Wookieepedia:EduCorps/Meeting 60/Log

[23:00:29]  Alright, let's get started then. Welcome to EC meeting 60 [23:01:35]  Per procedure, we'll start with all the old stuff [23:01:48]  Star Wars: Imperial Commando [23:01:51]  https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:EC/Star_Wars:_Imperial_Commando_(second_review) [23:03:25]  Looks good [23:03:47]  Meesa say keep [23:04:04]  Yeah, keep [23:04:22]  "The remainder of the conversation was not archived and is unavailable." I'm not really fond of this, but what choice do we have? [23:04:24]  Keep [23:04:43]  Yeah, same as Anil [23:04:45]  Keep [23:05:09]  Notes say keep [23:06:44]  Imperial Commando is kept [23:06:57]  Is CP around? He's on the main channel, but not here [23:07:16]  I'll try messaging him [23:07:32]  Meeting page says he's making it today [23:07:49] <Fan26> Oh, Ayre got to him first [23:08:04] <Fan26> Should we wait for him or move on? [23:08:18] <Ayrehead02> I mean we already started, might as well just continue [23:08:20] <AnilSerifoglu> Meh, I'd say let's move on [23:08:31] * CorellianPremier (636eacb9@wookieepedia/CorellianPremier) has joined [23:08:31] * ChanServ gives channel operator status to CorellianPremier [23:08:32] <Fan26> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:EC/Nif_Sarjun [23:08:41] <Fan26> Nothing fixed, I say kill it [23:08:53] <QGJ> kill [23:08:55] <Ayrehead02> Kill [23:09:00] <CorellianPremier> yep, kill [23:09:05] <Fan26> Notes say kill [23:09:08] <AnilSerifoglu> Kill [23:09:34] <Fan26> Nif Sarjun killed [23:09:41] <Fan26> Now to new stuff [23:09:53] <Fan26> Mairne [23:10:06] <Fan26> Can a larger crop of the main image be obtained to better fit the infobox? [23:10:13] <Fan26> Grid coordinate is infobox-exclusiveBTS needs publication date(s)Not sure that supplying goods to another planet counts as "affiliation" [23:10:23] <QGJ> Anil has fixed everything I believe [23:10:28] <QGJ> keep [23:10:35] <Ayrehead02> Don't forget to link the pages Fan [23:10:35] <AnilSerifoglu> Spare [23:10:38] <Fan26> Yeah, I'd say spare [23:10:40] <QGJ> *spare [23:10:42] <Fan26> Oh, sorry [23:10:43] <Ayrehead02> Spare [23:10:44] <CorellianPremier> spare [23:10:53] <Fan26> Notes say spare [23:10:58] <Fan26> Mairne spared [23:11:13] <Fan26> Next is trade minister [23:11:18] <Fan26> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Unidentified_deputy_minister_of_trade [23:11:26] <Fan26> Date needs better referencing. [23:11:32] <Fan26> Article prose should be more focused on the deputy's POV, instead of being a summarization of the novel's text. [23:11:39] <Fan26> BTS not sourced. [23:11:47] <Fan26> Last sentence of the BTS is pointless. [23:11:51] <AnilSerifoglu> I think it's all fixed besides that POV thing, so probe [23:11:56] <Fan26> Probe [23:12:11] <CorellianPremier> probe [23:12:13] <QGJ> Yes, it needs some rewriting [23:12:14] <QGJ> probe [23:12:19] <Fan26> Notes say spare [23:13:04] <Ayrehead02> Probe [23:13:08] <Fan26> Trade minister probed [23:13:23] <Fan26> Courataine [23:13:29] <Fan26> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Courataine [23:13:46] <Fan26>    Is there a particular reason for capitalizing the word "standard" in the opening sentence? 2 BBY date needs better referencing. Context for Han Solo needed. Remove the "Part 6" from ref 2     Bts not sourced and the second sentence is pointless. [23:13:51] <AnilSerifoglu> First two items still need to be addressed, probe [23:14:10] <Fan26> Yeah, probe [23:14:20] <QGJ> probe [23:14:24] <CorellianPremier> ok probe [23:14:27] <Ayrehead02> Probe [23:14:30] <Fan26> Notes say probe [23:14:43] <Fan26> Courataine probed [23:14:54] <Fan26> Saadul [23:15:03] <Fan26> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Saadul [23:15:23] <Fan26> 25 ABY needs a better ref. BTS not sourced. Remove chapter referencing. QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 08:39, October 10, 2019 (UTC) [23:15:27] <AnilSerifoglu> Spare [23:15:33] <QGJ> All addressed [23:15:34] <QGJ> Spare [23:15:38] <Fan26> Spare [23:15:40] <Ayrehead02> Spare [23:15:46] <CorellianPremier> yep spare [23:15:48] <Fan26> Notes say spare [23:16:01] <Fan26> Saadul spared [23:16:52] <Fan26> There are two articles in the maintenance bin [23:17:02] <Fan26> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Davan_Marak?t=20190930071348 [23:17:16] <Fan26> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Book_of_Hondo?t=20190924175629 [23:17:22] <Fan26> Both need updates [23:17:47] <Ayrehead02> Davan Marak I've updated pretty much, but there's one line of dialogue in the datapad that I don't have access to [23:18:22] <Ayrehead02> Once I hear back from Fred about it or find someone who has posted the full job dialogue I'm taking this to GAN [23:18:56] <AnilSerifoglu> I'd say spare, for now then [23:19:11] <Fan26> Spare then [23:19:15] <QGJ> Spare Davan Marak, probe the book [23:19:18] <Ayrehead02> Spare [23:19:35] <Ayrehead02> Yeah there's quite a large update for that [23:19:38] <Ayrehead02> Probe the Book [23:19:40] <AnilSerifoglu> Probe [23:19:45] <Fan26> Probe book [23:20:15] <Fan26> Alright then, Davan Marak spared, Book of Hondo probed [23:20:45] <Fan26> Does anyone have anything else? [23:21:00] <AnilSerifoglu> Nothing from me [23:21:18] <Ayrehead02> Nope [23:21:33] <Fan26> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Sliver_(Rodian) [23:21:40] <Fan26> I just have this [23:21:50] <Fan26> Doesn't use the proper citation template for starters [23:22:18] <Fan26> And IMO it gives too much needless context for Nal Hutta [23:22:30] <Ayrehead02> Oh this ones mine [23:22:36] <Ayrehead02> I can fix those right now if you'd like [23:22:47] <Fan26> Oh, cool, that'd be good then, thanks [23:23:26] <Ayrehead02> I assume you want everything after "the planet Nal Hutta" removed from that sentence [23:23:30] <Fan26> in that case, I think we're done here [23:23:49] <Fan26> Oh, yeah, I'd say so [23:24:03] <CorellianPremier> All good from me [23:24:34] <QGJ> I'm good [23:24:56] <Fan26> Alright, good then. Thanks for coming everyone. QGJ is on scheduling and paperwork for next time [23:25:08] <Ayrehead02> Thanks for hosting Fan! [23:25:08] <QGJ> Thanks for hosting [23:25:22] <Fan26> Yeah, np. [23:25:40] <CorellianPremier> Yeah, thanks! [23:25:48] <AnilSerifoglu> Thanks for hosting, Fan