Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Buzchub


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Buzchub

 * Nominated by: --Eyrezer 00:23, March 26, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Gotta love GAs

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)
Support
 * 1) ~ SavageBob 23:28, March 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 22:52, March 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) These species articles are short and clean. Let's keep them flying off the page. Toprawa and Ralltiir 19:52, March 31, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) &mdash;fodigg  BlackRebelStarbird.png (talk) | 20:25, March 31, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) Well done.  Jonjedigrandmaster  Jedi symbol.svg ( We seed the stars ) 21:10, March 31, 2010 (UTC)
 * 6)  CC7567  (talk) 07:18, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) '''Object this species, Skippy will".
 * 2) * Can you specify the supposed rhythm of the translators? I can find no obvious pattern; it is not object-subject-verb as exemplified in the first quote. What is it?
 * 3) * Are you sure that some of the Buzchub translators worked this way? Or maybe Und'l's was unique? If so, maybe you could say "In the case of the Buzchub Und'l", instead of "In some cases".
 * 4) * "For these employees, he made contact with a group..." Do you mean he made the contact in behalf of his employees? What employees? I thought the supposed space shippers (Plural missing?) were his employe r s.
 * 5) *WEG, Yay! Skippy Farlstendoiro 08:18, March 26, 2010 (UTC)
 * 6) **I added the full quote, and addda bit of detail on the speech rhythm. If you can improve on that, please do. Bob got the second one. The third was meant to be employers, and is now fixed. --Eyrezer 01:26, March 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * 7) *One more: Are you sure the translators were mechanical as opposed to electronic? Is OS that specific? --Skippy Farlstendoiro 10:36, March 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * 8) **No, its not. I was using the word to distinguish from a droid translator. I've changed it to device as that is the term used in TSK. --Eyrezer 01:37, April 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * 9) Toprawa:
 * 10) * The intro and the History don't sync up concerning the species' homeworld. The intro says they were native to Harrandarr, and the History says they were believed to be. Please revise. Toprawa and Ralltiir 17:47, March 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * 11) **Sure. Fixed. --Eyrezer 11:07, March 31, 2010 (UTC)

Comments


 * The "believed to be" from Harrandarr is straight from CSWE. I have no idea why it was put like this. It was hardly necessary from the original source... --Eyrezer 00:24, March 26, 2010 (UTC)
 * Is that the full image from the book? It looks cropped, but it's hard to tell. If possible, a more full-bodied pic would be good. ~ SavageBob 23:28, March 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * That's the full image. --Eyrezer 02:08, March 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * Not a big deal, but is this paragraph break necessary?


 * "... Some Buzchub, such as Und'l, spoke with a peculiar rhythm, using short, paired phrases.[2]
 * Buzchub were not overly curious about other species or technology, but they thoroughly enjoyed traveling the galaxy.[2]"


 * &mdash;fodigg BlackRebelStarbird.png (talk) | 20:24, March 31, 2010 (UTC)


 * Joined together. --Eyrezer 01:37, April 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * (Are we supposed to strike comments that aren't actual objections? I don't even know! &mdash;fodigg  BlackRebelStarbird.png (talk) | 01:40, April 1, 2010 (UTC))
 * Probably not necessary. --Eyrezer 07:39, April 2, 2010 (UTC)