Wookieepedia:Good article nominations



This page is for the nomination of good articles. This is not a way to showcase the articles of your favorite characters, spaceships, or the like. For a list of good articles, see Category:Wookieepedia good articles.

What is a Good article?
A Good article is an article that adheres to quality standards, but cannot reach FA status due to its limited content.

A Good article has the following attributes.

1. It is well written. In this respect:


 * (a) it has compelling prose, and is readily comprehensible to non-specialist readers;
 * (b) it follows a logical structure, introducing the topic and then grouping together its coverage of related aspects; where appropriate, it contains a succinct lead section summarizing the topic, and the remaining text is organized into a system of hierarchical sections (particularly for longer articles);
 * (c) it follows the Manual of Style, Layout Guide, and all other policies;
 * (d) necessary technical terms or jargon are briefly explained in the article itself, or an active link is provided.

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable. In this respect:


 * (a) it provides references to any and all sources used for its material;
 * (b) sources should be selected in accordance with the guidelines for reliable sources;
 * (c) it contains no elements of original research.

3. It is broad in its coverage, addressing all major aspects of the topic (this requirement is slightly weaker than the "comprehensiveness" required by WP:FA, and allows shorter articles and broad overviews of large topics to be listed);.

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy. In this respect:


 * (a) viewpoints are represented fairly and without bias;
 * (b) all significant points of view are fairly presented, but not asserted, particularly where there are or have been conflicting views on the topic.

5. It is stable, i.e., it does not change significantly from day to day and is not the subject of ongoing edit wars. This does not apply to vandalism and protection or semi-protection as a result of vandalism.

6. It contains images, where possible, to illustrate the topic. In this respect:


 * (a) the images are properly sourced and have succinct and descriptive captions;
 * (b) a lack of images does not in itself prevent an article from achieving Good Article status.

Nomination of Good articles
To nominate an article for Good article status, list it here. Nominated articles must meet all six requirements stated above. If an article has a total of five votes after at least a week since it was nominated (beginning the day of its nomination) and no objections (or the objections have been stricken or overridden), the article will be considered a "Good article" and tagged with the template. The talk page will also be tagged with the GA template. For complete instructions on archiving nominations please see here. Also remember to add GAnom at the top of the article you are nominating.

