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FAN Objections

 * Please do not strike other people's objections on the Featured Article nomination page, as it is a violation of policy. I see you left a note on the comments page, I just hadn't gotten around to looking at it. I've struck my objections and added my support. Atarumaster88  Jedi_Order.svg ( Talk page ) 14:35, 15 August 2007 (UTC)

Omas objection
I've responded to your objection to the Cal Omas Featured Article nomination, if you could take a look; it's the only think keeping it on the FAN page... Thefourdotelipsis 23:53, 17 September 2007 (UTC)

Harrar nom

 * Sourcing the infobox appears to be the only requirement left on Harrar if you are still interested in getting it to FA. Atarumaster88  Jedi_Order.svg ( Talk page ) 16:48, 21 September 2007 (UTC)

C'baoth FA objection
In response to your objection to Joruus C'baoth, I put that info ahead of the stuff from DFR because I was illustrating some of his feats in battle, and the Ukio thing is the main show of his skills in such combat. However, if you really feel it's necessary, I can work on changing the order of the information.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 23:22, 15 November 2007 (UTC)
 * Added mention of General Covell. Thanks for informing me the article was missing that.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 22:21, 4 December 2007 (UTC)

RE: Kre'fey at Balmorra
Hold on, I'll remove that, it was the wrong battle, it's supposed to be Kuat, and the info comes from the Bothan who spoke to Han and Leia at the end of Inferno, who mentioned that Kre'fey was with the fleet that came from Kuat to aid at Kashyyyk.Tank 17:37, 30 November 2007 (UTC)

Re:Random appreciation
Thanks, Harrar. The Grand Admirals have always interested me, and I'm glad you like my improvements to them. And yeah, having them all as FAs someday is the plan (Green tentacle, Hydro and 4dot are also working on/plan to work on some as well). :) --  AdmirableAckbar  [Talk] 21:00, 3 December 2007 (UTC)

Categories
Hey, Harrar. I saw your question on Kuralyov's talk page and thought I'd give you a hand. In my opinion, the best way to learn wikicode, both for categories and other things, is through sheer copy-pasting. Take a look at this article. Click "edit," then scroll to the bottom of the article. There you'll see an example of correct categorization. Simply copy that format, and apply it wherever. --Imperialles 18:36, 20 December 2007 (UTC)
 * To add on to that...basically, there's no need for redundancy. Placing (for example) Tsavong Lah in the Yuuzhan Vong senior officers category will already place him in the Yuuzhan Vong and Yuuzhan Vong officers category by default. Kuralyov 22:30, 20 December 2007 (UTC)

Cookie

 * Keep up the good work! -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 01:06, 11 January 2008 (UTC)

Re: Felth
Hey, Harrar. I appreciate the help. Can you elaborate some on Felth's role in the story - i.e., are we sure it's Felth? Is he directly identified? If you could give me a rundown of the scene so I can put it into the article, that would be great. Toprawa and Ralltiir 23:01, 4 February 2008 (UTC)

Flow-walking
Hey Harrar. If you have time, could have a look at the Aing-Tii article, specifically the part which discusses Flow-walking. My knowledge of Dark Nest and LOTF is limited, so there may be some info missing there. If you have time, could you add whatever you can to that part with references? It would be greatly appreciated. If you're too busy, that's okay. Cheers, -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 17:23, 22 February 2008 (UTC)
 * Thanks, Harrar; there's no rush at all. My exam's finish in one week's time; they're not particularly important, but I've been putting off so much work in the last few years that I need to get up to scratch. I also plan to write bucketloads of FAs in the summer. :) Cheers, -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 17:42, 22 February 2008 (UTC)
 * Thank you very much Harrar, what you've added is excellent. I owe you one favour :) -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 23:57, 23 February 2008 (UTC)

