Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Alliance to Restore the Republic communications center (Thyferra)


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Alliance to Restore the Republic communications center (Thyferra)

 * Nominated by: &mdash;TK-999 Era-imp.png(Rise of the Empire) 17:45, July 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: A small structure with a long name.

(2 ECs/2 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1) Here in New Hampshire, we have "Newhampshirehelpwanted.com: Long name, amazing results." Their commercials annoy me, but it's all I could think about when I saw the comment. :P&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 21:29, July 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *XD TK999 —[Discuss] 09:30, July 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  22:20, July 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4)  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 17:17, July 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) Menkooroo 14:14, July 12, 2011 (UTC)

Object Comments
 * 1) Lee attacks
 * 2) * Is it really said that it was built by the Imperials? I think it was mentioned, but I'm not sure.
 * 3) **The text entry you get by hovering your mouse over it says "Abandoned Empire Comm Array".&mdash;TK-999 Era-imp.png(Rise of the Empire) 20:06, July 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) * Please give more context about your last sentence in the Bts. That means explain how it depends on the perfomance on the player.
 * 5) **Done.&mdash;TK-999 Era-imp.png(Rise of the Empire) 20:06, July 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) *Otherwise nice work.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 17:57, July 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) **Thanks for the review!&mdash;TK-999 Era-imp.png(Rise of the Empire) 20:06, July 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) One really tiny thing --- can you give an idea of the timeframe earlier in the article? Something like, "was constructed before 0 BBY..." ? I think it'd be fine as it is without the gamemechanics template, but I'd like to see a date given in the "definitely canon" part of the article. Menkooroo 13:22, July 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) *Unfortunately, we don't know the age of the array. It might have been constructed during the Imperial period or whatever and abandoned later. We only know that it was first sighted around 0 BBY. TK999 —[Discuss] 13:24, July 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) **Something like "constructed before 0 BBY" or "before the Assault on Thyferra, which occurred in 0 BBY" would do the trick. There's definitely something that can be definitively said about the timeline. Menkooroo 13:44, July 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) ***Good idea. Added, and thanks for the review! TK999 —[Discuss] 13:57, July 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 12) ****Looks good. And crap, sorry, one more thing: If only the outcome&mdash;and not the existence of the invasion&mdash;depends on the player's choices, then should everything up to "led by a field commander" be before the game mechanics template? Menkooroo 14:06, July 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 13) *****True. Moved. TK999 —[Discuss] 14:12, July 12, 2011 (UTC)