Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations

 This page is for the nomination of "comprehensive articles". For a list of "comprehensive articles", see Category:Wookieepedia comprehensive articles.


 * Comprehensive article nominations history
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What is a "comprehensive article?"

A "comprehensive article" is an article that contains all information regarding the topic. Often, "comprehensive articles" cannot reach Featured or Good Article status due to their limited content. This process is intended to recognize articles that contain all relevant canon information, yet are still under the 250 word limit required for a Good Article. The purpose of this is twofold&mdash;firstly, to help users distinguish what is a stub, and what is merely a short article with no further relevant material to be added, and, more importantly, to highlight for the reader when they are reading something that has been judged definitely "comprehensive"&mdash;that is, a guarantee to the reader that whatever they are reading contains the sum total of all available content.

Nominations and promotions of the Comprehensive article process are overseen by a collective of users known as the "EduCorps," which is made up of the Inquisitorius, the AgriCorps, and various other experienced users who are considered qualified to adequately judge the nominated material.

Lucasfilm Ltd. and its many licensees continue to expand the Star Wars universe. Since new information might become available, it may be necessary to revoke a "comprehensive article's" status. A forum will be used to nominate articles that have fallen out-of-date. Members of the EduCorps will then post a warning template on that page, and a grace period of one week will be instituted in which the article can be improved. If there is a significant amount of new information, it is likely that once updated, the article will become eligible for Good article status, and thereby ineligible for Comprehensive article status.

READ THIS FIRST!

An article must&hellip;


 * 1) &hellip;be well-written and detailed.
 * 2) &hellip;be unbiased, non-point of view.
 * 3) &hellip;be sourced with all available sources and appearances.
 * 4) &hellip;follow the Manual of Style, Layout Guide, and all other policies on Wookieepedia. This is, of course, within reason. If a topic only has a very limited degree of content that cannot be divided up into the relevant article sections, it is not required that it follow the Layout Guide precisely. This is to be judged on a case-by-case basis.
 * 5) &hellip;following the review process, be stable, i.e., does not change significantly from day to day and is not the subject of ongoing edit wars. This does not apply to vandalism and protection or semi-protection as a result of vandalism.
 * 6) &hellip;not be tagged with any sort of improvement tags (i.e. more sources, expand, etc).
 * 7) &hellip;have no redlinks.
 * 8) &hellip;have all relevant canon information presented.
 * 9) &hellip;be completely referenced for all available material and sources. See Sourcing for more information. While this is not required for an article possessing a singular source, it is encouraged, as it provides both uniformity and a good infrastructure should the topic be referenced in any future materials.
 * 10) &hellip;have all quotes and images sourced.
 * 11) &hellip;provide at least one relevant quote on the article if available.
 * 12) &hellip;include a "Behind the scenes" section for in-universe articles.
 * 13) &hellip;counting the introduction, the article body, and "Behind the scenes" material, must not exceed 250 words in length (not including captions, quotes, or headers, etc). Any articles exceeding the limit should be taken to the Good article nominations page for consideration.
 * 14) &hellip;if the nominated article reaches 200 words or greater, the nominator must either provide an intro or draft an intro and provide a link to the revision in the nomination, showing that the intro does not elevate the article over 250 words. Exceptions can be made for articles wherein the majority of the text is in the "Behind the scenes" section.

How to nominate:


 * 1) First, nominate an article you find is worthy of comprehensive status, putting it at the bottom of the list below. Nominated articles must meet all thirteen requirements stated above.
 * 2) Add CAnom at the top of the article you are nominating.
 * 3) Be sure to place sign in the "Nominated by" line when the nomination is posted for voting.
 * 4) Others will object to the nomination if they disagree that the article is good enough; they will then supply reasons for doing so, and ways to improve the article in accordance with the established rules.
 * 5) Nominators and supporters will adjust the article until the objectors (with reasonable objections) are satisfied. Objectors may also make alterations&mdash;if there is any reason for contention on a given point, it should be settled in a civil manner in the nomination field itself.
 * 6) Users may not vote on their own articles.
 * 7) There is no limit to the amount of nominations a given user can submit at any given time.

