Wookieepedia:Inquisitorius/Log/2018 June 24

[00:56:00]  Alright, let meeting 92 begin [00:56:18]  Before we start, do either of you have any pre review discussion items? [00:56:26]  Nope [00:56:33] Not I [00:56:38]  Excellent [00:56:41]  First up then [00:56:42]  https://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:Inq/Gallo [00:56:47]  https://starwars.wikia.com/index.php?diff=cur&oldid=7669325 [00:56:55]  Code-8 says he fixed them [00:56:58]  Imp votes keep [00:57:13]  I'm just going to say this: [00:57:37]  Sources that "just repeat" the events of a prior source will often say something in a different way that offers a tidbit of new information [00:58:20]  I don't trust Code-8's ability to properly judge this, frankly, though I don't know that Nexus of Power indeed says anything new [00:58:47]  I don [00:59:08]  I don't personally have it, but sourcebooks normally have some extra info [00:59:26] I don't have that source either. [00:59:38]  I have no choice but to vote Keep, but I feel like that deserves to be stated for the record [00:59:54]  In the event someone ever takes the time to look at that more closely [00:59:57] <Supreme_Emperor> I'll vote keep as well, if I can find a copy I'll check [01:00:06] Makes sense, keep. [01:00:20] <Supreme_Emperor> Gallo kept [01:00:23] <Supreme_Emperor> Next uo [01:00:34] <Supreme_Emperor> https://starwars.wikia.com/index.php?diff=cur&oldid=7696207 [01:00:43] <Supreme_Emperor> https://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:Inq/Picaroon_C._Boodle [01:00:49] <Supreme_Emperor> No changes [01:00:52] <Toprawa> Do good death [01:00:52] <Supreme_Emperor> Imp votes kill [01:00:56] <Supreme_Emperor> Kill [01:00:57] Kill [01:01:12] <Supreme_Emperor> Picaroon C.Boodle killed [01:01:35] <Supreme_Emperor> https://starwars.wikia.com/index.php?diff=cur&oldid=7189176 [01:01:46] <Supreme_Emperor> https://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:Inq/Gunman [01:01:52] <Supreme_Emperor> No change [01:01:54] <Supreme_Emperor> Imp votes kill [01:01:58] <Supreme_Emperor> Kill [01:02:00] <Toprawa> Do good death [01:02:03] Kill [01:02:18] <Supreme_Emperor> Gunman killed, with guns [01:02:33] <Supreme_Emperor> https://starwars.wikia.com/index.php?diff=cur&oldid=7558960 [01:02:39] <Supreme_Emperor> https://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:Inq/Ooroo [01:02:44] <Supreme_Emperor> No change [01:02:46] <Toprawa> Do good death [01:02:47] <Supreme_Emperor> Imp votes kill [01:02:48] <Supreme_Emperor> Kill [01:03:04] Kill [01:03:10] <Supreme_Emperor> Ooroo killed [01:03:22] <Supreme_Emperor> https://starwars.wikia.com/index.php?diff=cur&oldid=7555654 [01:03:29] <Supreme_Emperor> https://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:Inq/Andur_Sunrider_(second_review) [01:03:35] <Supreme_Emperor> No change [01:03:38] <Supreme_Emperor> Imp votes kill [01:03:39] <Supreme_Emperor> Kill [01:03:43] Kill [01:03:50] <Toprawa> Do good death [01:03:59] <Supreme_Emperor> Andur Sunrider killed [01:04:14] <Supreme_Emperor> https://starwars.wikia.com/index.php?diff=cur&oldid=7496024 [01:04:22] <Supreme_Emperor> https://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:Inq/Janu_Godalhi/Legends [01:04:33] <Supreme_Emperor> No change [01:04:38] <Supreme_Emperor> Imp votes kill [01:04:39] <Supreme_Emperor> Kill [01:04:39] <Toprawa> Do good death [01:04:41] Kill [01:04:49] <Supreme_Emperor> Janu Godalhi/Legends killed [01:05:01] <Supreme_Emperor> https://starwars.wikia.com/index.php?diff=cur&oldid=7652395 [01:05:07] <Supreme_Emperor> https://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:Inq/4-8C [01:05:12] <Supreme_Emperor> No change [01:05:16] <Supreme_Emperor> Imp votes kill [01:05:17] <Supreme_Emperor> Kill [01:05:18] <Toprawa> Do good death [01:05:51] Kill [01:05:53] <Supreme_Emperor> 4-8C killed [01:06:06] <Supreme_Emperor> https://starwars.wikia.com/index.php?diff=cur&oldid=7535239 [01:06:12] <Supreme_Emperor> https://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:Inq/Restoration_Zone [01:06:22] <Supreme_Emperor> No change [01:06:25] <Supreme_Emperor> Imp votes kill [01:06:26] <Supreme_Emperor> Kill [01:06:28] <Toprawa> Do good death [01:06:29] Kill [01:06:40] <Supreme_Emperor> Restoration Zone killed [01:06:54] <Supreme_Emperor> https://starwars.wikia.com/index.php?diff=cur&oldid=7510238 [01:07:00] <Supreme_Emperor> https://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:Inq/CC-1138/Legends [01:07:05] <Supreme_Emperor> No change [01:07:07] <Toprawa> Do good death [01:07:08] <Supreme_Emperor> Imp votes kill [01:07:10] <Supreme_Emperor> Kill [01:07:10] Kill [01:07:19] <Supreme_Emperor> CC-1138/Legends done good death [01:07:38] <Supreme_Emperor> https://starwars.wikia.com/index.php?diff=cur&oldid=7559705 [01:07:44] <Supreme_Emperor> https://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:Inq/Simus [01:07:50] <Supreme_Emperor> No change [01:07:53] <Supreme_Emperor> Imp votes kill [01:07:55] Kill [01:07:55] <Supreme_Emperor> Kill [01:07:55] <Toprawa> Do good death [01:08:00] <Supreme_Emperor> Simus killed [01:08:11] <Supreme_Emperor> https://starwars.wikia.com/index.php?diff=cur&oldid=7560039 [01:08:16] <Supreme_Emperor> https://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:Inq/Sylvar [01:08:23] <Supreme_Emperor> No change [01:08:25] <Toprawa> Do good death [01:08:26] <Supreme_Emperor> Imp votes kill [01:08:26] Kill [01:08:29] <Supreme_Emperor> Kill [01:08:33] <Supreme_Emperor> Sylvar killed [01:08:51] <Supreme_Emperor> https://starwars.wikia.com/index.php?diff=cur&oldid=7683954 [01:08:55] <Supreme_Emperor> https://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:Inq/Marcus_Trant. [01:09:05] <Supreme_Emperor> No change [01:09:08] <Supreme_Emperor> Imp votes kill [01:09:09] Kill [01:09:10] <Supreme_Emperor> Kill [01:09:10] <Toprawa> Do good death [01:09:15] <Supreme_Emperor> Marcus Trant killed [01:09:28] <Supreme_Emperor> https://starwars.wikia.com/index.php?diff=cur&oldid=7697325 [01:09:34] <Supreme_Emperor> https://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:Inq/Jedidiah [01:09:41] <Supreme_Emperor> No change [01:09:43] <Toprawa> Do good death [01:09:43] Kill [01:09:44] <Supreme_Emperor> Imp votes kill [01:09:50] <Supreme_Emperor> Jedidiah killed [01:10:02] <Supreme_Emperor> https://starwars.wikia.com/index.php?diff=cur&oldid=7675277 [01:10:07] <Supreme_Emperor> https://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:Inq/Tam_Elgrin [01:10:13] <Supreme_Emperor> No change [01:10:15] <Toprawa> Do good death [01:10:16] <Supreme_Emperor> Imp votes kill [01:10:18] <Supreme_Emperor> Kill [01:10:25] Kill [01:10:27] <Supreme_Emperor> Tam Elgrin killed [01:10:56] <Supreme_Emperor> https://starwars.wikia.com/index.php?diff=cur&oldid=7494870 [01:11:01] <Supreme_Emperor> https://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:Inq/Zorba_Desilijic_Tiure [01:11:11] <Supreme_Emperor> No change [01:11:14] <Supreme_Emperor> Imp votes kill [01:11:14] <Toprawa> Do good death [01:11:15] <Supreme_Emperor> Kill [01:11:15] Kill [01:11:18] <Supreme_Emperor> Zorba Desilijic Tiure killed [01:11:31] <Supreme_Emperor> https://starwars.wikia.com/index.php?diff=cur&oldid=7495342 [01:11:41] <Supreme_Emperor> https://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:Inq/Ylenic_It'kla [01:11:50] <Supreme_Emperor> No change [01:11:53] <Toprawa> Do good death [01:11:54] <Supreme_Emperor> Imp votes kill [01:11:55] Kill [01:11:55] <Supreme_Emperor> Kill [01:11:58] <Supreme_Emperor> Ylenic It'kla killed [01:12:05] <Supreme_Emperor> Alright, old stuff is done [01:12:08] <Supreme_Emperor> Now new stuff [01:12:24] <Supreme_Emperor> https://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Wampa/Legends [01:12:36] <Supreme_Emperor> Tope has requested we ignore this for now, I'm good with that [01:12:46] Same. [01:12:50] <Toprawa> Thank you [01:13:00] <Supreme_Emperor> No prob [01:13:05] <Supreme_Emperor> Wampa/Legends ignored [01:13:19] <Supreme_Emperor> https://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Ma%27kis%27shaalas/Legends [01:13:31] <Supreme_Emperor> infobox-exclusive info (including even his species), missing backup links, redlink, BTS sourcing. Imperators II(Talk) 08:48, June 12, 2018 (UTC) [01:13:37] <Toprawa> the "nickname" in the intro is intro-exclusive [01:13:45] <Toprawa> I'd like to see all the BBY date refs checked/confirmed [01:13:59] <Toprawa> Consider BTS subsectioning maybe [01:14:14] <Toprawa> Probe [01:14:18] Probe [01:14:19] <Supreme_Emperor> Probe [01:14:40] <Supreme_Emperor> Ma'kis'shaalas/Legends probed [01:14:51] <Supreme_Emperor> https://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Odan-Urr [01:14:58] <Supreme_Emperor>    BBY citations to 1996 material. [01:14:59] <Supreme_Emperor>    No behind the scenes citations. [01:15:12] <Toprawa> This sentence is weirdly located at the beginning of the Bio: "Odan-Urr had blue eyes and gray skin." [01:15:15] <Toprawa> Belongs in the P/T [01:15:28] <Toprawa> Digital versions for all images [01:15:37] <Toprawa> all comic images* [01:15:44] Some of these paragraphs are too long. [01:15:52] <Toprawa> The BTS just kind of sucks, frankly [01:15:52] <Supreme_Emperor> Can that date be sourced to the comic? [01:15:55] <Toprawa> Publication dates would be nice [01:15:59] <Toprawa> Para breaks there too [01:16:12] <Toprawa> What date, SE? [01:16:28] <Supreme_Emperor> Sorry, his death date [01:16:29] <Supreme_Emperor> 3996 BBY (3961BrS), [01:16:34] <Toprawa> No [01:16:39] <Toprawa> And remove the BrS date too [01:16:43] <Supreme_Emperor> Probe [01:16:49] <Toprawa> Probe [01:16:58] Probe [01:17:03] <Supreme_Emperor> Odan-Urr probed [01:17:12] <Supreme_Emperor> https://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Unstable_Terrain_Artillery_Transport [01:17:20] <Supreme_Emperor> Infobox exclusve info. [01:17:21] <Supreme_Emperor> No behind the scenes citations. [01:17:33] <Toprawa> Description could probably be subsectioned [01:17:43] <Toprawa> Ref 9 needs proper citation template usage [01:17:50] <Toprawa> As does ref 8 [01:18:00] <Toprawa> And the TCG thing in the Sources list [01:18:00] <Supreme_Emperor> Missing archive link [01:18:22] <Toprawa> Overall linking needs sprucing up [01:18:27] What is the point of that Blog external link? [01:18:37] Is that someone? [01:18:54] <Supreme_Emperor> It's a broken link too [01:18:56] <Toprawa> It's being used for ref 9 [01:19:27] Ah, it is the databank author