Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations

 This page is for the nomination of "comprehensive articles." For a list of "comprehensive articles," see Category:Wookieepedia comprehensive articles.


 * Comprehensive article nominations history
 * Comprehensive article nominations archiving checklist

What is a "comprehensive article?"

A "comprehensive article" is an article that contains all information regarding the topic. Often, "comprehensive articles" cannot reach Featured or Good Article status due to their limited content. This process is intended to recognize articles that contain all relevant canon information, yet are still under the 250 word limit required for a Good Article. The purpose of this is twofold&mdash;firstly, to help users distinguish what is a stub, and what is merely a short article with no further relevant material to be added, and, more importantly, to highlight for the reader when they are reading something that has been judged definitely "comprehensive"&mdash;that is, a guarantee to the reader that whatever they are reading contains the sum total of all available content on that topic.

Nominations and promotions of the Comprehensive article process are overseen by a collective of users known as the "EduCorps," which is made up of the Inquisitorius, the AgriCorps, and various other experienced users who are considered qualified to adequately judge the nominated material.

Lucasfilm Ltd. and its many licensees continue to expand the Star Wars universe. Since new information might become available, it may be necessary to revoke a "comprehensive article's" status. A forum will be used to nominate articles that have fallen out-of-date. Members of the EduCorps will then post a warning template on that page, and a grace period of one week will be instituted in which the article can be improved. If there is a significant amount of new information, it is likely that once updated, the article will become eligible for Good article status, and thereby ineligible for Comprehensive article status.

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An article must&hellip;


 * 1) &hellip;be well-written and detailed.
 * 2) &hellip;be unbiased, non-point of view.
 * 3) &hellip;be sourced with all available sources and appearances.
 * 4) &hellip;follow the Manual of Style, Layout Guide, and all other policies on Wookieepedia. This is, of course, within reason. If a topic only has a very limited degree of content that cannot be divided up into the relevant article sections, it is not required that it follow the Layout Guide precisely. This is to be judged on a case-by-case basis.
 * 5) &hellip;following the review process, be stable, i.e., does not change significantly from day to day and is not the subject of ongoing edit wars. This does not apply to vandalism and protection or semi-protection as a result of vandalism.
 * 6) &hellip;not be tagged with any sort of improvement tags (i.e. more sources, expand, etc).
 * 7) &hellip;have no redlinks.
 * 8) &hellip;have all relevant canon information presented.
 * 9) &hellip;be completely referenced for all available material and sources. See Sourcing for more information.
 * 10) &hellip;have all quotes and images sourced.
 * 11) &hellip;provide at least one relevant quote on the article if available.
 * 12) &hellip;include a "Behind the scenes" section for in-universe articles.
 * 13) &hellip;counting the introduction, the article body, and "Behind the scenes" material, must not exceed 250 words in length (not including captions, quotes, or headers, etc). Any articles exceeding the limit should be taken to the Good article nominations page for consideration.
 * 14) &hellip;if the nominated article reaches 200 words or greater, the nominator must either provide an intro or draft an intro and provide a link to the revision in the nomination, showing that the intro does not elevate the article over 250 words. Exceptions can be made for articles wherein the majority of the text is in the "Behind the scenes" section.

How to nominate:


 * 1) First, nominate an article you find is worthy of comprehensive status, putting it at the bottom of the list below. Nominated articles must meet all thirteen requirements stated above.
 * 2) Add CAnom at the top of the article you are nominating.
 * 3) Be sure to place sign in the "Nominated by" line when the nomination is posted for voting.
 * 4) Others will object to the nomination if they disagree that the article is good enough; they will then supply reasons for doing so, and ways to improve the article in accordance with the established rules.
 * 5) Nominators and supporters will adjust the article until the objectors (with reasonable objections) are satisfied. Objectors may also make alterations&mdash;if there is any reason for contention on a given point, it should be settled in a civil manner in the nomination field itself.
 * 6) Users may not vote on their own articles.
 * 7) There is no limit to the amount of nominations a given user can submit at any given time.

