Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Yorr

Yorr

 * Nominated by: Matt Seay (talk) 03:30, August 16, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

Jangeth

 * Matt, do you know why this nom has failed in both the FAN and CAN? It's a big mess. First off, please properly follow WP:S and the WP:MOS. Did you even check the Rebel guide? I suspect there's invalid information in the COMPNOR section. Once you take care of all of this, please be sure to check your grammar and linking. I'm noticing redirects. Furthermore, make sure you check every single source related to ROTJ. Are you sure he's not mentioned elsewhere?  JangFett  (Talk) 03:32, August 16, 2012 (UTC)
 * Yes JangFett, I have read the Rebellion guide. I have checked most sources. If you know one is wrong just tell me which one is and I can fix it. Matt Seay (talk) 03:36, August 16, 2012 (UTC)
 * Are you sure? I hope you did not make things up or assume certain information came from that source without checking. I would highly recommend that you take a look at recent GAs to see what is to be expected from status articles.  JangFett  (Talk) 03:38, August 16, 2012 (UTC)
 * I'm the one who mentioned this book to Matt Seay. I can tell you that I've looked, and he is only pictured, nothing about COMPNOR, and his name isn't even mentioned. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 03:52, August 16, 2012 (UTC)
 * It looks like it's just a, yeah. No caption, and nothing to link it to the info about COMPNOR. If you remove that info and the article falls below 250 words, don't be quick to remove it from this page, as there's some other missing info (mostly context) and it will most likely end up rising above 250 words anyway. Menkooroo (talk) 03:59, August 16, 2012 (UTC)

Some prelims

 * "Source goes here?" Uhhhhhh no.
 * Taken care of. DarthRevan1173 (Long live Lord Revan) 03:43, August 16, 2012 (UTC)
 * The coding in reference [4] is broken; please fix.
 * Taken care of. DarthRevan1173 (Long live Lord Revan) 03:43, August 16, 2012 (UTC)
 * Better, but the same ref now appears twice. Ref [3] and ref [6] are the same thing and should just be one ref. Menkooroo (talk) 03:46, August 16, 2012 (UTC)
 * Taken care of for that one. DarthRevan1173 (Long live Lord Revan) 03:51, August 16, 2012 (UTC)
 * I don't mean to sound like a prat here, but I'd like to see Matt take care of the objections to this nom --- if someone else does it for him, he won't learn anything. Menkooroo (talk) 03:54, August 16, 2012 (UTC)
 * Was just helping out since he asked me to before on the other nominations. DarthRevan1173 (Long live Lord Revan) 03:57, August 16, 2012 (UTC)
 * The items in the "Sources" section should be ordered by date of publication. Click on each one to find out when they were published and then re-organize them.
 * The biography can't rely on information already established in the intro --- the biography needs to introduce everything for the first time. It should talk about Yorr right from the first sentence (eg "Yorr was a Human male who...") rather than introducing him a few sentences in.
 * Taken care of, name is in first sentence. Matt Seay (talk) 03:49, August 16, 2012 (UTC)
 * References should go immediately after punctuation --- no space in between. Menkooroo (talk) 03:38, August 16, 2012 (UTC)

Hanzo

 * This might be a sofixit, but reload the infobox, don't just automatically assume what's already there is the proper infobox layout. And also Color is linked twice in the infobox, just link it the first time and not again.
 * More to come. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 03:50, August 16, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

 * I am doing what I can to fix what I know how to fix. Doing my best here. Matt Seay (talk) 03:58, August 16, 2012 (UTC)