User talk:Clone Commander Lee

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 * Good catch on those minor characters from Traitor, but watch carefully the edits being made to your articles. Proper formatting is important. Articles need to be included in relevant categories, say, for example, Humans, Males, Slaves, and the Appearances need to be linked, italicized, and formatted. Here's hoping you stick around, learn the ropes, and help the Wook grow. Enochf 18:52, 16 October 2008 (UTC)

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Thank You. I do. --Clone Commander Lee 22:03, 3 January 2009 (UTC)

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Do not recreate pages that have been deleted. If you continue, you will be blocked from editing. Toprawa and Ralltiir 19:32, 9 January 2009 (UTC)

Why have the unidentified pages from Duel of the Droids have been deleted ? I see no reason for it ! --Clone Commander Lee 19:34, 9 January 2009 (UTC)
 * There's no point in creating individual articles for every nameless, meaningless extra that we see. It serves no purpose and only clutters the wiki. By your reasoning there should be an article on every ewok, stormtrooper and jawa ever glimpsed in the Star Wars films. It just makes no encyclopedic sense. Gry Sarth 20:00, 9 February 2009 (UTC)
 * Okay but funnily the unidentified Aqualish technican page has been created again.--Clone Commander Lee 18:57, 17 February 2009 (UTC)

User Page
OK, I have to say, you've got the best user page ever. It's succinct, to the point, and elegantly understated. Quite refreshing! DolukTalk 19:57, 10 January 2009 (UTC)

Recent changes patroller
How can you become a recent changes patroller ? --Clone Commander Lee 18:05, 17 April 2009 (UTC)
 * Its a self-proclaimed title. If you make use of the Recent Changes/Latest Activity page/box a lot, then you can dub yourself this and put the userbox on your page.  &mdash;Lucius malfoy7  Nute777.png ( Give it up for Lil' 'Soka Tano, ladies and gents! ) 20:20, 20 April 2009 (UTC)

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 * Sorry but this page was complete useless. It wasn't deleted for 3 months and so it tried to delete it. This won't happen again. --Clone Commander Lee 17:44, 28 April 2009 (UTC)

Broadside
Hey Lee, I was wondering how Broadside is going. You said on the TCW project that you were going to work on the Broadeside (clone) article, but I saw that you have not editted on the article since the 18th of April. If you are still planning on working on the article, fell free to continue editting on Broadside or ask me or any of the other project members for advise if needed. If not, could you please then remove Broadside from the current individual projects list incase another user wants to take it as a project. Thanks. :) Kilson Likes PIE 21:03, 05 May 09 (UTC)


 * I've made some edits on this page today. If you want to do some more feel free to do so. --Clone Commander Lee 17:37, 6 May 2009 (UTC)

One month already
Hello to all the members of WookieeProject: The Clone Wars! Considering the project has just been launched, we've had a great first month, taking three articles to FA status and five articles to GA status. I would like to remind you to please try to do whatever you can to help out; there are still many potential articles that can be taken up as projects, and many of you are already working very hard on them. In the next month, we have a goal to double (if not multiply even more) our current FAs and GAs, because once Season Two starts airing, there will be a ton of more articles that will require attention, and it's best if we get as many as we can out of the way now. Thank you for contributing! Your project head,  CC7567  (talk) 20:20, 15 May 2009 (UTC)

GAN
First of all, you aren't allowed to vote for articles you nominate. Users used to be able to, but that was changed in a policy revamp. To nominate an article, start editing the GAN page and scroll all the way down to the bottom. You should see this:

That's the nomination template format. Copy it and paste it just above it so that it's at the bottom of the page when you hit the "Preview" button, and fill out the required fields (the article's name, and signing your name with ~ under "nominated by"). Optionally, you can post a comment for the nomination. Once you're ready, you can submit the page, and the article will be nominated.

Glancing through the article, there are several minor issues that should be corrected beforehand. I'll continue reviewing once the article is nominated on the GAN page, but for now, there should be no sourcing in the intro. Zak's birth is not referenceable to any source; everything except his birth has a source, and that's the Clone trooper Databank entry. Additionally, I recommend placing the article into Microsoft Word or a similar word processing program and running both a spelling check and a grammar check for the article. Please also make sure that the article adheres to both the Manual of Style and the Layout Guide.  CC7567  (talk) 07:08, 3 June 2009 (UTC)

The Gauntlet of Death
Can someone can help my with this project cause I only have the preview. --Clone Commander Lee 07:37, 3 June 2009 (UTC)
 * First of all, you might want to specifically ask someone on his or her talk page, because I'm not sure if others will see messages you put on your own talk page. Second, if you don't have the necessary materials, you might just not be able to complete it. In taking up projects, we assume that you have all the materials necessary to complete it.  CC7567  (talk) 16:02, 3 June 2009 (UTC)

RE: Zak (clone)
Hey Lee, in the future, when you have addressed objections on one of your noms, please leave a message on the actual nomination page itself. For examples of what I mean, just take a look at some of the other Good article noms. Most of the time, people put "Addressed", or "fixed", under each objection separately, so that it is easier for the reviewer&mdash;and the nominator&mdash;to keep track of what the nominator has and hasn't fixed. Thanks! :) Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jujiggum ) 14:02, 6 June 2009 (UTC)
 * I'm going to go ahead and take the liberty of clarifying the "bold" comment that CC7567 is objecting to on the GAN page since the bold sentence was my addition to begin with. Just wanted to give you the heads up. -  JMAS  Hey, it's me! 00:08, 12 July 2009 (UTC)

Your GAN articles
Hey Commander Lee, just so you know, you can add WP:GAN to your watch page to check in on your nominated articles. I listed quite a few objections in your Rugor Nass and Slammer noms, so you might want to check up on those when you have time. :)  JangFett  Talk 18:26, 10 June 2009 (UTC)

IRC
Please come on IRC and join #WP:TCW when you can. If you need help, don't hesitate to ask.  CC7567  (talk) 23:05, 10 June 2009 (UTC)
 * For now, I would advise requesting an AC removal vote for Slammer. The article isn't sourced, needs to be expanded, and needs to comply with all other GA policies before it should be nominated. Please contact me with your thoughts.  CC7567  (talk) 04:11, 12 June 2009 (UTC)
 * The way we remove nominations is by starting a removal vote, and once there are three votes, a nomination can be removed. Also, the easiest way to join IRC is by going to Wikia's web gateway, selecting the channel you want to join and typing in your name.  CC7567  (talk) 19:05, 13 June 2009 (UTC)

Rugor Nass
Lee, I'd like to ask you if you're still intent on seeing Rugor Nass through its GAN process. As it stands, there are a lot of objections that still need to be fixed, and I feel that it would be better for you to learn what's expected of a Good article with Zak, as his article is much shorter and easier to do. In any case, if Nass doesn't see any work by next Wednesday, he will have to be removed under our policy of a three-week inactivity or failure to address objections. If you still have the intent to work on him, please let myself or an AC member know as soon as possible. Thank you.  CC7567  (talk) 22:51, 27 June 2009 (UTC)

WP:TCW again
Hey Clone Commander Lee. As project head for WP:TCW, I'm trying to get a better idea of who's still interested in participating in our project. If you're still interested in participating, please leave a note on my talk page or contact me in IRC. If you do not respond within a week, I will assume that you are no longer interested in participating. That doesn't mean that your name will be removed from the "Participants" list, but it means that any of your current projects will be removed from the project page so that others have a chance to work on them. Likewise, if you currently have any projects under your belt, I highly encourage you to review them, and if you don't plan on working on them within the next two or three weeks, I recommend reconsidering them. Thanks. Your project head,  CC7567  (talk) 05:48, 3 July 2009 (UTC)
 * Lee, do you really feel that you can take on Broadside, Matchstick, Jek, and Rys when you haven't even passed a Good article yet? I would seriously recommend considering holding off on them and trying to pass Zak first so that you know what to expect when writing.  CC7567  (talk) 18:47, 4 July 2009 (UTC)

Re: Rescue on the Tranquility
The two that were "killed" by Ventress later got back up. They were only knocked out.  CC7567  (talk) 19:23, 9 July 2009 (UTC)
 * Nevermind; I made a mistake. The ones that she deflected shots at were the other two that were killed.  CC7567  (talk) 19:38, 9 July 2009 (UTC)

Re: Broadside
I don't have the time to review it now, but I would recommend looking through the MOS and LG yourself. Also, none of your sourcing is working. Furthermore, are you sure that all my objections for Zak are addressed? I haven't taken another look at it yet, but I'm not going to review Broadside if there are still objections remaining for Zak. Furthermore, I'm going to waste my time if I have to object to the same things on both articles, so please make sure both are ready before I look at either.  CC7567  (talk) 17:51, 10 July 2009 (UTC)
 * Lee, I'm simply going to ask you to stop taking up so many WP:TCW projects until you can show that you can pass one GA. Unless you are extremely confident that you can do eight articles in two weeks (that's the set deadline for all current projects, and you haven't worked on Gobi Glie for months) without even having passed a single GA or knowing what's expected of one, I would highly advise that you reconsider. If you're just reserving them because you're worried that others will take them, they most likely won't.  CC7567  (talk) 18:04, 11 July 2009 (UTC)
 * If you plan on cutting down on your projects, please remove the ones that you no longer immediately plan to work on from the project page. Thank you.  CC7567  (talk) 18:41, 11 July 2009 (UTC)

