Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Honor Guard

Honor Guard (Senate Guard)

 * Nominated by:  Vitus Infinitus  Talk 03:49, March 31, 2018 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: The honorable Honor Guard is composed of honorable honor guards from the Senate Guard that guard the Senate.

The honourable Tommy (yes that's how you spell it!)

 * Galactic Republic is infobox exclusive.
 * Added-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 15:14, March 31, 2018 (UTC)
 * Who wrote Senate Murders?
 * Added-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 15:14, March 31, 2018 (UTC)
 * You're missing a space. Also, try to work the writers in so they can use the same ref as the beginning, to reduce the amount of refs you use.
 * Fixed-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 16:08, March 31, 2018 (UTC)
 * In the infobox you refer to the Senate Guard as a singular, as if it is a specific organisation, but in the body you call them the Senate Guards, as it they are a group. Please make sure this is accurate and uniform throughout.
 * Whoops, fixed-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 15:14, March 31, 2018 (UTC)
 * Per my reply to your message, we can't source the events to 21 BBY with Galactic Atlas, so if you want to mention the date, it should be something like around 21 BBY, with a ref note explaining why.
 * Added-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 15:26, March 31, 2018 (UTC)
 * First, commas go inside your "s. Second, I'd like to see "where the funeral of Onaconda Farr takes place" with commas around it, to break up the sentence. Third, I think you should either say "between the years 21 and 20 BBY" or "around the year 21 BBY".
 * Fixed-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 16:08, March 31, 2018 (UTC)
 * Are the events around the funeral dated, like the Battle of Sullust or the Bombing of Coruscant's central power distribution grid?-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 15:14, March 31, 2018 (UTC)
 * No, the ones on my talk page are the closest ones I can find to Senate Murders, ' Tommy ' Imperial Emblem.svg ' Macaroni ' 15:40, March 31, 2018 (UTC)
 * Okay thanks. I commented here before I saw your reply on the user talk page-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 16:08, March 31, 2018 (UTC)
 * In the BTS you refer to the Honor Guard as "they", but in the body you say "The Honor Guard[1] was". Is it singular or plural? ' Tommy ' Imperial Emblem.svg ' Macaroni ' 11:10, March 31, 2018 (UTC)
 * "They" can be singular and plural I think-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 15:14, March 31, 2018 (UTC)
 * I think just "Guard" is sufficient for the type field in the infobox, ' Tommy ' Imperial Emblem.svg ' Macaroni ' 11:13, March 31, 2018 (UTC)
 * Fixed-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 15:14, March 31, 2018 (UTC)
 * Could you get an audio file for the quote please. I think Ayrehead may be able to get one for you if you ask nicely, ' Tommy ' Imperial Emblem.svg ' Macaroni ' 15:58, March 31, 2018 (UTC)