Wookieepedia:Good article nominations



This page is for the nomination of good articles. This is not a way to showcase the articles of your favorite characters, spaceships, or the like. For a list of good articles, see Category:Wookieepedia good articles.

What is a Good article?
A Good article is an article that adheres to quality standards, but cannot reach FA status due to its limited content.

A Good article has the following attributes.

1. It is well written. In this respect:


 * (a) it has compelling prose, and is readily comprehensible to non-specialist readers;
 * (b) it follows a logical structure, introducing the topic and then grouping together its coverage of related aspects; where appropriate, it contains a succinct lead section summarizing the topic, and the remaining text is organized into a system of hierarchical sections (particularly for longer articles);
 * (c) it follows the Manual of Style, Layout Guide, and all other policies;
 * (d) necessary technical terms or jargon are briefly explained in the article itself, or an active link is provided.

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable. In this respect:


 * (a) it provides references to any and all sources used for its material;
 * (b) sources should be selected in accordance with the guidelines for reliable sources;
 * (c) it contains no elements of original research.

3. It is broad in its coverage, addressing all major aspects of the topic (this requirement is slightly weaker than the "comprehensiveness" required by WP:FA, and allows shorter articles and broad overviews of large topics to be listed);.

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy. In this respect:


 * (a) viewpoints are represented fairly and without bias;
 * (b) all significant points of view are fairly presented, but not asserted, particularly where there are or have been conflicting views on the topic.

5. It is stable, i.e., it does not change significantly from day to day and is not the subject of ongoing edit wars. This does not apply to vandalism and protection or semi-protection as a result of vandalism.

6. It contains images, where possible, to illustrate the topic. In this respect:


 * (a) the images are properly sourced and have succinct and descriptive captions;
 * (b) a lack of images does not in itself prevent an article from achieving Good Article status.

Nomination of Good articles
To nominate an article for Good article status, list it here. Nominated articles must meet all six requirements stated above. If an article has a total of five votes after at least a week since it was nominated (beginning the day of its nomination) and no objections (or the objections have been stricken or overridden), the article will be considered a "Good article" and tagged with the template. The talk page will also be tagged with the GA template. For complete instructions on archiving nominations please see here. Also remember to add GAnom at the top of the article you are nominating.

(+6)
Support
 * 1) QuentinGeorge 11:54, 11 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) Kilson 22:47, 16 April 08 (UTC)
 * 3) Copy-edited. —Tommy9281 ( Lússë i Morë Hwesta súya! ) 01:48, 25 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) Go Bachs. --Skippy Farlstendoiro 06:32, 25 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) I thought I voted when I struck... 9_9 Greyman  @wikiajanitor ( Talk ) 22:44, 16 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 6) ajeanette 20 May 2008

Object
 * 1) Minor objection, but the information in the succession box at the bottom needs to be sourced like you would with an infobox. Other than that, the article reads well :)  Greyman  http://images.wikia.com/central/images/9/9c/Jan.png ( Talk ) 02:06, 12 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) Toprawa:
 * 3) * Please add a little bit to give the thought bomb some context as to what it is here: "she abandoned her fellow Sith Lords when she learned of Kaan's desire to use the thought bomb"
 * 4) **Looks like someone has already taken care of that. QuentinGeorge 23:45, 9 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) * The paragraph beginning "Bane survived using the dark side to purge" really digresses from the central theme of this article - Githany - and large parts are highly irrelevant. I would suggest cutting out the fat
 * 6) **I agree. Not sure why that was there. QuentinGeorge 23:45, 9 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 7) * This is introduced very roughly, and needs to be explained - what is the thought bomb, who is unleashing it, what is its intended purpose? "The thought bomb was about to be unleashed"
 * 8) **Fixed by me; I am the "somebody else" that QG refers to.-- Goodwood [[Image:Redstarbird.svg|20px]] ( Alliance Intelligence ) 12:15, 16 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 9) * Please elaborate on this a little bit. Her true thoughts concerning what? "Despite her extroverted personality, Githany kept her true feelings closely guarded."
 * 10) **Ok. QuentinGeorge 23:45, 9 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 11) * Need to avoid this speculation. If you can't reword this to do, I would suggest removing this sentence entirely: "Githany most likely held the same powers and abilities of most Jedi or Sith of her time."
 * 12) **Gone. QuentinGeorge 23:45, 9 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 13) * The information under the "Appearance" section should be merged with the "Personality and traits."
 * 14) **Disagree with that, but if that's what the MoS says, I will do so. QuentinGeorge 23:45, 9 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 15) *I'm not sure where this quote is coming from, but it needs to be attributed to someone. I would suggest paraphrasing this instead for cleaner prose: "perfect examples of the human female form."
 * 16) **That's exactly how PoD describes her. QuentinGeorge 23:45, 9 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 17) ***So you're quoting prose? That's not how we write articles. Please paraphrase. Toprawa and Ralltiir 18:49, 21 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 18) *Please cut the speculation: "which may have been of Sith design."
 * 19) **Ok. QuentinGeorge 23:45, 9 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 20) *Ditto on the speculation: "feelings no doubt enhanced by Kaan's potent mind manipulation abilities."
 * 21) **That's exactly what the book says. Kaan uses his mind manipulation to increase her attraction to her. QuentinGeorge 23:45, 9 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 22) *Your "Kaan" and "Darovit" subsections under the "Relationships" section are unnecessary. Such a section should be reserved for serious romantic relationships, not an individual analysis of every person she interacted with. You may choose to rewrite and insert some of this information into the P&T. Toprawa and Ralltiir 01:16, 5 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 23) **That rule is totally ridiculous and stupid, considering Kaan and Darovit are not just "people she interacts with", but looks like someone already deleted that so I will leave it. QuentinGeorge 23:45, 9 May 2008 (UTC)

Comments
 * Just a little formatting pointer, always make sure you put punctuation before reference tags. Toprawa and Ralltiir 01:16, 5 May 2008 (UTC)

