Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Harkov


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Harkov

 * Nominated by: Green Tentacle (Talk) 17:30, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Now you shall pay for your treachery.

(5 Inqs/1 Users/6 Total)
Support
 * 1) Imperialles 11:02, 29 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) Goodwood  [[Image:Redstarbird.svg|20px]] ( Alliance Intelligence ) 20:35, 30 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 3)  Greyman ( Talk ) 16:44, 3 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) TIE Fighter = awesome. -  Cavalier One ( Squadron channel ) 10:17, 8 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) Toprawa and Ralltiir 20:55, 11 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 6)  Graestan ( Talk ) 15:44, 13 August 2008 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) Given the detail within the article itself, could it be possible to expand the intro? -- Goodwood  [[Image:Redstarbird.svg|20px]] ( Alliance Intelligence ) 00:16, 30 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) *Expanded. Green Tentacle (Talk) 20:08, 30 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) Toprawa:
 * 4) * The way this sentence is reading seems like it's missing a word or two. Please reword: "The Geddawai was boarded by a stormtrooper transport and, once captured delivered Harkov to the"
 * 5) **Reworded. Green Tentacle (Talk) 20:01, 11 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 6) * There are few things throughout the Sepan Civil War section that certainly seem like they should be linked to something, if not redlinked. I notice:
 * 7) ** The attack: "arrived in the Sepan system in time to stop a Dimok attack on a Ripoblus convoy."
 * 8) ***Redlinked. Green Tentacle (Talk) 20:42, 11 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 9) ** Reprisal raid: "the Protector moved to stop a Ripoblus reprisal raid"
 * 10) ***Linked. Green Tentacle (Talk) 20:01, 11 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 11) ** Another battle article? "...and subsequent recovery of further weapons"
 * 12) ***Part of the same battle as the last one. Green Tentacle (Talk) 20:01, 11 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 13) ** Battle article: "Harkov next led the Protector into action to rescue Ripoblus scientists"
 * 14) ***Redlinked. Green Tentacle (Talk) 20:42, 11 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 15) ** Attack: " Imperial Intelligence learned of a rendezvous between the Ripoblus and Dimok leaders near Sepan 8 as the two factions looked to unite against the Empire, and the Imperials mounted an attack to capture them."
 * 16) ***Stubified. Green Tentacle (Talk) 20:42, 11 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 17) ** Attack: "With an attack from Ripoblus and Dimok forces expected" Toprawa and Ralltiir 22:24, 10 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 18) ***Redlinked. Green Tentacle (Talk) 20:42, 11 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 19) ****Good man. Thank you for the effort. Toprawa and Ralltiir 20:55, 11 August 2008 (UTC)

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