Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/L-2832

L-2832

 * Nominated by:  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 08:48, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Failed CAnom. Begun as a single sentence article, there just turned out to be more info on this ship.

Tm

 * After you think the objections in the failed CAN has been addressed, try make sure you have the information in their own sections; now some of the description is in the end of the history section.
 * Fixed the misplaced info.  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 15:04, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * Btw, the CAN objections had mostly to do with the article reaching over 250 words due to the adding of material requested, which was satisfied by sending it to the GAN page. All other CAN objections are fixed.  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 14:23, June 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * Also, make sure all information presented in the infobox is in the article body too. –Tm_T (Talk) 09:34, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * Fixed.  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 14:19, June 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * At the end of Bts section, there's date without a year, you can simply say "in the same year" or something. (: –Tm_T (Talk) 15:17, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * Done.  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 07:54, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

Imperators II

 * Could you add some context on T81 Division?
 * How is that?  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 15:08, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * Clone Wars should be mentioned.  Imperators II (Talk) 12:39, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * Fixed.  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 15:08, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * Imho, the detailed description in the intro should be moved to the "Characteristics" section, while the intro needs info about the ship's use and role.  Imperators II (Talk) 15:16, June 7, 2011 (UTC)

Talrrivanian

 * Doesn't follow all the rules listed that a good article must have. -- Talrrivanian JaingHead.svg ( Headquarters ) 14:31, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * Please be specific in your critiquing. Which rules?  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 15:09, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * Sorry, it has several words that could be linked (battle droids for example) -- Talrrivanian JaingHead.svg ( Headquarters ) 17:39, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * Let me intervene: per the Manual of Style, subjects are to be linked to in the intro and upon their first mention in the body. Therefore, no subsequent links are required in its current state, save for color(s) in the description. If you don't mind, I'll remove the second battle droid link.&mdash; TK-999  Era-imp.png( Rise of the Empire ) 17:52, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * TK-999 is correct, Tal. The Manual of Style states: "A subject should be linked once upon its first appearance in the article's infobox, once upon its first mention in the article's intro, and once upon its first mention in the article's main body." Thanks for clearing that up TK.  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 04:51, June 8, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

 * For the recordkeeping, the CAN of the article is archived here. –Tm_T (Talk) 09:22, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * Thanks, Tm_T.  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 14:09, June 7, 2011 (UTC)