Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Mission to Fest


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Mission to Fest

 * Nominated by: --Eyrezer 22:52, 2 February 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Republic Commando goodness?

(2 ACs/3 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 11:25, 4 February 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) Muuuuuurgh 21:11, 10 February 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) NaruHina  Talk [[Image:Anakinsolo.png|14px]] 05:53, 11 February 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) Ugh, KT fanfiction.  Graestan ( Talk ) 22:21, 11 February 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) Thefourdotelipsis 23:09, 12 February 2009 (UTC)

Object Comments
 * 1) * despite having just issued them stealth Katarn-class commando armor; despite being extra tough. Get rid of double word usage.
 * 2) **Done
 * 3) * Where was Niner during the actual assualt? ? 04:53, 4 February 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) **We do not know. Whatever he does is not mentioned in Fi's journal
 * 5) NaruHina
 * 6) * Aftermath section?
 * 7) **Added, although you made me add referencing :p
 * 8) * The intro could be expanded.
 * 9) **I added a fraction more, but I don't really know how to expand it much more to be honest.
 * 10) ***I added what I personally think is sufficient, make changes as you like. NaruHina  Talk[[Image:Anakinsolo.png|14px]] 05:53, 11 February 2009 (UTC)
 * 11) ****That will also work! --Eyrezer 08:10, 11 February 2009 (UTC)
 * 12) * That picture is of Delta Squad. I recognize Boss and Sev especially.
 * 13) **Well that's a bummer. Removed
 * 14) * "The clones continued with their mission..." OK and? How did they contine? How did they make their way up the tower? How was the plant destroyed?
 * 15) **There is no info on this. The mission is only mentioned in a short prologue to the novel, and only described in a very fragmentary fashion.
 * 16) *Have nice day. NaruHina  Talk [[Image:Anakinsolo.png|14px]] 07:04, 7 February 2009 (UTC)