Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Rango Tel


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(5 Inq/1 Users/6 Total)
Support
 * 1) Something something. Thefourdotelipsis 08:28, 9 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) What an idiot. Green Tentacle (Talk) 11:15, 13 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) This guy was pretty stupid.  Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 14:10, 16 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) BLARG! --  Darth Culator  (Talk) 03:25, 23 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 5) Err, interesting character to say the least.  Greyman ( Paratus ) 17:36, 23 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 6) Poor guy. -- Ozzel 19:24, 23 August 2007 (UTC)

Oppose
 * From the desk of Atarumaster88
 * ". . . with the Pa'lowick smuggler Aneesa Dym at his side, he sought to find and kill Kam Nale for local crime lord."&mdash; I think a word is missing near the end. (Intro)
 * Fixed. Thefourdotelipsis 08:36, 15 August 2007 (UTC)
 * I question the use of the second paragraph in the intro. It reads like a P&T section.
 * Introducing you to the P & T seen later on. It's legit. Thefourdotelipsis 08:36, 15 August 2007 (UTC)
 * Bah! It's odious to me, but that's personal preference. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 14:14, 15 August 2007 (UTC)
 * Second sentence in the "Hunt for Kam Nale" could be reworded to make more sense.
 * Fixed. Thefourdotelipsis 08:36, 15 August 2007 (UTC)
 * Is Nale a Fluggian or a FluggRian?
 * Fixed. Thefourdotelipsis 08:36, 15 August 2007 (UTC)
 * Original research in P&T. Canon only, please. (2nd sentence)
 * It's canon. "His fate changed, however, when as a young man drawn into a cantina brawl, he was able to inadvertently score a bounty on his drunken foe. With the sizable bounty collected, Tel paid for off-planet passage, and used the rest to jumpstart what he thought was his calling: his new bounty hunting career." Thefourdotelipsis 08:36, 15 August 2007 (UTC)
 * Yes, but saying he doesn't believe in coincidence at all is a rather long jump to Conclusions-ooine. Saying that he decided his career on a whim or on happenstance is fine. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 14:14, 15 August 2007 (UTC)
 * Fixed. Thefourdotelipsis 04:59, 16 August 2007 (UTC)
 * Pronouns/objects in Relationships could use some tweaking to make them clearer.
 * Fixed, I suppose. Thefourdotelipsis 08:36, 15 August 2007 (UTC)
 * Have a Super Terrific Friendly Un-frustrating day. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 01:45, 15 August 2007 (UTC)

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