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Support Oppose
 * 1) Done a large over haul I think its ready for GA now, but what ever happens I'm sure you will point out some things that will help me improve the article RC-1136 Copy 17:07, 7 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) Seems much better.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 19:16, 17 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) Nice work :)  Aqua  Unasi  18:46, 22 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) Great Article Mando Warrior 13:17, 23 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 1) Chack:
 * 2) * Needs a longer intro and a BTS.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 14:44, 8 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) ** Done, RC-1136 Copy 12:17, 10 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) * "Sev had experience combating Battle Droids,Geonosians and Trandoshans." Uneeded
 * 5) **Deleted RC-1136 Copy 08:20, 13 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 6) * What are Black Ops?
 * 7) **Explation there now RC-1136 Copy 08:20, 13 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 8) * ...due to the fact that Boss had met the rest of the squad on the way to the rendezvous." I’d say this is unnecessary.
 * 9) ** Hmm... I left it in because the end of that paragraph is mainly introducing Boss and beacause I've tryed to make that explantion fit in with the flow it needed that to make it make sence (if you get what I mean) but if you still think it should be got rid of just say again and I will happily remove it RC-1136 Copy 08:20, 13 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 10) * What room did they infiltrate?
 * 11) ** His Planning room, I belive RC-1136 Copy 08:20, 13 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 12) ***actually I know know :), the adivisor says so, RC-1136 Copy 16:01, 13 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 13) * The first sentence in that paragraph is a run-on.
 * 14) ** Once they infiltrated the planning room the squad quickly set about killing all occupants, despite this Sun Fac escaped to a landing pad, leaving two Super Battle Droids to cover his back? I don't see how thats a run-on, Probly just me being blind RC-1136 Copy 08:20, 13 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 15) * Please correct your link to 1138 too.
 * 16) **Corrected RC-1136 Copy 08:20, 13 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 17) * The second paragraph in Geonosis needs more explanation. It could also be written better to make it more interesting.
 * 18) ** Did you mean the bit about the core ship and the jamming device? well I expanded those, RC-1136 Copy 08:20, 13 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 19) * The paragraph about the Prosecutor does too. Expound on things more.
 * 20) ** added a small amount, is it enough? RC-1136 Copy 08:20, 13 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 21) * You use however too many times in the second paragraph of Mission with Omegas.
 * 22) ** However, now I don't :) RC-1136 Copy 08:20, 13 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 23) * Also, your apostrophes are wrong in several cases there.
 * 24) **I didn't use any incorrect apostrophes. at lest not in Mission with Omegas. Some where else? RC-1136 Copy 08:20, 13 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 25) ***I don't think you did. Never mind.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 17:41, 15 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 26) * Give some context on Skuuma and de-link the second time it’s mentioned.
 * 27) ** Delinked, also added a bit of information about its location RC-1136 Copy 08:20, 13 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 28) * Can the Mid Clone Wars section be expanded at all?
 * 29) ** Not really, I added five words *looks chuffed* RC-1136 Copy 08:20, 13 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 30) * Why did she want Skirata to get there first?
 * 31) ** He I think you ment, I added a bit about Juskin explaning why he gave info to Kal RC-1136 Copy 08:20, 13 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 32) * The last sentence in P&T is present tense.
 * 33) ** Changed RC-1136 Copy 08:20, 13 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 34) * I'd move the first sentence in appearance up to P&T and get ride of that section, as there is little info.
 * 35) ** done RC-1136 Copy 08:20, 13 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 36) * You mention something about 36's squad? What is that?  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 17:41, 15 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 37) ** I can't remember the exact words, but just before going into the catacombs Advisor says something like: "deltas, as you already know 36's squad have been lost while investigating a jamming device that's blocking our scopes" there has been much speculation over whether 36's squad is in fact RC-1136s original squad, but as it is only speculation it has been left out the article RC-1136 Copy 09:06, 16 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 38) ***Changed it a little for you.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 19:16, 17 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 39) Aqua Unasi
