Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations



This page is for the nomination of "comprehensive articles". For a list of "comprehensive articles", see Category:Wookieepedia comprehensive articles.


 * Comprehensive article nominations history
 * Comprehensive article nominations archiving checklist

What is a "comprehensive article?"

A "comprehensive article" is an article that contains all information regarding the topic. Often, "comprehensive articles" cannot reach Featured or Good Article status due to their limited content. This process is intended to recognize articles that contain all relevant canon information, yet are still under the 250 word limit required for a Good Article. The purpose of this is twofold&mdash;firstly, to help users distinguish what is a stub, and what is merely a short article with no further relevant material to be added, and, more importantly, to highlight for the reader when they are reading something that has been judged definitely "comprehensive"&mdash;that is, a guarantee to the reader that whatever they are reading contains the sum total of all available content.

Nominations and promotions of the Comprehensive article process are overseen by a collective of users known as the "EduCorps," which is made up of the Inquisitorius, the AgriCorps, and various other experienced users who are considered qualified to adequately judge the nominated material.

Lucasfilm Ltd. and its many licensees continue to expand the Star Wars universe. Since new information might become available, it may be necessary to revoke a "comprehensive article's" status. A forum will be used to nominate articles that have fallen out-of-date. Members of the EduCorps will then post a warning template on that page, and a grace period of one week will be instituted in which the article can be improved. If there is a significant amount of new information, it is likely that once updated, the article will become eligible for Good article status, and thereby ineligible for Comprehensive article status.

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An article must&hellip;


 * 1) &hellip;be well-written and detailed.
 * 2) &hellip;be unbiased, non-point of view.
 * 3) &hellip;be sourced with all available sources and appearances.
 * 4) &hellip;follow the Manual of Style, Layout Guide, and all other policies on Wookieepedia. This is, of course, within reason. If a topic only has a very limited degree of content that cannot be divided up into the relevant article sections, it is not required that it follow the Layout Guide precisely. This is to be judged on a case-by-case basis.
 * 5) &hellip;following the review process, be stable, i.e., does not change significantly from day to day and is not the subject of ongoing edit wars. This does not apply to vandalism and protection or semi-protection as a result of vandalism.
 * 6) &hellip;not be tagged with any sort of improvement tags (i.e. more sources, expand, etc).
 * 7) &hellip;have no redlinks.
 * 8) &hellip;have all relevant canon information presented.
 * 9) &hellip;be completely referenced for all available material and sources. See Sourcing for more information. While this is not required for an article possessing a singular source, it is encouraged, as it provides both uniformity and a good infrastructure should the topic be referenced in any future materials.
 * 10) &hellip;have all quotes and images sourced.
 * 11) &hellip;provide at least one relevant quote on the article if available.
 * 12) &hellip;include a "Behind the scenes" section for in-universe articles.
 * 13) &hellip;counting the introduction, the article body, and "Behind the scenes" material, must not exceed 250 words in length (not including captions, quotes, or headers, etc). Any articles exceeding the limit should be taken to the Good article nominations page for consideration.
 * 14) &hellip;if the nominated article reaches 200 words or greater, the nominator must either provide an intro or draft an intro and provide a link to the revision in the nomination, showing that the intro does not elevate the article over 250 words. Exceptions can be made for articles wherein the majority of the text is in the "Behind the scenes" section.

How to nominate:


 * 1) First, nominate an article you find is worthy of comprehensive status, putting it at the bottom of the list below. Nominated articles must meet all thirteen requirements stated above.
 * 2) Add CAnom at the top of the article you are nominating.
 * 3) Be sure to place sign in the "Nominated by" line when the nomination is posted for voting.
 * 4) Others will object to the nomination if they disagree that the article is good enough; they will then supply reasons for doing so, and ways to improve the article in accordance with the established rules.
 * 5) Nominators and supporters will adjust the article until the objectors (with reasonable objections) are satisfied. Objectors may also make alterations&mdash;if there is any reason for contention on a given point, it should be settled in a civil manner in the nomination field itself.
 * 6) Users may not vote on their own articles.
 * 7) There is no limit to the amount of nominations a given user can submit at any given time.

