Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Mission to Prakith


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Mission to Prakith

 * Nomination by: —Tommy9281 [[Image:Dark Side Master TotG.jpg|17px]] ( Peace is a lie ) 04:26, 21 January 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: And so it is with this one as it has been with those that came before&hellip;minus the flowers ;)

(5 Inqs/2 Users/7 Total)
Support
 * 1) Darth Acheron123
 * 06:48, 31 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 1)  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  12:58, 2 March 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) Green Tentacle (Talk) 21:15, 10 March 2009 (UTC)
 * 3)  —Xwing328 (Talk) 03:41, 7 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 4)  Cavalier One [[Image:FarStar Logo.jpg|20px]]( Squadron channel ) 09:27, 7 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) Good work. Toprawa and Ralltiir 05:37, 8 April 2009 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) Toprawa:
 * 2) * This introduction needs more concrete context. "Decades before" what? "Decades before, A'Sharad Hett, who would become Darth Krayt, Dark Lord of the Sith, had been captured by the extra-galactic Yuuzhan Vong species, and implanted with their Yorik-Kul slave seeds."
 * 3) **Addressed.
 * 4) * The article never really establishes clearly before this reference that Wyyrlok took the holocron. Please clarify explicitly in the previous section: "With Andeddu's holocron in hand"
 * 5) **Addressed.
 * 6) * I don't really know what this means. Can we say this in English? "duel on the battlefield of the mind" Toprawa and Ralltiir 03:46, 6 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 7) **Yeah, I think that phrase works. It's nice imagery, if anything. —Xwing328 (Talk) 03:41, 7 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 8) ***Well, what should I do here? One Inq says change it, another says it's good. Please advise on a proper course of action, thanks. —Tommy [[Image:Dark side Master SWGTCG.jpg|17px]] ( Nine two eight one ) 01:26, 8 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 9) ****If it's unclear what it means, especially to an Inq who's read a lot of these, it should definitely be changed. It might be a nice phrase, but clarity should be the most important thing. - Lord Hydronium 02:01, 8 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 10) *****Indeed. I don't think asking for a little tweaking for clarity is too much here, and for all the Inqing you don't do, Xwing, I think we can find more productive things to do with our time than ragging on other's objections. Toprawa and Ralltiir 03:48, 8 April 2009 (UTC)

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