User talk:Cylka

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Re: Unidentified Sith Soldier

 * In 3,956 BBY, he was part of a large fleet sent to capture and occupy Taris - We don't actually know that he was sent to capture and occupy Taris. He may have been sent in later. I would simply say that he was part of the occupation force.
 * Addressed
 * Taris, a member world of the Galactic Republic, which the Empire was at war with - Well, the Sith weren't just at war with the Republic, it was the Jedi Civil War, after all. Please change this around to reflect this.
 * Is it really necessary? The context is there to provide a reason as to why the Sith invaded. The Jedi had no bearing on the attack.
 * Although the Sith forces defeated the Republic cruiser Endar Spire in a space battle over the planet - There isn't much set up for this statement, you just jump into it. Maybe say something to the effect of The Republic cruiser Endar Spire was ambushed in a battle over the planet...
 * Done.
 * He then noticed Revan and Onasi, and, recognizing them as Republic fugitives, ordered his battle droids to attack, while he engaged the remaining Duros. He and his droids - The use of pronouns makes it a bit unclear as to whom you are talking about. Please clear this up a bit.
 * Done.
 * Alright, I have only found one concrete source that said that the Sith instituted a planet-wide quarantine and orbital blockade in the wake of the Endar Spire ' s destruction. And it is . So, I need you to add in this ref note for that statement. However, this also means that you will need to reference the rest of the article to the game. The game was a bit unclear in the progression of events, so that is why you need to add the extra ref.
 * Addressed. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 07:03, 14 May 2009 (UTC)

Re: Ixgil

 * Some similar concerns that I had with the Unidentified soldier. There needs to be a little context as to why the Sith and Revan and Onasi were there. Also, simply identify Revan as a Republic soldier to do away with the need for additional context.
 * I think I got most of them, except that objection about the Jedi Civil War context.
 * And again, the only concrete source for the Sith blockade is the ref that I already left on your talk page. That will need to be added in and the article referenced. Take care of these things and I'll look at it again. It looks good, Soresu, it just needs a little more work.
 * Addessed. Thanks! Let me know it there's anything else. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 07:03, 14 May 2009 (UTC)

WookieeProject Knights of the Old Republic
Hey Cylka I was wondering whether I could join this project, particularly working on the KOTOR comic side of things. I've done a good amount of work on the Zayne Carrick article and have been keeping it up to date on the last few issues; a bit of minor work on other characters and objects in the comics and major work on the Duel in the Draay Estate article with Tommy9281.  PointGiven  ( I call it aggressive negotiations ) 07:20, 17 May 2009 (UTC)

e-mail
Can you check your e-mail if you get a moment? I forwarded something to you that I'd like you to check out and give me some feedback on. Thanks. Graestan ( Talk ) 04:43, 18 May 2009 (UTC)
 * I'll be around most of the night. Graestan ( Talk ) 21:54, 18 May 2009 (UTC)

Revan
Hey, Cylka, could you help me with my project page on Revan? I'm working on his second search for the Star Forge, and need help with this. NaruHina is helping me with this project, as well.--Jedi Kasra (talk) 16:31, 19 May 2009 (UTC)

Inq Meeting XXV
An Inquisitorius meeting has been scheduled for 23:00 UTC on the 24th of May. Your presence is requested. Apologies for the late notice. Thefourdotelipsis 23:53, 22 May 2009 (UTC)