Wookieepedia:Inq/Guardian of Forever (second review)

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Guardian of Forever

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Things to do

 * Outstanding issues from the RFAN page (objections originally left by ):
 * 1) *Lots of very speculative wording in the intro: "seemingly created," "For some unknown reason," "apparently killing," "seemingly invincible"
 * 2) *"&hellip;whose technology and culture had been lost to time." Surely we can say something like, "whose technology and culture had been lost by ."
 * 3) *"When the Rebels first entered the massive structure&hellip;" What were the Rebels doing there? There's no preamble to this whatsoever.
 * 4) *In the intro it's mentioned that the ancient race sealed the Guardian in the city; but in the body it isn't said who actually locked up the Guardian. Menkooroo 00:23, July 24, 2011 (UTC)