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Re:SIS
Looks like you've done a great job so far! I'll give it a pre-nom look-see tonight and leave you any problems here. Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 04:46, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * Mkay here goes:
 * The intro could use a bit of expansion, in terms of historical information. At the very least, add that the SIS's Mission to the Vesla system nearly re-ignited the war.
 * Expanded.
 * You have two consecutive sentences beginning with "Although"; alter one of 'em.
 * Done.
 * In the infobox, don't call the director "Unidentified"; it's more IU to use a name like "SIS Director (3,643 BBY)"
 * Page moved and I changed the name.
 * In the overview, you want to specify that the encryption and decoding service was performed under the directive of the Senate.
 * Done.
 * I'll finish up the rest later today. I also remember there being an interview or two with an author or writer where the SIS was referenced. I'll try to find those for you. Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 18:24, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * Thanks. I do have an online post that I referenced but I'm not sure if there was anything else. Coruscantfan 19:22, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * Oh, The Art and Making of Star Wars: The Old Republic states that, on Tattoine, "The Imperial military has forced aside underworld figures to assert its dominance, while in Anchorhead the Republic is secretly establishing an outpost for its spy network." Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 19:50, November 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * Is there a time frame as to when they were doing this? During the war, during the Cold War... Coruscantfan 04:32, November 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * It's describing events that take place during the game, so the Cold War. Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 05:25, November 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * Ah, ok, thanks. Did you still want to do a copy edit of the rest or should I go ahead with the nom? Coruscantfan 14:31, November 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * Apologies for the hold up. This interview has a mention from Freed regarding Shan's skills as an SIS agent. That might be pertinent. Beyond that, I encourage you to go ahead a nominate it. I won't have the time to dedicate to a full copy-edit for at least a day, so I'll take any extra objections to the nominations page. Great job expanding it, and good luck with the nomination! Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 06:10, November 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * So, regarding the SIS in The Old Republic, I've only come across one instance of them in my questing, and that's on Nar Shaddaa. There's an Imperial Intelligence listening post in the Exchange's territory in Nar Shaddaa's Corellian district, and the head of the post suspects that there is an SIS listening post in the same area spying on the Imperial post. The PC is sent to destroy the post and recover any information they've gathered. That's a very cursory overview of the mission; I'll try to get you more details, but as I said, I'm certain that there are many other instances of the SIS in-game. I would recommend asking, as I believe he's currently rolling a Republic character (as a Sith Inquisitor, I doubt I'll have very many interactions with intelligence services). Anywho, as far as Gnost-Dural's journal is concerned, there's only one mention of the SIS: "In a string of recent confrontations with the Empire, dozens of Republic warships had gone missing, leaving evidence that they had fled after the personnel on board were overcome by a profound and mysterious terror. We were at a loss to explain this disturbing pattern until SIS listing posts in the Outer Rim pieced together coded messages referring to a group of Sith Lords known as the Dread Masters." Dural goes on to explain that Jedi Knight Jaric Kaedan and a team of Republic Special Forces troopers used the information to infiltrate the Dread Master's dreadnought and capture the Sith Lords. They were then taken to internment on Belsavis, in The Tomb.  Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 11:02, January 4, 2012 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the information, much appreciated! I'll add it into the article within the next few days and also contact JethLordMaster. Coruscantfan (Talk) 04:42, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re:CAN Espos
Hey, Coruscantfan. Thanks for the suggestions, and I'll probably stick with Espo and just add context. The source calls them "CSA Espos", so I'll probably stick with that and fix it up a little bit. Thanks again. :) -- Cal Jedi (Personal Comm Channel) 22:56, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

question
Why do U like Coruscant so much corsucant fan--I love manly 21:00, December 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * Its a unique and diverse planet where anything can happen. Besides, its the center of galactic civilization. Coruscantfan CSFsymbol.jpg (Talk) 21:06, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Makken
Hey Coruscantfan, I saw your edit to Trinnolt Makken and I just want to verify&mdash;was he actually called an Alliance Marshal? I don't remember this at all, but I could just be forgetting; would you mind pointing to the page number where this is stated? Thanks, Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 03:04, December 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * Uh&hellip; dunno if I've suddenly gone blind or something, but I just checked my copy of Outcast, and there is no mention whatsoever of Alliance Marshals on pages 117-119; nor even any actual spoken lines for Dab on those pages&hellip; The only spoken lines on 117 are Hamner's&hellip; Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 04:44, December 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * Yeah, I have a hardback; that might be the difference. Anyway, I've found it now, and to say that Makken is an Alliance Marshal is the definition of original research. Dab says only that he personally was made a Marshal. He does not say that all observers were; and he clarifies that he was only made one so that he could "bully" his way into things. There is no shield described on Makken or his things; so you're making the assumption that just because he has legal identification he must be an Alliance Marshal. However, that is 100% OR. It is not stated outright that he is a Marshal, and there are plenty of other feasible answers (think&mdash;Dab said that they made him a Marshal solely so he could push his way into things; what if Makken already held a rank that allowed him to do that? Then they wouldn't need to make him a Marshal). This is not the first time this has happened with you, either; I personally have had to tell you time and time again what constitutes original research, so I'm going to make this an official warning to please be more careful about the information you add to articles here. Thank you. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 16:33, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Re: Info request
Neither are mentioned in the journal, and I do not yet have the explorer's guide. I do know, however, that both appear in the game itself and have entries in the codex. If you need codex specifics I can provide information. Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 08:04, January 6, 2012 (UTC)
 * Excuse me for butting in, but if you haven't found someone yet, I know has the Explorer's guide. Cheers.&mdash; Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:20, January 6, 2012 (UTC)
 * Thanks! Coruscantfan (Talk) 21:32, January 6, 2012 (UTC)
 * The Codex is an in-game databank of information on locations, organizations, and characters within the game. I'll get you the info asap. Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 23:30, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re: SIS Info Request
I'd love to help but that's a rather broad topic to cover. The SIS has appeared in many sidequests and class quests for multiple classes, so there's a lot of content to talk about. Is there anything specific you'd like to know about them? I can get you the Codex entry if that would help. The SIS primarily seems to function as the Republic counterpart to Imperial Intelligence, kind of like the CIA in real life. They carry out a lot of undercover and discreet operations. Subterfuge, training resistance movements, intelligence gathering, that sort of thing. JethLordMaster  (Xia Order) 21:59, January 7, 2012 (UTC)


