Talk:Empire's Wrath

First significant plot/bio addition + to do
I've written up the first draft here, at least for as far as I am into TOR (Tatooine). It's not bad, but as it is a first draft, it will need both expansion and revision. My immediate thoughts on improvement: -- DigiFluid 16:40, January 5, 2012 (UTC)
 * Needs to be completed. I can only write the story as far as I know it, which is currently Tatooine.
 * Needs to be rechecked for both grammar and flow. I consider myself a pretty proud Grammar Nazi, but things always slip through the cracks and it would be better if someone else was revising as well--call it peer review
 * Needs to be made gender-neutral. I knew this when I was writing, but for both brevity and the sake of trying to write sentences that actually made sense, I have frequently referred to this character as male. This should be addressed sooner rather than later--I have no intention of trying to dictate canon, and would like to see this fixed asap, but I'll need help.