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Star Wars: Knights of the Old Republic

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk [[Image:Anakinsolo.png|20px]] 03:03, 25 August 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination Comments: I think it may finally be ready... NaruHina  Talk [[Image:Anakinsolo.png|20px]] 03:03, 25 August 2008 (UTC)

(0 AC/3 users/3 total)
Support
 * 1) I strongly feel that this is a good nomination. KotOR's article page was in something of shambles several months ago with a badly written, inconsistently tensed synopsis, revealing of plot details at the beginning, etc. The fact of the matter is though, a large amount of improvement has been done since then and it is a much better article than it was then. While I don't think it's worthy of featured article status, I definitely see it as worthy of being a "good article." Niirfa-sa 23:58, 5 September 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) After all my grammatical nit-picking, I think it's of GA standard. Soresumakashi 06:47, 18 September 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) I strongly concur. It's well-written, and it's greatly improved. Qui-Gon Reborn 05:03, 16 November 2008 (UTC)

Object **A specialist —either a normal Republic soldier, scout, or scoundrel. Suggest changing specialist and all other cases of it to player instead. There should be no space between specialist and the mdash. 22:32, 17 September 2008 (UTC) **The padawan then follows this map to a krayt dragon's cave and assisted a local hunter, Komad Fortuna, in killing it. Assisted should be assists. **The party baits, finds the beast, and kills it, retrieved the blade from its hide. Suggest rephrasing **The party was leaving the base with droid in hand when they were confronted by Selkath authorities with reports of shots fired within the embassy. Was should be is and were should be are. *Revelation aboard the Leviathan **''The potential students of the academy prove their worth by performing various tasks and gaining prestige. Some of the challenges are martial in nature while others were mental, but all require a certain commitment to the Sith ideals''. Prove should be proved, are should be were and require should be required. **Revan discovers the Rakatans were divided into several tribes. Were should be are. **Revan was able to break Bastila's resolve and persuaded her to turn back to the light. Was should be is and persuaded should be persuades. Yay! I'm done! Have fun fixing the article! Soresumakashi 10:41, 17 September 2008 (UTC)
 * 1) An excess of redlinks and the synopsis needs to be written in present tense.  Drewton  [[Image:Era-old.png|20px]] ( Drewton's Holocron ) 14:14, 25 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) *There is no limit towards how many redlinks can be in a GA. DC 15:50, 25 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) **Additionally, in-universe articles are to be written in past tense, per the Manual of Style. // ~mikah~  01:44, 28 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) **Redlinks I was wrong about then, but a synopsis is always written in present tense. Look at the film articles. Drewton  [[Image:Era-old.png|20px]] ( Drewton's Holocron ) 13:49, 28 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) ***Again, directly from the Manual of Style itself, "All in-universe articles should be in past tense, per 'A long time ago in a galaxy far, far away...'" Only out-of-universe articles (ie, George Lucas, John Williams) should be written in present tense. Despite whatever tense the film articles are written in, if its not past tense, its wrong. // ~mikah~  14:09, 28 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 6) ****This is not an in-universe article. Stylistically, plot summaries for anything almost anywhere are in the present tense&mdash;the MoS doesn't contradict this in any way, because this is an OOU article. "In contrast, articles about books, movies, games, or other real-life Star Wars material should obviously be written from an out-of-universe perspective, but should still be noted as such." Our OOU FAs also use this system, and so should this article. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 14:20, 28 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 7) *****I see what you mean now, I misread what I was reading. So that would be a prominent problem with the article. I'll go ahead and try to fix as much as I can for now. And sorry about the confusion, Drewton. // ~mikah~  14:27, 28 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 8) ******Fixed NaruHina  Talk[[Image:Anakinsolo.png|20px]] 03:59, 30 August 2008 (UTC)
 * There is no mention I can see that the soundtrack was composed by Jeremy Soule --Jinzler 09:33, 31 August 2008 (UTC)
 * Addressed NaruHina  Talk [[Image:Anakinsolo.png|20px]] 06:39, 1 September 2008 (UTC)
 * 1) This does sound kind of strict, but these are meant to be a showcase of our very best articles, so here goes:
 * Trapped on Taris
 * on the Hammerhead-class capital ship, the Endar Spire. Hammerhead should be in italics.
 * When the player wakes, Carth informs him of the situation and that they needed to find and rescue Bastila, whose escape pod had crash-landed somewhere on the planet. Needed should be need and had should be has.
 * and the slums of Lower City. Of Lower City should be of the Lower City.
 * impose a security lock down. Lock down is and should be one word.
 * that has been stolen from them by the Vulkars. Has should be had.
 * Ironically, when they found her. Found should be find.
 * Zaalbar has been captured. Has should be had.
 * The group venture into the sewers, the trio track down and rescue Zaalbar from the slavers. Suggest rephrasing.
 * They Raid the Vulkar Base. Raid should not be capitalized.
 * Afterwards, they return to Gadon and the Beks, they stay the night before going to the swoop race the next morning. Suggest rephrasing
 * At the swoop race, the neophyte racer manages to win the race. Could we just say that the player won the race? There are too many uses of race, and neophyte is a bad word.
 * Before he could accept his prize however, Brejik broke the deal at the last moment, claiming the player has cheated by using the prototype accelerator. Could should be can and broke should be breaks.
 * Bastila breaks free and a fight ensued. Ensued should be ensues.
 * Brejik and his Vulkar thugs could not defeat them and die in the lightfight. Lightfight is defined as a fight where both sides use blasters. Bastila was using a double vibro and we don't know what Revan used. And the sentence needs a full stop. Basic grammar here.
 * Canderous recommends the leader of the party to Davik for hire as a ploy. Last I heard, a ploy was a gambit.
 * It can also mean "trick." NaruHina  Talk
 * Other than that, fixed. NaruHina  Talk [[Image:Anakinsolo.png|20px]] 23:31, 17 September 2008 (UTC)
 * Second Star Map: Tatooine
 * As he and the others left the cave. Left should be leave.
 * Fixed NaruHina  Talk [[Image:Anakinsolo.png|20px]] 22:15, 17 September 2008 (UTC)
 * Third Star Map: Kashyyyk
 * As a reward for their aid, Freyyr gives his only surviving son Bacca's Ceremonial Blade and allows him to come out of exile and was no longer branded a madclaw. Suggest rephrasing.
 * Shortly thereafter, the Wookiees of the village united under their new chieftain, Freyyr, and rebelled against Czerka with the aid of the party. United should be Unite and rebelled should be rebel.
 * Fixed NaruHina  Talk [[Image:Anakinsolo.png|20px]] 22:32, 17 September 2008 (UTC)
 * Fourth Star Map: Manaan
 * The two were the only Human scientists still alive and were trapped in the facility. Both were's should be ares
 * the padawan persuades them to tell him what they knew. Knew should be know.
 * which was responsible for the Selkath's insanity. Was should be is.
 * Fixed NaruHina  Talk [[Image:Anakinsolo.png|20px]] 23:07, 17 September 2008 (UTC)
 * For every question he answers incorrectly, Bastila was tortured. Was should be is.
 * Meanwhile the padawan's pick is able to infiltrate the Leviathan. Suggest rewording padawan's pick.
 * Seeing nothing else that they could do. Could should be can.
 * Fixed NaruHina  Talk [[Image:Anakinsolo.png|20px]] 22:32, 17 September 2008 (UTC)
 * Fifth Star Map: Korriban
 * Are you sure that should be in past tense? NaruHina  Talk [[Image:Anakinsolo.png|20px]] 22:09, 17 September 2008 (UTC)
 * Sorry, my mistake. Both are acceptable. Soresumakashi 06:47, 18 September 2008 (UTC)
 * Crash-landing on an unknown world
 * Though he was required to enter alone, Juhani and Jolee, after receiving a vision that warned them that Revan was in danger, joined him at the last minute against the Elders' protests. Warned should be warn, both was and was should be is and is. Joined should be join.
 * They had the vision before which showed them that Revan is in danger.
 * Revan and the others joined the Republic's assault on the Star Forge. Joined should be join.
 * Fixed NaruHina  Talk [[Image:Anakinsolo.png|20px]] 22:51, 17 September 2008 (UTC)
 * The Star Forge
 * Fixed NaruHina  Talk [[Image:Anakinsolo.png|20px]] 22:09, 17 September 2008 (UTC)

