Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations



This page is for the nomination of "comprehensive articles". For a list of "comprehensive articles", see Category:Wookieepedia comprehensive articles.


 * Comprehensive article nominations history
 * Comprehensive article nominations archiving checklist

What is a "comprehensive article?"

A "comprehensive article" is an article that contains all information regarding the topic. Often, "comprehensive articles" cannot reach Featured or Good Article status due to their limited content. This process is intended to recognize articles that contain all relevant canon information, yet are still under the 250 word limit required for a Good Article. The purpose of this is twofold&mdash;firstly, to help users distinguish what is a stub, and what is merely a short article with no further relevant material to be added, and, more importantly, to highlight for the reader when they are reading something that has been judged definitely "comprehensive"&mdash;that is, a guarantee to the reader that whatever they are reading contains the sum total of all available content.

Nominations and promotions of the Comprehensive article process are overseen by a collective of users known as the "EduCorps," which is made up of the Inquisitorius, the AgriCorps, and various other experienced users who are considered qualified to adequately judge the nominated material.

Lucasfilm Ltd. and its many licensees continue to expand the Star Wars universe. Since new information might become available, it may be necessary to revoke a "comprehensive article's" status. A forum will be used to nominate articles that have fallen out-of-date. Members of the EduCorps will then post a warning template on that page, and a grace period of one week will be instituted in which the article can be improved. If there is a significant amount of new information, it is likely that once updated, the article will become eligible for Good article status, and thereby ineligible for Comprehensive article status.

READ THIS FIRST!

An article must&hellip;


 * 1) &hellip;be well-written and detailed.
 * 2) &hellip;be unbiased, non-point of view.
 * 3) &hellip;be sourced with all available sources and appearances.
 * 4) &hellip;follow the Manual of Style, Layout Guide, and all other policies on Wookieepedia. This is, of course, within reason. If a topic only has a very limited degree of content that cannot be divided up into the relevant article sections, it is not required that it follow the Layout Guide precisely. This is to be judged on a case-by-case basis.
 * 5) &hellip;following the review process, be stable, i.e., does not change significantly from day to day and is not the subject of ongoing edit wars. This does not apply to vandalism and protection or semi-protection as a result of vandalism.
 * 6) &hellip;not be tagged with any sort of improvement tags (i.e. more sources, expand, etc).
 * 7) &hellip;have no redlinks.
 * 8) &hellip;have all relevant canon information presented.
 * 9) &hellip;be completely referenced for all available material and sources. See Sourcing for more information. While this is not required for an article possessing a singular source, it is encouraged, as it provides both uniformity and a good infrastructure should the topic be referenced in any future materials.
 * 10) &hellip;have all quotes and images sourced.
 * 11) &hellip;provide at least one relevant quote on the article if available.
 * 12) &hellip;include a "Behind the scenes" section for in-universe articles.
 * 13) &hellip;counting the introduction, the article body, and "Behind the scenes" material, must not exceed 250 words in length (not including captions, quotes, or headers, etc). Any articles exceeding the limit should be taken to the Good article nominations page for consideration.

How to nominate:


 * 1) First, nominate an article you find is worthy of comprehensive status, putting it at the bottom of the list below. Nominated articles must meet all thirteen requirements stated above.
 * 2) Add CAnom at the top of the article you are nominating.
 * 3) Be sure to place sign in the "Nominated by" line when the nomination is posted for voting.
 * 4) Others will object to the nomination if they disagree that the article is good enough; they will then supply reasons for doing so, and ways to improve the article in accordance with the established rules.
 * 5) Nominators and supporters will adjust the article until the objectors (with reasonable objections) are satisfied. Objectors may also make alterations&mdash;if there is any reason for contention on a given point, it should be settled in a civil manner in the nomination field itself.
 * 6) Users may not vote on their own articles.
 * 7) There is no limit to the amount of nominations a given user can submit at any given time.

