Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Grizz Frix


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Grizz Frix

 * Nominated by: Thefourdotelipsis 23:24, May 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Already one of dem GA things.

(3 Inqs/4 Users/7 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 00:40, May 18, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Nice. --Imperialles 16:30, May 18, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) I agree! Nice. Menkooroo 02:41, May 19, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 13:36, May 26, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) Green Tentacle (Talk) 14:33, May 31, 2010 (UTC)
 * 6) Graestan ( Talk ) 16:00, May 31, 2010 (UTC)
 * 7) -- 1358  (Talk) 14:41, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Grand Master
 * 2) * "inspired by Angela Phillips's short story Slaying Dragons, which was included in the Tales of the Bounty Hunters anthology." Do you mean "Tales From the Empire?"
 * 3) **Gah! Brain fart. Fixed.
 * 4) * More of a question than an objection: does the source actually state that it was "bad luck" that prevented him from eventually joining Rogue Squadron? If not, that's a little speculative/POV.
 * 5) **I've changed it to "mishap."
 * 6) *Fine work. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 23:57, May 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 7) **Thanks for the review, and the linking. I'm a tad embarrassed... wrote this a long time ago, but I probably should have checked it again for links. :S Thefourdotelipsis 00:37, May 18, 2010 (UTC)
 * 8) ***Haha no problem; it was very well-written overall. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 00:40, May 18, 2010 (UTC)
 * 9) Just a coupla post-IRC objections...
 * 10) * Can you give context on Rogue Squadron and Mon Mothma? I realize they're linked to, but even a single extra word or two, respectively naming them as an elite starfighter group and the Alliance COS, maybe (Rogue Squadron in the intro too)?
 * 11) **Done.
 * 12) * Should the last sentence of the first paragraph of bts be sourced to his db entry? As it doesn't mention his db entry, it's not really self-sourcing. Menkooroo 01:53, May 19, 2010 (UTC)
 * 13) **And done. Thefourdotelipsis 02:02, May 19, 2010 (UTC)

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