Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations



This page is for the nomination of "comprehensive articles". For a list of "comprehensive articles", see Category:Wookieepedia comprehensive articles.


 * Comprehensive article nominations history
 * Comprehensive article nominations archiving checklist

What is a "comprehensive article?"

A "comprehensive article" is an article that contains all information regarding the topic. Often, "comprehensive articles" cannot reach Featured or Good Article status due to their limited content. This process is intended to recognize articles that contain all relevant canon information, yet are still under the 250 word limit required for a Good Article. The purpose of this is twofold&mdash;firstly, to help users distinguish what is a stub, and what is merely a short article with no further relevant material to be added, and, more importantly, to highlight for the reader when they are reading something that has been judged definitely "comprehensive"&mdash;that is, a guarantee to the reader that whatever they are reading contains the sum total of all available content.

Nominations and promotions of the Comprehensive article process are overseen by a collective of users known as the "EduCorps," which is made up of the Inquisitorius, the AgriCorps, and various other experienced users who are considered qualified to adequately judge the nominated material.

Lucasfilm Ltd. and its many licensees continue to expand the Star Wars universe. Since new information might become available, it may be necessary to revoke a "comprehensive article's" status. A forum will be used to nominate articles that have fallen out-of-date. Members of the EduCorps will then post a warning template on that page, and a grace period of one week will be instituted in which the article can be improved. If there is a significant amount of new information, it is likely that once updated, the article will become eligible for Good article status, and thereby ineligible for Comprehensive article status.

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An article must&hellip;


 * 1) &hellip;be well-written and detailed.
 * 2) &hellip;be unbiased, non-point of view.
 * 3) &hellip;be sourced with all available sources and appearances.
 * 4) &hellip;follow the Manual of Style, Layout Guide, and all other policies on Wookieepedia. This is, of course, within reason. If a topic only has a very limited degree of content that cannot be divided up into the relevant article sections, it is not required that it follow the Layout Guide precisely. This is to be judged on a case-by-case basis.
 * 5) &hellip;following the review process, be stable, i.e., does not change significantly from day to day and is not the subject of ongoing edit wars. This does not apply to vandalism and protection or semi-protection as a result of vandalism.
 * 6) &hellip;not be tagged with any sort of improvement tags (i.e. more sources, expand, etc).
 * 7) &hellip;have no redlinks.
 * 8) &hellip;have all relevant canon information presented.
 * 9) &hellip;be completely referenced for all available material and sources. See Sourcing for more information. While this is not required for an article possessing a singular source, it is encouraged, as it provides both uniformity and a good infrastructure should the topic be referenced in any future materials.
 * 10) &hellip;have all quotes and images sourced.
 * 11) &hellip;provide at least one relevant quote on the article if available.
 * 12) &hellip;include a "Behind the scenes" section for in-universe articles.
 * 13) &hellip;counting the introduction, the article body, and "Behind the scenes" material, must not exceed 250 words in length (not including captions, quotes, or headers, etc). Any articles exceeding the limit should be taken to the Good article nominations page for consideration.
 * 14) &hellip;if the nominated article reaches 200 words or greater, the nominator must either provide an intro or draft an intro and provide a link to the revision in the nomination, showing that the intro does not elevate the article over 250 words. Exceptions can be made for articles wherein the majority of the text is in the "Behind the scenes" section.

How to nominate:


 * 1) First, nominate an article you find is worthy of comprehensive status, putting it at the bottom of the list below. Nominated articles must meet all thirteen requirements stated above.
 * 2) Add CAnom at the top of the article you are nominating.
 * 3) Be sure to place sign in the "Nominated by" line when the nomination is posted for voting.
 * 4) Others will object to the nomination if they disagree that the article is good enough; they will then supply reasons for doing so, and ways to improve the article in accordance with the established rules.
 * 5) Nominators and supporters will adjust the article until the objectors (with reasonable objections) are satisfied. Objectors may also make alterations&mdash;if there is any reason for contention on a given point, it should be settled in a civil manner in the nomination field itself.
 * 6) Users may not vote on their own articles.
 * 7) There is no limit to the amount of nominations a given user can submit at any given time.

