Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations



This page is for the nomination of "comprehensive articles". For a list of "comprehensive articles", see Category:Wookieepedia comprehensive articles.


 * Comprehensive article nominations history
 * Comprehensive article nominations archiving checklist

What is a "comprehensive article?"

A "comprehensive article" is an article that contains all information regarding the topic. Often, "comprehensive articles" cannot reach Featured or Good Article status due to their limited content. This process is intended to recognize articles that contain all relevant canon information, yet are still under the 250 word limit required for a Good Article. The purpose of this is twofold&mdash;firstly, to help users distinguish what is a stub, and what is merely a short article with no further relevant material to be added, and, more importantly, to highlight for the reader when they are reading something that has been judged definitely "comprehensive"&mdash;that is, a guarantee to the reader that whatever they are reading contains the sum total of all available content.

Nominations and promotions of the Comprehensive article process are overseen by a collective of users known as the "EduCorps," which is made up of the Inquisitorius, the AgriCorps, and various other experienced users who are considered qualified to adequately judge the nominated material.

Lucasfilm Ltd. and its many licensees continue to expand the Star Wars universe. Since new information might become available, it may be necessary to revoke a "comprehensive article's" status. A forum will be used to nominate articles that have fallen out-of-date. Members of the EduCorps will then post a warning template on that page, and a grace period of one week will be instituted in which the article can be improved. If there is a significant amount of new information, it is likely that once updated, the article will become eligible for Good article status, and thereby ineligible for Comprehensive article status.

READ THIS FIRST!

An article must&hellip;


 * 1) &hellip;be well-written and detailed.
 * 2) &hellip;be unbiased, non-point of view.
 * 3) &hellip;be sourced with all available sources and appearances.
 * 4) &hellip;follow the Manual of Style, Layout Guide, and all other policies on Wookieepedia. This is, of course, within reason. If a topic only has a very limited degree of content that cannot be divided up into the relevant article sections, it is not required that it follow the Layout Guide precisely. This is to be judged on a case-by-case basis.
 * 5) &hellip;following the review process, be stable, i.e., does not change significantly from day to day and is not the subject of ongoing edit wars. This does not apply to vandalism and protection or semi-protection as a result of vandalism.
 * 6) &hellip;not be tagged with any sort of improvement tags (i.e. more sources, expand, etc).
 * 7) &hellip;have no redlinks.
 * 8) &hellip;have all relevant canon information presented.
 * 9) &hellip;be completely referenced for all available material and sources. See Sourcing for more information. While this is not required for an article possessing a singular source, it is encouraged, as it provides both uniformity and a good infrastructure should the topic be referenced in any future materials.
 * 10) &hellip;have all quotes and images sourced.
 * 11) &hellip;provide at least one relevant quote on the article if available.
 * 12) &hellip;include a "Behind the scenes" section for in-universe articles.
 * 13) &hellip;counting the introduction, the article body, and "Behind the scenes" material, must not exceed 250 words in length (not including captions, quotes, or headers, etc). Any articles exceeding the limit should be taken to the Good article nominations page for consideration.
 * 14) &hellip;if the nominated article reaches 200 words or greater, the nominator must either provide an intro or draft an intro and provide a link to the revision in the nomination, showing that the intro does not elevate the article over 250 words. Exceptions can be made for articles wherein the majority of the text is in the "Behind the scenes" section.

How to nominate:


 * 1) First, nominate an article you find is worthy of comprehensive status, putting it at the bottom of the list below. Nominated articles must meet all thirteen requirements stated above.
 * 2) Add CAnom at the top of the article you are nominating.
 * 3) Be sure to place sign in the "Nominated by" line when the nomination is posted for voting.
 * 4) Others will object to the nomination if they disagree that the article is good enough; they will then supply reasons for doing so, and ways to improve the article in accordance with the established rules.
 * 5) Nominators and supporters will adjust the article until the objectors (with reasonable objections) are satisfied. Objectors may also make alterations&mdash;if there is any reason for contention on a given point, it should be settled in a civil manner in the nomination field itself.
 * 6) Users may not vote on their own articles.
 * 7) There is no limit to the amount of nominations a given user can submit at any given time.

