Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Female Professional Greenputt Tour


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Female Professional Greenputt Tour

 * Nominated by: &mdash; Master Jonathan New Jedi Order.svg ( Jedi Council Chambers ) 02:33, June 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Still the basics.

(1 GCs/3 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1) --Skippy Farlstendoiro 13:43, June 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 05:50, June 18, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) Imperialles 16:48, June 19, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4)  Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 19:41, June 20, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) I don't think that sentence about presumably female league is necessary. Presumably is to be avoided whenever possible; I'm sure the reader doesn't need that to written down to draw that conclusion anyway. If you were to do this, you'd also have to say it was likely for professionals too. This goes for the other noms as well.  SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 04:24, June 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * OK, that line has been removed from all except the non-sentient tour, where I left it in because I feel it's necessary to explain the error of the Taurills actually being sentient. &mdash; Master Jonathan New Jedi Order.svg ( Jedi Council Chambers ) 02:12, June 18, 2010 (UTC)

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