Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations



This page is for the nomination of "comprehensive articles". For a list of "comprehensive articles", see Category:Wookieepedia comprehensive articles.


 * Comprehensive article nominations history
 * Comprehensive article nominations archiving checklist

What is a "comprehensive article?"

A "comprehensive article" is an article that contains all information regarding the topic. Often, "comprehensive articles" cannot reach Featured or Good Article status due to their limited content. This process is intended to recognize articles that contain all relevant canon information, yet are still under the 250 word limit required for a Good Article. The purpose of this is twofold&mdash;firstly, to help users distinguish what is a stub, and what is merely a short article with no further relevant material to be added, and, more importantly, to highlight for the reader when they are reading something that has been judged definitely "comprehensive"&mdash;that is, a guarantee to the reader that whatever they are reading contains the sum total of all available content.

Nominations and promotions of the Comprehensive article process are overseen by a collective of users known as the "EduCorps," which is made up of the Inquisitorius, the AgriCorps, and various other experienced users who are considered qualified to adequately judge the nominated material.

Lucasfilm Ltd. and its many licensees continue to expand the Star Wars universe. Since new information might become available, it may be necessary to revoke a "comprehensive article's" status. A forum will be used to nominate articles that have fallen out-of-date. Members of the EduCorps will then post a warning template on that page, and a grace period of one week will be instituted in which the article can be improved. If there is a significant amount of new information, it is likely that once updated, the article will become eligible for Good article status, and thereby ineligible for Comprehensive article status.

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An article must&hellip;


 * 1) &hellip;be well-written and detailed.
 * 2) &hellip;be unbiased, non-point of view.
 * 3) &hellip;be sourced with all available sources and appearances.
 * 4) &hellip;follow the Manual of Style, Layout Guide, and all other policies on Wookieepedia. This is, of course, within reason. If a topic only has a very limited degree of content that cannot be divided up into the relevant article sections, it is not required that it follow the Layout Guide precisely. This is to be judged on a case-by-case basis.
 * 5) &hellip;following the review process, be stable, i.e., does not change significantly from day to day and is not the subject of ongoing edit wars. This does not apply to vandalism and protection or semi-protection as a result of vandalism.
 * 6) &hellip;not be tagged with any sort of improvement tags (i.e. more sources, expand, etc).
 * 7) &hellip;have no redlinks.
 * 8) &hellip;have all relevant canon information presented.
 * 9) &hellip;be completely referenced for all available material and sources. See Sourcing for more information. While this is not required for an article possessing a singular source, it is encouraged, as it provides both uniformity and a good infrastructure should the topic be referenced in any future materials.
 * 10) &hellip;have all quotes and images sourced.
 * 11) &hellip;provide at least one relevant quote on the article if available.
 * 12) &hellip;include a "Behind the scenes" section for in-universe articles.
 * 13) &hellip;counting the introduction, the article body, and "Behind the scenes" material, must not exceed 250 words in length (not including captions, quotes, or headers, etc). Any articles exceeding the limit should be taken to the Good article nominations page for consideration.
 * 14) &hellip;if the nominated article reaches 200 words or greater, the nominator must either provide an intro or draft an intro and provide a link to the revision in the nomination, showing that the intro does not elevate the article over 250 words. Exceptions can be made for articles wherein the majority of the text is in the "Behind the scenes" section.

How to nominate:


 * 1) First, nominate an article you find is worthy of comprehensive status, putting it at the bottom of the list below. Nominated articles must meet all thirteen requirements stated above.
 * 2) Add CAnom at the top of the article you are nominating.
 * 3) Be sure to place sign in the "Nominated by" line when the nomination is posted for voting.
 * 4) Others will object to the nomination if they disagree that the article is good enough; they will then supply reasons for doing so, and ways to improve the article in accordance with the established rules.
 * 5) Nominators and supporters will adjust the article until the objectors (with reasonable objections) are satisfied. Objectors may also make alterations&mdash;if there is any reason for contention on a given point, it should be settled in a civil manner in the nomination field itself.
 * 6) Users may not vote on their own articles.
 * 7) There is no limit to the amount of nominations a given user can submit at any given time.

