Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Valin Draco


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Valin Draco

 * Nominated by:Jinzler 21:52, 27 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Inquisitors are generally quite angry and violent

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support Object
 * 1) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie ) 05:05, 1 December 2008 (UTC)
 * 2)  IFYLOFD  ( And now, young Skywalker, you will die. ) 21:18, 18 December 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) -  Cavalier One [[Image:FarStar Logo.jpg|20px]]( Squadron channel ) 11:09, 12 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 4)  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  19:52, 16 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) Cylka  -talk- 03:59, 24 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) * He urged the team to surrender, but they refused, which began a fight between them, Muun and Draco's team of Clone shadow troopers. When did shadowtroopers come into all this? Were they with Draco all along?
 * 2) **They were there all along. I have clarified this --Jinzler 21:29, 30 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) * Just remember in future that all referencing occurs directly after punctuation (that includes commas), not before it. I fixed all of them in this article, so no need to worry. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie ) 10:44, 30 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) **Thank you --Jinzler 21:29, 30 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) IFYLOFD:
 * 6) * You could probably elaborate more on the "experiences" that made him turn to the dark side in the intro.
 * 7) **Fixed --Jinzler 19:43, 17 December 2008 (UTC)
 * 8) * "Draco ensured that they were easily able to do so." How so?
 * 9) **The Traitor's Gambit was pretty vague on this, but after much searching, I was able to discern how --Jinzler 20:35, 18 December 2008 (UTC)
 * 10) * Context on Darth Rivan please.
 * 11) **Added --Jinzler 19:43, 17 December 2008 (UTC)
 * 12) * Do we have info on what Draco learned from the holocron in the bio? Any more info on the holocron?
 * 13) **Added more info --Jinzler 20:35, 18 December 2008 (UTC)
 * 14) * Quotes for P&T or The capture of Denia sections?  IFYLOFD  ( And now, young Skywalker, you will die. ) 01:17, 17 December 2008 (UTC)
 * 15) **Added these --Jinzler 20:35, 18 December 2008 (UTC)
 * 16) The quote in P&T seems to be the same as the lead. If this is so, one of those needs to be changed.  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  00:28, 6 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 17) *That was a mistake (oops), but I have now fixed it and replaced it with another quote --Jinzler 17:38, 7 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 18) From the squadron briefing of Cavalier One:
 * 19) * Any mention of why Denia was imprisoned by Darga?
 * 20) **Added --Jinzler 18:06, 9 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 21) * He also used techniques that the holocron had shown him to create a Force illusion in a room that made anyone who entered the room fall asleep and under Draco's influence, their moral strength would be sapped. - I find this a little confusing; some clarity would be appreciated. Are the illusion and the falling asleep part of the same technique? How can moral strength be sapped if they are asleep?
 * 22) **I have clarfied this --Jinzler 18:06, 9 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 23) * How did the Resistance team sever the gatekeeper from the holocron?
 * 24) **It is unclear exactly how it is done, a player can either user "sever Force" with a "Destiny Point" to do it, or if they freed Vhiin'Thorla, he does this. This is quite RPGish, but I have now stated in the article they did it "using the Force", because that it is pretty much all I can say on this --Jinzler 18:06, 9 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 25) ***No probs; I know how tricky writing articles surrounding RPG events can be. - Cavalier One [[Image:FarStar Logo.jpg|20px]]( Squadron channel ) 11:09, 12 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 26) * How did Draco capture Denia on the Resurgence? - Cavalier One [[Image:FarStar Logo.jpg|20px]]( Squadron channel ) 14:43, 8 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 27) **It is not stated how he does this, as it happens off-scene --Jinzler 18:06, 9 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 28) Cylka:
 * 29) * Draco is described as being a methodical villain that doesn't make rash decisions, according to an answer he can give to a player "hero." This might be worthwhile to include to in his P&T.
 * 30) **Added --Jinzler 21:54, 23 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 31) * It also might be worthwhile to include that Draco was considered heroic as a Jedi in his P&T. I believe that he was described as such.
 * 32) **Added --Jinzler 21:54, 23 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 33) * The dreambeast is described as being similar to a Sith doppleganger or an illusory clone of the living entity. Maybe you could change the description to reflect this a bit more.
 * 34) **Added --Jinzler 21:54, 23 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 35) * I believe that Echoes of the Jedi lists more Force powers that Draco was said to have known. Could you please go through and make sure that they are added to his P&A.
 * 36) **It does but, I don't think I should add them. Force grip, Force slam and Move object are all covered by Telekenisis, which is already there. The other ones listed are dark rage, surge, rebuke and Force power mastery. I may be wrong, but I think these are RPG terms, rather than specific powers. --Jinzler 21:54, 23 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 37) ***I actually found in the Roleplaying Game: Saga Edition Core Rulebook that Dark Rage is the same as Force Rage, so I just added it in. Cylka  -talk- 03:59, 24 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 38) *Good work. Cylka  -talk- 09:53, 22 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 39) **Thank you --Jinzler 21:54, 23 January 2009 (UTC)

Comments
 * Your nomination comment makes me quite angry and makes me want to commit acts of violence against you. --  Darth Culator  (Talk) 16:56, 28 November 2008 (UTC)