User talk:Master Jonathan

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 Copy-edit requests: 
 * If you are requesting a copy-edit, start a new section for each request. Please do not place new requests under old headings. Multiple articles should not be placed under a single heading unless they are requested simultaneously.
 * If you want a pre-nom review or word count with the copy-edit, please explicitly say so in the request, otherwise I will perform a copy-edit only. Keep in mind that I am not a member of any reviewing panel and rarely conduct reviews, so my review might not be as thorough as what you would get from an Inquisitor or AgriCorps member. Adding a pre-nom review to your request may lengthen the response time.
 * Unless I have a Vacation notice above, I will try to perform the copy-edit within 48 hours (72 hours if a review is requested also). If I need more time, I will let you know under the request as soon as possible.
 * Although there are no limits (minimum or maximum) on the length of articles I will accept, keep in mind that shorter articles will generally receive quicker responses than longer articles. Extremely long articles (approx. 75 KB or larger) may be done over multiple days.
 * If you leave an Inuse tag on the article, I will interpret your request as implicit permission to edit through said tag. If you don't want me to do this, please say so. I will use my own Inuse tag if I expect to spend more than 10–15 minutes on the article.'''

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Isila Drutch
Hi, could you give Isila Drutch a copyedit? I am not sure about the note, as this is the first time I've done one. Thanks, 501st  dogma ( talk ) 23:48, May 28, 2012 (UTC)


 * Done. The note looks great. Let me know if you have any other questions. &mdash;MJ&mdash; Comlink Tuesday, May 29, 2012, 00:51 UTC


 * Thanks for the copyedit! 501st  dogma ( talk ) 21:19, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

Ahn Rasi Tuum
Hi, Jon. Could you please copy-edit and pre-nom review Ahn Rasi Tuum for me? Thanks in advance.&mdash; 20:27, May 29, 2012 (UTC)


 * Done. One objection:
 * "As Sazen finished expressing his belief that successfully finding Skywalker was vital, Tuum was impaled by a spear, which was thrown by one of the Sith that were hiding in the shadows in order to ambush the Jedi.": Can you try to introduce the Sith a little earlier? Right now, they just drop in out of nowhere, and it left me going "wait, what?" Something like, "Unknown to the Jedi, there were Sith..."
 * Taken care of.
 * Otherwise, looks great. Welcome back to the wiki! &mdash;MJ&mdash; War Room Tuesday, May 29, 2012, 21:13 UTC
 * Thanks, Jon, it's great to be back.&mdash; 21:17, May 29, 2012 (UTC)
 * Article should be good to go now. &mdash;MJ&mdash; Council Chambers Tuesday, May 29, 2012, 21:20 UTC
 * Thanks for the review and copy-edit, just nommed it.&mdash; 21:25, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

CVI
I just booked my flight a few minutes ago, Souderwan set me up with a room at the Villa on TFN, so I am a definite will-be-there. So, yes, I am definitely interested in the exhibitor's pass. Now, the focus will be on general travel expenses, since the hard part has been taken care of.  Trak Nar  Ramble on 02:44, June 4, 2012 (UTC)


 * Great! You've already been flagged with CVIpass on the signup list, so it's yours. :) &mdash;MJ&mdash; Council Chambers Monday, June 4, 2012, 03:45 UTC

Re: Signature
Haha, the break isn't actually part of my signature. I just type that.&mdash; Eшσҡ  $їтӈ Lōяƌ  22:04, June 5, 2012 (UTC) see? &mdash; Eшσҡ  $їтӈ Lōяƌ  22:04, June 5, 2012 (UTC)


