Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/First Battle of Plagen


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First Battle of Plagen

 * Nominated by: Pentastar patrol.svg 501st  dogma ( talk ) 00:04, April 28, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

(2 ECs/0 Users/2 Total)
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 * 1)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  01:57, May 6, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) Menkooroo 22:35, May 10, 2012 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * I do not think that you should put unknown for the commander or casualty fields. If something is not stated then just leave it blank. The only exception I would see is if they were unknown in-universe.
 * 3) **Done.
 * 4) * The way you have the date in the infobox it makes it look like the battle lasted from 22 BBY to 19 BBY. Perhaps you could say something like "Sometime between 22 BBY and 19 BBY"
 * 5) **Done.
 * 6) * You need to mention the 19 BBY date in the body of the article.
 * 7) **Done.
 * 8) * You make it sound like the tactical droid was a Confederate general. I am assuming you meant to say that he was a fellow Confederate. Could you make this clearer?
 * 9) **And done.
 * 10) * Any indication on why the droid killed the guy? -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  18:56, May 1, 2012 (UTC)
 * 11) **Fixed and thanks for the review. Pentastar patrol.svg 501st  dogma ( talk ) 22:42, May 1, 2012 (UTC)
 * 12) Jedi Exile
 * 13) * Does Warfare mention any other Battles of Plagen? If not, maybe the BTS could mention that although it IDs this as the "first" battle of Plagen, no other battles have been mentioned in canon. Thoughts?
 * 14) **Added in BtS.
 * 15) * The Table of contents must die! Die die die! Menkooroo 04:39, May 9, 2012 (UTC)
 * 16) **Killed. Thanks for the review. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 20:25, May 10, 2012 (UTC)

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