Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations



This page is for the nomination of "comprehensive articles". For a list of "comprehensive articles", see Category:Wookieepedia comprehensive articles.


 * Comprehensive article nominations history
 * Comprehensive article nominations archiving checklist

What is a "comprehensive article?"

A "comprehensive article" is an article that contains all information regarding the topic. Often, "comprehensive articles" cannot reach Featured or Good Article status due to their limited content. This process is intended to recognize articles that contain all relevant canon information, yet are still under the 250 word limit required for a Good Article. The purpose of this is twofold&mdash;firstly, to help users distinguish what is a stub, and what is merely a short article with no further relevant material to be added, and, more importantly, to highlight for the reader when they are reading something that has been judged definitely "comprehensive"&mdash;that is, a guarantee to the reader that whatever they are reading contains the sum total of all available content.

Nominations and promotions of the Comprehensive article process are overseen by a collective of users known as the "EduCorps," which is made up of the Inquisitorius, the AgriCorps, and various other experienced users who are considered qualified to adequately judge the nominated material.

Lucasfilm Ltd. and its many licensees continue to expand the Star Wars universe. Since new information might become available, it may be necessary to revoke a "comprehensive article's" status. A forum will be used to nominate articles that have fallen out-of-date. Members of the EduCorps will then post a warning template on that page, and a grace period of one week will be instituted in which the article can be improved. If there is a significant amount of new information, it is likely that once updated, the article will become eligible for Good article status, and thereby ineligible for Comprehensive article status.

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An article must&hellip;


 * 1) &hellip;be well-written and detailed.
 * 2) &hellip;be unbiased, non-point of view.
 * 3) &hellip;be sourced with all available sources and appearances.
 * 4) &hellip;follow the Manual of Style, Layout Guide, and all other policies on Wookieepedia. This is, of course, within reason. If a topic only has a very limited degree of content that cannot be divided up into the relevant article sections, it is not required that it follow the Layout Guide precisely. This is to be judged on a case-by-case basis.
 * 5) &hellip;following the review process, be stable, i.e., does not change significantly from day to day and is not the subject of ongoing edit wars. This does not apply to vandalism and protection or semi-protection as a result of vandalism.
 * 6) &hellip;not be tagged with any sort of improvement tags (i.e. more sources, expand, etc).
 * 7) &hellip;have no redlinks.
 * 8) &hellip;have all relevant canon information presented.
 * 9) &hellip;be completely referenced for all available material and sources. See Sourcing for more information. While this is not required for an article possessing a singular source, it is encouraged, as it provides both uniformity and a good infrastructure should the topic be referenced in any future materials.
 * 10) &hellip;have all quotes and images sourced.
 * 11) &hellip;provide at least one relevant quote on the article if available.
 * 12) &hellip;include a "Behind the scenes" section for In-Universe articles.
 * 13) &hellip;counting the introduction and "Behind the scenes" material, must not exceed 250 words in length (not including captions, quotes, or headers, etc). Any articles exceeding the limit should be taken to the Good Article nominations page for consideration.

How to nominate:


 * 1) First, nominate an article you find is worthy of comprehensive status, putting it at the bottom of the list below. Nominated articles must meet all thirteen requirements stated above.
 * 2) Add CAnom at the top of the article you are nominating.
 * 3) Be sure to place sign in the "Nominated by" line when the nomination is posted for voting.
 * 4) Others will object to the nomination if they disagree that the article is good enough; they will then supply reasons for doing so, and ways to improve the article in accordance with the established rules.
 * 5) Nominators and supporters will adjust the article until the objectors (with reasonable objections) are satisfied. Objectors may also make alterations&mdash;if there is any reason for contention on a given point, it should be settled in a civil manner in the nomination field itself.
 * 6) Users may not vote on their own articles.
 * 7) There is no limit to the amount of nominations a given user can submit at any given time.

How to vote:


 * 1) Before doing anything, be sure to read the article completely, keeping a sharp eye out for mistakes.
 * 2) Afterward, compare the article to the criteria listed above, and then either support or object the article's nomination.
 * 3) *If you object, please supply concrete reasons for doing so, and how it can be improved.
 * 4) As stated above, any objections will be looked upon by the nominator, supporters, and anyone willing to improve the article, and action will be taken to please the objectors. Do not strike other users' objections; it is up to the objector to review the changes and strike if they are satisfied.
 * 5) There are several ways in which an article can receive the required number of votes. Within a 48-hour period of nomination, only EduCorps votes will count towards the total, although anyone may choose to vote in that window. If two members of the EduCorps support a nomination in that window, and there are no outstanding objections, the article can be considered a "Comprehensive article" and be tagged with the template 48 hours after the initial nomination.  The talk page will also be tagged with the CA template. When the 48 hours are up, any user's votes will contribute towards the total. If one EduCorps member has voted for an article after a week, three regular votes will be required. After the 48 hour period, an article can still also pass with just two EduCorps votes.
 * 6) Once a nomination is successful, it will be placed on the Comprehensive article list. Instructions on how to archive nominations, successful or otherwise, can be found here. Anyone can archive a nomination&mdash;just make sure it has the correct number of votes, has been nominated for at least a week (or 48 hours if there are two EC votes), and that there are absolutely no outstanding objections. If you are not sure how to do this, just ask, and someone will likely be more than willing to help you. Also, if you think you can slip one past us, think again&mdash;someone is always watching you.