Yuuzhan Vong War
Greetings, Harrar. I see that you intend to greatly (greatly!) expand the Yuuzhan Vong War article, and for that you have my admiration. Some months ago I did that same thing on the Spanish Wookiepedia (you can check it out, likely you don't speak spanish but you can stare at the pretty pictures), and it was tiring indeed. My plans were way less ambitious than yours, but hey, the article took a life on its own and, in little over than a month, I did about 65 pages on MS Word... less than what you have now, probably, but still a lot. Eventually I reduced the article to just 45 pages, because there were many details that just didn't add anything to the flow of the narrative. I see that, as you said, you were incorporating everything, and that is great, as the war is really an important Star Wars event and its current article is rather... mh, disappointing. Nevertheless, your rewrite is going to be really huge, and will certainly be the largest page on Wookieepedia, and I, as a NJO fan, really, really appreciate your effort. Ha, to think the SP article was really good, only to have this worldship of an instant FA... I anxiously await for the day it's done.--Jedabak 18:44, 21 March 2008 (UTC)
 * Indeed I saw your workbench, and in fact I shamelessly copied the introduction and some assorted tiny bits of information I didn't have/forgot to add. For my part I have 16 NJO books (I once had the Force Heretic trilogy, but not anymore), plus Recovery and Ylesia, and the NJO sourcebook. I see that you omitted Recovery, perhaps it was a mistake, but if it wasn't and you don't have it, I'll gladly help you with that part. The NJO Sourcebook is full of interesting details, so I could make something of a list of useful information so it could be incorporated in the main text. Also I support your idea of writing the article as a real war, as opposed to a series of Solo's/Skywalker's adventures in the context of a war. Nevertheless it is somewhat difficult, as (for example) the Agents of Chaos duology is Han Solo and little else, and the Battle of Fondor appears only as a situation in which the heroes were involved, and we know nothing of the battle apart from their roles. Aditionally, the Mid Rim campaign (Druckenwell, Rodia, Kubindi, Kalarba, etc.), and many other battles, are sparsely detailed (I wanted to read about the Hutt Space campaign...). I see also that you plan on expanding/rewriting all the battles. I recently translated the Second Battle of Coruscant from the Spanish article, which was larger, I could do the same with the Myrkr mission. Sorry for the late reply, I've been very busy these days...--Jedabak 00:02, 10 April 2008 (UTC)

Re:A modest proposal
Unfortunately, I doubt I would be of any help :(. I've only read a tiny bit of JAT from the library a few years ago, and I'm only at the very beginning of NJO. However, I would probably be interested in working on Kyp with you if I'd read more of his appearances, so perhaps I could reconsider in late summer or so when I've caught up a bit. If you do go for it solo, I'd be happy to lend my hand where possible. Thanks for your kind comments, and I'll say the same to you: keep up the good work :). Sorry for not being any help, -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 20:48, 26 March 2008 (UTC)
 * Green tentacle has started working on Thrawn with plans to FA him, alas (see here). :( I'm sure we'll find something to work on together, though; I'd definitely like to work with you. :) See you around. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 21:25, 26 March 2008 (UTC)

Re: Bolding titles
I appreciate the correction. I've been doing that for a while now and nobody bothered telling me about it. I'll look up some of the old ones I've made and fix them. Thanks and keep the tips coming. --ToRsO bOy 13:41, 28 March 2008 (UTC)

Gherant question
Hey, Harrar. I saw you edited Gherant, so I was hoping you might know where this sentence comes from. His CCG card does not state this by any means. I'm wondering if there's another CCG card that's maybe not in his source list? "At the time of the Battle of Hoth, Gherant was a deck officer with the rank of commander, and his duties included controlling access to the Executor's computer core, a position for which he had been personally selected by the command ship's captain, Firmus Piett." Toprawa and Ralltiir 22:53, 31 March 2008 (UTC)

Re:A favour
Czulkang gets three brief mentions in the NEC:


 * Pg 218: "But Warmaster Tsavong Lah, on conquered Coruscant, had already fixed his gaze on Borleais. He entrusted the counterattack to his father, Czulkang Lah, who had once held the title of warmaster and now spent his days as a tactics instructor."
 * Later in the page: "Czulkang Lah's attack on Borleais involved thousands of starfighters and group assault crawlers."
 * Pg 129: "[Tasvong] Lah...then turned his attention to Borleais. His father, Czulkang Lah, organized another onslaught to recapture the world, this time using so much firepower that the NR cold not hope to win. At first the plan worked...the SSD Lusankya rammed Czulkang Lah's worldship, destroying both vessels."

I'm fairly sure this is nothing new, but since I've not read Enemy Lines yet I can't be sure.

