Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Plee


 * ''The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.

Plee

 * Nominated by: --Eyrezer 03:57, 11 April 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: To go with Platt and Plett

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)
Support
 * 1) May the PIE be with you Kilson Likes PIE 16:21, 12 April 09 (UTC)
 * 2)  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  18:56, 13 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 3)  IFYLOFD  ( Come with me if you want to live. ) 21:42, 14 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) Grand Moff Tranner [[Image:Imperial Department of Military Research.svg|20px]] (Comlink) 23:07, 14 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 05:04, 16 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 6) Now that the right female Bantam author is credited. :P - Lord Hydronium 00:06, 17 April 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) The PIE lover's view
 * 2) * You should expand the intro another two or three sentences. You could mention how he and the other scientists competed over resources while trying to rebuild the planet's ecosystem.
 * 3) **Done
 * 4) * Give some context to Leia in the intro and body paragraphs. Yes, I know for most readers it would be obvious, but for people new to Star Wars who are reading this article, a little information goes a long way.
 * 5) **I'm not sure what you want here. There is nothing about Leia that is relevant. I could say she was a NR bureaucrat, or former Senator/CoS I guess...
 * 6) ***You could just mention she's the former Chief of State or a Jedi in training.
 * 7) ****Done
 * 8) * Also, give some context to the Yuuzhan Vong and the war in the intro and the main body.
 * 9) **Done.
 * 10) * ...indeed, another scientist tried to claim Sector Four to use for grain projects. Who is this other scientist? Does he or she have a name? If so, put it in there.
 * 11) **Not named.
 * 12) * Could you expand the Personality and traits section. I know there's not that much info out on this dude, but did he have any known habits or mannerisms. I don't care if he picked his nose once in awhile, any bit of information helps.
 * 13) **Unfortunately, no picking of noses. That's all there is.
 * 14) * Besides these five, it looks pretty nice. It's better that half the stuff I nominate. :) Kilson Likes PIE 09:00, 11 April 09 (UTC)
 * 15) Bumrushin' the Show with IFYLOFD:
 * 16) * Give a few words of context for SELCORE in the intro.
 * 17) **Done
 * 18) *...that's all. Very well done.  IFYLOFD  ( Come with me if you want to live. ) 01:09, 14 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 19) Soresu
 * 20) * All the sentences in the second paragraph of the bio begin a bit repetitively. Mix it up a bit.
 * 21) **I'm not sure I understand what you mean? How are they repetitive? --Eyrezer 00:05, 15 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 22) ***Arg. My apologies. That's what happens when you try and do too many things at the same time. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 05:04, 16 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 23) * the efforts of Plee and the rest were ultimately in vain. I wouldn't really say vain. Duro was, in the end, "restored to a habitable state" by the Yuuzhan Vong. Maybe make a note about it. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 12:44, 14 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 24) **Cool. Done --Eyrezer 00:00, 16 April 2009 (UTC)

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