Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Galney (Ducha of Terephon)


 * ''The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.

Galney (Ducha of Terephon)

 * Nominated by:  IFYLOFD  ( And now, young Skywalker, you will die. ) 23:41, 24 October 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: It was a dark and stormy night. The Dolphins had just lost, and William Shatner's rendition of Rocket Man was stuck in my head. So I thought "I'll GA a conniving Hapan lady. That should cheer me up." The rest is history.

(3 AC/2 users/5 total)
Support
 * 1) Who beat the Dolphins? The Ravens?  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  19:45, 28 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) Anakin Skywalker, Juhani, Goran Beviin HAHAHAHAHA! NaruHina  Talk [[Image:Anlink titleakinsolo.png|14px]] 21:12, 28 October 2008 (UTC) PPS:The Phillys WON!
 * 3) DC 02:37, 29 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie ) 09:46, 29 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) This was such a great story. I loved every minute of it. —Tommy9281 [[Image:Red lightsaber.png|20px]] ( Peace is a lie ) 22:15, 29 October 2008 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) From NaruHina's Homework Stuffed Death Note:
 * 2) * This is minor, I fixed the grammer and flow errors I noticed, but in the "Incident at the Villa Solis" section, I think the "know" is supposed to be italicized in the quote, not "I" NaruHina  Talk [[Image:Anakinsolo.png|14px]] 13:27, 28 October 2008 (UTC) PS:You jinxed me! Shater's Rocket Man came on the radio as I was reviewing this >:P
 * 3) **No, the quote is correct.  IFYLOFD  ( And now, young Skywalker, you will die. ) 19:29, 28 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Oh, OK, it sounds weird though. But then again the whole series is. NaruHina  Talk [[Image:Anakinsolo.png|14px]] 21:12, 28 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) DC
 * 6) * Why did Galney want to kill Jaina and Zekk?
 * 7) **Addressed.
 * 8) * "Ducha Galney was a very plotting and calculating woman." Does Tempest actually state that?
 * 9) **Addressed.
 * 10) * Mention Lady Galney and her actions in the bio and intro.
 * 11) **Addressed. Thanks for the review.  IFYLOFD  ( And now, young Skywalker, you will die. ) 02:31, 29 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 12) **Not bad. DC 02:20, 29 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 13) The Anvil:
 * 14) * Some mention of the Consortium's relation to the Galactic Alliance needs to be made in the infobox.
 * 15) **Addressed.
 * 16) * Galney unknowiwingly gave inside information to a consort in league with the Heritage Council. A consort? Was it not her consort?
 * 17) **Addressed.
 * 18) * Also is there no article for the consort? I think there should be, as he did get a notable enough mention to warrant a stub at least, IMO.
 * 19) **I don't think there is an article for said consort.
 * 20) ***Okay, care to create one?
 * 21) * That same sentence. Which Galney? There are ways of differentiating them without constantly using their name.
 * 22) **Addressed.
 * 23) * For quote formatting, a two-individual, single-line each exchange should be formatted as:  , with line breaks.
 * 24) **Addressed.
 * 25) * No quote for the Battle of Hapes section?
 * 26) **Addressed.
 * 27) * Things that have their own articles need to be linked once in the intro, and once in the body at first mention of the subject.
 * 28) **Addressed.
 * 29) * What type of Star Destroyer was the Anakin Solo?
 * 30) **Addressed.
 * 31) * The whole P&T could use some reworking. Talk about her participation in a coup and against whom in one fell-swoop. The section can also be expanded, as the Ducha displayed many more personality traits than being just conniving and loving. —Tommy9281 [[Image:Red lightsaber.png|20px]] ( Peace is a lie ) 10:22, 29 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 32) **Addressed. Thanks for the review.  IFYLOFD  ( And now, young Skywalker, you will die. ) 20:15, 29 October 2008 (UTC)

Comments
 * I must say, that the opening quote is absolutely astral. —Tommy9281 [[Image:Red lightsaber.png|20px]] ( Peace is a lie ) 22:15, 29 October 2008 (UTC)