 * I have a couple of missions that the SIS took part in that you could mention. The SIS has a pretty sizeable operation set up on Nar Shadaa, and are involved with both the Trooper and Jedi Knight storylines there, although the Knight and Trooper deal with two different groups of SIS operatives. For the Knight, SIS aids them in tracking down stolen plans for a supersoldier project and helps by filling the Knight in on Imperial and gang movements on the moon. For the Trooper, SIS aids in tracking down a defected Republic Special Forces soldier and rampant war droid, although the Trooper's commanding officer General Garza wants the SIS kept out of the loop in regards to the details on the Trooper's mission, and the player decides whether or not to inform the SIS exactly what they are dealing with. The SIS provides technical support and intelligence, once again acting as a sort of mission control and tracking the movements of the Trooper's objective.


 * The second mission is for all Republic classes, and the SIS requests their help in investigating a Czerka facility on Tatooine, which the company abandoned despite having labeled it as containing a doomsday device type weapon. The SIS is pretty short-handed on Tatooine and really only tells the player where to go, once again providing information and suggesting which course of action the player should take. I hope these are helpful, and I'll get that codex entry for you soon as well. JethLordMaster Ying yang copy.jpg (Xia Order) 08:08, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Here's the Codex entry: "The Strategic Information Service (SIS) is the Republic's premiere intelligence and espionage agency. Chartered and overseen by the Galactic Senate, the SIS is responsible for information gathering and covert operations both inside and out of Republic space, as well as for assisting the military, local law enforcement and the Jedi Order.

The SIS is the latest in a long line of Republic espionage agencies founded and disbanded over the centuries. Originally a monitoring and decryption arm of the Senate library, the SIS rapidly expanded during the war against the Empire. It remains smaller, more focused and comparatively underfunded in comparison to Imperial Intelligence, but has proven its effectiveness many times over.

Although by no means a secret organization, the SIS keeps a relatively low profile. SIS operations are rarely revealed, and its administrators almost never appear alongside Senators or other officials. This is a public relations gambit--the SIS believes that the Republic citizenry would be uncomfortable with the nature of its work, and so avoids attracting attention and unwanted questions." JethLordMaster  (Xia Order) 06:48, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re:SWTOR info request
Sorry. I forgot to respond to your message. I'd love to look that info uP for ya, but I'm leaving on a mission trip to Panama tomorrow. I won't be back until the following Tuesday. If I can't get the info to ya, I'll let you know tomorrow. MasterFred (Whatever) 04:31, January 9, 2012 (UTC)
 * Well, I woke up in the middle of the night and couldn't go to sleep, so you got lucky and I decided to go ahead and look up that info. :P As for the Justicars, I've already added all the relevant info to the Justicars' Tower and Justicars' Sector articles. There's nothing that I can find on the Republic Strategic Information Service and it only really mentions the Coruscant Security Force. Nothing new that I can find. Hope that helps! MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg(Whatever) 11:05, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

Citing TOR
Hey Coruscantfan, just a heads up: for articles wherein you cite TOR, be sure to use TORCite. This way, you can specify the specific mission, conversation, or codex entry where each piece of information is found. The game is huge, so we have to be as specific as possible. Thanks! Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 02:39, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

Images
Hi there, I'd like to ask if there's any problem with uploading images, mine doesn't want to, and there is a red text. --XXLVenom998 17:56, February 14, 2012 (UTC)
 * No, I filled all required fields, and I also wanted to upload a new image. I encounter with a long RED text, with a lot of signs, containing the information that I need to reach a limit in editing or registration time(?). Please help... Can you find someone to help? --XXLVenom998 20:03, February 14, 2012 (UTC)
 * Than you, I will contact them. --XXLVenom998 08:05, February 15, 2012 (UTC)