Forum:SH:Improvement Drive: Canon planets

Hello all! While perusing through our canon planet and moon articles for a project I'm working on, I noticed that many of them are in dire need of expansion, updating, illustration, and overall reorganization to better adhere to the standards in the Layout Guide and Manual of Style. This doesn't just apply to obscure planets, as even Dagobah is a stub with no "History" section. I've gauged community interest through private conversations with various editors, and I believe there is enough support to garner a collaborative effort to better our coverage in this area. With that said, below are lists of things that need to be done to various planet articles, so feel free to jump in and help in whatever way you are able! MasterFred (Whatever) 19:43, February 6, 2019 (UTC)

Articles
Just sign your name under a link to indicate your intention to fix the relevant issue.

Articles in need of updating

 * Abafar
 * Abednedo
 * Ahch-To
 * Alderaan
 * Ansion
 * Batuu
 * MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg(Whatever)
 * Brentaal IV
 * Cantonica
 * Carida
 * Cato Neimoidia
 * Chandrila
 * Christophsis
 * Coruscant
 * Crait
 * Dantooine
 * Devaron
 * Duro
 * Geonosis
 * Hosnian Prime
 * Hoth
 * Ithor
 * Jakku
 * Jedha
 * Krownest
 * Kuat
 * Lothal
 * Malastare
 * Mygeeto
 * Naboo
 * Ralltiir
 * Rattatak
 * Raxus Prime
 * Rodia
 * Scarif
 *  Tommy  Imperial Emblem.svg  Macaroni 
 * Starkiller Base
 * Sullust
 * Taanab
 * Tatooine
 * Utapau
 * Yavin 4

Articles in need of expansion

 * Abafar (needs a Bts)
 * Absanz (needs a Bts)
 * Adumar (needs a Bts)
 * Affadar (needs a Bts)
 * Agamar
 * Aleen (needs a Bts)
 * Almania (needs a Bts)
 * Anaxes (needs a Bts)
 * Arkania
 * Bespin
 * Bestine IV (needs a Bts)
 * Bilzen (needs a Bts)
 * Bothawui
 * Brentaal IV (needs a Bts)
 * Carlac (needs a Bts)
 * Champala (needs expansion of Bts)
 * Corellia
 * Csilla (needs a Bts)
 * Dagobah
 * MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg(Whatever)
 * Dathomir
 * Dubrillion
 * Endor
 * Felucia
 * Fondor
 *  Tommy  Imperial Emblem.svg  Macaroni 
 * Formos
 *  Imperators II (Talk) 20:54, February 6, 2019 (UTC)
 * Gamorr (needs a Bts)
 * Garel (needs a Bts)
 * Glee Anselm
 * Gree (needs a Bts)
 * --DarthRuiz30 (talk) 21:31, February 8, 2019 (UTC)
 * Iego
 * Ithor (needs a Bts)
 * Kalinda
 *  Imperators II (Talk) 22:02, February 6, 2019 (UTC)
 * Kamino
 * Kashyyyk
 * Kellux (needs a Bts)
 * Kerkoidia
 *  Imperators II (Talk) 22:02, February 6, 2019 (UTC)
 * Kira (planet)
 *  Imperators II (Talk) 21:58, February 6, 2019 (UTC)
 * Kuat (needs a Bts)
 * Lah'mu (needs a Bts)
 * Lothal
 * Mandalore (needs a Bts)
 * Mimban
 * Mindor
 * Mon Cala (needs a Bts)
 * Mustafar
 * Nal Hutta
 * Nar Shaddaa (needs a Bts)
 * Nixus (needs a Bts)
 * Onderon (needs a Bts)
 * Orto Plutonia (needs a Bts)
 * Ossus
 * Plooma (needs a Bts)
 * DarthRuiz30 (talk) 03:23, February 9, 2019 (UTC)
 * Ralltiir (needs a Bts)
 * Rattatak (needs a Bts)
 * Raxus Prime (needs a Bts)
 * Rhen Var (needs a Bts)
 * Rodia (needs a Bts)
 * Ryloth (needs a Bts)
 * Saleucami (needs a Bts)
 * Sarka
 *  Fan26  ( Talk ) 23:45, February 6, 2019 (UTC)
 * Stygeon Prime
 * Takodana
 * Teth (needs a Bts)
 * Thyferra(needs a Bts)
 * Toydaria (needs a Bts)
 * Umbara (needs a Bts)
 * Utapau (needs a Bts)
 * Vallt (needs a Bts)
 * Vorlag
 * Wecacoe (needs a Bts)
 * Wobani
 * Yavin (needs a Bts)
 * Yavin 4

