Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Arena Theme

Arena Theme

 * Nominated by: MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg(Whatever) 22:06, November 12, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: This party's over.

Xd1358

 * Some links to redirects; these are frowned upon.
 * Wow, I can't believe I missed so many. MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg(Whatever) 18:22, November 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * All links to Petranaki Airea remain. 1358  (Talk) 18:25, November 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * Sorry about that. Didn't realize the article was lowercase. MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg(Whatever) 18:36, November 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * References go after punctuation (infobox).
 * Fixed. MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg(Whatever) 18:22, November 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * Split up the summary paragraph. Even in Monobook, it's huge, and I don't want to see it in Oasis. ^.^
 * I thought about that, but idk how to do that. There's not really a way that I can think of. MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg(Whatever) 18:22, November 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * Well, you gotta do something, since that paragraph is just way too big. 1358  (Talk) 18:25, November 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * I separated it into the different scenes where the parts of the theme are played. Does that work? MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg(Whatever) 18:36, November 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * Three subsections is too much, IMHO. Two would be sufficient. 1358  (Talk)  13:14, November 21, 2010 (UTC)
 * Down to two. MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg(Whatever) 07:12, November 22, 2010 (UTC)
 * In the EU: Why not write Expanded universe instead of abbreviating it?
 * Spelled out. MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg(Whatever) 18:22, November 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * The capitalization of the two last headers is incorrect.
 * Fixed. MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg(Whatever) 18:22, November 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * Can you make the second external link a bit neater?
 * Better?
 * Per GA rule 8, no redlinks are allowed in templates.
 * I'll create the article. MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg(Whatever) 18:22, November 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * 1358 (Talk) 18:10, November 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * No parenthesis in the prose.
 * Fixed. MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg(Whatever) 07:12, November 22, 2010 (UTC)
 * Please use cite web for ref 2. 1358  (Talk)  13:14, November 21, 2010 (UTC)
 * Umm...I'm not familiar with this template. How should I use this for Amazon.com? MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg(Whatever) 07:12, November 22, 2010 (UTC)
 * . 1358  (Talk)  19:43, November 26, 2010 (UTC)

Dark Lords are fond of the arts too

 * "The theme starts off with a percussion, string, and woodwind part that sounds as if it's slightly random." Slightly random to whom? If that can't be sourced then it is POV.
 * I thought it might be. I couldn't think of a better word. Any ideas? MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg(Whatever) 19:48, November 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * "The rest of the low brass then come in and repeat the melody in a slightly different key." Do we know what key?
 * I'll listen and see if I can find out, though it could technically be any key, as long as the appropriate accidentals are used. MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg<sup style="color:green">(Whatever) 19:48, November 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * "The melody is then played again by the low brass with the trumpets playing a countermelody, which at first consists mainly of one note." same as above. Do we know what note?
 * Again, I'll listen to it. MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg<sup style="color:green">(Whatever) 19:48, November 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * "After this run-through, the theme goes into a complicated set of notes, which sound a little random&hellip;" Again, random to whom? If it can't be sourced it is POV.
 * Addressed above. MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg<sup style="color:green">(Whatever) 19:48, November 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * Is it possible to add sound clips to the article like quotes or something? I think that would give the article reader a better idea of what you are trying to convey through writing if there was some sort of audio to accompany the text.
 * There's one in the infobox. I didn't feel we needed to have the entire theme uploaded in separate clips. I could do that if you feel it's necessary. MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg<sup style="color:green">(Whatever) 19:48, November 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * "Then follow the strings play the last mentioned fast part." I feel like something is missing from this sentence.
 * "It is also used in one of the film's main menus." If you mean menus on the DVD, you'll need to say that outright.
 * Fixed. MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg<sup style="color:green">(Whatever) 19:48, November 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * Any particular reason why the info box says "General Grievous' Theme appears in the Revenge of the Sith soundtrack" under the image?
 * Wow, I copied and pasted it. Must've forgot to change that. :P MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg<sup style="color:green">(Whatever) 19:48, November 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * No BtS?
 * I was told that a Bts was not necessary due to the fact that that's covered in the "Conception and development" section. Not to mention the article is OOU, which makes the whole thing pretty much a Bts. MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg<sup style="color:green">(Whatever) 19:48, November 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * That's all. —Tommy 9281 12:52, November 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review!! MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg<sup style="color:green">(Whatever) 19:48, November 27, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

 * Just noting here that Star Wars Galaxies uses a portion of this piece as combat music.  OLIOSTER  (talk) 12:52, November 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * I have no access to any Galaxies stuff. Do you think you could add it and source it.? MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg<sup style="color:green">(Whatever) 19:52, November 27, 2010 (UTC)