Broadside
Lee, I'll give it a copyedit once you're done. I went in and corrected your references and sources.  JangFett  Talk 18:26, 10 July 2009 (UTC) > JangFett  Talk 18:47, 10 July 2009 (UTC) > JangFett  Talk 13:41, 11 July 2009 (UTC) Okay. First thing, make sure you expand the intro. I corrected quite a lot of grammatical errors, and tense issues. I saw issues with underlinking. Also, if I recall, only Skywalker and Tano went to the facility to get the Y-wings. Broadside joined Skywalker, Yularen, and Koon inside the Resolute. You don't need to much information from Procedure as well, try to cut down the content, only mention if it is related to Broadside. Read this: "Skywalker concluded, cause Ryndellia was near to Naboo, that Grievous next attack aim was the Kaliida Shoals Medical Center." Improper English. Try to go back and correct some of these issues, they're quite a few of them. Overall, this article needs a lot of work before I can give it a proper copyedit. If you need help, I'll be on IRC channel #WP:TCW most of the day today.  JangFett  Talk 15:42, 12 July 2009 (UTC) > JangFett  Talk 18:41, 12 July 2009 (UTC) > JangFett  Talk 19:08, 13 July 2009 (UTC) > JangFett  Talk 19:14, 13 July 2009 (UTC) > JangFett  Talk 19:17, 13 July 2009 (UTC) > JangFett  Talk 19:22, 13 July 2009 (UTC) > JangFett  Talk 19:39, 13 July 2009 (UTC)
 * Once you're done, you can send me a message/reply to this. The tag is still on Broadside, so I don't want to begin editing it.<span style="font-variant: small-caps; font-family: Verdana; font-size: 12px"
 * I'll take a look at it later on today. :) <span style="font-variant: small-caps; font-family: Verdana; font-size: 12px"
 * Please, if you have time, login into IRC channel #WP:TCW. I need to discuss issues regarding Broadside, and it's better than spamming your talk page :) <span style="font-variant: small-caps; font-family: Verdana; font-size: 12px"
 * Try, it's Wikia's IRC channel gateway. Click the dropdown and find #WP:TCW. <span style="font-variant: small-caps; font-family: Verdana; font-size: 12px"
 * What error does it say? <span style="font-variant: small-caps; font-family: Verdana; font-size: 12px"
 * Have you ever logged into IRC before? I'm not sure if freenode is down, or if your firewall is blocking the connection. <span style="font-variant: small-caps; font-family: Verdana; font-size: 12px"
 * I'm talking about have you ever been on IRC before in the past. Is this error new to you? <span style="font-variant: small-caps; font-family: Verdana; font-size: 12px"
 * It is a possibility that your firewall is blocking your connection, or if you using a wireless connection, it has a weak signal and cannot connect to freenode.  JangFett  Talk 19:10, 16 July 2009 (UTC)

Re: Wolffe
Sorry; I didn't realize that you had already taken him. But next time, please try to make sure that you cross out your projects in the master lists so that others know what's been taken.  CC7567  (talk) 18:19, 19 July 2009 (UTC)
 * Whoever archived your nom must have forgotten to do so. In any case, it's too late now for the notice, but congratulations. :)  CC7567  (talk) 18:32, 19 July 2009 (UTC)
 * If you're the one who took it to Good status, then yes, you can.  CC7567  (talk) 18:35, 19 July 2009 (UTC)

Re:
Zak (clone). It is listed as a good article, and possibly the AC forgot to message you the successful GA nom template.  JangFett  Talk 18:54, 19 July 2009 (UTC)

More Broadside
Hey Lee, since you cannot login to IRC, I'll explain what needs to be done for Broadside. I'll continue after you nominate it. Actually, Lee I would like to check this article again before you nominate it. :)  JangFett  Talk 19:11, 19 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) Expand the intro
 * 2) Intro- "After going throught the Balmorran Run, Shadow Squadron engaged the Malevolence and destroyed their ion cannons, forcing Grievous ship to retreat." Don't forget to check your spelling. Also, watch out for underlinking and overlinking issues. Yes, Shadow Squadron did engage the Malevolence, but Grievous did not retreat after they destroyed the warship's ion cannon. Malevolence must be in italics, same goes with any type of ship. (i.e Venator-class Star Destroyer)
 * 3) Bio- In the first paragraph, you need to source it. Also, their is no build up for Broadside's mission. Explain where Broadside served in the GAR, and his mission around 22 BBY.
 * 4) I see tense and minor grammatical errors throughout the article. Also, again, watch out for underlinking issues. Any time a new subject comes up, link it&mdash;but only if it hasn't been linked before in the article. You can link a subject in the intro, then link the subject again&mdash;only once though&mdash;in the bio too. Make sure you add context as well.
 * 5) Add quotes for the bio, and if you can, the P&T.
 * 6) Add another image in the bio, and move the current image in the bio near where Shadow Squadron took off for the Balmorra Run.
 * 7) Make sure your references are correct. Double check, and don't forget to reference "Kamino" in the infobox.
 * 8) Missing sources in the sources section.

> JangFett  Talk 18:10, 20 July 2009 (UTC) > JangFett  Talk 18:28, 20 July 2009 (UTC) > JangFett  Talk 18:32, 20 July 2009 (UTC) > JangFett  Talk 18:34, 20 July 2009 (UTC)
 * You must misunderstood me Lee, make sure you be careful of overlinking and underlinking in your articles. I went in and gave broadside a copyedit, and you did a good job getting all the information in. Make sure you add italics for ship names, such as, Twilight and Malevolence. Change "Forcing Grievous to retreat" in the intro. Grievous did not retreat after Skywalker and Shadow Squadron destroyed the Malevolence ' s ion cannons. Read the last sentence in his bio, which I added, that's correct. Overall good work, and also before you nomiante it, go back and add Plo Koon's part in the battle. I'll check your Senate commando article soon. <span style="font-variant: small-caps; font-family: Verdana; font-size: 12px"
 * Keep the italics and the usage of linking in mind. For the intro, you can add more about Broadside's mission in The Clone Wars: Procedure. The intro needs to be proportional to the bio. <span style="font-variant: small-caps; font-family: Verdana; font-size: 12px"
 * All right, good work Lee :) I'll review the senate commando soon. <span style="font-variant: small-caps; font-family: Verdana; font-size: 12px"
 * Anytime Lee :) <span style="font-variant: small-caps; font-family: Verdana; font-size: 12px"

Unidentified Senate Commando captain
See my talk page for your images. -  JMAS  Hey, it's me! 00:47, 21 July 2009 (UTC)

Re:Broadside and Matchstick
I'll give Matchstick a copyedit later on today. As for my objection for Broadside, I'll strike it out. I'm still planning on giving Broadside another review.  JangFett  Talk 16:30, 23 July 2009 (UTC)

Projects
Lee, I'm simply going to ask you again to make sure that you are one hundred percent confident that you articles are ready to pass the GAN process before you start running off and working on other projects. A lot of them have the same issue of a lack of proofreading, and until you can be consistent, there aren't going to be a lot of people (particularly, myself and the other ACs) who are willing to object to the same things on all of your nominations.  CC7567  (talk) 18:38, 23 July 2009 (UTC)
 * Lee, I hope you understand that I'm both asking you to proofread more and slow down before nominating anything else right now. Thank you.  CC7567  (talk) 15:37, 24 July 2009 (UTC)

As you're a part of the WookieeProject The Clone Wars, I think that you should cross those articles that you have chose, as the rules of the project requires this. I noticed at least one missing crossing here (the Unidentified Senate Commando captain). I could do it myself, but I feel that it's your duty, and I also wanted that you remember it in future, and check the other project of you, and cross them if necessary. Thank you for your time.--Kreivi Wolter 20:37, 24 July 2009 (UTC)
 * I'll give your articles a copyedit Lee, but I strongly recommend that you proofread your articles before you nominate them. I'll take care of Matchstick first, since I did say I was going to give it a copyedit a few days ago.  JangFett  Talk 16:51, 25 July 2009 (UTC)
 * Yes, sorry, I was caught up in my noms, as well as reviewing others. I stroke out my last objection for Broadside.  JangFett  Talk 17:58, 26 July 2009 (UTC)

Re: Broadside
Well, since Broadside isn't called by the name since the departure from the Resolute, one can say that the battle had little to do with him. But I say that we know for sure that he was present and must describe everything that happens to him. Right now, however, this isn't the main problem. Lee, the article seriously suffers on basics such as grammar and linking: it just doesn't read like a good prose. I'll give it another look soon and once all major grammar points are fixed, we could go back to the actual content.  Mauser  Comlink 18:28, 27 July 2009 (UTC)
 * Lee, I'm not going to help you on Broadside until you can prove to me that you're committed to working on his article. If you're going to be working on ten projects at once (and that includes Barb Mentir), I have no way of knowing what your level of commitment is. My perpetual advice to you is to halt your other projects and show me that you are fully committed to your current projects once I put up objections.  CC7567  (talk) 19:18, 27 July 2009 (UTC)

Broadside objection
The objection has been stricken, but as I said, please remember to take care of such things before you nominate an article. Darth Trayus  ( Trayus Academy ) 20:39, 27 July 2009 (UTC)

