Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Orko


 * ''The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.

Orko the H'unn (+3)

 * 1) I think he's a lovable character and the Info. I put in and added seem to sum him up. Nominated by your's truly, Jabbathehuttgartogg  [[Image:Desilijic Clan (Jabba’s Tattoo) .jpg|20px]] [[Image:Desilijic Clan (Jabba’s Tattoo) .jpg|20px]] 18:46, 9 September 2006 (UTC)
 * 2) I just finished cleaning it up so Xwing you may want to reconsider. Emperor Ugluk 16:14, 1 October 2006 (UTC)
 * 3) Thanks for fixing it up! 22:09, 2 October 2006 (UTC)
 * 4)  - breathesgelatin Talk 15:23, 3 October 2006 (UTC)
 * 5) --Eyrezer 22:13, 3 October 2006 (UTC)

Objections
 * 1)  00:09, 21 September 2006 (UTC)

Comments
 * Some of the grammar and wording of this article needs to be fixed. Some of it does not make sense to unacquainted readers, and since I don't have the sources, I can't do anything more for it. If it is fixed up a bit, I'll gladly support its nomination. 00:09, 21 September 2006 (UTC)
 * OK, I still have a few questions and suggestions. Hopefully you can help.
 * In the Crime lord rivals section, instead of saying "the two families", consider stating the names of the families. Is it the Desilijic and H'unn clans?
 * In Plans of betrayal, what is a misguage?
 * In Aftermath, how did Ry-Kooda die, and how was Anachro saved? Also, what is the name of Orko's grandchild?
 * Thanks 18:55, 1 October 2006 (UTC)


 * Done. -- Jabbathehuttgartogg ( Rancor pit ) [[Image:Grappa's Tattoo.jpg|20px]] 21:55, 2 October 2006 (UTC)