Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations

 This page is for the nomination of "comprehensive articles." For a list of "comprehensive articles," see Category:Wookieepedia comprehensive articles.


 * Comprehensive article nominations history
 * Comprehensive article nominations archiving checklist

What is a "comprehensive article?"

A "comprehensive article" is an article that contains all information regarding the topic. Often, "comprehensive articles" cannot reach Featured or Good Article status due to their limited content. This process is intended to recognize articles that contain all relevant canon information, yet are still under the 250 word limit required for a Good Article. The purpose of this is twofold&mdash;firstly, to help users distinguish what is a stub, and what is merely a short article with no further relevant material to be added, and, more importantly, to highlight for the reader when they are reading something that has been judged definitely "comprehensive"&mdash;that is, a guarantee to the reader that whatever they are reading contains the sum total of all available content on that topic.

Nominations and promotions of the Comprehensive article process are overseen by a collective of users known as the "EduCorps," which is made up of the Inquisitorius, the AgriCorps, and various other experienced users who are considered qualified to adequately judge the nominated material.

Lucasfilm Ltd. and its many licensees continue to expand the Star Wars universe. Since new information might become available, it may be necessary to revoke a "comprehensive article's" status. A forum will be used to nominate articles that have fallen out-of-date. Members of the EduCorps will then post a warning template on that page, and a grace period of one week will be instituted in which the article can be improved. If there is a significant amount of new information, it is likely that once updated, the article will become eligible for Good article status, and thereby ineligible for Comprehensive article status.

READ THIS FIRST!

An article must&hellip;


 * 1) &hellip;be well-written and detailed.
 * 2) &hellip;be unbiased, non-point of view.
 * 3) &hellip;be sourced with all available sources and appearances.
 * 4) &hellip;follow the Manual of Style, Layout Guide, and all other policies on Wookieepedia. This is, of course, within reason. If a topic only has a very limited degree of content that cannot be divided up into the relevant article sections, it is not required that it follow the Layout Guide precisely. This is to be judged on a case-by-case basis.
 * 5) &hellip;following the review process, be stable, i.e., does not change significantly from day to day and is not the subject of ongoing edit wars. This does not apply to vandalism and protection or semi-protection as a result of vandalism.
 * 6) &hellip;not be tagged with any sort of improvement tags (i.e. more sources, expand, etc).
 * 7) &hellip;have no redlinks.
 * 8) &hellip;have all relevant canon information presented.
 * 9) &hellip;be completely referenced for all available material and sources. See Sourcing for more information.
 * 10) &hellip;have all quotes and images sourced.
 * 11) &hellip;provide at least one relevant quote on the article if available.
 * 12) &hellip;include a "Behind the scenes" section for in-universe articles.
 * 13) &hellip;counting the introduction, the article body, and "Behind the scenes" material, must not exceed 250 words in length (not including captions, quotes, or headers, etc). Any articles exceeding the limit should be taken to the Good article nominations page for consideration.
 * 14) &hellip;if the nominated article reaches 200 words or greater, the nominator must either provide an intro or draft an intro and provide a link to the revision in the nomination, showing that the intro does not elevate the article over 250 words. Exceptions can be made for articles wherein the majority of the text is in the "Behind the scenes" section.

How to nominate:


 * 1) First, nominate an article you find is worthy of comprehensive status, putting it at the bottom of the list below. Nominated articles must meet all thirteen requirements stated above.
 * 2) Add CAnom at the top of the article you are nominating.
 * 3) Be sure to place sign in the "Nominated by" line when the nomination is posted for voting.
 * 4) Others will object to the nomination if they disagree that the article is good enough; they will then supply reasons for doing so, and ways to improve the article in accordance with the established rules.
 * 5) Nominators and supporters will adjust the article until the objectors (with reasonable objections) are satisfied. Objectors may also make alterations&mdash;if there is any reason for contention on a given point, it should be settled in a civil manner in the nomination field itself.
 * 6) Users may not vote on their own articles.
 * 7) There is no limit to the amount of nominations a given user can submit at any given time.

How to vote:


