Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations



This page is for the nomination of "comprehensive articles". For a list of "comprehensive articles", see Category:Wookieepedia comprehensive articles.


 * Comprehensive article nominations history
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What is a "comprehensive article?"

A "comprehensive article" is an article that contains all information regarding the topic. Often, "comprehensive articles" cannot reach Featured or Good Article status due to their limited content. This process is intended to recognize articles that contain all relevant canon information, yet are still under the 250 word limit required for a Good Article. The purpose of this is twofold&mdash;firstly, to help users distinguish what is a stub, and what is merely a short article with no further relevant material to be added, and, more importantly, to highlight for the reader when they are reading something that has been judged definitely "comprehensive"&mdash;that is, a guarantee to the reader that whatever they are reading contains the sum total of all available content.

Nominations and promotions of the Comprehensive article process are overseen by a collective of users known as the "EduCorps," which is made up of the Inquisitorius, the AgriCorps, and various other experienced users who are considered qualified to adequately judge the nominated material.

Lucasfilm Ltd. and its many licensees continue to expand the Star Wars universe. Since new information might become available, it may be necessary to revoke a "comprehensive article's" status. A forum will be used to nominate articles that have fallen out-of-date. Members of the EduCorps will then post a warning template on that page, and a grace period of one week will be instituted in which the article can be improved. If there is a significant amount of new information, it is likely that once updated, the article will become eligible for Good article status, and thereby ineligible for Comprehensive article status.

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An article must&hellip;


 * 1) &hellip;be well-written and detailed.
 * 2) &hellip;be unbiased, non-point of view.
 * 3) &hellip;be sourced with all available sources and appearances.
 * 4) &hellip;follow the Manual of Style, Layout Guide, and all other policies on Wookieepedia. This is, of course, within reason. If a topic only has a very limited degree of content that cannot be divided up into the relevant article sections, it is not required that it follow the Layout Guide precisely. This is to be judged on a case-by-case basis.
 * 5) &hellip;following the review process, be stable, i.e., does not change significantly from day to day and is not the subject of ongoing edit wars. This does not apply to vandalism and protection or semi-protection as a result of vandalism.
 * 6) &hellip;not be tagged with any sort of improvement tags (i.e. more sources, expand, etc).
 * 7) &hellip;have no redlinks.
 * 8) &hellip;have all relevant canon information presented.
 * 9) &hellip;be completely referenced for all available material and sources. See Sourcing for more information. While this is not required for an article possessing a singular source, it is encouraged, as it provides both uniformity and a good infrastructure should the topic be referenced in any future materials.
 * 10) &hellip;have all quotes and images sourced.
 * 11) &hellip;provide at least one relevant quote on the article if available.
 * 12) &hellip;include a "Behind the scenes" section for in-universe articles.
 * 13) &hellip;counting the introduction, the article body, and "Behind the scenes" material, must not exceed 250 words in length (not including captions, quotes, or headers, etc). Any articles exceeding the limit should be taken to the Good article nominations page for consideration.

How to nominate:


 * 1) First, nominate an article you find is worthy of comprehensive status, putting it at the bottom of the list below. Nominated articles must meet all thirteen requirements stated above.
 * 2) Add CAnom at the top of the article you are nominating.
 * 3) Be sure to place sign in the "Nominated by" line when the nomination is posted for voting.
 * 4) Others will object to the nomination if they disagree that the article is good enough; they will then supply reasons for doing so, and ways to improve the article in accordance with the established rules.
 * 5) Nominators and supporters will adjust the article until the objectors (with reasonable objections) are satisfied. Objectors may also make alterations&mdash;if there is any reason for contention on a given point, it should be settled in a civil manner in the nomination field itself.
 * 6) Users may not vote on their own articles.
 * 7) There is no limit to the amount of nominations a given user can submit at any given time.