How to vote:


 * 1) Before doing anything, be sure to read the article completely, keeping a sharp eye out for mistakes.
 * 2) Afterward, compare the article to the criteria listed above, and then either support or object the article's nomination.
 * 3) *If you object, please supply concrete reasons for doing so, and how it can be improved.
 * 4) As stated above, any objections will be looked upon by the nominator, supporters, and anyone willing to improve the article, and action will be taken to please the objectors. Do not strike other users' objections; it is up to the objector to review the changes and strike if they are satisfied.
 * 5) There are several ways in which an article can receive the required number of votes. Within a 48-hour period of nomination, only EduCorps votes will count towards the total, although anyone may choose to vote in that window. If two members of the EduCorps support a nomination in that window, and there are no outstanding objections, the article can be considered a "Comprehensive article" and be tagged with the template 48 hours after the initial nomination.  The talk page will also be tagged with the CA template. When the 48 hours are up, any user's votes will contribute towards the total. If one EduCorps member has voted for an article after a week, three regular votes will be required. After the 48 hour period, an article can still also pass with just two EduCorps votes.
 * 6) Once a nomination is successful, it will be placed on the Comprehensive article list. Instructions on how to archive nominations, successful or otherwise, can be found here. Anyone can archive a nomination&mdash;just make sure it has the correct number of votes, has been nominated for at least a week (or 48 hours if there are two EC votes), and that there are absolutely no outstanding objections. If you are not sure how to do this, just ask, and someone will likely be more than willing to help you. Also, if you think you can slip one past us, think again&mdash;someone is always watching you.

All nominations will be considered idle and are subject to instantaneous removal by EduCorps members if objections are not addressed, or at least not answered, after a period of 1 week.

Please remember to archive your nomination beforehand if you plan on taking it to the Good Article Nominations page.

Delemedian starhopper

 * Nominated by:  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  23:14, August 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: I couldn't let this page go blank forever.

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Support
 * 1) Looks good EJ. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:43, August 10, 2011 (UTC)

Object

Comments The random page button can find amazing things.-- Exiled Jedi   (Greetings)  23:14, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Taed Augustus

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:32, August 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Got tired of WP:VG's CAnom compartment being empty and the CAnom page being so low.

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Support
 * 1) Nice.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  02:16, August 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Indeed.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 17:40, August 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) SinisterSamurai 02:19, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) I think titles and professions are usually linked/stubbed for quality articles. SinisterSamurai 22:02, August 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *Is that what you were talking about? Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:13, August 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **In fact, it is. SinisterSamurai 02:19, August 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) Floyd has two things:
 * 5) *A little context on the TIE Advanced x1 is needed.
 * 6) **Try that.
 * 7) *"He was Force choked to death by Vader when the Sith Lord took insult at the man's overtures of familiarity, calling him "Darth" more than once during the presentation." The way this is worded, it sounds like Vader is the one calling him "Darth". Please reword.
 * 8) **Got it.
 * 9) *Other than that, nice job.  IFYLOFD  ( Floyd's crib ) 00:25, August 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) **Thanks Floyd. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 20:45, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Frank (gladiator)

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 17:28, August 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Back with more.