 * 1) Before doing anything, be sure to read the article completely, keeping a sharp eye out for mistakes.
 * 2) Afterward, compare the article to the criteria listed above, and then either support or object the article's nomination.
 * 3) *If you object, please supply concrete reasons for doing so, and how it can be improved.
 * 4) As stated above, any objections will be looked upon by the nominator, supporters, and anyone willing to improve the article, and action will be taken to please the objectors. Do not strike other users' objections; it is up to the objector to review the changes and strike if they are satisfied.
 * 5) There are several ways in which an article can receive the required number of votes. Within a 48-hour period of nomination, only EduCorps votes will count towards the total, although anyone may choose to vote in that window. If four members of the EduCorps support a nomination in that window [0 to 48 hours post-nomination], and there are no outstanding objections, the article can be considered a "Comprehensive article" and be tagged with the template 48 hours after the initial nomination. The talk page will also be tagged with the  template. When the 48 hours are up, any user's votes will contribute towards the total. If two EduCorps member has voted for an article after a week, three regular votes will be required. After the 48 hour period, an article can still also pass with just three EduCorps votes.
 * 6) Once a nomination is successful, it will be placed on the Comprehensive article list. Instructions on how to archive nominations, successful or otherwise, can be found here. Anyone can archive a nomination&mdash;just make sure it has the correct number of votes, has been nominated for at least a week (or 48 hours if there are four EC votes), and that there are absolutely no outstanding objections. If you are not sure how to do this, just ask, and someone will likely be more than willing to help you. Also, if you think you can slip one past us, think again&mdash;someone is always watching you.

All nominations will be considered idle and are subject to instantaneous removal by EduCorps members if objections are not addressed, or at least not answered, after a period of 1 week.

Please remember to archive your nomination beforehand if you plan on taking it to the Good Article Nominations page.

Bombing of Fountain Palace

 * Nominated by: - Princess   GLG  22:58, May 19, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: WP:N, WP:MD

(3 ECs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 22:42, May 20, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:12, May 25, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  20:21, May 25, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) Supreme Emperor (talk) 03:41, June 12, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) Sorry for holding this up.  Commander Code-8  You lost the game! 22:24, June 24, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) 501st
 * 2) * 201 words. Needs an intro, or the loss of two words.
 * 3) **Cut out a couple words.
 * 4) * Could we get an article for the captured bomber? 501st  dogma ( talk ) 15:20, May 20, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) **Created. - Princess   GLG  17:37, May 20, 2013 (UTC)
 * 6) * Do you know which encyclopedia entry it was posted in? If so, the source should be presented like this here in the Sources section, with the volume entry and such. If you don't have the book, you can request the entry here. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 19:46, May 20, 2013 (UTC)
 * 7) **I do know what entry it is, however, because it is in the SWE not the CSWE I thought it did not need to be done like that? In any case, I did add the page number. - Princess   GLG  20:04, May 20, 2013 (UTC)
 * 8) ***I cant seem to find examples of it done that way either, so I'll strike this. You can remove the page numbers if you want. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 22:42, May 20, 2013 (UTC)
 * 9) Ayrehead
 * 10) * Could you add that the Jedi were moved to the private island as one of the outcomes in the infobox.
 * 11) **Like that?
 * 12) * Could you remove the page number in the sources? Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:11, May 22, 2013 (UTC)
 * 13) **Done. Thanks for the review. - Princess   GLG  12:24, May 22, 2013 (UTC)


 * 1) CC-8
 * 2) * You could probably move the picture into the infobox and caption it. It just looks a bit odd being in the body to me.  Commander Code-8  G'day, mate 22:40, June 7, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) **Done. - Princess   GLG  01:32, June 8, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Unidentified bomb conspirator

 * Nominated by: - Princess   GLG  18:36, May 20, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: WP:N

(3 ECs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1) Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:27, May 21, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 23:01, May 21, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  19:59, May 25, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) Supreme Emperor (talk) 14:50, June 21, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5)  Commander Code-8  You lost the game! 22:25, June 24, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) 501st
 * 2) * How about a conjecture tag?
 * 3) **Added. I always seem to be forgetting those.
 * 4) * Alphabetize categories. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 20:21, May 21, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) **Done. - Princess   GLG  20:25, May 21, 2013 (UTC)


 * 1) CC-8
 * 2) * Article for the assassin?  Commander Code-8  G'day, mate 22:42, June 7, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) **Created. - Princess   GLG  01:57, June 8, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Unidentified enlisted trooper (Spiced Mynock Wings)

 * Nominated by: &mdash; Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:42, May 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: And you thought you'd been rid of me. WP:VG

(4 ECs/3 Users/7 Total)
Support
 * 1) Ayrehead02 (talk) 17:54, May 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 21:18, May 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) -  Princess   GLG  12:11, May 25, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  16:01, May 25, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) But was he able to eat the 50 Mynock wings? :P Supreme Emperor (talk) 14:33, June 11, 2013 (UTC)
 * 6) Him and those wings remind me a lot of myself. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 17:11, June 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * 7)  Commander Code-8  You lost the game! 22:28, June 24, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Ayrehead
 * 2) * Could you mention the fact he was enlisted in the Empire somewhere in the body?
 * 3) **Done.
 * 4) * Can the stormtrooper corps also be mentioned or is that speculation? Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:17, May 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) **IMO, there isn't really a need to since I already stated that he was a stormtrooper.&mdash; Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 16:20, May 24, 2013 (UTC)


 * 1) CC-8
 * 2) * Article for the dropship?  Commander Code-8  G'day, mate 22:47, June 7, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) **Done. Thanks for the review.&mdash; Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:15, June 10, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Imperial crans

 * Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:21, June 1, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:An article I needed to create for Ubuuga caviar.

