Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Rufaan Tigellinus


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Rufaan Tigellinus

 * Nominated by: -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 23:57, 28 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Should be very interesting.

(5 Inqs/2 Users/7 Total)
Support
 * 1) Goodwood  [[Image:Redstarbird.svg|20px]] ( Alliance Intelligence ) 00:27, 30 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) Grand Moff Tranner [[Image:Imperial Department of Military Research.svg|20px]] (Comlink) 17:34, 30 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 3)  Cavalier One ( Squadron channel ) 14:12, 6 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 4)  Greyman ( Talk ) 07:09, 10 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 5)  Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 22:05, 11 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 6) Toprawa and Ralltiir 17:49, 29 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 7) --  Darth Culator  (Talk) 05:07, 30 August 2008 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) From the Twig of Goodwood:
 * 2) * Is there a mention of what specific class of Star Destroyer that Avatar was? If so, please include, if not, disregard. -- Goodwood [[Image:Redstarbird.svg|20px]] ( Alliance Intelligence ) 00:02, 30 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) **There is, in Dan's blog, but as its cut content I can't add it to the bio, so I've stuck in it to the BtS along with some other info from the blog. I've had to link to a disambig page, though, because it isn't specified if it's Imperial I or II. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 00:23, 30 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Thanks.-- Goodwood [[Image:Redstarbird.svg|20px]] ( Alliance Intelligence ) 00:27, 30 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) From the desk of Atarumaster88
 * 6) * "Though he did the best he could to mask his hand" Flowery prose.
 * 7) **Bah! Fixed.
 * 8) * "; he drew people into his influence like a gravity well projector," Flowery prose.
 * 9) **Bah! Fixed.
 * 10) * "imperial bodyguard" Should this be capitalized? (BtS)
 * 11) **I'm not sure, really. I was going by Wikipedia, which didn't capitalize it.
 * 12) *Have a Super Terrific Friend-Un-frustrating day. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 21:44, 11 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 13) **Bah! -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 21:48, 11 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 14) Toprawa:
 * 15) * The lead quote has a very generic source. I'd like to see this sourced to a specific NewsNet article
 * 16) **Changed source and created article; I'll try to do so for each of the NewsNets articles soonish.
 * 17) ***Scratch that, I found a better solution.
 * 18) * Who reported this? The NewsNets? Please specify: "it was reported that Weizel had won the backing of Moff Jamson Caglio"
 * 19) **Addressed.
 * 20) * I don't necessarily agree with the wording on this. First off, it wasn't Ozzel's fleet, but Vader's. Vader wasn't assigned to Ozzel, Ozzel was assigned to him. Please reword as appropriate: "when Lord Darth Vader, one of his chief rivals on Coruscant, was assigned to Admiral Kendal Ozzel's Death Squadron"
 * 21) **Reworded a bit -- tell me what you think.
 * 22) * Also with this, do you mean to say that the media expected them to be in the Outer Rim for an extended time, or that they had already been there for a time. Please clarify: "then in the Outer Rim for what was expected by the media to be a considerable amount of time"
 * 23) **I think this has been covered by the alterations per the previous objection, but let me know if you want changes.
 * 24) * I don't know if I would actually pin him as "thorough." He made this claim to the media, but did he actually carry it out? Since we don't know, it would be best to say something like "he promised a thorough investigation to the media" or something: "and thorough, stating to the media that he would conduct a proper and complete investigation into the events surrounding Governor Maclain.
 * 25) **Fair point -- reworded.
 * 26) * This wording is kind of contradictory. Please reword: "others as talented tacticians possessing no tact or guile" Toprawa and Ralltiir 23:02, 11 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 27) **Reworded some for clarity. Thanks for the review. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 19:27, 28 August 2008 (UTC)

Comments


 * A well put-together BtS.-- Goodwood [[Image:Redstarbird.svg|20px]] ( Alliance Intelligence ) 00:02, 30 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Thank you. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 00:23, 30 July 2008 (UTC)