Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Larrim


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Larrim

 * Nominated by: SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 08:54, November 25, 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Last notable KotOR NPC that appears solely in the South Apartments

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1) "Wanna vote, Skippy?" "Well, of course not, don't be ridiculous, Cousin Larrim!" --Skippy Farlstendoiro 09:30, November 25, 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) Good job.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 18:34, November 25, 2009 (UTC)
 * 3)  CC7567  (talk) 20:37, November 26, 2009 (UTC)
 * 4)  Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 17:19, November 30, 2009 (UTC)
 * 5)  Grunny  ( Talk ) 14:39, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Skippy found a possible typo
 * 2) * BtS: Therefore, it is undetermined whether Revan ever interacted with Kadir and, if so, (…) Do you mean with Larrim ? Skippy Farlstendoiro 09:03, November 25, 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) **Doh! The BTS was mostly a cut-and-paste, and I managed to miss that. Fixed. Thanks for the review Farl. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 09:26, November 25, 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) The Grand Master
 * 5) * Is it explicitly stated that his homeworld is Taris? If so, this should be specified in the bio; and if not, it should be removed from the infobox.
 * 6) **No it isn't stated. Removed.
 * 7) * "Therefore, it is undetermined whether Revan ever interacted with Larrim and, if so, the exact form that the conversation took." Please check your grammar here.
 * 8) **It reads fine to me. What in particular sounds incorrect?
 * 9) ***Due to the ordering, the last bit essentially reads: "it is undetermined the exact form that the conversation took."
 * 10) ****Addressed, hopefully. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 04:42, November 30, 2009 (UTC)
 * 11) *Nice work. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 15:13, November 28, 2009 (UTC)
 * 12) **Thanks for the review. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 02:10, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

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