Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/CT-7567/Legends

CT-7567

 * Nominated by:  CC7567  (talk) 21:48, May 4, 2014 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Since this project is five years in the making, I felt it needed a preface, so please pardon the ramble. To put it simply, I believe this article's construction symbolizes the Wookieepedia community. There are many people who contributed to it (and still will), whether it was by providing images and audio files, hunting down obscure sources, or letting me bounce ideas off them. The article will never be perfect, nor will it ever be the site’s longest Featured article, but I hope it does justice to the character himself, who I think is one of the best that Star Wars has to offer&mdash;even after the Great EU Purge, because he's a strong character in every one of his appearances. Whether you've already contributed or will do so by lending your time and effort to reviewing the article, thank you for doing your part to make it what it is. So, in honor of May the Fourth and on behalf of WP:TCW, here he is.

Lee's charge

 * A number and a name: Is there a link for the engagement you describe in the last sentence?  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 10:30, May 10, 2014 (UTC)
 * Added.  CC7567  (talk) 14:54, May 10, 2014 (UTC)
 * Battle of Teth: We have some kind of link for casevac team, however, as it currently refers only to one special case, I'll leave it up to you to decide about its inclusion.
 * Since "casevac" isn't a Star Wars–specific term, I don't see a need to link to it. Personally I also question whether the casevac team article itself is needed on the site, but that's another matter.
 * Interesting, maybe I'll tc it.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 13:16, May 14, 2014 (UTC)
 * Battle of Teth: We have a problem with the remaining clone troopers of Torrent Company. I believe I talked with you about this years ago, but we don't know if CT-9932 is Coric, Del, Attie, Nax, Zeer or just another clone. Currently you say that five (including Coric) survived, but in the next paragraph you mention Coric, Nax, Zeer, CT-9932, Del and Attie as survivors&mdash;which are six. My theory is that there are five survivors, but while Rex checked them over comlink, one of the clones answered with his serial number instead of "I'm here" or something like that which is said in the novel. However, this is speculation. It's nitpicky, but a delicate situation. Thoughts?  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 11:01, May 11, 2014 (UTC)
 * The jump from six to five troopers (both times excluding Rex) is a discrepancy within the novel. When the troopers are about to report in, Rex states that according to the biosign icons in his HUD, "five of his men were still alive." However, when they individually report in via comlink, there are six, with only Coric and CT-9932 identifying themselves by name (so 9932 definitely isn't Coric). Then, for the rest of the sequence, it's back to five (Coric, Zeer, Nax, Attie, Del). Assuming that the six troopers checking in is an error, I think it's safe to assume that CT-9932 is either Zeer, Nax, Attie, or Del, so I'm removing any references to him, which should solve the problem.  CC7567  (talk) 13:41, May 11, 2014 (UTC)
 * Shipyards of Gwori: Nitpicky, but However, the battle droids overseeing the blockade detected the multitude of life forms aboard the stolen frigate and activated the radiation beam.: Wasn't that Juhm who ordered it out of frustration of his slaves escaping?
 * It was both; changed.
 * Outpost inspections: and Rex ordered them to take off their sunbonnets to verify that they were clones: Isn't "sunbonnets" rather colloquial?  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 21:27, May 17, 2014 (UTC)
 * Adjusted.  CC7567  (talk) 18:37, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Comments

 * For reference, this is the Legends version of the article. All canon material will be incorporated into that version once the tabs system is approved and implemented.  CC7567  (talk) 21:48, May 4, 2014 (UTC)