Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations



This page is for the nomination of "comprehensive articles". For a list of "comprehensive articles", see Category:Wookieepedia comprehensive articles.


 * Comprehensive article nominations history
 * Comprehensive article nominations archiving checklist

What is a "comprehensive article?"

A "comprehensive article" is an article that contains all information regarding the topic. Often, "comprehensive articles" cannot reach Featured or Good Article status due to their limited content. This process is intended to recognize articles that contain all relevant canon information, yet are still under the 250 word limit required for a Good Article. The purpose of this is twofold&mdash;firstly, to help users distinguish what is a stub, and what is merely a short article with no further relevant material to be added, and, more importantly, to highlight for the reader when they are reading something that has been judged definitely "comprehensive"&mdash;that is, a guarantee to the reader that whatever they are reading contains the sum total of all available content.

Nominations and promotions of the Comprehensive article process are overseen by a collective of users known as the "EduCorps," which is made up of the Inquisitorius, the AgriCorps, and various other experienced users who are considered qualified to adequately judge the nominated material.

Lucasfilm Ltd. and its many licensees continue to expand the Star Wars universe. Since new information might become available, it may be necessary to revoke a "comprehensive article's" status. A forum will be used to nominate articles that have fallen out-of-date. Members of the EduCorps will then post a warning template on that page, and a grace period of one week will be instituted in which the article can be improved. If there is a significant amount of new information, it is likely that once updated, the article will become eligible for Good article status, and thereby ineligible for Comprehensive article status.

READ THIS FIRST!

An article must&hellip;


 * 1) &hellip;be well-written and detailed.
 * 2) &hellip;be unbiased, non-point of view.
 * 3) &hellip;be sourced with all available sources and appearances.
 * 4) &hellip;follow the Manual of Style, Layout Guide, and all other policies on Wookieepedia. This is, of course, within reason. If a topic only has a very limited degree of content that cannot be divided up into the relevant article sections, it is not required that it follow the Layout Guide precisely. This is to be judged on a case-by-case basis.
 * 5) &hellip;following the review process, be stable, i.e., does not change significantly from day to day and is not the subject of ongoing edit wars. This does not apply to vandalism and protection or semi-protection as a result of vandalism.
 * 6) &hellip;not be tagged with any sort of improvement tags (i.e. more sources, expand, etc).
 * 7) &hellip;have no redlinks.
 * 8) &hellip;have all relevant canon information presented.
 * 9) &hellip;be completely referenced for all available material and sources. See Sourcing for more information. While this is not required for an article possessing a singular source, it is encouraged, as it provides both uniformity and a good infrastructure should the topic be referenced in any future materials.
 * 10) &hellip;have all quotes and images sourced.
 * 11) &hellip;provide at least one relevant quote on the article if available.
 * 12) &hellip;include a "Behind the scenes" section for in-universe articles.
 * 13) &hellip;counting the introduction, the article body, and "Behind the scenes" material, must not exceed 250 words in length (not including captions, quotes, or headers, etc). Any articles exceeding the limit should be taken to the Good article nominations page for consideration.
 * 14) &hellip;if the nominated article reaches 200 words or greater, the nominator must either provide an intro or draft an intro and provide a link to the revision in the nomination, showing that the intro does not elevate the article over 250 words. Exceptions can be made for articles wherein the majority of the text is in the "Behind the scenes" section.

How to nominate:


 * 1) First, nominate an article you find is worthy of comprehensive status, putting it at the bottom of the list below. Nominated articles must meet all thirteen requirements stated above.
 * 2) Add CAnom at the top of the article you are nominating.
 * 3) Be sure to place sign in the "Nominated by" line when the nomination is posted for voting.
 * 4) Others will object to the nomination if they disagree that the article is good enough; they will then supply reasons for doing so, and ways to improve the article in accordance with the established rules.
 * 5) Nominators and supporters will adjust the article until the objectors (with reasonable objections) are satisfied. Objectors may also make alterations&mdash;if there is any reason for contention on a given point, it should be settled in a civil manner in the nomination field itself.
 * 6) Users may not vote on their own articles.
 * 7) There is no limit to the amount of nominations a given user can submit at any given time.

How to vote:


 * 1) Before doing anything, be sure to read the article completely, keeping a sharp eye out for mistakes.
 * 2) Afterward, compare the article to the criteria listed above, and then either support or object the article's nomination.
 * 3) *If you object, please supply concrete reasons for doing so, and how it can be improved.
 * 4) As stated above, any objections will be looked upon by the nominator, supporters, and anyone willing to improve the article, and action will be taken to please the objectors. Do not strike other users' objections; it is up to the objector to review the changes and strike if they are satisfied.
 * 5) There are several ways in which an article can receive the required number of votes. Within a 48-hour period of nomination, only EduCorps votes will count towards the total, although anyone may choose to vote in that window. If two members of the EduCorps support a nomination in that window, and there are no outstanding objections, the article can be considered a "Comprehensive article" and be tagged with the template 48 hours after the initial nomination.  The talk page will also be tagged with the CA template. When the 48 hours are up, any user's votes will contribute towards the total. If one EduCorps member has voted for an article after a week, three regular votes will be required. After the 48 hour period, an article can still also pass with just two EduCorps votes.
 * 6) Once a nomination is successful, it will be placed on the Comprehensive article list. Instructions on how to archive nominations, successful or otherwise, can be found here. Anyone can archive a nomination&mdash;just make sure it has the correct number of votes, has been nominated for at least a week (or 48 hours if there are two EC votes), and that there are absolutely no outstanding objections. If you are not sure how to do this, just ask, and someone will likely be more than willing to help you. Also, if you think you can slip one past us, think again&mdash;someone is always watching you.

