Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Mosep Binneed


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Mosep Binneed

 * Nominated by: -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 19:44, 4 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

(5 Inqs/0 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Graestan ( Talk ) 18:27, 9 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) Nice, extensive BTS. Cull Tremayne 08:18, 17 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) The referencing is a little distracting, though. Surely waiting until a punctuation mark wouldn't hurt? :P Thefourdotelipsis 10:11, 22 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 4)  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  12:44, 23 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) --  Darth Culator  (Talk) 01:42, 29 November 2008 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) The last sentence of the intro and the last paragraph of the bio seems a bit disjointed, like you were trying to do a "fate is unknown" closing without actually saying that. Would it be possible to rework that a bit and make it seem like it's more relevant to Mosep himself? --  Darth Culator  (Talk) 00:59, 25 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) *Removed it from the intro and tied in Mosep to the bio bit however I could. Good enough? -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 17:07, 27 November 2008 (UTC)

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