Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Battle of the City of Bone


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 * 1) Cull Tremayne 01:56, 20 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 2)  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  22:52, 20 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) --  Darth Culator  (Talk) 04:50, 25 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) Thefourdotelipsis 00:06, 26 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) Toprawa and Ralltiir 16:47, 26 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 6) --Eyrezer 03:32, 27 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 1) From the Merciless Hammer of Toprawa:
 * 2) * Can we get something in the "Next" battle field above the infobox?
 * 3) **Sadly this battle isn't mentioned in the NEC, so it's hard to place. It should be either some battle from SotE or a battle on Iskalon. Either would be OR I'm guessing, so it might be better to just leave it blank. Cull Tremayne 02:09, 26 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) ***That's fine.
 * 5) * Please reword to avoid ending both clauses with the same word: "Many of the Mandalorian slaves decided to join Shysa's strike force, bolstering their forces"
 * 6) **First "force" changed to "team". Hopefully that reads a little better.
 * 7) ***Perfect.
 * 8) *Otherwise clean. Good job. Toprawa and Ralltiir 21:24, 25 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 9) **Thanks for the review sir. Cull Tremayne 02:09, 26 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 10) ***My pleasure. Glad to help. Toprawa and Ralltiir 16:47, 26 April 2008 (UTC)