Articles in need of images

 * Aargau
 * Abafar
 * Adumar
 * Agamar
 * Aleen
 * Almania
 * Alsakan
 * Anaxes
 * Bestine IV
 * Brentaal IV
 * Carlac
 * Carnelion IV
 * Champala
 * Chandrila
 * Concord Dawn
 * Dathomir
 * Devaron
 * Felucia
 * Fondor
 *  Tommy  Imperial Emblem.svg  Macaroni 
 * Formos
 *  Imperators II (Talk) 20:54, February 6, 2019 (UTC)
 * Gamorr
 * Garel
 * Geonosis
 * Iego
 * Kalinda
 *  Imperators II (Talk) 22:02, February 6, 2019 (UTC)
 * Kamino
 * Kerkoidia
 *  Imperators II (Talk) 22:02, February 6, 2019 (UTC)
 * Kessel
 * Kira (planet)
 *  Imperators II (Talk) 21:58, February 6, 2019 (UTC)
 * Mandalore
 * Mon Cala
 * Nal Hutta
 * Nar Shaddaa
 * Nixus
 * Onderon
 * Orto Plutonia
 * Plooma
 * Ralltiir
 * Rhen Var
 * Ryloth
 * Stygeon Prime
 * Taanab
 * Taris
 * Tatooine
 * Thyferra
 * Toydaria
 * Utapau
 * Wecacoe

Articles in need of sourcing

 * Aleen

Articles in need of creation

 * Helska/Canon
 * DarthRuiz30 (talk) 03:23, February 9, 2019 (UTC)

Articles in need of verification

 * Aargau
 * Abregado-Rae
 * Agamar
 * Akuria
 * Alsakan
 * Ansion
 * Anteevy
 * Aridus
 * Arkania
 * Askaji
 * Atzerri
 * Axxila
 * Balamak
 * Balmorra
 * Balosar
 * Belderone
 * Belnar
 * Bilbringi
 * Bith (planet)
 * Bonadan
 * Borosk
 * Botajef
 * Botor
 * Boz Pity
 * Byblos
 * Byss
 * Caamas
 * Cadomai Prime
 * Celanon
 * Centares
 * Cerea
 * Chalcedon
 * Champala
 * Charros
 * Comra
 * Cona
 * Contruum
 * Corsin
 * Cyphar
 * Darkknell
 * Dennogra
 * Dressel
 * Elom (planet)
 * Exodeen
 * Falleen (planet)
 * Firrerre
 * Florn
 * Garos
 * Generis
 * Ghorman
 * Gravlex Med
 * Gromas
 * Haruun Kal
 * Herdessa
 * Hok
 * Honoghr
 * Horuz
 * Humbarine
 * Hypori
 * Isde Naha
 * Iskalon
 * Jomark
 * Kalist VI
 * Kerkoidia
 *  Imperators II (Talk) 13:42, February 10, 2019 (UTC)
 * Kiffex
 * Kiffu
 * Kinyen
 * Kirdo III
 * Klatooine
 * Kothlis
 * Kril'Dor
 * Kubindi
 * Lantillies
 * Lianna
 * Listehol
 * Loronar
 * Lorrd
 * Lucazec
 * Lutrillia
 * Makem Te
 * Manda
 * Metalorn
 * Mirial
 * Moltok
 * Mon Gazza
 * Moonus Mandel
 * Muunilinst
 * Nam Chorios
 * Nelvaan
 * Nimban
 * Ojom
 * Ord Biniir
 * Ord Cantrell
 * Ord Pardron
 * Ord Radama
 * Orinda
 * Oseon
 * Ossus
 * Pho Ph'eah
 * Phu
 * Riflor
 * Roche (planet)
 * Rothana
 * Ruuria
 * Ruusan
 * Sevarcos
 * Sleheyron
 * Sluis Van
 * Sneeve
 * Socorro
 * Subterrel
 * Sump
 * Taanab
 * Tammuz-an
 * Telos
 * Tepasi
 * Thila
 * Thisspias
 * Tirahnn
 * Trenwyth
 * Trogan
 * Tund
 * Tynna
 * Uba (planet)
 * Vinsoth
 * Vurdon Ka
 * Xagobah
 * Yabol Opa
 * Yag'Dhul
 * Yaga Minor
 * Zeltros
 * Ziost
 * Zolan

