Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations



This page is for the nomination of "comprehensive articles". For a list of "comprehensive articles", see Category:Wookieepedia comprehensive articles.


 * Comprehensive article nominations history
 * Comprehensive article nominations archiving checklist

What is a "comprehensive article?"

A "comprehensive article" is an article that contains all information regarding the topic. Often, "comprehensive articles" cannot reach Featured or Good Article status due to their limited content. This process is intended to recognize articles that contain all relevant canon information, yet are still under the 250 word limit required for a Good Article. The purpose of this is twofold&mdash;firstly, to help users distinguish what is a stub, and what is merely a short article with no further relevant material to be added, and, more importantly, to highlight for the reader when they are reading something that has been judged definitely "comprehensive"&mdash;that is, a guarantee to the reader that whatever they are reading contains the sum total of all available content.

Nominations and promotions of the Comprehensive article process are overseen by a collective of users known as the "EduCorps," which is made up of the Inquisitorius, the AgriCorps, and various other experienced users who are considered qualified to adequately judge the nominated material.

Lucasfilm Ltd. and its many licensees continue to expand the Star Wars universe. Since new information might become available, it may be necessary to revoke a "comprehensive article's" status. A forum will be used to nominate articles that have fallen out-of-date. Members of the EduCorps will then post a warning template on that page, and a grace period of one week will be instituted in which the article can be improved. If there is a significant amount of new information, it is likely that once updated, the article will become eligible for Good article status, and thereby ineligible for Comprehensive article status.

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An article must&hellip;


 * 1) &hellip;be well-written and detailed.
 * 2) &hellip;be unbiased, non-point of view.
 * 3) &hellip;be sourced with all available sources and appearances.
 * 4) &hellip;follow the Manual of Style, Layout Guide, and all other policies on Wookieepedia. This is, of course, within reason. If a topic only has a very limited degree of content that cannot be divided up into the relevant article sections, it is not required that it follow the Layout Guide precisely. This is to be judged on a case-by-case basis.
 * 5) &hellip;following the review process, be stable, i.e., does not change significantly from day to day and is not the subject of ongoing edit wars. This does not apply to vandalism and protection or semi-protection as a result of vandalism.
 * 6) &hellip;not be tagged with any sort of improvement tags (i.e. more sources, expand, etc).
 * 7) &hellip;have no redlinks.
 * 8) &hellip;have all relevant canon information presented.
 * 9) &hellip;be completely referenced for all available material and sources. See Sourcing for more information. While this is not required for an article possessing a singular source, it is encouraged, as it provides both uniformity and a good infrastructure should the topic be referenced in any future materials.
 * 10) &hellip;have all quotes and images sourced.
 * 11) &hellip;provide at least one relevant quote on the article if available.
 * 12) &hellip;include a "Behind the scenes" section for in-universe articles.
 * 13) &hellip;counting the introduction, the article body, and "Behind the scenes" material, must not exceed 250 words in length (not including captions, quotes, or headers, etc). Any articles exceeding the limit should be taken to the Good article nominations page for consideration.

How to nominate:


 * 1) First, nominate an article you find is worthy of comprehensive status, putting it at the bottom of the list below. Nominated articles must meet all thirteen requirements stated above.
 * 2) Add CAnom at the top of the article you are nominating.
 * 3) Be sure to place sign in the "Nominated by" line when the nomination is posted for voting.
 * 4) Others will object to the nomination if they disagree that the article is good enough; they will then supply reasons for doing so, and ways to improve the article in accordance with the established rules.
 * 5) Nominators and supporters will adjust the article until the objectors (with reasonable objections) are satisfied. Objectors may also make alterations&mdash;if there is any reason for contention on a given point, it should be settled in a civil manner in the nomination field itself.
 * 6) Users may not vote on their own articles.
 * 7) There is no limit to the amount of nominations a given user can submit at any given time.

How to vote:


 * 1) Before doing anything, be sure to read the article completely, keeping a sharp eye out for mistakes.
 * 2) Afterward, compare the article to the criteria listed above, and then either support or object the article's nomination.
 * 3) *If you object, please supply concrete reasons for doing so, and how it can be improved.
 * 4) As stated above, any objections will be looked upon by the nominator, supporters, and anyone willing to improve the article, and action will be taken to please the objectors. Do not strike other users' objections; it is up to the objector to review the changes and strike if they are satisfied.
 * 5) There are several ways in which an article can receive the required number of votes. Within a 48-hour period of nomination, only EduCorps votes will count towards the total, although anyone may choose to vote in that window. If two members of the EduCorps support a nomination in that window, and there are no outstanding objections, the article can be considered a "Comprehensive article" and be tagged with the template 48 hours after the initial nomination.  The talk page will also be tagged with the CA template. When the 48 hours are up, any user's votes will contribute towards the total. If one EduCorps member has voted for an article after a week, three regular votes will be required. After the 48 hour period, an article can still also pass with just two EduCorps votes.
 * 6) Once a nomination is successful, it will be placed on the Comprehensive article list. Instructions on how to archive nominations, successful or otherwise, can be found here. Anyone can archive a nomination&mdash;just make sure it has the correct number of votes, has been nominated for at least a week (or 48 hours if there are two EC votes), and that there are absolutely no outstanding objections. If you are not sure how to do this, just ask, and someone will likely be more than willing to help you. Also, if you think you can slip one past us, think again&mdash;someone is always watching you.

