Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Moorja


 * ''The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a featured article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.

(7 Inq/3 user/10 total)
Support
 * 1) --Eyrezer 03:56, 25 January 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) Excellent. Very well-put-together.  Graestan ( Talk ) 17:26, 25 January 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) Per Grae. Toprawa and Ralltiir 17:43, 25 January 2008 (UTC)
 * 4)  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  21:28, 25 January 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) Moorja! Awesome! Backwater farming planet FTW  Gonk  ( Gonk! ) 13:20, 26 January 2008 (UTC)
 * 6) --  Darth Culator  (Talk) 02:19, 27 January 2008 (UTC)
 * 7)  Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 04:05, 30 January 2008 (UTC)
 * 8) Thefourdotelipsis 21:30, 30 January 2008 (UTC)
 * 9) Nicely done.  Greyman ( Paratus ) 00:09, 31 January 2008 (UTC)
 * 10) Some shoddy images, but I'll let it slide. --Imperialles 22:00, 1 February 2008 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) From the desk of Atarumaster88
 * 2) *" Blocking the way were three bruwoses, which the operatives were forced to kill. Once the passage was cleared, they retrieved Harkness's Y-wing and fled the planet along with his companions.[1] courtesy " Something is off here.
 * 3) **Reworded.
 * 4) ***I was really just referring to the strangely random "courtesy", but the rewording is nice. ;-) Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 04:05, 30 January 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) ****lol, I didn't notice that until after the rewording.
 * 6) * The government is described as "Corporately owned". Wasn't it also under Imperial jurisdiction?
 * 7) **Black Curs Blues lists it as corporately owned. Salliche Ag is an Imperial conglomerate but the Imps have no direct influence/control on the government.
 * 8) * Spell out Corporation.
 * 9) **One occurence of Corp fixed.
 * 10) *Have a Super Terrific Friendly Un-frustrating day. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 20:51, 29 January 2008 (UTC)

Comments

'''Approved by Inquisitorius 22:12, 2 February 2008 (UTC)
 * There will hopefully be some more pics coming soon - from ppl with quality scanners! --Eyrezer 05:08, 27 January 2008 (UTC)