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Removal of GA status

 * Reduxed at Meeting 33. Toprawa and Ralltiir 03:14, April 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * Kept on April 30, 2011. Toprawa and Ralltiir 03:14, April 30, 2011 (UTC)

Redux review

 * ''The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a reduxed good article. The result of the discussion was Good article status kept. Please do not modify the page.

The Clone Wars: Cold Snap

 * Redux comments: Reduxed per meeting 33

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Support
 * 1)  Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 18:06, April 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Toprawa and Ralltiir 00:47, April 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3)  CC7567  (talk) 02:37, April 30, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Jujiggum
 * 2) * "can send out a gunship to pick them up." You link gunship to LAAT/i. Does the comic actually specify that the gunship would be an LAAT/i?
 * 3) **Fixed the linking
 * 4) * "The comic establishes the "ice men" and their attacks on Glid Station, which later appear in "Trespass."" What exactly are you trying to say appears in "Trespass?" The ice men? Glid Station? The attacks themselves?
 * 5) **Rephrased the sentence
 * 6) * Jonjedigrandmaster ( Talk ) 20:21, April 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) **Thanks Jon. Kilson ( Let's have a chat ) 22:27, April 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) Toprawa:
 * 9) * Same objection as for Shakedown. Please revise citation formatting. You should do this for all of these Clone Wars comic status articles if they need it too. Toprawa and Ralltiir 20:00, April 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) **I believe I've fixed these too. I'll start on my other TCW OOUs after I know you're satisfied with what I've done. Kilson ( Let's have a chat ) 20:34, April 27, 2011 (UTC)

Comments
 * As a result of the latest Senate Hall thread about the OOU Layout Guide, I have decided to delete the Main Character sections from my GAs. Also, in the coming days, I will rework the articles to match the upcoming Layout Guide. Kilson 21:15, March 28, 2011 (UTC)