All nominations will be considered idle and are subject to instantaneous removal by EduCorps members if objections are not addressed, or at least not answered, after a period of 2 weeks.

Brangus Glee

 * Nominated by: Menkooroo 04:34, November 9, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: So here's what you missed last week on Glee.

(1 ECs/0 Users/1 Total)
Support
 * 1) Since the game mechanics thing is still being debated (and I'm so busy with school that I can't participate in that debate as much as I'd like), I can't object on something that is not established in policy one way or another. ~ SavageBob 06:38, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Isn't he based on an unused concept alien from ROTJ? If so, you probably should talk about that and add some sources for wherever that maquette has appeared. I'll check Chronicles for you when I get a chance. ~ SavageBob 05:53, November 9, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) *I think he's just a realistic-looking dude from the CCG. Wookieepedia editors in the past thought he was from the cantina scene, but I think he's a CCG-original E.T. kinda thing. If you think that info's from Chronicles, yeah, It'd be great if you could check it out. Menkooroo 06:13, November 9, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) ** Here ya go: He was one of many alien designs for Jabba's Palace that never made it past the maquette stage. He never received a name and was known simply as "Alien 23" among the crew. Chronicles includes this caption under the image of his maquette: "'The thinker' among aliens?" (Chronicles pp. 242-243). If he's in Chronicles, he may be in Behind the Magic, too, so I'll check that later. ~ SavageBob 06:18, November 9, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Holy crap. You are awesome. Thank you. ^^ Is the image of his maquette the same one from the ccg card? Menkooroo 06:23, November 9, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) **** Yeah, the maquette photo (front view) was simply Photoshopped into a cantina booth, it looks like. Chronicles has a side-view image as well, though. In other news, he's in Behind the Magic (or his maquette is), on a table with a ton of other Jabba's Palace maquettes. No info on him, but it's a visual reference, I guess. ~ SavageBob 06:24, November 9, 2010 (UTC)
 * 6) **** You can find his maquette image here. (It's funny you decided to CA this guy, since I finished expanding Tocoyan, another abandoned Jabba's Palace alien, last week, so had all the sources at hand!) ~ SavageBob 06:34, November 9, 2010 (UTC)
 * 7) *****OK! I've given the bts a complete overhaul. Thank you so, so much for the info and the image. Seriously, that's really cool of you. Surprisingly, the article is still easily CA length, so take a look and tell me what you think! Menkooroo 07:03, November 9, 2010 (UTC)
 * 8) ******Happy to oblige! :) ~ SavageBob 16:05, November 9, 2010 (UTC)
 * OK, next thing: Can we claim that Dor Nameth is the former quarterback of the New York Jets homeworld of his species, or just of Glee?
 * 1) *Whoops, misread that sentence on the card. Remedied.
 * 2) There should be a 1stp or something next to Chronicles. --Eyrezer 19:31, November 23, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) *I'm hesitant to do that, since it's not a picture of Brangus --- it's a picture of the wooden maquette that Brangus was based on. The character wouldn't go on to exist for another year. Keeping that in mind, I've modified Behind the Magic to read {{C|Picture of maquette only}e}. Menkooroo 01:34, November 24, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) **Ok, but then shouldn't that also Pmo also be added to Chronicles? What made me notice this is that the earliest published source (Chronicles) lacked a label. --Eyrezer 19:20, November 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) ***Chronicles has more than just the picture of the maquette; it has all of the info from the first paragraph of the article's bts. Some sort of tag might be in order, though, yeah... how's ? Menkooroo 03:42, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

