Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/White Panther


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White Panther

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 18:58, November 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Hm.

(2 ECs/3 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1) Aleena awesomeness.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 16:12, November 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 16:05, November 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Tinwe (comlink) 18:32, November 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 01:15, November 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  16:42, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * "...the name of the retrofitted podracer of Aleena podracer pilot." This sentence sounds like it ends right in the middle of something. Could you fix it so it sounds more complete and understandable?
 * Fixed.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk
 * Again, this article needs a 1stm template.
 * Added.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:00, November 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * Otherwise, good job.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 02:32, November 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * Thanks.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:00, November 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * Rubedo
 * He was not "mentioned" in the book. He appeared on a viewscreen.
 * Yes. And therefore it is mentioned. Or should I chnange it to a 1st?  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 13:57, November 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * Maybe 1stp would suit better? 1358  (Talk)  15:30, November 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * I think that  is best.  is more of an OOU label; I don't think it's applicable to a prose-only book. Menkooroo 15:34, November 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * Here's some precedent. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 16:05, November 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * Suppose that works. I don't see why couldn't be used in an IU article though; nothing in it indicates it's OOU.  1358  (Talk)  16:41, November 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * Well, in this case it's not even exactly a picture. It's a live stream of people on the track. I'm fairly certain that we've even just called that sort of thing an appearance without any note in the past, but I don't think specificity hurts here. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 17:32, November 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * Boba Fett recognizing Kador and the craft should be in the article.
 * Added.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 13:57, November 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * The name isn't italicized in the source? Do you have a physical copy? NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 21:51, November 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * Indeed it is italicized.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 13:57, November 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * The first sentence reads a bit awkwardly, mainly because of the two "of the" constructions in such a close proximity of each other. Could it be tightened to just "White Panther was the retrofitted podracer of..."? Tinwe (comlink) 18:23, November 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * Yep, done.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 18:25, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

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