Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Unidentified Gungan observer


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Unidentified Gungan observer

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 08:45, December 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: What can I say. I like Gungans. And those from MedStar especially.

(3 ECs/0 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  23:19, December 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:17, December 31, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 01:01, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) The links for Otollo redirect to Otolla, is Otollo correct? -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  16:33, December 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *Quite funny. It seems to be a redirect. And the German word is "Otollo". Interesting for our species guys. For now changed to "Otolla".  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 16:36, December 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Bob
 * 4) * I'm not against the use of technical vocabulary, but could you specify that the "buccal cavity" is in the mouth?
 * 5) **Better?  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 17:12, December 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) * Similarly, I can't find a definition of "vaciosed" anywhere. What does it mean? Can you perhaps use a more common synonym? ~ Savage BOB sig.png 16:10, December 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) **That English is high above my standard. Therefore I took the word from the novel. However, an error occured, the right word is "varicosed". Is that better or could you find a synonym? BTW: Thanks for the review.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 17:12, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

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