Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Kadir (Tarisian)


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Kadir (Tarisian)

 * Nominated by: SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 09:31, November 6, 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Did someone order more KOTOR minor NPC's?

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)
Support
 * 1) The 100% game completion section was one of his more exciting days. Nayayen [[Image:Old Republic military symbol.png|18px]](talk) 10:02, November 6, 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) He has an image and everything. --Skippy Farlstendoiro 10:16, November 6, 2009 (UTC)
 * Heh, love this old geezer&hellip;--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 03:48, November 7, 2009 (UTC)
 * 1)  Grunny  ( Talk ) 11:48, November 7, 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) Great work.  Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 21:05, November 7, 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) Toprawa and Ralltiir 22:35, November 12, 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) One thing for you: The sentences in the first paragraph of the bio are very repetitive in structure: "on the latest news, but as he grew older" "of the building, but Kadir claimed" "multiple times, but his requests" "Upper City decent, but was". Could you vary this up a little? Otherwise, great work.  Grunny  ( Talk ) 11:17, November 7, 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) *Mixed it up a little. Thanks for the review, Grunny. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 11:44, November 7, 2009 (UTC)

Comments


 * Quote from 70.59.73.30: Kadir rules!!! He is the best character in the game. He talks about the Cantina every five seconds and he begins shouting in the middle of a sentence! I agree. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 09:31, November 6, 2009 (UTC)
 * I removed the links to "South Apartments", they redirect to Upper City. Nayayen [[Image:Old Republic military symbol.png|18px]](talk) 10:02, November 6, 2009 (UTC)
 * Actually I plan to create that article, after I discuss a few notability issues with Cylka when she's back. That's why I put the link in. I'm afraid I'll forget if I wait for the article to actually go up. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 10:23, November 6, 2009 (UTC)
 * I'd say just go ahead and create the article. Although it's been a long while since I played the game, "South Apartments" seems to be mentioned in enough articles to appear notable. Grunny  ( Talk ) 11:17, November 7, 2009 (UTC)
 * I'll get a stub in tomorrow, and expand over the next few days. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 11:43, November 7, 2009 (UTC)