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double CW

 * sorry about putting that message up twice, I don't usually have people respond to that sort of thing. WILDEYE N-25 02:44, 17 February 2009 (UTC)
 * It's okay; it wasn't really a problem posting the same message twice. (lol.) --CC7567 02:46, 17 February 2009 (UTC)

Hey
I noticed that you were in a major edit of Anakin Skywalker concerning the Clone Wars section. If you are in the middle of a rewrite, please use the template. Cheers, DC 23:34, 21 February 2009 (UTC)
 * I'll be sure to do that now, because I have to finish what I was editing. Thanks. --CC7567 02:24, 22 February 2009 (UTC)

Wow
You speak Latin? That's neat!&#91;&#91;Rhaal ti&#93;&#93;* torgutaFan * 03:10, 1 March 2009 (UTC) I only know a few words. So can you make complete sentences?* torgutaFan * 17:29, 1 March 2009 (UTC)
 * Thanks; I don't see how it'll be useful here, but it may be good to get to know other people who speak it. --CC7567 03:15, 1 March 2009 (UTC)
 * More or less...but it's been severely long since I've spoken it, so I have no clue if I would be able to. I can recognize the language and provide some loose translation, but right now that's about it. --CC7567 18:31, 1 March 2009 (UTC)

Preview Button
Next time you want to perform a series of small edits, please use the preview button instead of Save page each time. --  Riffsyphon  1024 07:28, 4 March 2009 (UTC)
 * Sorry; I normally try to use it, but this time I kept on making mistakes that I didn't catch. I'll try to prevent that from happening again. -- [ http://images1.wikia.nocookie.net/starwars/images/thumb/5/5f/Rex.png/20px-Rex.png] CC7567  ( contact ) 07:31, 4 March 2009 (UTC)

Blocked
Toprawa and Ralltiir 03:30, 7 March 2009 (UTC)
 * Sorry; I wasn't aware of the policy, and I'll definitely try not to do it again. -- CC7567 [ http://images1.wikia.nocookie.net/starwars/images/thumb/5/5f/Rex.png/20px-Rex.png] talk 10:01, 8 March 2009 (UTC)

Ballad of Cham Syndulla
Since you jumped in on "Ballad of Cham Syndulla" before I could finish, kindly add this image to the article, and fix the appearance link please. Thanks. -  JMAS  Hey, it's me! 03:34, 13 March 2009 (UTC)
 * Nevermind, I just did it myself. -  JMAS  Hey, it's me! 03:41, 13 March 2009 (UTC)
 * Sorry about that; I was planning on finishing the lyrics, but I had to go away from my computer and I wasn't able to save the changes or remove the inuse template. (Not much was lost, though, so no harm done.) -- CC7567 [ http://images1.wikia.nocookie.net/starwars/images/thumb/5/5f/Rex.png/20px-Rex.png] talk 03:45, 13 March 2009 (UTC)

TA-175
Thanks for helping me with TA-175. I probably should have waited but I just love Tactical droids so much I wanted to be the first to make his article. Yeah, not the best idea. Thanks anyway. JediMasterNicholas 02:59, 14 March 2009 (UTC)
 * You're welcome. And I don't particularly see a reason to wait; as long as the information is legitimate, which it is, I don't see why you shouldn't create his page. -- CC7567 [ http://images1.wikia.nocookie.net/starwars/images/thumb/5/5f/Rex.png/20px-Rex.png] talk 03:01, 14 March 2009 (UTC)

Tuuk's flagship
Mar Tuuk's flagship is a Droid Control Ship. Regular battleships do not possess all the antennae and sensor dishes. And before changing something on a nominated article, please discuss it with the nominator beforehand. Grand Moff Tranner (Comlink) 23:28, 14 March 2009 (UTC)
 * I'm sorry; I wasn't aware of this. -- CC7567 [ http://images1.wikia.nocookie.net/starwars/images/thumb/5/5f/Rex.png/20px-Rex.png] talk 23:32, 14 March 2009 (UTC)
 * No harm done. I understand where you're coming from, but I think that even in Episode I they referred to the Droid Control Ship as a battleship. Grand Moff Tranner [[Image:Imperial Department of Military Research.svg|20px]] (Comlink) 23:34, 14 March 2009 (UTC)

Battle of Ryloth FAN
Absolutly I would love to help you. I saw that it was looking pretty damn good, but I wanted to wait for you before I brought up any nomination. Dark Lord Trayus 05:10, 15 March 2009 (UTC)
 * Great! I'm excited too. Hopefully it won't take too long- we did a pretty good job writing that thing.Dark Lord Trayus 05:40, 15 March 2009 (UTC)
 * Not a problem. I'll keep track of it with the utmost diligence. Haha and I'm sure it'll be reviewed soon. There's always somebody ready to make an objection. =P Have a good vacation. Dark Lord Trayus 04:18, 17 March 2009 (UTC)

Lok Durd
I've noticed you recent editing on the Lok Durd page, and I have to say, thanks man. I was editing the page from memory because I couldn't find Defenders of Peace on the web, and obviously, I wasn't 100% correct. Looking back on it, it probably wasn't the smartest of ideas. I also have to thank you for fixing the grammar I missed and uploading that awesome image of Lok in the AAT. :-) I was considering nominating Lok for FA status, but if you want to nominate him yourself, feel free too. You have, admittedly, a better track record than I on this site, and you might gain more support because of this. I will support your nomination as soon as I can.

