Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Skirmish in the Bandomeer hospital


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Skirmish in the Bandomeer hospital

 * Nominated by: Jonjedigrandmaster  Jedi symbol.svg ( We seed the stars ) 16:58, March 7, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: It's been too long&hellip; (ps. nope, no quotes)

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1) Damn 1st-person prose screwing up quote availability. Graestan ( Talk ) 22:45, March 7, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Pistol-whip FTW! SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 23:06, March 7, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3)  CC7567  (talk) 05:41, March 12, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4)  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  01:01, March 14, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) Toprawa and Ralltiir 01:30, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Soresu
 * 2) * just one: while the firefight continued to rage outside. You need to establish that there was a firefight outside first. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 22:49, March 7, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) **Well, the 1st person prose just says a "gun battle" was going on, and doesn't give any more info on how it started than is already given. Jonjedigrandmaster  Jedi symbol.svg ( We seed the stars ) 22:52, March 7, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Aw lame. Stupid 1st person prose :P. A firefight started outside or a firefight raged outside then? The word continued implies that there were earlier events, and since we don't really know them, I feel it's safer to avoid the word.  SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 22:56, March 7, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) ****Hmm, shifted some wording around; should be better now. Thanks for the review! Jonjedigrandmaster  Jedi symbol.svg ( We seed the stars ) 23:01, March 7, 2010 (UTC)
 * 6) *****Better. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 23:06, March 7, 2010 (UTC)
 * 7) Toprawa:
 * 8) * I've left links for you to see for "hospital," which currently lead to an article about a spacestation. Since we don't have an actual article for a hospital, please adjust the appropriate links, which will then require you to create an article to kill the redlinks.
 * 9) **The hospital itself (Hospital (Bandomeer)) is already linked. Do you mean for me to create an article just for "Hospitals" in general?
 * 10) ***Yes, please. Toprawa and Ralltiir 01:23, March 14, 2010 (UTC)
 * 11) *Be careful about double linking in the infobox Toprawa and Ralltiir
 * 12) **Noted; thanks for the review, Tope! Jonjedigrandmaster  Jedi symbol.svg ( We seed the stars ) 01:21, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

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