How to vote:


 * 1) Before doing anything, be sure to read the article completely, keeping a sharp eye out for mistakes.
 * 2) Afterward, compare the article to the criteria listed above, and then either support or object the article's nomination.
 * 3) *If you object, please supply concrete reasons for doing so, and how it can be improved.
 * 4) As stated above, any objections will be looked upon by the nominator, supporters, and anyone willing to improve the article, and action will be taken to please the objectors. Do not strike other users' objections; it is up to the objector to review the changes and strike if they are satisfied.
 * 5) There are several ways in which an article can receive the required number of votes. Within a 48-hour period of nomination, only EduCorps votes will count towards the total, although anyone may choose to vote in that window. If two members of the EduCorps support a nomination in that window, and there are no outstanding objections, the article can be considered a "Comprehensive article" and be tagged with the template 48 hours after the initial nomination.  The talk page will also be tagged with the CA template. When the 48 hours are up, any user's votes will contribute towards the total. If one EduCorps member has voted for an article after a week, three regular votes will be required. After the 48 hour period, an article can still also pass with just two EduCorps votes.
 * 6) Once a nomination is successful, it will be placed on the Comprehensive article list. Instructions on how to archive nominations, successful or otherwise, can be found here. Anyone can archive a nomination&mdash;just make sure it has the correct number of votes, has been nominated for at least a week (or 48 hours if there are two EC votes), and that there are absolutely no outstanding objections. If you are not sure how to do this, just ask, and someone will likely be more than willing to help you. Also, if you think you can slip one past us, think again&mdash;someone is always watching you.

All nominations will be considered idle and are subject to instantaneous removal by EduCorps members if objections are not addressed, or at least not answered, after a period of 2 weeks.

Anti-Alien League

 * Nominated by:  Darth Karika  will destroy your planet! 21:57, January 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Something different for a change.

(2 ECs/2 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 17:39, January 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2)  Menkooroo 17:22, February 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3)  Holocron Greatholocron.jpg (Complain) 21:32, February 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) --Eyrezer 10:24, February 21, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * Gorton Colu has a CSWE entry and is mentioned in the KOTOR Strategy Guide --- do you know if either of those sources mention the Anti-alien league?
 * Nope, no mention in the CSWE.
 * Strategy Guide? SoresuMakashi might be able to help you out; he GA'd Colu.
 * I'll see if he can help.  Darth Karika  will destroy your planet! 15:09, January 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * Awesome! Let me know when you find out whether or not the league is mentioned (directly or indirectly) in the strategy guide.Menkooroo 04:45, January 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * No mention in the guide.  Darth Karika  will destroy your planet! 17:02, February 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * Thanks for checking that out. I saw some of the inquiries you made on various talk pages --- good hustle! Menkooroo 17:22, February 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * "The Anti-Alien League was a Humanocentrist group formed by Gorton Colu" is currently sourced to The Essential Atlas.
 * Resourced.
 * I could and should fix this one myself, but it'll be handy for you to know if you don't already: Only use punctuation in image captions if it's a complete sentence. Menkooroo 02:43, January 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * Fixed.  Darth Karika  will destroy your planet! 04:06, January 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * Rubefacient
 * Context of Taris's multiple cities should be added.
 * Done.
 * Mention that aliens were prohibited from UpCity under normal conditions. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 02:59, January 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * Done.
 * There needs to be a year in the intro
 * Try now.
 * I'm sorry, I was confused by the banner. Because of that banner, I think this should be made with a History section to avoid the dissonance caused by it. I'll not force you to, but it would probably be beneficial. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 02:59, January 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * I've moved the image over. Does this help?
 * Greatly. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 17:39, January 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * You say the league was mentioned in the game in the body but say it appeared in the BTS.
 * Corrected.
 * Because the article assumes 100% completion, you do not need the clause saying he could be avoided. That is, unless you include the alternate dialogue tracks (which you should).
 * Alternate dialogue tracks? There are no others that mention the League.  Darth Karika  will destroy your planet! 15:09, January 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * Revan can ignore the man, can agree with his speciesism, or tell him to screw off. Which of these elicits the mention? If it is the lattermost, remove the portion saying that Colu mentioned it to Revan and say that he could mention it to Revan given the proper dialogue in the BTS. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 02:59, January 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * I believe he mentions it the first time Revan talks to him (and before any dialogue choices come up).  Darth Karika  will destroy your planet! 04:26, January 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * Then say that Revan can choose not to speak to him. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 01:00, January 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * Done.  Darth Karika  will destroy your planet! 13:00, January 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * Sorry for the runaround. I couldn't wrap my head around it the right way. :) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 17:39, January 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * Speciesism FTW NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 05:17, January 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * I think the article should go into more detail about the player's potential conversations with Colu, The player can agree with him or refute him, if I remember correctly, and the reactions of the side characters (the Wookiee and the Twi'lek) change as well. This should probably all be mentioned in BTS. ~ SavageBob 06:24, February 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * While that might work in Colu's article, in no other place in Colu's dialogue does it even remotely mention the League.  Darth Karika  will destroy your planet! 01:12, February 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * Isn't it still pertinent, though, since Colu is out touting the league? ~ SavageBob 16:21, February 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * Okay, try now.  Darth Karika  will destroy your planet! 19:21, February 26, 2011 (UTC)
 * I think that should be in the BTS; the party doesn't have to include Zaalbar or Mission at that point. Instead, I think you should mention that "If the party includes Mission or Zaalbar, they react to his anti-alien rant by blah blah blah" and/or "Colu reacts to the Wookiee and Twi'lek by saying blah blah blah." ~ SavageBob 19:40, February 26, 2011 (UTC)
 * Try now.  Darth Karika  will destroy your planet! 20:00, February 26, 2011 (UTC)
 * Sorry to keep harping on this, but it goes beyond even that. If either the Wookiee or the Twi'lek is in the party, Colu does chide Revan. But there are further levels of interaction depending on whether Revan agrees or disagrees with Colu's rant. If you have the game saved near hear, play through with the two in your party and you'll see what I mean. If not, try to find the dialogue files or a video walkthrough. ~ SavageBob 20:27, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