How to vote:


 * 1) Before doing anything, be sure to read the article completely, keeping a sharp eye out for mistakes.
 * 2) Afterward, compare the article to the criteria listed above, and then either support or object the article's nomination.
 * 3) *If you object, please supply concrete reasons for doing so, and how it can be improved.
 * 4) As stated above, any objections will be looked upon by the nominator, supporters, and anyone willing to improve the article, and action will be taken to please the objectors. Do not strike other users' objections; it is up to the objector to review the changes and strike if they are satisfied.
 * 5) There are several ways in which an article can receive the required number of votes. Within a 48-hour period of nomination, only EduCorps votes will count towards the total, although anyone may choose to vote in that window. If four members of the EduCorps support a nomination in that window [0 to 48 hours post-nomination], and there are no outstanding objections, the article can be considered a "Comprehensive article" and be tagged with the template 48 hours after the initial nomination. The talk page will also be tagged with the  template. When the 48 hours are up, any user's votes will contribute towards the total. If two EduCorps member has voted for an article after a week, three regular votes will be required. After the 48 hour period, an article can still also pass with just three EduCorps votes.
 * 6) Once a nomination is successful, it will be placed on the Comprehensive article list. Instructions on how to archive nominations, successful or otherwise, can be found here. Anyone can archive a nomination&mdash;just make sure it has the correct number of votes, has been nominated for at least a week (or 48 hours if there are four EC votes), and that there are absolutely no outstanding objections. If you are not sure how to do this, just ask, and someone will likely be more than willing to help you. Also, if you think you can slip one past us, think again&mdash;someone is always watching you.

All nominations will be considered idle and are subject to instantaneous removal by EduCorps members if objections are not addressed, or at least not answered, after a period of 1 week.

Please remember to archive your nomination beforehand if you plan on taking it to the Good Article Nominations page.

Tuskbeast pike

 * Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:33, May 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Sub-page for Tuskbeast

(2 ECs/2 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 20:41, May 16, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  Commander Code-8  G'day, mate 09:17, May 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) -  Princess   GLG  20:25, May 26, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) Supreme Emperor (talk) 03:56, June 2, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) How about a CAnom template on the page? :)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 20:18, May 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) *I guess that is normally useful for a CAnom :P fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:55, May 16, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) &hellip;
 * 4) * Can you mention that the Nikto are sentient?
 * 5) **Added. Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:38, May 26, 2013 (UTC)
 * 6) * Source for the era in the infobox. - Princess   GLG  11:49, May 25, 2013 (UTC)
 * 7) **Fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:38, May 26, 2013 (UTC)
 * 8) Exiled Jedi
 * 9) *Is there not enough evidence that it can be considered a spear?-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  19:25, May 26, 2013 (UTC)
 * 10) **The line in the source simply says that Nikto carved dialogue from the play into their tuskbeast spears. I wasn't really sure if the name alone is enough to go on but I'd be happy to add it. Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:07, May 27, 2013 (UTC)
 * 11) ***I can't think of what else it would be, but it would be a good idea to make sure that others feel the same.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  00:37, May 28, 2013 (UTC)
 * 12) ****Where should I ask? Should I wait for others to comment here or put something on the burner page or the senate hall? Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:27, May 30, 2013 (UTC)
 * 13) *****The barn-burner page would probably be a good place.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  04:14, May 31, 2013 (UTC)

Comments
 * To my great embarrasement I've discovered upon going back to the source that I remembered the wording wrong and the items are in fact tusk beast pikes not spears. My apologise all corrections have been made. Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:40, June 1, 2013 (UTC)

CoCo District Constabulary

 * Nominated by: Coruscantfan (Talk) 04:03, May 16, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Been wanting to get to this for a while now.

(2 ECs/2 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1) Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:45, May 19, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 22:33, May 19, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) -  Princess   GLG  11:49, May 25, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4)  Commander Code-8  G'day, mate 10:31, June 3, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Ayrehead
 * 2) * Needs a 1st appearance tag.
 * 3) **Done.
 * 4) * Do we know who wrote the Holonet news article? Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:00, May 16, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) **Nope. Coruscantfan (Talk) 17:51, May 19, 2013 (UTC)
 * 6) Exiled Jedi
 * 7) * There is place on the site that says who wrote the articles. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  22:21, May 25, 2013 (UTC)
 * 8) **Info added. Thanks. Coruscantfan (Talk) 06:01, June 1, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Grahurr

 * Nominated by:  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  14:05, May 16, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Hutta Miniboss, part 1

