Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations



This page is for the nomination of "comprehensive articles". For a list of "comprehensive articles", see Category:Wookieepedia comprehensive articles.


 * CAN archiving checklist

What is a "comprehensive article?"

A "comprehensive article" is an article that contains all information regarding the topic. Often, "comprehensive articles" cannot reach Featured or Good Article status due to their limited content. This process is intended to recognize articles that contain all relevant canon information, yet are still under the 250 word limit required for a Good Article. The purpose of this is twofold&mdash;firstly, to help users distinguish what is a stub, and what is merely a short article with no further relevant material to be added, and, more importantly, to highlight for the reader when they are reading something that has been judged definitely "comprehensive"&mdash;that is, a guarantee to the reader that whatever they are reading contains the sum total of all available content.

Nominations and promotions of the Comprehensive article process are overseen by a collective of users known as the "EduCorps," which is made up of the Inquisitorius, the AgriCorps, and various other experienced users who are considered qualified to adequately judge the nominated material.

Lucasfilm Ltd. and its many licensees continue to expand the Star Wars universe. Since new information might become available, it may be necessary to revoke a "comprehensive article's" status. A forum will be used to nominate articles that have fallen out-of-date. Members of the EduCorps will then post a warning template on that page, and a grace period of one week will be instituted in which the article can be improved. If there is a significant amount of new information, it is likely that once updated, the article will become eligible for Good article status, and thereby ineligible for Comprehensive article status.

READ THIS FIRST!

An article must&hellip;


 * 1) &hellip;be well-written and detailed.
 * 2) &hellip;be unbiased, non-point of view.
 * 3) &hellip;be sourced with all available sources and appearances.
 * 4) &hellip;follow the Manual of Style, Layout Guide, and all other policies on Wookieepedia. This is, of course, within reason. If a topic only has a very limited degree of content that cannot be divided up into the relevant article sections, it is not required that it follow the Layout Guide precisely. This is to be judged on a case-by-case basis.
 * 5) &hellip;following the review process, be stable, i.e., does not change significantly from day to day and is not the subject of ongoing edit wars. This does not apply to vandalism and protection or semi-protection as a result of vandalism.
 * 6) &hellip;not be tagged with any sort of improvement tags (i.e. more sources, expand, etc).
 * 7) &hellip;have no redlinks.
 * 8) &hellip;have all relevant canon information presented.
 * 9) &hellip;be completely referenced for all available material and sources. See Sourcing for more information. While this is not required for an article possessing a singular source, it is encouraged, as it provides both uniformity and a good infrastructure should the topic be referenced in any future materials.
 * 10) &hellip;have all quotes and images sourced.
 * 11) &hellip;provide at least one relevant quote on the article if available.
 * 12) &hellip;include a "Behind the scenes" section for In-Universe articles.
 * 13) &hellip;counting the introduction and "Behind the scenes" material, must not exceed 250 words in length (not including captions, quotes, or headers, etc). Any articles exceeding the limit should be taken to the Good Article nominations page for consideration.

How to nominate:


 * 1) First, nominate an article you find is worthy of comprehensive status, putting it at the bottom of the list below. Nominated articles must meet all thirteen requirements stated above.
 * 2) Add CAnom at the top of the article you are nominating.
 * 3) Be sure to place sign in the "Nominated by" line when the nomination is posted for voting.
 * 4) Others will object to the nomination if they disagree that the article is good enough; they will then supply reasons for doing so, and ways to improve the article in accordance with the established rules.
 * 5) Nominators and supporters will adjust the article until the objectors (with reasonable objections) are satisfied. Objectors may also make alterations&mdash;if there is any reason for contention on a given point, it should be settled in a civil manner in the nomination field itself.
 * 6) Users may not vote on their own articles.
 * 7) There is no limit to the amount of nominations a given user can submit at any given time.