How to vote:


 * 1) Before doing anything, be sure to read the article completely, keeping a sharp eye out for mistakes.
 * 2) Afterward, compare the article to the criteria listed above, and then either support or object the article's nomination.
 * 3) *If you object, please supply concrete reasons for doing so, and how it can be improved.
 * 4) As stated above, any objections will be looked upon by the nominator, supporters, and anyone willing to improve the article, and action will be taken to please the objectors. Do not strike other users' objections; it is up to the objector to review the changes and strike if they are satisfied.
 * 5) There are several ways in which an article can receive the required number of votes. Within a 48-hour period of nomination, only EduCorps votes will count towards the total, although anyone may choose to vote in that window. If two members of the EduCorps support a nomination in that window, and there are no outstanding objections, the article can be considered a "Comprehensive article" and be tagged with the template 48 hours after the initial nomination.  The talk page will also be tagged with the CA template. When the 48 hours are up, any user's votes will contribute towards the total. If one EduCorps member has voted for an article after a week, three regular votes will be required. After the 48 hour period, an article can still also pass with just two EduCorps votes.
 * 6) Once a nomination is successful, it will be placed on the Comprehensive article list. Instructions on how to archive nominations, successful or otherwise, can be found here. Anyone can archive a nomination&mdash;just make sure it has the correct number of votes, has been nominated for at least a week (or 48 hours if there are two EC votes), and that there are absolutely no outstanding objections. If you are not sure how to do this, just ask, and someone will likely be more than willing to help you. Also, if you think you can slip one past us, think again&mdash;someone is always watching you.

All nominations will be considered idle and are subject to instantaneous removal by EduCorps members if objections are not addressed, or at least not answered, after a period of 1 week.

Please remember to archive your nomination beforehand if you plan on taking it to the Good Article Nominations page.

BT7 Thunderstrike

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:05, June 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Another The Old Republic nom.

(2 ECs/1 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 23:46, June 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Looks good.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  12:20, June 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Menkooroo 13:57, July 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) Menkooroo 13:57, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Object Comments
 * 1) Axinal
 * 2) *Pretty good for the most part, just a couple of things:
 * 3) ** Could we get some context on the "Exchange"? We don't necessarily need to know the details of Korr's "messing up" of their operations, but it would be good to know what the Exchange was.
 * 4) ***Added a little context. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 23:39, June 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) ** While we're on the subject, could we get a less colloquial phrase than "messing up"?
 * 6) ***How's that? Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 23:39, June 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) ** At the very end, you tell us that "it was Korr's old friend and former Jedi Knight Aryn Leneer." We, as the readers, already know this from above. Instead of telling us who was in the ship, as we already know, could you perhaps give a brief description of Korr's reaction to finding out?&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 22:15, June 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) ***Does that work? Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 23:39, June 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) ** Also, please try to remember that, except in 4+ digit numbers, a comma is almost always followed by a space. Other than that, looks good.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 22:17, June 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) ***OK got it. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 23:39, June 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) ****Great work, Cal.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 23:46, June 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * 12) *****Thanks Ax!! :) Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:18, June 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * 13) Yo
 * 14) * Can you give a more specific timeframe than "the days of the Old Republic" The Old Republic lasts for tens of thousands of years. Even if you just dated the Sacking of Coruscant, it would be good. Menkooroo 07:16, July 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 15) **How's that? Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:14, July 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 16) Imperators II
 * 17) * 3,653 BBY can't be sourced to Deceived.  Imperators II (Talk) 17:13, July 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 18) **Fixed. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 18:59, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Lexi Dio (starship)

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:19, June 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:TFU CAN for TFU.

(1 ECs/0 Users/1 Total)
Support


 * 1) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 01:08, July 3, 2011 (UTC)

Object Comments
 * 1) The Force Unleashed II release date is incorrect.  Teff  02:33, June 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *Oops. Don't know how I missed that. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 02:37, June 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Axinal
 * 4) * Are there any quotes available from the novel?
 * 5) **Let me check that. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 13:51, June 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) * The fact that it was an assault bomber during the early days of the Rebellion is currently exclusive to the intro.
 * 7) **Got it. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 13:51, June 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) *** This might be a little picky, but you say "early days of the Rebellion" in the intro. While you specify 1 BBY in the body, it's not entirely clear to the reader that 1 BBY is in the early days of the Rebellion. Could you throw that in somewhere?&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 22:00, June 26, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) ****How does that look? Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:49, June 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) *****Looks good to me. Any luck with a quote, or are there none?&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 10:10, June 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) ******Haven't been able to look yet. I should be able to look for one sometime this week. But I put a request for a quote on the talk page in case someone else found a good quote first. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 19:11, June 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 12) *******How's that quote? Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:51, July 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 13) ********Perfect, minus the comma problems, which I fixed assuming they weren't [sic]s.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 01:08, July 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 14) * It is not entirely necessary to source it, as you did for the history section, but it is encouraged. If you do source it, however, you need to source every bulleted item in the infobox.
 * 15) **OK fixed. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 13:51, June 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * 16) *I added the template for you to italicize the title.
 * 17) **OK thanks. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 13:51, June 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * 18) *Otherwise, nice article.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 08:19, June 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * 19) **Great thanks! Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 13:51, June 25, 2011 (UTC)

