Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Tresk Im'nel's translator droid


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Tresk Im'nel's translator droid

 * Nominated by:  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  17:33, October 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Random article button do your stuff!

(3 ECs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1) Three cheers for the Random Article button!-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 20:15, October 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2)  Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 21:46, October 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 19:34, October 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) --Eyrezer 06:48, November 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5)  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 17:45, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * I'm not sure that the New Republic and the New Jedi Order should be listed as affiliation. The droid was affiliated with its owner. Just because the owner was affiliated with those entities doesn't mean that the droid was. -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 19:22, October 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * I wasn't sure about this either, I removed them now, thanks for the review.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  20:09, October 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) Cav
 * 2) * The last sentence: The droid was owned by Im'nel from the beginning of the New Republic to the time of the Yuuzhan Vong's invasion of the galaxy doesn't flow well, especially the use of "the beginning of the New Republic". Can we use more formal wording instead of "beginning"? - Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 11:36, October 26, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Is it any better now? Thanks for the review.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  12:07, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

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