Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Jeng Droga


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Jeng Droga

 * Nominated by: Thefourdotelipsis 14:45, 12 June 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: He go crazy.

(5 Inqs/0 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1) Lord Hydronium 03:51, 14 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 2)  Greyman ( Talk ) 15:11, 28 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) I quite like this guy. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 17:06, 28 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) Clean nom. He'll go down in history as simply another entry in the long list of "PWNED by Kyle".  Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 15:55, 30 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) Yup, clean. Nice job. Toprawa and Ralltiir 00:25, 1 July 2008 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) Blah blah blah:
 * 2) * Two "was able"s in close proximity at the end of the first intro paragraph.
 * 3) **Fixed.
 * 4) * Perhaps a mention of Anakin's significance in the intro and later on in the bio; as it is, all it says is that he's some infant.
 * 5) **In there now.
 * 6) * "There, during the pivotal battle that took place there" -- this could do with cleaning up.
 * 7) **Nixed the first "there"
 * 8) **Good article, interesting character. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 13:56, 25 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 9) ***Thanks for the review. Thefourdotelipsis 11:38, 28 June 2008 (UTC)

Comments


 * If anyone has Empire's End, replacement of the images would be much appreciated. Thefourdotelipsis 14:45, 12 June 2008 (UTC)
 * Scratch that last. Thefourdotelipsis 08:06, 16 June 2008 (UTC)