How to vote:


 * 1) Before doing anything, be sure to read the article completely, keeping a sharp eye out for mistakes.
 * 2) Afterward, compare the article to the criteria listed above, and then either support or object the article's nomination.
 * 3) *If you object, please supply concrete reasons for doing so, and how it can be improved.
 * 4) As stated above, any objections will be looked upon by the nominator, supporters, and anyone willing to improve the article, and action will be taken to please the objectors. Do not strike other users' objections; it is up to the objector to review the changes and strike if they are satisfied.
 * 5) There are several ways in which an article can receive the required number of votes. Within a 48-hour period of nomination, only EduCorps votes will count towards the total, although anyone may choose to vote in that window. If two members of the EduCorps support a nomination in that window, and there are no outstanding objections, the article can be considered a "Comprehensive article" and be tagged with the template 48 hours after the initial nomination.  The talk page will also be tagged with the CA template. When the 48 hours are up, any user's votes will contribute towards the total. If one EduCorps member has voted for an article after a week, three regular votes will be required. After the 48 hour period, an article can still also pass with just two EduCorps votes.
 * 6) Once a nomination is successful, it will be placed on the Comprehensive article list. Instructions on how to archive nominations, successful or otherwise, can be found here. Anyone can archive a nomination&mdash;just make sure it has the correct number of votes, has been nominated for at least a week (or 48 hours if there are two EC votes), and that there are absolutely no outstanding objections. If you are not sure how to do this, just ask, and someone will likely be more than willing to help you. Also, if you think you can slip one past us, think again&mdash;someone is always watching you.

All nominations will be considered idle and are subject to instantaneous removal by EduCorps members if objections are not addressed, or at least not answered, after a period of 1 week.

Please remember to archive your nomination beforehand if you plan on taking it to the Good Article Nominations page.

Brovto

 * Nominated by: — Cade  Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 22:28, April 8, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: One of several TOR vendors on Tatooine that I wrote up quickly.

(2 ECs/1 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 23:26, April 26, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) Assuming Menkooroo and Graestan are satisfied. Hanzo Hasashi 14:47, May 4, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  01:48, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) A more specific date for the events of the game is available. See the article for the game. graestan ( talk ) 23:05, April 8, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) *Done.
 * 3) Savaged&hellip;
 * 4) * For these kinds of articles, there should be quotes, even if just the generic "Best post exchange around" kind of thing. They're still canonical sayings by these folks. Can you add quotes? ~ Savage BOB sig.png 01:14, April 9, 2012 (UTC)
 * 5) **Added "Come back any time" - I don't know if he says anything else. — Cade  Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 17:36, April 9, 2012 (UTC)
 * 6) * Also, don't forget to describe appearance in the main body: hair color, eye color, skin color, any distinguishing features like scars, and clothing. Languages too, especially for the aliens, since they tend not to speak Basic but can presumably understand it since the player characters all speak it. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 01:17, April 9, 2012 (UTC)
 * 7) **Done. Did you ever get those pants? :) — Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 17:36, April 9, 2012 (UTC)
 * 8) *** Haven't been able to play due to school, so still pants-less! And you need to add hair, then I'll support! ~ Savage BOB sig.png 18:25, April 26, 2012 (UTC)
 * 9) ****Done. Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 20:31, April 26, 2012 (UTC)
 * 10) Mechanics
 * 11) * Like most KOTOR NPCs, I believe that this guy's biography should include a section about him interacting with the player character that's enclosed by the and  templates. Menkooroo 04:13, May 2, 2012 (UTC)
 * 12) **If he wasn't a vendor, I'd agree with you. However, he serves no actual purpose in any characters' storylines other than supplying the players with items. Plus, I can't find any KOTOR vendor that has the game mechnanics template (or any KOTOR vendor, for that matter.) Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 13:51, May 2, 2012 (UTC)
 * 13) ***After thinking about it, I agree with you. Gamemechanics doesn't seem like it would apply to "At some point the Hero of Tython visited his store," unless one of the items he sold were required for game completion. Menkooroo 00:56, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Comments
 * Are the specific titles such as Mods Vendor or Cantina Vendor referring to classes of NPC? Are they listed as such in the game? I need more information before I review further. graestan ( talk ) 23:05, April 8, 2012 (UTC)
 * Vendor is the NPC "class" (ie. lvl. 20 Vendor), while Mods Vendor or Heavy Armor Vendor is the type of NPC.  It appears underneath the character's name when selected. — Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 17:36, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Nif Sarjun

 * Nominated by: — Cade  Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 22:28, April 8, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

