Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Four-Twenty


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Four-Twenty

 * Nominated by: Supreme Emperor (talk) 18:36, March 26, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Another novels one, basically identical to Four-Eighteen

(5 ECs/0 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 00:18, March 29, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 02:32, March 29, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) &mdash; 03:34, March 29, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) Why do these articles have so much maths.  Commander Code-8  G'day, mate 08:32, April 5, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) Winterz (talk) 01:25, April 7, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) 501st
 * 2) * Its sort of frowned upon when you use the same text in multiple articles. I suggest changing it. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 22:29, March 26, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) **Fair enough, i'll reword it tonight. Supreme Emperor (talk) 22:32, March 26, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) ***How does it look now? Supreme Emperor (talk) 22:45, March 26, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) ****A bit more would be nice. Just use synoyms, and flop around your sentences. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 00:07, March 27, 2013 (UTC)
 * 6) *****Flipped the sentences around a bit more and did some rewording, how does it look now? Supreme Emperor (talk) 01:19, March 27, 2013 (UTC)
 * 7) * Take into consideration my objections for this guy's twin here too. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 22:52, March 27, 2013 (UTC)
 * 8) **Think i've got them fixed now, have I missed any?
 * 9) Hanzo
 * 10) * This is probably a sofixit, but get rid of any mention of the trooper being male (I notice the end of the bio) when the gender is unidentified. Something to keep in mind for the future, and a mistake that's way too common. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 23:12, March 27, 2013 (UTC)
 * 11) **Oops, good eye :P Supreme Emperor (talk) 01:05, March 28, 2013 (UTC)


 * 1) Winterz
 * 2) * Same objections as in the Four-Eighteen's nom. Winterz (talk) 16:53, March 31, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) **Consider it done. Supreme Emperor (talk) 20:14, April 2, 2013 (UTC)

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