Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Orbital jumper


 * ''The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.

Orbital jumper

 * Nominated by: Darth Culator  (Talk) 22:39, April 14, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Wrote the damn thing a year ago, might as well get around to nominating it.

(4 ACs/5 Users/9 Total)
Support
 * 1) &mdash;Master Jonathan(Jedi Council Chambers) 23:07, April 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2)  JangFett  (Talk) 23:51, April 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) Nice. Xicer9 [[Image:atgar.svg|20px]]( Combadge) 23:52, April 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) Bah; forgot to vote. :P -- 1358  (Talk) 17:14, April 16, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) Five user votes are totally helping. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 22:58, April 16, 2010 (UTC)
 * 6) Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 00:07, April 18, 2010 (UTC)
 * 7)  Jonjedigrandmaster  Jedi symbol.svg ( We seed the stars ) 00:16, April 18, 2010 (UTC)
 * 8)  CC7567  (talk) 00:55, April 20, 2010 (UTC)
 * 9) Maybe this can be snowballed. Toprawa and Ralltiir 23:26, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) The Jedi Council is bored:
 * 2) * "designed for short-range applications such as intercontinental travel or transit from the ground to orbital facilities such as space stations or skyhooks.": "such as" is repetitive.
 * 3) * Can the BTS be expanded slightly, specifically with a mention of what sources it's appeared or been mentioned in?
 * 4) *Otherwise, looks good. &mdash;Master Jonathan(Jedi Council Chambers) 00:52, April 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) **Fixed and added. -- Darth Culator  (Talk) 16:54, April 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * 6) It lacks some kind of first mention/appearance template. --  1358  (Talk) 12:27, April 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * 7) *D'oh. Fixed. -- Darth Culator  (Talk) 16:54, April 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * 8) Toprawa:
 * 9) * Any reason some of the specs are not provided mentions in the Characteristics? Specifically, price, atmospheric speed, repulsorlift-equipped? Toprawa and Ralltiir 17:27, April 20, 2010 (UTC)
 * 10) **Already mentioned the repulsorlifts, but just added the other whatsits. -- Darth Culator  (Talk) 23:21, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

Comments
 * Preemptive review answers: CSWE adds nothing that's not in CTD. It's not mentioned outside the BFC trilogy. -- Darth Culator  (Talk) 22:39, April 14, 2010 (UTC)
 * One more: It's 335 words. 343 if you count hyphenated words separately. -- Darth Culator  (Talk) 23:19, April 14, 2010 (UTC)