(+0)
Support
 * 1) Seems to fit the requirements. The prose might be a little watery, but that could easily be remedied. Din&#39;s Fire 997 00:08, 14 April 2008 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) The article and the infobox need to be fully sourced, please.  Greyman  http://images.wikia.com/central/images/9/9c/Jan.png ( Talk ) 20:13, 13 April 2008 (EDT)
 * 2) *How's that? Din&#39;s Fire 997 00:54, 14 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) **Per Rule 2(a). It can be confusing if you're not familiar with it, but here is the sourcing page, which provide steps to follow. Greyman  http://images.wikia.com/central/images/9/9c/Jan.png ( Talk ) 01:08, 14 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Better? (thanks for the link, btw. This whole process is really expanding my skills, if nothing else) Din&#39;s Fire 997 01:36, 14 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) ****Good, I'm glad to hear it! It looks much better, and the only thing you need to source now is this statement, "However, it did not gain notoriety until it was taken as a refuge by rogue Sith Lord Darth Millennial." Otherwise, the sourcing is complete. Greyman  http://images.wikia.com/central/images/9/9c/Jan.png ( Talk ) 01:48, 14 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 6) *****Needed a minor rephrase, but it's sourced now. Din&#39;s Fire 997 01:59, 14 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 7) Toprawa:
 * 8) * Din, right now the article is just too short. These one sentence paragraph haphazardly summarizing events should be fleshed out to the length of paragraphs.
 * 9) * Additionally, the article should be ordered to fit within our Layout Guide. If you go that page and go down to number 11, you'll see how a planet article should be sectioned. I would also recommend you take a look at Agamar, a recently passed Featured Article. That's just how a planet article should be done. You can use that as a model. Toprawa and Ralltiir 04:07, 15 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 10) * In that case, you'll need to add the bit in the intro to the body of the article as well. I can't say never, but an article should almost never have intro material not covered in the body someplace. Once in a blue moon an exception will rear its ugly head, but this is certainly not one of them. Toprawa and Ralltiir 05:27, 16 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 11) **Adressed all of that, I believe. Heck, I'm pretty sure this is technically long enough to be an FA now (not pushing my luck though). If there's anything else, I'll do it - I've come this far. Din&#39;s Fire 997 06:37, 16 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 12) ***I must say, Din, although I haven't read through it yet, I'm impressed. Just how it should look, at any rate. I'll review it soon. :) Toprawa and Ralltiir 15:38, 16 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 13) *Would be good to add a little bit here, to say it was located in Sith Space: " was the third planet in the Dromund system"
 * 14) *Please give a time frame (i.e. year) to give this greater context: "The site of a major battle during the New Sith Wars"
 * 15) *Weasel words like "possibly" and "apparently" are doorways to speculation, which is a big no-no when writing articles. If you can't reword to avoid the "possibly," I would suggest removing that little clause entirely: "for centuries, possibly even millennia"
 * 16) *What, specifically, does "average-sized" mean? In relation to what? Does the source say this, or are you extrapolating this from something? Greater clarification, specification would help here: "Dromund Kaas was an average-sized planet"
 * 17) *Again, "seemed" is one of these weasel words. Something either did or didn't. Write what you know: "Only very durable life-forms seemed to survive long in the swamps"
 * 18) *Please briefly describe who Kaan is here. Don't assume the reader knows who anyone is: "and Kaan's New Sith Empire"
 * 19) *Specify, with years, what these times in history were: "During varying points in history, Dromund Kaas was held by both the Old Sith Empire and Kaan's New Sith Empire."
 * 20) *Again, a year, please: "However, it was effectively abandoned until it became a refuge for rogue Sith Lord Darth Millennial"
 * 21) *Explain what the Rule of Two here is: "Having rejected the Rule of Two"
 * 22) *Year/time frame, please: "until its rediscovery by one Darth Sidious"
 * 23) *This sentence is highly speculative. Please reword to avoid saying "It is believed." Does the source explicitly say someone believed this? If so, who? "It is believed that Yoda may have personally investigated the system, however any such mission would have been known only to the highest ranks of the Jedi, and any records of the project have been lost."
 * 24) *Can we elaborate on this battle? If not, at the very least create an article for this battle, please: "Despite this level of secrecy, the 327th Star Corps would later fight a battle on Dromund Kaas during the Clone Wars"
 * 25) *Can we elaborate on what inscriptions these were: "learned of the planet from ancient inscriptions"
 * 26) *Please provide a date here. I'm almost certain it's 10 ABY: "until Jedi Knight Kyle Katarn learned of the planet from ancient inscriptions."
 * 27) *Calling these things abominations is pretty POV. Please choose a better word: "and battled many Sith abominations"
 * 28) *Please elaborate on what exactly Dark Mara is: "along with the apparition known as Dark Mara"
 * 29) *What, exactly, is an act of faith? "an act of faith in Katarn's heart"
 * 30) *Please reword the beginning of this sentence to avoid starting out with dead construction like "At this." At what? "At this, Katarn was able to overthrow the dark taint of the Temple,"
 * 31) *Not an objection, but a pointer. Linking should be done as followed: Link upon first mention in the intro and once again upon first mention in the body, and then avoid linking something again for the remainder of the article
 * 32) *Timeframes, please: "Built during the original Sith Empire, the Temple was deserted shortly after the Great Hyperspace War"
 * 33) *Who is Seviss Vaa? "the Temple's location eventually fell into the hands of Seviss Vaa"
 * 34) *Please add a little bit to the beginning of the BTS explaining where it first appeared in SW media.
 * 35) *Without checking, I suspect your source list may be out of order. It should be ordered by OOU publication date. Please check.
 * 36) *Overall, not bad, Din. Toprawa and Ralltiir 18:05, 17 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 37) **Adressed a lot of that, but there's a fair amount that simply can't be.
 * 38) **Dates are impossible in many cases. We don't knew when, exactly, any of these battles took place, and, since we don't know when Darth Millennial was even alive saying when he landed is also out.
 * 39) **"Only very durable life-forms seemed to survive long in the swamps" In fact, that is avoiding speculation. The only life-forms we've seen on Kaas are durable, but we can't use a blanket statment here. Hence "seemed." Of course, if "until otherwise proven" is okay, then I'll alter it.
 * 40) **To quote the original source "It's believed that Yoda may have visited the Dromund system." Doesn't say by whom.
 * 41) ** Nothing can be done about the "ancient inscriptions." We don't know when, where, or what they consisted of. It seems I was mistaken. JvS says 9 ABY.
 * 42) **Again, directly from Wizards.com "Kyle Katarn traveled there after learning of the witchworld in ancient inscriptions, battling a host of Sith abominations in the planet's seemingly endless bogs before succumbing to the spell of the dark side of the Force." That's what they're called. Abominations.
 * 43) **Not much can be added about Dark Mara. She was a spirit with a lightsaber. The end. If you can think of a way to add that bit without breaking up the prose, by all means, alter.
 * 44) **Act of faith is a real-world term
 * 45) **Anything else? I admit this is tiring, but darn it, I am getting this bloody thing through if it kills me.Din&#39;s Fire 997 03:25, 18 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 46) From the Bridge of Chack Jadson:
 * 47) * I agree with Toprawa. The article has too many two sentence paragraphs.
 * 48) * Also, check out the layout guie like he suggested. Model the article to fit that, and it will be much improved.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 21:07, 15 April 2008 (UTC)

Comments

Well, seeing that no one has changed their vote to a positive one (even though I have addressed almost every addressable concern) I will assume that interest has waned (not surprising given recent policy battles regarding GA status) and will wait for the inevitable failure of this nomination. After a cool-down period, I intend to re-nominate. In any case, at least I’ve learned a bit from this endeavor. Cheers. Din&#39;s Fire 997 01:03, 7 May 2008 (UTC)

