Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations



This page is for the nomination of "comprehensive articles". For a list of "comprehensive articles", see Category:Wookieepedia comprehensive articles.


 * Comprehensive article nominations history
 * Comprehensive article nominations archiving checklist

What is a "comprehensive article?"

A "comprehensive article" is an article that contains all information regarding the topic. Often, "comprehensive articles" cannot reach Featured or Good Article status due to their limited content. This process is intended to recognize articles that contain all relevant canon information, yet are still under the 250 word limit required for a Good Article. The purpose of this is twofold&mdash;firstly, to help users distinguish what is a stub, and what is merely a short article with no further relevant material to be added, and, more importantly, to highlight for the reader when they are reading something that has been judged definitely "comprehensive"&mdash;that is, a guarantee to the reader that whatever they are reading contains the sum total of all available content.

Nominations and promotions of the Comprehensive article process are overseen by a collective of users known as the "EduCorps," which is made up of the Inquisitorius, the AgriCorps, and various other experienced users who are considered qualified to adequately judge the nominated material.

Lucasfilm Ltd. and its many licensees continue to expand the Star Wars universe. Since new information might become available, it may be necessary to revoke a "comprehensive article's" status. A forum will be used to nominate articles that have fallen out-of-date. Members of the EduCorps will then post a warning template on that page, and a grace period of one week will be instituted in which the article can be improved. If there is a significant amount of new information, it is likely that once updated, the article will become eligible for Good article status, and thereby ineligible for Comprehensive article status.

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An article must&hellip;


 * 1) &hellip;be well-written and detailed.
 * 2) &hellip;be unbiased, non-point of view.
 * 3) &hellip;be sourced with all available sources and appearances.
 * 4) &hellip;follow the Manual of Style, Layout Guide, and all other policies on Wookieepedia. This is, of course, within reason. If a topic only has a very limited degree of content that cannot be divided up into the relevant article sections, it is not required that it follow the Layout Guide precisely. This is to be judged on a case-by-case basis.
 * 5) &hellip;following the review process, be stable, i.e., does not change significantly from day to day and is not the subject of ongoing edit wars. This does not apply to vandalism and protection or semi-protection as a result of vandalism.
 * 6) &hellip;not be tagged with any sort of improvement tags (i.e. more sources, expand, etc).
 * 7) &hellip;have no redlinks.
 * 8) &hellip;have all relevant canon information presented.
 * 9) &hellip;be completely referenced for all available material and sources. See Sourcing for more information. While this is not required for an article possessing a singular source, it is encouraged, as it provides both uniformity and a good infrastructure should the topic be referenced in any future materials.
 * 10) &hellip;have all quotes and images sourced.
 * 11) &hellip;provide at least one relevant quote on the article if available.
 * 12) &hellip;include a "Behind the scenes" section for in-universe articles.
 * 13) &hellip;counting the introduction, the article body, and "Behind the scenes" material, must not exceed 250 words in length (not including captions, quotes, or headers, etc). Any articles exceeding the limit should be taken to the Good article nominations page for consideration.
 * 14) &hellip;if the nominated article reaches 200 words or greater, the nominator must either provide an intro or draft an intro and provide a link to the revision in the nomination, showing that the intro does not elevate the article over 250 words. Exceptions can be made for articles wherein the majority of the text is in the "Behind the scenes" section.

How to nominate:


 * 1) First, nominate an article you find is worthy of comprehensive status, putting it at the bottom of the list below. Nominated articles must meet all thirteen requirements stated above.
 * 2) Add CAnom at the top of the article you are nominating.
 * 3) Be sure to place sign in the "Nominated by" line when the nomination is posted for voting.
 * 4) Others will object to the nomination if they disagree that the article is good enough; they will then supply reasons for doing so, and ways to improve the article in accordance with the established rules.
 * 5) Nominators and supporters will adjust the article until the objectors (with reasonable objections) are satisfied. Objectors may also make alterations&mdash;if there is any reason for contention on a given point, it should be settled in a civil manner in the nomination field itself.
 * 6) Users may not vote on their own articles.
 * 7) There is no limit to the amount of nominations a given user can submit at any given time.

