User talk:Ifindyourlackoffaithdisturbing

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New Brampis
Hey Floyd, I saw you created a page for New Brampis. IIRC, however, there was really no mention in Allies about this at all, other than the New Brampis Starship Museum; and for all we know, the "New Brampis" in this name could refer to a moon or even a city. I think it's too speculative to say that it's a planet. Thoughts on this? Jonjedigrandmaster ( Talk ) 20:26, May 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * No worries. :) Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 00:46, May 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * Also, remember that Allies takes place in 44 ABY, not 43 ABY. :P Anyway, glad to see you helping out with a bunch of the new FotJ articles! Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 00:52, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

About the Source you added...
Only now I just noticed your edit on the article Vek Drow. You added The Unknown Regions to his sources, however, The Unknown Regions' own article doesn't tell that Drow appears in it. I dont own the said sourcebook, so I need to ask: are you sure that it is indeed Drow who appears in it, and if he is, can you add him to the Regions' character list? Kreivi Wolter 11:56, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Adminship

 * Graestan ( Talk ) 00:42, June 16, 2010 (UTC)
 * Congrats, Floyd!  JangFett  (Talk) 00:45, June 16, 2010 (UTC)
 * Show no mercy, Floyd!-- 00:46, June 16, 2010 (UTC)
 * Good job, Floyd. Now we can no longer kill you. :P Toprawa and Ralltiir 01:04, June 16, 2010 (UTC)
 * Congratulations! You deserve it! -- Dr. Kermit ( Complain. ) 02:21, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Battle of Alderaan
When its truth I cant write it? Maybe because I am the only one who counted the Thranta corvettes in the end of the trailer doesnt mean it isnt truth. I just wanted to help, but its probably restricted here. I will dont do it ever again, I promise. VolteMetalic 12:10, June 19, 2010 (UTC)

CT Change
As per some additional discussion, an addition has been made to the wording of the "Creation of a CAN removal process" section of the comprehensive articles CT. Please take a look and make sure that you still support the amended proposal. Thefourdotelipsis 02:47, July 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * Further amendments have been made to the "Grey Cadre" section of voting as well, specifically the outlining of no self-votes being allowed, and the removal of the "vote bypass" clause in the trial page's rules section. Thefourdotelipsis 05:27, July 1, 2010 (UTC)

WESTAR-35 issue
Hey, I hate to bother you, but could you help me out? A couple users have it in their head that an image of a WESTAR-35 blaster pistol is one of a rifle, because of the proportions. Think you could straighten them out? -- Dr. Kermit ( Complain. ) 01:35, July 2, 2010 (UTC)

WESTAR-35 article
The threat of blocking I totally get. I've actually been expecting it. But I am going to upload a string of screencaps from the episode on the talk page, and leave it at that. No more edit war out of me. --The Great and Grand Count Mall! 01:49, July 2, 2010 (UTC)

Wookieepedia for iPhone?
Hello, I'm just trying to see if there was ever any talk about making a wookiepedia for iPhone/iPod touch. I've done most of my browsing on this site on my iPod touch and was very curious if this was an issue someone may have been considering. I would be very willing to pay for an app the would give me pretty much infinite knowledge of the Star Wars universe. Just wondering. If so, please let me know. E-mail would be best. Again, really new, and just wondering. AppAziplock 00:04, July 5, 2010 (UTC) AppAziplock

New Project Lead for KotOR
Hey Floyd. I was wondering whether you would support a change in leadership of KotOR from Cylka to Jedi Kasra. Cylka is a great user, but she hasn't been around for quite some time now. I believe new leadership is needed, and Kasra is the project's most active member. Let me know what you think. Thanks, SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 02:53, July 13, 2010 (UTC)
 * Just as an update, Kasra has officially accepted a position as Chief Editor of WookieeProject Knights of the Old Republic after Tommy pointed out that Cylka intends to return to editing at some point. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 09:11, July 20, 2010 (UTC)

CSF nom
Hey, I renominated the Coruscant Security Force for FA. Can you review it please? Coruscantfan 15:55, July 19, 2010 (UTC)

Confused on how to design User page
I see everyone elses User pages and like what I see, I'm trying to design one but I'm deeply confused on that, HELP!!! -Master CJ 01:16, July 26, 2010 (UTC)

Ziost
If you go to the Sith Space page, it says right there that it is a region of the Esstran sector. I'm not making this up, just acting on the info added by others.--Unnamed Contributor

Curiosity on a few things
The one event of the Second Galactic Civil War make me wonder. The Nanovirus the Imperial Remnant released into the atmosphere of Mandalore to kill members of the Fett Clan, wouldn't that also threaten then clones and the children of the clones of the Skirata Clan? I mean they are after all cantain the Jango Fett genes. No one has mentioned anything on that.