(2 ECs/2 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1) Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:09, May 17, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 11:30, May 18, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) -  Princess   GLG  11:49, May 25, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4)  Commander Code-8  G'day, mate 10:32, June 3, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) You might want to say that he was confronted by an Imperial individual, or fought the individual.  501st  dogma ( talk ) 20:43, May 16, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) *Added.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  03:44, May 17, 2013 (UTC)

Comments
 * He was found on Hutta in TOR, does that make him eligible for the barnburner?-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  14:05, May 16, 2013 (UTC)
 * Of course!!! 501st  dogma ( talk ) 20:41, May 16, 2013 (UTC)
 * All right, I'll add it to the page.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  03:44, May 17, 2013 (UTC)
 * This isn't yet an objection as I'm not sure which format is meant to be followed but other articles for TOR I've seen include in the article the assumption that optional bosses in the game are killed by players for 100% completion. One example is SavageBob's currently FAnom'd Kintan crusher page which assumes that Gargath is killed even though he's totally optional. Is there a policy on this across the wiki? If not one needs to be made. Ayrehead02 (talk) 20:45, May 16, 2013 (UTC)
 * Okay, I'll include the assumption and clarify it in the BTS.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  03:44, May 17, 2013 (UTC)
 * Thanks although I'm still not 100% sure this is the correct format. Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:09, May 17, 2013 (UTC)
 * So, he's just a Wookiee you get to kill? I'm asking because I haven't played the game. Corellian Premier Jedi symbol.svg Force will be with you always 20:42, May 17, 2013 (UTC)
 * Yep, he's just standing at a campfire on Hutta. If you approach him, he attacks you.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  22:55, May 17, 2013 (UTC)

Unidentified Tetan carbonite smelter (Carbonite Guild surrender)

 * Nominated by:  Imperators II (Talk) 10:03, May 19, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

(2 ECs/2 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1) Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:23, May 19, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 22:26, May 19, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) -  Princess   GLG  12:11, May 25, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  22:41, May 25, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Fire-kraken

 * Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:21, May 19, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:An aptly named species for the burner

(2 ECs/2 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 12:19, May 20, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) -  Princess   GLG  12:19, May 22, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) Fe Nite (talk) 21:08, May 27, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  17:41, June 2, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Regarding TCSWE: Could you add the volume number thing, like you have in the reff to TCSWE, to the Sources instead of the generic TCSWE? Also, for that volume and entry thing, you should not add the page numbers. Good work.  501st  dogma ( talk ) 22:30, May 19, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) *Added without page number. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:40, May 20, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) Princess
 * 4) * Planet and novel need to be linked. Predator should not be linked as it goes to an article about a ship. (Some of these stuff I'm listing here could be considered "just do it", but since I've seen them in some of your other articles I'm decided to bring them to your attention.)
 * 5) **That's fair I do need to improve my linking I always forget just how many general term articles we have. Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:12, May 21, 2013 (UTC)
 * 6) * The double bracket of the infobox needs moved up.
 * 7) **Moved. Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:12, May 21, 2013 (UTC)
 * 8) * Please check your spelling in the Bts.
 * 9) **Think I've fixed it now. Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:12, May 21, 2013 (UTC)
 * 10) *Nice article. - Princess   GLG  12:48, May 20, 2013 (UTC)
 * 11) * One more thing. I believe you need to use &hellip; at the end of the first line of the quote. (View this in source mode to see what I'm saying.) - Princess   GLG  22:21, May 21, 2013 (UTC)
 * 12) **Changed. Thanks for reviewing! Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:04, May 22, 2013 (UTC)
 * 13) I am fairly certain that you need a comma after "deception" and before "which" in the BTS. Fe Nite (talk) 01:51, May 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * 14) *Added. Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:36, May 26, 2013 (UTC)

Comments
 * I'm not entirely sure how to treat the singular/plural problem and have put in the best solution I can think of however if I've done it wrong and need to change the article entirely to an individual I can. Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:21, May 19, 2013 (UTC)

Bombing of Fountain Palace

 * Nominated by: - Princess   GLG  22:58, May 19, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: WP:N, WP:MD

