Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations



This page is for the nomination of "comprehensive articles". For a list of "comprehensive articles", see Category:Wookieepedia comprehensive articles.


 * Comprehensive article nominations history
 * Comprehensive article nominations archiving checklist

What is a "comprehensive article?"

A "comprehensive article" is an article that contains all information regarding the topic. Often, "comprehensive articles" cannot reach Featured or Good Article status due to their limited content. This process is intended to recognize articles that contain all relevant canon information, yet are still under the 250 word limit required for a Good Article. The purpose of this is twofold&mdash;firstly, to help users distinguish what is a stub, and what is merely a short article with no further relevant material to be added, and, more importantly, to highlight for the reader when they are reading something that has been judged definitely "comprehensive"&mdash;that is, a guarantee to the reader that whatever they are reading contains the sum total of all available content.

Nominations and promotions of the Comprehensive article process are overseen by a collective of users known as the "EduCorps," which is made up of the Inquisitorius, the AgriCorps, and various other experienced users who are considered qualified to adequately judge the nominated material.

Lucasfilm Ltd. and its many licensees continue to expand the Star Wars universe. Since new information might become available, it may be necessary to revoke a "comprehensive article's" status. A forum will be used to nominate articles that have fallen out-of-date. Members of the EduCorps will then post a warning template on that page, and a grace period of one week will be instituted in which the article can be improved. If there is a significant amount of new information, it is likely that once updated, the article will become eligible for Good article status, and thereby ineligible for Comprehensive article status.

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An article must&hellip;


 * 1) &hellip;be well-written and detailed.
 * 2) &hellip;be unbiased, non-point of view.
 * 3) &hellip;be sourced with all available sources and appearances.
 * 4) &hellip;follow the Manual of Style, Layout Guide, and all other policies on Wookieepedia. This is, of course, within reason. If a topic only has a very limited degree of content that cannot be divided up into the relevant article sections, it is not required that it follow the Layout Guide precisely. This is to be judged on a case-by-case basis.
 * 5) &hellip;following the review process, be stable, i.e., does not change significantly from day to day and is not the subject of ongoing edit wars. This does not apply to vandalism and protection or semi-protection as a result of vandalism.
 * 6) &hellip;not be tagged with any sort of improvement tags (i.e. more sources, expand, etc).
 * 7) &hellip;have no redlinks.
 * 8) &hellip;have all relevant canon information presented.
 * 9) &hellip;be completely referenced for all available material and sources. See Sourcing for more information. While this is not required for an article possessing a singular source, it is encouraged, as it provides both uniformity and a good infrastructure should the topic be referenced in any future materials.
 * 10) &hellip;have all quotes and images sourced.
 * 11) &hellip;provide at least one relevant quote on the article if available.
 * 12) &hellip;include a "Behind the scenes" section for in-universe articles.
 * 13) &hellip;counting the introduction, the article body, and "Behind the scenes" material, must not exceed 250 words in length (not including captions, quotes, or headers, etc). Any articles exceeding the limit should be taken to the Good article nominations page for consideration.
 * 14) &hellip;if the nominated article reaches 200 words or greater, the nominator must either provide an intro or draft an intro and provide a link to the revision in the nomination, showing that the intro does not elevate the article over 250 words. Exceptions can be made for articles wherein the majority of the text is in the "Behind the scenes" section.

How to nominate:


 * 1) First, nominate an article you find is worthy of comprehensive status, putting it at the bottom of the list below. Nominated articles must meet all thirteen requirements stated above.
 * 2) Add CAnom at the top of the article you are nominating.
 * 3) Be sure to place sign in the "Nominated by" line when the nomination is posted for voting.
 * 4) Others will object to the nomination if they disagree that the article is good enough; they will then supply reasons for doing so, and ways to improve the article in accordance with the established rules.
 * 5) Nominators and supporters will adjust the article until the objectors (with reasonable objections) are satisfied. Objectors may also make alterations&mdash;if there is any reason for contention on a given point, it should be settled in a civil manner in the nomination field itself.
 * 6) Users may not vote on their own articles.
 * 7) There is no limit to the amount of nominations a given user can submit at any given time.

