Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Unidentified Emperor's Voice (Human female)


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Unidentified Emperor's Voice (Human female)

 * Nominated by: Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 01:38, December 16, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: A long name for a short article.

(2 ECs/1 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) Supreme Emperor (talk) 03:44, December 19, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  04:36, December 23, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) &mdash; 05:04, December 23, 2012 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * It seems to me that since the article is about the woman, that the first sentence should establish her as a Human female living at whatever time, and then move on to the part about her being the Emperor's Voice.
 * 3) **Done.
 * 4) * The second sentence seems to conflict with the BTS, since the BTS says she could have died naturally, while the sentence states that she died when the Emperor changed voices.
 * 5) **Done.
 * 6) * You need to link the Sith Empire somewhere in the body. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  02:17, December 16, 2012 (UTC)
 * 7) **Done. Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 16:33, December 18, 2012 (UTC)

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