All nominations will be considered idle and are subject to instantaneous removal by EduCorps members if objections are not addressed, or at least not answered, after a period of 2 weeks.

Sluis Van space facility

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 06:54, July 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Long live the CAN! Long live the Random Article Noms!

(0 ECs/4 Users/4 Total)
Support Object
 * 1)  Darth Karika  will destroy your planet! 19:50, July 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 23:02, July 21, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) Menkooroo 07:25, July 22, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) -- DarthRage Leave a message after the beep 18:22, August 14, 2010 (UTC)
 * 1) Darth Karika
 * 2) * Infobox is missing the name.
 * 3) * BtS, last sentence: missing italics closing tag.
 * 4) * Did the facility appear in The Thrawn Trilogy Sourcebook, or was it just mentioned?  Darth Karika  will destroy your planet! 13:31, July 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) Kinda minor, but as the information in TTT sourcebook was just reprinted from the DFR sourcebook, wouldn't it be more appropriate to use the DFR sourcebook as your source, rather than TTT sourcebook? Menkooroo 17:00, July 21, 2010 (UTC)
 * 6) *I suppose. TTT was just the one I was looking at that second, so changed. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 06:38, July 22, 2010 (UTC)
 * 7) Cav
 * 8) *Is there anything to suggest that the Sluis Van space facility isn't just another name for the Sluis Van shipyards? I would suggest checking other sources concerning the shipyards just to make sure. The fact that they are described as "extensive" in the sourcebook leads me to believe that they could be one and the same. - Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 10:16, July 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * 9) **I'm going to echo Cav's sentiment here&mdash;particularly considering that the primary source for this is Thrawn Trilogy material, where the Sluis Van shipyards were introduced. Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 20:49, July 31, 2010 (UTC)
 * 10) ***The space facility was introduced in the DFR Sourcebook, which didn't deal with the shipyards at all because they weren't relative to the book. The TT Sourcebook does use the Battle at the Shipyards as it's time quantifier for the character entrys and time period but the Slussi section makes no reference to the battle at all. In fact, it refers to there not just being one catch-all shipyard in the sector, but several, with the facility referred to as a singular entity. "An advanced people, they established a number of major space yards throughout the Sluis Sector, including the extensive Sluis Van space facility." NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 05:40, August 10, 2010 (UTC)
 * 11) ****However, one of the opening chapters of DFR has Luke trying to get his X-wing repaired to fly back to Coruscant. He is on the Sluis Van Central space station, in the Sluis system. I think you may need to check over the information presented in the novel; the Sluis Van shipyards are present in DFR, and with the words "Sluis Van" in the name, then it is more than likely that the facility is within the Sluis Van system, despite the fact that the Sluissi established space yards throughout the sector. - Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 11:13, August 20, 2010 (UTC)

Comments
 * 2 week vacation. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 22:50, August 12, 2010 (UTC)

Palmer

 * Nominated by:Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 19:59, July 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Battle for Naboo's red shirt

(0 ECs/1 Users/1 Total)
Support
 * 1) Fixed a number of links, and removed the redundant refs. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 01:41, July 28, 2010 (UTC)

Object


 * 1) Redshirt poking!
 * 2) * No refs?
 * 3) **Honestly, I didn't source it becasue of just one appearance. Someone else added CSWE. For all I know, it refers to Bravo Squadron. Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 11:36, July 21, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) ***If you want to find out whether something is in the CSWE, all you have to do is ask here.-- 23:13, July 21, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) ****huh, never knew that. Request pending.
 * 6) ****Fully sourced Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 14:13, July 23, 2010 (UTC)
 * 7) * Could you add the fact that she was female to the paragraph?
 * 8) **Yep.
 * 9) *Interesting.-- 23:35, July 20, 2010 (UTC)
 * 10) * Just one more thing, since she seems to be allied with the Naboo, rather than the GR, you might want to change this to a normal character infobox. Otherwise, good job!-- 23:13, July 21, 2010 (UTC)
 * 11) **Infobox changed. Thanks for the advice.Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 14:13, July 23, 2010 (UTC)
 * 12) Soresu
 * 13) * That born field isn't necessary. If you can't be more specific than "before she died", then it's better to just leave it out.
 * 14) * Unsourced infobox items.
 * 15) * Referencing always comes after punctuation.
 * 16) * If you can prove she's Human, then it needs to be mentioned in places other than the infobox.
 * 17) * Double-check for underlinking and redirect linking.
 * 18) * Her ability to pilot the Speeder and Starfighter should be in the P&T.
 * 19) * Provide some sort of date at the beginning of the Bio. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 10:47, July 26, 2010 (UTC)
 * 20) **Article updated. Thanks for checking it out. Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 16:28, July 26, 2010 (UTC)
 * 21) A few more from Sore
 * 22) * The intro should never have information that is mentioned nowhere else. That's why it doesn't need referencing. Also, it should also be a more complete summary of her life, including her involvement in the battle and her death. So yeah, include the intro stuff in the bio, and then expand the intro. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 10:50, July 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * 23) * There is no need to put two of the same reference next to each other, as it is redundant. The sentences ending in "rescue by her comrades." and "of the capital city Theed." could have their refs removed.
 * 24) *Nice work; it's getting there. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 10:50, July 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * 25) **Oh and I just realised that this is actually 260-something words (even longer after these objections are addressed), meaning that it should by all rights be nominated at WP:GAN rather than here. I recommend you take it over there. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 10:55, July 27, 2010 (UTC)