 * 40) * A very nice article, but it still needs a little work to be a GA. Main thing: the article's punctuation is, pretty bad. Some parts of the article entire paragraphs are written as one sentence, using commas in places of periods which makes it very difficult to follow it and read through it. I went through and tried to clean it up a bit, but in some places I didn't know exactly what it was trying to say. Here's a spot, for example:
 * 41) **Once they infiltrated the room the squad quickly set about killing all occupants, despite this Sun Fac escaped to a landing pad, leaving two Super Battle Droids to cover his back, Delta destroyed these droids and breached the door, however Sun Fac had already reached his Star Fighter and was heating up the engine, Boss quickly ordered Sev to take the fighter out from a sniping position, before Sev could do so, Sun Fac was in the air, however instead of running he stayed, obviously hoping to blow the squad apart with his laser cannons, but before he could do so, Sev downed his fighter.  - Thats all one sentence, and reads very play by play-ish. Could you touch this up, and see if anywhere else in the article it needs it?
 * 42) ***That should be done, but you'd best be the judge of that RC-1136 Copy 08:50, 11 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 43) * The article needs to be fully sourced, so that includes the infobox, and every paragraph.
 * 44) ** However, the introduction does not need to be sourced. lol, So your reference there isn't necessary. :)
 * 45) ***'''Should be done RC-1136 Copy 08:50, 11 June 2008 (UTC}
 * 46) * Some of the sections are pretty short and talk about the events of Delta Squad, and not Sev in particular. - examples: Meeting Omega and the Mid Clone Wars. Is it possible to maybe combine these with other sections, or say something like, Sev, along with the Delta Squad, to keep the article about Sev, not just the events of Delta Squad.
 * 47) **Have changed that, People are going to think the Squad is called "Sev and the rest of Delta" now, also I combined Meeting Omega with Mission to Coruscant,and the Mid Clone Wars was originally two sections, So I'm not sure it would be a good idea to combine it with Ko Sai, Or Mission with Omega, What do you reckon? RC-1136 Copy 09:11, 11 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 48) *** That's much better :)  Aqua  Unasi  17:52, 11 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 49) * To someone not familiar with Delta Squad, some of these names are confusing. Fi, and Kal Skirata are introduced with no explanation, could you add context about them in the article?
 * 50) **Added an explanation for 'Kal, Fi, a small one for Atin and Sun Fac', if you spot any others please let me know RC-1136 Copy 08:50, 11 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 51) *** Good! Now we know who everyone is - however, I can't find the explanation of Fi. Am I missing it?  Aqua  Unasi  17:52, 11 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 52) ****Hmmm, how funny, I was sure I put that in, anyway its there now, well spoted RC-1136 Copy 18:30, 11 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 53) * Finally, this paragraph: Regardless of how Sev developed his unique personality, it certainly aided the Deltas greatly when their covert operations turned into all-out warfare - reads very point of view-ish. I see you have it from a source, however it should still be presented in a NPOV way in the article.
 * 54) **Have touched up the Personality and traits section a bit, hope its ok now RC-1136 Copy 08:56, 11 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 55) * Also, I believe that you can't have quotes in the middle of sections - only at the beginning of sections. So your quote at the bottom of Kashyyk needs to either be made the section header or removed.  Aqua  Unasi  17:52, 11 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 56) **'''Done that, should be everything RC-1136 Copy 10:20, 12 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 57) * This may seem like a lot, but this will help to (hopefully) greatly improve your article. Good work :)  Aqua  Unasi  03:32, 11 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 58) **Ahh! overload :D. I'll do the best I can, and thanks for your help on the article, RC-1136 Copy 07:52, 11 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 59) Toprawa:
 * 60) *A few of your sentences are not sourced, and some of these don't even end in punctuation.
 * 61) *Additionally, there's no reason why your ref tags should be double spaced after punctuation. There should be no space.
 * 62) *There's no reason to make the section titles links. User the tag instead.
 * 63) *The images are painfully small
 * 64) *The article's sectioning could probably be revisited. Some of these one, two sentence sections should be combined.
 * 65) *Please punctuate your quote attribution lines correctly
 * 66) *The P/T quote should be in Quote format, not Dialogue. Toprawa and Ralltiir 19:15, 20 July 2008 (UTC)