WP:TOR
Howdy Floyd, I just wanted to extend to you an official invitation to join WookieeProject: The Old Republic. I noticed you've read Fatal Alliance, whereas many of our members have not. You're knowledge on the subject would be very helpful, as would your impressive FA/GA writing skills that you've dedicated to WP:TotJ. Your knowledge of the TotJ time period would also be extremely helpful, so I hope you consider the offer and add your name to our roster! Cheers! Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 21:31, July 31, 2010 (UTC)

5.1 Corrected spelling/grammar (RPS-6 rocket launcher)
Hey, I would like to request that this article be moved from "RPS-6 rocket launcher" to "RPS-6 Rocket Launcher". As this is the title of the article and the name of the item, it should be capitalized. Thank you. Pyromaniac1712 - 03 August 2010

New member asks for help
Dear administrator,

I have been a fan of Wookiepedia for several years. It has been my dream for a long time to create a character, i want to contribute to the Star Wars cannon. My brother and i have refined the idea of a new character, named "Worle". We spent three hours on his creation. Please give him a chance, please help us. I want to make him legit, can you help me, my galactic brother.

May the force be with you, Ewoklover53

Dear administrator,

I have loved Star Wars for years and recently got a wookipedia account, but I find technology impossible at the best of times. How do I vote for a Mr. or Mrs. Star Wars 2010? Also, I have a question. Why is the Clone Wars series considered canon even though i conflicts with books, and some comic books are not considered canon? How does it make sense? --Lady Tiree 01:00, December 25, 2010 (UTC)

Me again...
I respect your concern for correctness. is there any way to make "Worle" a reality? Please...

Copyright violations
Hello, you deleted the copyright violation notice and sent me a vandalize warning. I hope it was only because i didn't say why. I'm not very good with your text editor and my summary get away. Please see the discussion page.90.1.199.30 23:26, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

The Droid from yesterday
3C-FD that is, is now fully sourced and up in Good article nominations/3C-FD, BIG thanks once more for your review and help getting it in shape. (: --Tm_T(Talk) 19:38, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Edits on the pages of the Eta-2 Actis
I read the new updates and the old updates, but the information that is there now appears contradictory and incomplete. It goes fine but then automatically skips to the part of "Eta-2's that were modified by Jedi were modified for ". It doesn't really specify "what happened to the standard, 'factory-model', Eta-2's". it feels and sounds incomplete.