All nominations will be considered idle and are subject to instantaneous removal by EduCorps members if objections are not addressed, or at least not answered, after a period of 1 week.

Please remember to archive your nomination beforehand if you plan on taking it to the Good Article Nominations page.

Argauun

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 10:32, November 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Never thought, that I would do a species...

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 17:30, November 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:00, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Are you sure it is not Aarguun? Also, is Talia Moonseeker described at all? --Eyrezer 08:50, November 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *Sir, no sir. The only mentions is as follows: Talia Moonseeker, a young Argauun only four months into her Jedi Knighthood, was kneeling beside her fallen former Master, Va'too, head bowed.. That is all about the species in the whole book.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 13:51, November 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) I think you should email Miller and ask her if this was intentionally a separate species. There's an email function on her website and she responds to most messages promptly. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 22:13, November 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) *This would be possible. However, I do not think it is neccessary. There is no species which is written so similiar that there is an error. You're welcome to do it, my own e-mail system has some problems and I don't know how it works.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 13:08, November 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) **I think in this case it's absolutely necessary. The difference between this and Aargauun is a single repeated letter. As it stands, even if this wasn't a mistake, the article at least needs a youmay tag. I've sent her an email asking, so we'll probably have this settled shortly. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 00:21, November 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) ***Ah sorry I was mislead by Eyrezer's spelling above. In that case, the check is neccessary and thanks for doing that. Let's see what she says and then we'll discuss the youmay tag.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 11:20, November 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) ****I totally agree with Naru, and had also emailed her as well asking Leland on the Dark Horse forums. --Eyrezer
 * 8) Bob
 * 9) * The length of Talia Moonseeker's article suggests at least a bit more description on her is warranted. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 23:17, November 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) **About her only two sentences. About her species, there is nothing more said or described, you can believe me.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:24, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) ***The novel does specify that Argauuns have heads, and that when experiencing grief they hang their head. --Eyrezer 06:03, November 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * 12) ****You can mention something like that? Wow, you can see I do not write species that often. Added and thanks.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 14:45, November 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * 13) ***** Besides this, you need to give a bit of detail on what Moonraker did in the book. From the lead to her own article, something like this: " Four months after her promotion, Moonseeker and her former Master were sent on a mission to rescue Jedi Master Obi-Wan Kenobi, Padawan Anakin Skywalker, and Senator Padmé Amidala from execution on the planet Geonosis. The rescue mission turned into the opening battle of the Clone Wars, and although Moonseeker survived it, her former Master was killed. Shaken by this loss, she mourned her deceased mentor on the battlefield." In other words, notable members of the species can't just be mentioned; their lives need to be summarized too. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 14:15, November 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 14) ******Please try it now.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 18:36, November 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * OK, one other thing: Do we know this is a species? Does the source say? It could be that this is merely a planetary demonym (like Corellian or Alderaanian), so I just wanted to make sure. If the source is unclear, you should rewrite accordingly and reclassify as an Category:Undefined social groups. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 04:27, November 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) **It is not clearly said. However, I think we should wait until Miller gives an answer to Naru. Maybe all get's cleared up then.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:05, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Gareth (TK329's son)

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 20:44, November 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: All tweets are canon.

(2 ECs/4 Users/6 Total)
Support
 * 1) Indeed.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 13:52, November 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:29, November 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 00:58, November 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4)  Master Jonathan  &mdash; Jedi Council Chambers Sunday, November 13, 2011, 21:03 UTC
 * 5) Assuming Trayus is satisfied. Also, seeing one of the facts you cited has made me bring up an SH thread about the genders of some past stormtrooper CA's I worked on. Hanzo Hasashi 22:41, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) Seems fine to me.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  13:52, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Axinal
 * 2) * Kind of nitpicky since it's implied in the word "son," but you don't clarify that he's male in the body. Otherwise, nice work.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 21:47, November 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Rectified. Look's like you've got yourself a catchphrase there, Axe. ;) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 00:35, November 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Heh, I always wanted one of those. :P&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 00:58, November 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) Trayus
 * 6) *You should refer to "the Sickness" by the more time-appropriate term, Imperial bioweapons Project I71A. Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 00:55, November 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) **Went with Blackwing virus. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 20:22, November 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) From the Council Chambers:
 * 9) * Can you use Twitter to source to individual tweets?
 * 10) **Done. Do you want me to list what each tweet establishes in the notes? NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 20:22, November 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) ***I don't think that's necessary; it's fine the way it is now.  Master Jonathan &mdash; Jedi Council Chambers Sunday, November 13, 2011, 21:03 UTC
 * 12) * Can you give some kind of real-world time reference in the BTS, e.g. "leading up to the Death Troopers release in " or something like that?
 * 13) **Done. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 20:22, November 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 14) *Otherwise, looks nice.  Master Jonathan &mdash; Jedi Council Chambers Saturday, November 12, 2011, 01:28 UTC

