Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations

 The featured articles of the wiki are articles that represent the best Wookieepedia has to offer. This is not a way to showcase the articles of your favorite characters, spaceships, or the like.


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So just what makes a featured article? Well, we've prepared a list just in case someone should ask that, and it is as follows.

An article must&hellip;


 * 1) &hellip;be well-written and detailed.
 * 2) &hellip;be unbiased, non-point of view.
 * 3) &hellip;be sourced with all available sources and appearances.
 * 4) &hellip;follow the Manual of Style, Layout Guide, and all other policies on Wookieepedia.
 * 5) &hellip;not be the object of any ongoing edit wars.
 * 6) &hellip;not be tagged with any sort of improvement tags (i.e. more sources, expand, etc).
 * 7) &hellip;have a proper lead that gives a good summary of the topic and can be used for the front page featured box.
 * 8) &hellip;have no more than 3 redlinks.
 * 9) &hellip;have significant information from all sources and appearances, especially a biography for character articles.
 * 10) &hellip;not have been previously featured on the Main Page. Otherwise, it can only be restored to featured status.
 * 11) &hellip;be completely referenced for all available material and sources. See Sourcing for more information.
 * 12) &hellip;have all quotes and images sourced.
 * 13) &hellip;provide at least one quote on the article; a leading quote at the beginning is required. Only one quote would be allowed at the beginning of each section at max, although quotes may be placed in the middle of the article.
 * 14) &hellip;include a "personality and traits" section on all character articles.
 * 15) &hellip;include a reasonable number of images of good quality if said images are available.
 * 16) &hellip;pass review by the Inquisitorius review panel.
 * 17) &hellip;counting the introduction and Behind the Scenes material, be at least 1000 words long (not including captions, quotes, or headers, etc).

For more information on what makes a featured article, see What is a featured article?

How to nominate:


 * 1) First, nominate an article you find is worthy of featured status, putting it at the bottom of the list below; see criteria above. Note that a previously featured article cannot be featured on the Main Page again; however, it can be restored to featured status.
 * 2) Others will object to the nomination if they disagree that the article is good enough; they will then supply reasons for doing so, and ways to improve the article (errors, style, organization, images, notability, sources).
 * 3) Supporters adjust the article until the objectors (with reasonable objections) are satisfied.
 * 4) The article is placed on the featured article list and added to the front page queue.
 * 5) Also, if, at least a week after the article's nomination, that article has 5 Inquisitor supports and no objections (or the objections have been stricken or overridden), it will be added to the queue, and will be officially known as a "featured article".

How to vote:


 * 1) Before doing anything, be sure to read the article completely, keeping a sharp eye out for mistakes.
 * 2) Afterwards, compare the article to the criteria listed above, and then either support or object the article's nomination.
 * 3) If you object, please supply concrete reasons for doing so, and how it can be improved. Please cite which rule your objection falls under! Failure to do so will result in your objection being considered invalid.
 * 4) As stated above, any objections will be looked upon by the nominator, supporters, and anyone willing to improve the article, and action will be taken to please the objectors.
 * 5) Once all objectors' complaints have been solved (or the article has 5 Inquisitor supports and no objections after at least a week), the article will be added to the queue and be officially known as a "featured article".

Also remember to add nominated at the top of the article you are nominating.

Every Sunday the next article in the queue will be highlighted on the Main Page as featured, marked with the featured template and removed from the list of nominations. The beginning of the article then appears on the Main Page via the featured article template. Nominees that are inactive for a month will be eliminated from the nominations list.

(6 Inqs/18 Users/24 total)
Support Oppose
 * 1) QuentinGeorge 11:17, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Kuralyov 13:47, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
 * 3)  StarNeptune Talk to me! 16:04, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) &mdash;Grand Admiral J. Nebulax (Imperial Holovision) [[Image:Imperial Emblem.png|20px]] 21:57, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
 * 5) JMAS 22:16, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
 * 6)  Greyman ( Paratus ) 01:17, 17 May 2007 (UTC)
 * 7) Adamwankenobi 23:57, 17 May 2007 (UTC)
 * 8) Yeah.-Darthtyler
 * 9)  Jaina Solo ( Talk ) [[Image:Jainasolosig.gif |25px]] 14:22, 28 May 2007 (UTC)
 * 10) great article AdmirableAckbar 14:37, 8 June 2007 (UTC)
 * 11) -- Eyrezer 06:21, 11 June 2007 (UTC)
 * 12) Hobbes15 ( Tiger Headquarters ) 18:10, 3 July 2007 (UTC)
 * 13) Graestan 17:36, 8 July 2007 (UTC)
 * 14) Green Tentacle (Talk) 21:33, 11 July 2007 (UTC)
 * 15) Jorrel [[Image:Wiki-shrinkable.png|20px]] Fraajic 03:42, 16 July 2007 (UTC)
 * 16) Why not? [[Image:The Death of Ki-Adi-Mundi.jpg|40px]]  Jediknight19bby  ( Jedi High Council Chambers! ) 18:55, 20 July 2007 (UTC)
 * 17) SingAurraSing 23:03, 20 July 2007 (UTC)
 * 18) Teemto 20:39, 29 July 2007
 * 19) Good Artical  Dark Lord Xander  ( Embrace The Dark Side! )[[Image:MandalorianSymbol.jpg|20px]] 06:42, 31 July 2007 (UTC)
 * 20) Thefourdotelipsis 01:25, 7 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 21)  Victor  ( talk ) 00:14, 8 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 22) Cato Neimoidia 02:25, 19 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 23) -Darth Homer 18:42, 20 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 1) -Darth Homer 18:42, 20 August 2007 (UTC)
 * Expand intro, section the Clone Wars...section, and I cock my eyebrow, sah, at the sectioning of the BtS. Thefourdotelipsis 11:33, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
 * Intro and sectioning done. Can't see what's wrong the BtS. It looks crap as a bullet or one massive chunky paragraph. QuentinGeorge 11:44, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
 * Ditch the portrayal subsection. And expand...something. Note that he's the only EU -based character to be in Clone Wars. Previously established. You know what I mean. Thefourdotelipsis 12:09, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
 * Aayla was in the Clone Wars as well. But done, anyway. QuentinGeorge 12:10, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
 * Too cursory in its coverage. It could use a lot of fleshing out. Also, we know that there will be a flood of information on K'Kruhk between now and its actually being featured, so it might be best to hold off anyway. Havac 18:05, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
 * Tell me where it needs to be expanded, and I'll expand it. The fact he is going to make more appearances isn't an objection as we featured Darth Bane shortly before the release of Path of Destruction. QuentinGeorge 21:04, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
 * Havac, look at the queue. Even approving this today would mean, at earliest, it doesn't appear on the front page until April 2008. Plenty of time for his Legacy and Dark Times appearances to be fully integrated in before he shows up on the front page. QuentinGeorge 21:28, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
 * Oh, I'm not objecting on those grounds. Just suggesting that holding off a bit could improve it. But anway, all the Republic stuff, bar Seleucamai, reads like a very breezy overview -- he went here and fought there and this person died, but there's no feel of what happened. Take, for example, the Vos/Viento thing. It says he was assigned to protect Viento, Vos assassinated Viento, he got hurt. It's lacking in substance. Mention the fact that Vos sneaked past him at night. Mention that he caught Quin just too late. Mention that they went over the balcony in the fight and K'Kruhk bounced off an airspeeder and was lucky to survive. As is, it covers everything, but not to the comprehensive level expected of a featured article. Also, looking again, it could use a powers and talents section -- his healing skill could be mentioned there. And I'm also objecting on grounds of image quality now -- putting the Clone Wars crap as his main pic over one of Jan's far more realistic and detailed drawings is a clear mistake. If you want a headshot, find a Jan headshot or crop a Jan full-body shot down. Havac 21:44, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
 * Well, I disagree that his animated depiction is "crap", but will replace with a comic headshot if that is what people want. I was mainly trying to put a bit of variety in, since I'd used all comic depictions in the biography. QuentinGeorge 21:54, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
 * As I side note, some of the detail requirements for these bios seem faintly ridiculous in that we have to chronicle every single step someone takes but, if those are the rules, then those are the rules and I will comply. QuentinGeorge 21:54, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
 * The image from the cartoon doesn't do the article much good. It should be replaced with a shot from one of the comics (perhaps the Dark Times one?). &mdash;Grand Admiral J. Nebulax (Imperial Holovision) [[Image:Imperial Emblem.png|20px]] 21:57, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
 * Jack, I've already said I'm going to replace the image and your antics on the Muun page don't exactly inspire confidence in your ability to spot a good one. QuentinGeorge 22:11, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
 * Additionally, I'd rather you didn't do a "cleanup" of the article when I'm trying to expand the damn thing. 22:14, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
 * Why are you lashing out at me? I give my opinion on the main image and then try to clean up the article, and then you scold me as if I did something wrong. What's your problem? &mdash;Grand Admiral J. Nebulax (Imperial Holovision) [[Image:Imperial Emblem.png|20px]] 22:16, 10 May 2007 (UTC)

