Forum:Great Galactic War -- a little help

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Greetings!

A few weeks back I dove headfirst into expanding the Great Galactic War article. I think I've done a reasonable enough job, but I'm sure at least some of that is borne of the tunnel-vision that comes with being the near-exclusive editor for a while.

I put out a call for some assistance on the Talk page nearly two weeks ago now, but so far to no avail so I thought I'd seek out help in a more general TOR area like this. That link has a few points that I've identified as things I'd like to see cleaned up, but I think the most significant issues are:
 * some of the timeline is wibbly and hard to sort out. The opening parts of the war in the Outer Rim are all fairly easily sorted, but it's around the Mandalorian Blockade time that things get a bit fuzzy. The Blockade is broken in 3660 BBY, and Malgus' defeat at the first battle for Ord Radama is stated in Book of Sith to be sometime shortly after the breaking of the Blockade as well. But the subsequent sections in Book of Sith--the battle at Ziost, the capture of Serenno, and Malgus' second move on Ord Radama--are much more difficult to place. Where they're sitting now is admittedly speculative and more for the sake of article flow than anything else. I don't know how to resolve this.
 * there's some stuff which I think it tremendously important (most specifically, the Devastation of Manaan but which can't be fitted into the timeline easily because we have no firm date for it. There are a number of other examples like this as well, of events that should go into the flow of the war, but I don't know how to do that without a date being assigned
 * citations, citations, citations. I have been admittedly slack on putting in citations, and it's on my own personal to-do list. But some assistance here would make this go a lot faster

Basically, I'm hoping that we can bump the page up to Good status. It's an event of pivotal importance in the KOTOR era, and I'd really like for the overall quality of the article to reflect that.

Assistance would be nicest, but advice is also very welcome! – DigiFluid 06:19, March 5, 2012 (UTC)