Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Skine sector


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Skine sector

 * Nominated by: --Eyrezer 09:13, 4 May 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Not quite so funny

(3 ACs/3 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1) My objections were the same as CC's, and it was caught in an edit conflict. I'll cast my vote assuming those objections are addressed. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi beacon ) 22:00, 4 May 2009 (UTC)
 * 2)  CC7567  (talk) 04:19, 5 May 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 06:18, 7 May 2009 (UTC)
 * 4)  Graestan ( Talk ) 18:33, 10 May 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) Good read, Eyrezer. Cylka  -talk- 06:28, 14 May 2009 (UTC)
 * 6)  Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 10:16, 14 May 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Attack of the Clone
 * 2) * First sentence: it sounds strange and choppy mentioning where it was without mentioning what it was in the same sentence. Please change if possible.
 * 3) * "carrying aboard a renowned Balved Sculpture also known as the Veil of Skynara": so was it known as a "renowned sculpture" and by its name? Sounds strange; please check.
 * 4) *Looks fine otherwise.  CC7567  (talk) 21:56, 4 May 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) **Should both be fixed. Also known was meant to refer to the fact the sculpture and ship shared the same name. Hopefully fixed. Cheers for the review. --Eyrezer 03:00, 5 May 2009 (UTC)
 * 6) ***Ah, didn't notice they had the same name.  CC7567  (talk) 04:19, 5 May 2009 (UTC)

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