Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations

 This page is for the nomination of "comprehensive articles." For a list of "comprehensive articles," see Category:Wookieepedia comprehensive articles.


 * Comprehensive article nominations history
 * Comprehensive article nominations archiving checklist

What is a "comprehensive article?"

A "comprehensive article" is an article that contains all information regarding the topic. Often, "comprehensive articles" cannot reach Featured or Good Article status due to their limited content. This process is intended to recognize articles that contain all relevant canon information, yet are still under the 250 word limit required for a Good Article. The purpose of this is twofold&mdash;firstly, to help users distinguish what is a stub, and what is merely a short article with no further relevant material to be added, and, more importantly, to highlight for the reader when they are reading something that has been judged definitely "comprehensive"&mdash;that is, a guarantee to the reader that whatever they are reading contains the sum total of all available content on that topic.

Nominations and promotions of the Comprehensive article process are overseen by a collective of users known as the "EduCorps," which is made up of the Inquisitorius, the AgriCorps, and various other experienced users who are considered qualified to adequately judge the nominated material.

Lucasfilm Ltd. and its many licensees continue to expand the Star Wars universe. Since new information might become available, it may be necessary to revoke a "comprehensive article's" status. A forum will be used to nominate articles that have fallen out-of-date. Members of the EduCorps will then post a warning template on that page, and a grace period of one week will be instituted in which the article can be improved. If there is a significant amount of new information, it is likely that once updated, the article will become eligible for Good article status, and thereby ineligible for Comprehensive article status.

READ THIS FIRST!

An article must&hellip;


 * 1) &hellip;be well-written and detailed.
 * 2) &hellip;be unbiased, non-point of view.
 * 3) &hellip;be sourced with all available sources and appearances.
 * 4) &hellip;follow the Manual of Style, Layout Guide, and all other policies on Wookieepedia. This is, of course, within reason. If a topic only has a very limited degree of content that cannot be divided up into the relevant article sections, it is not required that it follow the Layout Guide precisely. This is to be judged on a case-by-case basis.
 * 5) &hellip;following the review process, be stable, i.e., does not change significantly from day to day and is not the subject of ongoing edit wars. This does not apply to vandalism and protection or semi-protection as a result of vandalism.
 * 6) &hellip;not be tagged with any sort of improvement tags (i.e. more sources, expand, etc).
 * 7) &hellip;have no redlinks.
 * 8) &hellip;have all relevant canon information presented.
 * 9) &hellip;be completely referenced for all available material and sources. See Sourcing for more information. While this is not required for an article possessing a singular source, it is encouraged, as it provides both uniformity and a good infrastructure should the topic be referenced in any future materials.
 * 10) &hellip;have all quotes and images sourced.
 * 11) &hellip;provide at least one relevant quote on the article if available.
 * 12) &hellip;include a "Behind the scenes" section for in-universe articles.
 * 13) &hellip;counting the introduction, the article body, and "Behind the scenes" material, must not exceed 250 words in length (not including captions, quotes, or headers, etc). Any articles exceeding the limit should be taken to the Good article nominations page for consideration.
 * 14) &hellip;if the nominated article reaches 200 words or greater, the nominator must either provide an intro or draft an intro and provide a link to the revision in the nomination, showing that the intro does not elevate the article over 250 words. Exceptions can be made for articles wherein the majority of the text is in the "Behind the scenes" section.

How to nominate:


 * 1) First, nominate an article you find is worthy of comprehensive status, putting it at the bottom of the list below. Nominated articles must meet all thirteen requirements stated above.
 * 2) Add CAnom at the top of the article you are nominating.
 * 3) Be sure to place sign in the "Nominated by" line when the nomination is posted for voting.
 * 4) Others will object to the nomination if they disagree that the article is good enough; they will then supply reasons for doing so, and ways to improve the article in accordance with the established rules.
 * 5) Nominators and supporters will adjust the article until the objectors (with reasonable objections) are satisfied. Objectors may also make alterations&mdash;if there is any reason for contention on a given point, it should be settled in a civil manner in the nomination field itself.
 * 6) Users may not vote on their own articles.
 * 7) There is no limit to the amount of nominations a given user can submit at any given time.

