Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations



This page is for the nomination of "comprehensive articles". For a list of "comprehensive articles", see Category:Wookieepedia comprehensive articles.


 * Comprehensive article nominations history
 * Comprehensive article nominations archiving checklist

What is a "comprehensive article?"

A "comprehensive article" is an article that contains all information regarding the topic. Often, "comprehensive articles" cannot reach Featured or Good Article status due to their limited content. This process is intended to recognize articles that contain all relevant canon information, yet are still under the 250 word limit required for a Good Article. The purpose of this is twofold&mdash;firstly, to help users distinguish what is a stub, and what is merely a short article with no further relevant material to be added, and, more importantly, to highlight for the reader when they are reading something that has been judged definitely "comprehensive"&mdash;that is, a guarantee to the reader that whatever they are reading contains the sum total of all available content.

Nominations and promotions of the Comprehensive article process are overseen by a collective of users known as the "EduCorps," which is made up of the Inquisitorius, the AgriCorps, and various other experienced users who are considered qualified to adequately judge the nominated material.

Lucasfilm Ltd. and its many licensees continue to expand the Star Wars universe. Since new information might become available, it may be necessary to revoke a "comprehensive article's" status. A forum will be used to nominate articles that have fallen out-of-date. Members of the EduCorps will then post a warning template on that page, and a grace period of one week will be instituted in which the article can be improved. If there is a significant amount of new information, it is likely that once updated, the article will become eligible for Good article status, and thereby ineligible for Comprehensive article status.

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An article must&hellip;


 * 1) &hellip;be well-written and detailed.
 * 2) &hellip;be unbiased, non-point of view.
 * 3) &hellip;be sourced with all available sources and appearances.
 * 4) &hellip;follow the Manual of Style, Layout Guide, and all other policies on Wookieepedia. This is, of course, within reason. If a topic only has a very limited degree of content that cannot be divided up into the relevant article sections, it is not required that it follow the Layout Guide precisely. This is to be judged on a case-by-case basis.
 * 5) &hellip;following the review process, be stable, i.e., does not change significantly from day to day and is not the subject of ongoing edit wars. This does not apply to vandalism and protection or semi-protection as a result of vandalism.
 * 6) &hellip;not be tagged with any sort of improvement tags (i.e. more sources, expand, etc).
 * 7) &hellip;have no redlinks.
 * 8) &hellip;have all relevant canon information presented.
 * 9) &hellip;be completely referenced for all available material and sources. See Sourcing for more information. While this is not required for an article possessing a singular source, it is encouraged, as it provides both uniformity and a good infrastructure should the topic be referenced in any future materials.
 * 10) &hellip;have all quotes and images sourced.
 * 11) &hellip;provide at least one relevant quote on the article if available.
 * 12) &hellip;include a "Behind the scenes" section for In-Universe articles.
 * 13) &hellip;counting the introduction and "Behind the scenes" material, must not exceed 250 words in length (not including captions, quotes, or headers, etc). Any articles exceeding the limit should be taken to the Good Article nominations page for consideration.

How to nominate:


 * 1) First, nominate an article you find is worthy of comprehensive status, putting it at the bottom of the list below. Nominated articles must meet all thirteen requirements stated above.
 * 2) Add CAnom at the top of the article you are nominating.
 * 3) Be sure to place sign in the "Nominated by" line when the nomination is posted for voting.
 * 4) Others will object to the nomination if they disagree that the article is good enough; they will then supply reasons for doing so, and ways to improve the article in accordance with the established rules.
 * 5) Nominators and supporters will adjust the article until the objectors (with reasonable objections) are satisfied. Objectors may also make alterations&mdash;if there is any reason for contention on a given point, it should be settled in a civil manner in the nomination field itself.
 * 6) Users may not vote on their own articles.
 * 7) There is no limit to the amount of nominations a given user can submit at any given time.

