)

General Thanks
Thanks for the general clean-up and clarification of the GG3 info here. Keep up the stellar work compadre. Cull Tremayne 03:23, 29 October 2007 (UTC)

Problem reports

 * I noticed your problem report on the Y-wing article and I thought you should know that the problem report link at the top right of every article is for reporting technical problems, such as "The infobox is displaying at 600px width for no apparent reason." It's not meant for editing dispute "problems." Just thought I'd let you know. :) - JMAS 19:47, 2 November 2007 (UTC)
 * Ah, yes. Thanks! Toprawa and Ralltiir 20:17, 2 November 2007 (UTC)

Redundant categories

 * I noticed you added a number of articles to Category:Rebel Alliance members. These articles all were already in one or more subcategories of that category - typically, Category:Alliance Military officers.  In such cases, the broader category is redundant, and thus I have removed them.  jSarek 21:22, 7 November 2007 (UTC)
 * Ok. I did see the subcategories linked on the main category page, but didn't really consider the redundancy of it all. Thanks. Toprawa and Ralltiir 22:30, 7 November 2007 (UTC)

Garaint objections
I addressed your objections. If you could review and strike as necessary, it would be appreciated. Greyman ( Paratus ) 03:17, 22 November 2007 (UTC)
 * Objections struck out. Good work on the article. I'm glad to see Garaint reach (soon to be) FA status. Toprawa and Ralltiir 03:44, 22 November 2007 (UTC)

Great Temple Valley: Siths?
I used the information to identify them as Sith temples because the main Barkhesh page identifies the planet species as "Formerly: Sith." Maybe that should be fixed instead, but just for the record I've changed "Sith" to "unknown civilization".

comment from the Imperial Commander
When I said "broadside attack", I meant the kind of attack when ships engage from the side. Remember how that Venator Attack Cruiser engaged the Invisible Hand? That's what I meant by "broadside attack." This particular scene began when a TIE Fighter, shot up, crashed into the command deck of a Star Destroyer. When you head later into the scene, you'll see the Redemption and the Empire exchanging turbolaser fire, the frigate sustaining more damage than the Star Destroyer before its imminent destruction. Come on Toprawa and Ralltir, don't let me down. This is valuable information, and shouldn't be thrown aside like a piece of trash.

And why does it say there were +12 TIE Hunters at the Battle of Endor? There weren't any TIE Hunters in the battle, they were all destroyed at Destrillion and Fondor. Unless you're talking about 1 modified TIE Hunter, my starfighter of choice.

Good catch on Lando
Glad you caught it before it made the front page. I should've popped the DVD in for a double-check before queueing it. Enochf 22:51, 1 December 2007 (UTC)

Executor article
Changed wording and added sources. I can't actually remember specifically writing this, but it's been changed to follow actual information, especially from the KOTOR Handbook which recently came out. VT-16 14:43, 2 December 2007 (UTC)

Re: Executor's role at Battle of Mygeeto

 * Basically, it's the flagship of the Imperial fleet under Vader which is sent to Mygeeto after the Rebel base is discovered. Admiral Piett's in command of the ship at the time. All of the Imperial Ace's missions launch from there, and Vader leads the ground troops down to the planet so presumably at least some are from the Executor. Other than that, there's only the third mission that involves the Executor when the fleet comes under attack from the Rebels. Doesn't show what the Executor does during the attack though. Hope that helps a little. Green Tentacle (Talk) 21:07, 3 December 2007 (UTC)
 * As far as I know, nothing actually says when the game takes place. The 0 ABY thing can't be right as you said, but I based 3 ABY purely on Piett being an Admiral and the TIE Defender being in the game. Beyond that, I couldn't say. Green Tentacle (Talk) 18:29, 5 December 2007 (UTC)

Aurra Sing comic
Hey T&R, I have an e-copy of The Bounty Hunters: Aurra Sing which might help you with the Wampa article. Let me know if you'd like me to e-mail it to you (or some other method), either on my talk page or on IRC. Thanks, --  AdmirableAckbar  [Talk] 19:58, 4 December 2007 (UTC)
 * Yeah, if you could give it to me I'll send it ASAP. If you don't want to post it on a talk page, you could come into IRC where far less who see it. Glad I could be of assistance. --  AdmirableAckbar  [Talk] 12:16, 5 December 2007 (UTC)
 * Glad to see that Ackbar was on the case... to tell the truth I had actually forgotten about it. :-P Carlitos Moff 02:31, 6 December 2007 (UTC)

