Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Shirb system

Shirb system

 * Nominated by: OtterSurf (talk) 08:33, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

Zed

 * The grid coordinates should be mentioned in the BTS since that's currently infobox-exclusive.
 * Done. OtterSurf (talk) 09:04, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
 * This article formerly stated that the system was located on the Celanon Spur, as do the New Holgha and Celanon Spur articles. Is there a reason why it was removed?
 * I checked TEA, and it only lists Ciutric as being on the Spur. OtterSurf (talk) 09:00, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
 * Is there a date for the invasion?
 * Added. OtterSurf (talk) 09:00, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
 * Done better. OtterSurf (talk) 09:14, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
 * The evidence in the reference note could still technically mean that the invasion happened in 26 ABY, if the start of the Yuuzhan Vong invasion occurred near the end of the year. Zed42 (talk) 09:28, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
 * The way I read it from the Chronology, the invasion began more or less at the start of 25 ABY. OtterSurf (talk) 11:00, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
 * The BTS should also include the publication dates of the sources mentioned. Zed42 (talk) 08:50, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
 * Done. OtterSurf (talk) 09:02, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
 * You can use the ID template rather than C in the Sources section. Zed42 (talk) 09:28, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
 * Done. OtterSurf (talk) 10:57, September 13, 2019 (UTC)

Imp

 * The Essential Atlas places the Shirb system in grid square N-5 and designates that entire square as part of the New Territories. This must be reflected in the infobox and the body.  Imperators II (Talk) 12:41, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
 * Done. OtterSurf (talk) 13:46, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
 * Right now, you're referencing "that contained the world of New Holgha" to the Online Companion. That doesn't work.  Imperators II (Talk) 16:21, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
 * Fixed. OtterSurf (talk) 17:16, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
 * Please upload an image for the infobox and create an image category for it. The Yuuzhan Vong War maps of the Atlas depict the system, and I'd go with one of the maps depicting the latter phases of the conflict given they show the system's environs more clearly.  Imperators II (Talk) 12:41, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
 * Done. OtterSurf (talk) 13:58, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
 * I'm not seeing the image category.  Imperators II (Talk) 16:21, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
 * Never mind, it should be category of images of New Holgha.  Imperators II (Talk) 17:01, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
 * Also, those maps clearly place the system on the Celanon Spur.  Imperators II (Talk) 12:41, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
 * Yup. OtterSurf (talk) 13:46, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
 * This is not reflected in the article proper.  Imperators II (Talk) 16:21, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
 * Done. OtterSurf (talk) 17:06, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
 * Context for the hyperlane, please.  Imperators II (Talk) 17:11, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
 * Fixed. OtterSurf (talk) 17:40, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
 * There's ample precedent on our site, when describing a star system, to mention any known arrivals/departures in/from that system. For example, if Boba Fett: A Practical Man mentions Boba Fett was on New Holgha, you should mention that Fett traveled to New Holgha.  Imperators II (Talk) 12:41, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
 * Mm-hm. OtterSurf (talk) 13:46, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
 * The Atlas listing the Shirb system as "New Holgha" in the Appendix is not "incorrect". It is named like that for convenience, and that's not meant to replace the system's canonical name. See here. Therefore, that bit should be removed from the BTS.  Imperators II (Talk) 12:41, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
 * Done. OtterSurf (talk) 13:46, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
 * The mention of the Online Companion in the BTS adds no new information and should be removed.  Imperators II (Talk) 12:41, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
 * Fixed. OtterSurf (talk) 13:46, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
 * Context for Boba Fett.  Imperators II (Talk) 16:21, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
 * Done. OtterSurf (talk) 17:00, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
 * I'd prefer something clearer to the casual reader who might not be well-versed in Mando'a, i.e., leader of the Mandalorian Protectors or something to that effect.  Imperators II (Talk) 17:05, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
 * Please see item No. 5 here regarding the first sentence of the article.  Imperators II (Talk) 16:21, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
 * The Atlas Yuuzhan Vong War maps contain information that should be reflected: 1) in the Affiliation field of the article's infobox, and 2) as an affiliation category for the article.  Imperators II (Talk) 16:21, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
 * Added. OtterSurf (talk) 17:07, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
 * Regarding categorization, the same goes for Yuuzhan Vong.  Imperators II (Talk) 17:11, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
 * There's no such category. OtterSurf (talk) 17:35, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
 * That means you should create it.  Imperators II (Talk) 17:38, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
 * The table of contents should only be utilized when there are sections in the in-universe sections of the article. Since this article only has out-of-universe (BTS and further) sections, you should hide the TOC by specifying .  Imperators II (Talk) 16:21, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
 * Done! OtterSurf (talk) 17:00, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
 * The semi-colon is unnecessary in this article, please make do without it.  Imperators II (Talk) 16:21, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
 * Fixed. OtterSurf (talk) 16:58, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
 * I can't find the mention of the Shirb system in the New Essential Chronology. Could you provide the page number please?  Imperators II (Talk) 16:53, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
 * I added it as a source because of the 25 ABY information. If it's not apropos I'll remove it. OtterSurf (talk) 16:58, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
 * That's not how the Sources section on our site works, OtterSurf. You only list media under Appearances/Sources if they actually feature/mention the article's subject.  Imperators II (Talk) 17:05, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
 * I'll fix it. OtterSurf (talk) 17:07, September 13, 2019 (UTC)

Fan

 * "It was invaded by the Yuuzhan Vong during their invasion of the galaxy in 25 ABY." You use a form of invade twice in one sentence. I think the battle pipelink can be switched to "attacked" or something similar.  Fan26  ( Talk ) 17:22, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
 * Done. OtterSurf (talk) 17:37, September 13, 2019 (UTC)