Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/XM-1 Nova Wing


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 * 1) Nominated. MIS Tau 1 ( Woosh! ) 16:48, 10 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) --Eyrezer 22:06, 12 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) -- [[Image:AckbarSig.jpg|40px]] dmirableAckbar  ( It's A Trap! ) 17:26, 14 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) Heck, this is probably darn near up to snuff for featured status. jSarek 07:15, 16 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 5) Pelmarn Da&#39;kari 08:08, 16 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 6) Good, man. [[Image:The Death of Ki-Adi-Mundi.jpg|40px]]  Jediknight19bby  ( Jedi High Council Chambers! ) 17:20, 18 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 7) What the hell is this doing here? This is FA quality! Thefourdotelipsis 02:19, 19 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 8) Great job. Green Tentacle (Talk) 16:24, 19 August 2007 (UTC)
 * Looks good but this image needs to be sourced. --Eyrezer 02:29, 12 August 2007 (UTC)
 * done--MIS Tau 1 13:50, 12 August 2007 (UTC)
 * Just a few things:
 * Unless the external displays is explicitly mentioned in the game, you should probably clarify the source. I agree that it looks very likely that they are outside the cockpit, but the ref should say it's based on visual inspection and hasn't been stated.
 * The concept of ships having a maximum speed in space seems to be somewhat frowned on with The New Essential Guide to Vehicles and Vessels giving acceleration values instead. The NEGVV also has the A-wing with greater acceleration than the TIE Defender, making it unlikely that the Missile Boat would have greater acceleration than the A-wing. Although all you have to go on is the MGLT bit, it might be wise to downplay and talk of maximum speed or comparison to the A-wing.
 * "The story of the Missile Boat begins with a technophile admiral by the name of Zaarin." is a little too flowery.
 * Some POV, particularly "devious attacks by Zaarin's forces".
 * I'd have to check the game but I think the Vorknyxx was only moved to To-phalion Base after that mission.
 * Source the infobox. Green Tentacle (Talk) 00:23, 17 August 2007 (UTC)
 * objections addressed on the page--MIS Tau 1 01:11, 17 August 2007 (UTC)
 * Reference for visual inspection added--MIS Tau 1 22:33, 18 August 2007 (UTC)