As for Anor, I'd certainly like to work on him with you; he'd be perfect for a co-project, I think. That said, I'm still not finished NJO, so it might be a month or two before I can start. Would arond late-July early-August suit you to start the project? :-D -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 17:39, 26 May 2008 (UTC)
 * No problem; I'm happy to help you any time. Excellent. I have Handbook 2: Crimson Empire, and I should be able to get the FF entry and the ebooks by then. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 18:15, 26 May 2008 (UTC)

Typos
Hey Harrar. I saw your message on X-wing's talk page; you should get Firefox, which includes a (n american) spellchecker which can help you spot typos while you type. Oh, and I've nominated you for WOTM, if that's okay. :-) -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 10:45, 1 June 2008 (UTC)

Well Done!

 * Why thank you very much, RC-1136, its short length and sketchy detail have been annoying me for over half a year. I will now endeavour to finish it by the end of the weekend. Harrar 15:56, 6 June 2008 (UTC)

Mezhan Kwaad & Malik Carr
If they're done, you should go for FA! :-P Really, though, even if there's a load of noms, the more FAs the better, and you should always strive for the star. :-D -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 23:58, 26 June 2008 (UTC)

Welk
Hey Harrar. I recall a while back you nominated Welk for FA, then abruptly pulled it down. I was wondering if you were going to nominate it again. I think you should, because it's a pretty good article. Don't feel like you have to or anything; I'm just making a suggestion. It's up to you. Thanks for your time.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 13:10, 28 June 2008 (UTC)
 * Oh, I see why you didn't nominate it. I thought you can form a pretty concrete background, but after hearing your explanation, perhaps not. I may re-ead Inferno and whatever else in LOTF reveals info about him (I just re-read the DN Trilogy) though. Hey, maybe we could do some work on it together soon (it wouldn't need much before it's ready for the FAN page). Anyway, thanks. As for Daala, I will add that information. Good luck with Alema.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 21:01, 29 June 2008 (UTC)

Hey
Have you ever considered dropping into the Wookieepedia IRC channel or listing an email address (you would be able to send and receive emails through Wikia without anyone actually knowing your email address)? :-) -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 18:49, 28 June 2008 (UTC)
 * Yeah, definitely. Sorry I missed you; I was reading Star by Star when you came in. See you around. :-) -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 15:12, 29 June 2008 (UTC)

Bugslut
Love the title, mate. :-) Just a suggestion, though: for the Yuuzhan Vong War section, you may want to attempt a further subdividing of the two major sections, particularly if you can't get more images for them. This will also enable you to put in a few more quotes, which also help to break up the huge mass of words. Just a stylistic concern, really, as your hard work on behalf of the Wook is very much appreciated.-- Goodwood  ( Alliance Intelligence ) 23:11, 2 July 2008 (UTC)
 * D'oh! Yeah, he did have Lumiya use that term. Odd language for an EU novel to use, really, but then it was just as surprising to see it in a Harry Potter novel too, albeit in its pure form! But yes, those were the two sections I meant. At any rate, good luck with the article!-- Goodwood Redstarbird.svg ( Alliance Intelligence ) 23:23, 2 July 2008 (UTC)

Re:Alema
I have no problem with you bringing that article to FAa at all. In fact, I welcome it. Thanks, and I hope you choose to make more articles like this FAs in the future. Cheers. DC 19:09, 3 July 2008 (UTC)

Nen Yim
What talk page? Anyway, the image we have for Mehzan looks like how Nen is pictured in pretty much everything else. Where have you heard it's Mehzan? Rodtheanimegod4ever 20:33, 5 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Never mind. Rodtheanimegod4ever 20:33, 5 July 2008 (UTC)

Hello
Would you mind popping in :#wookieepedia when you get a chance? I'd like to have a discussion with you. Thanks. Graestan ( Talk ) 14:55, 7 July 2008 (UTC)

Re: Kwaad

 * Glad I could help and I'll look at the FAN page now. Atarumaster88  Jedi_Order.svg ( Talk page ) 21:44, 19 July 2008 (UTC)

