Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Second Duel in the Iron Citadel


 * ''The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.

(+5)
Support
 * 1) Only because it's not one thousand words. —Tommy ( There are no Jedi here ) 23:07, 20 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) I see no reason to object to this.  Darth Xadún ( Consult the Holocron ) 12:00, 22 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) After a small cleanup.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 00:00, 25 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) Good job. Toprawa and Ralltiir 22:21, 29 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) Nice.-- Goodwood [[Image:Redstarbird.svg|20px]] ( Alliance Intelligence ) 18:50, 2 June 2008 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) Toprawa:
 * 2) * You can't find some kind of lead quote?
 * 3) **Heh. No really good ones, but I'll look when I get home. Hold tight! It's there now, addressed.
 * 4) * Need to explain here how he became their prisoner: "with their current prisoner, the Jedi Knight Ulic Qel-Droma"
 * 5) **Addressed.
 * 6) * I'm thinking its extrapolation to say he really descended to Hell. Does the source say this exactly? "Nadd's spirit then departed to Chaos"
 * 7) **Addressed.
 * 8) * Please briefly explain what the purpose of this extraction mission was: "Shortly after the failed Jedi extraction attempt led by Nomi Sunrider"
 * 9) **Addressed.
 * 10) * Greater context is needed in that paragraph to explain how Qel-Droma was in league with Keto.
 * 11) **Addressed.
 * 12) * Greater context needed here for how he acquired this. Don't rely on your intro to tell your story for you. There is information restrictive to the intro regarding these amulets that should be explained in the body: "When his newly acquired amulet"
 * 13) **Addressed.
 * 14) * Kun is a Jedi? I don't think that's so: "the Sith amulets that the two Jedi"
 * 15) **Addressed.
 * 16) * Same: "Ragnos sensed that both Jedi" Toprawa and Ralltiir 02:21, 28 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 17) **Addressed.

Comments
 * You still need to be careful of overlinking, Tommy. Get tough. Toprawa and Ralltiir 02:21, 28 May 2008 (UTC)
 * I know. It's hard to catch after-the-fact, but I'm trying. Thank you for looking. If anything else is required, please advise. —Tommy ( There are no Jedi here ) 19:38, 28 May 2008 (UTC)