that and, i was trying to write a more complete comment in the editing box but the darn editing box wouldn't allow it (it only allows really SHORT comments :-. but i was going to say that the Star Wars Databank appears to be canon information, but unfortunately it is not updated as frequently as all of us would like and, unfortunately alot of the information is either not canon anymore and/or no longer applies. For example, the Eta-2 [Databank page] (which is in the same section as the [Delta-7] "Jedi starfighter" Databank page) says that the Eta-2's that were "flown by the Jedi were stripped for even FASTER performance. they did this by removing the ['heavy'] flight instruments, nav computer, and shields. a Jedi's attunement to the Force more than makes up for these compromises", which implies that the standard "factory-model" Actis has those things on it (as the "clone wars campaign guide" source (i'm still trying to navigate my way through Wookiepedia and Wikis in general and learn how to use them, edit them, etc. i don't even know how to add pictures!) shows). i also understand that, according to what the [Eta-2] Databank page says, the Eta-2 was made by Kuat Systems Engineering based on the 'innovations' (ie. modifications) that Anakin Skywalker made to his Delta-7 when he made it into Azure Angel (well you know what i mean by that. ie. when i was saying "made it into Azure Angel"). Anakin Skywalker KEPT the shields, and added more things like atmospheric stabilizers, a hyperdrive engine (although some sources, like the Databank, use the words "hyperdrive thrusters" and other sources say "hyperdrive engine"), as well as those circular turbine engines in the front (don't know what else to call them. i don't remember at the moment what the correct name for those things is). Saesse Tin also made some other modifications of his own, somewhat separate [and/or different] to the modifications that Anakin made. He increased the weapons (adding quad-pulse laser cannons behind breakaway panels), replaced the pilot-seat with a more comfortable meditation-chair, and added a class-3 hyperdrive engine. it's very understandable that Raith Sienar would believe that "agility and speed (and speed because, the aircraft is light. simple physics (or whatever it is). the aircraft or object or whatever it is, is lighter, and so it moves faster), but if he really was 'basing the eta-2 on anakin's innovations [with the delta-7 when he modified it]' he would keep the shields (although i understand that this (the eta-2) is also a starfighter that, official explanation [in-real-life] for lucasfilm, is supposed to "bridge the gap" between the delta-7 and the tie fighter (and to be honest with you, when i first saw the Episode 3 teaser trailer, and saw the design of "this new starfighter" (ie. the eta-2) and heard the tie-fighter engine sound, i knew that that was probably a predecessor, so to speak, of the eta-2, if not a starfighter that was meant to "bridge the gap" between the delta-7 and the tie fighter), so i can understand WHY this thing (whether it be in-universe, because of raith sienar, or in-real-life universe, because the tie doesn't have shields) this thing wouldn't bring shields as a standard feature. but then i can see why some jedi would complain about it and ask that a version with shields be developed (which ALSO makes sense) (i mean come on: what would you prefer? a punie tie-fighter that has no shields, no weapons besides blasters, and can easily be taken down in one or a couple of shots, or would you prefer to have something like the x-wing or the delta-7 that HAS shields and HAS blasters and can really move fast and kick butt?).

Nebo

 * Don't wonder why I'm doing this, blame Tope. :P -- 1358  (Talk) 18:21, August 18, 2010 (UTC)

CT wording tweak
Hi! Just letting you know that the wording of a ct you've recently voted in has changed slightly. It went from 'If a droid has gender-specific programming, refer to them as "he" or "she" rather than "it".' to 'If a droid has gender-specific programming and is predominantly referred to as "he" or "she" in canon, refer to them as "he" or "she" rather than "it".' Very minor tweak. Let me know if you hate it. Menkooroo 05:20, August 30, 2010 (UTC)

Article
Hi there I was wondering if you can help me improve a new article I made. The LucasArts Archives Vol. ll Star Wars Collection. Arjun Sharma 21:41, August 31, 2010 (UTC) User:DarthKaos

Nomination of Endar Spire
Hello Floyd, I just had a quick question about nominating an article to become FA. I tried nominating Endar Spire, but apparently the article was once an FAN, and got removed a while ago. As a result, when I tried following instructions, it gave me some kind of archived link instead of a redlink like the instructions say. Can you help me out? Thanks. Taral, Dark Lord of the Sith  -Just shy, not antisocial: You can talk to me!- 20:03, September 21, 2010 (UTC)
 * Hey, I saw this message and responded on Taral's talk page since you don't appear to be on at the moment and I was bored, so this is taken care of. Hope you don't mind. :) &mdash; Master Jonathan New Jedi Order.svg ( Jedi Council Chambers ) 20:12, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

Objection: Mantis
Hi. You have an active objection on my FAN Mantis Syndicate: "Could use a good copyedit." I did my best to handle the objection and asked your for a reply: "Try now. I can't find anything else needing copyedit." It's been quite a few days since I touched the article, and I was wondering when you could find the time to check it for the objection. Simply because it's the only active objection and I don't want it to reach the closing date (I'm not sure if it would count for that, either; anyway, I was wondering...) Thank you for your time and interest.--Skippy Farlstendoiro 11:55, September 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * Sorry to disturb you again on this subject. A further objection from another Wookieepedian directly opposes one of your objections. I thought maybe you'll want to stride in and debate on the subject. Skippy Farlstendoiro 12:36, October 12, 2010 (UTC)

the vandal
Thanks for blocking the guy who kept vandalising the Tee Va page and I apologize for my rude language, just trying to get him to stop. Windsword7 04:15, October 12, 2010 (UTC)

