Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Sonic Screwdriver


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Sonic Screwdriver

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 21:16, July 21, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

(2 ECs/2 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1) Looks good to go to me. It's got all the info it's likely ever to have and reads really well, giving the reader a good slant on the subject. OtterSurf (talk) 21:55, July 21, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) Sonic the Screwdriver 501st  dogma ( talk ) 11:29, July 22, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  16:49, July 24, 2012 (UTC)
 * 4) Menkooroo (talk) 21:03, July 29, 2012 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) How bou' use Allston's twitter tweet as the BTS quote why not? Menkooroo (talk) 21:29, July 21, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) *I had thought about it and figured it would seem out of context, but, looking again, I don't think it's so bad now. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 21:47, July 21, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) One thing. The info box says "Found on: Across the galaxy". Is there anything you can do to make it fit better?  501st  dogma ( talk ) 22:14, July 21, 2012 (UTC)
 * 4) *Not that I can see. I'm not writing it as "the galactic disc." Really, it's not "on" that either. It's in it. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 23:15, July 21, 2012 (UTC)
 * 5) Exiled Jedi
 * 6) * Since the article's subject is from a Fate of the Jedi novel I assume that it is from the Legacy era, but in the article you show in the era tags and infobox that it happened in the Rise of the Empire era. In any event, I think you should mention the timeframe in the body of the article. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  17:25, July 23, 2012 (UTC)
 * 7) **Wups. An artifact from when it was merged with the Servodriver. Fixed. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 19:06, July 23, 2012 (UTC)
 * 8) One more: The body calls the droid a service droid but the quote attribution has it as a protocol droid. Menkooroo (talk) 13:24, July 29, 2012 (UTC)
 * 9) *Fixed. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 20:42, July 29, 2012 (UTC)

Comments
 * By the way, WP:LE. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 05:20, July 23, 2012 (UTC)