Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Senin Vant


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Senin Vant

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 10:30, May 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Maybe expansion possible? Any ideas?

(1 ECs/3 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 02:11, May 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 10:17, June 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) ~  Savage  BOB sig.png 22:01, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) Thank you for your hard work.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  17:05, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Rubedo
 * 2) * Context on the Battle of Utapau and the Clone Wars. Give a time reference.
 * 3) * You could also explicitly say the Skyforce was the Utapauan air force.
 * 4) * While we're at it, context on Utapau. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 18:49, May 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) **All fixed. Any idea Naru if I can bring him up to 250 words. I added much context, but this stuff is all relevant to him.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 18:59, May 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) ***Deja vu... NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 20:09, May 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) * How do you know if this is a male or female? They look very similar to me.
 * 8) **Said in the book.
 * 9) * Mention the Complete Cross-Sections in the BTS.
 * 10) **Added.
 * 11) * The page in the Cross-section was not about him. Clairify that it was on his ship.
 * 12) **Hope that's better.
 * 13) * His eyes don't look blue to me. They look black. If you include this in the infobox, include it in the article.
 * 14) **Changed and added.
 * 15) * How do you know he was affiliated with the Repuclic? Just because he fought alongside their forces to free his planet, does not mean there was an official partnership. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 20:09, May 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 16) **Agreed.
 * 17) Axinal
 * 18) * Since the Ep. III Incredible Cross-Sections includes the juggernaut and Grievous's wheel bike, it might be good to clarify in the BTS that the ICS is not exclusive to ships.
 * 19) **Added.
 * 20) *I gave the article a minor copy-edit, very nice overall.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 23:58, June 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * 21) **Thank you.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 17:49, June 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 22) Imperators II
 * 23) * Doesn't Category:Resistance fighters apply here?  Imperators II (Talk) 00:47, June 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 24) **Added.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 07:32, June 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 25) * Publishing years of the works should be added in the BTS section.  Imperators II (Talk) 17:38, June 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 26) **Added. Not sure if that is neccessary.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 17:43, June 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 27) One last thing. Would it be possible to specify the artist that drew Vant? If so, he/she should be mentioned in the BTS.  NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 19:42, June 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 28) *No that would result in speculation.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 17:12, June 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * 29) **So the art is not directly attributed? In that case, say that it was either Hans Jenssen or Richard Chasemore. They illustrated the whole book. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 23:39, June 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * 30) ***Left a note about that in the BtS.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 16:26, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 31) ****Thanks. Remember to add this to other articles dealing with the CS books. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 01:49, June 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 32) Bob
 * 33) * "Senin Vant was a black-eyed Utai male..." Any reason to put his black eyes here? I mean, are there also red-eyed and blue-eyed Utai and it's necessary to distinguish this early in the article? If not, I'd recommend removing "black-eyed" and simply stating at some other point that "He had black eyes." ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 05:13, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 34) **No that was simply because I had to mention the fact (Infobox-exclusive).  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 16:26, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 35) Exiled Jedi
 * 36) * I would mention that Grievous is a cyborg, as more context on him.
 * 37) **Added some, but more would be too much.
 * 38) * From the picture don't you think that you could determine his skin color? I would call it a tan color.
 * 39) **Added.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 16:54, June 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * 40) ***By the way, you should link colors to the color page rather than to a disambiguation page named after that color. I fixed it this time.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  17:05, June 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * 41) * I would also mention the color of the markings on his fighter. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:50, June 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * 42) **Added.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 16:54, June 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * 43) * Oh and you could mention his flight gear. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:52, June 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * 44) **Added.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 16:55, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

Comments
 * 1) Has anyone an English version of the Complete Cross Sections to check? In the German version, his name is Senim Vant.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 10:01, May 29, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *I do. His name is spelled with an "n" there. Bonslywizard  Naboo.svg ( Send a transmission ) 21:59, May 29, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Thanks.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 17:23, May 30, 2011 (UTC)