'''Objection overridden by Inquisitorius - Inq/K'Kruhk 05:12, 1 June 2007 (UTC) '''Objection overridden by Inquisitorius - Inq/K'Kruhk 05:12, 1 June 2007 (UTC)
 * Karohalva I oppose this article on the grounds that using a Clone Wars Cartoon picture in the info-box is a crime against Star Wars. It sounds silly, yes, but it is true.
 * Please read what I have written above. I am going to replace it, as soon as I find a suitable headshot. QuentinGeorge 22:03, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
 * Oops. Sorry then. What say you just crop a full-body shot? That should be Wookieepedian-legal. Karohalva
 * I have to agree with Jack about the CW image for the infobox. I don't think it's crap, but I don't think it's the kind of image we want for an infobox unless there is no other option, such as with the Voolvif Monn and Foul Moudama articles. I went ahead and cropped the Siege of Saleucami image to just his headshot and put that up in the infobox. Does that meet everyone's approval? - JMAS 22:22, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
 * Eh, I said it's "crap" because a) I don't like the CW animation style and b) it's far less detailed and realistic than the comics pictures. It certainly deserves to be in the article, but it's not nearly a good enough depiction to be his main shot when better alternatives exist. It would be like using this as the infobox shot for Jerec. Or basically, what JMAS just edit-conflicted with me to say. Havac 22:25, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
 * I think this new image is much better. And Quentin, don't lash out at me again. &mdash;Grand Admiral J. Nebulax (Imperial Holovision) [[Image:Imperial Emblem.png|20px]] 22:26, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
 * Oh, please. Don't be so melodramatic. 22:28, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
 * Ok, I don't really mind what image is used, and I'm happy to go with that one. I'm at work now, so I'll do a "Talents and Powers" section when I get home. If anyone else has more they'd like added, please tell me. In terms of images, I think its probably ok how it is now. Less is more. QuentinGeorge 22:28, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
 * Melodramatic? I'm not the one who lashed out at another user just because they suggested a new main image and tried to clean up an article. &mdash;Grand Admiral J. Nebulax (Imperial Holovision) [[Image:Imperial Emblem.png|20px]] 22:32, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
 * This page is not designed for user arguments. Cool it please. Atarumaster88  00:37, 11 May 2007 (UTC)
 * Back on topic, I have (once again) cleaned up the article. &mdash;Grand Admiral J. Nebulax (Imperial Holovision) [[Image:Imperial Emblem.png|20px]] 00:42, 11 May 2007 (UTC)


 * I've significantly changed the article, added more, added a abilities section, etc. Any more objections? 07:33, 11 May 2007 (UTC)


 * Can people please strike objections that have been satisfied? Please? - QuentinGeorge 03:19, 1 June 2007 (UTC)
 * K'Kruhk remembered this and used the concept to help the Jedi evade pursuing Yinchorri starfighters. Can this be expanded? How did K'Kruhk do this?
 * found himself fighting for his life on Yibikkoror. Were they ambushed or what?
 * After their escape. How did they escape?
 * It was in this mission that his Master was killed, battling for her life on Yinchorr. More detail please. --Eyrezer 05:23, 1 June 2007 (UTC)
 * Addressed. QuentinGeorge 05:57, 3 June 2007 (UTC)
 * Can we get some more info on the mission to Teyr. Why were the losses so high? K'Kruhk's fault? outnumbered? Or is it only mentioned in passing?
 * Only mentioned in one comic frame, yet I've expanded it to the best of my ability. QuentinGeorge 10:14, 4 June 2007 (UTC)
 * Nice extrapolation. --Eyrezer 23:45, 4 June 2007 (UTC)
 * The last point I have, can the paragraph introducing the purge survival be made to flow more from the previous paragraph? --Eyrezer 03:27, 4 June 2007 (UTC)
 * How's that? QuentinGeorge 10:14, 4 June 2007 (UTC)
 * Resolved --Eyrezer 06:21, 11 June 2007 (UTC)
 * Nasty little [source?] tag in the powers and abilities section needs to go. Green Tentacle (Talk) 10:33, 2 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Solid article, overall. Fix that unsourced statement in Powers section and I'd be glad to give my support. &mdash;Mir  len 

Comments Other than that, however, the article looks great. Hobbes15 ( Tiger Headquarters ) 18:10, 3 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Aware that it may be short. Would be willing to listen to expansion suggestions. QuentinGeorge 11:17, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
 * Here are a couple suggestions that might be good. But overall, great article.
 * More on Giiett's "trick," and what caused K'Kruhk to remember it. - Taken care of
 * Name the other Jedi who finished K'Kruhk's training, if possible. If he or she's identity is never revealed, than ignore this. He's never named, we only know him because of the specific comment "my first master, implying a second one. QuentinGeorge 09:26, 23 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Mention that Tholme did not, in fact die. It makes no sense for Aalya Secura to remember him as one of those who died, and then for him to assist the Republic's victory. - Taken care of
 * One unsourced statement in Powers and Traits. - Taken care of. QuentinGeorge 09:26, 23 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Right, gimme a bit to address those. Might take a while, since I've been a bit lazy with RL lately. QuentinGeorge 05:30, 7 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Ok, I've taken care of all of that except for the dang whiphid hibernation thing. Now, can anyone find me Randy Stradley's original post? I can find many referencing it, but not the original. QuentinGeorge 21:04, 9 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Sourced that last thing about the hibernation trance Anything else, people? QuentinGeorge 21:18, 11 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Hobbes is on holiday, so I struck the objections I've covered. QuentinGeorge 09:26, 23 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Mostly Havac's request for expansion in some areas, Quentin. That's the only outstanding objection. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 16:55, 10 August 2007 (UTC)

Remove nom (Inq only)
 * 1) I don't see this going anywhere and significant work needs done, per Havac.  Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 01:16, 24 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 2)  Gonk  ( Gonk! ) 01:46, 24 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) Thefourdotelipsis 05:37, 26 August 2007 (UTC)

(3 Inqs/2 Users/5 total)
Support
 * 1) Bringbacknom!   20:08 2 July 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Thefourdotelipsis 01:52, 7 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) It's come a long way.  Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 14:39, 15 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) Nice job on the objections.  Greyman ( Paratus ) 22:47, 16 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 5)  Chack Jadson  Talk  15:35, 23 August 2007 (UTC)

