Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Crimson Jack


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Crimson Jack

 * Nominated by: -- Cull Tremayne 02:06, 8 October 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: This might have some awkward wording.

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Support
 * 1)  Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 03:12, 12 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 2)  Greyman ( Talk ) 09:20, 20 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 3)  Jaina Solo ( Talk ) [[Image:Jainasolosig.gif |25px]] 20:19, 21 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) You might want to mention that he was a bit gullible in falling for Han's ruses more than once, and the term "was able to" was a tad overused, but otherwise excellent. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 20:33, 9 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) *Removed a few of the "was able to"s, at least so that there's no more than one per section header. I'm reluctant to call him gullible, since he tricked Solo a couple times as well. Cull Tremayne 11:20, 10 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 6) Best. Outfit. Ever. --  Darth Culator  (Talk) 02:44, 11 November 2008 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) From the desk of Atarumaster88
 * 2) * "A short time after releasing Solo, Jack and his crew made another high profile capture, Princess Leia Organa, who was on a mission to rescue the Rebel hero, Luke Skywalker, who had been lost in the Drexel system, found her ship caught in the tractor beam of Crimson Jack." Bit of a run-on; not sure on the best fix here.
 * 3) **Wow, now that is ugly. Reworded.
 * 4) *Otherwise clean aside from some small tweaks. Have a Super Terrific Friendly Un-frustrating day. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 02:57, 12 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) **Thanks for the review. :D Cull Tremayne 03:02, 12 October 2008 (UTC)

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