Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Darth Bandon's Jedi Master


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Darth Bandon's Jedi Master

 * Nominated by: &mdash; 22:57, June 21, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Don't know why I haven't done this sooner&hellip; Let's go, WP:KOTOR!

(1 ECs/3 Users/4 Total)
Support Object Comments
 * 1) 501st  dogma ( talk ) 12:36, June 22, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 14:47, June 27, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  22:53, June 30, 2012 (UTC)
 * 4) Gal-icon.jpg  OLIOSTER  (talk) 14:34, July 4, 2012 (UTC)
 * 1) 501st
 * 2) * First of all, lack of BtS.
 * 3) **Darn it, fixed.&mdash; 00:10, June 22, 2012 (UTC)
 * 4) *I'll look it over more later. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 00:00, June 22, 2012 (UTC)
 * 5) **Done.&mdash; 00:50, June 22, 2012 (UTC)
 * 6) * You should start the article with "a" instead of "this", and change the context after accordingly. Using "a" is the excepted way for writting conjectrue articles. The bio start should be changed also.
 * 7) **Intro still needs it. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 00:52, June 22, 2012 (UTC)
 * 8) ***Got it.&mdash; 00:55, June 22, 2012 (UTC)
 * 9) * You mention the Jedi Civil War in the intro, could you do do in th bio? Just a small mention would do. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 00:46, June 22, 2012 (UTC)
 * 10) **Done.&mdash; 00:50, June 22, 2012 (UTC)
 * 11) * There are four instances of Jedi in the first sentence. Could you change it to less somehow? 501st  dogma ( talk ) 01:01, June 22, 2012 (UTC)
 * 12) **I think I got it.&mdash; 01:08, June 22, 2012 (UTC)
 * 13) * One last thing. The article should be moved to Darth Bandon's Jedi Master, as Master is supposed to be capitalized. Thats it, good work. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 01:16, June 22, 2012 (UTC)
 * 14) **Done. I don't remember the reasons behind why the name was the way it was, but it's moved now.&mdash; 01:20, June 22, 2012 (UTC)