Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/An Examination and Exploration of a Most Dangerous and Resilient Organism


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An Examination and Exploration of a Most Dangerous and Resilient Organism

 * Nominated by:  Holocron Greatholocron.jpg (Complain) 11:09, April 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: WP:NSW.

(2 ECs/2 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1) A riviting monograph, this. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 20:14, April 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Darth Morrt 12:31, April 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3)  Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 01:34, April 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) ~  Savage  B Aliens_Logo.png B ~ 02:35, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

Object Comments
 * 1) Rubedo
 * 2) * Was the title italicized in the book? The titles of acadrmic papers are supposed to have quotes around them instead. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 18:59, April 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **No, no it was not. The original author put the italics there, and I left them. And then removed them.  Holocron Greatholocron.jpg (Complain) 01:07, April 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) ***ENGL&101 FTW. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 20:14, April 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) Jujiggum
 * 6) * Are you certain the essay's genre was biology? Or is that your own assumption based on the fact that it included information about orbalisks? Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 01:17, April 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) **I suppose it's an assumption. Given that the entire essay is about orbalisks, which are parasites, wouldn't parasitology be appropriate?  Holocron Greatholocron.jpg (Complain) 03:49, April 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) ***Yeah, I guess specifying parasitology would be a better fit. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 15:19, April 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) ****Done.  Holocron Greatholocron.jpg (Complain) 22:23, April 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) Morrt
 * 11) * If the source provides more information, you should expand the removing procedure and the general information of the obralisk. Darth Morrt 11:48, April 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 12) **It doesn't do this though. You don't actually get to read the report, instead you read about Zannah and her triumph at finding the removing procedure, which is mostly a set up for the next plot point.  Holocron Greatholocron.jpg (Complain) 12:24, April 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 13) ***Ok.
 * 14) Bob
 * 15) * Can you reword the first sentence so it's clear that the orbalisk is the parasite and that the paper isn't about a parasite that preys on the orbalisk? ~ SavageBob ~ Talk ~ 13:03, April 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 16) **Done.  Holocron Greatholocron.jpg (Complain) 22:23, April 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 17) Imperators II
 * 18) * Shouldn't the title be simply italicized (like this one) instead of being in quotation marks?
 * 19) **It was, originally. See NaruHina's comment above for an explanation.
 * 20) * So the info Zannah obtains is really never brought up later in the novel? (I'm just asking because I can't check the source at the moment, sorry)  Imperators II (Talk) 22:26, April 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 21) **She threatens Darovit with death if he doesn't use it (whatever it is) to heal Bane, but eventually the orbalisks are electrocuted to death anyway, so you never see the method described in the article. The paper's mostly a plot point to let Zannah meet Darovit and give her a reason to keep him around for a while.  Holocron  Greatholocron.jpg (Complain) 07:00, April 6, 2011 (UTC)