Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/S'hrah


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S'hrah

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 17:11, December 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: I'm a article writer and not a....

(2 ECs/3 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1) Dangit man, I'm not a doctor! Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 18:15, December 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Doctor who?-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 20:19, December 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Doctor-Donna, Cal. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 23:06, January 3, 2012 (UTC)
 * 4) Tinwe (comlink) 15:58, January 14, 2012 (UTC)
 * 5)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  21:29, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Object
 * Category:Individuals of unidentified species. This could possibly be a SOFIXIT, but I've noticed this on so many of your noms lately. Please see if you can watch that. Otherwise, looks good. -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 20:16, December 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) *Indeed. Thanks for the review.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 20:17, December 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) "Known to have no tolerance for any discipline outside medicine, [he taught many pupils, including Jos Vondar,] who would later become a surgeon on the planet Drongar. " This is run-on sentence as it's an apositive within an apositive. Needs rejiggering.  NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 06:58, January 2, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) *While I do not understand a single word written above (:P), I somehow adressed this objection I believe. Take a look.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 11:47, January 2, 2012 (UTC)
 * 4) **It's deceptively difficult to explain for such a minor mistake. :p But grammars are grammared. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 23:06, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

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