Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Gektl


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Gektl

 * Nominated by: jSarek 05:28, April 18, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Operation Clever Girl comes back from retirement to bring you Stafuv Rahz's species, a veritable Tiss'shar Lite! Thanks to Havac, Hydro, and Trak, who helped me with the images. jSarek 05:28, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

(4 ACs/2 Users/6 Total)
Support
 * 1) --Eyrezer 09:32, April 19, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) By the Staff of Ra, I shall vote! --Skippy Farlstendoiro 07:35, April 20, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) Nice! ~ SavageBob 15:46, April 20, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4)  Jonjedigrandmaster  Jedi symbol.svg ( We seed the stars ) 01:28, April 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) Green Tentacle (Talk) 23:33, April 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * 6)  Grunny  ( talk ) 23:58, April 29, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Just from a quick glance, please kill that redlink in the intro. I'll give the article a full review soon.  Jonjedigrandmaster  Jedi symbol.svg ( We seed the stars ) 22:18, April 18, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) *D'oh! Right, "no redlinks in the introduction." Fixed. jSarek 23:40, April 18, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) Please expand coverage of Bring Me the Children. It is currently only one sentence n the GitG section. Can you also add another sentence on Rahz to the intro? --Eyrezer 04:16, April 19, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) *Both completed. jSarek 09:03, April 19, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) Toprawa:
 * 6) * The intro could use a fair expansion from the four sentences currently afforded to it. A healthy-sized paragraph or two should be enough. Toprawa and Ralltiir 05:56, April 19, 2010 (UTC)
 * 7) **Expanded. jSarek 09:03, April 19, 2010 (UTC)
 * 8) Farlstendoiro reviews an alien species.
 * 9) * Are Gektl painted eggs really the eggs laid by female Gektls? Or eggs laid by others and painted by Gektls?
 * 10) **Alas, the article is unclear on this point.
 * 11) * If Voren Na'al spells "Gecktl", maybe the species are known both as Gektl and Gecktl?
 * 12) **Good point; added.
 * 13) * "Rahz later died on Harix after a sabotaged weapon Rahz attempts to use to execute captives kills him." Uh, I can't understand what happened, but at least I dislike the present tense in "attempts" and "kills". May you please reword this?
 * 14) **Oy, that was all kinds of bad. Fortunately, it's been addressed as part of Eyrezer's request for more info on that event.
 * 15) * Please create an article on "unidentified Gektl criminal".
 * 16) **Done.
 * 17) * Skippy Farlstendoiro 08:01, April 19, 2010 (UTC)
 * 18) **jSarek 09:03, April 19, 2010 (UTC)
 * 19) Prepare to be savaged...
 * 20) * Can you mention that their flesh is pale-colored under the scales when they shed it? This judging from the illustration you used. That's all! ~ SavageBob 04:04, April 20, 2010 (UTC)
 * 21) **Information added. jSarek 04:17, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

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