Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Teneniel Djo


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 * 1)  StarNeptune Talk to me! 19:19, 7 July 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Darthchristian   ( Hey! ) 12:00, 9 July 2007 (UTC)
 * 3)  - breathesgelatin Talk 19:22, 9 July 2007 (UTC)
 * 4)  Gonk  ( Gonk! ) 12:59, 10 July 2007 (UTC)
 * 5) Lord Hydronium 09:05, 15 July 2007 (UTC)
 * 6)  Greyman ( Paratus ) 17:29, 15 July 2007 (UTC)
 * It will definitely have my vote if the Yuuzhan War section could be a little more fleshed out. As it's written now, it's unclear why Jaina Solo was a contender for the throne... Could just use a sentence of exposition here and there in that section.  - breathesgelatin Talk 22:53, 8 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Fixed it up a bit, added why Jaina was a contender for the throne. Darthchristian   ( Hey! ) 12:01, 9 July 2007 (UTC)
 * No lead quote. Green Tentacle (Talk) 11:21, 10 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Remedied.  Gonk  ( Gonk! ) 12:59, 10 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Just being picky, but can we change the lead quote to something that describes her more, maybe a quote thats in the article already? Darthchristian   ( Hey! ) 21:02, 10 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Perhaps the opening quote from "The Yuuzhan Vong War?" Hobbes15 ( Tiger Headquarters ) 21:05, 10 July 2007 (UTC)
 * I was kinda thinking the one near the end of the Hapes/Dathomir Incident. Darthchristian   ( Hey! ) 21:11, 10 July 2007 (UTC)
 * That does look better. Maybe just the first line, though. But it is better than the current opening quote, even with all those extra lines. Hobbes15 ( Tiger Headquarters ) 15:02, 11 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Yea, lets change it to that. Darthchristian   ( Hey! ) 18:35, 11 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Was it ever proven that Ta'a Chume arranged for the Ni'korish to assasinate Teneniel? I just finished Dark Journey, and although I know she was suspected, I'm not sure if it was ever proven. Anyone have a text sample of that? Hobbes15 ( Tiger Headquarters ) 19:09, 11 July 2007 (UTC)
 * From the Isolder entry of the NEGTC: "The Yuuzhan Vong attacked against a backdrop of Hapan intrigue. Ta'a Chume plotted to have Jaina Solo marry her son and become the next Queen Mother. To further her plan, she arranged for Teneniel Djo's death." Also, I think it was stated in the second Dark Nest novel that Teneniel's death was the reason why Ta'a Chume was under house arrest.  StarNeptune Talk to me! 19:50, 11 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Struck objection as it's been addressed and user is on holiday. Green Tentacle (Talk) 08:53, 18 July 2007 (UTC)

'''Approved by Inquisitorius 09:03, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
 * I updated a fews things, sourced it and added a p & t.  StarNeptune Talk to me! 19:19, 7 July 2007 (UTC)