Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations



This page is for the nomination of "comprehensive articles". For a list of "comprehensive articles", see Category:Wookieepedia comprehensive articles.


 * CAN archiving checklist

What is a "comprehensive article?"

A "comprehensive article" is an article that contains all information regarding the topic. Often, "comprehensive articles" cannot reach Featured or Good Article status due to their limited content. This process is intended to recognize articles that contain all relevant canon information, yet are still under the 250 word limit required for a Good Article. The purpose of this is twofold&mdash;firstly, to help users distinguish what is a stub, and what is merely a short article with no further relevant material to be added, and, more importantly, to highlight for the reader when they are reading something that has been judged definitely "comprehensive"&mdash;that is, a guarantee to the reader that whatever they are reading contains the sum total of all available content.

Nominations and promotions of the Comprehensive article process are overseen by a collective of users known as the "EduCorps," which is made up of the Inquisitorius, the AgriCorps, and various other experienced users who are considered qualified to adequately judge the nominated material.

Lucasfilm Ltd. and its many licensees continue to expand the Star Wars universe. Since new information might become available, it may be necessary to revoke a "comprehensive article's" status. A forum will be used to nominate articles that have fallen out-of-date. Members of the EduCorps will then post a warning template on that page, and a grace period of one week will be instituted in which the article can be improved. If there is a significant amount of new information, it is likely that once updated, the article will become eligible for Good article status, and thereby ineligible for Comprehensive article status.

READ THIS FIRST!

An article must&hellip;


 * 1) &hellip;be well-written and detailed.
 * 2) &hellip;be unbiased, non-point of view.
 * 3) &hellip;be sourced with all available sources and appearances.
 * 4) &hellip;follow the Manual of Style, Layout Guide, and all other policies on Wookieepedia. This is, of course, within reason. If a topic only has a very limited degree of content that cannot be divided up into the relevant article sections, it is not required that it follow the Layout Guide precisely. This is to be judged on a case-by-case basis.
 * 5) &hellip;following the review process, be stable, i.e., does not change significantly from day to day and is not the subject of ongoing edit wars. This does not apply to vandalism and protection or semi-protection as a result of vandalism.
 * 6) &hellip;not be tagged with any sort of improvement tags (i.e. more sources, expand, etc).
 * 7) &hellip;have no redlinks.
 * 8) &hellip;have all relevant canon information presented.
 * 9) &hellip;be completely referenced for all available material and sources. See Sourcing for more information. While this is not required for an article possessing a singular source, it is encouraged, as it provides both uniformity and a good infrastructure should the topic be referenced in any future materials.
 * 10) &hellip;have all quotes and images sourced.
 * 11) &hellip;provide at least one relevant quote on the article if available.
 * 12) &hellip;include a "Behind the scenes" section for In-Universe articles.
 * 13) &hellip;counting the introduction and "Behind the scenes" material, must not exceed 250 words in length (not including captions, quotes, or headers, etc). Any articles exceeding the limit should be taken to the Good Article nominations page for consideration.

How to nominate:


 * 1) First, nominate an article you find is worthy of comprehensive status, putting it at the bottom of the list below. Nominated articles must meet all thirteen requirements stated above.
 * 2) Add CAnom at the top of the article you are nominating.
 * 3) Be sure to place sign in the "Nominated by" line when the nomination is posted for voting.
 * 4) Others will object to the nomination if they disagree that the article is good enough; they will then supply reasons for doing so, and ways to improve the article in accordance with the established rules.
 * 5) Nominators and supporters will adjust the article until the objectors (with reasonable objections) are satisfied. Objectors may also make alterations&mdash;if there is any reason for contention on a given point, it should be settled in a civil manner in the nomination field itself.
 * 6) Users may not vote on their own articles.
 * 7) There is no limit to the amount of nominations a given user can submit at any given time.

