Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Relentless (Pellaeon-class)


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Relentless (Pellaeon-class)

 * Nominated by:  Grunny  ( Talk ) 02:17, 9 May 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: 1,061 words

(5 Inqs/3 Users/8 Total)
Support
 * 1) Looketh fineth to me.  CC7567  (talk) 02:45, 9 May 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) Ditto, looks perfect. Xicer9 atgar.svg( Combadge) 02:54, 9 May 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) Per brief IRC review. Kilson Likes PIE 03:21, 09 May 09 (UTC)
 * 4) Per pre-nom review. Cylka  -talk- 06:03, 9 May 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) Well done. Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 14:31, 9 May 2009 (UTC)
 * 6) &mdash;  Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 00:54, 11 May 2009 (UTC)
 * 7) Beautiful. Nearly flawless in its execution.  Graestan ( Talk ) 13:21, 11 May 2009 (UTC)
 * 8) Thefourdotelipsis 00:09, 13 May 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) "The Relentless was a Pellaeon-class Star Destroyer, ships that were originally manufactured by Kuat Drive Yards for the Fel Empire." - This could be worded a little better, I feel. Perhaps "a class of ship," or something along those lines. That was the only thing that leapt out at me, otherwise excellent. Thefourdotelipsis 00:01, 13 May 2009 (UTC)

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