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Luia?
In the last movie when Luke tells Leia about their relationship she says that "somehow she has as always known." If that's true then why did she kiss him the fifth movie? NaruHina ''' Talk 03:08, 21 May 2008 (UTC)dp
 * Just to prove a point to Han, I think. Welcome to the KotOR WookieeProject, by the way!--Jedi Kasra 03:32, 22 May 2008 (UTC)

Welcome!
Hello, again, NaruHina. I am a member of the KotOR WookieeProject. I will be letting you know tomorrow about some stuff related to KotOR that you can work on, if you're up to it. Please leave me a message on my talk page.--Jedi Kasra 04:01, 22 May 2008 (UTC)
 * Very good. I would suggest you read the FA tutorials put up by the Inquisitors and the Manual of Style, for tips on how to source an article, as there are plenty of KotOR articles that need sourcing.--Jedi Kasra 23:10, 23 May 2008 (UTC)

RE: Zaerdra
I'm not exactly sure what you're talking about here. For me, the 100% Light Side template goes behind the second picture of her; it is still very much visible. If you could, please send over a link to a screenshot of what you mean.-- Goodwood  ( Alliance Intelligence ) 08:08, 29 June 2008 (UTC)

WP:KOTOR Reorg Meeting
 irc.freenode.net #WP:KOTOR irc://irc.freenode.net/WP:KOTOR For those who wish to continue on the WP:KOTOR WookieeProject, there will be an informational and organizational meeting via IRC on this channel on Saturday, 19 July 2008 at 0:00 UTC (that's 8p.m. Eastern Time in North America). If you do not have ChatZilla or another chat program capable of accessing the channel, it is recommended that you get one ( is one option). If you are unable to attend the meeting for whatever reason, please leave a response on my talk page. Anyone who does not attend and does not leave their regrets will be dismissed from the project&mdash;this is for the health of the project, with nothing personal intended. Thank you and have a nice day.-- Goodwood  ( Alliance Intelligence ) 23:07, 5 July 2008 (UTC)

FA/GA templates
Just FYI, the and  templates are only meant to be used by users who've done a significant amount of work on the article, and not just for reviews/voting, which seems to be the case with your using them. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 08:02, 7 July 2008 (UTC)

Possible Answer
Im not 100% sure but Mission's was most likely born on Ryloth,After all its not very uncommon for many twileks to be born into poverty and I hear Ryloth has many slums,Now don't get me wrong I know thats the case with lots of planet's but it just seems very likely for twilek's in Mission's case.--Borvo&#39;s vault 17:43, 15 July 2008 (UTC)

Your CT
Consensus tracks are not for deliberating what's canon and what's not. It's for issues related to Wookieepedia as a site. I have deleted your thread, please bring up the matter either on the relevant article talk page or in the Senate Hall. Additionally, the anon's edit is based on speculation and can clearly just be removed. Thank you. --Imperialles 01:04, 7 August 2008 (UTC)

Sig
Hey, the timestamp in your signature is currently being bolded. I'm not sure if you want it to or not; I'm just letting you know, cause it looks a little strange. :-) -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 19:36, 10 August 2008 (UTC)

I'm a KOTOR fan too.....
I'm a huge KOTOR fan as well. Have you got any ideas for kotor 3? (Sorry I ask this too every KOTOR fan cos they're never enough......)Devan2 20:59, 17 August 2008 (UTC)

oh yeah......
I forgot Lucasart's have announced an mmo game based on kotor 3. How would you feel about that on a scale of 1 to 10? I personally feel it will ruin the franchise because it'll be too different from it's two games.Devan2 18:22, 18 August 2008 (UTC)

That's a relief.....
You're in the kotor project right? What articles are you focusing on right now? cos I need help on the bao-dur page- the personality and traits section. Devan2

Re: Deleted Senate Hall thread
The answer to the question posed in the thread is easily found in the Canderous Ordo article. Use your browser's "Find" feature and type "Vong."  Gonk  ( Gonk! ) 17:16, 19 August 2008 (UTC)

Gonna get to it
Yeah but like you said I should probably focus on the ones Goodwood sir told us to. Thanks Devan2 10:10, 20 August 2008 (UTC)

Trash compactor
Obviously duplicated articles don't require a TC discussion. Just turn one into a redirect. -- Darth Culator  (Talk) 00:30, 21 August 2008 (UTC)

Old Republic nomination
Hey there, NH. Just dropping by to send my appreciation on working so diligently on the Knights of the Old Republic article, and even nominating it to GA. I've no doubt the article will pass, seeing all complaints so far are null and void. Hopefully, people will take note of your hard work and will pitch in to get it to FA. Aha, I'm pretty damn sure you're gonna need some help for that.

Anyways, I'm just stopping by to give you a well-deserved congratulations on getting the article to where it is today. If you ever need any help with the article, just drop me a line and I'd be glad to lend a hand. Hope to hear from you soon, and happy editing! // ~mikah~  02:12, 28 August 2008 (UTC)
 * I'd be glad to get rid of some of those red links, though my XBox's DVD Drive is now completely shot so I'll have to write based on memory. I guess that won't be a problem, though, since there are other users out there and the idea of the community is to help those who need it. // ~mikah~  15:27, 31 August 2008 (UTC)

Hi i'm new
Hi my name is Strawberryfur3! But I like to be called Strawberry! So I was just wondering if you wanted to be friends? So write me back to let me know! Strawberry ( Strawberry's Chatroom ) 03:17, 30 August 2008 (UTC)

Hi Again
Its me I just wanted to know if you know any other girls on here because I want a friend because on all the other Wiks I don't have a lot of friends and most of the friends boys and to you that would be like having all friends that are girls so I think you know what I meen so tell me if you can hook me up! Strawberry ( Strawberry's Chatroom ) 04:10, 1 September 2008 (UTC)

You Rock!
Thanks for your help you rock! But I don't get why you did the lol! Anyway I was wondering if you would like to chat a while. Tell me if you do! Strawberry ( Strawberry's Chatroom ) 04:27, 1 September 2008 (UTC)

Good Morning
Hey dude are you awake! Anyway sorry for not talking to you last night. I fell asleep! Anyway do you want to chat now? Tell me if or when you are awake and if you want to chat now! Strawberry ( Strawberry's Chatroom ) 13:34, 1 September 2008 (UTC)

Hello are you there?
Hey dude are you there? I was just wondering if you wanted to chat. Any just to let you know I sent you a message about three hours ago! And I don't have any new messages so I just wanted to know if you are there! Strawberry ( Strawberry's Chatroom ) 17:47, 1 September 2008 (UTC)

