Wookieepedia:Re-featured article nominations/Garik Loran

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Garik Loran

 * Originally nominated by:
 * Last featured on: March 24, 2007
 * Changes since last review: diff
 * Date placed on this page: September 11, 2011

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 * 1) Jefferson
 * 2) *2007-level of detail in the Yuuzhan Vong War section. A single sentence covering The Unifying Force isn't enough. A lot of missing context in this section and throughout the entire article to boot.
 * 3) *Article alternates between "Face" and "Loran," should probably pick one. A lot of first names are used for other characters throughout.
 * 4) *CSWE hasn't been checked for info or added to the sources section.
 * 5) *Needs a copy-edit and quite a bit of expansion. Intro and P&T could use a lot of beefing. Menkooroo 12:46, September 29, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) **Will address soon. Atarumaster88  Jedi_Order.svg ( Talk page ) 01:20, January 24, 2012 (UTC)
 * 7) ***First look suggest substantial rewrite needed. I'm willing to do it, just have to budget the time for it. Not easy fixes to bring article up to acceptable 2012 standards. Atarumaster88  Jedi_Order.svg ( Talk page ) 04:40, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

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