Wookieepedia:AC/Log/2019 July 27

Jul 27 15:00:40  Welcome to AC meeting 118 Jul 27 15:00:50  We'll start with the discussion item Jul 27 15:00:53  I’m here Jul 27 15:00:59  I believe you're all familiar with this Jul 27 15:01:05  Same has occurred for Inq and EC Jul 27 15:01:17  Regarding meeting duties Jul 27 15:01:29  Anyone need a reminder or are we good to vote? Jul 27 15:01:54  Let's go Jul 27 15:01:57  I'm good Jul 27 15:02:15 I'n ready to vote. Jul 27 15:02:17 *I'm Jul 27 15:02:20  Same Jul 27 15:02:23  Cool. Voting for updated meeting duties Jul 27 15:02:23  Yep Jul 27 15:02:24  Support Jul 27 15:02:28  Support Jul 27 15:02:34  Support Jul 27 15:02:35 Support Jul 27 15:02:35  Support Jul 27 15:02:40 <MasterFred> support Jul 27 15:03:06 <Tommy-Macaroni> Motion for updated meeting duties passes Jul 27 15:03:16 <Tommy-Macaroni> Anyone have a random name generator to hand? Jul 27 15:03:35 <Toprawa> I can do it Jul 27 15:03:44 <Ayrehead02> Your random name is: Steve Grotkins Jul 27 15:03:49 <Tommy-Macaroni> Thank you Jul 27 15:03:55 <Tommy-Macaroni> Ayre: powerful Jul 27 15:03:59 <Ayrehead02> Any time Steve Jul 27 15:04:02 <Toprawa> Xd1358* Jul 27 15:04:02 <Toprawa> Exiledjedi* Jul 27 15:04:02 <Toprawa> Toprawa and Ralltiir* Jul 27 15:04:02 <Toprawa> AnilSerifoglu Jul 27 15:04:02 <Toprawa> Imperators II* Jul 27 15:04:03 <Toprawa> Ayrehead02 Jul 27 15:04:07 <Toprawa> Tommy-Macaroni* Jul 27 15:04:09 <Toprawa> Master Fredcerique Jul 27 15:04:23 <Tommy-Macaroni> Decent Jul 27 15:04:24 <MasterFred> I have been blessed. XD Jul 27 15:04:43 <Tommy-Macaroni> Okay, old stuff Jul 27 15:04:49 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Strategic_Resources_of_the_Galaxy Jul 27 15:04:53 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.wikia.com/index.php?diff=cur&oldid=8279392 Jul 27 15:04:58 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:AC/Strategic_Resources_of_the_Galaxy Jul 27 15:05:15 <Tommy-Macaroni> Some stuff Jul 27 15:05:27 <MasterFred> Should we extend since I forgot to add the new objection? Jul 27 15:05:32 <Ayrehead02> I'd say so Jul 27 15:05:42 <Toprawa> I don't see any reason to re-extend it Jul 27 15:05:49 <Toprawa> If someone was interested in fixing the article, they would have asked Jul 27 15:05:52 <AnilSerifoglu> Yeah, let's killed it Jul 27 15:05:55 <Tommy-Macaroni> Kill Jul 27 15:05:57 <AnilSerifoglu> kill* Jul 27 15:05:59 <AnilSerifoglu> Kill Jul 27 15:05:59 <Ayrehead02> Kill Jul 27 15:06:00 <MasterFred> Fair enough. Jul 27 15:06:01 <Toprawa> Kill Jul 27 15:06:01 <MasterFred> kill Jul 27 15:06:11 <Tommy-Macaroni> Strategic Resources of the Galaxy killed Jul 27 15:06:17 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/3B3-1204 Jul 27 15:06:22 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.wikia.com/index.php?diff=cur&oldid=8389176 Jul 27 15:06:26 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:AC/3B3-1204 Jul 27 15:06:34 <Tommy-Macaroni> No change Jul 27 15:06:35 <Tommy-Macaroni> Kill Jul 27 15:06:36 <MasterFred> kill Jul 27 15:06:37 Kill Jul 27 15:06:37 <Ayrehead02> Kill Jul 27 15:06:40 <Toprawa> Kill Jul 27 15:06:45 <AnilSerifoglu> Kill Jul 27 15:06:51 <Tommy-Macaroni> 3B3-1204 killed Jul 27 15:06:58 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Electro-dart