Wookieepedia:Re-featured article nominations/Hoth (individual)

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Hoth (individual)

 * Originally nominated by:
 * Last featured on: April 29, 2007
 * Changes since last review: diff
 * Date placed on this page: May 15, 2011

(4 Inqs/0 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1) Green Tentacle (Talk) 20:36, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 20:20, July 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Cold as ice. Menkooroo 06:07, July 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4)  —Tommy   9281  Saturday, July 9, 2011, 06:36 UTC 

Object
 * 1) Moffship
 * 2) * Species and gender should be mentioned in the intro and the bio.
 * 3) * If Dree Vandap and Tal were trained by Hoth, they should be listed in some capacity in the "Apprentices" field of the infobox. (Would do this myself, but I don't know enough about these individuals.)
 * 4) * His status as a Jedi Master is not mentioned until the middle of the bio; his status as a Jedi Lord is not even in the bio.
 * 5) **Got these three. Will work on the rest soon. Menkooroo 08:50, July 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) * Context is needed on Darth Bane in the bio.
 * 7) **Added.
 * 8) * The P&T could probably be expanded.
 * 9) **How's this? Menkooroo 05:41, July 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) * No P&A section.
 * 11) **In regards to this one, there's no info for one. I don't think he ever even uses the Force in a work. - Lord Hydronium 06:01, June 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 12) * A lot of the "Name" section of the BTS seems unnecessary; there's also speculation in the first two sentences. The last sentence is all that is really relevant to the character, and it should be incorporated into a new section detailing his origins (a "Hoth was created for the video game Dark Forces: Jedi Knight before appearing in..." kind of paragraph). Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 18:24, June 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * 13) **Cleaned it up considerably. I can't access the TOR forums at work, but I'll add a leading quote from Drew when I get home. Menkooroo 05:54, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

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