Re: Versus
I didn't read the comic. I wrote the article based on the online preview. That's why my plot section was extremely short. -LtNOWIS 03:38, 6 December 2007 (UTC)
 * Pretty much the same. I only made a minor edit, and don't actually own the comic. Try asking Kuralyov, or Jaymach. They each have large collections of Star Wars material.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 00:03, 7 December 2007 (UTC)

Wampa
Hello, T&R. I just sat down to read it a second ago. Thanks for fixing those things. I've been out the last few days with work, so I apologize for the delay. I only got back on WP a couple of hours ago and then had to run another rehearsal. I should be through it shortly. Thanks for your patience.  Master Aban Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 02:24, 7 December 2007 (UTC)
 * Okay, all set. Feel free, however, to keep tweaking the POV in the History section, but I give it my vote. You've done nice work on the article. I look forward to seeing more GANs and hopefully some FANs from you. Keep in the back of your mind, however, that the wampa article might have enough to eventually have FA status. It will take a lot of work, but it could be worth it if you are willing to put in the time.  Master Aban Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 03:02, 7 December 2007 (UTC)
 * Hello. Having not played the game which you were asking about ever (I've watched it being played, but I have no real interest in first person shooters, and while that is not the sole purpose of the game it is a major portion) I actually have no idea as to what role a wampa would play in that game. I was probably running around fixing redirects(boring, I know) so my edits will have little if anything to do with the subject of what I am editing.  Amth  ( Enter my Mind ) 15:52, 10 December 2007 (UTC)
 * Hey, about your question: I think you could add that some wampas lived near Echo Base. Other than that, I don't know :D  Stake black   msg 19:26, 11 December 2007 (UTC)
 * Regarding the BtS request: Just some basic appearances info. When they first appeared, any prominent subsequent appearances, that they appear in a lot of games (and list a few), etc. Graestan ( This party's over ) 02:42, 14 December 2007 (UTC)

Information
It looks fine to me. Kuralyov 06:11, 7 December 2007 (UTC)

Wampa reference
It's been a while since I've seen that episode, but I remember that one of the characters compares something to a Wampa. Adamwankenobi 04:05, 16 December 2007 (UTC)
 * I'll look into it tomorrow and get back to ya. Adamwankenobi 05:23, 17 December 2007 (UTC)

Wampa mentioned in Dark Journey
Hi! I'm sorry I haven't answered you before. Haven't logged in the last few days (tried to yesterday, but my PC went amok). It's been a while since I added the Wampa's mentioned in Dark Journey, but if I remember correctly, someone mentioned the snow monster in passing, there was no new information etc.Nightlily 16:37, 21 December 2007 (UTC)

More Wampa!?
I see you editing the article more. If you prepare and nominate this for featured article, I will help you in addressing any objections posted by reviewers on the page. You're a rather dedicated user, you know that? Graestan ( Talk ) 00:00, 22 December 2007 (UTC)
 * Just a side note, I read Darksaber and during the course of the book Luke and Callista go to Hoth, where they meet up with the remains of an expedition that was ambushed by a group of wampas that, presumably, was led by the very same creature that Luke disarmed in The Empire Strikes Back. The group is basically eliminated save for the two Jedi, who are stranded there for a short time because their ship was smashed by said wampas. I forget how they eventually escape, though...something involving Echo Base.-- Goodwood [[Image:Redstarbird.svg|20px]] ( Alliance Intelligence ) 03:56, 22 December 2007 (UTC)

Winky Smiley

 * Ending Palpy's line with a winky smiley . . . priceless. jSarek 05:46, 23 December 2007 (UTC)
 * I thought it added a nice touch. =) Toprawa and Ralltiir 05:52, 23 December 2007 (UTC)
 * Not exactly in the same boat, but similar enough to be worth pointing out, I think you might enjoy this. jSarek 10:41, 23 December 2007 (UTC)
 * Hah, that's good stuff. People were asking me why I was laughing, and I had to tell them it was beyond their comprehension. Toprawa and Ralltiir 21:20, 23 December 2007 (UTC)

Merry Christmas!

