Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations

 This page is for the nomination of "comprehensive articles." For a list of "comprehensive articles," see Category:Wookieepedia comprehensive articles.


 * Comprehensive article nominations history
 * Comprehensive article nominations archiving checklist

What is a "comprehensive article?"

A "comprehensive article" is an article that contains all information regarding the topic. Often, "comprehensive articles" cannot reach Featured or Good Article status due to their limited content. This process is intended to recognize articles that contain all relevant canon information, yet are still under the 250 word limit required for a Good Article. The purpose of this is twofold&mdash;firstly, to help users distinguish what is a stub, and what is merely a short article with no further relevant material to be added, and, more importantly, to highlight for the reader when they are reading something that has been judged definitely "comprehensive"&mdash;that is, a guarantee to the reader that whatever they are reading contains the sum total of all available content on that topic.

Nominations and promotions of the Comprehensive article process are overseen by a collective of users known as the "EduCorps," which is made up of the Inquisitorius, the AgriCorps, and various other experienced users who are considered qualified to adequately judge the nominated material.

Lucasfilm Ltd. and its many licensees continue to expand the Star Wars universe. Since new information might become available, it may be necessary to revoke a "comprehensive article's" status. A forum will be used to nominate articles that have fallen out-of-date. Members of the EduCorps will then post a warning template on that page, and a grace period of one week will be instituted in which the article can be improved. If there is a significant amount of new information, it is likely that once updated, the article will become eligible for Good article status, and thereby ineligible for Comprehensive article status.

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An article must&hellip;


 * 1) &hellip;be well-written and detailed.
 * 2) &hellip;be unbiased, non-point of view.
 * 3) &hellip;be sourced with all available sources and appearances.
 * 4) &hellip;follow the Manual of Style, Layout Guide, and all other policies on Wookieepedia. This is, of course, within reason. If a topic only has a very limited degree of content that cannot be divided up into the relevant article sections, it is not required that it follow the Layout Guide precisely. This is to be judged on a case-by-case basis.
 * 5) &hellip;following the review process, be stable, i.e., does not change significantly from day to day and is not the subject of ongoing edit wars. This does not apply to vandalism and protection or semi-protection as a result of vandalism.
 * 6) &hellip;not be tagged with any sort of improvement tags (i.e. more sources, expand, etc).
 * 7) &hellip;have no redlinks.
 * 8) &hellip;have all relevant canon information presented.
 * 9) &hellip;be completely referenced for all available material and sources. See Sourcing for more information.
 * 10) &hellip;have all quotes and images sourced.
 * 11) &hellip;provide at least one relevant quote on the article if available.
 * 12) &hellip;include a "Behind the scenes" section for in-universe articles.
 * 13) &hellip;counting the introduction, the article body, and "Behind the scenes" material, must not exceed 250 words in length (not including captions, quotes, or headers, etc). Any articles exceeding the limit should be taken to the Good article nominations page for consideration.
 * 14) &hellip;if the nominated article reaches 200 words or greater, the nominator must either provide an intro or draft an intro and provide a link to the revision in the nomination, showing that the intro does not elevate the article over 250 words. Exceptions can be made for articles wherein the majority of the text is in the "Behind the scenes" section.

How to nominate:


 * 1) First, nominate an article you find is worthy of comprehensive status, putting it at the bottom of the list below. Nominated articles must meet all thirteen requirements stated above.
 * 2) Add CAnom at the top of the article you are nominating.
 * 3) Be sure to place sign in the "Nominated by" line when the nomination is posted for voting.
 * 4) Others will object to the nomination if they disagree that the article is good enough; they will then supply reasons for doing so, and ways to improve the article in accordance with the established rules.
 * 5) Nominators and supporters will adjust the article until the objectors (with reasonable objections) are satisfied. Objectors may also make alterations&mdash;if there is any reason for contention on a given point, it should be settled in a civil manner in the nomination field itself.
 * 6) Users may not vote on their own articles.
 * 7) There is no limit to the amount of nominations a given user can submit at any given time.