How to vote:


 * 1) Before doing anything, be sure to read the article completely, keeping a sharp eye out for mistakes.
 * 2) Afterward, compare the article to the criteria listed above, and then either support or object the article's nomination.
 * 3) *If you object, please supply concrete reasons for doing so, and how it can be improved.
 * 4) As stated above, any objections will be looked upon by the nominator, supporters, and anyone willing to improve the article, and action will be taken to please the objectors. Do not strike other users' objections; it is up to the objector to review the changes and strike if they are satisfied.
 * 5) There are several ways in which an article can receive the required number of votes. Within a 48-hour period of nomination, only EduCorps votes will count towards the total, although anyone may choose to vote in that window. If two members of the EduCorps support a nomination in that window, and there are no outstanding objections, the article can be considered a "Comprehensive article" and be tagged with the template 48 hours after the initial nomination.  The talk page will also be tagged with the CA template. When the 48 hours are up, any user's votes will contribute towards the total. If one EduCorps member has voted for an article after a week, three regular votes will be required. After the 48 hour period, an article can still also pass with just two EduCorps votes.
 * 6) Once a nomination is successful, it will be placed on the Comprehensive article list. Instructions on how to archive nominations, successful or otherwise, can be found here. Anyone can archive a nomination&mdash;just make sure it has the correct number of votes, has been nominated for at least a week (or 48 hours if there are two EC votes), and that there are absolutely no outstanding objections. If you are not sure how to do this, just ask, and someone will likely be more than willing to help you. Also, if you think you can slip one past us, think again&mdash;someone is always watching you.

All nominations will be considered idle and are subject to instantaneous removal by EduCorps members if objections are not addressed, or at least not answered, after a period of 2 weeks.

Sluis Van space facility

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 06:54, July 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Long live the CAN! Long live the Random Article Noms!

(1 ECs/3 Users/3 Total)
Support Object
 * 1)  Darth Karika  will destroy your planet! 19:50, July 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2)  SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 23:02, July 21, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) Menkooroo 07:25, July 22, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) -- DarthRage Leave a message after the beep 18:22, August 14, 2010 (UTC)
 * 1) Darth Karika
 * 2) * Infobox is missing the name.
 * 3) * BtS, last sentence: missing italics closing tag.
 * 4) * Did the facility appear in The Thrawn Trilogy Sourcebook, or was it just mentioned?  Darth Karika  will destroy your planet! 13:31, July 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) Kinda minor, but as the information in TTT sourcebook was just reprinted from the DFR sourcebook, wouldn't it be more appropriate to use the DFR sourcebook as your source, rather than TTT sourcebook? Menkooroo 17:00, July 21, 2010 (UTC)
 * 6) *I suppose. TTT was just the one I was looking at that second, so changed. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 06:38, July 22, 2010 (UTC)
 * 7) Cav
 * 8) *Is there anything to suggest that the Sluis Van space facility isn't just another name for the Sluis Van shipyards? I would suggest checking other sources concerning the shipyards just to make sure. The fact that they are described as "extensive" in the sourcebook leads me to believe that they could be one and the same. - Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 10:16, July 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * 9) **I'm going to echo Cav's sentiment here&mdash;particularly considering that the primary source for this is Thrawn Trilogy material, where the Sluis Van shipyards were introduced. Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 20:49, July 31, 2010 (UTC)
 * 10) ***The space facility was introduced in the DFR Sourcebook, which didn't deal with the shipyards at all because they weren't relative to the book. The TT Sourcebook does use the Battle at the Shipyards as it's time quantifier for the character entrys and time period but the Slussi section makes no reference to the battle at all. In fact, it refers to there not just being one catch-all shipyard in the sector, but several, with the facility referred to as a singular entity. "An advanced people, they established a number of major space yards throughout the Sluis Sector, including the extensive Sluis Van space facility." NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 05:40, August 10, 2010 (UTC)
 * 11) ****However, one of the opening chapters of DFR has Luke trying to get his X-wing repaired to fly back to Coruscant. He is on the Sluis Van Central space station, in the Sluis system. I think you may need to check over the information presented in the novel; the Sluis Van shipyards are present in DFR, and with the words "Sluis Van" in the name, then it is more than likely that the facility is within the Sluis Van system, despite the fact that the Sluissi established space yards throughout the sector. - Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 11:13, August 20, 2010 (UTC)

