Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Oovo IV

Oovo IV

 * Nominated by:  Fan26  ( Talk ) 15:06, October 20, 2018 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

Imp IV

 * Please get rid of the full dates in BTS.  Imperators II (Talk) 15:11, October 20, 2018 (UTC)
 * Done
 * What I meant get rid of the clauses mentioning the release dates, and their references. Just say "the 2015 book blahblah," which can usually all be sourced to the product itself.  Imperators II (Talk) 15:54, October 20, 2018 (UTC)
 * Fixed.
 * You don't need the Amazon and IGN refs anymore since all the info currently in the BTS can be referenced to the respective sources, so please remove them.  Imperators II (Talk) 20:56, October 20, 2018 (UTC)
 * Missing backup links.  Imperators II (Talk) 15:11, October 20, 2018 (UTC)
 * Backed up for amazon, something wrong with the IGN one. Would appreciate a pointer on how to get it to link to the archive url first, then the original.  Fan26  ( Talk ) 15:42, October 20, 2018 (UTC)
 * Regarding IGN, you're passing the same live link to the archiveurl parameter, instead of an actual backup link.  Imperators II (Talk) 15:46, October 20, 2018 (UTC)
 * Could've sworn I linked to the wayback machine. Thanks.  Fan26  ( Talk ) 15:48, October 20, 2018 (UTC)
 * All three web refs now have backup links; however the page is still in the missing permanent archival links category and I cannot find it with the rest of the categories-how do I remove it?  Fan26  ( Talk ) 15:51, October 20, 2018 (UTC)
 * You missed the External links section.  Imperators II (Talk) 15:54, October 20, 2018 (UTC)
 * Archived and added. I did something wrong though; the backup link field is sharing its space with the url to the original article and a partial date, which only shows up there in an incomplete form.  Fan26  ( Talk ) 18:37, October 20, 2018 (UTC)
 * Like this. The documentation pages for the citation templates often have instructions for how to add backup links.  Imperators II (Talk) 19:06, October 20, 2018 (UTC)
 * I see. The domain name rule applies to the archive.org link too. My bad.
 * Please present all relevant canon info in the BTS before the Legends info.  Imperators II (Talk) 15:54, October 20, 2018 (UTC)
 * Fixed.
 * I'd like to see some dating for the Jango Fett events, if not the Thrawn ones.  Imperators II (Talk) 15:55, October 20, 2018 (UTC)
 * AFAIK, there was no date provided for Fett, so I gave it more of a contextual timestamp based on when the ship first appeared. As for Thrawn, yeah, hardly any of the book has any concrete dates so what's already there is the best I think I can get.  Fan26  ( Talk ) 18:17, October 20, 2018 (UTC)
 * That's too much. Surely there has got to be a canon source that dates the events of AOTC to 22 BBY or something.  Imperators II (Talk) 19:39, October 20, 2018 (UTC)
 * Fixed. Fan26  ( Talk ) 20:38, October 20, 2018 (UTC)
 * The new date ref needs to be fully linked and properly punctuated, without any typos.  Imperators II (Talk) 20:56, October 20, 2018 (UTC)
 * You shouldn't be saying "became canon" about subjects like this that were originally part of Legends. They were still "canon" at any point until 2014. Please rephrase.  Imperators II (Talk) 20:56, October 20, 2018 (UTC)
 * That long list of the Absolutely Everything is really irrelevant to the subject, please remove it. And you're missing some punctuation in that sentence.  Imperators II (Talk) 20:56, October 20, 2018 (UTC)
 * "During or prior" is rather speculative wording, please replace with "by."  Imperators II (Talk) 20:56, October 20, 2018 (UTC)
 * Can we simplify the context for Star Pilot to something like "a 2015 children's book by Laura Buller" or something to that effect?  Imperators II (Talk) 20:56, October 20, 2018 (UTC)