User talk:Master Jonathan

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I am not currently accepting copy-edit requests for articles containing significant information from the following sources, as I am currently reading them or planning on reading them in the near future and would like to avoid spoilers:

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Oron Jaeger
Happy New Years, Jon! Could you perform a copy-edit and review for him, please? Thanks.&mdash; 20:02, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

Done. Objection:
 * "He eventually rose to the rank of general and also became the commander of the 501st Legion of stormtroopers, an elite squadron whose history dated back to the Clone Wars, a pan-galactic conflict that occurred more than a century prior to the Sith–Imperial War.": Is the last part of the sentence really necessary here? For one, the Clone Wars is something that pretty much everyone should know what they are and thus shouldn't need context. Two, you're contextifying context, and I seem to recall seeing something on FAN or GAN a while back that that wasn't necessary, though I could be mistaken. Unless you have a reason for it, I would recommend cutting everything after "Clone Wars", possibly keeping "more than a century prior".
 * Please try it.&mdash; 16:26, January 6, 2011 (UTC)

And that's it. Currently sits at 1,131 words. Let me know if you have any questions.  Master Jonathan  ( Jedi Council Chambers ) 20:45, January 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * Thanks, this'll be my first article on an Imperial.&mdash; 16:26, January 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * I'll have Ethan Adare for you soon.&mdash; 16:28, January 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * Looks good now.  Master Jonathan New Jedi Order.svg ( Jedi Council Chambers ) 17:41, January 6, 2011 (UTC)

Insider
Thanks for letting me know, Jonathan. I don't read the Insider anymore and did not know it had two numbers.  JangFett  (Talk) 17:52, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

Ethan Adare
Hey Jon, could you please perform a copy-edit & review for the article? Thanks in advance, think it's gonna be a GA, though.&mdash; 03:43, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

Done. Objections:
 * Context for the Imperial Mission is needed in both the intro and the bio.
 * "Most Imperial missionaries dedicated their lives to bringing peace and assistance to the desolate planets of the galaxy. Members of the Imperial Mission also believed that the Empire's doctrine of order and obedience would lead to the end of conflict, and they served on a voluntary basis.": Do we know for sure that these things are true about Ethan Adare specifically? If so, please reword it to say so; if not, then this should probably be removed.
 * Please try both.&mdash; 01:46, January 14, 2011 (UTC)

Otherwise, nice job. Let me know if you have any questions.  Master Jonathan  ( Jedi Council Chambers ) 21:43, January 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * Thanks very much, Jon.&mdash; 01:46, January 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * No problem. Good to go at ~658 words.  Master Jonathan New Jedi Order.svg ( Jedi Council Chambers ) 01:48, January 14, 2011 (UTC)

Cats
Thanks for getting the archive cats. I knew I was forgetting something. Toprawa and Ralltiir 19:54, January 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * No problem. :)  Master Jonathan New Jedi Order.svg ( Jedi Council Chambers ) 19:58, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

Rockhead Doctor
Hello my friend,

Your turn. Can you run through Thalleus Tharn when you get a chance please? Same terms as usual, thanks in advance. —Tommy 9281 18:18, January 25, 2011 (UTC)


 * Done. Let me know if you have any questions.  Master Jonathan New Jedi Order.svg ( Jedi Council Chambers ) 18:51, January 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * Thank you. Kodashi viper next please, when you have a moment. Thanks again, —Tommy 9281 19:33, January 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * Done as well.  Master Jonathan New Jedi Order.svg ( Jedi Council Chambers ) 05:40, January 26, 2011 (UTC)

KOTOR 23: Slyssk
Hey MJ, apparently there's some info/mention of Slyssk in The Adjudicator Special Report: The Colonies (KOTOR #23). I've tried my usual methods of getting info and they failed so I came to you. Please could you have a look at some point and tell me what info there is pertaining to him in there, if any? Thanks in advance, NAYAYEN &mdash;it appears to be a frammistat 21:32, February 1, 2011 (UTC)


 * He's mentioned in a list of hot bounties. Here's the info:


 * The actual image in #23 is kind of a sepia tone version of the Handbook image I used here. Let me know if you have any questions.  Master Jonathan  (Council Chambers)  Tuesday, February 1, 2011, 23:19 UTC
 * No, the different image doesn't matter. That's great, thanks! NAYAYEN &mdash;it appears to be a frammistat 09:36, February 2, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks
For catching that unclosed markup on Window, I appreciate it :) --Darth Zaiger 03:54, February 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * No problem.  Master Jonathan  (Council Chambers)  Saturday, February 5, 2011, 03:57 UTC

Anakin image
Hi there. I see you reverted two images I uploaded. For the shot of Vader and Anakin, fair enough, the one I uploaded was totally different and should have a different name. I just thought the lightsabers looked really weird in the one that was there. However, I do think my image of Anakin's force ghost was preferable. Your reasoning for reverting was that the original version is brighter and higher-resolution; however, I feel that, quite frankly, the original version is very creepy and in no way looks like someone who has just been "redeemed". It looks like Anakin is deciding who he wants to decapitate. Just my two cents :-) --The Traveller 08:26, February 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * I really don't have a preference between the two as far as which one is "less creepy". However, whatever pose you select, it needs to be bright enough that readers can easily see Anakin's features, especially at reduced size in articles; I felt that your version wasn't bright enough for this and that it was a little difficult to make out his features in an article. Also, it's widely considered a major no-no to upload a new version of a file with significantly reduced resolution like you did. You should get the image from an HD version of the film; if you don't know how to or can't do that, try contacting Darth Culator. If you can take care of the brightness and resolution issues, then I would have no objection to you re-uploading your version, though that doesn't mean someone else won't take objection to it. :)  Master Jonathan  (Council Chambers)  Saturday, February 12, 2011, 19:15 UTC

Timestamp
Hi! How did you get your timestamp to not use the default "21:30, February 24, 2011 (UTC)"? Sorry if I sound rude just barging over here and asking a random question, it's just that I have been trying to find the link on how to do that like forever!

&loz; ANR0328  &loz; 21:30, February 24, 2011 (UTC)


 * The timestamp in my signature is manually built in to my signature using the #time ParserFunction, which allows you to format a date and time just about any way you want to. You can see the code for my signature here. On a side note, please bring your signature in line with our signature policy, which requires signature templates to be substituted, as I have done to your signature above.  Master Jonathan  (Council Chambers)  Thursday, February 24, 2011, 22:58 UTC


 * Thank you! This really helped me! : )


 * ANR0328 &diams; 2/25/11 - 01:20 (UTC)


 * P.S. What is wrong with my sig? Please tell me if I am violating any rules! : (