How to vote:


 * 1) Before doing anything, be sure to read the article completely, keeping a sharp eye out for mistakes.
 * 2) Afterward, compare the article to the criteria listed above, and then either support or object the article's nomination.
 * 3) *If you object, please supply concrete reasons for doing so, and how it can be improved.
 * 4) As stated above, any objections will be looked upon by the nominator, supporters, and anyone willing to improve the article, and action will be taken to please the objectors. Do not strike other users' objections; it is up to the objector to review the changes and strike if they are satisfied.
 * 5) There are several ways in which an article can receive the required number of votes. Within a 48-hour period of nomination, only EduCorps votes will count towards the total, although anyone may choose to vote in that window. If two members of the EduCorps support a nomination in that window, and there are no outstanding objections, the article can be considered a "Comprehensive article" and be tagged with the template 48 hours after the initial nomination.  The talk page will also be tagged with the CA template. When the 48 hours are up, any user's votes will contribute towards the total. If one EduCorps member has voted for an article after a week, three regular votes will be required. After the 48 hour period, an article can still also pass with just two EduCorps votes.
 * 6) Once a nomination is successful, it will be placed on the Comprehensive article list. Instructions on how to archive nominations, successful or otherwise, can be found here. Anyone can archive a nomination&mdash;just make sure it has the correct number of votes, has been nominated for at least a week (or 48 hours if there are two EC votes), and that there are absolutely no outstanding objections. If you are not sure how to do this, just ask, and someone will likely be more than willing to help you. Also, if you think you can slip one past us, think again&mdash;someone is always watching you.

All nominations will be considered idle and are subject to instantaneous removal by EduCorps members if objections are not addressed, or at least not answered, after a period of 1 week.

Please remember to archive your nomination beforehand if you plan on taking it to the Good Article Nominations page.

Unit 6

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 18:55, August 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:More for WP:VG.

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  16:55, August 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 23:21, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * You use "they tried to stop Starkiller" twice in the article, please reword one instance.
 * 3) **Done.
 * 4) * Please make it clear who is escaping when you say: "but he escaped anyway". -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  03:14, August 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) **and done. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:00, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Blair

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 23:32, August 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Sometimes you just gotta jump right in and do it. One edit on the page. Creation and CAnom all in one.

(1 ECs/2 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Master Jonathan  &mdash; Jedi Council Chambers Saturday, August 13, 2011, 15:33 UTC
 * 2) Too bad the Wii version doesn't have the in-game databank...-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  02:10, August 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) *That's because the Wii version is crap. :p j/k Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:51, August 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * Sorry, I missed something. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  02:14, August 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) Blair should get a story. I don't like one-off mentions of battles. I suggest waiting at least a day or so between writing and nomming. You will see things you missed. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 23:15, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) From the Council Chambers:
 * 2) * Is there enough information on the Battle of Slotern to determine its era? If so, then the appropriate Eras tag and an infobox should be used on this article.
 * 3) **All the databank says that could help determine an era is that they fought TIE fighters. But since TIE fighters were used in the Rise of the Empire era, Rebellion era, and so on, it's not really possible to determine an era.
 * 4) *That's all I've got.  Master Jonathan &mdash; Jedi Council Chambers Friday, August 12, 2011, 23:46 UTC
 * 5) **Thanks for the review. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:56, August 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) Exiled Jedi
 * 7) * You should create an infobox including information saying that he was a male.
 * 8) **The databank never really says that he was male. Since it's like he's talking, there isn't any "he" "his" or anything like that to go off. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:05, August 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) * I think you could probably create an article on his wingman.
 * 10) **Done.
 * 11) *Good work, Cal.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  03:19, August 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 12) **Thanks for checking it out EJ. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:05, August 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 13) * I think that you probably could say that the era is the Rise of the Empire era, because that is when the game occurs and the entry would not have information about things that happen after the game. Just a thought, what do you thing of this reasoning? -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:54, August 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 14) **Seems solid enought.
 * 15) * Why don't you do the appearances section for this guy like you did for the Battle of Slotern? -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:57, August 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 16) **Done. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:09, August 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 17) * Oops I missed something, you need to say in the body which era the article appeared in. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  02:13, August 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 18) **Got it. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 20:42, August 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 19) Menkooroo
 * 20) *I agree with EJ's objection --- if he fought against the Empire, and the game takes place prior to 0 BBY, then "Rise of the Empire era" is appropriate for both an tag and an infobox.
 * 21) **I'm afraid that I kinda agree with leaving it out. But, if you think that it should be added, I request that we wait a couple of days before I add it so it doesn't end up like the discussion about the sourcing of the ANH noms below. :P If anyone has any objections about your opinion, than we can discuss it before I have to change it ten times. :P
 * 22) ***I'm not really sure why it should be left out. The game takes place in 1 BBY, so any reference to the Empire is necessarily in the Rise of the Empire era. Menkooroo 07:03, September 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * 23) ****Have you looked over the other TFU II noms below? The discussion was carried out through those, and at the end, EJ (who wanted the eras tag like you do) finally said that it should be left out. The main thing is that, even though TFU II happens in 1 BBY, we don't have confirmation that the databank was "compiled" before 1 BBY. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:42, September 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * 24) *I also think it would be a good idea to mention the resistance fighters in the first sentence. Currently, the first sentence kinda makes it seem like Blair fought single-handedly, and the second sentence mentions "the resistance fighters" as if the reader should already be familiar with them. Be careful of using "the" like that; similarly, "the initial attack by the TIES" might read better if "the" was replaced by "a," as it's being introduced for the first time.
 * 25) **I believe I fixed the first part, but I'm not sure about that last part. "the initial attack by the TIEs" I think should be left as is. It's not "an" initial attack. It is the "only" initial attack of the battle. What do you think?
 * 26) ***Yeah that's fine. However --- as we know that Blair is a member of the Resistance Fighters, that fact should probably be established in the first sentence independently of the battle, for chronological purposes. Eg, "Blair was a member of some resistance fighters. Before 1 BBY, they fought at the Battle of blah blah blah..." Also, I hate to be that guy, but it seems like an "Unidentified resistance group" article is in order... :/ Menkooroo 07:03, September 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * 27) ****See if I covered it. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:57, September 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * 28) * Several other details are only implied when they really should be explicitly stated: That the battle is a space battle, that Blair is inside a starship. Menkooroo 16:26, September 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 29) **See how that works. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 23:00, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Comments
 * There's no infobox because I couldn't find any canon info to put in it besides his name. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 23:33, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

