Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations

 This page is for the nomination of "comprehensive articles." For a list of "comprehensive articles," see Category:Wookieepedia comprehensive articles.


 * Comprehensive article nominations history
 * Comprehensive article nominations archiving checklist

What is a "comprehensive article?"

A "comprehensive article" is an article that contains all information regarding the topic. Often, "comprehensive articles" cannot reach Featured or Good Article status due to their limited content. This process is intended to recognize articles that contain all relevant canon information, yet are still under the 250 word limit required for a Good Article. The purpose of this is twofold&mdash;firstly, to help users distinguish what is a stub, and what is merely a short article with no further relevant material to be added, and, more importantly, to highlight for the reader when they are reading something that has been judged definitely "comprehensive"&mdash;that is, a guarantee to the reader that whatever they are reading contains the sum total of all available content.

Nominations and promotions of the Comprehensive article process are overseen by a collective of users known as the "EduCorps," which is made up of the Inquisitorius, the AgriCorps, and various other experienced users who are considered qualified to adequately judge the nominated material.

Lucasfilm Ltd. and its many licensees continue to expand the Star Wars universe. Since new information might become available, it may be necessary to revoke a "comprehensive article's" status. A forum will be used to nominate articles that have fallen out-of-date. Members of the EduCorps will then post a warning template on that page, and a grace period of one week will be instituted in which the article can be improved. If there is a significant amount of new information, it is likely that once updated, the article will become eligible for Good article status, and thereby ineligible for Comprehensive article status.

READ THIS FIRST!

An article must&hellip;


 * 1) &hellip;be well-written and detailed.
 * 2) &hellip;be unbiased, non-point of view.
 * 3) &hellip;be sourced with all available sources and appearances.
 * 4) &hellip;follow the Manual of Style, Layout Guide, and all other policies on Wookieepedia. This is, of course, within reason. If a topic only has a very limited degree of content that cannot be divided up into the relevant article sections, it is not required that it follow the Layout Guide precisely. This is to be judged on a case-by-case basis.
 * 5) &hellip;following the review process, be stable, i.e., does not change significantly from day to day and is not the subject of ongoing edit wars. This does not apply to vandalism and protection or semi-protection as a result of vandalism.
 * 6) &hellip;not be tagged with any sort of improvement tags (i.e. more sources, expand, etc).
 * 7) &hellip;have no redlinks.
 * 8) &hellip;have all relevant canon information presented.
 * 9) &hellip;be completely referenced for all available material and sources. See Sourcing for more information. While this is not required for an article possessing a singular source, it is encouraged, as it provides both uniformity and a good infrastructure should the topic be referenced in any future materials.
 * 10) &hellip;have all quotes and images sourced.
 * 11) &hellip;provide at least one relevant quote on the article if available.
 * 12) &hellip;include a "Behind the scenes" section for in-universe articles.
 * 13) &hellip;counting the introduction, the article body, and "Behind the scenes" material, must not exceed 250 words in length (not including captions, quotes, or headers, etc). Any articles exceeding the limit should be taken to the Good article nominations page for consideration.
 * 14) &hellip;if the nominated article reaches 200 words or greater, the nominator must either provide an intro or draft an intro and provide a link to the revision in the nomination, showing that the intro does not elevate the article over 250 words. Exceptions can be made for articles wherein the majority of the text is in the "Behind the scenes" section.

How to nominate:


 * 1) First, nominate an article you find is worthy of comprehensive status, putting it at the bottom of the list below. Nominated articles must meet all thirteen requirements stated above.
 * 2) Add CAnom at the top of the article you are nominating.
 * 3) Be sure to place sign in the "Nominated by" line when the nomination is posted for voting.
 * 4) Others will object to the nomination if they disagree that the article is good enough; they will then supply reasons for doing so, and ways to improve the article in accordance with the established rules.
 * 5) Nominators and supporters will adjust the article until the objectors (with reasonable objections) are satisfied. Objectors may also make alterations&mdash;if there is any reason for contention on a given point, it should be settled in a civil manner in the nomination field itself.
 * 6) Users may not vote on their own articles.
 * 7) There is no limit to the amount of nominations a given user can submit at any given time.