Comments
 * Note to ECs: As stated above, the article exceeds 250 words and is therefore not eligible for CAN status. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 05:37, July 31, 2010 (UTC)

Saskapeg uprising

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 08:49, July 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: By popular demand!

(1 ECs/3 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1) Menkooroo 03:36, August 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) --Eyrezer 01:02, August 19, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 05:35, August 20, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) DarthRage01:00, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) DarthRage
 * 2) *Why is there a cross in the infobox?
 * 3) **A cross next to a name in an event infobox means that that person died during the event. Menkooroo 03:36, August 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) *You can make the references in the opening appear at the bottom of the paragraph.
 * 5) **See my comment on the Unidentified Jedi (Daluuj) nom. Naru's cited info from the NEC, and then moved onto info from a new source. :^) Menkooroo 03:36, August 17, 2010 (UTC)

Comments
 * If it's a conjectural title, it shouldn't be capitalized. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 14:42, July 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * Thank you. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 21:54, July 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2 week vacation. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 22:52, August 12, 2010 (UTC)

Jastaal

 * Nominated by: Eyrezer 23:37, July 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: These guys were created by Brian Daley for his old-school Han Solo novels.

(1 ECs/3 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 02:11, August 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Menkooroo 06:28, August 13, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3)  Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 11:15, August 20, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) Oldskool support. ~ SavageBob 02:38, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Unidentified Human Jedi (Daluuj)

 * Nominated by: Menkooroo 07:45, July 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

(2 ECs/4 Users/6 Total)
Support Object
 * 1) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 00:27, July 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 10:19, August 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) Eyrezer 01:06, August 19, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) DarthRage01:03, August 26, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) Good job, now get to the nameless IKs on Agamar!&mdash;  17:35, August 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * 1) It should be Humanoid Jedi because the comic doesn't say she's Human.  NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 22:24, July 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) *Regarding Humans, we have an unofficial but generally agreed upon if it looks like a duck... policy. Menkooroo 02:50, July 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) **OK. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 00:27, July 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) Nitpicky, but is it known that Cathar have hearts? I'd prefer to just say it hit him in the chest.  SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 23:12, August 3, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) *Is it so wrong to be a Cathar? Or a Jedi? Or an inhuman cat? Ahn Rasi Tuum may be all of those things, but he still has a heart.
 * 6) **I mean... changed. Menkooroo 13:23, August 12, 2010 (UTC)
 * 7) You should make the references in the opening appear at the end of the paragraph, it makes it look better. Otherwise, good job.  DarthRage Leave a message after the beep 01:20, August 16, 2010 (UTC)
 * 8) *There are actually two different sources being sourced there --- sticking both [1] and [2] at the end of the paragraph would make it unclear which statements were being sourced to what. This is the correct way to do it. Cheers! Menkooroo 01:25, August 16, 2010 (UTC)
 * 9) **Per Menkooroo. --Eyrezer 01:06, August 19, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Kauronian

 * Nominated by: Eyrezer 02:57, July 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: No more K species

(1 ECs/2 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 02:16, August 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Menkooroo 06:14, August 13, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3)  Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 11:52, August 20, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) The stuff about Luke seems out of place here, since it doesn't deal with the species per se. Perhaps scale it back to a sentence at most? ~ SavageBob 02:40, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Qadel

 * Nominated by: Eyrezer 07:57, July 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Wiped out by Xim

(1 ECs/3 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 02:18, August 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Menkooroo 07:59, August 13, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3)  Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 11:53, August 20, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) Xim was a jerk. ~ SavageBob 02:41, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) 1
 * 2) *" " shows up after the leading quote, and I can't quite figure out how to sofixit... Menkooroo 06:23, August 13, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) **Is it still there? --Eyrezer 07:29, August 13, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) ***But... you didn't even edit it! Menkooroo 07:59, August 13, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Qonto

 * Nominated by: Eyrezer 07:57, July 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: These guys are from Wild Space

