Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations



This page is for the nomination of "comprehensive articles". For a list of "comprehensive articles", see Category:Wookieepedia comprehensive articles.


 * Comprehensive article nominations history
 * Comprehensive article nominations archiving checklist

What is a "comprehensive article?"

A "comprehensive article" is an article that contains all information regarding the topic. Often, "comprehensive articles" cannot reach Featured or Good Article status due to their limited content. This process is intended to recognize articles that contain all relevant canon information, yet are still under the 250 word limit required for a Good Article. The purpose of this is twofold&mdash;firstly, to help users distinguish what is a stub, and what is merely a short article with no further relevant material to be added, and, more importantly, to highlight for the reader when they are reading something that has been judged definitely "comprehensive"&mdash;that is, a guarantee to the reader that whatever they are reading contains the sum total of all available content.

Nominations and promotions of the Comprehensive article process are overseen by a collective of users known as the "EduCorps," which is made up of the Inquisitorius, the AgriCorps, and various other experienced users who are considered qualified to adequately judge the nominated material.

Lucasfilm Ltd. and its many licensees continue to expand the Star Wars universe. Since new information might become available, it may be necessary to revoke a "comprehensive article's" status. A forum will be used to nominate articles that have fallen out-of-date. Members of the EduCorps will then post a warning template on that page, and a grace period of one week will be instituted in which the article can be improved. If there is a significant amount of new information, it is likely that once updated, the article will become eligible for Good article status, and thereby ineligible for Comprehensive article status.

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An article must&hellip;


 * 1) &hellip;be well-written and detailed.
 * 2) &hellip;be unbiased, non-point of view.
 * 3) &hellip;be sourced with all available sources and appearances.
 * 4) &hellip;follow the Manual of Style, Layout Guide, and all other policies on Wookieepedia. This is, of course, within reason. If a topic only has a very limited degree of content that cannot be divided up into the relevant article sections, it is not required that it follow the Layout Guide precisely. This is to be judged on a case-by-case basis.
 * 5) &hellip;following the review process, be stable, i.e., does not change significantly from day to day and is not the subject of ongoing edit wars. This does not apply to vandalism and protection or semi-protection as a result of vandalism.
 * 6) &hellip;not be tagged with any sort of improvement tags (i.e. more sources, expand, etc).
 * 7) &hellip;have no redlinks.
 * 8) &hellip;have all relevant canon information presented.
 * 9) &hellip;be completely referenced for all available material and sources. See Sourcing for more information. While this is not required for an article possessing a singular source, it is encouraged, as it provides both uniformity and a good infrastructure should the topic be referenced in any future materials.
 * 10) &hellip;have all quotes and images sourced.
 * 11) &hellip;provide at least one relevant quote on the article if available.
 * 12) &hellip;include a "Behind the scenes" section for in-universe articles.
 * 13) &hellip;counting the introduction, the article body, and "Behind the scenes" material, must not exceed 250 words in length (not including captions, quotes, or headers, etc). Any articles exceeding the limit should be taken to the Good article nominations page for consideration.
 * 14) &hellip;if the nominated article reaches 200 words or greater, the nominator must either provide an intro or draft an intro and provide a link to the revision in the nomination, showing that the intro does not elevate the article over 250 words. Exceptions can be made for articles wherein the majority of the text is in the "Behind the scenes" section.

How to nominate:


 * 1) First, nominate an article you find is worthy of comprehensive status, putting it at the bottom of the list below. Nominated articles must meet all thirteen requirements stated above.
 * 2) Add CAnom at the top of the article you are nominating.
 * 3) Be sure to place sign in the "Nominated by" line when the nomination is posted for voting.
 * 4) Others will object to the nomination if they disagree that the article is good enough; they will then supply reasons for doing so, and ways to improve the article in accordance with the established rules.
 * 5) Nominators and supporters will adjust the article until the objectors (with reasonable objections) are satisfied. Objectors may also make alterations&mdash;if there is any reason for contention on a given point, it should be settled in a civil manner in the nomination field itself.
 * 6) Users may not vote on their own articles.
 * 7) There is no limit to the amount of nominations a given user can submit at any given time.

