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Dark Forces Project
Regarding your Dark Forces Project, I have all of the audio dramatizations, so if you need any audio files for articles as you're working on them, don't hesitate to ask. -  JMAS  Hey, it's me! 19:23, 31 August 2009 (UTC)

Waxer
I see you're working on Waxer. I'm working on the sound files for the quotes, but thought I should point out the quote for the Meeting Numa section is incorrect. It should read, "We should do something. I say we take her with us." -  JMAS  Hey, it's me! 00:58, September 9, 2009 (UTC)

Re:Grievous attacks
Yes he is, although he is only shown firing at Grievous as it appears in the episode.  JangFett  Talk 18:51, September 16, 2009 (UTC)

Sinker
Sinker does appear in the Service of the Republic 3. I orginally wanted to take him, but I have no access to the comic. Would you possible take him over ? Or we can co-work on him. -- Clone Commander Lee  Talk 20:06, September 17, 2009 (UTC)
 * Thanks that would be the best. Does Boost appear ? -- Clone Commander Lee  Talk 11:52, September 18, 2009 (UTC)
 * Feel free to add the info to Boost and Sinker whenever you like. -- Clone Commander Lee  Talk 19:10, September 20, 2009 (UTC)

Re:Ryloth
I actually just bought that from Amazon yesterday. :) But in the meantime, you might want to log into IRC and see if anyone has it. Did you try asking CC or Trayus? Because they FAed Battle of Ryloth (Clone Wars).  JangFett  Talk 19:59, September 20, 2009 (UTC)
 * Sure. :)  JangFett  Talk 20:48, September 20, 2009 (UTC)
 * Just so you know, I have actually read through the book, which is why I objected to it for both Waxer and Boil.  CC7567  (talk) 21:03, September 20, 2009 (UTC)
 * I'll look through it. Sorry, Qui-Gon; I've been very busy lately.  JangFett  (Talk) 22:05, October 17, 2009 (UTC)

Gauntlet of Death Part 3
Qui-Gon, could you do a pre-preview of part three of my Gauntlet of Death project, the Unidentified clone trooper commander (Rishi). -- Clone Commander Lee  Talk 19:17, September 21, 2009 (UTC)
 * Thanks for your review, Qui-Gon. I believe that I have fixed your objections. -- Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:36, September 23, 2009 (UTC)

Tao
Your last Tao objection should now be addressed. -- 22:06, September 22, 2009 (UTC)

Cookie for you
Toprawa and Ralltiir 20:29, September 25, 2009 (UTC)

Denal and the 501st
I'm currently doing some research in preparation for revamping the 501st Legion and would like to clarify Denal's membership of the legion. Did "Duel of the Droids Decoded" explicitly state his membership of it? (As a note: if that's the case, you might want to check your referencing in Denal's infobox; it's currently sourced to the episode, which is not a source at all.)  CC7567  (talk) 20:07, September 26, 2009 (UTC)
 * Ah, okay. Thanks for that. Also, off the top of your head, do you remember the exact wording from DotD on Rex and Denal's participation in the Battle of Geonosis?  CC7567  (talk) 21:10, September 26, 2009 (UTC)
 * Thanks; I needed to clarify that they served together.  CC7567  (talk) 21:24, September 26, 2009 (UTC)

Season Two
Well, at least it's finally confirmed. :P Anyway, from what I can tell, the Season Two stuff appears to happen before the mobile game, as he's still a trooper in "Cargo of Doom" (according to the ep guide, at least). I'll leave this up to you to work out; it'll be easier to determine the placement once the episode airs.  CC7567  (talk) 16:37, October 1, 2009 (UTC)
 * So he isn't a commander yet? Strange. Also, I heard that Denal possibly dies in Cargo of Doom, but of course, that could be fake/speculation from the CoD clip. We'll wait and see. :)  JangFett  (Talk) 20:39, October 1, 2009 (UTC)

Denal page.
Hi. I was trying to add a quote, picture and edit Denal's article and I was informed by someone that I have to ask your permission first. -- Butters4115 (Well hiya there, fellas!) 15:40, October 2, 2009 (UTC)
 * Thank you. Your work on the article is great. Denal is awesome.-- Butters4115 Denal.jpg(Well hiya there, fellas!) 17:34, October 2, 2009 (UTC)

Denal
QuiGon, I feel that I need to inform you that in its current state, the Denal article is not factually correct. I'm going to avoid posting spoilers here, but I hope you realize that the events at the end of "Cargo of Doom" are not at all what they seem to be. Grand Moff Tranner (Comlink) 22:49, October 3, 2009 (UTC)
 * I can understand why you're not putting in 22 BBY as his date of death yet. But at least put the information on the Devaron mission after the info on the mobile game. Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 12:50, October 4, 2009 (UTC)

