Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Jaius Yorub


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Jaius Yorub

 * Nominated by: Cavalier One [[Image:FarStar Logo.jpg|20px]]( Squadron channel ) 14:22, 4 April 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Guest nom for WP:LE

(5 Inqs/1 Users/6 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Graestan ( Talk ) 22:24, 6 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) AdmiralNick22 13:42, 11 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) Grand Moff Tranner [[Image:Imperial Department of Military Research.svg|20px]] (Comlink) 11:17, 14 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 4)  Grunny  ( Talk ) 00:43, 20 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) &mdash;  Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 00:59, 21 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 6) Thefourdotelipsis 01:08, 22 April 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Graestan the Merciless:
 * 2) *You should be more explicit about Yorub's self-sacrifice in the intro.
 * 3) ** Explicitified.
 * 4) * The image thumbnails are a bit too small and my myopia can't be playing into the fact that I can't see what's going on in at least one.
 * 5) **I tweaked two images (the fleet one and the explosion). How's that?
 * 6) * Mentioning that Dac was the Mon Cal homeworld wouldn't hurt.
 * 7) **Mentioned.
 * 8) * "It was estimated" – I'd specify who made the estimate.
 * 9) **Specified. - Cavalier One [[Image:FarStar Logo.jpg|20px]]( Squadron channel ) 13:07, 6 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 10) * Graestan ( Talk ) 16:03, 5 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 11) From the Moffship of Grand Moff Tranner:
 * 12) * GA Core Fleet should be listed as an affiliation in the infobox.
 * 13) **Added.
 * 14) * Seeing as there's only one redlink, could you create an article for the GA Core Fleet Commandos? Even a stub would be nice.
 * 15) **Grumbles about it not being part of the requirements but doing it anyway since he is a good chap and usually tries to fill in redlinks :P - Cavalier One [[Image:FarStar Logo.jpg|20px]]( Squadron channel ) 11:08, 14 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 16) *Well done. Grand Moff Tranner [[Image:Imperial Department of Military Research.svg|20px]] (Comlink) 16:00, 8 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 17) **Thanks. I may try an Imperial next and guest nom for Legacy and Ambition at the same time ... - Cavalier One [[Image:FarStar Logo.jpg|20px]]( Squadron channel ) 11:08, 14 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 18) I think you should mention that he is a Sullustan early on in the bio - first para... --Eyrezer 07:14, 14 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 19) *Added. - Cavalier One [[Image:FarStar Logo.jpg|20px]]( Squadron channel ) 11:08, 14 April 2009 (UTC)

Comments
 * 1) AdmiralNick22
 * 2) *Looks real nice Cav. I really enjoyed the section you wrote on his personality. AdmiralNick22 13:42, 11 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) **Thank you. I enjoyed writing this one. - Cavalier One [[Image:FarStar Logo.jpg|20px]]( Squadron channel ) 11:08, 14 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) **Thank you. I enjoyed writing this one. - Cavalier One [[Image:FarStar Logo.jpg|20px]]( Squadron channel ) 11:08, 14 April 2009 (UTC)