Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations



This page is for the nomination of "comprehensive articles". For a list of "comprehensive articles", see Category:Wookieepedia comprehensive articles.


 * Comprehensive article nominations history
 * Comprehensive article nominations archiving checklist

What is a "comprehensive article?"

A "comprehensive article" is an article that contains all information regarding the topic. Often, "comprehensive articles" cannot reach Featured or Good Article status due to their limited content. This process is intended to recognize articles that contain all relevant canon information, yet are still under the 250 word limit required for a Good Article. The purpose of this is twofold&mdash;firstly, to help users distinguish what is a stub, and what is merely a short article with no further relevant material to be added, and, more importantly, to highlight for the reader when they are reading something that has been judged definitely "comprehensive"&mdash;that is, a guarantee to the reader that whatever they are reading contains the sum total of all available content.

Nominations and promotions of the Comprehensive article process are overseen by a collective of users known as the "EduCorps," which is made up of the Inquisitorius, the AgriCorps, and various other experienced users who are considered qualified to adequately judge the nominated material.

Lucasfilm Ltd. and its many licensees continue to expand the Star Wars universe. Since new information might become available, it may be necessary to revoke a "comprehensive article's" status. A forum will be used to nominate articles that have fallen out-of-date. Members of the EduCorps will then post a warning template on that page, and a grace period of one week will be instituted in which the article can be improved. If there is a significant amount of new information, it is likely that once updated, the article will become eligible for Good article status, and thereby ineligible for Comprehensive article status.

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An article must&hellip;


 * 1) &hellip;be well-written and detailed.
 * 2) &hellip;be unbiased, non-point of view.
 * 3) &hellip;be sourced with all available sources and appearances.
 * 4) &hellip;follow the Manual of Style, Layout Guide, and all other policies on Wookieepedia. This is, of course, within reason. If a topic only has a very limited degree of content that cannot be divided up into the relevant article sections, it is not required that it follow the Layout Guide precisely. This is to be judged on a case-by-case basis.
 * 5) &hellip;following the review process, be stable, i.e., does not change significantly from day to day and is not the subject of ongoing edit wars. This does not apply to vandalism and protection or semi-protection as a result of vandalism.
 * 6) &hellip;not be tagged with any sort of improvement tags (i.e. more sources, expand, etc).
 * 7) &hellip;have no redlinks.
 * 8) &hellip;have all relevant canon information presented.
 * 9) &hellip;be completely referenced for all available material and sources. See Sourcing for more information. While this is not required for an article possessing a singular source, it is encouraged, as it provides both uniformity and a good infrastructure should the topic be referenced in any future materials.
 * 10) &hellip;have all quotes and images sourced.
 * 11) &hellip;provide at least one relevant quote on the article if available.
 * 12) &hellip;include a "Behind the scenes" section for In-Universe articles.
 * 13) &hellip;counting the introduction and "Behind the scenes" material, must not exceed 250 words in length (not including captions, quotes, or headers, etc). Any articles exceeding the limit should be taken to the Good Article nominations page for consideration.

How to nominate:


 * 1) First, nominate an article you find is worthy of comprehensive status, putting it at the bottom of the list below. Nominated articles must meet all thirteen requirements stated above.
 * 2) Add CAnom at the top of the article you are nominating.
 * 3) Be sure to place sign in the "Nominated by" line when the nomination is posted for voting.
 * 4) Others will object to the nomination if they disagree that the article is good enough; they will then supply reasons for doing so, and ways to improve the article in accordance with the established rules.
 * 5) Nominators and supporters will adjust the article until the objectors (with reasonable objections) are satisfied. Objectors may also make alterations&mdash;if there is any reason for contention on a given point, it should be settled in a civil manner in the nomination field itself.
 * 6) Users may not vote on their own articles.
 * 7) There is no limit to the amount of nominations a given user can submit at any given time.