Jul 27 15:07:03 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.wikia.com/index.php?diff=cur&oldid=8389183 Jul 27 15:07:08 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:AC/Electro-dart Jul 27 15:07:20 <Tommy-Macaroni> No change Jul 27 15:07:22 <Tommy-Macaroni> Kill Jul 27 15:07:22 <AnilSerifoglu> Kill Jul 27 15:07:23 <Ayrehead02> Kill Jul 27 15:07:23 <Toprawa> Kill Jul 27 15:07:24 Kill Jul 27 15:07:35 <MasterFred> kill Jul 27 15:07:37 <Tommy-Macaroni> Electro-dart killed Jul 27 15:07:42 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Gira Jul 27 15:07:46 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.wikia.com/index.php?diff=cur&oldid=8389187 Jul 27 15:07:50 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:AC/Gira Jul 27 15:08:02 <Tommy-Macaroni> No change Jul 27 15:08:03 <Tommy-Macaroni> kill Jul 27 15:08:05 <AnilSerifoglu> Kill Jul 27 15:08:06 Kill Jul 27 15:08:06 <Toprawa> Kill Jul 27 15:08:07 <Ayrehead02> Kill Jul 27 15:08:16 <Tommy-Macaroni> Gira killed Jul 27 15:08:22 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Graffiti-bomb Jul 27 15:08:26 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.wikia.com/index.php?diff=cur&oldid=8389191 Jul 27 15:08:31 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:AC/Graffiti-bomb Jul 27 15:08:41 <Tommy-Macaroni> no change Jul 27 15:08:42 <Tommy-Macaroni> kill Jul 27 15:08:44 <AnilSerifoglu> Kill Jul 27 15:08:46 <MasterFred> kill Jul 27 15:08:46 Kill Jul 27 15:08:48 <Toprawa> Kill Jul 27 15:08:56 <Tommy-Macaroni> Graffiti-bomb killed Jul 27 15:09:03 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Kelbis_Nu Jul 27 15:09:08 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.wikia.com/index.php?diff=cur&oldid=8389195 Jul 27 15:09:12 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:AC/Kelbis_Nu_(third_review) Jul 27 15:09:23 <Tommy-Macaroni> no change Jul 27 15:09:24 <Tommy-Macaroni> kill Jul 27 15:09:24 <Toprawa> Kill Jul 27 15:09:25 <MasterFred> kill Jul 27 15:09:27 Kill Jul 27 15:09:27 <AnilSerifoglu> Kill Jul 27 15:09:29 <Ayrehead02> Kill Jul 27 15:09:44 <Tommy-Macaroni> To answer Fred's question, yes :P Jul 27 15:09:52 <Tommy-Macaroni> Kelbis Nu killed Jul 27 15:09:56 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Larrim Jul 27 15:10:00 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.wikia.com/index.php?diff=cur&oldid=8389199 Jul 27 15:10:04 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:AC/Larrim Jul 27 15:10:27 <Tommy-Macaroni> No relevant changes Jul 27 15:10:28 <Tommy-Macaroni> Kill Jul 27 15:10:30 <MasterFred> kill Jul 27 15:10:31 <AnilSerifoglu> Kill Jul 27 15:10:31 <Toprawa> Kill Jul 27 15:10:41 <Ayrehead02> Kill Jul 27 15:10:46 <Tommy-Macaroni> Larrim killed Jul 27 15:10:47 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Mondo-Mod Jul 27 15:10:52 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.wikia.com/index.php?diff=cur&oldid=8389202 Jul 27 15:10:57 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:AC/Mondo-Mod Jul 27 15:11:04 <Tommy-Macaroni> no change Jul 27 15:11:05 <Tommy-Macaroni> kill Jul 27 15:11:06 Kill Jul 27 15:11:06 <Toprawa> Kill Jul 27 15:11:06 <AnilSerifoglu> Kill Jul 27 15:11:06 <MasterFred> kill Jul 27 15:11:07 <Ayrehead02> Kill Jul 27 15:11:15 <Tommy-Macaroni> Mondo-Mod