User talk:Jedi Kasra

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Re:hey
Yes, good. Did you get my previous message explaining that im coming back to the project to head it again, with you leading as well? DC 23:08, 14 July 2008 (UTC)

Thank you
Hey, thanks for the recognition. I hope everything is well with you. On another note, I have been watching your progress around here with interest, and I may actually have a need for your talents/services in the foreseeable future. When the time presents itself accordingly, I will provide you with further details. Until then, keep up the good work. —Tommy9281  ( Peace is a lie ) 19:31, 18 July 2008 (UTC)

stuck ( canon issuses) mining driods
The mining droids on peragus are seemingly simple modles without much of an incentive to attack miners, so what i said was that they were made to belive that organics and unahtorized droids (such as t3 and the miners personal droids not linked to the central computer) were a mining material. The driods were also told that the head and heart were more valuable. last thing is that they were also told that the organics/ other driods were crosswired to think that the mining droids were mineable, so the situation would be to mine or be mined. oh and i also made the mining laser a continuos beam wepon that cuts and drills slowly more than blasts, so its a litttle more grissly. is all this canonical?HK-47 rebuilt 20:50, 12 August 2008 (UTC)

Re:Maladi
Yes...we're almost done with Maladi (thank god). Graestan is probably going to copyedit and source the infobox soon, and all that remains after that is writing a P&T and P&A, and expanding a couple more sentences, especially in the section where the Sith capture Cade. I'd probably say its about 80% done right now, and once those tasks are finished, it should be ready to nominate for FA. Cheers. DC 18:06, 13 August 2008 (UTC)
 * Never mind that. Cade's capture section and the P&T are just about done. All that remains is the P&A, a little bit on the BTS, and a bit more sourcing. If you write a P&A, or at least one of those three, that would everything so much easier. Cheers. DC 20:55, 13 August 2008 (UTC)

RE:Hey!
Thanks, will do. Also I left comments on Kreia's talk page in regards to the name of the article, you might want to have a look if you haven't already. Glad you like my page, cheers. Jayce Carver 18:55, 27 October 2008 (UTC)

Kreia
It appears you're working on the Kreia article and, as I am too, I was wondering if you'd be interested on working on it collaboratively? To me it just seems foolish working on the same thing with the same goals in two separate projects. -- Darth tom (talk)  18:57, 4 November 2008 (UTC)
 * If you're going to change the name, put it through a CT first. It's too big a decision for one user to make. Graestan ( Talk ) 00:53, 5 November 2008 (UTC)


 * Anything in particular you'd like me to start work on? And shall I just edit the sub page? -- Darth tom (talk)  19:20, 5 November 2008 (UTC)

Re: Unprotect
Hey, Kasra :) I've went ahead and unprotected your user talk page as you requested. Anything else I can do for you, let me know. Cheers, Greyman ( Talk ) 20:01, 7 November 2008 (UTC)

Bastila vs Revan image
I uploaded the file you requested, I hope I'm not too late.Image:Bastila_vs_Revan.jpg MIS Tau 1 17:24, 12 December 2008 (UTC)

WP:KOTOR Meeting
Hello Jedi Kasra. Please note that there will be a project meeting for WP:KOTOR at 0:00 UTC (approx. 7:00pm Eastern Time) Saturday, 31 January, 2009. Please click here for further details, including agenda. Cheers  Madclaw Shyriiwook! 00:26, 10 January 2009 (UTC)
 * I'm pretty sure Goodwood will make a summary of what was discussed and give it a place on the project page. Cheers dude :)  Madclaw Shyriiwook! 15:43, 12 January 2009 (UTC)

Darth Malak GAN
Hey Jedi Krasa. I just wanted to let you know that I went through and did some copy-editing of punctuation and other bits and pieces. About the quotes, I agree with you, and since there seems to be some disagreement about including partial quotes in prose, I struck-out my objection. It may be worth your while to take a look at this discussion regarding quotes, if only to be aware of current sentiment. If you would like any help with the article, let me know and I'll be happy to do what I can. Cylka  -talk- 08:01, 13 January 2009 (UTC)