Gaege Xarran
Interesting to see you writing a non-Yuuzhan Vong character. :-P Are you working from Tales of the Empire, or do you have the Adventure Journal itself? If you don't, you might like to know there's a little blurb for Xarran in it with some info on his early life in the AJ, which hasn't been included with the republishings. I can transcribe it for you here, if you like. :-) -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 21:29, 21 July 2008 (UTC)
 * ''"Gaege Xarran was the perfect son. He did everything he was asked, never got into trouble, and excelled at whatever it was he chose to do, unlike his younger brother Rivo.
 * ''"The two siblings never really got along, being such opposites. Their parents often compared them to order and chaos. When Gaege entered the Imperial Academy, that was the last straw for Rivo, who ran away from home.
 * ''"With a promising career in the military, Gaege had everything going for him. He served briefly as an Imperial Royal Guardsman, then returned to the regular Imperial Army. He quickly attained the rank of general and was recently assigned as executive officer of the garrison base on Vryssa.
 * ''"While Gaege appears to be perfect, he has always suffered from a fiery temper, though he usually manages to keep it concealed.
 * ''"He seldom hears from his brother, except of course, when Rivo wants something&hellip;"

He's also briefly mentioned in Rivo's blurb:


 * "Rivo grew up in the shadow of his older brother, Gaege. The elder Xarran was always successful at whatever he did, while Rivo couldn't seem to do anything right. Gaege went to the Imperial Academy; Rivo was thrown in jail for petty theft."

Usually, when I'm citing blurbs like that, I use a different ref note to the shory story one, with the number of the AJ included, as it's not technically part of the story (and is usually written by a different author).

Yes, we do need to discuss Anor soon. A start date of around the 7th of August would be suit me best, but I'm flexible. I'm going away for in-and-around two weeks around the 16th of August, but I will be able to bring my computer and some books and work on him there&mdash;I just won't have regular access to the internet (but I'll be able to go to an internet cafe from time to time so I'll still be reachable). :-) -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 21:49, 21 July 2008 (UTC)
 * No problem, Harrar. I look forward to working with you. :-) -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 23:05, 21 July 2008 (UTC)

Re: Yommin
Yes, I am planning to work on him. I meant to add an in-use tag to his article in fact. Hopefully it'll be my first Yuuzhan Vong FA.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 20:25, 26 July 2008 (UTC)

Re: Edit summaries
I'll be more professional in the future, but don't chalk it up to specific faith bias. I don't think many of us want to see karma, yoga, rosaries, or the Holy Spirit show up in the Star Wars universe. -BaronGrackle 18:38, 3 August 2008 (UTC)

Nas Choka
Very well, I will not edit that page. I didn't plan to, anyway. I'm only making completely random minor edits. Thanks for he info on fore, by the way. - TopAce (Talk) 20:37, 5 August 2008 (UTC)

Nom Anor
Hey Harrar! Is the 7th of August still a good start date for Nom Anor for you? I'm flexible, though that would suit me best. As I've said above, I'll be going away around the 14th; I will still have access to my computer -- just no internet -- so I'll be able to continue working on Nom then, if need be, and add it to the Wook on the 22nd or so. :-D

Are there any novels you'd particularly like to cover yourself? I figured it would be best if we divided it into novels and each chose the ones we'd prefer to do. I don't have Dark Rendezvous, so that's the only one I won't be able to do (it also may we worth noting that I haven't actually read TFP or TUF yet ;-) - but I'm racing through Heretic and I should have them read by Monday, I think. :-D ). The one novel I'd particularly like to do is Balance Point, for some reason, but I'm completely flexible. Also, I'll try to con some of the WP:NEGTC people into reading it when it's on FAN, since I anticipate it'll be quite long. ;-)

I look forward to working with you. :-D -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 23:23, 5 August 2008 (UTC)
 * Yes, I meant Dark Journey. Unless Anor was masquerading as Yoda way back then... ;-)


 * I can do the comics, sure. I'll root out my Crimson Empire and give it a readthrough tonight. :) I'm happy for you to do SbS, TFP, and TUF. I'd quite like to do Vector Prime, Traitor, and Force Heretic I & III, though I'm easy on anything else. If there's any things you'd rather not do 'cause you've worked from them a lot before or anything, I can cover them. I suppose I can do A Practical Man, too. For the P&T and T&A, I figured we could each add whatever is relevant from the books were working from, and then we can both go over it at the end to ensure everything meshes and that we didn't miss anything. "Equipment" probably isn't necessary, but we could have a paragraph in the T&A about his stuff, perhaps. I'd be happy enough to do the BtS, but I'm easy. I don't mind about the intro, either; maybe we should just do that last? Oh yeah, also, would it be okay if you covered an "early life" section? You've done a few for Vong so you're probably a better candidate for it than me.


