Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Sonam-Ha'ar


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Sonam-Ha'ar

 * Nominated by:  IFYLOFD  ( You will pay the price for your lack of vision! ) 03:20, October 31, 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: He has a fine beard.

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1) Jedi Kasra (comlink) 01:16, November 2, 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) Quixotic Jedi must be inspired in him. --Skippy Farlstendoiro 13:42, November 2, 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) Ronnie Brown would be impressed.  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  22:07, November 16, 2009 (UTC)
 * 4)  Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 03:25, November 20, 2009 (UTC)
 * 5)  CC7567  (talk) 04:48, November 22, 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Just a couple&hellip;
 * 2) * What are the species of these Jedi? Memit Nadill, Odan-Urr.
 * 3) **I don't think its really relevant.
 * 4) ***Alright, then.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 01:16, November 2, 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) * In the Appearances section, could you only put the comics in which he actually appeared, rather that the overall arc?
 * 6) **Addressed.
 * 7) *Otherwise, looks good.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 15:35, November 1, 2009 (UTC)
 * 8) The Grand Master
 * 9) * "with a seemingly unstoppable invasion force." Seemingly unstopable? Well, was it or wasn't it?
 * 10) **I used the word seemingly there because it seemed to the Jedi that it was unstoppable, but it turned out not to be.
 * 11) * "Taking the oportunity..." and "Seeing an opportunity..." What opportunity did he take/see? (i.e. something along the lines of "Taking advantage of the opportunity" and "Seeing an opportunity to turn the tide of the battle")
 * 12) **Addressed.
 * 13) * "stood by his side no matter what." Could this be worded any differently? It sounds a little colloquial, and like it might be overstated.
 * 14) **Addressed.
 * 15) * Does the source literally call him "brave?" If not, this is a pretty generic statement, as you can pretty much say that every being in the Star Wars universe was brave because they did something.
 * 16) **Reworded.
 * 17) * Jonjedigrandmaster ( Jedi Beacon ) 01:36, November 16, 2009 (UTC)
 * 18) "Pledging that the Jedi would help in the coming battle, Sonam-Ha'ar began preparing for battle": please vary "battle" somehow here and throughout this entire paragraph.  CC7567  (talk) 21:09, November 21, 2009 (UTC)
 * 19) *Addressed.

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