Wookieepedia:Good article nominations



This page is for the nomination of good articles. This is not a way to showcase the articles of your favorite characters, spaceships, or the like. For a list of good articles, see Category:Wookieepedia good articles.

What is a Good article?
A Good article is an article that adheres to quality standards, but cannot reach FA status due to its limited content.

A Good article has the following attributes.

1. It is well written. In this respect:


 * (a) it has compelling prose, and is readily comprehensible to non-specialist readers;
 * (b) it follows a logical structure, introducing the topic and then grouping together its coverage of related aspects; where appropriate, it contains a succinct lead section summarizing the topic, and the remaining text is organized into a system of hierarchical sections (particularly for longer articles);
 * (c) it follows the Manual of Style, Layout Guide, and all other policies;
 * (d) necessary technical terms or jargon are briefly explained in the article itself, or an active link is provided.

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable. In this respect:


 * (a) it provides references to any and all sources used for its material;
 * (b) sources should be selected in accordance with the guidelines for reliable sources;
 * (c) it contains no elements of original research.

3. It is broad in its coverage, addressing all major aspects of the topic (this requirement is slightly weaker than the "comprehensiveness" required by WP:FA, and allows shorter articles and broad overviews of large topics to be listed);.

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy. In this respect:


 * (a) viewpoints are represented fairly and without bias;
 * (b) all significant points of view are fairly presented, but not asserted, particularly where there are or have been conflicting views on the topic.

5. It is stable, i.e., it does not change significantly from day to day and is not the subject of ongoing edit wars. This does not apply to vandalism and protection or semi-protection as a result of vandalism.

6. It contains images, where possible, to illustrate the topic. In this respect:


 * (a) the images are properly sourced and have succinct and descriptive captions;
 * (b) a lack of images does not in itself prevent an article from achieving Good Article status.

Nomination of Good articles
To nominate an article for Good article status, list it here. Nominated articles must meet all six requirements stated above. If an article has a net total of five votes of support (+5) after at least a week since it was nominated (beginning the day of its nomination), the article will be considered a "Good article" and tagged with the template. The talk page will also be tagged with the GA template. For complete instructions on archiving nominations please see here.

(+6)
Support Oppose
 * 1) --Eyrezer 09:29, 28 July 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) It looks great. --Jedimca0(Do or Do Not, There is No Try) 11:06, 28 July 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) [[Image:AckbarSig.jpg|20px]]  TheOne&OnlyAdmirableAckbar  ( It's A Trap! ) 11:08, 28 July 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) --Goodwood 14:02, 30 July 2007 (UTC)
 * 5) Greyman ( Paratus ) 18:07, 6 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 6)  Victor  ( talk ) 00:10, 8 August 2007 (UTC)
 * I really like this nom, but I think it could use a bit of an explanation on the sentience, sapience, etc. thing. Also, is it canon that the majority of species breathe oxygen or OR? Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 19:20, 1 August 2007 (UTC)
 * The oxygen breathers bit is canon from Alien Encounters. It is said OOU to gamemasters advising them on creating their own species but I believe that still qualifies. As to the sentience expansion part, that is a good idea. I wasn't really sure how/where to expand the article and so will look into it. I'm not sure where I'll find canon commentary on it though. I don't think the RPG books I've looked in so far explore it. --Eyrezer 23:11, 1 August 2007 (UTC)
 * There's mention of sentience test in Planet of Twilight, if that helps. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 14:26, 3 August 2007 (UTC)
 * Actually AE says "carbon-breathing" species. Odd. --Eyrezer 23:12, 6 August 2007 (UTC)
 * So are all the objections cleared up now? Greyman ( Paratus ) 14:13, 8 August 2007 (UTC)
 * I've made no addition re sentience so nope. --Eyrezer 08:18, 9 August 2007 (UTC)
 * The "Species Navigation" template should be moved to the bottom, or be changed to a right-floater. The "Article Design" part has little to do with species in the Star Wars galaxy, and should be moved to a tutorial article or the manual of style. --Imperialles 14:01, 20 August 2007 (UTC)
 * What do you mean by a right floater? I actually think it works well at the top as a guide. --Eyrezer 09:20, 28 August 2007 (UTC)
 * See Adminnav for an example of a right floater. --Imperialles 18:49, 30 August 2007 (UTC)
 * Changed. --Eyrezer 03:17, 2 September 2007 (UTC)

