Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations



This page is for the nomination of "comprehensive articles". For a list of "comprehensive articles", see Category:Wookieepedia comprehensive articles.


 * Comprehensive article nominations history
 * Comprehensive article nominations archiving checklist

What is a "comprehensive article?"

A "comprehensive article" is an article that contains all information regarding the topic. Often, "comprehensive articles" cannot reach Featured or Good Article status due to their limited content. This process is intended to recognize articles that contain all relevant canon information, yet are still under the 250 word limit required for a Good Article. The purpose of this is twofold&mdash;firstly, to help users distinguish what is a stub, and what is merely a short article with no further relevant material to be added, and, more importantly, to highlight for the reader when they are reading something that has been judged definitely "comprehensive"&mdash;that is, a guarantee to the reader that whatever they are reading contains the sum total of all available content.

Nominations and promotions of the Comprehensive article process are overseen by a collective of users known as the "EduCorps," which is made up of the Inquisitorius, the AgriCorps, and various other experienced users who are considered qualified to adequately judge the nominated material.

Lucasfilm Ltd. and its many licensees continue to expand the Star Wars universe. Since new information might become available, it may be necessary to revoke a "comprehensive article's" status. A forum will be used to nominate articles that have fallen out-of-date. Members of the EduCorps will then post a warning template on that page, and a grace period of one week will be instituted in which the article can be improved. If there is a significant amount of new information, it is likely that once updated, the article will become eligible for Good article status, and thereby ineligible for Comprehensive article status.

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An article must&hellip;


 * 1) &hellip;be well-written and detailed.
 * 2) &hellip;be unbiased, non-point of view.
 * 3) &hellip;be sourced with all available sources and appearances.
 * 4) &hellip;follow the Manual of Style, Layout Guide, and all other policies on Wookieepedia. This is, of course, within reason. If a topic only has a very limited degree of content that cannot be divided up into the relevant article sections, it is not required that it follow the Layout Guide precisely. This is to be judged on a case-by-case basis.
 * 5) &hellip;following the review process, be stable, i.e., does not change significantly from day to day and is not the subject of ongoing edit wars. This does not apply to vandalism and protection or semi-protection as a result of vandalism.
 * 6) &hellip;not be tagged with any sort of improvement tags (i.e. more sources, expand, etc).
 * 7) &hellip;have no redlinks.
 * 8) &hellip;have all relevant canon information presented.
 * 9) &hellip;be completely referenced for all available material and sources. See Sourcing for more information. While this is not required for an article possessing a singular source, it is encouraged, as it provides both uniformity and a good infrastructure should the topic be referenced in any future materials.
 * 10) &hellip;have all quotes and images sourced.
 * 11) &hellip;provide at least one relevant quote on the article if available.
 * 12) &hellip;include a "Behind the scenes" section for in-universe articles.
 * 13) &hellip;counting the introduction, the article body, and "Behind the scenes" material, must not exceed 250 words in length (not including captions, quotes, or headers, etc). Any articles exceeding the limit should be taken to the Good article nominations page for consideration.

How to nominate:


 * 1) First, nominate an article you find is worthy of comprehensive status, putting it at the bottom of the list below. Nominated articles must meet all thirteen requirements stated above.
 * 2) Add CAnom at the top of the article you are nominating.
 * 3) Be sure to place sign in the "Nominated by" line when the nomination is posted for voting.
 * 4) Others will object to the nomination if they disagree that the article is good enough; they will then supply reasons for doing so, and ways to improve the article in accordance with the established rules.
 * 5) Nominators and supporters will adjust the article until the objectors (with reasonable objections) are satisfied. Objectors may also make alterations&mdash;if there is any reason for contention on a given point, it should be settled in a civil manner in the nomination field itself.
 * 6) Users may not vote on their own articles.
 * 7) There is no limit to the amount of nominations a given user can submit at any given time.

How to vote:


 * 1) Before doing anything, be sure to read the article completely, keeping a sharp eye out for mistakes.
 * 2) Afterward, compare the article to the criteria listed above, and then either support or object the article's nomination.
 * 3) *If you object, please supply concrete reasons for doing so, and how it can be improved.
 * 4) As stated above, any objections will be looked upon by the nominator, supporters, and anyone willing to improve the article, and action will be taken to please the objectors. Do not strike other users' objections; it is up to the objector to review the changes and strike if they are satisfied.
 * 5) There are several ways in which an article can receive the required number of votes. Within a 48-hour period of nomination, only EduCorps votes will count towards the total, although anyone may choose to vote in that window. If two members of the EduCorps support a nomination in that window, and there are no outstanding objections, the article can be considered a "Comprehensive article" and be tagged with the template 48 hours after the initial nomination.  The talk page will also be tagged with the CA template. When the 48 hours are up, any user's votes will contribute towards the total. If one EduCorps member has voted for an article after a week, three regular votes will be required. After the 48 hour period, an article can still also pass with just two EduCorps votes.
 * 6) Once a nomination is successful, it will be placed on the Comprehensive article list. Instructions on how to archive nominations, successful or otherwise, can be found here. Anyone can archive a nomination&mdash;just make sure it has the correct number of votes, has been nominated for at least a week (or 48 hours if there are two EC votes), and that there are absolutely no outstanding objections. If you are not sure how to do this, just ask, and someone will likely be more than willing to help you. Also, if you think you can slip one past us, think again&mdash;someone is always watching you.

