Wookieepedia:Re-featured article nominations/Teek

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Teek

 * Originally nominated by:
 * Last featured on: October 22, 2007
 * Changes since last review: diff
 * Date placed on this page: June 19, 2011

(3 Inqs/1 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1) Phew. Menkooroo 12:19, July 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Sorry; wish I had edited it as fast as Teek deserved. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 12:32, September 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) --Eyrezer 10:49, September 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4)  1358  (Talk)  05:36, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Object Comments
 * 1) Bob
 * 2) * Should there be so much background on the Teek species in an article about the individual? We don't do that for other character articles, so I'd say it needs a bit of toning down at the start of the bio.
 * 3) **There's one. I'll get to the rest over the next few days. Menkooroo 14:29, August 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) *The play-by-play in the bio also needs toning down, especially once Noa comes into the picture.
 * 5) **Toned it down a bunch. Feel free to tighten up anything else you think needs done.
 * 6) *** It's still a bit too much, I think. Is it pertinent that Noa let Cindel sleep in his bed, for instance? I will take a closer look when I get a free second. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 21:58, August 31, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) * We need a source for the ID of Charal as a Nightsister. I think The Illustrated Star Wars Universe is the appropriate source, though CSWE might work too.
 * 8) **Done.
 * 9) * The 3 ABY date needs a source. I know about comments from Chee about the Ewoks cartoon, but does anyone know of anything for the live-action TV movies?
 * 10) **I'm not sure if Leland ever has. I think it was probably extrapolation based on the cartoon dates. Wicket's Databank entry states that they're before ROTJ, so I've changed it to "prior to 4 ABY." That might be the best we can do.
 * 11) * "he used flames" -- Where did Teek get the flames?
 * 12) **Got it! Thanks Youtube.
 * 13) * Some POV problems in "Personality and traits".
 * 14) **Should be good now. Menkooroo 01:03, August 29, 2011 (UTC)
 * 15) * As the Star Tours stuff is canon (isn't it?), that bit needs to be moved somewhere into the Bio.
 * 16) **Done!
 * 17) * Also, some note of the adaptations should probably be added to BTS. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 14:46, August 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * 18) **Look good? Menkooroo 14:56, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Vote to remove nomination (Inq only)

 * Bob's objections have been untouched for over three weeks. 1358  (Talk)  09:40, August 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) *If you'll give me a few days, I'd like to try to tackle these. Sorry for the lateness. Menkooroo 14:24, August 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) **OK, I think I got 'em all. Menkooroo 15:12, August 30, 2011 (UTC)