Wookieepedia:Good article nominations



This page is for the nomination of good articles. This is not a way to showcase the articles of your favorite characters, spaceships, or the like. For a list of good articles, see Category:Wookieepedia good articles.

What is a Good article?
A Good article is an article that adheres to quality standards, but cannot reach FA status due to its limited content.

A Good article has the following attributes.

1. It is well written. In this respect:


 * (a) it has compelling prose, and is readily comprehensible to non-specialist readers;
 * (b) it follows a logical structure, introducing the topic and then grouping together its coverage of related aspects; where appropriate, it contains a succinct lead section summarizing the topic, and the remaining text is organized into a system of hierarchical sections (particularly for longer articles);
 * (c) it follows the Manual of Style, Layout Guide, and all other policies;
 * (d) necessary technical terms or jargon are briefly explained in the article itself, or an active link is provided.

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable. In this respect:


 * (a) it provides references to any and all sources used for its material;
 * (b) sources should be selected in accordance with the guidelines for reliable sources;
 * (c) it contains no elements of original research.

3. It is broad in its coverage, addressing all major aspects of the topic (this requirement is slightly weaker than the "comprehensiveness" required by WP:FA, and allows shorter articles and broad overviews of large topics to be listed);.

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy. In this respect:


 * (a) viewpoints are represented fairly and without bias;
 * (b) all significant points of view are fairly presented, but not asserted, particularly where there are or have been conflicting views on the topic.

5. It is stable, i.e., it does not change significantly from day to day and is not the subject of ongoing edit wars. This does not apply to vandalism and protection or semi-protection as a result of vandalism.

6. It contains images, where possible, to illustrate the topic. In this respect:


 * (a) the images are properly sourced and have succinct and descriptive captions;
 * (b) a lack of images does not in itself prevent an article from achieving Good Article status.

Nomination of Good articles
To nominate an article for Good article status, list it here. Nominated articles must meet all six requirements stated above. If an article has a net total of five votes of support (+5) after at least a week since it was nominated (beginning the day of its nomination), the article will be considered a "Good article" and tagged with the template. The talk page will also be tagged with the GA template. For complete instructions on archiving nominations please see here.

(+4)
Support
 * 1) --Eyrezer 22:50, 15 July 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Greyman ( Paratus ) 01:58, 16 July 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) Green Tentacle (Talk) 10:13, 20 July 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) Jedimca0(Do or Do Not, There is No Try) 11:24, 3 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 5) School of Thrawn 101 08:52, 7 August 2007 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) Redlinks, P&Ts section needed. [[Image:The Death of Ki-Adi-Mundi.jpg|40px]]  Jediknight19bby  ( Jedi High Council Chambers! ) 22:54, 15 July 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) *There is no requirement for P&T or no redlinks in the GA criteria. --Eyrezer 01:40, 16 July 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) **Per Eyrezer. Greyman ( Paratus ) 01:58, 16 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Ehh, could still use some expansion. If you can work up a plausible P&T then it'd get my vote straightaway. Looks a little lanky for a GA.--Goodwood 16:19, 5 August 2007 (UTC)

Comments

(+0)
Support
 * 1) &mdash; Darthtyler Talk 16:17, 27 July 2007 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) Two of the Images need to be sourced. --Jedimca0(Do or Do Not, There is No Try) 16:24, 27 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Done.&mdash; Darthtyler Talk 16:30, 27 July 2007 (UTC)


 * 1) 2(b) - sources?  There's not even a sources section. --School of Thrawn 101 08:47, 7 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) *But there is an appearances section which is the only place these guys have appeared. --Eyrezer 00:36, 8 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) **Subtle difference between the two, however. Either way, it's a simple fix, in this case, since the two sections mirror e/o...I've taken care of it. --School of Thrawn 101 05:43, 8 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) ***It was right the way it was. As Zandor Rockers don't appear in the threee sources you added, the correct place for them is in the Notes and references section only. The Appearances and Sources section are only for appeaences and mentions of the subject of the article. Appearances are for in-universe material and Sources for OOU material. --Eyrezer 08:17, 8 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 5) ****You're right. Thanks for the lesson and the revert.  Either way, consider my objection null and void. --School of Thrawn 101 08:19, 8 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 6) Speculation, repetitively redundant, and the prose isn't the best. For example, half of "The Gantu incident" isn't about Rockers, and/or is repeated in later sections. —Xwing328 (Talk) 04:51, 13 August 2007 (UTC)

