Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Jenny (Artorias)


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Jenny (Artorias)

 * Nominated by: &mdash;Master Jonathan(Jedi Council Chambers) 23:29, January 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Well, getting into the Invasion comics has finally inspired me to stop being lazy and write another article. This is my first serious attempt at a character, so let me know if I did anything wrong. &mdash;Master Jonathan(Jedi Council Chambers) 23:29, January 28, 2010 (UTC)

(3 ACs/4 Users/7 Total)
Support
 * 1) Excellent job.  Darth Karika Please leave a message after the beep. *boom* 02:25, January 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Jedi Kasra (comlink) 19:49, January 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 22:40, January 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4)  Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 22:10, January 31, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5)  Grunny  ( Talk ) 02:04, February 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * 6) Short'n'sweet human =P Xd1358  Talk 13:48, February 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * 7)  CC7567  (talk) 17:16, February 1, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) The Grand Master
 * 2) * A few minor things to which I'm going to object just so that you know to watch out for them in the future:
 * 3) * Contextification for Nina and Kaye in the intro.
 * 4) **Nina has been contextified. After reconsidering, the intro reference to Kaye was removed altogether, as she's not relevant to the intro.
 * 5) * Is there anyway you can mention Finn in the article so that he doesn't have to be linked in the quote? (i.e. was he also a friend of Jenny's? Or you could even mention somewhere that Jenny asked about him)
 * 6) **Done.
 * 7) * I'm assuming the pot was hit by a Vong weapon, but right now it just sounds like the pot was a bomb of its own, exploding by itself. Please clarify.
 * 8) **The comic gives absolutely no indication as to what caused it to explode; it just shows it exploding. It could be a Vong weapon or something related to the much bigger explosion three panels later, but that would be speculation.
 * 9) * Also, can we say for sure that her homeworld is Artorias?
 * 10) **Removed.
 * 11) *Nice work. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 21:01, January 31, 2010 (UTC)
 * 12) **Thanks for the review. &mdash;Master Jonathan(Jedi Council Chambers) 22:00, January 31, 2010 (UTC)
 * 13) With the qualifications for being Human currently under debate, I feel compelled to inquire if it's directly stated that she is human. If it isn't, saying so qualifies as speculation.  CC7567  (talk) 07:41, February 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * 14) *Personally, I feel that the duck test is sufficient to call someone Human in the absence of evidence to the contrary, but I've changed it to "humanoid". &mdash;Master Jonathan(Jedi Council Chambers) 15:56, February 1, 2010 (UTC)

Comments


 * Short and simple at 286 words. There's really nothing else that can be done with the P&T, as she's injured on the same page that she's first introduced on, and she does basically nothing after that except lay there and eventually die. &mdash;Master Jonathan(Jedi Council Chambers) 23:29, January 28, 2010 (UTC)