Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Cal Alder/Legends


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Support
 * 1) Kind of short, but...that's all there is. Toprawa and Ralltiir 22:51, 29 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) A quick read. Greyman  http://images.wikia.com/central/images/9/9c/Jan.png ( Talk ) 03:47, 3 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) I think it's definitely safe to say you've included all there is to know about Mr. Alder. Back when I collected CCG, Cal was the very first card I ever got, so I have a soft spot for the guy. lol --Colinmcev 05:27, 4 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) The "most noms for one source" award goes to...Toprawa and Ralltiir!  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 20:22, 7 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) Graestan ( Talk ) 12:15, 12 April 2008 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) From the squalid cubicle of Graestan:
 * 2) * Again, "in service to" doesn't sit right with me, somehow.
 * 3) **Reworded.
 * 4) * "Cal Alder was a lieutenant and highly trained, expert scout of the Alliance to Restore the Republic." – Lieutenant isn't really an adjective here.
 * 5) **Reordered.
 * 6) * Is the Battle of Nentan only mentioned in that one source, that you know of? If so, that would be an easy redlink.
 * 7) **Actually, Nentan is described in pretty good detail in Galaxy Guide 3 for Derlin and Carlist Rieekan's involvement. It's actually on my list of things to do, so I'll try to get around to that.
 * 8) * "His expertise in terrain scouting and native creatures impressed Derlin and made him among the first to arrive at the base." – Clarify whom you are speaking of.
 * 9) **Reworded
 * 10) * Is this the person to whom Han is speaking when he says "Deck Officer&hellip;" ? If not, please note in the BtS who that was, for the film's credits seem to cause some confusion.
 * 11) **Cleared up. Toprawa and Ralltiir 04:51, 12 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 12) *I'm loving these little noms about the soldiers. Graestan ( Talk ) 03:59, 12 April 2008 (UTC)

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