Comments
 * I know much of it falls under one source, but the referencing is too sparse. Each paragraphs should include at least one reference. [[Image:AckbarSig.jpg|20px]]  TheOne&OnlyAdmirableAckbar  ( It's A Trap! ) 16:36, 27 July 2007 (UTC)
 * AdmirableAckbar is correct: all the information needs to be sourced...either each paragraph, or each piece of information. Greyman ( Paratus ) 16:41, 27 July 2007 (UTC)
 * So every paragraph in the article needs to be sourced? That sucks.&mdash; Darthtyler Talk 16:50, 27 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Done.&mdash; Darthtyler Talk 16:52, 27 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Reference in intro needs to be removed . [[Image:AckbarSig.jpg|20px]]  TheOne&OnlyAdmirableAckbar  ( It's A Trap! ) 16:54, 27 July 2007 (UTC)
 *  they also had a variety of types, such as many were fat, small, or skinny should be rephrased [[Image:AckbarSig.jpg|20px]]  TheOne&OnlyAdmirableAckbar  ( It's A Trap! ) 16:56, 27 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Okay.&mdash; Darthtyler Talk 16:57, 27 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Done.&mdash; Darthtyler Talk 16:59, 27 July 2007 (UTC)
 * I'm excited to see this nominated here! I've liked these guys for a while and so I'm glad someone has given them the attention they deserve. Nice Going. Having said that, the infobox image needs to be rescanned before I can support.--Eyrezer 05:10, 28 July 2007 (UTC)
 * I can't tell if someone's being sarcastic, so if you are, I'm sorry if I'm a bad writer. Second, my scanner isn't working. But thank you if its not sarcasm. &mdash; Darthtyler Talk 00:52, 30 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Eyrezer wasn't being sarcastic. So don't worry :) Greyman ( Paratus ) 02:29, 30 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Okay good. I hate sarcasm, though sometimes its a powerful weapon.&mdash; Darthtyler Talk 02:32, 30 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Fixed the main image. -- Ozzel 07:17, 2 August 2007 (UTC)
 * The bit about not being able to smell, is that stated or speculation? --Eyrezer 05:18, 28 July 2007 (UTC)
 * The bit with the nectar needs to be cleaned up. It doesn't make sense currently. --Eyrezer 05:31, 28 July 2007 (UTC)

(+6)
Support Oppose
 * 1) --Eyrezer 09:29, 28 July 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) It looks great. --Jedimca0(Do or Do Not, There is No Try) 11:06, 28 July 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) [[Image:AckbarSig.jpg|20px]]  TheOne&OnlyAdmirableAckbar  ( It's A Trap! ) 11:08, 28 July 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) --Goodwood 14:02, 30 July 2007 (UTC)
 * 5) Greyman ( Paratus ) 18:07, 6 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 6)  Victor  ( talk ) 00:10, 8 August 2007 (UTC)
 * I really like this nom, but I think it could use a bit of an explanation on the sentience, sapience, etc. thing. Also, is it canon that the majority of species breathe oxygen or OR? Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 19:20, 1 August 2007 (UTC)
 * The oxygen breathers bit is canon from Alien Encounters. It is said OOU to gamemasters advising them on creating their own species but I believe that still qualifies. As to the sentience expansion part, that is a good idea. I wasn't really sure how/where to expand the article and so will look into it. I'm not sure where I'll find canon commentary on it though. I don't think the RPG books I've looked in so far explore it. --Eyrezer 23:11, 1 August 2007 (UTC)
 * There's mention of sentience test in Planet of Twilight, if that helps. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 14:26, 3 August 2007 (UTC)
 * Actually AE says "carbon-breathing" species. Odd. --Eyrezer 23:12, 6 August 2007 (UTC)
 * So are all the objections cleared up now? Greyman ( Paratus ) 14:13, 8 August 2007 (UTC)
 * I've made no addition re sentience so nope. --Eyrezer 08:18, 9 August 2007 (UTC)