How to vote:


 * 1) Before doing anything, be sure to read the article completely, keeping a sharp eye out for mistakes.
 * 2) Afterward, compare the article to the criteria listed above, and then either support or object the article's nomination.
 * 3) *If you object, please supply concrete reasons for doing so, and how it can be improved.
 * 4) As stated above, any objections will be looked upon by the nominator, supporters, and anyone willing to improve the article, and action will be taken to please the objectors. Do not strike other users' objections; it is up to the objector to review the changes and strike if they are satisfied.
 * 5) There are several ways in which an article can receive the required number of votes. Within a 48-hour period of nomination, only EduCorps votes will count towards the total, although anyone may choose to vote in that window. If two members of the EduCorps support a nomination in that window, and there are no outstanding objections, the article can be considered a "Comprehensive article" and be tagged with the template 48 hours after the initial nomination.  The talk page will also be tagged with the CA template. When the 48 hours are up, any user's votes will contribute towards the total. If one EduCorps member has voted for an article after a week, three regular votes will be required. After the 48 hour period, an article can still also pass with just two EduCorps votes.
 * 6) Once a nomination is successful, it will be placed on the Comprehensive article list. Instructions on how to archive nominations, successful or otherwise, can be found here. Anyone can archive a nomination&mdash;just make sure it has the correct number of votes, has been nominated for at least a week (or 48 hours if there are two EC votes), and that there are absolutely no outstanding objections. If you are not sure how to do this, just ask, and someone will likely be more than willing to help you. Also, if you think you can slip one past us, think again&mdash;someone is always watching you.

All nominations will be considered idle and are subject to instantaneous removal by EduCorps members if objections are not addressed, or at least not answered, after a period of 1 week.

Please remember to archive your nomination beforehand if you plan on taking it to the Good Article Nominations page.

Doghouse

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 03:17, July 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Back to Deceived! :))

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) Good.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  15:51, July 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Nicely done. ~  Savage  BOB sig.png 20:51, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Trayus
 * 2) * I know that Korr explicitly speculates that the hijackers are either pirates or mercenaries, but in the article it sounds very speculative: "But some other people, either pirates or mercenaries". It would appear far more encyclopedic to state that "A rival group of criminals, speculated by Korr to be either pirates or hired mercenaries, were there instead..."
 * 3) **How's that?
 * 4) *Also, when you say "there instead" it leaves room for confusion. Where were they? Somewhere on Ord Mantell, or specifically in or at the Doghouse? It would be best to specify that they had taken control of the ship at the drop off point.
 * 5) **Changed. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 17:29, July 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) *You should provide a bit more context on the altercation at the landing pad, i.e., how Korr discovered that they did not work for Arigo, and how he got away. Nothing too in-depth, but a bit more explanation will definitely help.
 * 7) **How's that? Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 17:21, July 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) *Not bad, otherwise. Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 17:11, July 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) Bob
 * 10) * Context on the Exchange.
 * 11) **Fixed.
 * 12) * Did Arigo use the freighter only once? The current wording implies that. If not, change "used by" to "in use by" or "being used by" to imply that this is not a one-off event.
 * 13) **Changed.
 * 14) * Species IDs for Arigo and Korr wouldn't hurt; if they were aliens, we'd almost certainly ID their species.
 * 15) **Fixed.
 * 16) * The altercation between them all probably needs an article: Skirmish at blah blah or whatever.
 * 17) **Got it.
 * 18) * The way things are written seems to be from Korr's point of view, but this article is about the ship. Try to rewrite most of the body chronologically from the POV of the ship: ship lands, pirate guys take it over, Korr comes up unsuspecting, etc. As it stands, the article is kind of confusing and hard to follow. ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 13:56, July 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * 19) **I have to agree with Bob on this&mdash;I've noticed that trend on a couple of your articles. Always remember that you should follow the chronology of the subject, and not necessarily the POV of the book. Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 17:24, July 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * 20) ***Is that any better? Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 17:43, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Hraashi Lool

 * Nominated by: Menkooroo 07:03, July 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Nuthin' in the CSWE.