How to vote:


 * 1) Before doing anything, be sure to read the article completely, keeping a sharp eye out for mistakes.
 * 2) Afterward, compare the article to the criteria listed above, and then either support or object the article's nomination.
 * 3) *If you object, please supply concrete reasons for doing so, and how it can be improved.
 * 4) As stated above, any objections will be looked upon by the nominator, supporters, and anyone willing to improve the article, and action will be taken to please the objectors. Do not strike other users' objections; it is up to the objector to review the changes and strike if they are satisfied.
 * 5) There are several ways in which an article can receive the required number of votes. Within a 48-hour period of nomination, only EduCorps votes will count towards the total, although anyone may choose to vote in that window. If two members of the EduCorps support a nomination in that window, and there are no outstanding objections, the article can be considered a "Comprehensive article" and be tagged with the template 48 hours after the initial nomination.  The talk page will also be tagged with the CA template. When the 48 hours are up, any user's votes will contribute towards the total. If one EduCorps member has voted for an article after a week, three regular votes will be required. After the 48 hour period, an article can still also pass with just two EduCorps votes.
 * 6) Once a nomination is successful, it will be placed on the Comprehensive article list. Instructions on how to archive nominations, successful or otherwise, can be found here. Anyone can archive a nomination&mdash;just make sure it has the correct number of votes, has been nominated for at least a week (or 48 hours if there are two EC votes), and that there are absolutely no outstanding objections. If you are not sure how to do this, just ask, and someone will likely be more than willing to help you. Also, if you think you can slip one past us, think again&mdash;someone is always watching you.

All nominations will be considered idle and are subject to instantaneous removal by EduCorps members if objections are not addressed, or at least not answered, after a period of 2 weeks.

Mazara

 * Nominated by:  Holocron Greatholocron.jpg (Complain) 04:04, November 14, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: A minor character. She was only in the book for a few pages anyway.'''

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Support
 * 1) Yeah! Menkooroo 13:43, November 23, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2)  OLIOSTER  (talk) 19:36, November 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) Darth Morrt 15:59, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * Hey there! Is there any more info from the book you can give about the character? Her mentions an article she wrote that got her fired from her job, and the fact that she staged small rallies.
 * Fixed.  Holocron Greatholocron.jpg (Complain) 21:40, November 14, 2010 (UTC)
 * Good show. Can you fix up the second sentence, though? Right now it looks like Blackwater Systems was breaking Falleen's laws against the wishes of Mazara's superiors.
 * Fixed. Serves me right for trying to fix an article at 7 am.  Holocron Greatholocron.jpg (Complain) 06:51, November 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * Can you give any more info on when Obi and Ani hooked up with her? Where was it, what was she doing?
 * Fixed. Funny how you forget these things until someone else points them out.  Holocron Greatholocron.jpg (Complain) 21:40, November 14, 2010 (UTC)
 * Looking at her CUSWE entry, it seems like there's enough info for a personality and traits section.
 * Done. I have a message on the page you linked to for the CSWE. Thanks.  Holocron Greatholocron.jpg (Complain) 21:40, November 14, 2010 (UTC)
 * Do you know if she has an entry in The Complete Star Wars Encyclopedia? If you have no idea, you can ask here. Menkooroo 14:41, November 14, 2010 (UTC)
 * Good work! Just make a note here when you get a response on the CSWE entry. Menkooroo 09:57, November 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * Looks like you got a response. The CSWE (and probably the Jedi Apprentice book too?) indicate that she protested the working and living conditions that resulted from overdevelopment in Falleen's capital city. This should be in the article, either in the bio or in p & t, wherever you think it would fit best. Also --- does she live in the capital city? The article just says right now that she lives on Falleen. Menkooroo 08:41, November 23, 2010 (UTC)
 * Added the new information to the article. The book didn't directly mention that she was protesting against the treatment of workers, so it did help.  Holocron Greatholocron.jpg (Complain) 11:43, November 23, 2010 (UTC)
 * There are better ways to source than just sticking every reference at the end of the paragraph --- that is to say, the article should indicate precisely what information comes from where. Something like: "Mazara then became the leader of a rebel group of Falleen attempting to stop large corporations from polluting their homeworld[1] and protest the terrible conditions that workers endured due to the overdevelopment of the city.[2] She was targeted for assassination by Blackwater Systems for leading protests against their business practices.[1]" Make sense? Also, never put a space between references (so, [1][2] rather than [1] [2]).
 * If all of the information in the second paragraph is in the book, then the extra reference ([2]) at the end of the paragraph isn't necessary.
 * "Personality and traits" has two [1]'s in a row.
 * Fixed.  Holocron Greatholocron.jpg (Complain) 13:34, November 23, 2010 (UTC)
 * I jettisoned the [2] from the second paragraph entirely, as all that info was there, from the book itself, before you got the CSWE entry. Menkooroo 13:43, November 23, 2010 (UTC)
 * One more, actually. Does she have any other lines that would make an appropriate quote for the personality and traits section? Menkooroo 10:01, November 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * Done.  Holocron Greatholocron.jpg <font color="#208090">(Complain) 21:55, November 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * A new one: An article should be created for Falleen's capital city. Does the book give it a name? If not, Falleen's capital city or something would be OK. Just remember to stick Template:Conjecture at the top of the article. Menkooroo 12:21, November 23, 2010 (UTC)
 * Done. <font color="#208090"> Holocron Greatholocron.jpg <font color="#208090">(Complain) 13:34, November 23, 2010 (UTC)
 * It now has a redlink to fill. --Eyrezer 09:22, December 8, 2010 (UTC)
 * What do you suggest it should be linked to? The only details given on her employers were that they fired her for writing articles they didn't agree with. <font color="#208090"> Holocron Greatholocron.jpg <font color="#208090">(Complain) 14:01, December 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * I haven't read this book, but maybe the assassination attempt can also have its own article. What do you think? Darth Morrt 08:53, December 12, 2010 (UTC)
 * Given its insignificance, I don't think so. There would barely be enough for two or three sentences.If you give that an article you would have to start giving other tiny events articles. <font color="#208090"> Holocron Greatholocron.jpg <font color="#208090">(Complain) 14:01, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