How to vote:


 * 1) Before doing anything, be sure to read the article completely, keeping a sharp eye out for mistakes.
 * 2) Afterward, compare the article to the criteria listed above, and then either support or object the article's nomination.
 * 3) *If you object, please supply concrete reasons for doing so, and how it can be improved.
 * 4) As stated above, any objections will be looked upon by the nominator, supporters, and anyone willing to improve the article, and action will be taken to please the objectors. Do not strike other users' objections; it is up to the objector to review the changes and strike if they are satisfied.
 * 5) There are several ways in which an article can receive the required number of votes. Within a 48-hour period of nomination, only EduCorps votes will count towards the total, although anyone may choose to vote in that window. If two members of the EduCorps support a nomination in that window, and there are no outstanding objections, the article can be considered a "Comprehensive article" and be tagged with the template 48 hours after the initial nomination.  The talk page will also be tagged with the CA template. When the 48 hours are up, any user's votes will contribute towards the total. If one EduCorps member has voted for an article after a week, three regular votes will be required. After the 48 hour period, an article can still also pass with just two EduCorps votes.
 * 6) Once a nomination is successful, it will be placed on the Comprehensive article list. Instructions on how to archive nominations, successful or otherwise, can be found here. Anyone can archive a nomination&mdash;just make sure it has the correct number of votes, has been nominated for at least a week (or 48 hours if there are two EC votes), and that there are absolutely no outstanding objections. If you are not sure how to do this, just ask, and someone will likely be more than willing to help you. Also, if you think you can slip one past us, think again&mdash;someone is always watching you.

All nominations will be considered idle and are subject to instantaneous removal by EduCorps members if objections are not addressed, or at least not answered, after a period of 2 weeks.

Sluis Van space facility

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 06:54, July 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Long live the CAN! Long live the Random Article Noms!

(1 ECs/3 Users/3 Total)
Support Object
 * 1)  Darth Karika  will destroy your planet! 19:50, July 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2)  SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 23:02, July 21, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) Menkooroo 07:25, July 22, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) -- DarthRage Leave a message after the beep 18:22, August 14, 2010 (UTC)
 * 1) Darth Karika
 * 2) * Infobox is missing the name.
 * 3) * BtS, last sentence: missing italics closing tag.
 * 4) * Did the facility appear in The Thrawn Trilogy Sourcebook, or was it just mentioned?  Darth Karika  will destroy your planet! 13:31, July 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) Kinda minor, but as the information in TTT sourcebook was just reprinted from the DFR sourcebook, wouldn't it be more appropriate to use the DFR sourcebook as your source, rather than TTT sourcebook? Menkooroo 17:00, July 21, 2010 (UTC)
 * 6) *I suppose. TTT was just the one I was looking at that second, so changed. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 06:38, July 22, 2010 (UTC)
 * 7) Cav
 * 8) *Is there anything to suggest that the Sluis Van space facility isn't just another name for the Sluis Van shipyards? I would suggest checking other sources concerning the shipyards just to make sure. The fact that they are described as "extensive" in the sourcebook leads me to believe that they could be one and the same. - Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 10:16, July 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * 9) **I'm going to echo Cav's sentiment here&mdash;particularly considering that the primary source for this is Thrawn Trilogy material, where the Sluis Van shipyards were introduced. Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 20:49, July 31, 2010 (UTC)
 * 10) ***The space facility was introduced in the DFR Sourcebook, which didn't deal with the shipyards at all because they weren't relative to the book. The TT Sourcebook does use the Battle at the Shipyards as it's time quantifier for the character entrys and time period but the Slussi section makes no reference to the battle at all. In fact, it refers to there not just being one catch-all shipyard in the sector, but several, with the facility referred to as a singular entity. "An advanced people, they established a number of major space yards throughout the Sluis Sector, including the extensive Sluis Van space facility." NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 05:40, August 10, 2010 (UTC)
 * 11) ****However, one of the opening chapters of DFR has Luke trying to get his X-wing repaired to fly back to Coruscant. He is on the Sluis Van Central space station, in the Sluis system. I think you may need to check over the information presented in the novel; the Sluis Van shipyards are present in DFR, and with the words "Sluis Van" in the name, then it is more than likely that the facility is within the Sluis Van system, despite the fact that the Sluissi established space yards throughout the sector. - Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 11:13, August 20, 2010 (UTC)

Comments
 * 2 week vacation. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 22:50, August 12, 2010 (UTC)

Kauronian

 * Nominated by: Eyrezer 02:57, July 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: No more K species

(3 ECs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1)  SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 02:16, August 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Menkooroo 06:14, August 13, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3)  Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 11:52, August 20, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) On the condition that Bob's objection is taken care of. Cylka  -talk- 02:19, August 31, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) ~ SavageBob 14:36, August 31, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) The stuff about Luke seems out of place here, since it doesn't deal with the species per se. Perhaps scale it back to a sentence at most? ~ SavageBob 02:40, August 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) *How does this look? --Eyrezer 02:26, August 31, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Shi'kar