How to vote:


 * 1) Before doing anything, be sure to read the article completely, keeping a sharp eye out for mistakes.
 * 2) Afterward, compare the article to the criteria listed above, and then either support or object the article's nomination.
 * 3) *If you object, please supply concrete reasons for doing so, and how it can be improved.
 * 4) As stated above, any objections will be looked upon by the nominator, supporters, and anyone willing to improve the article, and action will be taken to please the objectors. Do not strike other users' objections; it is up to the objector to review the changes and strike if they are satisfied.
 * 5) There are several ways in which an article can receive the required number of votes. Within a 48-hour period of nomination, only EduCorps votes will count towards the total, although anyone may choose to vote in that window. If two members of the EduCorps support a nomination in that window, and there are no outstanding objections, the article can be considered a "Comprehensive article" and be tagged with the template 48 hours after the initial nomination.  The talk page will also be tagged with the CA template. When the 48 hours are up, any user's votes will contribute towards the total. If one EduCorps member has voted for an article after a week, three regular votes will be required. After the 48 hour period, an article can still also pass with just two EduCorps votes.
 * 6) Once a nomination is successful, it will be placed on the Comprehensive article list. Instructions on how to archive nominations, successful or otherwise, can be found here. Anyone can archive a nomination&mdash;just make sure it has the correct number of votes, has been nominated for at least a week (or 48 hours if there are two EC votes), and that there are absolutely no outstanding objections. If you are not sure how to do this, just ask, and someone will likely be more than willing to help you. Also, if you think you can slip one past us, think again&mdash;someone is always watching you.

All nominations will be considered idle and are subject to instantaneous removal by EduCorps members if objections are not addressed, or at least not answered, after a period of 1 week.

Please remember to archive your nomination beforehand if you plan on taking it to the Good Article Nominations page.

Ven (Peace Brigade)

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 23:13, October 31, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Look&mdash;whoever you are&mdash;you don't know the first thing about Wotson. Me and him will always be a team. You trying to pick a fight or what?

(0 ECs/2 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) Besides a little copy-edit, looks good.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 17:32, November 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *The 1st template is not used when the subject appeared in only one source as it's redundant. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 19:21, November 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Per this-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 19:23, November 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Huh. News to me. Someday we're going to have to make a list of all the rule applications being started on the nom pages. In the meantime, it's not a big enough deal to argue over. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 19:34, November 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5)  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 17:42, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * Unidentified informant (Kuat) should be a redirect to Viqi Shesh (see her BTS).
 * If Ven and Wotson sit at a different table than Desh, as the leading quote indicates, can you make a quick note of that? Menkooroo 12:15, November 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * Whatever it takes. Anything to save Woston and Ven. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 23:05, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Unidentified hyperspace scout 2

 * Nominated by: -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 19:00, November 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:We ought to get Daniel Wallace to review this one.

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 20:01, November 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 23:22, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) You have to source that that's Daniel Wallace to something. A comparison between that picture and one of Wallace would work, if there's never been a statement on it before. Same for Fry.  NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 19:31, November 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *Is that what you were looking for?-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 20:54, November 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Good, but I meant a textural source. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 22:31, November 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Sorry, let me clarify that again. I mean a textural citation. It needs a ref tag. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 16:01, November 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) ****Ref added. Thanks for the review.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 18:39, November 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) *****It read a bit choppy to me, so I reworded it. Nice work. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 20:01, November 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) Even more interesting than Guybrush! I don't think a single image is enough to say "on occasion" or "sometimes," though. "On one occasion" would be more appropriate. You could also slightly detail that occasion --- mention that they studied a holographic map. Might also be worth translating the aurebesh in the picture and mentioning just what on the map they were studying. Menkooroo 12:08, November 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) *Not sure that this is better that Guybrush, I got a GA out of him. :P But I think I took care of this.
 * 9) Also, isn't there a caption to the image identifying them as Hyperspace Scouts? If so, that'd count as a mention rather than just a . Menkooroo 11:33, November 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) *Got it.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:52, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Comments
 * 1) The Blaster department in Star Wars Insider 111 features the image of the two scouts. It explicitly names them hyperspace scouts and confirms that the two are based on a photo of Fry and Wallace taken at 2008's San Diego Comic-Con, which was the first time they met in person. QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 11:22, November 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *Cool. Thanks, Jinn.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:52, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Unidentified hyperspace scout 1