(1 ECs/2 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) Nice. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:35, July 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Good work as always.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:28, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) ~  Savage  BOB sig.png 14:51, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * I believe that you should mention the necklace that she wore in the picture. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  15:53, July 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) ** Hmmm... I dunno. Unlike hair, eyes, or tattoos, a necklace isn't a permanent fixture, so I can't make a definitive statement like "She always wore a necklace." I guess I could mention it in the second paragraph, but that would open up the door to describing the shirt and suspenders she wore that day, too, which would just kind of be a random tangent. Any ideas? Menkooroo 04:07, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Wait, scratch that. I found a simple and effective way to put it in. Check it out! And thanks for the review. :) Menkooroo 04:13, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) ****That's kind of like what I was thinking of.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:28, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) Bob
 * 7) * Just something minor, but can we really say she had tattoos? It could've been makeup. Simply de-pipelinking tattoo would suffice, but I wanted to make sure there's not something a missed. ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 16:38, July 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) **You're right. I didn't want to definitively say it, so I'm not sure why I pipelinked it. Removed. Menkooroo 11:40, July 17, 2011 (UTC)

Comments
 * Also, I hereby put out an open challenge for other users to write and CAN Lomina Argo and Wuuden Malnic! Menkooroo 08:14, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

A

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 21:23, July 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: I can haz an "A" for effort?

(1 ECs/3 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1) "A" Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:07, July 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2)  Master Jonathan  &mdash; Jedi Council Chambers Thursday, July 14, 2011, 02:55 UTC
 * 3)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  21:36, August 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) Had to vote fast before you lost your AAA rating! ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 22:46, August 1, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) From the Council Chambers:
 * 2) * Is Elegos a member of the A clan? It seems to me that a being would automatically be a member of both of their parents' families/clans/whatever a certain species calls them. Unless we know of some reason why he isn't (and I can't fathom why he wouldn't be), then it seems to me that all of Elegos's appearances/sources should be listed too, and the article should then include information on Elego's life and death, which would push this way past the CAN word limit. Or should I get an F in reasoning?  Master Jonathan &mdash; Jedi Council Chambers Wednesday, July 13, 2011, 23:10 UTC
 * 3) **You may have a C, because that's perfectly logical. However, in the source he identifies himself as part of the Kla clan and speaks of the a clan as something he doesn't belong to, saying that it was just the clan his father belonged to: "It is fairly easy for me to transfer a merehis to another member of the Kla clan or to my father's clan, the A clan." NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 23:45, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Seems odd that he would be a member of one and not the other, but if that's what the source says, then it's fine the way it is.  Master Jonathan &mdash; Jedi Council Chambers Thursday, July 14, 2011, 02:55 UTC
 * 5) ****Frankly, after reading the releveant excerpt, I'm a bit intrigued by the maternal/paternal clan concept and how it relates to Caamasi society, but to my knowledge no sources have fleshed this out. Too bad. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 05:12, July 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) *****Cultures are weird, so we shouldn't find it odd he's in only the A clan and not the Kla clan; perhaps the species is patrilineal, yet their naming practices preserve a history of the maternal clan in the name without any suggestion of membership in that clan. As for whether all of Elegos A'Kla's appearances being appearances of his clan, I'd say no. List any sources that specifically call out his clan, even indirectly, but in general, one individual does not a clan make, IMHO. ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 13:44, July 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) Bob
 * 8) * Do we know that "A" was a strictly paternal clan? Or was it just Elegos's paternal clan?
 * 9) **"My markings are common among the Kla, the maternal clan into which I was born" is the closest I can find to answer that. He also says that his uncle Ylenic It'kla was "My mother's brother. We share the maternal line." It doesn't directly address that, but it doesn't seem like the sex of the individual within the clan is particularly important based on the second. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 21:06, July 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) *** I guess what I'm getting at is perhaps we shouldn't define A as a paternal clan, but rather as a clan, and then specify that for this one individual, it was a paternal clan (without stating that it was only for him that it was paternal, of course). ~ Savage BOB sig.png 13:40, July 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) ****How's this? NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 21:32, August 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * 12) * Context on memnsis.
 * 13) **Added. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 21:06, July 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 14) * Again, I feel it's unfair to single out Elegos as a Caamasi and not Katarn as a Human, so a species ID would be nice.
 * 15) **Added. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 21:06, July 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 16) * It's probably better to spell out when the novel was first published, since it's been reprinted and translated since then.~ Savage  BOB sig.png 13:44, July 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * 17) **That's fine. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 21:06, July 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 18) Quote! Quooooooote! Even just the one you quoted to MJ. Menkooroo 12:35, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Unidentified Yavin Runner II pilot

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 02:41, July 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:We'll be arriving at CA status in just a few minutes.

