Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Aaeton

Aaeton

 * Nominated by: Winterz (talk) 02:28, September 30, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: A planet..

Support

 * 1)  Cavalier One FarStar.svg( Squadron channel ) 10:36, October 29, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) How the heck do you pronounce this?  Commander Code-8  To say hi, press 42 03:39, November 3, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) *I believe it is Ah-aeton. ^^ Winterz (talk) 03:43, November 3, 2012 (UTC)

Trayus

 * I'm seeing a few too many redirect links. Be sure you've got those in order.
 * Check it now.
 * Your TOR citation should use TORcite so you can specify the exact source of the information within the game. Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 02:46, September 30, 2012 (UTC)
 * Done. Winterz (talk) 12:36, September 30, 2012 (UTC)

Cav

 * Article for the Imperial bioweapon?
 * Done.
 * Article for the chemical attack?
 * I don't think there's enough info. Plus, how should I name it? "Attack on Aaeton"?!
 * Something like that. "Bioweapon attack on Aaeton" would be sufficient I think. - Cavalier One FarStar.svg( Squadron channel ) 17:40, October 15, 2012 (UTC)
 * Finally done. Winterz (talk) 14:11, October 19, 2012 (UTC)
 * What was the result of the bioweapon attack? The molds spread, but was it cured or did it ravage the planet?
 * Resulting in your companion gaining more XP or not, that's all. I have no idea on what's our policy on the Companion quests, but they're available to all (in this case Republic) classes companions and its fate is inconclusive.
 * Ragoon-6 - Why is Ragoon VI formatted this way? If the article name is correct, it should be reflected in the name. If the article is incorrect, it should be changed to reflect the correct spelling/format.
 * Both names are correct, one shouldn't take priority over the other, however in the source used for Aaeton it was named "Ragoon-6". Changed it anyways. Winterz (talk) 17:37, October 9, 2012 (UTC)
 * Hmm. I've changed them to Ragoon VI for now since that's the article title. Aaeton sources might state Ragoon-6, but its the majority of sources that determine the correct usage of the name. Or LFL insistance (thank TCW and Mon Cala/Dac/Mon Calamari). If the majority of sources support Ragoon-6 over Ragoon VI, then the article will probably need to be moved in any case. Note that I'm not fussed which name is used, I just want it to be consistent and uniform and in line with the article name :p - Cavalier One FarStar.svg( Squadron channel ) 17:40, October 15, 2012 (UTC)
 * Article for the Senator of Aaeton? - Cavalier One FarStar.svg( Squadron channel ) 13:11, October 9, 2012 (UTC)
 * Done and thanks for your objections. Winterz (talk) 12:29, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

CC-8

 * Aaeton was a planet in the Aaeton system of the Core Worlds region, joining the civilized galaxy by 5,000 BBY. The latter part of this sentence doesn't make sense. I'd change it to "Aaeteon was ...(etc.) Core Worlds reigion that had joined the civilized galaxy..."
 * The second sentance of the intro should be split since it covers a very large section of history and is a bit confusing to read at the moment
 * I don't think its nessecary to say that Ragoon IV was only half a day's hyperspace travel. It sort of messes up that sentance
 * That's all. Good job noticing the SWTOR reference.  Commander Code-8  To say hi, press 42 06:09, October 30, 2012 (UTC)
 * All objections attended to, except the "hyperspace travel" one. I think it is very relevant since they are, in a way, related planets, plus it won't be confusing in the sentence because it's separated from the rest of it through to use of hyphens ;). Thanks. Winterz (talk) 23:12, November 2, 2012 (UTC)
 * I made a few small edits in the intro too which you can check if you don't agree with them :)  Commander Code-8  To say hi, press 42 03:39, November 3, 2012 (UTC)