Broadside (again)
Lee, I'm sorry for the way I acted earlier, but the fact of the matter is that I'm asking you to halt your other projects after I review Broadside. If you're going to continue writing multiple articles at once still without knowing what is expected of a GAN, chances are that a) the same objections will have to be made for every single article and therefore require a rewrite on your part, or b) someone will have to copyedit each one. While the latter usually is not a problem, I would prefer if you learn all you can before working on other projects. If your concern is that you're not a native English speaker, then going through the nomination process first will help you improve it.  CC7567  (talk) 18:04, 28 July 2009 (UTC)

Re: Wooley
No, I did not forget about giving Wooley a second review. I'll get to it as soon as I can Lee :)  JangFett  Talk 16:17, 29 July 2009 (UTC)

Re: The Gauntlet of Death
Right now I'm only planning to promote the Battle of Rishi, so you are welcome to take the rest. As for the comic itself, there are plenty of places on the Internet where you can grab a scan of it. You just have to do some searching ;) QuiGonJinn  (Talk) 12:21, 30 July 2009 (UTC)

Re:CT-327
Sure Lee, I'll give it a copyedit. Have you looked it over and made sure you corrected grammatical errors?  JangFett  Talk 19:00, 30 July 2009 (UTC)

First look

 * 1) All right, first off expand the intro.
 * 2) "While checking a meteorite shower, droid commandos attacked the station and CT-327 was the first to be killed when he recognized the droids with a stun baton" This sentence is very confusing. I'll reword it, but Lee make sure in the future you read your work, even out loud if it helps you. I know English isn't your native language, but at least try :)
 * 3) Are you sure CT-327 was a rookie clone? While I remember the few inside the bunker were, I'm not so sure about 327.
 * 4) I expanded the P&T.
 * 5) After his death, is the rest really relevant to him? While it's fine that you mentioned the back story of the Rookies, the rest of the Rishi moon mission is irreverent.
 * 6) Overall, I corrected a lot of wording issues, minor grammatical issues, and linking. Remember to link new subjects that appear, and always double check your work.  JangFett  Talk 19:18, 30 July 2009 (UTC)
 * Lee, you shouldn't copy from different articles. Even though it may sound correct; you should take notes from it, check the sources and then reword what you want to copy with your own words. While Stride is neither a GA or FA, you still shouldn't copy from other articles.  JangFett  Talk 19:25, 30 July 2009 (UTC)
 * Okay, I'll take a look. Check the guide too Lee, make sure CT-327 is a rookie.  JangFett  Talk 19:34, 30 July 2009 (UTC)
 * While I'm not too sure, try asking CC for suggestions. I know that you cannot keep calling him "rookie" in the article, if it is not confirmed. The article is currently based around the fact that he is a rookie clone, but it could be a assumption. The guide calls him a "Clone sentry", while the rest of the stationed clones were called "rookies" or "shinies".  JangFett  Talk 19:48, 30 July 2009 (UTC)
 * All right Lee, I'll take a look. I'll be going offline soon, and probably won't be able to give Bait a proper copyedit tomorrow because of my busy schedule. I'll try to give it one, but I can't make any promises.  JangFett  Talk 08:05, 1 August 2009 (UTC)
 * I gave it a quick glance copyedit, and right now the P&T still calls him inexperienced. I'll thoroughly review it tomorrow if I can.  JangFett  Talk 08:12, 1 August 2009 (UTC)

Re:Bait
Sure, but lee, I would concentrate on your current noms before you start nominating more.  JangFett  Talk 17:05, 31 July 2009 (UTC)
 * That happened to me when I began starting to write articles. A lot of people tend to nominate one article then go back and nominate more, and that's because they're use to the nomination process and know what to expect. Lee, you currently have one GA, and I'm not saying that's bad. But you should show the AC members, like CC, that you're capable of nominating articles and sticking with it. The majority of your current GANs have the same issues, i.e, grammatical issues, and that's something you need to correct before you start nominating more. While it is fine to let someone else give your articles a copyedit, you should also give it a copyedit during the writing process. You currently have over 10 projects and 4 of which are nominated for GA. Before you start nominating more, stay with the current noms that you have already.  JangFett  Talk 17:16, 31 July 2009 (UTC)
 * No problem Lee, and of course, I'll give Bait a copyedit soon.  JangFett  Talk 17:26, 31 July 2009 (UTC)
 * Okay Lee, a couple of problems.
 * 1) "While altering the appearance of the Delta-7B, Skywalker says to R2 that the damage must look as realistic as possible" Why is he changing the appearance of the Delta-7B, and what is his motive?
 * 2) "Skywalker's Jedi Padawan Ahsoka Tano reports that they're approaching the ice field on schedule" What ice field?
 * 3) "Tano reveals that she thinks that it is a dumb plan and the Separatists will never fall for it" What plan?
 * 4) I don't think Anakin called Ahsoka stupid in the comic :P I fixed that error
 * 5) " Skywalker then releases the fighter and some other trash out of the Twilight and into space." After I corrected this sentence, it shows the lack of build up. While you said this, later on, the batle droids say "Come out Jedi". Was Skywalker actually inside the fighter? Mention that eariler.
 * 6) You frequently use the word "cause", however the way you use it doesn't make sense in the sentence. "Cause" and "Because" are two separate words with different meanings.
 * 7) Again, lack of build up. You failed to mention that he brought a fake lightsaber instead of a real one. Also, was it truly "fake"? You mention that he uses it, so it is a real lightsaber but not his.
 * 8) * JangFett  Talk 16:03, 1 August 2009 (UTC)

Re: CT-327
If you can't find anything that explicitly states that he was a rookie, then chances are that he wasn't.  CC7567  (talk) 19:01, 31 July 2009 (UTC)

Re:
The reason why they're disappearing is because you need to close the  JangFett  Talk 18:40, 3 August 2009 (UTC)

Question Lee
Hey Lee, for a while I have been noticing that you copy everything from my userpage. Why is that? While it's fine that you're using tables and that border around the page, you shouldn't copy everything from my page.  JangFett  Talk 18:03, 4 August 2009 (UTC)
 * Oh, okay. If you like, I'll help you out. If you want the same layout, but with different colors, please say what colors you like and I'll fix up your tables and that border. The Wookieevaction template is fine Lee, don't worry about that :)  JangFett  Talk 18:10, 4 August 2009 (UTC)
 * You mean your signature? Sure.
 * To make a custom signature is easy. First, create a subpage from your userpage. i.e, User:Clone Commander Lee/sig. Then if you know basic HTML, you can start by adding in custom fonts, colors, the size of your name; as well as small images. Then finally, go to your preferences and scroll down and check the box that reads "Custom signature". Above that, paste this: and then save. Your done! If you have any other questions such as knowing HTML, I'll help you out :)  JangFett  Talk 18:18, 4 August 2009 (UTC)

Re: TCW online comics
That's really cool dude, thanks for joining the OOU mini-project. One thing though, Mauser might do Mouse Hunt soon, so if you're about to do it, make sure to ask him first. Kilson Likes PIE 22:44, 04 August 09 (UTC)
 * Yeah, in fact I'm doing Mouse Hunt right now, so please stay away from it. =)  Mauser  Comlink 22:50, 4 August 2009 (UTC)

Re: For you
Thanks Lee :) Here is something for you as well,  JangFett  Talk 18:19, 12 August 2009 (UTC)


 * Your grammar is improving, but before you submit any article changes, use the preview button to double check your work. As for my left over Broadside objections, I apologize and I'll strike the remaining out. For you signature problem, what do you need help with?  JangFett  Talk 18:34, 12 August 2009 (UTC)
 * My name is one word, JangFett. As for your signature, what colors do you want and I'll go head and modify your signature. Is your sig in a subpage? i.e, User:Clone Commander Lee/sig.  JangFett  Talk 18:56, 12 August 2009 (UTC)
 * Okay Lee, here you go :) User:Clone Commander Lee/sig. Now, go to your Preferences and scroll down and check the box that reads "Custom signature". Above that, paste this: and then save.  JangFett  Talk 19:14, 12 August 2009 (UTC)
 * Lee, go back and remove the tags in your preferences :P  JangFett  Talk 20:47, 12 August 2009 (UTC)
 * No Lee :P Here is what you do, without the "nowiki" tags, paste this in that custom sig box, also make sure the "Custom sig" check box is checked.  JangFett  Talk 21:22, 12 August 2009 (UTC)

Re: Broadside
I know. I'll review it again tomorrow. QuiGonJinn (Talk) 18:50, 12 August 2009 (UTC)
 * Cause it's still relevant, that's why. No proof to the statement that the clones guarding the hangar were his superiors.  Mauser  Comlink 03:50, 16 August 2009 (UTC)
 * In TCW the clone troopers have armor of all possible colors and yellow armor alone does not indicate a superior officer. Also, Broadside never confronted that clone, Matchstick did.  Mauser  Comlink 09:31, 16 August 2009 (UTC)
 * I'd say yes, as he never even talked to that clone.  Mauser  Comlink 09:38, 16 August 2009 (UTC)

Re: Thanks
No problem Lee.  JangFett  Talk 19:56, 15 August 2009 (UTC)

Re: Niner
If the GA list, random GA list doesn't show Niner then I can't do anything about that Lee. You should ask an AC member and I'm sure they will add him in. :)  JangFett  Talk 15:20, 16 August 2009 (UTC)