Murder
I'll be happy to create it for you, write a definition, some examples, attitudes etc. However, someone else will have to flesh it out, as I don't have time to focus on it the same way as with the torture article. Unless this Flashfire, who's left a message on my talk page still wants to be the one to do it. Nightlily 14:07, 2 September 2008 (UTC)

Appearances
Being the most active KotOR editor I've seen since I joined, working extensively on the Appearances section (on top of basically everything else the article covers), I wanted your personal input on the New continuity sections and a possible (re?)surfacing of its use. Naturally, it wouldn't be used on articles such as Knights, but rather smaller articles (ie, Star Wars: The Clone Wars, Star Wars: Obi-Wan, possibly Star Wars: The Force Unleashed). // ~mikah~  19:47, 5 September 2008 (UTC)
 * I see. Thanks for your reply. :) // ~mikah~  23:13, 5 September 2008 (UTC)

Ebon Hawk
Just to let you know, Ebon Hawk was kept as an FA last night, but the Inquisitors had a couple of minor issues which are noted on Inq/Ebon Hawk (second review). You might want to fix those up too and thanks for your work so far. Green Tentacle (Talk) 17:09, 7 September 2008 (UTC)
 * I addressed the final Behind the scene issue (transition to paragraph form) to the best of my ability. Feel free to read it over and change whatever you feel needs a good fix. // ~mikah~  17:43, 7 September 2008 (UTC)

Help with User infoboxes
could you help me with the user info box on my page when you get the chance? RogueJedi 15:34, 13 September 2008 (UTC)


 * could you just move all of them to a columm on right side? and fix the header? RogueJedi 16:03, 13 September 2008 (UTC)


 * Thanks RogueJedi 16:12, 13 September 2008 (UTC)

hey
sorry for editing utris, and thank you for naming that link where people can see what i edit, but i like putting the pages i edit in my page,i am sorry if you dislike that, but i dont. i hope everything is clear and that we dont have further misunderstandings mister ( or miss)) Naru hina.dearly: Tusken916

hello mister naruhina, thanks for clearing the Graxol Kelvyyn thing and I would very much like contacting you in the messenger,because so far you are the only nice-not rude user i've met,almost all the others are very...strange or old(not all, just almost). hope we can contact each other.dearly: Tusken916

The Sith Lords
If you don't mind, do you think you could handle some of the rest for me? I'm starting to get an ache in my wrist, but there isn't much more to go. I've been chopping down the list as I've been going along (I haven't saved it though), so if you need it, let me know before I leave, and I'll post it here and remove it later if you wish. // ~mikah~  02:47, 27 September 2008 (UTC)
 * Lifesaver! You don't have to add them all if you're not up to it either, and I'll remove the list per your request when i get back on if it takes up too much space. // ~mikah~  03:06, 27 September 2008 (UTC)
 * I am terribly sorry to have made you go to such work. I'll be owing you a lot in the future, I'm sure. ;) But thank you for doing all you did; I really do appreciate it. // ~mikah~  15:50, 27 September 2008 (UTC)
 * A subpage? I'm guessing in reference to the list I posted here and later killed? Because we did have a subpage (yours), but it wasn't mine, so I decided against deleting things from it without permission. // ~mikah~  16:01, 27 September 2008 (UTC)

It would be my pleasure to help with KotOR. :) // ~mikah~  14:59, 28 September 2008 (UTC)
 * After an edit conflict in the dark side ending section, I've decided to take a step back and let you handle the portion of the article if you'd prefer. You seem to have more information on the topic than I do, and there are other things for me to focus on. // ~mikah~  20:38, 28 September 2008 (UTC)

Hey NH. Do you know the canon order of planets for TSL? I can't get to reliable chronology sources right now. So far I have in order: Peragus, Telos, Onderon ( first battle), Dantooine, Nar Shaddaa, Onderon (second battle), Korriban and then Endgame - Dantooine, Telos and Malachor. * Cylka * 06:40, 11 December 2008 (UTC)

Signature
Your signature is currently violating policy. Images in sigs are supposed to be no more than 20px in height; yours is currently 29px. Reducing the width to 14px will make the height 20px if you want to do that. I wouldn't say anything only the height of your image can create annoying gaps between lines. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 22:02, 30 September 2008 (UTC)

Thanks!
Thanks for the congrats; my new wife got a kick out of Leia's facial expression. lol. -- Colinmcev 02:42, 8 October 2008 (UTC)

KotOR GAN
Hey there. I was looking at the KotOR GAN and I noticed that one of the things wanted is an expanded main character section. If you want some help with that just let me know. I tend to shy away from writing a lot of text -esp since this is your baby- but I've had a lot of practice taking in-game screenshots and such. Party portarits I could pull in a few minutes, but any others take longer so I can set them up. I'll also try to get to the redlinks in the weapons and tech section.  *   Cylka   *  14:49, 8 October 2008 (UTC)


 * Ok redlinks are gone. Just to make sure, the main character section includes only companions or are there others like Yuthura Ban or Saul Karath  *   Cylka   *  22:07, 9 October 2008 (UTC)


 * Trying to pull myself together for the chars :p You might want to check this site out The Star Wars Timeline Gold, compiled by Star Wars fan and chronology expert, Nathan P. Butler. It's rumored to be legit and has tons of info. * Cylka *  02:34, 10 October 2008 (UTC)


 * OK main chars done. If you've got any mor red links left, put them up. If you want more help let me know. Otherwise I'm going to work on Visas and TSL some more. * Cylka *  01:05, 14 October 2008 (UTC)
 * Hey NH. I was wondering if you wanted to put in things like the easter egg creature items or the droid items. * Cylka *  14:31, 22 October 2008 (UTC)


 * All youtube refs are updated :-) * Cylka *  17:55, 24 October 2008 (UTC)
 * It would seem you won't need my help anymore, NH. Sorry I couldn't have been of any help to either of you, but I didn't get the request until I got home from school about an hour ago. If the sources are still not up to critics' standards, I'll be more than happy lend a hand. // ~mikah~  19:12, 24 October 2008 (UTC)


