Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Kause


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Kause

 * Nominated by: Cavalier One ( Squadron channel ) 17:10, 22 August 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination Comments: On a DarkStryder roll ... - Cavalier One ( Squadron channel ) 17:10, 22 August 2008 (UTC)

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Support
 * 1) A few minor fixes made, but overall a nice little article :) Pixelle ( Talk! ) 16:24, 24 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) - Kingpin13Cantina Battle Ground 11:47, 28 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) Toprawa and Ralltiir 20:48, 30 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 4)  Aqua  Unasi  00:27, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) —Xwing328 (Talk) 00:28, 11 September 2008 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) Kingpin:
 * 2) * Just a couple of things, firstly, can you make it a bit more Kause's story, rather than the council's? If not then could you just add "Kause and the council" in place of "the council".
 * 3) **Added in several cases.
 * 4) * And secondly, in the personality and traits section, could you change the wording slightly, so that instead of saying why he did certain things, you say that he had such and such personality, if that's not possible then that's fine.
 * 5) **Ah, the bane of documenting RPG characters! Unfortunately, Kause is given no specific personality traits since he is a minor NPC in the adventure. At lot of the information in the P&T only works in context.
 * 6) * A couple more things I've noticed since then: Does this person have a known surname?
 * 7) **No - Kause is the only name given for him, and since he is identified as Councilor Kause, I assume it is his surname.
 * 8) * And I presumed last time that there wasn't any images of him, just thought I should check that. If he doesn't have images of him please try and add images of related things.
 * 9) **No images of him at all, and the only image in the entire adventure is this one which I don't really think adds to the article since it is not related to Kause specifically.
 * 10) *Great article and I don't really see this as an objection, rather some things that could possibly be improved, if not then I'll still support this whole-heartedly - Kingpin13Cantina Battle Ground 11:47, 23 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 11) **Thanks for the review. - Cavalier One ( Squadron channel ) 08:11, 28 August 2008 (UTC)

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