Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Fleebog


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Fleebog

 * Nominated by: ~ SavageBob 05:05, 29 June 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: You have Eyrezer to blame.

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)
Support
 * 1) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 06:55, 30 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) Remember not to link in quotes unless it is the article's only mention of that subject. The Chirpa link in the lead quote is OK, but I removed two other links further down the page. &mdash;Master Jonathan(Jedi Council Chambers) 04:30, 3 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) --Eyrezer 04:52, 3 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) --Skippy Farlstendoiro 06:31, 3 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 5)  CC7567  (talk) 06:32, 3 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 6) Cute. Man, I thought I wouldn't be tired of Ewok shit anymore. Can't win them all.  Graestan ( Talk ) 02:30, 7 July 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Soresu
 * 2) * Just one: At some point before 3 ABY, some members of the species found their way to the Forest Moon of Endor in the Inner Zuma region—such introductions were relatively common on the moon due to the dual navigational hazards of a massive gravity shadow and a shield of space debris. I don't see how these navigational hazards would lead to the Fleebog finding Endor. Please explain. Good job overall though.
 * 3) **I've tried to clarify. Better? ~ SavageBob 22:14, 29 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) Can you add a good image of the interior of their tunnels? I think that will be a great addition to the article. Also, you reference the first two sentences of the history section to the Gamer article. Only the bit about navigational hazards should be reffed to that. --Eyrezer 06:59, 30 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) *Added the image, sourced the first sentence. What'cha think? ~ SavageBob 12:59, 2 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 6) Farlstendoiro and the F nomination
 * 7) * The images suggest that the Fleebogs had pupilless eyes. Is that true? If so, it should be referred in the text.
 * 8) * [The Fleebogs] made contact with the Ewoks who lived there. I understand this makes reference to the opening quote. However, the opening quote suggests that, even if the Ewoks know of the Fleebogs's existence, they were unfamiliar with details about them (culture, history, etc); and that the Ewoks and the Fleebogs do not have steady contact with each other. Besides, young Ewoks are apparently unaware of the Fleebogs's existence? Is any of those things specified in the OS, or would it be OR?
 * 9) * Once underground, the ra-lugg attacked, forcing the Fleebogs to spring their defenses. Who's underground? The Fleebogs, Kneesa or the ra-lugg? Maybe you could say that the Fleebogs kidnapped Kneesa and took her to their underground habitat?
 * 10) *I simply don't like my signature in the same line as an objection.--Skippy Farlstendoiro 07:48, 1 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 11) **I've tried to address your concerns. Is that better? ~ SavageBob 13:02, 2 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 12) ***Yes. --Skippy Farlstendoiro 06:31, 3 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 13) "and the rocks allowed to block off the tunnel": please check this; it's not flowing very nicely.  CC7567  (talk) 03:34, 3 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 14) *I've reworded it. Is that better? ~ SavageBob 06:28, 3 July 2009 (UTC)

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