User talk:Master Jonathan

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 Copy-edit requests: 
 * If you are requesting a copy-edit, start a new section for each request. Please do not place new requests under old headings. Multiple articles should not be placed under a single heading unless they are requested simultaneously.
 * If you want a pre-nom review or word count with the copy-edit, please explicitly say so in the request, otherwise I will perform a copy-edit only. Keep in mind that I am not a member of any reviewing panel and rarely conduct reviews, so my review might not be as thorough as what you would get from an Inquisitor or AgriCorps member. Adding a pre-nom review to your request may lengthen the response time.
 * Unless I have a Vacation notice above, I will try to perform the copy-edit within 48 hours (72 hours if a review is requested also). If I need more time, I will let you know under the request as soon as possible.
 * Although there are no limits (minimum or maximum) on the length of articles I will accept, keep in mind that shorter articles will generally receive quicker responses than longer articles. Extremely long articles (approx. 75 KB or larger) may be done over multiple days.
 * If you leave an Inuse tag on the article, I will interpret your request as implicit permission to edit through said tag. If you don't want me to do this, please say so. I will use my own Inuse tag if I expect to spend more than 10–15 minutes on the article.'''

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Haako
Hey Jon, could you give Haako a copy-edit and review? Thanks in advance.&mdash; 17:44, July 12, 2012 (UTC)


 * Done, and once again I have no objections. :D Let me know if you have any questions. &mdash;MJ&mdash; Training Room Thursday, July 12, 2012, 20:16 UTC
 * Thanks once again, Jon.&mdash; 14:10, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

Wertram
Hello MJ. So, there's been more than two weeks since the [| Wertam Garran confusion] and the EduCorps members haven't voted to reach a conclussion. Do you know what should be done next? --Seth danny (talk) 23:29, July 12, 2012 (UTC)


 * I left a message for an EC member to draw attention to it. The CA review page is largely ignored, and it's often necessary to poke EC members to get a resolution. I had actually forgotten about it myself. &mdash;MJ&mdash; War Room Friday, July 13, 2012, 03:20 UTC

Ori Garran
Just a quick question: Is the Ori Garran article in error as well? I was just wondering if I should put it on the review page.-- Exiled Jedi   (Greetings)  13:23, July 13, 2012 (UTC)


 * Actually, yes it is. I missed that during the original discussion. &mdash;MJ&mdash; Training Room Friday, July 13, 2012, 13:56 UTC

User-page
wow, really? do you not have anything better to do then to block my user-page? Well I see since you probably live in your mom basement, but still loser, do you really got to be a pussy about it? I usually contribute to this on a anon basis. So yeah, since you decided to fuck with me, this isnt the last you have heard of me, bitch. Arashi-senpai (talk) 22:05, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

CT
Hey, MJ. Your subcategorization CT has been archived as successful. I'll leave implementation up to you. Thanks. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:01, July 16, 2012 (UTC)


 * OK, thanks. There won't really be a dedicated effort to bring all categories into compliance, just as there wasn't (AFAIK) when the previous CT on this matter passed. It's more of a "fix it when you see it" thing or something for somebody to do when they're bored. That said, I might be able to work out a bot run to get the bulk of them. &mdash;MJ&mdash; War Room Monday, July 16, 2012, 18:20 UTC

Listehol Campaign
Could you give the Listehol Campaign a copyedit? Thanks, 501st  dogma ( talk ) 20:21, July 17, 2012 (UTC)


 * Done. Let me know if you have any questions. &mdash;MJ&mdash;</b> Jedi Council Chambers</b> Wednesday, July 18, 2012, 14:22 UTC


 * Thanks. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 14:38, July 18, 2012 (UTC)

Andalia
Could you give the Battle of Andalia a copyedit? Thanks, 501st  dogma ( talk ) 20:26, July 19, 2012 (UTC)


 * Done. Notes:
 * Please check the Prelude quote: "and thatd kidnapped" is not right and I can't tell what it's supposed to say.
 * Fixed.
 * The correct spelling is "task force" (two words). "Taskforce" is not a word.
 * Links to Wikipedia articles should be formatted as interwiki links, not external link style. Just write it as a regular internal link and prefix the link target with  like this: Bob Hope, which produces Bob Hope.
 * Let me know if you have any questions. &mdash;MJ&mdash;</b> Training Room</b> Friday, July 20, 2012, 17:33 UTC
 * Thanks, no questions! 501st  dogma ( talk ) 17:52, July 20, 2012 (UTC)

