Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Liberation of Gerrard V


 * ''The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was unsuccessful. Please do not modify it.

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Support
 * 1) DjMack 19:46, 27 June 2008 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) The Anvil
 * 2) * Add the (goodnom) tag.
 * 3) * Source infobox.
 * 4) * Unsource opening.
 * 5) *Beginning of "background" could use a rewrite.
 * 6) *No BTS?
 * 7) *No quotes?
 * 8) *The quote you do have in there needs to be formatted properly, and devoid of pipelinks.
 * 9) *Cursory glance. —Tommy9281 [[Image:Red lightsaber.png|20px]] ( Peace is a lie ) 10:08, 28 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 10) Xadún's Dun Möch:
 * 11) *"A failed revolt against the Empire had taken place two years prior." Ends abruptly for an opening, just round off this sentence.
 * 12) *The whole "The initial revolt" section could do with improving. It's just short sentences and sounds really disjointed. Make it flow more. Also, Moff is a title and is capitalized.
 * 13) *"128th Counterattack" - Open a section straight away with a quote if you decide to have one. Consult the Manuel of Style for help with your layout. This shuld help with some of your linking too.
 * 14) *Echoing Tommy, for a first attempt at a GAN it's ok. A lot can be improved, but don't let people's criticisms put you off. Take them in your stride and correct them. The next GAN you do will be even better as a result! Ask if you need help. Darth Xadún ( Consult the Holocron ) 20:55, 2 July 2008 (UTC)

Comments
 * Nice to see a different user up here for a change. DjMack, please remember to leave a note on the GAN page after you've addressed any objections, so the objector knows to go and have a looksee. You're doing fine by the way, and if you need help with any of the others, just ask. —Tommy9281 [[Image:Red lightsaber.png|20px]] ( Peace is a lie ) 16:16, 1 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Thanks. Actually, I've been here for a few years, I think suppressed my Star Wars obsession for a long time, which recently exploded. Hence I'm back here again. ;) DjMack 00:02, 6 July 2008 (UTC)