Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations



This page is for the nomination of "comprehensive articles". For a list of "comprehensive articles", see Category:Wookieepedia comprehensive articles.


 * Comprehensive article nominations history
 * Comprehensive article nominations archiving checklist

What is a "comprehensive article?"

A "comprehensive article" is an article that contains all information regarding the topic. Often, "comprehensive articles" cannot reach Featured or Good Article status due to their limited content. This process is intended to recognize articles that contain all relevant canon information, yet are still under the 250 word limit required for a Good Article. The purpose of this is twofold&mdash;firstly, to help users distinguish what is a stub, and what is merely a short article with no further relevant material to be added, and, more importantly, to highlight for the reader when they are reading something that has been judged definitely "comprehensive"&mdash;that is, a guarantee to the reader that whatever they are reading contains the sum total of all available content.

Nominations and promotions of the Comprehensive article process are overseen by a collective of users known as the "EduCorps," which is made up of the Inquisitorius, the AgriCorps, and various other experienced users who are considered qualified to adequately judge the nominated material.

Lucasfilm Ltd. and its many licensees continue to expand the Star Wars universe. Since new information might become available, it may be necessary to revoke a "comprehensive article's" status. A forum will be used to nominate articles that have fallen out-of-date. Members of the EduCorps will then post a warning template on that page, and a grace period of one week will be instituted in which the article can be improved. If there is a significant amount of new information, it is likely that once updated, the article will become eligible for Good article status, and thereby ineligible for Comprehensive article status.

READ THIS FIRST!

An article must&hellip;


 * 1) &hellip;be well-written and detailed.
 * 2) &hellip;be unbiased, non-point of view.
 * 3) &hellip;be sourced with all available sources and appearances.
 * 4) &hellip;follow the Manual of Style, Layout Guide, and all other policies on Wookieepedia. This is, of course, within reason. If a topic only has a very limited degree of content that cannot be divided up into the relevant article sections, it is not required that it follow the Layout Guide precisely. This is to be judged on a case-by-case basis.
 * 5) &hellip;following the review process, be stable, i.e., does not change significantly from day to day and is not the subject of ongoing edit wars. This does not apply to vandalism and protection or semi-protection as a result of vandalism.
 * 6) &hellip;not be tagged with any sort of improvement tags (i.e. more sources, expand, etc).
 * 7) &hellip;have no redlinks.
 * 8) &hellip;have all relevant canon information presented.
 * 9) &hellip;be completely referenced for all available material and sources. See Sourcing for more information. While this is not required for an article possessing a singular source, it is encouraged, as it provides both uniformity and a good infrastructure should the topic be referenced in any future materials.
 * 10) &hellip;have all quotes and images sourced.
 * 11) &hellip;provide at least one relevant quote on the article if available.
 * 12) &hellip;include a "Behind the scenes" section for in-universe articles.
 * 13) &hellip;counting the introduction, the article body, and "Behind the scenes" material, must not exceed 250 words in length (not including captions, quotes, or headers, etc). Any articles exceeding the limit should be taken to the Good article nominations page for consideration.
 * 14) &hellip;if the nominated article reaches 200 words or greater, the nominator must either provide an intro or draft an intro and provide a link to the revision in the nomination, showing that the intro does not elevate the article over 250 words. Exceptions can be made for articles wherein the majority of the text is in the "Behind the scenes" section.

How to nominate:


 * 1) First, nominate an article you find is worthy of comprehensive status, putting it at the bottom of the list below. Nominated articles must meet all thirteen requirements stated above.
 * 2) Add CAnom at the top of the article you are nominating.
 * 3) Be sure to place sign in the "Nominated by" line when the nomination is posted for voting.
 * 4) Others will object to the nomination if they disagree that the article is good enough; they will then supply reasons for doing so, and ways to improve the article in accordance with the established rules.
 * 5) Nominators and supporters will adjust the article until the objectors (with reasonable objections) are satisfied. Objectors may also make alterations&mdash;if there is any reason for contention on a given point, it should be settled in a civil manner in the nomination field itself.
 * 6) Users may not vote on their own articles.
 * 7) There is no limit to the amount of nominations a given user can submit at any given time.