(3 ECs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1) -  Princess   GLG  14:23, June 3, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 20:08, June 3, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  00:49, June 6, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) Supreme Emperor (talk) 14:51, June 21, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5)  Commander Code-8  You lost the game! 22:30, June 24, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * Since you say that it was in use during the reign of the New Republic, I would suggest you add the Eras template. - Princess   GLG  22:59, June 1, 2013 (UTC)
 * Woops forgot that was separate to the info box. Ayrehead02 (talk) 23:08, June 1, 2013 (UTC)
 * 1) 501st
 * 2) * First sentence uses "use" twice. Could you change that up? 501st  dogma ( talk ) 13:02, June 2, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) **Changed the first one. Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:33, June 2, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Now you have two "which's"... I know that's picky, but could you take one out? 501st  dogma ( talk ) 22:08, June 2, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) ****No it's a perfectly fair objection I replaced one with an and. Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:06, June 3, 2013 (UTC)

Comments
 * I searched in vain for a units of measurement infobox but couldn't find one, however if one exists which I've missed pleased show me where to find it. I guess you could also make the argument this might not be a unit of measurement but a type of container however unit of measurement better covered both possibilities so thats what I've put it as. Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:21, June 1, 2013 (UTC)
 * You should add this to the List of measurement units. - Princess   GLG  12:02, June 6, 2013 (UTC)
 * I've added it under quantities although if you can think of a better category please change it. Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:20, June 6, 2013 (UTC)
 * Sounds good. - Princess   GLG  12:26, June 6, 2013 (UTC)

Ubuuga caviar

 * Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:22, June 1, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:A lavish Hutt dish for the burner

(3 ECs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support Object
 * 1) -  Princess   GLG  23:06, June 1, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) Loved this comic.  501st  dogma ( talk ) 13:55, June 2, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  14:00, June 6, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) Supreme Emperor (talk) 14:55, June 21, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5)  Commander Code-8  You lost the game! 22:31, June 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * "The comic also does not state in what way the caviar is related to the planet with which it shares its name." Does the comic actually say that the caviar was related to Ubuuga? If not, I would replace "in what way" with "if", since the way it is currently worded implies that the comic says it was related to Ubuuga. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  00:52, June 6, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) * You can't just use the Atlas Online Companion to source where a planet was located, since the companion only says where the systems are located. Just choose another source that mentions the planet in a location or add an explanatory note saying that it places the Ubuuga system in the Mid Rim. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  00:55, June 6, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) **Both fixed Ayrehead02 (talk) 01:13, June 6, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Slimps' eyes

 * Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:58, June 1, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Another meal for the Hutt banquet

(2 ECs/2 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 13:56, June 2, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) -  Princess   GLG  16:03, June 3, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  00:58, June 6, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) Supreme Emperor (talk) 14:58, June 21, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Princess
 * 2) * I don't think you should link his in the attribution of the quote when you could link to it in the article. - Princess   GLG  14:29, June 3, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) **Fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:09, June 3, 2013 (UTC)

Comments
 * I don't know why I bother to ask, as you've already done so many species and such that aren't capitalized the way I think they should be, but just to be sure: Slimps' isn't capitalized in the comic? - Princess   GLG  23:09, June 1, 2013 (UTC)
 * Actually in the comic all letters are capitalized so I don't really know what the official capitalisation is. I can capitalize it if you'd prefer. Ayrehead02 (talk) 23:20, June 1, 2013 (UTC)
 * Ah, in that case, I suppose it's a matter of personal preference. It sound like a proper noun to me, but whatever you decide to do... - Princess   GLG  14:29, June 3, 2013 (UTC)
 * I'll capitalise it since you made the effort to ask :P Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:09, June 3, 2013 (UTC)

Chuba stew

 * Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 22:43, June 1, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:One more Hutt meal

(2 ECs/1 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) Good work.  501st  dogma ( talk ) 16:17, June 2, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) -  Princess   GLG  17:16, June 3, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  22:43, June 22, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) '''Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * If you haven't already, please check to make sure that the game's strategy guide does not mention the stew. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  22:12, June 2, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) **Ah I hadn't considered it might be in there since it was such an minor mention in the game. I don't actually have access to the guide but I seem to remember that it was you who got the Guineos to status so do you have access? If you do could I ask you the favour of looking it up for me? Sorry for the inconvenience. Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:19, June 3, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) ***I don't have the guide, I got the information for the Guineo article from SavageBob.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  15:34, June 3, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) ****Thanks I'll message him. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:38, June 5, 2013 (UTC)
 * 6) *****Hmm Bob said he'd have a look but he's on a break right now so I'm not sure how soon I'm gonna be able to get information on the guide. Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:28, June 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * 7) ******There's no hurry.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  20:37, June 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * 8) *******Added relevant info. Ayrehead02 (talk) 20:35, June 22, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Unidentified chef (Jabba)

 * Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 22:43, June 1, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:And now a chef who might of cooked the food I've nom'd!

