Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Form V: Shien / Djem So


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Form V: Shien / Djem So
Support
 * 1)  Jwebb13 HoloNet[[Image:oldsith.jpg|40px]] 02:54, 11 February 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Darth Vatrir 16:26, 8 March 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Audience Chamber ) 03:55, 29 March 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) Gallery is silly, but it's a good article anyway. - Lord Hydronium 00:19, 30 March 2007 (UTC)
 * 5) I like. If it's really missing Hero's Guide info., that's my only objection.
 * 6) Jaina Solo ( Goddess Stuff ) [[Image:Jainasolosig.gif |25px]] 23:44, 2 April 2007 (UTC)
 * 7) http://images.wikia.com/starwars/images/e/e5/ATATatarismall.png 15:53, 4 April 2007 (UTC)

Objections
 * Needs sourced, (Rule 11) fix all the present tense, (Rule 4). Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Audience Chamber ) 03:05, 11 February 2007 (UTC)
 * I think I've taken care of all usages of the present tense, but let me know if I missed any. Jwebb13 HoloNet[[Image:oldsith.jpg|40px]] 23:00, 11 February 2007 (UTC)
 * I still see several mentions of "is" and "are." Most of those happen when something is written OOU- which is also a violation of Rule 4. Example: "It is known that Anakin Skywalker mastered. . . " It would be better to re-write this as "Anakin Skywalker mastered . . . ", IMO. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Audience Chamber ) 00:26, 12 February 2007 (UTC)
 * Right, I'll go over it again later when I get a minute. Jwebb13 HoloNet[[Image:oldsith.jpg|40px]] 22:40, 13 February 2007 (UTC)
 * No sourcing, small introduction, first two images are terrible screenshots. .  .  .  .  08:17, 11 March 2007 (UTC)
 * Unencyclopedic tone (Rule 1).  - breathesgelatin Talk 20:01, 18 March 2007 (UTC)
 * 1) Doesn't contain Hero's Guide information. &mdash;Jaymach Ral'Tir (talk) 02:54, 1 April 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) *There wasn't any new information in the Hero's Guide, but I did add it the list of sources. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Audience Chamber ) 14:55, 2 April 2007 (UTC)

Comments

'''Approved by Inquisitorius - Inq:Form V: Shien/Djem So 20:42, 4 April 2007 (UTC)
 * I just recently overhauled this article, so if anyone sees any problems that I missed, I'd appreciate your input. Jwebb13 HoloNet[[Image:oldsith.jpg|40px]] 02:55, 11 February 2007 (UTC)
 * KotOR II quotes would be nice. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Audience Chamber ) 03:05, 11 February 2007 (UTC)
 * I just gave the article a major overhaul. Everyone who voted against it before is encouraged to look again. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Audience Chamber ) 00:06, 29 March 2007 (UTC)