Battle of Slotern

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:45, August 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:I'm so sorry Lieutenant Blair.

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) SinisterSamurai 15:36, August 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  20:43, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) SinSam
 * 2) * This should link to either Slotern or Slotern system. Systems on the essential atlas (and companion) chart are named for their most famous feature. And Slotern system was added to the Online companion after comments re: battle of slotern in TFUII were made on the blog of Daniel Wallace. SinisterSamurai 02:07, August 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Done. I added the Slotern system and didn't create a Slotern since we don't know anything about it. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:57, August 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) Exiled Jedi
 * 5) * I think that you can say that it occured in the Rise of the Empire era. See my reasoning in the Blair nomination. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:58, August 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) **Done. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:12, August 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) ***You still need to mention the era in the body of the article.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  02:17, August 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) ****Done. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 20:40, August 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) Imperators II
 * 10) * The dates have to be sourced.  Imperators II (Talk) 12:16, August 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) **They have been. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:38, August 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 12) *** Now "during the height of the Galactic Empire" is unsourced (same as your other battle nom).  Imperators II (Talk) 19:12, August 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 13) ****Try that then. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:32, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Unidentified wingman

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:21, August 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Doing ya one better EJ.

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) Good work.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  20:40, August 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Excellent. Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 16:22, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * Please do the appearances section like you did in the Battle of Slotern article.
 * 3) **Got it.
 * 4) * Again I think you can say the era was Rise of the Empire.
 * 5) **Done.
 * 6) ***Please mention the era in the body of the article.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  02:21, August 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) ****Done. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 20:35, August 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) * In Blair's article you call them TIE starfighters, however, in this nomination and the Battle of Slotern nomination you call them TIE figters and link them to TIE series. Which is correct? -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  17:03, August 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) **All set. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:15, August 14, 2011 (UTC)


 * 1) Objection! Sustained!
 * 2) * I would prefer it if you added in the BTS that this wingman only appears in the databank, and not the actual game itself. Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 15:09, August 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Got it. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:45, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Battle of Corrdair

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:29, August 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Well, I had to write it in order to CAnom Limm Nix. It's a good thing that there is no limit on CAnoms.

(1 ECs/0 Users/1 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  15:56, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * The quote doesn't seem to fit very well, it doesn't even mention the battle. Are there any other quotes?
 * 3) **The whole reason that the battle was mentioned in the databank was to give place to Limm Nix, so the battle is mentioned once in a two sentence databank entry. So, that's about the best that I can do.
 * 4) * "The Empire sent All Terrain Missile Platforms to attack the Alliance, including Major Limm Nix." makes it sound like Nix is a AT-MP. Please reword. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  12:16, August 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) **Heh, fixed. Thanks for the review EJ. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:35, August 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) Imperators II
 * 7) * "during the height of the Galactic Empire" has to be sourced.  Imperators II (Talk) 12:18, August 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) **Thanks for looking it over, but it is sourced. Someone really seriously messed this article up while I was sleeping, so you might have seen that result. But, take a look at it now. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:35, August 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) *** Uh, no, the statement is not sourced. It only has a note explaining the applicability of an OOU publishing era.  Imperators II (Talk) 19:09, August 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) ****Take a look now. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:25, August 16, 2011 (UTC)


 * 1) SinSam
 * 2) * Corrdair should be linked (Or Corrdair system). Comments on Dan Wallace's blog give me reason to believe that the next Atlas companion update will include Corrdair (and Polomie). SinisterSamurai 20:27, August 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **I don't know if that'd be wise. We don't know anything about Corrdair. For all we know it might be a city. So I think we should leave it blank until it is verified. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:39, August 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) *** Then it'll have to link to a stub, or just be a redlink. SinisterSamurai 00:35, August 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) ****Done. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:57, August 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) *****Welcome to hyper-inclusionism. :) SinisterSamurai 15:42, August 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) ******That's for me. :P Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:46, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Nix

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 16:39, August 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Different Nix than my other CAnom.