Comments
 * 2 week vacation. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 22:50, August 12, 2010 (UTC)

Rohan Wayside

 * Nominated by: Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 16:46, July 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Swamp inhabitant

(1 ECs/3 Users/4 Total)
Support Object
 * 1) --''' Bonslywizard Trade Federation Symbol.jpg( Send a transmission...It's perfectly legal! ) 22:50, August 8, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Well done. Menkooroo 10:15, August 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3)  SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 22:30, August 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) -- DarthRage Leave a message after the beep 23:25, August 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * 1) The article needs sourcing, a little more specific detailing (e.g: Bob was a human male...) and the picture is not a picture of him so it does not need to be there at all. And what species is he? Do you know? --''' Bonslywizard Trade Federation Symbol.jpg( Send a transmission...It's perfectly legal! ) 17:41, August 8, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) *Article upgraded; picture removed; and no, the game does not specify what species he is. It doesn't need sourced if there is only one appearance. Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 18:18, August 8, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) Yo
 * 4) * Some context is needed on Gavyn Sykes ---even just adding "of the Naboo Resistance" after his name. Currently, the article only indirectly states that Sykes is part of that resistance.
 * 5) *Is "Houseboat clan" the actual name of the clan? If so, create an article on it and link to it, if not, listing this as his affiliation in the infobox might be preferable.
 * 6) *Can you mention in the bts that Battle for Naboo was his first appearance, and only appearance to date? Otherwise, good work. Menkooroo 01:18, August 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 7) **Done and done. Thank you for checking out the article. Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 09:49, August 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 8) * The way it's currently written, it sounds like the trading village was a swamp, not just inside one. Please clarify. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 05:43, August 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 9) **Indeed.
 * 10) ***This doesn't mean that you can just take it out; it is still relevant info, it just needs to be portrayed correctly. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 10:34, August 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 11) ****Re-added.
 * 12) Cav:
 * 13) *In the article history, you note that the name is taken from IMDB. This needs to be detailed in the BTS, showing exactly how you came to this conclusion. - Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 11:23, August 24, 2010 (UTC)
 * 14) **Sorry about that; the name really does come from the game. I just needed a trip to IMDB to remind me of that fact, since I wrote the article without first going back and rechecking the game. Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 14:04, August 24, 2010 (UTC)
 * 15) ***Okay, but I've just created a red link for the voice actor, Doug Boyd. Can you please create the article, since CAs should have no redlinks. - Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 09:42, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Unidentified Naboo homestead owner

 * Nominated by: Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 20:49, August 3, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Brave man running across the field in a battle

(1 ECs/2 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1)  QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 15:32, August 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2)  SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 10:36, August 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) Menkooroo 15:01, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * How do you know that he is a Human and a Naboo native? It is not stated in the game. All we know is that he was a male who lived on Naboo by 32 BBY; it was not necessarily his homeworld. QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 08:51, August 5, 2010 (UTC)
 * He runs across the screen and has the same sprite of the other human civilians, and "homeworld" is used in the general sense of place of residence. I once saw a Talk Page post explaining the nuances.
 * Hmm, I have not noticed him running around before. Every time I saved him, he was driving a vehicle, but I'll take your word on it. Regarding homeworld, no, it is always used in a sense of the place where the individual was born and/or spent his youth. QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 11:23, August 11, 2010 (UTC)
 * He runs out right when the second wave of STAPS appear. Talk page discussion:[|]. Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 15:58, August 11, 2010 (UTC)
 * 1) * Unidentified is not to be used inside an actual article.
 * 2) * Please standardize your capitalization of homestead. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 05:48, August 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) **Nixed. Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 10:00, August 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * Cav
 * Since he apparently has dialogue, do we know who voiced him? - Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 09:46, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Comments
 * Note some of the changes I made --- in particular, it's always advisable to mention the species and sex in the article's body, and one-sentence paragraphs should be avoided. Good work, though! Menkooroo 15:01, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

Unidentified mine operator

 * Nominated by: Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 20:49, August 3, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Defensive beaurocrat

