Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Mark VII experimental prototype assassin droid


 * ''The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a featured article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.

(5 Inqs/3 Users/8 Total)
Support
 * 1) As nominator.-- Goodwood [[Image:Rebsymbol2.png|20px]] ( For the Rebellion! ) 02:39, 12 December 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Thefourdotelipsis 21:52, 13 December 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) Don't scratch the walls.  Graestan ( This party's over ) 02:02, 14 December 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) Very, very nice.  Victor  ( talk ) 18:51, 14 December 2007 (UTC)
 * 5) Blowing it up is more fun anyway.  Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 03:55, 16 December 2007 (UTC)
 * 6) Taught me something. I always forget about the sound issue. Jorrel [[Image:Wiki-shrinkable.png|20px]] Fraajic 05:43, 16 December 2007 (UTC)
 * 7) Jaina Solo ( Talk ) [[Image:Jainasolosig.gif |25px]] 18:02, 16 December 2007 (UTC)
 * 8)  Greyman ( Paratus ) 23:08, 17 December 2007 (UTC)

Oppose Comments
 * 1) From the squalid cubicle of Graestan:
 * 2) * The infobox image is below my standards. Another one is desirable.
 * 3) **Addressed.
 * 4) * The addition of another image, preferably from the game, would be nice.
 * 5) **Addressed.
 * 6) * Sensor color: Black? Did he nt have tiny yellow circles in his eye sockets? Call me crazy if not.
 * 7) **Very well. You're crazy. ;-)
 * 8) * Check over linking; droid and battle droid should be worked in, at the least.
 * 9) **Addressed, I think.
 * 10) * "Darths Revan and Malak" doesn't read well from my end.
 * 11) **Addressed.
 * 12) * Ebon Hawk doesn't need quotation marks.
 * 13) **Whoops. Holdover from writing it up in MS Word.
 * 14) * A little background on Revan in the main body, at least as much as is in the intro, is necessary to maintain comprehension.
 * 15) **Addressed.
 * 16) * Lose the period in the quote attribution midway through.
 * 17) **Done.
 * 18) * Characteristics/personality/programming section requested. Doesn't have to be long, but the droid's a character more than a model, so I'd like it.
 * 19) **Done, with bonus quote.
 * 20) * The names of the games in the BtS should be italicized and not put in quotations.
 * 21) **Done.
 * 22) * Can we find out who voiced him?
 * 23) **Err...that may be a challenge.
 * 24) ***Talked to Red, and that information is not available.- Goodwood [[Image:Rebsymbol2.png|20px]] ( For the Rebellion! ) 16:41, 13 December 2007 (UTC)
 * 25) * Bullet on the only Source.
 * 26) **Fixed. D'oh!
 * 27) * Graestan ( This party's over ) 03:53, 12 December 2007 (UTC)
 * 28) Source the P/T. Thefourdotelipsis 07:42, 13 December 2007 (UTC)
 * 29) *Whoops. Addressed.-- Goodwood [[Image:Rebsymbol2.png|20px]] ( For the Rebellion! ) 13:21, 13 December 2007 (UTC)
 * Image:MarkVIIheadshot.jpg is very dark&mdash;brighten it a bit. Image:Drdassassin2.jpg is unsourced. --Imperialles 14:07, 13 December 2007 (UTC)
 * 1) From the desk of Atarumaster88
 * 2) * Game mechanics template needed. IIRC, it's possible not to have to deal with the droid, nor equip a sound suppressor.
 * 3) **Addressed and noted in BtS.
 * 4) * The light side template needs to be moved up.
 * 5) **Addressed.
 * 6) * De-capitalize Repair in the BTS.
 * 7) **Done.
 * 8) * More specifics needed on the type of weaponry equipped on the droid.
 * 9) **Done, but they're redlinks so far (will fix presently, though it's currently under the limit).
 * 10) * BTS needs to note that it should be possible not to wear a sound suppressor and just attack the droid directly.
 * 11) **So noted.
 * 12) * "The rogue droid possessed sufficient awareness to realize that it was through such highly-independent and unusual programming that it was able to see the infinite complexities of all organic lifeforms." Repetition of "that it was" is most definitely unoriginal. Reword.
 * 13) **Reworded.
 * 14) * "It was during their quest to locate the mysterious Star Forge, which seemed to be at the heart of the Sith war effort, that prompted such a journey deep into Sith space." Awkward phrasing. Reword.
 * 15) **Ibid.
 * 16) *Have a Super Terrific Friendly Un-frustrating day. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 20:05, 14 December 2007 (UTC)
 * 17) From the mostly silent place of Jorrel Fraajic
 * 18) * Image:RepairMarkVII.jpg - Is it possible to get a shot without actually seeing any physical depiction of Revan? And, if not, is there any way to mention in the caption that the image may not show the canonical depiction of Revan? (Might not be an actual objection, but I didn't want to wast comment room)
 * 19) **Unfortunately, it is not possible to do the former. A caption notation might look bad, and it's within the "may or may not be canon" template anyway. Hope that helps.
 * 20) ***Eh, still think it's quite iffy ... but I'll let it pass. Even though I don't particularly like it. Jorrel Fraajic 05:43, 16 December 2007 (UTC)
 * 21) * Final Escape: Meant to ask you this in IRC, but are the systems shown capitalized like that in-game?
 * 22) **Indeed they are.-- Goodwood [[Image:Rebsymbol2.png|20px]] ( For the Rebellion! ) 03:48, 16 December 2007 (UTC)
 * 23) ***All right then. Guess that's good. Jorrel Fraajic 05:43, 16 December 2007 (UTC)
 * 24) **I guess that's all. Jorrel [[Image:Wiki-shrinkable.png|20px]] Fraajic 23:47, 15 December 2007 (UTC)
 * 25) ***Thanks for reading. :-)-- Goodwood [[Image:Rebsymbol2.png|20px]] ( For the Rebellion! ) 03:48, 16 December 2007 (UTC)
 * 26) ****Not a problem. Jorrel [[Image:Wiki-shrinkable.png|20px]] Fraajic 05:43, 16 December 2007 (UTC)

'''Approved by Inquisitorius 19:21, 19 December 2007 (UTC)
 * This one's been long in development, but finally made the effort to finish it.-- Goodwood [[Image:Rebsymbol2.png|20px]] ( For the Rebellion! ) 02:39, 12 December 2007 (UTC)