Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Trogwhale


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Trogwhale

 * Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:46, May 14, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Another for the burner.

(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 20:06, May 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  Commander Code-8  G'day, mate 08:15, May 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) -  Princess   GLG  10:52, May 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  21:34, May 25, 2013 (UTC)

Object Comments
 * 1) 501st
 * 2) * Shouldn't that be a 1stm tag in the Sources?  501st  dogma ( talk ) 20:56, May 14, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) **Indeed it should. Ayrehead02 (talk) 22:30, May 14, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) * "Due to the threat the trogwhales posed the sentient Nikto species, who were also native to Kintan, drove them to extinction." This sentence doesn't really work, as the parts before and behind the pair of commas aren't grammatically connected. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 00:09, May 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) **I've taken out the commas is does it work now? Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:25, May 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * 6) ***I've fixed it. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 20:06, May 15, 2013 (UTC)