(0 ECs/2 Users/2 Total)
Support Object
 * 1) Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 17:27, May 2, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) Gal-icon.jpg  OLIOSTER  (talk) 16:44, May 3, 2012 (UTC)
 * 1) Olioster
 * 2) * Mention physical attributes in the body. Any quotes? Gal-icon.jpg  OLIOSTER  (talk) 01:48, April 10, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) **Done. — Cade  Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 03:47, April 11, 2012 (UTC)
 * 4) *** Oh, and no... He's one of the few mute vendors in the game. He won't even look at you, for heaven's sake&mdash;he must really like working. :P. — Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 03:58, April 11, 2012 (UTC)
 * 5) ****Actually, thanks to Savage, he speaks Nautila and has a quote. Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 16:47, May 3, 2012 (UTC)
 * 6) Savaged&hellip;
 * 7) *What language does he speak? Most of the Nautolan vendors I've spoken to speak some generic alien language. If he's one of them, you should not that he spoke a language that wasn't Basic, and you should use "quotetrans" instead of "quote" for his main quote. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 18:27, April 26, 2012 (UTC)
 * 8) **Basic, I believe. Changed. Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 16:13, April 30, 2012 (UTC)
 * 9) ***Are you sure? I can't recall any vendor in the game saying, "Hello, my friend," in Basic. I can check tonight when I log in to the game if you don't beat me to it. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 14:13, May 2, 2012 (UTC)
 * 10) **** Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg *bows to Bob's superior knowledge of TOR audio, since he plays with TOR with the computer muted* 16:49, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

Cheroth

 * Nominated by: — Cade  Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 22:28, April 8, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

(0 ECs/2 Users/2 Total)
Support Object
 * 1)  501st Dogma Republic_emblem.png( Comlink ) 15:01, April 14, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) Gal-icon.jpg  OLIOSTER  (talk) 16:43, May 3, 2012 (UTC)
 * 1) Olioster
 * 2) * Any quotes? Additionally, mention her physical appearance. Gal-icon.jpg  OLIOSTER  (talk) 01:46, April 10, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) **Physical appearance, check. Quotes, later tonight. — Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 18:42, April 13, 2012 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Done. Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 13:18, April 24, 2012 (UTC)
 * 5) Savaged&hellip;
 * 6) * The fact that olive skin and tattoos are common among Mirialans needs to be sourced to something other than the game, unless that's in the codex?
 * 7) **Took me a while, but Culator gave me a CSWE reference.
 * 8) * Can you say something of how she dressed and her hair style? ~ Savage BOB sig.png 23:30, April 26, 2012 (UTC)
 * 9) **Done. Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 16:11, April 30, 2012 (UTC)
 * 10) *One last thing: The Anchorhead cantina should have a name in the game. Can you specify the name and stub an article if need be? ~ Savage BOB sig.png 14:08, May 2, 2012 (UTC)
 * 11) **Apparently, it's the same Anchorhead Cantina as in KOTOR. They're named the same. Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 14:58, May 4, 2012 (UTC)
 * 12) There must be some kind of way out of here, said the joker to the thief
 * 13) *Okay, two things.
 * 14) *Homeworld=Tatooine, or just an inhabitant?
 * 15) **Inhabitant.
 * 16) *The last bio sentence still needs sourced. I presume the sentence goes to TOR and not CSWE. Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 17:35, May 2, 2012 (UTC)
 * 17) **Done Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 14:58, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

CorusMall

 * Nominated by: Alexrd 13:04, April 10, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

