Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/OS-72-10


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OS-72-10

 * Nominated by: Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 20:15, March 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: None.

(5 ACs/3 Users/ 8Total)
Support
 * 1) More extras. :P  JangFett  (Talk) 20:17, March 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Toprawa and Ralltiir 21:34, March 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) Allright.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 09:48, April 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 21:32, April 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) Random extras ftw.  CC7567  (talk) 07:20, April 2, 2010 (UTC)
 * 6) Quick n' clean.  Jonjedigrandmaster  Jedi symbol.svg ( We seed the stars ) 19:08, April 2, 2010 (UTC)
 * 7) Cylka  -talk- 23:56, April 3, 2010 (UTC)
 * 8)  Grunny  ( talk ) 03:03, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Lee
 * 2) * Could the intro be shortened so that it is proportional to the bio ?
 * 3) **As it is, there is virtually no information on the character. Shortening the intro would cut out relevant information and significantly reduce the word count.
 * 4) *Good work.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 09:28, March 31, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) **Thanks for the review. Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 19:50, March 31, 2010 (UTC)
 * 6) Just one: could you mention somewhere in the bio that "OS-72-10" was his designation, since you say so in the intro? Great work, as usual.  Jonjedigrandmaster  Jedi symbol.svg ( We seed the stars ) 18:22, April 2, 2010 (UTC)
 * 7) *Done. Thanks for reading through it, Jon. Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 18:55, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

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