Comments
 * Also, guest nom for WP:KOTOR.  Darth Karika  will destroy your planet! 21:58, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Obitoki

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 21:37, February 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Now Podracing: there's a sport. At least when it's real podracing, where as long as you take off your helmet and shed your gloves no one can say a damn thing until someone's knees touch the ice.

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support


 * 1) Jinzler 10:57, February 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) If you ask me, this article is obi-toki, er, okey-dokey! ~ SavageBob 16:16, March 2, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * Are you sure this guy actually exist in canon? The Complete Cross-sections states that 18 racer qualified to the Boonta, and Obitoki is not one of them. Furthermore, the novel incorrectly identifies the racers in the scene where Obitoki is first mentioned. It mentions Obitoki, Elan Mak, and Habba Kee passing Anakin in the second lap, but in the film they are Ark Roose, Gasgano and Teemto. Obitoki's scenes doesn't fit well with the film, but the two could be "merged" by stating that Obitoki, Elan Mak and Habba Kee and Ark Roose, Gasgano and Teemto all surpassed Anakin. Darth Morrt 22:46, February 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * How about I just update it with an Ambig tag and beef up the Bts with the explaination? NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 20:49, February 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * It'd be OK. Darth Morrt 08:56, February 26, 2011 (UTC)
 * Episode I: Incredible Cross-Sections This is the CS book you were referring to? NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 18:01, February 26, 2011 (UTC)
 * Yes, it is. The book says: "Eighteen Podracers, many well known at Mos Espa, qualify for the great Boonta Eve Race, in which nine-year old Anakin..." And there are listed the names of 18 racer and pictures of their podracers. Obitoki, Habba Kee and Xelbree, the three racers unique to the novelization are not among the 18 listed in the cross-sections book. Additionally, Obitoki is mentioned in the script of TPM. Darth Morrt 21:43, February 26, 2011 (UTC)
 * Updated for these sources. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 02:58, March 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * I think it would be useful if you created a Podracer (profession) article to link to. The current podracer article seems to double for both podracer pods and the individuals that flew them, but I think we can justify a separate article. --Jinzler 11:27, February 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * Done. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 20:51, February 26, 2011 (UTC)
 * Isn't there a source to state that Anakin is the only Human who can podrace? If so, it's probably worth noting that Obitoki was a non-Human. (Also, not required, but a link to his CUSWE page would be nice as an external link.) ~ SavageBob 02:11, February 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * Never mind; CSWE says "very few Humans could do it." He does have a CSWE entry, though, which has some info that needs incorporating (such as the fact that he's non-Human, and that he is a canonical podracer from the Boonta Eve Classic ). ~ SavageBob 02:14, February 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * Sorry, the entry is ambiguous over whether he raced in the Boonta. But he did race against Sebulba and experience the mishaps explained in TPM novel, just maybe not when TPM novel says. ~ SavageBob 18:12, February 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * Does the entry confirm he is male? Otherwise updated. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 02:58, March 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * Here's the full entry: "Obitoki An alien Podracer who competed against Sebulba during the final years of the Galactic Republic. Sebulba used the heat vents on his Podracer to cut through Obitoki's engines, knocking Obitoki out of the race. Another Podracer, Habba, was also knocked out by flying into Obitoki's debris." . So, no gender specified. If I were you, though I'd consider the CSWE stuff canon, but not the stuff from the novel, since that seems to contradict most other sources. In other words, can we assume his race was on Tatooine or in the Boonta Eve Classic? ~ SavageBob 23:29, March 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * We can't assume it was on Tatooine (I got it in my head that Sebulba only raced there. :P), but I think the generic scenario of the book's story should be fine to include, which gives extra detail on why his pod crashed. Updated again, and thanks for taking the time to transcribe that. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 00:24, March 2, 2011 (UTC)


