Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations

 This page is for the nomination of "comprehensive articles." For a list of "comprehensive articles," see Category:Wookieepedia comprehensive articles.


 * Comprehensive article nominations history
 * Comprehensive article nominations archiving checklist

What is a "comprehensive article?"

A "comprehensive article" is an article that contains all information regarding the topic. Often, "comprehensive articles" cannot reach Featured or Good Article status due to their limited content. This process is intended to recognize articles that contain all relevant canon information, yet are still under the 250 word limit required for a Good Article. The purpose of this is twofold&mdash;firstly, to help users distinguish what is a stub, and what is merely a short article with no further relevant material to be added, and, more importantly, to highlight for the reader when they are reading something that has been judged definitely "comprehensive"&mdash;that is, a guarantee to the reader that whatever they are reading contains the sum total of all available content on that topic.

Nominations and promotions of the Comprehensive article process are overseen by a collective of users known as the "EduCorps," which is made up of the Inquisitorius, the AgriCorps, and various other experienced users who are considered qualified to adequately judge the nominated material.

Lucasfilm Ltd. and its many licensees continue to expand the Star Wars universe. Since new information might become available, it may be necessary to revoke a "comprehensive article's" status. A forum will be used to nominate articles that have fallen out-of-date. Members of the EduCorps will then post a warning template on that page, and a grace period of one week will be instituted in which the article can be improved. If there is a significant amount of new information, it is likely that once updated, the article will become eligible for Good article status, and thereby ineligible for Comprehensive article status.

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An article must&hellip;


 * 1) &hellip;be well-written and detailed.
 * 2) &hellip;be unbiased, non-point of view.
 * 3) &hellip;be sourced with all available sources and appearances.
 * 4) &hellip;follow the Manual of Style, Layout Guide, and all other policies on Wookieepedia. This is, of course, within reason. If a topic only has a very limited degree of content that cannot be divided up into the relevant article sections, it is not required that it follow the Layout Guide precisely. This is to be judged on a case-by-case basis.
 * 5) &hellip;following the review process, be stable, i.e., does not change significantly from day to day and is not the subject of ongoing edit wars. This does not apply to vandalism and protection or semi-protection as a result of vandalism.
 * 6) &hellip;not be tagged with any sort of improvement tags (i.e. more sources, expand, etc).
 * 7) &hellip;have no redlinks.
 * 8) &hellip;have all relevant canon information presented.
 * 9) &hellip;be completely referenced for all available material and sources. See Sourcing for more information.
 * 10) &hellip;have all quotes and images sourced.
 * 11) &hellip;provide at least one relevant quote on the article if available.
 * 12) &hellip;include a "Behind the scenes" section for in-universe articles.
 * 13) &hellip;counting the introduction, the article body, and "Behind the scenes" material, must not exceed 250 words in length (not including captions, quotes, or headers, etc). Any articles exceeding the limit should be taken to the Good article nominations page for consideration.
 * 14) &hellip;if the nominated article reaches 200 words or greater, the nominator must either provide an intro or draft an intro and provide a link to the revision in the nomination, showing that the intro does not elevate the article over 250 words. Exceptions can be made for articles wherein the majority of the text is in the "Behind the scenes" section.
 * 15) &hellip;if an article approaches the 250-word length for Good article nominations, it should not deliberately shortened in order to avoid meeting that word limit.

How to nominate:


 * 1) First, nominate an article you find is worthy of comprehensive status, putting it at the bottom of the list below. Nominated articles must meet all thirteen requirements stated above.
 * 2) Add CAnom at the top of the article you are nominating.
 * 3) Be sure to place sign in the "Nominated by" line when the nomination is posted for voting.
 * 4) Others will object to the nomination if they disagree that the article is good enough; they will then supply reasons for doing so, and ways to improve the article in accordance with the established rules.
 * 5) Nominators and supporters will adjust the article until the objectors (with reasonable objections) are satisfied. Objectors may also make alterations&mdash;if there is any reason for contention on a given point, it should be settled in a civil manner in the nomination field itself.
 * 6) Users may not vote on their own articles.
 * 7) There is no limit to the amount of nominations a given user can submit at any given time.

