Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Peckva


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Peckva

 * Nominated by: - 501st Dogma Republic_emblem.png( Comlink ) 01:27, January 14, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Ungulates

(2 ECs/3 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 13:50, January 15, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) Tinwe (comlink) 09:57, January 19, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) I highly suggest a page be created for ungulates. The word itself is mentioned in the canon and several examples exist. The external link is inappropriate because it leads readers to an OOU explanation of a concept that does exist IU. graestan ( talk ) 07:55, January 27, 2012 (UTC)
 * 4) Good work.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  13:52, January 28, 2012 (UTC)
 * 5) &mdash; Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 16:32, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Return of the Jedi
 * 2) * Two preliminary objections. One: There needs to be a BTS section.
 * 3) **Completed--- 501st Dogma Republic_emblem.png( Comlink ) 13:22, January 14, 2012 (UTC)
 * 4) * Two: There needs to be a "Sources" section instead of an "Appearances" section. Material such as The Essential Atlas belong in a Sources section rather than an Appearances section.
 * 5) **Esjs fixed this--- 501st Dogma Republic_emblem.png( Comlink ) 13:22, January 14, 2012 (UTC)
 * 6) *&mdash; Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 03:42, January 14, 2012 (UTC)
 * 7) * I'm going to echo Grae's comment above. I've left a redlink to it, so it will have to be written before this passes. &mdash; Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 16:27, January 27, 2012 (UTC)


 * 1) Lee's charge
 * 2) * Source the second sentence.
 * 3) **Completed--- 501st Dogma Republic_emblem.png( Comlink ) 13:22, January 14, 2012 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Please take a look at Sourcing and apply it on the article.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 13:24, January 14, 2012 (UTC)
 * 5) ****I've sourced the date of publishing and looked over the sourced aspects of the article. What exactly did you want changed?--- 501st Dogma Republic_emblem.png( Comlink ) 13:38, January 14, 2012 (UTC)
 * 6) *****You don't have to source each sentence as long as there is no new source. You can remove the source tag between your two sentences.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 13:39, January 14, 2012 (UTC)
 * 7) ******Ok, thanks for telling me. It has been removed--- 501st Dogma Republic_emblem.png( Comlink ) 13:45, January 14, 2012 (UTC)
 * 8) * Clone Commander Lee  Talk 10:18, January 14, 2012 (UTC)
 * 9) * AFAIK we should not include links to other pages in the body of our articles.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 10:47, January 15, 2012 (UTC)
 * 10) **Ok, I put the link in external references. I also removed the category for hunting creatures because it is hunted, and according to the atlas does not hunt.--- 501st Dogma Republic_emblem.png( Comlink ) 13:08, January 15, 2012 (UTC)
 * 11) ***The category applies, because it is for "hunted creatures".  Imperators II (Talk) 13:10, January 15, 2012 (UTC)
 * 12) ****Whoops. I glanced over it and saw rancor and some wolf, so I assumed it was for the hunters. Thanks for correcting me.--- 501st Dogma Republic_emblem.png( Comlink ) 13:12, January 15, 2012 (UTC)
 * 13) * Who wrote the book? Please add this to the BtS.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 13:26, January 15, 2012 (UTC)
 * 14) **Added--- 501st Dogma Republic_emblem.png( Comlink ) 13:42, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

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