Comments

Red (clone)

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:37, November 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: I hate Karen Traviss

(1 ECs/2 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 19:39, November 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Wait, we have to read the articles before we vote? NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 20:32, November 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 22:01, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Object Comments
 * 1) We all hate her
 * 2) * You'll need to reload the infobox.
 * 3) **Done.
 * 4) * And there is some infobox-exclusive material.
 * 5) **Should be gone. Otherwise please say what, as I don't recognize anything missing.
 * 6) ***Cool stuff. Just mention that he's human and the years that he died. It's been a while since I read Order 66, but I'm pretty sure that you'll have to find a different source for the years of the war. Probably something like The New Essential Chronology would work.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:57, November 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) ****Done and no, Order 66 sources that.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 18:33, November 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) *****Ok. Cool beans.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 19:39, November 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) *Otherwise, good job.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:45, November 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) **Thanks for the review.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:52, November 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) Jang
 * 12) * If he's a clone trooper, mentioning that he's a Human male is quite redundant here. And if he's a clone commando, it would be the same. I believe in this intro/bio paragrah, you can mention that he's was only a clone commando, and avoid mentioning the term clone trooper for consistency.
 * 13) **See above.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:59, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 14) ***Still remains  JangFett  (Talk) 17:13, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 15) * "However, Red was killed during the war—which raged between 22 and 19 BBY—and was later mourned, along with many other clone commandos who had been killed in action, by the Mandalorian training sergeants Kal Skirata and Walon Vau." I can see this sentence being separated into two sentences because as it stands it can be confusing. Mention that he died sometime during the war in one sentence, and then go ahead and say his death was mourned by ___. Also be sure to paraphrase your wording, Lee.
 * 16) **See above.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:59, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 17) ***Still remains  JangFett  (Talk) 17:13, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 18) * Is there any reason why you're mentioning his height in the can-approved intro? Creating a section wouldn't be too much for this. Also, for the nickname in the intro, his nickname is Red, not "Red" (notice the quotation marks). Keep the punctuation out of the wiki bold formatting.  JangFett  (Talk) 20:42, November 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 19) **See above.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:59, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 20) ***Lee, I did not say to remove them.  JangFett  (Talk) 17:13, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Kef

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:46, November 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Last one (for today :P)

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 19:40, November 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 22:07, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Object Comments
 * 1) There'll be another time...
 * 2) * Same objections as above.
 * 3) **See above.
 * 4) ***See above :P  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 18:34, November 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) * This seems to be a copy of the others. You even accidently called him "Red" once. :P You'll need to go through and reword the article some so it doesn't sound like an exact copy. -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:50, November 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) **Yes, it's pretty hard to write one article seven times. I tried to reword some parts, please take a look and say if it's fine.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:56, November 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) ***I know from experience that it can be a royal pain. Good job! Just take one more look above.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:59, November 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) Jang
 * 9) * If he's a clone trooper, mentioning that he's a Human male is quite redundant here. And if he's a clone commando, it would be the same. I believe in this intro/bio paragrah, you can mention that he's was only a clone commando, and avoid mentioning the term clone trooper for consistency.
 * 10) **See above.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 16:02, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) ***Still remains  JangFett  (Talk) 17:14, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 12) * "Kef was killed, however, during the war—which lasted between 22 and 19 BBY—and was later mourned, along with all other clone commandos who had been killed since the start of the war, by the Mandalorian training sergeants Kal Skirata and Walon Vau." I can see this sentence being separated into two sentences because as it stands it can be confusing. Mention that he died sometime during the war in one sentence, and then go ahead and say his death was mourned by ___. Also be sure to paraphrase your wording, Lee.
 * 13) **See above.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 16:02, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 14) ***Still remains  JangFett  (Talk) 17:14, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 15) * Is there any reason why you're mentioning his height in the can-approved intro? Creating a section wouldn't be too much for this. Also, for the nickname in the intro, his nickname is Kef, not "Kef" (notice the quotation marks). Keep the punctuation out of the wiki bold formatting.  JangFett  (Talk) 20:48, November 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 16) **See above.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 16:02, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 17) ***Lee, I did not say to remove them.  JangFett  (Talk) 17:14, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Silver Falcon

 * Nominated by: -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:29, November 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Quick appearance. No quote. WP:TOR.

(1 ECs/2 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 01:34, November 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2)  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 11:05, November 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 00:13, November 21, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Could you tell us the year Korr entered the Falcon? Other than that, nice work.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 22:37, November 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *Yeah, I meant to add that before. Good catch!-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:22, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Bespin Dancer

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 11:29, November 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: I can't resist.

(1 ECs/2 Users/3 Total)
Support Object
 * 1) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 21:11, November 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 03:33, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) <- Omicron (Leave a message at the BEEP! ) 15:53, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Comments
 * I won't strike my objection over this, but was it confirmed to be a capital ship? If so, that info should be in the body; if not, the article would need a less specific category.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 21:26, November 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nope, we only know that it was part of a battle group. So it could also be a supply ship etc.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:28, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * Okay. I've changed the category to Category:Galactic Republic starships.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 15:41, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * Okay with me.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:51, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Breha Organa's cousin

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 11:38, November 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Quotes would be enough for a GA, but the info. Well I'll live it to you, if you think there is enough info for a P&T and bio, I'll be glad to do it. For now: 146 words.

