Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Duel on Tython


 * ''The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.

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 * 1) Though not a WP:TOTJ article, I worked equally as hard on this. Open to thoughts/suggestions, as always. —Tommy9281 ( Lússë i Morë Hwesta súya! ) 19:33, 20 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) Passes inspection on my Star Destroyer bridge.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 21:57, 22 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) Goodwood  [[Image:Redstarbird.svg|20px]] ( Alliance Intelligence ) 22:16, 26 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) Good work!--Squishy Vic (discussion) (contributions) 18:54, 5 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) Do not underestimate the power of the Dark Side...  Darth Xadún ( Consult the Holocron ) 11:41, 14 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 1) From the Bridge of Chack Jadson:
 * 2) * Explain who Darovit is when you first mention him.
 * 3) **Addressed.
 * 4) * "Zannah became furious..." Could just be me, but this sounds funny.
 * 5) **Addressed.
 * 6) * Why did she need healing techniques for Bane? I thought she was looking for information on orbalisks?
 * 7) **Addressed.
 * 8) * Link all the Jedi in the second paragraph.
 * 9) **Addressed.
 * 10) * The first two paragraphs of The Duel are play-by-play.
 * 11) **Addressed.&mdash;I believe I've fixed this. If still no good, it's kind of hard to reword, as many of those little parts are significant. I think I got it though.
 * 12) * Second paragraph of Part 2: ackward?
 * 13) **Addressed. typo
 * 14) * "Upon realizing that the contest was over..." You just used this expression. Please change it.
 * 15) **Addressed.
 * 16) *I like stuff about Bane.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 22:29, 20 April 2008 (UTC)

Comments
 * Thanks again Chack for looking, if anything else is required, please let me know. —Tommy9281 ( Lússë i Morë Hwesta súya! ) 18:57, 22 April 2008 (UTC)