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Kitchens
Hullo. Recently, I brought up a thread that asked some general SW questions, and it has come to a point where I and DarthMRN were wondering whether there should be an article on kitchen. I, personally, would like you opinion on the matter, as you've had more experience in this sort of thing. Here is the link. Just look a little above the confusing numerical list. Thank you for your time. PS. Thank you very much for the vote on the WOTM page, I appreciate it. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  01:40, 11 June 2007 (UTC)

RE: Atton Rand
Yes, I do plan to. I've been busy lately; tests and stuff. I promise I'll address them today. Sorry about the delay... - Solus (Bird of Prey)  15:09, 12 June 2007 (UTC)
 * Done. Sorry it took so long, could you check and see if the issues have been addressed? I did not un-bullet-point the 'Cut content' section, because I wasn't sure if that would work well in prose. However, if you want it prose, I'll do it. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  15:48, 12 June 2007 (UTC)
 * Thanks. And thank you for giving me the motivation to do them. I am a terrible procrastinator. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  13:19, 13 June 2007 (UTC)

Do the Picard
Thanks for the compliments on the interview. :-) It was quite a bit of fun to do. jSarek 20:13, 12 June 2007 (UTC)
 * That video is already in my favorites. ;-) jSarek 09:37, 13 June 2007 (UTC)

Per the first part

 * Per the first part of your userpage, I'm requesting you to take a look at Ms. Ming (not too close, Luke might get jealous if he's still pre-marriage :-P) and see if the Murder in Slushtime section now meets your approval. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 21:16, 12 June 2007 (UTC)
 * I will do. --Eyrezer 07:04, 13 June 2007 (UTC)
 * I noticed the objection is still outstanding. Does it still need more work? Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 15:30, 15 June 2007 (UTC)
 * :) I have an exam on Monday so I've been holding back on the Wookieepedia. Size wise, a definite improvement. --Eyrezer 02:49, 16 June 2007 (UTC)

Species
That's a great improvement to the article. Sorry I didn't get back to you earlier.

My only quibble might be with the section on species articles: I wonder if it might be better as an OOU portion of the article. Also, not every article has those exact sections in the same format and order, though maybe they should...or, at least, more of them should. &mdash;Silly Dan (talk) 11:35, 13 June 2007 (UTC)

Fact File index
I just noticed that the index did not make on the Idrive page, but I'll see what I can do in adding that list anyway. I hope I'm able to translate everything. --Jedimca0 (Do or Do Not, There is No Try) 07:30, 16 June 2007 (UTC)

Nominations
Did the Jedi Order page not pass the Inq, cause, if not, please don't remove nominated articles. Thanks. Jediknight19bby 19:59, 18 June 2007 (UTC)

Ephant Mon
is there anything else you can think of for Ephant Mon's article to make it FA. Thanks, AdmirableAckbar 19:15, 21 June 2007 (UTC)
 * just wondering why you removed the storytelling section from Ephant Mon. I know it's not particularly relevant but it did happen, and it helps lengthen the article. I don't really care that much, but I'm just wondering why you removed it. thanks, AdmirableAckbar 12:35, 24 June 2007 (UTC)
 * I removed the heading of both the storytelling section and Valarian's offer section and merged them into the "Jabba's head of security". This is because both of them were basically one paragraph and so did not warrant their own section. The actual text and description of the events I left in (I can't tell from your comment whether you realised that). As such, the depiction of events is still there. Using section headers shouldn't be used just to lengthen articles. --Eyrezer 02:09, 25 June 2007 (UTC)
 * sorry, i hadn't realised you had just put it under the one section. Thanks for the advice with the referencing, i'll try and get around to fixing it later. AdmirableAckbar 09:48, 27 June 2007 (UTC)

Gotal article expanded
I expanded the lead for the Gotal article: care to comment? Cheers, &mdash;Silly Dan (talk) 02:18, 24 June 2007 (UTC)
 * Nice work on expanding both the intro and other sections. I'll look through it all shortly. --Eyrezer 02:17, 25 June 2007 (UTC)

Re: 501st
Thanks for the advice. No, I haven't tried that. I'll ask a few people now. Once again, thanks Eyrezer. Chack Jadson 12:54, 1 July 2007 (UTC)

referncing
i think i managed to fix the faulty references on hte Ephant Mon page. could you look over them and make sure they're okay? Thanks, AdmirableAckbar 15:37, 1 July 2007 (UTC)

Vengeance (Jerec's Super Star Destroyer).
Uh, could you explain why you put the "PAGENAME" template in place of "Vengeance" in the "Title" template? All that does is put "(Jerec's Super Star Destroyer)" in italics as well, and that extra part isn't included in the name of the ship. &mdash;Grand Admiral J. Nebulax (Imperial Holovision) 01:15, 6 July 2007 (UTC)

Gotals
Since you mentioned it, I removed the "Famous Gotals" section from the Gotal article, moving some of the information to the previous sections. Did I address your objection? Cheers, &mdash;Silly Dan (talk) 23:34, 12 July 2007 (UTC)

Jedi Outcast (12 ABY)
Hello. You recently reverted a number of edits to articles related to the game Jedi Knight: Jedi Outcast. (Third Mission to Nar Shaddaa, Battle of Cloud City, Mission to Cairn Installation, and Second Battle of the Jedi Praxeum) The game's opening crawl clearly states "Eight years have passed since the Empire was defeated at the BATTLE OF ENDOR." Since the Battle of Endor took place in 4 ABY... I guess I'm curious as to your reasoning behind the reverts. Is there an important bit of info that I missed regarding the game's timeline?

