User talk:Olioster

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Some Galaxies expertise is needed
Hey Olioster, how's it going? I need someone with some more Galaxies expertise than I currently possess in order to do a project of mine. Empire Day festivities mainly come from Galaxies so I was wondering if you could look at the info that's currently in the article and tell me if any of it is inaccurate, or let me know what's missing. And if you need any help with anything, I'd be more than happy to assist. :) Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 23:06, March 10, 2011 (UTC)

Re: Cookie
Haha hey Oli, thanks for the cookie! And give yourself some credit; you listened to the critique and made yourself better for it. Hope to see more status articles from you. :) Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 15:35, March 23, 2011 (UTC)

Re: armor
Sorry for the inconvenience, I would suggest using the Guide to the Grand Army of the Republic from Star Wars Insider 84. I hope that clears things up for you. Kilson Likes PIE ( The Bakery ) 21:48, April 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re:Vakasi
Sure, I'm happy to assist. I did a copy-edit and this is what I found
 * I already fixed this, but you had a redirect for Rage of the Wookiees in the Appearances list. You should make special note of this for your future noms.
 * In the History section, "However, a spacer was given one of these fighters after 'they assisted the Civilian Protection Guild on the planet Kashyyyk with the recapture of a CR90 corvette in 1.5 ABY." I believe you are trying to refer to a single spacer here. If so, please correct the sentence.
 * The one sentence in the Role section is a bit awkward. I would suggest changing it around to make it read smoother.
 * I would refer to the spacer in the History section as being a freelancer.
 * That's all I have. Kilson Likes PIE ( The Bakery ) 21:01, April 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * Sorry, I was unaware of this. Thanks for telling me. When you nom the article, I'll support. Kilson ( Let's have a chat ) 10:41, April 13, 2011 (UTC)

Re: Lobarorr
OK, this is what I found:
 * In the intro, "...jealous of Takook's spear, a Kashyyyk bladestick that belonged to his father Chatook." I would replace his with Takook's to make the sentence clearer.
 * I would mention in the intro that the spacer was "hired by a concerned Chatook" or something similar.
 * I don't believe you need the last sentence of the intro, as it really deals more with Chatook that Lobarorr, but it's up to you.
 * "...including that they were heading towards the Rryatt Trail." Elaborate on "they" to make the sentence clearer.
 * "During his search, the spacer..." I think you know what's wrong here.
 * "Takook had recorded it before his death and in it, he pleaded with whomever found it to find Lobarorr and retrieve his father's spear. Takook felt that letting Lobarorr keep it would be a dishonor to him." You can probably combine these two sentences to make it read smoother.
 * "Chatook asked the spacer to leave him to his despair, which they did." Once again, a little unnecessary, but up to you.
 * And that's all I have. After you correct these, I'll support the article when you nom it. As usual, nice job. Kilson ( Let's have a chat ) 10:59, April 22, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks
Hey. I'm kinda new hear and want to thank you for pointing out my mistake on editing a page.

Jurgan Kalta's carbine
Hello, could you see what information there is on Jurgan Kalta's carbine in the prima official game guide for the Star Wars: Knights of the Old Republic video game? Thank you.--Exiledjedi 15:40, May 3, 2011 (UTC)

Could you also see what information there is on Jurgan Kalta's assault rifle as well? Thanks again.--Exiledjedi 16:14, May 3, 2011 (UTC)