Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Battle of the TIE Fighter Construction Facility (second nomination)


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Battle of the TIE Fighter Construction Facility

 * Nominated by: SuperFlash101
 * Nomination comments: All previous issues from last nomination appear to be fixed. No tags and clear sources.

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Support

Object
 * 1) Mauser
 * 2) *I suppose you've checked the novel and the comic for any unique content?
 * 3) **That I'll have to dig up on.
 * 4) *Intro should be expanded.
 * 5) **I'll expand the intro as far as I can.
 * 6) *Context on why was Kota attacking Imperial targets.
 * 7) **I'll look up and add Kota's reasons behind the attack
 * 8) *More context on Kota and Vader.
 * 9) **Same with Vader
 * 10) *Context on Starkiller is only on the intro, should be in the body as well.
 * 11) **Where exactly do you want Starkiller added at?
 * 12) ***First time he is mentined in the body of the article (not counting the intro section).
 * 13) *Context on Juno and Rogue Shadow.
 * 14) **What type of addition on Juno and the ship and where?
 * 15) ***Who/what were they and what were they doing there.
 * 16) *Kota believed that Galen had a far greater calling, than just as Darth Vader's servant. Since you get to that part of the dialogue again later, I think it's safe to drop it.
 * 17) **Where's that line? I'll remove it.
 * 18) *Expand the aftermath section. Especially the lightsaber part and Galen's lie to Vader.
 * 19) ** Will do. Done
 * 20) ***Do not strike other user's objections - it is always up to the reviewers themselves. Still no information about the fact that Galen lied to Vader about Kota's death.
 * 21) *Anything else notable concerning game's demo? Like the RC-1138's helmet as an easter egg?
 * 22) **Don't know about that.
 * 23) ***Check the demo for anything that differs from the final game.
 * 24) *Source BTS.
 * 25) **Will do.
 * 26) *That's all for now.  Mauser  Comlink 16:19, 24 May 2009 (UTC)
 * 27) **Okay. — Excelsior,   The Flash  - ( Talk to me, talk to me, talk to me bay-bay! ) 16:28, 24 May 2009 (UTC)
 * 28) ***In the future: respond to objections after you've made respective fixes.  Mauser  Comlink 16:36, 24 May 2009 (UTC)

Comments

Vote to remove nomination (AC only)

 * 1) By nominator's request, as he believes that the objections will take too long to address for the article to remain a GAN.  CC7567  (talk) 20:23, 25 May 2009 (UTC)
 * 2)  Grunny  ( Talk ) 06:10, 26 May 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) Who am I to argue with that? Toprawa and Ralltiir 06:12, 26 May 2009 (UTC)