Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/S'yito


 * ''The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.

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Support
 * 1) Harrar 19:26, 10 January 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) Toprawa and Ralltiir 22:42, 10 January 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) I like these because my knowledge of the NJO is somewhat lacking.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 20:48, 11 January 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 19:35, 20 January 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) Goodwood  [[Image:Rebsymbol2.png|20px]] ( Alliance Intelligence ) 16:25, 27 January 2008 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) "However, S'yito was alerted that something may have been amiss by the unusual fact that a sabacc game was taking place (as cover for Cracken and Page) while the prisoners ate their food." Avoid parentheses. If it's important enough to be in the article, insert it somewhere. Toprawa and Ralltiir 19:47, 10 January 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) *I wiped the pitiful parentheses from the face of the article. Harrar 21:31, 10 January 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) Yo.
 * 4) * "S'yito was assigned to the prison planet of Selvaris, holding the rank of subaltern and a subordinate of the penal colony's chief officer, Malik Carr." Please rephrase, perhaps as two separate sentences.
 * 5) *Move "Speaking fluent Basic" to the next sentence.
 * 6) * Very impressive for how minor a character he is.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 22:28, 10 January 2008 (UTC)
 * 7) **I have done all that you seek. I was surprised as well about the amount of info there, but he does get one POV scene and appears in five or so others. Knowing Luceno's penchant for immersive continuity, he'll probably appear again in a later novel! Harrar 19:08, 11 January 2008 (UTC)

Comments
 * Another character. But a Yuuzhan Vong character! Harrar 19:26, 10 January 2008 (UTC)
 * How do you pronounce this anyways? Sy-eeto? Toprawa and Ralltiir 22:42, 10 January 2008 (UTC)
 * Not too sure&mdash;there are several possibilities. I reckon it's sharper on the 's', maybe "Tsi-toe"? We can but guess. Harrar 19:08, 11 January 2008 (UTC)
 * I might recommend asking Chack to strike this directly on his talk page. I think he's taking a vacation, and may not see this for a while. Toprawa and Ralltiir 19:17, 11 January 2008 (UTC)