How to vote:


 * 1) Before doing anything, be sure to read the article completely, keeping a sharp eye out for mistakes.
 * 2) Afterward, compare the article to the criteria listed above, and then either support or object the article's nomination.
 * 3) *If you object, please supply concrete reasons for doing so, and how it can be improved.
 * 4) As stated above, any objections will be looked upon by the nominator, supporters, and anyone willing to improve the article, and action will be taken to please the objectors. Do not strike other users' objections; it is up to the objector to review the changes and strike if they are satisfied.
 * 5) There are several ways in which an article can receive the required number of votes. Within a 48-hour period of nomination, only EduCorps votes will count towards the total, although anyone may choose to vote in that window. If two members of the EduCorps support a nomination in that window, and there are no outstanding objections, the article can be considered a "Comprehensive article" and be tagged with the template 48 hours after the initial nomination.  The talk page will also be tagged with the CA template. When the 48 hours are up, any user's votes will contribute towards the total. If one EduCorps member has voted for an article after a week, three regular votes will be required. After the 48 hour period, an article can still also pass with just two EduCorps votes.
 * 6) Once a nomination is successful, it will be placed on the Comprehensive article list. Instructions on how to archive nominations, successful or otherwise, can be found here. Anyone can archive a nomination&mdash;just make sure it has the correct number of votes, has been nominated for at least a week (or 48 hours if there are two EC votes), and that there are absolutely no outstanding objections. If you are not sure how to do this, just ask, and someone will likely be more than willing to help you. Also, if you think you can slip one past us, think again&mdash;someone is always watching you.

All nominations will be considered idle and are subject to instantaneous removal by EduCorps members if objections are not addressed, or at least not answered, after a period of 1 week.

Please remember to archive your nomination beforehand if you plan on taking it to the Good Article Nominations page.

Annexation of the northern Hutt territories

 * Nominated by: 501st  dogma ( talk ) 14:52, June 29, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Trasemene got too long for CAN, so Annexation beat him to being nommed

(1 ECs/2 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 11:17, July 4, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  12:36, July 5, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) Tinwe (comlink) 09:20, August 7, 2012 (UTC)

Object
 * I see the map and why you thought to capitalize "northern," but that is not a proper noun. It was merely the start of the sentence. There is no political area called the "Northern Hutt territories." The Imperials claimed Hutt territories that were in the north. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 07:05, July 2, 2012 (UTC)
 * Ok, moving the page to Annexation of the northern Hutt territories. There, done. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 12:23, July 2, 2012 (UTC)
 * Judging from the map arrow pointing to it, I would be inclined to say that the annexation was considered part of the Insurrection, so the "post" in the infobox would be unnecesary. However, if the prose says the annexation was "after" the insurrection then that line shoukd be removed from the infobox entirely. It was either part of the conflict or it was not. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 06:15, July 3, 2012 (UTC)
 * Trasemene ended the Insurrection, but the annexation was a direct result of the Insurrection. Would'nt it be okay to leave the "Post-Insurrection" part because it was an important factor? 501st  dogma ( talk ) 11:57, July 3, 2012 (UTC)
 * No, because it was not part of the insurrection itself. It was a big chunk of the aftermath, as in after the conflict had already concluded. That infobox field shoulld not have "pre" or "post" anything. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 18:51, July 3, 2012 (UTC)
 * Got rid of Post, added Reconquest of the Rim as that was the general conflict. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 18:59, July 3, 2012 (UTC)
 * That works. Now the Reconquest of the Rim needs to be explicitly mentioned since that name is canonical. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 20:33, July 3, 2012 (UTC)
 * Better? 501st  dogma ( talk ) 20:38, July 3, 2012 (UTC)
 * It was going to be a quick fix, so I did it myself. I ended up changing the article's structuring more thanI wanted too in the process though, how things are introduced. The issue was that both the Insurrection and the annexation were part of the Reconquest. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 11:17, July 4, 2012 (UTC)
 * Ok, thanks for changing it. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 11:21, July 4, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

Racsan break

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 21:12, July 6, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: I like it when I actualy find my old projects.

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) Nice work.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  01:29, July 7, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) 501st  dogma ( talk ) 21:48, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Object

Comments
 * I'm going on a week-long enforced vacation. Any objections left will be addressed upon my return. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 17:47, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Battle of Contruum

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 02:05, July 8, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: In which your desideratum is destroyed.

