Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Imperial Hyperspace Security Net


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Imperial Hyperspace Security Net

 * Nominated by: Xicer9 [[Image:atgar.svg|20px]]( Combadge) 04:28, April 4, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: I'm not entirely sure why I started writing this article, but hey, I guess that's how most of my noms have been anyway. 1,207 words.

(5 Inqs/0 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1) --Eyrezer 05:53, April 4, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Hashed out a couple things on IRC. Nice work, Xicer. &mdash;  Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 21:43, April 7, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) Very nice. Very clean. Toprawa and Ralltiir 17:31, April 9, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4)  CC7567  (talk) 18:57, April 9, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) Excellent. Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 19:16, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) First of all, great idea for a FAN. The one thing I wanted to check is this: you say it had expanded to include the Core Worlds by 137 ABY, and then say that "random inspections were performed on ships entering and leaving the Deep Core". Did this not occur in the Core Worlds as well? --Eyrezer 05:37, April 4, 2010 (UTC)
 * Ah, good catch, I didn't notice that. Fixed. And thanks for the review! Xicer9 [[Image:atgar.svg|20px]]( Combadge) 05:42, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

Comments


 * I couldn't really find an appropriate infobox for this, I hope that's alright. If someone else finds one or creates one, I'll be more than happy to incorporate into the article. Xicer9 [[Image:atgar.svg|20px]]( Combadge) 04:28, April 4, 2010 (UTC)
 * I believe Device might work for an infobox, although I'll leave that to your discretion. I highly suggest using it as that particular infobox is pretty all-encompassing. &mdash; Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 16:36, April 7, 2010 (UTC)