How to vote:


 * 1) Before doing anything, be sure to read the article completely, keeping a sharp eye out for mistakes.
 * 2) Afterward, compare the article to the criteria listed above, and then either support or object the article's nomination.
 * 3) *If you object, please supply concrete reasons for doing so, and how it can be improved.
 * 4) As stated above, any objections will be looked upon by the nominator, supporters, and anyone willing to improve the article, and action will be taken to please the objectors. Do not strike other users' objections; it is up to the objector to review the changes and strike if they are satisfied.
 * 5) There are several ways in which an article can receive the required number of votes. Within a 48-hour period of nomination, only EduCorps votes will count towards the total, although anyone may choose to vote in that window. If two members of the EduCorps support a nomination in that window, and there are no outstanding objections, the article can be considered a "Comprehensive article" and be tagged with the template 48 hours after the initial nomination.  The talk page will also be tagged with the CA template. When the 48 hours are up, any user's votes will contribute towards the total. If one EduCorps member has voted for an article after a week, three regular votes will be required. After the 48 hour period, an article can still also pass with just two EduCorps votes.
 * 6) Once a nomination is successful, it will be placed on the Comprehensive article list. Instructions on how to archive nominations, successful or otherwise, can be found here. Anyone can archive a nomination&mdash;just make sure it has the correct number of votes, has been nominated for at least a week (or 48 hours if there are two EC votes), and that there are absolutely no outstanding objections. If you are not sure how to do this, just ask, and someone will likely be more than willing to help you. Also, if you think you can slip one past us, think again&mdash;someone is always watching you.

All nominations will be considered idle and are subject to instantaneous removal by EduCorps members if objections are not addressed, or at least not answered, after a period of 1 week.

Please remember to archive your nomination beforehand if you plan on taking it to the Good Article Nominations page.

Battle of Slotern

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:45, August 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:I'm so sorry Lieutenant Blair.

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) SinisterSamurai 15:36, August 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  20:43, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) SinSam
 * 2) * This should link to either Slotern or Slotern system. Systems on the essential atlas (and companion) chart are named for their most famous feature. And Slotern system was added to the Online companion after comments re: battle of slotern in TFUII were made on the blog of Daniel Wallace. SinisterSamurai 02:07, August 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Done. I added the Slotern system and didn't create a Slotern since we don't know anything about it. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:57, August 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) Exiled Jedi
 * 5) * I think that you can say that it occured in the Rise of the Empire era. See my reasoning in the Blair nomination. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:58, August 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) **Done. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:12, August 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) ***You still need to mention the era in the body of the article.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  02:17, August 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) ****Done. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 20:40, August 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) Imperators II
 * 10) * The dates have to be sourced.  Imperators II (Talk) 12:16, August 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) **They have been. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:38, August 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 12) *** Now "during the height of the Galactic Empire" is unsourced (same as your other battle nom).  Imperators II (Talk) 19:12, August 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 13) ****Try that then. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:32, August 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 14) Cav
 * 15) *You link to the Slotern system in the main body, but have nothing in the infobox for the location of the battle.
 * 16) *Repeated use of the phrase "resistance fighter" - can you see if you can vary the wording a little?
 * 17) **Done.
 * 18) *You say the battle occured in the Slotern system, but clearly, the battle was fought over a planet, and not in the system. This needs to be corrected, as it appears from this that Slotern is indeed meant to be a planet. - Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 08:08, October 26, 2011 (UTC)
 * 19) **Can we really say that? The databank just says that they fought in the "Battle of Slotern" and that he dove for the ground. It could have been a moon or something else, not just a planet. What do you think?-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 13:13, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Comments
 * I'm not going to strike my support, but you should mention the era in the article body. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:39, October 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * Took care of it.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:59, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Unidentified wingman

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:21, August 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Doing ya one better EJ.

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) Good work.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  20:40, August 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Excellent. Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 16:22, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * Please do the appearances section like you did in the Battle of Slotern article.
 * 3) **Got it.
 * 4) * Again I think you can say the era was Rise of the Empire.
 * 5) **Done.
 * 6) ***Please mention the era in the body of the article.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  02:21, August 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) ****Done. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 20:35, August 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) * In Blair's article you call them TIE starfighters, however, in this nomination and the Battle of Slotern nomination you call them TIE figters and link them to TIE series. Which is correct? -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  17:03, August 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) **All set. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:15, August 14, 2011 (UTC)


 * 1) Objection! Sustained!
 * 2) * I would prefer it if you added in the BTS that this wingman only appears in the databank, and not the actual game itself. Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 15:09, August 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Got it. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:45, August 15, 2011 (UTC)


 * 1) Cav
 * 2) *I think an article on the resistance fighters themselves is needed, and should be linked to appropriately. - Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 08:12, October 26, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Got it.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 13:16, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Comments
 * Again, please mention the era in the body of the article. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:40, October 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * Got this one, too.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:11, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Battle of Corrdair

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:29, August 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Well, I had to write it in order to CAnom Limm Nix. It's a good thing that there is no limit on CAnoms.