(0 ECs/1 Users/1 Total)
Support
 * 1) Ready for some shopping at the mall? Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 22:06, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) The Premier
 * 2) A few prelims:
 * 3) The second listing of the video game under the Sources section is not necessary and can be removed.
 * 4) Please add the date of the game to the BTS.
 * 5) Since the article is not sectioned, you can add  to hide the table of contents.
 * 6) Please spell out in the BTS that the mission completely contradicts the movie, since we see the Queen leave directly from the landing pad and goes to the Senate, instead of being captured. And you might need the "twoconflicting" tag.
 * 7) That's it for the moment. Hope to see more from you, Alexrd. Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 13:38, April 10, 2012 (UTC)
 * Suggested changes made. Alexrd 14:08, April 10, 2012 (UTC)
 * 1) Okay, you need to replace the infobox with the new version.
 * 2) *All you need to do is load a new structure infobox from the standard preload box, which is below the edit screen, and then just copy/paste (carefully) the info to the new one. Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 15:18, April 11, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) The use of "this" in the second sentence implies an OOU viewpoint we try to avoid. Could you replace it with "the" or another word.
 * 4) Weren't the mercenaries identified as being part of the Sun Guard? If so, please add context.
 * 5) Context on chokie (that is, food and not a collectible). Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 16:13, April 10, 2012 (UTC)
 * 6) *I'm just suggesting that you specify its a food item. Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 15:18, April 11, 2012 (UTC)
 * 7) Also, context for High Galactic Alphabet in the BTS.
 * 8) *I placed this objection so the reader could understand why it is important the High Galactic Alphabet is used and not Aurebesh. If you feel the difference is not important, then the sentence can just be removed.
 * 9) Looks like I spoke too soon. Once these objections are taken care of, the article will be over 200 words and will need sectioned per the layout guide: intro, description, and history. If it goes over 250 words, it can be taken to the GAN page instead.
 * 10) Thus ends round 2. Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 16:13, April 10, 2012 (UTC)
 * 11) * Points 2 and 3 done, and fixed some links. However, I'm not sure what context is needed for chokie (the article doesn't imply that it's a collectible) and High Galactic Alphabet. And I'm not familiar with a new version of the infobox. Could you help me out? Alexrd 10:31, April 11, 2012 (UTC)
 * 12) **See above for my tips. Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 15:18, April 11, 2012 (UTC)
 * 13) *All done. I think I haven't missed anything. Thanks for the help. Alexrd 18:02, April 11, 2012 (UTC)
 * 14) Very good job, and its still under 250! One more thing though, per the LG, thinks must be linked in both the intro and the body. After you sectioned off the article, Coruscant and Roona are no longer linked in the body. Please find a place for those links in the body. Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 19:41, April 11, 2012 (UTC)
 * Done. Alexrd 21:57, April 11, 2012 (UTC)


 * 1) The deputy premier
 * 2) *What's important to remember about intros is that they aren't a prologue to the rest of the article --- they're an abstract of the article, and everything established in the intro needs to be established in the article as well. Currently, the "History" section reads as if it's building on what's been said in the intro. It mentions "the Roonans," which is confusing without the context that CorusMall is run by Roonan Traders, and it doesn't state that Corusmall is a trade center. Those facts are in the intro, but they need to be established in the article body as well.
 * 3) *An important thing to remember about image captions: Only use punctuation at the end if it's a complete sentence. Normally, this would fall under what we call the clause, but I'll leave it to you so that you always remember in the future. :)
 * 4) *Does this actually contradict the movie? For all we know, a million different things could have happened in between the scenes that we see. This kinda seems more like an Expanded Universe tale of something happening offscreen during the movie rather than a contradiction, similar to books like Tales from Jabba's Palace. Does that make sense? Menkooroo 01:07, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Comments
 * 1) Not an objection, but is it worth it creating articles for any of the Roonan traders? Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 16:13, April 10, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) * I don't think so, for now. In my opinion they are not relevant enough to the events of the game. Alexrd 10:31, April 11, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) **Just a thought; it's true that they're not relevant to the game but if they have quotes and are unique individuals, it's extra "flavor," as I like to say. Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 15:18, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

7-Gee Lounge

 * Nominated by: Alexrd 10:31, April 17, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

(0 ECs/0 Users/0 Total)
Support

Object
 * 1) Return of the Jedi
 * 2) * Just at a glance, it needs to be properly sourced. Also, you should place the CAnom template on the article. &mdash; Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:16, April 17, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) **Thanks, somehow I forgot. Done. Alexrd 22:33, April 17, 2012 (UTC)


 * 1) 501st
 * 2) * Please remember to also source the info box.
 * 3) **PLease note that next time you need to source the era too.
 * 4) * In Description, mention is a cantina on Tatooine before getting to the bartender.
 * 5) *" The 7-Gee Lounge was also a favourite drinking spot of Teemto Pagalies." Should'nt really be in the Description section. Move it to history.
 * 6) *Good Work. 501st Dogma Republic_emblem.png( Comlink ) 22:51, April 17, 2012 (UTC)
 * 7) ** Thanks and done. Alexrd 23:58, April 17, 2012 (UTC)
 * 8) All along the watchtower
 * 9) *The article needs a tad more context: Who are Watto and Teemto, for example, junk dealer and podracer.
 * 10) *Also, links are missing in the main body: Tatooine and Grand Arena.
 * 11) *This isn't an objection, but for the Appearance section, just note that I used a pipelink to remove the parentheses from the video game.
 * 12) *Keep up the great work. Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 17:41, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

Unidentified Jedi Initiate 1

 * Nominated by: DjMack 05:46, April 18, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: I need to get out more.