killed Jul 27 15:11:22 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Penetrator Jul 27 15:11:27 <Tommy-Macaroni> lol Jul 27 15:11:31 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.wikia.com/index.php?diff=cur&oldid=8389206 Jul 27 15:11:34 <AnilSerifoglu> XD Jul 27 15:11:36 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:AC/Penetrator Jul 27 15:11:43 <Tommy-Macaroni> no change Jul 27 15:11:44 <Tommy-Macaroni> kill Jul 27 15:11:44 <AnilSerifoglu> Kill the Penetrator Jul 27 15:11:47 <MasterFred> kill Jul 27 15:11:47 <Ayrehead02> Kill Jul 27 15:11:48 <Toprawa> Kill Jul 27 15:11:50 Kill Jul 27 15:11:58 <Tommy-Macaroni> Penetrator killed Jul 27 15:12:04 <AnilSerifoglu> ^ Jul 27 15:12:05 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Plevitz Jul 27 15:12:09 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.wikia.com/index.php?diff=cur&oldid=8389211 Jul 27 15:12:14 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:AC/Plevitz Jul 27 15:12:22 <Tommy-Macaroni> No change Jul 27 15:12:23 <Tommy-Macaroni> kill Jul 27 15:12:24 <AnilSerifoglu> Kill Jul 27 15:12:25 <Toprawa> Kill Jul 27 15:12:26 <MasterFred> kill Jul 27 15:12:26 <Ayrehead02> Kill Jul 27 15:12:38 <Tommy-Macaroni> Plevitz killed Jul 27 15:12:44 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Pumav Jul 27 15:12:52 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.wikia.com/index.php?diff=cur&oldid=8389215 Jul 27 15:12:55 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:AC/Pumav Jul 27 15:13:04 <Tommy-Macaroni> no change Jul 27 15:13:05 Kill Jul 27 15:13:06 <Tommy-Macaroni> kill Jul 27 15:13:07 <MasterFred> kill Jul 27 15:13:08 <Toprawa> Kill Jul 27 15:13:09 <AnilSerifoglu> Kill Jul 27 15:13:12 <Ayrehead02> Kill Jul 27 15:13:18 <Tommy-Macaroni> Puma killed Jul 27 15:13:26 <Tommy-Macaroni> *Pumav Jul 27 15:13:31 <Tommy-Macaroni> Damn autocorrect Jul 27 15:13:37 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Quad_Victor Jul 27 15:13:41 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.wikia.com/index.php?diff=cur&oldid=8389218 Jul 27 15:13:47 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:AC/Quad_Victor Jul 27 15:13:56 <Tommy-Macaroni> no change Jul 27 15:13:57 <Tommy-Macaroni> kill Jul 27 15:13:58 <MasterFred> Kill Jul 27 15:13:59 <AnilSerifoglu> Kill Jul 27 15:13:59 <Toprawa> Kill Jul 27 15:14:00 Kill Jul 27 15:14:02 <Ayrehead02> Kill Jul 27 15:14:07 <Tommy-Macaroni> Quad Victor killed Jul 27 15:14:14 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/The_Rakata_and_the_Unknown_World Jul 27 15:14:18 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.wikia.com/index.php?diff=cur&oldid=8389221 Jul 27 15:14:23 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:AC/The_Rakata_and_the_Unknown_World Jul 27 15:14:32 <Tommy-Macaroni> no change Jul 27 15:14:33 <Tommy-Macaroni> kill Jul 27 15:14:34 <AnilSerifoglu> Kill Jul 27 15:14:34 <Toprawa> Kill Jul 27 15:14:34 <MasterFred> Kill Jul 27 15:14:35 Kill Jul 27 15:14:36 <Ayrehead02> Kill Jul 27 15:14:44 <Tommy-Macaroni> The Rakata and the Unknown World killed Jul 27 15:14:52 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Set Jul 27 15:14:57 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.wikia.com/index.php?diff=cur&oldid=8389229 Jul 27 15:15:01 