Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Hart-and-Parn Gorra-Fiolla


 * ''The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a featured article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.

(5 Inqs/2 Users/7 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 18:49, 14 December 2007 (UTC)
 * 2)  Greyman ( Paratus ) 15:15, 18 December 2007 (UTC)
 * 3)  Graestan ( This party's over ) 20:45, 18 December 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) --  Darth Culator  (Talk) 04:20, 24 December 2007 (UTC)
 * 5) A most curious name.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 14:55, 24 December 2007 (UTC)
 * 6) Nice article, Ataru. I guess I have a cousin! :)  Master Aban Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 00:58, 30 December 2007 (UTC)
 * 7) Thefourdotelipsis 06:46, 3 January 2008 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) From the desk of Atarumaster88
 * 2) * The main image sucks. Get some kind soul to rescan it.
 * 3) *Have a Super Terrific Friendly Un-frustrating day. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 18:49, 14 December 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) From the squalid cubicle of Graestan:
 * 5) * Check linking; once per article or once per intro/once per article. Consistency.
 * 6) *AWB should've fixed it. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 02:04, 16 December 2007 (UTC)
 * 7) * Shouldn't "Assistant Auditor-General" receive an article as well?
 * 8) **If you insist; I'm not writing it. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 02:04, 16 December 2007 (UTC)
 * 9) * "Like all Lorrdians, Fiolla was an expert at gauging other people's emotional state from minute details of their voice and body language."&mdash;Singular/plural issues.
 * 10) **Fixed, I believe. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 02:04, 16 December 2007 (UTC)
 * 11) * "One of her largest adventures" is a very&hellip;oh, well, please change it.
 * 12) **As you wish. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 02:04, 16 December 2007 (UTC)
 * 13) * The beginning of "Adventure with Solo" looks a bit awkward; please move things around to make it more smooth.
 * 14) * "She also ordered him to try and break into the spacecraft while sending a message that sent the spacer to an Authority hangar to keep him out of the way."&mdash;Reword; clarify.
 * 15) **Did the best I could with such specific suggestions. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 02:04, 16 December 2007 (UTC)
 * 16) * "The entire party boarded the Millennium Falcon and took off, with Fiolla sitting in the forward compartment being observed by Bollux while Spray flew the ship and Solo and Chewbacca manned the quad laser cannon turrets."&mdash;Break it up, please.
 * 17) **Appropriately broken. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 02:04, 16 December 2007 (UTC)
 * 18) * "What neither Odumin nor Gallandro didn't know"&mdash;Double negative.
 * 19) **Appropriately pwned. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 02:04, 16 December 2007 (UTC)
 * 20) * "Acting swiftly, Solo slipped the cage off of the hoist, Fiolla and Spray inside it with the Falcon's forward cargo mandibles, and soared out of the hangar bay with his hostages."&mdash;Reword; clarify.
 * 21) **Minor corrections made. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 02:04, 16 December 2007 (UTC)
 * 22) * "Canonical hair" reads very awkwardly. Also, link to the word "canon" when you use it for our non-Star-Wars-fandom-savvy readers, please.
 * 23) **Tweaked. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 02:04, 16 December 2007 (UTC)
 * 24) * The small text in "Sources" needs to be separated and parenthesized.
 * 25) **Done. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 02:04, 16 December 2007 (UTC)
 * 26) * Link your citations, please.
 * 27) **Stupid policy, but whatever. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 02:04, 16 December 2007 (UTC)
 * 28) * Graestan ( This party's over ) 23:45, 14 December 2007 (UTC)
 * Image:FiollaSoloBW.jpg and Image:FiollaSoloBW2.jpg both need to be cropped (the bottoms of both images contain frame lines). Image:Priority X.JPG needs to be re-scanned&mdash;it's distorted. --Imperialles 12:35, 15 December 2007 (UTC)
 * 1) *What a surprising objection. Addressed. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 02:04, 16 December 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) From the shocked and chagrined desk of Four Dot
 * 3) * "In 2 BBY, Fiolla was on Bonadan investigating a ring of slavers and was waiting for a slaver named Zlarb to arrive on the world and rendezvous with one of his associates." - And...y Kaufman.
 * 4) **I don't know who that is, but corrected. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 02:04, 16 December 2007 (UTC)
 * 5) * "Fiolla failed to see the point of this dirty, hot, and uncomfortable journey, which as a side effect had completely ruined her dress." - Also they spilled my martini! Kinda trivial.
 * 6) **Oh, fine. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 02:04, 16 December 2007 (UTC)
 * 7) * Image:FiollaSoloBW2.jpg has a black border of hideousness. Also, for a bit of artist variety, you might like to use the image from the Essential Chronology, which is kinda similar to this one. And a bit better, IMO.
 * 8) **Oooh, pants! Fixed. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 02:04, 16 December 2007 (UTC)
 * 9) * "Then, looking at the cage where Fiolla and Odumin were hanging in space, Solo mouthed the words "You are one very, very sharp future Senior Board Member" to her, knowing that she could read the slightest kinetic movement. Fiolla was amused by his response, and Solo kept her in his company for a little while longer. This was ostensibly to ensure the Authority kept its word, but his gesture of blowing her a kiss immediately after stating this indicated his reasons were of a more personal nature." - Play by play, and trivial to boot.
 * 10) **Appropriately neutered to boringness, blandness, and other such stupidity. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 02:04, 16 December 2007 (UTC)
 * 11) *That'll do, Inq. That'll do. Thefourdotelipsis 23:01, 15 December 2007 (UTC)
 * 12) Should Relationships be plural, when we only canonically know of one?  Hobbes ( Tiger's Lair ) 01:23, 16 December 2007 (UTC)
 * 13) *Not according to the talking heads in IRC who also happen to be Inqs. Congrats on that btw. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 02:08, 16 December 2007 (UTC)
 * 14) **Careful what you write, there :P. And thanks. Hobbes ( Tiger's Lair ) 02:42, 16 December 2007 (UTC)

Comments

'''Approved by Inquisitorius 22:55, 4 January 2008 (UTC)
 * Say that name three times fast with a mouthful of crackers. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 18:49, 14 December 2007 (UTC)
 * 4dot's desk is shocked and chagrined? :-P. Hobbes ( Tiger's Lair ) 01:23, 16 December 2007 (UTC)