All nominations will be considered idle and are subject to instantaneous removal by EduCorps members if objections are not addressed, or at least not answered, after a period of 2 weeks.

Cloud City chief engineer

 * Nominated by: Darth Morrt 13:58, November 24, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Another SWM nom. Verrrry minor character.

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Support
 * 1) Looks verrrry nice. ~ SavageBob 06:03, November 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Menkooroo 04:33, January 3, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) This article does not need to be called "Unidentified." Graestan ( Talk ) 23:11, December 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) *I was assuming that Bossk was impersonating an actual chief engineer rather than simply calling himself by that title. In other words, if Bossk is trying to pass himself off as Bob Jenkins, chief engineer, the "unidentified" seems appropriate. However, if he's simply trying to pass himself off as any ol' chief engineer, I agree, this article should be renamed. ~ SavageBob 23:57, December 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) **This article describes the actual person, not his job/title. From the scenario: "Bossk sabotaged some vital equipment, then hacked into the city's computer and sent an urgent message to Lando under the guise of the city's Chief Engineer." Darth Morrt 01:22, December 2, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) ***There weren't more than two in canon so far, so what is the point of the Unidentified? Graestan ( Talk ) 17:55, January 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) ****If this had more votes and was ready to be archived except my objection, I'd be a little more likely to exercise lenience, but I really don't see the point of calling him "Unidentified" when the category on the CA page can handle it well enough. Graestan ( Talk ) 18:00, January 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) *****I prefer to call 'Unidentified' what is unidentifed, but I've moved it to Cloud City chief engineer. Darth Morrt 00:21, January 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * The opening sentence of the article probably shouldn't be sourced to what is currently reference [1]. "In 1 ABY" should, yeah, but the opening sentence should be sourced to Sore Loser's Revenge.
 * Does the chief engineer actually appear in Sore Loser's Revenge? The article makes it seem like he doesn't. If it's just Bossk impersonating him, then would be correct.
 * Remember to link to Rebellion era in the infobox, not just Rebellion.
 * The article seems to have quite a bit of extraneous info. It reads more like an article about Ambush in Cloud City than it does an article about the Chief Engineer. Is there anything you can trim? Aaaand is the sentence in "Behind the scenes" about the alternate non-canon ending relevant to the Chief Engineer? Menkooroo 03:25, January 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * All is addressed. Darth Morrt 03:53, January 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * Excellent! One more, though: Since reference [1] is specifically about the date, shouldn't a new reference that just references Lando Calrissian: Idiot's Array be used for the final "Calrissian survived" sentence? Menkooroo 04:09, January 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * Done. Darth Morrt 04:16, January 3, 2011 (UTC)

Comments
 * Graestan, could you please elaborate on your objection? ~ SavageBob 16:22, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

Project X271

 * Nominated by: Darth Morrt 15:00, November 24, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Bolvan-related nomination.

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Support
 * 1) Menkooroo 04:58, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * Does the source actually say that it's stored aboard Vader's Star Destroyer? The leading quote makes it sound like they'd actually have to retrieve it from the Outer Rim. Menkooroo 15:24, January 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * No it doesn't say that it was stored. In the Fact Files, Bolvan suggested "that the planet should be utterly cleansed using experimental ordinance [sic] from Project X271". The sentences about deployable ordnance and storing it on the Destroyer is actually conjectural. They didn't have much time, and Bolvan wanted to use this weapon, so I think the weapon was deployable and they have it at hand. Darth Morrt 16:48, January 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * We can't put speculation into articles. Anything conjectural has gotta go. Menkooroo 17:37, January 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * Done. Darth Morrt 17:52, January 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * Prepare to be savaged...
 * Is there a reason to keep the "somewhere" in the first sentence? Seems it'd read fine without it, and "somewhere in the Outer Rim" is kind of like using "unidentified" in an article, IMO.
 * Cut. Darth Morrt 00:14, January 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * Can you find some synonyms or alternative wording that avoids using the words "weapon," "development," and "project" so much? ~ SavageBob 15:55, January 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * Reworded. Darth Morrt 00:14, January 20, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Trever Flume's mother

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 09:41, November 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Could it be...a...BIOGRAPHY?!