Oppose Other than that, the article is pretty good, especially on the P&T. Hobbes15 ( Tiger Headquarters ) 04:42, 17 August 2007 (UTC)
 * Could use some expansion, and there are way too many quotes. Better sectioning is also needed. Darthchristian  ( Hey! ) 13:17, 3 July 2007 (UTC)
 * The number of quotes is simply insane. Hobbes15 ( Tiger Headquarters ) 19:46, 10 July 2007 (UTC) Seems to be addressed.  Hobbes15 ( Tiger Headquarters ) 22:59, 15 August 2007 (UTC)
 * Per Darthchristian. Chack Jadson 19:52, 10 July 2007 (UTC)
 * It also needs and Personality and Traits section. Darthchristian   ( Hey! ) 16:51, 14 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Done!-- Harrar 01:13, 17 August 2007 (GMT)
 * From the desk of Ataru
 * Intro: Favour-->favor
 * Intro, Para 1, Line 3, reword sentence about "for the failure of . . . "- doesn't read well
 * Intro, comma after However
 * Intro, Para 2: Faith in what?
 * Intro: Remove speculation about Qorealists
 * Intro: Add a comma after Thus or remove it.
 * Sectioning looks bad. Why is there a single subsection under each section?
 * 1.1: Reword: "It appears that Harrar . . ."- sounds OOU.
 * 1.1: Fix comma errors surrounding "However"
 * 1.2: Given command, not commands
 * 1.2: Reword "And it was there" to "where". Conciseness should be prized.
 * 1.2.1, comma after Falcon
 * 1.2.1, remove comma after dismally
 * 1.3, worshiped should be worshipped
 * 1.3, Para 2, Line 3, add comma after and
 * 1.3.1: Reword to "enough time to recover from the loss of Coruscant" or "enough time to recuperate" or similar
 * 1.3.1, Para 1, line 4, Remove comma after "and"
 * 1.3.1: Jumps from Borleias to Coruscant without explanation. Expand.
 * 1.4: Revealed is mispelled.
 * 1.4: Weasel words on Qorealist part
 * 1.4: comma after "At first"
 * 1.4, Para 1, add comma after However
 * 1.4, Para 3, remove commma after and
 * 1.4: Remove first "her" in "asked her of her discoveries"
 * 1.5: remove "had in fact"; doesn't read well
 * 1.5: reword to say "Harrar stated that learning of the possible connection between the ancient Yuuzhan Vong homeworld and Zonoma Sekot had shattered . . . "
 * 1.5: reword first sentence of 2nd Paragraph
 * 1.5, 2nd Para, add comma after There
 * 1.5.1: learnt-->learned
 * 1.5.1: decapitalize liberation
 * 1.5.1: "for they were the only way to save his people" is POV
 * Too many quotes
 * No P&T
 * I'm a bit rusty on NJO, but I'm sure he had a bigger role than this. Needs expansion.
 * Traitor is not listed under appearances.
 * No info from Enemy Lines I.
 * P&T not sourced yet.
 * Have a nice day.&mdash; Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 20:49, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * A few things:
 * Infobox image lacks a proper source and description; it also needs to be cropped.
 * Cropped,sourced, described-- Harrar 01:13, 17 August 2007 (GMT)
 * Infobox is poorly formatted: the "|" signs should be in front of the variables, not behind them. ("|name=Harrar", not "name=Harrar|")
 * Done!-- Harrar 01:13, 17 August 2007 (GMT)
 * 1.1: "Years" in "Early Years" should be decapitalized per WP:MOS.
 * Done-- Harrar 01:13, 17 August 2007 (GMT)
 * 1.3: Odd sentence: "The invasion still continued to proceed well"
 * Changed -- Harrar 01:13, 17 August 2007 (GMT)
 * I wish I had a catchphrase to put here. --Imperialles 14:54, 15 August 2007 (UTC)
 * Minorly reword 2nd sentence in intro.
 * All done. Cheers for the help-- Harrar 18:18, 22 August 2007 (GMT)
 * A few suggestions for improvement
 * More detail in intro about Harrar was "instrumental in ending the conflict."
 * Vary starts to sentences in The Elan debacle. "He... He... Harrar... Harrar..." Mix them up a little.
 * Clarify that Khalee Lah did, in fact, die.
 * In "together, they would capture the elusive Jedi," (Resurgence, paragraph 3), "would" should be changed to "planned to," since they did not capture Solo.
 * Way too many "He's" at the beginning of sentences (four in a row) in the 3rd paragraph of Zonama Sekot.
 * In a skirmish with Anor in which he very much had the traitorous Intendant on the back foot? What does this mean?
 * Taken into account and changed. Thanks Hobbes, and took out the "back foot" bit - its an English expression for when you're beating someone in a fight.-- Harrar 18:18, 22 August 2007 (GMT)
 * Source it properly. Green Tentacle (Talk) 12:52, 23 August 2007 (UTC)

Comments
 * 1) He's not in Enemy Lines I - that appears to have been an erroneous appearance. That's everything about Harrar there as far as I know. P&T sourced, no redlinks, referencing. If anyone could help with pictures that'd be nice. Harrar  16:21, 14 August 2007 (GMT)
 * Ok, thanks for working on it. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 14:39, 15 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 1) *Really sorry about striking people's objections, I mistakenly assumed that's what you did after you had acted upon the suggestions...now I know. Harrar 15:49, 15 August 2007 (GMT)

Remove Nom (Inq only)
 * 1)   Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 19:04, 31 July 2007 (UTC)
 * 2)  Doesn't look like it's going anywhere. Green Tentacle (Talk) 13:38, 2 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 3)   Greyman ( Paratus ) 19:30, 2 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 4)  Gonk  ( Gonk! ) 01:46, 24 August 2007 (UTC)

(5 Inqs/6 Users/11 Total)
Support Object
 * 1) Nominated. This article was stripped of its FA status a while ago. Chack Jadson 21:00, 11 July 2007 (UTC)
 * 2)  Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 13:56, 13 July 2007 (UTC)
 * 3)  Greyman ( Paratus ) 16:38, 13 July 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) Green Tentacle (Talk) 17:48, 14 July 2007 (UTC)
 * 5)  Jaina Solo ( Talk ) [[Image:Jainasolosig.gif |25px]] 18:10, 20 July 2007 (UTC)
 * 6) Great article. [[Image:The Death of Ki-Adi-Mundi.jpg|40px]]  Jediknight19bby  ( Jedi High Council Chambers! ) 18:57, 20 July 2007 (UTC)
 * 7) Love it Dark Lord Xander 06:59, 31 July 2007 (UTC)
 * 8) Very well written.  Victor  ( talk ) 01:52, 7 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 9) Thefourdotelipsis 23:55, 7 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 10) It's one of the better articles i've seen on Wookieepedia. Destroyer Droid 20:06, 13 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 11) Impressive. Good work. Hobbes15 ( Tiger Headquarters ) 05:14, 17 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 1) I really hate to have to do this but since I read it a few days ago there's an edit war brewing over whether Revan's holocron should be listed as one of Bane's masters (it clearly shouldn't) and over his eye colour. There's also now a [source?] tag in the behind the scenes section and somebody's messed up one of the references so that it no longer has a name listed. Until those issues are resolved I have to object. Green Tentacle (Talk) 15:32, 15 July 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) *Actually, forget the reference bit, Greyman's fixed it. Green Tentacle (Talk) 15:33, 15 July 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) Per GT. This is a really annoying thing to have going on, but until the edit conflict is resolved, I unfortunately have to withdraw my support as well.  Greyman ( Paratus ) 15:36, 15 July 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) I can't support this while muppets keep adding Revan in the "master" field and "yellow" in eye colour. QuentinGeorge 21:14, 15 July 2007 (UTC)
 * 5) You might need to clarify the bit about Lucas creating the character a bit more since it would appear that not everybody's happy with it. Green Tentacle (Talk) 09:12, 23 July 2007 (UTC)
 * 6) *Found a source. Green Tentacle (Talk) 12:27, 25 July 2007 (UTC)
 * I think more from the duel with Kas'im should be included, including his trick with 2 lightsabers that he'd concealed from Bane.
 * The bit about Rain finding her own way off Ruusan, is that actually in JvS as referenced?
 * It's from the Dark Forces Saga and New Essential Chronology - it, however, is referenced incorrectly in the article. QuentinGeorge 22:49, 1 August 2007 (UTC)
 * Some of the P&T doesn't seem very well strung together. There is also some overlap that should be avoided.
 * "Bane was independent, defying Qordis, and heading to Lehon instead of joining Kaan's army. After Lehon, Bane became confident in his supremely talented self. He manipulated others for his own purposes, not telling Githany or Kas'im about the private lessons he was taking with them" - the order of this needs to be reversed. It is as though going to Lehon led to the manipulation but the timing was the other way around.
 * The BTS on his origins should be expanded, making more mention of his specific appearances and how that developed.
 * Also the article makes no mention of the conflicts between JvS and POD. Surely this needs to go in the BTS at least. --Eyrezer 01:15, 31 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Actually, add in a in-depth continuity section, as there is many continuity differences between Bane's first mention in TPM novel, his appearances in Bane of the Sith and JvS, and then in PoD. He's a walking continuity nightmare, and Karpyshyn's disdain for canon hasn't helped. As it stands, it seems to heap all the blame on BotS and give the impression the others are saintly and without taint. QuentinGeorge 22:49, 1 August 2007 (UTC)
 * Some of the references are wrong, (notably the elements from NEC are incorrectly labelled as Bane of the Sith) and there is a persistent troll intent on proving to all us misguided folks that Bane of the Sith is "noncanon". (It isn't, and said troll has been told as much many times before). QuentinGeorge 22:49, 1 August 2007 (UTC)
 * Right, now said troll's essay has been added to the article. It needs to be removed, or at the very least, heavily trimmed. At the moment it is a painfully fanboyish harangue against KJA and Bane of the Sith in particular. I have no qualms on an actual "continuity curiousities" section, but it needs to be a) sourced b) free of POV and agenda pushing and C) Map ALL the continuity of Bane and the Ruusan-era Sith, starting from Bane's Lucas conception, through his depiction in the TPM novel, THEN the concurrent release of JvS and BotS, then the depiction of Kaan et al in the Dark Forces flashback, THEN the depiction in PoD. As it currently stands, the section reads like some sort of diatribe on why BotS is horrible and non-canon and KJA a hack because of "contradictions" with later source material. I am not in any sense of form a big fan of KJA, but this sort of agenda-pushing leaves me cold. QuentinGeorge 06:35, 2 August 2007 (UTC)
 * Fixed.  Chack Jadson  Talk 14:29, 10 August 2007 (UTC)