 * You'll need to source the bit about him being mentioned in the script, as the script isn't a commercially available product like the novelization is. A google search for "The Phantom Menace script" oughtta gitcha whatcha need. Menkooroo 06:58, March 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * Done. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 22:29, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

Comments
 * Is he/she mentioned in Star Wars Episode I The Phantom Menace: Illustrated Screenplay? ~ SavageBob 22:44, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

High Squibbian Law

 * Nominated by: ~ SavageBob 06:12, February 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Possession is nine-hundred-and-ninety-nine one-thousandths of the law.

(1 ECs/0 Users/1 Total)
Support
 * 1) Ugorian Divine Law next? :) Menkooroo 01:36, March 1, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * I think that you could perhaps mention the timeframe in which the law was cited on Almas, just to clarify that the law was applied during the time of the Galactic Empire. --Jinzler 17:05, March 2, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Defending Your Freedom

 * Nominated by: QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 19:55, February 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Combo x4

(3 ECs/0 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1)  OLIOSTER   (talk) 13:32, February 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Menkooroo 16:09, March 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) ~ SavageBob 06:51, March 4, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * No information on when it was released?  OLIOSTER  (talk) 03:39, February 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nope. Artistic Integrity was their latest release, and Totally Patriotic came before that. However, we don't know when specifically Totally Patriotic was released. Could be in the same 0 ABY-4 ABY timeframe, could be earlier. QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 13:21, February 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * Food for thought: Should songs have the in-universe media infobox? mediatype=song. It seems like it applies. Menkooroo 09:56, February 26, 2011 (UTC)
 * Probably. I just have one question regarding the era field. I don't think that eras apply here, because, unlike a painting which can be lost or destroyed, a song will potentially exist forever once it's been written. Any thoughts? QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 18:08, February 26, 2011 (UTC)
 * How about something like... "Rebellion era and later" ? Menkooroo 14:08, February 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * Which brings us to another problem. We don't know when the album was released; we only know that it already existed during the Rebellion era, but it could've been released before the Battle of Yavin. So saying "Rebellion era and later" would be incorrect as it could've existed in "Rise of the Empire era" as well. QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 18:32, February 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * Maybe something a bit more ambiguous, like... "As early as the Rebellion era" ? Maybe throw in an "at least" at the beginning? Menkooroo 00:10, February 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * Should this use the in-universe media infobox? ~ SavageBob 18:14, February 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * See above, Bob ;) QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 18:32, February 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * OK, I don't want to break into the discussion with Menkooroo above, but In history/genealogy, you'll often see "by [date]", so that could be an option for the era (or just leave it off completely). ~ SavageBob 15:57, February 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * Ooooh I like that better. "By the Rebellion era" . Nice. Menkooroo 01:33, March 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * Thanks guys for your input. Check out the newly added super nice infobox :) QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 15:28, March 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * Cool! I have one other concern: Is it proper to capitalize "The" in "The Emperor's New Clothes" when it doesn't begin a sentence? If the OS does this, I'll drop it, but otherwise, I'd think the the should be lowercase like here: "I went to see the Beatles play, but all I got was the Who." ~ SavageBob 16:19, March 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * Hmm, Galaxy Guide does not use their name in mid-sentence; it mostly uses "the band" or somesuch. However, I don't think it should be in lowercase. "The" is part of the proper name of the band; I believe it falls under the same grammar rules as, say, movie titles. We don't say character X appeared in the Phantom Menace; we say that he/she/it appeared in The Phantom Menace. Take The Beatles for example. I know Wikipedia isn't the most reliable source, but it's an FA, and the band name is spelled in all uppercase throughout the article. There's been a lengthy debate regarding this matter, which has some interesting food for thought on the topic. QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 17:42, March 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * Hmm. Count me firmly in the the camp, but as it's ambiguous without some sort of CT, I can live with it. ~ SavageBob 06:51, March 4, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