Jor Torlin
Hey Jon, could you give Jor Torlin a copy-edit, pre-nom review, and word count? I think he might be over 1,000 words, but am not sure. I'll be nominating him and Haako together. Thanks in advance!&mdash; 02:46, July 20, 2012 (UTC)


 * Done. Objections:
 * In the first paragraph of the bio, the context for the Sith–Imperial War should be with the first mention of the War in the first sentence of that paragraph.
 * "Corde brought the presence of two ships belonging to Galactic Alliance Admiral Gar Stazi and Fel Imperial Captain Mingo Bovark, respectively,": What do you mean by "brought the presence"?
 * Both taken care of, I believe. Thanks for your help, as always.&mdash; 17:46, July 20, 2012 (UTC)
 * Roughly 1,388 words right now. Let me know if you have any questions. &mdash;MJ&mdash;</b> Training Room</b> Friday, July 20, 2012, 17:33 UTC
 * Looks good to go now. &mdash;MJ&mdash;</b> Jedi Council Chambers</b> Friday, July 20, 2012, 17:55 UTC

Darth Vurik
Hey Jon, could you also give Darth Vurik a copy-edit and pre-nom review? I'm pretty sure he's under 1,000 words. Thanks in advance!


 * Done. Objections:
 * "a Sith warship which operated during the Jedi Civil War": Context on the Jedi Civil War.
 * Taken care, I believe. Thanks again!&mdash; 17:46, July 20, 2012 (UTC)
 * Roughly 621 words right now. Let me know if you have any questions. &mdash;MJ&mdash;</b> Training Room</b> Friday, July 20, 2012, 17:33 UTC
 * Looks good to go now. &mdash;MJ&mdash;</b> Jedi Council Chambers</b> Friday, July 20, 2012, 17:55 UTC

Crazy old lady
Could you give this old crone a copyedit? Thanks, 501st  dogma ( talk ) 20:23, July 20, 2012 (UTC)


 * Done. A couple quick notes:
 * Category:Dimoks does not exist; it will need to be created.
 * The Legacy era is an OOU publishing era and thus cannot be used in the IU portions of an article.
 * Let me know if you have any questions. &mdash;MJ&mdash;</b> Jedi Council Chambers</b> Saturday, July 21, 2012, 18:25 UTC


 * Thanks for the copyedit. I'm creating the category now. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 20:18, July 21, 2012 (UTC)

Five
Hi, could you give the Five Veils Campaign a copyedit? Thanks, 501st  dogma ( talk ) 16:41, July 24, 2012 (UTC)


 * Done. Let me know if you have any questions. &mdash;MJ&mdash;</b> War Room</b> Wednesday, July 25, 2012, 02:07 UTC


 * Thanks. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 12:44, July 26, 2012 (UTC)

Wiki Coding
The problem is that i'm trying to create a banner for the | mount and blade wiki but it just does not work. Fire-lord; Pyrokinetic Jedi If no one ever talks things out how can we have world peace? 01:51, July 27, 2012 (UTC)


 * *sigh* Please read this, and then explain in full detail exactly what you are trying to do and what's not working. A link to the page on which you are trying to put the banner together would also help. <b style="color:navy; text-decoration:underline; font-family:serif;">&mdash;MJ&mdash;</b> <b style="color:red; font-variant:small-caps;">Training Room</b> Friday, July 27, 2012, 17:42 UTC

Dice
I merged an article someone had written on the story with my "Unidentified Karen Miller short story", which already existed, and the tidbit that it was from 45 ABY came from that article by some anon. I've never read the story myself as I don't collect Insider. You can contact Miller from her website for an explicit source. She's been great to me with that. NaruHina Talk  21:28, July 27, 2012 (UTC)


 * OK, thanks. I'll try contacting her. <b style="color:navy; text-decoration:underline; font-family:serif;">&mdash;MJ&mdash;</b> <b style="color:red; font-variant:small-caps;">Training Room</b> Friday, July 27, 2012, 21:36 UTC


 * Oh, sorry about replying here. I missed the notice at the top of the page. ^^' NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 21:43, July 27, 2012 (UTC)


 * Don't worry. You're not the only one that does that by far. :) <b style="color:navy; text-decoration:underline; font-family:serif;">&mdash;MJ&mdash;</b> <b style="color:red; font-variant:small-caps;">Holocomm</b> Friday, July 27, 2012, 21:45 UTC


 * Email reply received and uploaded, and the article has been updated to reflect her statement. <b style="color:navy; text-decoration:underline; font-family:serif;">&mdash;MJ&mdash;</b> <b style="color:red; font-variant:small-caps;">Jedi Council Chambers</b> Saturday, July 28, 2012, 12:56 UTC


