Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Ton Phanan


 * ''The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a featured article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.

(5 Inqs/1 Users/6 Total)
Support
 * 1) Havac 02:54, 10 November 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Harrar 12:18, 10 November 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) Thefourdotelipsis 01:04, 11 November 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) Green Tentacle (Talk) 19:48, 13 November 2007 (UTC)
 * 5) --  Darth Culator  (Talk) 21:31, 15 November 2007 (UTC)
 * 6) Imperialles 20:42, 18 November 2007 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) From the ghostly apparition of Atarumaster88's desk
 * 2) * You say that Trigit knew that "it was an ambush", but he had planned an ambush of the New Reps. Please clarify this. Para 2 of Trapping Trigit.
 * 3) *Seriously, the word "ambush" is so overused in those sections that I could gag.
 * 4) *I will pull a Goodwood and demand a link to starfighter combat, since the word "dogfight" is used in the article. Demand it!
 * 5) *Have a *mutters something* Some kinda zombie Inq 04:20, 14 November 2007 (UTC)
 * 6) **See about that, Captain Happy. Havac 04:28, 14 November 2007 (UTC)
 * 7) Quotes need to be formatted correctly per this CT. Also, the "eras" field of the infobox needs to be refed. --Imperialles 13:05, 18 November 2007 (UTC)
 * 8) *Eras are reffed, and those quotes are formatted correctly. Havac 19:58, 18 November 2007 (UTC)
 * 9) **No, they're not. Read the outcome of the CT. --Imperialles 20:02, 18 November 2007 (UTC)

Comments
 * In the intro you say he was wounded at Yavin, but throughout you say he was wounded at Endor. My memory says Endor, but I was just wondering if this was a mistake or if he was wounded on two separate occasions. Great article.Harrar 12:17, 10 November 2007 (UTC)
 * Typo. Havac 19:25, 10 November 2007 (UTC)
 * I thought it was considered better to avoid dialogue in quotes? Other than that, good stuff. Toprawa and Ralltiir 20:13, 11 November 2007 (UTC)
 * I despise the play-by-play in this article, but if the other Inqs (besides the writer) are okay with it, then I won't make an issue of it. Poor Phanan's been Havaced. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 04:20, 14 November 2007 (UTC)