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) Please place seats in the upright position and lock tray tables ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 16:08, July 29, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2)  Sorry we are experiencing slight turbulence, please stand by. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  18:16, July 29, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * I think that you probably could determine the eye color for the pilot.
 * 3) **OK.
 * 4) * Also, mention the type of uniform he was wearing.
 * 5) **How's that?
 * 6) * When you say "the swampy moon of Yavin 4" it could either read that Yavin 4 was a swampy moon, or that Yavin 4 had a swampy moon. Please reword so that it is easily apparent which you mean.
 * 7) **See how that works.
 * 8) * Mention his affiliation to the New Jedi Order in the body of the article. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  03:55, July 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) **Got it. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:13, July 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) Bob
 * 11) * You should probably add a reference for the uniform being similar to the ones in the Battle of Yavin.
 * 12) **Done.
 * 13) * Please add categories for species and gender. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 20:02, July 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 14) **Fixed. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 02:09, July 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 15) * One more thing: Is Yavin 4 ever described as swampy? I've usually seen it as "forested" or "jungle". ~ Savage BOB sig.png 13:43, July 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 16) **Hmm, I seem to recall that in one of the NJO books it is described as swampy. But, since I can't remember which one it was, I changed it. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:28, July 28, 2011 (UTC)

Comments
 * I notice that in a lot of your noms, you start with "This [whatever] did [whatever]..." I don't really have a problem with this, but a lot of folks consider "This" as inappropriate to our articles since it doesn't sound like "a long time ago." Pay attention to the way I've bee copy editing your articles, and you'll see how to avoid this issue. :) ~ Savage BOB sig.png 20:02, July 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * I noticed that most other users user "A pilot did whatever" but I thought that it sounded like it was describing a pilot in general rather than this pilot. But, I'll agree with your experience. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 02:09, July 28, 2011 (UTC)

Unidentified Blenjeel shipwreck survivor

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 03:01, July 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Thank the Force, another CAnom. I was beginning to think that NaruHina was going to get them all...uh...ahhgg!!

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) Good work.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  21:41, July 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 14:37, July 28, 2011 (UTC)

Object Comments
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * You need to mention his fair skin in the body of the article.
 * 3) **Ok.
 * 4) * I just wanted to make sure, is the 14 ABY date from the game?
 * 5) **Yes, I believe so.
 * 6) * Can you determine the individual's hair and eye color? (I am pretty sure you can say what his hair color is.)
 * 7) **I can't really see what his eye color is, but his hair color I think is dirty-blond.
 * 8) * Would it be possible to get an image with the survivor in the center of the image instead of the current image which makes the sand burrower appear to be the crash survivor? -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  15:19, July 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) **Yea, I thought of that. And Jedi Academy doesn't have a screenshot function. But, a friend just told me that there's a cheatcode that lets you do it. So, it will take me a few days to find the cheatcode and try it. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 16:05, July 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) ***I got it quicker than I thought. That's about the best I could do. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 20:49, July 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) ****This is much better.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  21:41, July 12, 2011 (UTC)

Unidentified Tatooine moisture farmer

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:17, July 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:This is the moisture farmer you're looking for.

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) I fixed a couple of minor things, but other than these the article was good.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  21:44, July 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 14:41, July 28, 2011 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Hokk

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 02:37, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:No comment until the time limit is up. :)

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) Looks good.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  21:34, July 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 14:46, July 28, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * If you do not see Hokk in the game, I do not think that you can say he is human. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:40, July 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Fixed. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:06, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

Comments
 * I cannot find any good images to use, so if someone could find one that would be good. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 02:37, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * Given his nature as a character from a video game, you really should have gotten a picture before you nominated him. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 04:54, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * Upon further review, I found that you only hear Hokk and don't actually see him. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 16:11, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * How do you know which character is the one you come in contact with? Does his voice sound like it comes through a speaker or something? NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 22:56, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * You can hear J'aahn's voice clearly, while Hokk's voice is coming through as if through a comlink. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:10, July 14, 2011 (UTC)

J'aahn

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 02:40, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Can't think of anything...