How to vote:


 * 1) Before doing anything, be sure to read the article completely, keeping a sharp eye out for mistakes.
 * 2) Afterward, compare the article to the criteria listed above, and then either support or object the article's nomination.
 * 3) *If you object, please supply concrete reasons for doing so, and how it can be improved.
 * 4) As stated above, any objections will be looked upon by the nominator, supporters, and anyone willing to improve the article, and action will be taken to please the objectors. Do not strike other users' objections; it is up to the objector to review the changes and strike if they are satisfied.
 * 5) There are several ways in which an article can receive the required number of votes. Within a 48-hour period of nomination, only EduCorps votes will count towards the total, although anyone may choose to vote in that window. If two members of the EduCorps support a nomination in that window, and there are no outstanding objections, the article can be considered a "Comprehensive article" and by tagged with the template 48 hours after the initial nomination.  The talk page will also be tagged with the CA template. When the 48 hours are up, any user's votes will contribute towards the total. If one EduCorps member has voted for an article after a week, three regular votes will be required. After the 48 hour period, an article can still also pass with just two EduCorps votes.
 * 6) Once a nomination is successful, it will be placed on the Comprehensive article list. Instructions on how to archive nominations, successful or otherwise, can be found here. Anyone can archive a nomination&mdash;just make sure it has the correct number of votes, has been nominated for at least a week (or 48 hours if there are two EC votes), and that there are absolutely no outstanding objections. If you are not sure how to do this, just ask, and someone will likely be more than willing to help you. Also, if you think you can slip one past us, think again&mdash;someone is always watching you.

All nominations will be considered idle and are subject to instantaneous removal by EduCorps members if objections are not addressed, or at least not answered, after a period of 2 weeks.

Barrckli

 * Nominated by: --Eyrezer 11:42, June 7, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: A B species

(2 ECs/1 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Grunny  ( talk ) 23:40, June 20, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2)  Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 12:50, June 21, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) A B bote. Or vote. --Skippy Farlstendoiro 17:03, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Farl: Individual article for the individual? --Skippy Farlstendoiro 12:03, June 7, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) *Done. --Eyrezer 22:20, June 19, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) The OS doesn't specify whether Barrckli refers to a species or some other organization. Can you reframe it to make them an undefined social group? ~ SavageBob 19:44, June 7, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) *Done. --Eyrezer 22:20, June 19, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

SE-14 blaster pistol

 * Nominated by: --KievanMereel 18:32, June 8, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: A commonly-used sidearm in many video games.

(0 ECs/0 Users/0 Total)
Support

Object Comments
 * 1) Consider reading the rules first. -- 1358  (Talk) 17:54, June 8, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Per Rule 8 and 9, the article must be properly sourced, and all sources should be checked prior to nomination. The article fails to do both; please familiarize yourself with the rules above.  JangFett  (Talk) 17:57, June 8, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) * Sourcing updated. Please post any further updates needed and they will be changed.  KievanMereel 00:00, June 22, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) **Do not strike other's objections. They will strike their own objections when they feel that the objection has been adequately addressed. &mdash; Master Jonathan New Jedi Order.svg ( Jedi Council Chambers ) 00:02, June 22, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) ***I still feel like you're missing a lot of sources still. Not only that, most, if not all, of the information is not presented in the article.  JangFett  (Talk) 00:48, June 22, 2010 (UTC)

Mandalore City

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 00:03, June 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Refer to my GAN comment

(0 ECs/5 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1) &mdash; Master Jonathan New Jedi Order.svg ( Jedi Council Chambers ) 00:15, June 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Very, very interesting. Thefourdotelipsis 05:24, June 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 17:49, June 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 08:39, June 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5)  20:39, July 16, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) The final BtS paragraph is not self-sourcing. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 09:49, June 16, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) *Fixed. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 13:51, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Wookiee Trade Guild

 * Nominated by:&mdash; priceline negotiator [[Image:Priceline.JPG|20px]] 22:00, June 16, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: 231 words. I think I can get this to GA with a little more content.

