Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations

 The featured articles of the wiki are articles that represent the best Wookieepedia has to offer. This is not a way to showcase the articles of your favorite characters, spaceships, or the like.


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So just what makes a featured article? Well, we've prepared a list just in case someone should ask that, and it is as follows.

An article must&hellip;


 * 1) &hellip;be well-written and detailed.
 * 2) &hellip;be unbiased, non-point of view.
 * 3) &hellip;be sourced with all available sources and appearances.
 * 4) &hellip;follow the Manual of Style, Layout Guide, and all other policies on Wookieepedia.
 * 5) &hellip;not be the object of any ongoing edit wars.
 * 6) &hellip;not be tagged with any sort of improvement tags (i.e. more sources, expand, etc).
 * 7) &hellip;have a proper lead that gives a good summary of the topic and can be used for the front page featured box.
 * 8) &hellip;have no more than 3 redlinks.
 * 9) &hellip;have significant information from all sources and appearances, especially a biography for character articles.
 * 10) &hellip;not have been previously featured on the Main Page. Otherwise, it can only be restored to featured status.
 * 11) &hellip;be completely referenced for all available material and sources. See Sourcing for more information.
 * 12) &hellip;have all quotes and images sourced.
 * 13) &hellip;provide at least one quote on the article; a leading quote at the beginning is required. Only one quote would be allowed at the beginning of each section at max, although quotes may be placed in the middle of the article.
 * 14) &hellip;include a "personality and traits" section on all character articles.
 * 15) &hellip;include a reasonable number of images of good quality if said images are available.
 * 16) &hellip;pass review by the Inquisitorius review panel.

For more information on what makes a featured article, see Wikipedia:What is a featured article.

How to nominate:


 * 1) First, nominate an article you find is worthy of featured status, putting it at the bottom of the list below; see criteria above. Note that a previously featured article cannot be featured on the Main Page again; however, it can be restored to featured status.
 * 2) Others will object to the nomination if they disagree that the article is good enough; they will then supply reasons for doing so, and ways to improve the article (errors, style, organization, images, notability, sources).
 * 3) Supporters adjust the article until the objectors (with reasonable objections) are satisfied.
 * 4) The article is placed on the featured article list and added to the front page queue.
 * 5) Also, if, at least a week after the article's nomination, that article has 5 supports and no objections (or the objections have been stricken or overridden), it will be added the queue, and will be officially known as a "featured article".

How to vote:


 * 1) Before doing anything, be sure to read the article completely, keeping a sharp eye out for mistakes.
 * 2) Afterwards, compare the article to the criteria listed above, and then either support or object the article's nomination.
 * 3) If you object, please supply concrete reasons for doing so, and how it can be improved. Please cite which rule your objection falls under! Failure to do so will result in your objection being considered invalid.
 * 4) As stated above, any objections will be looked upon by the nominator, supporters, and anyone willing to improve the article, and action will be taken to please the objectors.
 * 5) Once all objectors' complaints have been solved (or the article has 5 supports and no objections after at least a week), the article will be added to the queue and be officially known as a "featured article".

Also remember to add nominated at the top of the article you are nominating.

Every Sunday the next article in the queue will be highlighted on the Main Page as featured, marked with the featured template and removed from the list of nominations. The beginning of the article then appears on the Main Page via the featured article template. Nominees that are inactive for a month will be eliminated from the nominations list.

Human
Support
 * 1) Darthchristian   ( Hey! ) 7:50, 25 March 2007 (UTC)

Oppose Comments
 * Doesn't cite sources. -- http://images.wikia.com/starwars/images/e/e5/ATATatarismall.png 15:21, 25 March 2007 (UTC)
 * As per Imp. .  .  .  .  21:11, 25 March 2007 (UTC)
 * Ditto (Rule 11) 15:39, 1 April 2007 (UTC)
 * This is basically a citation problem, but I am disturbed by the "racial and ethnic characteristics" section. It needs to go unless it can be written in a properly cited in-universe style.  - breathesgelatin Talk 05:43, 8 April 2007 (UTC)
 * And some MOS ignorising. .  .  .  .  23:34, 8 April 2007 (UTC)
 * 1) Humans suck.  Jwebb13 HoloNet[[Image:oldsith.jpg|30px]] 00:27, 24 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Question: Should Bts include a note about how we decided to change the capitalization of Human for consistency, etc? 15:39, 1 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Perhaps so. &mdash;Silly Dan (talk) 02:04, 2 April 2007 (UTC)
 * I made a note of it. Chack Jadson 01:33, 7 April 2007 (UTC)

Sio Bibble
Support Oppose
 * 1) .  .  .  .  07:05, 28 March 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) -- Shaelas (Ahto City)[[Image:Czerka Logo.JPG|30px]] 22:08, 28 March 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) KEJ 08:35, 6 April 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) Good article.--Windu223 23:58, 23 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Unsourced infobox picture. -- http://images.wikia.com/starwars/images/e/e5/ATATatarismall.png 12:05, 28 March 2007 (UTC)
 * Fixed. -- Ozzel 00:17, 29 March 2007 (UTC)
 * Small, but my main issue is the present tense and speculation at the end. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Audience Chamber ) 03:57, 29 March 2007 (UTC)
 * Unsourced P&T. -- http://images.wikia.com/starwars/images/e/e5/ATATatarismall.png 21:50, 29 March 2007 (UTC)
 * Fixed. .  .  .  .  21:47, 30 March 2007 (UTC)
 * A small one, but unsourced last paragraph of Biography. And as mentioned, it's very short, though apparently that's not objection-worthy. - Lord Hydronium 00:15, 30 March 2007 (UTC)
 * Fixed. .  .  .  .  21:47, 30 March 2007 (UTC)
 * Unsourced images. Green Tentacle (Talk) 13:43, 31 March 2007 (UTC)
 * Sourced. .  .  .  .  23:43, 2 April 2007 (UTC)
 * It can be further expanded. C'mon. -- Imp http://images.wikia.com/starwars/images/e/e5/ATATatarismall.png 18:34, 16 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Personality and traits sounds a dab POV to me. Also, what is (53BrS), and why isn't it linked to something that explains WTF BrS is?  Gonk  ( Gonk! ) 12:07, 22 April 2007 (UTC)