How to vote:


 * 1) Before doing anything, be sure to read the article completely, keeping a sharp eye out for mistakes.
 * 2) Afterward, compare the article to the criteria listed above, and then either support or object the article's nomination.
 * 3) *If you object, please supply concrete reasons for doing so, and how it can be improved.
 * 4) As stated above, any objections will be looked upon by the nominator, supporters, and anyone willing to improve the article, and action will be taken to please the objectors. Do not strike other users' objections; it is up to the objector to review the changes and strike if they are satisfied.
 * 5) There are several ways in which an article can receive the required number of votes. Within a 48-hour period of nomination, only EduCorps votes will count towards the total, although anyone may choose to vote in that window. If two members of the EduCorps support a nomination in that window, and there are no outstanding objections, the article can be considered a "Comprehensive article" and be tagged with the template 48 hours after the initial nomination.  The talk page will also be tagged with the CA template. When the 48 hours are up, any user's votes will contribute towards the total. If one EduCorps member has voted for an article after a week, three regular votes will be required. After the 48 hour period, an article can still also pass with just two EduCorps votes.
 * 6) Once a nomination is successful, it will be placed on the Comprehensive article list. Instructions on how to archive nominations, successful or otherwise, can be found here. Anyone can archive a nomination&mdash;just make sure it has the correct number of votes, has been nominated for at least a week (or 48 hours if there are two EC votes), and that there are absolutely no outstanding objections. If you are not sure how to do this, just ask, and someone will likely be more than willing to help you. Also, if you think you can slip one past us, think again&mdash;someone is always watching you.

All nominations will be considered idle and are subject to instantaneous removal by EduCorps members if objections are not addressed, or at least not answered, after a period of 1 week.

Please remember to archive your nomination beforehand if you plan on taking it to the Good Article Nominations page.

Battle of Slotern

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:45, August 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:I'm so sorry Lieutenant Blair.

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) SinisterSamurai 15:36, August 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  20:43, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) SinSam
 * 2) * This should link to either Slotern or Slotern system. Systems on the essential atlas (and companion) chart are named for their most famous feature. And Slotern system was added to the Online companion after comments re: battle of slotern in TFUII were made on the blog of Daniel Wallace. SinisterSamurai 02:07, August 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Done. I added the Slotern system and didn't create a Slotern since we don't know anything about it. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:57, August 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) Exiled Jedi
 * 5) * I think that you can say that it occured in the Rise of the Empire era. See my reasoning in the Blair nomination. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:58, August 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) **Done. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:12, August 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) ***You still need to mention the era in the body of the article.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  02:17, August 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) ****Done. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 20:40, August 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) Imperators II
 * 10) * The dates have to be sourced.  Imperators II (Talk) 12:16, August 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) **They have been. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:38, August 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 12) *** Now "during the height of the Galactic Empire" is unsourced (same as your other battle nom).  Imperators II (Talk) 19:12, August 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 13) ****Try that then. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:32, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Comments
 * I'm not going to strike my support, but you should mention the era in the article body. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:39, October 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * Took care of it.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:59, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Unidentified wingman

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:21, August 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Doing ya one better EJ.

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) Good work.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  20:40, August 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Excellent. Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 16:22, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * Please do the appearances section like you did in the Battle of Slotern article.
 * 3) **Got it.
 * 4) * Again I think you can say the era was Rise of the Empire.
 * 5) **Done.
 * 6) ***Please mention the era in the body of the article.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  02:21, August 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) ****Done. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 20:35, August 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) * In Blair's article you call them TIE starfighters, however, in this nomination and the Battle of Slotern nomination you call them TIE figters and link them to TIE series. Which is correct? -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  17:03, August 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) **All set. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:15, August 14, 2011 (UTC)


 * 1) Objection! Sustained!
 * 2) * I would prefer it if you added in the BTS that this wingman only appears in the databank, and not the actual game itself. Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 15:09, August 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Got it. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:45, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Comments
 * Again, please mention the era in the body of the article. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:40, October 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * Got this one, too.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:11, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Battle of Corrdair

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:29, August 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Well, I had to write it in order to CAnom Limm Nix. It's a good thing that there is no limit on CAnoms.