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Support
 * 1)  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 17:41, August 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) A Feeorin named Frank?-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  15:13, August 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) One day we will hear of the combined adventures of Frank, Francis, and Simon. SinisterSamurai 02:12, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Yeffrey
 * 2) * An article this small doesn't have room for an image beyond the infobox one. Images should be able to fit within the prose of an article; if they have to be stuck beneath the references, it's a sure indicator that there's no room for them. Menkooroo 02:52, August 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Fixed. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 03:10, August 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) *Coolio. A few more: Can you mention the scar on his forehead somewhere?
 * 5) **Done.
 * 6) *The opening sentence drags on quite a bit --- him being Nym's cousin should really get its own sentence. Also for grammatical purposes.
 * 7) **Fixed.
 * 8) *The digital art book kinda sounds like it should be its own source. Whaddya think? Menkooroo 05:58, August 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) **You got it. I've never used the 1stID before, so do you think it should be used in this situation?  Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:11, August 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) Exiled Jedi
 * 11) * Could you mention the Baron's affiliation to the Galactic Empire? -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  12:07, August 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 12) **Shore thing. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:11, August 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 13) SinSam
 * 14) *Do you think you can use the info from comments for at least a Bts quote? And it's up to you, but, "You're running out of executioners, Baron." might be a nifty top-o-page quote. SinisterSamurai 22:05, August 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 15) **Seems like a good idea. Check it out. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:01, August 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 16) ***It looks like it works. Alternate choices would be "Raaaaaahg!" or whatever he shouts before going "down like a punk." SinisterSamurai 02:12, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Comments Concept art of Barbaric Feeorin is accompanied by text: "We needed a character to go down like a punk for General Kota's intro in the Cato Neimoidia arena. It was also a great chance to go through our concept art archive and resurrect a character that never made it into a game. Anyone remember Nym, the Feeorin pirate from Star Wars: Starfighter and Star Wars: Jedi Starfighter, who led raids against the trade federation? Meet his cousin, Frank." -From the Starkiller Mimobot (Digital Artbook -> Characters section). Foreword for that section is by Haden Blackman, but I can't seem to determine if he's author of the rest of the DAB or not. Frank is pictured again in DAB -> Story Panels section, but not mentioned. The Game Script from the Mimobot simply refers to a pair of "Barbaric aliens." SinisterSamurai 21:54, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

Unidentified Neimoidian aide 1 (Cato Neimoidia)

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 02:47, August 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:We'll have this page filled up again in no time, Menk!

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Support
 * 1)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  03:07, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * Please mention the Baron's affiliation.
 * 3) **Done.
 * 4) * Could you mention the Neimoidian's style of dress.
 * 5) **Check that out.
 * 6) *That's it good work.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  12:10, August 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) **Thanks EJ. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:17, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Unidentified Neimoidian aide 2 (Cato Neimoidia)

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 03:08, August 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Might as well do the counter part.

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Support
 * 1)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  03:09, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * This guy has the same objections as his pal. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  12:11, August 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Done.
 * 4) * Oh, and one more thing, please mention his affiliation in the infobox. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  12:12, August 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) **Hmm, that's wierd. It was there in edit mode, but not in regular reading mode. Hmm, Oh well. Fixed. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:24, August 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) ***I had that recently too. I edited a page and the whole page ended up blank until I edited it again. It's weird, and I'm not sure what is going on.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  03:09, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Barracks D5

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:37, August 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Uhhh.....

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Support
 * 1) Nice. I never would have thought to do this.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  12:14, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

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Comments

Barracks D4

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:55, August 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Ho-hum.

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Support
 * 1) Good work.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  12:17, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Unit 6

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 18:55, August 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:More for WP:VG.

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Support
 * 1)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:55, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * You use "they tried to stop Starkiller" twice in the article, please reword one instance.
 * 3) **Done.
 * 4) * Please make it clear who is escaping when you say: "but he escaped anyway". -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  03:14, August 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) **and done. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:00, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Blair

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 23:32, August 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Sometimes you just gotta jump right in and do it. One edit on the page. Creation and CAnom all in one.

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Support
 * 1)  Master Jonathan  &mdash; Jedi Council Chambers Saturday, August 13, 2011, 15:33 UTC
 * 2) Too bad the Wii version doesn't have the in-game databank...-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  02:10, August 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) *That's because the Wii version is crap. :p j/k Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:51, August 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * Sorry, I missed something. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  02:14, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) From the Council Chambers:
 * 2) * Is there enough information on the Battle of Slotern to determine its era? If so, then the appropriate Eras tag and an infobox should be used on this article.
 * 3) **All the databank says that could help determine an era is that they fought TIE fighters. But since TIE fighters were used in the Rise of the Empire era, Rebellion era, and so on, it's not really possible to determine an era.
 * 4) *That's all I've got.  Master Jonathan &mdash; Jedi Council Chambers Friday, August 12, 2011, 23:46 UTC
 * 5) **Thanks for the review. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:56, August 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) Exiled Jedi
 * 7) * You should create an infobox including information saying that he was a male.
 * 8) **The databank never really says that he was male. Since it's like he's talking, there isn't any "he" "his" or anything like that to go off. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:05, August 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) * I think you could probably create an article on his wingman.
 * 10) **Done.
 * 11) *Good work, Cal.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  03:19, August 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 12) **Thanks for checking it out EJ. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:05, August 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 13) * I think that you probably could say that the era is the Rise of the Empire era, because that is when the game occurs and the entry would not have information about things that happen after the game. Just a thought, what do you thing of this reasoning? -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:54, August 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 14) **Seems solid enought.
 * 15) * Why don't you do the appearances section for this guy like you did for the Battle of Slotern? -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:57, August 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 16) **Done. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:09, August 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 17) * Oops I missed something, you need to say in the body which era the article appeared in. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  02:13, August 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 18) **Got it. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 20:42, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Comments
 * There's no infobox because I couldn't find any canon info to put in it besides his name. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 23:33, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