(0 ECs/2 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) --Skippy Farlstendoiro 13:43, June 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Thefourdotelipsis 03:29, June 20, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) * Very good, I'm just not sure that "dismayed" is the right choice of words for the Federation's reaction? Is that how it comes across in Battlefront? I can't remember. Thefourdotelipsis 02:04, June 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) **It was more of just aggravation that an inferior company was not paying their tax. I changed it to aggravation.&mdash; priceline negotiator [[Image:Priceline.JPG|20px]] 02:08, June 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) Fett
 * 4) *Are you certain that you've checked all sources, post-2004? I.e, CSWE, Battlefront's Prima guide? They may have a mentioning somewhere.
 * 5) * Where did this "28 BBY" originate? You keep changing from "In 28 BBY" to "Around 28 BBY."
 * 6) **I changed it to be specific to 28 BBY.&mdash; priceline negotiator [[Image:Priceline.JPG|20px]] 03:17, June 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 7) * In the history, start the section with what the Wookiee Trade Guild was, then go into the whole Taxing.
 * 8) **Done.&mdash; priceline negotiator [[Image:Priceline.JPG|20px]] 03:17, June 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 9) * "The Guild resisted the taxation, much to the aggravation of the Federation," Why did the guild resist to it?
 * 10) **Battlefront doesn't clarify.&mdash; priceline negotiator [[Image:Priceline.JPG|20px]] 03:17, June 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 11) * You mention the Guild built an army to fight against the Trade Federation's army. Did they create their army as a result to fight the droids? Please clarify.
 * 12) **Battlefront doesn't clarify. The Guild just has an army.&mdash; priceline negotiator [[Image:Priceline.JPG|20px]] 03:17, June 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 13) * "[...]began between the Guild's army and the Federation's droid forces, under the leadership of Count Dooku" So Dooku led both armies?
 * 14) **Fixed.&mdash; priceline negotiator [[Image:Priceline.JPG|20px]] 03:17, June 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 15) * The ending of the history is very rough, as you vaguely say "the battle ended because the droids beat the Wookiees." Could you somehow expand the Guild's and their army's role within the battle?
 * 16) **In Battlefront, the battle changes everytime, and especially in the first one, there aren't any set objectives or anything, so there's no set story to the battle. I can't really specify the Guild's role in the abttle other than they were defeated.&mdash; priceline negotiator [[Image:Priceline.JPG|20px]] 03:17, June 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 17) *More to come.  JangFett  (Talk) 03:00, June 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 18) **Please take a look at the changes that I've made. The whole Dooku sending out the droids flows much better.  JangFett  (Talk) 19:29, June 18, 2010 (UTC)
 * 19) Soresu
 * 20) *More detail on the battle is required. I don't remember the specifics of the level, but the size of the Wookiee army can be determined if there is a reinforcement limit, and events of the battle could be extrapolated from the mission objectives.
 * 21) **Reinforcement level, yes. But in the original Battlefront, there are no mission objectives other than the usual (detroying all reinforcements / command post capture). In Battlefront II, there's actually a storyline to the battle.&mdash; priceline negotiator [[Image:Priceline.JPG|20px]] 17:46, June 20, 2010 (UTC)
 * 22) **I added the reinforcements to both sides.&mdash; priceline negotiator [[Image:Priceline.JPG|20px]] 17:52, June 20, 2010 (UTC)
 * 23) ***If I may be excused for butting in here, this is an example of pure game mechanics that don't belong here. If we take the Battlefront reinforcement limits as the canonical size of the armies, then the Republic only had 250 clones at the Battle of Geonosis, which is preposterous. I don't think anything can be taken from the reinforcement limits except that the two armies were of similar size, and even that may be stretching the limits of what is and isn't game mechanics. &mdash; Master Jonathan New Jedi Order.svg ( Jedi Council Chambers ) 20:49, June 20, 2010 (UTC)
 * 24) ****Sorry, but I think I should have clarified my meaning further at the beginning. I think that they represent the minimum amount of troops that were there, not the exact number. I treat it like a mission objective; while it doesn't mean that "only" those events happened, you can at least draw that it occurred. I suppose it is debatable though... SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 05:49, June 23, 2010 (UTC)
 * 25) *Does it actually specifically say that it was dissolved? If it was, it needs to be clearly stated in the History section. However, destruction of headquarters does not necessarily mean the guild was destroyed. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 03:43, June 20, 2010 (UTC)
 * 26) **You raise a good point. I always assumed the Guild was dissolved...&mdash; priceline negotiator [[Image:Priceline.JPG|20px]] 17:46, June 20, 2010 (UTC)
 * 27) ***I took out the "dissolved" part of the infobox.&mdash; priceline negotiator [[Image:Priceline.JPG|20px]] 17:52, June 20, 2010 (UTC)