 * Hey NH. Sorry it took so long for me to get back to you. I actually had some pressing family stuff that pretty much took me out of commission for a while. Its been taken care of so I have the time to work on the Wook again. I think Mikah took care of ref. 23. I see a lot of new redlinks so I'll try to work on those too. * Cylka *  22:48, 5 December 2008 (UTC)
 * Thanks and no problem :-) It's my secret hope to help you wrap up KotOR and somehow finish TSL before TOR is released. I have a feeling that TOR might just renew interest in those two and it would be great for them to be complete. * Cylka * 05:04, 9 December 2008 (UTC)

Aratech 500
Hey there NaruHina. Thanks for catching that. It was lucky for me that you did. Turns out that my tlk file had become corrupted and was missing lines. That's why I didn't find it there. I now have a new one, so hopefully I won't run into this problem again. : ) * Cylka *  18:18, 20 October 2008 (UTC)

Re:WP:KOTOR
Am I allowed to join? I was'nt sure if there was some rule that says you have to be invited, or have a certain number of edits? Jayce Carver 13:52, 23 October 2008 (UTC)

Oh, in that case I will join, I love KotOR, and I can't wait for TOR. Also all of the NPC's from KotOR II have been tagged with the talk page template. Jayce Carver 11:54, 24 October 2008 (UTC)

I'm signed up. Yeah, you could be right about TOR. I think they will do something simmilar to Pirates of the Caribbean Online. Where you can get a basic version for free, or a full access version that you have to pay for. Also what on earth is going on with Darth Sion? First the campaign guide establishes that he fought in the Great Sith War, and now the comics are turning Lucien Draay into Sion. Jayce Carver 12:11, 24 October 2008 (UTC)

KotOR Article Milestone
With an edit by Cylka, Star Wars: Knights of the Old Republic is officially longer than 100,000 bytes. Compare this to the 53,342 bytes it was at the start of the attempt to get this article up to GA status. Good Job guys. NaruHina Talk  21:08, 25 October 2008 (UTC)

Hay
Hay thanks for letting me join. I was just wondering if there are any jedi that need researching, for the project. thanks98.202.103.164 21:40, 25 October 2008 (UTC)

RE: WP:KOTOR
I've responded here, as you asked, and I am interested in joining, hence why I put my name on the page. -- Darth tom (talk)  07:32, 2 November 2008 (UTC)


 * Thanks, but I've read the Manual of Style and the likes; I'm not exactly new here, and have done a lot on other Wiki's. -- Darth tom (talk)  19:13, 3 November 2008 (UTC)

Closed TCs
You've been around long enough to know better than to vote on closed Trash compactor discussions. jSarek 22:20, 5 November 2008 (UTC)

Bastila Shan edit
Hey, NaruHina; I reverted your Bastila edit for two reasons and wanted to explain myself. One, I couldn't find a reference to the event in the article link you provided. Secondly, if it was a comment made by the developers, then it would not be canon, although it would be appropriate for the bts section. - Cavalier One ( Squadron channel ) 14:15, 6 November 2008 (UTC)
 * It's cool. Just wanted to let you know my reasons for reverting. - Cavalier One ( Squadron channel ) 14:50, 6 November 2008 (UTC)

The Sith Lords

 * I'm not denying they happened, though they weren't in the Alternative Stories section, they were in the synopsis. // ~mikah~  02:35, 11 November 2008 (UTC)

X Era
In response to the post you just made on Forum:CT:Era tags 2, it was discussed and voted for in my first CT (see Forum:CT Archive/Era tags). SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie ) 03:52, 7 December 2008 (UTC)

Bio article advice
Just some quick pointers: for game developers, it's usually best to link to Moby Games using Template:MobyGames. MobyGames occasionally has more complete information than IMDb. Also, game titles are should be italicized. Other than that, great work at creating needed articles. -LtNOWIS 05:52, 9 December 2008 (UTC)

Nihilus mask
Hey NH. I wrote that article based on the game files and in the dialog TLK files it was also called Nihilus Mask. Maybe we should change it back? * Cylka * 20:30, 20 December 2008 (UTC)
 * If it's called "Nihilus mask" in the game then that name should be used over a conjectural name. It just means Nihilus mask as in the Nihilus mask, so it's not incorrect. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 20:38, 20 December 2008 (UTC)
 * Where is it written in the possessive? I'm just curious because my game and TLK files don't have it in the possessive. * Cylka * 20:55, 20 December 2008 (UTC)
 * I have the pc version and its not in the possessive. So the question is which version are we going to go with? * Cylka *  21:29, 20 December 2008 (UTC)
 * No, its fine. We have different versions thats all. Next time just ask before assuming that I'm doing it all wrong. Thanks. * Cylka *  22:22, 20 December 2008 (UTC)
 * OK, you're right, maybe that was a bit unfair. I think the most important thing that we'll have to remember is that there may be some discrepancies in the KotOR articles because of the xbox and pc versions. Maybe as a Kotor project group we should come up with a consensus as to which version we'll use in order to avoid any future dilemmas. * Cylka *  03:38, 21 December 2008 (UTC)

Saga CG Nihilus entry
Victim of the Mandalorian Wars, the man who became Nihilus lost everything: his possessions, his loved ones, and the will to live. While illness cannibalizes his body, a vast emptiness devours his humanity. Then, when all seems lost, he discovers that his emptiness hungered. The first time, he fed it unconsciously. Draining another being's life is frightening, nauseating, but for a euphoric moment, the memories, the illness, the hunger disappeared.

But it proves insatiable. The more he indulges it, the shorter the satisfaction lasts and the more severe the hunger becomes. He begins feeding relentlessly, still always craving. Existence again becomes unbearable, but then hope materializes. A blind Sith Lord appears. She has felt his existence like a gaping wound in the Force. The Force, she explains, fuels his hunger, and she will show him how to devour worlds. The Sith and the Force are meaningless to him, but the hunger must be appeased.

Darth Traya indeed teaches the newly christened Darth Nihilus to harness his life-craving gift to radical heights – so effectively in fact, that Nihilus saps Traya's powers in a calculated double cross. However, as Nihilus greedily consumes entire planets' life energy, the dark side macerates him even faster. But no matter. Nothing matters except his hunger. Before it devours him totally, Nihilus uses its power to displace his persona into his robes and armor. As his useless body disintegrates, he becomes living primitive intention; at last, the whole of the galaxy becomes food – for Nihilus has become the hunger.

Ousting Traya with Darth Sion's help, Nihilus binges on the Force, nearly extinguishing the Jedi forever at Katarr. However, Traya reciprocates his betrayal by luring him into a confrontation with the Jedi Exile and Nihilus's own former apprentice. When Nihilus tries feeding on this Jedi, his hunger is mysteriously repelled, as if confronted by his exact polar opposite. Psychically starved by the effort, the Dark Lord falls to the Jedi, and Nihilus the man dissolves into oblivion.

