Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Battle of Teth


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Battle of Teth

 * Nominated by:  CC7567  (talk) 05:29, 10 May 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: The second (and admittedly, much more tedious) part of TCW film.

(5 Inq/8 Users/13 Total/INQCON 5)
Support
 * 1) Thefourdotelipsis 09:26, 23 May 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) Well done, CC. Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 22:48, 7 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 3)  The Flash  {talk} 05:03, 12 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) Well, despite all his failings, Darth Vatrir does deserve some thanks, he was the one who changed this article from a stub to a fully comprehensive one. Jensaarai 16:39, 17 June 2009 (UTC)'
 * 5) --Clone Commander Lee 17:48, 9 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 6) --Kreivi Wolter 18:48, 21 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 7)  Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 09:04, 24 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 8) Great work. Darth Trayus  Sith_Emblem.svg ( Trayus Academy ) 06:14, 1 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 9)  JMAS  Hey, it's me! 14:34, 1 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 10)  JangFett  Talk 21:34, 3 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 11) User:Capt.Scout Officer report 17:59, 6 Aug 2009 (UTC)
 * 12) Almost done here. :)  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  13:53, 7 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 13) Toprawa and Ralltiir 03:50, 9 August 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Four Dot
 * 2) * The "Kenobi vs. Ventress" section gets a bit too PBP in parts. Condense just a wee bit.
 * 3) **Addressed, hopefully; if you think that it can be cut down more, please let me know.
 * 4) * "The battle appeared in the Star Wars: The Clone Wars film, which served as the basis to the 2008 television series." - Not entirely true. The film was cut together from what were intended to be episodes, as you go on to state.
 * 5) **Addressed.
 * 6) * While I was OK with it on the Christophsis article since it was a track name, I don't think the Kevin Kiner mention really has a place in the BTS here.
 * 7) **Addressed.
 * 8) *Otherwise, really quite solid work. Thefourdotelipsis 14:11, 22 May 2009 (UTC)
 * 9) **Thankies.  CC7567  (talk) 16:01, 22 May 2009 (UTC)
 * 10) Clone Commander Lee
 * 11) * Sergeant Hez misses in the commanders section.
 * 12) **I know that he had a squad, but I'm checking this later.
 * 13) ***Addressed.  CC7567  (talk) 03:18, 9 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 14) * Was Hawk really officially killed ? If please give a source.
 * 15) **It's already properly sourced. "The Hidden Enemy" episode guide confirmed him to be the pilot of the destroyed gunship, and the deleted scene appeared in the novel. Both are sourced.
 * 16) ***Lee, if you're not going to strike this, please at least state why so that I can fix it.  CC7567  (talk) 18:36, 8 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 17) * There were 3 OOM command battle droids on Teth. The page for Nr.1 does exist. Nr.2 is actually Nr.3. The real Nr. 2 was shot by Rex as the droid talked to Ventress.
 * 18) **Addressed.
 * 19) * Cause all droids on Teth were destroyed. Nr.3 (here Nr.2) of the OOM commanders was destroyed.
 * 20) **Addressed.  CC7567  (talk) 18:14, 8 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 21) * Otherwise good. --Clone Commander Lee 17:50, 8 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 22) Rancor
 * 23) * Should it be mentioned in infobox that there was third side, the wild Rancor? I tried to add it myself, but I accidently removed few sources, so I didn't save it... --Kreivi Wolter 14:54, 21 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 24) **Added.  CC7567  (talk) 16:05, 21 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 25) I would definitely remove the rancor as a faction involved in the battle. Thats just silly.  Darth Trayus  Sith_Emblem.svg ( Trayus Academy ) 20:28, 25 July 2009 (UTC)
 * Eh, fair enough.  CC7567  (talk) 06:00, 31 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) Check the Star Wars PocketModel TCG. I remember seeing a "Battle of Teth" card there, but I'm too lazy to check it myself :P Also, some of the other cards use screenshots that are taken from the Teth part of the film, but I'm not sure how to treat them in this case. Myself, I would go with, but I guess it's up to you.  QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 21:36, 30 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) *The only one I've found is "Jedi deflection"; I can't see any others with screenshots from the battle.  CC7567  (talk) 06:00, 31 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) **How about this one for example? There's more in the Clone Wars expansion. QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 08:38, 31 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Bah. You're welcome to check them, but I...don't recommend it. Do we actually have a policy that says we have to list every specific card?  CC7567  (talk) 20:22, 31 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) ****I suppose so, since all FAs and GAs that I've seen list every specific card. I agree that this does look a bit unsightly here, though. QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 20:54, 31 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 6) *****I'm just going to remove them already and list the expansion set names. Plainly speaking, this many cards makes it look hideous, and I can't see the use of indicating every specific card in this situation.  CC7567  (talk) 06:36, 1 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 7) JMAS
 * 8) * A very minor objection while perusing the article: The quote for the pit fight I think needs to be trimmed. Without the preceding part of Rex calling him Anakin, there's no way for the casual reader to understand why Anakin suddenly realizes it's Ventress after that single line of We held the droids. What's your location?. I'd recommend cutting Rex's line and changing it to a "Dialogue2" template with just Anakin and Ahsoka. -  JMAS  Hey, it's me! 15:20, 31 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 9) **Once I can check the movie again, I might be able to find a better quote, but that should do for now.  CC7567  (talk) 20:22, 31 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 10) ***Actually, I think the quote you have is very well suited to the section. I've just recently watched the movie and I honestly couldn't think of any better quote/dialogue to use, especially given that the pit fight was deleted from the film. -  JMAS  Hey, it's me! 14:34, 1 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 11) *Outstanding work. -  JMAS  Hey, it's me! 15:20, 31 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 12) Fett
 * 13) * Hey CC, in the "prelude" section, I see "However, they were captured and decapitated, and their heads were sent back to the crime lord." Did any source say who captured the bounty hunters?
 * 14) **No, hence why there isn't more info there.  CC7567  (talk) 21:24, 3 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 15) * After reading your current GAN, Hawk, I see a minor error within the "Republic reinforcements" section in Teth. You state that Skywalker and Tano singled Hawk's gunship, however a vulture droid destroyed the gunship. In the novel, they did singled for a gunship but it was not identified as Hawk's. The way the sentence is set up sounds like Hawk died in his gunship after the vulture droid destroyed it, however it is unknown if Hawk died.
 * 16) **Fixed.  CC7567  (talk) 21:24, 3 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 17) * JangFett  Talk 20:01, 3 August 2009 (UTC)

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