Review
Hey Floyd. Sorry about not reviewing yesterday. I got pretty side-tracked. I'll look over the article sometime today and let you know on IRC if there is anything. Cylka  -talk- 12:21, October 13, 2010 (UTC)

Mandalore trooper
The article you just deleted was real. if you look at the beginning of the academy episode, you will see a clon riding behind ahsoka in the ship that dropped them off. then outside, he is standing next to captain rex. Clone Commander  Fox  01:50, October 18, 2010 (UTC)

Zona Luka nom
Floyd, I would suggest that, if you haven't already, take some time to calm down regarding this argument you and Tommy have gotten yourselves into. There is a way to handle this whole matter that doesn't involve getting angry at him. Now, I do find some of his comments, as well as his unwillingness to restate his objections, to be unnecessary. That being said, however, I wouldn't blame him entirely for this argument - you both played an equal part in it. Now, I had hoped that I wouldn't have to get involved in this, but I feel that I need to to prevent this from getting out of hand any further. You both need to settle this on your own - as gentlemen, preferably. As an administrator, you are a role model for the community; please keep this in mind in the future, so that arguments such as these can be avoided. Grand Moff Tranner (Comlink) 20:33, October 21, 2010 (UTC)

TOTJ
Hey Floyd,

I was wondering if I could get your thoughts on something. I've been tossing around the idea of writing and FAN'ing Vima for a while. Most importantly, I was wondering if you had any plans to do her first? If so, I'd totally leave it to you. If not, I'm wondering about the TOTJ article from Insider 26 --- do you have a copy of it? :^) And hopefully you can give me a little bit of advice --- do you think it would be best to write her up and FAN her now, and then update after Mandorla is released, or do you think I should wait? I feel like the former would be harmless, as Nomi is an FA that'll have to be updated too, but I also want to nip the inevitable "This will have to have a major update soon" objections in the bud, ya know?

At the same time, this isn't a sure thing. It might just be a whim that isn't followed through on. But... I'm really liking the idea. :^) Menkooroo 14:54, October 25, 2010 (UTC)
 * Awesome, thank you. If it does happen, it'll probably be around Christmastime. ... Not sure if that'll be start or finish, though... yeah, I'm pretty disorganized. ^^ Menkooroo 00:13, October 26, 2010 (UTC)

37th Meeting
Hello, IFYLOFD (Floyff :) ).

I'm writing to remind you about the upcoming Inq meeting this Saturday/Sunday. Early registration is still available! Hope to see you there. &mdash; Fiolli  17:40, November 9, 2010 (UTC)

Dominus the 1,000th Good Article
I just want to congratulate you on being part of this milestone for the wiki. Keep up the outstanding work! :) --  Riffsyphon  1024 00:37, November 13, 2010 (UTC)
 * I applaud your efforts as well. Well done. —Tommy 9281 01:09, November 13, 2010 (UTC)
 * Yeah, congratulations. Although we only have 999 GAs at the moment, since a GA was promoted to FA. :P 1358  (Talk) 08:16, November 13, 2010 (UTC)

TV-94
Why was the page reverted back? The updated episode guide says it was TV-94B that was present on Kamino. Thanks. ClonewarsCIS 21:09, November 15, 2010 (UTC)

Candy!
To the little homie IFLOYD,

It was once said that you singlehandedly revitalized WP:TOTJ. I didn't quite agree at first, but your relentless plowing through the TOTJ comics and the numerous articles which you have successfully turned into FAs and GAs was enough to sway me in your favor. As the project's lead, I can't thank you enough for your participation; indeed, I would have never been able to mainain the project's prominence without your help. And as if that wasn't enough, WP:TOTJ has been honored with the thousandth successful GAN, all thanks to you. You have been my friend for quite some time now, through all sorts of site nonsense, and our own personal disagreements. Yet we still remain friends, and your committment to the project has never wavered. Thank you, my friend. I am honored to work alongside one such as you. —Tommy 9281 21:40, November 25, 2010 (UTC)

Inqmoot 38
Just letting you know that Inqmoot 38 is scheduled for this Saturday evening. Hope to see you there. Toprawa and Ralltiir 19:24, December 6, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks
Hey Floyd,

Thanks, sorry I haven't had an opportunity to say so sooner. You and I have been through it, lol, and look! We're still here. I'm glad to have made your acquaintence, and I'm also glad that we've remained friends in spite of it all. You know you'll always be my lil' bro, so don't expect the smacks upside the head to stop any time soon :P —Tommy 9281 18:09, December 8, 2010 (UTC)

little help
hey there, i'm kinda new to this but i was trying to make some minor mechanics edits on Dengar's page and some automation keeps telling me no (something about not allowed to do something with a link)... but i'm not trying to do anything with links. shed any light?

