Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Unidentified Kel Dor Sith Lord


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Unidentified Kel Dor Sith Lord

 * Nominated by: &mdash; 06:24, January 14, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Powah!

(4 ECs/2 Users/6 Total)
Support
 * 1) Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 01:27, January 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) Winterz (talk) 19:39, January 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 21:27, January 16, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) Menkooroo (talk) 06:50, January 18, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  13:44, January 18, 2013 (UTC)
 * 6) DarthRevan1173 RevanTOR001.jpg (Long live Lord Revan) 02:28, January 23, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) DarthRevan1173
 * 2) * The article could use a personality and traits section.
 * 3) * Also a powers and ability section wouldn't be a bad idea. DarthRevan1173 RevanTOR001.jpg (Long live Lord Revan) 06:28, January 14, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) **Taken care of both.&mdash; 06:43, January 14, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) ***Just a note from me: comprehensive articles that are short enough to not require an intro (less than 200 words) don't require subsectioning. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 01:27, January 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * 6) Winterz goes to Hollywood
 * 7) * The last sentence of the P&a should go. They are already mentioned in the previous section and the appearance is irrelevant to the P&a section. Winterz (talk) 08:53, January 14, 2013 (UTC)
 * 8) **Done.&mdash; 17:09, January 14, 2013 (UTC)
 * 9) Exiled Jedi
 * 10) * If you section the article, I believe you need a biography section. The bio should give more information about the fight between the Sith and the officers.
 * 11) * His robes look more like a dark brown to me. He also seems to wearing some kind of chest armor. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  05:46, January 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * 12) **Taken care of both, I took Menk's suggestion.&mdash; 14:58, January 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * 13) Another opinion on the subsectioning!
 * 14) * The article is short enough that subsectioning isn't needed --- since there are only 108 in-universe words, subsectioning is actually a detriment to the article rather than a benefit. So many short sections in a row are a big eyesore. Menkooroo (talk) 06:45, January 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * 15) **Took your suggestion, Menk.&mdash; 14:58, January 15, 2013 (UTC)

Comments
 * 1) *The Jedi Academy Training Manual was unclear as to what era the character falls under, so.&mdash; 06:26, January 14, 2013 (UTC)