Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations



This page is for the nomination of "comprehensive articles". For a list of "comprehensive articles", see Category:Wookieepedia comprehensive articles.


 * Comprehensive article nominations history
 * Comprehensive article nominations archiving checklist

What is a "comprehensive article?"

A "comprehensive article" is an article that contains all information regarding the topic. Often, "comprehensive articles" cannot reach Featured or Good Article status due to their limited content. This process is intended to recognize articles that contain all relevant canon information, yet are still under the 250 word limit required for a Good Article. The purpose of this is twofold&mdash;firstly, to help users distinguish what is a stub, and what is merely a short article with no further relevant material to be added, and, more importantly, to highlight for the reader when they are reading something that has been judged definitely "comprehensive"&mdash;that is, a guarantee to the reader that whatever they are reading contains the sum total of all available content.

Nominations and promotions of the Comprehensive article process are overseen by a collective of users known as the "EduCorps," which is made up of the Inquisitorius, the AgriCorps, and various other experienced users who are considered qualified to adequately judge the nominated material.

Lucasfilm Ltd. and its many licensees continue to expand the Star Wars universe. Since new information might become available, it may be necessary to revoke a "comprehensive article's" status. A forum will be used to nominate articles that have fallen out-of-date. Members of the EduCorps will then post a warning template on that page, and a grace period of one week will be instituted in which the article can be improved. If there is a significant amount of new information, it is likely that once updated, the article will become eligible for Good article status, and thereby ineligible for Comprehensive article status.

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An article must&hellip;


 * 1) &hellip;be well-written and detailed.
 * 2) &hellip;be unbiased, non-point of view.
 * 3) &hellip;be sourced with all available sources and appearances.
 * 4) &hellip;follow the Manual of Style, Layout Guide, and all other policies on Wookieepedia. This is, of course, within reason. If a topic only has a very limited degree of content that cannot be divided up into the relevant article sections, it is not required that it follow the Layout Guide precisely. This is to be judged on a case-by-case basis.
 * 5) &hellip;following the review process, be stable, i.e., does not change significantly from day to day and is not the subject of ongoing edit wars. This does not apply to vandalism and protection or semi-protection as a result of vandalism.
 * 6) &hellip;not be tagged with any sort of improvement tags (i.e. more sources, expand, etc).
 * 7) &hellip;have no redlinks.
 * 8) &hellip;have all relevant canon information presented.
 * 9) &hellip;be completely referenced for all available material and sources. See Sourcing for more information. While this is not required for an article possessing a singular source, it is encouraged, as it provides both uniformity and a good infrastructure should the topic be referenced in any future materials.
 * 10) &hellip;have all quotes and images sourced.
 * 11) &hellip;provide at least one relevant quote on the article if available.
 * 12) &hellip;include a "Behind the scenes" section for in-universe articles.
 * 13) &hellip;counting the introduction, the article body, and "Behind the scenes" material, must not exceed 250 words in length (not including captions, quotes, or headers, etc). Any articles exceeding the limit should be taken to the Good article nominations page for consideration.
 * 14) &hellip;if the nominated article reaches 200 words or greater, the nominator must either provide an intro or draft an intro and provide a link to the revision in the nomination, showing that the intro does not elevate the article over 250 words. Exceptions can be made for articles wherein the majority of the text is in the "Behind the scenes" section.

How to nominate:


 * 1) First, nominate an article you find is worthy of comprehensive status, putting it at the bottom of the list below. Nominated articles must meet all thirteen requirements stated above.
 * 2) Add CAnom at the top of the article you are nominating.
 * 3) Be sure to place sign in the "Nominated by" line when the nomination is posted for voting.
 * 4) Others will object to the nomination if they disagree that the article is good enough; they will then supply reasons for doing so, and ways to improve the article in accordance with the established rules.
 * 5) Nominators and supporters will adjust the article until the objectors (with reasonable objections) are satisfied. Objectors may also make alterations&mdash;if there is any reason for contention on a given point, it should be settled in a civil manner in the nomination field itself.
 * 6) Users may not vote on their own articles.
 * 7) There is no limit to the amount of nominations a given user can submit at any given time.

