Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Jester


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Jester

 * Nominated by:  CC7567  (talk) 06:20, 21 July 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Read one, read 'em all.

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)
Support
 * 1)  IFYLOFD  ( You will pay the price for your lack of vision! ) 05:11, 22 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 13:30, 23 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 3)  Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 01:28, 25 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) &mdash;Master Jonathan(Jedi Council Chambers) 01:35, 26 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 5)  Mauser  Comlink 00:35, 27 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 6)  Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 08:57, 29 July 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) IFYLOFD:
 * 2) * Biography quote is messed up.
 * 3) **Addressed.
 * 4) * "After the clone troopers returned to the base, Jester cleaned his blaster as his habit after every battle." Is this really notable enough to put in the intro?
 * 5) **Yes, because it's a "habit"; I don't see why not. It makes him different from the others, which is why I put it in.
 * 6) * Context needed on North and south towers.
 * 7) **Again, self-contextualizing until I see why it's necessary.
 * 8) * Explain why Cody and Rex would suspect there was a spy in the ranks.
 * 9) **See above...somewhere.
 * 10) * Are the nicknames for Cody and Rex really necessary?
 * 11) **See above for Gus.  CC7567  (talk) 21:39, 21 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 12) *Nice work.  IFYLOFD  ( You will pay the price for your lack of vision! ) 21:13, 21 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 13) Mauser
 * 14) * In the bio you should say that he was Jango's clone, born on Kamino and trained to be a part of the future GAR - all the same as for Chopper (and other clones too).
 * 15) **Addressed.  CC7567  (talk) 16:20, 22 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 16) *Otherwise very nice.  Mauser  Comlink 11:28, 22 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 17) * One more thing. Have you considered moving the article to Jester, and that one - to Jester (Carrack-class)? Makes sense to me.  Mauser  Comlink 12:22, 22 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 18) **I might if I have more time later to get after all the redirects. I'll consider it.  CC7567  (talk) 16:20, 22 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 19) From the Council Chambers:
 * 20) * In the intro, you say that Punch vouched for him, but the body says that Sketch vounched for him. Which is correct?
 * 21) **Gah; good catch. It was Sketch.
 * 22) *Otherwise great. &mdash;Master Jonathan(Jedi Council Chambers) 21:11, 25 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 23) **Thanks.  CC7567  (talk) 00:24, 26 July 2009 (UTC)

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