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) Wow, they referenced one of these battles again?-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  04:31, July 10, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) *I KNOW!~ Finding that made my day. :D NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 04:39, July 10, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) 501st  dogma ( talk ) 12:09, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

Object

Comments
 * I'm going on a week-long enforced vacation. Any objections left will be addressed upon my return. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 17:47, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Unidentified Coruscant Police officer (Panza Hondi)

 * Nominated by:  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  18:36, July 9, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: WP:VG!

(0 ECs/2 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) Coruscantfan (Talk) 23:20, July 9, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) 501st  dogma ( talk ) 12:11, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

Object

Comments
 * Coruscant Police is another name for the Coruscant Police Force, so it should be capitalized in the title.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  18:36, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Battle of Sagma (Imperial Period)

 * Nominated by: 501st  dogma ( talk ) 15:41, July 14, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) Good work.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  23:20, July 14, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) Tinwe (comlink) 09:32, August 7, 2012 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Siege of Zygerria

 * Nominated by: 501st  dogma ( talk ) 20:37, July 14, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Doesn't look like the Zygerrians had much choice in negotiating peace.

(1 ECs/2 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  02:23, July 15, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 12:57, July 29, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) Tinwe (comlink) 09:45, July 31, 2012 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * Could you break up or reword the first sentence to improve the flow of the article? -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  23:28, July 14, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) **Mixed around for better flow. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 23:34, July 14, 2012 (UTC)
 * 4) ***I tweaked a few things.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  23:56, July 14, 2012 (UTC)
 * 5) ****That looks a lot better that my version. :) 501st  dogma ( talk ) 00:55, July 15, 2012 (UTC)
 * 6) * Shouldn't the Raids on Tervisses be mentioned in the infobox in the following section? -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  23:56, July 14, 2012 (UTC)
 * 7) **Done. Thanks for pointing that out. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 00:53, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

Raids on Tervissis

 * Nominated by: 501st  dogma ( talk ) 16:54, July 15, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

(1 ECs/2 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  19:02, July 15, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) ' ℬiggestℒeo ' (ℳeeting ℛoom) 23:58, July 17, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) Tinwe (comlink) 09:48, July 31, 2012 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Wanted Poster: Trandoshan

 * Nominated by: Gal-icon.jpg  OLIOSTER  (talk) 14:52, July 16, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: HUSSVETH-03!

(1 ECs/2 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) HUSSVETH-03? Wha..? 501st  dogma ( talk ) 15:02, July 16, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  22:35, July 16, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) Tinwe (comlink) 09:50, July 31, 2012 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * I think that you should probably create an article for the Trandoshan. With the information about why he is wanted I think that there should be plenty to create an article. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:42, July 16, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) **Done. Bit of a funny note, an article did exist for him but was deleted as its name was based on speculation. I have recreated it at a conjectural title. Gal-icon.jpg  OLIOSTER  (talk) 22:32, July 16, 2012 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Probably doesn't happen often.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  22:35, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

Invasion of Tervissis

 * Nominated by: 501st  dogma ( talk ) 15:26, July 16, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) Nice work.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  16:44, July 16, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) Tinwe (comlink) 09:51, July 31, 2012 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Traffic Division

 * Nominated by: Coruscantfan (Talk) 06:11, July 17, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Who doesn't love getting stopped by a traffic cop?

(1 ECs/2 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) 197 words-no need for intro! 501st  dogma ( talk ) 22:10, July 17, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  02:56, July 28, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) Tinwe (comlink) 06:44, August 7, 2012 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) 501st
 * 2) * Could you link Galactic City somewhere in the body, as it's currently only in the info box.
 * 3) **Done.
 * 4) * Context for Jabi Town? 501st  dogma ( talk ) 12:40, July 17, 2012 (UTC)
 * 5) **Added. Coruscantfan (Talk) 18:25, July 17, 2012 (UTC)
 * 6) Exiled Jedi
 * 7) * Could you provide context for the hostage situation and the riots? -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  02:37, July 21, 2012 (UTC)
 * 8) **Done. Coruscantfan (Talk) 05:45, July 25, 2012 (UTC)
 * 9) Tinwe
 * 10) * I think the "Corellian symphatizers" needs more context. Nothing fancy, just a few words about the Corellians wanting independence. Right now it's a little confusing for those who are not familiar with Legacy of the Force. (By my count the article is now at 195 words, so I apologize in advance if this pushes it over 200 and you'll have to do a rehaul. :P) Tinwe (comlink) 07:52, August 6, 2012 (UTC)
 * 11) **Added. I was able to keep it under a 200! ;) Coruscantfan (Talk) 19:36, August 6, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