(1 ECs/3 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 02:27, August 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Menkooroo 13:23, August 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3)  Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 11:55, August 20, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) ~ SavageBob 02:42, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Blah
 * 2) * Last sentence of the bio? Menkooroo 03:53, July 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) **A ghost. --Eyrezer 04:31, July 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) * Should there be an article for the attack on the Kuari Princess? Menkooroo 04:46, July 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) **Possibly. I'll check the source when home. --Eyrezer 00:58, August 5, 2010 (UTC)
 * 6) ***Added. Sorry for the delay. --Eyrezer 02:47, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Comments
 * I'm working through the "CA"s I wrote prior to this formal process existing, and we're almost through them all. --Eyrezer 23:54, July 29, 2010 (UTC)

Rseikharhl

 * Nominated by: Eyrezer 00:47, July 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Sector-wide law enforcers

(1 ECs/3 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1) Menkooroo 04:45, August 2, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 23:16, August 3, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3)  Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 11:57, August 20, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) ~ SavageBob 02:44, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) I think an additional source is necessary to prove that that redlinked user is actually Jason Fry. Did he talk about Rseik specifically on a forum? If not, I can ask him about it on the JC forums if you want. Menkooroo 04:04, July 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) *Nope, no forum post. If you want to ask if these are his on a forum, please do so. --Eyrezer 04:28, July 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) **It's him! I haven't quite worked out how to directly link to a JC forums post, but will probably take you pretty close. Menkooroo 03:45, July 31, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) ***How about this? --Eyrezer 04:33, August 2, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) ****I split it into three sources since there were three separate external links. Hope that's OK. Menkooroo 04:45, August 2, 2010 (UTC)

Comments
 * I'm working through the "CA"s I wrote prior to this formal process existing, and we're almost through them all. --Eyrezer 00:47, July 30, 2010 (UTC)

Shi'kar

 * Nominated by: Eyrezer 03:02, July 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Hey, it's a TCW cross-over

(1 ECs/2 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 04:03, August 2, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Menkooroo 06:32, August 13, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3)  Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 12:06, August 20, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Are we sure they're a species? And perhaps scale back the info on the Straits, as this presumably postdates the species existence. ~ SavageBob 02:48, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Chollas

 * Nominated by: Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 09:04, July 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: DarkStryder-related herd animal

(1 ECs/3 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 01:29, August 8, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Eyrezer 04:22, August 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) Menkooroo 16:49, August 21, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) ~ SavageBob 19:57, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) 1
 * 2) * Does the no-era-in-the-top-right-corner-rule for species also apply to non-sentient ones? Menkooroo 01:07, August 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) **I would assume so. Cracian thumper, which is an FA, doesn't have an era tag. - Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 15:11, August 20, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) ***OK. I, uh... removed the era tag, then. Menkooroo 16:49, August 21, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Kal'Shebbol Transport

 * Nominated by: Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 11:21, July 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Based on Kolatill, strangely enough.

(1 ECs/2 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 01:44, August 8, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Eyrezer 04:22, August 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) Menkooroo 01:10, August 17, 2010 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Rohan Wayside

 * Nominated by: Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 16:46, July 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Swamp inhabitant

(0 ECs/3 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) --''' Bonslywizard Trade Federation Symbol.jpg( Send a transmission...It's perfectly legal! ) 22:50, August 8, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Well done. Menkooroo 10:15, August 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 22:30, August 17, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) The article needs sourcing, a little more specific detailing (e.g: Bob was a human male...) and the picture is not a picture of him so it does not need to be there at all. And what species is he? Do you know? --''' Bonslywizard Trade Federation Symbol.jpg( Send a transmission...It's perfectly legal! ) 17:41, August 8, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) *Article upgraded; picture removed; and no, the game does not specify what species he is. It doesn't need sourced if there is only one appearance. Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 18:18, August 8, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) Yo
 * 4) * Some context is needed on Gavyn Sykes ---even just adding "of the Naboo Resistance" after his name. Currently, the article only indirectly states that Sykes is part of that resistance.
 * 5) *Is "Houseboat clan" the actual name of the clan? If so, create an article on it and link to it, if not, listing this as his affiliation in the infobox might be preferable.
 * 6) *Can you mention in the bts that Battle for Naboo was his first appearance, and only appearance to date? Otherwise, good work. Menkooroo 01:18, August 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 7) **Done and done. Thank you for checking out the article. Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 09:49, August 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 8) * The way it's currently written, it sounds like the trading village was a swamp, not just inside one. Please clarify. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 05:43, August 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 9) **Indeed.
 * 10) ***This doesn't mean that you can just take it out; it is still relevant info, it just needs to be portrayed correctly. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 10:34, August 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 11) ****Re-added.
 * 12) Cav:
 * 13) *In the article history, you note that the name is taken from IMDB. This needs to be detailed in the BTS, showing exactly how you came to this conclusion. - Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 11:23, August 24, 2010 (UTC)
 * 14) **Sorry about that; the name really does come from the game. I just needed a trip to IMDB to remind me of that fact, since I wrote the article without first going back and rechecking the game. Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 14:04, August 24, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Mission to Destrillion

 * Nominated by: 19:21, August 3, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Shortest of the articles I edited.

