Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations

 This page is for the nomination of "comprehensive articles". For a list of "comprehensive articles", see Category:Wookieepedia comprehensive articles.


 * Comprehensive article nominations history
 * Comprehensive article nominations archiving checklist

What is a "comprehensive article?"

A "comprehensive article" is an article that contains all information regarding the topic. Often, "comprehensive articles" cannot reach Featured or Good Article status due to their limited content. This process is intended to recognize articles that contain all relevant canon information, yet are still under the 250 word limit required for a Good Article. The purpose of this is twofold&mdash;firstly, to help users distinguish what is a stub, and what is merely a short article with no further relevant material to be added, and, more importantly, to highlight for the reader when they are reading something that has been judged definitely "comprehensive"&mdash;that is, a guarantee to the reader that whatever they are reading contains the sum total of all available content.

Nominations and promotions of the Comprehensive article process are overseen by a collective of users known as the "EduCorps," which is made up of the Inquisitorius, the AgriCorps, and various other experienced users who are considered qualified to adequately judge the nominated material.

Lucasfilm Ltd. and its many licensees continue to expand the Star Wars universe. Since new information might become available, it may be necessary to revoke a "comprehensive article's" status. A forum will be used to nominate articles that have fallen out-of-date. Members of the EduCorps will then post a warning template on that page, and a grace period of one week will be instituted in which the article can be improved. If there is a significant amount of new information, it is likely that once updated, the article will become eligible for Good article status, and thereby ineligible for Comprehensive article status.

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An article must&hellip;


 * 1) &hellip;be well-written and detailed.
 * 2) &hellip;be unbiased, non-point of view.
 * 3) &hellip;be sourced with all available sources and appearances.
 * 4) &hellip;follow the Manual of Style, Layout Guide, and all other policies on Wookieepedia. This is, of course, within reason. If a topic only has a very limited degree of content that cannot be divided up into the relevant article sections, it is not required that it follow the Layout Guide precisely. This is to be judged on a case-by-case basis.
 * 5) &hellip;following the review process, be stable, i.e., does not change significantly from day to day and is not the subject of ongoing edit wars. This does not apply to vandalism and protection or semi-protection as a result of vandalism.
 * 6) &hellip;not be tagged with any sort of improvement tags (i.e. more sources, expand, etc).
 * 7) &hellip;have no redlinks.
 * 8) &hellip;have all relevant canon information presented.
 * 9) &hellip;be completely referenced for all available material and sources. See Sourcing for more information. While this is not required for an article possessing a singular source, it is encouraged, as it provides both uniformity and a good infrastructure should the topic be referenced in any future materials.
 * 10) &hellip;have all quotes and images sourced.
 * 11) &hellip;provide at least one relevant quote on the article if available.
 * 12) &hellip;include a "Behind the scenes" section for in-universe articles.
 * 13) &hellip;counting the introduction, the article body, and "Behind the scenes" material, must not exceed 250 words in length (not including captions, quotes, or headers, etc). Any articles exceeding the limit should be taken to the Good article nominations page for consideration.
 * 14) &hellip;if the nominated article reaches 200 words or greater, the nominator must either provide an intro or draft an intro and provide a link to the revision in the nomination, showing that the intro does not elevate the article over 250 words. Exceptions can be made for articles wherein the majority of the text is in the "Behind the scenes" section.

How to nominate:


 * 1) First, nominate an article you find is worthy of comprehensive status, putting it at the bottom of the list below. Nominated articles must meet all thirteen requirements stated above.
 * 2) Add CAnom at the top of the article you are nominating.
 * 3) Be sure to place sign in the "Nominated by" line when the nomination is posted for voting.
 * 4) Others will object to the nomination if they disagree that the article is good enough; they will then supply reasons for doing so, and ways to improve the article in accordance with the established rules.
 * 5) Nominators and supporters will adjust the article until the objectors (with reasonable objections) are satisfied. Objectors may also make alterations&mdash;if there is any reason for contention on a given point, it should be settled in a civil manner in the nomination field itself.
 * 6) Users may not vote on their own articles.
 * 7) There is no limit to the amount of nominations a given user can submit at any given time.