(+4)
Support
 * 1) I don't know, he might have a chance Kilson 23:00, 16 April 08 (UTC)
 * 2) Interesting enough, it gets my vote. --Skippy Farlstendoiro 07:44, 17 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) Toprawa and Ralltiir 06:05, 14 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) --Eyrezer 22:18, 16 May 2008 (UTC)

Object Comments
 * 1) Toprawa:
 * 2) * Please familiarize yourself with our Layout Guide to see how a character article should be "laid out." Your intro must be greatly expanded, needs a P&T section, and a BTS couldn't hurt. Toprawa and Ralltiir 17:33, 17 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) **I have enlarged the intro and added a small BTS, but I find it a little pointless to add a P&T because we don't really know much about the character becides what's in the biography. Also, at least five GA characters that don't have P&Ts: Lii, Imperial Ace, Dorsk 81, Luminara Unduli, and Uldir Lochett. I honestly believe that this article should be a good article.
 * 4) ***Nonsense. A character article should never go without a P&T. Previously passed GANs without them, doesn't make the trend right. It means they passed before I started reviewing. ;) Toprawa and Ralltiir 21:52, 17 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) ****Yeah. Every character has a Personality, even if you can only write several lines on it. You should check out Chertyl Ruluwoor (Human), a Galaxies NPC article I wrote (if only for amusement), to get an idea of how to write a P&T on a character with such little info. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 22:13, 17 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 6) *****OK, the P&T has been made, and thanks Ackbar for the Chertyl Ruluwoor (Human) page, it help a little. Kilson 15:26, 18 April 08 (UTC)
 * 7) * Why, exactly, are we speculating that Geonosis may be his homeworld? Simply because he's Geonosian? If nothing in the game besides that supports this possibility, this needs to go.
 * 8) ** I'm still not positive anything specifically says he's from Geonosis. If the game doesn't explicitly say this, we can't assume.
 * 9) ***Sorry about that, I thought I got rid of Geonosis, I must have missed it. Kilson likes PIE 21:04, 6 May 08 (UTC)
 * 10) * Also, how, specifically, is he "affiliated" with Kachirho? It would seem more pertinent to affiliate him with something akin to his scientist dealings, but since we don't know that, it's probably best to leave this blank as well
 * 11) * Your biography section starts out very rough, with little transition. It needs a better beginning sentence explaining who and what the character is.
 * 12) * We'll deal with the remainder of the prose when you handle these objections. Toprawa and Ralltiir 04:48, 27 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 13) **OK, I got it done, I hope it's good now Kilson 16:21, 28 April 08 (UTC)
 * 14) * Speculation needs to go: "possibly because the research there was starting to become less peaceful and ethical"
 * 15) * This is speculative wording. Remove the weasel word "apparently" and better reword it to read more factually: "Apparently the patrol had found him unconscious in the woods with documents stating a vile plan to do harmful experiments on many Wookiees."
 * 16) * Please add a little context to explain who this Ovarra is: "The spacer returned to Kachiro and brought the documents to Elder Ovarra"
 * 17) * The P&T doesn't read very encyclopedic, and seems to be laden with Original Research. Please rewrite
 * 18) **The P&T as you had it was much better than the changed, so I put it back. Toprawa and Ralltiir 06:05, 14 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 19) * Please order the categories at the bottom of the page by alphabetic order Toprawa and Ralltiir 05:51, 6 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 20) **Got it, and if your going to add anything else, please add it all together and not at different times. It would make things quicker. Kilson 23:40, 10 May 08 (UTC)
 * 21) ***This way is easier for me because, with all due respect, I don't know who you are, and too many newcomers will come to the GAN page with a nomination only to leave and never come back again. As such, performing a complete review ends up being a waste of my time. Toprawa and Ralltiir 06:05, 14 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 22) ****I understand, and thanks, I think this has actually helped me. I think it will have and easier time the next time I try to get an article nominated.
 * 23) In the intro, can you add a reference to the timeframe for these events? --Eyrezer 08:37, 16 May 2008 (UTC)
 * Ok, I think that'll work.
 * 1) **Yep, that's all that was needed. --Eyrezer 22:18, 16 May 2008 (UTC)
 * And, Kilson, we don't add bullets to the BTS anymore. Please avoid that. Toprawa and Ralltiir 21:56, 17 April 2008 (UTC)
 * Is it possible to get a second picture for this article? --Eyrezer 08:42, 16 May 2008 (UTC)
 * While I was searching the web, I did come upon a full body picture of Ikvizi on the Star Wars Galaxies wiki, but it isn't that different form the one we already have up there. I could also put up a pretty good picture of Ovarra from the Galaxies wiki, I'll upload it if you want.

(+5)
Support
 * Yes, that's the best picture of him. Thefourdotelipsis 07:43, 20 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 1)  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  19:05, 21 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) Very nice. Toprawa and Ralltiir 20:17, 9 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) --Eyrezer 11:47, 20 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) Greyman  @wikia ( Talk ) 01:45, 24 May 2008 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) Explain who Zannen is in the intro. Two more words would suffice.  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  22:19, 20 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) *Done. Thefourdotelipsis 08:57, 21 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) I actually think that pic should be in the main body, not the infobox. --Eyrezer 01:39, 21 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) *I'd argue the point, but it doesn't hurt. ;) Thefourdotelipsis 08:57, 21 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) **Lol. --Eyrezer 01:34, 23 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 6) Toprawa:
 * 7) * Little descriptor for who Zannen is, please: "Following an incident that resulted in the death of Zannen's wife"
 * 8) **The only thing we really know about him is that he became a Governor, so I've added a repeat of what's in the main body.
 * 9) ***Perfect.
 * 10) * This kind of reads funny. Could you reword it a little?: "Palpatine locked himself in office and made himself Emperor"
 * 11) **Deliberate reference to...the ANH novel, I think. But it's gone now. Just reads "Palpatine made himself Emperor."
 * 12) ***Hmm, I thought it sounded kind of familiar. Thanks anyways.
 * 13) * I think you may have forgotten to add something to the end of this sentence, as it's incomplete. Send them what/where? "Tantrellius began searching through official channels for a ransom message, while sending the Rebels, as well as Plum's friend, Grree L'Tharr, and Podd."
 * 14) **Yes, I did forget. Fixed.
 * 15) * Little context here, please. "The criminal Gamusha," or something: "Yuma had arranged to be "kidnapped" by Gamusha's" Toprawa and Ralltiir 06:08, 9 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 16) **Added. Thefourdotelipsis 08:48, 9 May 2008 (UTC)