Hey Kasra. I did some more copy-editing of Malak and have removed most of the OR and POV issues. I removed the Yuthura Ban quote under the Dark Lord of the Sith section since the quote alone, without any text just doesn't look right. I removed the mention of Bastila in the Search for the Star Forge sub-section since she would need context at that point, and introducing her at that point wouldn't work very well. I also wanted to leave you a list of specific items that need some more work. The article is getting pretty close to having the objections taken care of. Just a bit more work is needed. Cylka  -talk- 01:46, 15 February 2009 (UTC)
 * Karath needs a bit more context. You especially need to explain how it was Malak who gave him this final test of allegiance.
 * Bastila needs a bit more context when she is first introduced in the Betraying the Master sub-section. Same goes for the Leviathan.
 * The Revelation on the Leviathan subsection needs to have more detail. Right now it barely skims over the detail, and a reader unfamiliar with the story would be lost.
 * Many of the paragraphs that come from the Knights of the Old Republic Campaign Guide need to be rewritten into your own words. They are bordering on copyright infringement. This is especially true in the P&T.
 * Make sure that the semi-colon is being used correctly.
 * See if you can merge some of the paragraphs together some more. there are many small paragraphs, and it would be better to get rid of them.
 * In the P&A, see if you can pipelink his Force powers a bit more. As it stands, it reads a bit like game mechanics.
 * Yo need to look through John Jackson Miller's KotOR blog to check his notes to see if he says anything more about Malak in his trivia section and notes.
 * The Bts really needs to have longer paragraphs. It reads like a trivia section too much.

Re: Visas Marr
Hey Krasa. I'm not exactly sure what you mean by working on her article. I was planning on taking her to FA soon, I just wanted to wait until my FAN for Telos IV went through first. I'm still new at the FA/GA nominations and I don't want to put up too many articles up at once. But if you see anything that would help improve the article, I would most certainly appreciate the help. Thanks. Cylka  -talk- 23:47, 21 January 2009 (UTC)

Vacae
Hey Kasra,

You may not be aware, but that particular user has been recently granted a permanent Wookieepedia vacation. You may want to direct your inquiries elswhere in light of that. Perhaps Lady Cylka, who has since assumed authority of the unnamed's current endeavors. Hope this helps. —Tommy9281 ( Peace is a lie ) 16:52, 26 January 2009 (UTC)

KotOR Project
Hey Krasa. If you want to, go ahead. My plan had been to wait until the meeting to bring up the current situation of the Project, but I imagine that that same little birdie who talked to you would like to move things along a bit more quickly than I have been. Either way, I know that you can't make the meeting, but logs and minutes will be posted afterwards. Thanks. Cylka  <span style="font-family: times, cursive; font-size: 13px"><font color=#00A693>-talk- 18:33, 26 January 2009 (UTC) Edit: Reading the above post, I may have been wrong about the birdie ;-)
 * It's good to hear that you are working on all of those articles. I too believe in this project and I hope to kick-start it again. I'm currently working on compiling lists of articles that fall under our project and I'm planning to overhaul the project's page. As to Visas, the reason the was added was because of a few things that I included that haven't been written anywhere else, such as: the Exile doesn't have to regret hurting her, nor does she have to learn Force-sight; the Exile doesn't have to give Visas permission to visit her meditation chambers on the Ravager; the Exile doesn't have to ask for Nihilus's mask; the Exile doesn't have to listen to Kreia's predictions. <span style="font-variant: small-caps; font-family: times, cursive; font-size: 16px"><font color=#008080>Cylka  <span style="font-family: times, cursive; font-size: 13px"><font color=#00A693>-talk- 21:17, 27 January 2009 (UTC)

Re: Atris and other projects
Hey Kasra. I've noticed that you've been editing the articles and I'm looking forward to checking them out this week. I'm a bit bogged down at the moment since we have Force cage under review by the Inqs and there has been a bit of a snag with it, but I should be able to look at your changes in a couple of days, and thank you for those quotes for Visas. I also wanted to tell you that I didn't mean to offend you by taking out the Project editor from your name. I'm not sure if you read the meeting logs, or maybe the discussion didn't come across all that clearly. We talked about the fact that since the project is in a bit of an organizational phase, we would discuss our roles in the project at the next meeting, once everything had settled down and we all had taken the time to think about what we wanted to do. So, it wasn't meant as anything personal at all, and I hope that you didn't take it that way. Also, just so you won't be surprised, I expect to be taking most of the names off of our members list by the end of the week. I left messages with all of the inactive members asking them to contact me as to whether they want to continue with the project. Keep up the hard work you've been putting in so far! <span style="font-variant: small-caps; font-family: times, cursive; font-size: 16px"><font color=#008080>Cylka  <span style="font-family: times, cursive; font-size: 13px"><font color=#00A693>-talk- 08:56, 3 February 2009 (UTC)
 * All the work you're doing is great. I believe some of the other members have left their opinion about Malak's quote. I'm also working on a hardcore copy-edit of his article based on the objections and from talking to the other AC members. I had to remove some of the images, since there were just way too many. Once I'm done with the copy-edit, I'll let you know and hopefully the GAN will start moving again. <span style="font-variant: small-caps; font-family: times, cursive; font-size: 16px"><font color=#008080>Cylka  <span style="font-family: times, cursive; font-size: 13px"><font color=#00A693>-talk- 05:53, 12 February 2009 (UTC)