Comments
 * 1) Perhaps some note of his CCG abilities in the BTS? He seems fairly weak offense-wise, but he gets a boost when he's in a cantina. His "ability" indicates that he's pretty astute at defense. He has the skill needed to pilot a vehicle or fire a weapon. Characters can move to or from his location for free, provided he's at a docking bay. He avoids most low cases of attrition (death not directly related to battle). It's a lot of abilities for one little guy, but some summary might be in order. ~ SavageBob 16:05, November 9, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) *Honestly, adding card game stats to the bts seems kinda fluffish to me. As a comparison, I've never noted RPG stats in the bts sections of characters who are profiled in the Legacy Era Campaign Guide or any other WEG or WOTC sourcebook. If the bts were pretty slim, it admittedly couldn't hurt, but with all the info that's in the bts already (thanks to you! :^D), I don't really see it as necessary. Menkooroo 16:26, November 9, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) **I always do this, since Chee's gone on record that game stats are considered pseudo-canon in that an author can very well use them to base the a character's abilities on when they use that character in fiction. My personal practice is to indicate what things are different from average, so in his case, his card's good defensive abilities, and perhaps the fact that he's more powerful in a cantina (which fits in with his lore). The fact that he can drive and fire a weapon are perhaps negligible (who can't in Star Wars?), and the docking bay thing is kind of neither here nor there. What do you think about simply noting the cantina thing, good defensive value, and calling it a night? ~ SavageBob 19:31, November 9, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) ***I still don't like the idea of it. When adding stats for one character is mandated, then it sets a precedent for noting stats in bts sections of every character who has ever had RPG or card game stats. Should Havac beef up Wedge's bts with a few paragraphs detailing the stats given to Wedge in every sourcebook he's ever been in? I really don't mean to be stubborn or contrarian here (you know I think you're awesome!), but noting card game stats in a bts section just doesn't seem all that necessary to me. If a one-sentence bts section could use some beefing, it couldn't hurt, but otherwise, it kinda seems like trivia. An author can use the stats, sure, but they can just as easily discard them if they want. Menkooroo 04:17, November 10, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) ****I'd argue that, yes, Wedge's article should probably note any exceptional game stats he's got in his various incarnations. As I said, I always try to do this, whether the stats come from an RPG, a CCG, or a video game. In my opinion, our articles are sources for SW authors. I know of at least a few who have stated they use Wookieepedia as a resource when working on their novels or comics. In addition, I feel that game stats add color. It's kind of fun to know that Character X is a badass with the Klatooinan nunchuks even though his bio doesn't reference it, say; it allows us to mention something that otherwise isn't part of the larger article. And finally, it's part of being comprehensive in my opinion. We need to cover these characters and species and vehicles from all sorts of angles, not just their in-universe ones. But, then, I'm unaware of any policy on this, so I won't oppose based on it, I guess. ~ SavageBob 04:52, November 10, 2010 (UTC)
 * 6) *****Don't give up yet! Objections don't have to be strictly based on what is and what isn't policy. Like everything else we've discussed in the past week, I'm interested in the community's thoughts on this. To the Senate Hall? Menkooroo 05:40, November 10, 2010 (UTC)
 * 7) ******I'm cool with that. I started the last one, though. ;P ~ SavageBob 18:48, November 11, 2010 (UTC)
 * 8) ******Ta-dah! Forum:SH:Game stats and canon ~ SavageBob 03:27, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

Nar Millich

 * Nominated by: Hanzo Hasashi 22:50, November 9, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

(1 ECs/2 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1)  OLIOSTER  (talk) 19:18, November 10, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Not an objection, but you might want to update Security Chief. :)  1358  (Talk) 20:14, November 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) Just remember to add NOTOC to CAN's that display a table of contents (see my edit). Menkooroo 11:10, November 17, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Obscure!
 * 2) * Based on the image, I believe you could add his skin color (and possibly the eye color as well?) to the infobox.
 * 3) **I got the skin and hair color, but not sure if eye color is possible to tell, some dark color blurred by shading. Hanzo Hasashi 19:22, November 14, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) * It pretty much sounds that the Imperial Navy is on the Death Star. Could you reword a bit, and say that he was stationed there or something like that?
 * 5) **Done. Hanzo Hasashi 19:22, November 14, 2010 (UTC)
 * 6) * Perhaps some kind of time indicator would be cool?
 * 7) **What do you mean? As in when was he stationed on the Death Star? There is no way to determine. Hanzo Hasashi 19:22, November 14, 2010 (UTC)
 * 8) * Context on Vader?
 * 9) **Wrote he was a Sith Lord. Hanzo Hasashi 19:22, November 14, 2010 (UTC)
 * 10) * In what way is he more powerful than the other characters?
 * 11) **Elaborated. Hanzo Hasashi 19:22, November 14, 2010 (UTC)
 * 12) * 1358 (Talk) 14:28, November 14, 2010 (UTC)