Comments
 * Could use a smidge more context in the intro (and maybe even in the body) about who Zannen is and why the incident was traumatic. Assuming said context exists. I don't have the article, which is why this is a comment and not an opposing point. -- Darth Culator  (Talk) 14:45, 20 April 2008 (UTC)
 * No real context on that, sorry. Thefourdotelipsis 08:57, 21 April 2008 (UTC)
 * It looks like Space Gamer/Fantasy Gamer 88 is from the US. That being the case, is it the "Jediboh Theatre" or the "Jediboh Theater"? --Eyrezer 11:02, 20 May 2008 (UTC)
 * It's the correct spelling. (Theatre :P) Surprising, but then WEG did it for The Most Honourable Guild of Armourers. Thefourdotelipsis 11:44, 20 May 2008 (UTC)
 * Cool, lightsabre here we come! --Eyrezer 11:47, 20 May 2008 (UTC)

(+3)
Support
 * 1) Thefourdotelipsis 06:51, 26 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) Ozzel 07:08, 16 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) It'd be nice to see the redlinks die, but there's no rule against them. Green Tentacle (Talk) 12:15, 24 May 2008 (UTC)

Oppose

Comments
 * Do we not have any redlink requirements for GAs? --Eyrezer 20:56, 26 April 2008 (UTC)
 * I can't see them, if they're there.. Thefourdotelipsis 07:34, 28 April 2008 (UTC)

(+3)
Support
 * 1) To go with my FA, Tirog. &mdash;Silly Dan (talk) 03:13, 27 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) Pretty well written! Purplegethos 22:23, 14 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) Glad to get this one hatched out. :) Toprawa and Ralltiir 22:33, 14 May 2008 (UTC)

Oppose for two lines only. --Eyrezer 13:23, 10 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 1) Toprawa:
 * 2) * Please expand the introduction a little bit. It should be a paragraph of some kind
 * 3) ** I'll see what I can do. &mdash;Silly Dan (talk) 22:26, 6 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) *** Added a couple of sentences. If there's anything specific you think should be added, please let me know (or try adding it yourself.) &mdash;Silly Dan (talk) 23:26, 9 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) ****I would still prefer a little bit more, but it's ok.
 * 6) ***** Like I say, he's not a very complicated man. &mdash;Silly Dan (talk) 12:13, 10 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 7) * The "Skills and abilities" section really should be the "Personality and traits." Recommended that you rename it as such
 * 8) ** No, those are his skills (good pilot, good marksman) rather than personality traits (likes to fight...that's the only one he seems to have, which is why I didn't write one.) &mdash;Silly Dan (talk) 11:15, 6 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 9) *** Nevertheless, I added a P&T paragraph based on this one trait. &mdash;Silly Dan (talk) 23:26, 9 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 10) ****That's all it needs, really. ;) Toprawa and Ralltiir 03:46, 10 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 11) * This is kinda OR-ish. Does the source say this exactly? "and more generally knowledgeable than the average bounty hunter."
 * 12) ** It says he increased his "knowledge" attribute. &mdash;Silly Dan (talk) 11:15, 6 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 13) ***I'm not sure that necessarily means he's "smarter than the average bear." What if you said something like, "he grew wiser because of his experiences" or something?
 * 14) **** It's not that he "grew wiser", it's that all his academic-type skills went up a bit. Any increase in common sense or wisdom would have come through in personality changes over time.  Since he has little personality or chronological biography, we can't say that. &mdash;Silly Dan (talk) 12:13, 10 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 15) *****Well, I don't think that means he's smarter than the average bounty hunter. That would definitely be OR to assume that. I invite you to discuss this with me in IRC. Toprawa and Ralltiir 06:28, 12 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 16) ****** You're right, that would assume his starting Knowledge attribute represented general intelligence equal to or greater than the average bounty hunter. Game mechanically, it is, but treating that as objective fact is stretching it.  How about just "more generally knowledgeable than he was as a rookie"? &mdash;Silly Dan (talk) 00:53, 13 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 17) *******Perfect. Toprawa and Ralltiir 22:33, 14 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 18) * The last three sentences of the Equipment section gets kind of listy, just spewing facts. Try to "prosify" it a bit more
 * 19) ** Do you refer to the description of his arsenal or the speculative sentences which I removed? &mdash;Silly Dan (talk) 22:17, 6 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 20) ***This here. I feel like I'm literally reading his RPG stats out of the book: "Thannik wore a protective vest and a jetpack. Thannik carried about 1000 credits with him. In case of emergency, he also carried two medpacs."
 * 21) **** Made less listy. &mdash;Silly Dan (talk) 13:00, 10 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 22) *****Much better. Toprawa and Ralltiir 06:28, 12 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 23) * This is really heavy speculation and needs to be rewritten to more appropriately fit tone. If this cannot be done, this needs to be removed, or perhaps moved into a "speculation section" in the BTS: "Thannik's ship may have been Thannik's Thunder, a class 720 freighter which Thannik's associate Rhen is known to have flown. If Thannik's Thunder was the hunter's ship, Thannik may have been present when Rhen flew the freighter against pirates flying Z-95 Headhunters or against Imperial TIE fighters.  He may also have been on board when Thannik's Thunder was captured by the tractor beams of an Imperial I-class Star Destroyer."
 * 24) ** If his friend flies a ship named after him, which is of the same class as a ship he is known to have owned, I think the first sentence doesn't go beyond reasonable speculation. &mdash;Silly Dan (talk) 11:15, 6 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 25) ***If it can't be rewritten to avoid speculation and is otherwise "solid speculation," it should be put in the BTS somewhere, instead of speculating within the article. Anything you removed can still be salvaged and put in the BTS. Toprawa and Ralltiir 03:46, 10 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 26) **** I'm going to ask for a second opinion on this. I don't think it goes beyond an unacceptable level of speculation. &mdash;Silly Dan (talk) 12:13, 10 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 27) ***** Ok...? This isn't really a debate. We don't add speculation to articles. It's kind of our rule. As such, we've made it an accepted practice to add hypothetical things like this to the BTS so as not to ignore them entirely. Toprawa and Ralltiir 18:18, 10 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 28) ****** We put in speculation all the time, it's just that it's usually put in articles no one tries running by Inquisitors. (Here's a random article with speculation in the lead, but you can probably find others.) Though I can think of clear-cut cases where I'd allow very limited speculation, I am perhaps being too lenient here.  I'll move it to BtS unless someone tells me to move it back. &mdash;Silly Dan (talk) 19:02, 10 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 29) *******I've replaced the rest of that text that you removed. It's all perfect BTS material. Toprawa and Ralltiir 22:33, 14 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 30) * The BTS quote should be formatted to Quote format, not Dialogue, per our quote "policy"
 * 31) ** Please refresh my memory: I don't see that in the Manual of Style or the Layout Guide. &mdash;Silly Dan (talk) 22:17, 6 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 32) ***Supposedly we have one, per a conversation I've had in IRC. I can't find it at the moment, but you might ask Hydro. Toprawa and Ralltiir 03:46, 10 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 33) ****To weigh in on this, the CT is here. I've also added a link to it on the MOS page so future reference. There was still some debate over quotes for more than two people, but we seem to be settled on using the
 * 1) ***** OK. &mdash;Silly Dan (talk) 13:34, 10 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) * This doesn't read well. I'm not sure if this is even a sentence. Please rewrite: "These include from examples of group play," Toprawa and Ralltiir 04:31, 6 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) **It is a sentence, just one with an extraneous word (from). Easily fixed. &mdash;Silly Dan (talk) 11:04, 6 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Ok, I wasn't sure. :) Toprawa and Ralltiir 18:26, 9 May 2008 (UTC)

