Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Police probe


 * ''The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a comprehensive article nomination that was unsuccessful. Please do not modify it.

Police probe

 * Nominated by: Coruscantfan 21:57, November 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Their version of big brother?

(0 ECs/3 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) Watch out for older brothers...-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 03:52, November 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2)  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 19:55, December 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Tinwe (comlink) 08:12, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Object Bob Comments
 * Infobox needs to be reloaded. Otherwise, good job. -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:29, November 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * Reloaded meaning? Coruscantfan 03:08, November 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * Removing the infobox you have on there now, and replacing it with a new one. There are currently some places missing in the infobox.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 03:15, November 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * Is that what you were looking for? Because some of those sections I had hidden. I unhid them and filled in some of the info. Coruscantfan 03:37, November 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * No. I wasn't objecting to what you had in the infobox. I was saying that you need to remove the whole thing, and put the whole infobox back on there just as it is on the template page. (Droid infobox) There are several sections that have been deleted from the template that you have on this article. Even if they're not being used, they should still be there, just left blank. Does that make sense? If not, I'll show you what I mean.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 03:47, November 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * Oh, got it. Ok, I put a new one in. Coruscantfan 03:48, November 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * Looks good. :) -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 03:52, November 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * Cool, thanks! Coruscantfan 03:53, November 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * You know, Tom Kane voiced this guy. You should have it on the "behind the scenes" section.--Lord David 20:26, December 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * Added. Coruscantfan CSFsymbol.jpg (Talk) 02:13, December 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * You should add in how they were featured in "Evil Plans." Even if a probe just wanders by in the background, we need to know that fact.
 * Done.
 * The specific individual units that are featured in those two episodes need articles, since unique droids are treated as unique individuals on the Wook.
 * Done.
 * You currently make no mention of the droid's appearance. I think you need to describe its shape, its coloration, its accessories (like the three lights on the front, the antenna, the siren), and say that it hovered for its means of locomotion. It sounds like it could speak Basic? That's important to know too.
 * Done.
 * Unfortunately, all of this is likely to put you over 250 words, so you should consider taking this to GAN afterward. :) ~ Savage BOB sig.png 15:24, December 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * I want to first get the comprehensive since its made it this far, then go for GAN if I can expand it. One thing at a time if possible. :) Coruscantfan (Talk) 00:48, December 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * I understand the sentiment, but you're currently at 236 words, so the addition of an intro is likely to push you above 250. Besides, there's still a lot more to be said about the droid's appearance. They're not just round, they have two bowl-shaped halves joined together with a recessed trench in the middle, creating an overall ellipsoid body; the lights on top were truncated cones; the two lights in front projected from conical housings, as did the camera. And did it speak with a masculine or feminine voice? And is that paint or just plating? At any rate, there's no need to shoehorn this into CA when more can be said about it. We should treat droid model articles like species noms, with great attention to details of the characteristics of the model. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 01:19, December 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * Yeah I was afraid of that. Well, what I'll do then is remove its nomination, expand it, and then go for GAN. Thanks for the help! :) Coruscantfan (Talk) 21:36, December 18, 2011 (UTC)