Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Mils Giel


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Mils Giel

 * Nominated by: Thefourdotelipsis 13:04, 18 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: "By Gad, sir, you are a character. There's never any telling what you'll say or do next, except that it's bound to be something astonishing."

(5 Inqs/0 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  13:14, 21 December 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) Get this bloody November stuff of the FAN page!  Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 01:29, 3 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) Interesting. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 17:28, 5 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) Cull Tremayne 04:34, 12 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) Green Tentacle (Talk) 23:58, 12 January 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) "killed Berl Matoone with the mutant Tirrith" Who killed Matoone? And who is Matoone? That's all.  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  13:44, 20 December 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) *This is why I should proofread. :P Fixed. Thefourdotelipsis 06:45, 21 December 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) From the desk of Atarumaster88
 * 4) * "Nevertheless, Giel refused to take blame for the loss of the teezl, although, since protecting it had been his mandate, he assumed full responsibility" This is a bit confusing.
 * 5) **I hope I've clarified it a bit now.
 * 6) *Major props on including the word "brouhaha". ;-) Have a Super Terrific Friendly Un-frustrating day. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 17:42, 2 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 7) **Thanks for the review. I was afraid people wouldn't like that word. :P Thefourdotelipsis 01:25, 3 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 8) From the Chron-O-John of Green Tentacle:
 * 9) * You alternate between "TIE Fighters" and "TIE fighters". Don't mind which, as long as it's consistent.
 * 10) **Fixed.
 * 11) * "Two of the TIE fighter's approached the teezl's transport cage, neither of them transmitting. The admiral ordered that they both be shot down, as a precaution. Before Giel's gunners could do so, one of the TIE fighters was shot down by the other." Lost me a little there. I'm assuming the precaution was because they weren't sure whether they were Imperial or Rebel TIEs and they turned out to be one of each. Could you clarify it a little, please.
 * 12) **Clarified.
 * 13) * Not sure this is objection worthy, but I agree with Acky about the caps, bold quote being a little excessive. Green Tentacle (Talk) 19:35, 12 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 14) **Removed the bold. Kept the caps. :P Thefourdotelipsis 23:20, 12 January 2009 (UTC)

Comments


 * If the Beheboth stuff confuses you, join the club. :P Thefourdotelipsis 13:04, 18 November 2008 (UTC)
 * I'm not a big fan of italicized, bolded and all-caps "and bring me his HEAD!!" ... it seems like overkill, even if that's what's represented in the comic. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 17:28, 5 January 2009 (UTC)