Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Grimorg


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Grimorg

 * Nominated by:  IFYLOFD  ( Floyd's crib ) 00:36, April 12, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Just a bit too short for FA standards.

(4 ACs/4 Users/8 Total)
Support
 * 1) -- 1358  (Talk) 05:01, April 12, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) I wonder what you'll do once all these guys are done... --Skippy Farlstendoiro 06:18, April 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) Great job.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 17:39, April 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) —Tommy  9281 21:07, April 26, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) Imperialles 10:31, April 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * 6)  Grunny  ( talk ) 00:30, April 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * 7)  CC7567  (talk) 20:46, April 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * 8) Toprawa and Ralltiir 21:14, April 30, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Lee doesn't know this era
 * 2) * Place of death is missing in the infobox.
 * 3) **Addressed.
 * 4) * Not really an objection but could you take care of the redlink ?
 * 5) **Taken care of.
 * 6) * Is it said how he was slain (Shiak, Sai cha, Sai tok) ?
 * 7) **Nope. The only evidence we have of his death in the source material is that we see his corpse lying on the ground after the fight. We don't see Nomi killing him.
 * 8) *That's all. Good work.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 17:49, April 12, 2010 (UTC)
 * 9) Farlstendoiro. Just one, and it's mostly a suggestion
 * 10) * "Stonebone initially refused, forcing Bogga to unleash his hssiss pet" Maybe "prompting Bogga"? I don't think Stonebone forced Bogga to do such a thing.Skippy Farlstendoiro 11:51, April 14, 2010 (UTC)
 * 11) **Fixed.
 * 12) Blacklist:
 * 13) * There is an article for Finhead Stonebone's organization.
 * 14) **Addressed.
 * 15) * You make the "Before the battle of Yavin" distinction in the bio, but not the intro. Please choose to do one or the other.
 * 16) **Addressed.
 * 17) * You identify Finhead Stonebone as Bogga's enemy, but I don't remember the source material calling him that.
 * 18) **Eh, addressed.
 * 19) *That's all, not bad. Please be mindful of over/underlinking. —Tommy 9281 00:02, April 24, 2010 (UTC)
 * 20) Toprawa:
 * 21) * Same objection I've left on two of your other noms now. The CSWE is no more important than any other source that devotes an entry to the character, such as SWE or AGSWU. If these items have an entry for him, you might as well mention them in the BTS along with CSWE. Toprawa and Ralltiir 03:06, April 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * 22) **Addressed.  IFYLOFD  ( Floyd's crib ) 16:50, April 29, 2010 (UTC)

Comments


 * Not an objection, but in the appearances section you have "A Guide to the Star Wars Universe (Third Edition)". Shouldn't it be something like "A Guide to the Star Wars Universe, Third Edition"? -- 1358  (Talk) 05:01, April 12, 2010 (UTC)
 * Yes, it should be. And it's something minor enough that you're encouraged to fix it when you see it in the process of your review. "Sofixit," as the Inqs like to call it. Toprawa and Ralltiir 05:47, April 12, 2010 (UTC)
 * I wasn't sure about it, so I decided to ask. And I'm aware of sofixit. -- 1358  (Talk) 13:04, April 13, 2010 (UTC)
 * Fixed now. -- 1358  (Talk) 13:06, April 13, 2010 (UTC)