Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Mission to Vassek's third moon


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Mission to Vassek's third moon

 * Nominated by:  CC7567  (talk) 08:03, 8 July 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Conclusion of Capture of the Wealthworm, but the article's awkwardly long name is attributed to the pursuit for "factual correctness".

(5 Inqs/2 Users/7 Total)
Support
 * 1) Good work.--Kreivi Wolter 18:58, 15 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) Jedi Kasra (talk) 22:40, September 16, 2009 (UTC)
 * 3)  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  21:57, December 16, 2009 (UTC)
 * 4)  IFYLOFD  ( You will pay the price for your lack of vision! ) 03:23, December 20, 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) Nice work.  Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 22:15, December 22, 2009 (UTC)
 * 6) --Eyrezer 01:15, December 27, 2009 (UTC)
 * 7) -- Darth Culator  (Talk) 05:47, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) When is Nahdar refered to as a general?  Darth Trayus  Sith_Emblem.svg ( Trayus Academy ) 22:06, 14 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) *Ugh, this debate again. I'll just remove it to stop assuming.  CC7567  (talk) 23:54, 14 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) **Not really a matter of debate. More a matter of accuracy, as he has never been referred to as such, and not every Knight and master became a general. Darth Trayus  Sith_Emblem.svg ( Trayus Academy ) 21:00, 16 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) Apparently, Path of the Jedi depicts another version of the mission, which involves Skywalker, Tano or Yoda being sent to Vassek to assisst Fisto. While obviously non-canon since it contradicts the episode, you may want to add the game's storyline to the Bts.  QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 13:45, 7 August 2009 (UTC)
 * Eh, didn't like that game, but addressed.  CC7567  (talk) 21:20, 7 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) One minor objection: It isn't very clear what the "deception" is, because it's not very clear that the Jedi were unaware that Gunray was there only via hologram. "&hellip;the Jedi and clones overheard a hologram of Gunray giving orders to a squad of B1 battle droids from behind a high-backed chair. Unaware of Gunray's deception, Fisto and Vebb led the attack on the droids, and were able to eliminate their opponents."  Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 16:22, December 22, 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) *Addressed; thanks for the review. :)  CC7567  (talk) 22:13, December 22, 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) Eyrezer: Just one point: In the Aftermath section you mention Vebb's "hate-driven" actions, yet it the sections above give little indication of this hate. Can you harmonise the two parts, giving some more context on why Vebb was "hate-driven"? Apart from this, very nice. --Eyrezer 00:19, December 27, 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) *Adjusted. Thanks for the review.  CC7567  (talk) 00:54, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

Comments
 * Couldn't the article's title be changed to something like "Mission to Vassek's third moon", or something?--Jedi Kasra (talk) 17:20, September 10, 2009 (UTC)
 * It could, yes.  CC7567  (talk) 17:22, September 10, 2009 (UTC)
 * I guess I'll bring up the issue on the article's talk page.--Jedi Kasra (talk) 21:56, September 16, 2009 (UTC)
 * If it honestly matters that much to you, then I'll change it, but changing the article's name is not worth a poll.  CC7567  (talk) 22:12, September 16, 2009 (UTC)
 * To clear up whether Nahdar was a Jedi General or not... the Episode Guide states "...He spots a Republic attack shuttle parked nearby, and the goggle-eyed Mon Calamari Jedi Knight, Nahdar Vebb is conferring with his clone troops." Vebb was conferring with his clone troops. If he wasn't a general, they wouldn't be his clone troopers. -  JMAS  Jolly Trooper.png Hey, it's me! 14:14, December 15, 2009 (UTC)
 * He could be a commander or lieutenant for all we know. The point? We just don't know.  CC7567  (talk) 21:36, December 15, 2009 (UTC)
 * I thought the rule was that if a Jedi had any rank at all in the GAR, padawans were commanders and knights and masters were generals? -LtNOWIS 23:43, December 15, 2009 (UTC)
 * That is what I thought as well. -  JMAS  Jolly Trooper.png Hey, it's me! 23:46, December 15, 2009 (UTC)
 * Yes, that's the "rule," but it still has to be confirmed to exist in every case. We're still assuming that Vebb is a Jedi General, hence my point still stands.  CC7567  (talk) 23:55, December 15, 2009 (UTC)