How to vote:


 * 1) Before doing anything, be sure to read the article completely, keeping a sharp eye out for mistakes.
 * 2) Afterward, compare the article to the criteria listed above, and then either support or object the article's nomination.
 * 3) *If you object, please supply concrete reasons for doing so, and how it can be improved.
 * 4) As stated above, any objections will be looked upon by the nominator, supporters, and anyone willing to improve the article, and action will be taken to please the objectors. Do not strike other users' objections; it is up to the objector to review the changes and strike if they are satisfied.
 * 5) There are several ways in which an article can receive the required number of votes. Within a 48-hour period of nomination, only EduCorps votes will count towards the total, although anyone may choose to vote in that window. If two members of the EduCorps support a nomination in that window, and there are no outstanding objections, the article can be considered a "Comprehensive article" and be tagged with the template 48 hours after the initial nomination.  The talk page will also be tagged with the CA template. When the 48 hours are up, any user's votes will contribute towards the total. If one EduCorps member has voted for an article after a week, three regular votes will be required. After the 48 hour period, an article can still also pass with just two EduCorps votes.
 * 6) Once a nomination is successful, it will be placed on the Comprehensive article list. Instructions on how to archive nominations, successful or otherwise, can be found here. Anyone can archive a nomination&mdash;just make sure it has the correct number of votes, has been nominated for at least a week (or 48 hours if there are two EC votes), and that there are absolutely no outstanding objections. If you are not sure how to do this, just ask, and someone will likely be more than willing to help you. Also, if you think you can slip one past us, think again&mdash;someone is always watching you.

All nominations will be considered idle and are subject to instantaneous removal by EduCorps members if objections are not addressed, or at least not answered, after a period of 1 week.

Please remember to archive your nomination beforehand if you plan on taking it to the Good Article Nominations page.

DRN-38

 * Nominated by:  Commander Code-8  To say hi, press 42 02:16, January 18, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Gee, haven't written anything CANs in a while.

(1 ECs/0 Users/1 Total)
Support
 * 1) Good work.  501st  dogma ( talk ) 13:00, January 19, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * I might be wrong but isn't this droid one of the possible Trade Federation team names in the skirmish mode? Might be worth mentioning.
 * 3) **Done.  Commander Code-8  G'day, mate 08:33, January 23, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Wait a minute, I think the one in skirmish mode is DRN-592, unless they are both in there.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  13:31, January 23, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) ****Damn, you're right. Reverted.  Commander Code-8  G'day, mate 10:45, January 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * 6) * The way you say "moon of Alaris Prime" makes it hard to tell if the moon is Alaris Prime or if Alaris Prime has a moon. Please reword.
 * 7) **Done.  Commander Code-8  G'day, mate 08:33, January 23, 2013 (UTC)
 * 8) *Perhaps an article for the base?-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  03:33, January 23, 2013 (UTC)
 * 9) **I haven't created any base articles from GB aside from the first one, cause I'm not sure whether they're supposed to be the same base or different ones. They do still need creation, I think, I'll do the one for this tomorrow.  Commander Code-8  G'day, mate 08:33, January 23, 2013 (UTC)
 * 10) Winterz
 * 11) *Could you just give a sentence about the aftermath (of the battle)? Winterz (talk) 14:37, January 25, 2013 (UTC)
 * 12) Supreme Emperor
 * 13) *Just one small thing, in the characteristics you say "DRN-38 given command", could you change this to "DRN-38 was given command". Otherwise, nice work. Supreme Emperor (talk) 04:01, January 28, 2013 (UTC)

Comments
 * This is just a quick one before I go away for the weekend, so I won't be answering any objections 'till I get back.  Commander Code-8  To say hi, press 42 02:16, January 18, 2013 (UTC)

Salara

 * Nominated by: Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 18:04, January 19, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: A useless lady from Carrick Station

