Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Tal (Nurse)


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Tal (Nurse)

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:14, July 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Partner nom to my other CAnom.

(2 ECs/2 Users/4 Total)
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 * 1) -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  22:14, July 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 18:28, July 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) ~  Savage  BOB sig.png 13:30, July 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) Menkooroo 03:36, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Rubedo
 * 2) * Saying "...Darth Malgus from taking Malgus's lover..." sounds wierd. Could you establish that Daru was at the medical facility where Tal worked, then say Malgus came for her? NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 21:26, July 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Fixed. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:12, July 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) * Why are you using Sith Master there? That is a title specific to the master/apprentice relationship, and Malgus was not in one of those to my knowledge. He was a Sith Lord. [[User:NaruHina|NaruHina ]] Talk Anakinsolo.png 22:23, July 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) **Done.
 * 7) * The nurse "warned him that Malgus was a Sith" so what happened? NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 22:23, July 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) **done.
 * 9) * I think it would be better to say that the facility was alligned with the Galactic Republic rather than stating flatly that Tal was GA-affiliated. That them medical facility is on Coruscant is is why Tal is GR-affiliated, I presume? NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 22:23, July 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) **and done. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:40, July 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) * Was the reason he let Malgus leave with her becasue the Sith were in power on the planet or merely the intimidation factor? That's probably not specified, but I just wanna check. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 23:17, July 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * 12) **Deceived simply states that he let her go. It doesn't state why. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:00, July 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 13) Exiled Jedi
 * 14) * You need to mention his affiliation to the Republic in the body of the aritcle. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  21:54, July 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * 15) **Got it. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:12, July 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * 16) Bob
 * 17) * The infobox claims he was aligned with the Republic, but can we really say that? I'd wager that lots of common folk on Coruscant have no real government-oriented alignments at all and are just content to do their jobs. ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 16:30, July 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * 18) **Yea, I think you're right. Especially considering what is said here. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 20:32, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

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