(2 ECs/1 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 22:42, May 20, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:12, May 25, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  20:21, May 25, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) 501st
 * 2) * 201 words. Needs an intro, or the loss of two words.
 * 3) **Cut out a couple words.
 * 4) * Could we get an article for the captured bomber? 501st  dogma ( talk ) 15:20, May 20, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) **Created. - Princess   GLG  17:37, May 20, 2013 (UTC)
 * 6) * Do you know which encyclopedia entry it was posted in? If so, the source should be presented like this here in the Sources section, with the volume entry and such. If you don't have the book, you can request the entry here. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 19:46, May 20, 2013 (UTC)
 * 7) **I do know what entry it is, however, because it is in the SWE not the CSWE I thought it did not need to be done like that? In any case, I did add the page number. - Princess   GLG  20:04, May 20, 2013 (UTC)
 * 8) ***I cant seem to find examples of it done that way either, so I'll strike this. You can remove the page numbers if you want. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 22:42, May 20, 2013 (UTC)
 * 9) Ayrehead
 * 10) * Could you add that the Jedi were moved to the private island as one of the outcomes in the infobox.
 * 11) **Like that?
 * 12) * Could you remove the page number in the sources? Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:11, May 22, 2013 (UTC)
 * 13) **Done. Thanks for the review. - Princess   GLG  12:24, May 22, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Unidentified bomb conspirator

 * Nominated by: - Princess   GLG  18:36, May 20, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: WP:N

(2 ECs/1 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:27, May 21, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 23:01, May 21, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  19:59, May 25, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) 501st
 * 2) * How about a conjecture tag?
 * 3) **Added. I always seem to be forgetting those.
 * 4) * Alphabetize categories. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 20:21, May 21, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) **Done. - Princess   GLG  20:25, May 21, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Ton E'rau

 * Nominated by: &mdash; Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:06, May 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: WP:VG

(2 ECs/2 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 11:07, May 25, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) -  Princess   GLG  12:11, May 25, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  22:40, May 26, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:22, May 28, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) 501st
 * 2) * Check the quote's spelling and punctuation. Either that "but" is supposed to capitalized, or the period before that is a comma.
 * 3) **Good catch.
 * 4) * Could you give some context on TK-934? Is he also a stormtrooper? 501st  dogma ( talk ) 20:25, May 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) **Taken care of.&mdash; Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 23:50, May 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * 6) Exiled Jedi
 * 7) * I think that you should mention that E'rau kept the information from the Baron in the article. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:07, May 25, 2013 (UTC)
 * 8) **Added. Thanks for the review.&mdash; Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:07, May 26, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

TK-934

 * Nominated by: &mdash; Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:21, May 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: WP:VG

(2 ECs/3 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1) TK-934, why aren't you at your post? Corellian Premier Jedi symbol.svg Force will be with you always 17:55, May 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 11:07, May 25, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) -  Princess   GLG  12:11, May 25, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  16:05, May 25, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:09, May 26, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) There are various sources that confirm all stormtroopers during the GCW were Human. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 19:47, May 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) *Added. Thanks for the review.&mdash; Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 23:53, May 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) 501st
 * 4) * Could we get an article for the Eastern Arch Platoon?
 * 5) **Done.
 * 6) * In the second sentence, kill one of the certains. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 20:27, May 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * 7) **And done.&mdash; Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 23:50, May 24, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Spiced Mynock Wing

 * Nominated by: &mdash; Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:30, May 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: WP:VG

(2 ECs/2 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1) Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:18, May 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 20:28, May 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) -  Princess   GLG  12:11, May 25, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  16:03, May 25, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Unidentified enlisted trooper (Spiced Mynock Wings)

 * Nominated by: &mdash; Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:42, May 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: And you thought you'd been rid of me. WP:VG

(2 ECs/2 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1) Ayrehead02 (talk) 17:54, May 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 21:18, May 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) -  Princess   GLG  12:11, May 25, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  16:01, May 25, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Ayrehead
 * 2) * Could you mention the fact he was enlisted in the Empire somewhere in the body?
 * 3) **Done.
 * 4) * Can the stormtrooper corps also be mentioned or is that speculation? Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:17, May 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) **IMO, there isn't really a need to since I already stated that he was a stormtrooper.&mdash; Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 16:20, May 24, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Grain maggot

 * Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 17:32, May 26, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Some tasty Hutt food

(2 ECs/1 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  19:27, May 26, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) As long as the objections below are answered.  501st  dogma ( talk ) 21:13, May 26, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) -  Princess   GLG  12:16, May 27, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Under distinctions in the infobox, could you perhaps add edible or edible to Hutts? -  Princess   GLG  20:32, May 26, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) *Added. Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:10, May 27, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Unidentified Tatooinian alphabet