How to vote:


 * 1) Before doing anything, be sure to read the article completely, keeping a sharp eye out for mistakes.
 * 2) Afterward, compare the article to the criteria listed above, and then either support or object the article's nomination.
 * 3) *If you object, please supply concrete reasons for doing so, and how it can be improved.
 * 4) As stated above, any objections will be looked upon by the nominator, supporters, and anyone willing to improve the article, and action will be taken to please the objectors. Do not strike other users' objections; it is up to the objector to review the changes and strike if they are satisfied.
 * 5) There are several ways in which an article can receive the required number of votes. Within a 48-hour period of nomination, only EduCorps votes will count towards the total, although anyone may choose to vote in that window. If four members of the EduCorps support a nomination in that window [0 to 48 hours post-nomination], and there are no outstanding objections, the article can be considered a "Comprehensive article" and be tagged with the template 48 hours after the initial nomination. The talk page will also be tagged with the  template. When the 48 hours are up, any user's votes will contribute towards the total. If two EduCorps member has voted for an article after a week, three regular votes will be required. After the 48 hour period, an article can still also pass with just three EduCorps votes.
 * 6) Once a nomination is successful, it will be placed on the Comprehensive article list. Instructions on how to archive nominations, successful or otherwise, can be found here. Anyone can archive a nomination&mdash;just make sure it has the correct number of votes, has been nominated for at least a week (or 48 hours if there are four EC votes), and that there are absolutely no outstanding objections. If you are not sure how to do this, just ask, and someone will likely be more than willing to help you. Also, if you think you can slip one past us, think again&mdash;someone is always watching you.

All nominations will be considered idle and are subject to instantaneous removal by EduCorps members if objections are not addressed, or at least not answered, after a period of 1 week.

Please remember to archive your nomination beforehand if you plan on taking it to the Good Article Nominations page.

Stavas

 * Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:38, August 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: For WP:TOR

(3 ECs/0 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) I cleaned a few things up a bit.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  02:32, August 26, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 13:19, August 30, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3)  Commander Code-8  You lost the game! 07:25, September 7, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) CC-8
 * 2) * Shouldn't the bracketed part of the affiliation be pipelinked?  Commander Code-8  You lost the game! 07:02, September 3, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) **Fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:32, September 5, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) SE
 * 5) *One small thing, wwould you mind sourcing the behind the scenes? Thanks, Supreme Emperor (talk) 13:30, September 6, 2013 (UTC)
 * 6) **Isn't it self sourcing? I though you only sourced the Bts if you mentioned a quote or information which wasn't from a source you also mentioned in the section. Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:37, September 7, 2013 (UTC)
 * 7) ***Ayrehead02 has a point, it is self-sourcing, no need to source it. Winterz (talk) 15:37, September 7, 2013 (UTC)


 * 1) Winterz
 * 2) *The Bts' word Prima is incorrectly linked in this article and the two below. Please, fix it. Winterz (talk) 15:37, September 7, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) **Fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:27, September 11, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Nareen

 * Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:38, August 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: For WP:TOR

(3 ECs/0 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  14:49, August 26, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) These Sith vendors are creepy.  501st  dogma ( talk ) 13:29, August 30, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3)  Commander Code-8  You lost the game! 07:03, September 3, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Xanta

 * Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:38, August 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: For WP:TOR

(3 ECs/0 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  14:53, August 26, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 16:16, August 31, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3)  Commander Code-8  You lost the game! 07:04, September 3, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Attack on Rhen Var

 * Nominated by: Corellian Premier Jedi symbol.svg Force will be with you always 19:50, August 29, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: In which something happens.

