Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Chasdemonus Route


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Chasdemonus Route

 * Nominated by: &mdash; TK-999  Era-imp.png( Rise of the Empire ) 17:02, May 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Obscure Unknown Regions hyperlane. Comes complete with infobox and reflist.

(1 ECs/3 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 22:17, May 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2)  Gethralkin  Hyperwave  15:55, May 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) More hyperlanes, please! :) ~  Savage  BOB sig.png 17:52, May 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) Chiss back-door.  Imperators II (Talk) 22:02, May 17, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) gethralkin
 * 2) * Not sure if this is just my personal preference or if it is really how the sourcing guidelines dictate, but your citations would look better if listed immediately after the end punctuation of each sentence they appear in.  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 15:28, May 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **This is preferable when possible, but if a sentence contains two pieces of information that cannot be referenced to the same source, the references should be separate.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 15:31, May 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) *** I was thinking that (for instance) "The Chasdemonus Route was a hyperspace lane in the Unknown Regions.[1][2]" would be more appropriate than, "The Chasdemonus Route was a hyperspace lane[2] in the Unknown Regions.[1]" I know we aren't MLA format here, but sentences still looks better when not broken up in the middle with a citation.  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 15:43, May 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) ****It does look better, but the problem is that it implies that both sources contain all the info in that sentence, which isn't necessarily true.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 15:46, May 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) *****That makes sense, I'm convinced.  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 15:55, May 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) SavageBob
 * 8) * Can you add some galactic coordinates? Like, it started off at [blah blah blah], at galactic coordinates X-#. It then headed west through galactic coordinates [X-1]-#." Something like that. :)
 * 9) **Aren't Atlas grid coords infobox-exclusive?&mdash; TK-999  Era-imp.png( Rise of the Empire ) 16:30, May 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) *** Actually, a recent community decision was that there shouldn't be any infobox-exclusive info for any articles. I'd say coordinates for a hyperspace route should be in the infobox and in the body, if possible. ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 16:40, May 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) ****Addressed.&mdash; TK-999  Era-imp.png( Rise of the Empire ) 17:23, May 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 12) * Finally, I don't think the page number it's on is necessary within the body of the article. It's cool in the notes, but probably not necessary in the article proper. Nice work! ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 16:28, May 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 13) **Done. Thanks for the review!&mdash; TK-999  Era-imp.png( Rise of the Empire ) 16:30, May 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 14) *** I noticed one more thing: the map in the Atlas shows more of the route than is currently featured in the infobox image. Would it be possible to get an infobox pic that shows the full length of the route that we know of? ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 16:40, May 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 15) ****Unfortunately, the legend and headings in the source image are in the way, and my limited GIMP abilities are not enough to remove them.&mdash; TK-999  Era-imp.png( Rise of the Empire ) 17:23, May 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 16) ***** I see what you mean. This happens with comic books all the time, though, where we can't remove word balloons, so I'd say just go ahead and crop the image so that it shows the whole route (or all we know of) and forget the legend. It may be ugly, but it'll at least be comprehensive! :) ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 17:25, May 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 17) ******I just found a way to remove them, so I uploaded an expanded version.&mdash; TK-999  Era-imp.png( Rise of the Empire ) 17:36, May 16, 2011 (UTC)

Comments
 * 1) Changed "this" to "that" since "this" is indicating present.  Imperators II (Talk) 18:03, May 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *Thanks for the copy-edit. I never notice such tiny inconsistencies.&mdash; TK-999  Era-imp.png( Rise of the Empire ) 18:05, May 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Is this your first CAN? If so, welcome!&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 22:17, May 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) *Thanks! It is indeed the first.&mdash; TK-999  Era-imp.png( Rise of the Empire ) 12:49, May 16, 2011 (UTC)