(1 ECs/2 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 21:04, November 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Just take a quick look at my copy-edit. Good job.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 03:37, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 00:01, November 21, 2011 (UTC)

Object

Comments
 * Article looks pretty good, though I would advise you to be more attentive to grammar, spelling, and redirects.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 21:04, November 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * Allright.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:27, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Battle of New Cov

 * Nominated by: -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:42, November 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Quick little battle I've been wanting to do for a while now.

(1 ECs/3 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 13:47, November 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 20:48, November 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) What's wrong with that? I'd like to know. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 23:39, November 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) Tinwe (comlink) 06:50, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Axinal
 * 2) * I'm not sure it's relevant to put the info about the Star Cruiser in the Outcome field in the infobox; unless the Cruiser's arrival marked the end of the battle, it doesn't really belong. Looks nice, otherwise.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 03:06, November 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **The arrival of the Cruiser is pretty much the last mention about the battle in the book, but I guess that isn't really an "outcome." Thanks for the review!-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:08, November 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) ***My pleasure. Nice work.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 20:48, November 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) Some people wanna fill the CAN with silly battles
 * 6) * "Battle of New Cov" is a conjectural title because it wasn't called that in the source. "Battle off" is not the same thing and it isn't a proper noun. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 22:03, November 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) **Fixed.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:54, November 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) Tinwe
 * 9) * Could something be added about why Han and Leia are discussing the battle? The way the quote appears now, with no further explanation in the article, is somewhat confusing (to me, at least :P). Han and Leia's names should probably also be linked. Oh and MOS seems to say that Youmay tag goes before header templates (Conjecture in this case). Otherwise, nice work. Tinwe (comlink) 18:04, November 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) **Added, and switched. Good catch.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 20:37, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Tasjon

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 22:23, November 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Back to the HoloNet.

(1 ECs/2 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 23:29, November 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2)  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 10:59, November 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Nice work.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 00:51, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Battle of Kessel (Clone Wars)

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 12:16, November 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: I...just...can't...resist

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 16:11, November 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 03:13, November 26, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * The body needs to have the Clone Wars mentioned in there since it is mentioned in the infobox.
 * Adressed.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 18:33, November 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * The Appearances section needs a 1stm template.
 * Very stupid, done.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 18:33, November 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * I also gave you a redlink that you'll have to write.
 * Per this I would rather prefer not to.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 18:33, November 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * I still think that it needs to be written. Just because a Good article doesn't have an article for that group, doesn't mean that this shouldn't either. I think that that Good article needs to have that group red-linked, but that'll be something for the ACs to talk about. For this, if they were fighting an anti-Republic group, then it needs to have an article. It's still canon, even if it's only mentioned. If you have some other reason of why it shouldn't be written, please let me know.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 02:25, November 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * Created.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:04, November 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * Please note my copy-edit to see what I fixed up.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:36, November 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * Thank you.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 18:33, November 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * Good job. :) -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 16:11, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

Comments
 * Please have a look at my copyedit, specifically my slight modification to the quote, and let me know if anything I added/subtracted is incorrect. If not, I'll be ready to support.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 01:00, November 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * Allright. Thank you very much.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:59, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

White Panther

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 18:58, November 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Hm.

(1 ECs/3 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1) Aleena awesomeness.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 16:12, November 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 16:05, November 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Tinwe (comlink) 18:32, November 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 01:15, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * "...the name of the retrofitted podracer of Aleena podracer pilot." This sentence sounds like it ends right in the middle of something. Could you fix it so it sounds more complete and understandable?
 * Fixed.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk
 * Again, this article needs a 1stm template.
 * Added.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:00, November 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * Otherwise, good job.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 02:32, November 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * Thanks.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:00, November 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * Rubedo
 * He was not "mentioned" in the book. He appeared on a viewscreen.
 * Yes. And therefore it is mentioned. Or should I chnange it to a 1st?  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 13:57, November 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * Maybe 1stp would suit better? 1358  (Talk)  15:30, November 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * I think that  is best.  is more of an OOU label; I don't think it's applicable to a prose-only book. Menkooroo 15:34, November 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * Here's some precedent. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 16:05, November 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * Suppose that works. I don't see why couldn't be used in an IU article though; nothing in it indicates it's OOU.  1358  (Talk)  16:41, November 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * Well, in this case it's not even exactly a picture. It's a live stream of people on the track. I'm fairly certain that we've even just called that sort of thing an appearance without any note in the past, but I don't think specificity hurts here. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 17:32, November 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * Boba Fett recognizing Kador and the craft should be in the article.
 * Added.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 13:57, November 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * The name isn't italicized in the source? Do you have a physical copy? NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 21:51, November 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * Indeed it is italicized.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 13:57, November 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * The first sentence reads a bit awkwardly, mainly because of the two "of the" constructions in such a close proximity of each other. Could it be tightened to just "White Panther was the retrofitted podracer of..."? Tinwe (comlink) 18:23, November 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * Yep, done.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 18:25, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

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Slotern

 * Nominated by: -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 04:02, November 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Continuing on with WP:VG CAnoms.