Comments
 * Nice job on clearing up the points I left for you, Chack. Greyman ( Paratus ) 16:38, 13 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Sourced the in Bts. Chack Jadson 11:09, 16 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Hey everyone, this conflict has been fixed. Chack Jadson 11:48, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * I'm abstaining my vote because I haven't finished Path of Destruction yet and I don't want to be spoiled.  Gonk  ( Gonk! ) 19:55, 21 July 2007 (UTC)
 * The only reason I am not in 100% favor of making this a featured article, is because we haven't made an exact time-line with all the contradictions with the various sources, I still believe it deserves a spot as a featured article, though. Destroyer Droid 20:06, 13 August 2007 (UTC)
 * Are there any objections that are not addressed? Hobbes15 ( Tiger Headquarters ) 16:50, 21 August 2007 (UTC)

(2 Inq/4 Users/6 Total)
Support
 * 1) I've worked long on this article, and I think it is worthy. Any comments/criticism would be helpful.&mdash; Darthtyler Talk 01:44, 27 July 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Thefourdotelipsis 00:16, 8 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 3)  Chack Jadson  Talk  23:31, 8 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 4)  Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 15:08, 15 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 5) -- [[Image:AckbarSig.jpg|40px]] dmirableAckbar  ( It's A Trap! ) 15:20, 15 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 6) Ozzel 04:51, 21 August 2007 (UTC)

Object
 * '''From the desk of Atarumaster88
 * Remove speculation on origin/parents' history
 * Not enough explanation of sunnydew nectar. Doesn't make much sense.
 * Wicket and Teebo incident section doesn't make much sense. There's irrelevant information that could be condensed, but it doesn't explain why they need to bother Gantu.
 * Wicket and Teebo's escape section doesn't make much sense either. It's written more like part of Teebo's bio, not Gantu's. The action is centered around the deeds of the Ewoks, not the subject (Gantu). Still don't get the whole sunnydew/Zandor Rocker thing.
 * P&T is rather short.
 * Is "Sunnydew nectar" a) supposed to be capitalized b) need to be linked three or four times?
 * Always hard to tell with comics, by my feeling is: no. I fixed the case, and it seems the links have already been fixed. -- Ozzel
 * Remove referencing from intro, per Sourcing.
 * Intro just doesn't read well, particularly the second paragraph.
 * Have a Super Terrific Friendly Un-frustrating day. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 16:37, 27 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Um, are you being sarcastic? (that last line about the super happy un frustrating part.)&mdash; Darthtyler Talk 16:39, 27 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Not that it matters, but no, I'm not being sarcastic. I don't want people to think it's personal and that I'm picking on them- I do this to everyone. The exact phrasing was inspired by Darth Culator. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 16:42, 27 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Well that makes sense too, I guess.&mdash; Darthtyler Talk 16:48, 27 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Remove bullets from behind the scenes, the Lilo and Stitch bit has nothing to do with anything, fix the source on Image:Coruscanti ogre vs Divto.jpg, referencing should be per paragraph or maybe removed entirely since it's single source, which also means you don't need the first appearance bit. Green Tentacle (Talk) 17:22, 27 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Done.&mdash; Darthtyler Talk 17:29, 27 July 2007 (UTC)

Comments
 * I'd like to see the intro be fleshed out. I don't think it's long enough for the Main Page yet. -- Ozzel 08:07, 2 August 2007 (UTC)
 * I tweaked it a little bit, but I agree. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 13:30, 2 August 2007 (UTC)

(1 Inq/3 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1) Previously featured.  Chack Jadson  Talk 14:36, 10 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) [[Image:The Death of Ki-Adi-Mundi.jpg|40px]]  Jediknight19bby  ( Jedi High Council Chambers! ) 00:45, 11 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 3)  Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 15:45, 23 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) Unit 8311 15:25, 25 August 2007 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) Conflicting sources should be sorted out. [[Image:The Death of Ki-Adi-Mundi.jpg|40px]]  Jediknight19bby  ( Jedi High Council Chambers! ) 19:58, 10 August 2007 (UTC)
 * The article says "Fighting broke out all over Pau City between droid and clone forces, destroying large parts of the sinkhole," and cites Revenge of the Sith. But I didn't see the sinkhole itself sustaining any damage when I saw the film . -LtNOWIS 01:56, 12 August 2007 (UTC)
 * Also, I don't think there should be quite so many inter-section quotes, especially in "Endgame." -LtNOWIS 01:56, 12 August 2007 (UTC)
 * Fixed.  Chack Jadson  Talk 23:01, 12 August 2007 (UTC)
 * From the desk of Atarumaster88
 * Needs a reference at the end of "In the service of San Hill"
 * Needs a reference at the end of "The beginning of the war"
 * A bit more information from Labyrinth of Evil is needed.
 * IIRC, LOE has details on Belderone, etc, particularly when he rescues Gunray. I'd like to see that expounded upon. Some guy 15:24, 21 August 2007 (UTC)
 * Ah. Sorry, some guy. ;)  Chack Jadson  Talk 22:42, 21 August 2007 (UTC)
 * Some sticky wording in the death section, particularly in "However, during the fight, Kenobi had pulled one of Grievous's chest plates off, Grievous's armor having been previously damaged by Windu, revealing the synth-skin gutsack holding Grievous's remaining organs"<s?
 * P&T has no mention of his "softer" (okay, maybe just less bloodthirsty) side with Kunmar.
 * First lines of talents needs ref'd.
 * (Talents) "Formal forms"? Reword please.
 * Have a Super Terrific Friendly Unfrustrating day. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 14:32, 16 August 2007 (UTC)
 * Fixed.  Chack Jadson  Talk 20:09, 20 August 2007 (UTC)
 * I'd like to see a solid source for the Gary Oldman thing. Also, you might want to mention George's plans for effing with Grivie's history in the upcoming cartoon. -- Ozzel 03:29, 20 August 2007 (UTC)
 * Sourced the first. For the second, where did you find that?  Chack Jadson  Talk 21:38, 23 August 2007 (UTC)

Comments
 * Well written overall and a pleasure to read. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 14:32, 16 August 2007 (UTC)

(4 Inq/6 Users/10 Total)
Support
 * 1) Nominated.--Goodwood 11:19, 12 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Although i would prefer *see comment* it's still a brilliant article. Tutos Lumenarious 21:58, 12 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) Good work. - Graestan  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( This party's over ) 01:42, 13 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) Thefourdotelipsis 08:38, 14 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 5) I'd decided to stay as far away from this FA-business as possible, but in recognition of the effort put into this great article, I'm going to cast a supporting vote. KEJ 11:03, 14 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 6) *I think you're in the wrong section then. :P -- [[Image:AckbarSig.jpg|40px]] dmirableAckbar  ( It's A Trap! ) 11:10, 14 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 7) **Oh, you're right. Thanks for telling me. KEJ 11:25, 14 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 8) ***No problem. -- [[Image:AckbarSig.jpg|40px]] dmirableAckbar  ( It's A Trap! ) 22:16, 17 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 9) Jedimca0(Do or Do Not, There is No Try) 21:44, 14 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 10) -- [[Image:AckbarSig.jpg|40px]] dmirableAckbar  ( It's A Trap! ) 22:16, 17 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 11)  Greyman ( Paratus ) 02:51, 18 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 12) A really creative topic for an article. Nice to see it given such through attention. Nice work!  --Eyrezer 03:04, 18 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 13) Per Eyrez. I wanna see more articles like this, covering vast concepts thoroughly and, yes, even interestingly.  Gonk  ( Gonk! ) 22:16, 19 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 14) Per Gonk. jSarek 00:40, 20 August 2007 (UTC)

