Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/StarMark III Hyperdrive


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StarMark III Hyperdrive

 * Nominated by: LelalMekha (talk) 14:57, June 19, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  21:54, June 20, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) Ayrehead02 (talk) 23:24, June 22, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) -  Princess   GLG  02:35, June 25, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 23:35, July 4, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * I agree with Ayrehead, I think that mentioning the purchase of the hyperdrive should be in the body. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  15:28, June 20, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) **There you are. --LelalMekha (talk) 21:45, June 20, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) How about a link for the spaceship? It seems important enough.  501st  dogma ( talk ) 12:36, June 22, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) *Done. It seems that I had missed that objection. --LelalMekha (talk) 16:20, July 4, 2013 (UTC)
 * 6) Ayrehead
 * 7) * Instead of saying he or she could you say they?
 * 8) **Well, I suppose so. --LelalMekha (talk) 15:29, June 22, 2013 (UTC)
 * 9) * I don't think we're meant to called unnamed characters unidentified in article bodies you should just say a spacer. Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:03, June 22, 2013 (UTC)
 * 10) **Fixed. --LelalMekha (talk) 15:29, June 22, 2013 (UTC)
 * 11) I'm not sure why, but I'm confused by the first sentence. Should it not be for spaceships? I also think perhaps you should specify that it is for interstellar travel in the body. (Although you don't have to if you don't think it's necessary, as I'm debating whether it is necessary myself.) -  Princess   GLG  22:20, June 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * 12) *I just fixed the "spaceship(s)" typo, but I don't think the addition you suggest is mandatory. After all, the body of the article already says it's an hyperdrive unit, a kind of device that is used for interestellar travel by definition. --LelalMekha (talk) 23:02, June 24, 2013 (UTC)

Comments
 * Is there any indication as to what ships this component could be compatible with? Does the game ever reveal what starship you use to get off Tatooine?  Stake black   msg 15:08, June 19, 2013 (UTC)
 * No. Your ship gets rebuilt from scratch. --LelalMekha (talk) 15:13, June 19, 2013 (UTC)
 * Shouldn't you say that a spacer purchased one whilst building a ship from scratch while attempting to get off Tatooine? In a 100% game completion template. Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:23, June 19, 2013 (UTC)
 * Yousa right. --LelalMekha (talk) 21:45, June 20, 2013 (UTC)