Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Limbala sector


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Limbala sector

 * Nominated by:  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  03:43, October 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Love Is a Warm Blaster!

(2 ECs/2 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1) My blaster's so nice and warm...-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 13:08, October 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2)  Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 11:20, October 26, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 20:18, October 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4)  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 17:46, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) * In the Iinfobox you have the native species space filled in, but in the article, you just mention the senator that was from that region. Perhaps start out the article with something like "The Limbala sector was a sector in the galaxy that contained some members of the Turian species." Just something like that and it would also fix the rather short opening to the article.
 * 2) **Done.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:25, October 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) * Any idea when the short story was supposed to be released? If so, you should add it to the BTS.
 * 4) **I forgot to do that, thanks for catching it.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:25, October 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) *Otherwise, nice job.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 13:09, October 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) Axinal
 * 7) * In the BTS, "...along with all their other Star Wars products..." Who is "their"? West End Games? Please clarify. Otherwise, nice work on an obscure article.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 19:39, October 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) **How is this?-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  20:12, October 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) ***Looks good. Nice work.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 20:18, October 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) Luralon Odaay was apparently assassinated in Love is a Warm Blaster. That is significant enough to be mentioned in this article, given Senators generally represent sectors. Is there anything else that can be gleaned for this article? --Eyrezer 07:20, November 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) *Well I really don't think that the story says that he represented the sector. All it said was that he was from the sector, which could mean that he was merely born there and then became the senator of another. The sector was mentioned in just one spot, so you can't really say anything more about it, since it isn't clear if the sector was the location of his place of birth or if it was the region he represented. What do you think?-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:14, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

Comments
 * I am not sure if my sourcing is adequate. Anyone have any tips for dealing with an article that is completely cut content?-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  03:43, October 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * Hey, before anyone decides to archive this, I found out that the story mentions Luralon Odaay's homeworld, but it does not specfically say that it is located in this sector. Is someone's homeworld necessarily their birth world, or could their homeworld be a place they made their home on later in life? Its kind of important since it would add information to the article if it should be considered Odaay's birth place.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  21:46, October 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * That's a fair question. "Homeworld" doesn't necessarily mean "birthworld," as Luke Skywalker was born on Polis Massa, but Tatooine is considered his homeworld. The way it's written now is fine, though, I think, since you say that Odaay "hailed from" this region, which leaves enough ambiguity so that he may have been, but was not necessarily, born there. Unless his homeworld is specifically named, I don't think there is a problem.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 21:55, October 30, 2011 (UTC)