How to vote:


 * 1) Before doing anything, be sure to read the article completely, keeping a sharp eye out for mistakes.
 * 2) Afterward, compare the article to the criteria listed above, and then either support or object the article's nomination.
 * 3) *If you object, please supply concrete reasons for doing so, and how it can be improved.
 * 4) As stated above, any objections will be looked upon by the nominator, supporters, and anyone willing to improve the article, and action will be taken to please the objectors. Do not strike other users' objections; it is up to the objector to review the changes and strike if they are satisfied.
 * 5) There are several ways in which an article can receive the required number of votes. Within a 48-hour period of nomination, only EduCorps votes will count towards the total, although anyone may choose to vote in that window. If four members of the EduCorps support a nomination in that window [0 to 48 hours post-nomination], and there are no outstanding objections, the article can be considered a "Comprehensive article" and be tagged with the template 48 hours after the initial nomination. The talk page will also be tagged with the  template. When the 48 hours are up, any user's votes will contribute towards the total. If two EduCorps member has voted for an article after a week, three regular votes will be required. After the 48 hour period, an article can still also pass with just three EduCorps votes.
 * 6) Once a nomination is successful, it will be placed on the Comprehensive article list. Instructions on how to archive nominations, successful or otherwise, can be found here. Anyone can archive a nomination&mdash;just make sure it has the correct number of votes, has been nominated for at least a week (or 48 hours if there are four EC votes), and that there are absolutely no outstanding objections. If you are not sure how to do this, just ask, and someone will likely be more than willing to help you. Also, if you think you can slip one past us, think again&mdash;someone is always watching you.

All nominations will be considered idle and are subject to instantaneous removal by EduCorps members if objections are not addressed, or at least not answered, after a period of 1 week.

Please remember to archive your nomination beforehand if you plan on taking it to the Good Article Nominations page.

Attack on the Vandyne system

 * Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:38, October 6, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Hmm feels like time I made a few more CAnoms

(2 ECs/0 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 00:43, October 8, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  18:29, October 26, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) 501st
 * 2) * Technically, the Vong Empire did not exist until 27 ABY, so they did not actually invade the galaxy in 25. The species itself was the thing that invaded, and they formed the Empire after the fall of Coruscant I believe.
 * 3) **Ah ok changed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:44, October 6, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) * Do not use Vong to refer to the invaders. Instead, use the full name Yuuzhan Vong.
 * 5) **Ok fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:44, October 6, 2013 (UTC)
 * 6) * "The book gives no information on the outcome of the attack, but a separate map shows the Vandyne system was under Vong control by 26 ABY." In this case, it probably can be assumed that the attack was victorious.
 * 7) **Ok there are some CAs at the moment in a very similar style to this from the last burner in which victory wasn't assumed in the same circumstance. I can change it so that this and all the others make that assumption if you'd like or should I maintain the standard used in the older articles? Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:44, October 6, 2013 (UTC)
 * 8) ***I seem to remember some articles asserting that the battle was won by the Vong due to the other map. However, you can leave it as is, as it seems both ways of doing it have been done, provided that I am remembering correctly. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 00:43, October 8, 2013 (UTC)
 * 9) *If these objections are also relevant in your other two noms, fix them as well. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 18:07, October 6, 2013 (UTC)
 * 10) **Done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:44, October 6, 2013 (UTC)
 * SE
 * 1) *Can you reword the first line a bit? I was thinking something like "During the intergalactic Yuuzhan Vong's invasion of the galaxy between 25 and 29 ABY, they attacked the Vandyne system." Or something like that. What do you think? Supreme Emperor (talk) 03:38, October 13, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) **Reworded as per your suggestion. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:20, October 25, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) Exiled Jedi
 * 4) * I noticed you used the word "attack" a lot in the body. Could you vary up the word choice a bit? -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:04, October 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) **Changed out two of them. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:20, October 25, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Attack on the Edusa system

 * Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:01, October 6, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Don't worry this isn't an attempt to take on Cade again.

(3 ECs/0 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 20:56, October 8, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) Gal-icon.jpg  OLIOSTER   (talk) 23:20, October 12, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  18:45, October 26, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Please try to vary your word choice and use other words instead of attack some of the time. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  16:12, October 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) *Changed two again. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:24, October 25, 2013 (UTC)

SE

 * 1) *Same objection as Attack on the Vandyne system. Supreme Emperor (talk) 16:43, October 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) **Changed although made it slightly different from the other articles first line. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:24, October 25, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Attack on the Tangrene system

 * Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:01, October 6, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: The end of the first of many branches of the war.

