Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Baysden


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Baysden

 * Nominated by: Hanzo Hasashi 22:31, November 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

(1 ECs/3 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 01:48, December 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) ~ SavageBob 21:42, December 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3)  OLIOSTER  (talk) 03:20, December 2, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) Darth Morrt 11:03, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Object Comments
 * 1) Ruby
 * 2) * I just noticed this, but the Jedi Knights Trading Card Game is not an expansion to the CCG. It is its own separate game also made by Decipher, Hence why the SaV expansion this article links to has "(Jedi Knight TCG)" after it. Please update this article and the others for this.
 * 3) **Done, as I will do in a few seconds to other similar characters.
 * 4) * Context on Tatooine. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 05:25, November 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) **Wrote it is a desert planet. Hanzo Hasashi 18:05, November 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * 6) Can you break up the first sentence into two or three sentences? It's quite a mouthful right now. :) ~ SavageBob 07:42, December 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * 7) *Alright, will do so.
 * 8) Also, it appears he's a sergeant. Shouldn't this be mentioned? ~ SavageBob 07:43, December 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * 9) *Already is. Hanzo Hasashi 21:14, December 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * 10) Just a minor one, but the second sentence just seems a bit too long.  OLIOSTER   (talk) 22:06, December 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * 11) *Done. Hanzo Hasashi 03:18, December 2, 2010 (UTC)
 * Unlike most other stormtroopers I've done so far, Sergeant Baysden's game card does identify him as male with the quote, "Power +1 for each Trooper supporting him." Hanzo Hasashi 22:31, November 29, 2010 (UTC)