Wookieepedia:Inq/Redux page

 The Inquisitorius redux page is an active extension of Inquisitorius meetings, wherein Featured articles that have been updated, rewritten, or otherwise overhauled so significantly as to require a review of a section or of the entire article are placed. Articles that are placed here will be given reviews by Inquisitorius members, and when the required number of votes in favor of the article being passed are acquried, the article will be removed from the redux page and will retain its Featured status.

How the redux page works:


 * 1) During Inquisitorius meetings, articles that have recently received updates or overhauls so significant as to require a review of the new material will be voted on as "reduxed," tagged with the FA redux template, and placed on this page. Members of the Inquisitorius will then review the article or the section(s) of the article as necessary.
 * 2) Once an article has achieved the required number of supporting Inquisitorius votes and has no outstanding objections, it will be removed from the redux page and archived, and will keep its status as a Featured article. A nomination will be considered successful once it has achieved three supporting Inquisitorius votes with no outstanding objections. As an active extension of Inquisitorius meetings, only Inquisitorius votes will be counted.
 * 3) Any article that has outstanding objections for three weeks will be eliminated from the redux list by the Inquisitorius, and will be stripped of its Featured status.

=Reduxed articles=

Second Battle of Borleias (Yuuzhan Vong War)

 * Redux comments: Major rewrite; full review required

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 * 1) Some starters
 * 2) *The article is quite long, so I actually think it could use some intro expansion.
 * 3) **Done. Atarumaster88  Jedi_Order.svg ( Talk page ) 03:59, February 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) *It could use a link check too; from what I've seen it looks pretty sparse at the moment.
 * 5) **Went through and added a bunch. Atarumaster88  Jedi_Order.svg ( Talk page ) 03:59, February 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) *I would place the navigation template below the external links&mdash;while the LG says succession boxes should be above the notes and references (thus above the external links), it doesn't say anything about navigation templates as far as I see. What do you think?
 * 7) **Yes, it looks better this way. Atarumaster88  Jedi_Order.svg ( Talk page ) 03:59, February 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) *Will give it a thorough review after these have been fixed. 1358  (Talk)  17:33, February 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) Article requires confirmation for its name. The NEC does call it the "Battle of Borleias," but the article needs to somehow reflect that.  CC7567  (talk) 23:25, February 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) *There's no official source for calling it "Second Battle of Borleias (Yuuzhan Vong War)" or even Second Battle of Borleias. Wookieepedia came up with that title to distinguish it from the first and second battles of Borleias in the GCW and the first battle for Borleias in the YVW. I'm not sure what you want here . . . we can move it to Battle of Borleias since it's canonically called that, but that'll mean fixing a whole bunch of disambiguation pages and redirects. If that's what you're looking for, let me know. Atarumaster88  Jedi_Order.svg ( Talk page ) 03:59, February 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) **Why don't you just move it to Battle of Borleias (Yuuzhan Vong War), which reflects the actual canonical title? Toprawa and Ralltiir 04:30, February 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * 12) ***Moved. The only page that linked to the original Battle of Borleias (Yuuzhan Vong War) redirect was this page. Atarumaster88  Jedi_Order.svg ( Talk page ) 03:10, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

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Form V: Shien / Djem So

 * Redux comments: Major rewrite; full review required

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 * 1) Jujiggum
 * 2) *BTS needs a lot of expansion; also, the bit about the Jedi Exile could use some more detail/better explanation
 * 3) **I expanded the bit about the Jedi Exile, but I'm at a loss for what else you are looking for in the BtS. I could add the standard "Form V has appeared in these sources" but beyond that, I'm not sure what else you're looking for&mdash;do you have specific sources in mind? I'd prefer not to add random fluff to it just to make it longer, so I'll wait for feedback on this one.
 * 4) ***I think you could at least explain its appearance as retcons in Eps II, V, and VI. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 20:56, February 26, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) *Seems to me like there is plenty of redundant information in the Practitioners section; I cut down some of it in my copy-edit, but even more could probably be removed.
 * 6) * The fact that it's called "The Way of the Kray Dragon" needs to be mentioned somewhere in the main body.
 * 7) **Done. Atarumaster88  Jedi_Order.svg ( Talk page ) 03:17, February 26, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) * A few things for the affiliation section of the infobox: shouldn't the Jensaarai be mentioned there? Also, the "New Jedi Order" is covered by the overall implication of "Jedi". Either specify which Orders used the Form (i.e. Jedi Order, New Jedi Order, and then list all of the various Sith organizations which used it) or else just stick with the simple "Jedi," "Sith," and "Jensaarai"
 * 9) **Fixed that. Atarumaster88  Jedi_Order.svg ( Talk page ) 03:17, February 26, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) *I'll give it another look-over once these are fixed. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 19:06, February 19, 2011 (UTC)

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