Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Skirmish on Alaris Prime


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Skirmish on Alaris Prime

 * Nominated by: Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 21:42, December 22, 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: New Sith Wars battle mentioned in Dynasty of Evil

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1) You are going to have the longest userpage in the site before long, with all those User GA templates :P Nice work. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 02:17, December 28, 2009 (UTC)
 * 2)  Grunny  ( Talk ) 06:21, December 31, 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) Kreivi Wolter 22:32, January 4, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) The boat engine makes noise!  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  00:28, January 5, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) Toprawa and Ralltiir 22:35, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) A minor one, but can you see if you can mix up one or two of the instances of "during," particularly in the Prelude section? The word is a bit over used :P. Other than that excellent work as always :).  Grunny  ( Talk ) 09:36, December 30, 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) *Addressed; thanks for the review :) Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 15:30, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

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