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Removal of GA status

 * Reduxed at Meeting 106. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:59, October 22, 2018 (UTC)
 * Kept on October 22, 2018. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:59, October 22, 2018 (UTC)

Redux review

 * ''The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a reduxed good article. The result of the discussion was Good article status kept. Please do not modify the page.

Imperial Support Vessel

 * Redux comments: Reduxed per Meeting 106.
 * Date added: August 19, 2018

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Support
 * 1)  Imperators II (Talk) 01:20, September 30, 2018 (UTC)
 * 2)  1358  (Talk)  21:51, October 1, 2018 (UTC)
 * 3) Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:55, October 22, 2018 (UTC)

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Imperators Support Vessel

 * Infobox-exclusive info.  Imperators II (Talk) 18:01, September 13, 2018 (UTC)
 * If you mean the "space combat" bit from the infobox, it is added now. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders.svg  Anıl Şerifoğlu  (talk) 17:02, September 14, 2018 (UTC)
 * Derp. I meant the rectenna, but I hadn't noticed it was already pipelinked.  Imperators II (Talk) 16:52, September 16, 2018 (UTC)
 * I'd like to see the bit about the ISV from Thrawn, Part VI looking similar to its Legends counterpart moved to the last paragraph, since it currently fails to explain what that counterpart is.  Imperators II (Talk) 18:01, September 13, 2018 (UTC)
 * Done. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders.svg  Anıl Şerifoğlu  (talk) 17:02, September 14, 2018 (UTC)
 * On second thought, I've gone ahead and just removed it as not overly notable.  Imperators II (Talk) 16:52, September 16, 2018 (UTC)
 * I don't see any reason why you need to reference the fact that the ship was a capital ship to different sources in the infobox and body.  Imperators II (Talk) 20:53, September 25, 2018 (UTC)
 * Done. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders.svg  Anıl Şerifoğlu  (talk) 23:33, September 26, 2018 (UTC)
 * Right now, the intro a bit awkwardly introduces the "anti-Imperial Batonn insurgents" and only then provides a link to the Galactic Empire. Please rearrange this.  Imperators II (Talk) 20:53, September 25, 2018 (UTC)
 * How does it look now? TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders.svg  Anıl Şerifoğlu  (talk) 23:33, September 26, 2018 (UTC)
 * The second sentence of the intro doesn't make grammatical sense: "Aside from its use during the failed Batonn insurgency, several of these starships were later part of [...]"  Imperators II (Talk) 20:53, September 25, 2018 (UTC)
 * It should be fine now. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders.svg  Anıl Şerifoğlu  (talk) 23:33, September 26, 2018 (UTC)
 * I would like to take issue with the use of the adjective "these" to refer to the ships as a violation of the past tense requirement.  Imperators II (Talk) 20:53, September 25, 2018 (UTC)
 * Done. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders.svg  Anıl Şerifoğlu  (talk) 23:33, September 26, 2018 (UTC)

Toprawa

 * I would advise against listing general things like "planetary blockade" and "space combat" in the infobox's role field. Traditionally, that field is more for specific designations like Carrier or Command ship. For Legends, often this information is given in sourcebook spec fields, which isn't yet available for Canon subjects like this. So I would leave those blank for now until we're provided more specific information.
 * Done. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders.svg  Anıl Şerifoğlu  (talk) 09:15, October 22, 2018 (UTC)
 * Keep in mind that Sourcing (Rule 6) requires articles to reference as sparingly as possible. This is because in-line ref notes make it more difficult for readers to read our articles. With that in mind, the [2] ref note here seems unnecessary. If we can see the ship is oblong from ref 1, just use that same ref for this entire portion: "The Imperial Support Vessel[1] was an oblong,[2]"
 * Done. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders.svg  Anıl Şerifoğlu  (talk) 09:15, October 22, 2018 (UTC)
 * The first History subsection needs a date/time frame for its events. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 22:12, October 21, 2018 (UTC)
 * How does that look? TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders.svg  Anıl Şerifoğlu  (talk) 09:15, October 22, 2018 (UTC)
 * I'm not pleased with that, particularly since it gives no time frame whatsoever other than what we already know from this article (that it took place before the events of the next subsection). Certainly there's a way to say it took place "some years prior to the Battle of Yavin" or something? Which would be a general way of saying "by 2 BBY," which I'm gathering is when the Lothal campaign began. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 17:09, October 22, 2018 (UTC)
 * Using the Battle of Yavin for the time frame was my initial thought as well, but I couldn't find a source that directly states that these events take place at least two years before the Battle of Yavin, so that I could say "several years before Yavin." I've just added a super-long chronology note for this purpose, please take a look. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders.svg  Anıl Şerifoğlu  (talk) 18:10, October 22, 2018 (UTC)
 * Very well constructed date reference. I made a few minor wording revisions to it. Just want to see one more thing possibly added. In the last sentence, you conclude that Thrawn must take place in 3 BBY or 2 BBY because it takes place before Rebels S3, but for that to be true the novel would need to take place "shortly before" S3. Is this true? If so, you should add that to the note. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:45, October 22, 2018 (UTC)
 * The Emperor recently promoted me after my victory at Batonn. I think it's fair to say "shortly before." TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders.svg  Anıl Şerifoğlu  (talk) 18:51, October 22, 2018 (UTC)
 * Perfect. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:55, October 22, 2018 (UTC)

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