(0 ECs/2 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1)  QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 11:25, August 11, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) looks worthy -- DarthRage Leave a message after the beep 23:17, August 30, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * "He was presumed to have been killed when Sykes destroyed the control room." Speculation. Besides, it is not even required to destroy the control room. QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 08:48, August 5, 2010 (UTC)
 * Removed, but every time I played, I needed to destroy the control center before the game let me proceed. Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 09:49, August 5, 2010 (UTC)
 * Weird. Every time I played it, I only had to destroy the plasma miners to progress. Maybe it depends on the game's version or something? QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 11:25, August 11, 2010 (UTC)
 * The intro and the bio are two separate entities, so context is needed on Borvo in the latter. You've mentioned that he's working for Borvo in the intro, but you've gotta mention it in the bio, too.
 * Is it known who the flight leader of Bravo Squadron is? If so, can you pipelink them? Menkooroo 01:21, September 2, 2010 (UTC)
 * Cav
 * Do we have an article for Sykes' flight leader?
 * Do we know who voice him as he apparently has dialogue? - Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 09:48, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Comm 4

 * Nominated by: Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 11:52, August 4, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Labeled as technology, not a structure.

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1)  SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 11:39, August 18, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Looks good to me -- DarthRage Leave a message after the beep 23:15, August 30, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Soresu
 * 2) * Be more specific about how it was destroyed. Was it disabled by infiltrators? Destroyed in a space battle?
 * 3) * Can it be proven that it was created in 32 BBY? Just because it got deployed above Naboo in that year doesn't mean it was manufactured then. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 23:07, August 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) **Context added; and I cannot prove it was created in 32 BBY so I removed the information. Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 11:27, August 18, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) Not Soresu
 * 6) *Keeping the second source as just "The New Essential Chronology" and sticking a source to Battle for Naboo in the middle of the first sentence would be a bit more straightforward than the explanatory note included with your second source. Keep it simple! :^D
 * 7) *Two consecutive sentences beginning with "The Satellite" --- can you change it up?
 * 8) *Can you make the bts into two sentences? One-sentence paragraphs are frowned upon. Good work! Menkooroo 00:44, September 1, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Adela Tyché

 * Nominated by: Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 15:13, August 4, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Great pilot; ugly personality

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Support

Object
 * 1) Can be fleshed out considerably. Elaborate a bit on the missions she took part in and her role in them. QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 20:16, August 4, 2010 (UTC)
 * Precisely 249 words. Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 18:58, August 5, 2010 (UTC)
 * "helped free captured slaves." No she did not. She only participated in the disruption of Comm 4 and the attack on the disabled base. I'm asking you to expand on these two battles. What was the objective? What happened during the missions? It can be well over 250 words in my opinion. QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 11:18, August 11, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Van Serai Hotel

 * Nominated by: - Esjs (Talk) 22:35, August 5, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: My first article nom ever (thought I'd give it a try). By my count, it's at 246 words.

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Object
 * 1) This article could be given an infobox and could very easily be given a simple intro, easily taking it to over 250 words and making it GAN-worthy. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 19:32, August 7, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) *I take it that a Location infobox would work. Doesn't the first paragraph work as the intro?  I could see putting the remaining paragraphs into a "History" section.  If just another sentence were added... -  Esjs (Talk) 04:02, August 8, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) **I would suggest a structure infobox. No, you couldn't just make the first paragraph the intro because it contains information that is not in the other paragraphs. Instead, you could write a new small paragraph summarizing briefly what you've said in the current three paragraphs, and make the new one the intro and the rest the main body. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 00:38, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Unidentified speeder (Grand Army of the Republic)

 * Nominated by: Tm_T(Talk) 00:05, August 9, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: I know you love it, you definately do.