From the Pasta Bowl of Fiolli: &mdash;  Master Aban Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 22:35, 26 September 2008 (UTC) &mdash; Master Aban Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 17:03, 22 October 2008 (UTC)
 * First off, the article isn't sourced fully. In fact, it isn't even 75% sourced. The first citation I found was the last paragraph of section five. Every section outside of the intro needs to be sourced.
 * I would like to emphasize that this nomination will not be approved by the AgriCorps until everything is source, including the infobox.  Master Aban Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 17:03, 22 October 2008 (UTC)
 * I don't know about the rest, but for reference sections like plot summary wouldn't need ref tags, as they are self-sourcing. - Lord Hydronium 16:51, 28 October 2008 (UTC)
 * Also, the infobox is now sourced. NaruHina  Talk [[Image:Anakinsolo.png|14px]] 01:35, 31 October 2008 (UTC)
 * The article is completely sourced. phew NaruHina  Talk [[Image:Anakinsolo.png|14px]] 06:03, 27 November 2008 (UTC)
 * "While KotOR does not have as much evident cut content as its sequel, Star Wars Knights of the Old Republic II: The Sith Lords, it is still present." &mdash; OR. Reword or find a citation for this.
 * I personally don't feel that qualifys as OR in that it is a lead in to the cut content and we need a separate article for kotor2 cut content. NaruHina  Talk [[Image:Anakinsolo.png|20px]] 03:29, 28 September 2008 (UTC)
 * I strongly beg to differ. If you are inferring or have deduced that this game has less cut content and this is not supported anywhere else, then it is OR. Please find a citation or reword the sentence.  Master Aban Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 05:29, 1 October 2008 (UTC)
 * Is this citation good? NaruHina  Talk [[Image:Anakinsolo.png|14px]] 13:42, 3 October 2008 (UTC)
 * I'm sorry, it is not. If you can find documentation that compares the cut content, then I will allow it. Otherwise, there is no quantifiable way of determining which would have included more.  Master Aban Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 17:03, 22 October 2008 (UTC)
 * Removed NaruHina  Talk [[Image:Anakinsolo.png|14px]] 03:00, 2 November 2008 (UTC)
 * "It features the planet Sleheyron&hellip;" What is it? The game? Sleheyron is not in the game. Reword.
 * Reworded. NaruHina  Talk [[Image:Anakinsolo.png|20px]] 03:29, 28 September 2008 (UTC)
 * "The existence of a cut planet can be also deduced&hellip;" &mdash; OR.
 * Again, it leads into it but reworded. NaruHina  Talk [[Image:Anakinsolo.png|20px]] 03:29, 28 September 2008 (UTC)
 * Same as before: Find a citation or reword. Master Aban Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 05:29, 1 October 2008 (UTC)
 * I did reword it. NaruHina  Talk [[Image:Anakinsolo.png|14px]] 13:42, 3 October 2008 (UTC)
 * I added a lot of fact tags to the page where there was definite missing of citation. Please look into these.
 * I believe that they have all been taken care of. NaruHina  Talk [[Image:Anakinsolo.png|14px]] 07:27, 22 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Section six has too many short paragraphs please restructure this section.
 * There is no source list. There are many KotOR supplements that are OOU which can be used to further beef up this article.
 * There are two very important ones: here and here.
 * Plus, Chronicles probably has some information as to further development and tying in storylines.
 * Added NaruHina  Talk [[Image:Anakinsolo.png|20px]] 03:29, 28 September 2008 (UTC)
 * Ok, so there is a basic source list. Now, the citations from these documents are very important.  Master Aban Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 05:29, 1 October 2008 (UTC)
 * The plot which is described in section two is very much a play-by-play of the game. While this isn't necessary bad, it is too detailed and only one means of game completion.
 * There is no mention that planets can be completed in any order.
 * From atop the synopsis: "(Note: This is based on the canonical male light side version of the game and assumes that the planets are visited in the order Dantooine, Tatooine, Kashyyyk, Manaan and Korriban. Gender, Force alignment, order of planets visited and other variables can differ depending on the input of the player.)" NaruHina  Talk [[Image:Anakinsolo.png|20px]] 05:20, 28 September 2008 (UTC)
 * Ok, I missed that. My apologies. However, you should use the gameLS and endgame tags as needed throughout the article. The further detailing of this can be left where you have it, but I wouldn't use "Note:" or put it in parenthesis.  Master Aban Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 05:29, 1 October 2008 (UTC)
 * Fixed. NaruHina  Talk [[Image:Anakinsolo.png|14px]] 07:39, 22 November 2008 (UTC)
 * There is no mention that Calo Nord can appear in multiple places, as can Darth Bandon.
 * Addressed in the Alternate Stories NaruHina  Talk [[Image:Anakinsolo.png|20px]] 05:20, 28 September 2008 (UTC)
 * The middle of this section lacks pictures and the ones clustered above are too close together.
 * Addressed NaruHina  Talk [[Image:Anakinsolo.png|14px]] 13:42, 3 October 2008 (UTC)
 * In that case, could you define the "middle" of the article. NaruHina  Talk [[Image:Anakinsolo.png|14px]] 03:00, 2 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Also, there has been an Alternate Stories section for a while. I am in the middle of sourcing it now. NaruHina  Talk [[Image:Anakinsolo.png|14px]] 07:32, 22 November 2008 (UTC)
 * There is no section about primary characters. Characters are listed, but not explained with relation to their role in the game. Please see Star Wars: Tales of the Jedi for a good example of how this is done.
 * There is now a budding main character section, albeit still under construction. NaruHina  Talk [[Image:Anakinsolo.png|14px]] 08:15, 11 October 2008 (UTC)
 * Finished. NaruHina  Talk [[Image:Anakinsolo.png|14px]] 23:42, 14 October 2008 (UTC)
 * Honestly, this is just from a cursory look. I really didn't read too much of the article. Once these things have been addressed, I'll be happy to look at it again.
 * Two other things before I take another look at the nomination:
 * There is a lot of information missing from the article about conception, creation and production, supplemental media, and the critical reaction seems to be bare bones. Please take a look again at Star Wars: Tales of the Jedi to see the structure. I really want to see "Conception," "Production," and "(Supplemental) Media" sections. Also, I would like to see the different story arcs to have the seealso template used to link to the various incidents, from Attack on the Endar Spire and Rescue of Bastila Shan to Skirmish aboard the Leviathan and the final battles.
 * I felt it superfluous but I'll try. NaruHina  Talk [[Image:Anakinsolo.png|14px]] 13:16, 24 October 2008 (UTC)
 * Conception was added but because there were no real changes to the script, it can't be much longer. NaruHina  Talk [[Image:Anakinsolo.png|14px]] 04:25, 25 November 2008 (UTC)
 * All of the characters are completely new, and some of the locations are brand new as well. Surely there is concept art for these individuals and places. There must, therefore, be someone who drafted these things and bantered around ideas. The Sunrider controversy also came into play during both conception and (I believe) production as it skewed the story away from Vima Sunrider and to a renaming of Bastila Shan and Juhani. Brief mention of all this can easily be included in this section.  Master Aban Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 22:05, 28 November 2008 (UTC)
 * I'm also unsure how to write a production section seeing as it is only a single game. NaruHina  Talk [[Image:Anakinsolo.png|14px]] 01:52, 27 November 2008 (UTC)
 * How long did it take to record the voiceovers? Were there changes in casting? How long did it take to do the graphics? Were there any glitches that postponed (or almost postponed) release? Discuss how the graphics were put together; changes made to the concept art, etc. Maybe a mention of the Sunrider controversy might be useful here if it is applicable to changes made. There are a lot of different angles that can be taken when exploring this.  Master Aban Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 22:05, 28 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Youtube is not a source. Youtube might show a possible outcome, but should not be used as a source. Instead, please cite the game and the scene it comes from. Then, if you feel it is necessary, show an alternate link to Youtube to highlight a possible outcome.
 * Fixed. NaruHina  Talk [[Image:Anakinsolo.png|14px]] 13:09, 28 October 2008 (UTC)

Vote to remove nomination (AgriCorps only)
 * 1) Seems to be going nowhere.  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  23:42, 26 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) *Technically, NaruHina is still working on it, but it still has a very, very long way to go.  Master Aban Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 22:05, 28 November 2008 (UTC)

Comments
 * I'm pretty sure the excess redlink template should be at the top of the article, as per wookieepedia's page layout policies. Soresumakashi 06:47, 18 September 2008 (UTC)
 * Moved NaruHina  Talk [[Image:Anakinsolo.png|20px]] 21:07, 19 September 2008 (UTC)

Super Star Destroyer

 * Nominated by: VT-16 10:49, 28 October 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Here we go agaaain. I tried to rewrite most of it to simply reflect the various types and their histories, not list all the Executors and what they did. Hopefully it will pass "good" this time. :) VT-16 10:49, 28 October 2008 (UTC)

