Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Sunchoo's village


 * ''The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a comprehensive article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.

Sunchoo's village

 * Nominated by: Bonslywizard  Naboo.svg ( Send a transmission ) 00:47, May 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Boredom-driven barn-burner goodness.

(1 ECs/3 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 01:29, May 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2)  Imperators II (Talk) 17:01, May 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Menkooroo 07:06, May 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) Good job.&mdash; TK-999  Era-imp.png( Rise of the Empire ) 17:00, May 7, 2011 (UTC)

Object Comments
 * 1) Axinal
 * 2) * Sorry, but what's up with the "{{Quote|" at the beginning?&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 00:48, May 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **EEK! Wow, that's embarrassing... o_O Bonslywizard  Naboo.svg {{sup|( Send a transmission )}} 00:54, May 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Happens to the best of us, Bonsly. :P&mdash; Axinal  {{sup|Convocation Chamber}} 01:04, May 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) * Please add "Sunchoo's village" to the "name" field in the infobox.
 * 6) * I would specify the names of the Jedi that freed her.&mdash; Axinal  {{sup|Convocation Chamber}} 01:04, May 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) * In the BTS: "However, Sunchoo's village only appears in one of these story strands, so this article assumes that one." Assumes that one what? Is canonical? Please add clarity here.&mdash; Axinal  {{sup|Convocation Chamber}} 01:04, May 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) * Can the fact that Kashyyyk is a Mid Rim planet be sourced to The Way of the Jedi?&mdash; Axinal  {{sup|Convocation Chamber}} 01:04, May 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) **Alright, thanks for the review! Bonslywizard  Naboo.svg {{sup|( Send a transmission )}} 01:23, May 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) ***No problem, and nice work. I've added Category:Kashyyyk locations to the article.&mdash; Axinal  {{sup|Convocation Chamber}} 01:29, May 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) Jeff:
 * 12) * Appearances section?
 * 13) *Also, is the village {{Mo}}? If so, the bts should say "Sunchoo's village is only mentioned" rather than "only appears." Menkooroo 07:11, May 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * 14) **Nope, it appears. And sorry about Appearances. That really is pretty ridiculous. O__O Bonslywizard  Naboo.svg {{sup|( Send a transmission )}} 23:29, May 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * 15) ***No worries. If it does appear, then, are there any details at all you can give about it? Does it contain any houses; does the book state that there are Wroshyr trees present; anything at all? Menkooroo 04:18, May 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * 16) ****Nothing like that. The book's pretty devoid of detail. Bonslywizard  Naboo.svg {{sup|( Send a transmission )}} 00:13, May 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 17) Imperators II
 * 18) * Seriously, "Appearances"?
 * 19) ** Also, if The Way of the Jedi is its only appearance, the "first" in the Bts section would hardly be necessary.  Imperators II (Talk) 15:22, May 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * 20) * Shouldn't "the" be added before "Mid Rim"?
 * 21) **I'm sure it could. But I'm also pretty sure it's grammatically correct without "the". Why do I write like that? Cuz Imma rebel.
 * 22) ***If you say so. I'm no English grammar expert.
 * 23) * I'd change "during or before" to "circa", since it's less speculative.
 * 24) * Ummm, it looks like there should be a link to Jedi Initiate, not youngling (since Kos was a Jedi). Also, I think it should be specified they were Jedi.  Imperators II {{sup|(Talk)}} 15:18, May 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * 25) **I would, but the book only refers to Kos as a youngling, not an Initiate, and since only one was officially a Jedi in this story strand, I tried to avoid referring to them both as Jedi. Everything else should be fixed, though. Bonslywizard  Naboo.svg {{sup|( Send a transmission )}} 23:29, May 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * 26) *** Yes, but I'm assuming that the novel refers to Kos as a Jedi youngling (a synonym to "Jedi Initiate"), not just some random child. Or am I wrong? If I'm right, it should be linked accordingly.  Imperators II {{sup|(Talk)}} 23:48, May 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * 27) ****Nope, you got it right. :P Fixed. So's the other objection. Bonslywizard  Naboo.svg {{sup|( Send a transmission )}} 01:49, May 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 28) TK Tri-Nine
 * 29) * Does the roleplaying adventure specifically mention the beginning and the end of the Rise of the Empire era and the date in which the story is set? If not, it will need referencing from the book itself, Star Wars Annual 2011 and something that shows the start/end of the RotE era.
 * 30) **Addressed. Thanks for the review! Bonslywizard  Naboo.svg {{sup|( Send a transmission )}} 16:07, May 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 31) *Very nice otherwise.&mdash; TK-999  Era-imp.png( Rise of the Empire ) 16:12, May 6, 2011 (UTC)