Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Brolsam


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Brolsam

 * Nominated by: Cavalier One ( Squadron channel ) 12:21, 15 September 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: I'm wondering if ...

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Support
 * 1) I just...  Aqua  Unasi  12:43, 15 September 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) But I&hellip; Graestan ( Talk ) 00:17, 17 September 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) Soresumakashi 05:47, 22 September 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) Kind regards,  Pranay Sobusk  ~  Talk to me  19:13, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) Toprawa and Ralltiir 22:09, 24 September 2008 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) Same as my Torize objection. Soresumakashi 11:37, 20 September 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) *Varied it more. - Cavalier One ( Squadron channel ) 23:23, 20 September 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) Toprawa:
 * 4) * I do have some concern over the infobox picture. It doesn't really illustrate anything about the planet. It's just a dot on a map. If you're going to keep the infobox picture, at least include a scaled back version of that map that gives some geographical context to where the planet lies in relation to other planets, hyperlanes, etc.
 * 5) **Added a map of the Trition Trade Route.
 * 6) * As brief as the information is, I'd like to see the bits that discuss the planet's culture found in the "Description" section incorporated into an "Inhabitants" section, per the Layout Guide.
 * 7) **Moved into a separate Inhabitants section.
 * 8) * Likewise, the geographical information in the "Locations" section should at least be duplicated/merged into the "Descriptions" section. Toprawa and Ralltiir 04:23, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
 * 9) **Merged in Description, and Locations section removed. - Cavalier One ( Squadron channel ) 12:59, 24 September 2008 (UTC)

Comments
 * Love the infobox picture ;)  Aqua  Unasi  12:43, 15 September 2008 (UTC)