 * Nominated by: LelalMekha (talk) 22:01, May 27, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: A very minor contribution to the Hutt barn burner

(2 ECs/2 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  00:39, May 28, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) -  Princess   GLG  00:41, May 28, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 11:10, May 28, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:33, May 30, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) The categories need alphabetized. -  Princess   GLG  22:38, May 27, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) *Fixed. --LelalMekha (talk) 22:41, May 27, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) Couldn't the language infobox be used for this? Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:21, May 28, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) *Actually, I don't really understand why some writing system articles use the language infobox. These are different things. I once advocated for the creation of a "Writing system infobox," but I don't have the technical acumen to make it myself. --LelalMekha (talk) 11:25, May 28, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) **Seems fair to me and I feel a writing system infobox would be a great idea although I to lack the means to make one

Comments

Adah Meborman

 * Nominated by: &mdash; Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 13:27, May 30, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: WP:VG

(2 ECs/3 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  14:08, May 30, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 20:55, May 30, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) -  Princess   GLG  17:07, May 31, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4)  Corellian Premier Jedi symbol.svg Force will be with you always 22:22, May 31, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:26, June 1, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Unidentified Neimoidian (drinking hole)

 * Nominated by: &mdash; Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 13:39, May 30, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: WP:VG

(2 ECs/2 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1) Ayrehead02 (talk) 17:12, May 30, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 20:56, May 30, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  14:22, May 31, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) -  Princess   GLG  01:00, June 1, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Ayrehead
 * 2) * Can we have an article for the drinking hole? Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:54, May 30, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) **I would be the first one to want to include obscure articles. I love obscure, random articles. Most of my status articles are one-source and are only mentioned most briefly. However, I really don't think we need one for this. For all we know, it could be a cantina. It could be a restaurant, it could be a water fountain, it could be someone's back room where they're hiding from the Stormtroopers. Who knows? I really don't think we have enough info to warrant an article.&mdash; Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:21, May 30, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) ***I suppose, I'm not really fussed about article like this but I was just going on what I'd seen in previous nominations. I'm fine with it not being and article but I don't know if everyone will agree. Ayrehead02 (talk) 17:12, May 30, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) * Does it actually state anywhere that the Neimoidian met with the smuggler during the reign of the Galactic Empire? Otherwise its possible they met during the rule of the Republic and so the dates need to be removed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:56, May 30, 2013 (UTC)
 * 6) **It doesn't specifically, but I think we're safe to assume so. The Empire was the one conducting the investigation, so it would seem that they had their conversation during its reign. Also, the smuggler states that "Called Tarko-se, now, Empire-run, but not always." To me, anyway, that would seem to say that the Empire is currently around.&mdash; Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:21, May 30, 2013 (UTC)
 * 7) ***Ah fair enough. Ayrehead02 (talk) 17:12, May 30, 2013 (UTC)
 * 8) Exiled Jedi
 * 9) * Could you add the quote from Meborman's article? -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  23:41, May 30, 2013 (UTC)
 * 10) **Added. Thanks for the review.&mdash; Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 13:39, May 31, 2013 (UTC)
 * 11) Couldn't holo log be at least linked to hologram? (I'm not really sure, but it seems like it should be linked to something.) -  Princess   GLG  21:10, May 31, 2013 (UTC)
 * 12) *Linked. Thanks for the review.&mdash; Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:47, May 31, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Zoochberry dumpling

 * Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:52, May 30, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Some messy Hutt food for the burner

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Support
 * 1) -  Princess   GLG  19:05, May 30, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  04:15, May 31, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 20:42, May 31, 2013 (UTC)

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 * You need to add Hutts to the edible section of the infobox. - Princess   GLG  15:37, May 30, 2013 (UTC)
 * Added it in. Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:22, May 30, 2013 (UTC)

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Medd Valii

 * Nominated by: &mdash; Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 13:54, May 30, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: WP:VG

(2 ECs/2 Users/4 Total)
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 * 1)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  04:24, May 31, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 20:43, May 31, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) -  Princess   GLG  02:20, June 1, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:24, June 1, 2013 (UTC)

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Thunder Wraith

 * Nominated by: - Princess   GLG  15:12, May 30, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: WP:N

