Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Swift Return


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Swift Return

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 18:27, August 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Part One...

(2 ECs/1 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) &mdash; 20:20, August 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) See my comment below. -- 1358  (Talk) 12:59, August 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3)  SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 14:35, August 30, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Only once in a lifetime
 * 2) *I'm by no means an expert at TCW, so bear with me&hellip;
 * 3) * The Swift Return first appeared, also only as a compure readout, in Cat and Mouse&hellip; First off, do you mean "computer" when you say compure readout? Second, could you reword slightly?&mdash; 21:28, August 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) **Fixed.
 * 5) *That's all I have.&mdash; 21:28, August 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * 6) **Thanks.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 10:36, August 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * 7) Mention in the bts that its name was given in aurebesh in the episode, and that the episode guide simply confirmed the name in English.  SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 23:23, August 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * 8) *Mentioned. Thank you.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 12:58, August 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * 9) Swift Xd
 * 10) * Novelization should not be italicized (references).
 * 11) **Ugh, I hate that reference. Fixed.
 * 12) * Why do you have [1][3] in the intro? It looks like the episode guide ([3]) would suffice.
 * 13) **Meh. Fixed.
 * 14) *-- 1358  (Talk) 11:02, August 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * 15) **Thank you.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 12:58, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

Comments
 * One thing: Airdate for Cat and Mouse? -- 1358  (Talk) 12:59, August 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * Meh. Not really important for the article, but if you insist on it please let me know and I add it.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 13:54, August 30, 2010 (UTC)