How to vote:


 * 1) Before doing anything, be sure to read the article completely, keeping a sharp eye out for mistakes.
 * 2) Afterward, compare the article to the criteria listed above, and then either support or object the article's nomination.
 * 3) *If you object, please supply concrete reasons for doing so, and how it can be improved.
 * 4) As stated above, any objections will be looked upon by the nominator, supporters, and anyone willing to improve the article, and action will be taken to please the objectors. Do not strike other users' objections; it is up to the objector to review the changes and strike if they are satisfied.
 * 5) There are several ways in which an article can receive the required number of votes. Within a 48-hour period of nomination, only EduCorps votes will count towards the total, although anyone may choose to vote in that window. If two members of the EduCorps support a nomination in that window, and there are no outstanding objections, the article can be considered a "Comprehensive article" and be tagged with the template 48 hours after the initial nomination.  The talk page will also be tagged with the CA template. When the 48 hours are up, any user's votes will contribute towards the total. If one EduCorps member has voted for an article after a week, three regular votes will be required. After the 48 hour period, an article can still also pass with just two EduCorps votes.
 * 6) Once a nomination is successful, it will be placed on the Comprehensive article list. Instructions on how to archive nominations, successful or otherwise, can be found here. Anyone can archive a nomination&mdash;just make sure it has the correct number of votes, has been nominated for at least a week (or 48 hours if there are two EC votes), and that there are absolutely no outstanding objections. If you are not sure how to do this, just ask, and someone will likely be more than willing to help you. Also, if you think you can slip one past us, think again&mdash;someone is always watching you.

All nominations will be considered idle and are subject to instantaneous removal by EduCorps members if objections are not addressed, or at least not answered, after a period of 2 weeks.

Shao to Gok

 * Nominated by: Thefourdotelipsis 14:49, June 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: "Even if he did turn up, the guards would be woken by the scraping noise as he tried to squeeze his massive swollen head through the door."

(0 ECs/3 Users/3 Total)
Support Object
 * 1) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 09:43, July 16, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2)  23:25, July 20, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) -- DarthRage Leave a message after the beep 18:26, August 14, 2010 (UTC)
 * 1) Could you add a bit about his physical appearance? A short sentence regarding his red dots and spindly fingers would suffice. I feel its only necessary because he's the only known member of the species, so we can't say "just put it on the species article" because it may be specific to him. Otherwise, it's good. Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 20:43, July 31, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) *How does that look? --Eyrezer 02:23, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Sluis Van space facility

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 06:54, July 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Long live the CAN! Long live the Random Article Noms!

(0 ECs/4 Users/4 Total)
Support Object
 * 1)  Darth Karika  will destroy your planet! 19:50, July 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 23:02, July 21, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) Menkooroo 07:25, July 22, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) -- DarthRage Leave a message after the beep 18:22, August 14, 2010 (UTC)
 * 1) Darth Karika
 * 2) * Infobox is missing the name.
 * 3) * BtS, last sentence: missing italics closing tag.
 * 4) * Did the facility appear in The Thrawn Trilogy Sourcebook, or was it just mentioned?  Darth Karika  will destroy your planet! 13:31, July 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) Kinda minor, but as the information in TTT sourcebook was just reprinted from the DFR sourcebook, wouldn't it be more appropriate to use the DFR sourcebook as your source, rather than TTT sourcebook? Menkooroo 17:00, July 21, 2010 (UTC)
 * 6) *I suppose. TTT was just the one I was looking at that second, so changed. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 06:38, July 22, 2010 (UTC)
 * 7) Cav
 * 8) *Is there anything to suggest that the Sluis Van space facility isn't just another name for the Sluis Van shipyards? I would suggest checking other sources concerning the shipyards just to make sure. The fact that they are described as "extensive" in the sourcebook leads me to believe that they could be one and the same. - Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 10:16, July 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * 9) **I'm going to echo Cav's sentiment here&mdash;particularly considering that the primary source for this is Thrawn Trilogy material, where the Sluis Van shipyards were introduced. Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 20:49, July 31, 2010 (UTC)
 * 10) ***The space facility was introduced in the DFR Sourcebook, which didn't deal with the shipyards at all because they weren't relative to the book. The TT Sourcebook does use the Battle at the Shipyards as it's time quantifier for the character entrys and time period but the Slussi section makes no reference to the battle at all. In fact, it refers to there not just being one catch-all shipyard in the sector, but several, with the facility referred to as a singular entity. "An advanced people, they established a number of major space yards throughout the Sluis Sector, including the extensive Sluis Van space facility." NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 05:40, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

Comments
 * 2 week vacation. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 22:50, August 12, 2010 (UTC)

Palmer

 * Nominated by:Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 19:59, July 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Battle for Naboo's red shirt

(0 ECs/1 Users/1 Total)
Support
 * 1) Fixed a number of links, and removed the redundant refs. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 01:41, July 28, 2010 (UTC)

