Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Ajai Fel


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Support
 * 1) Havac 19:31, 4 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) Toprawa and Ralltiir 18:07, 9 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 3)  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  00:35, 16 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) Cavalier One ( Squadron channel ) 10:01, 29 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) All this blue & purple. Let's get some mutha@*&$in color up here! —Tommy ( Clean face and hands ) The Anvil 22:18, 29 May 2008 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) Toprawa:
 * 2) * I'm not sure if you're trying to leave the "suspense" in here, but please specify that they were kidnapped by Imp Intel, or whatever the case is. It makes the rest of the article clearer: "Around ten months after the Battle of Endor, Fyric was kidnapped from the estate."
 * 3) **It's not about suspense, really, so much as just not overloading on information all at once. Two paragraphs later, it says Ilir Post was the leader of the Intelligence-backed kidnappers. I could move some stuff around if you still don't like it, though. Havac 16:24, 9 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Not entirely important, but you might consider moving it. My own stupidity aside, I had to read through it twice before I really understood what happened Toprawa and Ralltiir 18:07, 9 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) ****I went ahead and tinkered with it. Havac 21:13, 9 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 6) * I realize the briefness of her involvement in anything, but please see if you can't expand the P&T by at least another sentence, if only for the sake of avoiding the one-sentence paragraph. Toprawa and Ralltiir 05:21, 9 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 7) **Expanded. Havac 16:24, 9 May 2008 (UTC)

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