Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Samuro


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Samuro

 * Nominated by: Jedi Kasra (comlink) 01:50, February 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: &hellip;and the dude that PWNed her, with Mace Windu's help. Sammy's droid will be here soon&hellip;

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1) --Eyrezer 08:33, February 22, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2)  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  21:08, February 24, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 23:37, February 26, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) Xd  20:55, February 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) Toprawa and Ralltiir 20:55, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) "to give it the Jedi that would eventually arrive on the world..." Can this be changed to "the next Jedi to arrive on the world" or something? Is that accurate? ie, did he foresee that Windu would arrive, or did he just say "give this to the next Jedi to land here?"  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  00:11, February 24, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) *Z-18 tells Windu "to the Jedi who would come". He didn't specify that Samuro thought of Windu or anything.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 00:13, February 24, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) Soresu
 * 4) * No mention of the words of banishment or the creation of the holocron in the P&A?
 * 5) **I mentioned the holocron creation in the P&A, not much I can say on the incantation&hellip;--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 13:26, February 25, 2010 (UTC)
 * 6) * Intro could be cut down a little. Maybe remove some from the sentences pertaining more to Windu? SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 08:32, February 25, 2010 (UTC)
 * 7) **Not really sure what I could cut out. I omitted the part which says Windu was searching for the clones. Is that OK?--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 13:26, February 25, 2010 (UTC)
 * 8) ***Samuro's message revealed that while he could not defeat her alone, he would be able to defeat her with Windu's assistance. This one is kinda borderline important, but could go IMO (hey that rhymes), considering the intro's current length.  SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 22:06, February 25, 2010 (UTC)
 * 9) ****Got it. Please try it.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 14:17, February 26, 2010 (UTC)
 * 10) * Forgot about this one: Windu confronted Rajine and activated the holocron. This is very short, and doesn't really "feel" right, considering the length of the other sentences. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 20:38, February 26, 2010 (UTC)
 * 11) **Please try it.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 20:43, February 26, 2010 (UTC)
 * 12) Toprawa:
 * 13) * Potentially more of a query than objection, but what's the deal with the spaces between ellipses in the quotes in the article? For example, in the introductory quote you leave a space between the ellipsis and "a Jedi Knight," but in the P/A quote, there is no space between the ellipsis. Is this literally how it is presented in the source? Please double check what you have is exact. Toprawa and Ralltiir 06:37, March 5, 2010 (UTC)
 * 14) **Yeah, the way it's in the article is the way both quotes are in the actual story. Thanks for the review, Tope.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 20:53, March 5, 2010 (UTC)
 * 15) ***Ok, good deal. Good job on making sure these are right. Toprawa and Ralltiir 20:55, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

Comments


 * Can't believe I missed this earlier. In the lead quote, Z-18 calls Samuro a Jedi Knight, yet throughout the article you refer to him as a Master. How come?  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 21:16, February 24, 2010 (UTC)
 * The CSWE refers to him as being a Master. If you want, I can make note of this in the BTS.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 01:44, February 25, 2010 (UTC)
 * Is he referred to throughout the comic as a Jedi Knight, or he his rank just mentioned that one time?  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 21:19, February 25, 2010 (UTC)
 * Just once, by Z-18. Z-18's, Rajine's, and Samuro's entries in the CSWE all refer to Sammy as a Master, I believe. I'll double-check.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 14:17, February 26, 2010 (UTC)
 * Turns out I was wrong, in Z-18 and Rajine's entries, Samuro is referred to as a Knight. Samuro's entry is the only one that refers to him as a Master. Corrected and added info in BTS.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 19:18, February 26, 2010 (UTC)