Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Vicon


 * ''The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a comprehensive article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.

Vicon

 * Nominated by: Eyrezer 08:33, July 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Almost at the end of the Alphabet!

(1 ECs/3 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 06:20, July 31, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 01:41, August 10, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) Menkooroo 06:36, August 13, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) ~ SavageBob 22:51, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Object

Comments
 * 1) "They had long noses which they twitched" does not sound very wiki-like. Though it would still be fine without any changes, I believe it would benefit from a change of wording in that sentence (though I could be wrong).-- Bonslywizard  ( I am the senate! )Trade Federation Symbol.jpg 02:42, August 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) *I added a comma before the "which", but I am not sure otherwise what is wrong with the sentence. I'm open to suggestions for rewording though. --Eyrezer 23:32, August 9, 2010 (UTC)