 * Nominated by: Eyrezer 03:02, July 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Hey, it's a TCW cross-over

(3 ECs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1)  SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 04:03, August 2, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Menkooroo 06:32, August 13, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3)  Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 12:06, August 20, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) On the condition that Bob's objection is taken care of. Cylka  -talk- 02:22, August 31, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) Straight up. ~ SavageBob 14:38, August 31, 2010 (UTC)

Object Comments
 * 1) Are we sure they're a species? And perhaps scale back the info on the Straits, as this presumably postdates the species existence. ~ SavageBob 02:48, August 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) *There is actually nothing to indicate they are extinct. --Eyrezer 02:27, August 31, 2010 (UTC)

Rohan Wayside

 * Nominated by: Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 16:46, July 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Swamp inhabitant

(1 ECs/3 Users/4 Total)
Support Object
 * 1) --''' Bonslywizard Trade Federation Symbol.jpg( Send a transmission...It's perfectly legal! ) 22:50, August 8, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Well done. Menkooroo 10:15, August 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3)  SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 22:30, August 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) -- DarthRage Leave a message after the beep 23:25, August 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * 1) The article needs sourcing, a little more specific detailing (e.g: Bob was a human male...) and the picture is not a picture of him so it does not need to be there at all. And what species is he? Do you know? --''' Bonslywizard Trade Federation Symbol.jpg( Send a transmission...It's perfectly legal! ) 17:41, August 8, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) *Article upgraded; picture removed; and no, the game does not specify what species he is. It doesn't need sourced if there is only one appearance. Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 18:18, August 8, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) Yo
 * 4) * Some context is needed on Gavyn Sykes ---even just adding "of the Naboo Resistance" after his name. Currently, the article only indirectly states that Sykes is part of that resistance.
 * 5) *Is "Houseboat clan" the actual name of the clan? If so, create an article on it and link to it, if not, listing this as his affiliation in the infobox might be preferable.
 * 6) *Can you mention in the bts that Battle for Naboo was his first appearance, and only appearance to date? Otherwise, good work. Menkooroo 01:18, August 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 7) **Done and done. Thank you for checking out the article. Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 09:49, August 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 8) * The way it's currently written, it sounds like the trading village was a swamp, not just inside one. Please clarify. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 05:43, August 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 9) **Indeed.
 * 10) ***This doesn't mean that you can just take it out; it is still relevant info, it just needs to be portrayed correctly. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 10:34, August 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 11) ****Re-added.
 * 12) Cav:
 * 13) *In the article history, you note that the name is taken from IMDB. This needs to be detailed in the BTS, showing exactly how you came to this conclusion. - Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 11:23, August 24, 2010 (UTC)
 * 14) **Sorry about that; the name really does come from the game. I just needed a trip to IMDB to remind me of that fact, since I wrote the article without first going back and rechecking the game. Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 14:04, August 24, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Mission to Destrillion

 * Nominated by: 19:21, August 3, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Shortest of the articles I edited.

(0 ECs/1 Users/0 Total)
Support Object
 * 1) looks worthy of a vote -- DarthRage Leave a message after the beep 23:21, August 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * 1) More can be added to the BTS regarding that concept image. --Eyrezer 04:28, August 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * Sentence added. Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 10:05, August 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * 1) There is plenty of info in the infobox that is not in the article text: year of mission, ships used etc.
 * 2) The first time Antilles is mentioned in the body you need to give his whole name and to link to him. You should also provide some context on who he is. Were there separate waves of Imp fighters? Why did the Imperials want to lure the Rebels there? Basically, so far this article has been given cursory treatment right through to keep it below the 250 word limit. --Eyrezer 23:27, August 30, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Unidentified Naboo homestead owner

 * Nominated by: Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 20:49, August 3, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Brave man running across the field in a battle

(1 ECs/2 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1)  QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 15:32, August 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2)  SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 10:36, August 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) Menkooroo 15:01, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

