Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Uueg Tching


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Uueg Tching

 * Nominated by: -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 01:08, 22 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

(5 Inqs/0 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  22:15, 1 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) Toprawa and Ralltiir 21:29, 5 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 3)  Greyman ( Talk ) 07:28, 10 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 4)  Master Aban Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 00:02, 16 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) --  Darth Culator  (Talk) 03:19, 17 August 2008 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) From LtNOWIS
 * 2) * You should change the phrase "the select couple who did" to be more encyclopedic.
 * 3) **Altered it.
 * 4) * Also in the intro, "at COMPOR rallies, historical documents" should probably be "at COMPOR rallies, in historical documents."
 * 5) **Done.
 * 6) * Is there a reason why he's always referred to by his first name? -LtNOWIS 12:55, 22 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 7) **Yeah&mdash;he's only referred to as "Uueg" in both the AJ and the Imperial Sourcebook, and I figured Atrisian naming conventions may be different to the norm. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 12:58, 22 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 8) Jadson's stuff:
 * 9) * Context on COMPOR (in the intro).
 * 10) **I de-abbreviated it; is that what you're looking for?
 * 11) ***Yeah.
 * 12) * You refer to the planet as both Kitel Phard and Atrisia. Pick one and stick with it.
 * 13) **Changed the one "Kitel Phard" I found to "Atrisia."
 * 14) *Great article.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 19:46, 30 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 15) **Thanks for the review. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 19:43, 31 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 16) Toprawa:
 * 17) * I'm not sure what this means, exactly, "indirectly." Can we supplement this with anything? "until he controlled the entire planet, both directly and indirectly."
 * 18) **Unfortunately, that's all the source says. "Uueg increased the Atrisian Empire to rule, directly or indirectly, the whole of Kitel Phard."
 * 19) * We should really have an article on this "Atrisian script," especially if that image in the article is an illustration of it. At least create a red link, please.
 * 20) **Done.
 * 21) * I think it would be best to use our Insider template for the HoloNet appearance. Toprawa and Ralltiir 20:53, 5 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 22) **Done. Thank you for the review. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 21:16, 5 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 23) ***Sure. A genuinely interesting concept. Toprawa and Ralltiir 21:29, 5 August 2008 (UTC)

Comments


 * I will deal with the redlinks in the morning. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 01:08, 22 July 2008 (UTC)