(2 ECs/1 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 22:03, June 2, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) -  Princess   GLG  19:02, June 3, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  22:46, June 22, 2013 (UTC)

Object Comments
 * 1) An unidentified gender cat would be nice, and an individuals of unidentified species one.  501st  dogma ( talk ) 16:20, June 2, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) *My bad added. Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:32, June 2, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) Exiled Jedi
 * 4) * If you haven't already, please check to make sure that the game's strategy guide does not mention the chef. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  22:10, June 2, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) **Checked thanks to SavageBob and added relevant info. Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:08, June 22, 2013 (UTC)

Crunchbug

 * Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:12, June 5, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Another Hutt treat for WP:ENT and the burner

(2 ECs/1 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) Looks good.  501st  dogma ( talk ) 21:00, June 5, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) -  Princess   GLG  21:07, June 5, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  22:44, June 6, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Acid-beet

 * Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:29, June 5, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Some non-Hutt related food for a change.

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) I'm supporting, but I don't think it needs to be said in the body that it is non-sentient, as it is a vegetable.  501st  dogma ( talk ) 22:42, June 5, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) -  Princess   GLG  01:56, June 6, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) 501st
 * 2) * I don't think its habitat can be specified as acid rain...
 * 3) **Is that better? Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:55, June 5, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) *Please read over your article before you nom it. I've been finding missing words here and there. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 21:04, June 5, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) **My bad did you fix them I read through it a couple of times and can't see anything wrong now. Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:55, June 5, 2013 (UTC)
 * 6) ***Its been fixed here. Just take care in the future. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 22:42, June 5, 2013 (UTC)
 * 7) Princess
 * 8) * Can you not say that they are edible in the infobox?
 * 9) **Added. Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:55, June 5, 2013 (UTC)
 * 10) * You say that they are non-sentient in the infobox but not in the body.
 * 11) **Oops swear I added that. Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:55, June 5, 2013 (UTC)
 * 12) ***Its probably not needed in the body because its a vegetable.... 501st  dogma ( talk ) 22:29, June 5, 2013 (UTC)
 * 13) ****Hey, how do you know there aren't sentient vegetables? :P But you can remove it if you think it's better... -  Princess   GLG  01:56, June 6, 2013 (UTC)
 * 14) * You need a first appearance/first mentioned somewhere in the appearances/sources.
 * 15) **Added. Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:55, June 5, 2013 (UTC)
 * 16) * In the sources it says that the entry in TCSWE is "Acid-beet" yet in the references it is "acid-beet". Is the entry capitalized or not? - Princess   GLG  21:20, June 5, 2013 (UTC)
 * 17) **Corrected, it wasn't capitalized. Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:55, June 5, 2013 (UTC)
 * 18) Exiled Jedi
 * 19) *You mention it as non-sentient in the infobox, but not in the body.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  00:16, June 13, 2013 (UTC)
 * 20) **I did have it mentioned in the body but on several other plant CA noms I was asked to remove it as apparently it's not necessary for plants. Is there and official policy on this because I have several noms it effects. Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:30, June 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * 21) ***I'm not sure what the correct format is; the status articles I have checked have been somewhat inconsistent.
 * 22) ****I'll bring it up at the next mofference and see if I can get a consensus. Ayrehead02 (talk) 00:13, June 16, 2013 (UTC)
 * 23) *****Ok removed non-sentient from the body and infobox as it was agreed at the mofference that being a edible vegtable is not enough to assume non-sentience. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:44, June 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * 24) * You cannot source the destruction of the diner to Dining at Dex's. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  23:39, June 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * 25) **Hmm odd I swear I sourced it to the Last of the Jedi in all the food CA's. Oh well corrected now. Ayrehead02 (talk) 00:13, June 16, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Agamarian soybean

 * Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 20:56, June 5, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Another dish from Dex's

(1 ECs/0 Users/1 Total)
Support
 * 1)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 22:44, June 5, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) -  Princess   GLG  00:33, June 11, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Princess
 * 2) * I believe your second sentence is a run-on. - Princess   GLG  12:15, June 6, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) **Think I fixed it. Ayrehead02 (talk) 22:18, June 6, 2013 (UTC)

Comments
 * 1) You might want to kill that non-sentient part in the body here as well. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 22:44, June 5, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) *I would but Princess GLG objected specifically that I should add it and I'm not sure what the official policy is. There doesn't seem to be a policy on it and there are examples of previous status articles with and without it. Ayrehead02 (talk) 23:51, June 5, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) **You can go ahead and remove it if you want. - Princess   GLG  12:14, June 6, 2013 (UTC)