(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1) Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:04, August 29, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  Commander Code-8  You lost the game! 07:08, September 3, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 12:13, September 4, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  14:13, September 4, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) One thing: it would be nice if you mention the Galactic Civil War by name.  501st  dogma ( talk ) 16:29, August 31, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) *Sigh, fine. Thanks for looking it over. Corellian Premier Jedi symbol.svg Force will be with you always 23:48, August 31, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) Exiled Jedi
 * 4) * Could you combine some of the short sentences in the BTS? -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  22:17, August 31, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) **Voila. Corellian Premier Jedi symbol.svg Force will be with you always 23:48, August 31, 2013 (UTC)
 * 6) SE
 * 7) *One small thing, would you mind sourcing the behind the scenes? Thanks, Supreme Emperor (talk) 13:26, September 6, 2013 (UTC)
 * 8) **Thanks for looking over. And actually, I do mind. It's self-sourcing. Corellian Premier Jedi symbol.svg Force will be with you always 18:17, September 6, 2013 (UTC)
 * 9) Wonderful Life
 * 10) *You make no mention of Rhen Var Citadel on the body.
 * 11) **The focus in on the listening post. Corellian Premier Jedi symbol.svg Force will be with you always 16:15, September 7, 2013 (UTC)
 * 12) ***Lets not be lazy here ;). Article for the listening post and mentions of it and the Citadel on the body. Winterz (talk) 17:07, September 7, 2013 (UTC)
 * 13) ****Right, finally done. I'm just concerned that the first sentence is too wordy. Corellian Premier Jedi symbol.svg Force will be with you always 23:03, September 9, 2013 (UTC)
 * 14) * The Bts could get some more info, like TEA's authors for instance, that couldn't harm ;).
 * 15) **Sure thing. Corellian Premier Jedi symbol.svg Force will be with you always 16:15, September 7, 2013 (UTC)
 * 16) * I'm confused about something. So did the Imperial get to retake the facility or it was destroyed during their attack? You'll have to be more explicit here. Winterz (talk) 15:44, September 7, 2013 (UTC)
 * 17) **I'm confused too. Changed up some wording here, thanks. Corellian Premier Jedi symbol.svg Force will be with you always 16:15, September 7, 2013 (UTC)

Comments
 * 1) WP:VG of course. Originally wasn't sure if this article was necessary. Corellian Premier Jedi symbol.svg Force will be with you always 19:50, August 29, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) Not an objection because I have a feeling I'm wrong, but does it need to be in both the categories battles of Rhen Var and Battles of the Outer Rim since the former category is already within the latter category. Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:04, August 29, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) *That's a good question; I'm not up to speed on the latest categories. Corellian Premier Jedi symbol.svg Force will be with you always 22:32, August 29, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) **I removed the Outer Rim category, since the Rhen Var category is in that one.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  22:17, August 31, 2013 (UTC)

Kilmaulsi precursor species

 * Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 20:23, August 30, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:A late sub article to Kilmaulsi

(3 ECs/0 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) Assuming completion of EJ's objection.  Commander Code-8  You lost the game! 07:09, September 3, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 12:15, September 4, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  14:15, September 4, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * Is the sentience of the creature's mentioned? If not, a BTS note and Category:Species of undefined sentience should be added.
 * 3) **No mention of sentience but after double checking I realised I could of been more specific about the species feathers so good job you got me to look. Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:01, September 3, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) *In the future, please use first mentioned for sources. First appearance is only for the appearances section.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  22:30, August 31, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) **I usually do, sorry I missed it this time. Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:01, September 3, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Porrh

 * Nominated by: 501st  dogma ( talk ) 17:16, September 1, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Pow. A random nom.

(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)
Support Object
 * 1)  Commander Code-8  You lost the game! 07:10, September 3, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  15:49, September 4, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:49, September 5, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) Gal-icon.jpg  OLIOSTER   (talk) 12:38, September 5, 2013 (UTC)
 * 1) Could this not have a substances infobox? Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:04, September 3, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) *There you go. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 12:11, September 4, 2013 (UTC)

SE

 * Minor thing, would you mind sourcing the behind the scenes? Thanks, Supreme Emperor (talk) 13:27, September 6, 2013 (UTC)
 * Sourcing the BtS is generally not required, unless there is specific information that was gotten from somewhere other than one of the sources. I can do it if you want though. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 22:30, September 6, 2013 (UTC)
 * Yes please, technically it isn't necessary, more of a personal preference. Supreme Emperor (talk) 01:59, September 9, 2013 (UTC)
 * In that case, there you go. :P 501st  dogma ( talk ) 20:51, September 9, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Rikel's wife