Comments
 * Different.  Chack Jadson  Talk 18:15, 29 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Definately different - but me likes. Could use links in the Notes and References, though.--Goodwood 14:02, 30 July 2007 (UTC)
 * That's an interesting one that. I always leave the links out in my footnotes because that is my preference. --Eyrezer 14:08, 30 July 2007 (UTC)

(+5)
Support
 * 1) -- [[Image:AckbarSig.jpg|40px]] dmirableAckbar  ( It's A Trap! ) 21:51, 13 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) --Jedimca0(Do or Do Not, There is No Try) 21:53, 13 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) -  Graestan  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( This party's over ) 21:55, 13 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) Well-executed, well-referenced; not bad for a GA-level. Though, of course, you've got your work cut out for you if Featured status is the ultimate objective.--Goodwood 22:15, 13 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 5) I'll help some more now that I'm back. They grow up so fast! [[Image:The Death of Ki-Adi-Mundi.jpg|40px]]  Jediknight19bby  ( Jedi High Council Chambers! ) 17:19, 18 August 2007 (UTC)

Oppose
 * Better, but still ways to go. Prose issues, tense issues, copyedit issues, reference issues, some POV issues, and that's just after a cursory look. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 16:03, 15 August 2007 (UTC)
 * We're working on it. --Jedimca0(Do or Do Not, There is No Try) 12:38, 18 August 2007 (UTC)

Comments
 * Me and Jedimca0 have put a lot of work into this article in the last few weeks, and Graestan has done all the tedious tidying up after us. We recognise that this article has recently failed FA and GA nominations, however, this article is vastly different from the one that was nominated a month ago, and with three different users as the main editors. The article in under new management, so to speak, and although it's not got the comprehensiveness of an FA, we feel it's ready for GA. -- [[Image:AckbarSig.jpg|40px]] dmirableAckbar  ( It's A Trap! ) 21:51, 13 August 2007 (UTC)
 * My thanks to Acky, Graestan, Jedimca, JMAS, Darth Culator, SoT, Pi, and everyone who's helped get my old pet project this far. [[Image:The Death of Ki-Adi-Mundi.jpg|40px]]  Jediknight19bby  ( Jedi High Council Chambers! ) 17:19, 18 August 2007 (UTC)

(+3)
Support
 * 1) Harrar 17:21, 14 August 2007 (GMT) - nominated
 * 2) Greyman ( Paratus ) 03:17, 18 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) Jedimca0(Do or Do Not, There is No Try) 14:17, 21 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) -- [[Image:AckbarSig.jpg|40px]] dmirableAckbar  ( It's A Trap! ) 20:03, 2 September 2007 (UTC)

Oppose
 * "Jedi Masters Luke and Mara Jade Skywalker fought at Roqoo for their son, their wayward nephew and the galaxy." The galaxy? Come on. --Imperialles 18:51, 30 August 2007 (UTC)
 * Heh good point. Removed the offending melodramaticism Harrar 21:50, 5 September 2007 (GMT)

Comments

(+1)
Support
 * 1) Pelmarn Da&#39;kari 05:14, 16 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) —Xwing328 (Talk) 01:14, 25 August 2007 (UTC)

Oppose
 * I'm fairly certain this could be substantially expanded (Criteria 3). --Imperialles 18:55, 30 August 2007 (UTC)
 * In what way? Pelmarn Da&#39;kari 07:34, 5 September 2007 (UTC)

Comments

(+2)
Support
 * 1) Pelmarn Da&#39;kari 05:14, 16 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) I don't see anything that doesn't meet the criteria. [[Image:The Death of Ki-Adi-Mundi.jpg|40px]]  Jediknight19bby  ( Jedi High Council Chambers! ) 14:20, 21 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) —Xwing328 (Talk) 01:23, 25 August 2007 (UTC)

Oppose Expanded with what? There is really not much more to be said about the subject as far as I can tell. Care to elaborate on what you feel is lacking? Pelmarn Da&#39;kari 07:32, 5 September 2007 (UTC)
 * Could be expanded even further (Criteria 3). --Imperialles 18:57, 30 August 2007 (UTC)

Comments

(+0)
Support
 * 1) Darthchristian   ( Hey! ) 1:00, 17 August 2007 (UTC)