Antarian pea

 * Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:05, June 6, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Some more healthy greens from Dex's

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 14:06, June 6, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) -  Princess   GLG  18:32, June 6, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) 501st
 * 2) * Needs an intro! 207 words. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 11:58, June 6, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) **Added and split into sections, sorry totally forgot to check word count. Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:26, June 6, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Braxis

 * Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:22, June 6, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:And now for something completely different

(2 ECs/1 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) -  Princess   GLG  20:45, June 6, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) Good work.  501st  dogma ( talk ) 15:09, June 7, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  23:43, June 15, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Princess
 * 2) * &mdash ; needs to be used in the quote (without the space).
 * 3) **I thought it would be but -- is used in the comic for some reason. However mdash looks better. Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:32, June 6, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Hmmm... I don't know how to handle that then. I'm not sure which way would be more correct. - Princess   GLG  20:45, June 6, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) * Nothing in the attribution of the quote needs to be linked unless it is not mentioned elsewhere in the article. I tried to find where this policy is stated, but it seems to be evading me at the moment. Nonetheless, you can see it in other CAs.
 * 6) **No need to find the rule I know it just forgot to apply it in this article although I did in my other noms. Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:32, June 6, 2013 (UTC)
 * 7) ***Yeah, I figured you knew it, but I kinda wanted to find out where the rule was just so I knew. - Princess   GLG  01:15, June 7, 2013 (UTC)
 * 8) * Check your linking. Your missing several and planet is linked twice.
 * 9) **Think I fixed it all. Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:32, June 6, 2013 (UTC)
 * 10) * Star Wars: Dark Times needs italicized in the Bts.
 * 11) **Fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:32, June 6, 2013 (UTC)
 * 12) * I don't think hologram needs to be linked in the Appearances as it is already linked in the article, but I'm not sure. - Princess   GLG  19:08, June 6, 2013 (UTC)
 * 13) **Hologram in the appearances is a template that automatically links hologram and I don't really know how to prevent it from doing so. Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:32, June 6, 2013 (UTC)
 * 14) ***Yeah, I guess I knew that just forgot. I don't remember it being linked in other articles but I must have never looked that close.

Comments

Mulleen

 * Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:38, June 6, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Another Dark Times character

(2 ECs/1 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) -  Princess   GLG  15:14, June 7, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 19:45, June 7, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  23:46, June 15, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Princess
 * 2) * Individuals of unidentified species category is needed.
 * 3) **Added. Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:04, June 7, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) * I believe the affiliations in the infobox are usually in in-universe chronological order, but I can't really say for sure... - Princess   GLG  13:28, June 7, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) **Swapped. Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:04, June 7, 2013 (UTC)
 * 6) 501st
 * 7) * Imperial Navy should be added to the body somewhere, as it is in the infobox. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 15:11, June 7, 2013 (UTC)
 * 8) **Added. Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:33, June 7, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Gahg

 * Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:57, June 6, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Another DT Imperial flunky

(2 ECs/1 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) -  Princess   GLG  14:18, June 7, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 15:14, June 7, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  23:48, June 15, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Comments
 * You have been forgetting to move the closing brackets of the infobox up in the last couple articles. I did it for you this time, but just so you know... - Princess   GLG  14:18, June 7, 2013 (UTC)
 * Ah thanks! I'll remember it in future. Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:46, June 7, 2013 (UTC)

Esus Mesa

 * Nominated by: Cade  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg  Calrayn  00:18, June 7, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Project Hero

(2 ECs/2 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1) Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:08, June 7, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 15:16, June 7, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) -  Princess   GLG  10:37, June 13, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  23:50, June 15, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Princess
 * 2) * The duel was a lightsaber duel, right? If so, can you please specifically state this? - Princess   GLG  15:23, June 7, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) **Done. Cade  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg  Calrayn  00:22, June 13, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Limbfree

 * Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:37, June 7, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

(2 ECs/1 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 15:32, June 7, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) -  Princess   GLG  20:27, June 7, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  13:17, June 17, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) 501st
 * 2) * "as to Limbfree's location after he had finished evacuating the young and female Nosaurians..." Its sounds here like the limb guy was evacuating the young? Is this true?
 * 3) **Swapped it round since it's Bomo doing the evacuating. Is it now clearer? Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:28, June 7, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) * Separatist holdouts need to be mentioned in the body. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 15:20, June 7, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) **Added it in. Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:28, June 7, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Rafe's Gambit

 * Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:28, June 7, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:My first ship nom as part of my Dark Times run through

(2 ECs/2 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 12:04, June 9, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) -  Princess   GLG  00:21, June 16, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  15:20, June 18, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) <- Omicron (Leave a message at the BEEP! ) 19:09, June 24, 2013 (UTC)

