User talk:Master Jonathan

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Hey!
My friend,

I accept your request. Thank you very much! —Tommy 9281 21:46, October 21, 2010 (UTC)

Shura
Could you give Shura a copy-edit, pre-nom review and a word count?  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 09:54, October 22, 2010 (UTC)

Done. Objection:
 * "Shura took Khai to the Circle Chambers. Shura took Khai via a winding staircase": Something is repetitive here.
 * Fixed.


 * Otherwise, looks good. ~284 words. Let me know if you have any questions.  Master Jonathan New Jedi Order.svg ( Jedi Council Chambers ) 16:25, October 22, 2010 (UTC)
 * Thank you.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 16:29, October 22, 2010 (UTC)
 * No problem.  Master Jonathan New Jedi Order.svg ( Jedi Council Chambers ) 16:32, October 22, 2010 (UTC)

Goethar Kleej
Hey MJ, could I trouble you for a copy-edit and pre-nom review of Goethar Kleej? Many thanks in advance, NAYA   YEN   15:11, October 25, 2010 (UTC)
 * Done. After looking over it several times, I have no objection. Good job. Let me know if you have any questions.  Master Jonathan New Jedi Order.svg ( Jedi Council Chambers ) 19:11, October 25, 2010 (UTC)
 * That was a quicker response than I expected, cheers! NAYA   YEN   19:18, October 25, 2010 (UTC)

Iron Citadel
Hey, MJ,

When you get a chance can you run through the Second Duel in the Iron Citadel please? Same terms as always, thanks in advance. —Tommy 9281 00:04, November 5, 2010 (UTC)
 * Done. Let me know if you have any questions.  Master Jonathan New Jedi Order.svg ( Jedi Council Chambers ) 01:48, November 5, 2010 (UTC)

Lightwall
Hey MJ,

Two things. First, I noticed that you have The Jedi Path. Can you tell me if and what it says with regard to Exar Kun's defeat over Yavin 4? I'm looking for anything regarding wall of light, which I am also going to need you to copy-edit at your earliest convenience. Same terms as always, thanks in advance. —Tommy 9281 22:28, November 11, 2010 (UTC)
 * As to The Jedi Path, it only mentions "the Great Sith War of Exar Kun" in passing; it says nothing about his defeat or about wall of light. As to the copy-edit, that's done; let me know if you have any questions.  Master Jonathan New Jedi Order.svg ( Jedi Council Chambers ) 23:53, November 11, 2010 (UTC)
 * Cool. Thanks, and thanks. —Tommy 9281 23:55, November 11, 2010 (UTC)

Grievous attribution
Oh, no, you misunderstood. I meant Grievous after the EU had stopped using him, once George got a hold of him. The EU still exists. I changed the attribution, though. -- Darth Praxus  ( Did somebody order a miracle? ) 21:34, November 18, 2010 (UTC)

Position
Sure, I will stop. I thought it would be better that way, because the blue overlaps with the eras.--Station7 21:50, November 21, 2010 (UTC)
 * They only do that in the "new look" skin, and we don't care about that. Besides, the era icons appear in the same position on the page no matter where the code is in the wikitext, so moving them around won't help.  Master Jonathan New Jedi Order.svg ( Jedi Council Chambers ) 21:58, November 21, 2010 (UTC)

Candy!
My good friend MJ,

I first read your userpage and thought, "Hmm. This kid's puttin his foot in his mouth by volunteering to copyedit every request that comes his way." But as I continued to follow you closely, I began to realize that not only did you readily copyedit every article thrown your way, you did so with zeal. Friendly, approachable, amicable, knowledgeable, and dedicated are all things I would use to describe you, and many more. Your quality of work is impressive, and I've taken to recommending your services to others as a matter of course. It is refreshing to have and work with a Wookieepedian such as yourself, an unassuming individual whose intent strays not too far from wanting the best for the site. I'm glad that you've found gainful employment here, and I am more glad to have made your acquaintance. It is for these reasons that I present you with the Master and Apprentice award. Thank you, my friend, for all your help. You have become quite an asset to Wookieepedia. —Tommy 9281 21:56, November 25, 2010 (UTC)


