Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Zeison Sha


 * ''The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a featured article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.

(5 Inqs/1 Users/6 total)
Support
 * 1)  Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 16:01, 1 December 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Gets my vote. Master Aban Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 19:00, 1 December 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) Thefourdotelipsis 01:01, 2 December 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) That thing looks like it would hurt. &mdash;Graestan ( This party's over ) 04:50, 2 December 2007 (UTC)
 * 5)  Greyman ( Paratus ) 14:09, 3 December 2007 (UTC)
 * 6) --  Darth Culator  (Talk) 02:01, 7 December 2007 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) From the fjord of Imperialles:
 * 2) * The infobox needs to be sourced.
 * 3) **Sourced.  Master Aban Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 19:00, 1 December 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) * The "History" section contains several one- or two-sentence paragraphs. Either merge these with existing paragraphs, or expand them enough to warrant separate paragraphs. This is an article, not a chronological list of facts.
 * 5) * The above phenomenon appears in the "Philosophy" and "Common abilities" sections as well.
 * --Imperialles 16:39, 1 December 2007 (UTC)
 * 1) *Addressed, as much as possible. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 19:14, 1 December 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) From the squalid cubicle of Graestan:
 * 3) * Link more thoroughly, please. Once per article or once in intro/once in main body, and I noticed a few missing links.
 * 4) **Relinked.  Master Aban Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 19:00, 1 December 2007 (UTC)
 * 5) * The last sentence of "History" is somewhat ponderous.
 * 6) **Addressed. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 19:14, 1 December 2007 (UTC)
 * 7) * "Their use of the Force was built around its use for defense" is a bit awkward.
 * 8) **Fixed.  Master Aban Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 19:00, 1 December 2007 (UTC)
 * 9) * &mdash;Graestan ( This party's over ) 16:46, 1 December 2007 (UTC)

Comments

'''Approved by Inquisitorius 22:44, 8 December 2007 (UTC)
 * This is over 1,100 words for those wondering. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 16:01, 1 December 2007 (UTC)