Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Elassar Targon


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Elassar Targon

 * Nominated By: Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 06:11, 29 June 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination Comments: Master of the universe reporting for duty!

(5 Inq/0 User/5 Total)
Support
 * 1) These Wraiths are a fun bunch!  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  23:12, 2 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) My favorite Wraith. -  Cavalier One ( Squadron channel ) 12:54, 3 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 3)  Greyman ( Talk ) 15:31, 3 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) I'd like to see those redlinks cleared up, but I'll support it nonetheless.  Jaina Solo ( Talk ) [[Image:Jainasolosig.gif |25px]] 22:52, 10 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) Toprawa and Ralltiir 20:25, 11 July 2008 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) Yarg, genius!
 * 2) * No need to specify he was a pilot in the intro (after saying he joined the Wraiths).
 * 3) **Given that they don't always fly starfighters, I prefer to leave it there, but removed, I suppose. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 23:08, 2 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) * I'd suggest calling Zsinj "Warlord" on the first mention, not the third.
 * 5) **Done; that's an easy fix. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 23:08, 2 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 6) * Not a fan of calling Coruscant the throneworld.
 * 7) **It's called that IU, but nevertheless, reworded. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 23:08, 2 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 8) * I think it might also be a good idea to link "occupied" to Battle of Coruscant (YVW). Up to you though.
 * 9) **Made so. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 23:08, 2 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 10) * "Targon adopted a swashbuckling pose and attitude and his actions convinced Janson and other pilots that he belonged in the unit." Might want to separate this into two sentences or change the phrasing.
 * 11) **Minor tweaks made. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 23:08, 2 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 12) * I thought we didn’t refer to them as Vong in articles. Please tell me if I’m mistaken.
 * 13) **We don't, and I shouldn't have. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 23:08, 2 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 14) * Present tense in the last paragraph in the Bio.
 * 15) **Typo, that. Meant to type a d. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 23:08, 2 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 16) *Good.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 19:50, 2 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 17) Toprawa:
 * 18) * I'd like to see some mention in his intro of him being Wraith Eleven. After doing so, please link and kill the resulting red link
 * 19) * I am unclear who you are referring to here. Targon or Tainer? Please replace "He" with the appropriate name: "He emerged from the engagement without damage" Toprawa and Ralltiir 20:00, 11 July 2008 (UTC)

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