Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Bolvan

Bolvan

 * Nominated by: Darth Morrt 11:08, September 26, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Hija's pal.

Support

 * 1) Heh. Did you know that "bolvan" means "fool" in Russian? An appropriate name for the guy&hellip; QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 19:38, October 2, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Hanzo Hasashi 21:21, October 4, 2010 (UTC)

Xd1358, quick glance

 * Check your image caption punctuation. 1358  (Talk) 19:08, September 26, 2010 (UTC)
 * Fixed. Darth Morrt 19:34, September 26, 2010 (UTC)
 * "He was the commanding officer of the Imperial I-class Star Destroyer Devastator during the time of the incident in the bioweapon laboratories of Falleen, when—against Bolvan's suggestion—Sith Lord Darth Vader ordered the orbital bombardment of the planet." Loong sentence; please split.
 * Split.
 * As far as I know, all ranks should be capitalized if they are referring to an individual.
 * Fixed.
 * "When his chief gunnery officer spotted and escape pod fleeing&hellip;" Wait, what?
 * Fixed.
 * "Bolvan's instuments detected no lifeforms, so he ordered not to fire on the pod." Who ordered not to fire on the pod? Bolvan or the other guy?
 * Fixed.
 * Perhaps some more context on Vader in the bio?
 * Added.
 * That same rank issue applies for the main body as well.
 * Fixed.
 * "at the time" used twice in the bio close to each other.
 * Cut.
 * "The Devastator pursued and capturedAlderaanian Senator Leia Organa's corvette, Tantive IV, after Rebel agents transmitted to the starship the stolen plans of a new Imperial superweapon, the DS-1 Orbital Battle Station, codenamed the "Death Star."" One minor fail and then a grammar error in the middle of the sentence. I highlighted it.
 * Fixed.
 * Some underlinking and some overlinking in the bio.
 * Fixed, I think...
 * Comma issues in the P&T...
 * Fixed.
 * ..as well as in the Bts.
 * Fixed. Darth Morrt 23:50, October 25, 2010 (UTC)
 * I'll read through it one more time after you have fixed these. 1358  (Talk) 18:04, October 25, 2010 (UTC)

QGJ

 * Don't we have an article for the bombardment of Falleen? Link it. If there isn't any, create one.
 * Created.
 * Have you checked other ANH adaptations for a possible appearance? One likely source to feature him is the PhotoComic. QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 20:35, September 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * I have checked Marvel comic, Dark Horse comic, radio drama, photocomic. Nothing. Darth Morrt 18:59, October 2, 2010 (UTC)
 * I noticed that he speaks in the DH comic. Added voice only appearance. Darth Morrt 13:35, October 4, 2010 (UTC)