Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Green Squadron pilot (Battle of Endor)


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Green Squadron pilot (Battle of Endor)

 * Nominated by: Graestan ( Talk ) 17:30, 26 January 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: "Copy, Gold Leader!" Graestan ( Talk ) 17:30, 26 January 2009 (UTC)

(5 Inqs/1 Users/6 Total)
Support
 * 1) If only the power of the AgriCorps worked here... Grand Moff Tranner [[Image:Imperial Department of Military Research.svg|20px]] (Comlink) 20:52, 26 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) Green Tentacle (Talk) 21:08, 26 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) --Eyrezer 21:25, 26 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) -- Cavalier One [[Image:FarStar Logo.jpg|20px]]( Squadron channel ) 10:22, 27 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) Toprawa and Ralltiir 20:57, 27 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 6) Bah, my vote edit conflicted the other day, apparently. &mdash;  Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 23:07, 28 January 2009 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) Under "Personality and traits" is the following phrase: "the Green Group pilot complied". Is there a reason for saying "Group"? If not, then I think it needs to be changed to "Squadron" to be consistent with the rest of the article. Otherwise it is a very well-written article. Master JonathanJedi Council Chambers 04:08, 28 January 2009 (UTC)
 * Eh, I was just trying to go more with the movie, which never mentions squadrons at all and instead calls the fighter units "group." But I've changed the instances over to "squadron" as you've asked. Graestan ( Talk ) 23:09, 28 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) **As long as it's consistent - that's what counts. Good job overall. Master JonathanJedi Council Chambers 23:13, 28 January 2009 (UTC)

Comments


 * Cracked 1K words. This guy ain't Jake Farrell, for the last time. All sources have been researched. Graestan ( Talk ) 17:30, 26 January 2009 (UTC)