Special actions: Dark healing field, Drain Force, Improved dark healing, temptation.

Force powers known: Battle strike, Dark rage, Farseeing, Force grip, Force lightening, Force resistence, Force scream, Force whirlwind, sever Force, Slow, Surge, Wound.

Force secrets: Devastating power, Distant power, Mentor, Multi-target power.

Force techniques: Force power mastery (sever Force), Improved Sense Force, Improved Sense surroundings.

Immune to Fear effects.

Possessions: lightsaber (self-built), mask, Sith robes.

Hope this helps. * Cylka * 11:13, 23 December 2008 (UTC) - Devastating power When using a Force power that deals damage, you can spend a Force point to increase the power's damage dice by 50%. Alternatively, you can spend a Destiny point to double the number of damage dice.
 * Hey NH. I changed Nihilus' to Nihilus's in the article since his possessive form is an exception to the rule according to the MoS. If you don't like it you can change it back since I'm not sure the rule is strictly enforced. Btw, any other help you need, just let me know. * Cylka *  12:36, 23 December 2008 (UTC)

My interpretation: Has the ability to deal a hell of a lot of damage if he puts his mind to it.

Distant power When using a Force power that has a range expressed numerically, you can spend a Force point to increase the range by 10. Alternatively, you can spend a Destiny point to increase the range to anywhere in the star system.

My interpretation: Has the ability to hurt beings anywhere in the same star system? WTF?

Misc Items

Force points are used when consciously calling upon the Force.

Force secrets available to only very powerful Force users – ones highly in tune with the Force.

Source: Roleplaying Game: Saga Edition Core Rulebook * Cylka * 23:11, 23 December 2008 (UTC)

''I saw a graveyard of ships, surrounded by a fleet of dead ships. I felt it through him... as I feel it through you.'' Yes, I should. * Cylka * 01:44, 24 December 2008 (UTC)

Thanks for comment in Darth Nihilus nom. That was really sweet of you. I promise that I'll look it over, but it may take a couple of days because of the holidays. I'm also planning on overhauling the Telos article so it won't lose its status. Reading the AC meeting log, it seems they think the whole thing is lacking. Happy Holidays! * Cylka * 10:51, 24 December 2008 (UTC)

Force Speed GAN

 * Hey NaruHina :-). Thanks for all your suggestions on the Force Speed article so far, I was wondering if you could take another look at it as I think it has improved, and SoresuMakashi and IFLOFD's objections have been addressed. Any further suggestions would be greatly appreciated :). Hope you have a great Christmas :-). Grunny 05:49, 24 December 2008 (UTC)
 * Hey again :-). Just wondering are there any more objections to the nom or are you supporting? This is my first nom so I hope it goes through :). Merry Christmas Grunny 08:57, 24 December 2008 (UTC)
 * Yeah thats what I thought at first but I've looked through so many sources already and it appears in surprisingly few. It doesn't appear in any westend rpg sourcebooks that I have and only started appearing in the wizards, and even then I have all of them and it only appears in the ones listed and in hero's guide its only indirectly. If you know of other sources with it in then that would be great but as of now I can't find it anywhere else. Grunny 09:07, 24 December 2008 (UTC)
 * I just searched wikipedia for force speed and force augmented speed in the box, and after episode 1 it stops resulting so thats a dead end. I'll search through all the LOTF books, I have them i ebook as well so I can use find for speed and see what I come up with, but like I said I thought it appeared alot more however it actually appears quite rarely compared to say force jump. I'll get back to you when I've done the searches, might be after christmas though =P. Thanks for your suggestions and hope you have a great christmas :-). Grunny 09:27, 24 December 2008 (UTC)
 * Hey NaruHina :), I've searched alot and added a User's section as per Atarumaster88's advice and I think the article has improved alot so I wondered if you could take another look through whenever you can :-). Thanks for all your help and ideas :-).  Grunny  (Talk) 07:50, 13 January 2009 (UTC)


 * Hey again NaruHina :), just wondering if theres anything else your objecting to on the Force Speed article or whether you are supporting? Thanks for all your helpful ideas and suggestions for improvement :-).  Grunny  (Talk) 00:50, 16 January 2009 (UTC)

Restoring GA userbox
Hey NH. I was wondering how you go about proposing a userbox. I saw that you proposed a couple already. I was thinking of a userbox for restoring a GA, like the one they have for restoring a FA. Actually it was your Nihilus that gave me the idea. Also, if you would want to propose it, go right ahead. I just think GAs should have one too. Cylka  -talk- 13:01, 27 December 2008 (UTC)
 * Thanks for letting me know. And I'm sorry it took me so long to get back to you. My minds been a bit fuzzy lately. :-) Cylka  -talk- 17:51, 4 January 2009 (UTC)

Shadows of the Empire
Hey, I've finally added in a summary of the Shadows of the Empire graphic novel. Check it out and tell me what you think!--Artist Walser 01:45, 28 December 2008 (UTC)

Kotor WP
Confirming here as asked that I'm sure about joining, admittedly I am still quite new to wiki editing in general. I've already started on the Taris swoop gang related ones though. Nayayen Transmit  13:59, 3 January 2009 (UTC)

Nihilus
Yeah, so, you got the Onderon bit in the right place but you currently have the order of events in the second and third paragraphs as:


 * Exile returns to Republic Space
 * Exile re-establishes connection
 * Disturbance in the Force
 * Visas sent to find the Exile
 * Visas joins the Exile
 * Atris arrages for Exile's return
 * Peragus destroyed with major consequences
 * Exile under tutelage of Kreia

It really should be:


 * Exile returns to Republic Space
 * Atris arrages for Exile's return
 * Exile re-establishes connection
 * Peragus destroyed with major consequences
 * Exile under tutelage of Kreia
 * Disturbance in the Force
 * Visas sent to find the Exile
 * Visas joins the Exile

Some context about the Exile would also be nice. Sorry about the trouble, think of it as a supplement to the present I gave you for your KotOR nom :P. Shame it didn't pass. 08:34, 4 January 2009 (UTC)