(1 ECs/0 Users/1 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  19:25, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * Just a quick question: Was it not confirmed that he was killed by Terror Troopers? -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  13:28, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Yup. Fixed. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:32, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) * See my objection on the captain's nom. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  15:59, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) **Phew, I think I got them all. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 19:08, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Pend

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:07, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:I wrote this article so I could CAnom Band Light, but since I got this one done first, I'll nom this one first.

(1 ECs/0 Users/1 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  19:24, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * In the other articles you mention that he was searching for smuggled goods, please mention that here. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  13:26, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Alrighty. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:34, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) * See my objection on the captain's nom. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  15:58, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) **Done. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 19:07, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Red (Band Light)

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:31, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:And next on Blood, Gore, and Other Unfortunate Mishaps:Red, the man whose name matches his looks.

(1 ECs/0 Users/1 Total)
Support
 * 1) Just a few minor problems that I fixed, good work.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  13:12, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * I need to pay better attention.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  13:23, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Could you mention that the corridor he was killed in was near life support? -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  13:23, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *Done. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:36, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) See my objection on the captain's nomination. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  15:57, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) *Done. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 19:06, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Band Light

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:42, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Finally doing the nom I was building up to.

(1 ECs/0 Users/1 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  19:21, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * Does it say that the ship has a crew of four, or does it just mention four people on the ship and not mention whether there were more crew members or not? If it is the former, please say "At least four" in the infobox. Either way mention the crew in the main article. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  13:06, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **"Good catch" as you say. :p Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:39, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) * See my objection about the era in the nomination for the captain. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  15:56, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) **Done. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 19:05, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Unidentified captain of the Band Light

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:58, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:There should be a captain in there somewhere.

(1 ECs/0 Users/1 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  13:00, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * I missed something.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  13:20, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) You refer to the captain as "he" once. Is this a mistake or was the captain a male?-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  13:20, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *Yea, I did it out of force of habit. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:42, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) For all of the Force Unleashed II databank nominations, please mention that article's subject occured during the reign of the Galactic Empire. (Notice that this could place the articles in any era that has the Galactic Empire satisfying those who say that it is not confirmed to be in the Rise of the Empire era, and it also narrows down when the article's subject lived. What do you think of this idea?) -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  15:52, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * OK, I think I got them all. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 19:05, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) ** You missed the Unidentified wingman and Limm Nix. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  19:18, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) ***My apologies, you just forgot to remove the era tags. I took care of them for you, good work.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  19:30, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) ****Thanks. You might want to remove the strike on your vote now though. :) Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 19:39, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) *****Heh, sorry about that.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  21:45, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Comments
 * For consistency's sake, please check all of your nominations coming from the Force Unleashed II databank and remove the Rise of the Empire era from them. I have reconsiderd my reasoning and now think that it is not certain that the databank entries have to be from the Rise of the Empire era. Sorry for the confusion.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  13:00, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * It would be a good idea to say that it was during the time of the Galactic Empire, because that narrows it down a bit, though it still does not say an exact era.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  13:16, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Huloon

 * Nominated by: MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg(Whatever) 18:35, August 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:My first planet, and my first WP:TEA project. Be nice.

(2 ECs/1 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) Welcome back! Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:14, August 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) 99 red lufthuloons approve of this article. ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 17:28, August 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  22:26, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * Bob
 * There's a lot of incidental information that can be gleaned from the Atlas that should be summarized here. Basically, you should figure out as closely as possible where it's located (if it appears on a map in the Atlas, all the better; otherwise, just go with the coordinates). Then go through the Atlas, look at its location on each map, and decipher when its region of the galaxy was first explored, what regions it's in, what territories it fell into over time (like Darth Krayt's Galactic Empire or the Pentastar Alignment, say), etc. This goes for the species article, below, as well. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 23:21, August 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * I didn't even think of that. :P Well, I went through the Atlas, and I believe this is all there is. It's Hutton Space, so it didn't really get conquered much. :P Also, adding any of this to the species article would be speculation because we don't know when the planet was depopulated, and so we don't know if any of these events affected the species. MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg(Whatever) 02:25, August 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * You should explicitly note that it was considered part of Hutt Space somewhere; there are some planets that are in those bounds but not affiliated, like Riileb. And perhaps give dates for the New Sith Wars? ~ Savage BOB sig.png 19:25, August 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * Added. Btw, thanks for the review. :) MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg(Whatever) 21:10, August 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * Exiled Jedi
 * Please reword "...15,000 BBY and 8,000 BBY, or in-between the Kymoodon Era and the Rianitus Period." Is this referring to two separate time periods, or are they different ways of referring to the same time period? Either way, it needs to be reworded. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  19:29, August 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * OK, should be fixed. MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg(Whatever) 17:53, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

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Unidentified Rodian 1 (Docking Bay 94)

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 16:15, September 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Thought it was about time I did a nom from the movies.

