Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Belth Allusis


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Belth Allusis

 * Nominated by: QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 16:56, October 24, 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: What am I doing in the Old Republic era? I don't know; I just liked the character&hellip;

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)
Support
 * 1) Jedi Kasra (comlink) 23:32, October 25, 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) TONIGHT, WE DINE ON BOTHAWUI! Darth Trayus  Sith_Emblem.svg ( Trayus Academy ) 04:29, October 26, 2009 (UTC)
 * 3)  Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 08:21, October 27, 2009 (UTC)
 * QGJ, I love the character, and I love the writing style. Great article. Very nice :) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 10:09, October 27, 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) *Glad you liked it :) QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 18:20, November 4, 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) I'm all for people branching out. Thought about trying a species? --Eyrezer 23:26, October 27, 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) *I've been thinking about that, actually. Some day&hellip;who knows? QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 18:20, November 4, 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) Keep up the good work.  Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 19:09, November 4, 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) The Grand Master
 * 2) * "Despite being gradually outnumbered..." Are you sure "gradually" is the correct word? It doesn't seem to make sense here.
 * 3) **Addressed.
 * 4) * P&a section, please. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 01:14, November 2, 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) **There's no available information for the P&A. QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 18:20, November 4, 2009 (UTC)
 * 6) ***I have taken the liberty of adding it myself. It may seem to have only obvious information, but as long as there is any information, it is required by the LG. If there is an appropriate quote for the section go ahead and add it, and if there is any information that needs to be adjusted, please do so. Let me know when you're done or if there's nothing more that needs to be done, and I will strike and support. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 18:46, November 4, 2009 (UTC)
 * 7) ****Yeah, I pretty much consider what you've added unnecessary fluff that just restates facts from the bio and does not describe any "powers" and "abilities" whatsoever. However, if you consider that to be appropriate, so be it, I'm not going to argue. I've made some adjustments, and as I fail to find any appropriate quotes, this objection should be addressed. QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 19:00, November 4, 2009 (UTC)
 * 8) *****I understand, although I disagree; but either way, thank you for your cooperation. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 19:09, November 4, 2009 (UTC)

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