(1 ECs/2 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 04:41, July 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:37, July 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Here's my J'aahn H'aanc'aahk: ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 22:44, August 1, 2011 (UTC)

Object Comments
 * 1) Rubedo
 * 2) * Could you look into the possibility that this character's name is a reference to Soldier of Fortune? If you can find a source saying that Raven did that intentionally, then it should be included.
 * 3) **There was rumor to that, but as far as I can see that is just speculation.
 * 4) ***Do you have Microsoft Outlook working? You can send Raven Software an email about it and see if they respond. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 22:54, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) ****I'm afraid I probably won't be able to check. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:06, July 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) *****Oh well. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 04:41, July 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) * "the dead Sith Lord Marka Ragnos" It would probably be best to list Ragnos's death year here.
 * 8) **How's that?
 * 9) * That he was affiliated with the Imperial Remnant is infobox-only. I think that just because the Diciples are affiliated with the Remnant, that does not mean its individual members are.
 * 10) **Fixed.
 * 11) * Context on Corellia, and probably Coronet City as well.
 * 12) **Got it.
 * 13) * Since he's in the level, I assume it's possible to kill him. That needs to be noted in the BTS. If he was someone that you could not possibly win the level without killing, then that counts as a canon death.
 * 14) **You can do it either way.
 * 15) * Give the name of the company that made the game in the BTS.
 * 16) **Done.
 * 17) * Say why Jaden was sent to Corellia. He wasn't there specifically to save this train.
 * 18) **Got it.
 * 19) * You may put in a pronunciation note because of the apostrophe. (How do you pronounce those anyway? Why are they put in names? Bah.) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 04:50, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 20) **I looked on a lot of different articles and I can't find an example of what you're talking about. Could you please explain better. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:04, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 21) ***For certain articles like Saleucami, Darth Caedus (In the BTS, but should also be in the intro), and Serroco, where the pronunciation may be taken different ways, we use the International Phonetic Alphabet chart for English dialects to say how they are pronounced. Since this character's name may be taken as either "John" or "Jan," I think making that distinction would be appropriate because there is a canonical pronunciation. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 22:54, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 22) ****Ummm, is that how it should look? Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:06, July 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 23) *****Afraid not. I've done it for you. You should do this for Hokk too if it isn't pronounced "hawk." NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 04:41, July 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 24) ******Thanks! Hokk is actually pronounced "Hawk" Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:15, July 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * 25) * Were they not trying to destroy the train by blowing it up? That's not the same thing as "disabling." NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 22:54, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 26) **Done. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:09, July 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 27) Bob
 * 28) * I think perhaps you should mention something about his uniform. Was it typical of the cultists? ~ Savage BOB sig.png 17:24, July 29, 2011 (UTC)
 * 29) **Done. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 20:37, July 29, 2011 (UTC)
 * 30) *** Was his uniform "much like" the others', or identical to the others? The idea of a uniform is that it's uniform from one guy to the next! ;P ~ Savage BOB sig.png 13:59, July 31, 2011 (UTC)
 * 31) ****Yea, got it. ;D Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:41, August 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * 32) ***** OK, almost there. :) Can you describe the uniform a bit? I would have done it, but the image is so dark, I can't really see it clearly. I'm thinking something like, "He wore the uniform of his cult, a brown jumpsuit with knee-high boots and a helmet" or whatever the uniform looked like. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 18:06, August 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * 33) ******OK try that. XD Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:22, August 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * Do not start a sentence with "but." NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 04:50, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Galduran Calrissian's smuggling ring

 * Nominated by:  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  22:45, July 26, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Just a kotor nom to tide me over until the barn burner.

