Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Sheeka Tull


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Sheeka Tull

 * Nominated by: Atarumaster88  Jedi_Order.svg ( Talk page ) 03:47, 8 June 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: A natural compliment to Greyman's Alpha-98.

(5 Inqs/2 Users/7 Total/INQCON 5)
Support > JangFett  Talk 17:39, 9 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 1)  Grunny  ( Talk ) 04:02, 8 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 2)  JangFett  Talk 00:55, 9 June 2009 (UTC) > JangFett  Talk 17:39, 9 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) Fett's 2 Cents
 * 2) * The intro seems too long and thoroughly has more detail.
 * 3) * Could use a image in 1.2
 * 4) *<span style="font-variant: small-caps; font-family: Verdana; font-size: 12px"
 * 1) **Intro has been shrunk some; if that's not enough, I'll need some specifics. Not to be rude or anything, I disagree with the image objection&mdash;there are no pictures of Sheeka or Ord Cestus or anything of enough significance to the subject of the article to merit an objection. The Clone Wars, Kenobi, and Fisto don't have enough relationship to the subject, IMO, and it'd be pointless just to add an image of them. Unless you have a specific image in mind, I'm not inclined to toss an image into the article simply for the sake of having more extraneous graphics. Atarumaster88  Jedi_Order.svg ( Talk page ) 15:26, 9 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) ***I do too with the image objection after another look at the article. Intro looks better as well :) <span style="font-variant: small-caps; font-family: Verdana; font-size: 12px"
 * 1) It eludes my mind, but was it clear whether Spindragon was named when Tull received it, or did she name it herself? Reason I'm asking is because the sentence "At some point, she obtained her own ship, a YT-1200 suborbital freighter, Spindragon" is rather choppy. You might want to add "named" in place of that last comma, but it has to be worded with factual correctness.  CC7567  (talk) 22:43, 9 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) *No canonical answer either way. I think I've reworded it vaguely enough so that it could be interpreted as either her naming or it being pre-named. Atarumaster88  Jedi_Order.svg ( Talk page ) 03:23, 10 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) Is her husband's name Vander or Yander? --Eyrezer 09:10, 18 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) *Lol, definitely Yander. I have no idea how that typo slipped in. Atarumaster88  Jedi_Order.svg ( Talk page ) 03:12, 19 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) "As the Jedi were preparing to leave, Tull asked Kenobi if she had done wrong in showing Nate the true nature of humanity. He replied that she had not, and that Jangotat would have thanked her for what she had done. He then told her to be strong, both for her sake and for the sake of Jangotat's child that she was carrying. After the Jedi and clones left, Tull said her own farewell to Jangotat at the cairn they had built for him, and promised that their son would grow up with a name, not a number." That's nice and all, but where is the encyclopedic relevance? This isn't a compendium of feelings. Any way to de-flower this paragraph? --Imperialles 08:08, 13 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 6) *Shrunk it down some, removed some of the worst offenders, I think. Let me know if it makes the sentences too long and I'll rework it some more. Atarumaster88  Jedi_Order.svg ( Talk page ) 19:48, 14 July 2009 (UTC)

Comments
 * Couldn't she stand to be outdone by her sister? :P I claim this as a guest contribution for Project:Atrivis! --Eyrezer 11:52, 9 June 2009 (UTC)
 * Sure, whatever floats your boat. ;-) Atarumaster88  Jedi_Order.svg ( Talk page ) 15:26, 9 June 2009 (UTC)