(0 ECs/0 Users/0 Total)
Support

Object
 * 1) More can be added to the BTS regarding that concept image. --Eyrezer 04:28, August 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * Sentence added. Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 10:05, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Unidentified Naboo homestead owner

 * Nominated by: Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 20:49, August 3, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Brave man running across the field in a battle

(0 ECs/3 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1)  QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 15:32, August 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 10:36, August 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) Menkooroo 15:01, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

Object Comments
 * How do you know that he is a Human and a Naboo native? It is not stated in the game. All we know is that he was a male who lived on Naboo by 32 BBY; it was not necessarily his homeworld. QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 08:51, August 5, 2010 (UTC)
 * He runs across the screen and has the same sprite of the other human civilians, and "homeworld" is used in the general sense of place of residence. I once saw a Talk Page post explaining the nuances.
 * Hmm, I have not noticed him running around before. Every time I saved him, he was driving a vehicle, but I'll take your word on it. Regarding homeworld, no, it is always used in a sense of the place where the individual was born and/or spent his youth. QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 11:23, August 11, 2010 (UTC)
 * He runs out right when the second wave of STAPS appear. Talk page discussion:[|]. Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 15:58, August 11, 2010 (UTC)
 * 1) * Unidentified is not to be used inside an actual article.
 * 2) * Please standardize your capitalization of homestead. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 05:48, August 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) **Nixed. Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 10:00, August 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * Note some of the changes I made --- in particular, it's always advisable to mention the species and sex in the article's body, and one-sentence paragraphs should be avoided. Good work, though! Menkooroo 15:01, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

Unidentified mine operator

 * Nominated by: Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 20:49, August 3, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Defensive beaurocrat

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 * 1)  QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 11:25, August 11, 2010 (UTC)

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 * "He was presumed to have been killed when Sykes destroyed the control room." Speculation. Besides, it is not even required to destroy the control room. QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 08:48, August 5, 2010 (UTC)
 * Removed, but every time I played, I needed to destroy the control center before the game let me proceed. Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 09:49, August 5, 2010 (UTC)
 * Weird. Every time I played it, I only had to destroy the plasma miners to progress. Maybe it depends on the game's version or something? QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 11:25, August 11, 2010 (UTC)

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Barren planetoid

 * Nominated by: Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 20:49, August 3, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Rezi Soresh's last stand

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 * 1) Barren Fel
 * 2) * The infobox establishes a lot about the planetoid --- no moons, no native flora, no native fauna, no indigenous population, barren rock --- this should all be in the article's body, too.
 * 3) *Try to avoid one-sentence paragraphs. They're generally a no-no.
 * 4) *"When the deadline passed..." What deadline? Mention that Soresh gave a deadline when you establish that he wants to lure Skywalker to the system.
 * 5) *Give context on Han Solo.
 * 6) *"Soresh used an impostor..." used the impostor for what? Welcoming the rebels?
 * 7) *Who captured Skywalker and his companions? The article doesn't mention that Soresh has any companions on the planetoid.
 * 8) *Who are Luke's other companions? A rebel squad?
 * 9) *A little bit of context is needed on the Emperor.
 * 10) *"He drew an Imperial and Rebel fleet" makes it sound like there's a joint Rebel-Imperial fleet.
 * 11) *"Skywalker betrayed Soresh and led his companions away." Can you give a little bit more detail?
 * 12) *"including Soresh's body" is detail that probably isn't relevant to the article about the planetoid.
 * 13) *You mention a battle --- can you create an article for said battle?
 * 14) *Does Uprising give any other details about the planetoid that could find their way into the article? Menkooroo 02:17, August 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 15) **All of the above addressed. Of coures, it is now well over the wordcount. Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 17:47, August 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 16) ***Awesome! Go for a Good article nomination if you feel it's ready. You'll have to leave a message here requesting that the Educorps remove this nom, as it's now ineligible for CA status. Menkooroo 01:13, August 18, 2010 (UTC)

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 * Note for the Grey Cadre: As stated above, this article is now over 250 words. Menkooroo 15:02, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

Sixela system

 * Nominated by: Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 20:49, August 3, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Destroyed by resonance torpedoes

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 * Well over 250 words, making it GA territory. Please familiarize yourself with the CA guidelines before nominating further articles of such length or content. Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 06:34, August 5, 2010 (UTC)

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Comm 4

 * Nominated by: Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 11:52, August 4, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Labeled as technology, not a structure.

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 * 1) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 11:39, August 18, 2010 (UTC)

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 * 1) Soresu
 * 2) * Be more specific about how it was destroyed. Was it disabled by infiltrators? Destroyed in a space battle?
 * 3) * Can it be proven that it was created in 32 BBY? Just because it got deployed above Naboo in that year doesn't mean it was manufactured then. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 23:07, August 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) **Context added; and I cannot prove it was created in 32 BBY so I removed the information. Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 11:27, August 18, 2010 (UTC)

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Adela Tyché

 * Nominated by: Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 15:13, August 4, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Great pilot; ugly personality

