Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Mandalore the Ultimate


 * ''The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a featured article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.

(7 Inqs/2 Users/9 total)
Support
 * 1) Imperialles 00:26, 16 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Cull Tremayne 04:13, 16 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) Thefourdotelipsis 04:26, 16 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) Per Cull. - Lord Hydronium 11:22, 16 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 5) &mdash;Grand Admiral J. Nebulax (Imperial Holovision) [[Image:Imperial Emblem.png|20px]] 14:15, 16 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 6)  Greyman ( Paratus ) 14:03, 19 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 7) --CT-5619 helmet comlink 23:19, 19 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 8) Graestan  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( This party's over ) 00:39, 21 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 9) This does not mean I support Mandalorians.  Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 16:47, 21 September 2007 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) From the lair of Hobbes15
 * 2) * Clarify that Mandalore was killed, not just defeated, in intro.
 * 3) **Fixed. --Imperialles 13:28, 17 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) * Ref the affiliation part of the infobox, please.
 * 5) **Fixed. --Imperialles 13:28, 17 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 6) * If possible, mention the origins of the title "Ultimate."
 * 7) **Unfortunately, no information regarding that exists (as far as I know). --Imperialles 13:28, 17 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 8) ***That's fine, not necessary if there's no info. Hobbes15 ( Tiger Headquarters ) 21:44, 17 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 9) * (1.4) "..., effectively fragmenting the Mandalorian Clans. The Mandalorian fleets were effectively destroyed at Malachor IV..." The two "effectively's" close together in there should be reworded.
 * 10) **Fixed. --Imperialles 13:28, 17 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 11) *A little bit of detail on what happened when Ordo tried to reunify the Mandalorians, please.
 * 12) **I'm not sure what you'd like me to write. I could add something about how he traveled with the Exile, but that would stray pretty close to irrelevancy. --Imperialles 13:28, 17 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 13) ***I'm not familiar with KOTOR, so I'm not sure what happens, but just a bit on the results of Ordo's attempt; how did it work, how long did it last, something like that. Hobbes15 ( Tiger Headquarters ) 21:44, 17 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 14) ****Ah. Well, we basically don't know. Ordo gathered around 30 or so Mandalorians, and rebuilt a military base. He recruited a few more Mandalorians over the course of KOTOR II, but we don't know what happens afterwards. --Imperialles 07:32, 18 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 15) *****In that case, my objection is struck. That's all, then. Hobbes15 ( Tiger Headquarters ) 21:26, 18 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 16) *Otherwise, the article looks fine. Good work, Imp. Hobbes15 ( Tiger Headquarters ) 04:19, 17 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 17) From the desk of Atarumaster88
 * 18) * Article could use a little more detail on Mandalorian invasion being pushed back- a couple battles are briefly mentioned in NEC. A sentence or two would be nice.
 * 19) **Addressed. - Graestan  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( This party's over ) 00:39, 21 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 20) * An appropriate picture- maybe of Canderous, Dxun, or of Malachor V would do- in the Legacy section. Or heck, even Revan.
 * 21) **Added picture of Malachor V. --Imperialles 08:06, 21 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 22) * Should his Legacy also include delivering on the Republic a lot of devastation on a lot of worlds and helping turn Revan and Malak eeeeviiiiillll?
 * 23) **Expanded the Legacy section. --Imperialles 08:06, 21 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 24) * Source succession box!
 * 25) **Done. --Imperialles 08:06, 21 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 26) *Have a Super Terrific Friendly Un-frustrating Day. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 23:22, 20 September 2007 (UTC)

Comments

'''Approved by Inquisitorius 22:03, 23 September 2007 (UTC)
 * As long as the article continues to be updated with the new KOTOR comics. Cull Tremayne 04:13, 16 September 2007 (UTC)
 * I'll do my best. --Imperialles 04:14, 16 September 2007 (UTC)