Oppose
 * The complete lack of film screenshots raises my eyebrow. Thefourdotelipsis 09:30, 13 August 2007 (UTC)
 * I've substituted a few of the more pathetic current images with film screenshots already on-site. Hope that makes the difference though I can always scrounge more...--Goodwood 12:21, 13 August 2007 (UTC)
 * Skywalker Loop is linked in the article, but the source it's from doesn't have any other coverage. The book is called Starfighter Battle Book - X-Wing vs. TIE Interceptor; it's all about dogfighting. I hate to say it, but you might have a lot more material to cover. (If you need help finding the book, ask on IRC.) Also, the Ssi-ruuk used entechment to power their starfighters, which was pretty unique. That might warrant coverage. -LtNOWIS 01:50, 15 August 2007 (UTC)
 * I've been through that battle book frontwards and backwards, LtNOWIS, and that's just about the only useful thing I got out of it. Basically the book is a "choose your story" except the "story choices" are "maneuvers" and you turn to the appropriate page to figure out the results. I have, however, added a notation about the Ssi-ruuk and entechment (included in a section in Technology about droid starfighters--not enough room in the History section)--Goodwood 02:11, 15 August 2007 (UTC)
 * Thanks. -LtNOWIS 16:37, 15 August 2007 (UTC)
 * Nice article, very thorough. Two points: Firstly, when describing the Ssi-ruuk and entechment, you use "essentially sucked the soul out of a living being and implanted it". That is not very encyclopedic. I think "soul" should be removed and the sentence reworded. Secondly, in the history section, mention should be made of a starfighter destroying the first Death Star. Surely, this is one of the most significant actions undertaken by starfighters! --Eyrezer 05:08, 17 August 2007 (UTC)
 * Addressed. Note: Insofar as the notation about entechment goes, you're correct however I've modified the sentence to reflect the narrative -- if I recall correctly both Ssi-ruu and others referred to the process thusly (or, at least how I amended it to be), including Dev Sibwarra and Luke Skywalker. I could perhaps add Dev's quote on the process from The New Essential Guide to Weapons and Technology -- which, incidentally, I now have.--Goodwood 20:10, 17 August 2007 (UTC)
 * From someone who isn't here
 * Haven't read the whole thing thoroughly, but it seems to skimp on a number of NJO and post NJO details, such as stutter-fire and shield trios. Actually, the whole tactic of close formations to increase shield strength (mentioned in VotF also) could use some mention. some guy who isn't here. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 19:49, 20 August 2007 (UTC)
 * The shield trios has been addressed. Greyman ( Paratus ) 22:30, 20 August 2007 (UTC)
 * I've read The Krytos Trap many times and never does it make doctrinal statements that are in the characteristics section AFAIK. Source or remove it.
 * Addressed; I have rephrased the source.
 * Does it actually state that the dogfight is the main type of starfighter engagement? Source or remove
 * Addressed: "Dogfight" is used in virtually every mention of starfighter combat that there is within canon.
 * Where does it say NR fighters are more effective than the Empire's overall? This would seem to contradict that.
 * Addressed. Rephrased the statement.
 * Ridiculously large amount of Original Research in the training section. You cannot assume that everyone trains the same as the Alliance does. The Making of Baron Fel has some info on Imperial training methods.
 * Partially addressed - unable to obtain The Making of Baron Fel for study, however have included a statement from another source which should add a bit of contrast.
 * Source the part about dying within 5 missions. (3.4)
 * Addressed.
 * Information on Chiss droid starfighters needs added (ref Force Heretic II)
 * Addressed. Prototype only; mentioned in passing.
 * Actually, Ssi-ruuk droids are smaller than Rebel starfighters if you check TAB. Please correct and adjust paragraph.
 * Addressed.
 * 6.1 What does "The battle was pitched" mean?
 * Addressed. Rephrased the statement.
 * Lots of fluff in the history sections- irrelevant information that could be culled and trimmed.
 * Addressed as I was able.
 * Excessive/redundant internal linking. Needs HTML cleanup.
 * Addressed so far.
 * Pictures aren't relevant. Battle at Kuat has nothing to do with Thrawn campaign.
 * Addressed.
 * IIRC, StealthXs have slightly less firepower than XJs.
 * Addressed.
 * No mention of CCIR Needles at all. For shame- those things could have revolutionized starfighter combat.
 * Addressed.
 * Have a Super Terrific Friendly Un-frustrating Day. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 16:10, 21 August 2007 (UTC)
 * Thank you.--Goodwood 02:59, 27 August 2007 (UTC)

Comments I've worked my fingers to the bone to get this article where it is now, but I'm not complaining because this has been a labor of love. All reasonable objections/suggestions will be taken into due consideration and acted upon.--Goodwood 11:19, 12 August 2007 (UTC)
 * Not complaining or anything but i think it's a little long, could it not be devided into different sections of something like that?Tutos Lumenarious 22:01, 12 August 2007 (UTC)
 * Breaking the article up into different articles would defeat the purpose of the article. Hence why I've included a veritable cornucopia of links to more in-depth articles on various covered subjects.--Goodwood 20:20, 17 August 2007 (UTC)
 * This isn't enough of an objection to actually object, but couldn't we get a more appropriate infobox? With the recent work done on space warfare, I think there's justification for a category and infobox for "forms of combat" or something similar. Other than that, nice work. -- Darth Culator  (Talk) 04:40, 21 August 2007 (UTC)

(3 Inq/5 Users/8 Total)
Support
 * 1) My... first... (finished) FA attempt. -- Ozzel 03:09, 20 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Almost too far outside the box...but the Inqs won't complain. [[Image:The Death of Ki-Adi-Mundi.jpg|40px]]  Jediknight19bby  ( Jedi High Council Chambers! ) 18:24, 20 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) *Huh? You know in advance what every inq is going to say? That is extraordinary. AdmirableAckbar 23:02, 20 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) Nice. Joker1138 ( Mandalore ) [[Image:MandalorianSymbol.jpg|25px]] 02:03, 21 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 5) Superlative. We need to see more of this stuff. Thefourdotelipsis 06:41, 21 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 6)  Chack Jadson  Talk  22:42, 21 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 7) Adamwankenobi 05:25, 24 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 8) Lord Hydronium 06:49, 24 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 9)  Greyman ( Paratus ) 02:01, 26 August 2007 (UTC)

Oppose
 * From the desk of Atarumaster88
 * Second paragraph of "Origin": First sentence reads a bit awkwardly. Reword please.
 * More context on "The Southern Underground" please.
 * Is it just me, or is "bombastic use" a bit POVish?
 * More context on "Into the Sewers" A reader clicking this link may not be familiar with SoTE, so who the heroes are should be expounded upon.
 * Reference the orchestra credits please. Referencing everyone individually shouldn't be necessary, but it should list where the information came from. Was it from the CD packaging?
 * Adjust categorization as it does not appear to be a spoken article.
 * "Tracks" section- Williams "Main Theme" should either be italicized or de-capitalized. I didn't adjust it because I was unsure of which was appropriate. Ditto with all the other tracks, but I don't think the headers need adjusted.
 * I'm a bit confused- CD artwork pic at the bottom says the artwork was by Struzan while the infobox states it was McQuarrie. Please clarify or just explain. ;-)
 * Reference the 2nd and 3rd paragraphs of release. As you've already set precedent by refing the liner notes, please carry it all the way through if that is where the information is from.
 * Reference 2nd paragraph of "Xizor's Theme" please.
 * Have a Super Terrific Friendly Un-frustrating day. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 18:37, 24 August 2007 (UTC)
 * I think I've addressed everything except for expanding the story info on those two tracks (which are the shortest two after all, but I'll still try to add a little) and sourcing irrefutable, obvious facts. As you say, this is setting a precedent, so I think it's important not to go overboard. I don't think we should necessarily apply the same exact standards for sourcing OOU as with IU. For example, by saying the music appears in the SOTE video game, there is no need for a source. If I said it's used in a video game, or just somewhere else in general, then yes, sourcing with the video game would be appropriate. But the statement as it is already sources itself. Also, saying what is in the liner notes: that's just a fact. The liner notes don't say what's in the liner notes; they are the liner notes. Look, I'm all for being thorough, but we gotta draw the line somewhere, as the good captain says... well, you know. -- Ozzel 08:35, 25 August 2007 (UTC)
 * You may have a point, but I'm still going to add the end of the first paragraph in The Destruction of Xizor's Palace to the sourcing list. :P Green Tentacle (Talk) 17:30, 26 August 2007 (UTC)

