Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Sin Suub


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Sin Suub

 * Nominated by: Skippy Farlstendoiro 13:44, June 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Okey, this one wouldn't reach 250 words easily...

(3 GCs/4 Users/7 Total)
Support
 * 1) -- 1358  (Talk) 14:05, June 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Suubperb. --Imperialles 14:13, June 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) Start using "Alliance to Restore the Republic" if you want a word boost, though. :P Thefourdotelipsis 14:31, June 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4)  Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 20:44, June 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) -- TK-299  (Click Here) Imperial_Emblem.svg 08:48, June 2, 2010 (UTC)
 * 6) ~ SavageBob 03:28, June 4, 2010 (UTC)
 * 7) Currently at 247 words. I'll support until it hits 250.  —Xwing328 (Talk) 06:02, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Appearance/reference not properly formatted! "Stuff, Second Edition", not "Stuff (Second Edition)". --  1358  (Talk) 13:51, June 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) *Done. --Skippy Farlstendoiro 13:53, June 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) **No, I mean like "Star Wars Sourcebook, Second Edition" -- 1358  (Talk) 13:55, June 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Oh! Done. --Skippy Farlstendoiro 13:57, June 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) Soresu
 * 6) * His first appearance could be mentioned in the BTS. Release years/months would further boost the word count.
 * 7) * Neither of the P&T paras are particularly relevant to his personality as it stands, and could really be moved into the Bio. If you want anything to stay, you must make a judgement on his personality based on those facts. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 11:01, June 2, 2010 (UTC)
 * 8) **OK --Skippy Farlstendoiro 11:07, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Comments
 * 1) Two suggestions here:
 * 2) *Why have you chosen to use one i instead of two in his name? Is the other source more reputable? A small BTS note about the usage in the article could help.
 * 3) **I didn't. I wrote "Siin" but someone else changed it 4 years ago and he must have had his reasons. --Skippy Farlstendoiro 11:26, June 2, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Must have had his reasons? JSarek changed it because he thought it was the correct spelling. It's quite likely he didn't know about the other sources at the time. I'd advise talking to him for the reason, because I personally would have chosen to accept the OOU source spelling than the IU source one. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 23:43, June 2, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) *This looks like it'll hit 250, so as a suggestion for the P&T, you can write that he was not averse to using industrial spies. This is an actual conclusion about his personality. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 11:18, June 2, 2010 (UTC)