Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Ice Demon


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Ice Demon

 * Nominated by: ~ SavageBob 04:47, September 10, 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: The last of my Ewoks run for the time being. ~ SavageBob 04:47, September 10, 2009 (UTC)

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1) No such luck; we'll have all the Endorian fauna here. But, hey, I'm waiting for the Bordok. --Skippy Farlstendoiro 06:29, September 10, 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) I don't want to see "appear similar in appearance" again, though. :P  CC7567  (talk) 07:08, September 10, 2009 (UTC)
 * 3)  Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 15:55, September 27, 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 11:39, September 30, 2009 (UTC)
 * 5)  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  18:25, October 2, 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) You should probebly mention that at least one Ice Demon (Stagorr), was Force-sensitive.  Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 18:24, September 11, 2009 (UTC)
 * OK, done. ~ SavageBob 06:43, September 27, 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) Soresu
 * 2) * It is hard to relate the description of the quote in the body with the quote itself, since the Ice Demon image pushes the quote accross too far. Rearrange some stuff.
 * 3) * Stagorr dueled Logray when he arrived. Put in a little sentence about why Logray comes. All you've established is that Stagorr wants to lure him there, you haven't actually explained why Logray arrives. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 07:12, September 13, 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) **Can you explain what you mean on your first point? It looks fine for me on any computer I try. I've made a go at addressing your second point. ~ SavageBob 06:43, September 27, 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) ***It is really minor I guess, but the first image, Stagorr1.jpg, pushes the quote, but not the quote description, to the right, making it harder to connect the two (at least it does on Monobook). SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 05:57, September 28, 2009 (UTC)
 * 6) ****I've played with it in edit mode, but really the only thing that solves it is to either remove the image altogether or to shrink it down a lot. The quote and quote description are together for me in Monobook, so I think it depends on your screen resolution. Still, let me know if you think the image should be removed completely. ~ SavageBob 15:27, September 28, 2009 (UTC)
 * 7) *****I had the same issue as Soresu, but found out how to fix that. Apparently, making the image larger solves the problem with the quote (at least it did for me). QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 16:01, September 28, 2009 (UTC)
 * 8) ******Yep. It looks close to fine now. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 11:39, September 30, 2009 (UTC)
 * 9) The last few sentences of your "History" is really confusing. I thought the demon was still in the mountain? How did Wicket melt him? You jump right from "Logray gave up his staff" to "Wicket melted him", in essence.  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  00:06, September 18, 2009 (UTC)
 * 10) *Is it any better now? ~ SavageBob 06:43, September 27, 2009 (UTC)

Comments


 * Thanks for the reviews so far, folks. I'm away from regular internet for at least another week, but I'll get on this when I get reconnected. ~ SavageBob 05:38, September 24, 2009 (UTC)
 * Please check your refs. One appears to be invalid. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 15:57, September 27, 2009 (UTC)
 * Ah, thanks. Should be fixed now. ~ SavageBob 17:20, September 27, 2009 (UTC)