(0 AC/0 users/0 total)
Support

Object
 * 1) Toprawa
 * 2) *Many things are not sourced.
 * 3) *The article should include an infobox.
 * 4) *In this instance, intro sourcing is really unnecessary, and should be worked into the article proper.
 * 5) *These lists are really unnecessary. Rather, the article would benefit from a section that enumerates and briefly describes each SSD.
 * 6) *Source list should be in order by OOU publication date; additionally, the Source list seem woefully brief. I'm sure there are many more items, very likely with more information that could be included. Toprawa and Ralltiir 16:09, 28 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 7) *It seems like you're getting the right idea of what I'm referring to. In response to your comment below about each Executor-class ship going only in the Executor-class article, that, respectfully, is where you're mistaken. The significance of this article is its incredibly broad scope of information. It encompasses everything that is considered a Super Star Destroyer, down to the very last ship. For this article to be comprehensive, it should discuss each individual ship. Not in lurid detail, of course, but each one should be given its own brief topic. As an example of how this article could be best sectioned, look at the Rakehell Squadron article to see how each pilot of the squadron is given their own subsection. That could be applied here to each individual ship class, and then subsection by each individual ship of that class. Indeed, this article is going to be very long, by simple virtue of its very broad scope. Also, for the Appearances and Source lists, again, as a result of this article's broad coverage, these lists should identify every single appearance and source in which a Super Star Destroyer appears. That means every Executor source, every Iron Fist source, etc. Toprawa and Ralltiir 17:47, 29 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 8) IFYLOFD
 * 9) *Toprawa got most of my objections, but I do have one little thing. Give context on Palpatine. Who is he?  IFYLOFD  ( And now, young Skywalker, you will die. ) 19:38, 28 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 10) Your joking, right? The article breaks Rules 3, 4, 10, and it has no info box image. It certainly doesn't cover all the sources, it doesn't use all available references, and half the article is a list, breaking the MoS. The BtS needs to expanded, sourced, and removed of all unsourced speculation. I also believe that the info you deleted did more harm than good to the article, which could almost be counted as vandalism, since it was sourced, relevant information. Replace the info you deleted, though keep the info you added as well. Expand it greatly, and fix the numerous POV issues as well. DC 01:08, 29 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 11) Jinzler
 * 12) * The appearances are not in chronological order --Jinzler 22:43, 29 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 13) **I see this has now been addressed
 * 14) * SSDs do not appear in The Core of Corruption like the article says, one is mentioned --Jinzler 22:43, 29 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 15) * The Core of Corruption and Jaws of the Sarlacc in the appearances list should have the WizardsCite template, as they are from Wizards.com --Jinzler 22:43, 29 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 16) * An SSD appears in Allegiance, this is missing from the list of appearances --Jinzler 22:43, 29 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 17) *There are many other appearances missing --Jinzler 22:43, 29 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 18) **Please familiarize yourself with the clause, which your middle three objections fall under. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 23:10, 29 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 19) ***Sorry, I have now and I have addressed those issues --Jinzler 21:29, 2 November 2008 (UTC)

Comments
 * Would the brief class descriptions go in the "characteristics" section? There's already 19 source present. There are not many left that I can remember. Most early sources just repeated info about the Executor much of which is now outdated. But other than that there's nothing else to add. VT-16 20:40, 28 October 2008 (UTC)
 * Added more info on each class in a separate section. Got more sourcing. Removed BtS as it was just opinion. Executor ships by individual names goes in the Executor-class article, not here, that's why they were removed. Hope this is getting better. This is for a good status, not a great one. I don't even know what's required for that, so I aimed low. Don't know what more info I can cram into this that isn't already there. =/ Will do a sourced collage for the info box picture when I have time. VT-16 10:03, 29 October 2008 (UTC)
 * It would be best if you could post these changes underneath my individual objections, so we can discuss each objection respectively. Toprawa and Ralltiir 17:47, 29 October 2008 (UTC)
 * I agree on including every source, but every last SSD mentioned? I hope it's not going to be as broad in the Star Destroyer article as well. That's potentially thousands of ships. Not to mention the cruiser one. I just disagree that this should deal with every individual ship, and not just the broader classifications under the term. I think I'll add the Executor variants under the Executor tag, but other than that, I don't see why this article has to have every single ship. There's no single ships in the frigate, destroyer or cruiser articles. Of course, that could be expanded, but for something like "cruiser", it would be a mini-encyclopedia all by itself. So far, I've only included ships that have a physical particularity about themselves. VT-16 18:33, 29 October 2008 (UTC)
 * VT-16, I understand you might be a little less familiar with the GAN process, but Toprawa is correct in that this article will be quite large, even under the "broad coverage" descriptor. And yes, the Star Destroyer and cruiser articles should, in all reality, be mammoth articles ranging in the hundreds of kilobytes in order to be considered "broad". There is so much information. You can talk briefly about each ship (read:A paragraph or two at minimum) in the history section, but citing the frigate, destroyer and cruiser articles, which are not GA and are in sore need of serious expansion, will not get you anywhere. That's just the way it is, and it won't be changing any time soon, even if it means this article is not GA'd. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 19:29, 29 October 2008 (UTC)
 * No need to take that tone, I was genuinely asking, because I've never seen anything quite as large as what is being proposed, anywhere on this site. (Except for the Palpatine or Anakin/Vader articles, heh.) Either way, did more organizing and found as many sources as possible. Some aren't really locked down with a date, and I need help on those. The Databank and FF ones. I'll leave the mini-bios for later, too tired now. VT-16 21:23, 29 October 2008 (UTC)
 * Sorry, wasn't trying to come off as snippy. But yes, we do have delusions of grandeur when it comes to article size. ;-) And I humbly beg to differ. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 00:40, 30 October 2008 (UTC)
 * Point taken. =X Well, that's certainly something to strive for. I only doubt it will happen for this article, even with having a small mention of every ship, there's limits to how much actual info we've actually got. VT-16 07:49, 30 October 2008 (UTC)
 * @Jinzler: Well, the problem is, I haven't read all the books that might have it, so I don't know all of them. That's why I need help. I've only gotten the ones that are listed on the Executor pages, for the most part, and that's what I know. =/ VT-16 07:51, 30 October 2008 (UTC)
 * VT, if I were trying to make this article a GA, here's some things I'd probably do:
 * Get rid of the collage, and stick with a good picture of an Executor-class SSD. I understand why you'd want a collage in the infobox, but isn't a collage technically fanart?
 * Remove the sections on the individual classes. The way it looks now, there really doesn't seem to be any info in those sections that are all that relevant to the article as a whole, and any info that might be relevant could easily be merged with the other sections. Besides, by just glancing through them, you have some classes listed that have never (to my knowledge) been called SSDs.
 * I'd probably also cut back on the number of images in the article. I could understand why you'd want to keep them, but unless/until you get more info, they just seem to be one on top of the other.
 * To be honest, I don't think this is the type of article that can be made into a GA, but feel free to prove me wrong. And if you need any assistance, I'd be glad to help. Grand Moff Tranner [[Image:Imperial Department of Military Research.svg|20px]] (Comlink) 11:11, 30 October 2008 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the help, but I think T&R meant for it to be structured like that. As for the profile image, it's not fanart if only offical images are used/cropped together (and sourced in the image info), and that's exactly the reason why I chose a collage of different designs, not picking one class only. The classes and singular designs get mentioned for being of the types lumped together as SSDs. I think I will do a similar rewrite and reworking on the SD article down the road, removing the "ships similar to" list. VT-16 11:32, 30 October 2008 (UTC)


 * Bringing this up now, since I don't know what else to add to the article. Any comments, positive/negative? VT-16 08:28, 6 November 2008 (UTC)

Palleus Chuff

 * Nominated by:  Pranay Sobusk  ~  Talk  14:54, 9 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: I tried one more for GA.

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 * 1)  IFYLOFD  ( And now, young Skywalker, you will die. ) 21:05, 18 November 2008 (UTC)