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 * 1) I won't hold it as an objection, but is "Express" italicized in the book? If so, it should be in the quote, too. If not, it might be a good idea to slap a [sic] in the quote.&mdash; Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:56, May 31, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) *It's not, so I added a [sic]. - Princess   GLG  17:02, May 31, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 20:46, May 31, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) <- Omicron (Leave a message at the BEEP! ) 22:57, May 31, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  03:00, June 1, 2013 (UTC)
 * 6) Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:23, June 1, 2013 (UTC)

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 * I'm not sure if I have the infobox filled in correctly. - Princess   GLG  15:12, May 30, 2013 (UTC)

Express-class ambassadorial shuttle

 * Nominated by: - Princess   GLG  16:21, May 30, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: WP:N

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 * 1) &mdash; Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:48, May 31, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) <- Omicron (Leave a message at the BEEP! ) 22:58, May 31, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:17, June 1, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  15:30, June 3, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Context for Yavin? 501st  dogma ( talk ) 20:48, May 31, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) *Added. - Princess   GLG  00:53, June 1, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) Exiled Jedi
 * 4) * You need to link to ambassador somewhere in the body of the article. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  04:47, June 3, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) **Done. - Princess   GLG  14:19, June 3, 2013 (UTC)

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Enhancement jewel

 * Nominated by: - Princess   GLG  21:13, May 30, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

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 * 1) &mdash; Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:45, May 31, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) Good work.  501st  dogma ( talk ) 20:49, May 31, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:15, June 1, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  04:50, June 3, 2013 (UTC)

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High-resolution projection system

 * Nominated by: - Princess   GLG  21:13, May 30, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

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Support
 * 1) &mdash; Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:44, May 31, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 20:50, May 31, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:15, June 1, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  04:53, June 3, 2013 (UTC)

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Eastgate

 * Nominated by:  IFYLOFD  ( Enter the Floydome ) 01:45, May 31, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: More glorious crap.

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Support
 * 1) Nice glorious crap.&mdash; Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 13:35, May 31, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) Super glorious crap.  501st  dogma ( talk ) 20:53, May 31, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) -  Princess   GLG  02:24, June 1, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:14, June 1, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  13:50, June 3, 2013 (UTC)

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Shell flute

 * Nominated by: - Princess   GLG  14:25, May 31, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

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Support
 * 1) There needs to be a space between the " /> in the ref notes (like so,  ). Good article, nonetheless.&mdash; Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:38, May 31, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:13, June 1, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 22:09, June 2, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  13:56, June 3, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) First sentence: could you kill one of the "whichs"?  501st  dogma ( talk ) 20:55, May 31, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) *Done. - Princess   GLG  21:14, May 31, 2013 (UTC)

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Mairan language

 * Nominated by: - Princess   GLG  14:25, May 31, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

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 * 1) Keep up the good work.&mdash; Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:40, May 31, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) Agreed.  501st  dogma ( talk ) 20:56, May 31, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:12, June 1, 2013 (UTC)

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Imperial crans

 * Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:21, June 1, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:An article I needed to create for Ubuuga caviar.

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Support
 * 1) -  Princess   GLG  14:23, June 3, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 20:08, June 3, 2013 (UTC)

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 * Since you say that it was in use during the reign of the New Republic, I would suggest you add the Eras template. - Princess   GLG  22:59, June 1, 2013 (UTC)
 * Woops forgot that was separate to the info box. Ayrehead02 (talk) 23:08, June 1, 2013 (UTC)
 * 1) 501st
 * 2) * First sentence uses "use" twice. Could you change that up? 501st  dogma ( talk ) 13:02, June 2, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) **Changed the first one. Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:33, June 2, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Now you have two "which's"... I know that's picky, but could you take one out? 501st  dogma ( talk ) 22:08, June 2, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) ****No it's a perfectly fair objection I replaced one with an and. Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:06, June 3, 2013 (UTC)

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 * I searched in vain for a units of measurement infobox but couldn't find one, however if one exists which I've missed pleased show me where to find it. I guess you could also make the argument this might not be a unit of measurement but a type of container however unit of measurement better covered both possibilities so thats what I've put it as. Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:21, June 1, 2013 (UTC)

Ubuuga caviar

 * Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:22, June 1, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:A lavish Hutt dish for the burner

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Support
 * 1) -  Princess   GLG  23:06, June 1, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) Loved this comic.  501st  dogma ( talk ) 13:55, June 2, 2013 (UTC)