How to vote:


 * 1) Before doing anything, be sure to read the article completely, keeping a sharp eye out for mistakes.
 * 2) Afterward, compare the article to the criteria listed above, and then either support or object the article's nomination.
 * 3) *If you object, please supply concrete reasons for doing so, and how it can be improved.
 * 4) As stated above, any objections will be looked upon by the nominator, supporters, and anyone willing to improve the article, and action will be taken to please the objectors. Do not strike other users' objections; it is up to the objector to review the changes and strike if they are satisfied.
 * 5) There are several ways in which an article can receive the required number of votes. Within a 48-hour period of nomination, only EduCorps votes will count towards the total, although anyone may choose to vote in that window. If two members of the EduCorps support a nomination in that window, and there are no outstanding objections, the article can be considered a "Comprehensive article" and be tagged with the template 48 hours after the initial nomination.  The talk page will also be tagged with the CA template. When the 48 hours are up, any user's votes will contribute towards the total. If one EduCorps member has voted for an article after a week, three regular votes will be required. After the 48 hour period, an article can still also pass with just two EduCorps votes.
 * 6) Once a nomination is successful, it will be placed on the Comprehensive article list. Instructions on how to archive nominations, successful or otherwise, can be found here. Anyone can archive a nomination&mdash;just make sure it has the correct number of votes, has been nominated for at least a week (or 48 hours if there are two EC votes), and that there are absolutely no outstanding objections. If you are not sure how to do this, just ask, and someone will likely be more than willing to help you. Also, if you think you can slip one past us, think again&mdash;someone is always watching you.

All nominations will be considered idle and are subject to instantaneous removal by EduCorps members if objections are not addressed, or at least not answered, after a period of 1 week.

Please remember to archive your nomination beforehand if you plan on taking it to the Good Article Nominations page.

Argauun

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 10:32, November 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Never thought, that I would do a species...

