Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Second Battle of Empress Teta


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 * 1) Nominated. Greyman ( Talk ) 18:11, 12 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) Graestan ( Talk ) 02:33, 13 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) Jedimca0(Do or Do Not, There is No Try) 22:45, 14 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) Toprawa and Ralltiir 16:49, 15 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) Proudly supporting TOTJ since 2007!  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 17:02, 15 March 2008 (UTC)

Object Comments
 * 1) You use "however" too much in the second paragraph of "The Battle". Otherwise, it's good.  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  19:17, 14 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) *Fixed. Greyman ( Talk ) 04:08, 15 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) Toprawa:
 * 4) * One minor thing: if possible please provide a bit more description for this to explain when Jeth died. "...earlier before the battle" would probably suffice; otherwise, it kind of seems like this happened during this battle: "Ulic still felt immense guilt at not being able to prevent the death of Arca Jeth," Toprawa and Ralltiir 16:42, 15 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) *Fixed. Thanks :) Greyman ( Talk ) 16:48, 15 March 2008 (UTC)
 * Huh? What's that? Oh ya, WP:TOTJ keeps on rolling. Greyman ( Talk ) 18:11, 12 March 2008 (UTC)