Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/EE-4 blaster rifle

EE-4 blaster rifle

 * Nominated by: TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders.svg  Anıl Şerifoğlu  (talk) 01:26, August 20, 2018 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Finally the first nomination from WookieeProject Battlefront!

Uncle Jangeth

 * "The EE-4 blaster rifle was a powerful type of blaster that was capable of discharging a red-colored, two-round spread burst fire with a medium range." This may seem nitpickey, but the placement of the word choices seem odd here. For me, the "two-round spread burst fire" and the "medium range" doesn't work. I would mention the red-colored medium range first before getting into the the burst of fire since that's pretty unique. What do you think?
 * "[...]manufactured by BlasTech Industries." That's pretty important. I'd mention it earlier in the description.
 * Actually, there isn't any source that says the EE-4 was manufactured by BlasTech. Since its predecessor model is from BlasTech, I thought it was worth mentioning later in the description. Do you think it should nonetheless be mentioned earlier? Or does this placement make the reader think that the EE-4 was also from BlasTech? TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders.svg  Anıl Şerifoğlu  (talk) 21:32, August 21, 2018 (UTC)
 * "While the EE-3 focused on precision and range, the EE-4 was more effective at close range and had a superior rate of fire with its shorter and stubby barrel. On the other hand, these alterations caused a reduction in the rifle's accuracy at range and cooling power in comparison to its predecessor." Is this from your point of view or did the source actually state this? I'm curious.
 * The quote in the Behind the scenes is pretty much everything we know about the rifle, it's just reworded. Also, the cooling power comparison comes from the weapon statistics in the game, and the EE-4's is the image in Bts. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders.svg  Anıl Şerifoğlu  (talk) 21:32, August 21, 2018 (UTC)
 * I'll give it another look later.  JangFett  (Talk) 19:09, August 21, 2018 (UTC)

Grunny

 * The History section has a link to Bomb/Canon, which is effectively a redlink since the page is currently just a broken redirect to the Legends page. So, I'd say that probably needs to be properly created if you're linking to it.  grunny &#64; wookieepedia :&#126;$ 15:38, August 21, 2018 (UTC)
 * Done. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders.svg  Anıl Şerifoğlu  (talk) 16:39, August 21, 2018 (UTC)