Object


 * 1) Redshirt poking!
 * 2) * No refs?
 * 3) **Honestly, I didn't source it becasue of just one appearance. Someone else added CSWE. For all I know, it refers to Bravo Squadron. Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 11:36, July 21, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) ***If you want to find out whether something is in the CSWE, all you have to do is ask here.-- 23:13, July 21, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) ****huh, never knew that. Request pending.
 * 6) ****Fully sourced Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 14:13, July 23, 2010 (UTC)
 * 7) * Could you add the fact that she was female to the paragraph?
 * 8) **Yep.
 * 9) *Interesting.-- 23:35, July 20, 2010 (UTC)
 * 10) * Just one more thing, since she seems to be allied with the Naboo, rather than the GR, you might want to change this to a normal character infobox. Otherwise, good job!-- 23:13, July 21, 2010 (UTC)
 * 11) **Infobox changed. Thanks for the advice.Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 14:13, July 23, 2010 (UTC)
 * 12) Soresu
 * 13) * That born field isn't necessary. If you can't be more specific than "before she died", then it's better to just leave it out.
 * 14) * Unsourced infobox items.
 * 15) * Referencing always comes after punctuation.
 * 16) * If you can prove she's Human, then it needs to be mentioned in places other than the infobox.
 * 17) * Double-check for underlinking and redirect linking.
 * 18) * Her ability to pilot the Speeder and Starfighter should be in the P&T.
 * 19) * Provide some sort of date at the beginning of the Bio. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 10:47, July 26, 2010 (UTC)
 * 20) **Article updated. Thanks for checking it out. Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 16:28, July 26, 2010 (UTC)
 * 21) A few more from Sore
 * 22) * The intro should never have information that is mentioned nowhere else. That's why it doesn't need referencing. Also, it should also be a more complete summary of her life, including her involvement in the battle and her death. So yeah, include the intro stuff in the bio, and then expand the intro. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 10:50, July 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * 23) * There is no need to put two of the same reference next to each other, as it is redundant. The sentences ending in "rescue by her comrades." and "of the capital city Theed." could have their refs removed.
 * 24) *Nice work; it's getting there. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 10:50, July 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * 25) **Oh and I just realised that this is actually 260-something words (even longer after these objections are addressed), meaning that it should by all rights be nominated at WP:GAN rather than here. I recommend you take it over there. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 10:55, July 27, 2010 (UTC)

Comments
 * Note to ECs: As stated above, the article exceeds 250 words and is therefore not eligible for CAN status. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 05:37, July 31, 2010 (UTC)

Toma (Fallanassi)

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 07:03, July 18, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Just the neighbor, nothing to be concerned of.

(1 ECs/3 Users/4 Total)
Support Object
 * 1) Menkooroo 10:51, July 19, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2)  Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 08:09, July 20, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 23:51, July 21, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) -- DarthRage Leave a message after the beep 18:20, August 14, 2010 (UTC)
 * 1
 * 1) * Is Ialtra a village or a city? You call it both.
 * 2) *" Greatly distraught by this revelation, Akanah was convinced that she would have felt their deaths through the White Current if that were true." Is a confusing sentence --- "that" seems like it's referring to the destruction of the village, which is true. Menkooroo 12:38, July 18, 2010 (UTC)

Comments
 * 2 week vacation. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 22:51, August 12, 2010 (UTC)

Cadinth Oligarchy

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 21:08, July 25, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: We