Here are your requested images. There are two of Denal "apprehending" Bane. The first is an earlier frame and is the clearer/sharper of the two images. The second is a little less sharp because Bane is moving, but showing Bane with arms raised showed a little more that Denal was capturing Bane. Take your pick as to which you want to use. I'll get the sound files shortly. :) -  JMAS  Hey, it's me! 14:58, October 6, 2009 (UTC)
 * You'll want to replace File:Resolute briefing CoD.png with the native JPG format version. -  JMAS  Hey, it's me! 15:52, October 6, 2009 (UTC)
 * Just briefly looked over your Denal article. You have certainly put a lot of work into it. I would like to suggest, however, that when you "standardize paragraph lengths", that you not forget that a length does not necessarily define how long a paragraph should be. Proper English grammar dictates that paragraphs have a main idea and supportive details. Topic sentences bearing a paragraph's main idea usually begin at the start of the paragraph. The supportive details then follow in compound sentences, combined sentences, and simple sentences, adding a variety of sentence structure to entertain the reader. There is a break (ending one paragraph and beginning another) when there is a change in action or thought in the body of the article. Paragraphs use transitions to move from one idea to another, carrying on where the previous paragraph left off, but still keeping the underlying theme in focus. This is where the paragraph uses a transitional phrase. For a short lesson on transitioning paragraphs, see the following link. http://www.bobbrooke.com/WritersCorner/paragraphtransitions.htm — Gethralkin  Hyperwave 13:27, October 7, 2009 (UTC)
 * As you requested, here are the grammatical suggestions:


 * Mission to Skytop Station—"...Nachkt hoped to sell the droid to the Separatist General Grievous. *new paragraph* Infiltrating the station with..." (transitioning from Gha Nacht's reason for going to Skytop to Denal's action there)


 * Mission to Skytop Station (cont.)—"...them to plant charges while he went in search of R2-D2. *new paragraph* Denal and the others soon reached a door that was ray-shielded. Tano instructed R3-S6 to disable the shield, but the droid, who was in fact a Separatist spy, instead stalled them until battle droids arrived. Denal was first to hear them coming and warned his teammates. *move paragraph break from here* Denal suggested hot-wiring the door, but R3's seeming ineptitude blocked it. *to here* The group was outnumbered, yet were able to use EMP grenades to disable the battle droids. At this point, Grievous..." (new paragraph should encapsulate the sabotage of R3 at the door) — Gethralkin  Hyperwave 15:17, October 7, 2009 (UTC)


 * That was all I noticed after looking through it carefully after I got the chance. The rest is very well done. The following are a few grammatical errors involving missing words:


 * Personality and traits—"...Denal was quick to figure out how to use magnetic boots..."


 * Devaron—"...due to the fact that Cad Bane did not send for reinforcements,..."— Gethralkin  Hyperwave  15:19, October 7, 2009 (UTC)


 * I also wanted to point out that Denal's death at the hands of Cad Bane are not mentioned, and that the mission listed after the Devaron section needs to be listed as apocryphal (at least any parts that place Denal as being alive after the his death on the frigate).— Gethralkin  Hyperwave 16:25, October 7, 2009 (UTC)


 * Understood. I have a solution for a fix that will use no speculation either way:
 * Devaron—"...Skywalker and Tano reached the shuttle and witnessed, appearently, a  the wounded Denal shooting Bane, supposedly killing him. There was no time to recover the holocron from the  his lifeless body that fell to the hanger floor; therefore, after picking up Denal  the survivor, the Republic troops escaped from the frigate, right before it exploded.— Gethralkin  Hyperwave 17:23, October 7, 2009 (UTC)

Poor Denal and Koho.
Hey man, I'm about to finish Koho. I don't recall the episode that well (Just Koho and Denal scenes), and did both Denal and Koho appear together in two scenes? I remember when: Rex sent them to find Anakin, and then both spotted Bane before their deaths. My CoD iTunes is in poor quality, and I'm also replying on the Ep Guide. :)  JangFett  (Talk) 16:16, October 11, 2009 (UTC)
 * In the ep guide, it says they both encountered him. I don't think Koho could have escaped; that's interesting.  JangFett  (Talk) 16:29, October 11, 2009 (UTC)

