Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Rakririan


 * ''The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.

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Support
 * 1) --Eyrezer 10:47, 30 December 2007 (UTC)
 * 2)  Master Aban Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 01:13, 21 January 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) Toprawa and Ralltiir 06:17, 21 January 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) Cull Tremayne 10:18, 24 January 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) Goodwood  [[Image:Rebsymbol2.png|20px]] ( Alliance Intelligence ) 01:27, 30 January 2008 (UTC)

Oppose Comments
 * 1) A few things from around the Family-sized pasta bowl of Fiolli:
 * 2) * First sentence is not really clear as to what is ambiguous, the species or the planet. A personal preference of mine would be to not use parenthesis in this situation.
 * 3) * Intro paragraph: perhaps mention their heightened culture as a reason they viewed the rest of the Galaxy as unrefined.
 * 4) * B&A starts right into "Their bodies&hellip;." A reiteration of the species name might be useful.
 * 5) * B&A also makes no prose statements about species type or size of the being.
 * 6) * Were "finicky" and "meticulous" used in a source or spoken by a person? If so, a quote might be nice in this section to amplify it. Also, the sentence that contains those words does not seem to be NPoV, even though they are in quotes; Perhaps it should state that their attitudes or actions gave rise to the species being labeled such?
 * 7) * The home planet is not mentioned in the S&C section.
 * 8) * "In the Galaxy" section should probably restate that the species, for the most part, was either isolated from the Galaxy or did not travel. Whichever is better, I am not certain.
 * 9) * The information about Plo Koon, I thought, came from Tales not Jedi Chef. If it is Tales, it should be marked with the ambig tags or moved to BtS if still relevant.
 * 10) **Jedi Chef is Tales. --Eyrezer 08:40, 4 January 2008 (UTC)
 * 11) *** My apologies, but I believe it should still be marked with ambig tags.  Master Aban Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 16:16, 8 January 2008 (UTC)
 * 12) *Kudos for finding some relatively obscure information and making an article out of limited resources.  Master Aban Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 16:58, 1 January 2008 (UTC)
 * 13) **I think I've dealt to all of these now - except the Tales tag. I purposely worded it vaguely enough that I don't think it needs the tags. --Eyrezer 22:53, 20 January 2008 (UTC)
 * 14) ***Thank you. Nice work.  Master Aban Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 01:13, 21 January 2008 (UTC)
 * I checked Rebellion, and the species is not mentioned. Only Sabodor is given a mention. I might consider removing the Rebellion appearance. Toprawa and Ralltiir 06:17, 21 January 2008 (UTC)