Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Lensi


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Lensi

 * Nominated by: -- —Harrar  ( Cut the comm chatter ) 12:01, 17 August 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: A far less complicated nom than Alema; Lensi was a Rogue Squadron pilot and one of the few Rogue Leaders who it's possible to FA without multitudinous resources. The bio's actually made more interesting by what may have been a CSWE error.

(5 Inqs/1 Users/6 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  23:47, September 10, 2009 (UTC)
 * 2)  CC7567  (talk) 18:09, September 13, 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) I've been meaning to do this for a while. Sorry I kept forgetting. &mdash;  Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 23:56, November 20, 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) Jedi Kasra (comlink) 19:03, December 2, 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) Good work, though I would like to see those redlinks killed.  IFYLOFD  ( You will pay the price for your lack of vision! ) 01:57, December 20, 2009 (UTC)
 * 6) Green Tentacle (Talk) 13:41, December 22, 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) A shot of marinara:
 * 2) * No dates for Anni in the succession box? For the record, do not put "unknown" in there, either. Just leave it blank. (I took care of this last thing since I was in there.)
 * 3) **25 ABY, sorry about that. Thanks for checking it out! -- —Harrar  ( Cut the comm chatter ) 18:06, 19 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) ***No problem. I will try to get to the rest of it sometime shortly. &mdash; Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 16:47, 21 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) *&mdash; Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 15:09, 19 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 6) Attack of the Clone
 * 7) * By "second mission" in the intro, I'm assuming that you mean the Third Battle of Duro; however, please clarify. (As in here on the FAN page, but if you feel the need to reword the intro, please do so; it wasn't immediately clear to me when I read it.)
 * 8) **It does refer to the Third Battle of Duro, but I can see how it might be misleading. Tell you what, if another reviewer has the same issue, I'll re-word it.
 * 9) ***That sounds fine.  CC7567  (talk) 18:09, September 13, 2009 (UTC)
 * 10) * Can you clarify what "One Flight" is, as well as "Three Flight"? If I'm understanding the context correctly, they appear to warrant articles.
 * 11) * "The experience of fighting under false pretenses stayed with Lensi, and was relieved in 29 ABY following the Third Battle of Duro." Please check your word choice of "relieved"; I've read it over and over, but the sentence flow isn't smooth here and I can't tell what "relieved" refers to.
 * 12) **It's a typo! Meant to be "relived". Sorry bout that.
 * 13) * Please change around one of the "although"s in the P&T.
 * 14) **Done.
 * 15) *For the first time, I'm actually kind of familiar with a Legacy article's storyline, as I've recently read through the NEC. The article's detail makes it even more of an interesting read.  CC7567  (talk) 06:59, September 13, 2009 (UTC)
 * 16) **Thanks for the review CC, I'm glad you were interested by it! -- —Harrar  ( Cut the comm chatter ) 14:56, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

Comments


 * Pictures are sadly stuff that relate to Lensi&hellip;succession boxes (which suck), list him as Rogue Leader in 40 ABY, which to the best of my knowledge is when Fury is placed in the timeline. -- —Harrar  ( Cut the comm chatter ) 12:01, 17 August 2009 (UTC)
 * I will be on vacation for two weeks as of the 29th August; I am happy to respond to a plethora of objections on my return. -- —Harrar  ( Cut the comm chatter ) 23:56, 28 August 2009 (UTC)