Object  IFYLOFD  ( And now, young Skywalker, you will die. ) 01:18, 10 November 2008 (UTC) Comments
 * 1) IFYLOFD:
 * 2) * In the intro: "In 20 BBY the Galactic Republic government asked him to play Yoda in reality going to a mission to Ithor, while the real Yoda was on a secret mission to Vjun with two Masters and two Padawans." Split up and/or reword this sentence.
 * 3) **Addressed
 * 4) * "Due to that small size, he often portrayed characters that he absulotely disliked." Why did his small size force him to play characters he disliked?
 * 5) **Addressed
 * 6) * "Chuff should play Yoda in reality going to a mission to Ithor." This confuses me a little. Is he playing Yoda or going on a mission to Ithor? Clear this up a little.
 * 7) **Addressed
 * 8) * "He also did not have the heart to answer the journalist's question." Who is the journalist?
 * 9) **Addressed
 * 10) * The article could use a good copy-edit.
 * 11) **I have tried it as far as possible. If you still see something, please advise.
 * 12) *"The Dark Jedi Asajj Ventress heart about Chuff's mission in the media and decided to lie in wait for him, because she knew that a dead Yoda would be a catastrophe for the Jedi Order." Why would Yoda's death be catastrophic?
 * 13) **Addressed
 * 14) * The prose itself is a bit choppy. Merge some short sentences that distupt the flow of the article together.
 * 15) **Also tried this as far as possible. If you still see something, please advise.
 * 16) * "After Yoda had already done four of five" Four of five of what?
 * 17) **Addressed
 * 18) * Any quotes?
 * 19) **Added one, the rest are only such simple quotes like "Thank you." or "May the Force be with you.". Thank you for the review.  Pranay Sobusk  ~  Talk  21:22, 16 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 1) Chack Attack:
 * 2) *"enjoyed playing roles, especially playing heros." Could be phraed better.
 * 3) **Addressed
 * 4) *Clarify the "as he was going to a mission" bit in the intro.
 * 5) **Addressed
 * 6) *"Asajj Ventress intended to kill Chuff because she felt confident that Yoda flew the courier." Bad wording.
 * 7) **Addressed
 * 8) *"because the play got good criticism from the media, for example by the TriNebulon News." This reads very awkwardly.
 * 9) **Addressed
 * 10) *"There was also a fan called Charpp who watched Jedi! 15 times." Only include if you can tie it in to the article better.
 * 11) **Removed, because it is not really important for the life of Palleus Chuff.
 * 12) *"When he was finally on his own, one of his major goals was not to disappoint Yoda. For that reason, he ignored his thinkings of a killer droid shooting him. It was eventually an easy job for him to cut off the supports off the Last Call by using the lightsaber Yoda gave him." These sentences don't tie well together.
 * 13) **Rephrased
 * 14) *"He instantaneously went to the turbolifts after that where he already imagined his own death, when Yoda suddenly arrived." Bad wording.
 * 15) **Rephrased.
 * 16) *"In addition, his colleagues eventually saw his witty qualities. Since childhood, Chuff had the fear of flying as well as the fear of closed spaces." I'd suggest you split this second sentence into the start of a new paragraph.
 * 17) **Addressed
 * 18) *"Another important thing at that time was Yoda's safety. Therefore, he warned him of the battle droids that were looking for him." Also, poor phrasing here.
 * 19) **Addressed
 * 20) *There are several spelling and grammatical errors. I apologize for not fixing this myself, but I think it'd be good for you to do this. (Also, after cleaning some stuff up, Wikia locked the site, erasing my edit).
 * 21) **I corrected every error I could find.
 * 22) *Also, should the play be italicized? Check the book.
 * 23) **Addressed (Yes, it is italicized.)
 * 24) *A good copyedit would go a long way towards making this article better. Concentrate on cleaning up the prose throughout the article; there are many instances where things read poorly and that drags the article down. I may have some poor stuff later; deal with this for now and we'll see how that goes. And don't get worried if this seems like a lot. It's not as bad as you may think.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 21:37, 24 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 25) **I have cleaned up every poor sentence/wording I could see. If you still see something - which may be the case as wording is not one of my strengths - please advise. Thank you for the review.  Pranay Sobusk  ~  Talk  20:14, 29 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 26) Farlstendoiro: Greetings, my first time objecting. Small thing.
 * 27) *In the intro, the following string of characters appears twice: her ship, the Last Call. I think it could be reworded, and the second time it should not be a hyperlink. IMHO, and I am open to discussion if needed.--Skippy Farlstendoiro 12:21, 28 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 28) **Reworded. Thank you for the review.  Pranay Sobusk  ~  Talk  12:02, 29 November 2008 (UTC)

Juno Eclipse

 * Nominated by: Darth Nikolai 05:14, 10 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: It's past the spoiler period, it's been a decent amount of time, let's make this a Good Article

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Object  IFYLOFD  ( And now, young Skywalker, you will die. ) 05:32, 10 November 2008 (UTC) NaruHina Talk  14:48, 12 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 1) IFYLOFD:
 * 2) *Intro needs expansion.
 * 3) *Unsourced infobox.
 * 4) *Unsourced paragraphs in Imperial Pilot and End Game.
 * 5) *P&T needs expansion.
 * 6) *In intro, context needed on Battle of Callos and Darth Vader.
 * 7) *"It was largely because of her father's distance and his admiration of Imperial service that Juno became the youngest cadet to be accepted into the Corulag Academy at the age of 14." Why would her father's distance allow her to be accepted to the Academy?
 * 8) *More info is needed on the trips to Nar Shaddaa, Raxus Prime, and Felucia.
 * 1) Grand Moff Tranner:
 * 2) *In addition to more info on all the missions Starkiller undertook in the Xbox 360/PS3 version of the game, there needs to be some mention of the missions to the Jedi Temple that he undertook in the PS2/PSP/Wii version.
 * 3) *Context needed on Shaak Ti, Maris Brood, Bail Organa, Mon Mothma, Garm Bel Iblis, etc.
 * 4) *Succession box needs to be sourced. Grand Moff Tranner [[Image:Imperial Department of Military Research.svg|20px]] (Comlink) 12:16, 10 November 2008 (UTC)
 * What is the canonicity of the differences between the wii versions and the xbox/ps3? I authored the bulk of the article and went mostly by the novel which didn't mention the temple at all.Darth Nikolai 19:47, 10 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Per an article on StarWars.com, the temple levels will be playable in an upcoming add-on to the game. Regardless, such levels would still have happened even if they hadn't appeared in the other version or novel. Grand Moff Tranner [[Image:Imperial Department of Military Research.svg|20px]] (Comlink) 20:52, 10 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 1) NaruHina:
 * 2) *Where is the dark side ending?
 * 3) *Might be able to squeeze in Visions of the Blade into the Bts
 * 4) *Overall expansion as it seems too short.

Comments

Vindoo Barvel

 * Nominated by:  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 23:42, 11 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: My first GA nom under the new system. It's on The Shooter.

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 * 1) It's all good. —Tommy9281 [[Image:Dark Side Master TotG.jpg|20px]] ( Peace is a lie ) 01:37, 14 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 2)  IFYLOFD  ( And now, young Skywalker, you will die. ) 01:28, 15 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 3)  Pranay Sobusk  ~  Talk  14:41, 16 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) Interesting character. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie ) 09:13, 17 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) Well written. Good job. Grand Moff Tranner [[Image:Imperial Department of Military Research.svg|20px]] (Comlink) 00:40, 19 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 6) Qui-Gon Reborn ( The ability to speak doesn't make you intelligent. )

Object  Pranay Sobusk  ~  Talk  13:25, 16 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 1) Just one question—did he die when he was shot down? Did the other pilots die as well? You mentioned eliminated, but did you mean eliminated from the excercise, or literally killed?  SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie ) 01:04, 15 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) *It was a training mission with powered-down lasers. None of them died. I'll try to clarify that.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 13:22, 15 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) Two small things:
 * 4) * Why do you use brackets in the quote?
 * 5) **The original quote has "he" where Vader is. It makes no sense without context on who he is, so I used the brackets to indicate that Vader is being mentioned.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 13:38, 16 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 6) * Please mention the flight duel against Vader in the intro. I think it's notable enough for the intro.
 * 7) **Added.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 13:38, 16 November 2008 (UTC)

Comments
 * No pictures, no better quotes. The only information revealed about Barvel is on one page in a story Vil Dance tells. And yes, the P&T stinks. But there's nothing revealed (that's explicitly stated) about his personality in the story. BTW, this article is about 450 words.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 23:42, 11 November 2008 (UTC)

Rianna Saren

 * Nominated by: QuiGonJinn The ability to speak does not make you intelligent.[[Image:Quigonheadshot.jpg|20px]] 20:18, 12 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: My first GA nom. Hope it's not so bad :)

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 * 1) For one's first GA nom, a very good job, QuiGon.  IFYLOFD  ( And now, young Skywalker, you will die. ) 02:09, 16 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 2)  Pranay Sobusk  ~  Talk  15:14, 18 November 2008 (UTC)

