Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Mission to the Vulture's Claw


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Mission to the Vulture's Claw

 * Nominated by:  CC7567  (talk) 05:42, 29 May 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Yet another unexpected, minor TCW event that I didn't foresee.

(3 ACs/7 Users/10 Total)
Support
 * 1) Nice work CC :)  JangFett  Talk 11:02, 29 May 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) Looks great!&mdash;Darthtyler (Talk) 20:40, 29 May 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) Good job :) Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jujiggum ) 21:01, 31 May 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) Per IRC review. Kilson Likes PIE 00:51, 01 June 09 (UTC)
 * 5) I do believe you are very good at writing. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 09:29, 1 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 6) Nice job. &mdash;Master Jonathan(Jedi Council Chambers) 21:35, 23 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 7) Objections addressed in IRC. Cylka  -talk- 23:55, 26 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 8)  Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 09:33, 29 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 9) Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 19:54, 29 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 10) Good article. Darth Trayus  Sith_Emblem.svg ( Trayus Academy ) 22:33, 29 June 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) The Grand Master
 * 2) * Prelude: "as the information stored inside the droid would prove fatal in Confederate hands." Fatal to what?
 * 3) **Addressed.
 * 4) * Why did Nachkt promise R2 to Grievous? Could a reason be specified somewhere in the article?
 * 5) **Addressed.
 * 6) * Jonjedigrandmaster ( Jujiggum ) 20:38, 31 May 2009 (UTC)
 * 7) **Thanks for the review.  CC7567  (talk) 20:57, 31 May 2009 (UTC)
 * 8) Small thing: In the main quote, does Kenobi really say our "next" might very well depend on it? I'm not sure that makes sense. I thought he said "necks".  Darth Trayus  Sith_Emblem.svg ( Trayus Academy ) 01:31, 21 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 9) *Actually...yeah, that makes more sense. The episode isn't very clear, but it seems more likely. :P  CC7567  (talk) 01:56, 21 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 10) **A little while ago I confirmed this with Wild Space, since a lot of the dialogue in the book is taken directly from the episode.  CC7567  (talk) 22:46, 27 June 2009 (UTC)

Comments
 * For general info/interest, the article is about 989 words according to Microsoft Word, so just below the FA requirement.  CC7567  (talk) 04:21, 2 June 2009 (UTC)
 * Now 1,201 words according to Word. &mdash;Master Jonathan(Jedi Council Chambers) 21:39, 23 June 2009 (UTC)
 * Having finally read Wild Space, I've realized that some continuity troubles have been introduced. I've done the best I could, but the novel has really disrupted the events between itself and the episode. Or the changes could be minor, but are just giving me a bad headache. In any case, the Twoconflicting tag is now up there, as well as for the Mission to suspected Confederate space and the Mission to Skytop Station&mdash;although it's really this event that was affected the most, as you can now see from the painstakingly long Bts.  CC7567  (talk) 06:22, 5 June 2009 (UTC)