TK-104

 * Nominated by: Hanzo Hasashi 19:50, November 21, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: One more obscure nominee.

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Support
 * 1) <font color="#208090"> Holocron Greatholocron.jpg <font color="#208090">(Complain) 23:43, November 22, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Darth Morrt 09:19, December 12, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) Menkooroo 15:21, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * Did the source directly state that he was known for his loyalty and tried to impress Vader? --<font color="#208090"> Holocron Greatholocron.jpg <font color="#208090">(Complain) 07:30, November 22, 2010 (UTC)
 * Yea, his card title was loyal stormtrooper, and mentioned that many stormtroopers tried to distinguish themselves in service to impress Darth Vader. Hanzo Hasashi 18:57, November 22, 2010 (UTC)
 * Probably could use some source tags, though they're not technically required. --<font color="#208090"> Holocron Greatholocron.jpg <font color="#208090">(Complain) 07:30, November 22, 2010 (UTC)
 * Other featured, good and comprehensive articles operating solely on one source don't have any such things. Hanzo Hasashi 18:57, November 22, 2010 (UTC)

Comments
 * Having the tags makes an article easier to believe though. Take the first objection I had, if it had been sourced I wouldn't have asked that. <font color="#208090"> Holocron Greatholocron.jpg <font color="#208090">(Complain) 23:43, November 22, 2010 (UTC)

Unidentified Cloud City chief engineer

 * Nominated by: Darth Morrt 13:58, November 24, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Another SWM nom. Verrrry minor character.

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Support
 * 1) Looks verrrry nice. ~ SavageBob 06:03, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) This article does not need to be called "Unidentified." Graestan ( Talk ) 23:11, December 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) *I was assuming that Bossk was impersonating an actual chief engineer rather than simply calling himself by that title. In other words, if Bossk is trying to pass himself off as Bob Jenkins, chief engineer, the "unidentified" seems appropriate. However, if he's simply trying to pass himself off as any ol' chief engineer, I agree, this article should be renamed. ~ SavageBob 23:57, December 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) **This article describes the actual person, not his job/title. From the scenario: "Bossk sabotaged some vital equipment, then hacked into the city's computer and sent an urgent message to Lando under the guise of the city's Chief Engineer." Darth Morrt 01:22, December 2, 2010 (UTC)

Comments
 * Graestan, could you please elaborate on your objection? ~ SavageBob 16:22, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

Project X271

 * Nominated by: Darth Morrt 15:00, November 24, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Bolvan-related nomination.

