Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Barrow Oicunn


 * ''The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a featured article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.

(5 Inqs/1 User/6 Total)
Support
 * 1) Thefourdotelipsis 09:41, 3 December 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) YVW, dangit!  Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 06:26, 6 December 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) --  Darth Culator  (Talk) 02:03, 7 December 2007 (UTC)
 * 4)  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  19:56, 7 December 2007 (UTC)
 * 5)  Graestan ( This party's over ) 00:57, 10 December 2007 (UTC)
 * 6) Green Tentacle (Talk) 22:29, 10 December 2007 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) *From the squalid cubicle of Graestan:
 * 2) * "He served aboard the Mas Ramdar during the Battle of Coruscant, and served the Republic faithfully"&mdash;A bit awkward.
 * 3) * Too many subsequent sentences beginning with "he."
 * 4) * Linking, such as piped links for gunner and the galaxy,among others.
 * 5) **Eh?
 * 6) ***"Gunnery officer"&hellip;"pan-galactic"&hellip;you get the gist.
 * 7) * "Oicunn was given the chance to utilized inspired tactics"&mdash;Tense.
 * 8) * Could the image be moved? It appears that "The New Order" is the title more for the image in this arrangement.
 * 9) * &mdash;Graestan ( This party's over ) 03:25, 9 December 2007 (UTC)
 * 10) **Apart from the "Eh?"d one, I've adressed all of them. Except for the image. I'm a bit of a stickler for having images adjacent to the relevant text, and if I flipped it, all the images in the article would be on the one side, which looks quite ugly. So I'm going to have to make a stand on that one. :P Thefourdotelipsis 07:15, 9 December 2007 (UTC)
 * 11) ***Fair enough on the image. Graestan ( This party's over ) 23:32, 9 December 2007 (UTC)
 * 12) From the motel of Green Tentacle:
 * 13) * Don't we usually bullet lists in infoboxes?
 * 14) **I thought I'd try something different, since bullets look hideous in the infobox. If it conflicts with the MOS, or you think it's particularly objectionable, I'll add bullets, however.
 * 15) ***Meh. Green Tentacle (Talk) 22:29, 10 December 2007 (UTC)
 * 16) * Infobox eras different to icon.
 * 17) **Fixed.
 * 18) * Clone Wars: "With Humbarine devastated and abandoned, its defensive forces were abandoned, with Oicunn transferred to the Coruscant Home Fleet." Abandon one of those abandoneds. :P Green Tentacle (Talk) 00:03, 10 December 2007 (UTC)
 * 19) **Abandoned. Thefourdotelipsis 00:57, 10 December 2007 (UTC)

Comments

'''Approved by Inquisitorius 23:49, 10 December 2007 (UTC)
 * This beat just won't stop! Thefourdotelipsis 09:41, 3 December 2007 (UTC)