Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/KRONOS-327


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KRONOS-327

 * Nominated by: Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 16:36, 7 July 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Much thanks to CC7567 for putting up with my requests for help.

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)
Support
 * 1) Looking good, Grand Moff.  CC7567  (talk) 21:07, 7 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) Great work. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 21:34, 7 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 3)  Graestan ( Talk ) 23:46, 7 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) &mdash;Master Jonathan(Jedi Council Chambers) 19:51, 9 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) -- Darth tom Imperial Emblem.svg (Imperial Intelligence)  12:24, 10 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 6) JOSEF MENGELE Toprawa and Ralltiir 20:01, 11 July 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) The first sentence of the Characteristics section could probably be worded better; the "therefore" seems rather unnecessary; and the next couple sentences are a little choppy. Great job, Tran.  Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 17:54, 7 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) *Should be better now. Thanks for the review. Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 19:58, 7 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) Toprawa:
 * 4) * I would prefer only that you make a very brief BTS mention that the character was first mentioned in canon in the Visual Guide. Toprawa and Ralltiir 16:37, 11 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) **Done. Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 19:38, 11 July 2009 (UTC)

Comments


 * If you think that the article could use another image, I can screenshot something from the movie; however, it's up to you.  CC7567  (talk) 21:07, 7 July 2009 (UTC)
 * I think another image would make the article too crowded, but I appreciate the offer. Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 21:09, 7 July 2009 (UTC)
 * Okay; that's fine.  CC7567  (talk) 21:17, 7 July 2009 (UTC)