(1 ECs/0 Users/1 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  15:56, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * The quote doesn't seem to fit very well, it doesn't even mention the battle. Are there any other quotes?
 * 3) **The whole reason that the battle was mentioned in the databank was to give place to Limm Nix, so the battle is mentioned once in a two sentence databank entry. So, that's about the best that I can do.
 * 4) * "The Empire sent All Terrain Missile Platforms to attack the Alliance, including Major Limm Nix." makes it sound like Nix is a AT-MP. Please reword. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  12:16, August 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) **Heh, fixed. Thanks for the review EJ. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:35, August 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) Imperators II
 * 7) * "during the height of the Galactic Empire" has to be sourced.  Imperators II (Talk) 12:18, August 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) **Thanks for looking it over, but it is sourced. Someone really seriously messed this article up while I was sleeping, so you might have seen that result. But, take a look at it now. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:35, August 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) *** Uh, no, the statement is not sourced. It only has a note explaining the applicability of an OOU publishing era.  Imperators II (Talk) 19:09, August 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) ****Take a look now. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:25, August 16, 2011 (UTC)


 * 1) SinSam
 * 2) * Corrdair should be linked (Or Corrdair system). Comments on Dan Wallace's blog give me reason to believe that the next Atlas companion update will include Corrdair (and Polomie). SinisterSamurai 20:27, August 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **I don't know if that'd be wise. We don't know anything about Corrdair. For all we know it might be a city. So I think we should leave it blank until it is verified. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:39, August 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) *** Then it'll have to link to a stub, or just be a redlink. SinisterSamurai 00:35, August 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) ****Done. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:57, August 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) *****Welcome to hyper-inclusionism. :) SinisterSamurai 15:42, August 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) ******That's for me. :P Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:46, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Comments
 * Please mention the era in the body of the article. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:41, October 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * Done.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:12, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Nix

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 16:39, August 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Different Nix than my other CAnom.

(1 ECs/0 Users/1 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  19:25, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * Just a quick question: Was it not confirmed that he was killed by Terror Troopers? -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  13:28, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Yup. Fixed. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:32, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) * See my objection on the captain's nom. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  15:59, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) **Phew, I think I got them all. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 19:08, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Pend

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:07, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:I wrote this article so I could CAnom Band Light, but since I got this one done first, I'll nom this one first.

(1 ECs/0 Users/1 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  19:24, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * In the other articles you mention that he was searching for smuggled goods, please mention that here. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  13:26, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Alrighty. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:34, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) * See my objection on the captain's nom. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  15:58, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) **Done. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 19:07, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Red (Band Light)

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:31, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:And next on Blood, Gore, and Other Unfortunate Mishaps:Red, the man whose name matches his looks.

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) Just a few minor problems that I fixed, good work.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  13:12, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * I need to pay better attention.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  13:23, August 17, 2011 (UTC)


 * 1) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 00:39, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Could you mention that the corridor he was killed in was near life support? -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  13:23, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *Done. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:36, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) See my objection on the captain's nomination. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  15:57, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) *Done. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 19:06, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) Does it say in the databank that he was eviscerated? Being impaled by a pipe doesn't remove your entrails unless canon says so.  NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 23:04, October 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) *Actually, it does say that he was eviscerated.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:30, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Band Light

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:42, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Finally doing the nom I was building up to.

(1 ECs/0 Users/1 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  19:21, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 18:24, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * Does it say that the ship has a crew of four, or does it just mention four people on the ship and not mention whether there were more crew members or not? If it is the former, please say "At least four" in the infobox. Either way mention the crew in the main article. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  13:06, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **"Good catch" as you say. :p Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:39, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) * See my objection about the era in the nomination for the captain. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  15:56, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) **Done. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 19:05, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) Rubedo
 * 7) * Could you explicitly say that Red, Pend, and Nex were crewmembers in the prose? Right now it reads like the former two have no context. A list after saying "at least four" would suffice. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 19:11, September 29, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) **Fixed.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:50, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Comments
 * You forgot the era tag. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:43, October 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * Got it.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:16, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Unidentified captain of the Band Light

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:58, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:There should be a captain in there somewhere.

