Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Galactic Civil War (second nomination)


 * ''The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a featured article nomination that was unsuccessful. Please do not modify it.

Galactic Civil War

 * 1) User:Herbsewell - no date, invalid
 * 2)  Stake Black talk - Contribs at 22:27, 26 April 2006 (UTC)
 * 3) KEJ 07:19, 27 April 2006 (UTC)
 * 4) QX100 17:48 31 May 2006 (UTC)

Objections
 * Sorry, but no. Intro is too short. Normally I'm not a stickler about BTS but for a topic as big as this I'm sure there's something that can be said. The images that have been selected seem odd to me... I feel like there should be more images or at least more representative images. There are some formatting issues. The article includes mostly movie information, which is fine, but there is lots of EU information that is left out. Obviously not all the EU information can be included on the main page, but the EU information that does appear doesn't necessarily seem to be the most important EU aspects of the war. Am I way off on this one? Maybe it's just too late for me to think properly. - Breathesgelatin 09:29, 27 April 2006 (UTC)
 * I'm with you on the EU thing. Totally. Intros etc. are not my forte, so I can't tell you. But 2 paragraphs post endor? There are 15 years left!-- The Erl of the  talk  What I do 23:50, 27 April 2006 (UTC)
 * See above comments. Adamwankenobi Talk to me! My home. 12:54, 1 May 2006 (UTC)
 * I also agree with pretty much all of the above. -- Ozzel 20:49, 5 May 2006 (UTC)
 * Yes, its very in-depth, right up until the end. Skywalka 05:51, 28 May 2006 (UTC)
 * It's only about half done...maybe if it was retitled "Galactic Civil War, part 1". 8) &mdash;Silly Dan (talk) 02:43, 5 June 2006 (UTC)

Comments
 * Okay, I added a much better infobox image and lengthened the intro considerably. I think this can be featured eventually, but it still needs a lot of work until then.  --Thetoastman 02:23, 7 June 2006 (UTC)
 * It's a good article - but major events like the Thrawn Campaign, Return of the Emperor, establishment of the Jedi Academy and attacks + peace/Caamas Crisis need to be expanded upon. =) Rhysode 09:37, 10 June 2006 (UTC)