Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Rugor Nass


 * ''The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was unsuccessful. Please do not modify it.

Rugor Nass

 * Nominated by: --Clone Commander Lee --Clone Commander Lee 11:34, 10 June 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Quite good

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Object > JangFett  Talk 12:17, 10 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) Fett's 2 cents
 * 2) *Intro needs expanding. For a character that was seen in two movies, plus EU content.
 * 3) *Remove or move the image in the "Clone Wars" section also move another image near "Imperial occupation". They're too close to each other.
 * 4) *Blue Shadow Virus was part of the Clone Wars, so that should be a subsection within "Clone Wars".
 * 5) *Blue Shadow Virus section needs sourcing
 * 6) *Same goes with "Ohma-D'un". Should be a subsection within "Clone Wars".
 * 7) *"Luckily the virus was destroyed and the confederate scientist Nuvo Vindi were captured by the Jedi Anakin Skywalker, Obi-Wan Kenobi, Ahsoka Tano and the senator Padmé Amidala and Naboo was saved." Sentence needs rewording. Nuvo Vindi "was" captured, also the virus wasn't fully destroyed. If you watched "Mystery of a Thousand Moons", the virus leaked. Context needed as well. Also the Jedi need to have their respected titles if you are going to introduce them. (i.e Jedi Knight Anakin Skywalker and his padawan..), proper linking as well. Skywalker and Kenobi captured Vindi, while Tano, Rex and Amidala cleared the lab from droids but were caught by surprise when a droid released the virus. They were saved after Kenobi and Skywalker found a cure from a root on Iego.
 * 8) *"During the Clone Wars brought a Gungan Shaak herder to the Naboo council. The herder, Peppi Bow, told the Queen that some of her shaak's had died from a mysterious disease. Upon coming of the idea of droids Nass and the council discussed the possiblity of CIS forces on the planet. You call the Blue Shadow Virus a "mysterious disease" in this sentence, then you say "Luckily the virus", in the next. Too choppy, You need more detail and how the Republic forces came about to Naboo and what Nass did.
 * 9) *You need quotes for each section. Does not have to be Nass, it can be related to Nass, Naboo. "Clone Wars" section, especially Blue Virus, should have a quote.
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 * 1) Mauser attacks:
 * 2) *First and foremost: Not every item listed in appearances and sources is referenced throughout the article. Where's info from Deep Spoilers, Episode I Adventures 11 and 12, the Wizards articles?
 * 3) *Missing appearances, specifically movie adaptations: such as Star Wars Episode I: The Phantom Menace (photo comic). He also must have appeared in at least some ROTS adaptations, all need to be checked.
 * 4) *Missing sources: The Phantom Menace (TCG) and Squadrons Over Corellia are some obvious ones, but a prominent movie character such as Nass is ought to have much more sources that mention him, such as Star Wars: Episode I Insider's Guide and The Complete Star Wars Encyclopedia.
 * 5) *Lee, I see no work being done on the article whatsoever. The only thing you added is the Blue Shadow Virus section, and you did not even source it. This one has no chance of becoming a GA any time soon.  Mauser  Comlink 10:49, 17 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 6) **With all due respect, Mauser, please don't comment on things like this, regardless of whether a nomination looks like it will pass or not.  CC7567  (talk) 23:57, 21 June 2009 (UTC)

Comments > JangFett  Talk 13:32, 10 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) *Added tag. <span style="font-variant: small-caps; font-family: Verdana; font-size: 12px"

Vote to remove nomination (AC only)

 * 1) Three weeks since nomination, multiple outstanding objections with no attempt to fix them, user has been active and has been informed of situation of his talk page with no response on this page. -  Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 09:32, 1 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 2)  Grunny  ( Talk ) 10:01, 1 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) Boom goes the dynamite.  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  12:52, 1 July 2009 (UTC)