 * Great! She's awesome for that sort of thing. I actually started her A Blight of Mages today. I'm excited! NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 04:58, July 29, 2012 (UTC)

Hume
Hey. Could you give Hume Tarl on my workbench a copyedit? Thanks, 501st  dogma ( talk ) 23:44, July 28, 2012 (UTC)


 * Done. Note that your year calculation was off; six years before 4 ABY is 2 BBY, not 1 BBY. The source of your confusion may be that 0 BBY and 0 ABY were two parts of the same year, not two separate years. Let me know if you have any questions. <b style="color:navy; text-decoration:underline; font-family:serif;">&mdash;MJ&mdash;</b> <b style="color:red; font-variant:small-caps;">War Room</b> Sunday, July 29, 2012, 18:52 UTC


 * Thanks! 501st  dogma ( talk ) 00:33, July 30, 2012 (UTC)

Meetra Surik's Jedi Master
Hey Jon, could you give Meetra Surik's Jedi Master a copy-edit and review? Thanks in advance.&mdash; 19:49, July 31, 2012 (UTC)


 * Done. I only found one small thing to change during the copy-edit. Objections:
 * Is the information about Surik eventually being exiled relevant to her Master? Absent an explanation of why it belongs, I would lean towards removing it; it seems like fluff to get it eligible for GAN instead of CAN (it sits at 281 words right now).
 * Lamar's request to the Master for discipline seems like it should belong in the intro as well, as it's the only known action that directly involves her.
 * Taken care of both, I believe.&mdash; 00:43, August 1, 2012 (UTC)
 * How many words is it now, btw?&mdash; 00:44, August 1, 2012 (UTC)
 * Currently 375 words. <b style="color:navy; text-decoration:underline; font-family:serif;">&mdash;MJ&mdash;</b> <b style="color:red; font-variant:small-caps;">Training Room</b> Thursday, August 2, 2012, 01:23 UTC
 * Otherwise, looks good, Let me know if you have any questions. <b style="color:navy; text-decoration:underline; font-family:serif;">&mdash;MJ&mdash;</b> <b style="color:red; font-variant:small-caps;">Training Room</b> Tuesday, July 31, 2012, 21:35 UTC
 * Thanks for your help, Jon.&mdash;
 * Looks good now. <b style="color:navy; text-decoration:underline; font-family:serif;">&mdash;MJ&mdash;</b> <b style="color:red; font-variant:small-caps;">Training Room</b> Thursday, August 2, 2012, 01:23 UTC

Vrook Lamar's Padawan
Hey, Jon, could you also give Vrook Lamar's Padawan a copy-edit and review? Thanks in advance.&mdash; 02:14, August 1, 2012 (UTC)


 * Done, with no objections. You're sitting at just 210 words, so you're looking at CAN on this one. Let me know if you have any questions. <b style="color:navy; text-decoration:underline; font-family:serif;">&mdash;MJ&mdash;</b> <b style="color:red; font-variant:small-caps;">Council Chambers</b> Thursday, August 2, 2012, 01:30 UTC
 * Thanks for your help again, Jon, with both articles.&mdash; 04:21, August 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re: E-mails
I just did that just now. Sorry about that.  Trak Nar  Ramble on 02:46, August 2, 2012 (UTC)

"A New Hope" Junior Novel
Hello Master Jonathan. I've seen that you own a copy of Star Wars Episode IV: A New Hope junior novel, and I wanted to know if you could chek something in it for me. I'm currently working on a "Royal Award Ceremony" article, but I couldn't find a copy of that book myself, only a brief preview. I suspect the last page of the junior novelization gives an account of the ceremony. Would you be so kind as to check it for me? Regards. --LelalMekha (talk) 20:38, August 2, 2012 (UTC)


 * Last two pages actually. :P Action-wise, it's completely identical to the movie, but being in text form allows it to give a little more detail. Namely ("quotes" are from narration):
 * Han wore "a clean shirt he'd been saving for a special occasion."
 * Chewbacca stopped on a lower step than Luke and Han because he "was uncomfortable with the situation".
 * That's it. Let me know if you have any further questions. <b style="color:navy; text-decoration:underline; font-family:serif;">&mdash;MJ&mdash;</b> <b style="color:red; font-variant:small-caps;">Training Room</b> Friday, August 3, 2012, 04:36 UTC

CC-8826
Hello, Jon, could you please give CC-8826 a copy-edit, review, and word count? I'm thinking he's over 1,000 words, but not sure.&mdash; 04:43, August 5, 2012 (UTC)