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:AC/Set Jul 27 15:15:10 <Tommy-Macaroni> no cahge Jul 27 15:15:12 <MasterFred> Kill Jul 27 15:15:12 <Tommy-Macaroni> kill Jul 27 15:15:13 <AnilSerifoglu> Kill Jul 27 15:15:14 Kill Jul 27 15:15:14 <Ayrehead02> Kill Jul 27 15:15:18 <Toprawa> Kill Jul 27 15:15:22 <Tommy-Macaroni> set killed Jul 27 15:15:24 <Ayrehead02> I hate when people cahge a page Jul 27 15:15:30 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Tresk_Im%27nel Jul 27 15:15:35 <Tommy-Macaroni> Shhh Jul 27 15:15:40 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.wikia.com/index.php?diff=cur&oldid=8389232 Jul 27 15:15:45 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:AC/Tresk_Im%27nel_(third_review) Jul 27 15:15:56 <Tommy-Macaroni> no change Jul 27 15:15:56 <MasterFred> Kill Jul 27 15:15:57 <Tommy-Macaroni> Kill Jul 27 15:15:57 <AnilSerifoglu> Kill Jul 27 15:15:58 <Ayrehead02> Kill Jul 27 15:15:59 <Toprawa> Kill Jul 27 15:16:01 Kill Jul 27 15:16:07 <Tommy-Macaroni> Tresk Im'nel killed Jul 27 15:16:12 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Xexto Jul 27 15:16:19 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/index.php?diff=cur&oldid=8389237 Jul 27 15:16:26 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:AC/Xexto_(third_review) Jul 27 15:16:27 <Tommy-Macaroni> no change Jul 27 15:16:28 <MasterFred> Kill Jul 27 15:16:29 <Tommy-Macaroni> kill Jul 27 15:16:29 <AnilSerifoglu> Kill Jul 27 15:16:38 <Toprawa> Kill Jul 27 15:16:47 <Ayrehead02> Kill Jul 27 15:16:50 Kill Jul 27 15:17:11 <Tommy-Macaroni> Xexto killed Jul 27 15:17:18 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Ychna Jul 27 15:17:23 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.wikia.com/index.php?diff=cur&oldid=8389258 Jul 27 15:17:27 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:AC/Ychna Jul 27 15:17:34 <Tommy-Macaroni> no change Jul 27 15:17:35 <MasterFred> Kill Jul 27 15:17:35 <AnilSerifoglu> Kill Jul 27 15:17:35 <Tommy-Macaroni> kill Jul 27 15:17:37 <Ayrehead02> Kill Jul 27 15:17:38 <Toprawa> Kill Jul 27 15:17:43 Kill Jul 27 15:17:53 <Tommy-Macaroni> Ychna killed Jul 27 15:18:01 <Tommy-Macaroni> New stuff: Jul 27 15:18:10 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Tolga Jul 27 15:18:18 <Tommy-Macaroni> P&T needs splitting to make an equipment section. Jul 27 15:18:18 <Tommy-Macaroni> Body could probably be split allowing for another quote and image if they exist. Jul 27 15:18:18 <Tommy-Macaroni> Tolga's gender could probably be mentioned at the start of the Bio instead of his skin color, which should be in P&T. Jul 27 15:18:18 <Tommy-Macaroni> We don't include None for hair or affiliation anymore to my knowledge. Jul 27 15:18:18 <Tommy-Macaroni> Eye color is infobox exclusive. Jul 27 15:18:18 <Tommy-Macaroni> That date presumably needs a reference. Jul 27 15:18:18 <Tommy-Macaroni> Various context needed for the body. There are various sentences where the subject(s) are also unclear e.g "to apprehend the Twi'lek", no Twi'lek has been refered to in the article prior to this. Jul 27 15:18:19 <Tommy-Macaroni> BTS needs sourcing, plus dates and authors. Jul 27 15:18:19 <Tommy-Macaroni> I think the alternate paths could probably also be fleshed out a bit. Ayrehead02 (talk) 