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Support
 * 1)  SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 09:11, November 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2)  OLIOSTER  (talk) 19:24, November 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) Darth Morrt 01:26, January 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4)  Master Jonathan New Jedi Order.svg ( Jedi Council Chambers ) 03:35, January 10, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) O_o A Blasphemous Biography!
 * 2) * Watch your categorisation. She can be further subcategorised in unidentified individuals, and soldiers is for unit types. May I suggest looking into Category:Galactic Republic military personnel instead? SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 10:30, November 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) **Good catch. Done. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 04:53, November 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Went one further, as she's a captain. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 09:11, November 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) Morrt
 * 6) * Are you sure that "early in the war" can be interpreted as 22-21 BBY? Why not just 22 or 22-20?
 * 7) **The war was only lasted until 19 BBY. Circa one year is close enough to "early." Watch her be in TCW. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 12:48, December 23, 2010 (UTC)
 * 8) * You can go further in the categories to Category:Republic Navy officers, because she is surely not an army captain, but a navy captain. Darth Morrt 10:42, December 12, 2010 (UTC)
 * 9) **What's your logic there? NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 12:48, December 23, 2010 (UTC)
 * 10) ***I've tried to say that the army captains are clones, so she must be a navy captain. But I've realized just now that not every army personnel are clones, like Ozzel in the TCW comic. But this leads to an other objection: her affiliation should be changed to Republic Military, because we don't know whether she serves the GAR or the Navy. Darth Morrt 17:28, December 23, 2010 (UTC)
 * 11) ****Good catch. I'd always assumed the GAR was the catch-all armed forces. Didn't know they culled Ozzel into TCW either...shame. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 00:40, January 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * 12) Despite how articles on unidentified characters have traditionally been done, there's been a recent push to jettison uses of "This" in them. I think the logic is that it seems like an OOU description. How do you feel about changing both instances of "this" to "a" ? Menkooroo 03:35, January 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 13) *I think that's a stupid thing to regulate. In my mind it doesn't break the fourth wall in any way. If you think what an IU character would write in this situation, there is no way they would put "a Rebel Pilot fought in the First Galactic Civil War" because it disconnects the article from the character in question. On that note, and for expediency, I will change it if you really want me too but I would not it would take revision I'd prefer not to do right now (busy, busy) as we cant have "A soldier, a Human female..." for obvious reasons. If we could possibly use these as some kind of cut off point for this regulation, should it become precedent, I would appreciate it astronomically. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 23:39, January 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * 14) **Well, OK. :P Menkooroo 02:28, January 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 15) From the Council Chambers:
 * 16) * "the Confederacy of Independent Systems's secession from the Galactic Republic plunged the galaxy into the Clone Wars between the militant Separatists and the government ." This last bit seems redundant to the first part of what I quoted. Can it be removed?
 * 17) *Otherwise, nice job.  Master Jonathan New Jedi Order.svg ( Jedi Council Chambers ) 19:06, January 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 18) **Changed. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 23:39, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Comments
 * Menkooroo, are you no longer objecting? ~ SavageBob 17:54, January 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * Yeah; I didn't support because the article already had enough votes. My objection is struck, though, so I'm satisfied. :) Menkooroo 05:55, January 19, 2011 (UTC)

Jizz-wail

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 06:29, December 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: A truly integral part of the Star Wars mythos. To make fun of it is to make fun of the Modal Nodes themselves.

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Support Object
 * 1) *snicker* ~ SavageBob 21:40, December 18, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Darth Morrt 01:29, January 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Jizz wail indeed.  OLIOSTER  (talk) 22:53, January 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * BTS? ~ SavageBob 06:31, December 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * Sorry, forgot to save it. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 06:54, December 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * OK! Now you need to source the fact that the music in ANH is jizz, though, since that's not evident from the film itself. ~ SavageBob 07:37, December 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * Done. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 23:54, December 4, 2010 (UTC)
 * Maybe it should be mentioned somewhere that a jizz-wailer not necessary plays jizz-wail. Darth Morrt 11:50, December 12, 2010 (UTC)
 * Blah, I feel bad, but a stub should be created for the quartet. Menkooroo 05:53, January 19, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

X-1 (assassin)

 * Nominated by: Vandar Tokare42 (Talk to the hand) 01:07, December 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Number one!

