Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Atomic blast on Raspar-6


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Atomic blast on Raspar-6

 * Nominated by:  Stake black   msg 17:37, February 3, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: That's all there is to it, really.

(1 ECs/3 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1) Did a copy-edit.  Trak Nar  Ramble on 05:35, February 6, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 22:17, February 9, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) Winterz (talk) 16:56, February 13, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) I should get that book :P Supreme Emperor (talk) 05:20, February 16, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) 501st
 * 2) * Would a conjecture tag be in order?
 * 3) **Trak handled that for me, thanks.
 * 4) ***Actually, thinking about it, the source explicitly calls it "the atomic blast on Raspar-6". Are you sure it needs the tag?  Stake black   msg 21:22, February 9, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) ****Popping my head in: If it ain't a conjectural name, be sure to use the full name as the bolded in-prose title, rather than "a large-scale atomic blast..." Menkooroo (talk) 13:31, February 13, 2013 (UTC)
 * 6) *****Done.  Stake black   msg 13:37, February 13, 2013 (UTC)
 * 7) * How about saying that the blast happened in the Outer Rim, because that's were the sector it's in is located. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 01:04, February 5, 2013 (UTC)
 * 8) **I said it happened in the Tragan Cluster, which is in the Outer Rim. Would you rather have me replace Tragan Cluster with Outer Rim?  Stake black   msg 14:55, February 6, 2013 (UTC)
 * 9) ***You could establish that the cluster is in the Outer Rim to add more context, or you could leave it as is. Your choice. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 21:44, February 7, 2013 (UTC)
 * 10) ****How is it now?  Stake black   msg 21:55, February 7, 2013 (UTC)
 * 11) *****Was the moon mentioned in the Atlas companian as being in the tragen cluster? If not, you can't source to the atlas for that part, as you are doing now. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 13:29, February 8, 2013 (UTC)
 * 12) ******The moon's system was.  Stake black   msg 18:13, February 8, 2013 (UTC)
 * 13) This article warrants an infobox (Event's). And context on Dust farmers. Winterz (talk) 14:26, February 13, 2013 (UTC)
 * 14) *How's that now?  Stake black   msg 16:46, February 13, 2013 (UTC)

Comments
 * I cannot give further context on "Stolivea" or "talking fogs" because the author never really says what those things are.  Stake black   msg 14:53, February 4, 2013 (UTC)
 * Some clarification was given in this SH thread: Forum:SH:Monsters and Incomprehensible Gibberish from George Lucas.  Stake black   msg 16:30, February 7, 2013 (UTC)