Black Vulkars
Okay thanks, I'll get working on the things you mentioned. Whilst on the subject, does the article on their base need anything added to it? I've been working on both. Nayayen Transmit words at me  11:54, 4 January 2009 (UTC)
 * Okay, the game isn't actually working on my computer currently so I'm not sure whether I can get a map that easily (or any more screenshots other than the ones I already have). When the main Vulkar page is done and dusted I will hopefully move onto their base. Nayayen Old_Republic_military_symbol.svg Transmit words at me  21:18, 4 January 2009 (UTC)
 * Thanks for at last supporting the Vulkars' GAN. One small thing, the count still says 3 users even though there are 4 names listed. Does the count refresh after a while or has something gone awry? Nayayen Old_Republic_military_symbol.svg Talk  19:36, 1 February 2009 (UTC)

WP:KOTOR Meeting
Hello NaruHina. Please note that there will be a project meeting for WP:KOTOR at 0:00 UTC (approx. 7:00pm Eastern Time) Saturday, 31 January, 2009. Please click here for further details, including agenda. Cheers  Madclaw Shyriiwook! 00:37, 10 January 2009 (UTC)
 * Hey NH. This is just a reminder that there will be a project meeting for WP:KOTOR on Saturday, 31 January, 2009 at 0:00 UTC. More information can be found here. Cylka  -talk- 17:13, 24 January 2009 (UTC)

Re: Hunter-Killer
You know, I believe you're right, everyone's favorite assassin droid certainly does deserve the honor! It's an ambitious venture, but I think between you, me and Cylka, we'll be able to pull it off. I'd like to focus on Brianna and Visas until we've seen them to GA, but any preliminary work you could do on HK right now would definitely be helpful. Other than the sourcing, the only thing I see right now in desperate need of improvement and general expansion is the abilities section. As you can see, there's a LOT that could be added. I'll pitch in when I'm not working on Brianna or Visas as well. Let's get to it! :) 06:52, 10 January 2009 (UTC)

Brianna
Sorry, I was typing a responcs, but I forgot I was still on my userpage, and I must of deleted the entire thing instead of just what I typed. :P

Yeah, I was under the impression that you only needed 2 AC votes and 5 in total for it to pass. I checked some previous successful noms and there were only 5. How exactly does the process work, since you have some more experience with this than me? 01:55, 18 January 2009 (UTC)

Heheh, yeah, I jumped the gun a bit there. I'm still new to this after all! Oh, and there's an explanation to your objection. It's been confirmed that Brianna does travel with the female Exile. Thanks for the help! 02:10, 18 January 2009 (UTC)

"The Echani Handmaidens are a group of sisters who serve Jedi Master Atris on Telos IV after the end of the Jedi Civil War. They are trained in the well-respected Echani combat techniques. Their physical appearance is strikingly similar, except for the Last Handmaiden, Brianna, who had a different mother than her sisters. She eventually joined the Jedi Exile in her pursuit of the Sith Lords, which ultimately turned her against her sisters and Jedi Master Atris." Taken from the preview of the set at this link: http://www.wizards.com/default.asp?x=starwars/article/KOTORminispreview5.

Hope that clears it up! 02:26, 18 January 2009 (UTC)

Juno
Hey. I'd really prefer to work on it by myself, just a little accomplishment for my own personal self-esteem ;-) But I can't stop you So if you really feel the need, go ahead :-P Thanks for asking btw. And also, Ur name has to do with Love Hina the manga right? Darth Nikolai 20:30, 20 January 2009 (UTC)

GAN
Hey NH. While I appreciate you taking the time to explain any objections I may leave on the GAN page, I believe that I have a different method for trying to get a new user to learn the ins and outs of editing. If there is something that they don't understand, I would like them to either look it up themselves or get in touch with me or another user. I feel that someone can learn much more by taking action. Thanks. <font color=#008080>Cylka  <span style="font-family: times, cursive; font-size: 13px"><font color=#00A693>-talk- 10:54, 22 January 2009 (UTC)
 * Naru, I did not want to continue this discussion on the GA nom page because I believe that would be rude in general and very disrespectful to the nominator. There is a way to rewrite the Black Vulkar cut content in the present tense. Yes, the whole paragraph would have to be restructured, but it is possible. That is why I left the choice up to him. I do not understand why you are continuing to argue against and question my objection. Earlier you had left a message telling me that you just wanted to inform him that he had written it correctly, and I conceded that point. This is not your nomination and Nayayen has yet to give his opinion of the matter. Maybe you should allow him to give his opinion before you start jumping in. Since I am not asking him to go against policy, I would not change my objection just because you don't like it and certainly not before I hear from the nominator. <span style="font-variant: small-caps; font-family: times, cursive; font-size: 16px"><font color=#008080>Cylka  <span style="font-family: times, cursive; font-size: 13px"><font color=#00A693>-talk- 05:59, 23 January 2009 (UTC)

FAN
When voting on the FAN page, please remember to update the count. Cheers, -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 17:28, 22 January 2009 (UTC)

Re: WP Infobox Templace Change
Added. Greyman ( Talk ) 04:46, 23 January 2009 (UTC)


 * Well I don't have the novel at all, so if you'd be interested in a collaboration? -- Darth tom Imperial Emblem.svg <span title="(Imperial Intelligence)" style="color:Black">(Imperial Intelligence)  07:31, 24 January 2009 (UTC)

Re:GAN
The objections have been struck. And no, I shall not have fun with my schoolwork. The musical, yes, but not the schoolwork. :P DC 17:06, 24 January 2009 (UTC)
 * Guys and Dolls :D DC 01:19, 25 January 2009 (UTC)

Mercenary Enclave
Already removed, Naru. :) 03:58, 1 February 2009 (UTC)
 * While you're at it, you could do the other article he made, Scavenger camp. And you missed the WP:KOTOR meeting, but we didn't really do much except delay decisions. :) 04:01, 1 February 2009 (UTC)
 * Oh no... 04:14, 1 February 2009 (UTC)

Unit 685

 * Mauser fixed it. Gethralkin 14:16, 2 February 2009 (UTC)

HOB-147 GA
I wasn't sure where you wanted the Order 66 context, in the intro or the biography, so I put in both. Could you please look back on the article if you have not already, and if your satisfied with the context I gave, would you then please remove that part of you objection. Kilson likes PIE 19:28, 13 February 09 (UTC)
 * That's cool dude, I got to work on a few articles myself, take your time dude. Kilson likes PIE 19:39, 13 February 09 (UTC)
 * I can't thank you enough dude. In reality, I probably shouldn't have nominated the article in the first place, but with all your help, I think it has a really good chance of making it. Thanks again man. Kislon 23:48, 20 February 09 (UTC)

