Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Treuten Teradoc


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Treuten Teradoc

 * Nominated by: Lord Hydronium 03:37, April 19, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Costello! Hardy! Allen! Lewis! Sonny!

(4 Inqs/2 Users/6 Total)
Support
 * 1) Xicer9 [[Image:atgar.svg|20px]]( Combadge) 05:49, April 19, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) I see a red Stardestroyer and I waint it painted black. No colors anymore I want them to turn black (The Palpatones) Skippy Farlstendoiro 07:39, April 20, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3)  Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 09:28, April 20, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 22:40, May 14, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) Nicely done.  Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 13:31, May 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * 6)  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  12:28, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) What nomination? We are the nominations! (Farlstendoiro)
 * 2) * "Teradoc beat Rogriss at Junction, winning him the allegiance of a number of Zsinj's ships, but Ackbar in turn soundly defeated him". Defeated whom? Teradoc, I guess, but could you please specify?
 * 3) * When you mention "red Victory-classs Star Destroyers", I would expand on the unusual fact that they were red: "Red-hulled" at least, or "that he ordered to paint red".
 * 4) * "beneath the last officer he had served, Grand Admiral Thrawn". Suggestion: "Previous" instead of "last"? Thrawn was the last then, but not historically.
 * 5) * Good job.Skippy Farlstendoiro 06:47, April 20, 2010 (UTC)
 * 6) **Fixed them all, and thanks. - Lord Hydronium 07:22, April 20, 2010 (UTC)
 * 7) "the Aggregator was ambushed and driven to retreat" Is there a link for this battle? Otherwise, nice.  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  23:58, May 13, 2010 (UTC)
 * 8) *Yep, linked. - Lord Hydronium 00:11, May 14, 2010 (UTC)

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