(0 ECs/0 Users/0 Total)
Support

Object
 * 1) I checked the (archived) episode guide for Grievious Intrigue, and the younglings have a slight mention, so it will need to be added to the source list. Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 13:47, April 18, 2012 (UTC)


 * 1) 501st
 * 2) *Please add the skin color and the eye color into the main text.
 * 3) *Context for Coruscant.
 * 4) *Main text needs to have information from Lightsaber lost. I believe Ahsoka talked to them at the end of the episode. 501st Dogma Republic_emblem.png( Comlink ) 22:08, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

Comments
 * This nomination has objections over one week old. Just thought I give you a notification before someone archived it.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  18:34, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

Frex Junara

 * Nominated by:  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  13:25, April 20, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: He likes blowing stuff up!

(0 ECs/3 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1)  501st Dogma Republic_emblem.png( Comlink ) 12:14, April 22, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) "What do you do for a living?-Oh nothing, just blow stuff up." Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 16:41, April 24, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) Good quick read. Hanzo Hasashi 14:39, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Per the LG, it needs "1stm" for sources.
 * 2) *Fixed.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  04:21, April 24, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) Great job. Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 03:18, April 24, 2012 (UTC)
 * 4) *Thank you.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  04:21, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Comments
 * 1) No indication of what craft he was a bombadier in? Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 03:18, April 24, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) *No the text does not elaborate and all we can see is the inside of the cockpit behind him. The uniform he is wearing doesn't look like a TIE pilot's.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  04:21, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Unidentified Rebel sergeant (Zarra)

 * Nominated by:  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  15:32, April 20, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Another rebel sergeant!

(0 ECs/2 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1)  501st Dogma Republic_emblem.png( Comlink ) 12:13, April 22, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 16:42, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) There must be some kind of way out here
 * 2) Two points to contend: a)The source definitively indicates that it takes place post-Yavin, right?
 * 3) *After a careful look I have found that the cards in the set were not all necessarily before the Battle of Yavin. For example there was one card of Princess Leia with a hologram of the Death Star. Some of the cards are after the Battle of Yavin, but not necessarily all of them, removed Battle of Yavin from all three articles. They are all definitely from the Galactic Civil War however.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  04:19, April 24, 2012 (UTC)
 * 4) and b)Per the LG, sources get "1stm" instead of "1st"
 * 5) *I think something in my mind says picture = appearance, fixed.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  04:19, April 24, 2012 (UTC)
 * 6) I switched the cat to that of enlisted personnel, but if that doesn't work go ahead and change it. Looks really good otherwise! Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 03:15, April 24, 2012 (UTC)
 * 7) *I was waffling back and forth between the two, that's fine with me. Thanks for the review!-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  04:19, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

Nafjan T'dell

 * Nominated by:  IFYLOFD  ( Floyd's crib ) 01:41, April 23, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: FloydProject: Lost Tribe moves to the CAN.

(1 ECs/2 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) Good, but the last sentence is very similiar to the one in his wife's article.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 10:06, April 23, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) The ebooks might as well be called Star Wars: Gilligan's Planet. Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 16:44, April 24, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  01:52, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Princes kept the view
 * 2) Well, maybe this is just me nitpicking but bear with me:
 * 3) He's categorized as a Sith but not wholly identified as as Sith in the bio, just that he served on a Sith starship. Is that enough to classify him as one?
 * 4) *Well, there's no other real category for him.
 * 5) Please remove the table of contents.
 * 6) *Done.
 * 7) Looks really good. Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 03:03, April 24, 2012 (UTC)
 * 8) *Thanks for the review.  IFYLOFD  ( Floyd's crib ) 03:08, April 24, 2012 (UTC)
 * 9) Exiled Jedi
 * 10) * "Omen crewmembers were brought to civilization where they took their place as rulers of the world" I'm a little confused here, how were they brought to civilization?
 * 11) **I didn't want to go too far off topic, so it's been changed to "made their way to civilization".
 * 12) * Could you vary the wording somewhat from the Kanika T'dell article? -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  19:04, May 1, 2012 (UTC)
 * 13) **Done.  IFYLOFD  ( Floyd's crib ) 23:44, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Comments
 * 1) Again, just nitpicking, but the last sentence implies that Ebya would be allowed to produce right away. Maybe add "eventually" somewhere in the sentence? Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 03:03, April 24, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) *Added.  IFYLOFD  ( Floyd's crib ) 03:08, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Kanika T'dell