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) Aside from a small detail, you did a good job EJ. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:38, July 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 19:19, July 31, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Bob
 * 2) * Is there any reason to believe the smuggling ring predated or outlived Calrissian? If not, I'd combine the first two sentences into something like, "A male smuggler named Garduran Calrissian led a smuggling ring in Hutt Space..."
 * 3) **Changed.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  15:44, July 31, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) * I think maybe you have too much context on the Hutts. It should be enough to say they are the indigenous species who controlled the area, not mention that they were sentient or gastropods, say.
 * 5) **You're right, I removed the extra context.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  15:44, July 31, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) * Can you add a reference to the end of the first paragraph? It sort of hangs there right now with no ref. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 14:16, July 31, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) **Oops, fixed.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  15:44, July 31, 2011 (UTC)

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E-11 blaster pistol

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:56, July 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Getting my end of the barn-burner going.

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 * 1) Good job, now I really need to finish the work on my first nominations.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:30, July 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) * Arrrgh, I hate it when I miss something. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:33, July 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) looks good <- Omicron (Leave a message at the BEEP! ) 00:16, July 29, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 18:19, August 1, 2011 (UTC)

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 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * Oops, I missed something! You forgot to mention what era the blaster was in use in the body of the article. Mentioning when the guy had the blaster is all it needs. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:33, July 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Got it. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 16:38, July 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Can you be more specific, the days of the old republic are a long time.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:41, July 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) ****How's that look? Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 16:49, July 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) *****Just what I was looking for.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:52, July 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) Bob
 * 8) * Like the other blaster noms you've got up, please state in the first sentence that the E-11 was a gun, a blaster, a weapon, something definitive.
 * 9) **Done.
 * 10) * E-11 redirects to E-11 blaster rifle. However, this article and several others (E-11 carbine, E-11 electroscope, E-11s sniper rifle) show that that's probably not the best situation. Although it's only peripheral to this nom, can you clear this up by changing E-11 to a disambiguation page for all these guns? You should then add a template to the top of the article pointing to the disambig.
 * 11) **Alrighty.
 * 12) * Can you describe Korr as a "former smuggler"? Do we know that he didn't wear an E-11 when he was still smuggling? Please be careful to word the nomination so we don't imply that he never used the gun when he was smuggling.
 * 13) **Try that.
 * 14) * Perhaps ID Korr as Human.
 * 15) **Got it.
 * 16) * Don't forget the "model" field in the infobox.
 * 17) **Got it.
 * 18) * Did he wear it in place of both blasters, or just one of them? It sounds odd if he wore it in place of two, since each would require its own holster. If you mean he carried it in place of the other two (meaning he only carried one E-11 whereas he usually carried two GH-44s), perhaps change to that. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 14:26, July 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 19) **Got it. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:32, July 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 20) I'd just like to point out that although all of these blaster articles that you have nominated do fit the def. of comprehensive article, the ones about the old republic are alikely to be mentioned in the up coming MMO game. While it is comprehensive now, it is likely not to be soon.  I know you could make that case for any article, but I'd wait til the game comes out to nominate any Old republic articles.  It would be better than nominating it now, then having to take it away later.  Just a thought. &mdash;Unsigned comment by IthinkIwannaLeia (talk &bull; contribs).
 * 21) *OK I'll keep that in mind. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:28, July 28, 2011 (UTC)

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 * This gun appeared briefly so there are no quotes. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:56, July 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * Does anyone know who wrote the above unsigned objection? We need to ID the person if this nomination is to pass. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 18:20, August 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * Oh, I thought that you posted that, seeing how it was right underneath your other objections. Let me see if I can sort it out of the history mess. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:26, August 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * After a search through the page history, I found out it was this user. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:35, August 1, 2011 (UTC)

Griff Praji

 * Nominated by: Darth Morrt 09:29, July 29, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

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 * 1)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  11:59, July 30, 2011 (UTC)