 * Nominated by: Trip391 (talk) 22:24, September 1, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: For Project Novels

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:14, September 6, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) Gone through and corrected some minor details. Feel free to check them.  Commander Code-8  You lost the game! 09:04, September 10, 2013 (UTC)

Object Comments
 * 1) CC-8
 * 2) * Context for Rikel in the first sentence.
 * 3) **Done
 * 4) * Briefly mention who the civil war was between pls.
 * 5) **Done
 * 6) * Can you get rid of the break that's after the second sentence.
 * 7) **Done
 * 8) * was arrested during a security sweep on Coruscant, and her dead body was later positively identified can you say directly that she died rather than jumping to her body being identified.
 * 9) **Done
 * 10) * Context for Centrepoint station
 * 11) **Done
 * 12) ***Given that this is a small article I don't think a sentence that is their purely for context is appropriate, I'd get rid of it and just say that it could do a lot of damage
 * 13) ****Done
 * 14) * Can you put NOTOC in.
 * 15) **Someone else took care of it
 * 16) * Mention that her species was not specified in the Bts.  Commander Code-8  You lost the game! 09:20, September 3, 2013 (UTC)
 * 17) **Done Trip391 (talk) 20:22, September 3, 2013 (UTC)
 * 18) ***It should probably be in a separate sentence rather than just being chucked on the end of that one.  Commander Code-8  You lost the game! 07:34, September 7, 2013 (UTC)
 * 19) ****Done Trip391 (talk) 19:47, September 7, 2013 (UTC)
 * 20) Ayrehead
 * 21) * Could you split up the first sentence?
 * 22) **Done
 * 23) * Context for Coruscant. Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:03, September 5, 2013 (UTC)
 * 24) **Done Trip391 (talk) 20:51, September 5, 2013 (UTC)
 * 25) Exiled Jedi
 * 26) *Can you use Template:CSWECite for the sources section?-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  14:28, September 11, 2013 (UTC)

Min-Reva

 * Nominated by: DarthRevan1173 RevanTOR001.jpg (Long live Lord Revan) 00:43, September 2, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:For Project Novels

(0 ECs/1 Users/1 Total)
Support
 * 1) Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:02, September 5, 2013 (UTC)

Object

SE

 * In the intro, can you flip the sentence regarding the battle of Kalandis Seven around a bit to reflect that the name of the battle is conjectural?
 * Changed.
 * Can you also do this in the bio?
 * Also changed.
 * Can you add in a NOTOC?
 * Added.
 * In the bio can you give some context on how the spaceport was destroyed?
 * Also added. DarthRevan1173 RevanTOR001.jpg (Long live Lord Revan) 05:29, September 4, 2013 (UTC)
 * Can you reword that paragraph a bit? As it is, it says the beacons allowed the starfighters to target the base, and that the base was destroyed, but not that it was destroyed by the starfighters. Supreme Emperor (talk) 04:13, September 6, 2013 (UTC)
 * Added to the last sentence that it was destroyed by Republic starfighters. Word count is at 252 now btw I can re-nom it again for GA if someone archives this. DarthRevan1173 RevanTOR001.jpg (Long live Lord Revan) 23:01, September 7, 2013 (UTC)
 * No, there's no need for this or any of the other squad members to go to the GAN. I removed the stuff about Amden, as it's not really relevant and doesn't need to be repeated on every character's page, and there was no need for Malcom to be mentioned in the intro. By the time I finished my cleanup, I removed the intro since it had dropped below 200. Cade  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg  Calrayn  02:11, September 9, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nice work. Supreme Emperor (talk) 03:46, September 3, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Amden vor Keioidian

 * Nominated by: DarthRevan1173 RevanTOR001.jpg (Long live Lord Revan) 00:43, September 2, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:For Project Novels