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 * 1) Can be fleshed out considerably. Elaborate a bit on the missions she took part in and her role in them. QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 20:16, August 4, 2010 (UTC)
 * Precisely 249 words. Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 18:58, August 5, 2010 (UTC)
 * "helped free captured slaves." No she did not. She only participated in the disruption of Comm 4 and the attack on the disabled base. I'm asking you to expand on these two battles. What was the objective? What happened during the missions? It can be well over 250 words in my opinion. QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 11:18, August 11, 2010 (UTC)

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Wirutid

 * Nominated by: Eyrezer 01:40, August 5, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

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 * 1)  Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 00:10, August 10, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 22:55, August 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) Menkooroo 15:05, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

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 * 1) What's with the redlink? ;P Otherwise, it's solid. ~ SavageBob 02:50, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

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Wode

 * Nominated by: Eyrezer 01:40, August 5, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

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 * 1) --''' Bonslywizard Trade Federation Symbol.jpg( Send a transmission...It's perfectly legal! ) 16:24, August 16, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 02:36, August 22, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) ~ SavageBob 02:53, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

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 * 1) "During the Clone Wars, the Wode were liberated..." Liberated from what? --''' Bonslywizard Trade Federation Symbol.jpg( Send a transmission...It's perfectly legal! ) 16:59, August 9, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) *The original source does not say. I've modified the article to make it clear Solomahal was on the side of the Republic, which is as far as the original source goes. --Eyrezer 02:57, August 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) Less savvy readers may not understand what exactly is meant by "Standard". Please clarify.  SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 22:54, August 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) *Are you after something as simple as this? --Eyrezer 00:31, August 22, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) **Close to it. It's just that some might see the capitalisation and wonder whether it's just a term or if it has some specific value. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 02:36, August 22, 2010 (UTC)

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Van Serai Hotel

 * Nominated by: - Esjs (Talk) 22:35, August 5, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: My first article nom ever (thought I'd give it a try). By my count, it's at 246 words.

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 * 1) This article could be given an infobox and could very easily be given a simple intro, easily taking it to over 250 words and making it GAN-worthy. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 19:32, August 7, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) *I take it that a Location infobox would work. Doesn't the first paragraph work as the intro?  I could see putting the remaining paragraphs into a "History" section.  If just another sentence were added... -  Esjs (Talk) 04:02, August 8, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) **I would suggest a structure infobox. No, you couldn't just make the first paragraph the intro because it contains information that is not in the other paragraphs. Instead, you could write a new small paragraph summarizing briefly what you've said in the current three paragraphs, and make the new one the intro and the rest the main body. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 00:38, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

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BARC-2 speeder

 * Nominated by: Tm_T(Talk) 00:05, August 9, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: I know you love it, you definately do.

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 * 1) Jujiggum
 * 2) *What evidence do you have for this being "presumably" a 2-seat variant of the BARC speeder? This sounds like speculation to me.
 * 3) **Hopefully sufficiently fixed
 * 4) ***Okay, but please check your grammar here. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 00:08, August 20, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) *The BTS should specify why this is ambiguously canon.
 * 6) **Apparently isn't, tag removed
 * 7) ***You mean this is non-canon? Then it needs to be tagged as such, and you should also mention that in the BTS. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 00:08, August 20, 2010 (UTC)
 * 8) *Also, where did you get the "BARC-2 speeder" name? If it's conjectural, then it shouldn't be bolded in full form in the intro.
 * 9) **Bolding removed, some explanation about the name in the Bts.
 * 10) ***Please check your grammar in the BTS; also, since the name is completely conjectural, I would suggest actually moving the title of the article to something more appropriate. Maybe something along the lines of "Unidentified speeder (BARC design)" or something similar. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 00:08, August 20, 2010 (UTC)
 * 11) *That's all. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 15:39, August 11, 2010 (UTC)
 * 12) **Good points rised, thanks. --Tm_T(Talk) 20:39, August 19, 2010 (UTC)

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Bitt Panith

 * Nominated by:--''' Bonslywizard Trade Federation Symbol.jpg( Send a transmission...It's perfectly legal! ) 23:36, August 13, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: At least there's no way this one will make it over 250...