Kip Bunyea
How come you moved Kip Bunyea to Kip Bunyea (bounty hunter)? -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 19:03, 15 February 2009 (UTC)

Revan
Hey Naru. Revan never was a Jedi Master. The CG distinctly calls him a Jedi Knight, and in the comics, Alek calls him a "honorary Master," so no he can't be listed as a Jedi Master. Thanks. <span style="font-variant: small-caps; font-family: times, cursive; font-size: 16px"><font color=#008080>Cylka  <span style="font-family: times, cursive; font-size: 13px"><font color=#00A693>-talk- 23:13, 21 February 2009 (UTC)

Jango
The reference definitely isn't completely certain, and the writers meant for it to be that way. But I think all the evidence points in the direction of Jango. Who else could it be? Kebla 21:49, 24 February 2009 (UTC)
 * Ok! That's certainly understandable. Kebla 15:51, 25 February 2009 (UTC)

Operation: Knightfall
I didn't want to clog up the GAN page with an explanation, so I figured I would leave you a message. I talked it over with some of the ACs and you don't need a conjecture tag. What you need is to be able to provide a source for each of the alternate titles. If you can't, then they have to be taken out. Then what you'll need to do is somehow fit into the History the sources of those titles. Something like "The X group called it so and so, while official records named it so and so." This is to avoid putting ref notes in the intro, and if it's a canonical title, it shouldn't go in the Bts. <span style="font-variant: small-caps; font-family: times, cursive; font-size: 16px"><font color=#008080>Cylka  <span style="font-family: times, cursive; font-size: 13px"><font color=#00A693>-talk- 08:09, 25 February 2009 (UTC)

Help me NaruHina, you're my only hope
Hey, I wanna start by saying sorry if that was a little corny. But getting to the point now, I was wondering if you could help me with my page, cause yours is totally decked out! Mine is a little shabby and I just do star wars, not the cool techy computer stuff. If you could lend a hand or give some EXTREMELY simplified advice, that would be fantatic! If it's advice your dishing out, make sure it's so easy, a blonde could understand it. I'm a brunette, but I'm not exactly a super computery person. Thanks! Rhaal ti 05:37, 28 February 2009 (UTC)

Thank you
Ok if this message is already posted, I'm sorry. But I was wondering if you could help me with my custom signature? Thanks so much!Rhaal ti 15:53, 28 February 2009 (UTC)

thank you......
Yes I kinda figured out the infobox (which I am exstatic about!!!) but I could still use help with my custom signature User:Rhaal ti/User:Rhaal ti/sig I created it but now I don't know how to asign it as my signature. <span style="color:purple;">Any ideas? Rhaal ti 23:08, 28 February 2009 (UTC)


 * ok thank you much


 * hey, can you help me with adding a pic to my infobox thingy? I've tried multiple times and I just can't get it right. thank you for all your help! P.S. my signature is a little weird right now cause I'm in the middle of workin on it. 23:44, 28 February 2009 (UTC)

the pic...
for my info box thingy:)User:Rhaal ti/User:Rhaal ti/sig 00:43, 1 March 2009 (UTC)


 * It is the picture on the togruta page, the one that is wearing the gown. I had a customized one, but i guess I'm not using it yet,:) oh well.User:Rhaal ti/User:Rhaal ti/sig 01:01, 1 March 2009 (UTC)
 * OMYGOODNESS I HAVE A PICTURE!!!!!!! Thank you thank you thank you!!! I'm like jumping up and down! Thank you so much!!!!User:Rhaal ti/User:Rhaal ti/sig 02:22, 1 March 2009 (UTC)
 * Hey, I was wondering if I could use the big "I gotta get out of here" thing because my teacher's daughter just warned me we will be getting insanely huge projects every other weekend and I'm already swamped as it is, during the week, that is. I'm only gonna be on every other weekend.* torgutaFan * 14:28, 1 March 2009 (UTC)

hey
I was wondering if I could have the three userboxes about the clone wars utter stinkocity, and the one under it about the death star being a waste of money. thanks!* torgutaFan * 14:40, 1 March 2009 (UTC)

hi
Hey I was wondering if you would mind helping me with sourcing Slaver's Chains? My sources are episode 6 and the third book in the thrawn trilogy(can't remeber the exact name). Any help you can give would be awsome! Thanks for everything.* torgutaFan * 01:03, 2 March 2009 (UTC)

Thanks
so glad there are people who have my back* torgutaFan * 03:35, 2 March 2009 (UTC)

Darth Nihilus' species
You might want to mention that Nihilus' "human" form was a dark-side abberation, according to the KotOR campaign guide.--Jedi Kasra (talk) 15:30, 6 March 2009 (UTC)

I think we're good...
I believe I have addressed all your objections to Unidentified Mandalorian Commander on the GAN page. Would you please review it again? (or am i supposed to scratch out the objections first???)--End0 da Baker 15:58, 7 March 2009 (UTC)

Revan's quest
Hi, NaruHina. Would you be interested in helping me write out his second quest for the Star Forge? Not trying to be boastful, that's not my style, but I did the same thing for the Jedi Exile, writing out her search for the Jedi by planet. I know we can do this.--Jedi Kasra (talk) 15:40, 12 March 2009 (UTC)
 * Great, would you object if I put copied the article on a sub-page of mine so we can work on it without causing problems with the actual article? (Similar to how I did with Kreia.)--Jedi Kasra (talk) 20:23, 12 March 2009 (UTC)
 * Ok, here's the sub-page. I presume we'll arrange the planets as follows: Tatooine-Kashyyyk-Manaan-Korriban. Great to be working with you.--Jedi Kasra (talk) 20:35, 12 March 2009 (UTC)
 * Still playing through the game to get more info to put down on the sub-page, also reading the strategy guide and such.--Jedi Kasra (talk) 14:23, 26 March 2009 (UTC)
 * Hey, Naru, still working on my sub-page for Revan. How's everything going? Sorry I couldn't get this message to you sooner. It'll take a while, since I've got an article going through the GA process, and two going through the FAs, but we'll get there. I appreciate your help so far.--Jedi Kasra (talk) 14:41, 10 June 2009 (UTC)
 * Hey, how's it going, Naru. Just to let you know, my sub-page on Revan can be found here.--Jedi Kasra (talk) 17:31, 22 July 2009 (UTC)