How to vote:


 * 1) Before doing anything, be sure to read the article completely, keeping a sharp eye out for mistakes.
 * 2) Afterward, compare the article to the criteria listed above, and then either support or object the article's nomination.
 * 3) *If you object, please supply concrete reasons for doing so, and how it can be improved.
 * 4) As stated above, any objections will be looked upon by the nominator, supporters, and anyone willing to improve the article, and action will be taken to please the objectors. Do not strike other users' objections; it is up to the objector to review the changes and strike if they are satisfied.
 * 5) There are several ways in which an article can receive the required number of votes. Within a 48-hour period of nomination, only EduCorps votes will count towards the total, although anyone may choose to vote in that window. If two members of the EduCorps support a nomination in that window, and there are no outstanding objections, the article can be considered a "Comprehensive article" and be tagged with the template 48 hours after the initial nomination.  The talk page will also be tagged with the CA template. When the 48 hours are up, any user's votes will contribute towards the total. If one EduCorps member has voted for an article after a week, three regular votes will be required. After the 48 hour period, an article can still also pass with just two EduCorps votes.
 * 6) Once a nomination is successful, it will be placed on the Comprehensive article list. Instructions on how to archive nominations, successful or otherwise, can be found here. Anyone can archive a nomination&mdash;just make sure it has the correct number of votes, has been nominated for at least a week (or 48 hours if there are two EC votes), and that there are absolutely no outstanding objections. If you are not sure how to do this, just ask, and someone will likely be more than willing to help you. Also, if you think you can slip one past us, think again&mdash;someone is always watching you.

All nominations will be considered idle and are subject to instantaneous removal by EduCorps members if objections are not addressed, or at least not answered, after a period of 1 week.

Still Life - Kite Plant

 * Nominated by:  OLIOSTER  (talk) 21:32, April 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: A painting players were never meant to have.

(1 ECs/2 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 22:51, April 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) This was a triumph. I'm making a note here: HUGE SUCCESS! NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 18:30, April 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) ~  Savage  BOB sig.png 18:18, April 17, 2011 (UTC)

Object Comments
 * 1) Axinal
 * 2) * As we write articles in past tense, should the first sentence say "rumored to have been created" rather than "rumored to be created"?
 * 3) **Fixed.  OLIOSTER  (talk) 22:27, April 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) * Just one more, regarding the phrase "non-player owned buildings": are these buildings owned by non-player characters, or simply buildings that are not owned by players? I suggest saying "non-player character owned" for the former, or "non-player-owned" for the latter. I'd just like to make this sentence a bit less ambiguous without removing your individual writing style. &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 22:37, April 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) **Clarified.  OLIOSTER  (talk) 22:48, April 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) ***Cool, thank you.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 22:51, April 15, 2011 (UTC)

Aurora Adasca

 * Nominated by: N  AYAYEN  20:24, April 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: I expected more of her. Meh.

(2 ECs/1 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) --Eyrezer 22:04, April 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) GTQ 01:04, April 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) ~  Savage  BOB sig.png 06:27, April 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 17:49, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * I suggest rewording the first paragraph so that you explicitly call her a Jedi Scout in the first line (which should serve as a "definition" of the character). Currently, the article seems to be privileging her niece-hood to the Adasca clan rather than her Jedi-hood, much as if we began Luke Skywalker's article with, "Luke Skywalker was the son of Anakin Skywalker. He eventually became a Jedi Knight." Please let me know if this is not as clear as I was hoping to make it! ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 22:00, April 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * I've tried to reword it to have her as a Jedi first but I'm wary of ending up reversing what little chronology there is. Thanks for the pointer. N  AYAYEN  08:37, April 26, 2011 (UTC)
 * No, good show. ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 06:27, April 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * Rubedo
 * "Arkoh Adasca never contacted her after she was taken and nor did Lucien Draay, a family friend of the Adascas and a Jedi Master, see her again either." This is a double "and." NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 04:33, May 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * Fixed. N  AYAYEN  10:29, May 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * Can you include the complete CSWE citation, please?
 * As far as I'm aware, such citations aren't put with the entry in Sources list. The full citation is used for the CSWE references though. N  AYAYEN  10:29, May 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * You use the full cite, minus the page number, for the Source list. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 17:49, May 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * "Spiriting away" is not a direct quote, so you cannot use it like that. Rephrase. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 04:33, May 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * Reworded with a different synonym for "spirit away". N  AYAYEN  10:29, May 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * Imperators II
 * Has any source ever used "tribes" in the context of Mandalorians? I know "clans" have been mentioned, but are they really interchangeable words?
 * I made that change to the article. "Clans" would actually be better. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 17:49, May 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * I've reworded it anyway. Naru went overboard on the context. N  AYAYEN  18:38, May 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * The authors of the comic should be noted in the Bts section.  Imperators II (Talk) 16:02, May 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * Noted. N  AYAYEN  18:38, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

