Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Darth Ruyn


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Darth Ruyn

 * Nominated by:  Grunny  ( Talk ) 12:15, 2 April 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Legacy

(4 ACs/2 Users/6 Total)
Support
 * 1) Grand Moff Tranner [[Image:Imperial Department of Military Research.svg|20px]] (Comlink) 12:44, 4 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 2)  Cavalier One [[Image:FarStar Logo.jpg|20px]]( Squadron channel ) 01:03, 5 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 3)  Graestan ( Talk ) 21:57, 6 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 08:03, 8 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) Toprawa and Ralltiir 21:55, 8 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 6) ShaakTi1138 21:09, 9 April 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Graestan the Merciless:
 * 2) * The word "aged" is somewhat repetitive. Please seek alternatives for it here and there.
 * 3) **Mixed it up.
 * 4) * A date for the Sith-Imperial War in the bio, please.
 * 5) **Added :).  Grunny  ( Talk ) 03:32, 3 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 6) * Graestan ( Talk ) 19:22, 2 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 7) From the Moffship of Grand Moff Tranner:
 * 8) * Similar to Grae's first objection, "trained" and "training" seems a bit repetitive. Some synonyms would be nice.
 * 9) **Mixed it up :).
 * 10) * Nothing from Legacy 0 or 0 1/2?
 * 11) **He isn't mentioned in either of them unfortunately.
 * 12) * A bit of context for the Sith-Imperial War is needed.
 * 13) **Contextified.
 * 14) * You should mention in the intro that Talon cared for and respected him.
 * 15) **Added.
 * 16) * "Seven years after Dark Lord of the Sith Darth Krayt deposed Galactic Emperor Roan Fel and established his Sith Empire at the end of the war..." What war?
 * 17) **Addressed.
 * 18) * Also, place of death needed in infobox.
 * 19) **Done.
 * 20) *Nice job, Grunny. Grand Moff Tranner [[Image:Imperial Department of Military Research.svg|20px]] (Comlink) 20:01, 2 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 21) **Thanks, Tranner :-).  Grunny  ( Talk ) 03:32, 3 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 22) You mention in the quote and the PT that Ruyn trained other apprentices; this should be reflected in the bio before talking about Talon's training. -  Cavalier One [[Image:FarStar Logo.jpg|20px]]( Squadron channel ) 14:53, 4 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 23) *Mentioned :-).  Grunny  ( Talk ) 15:29, 4 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 24) **I added a mention to the intro as well. - Cavalier One [[Image:FarStar Logo.jpg|20px]]( Squadron channel ) 01:03, 5 April 2009 (UTC)

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