Object Good work.  IFYLOFD  ( And now, young Skywalker, you will die. ) 01:47, 15 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 1) Pranay Sobusk
 * 2) * Mention Zarien Kheev in the intro
 * 3) **Mentioned QuiGonJinn The ability to speak does not make you intelligent.[[Image:Quigonheadshot.jpg|20px]] 21:31, 13 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) * Change the fighting moves section into a Power and Abilities section with some context on her fighting moves
 * 5) **That will be hard to do. I've only played the Nintendo DS version and there are no such moves like Hammer of Ryloth and Winds of Mustafar. They appear only in PSP version. I'd appreciate if someone who played the game on PSP added it. However, I've added as much context as I could. QuiGonJinn The ability to speak does not make you intelligent.[[Image:Quigonheadshot.jpg|20px]] 13:36, 14 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 6) * Change your weapons section into an Equipment section, also with some more context
 * 7) **Done with the weapons. QuiGonJinn The ability to speak does not make you intelligent.[[Image:Quigonheadshot.jpg|20px]] 21:31, 13 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 8) ***Not bad, but I would prefer to see text instead of your list within the section. Replace this list with text, and you definitively have my vote.  Pranay Sobusk  ~  Talk  09:43, 16 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 9) ****Addressed. QuiGonJinn The ability to speak does not make you intelligent.[[Image:Quigonheadshot.jpg|20px]] 14:41, 16 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 10) * Is that Star Wars Lethal Alliance Homepage really official? Because I have never heard of it, and it is not in the Reliable sources list
 * 11) **It is official. On the Ubisoft site there is a link that proves it. QuiGonJinn The ability to speak does not make you intelligent.[[Image:Quigonheadshot.jpg|20px]] 21:31, 13 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 12) * How are all these external links useful? Some of them are not even describing Rianna.  Pranay Sobusk  ~  Talk  17:51, 13 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 13) **Removed all useless links. Changed one of them. QuiGonJinn The ability to speak does not make you intelligent.[[Image:Quigonheadshot.jpg|20px]] 21:31, 13 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 14) IFYLOFD:
 * 15) * Give context for Kyle Katarn and Darth Vader in the intro, and in the main body of the article.
 * 16) **Done, I think... QuiGonJinn The ability to speak does not make you intelligent.[[Image:Quigonheadshot.jpg|20px]] 20:09, 15 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 17) * Get rid of the speculation in the BtS.
 * 18) **Done. QuiGonJinn The ability to speak does not make you intelligent.[[Image:Quigonheadshot.jpg|20px]] 17:44, 15 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 19) * Give some mention of Kheev being employed by the Empire.
 * 20) **Mentioned. QuiGonJinn The ability to speak does not make you intelligent.[[Image:Quigonheadshot.jpg|20px]] 20:09, 15 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 21) * Give context to Leia.
 * 22) * Give context to Boba Fett.
 * 23) **Added some info on both Leia and Fett. I tried to describe who they are in a few words, so not to spoil the whole flow of the article. QuiGonJinn The ability to speak does not make you intelligent.[[Image:Quigonheadshot.jpg|20px]] 20:09, 15 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 24) * Give context to the Death Star.
 * 25) **Done. QuiGonJinn The ability to speak does not make you intelligent.[[Image:Quigonheadshot.jpg|20px]] 20:09, 15 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 26) * The P&T could probably be expanded, but at least try and make it flow better.
 * 27) **Reworded P&T. QuiGonJinn The ability to speak does not make you intelligent.[[Image:Quigonheadshot.jpg|20px]] 20:33, 15 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 28) * Where is the source for her being voiced by Julianne Buescher?
 * 29) **Sourced. Note: Julianne's official site claims that she voiced "Rianna" in Battlefront, but since there is no such character in BF, it must be a mistake. The article on MobyGames as well as on some other video game related sites have her credited in Lethal Alliance. QuiGonJinn The ability to speak does not make you intelligent.[[Image:Quigonheadshot.jpg|20px]] 17:44, 15 November 2008 (UTC)

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Jhor-Kai

 * Nominated by: --Eyrezer 17:46, 13 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Can't go wrong with a Jedi type...

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 * 1) Though, I'd like to see a tad mentioned in the P & A about his obvious knowledge of starship operation. —Tommy9281 [[Image:Dark Side Master TotG.jpg|20px]] ( Peace is a lie ) 19:49, 15 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) RPGA. RPGA. Yepeeee. --Skippy Farlstendoiro 15:38, 19 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) NaruHina  Talk [[Image:Anakinsolo.png|14px]] 18:49, 22 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 4)  Greyman ( Talk ) 20:59, 24 November 2008 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) No P&T? Otherwise, good work.  IFYLOFD  ( And now, young Skywalker, you will die. ) 01:53, 15 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) *Added
 * 3) It is stated in the article that he merely claimed to be a Jedi, but he has a Jedi infobox and is listed in the Category: Post-Ruusan Jedi. I think it should be changed, because we don't know for sure if he was one. QuiGonJinn The ability to speak does not make you intelligent.[[Image:Quigonheadshot.jpg|20px]] 18:14, 16 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) *This is a tricky one. He claimed to be a Jedi, clearly was skilled in the Force, was knowledgeable of the Force, and had a lightsaber. Sha'lia doubts he was one later, but she had never met one before... I may seek some advice. --Eyrezer 04:20, 1 December 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) **Having reviewed the sources again, and checking with some other users, I am satisfied that he was a Jedi. I have reworded some of the article and added a note in the BTS. --Eyrezer 05:05, 1 December 2008 (UTC)
 * 6) I don't think this is 250 words.  NaruHina  Talk [[Image:Anakinsolo.png|14px]] 03:51, 22 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 7) *It is. 321. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 14:33, 22 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 8) **OK then. NaruHina  Talk [[Image:Anakinsolo.png|14px]] 18:49, 22 November 2008 (UTC)

Comments
 * This isn't an objection, but could someone kill some of these redlinks?  IFYLOFD  ( And now, young Skywalker, you will die. ) 01:53, 15 November 2008 (UTC)
 * I agree. While it isn't a policy, I hate seeing redlinks in our showcased articles. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie ) 02:17, 15 November 2008 (UTC)

Peragus II

 * Nominated by: -- Darth tom (talk)  13:00, 16 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: I feel it meets the requirements.

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 * 1) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie ) 08:47, 18 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) Grand Moff Tranner [[Image:Imperial Department of Military Research.svg|20px]] (Comlink) 12:10, 18 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) Good work.  QuiGonJinn The ability to speak does not make you intelligent.[[Image:Quigonheadshot.jpg|20px]] 14:11, 18 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) Jedimca0(Do or Do Not, There is No Try) 17:55, 18 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 5)  IFYLOFD  ( And now, young Skywalker, you will die. ) 03:58, 21 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 6) Qui-Gon Reborn ( The ability to speak doesn't make you intelligent. )

Object Comments
 * 1) Grand Moff Tranner:
 * 2) * Some sentences and parts of sentences are not referenced.
 * 3) * Perhaps a picture of the mining facility, and maybe even one of the asteroid field exploding during the Ebon Hawk's escape. Grand Moff Tranner [[Image:Imperial Department of Military Research.svg|20px]] (Comlink) 15:35, 16 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) **I added an image, of the Ebon Hawk during it's escape. I'll address the sourcing soon. -- Darth tom (talk)  15:53, 16 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) From Jedimca0
 * 6) * The last paragraph of the "Skirmish at Peragus II" section needs to be referenced as well. --Jedimca0(Do or Do Not, There is No Try) 18:09, 16 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 7) SoresuMakashi
 * 8) * Another quote maybe?
 * 9) * Expand on the Peragus Mining Facility's destruction in the intro. Why was it destroyed? SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie ) 05:19, 17 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 10) **Added to the introduction, as requested. I did add a quote, however very few quotes refer to the Mining Facility, and even fewer to the planet itself, so this was a general quote from Kreia upon the Station.. -- Darth tom (talk)  17:42, 17 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 11) ***I thought there were a few Atton quotes lying around, especially in the scene where he first meets the Exile in the detention block. Maybe I'm just mistaken. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie ) 08:47, 18 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 12) Toprawa:
 * 13) * The article should conform to the Layout Guide's style for planet articles, including all relevant sections. Please add the appropriate sections and information to the article. You may use any of our current planet FAs/GAs as models. Toprawa and Ralltiir 21:58, 21 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 14) **I added a 'Description' and 'Locations' section, as per the Layout guide, however as Peragus is somewhat lacking in inhabitants, I didn't include that one. -- Darth tom [[Image:Imperial Emblem.svg|20px]] (Imperial Intelligence)  14:29, 22 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 15) *This needs some kind of greater context. What asteroid field? Was the asteroid field created as a result of its destruction? Also, a stray blast from what? From Sion? Don't assume the reader knows anything: "a stray blast in the field detonating the asteroid field"
 * 16) **I'm still confused about the asteroid field. What asteroid field? The nearby Peragus asteroid field? Why not specify, if so? Toprawa and Ralltiir 01:25, 25 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Ok, I'm confused. The infobox claims Peragus II is uninhabitable, but you say there is the mining facility on the planet, home to miners. How are they then surviving on the planet? Something should be explained in the Description section explaining the world is uninhabitable - perhaps adding onto what you have written to say, "...ravaged the world uninhabitable"? The next objection may tie into this one.
 * 1) *Going along with that, you say the mining facility is located on the exterior of the world. What does that mean, exactly? Is the facility raised high up in the atmosphere? Is it in orbit? Please explain this: "on the exterior of the planet."
 * 2) *This information in the Description section should instead be worked into the Locations section. It seems like you can also glean an Inhabitants section out of this to explain that, as I'm inferring from this, that there are no inhabitants, only Human miners: "with Peragus II also being devoid of any sort of Human settlements other than the Peragus Mining Facility"
 * 3) * Your referencing needs some serious work. There's no need to specify conversations between people and the like. Just list the source.
 * 4) *Please handle these objections to the first section, and I will continue my review. Toprawa and Ralltiir 19:16, 23 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) **Addressed. -- Darth tom [[Image:Imperial Emblem.svg|20px]] (Imperial Intelligence)  18:32, 24 November 2008 (UTC)

