Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Abrion Major


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Abrion Major

 * Nominated by: Winterz (talk) 23:43, October 5, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

(1 ECs/2 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) Nice work on all these noms.  501st  dogma ( talk ) 12:41, October 8, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) You should nom the senator of this planet for the barn burner.  Commander Code-8  To say hi, press 42 06:55, November 28, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) Supreme Emperor (talk) 02:43, December 19, 2012 (UTC)

Object
 * 501
 * 1) * Same reffing problems as before.
 * 2) * You should mention that it seceded to the CIS.
 * 3) * Humans as the immigrated species needs to be mentioned in the main body.
 * 4) *Good work. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 12:20, October 7, 2012 (UTC)
 * 5) **Done. I decided to remove the immigrated species and language from the Infobox as I couldn't find any source that confirmed it. Winterz (talk) 15:48, October 7, 2012 (UTC)
 * 6) CC-8
 * 7) * You might not consider this important, but I think at some point in the body you should refer to the Seps as the Confederacy of Independant Systems, since they're called that in the infobox and if a user who knew nothing about Star Wars saw that they could get confused. That's all.  Commander Code-8  To say hi, press 42 09:58, November 27, 2012 (UTC)
 * 8) **I consider all objections important ;), corrected. Winterz (talk) 18:56, November 27, 2012 (UTC)
 * 9) Exiled Jedi
 * 10) * Can any more information be gleaned from the Atlas maps? -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  18:31, December 12, 2012 (UTC)
 * 11) **Done. Winterz (talk) 05:11, December 16, 2012 (UTC)
 * 12) ***Can you present the information in chronological order? It makes it easier to follow.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  23:57, December 16, 2012 (UTC)
 * 13) ****Done. Winterz (talk) 02:16, December 20, 2012 (UTC)
 * 14) *My apologies, but this article is over 200 words and needs to be sectioned. You will probably need to take it to the GAN page.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  05:22, December 21, 2012 (UTC)
 * 15) **Okay, could you please archive it? Just one question, is a Description section required in this case? Thanks in advance. Winterz (talk) 19:57, December 21, 2012 (UTC)

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