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Slimps' eyes

 * Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:58, June 1, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Another meal for the Hutt banquet

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Support
 * 1)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 13:56, June 2, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) -  Princess   GLG  16:03, June 3, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Princess
 * 2) * I don't think you should link his in the attribution of the quote when you could link to it in the article. - Princess   GLG  14:29, June 3, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) **Fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:09, June 3, 2013 (UTC)

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 * I don't know why I bother to ask, as you've already done so many species and such that aren't capitalized the way I think they should be, but just to be sure: Slimps' isn't capitalized in the comic? - Princess   GLG  23:09, June 1, 2013 (UTC)
 * Actually in the comic all letters are capitalized so I don't really know what the official capitalisation is. I can capitalize it if you'd prefer. Ayrehead02 (talk) 23:20, June 1, 2013 (UTC)
 * Ah, in that case, I suppose it's a matter of personal preference. It sound like a proper noun to me, but whatever you decide to do... - Princess   GLG  14:29, June 3, 2013 (UTC)
 * I'll capitalise it since you made the effort to ask :P Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:09, June 3, 2013 (UTC)

Chuba stew

 * Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 22:43, June 1, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:One more Hutt meal

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Support
 * 1) Good work.  501st  dogma ( talk ) 16:17, June 2, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) -  Princess   GLG  17:16, June 3, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) '''Exiled Jedi
 * 2) *If you haven't already, please check to make sure that the game's strategy guide does not mention the stew.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  22:12, June 2, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) **Ah I hadn't considered it might be in there since it was such an minor mention in the game. I don't actually have access to the guide but I seem to remember that it was you who got the Guineos to status so do you have access? If you do could I ask you the favour of looking it up for me? Sorry for the inconvenience. Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:19, June 3, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) ***I don't have the guide, I got the information for the Guineo article from SavageBob.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  15:34, June 3, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) ****Thanks I'll message him. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:38, June 5, 2013 (UTC)

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Unidentified chef (Jabba)

 * Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 22:43, June 1, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:And now a chef who might of cooked the food I've nom'd!

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Support
 * 1)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 22:03, June 2, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) -  Princess   GLG  19:02, June 3, 2013 (UTC)

Object Comments
 * 1) An unidentified gender cat would be nice, and an individuals of unidentified species one.  501st  dogma ( talk ) 16:20, June 2, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) *My bad added. Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:32, June 2, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) Exiled Jedi
 * 4) *If you haven't already, please check to make sure that the game's strategy guide does not mention the chef.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  22:10, June 2, 2013 (UTC)

Highport Stevedore Guild

 * Nominated by:  IFYLOFD  ( Enter the Floydome ) 03:38, June 2, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: In honor of season 2 of The Wire.

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Support
 * 1) Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:41, June 2, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) -  Princess   GLG  12:25, June 4, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 12:32, June 4, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) 501st
 * 2) * Mention Upper city in the body
 * 3) **Done.
 * 4) * Context on Coruscant?
 * 5) **Done.
 * 6) * Kill that table of contents!
 * 7) **Done.
 * 8) * What's a work overflow? 501st  dogma ( talk ) 22:05, June 2, 2013 (UTC)
 * 9) **They don't say.  IFYLOFD  ( Enter the Floydome ) 23:04, June 3, 2013 (UTC)

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Frona Zeffla

 * Nominated by: Supreme Emperor (talk) 03:53, June 2, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Been a bit since I nominated something, so I feel like i'm forgetting to do something :P

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Support
 * 1) Your references don't have page or chapter numbers but I don't think thats required so otherwise no problems I can see. Good work! Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:06, June 2, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 00:00, June 3, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) As long as you figure out what your doing with the era... - Princess   GLG  12:28, June 4, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) 501st
 * 2) * Context on Coruscant!
 * 3) **Knew I forgot something here :P Done. Supreme Emperor (talk) 23:59, June 2, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) *That's all... 501st  dogma ( talk ) 22:07, June 2, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) Exiled Jedi
 * 6) *I noticed that you have a New Republic era tag, but do not mention the New Republic era in the infobox. Can it be determined when she worked in the palace?-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  13:59, June 3, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nope, I removed the tag, is there one I should put in it's place, or should it stay blank? Supreme Emperor (talk) 03:11, June 5, 2013 (UTC)

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