 * And happy birthday, too! Graestan ( Talk ) 06:12, 27 December 2007 (UTC)

RE: Please include sources with your edits
I would actually appreciate if you pointed out the help page dealing with sources, I can't seem to find it anywhere, or if you took the time and explained it to me. Everything i have, and will, contribute to Wookieepedia will be sourced froma canon source.

Cheers!!

2.5 Added sources/appearances
Thank you very much for the help. I'm new to this. Right now I'm editing the planetary information box for Chazwa, and is there a specific html i need to use to source edits in the information boxes( i don't know what the proper term is), or do i just use the code you showed me?Cheers!! Subvertc 21:01, 29 December 2007 (UTC)

I heard through the grapevine . ..
First off, Merry Christmas and Happy 2008! I heard however, that you had a birthday. So, happy birthday! :)

Thanks for your hard work with WP. It is much appreciated by all of us who are constantly trying to learn something new.  Master Aban Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 21:18, 29 December 2007 (UTC)
 * I second this. Happy Birthday TR and Happy New Year! --  Riffsyphon  1024 07:15, 31 December 2007 (UTC)

On FA objections
A bit of advice: The power of an objection is that you don't have to strike it until and unless the nominator meets your demands. No need to waste your time arguing; the fact that you haven't struck sends a clear message to the nominator that you're not backing down. Oh, and on your CT: It's never been a practice here to include prose in quotes. I am thoroughly against it, and I would never have even thought of making that policy. If you were to open a voting section, I think you'd find your consensus rather quickly. Graestan ( Talk ) 18:02, 1 January 2008 (UTC)
 * A conversation on MSN-AIM or e-mail would be desirable. Graestan ( Talk ) 03:21, 9 January 2008 (UTC)

My Renegade Squadron edits
''I would ask that you please back track and source all of the information you are adding to the Battle of Hoth and Battle of Endor articles. Please source all new material you add. Thanks. Toprawa and Ralltiir 05:03, 2 January 2008 (UTC)''

Done. Darth Morgus 19:37, 3 January 2008 (UTC)

Inflatable forklift committee
Coming to the Mofference? It's in just over an hour. Mofferences are like CTs in time-lapse; a great way to participate in the enactment of policy. It's in the IRC if you're interested. Graestan ( Talk ) 22:53, 5 January 2008 (UTC)
 * Holy crap! Mark Buehrle's high school is less than a mile from my house. My two roommates went there, even. But I'm originally from the other side of the Missouri River: St. Louis county. Graestan ( Talk ) 23:13, 5 January 2008 (UTC)

Re: Still more wampa
I place in you my trust. I think the additions are fine, and IMO it's more ready than many articles are for a nomination. Like I said; I'll help you with objections. Go for launch on my end. Graestan ( Talk ) 04:25, 6 January 2008 (UTC)

Welcomes
SFH is a user. When you welcome someone, put YourName on their talk page. Graestan ( Talk ) 16:27, 7 January 2008 (UTC)

Re:Ataru
I'd say just shrink it down, however possible. It's often hard to tell exactly what a reviewer wants with such objections, so you might also ask Ataru what he expects to see when you've finished. Graestan ( Talk ) 20:34, 8 January 2008 (UTC)

Re:Tarrin Datch
Sorry about that. I've been meaning to look at it for five days but somehow have never gotten around to it.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 22:53, 8 January 2008 (UTC)

Thanks
Thanks for the welcome...Priceline negotiator 00:20, 9 January 2008 (UTC)
 * Thanks man, I love the commercials. I'm from Wikipedia, but I go under a different username there, that's why I no so much about wiki formatting. Not many new users know that much, so I bet you're suprised :)Priceline negotiator 00:24, 9 January 2008 (UTC)
 * I will, but again thanks for the welcome.Priceline negotiator 00:29, 9 January 2008 (UTC)

Independence
Done. Graestan ( Talk ) 05:15, 11 January 2008 (UTC)

Sweet Johnny Depp picture
Unfortunately, yes. I'd planned on spending the night reading a few hundred pages or so of Les Miserábles, but I stupidly lent it to my deadbeat friend Jake on Tuesday, thinking he'd read the first couple chapters or so and see if he found Monsieur Hugo's writing style to his liking, then get the book back to me in a timely manner. Well, I haven't heard from him since then, so hopefully he's just so engrossed in the story he's forgotten to check his missed calls. Anyway, that put me in a bit of a bind for the evening, so I decided I'd spend the end of it mucking about on Wookieepedia until I pass out. No offense about the accent thing, man, it's just that my friend Jake who I told you I lent the book to happens to be Scottish, and his accent is the best and most worthwhile thing about him, if you take my meaning. Lieutenant Gerard 05:38, 11 January 2008 (UTC)
 * I'm very passionate about the Scots. But working my way through the quotations page, I see that you recently downvoted one of my own nominations, so I can't say you didn't deserve it. ;) Lieutenant Gerard 05:46, 11 January 2008 (UTC)