Re: Revan"s Rank
Hey Naru. I believe that Chronicles was written before the CG, but anyway, there are some serious continuity issues with Chronicles, and right now I am actually in the middle of trying determine how to deal with those issues. So far, I have heard that the CG overrides any Chronicles information, but I'm not certain of this. Until I find out for sure, I would say that it is better to leave it out of the article until I get some concrete answers. <span style="font-variant: small-caps; font-family: times, cursive; font-size: 16px"><font color=#008080>Cylka  <span style="font-family: times, cursive; font-size: 13px"><font color=#00A693>-talk- 21:59, 14 March 2009 (UTC)
 * I believe I heard somewhere that the whole thing with Alek and the other Revanchists calling Revan "Master" was intended to retcon the Chronicles discrepancy.--Jedi Kasra (talk) 17:08, 16 March 2009 (UTC)
 * OK, so I have figured out the continuity issues and you can take a look at them here on the project page. So far, I haven't seen anything concrete about the retcon Kasra mentioned. All I know is the Revan was Malak's "informal master," according to the comics. <span style="font-variant: small-caps; font-family: times, cursive; font-size: 16px"><font color=#008080>Cylka  <span style="font-family: times, cursive; font-size: 13px"><font color=#00A693>-talk- 02:36, 21 March 2009 (UTC)

Subpage

 * Hey, I feel like some new user for asking this, but how exactly would one go about making a subpage? thanks. Dr.Kermit ( The Doctor is in ) 23:52, 20 March 2009 (UTC)
 * Thanks very much Dr.Kermit ( The Doctor is in ) 00:29, 21 March 2009 (UTC)

Help?
Hey Naru I'm trying to GA the Treaty of Coruscant but I'm having a hell of a time getting the sourcing right, especially for the "Terms and Results" section. I was wondering if you could help me out, and I figured I'd ask you because you did the Femi article. I know it didn't need any major sourcing, but it was still TOR so yeah. If you can help me out I'd appreciate it a lot. Let me know! Thanks! Dark Lord Trayus 00:58, 8 April 2009 (UTC)
 * Well thanks anyway. Hopefully it doesn't get "Rule Fived" but I'm still gunna try. I don't feel like it's going to be a giant magnet for new changes, especially compared to the wars themselves. Plus the game doesn't seem to be anywhere near release. Dark Lord Trayus 04:16, 8 April 2009 (UTC)

Re: Operation Knightfall
Sorry dude, I completely forgot about that objection. I had four GA noms up at the time, so you can understand if I had my hands full. I'm getting rid of the objection right now. Kilson Likes PIE 10:20, 08 March 09 (UTC)

RE: Darth Nihilus
It means combined with and continuing off of prior objections or that the objection stands with a new condition. There are a few places where the objection either still stands&mdash;which I believe I stated explicitly a few times&mdash;the others are where the previous objection relates to that one. &mdash; Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 22:50, 24 April 2009 (UTC)

KOTOR Wiki
Hey, I sax you edited a whole lot on the Knights of the Old republic page. Are you interested in helping me with my Star Wars Knights of the Old Republic wiki, here is the link. http://swkotorwiki.wikia.com/wiki/Star_Wars:_Knights_of_the_Old_Republic_Wiki. Thanks for your time.

Nihilus on the GAN
Hey Naru. After the recent AC meeting we decided to trial a new GAN format on some of our longer noms, which in this case are Darth Nihilus and Ordo Skirata. As you can see from the GAN the objections section has been moved to what will become the archive subpage here. Now you can watch that page and see instantly when someone has objected or commented on your nom instead of having to check the GAN constantly. You should probably let Fiolli know when you've addressed his objections where he can find them :-).  Grunny  ( Talk ) 03:55, 20 May 2009 (UTC)

Procedure nom
Well, I found sites mostly like this: http://starwars.yahoo.com/photos/the-clone-wars-procedure-webcomic-3?ue_dpoa=eb29b7cefa052f250fe06555c71425fd&ue_dpoat=photos&ue_dpat=photos&ue_dpam=soft&ue_dpln=The+Clone+Wars%3A+Transfer%3A+Webcomic+%239 To point something out, CC and Grunny told me not to use sites similar to this. I addressed your other objection by the way. Thanks for the review dude. :) Kilson Likes PIE 19:33, 27 May 09 (UTC)

Showdown on Coruscant
Hey, Naru,

I have a nice quote that I think would look nice as the opener, since you don't have one there. I'd just add it, but since you GA'd this, I wanted to run the idea by you first. Lemme know what you think. —Tommy9281  ( No quarter given, all exits sealed ) 22:16, 27 May 2009 (UTC)
 * NaruHina has been blocked from editing for an extended period of time. I would recommend just adding the quote in. Toprawa and Ralltiir 22:19, 27 May 2009 (UTC)
 * I was unaware. Thank you. —Tommy9281 Dark side Master SWGTCG.jpg ( No quarter given, all exits sealed ) 22:35, 27 May 2009 (UTC)

KotOR series
Well, when you put it that way, I guess it could work. I think that it would be a good idea to write/update an article about the canceled KotOR 3 before writing an article about the series. TOR would only need to be mentioned as a loose spin-off until we learn more about the connection between them. <span style="font-variant: small-caps; font-family: times, cursive; font-size: 16px"><font color=#008080>Cylka  <span style="font-family: times, cursive; font-size: 13px"><font color=#00A693>-talk- 01:19, 22 June 2009 (UTC)
 * I would leave it off for right now since it had been canceled. We can reexamine the issue a bit later. It may depend on how much info there is on game. <span style="font-variant: small-caps; font-family: times, cursive; font-size: 16px"><font color=#008080>Cylka  <span style="font-family: times, cursive; font-size: 13px"><font color=#00A693>-talk- 02:11, 22 June 2009 (UTC)

