Talk:Rey's 690 light freighter

To the other editor trying to editing this article
I've been trying to write this page when I have time, and am finding that someone is erasing virtually all the work, on the grounds that the tense is wrong. Most of the erased article is merely framework and can't be in "the wrong tense."

I can't find anything wrong with the work-in-process (although I am new to this and will concede error if explained); To avoid butting heads, could the second editor please explain what's wrong with my work on this talk page? We both want this article to be the best it can be, and working at cross purposes isn't going to help anyone.

J. Sparrow (talk) 15:38, January 19, 2016 (UTC)