Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/DS-181-3


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DS-181-3

 * Nominated by:  Grunny  ( Talk ) 05:39, 26 May 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: We've had an ANH nom and an ESB nom recently, might as well finish the trilogy

(3 ACs/4 Users/7 Total)
Support
 * 1) Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 19:56, 26 May 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) Great work :) Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jujiggum ) 23:03, 26 May 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) These Decipher articles are the bread and butter of movie GAs and FAs.  Graestan ( Talk ) 03:21, 27 May 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) Hopefully all those extras will eventually be named so that you and Tope can have a go at them. :P  CC7567  (talk) 04:24, 27 May 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) Nice job. Kilson Likes PIE 03:34, 28 May 09 (UTC)
 * 6) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 10:36, 31 May 2009 (UTC)
 * 7) -- Darth tom Imperial Emblem.svg (Imperial Intelligence)  11:27, 31 May 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) You've stolen another extra from Toprawa?!?!
 * 2) * For both the intro and the body, how was Fel famous? (For this, I personally wouldn't use "famous," because then it requires more context.)
 * 3) **Addressed.
 * 4) * "In 4 ABY, DS-181-3 was present when Darth Vader arrived aboard the second Death Star, and later participated in the Battle of Endor." - the wording here is a bit confusing, because even with the comma, it's difficult to determine who (DS-181-3 or Vader) participated in the Battle of Endor.
 * 5) **How's that? :)
 * 6) *Well done. WP:Extras from ROTJ who appear in the Special Edition of ESB is going well. :p Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 11:12, 26 May 2009 (UTC)
 * 7) **Haha that it is :P. Thanks for reviewing as always Tranner :-).  Grunny  ( Talk ) 12:19, 26 May 2009 (UTC)
 * 8) In both the intro and the body, you should mention that DS was stationed on the second Death Star before you say he was present at Darth Vader's arrival there. Other than that, looks fine. Kilson Likes PIE 22:43, 27 May 09 (UTC)
 * 9) *I can find no source that confirms Saber Squadron was stationed aboard the Death Star, rather it only says that the 181st was attached to Death Squadron, so it would be an assumption to state that he was, rather than just present on the Death Star for that event.  Grunny  ( Talk ) 01:26, 28 May 2009 (UTC)

Comments


 * All adaptations checked, will have BTM checked by tomorrow :-).  Grunny  ( Talk ) 05:39, 26 May 2009 (UTC)