Battle of Farstine

 * Nominated by: 501st  dogma ( talk ) 22:37, July 21, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Farstine, the home of Frankenstien

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  18:00, July 23, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 19:15, July 23, 2012 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Ingolstadt
 * 2) * "The battle was part of the Five Veils Campaign, an Imperial campaign launched against members of the Trade Federation, led by Customs Vizier Marath Vooro, who refused to..." The mention of Marath Vooroo is an apositive withing an apositive, making this a run-on sentence. Break it up. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 05:38, July 23, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) **Better? 501st  dogma ( talk ) 13:31, July 23, 2012 (UTC)
 * 4) Exiled Jedi
 * 5) * Could you make it clearer that Vooro is captured during a battle? -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  17:28, July 23, 2012 (UTC)
 * 6) **Done. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 17:57, July 23, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

Battle of the Hook Nebula

 * Nominated by: 501st  dogma ( talk ) 17:18, July 22, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:No comment

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  17:29, July 23, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 19:15, July 23, 2012 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Rubedo
 * 2) * Could you clarify that the Imperial forces moved from Farstine to the Hook Nebula?
 * 3) * Article for the treaty? NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 06:07, July 23, 2012 (UTC)
 * 4) **Both done. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 13:31, July 23, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

Nourishing Vita-Caps

 * Nominated by: Gal-icon.jpg  OLIOSTER  (talk) 16:51, July 23, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Its got electrolytes, I bet.

(1 ECs/2 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) 501st  dogma ( talk ) 16:58, July 23, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  16:47, July 24, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) Science, Energy! Science, Energy! Electrolytes, turbolytes, powerlytes, more lytes than YOUR BODY HAS ROOM FOR. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 20:05, July 24, 2012 (UTC)

Object Comments
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * Please mention them as vitamin caplets in the main article and perhaps create an article for vitamin caplets. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  17:33, July 23, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) **They're never actually called this. I described them as such because of the Vita-Caps in the name. Should I still do this? Gal-icon.jpg  OLIOSTER  (talk) 17:42, July 23, 2012 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Hmmm, maybe just calling them vitamins would be best.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  17:59, July 23, 2012 (UTC)
 * 5) ****Done. Gal-icon.jpg  OLIOSTER  (talk) 20:23, July 23, 2012 (UTC)
 * 6) *****I changed the infobox text to "Nutritional supplement" since that seemed to be a better way to define it, since its description doesn't make it sound like a vitamin.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:47, July 24, 2012 (UTC)

Nar Chan

 * Nominated by:  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  19:00, July 24, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Coruscant Nights!

(0 ECs/2 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) 501st  dogma ( talk ) 19:41, July 24, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) Tinwe (comlink) 09:35, July 31, 2012 (UTC)

Object

Comments
 * There is no context on what a Dreamdancer is.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  19:00, July 24, 2012 (UTC)

RS Revenge

 * Nominated by: Menkooroo (talk) 04:17, July 31, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: It's a dance, not food!

(1 ECs/2 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) Tinwe (comlink) 07:57, August 6, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) Rebel Ship Revenge?-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  17:45, August 8, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) 501st  dogma ( talk ) 22:13, August 8, 2012 (UTC)

Object
 * Quote please. --Eyrezer (talk) 07:35, August 1, 2012 (UTC)
 * Done. Can't believe I forgot it. Menkooroo (talk) 20:16, August 1, 2012 (UTC)
 * Missing context for Galactic Civil War. 501st  dogma ( talk )
 * Take a look at the new-and-improved opening sentence, baby! Menkooroo (talk) 22:01, August 8, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

Vrook Lamar's Padawan

 * Nominated by: &mdash; 04:27, August 2, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: I feel sorry for this Jedi, I really do.

