Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Siege of Zygerria


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Siege of Zygerria

 * Nominated by: 501st  dogma ( talk ) 20:37, July 14, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Doesn't look like the Zygerrians had much choice in negotiating peace.

(2 ECs/2 Users/4 Total)
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 * 1)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  02:23, July 15, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 12:57, July 29, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) Tinwe (comlink) 09:45, July 31, 2012 (UTC)
 * 4) Menkooroo (talk) 23:25, August 11, 2012 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * Could you break up or reword the first sentence to improve the flow of the article? -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  23:28, July 14, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) **Mixed around for better flow. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 23:34, July 14, 2012 (UTC)
 * 4) ***I tweaked a few things.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  23:56, July 14, 2012 (UTC)
 * 5) ****That looks a lot better that my version. :) 501st  dogma ( talk ) 00:55, July 15, 2012 (UTC)
 * 6) * Shouldn't the Raids on Tervisses be mentioned in the infobox in the following section? -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  23:56, July 14, 2012 (UTC)
 * 7) **Done. Thanks for pointing that out. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 00:53, July 15, 2012 (UTC)
 * 8) Storage Wars
 * 9) * Do you know if the Imperial advisor is an Imperial Advisor? Also, do you think he should get his own article?
 * 10) **Created and added.
 * 11) * Check out the "Outcome" section of the infobox --- there's a pretty big error there lawl. Menkooroo (talk) 23:03, August 11, 2012 (UTC)
 * 12) **I knew that was there all along. Just trying to test you reviewers. :) Thanks for the review. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 23:20, August 11, 2012 (UTC)

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