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) Hey, why not? Menkooroo 01:30, September 2, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) -- 1358  (Talk) 11:20, September 5, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Jujiggum
 * 2) *What evidence do you have for this being "presumably" a 2-seat variant of the BARC speeder? This sounds like speculation to me.
 * 3) **Hopefully sufficiently fixed
 * 4) ***Okay, but please check your grammar here. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 00:08, August 20, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) ****Is it ok now? --Tm_T(Talk) 05:23, September 4, 2010 (UTC)
 * 6) * The BTS should specify why this is ambiguously canon.
 * 7) **Apparently isn't, tag removed
 * 8) ***You mean this is non-canon? Then it needs to be tagged as such, and you should also mention that in the BTS. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 00:08, August 20, 2010 (UTC)
 * 9) ****Apparently licensed toys are canon as is.
 * 10) *****Okay; I've stricken the objection, but it would probably still be good to make a BTS note of its canonicity, just noting that liscenced toys are canon. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 00:58, September 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * 11) ******Done. --Tm_T(Talk) 05:23, September 4, 2010 (UTC)
 * 12) * Also, where did you get the "BARC-2 speeder" name? If it's conjectural, then it shouldn't be bolded in full form in the intro.
 * 13) **Bolding removed, some explanation about the name in the Bts.
 * 14) ***Please check your grammar in the BTS; also, since the name is completely conjectural, I would suggest actually moving the title of the article to something more appropriate. Maybe something along the lines of "Unidentified speeder (BARC design)" or something similar. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 00:08, August 20, 2010 (UTC)
 * 15) ****Would "Unidentified speeder (Grand Army of the Republic) or equivalent do? --Tm_T(Talk) 18:01, August 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * 16) *****Sounds fine to me. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 00:58, September 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * 17) *That's all. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 15:39, August 11, 2010 (UTC)
 * 18) **Good points rised, thanks. --Tm_T(Talk) 20:39, August 19, 2010 (UTC)

Comments
 * Cleaned up a bit of grammar. "Sans" didn't really work, and even if it had, I don't think it's... enough of an English word to be used on an English encyclopedia. Menkooroo 01:30, September 2, 2010 (UTC)
 * Thanks, appreciate it. --Tm_T(Talk) 08:16, September 2, 2010 (UTC)
 * Also, I hid the table of contents with NOTOC. Menkooroo 01:35, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

Boosqueak

 * Nominated by: Eyrezer 03:30, August 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: A menagerie of creatures from the Atrivis sector

(0 ECs/0 Users/0 Total)
Support

Object
 * 1) Shouldn't the rare folded ear boosqueak have its own article? SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 22:46, August 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) *Done, with a new nomination below! --Eyrezer 01:46, September 5, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) **See comments below. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 09:32, September 5, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) My objection is in direct opposition to the above objection. Rebellion does not state or suggest in any way that any type of species named "boosqueak" is somehow a separate species from the folded ear boosqueak. The entry reads: "Fedje is host to many forms of exotic arboreal lifeforms including the rare folded ear boosqueak." "Boosqueak" should simply be a redirect to "Folded ear boosqueak," or vice versa, depending on what you think is the best title. Toprawa and Ralltiir 02:32, September 5, 2010 (UTC)
 * Ah, I was unaware of that. If that's all the source says, then I agree with Toprawa. I would say folded ear boospueak would be the better name. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 09:32, September 5, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Virevol

 * Nominated by: Eyrezer 03:30, August 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: A menagerie of creatures from the Atrivis sector

(2 ECs/1 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1)  SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 22:34, August 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Menkooroo 01:16, August 19, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) Handled via IRC. --  1358  (Talk) 11:26, September 5, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * Can you mention who it was that considered them formidable creatures (whoever's POV it was)? Menkooroo 02:05, August 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * Done. --Eyrezer 04:21, August 18, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Arkudan

 * Nominated by: Eyrezer 10:01, August 18, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: The origins of fluffy dice revealed.

(2 ECs/2 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1)  SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 03:33, August 19, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Wonder if Han's dice were from Arkuda too. ~ SavageBob 02:37, August 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) Menkooroo 03:34, September 5, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) --  1358  (Talk) 11:26, September 5, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * "Squat" has gotta be distinctive enough to warrant an infobox mention, doesn't it? Menkooroo 13:59, September 2, 2010 (UTC)
 * Potentially. --Eyrezer 21:26, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Unidentified Betshish species

 * Nominated by: Eyrezer 09:04, August 21, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: From 1989

