Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Virar Needa


 * ''The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.

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Support
 * 1) --  AdmirableAckbar  [Talk] 19:08, 5 December 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Jedimca0(Do or Do Not, There is No Try) 13:51, 9 December 2007 (UTC)
 * 3)  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  19:42, 12 December 2007 (UTC)
 * Darth Culator (Talk) 02:22, 13 December 2007 (UTC)
 * 1) I enjoyed reading this. Still makes me laugh. Toprawa and Ralltiir 18:35, 13 December 2007 (UTC)

Oppose
 * Isn't it frowned upon to say "His ultimate fate is unknown?" -LtNOWIS 20:54, 7 December 2007 (UTC)
 * Addressed. --  AdmirableAckbar  [Talk] 22:31, 7 December 2007 (UTC)

Comments
 * Bulk of the article written by Darth Culator some time ago; I expanded and sourced. --  AdmirableAckbar  [Talk] 19:08, 5 December 2007 (UTC)
 * I get 993 words counting intro and BTS but excluding quotes, refs, and headings. Think you can squeeze another paragraph out of him? :-P -- Darth Culator  (Talk) 02:22, 13 December 2007 (UTC)
 * Yes. I'll see what I can do :) -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 08:49, 13 December 2007 (UTC)
 * I think it is over one thousand words long now. I'll wait 'till it's a GA before nomming it. Or someone else could nominate it then, since I will be on the other side of the world. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 18:19, 13 December 2007 (UTC)
 * Made a few minor additions/cleaned up some thing, wookified some things. I broke up your first sentence in the biography into two sentences for greater readability. Two things I would "recommend": were the Accuser and Adjudicator "salvaged" at Endor, or were they captured? I might reword that. Also, you might capitalize "cadet" Pedetsen near the end of the article to stay uniform with its capitalization in the opening quote. I liked your sabacc metaphor. Good stuff. Toprawa and Ralltiir 18:35, 13 December 2007 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the cleanup. Changed to captured; capatalised. Credit goes to Culator for the sabacc metaphor. :) Thanks, -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 18:40, 13 December 2007 (UTC)