Comments
 * RC-1136 will be inactive from the 30th of June till the 27th of July 2008, please display patience, thankyou

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Support
 * 1) Toprawa and Ralltiir 23:11, 22 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) Your articles on ESB-related stuff never fails to amaze me.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 21:34, 27 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 3)  Aqua  Unasi  16:21, 2 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) Cavalier One ( Squadron channel ) 19:26, 18 July 2008 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) Xadún's scrawlings...
 * 2) *If Jaster Mereel is Boba Fett, all further refences to 'Mereel' should read Fett. Otherwise, it can be misleading as to whether it is Fett or Mereel (irrespective of who everyone else thought he was).
 * 3) **I don't necessarily believe this is the best course of action for this particular article. I agree with what you're saying, and pushed for the very thing on the Nyna Calixte article in regards to the Calixte vs. Morrigan Corde persona alternating. However, in this stage of Fett's life, while living on Concord Dawn he strictly went by the name of Jaster Mereel, and did not alternate between the two. Your suggestion would serve better on the Fett article, I feel, where it would be silly to alternate between the two. From Iving Creel's perspective, however, he only knew the man as Jaster Mereel.
 * 4) **The fact that Creel knew Fett under an alias for the duration of their contact does not chance the fact that the character is Boba Fett, and not Jaster Mereel. The names should be changed, or the Article is written from a perspective, and therefore has bias to a character. Articles need to be neutral, to the best of their ability. Darth Xadún ( Consult the Holocron ) 20:07, 4 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) ***I think you're misinterpreting the idea of the NPOV rule. Articles on certain characters are meant to be written from their perspective while maintaining a neutral description of what's going on, in terms of not showing bias toward, for example, right and wrong. This isn't a violation of the neutral perspective in that sense, it's showing the situation from Creel's angle, as in he and the planet of Concorn Down knew the man as Jaster Mereel. Toprawa and Ralltiir 20:26, 4 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 6) ****On that arguement, I concede it is a neutral POV. But since Mereel in this instance is just an alias, surely all references to him should read Fett? Darth Xadún ( Consult the Holocron ) 08:54, 14 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 7) *****If I may chime in, I agree with Toprawa, though I understand where Xadún is coming from. I'll give you another example: in The Paradise Snare, for the majority of the book Han Solo is known only as Vyyk Draygo to everyone on the planet Ylesia, and no-one knows his true identity. However, when writing Bria Tharen or Teroenza's articles, it would make more sense to refer to him as "Draygo" initially, because that is who they knew him as and it saves an unnecessary explanation of who Draygo actually is. Does that make sense? -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 10:51, 14 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 8) ******I can see what you mean. But I feel aliases should be mentioned initially, specified as being an alias, and then disregarded, as they are usually invented persons. But this instance could be even more confusing as the alias was an actual person. Interestingly, "Vyyk Drago" isn't mentioned in the entire Bria Tharen article (I don't possess the sources to add it unfortunately), and after one reference to his alias, Han is refered to as either Solo or Han Solo for the remained of the Teroenza article. The latter is what I feel should be applied here. An initial reference, then using the chacter's real name.  Darth Xadún ( Consult the Holocron ) 11:01, 15 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 9) * A little more info on Fett when you introduce him would be nice.
 * 10) **Added.
 * 11) * "Unknown to Creel was that the man had raped Fett's wife, Sintas, causing Fett to seek vengeance." Re-phrase this so it makes sense, and always use full names when mentioning a character for the first time in an article.
 * 12) **I added this, so I feel like I should ensure it make sense. Changed the sentence a little, though it still refers to him as Fett rather than mereel, because she was Fett's wife, after all, not Mereel, as in his fake identity.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 23:36, 2 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 13) ***Thanks, Chack.
 * 14) * Infobox - Either put a canonically confirmed birth date or leave it blank, please
 * 15) **I don't think this is necessarily that bad of a practice. While we don't have an exact DOB for the man, we know from the book's description of Creel that he is canonically several years Boba Fett's senior, and thus was born sometime in the time frame prior to Fett's birth in 31.5 BBY. A similar infobox can be found on the Clabburn the Elder Featured Article. Mind you, this isn't just a random assumption based on whether someone appears older than someone who is a teenager, for example. This is indeed a canonical description. Toprawa and Ralltiir 14:15, 4 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 16) *** Just because it's slipped though on an FA doesn't make it correct. If this was the case, all character articles could have an "approximate" DOB based on how old they are compared to canonically age-defined characters. And that, IMHO, would just look amateurish.
 * 17) ****Once again, I think you're misinterpreting the meaning behind including this. Nothing "slipped by" the Inquisitors. Of course any and all article could include a "Sometime before X date," but the uniqueness of these instances is that the they are canonically described to be born around this time, rather than just guessing based on someone's appearance. If we could give a certain date for Creel we would, but we're working with what we have. In this instance, we're nailing it down as close as canonically possible. There's nothing amateurish about this at all. Toprawa and Ralltiir 20:26, 4 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 18) ***** A poor example on my part. The problem I have is that where there is no definate date given, I feel there should not be a speculated date. I understand that sources will not always grant the necessary information - it would serve no purpose to outline a character's whole history within a storyline. But I feel that unless you can actualy confirm a character's DOB it shouldn't be in an article, vauge canonical reference or not. How about, as compromise, remove the unconfirmed DOB from the infobox but refer to his age in the BtS as unconfirmed with the canonical reference to an approximate birth date?
 * 19) ******This isn't really a valid objection. You're not showing me any concrete evidence not to include it. There is nothing speculative about the date, and it is 100% verified canon. Aside from the FAs I've already showed you, we now have a persistent precedent with the Dhol article, which employs a similar example of the "unclear" DOB/DOD deal. Toprawa and Ralltiir 16:32, 18 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 20) ******* I guess I'm the only one that finds the absense of an exact date irksome. And if that's the case, I just don't want to be at loggerheads with people. Darth Xadún ( Consult the Holocron ) 20:38, 21 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 21) *Not bad. I like GAN/FANs on people I've never heard of, mainly because I think it's easier to judge them without bias. Darth Xadún ( Consult the Holocron ) 20:20, 2 July 2008 (UTC)

