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Fury and Revelation
Please do not remove links from summarys; and also bear in mind that appearance lists for books are to be kept in alphabetical order. Thank you - Captain Kwenn – Talk 15:58, 1 December 2007 (UTC)


 * Im only fixing Furys summary the way it needs 2 be. just like the other 6 books the part of the summary thats not in white is always made bold, just as it shud be with Fury as well. and not having Jori Lekauf in the right place was an accident and i was just abot to fix it.
 * The others (except for Inferno for some reason) all include links - Captain Kwenn – Talk 19:49, 1 December 2007 (UTC)

LOTF
Please stop changing Luke Skywalker's LOTF appearances to simply "Legacy of the Force." It's not how we do things. Thanks, -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 20:47, 20 March 2008 (UTC)

Than why is Jacens Jainas Leias and bens like that?? they all should be the same. --Darth Revanon 5:22, 20 March 2008 (UTC)

LOL cause i did that to i think jacen,jainas and bens I got a warning message as well! Steves490 22:14, 21 March 2008 (UTC)
 * Just because they're like that doesn't mean it's right. If you've gone and done that, please change them back. Thank you. :) Toprawa and Ralltiir 22:17, 21 March 2008 (UTC)

Oh lol. well there probably changed already. but the ones that arent ill fix.--Darth Revanon 9:29, 22 March 2008 (UTC)

LOTF Character Deaths
Hi Darth Revanon! I noticed that you removed Liegeus Vorn from the LOTF character death lists. I was wondering what your line of thinking was for this one --- I realize that he wasn't killed in the actual book, but there's precedent for situations like this one. The New Jedi Order mentions character deaths such as Mon Mothma, and she's included in the character deaths for that series.

Would you be OK with me putting Liegeus back on that list?

Menkooroo 19:05, 21 March 2008 (UTC)


 * Oh i didnt know that they did that cause im not that far in Revelation. but yea if u wanna put that bak thats ok cuz the reason that i took it off was that he died 35 ABY so i was confused at y he was on this list cuz u know its 40 ABY.--Darth Revanon 4:12, 21 March 2008 (UTC)


 * Ah, OK, brilliant. Thanks for putting it back! Menkooroo 18:09, 22 March 2008 (UTC)

Jedi Coalition
AS YOU READ THIS i am making an infobox for our little article. I will do the best i can with the info i got. I will probably put in units and appearances as well so in like a half hour or hour when I'm done ill post on the site and im gonna need some serious help Steves490 02:43, 22 March 2008 (UTC)


 * Ok ill give u a hand. What are you gonna put for the general description??--Darth Revanon 10:43, 22 March 2008 (UTC)


 * thanks for letting me know before i finished my article ill put your stuff into mine Steves490 03:42, 22 March 2008 (UTC)


 * It was great!, now i am adding the backstory of the battle of kuat,kasshyk and so on Steves490 04:00, 22 March 2008 (UTC)


 * I saved my part on the battle of Kuat edit any spelling/factual edits i probably made Steves490 04:17, 22 March 2008 (UTC)


 * Whenever you get back on the site and wanna help me fill in the last three categories would be great thanks for your help yesterday!! Steves490 09:58, 22 March 2008 (UTC)


 * i'm finishing up lukes grief now and later ill do batte of centerpoint Steves490 20:06, 22 March 2008 (UTC)

Featured Articles
However, that doesn't have any citation and should be (and has been) displayed to read something like this:
 * Hi there. As a courtesy and to preserve the quality of these articles, when making edits to Featured Articles or Good articles, please reference all added content to the article, such as your revision to Jaina Solo. You added, under the affiliation field of the infobox:
 * Jedi Coalition
 * Jedi Coalition.
 * The above example is properly cited and helps maintain the high standard of the featured article while updating it with new information; in fact, it's a good idea to reference all contributions to Wookieepedia articles. As always, if you have questions, feel free to approach me on my talk page. One last thing&mdash;it's generally discouraged to place links into quotes, unless that link appears nowhere else in the article. i.e. don't link Sword of the Jedi in a quote. Cheers. Atarumaster88  Jedi_Order.svg ( Talk page ) 16:57, 23 March 2008 (UTC)

Duel on Hesperidium
I'm actually waiting until Sacrifce comes out on paperback to buy it. So when it does and i get it ill be happy to help you. Steves490 22:16, 12 April 2008 (UTC)

Other than Invincible it's the only book I havent read Steves490 23:07, 12 April 2008 (UTC)

Yea after reading everything on here i basically know everything about the book. But i wouldn't want to write an article without know the details. But i'll let you know when i do read it. Steves490 23:14, 12 April 2008 (UTC)

Sry for not replying sooner, ive be playin ALOT of GTAIV, however i did get sacrifice, i added the paperback summary and I didn't forget about hesperidium you will see my additions to that soon enough Steves490 23:34, 1 May 2008 (UTC)

Too bad you got banned. I don't know about that campaign box, maybe somebody higher up updates it. Steves490 22:43, 4 May 2008 (UTC)

1st Appearances
Hi Darth Revanon.

