Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Lumiya's vibroblade


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Lumiya's vibroblade

 * Nominated by:  —Tommy  9281  Wednesday, August 3, 2011, 22:46 UTC 
 * Nomination comments:"The roof! The roof! The roof is on FIRE! We don't need no water, let the mutha@&#$ BURN!"

(2 ECs/1 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) Keep spinning that gold.  Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 23:51, August 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Looks good.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  02:31, August 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) I'd still like to see the pub date, but otherwise, a fine article. ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 15:54, August 5, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Minor, but is there any way you could mention The Home and Lumiya's Sith directly in the body, so that they're not infobox-exclusive?  Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 23:39, August 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *Addressed first part, but the her Sith really aren't important enough to warrant mention. Perhaps I should it from the infobox then?  —Tommy  9281  Wednesday, August 3, 2011, 23:47 UTC 
 * 3) **Nah; on second thought, just naming Lumiya the Dark Lady should be hint enough at that fact for this article. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 23:51, August 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) Bob
 * 5) * Could we get away with just calling it "fascination" (rather than "notable fascination")? I'd say that anything a VIP says about their SW work is notable for our purposes.
 * 6) **Addressed.
 * 7) * Can you clarify that Traviss is indeed the author of Sacrifice?
 * 8) **Addressed.
 * 9) * Optional, but I always find it best practice to at least give the year of publication for BTS books, since it helps geeks like me tell when the subject of the article entered canon.
 * 10) **Meh, I didn't want the fluff. Folks can click the Sacrifice link and get the publication info if they feel so inclined.  —Tommy  9281  Friday, August 5, 2011, 15:33 UTC 
 * 11) * Finally, the first sentence of the article makes it sound like the vibroblade was a habitual arm worn by Lumiya, but the BTS makes it sound like maybe not. Does Traviss describe it in such a way that we can infer the habit implied in the body? Or should we hedge a bit and say something like, "In 40 ABY, Lumiya carried a vibroblade in her boot"? ~ Savage BOB sig.png 14:15, August 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 12) **Addressed. Thanks for the review, Bob. Please advise if anything further is required.  —Tommy  9281  Friday, August 5, 2011, 15:33 UTC 

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