Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Janus Greejatus


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Janus Greejatus

 * Nomination by: Thefourdotelipsis 02:25, 25 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: No. 100.

(5 Inqs/1 users/6 total)
Support
 * 1) Congrats, Mr. Maddocks. Nice story, great article, and Havac did a good job with the BTS.  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  20:01, 25 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) I'd hope you'd be able to FA this, since Greejatus is technically your character. Grand Moff Tranner [[Image:Imperial Department of Military Research.svg|20px]] (Comlink) 20:56, 25 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) Excellent. Congrats. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 19:42, 26 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 4)  Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 17:14, 28 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) Too bad this won't be your literal 100th FA, but your 100th nomination deserves major props nonetheless. :D Cull Tremayne 02:53, 11 December 2008 (UTC)
 * 6) --  Darth Culator  (Talk) 16:53, 11 December 2008 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) In the BtS, it should state that the Greetajus image used in the Death Star Technical Companion was used to represent Ars Dangor, but that a different portrayal of Dangor was used in the Star Wars Trilogy Sourcebook - Special Edition (the last part may be less relevant to Greetajus but I would personally include it - your call). Haven't read the entirety of it yet but I look forward to it. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 08:46, 25 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) *Fixed. Thefourdotelipsis 09:45, 25 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) From the Moffship of Grand Moff Tranner:
 * 4) * "While there, he attempted to convince Tarkin to seize power with the battlestation,[1] but both the Death Star and Tarkin were later destroyed at the Battle of Yavin,[13] but Palpatine learned of Greejatus' encouragement of Tarkin, and decided to keep Chommell Minor native close at hand.[1]" One too many "buts," I think.
 * 5) **Fixed
 * 6) * Some more context on the Invasion of Naboo, the Battle of Yavin, and the Battle of Endor would be nice. Grand Moff Tranner [[Image:Imperial Department of Military Research.svg|20px]] (Comlink) 12:10, 25 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 7) **I've added who destroyed the station for Yavin, but neither it or the Invasion of Naboo are directly relevant to Greejatus. What is relevant to Greejatus in terms of the Battle of Endor is already there. Thefourdotelipsis 12:26, 25 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 8) ***Fair enough - I only suggested that because I was asked for context on everything in my two noms. Grand Moff Tranner [[Image:Imperial Department of Military Research.svg|20px]] (Comlink) 20:56, 25 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 9) From the desk of Atarumaster88
 * 10) * Predictable and easy to control according to who? Palpy?
 * 11) **According to the CCG card, which doesn't specify, unfortunately.
 * 12) * I'd also say that he wasn't entirely faithful to Palpy, since he was encouraging Tarkin to defect.
 * 13) **Yes, that's what I get for not reading every source beforehand. :P Tweaked slightly.
 * 14) *Otherwise, excellently done. Ego-trippin', finger-lickin' good. :-P Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 16:12, 26 November 2008 (UTC)
 * 15) **Thanks for the review. :D Thefourdotelipsis 21:12, 26 November 2008 (UTC)

Comments
 * Massive thanks to Havac for writing the BTS for me. Thefourdotelipsis 02:25, 25 November 2008 (UTC)
 * I think mention of his Force-sensitivity earlier in the bio would be prudent, but it's not big enough of an issue to object over. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 19:42, 26 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Yah, that's in there now. Thefourdotelipsis 21:12, 26 November 2008 (UTC)