IRC
Sorry; forgot you didn't use a chat program. Atuo-rejoin makes booting more fun and less offensive. My bad. Graestan ( Talk ) 01:26, 14 January 2008 (UTC)

Re: Wormie

 * You can if you want to. I haven't been simply because I already know what I'm working on and I've been the only one working on it. I'd rather you simply worked on what you could, crossed it off, and didn't feel obligated to work on something because you felt you had to. That said, if you would like to sign your name by something, feel free to. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 22:56, 14 January 2008 (UTC)

Re: Galleries = bad
Toprawa and Ralltiir,

Thank you to informed me about that. Actually I didn't know that the galleries will be deleted. But, what will happen with the images in those galleries? They will be just deleted too?

One more time, Thank you for informed me, User:Lucas22

FYI about FAN objections

 * It's generally discouraged to object to little things such as commas, not because they need fixed, but because it's usually easier to fix them oneself rather than create extra workload for the nominator. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 01:22, 17 January 2008 (UTC)
 * Oh, I know, I was just too lazy to do it myself. I'll make sure to avoid this for the future. Toprawa and Ralltiir 01:28, 17 January 2008 (UTC)

Wampa
There is a little bit of info on Wampas here that you may like to add to your FAN. In addition, my may like to add a tid-bit about Gir Kybo Ren-Cha using a wampa skull as his pirate logo per his databank entry. ALso there is another conept art image here you may like to use. (That's assuming you have Hyperspace. If not, let me know.) --Eyrezer 09:19, 18 January 2008 (UTC)
 * The image is here. It was accompanied by this text: "This early Joe Johnston illustration of the wampa ice creature had it appear very alien as compared to its more naturalistic final version." However, on second thought, we don't use Hyperspace only images so you may not be able to use it. :S --Eyrezer 20:39, 18 January 2008 (UTC)

Theta-class AT-AT barge
I found that information on CUSWE, whether it's true or not, I don't know, as I don't have that book. VT-16 12:37, 21 January 2008 (UTC)

Idle GA nomination
You know, the thing is that I don't have the game with me right now, and I don't think I'd be able to improve the writing style, since English isn't my first language.

Still, I'll give it a shot ^^. I was kinda gathering strenght to make the major modifications until now... Thanks for the wake-up call :P. Cheers  Stake black   msg 15:56, 21 January 2008 (UTC)


 * My apologies, then.  Stake black   msg 00:44, 22 January 2008 (UTC)
 * Sure, no problem, mate. Cheers.  Stake black   msg 18:31, 1 February 2008 (UTC)

About the edits I made.
Hello Toprawa and Ralltiir. I just received a message that I did some vandalism to this site by adding nonsense to Wookieepedia and that am in risk of being blocked. However I am curious to what I have done to receive this. The only thing I see I have done was change that Battle of Bespin (Galactic Civil War) came after the Battle of Korriban (Galactic Civil War) rather than the Second Battle of Sullust. Seeing as the Second Battle of Sullust article listed the Battle of Ahto, Battle of the Cliffs, and Battle of Bespin as coming before it I thought I should list the articles as such. Is there something wrong with this or did I do something else bad?--66.176.63.70 20:17, 22 January 2008 (UTC)

Galaxy
Sorry again, mate :x  Stake black   msg 16:59, 24 January 2008 (UTC)
 * Yeah, I was reading that now... I think Wookieepedians should be more friendly, wouldn't you think?  Stake black   msg 17:03, 24 January 2008 (UTC)
 * I bet... I'm not new, though, I just don't participate much often. Anyways, thanks for the heads up.  Stake black   msg 17:22, 24 January 2008 (UTC)

Bullet points

 * Replied here. --McEwok 23:45, 24 January 2008 (UTC)