(1 ECs/0 Users/1 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  15:56, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * The quote doesn't seem to fit very well, it doesn't even mention the battle. Are there any other quotes?
 * 3) **The whole reason that the battle was mentioned in the databank was to give place to Limm Nix, so the battle is mentioned once in a two sentence databank entry. So, that's about the best that I can do.
 * 4) * "The Empire sent All Terrain Missile Platforms to attack the Alliance, including Major Limm Nix." makes it sound like Nix is a AT-MP. Please reword. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  12:16, August 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) **Heh, fixed. Thanks for the review EJ. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:35, August 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) Imperators II
 * 7) * "during the height of the Galactic Empire" has to be sourced.  Imperators II (Talk) 12:18, August 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) **Thanks for looking it over, but it is sourced. Someone really seriously messed this article up while I was sleeping, so you might have seen that result. But, take a look at it now. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:35, August 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) *** Uh, no, the statement is not sourced. It only has a note explaining the applicability of an OOU publishing era.  Imperators II (Talk) 19:09, August 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) ****Take a look now. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:25, August 16, 2011 (UTC)


 * 1) SinSam
 * 2) * Corrdair should be linked (Or Corrdair system). Comments on Dan Wallace's blog give me reason to believe that the next Atlas companion update will include Corrdair (and Polomie). SinisterSamurai 20:27, August 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **I don't know if that'd be wise. We don't know anything about Corrdair. For all we know it might be a city. So I think we should leave it blank until it is verified. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:39, August 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) *** Then it'll have to link to a stub, or just be a redlink. SinisterSamurai 00:35, August 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) ****Done. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:57, August 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) *****Welcome to hyper-inclusionism. :) SinisterSamurai 15:42, August 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) ******That's for me. :P Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:46, August 21, 2011 (UTC)


 * 1) Cav
 * 2) *The location of the battle is not mentioned in the infobox.
 * 3) **Added.
 * 4) *to attack Major Limm Nix and the rest of the Alliance - the use of "the rest of the Alliance" implies that the entire Alliance was present at the battle, which I'm sure is not the case. Please reword to remove the implication. - Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 08:16, October 26, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) **Reworded.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 13:18, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Comments
 * Please mention the era in the body of the article. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:41, October 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * Done.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:12, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Nix

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 16:39, August 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Different Nix than my other CAnom.

(1 ECs/0 Users/1 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  19:25, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * Just a quick question: Was it not confirmed that he was killed by Terror Troopers? -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  13:28, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Yup. Fixed. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:32, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) * See my objection on the captain's nom. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  15:59, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) **Phew, I think I got them all. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 19:08, August 17, 2011 (UTC)


 * 1) Cav
 * 2) *The final two sentences in the bio need to be rewritten to explain exactly what happened in the correct order. The fact that a terror trooper killed him should be stated, then the fact that he was discovered outside an airlock and his death was thought to be an accident. - Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 08:41, October 26, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Fixed.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 13:21, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Pend

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:07, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:I wrote this article so I could CAnom Band Light, but since I got this one done first, I'll nom this one first.

(1 ECs/0 Users/1 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  19:24, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * In the other articles you mention that he was searching for smuggled goods, please mention that here. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  13:26, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Alrighty. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:34, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) * See my objection on the captain's nom. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  15:58, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) **Done. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 19:07, August 17, 2011 (UTC)


 * 1) Cav
 * 2) *Again, as with the Nix article; the cause of his death should be established first, then the assumption on the part of the crew should be noted. - Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 09:00, October 26, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Done.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 13:23, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Red (Band Light)

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:31, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:And next on Blood, Gore, and Other Unfortunate Mishaps:Red, the man whose name matches his looks.

