Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Transfer essence


 * ''The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was unsuccessful. Please do not modify it.

Transfer essence

 * Nominated by: Azra Namor—15:19 Semptember 6 2009
 * Nomination comments: This article has come a long way in the three years since its creation. It's time we recognized the importance of this power in the vast scope of the Star Wars Saga.

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 * 1) Azra, have you worked on this article at all? It still needs a lot of work; sourcing, intro and overall expansion, etc. I'd suggest you to look at Force speed to see what is expected of a Force power GA. QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 19:26, September 6, 2009 (UTC)

Comments
 * 1) With respect, Master Jinn, I am by no means this article's 'Watchman.' My name just shows up in the edit history so often because I kept making (and being forced to correct) mistakes. I have faith in the good people of Wookieepedia to do what needs doing, find what needs finding, and polish what needs polishing. Everything will turn out all right. Azra Namor
 * 2) *I don't think you understand what QuiGonJinn means. This article should be already sourced and already expanded, and if it isn't, you should be the one doing it right now as the article's nominator. Everyone else is here to review your article, not write it for you.  CC7567  (talk) 20:59, September 6, 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) *Apologies are in order. From me. Thank you, CC7567, for explaining my error (namely, blameshifting mixed with laziness) to me. The strange removal of the Citations Needed tag granted me a false sense of security. I have now sourced as many statements as I could comfortably source earlier in the day, and await further arbitration by Your Graces. Azra Namor
 * 4) **There's a few things you've done wrong with the sourcing. You only need to reference when: a) you are about to start using info from a different source, and b) at the end of each non-intro paragraph. For example, most of the refs in the first paragraph of the users section are redundant. You only need one after "periodically", one after "sabotage", and one at the end, since all the other refs are already covered. I've gone ahead and done that paragraph as an example. Furthermore, a few parts of the article are still unsourced, most notably some sentences at the end of paragraphs. Please go through and fix this. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 12:41, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

Remove nomination (AgriCorps vote only)

 * 1) For so many reasons. Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 21:02, September 6, 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) Per nominator's unwillingness to work on their own article.  Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 21:04, September 6, 2009 (UTC)
 * 3)  Grunny  ( Talk ) 12:46, September 7, 2009 (UTC)