(1 ECs/2 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1)  SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 02:30, August 22, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) ~ SavageBob 02:55, August 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) Menkooroo 14:02, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Is it known what is meant by "interdict"? As in, gravity well-ed, or something else?  SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 21:45, August 21, 2010 (UTC)
 * No, the source simply says the Empire interdicted the planet. --Eyrezer 00:33, August 22, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Nack Movers

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 18:08, August 24, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: 197 words

(2 ECs/0 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) &mdash;  17:28, August 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2)  SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 23:36, September 1, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Whatcha cryin' for?
 * 2) * Not sure if "heavyset" is necessary in the intro?&mdash; 23:26, August 26, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) **Removed.
 * 4) * Context on Coruscant in intro and possibly the bio.&mdash; 23:30, August 26, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) **Both contexted.
 * 6) * Is "powerful" needed in the intro, in describing the fact he was a murderer?
 * 7) **Changed to something that describes him better.
 * 8) * Link Death in the intro.
 * 9) **Linked.
 * 10) *Good stuff, Lee.&mdash; 23:30, August 26, 2010 (UTC)
 * 11) **Thank you.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 08:59, August 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * 12) Jujiggum
 * 13) * Do we have an article for his apartment?
 * 14) **Created.
 * 15) ***If the apartment belonged to his girlfriend, then shouldn't it be Ione Marcy's apartment? Also, the intro right now says that the entire complex belonged to Marcy; not just the one apartment. Is this true? Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 14:10, August 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * 16) ****Fixed and moved.
 * 17) *****Please be very careful when moving articles&mdash;the name you moved it to had an incorrect spelling, and thus it had to be moved again, meaning I had to go and fix several double redirects. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 14:46, August 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * 18) * "he bought a lightsaber from the Patrolian Bannamu and took it to his apartment in a condominium complex and to his girlfriend Ione Marcy." Hmm, not really following your meaning here. Do you mean he gave the lightsaber to Marcy? That he specifically took it to her? Please check this.
 * 19) **Fixed.
 * 20) * Is the phrase "hatchet man" actually used to describe him during the episode? If so, this should probably be included in the P&T, too.
 * 21) **Not really, he is said to be an assassin and therefore he is a hatchet man.
 * 22) ***Then this part of the intro is redundant. You just said he was an assassin, so why do you need to say so again? Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 14:10, August 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * 23) ****Removed.
 * 24) * Jonjedigrandmaster ( Talk ) 20:12, August 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * 25) **Thank you.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 10:32, August 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * 26) * One more thing: does the source specifically say he was a strong and dangerous murderer? Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 14:10, August 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * 27) **Sinube states both that Movers is a dangerous one in the Underworld and notes that he was "stronger then many other people.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 14:35, August 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * 28) *Please add more quotes to the article. I am certain there is one spoken by Marcy or Cryar about him or his death (even if it is one of their lies), and perhaps Sinube's statement about his strength could go in the P&T. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 14:46, August 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * 29) **Because I cannot add the English version myself I asked JMAS.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:10, August 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * 30) ***Added one quote.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:15, August 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * 31) ****Is there no other one where they refer to him more specifically? Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 00:56, September 2, 2010 (UTC)
 * 32) *****JMAS wants to add it soon. Meanwhile I search a little bit myself.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 11:08, September 2, 2010 (UTC)
 * 33) ******Okay, also, please check the sentence that was just added to the article, verify it, and make sure its placement is appropriate. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 18:34, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

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Unidentified Kerkoiden commander

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 11:19, August 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Huh?

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 * 1) --  1358  (Talk) 19:25, August 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Menkooroo 14:11, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

