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Burl Ives (redux review)

 * Redux comments: Sent to Redux per Meeting 45. Large additions requiring re-review.
 * Date added: October 25, 2011
 * Changes since last review: diff

Support

 * 1) Good to go.  Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 17:35, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Jujiggum

 * "In high school, he played football and when he went on to Eastern Illinois State Teacher's College in 1927." Grammar. (Would've fixed this myself, but I'm not sure if this is meant to say that he went on to play at the College or if he played football in high school and then went on to attend the College.)
 * Checked the source and fixed it up.
 * "In 1953, Ives two new books: the Burl Ives Song Book, which included 115 folk songs, and Burl Ives' Sea Songs of Sailing, Whaling and Fishing, which included 68 songs." Grammar. (Again, I would've fixed this myself, but there are multiple words that could potentially fit here, and I didn't want to put in one that might be technically incorrect: i.e. "wrote," "released," "produced," etc.)
 * Went with "composed." Seemed the best fit. Menkooroo 17:33, February 17, 2012 (UTC)
 * Jonjedigrandmaster ( Talk ) 17:28, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

 * A reminder that if this passes, it should be added to the queue, per Inq Meeting 42 (This was a failed RFAN). Menkooroo 07:30, November 5, 2011 (UTC)