User talk:Hobbes15

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Guestbook
I see you opened a discussion on the "Senate Hall" about a guestbook and to do list. I can help if you would like. While I have a guestbook on my page, I do not have a to do list, but I think I can still help. Please come over to my page and see if this is what you are talking about. If it is, I will be glad to help, and even add it for you, if you would like! Thank you very much! supergeeky1 The Cantina 18:05, 19 March 2007 (UTC)

Signature Testing 2
Hobbes15 ( Tiger Headquarters ) (Leader of the Tigers) 00:23, 2 April 2007 (UTC)It works.

Signature Testing
It works!!! Hobbes15 ( Tiger Headquarters ) (Leader of the Tigers) 17:40, 31 March 2007 (UTC)

Hmmm... Hobbes15 ( Tiger Headquarters ) (Leader of the Tigers) 23:56, 1 April 2007 (UTC)

Re:

 * You're welcome. Although you might want to know that a group of admins decided to forbid guestbooks, so that particular practice has ended. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Audience Chamber ) 03:40, 1 April 2007 (UTC)
 * No, none of that is allowed. That's not an April Fool's joke. You might want to check your sig- it's making all the text after it bold and small. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Audience Chamber ) 23:35, 1 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Fixed it. You needed a  at the end, is all.  Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Audience Chamber ) 00:09, 2 April 2007 (UTC)'''

Secret Weapon

 * In response to the Ferus talk page, the release date was sometime in March. The release date given on the internet was April 1, (I think) but it was released in stores before that. Yes, I think spoiler tags would be good. I also own all seven LotJ books and I should be able to help. --Shadowphobia 12:34, 3 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Re: Ferus is up for removal this Saturday, April 7. However, if you're not quite finished, we won't remove the article if significant improvement has been made. See Forum: Featured Article removal. I'll look over the article. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Audience Chamber ) 20:38, 4 April 2007 (UTC)


 * Hey Hobbes. I've been busy, but I should be able to help expand some stuff on Ferus. And I call Ry-Gaul :) (He needs a complete rewrite.) Nice job on the article. And yay! I'm at the bottom of your page! Lol. Anyway, I should be helping some.

Guestbook
Oh, it's no problem. But I think I should tell you, only some guestbooks are against policy. Ones like I have on my page now, are still okay, just the old neat ones. :-P Well, if you ever need help with anything, you know where to look. supergeeky1 The Cantina 17:00, 5 April 2007 (UTC)

Hey Hobbes15 I created a article you wanted try to figure out which!

Re: Inquisitorius

 * Hobbes15, the Inquisitorius meeting times are listed on Inq:Sixth Convention. Note that those numbers do not adjust for Daylight Savings Time! You'll need an IRC client, but you're welcome to join. Myself and another Inquisitor are looking over Ferus atm. We'll get back to you when we're done. Thanks for your help on the article. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Audience Chamber ) 16:16, 7 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Okay, we looked at the section you gave us. First of all, you've definitely made it better. Much of the "poorly written" objection has been addressed. There are still a number of things though, which we'll detail on the Inq page also. It still reads like a play-by-play. Basically, the article doesn't need to contain every little detail, but more of a general overview of Ferus's actions in the book. Some of the phrasing is still a little unencyclopediac "When Ferus shined a glowlight into the fissure, he realized Trever was right.", which also goes along with the play-by-play. I suspect that condensing some of the excessive detail will also answer the "sectioning" objection. And even just starting the sourcing and adding a P&T would help a lot.


 * In its current revision, Ferus has improved, but in my opinion, not enough to stay a Featured Article. Still a lot to be done. If I can help you with anything (sadly, not actual content, I haven't read those books), let me know, and there are a lot of folks in IRC able to help you. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Audience Chamber ) 16:32, 7 April 2007 (UTC)


 * Oh, and by sourcing, we really mean referencing: You can find what we're talking about here: Sourcing. Hope that helps. Atarumaster88 [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Audience Chamber ) 16:35, 7 April 2007 (UTC)
 * You got it on the referencing. If for example, there was a sentence in Han Solo's article that said "Han Solo attended the Academy on Carida." and the information was obtained from I, Jedi, then you would want to insert a reference at the end of the sentence. That link to Sourcing has all the information you need as far as code- if you want to see a FA with sourcing on it, I suggest Jaina Solo, Rokur Gepta, or Panaka- all have thorough sourcing. Those little footnotes are the sourcing we're referring to. Fyi, the Inquisitorius meeting starts in an hour and a half in IRC. Images and quotes also need to be sourced- see the example FAs I listed for that. Ferus probably will be de-featured, but you've done good work on it. We may give Ferus an extension of a week for improvement. Keep up the good job, Hobbes. Cheers. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Audience Chamber ) 21:24, 7 April 2007 (UTC)

Testing Signature Change
My sig was clogging up talk pages, so I removed the Contribs link, in case anyone wants to know (doubtful). My contribs can be found on the edit history of any pages I edit or leave a comment on. Hobbes15 ( Tiger Headquarters ) 18:48, 11 April 2007 (UTC)

Sorry
I'm sorry Hobbes15, but your description of me on your user page is kind of rude. Also I hope my sig. isn't offending anymore and I will move off of Tigria. I'm extremelly sorry of what I did to get labled that way, but that just isn't right, please change it.

