User talk:Harrar

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Re:Redlinks
Indeed :) I looked over the article and two redlinks didn't need the tag.  JangFett  Talk 11:36, 22 May 2009 (UTC)

Viqi
Haha, thanks. I'll read it soon.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 20:17, 24 May 2009 (UTC)

Re:
Hey Harrar,

No, I haven't got Outcast yet, nor did I realize that Seha played a role in the novel. If you know anyone who could help me out on that, it would be awesome. Sucks about Alema, but the best of luck of Kyp! By the way, I have no idea what my contributions here will be for a while, nor do I know if I'm here to stay or not. Thanks for the welcome back message dude! :D DC 21:21, 24 May 2009 (UTC)

A Practical Man
Oh yes she would. :P (Nevermind the fact that Vergere shouldn't be talking to Lah in any case). -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 18:51, 26 May 2009 (UTC)

The Really Bad Quote
Completely agree. That quote is so terrible. That's why I hate Traviss.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 19:08, 26 May 2009 (UTC)
 * Bad quote, yes. In A Practical Man, yes. -  JMAS  Hey, it's me! 19:14, 26 May 2009 (UTC)
 * Poor assumption on my part JMAS, I assumed it was fanon, but did check to see if Vergere or Tsavong Lah were in the novel before removing it. When I saw on its article that they weren't I went ahead, forgetting that she has those little quotations at the top of each chapter. -- —Harrar  ( Villip ) 19:19, 26 May 2009 (UTC)
 * No worries. In case you're interested, I was able to confirm the quote in the excerpt found at eReader.com. -  JMAS  Hey, it's me! 20:05, 26 May 2009 (UTC)
 * I'm not up to too much, working on finishing a couple of smaller projects I never got done, and planning to update a few of my FAs if ever stop procrastinating. I'll have a couple of NJO related FANs done over the next few months hopefully, which should be interesting too. Thanks for the reminder about Bey, I'll get onto that (looking forward to the issue, too). :-) -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 23:14, 26 May 2009 (UTC)

Mirta
Hey Harrar. I finally finished your objections for Mirta Gev. Sorry it took so long, but school got in the way. Check it out when you get the chance.  IFYLOFD  ( You will pay the price for your lack of vision! ) 22:52, 31 May 2009 (UTC)
 * Thanks. Same to you. Good luck on Kyp, I know he'll be a handful. ;)  IFYLOFD  ( You will pay the price for your lack of vision! ) 17:32, 1 June 2009 (UTC)

Thanks
Thank you so much for helping me to correct the Brakiss article. I was expanding the content and adding citations. Thanks so much for your time. Andykatib 10:21, 3rd June 2009 (UTC)

Re: 3RR
Will do, thanks for the heads up. Gorthuar 18:21, 3 June 2009 (UTC)

Tsavong Lah
I've noticed that for thw WookieeProject: NEGTC, it said to talk to you for more info about FAing Tsavong Lah. As I'm part of the project, and I'm about to finish up the NJO series, is it all right if I help out on the article? --JediCommando 20:19, 5 June 2009 (UTC)


 * Thanks for the info! Yeah, I know my level of detail is really skinny, as I'm not the best writer, and I haven't had much time to write up some stuff, but I can help out a bit. I'll probably have time over the weekend to do it. As for the NJO books, I have a confession: I only own the first half of the series up to Edge of Victory II, and I own the last two books; the rest I checked out of my school library. However, I do remember enough from the books to add a significant amount to the article. It's pretty hard to forget what happened in Destiny's Way, Star by Star, and the Enemy Lines duology, etc., so I think I'm in good shape. Thanks! --JediCommando 22:32, 5 June 2009 (UTC)

Databank sources
Harrar, those databank sources you added to Hammerblow, Akanseh and Adrimetrum aren't working for me. Keep getting "requested page not found". Can you send me the direct links? Cavalier One ( Squadron channel ) 14:53, 8 June 2009 (UTC)
 * Yep, I see what happened now. I was looking for something similar, but couldn't find the original URLs. All working now, thanks for the updates! - Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 15:05, 8 June 2009 (UTC)

