Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Jake Farrell


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Jake Farrell

 * Nominated by: Graestan ( Talk ) and Green Tentacle (Talk) 20:39, 5 July 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Freshly merged in light of recent revelations and ready to go.

(5 Inqs/0 Users/5 Total/INQCON 5)
Support
 * 1) Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 22:58, 7 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 2)  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  00:49, 8 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) Farrell, unidentified pilot; it's all good. And the trench pilots finally all have names!  Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 14:25, 8 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) I'm so glad you guys did this. &mdash;  Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 02:21, 15 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) --  —Harrar  ( Cut the comm chatter ) 14:40, 17 July 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) From the Moffship of Grand Moff Tranner:
 * 2) * Species and gender should be mentioned in the beginning of the intro and bio.
 * 3) **Done. Green Tentacle (Talk) 18:40, 7 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) * "Farrell was the first to comply, followed by Celchu and Salm—he and the others who broke off managed to draw off two Imperial fighters—reducing Calrissian's remaining pursuit by half." - something about the dashes doesn't seem right. I get what you're trying to say, but it should probably be reworded.
 * 5) **I think you'll find the conversion of the second mdash to a comma solves it better. Graestan ( Talk ) 22:45, 7 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 6) * "...taking the Death Star out of commission..." seems to imply that they merely disabled the Death Star rather than destroy it.
 * 7) **Got it. Graestan ( Talk ) 22:45, 7 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 8) *An interesting read - one that I've been looking forward to. All I can say is thank God that he didn't turn out to be Green Wing. :p Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 13:41, 6 July 2009 (UTC)

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