Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/CT-43/002


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CT-43/002

 * Nominated by: QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 15:05, 4 August 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: A rare non-TCW clone nom. Enjoy.

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)
Support
 * 1)  JangFett  Talk 17:39, 5 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 2)  Mauser  Comlink 22:08, 5 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) -- Clone Commander Lee  Talk 10:02, 16 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) Toprawa and Ralltiir 22:49, 20 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 5)  CC7567  (talk) 20:33, 22 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 6)  Graestan ( Talk ) 17:22, 24 August 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Fett
 * 2) * Intro-"CT-43, however, turned out to be the only casualty of the entire squad, which eventually completed its mission" Quite confusing. So when CT-43 died the mission was completed? The "its" needs clarifying.
 * 3) **Reworded the whole sentence.
 * 4) * "Clone trooper CT-43/002 was a clone of bounty hunter Jango Fett, born on the planet of Kamino to serve in the Grand Army of the Republic." I believe like all clone articles, the way this sentence is set up sounds like Jango Fett was also born on Kamino. With the removal of the "Born on Kamino" part, the sentence should flow better.
 * 5) **How does it look now?
 * 6) ***Better. :)
 * 7) * BtS needs sourcing
 * 8) **It's self-sourcing, so it does not.  CC7567  (talk) 23:47, 4 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 9) ***Thanks for correcting me CC.  JangFett  Talk 23:52, 4 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 10) *Great work Qui-Gon. Always good to see non-TCW clone articles once in a while :P  JangFett  Talk 23:36, 4 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 11) **Thanks. QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 15:08, 5 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 12) Before I dive in, I'm wondering if we can keep the term "Muunilinst 10" from looking like an official designation, unless some source explicitly states that it was.  Graestan ( Talk ) 01:43, 7 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 13) *Hmm, if you are talking about the capitalization of "the", then that's how the Insider article spells it. QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 08:19, 7 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 14) **That's OOU. I'm talking IU as this is an IU article. Graestan ( Talk ) 01:25, 16 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 15) ***I still don't quite understand what's the problem with this term. As far as I can tell, it is official. Here is the relevant quote from The Guide to the Grand Army: Captain Fordo led a multiclone task force known as The Muunilinst 10 to capture a Separatist artillery emplacement at Muunilinst. Yes, the article itself is OOU, but it describes IU events. So, could you please clarify your objection? QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 09:46, 20 August 2009 (UTC)

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