Comments
 * Different.  Chack Jadson  Talk 18:15, 29 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Definately different - but me likes. Could use links in the Notes and References, though.--Goodwood 14:02, 30 July 2007 (UTC)
 * That's an interesting one that. I always leave the links out in my footnotes because that is my preference. --Eyrezer 14:08, 30 July 2007 (UTC)

(0)
Support
 * 1) Thire 4477 05:15, 8 August 2007 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) It needs to be referenced . --Jedimca0(Do or Do Not, There is No Try) 09:38, 14 August 2007 (UTC)

Comments
 * Just a couple of things: Birth-date has a fact tag on it that needs to be addressed.  Also, there is only one reference notation for the entire article.  I'll work on referencing it, but I've no clue where to find information on his exact DOB. --School of Thrawn 101 05:25, 8 August 2007 (UTC)

(+3)
Support
 * 1) -- [[Image:AckbarSig.jpg|40px]] dmirableAckbar  ( It's A Trap! ) 18:34, 9 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Good work. [[Image:The Death of Ki-Adi-Mundi.jpg|40px]]  Jediknight19bby  ( Jedi High Council Chambers! ) 18:37, 9 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) Jedimca0(Do or Do Not, There is No Try) 13:15, 12 August 2007 (UTC)

Oppose

Comments

(-1)
Support
 * 1) Nominated. [[Image:The Death of Ki-Adi-Mundi.jpg|40px]]  Jediknight19bby  ( Jedi High Council Chambers! ) 18:43, 9 August 2007 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) At a glance, it's basically just a list. The main body needs to be expanded and properly sourced. The list should really go&mdash;what defines notability? It has potential, but it's not up to scratch just yet. -- [[Image:AckbarSig.jpg|40px]] dmirableAckbar  ( It's A Trap! ) 18:51, 9 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) *Notability is whatever the users want it to be. What else does it need? [[Image:The Death of Ki-Adi-Mundi.jpg|40px]]  Jediknight19bby  ( Jedi High Council Chambers! ) 18:53, 9 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) **What I mean is that different users have different opinions on who is notable. But since the list is gone now, it doesn't matter. However, the article is still far too short and incomplete. -- [[Image:AckbarSig.jpg|40px]] dmirableAckbar  ( It's A Trap! ) 19:01, 9 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) Per AdmirableAckbar, and several of the images need to be sourced. --Jedimca0(Do or Do Not, There is No Try) 18:55, 9 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 5) *Done. [[Image:The Death of Ki-Adi-Mundi.jpg|40px]]  Jediknight19bby  ( Jedi High Council Chambers! ) 18:59, 9 August 2007 (UTC)

Comments
 * Why did you remove all the images? They needed to be sourced, not removed. --Jedimca0(Do or Do Not, There is No Try) 19:05, 9 August 2007 (UTC)
 * I accidentally didn't keep them when I deleted the list. Sorry. [[Image:The Death of Ki-Adi-Mundi.jpg|40px]]  Jediknight19bby  ( Jedi High Council Chambers! ) 19:08, 9 August 2007 (UTC)

(+3)
Support
 * 1) Thefourdotelipsis 09:42, 10 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Jedimca0(Do or Do Not, There is No Try) 09:47, 10 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) What's The Story? This is FA material, that's the story. [[Image:The Death of Ki-Adi-Mundi.jpg|40px]]  Jediknight19bby  ( Jedi High Council Chambers! ) 19:57, 10 August 2007 (UTC)
 * Eh, it would be, if not for the word limit. Thefourdotelipsis 09:13, 11 August 2007 (UTC)