17:28, July 20, 2019 (UTC) Jul 27 15:18:43 <Tommy-Macaroni> Probe Jul 27 15:18:45 <AnilSerifoglu> Probe Jul 27 15:18:48 <MasterFred> Probe Jul 27 15:18:49 <Toprawa> Probe Jul 27 15:18:50 Probe Jul 27 15:19:19 <Tommy-Macaroni> Tolga probed Jul 27 15:19:21 <Ayrehead02> Probe Jul 27 15:19:38 <Tommy-Macaroni> Too slow :P Jul 27 15:19:39 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Tutso_Mara/Legends Jul 27 15:19:47 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://www.irccloud.com/pastebin/6KafkXkP/ Jul 27 15:19:50 <Ayrehead02> Dammit, I can't believe I missed probing my own suggestion in order to argue about milk Jul 27 15:19:53 <Tommy-Macaroni> I feel like the article should at least look into the possibility of splitting the Biography into two subsections, now that Monobook has given way to Oasis skin's wider margins. The possibility of adding another quote and moving the P/T image into the Bio is now tenable. Jul 27 15:19:53 <Tommy-Macaroni> The last sentence of the BTS can just be removed. Jul 27 15:19:53 <Tommy-Macaroni> The air date for the episode can no longer be sourced to the Episode Guide. Jul 27 15:19:53 <Tommy-Macaroni> Redlink in Sources list. Jul 27 15:19:53 <Tommy-Macaroni> I'm not sure it's strictly necessary to use the double reference here. I realize this is being done to source the timeline, but I feel like these individual refs can be placed after specific portions of this sentence rather than just tacked onto the end: "His friend Offee similarly approached a promotion to Knighthood around the same time.[6][7]". Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:56, July 25, 2019 (UTC) Jul 27 15:19:57 <Tommy-Macaroni> oops Jul 27 15:19:59 Probe Jul 27 15:20:00 <Tommy-Macaroni> Probe Jul 27 15:20:00 <Toprawa> Probe Jul 27 15:20:01 <AnilSerifoglu> Probe Jul 27 15:20:02 <MasterFred> Probe Jul 27 15:20:22 <Ayrehead02> Probe Jul 27 15:20:28 <Tommy-Macaroni> Tutso Mara/Legends probed Jul 27 15:20:35 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/S%27yito Jul 27 15:20:42 <Tommy-Macaroni> No ABY dates found in the article. Certainly at least one can be added. Jul 27 15:20:42 <Tommy-Macaroni> Infobox-exclusive information Jul 27 15:20:42 <Tommy-Macaroni> General underlinking Jul 27 15:20:42 <Tommy-Macaroni> All three of the Bio paragraphs look like they could use paragraph breaks Jul 27 15:20:42 <Tommy-Macaroni> BTS unsourced. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:56, July 25, 2019 (UTC) Jul 27 15:20:47 <Toprawa> Probe Jul 27 15:20:55 <MasterFred> Probe Jul 27 15:20:57 <Tommy-Macaroni> probe Jul 27 15:21:01 <AnilSerifoglu> Probe Jul 27 15:21:01 <Ayrehead02> Probe Jul 27 15:21:08 Probew Jul 27 15:21:12 *Probe Jul 27 15:21:21 <Tommy-Macaroni> S'yito probed Jul 27 15:21:27 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Rakririan Jul 27 15:21:35 <Tommy-Macaroni> Dating: Jul 27 15:21:35 <Tommy-Macaroni> The 22 BBY date cannot be sourced straight to the HNN article, which only uses GrS Jul 27 15:21:35 <Tommy-Macaroni> Some kind of dating can be used for Sabodor's (second "in the galaxy paragraph) Jul 27 15:21:35 <Tommy-Macaroni> The bit about Plo Koon could use some kind of dating as well. And I'm not sure that paragraph shouldn't actually be placed before Sabodor's, since