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G2 repair droid/Legends

 * Nominated by: Pyke syndicate.svg  AV-6R7  Crew Pit 04:15, February 6, 2017 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: In commemoration for the 30th anniversary of Star Tours.

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Support

 * 1) Sorry for the delay. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:01, September 24, 2017 (UTC)
 * 2) Johnny 5's younger cousin. QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 12:31, February 21, 2018 (UTC)

Ayrehead02

 * Where do the names A4-G2 and G2-7T actually come from? Looking in both sources they're referenced to, the images from their articles aren't named anywhere and I find it odd that both seem to have only first pictured listed in their appearances section. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:18, May 4, 2017 (UTC)
 * The sides of their heads. - Imperial Information Office.svg  AV-6R7  Crew Pit 09:49, June 7, 2017 (UTC)
 * The opening sentence of the BTS seems to talk about a specific G2 not the series in general. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:18, May 4, 2017 (UTC)
 * Fixed. - Imperial Information Office.svg  AV-6R7  Crew Pit 09:49, June 7, 2017 (UTC)
 * "She went on to speculate that a G2's unending stream of conversation was responsible for problems with ships at Sluis Van Shipyards, out of which several ships had flows out of in the past several weeks, only to experience difficulty with one or more primary systems just after leaving the star system." This sentence needs some work, I assume flows out of is meant to just be flown? I'd also suggest changing up the use of several twice in a row. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:18, May 4, 2017 (UTC)
 * Fixed. - Imperial Information Office.svg  AV-6R7  Crew Pit 09:49, June 7, 2017 (UTC)

Imperators goose droid

 * Check your image caption punctuation.
 * Added. - Imperial Information Office.svg  AV-6R7  Crew Pit 21:33, September 24, 2017 (UTC)
 * Please make the captions of the last two images more varied and interesting.
 * Nothing to be done for G2-7T, but rewrote the latter. - Imperial Information Office.svg  AV-6R7  Crew Pit 21:33, September 24, 2017 (UTC)
 * The non-canonical appearance in Apperances needs to be moved to a subsection.
 * Done. - Imperial Information Office.svg  AV-6R7  Crew Pit 21:33, September 24, 2017 (UTC)
 * Hmm, since you don't reference anything to G2 repair droid's CSWE entry, I have to ask if there even is one? If not, you should amend the CSWE listing in Sources to reflect which entries the droid was mentioned in.
 * There is, but IIRC, it is just a copy paste of TEGTD. - Imperial Information Office.svg  AV-6R7  Crew Pit 21:33, September 24, 2017 (UTC)
 * Amazon backup link, please.
 * Added. - Imperial Information Office.svg  AV-6R7  Crew Pit 21:33, September 24, 2017 (UTC)
 * Hey, what's with the "in the galaxy" section? Can you rearrange the info so that there's no one-sentence paragraphs? And is there really no info on the last two G2 units mentioned in the section other than their names?  Imperators II (Talk) 20:46, September 24, 2017 (UTC)
 * Fixed. The only reason we even have names for those droids is that they literally have them written on the side of their heads. So, no, we have additional context for them. - Imperial Information Office.svg  AV-6R7  Crew Pit 21:33, September 24, 2017 (UTC)

Ecks Dee

 * Some preliminaries: The introduction could definitely use some expansion. It's rather short compared to the body as is.
 * Expanded. -  AV-6R7  Crew Pit 04:19, March 13, 2018 (UTC)
 * While there exists no LG entry for droid model articles, precedent indicates that a separate "Role" section could be employed and I definitely agree. The last paragraph in "Characteristics" seems to talk about what the droid could be used for rather than specific characteristics of the model.
 * Done. -  AV-6R7  Crew Pit 04:20, March 13, 2018 (UTC)
 * As for the "G2 repair droids in the galaxy", I feel like it should be integrated into History rather than be its own section. It works well for species, but not so much for droids, I feel. Thoughts?
 * "ve started merging the sections, but I don't know how to handle droids like G2-7T, were we don't know where they exist in the timeline. -  AV-6R7  Crew Pit 23:50, March 3, 2018 (UTC)
 * Do we not have a category for SoroSuub products? If not, I feel one should be created.
 * We do. The G2 cat is a subcat of it. -  AV-6R7  Crew Pit 00:49, February 28, 2018 (UTC)
 * The article is in Category:Pages with missing permanent archival links. Please fix. 1358  (Talk)  00:42, February 28, 2018 (UTC)
 * Added backup link. -  AV-6R7  Crew Pit 20:14, March 7, 2018 (UTC)
 * You have consecutive [2] references in "G2 repair droids in the galaxy". 1358  (Talk)  23:52, March 25, 2018 (UTC)
 * Fixed. -  AV-6R7  Crew Pit 06:46, March 26, 2018 (UTC)

Toprawa

 * Aesthetically, the article is a mess. I would recommend looking at it in Oasis if you haven't already to see what I mean:
 * The wall of text in the Characteristics section should be divided into at least two paragraphs.
 * Broken. -  AV-6R7  Crew Pit 05:00, March 16, 2018 (UTC)
 * Paragraph break(s), along with expanding the intro a substantial amount per ecks above (which I also would have objected to), will allow you to place that section's image in a less terrible spot. Currently, it's just sort of dropped awkwardly at the bottom of the section to avoid the infobox, which makes it bleed into the next section ("Role"). This should be avoided at all costs in every instance.
 * Done. -  AV-6R7  Crew Pit 21:01, March 21, 2018 (UTC)
 * That actually looks worse than what you had before. Images look particularly bad in Oasis if they're placed above a quote, especially if they're aligned left. The only way I can see this will work with the infobox is if you place the image before the second paragraph. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:05, March 22, 2018 (UTC)
 * Like so? -  AV-6R7  Crew Pit 18:19, March 22, 2018 (UTC)
 * Yes, that's the only place I can see it's going to look good left-aligned while working around the infobox. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:24, March 22, 2018 (UTC)
 * The Role section could also use a paragraph break. Remember, this is Oasis formatting now, which means we have a much narrower page margin to work with. Ten-line paragraphs are not ideal.
 * Broken up. -  AV-6R7  Crew Pit 05:00, March 16, 2018 (UTC)
 * The History section could absolutely use at least two subsections. It's typically a nice divide to place four-paragraph sections equally into two subsections.
 * As its set up currently, you have a natural divide between the histroy of the model and a synopsys of the G2 droids we know were out there. How about something like "Manufacturing history" and "G2 repair droids in the galaxy"? -  AV-6R7  Crew Pit 21:05, March 21, 2018 (UTC)
 * As long as it looks good, you can subdivide it any way you want. It would look best if you had one image per subsection there. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:05, March 22, 2018 (UTC)
 * Does that look okay? -  AV-6R7  Crew Pit 18:26, March 22, 2018 (UTC)
 * Why not use a subsection heading for the first half? Of course "History" is applicable, but that's why we use subsections, to tell us specifically what part of its history we're looking at for that portion of the article. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:59, March 22, 2018 (UTC)
 * Added. -  AV-6R7  Crew Pit 19:07, March 22, 2018 (UTC)
 * The third paragraph of the History section is a 16-line paragraph in Oasis with the image there. Paragraph breaks are needed here. Implement them with the previous objection in mind. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 20:36, March 7, 2018 (UTC)
 * Split. -  AV-6R7  Crew Pit 05:00, March 16, 2018 (UTC)