 * Nominated by: -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 19:00, November 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Jason Fry needs to give this guy some back story so I can GAN him.

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 20:02, November 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 23:18, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Bob
 * 2) * Not sure the visual comparison is sufficient for us to take that this is based on Fry. It is based on Fry, but you'll need to dig a bit to find a source for that. I know there have been various interviews with Fry and Wallace published where this was discussed, so maybe search around a bit. The artist is Chris Trevas, which should also be mentioned. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 12:25, November 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Here's one. Good source for a BTS quote, too. Search "hyperspace scouts" to find the exact spot. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 12:30, November 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Nice find, Bob. Jinn found that it is also mentioned in Star Wars Insider, so I'm gonna go with that since I don't like CiteWebs. :P As for the quote, I'm not sure what you were looking for in there. I didn't necessarily see anything that had to do with them. What were you thinking of?-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:36, November 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) ****Not sure about Bob, but I was thinking: Oh, and Chris Trevas was kind enough to not only supply gorgeous illustrations throughout the book, but he used me and Dan as models for two hyperspace scouts. So I guess we're part of continuity ourselves now. When do we get to be action figures? Menkooroo 10:20, November 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) *****I went ahead and added it. If that's not what you were thinking of, Bob, let me know.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:36, November 9, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Perry

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 16:44, November 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: He's a semi-aquatic egg-laying mammal of action! He's a furry little flat-foot who'll never flinch from a fray-eay-eay! He's got more than just mad skills: he's got a beaver tail and a bill and the women swoon whenever they hear him say: *fails at the platypus sound* He's Perry! PERRY THE PLATYPUS!! PERRY! A-gent P~!

(1 ECs/2 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) Cool down.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 18:45, November 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Besides fixing a couple of redirects, looks nice.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 18:51, November 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 21:26, November 7, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Axinal
 * 2) * See objections for Quinze.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 12:11, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Quinze

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 21:51, November 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Fancy a game of Fifteen?

(1 ECs/2 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 10:12, November 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 20:51, November 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 21:27, November 7, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Axinal
 * 2) * You refer to Quinze as "him" in the body, but use the unidentified gender category.
 * 3) * I think the Quarantine section warrants its own article.
 * 4) *Otherwise, nice work.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 02:19, November 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) **Fixed. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 18:08, November 7, 2011 (UTC)

Comments
 * See Quinze. Does this qualify for our duck test policy? NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 21:51, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Argauun

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 10:32, November 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Never thought, that I would do a species...

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 17:30, November 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:00, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Are you sure it is not Aarguun? Also, is Talia Moonseeker described at all? --Eyrezer 08:50, November 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *Sir, no sir. The only mentions is as follows: Talia Moonseeker, a young Argauun only four months into her Jedi Knighthood, was kneeling beside her fallen former Master, Va'too, head bowed.. That is all about the species in the whole book.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 13:51, November 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) I think you should email Miller and ask her if this was intentionally a separate species. There's an email function on her website and she responds to most messages promptly. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 22:13, November 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) *This would be possible. However, I do not think it is neccessary. There is no species which is written so similiar that there is an error. You're welcome to do it, my own e-mail system has some problems and I don't know how it works.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 13:08, November 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) **I think in this case it's absolutely necessary. The difference between this and Aargauun is a single repeated letter. As it stands, even if this wasn't a mistake, the article at least needs a youmay tag. I've sent her an email asking, so we'll probably have this settled shortly. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 00:21, November 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) ***Ah sorry I was mislead by Eyrezer's spelling above. In that case, the check is neccessary and thanks for doing that. Let's see what she says and then we'll discuss the youmay tag.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 11:20, November 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) ****I totally agree with Naru, and had also emailed her as well asking Leland on the Dark Horse forums. --Eyrezer
 * 8) Bob
 * 9) *The length of Talia Moonseeker's article suggests at least a bit more description on her is warranted. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 23:17, November 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) **About her only two sentences. About her species, there is nothing more said or described, you can believe me.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:24, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) ***The novel does specify that Argauuns have heads, and that when experiencing grief they hang their head. --Eyrezer 06:03, November 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * 12) ****You can mention something like that. Wow, you can see I do not write species that often. Added and thanks.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 14:45, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Unidentified mimph infant

