Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Abatrarg

Abatrarg

 * Nominated by: Winterz (talk) 23:03, September 29, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Three planet nominations so far

(3 ECs/0 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) Looks good.  501st  dogma ( talk ) 16:59, September 30, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) Support, but pending addressing of EJ's objection --- he's right! Do it! Menkooroo (talk) 00:15, October 23, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  23:55, October 26, 2012 (UTC)

Object Comments
 * If this planet isn't mentioned in the Online Companion, then the first sentence can't entirely be sourced to the Online Companion --- it seems like everything up to the end of "from the star Atrig" should be sourced to Planets of the Galaxy. Also, be sure to place ref notes after punctuation.
 * Fixed.
 * Hmmmmm but now nothing in the body is referenced to the Online Companion --- should the reference to the Inner Rim be? It is in the infobox. Menkooroo (talk) 15:15, October 15, 2012 (UTC)
 * Done. Winterz (talk) 15:56, October 15, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nitpicky, but in "Behind the scenes," "first appeared" doesn't jive with something that goes in a "Sources" section. "...Abatrarg's first mention" would be more accurate. Menkooroo (talk) 13:56, October 15, 2012 (UTC)
 * Duh me, corrected! Winterz (talk) 15:11, October 15, 2012 (UTC)
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * If you know that the planet is from the Atrig system then you can get the information on the control of that system from the Atlas maps and put it in the article. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  19:25, October 21, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) **Done. Those are the territories that I'm absolutely sure about according to the galactic coordinates, also considering that neither the system nor the planet are mentioned in Atlas maps. Winterz (talk) 17:20, October 25, 2012 (UTC)