Comments
 * Exiledjedi
 * I don't want this to be an objection, but it seems to me that if this article had an introduction added it might be over 250 words and therefore eligible for good article status instead of comprehensive. However, this is just a suggestion not an objection.--Exiledjedi 18:53, May 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * Actually, the article is already over 200 words, so per CAN rule #14, the addition of an intro needs to at least be attempted. Have you tried sectioning it, Nayayen?&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 19:07, May 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * Heh, edit conflicted. Thanks for pointing it out and, yes I have now added an intro and it has pushed the word count to 252. As such, if an EC could remove this nom then I can put it up the GAN. N  AYAYEN  19:23, May 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * Moved to the GAN now. N  AYAYEN  19:38, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

Crab-stuffed creampuff

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 00:54, April 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: What can I say? They amuse me.

(0 ECs/2 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) I remember these things. Ugh, crabs.  Holocron Greatholocron.jpg (Complain) 16:01, April 26, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 18:02, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * Someone got lazy and just added the note that "Life Day means birthday" (in not so many words) to the article Life Day, but in reality, we've got two different phenomena here: the Wookiee holiday, and the birthday analog. In short, I think the link to Life Day should be changed to Life Day (Mon Calamari) or somesuch so this will be cleared up. Other than that, it's all good! ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 05:32, May 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * Done. There's that buzzword again. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 02:39, May 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * Per the naming policy, the article should probably be named Crab-stuffed creampuff.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 01:42, May 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * Done. Nice catch. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 02:39, May 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * Can the name Dac be sourced to The Doomsday Ship?
 * The specific name isn't what needs to be sourced. That it is from their homeworld is clear from the quote in the article. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 21:13, May 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * Well, that it is from their homeworld can be sourced with The Doomsday Ship, but the fact that their homeworld is Dac still needs a source, maybe from Geonosis and the Outer Rim Worlds.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 00:09, May 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * I'm gonna plead no contest to this. The name itself is not what needs to be sourced, merely the information that it comes from the Mon Cal homeworld (which is called Dac). However, I don't feel like arguing over this. I'm busy this week. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 17:57, May 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * I'm fairly certain that the name still needs to be sourced For example, I use "Bright Tree Village" in a lot of my Star Wars: Ewoks noms, but since the village is never named in the series, I'm told to source it to The Essential Guide to Characters or something. Either way, that's my last objection, so good work.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 18:02, May 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * Just de-pluralize the name in the infobox, and I think that's all I have. Nice work!&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 11:55, May 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * Sofixit next time. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 21:13, May 2, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Felloux

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 03:51, April 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Greetings, fellows

(1 ECs/2 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) Nice.  Imperators II (Talk) 23:44, April 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Another good article, Naru.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 00:16, April 29, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) ~  Savage  BOB sig.png 17:04, May 1, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Imperators II
 * 2) * Ummm, why Category:Musicians?  Imperators II (Talk) 22:33, April 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **No clue. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 23:40, April 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) Axinal
 * 5) * I don't own the New Essential Chronology, so I'm just asking to be sure: can all the details you mentioned of the battle&mdash;specifically, the date&mdash;be sourced to the NEC? If yes, obviously no change is needed.
 * 6) **For future reference, if it came from the NEC, it's dated. Every section has it's own BBY year or a specific span of years. A lot of times (as in this case) the date is given in parentheses. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 23:40, April 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) ***Cool, thanks for letting me know that.
 * 8) * I might link sky to atmosphere, but that's just me.
 * 9) **Good thought. Pretty much like Realspace. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 23:40, April 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) * I'm assuming we don't know the name of the poem?
 * 11) **Do not. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 23:40, April 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 12) * Per Imperators, why the musicians category? If he was a musician as well as a poet, or if the poem was also a piece of music, that should be mentioned.
 * 13) **He wasn't a musician. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 23:40, April 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 14) *Aside from that, nice work.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 22:53, April 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 15) Trayus
 * 16) *Per them, but also, is there an article for the poem itself? Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 22:58, April 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 17) **Made a redlink. I'll fill it later. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 23:40, April 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 18) ***Created. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 17:53, May 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * Can you add categories for gender and species? ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 05:33, May 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * D'oh. I hate it when I know I'm forgetting something. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 07:08, May 1, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Cunning of Tyranus

 * Nominated by:  OLIOSTER  (talk) 14:46, April 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Its not a painting!