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 * 1) Assuming others are satisfied with their objections. Hanzo Hasashi 15:32, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Imperators II
 * 2) * The date can't be sourced to the movie. The same with your other movie noms.  Imperators II (Talk) 12:33, September 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **I don't see why not, the Battle of Yavin happens right after all this, so this would be the "0" point. Unless you would rather have me actually explain it something like "Since the Battle of Yavin happens in the same year as this event, then this is 0BBY". What do ya think? Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:43, September 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) ***0 BBY can be sourced to ANH, as the Battle of Yavin happens in the film. Menkooroo 15:47, September 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) ****My bad, I think you're right. The date in the Aleena article can't be sourced to the movie, though.  Imperators II (Talk) 15:51, September 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) *****Alright, check it out. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:58, September 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) ****I disagree. Nowhere in Episode IV did it say they established a new dating system based upon the Battle of Yavin. YET (but that would be aknowledging EU continuity). I think a chronology source like the NEGC should be used instead. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 23:16, September 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) *****I see your point and I don't think it would be too difficult to find another source. But, I believe that there is nothing wrong with sourcing it to the movie since all the canon sources are supposed to flow together, dispite what came out when. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 23:19, September 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) ******Well, I see it as like saying KOTOR took place in 3,956 BBY. In the game, that year is never given, so we source it to the KOTORCG. In fact, the Battle of Yavin time system wasn't established until 25 ABY, so the movie really doesn't have anything to do with it at all other than being its epoch. If you really want to use the movie as the source, you have to at least explicitly specify in the citation that the reason you're using it is because the movie constitutes the system's year zero because the Battle of Yavin took place in it. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 01:43, September 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) *******I still don't see what the problem would be with sourcing it to the movie as is, but changed. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:48, September 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) ********Think of it like a progression of logic with evidence: "A New Hope takes place in 0 BBY." "Why?" "Because the Battle of Yavin occured in it." "And that proves it why?" "Because the BBY/ABY system is based around that battle as its epoch." "And how do you know that is the epoch of that system? Nothing about year is ever mentioned in the movie and the system didn't come into use for 25 years." "Because The New Essential Chronology establishes that it was the epoch on Page XV." "So source it to that." NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 02:46, September 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 12) ********For a shorter one, consider my exchange wth Axinal over Crab-stuffed creampuff (I was in your position then): "The Mon Calamari homeworld is Dac." "How do you know that? Dac wasn't specifically referenced in Galaxy of Fear." "Because Geonosis and the Outer Rim Worlds identified it as such." "Then source it to that." NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 02:46, September 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 13) *********See how that works then. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 03:08, September 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 14) **********If I can put in my opinion, I don't think needing to source movie years at all is necessary, but 0 BBY is the main one that I think just is better off being sourced to the film, as it happens in the same year of the Battle of Yavin. I'm going to remove the 0 BBY sourcing to NEC to all the ANH noms. Hanzo Hasashi 14:03, September 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 15) ***********Sounds good. Thanks. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:54, September 12, 2011 (UTC)


 * 1) Rodian
 * 2) * I'd like to see some more context given. What and where is Docking Bay 94? Neither Mos Eisley nor Tatooine are mentioned. It's probably also worth mentioning why Jabba is looking for Han.
 * 3) *A brief account of what happens in that scene might be a good idea too --- ie, they go to the Falcon to look for Han, Han arrives after them and strikes a deal with Jabba, Jabba and his thugs leave.
 * 4) **See how this works for both objections. If it looks good, I'll fix up my other Rodian buddies. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:40, September 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) *Was he definitely present in the original scene, when it was filmed with Declan Mulholland? Or was he a new actor added for the Special Edition? The mention of the deleted scene will have to be sourced to something, too, as cut content isn't self-sourcing. The intro to the special edition VHS would work. I'm honestly not sure what the best way to source that is, but this is how I've done it before. Menkooroo 02:58, September 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) **I believe he was. Take a look at this picture for proof. File:DeclanMulholland as Jabba.jpg Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 03:15, September 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) ***Cool. I think you missed the second part of the objection, though.
 * 8) ****Oh. Whoops! :P
 * 9) *I feel like the stuff about where he's standing reads more like an OOU statement. It might fit better in "Behind the scenes;" alternatively, it could be moved earlier in the article and be stated before the article says that they leave Docking Bay 94, so that the chronology doesn't suddenly backtrack at the end. Menkooroo 07:07, September 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) **I switched it around a bit. Check it out now. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:06, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

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 * BTM includes the whole script of the film, which thus also includes the passage of "Jabba the Hut and a half-dozen grisly alien pirates," and therefore that is also a source mentioning all the Rodians. Hanzo Hasashi 03:19, September 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * Sounds like it should be . Menkooroo 16:08, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Unidentified Mos Eisley woman

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:43, September 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:I'm finding lots of movie noms.