Oppose

Comments

(+3)
Support Oppose
 * 1) -- [[Image:AckbarSig.jpg|40px]] dmirableAckbar  ( It's A Trap! ) 11:30, 10 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Jedimca0(Do or Do Not, There is No Try) 11:32, 10 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) At this rate, everything Acky noms will have at least 3 support votes. [[Image:The Death of Ki-Adi-Mundi.jpg|40px]]  Jediknight19bby  ( Jedi High Council Chambers! ) 19:55, 10 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) Good work, well-referenced.--Goodwood 19:51, 13 August 2007 (UTC)

Comments

(+3)
Support
 * 1) Nominated. Greyman ( Paratus ) 16:48, 10 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Pretty good work, Greyman. Not FA, but it's some nice stuff. [[Image:The Death of Ki-Adi-Mundi.jpg|40px]]  Jediknight19bby  ( Jedi High Council Chambers! ) 19:56, 10 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) Jedimca0(Do or Do Not, There is No Try) 09:40, 14 August 2007 (UTC)

Object

Comments
 * Expanded and sourced. An interesting character from an interesting story, to say the least. Greyman ( Paratus ) 16:48, 10 August 2007 (UTC)

(+6)
Suppport Object Comments
 * 1) Nominated. MIS Tau 1 ( Woosh! ) 16:48, 10 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) --Eyrezer 22:06, 12 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) -- [[Image:AckbarSig.jpg|40px]] dmirableAckbar  ( It's A Trap! ) 17:26, 14 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) Heck, this is probably darn near up to snuff for featured status. jSarek 07:15, 16 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 5) Pelmarn Da&#39;kari 08:08, 16 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 6) Good, man. [[Image:The Death of Ki-Adi-Mundi.jpg|40px]]  Jediknight19bby  ( Jedi High Council Chambers! ) 17:20, 18 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 7) What the hell is this doing here? This is FA quality! Thefourdotelipsis 02:19, 19 August 2007 (UTC)
 * Looks good but this image needs to be sourced. --Eyrezer 02:29, 12 August 2007 (UTC)
 * done--MIS Tau 1 13:50, 12 August 2007 (UTC)
 * Just a few things:
 * Unless the external displays is explicitly mentioned in the game, you should probably clarify the source. I agree that it looks very likely that they are outside the cockpit, but the ref should say it's based on visual inspection and hasn't been stated.
 * The concept of ships having a maximum speed in space seems to be somewhat frowned on with The New Essential Guide to Vehicles and Vessels giving acceleration values instead. The NEGVV also has the A-wing with greater acceleration than the TIE Defender, making it unlikely that the Missile Boat would have greater acceleration than the A-wing. Although all you have to go on is the MGLT bit, it might be wise to downplay and talk of maximum speed or comparison to the A-wing.
 * "The story of the Missile Boat begins with a technophile admiral by the name of Zaarin." is a little too flowery.
 * Some POV, particularly "devious attacks by Zaarin's forces".
 * I'd have to check the game but I think the Vorknyxx was only moved to To-phalion Base after that mission.
 * Source the infobox. Green Tentacle (Talk) 00:23, 17 August 2007 (UTC)
 * objections addressed on the page--MIS Tau 1 01:11, 17 August 2007 (UTC)
 * Reference for visual inspection added--MIS Tau 1 22:33, 18 August 2007 (UTC)

