Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Agamar


 * ''The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a featured article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.

(5 Inqs/2 Users/7 Total)
Support
 * 1) Most folk'll never lose a toe, but then again some folk'll, like Keyan the slack-jawed yokel. Green Tentacle (Talk) 16:13, 24 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) Most folk'll never eat a skunk, but then again some folk'll&hellip;  Graestan ( Talk ) 18:08, 24 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) I've always like reviewing planet articles.  Greyman  http://images.wikia.com/central/images/9/9c/Jan.png ( Talk ) 21:14, 24 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) This article about stuff from the X-wing games is really educational, since I've never played them.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 22:39, 24 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) Very well-written. Excellent. Toprawa and Ralltiir 01:25, 25 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 6) Some folk'll never blow up Death Stars, but then again some some folk'll, like Wormie, the farmboy yokel.  Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 22:03, 27 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 7) Cull Tremayne 22:15, 1 April 2008 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Image objections:
 * Image:Binka.jpg&mdash;Blurry.
 * 1) **De-blurrified. Green Tentacle (Talk) 01:09, 25 March 2008 (UTC)
 * Image:Agamar.jpg&mdash;Distorted.
 * Image:Agamar2.jpg&mdash;Distorted.
 * --Imperialles 22:12, 24 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 1) Toprawa:
 * 2) * Please reword "governed by Governor," which is a bit redundant. I might recommend "led by Governor": "was governed by Governor Challep"
 * 3) **Fixed. Green Tentacle (Talk) 01:06, 25 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) * This clause is a tad confusing. It seems to imply that all mercenaries in general spent time in Agamar's service, but I think you mean to refer to just those in Agamar's service. If so, please clarify: "and most mercenaries at the time spent a few months in Agamar's service"
 * 5) **That's what the source says. Guess they got through a lot of mercenaries for some reason. :P Green Tentacle (Talk) 01:06, 25 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 6) * Assuming this information exists, please add a little bit here to explain who Shogar Tok is and why reinforcing him/her was significant: "Separatist armies were still fighting in the Mirgoshir system and unable to reinforce Shogar Tok on Brentaal IV"
 * 7) **Fixed. Green Tentacle (Talk) 01:06, 25 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 8) * Please fix incomplete sentence: "Where pillars and archways divided the corridor into segments, holographic art depicting Agamarian history and culture."
 * 9) **Fixed. Green Tentacle (Talk) 01:06, 25 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 10) * Minor: unless this is organized in this way for a reason I am unaware, the infobox "Points of interest" should probably be listed in alphabetical order. Toprawa and Ralltiir 00:51, 25 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 11) **Fixed. Green Tentacle (Talk) 01:06, 25 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 12) From the desk of Atarumaster88
 * 13) * The Clone Wars segment (and this may be a flaw with the source) says that Agamar was attacked by Dooku while it was under his control. That's vaguely stupid of him, or the timeline is messed up.
 * 14) **The timeline is messed up. You could theorize that the Republic retook it before he attacked, but that would be purely original research. Green Tentacle (Talk) 20:56, 27 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 15) * Who is Danni Quee? Context please.
 * 16) **Contexted. Green Tentacle (Talk) 20:56, 27 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 17) * Link to appropriate battles of Yuuzhan Vong War.
 * 18) **Which ones did I miss? Green Tentacle (Talk) 20:56, 27 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 19) * "This stereotype cast them as poor yokels". Who is "them"? Context please.
 * 20) **Better? Green Tentacle (Talk) 20:56, 27 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 21) * 'Due to the Center's close proximity to the sea, it had a clear influence on the architecture." unclear antecedent.
 * 22) **Fixed. I think. Green Tentacle (Talk) 20:56, 27 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 23) *Have a Super Terrific Friendly Un-frustrating day. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 20:38, 27 March 2008 (UTC)

Comments '''Approved by Inquisitorius 23:17, 1 April 2008 (UTC)
 * How do I follow a line like GT's in my vote? Graestan ( Talk ) 16:30, 24 March 2008 (UTC)