Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Ahri Raas


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Ahri Raas

 * Nominated by: Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 18:31, 30 June 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Jujiggum returns to FotJ and the WP:LE scene with a brand new GAnom, fresh from the pages of Omen!!

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support > JangFett  Talk 18:37, 30 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) Good work Jonny :) <span style="font-variant: small-caps; font-family: Verdana; font-size: 12px"
 * 1)  Graestan ( Talk ) 01:56, 1 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 06:06, 2 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) Excellent stuff, Jon :-).  Grunny  ( Talk ) 09:58, 2 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 4)  CC7567  (talk) 19:32, 3 July 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Soresu
 * 2) * A bit of explaination about what a tyro is.
 * 3) **Well, Tyro seems to be roughly the equivilent of Jedi Initiate, but this is just speculation. Also, it is used as context for the article's main character, and shouldn't have to be explained.
 * 4) * Member is a little repetitive in the first paragraph of the bio. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 05:16, 1 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) **Changed. Thanks for the review :). Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 19:37, 1 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 6) Attack of the Clone
 * 7) * Please check the second sentence of the bio. The context is running off in all different directions, and I'm not sure when it ends; I would recommend using dashes. If dashes can't be used, I recommend trying to reword the sentence so that it's clear what's context and what applies to Raas.
 * 8) **I tried adding a dash, but I can reword if you like.
 * 9) *Very nice, Jon. Don't worry; we're bracing ourselves for the Omen rush. :P  CC7567  (talk) 03:39, 3 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 10) **Don't worry, it's on its way! :P Thanks for the review, CC! :) Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 11:23, 3 July 2009 (UTC)

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