Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Devon Four


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Devon Four

 * Nominated by: --Eyrezer 08:05, 19 June 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: A planet

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)
Support
 * 1)  IFYLOFD  ( You will pay the price for your lack of vision! ) 02:26, 20 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) Go Cestus. :P  CC7567  (talk) 07:30, 21 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) Vecy nice.  Mauser  Comlink 10:43, 21 June 2009 (UTC)
 * Oh, Sheeka... --Skippy Farlstendoiro 06:24, 22 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 1)  Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 09:26, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 2)  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  23:58, 25 June 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Farl: Devon 4, Objections 2. Victory for the Devon team.
 * 2) * The text mentions the planet as Devon 4 (Arabic numeral); the article is titled Devon IV (Roman numeral); and the quote seems to suggest that the canon form is Devon Four (natural language). If the canon is consistent when dealing with the planet's name, then the article should be too; if the canon isn't, then the article should be consistent and some BtS note could be used.
 * 3) * "unrelenting, the Republic blocked any shipments of antidote to the planet". Repeated twice in the same paragraph.
 * 4) * Nothing else, thank you very much. --Skippy Farlstendoiro 08:16, 19 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) **Nice tagline! I've moved it to Devon Four, as both the book and the CSWE spell it out. I also removed the repeat info. Thanks for the review. --Eyrezer 01:52, 20 June 2009 (UTC)

Comments
 * 287 words as of the time of this post.  Mauser  Comlink 10:43, 21 June 2009 (UTC)