The New Order (song)

 * Nominated by: QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 20:00, February 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Combo x7

(1 ECs/0 Users/1 Total)
Support
 * 1) Menkooroo 06:13, March 4, 2011 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Artistic Integrity (song)

 * Nominated by: QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 20:00, February 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Combo x8

(1 ECs/0 Users/1 Total)
Support
 * 1) Do Ars Dangor (correspondent) next! Menkooroo 13:47, March 4, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * The bts states that "Latest Developments: The Emperor's New Clothes versus Deeply Religious" is an IU report --- if that's the case, shouldn't it have its own article? As far as I know, IU stories in old WEG sourcebooks, no matter how brief they are, should get their own articles (some examples being The Ordeal of Boba Fett and Gottu and His Vibroaxe). This would also necessitate it being added to the article's "Appearances" section using the WEG template, aaaaaaand if the song isn't mentioned in any part of the sourcebook other than the short story, then I think the sourcebook may have to be removed from the sources list. Not... entirely sure about that one, but I think so. Menkooroo 06:13, March 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * The song is mentioned both in the book proper and the "Latest Developments" bit. I believe this should be addressed now; please take another look. QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 13:09, March 4, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Totally Patriotic (The Emperor's New Clothes song)

 * Nominated by: QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 20:44, February 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Combo x9

(1 ECs/0 Users/1 Total)
Support
 * 1) Menkooroo 06:13, March 4, 2011 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Airten

 * Nominated by: Hanzo Hasashi 17:15, February 26, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Alliance Sympathizer.

(1 ECs/0 Users/1 Total)
Support
 * 1) Menkooroo 15:08, March 2, 2011 (UTC)

Object

Comments
 * According to card statistics, supports Luke on Bespin? Should that be added to his BTS, and if so, should it be proof he was on Bespin during its takeover in 3 ABY? Same applies for already-comprehensive article Kuep. Hanzo Hasashi 17:15, February 26, 2011 (UTC)
 * Card seems to indicate that he may support Luke on Bespin --- if the player wants him to. I don't think that means he necessarily does. I think the article's fine not mentioning it. Menkooroo 15:08, March 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the input. Hanzo Hasashi 00:19, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

Hakin

 * Nominated by: Hanzo Hasashi 17:15, February 26, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Former Skiff Racer.

(1 ECs/0 Users/1 Total)
Support
 * 1) Menkooroo 06:33, March 4, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * The sentence beginning with "In 0 BBY" is very long and winding with a lot of commas. Can you break it up into multiple sentences?
 * Done.
 * Can you give a more specific reference for Ref #5 (ie, a specific card)? Menkooroo 01:34, March 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * Overlooked the fact that what I was citing did not have any url :/. Now taken care of. Hanzo Hasashi 05:09, March 4, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Yount

 * Nominated by: Hanzo Hasashi 17:15, February 26, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Obscure Imperial governor.

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Object

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Maer

 * Nominated by: Hanzo Hasashi 17:15, February 26, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Tauntaun Handler.

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Object

Comments
 * Like with Airten, Maer's statistics say he supports Luke on Hoth. Worth noting? Hanzo Hasashi 17:15, February 26, 2011 (UTC)
 * Guess not. Hanzo Hasashi 00:19, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

Civé Rashon

 * Nominated by: Hanzo Hasashi 17:15, February 26, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Leader of Obsidian Squadron.