(1 ECs/0 Users/1 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  13:00, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * I missed something.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  13:20, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) You refer to the captain as "he" once. Is this a mistake or was the captain a male?-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  13:20, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *Yea, I did it out of force of habit. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:42, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) For all of the Force Unleashed II databank nominations, please mention that article's subject occured during the reign of the Galactic Empire. (Notice that this could place the articles in any era that has the Galactic Empire satisfying those who say that it is not confirmed to be in the Rise of the Empire era, and it also narrows down when the article's subject lived. What do you think of this idea?) -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  15:52, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * OK, I think I got them all. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 19:05, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) ** You missed the Unidentified wingman and Limm Nix. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  19:18, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) ***My apologies, you just forgot to remove the era tags. I took care of them for you, good work.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  19:30, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) ****Thanks. You might want to remove the strike on your vote now though. :) Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 19:39, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) *****Heh, sorry about that.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  21:45, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Comments
 * For consistency's sake, please check all of your nominations coming from the Force Unleashed II databank and remove the Rise of the Empire era from them. I have reconsiderd my reasoning and now think that it is not certain that the databank entries have to be from the Rise of the Empire era. Sorry for the confusion.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  13:00, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * It would be a good idea to say that it was during the time of the Galactic Empire, because that narrows it down a bit, though it still does not say an exact era.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  13:16, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Tedonian wine

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:15, September 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Continuing with the Get-all-my-created-articles-to-status project.

(2 ECs/1 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 04:42, September 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) I have Tedonian wine with my nerf-steak thank you...-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  23:12, September 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Menkooroo 08:48, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Rubedo
 * 2) * "be as careful with the shipments of Tedonian wine as Tohrm was." Rephrase this. It's word-for-word.
 * 3) **Try that then.
 * 4) ***It's still pretty much the phrase. You should give Tohrm context as their comrade, rather than providing his species. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 03:24, September 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) ****Try that.
 * 6) *****I changed it a touch more. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 04:42, September 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) * I think the mention of the Tedonia system should be relegated to a BTS note a la the previous food articles. Unless she says it comes from there, in which case it needs to be entioned in the body.
 * 8) **See how that looks.
 * 9) ***I meant saying something to the effect of that there is canonically a system called Tedonia but that Allies does not explicitly say that the wine originated from there. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 03:24, September 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) ****See how that works then. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 04:12, September 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) * Tohrm should be given context on his first mention, which could be fixed with my first objection.
 * 12) **Check it out.
 * 13) *This is just a question. So Ackmena was in an anti-slavery organization when she was one hundred years old? ?.? NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 02:38, September 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 14) **When one hundred years old you reach, look as good you will not. Hmm?? Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 02:44, September 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 15) ***The writers officially need to be told to remember scale. People shouldn't be having kids at 70. It's just ridiculous. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 03:24, September 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 16) Exiled Jedi
 * 17) *Do we know for sure that this was a real kind of wine? -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  22:50, September 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * 18) **I think that it can be safely assumed. Since the Flight people were trying to keep the conversation inconspicuous, I think that they would use the name of a real wine. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 23:00, September 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * 19) ***Good point.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  23:12, September 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * 20) * If the Tedonia system was added to the Online Companion after the publication of Allies, then there's more you can say in the BTS without venturing into speculative territory.
 * 21) **Umm, I'm not sure what exactly you want added. Do you want the release date for the Atlas? Release date for the Companion? Just more about what it says about Tedonia? Or what?-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 13:59, October 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * 22) ***Jason and Dan have been consistently updating the Online Companion for the past couple of years as new material is released. In real-world chronology, the "Tedonia system" was added to the online companion following the release of Allies. You're right in that we still can't say for sure that Tedonian wine comes from said system, but the BTS could note that the Tedonia system came into existence after the introduction of Tedonian wine. Something as small as changing "is included in" to "was later added to" would do the trick, I think. Thoughts? Menkooroo 04:56, October 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 23) ****Sounds good. Added.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 16:40, October 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 24) * Check out the info I added on where and when the conversation took place. Be sure to include those kinds of details in the future. Menkooroo 05:09, October 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * 25) **Okey-dokey. Thanks for the review.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 13:59, October 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) **Okey-dokey. Thanks for the review.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 13:59, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Unidentified Twi'lek female (Upper City)