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 * 1) Jujiggum
 * 2) * Needs a BTS
 * 3) **Added.--''' Bonslywizard Trade Federation Symbol.jpg( Send a transmission...It's perfectly legal! ) 20:14, August 14, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Italicization. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 20:20, August 14, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) ****Italicized.--''' Bonslywizard Trade Federation Symbol.jpg( Send a transmission...It's perfectly legal! ) 00:09, August 16, 2010 (UTC)
 * 6) *****Still one missing. This is usually something I'd fix myself, but this has popped up more than once in your articles, please try to remember this in the future. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 01:35, August 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 7) ******Darn things...--''' Bonslywizard Trade Federation Symbol.jpg( Send a transmission...It's perfectly legal! ) 17:18, August 19, 2010 (UTC)
 * 8) *Could easily use a P&T
 * 9) **Added.--''' Bonslywizard Trade Federation Symbol.jpg( Send a transmission...It's perfectly legal! ) 20:14, August 14, 2010 (UTC)
 * 10) ***You could definitely add more&mdash;judging by the lead quote alone, he was apparently confident in his ability to defeat the Jedi. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 20:20, August 14, 2010 (UTC)
 * 11) ****I've added another sentence on that.--''' Bonslywizard Trade Federation Symbol.jpg( Send a transmission...It's perfectly legal! ) 00:09, August 16, 2010 (UTC)
 * 12) *****Wording's rather awkward here. And are you sure that's all you can add? Did he perhaps dislike the Jedi? Please be as thorough here as possible. Go through the source once more and make sure there are no further details you can add regarding his personality; and also his appearance, a description of which should also go in the P&T. Also, I've stricken the next objection, but please do this for the bio as well, anyway. There seem to be quite a few details that you missed the first time around&mdash;go through the source carefully and make absolutely certain that you are not leaving any more details out. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 01:35, August 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 13) * Is this as detailed as you could get? Judging from the quote, it sounds like there might be some more details from the source about Panith that you could put in there. Make sure you are as thorough as possible.
 * 14) **I'll try, but I don't know how much I can do, considering how little he appears...--''' Bonslywizard Trade Federation Symbol.jpg( Send a transmission...It's perfectly legal! ) 20:14, August 14, 2010 (UTC)
 * 15) ***Why don't you mention anything about Dooku cutting off his funds in the body? Why did Dooku cut off his funds? Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 20:20, August 14, 2010 (UTC)
 * 16) ****I've moved that part to the body as opposed to the P&T and added why.--''' Bonslywizard Trade Federation Symbol.jpg( Send a transmission...It's perfectly legal! ) 00:09, August 16, 2010 (UTC)
 * 17) * Jonjedigrandmaster ( Talk ) 05:01, August 14, 2010 (UTC)

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Unidentified Yoberra species

 * Nominated by: --Eyrezer 03:16, August 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

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 * 1) Menkooroo 01:22, August 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 22:48, August 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) ~ SavageBob 02:58, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

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Boosqueak

 * Nominated by: Eyrezer 03:30, August 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: A menagerie of creatures from the Atrivis sector

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 * 1) Shouldn't the rare folded ear boosqueak have its own article? SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 22:46, August 17, 2010 (UTC)

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Ratbat

 * Nominated by: Eyrezer 03:30, August 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: A menagerie of creatures from the Atrivis sector

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 * 1) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 22:44, August 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Ratbat; eject! Operation: CAN nomination. -  Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 15:18, August 20, 2010 (UTC)

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Scorpion slug

 * Nominated by: Eyrezer 03:30, August 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: A menagerie of creatures from the Atrivis sector

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 * 1) I wanna see a picture of this thing.  Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 01:43, August 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 22:43, August 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) Menkooroo 04:27, August 19, 2010 (UTC)

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Virevol

 * Nominated by: Eyrezer 03:30, August 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: A menagerie of creatures from the Atrivis sector

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 * 1) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 22:34, August 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Menkooroo 01:16, August 19, 2010 (UTC)

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 * Can you mention who it was that considered them formidable creatures (whoever's POV it was)? Menkooroo 02:05, August 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * Done. --Eyrezer 04:21, August 18, 2010 (UTC)

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Unidentified Nyny species

 * Nominated by: Eyrezer 04:18, August 18, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Fresh material written following the new CAN process!

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 * 1) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 11:40, August 18, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Menkooroo 04:31, August 19, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) Fode and Beed, eat your heart out. ~ SavageBob 02:57, August 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4)  Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 20:04, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

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Arkudan

 * Nominated by: Eyrezer 10:01, August 18, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: The origins of fluffy dice revealed.

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 * 1) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 03:33, August 19, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Wonder if Han's dice were from Arkuda too. ~ SavageBob 02:37, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

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Naresha

 * Nominated by: QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 11:53, August 20, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Why not?

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 * 1) Remember that can remove the table of contents in a short article.  SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 00:46, August 21, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Impressive.&mdash;  23:33, August 26, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) It's clean. -- 1358  (Talk) 13:57, August 28, 2010 (UTC)

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Unidentified Betshish species

 * Nominated by: Eyrezer 09:04, August 21, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: From 1989

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 * 1) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 02:30, August 22, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) ~ SavageBob 02:55, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

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 * 1) Is it known what is meant by "interdict"? As in, gravity well-ed, or something else?  SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 21:45, August 21, 2010 (UTC)
 * No, the source simply says the Empire interdicted the planet. --Eyrezer 00:33, August 22, 2010 (UTC)

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Nack Movers

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 18:08, August 24, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: 197 words

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 * 1) &mdash;  17:28, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