 * I should be logged into IRC for most of the day, but I might be marked as "|awayish" for some of the time. If you type my name in there, though, my chat program will ping me so hopefully I'll catch you. :-D


 * Bel Iblis has been fun to write so far, but The Force Unleashed is certainly going to complicate things (which means I likely won't have it fully finished for ages). Oh well. I can't wait to start Anor. I spoke to Graestan and he's happy to do a copyedit once we're done. I'll badger Ataru and Chack too. ;-) See you around, -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 12:46, 6 August 2008 (UTC)

Question
Seeing as you are our resident Vong expert, I was wondering if you could help me. In Vector Prime, Yomin Carr uses some beetles that absorb the atmosphere and replace it with toxic gases (I think). Do you happen to know what they're called? If so, great, if not, that's fine. Thanks.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 19:25, 6 August 2008 (UTC)
 * Thank you. Good luck with Anor, and thanks for your willingness to help.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 20:29, 7 August 2008 (UTC)

Nas Choka
I was just looking into the Nas Choka article. I assume you're going for FA? I know this is none of my business, but I think the Summary at the beginning of the page is too long. But other than that, it looks pretty well done. Is it possible to have more pics though?Soresumakashi 11:38, 7 August 2008 (UTC)

Back.
Good to see you back, Harrar. :-D -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 20:50, 10 September 2008 (UTC)
 * Thanks, Harrar. Typho's going well, but it's reached something of a standstill; I still have to read a third of a Jude Watson Last of the Jedi book which doesn't exactly mesh very well with Streets of Shadows...and that has problems of its own, too. Xamar is sheer fun, though, and Krennel will be too, hopefully! You're welcome for the nomination&mdash;you deserve it and more, and hopefully you'll win. I'll be getting back to Anor probably Friday, so hopefully we'll get lots of work done in the coming weeks. :-) See you. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 21:13, 10 September 2008 (UTC)

Farewell
Hey Harrar,

Though I don't know your situation nor the details of it, I do understand the natural progression of life, whether directed or otherwise. That being said, I wish you well, and thank you for honoring the site with your time here. Safe harbor, my friend. —Tommy9281  ( Peace is a lie ) 12:37, 15 September 2008 (UTC)

Re: Not sure about a title for this...
I'm surprised and it would be a lie to say I'm not disappointed, but I can sympathise with you and won't begrudge you in the slightest for your decision. I understand how you feel and why you've made your decision, and I wish you best of luck in all walks of life. I'll probably move the Harrar project to a subpage of my own; I'm not sure how much I'll work on it in the next little while, but I think the project deserves to be finished by someone at some point. Wookieepedia is like that&mdash;it's great fun most of the time but it can become a burden of sorts and it shouldn't get in the way of a person's life. I do hope you'll return in some capacity at some point (if the poor quality of new works is one of the factors, then perhaps Mindor or another book will help matters in some regard), and I'd very much love to finish Anor with you and see the fruits of your other planned projects at point if you regained interest in the site at some point&mdash;but don't feel pressured to do anything at all. I'd urge you to ensure you keep all the work you haven't quite completed on the wiki, either on-site or on your harddrive or wherever, and to allow your WotM nomination to continue, because I think you deserve it for all the work you've done, but ultimately its your call. I never normally say this, but May the Force Be With You. :-) -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 12:39, 15 September 2008 (UTC)
 * Oh, and I'll try to look after your noms and make sure they get passed. :-) -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 13:27, 15 September 2008 (UTC)
 * It was nice dealing with you Harrar. We'll miss you, and will be glad to have you back if you are so willing. Good luck in the future with whatever you choose to do.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 21:16, 15 September 2008 (UTC)
 * Harrar!!! Good work on Alema Rar. It's really looking good. Nice to see you around, and remember, we'd always be happy to have you back.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 19:43, 6 January 2009 (UTC)
 * Thanks. I look forward to seeing Alema up for FA. Do you know if you are you back permanently, if you don't mind me asking?  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 01:46, 7 January 2009 (UTC)

Reply
Thanks, I'll be sure to do that.The Boba Fettest 20:38, 9 January 2009 (UTC)

