Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Zelashiel


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Zelashiel

 * Nominated by: &mdash; 03:20, January 13, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: I enjoyed writing this.

(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 15:57, January 13, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  18:18, January 13, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3)  Commander Code-8  To say hi, press 42 21:42, January 13, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 01:15, January 15, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) CC-8
 * 2) * You shold say what year Bane mentioned this guy
 * 3) **No specific year was mentioned, since Bane's text, The Rule of Two, was written during his time as the Dark Lord, I just put that it was during his time as Dark Lord.&mdash; 15:49, January 13, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) * I've been told not to link things in quotes, so it may not be best to have the angels bit there.  Commander Code-8  To say hi, press 42 11:04, January 13, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) **I do agree, though I thought it would be a good idea since Wallace himself linked it.&mdash; 15:42, January 13, 2013 (UTC)
 * 6) 501st
 * 7) * Why is there a random ) in the middle of the quote?
 * 8) **Wallace's mistake.&mdash; 15:42, January 13, 2013 (UTC)
 * 9) * Perhaps you should add the fallen from grace part to the BtS?
 * 10) **Done.&mdash; 15:42, January 13, 2013 (UTC)
 * 11) * 501st dogma ( talk ) 14:22, January 13, 2013 (UTC)
 * 12) Exiled Jedi
 * 13) * Why are you using a different template for the BTS quote? The formatting doesn't look quite right. Would it be fine if you used the normal quote template?
 * 14) * I assume that Zelashiel was Force-sensitive. Could you make that clear in the article?
 * 15) * Since the Book of Sith is an in-universe book, could you link to and mention the book in the body of the article?
 * 16) * "prior to his destruction of the Brotherhood of Darkness, which ended the New Sith Wars." Could you make it clearer who destroyed the Brotherhood?
 * 17) * The last sentence is also kind of confusing. Could you reword it? -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:07, January 13, 2013 (UTC)
 * 18) **Taken care of all, I think.&mdash; 16:27, January 13, 2013 (UTC)

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