Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/EV-9D9

EV-9D9/Canon

 * Nominated by: AV-6R7 (talk) 04:53, July 25, 2015 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Hopefully life wont get in the way of this char nom.

Support

 * 1) Good work! - Clonehunter(Report your W.M.D.) 20:05, October 26, 2015 (UTC)
 * 2) Cwedin (talk) 05:18, October 30, 2015 (UTC)
 * 3) Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:57, October 30, 2015 (UTC)
 * 4) Cevan IMPpress.svg (talk) 23:48, October 30, 2015 (UTC)
 * 5) Looks great, AV!  Nivlacanator (talk)  23:09, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

Cubert
It looks great, except I personally think her affiliation should be marked as the Hutt Clan rather than Jabba's palace. And if so, that should be added to the body somewhere, too. Cheers! Nivlacanator (talk) 20:53, July 25, 2015 (UTC)
 * The reason I changed it to his palace rather that the Clan is that in Ultimate Star Wars, characters affiliated with the clan have that marked in their affiliation box. Eve simply has Jabba's palace as hers. It's the same reason I changed 8D8's affiliation to that. In essence, I personally believe it should be kept the way it currently is since she is affiliated to the palace, and we don't know whether or not the Clan is still intact by that point. - AV-6R7 (talk) 21:02, July 25, 2015 (UTC)
 * Good point Nivlacanator (talk)  23:46, July 26, 2015 (UTC)

Grunny

 * You're referencing the same ref twice in a row, should the first one just be removed or is one meant to point to a different source? "in the murky depths of the palace's dungeons[1] into a grim torture chamber[1]"  grunny &#64; wookieepedia :&#126;$ 15:12, July 30, 2015 (UTC)
 * Fixed. - AV-6R7 (talk) 20:22, July 30, 2015 (UTC)

Clone

 * Context needed on Tatooine. Moon, planet, repair shop, a twix factory?
 * Fixed. -  AV-6R7  Crew Pit 14:26, October 26, 2015 (UTC)
 * Maybe reword this sentence?: "A protocol droid, EV-9D9 assigned C-3PO to be her master's new interpreter" as it seems to read that 9D9 is the protocol droid.
 * Fixed. -  AV-6R7  Crew Pit 14:26, October 26, 2015 (UTC)
 * Now, I may be wrong on this: The infobox mentions that 9D9 has feminine programming. Although feminine pronouns are used throughout the article, I think the fact that she has such programming should be mentioned more explicitly in the article, kind of like how other articles tend to mention an individual's sex even when gender pronouns are in use.
 * Fixed. -  AV-6R7  Crew Pit 14:26, October 26, 2015 (UTC)
 * Again, good work with the Canon articles! --Clonehunter(Report your W.M.D.) 16:19, October 24, 2015 (UTC)
 * Thanks! -  AV-6R7  Crew Pit 14:26, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

Cwedin

 * (Ridiculously) Minor things: "...enjoy tormenting and dismembering of other droids," should either have "the" after "enjoy," or not have "of;" in paragraph two, "drink" should be plural; in the BTS section, "Revenge of the Jedi" should be italicized.
 * Fixed. -  AV-6R7  Crew Pit 05:14, October 30, 2015 (UTC)
 * In most situations where a link is a possessive noun&mdash;in this case, "his palace's"&mdash;the 's should be outside of the closing brackets.
 * Fixed. -  AV-6R7  Crew Pit 05:14, October 30, 2015 (UTC)
 * Fantastic work with this article (and many others)! Cwedin (talk) 05:53, October 27, 2015 (UTC)
 * Thanks for reviewing! People like you are the reason the cogs of Wookieepedia continue to turn after the reboot. -  AV-6R7  Crew Pit 05:14, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Cevan

 * The picture of EV assigning R2 to the Khetanna is from Behind the Magic, which was released before the canon reboot, so I don't think it can be used on this page. I'd recommend finding another picture from the actual movie and swapping it out with that. Cevan IMPpress.svg (talk) 01:07, October 30, 2015 (UTC)
 * I've been meaning to ask JMAS to upload a Blu-Ray quality version of this image for some time. The current image was always intended to be a placeholder. -  AV-6R7  Crew Pit 05:15, October 30, 2015 (UTC)
 * I'll work on a suitable replacement. May not be exactly the same shot, since that is a promotional still, but it will be similar and clear. -  JMAS  Jolly Trooper.png Hey, it's me! 23:19, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Cav

 * In what appears to a standard practice among Canon articles now, perhaps some BTS mention should be made as to when and where EV-9D9 was first identified in Legends media, as that is undoubtedly where the current Canon name was drawn from. - Sir Cavalier of One FarStar.svg( Squadron channel ) 14:40, November 15, 2015 (UTC)
 * Sorry for the late response, but the name actually originated in the films script, as pointed out in the Bts section. I am, however, in the major rewrite of that section so that it progresses more logically and mentions the novelization in which she first appeared and her name was used. -  AV-6R7  Crew Pit 16:44, November 22, 2015 (UTC)
 * Done. -  AV-6R7  Crew Pit 22:01, November 22, 2015 (UTC)

Comments

 * Star Wars: Absolutely Everything You Need to Know includes an image of EVE-9D9 with the caption "EVE-9D9 supervisor droid". I'm not entirely sure if this is meant to be the model or the individual droid, as it's on a page of different droids some of which are identified by individual name and some of which are identified by model. I'll leave it up to you if you want to include this or make an article for the model, but you may want to consult others first. Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:54, October 28, 2015 (UTC)
 * The reason I haven't created an article under that name is because the page also has the height of the IG-88 assassin droid listed when talking specifically referring to IG-88'when the model itself is actually called the IG assassin droid. Should it be called that again, I will write up an article on it and add the appropriate information here. -  AV-6R7  Crew Pit 05:09, October 30, 2015 (UTC)
 * That was my thinking as well. I'll remove the link from the book's appearances. Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:37, October 30, 2015 (UTC)
 * I've contacted Bray on Twitter on the matter. -  AV-6R7  Crew Pit 21:18, November 3, 2015 (UTC)
 * Bray wasn't sure, but considering the fact that every other named droid on the page didn't have their class identified after their name, and that IG-88 assassin droid was the IG assassin droid's name in Legends, I am beginning to come around to the idea that EV-9D9 may be the models name. -  AV-6R7  Crew Pit 23:17, November 3, 2015 (UTC)
 * The Databank identifies EV-A4-D as an "EV-series medical droid." Would this apply here? Cwedin (talk) 22:51, November 3, 2015 (UTC)
 * I don't think so, as 9D9 is consistently classified as a supervisor droid. -  AV-6R7  Crew Pit 23:01, November 3, 2015 (UTC)