- Snow Hobbes ( Arch-Duke of White Tigers )

HHHHHeeeeeeeeellllllllpppppp!
Hi hobbes15 i need major help on my user page please drop me a response on my talk page.Clonecommander19 02:06, 22 April 2007 (UTC)


 * Whoever you are, please sign your name so I know who you are! Otherwise I can't help you. Hobbes15 ( Tiger Headquarters ) 16:34, 21 April 2007 (UTC)

Snow Hobbes ( Arch-Duke of White Tigers ) 18:28, 21 April 2007 (UTC)
 * I'm pretty sure that that was one of my Dark Apprentices (I hope you know to whom I refer, Co or Tr).

Hobbes15 it was me can you help me now since i am on type nit onto your talk page.71.34.33.220 02:32, 22 April 2007 (UTC)


 * Hobbes15 I am not a "DARK APPRENTICE" of Snow hobbes (Arch-Duke of the kitty-pets) i did not do it.(whatever it was) I am insulted by that and hope that you never even THINK that again.-Clonecommander19 01:23, 23 April 2007 (UTC)


 * Thank you for apologizing.-Clonecommander19 01:55, 23 April 2007 (UTC)


 * Check out my user page, Imade some MAJOR changes. i have also told others that my accomplishments are fanon.-Clonecommander19 02:02, 23 April 2007 (UTC)

Gave up user
I'm sorry that I forgot to mention it, but Swift29 is no longer mine (well technically he is because I cannot write passwords on talk pages, but on Monday I will give it back to the rightful owner.) - Snow Hobbes ( Arch-Duke of White Tigers ) 18:32, 21 April 2007 (UTC)


 * I can't delete comments on talk pages-it isn't allowed. Thanks though. Hobbes15 ( Tiger Headquarters ) 19:22, 21 April 2007 (UTC)

Smell being discovered

 * OK, hunted it down. Is this the one you mean? link Right. This was nominated as a Solo, but thanks to Obi-Wan Kenobi in Star Wars: Clone Wars, it became a "Repeat," so it's in the archive here. That's why it's not listed under Han in the archive. It's Han, it's Obi-Wan, it's both. It's like "I've got a bad feeling about this." Enochf 20:24, 21 April 2007 (UTC)

Re:

 * Sorry for not noticing earlier. Yes, there is an Inq meeting. It's in 1 standard hour. Atarumaster88  21:56, 21 April 2007 (UTC)

Re:QOTD
Ok. Next time I nominate I'll make sure it fits the QOTD policy.--Windu223 20:16, 22 April 2007 (UTC)

Not a Joke
Hobbes15 putting my name on "users encounters wasn't a joke attempt it was stating a fact. You and i have encountered each other many times.I don't see the problem with it.-Clonecommander19 12:59, 25 April 2007 (UTC)

I apologize for being impolite. I didn't realize that it was wrong to do that. I thought it was alright because it wasn't vandalism or adjusting one of your statements.-Clonecommander19 01:55, 26 April 2007 (UTC)

Help Please
Hobbes15 since your on could you tell me how to make those infoboxes I can't figure out how.-Clonecommander19 02:01, 26 April 2007 (UTC)

Re:Inq

 * Yeah, basically it was a lot of work, and was cutting my time away from other things on Wookieepedia, especially with an influx of real-life things I've had to do. But yes, I'm glad to be back as well. Cheers. Atarumaster88  02:14, 1 May 2007 (UTC)

Re:

 * It depends on what type of FA you want- are you writing a character article? Look at Gaeriel Captison, Panaka, or Darca Nyl if so. If not, let me know and I'll try and find one from the category you're using. Atarumaster88  13:04, 24 May 2007 (UTC)

Momaw Nadon
Sorry, I blanked the page because I answered my own question, I'll read the policy next time. Darth odious 00:26, 25 May 2007 (UTC)

GA objection
Hi Hobbes, I just fixed the sourcing problem for the pictures in Chalmun's Cantina. Once you review the article, I'm sure Domlith would appreciate it if you struck your objection. Cheers, Greyman ( Paratus ) 21:02, 27 May 2007 (UTC)
 * No problem, I'm glad to help out. Greyman ( Paratus ) 12:26, 28 May 2007 (UTC)

