Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/The Clone Wars: The Fall of Falleen


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The Clone Wars: The Fall of Falleen

 * Nominated by:  Mauser  Comlink 19:53, 22 August 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Another webcomic. I really hope you aren't tired of them yet.

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1) Possibly add a quote for the summary, but other than that, Great work :)  JangFett  Talk 20:27, 22 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) Toprawa and Ralltiir 22:25, September 9, 2009 (UTC)
 * 3)  Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 23:51, September 9, 2009 (UTC)
 * 4)  CC7567  (talk) 07:38, September 14, 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 11:57, September 15, 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Toprawa:
 * 2) * What "city"? Just because this is a summary of the comic, don't skip out on necessary descriptive detail. Don't assume anyone has read this comic to know what is going on: "A battle droid reports to General Grievous, Supreme Commander of the Droid Armies, that the city has fallen"
 * 3) **Funny, but the comic doesn't specify what city it is, not does it imply that it's the capital. Will the change to "a city" be sufficient?
 * 4) ***Yes. Toprawa and Ralltiir 22:25, September 9, 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) *This isn't an objection, but I'm starting to get tired of reading the exact same thing in every one of these OOU TCW articles. The breaking point for copy and pasting content from one article to the next is going to come sooner than later. Toprawa and Ralltiir 22:16, September 3, 2009 (UTC)
 * 6) **Personally I try to introduce some variety, but the articles by the very nature are very similar - with the exception of the summary part of course. Thanks for the look.  Mauser  Comlink 01:30, September 5, 2009 (UTC)
 * 7) Attack of the Clone
 * 8) * "while destroying the gatekeeper droids left the king oblivious of a second intruder within the fortress": I really can't tell which sentence (or which part of what sentence) you're trying to link this to. Please try to reword for clarity.
 * 9) **Tweaked a bit, please check if that's better.
 * 10) ***It's still unclear who caused the "destruction of the droids."  CC7567  (talk) 18:31, September 10, 2009 (UTC)
 * 11) ****Earlier in the text: "She kills two of the bodyguards before using the Force to destroy the gatekeeper droids as well." I though that was sufficient.  Mauser  Comlink 11:30, September 11, 2009 (UTC)
 * 12) * Please note that the "Battle of Falleen" is a conjecturally-titled article. Unless you can provide adequate reasoning for the contrary, it's not proper to directly refer to it that way.  CC7567  (talk) 07:32, September 10, 2009 (UTC)
 * 13) **Hmm, but it is the battle of Falleen nonetheless. Decapitalized.  Mauser  Comlink 08:30, September 10, 2009 (UTC)

Comments


 * Facepalm. Forgot the quote. Fixed now, thanks for the review, Jang.  Mauser  Comlink 20:35, 22 August 2009 (UTC)
 * I don't mean to pick on this particular article, because it's the same in all the recent flurry of webcomic GANs, but the coverage of this is really minimalist. I know this is GA and it's only a short webcomic, but it pales in comparison to some of our other OOU works articles, and I think it could be more in depth and fleshed out, better researched, blah blah blah. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 23:58, 24 August 2009 (UTC)
 * Well, it's a really short webcomic with little to no background or production info available. Actually I did some research - checked both TFN and Dark Horse forum threads for the webcomics, where VIPs are known to post. And in case of some other comics it did reveal some new info (see issues 1, 3 and 5). But in this case - nothing more can be said. If you show me some new sources and/or links, I'd be happy to research them.  Mauser  Comlink 00:45, 25 August 2009 (UTC)