Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Near Indosa


 * ''The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a comprehensive article nomination that was unsuccessful. Please do not modify it.

Near Indosa

 * Nominated by: 501st Tup 15:36, January 6, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

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Object
 * 1) Return of the Jedi
 * 2) * Preliminary objection: There is currently not Behind the scenes. One of those will have to be added. &mdash; Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 17:12, January 6, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) **Okay, I've added a Behind the Scenes section to the article. 501st Tup 17:46, January 6, 2012 (UTC)


 * 1) Lee's charge
 * 2) * Outer Rim needs to be mentioned in the body.
 * 3) **I've mentioned the Outer Rim when telling the location of Near Indosa. 501st Tup 16:09, January 7, 2012 (UTC)
 * 4) * Grid coordinates need to be mentioned in the body.
 * 5) **I've added the coordinates into the body. 501st Tup 14:32, January 7, 2012 (UTC)
 * 6) * Context for Junction-Tierrel Loop, Gordian Reach, Far Indosa system and the Galactic Republic.
 * 7) **I've given some context on them, I think it's enough but I can add more if you want me to. 501st Tup 16:56, January 7, 2012 (UTC)
 * 8) * Source the rest of the body.
 * 9) **Okay, I have sourced the body as much as I could. 501st Tup 16:56, January 7, 2012 (UTC)
 * 10) ***First of all, you don't need to source every sentence. It is enough when you place a tag of the end of a paragraph. For example, you can remove all sourcing tags in the first paragraph and simply put one at the end of the paragraph. Also, refs go after the comma/punctation. For more info, please check Sourcing.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 11:42, January 8, 2012 (UTC)
 * 11) ****Okay, thanks. I've gotten rid of the unnecessary references. 501st Tup 13:10, January 8, 2012 (UTC)
 * 12) *****Good work, but you removed one needed. I assume that we can't source the entire second paragraph to the Holonet, right? So please place a reference tag before the info you can source to the atlas. If you need help, tell me and I'll show you how to edit it.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 14:38, January 8, 2012 (UTC)
 * 13) ******Okay, I've place a reference to The Essential Atlas after the Galactic Republic and it seems okay. (501st Tup 16:24, January 8, 2012 (UTC))
 * 14) *More to come.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 10:03, January 7, 2012 (UTC)
 * 15) * A description section in the body is missing.
 * 16) ** I've added one. 501st Tup 02:05, January 11, 2012 (UTC)
 * 17) * Additionally, you have no mention about the planet's history in the intro.
 * 18) ** Done.501st Tup 02:05, January 11, 2012 (UTC)
 * 19) *If you adress these objections, the article will likely have more then 250 words and has to be brought to the CAN page.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 12:06, January 9, 2012 (UTC)
 * 20) ** Okay I'll move it over after the objections are met and the article is archived. 501st Tup 02:05, January 11, 2012 (UTC)
 * 21) ***I'll give it a look once it is at the GAN.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 13:40, January 11, 2012 (UTC)
 * 22) Exiled Jedi
 * 23) * Please state that the first Death Star was destroyed at Yavin, rather than just the Death Star.
 * 24) ** Okay, I've changed it. 501st Tup 18:52, January 8, 2012 (UTC)
 * 25) * Please state the names of the two mining worlds in the Far Indosa system.
 * 26) ** I searched through The Essential Atlas and looked at the Far Indosa system article and both don't identify the two mining worlds, thus I cannot name them. 501st Tup 20:25, January 8, 2012 (UTC)
 * 27) *Please take a look at my copy-edit.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  17:19, January 8, 2012 (UTC)
 * 28) *Right now the article is at 217 words, which means that you will need to section the article per rule 14. After you do this, the article will probably go to the GAN page. Here is an example of a good article that has been sectioned, if you need a guide.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  17:24, January 8, 2012 (UTC)
 * 29) **I've sectioned the article and the word count is around 230. 501st Tup 20:30, January 8, 2012 (UTC)
 * 30) ***I'll review the article again once it is on the GAN page.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  21:21, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Comments
 * This article will be moved to GAN once all objections have been met and the article has been archived. 501st Tup 02:05, January 11, 2012 (UTC)