Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Gondar


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Gondar

 * Nominated by: Trip391 (talk) 06:43, January 5, 2014 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Novels and Barn-Burner

(5 ECs/0 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Corellian Premier Jedi symbol.svg Force will be with you always 23:16, January 7, 2014 (UTC)
 * 2)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 22:36, January 8, 2014 (UTC)
 * 3) ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 12:49, January 9, 2014 (UTC)
 * 4) Supreme Emperor (talk) 04:38, January 16, 2014 (UTC)
 * 5)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  05:06, January 23, 2014 (UTC)

Object
 * SE
 * 1) * Needs a NOTOC
 * 2) **Done
 * 3) * Also, the article is short enough to not need an intro. Supreme Emperor (talk) 04:40, January 6, 2014 (UTC)
 * 4) **Done Trip391 (talk) 04:50, January 6, 2014 (UTC)
 * 5) 501st
 * 6) * Echoing SE's objection, the history section and the section above should be combined into one, with no header. Right now it looks like the top one, which I assume is the biology and appearance one, is the intro, which is not the case. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 19:12, January 6, 2014 (UTC)
 * 7) **Done
 * 8) * A BtS note mentioning how Gondars received an entry in TCSWE might be warranted as well. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 00:12, January 7, 2014 (UTC)
 * 9) **Forgot I did this yesterday Trip391 (talk) 06:02, January 8, 2014 (UTC)
 * 10) Savaged&hellip;
 * 11) * Rather than "poor-tasting coffee was compared to the sweat of a gondar," can you say who compared coffee to their sweat and when? In other words, I think Triv Pothman should be mentioned in the body as the one who made this comparison, and we should get a date for when it happened.
 * 12) **Done
 * 13) * I suspect the "appearances" list should be beefed up quite a bit. Any time Lando appears in that armor, we need a notation of it with "tusks only" off to the side. Take a look at User:SavageBob/Adaptations for some ideas of where to look. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 13:56, January 8, 2014 (UTC)
 * 14) **I looked through our category of images of Lando and added the sources obvious from there. I'd say be sure to check all visual adaptations of ROTJ (the comics, storybooks, etc.), and be sure to check things like Official Poster Monthly. There will likely be tons of appearances due to this being a movie critter (albeit only its tusks), so I'm happy to strike this objection if you check through the obvious visual tie-ins to ROTJ; people will continue to add new ones as time goes on. :) ~ Savage BOB sig.png 14:03, January 8, 2014 (UTC)
 * 15) **Got it. I'll get to trying to find them Trip391 (talk) 23:18, January 8, 2014 (UTC)
 * 16) ***Added the appearances I've been able to find
 * 17) * One other note I noticed in The Art of Return of the Jedi (p. 46): the Tamtel Skreej costume was designed by Nilo Rodis-Jamero and Aggie Guerard Rodgers, which means the tusks were their idea. This is probably BTS-worthy.
 * 18) **I don't have that source myself, but added what you said to the Bts, if you could double check that for me
 * 19) * And it's probably worth adding an image of the helmet somewhere with a caption saying it was the critter's tusks. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 23:54, January 8, 2014 (UTC)
 * 20) **Added Trip391 (talk) 00:47, January 9, 2014 (UTC)
 * 21) Exiled Jedi
 * 22) * Please use CSWECite for reference 5. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  04:40, January 18, 2014 (UTC)
 * 23) ** Done
 * 24) * I am also curious how the tusks are featured in Star Wars Galaxies, which I noticed was not mentioned anywhere in the article. My Galaxies knowledge is a little rusty, but it seems to me that if someone besides Lando wore a Gondar tusk mask or if they were featured in some other way, then it should be mentioned. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  04:47, January 18, 2014 (UTC)
 * 25) ** Done
 * 26) ***Just FYI: I added Galaxies, I believe, and the tusks are pictured because an image of Lando and the Max Rebo band is pictured: 30th Anniversary Bash. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 16:33, January 18, 2014 (UTC)
 * 27) ****Added a bit about that to the bts. Trip391 (talk) 07:18, January 19, 2014 (UTC)
 * 28) * The articles for the three Tales comics in the Non-canon section do not mention that they are non-canon. You should probably make sure that these are in the right place. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  05:23, January 18, 2014 (UTC)
 * 29) ** Done Trip391 (talk) 05:44, January 18, 2014 (UTC)

Comments
 * 1) Isn't "1stm" not needed if it first appeared in the film? Corellian Premier Jedi symbol.svg Force will be with you always 16:56, January 6, 2014 (UTC)
 * 2) *I figured it was like that before because only the tusks appeared in ROTJ, and it wasn't mentioned as a Gondar until Children of the Jedi, but I changed it to Mo. Trip391 (talk) 21:09, January 6, 2014 (UTC)
 * 3) Not an objection, but the image of Lando might go well in the infobox since the article's so small. You'd just have to force a caption, as was done with this article. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 12:49, January 9, 2014 (UTC)