(1 ECs/2 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:46, September 5, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) Supreme Emperor (talk) 04:17, September 6, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 20:49, September 9, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * SE
 * In the intro can you tweak the sentence regarding the Battle of Kalandis Seven to reflect the name of the battle is conjecture?
 * Changed.
 * Can you do this in the bio as well?
 * Also changed. DarthRevan1173 RevanTOR001.jpg (Long live Lord Revan) 04:46, September 4, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nice work. Supreme Emperor (talk) 03:51, September 3, 2013 (UTC)
 * Wait, did he die before or after the tracer was activated???  501st  dogma ( talk ) 22:35, September 6, 2013 (UTC)
 * After I presume the story refers to him as a dying man, however never shows Keioidian die nor does it show Keioidian being rescued. I've removed his death since it's not confirmed. DarthRevan1173 RevanTOR001.jpg (Long live Lord Revan) 22:48, September 7, 2013 (UTC)

Comments
 * There was absolutely no reason for this article to have an intro. The body was barely oveer 100 words, and they were essentially the same thing. I've removed the intro. Cade  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg  Calrayn  23:08, September 9, 2013 (UTC)

Andray

 * Nominated by:Supreme Emperor (talk) 03:39, September 2, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:About time I nominated this. For the novels

(2 ECs/2 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1) Good work. DarthRevan1173 RevanTOR001.jpg (Long live Lord Revan) 01:40, September 5, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:41, September 5, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) In the future please do the proper citation for the CSWE. Other than that, good job. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 15:27, September 7, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 20:48, September 9, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Revan's objections
 * 2) * I see a link that you missed and a double-link that needs correcting.
 * 3) **Fixed the double link, what did I miss?
 * 4) *** Just "time".
 * 5) ****Fixed.
 * 6) * How about a bts section?
 * 7) **Done.
 * 8) * Is there any other info in the Encyclopedia that's new or worth mentioning?
 * 9) **Nope.
 * 10) * Isn't Pelleon a Supreme Commander at this time? DarthRevan1173 RevanTOR001.jpg (Long live Lord Revan) 04:23, September 2, 2013 (UTC)
 * 11) **Fixed. Supreme Emperor (talk) 03:42, September 3, 2013 (UTC)
 * 12) * Is there a reason you removed the P&T? DarthRevan1173 RevanTOR001.jpg (Long live Lord Revan) 04:41, September 4, 2013 (UTC)
 * 13) **Cade said it wasn't needed in the IRC. Supreme Emperor (talk) 01:28, September 5, 2013 (UTC)
 * 14) ***That works for me. DarthRevan1173 RevanTOR001.jpg (Long live Lord Revan) 01:40, September 5, 2013 (UTC)
 * 15) You give him a Human category, but he is not mentioned as Human in the body or the infobox.  501st  dogma ( talk ) 22:39, September 6, 2013 (UTC)
 * 16) *Oops, missed that. Supreme Emperor (talk) 13:45, September 7, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Warrl

 * Nominated by: Gal-icon.jpg  OLIOSTER  (talk) 14:16, September 3, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: You can make booze out of anything!

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:21, September 5, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) 501st  dogma ( talk ) 22:40, September 6, 2013 (UTC)

Object Comments
 * 1) You need to mention who it is edible by in the body.  501st  dogma ( talk ) 12:20, September 4, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) *Done. Gal-icon.jpg  OLIOSTER  (talk) 17:57, September 4, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) **You still have to mention Bothan in the body. :) 501st  dogma ( talk ) 22:22, September 5, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Emperor Palpatine does not care about Bothan people. Fixed. Gal-icon.jpg  OLIOSTER  (talk) 11:30, September 6, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) Exiled Jedi
 * 6) *The way you have it currently worded doesn't really leave the possibility open that other species might have been able to consume warrl as well. Could you reword it to leave that possibility open?-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  03:32, September 7, 2013 (UTC)
 * 7) **I'm beginning to think this might fall under game mechanics, as the species I listed are simply all the playable species in the game and other than the player being able to consume the Warrl Surprise with no ill effects regardless of the species you play, its never specifically mentioned which species can safely eat the plant. Gal-icon.jpg  OLIOSTER  (talk) 13:53, September 7, 2013 (UTC)
 * 8) ***Maybe you could say that it was edible by all player species in the game in the BTS and mention in the body that many different species found it edible. The infobox edible section can probably go.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  02:46, September 10, 2013 (UTC)

Viic

 * Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:53, September 5, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:The start of what I hope will be several Alderaan TOR articles.

