Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Drigor Tarrens

Drigor Tarrens

 * Nominated by: Cavalier One ( Squadron channel ) 12:34, 15 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: DarkStryder? Never heard of it ...

(5 Inqs/1 User/5 Total)
Support
 * 1) Very clean. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 11:31, 28 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) Infidel!  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  22:21, 1 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) Ozzel 21:50, 8 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) Toprawa and Ralltiir 16:25, 10 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) Green Tentacle (Talk) 18:11, 27 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 6) Clean as a typical Cav One DarkStryder Whistle, and just as interesting as always.  Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 05:56, 30 August 2008 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) Toprawa:
 * 2) * I think I'm correct in implying here that the Confederation charged him with treason for using cybernetics, which clashed with their views of bio technology. I would like to see a wee bit added here to explain that the Confederation charged him with treason for this violation: "Charged with treason, which was punishable by death,"
 * 3) **That's the conclusion I get from reading his bio, but the problem is that it is never explicitly stated to be the case. As a result, I am loath to add it since it is close to speculation.
 * 4) * Again, please do a bit to clarify why he is being charged with treason: "He was summoned to appear before a court on the charge of treason upon waking from surgery" Toprawa and Ralltiir 01:31, 9 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) **No other information is given, but it probably relates to the above comments. - Cavalier One ( Squadron channel ) 15:36, 10 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 6) ***In regards to both objections, yes, as you describe it, that would unfortunately be speculation. Very well. I won't hold it up on this, but would it be safe to add a little bit specifying that the Confederation charged him, in both instances here? Toprawa and Ralltiir 16:25, 10 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 7) From the desk of Atarumaster88
 * 8) * "Tarrens studied one of the branches of science" Could we be a little more specific? Or at least reword it.
 * 9) **No specifics are available - reworded to "Tarrens studied science".
 * 10) * Contextify the location of that final space battle. Is it near the space station?
 * 11) **Context added.
 * 12) *Have a Super Terrific Friendly Un-frustrating day. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 23:51, 29 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 13) **I'll try to :) - Cavalier One ( Squadron channel ) 00:17, 30 August 2008 (UTC)

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