(1 ECs/2 Users/3 Total)
Support Object
 * 1)  Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 09:21, July 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 10:29, July 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) -- DarthRage Leave a message after the beep 18:19, August 14, 2010 (UTC)
 * 1) Trayus
 * 2) * "during a conflict between the Republic and a militant secessionist faction, the Oligarchy's loyalty lay with the former." - You link the "militant secessionist faction" to the Confederacy, but it did not yet exist.
 * 3) **The CIS was founded in 24 BBY and this took placve during the Separatist Crisis, just before the Battle of Geonosis. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 06:16, July 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Only according to our article. The databank entry states that it wasn't formally founded until the meeting on Geonosis. Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 07:11, July 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) ****Then what was the fighting during the Separatist Crisis? That's what should be linked and, according to our articlce, that's the CIS, or what would become the CIS apparently. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 07:25, July 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * 6) *****It was with various supporters of secession, not a specific organization or government. And remember, Wookieepedia is not a source. All you need to do is change "militant secessionist faction" to "supporters of secession from the Republic," no link required. Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 08:02, July 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * 7) ******I know it's not a source, but I put trust in it. Fixed on all articles now, though I've left the capitalization the same, per the actual article. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 08:48, July 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * 8) *For what it's worth, the NEC makes it clear the CIS existed under that name as early as 24 BBY. All the Databank says is that the CIS was "formally established" in 22 BBY - but clearly the disparate secessionist groups were already operating under that name, so it should be fine to use it in the article. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 14:18, July 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * 9) **My mistake then. Feel free to re-add the link, but source it. Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 20:57, July 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * 10) * The HNN article refers to the "rally" as an "uprising." You should adjust your wording for accuracy, and link to the uprising.
 * 11) **Was fixed. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 06:16, July 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * 12) * Can you specify that Bodis-Ker Vitan was the planet's watchman?
 * 13) **Fixed. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 06:16, July 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * 14) Soresu
 * 15) * Similarly to Trayus' first objection, "separatist" shouldn't be capitalised, as that would refer to the CIS, which does not exist at this time.
 * 16) **Per above, it does. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 06:11, July 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * 17) ***"Separatist" is capitalized in the actual article. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 08:48, July 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * 18) * Last sentence is long and could be split.
 * 19) **Done. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 06:11, July 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * 20) *Once I review these 5, I will have reviewed all the nominations on the CAN =) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 10:56, July 26, 2010 (UTC)
 * 21) **Woot! NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 06:11, July 27, 2010 (UTC)

Comments
 * Don't forget to CAnom your articles. Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 21:34, July 25, 2010 (UTC)
 * D'oh. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 06:11, July 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2 week vacation. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 22:50, August 12, 2010 (UTC)

The History and Use of Military Languages

 * Nominated by: Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 23:38, July 25, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

(1 ECs/5 Users/6 Total)
Support
 * 1) Yeah&hellip;&mdash; 00:34, July 26, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 03:08, July 26, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 07:32, July 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 14:49, July 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) -- DarthRage Leave a message after the beep 18:18, August 14, 2010 (UTC)
 * 6) Eyrezer 04:15, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Adler Roty

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 08:18, July 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: A fellow logophile.

(0 ECs/2 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) Once the totally irrelevant Clone Wars description stays out. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 14:48, July 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 00:06, July 29, 2010 (UTC)

Object

Comments
 * 2 week vacation. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 22:51, August 12, 2010 (UTC)

Saskapeg uprising

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 08:49, July 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: By popular demand!

(0 ECs/0 Users/0 Total)
Support

Object

Comments
 * If it's a conjectural title, it shouldn't be capitalized. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 14:42, July 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * Thank you. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 21:54, July 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2 week vacation. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 22:52, August 12, 2010 (UTC)

Jastaal

 * Nominated by: Eyrezer 23:37, July 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: These guys were created by Brian Daley for his old-school Han Solo novels.

(0 ECs/2 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 02:11, August 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Menkooroo 06:28, August 13, 2010 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Unidentified Human Jedi (Daluuj)

 * Nominated by: Menkooroo 07:45, July 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

(0 ECs/1 Users/1 Total)
Support
 * 1) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 00:27, July 30, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) It should be Humanoid Jedi because the comic doesn't say she's Human.  NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 22:24, July 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) *Regarding Humans, we have an unofficial but generally agreed upon if it looks like a duck... policy. Menkooroo 02:50, July 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) **OK. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 00:27, July 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) Nitpicky, but is it known that Cathar have hearts? I'd prefer to just say it hit him in the chest. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 23:12, August 3, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) *Is it so wrong to be a Cathar? Or a Jedi? Or an inhuman cat? Ahn Rasi Tuum may be all of those things, but he still has a heart.
 * 6) **I mean... changed. Menkooroo 13:23, August 12, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

k'Jtari

 * Nominated by: Eyrezer 02:57, July 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: A martial species

(0 ECs/3 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) &mdash; Master Jonathan New Jedi Order.svg ( Jedi Council Chambers ) 14:44, July 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 02:13, August 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) Menkooroo 06:09, August 13, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) From the Council Chambers:
 * 2) * There's a new redlink that must be busted.
 * 3) *Otherwise, looks good. &mdash; Master Jonathan New Jedi Order.svg ( Jedi Council Chambers ) 03:39, July 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) **I love it! I thought I'd have time to do that this evening before anyone looked at the article! You are too quick. --Eyrezer 03:45, July 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) ***Taken care of. --Eyrezer 07:35, July 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * 6) ****I wouldn't have even noticed it had the category been properly linked (i.e. prefixed with a colon); as it was, it left a glaring omission in the second sentence, so I guess you've got nobody to blame for me noticing it but yourself. ;) Anyway, nice work. :D &mdash; Master Jonathan New Jedi Order.svg ( Jedi Council Chambers ) 14:44, July 29, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Kauronian

