Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Empatojayos Brand


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Empatojayos Brand

 * Nominated by: Lord Hydronium 06:42, 12 June 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Weebles wobble but they don't fall down.

(5 Inqs/0 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1) --Eyrezer 10:44, 19 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) Thefourdotelipsis 13:23, 25 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) —Tommy9281  [[Image:Red lightsaber.png|20px]] ( Peace is a lie ) 00:27, 17 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 4)  Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 13:38, 17 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) Jedi Christmas ornament FTW! --  Darth Culator  (Talk) 09:27, 18 July 2008 (UTC)

Oppose
 * "Brand identified himself to them as Jedi and the two women confirmed it." Did they confirm it through the Force? If so, can that be mentioned. Reads a little bit funny at the moment. --Eyrezer 00:59, 16 June 2008 (UTC)
 * Yep. Clarified. - Lord Hydronium 07:01, 18 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 1) From the desk of Atarumaster88
 * 2) * Link to the Imperial attack on New Alderaan in intro please.
 * 3) * "Skywalker gave Palpatine a chance to surrender, but the Emperor instead charged for Anakin Solo, attempting to take the child's body to hold his own soul." This needs to be clearer. Perhaps a brief explanation of Palpatine's deteriorating body would help.
 * 4) * "As an older man, the Force burned brightly within him." Clarify. I would recommend expanding that entire paragraph and moving it to a P&A. There's plenty of information there.
 * 5) *Have a Super Terrific Friendly Un-frustrating day. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 15:15, 30 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 6) **Changed all those; I put the Anakin Solo explanation a little earlier. - Lord Hydronium 00:15, 17 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 7) The Anvil:
 * 8) * As King of Ganath, shouldn't there be some type of succession box to reflect that?
 * 9) * A powers and abilities section is missing. I can think about at least one power in which Brand knew, and while never specifically naming it, it is described in great detail in NEGTTF. —Tommy9281  [[Image:Red lightsaber.png|20px]] ( Peace is a lie ) 13:22, 14 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 10) **Changed the latter, former addressed on IRC. - Lord Hydronium 00:15, 17 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 11) ***Indeed. —Tommy9281 [[Image:Red lightsaber.png|20px]] ( Peace is a lie ) 00:27, 17 July 2008 (UTC)

Comments
 * Could we get a picture of the "Brand look-alike" from Union for the BtS?-- Goodwood [[Image:Redstarbird.svg|20px]] ( Alliance Intelligence ) 00:38, 13 June 2008 (UTC)
 * Added. - Lord Hydronium 00:46, 13 June 2008 (UTC)