Unidentified nurse (Coruscant)

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 20:24, June 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Unidentified stuff up for TOR

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 21:43, June 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Looks good.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:15, June 30, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Axinal
 * 2) * "...her blue medical uniform looked like a tent on her." This kind of toes the line of the WP:NPOV policy. However, if you said exactly who thought it looked like a tent, it could stay.
 * 3) **Actually it wasn't a person in the book that thought it. It was Paul S. Kemp. "Her uniform looked like a blue tent on her stout body." is what the book says. But I guess it could be considered POV. So, what exactly would the decision on that be? Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:03, June 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Typically, newer novels are told from a particular person's point of view, even narrative text. The PoV typically changes from section to section, chapter to chapter, but you almost never hear the internal thoughts of two different individuals within the same section. Can you discern through whose eyes the events unfold in this particular section of the novel?&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 21:18, June 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) ****Darth Malgus.
 * 6) * Is there an article for the medical facility?
 * 7) **I couldn't find one.
 * 8) ***I'd say it's worthy of one, if you care to create it. You could just write the basic information and leave it as a stub if you wish.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 21:23, June 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) ****I added the page. But it's pretty small. I'll cleanup it up and enlarge it myself once I get some time. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:34, June 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) * Could you add the year for the Battle of Coruscant, as well as the name of the larger conflict?
 * 11) **How's that? Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:26, June 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 12) * Darth Malgus and Eleena Daru could both use context in the intro, and Malgus could also use some in the bio.
 * 13) **OK.
 * 14) * The description of the nurse in the bio, such as her hair color, weight, etc., would be more suited in the P+T rather than the bio.
 * 15) **I transferred it.
 * 16) * Could you add Category:Unidentified individuals?
 * 17) **OK.
 * 18) *I think that's it from me; nice work otherwise.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 20:52, June 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 19) **Great thanks! Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:19, June 27, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Paouoish Rahhdool

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 16:10, June 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: One-mention-Jedi Master

(1 ECs/2 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) Good work.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  17:04, June 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 01:13, July 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:34, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * You need to mention his affiliation to the Republic and the Jedi Order in the body of the article. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:17, June 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Done.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 16:51, June 30, 2011 (UTC)

Comments
 * 1) Cal Jedi
 * 2) * "He discovered the infant Shistavanen Voolvif Monn abandoned near the Arah asteroid belt. " This makes it sound like he found the infant in space. Was the infant in a starship? or on a planet near the asteroid belt? Please specify. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:43, June 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Done.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 14:44, July 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) * Maybe this is too picky, but do you know what the name of the world is where he found the infant? Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:15, July 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) * Since this Master is not mentioned much, there probably isn't really any relevant quotes. But if there is one, you need to put it on there. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:18, July 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) **No.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:27, July 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) * This should be the last thing, but do you know what species this master is? Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:20, July 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) **No. All info about him is in the article.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:27, July 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) Please reload the infobox. Even if they're not used, every field should be present. Handy link. Menkooroo 07:19, July 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) *Indeed. Done and thanks for the review.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 17:42, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Kashyyyk treeworm

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 00:44, July 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: The Wookieepedia Tire-Fire burns on.

(1 ECs/2 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) Small, but well written. :) Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:57, July 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Amazing... Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  11:55, July 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 21:31, July 3, 2011 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Kashyyyk treeworm silk

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 00:44, July 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Silky smooth.

(1 ECs/2 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:59, July 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) I'll bet you have the most CAs, Naru.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  11:56, July 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) He pumps them out like...well, like Kashyyyk treeworms pump out silk, I guess. :P&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 21:32, July 3, 2011 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Unidentified musical composition (LoBue Cantina)

 * Nominated by:  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:13, July 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