(1 ECs/0 Users/1 Total)
Support
 * 1)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 13:56, January 20, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Supreme Emperor
 * 2) *One quick question, can anything be said about the rewards she gives? Thanks, Supreme Emperor (talk) 04:05, January 28, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Air Alderaan StarSpeeder 1000

 * Nominated by:  Stake black   msg 19:12, January 21, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Star Tours avalanche. Huge thanks to Lelal, who came up with the earlier versions of the template used for these StarSpeeder 1000 articles. Note: All these StarSpeeder 1000 articles are pretty much the same, with few minor changes. If you express support for one of them, kindly consider supporting the other ones as well if no objections are made.

(1 ECs/3 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Commander Code-8  G'day, mate 00:14, January 23, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 21:28, January 23, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) Winterz (talk) 14:37, January 25, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) Supreme Emperor (talk) 04:07, January 28, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Could you give us some kind of timeframe?  501st  dogma ( talk ) 01:06, January 22, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) *I knew there was something missing. Thanks for the heads up. I added a timeframe, but I'm afraid that's as specific as it gets.  Stake black   msg 02:08, January 22, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) **Do we know that it did not fly during the Empire's time? 501st  dogma ( talk ) 22:33, January 22, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) ***No, but the current wording doesn't exclude this possibility, I think.  Stake black   msg 22:44, January 22, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) ****The Empire existed after the Republic's time, so I think it doesn't work. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 23:15, January 22, 2013 (UTC)
 * 6) *****How would you have put it? It seems "Rise of the Empire era" is OOU, so that'd be ruled out.  Stake black   msg 23:18, January 22, 2013 (UTC)
 * 7) ******How about prior to 0 BBY? 501st  dogma ( talk ) 02:52, January 23, 2013 (UTC)
 * 8) *******Done. I've also applied the relevant changes to the other StarSpeeder articles.  Stake black   msg 09:17, January 23, 2013 (UTC)
 * 9) CC-8
 * 10) * Sorry to be picky, but the Bts part about the confirmation of it being a Star Tours model reads more to me like a reference description rather than a part of an article. Do you think you could word it any differently? The same obviously goes for all of the other articles.  Commander Code-8  G'day, mate 10:27, January 22, 2013 (UTC)
 * 11) **No worries. Is that better? If so, I'll apply it to the other articles.  Stake black   msg 12:20, January 22, 2013 (UTC)
 * 12) ***Yep, I'll support the other ones once you do that.  Commander Code-8  G'day, mate 00:14, January 23, 2013 (UTC)
 * 13) ****Oh, you've done it now. Probably would've been best to notify me :)  Commander Code-8  G'day, mate 07:55, January 27, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Bespin Direct StarSpeeder 1000

 * Nominated by:  Stake black   msg 19:12, January 21, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

(1 ECs/2 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 21:43, January 23, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  Commander Code-8  G'day, mate 07:55, January 27, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) Supreme Emperor (talk) 04:10, January 28, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Dantooine Express StarSpeeder 1000

 * Nominated by:  Stake black   msg 19:12, January 21, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

(1 ECs/2 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 01:03, January 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  Commander Code-8  G'day, mate 07:55, January 27, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) Supreme Emperor (talk) 04:11, January 28, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) "...and two laser cannons; crewed with a pilot, a green..." You're not using the semicolon right here. I fixed the two previous ones, but you can fix the ones that are left.  501st  dogma ( talk ) 21:48, January 23, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) *Roger, roger.  Stake black   msg 21:53, January 23, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Naboo Spacelines StarSpeeder 1000

 * Nominated by:  Stake black   msg 19:12, January 21, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

(1 ECs/2 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 01:08, January 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  Commander Code-8  G'day, mate 07:55, January 27, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) Supreme Emperor (talk) 04:11, January 28, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Tatooine Transit StarSpeeder 1000

 * Nominated by:  Stake black   msg 19:12, January 21, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

(1 ECs/2 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 01:09, January 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  Commander Code-8  G'day, mate 07:55, January 27, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) Supreme Emperor (talk) 04:12, January 28, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Decimation of a Jabiimi city

 * Nominated by: Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 03:53, January 22, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: I apologize for the number of CANs that have been and are about to hit this page.