Comments
 * Definitely open for suggestions here. Considering we don't have many other real world FAs to compare it to, I tried to use some album FAs at Wikipedia as models. -- Ozzel 03:09, 20 August 2007 (UTC)
 * Great to see this here. A truly one-of-a-kind article :) ...Just a couple of requests. One, can it include a brief MP3 or OGG clip from one of the songs? "Xizor's Theme" would seem to be the best choice. (I'd be happy to rip and edit just such a clip, though I can only encode MP3s.) Two, the Misconceptions section could use clarification/expansion; it doesn't clearly indicate, in some cases, whether these "rumors" are true or not. The last two bullets in particular puzzle me; if neither is true, we need to cite how we know that, and if they may be true/maybe not, the header for that section shouldn't be Misconceptions.  Gonk  ( Gonk! ) 20:07, 20 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 1) I'd like to include sound clips too; in fact, I already prepared some a while back. However, I very much dislike the template we currently use for sounds. If we could maybe bring in the one from Wikipedia, I'd be happy to put them in. 2) I figured this section might give me trouble, but I'd hate to lose it. It's just hard to prove something is not true without someone flat out denying it. I think most of the things I put are okay, because they are already contradicted by facts earlier in the article (from valid sources). The refs I provided for those were just to show that they are in fact real rumors that are out there. (And, I have to disagree with Jorrel: I think Wikipedia is a perfectly valid source when being used as a source for misinformation.) Still, I'm open to suggestions on how to improve this. -- Ozzel 20:19, 20 August 2007 (UTC)
 * I made improvised a template and added 3 sound clips. -- Ozzel 07:04, 24 August 2007 (UTC)
 * I'm undecided on this, but perhaps the Dha Werda Verda section should be moved to later in the article, but that's not really an objection. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 18:37, 24 August 2007 (UTC)
 * Perhaps the last two paragraphs of "Reception" could be changed to "Criticism" and given their own section. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 18:37, 24 August 2007 (UTC)
 * I somewhat give the Misconceptions section an askance look. It just feels off, both in formatting and content, but it's not in the rules. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 18:37, 24 August 2007 (UTC)
 * This is a new type of FA nom, so I want it to be really good, and it's also precedent, which is another reason to insist on high quality stuff. Overall impressive and the objections I have are mostly minor. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 18:39, 24 August 2007 (UTC)

(4 Inqs/5 Users/9 total)
Support
 * 1) Nominated.  Greyman ( Paratus ) 18:19, 23 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Grand Master of the GA Order, my vote is in.  Jediknight19bby  ( Jedi High Council Chambers ) 18:29, 23 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) Good job Greyman. --Jedimca0(Do or Do Not, There is No Try) 18:47, 23 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) Very nice. -- Ozzel 02:07, 24 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 5) Excellent.  Chack Jadson  Talk 00:49, 25 August 2007 (UTC)
 * Wow, a copy-edit I actually enjoyed reading. Good work, Greyman. - Graestan  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( This party's over ) 02:27, 26 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 1)  Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 03:10, 26 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Thefourdotelipsis 03:41, 26 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) Per Graestan :)  Gonk  ( Gonk! ) 14:14, 26 August 2007 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) *From the desk of Atarumaster88
 * 2) ** Ridiculously long intro. 1) It's longer than Mara Jade Skywalker's or Jaina Solo's or Starfighter combat's, which are more "notable" subjects anyway. Condense please.
 * 3) ***Although I would argue that notability is a personal preference, I have condensed the intro as suggested ;) Greyman ( Paratus )
 * 4) ****Thank you, though I would argue that Jaina, Mara, and starfighter combat can be objectively said to play a much larger role in continuity as a whole than Nomi. ;-) Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 21:57, 24 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 5) ** "After several years of training on H'ratth, Andur learned everything that Chamma could teach him, and instructed Andur to travel to the planet Ambria in the Stenness system to finish his Jedi training under Master Thon" Some subject-verb confusion here and I'm not sure what's meant.
 * 6) ***Fixed. Greyman ( Paratus )
 * 7) ** Some sticky wording in the second para of ambush.
 * 8) ***Fixed. Greyman ( Paratus )
 * 9) ** Piped link aside, we need some explanation of who Oss is when he is first encountered.
 * 10) ***Fixed. Though, with the way that I wrote that specific paragraph ("Arrival on Ambria"), I believe that the deception is justified as it follows the same deception laid out in the actual comic. However, I altered the piped links, and reworded the last paragraph of "Arrival on Ambria" to give a small explanation on who Oss was and why he was on Ambria :) Greyman ( Paratus )
 * 11) ****That's a neg- Oss is still mentioned by name in the 3rd para and it's still not clear who he is at this point. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 21:57, 24 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 12) *****Alright, I removed and reworded that specific part so his name is not mentioned yet. Greyman ( Paratus ) 23:31, 24 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 13) ** Bogga and his set about . . ? Word missing
 * 14) ***Fixed. Greyman ( Paratus )
 * 15) ** "the feelings darkness which was cast by the creatures cause Nomi to react." Uh . . clarify please.
 * 16) ***Fixed. Greyman ( Paratus )
 * 17) ** Every description of battle meditation I've read doesn't mention causing things to kill their allies. (KotOR II, KotOR, TTT, DB: POD all describe it differently)
 * 18) ***Our article on battle mediation should be modified somewhat then, to reflect that battle meditation is simply projecting an image, no matter how small, to influence events. Taken directly from pages 3-4 of Tales of the Jedi 4: The Saga of Nomi Sunrider, Part 2 → "Fortunately, Vima's mother possesses a unique talent, that comes to her on rare occasions -- concentrating in the Force, she forms an image of the two dark side dragons attacking each other -- a moment later image becomes reality! Nomi Sunrider doesn't know that her strange ability to influence events around her will one day become her greatest strength: The power of Jedi battle meditation." And another example of battle mediation being used to cause things to kill their allies which is taken from the TPB edition of Tales of the Jedi: Dark Lords of the Sith, pages 127-128 → "With great effort, Nomi forms an image of the two warriors turning against eachother&hellip;the image grows brighter as her battle meditation begins to take hold -- Like Arkanian dragons, the Tetans turn upon each other with mortal violence! The rest join in&hellip;and Nomi Sunrider walks through the slaughter to freedom!" According to the descriptions in the TOTJ appearances of Nomi, I feel that the description I provided with regards to Nomi's battle meditation is correct. Greyman ( Paratus )
 * 19) ****Heh, great. Well, then our article on battle meditation should be modified then, because I've always heard of it as using the Force to influence the outcome of a battle, e.g. through bolstering the "fighting spirit" and determination of one side while sapping that of the others. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 21:57, 24 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 20) ** 1st para of Revolt on Onderon is very choppy- please reword and condense/create some new sentences. Also, numerous comma splices and "was subject of Sith torture techniques"?
 * 21) ***Gonk looked over the paragraph in question, and we removed two commas. I rewrote small pieces of the paragraph, and the Sith torture thing has been reworded. Greyman ( Paratus )
 * 22) ****Better, but Freedon Nadd Uprising should either be linked or de-capped. That goes for the mention in the Krath uprising section also. ;-) Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 21:57, 24 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 23) *****Clarified. Greyman ( Paratus ) 00:31, 26 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 24) ** De-capitalize Battle in Battle meditation. I fixed some of them, but there's a bunch.
 * 25) ***Blasted them :) Greyman ( Paratus )
 * 26) ** More detail on Nomi's and Ulic's successful attack on Ommin's stronghold to free Arca Jeth would be nice, if available.
 * 27) ***Expanded as requested, sir! Greyman ( Paratus )
 * 28) ** Need explanation of who exactly the Krath are. A clause or sentence would suffice.
 * 29) ***Fixed. Greyman ( Paratus )
 * 30) ** De-capitalize "Joint fleet" unless it is used as a proper noun.
 * 31) ***Fixed. Greyman ( Paratus )
 * 32) ** Additional sectioning in Krath conflict section would be nice.
 * 33) ***Fixed. Greyman ( Paratus )
 * 34) ** Loads of present tense in Krath conflict section.
 * 35) ***Fixed. Greyman ( Paratus )
 * 36) ** An mdash; next to a ref tag looks bad- can that be moved or re-formatted? (Krath conflict)
 * 37) ***My mistake. That was supposed to be at the end of the next sentence. Fixed now, Greyman ( Paratus )
 * 38) ** Comma splices throughout, particularly prevalent in next-to-last paragraph of Krath uprising.
 * 39) ***Fixed due to multiple copy-edit's. Greyman ( Paratus ) 02:32, 26 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 40) **Have a Super Terrific Friendly Un-frustrating day. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 19:37, 24 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 41) ***I believe I have dealt these specific objections. Cheers, Greyman ( Paratus ) 21:16, 24 August 2007 (UTC)