Battle of Gwori
Im still working on it but i need all the help i can get --Jedijake123 18:07, 16 August 2009 (UTC)

Re: Picture from graphic novels
Ill upload a image for the prelude and battle. As for Tracer, I'll upload an image of him as well.  JangFett  Talk 15:31, 17 August 2009 (UTC)

Re: Wooley
I will give him another review when I have the time. As for the Unidentified Senate Commando, it was most likely because whoever was archiving it forgot again. Also, unless you cannot read the notice second from the top on my talk page, please stop leaving me messages regarding ongoing nominations. That's what the GAN page is for.  CC7567  (talk) 18:31, 17 August 2009 (UTC)
 * If I get to him later, I will. If not, then no.  CC7567  (talk) 19:43, 31 August 2009 (UTC)

Re: The Gauntlet of Death
The image which I used in the article was taken from a scan of the comic. If you need any images from it, I can upload them too. As for Gwarrk, here are my initial concerns:
 * 1) *First of all, split both the intro and the biography into at least two paragraphs. Such giant blocks of texts look unsightly.
 * 2) *Intro:When Geonosian forces invaded Rishi in order to get the exonium on the planet to power their sonic weapons. What happened when they invaded Rishi? Without the second part, this sentence doesn't make a lot of sense.
 * 3) *You need to contexify exonium. Say that it was a mineral.
 * 4) *The clones were ordered not to attack until their Jedi General arrived, but Gwarrk ordered the clone commander to attack.
 * 5) **What clones? The previous sentence doesn't mention any clones, only a task force, which doesn't necessarily consist of clone troopers.
 * 6) **"Ordered to attack" is repetitive.
 * 7) *As far as I know, "delibered" is not a word. Please change it.
 * 8) *You can't just link Cooker as "the sharpshooter", you need to spell his name. Try something like "the sharpshooter called 2242"
 * 9) *Fisto ordered the sharpshooter to aim at his shoulder, because he could not deflect the shoots of the Geonosian sonic weapons and he could deflect the clones shoots at them. This one really needs rewording. It reads awkwardly and is not clear as to who you are talking about in the second part of the sentence.
 * 10) *So, Fisto managed to weaken the Geonosian defenses. "So" is rather colloquial here. Change it to "eventually" or something else.
 * 11) *Currently, the flow of events in the intro is very unclear. You say that Fisto ordered Cooker to aim for his shoulder and then you say that Fisto managed to weaken the Geonosian defenses. What happened in between those events?
 * 12) *Biography. A male Rishii, Gwarrk was a chieftain during the Clone Wars. Whose chieftain?
 * 13) *Geonosian forces allied with the Confederacy of Independent Systems invaded Rishi to power their sonic weapons with the exonium.... The Geonosians invaded Rishi to capture the exonium, so they could use it to power sonic weapons. Your wording is a bit unclear.
 * 14) *...the Jedi Council dispatched a company of clones... Again, don't link Green Company as company. If the company's name is known, you should use it.
 * 15) *Gwarrk stated that the Jedi had created the army for warfare and he did the clones in her purpose. The second part doesn't make sense.
 * 16) *The whole biography is too play by play. Reword it so that it was more from Gwarrk's point of view.
 * 17) *He caused the failure of the attack that the clone trooper were not good enough... This one is awkward. I'm quite sure that "caused" is not an appropriate word here.
 * 18) *Probably more to follow once you take care of these. Some tips: First. Don't use the word "cause" as a substitute for "because". "Cause" means "a reason". In the colloquial writing language, however, the short form " 'cause " is sometimes used, but it is written with an apostrophe and, as I already said, is colloquial. Second. Don't use the shortened forms of verbs in the articles, i.e. "could not" should be spelled fully and not to be shortened to "couldn't". It is OK to use the latter in conversation, but not in an encyclopedia article. QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 13:06, 19 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 19) Second look
 * 20) *You should use "circa" or "around" 22 BBY, since the comic gives only the approximate date.
 * 21) *Do we really need a redlink for "task force"? I'd suggest replacing it with Green Company.
 * 22) *Now the second paragraph of the intro is too play by play. I understand that I asked you to give more context, but this is too much. All you need to say is that Fisto formulated a plan, reached the canyon and used his lightsaber to deflect Cooker's shots. Currently, it has some unnecessary detail and can be cut at least in half.
 * 23) *...the Jedi Council dispatched Green Company, a unit of clones, to retake the mines.... You haven't mentioned any mines prior to this. All you say is that Geonosians invaded the planet.
 * 24) *The Genosians, however, had prepared an ingenious defense and the attack was beaten back and the troopers recalled by the arriving Nautolan Jedi Kit Fisto. You establish here that it was Fisto who recalled the troops, and later talk about Gwarrk asking who did it. This is quite confusing, as the reader does not know that Fisto's arrival was a surprise for Gwarrk. I would suggest you to describe these events as they were seen from Gwarrk's point of view, i.e. remove the mention of Fisto from this sentence and introduce him when Gwarrk asks who gave the order.
 * 25) *The second paragraph of the bio has the same amount of unnecessary detail as the second paragraph of the intro. Don't talk about what Fisto ordered or planned, just describe what he did in 1-2 sentences. For example, the whole stuff about LR1K cannon can be removed entirely.
 * 26) *The introduction and the biography both end with the same sentence. Reword one of them so that they not looked identical.
 * 27) *I'll take a final look once you fix these. QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 20:45, 19 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 28) Final round
 * 29) *Fisto then went to the entrance of the mines and Gwarrk asked the commander where the Jedi was. This doesn't flow very well. It is not clear that Fisto left without noticing Gwarrk.
 * 30) *Fisto's plan included that the sharpshooter, 2242 nicknamed Cooker, should aim at his shoulder and fire continuously and Fisto would deflect the shots at the Geonosians with his lightsaber. 2242 began to fire and Fisto deflected the shots at the Geonosians. I'd suggest to merge these sentences together and reword them a little. Again, don't tell what Fisto planned, just describe what he did.
 * 31) *He accounted the failure of the attack that the clone trooper were not good enough, instead of the better position of the enemy troops. "That the clone troopers were not good enough" doesn't quite work here.
 * 32) *The article looks much better now. In the future, pay more attention to the amount of detail not related to the character. Even if said character doesn't do much during the events you talk about, you still need try to keep the focus of the article on him as much as possible. Also, be sure to check the flow of each sentence. If one part of the sentence ends with the words "the exonium mines", the second part should talk about the mines and not about the exonium. As for Cooker, I'll upload a picture and review him later. QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 11:58, 20 August 2009 (UTC)

Re: Boost
Sure, I'll take a look at Boost Lee.  JangFett  Talk 17:50, 19 August 2009 (UTC)
 * All right Lee, before I continue, please lessen the pbp in that large paragraph that beings with "In the pod, Wolffe..." I added more information regarding the Battle of Abregado in the previous paragraph, also I rewrote the second paragraph of the intro. Please go back and fix up that large paragraph. I'll continue once you have done that.  JangFett  Talk 20:47, 19 August 2009 (UTC)

Re: Battle of Orto Plutonia
Yes I do. The current article is in bad shape, and I'm rewriting it in my sandbox.  JangFett  Talk 15:19, 20 August 2009 (UTC)

Re: Cutup
I have seen it but that was a long time ago. I don't exactly remember that line from the Decoded episode, and if you cannot source it, then remove it. Also Lee, for Tucker, go back and rewrite a few sentences within the battle. I am seeing an resemblance to Axe, and it is not professional to copy and paste others work into articles. You may have used Axe as a guidance, but copying word-from-word isn't going to help the Tucker article. I gave the article a first copyedit. I went back and linked a lot of unlinked subjects.  JangFett  Talk 15:26, 21 August 2009 (UTC)
 * I gave Cutup a copyedit, and I have a few suggestions for you Lee. Remember to identify any clone by its serial number, i.e., CC-2224. If the clone doesn't have one, then you can use its nickname. In the intro, per the Ultimate Battles visual guide, many of the listed clones have serial numbers. You should identify them first, then after you introduce them, add an em dash and write "nicknamed "Blah" and "Blah", respectively." If you only have one clone then you can add commas. i.e, CC-7567, nicknamed "Rex". However, if you have a smaller article like "Cutup, then you don't have to worry about introducing their nicknames. Hopes this helps Lee.  JangFett  Talk 15:39, 21 August 2009 (UTC)

Cooker
Ok, here goes. This time, I went ahead and corrected the mistakes that I've already noted with Gwarrk, particularly giant paragraphs, the uses of "cause" and "couldn't".
 * 1) Here are my objections:
 * 2) *...Green Company was dispatched to the planet and ordered not to attack until their Jedi General arrived... Why were they dispatched.
 * 3) * ...and he took position vis-a-vis the canyon... "vis-a-vis" is not really an appropriate word here.
 * 4) *Currently, the intro is too big compared to the rest of the article. I'd suggest you to remove the part about the LRK cannon.
 * 5) *In around 22 BBY, Geonosian forces invaded the planet Rishi and took control over the exonium mines on the planet, needed by the Geonosians to power their sonic weapons. This is one of the flow problems I've noted in the Gwarrk review. The way the sentence is written makes it sound as if Geonosians needed the planet itself to power their weapons.
 * 6) *The second paragraph of the biography is too play by play. Could you lessen the amount of "Fisto said this", "Cooker told that".
 * 7) *The last two sentences of the intro and the bio are identical.
 * 8) *In the P&T, mention that he liked to watch droids burn.
 * 9) *And that's it. Frankly, this article is in much better shape than Gwarrk initially was. However, please watch your grammar and spelling; I've corrected quite a few errors. Overall though, after you fix these objections, Cooker should be ready to go. Oh, and images are on the way, I did not forget about them. QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 16:21, 21 August 2009 (UTC)

