Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Gonzo yellow cheese


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Gonzo yellow cheese

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 19:14, July 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: I sacrifice my worthless cheese monster to summon Kilson the PIE Eater to the battlefield.

(2 ECs/2 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1) OK which one of you are going to take on topato slices next? :D Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 20:44, July 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Good move.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  14:44, July 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Menkooroo 03:42, July 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) Fozzie likes it. ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 13:36, July 28, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Jangeth
 * 2) * Check your grammar
 * 3) **Could you be specific? It looks right to me. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 19:40, July 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) * What does the destruction of Dex's Diner have anything to do with the cheese?  JangFett  (Talk) 19:24, July 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) **Meaning that it was no longer served there after its destruction. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 19:40, July 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) ***Looks better
 * 7) I don't have hyperspace, so I can't check for myself, buuuttt... does Dex's Diner say anything about the Rise of the Galactic Empire or the ceasing of Dex's menu? If not, I don't think "In 19 BBY, following the rise of the Galactic Empire, Jettster no longer used the cheese in his dishes" can be sourced to it. A re-wording to something like what you guys have in the other articles, such as in B'omarr-style pickle, might be a good idea. Menkooroo 14:30, July 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) *Better? NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 19:07, July 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) Bob
 * 10) *The article currently claims that Jettster served the cheese until the destruction of his diner, but we can't really ascertain that from the "Dining at Dex's" article. In other words, we can't say for certain that his menu didn't change at some point between the menu we have in that article and the diner's destruction. I'd probably move the info about the destruction of the diner to another point in the article. ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 16:25, July 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) **Which do you think would be better then? Saying it was "...served before his diner was destroyed" or noting that it was destroyed with the last sentence? I originally did the latter because I thought using the former in all of them might be too repetitive. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 01:48, July 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 12) ***I think it was better the latter way, even though it may end up a bit repetitive. It's best to keep them distinct from one another, but ultimately, repetition won't really apply to the average reader. ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 14:42, July 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 13) ****Changed. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 21:13, July 27, 2011 (UTC)

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