 * Nominated by: Eyrezer 02:57, July 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: No more K species

(0 ECs/2 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 02:16, August 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Menkooroo 06:14, August 13, 2010 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Polosich

 * Nominated by: Eyrezer 07:57, July 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: These are snobby aliens

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 05:09, July 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 02:17, August 1, 2010 (UTC)

Object Comments
 * 1) "Tyew Fordrod was a Polosich during the Galactic Civil War." This sounds as if he were a different species before or after the war. Can you alter the wording a bit for clarity?  Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 20:25, July 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) *Sure. --Eyrezer 22:41, July 29, 2010 (UTC)

Qadel

 * Nominated by: Eyrezer 07:57, July 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Wiped out by Xim

(0 ECs/2 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 02:18, August 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Menkooroo 07:59, August 13, 2010 (UTC)

Object Comments
 * 1) 1
 * 2) *" " shows up after the leading quote, and I can't quite figure out how to sofixit... Menkooroo 06:23, August 13, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) **Is it still there? --Eyrezer 07:29, August 13, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) ***But... you didn't even edit it! Menkooroo 07:59, August 13, 2010 (UTC)

Qonto

 * Nominated by: Eyrezer 07:57, July 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: These guys are from Wild Space

(0 ECs/1 Users/1 Total)
Support
 * 1) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 02:27, August 1, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Blah
 * 2) * Last sentence of the bio? Menkooroo 03:53, July 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) **A ghost. --Eyrezer 04:31, July 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) *Should there be an article for the attack on the Kuari Princess? Menkooroo 04:46, July 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) **Possibly. I'll check the source when home. --Eyrezer 00:58, August 5, 2010 (UTC)
 * 6) ***Added. Sorry for the delay. --Eyrezer 02:47, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Comments
 * I'm working through the "CA"s I wrote prior to this formal process existing, and we're almost through them all. --Eyrezer 23:54, July 29, 2010 (UTC)

Ry'coz

 * Nominated by: Eyrezer 23:54, July 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Nefarious links to Black Sun

(0 ECs/3 Users/3 Total)
Support Object
 * 1) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 02:29, August 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Fine the way it is, but is there nothing else you can add to the infobox?--''' Bonslywizard Trade Federation Symbol.jpg( Send a transmission...It's perfectly legal! ) 17:24, August 8, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) Menkooroo 06:25, August 13, 2010 (UTC)

Comments
 * I'm working through the "CA"s I wrote prior to this formal process existing, and we're almost through them all. --Eyrezer 23:54, July 29, 2010 (UTC)

Rseikharhl

 * Nominated by: Eyrezer 00:47, July 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Sector-wide law enforcers

(0 ECs/2 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) Menkooroo 04:45, August 2, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 23:16, August 3, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) I think an additional source is necessary to prove that that redlinked user is actually Jason Fry. Did he talk about Rseik specifically on a forum? If not, I can ask him about it on the JC forums if you want. Menkooroo 04:04, July 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) *Nope, no forum post. If you want to ask if these are his on a forum, please do so. --Eyrezer 04:28, July 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) **It's him! I haven't quite worked out how to directly link to a JC forums post, but will probably take you pretty close. Menkooroo 03:45, July 31, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) ***How about this? --Eyrezer 04:33, August 2, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) ****I split it into three sources since there were three separate external links. Hope that's OK. Menkooroo 04:45, August 2, 2010 (UTC)

Comments
 * I'm working through the "CA"s I wrote prior to this formal process existing, and we're almost through them all. --Eyrezer 00:47, July 30, 2010 (UTC)

Shi'kar

 * Nominated by: Eyrezer 03:02, July 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Hey, it's a TCW cross-over

(0 ECs/2 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 04:03, August 2, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Menkooroo 06:32, August 13, 2010 (UTC)

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Comments

Stieg-Fan

 * Nominated by: Eyrezer 03:02, July 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: None.