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 * 1) Xd1358
 * 2) * Please check your reference and see what's wrong.
 * 3) **Fixed.
 * 4) ***Still not really correct. Novelization should not be italicized. -- 1358  (Talk) 20:52, August 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) ****ARGH. Fixed.
 * 6) * "Around 22 BBY, the tank commander participated in the Battle of Christophsis and commanded some troops from his AAT." What troops? Droids? Also, fix the link to AAT.
 * 7) **Fixed.
 * 8) * "During the battle he was shot and killed by Clone Captain CC-7567 when he came out of his tank.." Who came out of his tank?
 * 9) **Fixed.
 * 10) * "..which has been deactivated." Wrong tense.
 * 11) **Fixed.
 * 12) * Is it stated in the novel that he was a 'tank commander'? Otherwise, I suggest you move the article to 'Unidentified Kerkoiden commander', as he seems to be commanding troops as well.
 * 13) **Rex describes him as "Kerkoiden tank commander".
 * 14) ***He describes, yes, but if he would say like "the clone trooper who died in 22 BBY", the article would still not be at that title. 'Tank commander' sounds like he only commands tanks. -- 1358  (Talk) 20:52, August 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * 15) ****Moved, but I'm still unsure.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 13:06, August 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * 16) *****If I may, I agree with Xd's reasoning, and with the decision to move it away from "tank commander."  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 16:58, August 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * 17) *-- 1358  (Talk) 13:07, August 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * 18) **Thank you.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 14:42, August 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * 19) * Now when the article has been moved, could you start the intro in a different way, like "This male Kerkoiden lived during the . He was a commander in the CIS."? -- 1358  (Talk) 14:14, August 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * 20) **Changed. Thank you very much for your time. :P  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 16:33, August 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * 21) * One more thing. :P "..commanded some droid troops from his.." some doesn't really fit in encyclopedic articles. Please remove. -- 1358  (Talk) 16:44, August 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * 22) **Fixed.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 16:47, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

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 * Say no to linking the bolded text in the intro! Menkooroo 14:11, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

Neebo

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 13:27, August 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: 240 words

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 * 1) Nice. Menkooroo 14:16, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

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Urbok

 * Nominated by:  Darth Karika  will destroy your planet! 13:20, August 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: More Dark Nest II

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 * 1)  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 13:52, August 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Menkooroo 13:27, August 31, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) It's good to see you nomming characters from the Dark Nest trilogy like this.&mdash; 00:53, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

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 * 1) Blah
 * 2) *Great job --- I don't think that the sentence about the Gotal Lieutenant is relevant, though. Menkooroo 13:14, August 31, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) **Fixed.  Darth Karika  will destroy your planet! 13:25, August 31, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) Part 2
 * 5) * Same as the above nomination, place of death needs to be added rather than during the battle.&mdash; 00:35, September 2, 2010 (UTC)
 * 6) **Addressed.  Darth Karika  will destroy your planet! 00:42, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

Flanker

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 14:07, August 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Former GAnom

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Laser Company

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 17:51, August 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: And this time novelization is not italicized

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 * 1) Menkooroo 13:28, August 31, 2010 (UTC)

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 * More of a question than an objection --- how much info is given on the encounter on Kessel? Is it identified as a battle with the Seps, ie, is there enough info to warrant an article on it? Menkooroo 13:19, August 31, 2010 (UTC)
 * No there is no more info in the novel.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 13:27, August 31, 2010 (UTC)

Aramb

 * Nominated by:  Darth Karika  will destroy your planet! 21:55, August 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Part 3 of 3.

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 * 1)  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 12:20, August 31, 2010 (UTC)

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 * 1) Aye aye aye
 * 2) *It's not clear what Gorog assassins are --- the Dark Nest is mentioned earlier in the article, but "Gorog" is not.
 * 3) *The bit about Yuul's promotion isn't really relevant to Aramb. Unless it can be trimmed down and reworded to be similar to how it's presented in Reo's article. Menkooroo 14:21, September 2, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) **Try now.  Darth Karika  will destroy your planet! 15:03, September 2, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) ***"Gorog" is still used twice without any indication of what it means. Can you pick one and stick with it? Menkooroo 03:40, September 5, 2010 (UTC)

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Qui-Gon Jinn's first apprentice

 * Nominated by: QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 11:11, August 31, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: I wish they write a novel about this guy or something

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 * Yep, I hope that too.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 12:22, August 31, 2010 (UTC)
 * 1) Menkooroo 13:52, August 31, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Nice.&mdash;  22:09, August 31, 2010 (UTC)

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 * 1) 1
 * 2) * "Since then, the first apprentice was only mentioned in the 35th issue of The Official Star Wars Fact File" ... but immediately thereafter, it's stated that he was later mentioned in Qui-Gon's databank entry. That seems to contradict the "since then, he was only mentioned" --- can you reword it to be a little clearer? Menkooroo 13:25, August 31, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) **Addressed. QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 13:48, August 31, 2010 (UTC)

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Battle of Altyr V

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 12:48, August 31, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Never done a battle before...

