Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Mission to the Thicket


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Mission to the Thicket

 * Nominated by:  CC7567  (talk) 05:01, September 14, 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: What seems to be the last of Hunting the Hunters.

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)
Support
 * 1) No need for another review. Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 00:54, September 15, 2009 (UTC)
 * 2)  JangFett  Talk 11:40, September 15, 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) Very nice work.  Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 20:21, September 15, 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 10:46, September 16, 2009 (UTC)
 * 5)  Grunny  ( Talk ) 05:16, September 22, 2009 (UTC)
 * 6) -- Clone Commander Lee  Talk 12:03, September 22, 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Just one thing
 * 2) * I may be mistaken but wasn't Torrent Four killed instead of the other pilot. -- Clone Commander Lee  Talk 09:29, September 14, 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) **Both were.  CC7567  (talk) 21:53, September 14, 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Than the casualties are two Torrent and the probe. -- Clone Commander Lee  Talk 11:28, September 15, 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) ****Fixed.  CC7567  (talk) 05:32, September 22, 2009 (UTC)
 * 6) What? Grand Moff Tranner is reviewing a TCW nom?
 * 7) * B1 battle droids are shown in the comic. This needs to be mentioned in the infobox.
 * 8) **Eh...well, I guess, even though they didn't do anything.  CC7567  (talk) 21:53, September 14, 2009 (UTC)
 * 9) * Torrent Four is not destroyed by enemy fire, nor is the probe. The probe was somehow reprogrammed by HELIOS and maneuvered into colliding with Torrent Four. Vulture droids played no role in their destruction. However, Vulture droids do lure the second Torrent from the comic into the remnants of the LaserWeb.
 * 10) **And only now I see the V-19 wings in the explosion. Thanks for the correction.  CC7567  (talk) 21:53, September 14, 2009 (UTC)
 * 11) *That's all for now, but given the fact that I'm currently half-asleep, I'll give this another review later. Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 11:21, September 14, 2009 (UTC)
 * 12) **Cheers till then, Tranner.  CC7567  (talk) 21:53, September 14, 2009 (UTC)
 * 13) Soresu
 * 14) * The mission to the Thicket You shouldn't be using the name in the article, since it's conjectural.  SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 09:08, September 15, 2009 (UTC)
 * 15) **If it's decapitalized like that, I cannot see why not. It's still not an official name.  CC7567  (talk) 16:11, September 15, 2009 (UTC)
 * 16) ***Okay. I just don't want people to start thinking it's a canon name despite the conjecture template. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 10:46, September 16, 2009 (UTC)
 * 17) "In a preceding skirmish between Republic fighters and HELIOS-3D's space forces, HELIOS-3D was defeated." The chronology shift here is a little sudden in the intro. Is there any way this could be worded differently, or maybe moved up earlier in the intro?  Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 17:26, September 15, 2009 (UTC)
 * 18) *Reworded.  CC7567  (talk) 20:06, September 15, 2009 (UTC)

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