Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Xexto

Xexto/Canon

 * Nominated by:  AV-6R7 Crew Pit 07:49, June 23, 2015 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: It's amazing what you can find when your not looking for it. For example: the entire population of Troiken loves slingshots.

Support

 * 1) Squishy Vic | message 22:50, June 28, 2015 (UTC)
 * 2) Clonehunter(Report your W.M.D.) 23:01, July 1, 2015 (UTC)
 * 3) Manoof (talk) 06:34, August 5, 2015 (UTC)
 *  CC7567  (talk) 23:36, August 9, 2015 (UTC)

Vic

 * I did minor cleanup but the remainder of the BTS lacks sourcing, this needs to be added for the tidbit about the concept and skeletal design and implementation mentioned in that section. Squishy Vic | message 19:42, June 28, 2015 (UTC)
 * Couldn't find source for portion that I deleted, sourced other part. -  AV-6R7 Crew Pit 22:43, June 28, 2015 (UTC)

Attack of the Clone

 * A couple preliminaries. First of all, an intro of two sentences is way too short for an article of this length. I'd advise expanding it to at least four to five sentences.
 * Done. - AV-6R7 (talk) 21:04, July 28, 2015 (UTC)
 * Have you checked every single Encyclopedia and Databank entry for mentions or depictions of the Xexto? At the very least, sources that picture the species should be included with Po, as is the case with some of the Encyclopedia entries already listed.
 * Anything listed on the page is what I could find. - AV-6R7 (talk) 20:57, July 28, 2015 (UTC)
 * At a glance, I'm already noticing several subjects within the article that are missing links, including Alien/Canon and Mouth/Canon. Please go through the article again and carefully check for missing links.  CC7567  (talk) 21:19, July 28, 2015 (UTC)
 * Done. - AV-6R7 (talk) 21:30, July 28, 2015 (UTC)
 * Pipelinks need to be capitalized, e.g.  instead of  . Normally this is a  -level objection, but seeing as I've already objected to this for one of your previous articles, please fix it throughout the article. I'd also encourage you to review the Evazan GAN to see if any other of those objections would apply here.
 * Fixed. - AV-6R7 (talk) 22:58, July 30, 2015 (UTC)
 * TPM doesn't identify the species by name, so you need to use 1stID to specify which source does.  CC7567  (talk) 03:23, July 29, 2015 (UTC)
 * Fixed, and added note in the Bts section. - AV-6R7 (talk) 22:58, July 30, 2015 (UTC)
 * In Biology and appearance, TPM is cited twice in succession. Please check whether one of those references is simply a duplicate ref or if it was intended to be a different source.
 * Fixed. - AV-6R7 (talk) 03:04, August 2, 2015 (UTC)
 * The body of the article has room for at least one image.
 * Done. - AV-6R7 (talk) 03:03, August 2, 2015 (UTC)
 * More detail can be added on why Jenkes killed Wallaway.
 * Done. - AV-6R7 (talk) 02:55, August 2, 2015 (UTC)
 * Quotation marks need to be placed outside of punctuation. Also, GAN Rule 8 states that GANs cannot have any redlinks. Furthermore, I'm noticing at least two grammatical errors, one of which is the fact that the proper idiom is "tie up loose ends," not "tie off." Please go back and carefully check your additions.  CC7567  (talk) 04:54, August 2, 2015 (UTC)
 * Redlinks taken care of. - AV-6R7 (talk) 19:35, August 7, 2015 (UTC)
 * Could you point out the errors you've found to speed up the correction process? - AV-6R7 (talk) 05:24, August 8, 2015 (UTC)
 * As I previously stated, quotation marks need to be placed outside of punctuation. That means "the Commissioner". should be "the Commissioner."  CC7567  (talk) 23:21, August 9, 2015 (UTC)
 * Fixed. - AV-6R7 (talk) 23:34, August 9, 2015 (UTC)
 * Similarly, more detail can be added on Gasgano, particularly the fact that he came in second place, his temper, and his affiliation with Gardulla.
 * Done. - AV-6R7 (talk) 02:55, August 2, 2015 (UTC)
 * TPM, which is what all of the new information is currently sourced to, does not mention the "Ord Pedrovia" name, nor the fact that Gasgano raced for Gardulla or the fact that he came in second place. Please provide the source that does.  CC7567  (talk) 04:54, August 2, 2015 (UTC)
 * Fixed. - AV-6R7 (talk) 18:45, August 7, 2015 (UTC)
 * An article for Wallaway's pawnshop needs to be created and linked where appropriate in the article.
 * Per my above reply, the article still needs to be created. It also needs to be linked where appropriate in the intro.  CC7567  (talk) 04:54, August 2, 2015 (UTC)
 * Fixed. - AV-6R7 (talk) 19:59, August 7, 2015 (UTC)
 * Star Wars Rebels: Rebel Journal by Ezra Bridger needs to be listed in the Sources. Depending on whether or not it directly refers to the species, it might deserve a Imo or Po tag. Please go through Gasgano's and Wallaway's appearances to check for similar scenarios. (Also, Wallaway's Quermian-like appearance in Rebel Journal is something that's relevant to mention in the Bts.)
 * Please note that the unstricken portion of this objection still remains.  CC7567  (talk) 04:54, August 2, 2015 (UTC)
 * AV, I'm not sure whether you haven't seen this objection or you just haven't gotten to it yet, but this still needs to be addressed.  CC7567  (talk) 02:48, August 8, 2015 (UTC)
 * Done. - AV-6R7 (talk) 05:21, August 8, 2015 (UTC)
 * No relevant quotes?  CC7567  (talk) 04:30, July 31, 2015 (UTC)
 * No, not really. The Xexto is really described only by Bridger mental, not spoken out loud. - AV-6R7 (talk) 04:44, July 31, 2015 (UTC)
 * Please check which category or sub-category within Category:Sentient species by biology would be appropriate for the article.  CC7567  (talk) 23:21, August 9, 2015 (UTC)
 * Couldn't find anything in canon that establishes that. Nothing even calls them humanoid. - AV-6R7 (talk) 23:42, August 9, 2015 (UTC)

