User talk:12.71.5.221

Run-on sentences and grammar
I realize you're trying to improve articles, but I just had to undo over a dozen of your revisions. Please be aware that you're creating run-on sentences, as well as substituting bad grammar, and thereby reducing the quality of these articles. Also, please don't remove information from articles unless you have replaced it somewhere else within the page. Thanks!--Demos Traxen (talk) 16:41, September 1, 2012 (UTC)