Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Detien Kaileel


 * ''The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.

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Support Oppose Comments
 * 1) -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 22:29, 29 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) Take this to FA. Toprawa and Ralltiir 18:57, 2 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 3)  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  19:52, 7 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) Greyman ( Talk ) 15:33, 13 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) supergeeky1 [[Image:BobaFett.jpg|20px]] The Cantina 00:06, 22 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 1) * Do we know why things went badly? Presumably not, but elaborate if we do: "Things on Mantooine did not go very well"
 * 2) **Nope, he started to explain to Crimson but never got a chance.
 * 3) * If he was never personally harmed by the Empire, but felt for those who were, this should be sympathy, not empathy: "Kaileel was a morally upright being who showed empathy towards the victims of the Empire that he had never met; though he admitted that the Empire had never harmed him personally"
 * 4) **Fixed.
 * 5) * Please reword one of these ship's': "he explicitly told the ship's captain that ship's"
 * 6) **Done.
 * 7) *Hah, I didn't realize I knew who this was and that I had read the story until about half-way through the article. Toprawa and Ralltiir 01:57, 2 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 8) **Heh. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 02:03, 2 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 9) From the Bridge of Chack Jadson:
 * 10) * You use "Kaileel" too many times in the intro. Otherwise good.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 20:35, 3 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 11) **Axed a couple. Thanks, -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 20:38, 3 March 2008 (UTC)