(0 ECs/2 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) LIES! It paints the lightsaber red. N  AYAYEN  14:51, April 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 21:41, April 28, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) SavageBob
 * 2) *Can we get just a smidgen more of context on who Count Dooku is? That he's a Human and the Separatist ruler would be good. ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 05:35, May 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Done.  OLIOSTER  (talk) 05:27, May 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) Imperators II
 * 5) *I wonder if it should be added that the crystal itself was red.  Imperators II (Talk) 15:44, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Otavon XII's second moon

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 05:37, April 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Arbitrary numbering is arbitrary.

(1 ECs/2 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) Nice.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 00:22, April 29, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2)  Imperators II (Talk) 21:20, April 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Over the moon. ~  Savage  BOB sig.png 05:38, May 1, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) I find the first sentence a bit lengthy. Do you think you could split it into two just for ease of reading, or maybe replace a couple of commas with emdashes?&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 21:44, April 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *I subbed in Jon's version. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 00:00, April 29, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Tree-drum music

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 04:39, May 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: First CAN of the Barn Burner now that it has officially commenced. You guys were early!

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) I can't get the image of Chewie the metalhead out of my head. ~  Savage  BOB sig.png 17:10, May 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *How's this for some tree-drum music? NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 19:09, May 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **File:Awesome.jpg :P&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 21:27, May 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) In Star Wars, there are no throw-away mentions.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 17:45, May 1, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * From the quote, it sounds like Chewbacca may not have actually performed tree-drum music, but played it on a holo-record player or something. Should the text be amended to allow for this ambiguity, or does the OS go into more detail and explicitly name Chewie as a rock star? ;) ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 05:44, May 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * (To the Fanfic Mobile!) Does simply saying "played" allow for that ambiguity, IYO? NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 07:04, May 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * Ambiguous enough for me! ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 17:10, May 1, 2011 (UTC)

Comments
 * Could someone could help me find the post in the SW.com holocron forum that confirms Chewie and Mal were married in 2 BBY? I need a screenshot before the forums go down. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 04:39, May 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * --- Leland confirms there that Lumpy is born in 1 BBY (but, uh, change the access date if you're going to cite it :P). Rebel Dawn indicates that a year passes between the wedding and the birth. Menkooroo 07:05, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

88th Mechanized Assault Group

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 02:45, May 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Why aren't these just one group?

(0 ECs/2 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) Cool&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 17:19, May 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2)  Imperators II (Talk) 15:39, May 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) I never would have thought of making an article on something from the pocketmodels. Good job.--Exiledjedi 18:58, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Axinal
 * 2) * Should 4 BBY be 4 ABY?&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 15:50, May 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Remedied. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 17:11, May 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) * Also, the article needs a BTS.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 15:51, May 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) **Added. (There's that feeling again) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 17:11, May 2, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

221st Mechanized Assault Group

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 02:45, May 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Because canon, that's why.

(0 ECs/2 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 17:19, May 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2)  Imperators II (Talk) 15:40, May 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Exiledjedi 19:00, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Axinal
 * 2) * As with 88th, needs a BTS, and should 4 BBY be 4 ABY?
 * 3) **It should. I work in one era too much. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 17:09, May 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) * Also, as the infobox and intro identify the group as part of the Imperial Remnant, the history section should also include that information.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 15:56, May 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) **Please ignore that there was a History section. Not my doing. The original version had that info. I don't see any blueish hue on the figure and there is no baseline TIE Crawler to compare its defensive capabilities with. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 17:09, May 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) ***After taking another look at its stats, I think its fair enough to say they were augmented for defense because they have no attack modifier and a higher defense than the 88th's tanks. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 17:28, May 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) ****Works for me.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 17:31, May 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) *****The blaster modifications are canon, as they are part of the game piece description symbols. The countermeasures are a canon game effect of the stats. It is basically a forced miss of an attack. In ships, this would be maneuverability, whereas in slower-moving ground assault units this would be countermeasures. It is not a shield result, because shields are calculated differently in the game. The mention of the coloring of the vehicles is according to the art on the actual game pieces. 221st TIE crawlers are more a lighter blue than the others.  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 13:34, May 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) ******The 221st and the 88th are both blue colored. The 71st and 98th are both dark gray colored.  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 13:47, May 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) *******"Defense-augmented" is a good way to avoid saying for sure what prevents accurate attack. Might be a better way to say it, but I can't think of one right now.  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 21:16, May 3, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Belyssa Romey

