Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Fourth Pius Dea Crusade


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Fourth Pius Dea Crusade

 * Nominated by: Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 03:44, May 11, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

(3 ECs/0 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  02:46, May 28, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) &mdash;  07:44, June 22, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) Menkooroo 03:48, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * Context on the Pabol Hutta.
 * 3) **Done.
 * 4) * Create an article for Delacta.
 * 5) **Actually, it's Delacrix. Woops.
 * 6) * You need to mention everything inside the infobox in the body of the article as well. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  12:45, May 21, 2012 (UTC)
 * 7) **Done. Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 16:33, May 26, 2012 (UTC)


 * 1) Crusade
 * 2) * The infobox isn't fully sourced.
 * 3) **Done.
 * 4) * "First appeared" in the BTS isn't quite right, as Warfare doesn't go in the "Appearances" section. "First mentioned" or something similar would be more accurate.
 * 5) **Done.
 * 6) * Since this is a war, it should probably link to its battles. I'd like to see articles created for the battles of the five planets mentioned. You could give them some chronology, too, by following the arrows; eg, Boonta is attacked before Klatooine, etc. The one arrow launches from Ord Zat, too, which should be mentioned.
 * 7) **Fine, give me a little while.
 * 8) ***Per our IRC discussion, I was mistaken! There's no actual indication on the map that battles took place at those specific planets. So the arrows should only be used for chronology, and the planets should get mentioned as being in the invasion corridor, but asserting that they were the sites of specific battles would be speculation. Just putting it here for the public record. :D Menkooroo 00:22, June 19, 2012 (UTC)
 * 9) * Is Vaathknee within the one arrow? It looks like it is. Dennogra and Taskeed look like they might be in the other one, too.
 * 10) **Done. But it's actually Vaathkree :)
 * 11) * "In the northern regions of Hutt Space..." On to the map in Warfare, those planets are all actually outside of Hutt Space.
 * 12) **Done.
 * 13) * Could Pius Dea Era be mentioned and linked somewhere? Menkooroo 01:33, June 10, 2012 (UTC)
 * 14) **Done. Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 22:48, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

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