(2 ECs/2 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 17:30, November 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:00, November 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 22:06, December 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 18:47, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Are you sure it is not Aarguun? Also, is Talia Moonseeker described at all? --Eyrezer 08:50, November 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *Sir, no sir. The only mentions is as follows: Talia Moonseeker, a young Argauun only four months into her Jedi Knighthood, was kneeling beside her fallen former Master, Va'too, head bowed.. That is all about the species in the whole book.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 13:51, November 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) I think you should email Miller and ask her if this was intentionally a separate species. There's an email function on her website and she responds to most messages promptly.  NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 22:13, November 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) *This would be possible. However, I do not think it is neccessary. There is no species which is written so similiar that there is an error. You're welcome to do it, my own e-mail system has some problems and I don't know how it works.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 13:08, November 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) **I think in this case it's absolutely necessary. The difference between this and Aargauun is a single repeated letter. As it stands, even if this wasn't a mistake, the article at least needs a youmay tag. I've sent her an email asking, so we'll probably have this settled shortly. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 00:21, November 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) ***Ah sorry I was mislead by Eyrezer's spelling above. In that case, the check is neccessary and thanks for doing that. Let's see what she says and then we'll discuss the youmay tag.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 11:20, November 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) ****I totally agree with Naru, and had also emailed her as well asking Leland on the Dark Horse forums. --Eyrezer
 * 8) *****I'll email her again some other time. For now, social group will work. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 22:06, December 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) Bob
 * 10) * The length of Talia Moonseeker's article suggests at least a bit more description on her is warranted. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 23:17, November 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) **About her only two sentences. About her species, there is nothing more said or described, you can believe me.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:24, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 12) ***The novel does specify that Argauuns have heads, and that when experiencing grief they hang their head. --Eyrezer 06:03, November 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * 13) ****You can mention something like that? Wow, you can see I do not write species that often. Added and thanks.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 14:45, November 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * 14) ***** Besides this, you need to give a bit of detail on what Moonraker did in the book. From the lead to her own article, something like this: " Four months after her promotion, Moonseeker and her former Master were sent on a mission to rescue Jedi Master Obi-Wan Kenobi, Padawan Anakin Skywalker, and Senator Padmé Amidala from execution on the planet Geonosis. The rescue mission turned into the opening battle of the Clone Wars, and although Moonseeker survived it, her former Master was killed. Shaken by this loss, she mourned her deceased mentor on the battlefield." In other words, notable members of the species can't just be mentioned; their lives need to be summarized too. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 14:15, November 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 15) ******Please try it now.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 18:36, November 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 16) * OK, one other thing: Do we know this is a species? Does the source say? It could be that this is merely a planetary demonym (like Corellian or Alderaanian), so I just wanted to make sure. If the source is unclear, you should rewrite accordingly and reclassify as an Category:Undefined social groups. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 04:27, November 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 17) **It is not clearly said. However, I think we should wait until Miller gives an answer to Naru. Maybe all get's cleared up then.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:05, November 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 18) *** No reply yet? It's been quite a while, so we may need to change this to an undefined social group. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 16:14, December 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * 19) ****Changed.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 10:48, December 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 20) * OK, almost there. I did a copy edit, since with an undefined social group, the fact that one member has a head doesn't mean all do. (Imagine saying, for example, that members of the Rebel Alliance all had heads and hung them in shame, when you have hundreds of species represented in the Alliance). I tried to reword things to preserve the head part, in case we later learn that this is a species. But I think you should probably ditch the infobox (since we don't know this is a species). Do you think Template:Organization_infobox would work? ~ Savage BOB sig.png 15:06, December 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 21) **Agreed, done.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 17:51, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Comments
 * As there are some problems with recieving a clearing answer from Miller, it would be best to remove the nom and see If we get an answer in the future. Any thoughts?  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 10:01, December 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * I would continue the nomination and just go with it being a separate undefined social group for the time-being until you get a reply from the author. Since there has been no reply in some time, I think it would be safe to go with it being a unique group, much like the Davin (stormtrooper) article was likely meant to be Davin Felth, but both have an article.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  02:58, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Vendaran

 * Nominated by: Eyrezer 10:28, November 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

(1 ECs/2 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:26, November 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2)  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 17:05, December 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Toprawa and Ralltiir 05:16, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Toprawa:
 * 2) * Do we have any establishment of whether it's "Near-Human" or "near-Human"? I see this alternating constantly across the wiki, and that article seems to capitalize more than not. Toprawa and Ralltiir 01:47, December 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Unfortunately, there is no consistency across various sources. I.e.,
 * 4) ***Star Wars: The Roleplaying Game, Second Edition uses "Near-Human".
 * 5) ***Star Wars: The Roleplaying Game, Second Edition, Revised and Expanded uses "near-human".
 * 6) ***The Essential Guide to Alien Species uses "near-human".
 * 7) ***The Star Wars Customizable Card Game uses "near-human".
 * 8) ***Ultimate Alien Anthology uses "near-Human".
 * 9) ***The Complete Star Wars Encyclopedia uses "near-human".
 * 10) **I'm happy to work up a CT on this to lear Wookieepedia policy on this, in line with our policy on capitalising "Human". Do yo want to wait for that to pass first before striking? --Eyrezer 00:19, December 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) ***Very interesting. Thanks for looking into all of that. Please feel free to start a CT if you wish, but the nom probably doesn't need to wait for something so minor. I trust it can be updated if necessary per any decision we may reach. Toprawa and Ralltiir 05:16, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Comments
 * Any post-New Republic history that can be gleaned from the Atlas? Since they're colonists, we can't assume anything about the pre-NR stuff, but for that period and later (or at least post-NR), there might be a factoid or two in the maps. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 14:49, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

Spear Squadron

 * Nominated by:  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 15:50, November 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Needed doing. Similar in content to Ebon Squadron.

