Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Gree Baaker


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Gree Baaker

 * Nominated by: --Eyrezer 10:28, November 23, 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: A planet

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 13:24, November 23, 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) A vote. --Skippy Farlstendoiro 16:30, November 23, 2009 (UTC)
 * 3)  Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 02:36, November 24, 2009(UTC)
 * 4) -- Xd1358  Talk 15:02, November 26, 2009 (UTC)
 * 5)  CC7567  (talk) 20:22, November 26, 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) An objection (by Skippy)
 * 2) * his mother tired to help him escape and create a new identify  All this sentence is confusing, but this part is specially so (Was she tired because he was too insistent? Or did she feel physically exhausted by doing this? What the heck did she created? Did she created it or only helped him to create it?). I strongly suggest you to revise it looking for possible important typos. Maybe you could reword the sentence if you feel it'd help (I feel that). --Skippy Farlstendoiro 10:36, November 23, 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) **Tired should have been tried. --Eyrezer 10:45, November 23, 2009 (UTC)

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