 * Nominated by:  OLIOSTER  (talk) 02:08, October 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Short and simple

(1 ECs/2 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 16:31, October 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Hooray for "Unidentified"s!!-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:23, October 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:45, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Object

Comments
 * Anyone think it would be safe to assume she died in the bombardment?  OLIOSTER  (talk) 02:23, October 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * If Calo Nord survived the bombardment, then other people could have survived as well. Saying that someone died in the bombardment would be speculation.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  11:29, October 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * Ya, we can't say that. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 16:31, October 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * That's what I thought but wanted other opinions.  OLIOSTER  (talk) 21:04, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Battle of Nouane

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 17:05, October 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: What do you mean this wasn't part of Mandalorian Triumph?

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:14, October 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  16:46, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * In the BTS you say that the battle was mentioned in TEA. If that's true, then the Mo template needs to be added to the "Sources" section. -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:27, October 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * should never be used in the "Sources" section. Sources are, by definition, . Menkooroo 15:41, October 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * Menk is right. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 15:56, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Jinsol

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 17:22, October 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: And this isn't even a battle! What's going on?

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:15, October 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Portaak leaf?-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  16:48, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

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 * Again, the 1stm and 1st templates need to be used for the novel and TCSWE respectively. -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:31, October 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * Not . If something is in an "Appearance" prior to a "Source," then its appearance is its first mention and its first appearance. only applies if the subject has never "appeared" before. Menkooroo 15:43, October 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * It did not actually appear in Shatterpoint. I forgot the template. Fixed. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 15:56, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

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Unidentified Ithorian male (Upper City)

 * Nominated by:  OLIOSTER  (talk) 01:18, October 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: A shameless copy

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 * 1) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 15:53, October 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:17, October 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  02:10, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

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 * 1) As much as I personally dislike it, because I still see it as impractical, we aren't allowed to carbon copy articles for status anymore. You have to change up the wording in this one so it's not so similar to the Twi'lek. The BTS is exempt from this.  NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 02:55, October 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *Are those superficial wording changes I made good enough? :P  OLIOSTER  (talk) 02:03, October 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Honestly... no. Make more than a superficial effort. You can get the same info across by using completely different sentences. Menkooroo 05:34, October 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Is that better?  OLIOSTER  (talk) 05:48, October 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) ****The article looks good to me, but I don't see why the BTS section should be exempt. IMO, like Menk said, you can get the same idea across by using different words and sentences. Thoughts?-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:08, October 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) *****The BTS generally comes down to one sentence of limited breadth and wracking your mind trying to reword this when most articles on this page follow a structure anyway ("It appeared in this book written by this person") would be unnecessarily tedious, eventually culminating in wordiness we don't need. For the courtesy of rewording whole articles that could otherwise be the same, it's a small exchange to allow the BTS to remain constant. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 15:50, October 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) ******That's fine by me, then. It makes it easier for me. ;) -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 20:59, October 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) More of a question I suppose: does this edit make the year the subject of the sentence? I mean, making the first sentence be POV of the year, not the Ithorian. –Tm_T (Talk) 06:45, October 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) *Better?  OLIOSTER  (talk) 07:36, October 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) **Better in terms of POV yes. It's choppy sentence (or two) now, though. –Tm_T (Talk) 07:55, October 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) ***All one sentence now.  OLIOSTER  (talk) 08:10, October 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * 12) For this article and your Twi'lek nom, please mention their lack of hair in the infobox and the body. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  16:51, October 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * 13) *Why?  OLIOSTER  (talk) 18:10, October 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * 14) **Yeah, I guess it really isn't necessary, sorry about that.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  02:10, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Cioral

 * Nominated by: MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg(Whatever) 13:04, October 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Number 3!