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 * 1)  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 14:33, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

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Director of Sienar Marketing Relations

 * Nominated by: -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 04:26, November 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:No quotes.

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 * 1)  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 14:33, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

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Vendaran

 * Nominated by: Eyrezer 10:28, November 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

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 * 1) -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:26, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

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 * Any post-New Republic history that can be gleaned from the Atlas? Since they're colonists, we can't assume anything about the pre-NR stuff, but for that period and later (or at least post-NR), there might be a factoid or two in the maps. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 14:49, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

Unidentified resistance group

 * Nominated by: -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 16:35, November 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:More from TFU II databank for WP:VG.

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 * 1)  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 19:16, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

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Unidentified joyrider

 * Nominated by: -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 17:02, November 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Every little bit is canon.

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 * 1)  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 19:17, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

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Casieck Akinslesh

 * Nominated by: Tinwe (comlink) 10:19, November 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Might as well nominate this, since this is all the info we have on the character at this point.

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 * 1) Exactly what I thought.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 10:58, November 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 21:53, November 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Good work, Tinwe. :) -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:37, November 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4)  QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 11:00, November 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5)  Imperators II (Talk) 18:33, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

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 * 1) The fact that Orykan was temporarily assigned to Tahl in the aftermath of Akinsleesh's death is relevant enough to warrant at least a small mention.  QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 22:05, November 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *Addressed. Tinwe (comlink) 09:10, November 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) The infobox needs to be reloaded. -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 02:10, November 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) *I hope I don't sound too stupid, but how do you do that? Tinwe (comlink) 09:10, November 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) **Nevermind, I think I figured it out. Addressed, I believe. Tinwe (comlink) 09:19, November 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) ***Heh, no worries. The first time someone asked me to reload the infobox, I had no clue what they were talking about. :P -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:37, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

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 * There's possibly enough info for a P&T section, but it would turn out pretty repetitive if you ask me. I'll let you decide. Tinwe (comlink) 10:19, November 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * Added Star Wars: Jedi—The Dark Side 2 to Appearances section, I forgot that Akinslesh was indirectly mentioned there as Orykan's master. Tinwe (comlink) 09:10, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

Battle of T'olan

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 21:39, November 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Cause here I go~ agaaaaaaain~!

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 * 1)  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 12:01, November 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Good work.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:18, November 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Tinwe (comlink) 18:29, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

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 * The infobox needs to be reloaded.
 * Done. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 07:03, November 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * In the infobox, it appears that you say that the battle occurred during the years 22 and 21 BBY. Yet in the body, you make no mention of a date other than that it was early in the Clone Wars. If the battle occurred for both years, please state that in the body. If not, please fix the infobox. -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 02:06, November 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * Remedied. It's circa 22-21 BBY. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 07:03, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

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 * Not an objection, but maybe you could add the year The Desperate Mission was released? Tinwe (comlink) 18:29, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

Irid

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 22:35, November 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: There's a reason Big Bird's the only one you ever see nowadays.

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 * 1)  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 12:02, November 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Beware! The Birds!-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:33, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

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 * 1) You need to mention that their plumage was yellow, as stated in the infobox and quote. Good job.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:59, November 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *Added. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 07:00, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

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Spear Squadron

 * Nominated by:  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 15:50, November 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Needed doing. Similar in content to Ebon Squadron.

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 * 1) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 16:08, November 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 20:40, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

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 * 1) Salutations
 * 2) * Why are you linking to the gallery for a reference here? That doesn't say anything about indoctrination or the Navy as far as I can see. If that information is on the card, then the ref should be to the card. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 20:22, November 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **The gallery defines the icons on the miniature. The Imperial Fleet is represented on the miniature with the icon of the Empire printed on the stand. The official gallery defines the miniature "Type" as a space unit and the "Faction" icon on the unit as representing the Empire. As to the indoctrination, it's established in canon that TIE pilots are the best that Imperial academies offer and are indoctrinated to be loyal to the Emperor. However, I can go ahead and remove it since the citation does not encompass that fact.  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 16:12, November 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) ***I've added in the missed "trooper" icon reference. The icon defines group/swarming tactics.  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 16:52, November 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) ****Corrected the Bts error.  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 16:55, November 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) *****Hokay then. Just Template:Cite web that and you should be good to go. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 03:29, November 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) ******Done.  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 15:13, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

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Unidentified gladiator 1

 * Nominated by: -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:20, November 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Finally deciding to go on an idea from Fred, I'm starting my CAnom sweep of the Atlas.

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 * 1) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 19:53, November 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) --Station7 18:35, November 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 02:48, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

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 * 1) I'd hardly call this just a mention. He appeared in the picture.  NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 00:05, November 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *Done.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:14, November 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Bob
 * 4) * Is it right to call him "dark-skinned?" "Red-skinned" might be better.
 * 5) **Picky, picky, picky. :P
 * 6) * You should note that he was male and non-human somewhere. I'd say it's safe to duck test gender on this one. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 14:47, November 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) **Done.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:18, November 26, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) Station7
 * 9) *Could you add a conjecture template like all unidentified inviduals? --Station7 15:03, November 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) **Yup. Forgot it for some reason. Done.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:18, November 26, 2011 (UTC)

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Unidentified gladiator 2

 * Nominated by: -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:32, November 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Number 2.