Re: Cutup
You're going to have to find someone else for both. I do not have access to either, and I did not watch the Decoded episode.  CC7567  (talk) 19:03, 22 August 2009 (UTC)

Tucker
I'm sorry to not get to Tucker. I have a busy schedule and I was trying to get to it last night, however, I couldn't. Although, I did take a quick glance at the article and I must say it still has a slight resemblance to Axe. The entire intro needs to be written. Not just a few sentences, the entire intro. His biography is good, I just have to point out a few specific sentences that need changing. Other than that, hopefully later on in the day, I'll give it another copyedit before I begin addressing objections (if necessary).  JangFett  Talk 11:31, 27 August 2009 (UTC)
 * Thank you Lee, I know it's a good intro. However, it's the same exact intro as Axe, although you replaced "Axe" with "Tucker." Please rewrite the entire into. It's quite simple, due to Tucker having a minor role.  JangFett  Talk 19:56, 27 August 2009 (UTC)
 * After you rewrite the entire intro, I'll give Tucker a second review.  JangFett  Talk 20:05, 28 August 2009 (UTC)

Battle of Gwori
I need ur help on the page. It all looks good exept for the behind the scences section --Jedijake123 04:47, 29 August 2009 (UTC)
 * I understand what u and Fett r saying, and im ready to work on the page (Fett can help too, if he wants).
 * Lee, if you have time and/or if IRC works for you, please login into channel #WP:TCW.  JangFett  Talk 19:10, 29 August 2009 (UTC)
 * I see IRC finally works for you, Lee :) Please, if you have time, I like to talk to you regarding your current GANs and Gwori.  JangFett  Talk 19:14, 29 August 2009 (UTC)
 * "CloneCommanderLe (n=5493bef7@gateway/web/cgi-irc/irc.wikia.com/x-tgxwgdzgncwkrgwa) has joined #WP:TCW" Are you sure it does not work? Try again.  JangFett  Talk 19:15, 29 August 2009 (UTC)
 * You can't understand English wording on IRC? I'm sure if you check wikia, there will be a German version.  JangFett  Talk 19:17, 29 August 2009 (UTC)
 * If you have Firefox, you can use ChatZilla as a free client to login into IRC. If not, you can always use Wikia's gateway IRC web client. :)  JangFett  Talk 19:20, 29 August 2009 (UTC)
 * You were on Lee, try again. It doesn't matter if you use IE or FireFox to login to IRC. :)  JangFett  Talk 19:24, 29 August 2009 (UTC)
 * Try FireFox. Go to FireFox.com and download the new browser. IRC should work fine with it.  JangFett  Talk 19:29, 29 August 2009 (UTC)
 * Their is also a German version of FireFox that you can try and use. I'm curious to why neither FireFox or IE won't let you connect, however, I see you.  JangFett  Talk 19:44, 29 August 2009 (UTC)
 * Okay. You can always read my conversation with Jake. I'm discussing about your Gwori project.  JangFett  Talk 19:51, 29 August 2009 (UTC)
 * I'm sorry that IRC doesn't work for you, Lee. You don't have to keep relogging in if it doesn't work. I'll send you the chat log.  JangFett  Talk 19:55, 29 August 2009 (UTC)

Re:Some things
Not a problem, Lee. Also, you can always see the list of AC members. Just politely ask, and I'm sure they can help you out. Also, I am going to give Tucker another review. I just finished my copyedit for Ridge. Good work Lee, however, I fixed a lot of issues and added another reference that you missed.  JangFett  Talk 18:09, 30 August 2009 (UTC)
 * Also, Lee, you cannot reference clone troopers hair and eye color to the databank. If they weren't featured or shown, then it is best if you remove the information in the infobox.  JangFett  Talk 18:14, 30 August 2009 (UTC)

Re:Broadside
According to Word, it's at 952 words.  JangFett  Talk 19:10, September 2, 2009 (UTC)

Re:Rishi moon clones
Yes, I have seen the decoded episode. While I don't remember why the clone was given the name "Cutup," because I saw the episode back in May, I did, however, took notes regarding Fives, Hevy, and Echo.  JangFett  Talk 14:58, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

Re:Ridge and Taquito
While Ridge did not appear in the TCW novel, he was in the film with Torrent Company. As for Taquito, yes, I'll give it a copyedit.  JangFett  Talk 19:27, September 15, 2009 (UTC)
 * Lee, for Taquito's bio, the Rodian did say something before his ship exploded. Double check the episode. :)  JangFett  Talk 19:49, September 15, 2009 (UTC)
 * I'll be checking this when I get home for ya Lee. -  JMAS  Hey, it's me! 19:52, September 15, 2009 (UTC)

Re:Sinker
Meh, I don't really have much time or desire to work on him. If you need help, however, I can add info from the comic (there isn't much, since Sinker appears very briefly) and you can do the rest. QuiGonJinn (Talk) 20:19, September 17, 2009 (UTC)
 * Yep, Boost appears too. He and Sinker both appear briefly in one panel. QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 12:02, September 18, 2009 (UTC)

So you know
Sorry to say this but "Bomb squad trooper" is not the first non-TCW character/battle/or OOU article. Back in October 2008, Rugosa was the first. :)  JangFett  Talk 21:57, September 17, 2009 (UTC)

Re: CT-9932
Most likely not. If you're planning on writing his article, I suggest obtaining the book yourself, because you're not going to be able to do it otherwise.  CC7567  (talk) 18:35, September 18, 2009 (UTC)
 * Yes, it could be, but going into that is still speculation.  CC7567  (talk) 18:45, September 18, 2009 (UTC)
 * By reading and copying the template at the bottom of the page.  CC7567  (talk) 19:04, September 18, 2009 (UTC)

Re: Zak
During the nomination process, I asked you to check the Ambush book for information, and you explicitly said that you had "checked" it; yet there's a major piece of info missing from the article. I do not know whether you didn't have the book in your possession and lied about checking it or simply didn't understand the objection and automatically responded that you had checked the book to satisfy it, but neither is an excuse for this improper source coverage. Without this information, Zak shouldn't have been GAed in the first place. Don't expect help from me if you're going to act this way.  CC7567  (talk) 18:44, September 20, 2009 (UTC)
 * When I said "I was under the impression that you had found one, since the bio already states that he's a captain. In any case, I can't seem to find any source that states it, but please check the Ambush book, as I don't own it. CC7567 (talk) 20:14, 24 June 2009 (UTC)", you responded "Checked. He is no captain." The fact of the matter is that it still requires an update, and you still should have had access to it in the first place.  CC7567  (talk) 18:54, September 20, 2009 (UTC)
 * I know the info is missing because I've read it.  CC7567  (talk) 16:29, September 21, 2009 (UTC)

wow
you've got a really nice user page!!! --Clone-Commander-Echo 19:16, September 21, 2009 (UTC)

Rishii Commander
Lee, I'm seeing a striking resemblance to Gwarrk. You have to be careful. I can see that you just copied/paste information from Gwarrk to the Unidentified Rishii Commander, which isn't the way to go. You must rephrase the entire article to have it around the commander's poi, not the general battle or Gwarrk. Replacing "Gwarkk" with the commander, isn't professional-like and is frowned upon. You did the same with Tucker as well.  JangFett  Talk 20:40, September 21, 2009 (UTC)

Re: Gauntlet of Death Part 3
That's all I could find. Not bad; your writing is improving. QuiGonJinn (Talk) 15:07, September 23, 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) This clone commander was a clone trooper commander. Clone commander is repetitive.
 * 2) Give context for Green Company in the intro.
 * 3) Overall, the intro feels a little too long. Try to remove some details not directly related to the commander, such as this sentence: After the battle, Gwarrk stated that Fisto was very powerful and the Jedi said that the power of mind and the help of Cooker had made the victory possible.
 * 4) While Gwarrk stated that the clone troopers were not good enough to win the battle, the clone commander informed Fisto that the Geonosians had dug deep inside the canyon leading to the entrance of the mines, Gwarrk said that his people needed the exonium to prepare their food in the frost time and that the clones must attack again. This one is a run-on. Split/reword.
 * 5) P&T. When Fisto arrived, the commander gave him a small resume of the situation and as he saw Fisto fighting, ralied his troops and went to help him. Is this really necessary? It just retells the biography.
 * 6) You might also want to consider removing the first sentence describing the clone's origin, per this precedent.

