Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Eminence (Carrack-class)


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Eminence (Carrack-class)

 * Nominated by: Kilson Likes PIE 17:16, 30 July 09 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Probably should have nominated this a long time ago, goes along with the Braha'tok and Tortarak.

(4 ACs/1 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1) Objection addressed via IRC  JangFett  Talk 20:32, 3 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 2)  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  13:03, 12 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 3)  CC7567  (talk) 04:51, 17 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) Toprawa and Ralltiir 01:09, 21 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 5)  IFYLOFD  ( You will pay the price for your lack of vision! ) 21:31, 21 August 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) IFYLOFD:
 * 2) * Infobox not fully sourced.
 * 3) * "During the battle, the Eminence engaged the Braha'tok-class gunship the Braha'tok, a ship less than one third of the cruiser's size. " Doesn't flow well, too many "the"s.
 * 4) * Lots of overlinking.
 * 5) * Mention its involvement in the Galactic Civil War in History.
 * 6) * IFYLOFD  ( You will pay the price for your lack of vision! ) 02:32, 31 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 7) **OK, your objections are addressed. Kilson Likes PIE 01:42, 02 August 09 (UTC)
 * 8) "Emperor Palpatine, who was currently on the Death Star, was planning on the Rebel Alliance's fleet attacking the Death Star while they had the chance to destroy the superweapon before it was done, and devised a plan to stop them" Quite confusing, this doesn't make sense if you read it. It should be "Emperor Palpatine, who was currently on the Death Star, predicted the Rebel Alliance's fleet would attack.." or something like that.  JangFett  Talk 04:47, 3 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 9) Tranner, I'd like to meet you on IRC sometime to discuss this article. I feel that there may be too much info not directly related to the ship. I'd like to hear what you think about this.  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  12:55, 12 August 2009 (UTC)

Comments

Vote to remove nomination (AC only)
 * 1) Nominator has recently been blocked from editing for a significantly extended period of time. The article can be re-nominated if and when the nominator returns. Toprawa and Ralltiir 21:23, 8 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 2)  Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 01:11, 10 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) *In light of Kilson's permanent block, I have decided to take over this nom and will do my best to handle any objections. Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 13:46, 10 August 2009 (UTC)