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Support

Object Comments For all clones of Project Omega: Soresh didn't train them to hunt Skywalker. X-7 serves him seven years before the Death Star blows up. Nahdar Vebb 21:34, December 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * Hey there! Since the article has an intro, keep in mind that the body operates entirely independent of the intro --- that is, everything that's been established in the intro needs to also be established in the body. As such, it's usually a good idea to begin the body similar to the intro, with something like "X-1 was an assassin..." Right now, the body starts out by talking about Rezi Soresh, and it's kind of like "Wait, who?" The body also doesn't mention that X-1 was created by Soresh, just that he was used by him.
 * Got rid of intro on all of the articles. --Vandar Tokare42 (Talk to the hand) 02:34, January 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * Does he die? "Dispatched with a vibroblade" makes it seem like he does. Menkooroo 16:17, January 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * Replaced with the less ambiguous phrase, "killed". --Vandar Tokare42 (Talk to the hand) 02:34, January 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * Excellent! A couple more: "Soresh wiped their identities from the system"... what system?
 * Not too sure what system it is referring to. The sentence in the book is "...had their former identities completely wiped from the system..." Some sort of universal Empire identification system I'm guessing. Not to sure how to say that. --Vandar Tokare42 (Talk to the hand) 21:34, January 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * Consider putting it in your own words, and making it seem less vague. You can do it! :) Menkooroo 05:58, January 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * Is it true that X-7 was already Soresh's personal assassin in 7 BBY (per Nahdar's comment below)? If so, isn't it fair to say that X-1 died before 7 BBY?
 * In my research, I can't find any mention to anything prior to the Battle of Yavin concerning X-7 or any of the others. I'm not 100% completely acquainted with everything said in the books so I may be mistaken. --Vandar Tokare42 (Talk to the hand) 21:34, January 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * Might be worth asking on Nahdar's talk page if that info is indeed from the book. Menkooroo 05:58, January 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * The only other thing I would recommend would be to make some revisions to all of the other X-articles you have nommed so that they're not just the same article copied and pasted six times. It's better to write a unique article each time that gets the same important points across, but in a different way. I'm currently doing the same thing with a bunch of similar articles, see here here and here if you want to get a better idea of what I'm talking about --- same points, different sentences expressing them. Make sense? Menkooroo 20:44, January 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * Will try and take this into account. I don't have that much time, so writing six different articles about the same points will be fairly difficult for me. --Vandar Tokare42 (Talk to the hand) 21:34, January 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * It won't be as difficult as it seems --- just change the sentences around so that the wording isn't exactly the same, ya know? Menkooroo 05:58, January 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * I've splitted the article into two sections. IMO, it looks better this way, but feel free to revert it if you disagree. If the sectioning is good for you, please put the appropriate ref at the end of the first section. Darth Morrt 03:24, January 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * Thanks. --Vandar Tokare42 (Talk to the hand) 04:47, January 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * Does the source give X-1's species? Darth Morrt 03:24, January 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * No mention of species anywhere. --Vandar Tokare42 (Talk to the hand) 04:47, January 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * Got rid of it. --Vandar Tokare42 (Talk to the hand) 02:34, January 13, 2011 (UTC)

X-2

 * Nominated by: Vandar Tokare42 (Talk to the hand) 01:07, December 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Number two!

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Support

Object Comments
 * Same objections as above (both mine and Nahdar's). If he dies, "Death" should be listed in the infobox. Aaaand the other stuff too. Menkooroo 02:33, January 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * Death date is added to all articles now --Vandar Tokare42 (Talk to the hand) 02:34, January 13, 2011 (UTC)

X-3

 * Nominated by: Vandar Tokare42 (Talk to the hand) 01:07, December 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Number three!

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Support

Object Comments
 * Like above. Menkooroo 02:33, January 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * Done --Vandar Tokare42 (Talk to the hand) 02:34, January 13, 2011 (UTC)

X-4

 * Nominated by: Vandar Tokare42 (Talk to the hand) 01:07, December 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Number four!

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Support

Object Comments
 * Same as above. Menkooroo 02:34, January 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * Done --Vandar Tokare42 (Talk to the hand) 02:34, January 13, 2011 (UTC)

X-5

 * Nominated by: Vandar Tokare42 (Talk to the hand) 01:07, December 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Number five!

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Support

Object
 * And again. Death, intro/bio separation, clarification of what year they were trained. Menkooroo 02:34, January 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * Year isn't specified, "prior to Battle of Yavin" is what I said. --Vandar Tokare42 (Talk to the hand) 02:34, January 13, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

X-6

 * Nominated by: Vandar Tokare42 (Talk to the hand) 01:07, December 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Number six! Not doing X-7 cause I'm lazy.

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Support

Object
 * One more time. Death, intro/bio separation, clarification of what year they were trained. Menkooroo 02:35, January 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * Done --Vandar Tokare42 (Talk to the hand) 02:34, January 13, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

PS-29-2

 * Nominated by: Hanzo Hasashi 04:59, December 24, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Project for the holidays.