Comments
 * I know there's no "Personality" section. Unlike Tirog, there's not all that much "in-character" dialog for Thannik, so there's not all that much I could think of to say. &mdash;Silly Dan (talk) 03:13, 27 April 2008 (UTC)
 * Does not it need an infobox? Domlith 15:46, 29 April 2008 (UTC)
 * I tend not to add them when I can't fill out more than a handful of fields. Anyway, there's one now. &mdash;Silly Dan (talk) 22:09, 29 April 2008 (UTC)

(+3)
Support
 * 1) To go with my FA, Tirog. &mdash;Silly Dan (talk) 02:52, 29 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) --Eyrezer 03:16, 29 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) Good. Toprawa and Ralltiir 23:18, 9 May 2008 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) Toprawa
 * 2) * Please remove this speculation. The identical "blue sun" should be enough to let the reader come to his own assumption: "possibly the same marketplace GT-9R visited with Tirog."
 * 3) ** Done. &mdash;Silly Dan (talk) 21:26, 9 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) * I can't really cite policy on this one, but please consider changing the title of the "Personality & traits" section to "Characteristics" in light of this being a droid character. This is the direction our recent droid character FAs are going.
 * 5) ** If that's how we're writing droid character articles now, OK. I'm not sure why we should have a different layout for organic and non-organic characters, though. (Droid models should have a different layout from typical character articles, obviously.) &mdash;Silly Dan (talk) 21:26, 9 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 6) * You're kind of backpedaling on what you're saying here, which tells me you're unsure based on the evidence and may potentially be extrapolating. Please reword as appropriate: "GT-9R did not enjoy combat. Even if he did" Toprawa and Ralltiir 18:22, 9 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 7) ** No, I'm not, but I can see where you'd get that impression. The intention there was to say that even if he had enjoyed combat (which was not the case) he wasn't programmed to use weapons. Reworded  to "He would not have been a capable combatant anyway, since his programming did not allow him to use weapons." &mdash;Silly Dan (talk) 21:26, 9 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 8) ***Ah, yes. I misread it then. Good clarification. Toprawa and Ralltiir 23:18, 9 May 2008 (UTC)

Comments
 * This one has a P&T section, but no skills section (presumably he had standard protocol droid skills, but it's not specifically stated in either book.) &mdash;Silly Dan (talk) 02:52, 29 April 2008 (UTC)

(+3)
Support
 * 1) Havac 19:31, 4 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) Toprawa and Ralltiir 18:07, 9 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 3)  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  00:35, 16 May 2008 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) Toprawa:
 * 2) * I'm not sure if you're trying to leave the "suspense" in here, but please specify that they were kidnapped by Imp Intel, or whatever the case is. It makes the rest of the article clearer: "Around ten months after the Battle of Endor, Fyric was kidnapped from the estate."
 * 3) **It's not about suspense, really, so much as just not overloading on information all at once. Two paragraphs later, it says Ilir Post was the leader of the Intelligence-backed kidnappers. I could move some stuff around if you still don't like it, though. Havac 16:24, 9 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Not entirely important, but you might consider moving it. My own stupidity aside, I had to read through it twice before I really understood what happened Toprawa and Ralltiir 18:07, 9 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) ****I went ahead and tinkered with it. Havac 21:13, 9 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 6) * I realize the briefness of her involvement in anything, but please see if you can't expand the P&T by at least another sentence, if only for the sake of avoiding the one-sentence paragraph. Toprawa and Ralltiir 05:21, 9 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 7) **Expanded. Havac 16:24, 9 May 2008 (UTC)

Comments

(+3)
Support
 * 1) Havac 22:12, 4 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) Am I wrong to wish death upon all child characters? Toprawa and Ralltiir 07:25, 9 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) Ozzel 19:32, 9 May 2008 (UTC)

Oppose

Comments

(+4)
Support
 * 1) Thank the Maker, more ESB CCG characters! Toprawa and Ralltiir 03:29, 8 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) There is a bit of repetition between the bio and characteristics sections, but I'm not sure it can be fixed. -- Eyrezer 06:27, 10 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) Darth Xadún ( Consult the Holocron ) 08:29, 15 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) Nice job with the additional BtS info. Greyman  @wikiajanitor ( Talk ) 00:29, 18 May 2008 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) * I feel the words 'flamboyant' and 'moody' are repeated too often for the size of the article. I recommend replacing a few with suitably various words. Other than than, fine. Darth Xadún ( Consult the Holocron ) 12:10, 14 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) **I've reworded one of the "moody's." I've used these words as are because these are the terms canonically used to describe him. I'm hesitant to substitute a synonym that may not fully capture the true meanings of those two words. Also, "flamboyant" is only used twice, once in the bio, and once in the P&T. Traditionally, we accept some repetition between the two sections, although short articles like this have an unfortunate way of exposing this to a somewhat uncomfortable degree, as Eyrezer has noted above. Toprawa and Ralltiir 20:30, 14 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) *** Ok. I suppose it was a bit picky really. Darth Xadún ( Consult the Holocron ) 08:29, 15 May 2008 (UTC)

Comments
 * I seem to remember, though I might be confusing events, that somewhere (maybe Insider?) commented that the "Thank the Maker" tattoo was actually a mistake due to costum mix ups, or something. I could be remembering wrong, as it's been a long time since I've seen this character in anything, but I thought I'd point it out in case it does pan out to be true; if it is, it might be worth a mention in the BtS. Greyman  @wikiajanitor ( Talk ) 23:13, 16 May 2008 (UTC)
 * None of the sources in the article describe this, though it's certainly possible he appears in an Insider article with this. When I was working on the article, I seemed to remember something describing how they (obviously) did it as a joke, but couldn't find anything. I'll keep my eye out, of course. Toprawa and Ralltiir 23:23, 16 May 2008 (UTC)
 * So, in the process of looking for some SWCCG info for a project of mine, I came across something interesting, to say the least. In my collection, I came across this card, which is the exact same description, and from the same set, as this card of R-3PO. However, as one can see, the card that I found shows R-3PO in what appears as a white/light colour, as opposed to the dark colour portrayed in the other card. I honestly don't know if this was a mistake by the SWCCG, or what, to print two cards with the same descriptions, in the same set, but with different pictures, but I thought I'd make you aware of this, since it looks like some good BtS info :P Since I was cropping other SWCCG card pics for my use, I did this one too, in case you want to use it in the infobox or BtS → white R-3PO. Greyman  @wikiajanitor ( Talk ) 13:26, 17 May 2008 (UTC)