Comments
 * Four sentences for the intro? I know we don't have an objection for articles being "too short", but this just looks small, even with 3 pictures placed in the main text. Cull Tremayne 21:52, 28 March 2007 (UTC)
 * Struck my objection but I agree with Cull about the length. Green Tentacle (Talk) 08:43, 4 April 2007 (UTC)

Korriban
Support
 * 1) Darthchristian   ( Hey! ) 08:01, 30 March 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) SkywalkerPL 12:36, 3 April 2007 (UTC)

Oppose
 * The History section is fine, but you need more about the planet itself. More about the inhabitants, the society structure there, and the key locations. .  .  .  .  21:59, 30 March 2007 (UTC)
 * Fauna should be expanded. &mdash; http://images.wikia.com/starwars/images/e/e5/ATATatarismall.png 22:00, 30 March 2007 (UTC)
 * I'd like to see A) More on the state of Korriban during its heday under the Sith b) A section on its terrain. Apart from the pictures, there's nothing here that describes the world itself and the landscape. The comics and games are enough to go by, surely. QuentinGeorge 08:45, 11 April 2007 (UTC)

Comments

Atton Rand
Support Oppose
 * 1) - Solus (Bird of Prey)  18:45, 31 March 2007 (UTC)
 * 2)  Sarendipity  Talk [[Image:Atrissig.jpg|20px]] 19:06, 31 March 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) KEJ 08:35, 4 April 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) .  .  .  .  23:55, 8 April 2007 (UTC)
 * 5) Alright, but that "game completion scenario" is ugly. Chack Jadson 00:39, 20 April 2007 (UTC)
 * 6) Atarumaster88  21:14, 21 April 2007 (UTC)
 * 7)  Stake black   msg 19:41, 24 April 2007 (UTC)
 * 8) Greyman ( Paratus ) 03:55, 13 May 2007 (UTC)
 * I'd like to see this article reference specific conversations or events in KOTOR II. &mdash; http://images.wikia.com/starwars/images/e/e5/ATATatarismall.png 18:48, 31 March 2007 (UTC)
 * Okay, that shouldn't be hard. I'll get to it. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  18:55, 31 March 2007 (UTC)
 * See Jedi Exile for a good example of KOTOR referencing. -- http://images.wikia.com/starwars/images/e/e5/ATATatarismall.png 19:29, 31 March 2007 (UTC)
 * Finished. I hope I didn't go overboard. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  20:10, 31 March 2007 (UTC)
 * Intro fairly short. Cull Tremayne 00:41, 1 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Intro expanded. Does this suffice?
 * Yes, sorry about being slow on the uptake. Cull Tremayne 12:41, 6 April 2007 (UTC)
 * I think that another image, preferably one from the game, would look better in the infobox.-- Doquis (HoloConference)[[Image:Czerka Logo.JPG|30px]] 12:24, 1 April 2007 (UTC)
 * I am unable to capture (high-quality or otherwise) a screenshot. So I can't really do anything about that. I am not partial to the other head-shoulder shot in the article... but if I have no other choice I'll do it. Best thing to do is to just wait and see if JMAS or Redemption see this. - Solus  (Bird of Prey)  19:38, 1 April 2007 (UTC)
 * The current one is promotional, crisp and nice. I see no reason to change it. It's fine. Though if you absolutely MUST change the infobox, change it to that headshot thats in the article by doing a quick switch-a-roo. Though put a vote on the talk page first just to see what everyone else thinks. -- Redemption [[Image:Redemptionusersymbol.png|20px]] Talk 00:55, 9 April 2007 (UTC)
 * The sourcing style isn't consistent. .  .  .  .  23:50, 2 April 2007 (UTC)
 * What does that mean? - Solus (Bird of Prey)  23:51, 2 April 2007 (UTC)
 * ...with other sourced articles. I thought we decided not to specify moments in the game. Therefore, every KOTOR II source should just be attributed to KOTOR II. .  .  .  .  04:40, 4 April 2007 (UTC)
 * So that was decided against, then? - Sarendipity  Talk [[Image:Atrissig.jpg|20px]] 06:42, 4 April 2007 (UTC)
 * May I be told which one's been formally decided upon? - Solus (Bird of Prey)  20:43, 4 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Okay, I've done as was requested, so uh, could 4dot and Imp see if they can cross out their oppose votes? - Solus (Bird of Prey)  13:33, 7 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Factual error in intro: "However, she eventually freed him from his past, and he went on to train other Jedi in the years ahead." To the best of my knowledge, this is an assumption. -- Imp http://images.wikia.com/starwars/images/e/e5/ATATatarismall.png 18:43, 16 April 2007 (UTC)
 * This is speculation expounding upon what Kreia said about him, and has been removed. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  18:52, 16 April 2007 (UTC)

Comments
 * I did a general overhaul of the article not long ago, and the only thing (that I know of) that needs to be cleared up is the canonicity of some of the Kotor II sidequests, which will be brought up in the next Inq meeting, so I can't do anything about that until then. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  18:45, 31 March 2007 (UTC)
 * It was decided that we should be as vague as possible when writing about optional content. -- http://images.wikia.com/starwars/images/e/e5/ATATatarismall.png 21:04, 4 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Oh. I didn't know that that entailed un-detailed game referencing stuff. I'll go resource it. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  22:07, 4 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Done. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  22:18, 4 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Uh, is it possible to say this is an early entry for the Wookiee-Cast thingy and that I forsaw it the whole time ? For 4dot especially and for anyone else that has eyes maybe: see note under the 'Cannok' nom. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  22:56, 9 April 2007 (UTC)
 * What else needs to be done here, as nothing has happened to this nom for several days. Imp's objection, in leiu of the new rule-thing, is moot, and would someone either back up, comment on, or strike Shaelas's objection? At the moment, nothing's really happening here.- Solus (Bird of Prey)  22:34, 15 April 2007 (UTC)