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 * 1) TEA incoming!!!-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:06, October 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Menkooroo 12:52, October 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 22:45, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

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 * You have two sources, so one of them has to be tagged for what came first. The same for your other TEA noms. -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 13:04, October 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * Should I use 1st or 1stm or what? MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg(Whatever) 13:10, October 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * If I understand the LG correctly, according to this "If (First appearance) has not been used by this point, then the first actual appearance would get the 1st template."  then if the online companion came out first, that would receive a  and the Atlas would receive a .-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 13:21, October 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * I read the LG, but that's not how I got it. Since the Atlas is no a narrative, it should get the tag. The Companion shouldn't get anything except the  tag it already has.  MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg(Whatever) 13:25, October 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * I wasn't positive which way it meant. :P Let's go with that, then.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 13:31, October 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * I've added it to all my noms. MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg(Whatever) 13:43, October 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * Just to make sure that there's no confusion in the future: should never be used in the "Sources" section.  is only for "Appearances." Menkooroo 14:16, October 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * Alrighty, thanks Menk.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:28, October 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) Whoa!
 * 2) * There's something unsourced in the infobox! Ahhhh!
 * 3) **omg!!! I fixed it. We're saved!!
 * 4) * Every sentence in the body begins with "It was" or "Cioral was." How about some variety? Menkooroo 04:27, October 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) **Haha Yeah, it should be varied a little now. MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg(Whatever) 14:07, October 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) *Thanks for the review. :) MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg(Whatever) 14:07, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

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Copero

 * Nominated by: MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg(Whatever) 13:25, October 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Number 4.

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 * 1) -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:08, October 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Menkooroo 12:52, October 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 22:47, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

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 * 1) Yo!
 * 2) * Same "it was," "the planet was" objection as above, aaaand...
 * 3) **Fixed.
 * 4) * How about an article for the Copero shipyards? We have plenty of other shipyard articles. Also, is it a conjectural title, or is "Copero shipyard" named in the source? If that's the official name, I'd like to see it explicitly named in the article body. Menkooroo 04:30, October 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) **Article created. The name is conjectural. And Cal, why you missing all dis?! :P MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg(Whatever) 14:58, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

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 * I've got a question about sourcing the online guide. Is it required, or is sourcing the Atlas enough? MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg(Whatever) 13:25, October 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * Since it's its own separate source, I believe that it should receive a listing also.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 13:35, October 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * Is there a set way to source it? Say, a template? MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg(Whatever) 13:38, October 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * It was cited like this Star Wars: The Essential Atlas Online Companion on The Essential Atlas page. You might want to check around a little more first, though. I thought I saw it cited as a template once, but that might have been something else.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:23, October 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * I believe I've seen SWArchive used, and it's the only applicable template on Template messages/Sources of articles, so I added it to all my CANs. MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg(Whatever) 15:39, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Cormit

 * Nominated by: MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg(Whatever) 13:38, October 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Number 5...

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 * 1) "And Fred will be having fun, fun, fun 'til Chee takes the TEA away...."-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:10, October 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 22:50, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

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Z

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 16:14, October 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Don't act so shocked. A|You knew this was coming.

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 * 1) Two down. Twenty-four to go.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 13:10, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

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Csaus

 * Nominated by: MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg(Whatever) 14:02, October 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Number 6...

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 * 1) -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:12, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

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Jamiron

 * Nominated by: MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg(Whatever) 14:12, October 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Number 7...

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 * 1) Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 00:30, October 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:20, October 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Menkooroo 05:06, October 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 23:05, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

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 * 1) Jeffers
 * 2) * Never link to Wikipedia articles in In-Universe prose. If the Wookieepedia articles doesn't exist, you can create it.
 * 3) **Ah, I did not know this.
 * 4) **OK, I created the article. MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg<sup style="color:green">(Whatever) 15:53, October 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) * Is there an applicable picture from the Atlas? Menkooroo 14:19, October 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) **All these planets are on the same map, which I should finally be able to scan today. MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg<sup style="color:green">(Whatever) 15:21, October 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) ***OK, I uploaded an image for each except Celwis. I'm waiting on JMAS for that one since I can't fit it on my scanner. MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg<sup style="color:green">(Whatever) 22:43, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

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 * 1) Added a bit to the infobox and fixed the links. Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 00:30, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Limbala sector

 * Nominated by:  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  03:43, October 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Love Is a Warm Blaster!

