Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Zilaash Kuh


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Zilaash Kuh

 * Nominated by: Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi beacon ) 16:06, 2 May 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Minor character from Outcast

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)
Support
 * 1)  CC7567  (talk) 20:08, 2 May 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 10:53, 5 May 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) PIEman, I think I like the sound of that. Kilson Likes PIE 01:09, 07 May 09 (UTC)
 * 4) *Heh heh :P Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi beacon ) 01:32, 8 May 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) So clean!  Graestan ( Talk ) 02:17, 8 May 2009 (UTC)
 * 6) Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 14:35, 9 May 2009 (UTC)
 * 7)  IFYLOFD  ( You will pay the price for your lack of vision! ) 16:33, 9 May 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Attack of the Clone
 * 2) * In the intro, why did the Alliance seek to capture Horn?
 * 3) **Addressed.
 * 4) * Coruscant needs context.
 * 5) **The first mention in the bio already does.
 * 6) ***Whoops, missed that.  CC7567  (talk) 20:08, 2 May 2009 (UTC)
 * 7) * "Kuh also did not have a criminal record" sounds too trivial, and too out of the blue. Please try to fit this better into the P&T, or else remove it if it's irrelevant.
 * 8) **Removed.
 * 9) * "she piloted with Nyz in his flatbed cargo hauler": even if there were two pilots for the speeder, it's a bit confusing. Please try to reword this.
 * 10) **Is this better?
 * 11) *Looking good.  CC7567  (talk) 19:15, 2 May 2009 (UTC)
 * 12) **Thanks. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi beacon ) 20:02, 2 May 2009 (UTC)
 * 13) Soresu
 * 14) * She seemed to see herself in a slightly superior light compared with others, especially the Jedi Order, whose popularity had fallen in the public eye in light of recent events. Try to avoid using light twice.
 * 15) **Addressed.
 * 16) * The P&T should also summarize any skills she had eg. ability to use certain weapons, fly vehicles etc. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 11:03, 4 May 2009 (UTC)
 * 17) **Added. Thanks for the review Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi beacon ) 11:59, 4 May 2009 (UTC)
 * 18) Bumrushin' the Show with IFYLOFD:
 * 19) * Is it stated in Outcast that few non-Force sensitives could wield a lightsaber? Because if not, you'll have to either source it and the rest of the article or just remove it outright. Other than that, looking good.  IFYLOFD  ( You will pay the price for your lack of vision! ) 04:34, 5 May 2009 (UTC)
 * 20) * There are several lines that imply this, such as:


 * The main problem, though, is that it is never outright stated that she is non-Force-sensitive, so I can't really put that in the article; only that she was one of the few non-Jedi/Sith. If you think I should remove it, though, I will. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi beacon ) 11:13, 5 May 2009 (UTC)
 * Reworded and removed. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi beacon ) 02:39, 8 May 2009 (UTC)

The "PIEman's" review
 * 1) Give some context to crushguants in the Bio section.
 * 2) *Added.
 * 3) You should tell why she lost Horn in the intro.
 * 4) *Done.
 * 5) Other than that, looks good. Kilson Likes PIE 07 May 09 (UTC)
 * 6) *Thanks dude. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi beacon ) 22:59, 7 May 2009 (UTC)

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