 * Nominated by: Eyrezer 08:53, May 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Just to break up the barn-burner

(0 ECs/2 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 14:04, May 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2)  Imperators II (Talk) 15:29, May 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Coolio. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 21:12, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Axinal
 * 2) * I'm thinking it might be worthwhile to move the intro to a Biography section and give a short intro. If not, Rebel Alliance would need to be linked in the P&T.
 * 3) **No, the intro/bio is only 50 words long. An intro is unnecessary as there is insufficient information to need a summary and there is certainly precedent for not needing one. Similarly, in these articles a second link is not added in the P&T. --Eyrezer 09:47, May 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Just a suggestion, but this is fine with me.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 14:04, May 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) * Should there be an asterisk beside 132nd Forward Division rather than a blank space?
 * 6) **I think that looks ugly, but NaruHina has already added one anyway. --Eyrezer 09:47, May 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) *Otherwise, nice.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 16:05, May 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) "She achieved the rank of Major, at which time she was an officer in the 132nd Forward Division, which was stationed in the Atrivis sector,[1] located in the northwest region of the Outer Rim Territories." This is a run-on.  NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 21:24, May 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) *Simplified. --Eyrezer 09:47, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Ree Ohr

 * Nominated by: QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 12:15, May 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: A character so obscure, nobody has bothered to create an article for her for all these years. A rarity, to say the least.

(0 ECs/1 Users/1 Total)
Support
 * 1) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 15:29, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Axinal
 * 2) * I think some of the phrases in the first sentence should be swapped around, as the way it's written right now implies that the Clone Wars was the site of a battle between the Republic and the CIS. Otherwise, a well-written article.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 16:10, May 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Addressed. QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 14:53, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Gwend

 * Nominated by: &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 19:25, May 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: How come I hadn't heard of the barn-burner before yesterday?! I'll definitely have to do something with that before the end of the month.

(0 ECs/0 Users/0 Total)
Support
 * 1) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 21:21, May 2, 2011 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Sunchoo's village

 * Nominated by: Bonslywizard  Naboo.svg ( Send a transmission ) 00:47, May 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Boredom-driven barn-burner goodness.