--Jedi Master Cheerios 10:27, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Inq meeting rescheduled
Inq meeting 39 has been rescheduled for this Saturday evening, January 15, at the same scheduled time, 7 PM EST for North Americans. The meeting was postponed this past weekend because no one bothered to show up. If you value your position in the Inq, we expect you to please make an effort to be in attendance. If you cannot attend the meeting, we still expect you to participate by leaving notes on the meeting page. Thank you. Toprawa and Ralltiir 22:29, January 10, 2011 (UTC)

Inq Review Redux: Form V: Shien / Djem So
Good day! Based upon our discussion at our last meeting, a thorough Inq review of Form V: Shien / Djem So has been initiated. Please take the time to review this article as if were a present FAN. The review page can be found here. Thank you and have a wonderful day! &mdash; Fiolli ; 15:43, January 18, 2011 (UTC)

Inquisitorius Meeting 40
Here is a preliminary reminder that Inquisitorius meeting 40 is scheduled for 12 February 2011. Absentee voting for probationary articles is available at the posting of the meeting page, and absentee voting for new articles will begin five days prior to the meeting. Thanks! &mdash; Fiolli ; 15:43, January 18, 2011 (UTC)

Inappropriate content on this website
It has some to my attention that there is some less than suitable content being uploaded, mainly, today's quote.

"Ewan: "Hayden! What the hell, your whole reason for turning was to save her. That was completely stupid."    Hayden: "Nyaaah! The Jedi are stupider! They didn't know I was married to Natalie despite the fact that we live together, which Ian figured out in seconds. They didn't know Ian was a Sith. They asked me to get close to him, knowing full well I am confused and that he's manipulative. God, the assassin from Attack of the Clones allegedly couldn't be sent by Christopher Lee because 'It's not in his character'? Face it, it's a miracle the Jedi survived this long!"    Ewan: "Anti-Jedite!"     Narrator: "They duel. Then they duel some more! Then there's even more dueling! Afterwards, they do some more dueling. Then there's another duel, a little dueling, and finally, a duel."    Ewan: "It's over, Hayden! I've got the high ground, just like Darth Maul did in Episode I right before I…killed him successfully… Ignoring that, if you jump over to me, I will cut your shit off!"    Hayden: "You underestimate my power to decide not to jump to the low ground in front of you where I will be able to safely continue dueling, but to instead try to jump all the way over you and get my shit cut off!"     Narrator: "He jumps and gets his shit cut RIGHT THE FUCK OFF!"     ―Star Wars Episode 3: Abridged Script, written by Rod Hilton"

I would like to remind you that Wikia is a public website and should not display this kind of language (There are kids browsing through here, believe it or not). If you could remove this quote or at least censor it, you would have my thanks :D.

Foreborn 13:41, February 1, 2011 (UTC)ForebornForeborn 13:41, February 1, 2011 (UTC)

Hi there!
Hi, you left a message on my talk page that I had apparently replaced a Wookiepedia page with blank content. Could you please let me know what page you're talking about? I don't remember ever doing that, and I'm kind of confused! :( -- Promus Kaa ( Rebel Merchant ) 04:20, February 4, 2011 (UTC)


 * Thanks for letting me know. If you have the time, would you mind checking the talk page for "stormtrooper" and checking my entry, "Alien stormtrooper?" I don't think that the little stubs for alien and ISB troopers need to be on the page; each variant is already listed, and the listing already gives a link to each variant's page. Nobody has responded to my entry and I'd like to know what you think on the matter. Right now, both stubs are redundant and they needlessly clutter up the page. Thanks! -- Promus Kaa ( Rebel Merchant ) [[Image:Redstarbird.svg|25px]] 03:25, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