Lightsaber
Support Objections **Redlinks indeed.  Stake black   msg 22:45, 12 April 2007 (UTC) No redlinks   Stake black   msg 16:29, 25 April 2007 (UTC)
 * 1) Siteoftupac 19:59, 2 April 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Redeemer 02:09, 4 May 2007 (UTC)
 * Needs citations. .  .  .  .  00:02, 3 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Present tense- Follow MOS. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Audience Chamber ) 06:03, 4 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Redlinks. Better sectioning needed. -- Darthchristian  ( Hey! ) 18:39, 8 April 2007 (UTC)
 * The entire article is one big list. -- Imp http://images.wikia.com/starwars/images/e/e5/ATATatarismall.png 18:44, 16 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Needs to be written as an article, not a list. The gallery of blade colors is irrelevant.  It should be cut down to a paragraph or so explanation of colors in canon and the EU.  Son of Nils Talk 01:51, 29 April 2007 (UTC)

Comments

CompForce
Support
 * 1) Danik Kreldin 00:55, 5 April 2007 (UTC) - McEwok and I breathed a lot of life into this article, really expanded it and so forth... think it looks good.

Oppose Comments
 * 1) No reference tags (Rule 11). Other than that a once-over doesn't find anything lacking. Cull Tremayne 01:49, 5 April 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Per Cull. .  .  .  .  09:10, 5 April 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) I'd like some information about specific instances and actions CompForce was involved in. The entire paragraph devoted to Post-Endor history appears to be conjecture. Atarumaster88  21:18, 21 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Three redlinks should probably be filled in. Cull Tremayne 01:50, 5 April 2007 (UTC)

Tavion Axmis
Support Oppose Comments
 * 1) Darthchristian   ( Hey! ) 10:11, 7 April 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Themelle444 18:22, 7 April 2007 (UTC)
 * It's an easy fix, but POVity POV POV POV. .  .  .  .  21:07, 7 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Where?-- Darthchristian  ( Hey! ) 22:21, 7 April 2007 (UTC)
 * "Overconfident", "Deadly", "Swift", "Devious"... .  .  .  .  22:32, 7 April 2007 (UTC)
 * I was able to address the ones you listed above, except for overconfidence. From both sides, it was clearly obvious that she was overconfident. I made it sound more neutral, and it was the best I could do. -- Darthchristian  ( Hey! ) 3:34, 8 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Mmkay, I've made some changes, but the prose is in need of a lot of work. A lot of sharp, short sentences that don't flow well. .  .  .  .  03:59, 8 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Looks better now. I'll work on the sentences.-- Darthchristian  ( Hey! ) 4:11, 8 April 2007 (UTC)
 * The sentences are longer and I made sure they flowed better. Is it better now?-- Darthchristian  ( Hey! ) 4:36, 8 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Enough for me to strike my opposition. .  .  .  .  00:56, 9 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Remove the bullets in the BtS, thanks. QuentinGeorge 08:41, 11 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Fixed.-- Darthchristian  ( Hey! ) 15:12, 13 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Present tense needs corrected. Atarumaster88  21:20, 21 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Needs a general copyedit. Atarumaster88  21:21, 21 April 2007 (UTC)

Grappa (Rodian)
Support Oppose
 * 1) http://images.wikia.com/starwars/images/e/e5/ATATatarismall.png 21:17, 8 April 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) .  .  .  .  21:23, 8 April 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) Cull Tremayne 23:07, 8 April 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Audience Chamber ) 04:29, 9 April 2007 (UTC)
 * 1) Grappa had maybe one or two paragraphs of page time. The vast majority of this article is hypothetical extrapolations and discussions about other events.Kuralyov 16:10, 9 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Could you provide any examples? -- Imp http://images.wikia.com/starwars/images/e/e5/ATATatarismall.png 23:31, 9 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Personally, I think that the only part that strays directly from Grappa is the description of the Jade Sabers intent. But then, that's needed to provide context to Grappa's actions, so it's kosher. .  .  .  .  23:48, 9 April 2007 (UTC)

Comments

'''Approved by Inquisitorius - Inq:Grappa (Rodian) 02:17, 9 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Any objections to the lack of images will be stricken. There aren't any. -- http://images.wikia.com/starwars/images/e/e5/ATATatarismall.png 21:20, 8 April 2007 (UTC)
 * I want "tapir" to be un-redlinked. :-P Cull Tremayne 23:08, 8 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Taken care of. -- Imp http://images.wikia.com/starwars/images/e/e5/ATATatarismall.png 03:33, 9 April 2007 (UTC)

Ahto City
Support
 * 1) -- Shaelas (HoloConference)[[Image:Czerka Logo.JPG|30px]] 06:29, 9 April 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) KEJ 08:04, 9 April 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) Nice work, Shaelas. I know how much work that must have been. - Sarendipity  Talk [[Image:Atrissig.jpg|20px]] 04:05, 10 April 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) .  .  .  .  04:15, 10 April 2007 (UTC)

