Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Shandy Fanaso


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Shandy Fanaso

 * Nominated by: Thefourdotelipsis 10:42, 26 August 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Great character from Jason Fry's new short story (go read it.) Might be a tad rusty, since I haven't done one of these for a while.

(5 Inqs/0 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1) Impressive job getting all this info out of what seems to be a very simple (and kinda boring) story.  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  18:43, 27 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) Green Tentacle (Talk) 21:39, 5 September 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) You are rusty. :P Cull Tremayne 03:22, 12 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) Good read.  —Xwing328 (Talk) 01:08, 13 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) --  Darth Culator  (Talk) 01:26, 13 October 2008 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) From the Brown Computer Desk of Chack Jadson:
 * 2) * I think you should move all the One Two Many stuff to the end of the intro, rather than having a bit in the first sentence. At least I think they could be tied together better. (Sorry I'm not very specific here).
 * 3) **This is more of a style thing for me, I suppose, in that I feel the opening of the intro should always state what the character was "most recently", if you understand what I mean.
 * 4) ***I understand the sentiment.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 18:43, 27 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) * Cargo-tithe or cargo tithe?
 * 6) **Cargo-tithe. Fixed.
 * 7) *Sorry I'm being a bit picky here; these are very minor things that stood out when I read this. Also note that if you disagree with one or more of these, please tell me. Like I said, these are minor things. It's an execllent article overall.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 23:27, 26 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 8) **Thanks for the review. On the first point, if you think it's genuinely too disruptive, I'm more than happy to change it. :) Thefourdotelipsis 23:45, 26 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 9) Shouldn't devotion-service be linked? Green Tentacle (Talk) 18:45, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
 * 10) *Yes. (Red)linked. :P Thefourdotelipsis 06:59, 5 September 2008 (UTC)

Comments
 * I added a pic - it is from the ad for the story on the StarWars site... I think it safe to put it there. --Eyrezer 07:56, 28 August 2008 (UTC)