Comments
 * According to this question and Leland Chee's reply further down the page, the storyline of Star Wars: Battlefront is only S-canon, but the "locations, characters, and technology" are C-canon. That means this article either needs to be tagged with Ambig, or it needs Ambigstart and Ambigend in appropriate locations. I am of the opinion that nothing here falls into C-canon as described by Mr. Chee and that the article should simply be tagged Ambig, but I've never dealt with any ambiguous source before, much less a combination S- and C-canon source like Battlefront. Could someone more knowledgeable about this type of thing chime in? &mdash; Master Jonathan New Jedi Order.svg ( Jedi Council Chambers ) 23:34, June 16, 2010 (UTC)
 * IIRC, if it contradicts C- or G- canon in any way, we need to tag it, but if it jives just fine, there's no need for a tag. Thefourdotelipsis 00:11, June 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * That's not how I understand S-canon. My understanding is that if S-canon "contradicts C- or G- canon in any way", then it becomes non-canon. It's when both there is no contradiction with higher canon and it is not referenced in a higher canon source (both of which I believe are the case here) that it's ambiguous and needs to be tagged as such. At least, that's how I understood it after spending an hour reading through the Holocron questions thread on SW.com to find the one post that I linked above. Did I completely misunderstand something here? &mdash; Master Jonathan New Jedi Order.svg ( Jedi Council Chambers ) 00:17, June 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * I'm not really sure about it, so I'm going to keep the tag off. It doesn't contradict anything right now.&mdash; priceline negotiator [[Image:Priceline.JPG|20px]] 01:34, June 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * This is rather infamously a point of contention&mdash;the only problem I have with adding the ambig tag is that the wording doesn't quite apply to what S-canon is, and the tag, as far as I'm aware, is only used on content from the "ambiguous RPG magazines." Of course, while pretty much everything from Marvel has been referenced elsewhere by now, I can't recall that we ever put any templates on the isolated Marvel content. This falls into much the same category. Perhaps we should have an S-canon tag or something. But as far as I understood S-canon, being "secondary," it's canon until proven otherwise. Thefourdotelipsis 01:56, June 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * Well, Star Wars Tales 1–20 are considered S-canon until referenced or contradicted, and we tag them as ambiguous. It seems to me that for the sake of consistency, we should do the same here. &mdash; Master Jonathan New Jedi Order.svg ( Jedi Council Chambers ) 02:04, June 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * Perhaps, like Thefourdotelipsis says, we should create a template specifically for S-canon sources that have not been contradicted.&mdash; priceline negotiator [[Image:Priceline.JPG|20px]] 02:06, June 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * The ambiguous template is fine. ambig  JangFett  (Talk) 05:25, June 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * S-canon is canon. It simply takes lower precedence in the case of contradictions. Tales ambiguity exists because some are S-canon, and some are not canon at all. - Lord Hydronium 18:14, June 25, 2010 (UTC)
 * OK, I wasn't sure. Thanks for clarifying. &mdash; Master Jonathan New Jedi Order.svg ( Jedi Council Chambers ) 20:44, June 26, 2010 (UTC)

Bivalva contemplativa

 * Nominated by: --Eyrezer 02:57, June 20, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

(0 ECs/4 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1) Menkooroo 00:21, June 21, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Imperialles 12:02, June 22, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 13:27, June 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) I must support any articles about sentient clams. - Lord Hydronium 01:16, July 16, 2010 (UTC)

Object Comments
 * 1) Missing a source at the end of the intro/body --- should it be Dark Rendezvous? Menkooroo 08:16, June 20, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) *Fixed. --Eyrezer 23:58, June 20, 2010 (UTC)

Ma'aood

 * Nominated by: --Eyrezer 08:25, June 21, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Egyptian pyramids, anyone?