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) I like to think the Tangrenese kicked some Vong butt before rolling over. Corellian Premier Jedi symbol.svg Force will be with you always 00:37, October 8, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  03:22, October 28, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) A Force User
 * 2) *I'm not sure I understand this objection. Ayrehead02 (talk) 22:16, October 7, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) **Er, that's not an objection. That's my title. Or should I have said "Master of the Universe"? :P Corellian Premier Jedi symbol.svg Force will be with you always 22:24, October 7, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Oh the fact it was numbered threw me off XD woops. Ayrehead02 (talk) 22:45, October 7, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) A Lot of repetition in the body sentence. Please cut it down.
 * 6) *Removed some of the repetition. Ayrehead02 (talk) 22:16, October 7, 2013 (UTC)
 * 7) **Great, thanks. Corellian Premier Jedi symbol.svg Force will be with you always 22:24, October 7, 2013 (UTC)
 * 8) Context on hyperlane (even if just mentioning that it's nearby.  Corellian Premier Jedi symbol.svg Force will be with you always 19:53, October 7, 2013 (UTC)
 * 9) *Added. Ayrehead02 (talk) 22:16, October 7, 2013 (UTC)
 * 10) Maybe this is nitpicking, but I presume the battle was not a year long. Instead, could you say "at one point between 26-26 ABY" or some such?  Corellian Premier Jedi symbol.svg Force will be with you always 22:24, October 7, 2013 (UTC)
 * 11) *Sure thing. Ayrehead02 (talk) 22:45, October 7, 2013 (UTC)
 * 12) A Non-Force User
 * 13) *I think the Yuuzhan Vong war should be mentioned by name in the body, not pipelinked to.
 * 14) * 501st dogma ( talk ) 20:58, October 8, 2013 (UTC)
 * 15) **Changed Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:30, October 8, 2013 (UTC)
 * 16) ***How about some context on it? 501st  dogma ( talk ) 22:00, October 8, 2013 (UTC)
 * 17) ****Added. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:36, October 25, 2013 (UTC)
 * 18) *****Try to change it up a bit. The multiple commas make it seem awkward. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 12:26, October 25, 2013 (UTC)
 * 19) *****I think it looks a bit better now. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:49, October 27, 2013 (UTC)
 * 20) Exiled Jedi
 * 21) * It would be better if the second sentence did not use the word "attack" twice. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:14, October 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * 22) **Changed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:35, October 25, 2013 (UTC)
 * 23) SE
 * 24) *Same as the Vandyne nom, if you don't mind. Supreme Emperor (talk) 04:22, October 18, 2013 (UTC)
 * 25) **Done, but again changed slightly. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:35, October 25, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Northern Jundland Plateau

 * Nominated by: Cade  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg  Calrayn  02:51, October 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Project Hero

(2 ECs/2 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  01:46, October 16, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) Supreme Emperor (talk) 04:44, October 18, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:49, October 19, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 12:09, October 19, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Harm

 * Nominated by: Supreme Emperor (talk) 18:47, October 19, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: About time i finished this. For the novels.

(2 ECs/2 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1) Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:17, October 20, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 00:20, October 25, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) DarthRevan1173 RevanTOR001.jpg (Long live Lord Revan) 00:18, October 28, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  03:20, October 28, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Ayrehead
 * 2) * Context on Borleias.
 * 3) **Done.
 * 4) * Context on first battle of Borleias, who was fighting?
 * 5) **Added.
 * 6) * Should back be repeated in the third sentence? Ayrehead02 (talk) 22:28, October 19, 2013 (UTC)
 * 7) **Whoops. Supreme Emperor (talk) 00:23, October 20, 2013 (UTC)
 * 8) 501st
 * 9) * What shields were Harm monitoring? I'm pretty sure they were shields for a base.
 * 10) **Better?
 * 11) * You need to mention that the planet is being bombarded by the enemy warships. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 13:32, October 20, 2013 (UTC)
 * 12) **Clarified. Supreme Emperor (talk) 02:58, October 22, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Amber-root

 * Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:45, October 20, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Some more food for the CAs

(2 ECs/1 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 23:36, October 21, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) Supreme Emperor (talk) 16:32, October 22, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  03:40, October 28, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Bepp

 * Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:46, October 20, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Well that completes the Bith food category...

