Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Ray (creature)

Ray (creature)

 * Nominated by:  Riffsyphon  1024 11:03, December 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: The first of a series of musical scalefish as part of Wookieepedia's Third Barn-Burner.

Lee's charge

 * Is "NOTOC" really needed here?
 * Removed. --  Riffsyphon  1024 11:29, December 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * You need a "Youmay" tag.
 * Added. --  Riffsyphon  1024 11:29, December 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * Fact tag in the infobox.
 * Cited information. --  Riffsyphon  1024 11:29, December 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * "None" is not needed in the infobox.
 * Removed. --  Riffsyphon  1024 11:29, December 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * Context on Gungans, Naboo and opee sea killer.
 * Context given on the three. --  Riffsyphon  1024 11:29, December 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * Still missing context for Naboo, Ohma-D'un and Gungan in the intro.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 12:09, December 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * This has now been completed. --  Riffsyphon  1024 12:57, December 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * Their planet of origin (Naboo) must be mentioned in the body.
 * Mentioned. --  Riffsyphon  1024 11:29, December 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * Body is way too short.
 * You adressed this one by fixing the other objections.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 12:07, December 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * The typical ray fish was a long-bodied creature with a large head and wide mouth that dominated much of its body. According to this sentence, there could be other ray fishes. Anything we know about these?
 * Edited so there is no confusion about these. Rays are one shape. --  Riffsyphon  1024 11:29, December 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * BtS is not sourced.
 * According to Sourcing, there is nothing that indicates that we have to cite the BTS, as these sources are citing themselves. --  Riffsyphon  1024 11:29, December 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * including other scalefish with musically-inspired names. Is this really said in the film?  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 12:07, December 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * Ah, not mentioned in films, but doesn't have to be does it? For some reason I didn't add the list of other scalefish to this article like I had with the ones I haven't nommed yet, but they are essentially doo, ray, mee, faa, see, laa, tee, (and doo), which is the musical scale, save for one note. But for the purposes of this article, I have removed the term "musical". --  Riffsyphon  1024 12:57, December 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * I'll strike this as I'm not very familiar with such things. If it is not OK, I'm pretty sure another reviewer will tell you that.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 17:41, December 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * Color has to be linked.
 * Linked. --  Riffsyphon  1024 11:29, December 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * Still missing in infobox, intro and bio.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 12:07, December 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * Yikes, got all of them now. --  Riffsyphon  1024 13:00, December 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * Basic info from the infobox is missing in the body.
 * Added to body. --  Riffsyphon  1024 11:29, December 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * By my count, the article only has 246 words and is therefore to short for GAN at the moment. However, if you make the changes above, it is highly likely that he gets the needed length.
 * Hopefully bumped up now. --  Riffsyphon  1024 11:29, December 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * Indeed.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 12:10, December 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * I'll take another look after you dealt with these.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 11:59, December 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * Throughout the article you mention that they were considered to be good swimmers. Considered by whom?
 * Altered to 'fast swimmers'. All sources refrain from mentioning any whoms. Just given in the text as 'Crescent shaped caudal fin allowed for fast swimming and spectacular leaping'. --  Riffsyphon  1024 12:57, December 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * Please give some context on "mee" in your picture caption.
 * Context and links given. --  Riffsyphon  1024 12:57, December 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * That Naboo is a Mid Rim planet is intro-exclusive.
 * On Naboo, these fish were found in the Abyss: Is there a link for this place? If not (and there is enough info), could you create one?
 * That would be all from me.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 17:44, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Jangston

 * Hey Riff, just out of a curiosity look, your intro is too short and we do not allow reference tags in the intro.  JangFett  (Talk) 15:58, December 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * Gah. Ick. Right on it. --  Riffsyphon  1024 09:59, December 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * Jang, Lee has kept me straight tonight. You can look at it now.