Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Vooz Nooxoo Una


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Vooz Nooxoo Una

 * Nominated by: Xicer9 [[Image:atgar.svg|20px]]( Combadge) 02:22, April 14, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: The amazing plant man!

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)
Support
 * 1) Add this guy and Blackhole to your RPG campaign, and your players'll say if this is Spider-Man: The RPG --Skippy Farlstendoiro 14:54, April 14, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2)  JangFett  (Talk) 17:49, April 14, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3)  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 18:00, April 14, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) Completely. Awesome.  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  00:44, April 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) Keep up the good work. :)  Jonjedigrandmaster  Jedi symbol.svg ( We seed the stars ) 18:55, April 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * 6) Excellent work. Very clean. Toprawa and Ralltiir 05:29, April 19, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Farlstendoiro and his interest in pre-Saga RPG's
 * 2) * A bounty was placed on Una which was later archived in the Imperial Enforcement DataCore. Ambiguity: Was Una archived in the DataCore? Or was the bounty? Please reword
 * 3) **Reworded.
 * 4) * The RPG stats reveal other traits, including Una being a polyglot (Speaks Basic, Huttese, Rodese and Quarren), and having some medical training (Treat Injury skill).
 * 5) **Added.
 * 6) * The image provides more information about the visual aspect of the armor, including its color, root-like boots, mostly antropomorphic shape, shoulder pads and whatever-you-want-to-call shape of the helmet. That could also be added.
 * 7) **Added.
 * 8) *Very good job! Skippy Farlstendoiro 07:25, April 14, 2010 (UTC)
 * 9) **Thanks for the review! Xicer9 [[Image:atgar.svg|20px]]( Combadge) 14:36, April 14, 2010 (UTC)
 * 10) Just one: a slight chronolgy issue. In the bio you say he became a vigilante after the plant armor began to affect his mind, but in the intro you imply that he was originally a vigilante, even before he began wearing the armor. Which is correct?  Jonjedigrandmaster  Jedi symbol.svg ( We seed the stars ) 18:40, April 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * 11) *The first. I fixed up the wording slightly. Xicer9 [[Image:atgar.svg|20px]]( Combadge) 18:52, April 15, 2010 (UTC)

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