(1 ECs/2 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) Menkooroo 16:20, January 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Darth Morrt 04:42, January 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) ~ SavageBob 19:06, January 6, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * What about adding Imperial Navy to his affiliations? Maybe you could mention that he got his nickname after a creature that attach itself to starships, or something like this. Darth Morrt 01:57, January 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * Added Imperial Navy. And it is never stated that he was named Mynock after those creatures, although that is the only logical possibility. Would that count as speculation if I did add it? Hanzo Hasashi 04:22, January 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * IMO, you can reword it not be speculative, like: he is called Mynock, which is the name of a creature... But this is not a real objection, just an idea. Darth Morrt 05:09, January 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * Can you add a reference that says all TIE pilots during the Imperial period were Human males? ~ SavageBob 16:59, January 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * Human is sourced by the duck test, to be honest I don't know about whether that is confirmed by any source. What does the Complete Star Wars Encyclopedia have to say? And the card says that he is male. Hanzo Hasashi 18:28, January 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * Species unclear, no source ever stated that all the TIE fighter pilots were all human, and by the time of 7.5 ABY, there were Devaronian TIE pilots too. Hanzo Hasashi 04:39, January 6, 2011 (UTC)

Comments
 * Unlike previous similar nominations, I have used the logic of the duck test to assume this character is a human. Hanzo Hasashi 16:07, January 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * Duck test was not sufficient, no source ever confirmed all TIE pilots were humans during the Galactic Civil War. Hanzo Hasashi 16:22, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

Ai-Ari Kuldi

 * Nominated by: Jinzler 22:58, December 26, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: A Jedi

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) Well-done. Menkooroo 15:19, January 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Darth Morrt 16:14, January 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) ~ SavageBob 16:57, January 5, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * What about adding Republic Navy to the affiliations? Darth Morrt 02:43, January 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * Unfortunately, this is something that we are unable to prove. Regarding the character's affiliation, the source merely describes Kuldi as a "Republic Jedi". In addition, whilst the source infers that the Fifth Fleet was a Republic unit, is does not explicitly state that, so there is no basis to assume that Kuldi was affiliated with the Republic navy. --Jinzler 18:40, January 3, 2011 (UTC)

Comments
 * Does anything suggest that Ai-Ari's Fifth Fleet is not the same as the Open Cirkle's Fifth Fleet? The fleets and other large units have unique numbers. There shouldn't be two differnet Fifth Fleet in the Republic Navy. Darth Morrt 02:43, January 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * Firstly, as I have stated above, we cannot be certain that the Fifth Fleet was a Republic unit. Regardless of that, while there is nothing to suggest that Kuldi's Fifth Fleet is not the same as the Fifth Fleet of the Open Circle Fleet, there is nothing to suggest that they are the same either. We therefore have no evidence to assume that they are the same and it is perfectly possible that there could be more than one Fifth Fleet within the Republic Navy, for example, hypothetically speaking, there could be a Fifth Fleet of the Open Triangle Fleet, or a Fifth Fleet of the Open Hexagon Fleet, or some other fleet name that includes the term "Fifth Fleet". Its not an assumption that I would be comfortable to make, given the evidence we have. --Jinzler 18:40, January 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * Kuldi says that "You are on your own," so Kuldi is not with the independent Cularians and is not with the Seps either, because Kuldi is a "Republic Jedi". IMO, it is safe to assume that the Fifth Fleet is a Republic unit, because it is under the command of a "Republic Jedi". If we assume that the Fifth Fleet is a Republic unit, we should assume that it is identical to the Fifth Fleet of theOpen Circle Armada, because the numbered designations are unique. Designations such as Third Fleet, 23rd Battilion or 11st Hussar Regiment are unique in every real-world military. There cannot be such a thing like Fifth Fleet of the Open Triangle Fleet. It is also stated in the Guide to the Grand Army of the Republic, that "division number do not necessary correspond to actual army population. E. g., there are not 326 Star Corps before the 327th." There is only one Fifth Fleet in the Republic Navy and in the time of the Battle of Coruscant, it is part of the Open Circle Armada. If you disagree, I would like to hear the opinion of other users in the Senate Hall. Darth Morrt 07:55, January 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * That Kuldi is affiliated with the Republic is not under debate, so the fact that he says Cularin is on its own is irrelevant, and may not neccessarily have been stated in his capacity as Fifth Fleet commander, but in his capacity as a "Republic Jedi". The fact that he is a Republic Jedi also does not make the fleet part of the Republic Navy, as it is possible to describe Rahm Kota as a "Republic Jedi", yet the unit he commanded during the Clone Wars was not part of the Republic Navy, so that Kuldi was a "Republic Jedi" is not enough evidence to assume that the Fifth Fleet was part of the Republic. In addition you seem have to misinterpreted my argument regarding the Fifth Fleet, so perhaps I wasn't clear enough. The Fifth Fleet of the Open Circle Fleet is only the fifth part of the Open Circle Fleet and as it is reasonably possible that the Republic had other fleets of similar size to the Open Circle Fleet, and that such fleets might have "Fifth Fleets" of their own. That is of course speculation, but assuming that the fleet referred to the the source is the Fifth Fleet of the Open Circle is equally speculative and breeches Attribution. If a source does not state something, we cannot assume it, unless the assumption meets the much cited "duck test", which I do not believe this does. --Jinzler 13:43, January 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * Ok, the mention of Kota's militia convinced me that Kuldi's Fifth Fleet is maybe not the Republic's Fifth Fleet, altough IMO the author's intention was reference to the Cross-section book's Fifth Fleet in the Open Circle. It is irrelevant now, but I still maintain that there isn't another Fifth Fleet in the Republic. The first source of the Fifth Fleet is the ROTS Cross-section, which mentiones "Fifth Fleet in the Open Circle armada". It is not the fifth part of the fleet, but a unique unit of the Navy just like the 327th Star Corps is a unique unit of the GAR. E. g., if the 327th Star Corps is part of the Second sector army, than there could not be another 327th Star Corps in the Third sector army. The hundreds of fleets of the Republic have all a unique designation (Fifth, Sixth, Ninetieth, etc.) They are presumably parts of larger Fleet groups, such as the Open Circle, but they still have teir own unique designation, such as Fifth Fleet. But you have my support now. Darth Morrt 16:14, January 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * This was a difficult issue to resolve, due to the vagueness of the original source, and I gave full consideration to the evidence and points you raised. I would therefore like to thank you for the professionality and diligence you demonstrated in this discussion. --Jinzler 17:23, January 4, 2011 (UTC)

