Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Buran Borsil


 * ''The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.

Buran Borsil

 * Nominated by: -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 21:51, 30 September 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Part of AckyProject GOSS.

(4 AC/1 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1) -  Cavalier One ( Squadron channel ) 13:05, 1 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) DC 15:34, 1 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) I love these individual user projects.  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  23:23, 2 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) Toprawa and Ralltiir 17:05, 3 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie ) 22:08, 3 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 6) Looks like this will pass before mine :P NaruHina  Talk [[Image:Anakinsolo.png|14px]] 01:40, 6 October 2008 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) DC
 * 2) * "Barosa Warren was not happy with them using the skills he and his staff had imparted on them in this way, and he and Sisquoc had a fierce argument over another, more personal matter." Sentence is very unclear; who's doing what?
 * 3) **Cleared it up a little. Should be better now.
 * 4) * Mention Warren's hatred of Borsil in the P&T.
 * 5) **Added a brief mention.
 * 6) *I know this isn't a valid objection, but if you aren't working on it already, could you fix the redlinks?
 * 7) **I'll probably get them in the next week or so since they'll be linked to from several noms.
 * 8) *Great article Acky, though I don't why you're not taking this towards FA. DC 23:36, 30 September 2008 (UTC)
 * 9) **Thanks for your comments and the review. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 12:14, 1 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 10) Soresu
 * 11) * You used GOSS's once in the overview, but s' everywhere else eg. Class', GOSS'. I thought we already discussed intra-article consistency. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie ) 04:42, 3 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 12) **Whoops. Fixed. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 07:42, 3 October 2008 (UTC)

Comments