Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Darth Stryfe (second nomination)


 * ''The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.

Darth Stryfe

 * Nominated by:  Grunny  ( Talk ) 11:10, 19 February 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: The most brutal Sith

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1) The most brutal Sith, huh? [chokes to death] I find your lack of faith disturbing. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  Everything I tell you is the truth  ) 11:43, 19 February 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) I'll vote, but even with proof, I don't like the Perhaps precedent: "Farfalla, perhaps an ungulate Sephi". "Demos Traxen, perhaps a Thisspissian, or a Sluissi". "Yoda, perhaps a ..."--Skippy Farlstendoiro 11:53, 19 February 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) Cylka  -talk- 03:24, 5 March 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) No way he's Human. CSWE lies!  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  17:22, 21 March 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) Provided it is updated before moving on to a FA nomination. Grand Moff Tranner [[Image:Imperial Department of Military Research.svg|20px]] (Comlink) 20:38, 30 March 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Perhaps the most brutal of the One Sith, Stryfe was raw power personified that was waiting to be unleashed. Is this actually stated in the source? It sounds quite POV to me.  SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  Everything I tell you is the truth  ) 11:36, 19 February 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) *Yes it is. It is the wording used in both Legacy 0 and the Complete Star Wars Encyclopedia.  Grunny  ( Talk ) 11:39, 19 February 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) **I would suggest changing it to "considered to potentially be the most brutal of the One Sith," or somesuch, to avoid NPOV/OR-looking wording. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 12:09, 19 February 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Done.  Grunny  ( Talk ) 12:12, 19 February 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) Cylka:
 * 6) * I think it would be a good idea to tie the Sith-Imperial War and the Anti-Sith Insurgency together when they are introduced.
 * 7) **How's that? :)
 * 8) * Stryfe was named Krayt's new Hand after his former Hands, Darth Nihl and Darth Talon, let Skywalker, who Krayt sought for his healing ability, escape the Sith Temple on Coruscant. - I think that this information would work better with the previous sentence if you rewrote it to first talk about Skywalker's escape, then lead into Stryfe's promotion.
 * 9) **Re-ordered sentence :).
 * 10) *Good job, yet again, Grunny!. Cylka  -talk- 23:52, 4 March 2009 (UTC)
 * 11) **Thanks for being a reviewing machine, Cylka :D.  Grunny  ( Talk ) 02:21, 5 March 2009 (UTC)

Comments
 * I'm going to GA it now and then put it up for FA after Storms comes out :-).