Nebulon Ranger
Hey Floyd, here's stuff that I caught: Don't get semicolon happy. :P Cheers, 1358  (Talk)  20:20, February 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * A tad nitpicky, but the main image needs to have text in the complete speech bubbles, per WP:I.
 * Should Nebulon Ranger be unitalicized in the opening quote?
 * I experimented a bit and it should be good now.
 * "&hellip;she and her army were ultimately defeated in the final battle of the Beast Wars." Is there, or should there be, an article on this army?
 * "The following year, the Ranger was involved in a mission to Empress Teta." Link for the mission, perhaps?
 * I'd advise to not start sentences with 'but', like here: "But after worries that Qel-Droma was in&hellip;"
 * Possibly something could be linked in the latter part of the intro, like where Cay and Ulic face off and the ship goes boom?
 * The Description quote attribution seems a bit long; could you perhaps shorten it a bit? :P
 * Hmmkay, but perhaps it could be worded better. "As a" and "as the" in close succession makes it choppy.
 * Some event probably needs to be linked in the history's first paragraph.
 * Not really familiar with the source, but would "However, on the final approach to Iziz the Ranger was attacked by a group of Beast Riders on their flying drexl mounts" warrant an article?
 * I trust your judgment. 1358  (Talk)  20:31, February 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * Not an objection, but perhaps make an imagecat for the ship and place the template on the page?

Hey
Do you even know what's going on? Omicron's unnecessarily deleting obvious info. For example, he's deleting the part in the Behind the Scenes section of the Jizz article that says it was taken from Jazz, simply because there was no source. Similarly, he also deleted the Behind the Scenes sections of several articles pertaining to ships named after Latin/Greek/etc words. The sections were saying that (behind the scenes) the ships were named after real-world Latin/Greek/etc numbers/letters. He removed them, only to be confirmed by an administrator soon afterwards (Omicron said himself he "doesn't necessarily agree with it". Makes you wonder about his judgement, hmm?

One last thing, I'm not trying to attack him. I'm simply saying this killing spree of articles needs to be stopped. Thesaurus Rex 01:33, February 16, 2011 (UTC)


 * Has everybody lost their MINDS?! Bah, alright, fine. I'll conform. But I just want to let you know that all this is unnecessary and severely illogical. --Thesaurus Rex 01:44, February 16, 2011 (UTC)

A favor please
Hey there, FLOYD. Would you mind unlocking File:CinDralligpic.JPG for me. I have a new version to upload. It's a little smaller, but much, much sharper and better quality. -  JMAS  Jolly Trooper.png Hey, it's me! 03:51, February 18, 2011 (UTC)

Please Help
I need some help. I am always trying to contribute to this site in helpful productive ways. I have read every policy multiple times, however, it seems every time I create or do major work on an article it gets tagged for cleanup or wookieefication. I really would like some help so i could contribute to this wiki in much more productive. I would be really grateful if you would help me. thanks, GTQ 03:57, April 3, 2011 (UTC)

hello
im sorry Satele Shan never been in the Battle of Alderaan she never been born she was 18 years old at 3,653 BBY

Meeting 41
Hey Floyd, Inq Meeting 41 will take place on May 14/15th, at the usual time. Please leave notes if you can't attend. Thanks. 1358 (Talk)  13:16, April 27, 2011 (UTC)

Vima
Hey there! I'm definitely not planning on writing her any time soon. I would wholly support you writing her. Do it! Dewwwww it! Menkooroo 04:18, May 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re: Corsair
OK, I'll just leave my objections here:
 * You forgot to fill in the Captains field in the infobox, which I believe is necessary
 * In the Intro, "Although Sadow, commanding the Corsair, won the first, defeat was assured in the second." Give some context on why defeat was assured, i.e. "...won the first battle, his forces were so depleted that defeat was assured in the second."
 * Also in the Intro, "After the treachery of Qel-Droma's lover Aleema Keto was discovered after his rescue..." nothing major, the repetition of after is a bit odd sounding. Just change one of them to "following" or something.
 * In the Description, "battery of point-defense laser cannons and a battery of heavy concussion missile launchers" I don't think you need to repeat battery here.
 * Going off the recent "no infobox-exclusive info" craze, you probably should mention in body somewhere that the Corsair was not available for purchase.
 * In the History section, "...powerful Sith magic crystals that were powerful enough to wrench out the heart of a star." Once again, the repetition of powerful needs to be changed.
 * In the Rediscovery subsection, you first say, "...a newly ascended Dark Lord of the Sith, a young former Jedi named Exar Kun." However, later you say, "...Kun used his newfound dark powers to dispel Nadd's spirit, claiming the title of Dark Lord for himself." I'm a bit confused here. When did Kun become the Dark Lord?
 * You should probably mention in the History section that Kun taught Keto how to use the Corsair sun-destroying power.
 * This one is optional, but I would give a brief mention of how the supernova created by the Corsair later spread to Ossus. It's up to you though.
 * And that's all I have. Nice job overall. A very interesting read. And thanks for the Kivvaaa review by the way. :) Kilson ( Let's have a chat ) 20:11, May 12, 2011 (UTC)