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 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * What does the last sentence have to with Griff Praji? Please explain its significance.
 * 3) **They are Griff's relatives. I reworded it a bit. Tannon Praji's FA article mentions Griff and Nahdonnis, too. Darth Morrt 11:45, July 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Much better.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  11:59, July 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) * Could you try and reword the article to make it more from Griff Praji's perspective? -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  18:08, July 29, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) **Done. Darth Morrt 11:45, July 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) ***Good work.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  11:59, July 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) Bob
 * 9) *"Praji had a son named Nahdonnis, whose daughter was Tyla. His brother, Tannon married a woman named Maree and sired a daughter, Onnelly, Praji's niece." This sentence is confusing; whose brother was Tannon, and which Praji was Onnelly the niece of? ~ Savage BOB sig.png 15:38, August 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) **Better? Tannon is already established as Griff's brother in the first paragraph. Darth Morrt 11:36, August 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) ***Better, but in the context of that sentence, it needs to be clarified that Tannon is Griff's brother, not Nahdonnis's. In other words, despite the previous paragraph's ID of Tannon as Griff's brother, the "his" in the sentence is causing dissonance. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 14:07, August 5, 2011 (UTC)

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Mouth-operated gun

 * Nominated by: ~ Savage BOB sig.png 00:29, August 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: It's officially August 1 (per the Wook's internal clock), so here's my first weapon nom! ~ Savage BOB sig.png 00:29, August 1, 2011 (UTC)

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 * 1) Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:24, August 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  20:37, August 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Good job Bob!  Kilson ( Let's have a chat ) 05:43, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

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 * 1) Cal, coming in
 * 2) * Just a couple of things. First: Is it a laser weapon, or a projectile weapon? In the article you refer to it as a "firearm" and then in the infobox as a "gun" instead of a blaster.
 * 3) * Next, I think that it would be better to say something to the effect of "larger galaxy" instead of "greater galaxy". This makes it sound like the rest of the galaxy was better than Laobi.
 * 4) * And, "a conventional model" doesn't seem to make much sense. What exactly do you mean? Is there any way that you can explain this clearer? Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:48, August 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) **Cool, thanks for the review! As or what it is, we just don't know. This article repeats the total amount of knowledge we have. My assumption would be it's a blaster weapon, but the source calls it a "gun," which could be a blaster or a slugthrower. I'm pretty sure "firearm" is synonymous with gun, and not with only blaster or slugthrower, so I used it as a synonym to avoid repetition. I can change it to "gun" if, for some reason, "firearm" only means one or the other in Star Wars.
 * 6) ***Yup, I think you're right there. Just checking for clarity.
 * 7) ****I clarified a bit based on your comment here. How's it look? ~ Savage BOB sig.png 03:29, August 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) *****That looks better.
 * 9) **As for "greater galaxy," I've used it in tons of articles, and don't think it should be a problem. "Great" can also mean "large," so this shouldn't really be an issue.
 * 10) ***Alrighty.
 * 11) **Finally, "conventional model," I think, is fine. Here, "conventional" just means "the way things are usually done, and, well, blasters and the like are not conventionally fired by a mouth, they are conventionally fired by a finger! I could conceivably change it to "hand-operated model," but I'm not sure it should be necessary. Does it make more sense now that I've explained it? ~ Savage BOB sig.png 02:28, August 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * 12) *** Sorry for not explaining this better, but for this, I didn't really have a problem with you calling it "conventional" model. But is there some you can explain this better? :P I know I sound repititious, but maybe you could somehow say that it was more expensive than a conventional blaster or something. As it stands, it sounds like your saying it was more expensive than other models of this weapon. And that would raise the question of "what other models of this weapon are there?" Maybe I'm just being a pain, but I'd appreciate it if you could clarify somehow. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 03:05, August 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * 13) ****I see what you mean. I just changed it to "hand-operated model" to avoid ambiguity. Try that. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 03:29, August 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * 14) *****That's much more clearer now. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:23, August 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * 15) ******Great, and thanks! Don't forget to strike your objections, though! :P ~ Savage BOB sig.png 18:22, August 1, 2011 (UTC)


 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * If it is not specified as a blaster, why do you have gun redirected to blaster in the infobox? I think this should be changed.
 * 3) * Just a question, but does the source specify that the range is long, or does it just call it a ranged weapon? If it is the former then your fine, but if it is the latter then you should probably just call it a ranged weapon. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  15:29, August 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) **Any better? ~ Savage BOB sig.png 18:22, August 1, 2011 (UTC)

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Dagger thorn

 * Nominated by: ~ Savage BOB sig.png 03:12, August 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: I'm reading through the Marvel Star Wars comics now, and when I saw this, I knew it was perfect for the barn burner. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 03:12, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