Comments
 * Have used this SH forum to decide to source his card image for his being human, upon several other users' requests. Hanzo Hasashi 16:14, November 11, 2010 (UTC)
 * I don't know this card game very well, but isn't it possible that this guy is intended to be Shann Childsen? He seems to be similar, considering this game's not-too-good graphic. IIRC, this card game recreated scenes from the films. Are there other examples in this game for creating new characters out of the blue? Darth Morrt 20:57, November 11, 2010 (UTC)
 * As a matter of fact, I always thought he was similar to Shann Childsen myself. And it even looks like he's in Detention Block AA 23. There are plenty of characters created out of the blue in the Premier branch of the JKTC, going to the page you can find many characters created for the card game who have been neglected by every other source in existence. Hanzo Hasashi 22:47, November 11, 2010 (UTC)

Mazara

 * Nominated by:  Holocron Greatholocron.jpg (Complain) 04:04, November 14, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: A minor character. She was only in the book for a few pages anyway.'''

(0 ECs/2 Users/2 Total)
Support Object
 * 1) Yeah! Menkooroo 13:43, November 23, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2)  OLIOSTER  (talk) 19:36, November 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * Hey there! Is there any more info from the book you can give about the character? Her mentions an article she wrote that got her fired from her job, and the fact that she staged small rallies.
 * Fixed.  Holocron Greatholocron.jpg (Complain) 21:40, November 14, 2010 (UTC)
 * Good show. Can you fix up the second sentence, though? Right now it looks like Blackwater Systems was breaking Falleen's laws against the wishes of Mazara's superiors.
 * Fixed. Serves me right for trying to fix an article at 7 am.  Holocron Greatholocron.jpg (Complain) 06:51, November 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * Can you give any more info on when Obi and Ani hooked up with her? Where was it, what was she doing?
 * Fixed. Funny how you forget these things until someone else points them out.  Holocron Greatholocron.jpg (Complain) 21:40, November 14, 2010 (UTC)
 * Looking at her CUSWE entry, it seems like there's enough info for a personality and traits section.
 * Done. I have a message on the page you linked to for the CSWE. Thanks.  Holocron Greatholocron.jpg (Complain) 21:40, November 14, 2010 (UTC)
 * Do you know if she has an entry in The Complete Star Wars Encyclopedia? If you have no idea, you can ask here. Menkooroo 14:41, November 14, 2010 (UTC)
 * Good work! Just make a note here when you get a response on the CSWE entry. Menkooroo 09:57, November 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * Looks like you got a response. The CSWE (and probably the Jedi Apprentice book too?) indicate that she protested the working and living conditions that resulted from overdevelopment in Falleen's capital city. This should be in the article, either in the bio or in p & t, wherever you think it would fit best. Also --- does she live in the capital city? The article just says right now that she lives on Falleen. Menkooroo 08:41, November 23, 2010 (UTC)
 * Added the new information to the article. The book didn't directly mention that she was protesting against the treatment of workers, so it did help.  Holocron Greatholocron.jpg (Complain) 11:43, November 23, 2010 (UTC)
 * There are better ways to source than just sticking every reference at the end of the paragraph --- that is to say, the article should indicate precisely what information comes from where. Something like: "Mazara then became the leader of a rebel group of Falleen attempting to stop large corporations from polluting their homeworld[1] and protest the terrible conditions that workers endured due to the overdevelopment of the city.[2] She was targeted for assassination by Blackwater Systems for leading protests against their business practices.[1]" Make sense? Also, never put a space between references (so, [1][2] rather than [1] [2]).
 * If all of the information in the second paragraph is in the book, then the extra reference ([2]) at the end of the paragraph isn't necessary.
 * "Personality and traits" has two [1]'s in a row.
 * Fixed.  Holocron Greatholocron.jpg (Complain) 13:34, November 23, 2010 (UTC)
 * I jettisoned the [2] from the second paragraph entirely, as all that info was there, from the book itself, before you got the CSWE entry. Menkooroo 13:43, November 23, 2010 (UTC)
 * One more, actually. Does she have any other lines that would make an appropriate quote for the personality and traits section? Menkooroo 10:01, November 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * Done.  Holocron Greatholocron.jpg <font color="#208090">(Complain) 21:55, November 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * A new one: An article should be created for Falleen's capital city. Does the book give it a name? If not, Falleen's capital city or something would be OK. Just remember to stick Template:Conjecture at the top of the article. Menkooroo 12:21, November 23, 2010 (UTC)
 * Done. <font color="#208090"> Holocron Greatholocron.jpg <font color="#208090">(Complain) 13:34, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Neff

 * Nominated by: Hanzo Hasashi 20:49, November 14, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Obscure female Bespin Wing Guard.

