Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Nim Mindbend


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Nim Mindbend

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 11:36, March 17, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Three of Three

(2 ECs/1 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1)  nayayen ★talk  12:00, March 18, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 14:17, March 18, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) &mdash; Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:58, March 21, 2012 (UTC)

Object Comments
 * 1) Savaged
 * 2) * Just a preliminary one: Balnab, as far as we know at this point, is not a species identification, it's a name for a particular group of castaways who crash-landed on the planet Balnab. As such, I don't think we can say that particular bounty hunter was a member of said group. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 16:06, March 17, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) **Changed.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 20:45, March 17, 2012 (UTC)
 * 4) * OK, might as well do a full review. How do we know Mindbend is male?
 * 5) **Per the guide and his looking.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 20:45, March 17, 2012 (UTC)
 * 6) *** I don't follow. Does the episode guide say Mindbend is male? Seeing only the shoulders and head leaves it ambiguous. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 23:26, March 17, 2012 (UTC)
 * 7) ****Yes.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 09:36, March 18, 2012 (UTC)
 * 8) * We don't know that Chalmun owned the cantina at this point, do we? I'd use "Mos Eisley Cantina," I think.
 * 9) **Done.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 20:45, March 17, 2012 (UTC)
 * 10) * Might as well spell out who the "other target" was.
 * 11) **To keep at least a slight difference between the three articles I wrote it that way and I believe it is fine.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 20:45, March 17, 2012 (UTC)
 * 12) *** I think the article needs to spell it out to be comprehensive, personally. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 23:26, March 17, 2012 (UTC)
 * 13) ****Fine, done.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 09:38, March 18, 2012 (UTC)
 * 14) * Perhaps add a line to BTS that the blue tint of the image makes it impossible to definitively state Mindbend's skin and eye color. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 16:09, March 17, 2012 (UTC)
 * 15) **I'm not entirely why this should be included as I've never seen that anywhere. Thanks for the review.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 20:45, March 17, 2012 (UTC)
 * 16) *** Because someone might think his skin color should be purple and his eyes yellow based on the image, without realizing that the entire image is tinted blue and prevents that kind of identification from being made. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 23:26, March 17, 2012 (UTC)
 * 17) ****Thanks, I added it now.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 09:36, March 18, 2012 (UTC)