Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Lomina Argo


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Lomina Argo

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 16:02, July 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:WAY BACK!! and GONE!!

(2 ECs/1 Users/3 Total)
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 * 1)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  23:04, July 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) I added a "sic" to the quote to indicate that the errors there (one grammatical, one puntuational) are in the OS and are not ours. ~  Savage  BOB sig.png 16:49, July 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Menkooroo 07:15, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * You need to mention Argo's hair, eye and skin color in the main part of the article instead of just the infobox.
 * 3) **Pardon me, I missed it the first time.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  21:30, July 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) * For light colored skin, the common term used to describe it on Wookieepedia is "fair". (Someone else told me this, so I thought I would pass it on.)
 * 5) **OK got it.
 * 6) * I'm not sure about this, but shouldn't six-month-old be changed to six-month old. I ask this because it is "six-month old" in the quote.
 * 7) **You're probably right.
 * 8) * I think that you should give some sort of description in the article about the jewelry and clothing that she is seen wearing in the picture.
 * 9) **Isn't much to tell, but I added a little.
 * 10) * I believe that Joe Corroney is an illustrator not an author. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  21:28, July 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) **Oops, got author and artist confused. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:09, July 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 12) Just one --- in the article, both Coleman and Lomina are said to have "stated" something --- can you find a synonym for one of them? It's admittedly probably a , but I wanna see what you can do here. :) Menkooroo 15:03, July 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * 13) *Take a look at that man! Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:50, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

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