Object Comments
 * How do you know that he is a Human and a Naboo native? It is not stated in the game. All we know is that he was a male who lived on Naboo by 32 BBY; it was not necessarily his homeworld. QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 08:51, August 5, 2010 (UTC)
 * He runs across the screen and has the same sprite of the other human civilians, and "homeworld" is used in the general sense of place of residence. I once saw a Talk Page post explaining the nuances.
 * Hmm, I have not noticed him running around before. Every time I saved him, he was driving a vehicle, but I'll take your word on it. Regarding homeworld, no, it is always used in a sense of the place where the individual was born and/or spent his youth. QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 11:23, August 11, 2010 (UTC)
 * He runs out right when the second wave of STAPS appear. Talk page discussion:[|]. Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 15:58, August 11, 2010 (UTC)
 * 1) * Unidentified is not to be used inside an actual article.
 * 2) * Please standardize your capitalization of homestead. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 05:48, August 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) **Nixed. Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 10:00, August 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * Note some of the changes I made --- in particular, it's always advisable to mention the species and sex in the article's body, and one-sentence paragraphs should be avoided. Good work, though! Menkooroo 15:01, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

Unidentified mine operator

 * Nominated by: Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 20:49, August 3, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Defensive beaurocrat

(0 ECs/2 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1)  QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 11:25, August 11, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) looks worthy -- DarthRage Leave a message after the beep 23:17, August 30, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * "He was presumed to have been killed when Sykes destroyed the control room." Speculation. Besides, it is not even required to destroy the control room. QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 08:48, August 5, 2010 (UTC)
 * Removed, but every time I played, I needed to destroy the control center before the game let me proceed. Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 09:49, August 5, 2010 (UTC)
 * Weird. Every time I played it, I only had to destroy the plasma miners to progress. Maybe it depends on the game's version or something? QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 11:25, August 11, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Barren planetoid

 * Nominated by: Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 20:49, August 3, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Rezi Soresh's last stand

(0 ECs/0 Users/0 Total)
Support

Object
 * 1) Barren Fel
 * 2) * The infobox establishes a lot about the planetoid --- no moons, no native flora, no native fauna, no indigenous population, barren rock --- this should all be in the article's body, too.
 * 3) *Try to avoid one-sentence paragraphs. They're generally a no-no.
 * 4) *"When the deadline passed..." What deadline? Mention that Soresh gave a deadline when you establish that he wants to lure Skywalker to the system.
 * 5) *Give context on Han Solo.
 * 6) *"Soresh used an impostor..." used the impostor for what? Welcoming the rebels?
 * 7) *Who captured Skywalker and his companions? The article doesn't mention that Soresh has any companions on the planetoid.
 * 8) *Who are Luke's other companions? A rebel squad?
 * 9) *A little bit of context is needed on the Emperor.
 * 10) *"He drew an Imperial and Rebel fleet" makes it sound like there's a joint Rebel-Imperial fleet.
 * 11) *"Skywalker betrayed Soresh and led his companions away." Can you give a little bit more detail?
 * 12) *"including Soresh's body" is detail that probably isn't relevant to the article about the planetoid.
 * 13) *You mention a battle --- can you create an article for said battle?
 * 14) *Does Uprising give any other details about the planetoid that could find their way into the article? Menkooroo 02:17, August 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 15) **All of the above addressed. Of coures, it is now well over the wordcount. Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 17:47, August 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 16) ***Awesome! Go for a Good article nomination if you feel it's ready. You'll have to leave a message here requesting that the Educorps remove this nom, as it's now ineligible for CA status. Menkooroo 01:13, August 18, 2010 (UTC)

Comments
 * Note for the Grey Cadre: As stated above, this article is now over 250 words. Menkooroo 15:02, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

Sixela system

 * Nominated by: Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 20:49, August 3, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Destroyed by resonance torpedoes

(0 ECs/0 Users/0 Total)
Support

Object
 * Well over 250 words, making it GA territory. Please familiarize yourself with the CA guidelines before nominating further articles of such length or content. Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 06:34, August 5, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Comm 4

 * Nominated by: Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 11:52, August 4, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Labeled as technology, not a structure.

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1)  SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 11:39, August 18, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Looks good to me -- DarthRage Leave a message after the beep 23:15, August 30, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Soresu
 * 2) * Be more specific about how it was destroyed. Was it disabled by infiltrators? Destroyed in a space battle?
 * 3) * Can it be proven that it was created in 32 BBY? Just because it got deployed above Naboo in that year doesn't mean it was manufactured then. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 23:07, August 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) **Context added; and I cannot prove it was created in 32 BBY so I removed the information. Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 11:27, August 18, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Adela Tyché

 * Nominated by: Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 15:13, August 4, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Great pilot; ugly personality