Inqmoot XLII
Hey Floyd,

Inqmoot 42 has been scheduled for June 19th. Your presence is requested, but if you are unavailable, please remember to leave notes. Thanks,  —Tommy  9281  Wednesday, June 1, 2011, 02:04 UTC 

Aurebesh
Hi David! How do I write my name on my userinfobox in aurebesh like you? Thanks! -- Talrrivanian  ( Chaos ) 07:56, June 3, 2011 (UTC)

Thank You


Hey Floyd,

With the promotion of Starstorm One, the project has reached 100 articles taken to FA status, and it is largely in part to your many contributions. Thank you very much my friend, keep up the good work.  —Tommy  9281  Saturday, June 25, 2011, 13:17 UTC 

AC Meeting 37
Hey Tranner! AC Meeting 37 has been scheduled for July 30&hellip;with a Clone Theme. Please make sure to leave notes if you are unable to attend. Also, you can review the minutes from today's Meeting 36 by clicking here. Thanks, and remember: The Republic Needs You!  CC7567  (talk) 21:57, June 25, 2011 (UTC)

Inqmoot 43
Hey Floyd,

The next Inq meeting has been scheduled for July 23/24. Hope to see you there. Menkooroo 14:03, July 3, 2011 (UTC)

hi
I like your username ifindyourlackoffaithdistrubing! Youdead00 01:37, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Meeting 37 reminder
Hey Floyd, just wanted to remind you about AC Meeting 37, which will be held tomorrow at the usual time of 4 PM ET. If you find yourself unable to make it, please remember to leave notes. Thanks, and hope to see you there, brave soldier!  CC7567  (talk) 17:30, July 29, 2011 (UTC)

Ulic Qel-Droma
Hey. I understand that you asked Tommy to give you a pre-nom review for Ulic Qel-Droma, and he asked me to give it a copy-edit before he dives in. I'm working on that now, but I'm also keeping an eye out for any errors I can't fix myself and will list them here as I go.  Master Jonathan &mdash; Jedi Council Chambers Monday, August 8, 2011, 18:03 UTC


 * The Naddist rebellion/Attack of the cultists: "Qel-Droma initially stayed behind to tend to Master Jeth, who had been struck and injured by a dark side.: Dark side what? Something's missing here, and I'm not sure what it is.  Master Jonathan &mdash; Jedi Council Chambers Monday, August 8, 2011, 18:03 UTC
 * Fixed.  IFYLOFD  ( Floyd's crib ) 00:05, August 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * That's all I have. The article has been turned over to Tommy. Good luck with the nomination.  Master Jonathan &mdash; Jedi Council Chambers Thursday, August 11, 2011, 03:01 UTC
 * Thank you kindly.  IFYLOFD  ( Floyd's crib ) 17:45, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

Nonsense
I find your lack of faith disturbing. Literally.