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 * 1)  Darth Karika  will destroy your planet! 23:19, August 31, 2010 (UTC)
 * 1) Karika
 * 2) * Body: The Jedi General you mentioned in the infobox should get a link in the body.
 * 3) **He is linked line two a.
 * 4) * BTS: The BTS claims the battle was first mentioned in the CSWE, but the Sources are Star Wars Insider.  Darth Karika  will destroy your planet! 13:37, August 31, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) **Fixed. Thank you.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 17:06, August 31, 2010 (UTC)

Groz Niclari

 * Nominated by:  Darth Karika  will destroy your planet! 20:14, September 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: HoloNet troll

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 * 1)  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 07:36, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

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 * 1) Lee attacks
 * 2) * Context needed for Quest for Quasar. Otherwise very nice.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 11:16, September 2, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) **Source doesn't clarify. Nothing in the CSWE, either.  Darth Karika  will destroy your planet! 20:49, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

Galliwig's Cantina

 * Nominated by: Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 13:51, September 3, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: "Where everybody knows your name ... whether you like it or not ..."

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Object That's it. :)--''' Bonslywizard ( Send a transmission...It's perfectly legal! ) 02:34, September 5, 2010 (UTC)
 * 1) The Wizard did it
 * 2) *Remove the "bad". It's an opinion whether music is good or bad. If you'd rather keep the "bad", say something like "many patrons found this music unappealing" or something of the sort.
 * 3) *Source the BTS.

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Vylagos

 * Nominated by:--''' Bonslywizard Trade Federation Symbol.jpg( Send a transmission...It's perfectly legal! ) 21:46, September 4, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: The anti-Bitt Panith. Enjoy!

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 * I don't know whether it is connection or coincidence, but világos means clear/bright in Hungarian. It's not a bad name for an engineer. Darth Morrt 08:58, September 5, 2010 (UTC)

Bequin Fobas

 * Nominated by:  Darth Karika  will destroy your planet! 01:08, September 5, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Hutt Hutt Hutt Hike!

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 * 1) &mdash; Master Jonathan New Jedi Order.svg ( Jedi Council Chambers ) 03:45, September 5, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Well Jon then we are two of a kind. :P  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 11:12, September 5, 2010 (UTC)

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 * 1) I simply don't understand the American obsession with football:
 * 2) * "Like many other members of his species, Fobas worked for a Hutt: crime lord Zorba Desilijic Tiure." This seems to suggest that many members of his species worked specifically for Zorba, but at the same time doesn't rule out the species just working for Hutts in general. Either way, please clarify.
 * 3) ** took care of this. &mdash; Master Jonathan New Jedi Order.svg ( Jedi Council Chambers ) 03:45, September 5, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) *On the rare occasions I watch sports of any kind, I prefer football. :P &mdash; Master Jonathan New Jedi Order.svg ( Jedi Council Chambers ) 01:28, September 5, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) Prepare to be savaged...
 * 6) *The OS mentions that Fobas was a "famed" attorney, so some mention of this fame should be made in the article.
 * 7) *The final sentence of his biography should be rewritten to say who exactly reminded Fobas that there were no appeals on Kip. 'Tis all. ~ SavageBob 03:41, September 5, 2010 (UTC)

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Folded ear boosqueak

 * Nominated by: Eyrezer 01:53, September 5, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: None

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Cemas

 * Nominated by: ~ SavageBob 03:31, September 5, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Got to 'em before Eyrezer could. ;P ~ SavageBob 03:31, September 5, 2010 (UTC)

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 * 1) LOL. Could you specify that the Cemas was in the Crystal Jewel casino at the time of the explosion? --Eyrezer 04:32, September 5, 2010 (UTC)

Shift shield

 * Nominated by:Darth Morrt 08:38, September 5, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:None

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