Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Retwin


 * ''The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.

Retwin

 * Nominated by: Toprawa and Ralltiir 22:20, November 25, 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Executor ESB character. That cheeky fellow who turns to look at Vader at the end of the film.

(4 ACs/2 Users/6 Total)
Support
 * 1) Could we have a picture of Retwin turning to gaze Vader? (Suggestion, not objection) --Skippy Farlstendoiro 08:06, November 26, 2009 (UTC)
 * 2)  Grunny  ( Talk ) 10:15, November 26, 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 10:36, November 26, 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 16:16, November 26, 2009 (UTC)
 * 5)  CC7567  (talk) 20:42, November 26, 2009 (UTC)
 * 6) Nice work.  Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 03:04, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) One minor objection: In the intro, the "after" and "following" in the same sentence make the chronology confusing: "After serving in Ralltiir's defense forces as an Imperial sympathizer, Retwin joined the Empire following the Imperial subjugation of his homeworld shortly prior to the Battle of Yavin in 0 BBY." Other than that, great work.  Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 14:03, November 26, 2009 (UTC)

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