Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Revwien lettuce


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Revwien lettuce

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 15:22, July 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Sir, I see your coleslaw and raise you one lettuce.

(2 ECs/2 Users/4 Total)
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 * 1) Mmm...nice lettuce.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  15:25, July 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Menkooroo 14:58, July 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Never liked lettuce that much. Then again, I never liked coleslaw either. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 18:59, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) Again, poor Revwiens. ~  Savage  BOB sig.png 15:18, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Jangeth
 * 2) * Check your grammar  JangFett  (Talk) 19:24, July 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Specifically...? NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 20:10, July 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) ***It shouldn't be that difficult to catch minor errors.  JangFett  (Talk) 20:20, July 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) ****You didn't fix grammatical errors there. You used a different sentence structure than I did and reverted the change I made when I was trying to interperet what you meant. You have to either be specific about the grammar error you've noticed or fix it yourself. Regardless, I do like the way you've changed it. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 20:36, July 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) *****Tense shifting is a grammatical error.  JangFett  (Talk) 21:09, July 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) ******The sentence "Revwien lettuce was a type of lettuce used in Dexter Jettster's restaurant on the planet of Coruscant, Dex's Diner, before his business was destroyed in 19 BBY" does not shift tenses though. Simplified and removing the apositive it reads "This lettuce was a type of lettuce used in his restaurant before his business was destroyed in 19 BBY," which is clunkier than it reads now, but all in past tense. I don't want to keep making the mistake you're seeing, so would you mind picking out the offending words for me to see? NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 21:19, July 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) *******That's the wrong sentence, Naru. For the sake of ending this redundant argument, it was in the bts.  JangFett  (Talk) 20:49, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

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