Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Unidentified male pilot (senflax patient)


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Unidentified male pilot (senflax patient)

 * Nominated by: QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 09:55, March 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: And now for something completely different.

(2 ECs/2 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1) Menkooroo 10:33, March 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Hanzo Hasashi 15:35, March 31, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) A man...with three buttocks. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 17:07, March 31, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4)  Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 20:04, March 31, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Imperators II
 * 2) * Again, I think you should add to the Bts section that the pilot was not named in Dynasty of Evil. Otherwise, good job.  Imperators II (Talk) 17:53, March 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Done. QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 19:07, March 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) Jujiggum
 * 5) * There's enough info to subsection into a biography and an intro. I doubt that it will bring the article over 250 words, but there's enough information that it should still be done.
 * 6) **Done.
 * 7) * The article's name needs some kind of additional identifier. We already have a ton of "unidentified pilot" articles. Please add at least "male," and I would suggest some sort of further parameter in parentheses at the end, as well.
 * 8) **Actually, as there will certainly be other unidentified male pilots in the future, you may want to go for something like "Unidentified pilot (senflax patient)" or something to that effect. Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 18:15, March 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) ***&hellip;which is exactly why I suggested adding a further specifying parameter in parentheses as well. :P Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 18:25, March 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) ****Moved.
 * 11) * You have a brief tense deviation in the artcle. Please ensure that you stay strictly within the past tense in all IU sections.
 * 12) **Addressed. QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 19:07, March 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * 13) * Jonjedigrandmaster ( Talk ) 15:04, March 29, 2011 (UTC)
 * 14) *As a note: I've removed the link to Doctor, because the article isn't about just anyone who heals, it's about people who hold the title; and as I recall, Caleb didn't hold that title. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 20:04, March 31, 2011 (UTC)

Comments
 * You might want to get rid of the table of contents. I think all CA's are supposed to have none. However, I have seen CA's with table of contents as well. Hanzo Hasashi 15:35, March 31, 2011 (UTC)
 * For future reference, you are supposed to get rid of them. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 17:07, March 31, 2011 (UTC)