Kelsan

 * No worries, Harrar :-). It's great to have you writing some articles for WP:LE, and I look forward to a few more from you :-D.  Grunny  ( Talk ) 01:41, 10 June 2009 (UTC)

Re: Lucius malfoy7
I seriously have no idea. It appears that he did; he never gave anyone any reason to think that he was that on edge. :|  CC7567  (talk) 20:10, 10 June 2009 (UTC)

Venka
Hey Harrar. I saw your comment on Venka's FA nom. Thank you for that. You tried to keep them in line, and I appreciate others stepping up when things between two users get out of hand. Anyway, hope you're doing well. :)  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 15:07, 19 June 2009 (UTC)

Inquisitor
Hello Harrar. As recognition of your impressive writing and reviewing skills, the Inquisitorius has elected you to join its ranks, provided you accept, of course. Congratulations. Please let me know if you choose to join the evil Inq and help us torture FA noms! :P  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 23:45, 20 June 2009 (UTC)
 * Request denied, captain. :P Just kidding, congrats. It's good to have you here, pal.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 01:54, 21 June 2009 (UTC)
 * Hail the first Yuuzhan Vong Inquisitor.  CC7567  (talk) 02:26, 21 June 2009 (UTC)

Edit on GAN
Thank you for reminding me to remove that. Though I wasn't sure on sources, I did check the guide after I posted my objection for that nom.  JangFett  Talk 17:51, 22 June 2009 (UTC)
 * Okay, but you don't get to blank comments made by yourself or other people off a community page. It's a record, and if you made a mistake other than grammatical/inadvertant stuff, it stays. -- —Harrar  ( Cut the comm chatter ) 17:59, 22 June 2009 (UTC)

Lorn Pavan
Hey, just reminding you to strike your objections on Lorn Pavan's FA nom. You already support, you just haven't struck yet. :P Thanks again for the read.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 20:21, 23 June 2009 (UTC)
 * For the first and last time, I will use my inexperience as an Inq as a pathetic excuse... -- —Harrar  ( Cut the comm chatter ) 20:37, 23 June 2009 (UTC)

Gunray FAN
Could you please remove my FA nom for Nute Gunray? It requires a lot of work, and it shouldn't be nominated in it's current condition.  JangFett  Talk 19:31, 24 June 2009 (UTC) > JangFett  Talk 19:52, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
 * Sure thing man, honestly it's a good call and there was nothing wrong with attempting to restore Gunray, it's just that that article needs an awful lot of work and the FAN page tends to be more for fine-tuning and polishing rather than overhauls. I'll put my vote in now. -- —Harrar  ( Cut the comm chatter ) 19:34, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
 * Thank you Harrar :) I'll work on Gunray soon enough and try another attempt once the article gets a copyedit for FAN. Indeed, it does require a lot of expansion. <span style="font-variant: small-caps; font-family: Verdana; font-size: 12px"

FA-ing Tsavong Lah
Hey Harrar, sorry I haven't been working on the Tsavong article lately, but I've been real busy. Anyways, I took a look at the article, and I was wondering what specifically needs to be done. I noticed that there are a few POV issues, and it sounds kind of prosey here and there, and you did say you wanted to write the P&T section, so I just want to know what I can do. Thanks! --JediCommando 21:08, 29 June 2009 (UTC)


 * Off the top of my head, in the intro, describing Lah as "fanatical" seems POV. The beginning of the bio also has some POV stuff, like this:

-"Tsavong Lah was born into a powerful Yuuzhan Vong domain, to one of the greatest of all warmasters, the legendary Czulkang Lah."

-Powerful seems to be POV-ish

-"greatest" and "legendary" seems POV to me

Some parts of the "Victory and Defeat at Duro" section seem kind of prosey or in mixed tense, especially the part about the duel with Jacen. Hope that helps. If I find anything else, I'll let you know. --JediCommando 16:46, 30 June 2009 (UTC)

Triage
A new Triage meeting has been scheduled for Sunday, July 19, at 0:00 UTC. Please try to attend. Thank you.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 15:49, 8 July 2009 (UTC)