Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Nouane


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Nouane

 * Nominated by: Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 15:56, October 4, 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: For a world that appears on almost every map in the Atlas, there's surprisingly little information on it.

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
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 * 1)  Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 20:45, October 8, 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) Dividing my time between Wook and helping a newer wiki become more professional ATM. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 07:54, October 11, 2009 (UTC)
 * 3)  CC7567  (talk) 02:07, October 13, 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) Toprawa and Ralltiir 19:59, October 17, 2009 (UTC)
 * 5)  JangFett  (Talk) 20:30, October 17, 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) The Grand Master has been out of it for a while with the flu, and begins to make his comeback...
 * 2) * The article for the Allied Regions says that the Moff/Grand Moff titles had been entirely dispatched by the Ruusan Reformations. Is this true? If so, you should probably mention it.
 * 3) **I don't go into details because the Atlas never specifically says if the Allied Region of Nouane had a Moff or Grand Moff. I'd hate to go into a lot of detail because of that.
 * 4) ***Well, then you can't say "Like all other Allied Regions, its leader was granted the title of Moff or Grand Moff."
 * 5) ****But I can, since the Atlas says the leaders of the regions received the title in exchange for joining the Republic. It never says whether Nouane's leader ever actually used it, which is why I didn't write "Nouane's leader took the title of Moff or Grand Moff." The way it is now is meant to show that the leaders could have used it. Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 20:41, October 8, 2009 (UTC)
 * 6) *****Hmm, fair enough.
 * 7) * What exactly is meant by "subsequent galactic conflicts"? Does this mean all of the conflicts after the Galactic Civil War? Or all other galactic conflicts not mentioned in the article itself? (If the source isn't really clear on this one, then don't worry about it)
 * 8) **Reworded.
 * 9) * The intro is a little long, and more detailed/wordy than the body in some places.
 * 10) **I disagree. Everything there is relevant, since that's all the information on the planet to begin with.
 * 11) * Is there an article for the defeat of the Mandalorians on Nouane? If not, could you make one, or is there not really enough information on the matter?
 * 12) **I'll be working on this over the next few months. If you're referring to a second conflict, there's not enough information to indicate that there was a separate second battle.
 * 13) *Nice work as usual. :P Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 19:20, October 8, 2009 (UTC)
 * 14) **Thanks. Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 20:09, October 8, 2009 (UTC)
 * 15) Toprawa:
 * 16) * Before I give this a full review, the intro is indeed too long. The intro is 217 words and the History section is 261. That should be your first hint that what you've got there is a little much. The issue isn't that what's all there is or is not relevant. If it wasn't all relevant, it wouldn't be there to begin with. It's that it should do a better job of summarizing everything more concisely. Given the overall length of the article, the intro should probably be about half its current length. Toprawa and Ralltiir 18:17, October 17, 2009 (UTC)
 * 17) **Down to 158 words. How does it look now? Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 19:42, October 17, 2009 (UTC)
 * 18) ***A lot better. Toprawa and Ralltiir 19:59, October 17, 2009 (UTC)

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