Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/T'un


 * ''The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a comprehensive article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.

T'un

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:34, January 15, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Are Jon and I the only two persons who bothered writing articles from the Jedi Apprentice series?

(1 ECs/4 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1) --- 501st Dogma Republic_emblem.png( Comlink ) 16:34, January 15, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) "If the data is not in our Archives, it was probably stolen."--Jocasta Nu. Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 20:17, January 15, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) Irid, but that's just one. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 20:54, January 16, 2012 (UTC)
 * 4) Nice job remembering Category:Individuals of unidentified species on these articles. :) &mdash; Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:40, January 18, 2012 (UTC)
 * 5) Tinwe (comlink) 14:25, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) The Premier
 * 2) * "During that year, several of the data maintained by T'un was stolen, although Jedi Master Qui-Gon Jinn was able to recover them." Several followed by "was" is grammatically incorrect. It needs replaced by "were."
 * 3) **Ah, thanks.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 16:22, January 15, 2012 (UTC)
 * 4) * Also, the following sentence starts with "Jedi Master." Which Master, Jinn or T'un?
 * 5) **Clarified.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 16:22, January 15, 2012 (UTC)
 * 6) *Great work. Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 16:19, January 15, 2012 (UTC)
 * 7) **Thank you.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 16:22, January 15, 2012 (UTC)
 * 8) The Uncertain Path mentions T'un to be "a wizened being of great learning." This should be mentioned, but I'll leave it up to you whether you want to make a separate P&T for it or mention it in the body of the article.  Tinwe (comlink) 10:34, January 19, 2012 (UTC)
 * 9) *Added. Thanks for the review.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 14:06, January 19, 2012 (UTC)
 * 10) **I tweaked it a little so that it doesn't stick out as much, see if that's okay. Otherwise, looks good. :) Tinwe (comlink) 14:25, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

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