How to vote:


 * 1) Before doing anything, be sure to read the article completely, keeping a sharp eye out for mistakes.
 * 2) Afterward, compare the article to the criteria listed above, and then either support or object the article's nomination.
 * 3) *If you object, please supply concrete reasons for doing so, and how it can be improved.
 * 4) As stated above, any objections will be looked upon by the nominator, supporters, and anyone willing to improve the article, and action will be taken to please the objectors. Do not strike other users' objections; it is up to the objector to review the changes and strike if they are satisfied.
 * 5) There are several ways in which an article can receive the required number of votes. Within a 48-hour period of nomination, only EduCorps votes will count towards the total, although anyone may choose to vote in that window. If two members of the EduCorps support a nomination in that window, and there are no outstanding objections, the article can be considered a "Comprehensive article" and be tagged with the template 48 hours after the initial nomination.  The talk page will also be tagged with the CA template. When the 48 hours are up, any user's votes will contribute towards the total. If one EduCorps member has voted for an article after a week, three regular votes will be required. After the 48 hour period, an article can still also pass with just two EduCorps votes.
 * 6) Once a nomination is successful, it will be placed on the Comprehensive article list. Instructions on how to archive nominations, successful or otherwise, can be found here. Anyone can archive a nomination&mdash;just make sure it has the correct number of votes, has been nominated for at least a week (or 48 hours if there are two EC votes), and that there are absolutely no outstanding objections. If you are not sure how to do this, just ask, and someone will likely be more than willing to help you. Also, if you think you can slip one past us, think again&mdash;someone is always watching you.

All nominations will be considered idle and are subject to instantaneous removal by EduCorps members if objections are not addressed, or at least not answered, after a period of 1 week.

Please remember to archive your nomination beforehand if you plan on taking it to the Good Article Nominations page.

Vendaran

 * Nominated by: Eyrezer 10:28, November 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1) -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:26, November 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2)  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 17:05, December 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Toprawa and Ralltiir 05:16, December 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) Well-done. Any thoughts on Bob's question, though? Menkooroo 05:55, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Toprawa:
 * 2) * Do we have any establishment of whether it's "Near-Human" or "near-Human"? I see this alternating constantly across the wiki, and that article seems to capitalize more than not. Toprawa and Ralltiir 01:47, December 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Unfortunately, there is no consistency across various sources. I.e.,
 * 4) ***Star Wars: The Roleplaying Game, Second Edition uses "Near-Human".
 * 5) ***Star Wars: The Roleplaying Game, Second Edition, Revised and Expanded uses "near-human".
 * 6) ***The Essential Guide to Alien Species uses "near-human".
 * 7) ***The Star Wars Customizable Card Game uses "near-human".
 * 8) ***Ultimate Alien Anthology uses "near-Human".
 * 9) ***The Complete Star Wars Encyclopedia uses "near-human".
 * 10) **I'm happy to work up a CT on this to lear Wookieepedia policy on this, in line with our policy on capitalising "Human". Do yo want to wait for that to pass first before striking? --Eyrezer 00:19, December 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) ***Very interesting. Thanks for looking into all of that. Please feel free to start a CT if you wish, but the nom probably doesn't need to wait for something so minor. I trust it can be updated if necessary per any decision we may reach. Toprawa and Ralltiir 05:16, December 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 12) Exiled Jedi
 * 13) *I would have to agree with Bob on checking the Atlas for any post-New Republic history. I just thought I would make this an objection before someone archived the nomination.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  18:19, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

Comments
 * Any post-New Republic history that can be gleaned from the Atlas? Since they're colonists, we can't assume anything about the pre-NR stuff, but for that period and later (or at least post-NR), there might be a factoid or two in the maps. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 14:49, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

Chun's Theory of Reductional Infinity

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 16:54, December 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Urgh.

(2 ECs/3 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1) Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 18:31, December 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 20:19, December 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) So...what you're telling me is Occupy Wall Street came from a Star Wars novel? NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 07:05, January 2, 2012 (UTC)
 * 4) Tinwe (comlink) 15:50, January 14, 2012 (UTC)
 * 5)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  13:20, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) "theory was still to be solved." That doesn't quite look right. Maybe reword it as "had yet to be solved" ? Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 18:17, December 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *Done.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 18:21, December 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) It seems to me that "cognitive module" should have its own article or be linked to an existing article. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  21:27, January 14, 2012 (UTC)
 * 4) *Linked and created.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 10:46, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

Plun Kil

 * Nominated by: 501st dogma 18:32, December 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