Object
 * Uncertain whether or not the text complies with the GFDL. --Imperialles 19:04, 30 August 2007 (UTC)

Comments
 * Sourced it, fixed punctuation errors. Help with expansion needed. Darthchristian   ( Hey! ) 1:00, 17 August 2007 (UTC)
 * One of my favourite characters, so I'm game. But needs a lot of work - I think her gradual fall to the Dark Side needs to be the undercurrent of the article, demonstrated by the ease of which she becomes a Joiner. I'm not gonna object cos I don't think there's much point; too much to do. But I'll get going ;-) -- Harrar 22:51, 17 August 2007 (GMT)
 * Uh, I forgot to say to this before: SPOILERS!!!

(-1)
Support
 * 1) Talon Karrde   ( talk ) 1:00, 17 August 2007 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) * Needs to be fully sourced per requirements.
 * 2) **Better, not finished.
 * 3) * Sources need to be formatted properly (no spaces).
 * 4) **Done.
 * 5) * 16 years later → "16" needs to be spelled out.
 * 6) **Done.
 * 7) *The article is full of choppy sentence fragments which need to be rewritten so the article flows better.
 * 8) *I have a feeling that this event is covered, or least mentioned, in some WEG sourcebooks. If the event is mentioned, then those sourcebooks need to be added to the articles Sources list.
 * 9) * Capitalization of Noghri throughout the article. noghri → Noghri.
 * 10) **Done.
 * 11) * Inter-article link need to be corrected → Separatist should be Separatist
 * 12) **Done.
 * 13) *The article's writing, spelling, and grammar needs to be looked at with some attention&mdash;it needs a good copy-edit.
 * 14) ** Greyman ( Paratus ) 13:33, 17 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 15) ***How is it now?  Chack Jadson  Talk 01:05, 25 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 16) ****Looks better, I'll give it full read in the next little bit :) Greyman ( Paratus ) 01:10, 25 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 17) Per Greyman, and needs expansion . Don't worry, I'll help if you out. [[Image:The Death of Ki-Adi-Mundi.jpg|40px]]  Jediknight19bby  ( Jedi High Council Chambers! ) 20:00, 19 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 18) *Addressed, I believe.  Chack Jadson  Talk 01:05, 25 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 19) * I added an intro. Should I expand the article by write more details? Please help me out in this, and please list some exact things which is wrong in the article.  Talon Karrde Talk to the Chief Smuggler! 13:27, 20 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 20) **No. You're fine. Intro's pretty good. Still needs sources, however. But I'll help you. [[Image:The Death of Ki-Adi-Mundi.jpg|40px]]  Jediknight19bby  ( Jedi High Council Chambers! ) 13:56, 20 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 21) Needs to be properly referenced, and labelled with all sources. (There are alien reference book dealing with Noghri which have information on the revolution). Also needs to be formatted properly, i.e. prelude, revolution, aftermath ex cetra, what effect did it have on the Noghri. Could also do with a main pic. -- [[Image:AckbarSig.jpg|40px]] dmirableAckbar  ( It's A Trap! ) 13:45, 20 August 2007 (UTC)

Comments
 * How can I find all of the sources? Because almost all of the informations can be found in the books I listed.
 * I suspect there's additional information in The Thrawn Trilogy Sourcebook, as well as a whole bunch of the Essential Guides. Check the Noghri article itself for other possible appearances and sources. jSarek 11:34, 18 August 2007 (UTC)


 * I tried to fix all the things I could. I think the sources part shows enough reference informations now. So if you have any other problems with the article please let me know.


 * Also needs intro. Small article. [[Image:The Death of Ki-Adi-Mundi.jpg|40px]]  Jediknight19bby  ( Jedi High Council Chambers! ) 20:02, 19 August 2007 (UTC)