 * Nominated by:  IFYLOFD  ( Floyd's crib ) 02:29, April 23, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: FloydProject: Lost Tribe. Completing the T'dell family.

(1 ECs/2 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) See above.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 10:09, April 23, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) She settled for a miner? Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 00:08, April 27, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  01:54, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Princes kept the view
 * 2) Please remove the TOC.
 * 3) *Done.
 * 4) Again, is Sith the right cat for her?
 * 5) *See my above response on Nafjan.
 * 6) Great work. Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 03:05, April 24, 2012 (UTC)
 * 7) *Thanks for the review.  IFYLOFD  ( Floyd's crib ) 23:58, April 26, 2012 (UTC)
 * 8) Exiled Jedi
 * 9) * Could you explain how they were brought to civilization?
 * 10) **See above.
 * 11) * Please vary the wording somewhat from the other article. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  19:06, May 1, 2012 (UTC)
 * 12) **Done.  IFYLOFD  ( Floyd's crib ) 23:44, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

Piar Nagelsa

 * Nominated by: Pentastar patrol.svg 501st  dogma ( talk ) 23:52, April 27, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) "Droids are superior to organics in every way!" Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 13:23, April 28, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  01:55, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

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 * 1) Just one. If the infobox is sourced, then it is essential to source the body as well. Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 00:24, April 28, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) *Sorry about that, I was thinking of it as the intro for some reason. Pentastar patrol.svg 501st  dogma ( talk ) 11:31, April 28, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) Exiled Jedi
 * 4) * Please change the death field of the infobox to say that he died sometime during 22 BBY to 19 BBY. Otherwise it looks like he took a long time to die.
 * 5) **Done.
 * 6) Any indication why the droid killed him? -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  18:59, May 1, 2012 (UTC)
 * 7) **Indicationified. Thanks for reviewing. Pentastar patrol.svg 501st  dogma ( talk ) 22:46, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

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First Battle of Plagen

 * Nominated by: Pentastar patrol.svg 501st  dogma ( talk ) 00:04, April 28, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

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 * 1)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  01:57, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

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 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * I do not think that you should put unknown for the commander or casualty fields. If something is not stated then just leave it blank. The only exception I would see is if they were unknown in-universe.
 * 3) **Done.
 * 4) * The way you have the date in the infobox it makes it look like the battle lasted from 22 BBY to 19 BBY. Perhaps you could say something like "Sometime between 22 BBY and 19 BBY"
 * 5) **Done.
 * 6) * You need to mention the 19 BBY date in the body of the article.
 * 7) **Done.
 * 8) * You make it sound like the tactical droid was a Confederate general. I am assuming you meant to say that he was a fellow Confederate. Could you make this clearer?
 * 9) **And done.
 * 10) * Any indication on why the droid killed the guy? -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  18:56, May 1, 2012 (UTC)
 * 11) **Fixed and thanks for the review. Pentastar patrol.svg 501st  dogma ( talk ) 22:42, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

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Reedox-stew

 * Nominated by:  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:33, May 1, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: I'm not sure if I'd want to eat this stuff.

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 * 1) ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 14:34, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

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Womat

 * Nominated by:  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:53, May 1, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: A quiet one-mention creature.

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 * 1) ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 14:30, May 2, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 19:06, May 2, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) 501st  dogma ( talk ) 00:01, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

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 * 1) Is it referred to in dialogue in the novel? Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 17:38, May 2, 2012 (UTC)
 * No, it's just in the text.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  18:29, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

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Chall Bekan

 * Nominated by: Hanzo Hasashi 03:40, May 3, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Methane reminds me of my organic chemistry class I just finished.

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 * 1)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 00:00, May 6, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) Heh, I know what you mean.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  02:00, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

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