Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Color-crawler


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Color-crawler

 * Nominated by: - Princess   GLG  12:34, March 19, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: First CAN, not sure how good it is.

(4 ECs/2 Users/6 Total)
Support
 * 1) Not bad at all.&mdash;  03:30, March 21, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) Novels ftw Supreme Emperor (talk) 04:42, March 22, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  20:24, March 22, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4)  Stake black   msg 20:25, March 22, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5)  Cade  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg  Calrayn  03:40, March 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * 6) Nice job.  501st  dogma ( talk ) 13:40, March 24, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Stake
 * Great work for a first nom. Couple of things:
 * "Package" is repeated three times in there. Try a synonym.
 * Better?
 * The colored slime can be added to the "distinctions" field of the infobox.
 * Added.
 * Link to the kidnapping of the Solo children. Also, please specify the names of the children kidnapped.
 * Done.
 * Beef up that BtS! More context on The Crystal Star. Is it a book? Who wrote it? The writer is important because he is the one who created the color-crawler.
 * Better?
 * If he is non-sentient as the infobox says, this information should also be on the body.
 * I guess the sources do not really say they are non-sentient only that they are creatures. So, I removed that from the infobox.
 * Context on Leia Organa Solo,  Stake black   msg 13:47, March 19, 2013 (UTC)
 * I think I fixed most of that. - Princess   GLG  14:23, March 19, 2013 (UTC)
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * You should add Category:Species of undefined sentience to the article's categories.
 * 3) **Done.
 * 4) * Please use CSWECite for the Encyclopedia reference, it contains the volume number, page number, and entry name.
 * 5) **Like that?
 * 6) ***Looks good.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  20:24, March 22, 2013 (UTC)
 * 7) * Is there any indication how large the creatures were?
 * 8) **Uh...small. Other then that it doesn't really say.
 * 9) ***Just checking.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  20:24, March 22, 2013 (UTC)
 * 10) *Nice to see you on the CAN page.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:12, March 22, 2013 (UTC)
 * 11) **Thanks. - Princess   GLG  16:54, March 22, 2013 (UTC)

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