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 * 1) My blaster's so nice and warm...-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 13:08, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

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 * In the Iinfobox you have the native species space filled in, but in the article, you just mention the senator that was from that region. Perhaps start out the article with something like "The Limbala sector was a sector in the galaxy that contained some members of the Turian species." Just something like that and it would also fix the rather short opening to the article.
 * Done.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:25, October 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * Any idea when the short story was supposed to be released? If so, you should add it to the BTS.
 * I forgot to do that, thanks for catching it.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:25, October 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * Otherwise, nice job.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 13:09, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

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 * I am not sure if my sourcing is adequate. Anyone have any tips for dealing with an article that is completely cut content?-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  03:43, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

HJ-377

 * Nominated by: -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 20:45, October 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:More from the insane asylum.

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 * 1)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  02:13, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

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 * 1) I am pretty sure that unidentified gender is not a correct category for this guy. Did you mean to have Category:Individuals of unidentified species as a category instead? -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  22:42, October 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *Yup. Got it.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:51, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

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Guybrush Threepkiller

 * Nominated by: -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:36, October 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Monkey Island meets WP:VG.

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 * 1) Looks good to me. MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg<sup style="color:green">(Whatever) 22:47, October 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Great. Also: Menk's subheading for the win. Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 21:25, October 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) "Swordfighting is a little like making love. It's not always what you do, but what you say." SinisterSamurai 18:34, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

