Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Serpent's Smile


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Serpent's Smile

 * Nominated by: -- Harrar 00:28, 6 April 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: A Zsinj starship. Devoid of anything NJO or Yuuzhan Vong ;)

(4 ACs/1 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 11:43, 14 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) As far as I saw, no errors beyond minor ones.  CC7567  (talk) 21:03, 18 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) Very nice, Harrar.  Grunny  ( Talk ) 05:23, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 22:40, 20 May 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) Remind me to read Viqi, Harrar.  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  19:47, 24 May 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * Oh, there is one thing. Does the source mention the ship as the Serpent's Smile or just Serpent's Smile? If it's the former, you'll have stay consistent in the article. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 10:29, 24 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) * I found two cases when I'd used "the" in front. It's just Serpent's Smile so I removed them. Consistent now. -- —Harrar  MR T.Lah.jpg ( Villip ) 08:49, 25 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) From the Moffship of Grand Moff Tranner:
 * 3) * Needs a bit of context on Solo in the intro.
 * 4) **I wasn't sure how to go about this. I feel I've just rephrased stuff so have a look and see if further changes are required.
 * 5) *Good job. Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 18:32, 10 May 2009 (UTC)
 * 6) **Thanks. -- —Harrar  ( Villip ) 23:57, 10 May 2009 (UTC)

Comments
 * c.2250 words, so below the GA limit. Thought I'd run it through here first as it's my first starship nomination and I'm unusure of some stuff, like whether if we know the class we put in general information even if it's unconfirmed. Plus not sure if my description or commanders and crew sections are that great! -- Harrar 00:28, 6 April 2009 (UTC)
 * Can someone also check cswe? Thanks -- Harrar 00:28, 6 April 2009 (UTC)
 * Nothing in the CSWE.  Grunny  ( Talk ) 05:23, 26 April 2009 (UTC)