(0 ECs/2 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 01:29, May 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2)  Imperators II (Talk) 17:01, May 5, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Axinal
 * 2) * Sorry, but what's up with the "{{Quote|" at the beginning?&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 00:48, May 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **EEK! Wow, that's embarrassing... o_O Bonslywizard  Naboo.svg {{sup|( Send a transmission )}} 00:54, May 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Happens to the best of us, Bonsly. :P&mdash; Axinal  {{sup|Convocation Chamber}} 01:04, May 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) * Please add "Sunchoo's village" to the "name" field in the infobox.
 * 6) * I would specify the names of the Jedi that freed her.&mdash; Axinal  {{sup|Convocation Chamber}} 01:04, May 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) * In the BTS: "However, Sunchoo's village only appears in one of these story strands, so this article assumes that one." Assumes that one what? Is canonical? Please add clarity here.&mdash; Axinal  {{sup|Convocation Chamber}} 01:04, May 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) * Can the fact that Kashyyyk is a Mid Rim planet be sourced to The Way of the Jedi?&mdash; Axinal  {{sup|Convocation Chamber}} 01:04, May 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) **Alright, thanks for the review! Bonslywizard  Naboo.svg {{sup|( Send a transmission )}} 01:23, May 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) ***No problem, and nice work. I've added Category:Kashyyyk locations to the article.&mdash; Axinal  {{sup|Convocation Chamber}} 01:29, May 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) Jeff:
 * 12) *Appearances section?
 * 13) *Also, is the village {{Mo}}? If so, the bts should say "Sunchoo's village is only mentioned" rather than "only appears." Menkooroo 07:11, May 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * 14) **Nope, it appears. And sorry about Appearances. That really is pretty ridiculous. O__O Bonslywizard  Naboo.svg {{sup|( Send a transmission )}} 23:29, May 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * 15) Imperators II
 * 16) * Seriously, "Appearances"?
 * 17) ** Also, if The Way of the Jedi is its only appearance, the "first" in the Bts section would hardly be necessary.  Imperators II (Talk) 15:22, May 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * 18) * Shouldn't "the" be added before "Mid Rim"?
 * 19) **I'm sure it could. But I'm also pretty sure it's grammatically correct without "the". Why do I write like that? Cuz Imma rebel.
 * 20) ***If you say so. I'm no English grammar expert.
 * 21) * I'd change "during or before" to "circa", since it's less speculative.
 * 22) * Ummm, it looks like there should be a link to Jedi Initiate, not youngling (since Kos was a Jedi). Also, I think it should be specified they were Jedi.  Imperators II {{sup|(Talk)}} 15:18, May 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * 23) **I would, but the book only refers to Kos as a youngling, not an Initiate, and since only one was officially a Jedi in this story strand, I tried to avoid referring to them both as Jedi. Everything else should be fixed, though. Bonslywizard  Naboo.svg {{sup|( Send a transmission )}} 23:29, May 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * 24) *** Yes, but I'm assuming that the novel refers to Kos as a Jedi youngling (a synonym to "Jedi Initiate"), not just some random child. Or am I wrong? If I'm right, it should be linked accordingly.  Imperators II {{sup|(Talk)}} 23:48, May 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * 25) ****Nope, you got it right. :P Fixed. So's the other objection. Bonslywizard  Naboo.svg {{sup|( Send a transmission )}} 01:49, May 5, 2011 (UTC)

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Jurgan Kalta's carbine

 * Nominated by: Exiledjedi 17:13, May 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: My first comprehensive article nomination.

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 * 1) Nice work.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 20:24, May 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) N  AYAYEN  09:29, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

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 * 1) Axinal
 * 2) * While I'm not sure this is technically a rule, I'm often told not to link the bolded word(s) in the intro.
 * 3) * Is the entry title in the strategy guide misspelled, or is the misspelling just in the entry's text? If the title itself misspells it, you should probably have ("Jurgan Kalta's Combine") next to the guide's title in the Sources section.
 * 4) *Gave the article a couple of minor copy-edits. Other than that, very nice.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 20:09, May 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) **I fixed all of these problems.--Exiledjedi 20:16, May 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) Nayayen
 * 7) * If an infobox image is less than 250px wide, it should be left at its full size and (ideally) the |imagebg= parameter filled with the average colour of the edges of the image. At any rate, it shouldn't be scaled up to 250px. I may see if I can get a bigger version of it for you.
 * 8) * Can you find a way to reword the Characteristics line? The repetition of much more powerful/more powerful/much more accurate is grating, You could change the "even more powerful" to "especially effective" or something.
 * 9) *Good otherwise, just goes to show that the backgrounds to some of the weapons in KOTOR are surprisingly detailed :P. N  AYAYEN  21:20, May 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) **I shrunk the image down to its normal size, but I was not sure about what background to use. I also reworded the characteristics section.--Exiledjedi 22:13, May 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) Imperators II
 * 12) *I think a brief description of the carbine's visual appearance (color, components, etc.) should be added, as, for example, here.  Imperators II (Talk) 15:02, May 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * 13) **I added the material and the article is currently 254 words, so should I move it to the good article nomination page or should I try to trim the word count?-- Exiled Jedi Greetings 03:56, May 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 14) ***I say don't trim it; just ask in the comments for an EC to remove it, and add it to the GANs.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 03:57, May 5, 2011 (UTC)

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 * No quotes are available for this article.--Exiledjedi 17:13, May 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * The article is now 254 words, and thus qualifies for GA status.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 03:56, May 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * I'm going to take this article over to the good article nominations page. Please remove it from the list of nominations here.-- Exiled Jedi Greetings 04:07, May 5, 2011 (UTC)

Oola's father

 * Nominated by: Winchester 327 22:33, May 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: This is my first nomination. Obscure, but twenty years of sources to gather.