(2 ECs/0 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  16:07, September 5, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 22:46, September 6, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Zilior uprising

 * Nominated by:  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  05:07, September 6, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Companion article to Lord Drowl...

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:26, September 6, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 22:49, September 6, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Battle between the Kwa and the Rakata

 * Nominated by: Cade  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg  Calrayn  23:24, September 9, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Project Dawn of the Jedi begins

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) Cade nomming a non-TOR article? What is the world coming to?  501st  dogma ( talk ) 00:40, September 11, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:54, September 11, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) 501st
 * 2) * First of all, you bold War in the body, while you should have bolded battle or something else instead.
 * 3) **It's "made war" - an expression. I bolded both words.
 * 4) * You need to mention that the Kwa took heavy causalities on the body.
 * 5) **Done.
 * 6) * "Following the battle, the Kwa destroyed or disabled most of the remaining gates across the galaxy and retreated to their homeworld of Dathomir, though some like A'nang remained behind on worlds such as Tython." The first time I read this, I thought A'nang was a gate, so perhaps a bit of context on him is required to clear that up.
 * 7) **Done.
 * 8) *Good work.  501st  dogma ( talk ) 00:26, September 11, 2013 (UTC)
 * 9) **Danke. Cade  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg  Calrayn  00:29, September 11, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Shae Koda's father

 * Nominated by: Cade  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg  Calrayn  23:24, September 9, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Project Dawn of the Jedi

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 00:33, September 11, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:02, September 11, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Shae Koda's mother

 * Nominated by: Cade  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg  Calrayn  23:24, September 9, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Project Dawn of the Jedi

(0 ECs/1 Users/1 Total)
Support
 * 1) Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:46, September 11, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) 501st
 * 2) *203 words - needs intro Mister Cadeth. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 00:34, September 11, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) **Meh. Done. Cade  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg  Calrayn  00:50, September 11, 2013 (UTC)


 * 1) Ayrehead
 * 2) * Sek'nos Rath needs to be linked in the quote or article. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:01, September 11, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) * Could you describe her clothing a little and mention that she how she wore her hair? Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:01, September 11, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) **Both done. Cade  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg  Calrayn  14:21, September 11, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Garto

 * Nominated by: Cade  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg  Calrayn  23:24, September 9, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Project Dawn of the Jedi

(0 ECs/1 Users/1 Total)
Support
 * 1) Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:49, September 11, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Ayrehead
 * 2) * I maybe wrong on this but shouldn't Garto be in the crime lords category? If so you could probably also pipelink where it says "head of one of the Nine houses" to crime lord in the article.
 * 3) **Done.
 * 4) * Assassination attempt on Volnos Ryo needs to be linked. I'd of done it myself but thought I should draw it to your attention since it isn't amongst the articles on your project. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:09, September 11, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) **Interesting. Linked. Cade  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg  Calrayn  14:22, September 11, 2013 (UTC)

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Herf (slave)

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 * 1) Since you mention Xesh and Trill could you also mention Yirt? Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:14, September 11, 2013 (UTC)
 * No, because those are two different flashbacks. We can't be sure they were slaves together. Cade  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg  Calrayn  14:24, September 11, 2013 (UTC)

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Yirt (slave)

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 * 1) Could you directly state Yirt was male and pipelink it to sexes somewhere in the body. Although actually looking at the comic are you sure Yirt is a male? Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:26, September 11, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) *I'd say he's probably male, but removed, since it's never stated. Cade  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg  Calrayn  14:29, September 11, 2013 (UTC)

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