Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Underwater dweller


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Underwater dweller

 * Nominated by: ~ SavageBob 06:20, 20 July 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: U is for underwater dweller. Conjecturally speaking, of course. ~ SavageBob 06:20, 20 July 2009 (UTC)

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1)  IFYLOFD  ( You will pay the price for your lack of vision! ) 05:11, 22 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) Again, not much to say. --Skippy Farlstendoiro 10:14, 24 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 3)  CC7567  (talk) 01:29, 25 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) &mdash;Master Jonathan(Jedi Council Chambers) 20:04, 25 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) --Eyrezer 23:35, 4 August 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) IFYLOFD:
 * 2) * "Many members of the species inhabited the Underwater Kingdom, below the surface of Sunshine Lake on the Forest Moon of Endor. Most of these lived in large caves" Are the caves in the Underwater Kingdom? Clarify.
 * 3) * "Meanwhile, a bigger member of the species, Orcon, lived alone in his personal stronghold, a cave within an underwater mountain." This seems out of place at the end of the paragraph.
 * 4) * History section in general doesn't flow very well.
 * 5) * "He rescued them from drowning and dragged them into his people's underwater lair." Using the word "dragged" indicates that he brought them to the grotto against their will.
 * 6) *Nice work.  IFYLOFD  ( You will pay the price for your lack of vision! ) 18:33, 20 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 7) **Thanks for your notes. I've tried to address everything you mentioned. What do you think? ~ SavageBob 00:17, 22 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 8) ***Looks good.  IFYLOFD  ( You will pay the price for your lack of vision! ) 05:11, 22 July 2009 (UTC)

Comments
 * If there's enough info, can the skirmish (or mission or whatever) in Orcon's lair get a stub or link?  CC7567  (talk) 01:29, 25 July 2009 (UTC)
 * Good question. Maybe a "Skirmish in Orcon's stronghold" article would work. I'll see about it soon. ~ SavageBob 11:03, 25 July 2009 (UTC)
 * Why's the sourcing done by page number? Also, since "Underwater Dweller" is a conjectural title I don't think it should be capitalized. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 10:41, 25 July 2009 (UTC)
 * Good point on the caps; I'll fix it. I always source by page number; makes it easier for others to go back and check the work if they need to look something up. ~ SavageBob 11:03, 25 July 2009 (UTC)
 * Are they actually called underwater dwellers in the comic? If so, the Nickname template should be used instead, although the capitalization would be the same. --Eyrezer 09:52, 27 July 2009 (UTC)
 * No, they call the Ewoks "surface dwellers," and I think whoever created the article first used that to backform "underwater dweller." Which template would that be then? ~ SavageBob 22:23, 27 July 2009 (UTC)
 * Stick with conjecture, seeing as it is created by us. --Eyrezer 04:32, 28 July 2009 (UTC)