Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Concord Dawn


 * ''The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a featured article nomination that was unsuccessful. Please do not modify it.

Concord Dawn

 * Nominated by: Lord Hydronium 07:57, December 22, 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: No locations section, you'll notice; there's really nothing to be said, and since it's called a guideline in the LG I think it's best not to force it in there.

(2 Inqs/0 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) --Eyrezer 01:10, December 27, 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) —Tommy9281  Dark side Master SWGTCG.jpg ( Mechno-chair ) 06:05, January 20, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Prepare to be savaged...
 * 2) *Can you provide some context for what a Mandalore is in the first paragraph of the "History" section? Ditto for "Journeyman Protector".
 * 3) *Does Vizsla's coup have an article? It probably should, as coups are major events.
 * 4) *Does the story indicate whether Papa Fett had more than one son? If it's just Jango, we should add commas around his name in this phrase: "and they took Fett's son Jango hotage..." Ditto with "their daughter Arla".
 * 5) *Just a tad of context on Count Dooku would be nice, such as where he was a count of maybe, or that he was acting on orders of Sidious (if he was) or that he was a Sith.
 * 6) *I'm not sure the New Zealand band is notable enough for our article. Are they famous? Is there any press on them? What separates them from the average fan band?
 * 7) *I know you don't want to force a Locations section, but I think you could do one. Currently, the article mentions farms and homesteads and towns, but there is no mention of these features in any kind of sociological sense. I'd like to see a "Locations" section that mentions these settlement patterns if possible. If you still feel it's unnecessary, I won't oppose you, but in my opinion, such a section is warranted. A very nice piece; good work. ~ SavageBob 20:35, January 14, 2010 (UTC)
 * 8) Needs BTS update for "The Mandalore Plot". Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 08:22, February 1, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Vote to remove nomination (Inq only)

 * 1) Do hate to admit it, but three weeks of inactivity passed several days ago.  CC7567  (talk) 21:30, February 8, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Toprawa and Ralltiir 23:22, February 8, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3)  Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 23:25, February 8, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) I guess it is only fair considering other noms that were recently removed under similar circumstances. &mdash;  Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 23:42, February 8, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5)  Grunny  ( Talk ) 23:46, February 8, 2010 (UTC)