 * Not to worry, I have HttE and DFR. Wookieepedia gives me all the info we'll need to work on The Last Command. [[Image:The Death of Ki-Adi-Mundi.jpg|40px]]  Jediknight19bby  ( Jedi High Council Chambers! ) 14:14, 20 August 2007 (UTC)
 * I sourced most of it. It's practically a single-source nom, it'll be easy to get all the references in for this one. [[Image:The Death of Ki-Adi-Mundi.jpg|40px]]  Jediknight19bby  ( Jedi High Council Chambers! ) 14:40, 20 August 2007 (UTC)
 * Sure, but Greyman mentioned the WEG sourcebook too, so how can we get all possible sources?  Talon Karrde Talk to the Chief Smuggler! 18:25, 20 August 2007 (UTC)
 * ask Jaymach for help. Or else, you could look for it at a bookstore. Maybe Greyman has some, too. I don't know. Greyman and Jaymach both have their reference books listed on their userpage, if they have them, ask them for help. [[Image:The Death of Ki-Adi-Mundi.jpg|40px]]  Jediknight19bby  ( Jedi High Council Chambers! ) 18:31, 20 August 2007 (UTC)
 * I'm afraid I beg to differ with "it's practically a single-source nom." Various WEG sourcebooks, NEGAS, EGAS, AA, UAA and EGTP&M, as well as EC and NEC also have an abundance of info about the Noghri revolution. -- [[Image:AckbarSig.jpg|40px]] dmirableAckbar  ( It's A Trap! ) 18:34, 20 August 2007 (UTC)
 * Oh, that's a lot. Do all have to be shown in the sources? I haven't heard about most of it.  Talon Karrde Talk to the Chief Smuggler! 22:39, 20 August 2007 (UTC)
 * I'm afraid so. You don't have to reference them, but I won't ever strike my objection if there is info from those books that is not in the article. (The non-abbreviated names of them are New Essential Guide to Alien Species, Essential Guide to Alien Species, Alien Anthology, Ultimate Alien Anthology, Essential Guide to Planets and Moons, New Essentail Chronology and Essential Chronology.) -- [[Image:AckbarSig.jpg|40px]] dmirableAckbar  ( It's A Trap! ) 22:43, 20 August 2007 (UTC)
 * I can help you with this some, if you want.  Chack Jadson  Talk 13:38, 21 August 2007 (UTC)
 * We'd enjoy your help, if you have some of the sources. [[Image:The Death of Ki-Adi-Mundi.jpg|40px]]  Jediknight19bby  ( Jedi High Council Chambers! ) 13:41, 21 August 2007 (UTC)
 * Yeah, we need as much info as possible in the topic.  Talon Karrde Talk to the Chief Smuggler! 08:35, 22 August 2007 (UTC)
 * now it is competable  Talon Karrde Talk to the Chief Smuggler! 15:10, 23 August 2007 (UTC)
 * REQUEST:could this nomination please be removed? The article is significantly below GA standard. -- [[Image:AckbarSig.jpg|40px]] dmirableAckbar  ( It's A Trap! ) 19:10, 30 August 2007 (UTC)

(+3)
Support
 * 1) -- [[Image:AckbarSig.jpg|40px]] dmirableAckbar  ( It's A Trap! ) 11:19, 18 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Looks great. --Jedimca0(Do or Do Not, There is No Try) 12:35, 18 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) You were expecting vote # 3, and here it is. [[Image:The Death of Ki-Adi-Mundi.jpg|40px]]  Jediknight19bby  ( Jedi High Council Chambers! ) 19:58, 19 August 2007 (UTC)

Object
 * Assumption: "Nazzar could read and write their native language." Reword the sentence. --Imperialles 19:09, 30 August 2007 (UTC)

Comments


 * You were expecting vote # 3, and here it is.What is that supposed to mean? -- [[Image:AckbarSig.jpg|40px]] dmirableAckbar  ( It's A Trap! ) 19:59, 19 August 2007 (UTC)
 * Me, you, and Jedimca always support your GA noms. [[Image:The Death of Ki-Adi-Mundi.jpg|40px]]  Jediknight19bby  ( Jedi High Council Chambers! ) 20:03, 19 August 2007 (UTC)
 * So, are you saying you don't read the article, and just vote for it because it's mine? -- [[Image:AckbarSig.jpg|40px]] dmirableAckbar  ( It's A Trap! ) 20:04, 19 August 2007 (UTC)
 * No, I'm saying I read them like Jedimca, but we support them because they're yours and they're good. We know you'll fix any mistakes, unlike some users around here... [[Image:The Death of Ki-Adi-Mundi.jpg|40px]]  Jediknight19bby  ( Jedi High Council Chambers! ) 20:06, 19 August 2007 (UTC)
 * Like you and Jedi Master? Or who? Also, I moved this to the comments section, if you don't mind. -- [[Image:AckbarSig.jpg|40px]] dmirableAckbar  ( It's A Trap! ) 20:09, 19 August 2007 (UTC)
 * I don't support AdmirableAckbars nominations because he nominated them, I support them because they are good articles that are worthy of becoming a Good Article. I've read most of his nomination even before he nominates them, any possible objections I might have are usualy "fixed" before the article is nominated. --Jedimca0(Do or Do Not, There is No Try) 14:52, 20 August 2007 (UTC)