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) I wonder if she was the one that hit the asteroid... NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 22:48, February 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) I question whether the retcon tag is needed; pretty much any character named in one of the RPGs or CCGs is a retcon, but we tend not to use the tag. But *shrug*. ~ SavageBob 23:44, February 27, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Rubedo thinks he's started a trend
 * 2) * "In 3 ABY, Civé Rashon and her squadron participated in the Imperial occupation of Cloud City on the gas giant Bespin[1] in pursuit of the Rebel starship the Millennium Falcon." Missing word?
 * 3) **I don't think so, should I add another word? Hanzo Hasashi 19:45, February 26, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) * Bts needs to say she was mentioned on her wingman's card.
 * 5) **Will do.
 * 6) * Since you source her doing things to ESB, shouldn't it sayshe appeared in ESB.
 * 7) **An explaination of this retcon would be called for in the Bts. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 18:28, February 26, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) ***She is not in ESB, her fighter is though. At first I had that in the info, but I then looked at the good articles Starck and Nevar, whose AT-AT's were destroyed in ESB, and neither of their behind the scenes mention ESB at all. Hanzo Hasashi 18:46, February 26, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) ****She is flying the fighter per your article. All three of these articles are textbook cases of with a Ret tag. Furthermore, neither of those articles sources the characters' actions to the movie: they source them to the books in which Blizzard # was probably mentioned as blowing up. In Cive's case, there is no such confirmation that Obsidian flew after the Falcon in ESB to my recollection.  NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 19:26, February 26, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) *****The Obisidian 1 card shows image of one of the fighters pursuing the Falcon in ESB. And The Complete Star Wars Encyclopedia confirms this was the TIE squadron pursuing the Falcon out of Bespin, I'm going to source the CSWE entry instead of ESB then. Hanzo Hasashi 19:39, February 26, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) ******Now that I've accordingly changed the sourcing, I feel like, as with Starck and Nevar, I will just not mention any appearances, unless you really believe otherwise. Hanzo Hasashi 19:59, February 26, 2011 (UTC)
 * 12) *******I really believe otherwise. She is confirmed as piloting one of the TIEs seen in ESB so it should be marked as a Retcon. Not even as an indirect appearance. Frankly, if that image is really based on a still from the movie, the ESB still should be used in the infobox if the pilot can be vaguely seen. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 20:48, February 26, 2011 (UTC)
 * 13) ********We do not get to see her, just offscreen pilot. Should I also re-add the BTS stuff about her fighter in ESB? Hanzo Hasashi 22:47, February 26, 2011 (UTC)
 * 14) *********Add a note about the CSWE confirming Obsidian chased the Falcon and you'll be golden. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 20:00, February 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 15) **********Alright, but the entry for Obsidian Squadron is what confirms that, and that does not directly mention Rashon as taking part in the pursuit.
 * 16) ***********Never mind, I think I found a way to word it. Hanzo Hasashi 21:18, February 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 17) ************Wewt! NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 22:48, February 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * Related to the above, if it were me, I'd list ESB (and the ESB photocomic) under appearances, but I'd add or something. ~ SavageBob 18:41, February 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * Done. Hanzo Hasashi 21:13, February 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) Cav:
 * 2) *First off, there is absolutely no context for the Falcon in the article. Why was it at Bespin? Why did they escape? Why did the Falcon "unexpectedly" jump to hyperspace? Details are needed.
 * 3) **Think I got it, have added more details.
 * 4) *Rashon, designated OS-72-1, flew the TIE fighter Obsidian 1, the lead starfighter of the Imperial Obsidian Squadron, an elite TIE squadron that served aboard the Star Destroyer Avenger,[1] by the year 3 ABY. Run on sentence - needs to be broken up and revised.
 * 5) **I changed it, what do you think?
 * 6) *No PT? She's a squadron commander, so she is a competent leader and pilot. Also, she is a woman - in an naval service that looks down on women. This should be noted and sourced.
 * 7) **While squadron commanders are supposed to be competent leaders, nothing explicitly says it. While almost certainly that is the case, without official evidence, there's no proof it wasn't just personal connections or simply being a relative of some important Imperial government or military official. However, I could talk about how the Empire looked down on women, and the rareness of female leaders.
 * 8) *Appearance list - no mention of the novels or comics? Any reference to fighters following the Falcon is an indirect mention. I suggest you check your source list.
 * 9) **Well it seems that generally the most obscure characters are not counted as appearing in novels or comics if they themselves are not specifically represented or shown.
 * 10) *And lastly, I say this in all seriousness: This article should be on the GAN page. There is enough material to make this article a GA by fleshing out the details and adding a PT and intro. As evidence that a one mention character on a CCG can be turned into a GA, I present one of my own - Wenton Chan - as proof. - Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 22:31, February 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) **You know what, I do believe that could indeed be the case. As for the objections I haven't addressed, I will take care of them. Hanzo Hasashi 02:39, March 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * 12) ***Is it possible for this to simply be a CA, then maybe in the future, if I put the effort into it, I can expand it? Kulton Woodle is a GA that started as a CA. Hanzo Hasashi 05:11, March 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * 13) ****It is probably worth noting that the article is currently 314 words long, by my count. And the CA limit is 250. --Jinzler 19:38, March 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * 14) *****Eh, that's not how the system works, Hanzo. If an article can be over 250 words, then it should be. That's what the nomination rules say. As the article is more than 250 words, it can not be a CAN. Do you want an EC to remove it, so that you can work on the objections and then GAnom it? 1358  (Talk)  20:34, March 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * 15) ******Let's do that then. Hanzo Hasashi 21:36, March 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * 16) *******However, before that, I would like to make sure I have satisfied Cavalier One's objections, so there are none left before this nom is removed. And, if possible, can you, Jinzler and Cav be sure to give input on the GA nom when the time comes? Hanzo Hasashi 22:24, March 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * 17) ********At the moment, I'm satisfied that this will be heading to the GAN page ... but it will be given a more stringent review over there than it was here. The source list objection is one you may have to consider looking into more thoroughly. - Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 09:58, March 4, 2011 (UTC)

