Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Gree (planet)


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Gree (planet)

 * Nominated by: Cavalier One [[Image:FarStar Logo.jpg|20px]]( Squadron channel ) 14:41, 19 February 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: First nomination from Project: Gree. Please feel free to rip apart and judge.

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1) There doesn't seem to be anything I can rip apart. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie ) 06:04, 21 February 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) --Eyrezer 03:47, 23 February 2009 (UTC)
 * 3)  Grunny  ( Talk ) 05:32, 23 February 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) Cylka  -talk- 10:23, 9 March 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) Toprawa and Ralltiir 21:11, 9 March 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) I think it might be worthwhile to throw in a quick explanation of what Type II atmosphere was, and why it was comfortable for the Gree. Most readers aren't familiar with the differences in the atmosphere types. Cylka  -talk- 00:07, 5 March 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) *Added some explanation. - Cavalier One [[Image:FarStar Logo.jpg|20px]]( Squadron channel ) 10:09, 9 March 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) Toprawa:
 * 4) * I added a bit here to clarify who was annexing them. Please revise if I got this wrong: " when he negotiated the annexation of Asation into the Empire"
 * 5) **Nope, makes sense.
 * 6) * A brief description of this for context would be preferable: "they developed a unique form of technology"
 * 7) **I've added some context, but going into greater detail would require a much longer description. I plan to rewrite the Gree technology article in the near future at any rate.
 * 8) * I'm a bit confused by this, since the previous sentence lists the castes, and then you refer to "devices." Can you be more specific? " the Gree began focusing on the artistry of actually operating the devices" Toprawa and Ralltiir 03:23, 7 March 2009 (UTC)
 * 9) **The castes are listed to provide some background as to why the Operator caste became so powerful within Gree society (which I will be covering in greater detail in a rewrite of the Gree species article). However, I have added an explanation about the devices in the previous paragraph to deal with your request for more context on Gree technology. I'm trying to find a good balance between required info and deviating off on a tangent that is better contained in its own article. - Cavalier One [[Image:FarStar Logo.jpg|20px]]( Squadron channel ) 10:09, 9 March 2009 (UTC)
 * 10) ***All looks good to me. Not sure why I added the "(planet)" bit into the cephalopod redlink. My bad. Toprawa and Ralltiir 21:11, 9 March 2009 (UTC)

Comments


 * Is the infobox picture worth it? --Eyrezer 03:47, 23 February 2009 (UTC)
 * Unless the Star Wars Atlas can give me a better one :P Seriously, though, I think it is. It adds a little image to the article where none would exist, and I've been doing it on planet noms for a while now. - Cavalier One [[Image:FarStar Logo.jpg|20px]]( Squadron channel ) 10:09, 9 March 2009 (UTC)