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) Just a few minor problems that I fixed, good work.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  13:12, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * I need to pay better attention.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  13:23, August 17, 2011 (UTC)


 * 1) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 00:39, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Could you mention that the corridor he was killed in was near life support? -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  13:23, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *Done. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:36, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) See my objection on the captain's nomination. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  15:57, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) *Done. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 19:06, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) Does it say in the databank that he was eviscerated? Being impaled by a pipe doesn't remove your entrails unless canon says so.  NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 23:04, October 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) *Actually, it does say that he was eviscerated.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:30, October 2, 2011 (UTC)


 * 1) Cav
 * 2) *Again, establish the actual cause of death before the assumption. - Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 09:06, October 26, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **And done.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 13:27, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Unidentified captain of the Band Light

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:58, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:There should be a captain in there somewhere.

(2 ECs/0 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  13:00, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * I missed something.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  13:20, August 17, 2011 (UTC)


 * 1)  Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 09:57, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) You refer to the captain as "he" once. Is this a mistake or was the captain a male?-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  13:20, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *Yea, I did it out of force of habit. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:42, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) For all of the Force Unleashed II databank nominations, please mention that article's subject occured during the reign of the Galactic Empire. (Notice that this could place the articles in any era that has the Galactic Empire satisfying those who say that it is not confirmed to be in the Rise of the Empire era, and it also narrows down when the article's subject lived. What do you think of this idea?) -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  15:52, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * OK, I think I got them all. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 19:05, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) ** You missed the Unidentified wingman and Limm Nix. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  19:18, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) ***My apologies, you just forgot to remove the era tags. I took care of them for you, good work.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  19:30, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) ****Thanks. You might want to remove the strike on your vote now though. :) Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 19:39, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) *****Heh, sorry about that.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  21:45, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Comments
 * For consistency's sake, please check all of your nominations coming from the Force Unleashed II databank and remove the Rise of the Empire era from them. I have reconsiderd my reasoning and now think that it is not certain that the databank entries have to be from the Rise of the Empire era. Sorry for the confusion.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  13:00, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * It would be a good idea to say that it was during the time of the Galactic Empire, because that narrows it down a bit, though it still does not say an exact era.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  13:16, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Unidentified Twi'lek female (Upper City)

 * Nominated by:  OLIOSTER  (talk) 02:08, October 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Short and simple

(1 ECs/2 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 16:31, October 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Hooray for "Unidentified"s!!-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:23, October 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:45, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Cav
 * 2) *No applicable quotes? - Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 10:02, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Comments
 * Anyone think it would be safe to assume she died in the bombardment?  OLIOSTER  (talk) 02:23, October 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * If Calo Nord survived the bombardment, then other people could have survived as well. Saying that someone died in the bombardment would be speculation.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  11:29, October 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * Ya, we can't say that. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 16:31, October 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * That's what I thought but wanted other opinions.  OLIOSTER  (talk) 21:04, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Unidentified Ithorian male (Upper City)

 * Nominated by:  OLIOSTER  (talk) 01:18, October 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: A shameless copy

(1 ECs/2 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 15:53, October 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:17, October 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  02:10, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Object Comments
 * 1) As much as I personally dislike it, because I still see it as impractical, we aren't allowed to carbon copy articles for status anymore. You have to change up the wording in this one so it's not so similar to the Twi'lek. The BTS is exempt from this.  NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 02:55, October 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *Are those superficial wording changes I made good enough? :P  OLIOSTER  (talk) 02:03, October 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Honestly... no. Make more than a superficial effort. You can get the same info across by using completely different sentences. Menkooroo 05:34, October 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Is that better?  OLIOSTER  (talk) 05:48, October 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) ****The article looks good to me, but I don't see why the BTS section should be exempt. IMO, like Menk said, you can get the same idea across by using different words and sentences. Thoughts?-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:08, October 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) *****The BTS generally comes down to one sentence of limited breadth and wracking your mind trying to reword this when most articles on this page follow a structure anyway ("It appeared in this book written by this person") would be unnecessarily tedious, eventually culminating in wordiness we don't need. For the courtesy of rewording whole articles that could otherwise be the same, it's a small exchange to allow the BTS to remain constant. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 15:50, October 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) ******That's fine by me, then. It makes it easier for me. ;) -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 20:59, October 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) More of a question I suppose: does this edit make the year the subject of the sentence? I mean, making the first sentence be POV of the year, not the Ithorian. –Tm_T (Talk) 06:45, October 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) *Better?  OLIOSTER  (talk) 07:36, October 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) **Better in terms of POV yes. It's choppy sentence (or two) now, though. –Tm_T (Talk) 07:55, October 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) ***All one sentence now.  OLIOSTER  (talk) 08:10, October 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * 12) For this article and your Twi'lek nom, please mention their lack of hair in the infobox and the body. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  16:51, October 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * 13) *Why?  OLIOSTER  (talk) 18:10, October 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * 14) **Yeah, I guess it really isn't necessary, sorry about that.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  02:10, October 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 15) Cav
 * 16) *No applicable quotes? - Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 10:07, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Z