(0 ECs/3 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) Menkooroo 13:45, June 21, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 13:21, June 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) Thefourdotelipsis 05:36, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Hmmm... do you think it's relevant that Lobot was in pursuit of the Vagabond? Even if so, the way the sentence is worded lacks context and makes it seem like Lando & the Vagabond have already been introduced. Maybe just "The Cyborg Lobot was familiar ... ?" Menkooroo 08:38, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Core Foodstuffs

 * Nominated by: Imperialles 12:40, June 22, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Couldn't get an accurate page number off my copy of the Dark Empire Sourcebook. I think it's mentioned at page 74, but if anyone has a physical copy, confirmation would be most appreciated.

(1 ECs/2 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 04:17, June 24, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) --Eyrezer 10:40, June 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) Thefourdotelipsis 05:38, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

Object

Comments
 * I have a physical copy of the book. It's actually mentioned on page 43. Xicer9 atgar.svg( Combadge) 06:19, June 23, 2010 (UTC)
 * Cheers. --Imperialles 10:19, June 23, 2010 (UTC)
 * Is the company mentioned in relation to any other companies? My hunch is that there could be more context. Why is it mentioned in the book? --Eyrezer 02:21, June 25, 2010 (UTC)
 * A bit more context added. That's really all there is. --Imperialles 12:54, June 25, 2010 (UTC)
 * Better --Eyrezer 10:40, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

Knobblypear

 * Nominated by: --Eyrezer 02:25, June 24, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Another fruit from the Atrivis sector

(0 ECs/3 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 04:21, June 24, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Om nom nom. Menkooroo 05:35, June 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) Thefourdotelipsis 05:52, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Wuppa

 * Nominated by: Eyrezer 02:25, June 24, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: A plant from the Atrivis sector

(0 ECs/3 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 00:10, June 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Menkooroo 05:38, June 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) Thefourdotelipsis 05:57, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Elathan

 * Nominated by: Eyrezer 05:04, June 24, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: These next 4 are articles I wrote a while ago...

(0 ECs/3 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 00:12, June 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Menkooroo 05:40, June 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) Thefourdotelipsis 05:57, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Ermi

 * Nominated by: Eyrezer 05:04, June 24, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

(0 ECs/3 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 00:17, June 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Erm... ee... well done. Menkooroo 05:43, June 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) Thefourdotelipsis 05:58, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Fneeb

 * Nominated by: Eyrezer 05:04, June 24, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

(0 ECs/3 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 00:22, June 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Menkooroo 05:45, June 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) Thefourdotelipsis 05:59, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Gotiard

 * Nominated by: Eyrezer 05:04, June 24, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: I'd make this guy one...

(0 ECs/3 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) Goat oo bed. Menkooroo 05:54, June 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Thefourdotelipsis 06:00, June 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 10:59, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Object Comments
 * 1) Is the height actually stated as average for Gotiards? Because you say "up to", which doesn't necessarily (and generally doesn't) mean average.  SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 08:07, June 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) *It is based on the information in the BTS quote, which says they resemble "three meter tall goat-headed gorillas."

Unidentified Human prisoner

 * Nominated by:  Darth Karika Please leave a message after the beep. *boom* 15:14, June 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Poor guy.

