Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Thalmussen


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Thalmussen

 * Nominated by:  Commander Code-8  To say hi, press 42 05:44, October 15, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Presenting Operation Battlegrounds first CAN (would have been my third if the others hadn't wound up on the GA page)

(2 ECs/0 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 22:18, October 19, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  15:58, November 11, 2012 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Let's keep this a CAN.
 * 2) * Context on Alaris Expanse?
 * 3) * Please do not link to things in Quotes
 * 4) * Could you give us a description of the ship? The picture does give a bit of the appearence.
 * 5) *Good work. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 21:10, October 15, 2012 (UTC)
 * 6) **I've done the first two but I'm not exactly sure what to say in a desciption of the ship.  Commander Code-8  To say hi, press 42 09:30, October 16, 2012 (UTC)
 * 7) ***Just saying that it had two engines would do I think. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 20:49, October 17, 2012 (UTC)
 * 8) ****I've put it in.  Commander Code-8  To say hi, press 42 05:01, October 18, 2012 (UTC)
 * 9) Exiled Jedi
 * 10) * Context on what a Wookiee is.
 * 11) * Is it clearly stated that the clearing is near the ocean? If not, I thin it would be best to say that it was a large body of water. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  05:15, November 11, 2012 (UTC)
 * 12) **Done both.  Commander Code-8  To say hi, press 42 05:24, November 11, 2012 (UTC)

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