Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Battle of Malastare Narrows


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Battle of Malastare Narrows

 * Nominated by:  CC7567  (talk) 07:10, April 3, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Little Battle That No One Cares About #2. Apparently it was cool enough to be officially named.

(3 ACs/4 Users/7 Total)
Support
 * 1) Nice. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 08:57, April 3, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Good job. &mdash;Jawaman No, I did NOT steal your droid! 09:02, April 3, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) Well done.  Jonjedigrandmaster  Jedi symbol.svg ( We seed the stars ) 17:03, April 3, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4)  JangFett  (Talk) 17:09, April 3, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) Toprawa and Ralltiir 21:47, April 3, 2010 (UTC)
 * 6)  Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 23:21, April 3, 2010 (UTC)
 * 7)  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 09:48, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Just one: Since we don't know when this battle took place, we don't know if Trench was aligned with the CIS. You say: "Although Trench was still believed dead by the Republic during the first year of the Clone Wars, he continued his naval service as an admiral within the Confederacy of Independent Systems' navy." It sounds like this battle took place before the Christophsis battle, but it's part of the Clone Wars, since you say "he continued his naval service as an admiral within the CIS..."  JangFett  (Talk) 16:51, April 3, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) *If I may intervene here, the way I read it, he's not saying that Trench continued his naval service with the CIS as in "he was with the CIS previously, and now he's continuing his service with them," but as in "Trench is continuing to serve with navies, and he does it now with the CIS." This is fine as is, I believe. Jonjedigrandmaster  Jedi symbol.svg ( We seed the stars ) 17:03, April 3, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) **After a second read it's fine, but I'd like to speak with you on IRC sometime, Jon.  JangFett  (Talk) 17:09, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

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