Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Clabburn the Elder


 * ''The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a featured article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.

(5 Inqs/3 Users/8 Total)
Support
 * 1) Toprawa and Ralltiir 18:41, 8 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 2)  Graestan ( Talk ) 02:15, 9 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) --  Darth Culator  (Talk) 02:28, 10 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) Ozzel 05:21, 10 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) You have a thing for Hoth.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 19:15, 11 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 6) --Eyrezer 10:05, 12 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 7)  Greyman ( Talk ) 19:09, 15 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 8) Good job, Toprawa.  Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 05:31, 19 March 2008 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) That image is pretty terrible. Can another one be acquired?  Graestan ( Talk ) 01:58, 9 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) *I uploaded a new version with far less artifacts. If necessary, I can upload a .png version instead (better quality, bigger file size). --Imperialles 02:12, 9 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) **Much better.
 * 4) From the desk of Atarumaster88
 * 5) * Intro could use a couple more sentences, particularly regarding Malachite Stone and Clabburn the Younger.
 * 6) **Expanded intro, including the Malachite Stone. ;) Toprawa and Ralltiir 22:25, 18 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 7) * " apathetic treatment of others, especially those who had the unfortunate fate of falling victim to one of his raids". Apathetic doesn't seem to be a proper descriptive word. Apathy would imply he didn't care about others one way or another; your description in the bio might merit a "merciless" or "harsh", but that's just my opinion. I won't argue this one out.
 * 8) **I agree. Someone else changed it to "apathetic." Will change it back. Toprawa and Ralltiir 21:45, 18 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 9) * Similar to above, I'm not sure about "In a word, Clabburn was ruthless, a trait not uncommon among the Mugaari, though he gave the concept new meaning."
 * 10) *Have a Super Terrific Friendly Un-frustrating day. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 19:40, 18 March 2008 (UTC)

Comments

'''Approved by Inquisitorius 19:18, 20 March 2008 (UTC)
 * There are no pictures for him. Toprawa and Ralltiir 18:41, 8 March 2008 (UTC)