Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Attack on the Circumtore system


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Attack on the Circumtore system

 * Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:55, April 26, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Another bright yellow dot

(3 ECs/0 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  19:18, April 28, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 23:02, April 29, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) Winterz (talk) 22:16, May 9, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * Shouldn't you take care of the merge and decide which name to have the article at?
 * 3) **Merge is sorted thanks to Cade. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:37, April 28, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) * You use variants of travel in two consecutive sentences. Could you use a synonym for one of them?
 * 5) **Changed the second travelled to advanced. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:37, April 28, 2013 (UTC)
 * 6) * "No information is given about the outcome of the attack although a separate map shows Hollastin was under Vong control by 27 ABY." Don't you mean to say that Circumtore was under Vong control? -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  23:37, April 27, 2013 (UTC)
 * 7) **Ah whoops indeed I do. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:37, April 28, 2013 (UTC)
 * 8) 501st
 * 9) * Same objection about blurriness as above. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 13:11, April 29, 2013 (UTC)
 * 10) **Shrunk to 150px Ayrehead02 (talk) 22:58, April 29, 2013 (UTC)

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