If a character has only appeared in one novel, then you don't need to add that it's their first appearance, because it's their only appearance.

I.e. Hirrtu, Keldan &mdash; they are only in Exile, which means that's their first appearance, but you shouldn't add the template because so far they haven't appeared in any other source. If, say, Keldan was in Inferno as well, you'd then add the template next to Exile.

I've already changed it back on Entora Zar, but I'd appreciate it if you reverted the edits you made on those other articles. It is policy, I'm not trying to be difficult or rude.

Thank you. Harrar 19:14, 19 April 2008 (UTC)

Do not edit through in-use tag
Perhaps you don't know what an in-use tag is, so I'm going to help you learn. This tag at the top of a page Template:inuse means that the article is undergoing a major edit. Please do not edit through the in-use tag while it is being worked on. If you continue to do so, you may find yourself speaking to an administrator. Thank you for your cooperation. Toprawa and Ralltiir 23:57, 28 April 2008 (UTC)
 * No, sir, there is no "chilling out." This is a rule of this website, not to mention a matter of courtesy. You have been warned. Don't do it again. Toprawa and Ralltiir 00:15, 29 April 2008 (UTC)

Spoilers

 * Please be careful to avoid posting spoilers in edit summaries that will show up in Recent changes, particularly for materials that haven't even been released yet. Thanks. -- Ozzel 04:13, 5 May 2008 (UTC)
 * Oh sorry. which article are you talking about?--Darth Revanon 6:24, 5 May 2008 (UTC)

Duel in Fellowship Plaza
Sounds good im getting Tempest out now. If you don't mind i like the idea of duel in fellowship plaza, coruscant might be a bit too broad. Steves490 23:34, 5 May 2008 (UTC)
 * i'll make a box and we'll build from there Steves490 23:38, 5 May 2008 (UTC)
 * The blue userbox with everything important in it Steves490 23:48, 5 May 2008 (UTC)
 * It's up Steves490 23:56, 5 May 2008 (UTC)
 * How do you add battles to the campaign box? Steves490 22:40, 9 May 2008 (UTC)

Dooku in Revelation
Where is this? I read the book and didn't find a direct mention or an unambiguous indirect one. Could you please provide the mention? Yrfeloran 04:52, 7 May 2008 (UTC)

Zannah
Hey Revanon,

Understood. I've put it back the way you had it. Sorry about the confusion. —Tommy ( Clean face and hands ) 18:51, 11 May 2008 (UTC)

Duel at Home + Hapes
Hey, Ill try to complete an article on the Home duel tonight. I'll post the article as I finish section by section so you can add/fix anything u want. But after Invincible comes out, i'll be out of commission for a day or two and then I'll help out with the Hapes article and probably the other battles in the finale. Steves490 01:19, 13 May 2008 (UTC)

The Duel at The Home page is up the prelude anyway Steves490 03:17, 13 May 2008 (UTC)

40 ABY
I see what you mean, I will ask the admin's what they think and then I will put it back the way it was, or if they like it that way, we can keep it that way. You can talk about it here. I hope this helps!--Purplegethos 18:57, 13 May 2008 (UTC)

Lightsaber duels
Hey Revanon,

I noticed you are working on a couple duel articles. In my experience, I've learned that a certain format is to be followed when writing duel articles. Check this one out, or even these ones, they'll show you how to properly format the different sections and such. Also keep in mind that you want to steer away from play-by-play, unless you run into a duel such as the first example I provided, where the play-by-play action was necessary to make the article work. If you need any help with whatever you are doing, I'm more than happy to lend a hand to you. I'm also familiar with the duels that you are working on, and will be watching your progress with great interest.

—Tommy ( Clean face and hands ) 23:09, 13 May 2008 (UTC)

Things I noticed
Well, I would expand the intro a bit, including the date when it happened. After your're all done, I'll clean it up so you can see what I mean. I'm not gonna write or rewrite the thing (it's your project), but I will tweak it here & there. You really have to provide much more detail. For instance, you talk immediately about the tassels. What is their significance? You have to say more than just Jaina handed them to him.