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 * 1) &mdash; Master Jonathan New Jedi Order.svg ( Jedi Council Chambers ) 04:24, July 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Menkooroo 04:49, July 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 23:23, August 3, 2010 (UTC)

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 * 1) Is there a reason you've left the article at the decapitalized title? If not, I think the "fan" part of the name should be capitalized per the quote. &mdash; Master Jonathan  New Jedi Order.svg ( Jedi Council Chambers ) 03:51, July 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) *The quote was correct. Fixed. --Eyrezer 04:21, July 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) Bts says that the Atlas placed their homeworld, but the sources say that it was the online companion? Menkooroo 03:58, July 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) *It was placed by the Atlas, which the Online Companion repeated. Sourcing isn't necessarily to the earliest source, merely to a source. --Eyrezer 04:17, July 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) **I think it's better practice to source to the earliest if it's just repeated information, but I'll strike. Menkooroo 04:49, July 30, 2010 (UTC)

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 * Removed the link to the young readers category --- articles shouldn't link to categories, should they? Menkooroo 03:58, July 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * I don't mind either way, although there may be a rule on this somewhere. --Eyrezer 04:21, July 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * As the one who added that link, I'll respond. I don't see a problem with it, particularly when we neither have nor need an article on the subject. I've linked to that same category in both an FA and a GA of my own, and I got no objection from the Inq or AC, respectively, on either one. &mdash; Master Jonathan New Jedi Order.svg ( Jedi Council Chambers ) 04:24, July 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * I've had links to categories removed in FAN's of mine. I think it's a no-no. Menkooroo 04:49, July 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * We do avoid links to categories, actually.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 19:33, August 5, 2010 (UTC)
 * OK, I wasn't aware of that. I won't use them in the future. &mdash; Master Jonathan New Jedi Order.svg ( Jedi Council Chambers ) 20:38, August 5, 2010 (UTC)

Ubasameir

 * Nominated by: Eyrezer 03:33, July 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

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 * 1) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 23:46, August 3, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2)  Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 00:12, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

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Veeza

 * Nominated by: Eyrezer 08:33, July 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: None

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 * 1) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 23:57, August 3, 2010 (UTC)

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Vicon

 * Nominated by: Eyrezer 08:33, July 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Almost at the end of the Alphabet!

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 * 1)  Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 06:20, July 31, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 01:41, August 10, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) Menkooroo 06:36, August 13, 2010 (UTC)

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 * 1) "They had long noses which they twitched" does not sound very wiki-like. Though it would still be fine without any changes, I believe it would benefit from a change of wording in that sentence (though I could be wrong).-- Bonslywizard  ( I am the senate! )Trade Federation Symbol.jpg 02:42, August 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) *I added a comma before the "which", but I am not sure otherwise what is wrong with the sentence. I'm open to suggestions for rewording though. --Eyrezer 23:32, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Chollas

 * Nominated by: Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 09:04, July 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: DarkStryder-related herd animal

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 * 1) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 01:29, August 8, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Eyrezer 04:22, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

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GandleMotors

 * Nominated by: Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 11:21, July 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Not to be confused with MandalMotors. Oh, no.

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 * 1) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 01:40, August 8, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Eyrezer 04:19, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

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Kal'Shebbol Transport

 * Nominated by: Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 11:21, July 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Based on Kolatill, strangely enough.

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 * 1) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 01:44, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

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Pathogenic bomb

 * Nominated by: Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 14:58, July 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: One more to add to the list ...

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 * 1) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 01:55, August 8, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Pathetic bomb? -- 1358  (Talk) 07:14, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

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Adventurer slugthrower rifle

 * Nominated by:  Bonslywizard  ( I am the senate! )Trade Federation Symbol.jpg 03:02, August 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: This is my first nomination, so don't be too hard on me if I have everything wrong. ;)

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 * 1) I'm hardly active on the CAN page, but after a glance on the RC page, I noticed that you're missing a lot of information. Per rule 1 and 8, an article must be well-written, detailed, and have all canon information presented in the article. With the given listed appearances and sources in the article, the majority are not even mentioned in the article. It also fails to comply with WP:S.  JangFett  (Talk) 03:37, August 1, 2010 (UTC)

Rohan Wayside

 * Nominated by: Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 16:46, July 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Swamp inhabitant

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 * 1) --''' Bonslywizard Trade Federation Symbol.jpg( Send a transmission...It's perfectly legal! ) 22:50, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

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 * 1) The article needs sourcing, a little more specific detailing (e.g: Bob was a human male...) and the picture is not a picture of him so it does not need to be there at all. And what species is he? Do you know? --''' Bonslywizard Trade Federation Symbol.jpg( Send a transmission...It's perfectly legal! ) 17:41, August 8, 2010 (UTC)
 * Article upgraded; picture removed; and no, the game does not specify what species he is. It doesn't need sourced if there is only one appearance. Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 18:18, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Mission to Destrillion

 * Nominated by: 19:21, August 3, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Shortest of the articles I edited.

