Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Cornelius Evazan/Canon

Cornelius Evazan/Canon

 * Nominated by:  AV-6R7 User talk:AV-6R7 05:20, May 28, 2015 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

Grunny

 * As a quick preliminary objection, you have infobox-exclusive info that needs to be covered in the article body.  grunny &#64; wookieepedia :&#126;$ 08:13, May 28, 2015 (UTC)
 * Which specific piece of information are you referring to? -  AV-6R7 User talk:AV-6R7 15:28, May 28, 2015 (UTC)
 * Height, hair color, eye color, and skin color. There should be no information exclusive to the infobox.  grunny &#64; wookieepedia :&#126;$ 15:32, May 28, 2015 (UTC)
 * Here's what I'd recommend. Remove the bit about how he's "a male human" from the Biography. Add that into the Personality and traits, along with the height, hair color, eye color, and skin color. Those are all physical traits that, when available, should always be in the P&T section. - Brandon Rhea (talk) 15:34, May 28, 2015 (UTC)
 * Fixed. -  AV-6R7 User talk:AV-6R7 17:24, May 28, 2015 (UTC)

Brandon

 * There are, unfortunately, way too many images in this article. I'd recommend removing the image of Evazan's clinic, as well as the image of Evazan with the blaster. Then, add the image of Evazan in the cantina to the Biography section, left-aligned. Keep the image in the Behind the scenes section.
 * Fixed. -  AV-6R7 User talk:AV-6R7 17:24, May 28, 2015 (UTC)
 * I'm thinking about replacing the infobox image with File:Evazan with blaster.jpg. How does it look? -  AV-6R7 User talk:AV-6R7 18:08, May 28, 2015 (UTC)
 * Looks good to me. - Brandon Rhea (talk) 22:39, May 28, 2015 (UTC)
 * Cool, I just hated the thought of such a good image going to waste. -  AV-6R7 User talk:AV-6R7 22:51, May 28, 2015 (UTC)
 * The last paragraph of the Behind the scenes section is unsourced. That will need to be corrected. - Brandon Rhea (talk) 15:38, May 28, 2015 (UTC)
 * Done. -  AV-6R7 User talk:AV-6R7 17:02, May 29, 2015 (UTC)

Hands

 * Preliminary objection: While this may count as a sofixit, I know for a fact this article is missing Canon sources from SW.com, and unfortunately the Encyclopedia is now obsolete, as that could have had more stuff too. Please do a more thorough source check on that website, which so many users seemed to overlook back in the time of the Legends continuity. To be fair though, at least there's nothing listed on the Legends article that was carelessly overlooked here. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 16:46, May 28, 2015 (UTC)
 * I managed to find a few sources I had previously overlooked. Interestingly, the Mos Eisley Cantina Biography Gallery claims him to be an alien. Bts material? -  AV-6R7 User talk:AV-6R7 17:52, May 28, 2015 (UTC)
 * Interesting. Tbh I think it's too minor to be needed, but I guess the article can go with or without one. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 22:21, May 28, 2015 (UTC)
 * Please fix the redlink, as now GAs can't have any.
 * I just requested that T&R restore the previously deleted page. -  AV-6R7 User talk:AV-6R7 22:44, May 28, 2015 (UTC)
 * The article should have been restored before the nomination date. Also I fail to see why it's the responsibility of the user who deleted an article to restore it. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 21:16, May 29, 2015 (UTC)
 * This is a bit embarrising, but how do I restore a page? I asked because I assumed only admins could do it. -  AV-6R7 User talk:AV-6R7 21:31, May 29, 2015 (UTC)
 * I notice a lot of extrapolation in the personality and traits, when the sources, which I have read myself to verify, didn't say anything about that being his general behavior, as opposed to just how he acted that fateful day. Of course, was it most likely his overall personality? I'd say so. But given that nothing mentions him having an overall enjoyment "bullying those he considered to be easy targets," being "quick to escalate arguments" and "resort to violence," please reword the section accordingly. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 22:21, May 28, 2015 (UTC)
 * Changed to more specifically mention context. Also, should physical traits go before or after psychological ones? -  AV-6R7 User talk:AV-6R7 23:00, May 28, 2015 (UTC)
 * I don't think there's any precedent of which goes first. I'm used to putting the physical traits last for a lot of my articles, which is based on my observing others' quality articles, but I don't think it matters, and either is fine. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 23:28, May 28, 2015 (UTC)
 * As his name is never mentioned in the film itself, please establish in the behind the scenes section when that name was brought back into canon. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 23:33, May 28, 2015 (UTC)
 * Added. Turns out that Tricia Barr is credited as Patricia Barr in Ultimate Star Wars. Funny. -  AV-6R7 User talk:AV-6R7 23:51, May 28, 2015 (UTC)