Also, you need an "aftermath" section, sources, more appearances (because this was talked about in later issues), and probably a BTS. Like I said, check out the examples I provided for you. They should give you a good basis of what a good duel article should look like. I'm a guy who has a propensity for quotes, and there are plenty more that can be used (the ones you have are good) in this article. Keep up the good work tho, & I'm always here to help. —Tommy ( Clean face and hands ) 23:35, 13 May 2008 (UTC)

Last SGCW Articles

 * Hey Revanon, Now that the LOTF series is gone and Fate of the Jedi is coming up i'm trying to give all the battles of the Second Galactic Civil War an article. Since it was already agreed on beforehand i created the Raid on Gyndine article earlier this week and i plan to finish soon. But I wanted to consult another user familiar with the LOTF series before creating the remaining ones. Here are my ideas of remaining battles and I want to know if you think they deserve their own articles or should be left alone.

Mission to Vulpter (Dur Gejjen's assasination)
 * Even i'm not sure if this really needs an article. But i do bleieve that the GAG assasination of a Confederation head of State is a big part of the war.

Second Duel at The Home/Skirmish at The Home (death of Alema Rar)
 * This one i'm more confident about. Since this was a Jedi Coalition priority during the war to eliminate her and she was part of Lumiya's Sith at that point. It's also the first known confrontation involving One Sith.

I plan on finishing the Gyndine article tomorrow and one of these two by the end of the week. After I'm finished the initial creating stage It would be great to have you helping me like old times! If you have any other ideas that I missed i'd love to hear them. Steves490 22:22, 11 October 2008 (UTC) I missed Niathal, Didn't like I had had to read through so much to get to Caedus but I liked how he saw the error of his ways before and was really trying to be that perfect sith. I was upset there wasn't some epic duel between Jaina and Caedus since Caedus was handicapped both times. It was odd that the confederation didn't play a bigger part in the end of their own war. Thought that Buwatu or whatever his name was would have made a better Chief of State. But I did like how after an entire series of build up, it was finally Jacen as an open Sith fighting the Jedi, I thought that should have happened after Inferno, lots of battles, just the right amount of mandalorians instead of a whole soap opera, and Ben was really doing well. Tahiri could've died fighting but Ben has to marry someone doesn't he? lol. I liked the book and the series but i wonder what can possibly happen for another 9 books in FOTJ. Sorry if you were expecting a simple liked it or not. Steves490 21:59, 12 October 2008 (UTC)
 * The info for the Raid on Gyndine is in Exile pg 70-72. And about Invincible......
 * Its nice talking to somone who actually read the books and yes i do think those ideas will be good articles to work on. Steves490 22:22, 12 October 2008 (UTC)
 * I'm in the process on making a stub for a Mission to Vulpter article which should be up sometime soon. And about the MF novel, I wonder what they will find on the ship thats so interesting. Steves490
 * Its up now Mission to Vulpter Steves490 23:59, 12 October 2008 (UTC)
 * Didn't Jacen promote Lekauf from Corporal to Lieutenant in his office at the GAG headquarters? Steves490 19:43, 13 October 2008 (UTC)
 * Its in Sacrifice on page 136 and mentioned again on 173 Steves490

Summaries

 * They are different. The amazon summary mentions the Sith ship. The jacket one doesn't. Leave both there. QuentinGeorge 20:40, 5 March 2009 (UTC)

Revelation taking place 41 ABY

 * I noticed your edit on the Second Battle of Fondor (Second Galactic Civil War) and I was just wondering about the source, since quite a few articles will need some tweaking I wanted to make sure about the date before I go through with it. Steves490 05:20, 8 March 2009 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the info i've got some articles to tweak now. Steves490

Rebel Force: Sneevel
Greetings, Darth Revanon.

On January 24th, 2009, you added Sneevel to the list of species appearing in Rebel Force: Target. I'm trying to FA the Sneevel article, but I cannot find that novel. Assuming that you currently have easy access to RF:T, I'm asking you to tell me what it says about Sneevels. Thank you in advance. --Skippy Farlstendoiro 11:06, 20 April 2009 (UTC)
 * It would even be useful to know where in the book the Sneevel is mentioned - ie which chapter. --Eyrezer 08:46, 22 April 2009 (UTC)
 * I saw the response on Skippy's and Eyrezer's talk pages. Can you go into a bit more detail, DR? What planet are these Sneevels on? Whom are they attacking and why? Whom do they work for, if anyone? This is the kind of thing that might be worth mentioning in the Sneevel article. Thanks! ~ SavageBob 22:04, 22 April 2009 (UTC)
 * That helps a lot; thanks! ~ SavageBob 23:16, 22 April 2009 (UTC)
 * Thanks, Darth Revanon. You had the three of us all clamoring for help :D --Eyrezer 23:45, 27 April 2009 (UTC)
 * And of course, I thank you too. --Skippy Farlstendoiro 06:32, 28 April 2009 (UTC)

Exodeenian
Hi Revanon. Would you be able to tell me what the mention of the Exodeenian mention is in Rebel Force: Target? And the page number, too? --Eyrezer 10:20, 17 June 2009 (UTC)

Re: Edits to Ben Skywalker
If you still have questions, feel free to ask me. &mdash;Master Jonathan(Jedi Council Chambers) 01:13, 13 July 2009 (UTC)
 * The community has decided here and here to capitalize the word "Human" in all contexts even though official sources do not, so as to provide consistency with other sentient species, which are capitalized in official sources.
 * Yes, the article title begins with a capital T, but as explained here (fourth item), the first letter of the link title is not case-sensitive; thus, the Maw still goes to The Maw.