Wikipedia links on real-world/in-universe topics
I noticed you removed the wikipedia link on Big Bang: I think it should stay, since it gives a more complete explanation of what a Big Bang actually is than we could get using just canonical sources. I believe we have similar links on articles like Ambak limit, Dog, Human, Black hole, etc., all of which give useful information. I really don't think there's any point to removing them. &mdash;Silly Dan (talk) 23:49, 24 January 2008 (UTC)

Tenk Lenso
Don't know if you noticed, but Tenk Lenso passed GA.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 20:57, 29 January 2008 (UTC)

Re:GAN page
Hey Toprawa and Ralltiir. I normally take care of archiving articles, both failed and successful, from the GAN page. That being said, during my vacation from Wookieepedia, it unfortunately went unattended for too long. Nevertheless, now that I'm back on the site, I'm back to taking care of it and maintaining the articles nominated on it. I already cleaned out the successful noms, and removed the inactive one that has been sitting there for a long time. Usually, in my absence, another admin or Chack usually archive noms that need to be, but I guess that didn't happen too much while I was gone, eh? lol. Anyways, if I'm not around the site for whatever reason, or you just feel like helping out, check out this page → Good articles/instructions. It will walk you through archiving both successful and unsuccessful nominations. My rule of thumb for archiving unsuccessful noms is one month of inactivity on the GAN page&mdash;meaning that the nominator has not attempted to address any objections or the objector. For successful noms, just follow the time line that is on the GAN page&mdash;7 days since it's nomination + 5 Support votes + no oppose votes. Any other questions, you know where you can reach me. Cheers, Greyman ( Paratus ) 21:48, 1 February 2008 (UTC)
 * Hey, just following up with you. Did you run into any problems with that instructions page I left you? Ma'kis'shaalas should become a GA after today, so if you want to try your skills at it, feel free to archive it as a successful nom :) Poke me on IRC or my talk page if you have any questions. Greyman ( Paratus ) 14:52, 2 February 2008 (UTC)

Davey Felth
Hey broseph,

In my self-exile from Wookieepedia (for revision purposes) I find myself occasionally watching the articles undergoing major edits with anticipation as to their eventual FA status! So naturally I'm a fan of your ESB articles, and I saw you're also editing one of my favourite characters, ole' Davin Felth.

Anyway the point of this message is that I thought that there's an interesting bit from that new Darth Vader book which came out, which shows Vader ordering the execution of Uncle Owen and Aunt Beru. There's a good picture too, found (I think) on Anakin's own page. The one with the holographic projection of Owen and Beru cowering in the sand and Vader towering over it? Thought it could be a good addition to the article, as well as a bit of intriguing information to come out of the source, in that Vader himself must order Terrik to polish off his step-family, and Davin does not follow through with the order.

Of course it's up to you. Just some friendly Wookieepedian info. Harrar 20:57, 4 February 2008 (UTC)

Bollocks, there's no link to the pic on Skywalker's page. You can find it here, and the source is the Rise and Fall of Darth Vader. I posted the image anyway. Harrar 21:03, 4 February 2008 (UTC)

Sorry dude I didn't mean to be misleading. Felth himself isn't mentioned in the Rise and Fall of Darth Vader; I only know that there's a bit of extra info about the execution, which as I leaf through When the Desert Wind Turns seems to be a scene of relative importance. I only meant that this new, more recent info could be used if you wanted to add a line like "Captain Terrik received an order from Darth Vader himself to execute the moisture farmers,(ref - Rise and Fall of Darth Vader) but, disgusted as he was by the earlier killings, Felth did not take part in the retribution visited by Zeta Squad upon the Lars Homestead(!).(ref - When the Desert Wind Turns)"

Then again, it isn't a source which is implicitly referencing Felth, so it's up to you :P. Sorry to cause any confusion! Harrar 23:17, 4 February 2008 (UTC)




 * Here is the pic from SWE. I cropped out the words, and you can see the difference in the background. You may like to fix that or I can upload it again with the text or whatever. --Eyrezer 09:41, 8 February 2008 (UTC)

Felth's partner

 * Just for linkage's sake (if you didn't know) the guy that goes with Felth into the cantina and later shoots Het Nkik is "1047"  Vetinari (Appointment) 19:17, 8 February 2008 (UTC)

Re:

 * Heh, if you're referring to Star Map, I think you were the one who forgot to close a tag. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 19:01, 6 February 2008 (UTC)