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 16:14, October 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Don't act so shocked. A|You knew this was coming.

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) Two down. Twenty-four to go.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 13:10, October 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) I for one, can't wait to see what the next one will be.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  17:49, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Cav
 * 2) *No article for impulse fusework?
 * 3) *A landspeeder capable of turbothrust could safely tolerate a 1000z buildup, so their turbothrust converter coils would be low gauge to keep it from exceeding that amount. I'm not exactly sure what this sentence is implying; the use of "would" seems to throw off both the meaning and the tense. - Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 10:12, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Csaus

 * Nominated by: MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg(Whatever) 14:02, October 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Number 6...

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:12, October 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  17:47, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

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 * 1) Cav
 * 2) *at galactic coordinates F-9 - I thought galactic coordinates were the different from the grid coordinates used in the Atlas. Can you check and rectify if necessary?
 * 3) *Context needed for the Path of Houses. - Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 10:16, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

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Limbala sector

 * Nominated by:  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  03:43, October 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Love Is a Warm Blaster!

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 * 1) My blaster's so nice and warm...-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 13:08, October 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2)  Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 11:20, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

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 * In the Iinfobox you have the native species space filled in, but in the article, you just mention the senator that was from that region. Perhaps start out the article with something like "The Limbala sector was a sector in the galaxy that contained some members of the Turian species." Just something like that and it would also fix the rather short opening to the article.
 * Done.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:25, October 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * Any idea when the short story was supposed to be released? If so, you should add it to the BTS.
 * I forgot to do that, thanks for catching it.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:25, October 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * Otherwise, nice job.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 13:09, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

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 * I am not sure if my sourcing is adequate. Anyone have any tips for dealing with an article that is completely cut content?-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  03:43, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

HJ-377

 * Nominated by: -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 20:45, October 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:More from the insane asylum.

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 * 1)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  02:13, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

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 * 1) I am pretty sure that unidentified gender is not a correct category for this guy. Did you mean to have Category:Individuals of unidentified species as a category instead? -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  22:42, October 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *Yup. Got it.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:51, October 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Cav
 * 4) *The article needs to be rewritten from HJ-377's point of view, not the enlisted soldier's. Describe HJ's actions from his viewpoint.
 * 5) **Rewritten.
 * 6) *The enlisted soldier needs an article. - Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 11:29, October 26, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) **Got it.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 13:33, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Tresk Im'nel's translator droid

 * Nominated by:  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  17:33, October 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Random article button do your stuff!

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 * 1) Three cheers for the Random Article button!-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 20:15, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

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 * I'm not sure that the New Republic and the New Jedi Order should be listed as affiliation. The droid was affiliated with its owner. Just because the owner was affiliated with those entities doesn't mean that the droid was. -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 19:22, October 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * I wasn't sure about this either, I removed them now, thanks for the review.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  20:09, October 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) Cav
 * 2) *The last sentence: The droid was owned by Im'nel from the beginning of the New Republic to the time of the Yuuzhan Vong's invasion of the galaxy doesn't flow well, especially the use of "the beginning of the New Republic". Can we use more formal wording instead of "beginning"? - Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 11:36, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

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Unidentified droid owner (Tresk Im'nel's translator droid)

 * Nominated by:  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  17:33, October 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Could be an individual, government, company... well it could be just about anything.