(1 ECs/2 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 16:08, November 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 20:40, November 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 15:18, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Salutations
 * 2) * Why are you linking to the gallery for a reference here? That doesn't say anything about indoctrination or the Navy as far as I can see. If that information is on the card, then the ref should be to the card. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 20:22, November 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **The gallery defines the icons on the miniature. The Imperial Fleet is represented on the miniature with the icon of the Empire printed on the stand. The official gallery defines the miniature "Type" as a space unit and the "Faction" icon on the unit as representing the Empire. As to the indoctrination, it's established in canon that TIE pilots are the best that Imperial academies offer and are indoctrinated to be loyal to the Emperor. However, I can go ahead and remove it since the citation does not encompass that fact.  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 16:12, November 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) ***I've added in the missed "trooper" icon reference. The icon defines group/swarming tactics.  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 16:52, November 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) ****Corrected the Bts error.  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 16:55, November 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) *****Hokay then. Just Template:Cite web that and you should be good to go. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 03:29, November 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) ******Done.  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 15:13, November 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) Toprawa:
 * 9) *My objection/question sort of mirrors Naru's above. I'm confused how this gallery external link is being used as a source for specific information within the article. Since this is proving unclear to at least the two of us reviewers, I think that a description in that reference note explaining what you're explaining here would be appropriate. Toprawa and Ralltiir 19:10, December 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) **How's that?  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 23:16, December 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) ***Also, I just realized that the reference tag was stuck to the wrong piece of info. That may have contributed to the confusion. It is fixed now, and I've added the release info in the Bts where it goes.  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 07:38, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Comments
 * Okay, it's been a whole month since this article was nominated. Is there anything else that it needs?  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 14:23, December 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * Tope just has to strike his objection. Then it will be ready to archive if no one else objects. A month isn't too long to wait, though. I've waited two or three months for a CAnom to pass before. :P -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:39, December 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * Not quite what I meant, although I appreciate the encouragement. I merely meant to ask if I was missing anything. The other articles I've done needed plenty of changes made before they were ready. If this is all I need for this one, I feel pretty good about it.  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 05:40, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Unidentified Gotal (coat)

 * Nominated by: -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:41, December 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

(2 ECs/1 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 10:04, December 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 04:30, December 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  13:23, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) I think all of the first mentions that you have on the Atlas articles should be first pictured, because it seems that "first mentioned" implies that the subject was not pictured. Please correct me about this if I am wrong. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  14:29, December 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *I think first mentioned is good since it mentions him indirectly, and he is pictured.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:57, December 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) I don't think you should define this character in terms of his companion since neither is more important a character than the other. Perhaps "Unidentified Gotal (bacta)" or somesuch? NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 23:04, December 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) *Moved.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 02:32, December 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) Bob
 * 6) * I added just a tad more description (such as head cone color). Hope that's OK. Perhaps it's worth noting he was able to write with this right hand?/right-handed? ~ Savage BOB sig.png 15:15, December 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) **Sounds good. Added.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:20, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Unidentified Vratix

 * Nominated by: -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:42, December 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

(1 ECs/2 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 13:50, December 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 23:06, December 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 04:32, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * See above.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 10:04, December 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) Bob
 * 2) * How do we know the Vratix is checking the shipping manifest and not being checked? Do we know whose cargo it is?
 * 3) **It says that both are checking the manifest.
 * 4) * You should mention the bacta somewhere. This goes for the Gotal above, too.
 * 5) **Done.
 * 6) * For all of these random folks, it might be a good idea to indicate what the pictures they appear in were intended to illustrate. This one was, if I recall, the species of the Colonies region or something.
 * 7) **How's it look?
 * 8) * The link to the Gotal is showing up as a redirect for me. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 15:20, December 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) **Fixed.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:47, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Unidentified Zabrak (drink)

 * Nominated by: -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:45, December 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

(0 ECs/1 Users/1 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 10:05, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Bob
 * 2) *I think the color of his horns may be pertinent.
 * 3) *Also, the Wookiee link is showing up as a redirect.
 * 4) *Finally, perhaps some context as to what his image was intended to illustrate in the Atlas. (This goes for all these random dudes.) ~ Savage BOB sig.png 16:17, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Unidentified Wookiee (baldric)

