Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Llaban


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Llaban

 * Nominated by:  IFYLOFD  ( You will pay the price for your lack of vision! ) 04:11, November 14, 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Floyd strikes again!

(3 ACs/5 Users/8 Total)
Support
 * 1) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 10:41, November 23, 2009 (UTC)
 * 2)  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  23:59, November 28, 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) Empress, I'm receiving another vote! --Skippy Farlstendoiro 11:16, November 30, 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) Looks good.    Gmalek
 * 5) Too bad my vote doesn't put you over the edge, since I'm not AgCorp. ~ SavageBob 06:10, December 6, 2009 (UTC)
 * 6) Providing Tope's objections are addressed.  Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 22:27, December 7, 2009 (UTC)
 * 7) -- Xd1358  Talk 14:36, December 10, 2009 (UTC)
 * 8) Toprawa and Ralltiir 02:33, December 11, 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Soresu, with a legato touch
 * 2) * Its unclear in the intro how he goes from Rebel leader to Tetan commander. Please clarify.
 * 3) **Addressed.
 * 4) *** Still confusing. You need to mention the amnesty, otherwise there seems to be no motive. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 05:21, November 20, 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) ****Addressed.
 * 6) * In the body, you haven't explained his motives for joining the Tetan forces, which according ot the quote is amnesty.
 * 7) **Addressed.
 * 8) * The large Sith fleet appeared and the sky, Doesn't make sense. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 09:30, November 17, 2009 (UTC)
 * 9) **Bah! Addressed.  IFYLOFD  ( You will pay the price for your lack of vision! ) 03:17, November 20, 2009 (UTC)
 * 10) Skippy, with a single objection
 * 11) * As seen in pic, Llaban had some tattoos, war paints or marks on his face. If their nature is known, this should be mentioned under P&T; if not, at least under BtS. --Skippy Farlstendoiro 14:05, November 24, 2009 (UTC)
 * 12) **Addressed.  IFYLOFD  ( You will pay the price for your lack of vision! ) 00:01, November 30, 2009 (UTC)
 * 13) Toprawa:
 * 14) * I would request that you choose a slightly less POV word than "valiantly" here: "Although Llaban and his army fought valiantly against the Sith"
 * 15) **Addressed.
 * 16) * As with your other articles, please arrange the Appearances to reflect only the issues of the comic he actually appears in.
 * 17) **Addressed.
 * 18) * Also, the BTS says this comic was released in 1996, but that article says it's 1997. Please make sure what you have is correct. Toprawa and Ralltiir 04:44, December 4, 2009 (UTC)
 * 19) **Addressed.  IFYLOFD  ( You will pay the price for your lack of vision! ) 00:57, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

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