Oppose
 * Some of the intro is in present tense. --Eyrezer 07:29, 9 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Corrected.-- Shaelas (HoloConference)[[Image:Czerka Logo.JPG|30px]] 15:48, 9 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Too many images. -- Imp http://images.wikia.com/starwars/images/e/e5/ATATatarismall.png 18:48, 16 April 2007 (UTC)
 * No there's not, I checked.-- Shaelas (Ahto High Court)[[Image:Czerka Logo.JPG|30px]] 22:39, 18 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Still too many images. --Imperialles 22:06, 26 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Not so much too many images, IMO, but the placement that is the problem. I'd move the walls of Ahto up to the history section, and remove Yortal Ixlis's image. It's a little wonky on a standard resolution. Jorrel [[Image:Wiki-shrinkable.png|20px]] Fraajic 23:22, 26 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Copyedit this. Imperial and Force-sensitive both get capitalized, among others. Atarumaster88  21:24, 21 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Done.-- Shaelas (Ahto High Court)[[Image:Czerka Logo.JPG|30px]] 16:55, 22 April 2007 (UTC)
 * I further copy edited the history section. Jorrel [[Image:Wiki-shrinkable.png|20px]] Fraajic 23:22, 26 April 2007 (UTC)
 * One thing before I'll vote support: History needs sectioning. It needs to be broken up, if only with two subsections. Jorrel [[Image:Wiki-shrinkable.png|20px]] Fraajic 23:22, 26 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Done.-- Shaelas (Ahto High Court)[[Image:Czerka Logo.JPG|30px]] 21:49, 27 April 2007 (UTC)

Comments
 * Let's see if this goes as well as the others.-- Shaelas (HoloConference)[[Image:Czerka Logo.JPG|30px]] 06:29, 9 April 2007 (UTC)
 * The Notable residents or visitors section is cool! --Eyrezer 07:29, 9 April 2007 (UTC)
 * It is, but it would be even cooler if it listed all notable (named) residents and visitors like Tansarii Point Station does. KEJ 08:04, 9 April 2007 (UTC)
 * That swoop image should be replaced with one of the Ahto City swoop track (it's Citadel Station now). It's not rules-based, though, so I'm not objecting on it. - Lord Hydronium 19:27, 12 April 2007 (UTC)
 * I can't find one. I can't make one either. I am not sure what function the computer has to allow you to upload images from a game, but I don't even have the game for the PC. So someone else would have to get an image. I'm sorry.-- Shaelas (Ahto High Court)[[Image:Czerka Logo.JPG|30px]] 20:27, 12 April 2007 (UTC)

Zayne Carrick
Support Oppose
 * 1) Nominated. - Sikon 13:55, 9 April 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Darthchristian   ( Hey! ) 16:29, 9 April 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) A compelling read. .  .  .  .  23:31, 9 April 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) --Eyrezer 02:49, 10 April 2007 (UTC)
 * 5) Lord Hydronium 10:25, 15 April 2007 (UTC)
 * 6) Well done. Greyman ( Paratus )
 * Fix up those couple of unreferenced paragraghs. -- Darthchristian  ( Hey! ) 14:39, 9 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Sourced unsourced paragraphs I could find, except for the intro, which doesn't need to be sourced. - Sikon 14:52, 9 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Unsourced quote in the "Master Raana's bounty" section. -- Imp http://images.wikia.com/starwars/images/e/e5/ATATatarismall.png 18:49, 16 April 2007 (UTC)
 * POV, esp. in intro Atarumaster88  21:28, 21 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Where exactly? - Sikon 07:37, 22 April 2007 (UTC)

Comments
 * I guess this is exempt from Fourdot's FA contest, because so many people worked on it since the beginning of the comic series. - Sikon 14:00, 9 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Yeah, it probably is...sorry for misleading you there, Sikon. There's still a lot of KOTOR articles than need FAmanship, though, so if you still want to go for gold, the opportunity is there. .  .  .  .  00:58, 10 April 2007 (UTC)

Melvin Fett
Support
 * 1) Imp http://images.wikia.com/starwars/images/e/e5/ATATatarismall.png 19:05, 9 April 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) .  .  .  .  22:12, 9 April 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) Why not? KEJ 07:59, 10 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Hah, even though this is not canon, it's awesome :P  Stake black   msg 19:43, 10 April 2007 (UTC)
 * 1) Ballin! Chack Jadson 01:38, 5 May 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Thanos6 00:07, 6 May 2007 (UTC)

Oppose
 * This article claims that Chee declared the story non-canon in a forum post, but doesn't provide a link to it. - Sikon 10:07, 10 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Removed. -- Imp http://images.wikia.com/starwars/images/e/e5/ATATatarismall.png 06:45, 24 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Is there a source for "He was related to fellow hunters Jango and Boba Fett on the mother's side"? From the body, that sounds like it's speculative. - Lord Hydronium 03:05, 17 April 2007 (UTC)
 * I'd say its based on the fact that a) He's Boba's cousin B) Boba had only one parent c) That parent, Jango, had only one sibling D) That sibling was female. QuentinGeorge 07:05, 18 April 2007 (UTC)
 * We don't know that Jango only had one sibling. -LtNOWIS 07:10, 18 April 2007 (UTC)
 * It's not bad speculation, but the intro states it as fact. And I suppose it's also an assumption that he's Boba's first cousin. - Lord Hydronium 07:12, 18 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Removed. -- Imp http://images.wikia.com/starwars/images/e/e5/ATATatarismall.png 06:45, 24 April 2007 (UTC)

Comments
 * It may be a little short, but there's little more actual information I can add. -- Imp http://images.wikia.com/starwars/images/e/e5/ATATatarismall.png 19:05, 9 April 2007 (UTC)

Cannok
Support
 * 1) - Solus (Bird of Prey)  22:56, 9 April 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) .  .  .  .  00:10, 10 April 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) -- Shaelas (Ahto High Court)[[Image:Czerka Logo.JPG|30px]] 23:14, 10 April 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) --Eyrezer 09:38, 3 May 2007 (UTC)