Republic Heroes
Just one thing. Had you a problem to activate the fisrt generator in the first Ryloth mission. I have a problem and I want to know if you must do something special or there is just a problem with the game. -- Clone Commander Lee  Talk 18:50, October 11, 2009 (UTC)
 * Well if I press the force button, it does nothing and if I keep it pressed a while the force goes out. Possible a game problem ? -- Clone Commander Lee  Talk 10:55, October 12, 2009 (UTC)
 * Thank you Qui-Gon, it works now. -- Clone Commander Lee  Talk 17:54, October 13, 2009 (UTC)
 * Sory for being a pain, but what do you have to do in the S.O.S. level on Juma 9, with the stones. Have you to jump or then ? -- Clone Commander Lee  Talk 18:03, October 14, 2009 (UTC)
 * Nevermind, I get past this and I am now in the last battle with Kul Teska on Behpour. -- Clone Commander Lee  Talk 11:33, October 18, 2009 (UTC)
 * Thanks for updating both Christophsis and Vassek's third moon.  CC7567  (talk) 18:22, October 13, 2009 (UTC)
 * ...Did I remove that? I don't think I intended to. Is it specifically capitalized and stated as "a mission to Skytop Station"? (I need to verify to make sure which way to capitalize it in the article.) Also, I'll try to incorporate the new info for Bane, but I'm extremely hesitant about putting it in the bio when so much else of the game has contradicted the TV series. It's going to require too much fanon to link the two storylines together, so it's probably going to end up in the Bts. Thanks, though.  CC7567  (talk) 16:40, October 15, 2009 (UTC)
 * Okay; thanks.  CC7567  (talk) 17:23, October 15, 2009 (UTC)
 * Is there anything (relevant to Bane) that happens after he tells Amidala and Fisto of Juma 9? He seems to just mysteriously disappear after that. Also, if you get the chance, could you do a quick check on Bane's Bts for factual correctness? Thanks in advance.  CC7567  (talk) 06:59, October 17, 2009 (UTC)
 * Since you're more familiar with the DS storyline than me, would you be willing to update Gree as well? I can copyedit it after you're done.  CC7567  (talk) 22:03, October 18, 2009 (UTC)
 * When you get the chance, could you check the Battle of Ryloth's Bts as well for factual correctness? Thanks in advance.  CC7567  (talk) 19:21, October 26, 2009 (UTC)
 * Also, does Loathsom appear in the DS version?  CC7567  (talk) 05:45, October 27, 2009 (UTC)
 * I think I've gotten all of it in. Thanks very much again, and congratulations on your WotM award as well. It's very well-deserved. :)  CC7567  (talk) 19:28, November 4, 2009 (UTC)

Rianna Saren
I know Rianna Saren was your first GA, so I don't want to edit it without consulting you. A couple items. The image of her beating down the stormtrooper, I'd like to lower that to just below the "Working for the Rebellion" heading for layout reasons, so it's in a more accurate placement for the image. Secondly, the image itself. If you look at this image, it's a great promotional shot of Zeeo. I've got a similar shot of Rianna whooping that stormtrooper, but it's more complete and on a neutral white background. However, it is a bit smaller than the current one cropped from the promotional wallpaper. Do you mind me replacing the image with the more complete, slightly smaller, white background version? -  JMAS  Jolly Trooper.png Hey, it's me! 05:53, October 19, 2009 (UTC)

Fil in Republic Heroes
Hey, Qui-Gon. Since you're familiar with the DS version of RH, does Fil appear in the game? Seeing that the Mission to the third moon of Vassek appears in the game, it's quite possible that he makes an appearance.  JangFett  (Talk) 21:18, October 19, 2009 (UTC)

Grievous
Hey, thanks for updating Grievous with Republic Heroes info. :)  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 21:49, October 23, 2009 (UTC)

TCW young readers
Hey QuiGon. Since you seem to have possession of R2-D2's Adventure and Rescue in the Sky, is Rex in either of them?  CC7567  (talk) 04:51, October 26, 2009 (UTC)
 * Okay; thanks very much.  CC7567  (talk) 17:12, October 26, 2009 (UTC)

TCW mobile & Jedi Alliance info
Hey, Qui-Gon. Sorry this took so long, but I found very little new information regarding Waxer and Boil in "Battle for Ryloth." The book takes place throughout the Ryloth trilogy arc. While the new Republic Heroes information is not seen in the book, that Ahsoka helping Waxer situation is not there. But here is something new/different from the "Innocents of Ryloth" episode: instead of Waxer wanting to take Numa, both Waxer and Boil were hesitated at first; however, they took her to Obi-Wan immediately. As for my question, do you still have the TCW mobile game and Jedi Alliance game? I am in need of Ahsoka information. I.e, what did she do in those games, any quotes. Thanks, man.  JangFett  (Talk) 20:34, October 31, 2009 (UTC)

WotM
Congratulations on being Wookieepedian of the Month for November, QuiGonJinn! Very well deserved :D. Grunny ( Talk ) 00:00, November 1, 2009 (UTC)
 * Congratulations indeed. :D  JangFett  (Talk) 00:02, November 1, 2009 (UTC)
 * Thanks, guys. I really appreciate your recognition of my efforts. QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 18:37, November 4, 2009 (UTC)

A small request
I'd like to ask for your opinion on something I've brought up on Raid on Ziro the Hutt's Coruscant club talk page. If you wouldn't mind taking a look when you get a chance, I'd appreciate it. -  JMAS  Jolly Trooper.png Hey, it's me! 16:06, November 7, 2009 (UTC)