Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Tyla Praji


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Tyla Praji

 * Nominated by: Darth Morrt 13:42, July 29, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Another one.

(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  12:08, July 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 18:48, August 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 15:46, August 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) Menkooroo 06:49, August 4, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * Her affiliation should probably be listed as House Praji in the infobox. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  17:54, July 29, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Done. Darth Morrt 12:00, July 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) * Mention the date of the historian's document as you did with Collin Praji. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  17:56, July 29, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) **Added. Darth Morrt 12:00, July 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) * The Collin Praji article also mentions that Praji is a Coruscanti house. Couldn't that be mentioned here? -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  18:04, July 29, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) **Kaikielius was the old homeworld of House Praji, but they relocated themself to Coruscant. In 10 ABY, Praji revenged his family's old enemy, House Vahali and became governor of Kaikielius. It is unknown whether the Prajii returned to Kaikielius or not. IMO, it is better not to mention Coruscant here. Darth Morrt 12:00, July 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) ***Then you probably shouldn't put her in the Coruscanti category.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  12:04, July 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) ****Removed. Darth Morrt 12:06, July 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) Axinal
 * 11) * The infobox sources female, Human, and House of Praji to Tinker, Sailor, Soldier, Praji, while the body sources that information to Nathan O'Keefe's blog. I can't seem to find that information on there. Could you make sure the sourcing is consistent and correct?
 * 12) **Fixed. Darth Morrt 11:19, August 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * 13) * Would Category:Officers of the Galactic Empire apply here?
 * 14) **No, it wouldn't. One sentence mentions that she participated in the Second Civil War (Second Galactic Civil War), and a quote calls her Commisar. Commissar is not necessary a military rank, and she is not necessary Imperial. Darth Morrt 11:19, August 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * 15) ***Forgive me, I read the article too quickly and thought "served as a military officer of the Galactic Empire" referred to Tyla, rather than her father. Nice work.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 18:48, August 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * 16) *Otherwise, very nice article.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 10:38, July 31, 2011 (UTC)
 * 17) Maybe something in the bio about her personality? Based on the "Peace is for Nerfs" quote, there's got to be something you can say. Menkooroo 12:32, August 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * 18) *Done, but I found my wording a bit awkward. Could you help me smoothen it? Darth Morrt 12:01, August 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 19) **Smoothened. Menkooroo 06:49, August 4, 2011 (UTC)

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