Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Nantex-class territorial defense starfighter


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Support
 * 1) As nominator-- Goodwood [[Image:Rebsymbol2.png|20px]] ( For the Rebellion! ) 23:04, 11 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Master Aban Fiolli (Alpheridies University ComNet) [[Image:NewRepublic.png|20px]] 01:15, 12 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Greyman ( Paratus ) 14:55, 15 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 1) Jedimca0(Do or Do Not, There is No Try) 19:31, 15 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) --  AdmirableAckbar  [Talk] 23:13, 18 October 2007 (UTC)

Oppose

Comments
 * Some thoughts from around the Family-sized Pasta Bowl of Fiolli:
 * The first sentence of the history section seems a bit run-on. Could it be separated into at least two sentences?
 * Fixed. Goodwood [[Image:Rebsymbol2.png|20px]] ( For the Rebellion! ) 01:10, 12 October 2007 (UTC)
 * I was a bit confused with the "though" and "however" associated with the first clause of the second paragraph under History. This sentence is also lengthy. Perhaps separating it a bit might clear it up?
 * Fixed. Goodwood [[Image:Rebsymbol2.png|20px]] ( For the Rebellion! ) 01:10, 12 October 2007 (UTC)
 * It is a good article, just those two little things that I noticed and made me do a double-take.
 * Master Aban Fiolli (Alpheridies University ComNet) [[Image:NewRepublic.png|20px]] 00:43, 12 October 2007 (UTC)