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 * 1) Short, but good.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 19:24, October 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Per Cal.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 17:41, October 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3)  Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 11:40, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

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 * 1) Remove the empty infobox. 1) It's empty - despite what you might have heard elsewhere, there is no point in having an empty infobox and there is plenty of precendent for not having one in such circumstances. 2) As you point out, it is not known if the owner was a character, so not reason to have a character infobox. --Eyrezer 19:25, October 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *Happily removed.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  21:30, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

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Leatherwing

 * Nominated by: -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:53, October 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Doing a nom for the WookieeProject that I did some of my first noms for.

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 * 1) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 22:08, October 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2)  Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 11:41, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

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 * 1) Axinal
 * 2) * Since we typically don't capitalize the names of non-sentient creatures, I presume we wouldn't capitalize this either. But since I don't own Deceived, I figured I'd check with you first.
 * 3) **You're right. My mistake.
 * 4) * Also, you say they could fly to the southern part of Ord Mantell on occasion, but make no mention of where on the planet they usually lived. Does the book mention anything on that issue? Otherwise, nice work.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 17:51, October 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) **The book merely mentions that they were flying south for warmer weather when they were spotted.
 * 6) * One more, actually: Since not all avians are birds, the category should simply be Category:Creatures, unless of course they're called birds in the book&mdash;in which case, that would need mention in the body of the article.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 17:54, October 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) **Done. Thanks for the review!-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:42, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

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Wotson

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 22:04, October 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: I trust that there is nothing of consequence which I have overlooked?

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 * 1) -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 23:36, October 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) This is impossible! Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 01:53, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

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 * You have Category:Humans, but in the infobox, you don't mention that he was human. Which is it? -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:07, October 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * It is, of course, a trifle, but there is nothing so important as trifles. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 22:21, October 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * Now you have Category:Unidentified gender but Wotson is listed as male throughout the article. Did you mean to have Category: Individuals of unidentified species instead? Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 02:57, October 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * How often have I said to you that when you have eliminated the impossible, whatever remains, however improbable, must be the truth?  NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 21:21, October 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) Cav
 * 2) *Article needed for the informant. - Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 11:45, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

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Nautolan tranquillity bracelet

 * Nominated by: -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 03:28, October 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:First article to have the newly created Template:Clothing in it.

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 * 1) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 22:09, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

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 * Not really an objection, but since there is no mention of the New Republic, is it necessary to call the Republic the "Old Republic"? Its real name is Galactic Republic... 1358  (Talk)  10:16, October 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * As it is a canonical name for the subject technically he may elect to call it that (the Old Order, the Republic, or the First Galactic Republic) so long as he doesn't link to the redirect. This does not apply to colloquial names, but since there really aren't any for the Republic that's not an issue here. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 21:26, October 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * I agree with Naru. I think that it is fine to name it the Old Republic.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:30, October 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * I'd agree with Xd on this one. You already state the year, so specifying the era isn't really needed. To avoid using either "Old Republic" or "Galactic Republic", you could possibly define the time frame by the war being fought during the Sacking of Coruscant. - Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 11:48, October 26, 2011 (UTC)
 * See how that looks.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 13:36, October 26, 2011 (UTC)
 * Although I suppose I agree that it's not necessarily wrong to call it the Old Republic, I wouldn't mind seeing a year somewhere in the article, since "days of the Old Republic" could mean almost anything. Other than that, though, nice article.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 17:37, October 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * Added.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:49, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Match Master

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 00:03, October 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: You thought you'd never see this picture again. You thought wrong.

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 * 1) Besides double linking "planet" and not linking "Coruscant", looks good.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 02:04, October 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *My mistake.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 02:09, October 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 17:33, October 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4)  Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 11:55, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

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Vinefish

 * Nominated by: -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 13:48, October 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Another one...

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 * 1)  Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 11:56, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

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 * 1) Axinal
 * 2) *I think it's probably safe to assume that vinefish were fish&mdash;and I see you have that as one of the categories. I suggest perhaps changing the infobox to a creature infobox, and adjusting the article body accordingly, so it makes it clear that this was a creature that could be eaten, rather than just food.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 14:03, October 26, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **I believe I took care of it.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 20:26, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

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Unidentified vendor

 * Nominated by: -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:24, October 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Goes with vinefish.

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 * 1) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 13:59, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

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 * 1) Cav
 * 2) *I'd would set up the vendor as selling vinefish at the market, before mentioning that he tried to sell it to Korr. The article should be from the vendor's PoV. - Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 11:57, October 26, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Fixed.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 13:39, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

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