Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Four-Eighteen


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Four-Eighteen

 * Nominated by: Supreme Emperor (talk) 03:19, March 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Another for project novels, this time from Rogue Squadron.

(3 ECs/0 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 00:15, March 29, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  Commander Code-8  G'day, mate 23:38, April 2, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) Winterz (talk) 01:23, April 7, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) 501st
 * 2) * Context on Rogue Squadron. It would be nice if you added mention of the Galactic Civil war as well.
 * 3) **Funny enough this one popped into my head on the way to work today. I was hoping I could fix it before anyone noticed I was missing context on it :P
 * 4) ***Techincally, the Alliance transforms into the New Republic after 4 ABY, so the Empire is fighting the NR. That should be stated as the combatents of the Galactic Civil War here.
 * 5) ****Changed
 * 6) * You could add unidentified gender and unidentified species as categories.
 * 7) **Added
 * 8) * Where exactly was the trooper killed? The raid article seems to say that the raid happened in an Alliance base, which should be mentioned.
 * 9) **The novel never states where he died, just that 4-18 was down. All I know for sure is that he died on that raid.
 * 10) * You need to mention that he was in the Stormtrooper corps in the body. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 21:45, March 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * 11) **Added
 * 12) * Link and give brief context to Loor in the quote attribution.
 * 13) **Linked and gave context, do I also link his name in the article or just the quote?
 * 14) ***Since you have his name in the article, link it and the context there instead of in the quote. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 21:21, March 26, 2013 (UTC)
 * 15) ****Like this? Supreme Emperor (talk) 00:54, March 28, 2013 (UTC)
 * 16) *Good work. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 21:45, March 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * 17) **Thanks, Supreme Emperor (talk) 00:58, March 25, 2013 (UTC)


 * 1) CC-8
 * 2) * Shouldn't a nickname tag be used since this probably wasn't the guys real name?
 * 3) **Done
 * 4) ***Can you also specify that it was only a designation in the body?  Commander Code-8  G'day, mate 05:53, April 1, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) ****Done.
 * 6) * Four-twenty should probably be in the body somewhere since he's mentioned in the quote.  Commander Code-8  G'day, mate 00:21, March 29, 2013 (UTC)
 * 7) **Added Supreme Emperor (talk) 02:41, March 30, 2013 (UTC)


 * 1) Winterz
 * 2) * Reload infobox.
 * 3) **Reloaded
 * 4) * Does the raid have a conjectural name?
 * 5) **Yes
 * 6) *Good work, Sup. Winterz (talk) 16:37, March 31, 2013 (UTC)
 * 7) **Thanks. Supreme Emperor (talk) 20:14, April 2, 2013 (UTC)

Comments
 * In general, be careful with assuming genders when there is none. It seems to be a mistake made by way too many users. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 04:56, March 27, 2013 (UTC)
 * Will do. Supreme Emperor (talk) 02:42, March 30, 2013 (UTC)
 * Note that when hidding content in the Infobox you should use "1" instead of "y". Winterz (talk) 16:54, March 31, 2013 (UTC)