(1 ECs/2 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Commander Code-8  G'day, mate 00:21, January 23, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 02:54, January 23, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) Thats some power:P Supreme Emperor (talk) 04:17, January 28, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) CC-8
 * 2) * The article doesn't really say that Fulminiss is connected to the Sith Empire, which I know is kind of obvious but it needs saying.
 * 3) **Done.
 * 4) * Shouldn't there be a year for SWTOR's release date?  Commander Code-8  G'day, mate 10:33, January 22, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) **Done. Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 17:25, January 22, 2013 (UTC)
 * 6) ***Can you put this in your other current SWTOR CANs too and I'll support them unless I find something else in the articles.  Commander Code-8  G'day, mate 00:21, January 23, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Attack on Mindor

 * Nominated by: Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 03:53, January 22, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: That's it for now, I think.

(1 ECs/2 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) As long as you kill the redlinks...  501st  dogma ( talk ) 22:00, January 23, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) Winterz (talk) 17:20, January 25, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) Supreme Emperor (talk) 04:18, January 28, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Winterz
 * 2) * I believe Fideltin Rusk's family became notable enough for an article.
 * 3) **Done.
 * 4) * Why is there no mention of the Cold War in the body? Also, remember to contextualize it.
 * 5) **Done.
 * 6) * You must add the Cold War template. Winterz (talk) 13:55, January 22, 2013 (UTC)
 * 7) **Done. Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 18:25, January 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * 8) *** So many redlinks on the template..I believe you need to kill them. (eheh and through this sort of objections, Cade ends up writing the entire conflict by himself) Winterz (talk) 23:38, January 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * 9) ****Done. Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 16:35, January 25, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Attack on the Gnarls Outpost

 * Nominated by: Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 04:32, January 22, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: With this, I can knock out the Prologue section battles.

(2 ECs/1 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Commander Code-8  G'day, mate 00:28, January 23, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 22:58, January 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  03:12, January 28, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) 501st
 * 2) * "The Jedi Knights and Masters stationed at the outpost were able to drive back the Flesh Raider assault under the leadership of Knight Derrin Weller..." It sounds like the raiders were under the Knight's control.
 * 3) **Done.
 * 4) * State the casualties in the article.
 * 5) **Done.
 * 6) * Date's not in body. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 22:07, January 23, 2013 (UTC)
 * 7) **Done. Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 18:00, January 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * 8) Exiled Jedi
 * 9) * Can the non-class missions in the area of the first consular mission be confirmed to occur during this battle? It seems to me that some of them might indicate they occured during the same time. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  15:00, January 25, 2013 (UTC)
 * 10) **As much as I'd love to, I can't confirm that they happen at the same time, since this is only one of several attacks on the training grounds. It's the first that the Flesh Raiders are this organized, though. Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 16:14, January 25, 2013 (UTC)
 * 11) ***Just checking.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  03:12, January 28, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Unidentified Flesh Raider Warmaster

 * Nominated by: Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 16:57, January 22, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: This finishes off the first column of the Other Enemies section.

(2 ECs/1 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Commander Code-8  G'day, mate 00:30, January 23, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 22:10, January 23, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  03:10, January 28, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * You use his once in the article, but do not ever refer to the Warmaster as male. Please correct this.
 * 3) **Done.
 * 4) * You need to add the Category:Unidentified gender category if the Warmaster was never refered to as male.
 * 5) **Done.
 * 6) * Could you link to the appropriate mission where the Hero raids the weapon cache? -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  14:47, January 25, 2013 (UTC)
 * 7) **Done. Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 16:36, January 25, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Coruscant Security Force Divisional Headquarters (Quadrant A-89)

 * Nominated by: Coruscantfan (Talk) 02:40, January 23, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Project CSF

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) Winterz (talk) 17:55, January 23, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 21:56, January 25, 2013 (UTC)