(0 ECs/0 Users/0 Total)
Support

Object
 * 1) Can be fleshed out considerably. Elaborate a bit on the missions she took part in and her role in them. QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 20:16, August 4, 2010 (UTC)
 * Precisely 249 words. Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 18:58, August 5, 2010 (UTC)
 * "helped free captured slaves." No she did not. She only participated in the disruption of Comm 4 and the attack on the disabled base. I'm asking you to expand on these two battles. What was the objective? What happened during the missions? It can be well over 250 words in my opinion. QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 11:18, August 11, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Wirutid

 * Nominated by: Eyrezer 01:40, August 5, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

(2 ECs/2 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 00:10, August 10, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2)  SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 22:55, August 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) Menkooroo 15:05, August 25, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) I used to know a Wirutid. What a fun guy. ~ SavageBob 03:10, August 31, 2010 (UTC)

Object Comments
 * 1) What's with the redlink? ;P Otherwise, it's solid. ~ SavageBob 02:50, August 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) *Taken care of. --Eyrezer 02:41, August 31, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) Any better images, or can you raise the quality?  DarthRage Leave a message after the beep 23:11, August 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) *I can't no, as I don't have the book. It is only a tiny portion of the page, which is why the image is low quality.

Wode

 * Nominated by: Eyrezer 01:40, August 5, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

(1 ECs/2 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) --''' Bonslywizard Trade Federation Symbol.jpg( Send a transmission...It's perfectly legal! ) 16:24, August 16, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2)  SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 02:36, August 22, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) ~ SavageBob 02:53, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) "During the Clone Wars, the Wode were liberated..." Liberated from what? --''' Bonslywizard Trade Federation Symbol.jpg( Send a transmission...It's perfectly legal! ) 16:59, August 9, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) *The original source does not say. I've modified the article to make it clear Solomahal was on the side of the Republic, which is as far as the original source goes. --Eyrezer 02:57, August 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) Less savvy readers may not understand what exactly is meant by "Standard". Please clarify.  SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 22:54, August 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) *Are you after something as simple as this? --Eyrezer 00:31, August 22, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) **Close to it. It's just that some might see the capitalisation and wonder whether it's just a term or if it has some specific value. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 02:36, August 22, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Van Serai Hotel

 * Nominated by: - Esjs (Talk) 22:35, August 5, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: My first article nom ever (thought I'd give it a try). By my count, it's at 246 words.

(0 ECs/0 Users/0 Total)
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Object
 * 1) This article could be given an infobox and could very easily be given a simple intro, easily taking it to over 250 words and making it GAN-worthy. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 19:32, August 7, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) *I take it that a Location infobox would work. Doesn't the first paragraph work as the intro?  I could see putting the remaining paragraphs into a "History" section.  If just another sentence were added... -  Esjs (Talk) 04:02, August 8, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) **I would suggest a structure infobox. No, you couldn't just make the first paragraph the intro because it contains information that is not in the other paragraphs. Instead, you could write a new small paragraph summarizing briefly what you've said in the current three paragraphs, and make the new one the intro and the rest the main body. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 00:38, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

BARC-2 speeder

 * Nominated by: Tm_T(Talk) 00:05, August 9, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: I know you love it, you definately do.

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Object
 * 1) Jujiggum
 * 2) *What evidence do you have for this being "presumably" a 2-seat variant of the BARC speeder? This sounds like speculation to me.
 * 3) **Hopefully sufficiently fixed
 * 4) ***Okay, but please check your grammar here. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 00:08, August 20, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) *The BTS should specify why this is ambiguously canon.
 * 6) **Apparently isn't, tag removed
 * 7) ***You mean this is non-canon? Then it needs to be tagged as such, and you should also mention that in the BTS. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 00:08, August 20, 2010 (UTC)
 * 8) ****Apparently licensed toys are canon as is.
 * 9) *Also, where did you get the "BARC-2 speeder" name? If it's conjectural, then it shouldn't be bolded in full form in the intro.
 * 10) **Bolding removed, some explanation about the name in the Bts.
 * 11) ***Please check your grammar in the BTS; also, since the name is completely conjectural, I would suggest actually moving the title of the article to something more appropriate. Maybe something along the lines of "Unidentified speeder (BARC design)" or something similar. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 00:08, August 20, 2010 (UTC)
 * 12) ****Would "Unidentified speeder (Grand Army of the Republic) or equivalent do? --Tm_T(Talk) 18:01, August 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * 13) *That's all. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 15:39, August 11, 2010 (UTC)
 * 14) **Good points rised, thanks. --Tm_T(Talk) 20:39, August 19, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Bitt Panith

 * Nominated by:--''' Bonslywizard Trade Federation Symbol.jpg( Send a transmission...It's perfectly legal! ) 23:36, August 13, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: At least there's no way this one will make it over 250...

