Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Hig


 * ''The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.

Hig

 * Nominated by: --Eyrezer 11:00, 10 June 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: 360 words. I originally had a separate Biology section, but it was only 12 words so I integrated it with the History section.

(3 ACs/4 Users/7 Total)
Support
 * 1) I have no concerns of my own after a copyedit, but I do agree with Farl's objection. Master JonathanJedi Council Chambers 04:33, 11 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) The New Rebellion added a lot of minor sentient species --Jinzler 09:43, 12 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) As long as Farl's is addressed. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 01:45, 13 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 4)  CC7567  (talk) 20:31, 16 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 5)  Grunny  ( Talk ) 09:52, 17 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 6)  Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 11:25, 17 June 2009 (UTC)
 * Btw, get well soon, Soresumakashi.--Skippy Farlstendoiro 08:54, 19 June 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Farl-objection: I think the paragraph of the Diversity Alliance Hig is ambiguous.The first three sentences suggest that she donates her ship and from that point on, the Alliance made use of it. The fourth sentence suggests that she still piloted the ship at least occassionally after donating it, but it could also be referred to her modus operandi before donating the ship. The last sentence, I understand, happens after the donation, but I cannot reconcile it with the previous information: Did the Jedi people hijack or stole the ship? --Skippy Farlstendoiro 12:26, 10 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) *I've made some changes that should address your objections. In the book, the trader does still operate the ship after donating it to the DA. I've changed the wording to "donated the use of" which should clear up the confusion. --Eyrezer 00:58, 16 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) *I'm satisfied with that; if Master Jonathan and Soresumakashi agree, I'll strike the objection.--Skippy Farlstendoiro 06:50, 16 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) **Looks fine to me. &mdash;Master Jonathan(Jedi Council Chambers) 21:47, 16 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) **All good. Sorry it took me this long, I was a little bit sick. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 08:44, 19 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 6) "They attached a small craft, the Rock Dragon, to one of its cargo bays as a decoy": bit unclear what "its" refers to. 04:38, 16 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 7) *Fix-ed. --Eyrezer 07:01, 16 June 2009 (UTC)

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