Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Permafrost crystal


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Permafrost crystal

 * Nominated by:  OLIOSTER  (talk) 17:45, November 10, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Ambiguity from SWG!

(2 ECs/0 Users/2 Total)
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 * 1)  1358  (Talk) 20:07, November 10, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2)  SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 06:27, November 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3)  Holocron Greatholocron.jpg (Complain) 06:50, November 15, 2010 (UTC)

Object SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie the truth  ) 21:53, November 12, 2010 (UTC)
 * 1) Soresu
 * 2) * Is "permafrost" capitalised in the source (aside fromit being used at the beginning of sentences, of course), or is it another ambiguous thing?
 * 3) **Its name is barely mentioned in both its sources, but on the card name it is capitalized and it is also capitalized in its item description from SWG. Here is a picture for clarity.  OLIOSTER  (talk) 21:59, November 12, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) *** There's some stuff missing in the article then. Cost as well as the tuning (important) need to be expanded on. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 20:46, November 13, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) ****The cost is game mechanics and is noted in the Bts, and added the information about the tuning.  OLIOSTER  (talk) 20:54, November 13, 2010 (UTC)
 * 6) ***** Two things still missing: "focusing crystal" and "the crystal must be tuned by a Jedi before use." Remember, articles of this length must cover all available information. Just as an additional question, does the use of "Jedi" mean that only lightsiders can tune it, or is it just a figure of speech for force-sensitive? SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 01:01, November 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * 7) ******It's just a figure of speech, a blanket term they use for the profession that uses force powers and lightsabers, which is why I used Force-sensitive. Added the focusing crystal bit.  OLIOSTER  (talk) 01:07, November 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * 8) * Remember that it's a good idea to remove the TOC using if an article has no intro.
 * 9) **Done.  OLIOSTER  (talk) 21:59, November 12, 2010 (UTC)

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