it's more relevant to the Clone Wars era, while Sabodor's is much closer to the OT period. Jul 27 15:21:35 <Tommy-Macaroni> Fix image caption punctuation Jul 27 15:21:35 <Tommy-Macaroni> Don't know why this would need multiple refs. If individual parts of that sentence need to be cited individually, then that should be done, but don't just tack refs onto the end of the sentence: "The Rakririan homeworld was the planet Rakrir[1][4]" Jul 27 15:21:35 <Tommy-Macaroni> What specifically makes these exceptions "notable"? Does the source actually use that term? "...there were a few notable exceptions." Jul 27 15:21:36 <Tommy-Macaroni> BTS unsourced Jul 27 15:21:36 <Tommy-Macaroni> There is no such thing as "ambiguous canon" in Legends anymore. That template can be removed from the Appearances list. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:56, July 25, 2019 (UTC) Jul 27 15:21:39 <Tommy-Macaroni> probe Jul 27 15:21:42 <MasterFred> probe Jul 27 15:21:42 <AnilSerifoglu> Probe Jul 27 15:21:44 <Toprawa> Probe Jul 27 15:21:44 <Ayrehead02> Probe Jul 27 15:21:47 Probe Jul 27 15:21:49 <Tommy-Macaroni> Rakririan probed Jul 27 15:21:56 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Vune_Willic Jul 27 15:22:02 <Tommy-Macaroni> It's a requirement that articles be referenced by individual comic issue, and that individual comic issues are listed as such in the Appearances list. This would naturally apply, then, to similar things, such as these Planet Hopper articles, which is already a precedent anyways. See Mountain Terrain Scout Transport, for example. This article should follow suit. Jul 27 15:22:02 <Tommy-Macaroni> None of the individual "Coruscant: Center of the Empire" issues mention the Battle of Yavin, which leaves me a bit unclear how the article is arriving at the conclusion that he died "ABY." I feel like that should be clarified in a reference note. Jul 27 15:22:02 <Tommy-Macaroni> Adding to the previous objection, there really isn't any solid context given for a time period in the article body either. Jul 27 15:22:02 <Tommy-Macaroni> General underlinking. Jul 27 15:22:02 <Tommy-Macaroni> Species is exclusive to the infobox and intro. Jul 27 15:22:02 <Tommy-Macaroni> Single-sentence paragraphs are ideally avoided (see end of first Bio subsection). Jul 27 15:22:02 <Tommy-Macaroni> BTS is unsourced. Publication date(s) would be nice too. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:56, July 25, 2019 (UTC) Jul 27 15:22:04 <Tommy-Macaroni> probe Jul 27 15:22:06 <Ayrehead02> Probe Jul 27 15:22:08 Probe Jul 27 15:22:11 <AnilSerifoglu> Probe Jul 27 15:22:19 <Toprawa> Probe Jul 27 15:22:20 <MasterFred> Probe Jul 27 15:22:21 <Tommy-Macaroni> Vune Willic probed Jul 27 15:22:32 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Titterbug Jul 27 15:22:37 <Tommy-Macaroni> Underlinking Jul 27 15:22:38 <Tommy-Macaroni> Reference 2 is far too general of a comparison to arrive at such a specific figure of 0.33 meters Jul 27 15:22:38 <Tommy-Macaroni> Infobox-exclusive information Jul 27 15:22:38 <Tommy-Macaroni> Behind the Magic doesn't reference this article subject or the exact episode it appears in, with regards to the 3 ABY date. It only give a general timeline for the Ewoks series, which should be reflected in a