AF-119

 * Nominated by: Hanzo Hasashi 21:49, January 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

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 * 1) ~ SavageBob 18:53, January 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Darth Morrt 00:40, January 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Menkooroo 22:38, January 20, 2011 (UTC)

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 * I think I may have overlooked this on your previous stormtrooper entries, but can you source the species and gender? I think the duck test is fine in these cases, but only with a source that says that Imperial-era stormtroopers are human and male. ~ SavageBob 16:48, January 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * The duck test was not used to source his gender, his Scum and Villainy Quick Draw card sources it. Will source the species though. Hanzo Hasashi 18:28, January 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * CSWE sourcing for species, using the entry you gave for TK-420's nomination. Did I get the entry title right though? I wrote it was "Stormtrooper." Hanzo Hasashi 18:42, January 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * That's the one. Thanks! ~ SavageBob 18:53, January 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * I don't think that reference [2] is needed. References [1] and [2] are sourcing the same thing. You could stick the text of reference [2] (minus "The above") at the end of reference [1], but right now the same thing is referenced twice. Menkooroo 05:51, January 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * Taken care of. Hanzo Hasashi 18:11, January 19, 2011 (UTC)

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 * Unlike previous stormtrooper nominations, I have used the logic of the duck test to assume this character is a human. Hanzo Hasashi 16:07, January 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * Strangely, this article, along with a couple of my other personal projects, has two CUSWE entries. Hanzo Hasashi 19:26, January 4, 2011 (UTC)

NT-757

 * Nominated by: Hanzo Hasashi 01:40, January 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Fearless soldier.

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 * 1) Menkooroo 13:28, January 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Darth Morrt 02:29, January 13, 2011 (UTC)

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 * Human should be capitalized, like any other species name. Darth Morrt 00:06, January 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * Taken care of. Hanzo Hasashi 02:17, January 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * Any reason not to just say, "NT-757 was a Human Imperial stormtrooper..." That's the way we treat most bio articles. ~ SavageBob 15:58, January 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * Changed. Hanzo Hasashi 18:11, January 19, 2011 (UTC)

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NT-311

 * Nominated by: Hanzo Hasashi 01:40, January 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Squad point man.

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 * 1) Menkooroo 16:54, January 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Darth Morrt 02:32, January 13, 2011 (UTC)

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 * Can you give us a sentence or two saying how the boarding of the Tantive IV turned out? Menkooroo 13:34, January 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * Done, tell me what you think of it. Hanzo Hasashi 16:35, January 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * Perfect. Menkooroo 16:54, January 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * Maybe it's just my foreign English, but the first sentence sound to me saying that he was cloned during the Galatic Civil War. Maybe you could put "during the Galactic Civil War" at the beginning of the next sentence. Darth Morrt 01:04, January 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * You're right, fixed.
 * His card mentions planetary coverage and his power is boosted while on Tatooine. I'm not sure, but presumably he was sent down to Tatooine to search for the escape pod. What's your opinion? Darth Morrt 01:04, January 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * I might leave that as an ambiguous bts note that he was possibly later among the 501st deployed along with Desert Sands to search for the droids on Tatooine. Hanzo Hasashi 02:17, January 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * Same question as NT-757 above. ~ SavageBob 15:59, January 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * Think I got it. Hanzo Hasashi 18:11, January 19, 2011 (UTC)

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RGA-972

 * Nominated by: Hanzo Hasashi 01:40, January 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Assault specialist.

