Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Fall of Bastion


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Fall of Bastion

 * Nominated by: DC 07:17, 16 August 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Insert smart-aleck comment here.

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Support
 * 1)  Aqua  Unasi  02:46, 20 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) Good work (GOOD! ged it?? ;D) - Kingpin13Cantina Battle Ground 07:03, 20 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) Graestan ( Talk ) 23:57, 21 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) Cavalier One ( Squadron channel ) 17:45, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) A bit choppy, but very well done.  Ifindyourlackoffaithdisturbing  ( Oya Manda! ) 01:39, 10 September 2008 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) Kingpin13:
 * 2) * Bold in quote. Now I’m aware that this is from a comic, but I’m not sure about the bold. I’d say change this to just italic.
 * 3) **Un-bolded it.
 * 4) * Could use, if possible with-out messing up the article layout, one or two more images.
 * 5) **It would screw up the layout. Im sorry. =(
 * 6) * I haven’t read this comic, as I’m not a big fan of comics. But are you sure that it doesn’t have more appearances? (e.g. mentioned in the next comic)
 * 7) **It is mentioned in more issues. I guess I forgot about that. =P
 * 8) * ”Though his daughter was on the run, Fel ordered his Imperial Knights, especially Draco and Krieg, to keep away from Marasiah” could be expanded worded better (i.e. Why especially Draco and Krieg? Why should they keep away from her anyway?).
 * 9) **Expanded on that.
 * 10) *Otherwise seems like a good article to me, I might spot a few more things, and quite a lot of the spelling was off, don’t know if I got it all so you may want to check over that. Keep it up! - Kingpin13Cantina Battle Ground
 * 11) **Thanks for the review. DC 02:28, 20 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 12) From the homeword filled desk of Aqua Unasi
 * 13) * Can you source the Previous, Concurrent, and Next battles in the infobox?
 * 14) **I believed that was aganist the MOS, but I checked some battle FA's, and they have those sourced. Fixed.
 * 15) * With Bastion under Fel's command, Fel moved to gather his forces against Fel, hoping to keep his quiet takeover of Bastion a secret to the galaxy, especially to Krayt. I'm assuming one of those Fels is supposed to be something else...
 * 16) **Yes, I see whre you're coming from. Fixed.
 * 17) * Ditto on Kingpin's objection: Why did Fel order the Knights to stay away from his daughter?
 * 18) **See the above.
 * 19) *Nice article :)  Aqua  Unasi  16:08, 19 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 20) **Thanks for the review. DC 02:27, 20 August 2008 (UTC)

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