(+2)
Support
 * 1) Ataru said it might make it through GA.  Jediknight19bby  ( Jedi High Council Chambers ) 15:25, 24 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Not a bad article aside from the lack of detail that it would need for FA. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 15:25, 28 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 3)  Chack Jadson  Talk  01:07, 8 September 2007 (UTC)

Oppose
 * Redundant internal links in several quotes. These should be removed per WP:MOS (Criteria 1.c). --Imperialles 19:25, 30 August 2007 (UTC)

Comments

(-1)
Support
 * 1) Added 1 source, to the Sources section, so the article now has five sources (I'm talking to you Hobbes195) added two new sections, a Personality and Traits section and a Relationships section. All that needs doing now is having the images sourced. Anyways,Nominated.OOM-10 09:27, 25 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 2)  Darthchristian   ( Hey! ) 16:49, 27 August 2007 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) It needs to be referenced (requirement 2a). --Jedimca0(Do or Do Not, There is No Try) 10:41, 25 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Per Jedimca. OOM-10, what I meant by sourcing was referencing (see Sourcing), which is a requirement before an article can become a GA. I'm sorry if I was unclear before. It tells you how references work if you follow the link, and if you need help, ask on IRC. And my name's Hobbes15, not 195 ^_^.  Hobbes15 ( Tiger Headquarters ) 04:06, 27 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) *Fixed. Darthchristian   ( Hey! ) 16:49, 27 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) The text needs to be cleaned up in several places (Criteria 1). There's also far too many images. --Imperialles 19:28, 30 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 5) *Per Imperialles, and can somebody brighten up a couple of the images? They're way too dark. Darthchristian   ( Hey! ) 21:09, 30 August 2007 (UTC)

Comments

(0)
Support
 * 1) Clark Kent300 15:40, 26 August 2007 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) Two of the images need to be sourced (Requirement 6a) and the article needs to be referenced (Requirement 2a). --Jedimca0(Do or Do Not, There is No Try) 15:51, 26 August 2007 (UTC)
 * Will work on sourcing and refrencing. Clark Kent300 17:32, 26 August 2007 (UTC)

Comments

(0)
Support
 * 1) --Domlith 08:39, 29 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Most of it's sourced, don't see why not. Unit 8311 12:03, 3 September 2007 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) The article needs to be sourced, per the instructions at the top of this page. - Graestan  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( This party's over ) 15:31, 29 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) One of the images needs to be sourced (requirement 6a) and the article needs to be referenced (requirement 2a). --Jedimca0(Do or Do Not, There is No Try) 15:40, 29 August 2007 (UTC)

Comments
 * Started sourcing according to my best knowledge, but I do not have all the sources at my disposal, so I must rely on the greater knowledge of other users...--Domlith 14:40, 31 August 2007 (UTC)

(0)
Support
 * 1) I've given it 1 source, 1 reference, and added a bit of information to her Behind the Scenes section. if anything needs doing I'll gladly help now that I've learned the ropes of referencing.OOM-10 14:37, 29 August 2007 (UTC)

Oppose Comments
 * Um, you have to ref the whole thing, except the intro, which you don't ref. Darthchristian   ( Hey! ) 21:05, 30 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 1) *Sorry I'll get to work on it nowOOM-10 09:39, 31 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) **FixedOOM-10 10:01, 31 August 2007 (UTC)

(+2)
Support
 * 1) -- [[Image:AckbarSig.jpg|40px]] dmirableAckbar  ( It's A Trap! ) 21:12, 29 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Jedimca0(Do or Do Not, There is No Try) 12:50, 31 August 2007 (UTC)

