Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Reedox-stew


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Reedox-stew

 * Nominated by:  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:33, May 1, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: I'm not sure if I'd want to eat this stuff.

(1 ECs/3 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1) ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 14:34, May 2, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) Looks great! Descriptive and well-written. OtterSurf 18:26, May 9, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) Tinwe (comlink) 11:25, May 12, 2012 (UTC)
 * 4) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 21:15, May 13, 2012 (UTC)

Object
 * In your ref, "Leland Chee, the person in charge of the Holocron continuity database, Lucasfilm Ltd.'s way of keeping Star Wars continuity straight, said that Han Solo was born in 29 BBY." This is a run-on sentence. Break it up. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 18:13, May 9, 2012 (UTC)
 * Hmmm, I'm not sure how I could break it up. Perhaps I should just shorten it and say: "In : Leland Chee, the person in charge of the Lucasfilm Ltd.'s Holocron continuity database, said that Han Solo was born in 29 BBY. The New Essential Guide to Characters states that Solo left his master, Garris Shrike, at the age of nineteen, an event that happened shortly before Han Solo had the reedox-stew. Therefore, Solo ate the reedox-stew in 10 BBY." Would that be better?-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  20:24, May 9, 2012 (UTC)
 * I'd say "[Everything else]..."at the age of nineteen. This event happened before Han Solo had the reedox-stew; therefore, he ate the reedox-stew in 10 BBY." NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 15:35, May 10, 2012 (UTC)
 * Done.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:18, May 10, 2012 (UTC)

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