Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Battle of Foerost (Great Sith War) (second nomination)


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Battle of Foerost (Great Sith War)

 * Nominated by: —Tommy 9281 Mechnochair negwt.jpg ( Mechno-chair ) 05:46, February 9, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: A current GA that I brought to 1,079 words, thanks to new information from the latest issue of KOTOR.

(5 Inqs/2 Users/7 Total)
Support
 * 1) Good job as usual, Tommy. Gotta love KotOR.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 16:36, February 11, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) LtNOWIS 22:25, March 22, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3)  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  00:50, March 24, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) Well done.  Jonjedigrandmaster  Jedi symbol.svg ( We seed the stars ) 01:09, March 24, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5)  CC7567  (talk) 22:42, March 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * 6) &mdash;  Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 15:39, April 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * 7)  Grunny  ( talk ) 06:08, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) LtNOWIS
 * 2) *Just a few word choice issues.
 * 3) * For hundreds of years, the facility had churned out warships – "churned out" could probably be replaced by "produced" or something to be more encyclopedic.
 * 4) **Addressed.
 * 5) * The shipyards were quickly overrun, due largely to the savagery of the Mandalorians. – this seems to be in violation of NPOV
 * 6) **Try that.
 * 7) * The Krath forces then pulled out, abandoning the ravaged shipyards. – "ravaged" as well is a POV term.
 * 8) **Addressed.
 * 9) *Other than that, it looks good. -LtNOWIS 03:40, March 19, 2010 (UTC)
 * 10) **Thanks for the review, LtNOWIS. Please advise if anything further is required. —Tommy 9281 05:26, March 22, 2010 (UTC)

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