(0 ECs/2 Users/2 Total)
Support Object
 * 1) Nice. Menkooroo 16:35, November 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2)  OLIOSTER  (talk) 19:37, November 29, 2010 (UTC)

Comments
 * Have used this forum as a way to source her card image as her being human. Hanzo Hasashi 20:51, November 14, 2010 (UTC)

ST-103

 * Nominated by: Hanzo Hasashi 21:11, November 14, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) Menkooroo 06:18, November 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2)  ~ SavageBob 15:56, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Just a minor one --- can you mention that Mos Eisley is on Tatooine somewhere in the article? Menkooroo 02:05, November 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) * Sure. Hanzo Hasashi 05:32, November 29, 2010 (UTC)

Comments
 * Very clearly the trooper is a male, if he was female he would have a different chest plate. I have used the logic of the duck test with apparently human characters to state that apparently male characters are male whether or not any source states it (his card image I am using as the source for his being male). Hanzo Hasashi 21:11, November 14, 2010 (UTC)
 * I don't know... Without getting too far away from a PG rating, I don't think a lack of a different chest plate is good enough to call this character male... ~ SavageBob 03:43, November 23, 2010 (UTC)
 * The gender thing is even more obvious than the the duck test on apparently human characters. With the apparently human characters, there is no reason why they could not be Changelings or among the various Near-Human species such as Hapans or Lorrdians. Unlike the duck test, a stormtrooper's chestplate alone is enough to determine the gender, it is common sense. Hanzo Hasashi 05:32, November 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * Since you're requiring me to spell it out, no, I've met plenty of women who could fit into a regular stormtrooper chestplate. ~ SavageBob 06:14, November 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * Upon actually seeing canonical female stormtroopers as opposed to the real-world costumes, such as the action figure of Jes Gistang while she's in armor, I have to admit that it is not that easy to determine a stormtrooper's gender without hearing the character's voice. Hanzo Hasashi 18:24, November 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * We also shouldn't assume that the Legacy-era stormtrooper armor is the same as the Rebellion-era armor, FWIW. ~ SavageBob 01:55, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

Unidentified WED-15 Treadwell (Lars homestead)

 * Nominated by: Darth Morrt 17:45, November 21, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Very minor movie character.

(0 ECs/0 Users/0 Total)
Support

Object
 * "misidentifying their noise as a malfunctioning equipment" doesn't sound right. "malfunctioning piece of equipment." would be a good alternative.
 * "the Cybot Galactica" - context needed.
 * "The droid one of the two" - add was between droid and one.
 * Add context to Owen Laws (e.g. " the moisture farmer Owen Lars's family") <font color="#208090"> Holocron Greatholocron.jpg <font color="#208090">(Complain) 07:59, November 22, 2010 (UTC)
 * All fixed. Thanks for the quick review. Darth Morrt 09:46, November 22, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

TK-104

 * Nominated by: Hanzo Hasashi 19:50, November 21, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: One more obscure nominee.

(0 ECs/1 Users/1 Total)
Support
 * 1) <font color="#208090"> Holocron Greatholocron.jpg <font color="#208090">(Complain) 23:43, November 22, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * Did the source directly state that he was known for his loyalty and tried to impress Vader? --<font color="#208090"> Holocron Greatholocron.jpg <font color="#208090">(Complain) 07:30, November 22, 2010 (UTC)
 * Yea, his card title was loyal stormtrooper, and mentioned that many stormtroopers tried to distinguish themselves in service to impress Darth Vader. Hanzo Hasashi 18:57, November 22, 2010 (UTC)
 * Probably could use some source tags, though they're not technically required. --<font color="#208090"> Holocron Greatholocron.jpg <font color="#208090">(Complain) 07:30, November 22, 2010 (UTC)
 * Other featured, good and comprehensive articles operating solely on one source don't have any such things. Hanzo Hasashi 18:57, November 22, 2010 (UTC)

Comments
 * Having the tags makes an article easier to believe though. Take the first objection I had, if it had been sourced I wouldn't have asked that. <font color="#208090"> Holocron Greatholocron.jpg <font color="#208090">(Complain) 23:43, November 22, 2010 (UTC)

Republic Medcenter

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 18:47, November 22, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: All the drama.

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) <font color="#208090"> Holocron Greatholocron.jpg <font color="#208090">(Complain) 23:59, November 22, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) SW meets ER? ~ SavageBob 15:54, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * Star Wars: The Clone Wars leads to a disambiguation page. Can you choose the specific destination you have in mind to avoid that page? ~ SavageBob 06:10, November 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * Done. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 01:06, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Unidentified Twi'lek bodyguard

 * Nominated by: Darth Morrt 02:36, November 23, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: SWM nom. The P&T is based on the figure, that represent this character. I am not sure it is needed.

