Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Tauht


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Tauht

 * Nominated by: QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 09:22, 30 July 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: A redshirt-type character, whose article has somehow reached 1,082 words. Enjoy.

(6 Inqs/2 Users/8 Total)
Support
 * 1)  CC7567  (talk) 06:23, 30 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) Too bad Jedi are used as redshirts.--Jedi Kasra (talk) 18:09, September 25, 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) --  —Harrar  ( Cut the comm chatter ) 11:07, October 20, 2009 (UTC)
 * 4)  IFYLOFD  ( You will pay the price for your lack of vision! ) 22:51, October 23, 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) ~ SavageBob 22:12, October 24, 2009 (UTC)
 * 6) --Eyrezer 23:48, October 27, 2009 (UTC)
 * 7) QGJ Doesn't disappoint. —Tommy9281  Dark side Master SWGTCG.jpg ( No truth in me ) 16:13, November 6, 2009 (UTC)
 * 8) Green Tentacle (Talk) 21:18, November 6, 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) IFYLOFD:
 * 2) * "Along with Jedi Masters Kit Fisto and Plo Koon, he was dispatched to the planet Khorm in order to secure the valuable Agrocite ore, which had been captured by the Separatists." Why is the agrocite ore valuable?
 * 3) **Addressed.
 * 4) * " However, the communication tower was destroyed by explosives detonated by Ventress." Give some kind of time placement for this. Was it as Tauht tried to contact Koon?
 * 5) **Addressed.
 * 6) * "Having been warned not to underestimate Ventress," When?
 * 7) **The exact timeframe is unknown. I hope "previously" should do the trick...
 * 8) *Other than that, looks good.  IFYLOFD  ( You will pay the price for your lack of vision! ) 05:46, 2 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 9) **Thanks for review. QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 16:49, 3 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 10) From the Chron-O-John of Green Tentacle:
 * 11) * The bit about Ozzel revealing the Jedi's location "out of cowardice" seems a little POV. Probably better just to say he revealed it.
 * 12) **He was clearly depicted as a coward throughout the entire comic and that scene in particular, but whatever. Removed that part.
 * 13) * More of a comment than an objection but I don't think there's enough to justify both P&T and P&A since he doesn't have any particularly interesting powers. You could merge the two and stick a subheading in the biography if you want to keep the other quote. Green Tentacle (Talk) 20:15, October 27, 2009 (UTC)
 * 14) **I understand where you're coming from, but other people here tend to follow the rules too strictly and enforce the inclusion of P&Ts and P&As as long as there's any&mdash;no matter how little&mdash;information available. I just don't want to get into disputes over that, and that's why I added the P&A in the first place. QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 21:02, November 5, 2009 (UTC)
 * 15) Tommy:
 * 16) * I know it's probably this way for reason, but please see if you can rework the fourth paragraph of the bio to read more from Tauht's POV. As it stands, he's only mentioned in the last sentence of that paragraph.
 * 17) **I've made some slight adjustments, but that's all I can think off. Tauht doesn't speak a single word during that meeting :P
 * 18) *That's all. I really enjoy reading your stuff, QGJ. —Tommy9281 Dark side Master SWGTCG.jpg ( No truth in me ) 22:25, October 29, 2009 (UTC)
 * 19) **Glad you liked it. Thanks for your review. QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 21:02, November 5, 2009 (UTC)

Comments


 * Single source for now. I'll source the article if he gets mentioned in the subsequent issues.
 * Being a redshirt, he was completely forgotten after his death... QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 14:24, September 17, 2009 (UTC)
 * P&T and P&A are pretty minimal, but that's all there is to say about him. QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 09:22, 30 July 2009 (UTC)
 * http://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/Cannon. Cannon can work as the singular or plural; as far as I know Webster is an American English dictionary. Please re-introduce [sic] if I am incorrect. -- —Harrar  ( Cut the comm chatter ) 11:17, October 20, 2009 (UTC)
 * Should it be "Master Koon" or "Master Plo?" Obi-Wan uses "Master Plo" in Republic Heroes, so that's why I ask. ~ SavageBob 14:52, October 23, 2009 (UTC)
 * His last name is Koon, not Plo, and I'm sure you're aware of whether we currently use first or last names in articles.  CC7567  (talk) 19:47, October 23, 2009 (UTC)
 * Exactly. On a side note, I actually believe that it is acceptable to use both first and last names with the "Master" title, as I remember hearing "Master Obi-Wan" somewhere. QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 20:38, October 23, 2009 (UTC)
 * Well, that's what I'm asking: For Kel Dor, which is the family name, and which is the given name? In our own galaxy, for instance, the Japanese routinely place the family name first and the given name last. Are we therefore sure that Kel Dor follow Western practice rather than do as the Japanese? Is he Master Plo or Master Koon? ~ SavageBob 22:46, October 23, 2009 (UTC)
 * There are no sources on this matter to my knowledge, so unless you have a source that says the contrary, Koon is his last name. You're better off asking this somewhere else than here to get a more definite response.  CC7567  (talk) 22:55, October 23, 2009 (UTC)