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Support
 * Looks good to me. Hanzo Hasashi 03:36, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

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 * Context on Luke and Obi-Wan needed I think, maybe also why they were in Mos Eisley? Hanzo Hasashi 14:11, September 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * I believe I got it. I wasn't sure what sort of context Luke should have at that point, so check that out Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 03:23, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

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Unidentified Rodian 2 (Docking Bay 94)

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 23:16, September 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Ten more days.

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Unidentified Rodian 3 (Docking Bay 94)

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 23:34, September 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:The unidentified Rodian triplets.

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Unidentified balding Human

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:03, September 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Starting noms from my favorite movie.

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Support
 * 1) To the sum of my knowledge, though I can't say anything about adaptations and whatnot. This is also assuming Exiled Jedi's objections are satisfied. Hanzo Hasashi 21:43, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * Context needed on Han Solo and his friends, as well as the Skirmish at Carkoon, which isn't even linked/pipelinked. Check out articles such as Rayc Ryjerd and Cane Adiss, both of whom were also onscreen in Jabba's Palace and on the Khetanna, for a more ideal way to write up the article. Hanzo Hasashi 12:58, September 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * See how that looks. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:34, September 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * Though in a way they were still trying to rescue Han, during the Carkoon battle all of them were captives who were going to be executed, but fought back. This is not what the article seems to say. And also it might be better to just say the sail barge was destroyed during that last stand, what it says right now implies all of them had a role in its destruction, when that was just Luke and Leia. Hanzo Hasashi 18:36, September 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * See how that works, though I don't want to add too much more to it for fear of getting off of the person I'm writing the article about. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:07, September 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * Exiled Jedi
 * From the image I would say he was seen on the sail barge, so I would mention that he was on the sail barge. This would really add to the part of the article about the rescue of Han Solo.
 * See how that looks.
 * Did he appear in Jabba's Palace? I'm unsure because the image is clearly from the sail barge due to the slitted windows. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  21:33, September 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * Umm, I believe so. I'll have to check to make sure. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:36, September 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * Many of the sail barge characters were previously seen in Jabba's Palace, but I'm not sure about all of them. Sompeetalay is a user who is good at spotting obscure characters in the films, if you need any help. Hanzo Hasashi 21:40, September 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * Yes, he actually is. Thanks to some help from Sompeetalay, I found him in Jabba's Palace. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 02:23, September 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * I would get someone to check all of the adaptations just to make sure that he isn't pictured in any of them.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  12:51, September 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * Menk is helping me with the ANH articles, so I'll see if he, or someone else, can help.  Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 03:10, September 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * Thanks to Menk, I believe they have been covered. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:32, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

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Unidentified balding Human (Chalmun's Spaceport Cantina)

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 02:06, September 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:...and really bad Doctors. Drink up me hearties, YO-HO!!

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Support
 * 1) To the sum of my knowledge, though I don't know about this man's adaptation appearances, however I see Menkooroo will help you out on those. Hanzo Hasashi 18:17, September 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) I would have gone with "Unidentified Human with cup," but that's just me. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 03:10, September 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Just a couple of minor tweaks.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  22:59, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) If it's his table that Evazan throws Luke into, chances are good he's in some of A New Hope adaptations (comic, special edition comic, photocomic, manga, etc). As tedious as it seems, any film character --- whether protagonist or random background extra --- requires a check through said adaptations, even if just to yield several  appearances. I can help ya out with these guys on that front. Menkooroo 02:48, September 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *I have the comic, but I might need some help with the others. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 03:19, September 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Well, he isn't in the this comic. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:23, September 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Cool tools. I have scans of a bunch of the other comics on my external hard drive, so I'll be able to check 'em for you tomorrow when I get home from work. Menkooroo 15:49, September 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) ****Great, thanks. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 16:02, September 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) *****Thanks for the patience. I couldn't find him in anything, but I found the Rodians in a few. Menkooroo 03:46, September 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) ******Thanks you! I appreciate your help. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 03:55, September 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) *******Did you happen to see the above nom in anything? Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 03:59, September 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) ********I'll check through some ROTJ adaptations today. I sincerely doubt if he's in any of 'em, but I'll look. Menkooroo 04:13, September 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) *********Actually, I'll need you to tell me where to look. Where in the Palace, and on the Sail barge, is he standing? Menkooroo 09:18, September 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) **********In Jabba's Palace, he's standing in the background when Luke is standing before Jabba and 3PO is talking about the Sarlacc. He's just standing in the background of the Sail Barge next to a type of window. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 23:06, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

