Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Pollux Hax


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Pollux Hax

 * Nominated by:  Lele Mj New_Jedi Order.svg ( Holoprojetor ) 14:03, June 6, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: None

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 * 1) Jinzler
 * 2) *The article needs to be sourced, in accordance with Sourcing
 * 3) *You should add a quote, anything suitable from the Coruscant chapter of The Illustrated Star Wars Universe will do
 * 4) *Are you sure that it is appropriate to put him in the Near-Humans category? As far as I am aware, he species is completely unknown, he may be Human or he may not be Near-Human, so unless you know of a source that explicitly calls him a Near-Human, you should remove this
 * 5) *You could perhaps mention in the "Behind the scenes" section the author of The Illustrated Star Wars Universe, and the year in which it was published
 * 6) *TISWU says that Hax served as the Emperor's propaganda chief for several years, you should mention this in the article
 * 7) *You should add a "Personality and traits" section to the article and add a brief description of his appearance, per his picture in TISWU
 * 8) *You possible also mention in a P&T that Hollux was pro-Imperial, supported the Empire, etc
 * 9) *In his Coruscant article, Hax mentions that it is unknown what planet the ch'hala tree comes from. This sort of conflicts a bit with a number of sources in the Living Force campaign, where it is well-known that the ch'hala is from the planet Cularin. You may want to consider something about this to the "Behind the scenes" section
 * 10) *Generally, you need to do more work on the article. I hope this list isn't too daunting, so if you need any help with anything, feel free to ask me or any other users --Jinzler 17:45, June 6, 2010 (UTC)
 * 11) The article should also note who illustrated him. Is his portrait concept art or was it an original work by McQuarrie for TISWU? ~ SavageBob 20:41, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

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