Comments
 * I did a complete rewrite and expansion of this article&mdash;so, let me introduce you all to the new and improved Mrs. Nomi Sunrider :) Greyman ( Paratus ) 18:19, 23 August 2007 (UTC)
 * Note to self: I am up to "The Great Sith War". Resume reviewing there later. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 19:38, 24 August 2007 (UTC)
 * Large number of small grammar and spelling errors really detract from article, which is a shame because it's an in-depth look at a major NSW and TOTJ character. Comma errors in particular. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 21:57, 24 August 2007 (UTC)
 * I've tapped some of my usual copy-editors to help out with this. Greyman ( Paratus ) 23:31, 24 August 2007 (UTC)
 * Extensive copy-edit complete. - Graestan  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( This party's over ) 02:27, 26 August 2007 (UTC)
 * Gonk has done a partial copy-edit (due to computer issues), and Graestan has now preformed a full one, and I've done expansion/cleanup along the way. Greyman ( Paratus ) 02:31, 26 August 2007 (UTC)

(3 Inqs/3 Users/6 total)
Support
 * 1) Nominated.   Greyman ( Paratus ) 18:19, 23 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Looks great. --Jedimca0(Do or Do Not, There is No Try) 18:43, 23 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 3)  Jediknight19bby  ( Jedi High Council Chambers ) 20:04, 23 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) I certainly like it. --School of Thrawn 101 04:19, 24 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 5) Just a tad anti-climactic after Nomi, but still a very well presented article. Thefourdotelipsis 03:57, 26 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 6) Blarg, more TOTJ stuff. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 19:49, 26 August 2007 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Could use a longer intro.  Jediknight19bby  ( Jedi High Council Chambers ) 18:30, 23 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) *Expanded just a little. Though, some FA's do have shorter intro's&hellip;it's all about the info available. See here. Greyman ( Paratus ) 18:52, 23 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) From the desk of Atarumaster88
 * 4) * Is it stated that he became a Jedi Knight? It does in the intro, but not in the main body, so it needs to be placed there for reference. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 19:06, 26 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 5) **Er, an oversight on my part during the articles writing. Fixed. Greyman ( Paratus ) 19:11, 26 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 6) *That's all on this one. Have a Super Terrific Friendly Un-frustrating day. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 19:06, 26 August 2007 (UTC)

Comments
 * I wrote this for GA a month or two ago, and have done some work recently (along with a copy-edit courtesy of School of Thrawn 101) in an effort to make it ready for FA. Greyman ( Paratus ) 18:19, 23 August 2007 (UTC)

(2 Inqs/5 Users/7 total)
Support
 * 1) Nominated.  Greyman ( Paratus ) 18:19, 23 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Jedimca0(Do or Do Not, There is No Try) 18:44, 23 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) Ozzel 19:27, 23 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 4)  Jediknight19bby  ( Jedi High Council Chambers ) 20:03, 23 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 5) You want darkness, Greyman? I'll show you darkness! -  Graestan  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( This party's over ) 00:33, 24 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 6)  Chack Jadson  Talk  00:49, 25 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 7) Thefourdotelipsis 04:21, 26 August 2007 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Longer intro.  Jediknight19bby  ( Jedi High Council Chambers ) 18:31, 23 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) *Expanded by a couple words now&hellip;same length as some current FA's, see example here. Greyman ( Paratus ) 18:52, 23 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) Would be nice if the BTS said who created the character. -- Ozzel 19:27, 23 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) *Added and fixed :) Greyman ( Paratus ) 19:38, 23 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 5) *From the desk of Atarumaster88
 * 6) **POVishness with repeated use of "beautiful", "evil", etc., especially with that infobox picture (ugh). A bit of wording change is all that's needed.
 * 7) ***Fixed. Greyman ( Paratus )
 * 8) **Fix capitalization of "Queen" throughout article. Unless it is followed by a name, it should be de-capitalized.
 * 9) ***Fixed. Greyman ( Paratus )
 * 10) **Needs context on why Jeth worked with the Beast Riders.
 * 11) ***Context added as to why Jeth did this. Greyman ( Paratus )
 * 12) **Remove links from quotes, per MoS.
 * 13) ***Fixed. Greyman ( Paratus )
 * 14) **Have a Super Terrific Friendly Un-frustrating day. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 19:43, 26 August 2007 (UTC)

Comments
 * A co-project of Graestan’s and mine which we feel is now ready for FA. Greyman ( Paratus ) 18:19, 23 August 2007 (UTC)

(2 Inq/4 Users/6 total)
Support
 * 1) Alakazam! It's Xaverri!  Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 00:05, 24 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Jedimca0(Do or Do Not, There is No Try) 15:05, 24 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 3)  Jediknight19bby  ( Jedi High Council Chambers ) 15:21, 24 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) SHEZAM!  Greyman ( Paratus ) 18:17, 24 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 5) Xaverri very good Enochf 18:36, 24 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 6)  Chack Jadson  Talk  00:49, 25 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 7) She's no Bithabus, though. Thefourdotelipsis 10:11, 27 August 2007 (UTC)