(2 ECs/4 Users/6 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 16:06, January 2, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) Nice job working through all those objections.&mdash; Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:50, January 4, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) Master Kil. Heh. Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 03:44, January 8, 2012 (UTC)
 * 4) ~ 501st Tup Tcgaotc_symbol.jpg(Communications) 23:44, January 14, 2012 (UTC)
 * 5)  Imperators II (Talk) 12:18, January 15, 2012 (UTC)
 * 6)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  13:17, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Lee's charge
 * 2) * Gender is missing in the body.
 * 3) * Maybe a little bit context on the Clone Wars.
 * 4) * The BtS should be written in past form.
 * 5) * Concept art for Master Kil was drawn by Kilian Plunkett.  Not a full sentence.
 * 6) * Please find a synonym for Kil in one instance in the bio (e.g. Besalisk Jedi Master).
 * 7) * BtS: Fourth Season of what?
 * 8) * Hair and eye color as well as his affiliation to the Republic have to be mentioned outside the infobox.
 * 9) *Good work. 19:02, December 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) Cal Jedi
 * 11) * Lee already got my objections, so please just note my copy-edit. -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 19:26, December 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * 12) * On more thing: Some mention in the body about his clothing and lightsabers would be good. -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 19:31, December 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * 13) **Done--501st dogma 16:28, January 2, 2012 (UTC)
 * 14) ***On most CAs that have passed, it is proper procedure to say something to the effect of "on at least one occasion he wore..." That way, it is not speculation in implying that he always wore that clothing. Also, I think you need to explain the clothing better, I think, rather than just saying that he wore "standard Jedi attire." You could just chop that part out probably since it is rather ambiguous anyway. Instead, you could describe his clothing some, like "On at least one occasion, he wore a tan and white shirt" or whatever it would be to fit him. See what you can do, then I'll take another look.&mdash; Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 23:39, January 2, 2012 (UTC)
 * 15) ****Ok, I've improved his clothing description, though it is all in one sentence.--501st dogma 17:00, January 3, 2012 (UTC)
 * 16) * "He was also known to use four lightsabers" - Known by whom? I think this could be better stated if written more like the clothing part. Something like "On occasion, he carried four lightsabers..."
 * 17) * "sturdy belt" - Does it say anywhere in the source that it is "sturdy?" If not, then it's speculation, and that word will have to be removed. &mdash; Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:39, January 3, 2012 (UTC)
 * 18) **Ok, I've removed sturdy and fixed the lightsaber sentence.--501st dogma 14:09, January 4, 2012 (UTC)
 * 19) Exiled Jedi
 * 20) * Please fill the "skin" field in the infobox with his skin color.
 * 21) **Done--- 501st Dogma Republic_emblem.png( Comlink ) 21:55, January 14, 2012 (UTC)
 * 22) * You also need to add this to the body of the article.
 * 23) **Completed--- 501st Dogma Republic_emblem.png( Comlink ) 21:55, January 14, 2012 (UTC)
 * 24) * Since you mentioned his shirt and pants, it seems like you should mention his sandals.
 * 25) **Added--- 501st Dogma Republic_emblem.png( Comlink ) 21:55, January 14, 2012 (UTC)
 * 26) *-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  21:42, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Comments
 * 1) Green lightsaber
 * 2) *If anyones wondering about the green lightsaber, it can only be seen here. (slide 3 on trivia)--501st dogma 21:02, December 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) *also, please do not try to get a picture of him with all of his lightsabers. This is because it has already been tryed but just caused his portrait to look squished, and still did not include all of the lightsabers in the image.--501st dogma 22:52, December 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) **I disagree -- the image in the infobox now makes him look like an amputee or something. I think you should either include the full-body image from the slide (even if it looks squished) or crop in to only his head and shoulders, like most character articles do. If you go the latter route, you could include the full concept art slide in his BTS if there's room. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 16:15, January 2, 2012 (UTC)
 * 5) ***Ok, I've created a better portrait though I do not think the full picture will fit in the BtS. Also, the same picture twice in on small article would kind of look weird, would'nt it?--501st dogma 16:25, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Conquest of Drezzi

 * Nominated by: -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 03:14, January 2, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:The new abuse filter works! :D

