Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Kumac


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Kumac

 * Nominated by: -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 20:34, 7 June 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Didn't expect this to be long enough, but at least now we get to have that rather odd picture on the main page.

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Support
 * 1) Imperialles 23:22, 7 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 2)  Atarumaster88  Jedi_Order.svg ( Talk page ) 19:48, 11 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) Nice job. Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 20:43, 11 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) —Tommy9281  Dark side Master SWGTCG.jpg ( No quarter given, all exits sealed ) 01:51, 12 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) Move along. &mdash;  Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 04:00, 13 June 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) You appear to repeat information in this segment: "Kumac was a Hutt of the Desilijic clan, who, although a hermaphrodite, adopted a feminine personality. She was part of the Desilijic kajidic" --Imperialles 20:45, 7 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) *Well, they're not strictly the same thing, and I've reworded it so that hopefully it will be clearer now. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 22:44, 7 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) From the desk of Atarumaster88
 * 4) * "The Hutt traveled to Tamazall, where she made use of a Hutt sail barge; Kumac hired a mercenary, Deshic Mall, to rescue Logris." These clauses are rather spliced, can you make them flow better?
 * 5) **I cut the sail barge bit, which doesn't seem entirely necessary, and it should look better now.
 * 6) *That's it. Have a Super Terrific Friendly Un-frustrating day. Atarumaster88  Jedi_Order.svg ( Talk page ) 15:41, 9 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 7) **Thanks. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 19:46, 11 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 8) Blacklist:
 * 9) * "Kumac dealt well with other sentients: in her role as Jabba's operative, she often dealt with other individuals, providing services for them, and she acted as a liaison between Jabba and his Imperial contacts; she struck up an alliance with Brasck after Jabba died, one that was mutually beneficial; and she worked alongside Jelasi so as to increase her power, despite the fact that the two were old competitors and Kumac disagreed with his modus operandi." This seems like a rather long run-on. Can it be broken up?
 * 10) **Broken up. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 19:46, 11 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 11) *That's all. —Tommy9281 Dark side Master SWGTCG.jpg ( No quarter given, all exits sealed ) 03:02, 11 June 2009 (UTC)

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