more detailed reference note explanation. Jul 27 15:22:38 <Tommy-Macaroni> Redirect in BTS Jul 27 15:22:38 <Tommy-Macaroni> BTS not fully sourced. Jul 27 15:22:40 <Tommy-Macaroni> probe Jul 27 15:22:42 <AnilSerifoglu> Probe Jul 27 15:22:53 <Toprawa> Probe Jul 27 15:22:56 <MasterFred> Probe Jul 27 15:23:12 <Ayrehead02> Probe Jul 27 15:23:24 <Tommy-Macaroni> Titterbug probed Jul 27 15:23:26 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Iziz_defense_tower Jul 27 15:23:31 <Tommy-Macaroni> For starters, I feel like this article could be moved to a non-conjectural title at just "Defense tower," which is what the source calls this thing. Jul 27 15:23:31 <Tommy-Macaroni> Underlinking throughout article Jul 27 15:23:31 <Tommy-Macaroni> None of the BBY dates appear to be referenced correctly Jul 27 15:23:31 <Tommy-Macaroni> Fix image caption punctuation Jul 27 15:23:31 <Tommy-Macaroni> Revise image placement in article body with respect to Oasis skin Jul 27 15:23:32 <Tommy-Macaroni> BTS unsourced Jul 27 15:23:32 <Tommy-Macaroni> Articles need to be referenced by individual comic issue, not story arc. Issues also need to be listed as such in the Appearances. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:56, July 25, 2019 (UTC) Jul 27 15:23:33 <Tommy-Macaroni> probe Jul 27 15:23:35 <AnilSerifoglu> Probe Jul 27 15:23:37 <MasterFred> Probe Jul 27 15:23:39 Probe Jul 27 15:23:41 <Ayrehead02> Probe Jul 27 15:23:43 <Toprawa> Probe Jul 27 15:23:44 <Tommy-Macaroni> Iziz defense tower probed Jul 27 15:23:50 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Jev_Sunrider Jul 27 15:23:55 <Tommy-Macaroni> Underlinking Jul 27 15:23:55 <Tommy-Macaroni> Reference 1 is based entirely on citing the 3999 BBY date to TOTJ 3, which itself is not properly referenced, since the TOTJ comics didn't use BBY dates. Jul 27 15:23:55 <Tommy-Macaroni> BTS unsourced. Publication date would be nice. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:56, July 25, 2019 (UTC) Jul 27 15:24:18 <Tommy-Macaroni> probe Jul 27 15:24:19 <Toprawa> Probe Jul 27 15:24:19 <AnilSerifoglu> Probe Jul 27 15:24:27 <MasterFred> Probe Jul 27 15:24:30 <Ayrehead02> Probe Jul 27 15:24:32 Probe Jul 27 15:24:34 <Tommy-Macaroni> Jev Sunrider probed Jul 27 15:24:35 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Kurt Jul 27 15:24:41 <Tommy-Macaroni> Needs Jul 27 15:24:41 <Tommy-Macaroni> None of the BBY dates are properly referenced Jul 27 15:24:41 <Tommy-Macaroni> Fix bullet point usage in infobox Jul 27 15:24:41 <Tommy-Macaroni> Bio would benefit from subsectioning, which will allow for the addition of one or more quotes, if available Jul 27 15:24:41 <Tommy-Macaroni> BTS: Jul 27 15:24:41 <Tommy-Macaroni> Unsourced Jul 27 15:24:41 <Tommy-Macaroni> Publication date would be nice Jul 27 15:24:42 <Tommy-Macaroni> Some of the wording needs to be revised to reflect Legends canon. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:56, July 25, 2019 (UTC) Jul 27 15:24:42 <Tommy-Macaroni> probe Jul 27 15:24:46 <AnilSerifoglu> Probe Jul 27 15:24:51 <Ayrehead02> Probe Jul 27 15:24:54 <MasterFred> Probe Jul 27 15:24:58 Probe Jul 27 15:25:03 <Toprawa> Probe Jul 27 15:25:04 <Tommy-Macaroni> Kurt probed Jul 27 15:25:04 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Ktriss Jul 27 15:25:10 <Tommy-Macaroni> 3999 BBY is not referenced properly Jul 27 15:25:10 <Tommy-Macaroni> I feel like some of the character's physical descriptions that are inherent to the species don't need to be mentioned in the P/T. Jul 27 15:25:10 <Tommy-Macaroni> BTS: Jul 27 15:25:10 <Tommy-Macaroni> Unsourced Jul 27 15:25:10 <Tommy-Macaroni> Things like publication dates and comic illustrator would be nice Jul 27 15:25:11 <Tommy-Macaroni> Needs to be cleaned up for misplaced italics Jul 27 15:25:11 <Tommy-Macaroni> Redirects Jul 27 15:25:12 <Tommy-Macaroni> The Appearances needs to list individual comic issues, not story arc. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:56, July 25, 2019 (UTC) Jul 27 15:25:12 <Tommy-Macaroni> probe Jul 27 15:25:14 <AnilSerifoglu> Probe Jul 27 15:25:19 <MasterFred> Probe Jul 27 15:25:20 Probe Jul 27 15:25:41 <Toprawa> Probe Jul 27 15:25:42 <Tommy-Macaroni> Ktriss probed Jul 27 15:25:42 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Sunrider_naming_controversy Jul 27 15:25:47 <Tommy-Macaroni> Unreferenced article body. Jul 27 15:25:48 <Tommy-Macaroni> References should be as specific as possible and point to individual comic issues instead of whole story arcs. Jul 27 15:25:48 <Tommy-Macaroni> Missing backup links. Jul 27 15:25:48 <Tommy-Macaroni> Redirects. Jul 27 15:25:48 <Tommy-Macaroni> Ref 20 should state specific TOR missions. Jul 27 15:25:48 <Tommy-Macaroni> The reference list warrants the use of. Imperators II(Talk) 09:13, July 27, 2019 (UTC) Jul 27 15:25:49 <Tommy-Macaroni> probe Jul 27 15:25:51 <AnilSerifoglu> Probe Jul 27 15:25:52 <Ayrehead02> Probe Jul 27 15:25:53 <MasterFred> Probe Jul 27 15:25:54 Probe Jul 27 15:26:02 <Toprawa> Probe Jul 27 15:26:13 <Tommy-Macaroni> Sunrider naming controversy probed Jul 27 15:26:23 <Tommy-Macaroni> Thats it for articles on the page Jul 27 15:26:28 <Tommy-Macaroni> Anyone have anything else? Jul 27 15:26:42 <Ayrehead02> Nothing that I've seen Jul 27 15:26:48 <Toprawa> nope Jul 27 15:27:00 <AnilSerifoglu> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Recon-PK_series_droid from the bin Jul 27 15:27:01 <Tommy-Macaroni> Cool Jul 27 15:27:01 Not from me. Jul 27 15:27:26 <MasterFred> nope Jul 27 15:27:47 <Ayrehead02> Probe Recon-PK for that unsourced BTS info Jul 27 15:27:55 <AnilSerifoglu> Probe Jul 27 15:28:02 <MasterFred> Probe Jul 27 15:28:20 Probe Jul 27 15:28:22 <Tommy-Macaroni> probe Jul 27 15:28:33 <Tommy-Macaroni> Even if that info seems unnecessary Jul 27 15:28:44 <Tommy-Macaroni> Also dup link Jul 27 15:29:11 <Tommy-Macaroni> Dates need refs Jul 27 15:29:53 <Tommy-Macaroni> Tope? Jul 27 15:30:26 <Tommy-Macaroni> Oh cba Jul 27 15:30:37 <Tommy-Macaroni> Recon-PK series droid probed Jul 27 15:30:43 <Tommy-Macaroni> Any other discussion items? Jul 27 15:30:48 <AnilSerifoglu> Nope Jul 27 15:31:14 <MasterFred> negatory Jul 27 15:31:15 <Ayrehead02> Nothing from me Jul 27 15:31:16 <Tommy-Macaroni> Cool. Meeting duties Jul 27 15:31:27 <Tommy-Macaroni> Ecks schedules meeting 119 Jul 27 15:31:34 <Tommy-Macaroni> Thus concluded meeting 118 Jul 27 15:31:38 <Tommy-Macaroni> Thanks all for coming Jul 27 15:31:45 <AnilSerifoglu> Thanks for hosting, Tommy Jul 27 15:32:06 <Tommy-Macaroni> *ecks does paperwork and schedules 119, rather