Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/X2

X2

 * Nominated by: QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 17:30, May 5, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: A 60 KB long single-source article? I bet this has never happened before&hellip;

Support

 * 1) Looks good to me. Great job, Qui-Gon.-- 01:33, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

List of doom

 * In the early life section, you say that Grey was a Knight. However, the following sentence indicates that he was still under Kota's tutelage. The first sentence should say Grey was a Padawan, shouldn't it? Or was Kota his former Master when the Kaminoans stole Grey's DNA?
 * Grey was Kota's Padawan when the Kaminoans stole his DNA, but after that incident he became a Knight. I've tweaked the early life part to reflect this. QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 12:54, May 18, 2010 (UTC)
 * Thanks. I'll keep looking for more objections.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 19:47, May 18, 2010 (UTC)
 * Please capitalize all instances of "Master".
 * There's only one instance of "master", and I believe it's not incorrect. If the word's being used in the context of being a Padawan's master I'm not sure it should be capitalized, as it isn't a title; and you can be someone's master and not be a Jedi Master. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 14:53, May 16, 2010 (UTC)
 * Ah, OK. Cool.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 12:34, May 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * More to come, perhaps&hellip;--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 14:30, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

You're sitting on a new Khomeini?

 * The intro is a touch engorged, I think. If you could condense it down to the length of the three existing paragraphs, that would be ideal.
 * A curious item appears in Star Wars Missions 1: Assault on Yavin Four&mdash;"Wedge Antilles and the other surviving starfighter pilots were also present." The event in question is a briefing held by Dodonna, and concerns an Imperial carrack cruiser entering the Yavin system. The cruiser is later downed and its captain, Skeezer, is captured by the Alliance. Since X2 is identified as one of those surviving pilots, I would think it counts as an appearance of sorts, but I'm curious to know what you think about this.
 * Otherwise, quite good. Although utter tosh. :P Thefourdotelipsis 02:55, May 29, 2010 (UTC)