Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Xenon Nnaksta


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Xenon Nnaksta

 * Nominated by: -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 19:57, 29 September 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Part 1 of 22 of AckyProject GOSS.

(5 Inqs/0 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Graestan ( Talk ) 21:54, 30 September 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) I am a wreckless driver.  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  20:56, 1 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 3)  Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 19:24, 8 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) Part 1, eh? You gotta love WEG :)  Greyman ( Talk ) 13:20, 11 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) --  Darth Culator  (Talk) 23:53, 11 October 2008 (UTC)

Oppose Comments
 * 1) From the Survival School of Chack Jadson:
 * 2) * "urban uprising was saw" Is this supposed to be "which saw"? Otherwise, great work.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 15:17, 30 September 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) **Yep. Fixed. Thank you very much. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 15:38, 30 September 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) From the desk of Atarumaster88
 * 5) * "Extremely successful class" is POV (intro).
 * 6) **Altered
 * 7) * A bit more context on Maw'shiye or whatever his name is would be good (intro), in terms of occupation
 * 8) **Done.
 * 9) * "made him extremely tough" Some POV here. I generally call POV whenever extremes are stated, because what's extreme is a relative decision. It's not the best descriptive word also.
 * 10) **Altered.
 * 11) * "Nnaskta thrived along with his class, which was made of a dozen individuals of varied species and temperaments who complemented each other's skills perfectly, and worked exceptionally as a unit" POV
 * 12) **Altered.
 * 13) * "assignment's previous records and becoming a force to be reckoned with, either collectively or as individuals." POV, and what does "assignment's previous records" mean?
 * 14) **Altered and clarified.
 * 15) * "Their first hurdle was relatively simple" Again, POV.
 * 16) **Satisfactory?
 * 17) * He seems to be a rather skilled person. Is there enough information to merit a T&A? I'll leave that to your judgment, but some more detail on exactly how skilled he is would be nice; as a sourcebook/AJ character, he's hopefully got some good stuff. Have a Super Terrific Friendly Un-frustrating day. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 18:06, 8 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 18) **I'll look into it. Thanks for the review. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 18:56, 8 October 2008 (UTC)