Objections Comments
 * 1) Could we find a picture?  Jediknight19bby  ( Jedi High Council Chambers ) 14:46, 24 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) *I think there are no pictures. I also think that the fact that there are no images in the article is not a valid reason to object. --Jedimca0(Do or Do Not, There is No Try) 15:05, 24 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) **I think you should keep the count, so that nobody thinks you and Ataru are one.  Jediknight19bby  ( Jedi High Council Chambers ) 15:21, 24 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Whaaa..? Hmm, Did you just accuse Jedimca0 of being a sockpuppet of Ataru? :P Greyman ( Paratus ) 15:27, 24 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 5) ****No, I simply said that he should keep the count.  Jediknight19bby  ( Jedi High Council Chambers ) 16:28, 24 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 6) *****JediKnight19bby, my forgetting to update the count was an honest mistake and one that you've personally forgotten numerous times to do. You placing your above comment was unnecessary, since it was an honest mistake, which everyone else was able to realize, including Ataru. Also, further responses should not be left as they do not contribute to the improvement of the article. thank you. --Jedimca0(Do or Do Not, There is No Try) 16:54, 24 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 7) There's just a couple things which need to be cleared up:
 * 8) * The second paragraph of "Dealings with Solo" needs to be sourced.
 * 9) **Fixed.
 * 10) * Is it possible to get a ref tag from The New Essential Chronology somewhere in the article since it's listed in the sources? I found Xaverri on page 93, the exact quote being "As the months passed, the new partners met dozens of offbeat individuals, such as Shug Ninx, Sala Zend, and Xaverri.", but couldn't find it anywhere else. Maybe a tag is called for if that's the case?
 * 11) **Clarified, discussed via IRC. Greyman ( Paratus ) 18:17, 24 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 12) * Xaverri is also in The Essential Chronology, being mentioned twice → "They formed a partnership and, as the months passed, met dozens of offbeat individuals such as smuggler-mechanic Shug Nix, the beautiful and exotic technician Salla Zend, and the female con artist Xaverri." → Pg. 29, and, "Meanwhile, Solo stayed largely out of sight, working as a magician's assistant on Xaverri's six month illusionist tour." → Pg. 29. I went ahead and added The Essential Chronology to the Sources list, but I'll leave it to your discretion on what to do about the ref tags, or if you feel this calls for another tag ;)
 * 13) **Clarified, discussed via IRC. Greyman ( Paratus ) 18:17, 24 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 14) *Other than that, it looks and reads great. Cheers, Greyman ( Paratus ) 17:05, 24 August 2007 (UTC)
 * From the park bench of Four Dot
 * "the surname was listed last after a series of ancestral ties, so she took no other name than simply "Xaverri"." - So...did she produce the name from her posterior, or was it actually a part of her name?
 * Addressed. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 20:27, 26 August 2007 (UTC)
 * "The two started going out, and on their third date, Xaverri kissed Han Solo." - This sounds infantile and irrelevant. An alternative should be found, methinks.
 * Removed. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 20:27, 26 August 2007 (UTC)
 * "However, two of their scams were not as successful and she and Han were forced to run through the countryside, evading pursuit by hiding up to their necks in a swamp, until Chewbacca was able to pick them up in her ship." - What about the other time?
 * If the source had the details, I would tell you. It doesn't. Corrected, I suppose. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 20:27, 26 August 2007 (UTC)
 * Italicise ship names.
 * Corrected. An oversight on my part. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 20:27, 26 August 2007 (UTC)
 * "Xaverri then revealed that Waru had been summoned to Crseih by experiments performed by the Imperial Procurator of Justice and that the Procurator and Waru had formed an alliance that would bring considerable power." - This is unwieldly. I would suggest a rephrasmentialisationing.
 * Split into two sentences. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 20:27, 26 August 2007 (UTC)
 * Would it hurt to have a few images? You know, of Waru, of the Battle of Nar Shadaa...it would spice it up a little, y'know?
 * Addressed. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 20:27, 26 August 2007 (UTC)
 * Dual redlinks. I forgot what the limit was.
 * It's at the top of the page, and it's 3. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 20:27, 26 August 2007 (UTC)
 * "performing increasing difficult feats." - I'm not sure that works.
 * ly addedly toly thely sentencely. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 20:27, 26 August 2007 (UTC)
 * "Some of her tricks included lasering a volunteer from the audience in half, then lasering herself in two pieces also." - Lasering is a word?
 * It's in the original source, so yes.. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 20:27, 26 August 2007 (UTC)
 * Lando Calrissian in the relationships section. Imagine if we had relationships sections for real life people. How many subsections would we have to have for Natalie Portman? A lot. Feelings were'nt reciprocated, no relationship.
 * Removed. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 20:27, 26 August 2007 (UTC)
 * "Furthermore, Xaverri was capable of flying her own ship, the Phantasm." - A woman? Flying a ship? That's ridiculous! Seriously though...do we need that phrase?
 * It's a Talents section. It lists Xaverri's talents, and piloting is one of them. Rephrased anyway. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 20:27, 26 August 2007 (UTC)
 * That's all. Thefourdotelipsis 04:48, 26 August 2007 (UTC)
 * Why not just put the Xaverri's magic section into the traits section? Seems redundant. --Eyrezer 05:53, 26 August 2007 (UTC)
 * Moved. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 20:27, 26 August 2007 (UTC)

(5 Inq/3 Users/8 total)
Support
 * 1) --MIS Tau 1 02:28, 25 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Thefourdotelipsis 02:32, 25 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) --Eyrezer 01:10, 26 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) Bah! One laser cannon. - Graestan  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( This party's over ) 04:26, 26 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 5) Lord Hydronium 11:04, 26 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 6) I am the God of Hell-Fire, and I bring you...  Gonk  ( Gonk! ) 14:33, 26 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 7)  Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 23:02, 26 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 8) Good to see it here, where it belongs. :-) jSarek 03:30, 27 August 2007 (UTC)

Objections Comments
 * From the desk of Atarumaster88
 * Reference Cygnus Spaceworks in infobox please.
 * Would it be possible to get an idea of what the Missile Boats were fighting induring the Voryxnx and research facility attack? The bit about the 3 Carracks is nice, but what were the research platforms attacked by? Capital ships? Fighters? A meticulous count is not needed, just a general idea of opposition.
 * Links to specific actions against Zaarin, Bothans, etc. please.
 * A bit more context on rescuing Palpatine please. If that wasn't the last sortie, it needs to be placed before the last sortie part. If it was, the rest of the article needs adjusted.
 * Have a Super Terrific Friendly Un-frustrating day. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 03:48, 26 August 2007 (UTC)
 * All issues except Cygnus source, and Un-frustrating day addressed--MIS Tau 1 08:33, 26 August 2007 (UTC).
 * Manufacturer has been sources, and my day is good to go now.--MIS Tau 1 22:21, 26 August 2007 (UTC)
 * Source for "Most fans consider the original, sleeker representation from TIE Fighter to be the "true" representation"? - Lord Hydronium 09:22, 26 August 2007 (UTC)
 * That was prior to my edit. Removed.--MIS Tau 1 10:55, 26 August 2007 (UTC)
 * Hmm. Source the name, please. Green Tentacle (Talk) 13:50, 27 August 2007 (UTC)
 * Very solid, well-written nom overall, especially from someone new to FA. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 03:48, 26 August 2007 (UTC)

(4 Inq/0 Users/4 total)
Support
 * 1) Nominated.  Greyman ( Paratus ) 04:56, 25 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) No objections to such a "beautiful and flawless" article.  Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 22:07, 26 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) Thefourdotelipsis 12:26, 27 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) Green Tentacle (Talk) 13:46, 27 August 2007 (UTC)

Objections
 * 1) Properly source BTS and include who created the character. Thefourdotelipsis 05:07, 26 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) *Fixed and Fixed. Greyman ( Paratus ) 18:22, 26 August 2007 (UTC)

Comments
 * I don't know why I like this character so much&mdash;maybe it's the whole legend thing. Greyman ( Paratus ) 04:56, 25 August 2007 (UTC)

(1 Inq/0 User/1 total)
Support
 * 1) The Dude. Thefourdotelipsis 12:03, 25 August 2007 (UTC)

Objections Comments
 * This suggest he may have been in the NJOSB. If not, and this page is original material, it should be added to the sources. --Eyrezer 09:07, 27 August 2007 (UTC)
 * DAVID WARNERING! HEAVY SPOILERS WITHIN FOR INFERNO! YOU HAVE BEEN ADVISED. Thefourdotelipsis 12:03, 25 August 2007 (UTC)

(1 Inquisitor/1 User/2 Total. This is the complete amount of votes.)
The area under which you vote to support
 * 1) This is a vote to support. Thefourdotelipsis 12:03, 25 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Now this is funny.  Chack Jadson  Talk 14:04, 25 August 2007 (UTC)

'''The area under which you vote to oppose. Also, the area under which Ataru makes a list of complaints'''
 * 1) Sorry. Rule 5. And the question of who is engaging in the edit war isn't relevant to rule 5, so this objection will stay until the subject is dropped. -- Darth Culator  (Talk) 23:34, 26 August 2007 (UTC)

The area under which comments are made
 * WARNING. THERE ARE NO SPOILERS IN THIS ARTICLE. Oh, and if you're going to complain about the caption at the bottom, ask Jaymach or Darth Culator. Thefourdotelipsis 12:03, 25 August 2007 (UTC)

(1 Inq/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) Thefourdotelipsis 12:03, 25 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Don't see why not. Unit 8311 12:10, 25 August 2007 (UTC)

Oppose

Comments
 * This one's an oldie, so feel free to tear it a new one. Thefourdotelipsis 12:03, 25 August 2007 (UTC)

(1 Inq/0 Users/1 Total)
Support
 * 1) Lord Hydronium 08:40, 26 August 2007 (UTC)

Oppose

Comments