Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Usma's Padawan


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Usma's Padawan

 * Nominated by: Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 22:15, September 13, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Moar! Moar! MOAR!

(1 ECs/3 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1) --LelalMekha (talk) 22:40, September 13, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) 501st  dogma ( talk ) 21:31, September 14, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  03:09, September 30, 2012 (UTC)
 * 4) Tinwe (comlink) 10:13, October 17, 2012 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) 501st
 * 2) * Same objections as Usma's. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 00:08, September 14, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) **Done. Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 16:10, September 14, 2012 (UTC)
 * 4) Exiled Jedi
 * 5) * The first sentence of the bio should be written with the article's subject as the subject of the sentences. (i.e. A female was a Jedi... Not: Usma had an apprentice who was a Jedi...)
 * 6) **Fixed, I believe.
 * 7) * You still refer to Usma as a female in this article.
 * 8) **Done.
 * 9) * Could you form one paragraph from all the sentences in the bio?
 * 10) **Done.
 * 11) * You should mention that Praven was a Sith Lord in the bio. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  01:46, September 24, 2012 (UTC)
 * 12) **Done.

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