Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Evax


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Evax

 * Nominated by: Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 21:08, 14 August 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Couldn't think of a creative comment for this one. I know, you're all devastated. :p Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 21:08, 14 August 2009 (UTC)

(6 ACs/2 Users/8 Total)
Support
 * 1) One note: his image and Imperial xenophobia is enough to state that he's Human. Otherwise, nice job.  Mauser  Comlink 03:14, 15 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) *Sadly, it isn't. I talked to Toprawa about this a few days ago, and he agrees that there is not enough info to call him Human. I've reverted your edit; if you wish to remove your vote, feel free to. Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 12:19, 15 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 3)  JangFett  Talk 14:09, 15 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) Toprawa and Ralltiir 17:54, 15 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) Nice n' clean.  Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 19:32, 15 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 6)  Grunny  ( Talk ) 01:04, 16 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 7)  CC7567  (talk) 03:07, 16 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 8)  IFYLOFD  ( You will pay the price for your lack of vision! ) 03:24, 16 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 9) For the record, I think this nom is poor and the nominator is even worse. :P  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  14:49, 16 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 10) *XD  JangFett  Talk 16:11, 16 August 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Hey Tranner, possibly you can add on to this short sentence: "Evax perished in the explosion." Maybe mention that everyone onboard, including Evax, perished in the explosion. Other than that, great work man :)  JangFett  Talk 06:28, 15 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) *There are two reasons why I did not do that: Sourcing that would be an unnecessary pain, and there's always a possibility that some people made it off the station. Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 12:19, 15 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) **I see what you mean.

Comments


 * I've removed the context provided for Imperial Intelligence in the intro, since it was pretty redundant and unnecessary. Toprawa and Ralltiir 17:54, 15 August 2009 (UTC)