Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Thermal detonator


 * ''The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was unsuccessful. Please do not modify it.

Thermal detonator (+0)
Support Objections
 * 1) Jedipilot94 20:17, 26 April 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Botbillder 17:31, 28 April 2007 (UTC)
 * 1) Needs some serious cleanup. a source for the first picture would be a good start. Tutos Lumenarious 13:58, 2 June 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) *I'll see if can source that picture. --Jedimca0 (Do or Do Not, There is No Try) 14:06, 2 June 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) *Notable users is completely unsourced, and a lot of the prose is deplorable. Expand it majorly and clean it up, or else get rid of it.
 * 4) *Could probably use a lot more detail. It throws in random facts all over, and leaves out a lot of other important uses.
 * Fix these two things up as a start, and I'll take another look at it then. But right now, the article is simply too messy and unprofessional to reach GA. Hobbes15 ( Tiger Headquarters ) 04:58, 10 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Fix these two things up as a start, and I'll take another look at it then. But right now, the article is simply too messy and unprofessional to reach GA. Hobbes15 ( Tiger Headquarters ) 04:58, 10 July 2007 (UTC)

Comments
 * So far I've been unable to source the main image, for the relevant discussion see here, I also asked the person who uploaded it about the source but haven't received a reply yet. If the image can't be sourced we should consider replacing it. --Jedimca0 (Do or Do Not, There is No Try) 12:27, 4 June 2007 (UTC)
 * I think it might be from The New Essential Guide to Weapons and Technology, can someone with this check it for me. Darth Seth [[Image:Stormtrooper helmet.jpg|20px]]( Imperial Lieutenant ) 14:45, 7 June 2007 (UTC)
 * I looked through the The New Essential Guide to Weapons and Technology, but could not find that picture. Greyman ( Paratus ) 14:09, 9 June 2007 (UTC)
 * I hoped this would not be necessary but perhaps replacing that picture is needed if we want this to become a GA. --Jedimca0 (Do or Do Not, There is No Try) 14:20, 9 June 2007 (UTC)
 * If the article is to become a GA, then it needs to meet rule 6(a) since it has pictures available. I'll take a look through some sources I have and see what I can come up with.   Greyman ( Paratus ) 15:40, 9 June 2007 (UTC)
 * I replaced the image, are there any other objections? --Jedimca0 (Do or Do Not, There is No Try) 11:26, 14 June 2007 (UTC)