 * Nominated by: &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 17:44, November 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

(1 ECs/2 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 09:09, November 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:19, November 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Yup. That's a mimph. ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 23:14, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Grub-tea

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 11:37, November 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Urgh

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:21, November 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 13:06, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Just one question: Was Grub-tea always capitalized as such, or could it be lowercase?&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 21:42, November 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * No, just an error by me. Therefore decapitalized.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 11:24, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Gareth (TK329's son)

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 20:44, November 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: All tweets are canon.

(1 ECs/4 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1) Indeed.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 13:52, November 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:29, November 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 00:58, November 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4)  Master Jonathan  &mdash; Jedi Council Chambers Sunday, November 13, 2011, 21:03 UTC
 * 5) Assuming Trayus is satisfied. Also, seeing one of the facts you cited has made me bring up an SH thread about the genders of some past stormtrooper CA's I worked on. Hanzo Hasashi 22:41, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Axinal
 * 2) * Kind of nitpicky since it's implied in the word "son," but you don't clarify that he's male in the body. Otherwise, nice work.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 21:47, November 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Rectified. Look's like you've got yourself a catchphrase there, Axe. ;) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 00:35, November 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Heh, I always wanted one of those. :P&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 00:58, November 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) Trayus
 * 6) *You should refer to "the Sickness" by the more time-appropriate term, Imperial bioweapons Project I71A. Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 00:55, November 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) **Went with Blackwing virus. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 20:22, November 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) From the Council Chambers:
 * 9) * Can you use Twitter to source to individual tweets?
 * 10) **Done. Do you want me to list what each tweet establishes in the notes? NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 20:22, November 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) ***I don't think that's necessary; it's fine the way it is now.  Master Jonathan &mdash; Jedi Council Chambers Sunday, November 13, 2011, 21:03 UTC
 * 12) * Can you give some kind of real-world time reference in the BTS, e.g. "leading up to the Death Troopers release in " or something like that?
 * 13) **Done. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 20:22, November 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 14) *Otherwise, looks nice.  Master Jonathan &mdash; Jedi Council Chambers Saturday, November 12, 2011, 01:28 UTC

Comments

Tam (clone)

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:13, November 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Mopping up those one mention clone commandos