Hey
Hey Harrar, very, very glad to have you back. So, er, what made you come back? And are you just going to come and go, or are you going to edit full time once again? I pray it's the latter :P DC 18:27, 20 January 2009 (UTC)
 * You're welcome for keeping it alive. It just bugs me when there's unfinished work, so I had WP:LE contribute to it along with me. However, you were still the driving force behind it even when you had left :P, so you deserve most of the credit for the close-to finished product. I almost thought you were going to be back for good, and there's no need to apologize for making monster contributions to an article. :) Sucks by the way that you don't have any Star Wars stuff on you now. So once you're done with it, I'll be glad to help you on the FAN/GAN or wherever you take it from there. Cheers, dude, nice to see ya again DC 21:38, 20 January 2009 (UTC)

Re:Bhasu Ruuq
Hey, no problem! :-) I'll check out CSWE to make sure there's nothing extra on him in there, though I doubt there is. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 19:24, 27 January 2009 (UTC)

Re:Copyedit request for Alema Rar
OK, I got about two-thirds of the way through the article tonight (through "The Duel on Roqoo Depot" section). I may or may not get anything done tomorrow (actually today now since it's past midnight) since I have a bowling league tomorrow night and it's my birthday (22! yay!), plus I'm expecting some new Star Wars RPG sourcebooks that I ordered off of Amazon to arrive tomorrow (birthday present for myself), so I should have it done by Friday night at the latest.

I have noticed that the most common error, by far, involves the comma. A few things to remember for future reference:
 * 1) When using a connecting word, such as "and" or "but", to join two thoughts together in one sentence, a comma is used before the connecting word only if both parts of the sentence (before and after the connector) can stand alone as complete sentences. For example:
 * 2) *"She beheaded him with her lightsaber, and then she immediately regretted it."
 * 3) *"She beheaded him with her lightsaber and immediately regretted it."
 * 4) When listing several items separated by commas, a comma should be used before the second-to-last item (before the "and") See why:
 * 5) *"Jim, Nancy and Diana are going to see a movie." This appears to tell Jim that the other two are going to the movies.
 * 6) *"Jim, Nancy, and Diana are going to see a movie." This clearly says that all three are going to the movies.
 * 7) Also, when dealing with lists, if one or more of the items in the list contains a comma, then semicolons should separate each item in the list instead of commas:
 * 8) *"Jim, Nancy, Dave, Nancy's father, and Diana are going to the movies." This makes it appear that five people are going to the movies.
 * 9) *"Jim; Nancy; Dave, Nancy's father; and Diana are going to the movies." This clearly indicates that 4 people are going to the movies and that Dave is Nancy's father.

These are errors that many people make. It's basic elementary school stuff, but the game show Are You Smarter Than a 5th Grader? shows why so many people have forgotten it. I'm not trying to put you down or anything, just pointing out the most common errors so you know what you're doing wrong and can do it right on your next article, which would save you (me?) some work on the final copyedit. ;) Master JonathanJedi Council Chambers 05:56, 29 January 2009 (UTC)

OK, the copyedit is complete. You can check the edit history to see what I changed. Punctuation corrections, which were the vast majority of the errors as noted above, may be difficult to see in the diff, however, you should have no problem seeing spelling corrections and other similar changes. Next to punctuation, the most common error was probably "Jedi order" instead of the correct "Jedi Order", so keep that in mind in the future. :)

I did count 22 redlinks, so you'll need to kill at least 19 of those to make FA. Any other questions regarding what needs to be done to make FA should probably be directed to an Inquistor. I've watchlisted the article and will try to check any new additions for possible copyediting. I am also going to make a point of checking out the NJO and LotF books from my local library, as a lot of that stuff sounds interesting. :) Good luck in advance on the FA nom. Master JonathanJedi Council Chambers 21:14, 30 January 2009 (UTC)

Yo
Hey Harrar. Nice work on Alema Rar. Good to see you around here. :)  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 19:57, 8 February 2009 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the kind words. As for the categorization thing, I will talk to some users about it. Nice talking to you again!  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 20:13, 9 February 2009 (UTC)

Re:Hi, and Alema'rar
Hey.

I'm not up to too much at the minute. I feel little burnt out/disinterested in the site atm, though it's not the first time. I do intend to do Huk War and Borga soon, and get back to work on Bel Iblis. Viqi Shesh would make an awesome FA.

