Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Dorotsech

Dorotsech

 * Nominated by: Winterz 12:47, May 21, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: I believe it complies with all requirements so would like to try. If I don't succeed well at least I'll know what is wrong and may improve it. It has around 400 words.

Objections, objections&hellip;

 * Hey, you should kill the redlink in the intro.&mdash; 13:22, May 21, 2012 (UTC)
 * A P&T section would be good, too. It can be short, considering he doesn't look like he says much. Also, see if you can get a at least 1 quote, from either himself, the apprentice, whoever.&mdash; 13:28, May 21, 2012 (UTC)
 * Done. However a confusion came up and I had to switch a few details...(it was Lord Grathan and not Skotia who captured him) so now there's another red link in the biography..should I take care of it?Winterz 17:49, May 21, 2012 (UTC)
 * You can, though it's not extremely necessary now.
 * Since I haven't played the game, it seems to me, going by what is stated in the P&T, that Nox is the apprentice who slew Dorotsech. If this is the case, please mention it in the bio.&mdash; 18:10, May 21, 2012 (UTC)
 * In the future, you might want to watch the linking, as it's a good idea to link to an article at the first opportunity. Don't get discouraged, because criticism is a good thing, and serves to help you become a better editor. If you need some assistance, I and others would be happy to provide advice.&mdash; 18:14, May 21, 2012 (UTC)
 * Argh I had it linked to Darth Nox but for some reason, I unlinked it. Either way, it's fixed now. So..anything else until I gain your support? Winterz 18:23, May 21, 2012 (UTC)

Exiled Jedi

 * If the quest was only available for one class please mention what class that was in the Behind the scenes section.
 * You need to add a personality and traits section to add anything about the character's mannerisms, appearance, and any notable features of his personality. This includes the information about his hair color, eye color, and skin color.
 * Anything in the article's introduction should be mentioned in the body of the article. On a related note, the introduction should probably be expanded.
 * I look it over again once you're through with these. Good for you for going ahead and nominating a GA. Don't feel bad if their are a lot of objections on your first one. While this article will require a fair amount of work, I think it will be a good learning experience for you. Just stick with it and you will do fine.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  13:38, May 21, 2012 (UTC)
 * Done, done and done. However, is the physical description really necessary in the P&t section? Winterz 17:51, May 21, 2012 (UTC)