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Unidentified Naboo homestead owner

 * Nominated by: Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 20:49, August 3, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Brave man running across the field in a battle

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 * How do you know that he is a Human and a Naboo native? It is not stated in the game. All we know is that he was a male who lived on Naboo by 32 BBY; it was not necessarily his homeworld. QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 08:51, August 5, 2010 (UTC)
 * He runs across the screen and has the same sprite of the other human civilians, and "homeworld" is used in the general sense of place of residence. I once saw a Talk Page post explaining the nuances.
 * Hmm, I have not noticed him running around before. Every time I saved him, he was driving a vehicle, but I'll take your word on it. Regarding homeworld, no, it is always used in a sense of the place where the individual was born and/or spent his youth. QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 11:23, August 11, 2010 (UTC)
 * He runs out right when the second wave of STAPS appear. Talk page discussion:[|]. Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 15:58, August 11, 2010 (UTC)

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Unidentified mine operator

 * Nominated by: Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 20:49, August 3, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Defensive beaurocrat

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 * 1)  QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 11:25, August 11, 2010 (UTC)

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 * "He was presumed to have been killed when Sykes destroyed the control room." Speculation. Besides, it is not even required to destroy the control room. QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 08:48, August 5, 2010 (UTC)
 * Removed, but every time I played, I needed to destroy the control center before the game let me proceed. Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 09:49, August 5, 2010 (UTC)
 * Weird. Every time I played it, I only had to destroy the plasma miners to progress. Maybe it depends on the game's version or something? QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 11:25, August 11, 2010 (UTC)

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Barren planetoid

 * Nominated by: Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 20:49, August 3, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Rezi Soresh's last stand

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Sixela system

 * Nominated by: Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 20:49, August 3, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Destroyed by resonance torpedoes

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 * Well over 250 words, making it GA territory. Please familiarize yourself with the CA guidelines before nominating further articles of such length or content. Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 06:34, August 5, 2010 (UTC)

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Comm 4

 * Nominated by: Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 11:52, August 4, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Labeled as technology, not a structure.

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Adela Tyché

 * Nominated by: Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 15:13, August 4, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Great pilot; ugly personality

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 * 1) Can be fleshed out considerably. Elaborate a bit on the missions she took part in and her role in them. QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 20:16, August 4, 2010 (UTC)
 * Precisely 249 words. Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 18:58, August 5, 2010 (UTC)
 * "helped free captured slaves." No she did not. She only participated in the disruption of Comm 4 and the attack on the disabled base. I'm asking you to expand on these two battles. What was the objective? What happened during the missions? It can be well over 250 words in my opinion. QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 11:18, August 11, 2010 (UTC)

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Wetakk

 * Nominated by: Eyrezer 01:40, August 5, 2010 (UTC)
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 * 1) LtNOWIS 03:01, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

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Wirutid

 * Nominated by: Eyrezer 01:40, August 5, 2010 (UTC)
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 * 1)  Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 00:10, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

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Wode

 * Nominated by: Eyrezer 01:40, August 5, 2010 (UTC)
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 * 1) "During the Clone Wars, the Wode were liberated..." Liberated from what? --''' Bonslywizard Trade Federation Symbol.jpg( Send a transmission...It's perfectly legal! ) 16:59, August 9, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) *The original source does not say. I've modified the article to make it clear Solomahal was on the side of the Republic, which is as far as the original source goes. --Eyrezer 02:57, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Van Serai Hotel

 * Nominated by: - Esjs (Talk) 22:35, August 5, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: My first article nom ever (thought I'd give it a try). By my count, it's at 246 words.

