Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Pammant


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Pammant

 * Nominated by: Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 01:47, February 11, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: I echo Cav's statement: I was bored, so I wrote this nom.

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)
Support
 * 1) I'm all for bored noms, especially when on non-characters! --Eyrezer 06:35, February 11, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Great. Xd  20:17, February 13, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3)  CC7567  (talk) 22:59, February 14, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) Nice and clean.  Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 20:56, February 19, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 09:50, February 21, 2010 (UTC)
 * 6) Those kriffin' Quarrens and their tunnels... --Skippy Farlstendoiro 08:51, February 22, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Xd
 * 2) * Get that TCW crap to the article =P (I mean, remove the update tag). Xd  15:32, February 11, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) **Relax, I'm working on it. :p Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 15:34, February 11, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) * No quotes, not even from Breakout Squad? Xd  19:30, February 13, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) **Added, with help from CC. Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 20:12, February 13, 2010 (UTC)
 * 6) Can you find a relevant image that might work somewhere in the article, perhaps of the Malevolence or the Invisible Hand?  CC7567  (talk) 21:52, February 14, 2010 (UTC)
 * 7) *Two added - one of a Quarren, the other of the Malevolence. Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 22:48, February 14, 2010 (UTC)
 * 8) Farl likes Mon Calamarians better, but let's have a look at this Quarren stuff
 * 9) * Intro says Pammant is near Dac ("of nearby Dac"); History only says that Pammant and Dac are connected through a hyperlane, which does not neccessarily mean that they were near each other. No info should be only in the intro.
 * 10) **I thought that sentence was pretty clear, but some context added.
 * 11) * You say four times that Pammant was a "tunneled" world. First, could you use a synonym instead of repeating the same exact word so many times (Or even not using the word so much)?
 * 12) **This goes along with my next response. Since there are no details on the nature of the "tunnels," I chose to repeat "tunneled" rather than insert a potential synonym and risk getting the meaning wrong. I did remove one occurrence of "tunneled," however, but the other ones are necessary to the description of Pammant.
 * 13) * Second, what do you mean by "a tunneled world"? Did it naturally have many tunnels, or did the Quarrens dig it?
 * 14) **No source has yet clarified why it was tunneled, where they were natural (i.e., caverns) or dug out by the Quarrens (i.e., excavated). Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 20:46, February 19, 2010 (UTC)
 * 15) *Skippy Farlstendoiro 07:46, February 19, 2010 (UTC)
 * 16) Soresu
 * 17) * Could you give some indication of time frame in the second paragraph?
 * 18) **Done.
 * 19) * When you say "home" of the ships, do you mean where they were constructed, or where they were stored/kept between missions? SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 21:43, February 19, 2010 (UTC)
 * 20) **Where they were constructed. I reworded that sentence a bit to clarify. Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 00:19, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

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