GA Obj
Hey Hobbes, I believe I have addressed your objection to Lushros Dofine on the GA nom page. If you could review it, and if you feel it has been addressed, strike your objection, it would be much appreciated. Feel free to vote too :P. Cheers! Greyman ( Paratus ) 19:27, 7 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Thanks Hobbes, for reviewing your objection, and also for the nice comments on my talk page :). Have a good one,  Greyman ( Paratus )

Hallis Saper FA objection
I've fixed what you pointed out in your objection to the Hallis Saper article becoming an FA. If you could check it and see about removing it, that would be very much appreciated.--Goodwood 12:17, 9 July 2007 (UTC)

Re:RFA
Thanks Hobbes :) Greyman ( Paratus ) 13:25, 15 July 2007 (UTC)

Teneniel Djo
Could you see if your objection to Teneniel Djo becoming an FA can be struck? Thanks. Green Tentacle (Talk) 09:22, 17 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Never mind, just noticed that you're on holiday. I've struck the objection. Green Tentacle (Talk) 08:57, 18 July 2007 (UTC)

Support
Just wanted to say that Hobbes is awesome (much better than Calvin)! And heres to killing off Jacen Solo!(raises a beer glass into the air and takes a swig.)

Ferus

 * Here's some things I noted on a quick lookover of Ferus:
 * 1) Why did the Masters and apprentices separate? (Evacuation of Radnor) I elaborated upon this.
 * 2) Copyedit the thing
 * 3) "maverick, controlling" behavior is a bit POVish Removed.
 * 4) Ditto on "mature" in the next section Removed.
 * 5) Basically, watch the POV and try not to use as many subjective adjectives like "cunning" unless it's described that way in the book. Examples below:
 * 6) *POV: Ferus was more mature and responsible than Anakin
 * 7) *NPOV: Ferus was considered more mature and responsible than Anakin by the Masters.
 * 8) Infiltrating the school section looks pretty good.
 * 9) Needs more detail on the medical experiments Anakin experienced.
 * 10) Quick glance tells me you might want to check your sentence syntax. Lots of ", and" and ", when" that could be altered to make it a more pleasant and diverse chunk of prose. ((Watch out for this!)) Hobbes15 ( Tiger Headquarters ) 01:53, 15 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 11) The Jenna zan Arbor section has far too much extraneous detail that should be condensed. (Romin especially).
 * 12) Korriban sections look pretty good
 * 13) Tru's death (Leaving the Jedi) is never explained. ((To be explained in Underworld section))
 * 14) Reword this: "Ferus and Roan had also been officers in the Republic Army for sometime." ((Rewrite entire Life on Bellassa section))
 * That's a lot of stuff, and I didn't even give it a thorough read, so I apologize if it seems overwhelming. However, I'm also treating it like it's an FAN and the article is looking much better. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 01:20, 15 August 2007 (UTC)
 * Copyediting is basically going over it and looking for small things- spelling, grammar, etc. that don't require extensive re-writing, but rather making sure the article is free of small flaws that detract from its quality. I think of copyediting as polishing a gem after cutting it- one of the final steps to ensure a great work. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 01:36, 15 August 2007 (UTC)

Good Article Nominations
Why did you remove my article nominations? That's not how things are done around here. If you see something wrong with said articles, you're supposed to say something about it in the "oppose" section...not delete the article nomination from the registry. Pelmarn Da&#39;kari 05:44, 16 August 2007 (UTC)

Re:Wedding
Thanks Hobbes :) Greyman ( Paratus ) 21:21, 16 August 2007 (UTC)

Re:Second Battle of Coruscant
I have fixed your objections.  Chack Jadson  Talk 13:16, 17 August 2007 (UTC)

GA nom
I've addressed your objection to the GA nom for Jesmin Ackbar.--Goodwood 06:34, 19 August 2007 (UTC)

QOTD
Did you really mean to undo every vote you'd made? Your last edit You weren't voting twice on all of them. Enochf 13:58, 22 August 2007 (UTC)
 * Eh, too late to revert. As for adding votes on somebody else's behalf... isn't that illegal? ^_^ Can't do it. Enochf 15:38, 22 August 2007 (UTC)

Komari Vosa

 * Your objection to Komari Vosa has been addressed. Darthchristian 0:37, 3 September 2007 (UTC)
 * And speaking of objections, I've addressed yours on the SOTE soundtrack as well. -- Ozzel 17:51, 5 September 2007 (UTC)
 * In the same train of thought, by "better" do you mean that you can strike your objections? Or by "better" do you mean I should do some more? :-P Thanks. Cull Tremayne 01:15, 13 September 2007 (UTC)
 * Awesome, thanks. :D Cull Tremayne 01:26, 13 September 2007 (UTC)