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Object
 * 1) Jujiggum
 * 2) * Needs a BTS
 * 3) **Added.--''' Bonslywizard Trade Federation Symbol.jpg( Send a transmission...It's perfectly legal! ) 20:14, August 14, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Italicization. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 20:20, August 14, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) ****Italicized.--''' Bonslywizard Trade Federation Symbol.jpg( Send a transmission...It's perfectly legal! ) 00:09, August 16, 2010 (UTC)
 * 6) *****Still one missing. This is usually something I'd fix myself, but this has popped up more than once in your articles, please try to remember this in the future. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 01:35, August 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 7) ******Darn things...--''' Bonslywizard Trade Federation Symbol.jpg( Send a transmission...It's perfectly legal! ) 17:18, August 19, 2010 (UTC)
 * 8) *Could easily use a P&T
 * 9) **Added.--''' Bonslywizard Trade Federation Symbol.jpg( Send a transmission...It's perfectly legal! ) 20:14, August 14, 2010 (UTC)
 * 10) ***You could definitely add more&mdash;judging by the lead quote alone, he was apparently confident in his ability to defeat the Jedi. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 20:20, August 14, 2010 (UTC)
 * 11) ****I've added another sentence on that.--''' Bonslywizard Trade Federation Symbol.jpg( Send a transmission...It's perfectly legal! ) 00:09, August 16, 2010 (UTC)
 * 12) *****Wording's rather awkward here. And are you sure that's all you can add? Did he perhaps dislike the Jedi? Please be as thorough here as possible. Go through the source once more and make sure there are no further details you can add regarding his personality; and also his appearance, a description of which should also go in the P&T. Also, I've stricken the next objection, but please do this for the bio as well, anyway. There seem to be quite a few details that you missed the first time around&mdash;go through the source carefully and make absolutely certain that you are not leaving any more details out. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 01:35, August 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 13) * Is this as detailed as you could get? Judging from the quote, it sounds like there might be some more details from the source about Panith that you could put in there. Make sure you are as thorough as possible.
 * 14) **I'll try, but I don't know how much I can do, considering how little he appears...--''' Bonslywizard Trade Federation Symbol.jpg( Send a transmission...It's perfectly legal! ) 20:14, August 14, 2010 (UTC)
 * 15) ***Why don't you mention anything about Dooku cutting off his funds in the body? Why did Dooku cut off his funds? Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 20:20, August 14, 2010 (UTC)
 * 16) ****I've moved that part to the body as opposed to the P&T and added why.--''' Bonslywizard Trade Federation Symbol.jpg( Send a transmission...It's perfectly legal! ) 00:09, August 16, 2010 (UTC)
 * 17) * Jonjedigrandmaster ( Talk ) 05:01, August 14, 2010 (UTC)

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Unidentified Yoberra species

 * Nominated by: --Eyrezer 03:16, August 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

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 * 1) Menkooroo 01:22, August 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2)  SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 22:48, August 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) ~ SavageBob 02:58, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

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Boosqueak

 * Nominated by: Eyrezer 03:30, August 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: A menagerie of creatures from the Atrivis sector

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 * 1) Shouldn't the rare folded ear boosqueak have its own article? SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 22:46, August 17, 2010 (UTC)

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Virevol

 * Nominated by: Eyrezer 03:30, August 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: A menagerie of creatures from the Atrivis sector

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 * 1)  SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 22:34, August 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Menkooroo 01:16, August 19, 2010 (UTC)

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 * Can you mention who it was that considered them formidable creatures (whoever's POV it was)? Menkooroo 02:05, August 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * Done. --Eyrezer 04:21, August 18, 2010 (UTC)

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Arkudan

 * Nominated by: Eyrezer 10:01, August 18, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: The origins of fluffy dice revealed.