Atrivis 7

 * Nominated by: --Eyrezer 22:24, 17 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

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Object
 * 1) Toprawa:
 * 2) *One thing: Resistance fighter in what capacity? "Atrivis 7 was the homeworld of resistance fighter Sheeka Tull." Toprawa and Ralltiir 06:12, 18 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) IFYLOFD:
 * 4) *A word or two of context for Sheevis Tull.  IFYLOFD  ( And now, young Skywalker, you will die. ) 21:08, 18 November 2008 (UTC)

Comments
 * Is it really such a good idea to have all that speculation? Grand Moff Tranner [[Image:Imperial Department of Military Research.svg|20px]] (Comlink) 23:50, 17 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Lol. I've just been having this discussion with Toprawa and decided the best is to create an Atrivis article. Have a look at the new arrangement. --Eyrezer 03:03, 18 November 2008 (UTC)

Alderaan Ascendancy Contention

 * Nominated by: Tinwe 09:51, 19 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: I know, the Bts is ridiculously long when compared to the actual article, but I think all the points are valid, so I thought I'd give this a go. :)

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 * 1) Count me in.--Skippy Farlstendoiro 10:39, 19 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) Cull Tremayne 21:37, 19 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie ) 09:04, 20 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) Qui-Gon Reborn ( The ability to speak doesn't make you intelligent. )
 * 5)  Greyman ( Talk ) 21:01, 24 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 6)  IFYLOFD  ( And now, young Skywalker, you will die. ) 00:45, 26 November 2008 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) "The mediation team sent by the Galactic Senate resolved the dispute in favor of the Organas, although a marriage was called between the Antilles and Organa families." Is this missing a word? "a marriage was called" instead of "a marriage was called for"? Cull Tremayne 10:10, 19 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) *Whoops. Yes, for should have been there, and now it is. :) --Tinwe 15:13, 19 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) The same source that gives the current birth year for C'baoth also describes him as having a big white beard at 38 years of age, therefore it is entirely plausible that he may have looked 40 or so even in his twenties. Possibly needs to be noted. QuentinGeorge 05:31, 20 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) *Done. I hope my addition is sufficient&mdash;I didn't want to get any more specific as the article is not about C'baoth after all, even though his age and the timing of the contention are closely tied. :P I assume C'baoth was already a Master at the time (though, IIRC, it has not been stated anywhere in so many words). His article currently says he was 33 when achieving (or rather, assuming) the rank, so I would say he must have been at least in his thirties during the dispute (hence the "around 40 BBY" date). --Tinwe 16:45, 20 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) Surely there is a few relevant pictures that can be added, like, perhaps, C'baoth, or the Organa family logo, or even the planet Alderaan? QuentinGeorge 10:13, 21 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 6) *Added all three you suggested. Feel free to resize them or move them around, or even remove one if the page looks cluttered, but at least with my 1024x768 resolution the article looks quite nice. --Tinwe 12:15, 21 November 2008 (UTC)

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Kan Pojo

 * Nominated by:  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 21:49, 19 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: ChackProject Death Star continues.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 21:49, 19 November 2008 (UTC)

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 * 1) Well done, especially since there's so little on him to begin with. Grand Moff Tranner [[Image:Imperial Department of Military Research.svg|20px]] (Comlink) 00:24, 20 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie ) 09:10, 20 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 3)  IFYLOFD  ( And now, young Skywalker, you will die. ) 00:48, 26 November 2008 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Grand Moff Tranner:
 * 2) * In the intro, you mention the moon, and in the next sentence, you're suddenly talking about the conflict taking place in a city. As is, there's really nothing connecting the two to one another. Grand Moff Tranner [[Image:Imperial Department of Military Research.svg|20px]] (Comlink) 00:06, 20 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) **Tried to add some continuity.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 00:21, 20 November 2008 (UTC)

Comments
 * 1) All the info that's in the book is here, I believe. No pictures, the P&T is still lacking due to dearth of info available, and this article is short. Around 600 words, I believe.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 00:21, 20 November 2008 (UTC)

Theomet Danlé

 * Nominated by: Thefourdotelipsis 12:07, 20 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: It's not WTS.

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 * 1) May? Nice work though.  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  20:16, 20 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie ) 08:55, 21 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) Liar.  IFYLOFD  ( And now, young Skywalker, you will die. ) 01:25, 27 November 2008 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) IFYLOFD:
 * 2) * One thing: Contextify how he served Padme in the intro.  IFYLOFD  ( And now, young Skywalker, you will die. ) 00:51, 26 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) **Contextified. Thefourdotelipsis 07:35, 26 November 2008 (UTC)

Comments
 * I may have lied. Thefourdotelipsis 12:07, 20 November 2008 (UTC)

Darth Malak

 * Nominated by: Jedi Kasra (talk) 21:18, 20 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Drewton and I have worked on this article for a while, and I believe it's ready to be considered a good article.--Jedi Kasra (talk) 21:22, 20 November 2008 (UTC)

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Object  IFYLOFD  ( And now, young Skywalker, you will die. ) 01:50, 27 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 1) From the pages of NaruHina's Death Note
 * 2) *It seems OK but:
 * 3) *The him being in the Old Republic Era in the Infobox is not sourced
 * 4) *The language base in the Bts is unsourced
 * 5) *There is a Fact tag in the Bts.
 * 6) ** NaruHina Talk [[Image:Anakinsolo.png|14px]] 00:20, 21 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 7) Quotes in prose, speculation rampant in BtS, bullets in BtS, tiny paragraphs. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 13:19, 21 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 8) There's quotes in the middle of sections, that's against MoS, the double and triple refs aren't needed, some sections are just way too short, mainly article prose problems. It would also be good idea to copyedit the article, there are numerous grammatical errors. Watch for POV in the article, the intro, P&T, and P&A have loads of it in their respective sections. Also, the BtS, needs to be rid of speculation, bullets , then expanded with stuff that can be sourced, IE: interviews, actions figures, etc. DC 01:30, 24 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 9) It's IFYLOFD!:
 * 10) *More info on the "devices" in the intro.
 * 11) **Adressed. Drewton  [[Image:Era-old.png|20px]] ( Drewton's Holocron ) 13:36, 27 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 12) *Is there an article on Darth Revan's flagship? If so, add a link to it in the intro.
 * 13) *"The Sith Lord corrupted Shan, who he had once considered a threat, and made her his apprentice, replacing the slain Darth Bandon, whom Revan had killed." Reword and/or split up this sentence.
 * 14) **Adressed. Drewton  [[Image:Era-old.png|20px]] ( Drewton's Holocron ) 13:34, 27 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 15) *Context needed on Deesra Luur Jada and Lucien Draay.
 * 16) **Done. Drewton  [[Image:Era-old.png|20px]] ( Drewton's Holocron ) 14:09, 27 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 17) *More info on the "discovery" made by Adasca.
 * 18) *Context for Krynda Draay and Xamar.
 * 19) *Unsourced statements in BtS.

Comments
 * Took care of the quotes in the middle of sections, took out the bullets in BTS, him being part of the OR era is already sourced, will work on sourcing the language bases.--Jedi Kasra (talk) 20:53, 24 November 2008 (UTC)

Third Battle of Coruscant (Galactic Civil War)

 * Nominated by: -- Darth tom (talk)  21:55, 21 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: I referenced it after a discussion with Jedimca0 and, although short, I feel it's good to go.

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Object  IFYLOFD  ( And now, young Skywalker, you will die. ) 01:59, 27 November 2008 (UTC) Comments
 * 1) From the Moffship of Grand Moff Tranner:
 * 2) * Context on Thrawn, Drayson, Bel Iblis, and Mothma. Also some on the Battle of Bilbringi and the crystal gravfield trap.
 * 3) * You have Rieekan, Pellaeon, Home Guard Fleet, DP-20 gunships, X-wings, B-wings, v-150 ion cannons, Steadfast, Chimaera, and Death's Head all listed in the infobox - but they are absent from the body of the article.
 * 4) * After Molo Himron and his team sent into the Imperial Palace on Coruscant to capture the Solo twins and incriminate Mara Jade failed to capture the twins - pretty confusing as is. Should probably be broken into two sentences or reworded.
 * 5) *Also, which Steadfast are you referring to? Currently, what you're linking to is a disambig page. Grand Moff Tranner [[Image:Imperial Department of Military Research.svg|20px]] (Comlink) 15:19, 22 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 6) **First one's sorted. What do you mean by the second? -- Darth tom (talk)  08:30, 22 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 7) ***Fixed. -- Darth tom [[Image:Imperial Emblem.svg|20px]] (Imperial Intelligence)  15:49, 22 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 8) Lacking prelude section and significant amount of detail. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 10:55, 22 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 9) There are seven sources, yet you only use one, and I know some of these sources hold new info. Expand on those, and add a prelude section. DC 01:46, 24 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 10) SoresuMakashi
 * 11) *Quotes?
 * 12) *How did C'boath take control of the Chimaera's crew? Through physical force? Also change C'boath's taking control to something else.
 * 13) *Multiple sentences could use some rephrasing. I've fixed up a few in the prelude, but the rest is up to you.
 * 14) *One or two redunudant sentences and uses of the same word twice close to each other. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie ) 09:44, 26 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 15) Floyd is in the house:
 * 16) *Context needed on Jorus C'Baoth, the Solo twins, Molo Himron, Dorja, and Rieekan.
 * 17) *Split some paragraphs up in The battle section.

