Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Duel on Tatooine (Imperial era)


 * ''The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a featured article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.

(5 Inqs/1 Users/6 Total)
Support
 * 1) Nominated.  Greyman  http://images.wikia.com/central/images/9/9c/Jan.png ( Talk ) 23:39, 2 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) Went through this already; take note - this is how BTS sections are to be done. Toprawa and Ralltiir 06:40, 3 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) I like the quick fixes.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 23:55, 3 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) It was good enough when I read it the first time. :P Thefourdotelipsis 23:34, 5 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) --  Darth Culator  (Talk) 21:34, 6 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 6) Just as clean as before, with the addition of an incredible BtS.  Graestan ( Talk ) 01:51, 10 April 2008 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) From the Bridge of Chack Jadson:
 * 2) * "After a brief discussion between the two Jedi, during which Hett refused to put an end to his campaign of aggression, Kenobi and Hett dueled for supremacy." I wouldn't exactly call it a duel for supremacy. That implies it was an alpha-male type thing.
 * 3) **Reworded. Greyman  http://images.wikia.com/central/images/9/9c/Jan.png ( Talk ) 23:48, 3 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) * Change the caption of th first image (right under the infobox). "Surviving Order 66" sounds strange.
 * 5) **Eh, I think is sounds fine, but I changed it for you, Chack ;) Greyman  http://images.wikia.com/central/images/9/9c/Jan.png ( Talk ) 23:48, 3 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 6) * In the last picture (bottom left) depicting is spelled wrong.
 * 7) **Corrected. Greyman  http://images.wikia.com/central/images/9/9c/Jan.png ( Talk ) 23:48, 3 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 8) * "These claims revolved around the idea that had Kenobi killed Hett following their duel, he could have saved the galaxy untold amounts of grief." Reword to avoid using "untold amounts of grief".
 * 9) **Not sure what was wrong with it, but I've reworded that part for you. Greyman  http://images.wikia.com/central/images/9/9c/Jan.png ( Talk ) 23:48, 3 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 10) *  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 23:40, 3 April 2008 (UTC)

Comments

'''Approved by Inquisitorius 12:58, 13 April 2008 (UTC)
 * An original creation of mine, from way back in the fall. I just did some expansion on it, so it's FAN time. Oh, and surprise, surprise: it's not TOTJ :P Greyman  http://images.wikia.com/central/images/9/9c/Jan.png ( Talk ) 23:39, 2 April 2008 (UTC)