Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Quarren warrior

Quarren Warrior

 * Nominated by: --  Boot Lover/Riverdale Chauffeur    (Wanna Discuss Something?) 18:41, July 1, 2018 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: I recently added numerous paragraphs focusing on characteristics, history, and more, however, I would not be able to have a strong reason to nominate if it wasn't for some very helpful users.

Lewsir
You're definitely going to need to expand upon their role in the occupation of Mon Cala. --Lewisr (talk) 14:11, July 3, 2018 (UTC)
 * Oh all right. I expanded, noting all the Quarren that appeared. Should I mention all the battles, or something along the lines of that, too? Thanks for looking over the article! --  Boot Lover/Riverdale Chauffeur    (Wanna Discuss Something?) 14:22, July 3, 2018 (UTC)
 * There are several Quarren dead at the start of issue 14 as Vader and co make their way to the palace, you should mention they fought in the Battle of Dac City. I'd suggest having another check through in case you missed anything else
 * Are you sure they're dead? I took a look and can find one saying, "Forward!," but see nothing about their deaths. --  Belugan Jedi/Riverdale Chauffeur    (Wanna Discuss Something?) 02:46, July 21, 2018 (UTC)
 * Yes they're dead, see here and here --Lewisr (talk) 02:51, July 21, 2018 (UTC)
 * Okay I added them in. --  Belugan Jedi/Riverdale Chauffeur    (Wanna Discuss Something?) 03:06, July 21, 2018 (UTC)
 * References shouldn't really go in the intro, I'd suggest trying to work it somewhere in the main body --Lewisr (talk) 02:41, July 21, 2018 (UTC)
 * How's this? --  Belugan Jedi/Riverdale Chauffeur    (Wanna Discuss Something?) 02:57, July 21, 2018 (UTC)
 * You'll need to source how you got the 18 BBY date --Lewisr (talk) 02:41, July 21, 2018 (UTC)
 * Apologies, but I can't find any articles that have a good source for that. Any tips/links for where to look? --  Belugan Jedi/Riverdale Chauffeur    (Wanna Discuss Something?) 02:57, July 21, 2018 (UTC)
 * Well we know from issue 13 it takes place one year into the reign of the Empire. Star Wars: Galactic Atlas dates the establishment of the Empire to 19 BBY. That should help you write a note --Lewisr (talk) 03:05, July 21, 2018 (UTC)
 * Sorry again, but I have yet to see a note written sourcing a date that isn't a simple form of the TCW date template. Could you please link me to an example so I can go from there? --  Belugan Jedi/Riverdale Chauffeur    (Wanna Discuss Something?) 03:09, July 21, 2018 (UTC)
 * You can't source 18 BBY to a TCW date template, that's why I say you need to write a note that says how you got to that year --Lewisr (talk) 03:16, July 21, 2018 (UTC)
 * You misunderstand. I mean exactly that. I'm requesting a link to an article that has one of these notes, but doesn't use the TCW template, if possible. --  White-Helmeted Mandalorian/Riverdale Chauffeur    (Wanna Discuss Something?) 03:26, July 21, 2018 (UTC)
 * Apologies, look at reference 2 on Nik Hepho --Lewisr (talk) 03:30, July 21, 2018 (UTC)

Vitus

 * Make sure that all images are from canon sources, [[File:QuarrenSoldier-TCWUK627.jpg]] is from a Legends source.
 * Okay, I replaced the image. --  Nikto Enforcer/Riverdale Chauffeur    (Wanna Discuss Something?) 01:37, July 8, 2018 (UTC)
 * Are there any other quotes that can be attributed to a Quarren Warrior? I can think of at least one from Water War. Maybe there's also something in the Star Wars: Darth Vader: Dark Lord of the Sith comics? -- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 00:19, July 8, 2018 (UTC)
 * Well from the comics, the Empire refers to the combined force of Mon Calamari and Quarren on multiple occasions, but I don't really think those would make good quotes. I can think of an insulting quote from Riff Tamson about the Quarren. I can also think of a Quarren Warrior confirming that Nossor Ri and the Quarren were with Lee-Char. Anything else that might make a good quote? --  Nikto Enforcer/Riverdale Chauffeur    (Wanna Discuss Something?) 01:37, July 8, 2018 (UTC)
 * In Water War I believe Nossor Ri gives orders to some Quarren Warriors, perhaps that could work?-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 17:37, July 8, 2018 (UTC)
 * Okay. I added that quote just before the paragraphs that discuss the battle. --  Nikto Enforcer/Riverdale Chauffeur    (Wanna Discuss Something?) 18:05, July 8, 2018 (UTC)