Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Rilo Tang (second nomination)

Rilo Tang

 * Nominated by: OtterSurf (talk) 17:57, July 1, 2019 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Let's do this!

Imp

 * "Human" should be consistently de-capitalized in Canon articles.
 * Yup. OtterSurf (talk) 18:44, July 1, 2019 (UTC)
 * Any mention in the audiobook?  Imperators II (Talk) 18:07, July 1, 2019 (UTC)
 * Yep. I'll add it to Appearances. OtterSurf (talk) 18:42, July 1, 2019 (UTC)

Fan

 * In the first sentence of the bio you need to switch the positioning of human and male.  Fan26  ( Talk ) 18:42, July 1, 2019 (UTC)
 * Done. OtterSurf (talk) 18:45, July 1, 2019 (UTC)
 * I think in the first sentence of the Personality and Traits section you should specify it as being according to Sijnir, as that's Rath Velus' personal opinion.  Fan26  ( Talk ) 18:42, July 1, 2019 (UTC)
 * Donearooney. OtterSurf (talk) 18:50, July 1, 2019 (UTC)
 * You need to link to "Private" in the Bio.  Fan26  ( Talk ) 18:52, July 1, 2019 (UTC)
 * Whoops! Fixed. OtterSurf (talk) 18:56, July 1, 2019 (UTC)