 * Nominated by: -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:47, December 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

(0 ECs/2 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 10:05, December 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 22:20, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Rubedo
 * 2) * He's wearing a baldric. Possibly a BTS note needed saying that symbolizes passing a Hrrtayyk ceremony.
 * 3) **Cool. Do you know what source I could use for that note?-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:04, December 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) * What's your reasoning on him being male? NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 04:26, December 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) **It appears that female Wookiees have six breasts, while this one has none.
 * 6) ***A sextuple mastectomy. Clearly. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 22:20, December 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) * Why is this a mention if he's pictured? I can see where there could be confusion since a reference in a sourcebook is by definition a mention. I suggest simply saying First Pictured and leaving it at that. Thoughts? NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 04:30, December 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) **That's a possibility, but I listed it as "First mentioned" since he isn't just pictured. He's also indirectly mentioned. Thus, IMO, a picture and an indirect mention would warrant a whole mention.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:56, December 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) ***Alright. That makes sense. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 22:20, December 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) Bob
 * 11) *His fingers are visible, so you can list his skin color in the infobox and body.
 * 12) *BTS context on what the image was used to illustrate. Tis all. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 16:20, December 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * 13) *Do we know it's a male? Wookiee chicks look just like Wookiee dudes in a lot of images. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 16:21, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Comments
 * "This" is not to be used to designate the character after the first sentence (and apparently not even there. :P). NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 04:32, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Unidentified Bothan (drink)

 * Nominated by: -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:49, December 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

(0 ECs/2 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 10:06, December 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 04:11, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) To better link the sentences, could you change "on at least one occasion" to "on that occasion" ? Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 03:38, December 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *Switched.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 03:45, December 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Bob
 * 4) *Again, Wookiee redirect.
 * 5) *Wookiee there may be a woman.
 * 6) *Context in the BTS on what the illustration was used for? ~ Savage BOB sig.png 16:24, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Unidentified Ithorian (holochess)

 * Nominated by: -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:51, December 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Thanks to and  for finding the source for the BTS.

(0 ECs/1 Users/1 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 10:06, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Unidentified Baragwin (holochess)

 * Nominated by: -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:54, December 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Thanks to and  for finding the source for the BTS.

(0 ECs/1 Users/1 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 10:07, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Unidentified Human (holochess)

 * Nominated by: -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:56, December 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Thanks to and  for finding the source for the BTS.

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 10:07, December 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) I love it that he's essentially wearing a hybrid-version of Ponda Baba's and this jacket. He must get all the chicks. ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 03:38, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) *Human Scoundrel Miniature.jpg
 * 3) * Could you mention that he was pictured in The New Essential Guide to Alien Species. He is the picture on the Human page in the book.
 * 4) **Added. Is it confirmed that it is him? Or does it just resemble him? Also, is there any context to describe the picture in the book?
 * 5) * Also, there is a miniature called a "Human Scoundrel that resembles this guy from the Star Wars Miniatures: Legacy of the Force set. Here he is: -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  13:25, December 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) **Thanks. Added.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:53, December 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) *In The New Essential Guide to Alien Species the entries each have a measuring line next to them that shows their height. You should probably try to figure out what this height was, since that would be the guy's height. I don't actually have the book so you will have to have someone else check it out.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  14:33, December 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) **Added. I'm currently fixing this baby up to be a GAN, so once the current objections have been met, I'm going to take her on up. :P -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 03:58, December 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) Bob
 * 10) * This is the same guy who appears on the "Human" entry of The New Essential Guide to Alien Species, as seen here. NEGAS (beyond the first couple pages) is an in-universe document, so his appearance there needs to be noted in the in-universe section of the article. I'm not sure if we have an article for the in-universe version of the book, but we should. The information in it is based on the research of retired Senior Anthropologies Mammon Hoole combined with the observations of the unnamed (in-uni) authors. The publication date is sometime during the Yuuzhan Vong War. You can also speak more about his full outfit from that image.
 * 11) **How's it look?
 * 12) *** Better! I think you should note that he was featured in NEGAS as a representative example of the Human species, not just that he was pictured there, though. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 03:22, December 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 13) ****Added.
 * 14) * Here's the card for the Human scoundrel: blah. You might glean some info from it. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 15:01, December 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * 15) **Alrighty. Thanks.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 02:37, December 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 16) *** Should you change the article title to Unidentified Human scoundrel, and note his scoundrel-ness in the body of the article? ~ Savage BOB sig.png 03:22, December 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 17) ****I added that info about him in the body, but I think the title is probably fine since it is conjectural anyway.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 03:30, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Comments
 * Per my review of the Vratix above, what's the context of the illustration in the Atlas? What part of the text is it intended to illustrate? ~ Savage BOB sig.png 15:22, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Unidentified Duros (chop shop)