(1 ECs/0 Users/1 Total)
Support
 * 1) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 03:43, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Axinal
 * 2) * Before I give a more thorough review, I think you ought to reread the article and fix up some of the run-on sentences, punctuation, and overall general grammar. For example, I'm sure the comma following 9 ABY was intended to be a period, but the sentence after that is entirely too long. I suggest cutting it down and then proofreading the entire article for other run-ons and punctuation errors.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 19:31, July 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Better?-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  19:49, July 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) *** Much better, thank you. My only other problem is with the title, which I find to be a little too generic. What do you think about moving the page to Unidentified musical composition (Lobue Cantina)?
 * 5) ****I moved it to Unidentified musical composition (LoBue Cantina). (It is called LoBue in the book.)-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  22:18, July 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) *****Yeah, my mistake. Nice work!&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 03:43, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

Comments
 * Just a little something I found while reading Heir to the Empire.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:13, July 3, 2011 (UTC)

Alliance to Restore the Republic communications center (Thyferra)

 * Nominated by: &mdash;TK-999 Era-imp.png(Rise of the Empire) 17:45, July 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: A small structure with a long name.

(1 ECs/2 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) Here in New Hampshire, we have "Newhampshirehelpwanted.com: Long name, amazing results." Their commercials annoy me, but it's all I could think about when I saw the comment. :P&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 21:29, July 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *XD TK999 —[Discuss] 09:30, July 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  22:20, July 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4)  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 17:17, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Lee attacks
 * 2) * Is it really said that it was built by the Imperials? I think it was mentioned, but I'm not sure.
 * 3) **The text entry you get by hovering your mouse over it says "Abandoned Empire Comm Array".&mdash;TK-999 Era-imp.png(Rise of the Empire) 20:06, July 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) * Please give more context about your last sentence in the Bts. That means explain how it depends on the perfomance on the player.
 * 5) **Done.&mdash;TK-999 Era-imp.png(Rise of the Empire) 20:06, July 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) *Otherwise nice work.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 17:57, July 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) **Thanks for the review!&mdash;TK-999 Era-imp.png(Rise of the Empire) 20:06, July 3, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Gungan fish soup

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 17:56, July 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: None. Wait. "None" is also a comment.

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 20:23, July 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Hmmm...what do Gungans eat?-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  03:36, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Axinal
 * 2) * Is it clear from the novel exactly who found it tasty? The way it's currently written seems opinionated.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 19:36, July 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Nope. Not said.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 14:01, July 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Not even contextually implied based on the point of view? Oh well, I guess it's fine the way it is. Nice work.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 20:23, July 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) ****No, nothing.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 09:27, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Sernpidalian mayo-ketchup

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 00:19, July 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Why did I write this, you ask? Because mustard, that's why.

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) Just mix some ketchup and mayo together...huh?-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  03:33, July 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 03:17, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Axinal
 * 2) * The last sentence of the BTS, about real-life ketchup and mayo, is speculation if you ask me, and has no place in the article. Otherwise, though, very nice.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 19:57, July 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **It's a precedented concesssion. SavageBob asked for a reference to the real world item to be put into Testosterone (see its nomination for his reasoning), so I added a BTS note and it was deemed fine. I don't see anything particularly wrong with keeping the brief note when we don't have previous references to Ketchup or mayo (therefore no articles on them), where such a note would admittedly be better situated. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 20:07, July 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) ***I'm willing to concede this point. I've just seen a lot of overzealous purging on this site of anything not 100% sourceable, but the information in the BTS is at least factual, if somewhat trivial. I still wouldn't mind seeing it removed, but it's not a big deal for me. The article is otherwise very good.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 03:17, July 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) ****As someone who removes a lot of speculation from articles, I'm rather "meh" on the note's inclusion. It doesn't hurt, so I don't see any point in arguing over it. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 21:50, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Revwien coleslaw

 * Nominated by:  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  03:31, July 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: A companion to Naru's mayo-ketchup nomination.

(0 ECs/1 Users/1 Total)
Support
 * 1) Well played, but you'll have to do better in order to best me! >3 NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 18:05, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Object Comments
 * 1) The menu was IU. Could you quote it? I forgot to.  NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 15:36, July 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * No, it is not described, all it says is "Revwien coleslaw 2.7 credits".-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  15:41, July 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) As lame as this sounds, you'll have to find a source for the description of real-life coleslaw. Menkooroo 07:10, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Revwien lettuce

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 15:22, July 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Sir, I see your coleslaw and raise you one lettuce.