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Support
 * 1) Menkooroo 04:58, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * Does the source actually say that it's stored aboard Vader's Star Destroyer? The leading quote makes it sound like they'd actually have to retrieve it from the Outer Rim. Menkooroo 15:24, January 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * No it doesn't say that it was stored. In the Fact Files, Bolvan suggested "that the planet should be utterly cleansed using experimental ordinance [sic] from Project X271". The sentences about deployable ordnance and storing it on the Destroyer is actually conjectural. They didn't have much time, and Bolvan wanted to use this weapon, so I think the weapon was deployable and they have it at hand. Darth Morrt 16:48, January 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * We can't put speculation into articles. Anything conjectural has gotta go. Menkooroo 17:37, January 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * Done. Darth Morrt 17:52, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

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Kulton Woodle

 * Nominated by:  OLIOSTER  (talk) 19:52, November 26, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: i herd u liek swg

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Support
 * 1) Lost in translation... ~ SavageBob 21:45, December 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) If you can, you should go back at the height of noon to took a better picture of him. Darth Morrt 12:38, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Object Comments
 * Is this reported conversation done through the protocol droid? Perhaps mention that. The second paragraph seems very PBP to me. I'd remove the "when asked this, he said this" kind of language and just report on Woodle's opinions and such. In other words, it's not important that the spacer's conversation is what spurred these revelations; just tell us the revelations. Also, no quotes? ~ SavageBob 07:47, December 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * The conversation is directly with Kulton. The protocol droid only says that Master Kulton is a retired freighter captain and that his master only speaks Mon Calamarian. Fixed up the second paragraph and added a quote.  OLIOSTER  (talk) 07:55, December 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * OK, so does that mean the assumption is that the player speaks Mon Calamarian too? I guess I'm confused, since it sounds like the droids says, "This guy only speaks this language that you probably don't," but then the player has a conversation with the guy without the droid's help anyway. ~ SavageBob 15:52, December 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * I conversed with him and took screenshots of what he said with a character who learned Mon Calamari comprehension before the ability to teach it was removed from the game. Give me a bit and I'll go back in with a new character and talk with him.  OLIOSTER  (talk) 16:58, December 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * Alright, if you try to talk to him with a new character (i.e. one who can't comprehend Mon Calamari), he just gestures toward his protocol droid. The droid says the same thing regardless. Noted this in the Bts.  OLIOSTER  (talk) 21:08, December 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * 1) D'oh... Despite my support above, I just noticed the infobox is unsourced. I'm sure it's all from SWG, but I think it must be done per the rules. ~ SavageBob 21:49, December 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) *Done.  OLIOSTER  (talk) 21:51, December 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) He doesn't seem to be purple. He has the Ackbar-ish dark brown on my monitor? Darth Morrt 09:52, December 12, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) *Its the lighting that I took the shot in. It was early morning on Naboo at the time and I had been waiting at least an hour for the sun to come up. He is definitely dark purple.  OLIOSTER  (talk) 12:13, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Trever Flume's mother

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 09:41, November 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Could it be...a...BIOGRAPHY?!

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Support
 * 1)  SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 09:11, November 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2)  OLIOSTER  (talk) 19:24, November 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) Darth Morrt 01:26, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) O_o A Blasphemous Biography!
 * 2) * Watch your categorisation. She can be further subcategorised in unidentified individuals, and soldiers is for unit types. May I suggest looking into Category:Galactic Republic military personnel instead? SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 10:30, November 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) **Good catch. Done. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 04:53, November 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Went one further, as she's a captain. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 09:11, November 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) Morrt
 * 6) * Are you sure that "early in the war" can be interpreted as 22-21 BBY? Why not just 22 or 22-20?
 * 7) **The war was only lasted until 19 BBY. Circa one year is close enough to "early." Watch her be in TCW. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 12:48, December 23, 2010 (UTC)
 * 8) * You can go further in the categories to Category:Republic Navy officers, because she is surely not an army captain, but a navy captain. Darth Morrt 10:42, December 12, 2010 (UTC)
 * 9) **What's your logic there? NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 12:48, December 23, 2010 (UTC)
 * 10) ***I've tried to say that the army captains are clones, so she must be a navy captain. But I've realized just now that not every army personnel are clones, like Ozzel in the TCW comic. But this leads to an other objection: her affiliation should be changed to Republic Military, because we don't know whether she serves the GAR or the Navy. Darth Morrt 17:28, December 23, 2010 (UTC)
 * 11) ****Good catch. I'd always assumed the GAR was the catch-all armed forces. Didn't know they culled Ozzel into TCW either...shame. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 00:40, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Jizz-wail

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 06:29, December 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: A truly integral part of the Star Wars mythos. To make fun of it is to make fun of the Modal Nodes themselves.