 * Nominated by: -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:58, December 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

(0 ECs/1 Users/1 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 13:51, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * See above.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 10:08, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

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Unidentified Verpine (chop shop)

 * Nominated by: -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:00, December 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

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 * 1)  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 13:52, December 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 18:44, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

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 * See above.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 10:08, December 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * Could you mention he worked in a chop shop in the article? Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 14:52, December 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * Added.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:29, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

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Unidentified Herglic (chop shop)

 * Nominated by: -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:03, December 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

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 * 1)  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 13:52, December 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 18:46, December 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  14:26, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

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 * See above.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 10:09, December 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * Please get a better scan of the picture. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  13:31, December 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * This didn't go here.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  13:32, December 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * Same as the Bothan. Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 14:50, December 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * Done.
 * Could you mention that he worked in a chop shop in the article? Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 14:50, December 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * For all of these objections about the chop shop, I've added that he was in a chop shop, since we don't know that he was working there. He could have just been watching a friend work. :P -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:30, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

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Unidentified Gran (race)

 * Nominated by: -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:05, December 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

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 * 1)  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 13:47, December 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  14:25, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

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 * See above.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 10:09, December 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * Please get a better scan of the picture. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  13:33, December 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * Thanks to JMAS again, they've been changed.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:31, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

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Unidentified Devaronian (race)

 * Nominated by: -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:06, December 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

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 * 1)  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 13:44, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

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 * See above.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 10:09, December 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * A better scan of the picture would be nice. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  13:30, December 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * I think you could mention the Zabrak that started the race.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  14:23, December 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * Added.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:58, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

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Unidentified Zabrak (race)

 * Nominated by: -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:08, December 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:There we go! I believe I got them all. Go for it, reviewers!

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 * 1)  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 10:10, December 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  03:12, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

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 * 1) Could you get a better scan of the picture? -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  13:29, December 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) I guess you could mention that she had a green flag when starting the race. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  21:34, December 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) *Added.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:39, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

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Battle of Garos IV (Clone Wars)

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 11:14, December 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Part Two

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 * 1) -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:00, December 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 15:25, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

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 * According to the LG, the Youmay template needs to go before the Conjecture template. -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 05:35, December 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * Adressed.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 10:44, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

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Battle of Selonia

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 11:32, December 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Part Three

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 * 1) -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 05:39, December 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 15:26, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

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Battle of Korriban (Clone Wars)

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 11:10, December 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Part Four

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 * 1) ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 18:52, December 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Good job.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:25, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