P.S.: Thanks also for the support on the Shiv article

P.S.2: Keep an eye out for 66.90.73.113, he vandalized the article and later my userpage, and he might do it again if he can. Kilson Likes PIE 20:32, 18 March 09 (UTC)
 * I'm going to be uploading higher res screencaps of some of your Lok Durd images. Just FYI. Also, I'm going to replace Image:Lok Durd in command.jpg in the article with Image:Durd in command.jpg as it more shows him "commanding". Hope you don't mind. -  JMAS  Hey, it's me! 12:59, 24 March 2009 (UTC)
 * Feel free, dude. You did as much work on this article than I, and if you want to help, more power to you. I already addressed some of the objections, you can handle the rest if you want. I'm not really sure about the rest of them. Kilson Likes PIE 18:45, 29 March 09 (UTC)
 * It's OK dude. If you really have a problem with it, you don't have to help me. I think I can handle it by myself. If I do succeed in getting it to FA status, feel free to put up that you supported Lok to FA status on you user page. Kilson Likes PIE 19:50, 29 March 09 (UTC)

Wookie Cookie

 * You're a natural; thanks for all the hard work (and for correcting me!) You're always on the ball with sourcing and grammar... Keep up the good work!  &mdash;Lucius malfoy7  ( Talk page ) 22:17, 27 March 2009 (UTC)

Hostage Crisis
Haha yeah I was planning on doing quite a bit with it but I got distracted after I did the prologue haha. I'm gunna take the temp off there because I just don't have the time to work on it all that hard. Ill contribute still but you're free to do as you wish haha. Sorry! And welcome back! Dark Lord Trayus 04:44, 29 March 2009 (UTC) Wonderful job though! Dark Lord Trayus 03:16, 2 April 2009 (UTC)
 * Yeah absolutly. I'm sure itll be good once it's done. It was a good episode. But if Ryloth hasn't gone through by then we might just want to start with GA. Dark Lord Trayus 04:58, 29 March 2009 (UTC)
 * All the information is there, and written very well. Only three suggestions:
 * 1) Add in info about Anakin meeting with Padme right before the attack in "prelude" or the very beginning of "The mission"
 * 2) Remove one or two section headers and merge them with other sections. Small sections look less neat then slightly meatier ones.
 * 3) Remove/replace the "The bounty hunters surround the Senators" image, as it's already in the info box.
 * It looks like GA or even FA material to me now. But I feel a little bad having my name on the co-nom for this since you did basically 4/5ths of the work. If you would rather just do it yourself I'd be more than willing to address objections still. Dark Lord Trayus 00:24, 3 April 2009 (UTC)

Cad Bane
Hey there, I don't know how I bypassed getting an edit conflict. When I clicked the edit button, the GAN template was not at the top of the page. Anyhow, an objection I would have raised on the GAN entry would have been that the page was too image heavy. I lightened the load by two images. Take a look. If you approve of it still, then I'll cast my support vote on the GAN. -  JMAS  Hey, it's me! 20:28, 30 March 2009 (UTC)
 * Though it seems as though the votes in support of the GAN have come in with the less images present, so that's a good sign. :) -  JMAS  Hey, it's me! 22:20, 30 March 2009 (UTC)

Battle of Korriban nom
Hey man, could I ask a big favor. If you are not too busy, could you please take a look at my Battle of Korriban nom. I just need one more user vote to get it past, but nobody has even looked at it in more than two weeks. It is currently sixth on the GA nom list. It's cool if you don't have the time. Kilson Likes PIE 19:18, 30 March 09 (UTC)
 * 1) I addressed those objections, thanks for the review. Kilson Likes PIE 18:52, 31 March 09 (UTC)

Re:Bane
No worries. Yeah, that'd be fine. GAs sort of continue to be GAs - the checkmark is removed from the eras template but the milestones on the talk page remain, and one could keep a user GA template after it'd be upgraded. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 15:45, 31 March 2009 (UTC)

