Wookieepedia:Re-featured article nominations/Gaeriel Captison

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Gaeriel Captison

 * Originally nominated by:
 * Last featured on: August 20, 2007
 * Changes since last review: diff
 * Date placed on this page: May 15, 2011

(2 Inqs/2 Users/4 Total)
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 * 1) Captison "Gaeri" Captison looks good to go. =P  Trak Nar  Ramble on 04:30, July 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Menkooroo 07:25, August 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Kilson ( Let's have a chat ) 07:36, August 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) --Eyrezer 05:28, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) What Trak Could Track
 * 2) * I went through with a copy-edit and the main thing that has stood out to me is that Coruscant Museum could do with at least a stub. And is there possibly anything else that could be added to T&a to expand it? If not, then ignore that bit.  Trak Nar  Ramble on 06:07, June 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Will check into this week. Atarumaster88  Jedi_Order.svg ( Talk page ) 04:48, June 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Finally got around to this. Epic meh on the stub. I beefed up the T&A, and got rid of all the "Gaeriel"s to boot. Atarumaster88  Jedi_Order.svg ( Talk page ) 04:13, July 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) Jeff
 * 6) * This article has aged pretty well. A few small things, though:
 * 7) ** The opening of the body reads like it follows from the intro, rather than acting independently of it. Her first name doesn't appear in the body at all; I'd like to see a little rejigging so that the body reads like it's starting from scratch.
 * 8) **I'd like to see quotes for "Bakuran Independence," "Rise and fall," "Legacy," P&t, and P&a. Something from Truce could fit in the former and the two latter; C-3PO tells Luke about Malinza's birth and Pter's death in Assault at Selonia; something that Malinza says to Jaina in Refugee could fit in "Legacy."
 * 9) **A little bit of fodder for the "Legacy" section: Cracken's Thread Dossier indicates that Gaeriel's house is prepared to be given to Malinza once she's old enough to take it. A sentence or two about how Gaeriel's death caused a lasting hatred of the New Republic to blossom in Malinza's heart wouldn't be out of place, either. Menkooroo 11:10, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) ***All addressed, I believe. Atarumaster88  Jedi_Order.svg ( Talk page ) 04:14, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

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