Comments
 * Not really opposition since I'm not sure - but as Revelation had extra information on the case, should that be added to the article? Also, is Creel mentioned (either directly or indirectly) in the book? - Cavalier One ( Squadron channel ) 10:40, 24 June 2008 (UTC)
 * Is this the case where the man Fett killed was guilty of raping Sintas? I believe it is, and that thus needs to be added. I don't think Creel is referenced, but I could be wrong.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 00:10, 25 June 2008 (UTC)
 * Hmm, very interesting. I'm not sure, since I've never read Revelation. If someone could shed some definitive light on this, it would be greatly appreciated. Toprawa and Ralltiir 00:41, 25 June 2008 (UTC)
 * I'm almost positive this is the case mentioned. I'll add the info for you in the next day or two unless someone else does it first.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 21:45, 25 June 2008 (UTC)

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Support
 * 1) --Eyrezer 09:49, 28 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) Goodwood  [[Image:Redstarbird.svg|20px]] ( Alliance Intelligence ) 02:40, 26 July 2008 (UTC)

Object

Comments
 * You might want to check your tenses a little. Yrfeloran 03:56, 1 July 2008 (UTC)
 * It could do with a redlinks tag. Darth Xadún ( Consult the Holocron ) 21:04, 2 July 2008 (UTC)
 * In response to both, OOU articles are meant to be written in present tense, and there are no GAN red link rules. Toprawa and Ralltiir 16:23, 5 July 2008 (UTC)

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Support Object
 * 1) You should read this article for the 110-meter Lando Calrissian alone.Yrfeloran 21:04, 29 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) Muuuuuurgh 02:36, 3 July 2008 (UTC)

Comments

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Support
 * 1) Goodwood  [[Image:Redstarbird.svg|20px]] ( Alliance Intelligence ) 23:50, 2 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) The appearances list wasn't as complete as I'd prefer. —Xwing328 (Talk) 22:38, 13 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 3)  Ifindyourlackoffaithdisturbing  ( You're all clear kid! )( Now let's blow this thing and go home! ) 22:40, 13 July 2008 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Needs something on how it does/doesn't fit into continuity and what level of canon it is, etc. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 07:39, 3 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) *Added.-- Goodwood [[Image:Redstarbird.svg|20px]] ( Alliance Intelligence ) 03:55, 4 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) There's info in the intro/infobox that isn't in the main body. When was the comic released? Where was it collected? Who wrote it? Who illustrated it? How long is it? How did fans like it? All of these questions need to be answered in full in the main body. Also, "Behind the scenes" section in an OOU is silly; please find a more suitable title. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 22:55, 13 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) *Addressed save for fan reaction...which to be honest is a bit hard to find and even tougher to reference properly.-- Goodwood [[Image:Redstarbird.svg|20px]] ( Alliance Intelligence ) 03:53, 16 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) **With Greyman's help, fan reaction has been found and incorporated into the article.-- Goodwood [[Image:Redstarbird.svg|20px]] ( Alliance Intelligence ) 02:38, 26 July 2008 (UTC)

Comments
 * See Hoth (comic) for precedent. :-) Goodwood  [[Image:Redstarbird.svg|20px]] ( Alliance Intelligence ) 23:50, 2 July 2008 (UTC)
 * An unsourced article could be nommed based on the precedent set by Neimoidian, a GA which is not sourced. But it would mean absolutely nothing and I would object regardless. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 22:55, 13 July 2008 (UTC)

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Support
 * 1) Dark Ridley 02:57, 3 July 2008 (UTC)