(+7)
Support Object Comments
 * 1) Nominated. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 18:20, 13 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) It looks great. --Jedimca0(Do or Do Not, There is No Try) 09:44, 14 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) Graestan  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( This party's over ) 15:35, 15 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) -- [[Image:AckbarSig.jpg|40px]] dmirableAckbar  ( It's A Trap! ) 23:53, 15 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 5) --Goodwood 12:35, 16 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 6) Greyman ( Paratus ) 03:17, 18 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 7) Hobbes15 ( Tiger Headquarters ) 04:48, 18 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 1) Could use a general prose cleanup. Paragraphs are too small-many of them only one or two sentences long. Try not to use the Order's name too much (like, not in every other sentance?).--Goodwood 01:24, 14 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) *Addressed. I had browser issues when writing this, so apologies. And I avoided using "the Order" because the source material does not refer to them as such. The remaining paragraphs are set up to distinguish between minor topics. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 02:36, 14 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) **Formatting looks much better. It could still use a few creative substitutions for the name; for instance, using "members of this tradition would" instead of "the Zeison Sha would".--Goodwood 02:50, 14 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Three or four "Zeison Shas" replaced. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 03:36, 14 August 2007 (UTC)
 * Perhaps EGttF will provide the material I need to get this to FA. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 18:20, 13 August 2007 (UTC)
 * On the other hand, it is well-sourced.--Goodwood 01:24, 14 August 2007 (UTC)

(+5)
Support
 * 1) Nominated.--Goodwood 19:21, 13 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) This vote has nothing to do with the fact that we're related. Honestly. (Jesmin, that is, not Goodwood) -- [[Image:AckbarSig.jpg|40px]] dmirableAckbar  ( It's A Trap! ) 21:58, 13 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) Why not? supergeeky1 [[Image:BobaFett.jpg|20px]] The Cantina 22:00, 13 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) Yes. -Fnlayson 23:42, 13 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 5) Jedimca0(Do or Do Not, There is No Try) 09:46, 14 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 6) Greyman ( Paratus ) 03:17, 18 August 2007 (UTC)

Object Comments
 * 1) Intro needs some mention of Jesmin's death. Otherwise, looks good. Hobbes15 ( Tiger Headquarters ) 21:12, 18 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) *Addressed.--Goodwood 23:05, 18 August 2007 (UTC)

(-1)
Support
 * 1) Nominated. Clark Kent300 20:56, 13 August 2007 (UTC)

Object Comments
 * 1) Referencing is practically non-existent. -- [[Image:AckbarSig.jpg|40px]] dmirableAckbar  ( It's A Trap! ) 21:02, 13 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Per Ackbar. Also, the article itself needs to be almost completely restructured-I'm tempted to tag it with .-Goodwood 00:43, 14 August 2007 (UTC)

(+5)
Support
 * 1) -- [[Image:AckbarSig.jpg|40px]] dmirableAckbar  ( It's A Trap! ) 21:51, 13 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) --Jedimca0(Do or Do Not, There is No Try) 21:53, 13 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) -  Graestan  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( This party's over ) 21:55, 13 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) Well-executed, well-referenced; not bad for a GA-level. Though, of course, you've got your work cut out for you if Featured status is the ultimate objective.--Goodwood 22:15, 13 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 5) I'll help some more now that I'm back. They grow up so fast! [[Image:The Death of Ki-Adi-Mundi.jpg|40px]]  Jediknight19bby  ( Jedi High Council Chambers! ) 17:19, 18 August 2007 (UTC)

Oppose
 * Better, but still ways to go. Prose issues, tense issues, copyedit issues, reference issues, some POV issues, and that's just after a cursory look. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 16:03, 15 August 2007 (UTC)
 * We're working on it. --Jedimca0(Do or Do Not, There is No Try) 12:38, 18 August 2007 (UTC)

Comments
 * Me and Jedimca0 have put a lot of work into this article in the last few weeks, and Graestan has done all the tedious tidying up after us. We recognise that this article has recently failed FA and GA nominations, however, this article is vastly different from the one that was nominated a month ago, and with three different users as the main editors. The article in under new management, so to speak, and although it's not got the comprehensiveness of an FA, we feel it's ready for GA. -- [[Image:AckbarSig.jpg|40px]] dmirableAckbar  ( It's A Trap! ) 21:51, 13 August 2007 (UTC)
 * My thanks to Acky, Graestan, Jedimca, JMAS, Darth Culator, SoT, Pi, and everyone who's helped get my old pet project this far. [[Image:The Death of Ki-Adi-Mundi.jpg|40px]]  Jediknight19bby  ( Jedi High Council Chambers! ) 17:19, 18 August 2007 (UTC)

