Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Sheeka Tull's sister


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Sheeka Tull's sister

 * Nominated by: --Eyrezer 07:45, 16 January 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * Lol, yes--Skippy Farlstendoiro 08:00, 16 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 09:17, 16 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 1)  Cavalier One [[Image:FarStar Logo.jpg|20px]]( Squadron channel ) 09:44, 16 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) We need a conjecture article about someone's mom to become a GA.  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  21:07, 23 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) *Lol - Sheeka Tull's mother? --Eyrezer 23:41, 23 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) Toprawa and Ralltiir 00:39, 24 January 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) * Would it be better to have an opening sentence like this? Sheeka Tull's sister was a Human female who lived on the Outer Rim Territories planet Atrivis 7 in the later years of the Galactic Republic. It brings in gender, species, and the bold corresponds with the article name.
 * 2) * Was the religion said to be a cult? If not, I would suggest just using sect instead. 08:40, 16 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) **All fixed. Thanks for pointing out I forgot to mention the Human bit. --Eyrezer 09:12, 16 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) Chack Attack:
 * 5) * "despite it later exposing Sheeka to combat in the lead up to the Clone Wars" This sentence doesn't flow great. I had to read it a couple of times to get the meaning.
 * 6) **Hopefully clarified.
 * 7) * Also, any chance she's mentioned in CSWE? Perhaps in Sheeka's entry, assuming she has one.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 02:01, 23 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 8) **I actually independently checked CSWE in the store yesterday, and Sheeka didn't even get an entry.
 * 1) **I actually independently checked CSWE in the store yesterday, and Sheeka didn't even get an entry.

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