Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Velrugha


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Velrugha

 * Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:16, May 13, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Obscure Hutt commander for the burner

(3 ECs/0 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 22:25, May 13, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 00:53, May 16, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  02:42, May 23, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * Bob
 * 1) * "Hutt military force" makes it sound like it consisted entirely of Hutts, but I don't think that's likely. Would "military force" alone work?
 * 2) **Changed as you suggested. Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:09, May 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) * Alien Encounters isn't just a compilation of "Alien Encounters" articles; it includes every alien species statted by WEG to that point, minus those in previous aliens-only books. You might indicate this by simply adding a couple words, like "a compilation that included all the 'Alien Encoutners' articles" or something.
 * 4) **Added. I should probably go back through nearly all my other nominations to check this... Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:09, May 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) * It's probably worth adding an extra line that Rilileb remained free of Hutt domination after Velgrugha's efforts failed. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 15:48, May 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * 6) **Added. Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:09, May 15, 2013 (UTC)

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