User talk:Master Jonathan

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 * (Please note that I am often slow in updating this list when I finish a book, so if you have an article from one of these sources, feel free to ask.)

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Reminder
Reminder about copy-editing the Hero of Tython as you requested, and thanks for the help. Cade  Calrayn   05:03, November 23, 2012 (UTC)


 * Reminder to self to start on this tomorrow.  Advanced Jedi Training Droid 6  ( Talk to my master ) 05:19, November 24, 2012 (UTC)


 * Started with the intro tonight. I started a subsection in the Comments section of the nomination page for notes; please keep an eye on that for questions (like the one there now). Any further discussion of this can be done there. &mdash;MJ&mdash; Council Chambers 05:09, November 25, 2012 (UTC)

Ando (star) in Insider 132
Hi Master Jonathan! Could you please tell me if in the Blaster section of Star Wars Insider 132 there is a picture of Ando Prime's sun? Thanks!  Imperators II (Talk) 15:19, November 23, 2012 (UTC)
 * Oh, while I'm on the subject of Ando (star), is there any info on it (info, pictures, anything) in the section of The Essential Reader's Companion concerning the NJO novel Edge of Victory I: Conquest? Thanks again!  Imperators II (Talk) 15:53, November 23, 2012 (UTC)


 * Negative on the ERC. On Insider, there is a copy of a Dawn of the Jedi comic page depicting a large object (structure? ship?) shaped like a pyramid and a number of individuals in hooded robes seen from the back walking toward it and into it, with the narration, "They heard the call in their hearts, in their minds. Not with word, yet as a voice. Heard in stillness when all was in balance. An invitation." There is a sun in the background next to the "They heard the call in their hearts, in their minds." narration box, but no context is given to identify the planet or the sun. That's all I can tell you. &mdash;MJ&mdash; Comlink 05:10, November 24, 2012 (UTC)


 * Thanks for the help! In the comic itself, the previous page identifies the scene as the Order of Dai Bendu monks entering the Tho Yor starship on the planet Ando Prime; I just needed to confirm if that specific page was in the Blaster. Again, many thanks!  Imperators II (Talk) 08:47, November 24, 2012 (UTC)

Amazon.com
Can you add an Amazon link to Star Wars: The Clone Wars: Ahsoka In Action!208.116.46.88 03:24, November 24, 2012 (UTC)


 * Amazon.com is whitelisted, so you should be able to add the link yourself. :) &mdash;MJ&mdash; Training Room 04:51, November 24, 2012 (UTC)


 * Its not working!!!


 * First off, the filter you're triggering isn't set up to disallow the edit, only issue a warning which can be bypassed by clicking "Save page" again. Second, you can avoid triggering the filter altogether by removing  and everything after it from the URL. That stuff isn't needed, as the resulting truncated URL will still take you to the same page, so it only serves to clutter up the edit box, and the   is specifically what's triggering the filter. &mdash;MJ&mdash; Holocomm 01:52, November 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re: Leona Tavira
The page didn't have you reviewing it. :P  Trak Nar  Ramble on 05:44, December 5, 2012 (UTC)


 * LOL! :P &mdash;MJ&mdash;</b> Jedi Council Chambers</b> 21:34, December 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re:
HUZZAH. And thank you. :D  CC7567  (talk) 05:41, December 8, 2012 (UTC)

No little questions
Hey there, MJ. Did you read Jedi Apprentice: The Hidden Past in its entirely for the Padawan birthday ritual article? Do you remember anything to answer this anon's question? NaruHina Talk  21:09, December 8, 2012 (UTC)


 * I've read every Jedi Apprentice book in their entirety multiple times. :P That question was one that I could answer without even looking at the book (but I still checked it anyway to be sure). The sourcing has been adjusted and a couple of Fact tags have been added. &mdash;MJ&mdash;</b> War Room</b> 02:00, December 9, 2012 (UTC)


 * Well okay then. :D Glad we could sort that out. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 02:05, December 9, 2012 (UTC)

re: removing content
sorry about that, i was just removing content i thought innapropriate for this wiki. I like editing the rancor page, rancors are epic -Ambrose4803


