Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Battle of Hsskhor


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Battle of Hsskhor

 * Nominated by:  IFYLOFD  ( You will pay the price for your lack of vision! ) 05:43, 23 July 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Part of WP:NSW.

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)
Support
 * 1) There's a WookieeProject: New South Wales now? I'm flattered. Clean, apart from a few typos. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 06:30, 24 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) &mdash;Master Jonathan(Jedi Council Chambers) 03:15, 26 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 3)  Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 14:40, 26 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 4)  Mauser  Comlink 16:56, 26 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 13:27, 30 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 6)  CC7567  (talk) 05:50, 31 July 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Mauser:
 * 2) * Again, there's no need to fill the Commanders section of the infobox with "Unknown".
 * 3) **Addressed.
 * 4) *And again, it looks very clear.  Mauser  Comlink 10:11, 24 July 2009 (UTC)\
 * 5) **Thanks for the review.  IFYLOFD  ( You will pay the price for your lack of vision! ) 03:54, 26 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 6) Who is Adanar? His mention is rather random. I think at least his allegiance could be added.  Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 02:31, 26 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 7) **Addressed. Thanks for the review.  IFYLOFD  ( You will pay the price for your lack of vision! ) 03:54, 26 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 8) Please watch the flowery prose. Also, it's unclear what the Brotherhood is when you only say it was "over twenty thousand strong"; it sounds like you're trying to avoid putting a describing noun to it, which doesn't flow well.  CC7567  (talk) 05:06, 29 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 9) *Addressed. Thanks for the review.  IFYLOFD  ( You will pay the price for your lack of vision! ) 03:49, 31 July 2009 (UTC)

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