Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Vril Vrakth


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Vril Vrakth

 * Nominated by: Jinzler 16:30, 11 June 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: a Zabrak bounty hunter

(5 Inqs/0 Users/5 Total/INQCON 5)
Support
 * 1) Voted for on FAN. This poor guy's been neglected.  IFYLOFD  ( You will pay the price for your lack of vision! ) 05:29, 27 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) Per Floyd's former, but I'm assuming that he means "GAN".  CC7567  (talk) 23:28, 2 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) -  —Harrar  ( Cut the comm chatter ) 13:00, 4 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) Toprawa and Ralltiir 19:27, 4 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) Very well done. &mdash;  Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 03:18, 5 August 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Harrar
 * 2) * (Last section) "Vrakth believed that luring them to Point Gold would allow himself to defeat them, and planned to then turn the tide of the revolt, and hoped to be rewarded by the Empire for saving the operation on Nizon." &mdash; two quibbles with this sentence. First "to then turn" is a split infinitive, which few people seem to care about anymore but which should probably be avoided in the interests of professionalism. The other quibble is the "and planned...and hoped"; it reads repetitively.
 * 3) **Rephrased --Jinzler 12:35, 4 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) *That's it! Well done. What always amazes me when you create these hundreds of articles is how the writers managed to come up with so many interesting back-stories and personalities! -- —Harrar  ( Cut the comm chatter ) 11:29, 4 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) **They certainly put a lot of work into making Star Wars interesting :) --Jinzler 12:35, 4 August 2009 (UTC)

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