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Support
 * 1) *snicker* ~ SavageBob 21:40, December 18, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Darth Morrt 01:29, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * BTS? ~ SavageBob 06:31, December 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * Sorry, forgot to save it. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 06:54, December 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * OK! Now you need to source the fact that the music in ANH is jizz, though, since that's not evident from the film itself. ~ SavageBob 07:37, December 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * Done. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 23:54, December 4, 2010 (UTC)
 * Maybe it should be mentioned somewhere that a jizz-wailer not necessary plays jizz-wail. Darth Morrt 11:50, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Unidentified Gungan master songwriter

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 09:33, December 2, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: I'd give 9 to 10 he'd shoot Justin Bieber

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Support
 * 1) Sneaky :).  OLIOSTER  (talk) 23:46, December 2, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Darth Morrt 11:53, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * Two things: First, I'm a bit wary of the word "penned." I know you're trying for a synonym of "wrote," but "penned" indicates pen to paper, which we can't assume in Star Wars. Perhaps "composed"? Second, I'm not sure what's meant by "which was available in 1.5 ABY." Available for purchase? Only one copy available? Multiple copies available? Just a bit more explanation, and it's good. :) ~ SavageBob 21:44, December 18, 2010 (UTC)
 * Done. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 00:46, January 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * Better! :) But is there only one copy of the painting, or can multiple people purchase it and display it simultaneously? ~ SavageBob 02:52, January 3, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Carving the Republic: The Real Story of Count Dooku

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 09:33, December 2, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: 1

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Object
 * 1) Jujiggum
 * 2) *Please add the IU media infobox as per precedent
 * 3) *The first sentence is grammatically incorrect: you technically imply that the Jedi Order was written by Andevor Javin etc.
 * 4) *Also, in the infobox, please add an image of Count Dooku per same precedents as mentioned above.
 * 5) * Jonjedigrandmaster ( Talk ) 17:52, January 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) **Done. On this one and the others. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 01:24, January 3, 2011 (UTC)

Comments
 * I am not sure you can state that this was the best-selling book of the year. The New Your Times' releases a list every week. Darth Morrt 02:20, January 3, 2011 (UTC)

Warm Thoughts for Invertebrates

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 09:33, December 2, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: 3

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 * 1) I read through it, and I'll be honest, I see nothing amiss. I'm just awed that a mere mention from some side bar can even be expanded to that length, and to ask for further elaboration would just be silly.   That and, who wouldn't have warm thoughts for invertebrates?  I know I appreciate our insect overlords.  Trak Nar  Ramble on 08:45, December 23, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) One thing is for certain: there is no stopping them; the ants will soon be here. And I for one welcome our new insect overlords. Menkooroo 01:55, December 31, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Please add the IU media infobox. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 17:54, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Kholemi Elaru

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 09:33, December 2, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: 4

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Object
 * 1) Same as above: IU media infobox please. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 17:56, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

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Night Mynock

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 09:33, December 2, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: 5

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Object
 * 1) Please add an IU media infobox. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 17:56, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

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Anj'a

 * Nominated by:  OLIOSTER  (talk) 04:34, December 4, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

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Support
 * 1) Sy Snootles, eat your heart out. ~ SavageBob 21:39, December 18, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Darth Morrt 01:44, December 24, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3)  1358  <sup style="color:#336600;">(Talk)  18:39, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * Would it be any idea to turn and  into  or something like that?  1358  <sup style="color:#336600;">(Talk)  17:01, December 31, 2010 (UTC)
 * Done.  OLIOSTER  (talk) 00:11, January 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * Looks really good! I'm just wondering if "adorned the screens of every HoloNet in the galaxy" is correctly-phrased. I think it would be like saying that somebody in real life adorned the screens of every internet in the world. Would it maybe be better to say something like "adorned the screens of every HoloNet user's computer" or something? Menkooroo 05:04, January 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * This is verbatim from the source, should I still change it?  OLIOSTER  (talk) 16:16, January 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * Yeah, I say go for it. Considering that there's only one HoloNet, I think it's safe to assume the source made a mistake. Menkooroo 03:13, January 3, 2011 (UTC)

Comments
 * I think I've got everything worked out now. The artwork appeared first in Threat of the Conqueror but without any description. A few days later it was added to Star Wars Galaxies as a painting with a description about Anj'a.  OLIOSTER  (talk) 06:02, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

X-1 (assassin)

 * Nominated by: Vandar Tokare42 (Talk to the hand) 01:07, December 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Number one!

