Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations



This page is for the nomination of "comprehensive articles". For a list of "comprehensive articles", see Category:Wookieepedia comprehensive articles.


 * Comprehensive article nominations history
 * Comprehensive article nominations archiving checklist

What is a "comprehensive article?"

A "comprehensive article" is an article that contains all information regarding the topic. Often, "comprehensive articles" cannot reach Featured or Good Article status due to their limited content. This process is intended to recognize articles that contain all relevant canon information, yet are still under the 250 word limit required for a Good Article. The purpose of this is twofold&mdash;firstly, to help users distinguish what is a stub, and what is merely a short article with no further relevant material to be added, and, more importantly, to highlight for the reader when they are reading something that has been judged definitely "comprehensive"&mdash;that is, a guarantee to the reader that whatever they are reading contains the sum total of all available content.

Nominations and promotions of the Comprehensive article process are overseen by a collective of users known as the "EduCorps," which is made up of the Inquisitorius, the AgriCorps, and various other experienced users who are considered qualified to adequately judge the nominated material.

Lucasfilm Ltd. and its many licensees continue to expand the Star Wars universe. Since new information might become available, it may be necessary to revoke a "comprehensive article's" status. A forum will be used to nominate articles that have fallen out-of-date. Members of the EduCorps will then post a warning template on that page, and a grace period of one week will be instituted in which the article can be improved. If there is a significant amount of new information, it is likely that once updated, the article will become eligible for Good article status, and thereby ineligible for Comprehensive article status.

READ THIS FIRST!

An article must&hellip;


 * 1) &hellip;be well-written and detailed.
 * 2) &hellip;be unbiased, non-point of view.
 * 3) &hellip;be sourced with all available sources and appearances.
 * 4) &hellip;follow the Manual of Style, Layout Guide, and all other policies on Wookieepedia. This is, of course, within reason. If a topic only has a very limited degree of content that cannot be divided up into the relevant article sections, it is not required that it follow the Layout Guide precisely. This is to be judged on a case-by-case basis.
 * 5) &hellip;following the review process, be stable, i.e., does not change significantly from day to day and is not the subject of ongoing edit wars. This does not apply to vandalism and protection or semi-protection as a result of vandalism.
 * 6) &hellip;not be tagged with any sort of improvement tags (i.e. more sources, expand, etc).
 * 7) &hellip;have no redlinks.
 * 8) &hellip;have all relevant canon information presented.
 * 9) &hellip;be completely referenced for all available material and sources. See Sourcing for more information. While this is not required for an article possessing a singular source, it is encouraged, as it provides both uniformity and a good infrastructure should the topic be referenced in any future materials.
 * 10) &hellip;have all quotes and images sourced.
 * 11) &hellip;provide at least one relevant quote on the article if available.
 * 12) &hellip;include a "Behind the scenes" section for in-universe articles.
 * 13) &hellip;counting the introduction, the article body, and "Behind the scenes" material, must not exceed 250 words in length (not including captions, quotes, or headers, etc). Any articles exceeding the limit should be taken to the Good article nominations page for consideration.
 * 14) &hellip;if the nominated article reaches 200 words or greater, the nominator must either provide an intro or draft an intro and provide a link to the revision in the nomination, showing that the intro does not elevate the article over 250 words. Exceptions can be made for articles wherein the majority of the text is in the "Behind the scenes" section.

How to nominate:


 * 1) First, nominate an article you find is worthy of comprehensive status, putting it at the bottom of the list below. Nominated articles must meet all thirteen requirements stated above.
 * 2) Add CAnom at the top of the article you are nominating.
 * 3) Be sure to place sign in the "Nominated by" line when the nomination is posted for voting.
 * 4) Others will object to the nomination if they disagree that the article is good enough; they will then supply reasons for doing so, and ways to improve the article in accordance with the established rules.
 * 5) Nominators and supporters will adjust the article until the objectors (with reasonable objections) are satisfied. Objectors may also make alterations&mdash;if there is any reason for contention on a given point, it should be settled in a civil manner in the nomination field itself.
 * 6) Users may not vote on their own articles.
 * 7) There is no limit to the amount of nominations a given user can submit at any given time.

