Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Minch


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Minch

 * Nominated by: —Tommy9281 Dark side Master SWGTCG.jpg ( Talk ) 23:43, 29 August 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: For the record, he is not Yoda.

(5 Inqs/1 Users/6 Total/INQCON 5)
Support
 * 1) Support this, I do.--Jedi Kasra (talk) 12:20, 31 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 2)  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  12:22, September 12, 2009 (UTC)
 * 3)  CC7567  (talk) 01:11, September 20, 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) --  —Harrar  ( Cut the comm chatter ) 19:29, October 1, 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) Well, you have done. Voted for this, I have. Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 16:02, October 2, 2009 (UTC)
 * 6) --  Darth Culator  (Talk) 23:52, October 2, 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Before I read it, can you find places to break up the two walls of text? Both the second paragraph of the "Mission to the Bpfassh system" section and "The Dark Side Cave" section could be broken up into to two or three paragraphs each.  Grunny  ( Talk ) 06:25, September 10, 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) *Addressed.
 * 3) Harrar
 * 4) * Two things; firstly, is the fact that the Dark Side Cave is gradually tainted following the Dark Jedi's death sourceable to this material, or is that an inference from what we know in ESB? If it's the latter, we should source it to Heir to the Empire or ESB or one of the others re/visits to Dagobah.
 * 5) **Its the former, being sourceable to this material. —Tommy9281 Dark side Master SWGTCG.jpg ( No truth in me ) 16:24, September 24, 2009 (UTC)
 * 6) * Secondly, you use the phrase "the shedding of the Bpfasshi's blood" - is this a nice way of saying "the killing of the Bpfasshi" or does it relate to the fact that the blood itself taints the ground? It's misleading if the blood isn't actually the tainting agent here.
 * 7) **The comic actually says that the blood contributes to the tainting. I've added a bit more though just to make it a tad less misleading. —Tommy9281 Dark side Master SWGTCG.jpg ( No truth in me ) 16:24, September 24, 2009 (UTC)
 * 8) *That's all. Interesting! -- —Harrar  ( Cut the comm chatter ) 15:03, September 24, 2009 (UTC)
 * 9) **Thanks for the review Harrar. Please advise if anything further is required. —Tommy9281 Dark side Master SWGTCG.jpg ( No truth in me ) 16:24, September 24, 2009 (UTC)

Comments
 * 1) Just a thought. This story clearly riffs off the Bpfasshi Dark Jedi info provided by Jorj Car'das in Vision of the Future &mdash; the fight on Dagobah, the tridactyl species, etc. Might not it be pertinent for a note in the BtS? -- —Harrar  ( Cut the comm chatter ) 15:03, September 24, 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) *I'll check this out, and make the necessary (if any) adjustments. Thanks! —Tommy9281 Dark side Master SWGTCG.jpg ( No truth in me ) 16:24, September 24, 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) **We can come back to this another time if it's difficult to access the material, I'll make a note of it. :) -- —Harrar  ( Cut the comm chatter ) 19:29, October 1, 2009 (UTC)