Greedo
I have the book, so if you give me time I can check.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 22:40, 11 February 2008 (UTC)
 * Actually, I don't have EGAS. I thought the source was Tales from the Mos Eisley Cantina, as I thought I read that in there. However, I don't know which story that event was in, plus, I could easily be mistaken, so I'll simply strike my objection. It's a minor thing.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 01:13, 12 February 2008 (UTC)
 * All right.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 21:41, 12 February 2008 (UTC)

Inq collaboration
I know you've been going through the list of current FAs, and I was hoping you could place a few of the ones (or, hell, all of them) that you consider to be below standards on the agenda for the Inq meeting page. We are especially looking for ones with bigger problems than just infobox sourcing. Any help would be much appreciated. Thanks! Graestan ( Talk ) 16:15, 13 February 2008 (UTC)

thanks
thanks for the heads up man

Ciopyedit request
It would be greatly appreciated if you could perform a copyedit for Project Destiny. There's plenty of time left before it has to get plugged into the article it is meant to replace, so no rush. :-) -- Goodwood  ( Alliance Intelligence ) 23:30, 13 February 2008 (UTC)

Re:Ibtisam
Thanks. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 12:19, 14 February 2008 (UTC)

Re: Rebellion era
I thought it began with the Battle of Yavin, but the source you listed apparently disagrees. -LtNOWIS 21:37, 14 February 2008 (UTC)

Re: Leaf Queen
No worries. The "unfortunate" pun was just too much. :-P Sorry if I came off too defensive. Wasn't my intent. :D Cull Tremayne 05:54, 16 February 2008 (UTC)

Wormhead

 * I went ahead and did something I had been meaning to do and opened a second project page that you can post material on if you're not quite sure where to put it, but want to keep it on the site for future reference or so that someone else can take care of it. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 03:24, 18 February 2008 (UTC)

Nyrox

 * Just curious, but why did you revert my edit of the BTS on this article? If the tense I changed is fine for BTS, than would it be "...rather than rewarding Felth as he does Nyrox, Veers reassigns Felth..." instead of "rather than rewarding Felth as he did..." ? I don't mind you reverting, but I was curious to see what the difference is with BTS so that I can avoid an unneeded correction in the future. On an unrelated note, you're doing a great job with the FAN process, so keep up the good work! Thanks, Hobbes ( Tiger's Lair ) 01:44, 20 February 2008 (UTC)
 * No worries. The reason I changed what I did is because you had part of the sentence in past tense and part of it in present, and as I wasn't aware that you wanted the BTS in present tense, I figured it was meant to be past. Anyway, thanks for the quick response, and have a good day. Hobbes ( Tiger's Lair ) 02:42, 20 February 2008 (UTC)

Executor
It's in a cutscene, and it has to be non-canon because every other source has it being launched after the events of the game. Kuralyov 06:15, 21 February 2008 (UTC)

Zuckuss
You'll have to point me in the direction of the stuff that only occurs in the intro, because I'm pretty sure that all of it is elaborated upon further in the main article. The reason the intro was sourced originally was because this was basically the first article to be sourced, so I was a little rusty on where refs needed to be added. Glad you liked the FA machine mention. Now to get rid of that last pesky "fact" tag. :-P Cull Tremayne 00:47, 23 February 2008 (UTC)
 * That's a good point about GG3. Of course, I was only using it there to source that he was working under the Galactic Empire. Something that's sourced later in the article. Not even sure if we need that ref. As for the dialects mention, I might be using the word wrong, but the bit in the middle of the first section that details his change in speech patterns is what I'm referring to there. Cull Tremayne 01:09, 23 February 2008 (UTC)

IRC
You were next to be voiced! Bah! Graestan ( Talk ) 02:37, 23 February 2008 (UTC)

Re:Dendo
Thanks, Toprawa -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 11:47, 24 February 2008 (UTC)

Plains Battle
I was actually the original one to move the battle to the name "Battle of Grassy Plains," but since there seems to be an article called Great Grassy Plains, I assumed this was the actual name of the site and, therefore, the name of the battle. Wolfdog 00:11, 26 February 2008 (UTC)

c3p0
The only reason why I put that there was becuase it says that on Wikipedia. It says that he latter appeared in Luke's temple, saying thay he was rescued by Otlap.Black Kirby 03:08, 28 February 2008 (UTC)