How to vote:


 * 1) Before doing anything, be sure to read the article completely, keeping a sharp eye out for mistakes.
 * 2) Afterward, compare the article to the criteria listed above, and then either support or object the article's nomination.
 * 3) *If you object, please supply concrete reasons for doing so, and how it can be improved.
 * 4) As stated above, any objections will be looked upon by the nominator, supporters, and anyone willing to improve the article, and action will be taken to please the objectors. Do not strike other users' objections; it is up to the objector to review the changes and strike if they are satisfied.
 * 5) There are several ways in which an article can receive the required number of votes. Within a 48-hour period of nomination, only EduCorps votes will count towards the total, although anyone may choose to vote in that window. If two members of the EduCorps support a nomination in that window, and there are no outstanding objections, the article can be considered a "Comprehensive article" and be tagged with the template 48 hours after the initial nomination.  The talk page will also be tagged with the CA template. When the 48 hours are up, any user's votes will contribute towards the total. If one EduCorps member has voted for an article after a week, three regular votes will be required. After the 48 hour period, an article can still also pass with just two EduCorps votes.
 * 6) Once a nomination is successful, it will be placed on the Comprehensive article list. Instructions on how to archive nominations, successful or otherwise, can be found here. Anyone can archive a nomination&mdash;just make sure it has the correct number of votes, has been nominated for at least a week (or 48 hours if there are two EC votes), and that there are absolutely no outstanding objections. If you are not sure how to do this, just ask, and someone will likely be more than willing to help you. Also, if you think you can slip one past us, think again&mdash;someone is always watching you.

All nominations will be considered idle and are subject to instantaneous removal by EduCorps members if objections are not addressed, or at least not answered, after a period of 1 week.

Please remember to archive your nomination beforehand if you plan on taking it to the Good Article Nominations page.

Shiltu

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 16:58, June 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Typical greedy Hutt

(3 ECs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1) Good work.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  18:29, June 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 22:34, June 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Menkooroo 00:13, June 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) Teff  01:49, June 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) ~  Savage  BOB sig.png 18:07, June 27, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * You should mention that he was a hermaphrodite with a male personality in the body of the article. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  18:19, June 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Done.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 18:26, June 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) Does Battle Surgeons actually say he's a hermaphrodite? If not, I think that needs to be sourced to a sourcebook or something. Menkooroo 03:26, June 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) *Not really, so sourced otherwise.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 17:21, June 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) Bob
 * 7) * Perhaps a word or two of context on what a vigo is would be helpful. Otherwise, looks great. ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 16:24, June 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) **Something like that? Thanks a lot for the review.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 17:41, June 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) ***I changed it a bit. Hope you don't mind. Otherwise, support! ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 18:07, June 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) ****No problem.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 18:25, June 27, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Unidentified Gungan harvester

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 17:00, June 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Typical clumsy Gungan

(3 ECs/3 Users/6 Total)
Support
 * 1) Good work again.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  18:34, June 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 18:15, June 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Teff  01:53, June 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) Just remember that the BTS is self-sourcing so it doesn't need refs. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 20:19, June 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) ~  Savage  BOB sig.png 18:08, June 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) Menkooroo 03:24, June 30, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * You should create an article for the hopper vehicle that the Gungan used. (Assuming that there isn't one already.)
 * 3) **Done.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 18:30, June 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) * Please provide context on Republic Mobile Surgical Unit 7. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  18:25, June 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) **Added.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 18:30, June 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) Axinal
 * 7) * The template should be added, as should Category:Unidentified individuals. Otherwise, very good.
 * 8) **Done for both.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 17:23, June 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) * Oop, also the tag.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 10:30, June 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) **I'm almost sure it was there, but it seemed like I had a spelling error.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 17:23, June 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) Is it possible that this happened in 21 BBY? The book indicates that it was six months before. Menkooroo 01:40, June 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * 12) *Yes, but the only date we know for sure is 20 BBY. Any ideas?  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 07:53, June 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * 13) **I think something like "Around 20 BBY" would be OK. Or, if you know precisely when in 22 BBY Episode II takes place, you could just go with whichever year is 1.5 years later, as the timeline in the front of the Medstar books says that it's exactly 24 months after Episode II. You'd have to source whatever precisely dates Episode II, though. If we don't know that info, then just stick with "around." :) Menkooroo 12:54, June 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * 14) ***Used "around". Thanks for your ideas.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 17:36, June 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 15) Bob
 * 16) * Should "bota" be capitalized in all instances? Our article on it treats it as a common noun for the most part, but I'm not sure about the OS.
 * 17) **Meh, that was simply an error. Fixed.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 17:36, June 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 18) * Does the OS give any indication why a harvester would be carrying around a pulse bomb? It seems kind of odd and worth mentioning here! ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 16:27, June 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * 19) **Nope, there is no explanation or other info about that. Thanks for the review.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 17:36, June 27, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Calamasthon Defiance

 * Nominated by: ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 21:33, June 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Making waves.