(1 ECs/4 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1) Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 16:08, August 2, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) &mdash;MJ&mdash; War Room Thursday, August 2, 2012, 16:57 UTC
 * 3) You only have to source that her name was established one time, but whatevs. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 17:36, August 3, 2012 (UTC)
 * 4) I'll support, but maybe you should add some context to the Mandalorion Wars, as they are mentioned multiple times in the article. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 18:45, August 8, 2012 (UTC)
 * 5) Amazing, I played through that game a lot of times, but I don't think that I ever found this.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  23:35, August 8, 2012 (UTC)

Object

Hanzo

 * No sourcing in the intro.
 * This may be a sofixit, but it appears this Padawan's gender is unclear, yet the intro mentions male gender.
 * Other than that, good job. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 04:48, August 2, 2012 (UTC)
 * Thanks for catching those, both were oversights on my part. If anything else is required, let me know.&mdash; 05:24, August 2, 2012 (UTC)

MY OBJECTION, HANZO! >:|

 * Traditionally, aren't Padawans not considered Jedi until they become Jedi Knights? NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 18:55, August 2, 2012 (UTC)
 * Fixed.&mdash; 19:07, August 2, 2012 (UTC)


 * 1) Oy
 * 2) * Like Naru said in his support comment, the bit about the battered droid playing the holorecording and mentioning Lamar's Padawan doesn't need to be mentioned in both the BTS and in the ref note. Just one of them is sufficient; both is overkill. Menkooroo (talk) 18:22, August 3, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) **Please take a look at it.&mdash; 00:10, August 4, 2012 (UTC)
 * 4) * Reload your infobox, sucka!
 * 5) *Anything in ref [1] that isn't linked in the article should be linked in the ref note --- the protocol droid, etc. Menkooroo (talk) 19:46, August 6, 2012 (UTC)
 * 6) **Taken care of both.&mdash; 22:24, August 6, 2012 (UTC)
 * 7) ***Does the battered protocol droid have his own article? Also link something to holovid. I think the droid should be linked in the quote attribution, too, since he's not linked in the rest of the article (the references not counting as part of the article). Menkooroo (talk) 22:49, August 6, 2012 (UTC)
 * 8) ****No, he didn't, but it's created now. Taken care of.&mdash; 14:35, August 7, 2012 (UTC)
 * 9) Exiled Jedi
 * 10) * You might need to mention Vrook's coversation with Vandar in the article.
 * 11) **Done.&mdash; 22:25, August 8, 2012 (UTC)
 * 12) * Is there a quote you could get about Surik's master refusing to punish her. Seems to me that this would go well in the article. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  17:49, August 8, 2012 (UTC)
 * 13) **But the article is centered on the Padawan, not Surik or her Master. I don't see how it fits with the subject of the article, considering the Padawan was mentioned once in this holovid conversation.&mdash; 22:25, August 8, 2012 (UTC)
 * 14) ***Okay I see your point.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  23:35, August 8, 2012 (UTC)

Comments
 * Many thanks to for the pre-nom copy-edit & review.&mdash;  05:27, August 2, 2012 (UTC)

Flesh Raider command base

 * Nominated by: Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 14:45, August 3, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Project Hero

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) Other than than EJ's comment/objection, fine by me. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 18:47, August 8, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) Good work.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  21:44, August 8, 2012 (UTC)

Object

Comments
 * Any quotes? -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  17:51, August 8, 2012 (UTC)
 * Found one. Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 19:10, August 8, 2012 (UTC)

Sweat-stop

 * Nominated by:  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  13:52, August 5, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: MedStar I

(0 ECs/1 Users/1 Total)
Support
 * 1) Looks good. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 21:52, August 7, 2012 (UTC)

Object

Comments
 * I wasn't sure what infobox I should use (if any).-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  13:52, August 5, 2012 (UTC)

Unidentified Outer Rim forest planet

 * Nominated by: Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 15:29, August 10, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: First planet nom.

(0 ECs/1 Users/1 Total)
Support
 * 1) 501st  dogma ( talk ) 16:41, August 10, 2012 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) I know it's not realy related to the planet, but could we have some context for the Galactic Civil War?  501st  dogma ( talk ) 16:24, August 10, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) *Done. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 16:31, August 10, 2012 (UTC)

Comments
 * Guest nom for WP:AST. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 15:29, August 10, 2012 (UTC)

Geniserian sand monkey

 * Nominated by:  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  18:40, August 10, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Project Nights

(0 ECs/0 Users/0 Total)
Support

Object

Comments
 * I'm not sure anything can be said about this creature's sentience. If its a "real" monkey, then it might be considered semi-sentient like the Kowakian monkey-lizard.
 * Also, I'm not sure if this can be considered a mammalian monkey due to the real-life existence of these guys. Any comments?-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  18:40, August 10, 2012 (UTC)