(0 ECs/1 Users/1 Total)
Support
 * 1) Mmm...nice lettuce.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  15:25, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Jangeth
 * 2) * Check your grammar  JangFett  (Talk) 19:24, July 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Specifically...? NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 20:10, July 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) ***It shouldn't be that difficult to catch minor errors.  JangFett  (Talk) 20:20, July 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) ****You didn't fix grammatical errors there. You used a different sentence structure than I did and reverted the change I made when I was trying to interperet what you meant. You have to either be specific about the grammar error you've noticed or fix it yourself. Regardless, I do like the way you've changed it. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 20:36, July 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) *****Tense shifting is a grammatical error.  JangFett  (Talk) 21:09, July 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) ******The sentence "Revwien lettuce was a type of lettuce used in Dexter Jettster's restaurant on the planet of Coruscant, Dex's Diner, before his business was destroyed in 19 BBY" does not shift tenses though. Simplified and removing the apositive it reads "This lettuce was a type of lettuce used in his restaurant before his business was destroyed in 19 BBY," which is clunkier than it reads now, but all in past tense. I don't want to keep making the mistake you're seeing, so would you mind picking out the offending words for me to see? NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 21:19, July 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) *******That's the wrong sentence, Naru. For the sake of ending this redundant argument, it was in the bts.  JangFett  (Talk) 20:49, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Dexter Jettster's nerfsteak seasoning

 * Nominated by:  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:27, July 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: I counter with steak seasoning.

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) Nice holofoil. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 18:34, July 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Menkooroo 07:13, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Jangeth
 * 2) * Check your grammar  JangFett  (Talk) 19:24, July 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Is this better?-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  19:59, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Comments
 * In the article the dish is reffered to as nerfsteak not nerf steak.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:27, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

B'omarr-style pickle

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 18:20, July 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: My turn. I tap two pickles and play Shahrazad.

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support Object
 * Hey, this is almost a mini Barn Burner we've got going on.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  18:45, July 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) *And it's completely impromptu. XD NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 19:17, July 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Good work here on the CAN page, guys. And just a reminder that everybody is free to archive successful CANs. There are quite a few at the top that are ready, and I'm a little tired of being the only one who archives. Do it! You know you want to! Menkooroo 06:02, July 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) *There they go...-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  14:40, July 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) **Remember to add the nomination to the CAN History page, EJ. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 21:02, July 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) ***I knew I had forgotten something, sorry.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  21:51, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

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Namana cream pie

 * Nominated by:  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  18:43, July 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Here comes a pie, Naru.

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 * 1) Comedy. How quaint. ;) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 22:14, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

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 * 1) The first sentence is a run-on.  NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 19:14, July 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * Better?-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  20:18, July 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) Jangeth
 * 2) * Check your grammar  JangFett  (Talk) 19:24, July 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Better?-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  20:16, July 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * Does anyone think I need to elaborate about the Bakurans and the Namana plant?-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  18:43, July 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * You should make reference to it as "native to the planet of Bakura" or something to that effect. As for the plant, even though it's not explicitly established that it was made from that plant, the use of the name combined with it being native to Bakura would make a reference to the trees appropriate. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 19:14, July 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * I added a reference to Bakura, how would you suggest I reference the tree?-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  20:16, July 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * "Namana cream pie was a type of pie from the planet Bakura, home of the Namana tree, that was served..." would probably work. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 20:25, July 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * Done.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  20:42, July 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * Remember to source the word "before" to Dining at Dex's. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 19:14, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Gonzo yellow cheese

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 19:14, July 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: I sacrifice my worthless cheese monster to summon Kilson the PIE Eater to the battlefield.

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 * 1) OK which one of you are going to take on topato slices next? :D Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 20:44, July 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Good move.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  14:44, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

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 * 1) Jangeth
 * 2) * Check your grammar
 * 3) **Could you be specific? It looks right to me. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 19:40, July 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) * What does the destruction of Dex's Diner have anything to do with the cheese?  JangFett  (Talk) 19:24, July 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) **Meaning that it was no longer served there after its destruction. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 19:40, July 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) ***Looks better

Tal (Nurse)

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:14, July 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Partner nom to my other CAnom.

