Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Asteroid Dreadnought

Asteroid Dreadnought

 * Nominated by:  Vitus Infinitus  Talk 05:28, February 10, 2018 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: "Oh look, an asteroid...wait a minute."

Tommy

 * If you're going to use Haxen Delto and Airen Cracken's full names, you need to source them, as the full names aren't in TRF. &mdash; Tommuskq  Imperial Emblem.svg ( TAKE A SEAT ) 08:46, February 10, 2018 (UTC)
 * Delto's full name is on page 46 I believe and Cracken's is on page 13. Should I still reference the source where their full name first appeared or just leave it sourced to Rebel Files?-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 15:53, February 10, 2018 (UTC)
 * You're right, that's fine as it is.&mdash; Tommuskq  Imperial Emblem.svg ( TAKE A SEAT ) 16:15, February 10, 2018 (UTC)
 * I'd suggest removing their ranks too, as they can change over time, and they aren't mentioned in that passage of TRF. &mdash; Tommuskq  Imperial Emblem.svg ( TAKE A SEAT ) 08:46, February 10, 2018 (UTC)
 * Fixed-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 15:53, February 10, 2018 (UTC)
 * I think I'd use the clone wars as a reference point for the second paragraph rather than Naboo (shortly before TCW; in 22 BBY, in the first year of TCW(I've forgotten when it actually occurred)), as that's more relivent and specific, even if you can't derive the specific date.&mdash; Tommuskq  Imperial Emblem.svg ( TAKE A SEAT ) 08:46, February 10, 2018 (UTC)
 * Since I don't have Catalyst I based it off what the article for Automated battlemoon asteroid says, which states that it was in the aftermath of the Invasion of Naboo, should I go ahead and change it to before Clone Wars?-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 15:53, February 10, 2018 (UTC)
 * I have the book so I'll look into it a bit later to see if it's before or during the clone wars, as that seems more logical to reference as it's closer.&mdash; Tommuskq  Imperial Emblem.svg ( TAKE A SEAT ) 16:15, February 10, 2018 (UTC)
 * The book says 'That said, following the Naboo Crisis of just eleven years ago, Republic Special Weapons Group developed plans for an automated battlemoon asteroid.' --Lewisr (talk) 16:23, February 10, 2018 (UTC)
 * Perhaps add Imperial Navy to the infobox. You could add it under Imperial Military if you wanted, but you'd have to work that link into the body. &mdash; Tommuskq  Imperial Emblem.svg ( TAKE A SEAT ) 08:46, February 10, 2018 (UTC)
 * Fixed!-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 15:53, February 10, 2018 (UTC)
 * "a rumored Imperial Navy warship that served as a dreadnought" suggests the ship's role is a dreadnought, when in actuality that is its classification. I suggest rewording this. &mdash; Tommuskq  Imperial Emblem.svg ( TAKE A SEAT ) 08:46, February 10, 2018 (UTC)
 * Fixed-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 15:53, February 10, 2018 (UTC)
 * Perhaps put camouflage under the countermeasures field of the infobox? &mdash; Tommuskq  Imperial Emblem.svg ( TAKE A SEAT ) 08:46, February 10, 2018 (UTC)
 * Added-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 15:53, February 10, 2018 (UTC)
 * "The asteroid supership was made canon by&hellip;" suggests Legends wasn't canon at first. I'd suggest using the term "new canon". &mdash; Tommuskq  Imperial Emblem.svg ( TAKE A SEAT ) 08:53, February 10, 2018 (UTC)
 * How's it look now?-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 15:53, February 10, 2018 (UTC)
 * Great.&mdash; Tommuskq  Imperial Emblem.svg ( TAKE A SEAT ) 16:15, February 10, 2018 (UTC)
 * Could you please add a screenshot for the tweet if you're going to use it.&mdash; Tommuskq  Imperial Emblem.svg ( TAKE A SEAT ) 16:31, February 10, 2018 (UTC)