Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Xash


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Xash

 * Nominated by: —Tommy 9281 Mechnochair negwt.jpg ( Mechno-chair ) 03:46, February 4, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: It's been a long time, I shouldn't have left you, without a dope GAN to step to...

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)
Support
 * 1) No problems with the brother.  Nayayen &mdash; TALK  21:02, February 7, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 11:02, February 9, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) Jedi Kasra (comlink) 17:40, February 11, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4)  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  20:59, March 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) Toprawa and Ralltiir 04:41, March 5, 2010 (UTC)
 * 6) Cylka  -talk- 04:50, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Soresu
 * 2) * confronting a Jedi: a few things unclear here. The quote says that Xash wanted to take on Dray alone, something not mentioned in the bio or P&T.
 * 3) **Addressed.
 * 4) * Xash's sister continued to fight the Jedi, The quote seems to indicate that Xash was in a 1v1. If Sindra continued to fight, then why isn't she mentioned earlier? SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 01:44, February 9, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) **Addressed. Thank you for the review, Soresu. Please advise if anything further is required. —Tommy 9281 Mechnochair negwt.jpg ( Mechno-chair ) 02:10, February 9, 2010 (UTC)
 * 6) Just noticed Soresu's comment below, and would like to notify you that we use metric here. If you want to convert the "nearly 100 feet" to meters and ref that with a note that you changed it, that would work, or you could just say "a great distance" or something.  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  21:24, February 25, 2010 (UTC)
 * 7) *I'm horrible at math but I believe I got the conversion right :P Addressed. —Tommy 9281 Mechnochair negwt.jpg ( Mechno-chair ) 23:27, February 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * 8) The only issue I have is that the girl they were searching for is mentioned in this sentence in the P/T -Upon sight of Xash and his sister, the young girl acknowledged them as evil and was thus afraid. - but the earlier sections of the article imply that the twins only met Dray. Maybe you could add something in a little earlier regarding them actually meeting/seeing the girl. Cylka  -talk- 03:38, March 5, 2010 (UTC)
 * 9) *Addressed via IRC. Thank you for the review, Cylka. Please advise if anything further is required. —Tommy 9281 04:41, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

Comments


 * The OS said "nearly a hundred feet" with regards to Xash being thrown into the tree. I added the "nearly" in.  Nayayen &mdash; TALK  21:02, February 7, 2010 (UTC)
 * No problem. Thanks again for the review. —Tommy 9281 Mechnochair negwt.jpg ( Mechno-chair ) 21:04, February 7, 2010 (UTC)