Oppose
 * Wouldn't a government infobox be better suited? Also the history section doesn't make any mention as to how the Agency arose. Did it begin out as a tax agency or what? I think the Agency shouldbe mentioned earlier. --Eyrezer 01:13, 3 September 2007 (UTC)
 * Infobox changed and Agency mentioned early in History section. About the founding, Galaxy Guide 4 doesn't mention anything about its founding. -- [[Image:AckbarSig.jpg|40px]] dmirableAckbar  ( It's A Trap! ) 18:23, 3 September 2007 (UTC)

Comments
 * Single source nomination. -- [[Image:AckbarSig.jpg|40px]] dmirableAckbar  ( It's A Trap! ) 21:12, 29 August 2007 (UTC)

(+2)
Support
 * 1) -- [[Image:AckbarSig.jpg|40px]] dmirableAckbar  ( It's A Trap! ) 19:07, 30 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Jedimca0(Do or Do Not, There is No Try) 13:10, 31 August 2007 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) From the Forest of Goodwood
 * 2) *Grammatical error in opening quote.
 * 3) *Prose issues in the introduction; "various shapes and positions because they had one single cell" needs to be rewritten.
 * 4) *Grammatical issue with the first paragraph of "Biology". The second sentence needs to be tweaked.
 * 5) *"because of the speed the exuded pseudopodia" needs to be rephrased.
 * 6) *In general, correct grammar needs to be applied to the uses of the proper name "Ugor" in the article, particularly in the possessive forms.
 * 7) *An overall prose readjustment wouldn't go amiss, but it's a good article, generally-speaking.--Goodwood 22:49, 10 September 2007 (UTC)

Comments

(+3)
Support
 * 1) Darthchristian   ( Hey! ) 21:01, 30 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) --Domlith 16:27, 6 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) --Harrar 19:04, 9 September 2007 (GMT)

Oppose

Comments

(+5)
Support
 * 1) Nominated --Eyrezer 02:12, 2 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) -- [[Image:AckbarSig.jpg|40px]] dmirableAckbar  ( It's A Trap! ) 20:03, 2 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) Jedimca0(Do or Do Not, There is No Try) 22:12, 2 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) Cull Tremayne 00:56, 4 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 5)  Chack Jadson  Talk  01:07, 8 September 2007 (UTC)

Oppose

Comments

(+1)
Support
 * 1) After a good deal of work on it, I think it deserves a nomination. Master Aban Fiolli (Alpheridies University ComNet) [[Image:NewRepublic.png|20px]] 19:50, 2 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) --Domlith 16:31, 6 September 2007 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) Three things:
 * 2) * Introduction: "The effectiveness of kolto was considered miraculous" Reword this to avoid weasel wording.
 * 3) * The introduction states that kolto was more effective than bacta, yet later in the article it is stated to be less effective.
 * 4) *The article contains no mention of how kolto was utilized for highly effective medpacks in the Old Republic era.
 * --Imperialles 20:07, 2 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 1) **Took care of one and two, I think. I'll keep searching on point three. I've seen it somewhere, but can't seem to find the source. Master Aban Fiolli (Alpheridies University ComNet) [[Image:NewRepublic.png|20px]] 20:27, 2 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) ***Kolto is mentioned in KOTOR I as the basis of all medpacs of that era, I believe. --Imperialles 20:43, 2 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) ****I took care of at least addressing point 3 with what I've found out so far. I'll keep searching KOtOR, but I've had to replay the game to get to Manaan. I am also trying all the conversations leading up to it as well. If anyone else would like to help, it would be appreciated. Master Aban Fiolli (Alpheridies University ComNet) [[Image:NewRepublic.png|20px]] 17:47, 3 September 2007 (UTC)

Comments

(+6)
Support Oppose
 * 1) Cull Tremayne 04:51, 3 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Looks good. --Jedimca0(Do or Do Not, There is No Try) 11:49, 3 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) --Eyrezer 03:15, 8 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) Imperialles 03:45, 8 September 2007 (UTC)
 * Sir, yes sir!--Goodwood 03:46, 8 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 1) Graestan  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( This party's over ) 03:50, 8 September 2007 (UTC)

Comments
 * Basically because I never do these, and I don't feel like stretching. Note: I am fully aware that there are probably flaws I'll need to correct. :-P Cull Tremayne 04:51, 3 September 2007 (UTC)