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 * 1) Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 03:16, August 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  03:43, August 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Hopefully this tempted you to write up the four-armed species next. :D Menkooroo 07:53, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

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Samhari

 * Nominated by: Eyrezer 13:41, August 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Created for the Knight Errant comic series

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 * 1) To paraphrase young Ani, "Yippe! Eyrezer's back!" :) ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 00:12, August 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  12:13, August 5, 2011 (UTC)

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 * 1) Just one small question, shouldn't the exact date of the release be mentioned, November 12? Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:13, August 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *Just my opinion, but I think for major releases, like books, precise dates are not really necessary (though by no means off limits either). ~ Savage BOB sig.png 00:12, August 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **That was basically going to be my response: most book and comic releases have a specific day, but I do not recall ever seeing the specific date mentioned in the BTS section. That said, if you think it needs to be there, I am happy for you to add it in. --Eyrezer 11:59, August 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) Exiled Jedi
 * 5) * A little context on the Duros Space Run would be nice.
 * 6) **Added. --Eyrezer 11:59, August 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) * Is there any further information on the "internal intrigues" of the species?
 * 8) * You refer to the species as "Sumhari" twice in the article. I just want to make sure that "Samhari" is the correct way to spell the species name, otherwise I would fix them myself. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  14:27, August 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) **Sorry, I just realized that it was an internet source.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  14:29, August 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) Bob
 * 11) * Is their homeworld called Samhar or the Samhar? ~ Savage BOB sig.png 15:05, August 3, 2011 (UTC)

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Talbot

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 20:28, August 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:I've wanted to do this for a long time.

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 * 1) Looks good.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  02:29, August 4, 2011 (UTC)

Object 'Bob'
 * Can you add just a tad of context about why the commandos sent the distress call?
 * How long was it between his responding to the distress call and the attack on the Prosecutor? ~ Savage BOB sig.png 14:09, August 5, 2011 (UTC)

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Lumiya's vibroblade

 * Nominated by:  —Tommy  9281  Wednesday, August 3, 2011, 22:46 UTC 
 * Nomination comments:"The roof! The roof! The roof is on FIRE! We don't need no water, let the mutha@&#$ BURN!"

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 * 1) Keep spinning that gold.  Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 23:51, August 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Looks good.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  02:31, August 4, 2011 (UTC)

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 * 1) Minor, but is there any way you could mention The Home and Lumiya's Sith directly in the body, so that they're not infobox-exclusive?  Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 23:39, August 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *Addressed first part, but the her Sith really aren't important enough to warrant mention. Perhaps I should it from the infobox then?  —Tommy  9281  Wednesday, August 3, 2011, 23:47 UTC 
 * 3) **Nah; on second thought, just naming Lumiya the Dark Lady should be hint enough at that fact for this article. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 23:51, August 3, 2011 (UTC)

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K26 explosive antivehicle rocket

 * Nominated by:  Riffsyphon  1024 06:12, August 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: For the barn-burner, and what a nice thing to burn a barn with.

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 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) *I would mention that it was a book in Wizards of the Coast's Star Wars Roleplaying Game.
 * 3) *You need to mention the time it was in use outside of the infobox.
 * 4) *From the game statistics you can glean some more information than what is already in the article:
 * 5) **The blast radius of the rocket is two meters. (Its the number in parenthesis next to the range increment.)
 * 6) **And the maximum range of the rocket is one hundred meters. This is determined by taking the range increment of ten meters, and since the item description doesn't say to do otherwise, multply the range increment by ten, which is the standard number of range increments in the Star Wars Roleplaying Game. There are other nominations that have used the ranges from the roleplaying game, so I do not think that it is game mechanics.
 * 7) *This was one of the first articles I ever created. Its nice to see someone nominate it.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  12:36, August 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) *You should also probably mention that its sale was legally restricted to military organizations, but there were a lot of them available (you can tell this from the availability of military and common).
 * 9) *The weapon should also be mentioned to deal shrapnel damage. (You can tell this from the damage type of slashing, which is the same type of damage that a frag grenade uses. The in-game description says that it is like a frag grenade.)-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  12:49, August 5, 2011 (UTC)

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