(1 ECs/3 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 22:38, June 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Looks good.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  22:52, June 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 23:28, June 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) Teff  01:56, June 25, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Axinal
 * 2) * Could you add the eras tag?
 * 3) * Could "seismic" safely be linked to groundquake, and "rain" to water?
 * 4) *Nice work.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 21:58, June 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) **Naru fixed the first, and the other two I think are reasonable. Thanks for the review! ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 22:48, June 21, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Battle of Randon system

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 23:15, June 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Look closely at the maps from TEA. There's canon to be found there.

(1 ECs/3 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1) Nice work.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 10:33, June 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Good work, Naru.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  12:01, June 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Battle of Random system.  Imperators II (Talk) 20:41, June 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) *You, sir, know the whole reason I started this article. The project grew. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 21:03, June 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) Teff  01:59, June 25, 2011 (UTC)

Object Comments
 * 1) Axinal
 * 2) * Would you be able to upload the image from TEA for use in the article? I think that's all I have. Nicely-written article.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 23:32, June 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Done. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 01:49, June 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) Exiled Jedi
 * 5) * Is the planet Randon explicitly mentioned or could it be the Randon system? I ask this since the Atlas uses the system name most of the time. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  23:45, June 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) **Did not take that into account. Crap. Should I change this to "Battle of Randon system"? I've fixed the article's content. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 01:49, June 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) ***Feh. Changed. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 04:01, June 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) * By extension of this previous question, are the other planets in the article explicitly mentioned to be planets, or could they be merely refering to systems as well. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  23:47, June 21, 2011 (UTC)

Freedom (painting)

 * Nominated by:  OLIOSTER  (talk) 12:27, June 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Menk demanded more paintings.

(1 ECs/3 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1) Looks good to me.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  12:41, June 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 19:01, June 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Teff  02:02, June 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) Good job on the details. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:38, June 27, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Axinal
 * 2) * I just want to double-check the facts here: Are the thoughts that the painting was contradictory, and that it may have been changed in a rush, mentioned in the game, or is it speculative?&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 18:22, June 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **The items description mentions all of this.  OLIOSTER  (talk) 18:54, June 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Cool, just checking. Great work.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 19:01, June 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) Cal Jedi
 * 6) * Although it is not required, it would be nice to have the article sourced with refs. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 20:24, June 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) **....Done.  OLIOSTER  (talk) 21:31, June 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) ***OK looks good. Just remember that the BTS doesn't have to be sourced since it is self sourcing. But that was my fault for not being more specific. Sorry about that. But good article! Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:38, June 27, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Cargo Port Blueprint

 * Nominated by:  OLIOSTER  (talk) 12:44, June 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Posters are just a different kind of painting.

(1 ECs/3 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 19:03, June 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  21:19, June 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 02:01, June 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) Teff  02:06, June 25, 2011 (UTC)

Object Comments
 * 1) Axinal
 * 2) * I'm thinking the words "cargo port" in the text should be linked to something, perhaps hangar. Thoughts?&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 18:30, June 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Sounds good. Done.  OLIOSTER  (talk) 18:54, June 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) Exiled Jedi
 * 5) * Shouldn't you say that it is a comprehensive article nomination on the article itself?
 * 6) * Could you provide translations for some of the Aurebesh text on the blueprint? It seems to me that this could be a good thing to add to the article if it isn't just gibberish. If it is gibberish I would consider mentioning this in the BTS. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  19:21, June 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) **Noted the bit at the top. Everything else is too small.  OLIOSTER  (talk) 21:15, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

Andevor Javin

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 06:18, June 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Writer's Block #1

(0 ECs/3 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) Very good.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  14:10, June 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Teff  02:11, June 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Good job. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 20:43, June 25, 2011 (UTC)

Object

Comments

H. Hrush

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 06:18, June 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Writer's Block #2

(0 ECs/3 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  14:11, June 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Teff  02:13, June 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Good job again. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 20:45, June 25, 2011 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Dxulininan

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 06:18, June 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Writer's Block #3