(0 ECs/2 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) <font color="#208090"> Holocron Greatholocron.jpg <font color="#208090">(Complain) 07:22, November 24, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 06:42, November 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) * Sorry, one left below. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 07:19, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) IF you are going to include a P&T, you must include a Biography and any other applicable sections as well. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 03:20, November 23, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) *Are you sure? Menkooroo said me the opposite on Gunnery captain's nomination page: "Comprehensive articles are unique in that they don't need to have intros, even if there's an additional section like "Personality and traits" or "Notable gunnery captains."" Darth Morrt 11:29, November 23, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) **The Layout Guide doesn't mention it either. It actually says that you can be quite flexible with the sections. In addition to that, the rules at the top of the page specify that it should be judged on a case-by-case basis anyway, so I doubt that you must do it. <font color="#208090"> Holocron Greatholocron.jpg <font color="#208090">(Complain) 12:03, November 23, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) ***It is flexible in that if you have only the intro and bts and the article covers the subject completely, you do not need to have the center sections. If you were to merge that statement with the intro, you wouldn't need middle sections. If you keep it as a separate P&T (Which you probably should not since it is pretty very speculative as it stands), you need to have as many of the others as applicable, at least the Bio if nothing else. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 20:54, November 23, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) ****I have deleted the P&T. Darth Morrt 00:07, November 24, 2010 (UTC)
 * 6) *****There's precedent for Comprehensive articles having a p & t and yet keeping a single intro-bio rather than creating a separate "Biography" section. Nobody objected to it when I did Shagrad Loset or Unidentified pirate captain (Zekk), anyway. Menkooroo 07:08, November 24, 2010 (UTC)
 * 7) ******Someone must have decided to ignore that compromise along the way. Oh well. I'll give the article a full review now. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 01:20, November 25, 2010 (UTC)
 * 8) Ruby
 * 9) *I see some mistakes you made on this article (some that I fixed, some that I have included as } s in my review) duplicated on your newer nom. Go over the engineer's article again after dealing with this review. I apologize in advance for the spastic arrangement of my comments.
 * 10) * Use the miniature figure as the infobox image.
 * 11) **Done. I will try to make a high-res photo instead of this stock photo. Darth Morrt 07:50, November 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * 12) ***My figure's paintjob is not so good, but I took a photo of her statcard for the infobox. Darth Morrt 07:50, November 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * 13) ****Is the card specifically for a "Twi'lek bodyguard" or a "generic Twi'lek" as the article says? NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 08:32, November 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * 14) *****The figure and the correcponding card is named as "Twi'lek bodyguard". It is a generic RPG NPC, like Stormtrooper, Kaminoan Medic, Duros Scout etc. It is not designed to represent only Lando's bodyguard. I didn't checked every scenario, but there could be other ones which use the same Twi'lek bodyguard figure to represent someone else. Darth Morrt 08:51, November 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * 15) * It needs to be noted that she appears specifically in the Fringer campaign scenario and not in the alternative bounty hunter one.
 * 16) **There is only one scenario. The players decide who plays Bossk and who plays Lando. They fight against each other with different victory conditions, altought Bossk's victory is non-canon.
 * 17) * Is it at all possible to find her stats anywhere? If so, they need to be referenced in applicable ways.
 * 18) **The Wizards database was shut down. The Bloomilk has her stats, but it is not always working. Her stats are the following: cost 10, hit point 30, defense 15, attack 4, damage 10, Melee attack, Bodyguard. Maybe Melee could be added to the article as "she prefers melee weapons".
 * 19) ***It would be better just to mention she used a quarterstaff in combat, since her figure wielded the weapon and her stats say that. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 06:42, November 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * 20) ****Done.
 * 21) * It needs era tags.
 * 22) **Make sure the shorthand for the era is lowercase in the Era template. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 02:58, November 25, 2010 (UTC)
 * 23) * "The players used the generic Twi'lek bodyguard figure to represent this character." This makes it sound like it was the player's decision. Cagle put it in the scenario.
 * 24) **Reworded.
 * 25) * "That year, the city's chief engineer reported that a primary repulsorlift pod was about to break down, risking the entire city plunging through the clouds of Bespin." "Risking" isn't the right word here and the "plunging" part is a bit melodramatic
 * 26) **Reworded.
 * 27) * "This twi'lek..." should only be used as the introduction of the character in the opening sentence. Every other should read "the Twi'lek..." It should not read "female," btw.
 * 28) **Fixed.
 * 29) * Furthermore, it should not begin as "This Twi'lek female bodyguard..." It should give the person's title as the bolded portion and then proceed to giving race, gender, etc.
 * 30) **Fixed.
 * 31) * Context on Cloud City.
 * 32) **Fixed.
 * 33) * "After they entered the maintenance level, a blast door suddenly shut behind them&mdash;Calrissian was lured into a trap set by the bounty hunter Bossk, who was hired by the former owner of the city." Rephrase, name Raynor and say why he hired Bossk.
 * 34) **Done. Darth Morrt 07:50, November 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * 35) ***"...hired the bounty hunter Bossk to hunt down the new Administrator." Why? NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 06:42, November 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * 36) ****Done. Darth Morrt 07:50, November 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * 37) * Next sentence, Bossk has a posse with him?
 * 38) **Fixed.
 * 39) * The article says the chief engineer sent the message, it was Bossk posing as the chief engineer.
 * 40) **Fixed.
 * 41) * Why is Lando going to the maintenance level and why did he feel he needed an escort?
 * 42) **I don't know. He is cautious, nothing more in the source.
 * 43) * The four guards arrive because the player sends a distress call, not because they hear the fight.
 * 44) **I think the "Call for help" is optional. If Lando escapes without the reinforcements or his party kills the bounty hunters, he doesn't need to send the distress signal or escape through the hangar. That's why I didn't write that the guard arrived, just that they were on the way.
 * 45) ***Oh, sorry, read that wrong. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 06:42, November 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * 46) * "The fate of this character depend on the players" is too vague. Can she either live or die or something else?
 * 47) **Fixed.
 * 48) *That's the main wave, I may notice more later. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 02:29, November 25, 2010 (UTC)
 * 49) **Speak of the Devil: It needs to be noted why the Fringer version is Canonical. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 02:35, November 25, 2010 (UTC)