Oppose
 * Infobox image of poor quality. Rule 15.-- Shaelas (HoloConference)[[Image:Czerka Logo.JPG|30px]] 23:20, 9 April 2007 (UTC)
 * I am unable to get any better, and, frankly, it seems of pretty good quality to me. What's wrong with it?- Solus (Bird of Prey)  23:41, 9 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Too much speculation and pointless bits. Examples:
 * "They were not known to be cannibalistic." Do we need to note everything that a species isn't? I'm sure there's a lot of things they're not, but unless this is something particularly important or unusual, I don't see the point of it. Similarly, "Interestingly, they were never known to claw anyone."
 * The entire last paragraph of "Characteristics". Too many "maybe"s. - Lord Hydronium 10:06, 15 April 2007 (UTC)
 * I believe this has been fixed. Does it meet with your approval?- Solus (Bird of Prey)  17:26, 15 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Is 100% guaranteed that Exile did slay all the cannoks? If so, then I'll strike. Atarumaster88  21:32, 21 April 2007 (UTC)
 * I double checked this fact and it proved untrue, and it has been fixed in the article. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  21:44, 21 April 2007 (UTC)

Comments
 * A test if you will. For the Wookiee-Cast thingy (See also the early entry Atton Rand). Note for the 4dot especially and for anyone else that has eyes maybe: See note under the Laigrek nom. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  22:56, 9 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Needs a few more quotes though. Put some in and I'll vote.-- Shaelas (HoloConference)[[Image:Czerka Logo.JPG|30px]] 23:10, 9 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Quotes. All right. Got it. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  23:41, 9 April 2007 (UTC)
 * This has been deemed an appropriate submission for the Wookiee-Cast Featured Article Competition. .  .  .  .  00:19, 10 April 2007 (UTC)
 * I'd like to see a pic from the original comic series if possible. --Eyrezer 09:38, 3 May 2007 (UTC)
 * I'll see if I can do that. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  22:12, 3 May 2007 (UTC)
 * Added two comic pics, one from Legacy and one from TOTJ. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  23:34, 3 May 2007 (UTC)

Laigrek
Support
 * 1) - Solus (Bird of Prey)  22:56, 9 April 2007 (UTC)
 * 2)  .  .  .  .  02:47, 10 April 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) -- Shaelas (Ahto High Court)[[Image:Czerka Logo.JPG|30px]] 23:13, 10 April 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) Atarumaster88  21:35, 21 April 2007 (UTC)

Oppose
 * Infobox image of poor quality. Rule 15.-- Shaelas (HoloConference)[[Image:Czerka Logo.JPG|30px]] 23:20, 9 April 2007 (UTC)
 * I'll see what I can do about that.- Solus (Bird of Prey)  23:50, 9 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Redemption fixed it up nicely. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  00:13, 10 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Cut content within prose. .  .  .  .  00:14, 10 April 2007 (UTC)
 * By that I assume you mean culling. Will can do. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  00:15, 10 April 2007 (UTC)
 * No, I mean the cut content should not be noted within the main body of the article. .  .  .  .  00:20, 10 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Oh, okay. I'll revert my culling and take out the cut content. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  00:24, 10 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Done. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  00:30, 10 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Actually, the cut content is meant to stay in the main body of the article as the CT ended with no consensus on having it removed. That's the entire point in the cutstart and cutend templates. &mdash;Jaymach Ral'Tir (talk) 13:34, 12 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Speculation/pointless comments:
 * "Though an insect" - is that confirmed? They're called "insectoid" everywhere else in the article.
 * "It is unknown if they could walk up walls." Why note this?
 * "they lowered themselves to the ground to reduce air drag" - is this canon or speculation?
 * Not part of the above examples, but "They emitted a shrieking, clicking, chirping kind of scream." just sounds really unencyclopedic. - Lord Hydronium 10:41, 15 April 2007 (UTC)
 * This has been mostly addressed. In the third example, it is a fact that they lowered themselves, though 'to reduce air drag' is speculation and has been removed. For the last example, may I know what is unencyclopedic about it? I am not questioning you, I just am unable to fix it until I know what to fix. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  17:35, 15 April 2007 (UTC)
 * It's all those adjectives piled on in a row, along with "kind of"; it sounds very informal. - Lord Hydronium 02:54, 17 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Okay, I think this has been taken care of. It's been changed to "a chirping shriek."- Solus (Bird of Prey)  11:30, 17 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Lead quote is unsourced. Green Tentacle (Talk) 21:13, 15 April 2007 (UTC)
 * How could I miss that? Anyway, it's sourced now.- Solus (Bird of Prey)  22:16, 15 April 2007 (UTC)

Comments
 * Another experiment. May have fanwankery, but that's why the Inqs have a shot at it. For the Wookiee-Cast thingy. NOTE: See big note under the GH-7 nom. Right now! I demand it. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  22:56, 9 April 2007 (UTC)
 * You must put in more images before I can vote.-- Shaelas (HoloConference)[[Image:Czerka Logo.JPG|30px]] 23:14, 9 April 2007 (UTC)
 * I'll ask Redemption.- Solus (Bird of Prey)  23:50, 9 April 2007 (UTC)
 * More quotes are available I think.-- Shaelas (HoloConference)[[Image:Czerka Logo.JPG|30px]] 23:23, 9 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Yes, but you'll have to give me some time to get to the part in the game and take notes. Bear with me. PS I have to play it on another computer that mine can't talk to, because my computer can't play TSL, so I can't toss a screencap from that computer to mine, and I am unable to upload images on the other. Just to clear up any confusion.- Solus (Bird of Prey)  23:50, 9 April 2007 (UTC)
 * This has been deemed an appropriate submission for the Wookiee-Cast Featured Article Competition. .  .  .  .  00:23, 10 April 2007 (UTC)