(1 ECs/2 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 11:12, January 3, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 23:01, January 3, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  15:28, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) NaruHina
 * 2) * Ressia needs specific context as the Queen of Drezzi. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 06:52, January 2, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) **Done.&mdash; Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 23:59, January 2, 2012 (UTC)
 * 4) Lee
 * 5) * A conquest was carried out by the Sith Empire on the planet Drezzi[1] prior to the Great Galactic War,[2] a galaxy-wide war fought between the Galactic Republic and the resurgent Sith Empire that began in the year 3,681 BBY. "A conquest was carried out" sounds meh to me. Can you change this.
 * 6) **Fixed.
 * 7) * Please tell us that the Queen and her children were spared.
 * 8) **It was already there.
 * 9) *Good work.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 11:51, January 2, 2012 (UTC)
 * 10) **Thanks for the review.&mdash; Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 23:59, January 2, 2012 (UTC)
 * 11) Exiled Jedi
 * 12) * It seems to me that you could place something in the other side of the combatants box. Something like "Unidentified opposing force (Drezzi)" would probably work. If this is okay, I think you should probably find some place for it in the body of the article. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  17:14, January 2, 2012 (UTC)
 * 13) **Yeah, I was thinking about that when I nominated it. Sounds like a good idea, so added.
 * 14) * I think that you should mention the holoprojection that the Queen gave as a gift, since it was a result of the battle. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  17:16, January 2, 2012 (UTC)
 * 15) **Added to the body. I didn't add it to the infobox since I don't think it was actually an outcome of the battle, per se.&mdash; Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 23:59, January 2, 2012 (UTC)
 * 16) Imp
 * 17) * As with your GAN, you need to provide a specific reference from TOR using the TORCite template. --Imperialles 03:48, January 3, 2012 (UTC)
 * 18) **As with the GAN, I added TEA instead.&mdash; Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:17, January 3, 2012 (UTC)
 * 19) ***As with the GAN, you missed one. :P --Imperialles 20:02, January 3, 2012 (UTC)
 * 20) Imperators II
 * 21) * Umm, why do you use the date 3,681 BBY considering it has nothing to do with the events of the novel? The article should be more precise and indicate that the conquest was carried out sometime before 3,954 BBY, the date in which Sechel told Scourge about the conquest. (Since there is no way the conquest could have happened after that date) (Same applies to your Ressa's husband GAN)  Imperators II (Talk) 18:16, January 3, 2012 (UTC)
 * 22) **Changed.&mdash; Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:33, January 3, 2012 (UTC)
 * 23) *In the note on the date, you should explain how the date 3,954 BBY is derived, since the date is not openly mentioned in the novel. And it also should be explained how do you know the conquest took place prior to 3,954 BBY (for example, because it was mentioned in the past tense or something like that).  Imperators II (Talk) 10:57, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Comments
 * 1) While it is linguistically correct, "conquest" is indeed a noun, could you state the opening sentence differently? "A conquest was carried out..." sounds wierd. I'd suggest saying "...Drezzi was conquered..." NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 06:52, January 2, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) *Yeah. It did sound kinda crappy. Changed with Lee's objection.&mdash; Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 23:59, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Violia

 * Nominated by: Tinwe (comlink) 14:17, January 13, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: First of my hopefully many The Jedi Path CA noms.

(2 ECs/2 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1) &mdash; Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 05:45, January 14, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2)  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 10:17, January 14, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) "Roses are red, Violias are Agricorps." Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 03:03, January 15, 2012 (UTC)
 * 4) Excellent work.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  13:23, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Peckva

 * Nominated by: - 501st Dogma Republic_emblem.png( Comlink ) 01:27, January 14, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Ungulates

(0 ECs/1 Users/1 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 13:50, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Return of the Jedi
 * 2) * Two preliminary objections. One: There needs to be a BTS section.
 * 3) **Completed--- 501st Dogma Republic_emblem.png( Comlink ) 13:22, January 14, 2012 (UTC)
 * 4) * Two: There needs to be a "Sources" section instead of an "Appearances" section. Material such as The Essential Atlas belong in a Sources section rather than an Appearances section.
 * 5) **Esjs fixed this--- 501st Dogma Republic_emblem.png( Comlink ) 13:22, January 14, 2012 (UTC)
 * 6) *&mdash; Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 03:42, January 14, 2012 (UTC)


