Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Ord Antalaha

Ord Antalaha

 * Nominated by: Xicer9 [[Image:atgar.svg|20px]]( Combadge) 04:38, May 31, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: First planet nom, yay!

Support

 * 1) Ord voting. --Skippy Farlstendoiro 14:52, May 31, 2010 (UTC)
 * L-8, check! Marvelous! --Imperialles 14:54, May 31, 2010 (UTC)
 * 1) WookieeProject Ordnance/Regional Depots continues! Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 19:23, May 31, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Graestan ( Talk ) 20:55, May 31, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) More Xicerian goodness. Thefourdotelipsis 10:57, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Object

 * One minor thing: in the Inhabitants section, first paragraph&mdash;could you give specific sources for the establishment and dissolution of the Rebel Alliance? The current reference doesn't list where the information is from. --Imperialles 09:40, May 31, 2010 (UTC)
 * Done. Xicer9 [[Image:atgar.svg|20px]]( Combadge) 14:49, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Ord Farlstendoiro

 * "Ord Antalaha's inhabitants numbered around 150,000, although the accuracy of this number was in question" I don't get it. Either it was so, or it wasn't. Maybe it should be reworded to say that 150,000 was an official census or an estimate by someone?
 * Heh, the source literally puts a question mark next to that number under the population listing in one of those little WEG planet infoboxes. I've reworded it to make the number sound less certain.
 * "any ships larger than a CR90 corvette" You mean width, lenght...? You could also provide a specific number for that (We know how wide is a CR90).
 * No clue, the source just says anything "bigger" so I'm not sure what numbers I could use.
 * "This is further reinforced by the planet's entry in The Complete Star Wars Encyclopedia." How is it reinforced? Does the Encyclopedia say that Ord Antalaha was discovered in 8 BBY, or that it was discovered soon after the end of the Clone Wars, or what?
 * Whoops, clarified.
 * Good job. Skippy Farlstendoiro 09:41, May 31, 2010 (UTC)
 * Thank you once again for the thorough review! Xicer9 [[Image:atgar.svg|20px]]( Combadge) 14:49, May 31, 2010 (UTC)