Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Sio Bibble (second nomination)


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Sio Bibble

 * Nomination by: Thefourdotelipsis 10:18, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Old-school GA. Outrageously good.

(5 Inqs/1 Users/6 Total)
Support
 * 1) Treacherous bubble!  Cavalier One [[Image:FarStar Logo.jpg|20px]]( Squadron channel ) 11:24, 20 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) --Skippy Farlstendoiro 11:52, 20 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) --Eyrezer 12:06, 3 February 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) Wicked update. Yes, I used "wicked" to describe something. Cull Tremayne 03:46, 4 February 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) No complaints.  Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 16:28, 4 February 2009 (UTC)
 * 6) Good to have Fourdot Fourdotting again (that means writing FAs at an insane rate, btw).  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  01:32, 5 February 2009 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) Farlstendoiro speaking. Does anybody copy?
 * 2) * Dren Melne is repeatedly called "Melene".
 * 3) * More context in the following:
 * 4) ** taken to Camp Four for "processing." What does "processing" mean exactly? If source does not specify, what about taken to Camp Four for something the Federation called, euphemistically, "processing"
 * 5) ***Removed processing altogether. Besides, I didn't like the "Four for". :P
 * 6) ** claiming that the death toll from the occupation was reaching "catastrophic" levels The death toll of whom? Naboo people? Soldiers? Civilians? Federation people? Both? Others? Who is dying? Why?
 * 7) ***We don't even know if that's true. It could have been a fabrication at Gunray's behest, it could be in earnest...I figure the way to play it safe is to use the exact wording, and stay vague.>
 * 8) ** helping Amidala present Nass with the Globe of Peace. What's the Globe of Peace and why are they presenting it to Nass? What about: helping Amidala present Nass with the Globe of Peace as a gesture of good faith and continued relations between the Naboo and the Gungans (if that's what they did)
 * 9) ***Again, I really don't know. I figure if people want to know about that, they'll click on the link. Plus, I think people will figure out enough from the name of the object. Thefourdotelipsis 11:34, 20 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 10) *I don't usually vote FA because user votes don't hold any real value; but Sio's going to get my vote soon.--Skippy Farlstendoiro 09:51, 20 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 11) **Thanks for the review, Farl. Thefourdotelipsis 10:57, 21 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 12) Chack Attack:
 * 13) * "Bibble was disappointed with the lack of result, and did not look forward to informing Amidala about the lack of developments." Guess. Hint: you use a certain "l" word too much.
 * 14) **...look? :P
 * 15) * "considered himself a philosopher." Could "and a pacifist" be added in there too to make it a bit more, well, sensible?
 * 16) **It could be.
 * 17) * "of their eliminated communications capacity." I suggest changing this to read something like "of the comm jamming" or whatever.
 * 18) **Fixed.
 * 19) *Otherwise, sweet. Oh, and "balk", not "baulk". :P  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 00:06, 25 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 20) **I sorry. Thefourdotelipsis 02:20, 4 February 2009 (UTC)
 * 21) ***You get a pass because you're Fourdot, he of the 100+ FAs.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 01:32, 5 February 2009 (UTC)

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