then. [01:19:28] <Supreme_Emperor> Probe [01:19:41] <Toprawa> Date ref citation for 22 BBY too [01:19:47] <Toprawa> Don't think that's mentioned in that DB entry [01:19:49] <Toprawa> Probe [01:00:02] Probe [01:00:04] <Supreme_Emperor> Unstable Terrain Artillery Transport probed [01:00:17] <Supreme_Emperor> https://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Gavin_Darklighter [01:00:26] <Supreme_Emperor>    Infobox exclusve info. [01:00:26] <Supreme_Emperor>    Check several "likely" or "very likely" sentences to see if they are literally mentioned in source material. [01:00:26] <Supreme_Emperor>    I quickly see problematic BBY/ABY citations (9 ABY citation to 1991's Heir of the Empire as just 1 example). [01:00:26] <Supreme_Emperor>    Possible indirect appearances listed in appearances. If said stuff can't confirm his presence, then don't list at all. [01:00:30] <Toprawa> Check/confirm all BBY/ABY dates [01:00:59] <Toprawa> Digital versions for all comic images [01:01:14] <Toprawa> See also link should be removed [01:01:25] <Toprawa> The Darklighter family link should be included in the article body if it's not already [01:01:43] <Toprawa> BTS is just like a list of trivia [01:01:46] <Toprawa> Organize and subsection it [01:01:49] <Toprawa> More images could be used there [01:22:02] <Supreme_Emperor> I'll vote probe [01:22:03] <Toprawa> More images overall [01:22:05] <Toprawa> Probe [01:22:11] Probe [01:22:13] <Supreme_Emperor> Gavin Darklighter probed [01:22:50] <Supreme_Emperor> I should note for the record, Imp voted to probe everything so far [01:23:02] <Supreme_Emperor> https://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Hamo_Blastwell [01:23:13] <Supreme_Emperor>    Infobox exclusive info. [01:23:13] <Supreme_Emperor>        Fixed. Green Tentacle (Talk) 22:54, June 22, 2018 (UTC) [01:23:13] <Supreme_Emperor>    ABY citations made to stuff from 1990s. [01:23:13] <Supreme_Emperor>        The only ABY reference is already cited to the New Essential Chronology. The BBY one in BTS already was too, but it's now clearer. Green Tentacle (Talk) 22:54, June 22, 2018 (UTC) [01:23:13] <Supreme_Emperor>    Check if TIE Fighter Strategy Guide says "Though details of his survival were unknown, it seemed likely that his apparent death was in preparation for his participation in an undercover operation" or if that "unknown" and "likely" stuff is conjecture. [01:23:17] <Supreme_Emperor>        It was poorly worded but already fixed last month. Green Tentacle (Talk) 22:54, June 22, 2018 (UTC) [01:23:20] <Supreme_Emperor>    Also check if "little was known of Hamo Blastwell's life before leaving his homeworld" is said by source materials. [01:23:23] <Supreme_Emperor>        His glossary entry in X-Wing: The Official Strategy Guide says "Little is known about Hamo's past…" Green Tentacle (Talk) 22:54, June 22, 2018 (UTC) [01:23:40] <Toprawa> I'd like to see some publication years mentioned in the BTS [01:23:53] <Toprawa> Ref 5 needs a citation template [01:24:13] <Supreme_Emperor> X-Wing: The Official Strategy Guide gives the impression that Blastwell was killed at the Battle of Yavin.