Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Unidentified Naboo homestead owner


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Unidentified Naboo homestead owner

 * Nominated by: Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 20:49, August 3, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Brave man running across the field in a battle

(3 ECs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1)  QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 15:32, August 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2)  SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 10:36, August 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) Menkooroo 15:01, August 25, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4)  Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 20:15, September 11, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) I made some minor tweaks; take a look. --  1358  (Talk) 20:26, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) How do you know that he is a Human and a Naboo native? It is not stated in the game. All we know is that he was a male who lived on Naboo by 32 BBY; it was not necessarily his homeworld.  QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 08:51, August 5, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) *He runs across the screen and has the same sprite of the other human civilians, and "homeworld" is used in the general sense of place of residence. I once saw a Talk Page post explaining the nuances.
 * 3) **Hmm, I have not noticed him running around before. Every time I saved him, he was driving a vehicle, but I'll take your word on it. Regarding homeworld, no, it is always used in a sense of the place where the individual was born and/or spent his youth. QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 11:23, August 11, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) ***He runs out right when the second wave of STAPS appear. Talk page discussion:[|]. Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 15:58, August 11, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) * Unidentified is not to be used inside an actual article.
 * 6) * Please standardize your capitalization of homestead. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 05:48, August 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 7) **Nixed. Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 10:00, August 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 8) Cav
 * 9) * Since he apparently has dialogue, do we know who voiced him? - Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 09:46, September 3, 2010 (UTC)
 * 10) **Well, there are several options, such as "Escapee," "Male farmer" or even Ned Greely. There just is no way to tell. Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 20:00, September 11, 2010 (UTC)
 * 11) Xd1358
 * 12) * Could you start the article like "This human Male owned a homestead...", because the current wording almost implies that the article title is not conjectural?
 * 13) *Add that he lives in the Naboo countryside.
 * 14) *Please find a synonym for "man," such as "individual."
 * 15) *"This man appears as a side-quest in the video game Star Wars: Battle for Naboo." I think he rather appears in a side-quest.
 * 16) *Release date for BfN?
 * 17) *"&hellip;and fulfill a bonus objective." Is saving him the bonus objective or do you need to save him so that you can fulfill the objective?
 * 18) *-- 1358  (Talk) 12:54, September 7, 2010 (UTC)
 * 19) **All of the above addresed, but did I bold correctly? And thanks for checking it out. Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 20:00, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Comments
 * Note some of the changes I made --- in particular, it's always advisable to mention the species and sex in the article's body, and one-sentence paragraphs should be avoided. Good work, though! Menkooroo 15:01, August 25, 2010 (UTC)