Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Yanibar


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Yanibar

 * Nominated by: Atarumaster88  Jedi_Order.svg ( Talk page ) 19:33, January 7, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: First planet article, and trying out a new section. Only 1028 words long.

(5 Inqs/1 Users/6 Total)
Support
 * 1) --Eyrezer 05:10, January 14, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Yanibar seems so much more interesting in your work, Ataru. &mdash;  Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 23:53, January 16, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) Green Tentacle (Talk) 20:43, January 18, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) Jedi Kasra (comlink) 15:44, January 19, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) —Tommy9281  Dark side Master SWGTCG.jpg ( Mechno-chair ) 02:50, January 20, 2010 (UTC)
 * 6) --  Darth Culator  (Talk) 20:39, January 20, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Toprawa:
 * 2) * I'm afraid the FAN page isn't a testing ground for your new planet layout whim. The article's layout must conform to the established community precedent as outlined on WP:LG, specifically under the "Description" section, which notably includes the planet's "location" as information to be included within that section. You may use any of our many, many excellent existing planet FAs as the standard in case this is somehow confusing for you. Toprawa and Ralltiir 01:03, January 9, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) **You're right; I was too careless when I put this article together and didn't read the Layout Guide thoroughly enough. It should all be correct now. Atarumaster88  Jedi_Order.svg ( Talk page ) 18:08, January 9, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) Our article on the Sha Kalan has a little more information regarding youth that were trained there. If this is correct, can you add it to the locations section? --Eyrezer 01:58, January 13, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) *It's correct&mdash;I wrote the Sha Kalan article. And added. Atarumaster88  Jedi_Order.svg ( Talk page ) 21:40, January 13, 2010 (UTC)
 * 6) Pasta! Pasta!
 * 7) *Altogether, a good article. There are a few things, though.
 * 8) *(1) The last "paragraph" of Description is a little short. Can this be merged into the prior using a connection about how the creatures posed a threat to the colonists?
 * 9) *(2) In the Inhabitants section, nothing mentions that the colonists were decedents of Jedi and were Force-users. This should be included here, as they were the primary settlers initially. Perhaps it should also be mentioned that they had no intention to remain there initially, as well.
 * 10) *(3) No coordinates, imports, or exports for the infobox? The Atlas should have the first; the Hero's Guide, I thought, mentioned something about what was traded with the spacers at the settlement.
 * 11) *That's it. &mdash; Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 17:53, January 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * 12) **I've addressed all of these, though there is no import/export data in Hero's Guide. Atarumaster88  Jedi_Order.svg ( Talk page ) 16:43, January 16, 2010 (UTC)
 * 13) ***My apologies for a bad recollection. Thanks for double-checking. &mdash; Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 23:53, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

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