[2] Though TIE Fighter: The Official Strategy Guide establishes that he survived, it gives no further detail. Since the book shows him working undercover, his "death" was presumably to aid in establishing his cover. [01:24:22] <Supreme_Emperor> Seems a bit speculatory [01:24:24] Refs 50 and 51 should use cite web [01:24:37] Sorry, that was Darklighter... [01:24:37] <Toprawa> EJ? [01:24:39] <Toprawa> heh [01:24:44] <Supreme_Emperor> XD [01:25:07] <Toprawa> SE> Yeah, I think I would suggest removing that [01:25:19] <Supreme_Emperor> Agreed [01:25:22] <Toprawa> If he wants to keep it in some form, just rewrite it to present what we know is factual [01:25:34] <Toprawa> Like...the first two sentences, I guess [01:25:43] <Supreme_Emperor> I'm good with extending it until next meeting [01:25:49] <Toprawa> Extend [01:25:53] <Supreme_Emperor> Extend [01:26:09] Well, this is a new article, so we'd just be probing it. [01:26:15] <Supreme_Emperor> Probe* [01:26:17] Or do you mean spare? [01:26:20] <Toprawa> Probe [01:26:24] <Supreme_Emperor> Probe is indeed what I meant [01:26:25] Okay, probe. [01:26:39] <Supreme_Emperor> Hamo Blastwell probed [01:26:51] <Supreme_Emperor> https://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Platt_Okeefe [01:27:05] <Supreme_Emperor>    Infobox exclusive info. [01:27:06] <Supreme_Emperor>    Check if "Real birth date probably c. 18 BBY" is literally mentioned by source material. [01:27:06] <Supreme_Emperor>    BBY/ABY citations to 1990s material. [01:27:06] <Supreme_Emperor>    Are her pants being "possibly a set of Corellian Bloodstripes", the Rebel base "likely discovered after the incident on Dagobah" and Starlite Cloud being "likely where she learned to speak Sullustese" literally mentioned in source material? [01:27:07] <Supreme_Emperor>    Missing behind the scenes citations. [01:27:10] <Toprawa> "Oakie" nickname is intro-exclusive [01:27:18] <Toprawa> Check/confirm all BBY/ABY dates [01:27:41] <Toprawa> Standardize the L-R image alternation in body [01:27:49] <Toprawa> Revise thumbnail sizes too [01:27:55] <Toprawa> Some of those are way too small for Oasis [01:27:55] There is some unsourced info in the BTS [01:28:05] <Toprawa> Oasis thumbnails typically work well between 180-250px [01:28:24] <Toprawa> 2-speaker quote templates get Quote, not Dialogue [01:28:35] <Toprawa> This article is classic 2007-era quality [01:28:48] <Supreme_Emperor> Okeefe also wore pants with red piping down the side—possibly a set of Corellian Bloodstripes.[37] [01:28:53] <Toprawa> heh [01:28:53] <Supreme_Emperor> Should be checked for speculation [01:28:58] <Toprawa> Yeah [01:29:02] <Toprawa> Probe [01:29:05] <Supreme_Emperor> Probe [01:29:16] <Supreme_Emperor> brb, gotta let my cat out [01:29:17] Probe [01:29:40] <Supreme_Emperor> Back [01:29:48] <Supreme_Emperor> Platt Okeefe probed [01:29:59] <Supreme_Emperor> https://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Teek_(species)/Legends [01:30:09] <Supreme_Emperor>    Infobox says 1 meter was average height, actual article says just under 1 meter. [01:30:09] <Supreme_Emperor>    "Homeworld unknown" in infobox seems to be speculation, in any case it is infobox exclusive as the article itself doesn't repeat it. [01:30:10] <Supreme_Emperor>    Check BBY citations (Castaways of Endor (800 BBY citation) I didn't check, but 22 BBY was sourced to Holonet News article that only mentioned 13:4:18). [01:30:10] <Supreme_Emperor>    Missing behind the scenes citations. [01:30:42] <Toprawa> Overall linking spruce up [01:30:43] Redlink [01:31:06] <Toprawa> Fix image placement for Oasis [01:31:13] Missing infobox parameters [01:31:19] <Toprawa> Sources redlink [01:31:27] <Supreme_Emperor> Probe [01:31:27] <Toprawa> Ref 3 needs citation template [01:31:35] <Toprawa> Ref 9 [01:31:54] <Toprawa> Probe [01:31:59] Probe [01:32:20] <Supreme_Emperor> Teek (species) probed [01:32:34] <Supreme_Emperor> https://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/TK-622 [01:32:43] <Supreme_Emperor>    Infobox exclusive info. [01:32:43] <Supreme_Emperor>    Equipment needed. [01:32:45] <Toprawa> Digital versions for all comic images [01:32:47] Redlink [01:32:51] <Toprawa> Check/confirm all BBY/ABY date refs [01:33:02] <Toprawa> Overall linking spruce up [01:33:28] <Toprawa> Comic publication date is not self-sourcing in the BTS [01:33:50] <Toprawa> Probe [01:33:54] <Supreme_Emperor> Probe [01:33:58] Probe [01:34:02] <Supreme_Emperor> Tk-622 probed [01:34:11] <Supreme_Emperor> https://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Alzoc_III/Legends [01:34:20] <Supreme_Emperor> "Likely," "possible" and "little is known" text. [01:34:20] <Supreme_Emperor> BBY/ABY citations to 1990s material. [01:34:20] <Supreme_Emperor> Missing behind the scenes citations. [01:34:38] <Supreme_Emperor> Definitely check for speculation :P [01:34:54] <Toprawa> Revise image placement for Oasis [01:35:03] <Toprawa> Fix all redirects [01:35:32] <Toprawa> Databank pages are Last name, First name [01:35:46] <Toprawa> Probe [01:35:49] <Supreme_Emperor> Probe [01:35:55] Probe [01:36:01] <Supreme_Emperor> Alzoc III/Legends probed [01:36:16] <Supreme_Emperor> https://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Rookie_One [01:36:27] <Supreme_Emperor>    Infobox exclusive info. [01:36:28] <Supreme_Emperor>        Fixed. Green Tentacle (Talk) 12:12, June 23, 2018 (UTC) [01:36:28] <Supreme_Emperor>    1990s BBY citations. [01:36:28] <Supreme_Emperor>        Just one, fixed. Green Tentacle (Talk) 12:12, June 23, 2018 (UTC) [01:36:28] <Supreme_Emperor>    Equipment not mentioned. [01:36:28] <Supreme_Emperor>        I'll again accept the Inquisitors' opinion on this, but the layout guide says an equipment section is only for notable equipment and I don't consider he has any equipment sufficiently notable to justify it. Green Tentacle (Talk) 00:07, June 23, 2018 (UTC) [01:36:32] <Supreme_Emperor>    See if "Little is known of Rookie One's actions over the next few years" is formally said by source material. [01:36:35] <Supreme_Emperor>        Reworded. Green Tentacle (Talk) 00:07, June 23, 2018 (UTC) [01:37:10] <Toprawa> I would say the precedent for Equipment has evolved past what the LG actually says to do [01:37:16] <Supreme_Emperor> Yeah [01:37:23] <Toprawa> That definitely needs to be changed at the next Mofference [01:37:37] <Toprawa> Therefore, I would say include Equipment [01:37:48] <Toprawa> Flight suit, weapons?, is all viable stuff [01:37:49] <Supreme_Emperor> Though Rookie One's potential Force-sensitivity is never mentioned in either game, it is assumed to exist until contradicted by an official source.[3 [01:37:58] <Supreme_Emperor> Needs to be checked for speculation [01:38:11] <Toprawa> Yeah... [01:38:21] <Toprawa> Who is assuming that to exist? [01:38:36] <Supreme_Emperor> Under force powers [01:38:46] <Toprawa> Maybe reword it to say that this article treats him as Force-sensitive based on the aforementioned source details, etc. [01:39:05] <Toprawa> That's more assertive than "assuming" [01:39:12] <Supreme_Emperor> It's assumed from this line in one of the manuals [01:39:12] <Supreme_Emperor> Rookie One is a student of the Force. [01:39:40] <Toprawa> Probe, then [01:39:42] <Supreme_Emperor> Probe [01:39:44] Probe [01:39:48] <Supreme_Emperor> Rookie One probed [01:40:02] <Supreme_Emperor> https://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Thon [01:40:13] <Supreme_Emperor>    Infobox exclusive info. [01:40:14] <Supreme_Emperor>    1990s BBY citations. [01:40:29] <Toprawa> Digital versions for all comic images [01:40:30] Redirects [01:40:43] <Supreme_Emperor> * [01:40:47] <Supreme_Emperor> ^* [01:40:53] <Toprawa> Paragraph breaks where needed [01:41:01] <Toprawa> "Naddist Uprising" is a big one [01:41:30] <Supreme_Emperor> Probe [01:41:30] <Toprawa> Equipment section? [01:41:35] <Toprawa> He wears some kind of armor or something [01:41:37] <Toprawa> What is that? [01:41:55] <Toprawa> Unless that's just his natural back [01:42:05] <Toprawa> Consider Equipment, at least [01:42:22] <Toprawa> The novel Dark Apprentice is listed in the Sources [01:42:23] <Toprawa> Why? [01:42:24] I don't think that is his back based on some of the images. [01:42:50] <Supreme_Emperor> Offhand I don't recall Thon being mentioned [01:43:09] <Toprawa> Probe [01:43:16] Probe [01:43:17] <Supreme_Emperor> Probe [01:43:21] <Supreme_Emperor> Thon probed [01:43:36] <Supreme_Emperor> https://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Q-7N [01:43:45] <Supreme_Emperor>    1990s BBY/ABY citations. [01:43:45] <Supreme_Emperor>    Infobox exclusive info. [01:43:46] <Supreme_Emperor>    "For editorial purposes, this article assumes the player character is male, though it could be female." Should a formal mechanics template be put in the article, rather than operating on an assumption? [01:43:46] <Supreme_Emperor>    Missing behind the scenes citations. [01:43:51] <Supreme_Emperor> That speculation :P [01:43:58] <Toprawa> Proper CSWECite usage in Sources [01:44:02] Redirect(s) [01:44:02] <Toprawa> Redirects [01:44:10] <Toprawa> If you're going to use images, use them consistently through the Bio [01:44:26] <Supreme_Emperor> Redirects [01:44:33] <Toprawa> Citation templates for Imperial Spy in references [01:44:42] <Toprawa> And X-Wing Marks the Spot [01:44:50] <Supreme_Emperor> In the Missions books, the player character can be either male, or female. For editorial purposes, this article assumes the player character is male, though it could be female. The majority of characters that the player can play as in the Missions books are male, however. [01:44:52] <Toprawa> BTS sourcing [01:44:59] <Toprawa> Probe [01:45:03] <Supreme_Emperor> Probe [01:45:06] Probe [01:45:13] <Supreme_Emperor> Q-7N probed [01:45:32] <Supreme_Emperor> https://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Yavid [01:45:42] <Supreme_Emperor>    Infobox exclusive info. [01:45:43] <Supreme_Emperor>    Equipment needs mentioning. [01:45:43] <Supreme_Emperor>    3 ABY mentioned in intro, but no years at all mentioned in article body. [01:45:44] <Supreme_Emperor>    Missing behind the scenes citations. [01:45:47] <Toprawa> Redlink, redirect(s) [01:45:58] <Toprawa> Citation template, backup link for External link [01:46:10] <Toprawa> DB template: pages are Last name, First name [01:46:16] <Toprawa> Probe [01:46:20] Probe [01:46:22] <Supreme_Emperor> Probe [01:46:25] <Supreme_Emperor> Yavid probed [01:46:34] <Supreme_Emperor> Last one [01:46:35] <Supreme_Emperor> https://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Eyes_(information_broker) [01:46:43] <Supreme_Emperor>    ABY dates infobox exclusive and sourced to 1990s material. [01:46:44] <Supreme_Emperor>    I notice the "Imperial security officer" has an ISB pipelink, which should be checked for accuracy as I don't think Imperial security officer automatically means an ISB member. [01:46:44] <Supreme_Emperor>    Missing behind the scenes citations. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 01:58, June 13, 2018 (UTC) [01:47:11] <Toprawa> Probe [01:47:19] Probe [01:47:20] <Supreme_Emperor> Probe [01:47:25] <Supreme_Emperor> Eyes probed [01:47:27] <Toprawa> That's 14 probes -- let's do one more for 15 [01:47:28] <Supreme_Emperor> Eye see what we did there [01:47:32] <Toprawa> Take one from the Bin [01:47:52] <Supreme_Emperor> Alright lets do [01:48:13] <Supreme_Emperor> https://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/IG-88A?t=20180330040429 [01:48:17] <Supreme_Emperor> Update needed [01:48:23] <Toprawa> hah [01:48:31] <Toprawa> I've never understood how the hell you know which IG-88 is which [01:48:37] Missing BTS citations [01:48:40] Very ture [01:48:41] <Toprawa> Like, this whole article is suspect to me [01:48:42] *true [01:48:55] <Supreme_Emperor> Missing archive links [01:49:03] <Toprawa> Digital versions for all comic images [01:49:11] <Supreme_Emperor> The novel does specify which IG was where at times [01:49:19] <Toprawa> Doesn't need an "Abilities" section -- merge it with Characteristics [01:49:32] Though the droid in Forces of Corruption is never identified as IG-88A, this IG-88 model has the ability to take control of the Death Star II during free-play mode. This article assumes that this droid is IG-88A based on this fact. [01:49:47] <Supreme_Emperor> The droid is also seen roaming the galaxy hunting Kenix Kil in The Bounty Hunters: Kenix Kil, set in 11 ABY. However, this is between the time period when he is shown to be in first Drebble's possession and then Thul's two decades later, so there is no contradiction. [01:50:00] <Toprawa> Citation template for Therefore I Am short story [01:50:01] How do we know that only A could do this? [01:50:23] Weren't they all the same? [01:50:42] <Toprawa> I have no idea [01:50:49] <Toprawa> I would have to go back and study all of that stuff again [01:50:53] <Toprawa> It's been a long time since I read that book [01:50:58] <Supreme_Emperor> Been a while since I read the bounty hunters novel [01:51:06] I thought the first one copied himself into all of the others. [01:51:13] <Supreme_Emperor> Yeah he did [01:51:17] So they should theoretically all have the same abilities. [01:51:32] <Supreme_Emperor> Then gave them the B, C, D designations [01:52:06] <Toprawa> Just make someone explain it for us for starters [01:52:10] <Toprawa> Probe [01:52:12] <Supreme_Emperor> Probe [01:52:20] But yeah, this whole article is suspect. [01:52:21] Probe. [01:52:27] <Supreme_Emperor> IG-88 [01:52:29] <Supreme_Emperor> A [01:52:30] <Supreme_Emperor> Probed [01:52:41] <Toprawa> heh [01:52:44] <Supreme_Emperor> Anyone have any further discussion items? [01:52:47] <Toprawa> Nope [01:53:03] Nope. [01:53:04] <Supreme_Emperor> Meeting duties then [01:53:14] <Supreme_Emperor> I thoroughly regret volunteering for paperwork XD [01:53:39] <Supreme_Emperor> Well I was already on it XD [01:53:48] <Supreme_Emperor> EJ is on scheduling [01:53:53] <Supreme_Emperor> Thanks for coming all [01:53:56] <Toprawa> Thanks, SE [01:53:59] <Toprawa> Good work [01:54:00] <Supreme_Emperor> No prob [01:54:08] Thank you, SE. [01:54:13] <Supreme_Emperor> Anytime [01:54:18] I'll post the log. [01:54:25] <Toprawa> thanks, EJ [01:54:30] <Supreme_Emperor> Thanks EJ [01:54:34] np