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 * 1) Green Tentacle
 * 2) * This guy has to be worth a mention in BTS.
 * 3) **Done.
 * 4) * Per this screenshot, is he actually called "Threepwood" or "Threepkiller" in the game?
 * 5) **Moved.
 * 6) * "Guybrush Threepwood is the main character in the LucasArts Monkey Island video game, which was first released in 1990." Reads like there's only one game. The Secret of Monkey Island was the 1990 one.
 * 7) **Got it.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:15, October 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) * The Ron Gilbert fact can't be sourced to the film itself since he's not on the credits. Try or . Green Tentacle (Talk) 20:11, October 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) **And done.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:42, October 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) * One more. Per this there are apparently statues of Threepwood in the game. Green Tentacle (Talk) 21:12, October 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) **Good find. Got it.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:48, October 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 12) *Probably worth noting that they produced concept art of Elaine Marley as Juno Eclipse and LeChuck as Darth Vader but only Threepkiller made the game. The "Guy Brushkiller" and "Brush Guykiller" names could also use a mention.
 * 13) **See how that looks.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 23:26, October 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 14) *Wikipedia has some notes on the origin of his name which should be included for comprehensiveness. This Dave Grossman post is a great source for where Guybrush comes from. The SCUMM Bar is a little wrong about Guybrush and I'm not sure whether we'd consider it reliable enough to source Threepwood. Grossman only corrects it about the first name so it may well be right.
 * 15) **I'm not a hundred percent sure what you wanted added, but see how that looks.
 * 16) *This is specifically not an objection but it's a nice bit of related trivia that Guybrush's voice from The Curse of Monkey Island onwards is Dominic Armato, who has voiced several Star Wars characters in other games. Green Tentacle (Talk) 19:40, October 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 17) **Added.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 23:54, October 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 18) The most interesting nom the CAN page has ever seen
 * 19) * "Behind the scenes" has good info but reads a bit like a series of disjointed facts strewn together into a paragraph. I'd like to see some reshuffling done (it should mention TFU II and the downloadable skin first before going into what the character was based off of), and some connecting words like "also" added throughout the rest of the bts in order to connect the various strings together. Take a shot at it! Menkooroo 15:57, October 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 20) **See how it looks now.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 18:41, October 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 21) ***Better! It's probably big enough to be broken into two paragraphs.
 * 22) ****Splitttt.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 03:32, October 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 23) Yeah its an easter egg but I think the statues should go in the main section and not just the BTS. Something like "statues existed of this individual in the city of Tarko-se." Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 01:12, October 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * 24) *Added.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 19:32, October 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 25) Wait a minute...
 * 26) * Are the statues in Tarko-se Easter eggs, or are they canonically there no matter what?
 * 27) **They are always there, but I think they're still considered easter eggs.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 17:06, October 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 28) * Is the template currently in the article the correct one, or would Easteregg be more appropriate?
 * 29) **I think that the non-canon template should remain. The Easteregg template says that it may or may not be part of the real Star Wars. We know for a fact that Threepkiller is non-canon. So, that template would seem to be inaccurate.
 * 30) * In "Behind the Scenes:" There are also bronze statues of Threepkiller in the game in one of the rooms of the Western Arch of the city of Tarko-se. This is a retread of info already in the bio, and tells the reader nothing new. It's not necessary to state it twice.
 * 31) **Alrighty.
 * 32) * If you google "Guybrush Threepwood The Force Unleashed II," you can find a number of prominent video game magazines commenting on this Easter Egg. You could potentially add something to the end of the BTS about how they took notice of it, and even get a BTS leading quote. Thoughts? Menkooroo 02:51, October 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 33) **I'll see if I can find anything that would be worth a mention.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 03:30, October 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 34) ***I checked, but couldn't find anything that seems worth a mention.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 17:17, October 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 35) ****Diggity. Good luck on the GAN page. Menkooroo 04:44, October 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * 36) Wait another minute...
 * 37) * Secrets of Rebel Island.jpg to incorporate some part of the BTS info on the [[Starkiller Mimobot]] (under characters): "This was actually just a quick sketch done on a whim when we were creating additional unlockable costumes for the game (things tend to get silly when artists’ block sets in). Not thinking anyone would take us seriously, we brought it to a sign-off meeting to pitch the idea. Because everyone on the team is a huge Monkey Island fanatic, it made it through!  Guybrush is one of those characters that seem to go through a re-design in every game he appears, so we didn’t need to stick to any one particular style. The idea was so popular that we had a few artists take a crack at the Starkiller version. In the end we used a bit from all of the rough sketches to achieve the final piece seen here." --- Whoever is writing these. Foreword of artbook is by Haden Blackman. SinisterSamurai 17:40, October 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 38) **Nice find SinSam. Added.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 18:13, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Comments
 * 1) This guy is getting too big
 * 2) *Unless I mis-counted, the article currently stands at 294 words. I plan to take it up to GAN, but will leave it here till all the wrinkles have been worked out and the objections have been taken care of so I can move it up with a clean slate. Thanks for all your help with this awesome project of an article!-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 18:18, October 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **I counted 288, but the majority of the text seems to be in the BTS. Rule 14 indicates that exceptions can be made in such an instance, so if you want this to stay CA, there's arguing room available. SinisterSamurai 19:36, October 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) ***That's true, but I'd prefer to take it to GAN when I get all these objections taken care of.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:57, October 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) ****Rule 14 is regarding the addition of an intro for articles over 200 words --- anything over 250 is too big to be a CA regardless of BTS size. So, in other words, you're doin' the right thing, Cal. Menkooroo 04:44, October 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) *****Thanks, Menk. I'm looking forward to this baby hitting the GAN page!-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 13:31, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Tresk Im'nel's translator droid

 * Nominated by:  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  17:33, October 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Random article button do your stuff!

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Support
 * 1) Three cheers for the Random Article button!-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 20:15, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

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 * I'm not sure that the New Republic and the New Jedi Order should be listed as affiliation. The droid was affiliated with its owner. Just because the owner was affiliated with those entities doesn't mean that the droid was. -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 19:22, October 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * I wasn't sure about this either, I removed them now, thanks for the review.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  20:09, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

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Unidentified droid owner (Tresk Im'nel's translator droid)

 * Nominated by:  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  17:33, October 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Could be an individual, government, company... well it could be just about anything.

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 * 1) Short, but good.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 19:24, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

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 * 1) Remove the empty infobox. 1) It's empty - despite what you might have heard elsewhere, there is no point in having an empty infobox and there is plenty of precendent for not having one in such circumstances. 2) As you point out, it is not known if the owner was a character, so not reason to have a character infobox. --Eyrezer 19:25, October 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *Happily removed.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  21:30, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

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