I had another look, and it doesn't seem to be there at all. Her entry's just titled "Alema Rar," and there's no mention of it in either her or her sister's entries, unfortunately. I suspect it's fanon that someone tried to get away with by sourcing it to Who's Who.

Good to see you around, -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 19:39, 17 February 2009 (UTC)

Fact Files
Hey, Harrar; for future reference, I provide scans of the relevant pages upon request, not transcriptions. It's just easier that way :) I take requests from anybody, so if you have a request I can get to it, but I've got a bit of a backlog at the moment due to some RL issues (both Tommy and SavageBob are waiting on stuff that I really need to get to). Of course, Jaymach may be able to sort you out quicker as he did earlier :) Keep up the good work, and its good to see you back on the Wook. - Cavalier One ( Squadron channel ) 14:38, 27 February 2009 (UTC)

Re:Lando

 * Certainly. The Fact File tells us that Lando first stole from Nandreeson "shortly before" becoming Baron Administrator on Cloud City. It also says that it was "almost 20 years" later that Nandreeson waited to get his revenge. Lady Luck says that Lando won the Baron Administrator's job in 1 ABY, so we're looking at a window of between 3 BBY and 1 ABY, as TNR is set in 17 ABY. I could conjecture about how it's probably more towards the latter, but the above is the definitive canon answer. Atarumaster88  Jedi_Order.svg ( Talk page ) 15:36, 13 March 2009 (UTC)

Vector Prime info
Whoops, I forgot to give you that BTS info. So, here's my work-in-progress version of the VP page; you can see some of the links I'm using at the bottom. The interview on TheForce.Net has all sorts of info from him, so it might be the most useful. And here's a bunch of other links in my bookmarks; I don't know which of them have useful info:     - Lord Hydronium 21:31, 27 March 2009 (UTC)

BTS
Hello, Harrar. Seeing as you're the resident NJO writer, do you know some useful information I could use on the Behind the Scenes section of the Mission to Myrkr article I'm working in? I think that section is rather short and there should be many things out there that I've missed. Thanks in advance. Jedabak (Discuss) 22:42, 6 April 2009 (UTC)
 * Awesome! Lots of useful info and lots of useful pointers, thanks. While I search and read stuff, I have a couple of questions and/or comments:

Thank you for your assistance. And happy vacations, of course. Jedabak (Discuss) 01:28, 10 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) You said I'd watch out regarding the Prelude section, why is that? is it too long, too short, too biased, too boring, too irrelevant?
 * 2) The Shelly Shapiro comment is from Star Wars: New Jedi Order Round-Robin Interview, though she might have said something like that somewhere else. Lots of useful info there.
 * 3) The fallout books are briefly referenced in the Aftermath and Legacy sections, along with brief info about Raynar, the Joiners, Lomi Plo and Welk, Alema and Gorog, Jacen's fall to the dark side, Wedge and Uran Lavint's comments (and Jacen's introspection exercise afterwards) from Exile, Jacen and Tahiri's flow-walking back to the mission, and the fact that the past can't be changed. I tried to mention everything relevant to the mission's consequences, but at the same time keep things brief and to the point. I'm thinking that the Traitor parts are perhaps too brief.


 * Hey, great link there. What surprises me is that there are no replies yet.Jedabak (Discuss) 02:34, 18 April 2009 (UTC)

Thank You
I can't thank you enough for the help. You're probably right, it will take practice, but it was really really nice of you to take the time to help. I really appreciate it. :) And no I don't feel patronized, haha. Dark Lord Trayus 20:07, 8 April 2009 (UTC)

Serpent's Smile
Hey, just thought I'd let you know that Serpent's Smile is not in CSWE.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 12:51, 10 April 2009 (UTC)
 * Hey, no problem. I'm always glad to help. Anyway, I don't have that sourcebook, but let me see if I can find it somewhere and check it out for you. Hope you're well, too. See you around.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 23:00, 15 April 2009 (UTC)

Octa Ramis
For some reason, she's always been one of my favourite additions to the NJO, so I thought "why not?" I've got the NJO sourcebook, but thanks for the tip about her being in there :) - Cavalier One ( Squadron channel ) 13:02, 15 April 2009 (UTC)

