Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Unidentified hyperspace scout 2


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Unidentified hyperspace scout 2

 * Nominated by: -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 19:00, November 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:We ought to get Daniel Wallace to review this one.

(2 ECs/1 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 20:01, November 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 23:22, November 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Menkooroo 13:02, November 16, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) You have to source that that's Daniel Wallace to something. A comparison between that picture and one of Wallace would work, if there's never been a statement on it before. Same for Fry.  NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 19:31, November 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *Is that what you were looking for?-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 20:54, November 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Good, but I meant a textural source. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 22:31, November 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Sorry, let me clarify that again. I mean a textural citation. It needs a ref tag. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 16:01, November 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) ****Ref added. Thanks for the review.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 18:39, November 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) *****It read a bit choppy to me, so I reworded it. Nice work. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 20:01, November 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) Even more interesting than Guybrush! I don't think a single image is enough to say "on occasion" or "sometimes," though. "On one occasion" would be more appropriate. You could also slightly detail that occasion --- mention that they studied a holographic map. Might also be worth translating the aurebesh in the picture and mentioning just what on the map they were studying. Menkooroo 12:08, November 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) *Not sure that this is better that Guybrush, I got a GA out of him. :P But I think I took care of this.
 * 9) Also, isn't there a caption to the image identifying them as Hyperspace Scouts? If so, that'd count as a mention rather than just a . Menkooroo 11:33, November 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) *Got it.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:52, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Comments
 * 1) The Blaster department in Star Wars Insider 111 features the image of the two scouts. It explicitly names them hyperspace scouts and confirms that the two are based on a photo of Fry and Wallace taken at 2008's San Diego Comic-Con, which was the first time they met in person. QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 11:22, November 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *Cool. Thanks, Jinn.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:52, November 8, 2011 (UTC)