(0 ECs/4 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1) Poor guy. Nice tense usage. Thefourdotelipsis 06:03, June 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Menkooroo 06:10, June 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) No ref tags outside the infobox... -- 1358  (Talk) 11:49, June 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 18:32, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) NaruHina
 * 2) * The individual should first be referred to as "This Human male prisoner," then be called "The prisoner" in the article.
 * 3) **Fixed.
 * 4) * The article does not need sourcing if the information was taken from the character's single appearance.
 * 5) **Fixed.
 * 6) ***While it's not required, it is still allowed. You may add the references back if you think it's better, Karika. -- 1358  (Talk) 17:59, June 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * 7) ****I was just pointing out the article didn't have to have sourcing. Of course he can put them back. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 18:32, June 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * 8) * Context on Ryloth and Diversity Alliance.
 * 9) **Added.
 * 10) * I'm not sure if Hovrak eating him is considered cannibalism, it isn't a Human eating a Human. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 16:40, June 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * 11) **Fixed.  Darth Karika Please leave a message after the beep. *boom* 17:43, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Comments
 * Just a heads-up: There's no rule stating that bolded parts of a conjectural name shouldn't be linked, but most people seem to oppose it. I removed the links; Human and male are still linked to in the infobox, so it should be OK. Menkooroo 06:10, June 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * I unbolded "Human male" and linked them. The person's title, whatever it may be is bolded, not their gender/species. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 16:38, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Rorr'hn

 * Nominated by: Thefourdotelipsis 10:57, June 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: The coolest Jedi you never heard of. Someone needs to use this guy.

(1 ECs/3 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 11:23, June 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Lord Hydronium 01:17, July 16, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3)  01:23, July 16, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4)  Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 01:57, July 16, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Given that his species is not identified, I think you could add some brief description of his appearance to the article. Identifiers such as bipedal etc where applicable. --Eyrezer 01:51, July 16, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Hepmaga MiOrd

 * Nominated by: Thefourdotelipsis 12:29, June 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Vaguely Kaleesh, perhaps...

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) --Eyrezer 10:55, June 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 11:24, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) The original source says the Remplish are a clan not a species. Please reword accordingly. --Eyrezer 06:19, June 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Infobox claims he's part of the MiOrd clan, while the article says he's a member of the Remplish clan. Which is correct? --Imperialles 14:31, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Tarron Neb

 * Nominated by: Thefourdotelipsis 14:38, June 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: That Palpatine was a nasty fellow.

(0 ECs/1 Users/1 Total)
Support
 * 1) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 07:04, July 1, 2010 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Angry machine

 * Nominated by: Thefourdotelipsis 15:41, June 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Best. Anything. Ever.

(1 ECs/5 Users/6 Total)
Support
 * 1) Menkooroo 16:05, June 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) I had something...but I forget... NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 16:50, June 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) Imperialles 14:32, June 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 02:06, July 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) If anyone needs me, I'll be in the angry dome machine. - Lord Hydronium 01:19, July 16, 2010 (UTC)
 * 6) Awesome.  Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 01:59, July 16, 2010 (UTC)

Object

Comments
 * Just as a note, I started to archive this, but realized that it technically hasn't been active for a full week, considering that the CAN page was locked for a couple of weeks during the CT process. Excluding the time that the page was locked, the one week will expire at 14:26 UTC on July 19. &mdash; Master Jonathan New Jedi Order.svg ( Jedi Council Chambers ) 05:46, July 17, 2010 (UTC)

LobwuWa Loba

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 17:26, June 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: I'd never even heard of this series before last week.

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 * 1) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 09:31, July 16, 2010 (UTC)

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Mab Kador

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 18:16, June 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Another from the same sentence.

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 * 1) Erm.. first sentence doesn't make sense? You might have changed that bit with "the young and eager pilot of the White Panther" at the last minute and forgotten to remove the rest of it. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 09:32, July 16, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) *Whoops. Fixed. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 05:56, July 17, 2010 (UTC)

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Brownie

 * Nominated by:  Vetinari (Appointment) 18:56, June 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: What would normally be redlinks I've redirected to the film to spare some scowls but I'll make pages if prefered.

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 * Hey Vetin. I think you should consider giving the article sections according to the species layout guide and then nominating for good article status. This could comforatbly make 250 words. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 09:35, July 16, 2010 (UTC)

Chros-filik

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 19:23, June 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: One more. And this one was in the CSWE.