Oakie Dokes

 * Nominated by: Thefourdotelipsis 01:43, 23 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: It's just like I always say: Actually, I never always say this at all.

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 * 1) -  Cavalier One [[Image:FarStar Logo.jpg|20px]]( Squadron channel ) 11:21, 25 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 2)  IFYLOFD  ( And now, young Skywalker, you will die. ) 02:27, 27 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) She's hot.  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  14:01, 27 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) For the record, I bet I'm younger than Chack. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie ) 07:59, 28 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) DC 19:01, 28 November 2008 (UTC)

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 * 1) No quotes? DC 01:43, 24 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) *No quotes. Thefourdotelipsis 22:23, 24 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) **My bad, should have put that in the Comments section. DC 18:55, 28 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) A pic of Oakie in AotC?  SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie ) 09:29, 27 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) *Scoured the scene for a good shot, couldn't find one. Thefourdotelipsis 23:09, 27 November 2008 (UTC)

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 * THIS IS WTS. Thefourdotelipsis 01:43, 23 November 2008 (UTC)
 * No available quotes as far as I know; something sadly common with WTS. If the article explains me why Dokes's parents would feel any need to eat her ("would probably not even eat her themselves" Databank) when Swokes Swokes commonly carry relics of their deceased relatives in small pouches as good luch charms (Geonosis and the Outer Rim Worlds, and that's what I knew about Swokes Swokes corpse disposal techniques), then I'll be glad to support the nomination.
 * Well, since Dokes thought of her parents eating her as a given (i.e. not an exception to the rule, but expected) I would have thought that it was a part of Swokes Swokes culture established in the DB entry. I don't know if this works with GatORW, but perhaps they keep the bones...? There's no explanation in the DB as to why they would eat her either, which leads me to believe that the writer intended it to be a part of Swokes Swokes culture. Thefourdotelipsis 21:29, 24 November 2008 (UTC)
 * I see your point, but probably I did not make mine clear. As this Wookiee-article is the only reference to Swoken cannibalism, it should include some background on it, IMHO. Even if the Wookiee-article Swokes Swokes is updated with this information on their swokophagical habits (and I think it should), Oakie's article should be updated saying something like "This is the first reference to cannibalism in Swokes Swokes; when this was published, we only knew about Swokes Swokes bone disposal, but this DB entry provided insight about the rest of their corspe disposal tendencies." I would not be as annoying with something like that, but inhumation is very important for the Swokes Swokes upon GATORW. I will not oppose to this nomination, as I do not feel entitled to, but I will neither support it without this point - and believe me, I want to support it.--Skippy Farlstendoiro 07:46, 25 November 2008 (UTC)
 * I would say that would be more appropriate to the BtS of the Swokes Swokes article. It's not particularly relevant to Oakie. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 08:39, 25 November 2008 (UTC)

Spelunker probe droid

 * Nominated by: &mdash;Darthtyler (Talk) 04:18, 23 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: I tried my best...

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 * 1) -  Cavalier One [[Image:FarStar Logo.jpg|20px]]( Squadron channel ) 08:46, 27 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 2)  IFYLOFD  ( And now, young Skywalker, you will die. ) 00:53, 29 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie ) 08:02, 29 November 2008 (UTC)

Object  IFYLOFD  ( And now, young Skywalker, you will die. ) 18:54, 27 November 2008 (UTC) Comments
 * From the squadron briefing of Cavalier One:
 * 1) * In the Description section, some details on the droids specifications before its conversion to a battle droid is needed.
 * 2) **What do you mean?&mdash;Darthtyler (Talk) 20:37, 25 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) ***Basically, since the droid was converted from a mining droid, it should be noted what systems the droid had before its conversion (if known). - Cavalier One [[Image:FarStar Logo.jpg|20px]]( Squadron channel ) 10:34, 26 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) ****There. I split the section and added some content.&mdash;Darthtyler (Talk) 19:00, 26 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) * In Description: This enabled the droid to become transparent to observers. However, in the intro, you state: Thus, the droid did not actually make itself transparent, but made itself invisible. Which is it?
 * 6) **I changed both to "camouflaged." It makes sense now, thanks for catching that.&mdash;Darthtyler (Talk) 20:37, 25 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 7) * Under Clone Wars: During the battle, three of the chameleon droids used their cloaking device, presumably to hide from clone  troopers or Republic vehicles. "Presumably" is speculative; please reword or remove.
 * 8) **Deleted the last part of that sentence.&mdash;Darthtyler (Talk) 20:37, 25 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 9) * Context is needed on who Padmé Amidala, Gregar Typho, Yoda, C-3PO, and R2-D2 are. Also, any information on why they arrived for a rescue mission? Did they receive a distress signal, Force sense, etc?
 * 10) **Gave background on Yoda sensing the call for help and on all characters.&mdash;Darthtyler (Talk) 20:37, 25 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 11) * These units were presumably de-activated after the execution of the Separatist Council by Darth Sidious's new apprentice, Darth Vader. Again, speculative. Were they or were they not deactivated? -  Cavalier One [[Image:FarStar Logo.jpg|20px]]( Squadron channel ) 10:58, 25 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 12) **Deleted "presumably" because all of the droids were deactivated following the control signal.&mdash;Darthtyler (Talk) 20:37, 25 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 13) SoresuMakashi
 * 14) *I made a quite a few changes to make the article flow better.
 * 15) **Thank you.&mdash;Darthtyler (Talk) 22:20, 27 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 16) * The fact that they were refitted exploration droids needs to be said in the intro. I suggest something like Originally mining exploration droids, they were outfitted with weaponry for military service between senteces 2 and 3.
 * 17) **Done.&mdash;Darthtyler (Talk) 22:20, 27 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 18) * You need to explain the origin of the name of the droid (Spelunker) and what it means.
 * 19) **Done.&mdash;Darthtyler (Talk) 22:20, 27 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 20) IFYLOFD:
 * 21) * Lots of short, choppy sentences that mess up the flow. Combine some together.
 * 22) **I believe Soresumakashi fixed that.&mdash;Darthtyler (Talk) 22:20, 27 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 23) ***I just went through and fixed a few more. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie ) 05:41, 28 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 24) * What do you mean by "pure" cloaking device?
 * 25) **Explained.&mdash;Darthtyler (Talk) 22:20, 27 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 26) * "The Commerce Guild owned mining spots on several planets." Such as?
 * 27) **No available information, the databank and the New Essential Guide to Droids don't give any examples, and no other source gives any, either.&mdash;Darthtyler (Talk) 22:20, 27 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 1) Taking a second read through, there is 1 sentence I'm concerned about. Worried about Yoda's delayed return, Amidala destroyed several more droids with a blaster, along with her two droids, C-3PO and R2-D2. I suggest you reword this, because it sounds to me like 3PO and R2 were one of the droids she destroyed. You also use droid twice.  SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie ) 05:41, 28 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) *Fixed.&mdash;Darthtyler (Talk) 18:57, 28 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Since the combat version is radically different from the basic mining version, should we have articles for each different version? - Cavalier One [[Image:FarStar Logo.jpg|20px]]( Squadron channel ) 10:58, 25 November 2008 (UTC)
 * I don't know, since they were the same model.&mdash;Darthtyler (Talk) 20:37, 25 November 2008 (UTC)
 * While being the same model, they have different roles and specifications. Two articles may be warranted. What does anyone else think? - Cavalier One [[Image:FarStar Logo.jpg|20px]]( Squadron channel ) 10:34, 26 November 2008 (UTC)
 * I actually originally thought it was an article on only the combat version, and it was merely providing some background info on the origins of the droid. It was only until about halfway through the body that I realised it covered both sunbjects. That kinda wierded me out. I'm trying to think of an example article and see what that one has done, but I can't think of one. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie ) 10:39, 27 November 2008 (UTC)
 * That being said, I am marginally in favor of a split. It wasn't just some slapped together improvement like an extra sensor or something. This was a complete remodel and conversion, with entirely different roles from its predecessor. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie ) 10:48, 27 November 2008 (UTC)

U-E

 * Nominated by: Thefourdotelipsis 07:10, 23 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Potentially the most exciting thing you'll read all second. Thefourdotelipsis 07:10, 23 November 2008 (UTC)

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 * 1) Nah, IRC was more exciting. :P  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  22:12, 24 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) -  Cavalier One [[Image:FarStar Logo.jpg|20px]]( Squadron channel ) 10:39, 25 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie ) 05:52, 28 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) DC 19:02, 28 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 5)  IFYLOFD  ( And now, young Skywalker, you will die. ) 00:54, 29 November 2008 (UTC)

Object Comments
 * 1) Redlinks run rampant in the article, there are just way too many, so I went ahead and added the redlinks template until they're killed. Also, shouldn't there be a characteristics section in there? Good article besides from that. DC 01:37, 24 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) *The article now has a sum total of three redlinks, so I've removed the template. Characteristics sections are usually for articles on droid models, not the individuals, unless there are characteristics of note. There aren't, in this case. Thefourdotelipsis 21:52, 24 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) **Yeah, I'm not too familiar with droid articles, and I thought there was some sort of precedent because of Characteristic sections in other droid character articles. DC 18:55, 28 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) **You could pipememory bank to memory core I guess.