New articles
Lee, when creating new articles, please don't forget to add not only the info and the source, but the categories, the era template, the stub template, the bullets in the Appearances section etc. You should already know this by now.  Mauser  Comlink 15:53, September 23, 2009 (UTC)

Re:User talk:Graestan

 * 1) Did you read the notice at the top of my talk page? Please do not bother me on it about the GAN; I check the GAN periodically.
 * 2) The objections on Wooley are not addressed. Graestan ( Talk ) 16:55, September 23, 2009 (UTC)

Re:
You're better off consulting the GAN requirements than asking me.  CC7567  (talk) 06:28, September 25, 2009 (UTC)

Your new projects for WP:TCW
While it is frowned upon, please do not start grabbing characters that will be in season two and in Republic Heroes. It is recommended that you wait until the episode or product is released. "Calling dibs" on a project isn't the way to go, Lee.  JangFett  Talk 18:52, September 25, 2009 (UTC)

Sinker and Boost
Hey. I've updated Sinker and Boost, placing the new info after the Malevolence part. However, since Sinker's hair is depicted black in the comic (as you can see in the picture I uploaded), it is possible that the events on Khorm actually took place before Sinker bleached his hair, and therefore before "Rising Malevolence". On the other hand, he could've just dyed it black again; I'll leave it up to you to decide. If you have any questions, feel free to ask. QuiGonJinn (Talk) 20:44, September 26, 2009 (UTC)

Zak, again
Let me reiterate what I stated in the edit summary: the Visual Guide is not a source for naval officers. In no way is that word even in the book. Please either find the correct source or remove it as speculation.  CC7567  (talk) 16:33, September 28, 2009 (UTC)

Re:Green leader
Thank you, Lee. If you don't mind me asking, but could I have that quote? Also, is there any new information about him specifically?  JangFett  (Talk) 19:16, September 29, 2009 (UTC)
 * Those two quotes are actually in the episode; also, they are mentioned in the article as well. :)  JangFett  (Talk) 19:10, September 30, 2009 (UTC)

Re:Republic Heroes
You're asking the wrong guy, Lee. ;) I have Republic Heroes; however, my video card in my PC is incompatible with the game.  JangFett  (Talk) 19:34, October 9, 2009 (UTC)
 * No, I haven't encountered any problems with the generators. Did you hold the button which activates the Force or just pressed it once? I think you have to hold the button a little to activate the generators; at least I did. QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 19:28, October 11, 2009 (UTC)
 * I've replayed that level; actually, you have to press the button several times. QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 12:58, October 12, 2009 (UTC)
 * Sorry, I don't remember what to do in that moment. Try searching the Internet for a walkthrough or something. You might also want to purchase the Prima Guide. QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 18:15, October 17, 2009 (UTC)

GANs
Lee, the quality of your grammar is starting to reach the point of ridiculousness and intolerance. It doesn't matter if you aren't a native English speaker; although the ACs do not expect perfection, we expect you to learn from your previous nominations instead of displaying the same issues of lacking proper context, grammar, and even spelling over and over. Even after your nominations are copyedited, they always eventually revert back to their poor state. The GAN is not an English school; you are expected to be able to write well on your own or at least learn how to in your first few nominations. It's not the AC's job to rewrite your articles for you. If you cannot learn to write well even through the review process, your nominations will not be accepted on the GAN page and will continuously be rejected for failing to meet Rule 1 of the nomination rules: "An article must be well-written and detailed."  CC7567  (talk) 03:57, October 15, 2009 (UTC)

Re:GANs
You should be able to do this yourself, Lee. However, yes, I will give Bait another copyedit soon.  JangFett  (Talk) 17:06, October 17, 2009 (UTC)
 * If that helps you.  JangFett  (Talk) 17:20, October 17, 2009 (UTC)
 * Lee, don't give up just because you cannot correct your grammar. It's fairly simple, and it requires you to read your entire article sentence-by-sentence. If something doesn't sound right, or maybe improper English, then fix it. Reading your article out loud does help a lot, and I recommend that you at least try it. You may also search on google for helpful guides on how to improve your grammar.  JangFett  (Talk) 17:29, October 17, 2009 (UTC)

Gwarrk
Lee, I would address your remaining objections for Gwarrk. Currently, the ACs are voting to remove it from the page due to it being inactive for weeks.  JangFett  (Talk) 19:17, October 20, 2009 (UTC)
 * All right. Make you addres my final objection for "Bomb Squad troopers". I told you to double check a source.  JangFett  (Talk) 19:21, October 20, 2009 (UTC)

Bait
Lee, are you going to address the remaining objections for Bait? I see the ACs are beginning a removal vote for your nom. If you like, I can take over the nom if you're busy with other things.  JangFett  (Talk) 00:03, October 26, 2009 (UTC)

WP:TCW

 * Lee, the amount of projects you have reserved on the project page is becoming rather unsightly. The fact that you do not intend to "begin work until your other GANs are improved" does not change much; they're still sitting there without any activity on your part and are collecting dust while other members could be writing them. Please reconsider your approach to you projects. I will assume that you still have no intention of working on them (as is the mindset that you're currently showing) if you do not respond within two weeks and will take action accordingly. Thank you.  CC7567  (talk) 02:14, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

Jayfon
There was a very good image of Jayfon in full armor from The Art of Star Wars: The Clone Wars that I've added to his article. I know it was your GAN so check it out and make sure you approve. -  JMAS  Jolly Trooper.png Hey, it's me! 17:52, November 4, 2009 (UTC)

Re: Bait
Hey Lee. First, several grammar issues still remain (mostly things such as words being left out occasionally or simply awkward phrasing). Also, I'm still seeing some phrasing that appears directly in the comic. Use some synonyms for words; do not simply copy what is in the comic. Jonjedigrandmaster ( Jedi Beacon ) 18:43, February 23, 2010 (UTC)
 * I'm still seeing a lot of grammar mistakes. And Lee, I simply don't have much free time right now, so I can't make any promises to look over other articles at this time. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 21:13, February 25, 2010 (UTC)

Re: Lock
Well, if there's a difference between a Grand Army trooper serving on board a Star Destroyer and a Navy captain serving on a Star Destroyer, then the choice is relatively easy.  CC7567  (talk) 23:08, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

Re:Kagi
Whether or not I nominate Kagi really depends on my real-life schedule. Right now, I hope to do some more work on the article and nominate it eventually, but if that changes, I'll let you know. Grand Moff Tranner (Comlink) 20:46, February 25, 2010 (UTC)

Clone officer GAN
Hey, Lee. I would keep the article to "Unidentified clone trooper officer" and not "clone stormtrooper". There is no source indicating that he's a stormtrooper.  JangFett  (Talk) 19:15, March 1, 2010 (UTC)

Re:Flanker
257 words.  JangFett  (Talk) 20:25, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

Taquito
I saw you were requesting a copy-edit from Jedi Kasra. is also a real good copy-editor, so he might be an option. Cheers. :) -- Xd 18:30, March 7, 2010 (UTC)
 * And I second XD's suggestion, he's better at that stuff than me. I appreciate the fact that you asked, and will give you a review.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 19:36, March 7, 2010 (UTC)
 * Hey, I'm Xd, not XD. :P Xd  19:38, March 7, 2010 (UTC)
 * I'm sorry, I have a total of 0 reference books. You could use Special:WhatLinksHere to track users who have it :) -- Xd 18:48, March 9, 2010 (UTC)

Taquito GAN
I'll tell you something: there isn't actually any new info on him from Ultimate Battles. However, the point of my request for you to check the book was to show you that GANs failing to meet Rule 3 will not be tolerated. I'm not going to press the issue, so the related objection on the GAN is now moot, but you would do well to make sure that your nominations do not fall flat in the future because of a lack of proper source coverage. Ignorance is no excuse, especially during the nomination process&mdash;if you're uncertain if there's info from a certain source, ask around before you decide to nominate the article or just check with someone who does know the material. Aside from Ultimate Battles, I'd recommend that you check The Complete Star Wars Encyclopedia to see if there's any info on him there.  CC7567  (talk) 19:22, March 10, 2010 (UTC)

RE: Taquito
There's not much info in the Visual Guide: Ultimate Battles, actually. It only says:

TAQUITO'S FATE Anakin and Obi-Wan don't believe in curses, but what should they make of the hologram showing the last moments of the Rodian star pilot Taquito? Something destroyed his ship!

So, it doesn't really contribute anything to the article, so I suggest you remove Star Wars: The Clone Wars: Visual Guide Ultimate Battles from the sources section. Good luck with the article and your GAN! :-) &mdash;Jawaman No, I did NOT steal your droid! 19:06, March 15, 2010 (UTC)

Re: Lunker
No information beyond what is in the episode and its guide is available. His homeworld is not confirmed.  CC7567  (talk) 19:04, March 16, 2010 (UTC)

RE:Clone Officer
Yes, technically its a title, but it still functions as a rank and is known as the individual's rank in the Stormtrooper Corps.

Btw, you can source that he was a clone stormtrooper to this sentence from the Declaration of a New Order:

""The clone troopers, now proudly bearing the honorable rank of Imperial stormtroopers, have tackled the dangerous work of fighting our enemies on the front lines. Many have died in their devotion to the Empire. Imperial citizens would do well to remember their example.""

