Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Rikkar-du


 * ''The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.

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Support
 * 1) Nominated. DC 21:24, 6 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) --Eyrezer 05:57, 7 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) Cavalier One ( Squadron channel ) 13:14, 8 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 21:10, 14 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) Fifth. —Tommy9281 [[Image:Red lightsaber.png|20px]] ( Peace is a lie ) 04:13, 15 August 2008 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) The desk of Atarumaster88
 * 2) * "He was surpised to see Kruhl use the Force to destroy them, who revealed to Rikkar-du that he deactivated them before the meeting. " Unclear antecedent'
 * 3) **Better?
 * 4) * "though he escaped when he met his future wife, Tassa, who was the daughter of the rival clan's chief." This really should be detailed more.
 * 5) **Ready to Die didn't give a lot of info on that subject, though I did what I could.
 * 6) *Otherwise clean. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 21:17, 11 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 7) **Thanks for the review. DC 00:51, 14 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 8) Per Ataru, who said everything I would have. Another quote or two wouldn't hurt either. See about that & I'll support.  —Tommy9281  [[Image:Red lightsaber.png|20px]] ( Peace is a lie ) 04:36, 13 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 9) *Fixed Ataru's objections, and added two quotes. DC 00:51, 14 August 2008 (UTC)

Comments
 * One source, so no referencing is needed. DC 21:24, 6 August 2008 (UTC)
 * The opening quote, is it "clans' support" or "clan's support"? --Eyrezer 06:03, 7 August 2008 (UTC)
 * The former. DC 22:35, 7 August 2008 (UTC)