Wookieepedia:Re-featured article nominations/Rune Haako

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Guardian of Forever

 * Originally nominated by:
 * Last featured on: 27 August, 2007
 * Changes since last review: diff
 * Date placed on this page: May 15, 2011

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Support

Object
 * 1) Jujiggum
 * 2) *Lots of very speculative wording in the intro: "seemingly created," "For some unknown reason," "apparently killing," "seemingly invincible"
 * 3) *"&hellip;whose technology and culture had been lost to time." Surely we can say something like, "whose technology and culture had been lost by ."
 * 4) *"When the Rebels first entered the massive structure&hellip;" What were the Rebels doing there? There's no preamble to this whatsoever.
 * 5) *In the intro it's mentioned that the ancient race sealed the Guardian in the city; but in the body it isn't said who actually locked up the Guardian.
 * 6) *More to come once these are fixed. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 17:17, June 30, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Vote to remove nomination (Inq only)

 * 1) After three weeks, it doesn't seem like anyone is too interested in tackling this one. Menkooroo 00:29, July 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2)  Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 18:16, July 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Toprawa and Ralltiir 19:21, July 23, 2011 (UTC)