Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Cabbel

Cabbel

 * Nominated by: Hanzo Hasashi 17:20, December 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Then one foggy Christmas Eve, Rebel ships came into our sector.

Support

 * 1)  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 10:58, December 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Good job. The info is presented efficiently and effectively. Menkooroo 05:57, December 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 04:24, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Toprawa

 * Preliminary objection. Have you checked the ESB PhotoComic, radio drama, radio drama script, and Manga adaptation? Toprawa and Ralltiir 03:53, December 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * Sorry to interject --- I checked 'em. He's in the manga, but the photocomic and radio drama skip over Lennox's scene. Menkooroo 03:56, December 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * Fair enough. I should point out, however, that the RD script is much different from the finalized RD. There are many lines and huge chunks of scenes that appear in the script that were cut out from the RD, so he may still be in there. Toprawa and Ralltiir 20:48, December 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * Updated with info from the RD script. FWIW, Cabbel and Lennox don't appear, however it does describe the Tyrant being disabled from the Alliance's point of view. Hanzo Hasashi 05:48, January 4, 2012 (UTC)
 * I would actually recommend checking to see if that information can be referenced to the general RD, which is the more canon-binding source. We really only use the script if it includes exclusive, non-contradicting material. Toprawa and Ralltiir 22:56, January 4, 2012 (UTC)
 * Is indeed in the RD, sourcing changed. Hanzo Hasashi 05:10, January 5, 2012 (UTC)
 * I think the intro would benefit from some brief mention that Cabbel and the Tyrant were attached to Vader's Death Squadron. Toprawa and Ralltiir 22:37, January 9, 2012 (UTC)
 * Taken care of. Hanzo Hasashi 02:42, January 10, 2012 (UTC)