Cav

 * When describing the Xexto's number of fingers, I think mentioning how many fingers per hand would be needed. Quick mental calculations are fine, specifics are better.
 * Fixed - AV-6R7 (talk) 19:36, August 7, 2015 (UTC)
 * Per rule 8 of the GAN; an article cannot have any redlinks. You have two; Ferpil Wallaway's pawnshop and Gladiator Night. - Sir Cavalier of One FarStar.svg( Squadron channel ) 17:59, August 5, 2015 (UTC)
 * Fixed. Pawn shop created at Wallaway's Pawn Shop, which was used on the Ezra's Gamble page. - AV-6R7 (talk) 19:36, August 7, 2015 (UTC)
 * The last part of the paragraph dealing with Wallway and Jenkes; I think the reveal needs to state that he was visited by the Commissioner and then reveal his identity, not vice versa. Also, how was Jenkes' illegal activities in danger of being discovered? - Sir Cavalier of One FarStar.svg( Squadron channel ) 21:35, August 19, 2015 (UTC)

Comments
If I every acquire the book and find the info, I will put it back in. For now, however, it is unverified information. -  AV-6R7 Crew Pit 21:13, June 29, 2015 (UTC)
 * I can tell just by looking at the Gasgano/Canon article's sourcelist alone that this article does not have a complete sourcelist. Though unfortunately those Encyclopedia pages are outdated, I'd recommend to do a more thorough check of the current Databank pages. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 03:56, June 24, 2015 (UTC)
 * I added the ones I could find to the sources section. Thanks! -  AV-6R7 Crew Pit 04:09, June 24, 2015 (UTC)
 * I'd also suggest looking at some TPM creation material such as the insider's guide. Gasgano/Canon also includes some material on the species' conceptual stages, such as several artists who worked on the species. There is a Gasgano maquette, but I have no idea where those names came from. The Insider's Guide, I believe, is still a valid source for behind the scenes material, though I don't think it can be added to the actual sources list. --Clonehunter(Report your W.M.D.) 21:09, June 29, 2015 (UTC)
 * It's verified on Gasgano/Canon, check the notes. Also, the insider's guide is a disc set that only works on Windows 95/98. Pretty cheap, but the issue is compatibility, unfortunately. --Clonehunter(Report your W.M.D.) 00:45, June 30, 2015 (UTC)
 * Restored. -  AV-6R7 Crew Pit 00:54, June 30, 2015 (UTC)
 * I will be taking a temporary hiatus for the next three weeks as I will be in Europe and may not always have a good internet connection. -  AV-6R7 Crew Pit 03:10, July 2, 2015 (UTC)