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Removal of GA status

 * Reduxed at Meeting 33. Toprawa and Ralltiir 20:57, May 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * Kept on May 3, 2011. Toprawa and Ralltiir 20:57, May 3, 2011 (UTC)

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The Clone Wars: Shakedown

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Support
 * 1) Toprawa and Ralltiir 00:16, April 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2)  CC7567  (talk) 02:43, April 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 20:40, May 3, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Toprawa:
 * 2) * I have issues overall with the citation formatting. We have citation templates, I believe, that can be used for several of these, including the HoloNet News item, the SW Blog pages, and the IMDB item. Additionally, I think the text for each of the SW.com references need to be revised to more specifically explain what is being cited. "The Clone Wars online comic" becomes extremely unhelpful when two other different ref notes use that same title. Looking at these links myself, it seems we can provide actual SW.com page titles, (Ex: "The Official Star Wars Comic Viewer - Shakedown," etc.) But since all of these references seem to be coming from the same comic, and we can evidently link to individual pages of the comic, it would probably be best to go ahead and source these by individual comic page. Toprawa and Ralltiir 18:01, April 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **I believe I've fixed these. Kilson ( Let's have a chat ) 20:33, April 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Still have some issues with it. External link citations should make every effort to represent the actual title of the web page being linked to, as Reference 6 does. The website title of reference 1 isn't "The Clone Wars online comic page 13." It's "The Official Star Wars Comic Viewer - Shakedown," as I noted in my original objection. I would suggest formatting those as "The Official Star Wars Comic Viewer - Shakedown - Page 13," etc. Also, I understand the links to profile pages on the SW.com message boards are now and forever gone, but the words "on the" don't need to be included in that link, do they? Toprawa and Ralltiir 20:48, April 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) ****How about now? Also, thanks for the review. Kilson ( Let's have a chat ) 23:52, April 27, 2011 (UTC)

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