Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Dice Ibegon


 * ''The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a featured article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.

(5 Inq/2 User/7 Total)
Support
 * 1) -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 23:03, 5 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) Whippersnapper. Thefourdotelipsis 00:55, 6 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) &mdash;Silly Dan (talk) 16:35, 6 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) As usual, another quality, well-written article from Acky. Toprawa and Ralltiir 06:09, 10 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) Interesting nom, well-written as well.  Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 03:59, 13 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 6) --  Darth Culator  (Talk) 14:14, 13 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 7) Some minor corrections, otherwise a cleanly written article :)  Greyman  http://images.wikia.com/central/images/9/9c/Jan.png ( Talk ) 00:39, 14 April 2008 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) Toprawa:
 * 2) * The intro states that their Force ghosts stayed on Endor for eternity, but the body makes no mention of this eternal state. My objection, therefore, lies in unsourced intro material. Please add a little bit to the body and source
 * 3) **Added a bit to the bio; thanks for pointing that out. :-)
 * 4) * I would still like to see a little bit more added to the P&T describing her connection with the Force and how it allowed her to haunt Sivrak's dreams for a year. Additionally, the story describes her as having purple blood at the Battle of Hoth, IIRC. That could be thrown in there someplace, too.
 * 5) **I've added a bit about the Force stuff to the P&T, and have added a mention of her purple blood. However, I'm not sure it's really necessary, and I'd be happy enough to remove it. Rest assured, when I get around the writing the Florn Lamproid article I will add it in there, also. :-)
 * 6) ***You're right. The purple blood isn't all that important, and has more to do with the species. Do you what you will with that. Toprawa and Ralltiir 06:09, 10 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 7) * I've added a source to the list, which kind of makes the last portion of your BTS lacking/incorrect. Please modify.
 * 8) **Modified.
 * 9) * Also, I can't remember if this was the character we were discussing for a possible BTM appearance, but I'll see if I can't find here in there for ya. Toprawa and Ralltiir 17:35, 9 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 10) **I believe the character may have been Myo, though I'd say Ibegon has an entry or at least a mention in Sivrak's. If you do find something, I'll be happy to add it in. :-) Thanks for the review. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 21:06, 9 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 11) From the desk of Atarumaster88
 * 12) * Change the name of "Reliving the past" please; it doesn't seem to be an apt description on Dice's article. It would be, however, on Sivrak's article. I suggest something like the generic "Legacy" section or perhaps "Postmortem appearances".
 * 13) **Changed to "Legacy." -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 18:36, 11 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 14) * If you're going to discuss the Force time-shifting thing in P&T, then the Force ghost thing needs a mention as well.
 * 15) **Added a mention. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 18:36, 11 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 16) *Have a Super Terrific Friendly Un-frustrating day. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 18:26, 11 April 2008 (UTC)

Comments

'''Approved by Inquisitorius 17:56, 14 April 2008 (UTC)
 * The "Reliving the past" section was quite tricky, so I'm open to suggestion on it. :-) -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 23:03, 5 April 2008 (UTC)
 * I wonder if there should be some IU mention of her brief encounter with Ketwol. &mdash;Silly Dan (talk) 16:35, 6 April 2008 (UTC)
 * Added a mention. :-) -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 17:01, 6 April 2008 (UTC)