Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Jizz-box


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Jizz-box

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 20:32, November 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: A sequel to Jizz-wail, and a crossover with Galactic Society of Recording Artists at that.

(2 ECs/1 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 20:42, November 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2)  Put another cred in the jizz-box, baby! ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 02:51, November 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Toprawa and Ralltiir 05:16, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * There are only two sentences in the whole main section of the article. That last long sentence could be broken into at least two sentences, I think, so it would be a better read. Otherwise, good job. -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 20:38, November 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nonetheless, it was grammatically correct! :) Split. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 20:40, November 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * Sounds much better. :) -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 20:42, November 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * Bob
 * Are you sure it's a musical instrument? Sounds like the Star Wars equivalent to a juke box to me. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 14:45, November 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * I've been thinking so too the more I reread the scene... How does "musical device" sound? I could also work in how C-3PO was playing the music. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 18:07, November 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * Looks good to me! ~ Savage BOB sig.png 02:51, November 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) Toprawa:
 * 2) * I think the BTS ought to provide citation for the second sentence regarding jizz being created for the ANH film. That statement alone is not exactly self-sourcing. I believe the ANH novel mentions jizz within (the first source to do so), though I may be mistaken. Toprawa and Ralltiir 02:49, December 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **It was not named in the ANH novel and I'm not sure when it it was first used, but Empire Blues establishes that the Modal Nodes were playing jizz and the citation is meant for the second sentence as well. I made the ref more explicit. How's that? NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 09:21, December 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Works for me. Toprawa and Ralltiir 05:16, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

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