Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Hallis Saper


 * ''The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a featured article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.

(5 Inqs/1 Users/6 total)
Support
 * 1) Noninated--Goodwood 22:02, 3 July 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Looks good to me.  Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 20:20, 5 July 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) Hounding on IRC gets you everywhere :P  Greyman ( Paratus ) 21:56, 5 July 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) Green Tentacle (Talk) 13:48, 6 July 2007 (UTC)
 * 5)  Gonk  ( Gonk! ) 14:59, 6 July 2007 (UTC)
 * 6)  Jaina Solo ( Talk ) [[Image:Jainasolosig.gif |25px]] 00:26, 8 July 2007 (UTC)

Objections style="color:darkorange">Hobbes15 ]]( Tiger Headquarters ) 22:38, 3 July 2007 (UTC) Comments
 * 1) From a quick glance, does not meet rules 11 (be completely referenced for all available material and sources) or 17 (must be at least 1000 words long).  Greyman ( Paratus ) 22:09, 3 July 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Per Greyman. If it's referenced, it might be better as a good article, since I see little chance that 1000 words can be written on such a little-seen character.  Okay, it's up to 1000 words. Maybe change the caption of the opening quote, though. "Reminding Wedge Antilles that she knows what she's doing" just doesn't sound that great. Overall, though, it looks good. [[User:Hobbes15|<span
 * 1) Needs a longer intro, but this could easily be taken to a 1000 words. Trust me.  Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 15:44, 4 July 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Made a couple of notes on the Inq page. Green Tentacle (Talk) 09:38, 6 July 2007 (UTC)

'''Approved by Inquisitorius - Inq/Hallis Saper 22:05, 10 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Well, I've managed to get the article to 1000 words, and with Ataru's very welcome help she's now properly sourced (I think).--Goodwood 00:14, 5 July 2007 (UTC)
 * (copied from old Inq page) "However, Wedge and the pilots revised their opinion of her after Saper figured out that New Republic Intelligence agent Tomer Darpen was in fact spying on them, shadowing the agent as he raided Red Flight's quarters." The part about the shadowing needs to be clarified. Apart from that it is good. --Eyrezer 04:34, 7 July 2007 (UTC)