Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Ketcher


 * ''The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a featured article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.

Ketcher

 * Nominated by: Green Tentacle (Talk) 17:55, 2 January 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Don't go swallowing strange objects, kids.

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Support
 * 1)  Graestan ( Talk ) 00:10, 11 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) Read this earlier. Forgot to vote. Cull Tremayne 09:50, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) &mdash;  Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 17:25, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 4)  Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 19:11, 25 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) —Tommy9281 [[Image:Dark Side Master TotG.jpg|17px]] ( Peace is a lie ) 13:39, 26 January 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) From the desk of Atarumaster88
 * 2) * "Stele went on to become part of the group" What group?
 * 3) * "pilots who proved vital in repelling" A bit of POV here.
 * 4) * "The group had intended to take some TIE fighters out," This is a bit vague. I'm assuming they're not actually planning on destroying the bombers, right? There are several kinds of "take out." One's the Mace Windu type of take out, where the object in question is utterly destroyed. One's the Aayla Secura kind of take out, or rather, which rabid fanboys wish they could have an opportunity to do. Then there's "take out" as in joyride. Or Chinese takeout. So many choices. :-P
 * 5) *Do we want to know how we got the crystal un-swallowed? :-P I think not. Have a Super Terrific Friendly Un-frustrating day. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 23:38, 24 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 6) **First three fixed. Thankfully, there's no information on the un-swallowing. Green Tentacle (Talk) 15:27, 25 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 7) Tommy Bombassa:
 * 8) * For some reason, the caption for [[Image:Ludwick mfrg.jpg]]: views incomplete.
 * 9) **Not on Firefox or IE. Don't know what I can do about this. Green Tentacle (Talk) 13:15, 26 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 10) * "There was little of interest to the pilots remaining at the pirate base, but among the droid and transport parts, Ketcher found a small, red crystal that caught his eye. " This reads funny. Is there perhaps an extra word? Too few words?
 * 11) **Reworded. Any better? Green Tentacle (Talk) 13:15, 26 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 12) * "Ketcher decided to keep it for himself and swallowed it to prevent it from being confiscated. He later kept the crystal on a small wire around his neck." Though it is unknown how he retrieved the crystal, something should said to that effect, since as it is the crystal goes from being a snack to fine jewelry ;). Please rework if you can.
 * 13) **Reworded. I just hope he cleaned it first. Green Tentacle (Talk) 13:15, 26 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 14) * You mention the "Grommet" only in the P&T. I think it should also be mentioned in the bio somewhere.
 * 15) **Moved it to his first mention in the bio. Green Tentacle (Talk) 13:15, 26 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 16) *Not bad. —Tommy9281 [[Image:Dark Side Master TotG.jpg|17px]] ( Peace is a lie ) 09:08, 26 January 2009 (UTC)

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