Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Msqito


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Msqito

 * Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 23:12, December 21, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: These bugs all have awful names...

(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1) Trip391 (talk) 00:30, December 22, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 15:28, December 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) Supreme Emperor (talk) 04:17, December 27, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  18:30, December 30, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Trip
 * 2) * The second part of the second sentence isn't working for me: "a species whose on average stood at 1.8 meters tall." Trip391 (talk) 00:21, December 22, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) **Changed it a little, whose should of been who. Ayrehead02 (talk) 00:26, December 22, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) ***I feel "on average" could go in commas, but otherwise perfect. Trip391 (talk) 00:30, December 22, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) 501st
 * 6) * 203 words! Needs an intro :) 501st  dogma ( talk ) 00:37, December 22, 2013 (UTC)
 * 7) **I feel like I should probably learn to word count articles more often... Ayrehead02 (talk) 00:49, December 22, 2013 (UTC)
 * 8) * "The insects had a relatively large wingspan and were of an equal length to the height of an adult Human..." It's a bit unclear here whether one wing is as tall as a Human, or the wingspan was as tall as a Human. Or are they lengthwise as large as a Human? If it is one of the former two options, I'm pretty sure you cannot use 1.8 meters as the length in the infobox, as that should be the head-to-tail length.
 * 9) **Its their body length, which I think is now clearer. Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:17, December 22, 2013 (UTC)
 * 10) * In your Bio section, you do not specifically state that the msqito's adult habitat is the forest.
 * 11) **Added. Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:17, December 22, 2013 (UTC)
 * 12) * You should move the part about them laying their eggs and flocking in the Bio to a separate section dubbed Behavior. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 15:52, December 22, 2013 (UTC)
 * 13) **Done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:17, December 22, 2013 (UTC)
 * 14) Exiled Jedi
 * 15) * The intro says the eggs were laid in water, while the body says near water. Which is correct? -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  06:46, December 27, 2013 (UTC)
 * 16) **Near, fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:58, December 27, 2013 (UTC)

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