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 * 1) Darth Morrt 02:40, January 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Menkooroo 04:43, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

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 * His supporting ability is not written correctly. He and another trooper together need to support a third one. Altough, since this ability cannot be 'translated' into something unique ability or trait, I think it is purely game-mechanics and shouldn't be mentioned. But if you mention it, IMO you should also state that his support is much powerful than the general support ability of the game. Darth Morrt 02:05, January 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * I myself thought this was only game mechanics too. Will get rid of. Hanzo Hasashi 02:17, January 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * This article needs a biography segment. Instead of listing everything in the intro, put a more detailed recount in a biography segment. brightfur 02:31, January 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * Short articles, like this, doesn't necessary need Biography section. This trooper appeared only on two card. There is no more details of his life or his role in the Battle of Hoth. Darth Morrt 02:40, January 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * As Darth Morrt said, there is too little known about this character for a biography section. Also, if you were to look at other articles brought to comprehensive status by other users, many of those also don't have biography sections. Hanzo Hasashi 03:11, January 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * Morrt and Hanzo are correct; the CA rules allow for articles on characters that do not have "Biography" sections. Unless another EC disagrees, Brightfur, I believe that your objection is non-actionable. ~ SavageBob 01:09, January 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * Same question as the two noms above. ~ SavageBob 16:00, January 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * I got that. Hanzo Hasashi 18:11, January 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * Might wanna talk about how he had training in the use of heavy weapons before you talk about the Battle of Hoth stuff, for chronology's sake. Otherwise fantastic. Menkooroo 22:47, January 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * Got it taken care of. Hanzo Hasashi 00:27, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

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 * Is there supposed to be two RGA-972 in the Completely Unofficial Star Wars Encyclopedia links at the bottom?  TK-299  (Click Here)  Imperial_Emblem.svg 12:23, January 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * Oddly enough, yes. Perhaps those were two different authors, and one only knew about his Premiere card, while another only knew about his Scum and Villainy card. There were also two AF-119s and two NT-311s. Hanzo Hasashi 16:19, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

Anti-Alien League

 * Nominated by:  Darth Karika  will destroy your planet! 21:57, January 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Something different for a change.

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 * Gorton Colu has a CSWE entry and is mentioned in the KOTOR Strategy Guide --- do you know if either of those sources mention the Anti-alien league?
 * Nope, no mention in the CSWE.
 * Strategy Guide? SoresuMakashi might be able to help you out; he GA'd Colu.
 * I'll see if he can help.  Darth Karika  will destroy your planet! 15:09, January 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * Awesome! Let me know when you find out whether or not the league is mentioned (directly or indirectly) in the strategy guide. Menkooroo 04:45, January 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * "The Anti-Alien League was a Humanocentrist group formed by Gorton Colu" is currently sourced to The Essential Atlas.
 * Resourced.
 * I could and should fix this one myself, but it'll be handy for you to know if you don't already: Only use punctuation in image captions if it's a complete sentence. Menkooroo 02:43, January 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * Fixed.  Darth Karika  will destroy your planet! 04:06, January 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * Rubefacient
 * Context of Taris's multiple cities should be added.
 * Done.
 * Mention that aliens were prohibited from UpCity under normal conditions. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 02:59, January 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * There needs to be a year in the intro
 * Try now.
 * I'm sorry, I was confused by the banner. Because of that banner, I think this should be made with a History section to avoid the dissonance caused by it. I'll not force you to, but it would probably be beneficial. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 02:59, January 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * You say the league was mentioned in the game in the body but say it appeared in the BTS.
 * Corrected.
 * Because the article assumes 100% completion, you do not need the clause saying he could be avoided. That is, unless you include the alternate dialogue tracks (which you should).
 * Alternate dialogue tracks? There are no others that mention the League.  Darth Karika  will destroy your planet! 15:09, January 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * Revan can ignore the man, can agree with his speciesism, or tell him to screw off. Which of these elicits the mention? If it is the lattermost, remove the portion saying that Colu mentioned it to Revan and say that he could mention it to Revan given the proper dialogue in the BTS. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 02:59, January 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * Speciesism FTW NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 05:17, January 18, 2011 (UTC)

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 * Also, guest nom for WP:KOTOR.  Darth Karika  will destroy your planet! 21:58, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Dathomir Prison

 * Nominated by:  OLIOSTER  (talk) 08:10, January 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: More paintings from Olioster.