(1 ECs/3 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1) Invertebrates?-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  14:13, June 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 22:52, June 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Teff  02:15, June 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) I have warm thoughts for invertebrates. Gands are invertebrates, are they not?  Trak Nar  Ramble on 07:38, June 25, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Axinal
 * 2) * I would have checked for myself, but I couldn't find Dxulininan on the HNN. In any case, you say that "Dxulininan was credited for his book..." in the BTS. I'm assuming this was a mistake, as I know how difficult it can be to write a genderless biography, but I want to double-check to make sure that we aren't sure of the gender in this case. Otherwise, it looks good.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 22:06, June 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **This same objection applies to Patijak Sonn.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 22:08, June 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) ***"He" can be androgynous, for the record. Changed to "the." NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 22:22, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

Comments
 * This person has no info for the infobox. This article has no era tag because the books were not specified as new releases: they could have been books from before 1,000 BBY that resurged in popularity. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 06:18, June 23, 2011 (UTC)

Patijak Sonn

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 06:18, June 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Writer's Block #4

(1 ECs/4 Users/5 Total)
Support Object
 * 1) Nice.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  14:14, June 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 22:53, June 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Teff  02:16, June 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) Support for Patricia Jackson&mdash;err, I mean... Patijak Sonn.  Trak Nar  Ramble on 07:41, June 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) Nice job. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 20:49, June 27, 2011 (UTC)

Comments
 * This person has no info for the infobox. This article has no era tag because the books were not specified as new releases: they could have been books from before 1,000 BBY that resurged in popularity. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 06:18, June 23, 2011 (UTC)

BT7 Thunderstrike

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:05, June 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Another The Old Republic nom.

(1 ECs/2 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 23:46, June 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Teff  02:23, June 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Looks good.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  12:20, June 30, 2011 (UTC)

Object Comments
 * 1) Axinal
 * 2) *Pretty good for the most part, just a couple of things:
 * 3) ** Could we get some context on the "Exchange"? We don't necessarily need to know the details of Korr's "messing up" of their operations, but it would be good to know what the Exchange was.
 * 4) ***Added a little context. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 23:39, June 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) ** While we're on the subject, could we get a less colloquial phrase than "messing up"?
 * 6) ***How's that? Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 23:39, June 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) ** At the very end, you tell us that "it was Korr's old friend and former Jedi Knight Aryn Leneer." We, as the readers, already know this from above. Instead of telling us who was in the ship, as we already know, could you perhaps give a brief description of Korr's reaction to finding out?&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 22:15, June 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) ***Does that work? Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 23:39, June 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) ** Also, please try to remember that, except in 4+ digit numbers, a comma is almost always followed by a space. Other than that, looks good.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 22:17, June 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) ***OK got it. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 23:39, June 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) ****Great work, Cal.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 23:46, June 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * 12) *****Thanks Ax!! :) Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:18, June 25, 2011 (UTC)

Unidentified secretary (Jagged Fel)

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:57, June 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Unidentified stuff up for Legacy.

(1 ECs/4 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1) Teff  02:26, June 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 08:27, June 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 20:12, June 26, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  12:23, June 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) &mdash;TK-999 Era-imp.png(Rise of the Empire) 18:27, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) I think mentioning the six second quip here is a bit too play by play. Would you consider changing it to just saying that he told the secretary to let her in?  NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 21:58, June 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *I thought of that when I was writing the page, but I thought that would explain the quote better. But, now I see that it looks better this way. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 23:27, June 25, 2011 (UTC)

Comments
 * Galactic_Empire_character_infobox would probably be more appropriate.
 * OK changed it.
 * It is unnecessary to say that the novel does not specify his/her gender.
 * Got it.
 * Looks good otherwise.&mdash;TK-999 Era-imp.png(Rise of the Empire) 20:28, June 26, 2011 (UTC)
 * Great thanks! Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:55, June 27, 2011 (UTC)

Lexi Dio (starship)

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:19, June 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:TFU CAN for TFU.