Seib Nod

 * Nominated by: Thefourdotelipsis 10:26, 23 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Tighter than a nun's...

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 * 1)  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  21:35, 23 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) -  Cavalier One [[Image:FarStar Logo.jpg|20px]]( Squadron channel ) 10:33, 25 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) I found myself liking this article in despite of myself.--Skippy Farlstendoiro 07:41, 27 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) DC 19:02, 28 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie ) 08:05, 29 November 2008 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) If Chee said it's supposed to be Seib Nob, then why is it at Seib Nod?  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  12:52, 23 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) *Whoops, got confuzzled there. Should be "Nod," and is fixed now. Thefourdotelipsis 21:34, 23 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) **Figured tha's what happened.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 21:35, 23 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) "So desperate was she to break free of her situation that she turned to crime as a way of raising money for herself." This sentence is POV. DC 01:40, 24 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) *Not actually POV, but changed nonetheless. Thefourdotelipsis 21:53, 24 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 6) **It was a crummy sentence to begin with, from your words, 4dot. :P DC 18:55, 28 November 2008 (UTC)

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 * May contain traces of WTS. Thefourdotelipsis 10:26, 23 November 2008 (UTC)

Didina Lippinoss

 * Nominated by: Darth Culator  (Talk) 01:47, 26 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Combine one part incredible boredom with two parts aversion to working on more important projects, and this is what you get. Consider it a supplementary article to Acky's upcoming Crev Bombaasa nom, full of wholesome Star Wars Galaxies deliciousness. -- Darth Culator  (Talk) 01:47, 26 November 2008 (UTC)

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 * 1) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie ) 23:54, 29 November 2008 (UTC)

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 * 1) Expand the intro. --Eyrezer 02:08, 28 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) *Ugh. I don't think the length of the article really demands much more intro, given the redundancy it would cause. -- Darth Culator  (Talk) 02:14, 28 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) **Right, that should be more than enough. Good thing there's no redlink requirement because I'm not going off on a Karrek Flim tangent. -- Darth Culator  (Talk) 02:22, 28 November 2008 (UTC)

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 * I find myself wishing we had forum-style emoticons so I could do an eye-roll at my comment above. -- Darth Culator  (Talk) 01:47, 26 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Bang, no redlinks. -- Darth Culator  (Talk) 01:26, 29 November 2008 (UTC)

Gjon

 * Nominated by:  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 15:28, 27 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: After trying desperately to get it to 1000 words, I got stuck at 957, so I'm putting it through this process in hopes that it'll get expanded when people point out things I'm missing.

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 * 1) Nice job. Hope I got you to 1000 words. Toprawa and Ralltiir 15:40, 28 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie ) 04:39, 2 December 2008 (UTC)
 * 1) Toprawa:
 * 2) * How is Fett riding up through the atmosphere here? "However, Fett discovered that his ship was missing and, with the help of Aia, was able to ride the winds up through Bogg 4's atmosphere and into Bogg 11's exosphere as the moon's atmospheres briefly crossed."
 * 3) **This part is confusing in the book, and not very well-explained. Aia can fly, sort of, (more like gliding upwards) up through one moon's atmosphere and then can cross over to another moon when the atmospheres overlap. The overlapping atmospheres do funky things to the gravity, making some patches in the air with essentially no gravity. It's called riding the vectors by Aia. He simply holds Fett when they go after Gjon using this method. I'm not quite sure how to explain this, but I'll do my best.
 * 4) * How, exactly, did they lose the credits when the ship accelerated? Did they flight out the hatch? "While the three had avoided death, they had lost almost all the credits they had stolen when the Slave I accelerated."
 * 5) **Added.
 * 6) * This kind of smells like a combination of OR/POV. Can you elaborate on this at all? "as he did have a sense of honor, though it was quite different from what many considered honor"
 * 7) **I reworded this, and I think it's better now.
 * 8) * Nothing touches on this in the biography. Please elaborate: " he gave the ambitious young Human advice when the two parted ways." Toprawa and Ralltiir 02:34, 28 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 9) **Added that info. Thanks Toprawa.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 12:08, 28 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 10) Forgive me if I'm wrong but I vaguely seem to remember Gjon stealing something of Fett's as they departed. That's why he insisted on giving Fett the remaining 100 creds and told him not to be too trusting (of Gjon). I think Fett discovered his treachery in a later installment in the series when he had to pay for food or docking fees. He was missing credits or something (got kinda pissed off too). If this is the case, you will have to change the biography and the last part of the P&T. And for the record, I bet I'm younger than you (can tell by the pic on your page).  SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie ) 00:46, 30 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 11) *It was Aia, not Gjon. The word "money" in the quote is supposed to be spelled with two "m's", BTW. And I'm 16, so it looks you like you are younger than me. Although I don't have a picture on my page, so you must have been looking at Toprawa's. :)  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 13:39, 30 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 12) **Whoops, that was Jorrel's image. Got mixed up. Why double m in money? Was he stuttering? SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie ) 05:21, 1 December 2008 (UTC)
 * 13) ***Just the way he talks.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 22:22, 1 December 2008 (UTC)
 * 14) ****Thanks for the explantion. I'm almost certain, though, that sometime in the future, a random anon will think it's a mistake and change it back to 1 m. :) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie ) 04:39, 2 December 2008 (UTC)

Comments
 * Toprawa: You did. Thanks pal.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 15:51, 28 November 2008 (UTC)

Valin Draco

 * Nominated by:Jinzler 21:52, 27 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Inquisitors are generally quite angry and violent

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 * 1) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie ) 05:05, 1 December 2008 (UTC)

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 * 1) * He urged the team to surrender, but they refused, which began a fight between them, Muun and Draco's team of Clone shadow troopers. When did shadowtroopers come into all this? Were they with Draco all along?
 * 2) **They were there all along. I have clarified this --Jinzler 21:29, 30 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) * Just remember in future that all referencing occurs directly after punctuation (that includes commas), not before it. I fixed all of them in this article, so no need to worry. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie ) 10:44, 30 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) **Thank you --Jinzler 21:29, 30 November 2008 (UTC)

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 * Your nomination comment makes me quite angry and makes me want to commit acts of violence against you. --  Darth Culator  (Talk) 16:56, 28 November 2008 (UTC)

Teckla Minnau

 * Nominated by: Thefourdotelipsis 06:43, 30 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: This is WTS.

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 * 1) Another good WTS nom for Mr. Four Dot.  IFYLOFD  ( And now, young Skywalker, you will die. ) 23:07, 30 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) Kinda low quality image, but acceptable. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie ) 05:13, 1 December 2008 (UTC)

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Maxiron Agolerga

 * Nominated by: Thefourdotelipsis 07:24, 30 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Pontifical!

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 * 1)  IFYLOFD  ( And now, young Skywalker, you will die. ) 23:02, 30 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie ) 09:14, 1 December 2008 (UTC)

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Bane Malar

 * Nominated by: Thefourdotelipsis 08:47, 30 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: "Forget it Jake, it's WTS."

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 * 1) An epic run comes to a conclusion.  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  13:42, 30 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 2)  IFYLOFD  ( And now, young Skywalker, you will die. ) 22:58, 30 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie ) 09:29, 1 December 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) Grand Moff Tranner [[Image:Imperial Department of Military Research.svg|20px]] (Comlink) 15:11, 1 December 2008 (UTC)

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 * FIN. Thefourdotelipsis 08:47, 30 November 2008 (UTC)

Livette

 * Nominated by: Drgns007 20:57, 30 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: I think it's time to to nominated Livette again.

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Lynia Delline

 * Nominated by: Green Tentacle (Talk) 22:22, 1 December 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: X-wing: The Official Strategy Guide? Never heard of it.

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 * 1) Once upon a time, I created this article. I wish she'd show up at a later date. Looks to be all in order. --Eyrezer 01:08, 2 December 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) Looks like Galaxies isn't the only place where crossbreeding works. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie ) 04:57, 2 December 2008 (UTC)

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