Participants

 * 1) MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg(Whatever) 20:04, February 6, 2019 (UTC)
 * 2) --Lewisr (talk) 20:05, February 6, 2019 (UTC)
 * 3) I should be able to do a bit of stuff for Imperial planets  Tommy  Imperial Emblem.svg  Macaroni  20:07, February 6, 2019 (UTC)
 * 4) --DarthRuiz30 (talk) 20:18, February 6, 2019 (UTC)
 * 5) To the extent that my dignity allows me to interact with Canon subject matter. :P  Imperators II (Talk) 20:54, February 6, 2019 (UTC)
 * 6) TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders.svg  Anıl Şerifoğlu  (talk) 22:46, February 6, 2019 (UTC)
 * 7) I don't have much reference material to use, but I'll help where (or if) I can. Zed42 (talk) 23:27, February 6, 2019 (UTC)
 * 8) Ayrehead02 (talk) 23:41, February 6, 2019 (UTC)
 * 9) At Fred's request.  Fan26  ( Talk ) 23:55, February 6, 2019 (UTC)

Discussion

 * If anybody has Star Wars: The Visual Encyclopedia, would it be possible to get higher quality version of these two images: File:AleenTVE.png and File:CarlacTVE.png? MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg(Whatever) 03:16, February 7, 2019 (UTC)
 * Disregard. I forgot I had recently purchased the book and was able to scan some much better version myself. MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg(Whatever) 07:18, February 7, 2019 (UTC)
 * There are several other similar planet images from the book, namely File:BalnabTVE.png, File:PantoraFullTVE.png, File:RuusanTVE.png, File:VanqorTVE.png and File:ZygerriaTVE.png. Would you be able to get higher quality versions of those, too? Zed42 (talk) 18:28, February 9, 2019 (UTC)
 * I noticed Helska/Canon in the 'need of creation' section. However Helska in Legends is a star, so would one of the two need to be disambiguated? Also, as there is more than one planet in the system, would it be able to be linked to any Legends page in Eras? Zed42 (talk) 10:41, February 7, 2019 (UTC)
 * The Helska in Legends should be moved to Helska (star) per the naming policy and then the canon Helska should be at just Helska. As for the other thing, probably best to not link it to anything and maybe just use a otheruses template instead --Lewisr (talk) 13:40, February 7, 2019 (UTC)
 * A question regarding The Force Awakens Beginner Game. I've noticed that the names on the map are now being treated as generic astronomical objects rather than planets. I assume this means the wording on all the articles needs to be changed? Zed42 (talk) 05:17, February 9, 2019 (UTC)
 * Yeah. As Anil pointed out to me, the map labels non-planetary objects the same as planets, so we can't really know for certain without additional info.  Imperators II (Talk) 05:34, February 9, 2019 (UTC)
 * How about the space stations with "Station" in their name? Is that enough to identify them, or do they also have to be changed? Zed42 (talk) 05:49, February 9, 2019 (UTC)
 * Good question. Legends example: Horn Station was not a space station.  Imperators II (Talk) 17:43, February 9, 2019 (UTC)
 * Alright. When I have the time, I can try go through all the articles. Unless, for some reason, someone else really wants to. Zed42 (talk) 18:28, February 9, 2019 (UTC)
 * I've created the section "Articles in need of verification" for planets that had TFABG as source. These locations in the list have multiple sources so they need to verified that none of them confirms that they're planets.--DarthRuiz30 (talk) 10:04, February 10, 2019 (UTC)
 * I've gone through all the planets and added the ones with multiple sources to this list. A couple of them (most of which seemed to be from Tarkin) referenced other material for their status as a planet, but the accompanying quotes only briefly mention names, so it can't hurt to check those too. Zed42 (talk) 12:39, February 10, 2019 (UTC)