Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Zeta Five


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Zeta Five

 * Nominated by:  IFYLOFD  ( Floyd's crib ) 05:51, December 27, 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: My final nom from Golden Age of the Sith/Fall of the Sith Empire. I never thought this day would come... *sniff*

(4 ACs/1 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 10:06, December 31, 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 00:28, February 2, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3)  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  00:33, February 4, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4)  Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 01:23, February 9, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5)  CC7567  (talk) 03:36, February 9, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) I could be wrong on this, but I seem to recall Kahorr sending the ship on the route even though it was risky because it was shorter. If so, please add this info. If I'm wrong, then never mind. :P  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  18:28, January 31, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) *Checked the issue, and you are correct sir. Info added.  IFYLOFD  ( Floyd's crib ) 00:28, February 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) The Grand Master
 * 4) * Prose is unwieldy in the Description. Way too many "the ship"s and improper comma usage.
 * 5) **Addressed.
 * 6) * I'm seeing repetitive phrasing throughout the article; change some things up a bit.
 * 7) **I've tried to change some things up a little. Is this good enough?
 * 8) * Intro is too long in proportion to the body.
 * 9) **Intro has been shrunken.
 * 10) *As a note: please watch your linking. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 00:50, February 5, 2010 (UTC)

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