Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Rock Wizard


 * ''The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a featured article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.

(5 Inq/2 Users/7 Total)
Support
 * 1) And this thing. Cull Tremayne 01:56, 20 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) A great antagonist, but not a bad guy at the finish. -- Delmar Nori 00:11, 24 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) Stupid concept, good article.  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  19:15, 25 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) Clean, compelling prose. Excellent. Toprawa and Ralltiir 20:03, 26 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) I absolutely love how you treat such an utterly ridiculous subject with total seriousness. Only on Wookieepedia could anyone embrace this kind of madness. --  Darth Culator  (Talk) 06:13, 27 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 6) Damnit, Cull...you're making me want to go back to this stuff. :P Thefourdotelipsis 00:10, 4 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 7) Green Tentacle (Talk) 16:02, 4 May 2008 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) From the Merciless Hammer of Toprawa:
 * 2) * This reads as though they performed in front of multiple audiences. If so, please change "audience" to its plural form: "the Jindas took up an occupation as entertainers, relying on gifts from their audience to maintain their nomadic lifestyle"
 * 3) **Changed to the plural.
 * 4) * Please provide a brief descriptor for who/what these are: "and been captured by Skandits."
 * 5) **Clarifier added.
 * 6) * I understand what you're saying here, but "large gestures" just sounds awkward. Could you describe that in a different way?: "making large gestures as he uprooted the terrain" Toprawa and Ralltiir 17:33, 26 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 7) **Is "wild gestures" any better? Or is a total reword needed? Cull Tremayne 19:25, 26 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 8) ***Perfect. Toprawa and Ralltiir 20:03, 26 April 2008 (UTC)

Comments

Why it's a stupid concept? Is it because the Rock Wizard was a stone creature, with unknown species? -- Delmar Nori 23:16, 25 April 2008 (UTC) Not an objection, but like a Sith lord he seems to have an evil eye color change going on in those pictures. You might want to put that in the infobox. Yrfeloran 02:57, 4 May 2008 (UTC)
 * The idea that he flipped out because he lost a tooth strikes me as very peculiar. I actually like whatever species he is though; it's a unique look.
 * I understand. -- Delmar Nori 01:35, 26 April 2008 (UTC)
 * Good point, though how does that go? Is it Blue/Red (dark side)? Or is it a semicolon? Cull Tremayne 04:03, 4 May 2008 (UTC)