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XXXVIII  —Tommy  9281  Thursday, August 11, 2011, 00:47 UTC 

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Ulic
Okay, here we go:
 * "However, Qel-Droma was overcome by the Krath's Force powers and suffered near fatal wounds as he led the Republic into retreat after their defeat against the Tetan usurpers." It wasn't Qel-Droma who ordered the retreat.
 * The fourth para of the intro can be condensed so much that whatever remains can be added to another paragraph.
 * The fifth can be shrunken a bit as well.
 * Will continue later.  —Tommy  9281  Thursday, August 18, 2011, 01:32 UTC 
 * Check them out now.  IFYLOFD  ( Floyd's crib ) 00:00, August 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * Can still use some condensing. You can further summarize his partnership with Kun toward the end of the fourth para, and the beginning of the next doesn't need to mention the "While Exar Kun" bit.  —Tommy  9281  Saturday, August 20, 2011, 19:19 UTC 
 * How about now?  IFYLOFD  ( Floyd's crib ) 02:09, August 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * You can still condense a bit more in the fourth para of the intro.  —Tommy  9281  Monday, August 29, 2011, 00:55 UTC 
 * Condensed it some more. How does it look now?  IFYLOFD  ( Floyd's crib ) 02:42, August 29, 2011 (UTC)
 * "Qel-Droma traveled to Empress Teta and joined the Krath, initially pretending to be a fallen Jedi and eventually taking the Sith sorceress Aleema Keto as his new flame. However, he was injected with a rage-inducing poison by Krath warlord Satal Keto and things began to spiral out of control, leading him to lash out at his friends after slaying Satal Keto." Several things.
 * First off, ditch the "new flame."
 * Well, some minor mention of that is necessary, since its a relevant fact to events you explain later.  —Tommy  9281  Monday, August 29, 2011, 00:55 UTC 
 * Addressed.  IFYLOFD  ( Floyd's crib ) 02:42, August 29, 2011 (UTC)
 * The events in this bit are chronologically incorrect.
 * The sudden mention of his friends contradicts the very beginning, "Qel-Droma traveled to the Empress Teta..."  —Tommy  9281  Saturday, August 20, 2011, 19:19 UTC 
 * Try it now.  IFYLOFD  ( Floyd's crib ) 02:10, August 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * "Utterly defeated, Qel-Droma decided to lead the Jedi to Exar Kun's stronghold on Yavin 4 where he was defeated in a final battle." This makes it sound as though Qel-Droma was defeated in battle.
 * Fixed.
 * The writing in the fifth intro para is sub-par. Actually, you can summarize it into about two sentences that could go nicely on the end of the fourth para, after you've condensed that.
 * Rewritten and placed at the end of the fourth paragraph.  IFYLOFD  ( Floyd's crib ) 02:42, August 29, 2011 (UTC)
 * "Ulic excelled in his Jedi training, learning and mastering the lightsaber combat techniques taught to him by Master Jeth before any of the Jedi Master's other apprentices. But Qel-Droma drew concern from Master Jeth due to his relentless efforts and often-reckless attempts to prove himself."
 * Rewrite this whole bit. The first sentence reads like you're running out of breath lol, and the second (a) starts with "but" and (b) is a bit choppy. As a matter of fact, the second para of "Early life and Jedi training" could use a bit of rewriting so that it reads more smoothly.
 * Rewritten.
 * Some condensation in the first para of "Trouble on Onderon," sticking more to the reason why Qel-Droma was going to Onderon without so much focus on the planet's history as recounted by Jeth.
 * Condensed.
 * "During the journey, Qel-Droma engaged his friend Doneeta in a discussion of Twi'lek culture." This is better suited to the P&T, since the entire convo shows his interest in Doneeta's culture.
 * Removed.
 * You got a thing with sentences beginning with "buts." I've seen a cockamamy reply from you before to an objection made to the use of "but" to begin sentences, and I'm here to tell you that that won't fly. To give you the correct technical answer, It's incorrect grammatically because but isn't usually used to bring in a new idea, if that makes sense.
 * Went through the article and addressed this.
 * You also have a terrible habit with "ing" words, which are present tense, as opposed to "ed" words, etc. which denotes past tense. You've been around the block too many times to be still making these rookie moves.
 * Went through the article and addressed.
 * "Amanoa, a Force-sensitive herself, was hesitant to work with such young Jedi, saying that she expected a great Jedi Master instead. Qel-Droma dismissed her concerns, telling the Queen that the whole of the Jedi Order would be at Onderon's service once she embraced the Galactic Republic." Too conversational/colloquial.
 * Rewritten.
 * "Qel-Droma fared well in the battle, defeating several Beast Riders and even slaying several of their mighty drexl war mounts." "Fared well" is POV.
 * Fixed.  IFYLOFD  ( Floyd's crib ) 01:44, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

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