Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Unidentified Vrot (Cuipernam)


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Unidentified Vrot (Cuipernam)

 * Nominated by: Supreme Emperor (talk) 04:10, June 20, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: About time I finished this :P For all the novels

(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1) As long as the second sentence is reworded like Ayrehead mentioned... -  Princess   GLG  22:07, June 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:43, June 28, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  23:07, July 13, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 12:58, July 16, 2013 (UTC)

Object Comments
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * The Vrots category is a redlink. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  15:35, June 20, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) **Oops, I thought I made that page a week ago :P
 * 4) * The era field of the infobox is a redlink. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  15:55, June 21, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) ** Oops, I meant that it lacked a source. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  00:56, June 22, 2013 (UTC)
 * 6) ***Oops, done
 * 7) Princess
 * 8) * The era needs to be added to the infobox. - Princess   GLG  22:48, June 20, 2013 (UTC)
 * 9) **Fixed. Supreme Emperor (talk) 14:47, June 21, 2013 (UTC)
 * 10) *** Source? - Princess   GLG  23:44, June 21, 2013 (UTC)
 * 11) ****Done. Supreme Emperor (talk) 03:41, June 22, 2013 (UTC)
 * 12) * If you know that the weapon he had had a trigger, do you know anything else about what kind of weapon it was? (Mainly, was it a blaster?) - Princess   GLG  12:10, June 22, 2013 (UTC)
 * 13) **All I know is it had a trigger.
 * 14) ***Ok, just making sure. - Princess   GLG  22:07, June 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * 15) 501st
 * 16) * You should bold the Vrot in the beginning of the body.... 501st  dogma ( talk ) 12:38, June 22, 2013 (UTC)
 * 17) **Done
 * 18) * The first sentence seems a bit of a run on, because it has so many ands and such. Could you see if you could change it? 501st  dogma ( talk ) 23:55, June 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * 19) **Do you mean the second sentence? Supreme Emperor (talk) 15:34, June 28, 2013 (UTC)
 * 20) ***Bah. Fix that... 501st  dogma ( talk ) 20:02, June 28, 2013 (UTC)
 * 21) ****Broke up the sentence, do you want me to try breaking up the now slightly longer third sentence too? :P Supreme Emperor (talk) 03:06, June 30, 2013 (UTC)
 * 22) *****Yep. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 14:44, July 4, 2013 (UTC)
 * 23) ******Done and done. Supreme Emperor (talk) 04:05, July 12, 2013 (UTC)
 * 24) Ayrehead
 * 25) * Couldn't you include breifly why the mercenaries were attacking the group? Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:06, June 22, 2013 (UTC)
 * 26) **How's this? Supreme Emperor (talk) 03:04, June 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * 27) *** The informations good but I think you need to change "during" to "he took part in" in the second sentence. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:01, June 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * 28) ****Done. Supreme Emperor (talk) 15:34, June 28, 2013 (UTC)