Re: Karen Traviss Boba Fett book
I wrote may, knowing that it hadn't been confirmed yet. I don't understand why you reverted the Boba Fett one and not The Essential Guide to the Star Wars Military; they are equally tentative. --- RCK Talk 00:00, 9 August 2009 (UTC)
 * She's quitting regardless of anything else that happens. That means she is not writing any more Star Wars books in the foreseeable future; I didn't say any particular author was going to continue the project. To not include her dispute with LFL is suppressing current knowledge that should have a place on the wiki.--- RCK Talk 00:29, 9 August 2009 (UTC)

GA
I was just wondering where everybody gets their GA info? I can't find any anywhere! Please help!!! Gmalek 15:59, 29 August 2009 (UTC)

Renegade
Hi Darth Revanon. I see that you have Rebel Force: Renegade. I see from its appearance list that it includes some Ychthytonians. Could you tell me in what context they are mentioned, and the page number? Thanks for any help you can offer. --Eyrezer 07:26, September 14, 2009 (UTC)

dynasty of evil.
You said you read the novel...i did too...it seems as if the trembling of Zannah's hand at the end signifies something...do you think so?


 * What? I meant that I have Imperial Commando: 501st and that their is an excerpt of Dynasty of Evil in the back of it.--Darth Revanon 21:57, November 8, 2009 (UTC)

Ulabore
The Battle of Phaseera takes place in 1,002 BBY. After Phaseera, Bane is arrested, and over the next two years he becomes a Sith Lord. This means the Battle of Phaseera takes place two years before the finale of Path of Destruction. The skirmish on Alaris Prime, in which Ulabore is killed, takes place one month after Phaseera, as per Dynasty of Evil. Please do not change this back. Jonjedigrandmaster ( Jedi Beacon ) 01:42, December 31, 2009 (UTC)
 * Because the war scenes don't all take place in 1,000 BBY. The Battles of Hsskhor and Kashyyyk take place in 1,003 BBY, the Battle of Phaseera takes place in 1,002 BBY, and after that battle, Bane is arrested and taken in by the Brotherhood. He is trained by them for two years, and the rest of the novel takes place in 1,000 BBY. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 01:55, December 31, 2009 (UTC)
 * I don't currently have access to the novel, but I have contacted our Bane-era expert (who wrote such status articles as Battle of Phaseera, dating it at 1,002 BBY, and several other Path of Destruction-related articles) on the matter. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 02:16, December 31, 2009 (UTC)
 * Ah, I see what you mean, but the prelude begins in 1,006 BBY, right after the Battle of Korriban (New Sith Wars). The three years later then jumps to Des joining the army in 1,003 BBY. (And my brother lost the book; we're looking for it right now, but so far to no avail :P ) Sorry about the confusion, Revanon. :) Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 02:28, December 31, 2009 (UTC)
 * Huh, I guess that's wrong then (it's probably just ignoring the prelude, since that's the only part that takes place outside that time) but it could probably be made to say 1,006–1,000 BBY. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 02:34, December 31, 2009 (UTC)
 * Well, I don't really know. All I know is that the PoD article says one thing, whereas several other articles on this site say another. I distinctly remember months passing by at a time during Bane's training in PoD, so I would think that it covers more than the span of a signle year, but I cant be sure, since I can't find the book to look it up myself. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 03:00, December 31, 2009 (UTC)
 * Well, 1,000 years before the movie is obviously an approximate date, since we know the whole thing isn't exactly 1,000 BBY, so I see no evidence to the point here. But once again, I can't really say any more on the matter for certain. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 03:11, December 31, 2009 (UTC)
 * Well, I found the book, and pg 64 says that Bane was with the Gloom Walkers for a year before the Battle of Phaseera (placing the Battle of Kashyyyk, in which he took part, nearly a year previously). So he was with the Gloom Walkers for a year, from 1,003 BBY to 1,002 BBY, and then after Phaseera he joined the Brotherhood, and trained with them unitl 1,000 BBY. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 03:42, December 31, 2009 (UTC)
 * No problem :). Have a happy new year! Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 04:01, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Death Troopers
Why do you keep changing the part of the Death Troopers page?