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 * 1) --Eyrezer 23:25, June 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Only just realised the page had been unprotected. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 09:37, July 16, 2010 (UTC)

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Vetria Scoth

 * Nominated by: Thefourdotelipsis 14:11, June 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Maximum badass.

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 * 1) I tried to get him into an WTS entry once. :( - Lord Hydronium 01:20, July 16, 2010 (UTC)

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 * 1) Are you sure that's a colour picture? If it isn't you can't really prove his eye colour. If it is a colour picture however, you could probably also fill in the skin colour field. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 09:41, July 16, 2010 (UTC)

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Shao to Gok

 * Nominated by: Thefourdotelipsis 14:49, June 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: "Even if he did turn up, the guards would be woken by the scraping noise as he tried to squeeze his massive swollen head through the door."

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 * 1) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 09:43, July 16, 2010 (UTC)

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Havidald Guffin

 * Nominated by:  Darth Karika  will destroy your planet! 01:08, July 16, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Hmm...

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 * 1)  Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 20:58, July 16, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 01:31, July 17, 2010 (UTC)

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 * 1) Do you know for sure whether or not Guffin was male? You use "he" in the body, but you don't actually call him male and you've left the gender field blank in the infobox.  Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 02:03, July 16, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) *Try now.  Darth Karika  will destroy your planet! 14:05, July 16, 2010 (UTC)

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The Paths to Power

 * Nominated by: Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 22:07, July 16, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Barely outsold The Paths to Power II: The Electric Boogaloo

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 * 1)  22:26, July 16, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2)  Darth Karika  will destroy your planet! 23:52, July 16, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 01:35, July 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4)  Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 13:21, July 17, 2010 (UTC)

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 * 1) Could we have BBY/ABY dates for the release of his book (in addition to the GrS dates)?  Darth Karika  will destroy your planet!  22:20, July 16, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) *I've given it a parenthetical note in the article, but I've left it as a pipelink in the infobox. Is that good with you? Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 22:34, July 16, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) **Works for me.  Darth Karika  will destroy your planet! 23:52, July 16, 2010 (UTC)

Gunray On Top

 * Nominated by: Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 22:54, July 16, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Take a moment to picture the title, literally.

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 * 1) Admit it Trayus, you enjoyed working with Gunray on Top :P SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 01:39, July 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2)  05:55, July 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 20:14, July 17, 2010 (UTC)

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Holding Back the Tide

 * Nominated by: Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 23:49, July 16, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Probably a poor title choice, considering he was unable to do so.

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 * 1) --Eyrezer 03:18, July 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2)  06:00, July 17, 2010 (UTC)

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 * 1) A nice run you've got going here. Could you provide some context on what his "disgrace" was? Also, seeing as the HNN is IU, you could make mention of its coverage of the book in the actual body. --Eyrezer 00:44, July 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) *Thanks, check it out now and tell me what you think. Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 02:09, July 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) **Looks good to me. It could also be relevant to note that Gunray was part of the scandle that led to his dismissal, which is presumably part of the reason the two books are being compared. That may be a bridge too far, but is something you might like to think about. The article is also only 2 words shy of the GAN mark now. --Eyrezer 03:18, July 17, 2010 (UTC)

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 * I'm still waiting for its mention from CSWE, but if my memory serves me correctly, there was no new canonical info from it. Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 23:49, July 16, 2010 (UTC)
 * It did. Thanks, MJ. Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 04:38, July 17, 2010 (UTC)

Sluis Van space facility

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 06:54, July 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Long live the CAN! Long live the Random Article Noms!

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 * 1)  Darth Karika  will destroy your planet! 19:50, July 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 1) Darth Karika
 * 2) * Infobox is missing the name.
 * 3) * BtS, last sentence: missing italics closing tag.
 * 4) * Did the facility appear in The Thrawn Trilogy Sourcebook, or was it just mentioned?  Darth Karika  will destroy your planet! 13:31, July 17, 2010 (UTC)

Palmer

 * Nominated by:Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 19:59, July 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Battle for Naboo's red shirt

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Emperor's Demonstration Team

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 21:40, July 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Random Article

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