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 * I would agree with Menkooroo's objection with all of these obscure characters you've done. Also, for the ANH characters, is sourcing 0 BBY really necessary, considering it happened the year of the Battle of Yavin? Not making that an objection though. Hanzo Hasashi 12:53, September 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * I agree with what you said about the ANH sourcing, and originally I had it sourced to the movie. But I had several users that disagreed, so I switched it. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:03, September 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * I'm going to edit to just source the date to the film too. I'll leave the RotJ nom as is though. Hanzo Hasashi 18:17, September 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * Okey-Dokey. Thanks. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 12:57, September 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * You can't really source dates to the films because there are not dates ever mentioned in the films. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 12:21, September 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * I don't see why not. We source it 0 BBY (Battle of Yavin), and we know that the Battle of Yavin happened in the movie, so common sense would say that it would be 0 BBY. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 02:57, September 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * I explained to you why not and you said you saw how it worked. We can't go by common sense, and I know that's phrased terribly. We know that KOTOR takews place in 3,946 BBy, yet we source it to the KOTORCG because the year is never mentioned in the source. Episode IV doesn't get a pass on that rule just because it's the epoch. That it's the epoch of any timeline would have to be sourced to something ese because the BBY system was established in 25 ABY. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 19:33, September 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * I know that you explained it to me, and I still don't really have a problem with doing it like this. But then where do we draw the line on common sense? The new CT that just passed about the BTS was pretty much all about common sense, and if we can use common sense for that, why not for the years? Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 23:34, September 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * Too many quality articles about movie characters, events, droids, vehicles/ships, etc. have just flat out sourced the year to the movie as well. Also a similar debate is sourcing the names of other characters or whatnot not named in the films; some people in their quality articles have reffed it to the source naming them; others just the movie itself. Hanzo Hasashi 00:48, September 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * An example of my previous point, some people would also source Evazan's name to something. IMHO it is fine as is though. Hanzo Hasashi 00:51, September 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * I think that I would have a bigger problem if it was something from ROTJ, since it doesn't flat out say "Blah-blah years after Episode IV". But this is the movie where the Battle of Yavin happened. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:53, September 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * You do make a good point. However, I found that there are no official rules against not properly sourcing a date regardless of movie. Nonetheless in the future if I ever get objections about year sourcing for a film article I will source to something, probably The New Essential Chronology. Hanzo Hasashi 01:00, September 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * A note on Evazan: any article that sources his name to the movie is actually in the wrong. It's not even an issue of common sense. He isn't given a name in the movie. Those need to be fixed and sourced to something else. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 21:14, September 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * What do you think we should reference Evazan to then? Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:02, September 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * As with any fact, just to any source that identifies him by that name. The Official Star Wars Fact File 51 or Star Wars Character Encyclopedia for example. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 00:42, September 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * Naru: That's not actually how we do things at all. Simply refer to... well, overwhelming precedent. Cal: Ref [3] is pretty erroneous, and is actually something I would object to. See here for some more discussion on it. Menkooroo 03:46, September 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * Wait, so I'm lost. :P What is the final verdict here. It seems like it's been switched ten times! :P Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 03:55, September 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * Just some food for thought: If some Legacy character is lurking in the background of a comic, such as Oron Jaeger in Issue 23, an article can mention that he was there without sourcing his name to another comic. Conan Antonio Motti mentions Cassio Tagge without referencing something other than A New Hope, and that's just one of many similar ANH-based status articles that do something similar. I firmly believe that it's best to keep sourcing as simple (yet still accurate) as possible, and the current ref [3] just seems erroneous. Menkooroo 04:10, September 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * Sooo, bottom line is to source it to ANH again? Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 04:15, September 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * I'll fold on the name cite. Sorry for the confusion. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 04:48, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Executioner's hack

 * Nominated by:  OLIOSTER  (talk) 09:49, September 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Barn burner blah blah blah

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 * 1) Furthermore, you, sir, are a hack. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 23:45, September 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2)  Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 18:41, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

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 * 1) Who was that masked man?
 * 2) * There is some stuff in the infobox that need to be added, i.e. 0 to 4 meter range, it was used on Endor, etc.
 * 3) * And there is more than one source, so you'll have to source it.
 * 4) **Should be addressed.  OLIOSTER  (talk) 15:46, September 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) *Otherwise, looks like another quality article for the barn-burner. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 13:01, September 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) Exiled Jedi
 * 7) *I'm not sure that the 0 to 4 meter range should included in the body of the article. There are some really short melee weapons in the game that have the same range, so I think that this is game mechanics, which should probably be moved to the behind the scenes section with a reference explaining about the melee ranges in Galaxies.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  22:55, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Comments
 * One of the earlier weapons from the game that SOE forgot about so I think I've covered everything.  OLIOSTER  (talk) 09:49, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Battle of Charros system

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 19:41, September 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Let's finish Prong 1.

