Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/E-3 blaster


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E-3 blaster

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:14, September 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Late contribution to the Barn-burner to get it up past the last Barn-burner.

(2 ECs/0 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 22:46, September 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Looks good.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  22:47, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Axinal
 * 2) *Article looks pretty good; the only problem I have is that the sentences in the prose seem a bit choppy: "He carried...He carried...He thought..." Could you perhaps rewrite the last few sentences to make the flow a little more natural? Otherwise, very nice.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 22:35, September 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Thanks! See how it looks now. BTW, welcome back to the CAN page. :) Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:41, September 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Much better. I made a couple of tweaks, but I think that's all I have. Thank you, by the way&mdash;I took a break for a while, partly because Wikia stopped emailing me when pages on my watchlist were changed, but that issue has been resolved and I'm hoping to be more active here and elsewhere on Wookieepedia.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 22:46, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

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