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 * 1) Whatcha cryin' for?
 * 2) * Not sure if "heavyset" is necessary in the intro?&mdash; 23:26, August 26, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) **Removed.
 * 4) * Context on Coruscant in intro and possibly the bio.&mdash; 23:30, August 26, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) **Both contexted.
 * 6) * Is "powerful" needed in the intro, in describing the fact he was a murderer?
 * 7) **Changed to something that describes him better.
 * 8) * Link Death in the intro.
 * 9) **Linked.
 * 10) *Good stuff, Lee.&mdash; 23:30, August 26, 2010 (UTC)
 * 11) **Thank you.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 08:59, August 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * 12) Jujiggum
 * 13) * Do we have an article for his apartment?
 * 14) **Created.
 * 15) ***If the apartment belonged to his girlfriend, then shouldn't it be Ione Marcy's apartment? Also, the intro right now says that the entire complex belonged to Marcy; not just the one apartment. Is this true? Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 14:10, August 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * 16) ****Fixed and moved.
 * 17) *****Please be very careful when moving articles&mdash;the name you moved it to had an incorrect spelling, and thus it had to be moved again, meaning I had to go and fix several double redirects. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 14:46, August 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * 18) * "he bought a lightsaber from the Patrolian Bannamu and took it to his apartment in a condominium complex and to his girlfriend Ione Marcy." Hmm, not really following your meaning here. Do you mean he gave the lightsaber to Marcy? That he specifically took it to her? Please check this.
 * 19) **Fixed.
 * 20) * Is the phrase "hatchet man" actually used to describe him during the episode? If so, this should probably be included in the P&T, too.
 * 21) **Not really, he is said to be an assassin and therefore he is a hatchet man.
 * 22) ***Then this part of the intro is redundant. You just said he was an assassin, so why do you need to say so again? Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 14:10, August 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * 23) ****Removed.
 * 24) * Jonjedigrandmaster ( Talk ) 20:12, August 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * 25) **Thank you.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 10:32, August 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * 26) * One more thing: does the source specifically say he was a strong and dangerous murderer? Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 14:10, August 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * 27) **Sinube states both that Movers is a dangerous one in the Underworld and notes that he was "stronger then many other people.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 14:35, August 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * 28) *Please add more quotes to the article. I am certain there is one spoken by Marcy or Cryar about him or his death (even if it is one of their lies), and perhaps Sinube's statement about his strength could go in the P&T. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 14:46, August 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * 29) **Because I cannot add the English version myself I asked JMAS.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:10, August 28, 2010 (UTC)

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Holoplaque

 * Nominated by: Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 09:40, August 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: DarkStryder related holographic equipment.

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 * 1) &mdash; 17:31, August 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) ~ SavageBob 19:53, August 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) Incredibly easy read.  Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 14:49, August 28, 2010 (UTC)

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Swift Return

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 18:27, August 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Part One...

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 * 1) Only once in a lifetime
 * 2) *I'm by no means an expert at TCW, so bear with me&hellip;
 * 3) *The Swift Return first appeared, also only as a compure readout, in Cat and Mouse&hellip; First off, do you mean "computer" when you say compure readout? Second, could you reword slightly?&mdash; 21:28, August 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) **Fixed.
 * 5) *That's all I have.&mdash; 21:28, August 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * 6) **Thanks.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 10:36, August 28, 2010 (UTC)

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The Righteous

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 18:39, August 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: ...and Part Two

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 * 1) All Eyez on U
 * 2) *See above.&mdash; 21:35, August 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) **Fixed (also not by me).
 * 4) *That's it.&mdash; 21:35, August 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) **See above.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 10:38, August 28, 2010 (UTC)

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Lio

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 11:02, August 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Lee continues his bombardment of the CAnom page

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 * 1)  Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 15:12, August 28, 2010 (UTC)

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 * 1) Jujiggum
 * 2) * Every single sentence in the article begins with "Lio". Please reword some of them.
 * 3) **Reworded.
 * 4) * Are there any quotes relating to him? Does the novel mention him only in prose, or do Kal and/or Walon actually speak about him at some point?
 * 5) **No, the just mention his name together with several others. But this sentence consists from several names.
 * 6) ***So, in other words, Kal/Walon do speak about him, in a sentence naming several other clones? If this is the case, you should still add that quote. It doesn't matter if there are other names involved, too; it still applies to Lio. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 15:01, August 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * 7) ****Added.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:09, August 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * 8) *That's all. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 14:52, August 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * 9) **Thank you.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 14:55, August 28, 2010 (UTC)

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Unidentified Kerkoiden tank commander

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 11:19, August 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Huh?

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 * 1) Xd1358
 * 2) *Please check your reference and see what's wrong.
 * 3) **Fixed.
 * 4) *"Around 22 BBY, the tank commander participated in the Battle of Christophsis and commanded some troops from his AAT." What troops? Droids? Also, fix the link to AAT.
 * 5) **Fixed.
 * 6) *"During the battle he was shot and killed by Clone Captain CC-7567 when he came out of his tank.." Who came out of his tank?
 * 7) **Fixed.
 * 8) *"..which has been deactivated." Wrong tense.
 * 9) **Fixed.
 * 10) *Is it stated in the novel that he was a 'tank commander'? Otherwise, I suggest you move the article to 'Unidentified Kerkoiden commander', as he seems to be commanding troops as well.
 * 11) **Rex describes him as "Kerkoiden tank commander".
 * 12) *-- 1358  (Talk) 13:07, August 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * 13) **Thank you.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 14:42, August 28, 2010 (UTC)

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