Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Eastern Enrichment Zone


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Eastern Enrichment Zone

 * Nominated by:  Holocron Greatholocron.jpg (Complain) 07:30, November 22, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: No CSWE entry, was actually only named once in the novel.

(2 ECs/1 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 18:03, November 22, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2)  SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 11:54, November 25, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3)  1358  (Talk)  22:36, November 26, 2010 (UTC)

Object

Comments
 * Not really an objection, but "In 44 BBY, the Jedi Knight Qui-Gon Jinn sent his aspiring apprentice, Obi-Wan Kenobi, to the Eastern Enrichment Zone to learn about the work that the AgriCorps was doing at the facility and to report back to him on their progress." isn't the best wording. Rephrase, please. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 18:03, November 22, 2010 (UTC)
 * I knew it was a fairly bad way to say it after reading the article, but I still can't think of a better way to do it.  Holocron Greatholocron.jpg (Complain) 23:52, November 22, 2010 (UTC)
 * Might I suggest "In 44 BBY, the Jedi Knight Qui-Gon Jinn sent his aspiring apprentice, Obi-Wan Kenobi, to the Eastern Enrichment Zone to learn about the AgriCorps' work at the facility and to report back to him on their progress." 1358  (Talk)  18:54, November 23, 2010 (UTC)
 * That sounds better, thanks for the help.  Holocron Greatholocron.jpg (Complain) 06:05, November 24, 2010 (UTC)