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 * 1)  SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 03:33, August 19, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Wonder if Han's dice were from Arkuda too. ~ SavageBob 02:37, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

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Unidentified Betshish species

 * Nominated by: Eyrezer 09:04, August 21, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: From 1989

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 * 1)  SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 02:30, August 22, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) ~ SavageBob 02:55, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

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 * 1) Is it known what is meant by "interdict"? As in, gravity well-ed, or something else?  SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 21:45, August 21, 2010 (UTC)
 * No, the source simply says the Empire interdicted the planet. --Eyrezer 00:33, August 22, 2010 (UTC)

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Nack Movers

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 18:08, August 24, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: 197 words

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 * 1) &mdash;  17:28, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

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 * 1) Whatcha cryin' for?
 * 2) * Not sure if "heavyset" is necessary in the intro?&mdash; 23:26, August 26, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) **Removed.
 * 4) * Context on Coruscant in intro and possibly the bio.&mdash; 23:30, August 26, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) **Both contexted.
 * 6) * Is "powerful" needed in the intro, in describing the fact he was a murderer?
 * 7) **Changed to something that describes him better.
 * 8) * Link Death in the intro.
 * 9) **Linked.
 * 10) *Good stuff, Lee.&mdash; 23:30, August 26, 2010 (UTC)
 * 11) **Thank you.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 08:59, August 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * 12) Jujiggum
 * 13) * Do we have an article for his apartment?
 * 14) **Created.
 * 15) ***If the apartment belonged to his girlfriend, then shouldn't it be Ione Marcy's apartment? Also, the intro right now says that the entire complex belonged to Marcy; not just the one apartment. Is this true? Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 14:10, August 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * 16) ****Fixed and moved.
 * 17) *****Please be very careful when moving articles&mdash;the name you moved it to had an incorrect spelling, and thus it had to be moved again, meaning I had to go and fix several double redirects. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 14:46, August 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * 18) * "he bought a lightsaber from the Patrolian Bannamu and took it to his apartment in a condominium complex and to his girlfriend Ione Marcy." Hmm, not really following your meaning here. Do you mean he gave the lightsaber to Marcy? That he specifically took it to her? Please check this.
 * 19) **Fixed.
 * 20) * Is the phrase "hatchet man" actually used to describe him during the episode? If so, this should probably be included in the P&T, too.
 * 21) **Not really, he is said to be an assassin and therefore he is a hatchet man.
 * 22) ***Then this part of the intro is redundant. You just said he was an assassin, so why do you need to say so again? Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 14:10, August 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * 23) ****Removed.
 * 24) * Jonjedigrandmaster ( Talk ) 20:12, August 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * 25) **Thank you.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 10:32, August 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * 26) * One more thing: does the source specifically say he was a strong and dangerous murderer? Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 14:10, August 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * 27) **Sinube states both that Movers is a dangerous one in the Underworld and notes that he was "stronger then many other people.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 14:35, August 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * 28) *Please add more quotes to the article. I am certain there is one spoken by Marcy or Cryar about him or his death (even if it is one of their lies), and perhaps Sinube's statement about his strength could go in the P&T. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 14:46, August 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * 29) **Because I cannot add the English version myself I asked JMAS.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:10, August 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * 30) ***Added one quote.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:15, August 28, 2010 (UTC)

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The Righteous

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 18:39, August 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: ...and Part Two

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 * 1) All Eyez on U
 * 2) * See above.&mdash; 21:35, August 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) **Fixed (also not by me).
 * 4) *That's it.&mdash; 21:35, August 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) **See above.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 10:38, August 28, 2010 (UTC)

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Unidentified Kerkoiden commander

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 11:19, August 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Huh?

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 * 1) -- 1358  (Talk) 19:25, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

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 * 1) Xd1358
 * 2) * Please check your reference and see what's wrong.
 * 3) **Fixed.
 * 4) ***Still not really correct. Novelization should not be italicized. -- 1358  (Talk) 20:52, August 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) ****ARGH. Fixed.
 * 6) * "Around 22 BBY, the tank commander participated in the Battle of Christophsis and commanded some troops from his AAT." What troops? Droids? Also, fix the link to AAT.
 * 7) **Fixed.
 * 8) * "During the battle he was shot and killed by Clone Captain CC-7567 when he came out of his tank.." Who came out of his tank?
 * 9) **Fixed.
 * 10) * "..which has been deactivated." Wrong tense.
 * 11) **Fixed.
 * 12) * Is it stated in the novel that he was a 'tank commander'? Otherwise, I suggest you move the article to 'Unidentified Kerkoiden commander', as he seems to be commanding troops as well.
 * 13) **Rex describes him as "Kerkoiden tank commander".
 * 14) ***He describes, yes, but if he would say like "the clone trooper who died in 22 BBY", the article would still not be at that title. 'Tank commander' sounds like he only commands tanks. -- 1358  (Talk) 20:52, August 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * 15) ****Moved, but I'm still unsure.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 13:06, August 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * 16) *****If I may, I agree with Xd's reasoning, and with the decision to move it away from "tank commander."  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 16:58, August 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * 17) *-- 1358  (Talk) 13:07, August 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * 18) **Thank you.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 14:42, August 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * 19) * Now when the article has been moved, could you start the intro in a different way, like "This male Kerkoiden lived during the . He was a commander in the CIS."? -- 1358  (Talk) 14:14, August 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * 20) **Changed. Thank you very much for your time. :P  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 16:33, August 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * 21) * One more thing. :P "..commanded some droid troops from his.." some doesn't really fit in encyclopedic articles. Please remove. -- 1358  (Talk) 16:44, August 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * 22) **Fixed.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 16:47, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

