Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Aramb


 * ''The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a comprehensive article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.

Aramb

 * Nominated by:  Darth Karika  will destroy your planet! 21:55, August 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Part 3 of 3.

(2 ECs/3 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 12:20, August 31, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Aramb bunctious fellow! Menkooroo 14:39, September 5, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) ~ SavageBob 15:44, September 10, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) --  1358  (Talk) 19:08, September 10, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5)  Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 19:56, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

Object Comments
 * 1) Aye aye aye
 * 2) * It's not clear what Gorog assassins are --- the Dark Nest is mentioned earlier in the article, but "Gorog" is not.
 * 3) *The bit about Yuul's promotion isn't really relevant to Aramb. Unless it can be trimmed down and reworded to be similar to how it's presented in Reo's article. Menkooroo 14:21, September 2, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) **Try now.  Darth Karika  will destroy your planet! 15:03, September 2, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) ***"Gorog" is still used twice without any indication of what it means. Can you pick one and stick with it? Menkooroo 03:40, September 5, 2010 (UTC)
 * 6) ****Should be fixed now.  Darth Karika  will destroy your planet! 12:40, September 5, 2010 (UTC)
 * 7) Prepare to be savaged...
 * 8) * I think we're supposed to used the basic "Quote" template for two speakers, not the one you've got in there now. ~ SavageBob 15:19, September 6, 2010 (UTC)
 * 9) ** Is there special syntax for using it with two speakers? I can't find anything about it on the Template:Quote page.  Darth Karika  will destroy your planet! 15:29, September 6, 2010 (UTC)
 * 10) ***Never mind, got it.  Darth Karika  will destroy your planet! 16:38, September 6, 2010 (UTC)
 * 11) Cav:
 * 12) * A little context on why the Killiks were attacking the Admiral Ackbar would be appreciated.
 * 13) * What was the resolution to the attack? A little info there is also needed for closure. - Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 09:10, September 7, 2010 (UTC)
 * 14) **Both done.  Darth Karika  will destroy your planet! 14:13, September 7, 2010 (UTC)