(+4)
Support
 * 1) I've done a good amount of work on this article. A lot of referencing. -- Joe Butler (Obi Maul12)   talk 04:43, 11 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) Inspected via AIM and all my quarrels have been taken care of. --Squishy Vic (discussion) (contributions) 05:13, 11 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) Sure, well sourced, good expansion Enochf 17:56, 11 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) Certified by the board of Ataru. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 03:27, 12 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) My objections have been satisfied. 03:28, 12 May 2008 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) Toprawa:
 * 2) * Kinda don't know where to start with this one, so I'll begin by saying let's not just vote on articles because we like the concept of the article itself.
 * 3) * That being said, this isn't even an article. It's a stub with sourcing.
 * 4) **Much better! Now we have an article on our hands. :) Toprawa and Ralltiir 06:32, 11 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) * The intro needs to be expanded.
 * 6) **--It's been expanded. -- Joe Butler (Obi Maul12)   talk
 * 7) * The first paragraph of the history section isn't sourced.
 * 8) **--Its sourced now. -- Joe Butler (Obi Maul12)   talk
 * 9) * There really shouldn't be any information restrictive to the infobox.
 * 10) **--I believe all info in the infobox is included within the article. (excluding eras, of course)
 * 11) * There's no section describing the droid model.
 * 12) ** --Created. -- Joe Butler (Obi Maul12)   talk
 * 13) * There's no BTS.
 * 14) **--Now there is. -- Joe Butler (Obi Maul12)   talk
 * 15) * Your source list doesn't appropriately match the Notes and references. Toprawa and Ralltiir 05:27, 11 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 16) **--I've fixed that. -- Joe Butler (Obi Maul12)   talk
 * 17) * The first section should be titled "Characteristics"
 * 18) **(Done.) -- Joe Butler (Obi Maul12)   talk
 * 19) * Now you don't have a "History" section
 * 20) **(Added.)-- Joe Butler (Obi Maul12)   talk
 * 21) * "Design flaws" should be a subsection of the new "Characteristics" section, not its own section
 * 22) **(Done.) -- Joe Butler (Obi Maul12)   talk
 * 23) * Introduction should not be sourced in this case. Intro should not have any info not also found in the article body.
 * 24) **(Fixed.)-- Joe Butler (Obi Maul12)   talk
 * 25) * I'm not sure why you sourced the non-canon appearances. Toprawa and Ralltiir 17:59, 12 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 26) **(All of your quarrels listed have been fixed.) -- Joe Butler (Obi Maul12)   talk
 * 27) *One of your appearances or sources needs to indicate when the droid was first identified as the "Q-series" droideka.

-- I'm not sure I know what you mean. In the article, the "Q-series" title for the droideka is first mentioned in the intro, where I can't source it. Are you asking which source first came out with the Q-series and dubbed it so? -- Joe Butler (Obi Maul12)   talk 00:47, 20 May 2008 (UTC)

--A tag is there. -- Joe Butler (Obi Maul12)   talk 11:04, 20 May 2008 (UTC)

Also, please format your responses as they appear above so as to not interfere with other users' comments. Toprawa and Ralltiir 23:48, 16 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 1) As Tope has said, this surely needs major expansion before GA ready. --Eyrezer 06:14, 11 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) There are appearances in the source list, and, puzzlingly, things repeated in both lists. Thefourdotelipsis 06:41, 11 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) *Is that bad? -- Joe Butler (Obi Maul12)   talk 06:47, 11 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) **Quite. I touched it up for you, though. Also, for future reference, sourcebooks, such as RPG materials and books like the Essential Guides and Visual Dictionaries go in the ==Source== field, and novels, comics, books, and video games go in the ==Appearances== field. 15:42, 11 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) From Jorrel Fraajic
 * 6) * Are you sure on some of those sources? If Ep. III was its first appearance, how did it appear in Ep. II? Also, I'm almost positive both Lego Star Wars entries aren't accurate; unless it states somewhere in the booklet or Prima guide that they are Q-series, they didn't "technically" make an appearance. I'm pretty sure this applies to many of your sources (FoC, being another one - if it does appear there, let me know).
 * 7) * A lot of this information seems to apply as a general overview of the Droideka, not specifically the Q-series. Correct me if I'm wrong.
 * 8) **Those are the two major ones I see. Sourcing-wise, it's very good. How accurate the sources are, however, could be a different matter. 15:42, 11 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 9) ***--The original model of the droideka was very similar to the Q-series droideka, that's why a lot of the info seems to be a general of overview of the droideka. Also, the Prima Official Guide for LEGO Star Wars: The Video Game and the guide for LEGO Star Wars: The Complete Saga both list the droideka model as Q-series. I forgot to source this, and will do it now. Thirdly, it was my mistake adding AotC in the appearances. Lastly, the Q-series droideka was the main droideka model manufactured after the Battle of Coruscant featured in RotS, the source being the novel I recently read, but I also forgot to source this; that's why most appearances are after the time of RotS. Thanks for notifying me. What is FoC, though? --  Joe Butler (Obi Maul12)   talk 16:11, 11 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 10) ****Alright, that's good. Now that things are source, it makes more sense. Had not known about the Prima guides, so good to that as well. Also, FoC = Empire at War: Forces of Corruption. 16:21, 11 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 11) *I'll remove that. Is there anything else? (I'm currently creating the article LEGO Star Wars: The Complete Saga: Prima Official Game Guide so I can source the game.) -- Joe Butler (Obi Maul12)   talk 16:30, 11 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 12) **I see nothing else. And good, with both the creation and removal. ;). 03:28, 12 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 13) From the desk of Atarumaster88
 * 14) * I didn't change this because I wasn't sure, but I'm used to seeing the Confederacy abbreviated as "CIS", not "C.I.S." If it's that way in the source, then keep it.
 * 15) * Need a bit more context on the Colicoids in the intro. Doesn't quite flow very well where the way it's currently structured.
 * 16) * If possible, detail what exactly was upgraded from W-series to Q-series.
 * 17) * From what I've played of Republic Commando, I don't recall them identifying the droidekas as Q-series specifically. Correct me if I'm wrong.
 * 18) **All information, such as the droideka dispenser bit, that's referenced from Republic Commando will need to be removed if the droids in question are not actually Q-series.
 * 19) * Present tense in the Design Flaws section is absolutely unacceptable.
 * 20) * Kindly check with other droid GAs to ensure that you're following precedent on organization/sectioning. I'm not sure, but I have a sneaky suspicion that it's not exactly in line.
 * 21) * "Additionally, there were limits when a droideka could fire at a target." Reword this sentence. I get what you're going for, but there has to be a better way to say it.
 * 22) * While this might not be a concern for GA, it'd be nice to have Galaxies information included in the article. (From Star Wars Galaxies: An Empire Divided)
 * 23) *Have a Super Terrific Friendly Un-frustrating day. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 19:30, 11 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 24) I hate to be Imp, but that second image is distorted as hell and just overall horrible. It needs to be reuploaded or ditched. Havac 02:33, 12 May 2008 (UTC)