Object Comments
 * 1) Not sourced, could probably be expanded a fair bit. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 07:38, 3 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) Xadún's Dun Möch
 * 3) *GA tag required.
 * 4) *Expand the intro. There's much you could use and still be brief, like their use as mounts, gladiatorial combatants etc.
 * 5) *Biology and Appearence section is rather fragmented. join some of the sentences up to improve the flow.
 * 6) * Only the Witches of Dathomir used Rancors as mounts. The Human populice were Zsinj's pinal colony, who used speeders. Edit thise references please, particularly with regards to the "Human" population. Focus on the Clan's use, and don't generalise to Humans use.
 * 7) *I recommend a seperate section for the Subspecies of Rancor, outlining the point that despite Dathomir is cited as the planet of origin, how rancors appeared and evolved according to their environments across the galaxy is largely a mystery, and briefly describing each type and it's origins.
 * 8) *Remove the lists. They aren't necessary since a) you refer to all owners earlier in the "Wider Galaxy" section, b) it's probable they existed on other planets as well so a few examples will suffice, c) having a subspecies secion will encompass these anyway and d) all individual rancors should have been mentioned in the article body anyway.
 * 9) *Are the pictures of Dathomir and Ottethan neccessary? They seem to have little purpose, at least where they are presently placed.
 * 10) *Like Ackbar says, sourcing too, and it seems this entire article could be expanded.
 * 11) *That's the first lot. Cover them, and I'll be back. With a lot of graft, I don't doubt this could be fashioned into an FA, but it will take a lot of work from where it is now, Ridley. Although Rancor's aren't my specialty, if you want some help, drop me a line. Darth Xadún ( Consult the Holocron ) 20:58, 4 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 1) This is my first suggestion, and from what I know so far the article seems very good, and unless some massive new source of Rancor related knowledge is created, I doubt there will be any major changes. Dark Ridley 02:57, 3 July 2008 (UTC)


 * 1) Made some changes to the article, anything I should take care of that are major problems? Dark Ridley 17:42, 24 July 2008 (UTC)

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Support
 * 1) Markrox91 10:50, 4 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) Now if only we can GA Tesar.  Ifindyourlackoffaithdisturbing  ( You're all clear kid! )( Now let's blow this thing and go home! ) 21:20, 13 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) Wynssa Fel 15:48, 14 July 2008 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Needs Personality and traits section and one for Behind the scenes.  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  20:36, 4 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) Toprawa:
 * 3) *Everything must be sourced, including the infobox and every paragraph.
 * 4) *Quotes must not be located in the middle of a section, only at the top of sections
 * 5) *Ref notes should come after punctuation, not before, and not two spaces after punctuation
 * 6) *Certainly some more quotes could be found to head up these sections
 * 7) *Please use the Insider template for the appropriate sources.
 * 8) **And as a personal recommendation to both the nominator and those who have voted on this article so far, please read the rules at the top of the GAN page and familiarize yourselves with our Manual of Style before nominating or voting on articles. Do not just vote on something because you like the concept of an article. Thank you. Toprawa and Ralltiir 16:11, 19 July 2008 (UTC)

Comments
 * 1) I've done alot of work on this article in the last few weeks,and i now believee it is of good quality; the introduction now gives a summary of the article, the actual article is much more comprehensive and is now much more adaquaetly referenced.--Markrox91 10:50, 4 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) Have added Personality and traits section, as well as the Behind the scenes one.--Markrox91 02:12, 5 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) I have written the German article about Saba and I think that she finished her jedi training before the Yuuzhan Vong war has begun. Wynssa Fel 20:35, 11 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) You are right! I've just taken care of it and placed the info about her Jedi training under Master Eelysa in an Early Life section =]--Markrox91 10:22, 13 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) Yeah I'm right!^^ I have there one more thing which I had already written on the discussion: In the introductory sentence stand, that Saba was promoted to a Jedi Master after the Yuuzhan Vong War but wasn't she in Star by Star at that rank? Wynssa Fel 21:14, 13 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 6) Nope, because she was the only Jedi Knight to be a member of the Galactic Alliance High Council which wasn't created until Destiny's Way.--Markrox91 10:57, 14 July 2008 (UTC)