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WED-15-I662

 * Nominated by: Darth Morrt 11:23, November 24, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: My third Treadwell.

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Unidentified Cloud City chief engineer

 * Nominated by: Darth Morrt 13:58, November 24, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Another SWM nom. Verrrry minor character.

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 * 1) Looks verrrry nice. ~ SavageBob 06:03, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

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Project X271

 * Nominated by: Darth Morrt 15:00, November 24, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Bolvan-related nomination.

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TK-363

 * Nominated by:  OLIOSTER  (talk) 20:47, November 24, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Minor Stormtrooper from SWG.

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 * 1) Jinzler 16:05, November 25, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Boom goes the dynamite. ~ SavageBob 15:53, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

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 * 1) Jinzler
 * 2) * Could you add some context on Tasarii Point Station?
 * 3) **A space station orbiting Ord Mantell sufficient?  OLIOSTER  (talk) 08:58, November 25, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) * The article needs an infobox. --Jinzler 21:26, November 24, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) **Done.  OLIOSTER  (talk) 08:58, November 25, 2010 (UTC)
 * 6) The infobox needs to be sourced. ~ SavageBob 07:49, December 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * 7) *Good?  OLIOSTER  (talk) 07:59, December 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * Just to note, nothing comes of the player convincing him to destroy the station.  OLIOSTER  (talk) 20:54, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

Kulton Woodle

 * Nominated by:  OLIOSTER  (talk) 19:52, November 26, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: i herd u liek swg

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 * Is this reported conversation done through the protocol droid? Perhaps mention that. The second paragraph seems very PBP to me. I'd remove the "when asked this, he said this" kind of language and just report on Woodle's opinions and such. In other words, it's not important that the spacer's conversation is what spurred these revelations; just tell us the revelations. Also, no quotes? ~ SavageBob 07:47, December 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * The conversation is directly with Kulton. The protocol droid only says that Master Kulton is a retired freighter captain and that his master only speaks Mon Calamarian. Fixed up the second paragraph and added a quote.  OLIOSTER  (talk) 07:55, December 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * OK, so does that mean the assumption is that the player speaks Mon Calamarian too? I guess I'm confused, since it sounds like the droids says, "This guy only speaks this language that you probably don't," but then the player has a conversation with the guy without the droid's help anyway. ~ SavageBob 15:52, December 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * I conversed with him and took screenshots of what he said with a character who learned Mon Calamari comprehension before the ability to teach it was removed from the game. Give me a bit and I'll go back in with a new character and talk with him.  OLIOSTER  (talk) 16:58, December 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * Alright, if you try to talk to him with a new character (i.e. one who can't comprehend Mon Calamari), he just gestures toward his protocol droid. The droid says the same thing regardless. Noted this in the Bts.  OLIOSTER  (talk) 21:08, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

Peet Sieben

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 07:17, November 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: KT... You and your oblique references to parts of the galaxy that didn't exist before you wrote them down....

