Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Fideltin Rusk's first squad


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Fideltin Rusk's first squad

 * Nominated by: Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 01:43, March 5, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Project Hero. A superfluous article creation because of this was narrowly avoided thanks to the IRC.

(3 ECs/3 Users/6 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Commander Code-8  G'day, mate 08:08, March 5, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) &mdash; DigiFluid(Whine here) 19:34, March 5, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) Winterz (talk) 15:48, March 6, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 13:53, March 9, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  00:30, March 10, 2013 (UTC)
 * 6) &mdash; 02:51, March 10, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) There's whining to be done here.
 * 2) * First sentence is very weird, could you tweak it a bit? Because as it is, it would look a lot better if it was separated into two small sentences. The connector "and" just doesn't fit in.
 * 3) **Done.
 * 4) * It would be great if you could write there its latter mention (the quote's) between the two fellows.
 * 5) **Done.
 * 6) * Also, what became of Durant would be great. (emdashes is a hint) Winterz (talk) 20:09, March 5, 2013 (UTC)
 * 7) **I'm going to have to pull the extraneous context card here, as it's not relevant to the squad itself. I'd understand if I just called him Durant, but his later fate isn't relevant to the squad's history or its members. Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 15:41, March 6, 2013 (UTC)
 * 8) There's no mention of the Galactic Republic in the entire article, including the affiliation section of the infobox. I suggest you remedy that.  501st  dogma ( talk ) 22:57, March 6, 2013 (UTC)
 * 9) *Done. Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 04:18, March 7, 2013 (UTC)
 * 10) **Its not in the affiliation section. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 21:23, March 7, 2013 (UTC)
 * 11) ***I don't see the need for it in the affiliation section, as it's already evident in the Republic Military; I've left it out on articles before, and the IRC peanut gallery says that it's not necessary. Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 22:07, March 7, 2013 (UTC)
 * 12) ****Leave it then. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 13:53, March 9, 2013 (UTC)

Comments
 * Do we know for certain that this was Rusk's first squad? &mdash; DigiFluid(Whine here) 19:34, March 5, 2013 (UTC)
 * Yeah, by the quote. Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 19:36, March 5, 2013 (UTC)
 * Derp. &mdash; DigiFluid(Whine here) 19:40, March 5, 2013 (UTC)