Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Mind eel


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Mind eel

 * Nominated by:  Stake black   msg 16:25, March 13, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

(3 ECs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 18:31, March 13, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) [cough] Goa'uld! [cough].&mdash;  05:12, March 14, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) Per Kasra :D &mdash; DigiFluid(Whine here) 13:59, March 14, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) Per Kasra Supreme Emperor (talk) 15:15, March 16, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  22:37, March 16, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Only one thing: The first sentence has two many "located"s. Delocate one please.  501st  dogma ( talk ) 18:18, March 13, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) *Done.  Stake black   msg 18:23, March 13, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) Style &mdash; DigiFluid(Whine here) 13:27, March 14, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) * Aside from conjectural article titles, the article title and the first instance of bolding should read the same. In this case, the article is singular where the bold is plural. I think "Mind eels were a species..." ought to be replaced by "A mind eel was a species..."
 * 5) **Done.  Stake black   msg 13:32, March 14, 2013 (UTC)

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