Object Comments
 * 1) I object, there is no proof :>
 * 2) * You forgot the references! Here and below please. Winterz (talk) 03:25, January 23, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) **I thought there was not need for references if you only have one source. Coruscantfan (Talk) 03:30, January 23, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Nevermind, I just saw the note above. All of them are now referenced. Coruscantfan (Talk) 05:09, January 23, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) * I think you should provide some info explaining that Coruscant was in Galactic Republic's hands, or you can just pipelink the Republic through "Grand Army of the / Galactic Republic" as it seems a bit relevant to mention it. Winterz (talk) 13:30, January 23, 2013 (UTC)
 * 6) **Done. Coruscantfan (Talk) 17:41, January 23, 2013 (UTC)

Coruscant Security Force Divisional Headquarters (ISB technology center)

 * Nominated by: Coruscantfan (Talk) 02:41, January 23, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Project CSF

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) Winterz (talk) 14:43, January 25, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 13:29, January 27, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Should this article have a conjecture tag?  501st  dogma ( talk ) 22:00, January 25, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) *The book call is "a Coruscant Security Force Divisional Headquarters" under ISB control. Coruscantfan (Talk) 01:12, January 26, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Coruscant Security Force Headquarters

 * Nominated by: Coruscantfan (Talk) 04:00, January 23, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Project CSF

(1 ECs/0 Users/1 Total)
Support
 * 1)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 22:04, January 25, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Vil (Coruscant Security Force)

 * Nominated by: Coruscantfan (Talk) 04:59, January 23, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Project CSF

(1 ECs/0 Users/1 Total)
Support
 * 1)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 22:09, January 25, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Unidentified Coruscant Security officer (akk handler)

 * Nominated by: Coruscantfan (Talk) 05:00, January 23, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Project CSF

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) Winterz (talk) 13:32, January 23, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 22:16, January 25, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Jossie

 * Nominated by: Coruscantfan (Talk) 18:03, January 23, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Project CSF

(1 ECs/0 Users/1 Total)
Support
 * 1)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 22:40, January 25, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) * During Order 66 condemning all Jedi as traitors to the Galactic Republic&hellip; Could you make this phrase a little more clearer?&mdash; 22:35, January 25, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) **Done. Coruscantfan (Talk) 01:14, January 26, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Unidentified Twi'lek Jedi (Valius Ying)

 * Nominated by: &mdash; 23:38, January 23, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: WP:KOTOR for the win.

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) Winterz (talk) 21:46, January 25, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 00:32, January 26, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Winterz
 * 2) * I'm sorry, but I really have to oppose the low quality image :p. You should probably contact some of the "Image junkie" users, though I'm sure you already did this. Winterz (talk) 15:10, January 25, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) ** took care of this. Much appreciated, Cade.&mdash; 21:43, January 25, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) Add skin color to the body!  501st  dogma ( talk ) 23:18, January 25, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) *Done.&mdash; 23:52, January 25, 2013 (UTC)

Comments
 * Not an image expert, so.&mdash; 23:38, January 23, 2013 (UTC)

Unidentified Sullustan crime scene officer

 * Nominated by: Coruscantfan (Talk) 04:53, January 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Project CSF

(2 ECs/1 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 01:20, January 26, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) Did a copy-edit to eliminate some redundant wording.  Trak Nar  Ramble on 05:40, January 27, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  23:21, January 27, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Incident Commander

 * Nominated by: Coruscantfan (Talk) 06:52, January 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Project CSF

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) Did a copy-edit. Mainly, I tackled the passage noted below.  Rather than having it be a part of the previous sentence, I divided it off into its own sentence for better flow.  Trak Nar  Ramble on 05:35, January 27, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 13:19, January 27, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) 501st
 * 2) *".. all negotiations and as well as final say on tactical options..." This doesn;t sound right.
 * 3) **Done.
 * 4) * Compltetly source the BtS, as you sourced the rest. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 01:39, January 26, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) **Done. Coruscantfan (Talk) 02:51, January 26, 2013 (UTC)
 * 6) Exiled Jedi
 * 7) *Please use the InsiderCite template for the appearances section and for the references.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  23:16, January 27, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

CRILOC Horse

 * Nominated by:  Stake black   msg 15:06, January 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Another "pictured only" Star Wars Visions thing.