There's a bit of a discussion on Jedi Outcast's talk page. Your input would be appreciated. -- SM-716 talk? 06:54, 13 July 2007 (UTC)

Linky
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FA noms
Hello Eyrezer. If you have time could you check out Darth Bane and Second Battle of Coruscant (Clone Wars)? Both are nominated for FA in an attempt to restore their FA status. Thanks. Chack Jadson 10:40, 19 July 2007 (UTC)

Image

 * You stated that an earlier version of this is non-canon. Is the current revision non-canon? If not, I'd like to add it to Face Loran. Thanks.  Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 21:02, 20 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Ah, do you have a link to my earlier comments? If the pic is exactly the same, then it has probably still not been published. I've asked Joe on the tfn boards. --Eyrezer 02:01, 23 July 2007 (UTC)
 * All I have is the discussion on that image's talk page. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 14:22, 23 July 2007 (UTC)
 * That image is now a-ok. Was in the 20 Most Memorable Moments of the Expanded Universe article. --Eyrezer 23:11, 23 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Ok, thanks. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 14:45, 25 July 2007 (UTC)

Request

 * You're a good user. How'd you like me to nominate you for admin? [[Image:The Death of Ki-Adi-Mundi.jpg|40px]]  Jediknight19bby  ( Jedi High Council Chambers! ) 01:00, 21 July 2007 (UTC)
 * No. You haven't been here 6 months, a requirement for adminship. --Eyrezer 03:40, 22 July 2007 (UTC)
 * I want YOU to become an admin. [[Image:The Death of Ki-Adi-Mundi.jpg|40px]]  Jediknight19bby  ( Jedi High Council Chambers! ) 15:08, 2 August 2007 (UTC)

Winter Celchu FA
I believe I've addressed the final objection--about the Allegiance reference. I still have the final third of the book to go (I'm probably going to get in bed and finish it now), but I don't think that she'll be mentioned again.  - breathesgelatin Talk 22:12, 22 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Cool. I'll have a look. --Eyrezer 01:55, 23 July 2007 (UTC)

RE: Anzati
Thanks. I'll do that. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  14:11, 25 July 2007 (UTC)
 * I just looked around on Jaymach's user page, and I couldn't find anything pertaining to Gamer 1. I must not be looking in the right place; could you help? Thank you for your time. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  15:39, 25 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Thank you very much. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  01:29, 26 July 2007 (UTC)

Inq meeting

 * Eyrezer, we are having an meeting for Inqs this weekend, and your attendance/input would be greatly appreciated. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 15:41, 25 July 2007 (UTC)

Quay
Hello there. Saw you added the Day of the Sepulchral Night appearance of Quay on its page but I couldn't find a reference (or Repulsorlift belt ) so I took it off the short story's appearances. Just wondering if you could tell me where it's mentioned in it so I can put it back in, please.  Vetinari (Appointment) 21:12, 27 July 2007 (UTC)

Diversity Alliance
Hi, good evening Eyrezer. I did quite a lot of work on the Diversity Alliance article particularly adding quotes and inserting notes and references. There is now only one rather unnecessary redlink. Do you think personally that this article qualifies to be an applicant for Good articles? I only ask you because you are a member of the Inquisitorious and will understand this. MyNz 08:26, 28 July 2007 (UTC)
 * It looks pretty good to me. I'd suggest that the intro needs to be expanded, and I'd also try and put some more pics in there (perhaps from some of the book covers). Other than that, I'd say it would definitely be GA material. --Eyrezer 08:34, 28 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Thanks for advising me. I have four of the Young Jedi Knights books and I'll be glad to help. MyNz 09:05, 28 July 2007 (UTC)

Hello
Um, you don't know me, but I left you a message on the GA Nom page under Zandor Rocker. (Couldn't tell if you were being sarcastic or not about that "I'm glad to see they got the attention they deserved" bit.)&mdash; Darthtyler Talk 00:55, 30 July 2007 (UTC)
 * No, not sarcastic at all. I think I was the one that supplied the Rocker images to the guy that uploaded them. I think they are a cool idea, even if they only appeared in one comic. If I was going to be sarcastic, I would not have said anything. :) --Eyrezer 06:04, 30 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Okay, well then, thank you for your comment. :)&mdash; Darthtyler Talk 15:53, 30 July 2007 (UTC)

Re:Danni

 * I will look at the source you provided, and I might add that "chagrin" was probably an appropriate word, considering that the Force projections of Nyax caused her to stumble in front of the Wraiths. Anyway, I changed it. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 13:59, 6 August 2007 (UTC)
 * It felt to me that that first and second parts of the sentence didn't match up. Based on what you've just said, chagrin may have been appropriate, but wasn't reflected in the first half of the sentence, ie there was no indication of her stumbling and the like. Does that make sense? I'd be happy for you to put chagrin back in, but then I think the first part would need to be adjusted. --Eyrezer 23:05, 6 August 2007 (UTC)

Bane Objection
I think your objections regarding Darth Bane have been fixed. I tried to add an expanded section on Bane's inconsistencies in different sources. If you feel it is not thorough enough (and it certainly may not be, I don't know a ton about the differences) I would certainly be open to any suggestions. Thank you.  Chack Jadson  Talk 21:36, 6 August 2007 (UTC)