Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Jallar Golin

Jallar Golin

 * Nominated by: Xicer9 [[Image:atgar.svg|20px]]( Combadge) 17:43, May 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Another minor Emperor's Hand.

Support

 * 1) Good to have some of these at Hand. --Skippy Farlstendoiro 15:30, May 18, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Toprawa and Ralltiir 20:08, May 21, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3)  Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 19:52, May 24, 2010 (UTC)

Farl

 * Bio, 2nd paragraph: You use the word "shuttle" six times. Couldn't you replace some of them with a synonym or something? --Skippy Farlstendoiro 08:26, May 18, 2010 (UTC)
 * I cut it down to three. Thanks for the review. Xicer9 [[Image:atgar.svg|20px]]( Combadge) 15:22, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

Toprawa

 * Just one. As far as I understand it, we typically capitalize "Master" when being referred to as someone's literal Jedi/Sith Master. Is this an appropriate case here? "and shared a slight connection with his master through the Force." Toprawa and Ralltiir 19:57, May 21, 2010 (UTC)
 * I don't know whether Palpatine was his formal Jedi/Sith Master, the term is never used in the adventure. All it says is "&hellip;he was trained by the Emperor to be a Hand." So Palpatine was his master in the sense that Golin was trained by him in the Force and served him as an operative, but I wouldn't say Palpatine was his "Master" master. So in this case, I think it's appropriate to leave it undercase. Xicer9 [[Image:atgar.svg|20px]]( Combadge) 20:06, May 21, 2010 (UTC)
 * Very well. Toprawa and Ralltiir 20:08, May 21, 2010 (UTC)