Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Quor'sav


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Quor'sav

 * Nominated by: ~ SavageBob 07:10, 13 July 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: So, a pair of legs walks across the screen for a split second, and I give you 24 KB. You gotta love the EU. ~ SavageBob 07:10, 13 July 2009 (UTC)

(5 Inqs/1 Users/6 Total/INQCON 5)
Support
 * 1)  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  12:05, 20 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) --Eyrezer 04:22, 2 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) This should be dealt with but, on second thought, it does not affect directly the article. --Skippy Farlstendoiro 08:05, 5 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 01:25, 10 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) Impressive, Bob. &mdash;  Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 01:44, 10 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 6)  CC7567  (talk) 02:20, 18 August 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Chack Attack:
 * 2) * Ref that they were called Quor'savs in the body, not the intro, please. You could easily fit that in early in the first sentence of the body.
 * 3) * "Quor'sav hatched from eggs. Females laid several of these at once. Their eggs took more than a standard year to hatch." Merge this into two sentences please.
 * 4) *Overall, nice work.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 23:10, 16 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) **These should all be addressed. Thanks for your review! ~ SavageBob 02:37, 18 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 6) Farlstenquor'sav
 * 7) * The treaty redlink: Are you trying to link to "treaty" as a concept? Do you really think the link is neccessary? I'd keep it but linking to Empire-Quor'sav treaty or anything.
 * 8) * I see treaty. But, is it Ua-Galactic Empire Treaty (as in the name of the article) or Ua ua -Galactic Empire Treaty (as in the bold text in the body)?
 * 9) * I think the BtS quote is not correctly attributed, as told in the details of the link. It's Wallace re-telling his conversation with Anderson, not trying to reproduce his note word by word; I'd rather use this quote "So when Kevin sent comments during one of our edit sessions, he sent a note that said basically “You don’t need this.”".
 * 10) * Can you do something with the redlink? Star Wars: The Saga Collection must be... something.
 * 11) * Great work. Can I take Yam'rii after summer? Skippy Farlstendoiro 10:11, 18 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 12) **Done done and done. Yam'rii may have to wait a bit, since I'm trying to tackle our alphabet challenge. Look for Morseerian, Nosaurian, and Ranat soon! ~ SavageBob 13:37, 1 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 13) **Almost done; now I have a different doubt about the treaty :S --Skippy Farlstendoiro 11:28, 3 August 2009 (UTC)

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