(1 ECs/1 Users/1 Total)
Support
 * 1) -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:22, November 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 21:51, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * Same objections from your other clone. -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:30, November 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * Done.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 13:28, November 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) Jang
 * 2) *I hardly ever review on the CAN, but Lee, after taking a look at your nominations, you should know better.
 * 3) **Huh?  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:47, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) * Reload your infobox.
 * 5) **Done.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:50, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) * If he's a clone trooper, mentioning that he's a Human male is quite redundant here. And if he's a clone commando, it would be the same. I believe in this intro/bio paragrah, you can mention that he's was only a clone commando, and avoid mentioning the term clone trooper for consistency.
 * 7) **If I may interrupt for a second, I disagree about the part of Human male. If Jango's sex and species is mentioned, I won't mind so much. But if someone comes to Wookieepedia not knowing a thing about Star Wars and they read this article, they are going to wonder what species and gender this guy is. If they haven't seen Star Wars, chances are they won't know that he is a male Human just because we say that he was a clone. There are clones of female Rodians in Star Wars continuity somewhere, I'm sure. So, I say we should leave the part about Human male in there for consistency and for comprehensiveness of the article.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:09, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) ***Cal, I'm sure you know what occurs outside the CAN. It's redundant to mention Human male for clone troopers when all are Human male.  JangFett  (Talk) 17:08, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) ****I realize that, but I still stand that it should be included. However, since this isn't even my article, I'll leave it up to what you and Lee think.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 17:11, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) *****I removed the info.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 18:27, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) ***Please take a look at my reply on your talk page. The second part of your objection is fixed.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:47, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 12) ****Lee, I see nothing that says you have to include that information, likewise there's nothing about you cannot include it. However, per the numerous clone articles we have, stating clone trooper, or in this case, clone commando is sufficient enough.  JangFett  (Talk) 17:08, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 13) * Is there any reason why you're mentioning his height in the can-approved intro? Creating a section wouldn't be too much for this. Also, for the nickname in the intro, his nickname is Tam, not "Tam" (notice the quotation marks). Keep the punctuation out of the wiki bold formatting.  JangFett  (Talk) 20:39, November 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 14) **Please take a look at my reply on your talk page. The second part of your objection is fixed.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:47, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 15) ***Is it correct that you ask me to create a P&T section only for his height?  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 18:27, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 16) ****Yes, that's fine, though it's optional and up to you. I'll go ahead and strike this objection. Please be careful with the quotation markings for the nickname in the intro, as well as piplinking.  JangFett  (Talk) 18:35, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Forr

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:23, November 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Yes they look pretty same, because it is the same small amount of info. And no, there are no spoken lines about him in the novel.

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:21, November 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 13:07, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Object Comments
 * Same objections again. I'll go through them all again once those objections have been taken care of. -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:31, November 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * Done.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 13:30, November 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * I don't see that the last sentence of the BTS is necessary. You could simply say he was "briefly mentioned" in the first sentence. Otherwise, nice work.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 21:54, November 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * That was part of my attempt to let the article look a little bit more different. Adressed and thanks for the review.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 11:14, November 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * Yes, of course.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 14:24, November 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) Jang
 * 2) * Reload your infobox
 * 3) **Done.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:55, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) * If he's a clone trooper, mentioning that he's a Human male is quite redundant here. And if he's a clone commando, it would be the same. I believe in this intro/bio paragrah, you can mention that he's was only a clone commando, and avoid mentioning the term clone trooper for consistency.
 * 5) **See above.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:55, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) ***Still remains  JangFett  (Talk) 17:10, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) * "However, Forr was killed during the war and later mourned, along with all other clone commandos who had died until that point, by the Mandalorian training sergeants Kal Skirata and Walon Vau in 19 BBY." I can see this sentence being separated into two sentences because as it stands it can be confusing. Mention that he died sometime during the war in one sentence, and then go ahead and say his death was mourned by ___
 * 8) * Is there any reason why you're mentioning his height in the can-approved intro? Creating a section wouldn't be too much for this. Also, for the nickname in the intro, his nickname is Forr, not "Forr" (notice the quotation marks). Keep the punctuation out of the wiki bold formatting.  JangFett  (Talk) 20:42, November 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) **See above.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:55, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) ***Still remains  JangFett  (Talk) 17:10, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * The book specifically states that he is a clone commando?-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:21, November 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * Yep.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 13:46, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

Baris

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:32, November 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: I hate something like that. Authors name seven characters in two lines and never mention them again. And people like me have to write articles about it. "Sigh"