Object Comments
 * 1) Princess
 * 2) * Doesn't it need to be mentioned that it is a starship in the body? (Perhaps even add a Description section, although that might be unnecessary.) - Princess   GLG  23:43, June 10, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) **Added. A description sentence would just read "The Rath's Gambit was a starship" I can add it if you want but yeah seems unneeded. Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:47, June 11, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) * Can you cut down on the whilsts? - Princess   GLG  21:16, June 11, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) **Cut down 3 to 1. Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:23, June 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * 6) Exiled Jedi
 * 7) * "During the wait for clearance for departure, the crew of the ship discovered that Imperial stormtroopers had begun searching each ship in the port, a fact they contacted the crew of the Maka-Eekai L4000 transport the Uhumele by comm." I think there is a word missing in there after the comma. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  13:04, June 18, 2013 (UTC)
 * 8) **Think I fixed it although I'm not 100% sure if a comma is the correct punctuation. Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:19, June 18, 2013 (UTC)
 * 9) ***Looks fine to me.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  15:20, June 18, 2013 (UTC)
 * Omi
 * 1) * I think the last paragraph of the history section should be rephrased. The whole crew didn't steal the V-wing, it was Dass on his own. <- Omicron (Leave a message at the BEEP! ) 00:25, June 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) **Changed it round is that better? Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:58, June 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) ***Looks good to me. <- Omicron (Leave a message at the BEEP! ) 19:09, June 24, 2013 (UTC)

Unidentified assassin (Hapes)

 * Nominated by: - Princess   GLG  12:01, June 8, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

(2 ECs/1 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 12:28, June 9, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:27, June 9, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  00:23, June 13, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Ayrehead
 * 2) * Could you put in the quote from the Bomb conspirator article? Ayrehead02 (talk) 01:33, June 9, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) **Ah, I completely forgot about that. Added. - Princess   GLG  10:46, June 9, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) 501st
 * 5) * Unidentified gender and species cats are needed.
 * 6) **Added.
 * 7) * "The bombing, which was an attempt to assassinate the Hapan matriarch, Ta'a Chume, and her granddaughter, Tenel Ka, failed, and the conspirator was caught." This sentence is awkward here with all the commas. Try to fix it please. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 12:08, June 9, 2013 (UTC)
 * 8) **Better? - Princess   GLG  12:23, June 9, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Haune Tiar

 * Nominated by: Cade  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg  Calrayn  00:21, June 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: The Codex Project returns with a vengeance. I can't let all these youngsters upstage me, now!

(2 ECs/2 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1) -  Princess   GLG  13:24, June 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) Wow such little info on such and important guy :S Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:37, June 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 17:51, June 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  23:32, June 15, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Princess
 * 2) * You don't state that he is male in the body...
 * 3) * Returning to Ossus, Tiar and the rest of the enclave... Grammatically this says that Tiar and the rest of the enclave all left Ossus and were all returning. Unless this is the case, it should probably be reworded. (And if it is the case it should be mentioned earlier in the article.) - Princess   GLG  13:17, June 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) **Both fixed. Cade  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg  Calrayn  13:20, June 15, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Odan-Urr's holocron

 * Nominated by: Cade  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg  Calrayn  00:21, June 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: The Codex Project

(2 ECs/2 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1) As long as you address the objections below.  501st  dogma ( talk ) 17:53, June 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:20, June 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) -  Princess   GLG  19:38, June 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  03:08, June 17, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Princess
 * 2) * Source for the affiliation in the infobox.
 * 3) **Blarg. Cade  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg  Calrayn  18:16, June 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) Ayrehead
 * 5) * I don't know the context so this may be wrong but should Yuon Par also be listed as an owner? Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:42, June 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * 6) **Nah, it's only mentioned that she found it. Cade  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg  Calrayn  18:16, June 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * 7) Exiled Jedi
 * 8) * This is kind of picky, but could you cut one of the three sometimes in the body of the article? -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  22:19, June 16, 2013 (UTC)
 * 9) **Done. Cade  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg  Calrayn  02:03, June 17, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Malachor V slave rebellion

 * Nominated by: Cade  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg  Calrayn  00:21, June 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: The Codex Project

(2 ECs/2 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1) -  Princess   GLG  13:27, June 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:51, June 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 17:54, June 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  22:21, June 16, 2013 (UTC)

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Comments

Custo Ramak

 * Nominated by: Cade  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg  Calrayn  00:21, June 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: The Codex Project

