Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Ashka Boda


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Ashka Boda

 * Nominated by: Xicer9 [[Image:atgar.svg|20px]]( Combadge) 07:28, January 23, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Less than 75 words short of a FAN. Oh well.

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1)  CC7567  (talk) 17:15, February 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2)  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  01:09, February 6, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 01:47, February 8, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) Jedi Kasra (comlink) 17:38, February 11, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5)  Grunny  ( Talk ) 10:04, February 17, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Attack of the Clone
 * 2) * "Boda joined forces with Jedi Knight Halagad Ventor to form a network of Jedi who survived the destruction of the Almas Academy": the network was formed and then survived the destruction, or the other way around? Please clarify; the tense is unclear here.
 * 3) **Clarified.
 * 4) * "Jedi Master Tionne Solusar uncovered the truth about Ashka Boda's fate long after Palpatine's death": I'm unsure specifically to which "death" you're referring to, but nevertheless, can it get a link?
 * 5) **Clarified and linked.
 * 6) * Is there any chance that the second paragraph of the Bio can be shortened? Remember, an article should only detail what is directly relevant to its subject.
 * 7) **Shortened and added on to the following paragraph.
 * 8) * Could you perhaps try to sub-section the bio between his actual biography and his legacy?
 * 9) **Sub-sectioned.
 * 10) * Any relevant images?
 * 11) **Added an image of the Tedryn Holocron.
 * 12) *Other than that, nice work.  CC7567  (talk) 21:25, January 31, 2010 (UTC)
 * 13) **Thanks for the review! Xicer9 [[Image:atgar.svg|20px]]( Combadge) 23:56, January 31, 2010 (UTC)
 * 14) * Why was the Emperor "dying"? Can more context be given here?
 * 15) **Contextified.
 * 16) * Yes, I do realize that this wouldn't be much, but can a P&A section be created that at least says that he had the abilities to become a Jedi Master, as there is a level of skill and proficiency required to take the title?  CC7567  (talk) 07:35, February 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * 17) **Added. Xicer9 [[Image:atgar.svg|20px]]( Combadge) 15:43, February 1, 2010 (UTC)

Comments


 * Absolutely no info for a P&A. Xicer9 [[Image:atgar.svg|20px]]( Combadge) 07:28, January 23, 2010 (UTC)
 * So then you should add the one sentence you do have for a P&A in the P&T. It's perfectly acceptable to do so in situations like this. —Tommy 9281 Mechnochair negwt.jpg ( Mechno-chair ) 06:06, February 2, 2010 (UTC)