Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/XJ-6 airspeeder (second nomination)

XJ-6 airspeeder

 * Nominated by: 12:00, March 15, 2014 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: I suppose it's only fitting that a return to semi-active editing would mean my first FA should be returned to Featured status. And man, this article definitely needed that rewrite.

Support

 * 1) Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:05, March 16, 2014 (UTC)

Ayrehead

 * Quite a few redirects that need fixing. Ayrehead02 (talk) 22:42, March 15, 2014 (UTC)
 * Think I got 'em all. 06:23, March 16, 2014 (UTC)
 * I think the other model of airspeeder that Greyshade owns is identified in an image caption in the Viva Space Vegas blog entry. Ayrehead02 (talk) 22:42, March 15, 2014 (UTC)
 * At first I thought it was an OOU reference to a model of car for some reason (probably because I was working on this article in the dead of night), but a quick Google search has shown me otherwise. Added and links to the respective articles have been made. 06:23, March 16, 2014 (UTC)
 * "as the Jedi had previously flown one of the senator's personal vehicles two years prior and was the only convertible speeder on the lot." I think your missing and it in this sentence. Ayrehead02 (talk) 22:42, March 15, 2014 (UTC)
 * I was. Fixed the sentence so it flows a little better, too. 06:23, March 16, 2014 (UTC)
 * In the behind the scenes you need to mention the source that the speeder first appeared in, as well as what source identified it. Ayrehead02 (talk) 22:42, March 15, 2014 (UTC)
 * Done and done. 06:23, March 16, 2014 (UTC)

Cadeth

 * *slap* Redirects, young Jorrel.
 * In my defense I didn't know Orange existed. Things have changed.
 * Also, the Sources list should be listed chronologically by release date. Cade  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg  Calrayn  14:42, March 24, 2014 (UTC)
 * Thought I'd fixed it, but now I've actually fixed it. 03:40, March 25, 2014 (UTC)

Attack of the Clone

 * A few preliminaries. First of all, the infobox needs to have thorough linking just like the intro and body of the article.
 * Linked.
 * Per the Layout Guide, the majority of information that's currently in the infobox also needs to be repeated in the body of the article. All technical specifications in the infobox should be added to "Characteristics."
 * Added to prose. Did not know the actual tech specs were to be in the article itself, but they're all there now.
 * Two things regarding the use of Fact File 29: first, why is it listed twice in the Sources section? Second of all, each use of FFCite should include the page numbers, i.e. "ANA23" or whatever it is in the Fact File.
 * Leftover from re-organization for the first part. Wasn't familiar with the second, which poses a problem as I am no longer in possession of the FF in question. I'll ask around to see if I can get a fresh copy.
 * Image captions should not be punctuated if they aren't complete sentences.
 * Cleaned.
 * All quotes from the online HNN article (now defunct) should ideally link directly to the specific article, not HoloNet News Vol. 531 56. You can use one of the backup links if you need to.
 * Done, though I feel that there's a better way to do that, somehow, like make some sort of hovertext showing where it's from, even if the link points to the actual article. Something for another time, I suppose.
 * Does the speeder appear in the regular AOTC novelization? I would think it would, even if the specific model isn't mentioned.
 * Yeah, it's there. Don't know why I didn't think of AotC having a novel. Oversight corrected and found a source for the Fact Files' mention of a flag in the engine.
 * I'll give a full review once the above objections are fixed.  CC7567  (talk) 19:18, May 20, 2014 (UTC)
 * With exception to page numbers, everything's fixed. Working on that last bit. JorrelWiki-shrinkable.pngFraajic 06:31, May 21, 2014 (UTC)