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Support
 * 1) Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 15:00, 4 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) Owns Brakiss.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 21:41, 17 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 14:22, 21 July 2008 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Dolph!:
 * 2) * I dislike starting the intro so suddenly.
 * 3) **Opening adjusted. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 13:56, 14 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) * Little context on thernbee.
 * 5) **Placed some. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 13:56, 14 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 6) * Context on ysalamir.
 * 7) * Is Force-empty a canonical term?
 * 8) **I do believe so, but I've reworded it. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 13:56, 14 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 9) * You mention that he starts wearing a death head mask twice in the body.
 * 10) **Fixed. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 13:56, 14 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 11) * Has he caused any deaths when you first mention that he fed on the deaths? Or are you simply referring to what he did on Almania? If so, please move it.
 * 12) **Clarified. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 13:56, 14 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 13) *Any info on these traps Femon had planned?
 * 14) **Got some. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 13:56, 14 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 15) * Please rephrase this or split it into separate sentences. It shifts from Luke POV to Kueller’s, and could be written a little better.
 * 16) **Are you referring to the overall article, or specific parts. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 13:56, 14 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 17) ***Sorry. Right here: "Though he survived the crash, he was badly injured and, after letting the Jedi wander through deserted Pydyr for some time, Kueller confronted him."  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 22:49, 16 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 18) ****Fixed, thanks. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 13:45, 17 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 19) * What are these warnings he gave Yanne?
 * 20) **I'm pretty sure I stated that Kueller warned him of the consequences of disloyalty. I'm not sure exactly what you're looking for. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 13:56, 14 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 21) *Her name is Femon, not Yemon. I fixed these for you though.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 13:43, 14 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 22) **Thanks. Getting my henchmen (Femon and Yanne) mixed up. :-P Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 13:56, 14 July 2008 (UTC)

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 * Not up for FA yet because I need to research BTS and get a few more sources. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 15:00, 4 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Just waiting for this GAN to clear. ;-) Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 13:40, 23 July 2008 (UTC)

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 * 1) Continuing the drive to GA/FA the entire DarkStryder Campaign! - Cavalier One ( Squadron channel ) 12:14, 7 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) Interesting fellow. -- Ozzel 06:48, 22 July 2008 (UTC)

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 * 1) Toprawa:
 * 2) *Some context should be added to supplement the significance of why the Tantive IV was captured over Tatooine - to recover the Death Star plans Toprawa and Ralltiir 16:47, 19 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) *He could probably be given a Rebellion era tag as well. Toprawa and Ralltiir 16:52, 19 July 2008 (UTC)

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 * 1) Continuing the drive to GA/FA the entire DarkStryder Campaign! - Cavalier One ( Squadron channel ) 12:14, 7 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 2)  Ifindyourlackoffaithdisturbing  ( Go Dodgers! Woooo! )[[Image:Revanchist Sith.svg|20px]] 02:58, 9 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) --Skippy Farlstendoiro 12:13, 10 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) Toprawa and Ralltiir 11:45, 18 July 2008 (UTC)

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 * 1) Toprawa:
 * 2) * Does the source actually present this idea? "although, like most bullies" Toprawa and Ralltiir 16:49, 13 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) **Not with the reference to bullies, so that's been removed. He was afraid that his targets would turn on him, though. - Cavalier One ( Squadron channel ) 13:38, 14 July 2008 (UTC)

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 * 1) Continuing the DarkStryder Campaign series! - Cavalier One ( Squadron channel ) 12:11, 10 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) --Skippy Farlstendoiro 12:13, 10 July 2008 (UTC)

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 * 1)  Ifindyourlackoffaithdisturbing  ( Go Dodgers! Woooo! )[[Image:Revanchist Sith.svg|20px]] 02:25, 12 July 2008 (UTC)

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 * 1) Unsourced, needs expansion. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 09:16, 12 July 2008 (UTC)

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 * 1) Toprawa and Ralltiir 14:09, 13 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) Cavalier One ( Squadron channel ) 13:43, 17 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) Yrfeloran 23:01, 17 July 2008 (UTC) That works...

