Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Ares Nune


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Ares Nune

 * Nominated by: Kilson Likes PIE 20:32, 14 June 09 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Goes along with my Kite and Laudable noms.

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1) Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 13:00, 20 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 2)  CC7567  (talk) 20:23, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 3)  Mauser  Comlink 00:08, 26 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) Very nice. Toprawa and Ralltiir 02:18, 27 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 02:21, 27 June 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Mauser:
 * 2) * Infobox image: get one of at least the infobox size (the new viewer has the same images in higher resolution).
 * 3) * Non-haired species should not have the haircolor line filled in the infobox at all, right?
 * 4) **You're right, addressed.
 * 5) * Can you find another main quote? Many the one starting with "General Ares Nune reporting..." ?
 * 6) **Done
 * 7) * The quote from HoloNet News — A Galaxy Divided: I always though that was said by a clone trooper, based on the voice, not by Nune.
 * 8) **OK, changed.
 * 9) **Now it is unclear why the quote in the article at all. I'm sure a more relevant one can be found.  Mauser  Comlink  10:01, 22 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 10) * Can something esle be added to the P&T? Like the fact that ordered another sweep of the area because he wasn't convinced after the first one?
 * 11) **Put in.
 * 12) * Again, are you sure it's Nune's voice appearing in the Holonet broadcast? The list of voice actors does not mention Nune in any way.
 * 13) **I'm going to have to discuss this with CC, we both thought it was Nune.
 * 14) ***OK, I talked it over with CC, we changed all the article it applies to.
 * 15) ****The quote in the Biography section still remains.
 * 16) * Mauser  Comlink 20:46, 14 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 17) **Thanks for the review. Kilson Lies PIE 05:27, 20 June 09 (UTC)
 * 18) Jujiggum
 * 19) * "After doing so, the ship proceeded to destroy Nune's entire task force, destroying General Nune, Kite, and the entire Republic fleet." Destroying Nune and Kite? I think this could be reworded better, and destroying is repetetive.
 * 20) **Addressed.
 * 21) * I think you could work something else into the P&t; like Mauser suggested, maybe something about how he was cautious. Also, the sentence that is there now could be worded a little better ("showing it when" is awkward).
 * 22) **Put in
 * 23) * Jonjedigrandmaster ( Jedi Beacon ) 01:42, 17 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 24) **Thanks for the review. You just seem to be going over all my noms. Kilson Likes PIE 05:27, 20 June 09 (UtC)
 * 25) ***No problem, and I haven't been over all of them...yet... Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 13:00, 20 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 26) Attack of the Clone
 * 27) *Just a note: after you use a ref for the first time (namely, in the infobox), please remember to use the  in all following cases, namely in the infobox. I know it's easier to copy/paste this, but it's not always nice to the Reflist.
 * 28) * Per the discussion about the speaker in HNN A Galaxy Divided, that bio quote is unfortunately not confirmed to be Nune. You can keep it if you want, but the speaker still isn't identified. (As such, I'm removing the "clone trooper" speaker from the last paragraph of the bio.) You might be better off with checking the web comic for a replacement, but I'm not sure if there are any left.
 * 29) * Even though it may sound like a word, "precautious" isn't one; I'm not sure what you want to change it to, but please replace it.
 * 30) **I was looking at a bad dictionary.  CC7567  (talk) 00:28, 22 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 31) * Can you try to get another image into the article, namely the one of his death?  CC7567  (talk) 06:37, 21 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 32) Toprawa:
 * 33) * Are we certain the quote at the beginning of the Biography section is punctuated correctly? A comma should normally be placed between "Hopefully" and "commander," but if the comic does not punctuate, then it's ok to leave it. Toprawa and Ralltiir 02:07, 27 June 2009 (UTC)

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