(2 ECs/2 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 18:39, June 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) Ayrehead02 (talk) 23:21, June 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) -  Princess   GLG  00:19, June 16, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  22:17, June 16, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Princess
 * 2) * You don't say he is male in the body...
 * 3) **Hence the "His" and the new link to sexes.
 * 4) * You say that his death was years before the Cold War in the infobox, but in the body you just say it was at some point before. If it truly can be determined that it was years before, you should include that information in the body.
 * 5) * Linking.
 * 6) **All done. Cade  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg  Calrayn  18:19, June 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * 7) *** Actually, author and funeral still need to be linked and now death is linked twice... - Princess   GLG  19:43, June 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * 8) **** *sigh* Trying to do these things on a phone during breaks is not really working out for me. Cade  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg  Calrayn  23:41, June 15, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Darth Azamin

 * Nominated by: Cade  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg  Calrayn  00:21, June 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: The Codex Project

(2 ECs/2 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1) As long as you take care of Dogma's objections. - Princess   GLG  19:45, June 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) Cadeth has been beaten by the newbies.  501st  dogma ( talk ) 14:28, June 16, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:21, June 17, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  12:55, June 18, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Princess
 * 2) * More context for Star Wars: The Old Republic in the Bts. (release date, publishers)
 * 3) **Added the date, but the BioWare's not really necessary here. It's mostly fluff for shorter BTSes.
 * 4) Ayrehead
 * 5) * You don't list his gender in the infobox but describe Azamin as a male in the body. Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:57, June 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * 6) **Insolent newbies. Get off my lawn! Cade  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg  Calrayn  18:23, June 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * 7) *** Shouldn't it state he's male at the start of the body now? Although I guess theres no rule saying it has to be there. Also your lawns pretty comfortable, I reckon I might stay :P Ayrehead02 (talk) 23:19, June 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * 8) ****>_< With the Codex in front of me, Azamin is not in fact confirmed to be male. Cade  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg  Calrayn  23:42, June 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * 9) ***** Yet you still say to assassinate him in the body :P Ayrehead02 (talk) 00:11, June 16, 2013 (UTC)
 * 10) ******wut. I specifically searched for he, his, and him. >_< Cade  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg  Calrayn  02:04, June 17, 2013 (UTC)
 * 11) 501st
 * 12) * Male = no unidentified gender cat.
 * 13) **Per above. Cade  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg  Calrayn  23:42, June 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * 14) * You don't say 3653 BBY in the body. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 18:43, June 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * 15) **grumble grumble grumble Cade  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg  Calrayn  23:42, June 15, 2013 (UTC)

Comments
 * 1) Redlinks.  501st  dogma ( talk ) 00:23, June 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) *Pls. I'm working on them now. Cade  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg  Calrayn  00:29, June 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) **Done. Cade  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg  Calrayn  00:36, June 15, 2013 (UTC)

Tulak Hord's lightsaber

 * Nominated by: Cade  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg  Calrayn  00:21, June 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: The Codex Project

(2 ECs/2 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1) Again, Dogma's objections. - Princess   GLG  19:49, June 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) Ayrehead02 (talk) 23:22, June 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 14:29, June 16, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  22:14, June 16, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Ayrehead
 * 2) * Should this have the conjecture tag? Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:00, June 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) **Nope. Cade  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg  Calrayn  18:24, June 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * 501
 * 1) * You don't mention the Sith Empire in the body. Link to it please.
 * 2) * As you ref the date of 3678 BBY to 2, it must be like that in the body. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 18:46, June 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) **All done. See, kiddies, this is why you don't write CANoms while watching the Season 4 finale episodes of Doctor Who. Cade  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg  Calrayn  23:45, June 15, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Gharnus Texts

 * Nominated by: Cade  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg  Calrayn  00:21, June 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: The Codex Project

(2 ECs/2 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1) Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:01, June 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) -  Princess   GLG  19:52, June 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  22:13, June 16, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 23:23, June 16, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Deravon Wells

 * Nominated by: Cade  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg  Calrayn  00:21, June 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: The Codex Project. This is the last one... for now.

(2 ECs/2 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1) Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:02, June 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) -  Princess   GLG  19:54, June 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  22:09, June 16, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 11:04, June 17, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Shouldn't Drellik be in the apprentices field in the infobox?  501st  dogma ( talk ) 23:24, June 16, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) *No. That's for Force-sensitives. Cade  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg  Calrayn  02:04, June 17, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Korvalus Tower

 * Nominated by: Cade  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg  Calrayn  01:05, June 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: One mustn't forget Project Hero, either.

(2 ECs/2 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1) Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:04, June 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) -  Princess   GLG  20:04, June 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  22:08, June 16, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 23:25, June 16, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Saber-fang

 * Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:45, June 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Yes it is uncapitalised in the source before a certain someone asks :P

(2 ECs/1 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) A certain someone? Who might that be? - Princess   GLG  12:04, June 16, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  22:05, June 16, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 23:28, June 16, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Flensor

 * Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 17:11, June 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Another Hutt space creature for the burner. Once again uncapitalised.

