Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Dar Keyis


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Dar Keyis

 * Nominated by: Cavalier One [[Image:FarStar Logo.jpg|20px]]( Squadron channel ) 14:13, 16 January 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Cav's back on the GA page, and he's brought a non-DarkStryder nom with him!

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  20:00, 16 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 2)  Graestan ( Talk ) 19:50, 22 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 22:43, 22 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 1)  Pranay Sobusk  ~  Talk  16:28, 2 February 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) Toprawa and Ralltiir 15:27, 3 February 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) You should mention that he Rogue Ten somewhere in the bio. I don't think succession boxes should convey new info.  04:48, 17 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) *Done.
 * 3) Graestan the Merciless:
 * 4) * Ditto Soresu, and I'd say in the intro, as well.
 * 5) **Done.
 * 6) * A little more context for the campaign and missions in the intro, please.
 * 7) **Added.
 * 8) * Context for the campaign in the bio, as well. Vuultin isn't initially described as a city on Brentaal IV, even.
 * 9) **Added some.
 * 10) * Some explanation on the presence of Independence&mdash;the mention of it and Ackbar is a bit out of the blue.
 * 11) **Mentioned Ackbar earlier in the article, provided context for Independence.
 * 12) * Even with the "as evidenced" part, "an excellent pilot" on its own is POVish.
 * 13) **Reworded.
 * 14) * Describe his mention in Family Ties in the BtS.
 * 15) **Done.
 * 16) * Image:Dar keyis.jpg has visible comic frame that needs to be cropped out.
 * 17) **I've asked Redemption for a rescan of the image; I tried myself, but I couldn't get the qaulity right.
 * 18) ***No need for a re-scan, per se; only that you reupload the image, having cut off that sliver at the bottom. Graestan ( Talk ) 03:02, 21 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 19) ****Should be good now. - Cavalier One [[Image:FarStar Logo.jpg|20px]]( Squadron channel ) 10:41, 21 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 20) * Graestan ( Talk ) 17:56, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 21) * Nothing big, but if he was first a pilot of the New Republic Starfighter Corps, couldn't that also be included in the infobox under affiliation?
 * 22) **Added.
 * 23) * Staging from Recopia, ... Could you clarify what Recopia is? Otherwise, good article.  Pranay Sobusk  ~  Talk  10:19, 1 February 2009 (UTC)
 * 24) **Added context on what Recopia is. - Cavalier One [[Image:FarStar Logo.jpg|20px]]( Squadron channel ) 10:30, 2 February 2009 (UTC)
 * 25) Toprawa:
 * 26) * The last paragraph of the biography is begging for closure. What happened in the battle? Did the NR succeed in stopping the escapees?
 * 27) **Added battle conclusion.
 * 28) * I find it interesting that the BTS capitalizes the "Roll of the Dead" as a proper noun. Should we not be redlinking to this in the biography upon mention of the death roster?
 * 29) **I must have been tripping here. Its referred to as the "roster of the dead". Unfortunately, since all comic lettering is capitalized, I can't say for certain if it's meant to be a proper noun or not. Decapitalized and changed. - Cavalier One [[Image:FarStar Logo.jpg|20px]]( Squadron channel ) 09:02, 3 February 2009 (UTC)
 * 30) * Also, I added "Eventually" to Tarrin Datch's field in the succ box, since nothing states direct succession. Please do the same to Fel if appropriate.
 * 31) **No need. Fel joined the squadron directly after.
 * 32) * I'm willing to bet there's an entry in SWE and/or CSWE. Toprawa and Ralltiir 18:00, 2 February 2009 (UTC)
 * 33) **How much you willing to bet? No individual entry for the character in either, and no reference under Brentaal, or Rogue Squadron. If he's in there, its a brief mention in another entry that I haven't found. - Cavalier One [[Image:FarStar Logo.jpg|20px]]( Squadron channel ) 09:02, 3 February 2009 (UTC)
 * 34) ***Not that much. :P Thanks for checking. Toprawa and Ralltiir 15:27, 3 February 2009 (UTC)

Comments

Two things:
 * 1) Internal links the Battle of Brentaal IV article are a little off at the moment, but will align themselves once I post my rewrite of that article in a day or two.
 * 2) The references are screwed up - please see Forum:CT:Amending the Manual of Style to counter a problem with reference tag sourcing for the reason. - Cavalier One [[Image:FarStar Logo.jpg|20px]]( Squadron channel ) 14:13, 16 January 2009 (UTC)