Wookieepedia:Inq/Ferus Olin

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Things to do

 * Sourcing.
 * Sectioning.
 * Has improvement tag.
 * POV.
 * Prose issues.
 * Flowery prose.
 * Play-by-play.
 * Reunion section is poorly written. (e.g. "Padawan vs. Sith wannabe")
 * Mission to Naboo is poorly written.
 * Resolve Return to the Jedi Order section overall.
 * Personality and Traits section.
 * I'll just quote 4dot here: "'Though he had previously felt Malorum's force sensitivity, Ferus never expected the dark-sider to unveil his crimson bladed lightsaber!' Do we need any other reason?"

Removal of FA status

 * FA status removed per IRC meeting.