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 * 1) -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  22:14, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

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 * 1) Rubedo
 * 2) * Saying "...Darth Malgus from taking Malgus's lover..." sounds wierd. Could you establish that Daru was at the medical facility where Tal worked, then say Malgus came for her? NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 21:26, July 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Fixed. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:12, July 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) * Why are you using Sith Master there? That is a title specific to the master/apprentice relationship, and Malgus was not in one of those to my knowledge. He was a Sith Lord. [[User:NaruHina|NaruHina ]] Talk Anakinsolo.png 22:23, July 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) **Done.
 * 7) * The nurse "warned him that Malgus was a Sith" so what happened? NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 22:23, July 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) **done.
 * 9) * I think it would be better to say that the facility was alligned with the Galactic Republic rather than stating flatly that Tal was GA-affiliated. That them medical facility is on Coruscant is is why Tal is GR-affiliated, I presume? NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 22:23, July 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) **and done. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:40, July 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) *Was the reason he let Malgus leave with her becasue the Sith were in power on the planet or merely the intimidation factor? That's probably not specified, but I just wanna check. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 23:17, July 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * 12) **Deceived simply states that he let her go. It doesn't state why. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:00, July 7, 2011 (UTC)


 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * You need to mention his affiliation to the Republic in the body of the aritcle. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  21:54, July 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Got it. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:12, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

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The Nebula

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:24, July 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Another one of those great things in Star Wars that is small, but worth mentioning.

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 * 1) Looks good to me.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  22:01, July 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2)  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 18:04, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

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 * 1) Source the quote. Normally I would fix this, but such a significant error should not happen. Nice work otherwise.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 17:45, July 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *Fixed. I usually don't miss such a big mistake. Must have been tired. :P Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 17:59, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Darth Malgus's personal shuttle

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:45, July 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Still going with TOR Deceived.

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 * 1) The Sith Empire
 * 2) *I'll look through a little more thoroughly soon, but before that, you should look through The Old Republic: The Third Lesson. I believe Malgus's shuttle appears there, as well. Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 17:51, July 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Does it actually appear so I'd have to expand the article, or does it just mention it so I'd have to put it in the appearances section? Unfortunately, I don't get the Insider, so I won't be able to check myself. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 18:26, July 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) ***It appears. Check around online for a synopsis or a downloadable version. If you cant find it, let me know and I'll help you with the information. Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 18:30, July 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) ****The only thing I could find was something saying that he left Alderaan in a ship. I'm assuming that's his shuttle. Is that what you were thinking of? Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 18:55, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

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Unidentified air taxi driver droid

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:38, July 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:I'm getting a Deceived burner going! :D

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Vollen Sor

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 02:00, July 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:More from Deceived! :P

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Touler

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 02:19, July 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Takin' a break from Deceived to do a single mention from TFU2.

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 * 1)  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 18:25, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

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 * 1) Hey, I wanted to take him :P
 * 2) * First, the infobox needs to be the Imperial character infobox.
 * 3) **Fixed.
 * 4) * Then you have to hide the biographical part.
 * 5) **Done.
 * 6) * What source say that Touler is a Human Male? The only mention of him is the quote and there is no other source which says that.
 * 7) **Oops, got a little ahead of myself there.
 * 8) * The info about him could use some context on Vader, Kamino and the events of the battle (stationed over Kamino, battled the Rebels, Imperials loose at the end).
 * 9) **How's that?
 * 10) *Please remember to check all those things mentioned above before you nominate an article. But nice work anyway.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 17:38, July 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) **Yea, normally I wouldn't let such big mistakes get through, but I just wasn't paying attention. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 18:22, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Doghouse

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 03:17, July 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Back to Deceived! :))

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Hraashi Lool

 * Nominated by: Menkooroo 07:03, July 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Nuthin' in the CSWE.

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 * 1) Nice. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:35, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

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 * Also, I hereby put out an open challenge for other users to write and CAN Lomina Argo and Wuuden Malnic! Menkooroo 08:14, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Wuuden Malnic

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:25, July 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:I'm stepping up to the plate Menk! :)

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 * 1) You have taken on the challenge!
 * 2) *Unfortunately, you can't copy and paste others' work. You'll need to write your own bts.
 * 3) **OK rewrote it.
 * 4) *You should probably rewrite the parts of the bio that you kept from the previous version of the article, too. It's always better to write the article yourself, and what was there before was missing some context to boot. Just what the "crisis" is should be established.
 * 5) **How's that?
 * 6) *The "customary to his species" line will have to be sourced to something else, like an Essential Guide or something. Alternatively, you could leave it out. Either way is OK.
 * 7) **Fixed.
 * 8) *He seems an aggressive lad. Could you mention that he swore at the journalist?
 * 9) **I added in that he swore, but I didn't mention that he swore at the journalist per se. He more swore at the Republic.
 * 10) *I think you're right about this character being male, but could you throw in a source similar to the one here? I think the duck test is generally a Human thing, so some sort of added clarification might be good. Menkooroo 16:12, July 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) **Fixed. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 16:53, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Lomina Argo

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 16:02, July 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:WAY BACK!! and GONE!!

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