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Fun World Founder's Day

 * Nominated by: Another holiday, another PAR-TAY! Just don't try to get married. ~ SavageBob 03:12, February 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

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 * 1) Menkooroo 07:32, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

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Fizz-Pop Cap (with foil cluster)

 * Nominated by: ~ SavageBob 03:33, February 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: You know you wish you had one.

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 * It just occurred to me that "Fizz-Pop Cap" could refer to some sort of pop-top from a soda can instead of the actual hat/cap Spilfer is shown to be wearing. Am I right to assume that "Cap" here is the hat? What do others think? ~ SavageBob 03:02, March 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * Upon further reflection, it's too ambiguous; infobox duly gutted. ~ SavageBob 06:50, March 4, 2011 (UTC)

Balderdash

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 04:53, March 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: I have two. Number One: Win on the parts of Mr. Hidalgo and Mr. Ens. *applause* Number Two: A prime example of why Wookieepedia is so addicting. You never know what you might turn up just before you sign off.

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Terrafin

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 05:11, March 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: I'd like to officially motion we begin referring to the "duck test" as the "terrafin test" so it is more alliterative and "Star Warsy."

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 * 1) Hanzo Hasashi 05:13, March 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2)  OLIOSTER   (talk) 12:52, March 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * I'm never quite sure what qualifies as a sofixit or not, but could you possible add "dish" or something similar to "had a serving of this for breakfast the day"?  OLIOSTER  (talk) 17:02, March 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * Done. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 20:09, March 2, 2011 (UTC)

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Fighter (painting)

 * Nominated by:  OLIOSTER  (talk) 01:54, March 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: I will keep nomming paintings until there are no more to nom! MUAHAHAHAHAHA!  OLIOSTER  (talk) 01:54, March 4, 2011 (UTC)

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 * Again, me fail at precise description, so any help is appreciated.  OLIOSTER  (talk) 01:59, March 4, 2011 (UTC)

Galactic Solutions Industries

 * Nominated by:  Holocron Greatholocron.jpg (Complain) 14:09, March 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Not a very large company...

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