Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Argyus


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Argyus

 * Nominated by: Grand Moff Tranner [[Image:Imperial Department of Military Research.svg|20px]] (Comlink) 00:11, 7 December 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Done in a day.

(5 Inqs/0 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1) Pre-FAN reviewed. Toprawa and Ralltiir 00:36, 7 December 2008 (UTC)
 * 2)  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  22:53, 8 December 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 23:48, 9 December 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) Cull Tremayne 03:21, 11 December 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) This guy is the reason we'll be looking up the names of every new TCW character in the Complete Spoilerpedia. --  Darth Culator  (Talk) 01:19, 13 December 2008 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) I'd like to see the bio subsectioned. The bio starts way too suddenly; it doesn't establish all the facts it should (that he's a senate commando, the time period, preferably his species, etc). Additionally, the bio shouldn't be a summary of the sources (e.g. "His true loyalties revealed"...it should be established he was a traitor before it's revealed to the others, etc.) -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 00:15, 7 December 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) *I actually did establish that Dooku bribed him earlier on. Grand Moff Tranner [[Image:Imperial Department of Military Research.svg|20px]] (Comlink) 00:16, 7 December 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) **My mistake. It could probably use a little more elaboration, if possible, though; it just suddenly goes from "Dooku bribed him" to "Ventress sent him the all-clear" after a several paragraph interval. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 00:21, 7 December 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) ***As far as subsections go, how many do you want? The only way it could work is one paragraph for "Republic service" and the rest for "Separatist agent." Grand Moff Tranner [[Image:Imperial Department of Military Research.svg|20px]] (Comlink) 00:23, 7 December 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) Toprawa:
 * 6) * Sorry for the post-vote objection, but if you're going to include non-quote description within a quote, as you have done for his death section, please at least format it correctly so the parenthetical description is not italicized. Toprawa and Ralltiir 01:35, 10 December 2008 (UTC)
 * 7) **I did not add that quote; JMAS did. I'm removing it. Grand Moff Tranner [[Image:Imperial Department of Military Research.svg|20px]] (Comlink) 01:41, 10 December 2008 (UTC)
 * 8) ***For the record, I readded part of the quote, but not the part including the description. Grand Moff Tranner [[Image:Imperial Department of Military Research.svg|20px]] (Comlink) 12:11, 10 December 2008 (UTC)
 * 9) * This kind of just ends abruptly without a conclusion. Nothing can be explained to say what happened? I've never read this comic: "Faytonni and Med-Beq planned to flee the planet in the Nubian ship, but the skiff's autopilot was set to return the craft to the Senate docking platform."
 * 10) **Cull explained it. Too bad. Toprawa and Ralltiir 22:22, 12 December 2008 (UTC)

Comments
 * 1,059 words. Grand Moff Tranner [[Image:Imperial Department of Military Research.svg|20px]] (Comlink) 00:11, 7 December 2008 (UTC)
 * 1,128, for the record. Toprawa and Ralltiir 22:17, 12 December 2008 (UTC)
 * Might want to check the quote in the "Personality and traits" section. It doesn't appear to be 100% correct. Cull Tremayne 00:12, 13 December 2008 (UTC)
 * You might be right; I'll check it. Grand Moff Tranner [[Image:Imperial Department of Military Research.svg|20px]] (Comlink)
 * The quote was indeed wrong. It's fixed now. Grand Moff Tranner [[Image:Imperial Department of Military Research.svg|20px]] (Comlink) 03:04, 13 December 2008 (UTC)