Nice ...
I see you're working on Kyp Durron - nice! I was perusing the article earlier as semi-research for my Octa Ramis rewrite and thought that someone needed to work on it. Best of luck with it. - Cavalier One ( Squadron channel ) 13:08, 16 April 2009 (UTC)
 * I've got image scans of the pages. I can shoot them over to you. Send me an email through the one linked to my Wook account, and I'll reply with the pages. I was thinking about doing Miko as a companion piece to my Octa work, just so you know :) - Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 13:39, 16 April 2009 (UTC)

Yo'gand's Core
Hey, Harrar :-). I just saw your comment on the FAN about an infobox for Yo'gand's Core, and was wondering if you still want one? If so, I can have a go at creating one. Let me know :-).  Grunny  ( Talk ) 09:34, 17 April 2009 (UTC)
 * Great, I'll give it a go. Any preference for colors? I was thinking maybe light and dark gray. I'll probably have something ready tomorrow, so I'll show you a first attempt at it then :-).  Grunny  ( Talk ) 09:56, 17 April 2009 (UTC)
 * Okay, I did it a little quicker than I thought. Take a look. I filled all the fields in by glancing over the article so they may not be correct but it should give you an idea. What do you think? :-)  Grunny  ( Talk ) 10:36, 17 April 2009 (UTC)
 * Okay, I'll create the template page then, and you can add it to the article. Give me five minutes to create the page :-).  Grunny  ( Talk ) 10:52, 17 April 2009 (UTC)
 * And here it is: Template:Tactics infobox :-).  Grunny  ( Talk ) 10:59, 17 April 2009 (UTC)

Re: Zam
Thanks for the cookie, Harrar. It has been quite fun working on that article. I'm hoping to have it on the FAN page by the end of May. Also, congrats on Yo'gand's Core. That was quite an article. I learned a lot reading that one. &mdash; Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 03:24, 19 April 2009 (UTC)

All Good
Hey, Harrar,

No worries at all. I actually enjoyed the reread, as it helped me find some other things that were missing from the site. You know, a joint venture between us one day would be a noble endeavor... —Tommy  ( Nine two eight one ) 18:01, 19 April 2009 (UTC)

Re: Daeshara'cor
OK, I knocked it out. It should be ready to go. I'm having fun reading the NJO books, but I just need to figure out why my library won't send Agents of Chaos I: Hero's Trial. :( (I requested it two weeks ago through interlibrary loan so it shouldn't take more than a week to arrive, but it's not even "in transit" yet.) Anyway, if you need anything else, just let me know. Master JonathanJedi Council Chambers 20:12, 19 April 2009 (UTC)

Re:Kyp
Hey Harrar, I just checked, and you're right. I guess I got them mixed up yesterday, thanks for catching that. Jonjedigrandmaster ( Jedi beacon ) 11:19, 2 May 2009 (UTC)

Tsavong
Hey Harrar. I saw on your userpage that you say you're working on Tsavong Lah. Actually, I was planning to work on Tsavong in the very near future. Can I, erm, steal him from you? :P Or have you already started?  IFYLOFD  ( You will pay the price for your lack of vision! ) 03:33, 5 May 2009 (UTC)
 * Okay, gotcha. I'll find another big project. ;) Hope you do a great job.  IFYLOFD  ( You will pay the price for your lack of vision! ) 19:29, 5 May 2009 (UTC)

Re:Duels CT

 * Sure, no prob. Lemme know when you're ready and I'll rollback. :-) Atarumaster88  Jedi_Order.svg ( Talk page ) 16:58, 19 May 2009 (UTC)

Re:Serpent's big cheesy grin
Harrar, I am so sorry; I completely forgot about my objection. I've left my support vote. :p Grand Moff Tranner (Comlink) 22:40, 20 May 2009 (UTC)

RE: Kyp - Force Speed
Hey Harrar :-). Thanks a lot for letting me know. I'm always on the look out for more appearances that I missed during my search, and I think I found it: "His alarm consoles flashed as the Caridans attempted to lock on to the Sun Crusher with a tractor beam, but Kyp worked the controls with Jedi-enhanced speed, oscillating his orbit at random so they could never get a positive lock.". Thanks again Harrar :D.  Grunny  ( Talk ) 04:12, 22 May 2009 (UTC)