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Removal of GA status

 * Reduxed at Meeting 56.  IFYLOFD  ( Enter the Floydome ) 01:39, August 19, 2013 (UTC)
 * Removed on August 19, 2013.  IFYLOFD  ( Enter the Floydome ) 01:39, August 19, 2013 (UTC)

Redux review

 * ''The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a reduxed good article. The result of the discussion was Good article status lost. Please do not modify the page.

Oz (clone trooper)

 * Redux comments: Reduxed per Meeting 56.
 * Date added: March 24, 2013

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Winterz

 * Redirects must be fixed.
 * Done (Hopefully).  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 00:13, March 26, 2013 (UTC)
 * I was going to help with the grammar but I see too many mistakes, so you should probably handle that yourself.
 * Better?  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 00:13, March 26, 2013 (UTC)
 * "During the campaign, Oz and a squad led by Planetary Security Forces Sergeant Palola (...)" is a bit confusing, if it is a squad of PSF members then you could certainly improve the sentence's structure.
 * Better?  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 00:06, March 26, 2013 (UTC)
 * Considering the small-sized Bts section, you should expand it with the Insider's appearance. Winterz (talk) 16:23, March 25, 2013 (UTC)
 * Done.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 00:06, March 26, 2013 (UTC)

Toprawa

 * I feel like the article can go into greater detail regarding the mission to rescue Oz and his fellow soldiers. Just glossing over the whole mission by saying "and a team led by Rex successfully rescued Oz and the local squad" is really pushing it. The story tells us the following specific details: Oz and six other captives were being held in the basement of a Separatist depot atop Hidaci Ridge; when Rex's squad found them, the captives were sitting in the basement with hands tied behind their backs; Rex was able to ascertain from where the captives were looking after opening the basement door that a commando droid was about to jump him, effectively saving his life. You might even go into detail about the fact that Rex was hesitant to blow the door at first, afraid that he would kill the prisoners in the process, but they lived because they were sitting against the room's far wall. Lots of missing detail here. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 23:59, July 19, 2013 (UTC)
 * The Equipment section should also detail any and all weaponry Oz uses in the TCW episode. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 00:00, July 20, 2013 (UTC)

Comments
 * Copy-edited at Lee's request. &mdash;MJ&mdash; Comlink 20:08, March 27, 2013 (UTC)