Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/O'Niner


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O'Niner

 * Nominated by: Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jujiggum ) 01:36, 12 June 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: A TCW clone nom, from Rookies. Approx. 350 words as of nomination.

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)
Support > JangFett  Talk 20:04, 13 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) –Victor  Sienar.svg (talk page ) 03:12, 13 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) <span style="font-variant: small-caps; font-family: Verdana; font-size: 12px"
 * 1) Wait, O'Niner was not a Hidden One, nor did he appear in Outcast. What's going on here? Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 15:10, 14 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) *He&hellip;he's not? There must be some mistake! 3PO would tell you that the odds of this happening are worse than the odds of successfully navigsting an asteroid field. :P Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jujiggum ) 15:34, 14 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 3)  CC7567  (talk) 00:57, 15 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 08:02, 15 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 5)  Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 07:56, 23 June 2009 (UTC)

Object > JangFett  Talk 02:38, 12 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) Prelims
 * 2) * Unfortunately, Rookies isn't a source for his death date; that needs to be referenced to TCW novel, so sourcing is required throughout.
 * 3) **Addressed. Let me know if there's something I missed.
 * 4) ***CC, while you can reference the novel to c. 22 BBY. As for "Rishi", it can be referenced to "Rookiees", since his death wasn't shown in the novel. <span style="font-variant: small-caps; font-family: Verdana; font-size: 12px"
 * 1) * The episode guide needs to be listed as a source.
 * 2) **Done.
 * 3) * Clone designations should be used where possible, as per this CT.
 * 4) **Unfortunately, I don't know of any source that gives O'Niner's designation. It wasn't mentioned in the episode, and I didn't see it in the Ep guide.
 * 5) ***Sorry, I meant for Cody and Rex.  CC7567  (talk) 02:36, 12 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 6) ****No problem, fixed. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jujiggum ) 02:52, 12 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 7) * Can an image be found for the bio? The article is rather boring image-wise.  CC7567  (talk) 01:50, 12 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 8) **That's the only image of O'Niner currently on the site. I could add one of the droid attack, or ask someone to upload an image, as I currently don't have the means to do so myself. Thanks for the review! Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jujiggum ) 02:26, 12 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 9) ***I'll get one myself and upload it, and post it here to see what you think.  CC7567  (talk) 02:36, 12 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 10) ****Cool, thanks. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jujiggum ) 02:52, 12 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 11) *****Take your pick: this one or this one.  CC7567  (talk) 03:25, 12 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 12) ******Thanks CC :). I added the second one; see what you think. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jujiggum ) 11:16, 12 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 13) ******Actually, I just changed it to the first. I think it's a better image of him, but feel free to change it if you disagree. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jujiggum ) 22:10, 12 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 14) *******I tried getting the second one in there, but you might want to remove it if it's too much. Also, I've removed his birth date, as it wasn't confirmed that all the clones were manufactured at the same time; the episode itself implied that there were still clones being created on Kamino during the time of the series.  CC7567  (talk) 22:21, 12 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 15) ********No problem, and I think that looks fine. Thanks again. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jujiggum ) 22:25, 12 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 16) Soresu
 * 17) * warn the fleet of the impending Confederate attack. What fleet? What Confederate attack? SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 07:56, 14 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 18) **The fleet refers to the Republic fleet, which was mentioned directly just a sentence or two ago, and the attack to the advancing Confederate forces. I tweaked it a little, though. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jujiggum ) 14:27, 14 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 19) ***Much better now. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 08:02, 15 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 20) Can you give O'Niner's death in the intro more context? What he was doing when he died?  CC7567  (talk) 21:37, 14 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 21) *Addressed. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jujiggum ) 00:32, 15 June 2009 (UTC)

Comments > JangFett  Talk 01:57, 12 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) The only problem I see right now is that the article has no sources. Like CC said, it can use a image. Other than that, nice work Jon :) <span style="font-variant: small-caps; font-family: Verdana; font-size: 12px"
 * 1) *Fixed sources, and as for the image, see above. Thanks Jang :) Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jujiggum ) 02:26, 12 June 2009 (UTC)