Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Nix


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Nix

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 16:39, August 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Different Nix than my other CAnom.

(2 ECs/0 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  19:25, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2)  Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 22:01, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * Just a quick question: Was it not confirmed that he was killed by Terror Troopers? -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  13:28, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Yup. Fixed. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:32, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) * See my objection on the captain's nom. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  15:59, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) **Phew, I think I got them all. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 19:08, August 17, 2011 (UTC)


 * 1) Cav
 * 2) * The final two sentences in the bio need to be rewritten to explain exactly what happened in the correct order. The fact that a terror trooper killed him should be stated, then the fact that he was discovered outside an airlock and his death was thought to be an accident. - Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 08:41, October 26, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Fixed.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 13:21, October 26, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) * Just noticed that you don't actually mention that Nix went aboard the transport at all. That should be mentioned before his death to establish the context. - Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 09:19, October 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) **Fixed.
 * 6) * Also, who speculated that the death was an accident? The Captain? if so, it should be stated and linked to the appropriate article. - Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 09:30, October 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) **Added.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:45, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

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