(2 ECs/1 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) -  Princess   GLG  20:56, June 16, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  22:04, June 16, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 23:29, June 16, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Princess
 * 2) * Source for planet in infobox. - Princess   GLG  20:27, June 16, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) **Urrgh how'd I miss that. Ayrehead02 (talk) 20:43, June 16, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Butterflying

 * Nominated by:  Stake black   msg 17:04, June 17, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

(3 ECs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1) Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 21:55, June 17, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 22:49, June 17, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) Ayrehead02 (talk) 00:21, June 18, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) -  Princess   GLG  11:16, June 18, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  12:53, June 18, 2013 (UTC)

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Comments

StarMark III Hyperdrive

 * Nominated by: LelalMekha (talk) 14:57, June 19, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

(1 ECs/2 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  21:54, June 20, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) Ayrehead02 (talk) 23:24, June 22, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) -  Princess   GLG  02:35, June 25, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * I agree with Ayrehead, I think that mentioning the purchase of the hyperdrive should be in the body. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  15:28, June 20, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) **There you are. --LelalMekha (talk) 21:45, June 20, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) How about a link for the spaceship? It seems important enough. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 12:36, June 22, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) Ayrehead
 * 6) * Instead of saying he or she could you say they?
 * 7) **Well, I suppose so. --LelalMekha (talk) 15:29, June 22, 2013 (UTC)
 * 8) * I don't think we're meant to called unnamed characters unidentified in article bodies you should just say a spacer. Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:03, June 22, 2013 (UTC)
 * 9) **Fixed. --LelalMekha (talk) 15:29, June 22, 2013 (UTC)
 * 10) I'm not sure why, but I'm confused by the first sentence. Should it not be for spaceships? I also think perhaps you should specify that it is for interstellar travel in the body. (Although you don't have to if you don't think it's necessary, as I'm debating whether it is necessary myself.) -  Princess   GLG  22:20, June 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * 11) *I just fixed the "spaceship(s)" typo, but I don't think the addition you suggest is mandatory. After all, the body of the article already says it's an hyperdrive unit, a kind of device that is used for interestellar travel by definition. --LelalMekha (talk) 23:02, June 24, 2013 (UTC)

Comments
 * Is there any indication as to what ships this component could be compatible with? Does the game ever reveal what starship you use to get off Tatooine?  Stake black   msg 15:08, June 19, 2013 (UTC)
 * No. Your ship gets rebuilt from scratch. --LelalMekha (talk) 15:13, June 19, 2013 (UTC)
 * Shouldn't you say that a spacer purchased one whilst building a ship from scratch while attempting to get off Tatooine? In a 100% game completion template. Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:23, June 19, 2013 (UTC)
 * Yousa right. --LelalMekha (talk) 21:45, June 20, 2013 (UTC)

Unidentified Vrot (Cuipernam)

 * Nominated by: Supreme Emperor (talk) 04:10, June 20, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: About time I finished this :P For all the novels

(0 ECs/0 Users/0 Total)
Support
 * 1) As long as the second sentence is reworded like Ayrehead mentioned... -  Princess   GLG  22:07, June 24, 2013 (UTC)

Object Comments
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * The Vrots category is a redlink. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  15:35, June 20, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) **Oops, I thought I made that page a week ago :P
 * 4) * The era field of the infobox is a redlink. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  15:55, June 21, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) **Oops, I meant that it lacked a source.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  00:56, June 22, 2013 (UTC)
 * 6) ***Oops, done
 * 7) Princess
 * 8) * The era needs to be added to the infobox. - Princess   GLG  22:48, June 20, 2013 (UTC)
 * 9) **Fixed. Supreme Emperor (talk) 14:47, June 21, 2013 (UTC)
 * 10) *** Source? - Princess   GLG  23:44, June 21, 2013 (UTC)
 * 11) ****Done. Supreme Emperor (talk) 03:41, June 22, 2013 (UTC)
 * 12) * If you know that the weapon he had had a trigger, do you know anything else about what kind of weapon it was? (Mainly, was it a blaster?) - Princess   GLG  12:10, June 22, 2013 (UTC)
 * 13) **All I know is it had a trigger.
 * 14) ***Ok, just making sure. - Princess   GLG  22:07, June 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * 15) 501st
 * 16) * You should bold the Vrot in the beginning of the body.... 501st  dogma ( talk ) 12:38, June 22, 2013 (UTC)
 * 17) **Done
 * 18) *The first sentence seems a bit of a run on, because it has so many ands and such. Could you see if you could change it? 501st  dogma ( talk ) 23:55, June 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * 19) Ayrehead
 * 20) *Couldn't you include breifly why the mercenaries were attacking the group? Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:06, June 22, 2013 (UTC)
 * 21) **How's this? Supreme Emperor (talk) 03:04, June 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * 22) ***The informations good but I think you need to change "during" to "he took part in" in the second sentence. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:01, June 24, 2013 (UTC)