Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/500 Republica


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500 Republica

 * Nominated by: Lord Hydronium 07:33, 1 May 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Part of HydroProject: The Homes of Palpatine.

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 * 1) Interesting article. Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 15:21, 2 May 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) --Eyrezer 08:08, 7 May 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) Thefourdotelipsis 23:57, 15 May 2009 (UTC)
 * 4)  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  22:58, 21 May 2009 (UTC)
 * 5)  Atarumaster88  Jedi_Order.svg ( Talk page ) 05:45, 6 June 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) From the Moffship of Grand Moff Tranner:
 * 2) * "500 Republica was the most exclusive residential tower on Coruscant, a building in the Senate District of Galactic City that was home to some of the most wealthy and famous individuals in the Galactic Republic and Galactic Empire." - reads like Coruscant is the building in the Senate District.
 * 3) **Broken like the first arc of Legacy.
 * 4) * I'd mention the Ambassadorial Sector in the intro.
 * 5) **Added.
 * 6) * "The building was attacked by Separatist General Grievous during the battle, as part of his strike to kidnap Palpatine." - the ending should be reword to state that Grievous did in fact kidnap Palpatine; right now, it's kind of vague.
 * 7) **Clarified.
 * 8) * "A mountainous structure over a thousand stories tall, 500 Republica was taller than any of its neighbors and one of Coruscant's tallest buildings, rising above the clouds in an organically stepped fashion, and topped with a ring of penthouses and a narrow spire at its apex." - one too many forms of "tall," methinks.
 * 9) **It sure is! (Reworded.)
 * 10) * "...though Isard, Pestage, and even the captain of Palpatine's agreed with the Jedi that he needed to leave." - captain of Palpatine's what?
 * 11) **Guards. Fixed.
 * 12) * "Dyne and Valiant were not from again..." - word missing.
 * 13) **Added.
 * 14) * A question on the formatting of appearances. You have the TPM novel, comic, etc., listed underneath the link to the movie. However, I've seen them on one line separated by "/"s and listed individually. Is there a specific format with regards to this? If not, I think there should be one.
 * 15) **That's actually a new thing I'm trying. After the discussion here, I decided to try a new system that balanced putting the 1st template where it technically belongs, while making it less misleading and avoiding half a dozen "The Phantom Menace" entries. We really have no standard for this, but this is a compromise between the two you mention that I'm trying.
 * 16) *Well done. Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 01:27, 2 May 2009 (UTC)
 * 17) **Fixed. - Lord Hydronium 05:57, 2 May 2009 (UTC)
 * 18) From the desk of Atarumaster88
 * 19) * I started fixing these, but then stopped when I realized it had been done consistently. I'm fairly sure that senator by itself is not capitalized. The only time it should be capitalized, IIRC, is when used as a proper title (e.g. Senator Palpatine). If canon disagrees with this, leave it at Senator.
 * 20) **It is in HoloNet News, consistently, which is where I picked up the standard. I don't know what the general survey of the canon is, though. - Lord Hydronium 22:13, 5 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 21) ***Though it's not good grammar, NEC and NEGTC use "Senator". Objection struck. Atarumaster88  Jedi_Order.svg ( Talk page ) 05:45, 6 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 22) *Otherwise clean. Good job. Have a Super Terrific Friendly Un-frustrating day. Atarumaster88  Jedi_Order.svg ( Talk page ) 17:18, 23 May 2009 (UTC)

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