Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Yakun Kwaad


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Yakun Kwaad

 * Nominated by: Harrar 17:40, 18 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: His favourite activity is Kwaad-biking. Oh that's terrible. Harrar 17:40, 18 July 2008 (UTC)

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Support
 * 1)  Aqua  Unasi  17:47, 24 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) Goodwood  [[Image:Redstarbird.svg|20px]] ( Alliance Intelligence ) 23:54, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) Cavalier One ( Squadron channel ) 09:19, 5 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) DC 05:17, 17 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) --Eyrezer 10:11, 25 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 6) Toprawa and Ralltiir 15:39, 25 August 2008 (UTC)

Object Comments
 * 1) The unknown date for Kwaad's death in the infobox must die. Say it happened before 25 or 26 ABY or whenever the events of Conquest happened. DC 06:18, 14 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) * "Before 26ABY". Harrar 16:09, 16 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) Toprawa:
 * 4) * As a way to beef up the intro, I'd like to see a little explanation of what "shaping" and the "heresy" of his practice is in the introduction.
 * 5) **Expanded &mdash; see what you think.
 * 6) * Please also explain what shaping and this heresy is in the biography
 * 7) **I believe that I've done so.
 * 8) * Please do a little bit more to detail what this "final showdown is, between whom? "an event that leads to the showdown at the novel's end" Toprawa and Ralltiir 17:18, 17 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 9) **This was a bit difficult as I found myself begin to digress and explain the plot in confusing detail. If you could have a look at what I've written and give it the all clear, that'd be great. Harrar 11:26, 21 August 2008 (UTC)
 * Unfortunately I'm now away until the 10th of September, so I hope that this can pass through, or else it's gonna sit here for a further 2.5 weeks until I can address objections. Cheers guys Harrar 11:26, 21 August 2008 (UTC)