(+4)
Support
 * 1) -- [[Image:AckbarSig.jpg|40px]] dmirableAckbar  ( It's A Trap! ) 22:27, 5 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Jedimca0(Do or Do Not, There is No Try) 10:31, 6 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) supergeeky1 [[Image:BobaFett.jpg|20px]] The Cantina 19:54, 6 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) --Domlith 22:43, 10 September 2007 (UTC)

Oppose Comments
 * Is it microbinoculars or macrobinoculars? --Eyrezer 03:21, 8 September 2007 (UTC)
 * Macro. Fixed. -- [[Image:AckbarSig.jpg|40px]] dmirableAckbar  ( It's A Trap! ) 09:35, 8 September 2007 (UTC)
 * I love these little guys. -- [[Image:AckbarSig.jpg|40px]] dmirableAckbar  ( It's A Trap! ) 22:27, 5 September 2007 (UTC)


 * They are cool. There are some good pics in some of the WEG sources that depict a group of these guys together. I'll see if I can track the pics down. --Eyrezer 23:41, 5 September 2007 (UTC)
 * Thank you very much -- [[Image:AckbarSig.jpg|40px]] dmirableAckbar  ( It's A Trap! ) 15:05, 6 September 2007 (UTC)
 * I added the pic I had in mind. Sadly, while there is info on the planet it is unclear if it is related to the Kowakians. --Eyrezer 03:17, 8 September 2007 (UTC)
 * Thanks again. -- [[Image:AckbarSig.jpg|40px]] dmirableAckbar  ( It's A Trap! ) 09:35, 8 September 2007 (UTC)

(+5)
Support
 * 1) Imperialles 14:09, 6 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) It looks great. --Jedimca0(Do or Do Not, There is No Try) 15:39, 6 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) Next time I need every square molecule of something covered, I'm talking to you, Imperialles. - Graestan  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( This party's over ) 00:44, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) --Eyrezer 00:48, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 5) Cull Tremayne 03:43, 8 September 2007 (UTC)

Oppose

Comments
 * An old FA nom of mine that failed due to being too short and containing speculation. I cleaned everything up, and it should now meet the GA criteria. --Imperialles 14:09, 6 September 2007 (UTC)

(+5)
Support
 * 1) Nominated.--Goodwood 03:44, 8 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Graestan  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( This party's over ) 03:50, 8 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) -- [[Image:AckbarSig.jpg|40px]] dmirableAckbar  ( It's A Trap! ) 22:21, 8 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) Jedimca0(Do or Do Not, There is No Try) 23:13, 8 September 2007 (UTC)
 * Greyman ( Paratus ) 22:35, 10 September 2007 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) The infobox needs to be sourced properly. More specifically his homeworld, birth year, hair color, affiliation.  Greyman ( Paratus ) 13:33, 8 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) *Addressed.--Goodwood 21:04, 8 September 2007 (UTC)

Comments

(+3)
Support
 * 1) -- [[Image:AckbarSig.jpg|40px]] dmirableAckbar  ( It's A Trap! ) 13:51, 8 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Looks good. --Jedimca0(Do or Do Not, There is No Try) 17:20, 8 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) --Goodwood 22:45, 8 September 2007 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) Please fix the redundant linking. --Goodwood 22:22, 8 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) *Fixed, though I wouldn't be surprised if I missed one. -- [[Image:AckbarSig.jpg|40px]] dmirableAckbar  ( It's A Trap! ) 22:36, 8 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) The third and last paragraphs in the Sithspawn section could be broken up, I think. --Goodwood 22:22, 8 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) *Fixed. -- [[Image:AckbarSig.jpg|40px]] dmirableAckbar  ( It's A Trap! ) 22:36, 8 September 2007 (UTC)

Comments

(-1)
Support
 * 1) -Darth_Revan- 16:05, 09 September, 2007 (CAT)

Oppose
 * 1) Needs to be sourced. --Imperialles 14:19, 10 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) needs sourcing, and it's just too short.  Chack Jadson  Talk 23:30, 10 September 2007 (UTC)

Comments
 * I like this article, but it would be nice if it could be expanded a bit. -Darth_Revan- 16:05, 09 September, 2007 (CAT)

(+1)
Support
 * 1) Nominated.--Goodwood 02:32, 11 September 2007 (UTC)

Oppose

Comments