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Object
 * Hey there! Since the article has an intro, keep in mind that the body operates entirely independent of the intro --- that is, everything that's been established in the intro needs to also be established in the body. As such, it's usually a good idea to begin the body similar to the intro, with something like "X-1 was an assassin..." Right now, the body starts out by talking about Rezi Soresh, and it's kind of like "Wait, who?" The body also doesn't mention that X-1 was created by Soresh, just that he was used by him.
 * Does he die? "Dispatched with a vibroblade" makes it seem like he does. Menkooroo 16:17, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

Comments For all clones of Project Omega: Soresh didn't train them to hunt Skywalker. X-7 serves him seven years before the Death Star blows up. Nahdar Vebb 21:34, December 17, 2010 (UTC)

X-2

 * Nominated by: Vandar Tokare42 (Talk to the hand) 01:07, December 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Number two!

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X-3

 * Nominated by: Vandar Tokare42 (Talk to the hand) 01:07, December 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Number three!

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X-4

 * Nominated by: Vandar Tokare42 (Talk to the hand) 01:07, December 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Number four!

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X-5

 * Nominated by: Vandar Tokare42 (Talk to the hand) 01:07, December 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Number five!

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X-6

 * Nominated by: Vandar Tokare42 (Talk to the hand) 01:07, December 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Number six! Not doing X-7 cause I'm lazy.

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Alara

 * Nominated by: Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 09:55, December 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Starting early

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Support
 * 1) Very nice.&mdash;  03:04, December 25, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Darth Morrt 16:37, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * Don't you hear them callin' you?
 * Could you cite the article, my man? Other than that, nice job.&mdash; 03:04, December 20, 2010 (UTC)
 * One more thing&hellip; could you correct the BTS info to reflect the book's release date next year? Maybe also state that she was in those previews.&mdash; 03:10, December 20, 2010 (UTC)
 * Got it, all taken care of. Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 06:29, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

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 * There's really no spoiler here. If you read the excerpt you'll see, she's like a one liner in a long slew of murders we already know happen. So yeah. Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 09:55, December 17, 2010 (UTC)

PS-29-2

 * Nominated by: Hanzo Hasashi 04:59, December 24, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Project for the holidays.

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 * 1) Menkooroo 16:20, January 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Darth Morrt 04:42, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

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 * What about adding Imperial Navy to his affiliations? Maybe you could mention that he got his nickname after a creature that attach itself to starships, or something like this. Darth Morrt 01:57, January 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * Added Imperial Navy. And it is never stated that he was named Mynock after those creatures, although that is the only logical possibility. Would that count as speculation if I did add it? Hanzo Hasashi 04:22, January 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * IMO, you can reword it not be speculative, like: he is called Mynock, which is the name of a creature... But this is not a real objection, just an idea. Darth Morrt 05:09, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

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Unidentified Janguine species

 * Nominated by: Eyrezer 01:24, December 26, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:.

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 * 1) Easy read.  Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 18:06, January 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Full support; however, I'm not fond of that speculative clause in the BTS and you should probably say why 3PO's theory was groundless in the ref. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 02:46, January 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Darth Morrt 21:01, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

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 * <S>Shouldn't the Source section list only the title of the source, per LG? Or the {CSWECite} is an exception, like many other source templates?</S> Darth Morrt 02:02, January 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * Yes, it is. 1358  <sup style="color:#336600;">(Talk)  18:46, January 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * Please remove the page numbers from the CSWECite templates in the Sources section. We don't state page numbers for other items in the sources section, either. Just leave the parameter blank. :-) 1358  <sup style="color:#336600;">(Talk)  18:46, January 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * Can you give a bit of background as to why 3PO's speculation was proved groundless? Other than that, looks good. ~ SavageBob 02:50, January 3, 2011 (UTC)

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Ai-Ari Kuldi

 * Nominated by: Jinzler 22:58, December 26, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: A Jedi

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 * 1) Well-done. Menkooroo 15:19, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

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 * What about adding Republic Navy to the affiliations? Darth Morrt 02:43, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

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 * Does anything suggest that Ai-Ari's Fifth Fleet is not the same as the Open Cirkle's Fifth Fleet? The fleets and other large units have unique numbers. There shouldn't be two differnet Fifth Fleet in the Republic Navy. Darth Morrt 02:43, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

AF-27

 * Nominated by: Hanzo Hasashi 21:49, January 2, 2011 (UTC)
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AF-119

 * Nominated by: Hanzo Hasashi 21:49, January 2, 2011 (UTC)
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