(+2)
Support
 * 1) Harrar 17:21, 14 August 2007 (GMT) - nominated
 * 2) Greyman ( Paratus ) 03:17, 18 August 2007 (UTC)

Oppose

Comments

(+1)
Support
 * 1) Pelmarn Da&#39;kari 05:14, 16 August 2007 (UTC)

Oppose

Comments

(+1)
Support
 * 1) Pelmarn Da&#39;kari 05:14, 16 August 2007 (UTC)

Oppose

Comments

(+2)
Support
 * 1) Nominated. Greyman ( Paratus ) 22:40, 16 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) -- [[Image:AckbarSig.jpg|40px]] dmirableAckbar  ( It's A Trap! ) 23:10, 18 August 2007 (UTC)

Object

Comments
 * I'm going to eventually try and get this to FA, so I figure this is a good place to start. Greyman ( Paratus ) 22:40, 16 August 2007 (UTC)

(+1)
Support
 * 1) Darthchristian   ( Hey! ) 1:00, 17 August 2007 (UTC)

Object

Comments
 * Sourced it, fixed punctuation errors. Help with expansion needed. Darthchristian   ( Hey! ) 1:00, 17 August 2007 (UTC)
 * One of my favourite characters, so I'm game. But needs a lot of work - I think her gradual fall to the Dark Side needs to be the undercurrent of the article, demonstrated by the ease of which she becomes a Joiner. I'm not gonna object cos I don't think there's much point; too much to do. But I'll get going ;-) -- Harrar 22:51, 17 August 2007 (GMT)

(+2)
Support
 * 1) Nominated. Greyman ( Paratus ) 05:30, 17 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Jedimca0(Do or Do Not, There is No Try) 12:42, 18 August 2007 (UTC)

Object

Comments
 * I don't know what to say, but I'm on an ARC kick right now&mdash;Alpha-98, now Mapper&hellip;who know's who will be next ;) Greyman ( Paratus ) 05:30, 17 August 2007 (UTC)
 * I've updated the infobox picture (compliments of Jaymach) so that it fills the whole box. Much better now :) Greyman ( Paratus ) 22:45, 18 August 2007 (UTC)

(0)
Support
 * 1) Talon Karrde   ( talk ) 1:00, 17 August 2007 (UTC)

Object Comments
 * 1) *Needs to be fully sourced per requirements.
 * 2) *Sources need to be formatted properly (no spaces).
 * 3) *16 years later → "16" needs to be spelled out.
 * 4) *The article is full of choppy sentence fragments which need to be rewritten so the article flows better.
 * 5) *I have a feeling that this event is covered, or least mentioned, in some WEG sourcebooks. If the event is mentioned, then those sourcebooks need to be added to the articles Sources list.
 * 6) *Capitalization of Noghri throughout the article. noghri → Noghri.
 * 7) *Inter-article link need to be corrected → Separatist should be Separatist
 * 8) *The article's writing, spelling, and grammar needs to be looked at with some attention&mdash;it needs a good copy-edit.
 * 9) ** Greyman ( Paratus ) 13:33, 17 August 2007 (UTC)
 * How can I find all of the sources? Because almost all of the informations can be found in the books I listed.
 * I suspect there's additional information in The Thrawn Trilogy Sourcebook, as well as a whole bunch of the Essential Guides. Check the Noghri article itself for other possible appearances and sources. jSarek 11:34, 18 August 2007 (UTC)


 * I tried to fix all the things I could. I think the sources part shows enough reference informations now. So if you have any other problems with the article please let me know.

(+2)
Support
 * 1) -- [[Image:AckbarSig.jpg|40px]] dmirableAckbar  ( It's A Trap! ) 11:19, 18 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Looks great. --Jedimca0(Do or Do Not, There is No Try) 12:35, 18 August 2007 (UTC)

Object

Comments