Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Damien Tantrellius


 * ''The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.

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Support
 * Yes, that's the best picture of him. Thefourdotelipsis 07:43, 20 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 1)  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  19:05, 21 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) Very nice. Toprawa and Ralltiir 20:17, 9 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) --Eyrezer 11:47, 20 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) Greyman  @wikia ( Talk ) 01:45, 24 May 2008 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) Explain who Zannen is in the intro. Two more words would suffice.  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  22:19, 20 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) *Done. Thefourdotelipsis 08:57, 21 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) I actually think that pic should be in the main body, not the infobox. --Eyrezer 01:39, 21 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) *I'd argue the point, but it doesn't hurt. ;) Thefourdotelipsis 08:57, 21 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) **Lol. --Eyrezer 01:34, 23 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 6) Toprawa:
 * 7) * Little descriptor for who Zannen is, please: "Following an incident that resulted in the death of Zannen's wife"
 * 8) **The only thing we really know about him is that he became a Governor, so I've added a repeat of what's in the main body.
 * 9) ***Perfect.
 * 10) * This kind of reads funny. Could you reword it a little?: "Palpatine locked himself in office and made himself Emperor"
 * 11) **Deliberate reference to...the ANH novel, I think. But it's gone now. Just reads "Palpatine made himself Emperor."
 * 12) ***Hmm, I thought it sounded kind of familiar. Thanks anyways.
 * 13) * I think you may have forgotten to add something to the end of this sentence, as it's incomplete. Send them what/where? "Tantrellius began searching through official channels for a ransom message, while sending the Rebels, as well as Plum's friend, Grree L'Tharr, and Podd."
 * 14) **Yes, I did forget. Fixed.
 * 15) * Little context here, please. "The criminal Gamusha," or something: "Yuma had arranged to be "kidnapped" by Gamusha's" Toprawa and Ralltiir 06:08, 9 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 16) **Added. Thefourdotelipsis 08:48, 9 May 2008 (UTC)

Comments
 * Could use a smidge more context in the intro (and maybe even in the body) about who Zannen is and why the incident was traumatic. Assuming said context exists. I don't have the article, which is why this is a comment and not an opposing point. -- Darth Culator  (Talk) 14:45, 20 April 2008 (UTC)
 * No real context on that, sorry. Thefourdotelipsis 08:57, 21 April 2008 (UTC)
 * It looks like Space Gamer/Fantasy Gamer 88 is from the US. That being the case, is it the "Jediboh Theatre" or the "Jediboh Theater"? --Eyrezer 11:02, 20 May 2008 (UTC)
 * It's the correct spelling. (Theatre :P) Surprising, but then WEG did it for The Most Honourable Guild of Armourers. Thefourdotelipsis 11:44, 20 May 2008 (UTC)
 * Cool, lightsabre here we come! --Eyrezer 11:47, 20 May 2008 (UTC)