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 * 1) This article could be given an infobox and could very easily be given a simple intro, easily taking it to over 250 words and making it GAN-worthy. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 19:32, August 7, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) *I take it that a Location infobox would work. Doesn't the first paragraph work as the intro?  I could see putting the remaining paragraphs into a "History" section.  If just another sentence were added... -  Esjs (Talk) 04:02, August 8, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) **I would suggest a structure infobox. No, you couldn't just make the first paragraph the intro because it contains information that is not in the other paragraphs. Instead, you could write a new small paragraph summarizing briefly what you've said in the current three paragraphs, and make the new one the intro and the rest the main body. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 00:38, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

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BARC-2 speeder

 * Nominated by: Tm_T(Talk) 00:05, August 9, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: I know you love it, you definately do.

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 * 1) Jujiggum
 * 2) *What evidence do you have for this being "presumably" a 2-seat variant of the BARC speeder? This sounds like speculation to me.
 * 3) *The BTS should specify why this is ambiguously canon.
 * 4) *Also, where did you get the "BARC-2 speeder" name? If it's conjectural, then it shouldn't be bolded in full form in the intro.
 * 5) *That's all. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 15:39, August 11, 2010 (UTC)

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Bitt Panith

 * Nominated by:--''' Bonslywizard Trade Federation Symbol.jpg( Send a transmission...It's perfectly legal! ) 23:36, August 13, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: At least there's no way this one will make it over 250...

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 * 1) Jujiggum
 * 2) *Needs a BTS
 * 3) **Added.--''' Bonslywizard Trade Federation Symbol.jpg( Send a transmission...It's perfectly legal! ) 20:14, August 14, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Italicization. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 20:20, August 14, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) *Could easily use a P&T
 * 6) **Added.--''' Bonslywizard Trade Federation Symbol.jpg( Send a transmission...It's perfectly legal! ) 20:14, August 14, 2010 (UTC)
 * 7) ***You could definitely add more&mdash;judging by the lead quote alone, he was apparently confident in his ability to defeat the Jedi. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 20:20, August 14, 2010 (UTC)
 * 8) *Is this as detailed as you could get? Judging from the quote, it sounds like there might be some more details from the source about Panith that you could put in there. Make sure you are as thorough as possible.
 * 9) **I'll try, but I don't know how much I can do, considering how little he appears...--''' Bonslywizard Trade Federation Symbol.jpg( Send a transmission...It's perfectly legal! ) 20:14, August 14, 2010 (UTC)
 * 10) ***Why don't you mention anything about Dooku cutting off his funds in the body? Why did Dooku cut off his funds? Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 20:20, August 14, 2010 (UTC)
 * 11) * Jonjedigrandmaster ( Talk ) 05:01, August 14, 2010 (UTC)

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Stewjon

 * Nominated by: Vandar Tokare42 (Talk to the hand) 22:48, August 14, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: My first nom, could be interesting...

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 * 1) There's a flashback to Obi-Wan's homeworld in Jedi Apprentice: The Hidden Past, with some info. - Lord Hydronium 22:56, August 14, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) *Also, the main quote is OOU, so it should be in the BTS. - Lord Hydronium 22:57, August 14, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) **These both have been addressed now. --Vandar Tokare42 (Talk to the hand) 23:53, August 14, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Bit of a discrepancy between the Appearances calling it a possible appearance, and the body text identifying it definitely as that world. Go one way or the other on that; also, either way the appearance should have Flash. And rather than "Obi-Wan may have visited", you can say it definitively with this. - Lord Hydronium 02:49, August 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) ****How about now? --Vandar Tokare42 (Talk to the hand) 03:14, August 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * 6) I'd like to see you rearrange this article somewhat. Please begin by saying it was a planet, and describing the terrain, then progress to mentioning it was home to the Kenobi family. Then, continue to say Obi-Wan was taken from there for training but that he returned later. My reasoning for this is to group general information about the planet first -- terrain, etc -- followed by information on its inhabitants. You could also provide a bit more context on Kenobi being taken for Jedi training. --Eyrezer 03:47, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

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Unidentified Yoberra species

 * Nominated by: --Eyrezer 03:16, August 15, 2010 (UTC)
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Boosqueak

 * Nominated by: Eyrezer 03:30, August 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: A menagerie of creatures from the Atrivis sector

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Ratbat

 * Nominated by: Eyrezer 03:30, August 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: A menagerie of creatures from the Atrivis sector

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Scorpion slug

 * Nominated by: Eyrezer 03:30, August 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: A menagerie of creatures from the Atrivis sector

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Virevol

 * Nominated by: Eyrezer 03:30, August 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: A menagerie of creatures from the Atrivis sector

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