- New Galactic Emperor Palpatine


 * The article cannot sit in such a sad state. If citing external links is beyond your abilities, please ask for help on the nomination and I'm sure someone would be willing to assist you. Toprawa and Ralltiir 18:54, March 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * Please stop hounding me about your nomination. I leave the talk page note asking people to not bug me about FAN and GAN objections for a reason. Believe it or not, I do follow the progress of these pages, and I'm perfectly aware of the state of each GAN at the moment, including your own. And contrary to your popular belief, the state of my outstanding objections isn't holding up the status of your nomination. Regardless whether I strike my objections or not, you still need two more Inq/AC votes, or your nomination is going nowhere. So I'm far from your biggest problem right now. Please have some patience and consideration. Toprawa and Ralltiir 17:27, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

Re: Neebo
If it's not confirmed? No, we can't. She could have been presumed dead, left for dead, or a thousand other things that have yet to be specified.  CC7567  (talk) 19:33, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

Re: Flanker
Lee, I know you've been told this before, and it has not changed. We are not an English school. It is not the job of the AC to teach you how to write with proper English grammar. This is the very first rule of nominating good articles: the article must be well-written. Basic English skills are expected of you as the nominator of a good article. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( We seed the stars ) 19:50, April 7, 2010 (UTC)
 * There are way more than just "two errors." Jonjedigrandmaster  Jedi symbol.svg ( We seed the stars ) 16:49, April 8, 2010 (UTC)
 * Lee, you should address your remaining objections for "Flanker," before the ACs remove it.  JangFett  (Talk) 15:25, April 19, 2010 (UTC)

Re: GAN review
I'll try to get to it when I get the chance.  CC7567  (talk) 02:33, April 15, 2010 (UTC)

Just so you know&hellip;
Jastus Farr is actually a good article. I helped promote him there, and am trying to get as many Purge Jedi as I can to good or features status. Reason I left this here rather than on the nom page is because I hate bullet points in the support section.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 19:21, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Na'daz
Yessir. Let me know if you need any assistance. —Tommy 9281 23:34, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Jurokk
May I ask why Jurokk's quote doesn't use a proper quote template? -- 1358  (Talk) 16:32, April 18, 2010 (UTC) [...] }}
 * The source code looks like this:
 * era=Rise of the Empire era
 * affiliation=*Jedi Order
 * Galactic Republic
 * Jurokk: "Anakin, what's going on? Something's happened. Something horrible. How bad is it&mdash;?"
 * Vader: [stabs Jurokk in the head] "You've got no idea..."
 * &#8213;Jurokk and Darth Vader, shortly before the former is killed [src]

Jurokk was a male... -- 1358  (Talk) 17:42, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Re: 2242
Yes, I plan to give it another review when I get the chance. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( We seed the stars ) 18:12, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

2242
I left an objection on 2242. If you resolve it quickly, I will do what I can to ensure the nomination moves more quickly. It is nearly ready for archiving except for needed votes. Graestan ( Talk ) 18:25, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

Re: Flanker
Yes, many grammar issues remain. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( We seed the stars ) 19:19, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

Re: Gwarrk
It has definitely improved, but some grammar issues still remain throughout the article. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( We seed the stars ) 19:06, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

Re: Review
I will if I get the chance.  CC7567  (talk) 18:54, April 30, 2010 (UTC)

Re:GAN objections
Lee, I'll get to them when I have time.  JangFett  (Talk) 15:37, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

Re: Kilian
Thank you for your information, but if it isn't a confirmed connection, it's still OR and doesn't belong in the article.  CC7567  (talk) 20:18, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

Re: Request
I'll add it when I get home, though I must honestly agree with Jon that you should have access to it already if you're writing CT-9/85's article.  CC7567  (talk) 23:04, May 5, 2010 (UTC) "Sir. We have an ARC targeting code coming in over the radio, priority frequency.''" "And the message?" "To change initial bombardment coordinates to&hellip;somewhere a little east of Kibo Lake. Then to stand by for further instructions." "Does this look legitimate?" "One hundred percent. Trooper's calling the load in right on top of himself. Can't get more serious than that." "What is that location?" "We show it as a blip on the power grid. Might be some kind of secret base." "''Then let's get on with it."

- CT-9/85 and Baraka


 * Since it's a rather long quote and I don't know where you intend to split it off, I'm leaving it here so that you can implement it yourself. Hope that helps.  CC7567  (talk) 05:31, May 6, 2010 (UTC)
 * If I get to it, I will, but please note that when I review I try to prioritize older nominations. I just want you to know that I'm not going to be able to review every single one of your articles for you, as I will not be here as much in the next few weeks, so asking help from the other ACs will probably be better for you.  CC7567  (talk) 18:49, May 6, 2010 (UTC)

Review
Could you please review Dendro for me?--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 13:54, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

New Sith Wars vs. Great Galactic War
Hi Lee, I just wanted to advise you that the events of most Star Wars: The Old Republic tie-in material occurs during the [{Great Galactic War]]. I say this because your new article, Unidentified Republic Soldier (Foundry Uprising) stated that he existed during the New Sith Wars, which was a separate conflict entirely. Just FYI. Taral, Dark Lord of the Sith  -Just shy, not antisocial: You can talk to me!- 19:01, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

Re:Blood
I wouldn't say it "belongs" to WP:TOR, but it does fall within the scope of our project, yes. Feel free to add your name to the participants list. Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 00:14, May 12, 2010 (UTC)

I'm still fairly new and I have a question...
How do I edit my talk page so I can "clean it up?"--Cc-7567 lover 17:35, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

Komm Karsh
Hey, I just wanted to let you know that I fixed a couple little things n the Komm Karsh page. I know I'm not really supposed to, but I didn't think you'd be mad. It was a small spelling fix is all. Thanks for your time.-- Dr. Kermit ( Complain. ) 19:44, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

Re: Request
Sure thing, I'll give it a go later today. Jonjedigrandmaster ( Talk ) 19:38, May 27, 2010 (UTC)

Congrats
Hey, Commander Lee,

I just wanted to congratulate you on the successful promotion of your first WP:NSW nomination. As project lead, I would like thank you on behalf of our members and hope that you would consider contributing to our project again in the near future. Thanks again, —Tommy 9281 00:37, May 28, 2010 (UTC)

Re:Polus
There is no planet overview, since it's a minor planet. But I managed to find some information: its coordinates are M-6, and it's located between the Braxant Run and Celanon Spur.  JangFett  (Talk) 18:07, May 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * Hey Commander Lee, I'll get on those quotes for you asap. Also, Nalia Adollu is within the scope of NSW; everything from each of the Darth Bane books falls under the NSW umbrella, so there is quite a bit to choose from without stepping on someone else's toes. Let me know if you need anything else, and I look forward to seeing your finished product. —Tommy  9281

Query
Hey, Lee. Would you mind if I write this guy? Seeing that you have reserved it on WP:TCW's current projects list, I thought I'd ask you first. Thanks in advance! -- 1358  (Talk) 13:26, June 2, 2010 (UTC)
 * Thanks. If you ever need something reviewed, let me know. :) -- 1358  (Talk) 17:58, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

CC-1010
Lee, please do not remove 501st Legion from the infobox in CC-1010. The CSWE confirmed that he is part of the 501st. Cheers,  JangFett  (Talk) 17:22, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Wikis
Could you help me with my wiki? here is the web adress: http://clonewar.wikia.com/wiki/Clonipedia_Wiki. --Capt.ScoutJaingHead.svg Officers Report. 11:20, June 22, 2010 (UTC)

Advice
Lee, I would like to know why you didn't strike your objections after I properly addressed them. I see no reason why you thought they were wrong, when clearly they're right. The only objection that I keep shaking my head to is "Death in the infobox?". If you read a character article, and it said the character died on some planet, that should be an easy. There's no need to object to it if you read the article. I do not understand your reasoning of: "But I see it too often." That should not make you not want to fix it yourself, Lee. Hope this makes sense to you.  JangFett  (Talk) 23:23, June 26, 2010 (UTC)

Re:Info
I've been planing on writing Jag for a while now. Also, I have the CSWE info.  JangFett  (Talk) 19:43, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Re: Broadside
Sure; I'll get the info to you ASAP. If I don't get the chance, you might be able to ask Jang for the info, as I believe he has the book too.  CC7567  (talk) 21:53, June 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * Here's your info:

Broadside: Y-Wing Bomber
 * A confident, experienced fighter pilot, Broadside flies alongside his good friend Matchstick during the Republic attack on Grievous's giant warship, the Malevolence. Eager Broadside welcomes the chance to be one of the first Republic pilots to fly a Y-wing fighter.
 * Talents: fighter pilot, training in military tactics
 * Note: while the rest of his statistics (homeworld, species, height, etc.) are basically repeated from the clone troopers Databank entry, I would recommend using the Character Encyclopedia as a reference for them in the infobox instead, as this source is more specific to him than the general Databank entry.
 * For Luck: Pilots are superstitious and most have rituals they follow to make sure they return to base safely. For Broadside and his friend Matchstick, the good luck charm is to take turns agreeing to buy the drinks when they make it through each new Republic mission.

