Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Jeseej


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Jeseej

 * Nominated by:  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 21:05, April 25, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Done on a whim.

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
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 * 1)  Jonjedigrandmaster  Jedi symbol.svg ( We seed the stars ) 20:22, April 26, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Toprawa and Ralltiir 21:31, April 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3)  CC7567  (talk) 20:47, May 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4)  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 19:32, May 2, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) Nice.  JangFett  (Talk) 22:17, May 3, 2010 (UTC)
 * 1) Perhaps a stub for his Toydarian host? Otherwise, nice work.  Jonjedigrandmaster  Jedi symbol.svg ( We seed the stars ) 22:57, April 25, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) *There's so little info given on this character; IIRC, sex is unspecified, and it's not even clear if the host is always the same Toydarian.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 20:20, April 26, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) Farlstendoiro and the tentacled table-like tradesbeing
 * 4) * Please correct the redlink, as there's an article on ID card.
 * 5) **Handled; hope you don't mind, Chack. -- 1358  (Talk) 15:21, April 26, 2010 (UTC)
 * 6) ***Thanks.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 20:20, April 26, 2010 (UTC)
 * 7) * When you say he predicts "his clients' futures", do you mean that a single client might have several futures and Jeseej tells him about all his futures? It is anyway ambiguous; I'd suggest you to change it to say that each client (singular) knows his or her future/s.
 * 8) **I've changed it a bit to reflect the source and avoid confusion.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 20:20, April 26, 2010 (UTC)
 * 9) * Underlinking: At the very least, official.
 * 10) **Official is not an article. Is there anything else missing a link?  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 20:20, April 26, 2010 (UTC)
 * 11) * "had skill in both machines and organic biology". What does this mean? Please, reword.
 * 12) **Tried to reword a bit. The source presents no details beyond what I've included, so keep that mind.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 20:20, April 26, 2010 (UTC)
 * 13) *I've just seen this link as a source for the Sljee, please check it:
 * 14) *Skippy Farlstendoiro 07:19, April 26, 2010 (UTC)
 * 15) **Nothing new, but it's been added to sources.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 00:35, April 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * 16) Toprawa:
 * 17) * Does the source literally call him a "forgerer?" Because that's not a word. The word is "forger."
 * 18) * Please at least leave a redlink for this individual: "a client had to give the correct password to Jessej's Toydarian host"
 * 19) * Kindly also fill in the redlink for fortune teller, as its in the intro. There are other instances of fortune-telling throughout canon, so this is a good topic to make an article for.
 * 20) * I see a good deal of information from the Wizards article not mentioned within this article. Specifically:
 * 21) ** Jeseej is easily mistaken for a bizarre animal or some form of motile plant.
 * 22) ** moving on a set of squat, stumpy legs
 * 23) ** The fact that he has owned the restaurant for years.
 * 24) ** The restaurant is a Toydarian restaurant and lounge.
 * 25) ** His employees include a dozen Toydarian restaurant workers
 * 26) ** Even though the article explains his clients find his premonitions to be trustworthy, the Wizards article explains that his clients found Jeseej to have an uncanny prescience concerning future events. I feel this has a little more specific meaning than simply "trustworthy," and I'd like to see this worked into the article someplace, preferably the P/T.
 * 27) * Your BTS is also partially incorrect, as far as I can see. The Wizards article was published on January 2, 2003, and Coruscant and the Core Worlds was published/released on January 3, 2003. It may be true that he was created for that sourcebook, but you should also mention that he apparently first appeared with biographical information in canon in this Wizards article.
 * 28) * The chronological order of the Source list should also reflect this dating.
 * 29) * Also, not an objection, but as you will see I have made some minor wording tweaks to reflect the descriptions of the Wizards article. You may need to check all of the information is still correctly sourced. My apologies if this causes any difficulty. Toprawa and Ralltiir 03:43, April 28, 2010 (UTC)

Comments


 * Wow, I can't believe I missed some of the stuff I did. Thanks for catching it, guys.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 20:20, April 26, 2010 (UTC)