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 * ~ SavageBob 01:52, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

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 * Could we get context for Jal Shey? The way it appears now, I thought it was either a species or a planetary demonym. ~ SavageBob 06:00, November 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * Done. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 01:08, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

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Trever Flume's mother

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 09:41, November 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Could it be...a...BIOGRAPHY?!

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 * 1)  SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 09:11, November 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2)  OLIOSTER  (talk) 19:24, November 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * 1) O_o A Blasphemous Biography!
 * 2) * Watch your categorisation. She can be further subcategorised in unidentified individuals, and soldiers is for unit types. May I suggest looking into Category:Galactic Republic military personnel instead? SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 10:30, November 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) **Good catch. Done. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 04:53, November 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Went one further, as she's a captain. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 09:11, November 29, 2010 (UTC)

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Baysden

 * Nominated by: Hanzo Hasashi 22:31, November 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

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 * 1) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 01:48, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

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 * 1) Ruby
 * 2) * I just noticed this, but the Jedi Knights Trading Card Game is not an expansion to the CCG. It is its own separate game also made by Decipher, Hence why the SaV expansion this article links to has "(Jedi Knight TCG)" after it. Please update this article and the others for this.
 * 3) **Done, as I will do in a few seconds to other similar characters.
 * 4) * Context on Tatooine. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 05:25, November 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) **Wrote it is a desert planet. Hanzo Hasashi 18:05, November 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * 6) Can you break up the first sentence into two or three sentences? It's quite a mouthful right now. :) ~ SavageBob 07:42, December 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * 7) **Alright, will do so.
 * 8) Also, it appears he's a sergeant. Shouldn't this be mentioned? ~ SavageBob 07:43, December 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * 9) **Already is. Hanzo Hasashi 21:14, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

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 * Unlike most other stormtroopers I've done so far, Sergeant Baysden's game card does identify him as male with the quote, "Power +1 for each Trooper supporting him." Hanzo Hasashi 22:31, November 29, 2010 (UTC)

Path to the Sky

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 03:26, November 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Perhaps its time I do a CAN for a WP I actually belong to.

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 * 1)  OLIOSTER   (talk) 04:15, November 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Shave and a haircut... ~ SavageBob 06:35, December 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) Two bits! Menkooroo 08:11, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

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Booombaaa Boombaa Bombashella

 * Nominated by:  OLIOSTER  (talk) 20:10, November 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Silly Gungan songs.

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 * 1) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 01:40, December 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) 's gotta be better than some of the crap on the radio now... ~ SavageBob 08:02, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

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 * Two things: First, is the composer unidentified in-universe? As in no one knows who wrote the song? If not, the "unidentified" should probably be removed. Second, is there any indication of when this song was a hit for the Twi'lek woman? In other words, is there any way to contextualize the song in time? ~ SavageBob 06:33, December 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * Oh, and perhaps include the image of the Twi'lek woman singing it. ~ SavageBob 06:34, December 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * The only mention of the writer of the song says he is "unknown" and no time reference. Picture added.  OLIOSTER  (talk) 06:35, December 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * Well, it does mention the GCW, but only in relation to the singer's allegiance.  OLIOSTER  (talk) 06:41, December 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * What do you mean "only in relation to the singer's allegiance"? Does it imply the singer is still alive during the GCW? At least that would be worth mentioning, perhaps as, "It was a number one hit for the Twi'lek entertainer An'ja, who was active during the Galactic Civil War" would suffice. ~ SavageBob 07:40, December 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * It does imply that she is still around during the GCW. Added.  OLIOSTER  (talk) 07:45, December 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * Before anyone uses it as an objection, "unknown Gungan master songwriter" is how the source states it.  OLIOSTER  (talk) 00:24, December 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * Never use "unknown" in an article. It is always "unidentified" or "anonymous." NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 01:17, December 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * Alright, but any reason you redlinked master songwriter? The source doesn't elaborate on exactly what that is (although I'm sure its easy to infer).  OLIOSTER  (talk) 01:21, December 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nevermind, I see what you did there :).  OLIOSTER  (talk) 01:32, December 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * Yes. Yes you did. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 01:40, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

Jizz-wail

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 06:29, December 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: A truly integral part of the Star Wars mythos. To make fun of it is to make fun of the Modal Nodes themselves.

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 * BTS? ~ SavageBob 06:31, December 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * Sorry, forgot to save it. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 06:54, December 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * OK! Now you need to source the fact that the music in ANH is jizz, though, since that's not evident from the film itself. ~ SavageBob 07:37, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

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Buro

 * Nominated by: Eyrezer 08:56, December 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Back on the bandwagon with a new, short, species nom!

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 * 1) You have my sword! Menkooroo 10:12, December 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) And you have my bow! ~ SavageBob 16:02, December 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) And my axe! NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 18:03, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

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