Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Unidentified Yavin Runner II pilot


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Unidentified Yavin Runner II pilot

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 02:41, July 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:We'll be arriving at CA status in just a few minutes.

(2 ECs/1 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) Please place seats in the upright position and lock tray tables ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 16:08, July 29, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2)  Sorry we are experiencing slight turbulence, please stand by. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  18:16, July 29, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Menkooroo 02:32, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * I think that you probably could determine the eye color for the pilot.
 * 3) **OK.
 * 4) * Also, mention the type of uniform he was wearing.
 * 5) **How's that?
 * 6) * When you say "the swampy moon of Yavin 4" it could either read that Yavin 4 was a swampy moon, or that Yavin 4 had a swampy moon. Please reword so that it is easily apparent which you mean.
 * 7) **See how that works.
 * 8) * Mention his affiliation to the New Jedi Order in the body of the article. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  03:55, July 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) **Got it. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:13, July 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) Bob
 * 11) * You should probably add a reference for the uniform being similar to the ones in the Battle of Yavin.
 * 12) **Done.
 * 13) * Please add categories for species and gender. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 20:02, July 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 14) **Fixed. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 02:09, July 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 15) * One more thing: Is Yavin 4 ever described as swampy? I've usually seen it as "forested" or "jungle". ~ Savage BOB sig.png 13:43, July 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 16) **Hmm, I seem to recall that in one of the NJO books it is described as swampy. But, since I can't remember which one it was, I changed it. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:28, July 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 17) Just wanna check --- is it not "the" Yavin Runner II? Our article on Yavin Runner II uses "the." Menkooroo 16:28, August 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 18) *Fixed. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:59, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Comments
 * I notice that in a lot of your noms, you start with "This [whatever] did [whatever]..." I don't really have a problem with this, but a lot of folks consider "This" as inappropriate to our articles since it doesn't sound like "a long time ago." Pay attention to the way I've bee copy editing your articles, and you'll see how to avoid this issue. :) ~ Savage BOB sig.png 20:02, July 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * I noticed that most other users user "A pilot did whatever" but I thought that it sounded like it was describing a pilot in general rather than this pilot. But, I'll agree with your experience. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 02:09, July 28, 2011 (UTC)