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 * "Youmay" goes before "Conjecture".
 * Adressed.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 10:45, December 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * If all those events mentioned in the "Concurrent" and "Next" sections of the infobox are indeed accurately placed there, then they need mentions in the article as well. -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 05:54, December 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * No because there is no relation between those events.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 10:45, December 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * As I said above, if they are indeed accurately placed, they need placement in the article. Otherwise, it is infobox exclusive info, and that's no good. It wouldn't be too difficult I wouldn't think to fit them in there somehow. However, I would suggest that you first double check to make sure that these events truly were concurrent and not mistakenly placed there.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:03, December 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * The placement is correct. However, I asked for some assistance. Mentioning all these battles would be completely useless.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 13:40, December 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * I had already asked an administrator before I had reviewed this article, and he said that the battles needed to be added in the article. So please find a place for them in there somewhere.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:05, December 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * OK, ok. Adressed.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 17:56, December 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * Hey guys, it is not necessary to list all of the previous, concurrent, and next battles in the article itself. While we typically strive to include all information in the infobox, that is usually because that information is directly related to the article's content. However, past, present, and future battles often have absolutely nothing to do with the subject battle. Of course, sometimes they will, in which case they should be mentioned regardless of whether or not they're in the infobox, for the simple reason that they affect the subject matter. But in a situation like this, where that is clearly not the case, adding that information is not necessary. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 16:45, December 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) CJ's right; there can't be any infobox-exclusive info. You could just say something like, "The battle occurred concurrently with other battles on X, Y, Z, and A," and then pipelink Xy, Y, Z, and A to the infobox battles. ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 15:28, December 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *Done like this.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 17:56, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

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Battle of Lanos

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 11:58, December 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Part Five

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 * 1) Random Article on the CAN. Just doing my part. :P By the by, is Wild Space any good? Miller is great, but TCW in any form carries a stigma to me.  NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 21:58, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

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 * 1) All those battles are infobox exclusive. ...Good luck with that. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 04:41, December 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *Please take a look at my answer to Cal above. And yes, Wild Space is good enough to deserve a read.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 13:41, December 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Infobox-exclusivity is infobox-exclusivity. Furthermore, I clicked Mission to Barab I and it seems that your cuncurrent events aren't listed consistently. Mission to Barab I says that the Battle of Falleen and Battle of Bothawui were cuncurrent with it, but that would mean they were also cuncurrent with the Battle of Lanos. If I gather these articles correctly, they were mentioned at some Jeci Council meeting. If so, I have an idea for how to get the articles in the body. Mention the meeting and say it was reported alongside all the concurrent events. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 22:36, December 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Adressed.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 18:03, December 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) ****Sorry to pop in and wiki-lawyer. :/ I'm not too experienced with Battle articles, but I recently got three of them to GA status, and the "previous" and "next" battles from the infobox being infobox-exclusive was never a problem. I think they might be an exception to the rule, as they usually have nothing to do with the article's subject. Menkooroo 12:26, December 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) *****Conscious of the fact that I'm not terribly experienced with Event articles, I've asked CC and Jon, both of whom are, to weigh in. This seems to be an issue that would affect all future (and past) Event articles, so let's all work it together. Cheers, everyone. :D Menkooroo 12:36, December 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) ******Hey guys, Menk is correct, for exactly the right reason. While we typically strive to include all information in the infobox, that's because that information is directly related to the article's content. Since past, present, and future battles often have absolutely nothing to do with the subject battle, their addition to the article body is often unnecessary. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 16:48, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

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Ambrian cheroot

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 12:35, December 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Short break from the battles. Other Wild Space stuff

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 * No infobox for spices, drugs and medicine?  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 12:35, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Larbo Nelik

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 12:56, December 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Another short break

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Battle of Ord Mantell (Clone Wars)

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 13:07, December 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Back to the battles. Part Six.

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Mission to Barab I

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 13:38, December 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Part Seven

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Unidentified Gungan observer

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 08:45, December 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: What can I say. I like Gungans. And those from MedStar especially.

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Battle of Anoth (Clone Wars)

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 09:26, December 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Part Eight.

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 * 1) -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:55, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

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 * 1) Cal Jedi
 * 2) * Youmay goes above Conjecture.
 * 3) **Done.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk
 * 4) * Infobox exclusive stuff, such as: Battle of Bakura, BBY date, "High General" Obi-Wan Kenobi, and "cyborg" general. -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:47, December 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) **Added Bakura, removed "High General" as we cannot be sure that Kenobi was that at this point. Cyborg and the date were already in there.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 13:18, December 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) ***Naru added the date for you.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:55, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

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Battle of Bakura (Clone Wars)

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 09:35, December 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Part Nine.

