Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Biel Ductavis


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Biel Ductavis

 * Nominated by: &mdash; 23:09, December 26, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: For the barn burner.

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 * 1) CC-8
 * 2) *Where's the Bts? And since this article is sectioned off a P&T is needed
 * 3) **I don't necessarily see the need for a P&T, since he is mentioned in only one sentence, which reveals nothing of his personality.&mdash; 23:41, December 26, 2012 (UTC)
 * 4) *"A male Jedi Master who served the Order as a Master" I think you know what needs to be removed here
 * 5) **Fixed.&mdash; 23:41, December 26, 2012 (UTC)
 * 6) *Some more context might be needed for the Pius Dea crusades in the intro, probably just say they were a series of conflicts or something
 * 7) **Fixed.&mdash; 23:41, December 26, 2012 (UTC)
 * 8) *Depending how many words you add to the new sections, you may have to consider GANing this. And not really related to this review, but you forgot to add this to the BB5 nom section.  Commander Code-8  To say hi, press 42 23:22, December 26, 2012 (UTC)
 * 9) **Might need to, and the what?&mdash; 23:41, December 26, 2012 (UTC)
 * 10) ***Bwa, now it's 260 words. Gotta nom it for GAN now.&mdash; 23:43, December 26, 2012 (UTC)
 * 11) *It's me, Menkooroo! Piggybacking onto Code8's setion. The article lists Warfare as his first mention, but Plagueis was released three months before Warfare! Menkooroo (talk) 23:30, December 26, 2012 (UTC)
 * 12) **Nice catch, Jeff! That was a major oversight on my part, removed.&mdash; 23:41, December 26, 2012 (UTC)