Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Saylew's wife


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Saylew's wife

 * Nominated by: Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 20:13, January 7, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

(2 ECs/1 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) Winterz (talk) 01:07, January 10, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 23:37, January 10, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  03:02, January 13, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Article for the Flesh Raider attack. Winterz (talk) 00:13, January 8, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) *Done.
 * 3) Exiled Jedi
 * 4) * The first sentence seems to be worded rather awkwardly. Could you reword it?
 * 5) **Done.
 * 6) * Context on the Cold War and Saylew. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  00:18, January 8, 2013 (UTC)
 * 7) **Done.
 * 8) * I would mention the fact greatly upset Saylew and perhaps give a short mention of Saylew's ragings to the village leaders. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  02:43, January 10, 2013 (UTC)
 * 9) **Done.
 * 10) 501st
 * 11) * Mention she died in his arms.
 * 12) **Done.
 * 13) * Also make clear Tython was the adopted home. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 22:46, January 10, 2013 (UTC)
 * 14) **Done. Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 23:18, January 10, 2013 (UTC)

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