Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Zeison Sha


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 * 1) Nominated. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 18:20, 13 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) It looks great. --Jedimca0(Do or Do Not, There is No Try) 09:44, 14 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) Graestan  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( This party's over ) 15:35, 15 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) -- [[Image:AckbarSig.jpg|40px]] dmirableAckbar  ( It's A Trap! ) 23:53, 15 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 5) --Goodwood 12:35, 16 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 6) Greyman ( Paratus ) 03:17, 18 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 7) Hobbes15 ( Tiger Headquarters ) 04:48, 18 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 1) Could use a general prose cleanup. Paragraphs are too small-many of them only one or two sentences long. Try not to use the Order's name too much (like, not in every other sentance?).--Goodwood 01:24, 14 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) *Addressed. I had browser issues when writing this, so apologies. And I avoided using "the Order" because the source material does not refer to them as such. The remaining paragraphs are set up to distinguish between minor topics. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 02:36, 14 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) **Formatting looks much better. It could still use a few creative substitutions for the name; for instance, using "members of this tradition would" instead of "the Zeison Sha would".--Goodwood 02:50, 14 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Three or four "Zeison Shas" replaced. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 03:36, 14 August 2007 (UTC)
 * Perhaps EGttF will provide the material I need to get this to FA. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 18:20, 13 August 2007 (UTC)
 * On the other hand, it is well-sourced.--Goodwood 01:24, 14 August 2007 (UTC)