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) Good job.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:37, November 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 21:58, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Object Comments
 * Same objections from your other clone. -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:30, November 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * Done.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 13:28, November 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * Infobox still needs to be reloaded. :P -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:24, November 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * Aaaaannnnddd done :P  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 14:32, November 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) Jang
 * 2) * If he's a clone trooper, mentioning that he's a Human male is quite redundant here. And if he's a clone commando, it would be the same. I believe in this intro/bio paragrah, you can mention that he's was only a clone commando, and avoid mentioning the term clone trooper for consistency.
 * 3) **See above.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:58, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Still remains  JangFett  (Talk) 17:12, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) * "However, Baris was killed during the war and later mourned, along with all other clone commandos who had died until that point, by the Mandalorian training sergeants Kal Skirata and Walon Vau in 19 BBY." I can see this sentence being separated into two sentences because as it stands it can be confusing. Mention that he died sometime during the war in one sentence, and then go ahead and say his death was mourned by ___. Also be sure to paraphrase your wording, Lee.
 * 6) **See above.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:58, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) ***Still remains  JangFett  (Talk) 17:12, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) * Is there any reason why you're mentioning his height in the can-approved intro? Creating a section wouldn't be too much for this. Also, for the nickname in the intro, his nickname is Baris, not "Baris" (notice the quotation marks). Keep the punctuation out of the wiki bold formatting.  JangFett  (Talk) 20:42, November 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) **See above.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:58, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) ***Lee, I did not say to remove the quotation marks.  JangFett  (Talk) 17:12, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Red (clone)

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:37, November 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: I hate Karen Traviss

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 * 1) -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 19:39, November 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Wait, we have to read the articles before we vote? NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 20:32, November 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 22:01, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

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 * 1) We all hate her
 * 2) * You'll need to reload the infobox.
 * 3) **Done.
 * 4) * And there is some infobox-exclusive material.
 * 5) **Should be gone. Otherwise please say what, as I don't recognize anything missing.
 * 6) ***Cool stuff. Just mention that he's human and the years that he died. It's been a while since I read Order 66, but I'm pretty sure that you'll have to find a different source for the years of the war. Probably something like The New Essential Chronology would work.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:57, November 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) ****Done and no, Order 66 sources that.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 18:33, November 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) *****Ok. Cool beans.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 19:39, November 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) *Otherwise, good job.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:45, November 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) **Thanks for the review.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:52, November 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) Jang
 * 12) * If he's a clone trooper, mentioning that he's a Human male is quite redundant here. And if he's a clone commando, it would be the same. I believe in this intro/bio paragrah, you can mention that he's was only a clone commando, and avoid mentioning the term clone trooper for consistency.
 * 13) **See above.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:59, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 14) ***Still remains  JangFett  (Talk) 17:13, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 15) * "However, Red was killed during the war—which raged between 22 and 19 BBY—and was later mourned, along with many other clone commandos who had been killed in action, by the Mandalorian training sergeants Kal Skirata and Walon Vau." I can see this sentence being separated into two sentences because as it stands it can be confusing. Mention that he died sometime during the war in one sentence, and then go ahead and say his death was mourned by ___. Also be sure to paraphrase your wording, Lee.
 * 16) **See above.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:59, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 17) ***Still remains  JangFett  (Talk) 17:13, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 18) * Is there any reason why you're mentioning his height in the can-approved intro? Creating a section wouldn't be too much for this. Also, for the nickname in the intro, his nickname is Red, not "Red" (notice the quotation marks). Keep the punctuation out of the wiki bold formatting.  JangFett  (Talk) 20:42, November 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 19) **See above.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:59, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 20) ***Lee, I did not say to remove them.  JangFett  (Talk) 17:13, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Kef

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:46, November 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Last one (for today :P)

