Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Precht


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Precht

 * Nominated by: Hanzo Hasashi 20:49, May 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Green Recruit

(2 ECs/1 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 22:14, May 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Menkooroo 14:46, May 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3)  Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 10:06, May 27, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Can you give a little more detail in ref [2]? Does the card indicate that he was a recent recruit at the time of the Tantive IV destruction?
 * 2) *His year of service was never given, however, it could have only been 0 BBY at the latest. Should I change it to simply say during the Galactic Civil War, also getting rid of ref [2] in the process?
 * 3) **I think the ref is OK. Maybe just a little more explanation within ref [2] itself as to why it says what it does (something at the end like "Therefore, Precht must have blah blah blah...").
 * 4) ***See if it's better now. Hanzo Hasashi 14:09, May 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) I'd say that ref [5] probably isn't necessary. If it's visually a DH-17 on the card, I think you can just source the card. Like, if there was an X-wing fighter on the card, you wouldn't need to source anything else to say so. Menkooroo 02:49, May 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) *Gotten rid of. Hanzo Hasashi 03:48, May 23, 2011 (UTC)

Comments
 * Same as above with Private Alain. Hanzo Hasashi 20:49, May 8, 2011 (UTC)