Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Battle of Slotern


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Battle of Slotern

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:45, August 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:I'm so sorry Lieutenant Blair.

(2 ECs/1 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) SinisterSamurai 15:36, August 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  20:43, August 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3)  Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 22:03, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) SinSam
 * 2) * This should link to either Slotern or Slotern system. Systems on the essential atlas (and companion) chart are named for their most famous feature. And Slotern system was added to the Online companion after comments re: battle of slotern in TFUII were made on the blog of Daniel Wallace. SinisterSamurai 02:07, August 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Done. I added the Slotern system and didn't create a Slotern since we don't know anything about it. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:57, August 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) Exiled Jedi
 * 5) * I think that you can say that it occured in the Rise of the Empire era. See my reasoning in the Blair nomination. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:58, August 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) **Done. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:12, August 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) ***You still need to mention the era in the body of the article.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  02:17, August 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) ****Done. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 20:40, August 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) Imperators II
 * 10) * The dates have to be sourced.  Imperators II (Talk) 12:16, August 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) **They have been. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:38, August 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 12) *** Now "during the height of the Galactic Empire" is unsourced (same as your other battle nom).  Imperators II (Talk) 19:12, August 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 13) ****Try that then. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:32, August 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 14) Cav
 * 15) * You link to the Slotern system in the main body, but have nothing in the infobox for the location of the battle.
 * 16) **Got it.
 * 17) * Repeated use of the phrase "resistance fighter" - can you see if you can vary the wording a little?
 * 18) **Done.
 * 19) * You say the battle occured in the Slotern system, but clearly, the battle was fought over a planet, and not in the system. This needs to be corrected, as it appears from this that Slotern is indeed meant to be a planet. - Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 08:08, October 26, 2011 (UTC)
 * 20) **Can we really say that? The databank just says that they fought in the "Battle of Slotern" and that he dove for the ground. It could have been a moon or something else, not just a planet. What do you think?-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 13:13, October 26, 2011 (UTC)
 * 21) ***Maybe not as a planet then, but Slotern is a place. The source doesn't specify state "Slotern system", but Slotern. - Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 09:12, October 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 22) ****Taken care of.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:14, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Comments
 * I'm not going to strike my support, but you should mention the era in the article body. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:39, October 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * Took care of it.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:59, October 11, 2011 (UTC)