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 * 1) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 23:07, November 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) --Station7 18:34, November 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 02:49, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

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 * 1) I don't think we can see enough of his features to call him a Human even by the duck test. It should probably be Humanoid.  NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 19:54, November 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *Changed.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:34, November 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Bob
 * 4) * "Humanoid" isn't a species, so you should probably change the infobox to say something like, "Humanoid species". Also, I don't think "humanoid" is normally capitalized. Finally, you call him "Humanoid" in the body but "Human" in the BTS. Due to the helmet, I don't know that we can assume Human on him. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 14:49, November 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) **Fixed.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:08, November 26, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) Station7
 * 7) *Could you add a conjecture template like all unidentified inviduals? --Station7 15:03, November 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) **Added.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:08, November 26, 2011 (UTC)

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Police probe

 * Nominated by: Coruscantfan 21:57, November 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Their version of big brother?

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 * 1) Watch out for older brothers...-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 03:52, November 21, 2011 (UTC)

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 * Infobox needs to be reloaded. Otherwise, good job. -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:29, November 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * Reloaded meaning? Coruscantfan 03:08, November 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * Removing the infobox you have on there now, and replacing it with a new one. There are currently some places missing in the infobox.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 03:15, November 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * Is that what you were looking for? Because some of those sections I had hidden. I unhid them and filled in some of the info. Coruscantfan 03:37, November 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * No. I wasn't objecting to what you had in the infobox. I was saying that you need to remove the whole thing, and put the whole infobox back on there just as it is on the template page. (Droid infobox) There are several sections that have been deleted from the template that you have on this article. Even if they're not being used, they should still be there, just left blank. Does that make sense? If not, I'll show you what I mean.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 03:47, November 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * Oh, got it. Ok, I put a new one in. Coruscantfan 03:48, November 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * Looks good. :) -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 03:52, November 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * Cool, thanks! Coruscantfan 03:53, November 21, 2011 (UTC)

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Yol Saan

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 13:53, November 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Always wanted to do a Toydarian

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 * 1) He's a Toydarian. Those tricks don't work on him.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 16:37, November 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Funny, Lee: I always felt the same way about Zeltrons.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 03:01, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * When you say that he is talented at "cheating", it makes it sound like he cheated all the time. I'm pretty sure you meant that he was talented at cheating in gambling. If that's the case, please clarify that.
 * Indeed. Adressed.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 16:32, November 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * Good job.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:15, November 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * Thanks.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 16:32, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

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 * I'd also suggest, Lee, that you make yourself a .css page if you don't have one already. I've noticed quite a few redirects that I've had to fix in your noms recently. It's just a suggestion, but I think it would really help you out.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:15, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Sith tome (Dromund Kaas Academy)

 * Nominated by:  —Tommy  9281  Tuesday, November 22, 2011, 17:20 UTC 
 * Nomination comments: This was cool. Majorspoiler.

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 * 1) -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:33, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

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 * 1) Cal Jedi
 * 2) * There is some seemingly important infobox exclusive material. -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 20:33, November 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Be more specific please.  —Tommy  9281  Tuesday, November 22, 2011, 21:08 UTC 
 * 4) ***That it was manufactured and created by the Ancient Sith. That it was specifically a Sith Scroll. And that it was created more than ten thousand years before 3956 BBY.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:18, November 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) ****"Sith tome" denotes its manufacturer/creator. It was actually a book, which I changed in the infobox, but that is also mentioned in the article proper.  —Tommy  9281  Tuesday, November 22, 2011, 21:30 UTC 
 * 6) *****Looks good.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:33, November 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) Imperators II
 * 8) *The year 3,956 BBY can't really be sourced to the novel. A note should be added that explained how the date was derived.  Imperators II (Talk) 09:31, November 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) **That was the wrong year anyway. Addressed.  —Tommy  9281  Saturday, November 26, 2011, 21:24 UTC 
 * 10) ***A note on the year 3,954 BBY should be added, anyway, explaining how the date is derived.  Imperators II (Talk) 16:31, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

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Jizz-box

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 20:32, November 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: A sequel to Jizz-wail, and a crossover with Galactic Society of Recording Artists at that.

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 * 1) -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 20:42, November 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2)  Put another cred in the jizz-box, baby! ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 02:51, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

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 * There are only two sentences in the whole main section of the article. That last long sentence could be broken into at least two sentences, I think, so it would be a better read. Otherwise, good job. -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 20:38, November 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nonetheless, it was grammatically correct! :) Split. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 20:40, November 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * Sounds much better. :) -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 20:42, November 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * Bob
 * Are you sure it's a musical instrument? Sounds like the Star Wars equivalent to a juke box to me. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 14:45, November 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * I've been thinking so too the more I reread the scene... How does "musical device" sound? I could also work in how C-3PO was playing the music. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 18:07, November 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * Looks good to me! ~ Savage BOB sig.png 02:51, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

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Unidentified assistant manager

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 20:32, November 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: A sequel to Jizz-box.