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 * 1) Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 14:46, December 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:07, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

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 * 1) Two things, I guess. This battle is during the flashback and not after the main part, right? Otherwise we might have to say its in 21 BBY, per SW Annual 2011. And should the traitor go in the infobox under the CIS? Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 15:40, December 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * No, a clear date is given by the novel itself. And for the traitor: We don't know if he is really someone who participated in or if he just gave information to Grievous. Therefore he is not in the infobox.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 13:42, December 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) **Got it, thanks for clearing that up. Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 14:46, December 13, 2011 (UTC)


 * 1) Cal Jedi
 * 2) * Youmay goes above Conjecture.
 * 3) **Done.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 13:26, December 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) * Infobox exclusive info, such as: previous battle, BBY date, that Obi-Wan was a "High General," and that Grievous was a "cyborg." -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:43, December 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) **Anoth added, BBY date added, Obi-Wan see above and cyborg stuff added.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 13:26, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

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Kamino Station X

 * Nominated by: Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 15:02, December 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Probably the same as Kamino Station I. Probably.

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 * 1) Provided Cal's objections are dealt with. ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 15:48, December 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) "X rarely marks the spot" - Indiana Jones.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 23:37, December 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * Hey, per Cal.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 13:04, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

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 * An infobox can be added since we at least know the era.
 * Well, to me it seems like having an infobox with only one entry doesn't look right in the article. Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 18:42, December 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * Well, like it or not, an infobox is required even if there is only one entry.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:51, December 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * Right, my mistake. Added a location infobox. Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 23:30, December 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * The fact that it was the PS3/360 databank should be mentioned in the BTS, I think, so people don't get it confused with the Wii/DS version. If you want an example of how it's been done before, see here.
 * To be more specific, I think what databank entry it appeared in should be mentioned, too. -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:41, December 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review...entry specified. Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 18:42, December 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * Looks good, though.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:38, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

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 * 1) The Force Unleashed 2 Databank.

Huttese ale

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 12:12, December 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Tough stuff.

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Marmor

 * Nominated by: Hanzo Hasashi 22:29, December 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Short and sweet. Actually originally thought this to be a GAN, before finding it to be too short.

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 * 1) My University's yearbook was called the Marmor! Menkooroo 14:20, December 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 18:54, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

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 * 1) Bob
 * 2) * Was he played by a model, as in a person who poses for magazines and clothing ads? Or was he an actor?
 * 3) **Menkooroo made that edit, I think I'll change it.
 * 4) * The BTS makes it sound like he was hired by Decipher to shoot that photo, but I think you mean that he was part of filming of ROTJ but then cut from the final film, right? If you rewrote the BTS chronologically, I think this would be clearer. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 15:34, December 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) **To be honest, I don't know if he was part of the filming, but cut, or if he was just made for a card. Hanzo Hasashi 17:14, December 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) ***I don't think we can assume that he was part of the filming, which is why I went with "model," since it seems like he's a model who posed for the card picture. Menkooroo 18:17, December 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) ****And that's why I worded it ambiguously to begin with. Hanzo Hasashi 18:43, December 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) *****OK, I see. You could always use "person" or "man" if you think "actor" isn't right. But I'll leave that up to you. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 18:54, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

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 * Is there enough evidence in his photo that he was present aboard Home One when Tydirium departed in Return of the Jedi? Hanzo Hasashi 22:29, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Facing Facts

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 07:31, December 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Welcome to POLITICALLY INACCURATE SMASHDOWN.

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 * 1) I prefer Colbert. ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 15:41, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

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Unidentified Aqualish defector

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 17:53, December 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Forget to add this nom yesterday...

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 * 1) Good job doing this whole pile of noms. :) -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 13:58, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

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 * "and was wounded during the battle." - What battle? Either a rewording or some context on the battle would be good. -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 03:23, December 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * Better?  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 12:41, December 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * Is "he was operated on" all the information there is? Nothing about post-op or anything? Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 17:26, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

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