C'baoth
Thanks for the info. I'll fit it in somewhere. In regards to your second comment, era tags are only added when a character appears in that era. Look at K'Kruhk.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 21:17, 29 February 2008 (UTC)
 * He does appear in some era prior to NR, according to this line: "...he was placed on the planet Wayland by Emperor Palpatine..." Since Palpatine is still alive when he placed him here, at the very least it places him in the Rebellion era. Toprawa and Ralltiir 21:22, 29 February 2008 (UTC)
 * I see your point. I'll add Rise of the Empire era.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 21:32, 29 February 2008 (UTC)

Thanks!
Hey man. Got your message, and thanks a lot! I'm definitely getting a kick out of making the contributions, and I've go a few more FA works in mind. Thanks for all your help with Thyne; your objections were nice and thorough and I thought it really helped improve Thyne by the end. --Colinmcev 17:30, 8 March 2008 (UTC)

Gar Stazi
I have made several edits, as well as addressed the concerns that you and others brought up. When you have a chance let me know if you reccomend any other changes. My hope is to have the article up to GA status by Wednesday, when Legacy #21 comes out. AdmiralNick22 18:14, 8 March 2008 (UTC)
 * Hey Topwara and Ralltiir. I really appreciate all your help on the Stazi article. I will be gone most of today and part of tomorrow, so please feel free to make any edits or changes you feel make the article better. I have a good feeling that we are getting alot closer to getting this worthy of a GA status. Thanks again! AdmiralNick22 14:18, 15 March 2008 (UTC)
 * I have made the latest edits you requested. I think that the wording should be a bit clearer now. If you feel like making any minor changes to the working yourself, I have no objections. :-) AdmiralNick22 03:19, 18 March 2008 (UTC)
 * I just addressed your latest round of requested changes. We should be good to go. I have to head back to work, so I will not be on until later tonight. I owe you a medal or something for all your help! AdmiralNick22 19:29, 18 March 2008 (UTC)
 * I appreciate you voting for the article. Your help on this article is totally appreciated. :-) AdmiralNick22 01:09, 19 March 2008 (UTC)

Thanks
Hi Toprawa,

I just want to thank you for your input of the Aleema article. You've opened my eyes to some of the do's and dont's of editing, and I greatly appreciate that. I believe I've rectified many of the issues, and I was hoping you could leave me some feedback in regards to my progress. I believe you have sufficient judgement as to what constitutes Good or Featured, and I've got some other articles that I've worked on I'd like you to critique if possible. Again, thanks. I am always open to ideas/suggestions.

Tommy9281 ( Ouch!! ) 4:45pm, 10 March 2008 (UTC)

Rodian article- Sourcing and GA stuff...
Welp, as you pointed out to me (sorta), it's in need of work. The thing is, I'm not exactly sure what sourcing needs fixed and what needs to brought up to code. Trak Nar 07:16, 13 March 2008 (UTC)


 * Hoo boy... I see what ya mean. Looks like I got a project, then.  I'll prolly work on improving it in chunks, pop each section into Word, rewrite and resource what needs fixed and such.  The article, as far as I can tell, was written 'fore the EGtAS was updated.  I'll dig out my NEGtAS and write down what all needs updated for the article tomorrow and get at least a portion of it up to speed.  Trak Nar 07:49, 13 March 2008 (UTC)

In the Galactic Travel Guide, there's mention of economic suppression of the Rodians by the Hutts, so I may see where I can work that into the article whenever I rewrite it. Though, I only own that book, the old EGtAS, and the updated NEGtAS. Most of the sourced information will end up being from those three books, with just rewording of stuff of which I have no direct access to the books to reference. The "Biology and Appearence" section will end up being the first thing I work on.

Though, for that section, I have some conflicting sources over what those antennae are. Some sources don't refer to 'em at all, while others say "antennae" and the Databank (none EU portion) says "sensory organs." Veedo Vaocan's bio says "antennae," though the antennae apparently augment or assist hearing as he's deaf on the side where his antenna was lost. However, the image for the Hifold Sensory Package places the sense of hearing within the ear itself. If the antennae functioned as ears, then they would've been included in that cybernetic upgrade. A while back, I wrote a blog entry chock fulla theoretical crap and tried to figure out what those antennae are used for and settled on 'em sensing vibrations.

