Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Wyrpuuk Cha


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Support
 * 1) Harrar 09:56, 21 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) Greyman  @wikia ( Talk ) 16:14, 25 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 3)  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  16:01, 26 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) Toprawa and Ralltiir 18:04, 27 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) Impressive. Most impressive. —Tommy ( Clean face and hands ) The Anvil 00:14, 30 May 2008 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) Toprawa:
 * 2) * Brief descriptor for the yammosks, please: "the two yammosks in his fleet"
 * 3) * Need context for clarification here, please. What are these, what are their purpose, etc.: "Forced to rely solely on blaze bugs"
 * 4) * I would really suggest going back through the Biography section and seeing what you can do to "dumb down" the context of everything. As someone who has never read any of these Yuuzhan Vong stories myself, I have trouble understanding exactly what's going on here. Parts of this are written presupposing that the reader knows what's going on already. Toprawa and Ralltiir 20:49, 22 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) **I think I've addressed these; have a perusal when you have the time.Harrar 16:13, 25 May 2008 (UTC)

Comments
 * Not an objection, per se, but is it possible to maybe flush out that BtS a little bit? Even another sentence or two, maybe explaining his role in the "grand scheme" of the novel (for example), would make it a little bit more presentable. If not, I understand ;) Greyman  @wikia ( Talk ) 01:49, 24 May 2008 (UTC)
 * I was under the impression that explaining a characer's role in a novel gave rise to OR, but it's refreshing to hear that it isn't. Have a look and see what you think, I'll do the same for Vo Lian.Harrar 16:13, 25 May 2008 (UTC)
 * Heh, it's not OR at all when done properly, and when it can be backed up with sources ;) Greyman  @wikia ( Talk ) 16:14, 25 May 2008 (UTC)