Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Ni-Cada

Ni-Cada

 * Nominated by: ' Biggestleo ' (Meeting Room) 17:56, June 17, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: First CAN

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 * 1) 501st
 * 2) * Him being Cerean needs to be in the body.
 * 3) **Done.
 * 4) * You say: "thirty five years before the Clone Wars". You should link that to the correct date of 57 BBY.
 * 5) **Done.
 * 6) * You need to say before they met Plagueis they were bargaining with a Barabel for a water skimmer.
 * 7) **Done.
 * 8) * Maybe expand the attack part: mention they tracked him with the skimmer, and fought near the water.
 * 9) **Done.
 * 10) * You should say they met Plagueis while bearing flagons of liquid from an eatery.
 * 11) **Done.
 * 12) * The book describes him as "rangy", this needs to be added.
 * 13) **Done.
 * 14) ***I moved it to the P&T section, as that is where it should be.
 * 15) * I think there is enough info to add a Personality and traits section, with things such as Cada's more drawn back attitude, as he withheld the reason of their visit to Abraxin, though Bukk told the Munn anyway.
 * 16) **Done. ' Biggestleo ' (Meeting Room) 02:06, June 19, 2012 (UTC)
 * 17) ***Remember, do not link to something you have all ready linked to in the body in the P&T. I see quite a few there.
 * 18) ****Done.' Biggestleo ' (Meeting Room) 20:11, June 19, 2012 (UTC)
 * 19) *Thats all for now. I think there is enough info to bring this to GAN, as well as Lo Bukk. Good work. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 20:57, June 17, 2012 (UTC)
 * 20) **Do you think the artical needs to be put up on the GAN page now? Or can it stay?
 * 21) ***I'll finish my review here, then archive as a failed CAN and then you can take it to the GAN.
 * 22) * You're refing is off in the main body of the article. We don't use, but.
 * 23) **Done.
 * 24) *I'll look it over once more before I move it to GAN. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 13:46, June 19, 2012 (UTC)
 * 25) * Add that Ni-Cada killed Lare. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 13:57, June 19, 2012 (UTC)
 * 26) **Done.' Biggestleo ' (Meeting Room) 20:11, June 19, 2012 (UTC)
 * 27) * Add quotes for Bio and P&T. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 23:13, June 19, 2012 (UTC)
 * 28) **Done. ' ℬiggestℒeo ' (ℳeeting ℛoom) 20:59, June 20, 2012 (UTC)
 * 29) ***How bout a quote in which Ni-Cada speaks instead?
 * 30) ****Also, don't use the dialogue template as the quotes only two lines. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 21:43, June 20, 2012 (UTC)
 * 31) *****Done. ' ℬiggestℒeo ' (ℳeeting ℛoom) 22:28, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

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