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 * 1) Looked it over, made a minor alteration to the wording in the Bts. Looks solid.  And nice prison design.  I may borrow it.  Trak Nar  Ramble on 08:16, January 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Looks good, although a bit rough brushing. –Tm_T (Talk) 10:23, January 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) - TK-299  (Click Here) Imperial_Emblem.svg 12:06, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

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 * Why is this conjectural, when the title of the painting is written on it? IMO, you can assume, that the Aurebesh letters are the actual title. Darth Morrt 15:29, January 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * In game, the painting is simply called "Rare painting". If you think it's same to assume, then I'll make the changes.  OLIOSTER  (talk) 21:19, January 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * I think it's safe to assume, but I leave the decision to you. If you do it, you should mention in the Bts, that painting's in-game name is "Rare painting." Darth Morrt 04:41, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

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Beginnings

 * Nominated by:  OLIOSTER  (talk) 22:11, January 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: I think I should be called the Painting Guy.

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 * 1) You can't come up with your own nickname! Menkooroo 17:20, January 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2)  Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 01:32, January 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Darth Morrt 15:32, January 20, 2011 (UTC)

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The Lost Twenty: Dooku's Rise

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 03:26, January 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: HM

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Unidentified Lamproid (Jabba's court)

 * Nominated by: Menkooroo 05:04, January 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: How I pine for Dice Ibegon... longing sigh...

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 * 1) I raise my blood-based cocktail to you, sir! ~ SavageBob 16:30, January 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Hanzo Hasashi 19:34, January 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Darth Morrt 16:00, January 20, 2011 (UTC)

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 * Savage Dice: Cool nom! I noticed you removed Florn from the homeworld field. I'd say that it's reasonable to assume that's the homeworld based on the card name, though. (In other words, this is a Florn Lamproid, not a Tatooine Lamproid, and I think that's telling.) ~ SavageBob 05:06, January 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * I defer to your Lamproid expertise. Changed! And thank you for creating this article last year. This nom is just in time for tomorrow's main page FA... Menkooroo 05:09, January 18, 2011 (UTC)

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Keder

 * Nominated by: Hanzo Hasashi 00:28, January 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

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 * 1) Darth Morrt 16:02, January 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Menkooroo 17:29, January 20, 2011 (UTC)

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 * Are you sure we can say anything about his skin color from that image? It looks a bit darker than "light" to me --- might be best to leave that field blank. Menkooroo 05:47, January 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * With that in mind, I saw that it indeed could have been darker, so hard to say for sure. Changed. Hanzo Hasashi 18:11, January 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * Bts: Not his abilities, but his deploy cost is descreased on Coruscant. Darth Morrt 13:36, January 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * Got it. Hanzo Hasashi 18:11, January 19, 2011 (UTC)

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 * Should he be considered affiliated with the Republic and the Senate Guard, despite the fact he is an assassin merely using that as a cover? Hanzo Hasashi 00:41, January 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * Yeah, definitely. By infiltrating them, he did join them. Menkooroo 05:47, January 19, 2011 (UTC)

Enrichment Dome

 * Nominated by:  Holocron Greatholocron.jpg (Complain) 02:13, January 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: No CSWE entry. Lots of nice plants in that dome.

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 * IIRC, Obi-Wan is not an apprentice during his time in the Dome. Darth Morrt 04:50, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

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Main administration building (Eastern Enrichment Zone)

 * Nominated by:  Holocron Greatholocron.jpg (Complain) 02:35, January 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Yeah, that really is everything known about the place. Nothing at all.

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 * Could have an (albeit short) infobox. --Vandar Tokare42 (Talk to the hand) 02:46, January 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * Added, though it seems pointless for such a tiny article.  Holocron Greatholocron.jpg (Complain) 03:27, January 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * That Rube
 * Contextify the Enrichment Dome, the Zone, and the Agri-Corp. (Not the cab &mdash;*URK* NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 03:06, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

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Dome wall secret annex

 * Nominated by:  Holocron Greatholocron.jpg (Complain) 04:09, January 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Why are all the corporations in my articles sneaky and evil? Again, no CSWE entry.

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Unidentified H'nemthe patron

 * Nominated by: Menkooroo 05:20, January 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: How I also pine for M'iiyoom Onith... *hopelessly romantic sigh*...

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 * 1)  Holocron Greatholocron.jpg (Complain) 03:15, January 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Darth Morrt 16:12, January 20, 2011 (UTC)

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 * "[...] Hands of Shon-Ju. They were drawn by Brian Kolchak." Is initially confusing, it would probably flow better if what "they" were is clarified. Other than that, it's a good article. Poor guy.  Holocron Greatholocron.jpg (Complain) 07:35, January 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * Changed to "the character was." Merci! Menkooroo 16:00, January 19, 2011 (UTC)

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