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Support
 * 1) "A" looks so much better than "This." Good job.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 20:41, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

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Comments
 * I just want to point out that I still vehmently disagree with standardizing "A" at the beginning of unidentified articles. I feel it has absolutely no more impact on our perspective than "This" and that it should be left to the author's discretion. I don't see any reason for regulation on such an arbitrary front, especially when not setting it in stone would allow just one more point of flexibility for when it comes down to rewording articles over and over again as several CA projects, and I'm sure most of my personal ones, became and will become in the future. However, when I looked back at my CAN of Trever Flume's mother while reviewing for the Battle of T'olan, I noticed that I promised to use that as a cut-off point for "This." I clearly didn't do that and I'm sorry and from now on I will until someone else thinks that some other grammatical adjective is "more IU" and we start changing all "A" articles to that.  NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 20:32, November 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * I agree with you. For some reason, the collective has agreed that "this" is a "present-tense" word. That's preposterous, as it's not a verb; it's a demonstrative adjective. But that's what seems to be common belief around here. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 03:31, November 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * I believe the concern is that "This" reads like an OOU statement. Beginning an IU article with the phrase "This character" immediately raises the question, "What character?" Saying "A character" lets the reader know that they're unidentified and doesn't rely on the title, nor anything beyond the article's text, to give needed context. Menkooroo 14:52, November 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * I'm glad we're being so thorough as to anticipate unconcious reader reactions that have never been an issue in the past. Though I disagree that they ask themselves anything like that within the first few words even as a reaction, there's absolutely nothing wrong with composing something that raises a question in the reader's mind so long as you intend to answer it promptly. In virtually all cases with "This", the answer comes in the first sentence&mdash;the same sentence. Furthermore, this demonstrates the variable I mentioned above: if we need more flexibility between articles sharing their information, allowing author choice on this front doubles the number of opening sentences we can write because "This" and "A" are handled differently grammatically like you said. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 18:24, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

Unidentified Espo 1

 * Nominated by: -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 04:44, November 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:First in a total of four in the set.

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Support
 * 1) Coruscantfan 23:12, November 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  03:56, November 26, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Tinwe (comlink) 14:44, November 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) Great job!  NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 23:09, November 28, 2011 (UTC) ( Made you click! :P)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * Please give some context on the Corporate Sector Authority and the Espos.
 * 3) **Done.
 * 4) * How exactly can you say that the weapon is a projectile weapon instead of a blaster weapon? -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  14:07, November 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) **You're right. I went ahead and replaced with "Gun".-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 23:09, November 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) Tinwe
 * 7) * You might want to add to the Bts that the illustration was made by Chris Trevas. The same goes for the other two Espos and the Trianii suspect, I'm just too lazy to copypaste this objection. :P Tinwe (comlink) 18:10, November 26, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) **I believe I hit them all.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 23:12, November 26, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) Rubedo
 * 10) * So far as I know, we aren't supposed to use acronyms in article titles. These three should be moved to either Unidentified Corporate Sector Authority Espo or just Unidentified Espo. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 20:38, November 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) **I debated about this when I wrote the article. The source specifically identifies him as a CSA Espo. Thus, I don't think there is any problem with naming him a CSA Espo. However, I don't intend to make a beef about this, and if you or someone else really wants it changed, I'll move it.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 02:25, November 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 12) ***I'm afraid I'll have to insist. It sounds like the caption identifies him as a "CSA Espo" like it was calling some soldier an "Alliance commando," in which case the government name is not part of the occupation title, but is actually just a statement that he belonged to that organization. In addition, other sources have the slang term as just "Espo" for the officers, not "CSA Espo." NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 10:14, November 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 13) ****Just to reiterate, the problem is that it's an acronym. You can spell out CSA if you want to. "Unidentified soldier" and "Unidentified Rebel soldier" are both acceptable titles. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 17:03, November 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 14) *****Move completed.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:17, November 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 15) * "A male Human with fair skin was a Corporate Sector Authority Espo, the security police for the CSA government of the Corporate Sector." Two things. The character was the security police? You can't contextify this way because "the Corporate Sector Authority government of the corporate sector" is grammatically incorrect. What I think you tried to do here was something like "the CSA, the government of the Corporate Sector," but that apositive would also be wrong because it would be within another apositive, the one explaining what an Espo is. This sentence needs rewording. (P.S. I never get to use colors! :D)
 * 16) **Congrats on being able to use colors, :P and reworded.
 * 17) * One last thing. You shouldn't bold his species. His job is what's notable about the character (why he rated an article), not his race. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 21:30, November 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 18) **I don't see anything particularly wrong with bolding his species, but meh. Whatever. Switched.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 02:36, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Comments
 * Apparently there's an article for the Espo Armor, you might want to link it. Also, the Espo is probably holding this gun, but it's hard to say for sure as the article on said weapon lacks an image... Tinwe (comlink) 17:46, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Unidentified Espo 2

 * Nominated by: -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 20:52, November 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Number 2.

