Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Laze Loneozner


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Laze Loneozner (+4)
Support
 * 1) Cull Tremayne 01:26, 15 February 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Greyman 04:04, 21 February 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) QuentinGeorge 08:17, 21 February 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) Tinwe 14:21, 22 February 2007 (UTC)
 * 5) --Eyrezer 12:28, 3 March 2007 (UTC)
 * 6) Good Article !Darth Nospher 12:36, 3 March 2007 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) The first main paragraph seems to jump straigth into that story without giving any basic context. Could an extra sentence or two be added first to explain it? --Eyrezer 01:13, 23 February 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) *Context regarding the sandsurfing, or Fixer's childhood? I kinda see what you're saying, but either way, we really don't know anything else. If someone can improve it, though, please do. -- Ozzel 05:36, 23 February 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) ** I tend to regard the intro paragraph as separate from the article, so I think it needs a line like "Fixer was a Human male who grew up on Tatooine, in the region around Anchorhead. He was friends with XXX" etc. Then go into the sandsurfing incident. Does that make sense? --Eyrezer 02:58, 24 February 2007 (UTC)

Comments
 * Really good, even the Marvel info is included. Cull Tremayne 01:26, 15 February 2007 (UTC)
 * I always liked it when Marvel would write about Fixer and Camie, good article!Greyman 04:04, 21 February 2007 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the nom. I will say, though, that somebody recently added that he appears in Galaxies, but there isn't any information from that in the article. Perhaps someone more familiar with the game could add it? -- Ozzel 07:58, 21 February 2007 (UTC)