Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Cesi Eirriss


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Cesi Eirriss

 * Nominated by: Green Tentacle (Talk) 18:20, 17 June 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: That lady had guts to spare.

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Support
 * 1) I thought there'd be a picture of guts or something...  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  00:01, 19 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) Imperialles 15:24, 21 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 20:39, 25 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) Toprawa and Ralltiir 23:23, 26 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) --  —Harrar  ( Cut the comm chatter ) 12:12, 27 June 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) From the Moffship of Grand Moff Tranner:
 * 2) * "Antilles ordered her to abandon ship, but Eirriss knew that a recovery would take away precious time from their escape and directed her X-wing into a collision course with the pursuing TIEs, taking out a number of them in the explosion which destroyed her ship, killing her in the process, but allowing the other Rebels a chance to escape to hyperspace." - could you break this up? All the commas make it a bit unwieldy.
 * 3) **Try that. Green Tentacle (Talk) 20:07, 25 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) * No quotes for "Early career" or "Mission to Commenor"?
 * 5) **Nothing quote-worthy. Green Tentacle (Talk) 20:07, 25 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 6) *Well done. Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 19:56, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 7) The mouthpiece of the gods
 * 8) * "When one of them made the mistake of insulting Porkins, the Rebel responded with a knee to the youth's midsection and a brawl broke out between the two groups." &mdash; "made the mistake" seems a little POV here.
 * 9) **Changed it. Green Tentacle (Talk) 12:03, 27 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 10) *Once again the cleanest of writers, it seems! -- —Harrar  ( Cut the comm chatter ) 21:52, 25 June 2009 (UTC)

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