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Support
 * 1) Coruscantfan 23:22, November 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Tinwe (comlink) 06:58, November 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  17:34, November 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 23:10, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Context on the CSA and the Espos. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  14:08, November 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *Done.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 23:18, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Unidentified Espo 3

 * Nominated by: -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:00, November 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Corporate Sector Jones and the Last Espo

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Support
 * 1) Coruscantfan 23:29, November 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Tinwe (comlink) 06:58, November 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  17:42, November 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 23:10, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Context on the CSA and the Espos. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  14:09, November 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *Fixed.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 23:27, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

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Unidentified Trianii suspect

 * Nominated by: -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:21, November 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Number 4. The bad guy of the group.

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Support
 * 1) Coruscantfan 23:34, November 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  03:49, November 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Tinwe (comlink) 06:59, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) It may be difficult to do the way you have it worded, but I believe that you should say something about what the CSA is and what Espos are. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  14:04, November 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *Fitted it in. Thanks for the reviews!-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 23:31, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

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Battle of Quellor system

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 06:31, November 26, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: How can I&hellip;tell you about&hellip;this bat-tle?

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Support
 * 1) I don't want to hear about it.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 23:13, November 26, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Ah the Essential Atlas, how many CAs will come from this fine work?-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  17:47, November 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Sure thing. Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 22:33, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

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 * 1) "Battle of Duro" in the last body sentence leads to a disambig page. Could you link to the proper one, please? Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 18:00, November 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *Fixed. Good catch! NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 21:26, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

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Unidentified Sith (Taalon's strike team)

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 12:53, November 26, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Basic work done by Jon, so all credits to him

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 * 1) -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 16:48, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

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 * 1) Jujiggum
 * 2) * You can add a brief P&A, based on this quote. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 14:28, November 26, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Done.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:14, November 26, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) *With a word count of 219, Rule 14 now applies. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 21:22, November 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) **OK. Now over 250 words. Please remove the nom and I'll take him to GA once someone bothers to take a look at my current noms.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 13:05, November 29, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) The_Cal_Jedi has returned
 * 7) * "and one other Sith" - I haven't read the book in quite some time, but I think this Sith needs an article if he doesn't already.
 * 8) **No, please not. Otherwise I have to CA him too :P BTW it he is only mentioned one time and there is no specific reason to create a page as we don't know any further info.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 08:30, November 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) ***Sorry, but I really think he needs an article. :P Even if he is only mentioned once, he is still part of canon. "Every bit is canon" as I like to say.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 02:32, November 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) ****Yes, but this time we have nothing to say. We don't know if he survived, not his gender or anything else. It is really neccessary to create an article. We had to create one for every Sith of the team then.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 14:00, November 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) *****That's why we have Category:Unidentified gender and Category:Individuals of unidentified species. :P I created it for you this time, however.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 16:48, November 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 12) * Category:Unidentified Sith should be added. -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:55, November 26, 2011 (UTC)
 * 13) **Added.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 08:30, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

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Guerrerite

 * Nominated by:  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  14:32, November 26, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Random article button do your stuff!

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 * 1) Go random article button!-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 23:05, November 26, 2011 (UTC)

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 * No infobox for ores or metals?-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  14:32, November 26, 2011 (UTC)

Smapp

 * Nominated by:  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  19:45, November 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Animal, vegetable or mineral?

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 * 1) I feel like eating at Dex's...-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 03:06, November 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2)  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 13:51, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

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 * 1) The fact that it was a food should be mentioned near the beginning of the article. That's it. Good job. -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 02:49, November 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *Fixed.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  02:53, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

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 * No quotes available.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  19:45, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

Davin (stormtrooper)

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 09:56, November 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: One tweet. One.

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 * 1) Probably intended to be Davin Felth, but what can you do?-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  13:04, November 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Indeed.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 13:51, November 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Per EJ. It will probably be confirmed later, but nothing we can do now.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:24, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

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 * 1) Is there any reasoning for not using the Twitter citation template in the Sources section? 1358  (Talk)  16:56, November 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *Because if we did that, then there would be no links to our page on the twitter account. Its use in refs is for specificity. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 17:01, November 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Ok, I understand. However, would you be opposed to add an extra parameter for including the Wook page, or modifying the template to not include the external link at all if a Wookieepedia page is given? Similar to SW, iirc. 1358  (Talk)  17:04, November 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) ***I don't really see the point of going to any trouble over it. This isn't like the Databank or SW.com stuff: this was a one-time promotion. If there were a series of these then I'd probably say go ahead, but as it sits I think we should just leave it like any other source. Nonetheless, if you really want to use the Twitter template, we could just link the parenthetical TK329 to the page instead of creating a field for it. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 17:11, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

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Galactic grits

 * Nominated by:  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  22:52, November 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: The best grits in the galaxy.

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 * 1) I'll have lots of syrup on mine.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 23:44, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

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 * "Galactic grits was a food served at Dex's Diner, a restaurant located in CoCo Town, Coruscant, the galactic capital planet, before the diner was destroyed in 19 BBY." - this sentence seems to read rather confusing. Especially the middle part about Coruscant. Some rewording would be good. Nice work. -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 23:02, November 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * That was quite a bit unclear, I think it's fixed now.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  23:23, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

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 * No quotes available.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  22:52, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Systems Analyst

 * Nominated by: -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 02:21, November 29, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Just a little article to hold me over until I can finish my TEA noms. Created way back in 2008.

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