 * Thank you! As far as putting my foot in my mouth, I almost thought the same thing when the first article that came my way was Alema Rar at 210 KB, but I'm obviously still here. :P Anyway, thanks again, and Happy Thanksgiving!  Master Jonathan New Jedi Order.svg ( Jedi Council Chambers ) 22:43, November 25, 2010 (UTC)

amazon.com
Asking people to buy things for you on amazon is weird. Why don't you buy the items yourself?
 * Probably because I have very little income and can't afford a lot of stuff right now. Also, it's an experiment; I'm just plain curious to see if anyone will buy something, though I don't expect anyone to.  Master Jonathan New Jedi Order.svg ( Jedi Council Chambers ) 04:11, November 26, 2010 (UTC)

Re: User talk:WhiteBoy
Thanks for answering my question, I'll be waiting for the chance to edit those pages as best as I can.Master of the Force 20:20, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

Understood
I understand the changes made to things such as Geonosian hydra, etc., but names like Rigell (Rigel) from Battlegroup Orion (Orion) are clearly inspired by the names of celestial objects.68.105.34.219 21:50, November 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * So Fornax, even though the name clearly comes from a real constellation, cannot have that in the Behind the scenes section? Does this reference not add to the article? About half the articles on this site have relevant speculation in some way or another. But whatever, you make the rules. I don't.68.105.34.219 21:58, November 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * I understand, but I still feel that the information is relevant to the article, whether a source explicitly states the connection or not. Any comprehensive encyclopedia gives you unconfirmed information, but states that the connection hasn't been proven.68.105.34.219 22:05, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

Rasi Tuum
Hey Jon, how's everything? Would you mind giving Tuum a review and copy-edit, please? I nommed him already, but still. Much appreciated.&mdash; 17:04, November 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * Done, and I left a couple of objections on the nom page.  Master Jonathan New Jedi Order.svg ( Jedi Council Chambers ) 21:07, November 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * Thanks very much!&mdash; 23:56, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

Zannah taking over?
Hello Master Jonathan,

I had a question about your Darth Bane post. I apologize if I missed anything on your page that says otherwise, and I am not trying to be a jerk, but I thought Bane took over Zannah's body. At the end of the battle between the two, Zannah "clenches her fist" or something like that, giving reference to the aging sign of Bane. I don't have the book with me now, but plan on re-reading that last section soon. Could you give me any insight otherwise? Again, please don't take this the wrong way. I am just trying to figure out what happened. Lol I may be slightly upset if the ending is not how I interpreted it. Thanks alot.

-Piebe


 * I honestly have no idea what "Darth Bane post" of mine you're referring to, but although the ending of Darth Bane: Dynasty of Evil was somewhat ambiguous, Drew Karpyshyn, the author of the book, has clarified in this post on his website that Zannah won. I hope that answers your question.  Master Jonathan New Jedi Order.svg ( Jedi Council Chambers ) 18:19, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

CSWE
I saw you've begun adding the CSWECite template to many articles. As you go through this, I would recommend applying what SavageBob and I agreed on for the Amorphiian article, where you'll see we reserved the page number field only for the Notes and references, with the reason being that for consistency we don't apply page numbers to any other Sources list item. The code would then end up being. Toprawa and Ralltiir 18:44, December 6, 2010 (UTC)
 * Good point. I'll keep that in mind in the future.  Master Jonathan New Jedi Order.svg ( Jedi Council Chambers ) 18:55, December 6, 2010 (UTC)
 * Good deal, thanks. Toprawa and Ralltiir 19:01, December 6, 2010 (UTC)

Sith Kingz
My friend MJ,

Can you run through Dathka Graush for me please? Same terms as always, thanks in advance. —Tommy 9281 02:11, December 7, 2010 (UTC)