Comments
 * I'll note that while a Behind the scenes (BTS) is often preferred in articles, a BTS is not required per the current GAN rules. It's fine to ask if one can be created using any available information, but it's not a requirement, per se. Greyman  @wikiajanitor ( Talk ) 05:34, 11 May 2008 (UTC)
 * A stub worth sourcing? I've seen shorter articles than this. -- Joe Butler Obi Maul12   talk 05:50, 11 May 2008 (UTC)
 * Do you remove your opposition, or what else needs to be done? -- Joe Butler Obi Maul12   talk 06:36, 11 May 2008 (UTC)
 * Obimaul, you should never touch or edit another person's comments on a page without his or her permission. I originally posted my comment above because that's where I wanted it to be seen. Please don't move it into the "Comments" section like you did. Also, my objections will not be "removed." You will know when they are no longer in effect when they are stricken, as the first two currently are. And, only I can strike my own objections. A nominator should never do that himself. Toprawa and Ralltiir 06:50, 11 May 2008 (UTC)
 * Alright, sorry. -- Joe Butler (Obi Maul12)   talk 12:47, 11 May 2008 (UTC)
 * Quick question to the GA faithfull: Are there guidelines on how sources are "implied" or not? 15:42, 11 May 2008 (UTC)

(+3)
Support
 * 1) Another short (300+ word) article nom --Eyrezer 06:14, 11 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) Toprawa and Ralltiir 05:19, 12 May 2008 (UTC)
 * Huh, I thought some mention might be made in the Last Command Sourcebook, but no dice. Greyman  @wikiajanitor ( Talk ) 14:44, 17 May 2008 (UTC)

Oppose Comments
 * 1) Toprawa:
 * 2) * If you could expand the intro at all to make it a short little paragraph, that would be ideal.
 * 3) **Done my best.
 * 4) * Can we elaborate on this at all, or otherwise clarify? I kind of understand, but am not entirely clear on what expansive gestures are: "their typically expansive gestures."
 * 5) **Added a tiny bit but we're not really given any info.
 * 6) * Please elaborate a bit on what the "controversy" was; doesn't have to be too in-depth: "during the controversy over the Caamas Document" Toprawa and Ralltiir 06:42, 11 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 7) ** We actually have an article on the Caamas Document Crisis: would it be a more appropriate link? &mdash;Silly Dan (talk) 16:09, 11 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 8) ***Gave some context and incorporated the crisis link. --Eyrezer 04:06, 12 May 2008 (UTC)
 * Just a note on these "expansive gestures." I came upon the same phrase in That's Entertainment: The Tale of Salacious Crumb last night. In reference to Crumb, the author writes, "'Go on!, go on!' the creature responded with an expansive gesture." I guess expansive gestures are a "thing," of which I am unfamiliar? Toprawa and Ralltiir 21:55, 12 May 2008 (UTC)
 * Lol, I presume it means waving your hands around a lot while you talk! :) --Eyrezer 03:04, 13 May 2008 (UTC)

(+2)
Support
 * 1) Aaaah. Thefourdotelipsis 06:35, 16 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) Toprawa and Ralltiir 20:14, 17 May 2008 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) Couple errors.
 * 2) * Misspellings E.G: "Kilometeres" "Backstory" should be Back-story or Back story.
 * 3) * Puncuation: E.G:, "What's the Story?." You have question mark and period.
 * 4) *Fix these and add a little bit more info and you have my support.-- —Purplegethos ( Talk ) 16:24, 16 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) *In the wake of this user's recent six-month block, in addition to the fact that these are neither misspellings (the one is so minor as to be negligible) nor punctuation errors, I've gone and ahead and struck these objections. Toprawa and Ralltiir 18:36, 16 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 6) Toprawa:
 * 7) * If the name of the speeder is the "DC0052 airspeeder," should the page not be under that name, rather than the colloquial "speeder"?
 * 8) **Its name is "DC0052 speeder," but its class is identified as "airspeeder."
 * 9) * I'm not sure what this means exactly. A top range, as in altitude? Time in the air? Can we specify this? "a range of two thousand kilometers"
 * 10) **Fixed.
 * 11) * First paragraph of the Characteristics section needs to be sourced
 * 12) **Sourced.
 * 13) * I kind of suspect the speeder makes some sort of appearance in the ROTS novelization, under some kind of generic title. Please check. Toprawa and Ralltiir 23:05, 16 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 14) **Yah, it's there, and added to the appearances list. Thefourdotelipsis 09:00, 17 May 2008 (UTC)

Comments

(-1)
Support
 * 1) Nice work quietly done... Fully sourced, truly compelling prose while the talk page is empty. Domlith 13:02, 19 May 2008 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) From the cleverly worded introduction of Jorrel Fraajic
 * 2) *No info from, or even reference to, cloaca (it's canon!)
 * 3) *Infobox needs to be fully sourced - you're only missing one, and it shouldn't be too hard to find.
 * 4) *Intro could definitely stand to be longer, by at least another three sentences.
 * 5) *For the different types of dewback, perhaps some bolding could accompany the italics, just so it's easier to spot them?
 * 6) *References need to be linked.
 * 7) *It might just be me, but it seems that there are a lot of untouched sources. Are some of the facts repeated in them, or are they not covered?
 * Looks pretty darn good, though. 15:46, 19 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 1) Toprawa:
 * 2) *Jorrel's got a pretty good base for you to start with here, but seriously, Domlith, you didn't do anything to this article. You found it like it was and nominated it. The article surely has a bit of a way to go.
 * 3) ** There's nothing inherently wrong with that, if he's willing to address whatever issues others come up with. We don't have a rule saying GA or FA nominations have to come from an editor who made major contributions to the article. &mdash;Silly Dan (talk) 21:50, 22 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Unfortunately, Dan, what's inherently wrong is the number of articles that get nominated because users don't take the time to either read the guidelines of what a Good article is or go and look at other articles to see what is "good." With all due respect to all parties involved, I have no reservations about saying this nomination is a joke. This might be a perfect example of what our Featured article page warns against: "this is not a page to nominate your favorite articles," which can just as easily be applied here. The fact that the nominator did little to no work on this whatsoever is enough to tell me that this article isn't ready. If you would like to further call me out about how I do my job, I would appreciate if you came and talked to me directly on my talk page or in IRC. Toprawa and Ralltiir 22:11, 22 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) *The intro needs to be 5x times what you've got there
 * 6) *The article is to be organized according to how species articles should be laid out. Please see the Manual of Style and click on the Layout Guide link
 * 7) *Really? There's no history section? Those appearance and source lists are pretty karking massive. The history section should be huge.
 * 8) *Your references aren't linked. Toprawa and Ralltiir 17:29, 19 May 2008 (UTC)

