Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Jace Dallin


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Support Oppose
 * 1) Havac 18:48, 31 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Cull Tremayne 07:34, 1 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) Good characer. Unlike Autem! Bah! Thefourdotelipsis 00:39, 2 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) *Autem . . . not a good character? That's it, surrender the crack pipe. Havac 03:25, 2 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 5)  Greyman ( Paratus ) 17:33, 16 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 6) --Eyrezer 22:56, 16 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 1) A few things:
 * 2) * Punctuation: Em dashes are erroneously surrounded by spaces.
 * 3) * Quotes: Several contain excessive internal links.
 * 4) * Introduction: Is it really necessary to state that he was a male Human?
 * --Imperialles 15:16, 2 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 1) *Both of the first two already addressed at Autem's entry; on the third, I personally don't think so, but I was going with the widespread style. Thank you for providing me with an excuse to ditch it. Havac 17:53, 2 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Since reference tags have been provided for all his other "Affiliations", is it possible to get a ref tag for the Confederacy of Independent Systems?  Greyman ( Paratus ) 15:08, 4 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) *I left that because of the way it's organized -- The Provisional Government thing is a subset of the Confederacy, so by sourcing the Provisional thing, the Confederacy is sourced. The Confederate affiliation is inherent to the Provisional affiliation. But if you want, it can be sourced. Havac 21:25, 4 September 2007 (UTC)

Comments
 * I really enjoyed this one. Nice work. Cull Tremayne 07:34, 1 September 2007 (UTC)
 * Ditto. As someone unfamiliar with all the events depicted, it is a pleasure to be enlightened! --Eyrezer 22:56, 16 September 2007 (UTC)