GH-7 medical analysis unit
Support
 * 1) - Solus (Bird of Prey)  22:56, 9 April 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) .  .  .  .  00:27, 10 April 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) -- Shaelas (Ahto High Court)[[Image:Czerka Logo.JPG|30px]] 23:13, 10 April 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) jSarek 21:22, 15 April 2007 (UTC)
 * 5) Lord Hydronium 03:52, 17 April 2007 (UTC)
 * 6) Green Tentacle (Talk) 09:21, 25 April 2007 (UTC)
 * 7)  Stake black   msg 16:55, 30 April 2007 (UTC)

Oppose Comments
 * 1) Infobox image needs sourcing and cleanup of its infobox template. jSarek 03:11, 15 April 2007(UTC)
 * 2) *Done. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  11:53, 15 April 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) **Not quite. The image is clearly not a screenshot from ROTS. .  .  .  .  12:00, 15 April 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) ***I wasn't aware of that. After some digging though, I found the source.- Solus (Bird of Prey)  17:19, 15 April 2007 (UTC)
 * 5) ****And, with a little tweak to the copyright template, it now meets with my approval. jSarek 21:22, 15 April 2007 (UTC)
 * 6) It's a fairly minor point but the reference to their use on Boz Pity in the intro should be expanded on within the main article as it is currently unsourced. Green Tentacle (Talk) 09:35, 23 April 2007 (UTC)
 * My lab rat-droid-thing. For the Wookiee-Cast thingy. BIG NOTE: See big important note under the Ravager nom. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  22:56, 9 April 2007 (UTC)
 * A few more images are needed before my vote can be cast.-- Shaelas (HoloConference)[[Image:Czerka Logo.JPG|30px]] 23:12, 9 April 2007 (UTC)
 * I added a pic, any more would be overkill.- Solus (Bird of Prey)  23:48, 9 April 2007 (UTC)
 * More quotes are available I think.-- Shaelas (HoloConference)[[Image:Czerka Logo.JPG|30px]] 23:23, 9 April 2007 (UTC)
 * I can get a quote from the droid, if you'll just give me a sec. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  23:48, 9 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Added quote. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  00:03, 10 April 2007 (UTC)
 * This has been deemed an appropriate submission for the Wookiee-Cast Featured Article Competition. .  .  .  .  00:27, 10 April 2007 (UTC)

Jango Fett
Support Oppose Comments
 * 1) Darthchristian   ( Hey! ) 17:49, 15 April 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Jango Fett107 16:56, 16 April 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) Yeah, I can see it Enochf 23:07, 17 April 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) (In Tem's accent) Looks good to me. Adamwankenobi 03:35, 20 April 2007 (UTC)
 * 5) yeah man! General Mandofett  Wrist Holoprojector[[Image:Mandskull.jpg|20px]] 11:53, 21 April 2007 (UTC)
 * 6) Good to see a major character nom.  Atarumaster88  21:49, 21 April 2007 (UTC)
 * 7) Good article! DARTH SIDIOUS2 18:34, 22 April 2007 (UTC)
 * 8)  Stake black   msg 16:53, 30 April 2007 (UTC)
 * 9) DWolf2k2 16:38, 4 May 2007 (UTC)
 * 10) (nods) Thefourdotelipsis 23:41, 12 May 2007 (UTC)
 * Unsourced quote. Green Tentacle (Talk) 21:35, 15 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Fixed. -- Darthchristian  ( Hey! ) 12:13, 16 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Quotes in prose, and a few unsourced statements in the BtS, but otherwise, fine. .  .  .  .  22:49, 15 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Fixed. --Jango Fett107 14:54, 28 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Severely lacking in detail to the point where, unless you've read the sources, it's almost impossible to understand what actually happened. Havac 19:11, 22 April 2007 (UTC)
 * I want more sources for the "Weapons" section. -- Imp http://images.wikia.com/starwars/images/e/e5/ATATatarismall.png 06:40, 24 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Fixed. -- Darthchristian  ( Hey! ) 14:14, 25 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Breaks Rule 9; I recall that Jango appears in some Tales stories and those aren't mentioned in the article. Atarumaster88  01:51, 29 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Which ones? -- Darthchristian  ( Hey! ) 18:36, 29 April 2007 (UTC)
 * I know for sure there's a story in volume 6 and a non-canon in vol. 5. Atarumaster88  20:43, 29 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Fett Club is the non-canon. Atarumaster88 16:49, 4 May 2007 (UTC)

Anzat
Support Oppose
 * 1) Let's see how this one does.- Solus (Bird of Prey)  17:15, 20 April 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) -- Shaelas (Ahto High Court)[[Image:Czerka Logo.JPG|30px]] 11:19, 21 April 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) Atarumaster88  22:07, 21 April 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) Thefourdotelipsis 00:20, 25 April 2007 (UTC)
 * 5) Green Tentacle (Talk) 09:22, 27 April 2007 (UTC)
 * 6) Lord Hydronium 10:09, 10 May 2007 (UTC)

Comments
 * This just happens to be the quickest way in finding out what needs to be done in an article&mdash;and if you want more quotes, I don't have any sources that include Anzati in it (besides NEGAS, and that's a little short on quotes), so I'd needs some help there.- Solus (Bird of Prey)  17:15, 20 April 2007 (UTC)
 * I'd like to see an "Anzati in the galaxy" section as per Selkath, Drovian, Tunroth etc. The feral Anzat section would be incorporated into this. --Eyrezer 08:52, 3 May 2007 (UTC)
 * Due to the low amount of knowledge concerning their history, the 'History' section is basically a section concerning the Anzati in the galaxy, with a little background info. - Solus  (Bird of Prey)  22:14, 3 May 2007 (UTC)

Shelkar
Support
 * 1) -- Shaelas (Ahto High Court)[[Image:Czerka Logo.JPG|30px]] 11:17, 21 April 2007 (UTC)