(2 ECs/1 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) Beppity Bop.  501st  dogma ( talk ) 23:37, October 21, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) Supreme Emperor (talk) 16:34, October 22, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  03:50, October 28, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Gamorrean hooch

 * Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 17:10, October 20, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Now that's how you explain fighting game mechanics.

(2 ECs/2 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1) Nice :)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 23:40, October 21, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) Explains so much. Supreme Emperor (talk) 16:36, October 22, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) But does it taste like chicken? Corellian Premier Jedi symbol.svg Force will be with you always 22:55, October 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  04:03, October 28, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) '''Master of the Universe
 * 2) It still needs a "1stm" tag.
 * 3) *Whoops added. Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:15, October 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) I think there is something in the infobox that could be filled in for the description tab: That the hooch is a beverage.  Corellian Premier Jedi symbol.svg Force will be with you always 23:25, October 23, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) *Added. Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:15, October 24, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Police Subpost 186

 * Nominated by: Coruscantfan (Talk) 01:04, October 22, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Project CSF

(0 ECs/3 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:57, October 25, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) Trip391 (talk) 15:36, October 25, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) Supreme Emperor (talk) 21:06, October 26, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Ayrehead
 * 2) * Does the book detail anyone going to the outpost to bail him out? If so you should mention it.
 * 3) **Added. Coruscantfan (Talk) 14:50, October 25, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) * Are the holding cells at the front desk or elsewhere in the outpost? the second sentence doesn't make it very clear. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:41, October 22, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) **Clarified. Coruscantfan (Talk) 14:50, October 25, 2013 (UTC)
 * 6) A Force User
 * 7) *The quote mentions that it is in a sector. Does it say which one? Also, in the quote there is an uncapitalized letter. Is it in the source that way? Corellian Premier Jedi symbol.svg Force will be with you always 23:29, October 23, 2013 (UTC)
 * 8) **Yes and no; in this context sector doesn't actually refer to a location: "Sector Police" is what the book calls the CSF. However throughout the book it alternates capitalizing it i.e. sometimes its "Sector Police" and other times "sector police". In this sentence its all lowercase but since the book doesn't seem to standardize the capitalizing of titles even when it is a proper title. Coruscantfan (Talk) 14:50, October 25, 2013 (UTC)
 * 9) ***Thanks for clarifying about the CSF. And for the quote, I meant the start of the second sentence. Corellian Premier Jedi symbol.svg Force will be with you always 21:17, October 26, 2013 (UTC)
 * 10) ****Oh, duh, yeah that's incorrect fixed. :) Coruscantfan (Talk) 08:35, October 27, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Nutorium

 * Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:00, October 22, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: An ex-redlink I meant to nom along time ago.

(2 ECs/1 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 00:23, October 25, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  Corellian Premier Jedi symbol.svg Force will be with you always 21:27, October 26, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  16:59, October 27, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Trimantium

 * Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:03, October 22, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Another from buyer's guide.

(2 ECs/0 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 00:25, October 25, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  18:57, October 26, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Kathor

 * Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:03, October 22, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: And a third. Not sure how I forgot to nom these.

(2 ECs/1 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) I want that for my car. Corellian Premier Jedi symbol.svg Force will be with you always 23:30, October 23, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 12:24, October 25, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  18:53, October 26, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Night Lady

 * Nominated by: Trip391 (talk) 03:02, October 27, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: For the novels.

(1 ECs/2 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) That last sentence is kinda long, but I think it's fine. Fe Nite (talk) 03:39, October 27, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:53, October 27, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  16:41, October 27, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) 1st? Fe Nite (talk) 03:28, October 27, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) *Yea. Just put it in. Trip391 (talk) 03:32, October 27, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) Any details at all about the ship? There must be some. Is there a helm, quarters, passages? How many crew approximately? Or is that all there is? 501st  dogma ( talk ) 00:25, October 28, 2013 (UTC)
 * No, thats all there is. It simply mentions that the Jedi boarded the ship (but not how, or where on the ship), the crew (no amount given) tried turning them away, and the Jedi subdued them (only mentions that blasters and lightsabers were pulled, nothing about where, or the ensuing ruckus), and brought Redstar to trial. Trip391 (talk) 02:02, October 28, 2013 (UTC)

Comments