Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Artruk


 * ''The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.

Artruk

 * Nominated by:  JangFett  (Talk) 04:44, May 16, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Another webcomic extra, I guess. :P

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  22:38, May 16, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 21:06, May 18, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) Toprawa and Ralltiir 00:40, May 19, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) -- 1358  (Talk) 04:53, May 19, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) And here comes the last vote. Kreivi Wolter 09:58, May 19, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) And here comes Kreivi
 * 2) * "Soon, Artruk and Argente entered a holographic meeting with tactical droid TX-20 and Separatist Council member, Emir Wat Tambor." First, TX-20? This, this, and this articles tells that the droid presented in the comic is TA-175. And secondly, "entered a holographic meeting". This seems to indicate that Artruk and Argente were contacted by Tambor and his droid, while in reality they were secretly spied by the pair through Tambor's spy droid.
 * 3) **Addressed
 * 4) * What caused Tambor to change Ryloth's priority number?
 * 5) **Addressed
 * 6) ***I do believe it wasn't Artruk's "discussion about Ryloth" what make Tambor to invade Ryloth, but rather the treasures Artruk was hiding on the city.
 * 7) ****Yeah, addressed.
 * 8) * Per rule 16, could you add at least one more image? Kreivi Wolter 15:44, May 16, 2010 (UTC)
 * 9) **Addressed. Thanks for the review.  JangFett  (Talk) 16:35, May 16, 2010 (UTC)
 * 10) He lived "in the planet Ryloth"? Someone can't live inside a planet unless they're underground. This is only a passing objection, but please make sure that there aren't other errors like this lying around.  CC7567  (talk) 17:45, May 16, 2010 (UTC)
 * 11) *Yeah, addressed.  JangFett  (Talk) 17:55, May 16, 2010 (UTC)
 * 12) From the Moffship of Grand Moff Tranner:
 * 13) * Last paragraph in the bio is missing a final reference.
 * 14) * Also for the bio, you may want to mention that the Confederacy did invade Ryloth (and cite it with the proper reference, of course).
 * 15) *Nice job. Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 20:26, May 18, 2010 (UTC)
 * 16) **Both addressed; thanks for the review, Tranner.  JangFett  (Talk) 20:58, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

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