(1 ECs/2 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) Winterz (talk) 23:42, January 25, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) The last section's supposed to be called Notes and references, not the other way around... :)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 02:07, January 26, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) * I always get that mixed up...  Stake black   msg 13:29, January 26, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) Did a copy-edit and smoothed some rough wording.  Trak Nar  Ramble on 05:25, January 27, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Winterz
 * 2) * I believe you could fill in the Habitat section of the infobox, wouldn't you agree? ;) Winterz (talk) 14:46, January 25, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) **Agreed!  Stake black   msg 17:41, January 25, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) Exiled Jedi
 * 5) *Could you mention the encounter that occured when the Human in the picture encountered combat-scout droids on the horse? Don't forgot to create an article for the Human.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  23:09, January 27, 2013 (UTC)
 * 6) *You should also mention the following characteristics: clawed limbs, tail, ears, tongue, and fangs.
 * 7) *From its feet you can probably say what skin color the creature had.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  23:13, January 27, 2013 (UTC)

Comments
 * "Horse" is capitalized on the source.  Stake black   msg 15:07, January 24, 2013 (UTC)

Tiragga

 * Nominated by: Winterz (talk) 02:31, January 25, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Well the exams are nearly over and I thought it was my duty to participate in this current flood of CANs. More incoming :p

(2 ECs/1 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 02:14, January 26, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) Did a copy-edit. What I noticed mainly was some clunky wording, which I fixed up.  An easy way to remedy this, particularly when writing short articles, is to read the article aloud.  This way, you'll be able to spot errors.  The ones I spotted would have been otherwise missed if I hadn't read it aloud. Other than that, looks good.  Trak Nar  Ramble on 05:22, January 27, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) *Thanks for the copy-edit, well I admit that I was considerably clumsy on this one, lacking links and all. Winterz (talk) 16:42, January 27, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  23:03, January 27, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Lev Kepzen

 * Nominated by: 501st  dogma ( talk ) 13:08, January 26, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Here's a guy with a weird name.

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 * 1) Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 18:55, January 26, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) Did a copy-edit and reworked some of the prose. Looks solid, otherwise.  Trak Nar  Ramble on 05:16, January 27, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) We're here. We're queer. We're on TV! Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 07:03, January 27, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  22:57, January 27, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) &mdash; 23:45, January 27, 2013 (UTC)

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 * Should "Captain" in that context be capitalized?  Stake black   msg 13:32, January 26, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nope. When referring to the title only (in cases like admirals or captains) it shouldn't be capitalized. Winterz (talk) 18:44, January 26, 2013 (UTC)

Morts Werl

 * Nominated by: Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 18:42, January 26, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Part of my plan to work on every minor award ceremony character featured in Rogues Gallery.

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 * 1) &mdash; 00:06, January 27, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) Did a quick copy-edit and reworded a couple things. In this case, pipe-linking "Alliance to Restore the Republic" as "Rebel Alliance" benefits the casual reader more.  Most people are more familiar with the latter name than they are with the former.   Trak Nar  Ramble on 05:11, January 27, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 13:28, January 27, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  03:08, January 28, 2013 (UTC)

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 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * Uh, Chewbacca didn't get a medal in the movie, shouldn't that have another source? -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  22:54, January 27, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) **Indeed he didn't. Chewie would later get his own medal in private after the main ceremony, according to The Day after the Death Star!.
 * 4) * I think you should probably have a sentence in the BTS saying that he was pictured in several adaptations of the scene. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  22:56, January 27, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) **Done. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 23:30, January 27, 2013 (UTC)

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Thomquizzar Naval Base

 * Nominated by: 501st  dogma ( talk ) 18:44, January 27, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: It's bizzare!

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 * 1) Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 21:03, January 27, 2013 (UTC)

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