Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Akial


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Akial

 * Nominated by: Jinzler 12:48, 22 June 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: a Jawa Jedi

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support > JangFett  Talk 22:30, 23 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) Nice! --Eyrezer 02:23, 23 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) Jawa Jedi? What's next? An Ewok Jedi? Wait, scratch that ... -- Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 13:32, 23 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) --Skippy Farlstendoiro 13:39, 23 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 4)  JangFett  Talk 15:25, 22 June 2009 (UTC) > JangFett  Talk 23:51, 22 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) Fett's 2 cents
 * 2) * Missing tags in infobox
 * 3) **I always forget these :) I have now added them --Jinzler 21:45, 22 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) * His biography section is too subsectioned. Can you merge "Celebration on Dorumaa" with "Jedi Student".
 * 5) **Merged --Jinzler 21:45, 22 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 6) * "He passed and became a Jedi Knight." Merge this with the previous sentence.
 * 7) **Merged --Jinzler 21:45, 22 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 8) * "The Kel Dor Jedi Guardian Krin D'bis was chosen to accompany Akial because, due their different specializations within the order, they could represent different approaches to being a Jedi." Run-on, shorten it up.
 * 9) **Shortened --Jinzler 21:45, 22 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 10) * Seeing that you used few sources for references, you need a ==Sources== section.
 * 11) *<span style="font-variant: small-caps; font-family: Verdana; font-size: 12px"
 * 1) ** No, he doesn't. That's not how the Sources section works. I think you need to take another look at the this page and ensure that you haven't been labouring under false pretenses in your other articles. -- —Harrar  ( Cut the comm chatter ) 17:40, 22 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) Attack of Fett, part 2
 * 3) * P&T:"He could speak Basic without an accent." Merge this with the previous language sentence.
 * 4) **Merged --Jinzler 21:25, 23 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) * "The celebration had been organized by the Metatheran Cartel, a trade organization that was jointly run by members of the Caarite and Filordus species, to thank a group of freelance agents for preventing the release of a dangerous virus on the Caarite homeworld." Split this sentence into two sentences.
 * 6) **Done --Jinzler 21:25, 23 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 7) *<span style="font-variant: small-caps; font-family: Verdana; font-size: 12px"
 * 1) **Thanks for your review --Jinzler 21:25, 23 June 2009 (UTC)

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