Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Honor duel on Hapes

Duel on Hapes

 * Nominated by: - Princess   GLG  01:49, March 22, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Only my second GAN, so there's probably plenty of mistakes. For WP:N.

Support

 * 1) Nice work. Supreme Emperor (talk) 20:40, March 26, 2013 (UTC)

Ecks Dee

 * Before I give it a thorough review, please make sure something in the intro is bolded. 1358  (Talk)  01:06, March 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * Done. - Princess   GLG  03:06, March 25, 2013 (UTC)
 * As per Forum:CT Archive/Links in in-article titles (and possibly other, newer CTs), linking in the bolded part is not allowed. Please remove the links and place them at a later place. 1358  (Talk)  21:00, March 25, 2013 (UTC)
 * Done. - Princess   GLG  21:09, March 25, 2013 (UTC)

Emperor

 * Can you add a little more context regarding what happened in the duel to the intro?
 * Better?
 * Some context about the Yuuzhan Vong war in the intro
 * Added.
 * Could you find a quote to put above the intro?
 * Added.
 * In the prelude could you add some context regarding the Yuuzhan Vong and the war?
 * Done.
 * Could you change the prelude quote to one of Thane insulting Leia?
 * Done.
 * Could some of the information in the skirmish section be moved to the prelude?
 * Done.
 * On that note, could you add a bit more info about the duel itself in the skirmish section?
 * Will get to this later.
 * Done. - Princess   GLG  11:56, March 25, 2013 (UTC)
 * In the aftermath, could you add a line about the Hapan fleet later being devastated at the battle of Fondor?
 * Done.
 * Nice work on the article, and congrats on your second GA nom. Supreme Emperor (talk) 01:35, March 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * Thanks. - Princess   GLG  03:06, March 25, 2013 (UTC)


 * Could you add a brief note in the outcome regarding how Thane agreed to support the New Republic in the vote? Supreme Emperor (talk) 03:20, March 25, 2013 (UTC)
 * I'm not sure what you mean by this. The aftermath section says that Thane did vote to support entering the war. - Princess   GLG  11:56, March 25, 2013 (UTC)
 * Sorry, I meant in the outcome section of the infobox. Supreme Emperor (talk) 16:03, March 26, 2013 (UTC)
 * Ah...Done. - Princess   GLG  19:51, March 26, 2013 (UTC)