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Neebo

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 13:27, August 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: 240 words

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Unidentified Jedi General (Altyr V)

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 18:19, August 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Redshirt

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 * 1) -- 1358  (Talk) 17:11, August 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) &mdash; 02:09, August 31, 2010 (UTC)

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 * 1) I find your lack of Bts disturbing. :P --  1358  (Talk) 19:24, August 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) *I find your lack of objections disturbing. :P Fixed.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 12:59, August 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) * Could you possibly change the links so that Altyr V is also linked? -- 1358  (Talk) 14:37, August 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) **Yup.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 17:09, August 30, 2010 (UTC)

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Reo

 * Nominated by:  Darth Karika  will destroy your planet! 23:17, August 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: The GA have redshirts too

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 * 1)  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 13:01, August 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * &mdash; 02:08, August 31, 2010 (UTC)

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 * 1) Hmm
 * 2) *In the infobox, please pipelink the battle, unless that is how the battle in canonically known, you cannot use it. Where did the battle take place? You could use this as his place of death in the infobox instead.&mdash; 02:16, August 31, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) *Nice job.&mdash; 02:16, August 31, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) **Fixed.  Darth Karika  will destroy your planet! 13:25, August 31, 2010 (UTC)

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 * I apologize for the support before the review, I meant to support another nom, and supported this one by accident.&mdash; 02:16, August 31, 2010 (UTC)

Urbok

 * Nominated by:  Darth Karika  will destroy your planet! 13:20, August 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: More Dark Nest II

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 * 1)  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 13:52, August 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Menkooroo 13:27, August 31, 2010 (UTC)

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 * 1) Blah
 * 2) *Great job --- I don't think that the sentence about the Gotal Lieutenant is relevant, though. Menkooroo 13:14, August 31, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) **Fixed.  Darth Karika  will destroy your planet! 13:25, August 31, 2010 (UTC)

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Flanker

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 14:07, August 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Former GAnom

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Laser Company

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 17:51, August 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: And this time novelization is not italicized

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 * 1) Menkooroo 13:28, August 31, 2010 (UTC)

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 * More of a question than an objection --- how much info is given on the encounter on Kessel? Is it identified as a battle with the Seps, ie, is there enough info to warrant an article on it? Menkooroo 13:19, August 31, 2010 (UTC)
 * No there is no more info in the novel.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 13:27, August 31, 2010 (UTC)

Aramb

 * Nominated by:  Darth Karika  will destroy your planet! 21:55, August 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Part 3 of 3.

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 * 1)  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 12:20, August 31, 2010 (UTC)

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Qui-Gon Jinn's first apprentice

 * Nominated by: QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 11:11, August 31, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: I wish they write a novel about this guy or something

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 * Yep, I hope that too.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 12:22, August 31, 2010 (UTC)
 * 1) Menkooroo 13:52, August 31, 2010 (UTC)

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 * 1) 1
 * 2) * "Since then, the first apprentice was only mentioned in the 35th issue of The Official Star Wars Fact File" ... but immediately thereafter, it's stated that he was later mentioned in Qui-Gon's databank entry. That seems to contradict the "since then, he was only mentioned" --- can you reword it to be a little clearer? Menkooroo 13:25, August 31, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) **Addressed. QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 13:48, August 31, 2010 (UTC)

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Battle of Altyr V

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 12:48, August 31, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Never done a battle before...

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 * 1) Karika
 * 2) *Body: The Jedi General you mentioned in the infobox should get a link in the body.
 * 3) *BTS: The BTS claims the battle was first mentioned in the CSWE, but the Sources are Star Wars Insider.  Darth Karika  will destroy your planet! 13:37, August 31, 2010 (UTC)

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