 * 1) Lee's charge
 * 2) * Source the second sentence.
 * 3) **Completed--- 501st Dogma Republic_emblem.png( Comlink ) 13:22, January 14, 2012 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Please take a look at Sourcing and apply it on the article.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 13:24, January 14, 2012 (UTC)
 * 5) ****I've sourced the date of publishing and looked over the sourced aspects of the article. What exactly did you want changed?--- 501st Dogma Republic_emblem.png( Comlink ) 13:38, January 14, 2012 (UTC)
 * 6) *****You don't have to source each sentence as long as there is no new source. You can remove the source tag between your two sentences.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 13:39, January 14, 2012 (UTC)
 * 7) ******Ok, thanks for telling me. It has been removed--- 501st Dogma Republic_emblem.png( Comlink ) 13:45, January 14, 2012 (UTC)
 * 8) * Clone Commander Lee  Talk 10:18, January 14, 2012 (UTC)
 * 9) * AFAIK we should not include links to other pages in the body of our articles.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 10:47, January 15, 2012 (UTC)
 * 10) **Ok, I put the link in external references. I also removed the category for hunting creatures because it is hunted, and according to the atlas does not hunt.--- 501st Dogma Republic_emblem.png( Comlink ) 13:08, January 15, 2012 (UTC)
 * 11) ***The category applies, because it is for "hunted creatures".  Imperators II (Talk) 13:10, January 15, 2012 (UTC)
 * 12) ****Whoops. I glanced over it and saw rancor and some wolf, so I assumed it was for the hunters. Thanks for correcting me.--- 501st Dogma Republic_emblem.png( Comlink ) 13:12, January 15, 2012 (UTC)
 * 13) * Who wrote the book? Please add this to the BtS.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 13:26, January 15, 2012 (UTC)
 * 14) **Added--- 501st Dogma Republic_emblem.png( Comlink ) 13:42, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

Daranas

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 11:04, January 15, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Finishing MedStar II

(0 ECs/1 Users/0 Total)
Support
 * 1) --- 501st Dogma Republic_emblem.png( Comlink ) 13:39, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) 501st
 * 2) * The only problem I can see is that you do not mention that Daranas is female in the body, while it is one of the categories on the page. --- 501st Dogma Republic_emblem.png( Comlink ) 13:16, January 15, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) **Good catch. Adressed.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 13:21, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Comments
 * 1) I noticed you linked Alderaan for Alderaanian. There is a link for Alderaanian if you want to change it. Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 15:12, January 15, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) *Thanks, I changed it.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:18, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Andar Suquand

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 13:35, January 15, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Next one

(0 ECs/2 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) --- 501st Dogma Republic_emblem.png( Comlink ) 13:38, January 15, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) "I hate sand. Its coarse and it gets everywhere." Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 15:09, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Zheepho

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:01, January 15, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Could be streched to a GAN, but I'll wait and see how he evolves in the reviewing progress.

(0 ECs/1 Users/1 Total)
Support
 * 1) --- 501st Dogma Republic_emblem.png( Comlink ) 16:32, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) 501st
 * 2) * P&T section-add and include in it his condition and his graditude.
 * 3) **Added.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:15, January 15, 2012 (UTC)
 * 4) * Maybe link "Troops" to Separatist droid Army. Were they droids?
 * 5) **The troops on Drongar where composed of many different kinds of soldier, including droids and living mercenaries. Therefore, a link to the Separatist Droid Army would not be correct.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:09, January 15, 2012 (UTC)
 * 6) *--- 501st Dogma Republic_emblem.png( Comlink ) 15:07, January 15, 2012 (UTC)
 * 7) **Thanks for the review.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:15, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

T'un

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:34, January 15, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Are Jon and I the only two persons who bothered writing articles from the Jedi Apprentice series?

(0 ECs/1 Users/0 Total)
Support
 * 1) --- 501st Dogma Republic_emblem.png( Comlink ) 16:34, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) The Premier
 * 2) *"During that year, several of the data maintained by T'un was stolen, although Jedi Master Qui-Gon Jinn was able to recover them." Several followed by "was" is grammatically incorrect. It needs replaced by "were."
 * 3) **Ah, thanks.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 16:22, January 15, 2012 (UTC)
 * 4) *Also, the following sentence starts with "Jedi Master." Which Master, Jinn or T'un?
 * 5) **Clarified.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 16:22, January 15, 2012 (UTC)
 * 6) *Great work. Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 16:19, January 15, 2012 (UTC)
 * 7) **Thank you.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 16:22, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Comments