Battle of Slotern

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:45, August 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:I'm so sorry Lieutenant Blair.

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Support
 * 1) SinisterSamurai 15:36, August 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  20:43, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) SinSam
 * 2) * This should link to either Slotern or Slotern system. Systems on the essential atlas (and companion) chart are named for their most famous feature. And Slotern system was added to the Online companion after comments re: battle of slotern in TFUII were made on the blog of Daniel Wallace. SinisterSamurai 02:07, August 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Done. I added the Slotern system and didn't create a Slotern since we don't know anything about it. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:57, August 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) Exiled Jedi
 * 5) * I think that you can say that it occured in the Rise of the Empire era. See my reasoning in the Blair nomination. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:58, August 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) **Done. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:12, August 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) ***You still need to mention the era in the body of the article.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  02:17, August 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) ****Done. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 20:40, August 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) Imperators II
 * 10) * The dates have to be sourced.  Imperators II (Talk) 12:16, August 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) **They have been. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:38, August 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 12) *** Now "during the height of the Galactic Empire" is unsourced (same as your other battle nom).  Imperators II (Talk) 19:12, August 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 13) ****Try that then. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:32, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Unidentified wingman

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:21, August 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Doing ya one better EJ.

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Support
 * 1) Good work.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  20:40, August 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Excellent. Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 16:22, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * Please do the appearances section like you did in the Battle of Slotern article.
 * 3) **Got it.
 * 4) * Again I think you can say the era was Rise of the Empire.
 * 5) **Done.
 * 6) ***Please mention the era in the body of the article.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  02:21, August 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) ****Done. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 20:35, August 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) * In Blair's article you call them TIE starfighters, however, in this nomination and the Battle of Slotern nomination you call them TIE figters and link them to TIE series. Which is correct? -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  17:03, August 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) **All set. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:15, August 14, 2011 (UTC)


 * 1) Objection! Sustained!
 * 2) * I would prefer it if you added in the BTS that this wingman only appears in the databank, and not the actual game itself. Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 15:09, August 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Got it. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:45, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Sirta Kum

 * Nominated by: Eyrezer 10:06, August 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Discovered the cure for the Direllian Plague

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Support
 * 1) After a little copy-edit, it looks good. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:20, August 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Looks good.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  14:35, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Imperators II
 * 2) *Is there a source that verifies the applicability of the term "Imperial Period" to the given period? If not, I object to its usage here.  Imperators II (Talk) 12:25, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Bothan Buff

 * Nominated by:  OLIOSTER  (talk) 10:46, August 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: I'm "back" after a hiatus.

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Support
 * 1) Looks fine to me.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  14:33, August 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2)  Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:55, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * Nice article, but at the moment the BtS section sounds like the painting/artwork was added to the game in 2010. But IIRC, this and similar paintings have been in the game files right from the start, though they have only been used in a handful of locations in the game. It's listed in this 2009 thread for example. --Craven 17:13, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Unidentified Dersonn III species

 * Nominated by: GTQ ( Problems? ) 15:46, August 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