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 * 1)  Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 02:13, September 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Nice.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  22:52, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

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Tedonian wine

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:15, September 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Continuing with the Get-all-my-created-articles-to-status project.

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 * 1) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 04:42, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Object Comments
 * 1) Rubedo
 * 2) * "be as careful with the shipments of Tedonian wine as Tohrm was." Rephrase this. It's word-for-word.
 * 3) **Try that then.
 * 4) ***It's still pretty much the phrase. You should give Tohrm context as their comrade, rather than providing his species. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 03:24, September 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) ****Try that.
 * 6) *****I changed it a touch more. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 04:42, September 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) * I think the mention of the Tedonia system should be relegated to a BTS note a la the previous food articles. Unless she says it comes from there, in which case it needs to be entioned in the body.
 * 8) **See how that looks.
 * 9) ***I meant saying something to the effect of that there is canonically a system called Tedonia but that Allies does not explicitly say that the wine originated from there. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 03:24, September 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) ****See how that works then. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 04:12, September 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) * Tohrm should be given context on his first mention, which could be fixed with my first objection.
 * 12) **Check it out.
 * 13) *This is just a question. So Ackmena was in an anti-slavery organization when she was one hundred years old? ?.? NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 02:38, September 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 14) **When one hundred years old you reach, look as good you will not. Hmm?? Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 02:44, September 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 15) ***The writers officially need to be told to remember scale. People shouldn't be having kids at 70. It's just ridiculous. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 03:24, September 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 16) Exiled Jedi
 * 17) *Do we know for sure that this was a real kind of wine?-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  22:50, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Unidentified dancer

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 22:08, September 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: She was putting herself through law school.

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 * 1) Sure she was...  Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 02:36, September 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Now we will have a CA on a person only identified by a boot.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  22:45, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

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 * 1) Rise, Unidentified Dancer
 * 2) * First of all, you need to make a category for dancers. Right now, it's just a redlink in the categories.
 * 3) **Changed to Entertainers. Also: Wikia. That is all. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 00:32, September 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Make that Performing artists. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 00:36, September 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) * You should probably add the Category:Unidentified gender. It looks like it's female, but, even though it sounds sick, it could be a guy.
 * 6) **Added. And people come in all kinds. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 00:32, September 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) * I've heard from other users, such as Menkooroo, that you should start out your articles with "A dancer" instead of "This dancer". I fixed it this time, just thought I'd put the bug in your ear.
 * 8) **I'm not going to change it back because it doesn't make a difference to me, but has that been made into a policy yet? The rationale for people starting to do that was that people felt "A" lent iself to a more IU perspective, but I personally think "This" works better and that "A" actually takes away from that perspective. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 00:32, September 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) ***I personally, as several people have agreed, think that it sounds more professional. That's the general way that it's accepted, but I don't believe that it's "official policy" yet. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 02:31, September 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) * I've also heard users say that you should place the CAnom template below the solid templates. For example, put the eras template, then the Conjecture template, and then the CAnom.
 * 11) **I don't think that neccesarily matters. It's going to be taken off in the end. And if we were to standardize its placement then it should go at the top, so the permanent parts of the article are contiguous. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 00:32, September 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 12) ***Like I said, I'm just passing on what I heard. I do it like I said above, but I'm not going to be nit-picky about it. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 02:31, September 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 13) *Otherwise, looks good. :P  Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:08, September 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 14) I think you should add a mention of the three individuals enjoying her work. Luckily for you, their articles are already written. --Eyrezer 00:58, September 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 15) *Added. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 02:12, September 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 16) Can you source 27 BBY to the comic? -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  17:33, September 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 17) *According to the Jango Fett articles that all just passed, yes. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 01:20, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

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E-3 blaster

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:14, September 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Late contribution to the Barn-burner to get it up past the last Barn-burner.

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 * 1) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 22:46, September 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Looks good.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  22:47, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

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 * 1) Axinal
 * 2) *Article looks pretty good; the only problem I have is that the sentences in the prose seem a bit choppy: "He carried...He carried...He thought..." Could you perhaps rewrite the last few sentences to make the flow a little more natural? Otherwise, very nice.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 22:35, September 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Thanks! See how it looks now. BTW, welcome back to the CAN page. :) Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:41, September 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Much better. I made a couple of tweaks, but I think that's all I have. Thank you, by the way&mdash;I took a break for a while, partly because Wikia stopped emailing me when pages on my watchlist were changed, but that issue has been resolved and I'm hoping to be more active here and elsewhere on Wookieepedia.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 22:46, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

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