Jenna Zan Arbor - Last of the Jedi: Against the Empire
Hi! You wondered where I got the information about Jenna Zan Arbor being in "the Last of the Jedi: Against the Empire", since the book is not released until October 1. Answer: The book can already be bought on Amazon, [], and that's how I got it. -Nightlily-

Simus FAN
Hey Hobbes. You left a couple of objections to Simus on the FAN page which I think have been addressed - could you have a look when you get the chance. It's all that's stopping it joining the queue. Thanks, --  AdmirableAckbar  [Talk] 15:29, 9 October 2007 (UTC)

Hey I'm Back!
Hi hobbes15, it's me Cc19, I've come back to the Canon wiki because i got tired of all the things there, so i'm back. You can once again ask me questions(If you ever had any for me).-Clonecommander19 18:55, 21 October 2007 (UTC)

Ferus Olin
Hey Hobbes, if you have any more problems with anon edits to the Ferus Olin article, let me know and I'll take the appropriate actions. Cheers, Greyman ( Paratus ) 23:29, 12 November 2007 (UTC)
 * Ya, the reason I didn't include Ulic's second trip to Yavin IV is twofold: a)his second trip really didn't add anything past what was explained about his first trip, and b)I initially had it in there how Hoggon took Ulic to Rhen Var, but in an effort to condense the section so it wasn't so large (which was an objection via IRC), I edited it out to what it currently is. All the Ulic stuff was carefully thought out by me before writing the article ;) As for the Conclave at Exis Station, I can add that in and don't see a problem at all with doing that. Cheers,  Greyman ( Paratus ) 00:54, 13 November 2007 (UTC)
 * Well, the reason Hoggon wasn't described in detail was that "The Redemption of Ulic Qel-Droma" was aimed at showing how Ulic was changed by the war and the outcome it had on his life after the war. It was decided via IRC that Hoggon, and all other "fat" detail would be trimmed from the article since it didn't really add what that section was trying to capture&mdash;indeed, it belonged in both Ulic's and Hoggon's respective articles. That section was quite large in the GSW article when I initially nominated it, and one of the major objections to it's FAN was the size of it and that it had a lot of needless details which were not relevant to the fallout of the Great Sith War. Anyways, as we speak, I'm adding the requested section on Exis Station. Thanks for your input. Greyman ( Paratus ) 01:06, 13 November 2007 (UTC)
 * No problem at all, Hobbes. I appreciate you taking the time to over the Great Sith War even after it has become an FA. Thanks again, Greyman ( Paratus ) 01:12, 13 November 2007 (UTC)

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i am banned from wokieepedia chat every time i try to go there it says i am banned what the heck somone help me before i kill myself .Jonathan117 01:35, 19 November 2007 (UTC)Jonathan117

Pit Droid Award of Diligence
I, Graestan the Mighty, hereby award the highly worthy Hobbes15 the Dedicated the Pit Droid Award of Diligence for his delightful propriety with the featured article nomination page and his tireless work on reviewing articles. He is never afraid to critique any article and aims to read every nomination that passes him by. Additionally, he is exceedingly modest and a fanatical flagellant with incredible self-discipline. He's earned it, regardless of what he might tell you. &mdash;Graestan ( This party's over ) 05:32, 3 December 2007 (UTC)


 * Meh. I appreciate it, Graestan, but as I stated IIRC, I really don't believe I deserve this anywhere near as much as most other active users. Thanks anyway, though; I know you disagree :-p. Hobbes ( Tiger's Lair ) 05:47, 3 December 2007 (UTC)
 * As do I. You deserve this. Modesty shmodesty. --  AdmirableAckbar  [Talk] 13:22, 3 December 2007 (UTC)
 * You definitely deserve this, Hobbes. --Imperialles 15:13, 3 December 2007 (UTC)
 * Your efforts have made us put that much more effort into our FANs, and it shows.-- Goodwood [[Image:Rebsymbol2.png|20px]] ( For the Rebellion! ) 15:14, 3 December 2007 (UTC)
 * Graestan's behind all this :p! I do appreciate it, everyone, and I'm glad people think I'm doing a good job. Thanks again. Hobbes ( Tiger's Lair ) 00:29, 4 December 2007 (UTC)

Hissa quote
Hey, I removed that Hissa quote. I just thought I'd tell you in case you didn't see the note I left hidden amonst the other stuff on the FAN page. Thanks, --  AdmirableAckbar  [Talk] 00:31, 4 December 2007 (UTC)