Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/DRN-38


 * ''The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a comprehensive article nomination that was unsuccessful. Please do not modify it.

DRN-38

 * Nominated by:  Commander Code-8  To say hi, press 42 02:16, January 18, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Gee, haven't written anything CANs in a while.

(1 ECs/0 Users/1 Total)
Support
 * 1) Good work.  501st  dogma ( talk ) 13:00, January 19, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * I might be wrong but isn't this droid one of the possible Trade Federation team names in the skirmish mode? Might be worth mentioning.
 * 3) **Done.  Commander Code-8  G'day, mate 08:33, January 23, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Wait a minute, I think the one in skirmish mode is DRN-592, unless they are both in there.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  13:31, January 23, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) ****Damn, you're right. Reverted.  Commander Code-8  G'day, mate 10:45, January 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * 6) * The way you say "moon of Alaris Prime" makes it hard to tell if the moon is Alaris Prime or if Alaris Prime has a moon. Please reword.
 * 7) **Done.  Commander Code-8  G'day, mate 08:33, January 23, 2013 (UTC)
 * 8) *Perhaps an article for the base?-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  03:33, January 23, 2013 (UTC)
 * 9) **I haven't created any base articles from GB aside from the first one, cause I'm not sure whether they're supposed to be the same base or different ones. They do still need creation, I think, I'll do the one for this tomorrow.  Commander Code-8  G'day, mate 08:33, January 23, 2013 (UTC)
 * 10) Winterz
 * 11) *Could you just give a sentence about the aftermath (of the battle)? Winterz (talk) 14:37, January 25, 2013 (UTC)
 * 12) Supreme Emperor
 * 13) *Just one small thing, in the characteristics you say "DRN-38 given command", could you change this to "DRN-38 was given command". Otherwise, nice work. Supreme Emperor (talk) 04:01, January 28, 2013 (UTC)
 * 14) **Oh, I've only just sectioned the article off to respond to Winterz's objection, which I did quickly hence this objection. Anyway this article is now over 250 words so can an EduCorps member archive this as a fail please.  Commander Code-8  G'day, mate 06:18, January 28, 2013 (UTC)
 * 15) ***I'll be happy to do it, but if you want to take a shot at it yourself, anyone is free to archive articles. Menkooroo (talk) 06:20, January 28, 2013 (UTC)
 * 16) ****Ok then, I'll give it a go.  Commander Code-8  G'day, mate 08:10, January 28, 2013 (UTC)

Comments
 * This is just a quick one before I go away for the weekend, so I won't be answering any objections 'till I get back.  Commander Code-8  To say hi, press 42 02:16, January 18, 2013 (UTC)