Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Ven (clone trooper)


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Ven (clone trooper)

 * Nominated by: Darth Rage Leave a message after the beep


 * Nomination comments:My first nomination

(2 ECs/2 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1) I cleaned up my only objection, which was some clunky wording.  Trak Nar  Ramble on 21:08, August 13, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) &mdash; 23:04, August 13, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) -- 1358  (Talk) 13:25, August 14, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) Discussed with DarthRage via IRC.  —Xwing328 (Talk) 23:16, August 14, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * The quote: The "unidentified clone trooper" is OOU. Use "A clone trooper" instead.
 * Done  Darth Rage Leave a message after the beep 16:55, August 8, 2010 (UTC)
 * Link for the battle on Qiilura?
 * Not a named battle, cannot find article.  Darth Rage Leave a message after the beep
 * Create an article, then link it.
 * Created article and linked it.  DarthRage Leave a message after the beep
 * Context on the colonists.
 * Could you elaborate?  Darth Rage Leave a message after the beep 16:55, August 8, 2010 (UTC
 * If you have 'the', you need context. If it is not known what colonists they were, please remove 'the'.
 * Removed.  DarthRage Leave a message after the beep 20:26, August 11, 2010 (UTC)
 * Underlinking (Jedi General, artillery for example).
 * Better? Darth Rage Leave a message after the beep
 * Levet is a link to a redirect.
 * Fixed Darth Rage Leave a message after the beep
 * AT-TE and LAAT/i are also.
 * Fixed all three.  DarthRage Leave a message after the beep
 * "His brothers gave..." Brothers? "His fellow clones troopers.." would be better.
 * Fixed  Darth Rage Leave a message after the beep 16:55, August 8, 2010 (UTC)
 * Could you link to the specific gunship?
 * Fixed. Per IRC  Darth Rage Leave a message after the beep 16:55, August 8, 2010 (UTC
 * The Bts needs to be rewritten. It should contain from where the info comes (for example "Ven was a character introduced in RC:TC, which was released on .").
 * Done  Darth Rage Leave a message after the beep 16:55, August 8, 2010 (UTC)
 * Possibly more to come. -- 1358  (Talk) 07:11, August 8, 2010 (UTC)
 * One more thing: Use in the infobox. See other GAs/FAs for examples. --  1358  (Talk) 05:19, August 14, 2010 (UTC)
 * Fixed, with your help.  DarthRage Leave a message after the beep 13:18, August 14, 2010 (UTC)

Comments
 * This article is being discussed on the IRC. So corrections are being made.
 * No objections, but keep in mind that context in important. Also, there is no need to put the whole source for every ref. You're doing " every time. It's much easier if you do, after you put the first reference for a particular source. This is a suggestion, though, but, like I said, it's much easier.&mdash;  23:02, August 13, 2010 (UTC)