Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Dengless Rinn

Dengless Rinn

 * Nominated by: Skippy Farlstendoiro 06:21, May 14, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Moustache! Moustache!

Fett

 * "An ambitious bureaucrat, Rinn coveted a higher rank, but his superior, Governor Linrec, didn't offer him any promotion." Why wasn't he offered a promotion?
 * Added as much as OS specifies. Skippy Farlstendoiro 07:33, May 24, 2010 (UTC)
 * "Prefect Rinn hired bounty hunters both to fight the local agents of the Alliance to Restore the Republic, including Pallas Quintell" You mentioned "both," but I only see the Rebel Alliance being mentioned only.
 * Added. Skippy Farlstendoiro 07:33, May 24, 2010 (UTC)
 * Can you mention early in the bio that he was a Human male?
 * Better? Skippy Farlstendoiro 07:33, May 24, 2010 (UTC)
 * Also in the bio, please add context to Governor Linrec. You vaguely say that Rinn was his "underling," without mentioning why he was or who Linrec is.
 * OS doesn't say much more; added as much as I could. Skippy Farlstendoiro 07:33, May 24, 2010 (UTC)
 * You can't find any suitable quotes for the bio and P&T?
 * None. Unfortunately, that's common with RPG adventures. Skippy Farlstendoiro 07:33, May 24, 2010 (UTC)
 * "Rinn considered himself a better catch than Raiss, and thought that Linrec was trying to insult him personally." How was he trying to insult him personally? Please clarify.
 * Better? Skippy Farlstendoiro 07:33, May 24, 2010 (UTC)
 * "He was younger than he looked like," I don't understand what you mean by this. You mean he appeared younger?
 * Better? Skippy Farlstendoiro 07:33, May 24, 2010 (UTC)
 *  JangFett  (Talk) 20:28, May 21, 2010 (UTC)