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Object
 * 1) Cal Jedi
 * Well, first off before even really looking at the article, I seen that it's missing a BTS section.
 * Added
 * That's good, but you should add the release date for KOTOR II.
 * It's also got some linking issues.
 * Could you specify what links I checked they all seem fine.
 * There were just a couple. I took care of them this time.
 * Also, what do you mean when you say "they were destroyed and the rest were enslaved". If they were destroyed, there wouldn't be any "rest". Please reword.
 * Done
 * It needs some categories.
 * Another silly oversight done.
 * "At some point" covers alot of time. See if you can explain better.
 * Done
 * You need to add a species infobox.
 * Done
 * If they were mentioned in KOTOR II, it seems like there would be some kind of quote for the article.
 * I was working grom the online companion and I found out it appeared in KOTOR II so I put it down, however I don;t own KOTOR II, If you do feel free to add a quote
 * I haven't played KOTOR II in a long time, but as nominator, you are responsible for finding all relevant info for it. Try asking on the IRC or in this project.
 * Since there is one appearance and one source, you need to specify in which one the species was first mentioned.
 * Done GTQ ( Problems? ) 17:32, August 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * I think that's it for now. Take care of these and I'll look it over one more time. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 16:00, August 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * Oh, and if you'll need to source the infobox also. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 03:03, August 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * Could you clarify how the species is mentioned in The Essential Atlas Online Companion, because I can't find where this species is mentioned?
 * I've give all I can from TEA online companion If you want to find in enter Dersonn III in the search you should find it.
 * If the Companion only mentions Derson III -- the homeworld -- but not the species, then the Companion should be removed from the sources section. --Eyrezer 20:30, August 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * I think you should remove this from the sources, but it may be used as a reference later.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  03:28, August 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * I think you're going to need to know how it is mentioned in KOTOR II in order to get all the information you need. I'll try and see how it is mentioned.
 * Hmm, can anyone else help here. I think its only mention is through a quote made by Mira about Hanharr when the Jedi Exile follows the light side path. Could someone try and get the quote so all the information is available for the nomination? I lost all my saves in the game awhile back and it would take me over a week to get there again.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  03:28, August 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * If the species is mentioned in KOTOR II it is likely mentioned in Knights of the Old Republic II: The Sith Lords: Prima Official Game Guide.
 * Don't have that either when I started wirting I didn't realize it was in KOTOR II
 * Now I am not so sure that the species is mentioned in this source, but it would still be good to ask someone to check.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  13:43, August 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * You'll need to source the 3,951 BBY date and you cannot source it to the video game since it is not mentioned in it.
 * Done
 * You're going to need more information on Hanharr.
 * Ok I think that is enough context If not tell me what I'm missing. GTQ ( Problems? ) 20:26, August 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * Perhaps more later.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  17:47, August 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * I think that the article's sourcing could use some work:
 * Source the infobox.
 * You cannot source this: "...they were nearly rendered extinct and the remainder of their population was enslaved by the notorious Wookiee bounty hunter Hanharr." to The Essential Atlas Online Companion this is definitely from KOTOR II.
 * Done GTQ ( Problems? ) 13:07, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * The rest needs to wait until someone digs up the KOTOR II quote, since I'm not entirely sure what is from the game and what is not.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  03:28, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

"Dumb" energy quarrel

 * Nominated by:  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  17:13, August 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: One of my first articles ever...

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Support
 * 1) Why does it seem like most user's first articles seem to be about weapons... Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 18:36, August 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) GTQ ( Problems? ) 13:35, August 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Another well done article for the barn-burner, EJ. Arms & Equipment has a lot of good weapons anyone can do!  Kilson ( Let's have a chat ) 17:45, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

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GTQ
Context as to what a quarrel is. Otherwise good job GTQ ( Problems? ) 00:46, August 16, 2011 (UTC) Comments
 * How is this?-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  03:12, August 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * I'd like it to be a little more detailed GTQ ( Problems? ) 03:18, August 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * Here's a little more, I can't think of anything else to add.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  03:35, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Limm Nix

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:27, August 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:WP:VG. More Databank. Why? 'Cause.

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 * 1) Good work.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  12:10, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

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Battle of Corrdair

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:29, August 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Well, I had to write it in order to CAnom Limm Nix. It's a good thing that there is no limit on CAnoms.