Re:Form VII

 * Thanks for the info. I've updated the article appropriately. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 23:42, 5 February 2009 (UTC)

Re: Atris
Kasra,

Thanks for letting me know. I do not have time at the moment to start the article beyond some browsing. I'm hoping that during the summer I will be able to get into the article with great detail and clean 'er up. Have a good one. &mdash; Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 01:23, 6 February 2009 (UTC)
 * Figured there was not reason to start a new heading for this. Here's the picture. As for the Darth Traya image you asked for from CSWE, I can't get a decent scan of that one. Probably because I don't own the book, it's from the library, so the page probably is just too messy with fingerprints, nicks, etc for a good scan. -  JMAS  Hey, it's me! 16:52, 12 February 2009 (UTC)

Lightsaber pics
Here ya go. -  JMAS  Hey, it's me! 22:14, 9 February 2009 (UTC)

Darth Malak GAN
Thanks for dealing with the objections so quickly. In regards to your questions left on my talk page: Hope that helps. - Cavalier One ( Squadron channel ) 08:29, 20 February 2009 (UTC)
 * About Karath, I did put down context on him and why he was at the meeting, but did it in the following paragraph.
 * The problem with this is that you introduce Karath before the explanation for his presence. Perhaps shifting the explanation paragraph to earlier in the section may help this?
 * I don't feel that it is necessary to put Camper's involvement in the exogorth project in the "Captured at Flashpoint" section.
 * There should be some mention of his involvement. I'm not talking about going into great detail, but if you mention that Jarael was punished for talking to him, it deserves some mention.
 * "The Star Forge" section already mentions the fact that Malak took Jedi from Dantooine and used them for the Star Forge.
 * Chronologically, however, this event happened a lot earlier in the timeline. There should be an initial mention that he took prisoners during the attack, then revealed later on exactly what he does with them.
 * Also, I did take care of the first name-surname jumbo, but it doesn't right calling Bastila, "Shan" all the time, and it also doesn't it feel right calling Shel "Jelavan".
 * Can't budge on this one, I'm afraid. Shel Jelavan is an FA herself, and her entire article refers to her as "Shelavan". While Bastila is also an FA and refered to as "Bastila" throughout, it was written two years ago before the FA process was tightened. A recent GA that passed review, Black Vulkars, also uses "Shan" as the descriptive name. If you plan to take this through the FAN process, I can guarantee it will be insisted upon.

Re:Merge

 * You might want to place a merge tag on there, or just go to the trash compactor. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 16:29, 25 February 2009 (UTC)

Lightspeed
Hey, Jedi Kasra,

You may not be aware, but DC has recently taken a permanent Wookieepedia vacation. You may want to direct your inquiries for him elswhere in light of that. With regards to Malak, I will assume responsibility of his objections, but please allow for me to get situated. —Tommy  ( Nine two eight one ) 16:45, 28 February 2009 (UTC)

RE: Legacy WookieeProject
Hey Jedi Kasra :), good to hear you still want to be involved in the project. Its great that your starting work on Cade, but if you look on the Project page you'll see that listed Cade as his individual project so you might want to ask him if he would like to collaborate with you :); I will gladly help with it as well. Did you still want to be considered the Project editor? Since I'm gonna try to appoint some "officers", who can be go to people, such as Floyd is the LotF Specialist, so that can be your position. Also I was wondering if you have any specific ideas for some goals we can have this year? I'm gonna be asking the more active members of the Project this; things like how many FA/GA's we want to have and so forth. Thanks Jedi Kasra :-).  Grunny  ( Talk ) 02:28, 6 March 2009 (UTC)