Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Unidentified Chuhkyvi Jedi


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Unidentified Chuhkyvi Jedi

 * Nominated by: Eyrezer 10:00, March 25, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

(2 ECs/2 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1) Trés cool. Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 22:04, March 25, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2)  nayayen ★talk  11:18, March 26, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 17:03, April 5, 2012 (UTC)
 * 4)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  16:56, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * Is it proper to use "it" when referring to a sentient.
 * 3) **Bob's copy-edit removed the "it", although personly, I am not so sure they are inappropriate. --Eyrezer 23:00, April 5, 2012 (UTC)
 * 4) * The article mentions various other descriptive information for the species on page 56 such as a prounounced nose, a good sense of smell, being short in height, and being heavily muscled. I am not sure if you really need this information, but since you included the information on yellow eyes and tan skin, I thought it might be necessary. What do you think? -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  13:00, March 31, 2012 (UTC)
 * 5) **Well, eye and skin color go in the infobox, and therefore need to be repeated in the body of the article. Height and musculature would vary among members of the species, so I don't see that I can draw many conclusions re the individual from those. In short, I think I've got the balance right as it is. --Eyrezer 23:00, April 5, 2012 (UTC)
 * 6) ***After your reply the only one I still think you should add is about the excellent sense of smell. The other qualities would vary more, but I do not believe that the sense of smell would vary anymore than the eye or skin color.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  22:49, April 6, 2012 (UTC)
 * 7) ****Edited. --Eyrezer 01:10, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

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