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 * 1)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  15:56, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

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 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * The quote doesn't seem to fit very well, it doesn't even mention the battle. Are there any other quotes?
 * 3) **The whole reason that the battle was mentioned in the databank was to give place to Limm Nix, so the battle is mentioned once in a two sentence databank entry. So, that's about the best that I can do.
 * 4) * "The Empire sent All Terrain Missile Platforms to attack the Alliance, including Major Limm Nix." makes it sound like Nix is a AT-MP. Please reword. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  12:16, August 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) **Heh, fixed. Thanks for the review EJ. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:35, August 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) Imperators II
 * 7) * "during the height of the Galactic Empire" has to be sourced.  Imperators II (Talk) 12:18, August 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) **Thanks for looking it over, but it is sourced. Someone really seriously messed this article up while I was sleeping, so you might have seen that result. But, take a look at it now. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:35, August 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) *** Uh, no, the statement is not sourced. It only has a note explaining the applicability of an OOU publishing era.  Imperators II (Talk) 19:09, August 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) ****Take a look now. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:25, August 16, 2011 (UTC)


 * 1) SinSam
 * 2) *Corrdair should be linked (Or Corrdair system). Comments on Dan Wallace's blog give me reason to believe that the next Atlas companion update will include Corrdair (and Polomie). SinisterSamurai 20:27, August 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **I don't know if that'd be wise. We don't know anything about Corrdair. For all we know it might be a city. So I think we should leave it blank until it is verified. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:39, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

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Unidentified Ho'Din Covenant Shadow

 * Nominated by: Eyrezer 11:08, August 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: A Covenant Shadow, in case the title was not clear...

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 * 1)  Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:40, August 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  12:50, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

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 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * Could you make it clear that Celeste Morne was a Covenant Shadow? The way it is now you can't tell if she is a Shadow or something else. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  12:20, August 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) *Done. --Eyrezer 20:07, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Nix

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 16:39, August 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Different Nix than my other CAnom.

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 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * Just a quick question: Was it not confirmed that he was killed by Terror Troopers? -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  13:28, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Yup. Fixed. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:32, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) *See my objection on the captain's nom.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  15:59, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

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Pend

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:07, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:I wrote this article so I could CAnom Band Light, but since I got this one done first, I'll nom this one first.

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 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * In the other articles you mention that he was searching for smuggled goods, please mention that here. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  13:26, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Alrighty. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:34, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) *See my objection on the captain's nom.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  15:58, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

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Red (Band Light)

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:31, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:And next on Blood, Gore, and Other Unfortunate Mishaps:Red, the man whose name matches his looks.

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 * 1) Just a few minor problems that I fixed, good work. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  13:12, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *I need to pay better attention.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  13:23, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

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 * 1) Could you mention that the corridor he was killed in was near life support? -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  13:23, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *Done. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:36, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) See my objection on the captain's nomination.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  15:57, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

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Band Light

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:42, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Finally doing the nom I was building up to.

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 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * Does it say that the ship has a crew of four, or does it just mention four people on the ship and not mention whether there were more crew members or not? If it is the former, please say "At least four" in the infobox. Either way mention the crew in the main article. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  13:06, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **"Good catch" as you say. :p Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:39, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) *See my objection about the era in the nomination for the captain.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  15:56, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

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Unidentified captain of the Band Light

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:58, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:There should be a captain in there somewhere.

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 * 1)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  13:00, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *I missed something.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  13:20, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

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 * 1) You refer to the captain as "he" once. Is this a mistake or was the captain a male?-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  13:20, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *Yea, I did it out of force of habit. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:42, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) For all of the Force Unleashed II databank nominations, please mention that article's subject occured during the reign of the Galactic Empire. (Notice that this could place the articles in any era that has the Galactic Empire satisfying those who say that it is not confirmed to be in the Rise of the Empire era, and it also narrows down when the article's subject lived. What do you think of this idea?)-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  15:52, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

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 * For consistency's sake, please check all of your nominations coming from the Force Unleashed II databank and remove the Rise of the Empire era from them. I have reconsiderd my reasoning and now think that it is not certain that the databank entries have to be from the Rise of the Empire era. Sorry for the confusion.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  13:00, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * It would be a good idea to say that it was during the time of the Galactic Empire, because that narrows it down a bit, though it still does not say an exact era.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  13:16, August 17, 2011 (UTC)