Comments

(+2)
Support
 * 1) Nominated ajeanette 20 May 2008
 * 2) Darth Xadún ( Consult the Holocron ) 19:27, 21 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) Goodwood  [[Image:Redstarbird.svg|20px]] ( Alliance Intelligence ) 04:05, 22 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) Drewton  [[Image:SWTFU_WP1_1280x1024.jpg|25px]] 02:15, 24 May 2008 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) Toprawa:
 * 2) *Not bad, but pretty rough around the edges. Here are the things I notice without even reading the article:
 * 3) * Intro should be expanded
 * 4) **I added a few more details about her background and the situation she encountered. ajeanette 22 May 2008
 * 5) * These one sentence sections are not good. They need to be either expanded or condensed into other sections. They look especially bad considering your one section is six paragraphs long. There's just no presentation feel to the article. Sectioning needs major work.
 * 6) * Your last section title is not exactly encyclopedic.
 * 7) * We don't capitalize "Galaxy" anymore.
 * 8) * Please don't put spaces in between punctuation and referencing. A minor issue, but a formatting issue nonetheless.
 * 9) * Your images should alternate from right to left down the sides of the page, which they do not.
 * 10) *If you handle these, there will be a more detailed Round 2. Toprawa and Ralltiir 04:46, 22 May 2008 (UTC)

Comments
 * I've fixed all of the spelling mistakes. Drewton  [[Image:SWTFU_WP1_1280x1024.jpg|25px]] 02:15, 24 May 2008 (UTC)

(+1)
Support
 * 1) Only because it's not one thousand words. —Tommy ( Clean face and hands ) The Anvil 23:07, 20 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) I see no reason to object to this.  Darth Xadún ( Consult the Holocron ) 12:00, 22 May 2008 (UTC)

Oppose

Comments

(+1)
Support
 * 1) Harrar 09:56, 21 May 2008 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) Toprawa:
 * 2) *Brief descriptor for the yammosks, please: "the two yammosks in his fleet"
 * 3) *Need context for clarification here, please. What are these, what are their purpose, etc.: "Forced to rely solely on blaze bugs"
 * 4) *I would really suggest going back through the Biography section and seeing what you can do to "dumb down" the context of everything. As someone who has never read any of these Yuuzhan Vong stories myself, I have trouble understanding exactly what's going on here. Parts of this are written presupposing that the reader knows what's going on already. Toprawa and Ralltiir 20:49, 22 May 2008 (UTC)

Comments
 * Not an objection, per se, but is it possible to maybe flush out that BtS a little bit? Even another sentence or two, maybe explaining his role in the "grand scheme" of the novel (for example), would make it a little bit more presentable. If not, I understand ;) Greyman  @wikia ( Talk ) 01:49, 24 May 2008 (UTC)

(+1)
Support Oppose Comments
 * 1) Harrar 15:17, 21 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 1) Would it be possible to get a quick mention in the P&T of where you say Lian is "willing to kill at a moment's notice"? Just a quick example, to add some body to that sentence. Greyman  @wikia ( Talk ) 02:20, 24 May 2008 (UTC)

(+1)
Support
 * 1) Think I got everything.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 11:50, 22 May 2008 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) Toprawa, Round 1:
 * 2) *Infobox not fully sourced
 * 3) **Stupid. Fixed.
 * 4) *Your intro is painfully short
 * 5) **Expanded.
 * 6) *Section titles should match the Layout Guide.
 * 7) **I tried to fix it. If it's still not right, could you explain how?
 * 8) *Please, oh please, do not link articles to wikipedia. Take the effort and make an article for the Wook. Toprawa and Ralltiir 16:57, 22 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 9) **We've done that for other articles. It's on a topic that I don't really know anything about (read the Wikipedia article and see if you can comprehend it) and I'm not sure how to make it simpler. I'll see if I can find an FA with Wikipedia links.
 * 10) ***It's been done with other articles because people are too lazy to make an article themselves. It's a poor practice that needs to stop. If you can't make an article for it, leave it as a red link. Toprawa and Ralltiir 20:10, 22 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 11) **** As the person who put that link in when expanding it from a stub, I'd like to point out three things: (1) At the time, we hadn't established that every real-world scientific concept which is almost exactly the same IU as in the real world needed an article, so I put a Wikipedia link in so the concept could be explained to readers who didn't understand the term; (2) I still don't think an article is necessary or even desirable for every such topic, but that's a debate for elsewhere (where most of you would probably disagree with me); (3) although the Gotal/H'nemthe situation clearly is convergent evolution, I don't know if the sources actually use those words. &mdash;Silly Dan (talk) 21:44, 22 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 12) *****If these terms are not canonically used, then I think it would be best to avoid them. If so, then an explanation of the real-world equivalent in the BTS would be appropriate, where then the wiki links can be used as an OOU substitute. IU linking to OOU concepts, however, doesn't fit well. Toprawa and Ralltiir 21:57, 22 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 13) ****** It's a minor enough detail of terminology that removing the words and the link is OK, as far as I'm concerned. Explaining convergent evolution in the BTS would strike me as a bit superfluous. &mdash;Silly Dan (talk) 22:51, 22 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 14) *I removed it, on the basis that it's OR, as those terms are not actually used.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 19:40, 23 May 2008 (UTC)

Comments If I might suggest some quotes (all of them from Nightlily: The Lovers' Tale): -Skippy Farlstendoiro 15:33, 23 May 2008 (UTC)
 * No quotes available? --Eyrezer 03:29, 23 May 2008 (UTC)
 * -"Are you truly sure, beloved? Mating is such a solemn thing, such an awe-inspiring thing..." (M'iiyoom Onith, reflecting on the importance of mating)
 * -"Nightlily, you mean... Everything. Everything to me". "Oh... Oh... Oh, Trevagg. That we should have met like this-that you should come into my life like this.." (Feltipern Trevagg and M'iiyoom Onith, talking about two different things)
 * "The word for 'love' in one language is the word for 'dinner' in others." (Ithorian proverb)
 * "After mating, H'nemthe females gut the males with those tongues of theirs-they're as sharp as sword blades, and a lot stronger than they look. Some kind of biological reaction to there being twenty H'nemthe males for every female. The males seem to think it's worth it, to achieve the act of love. I saw them together in the can-Una, but I didn't think Trevagg was crazy enough to try to bed the girl." (Wuher) "He was always bragging about being such a great hunter. You'd have thought he'd sense it coming." (Balu) "How could he? For her, it was the act of love, too." (Wuher again; possibly only the two last lines for this quote)
 * Thank you. These look good.