Sith Empire and Sith Triumvirate
Hey, Naru. How goes everything? Anyway, where exactly is it stated that the Triumvirate was affiliated with Revan and Malak's Sith Empire?
 * Ah, OK... It's good to hear you're doing well, my man. Do you mind if I look over your nom for the Nihilus article?--Jedi Kasra (talk) 17:39, 6 August 2009 (UTC)
 * OK, I'll review it Monday, and let you know. If you could take a look at the Malak and Nord FA's and give me a review, I'd appreciate it, as well. Take care, now.--Jedi Kasra (talk) 00:02, 8 August 2009 (UTC)
 * A few things came up, so I'll try to go voer the article as soon as I can, my man.--Jedi Kasra (talk) 19:04, 11 August 2009 (UTC)
 * I think I took care of all your objections to Nord, please take a look at it. By the way, I got my license today.--Jedi Kasra (talk) 20:21, 14 August 2009 (UTC)
 * Yo, Naru, I looked at the article, and I couldn't find anything that other users haven't objected to. I'll take a couple more looks, but other than those objections, I think you're good.--Jedi Kasra (talk) 15:48, 17 August 2009 (UTC)
 * Hey, Naru, I read the KotOR campaign guide cover to cover, and I could find nothing that indicates that Traya or Nihilus belonged to Revan and Malak's Sith Empire. In fact, Traya'e entry states that she came to the Empire's remnants on Malachor as Revan's former master, indicating that she came sometime after the end of the Jedi Civil War. Between Traya, Sion, and Nihilus, the only one who belonged to Revan and Malak's Sith Empire was Sion.--Jedi Kasra (talk) 16:21, 18 August 2009 (UTC)
 * No prob, Naru.--Jedi Kasra (talk) 23:35, 20 August 2009 (UTC)

Darth Nihilus
Normally I do not address FAN objections on talk pages, but I want to commend you for taking my prior objections seriously. I will have some time later in the week to comb through the article again and check things off. Good luck with the article. &mdash; Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 01:52, 11 August 2009 (UTC)

RE:images
Sorry about those poor quality images, unfortunately my computer won't allow me to modify the readme file, so I can't take screen shots. The ones that I have uploaded so far weren't taken by me though, I got them from the IGN guide to KotOR. Jayden Matthews 09:10, 22 August 2009 (UTC)

don't CSD legitimate articles
Sith Master (Lehon) was a completely legitimate article. Please do not place CSD tags on such articles that there is no merit in deleting. Thankfully a more naive administrator did not come along and trust your judgment here, but in the future if you have a problem with articles that aren't 100% baloney, please TC them instead. Further such CSD tags will be treated as disruption of the wiki processes. Graestan ( Talk ) 14:23, 24 August 2009 (UTC)

Warning
Do not add unsourced information to articles, ala Operation: Knightfall's infobox. Do not claim that something is sourced when the present ref note does not include that info. Persist and you will be blocked. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 11:10, 25 August 2009 (UTC)
 * Oh, and include edit warring in that too. You're walking a fine line. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 11:11, 25 August 2009 (UTC)
 * All information must be sourced, regardless of its nature. That's sort of a core part of the whole wiki thing and you'd do well to remember it. I can't say I'm exactly impressed by this in light of this, though given that you undid yourself I won't dwell on it too much. Just don't try to pull the wool over anyone's eyes, because it won't work. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 23:40, 27 August 2009 (UTC)

Mara Jade Skywalker image?
Hi there. You reverted my change at Mara Jade Skywalker citing that real life images should be preferred in infoboxes. I obviously disagree (since the Essential Atlas picture is much better even if drawn) but can you show me where that rule is written down? I could not find any such requirement. Regards SoWhy 20:10, 28 August 2009 (UTC)


 * I see your point, although I do not really think it's a valid one. One could argue that the precedent in the Luke, Han or Leia articles is because they are G-canon and thus more "canon-y" than elements of C-canon, i.e. EU happenings. On the other hand, both the LA and the Essential Atlas Mara picture are C-canon and thus not comparable. I will raise the question on the talk page thus and see what people think. Thanks for your answer though. Regards SoWhy 08:29, 29 August 2009 (UTC)


 * I see. Well, it seems there was some controversy about it back in 2007 already which seems to have come to no conclusion, so I raised the issue again, offering the EA picture as a replacement. Regards SoWhy 08:43, 29 August 2009 (UTC)

Reply
Ah, my bad. I'll check it out now.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 22:30, September 1, 2009 (UTC)

Clone assassins
Couple of things: Please watch your linking, and the use of repetitive words like "Soldiers." Their are certain issues with the article regarding Sidious. In the bio you stated: "Clone assassins were special ordered by Supreme Chancellor Palpatine, actually Sidious, who justified them as a way to combat Jedi if they ever decided to rebel against him and the Galactic Senate." "actually Sidious" doesn't work here. Unless you mention that "Sidious" was his alter ego, then it would be fine. I believe their was also another issue like this in the intro.

I removed unnecessary/out-of-place information from the intro and bio, however, the out-of-place information has been refitted in. In the intro, an example would be: "...which took place in 19 BBY, and a squad of them was used to guard the Jedi Communication Center." I've moved "Jedi Communication Center" to the next sentence which reads: "Vader activated a beacon, inside the Jedi Communication Center..."

Also, please give your articles a thorough copyedit. I realize that this was just a review, although I've corrected a fair amount of misspelled words and grammatical issues like this: "In 19 BBY, the final year of the Clone Wars, Sidious was engaged in a lightsaber duel by a Mace Windu, a Jedi Master who had learned of his true identity. " "Sidious was engaged" and "By a Mace Windu"? Also the way the sentence was structured didn't make a lot of sense. I've rearranged the sentence to make it flow better.

After Windu vs Sidious, their was a factual error that I've corrected. Sidious did not authorize Order 66 after he named Darth Vader his apprentice. After he killed Windu, Sidious told Vader to go to the Jedi Temple to kill the Jedi. After he left (If you recall the marching into the Jedi Temple scene in ROTS), Sidious then executed Order 66. While it is not a requirement, it is, however, proper to mention a planet by saying " Planet of ___." I've corrected quite a few. Overall, good work. :)  JangFett  Talk 19:52, September 2, 2009 (UTC)
 * No problem, glad to help. :)  JangFett  Talk 23:39, September 15, 2009 (UTC)

GAN
The Unidentified Twi'lek Sith GAN has been removed from the nomination page per the AC consensus decision of September 2nd. Your disagreement with the AC's decision to remove the nomination is duly noted, but it does not mean you should renominate the article in what I can only interpret to be a bad-faith attempt to demonstrate your disgust, especially considering what seems to be a pretty half-hearted effort to resolve the objection for which it was removed to begin with. Please note that this message is coming from Toprawa the Administrator, not Toprawa the AC member. I consider this nothing but blatant violation of site consensus. And if you have serious interest in nominating this article, I would probably recommend getting in contact with the user who made the objection in the first place, who, I might add with all due respect, knows just a little something about how Wookieepedia articles are put together. So it would behoove you to listen to what he has to say. Should you continue to violate site consensus, you will find yourself blocked from editing. Thank you for your cooperation. Toprawa and Ralltiir 23:23, September 5, 2009 (UTC)