Oppose
 * Factual error: No proof whatsoever that Revan did the Sunry quest. -- Imp http://images.wikia.com/starwars/images/e/e5/ATATatarismall.png 17:43, 21 April 2007 (UTC)
 * I fixed it.-- Shaelas (Ahto High Court)[[Image:Czerka Logo.JPG|30px]] 18:53, 21 April 2007 (UTC)

Comments
 * I'm not sure if this is a rule yet, but this is only about 900 words. I'm not sure you could get 100 more words without stretching and additional redundant wording. As well as this is now the what, fourth article about a Selkath topic? They all seems to cover the exact same kind of information, as most had some mention of the court proceedings. Cull Tremayne 20:01, 21 April 2007 (UTC)
 * It's not a rule yet. Nothing close either. Also, all four Selkath-related nominations are based off of one source (for the most part), how much information do you think your going to get?-- Shaelas (Ahto High Court)[[Image:Czerka Logo.JPG|30px]] 21:03, 21 April 2007 (UTC)
 * I don't think I'm going to get different information. That's exactly my point. Cull Tremayne 21:30, 21 April 2007 (UTC)
 * I count 958 words, for what it's worth. -LtNOWIS 21:47, 21 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Sans headers, images, and quotes, I only count 933. Cull Tremayne 22:05, 21 April 2007 (UTC)

Battle of Endor
Support
 * 1) Excellent article on one of the Galaxy's greatest battles. Chack Jadson 19:20, 23 April 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Unit 8311 13:22, 27 April 2007 (UTC)

Oppose Comments
 * Needs referencing, longer intro, and info from The Truce at Bakura Sourcebook (namely the use of Interdictors and the DSII's gravity well, and more on the post-Death-Star-destruction battle). - Lord Hydronium 19:44, 23 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Per Hydro. .  .  .  .  23:18, 24 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Redundant mention of Tantor's actions. Also needs fully referenced. A diagram (if one exists) from NEGVV would be nice. Atarumaster88  16:41, 27 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Per Lord Hydronium. Adamwankenobi 00:11, 5 May 2007 (UTC)
 * I've done what I can. Can someone with the above-mentioned sourcebook add that info? Oh, and by the way, how's the sourcing? I think there are still a few things that need to be sourced. Unfortunately, I don't know what the sources are, so if anyone with knowledge encounters some curious unsourced info, could you please source it? Chack Jadson 20:59, 26 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Ataru, I don't believe there is one from that book. Chack Jadson 14:04, 28 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Fixed Ataru. Could you strike your objection or is more needed? Chack Jadson 18:55, 28 April 2007 (UTC)

Durge
Support Oppose Comments
 * 1) Imperialles 15:56, 27 April 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Atarumaster88  16:43, 27 April 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) Finally. Jorrel [[Image:Wiki-shrinkable.png|20px]] Fraajic 17:38, 27 April 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) Excellent job by Imp of cleaning this up. Chack Jadson 18:55, 28 April 2007 (UTC)
 * 5) Green Tentacle (Talk) 10:36, 3 May 2007 (UTC)
 * 6) Adamwankenobi 00:09, 5 May 2007 (UTC)
 * 7)  Gonk  ( Gonk! ) 16:47, 12 May 2007 (UTC)
 * 1) Needs a picture of his original armor, from the Visionaries story. &mdash;Jaymach Ral'Tir (talk) 12:34, 29 April 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Let's remove that horrible bullet in the BtS and turn it into a nice, sexy paragraph. QuentinGeorge 11:58, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) *I am Green Tentacle, destroyer of bullets! By which I mean, it's done. Green Tentacle (Talk) 12:01, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
 * I'd like to see those redlinks cleared up. --Eyrezer 06:37, 11 May 2007 (UTC)

Tumble bunny trainer
Support
 * 1) And this time, it's for money. Thefourdotelipsis 05:40, 29 April 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Imperialles 13:55, 29 April 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) My mind is screaming at me not to vote for this, but it's a great article. Darthchristian   ( Hey! ) 00:04, 30 April 2007 (UTC)
 * 4)  Stake black   msg 16:57, 30 April 2007 (UTC)
 * 5) Yep. Chack Jadson 00:34, 2 May 2007 (UTC)
 * 6) TBT owns. Adamwankenobi 00:08, 5 May 2007 (UTC)

Oppose

Comments

Confederacy of Independent Systems
Support Oppose
 * 1) Unit 8311 15:53, 8 May 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Fav article.TroybTalk contribs[[Image:Troyb.jpg|20px]] 18:24, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) Good article DARTH SIDIOUS2 Discussion board 15:36, 11 May 2007 (UTC)
 * 1) Intro needs expanding (Rule 7). Needs to be completely sourced (Rule 11). Needs more appearances and sources (Rule 3). Needs serious expansion throughout (Examples: the entire Clone Wars section is five paragraphs, four of which are about the Battle of Geonosis and three of which are just two sentences; the whole government section is two short paragraphs; just about every other section is equally patchy) (Rules 1&9). Unsourced images (Rule 12). - Lord Hydronium 10:27, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Per Lord Hydro. History is too short. Chack Jadson 19:57, 10 May 2007 (UTC)

Comments
 * I've been expanding the history section. Would appreciate it if others would help. Unit 8311 15:40, 11 May 2007 (UTC)

K'Kruhk
Support
 * 1) QuentinGeorge 11:17, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Kuralyov 13:47, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
 * 3)  StarNeptune Talk to me! 16:04, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) &mdash;Grand Admiral J. Nebulax (Imperial Holovision) [[Image:Imperial Emblem.png|20px]] 21:57, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
 * 5) JMAS 22:16, 10 May 2007 (UTC)

