Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Battle of Tiems


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Battle of Tiems

 * Nominated by: Cavalier One [[Image:FarStar Logo.jpg|20px]]( Squadron channel ) 09:55, 20 January 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: I know its over 1,000 words, but I want to work the kinks out of this one before taking it to FAN.

(2 ACs/4 Users/6 Total)
Support
 * 1) --Skippy Farlstendoiro 16:37, 20 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) Nice work.  Grunny  (Talk) 14:50, 21 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) Goodwood  [[Image:Redstarbird.svg|20px]] ( Alliance Intelligence ) 23:16, 21 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) A good read. 05:26, 22 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) DC 16:37, 30 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 6) Cylka  -talk- 04:46, 31 January 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Three small things:
 * 2) * The last two sentences in the second "Aftermath" paragraph seem a bit redundant.
 * 3) **Switched it to the third paragraph, and tried to contextualize its importance.
 * 4) * I'd like to see the "Prelude", "The battle" and "Aftermath" sections merged into a History section, but will leave that up to you.
 * 5) **All other battle articles attaining GA/FA status are structured this way, so I followed the established trend.
 * 6) ***Fair enough.
 * 7) * Use of the word "force(s)" is a bit too frequent, particularly in the intro.
 * 8) **Tried to mix it up a little.
 * 9) *Keep up the good work mate!-- Goodwood [[Image:Redstarbird.svg|20px]] ( Alliance Intelligence ) 05:07, 21 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 10) **Thanks - got more out of this one than I expected. - Cavalier One [[Image:FarStar Logo.jpg|20px]]( Squadron channel ) 12:44, 21 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 11) ***Funny how these things work out. :-) Goodwood  [[Image:Redstarbird.svg|20px]] ( Alliance Intelligence ) 23:16, 21 January 2009 (UTC)

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