Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Sky Battle of Quell


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Sky Battle of Quell

 * Nominated by:  CC7567  (talk) 10:58, February 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: A dramatic yet anticlimactic battle that I've been itching to do for months&mdash;over a year, now, in fact. Enjoy.

(5 Inqs/3 Users/8 Total)
Support
 * 1) No quotes for the prelude? Really cool concept art.  Xd  18:42, February 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) And enjoy, I did. —Tommy 9281  Mechnochair negwt.jpg ( Mechno-chair ) 02:38, February 16, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) Good job, CC.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 20:24, February 16, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4)  IFYLOFD  ( Floyd's crib ) 01:07, February 18, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) Very nice. Well-formatted. Clean read. Toprawa and Ralltiir 05:46, February 21, 2010 (UTC)
 * 6) Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 00:10, February 24, 2010 (UTC)
 * 7) Very well done. I don't review a lot, but I made sure to check this one out. Well worth it. Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 05:02, February 25, 2010 (UTC)
 * 8) &mdash;  Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 23:20, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Toprawa:
 * 2) * Intro bit. Can we supplement the clone troopers mention with something? "All" clone troopers? "Some" clone troopers? "he, Secura, Tano, and clone troopers managed to escape from the Liberty"
 * 3) **Done.
 * 4) * Something is reading a bit goofy with this sentence. Please revise: "While Admiral Wullf Yularen stayed with the Resolute as its acting commander, Skywalker took several LAAT/i gunships with his Padawan, Jedi Commander Ahsoka Tano, as well as Clone Captain CC-7567, nicknamed "Rex," and other troopers of the Grand Army of the Republic's 501st Legion embarked to board the heavily damaged Liberty and evacuate its crew before the ship could be destroyed."
 * 5) **Bah. Should be better now.
 * 6) * With his lightsaber, I presume? Please specify if so: "Skywalker began to cut through the droids"
 * 7) **Done.
 * 8) * Can we clarify what "theirs" is meant to refer to? The gravity well of Quell, I presume? "as a jump through a gravity well like theirs was extremely dangerous"
 * 9) **Actually, it was the Jedi's jump; sorry for not clarifying.
 * 10) *Excellent overall. Toprawa and Ralltiir 05:28, February 21, 2010 (UTC)
 * 11) **Thanks very much for the review.  CC7567  (talk) 05:41, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

Comments
 * Most, if not all, images courtesy of JMAS.  CC7567  (talk) 10:58, February 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nope, no relevant quotes for the Prelude section.  CC7567  (talk) 10:58, February 15, 2010 (UTC)