Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Unidentified Twi'lek Dark Jedi (Tràkata)


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Unidentified Twi'lek Dark Jedi (Tràkata)‎

 * Nominated by: &mdash; 04:45, March 29, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: And another&hellip;

(4 ECs/0 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 11:55, March 29, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  Commander Code-8  G'day, mate 10:50, April 1, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 13:38, April 6, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  17:28, April 6, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * Your first reference has some issues...
 * 3) * Your second reference has the wrong set name in it. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  17:56, April 1, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) **Both fixed.&mdash; 18:47, April 1, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) Bob
 * 6) * SImilar to the noms above, you tell us in the first sentence that "A Dark Jedi ... fell to the dark side." Can you reword the intro like you did with the Jedi entires?
 * 7) * It's unclear whose lightsaber the Sullustan shut off.
 * 8) * Separate out clothing from physical appearance and indicate that "At the time of the battle..." he wore those clothes. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 11:26, April 5, 2013 (UTC)
 * 9) **Please try them.&mdash; 16:09, April 5, 2013 (UTC)

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