Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Krozurbian


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Krozurbian

 * Nominated by: --Eyrezer 12:10, March 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Pacifistic crocodiles?

(3 ACs/4 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1) Alien species! Alien species! --Skippy Farlstendoiro 12:31, March 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) So they gave the crocodiles happy pills and hoped they'd stop killing each other.... Makes sense to me! NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 04:35, March 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) Ithorians will do anything for peace. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 01:01, March 31, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4)  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  16:43, April 2, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5)  Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 20:11, April 4, 2010 (UTC)
 * 6)  Jonjedigrandmaster  Jedi symbol.svg ( We seed the stars ) 22:06, April 4, 2010 (UTC)
 * 7) ~ SavageBob 04:02, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) '''Skippy. One objection.
 * 2) * These guys are carnivores. Shouldn't that fall under Biology?
 * 3) * Skippy Farlstendoiro 12:16, March 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) **If you prefer! --Eyrezer 12:20, March 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) NaruHina
 * 6) * Isn't the jaw just the lower row of teeth?
 * 7) * In the last paragraph of the history, you start it and you end it with "two hundred years of conflict." Rephrase.
 * 8) * NaruHina Talk Anakinsolo.png 00:58, March 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * 9) **Nope, the jaw can refer to the upper and lower. Changed the second one. --Eyrezer 01:11, March 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * 10) ***The More You Know... NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 04:35, March 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * 11) Prepare to be savaged...
 * 12) * I think you can go into a little more detail in the "Biology and appearance" section based just on the infobox image. For instance, they seem to have sunken eyes within bony brows, and they have a corrugated bridge of the nose. It's hard to tell from the image, but do they have visible ears?
 * 13) * I think I agree that "jaw" is a bit weird when referring to both rows of teeth, although technically correct. Perhaps instead of "both jaws" it could say something like "both the upper and lower jaw" or "both the maxilla and the mandible"? ~ SavageBob 23:18, March 31, 2010 (UTC)
 * 14) **This is why I normally write species that have not been illustrated! Both should be fixed. --Eyrezer 05:44, April 4, 2010 (UTC)
 * 15) ***Re, ears, I can not tell. --Eyrezer 23:34, April 4, 2010 (UTC)
 * 16) ****It's good to stretch yourself! :) ~ SavageBob 04:02, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

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