Oppose
 * Expand intro, section the Clone Wars...section, and I cock my eyebrow, sah, at the sectioning of the BtS. Thefourdotelipsis 11:33, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
 * Intro and sectioning done. Can't see what's wrong the BtS. It looks crap as a bullet or one massive chunky paragraph. QuentinGeorge 11:44, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
 * Ditch the portrayal subsection. And expand...something. Note that he's the only EU -based character to be in Clone Wars. Previously established. You know what I mean. Thefourdotelipsis 12:09, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
 * Aayla was in the Clone Wars as well. But done, anyway. QuentinGeorge 12:10, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
 * Too cursory in its coverage. It could use a lot of fleshing out. Also, we know that there will be a flood of information on K'Kruhk between now and its actually being featured, so it might be best to hold off anyway. Havac 18:05, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
 * Tell me where it needs to be expanded, and I'll expand it. The fact he is going to make more appearances isn't an objection as we featured Darth Bane shortly before the release of Path of Destruction. QuentinGeorge 21:04, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
 * Havac, look at the queue. Even approving this today would mean, at earliest, it doesn't appear on the front page until April 2008. Plenty of time for his Legacy and Dark Times appearances to be fully integrated in before he shows up on the front page. QuentinGeorge 21:28, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
 * Oh, I'm not objecting on those grounds. Just suggesting that holding off a bit could improve it. But anway, all the Republic stuff, bar Seleucamai, reads like a very breezy overview -- he went here and fought there and this person died, but there's no feel of what happened. Take, for example, the Vos/Viento thing. It says he was assigned to protect Viento, Vos assassinated Viento, he got hurt. It's lacking in substance. Mention the fact that Vos sneaked past him at night. Mention that he caught Quin just too late. Mention that they went over the balcony in the fight and K'Kruhk bounced off an airspeeder and was lucky to survive. As is, it covers everything, but not to the comprehensive level expected of a featured article. Also, looking again, it could use a powers and talents section -- his healing skill could be mentioned there. And I'm also objecting on grounds of image quality now -- putting the Clone Wars crap as his main pic over one of Jan's far more realistic and detailed drawings is a clear mistake. If you want a headshot, find a Jan headshot or crop a Jan full-body shot down. Havac 21:44, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
 * Well, I disagree that his animated depiction is "crap", but will replace with a comic headshot if that is what people want. I was mainly trying to put a bit of variety in, since I'd used all comic depictions in the biography. QuentinGeorge 21:54, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
 * As I side note, some of the detail requirements for these bios seem faintly ridiculous in that we have to chronicle every single step someone takes but, if those are the rules, then those are the rules and I will comply. QuentinGeorge 21:54, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
 * The image from the cartoon doesn't do the article much good. It should be replaced with a shot from one of the comics (perhaps the Dark Times one?). &mdash;Grand Admiral J. Nebulax (Imperial Holovision) [[Image:Imperial Emblem.png|20px]] 21:57, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
 * Jack, I've already said I'm going to replace the image and your antics on the Muun page don't exactly inspire confidence in your ability to spot a good one. QuentinGeorge 22:11, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
 * Additionally, I'd rather you didn't do a "cleanup" of the article when I'm trying to expand the damn thing. 22:14, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
 * Why are you lashing out at me? I give my opinion on the main image and then try to clean up the article, and then you scold me as if I did something wrong. What's your problem? &mdash;Grand Admiral J. Nebulax (Imperial Holovision) [[Image:Imperial Emblem.png|20px]] 22:16, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
 * Karohalva I oppose this article on the grounds that using a Clone Wars Cartoon picture in the info-box is a crime against Star Wars. It sounds silly, yes, but it is true.
 * Please read what I have written above. I am going to replace it, as soon as I find a suitable headshot. QuentinGeorge 22:03, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
 * Oops. Sorry then. What say you just crop a full-body shot? That should be Wookieepedian-legal. Karohalva
 * I have to agree with Jack about the CW image for the infobox. I don't think it's crap, but I don't think it's the kind of image we want for an infobox unless there is no other option, such as with the Voolvif Monn and Foul Moudama articles. I went ahead and cropped the Siege of Saleucami image to just his headshot and put that up in the infobox. Does that meet everyone's approval? - JMAS 22:22, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
 * Eh, I said it's "crap" because a) I don't like the CW animation style and b) it's far less detailed and realistic than the comics pictures. It certainly deserves to be in the article, but it's not nearly a good enough depiction to be his main shot when better alternatives exist. It would be like using this as the infobox shot for Jerec. Or basically, what JMAS just edit-conflicted with me to say. Havac 22:25, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
 * I think this new image is much better. And Quentin, don't lash out at me again. &mdash;Grand Admiral J. Nebulax (Imperial Holovision) [[Image:Imperial Emblem.png|20px]] 22:26, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
 * Oh, please. Don't be so melodramatic. 22:28, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
 * Ok, I don't really mind what image is used, and I'm happy to go with that one. I'm at work now, so I'll do a "Talents and Powers" section when I get home. If anyone else has more they'd like added, please tell me. In terms of images, I think its probably ok how it is now. Less is more. QuentinGeorge 22:28, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
 * Melodramatic? I'm not the one who lashed out at another user just because they suggested a new main image and tried to clean up an article. &mdash;Grand Admiral J. Nebulax (Imperial Holovision) [[Image:Imperial Emblem.png|20px]] 22:32, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
 * This page is not designed for user arguments. Cool it please. Atarumaster88  00:37, 11 May 2007 (UTC)
 * Back on topic, I have (once again) cleaned up the article. &mdash;Grand Admiral J. Nebulax (Imperial Holovision) [[Image:Imperial Emblem.png|20px]] 00:42, 11 May 2007 (UTC)


 * I've significantly changed the article, added more, added a abilities section, etc. Any more objections? 07:33, 11 May 2007 (UTC)

Comments
 * Aware that it may be short. Would be willing to listen to expansion suggestions. QuentinGeorge 11:17, 10 May 2007 (UTC)