Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/3,955 BBY


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3,955 BBY

 * Nominated by: &mdash; Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 13:14, 8 August 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Part of FiolliProject: Time Travel, Phase 4

(3 ACs/5 Users/8 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  15:41, 8 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) Fiolli, I love you! I've long thought we should prosify our year articles but I never had the dedication/expertise to do so, so well done - it looks brilliant. I'm even tempted to write a year article myself (though it wouldn't be in the KotOR era ;-) ) -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 17:06, 8 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) Very well done.  Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 05:06, 10 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 13:31, 10 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) Great job, Fiolli! NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 19:58, 10 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 6) --Kreivi Wolter 08:28, 11 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 7)  JangFett  Talk 16:38, 11 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 8) Jedi Kasra (talk) 19:56, 14 August 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) I think you should also add what year it was per the Great ReSynchronization.  QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 13:24, 8 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) *Done. &mdash; Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 13:30, 8 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) ** What about adding it to the intro as well? QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 13:33, 8 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Too much unnecessary baggage, that way, in the intro. The only reason why the date BTC was left was due to its immediate following of the Jedi Civil War and it being highlighted in TOR timelines. &mdash; Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 13:37, 8 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) ****Fair enough. QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 13:38, 8 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 6) The Grand Master
 * 7) * "Project" is repetitive in the beginning of the "Galactic Republic" section.
 * 8) **Varied word choice. &mdash; Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 18:23, 9 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 9) * "Within four years, Czerka Corporation began trying to usurp control over the project from the Ithorian herd. Other criminal organizations, such as the Exchange..." This implies that Czerka was also a criminal organization. If this is not so, then please rephrase. (If it is, then please forgive my naivety)
 * 10) **No problem. Reworded. &mdash; Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 18:23, 9 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 11) *Great work. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 12:36, 9 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 12) **Thanks, Jon. &mdash; Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 18:23, 9 August 2009 (UTC)

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