Reviewing
Hey CC7567. I noticed your review for Separatist Council on the GAN page, and I had one small item that I wanted to bring to your attention. I'm not sure if you are aware of this, but there is an unofficial   clause that most reviewers follow. Basically, it means that if you find something minor that needs to be fixed, and you can reasonably fix it yourself quickly, you should simply do that. This was really brought into effect to prevent people from leaving minor objections. I know that many reviewers, including myself, always have the article in edit mode when reviewing just for this purpose. Yes, part of being a good nominator is noticing these mistakes yourself, but part of being a good reviewer is noticing the mistakes that people overlook :P Since you have become more of an active reviewer on the GAN page, I wanted to give you this piece of advice. Cylka  -talk- 20:52, 31 March 2009 (UTC)
 * No problem. I just wanted to let you since there are some users -- nominators and reviewers -- who take it seriously, and there is no need for you to run into any conflicts because of it. Cylka  -talk- 21:17, 31 March 2009 (UTC)

Cad Bane context
Hey CC. I am going to review Bane in the next day or two, and after skimming through the article I saw that in some cases there was, in fact, way too much context added. To me it makes the article clunky and unwieldy to read. I know that I recently told you that most reviewers edit an article as they read, and that I am no different. In regards the unneeded context, I saw that at times all that would be needed is to shorten a sentence without rewriting it -- something I would consider a fairly simple fix. However, it is not my intention to rewrite the article for you, so I have a question/proposition for you: 1) I can remove some of the extra context that doesn't require a rewrite, and then leave you a message on your talk page as to why I did so. Of course, any removal of context that would require a rewrite, I would leave as an objection, in addition to any other objections; 2) I would only fix minor grammar and other somesuch details as I usually do, and leave absolutely all context removal in the form of objections on the GAN page. The reason I am asking you to choose is because I feel that part of my responsibility is to help you write a better article, and I do not want to go and make major changes without you being aware of the reasoning. I know that I learn something new every time I nominate or review an article. I hope that this message doesn't sound too pretentious; I simply would like to avoid any misunderstandings since the Cad Bane article has already been the subject of some tension. Let me know what you would like to do. Thanks. Cylka  -talk- 15:11, 4 April 2009 (UTC)
 * Good job with removing excessive context. The article has become a bit more reader-friendly at this point. Cylka  -talk- 00:10, 6 April 2009 (UTC)

Image use in articles
You've been doing some great work on articles of late. One thing I'm noticing regularly though is you're making them very image heavy. The standard pretty much agreed upon around here is 1 image for every 3 paragraphs (approximately). Take the Duel in the Christophsis CIS base article for instance. You have 8 images in the main article body. That honestly should be cut down to 4, maybe 5 images at the most based on the size of the article. Just something to think about. Cheers. -  JMAS  Hey, it's me! 00:31, 5 April 2009 (UTC)

Latin
I noticed in your list of userboxes that you have a basic understanding of the Latin language. Where did you learn it if you don't mind my asking. White Wolf  (jorhaa'ir) 01:42, 5 April 2009 (UTC)

Signature

 * Hi, thanks for fixing up my signature- very sorry it caused such an inconvenience- I forgot to check it wasn't messing anything up after I edited it 02:30, 5 April 2009 (UTC)

Heroes Vilains
Sorry, I was bored and I thought 'hey, i could categorize all this' 14:00, 5 April 2009 (UTC)

Blue Squadron
Im aware that Slammer's death is not offical and though i think that its retared that the episode guide is higher cannon then the episode itself i agree that it shouldn't say Slammer. But that is Definitely not Tucker. Maybe we can just put Blue Squadron Pilot.Keep up your good work on the Articles.--Fisto-Arsix 20:53, 10 April 2009 (UTC)

My 'Yelling'
I have a younger brother, and he likes to watch TCW w/ me. He sometimes gets on here and looks at stuff, and occasionally (like on Storm over Ryloth talk page) edits stuff. He can be immature at times. sorry. ARC Commander Zek 00:16, 11 April 2009 (UTC)

Re:Cad Bane's posse
Sorry for my absence; I should've used a vacation template. That final Separatist Council critique is #1 on to-do-list, revising/cutting down Cad Bane's posse #2. It'd be a great help if you could look it over.  &mdash;Lucius malfoy7  ( Give it up for Lil' 'Soka Tano, ladies and gents! ) 23:28, 13 April 2009 (UTC)
 * Thanks a ton... Whenever's fine; I know you have a lot of your own GAN's.  &mdash;Lucius malfoy7  [[Image:Nute777.png|20px]] ( Give it up for Lil' 'Soka Tano, ladies and gents! ) 23:33, 13 April 2009 (UTC)