(0 ECs/1 Users/1 Total)
Support Object Comments
 * 1) Teff  16:09, June 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) The Force Unleashed II release date is incorrect.  Teff  02:33, June 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *Oops. Don't know how I missed that. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 02:37, June 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Axinal
 * 4) *Are there any quotes available from the novel?
 * 5) **Let me check that. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 13:51, June 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) * The fact that it was an assault bomber during the early days of the Rebellion is currently exclusive to the intro.
 * 7) **Got it. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 13:51, June 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) *** This might be a little picky, but you say "early days of the Rebellion" in the intro. While you specify 1 BBY in the body, it's not entirely clear to the reader that 1 BBY is in the early days of the Rebellion. Could you throw that in somewhere?&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 22:00, June 26, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) ****How does that look? Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:49, June 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) *****Looks good to me. Any luck with a quote, or are there none?&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 10:10, June 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) ******Haven't been able to look yet. I should be able to look for one sometime this week. But I put a request for a quote on the talk page in case someone else found a good quote first. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 19:11, June 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 12) * It is not entirely necessary to source it, as you did for the history section, but it is encouraged. If you do source it, however, you need to source every bulleted item in the infobox.
 * 13) **OK fixed. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 13:51, June 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * 14) *I added the template for you to italicize the title.
 * 15) **OK thanks. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 13:51, June 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * 16) *Otherwise, nice article.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 08:19, June 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * 17) **Great thanks! Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 13:51, June 25, 2011 (UTC)

Unidentified nurse (Coruscant)

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 20:24, June 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Unidentified stuff up for TOR

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 21:43, June 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Looks good.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:15, June 30, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Axinal
 * 2) * "...her blue medical uniform looked like a tent on her." This kind of toes the line of the WP:NPOV policy. However, if you said exactly who thought it looked like a tent, it could stay.
 * 3) **Actually it wasn't a person in the book that thought it. It was Paul S. Kemp. "Her uniform looked like a blue tent on her stout body." is what the book says. But I guess it could be considered POV. So, what exactly would the decision on that be? Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:03, June 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Typically, newer novels are told from a particular person's point of view, even narrative text. The PoV typically changes from section to section, chapter to chapter, but you almost never hear the internal thoughts of two different individuals within the same section. Can you discern through whose eyes the events unfold in this particular section of the novel?&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 21:18, June 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) ****Darth Malgus.
 * 6) * Is there an article for the medical facility?
 * 7) **I couldn't find one.
 * 8) ***I'd say it's worthy of one, if you care to create it. You could just write the basic information and leave it as a stub if you wish.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 21:23, June 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) ****I added the page. But it's pretty small. I'll cleanup it up and enlarge it myself once I get some time. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:34, June 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) * Could you add the year for the Battle of Coruscant, as well as the name of the larger conflict?
 * 11) **How's that? Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:26, June 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 12) * Darth Malgus and Eleena Daru could both use context in the intro, and Malgus could also use some in the bio.
 * 13) **OK.
 * 14) * The description of the nurse in the bio, such as her hair color, weight, etc., would be more suited in the P+T rather than the bio.
 * 15) **I transferred it.
 * 16) * Could you add Category:Unidentified individuals?
 * 17) **OK.
 * 18) *I think that's it from me; nice work otherwise.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 20:52, June 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 19) **Great thanks! Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:19, June 27, 2011 (UTC)

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Paouoish Rahhdool

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 16:10, June 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: One-mention-Jedi Master

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Support
 * 1) Good work.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  17:04, June 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 01:13, July 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:34, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * You need to mention his affiliation to the Republic and the Jedi Order in the body of the article. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:17, June 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Done.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 16:51, June 30, 2011 (UTC)

Comments
 * 1) Cal Jedi
 * 2) * "He discovered the infant Shistavanen Voolvif Monn abandoned near the Arah asteroid belt. " This makes it sound like he found the infant in space. Was the infant in a starship? or on a planet near the asteroid belt? Please specify. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:43, June 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Done.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 14:44, July 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) * Maybe this is too picky, but do you know what the name of the world is where he found the infant? Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:15, July 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) * Since this Master is not mentioned much, there probably isn't really any relevant quotes. But if there is one, you need to put it on there. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:18, July 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) **No.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:27, July 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) * This should be the last thing, but do you know what species this master is? Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:20, July 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) **No. All info about him is in the article.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:27, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Duriet Muse

 * Nominated by: Hanzo Hasashi 16:06, July 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Sting's wife.

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Support
 * 1) Looks good.

Object

Comments
 * I've removed the mention of her being named after Trudie Syler, as, while it is pretty reasonable, I find no source stating it, and it would be assumption. Also, is there indeed proof of her sharing Grondorn's last name? Hanzo Hasashi 16:06, July 2, 2011 (UTC)