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 * The "in the rear of starfighters" paragraph seems a bit off, and the linking's edging towards gratuitously comprehensive... Yrfeloran 05:19, 17 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Hmm, ok. I've reworded the "rear" phrasing a little bit. I don't think there is such a thing as "gratuitously comprehensive" linking. That's how linking should be done. Anything that can relevantly be linked to should be and is in this article. Toprawa and Ralltiir

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 * 1) Toprawa and Ralltiir 17:57, 13 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 2)  Aqua  Unasi  01:56, 17 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) Cavalier One ( Squadron channel ) 18:55, 18 July 2008 (UTC)

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 * 1) Navander served to further illustrate the mantle of skilled pilots hailing from Corellia -who did he illustrate this to? The viewers and its out of universe? Or is it just to illustrate to his superiors?  Aqua  Unasi  20:19, 16 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) *I'm not sure I understand what you're looking for here. There is a very well-known stereotype among the IU galaxy of talented pilots hailing from Corellia. It's what Corellians are most known for. In the same ilk of Han Solo and Wedge Antilles, as this article references, Navander is also a skilled Corellian pilot. There's really nothing OOU about this. His skills as a pilot perpetuate this stereotype in general. Toprawa and Ralltiir 22:36, 16 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) ** - ah, sorry about that, I misunderstood that sentence. I understand him being a skilled pilot like many Corellians and that being an IU stereotype- it was more the use of the word "illustrate" that I was questioning. I just read the sentence wrong though, so nevermind on that objection. Sorry for being confusing --  Aqua  Unasi  01:56, 17 July 2008 (UTC)


 * 1) From the squadron briefing of Cavalier One
 * 2) * The first paragraph is only two lines. Can it and the second paragraph be joined up?
 * 3) **Yup, combined.
 * 4) * Context is needed on how the Empire discovered Echo Base.
 * 5) **Added some context.
 * 6) * After the Imperial discovery of Echo Base, Navander, working in the command center, detected the arrival of Death Squadron, Darth Vader's personal fleet of Imperial-class Star Destroyers, led by his flagship, the Star Dreadnought Executor, in the Hoth system. This sentence runs-on and is very jerky. Please consider revising. - Cavalier One ( Squadron channel ) 13:41, 17 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 7) **I tweaked it around a little bit, hopefully that works. Toprawa and Ralltiir 16:45, 18 July 2008 (UTC)

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 * 1) Cavalier One ( Squadron channel ) 17:24, 16 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) And the DarkStryder takeover of Wookieepedia continues :)  Aqua  Unasi  19:00, 16 July 2008 (UTC)

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 * 1) Harrar 17:40, 18 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 2)  Aqua  Unasi  17:47, 24 July 2008 (UTC)

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 * His favourite activity is Kwaad-biking. Oh that's terrible. Harrar 17:40, 18 July 2008 (UTC)

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 * 1) Xzylongann 18:47, 21 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) JustinGann 00:23, 22 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 1) Toprawa
 * 2) *This one has a long way to go
 * 3) *No sourcing, whatsoever
 * 4) *You have fact tags
 * 5) *Article doesn't match the MOS or LG.
 * 6) *Bulleted prose
 * 7) *Images are horribly placed. Toprawa and Ralltiir 01:21, 22 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 8) **Please read the rules at the top of this page before submitting an article for GA. Toprawa and Ralltiir 01:23, 22 July 2008 (UTC)

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 * Sharp fangs, natural camouflage, and members of the Jedi Order, what more could you want? Xzylongann 18:47, 21 July 2008 (UTC)

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 * 1)  Aqua  Unasi  01:13, 24 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) After Woodification.-- Goodwood [[Image:Redstarbird.svg|20px]] ( Alliance Intelligence ) 03:43, 26 July 2008 (UTC)

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 * This is my first GA nom, so bear with me :) Whatever happens though, I know the article shall improve, so here it goes!  Aqua  Unasi  01:13, 24 July 2008 (UTC)

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 * 1) Mr. Ives, I'm going to have ask you to move over. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 21:23, 25 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) Great work Ataru. --Squishy Vic (discussion) (contributions) 04:44, 26 July 2008 (UTC)

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