Since nothing official has really been decided on what those things do, then I was just gonna mention 'em as antennae. Tomorrow I'm gonna start working on the "Biology and Appearence" section, at least get notes written down and cited, then pop it into Word and get it written as soon as I can. I dunno how soon I'll be able to get this article back up to speed, as I'm gonna take my time with it to get everything perfect. Trak Nar 04:31, 16 March 2008 (UTC)


 * Oh, I'm having a lil difficulty with the article revisions... It's not the coding or the information, it's figuring out how to write it.  I dunno how to explain it, but whenever I'm working on an essay, report, thesis, story, etc; I can only write when I'm starting from scratch or working from a hand-written outline.  I'm tempted to write up a generalized outline of the current article, and then write up a whole new and seperate version in Word.

Any suggestions for getting into the right frame of mind to write? How do you usually go about writing articles? What helps you get into the Zone? Trak Nar 21:58, 21 March 2008 (UTC)


 * Sounds like a plan then, starting with the Biology and Appearence section. Time to haul out my Essential Guides and write up a set of notes and outlines!  I may reference to my saved copies of my theoretical blog entries (Trak's Theories pt 1 and Trak's Theories pt 2) to get into the right frame of mind.
 * Speaking of which... Those two blog entries are based off of observational research (read: I studied pictures a lil too closely), combined with a vast archive of biology know-how.  Would any of the stuff mentioned in the entries be of any use for the Biology section?  And... what kinda music usually helps you get into the writing mood? Trak Nar 22:21, 21 March 2008 (UTC)

Re: Nice Job
Thanks. ^^ I figured "Hey, since I'm gonna be cleaning up that huge Rodian article, I should prolly also get my name out there a bit more, too." So, to the forums and such I went, along with random grammar and spelling revisions (well, mostly grammar revisions, as my spelling skills aren't the best) to build up a nice Contributions list. Hopefully all the random editing will get me into the proper mood to start really making some headway on the Rodian article. XD

Wookieepedia now owns my soul... XDD Trak Nar 22:33, 21 March 2008 (UTC)

Thanks!
Thanks for the encyclopedia entry! Very much appreciated. I'm sorry that you keep reading all my entries and I've not read any yet. Since I'm so limited in what I've read in the EU, I don't feel helpful in reading other entries, but I will definitely start doing that and contributing soon. --Colinmcev 13:33, 14 March 2008 (UTC)

Re: BtM Wampa image
Your wish is granted. ;) -  JMAS  Hey, it's me! 17:28, 18 March 2008 (UTC)

Re: Splinter

 * I would say that a length close to the segment devoted to Return of the Jedi or one of the Thrawn trilogy novels would be a good length. i.e. 5-8 paragraphs or so. I don't want to restrict you too much, so use your judgment and writer's instincts. Thanks again. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 14:37, 19 March 2008 (UTC)

Re: Aleema
Thanks Toprawa (for replying about the infobox).

Another question, and something I'm gonna need help with: "The source list needs to be organized by real-word publication dates Working on."
 * I'm not quite sure what that means...

Also: "I would really like to see the BTS expanded. Please include sentences including who first created the character, in what source she made her first appearance, and any other notable appearances that greatly expanded her character."

Tommy 15:04, 21 March 2008 (UTC)
 * If you can help me out, I'd really appreciate it. Thanks alot!

Aleema
Hey Toprawa, You've been great help! On another note, I'm having trouble with Aleema's behind the scenes section. After looking at other articles, I see that they've shown who, where, when, why, and how the character was created. I do not have access to this information about Aleema, and was wondering if maybe you did or could locate it. After that, I believe I know enough about her to expand upon the section. Please advise (and help, if you could), thanks! Also, I've been using the four tildes...at first I thought I was supposed to use them and then sign my name, but then I realized that the signature was showing up twice. Is it still doing that? Tommy 14:50, 22 March 2008 (UTC)

IT Will stop immediatley
Sorry if I caused trouble, having EVERY book seemed to make article/appearance go on and on when it could be shorter and condensed. but sorry it will not happen again

Re: Coruscant
The source appears to be Clone Wars, chapter 23. As for the protection, that does seem to be a good idea.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 22:05, 23 March 2008 (UTC)

Why?
Hey, why did you delete my addings on Han Solo in the garbaje compactor, it wasn't in the article, but it is in the movie. Why did you take it out? &#91;&#91;User:Purplegethos&#124;Purplegethos]] 20:44, 24 March 2008 (UTC)
 * Re:Han Solo. Can I put it the way it was but just take out the photo?