RE: WookieeProject
Hey, CC7567. Great to hear your starting a WookieeProject! I thought it was inevitable by the amount of TCW noms on the GAN :P. As far as I know you don't need to put in a request you just make the project page and get to work organizing and recruiting members. Just take a look at current similar projects like WP:LE, WP:AMB, WP:KOTOR, and WP:TOTJ, for ideas on things to do, though looking at your subpage you seem to be well on your way :-). If you want any help creating templates or anything else that comes up feel free to ask me :-). Good luck starting the project :D.  Grunny  ( Talk ) 12:22, 14 April 2009 (UTC)
 * Hey CC7567. I noticed that you have started putting up the talkpage notices and I wanted to give you a piece of advice. Before you decide that an article falls under your project, think carefully about how much of an impact that particular subject has on TCW tv series. You may need to be somewhat selective then. I know that for the KotOR project, I didn't include everything in that era, only articles that had a significant impact, or did not have an appearance anywhere else. <span style="font-variant: small-caps; font-family: times, cursive; font-size: 16px"><font color=#008080>Cylka  <span style="font-family: times, cursive; font-size: 13px"><font color=#00A693>-talk- 01:47, 15 April 2009 (UTC)
 * Don't worry about it. I constantly go through and refine what falls under the project. It's easy to add and remove the templates, so take your time to think about articles. In your case, I would start with any articles that have appearances only in TCW tv series, then I would move on to others. If you have any other questions, you can either leave me a message, or Grunny - since I noticed he offered his help as well. <span style="font-variant: small-caps; font-family: times, cursive; font-size: 16px"><font color=#008080>Cylka  <span style="font-family: times, cursive; font-size: 13px"><font color=#00A693>-talk- 01:56, 15 April 2009 (UTC)
 * Well, the way I have gone about it is to try to include any articles that originate from the TCW tv series, and don't appear anywhere else, even if they are stubs. The articles to think about are the ones that have appeared in other works besides the TCW tv series. <span style="font-variant: small-caps; font-family: times, cursive; font-size: 16px"><font color=#008080>Cylka  <span style="font-family: times, cursive; font-size: 13px"><font color=#00A693>-talk- 02:33, 15 April 2009 (UTC)

Clone Wars project
Hey i am interested im working with you guys at the clone wars project, im completly new at this wikipedia type writing but i hope i can help, but i do have a couple questions, in the clones section , lisitng the names of clones, but there is no info on the  background of the clones for example Ridge, Boil, and etc. , do we jsut leave it blank>? maybe jsut a paragraph about the clones creation in kamino, its regiment and what battle is shown, and episode number ? thnx for your time

--Clonetrooper360 02:10, 15 April 2009 (UTC)Clonetrooper360

Image Category for Scythe-class battle cruiser
Hey CC7567! I added the image category you requested to the Scythe-class main battle cruiser article. The format is off, so if you could fix it I would greatly appreciate it. I hope to earn your vote for this article. :) AdmiralNick22 02:31, 15 April 2009 (UTC)
 * Thanks! I am adding them to the category. I appreciate the lesson is Wiki formatting. It was very helpful. :) AdmiralNick22 02:49, 15 April 2009 (UTC)

IRC
Come on IRC soon. Graestan ( Talk ) 02:36, 15 April 2009 (UTC)

The Clone Wars Project
Absolutly! I figured it was only a matter of time before someone started one. I'd love to be apart of it! Haha hopefully we get a little more attention now then we did with The Battle of Ryloth nom. Haha still empty except for one haha. Dark Lord Trayus 21:49, 15 April 2009 (UTC)
 * On the project page, something is wrong with the formatting at the top. The first line on the page doesn't wrap around the text box, it runs behind and his half covered by the TCW logo. Not sure how to remedy that, but thought I'd bring it to your attention. I think it has something to do with the shortcut box template. -  JMAS  Hey, it's me! 17:36, 16 April 2009 (UTC)

Jedi Alliance
Should we include the videogame Star Wars: The Clone Wars: Jedi Alliance in the Clone Wars project? It's canon, and Clone Wars related.  &mdash;Lucius malfoy7  ( Give it up for Lil' 'Soka Tano, ladies and gents! ) 22:35, 15 April 2009 (UTC)

Signature
Dude, how did you get your signature like that? It's awesome!--Fisto-Arsix 00:11, 16 April 2009 (UTC)
 * Thanks dude.--Fisto-Arsix 01:10, 16 April 2009 (UTC)

Combat Instruction
Hello, CC7567,

I must say that I am rather impressed with your work here thus far. When it is all complete, I would suggest giving it a run through the Good Article Nominations, because I believe it to be a perfect candidate for such honor. If you choose to, and need assistance along the way, I am more than willing and happy to provide. What say you? —Tommy  ( Nine two eight one ) 03:02, 16 April 2009 (UTC)

Re:Recruitment
Are you kidding me, I would love to join. I think I could help with adding extra content to the articles if need be. Thanks again for the invite CC. Kilson Likes PIE (and The Clone Wars) 15:05, 16 April 09 (UTC)