Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Daroe


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Daroe

 * Nominated by: Hanzo Hasashi 19:25, April 28, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Another obscure card game-created Jawa.

(2 ECs/2 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1) Jawas are awesome. Pentastar patrol.svg  501st  dogma ( talk ) 00:06, May 1, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  18:45, May 1, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 15:43, May 2, 2012 (UTC)
 * 4) Already looked it over. Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 16:58, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) You need to clearly mention that he was a male in the introduction and in the body of the article. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  01:43, May 1, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) * Sorry, you just need to include it in the intro, since there is no biography section. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  01:45, May 1, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) **Addressed. However, I have seen quality articles that never mention the species or gender period, or just mention one without the other, in both intro and bio. Hanzo Hasashi 17:12, May 1, 2012 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Hmmm, well I believe that those articles should mention it as well, since everything in the infobox needs to be in the body of the article.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  18:45, May 1, 2012 (UTC)
 * 5) Savaged…
 * 6) * The first sentence is a bit confusing; it makes it sound like he only hailed from Tatooine during the GCW but later hailed from somewhere else. Can you rephrase? ~ Savage BOB sig.png 14:44, May 2, 2012 (UTC)
 * 7) **Hope my edit is what you were looking for. Hanzo Hasashi 15:32, May 2, 2012 (UTC)
 * 8) ***Perfect. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 15:43, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

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