Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Alderaanian tourist board Holoplay 2735

Alderaanian tourist board Holoplay #2735

 * Nominated by: LelalMekha (talk) 10:24, December 28, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

Support

 * 1) Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:31, January 3, 2014 (UTC)
 * 2) If Emperor's satisfied. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 01:27, January 22, 2014 (UTC)

Object

 * 1) Ayrehead
 * 2) * "and she watched it many times before she could mourn her loss completely" sounds a bit odd, could you rephrase to something like and watched in many times whilst she mourned the loss of her homeworld.
 * 3) **Fixed. --LelalMekha (talk) 10:36, January 3, 2014 (UTC)
 * 4) * I think it should be the holoplay not that holoplay at the start of the second sentence, I would change it myself but I'm not 100% sure. Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:27, December 30, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) **Changed. --LelalMekha (talk) 10:36, January 3, 2014 (UTC)


 * SE
 * 1) * Can you add in a release date in the bts? Supreme Emperor (talk) 04:00, January 6, 2014 (UTC)
 * 2) **Done. --LelalMekha (talk) 10:17, January 6, 2014 (UTC)
 * 3) *Can you give more detail about the regions it advertises? The panel gives a few more details. Supreme Emperor (talk) 13:43, January 6, 2014 (UTC)
 * 4) **More detail added. But I wouldn't add more than that, because it would ultimately lead to repeating everything that is on the panel. --LelalMekha (talk) 14:19, January 8, 2014 (UTC)
 * 5) ***I still feel like some more detail could be given, based on what the panel says. Supreme Emperor (talk) 04:38, January 13, 2014 (UTC)
 * 6) ****Still not good? --LelalMekha (talk) 01:08, January 22, 2014 (UTC)

Comments

 * As far as I'm aware, # is an invalid sign to use in titles, show it shouldn't be included in a .  Cade  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg  Calrayn  06:24, January 3, 2014 (UTC)
 * If it's not allowed, then I'll change it, but the # sign was explicitely used in the comic, so what should I do? --LelalMekha (talk) 10:36, January 3, 2014 (UTC)
 * You can use it in the article body, just don't use it in the Title, I believe... Cade  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg  Calrayn  19:20, January 6, 2014 (UTC)
 * Okay, then. Fixed. --LelalMekha (talk) 14:19, January 8, 2014 (UTC)