Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Rafe's Gambit


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Rafe's Gambit

 * Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:28, June 7, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:My first ship nom as part of my Dark Times run through

(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 12:04, June 9, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) -  Princess   GLG  00:21, June 16, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  15:20, June 18, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) <- Omicron (Leave a message at the BEEP! ) 19:09, June 24, 2013 (UTC)

Object Comments
 * 1) Princess
 * 2) * Doesn't it need to be mentioned that it is a starship in the body? (Perhaps even add a Description section, although that might be unnecessary.) - Princess   GLG  23:43, June 10, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) **Added. A description sentence would just read "The Rath's Gambit was a starship" I can add it if you want but yeah seems unneeded. Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:47, June 11, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) * Can you cut down on the whilsts? - Princess   GLG  21:16, June 11, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) **Cut down 3 to 1. Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:23, June 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * 6) Exiled Jedi
 * 7) * "During the wait for clearance for departure, the crew of the ship discovered that Imperial stormtroopers had begun searching each ship in the port, a fact they contacted the crew of the Maka-Eekai L4000 transport the Uhumele by comm." I think there is a word missing in there after the comma. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  13:04, June 18, 2013 (UTC)
 * 8) **Think I fixed it although I'm not 100% sure if a comma is the correct punctuation. Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:19, June 18, 2013 (UTC)
 * 9) ***Looks fine to me.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  15:20, June 18, 2013 (UTC)
 * Omi
 * 1) * I think the last paragraph of the history section should be rephrased. The whole crew didn't steal the V-wing, it was Dass on his own. <- Omicron (Leave a message at the BEEP! ) 00:25, June 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) **Changed it round is that better? Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:58, June 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) ***Looks good to me. <- Omicron (Leave a message at the BEEP! ) 19:09, June 24, 2013 (UTC)