 * If you believe that a page should not exist, the proper way to pursue removal is through the trash compactor. However, you should first be aware that we cover all official material, no matter how silly, and also that Wookieepedia is not censored. &mdash;MJ&mdash;</b> Comlink</b> 21:29, December 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re: Moving Pages
Hi, I have been made aware that the talk pages must be moved with pages, however when I attempted to move the page a bot notified me that this action had been identified as vandalism. With no other way of moving the page I decided to create the new page. Sorry. Rokkur Shen (talk) 03:40, December 12, 2012 (UTC)


 * Ah, I see. We have a filter to prevent new users from moving pages until their account is four days old and has 50 edits. However, the correct response to being unable to move a page is never to cut and paste it. If you can't move the page yourself, then ask someone who can to do it for you, because cut-and-paste moves must be repaired. (By the way, I'm going to create a new warning for that filter that better explains the issue and why one shouldn't cut and paste.) &mdash;MJ&mdash;</b> War Room</b> 05:34, December 12, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks
Thanks for the info about timestamps, wasn't sure about that. Supreme Emperor (talk) 22:32, December 15, 2012 (UTC)

Image captions
As I browse through Wookieepedia and read the captions on images, I see that they either have a punctuation or they don't; what is the official rule/policy on these image captions: is it preferred they have a punctuation or that they don't? <font style="color:darkslategrey;">Vanoden (<font style="color:darkslategrey;">talk ) 02:22, December 16, 2012 (UTC)


 * Image captions should end with a period if and only if the caption is a complete sentence. If the caption is not a complete sentence, then no period should be used. Let me know if you have any other questions. &mdash;MJ&mdash;</b> Jedi Council Chambers</b> 02:31, December 16, 2012 (UTC)

Star Wars: Day-At-A-Time Calendar 2013
Just thought I'd let you know why I removed the fact tag. While there isn't a source to provide for new info in the calendar if you check this article and this article you'll see I added new info sourced to the calendar. DarthRevan1173 (Long live Lord Revan) 16:17, December 19, 2012 (UTC)


 * OK, so it's self-sourcing. Thanks for the clarification. &mdash;MJ&mdash;</b> Holocomm</b> 19:01, December 19, 2012 (UTC)
 * Your welcome. DarthRevan1173 RevanTOR001.jpg (Long live Lord Revan) 19:03, December 19, 2012 (UTC)

Tol Cressa
Hey Jon, been a while, how are ya? Could you please give Tol Cressa a copy-edit and review? Thanks in advance.&mdash; 18:54, December 19, 2012 (UTC)


 * Done. Objections:
 * The intro ends with a comma instead of a period. Is this a typo or did you forget to finish it?
 * It was supposed to be a period.
 * I inserted a Fact tag in the first sentence of the second paragraph of the bio. KotOR 49 doesn't support that.
 * I fixed that, an oversight on my part.
 * The statement that he was "still in office by the end of the Dark Wars" is intro-exclusive.
 * I checked this statement once more, and it wasn't backed by anything. Omitted.
 * 415 words pending the objections. Let me know if you have any questions. &mdash;MJ&mdash;</b> Comlink</b> 19:26, December 19, 2012 (UTC)
 * Thanks for your help, Jon.&mdash; 19:31, December 19, 2012 (UTC)
 * Looks good to go now. &mdash;MJ&mdash;</b> Holocomm</b> 19:33, December 19, 2012 (UTC)

Unidentified clone trooper (Post 473)
Hey Jon, could you please give Unidentified clone trooper (Post 473) a copy-edit and review? Thanks in advance.&mdash; 22:46, December 20, 2012 (UTC)


 * Done. Objections:
 * Avoid linking in the bolded text at the start of the intro. If that is the first mention of something, then it should be linked on the next mention.
 * "The clone was tasked with destroying a bridge which would enable a Separatist droid convoy to cross over and conquer a mining colony.": This makes it sound like the clone was aiding the Separatists in conquering the colony. Reword it to make it clearer that he's hindering the Separatists.
 * The Dutch version of the article appears to have a name for the clone. Check the comic closely to see if "22K" could possibly be interpreted as a name; failing that, check with (who can speak Dutch) to see what the Dutch article says and if it might be wrong.
 * You're missing the BTS.
 * That's all from me. <b style="color:navy; text-decoration:underline; font-family:serif;">&mdash;MJ&mdash;</b> <b style="color:red; font-variant:small-caps;">Jedi Council Chambers</b> 02:07, December 21, 2012 (UTC)

Pers'lya
Could you also give a pre-nom review and copy-edit to Pers'lya? Thanks in advance.&mdash; 01:29, December 21, 2012 (UTC)