Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Toki Tollivar


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Toki "Corellian Strangler" Tollivar

 * Nominated by: —Tommy [[Image:Dark side Master SWGTCG.jpg|17px]] ( Nine two eight one ) 20:54, 25 February 2009 (UTC)


 * Nomination comments: Ladies and gentlebeings, I give you&hellip;the Corellian Strangler! Wanted dead or alive, bounties distributed after confirmation of successful capture or cessation of life. Spoiler warning.

(6 Inqs/0 Users/6 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  14:55, 6 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) Green Tentacle (Talk) 20:47, 8 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) Thefourdotelipsis 22:20, 18 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) &mdash;  Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 03:23, 20 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 5)  —Xwing328 (Talk) 22:58, 20 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 6) Lord Hydronium 19:30, 21 April 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) The intro says he worked in the Republic Ministry of Commerce during the Great Sith War but the biography suggests he worked there after the war. Clarify, please. Green Tentacle (Talk) 19:54, 7 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) *Addressed. Thanks for the review, GT. Please advise if anything further is required. —Tommy [[Image:Dark side Master SWGTCG.jpg|17px]] ( Nine two eight one ) 22:18, 7 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) One complaint: You should state straight out that Tollivar strangled Slyssk, instead of presenting it as a mystery as it is (I presume,) in the source. "Artist Dean Zachary's portrayal of Tollivar as a Bimm, whose species is naturally small in size, coincided with the character's opinion of itself, as written by Jackson Miller." - I'm not quite sure what you're saying here. If you're saying that the character is drawn as he is written, well...that's a given, and doesn't need to be stated. Thefourdotelipsis 02:45, 18 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) *Addressed the first part, and removed the second part per your suggestion. Thanks for the review, Fourdot. Please advise if anything further is required. —Tommy [[Image:Dark side Master SWGTCG.jpg|17px]] ( Nine two eight one ) 18:22, 18 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) **All is well. :) Thefourdotelipsis 22:20, 18 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 6) His affiliation with the Brotherhood is sourced to the comic, but don't see any line there indicating he was part of it, just the Sith Empire in general. As I noticed when writing Darth Sion, there's nothing that says the two are synonymous. - Lord Hydronium 03:47, 19 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 7) * Could also use some BTS info from JJM's site. - Lord Hydronium 03:54, 19 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 8) **How's that? —Tommy [[Image:Dark side Master SWGTCG.jpg|17px]] ( Nine two eight one ) 12:18, 21 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 9) ***Works for me. - Lord Hydronium 19:30, 21 April 2009 (UTC)

Comments


 * My first-ever KoTOR-exclusive nom. —Tommy [[Image:Dark side Master SWGTCG.jpg|17px]] ( Nine two eight one ) 20:54, 25 February 2009 (UTC)
 * There was a small discussion over on the GAN page about how to handle the news sources in the KOTOR comics. Like HNN reports, they should be in appearances. There was, maybe, possibly, consensus building for treating them like so:
 * "The Adjudicator Special Report: The Outer Rim" – Star Wars Knights of the Old Republic 14: Days of Fear, Part 2
 * This way treats them analogous to an article in a larger source. --Eyrezer 23:50, 25 February 2009 (UTC)
 * Addressed. Thanks, Eyr. —Tommy [[Image:Dark side Master SWGTCG.jpg|17px]] ( Nine two eight one ) 00:10, 26 February 2009 (UTC)