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 * 1) Axinal
 * 2) *A nice looking article, I must say; however, before I give it a more thorough review, you should know that per CAN rule #14 (see above), an article that is over 200 words must at least attempt to create an intro to bring the word count to 250 or more. I suggest breaking what's currently written into biography/personality and traits sections and adding a brief intro. This should then be ready for a good article nomination.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 22:38, May 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Crap, rewording things is proving harder than I thought. There isn't any additional information to use. Should I pull it off the noms list until I figure it out? Winchester 327 23:59, May 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) ***I wouldn't say that's totally necessary. I'd say just finish writing the intro and see if it brings it over 250 (you're at 228 now). If it does, just ask in the comments section for the nomination to be removed, and one of the ECs will take care of it. In that case, you can take as much time as you need to reword it. If the addition of an intro doesn't take it over 250, the rewording won't be necessary at all.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 03:06, May 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) ****There we go. Finished the intro and reworded the bio a bit for readability. 248 words by my count. I'm unclear on whether I should be linking pages mentioned in the intro again in the bio, however, and do I need to put the table of contents back in? Winchester 327 05:52, May 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) *****Cool, nice work. At this point, you have a few options: 1) You could add in a few adverbs/adjectives to bring the word count to 250 and nominate as a good article. 2) Because the intro didn't necessarily bring the word count to 250, you could remove it entirely and leave the article the way it was before. 3) You could leave the article just the way it is and leave it as a CAN. Options 1 and 3 are probably better than 2, but because it's your article, it's your choice. As for linking, yes, everything possible should be linked once in the infobox, once in the intro, and once in the main body. And yes, please keep the ToC in.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 09:13, May 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) *****Actually, I would leave the article the way it is for right now, because I wouldn't be surprised if other users asked you to add/clarify something, which could bring the article over 250 anyway. I'll also give the article a more thorough review.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 14:11, May 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) ******Thanks; I went ahead with the ToC, but otherwise I'll leave the article as-is for now. Winchester 327 17:27, May 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) Imperators II
 * 10) * Since Category:Heads of government and state is also for "tribal chieftains", I believe it should be added, as well. That would cover his occupation.  Imperators II (Talk) 14:43, May 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) **Awesome, added it. Does Category:Unidentified political figures apply as well? Winchester 327 17:27, May 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * 12) ***I think so, since, being a chief of a clan, he was involved in planetary "political matters". Good catch!  Imperators II (Talk) 17:40, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

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Jurgan Kalta's assault rifle

 * Nominated by: Exiledjedi 22:38, May 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Jurgan Kalta item number 2

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 * 1) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 23:02, May 3, 2011 (UTC)

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 * 1) Axinal
 * 2) * As with Jurgan Kalta's carbine, please delink the bolded words.
 * 3) * Also, was the assault rifle also a carbine? In the introduction, you write, "Sometime after Kalta's death, this carbine..." I'm assuming this is a copy and paste error, which I myself often make.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 22:47, May 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) **Yeah I just missed these two things when I went back to the article to fix my mistakes. They are fixed now.--Exiledjedi 22:58, May 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) ***That's all I have; nice work.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 23:02, May 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) Imperators II
 * 7) *Why isn't the range that is mentioned in Bts added to the infobox, then?  Imperators II (Talk) 17:19, May 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) **I was told by Tm T that the range is just game mechanics, so it should not be included as the actual range of the weapon.-- Exiled Jedi Greetings 17:55, May 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) ***Isn't the range of this weapon game mechanics too, then?  Imperators II (Talk) 18:20, May 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) ****See Good article nominations/Jurgan Kalta's carbine, I guess it's better keep discussion in one place about this. –Tm_T (Talk) 18:58, May 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) Tm_T
 * 12) *And now I'm spreading, oh well: This weapon was his favorite over what?
 * 13) *I began to wonder if one could mention what bonuses the weapon has over the regular ones, something like in Bts of Ossluk's gloves. Same goes to the other weapon nomination of yours. (: –Tm_T (Talk) 18:58, May 5, 2011 (UTC)

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 * No quotes are available for this article.--Exiledjedi 22:38, May 3, 2011 (UTC)

Zherriak

 * Nominated by: &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 17:06, May 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Barn-burner nom

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 * 1)  Imperators II (Talk) 23:16, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

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