Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Celot Ratua Dil


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Celot Ratua Dil

 * Nominated by:  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 19:32, 8 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: He is Teh Roxxor!

(5 Inqs/0 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1)  —Xwing328 (Talk) 00:21, 11 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) Short and well-done. Cull Tremayne 08:41, 17 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) Green Tentacle (Talk) 21:27, 24 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) Thefourdotelipsis 12:06, 25 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) -  Cavalier One [[Image:FarStar Logo.jpg|20px]]( Squadron channel ) 12:10, 25 November 2008 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) From the cockpit of Xwing328:
 * 2) * Did it really say he was Force-sensitive? Also, you may want to add a P&A section to explain how he used his fast reflexes in classes with Stihl.
 * 3) **There's not enough for a whole section, IMO, so I added a paragraph in P&T. In regard to your first point, I would have sworn the book explicitly said he was Force-sensitive, but looking through it, all I could find was that it was very strongly implied. I think I might remove the bit about him being Force-sensitive, as it's somewhat of an interpretation. Advice from someone with knowledge on Death Star would be appreciated.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 19:22, 9 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) ***You're probably thinking of Nova Stihl, who discovers he is Force-sensitive. Stihl was the one who passed out when Alderaan was destroyed, and said he had a power he called "Blink," or anticipating people's moves during fights. (I had to go look this up, too, because I didn't remember it). —Xwing328 (Talk) 20:04, 9 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) ****I think I am. The Force-sensitive stuff has been removed.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 19:43, 10 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 6) * Maybe add a bit about the Hard Heart Cantina, since most of the story takes place there. —Xwing328 (Talk) 00:13, 9 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 7) **I added a small bit, but there's not much to say. Is there anything specific you'd like?  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 19:22, 9 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 8) ***Maybe something about who owns it, where it's located on the Death Star, etc. Just a tiny bit of context. —Xwing328 (Talk) 20:04, 9 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 9) ****Added that info. Thanks.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 19:43, 10 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 10) Rather a minor point but the capitalization of "destruction" of Alderaan/Despayre is inconsistent. Green Tentacle (Talk) 20:29, 24 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 11) *Fixed.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 21:14, 24 November 2008 (UTC)

Comments
 * One source, no pictures. There is a reference, but that's an external link. He goes by Ratua in the novel, so that's why he's called that and not Dil.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 19:32, 8 November 2008 (UTC)