Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Pargo


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Pargo

 * Nominated by: Green Tentacle (Talk) 20:34, October 12, 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Wherever you go, on sea or on sand, you can't ever hide from Pargo LaGrande!

(5 Inqs/0 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1)  IFYLOFD  ( You will pay the price for your lack of vision! ) 01:02, October 30, 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) --  —Harrar  ( Cut the comm chatter ) 14:35, November 23, 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) --Eyrezer 00:03, December 4, 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 01:14, December 23, 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) —Tommy9281  Dark side Master SWGTCG.jpg ( No truth in me ) 05:42, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) IFYLOFD:
 * 2) * Pargo and Stele, who were both out stunting at the time of the raid" What do you mean by "stunting"? Could less colloquial language be used here?
 * 3) **Changed to "competing". Green Tentacle (Talk) 13:38, October 25, 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) * Context on The Maze.
 * 5) **There isn't any. It's only briefly mentioned and there's nothing to say what it is. I was linking to the wrong Maze, however, so this is now a redlink. Green Tentacle (Talk) 13:38, October 25, 2009 (UTC)
 * 6) *Other than that it looks good.  IFYLOFD  ( You will pay the price for your lack of vision! ) 23:02, October 23, 2009 (UTC)

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