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 * 1) -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 19:40, November 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 22:07, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Object Comments
 * 1) There'll be another time...
 * 2) * Same objections as above.
 * 3) **See above.
 * 4) ***See above :P  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 18:34, November 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) * This seems to be a copy of the others. You even accidently called him "Red" once. :P You'll need to go through and reword the article some so it doesn't sound like an exact copy. -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:50, November 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) **Yes, it's pretty hard to write one article seven times. I tried to reword some parts, please take a look and say if it's fine.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:56, November 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) ***I know from experience that it can be a royal pain. Good job! Just take one more look above.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:59, November 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) Jang
 * 9) * If he's a clone trooper, mentioning that he's a Human male is quite redundant here. And if he's a clone commando, it would be the same. I believe in this intro/bio paragrah, you can mention that he's was only a clone commando, and avoid mentioning the term clone trooper for consistency.
 * 10) **See above.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 16:02, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) ***Still remains  JangFett  (Talk) 17:14, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 12) * "Kef was killed, however, during the war—which lasted between 22 and 19 BBY—and was later mourned, along with all other clone commandos who had been killed since the start of the war, by the Mandalorian training sergeants Kal Skirata and Walon Vau." I can see this sentence being separated into two sentences because as it stands it can be confusing. Mention that he died sometime during the war in one sentence, and then go ahead and say his death was mourned by ___. Also be sure to paraphrase your wording, Lee.
 * 13) **See above.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 16:02, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 14) ***Still remains  JangFett  (Talk) 17:14, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 15) * Is there any reason why you're mentioning his height in the can-approved intro? Creating a section wouldn't be too much for this. Also, for the nickname in the intro, his nickname is Kef, not "Kef" (notice the quotation marks). Keep the punctuation out of the wiki bold formatting.  JangFett  (Talk) 20:48, November 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 16) **See above.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 16:02, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 17) ***Lee, I did not say to remove them.  JangFett  (Talk) 17:14, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Silver Falcon

 * Nominated by: -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:29, November 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Quick appearance. No quote. WP:TOR.

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 * 1) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 01:34, November 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2)  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 11:05, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

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 * 1) Could you tell us the year Korr entered the Falcon? Other than that, nice work.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 22:37, November 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *Yeah, I meant to add that before. Good catch!-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:22, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

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Bespin Dancer

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 11:29, November 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: I can't resist.

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 * 1) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 21:11, November 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 03:33, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) <- Omicron (Leave a message at the BEEP! ) 15:53, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

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 * I won't strike my objection over this, but was it confirmed to be a capital ship? If so, that info should be in the body; if not, the article would need a less specific category.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 21:26, November 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nope, we only know that it was part of a battle group. So it could also be a supply ship etc.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:28, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * Okay. I've changed the category to Category:Galactic Republic starships.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 15:41, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * Okay with me.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:51, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Breha Organa's cousin

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 11:38, November 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Quotes would be enough for a GA, but the info. Well I'll live it to you, if you think there is enough info for a P&T and bio, I'll be glad to do it. For now: 146 words.

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 * 1) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 21:04, November 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Just take a quick look at my copy-edit. Good job.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 03:37, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

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 * Article looks pretty good, though I would advise you to be more attentive to grammar, spelling, and redirects.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 21:04, November 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * Allright.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:27, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Unidentified warehouse

 * Nominated by: -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 04:31, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Another for WP:TOR.

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 * 1) Just passing by.  —Tommy   9281  Monday, November 14, 2011, 04:33 UTC 
 * :) -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 04:39, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 05:07, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2)  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:25, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

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Battle of New Cov

 * Nominated by: -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:42, November 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Quick little battle I've been wanting to do for a while now.

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 * 1)  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 13:47, November 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 20:48, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Axinal
 * 2) * I'm not sure it's relevant to put the info about the Star Cruiser in the Outcome field in the infobox; unless the Cruiser's arrival marked the end of the battle, it doesn't really belong. Looks nice, otherwise.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 03:06, November 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **The arrival of the Cruiser is pretty much the last mention about the battle in the book, but I guess that isn't really an "outcome." Thanks for the review!-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:08, November 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) ***My pleasure. Nice work.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 20:48, November 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) Some people wanna fill the CAN with silly battles
 * 6) *"Battle of New Cov" is a conjectural title because it wasn't called that in the source. "Battle off" is not the same thing and it isn't a proper noun. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 22:03, November 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) **Fixed.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:54, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

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Tasjon

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 22:23, November 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Back to the HoloNet.

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Droat milk

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 22:23, November 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: It's cerulean, I'm sure.

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