 * Whether it's actually present in your preferences or signature template doesn't matter. If you are typing it before your signature manually, then it still qualifies as part of your signature. Please stop using it. &mdash;MJ&mdash;</b> Jedi Council Chambers</b> Tuesday, June 5, 2012, 22:16 UTC
 * Just out of curiosity, why can't I put a break there? I was just putting it there because I thought it looked nicer with the signature underneath the message.  I wasn't aware that it counted as part of my signature.&mdash; Eшσҡ   $їтӈ Lōяƌ  23:12, June 5, 2012 (UTC)
 * "Signature" is actually not specifically defined in policy. I'm assuming that it counts as part of the signature, but I'll check with others to see if I'm misinterpreting things. &mdash;MJ&mdash;</b> War Room</b> Wednesday, June 6, 2012, 00:51 UTC
 * See Forum:NB:Definition of "signature". &mdash;MJ&mdash;</b> Council Chambers</b> Wednesday, June 6, 2012, 01:10 UTC
 * Haha thanks. Sorry Culator kind of got pissed at you.  It's not a problem.  I'll stop putting it there.&mdash; Eшσҡ   $їтӈ Lōяƌ  02:46, June 6, 2012 (UTC)
 * Oh, Culator's not mad at MJ... -- Darth Culator  (Talk) 02:48, June 6, 2012 (UTC)

New TCW Timeline
Hey Jon. When you get the chance, would you mind weighing in on the proposal here on implementing the new TCW timeline? Thanks.  CC7567  (talk) 01:30, June 9, 2012 (UTC)


 * I requested the book from the library a few days ago (for the second time because they sent me the original version the first time), and I am waiting on it to arrive so I can look at the timeline with my own eyes before I give my opinions. Although based on the listing in the holds section of my library account, I fear the book in transit is the wrong version again... &mdash;MJ&mdash;</b> Jedi Council Chambers</b> Saturday, June 9, 2012, 02:38 UTC

Shepherd
Hi, could you give Shepherd a copyedit? Thanks, 501st  dogma ( talk ) 16:44, June 14, 2012 (UTC)


 * Done. Let me know if you have any questions. &mdash;MJ&mdash;</b> Holocomm</b> Friday, June 15, 2012, 02:09 UTC


 * Thanks! 501st  dogma ( talk ) 11:30, June 15, 2012 (UTC)

Varko
Hey Jon, could you please give Varko a copy-edit, review, and a word count? I think I got him to GA standards, but not completely sure. Thanks in advance!&mdash; 07:01, June 18, 2012 (UTC)


 * Done. I have no objections. :) Let me know if you have any questions. &mdash;MJ&mdash;</b> Council Chambers</b> Monday, June 18, 2012, 19:09 UTC
 * Thanks, Jon. I'll nom it now.&mdash; 21:59, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

Clarification,please?
Just for clarification sake, the "50 main namespace edits" you mentioned per the voting guidelines is the same thing as the edits stat on my contributions page, correct?ShannarythVenhallyn 16:46, June 18, 2012 (UTC)


 * No, that's your total edits to all namespaces, which is irrelevant. The important number can be found at Special:Editcount/ShannarythVenhallyn; it is the number immediately to the right of "(Main)" (currently 21 as I type this). You need to get that up to at least 50 before you can cast votes. :) &mdash;MJ&mdash;</b> Holocomm</b> Monday, June 18, 2012, 18:07 UTC

The search
Hello there! Would you be willing to give The search for Captain Kael a copy-edit and review? Thanks! Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 16:31, June 19, 2012 (UTC)


 * Done. Objections:
 * Please find a different title for the first level 3 heading. Using the same title for both it and the parent heading immediately above it is redundant and a bit awkward.
 * "During the skirmish, he went through the middle of the mining camp and passed under an energy field, which had a strange regenerative effect on his craft's shields." Based on the statement about this in the BTS, the shield replenishing effect seems to be pure game mechanics. Unless there is a non–game mechanic reason why this should stay (and I highly doubt that because of the 100% game completion template), it and the BTS statement need to be removed.
 * "Players assume the role of Sykes and pilot a Flash speeder as the mission's default craft." What is a Flash speeder? I know it's the Seraph, but you never make that connection. Please clarify for the reader who may be unaware of that.
 * "The betrayal of the mining camp happens during a cutscene and it is necessary to destroy the camp before proceeding." Not necessary. There's no reason to explain one piece of the gameplay like this; the simple lack of a 100% game completion template on those events is enough to make it clear that they are mandatory, and it's not necessary to specify what portions occur in a cutscene and what occurs in gameplay.
 * Let me know if you have any further questions. &mdash;MJ&mdash;</b> Holocomm</b> Tuesday, June 19, 2012, 17:11 UTC