Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Nafjan T'dell


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Nafjan T'dell

 * Nominated by:  IFYLOFD  ( Floyd's crib ) 01:41, April 23, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: FloydProject: Lost Tribe moves to the CAN.

(1 ECs/3 Users/4 Total)
Support Object
 * 1) Good, but the last sentence is very similiar to the one in his wife's article.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 10:06, April 23, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) The ebooks might as well be called Star Wars: Gilligan's Planet. Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 16:44, April 24, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  01:52, May 6, 2012 (UTC)
 * 4) Gal-icon.jpg  OLIOSTER  (talk) 17:00, May 8, 2012 (UTC)
 * 1) Princes kept the view
 * 2) Well, maybe this is just me nitpicking but bear with me:
 * 3) He's categorized as a Sith but not wholly identified as as Sith in the bio, just that he served on a Sith starship. Is that enough to classify him as one?
 * 4) *Well, there's no other real category for him.
 * 5) Please remove the table of contents.
 * 6) *Done.
 * 7) Looks really good. Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 03:03, April 24, 2012 (UTC)
 * 8) *Thanks for the review.  IFYLOFD  ( Floyd's crib ) 03:08, April 24, 2012 (UTC)
 * 9) Exiled Jedi
 * 10) * "Omen crewmembers were brought to civilization where they took their place as rulers of the world" I'm a little confused here, how were they brought to civilization?
 * 11) **I didn't want to go too far off topic, so it's been changed to "made their way to civilization".
 * 12) * Could you vary the wording somewhat from the Kanika T'dell article? -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  19:04, May 1, 2012 (UTC)
 * 13) **Done.  IFYLOFD  ( Floyd's crib ) 23:44, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Comments
 * 1) Again, just nitpicking, but the last sentence implies that Ebya would be allowed to produce right away. Maybe add "eventually" somewhere in the sentence? Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 03:03, April 24, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) *Added.  IFYLOFD  ( Floyd's crib ) 03:08, April 24, 2012 (UTC)