That's basically all the new/relevant info there is. Let me know if you need anything else.  CC7567  (talk) 02:17, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

Can you help me?
Okay. Okay. I know things have been kinda rough with my bad edits and sending you out to fix 'em, but can you please help me with my wikia, www.lavasquad.wikia.com? I'm trying to delete all of the images on it except for the logo. It's about clones and stuff, so it may be a good place for you to hang out...better than this place. So, please consider. Your biggest admirer, KopakaMata97

Look at the bts

 * Also, Lee, one more thing: please properly source this "Deviss was a veteran of many battles and a capable leader." It's not in the GAR guide, yet you source it to it. If it's your own assumption, please remove it.  JangFett  (Talk) 20:03, July 14, 2010 (UTC)
 * Does a source actually says that or you're just assuming?  JangFett  (Talk) 16:36, July 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * If a source says he's a capable leader, that's fine. Just make sure you properly source it. As for the veteran issue, if you remember what I told you about Broadside, if a source doesn't say he's a veteran, then he's not a veteran.  JangFett  (Talk) 19:05, July 15, 2010 (UTC)

Gwarrk

 * If this page speaks the truth, then congrats on writing the 100th GA of WP:TCW! -- 1358  (Talk) 16:54, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

CA template
Actually, it was decided not to create a CA template in the main namespace. If you want to use a userbox on your page, I can't stop you, but please don't create one in the main namespace.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 18:12, August 24, 2010 (UTC)

GAN/FAN objection
Hello, please use =====headers===== when you are objecting, like this:

Lee attacks
.... Thanks. -- 1358  (Talk) 18:05, August 25, 2010 (UTC)
 * Objection1.

Skaa
Sure, since I'm working on Kungurama, I see no reason not to.&mdash; 03:38, August 30, 2010 (UTC)

Re: Just a little question
Sorry about the delay in getting back to you. Kep-She is not mentioned at all in the TCWCE, but the closest mention in the UK Comic is one of a "Jedi-led force;" basically it's only an indirect mention of the character like the one in Cat and Mouse. Also, following a quick glance at the article, you make Kep-She out to be female when the character's gender hasn't even been confirmed by the episode guide&mdash;something that you're going to want to fix.  CC7567  (talk) 06:32, August 30, 2010 (UTC)

Edit summary
Hey, Lee, when nominating an article for CA/GA/FA, please remember to add "CA/GA/FAnom" in the edit summary. When archiving the nomination, the EC/AC/Inq needs to find the nomination revision ID, and it's not easy to find it in the page history if you don't specify "nom" in the summary. Thanks. :) -- 1358  (Talk) 11:14, September 5, 2010 (UTC)
 * Thanks. -- 1358  (Talk) 11:19, September 5, 2010 (UTC)

Re: Wieler
Alright, here are my objections:
 * "After some time a Separatist ship broke the blockade and was able to reach the surface" After some time doesn't sound very good. Maybe change it to "some time later".
 * "Later the Jedi were able to destroy the weather-control station, which supervised the storm," I'm not sure "supervised" is the appropriate word here.
 * In the intro, specify that the ship was piloted by Ventress.
 * "When the Clone Wars broke out, Wieler served in the Republic Navy" That gives the impression that Wieler already served in the navy when the war broke out, which might not be the case. Change it to something like "During the Clone Wars, bla bla bla"
 * "Wieler contacted Koon via a hologram and told the Jedi Master that the storm had recovered to full strength and that the atmospheric distortion was close to the Jedi's primary objective." What was their primary objective?
 * In the P&T, you say that the reinforcements saved the Republic troops, but this is not mentioned in the bio.
 * You don't have to pipelink something that is lowercase. Just make it a regular link, it'll still work fine.
 * Watch out for grammar and punctuation errors. I've corrected a couple.
 * Looks good otherwise. QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 16:53, September 6, 2010 (UTC)

Nack Movers
Hey Lee, could you check Jugs' comment to your Nack Movers nomination? It seems to be the only thing that keeps it from being archived. Thanks. -- 1358  (Talk) 10:21, September 8, 2010 (UTC)
 * Ah, I see, but could you verify that the edit he linked is approved? -- 1358  (Talk) 10:25, September 8, 2010 (UTC)

Re: Broadside
Although Broadside has a relatively minor role in the episode, and although I would be willing to help you update the article, you really should be the one doing it as the article's nominator. StarWars.com usually posts the episodes the week after they air, so I would recommend that you watch the episode that way and directly use the source to update the article. If you need further help or if SW.com doesn't end up posting the episodes, then contact me and I'd be happy to help you update the article, but I'd prefer if you could handle it yourself. I'm sure that there are third-party websites that have the episodes somewhere, so you might consider looking for the episode there.  CC7567  (talk) 22:36, September 18, 2010 (UTC)
 * Hey, Lee. I saw you have problems watching the two new season three episodes. It's kinda bad they're not visible on Starwars.com to us non-US people, but I found a place to view the episodes online for free. Here's the link; that video contains both Clone Cadets and ARC Troopers. Cheers. 1358  (Talk) 16:41, September 19, 2010 (UTC)
 * No problem. I discovered the site from which I found that video today, so I'm happy too. :D 1358  (Talk) 16:56, September 19, 2010 (UTC)
 * I took the liberty of briefly looking over the article in its current state, and I have two things for you: we don't know for sure that "ARC Troopers" takes place after "Shadow of Malevolence"&mdash;so we cannot specifically say that in articles&mdash;and I'm also noticing a rather disappointing wording resemblance to the work I put into my Rex project. In addition, I'd recommend that you double-check your grammar and linking. I can proofread your work after you're done with the update, but please make sure that you pay close attention to what you put into the article.  CC7567  (talk) 07:07, September 20, 2010 (UTC)
 * I've touched up the article, but looking at all of the typographical errors, please try to be a bit more careful next time.  CC7567  (talk) 06:17, September 22, 2010 (UTC)

GAN
Also, Lee, could I bother you to remember to specify "added GAnom" or something when you do add the GAnom tag to a nominated article? It makes it easier for us when we're archiving the nomination and trying to find that specific edit. Thanks so much. Toprawa and Ralltiir 18:59, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Buzz
Hey, Lee. I saw that you have reserved Buzz as your project, however, you seem to have some articles on your to-do list before that. So, I'm asking, would you be willing to give Buzz to me? :) (I was actually going to do Gearshift, but guess who has reserved that... :P). Cheers. 1358  (Talk) 12:55, September 20, 2010 (UTC)
 * Thanks. :) 1358  (Talk) 17:51, September 20, 2010 (UTC)
 * Sure; I'll get to it asap. 1358  (Talk) 18:03, September 20, 2010 (UTC)

swtor
TOR Wiki has been nominated to become an Official Friends of Wookieepedia, and has received support votes from several users including an administrator and a bureaucrat. As a member of the TOR WookieeProject I am messaging you to ask if you would consider voting. Thanks. Alexsau1991 (talk page) 17:34, September 22, 2010 (UTC)

Request
Hey, Lee. I saw Star Wars: Complete Cross-Sections listed in your collection, and I was wondering if you could help me a bit. Could you check what the book has to say regarding Venator-class Star Destroyers' place of construction? Were they all built at Kuat Drive Yards? QuiGonJinn (Talk) 17:42, September 22, 2010 (UTC)
 * Thanks. QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 18:08, September 22, 2010 (UTC)

Unger Gout
Hey. I couldn't help but notice you have placed Unger Gout as one of your "future projects", though I have already improved it very much (before I discovered your interest in the page--sorry!)and I'm preparing to put it up for GA once my other nomination is done. Would you like to work on it with me, or at least pre-nom review it? You can take your time to answer; I see you have alot going on right now. Sincerely, ''' Bonslywizard ( Send a transmission ) 21:53, September 22, 2010 (UTC)
 * Also, I see you ahve other pages from In Service of the Republic ready to be worked on too (including Wieler), and I've been working on those too, so again, would you like to do it together?''' Bonslywizard Trade_Federation.svg( Send a transmission ) 21:58, September 22, 2010 (UTC)
 * Well, obviously the sourcing is something I'll have to do in the near future (those are usually the last things I do in an article) and I'm sure you could find things that need to be done too. Like I said, its not ready yet, but hopefully will be eventually :P ''' Bonslywizard Trade_Federation.svg( Send a transmission ) 23:03, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

Re: Lock
The new info is this: "A captain in Horn Company, CC-4142 fights alongside Eeth Koth. When Grievous attacks the Steadfast near Arda, Lock leads the Jedi Cruiser's defense before obeying Koth's order to evacuate in an escape pod." For the Arda issue, I would recommend reading this. The book also says that "Koth's task force is patrolling near" Arda before the battle. Let me know if you need anything else.  CC7567  (talk) 05:14, September 28, 2010 (UTC)

Re: Villpu Nagg

 * "When the Clone Wars broke out, Nagg joined the Confederacy of Independent Systems." As the Confederacy was established in 24 BBY, it is quite possible that he joined it prior to the Clone Wars. Reword.
 * The way you link Fixer is not very good. Just spell his name.
 * "Nagg was trusted enough by Gout to control Khorm's best defensive structure." Do we really know this was the case? Maybe it was Dooku who placed Nagg in charge of the station.
 * Add Scott Hepburn as the illustrator to the Bts.
 * Since he had four eyes, you may want to add that he belonged to the Ualaq race. I believe the Aqualish races are discussed in Star Wars: The Complete Visual Dictionary, so you could probably use it as a reference, but ask around our species gurus just in case. QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 19:44, September 28, 2010 (UTC)

Re: TCW episodes
Supply Lines and Sphere of Influence. Cheers. 1358 (Talk) 18:05, October 6, 2010 (UTC)

Changing the dates
Lee, while I appreciate you correcting the 22 BBY dates to 21 BBY dates in my GAs, I would like for you to not continue to do so. I had to go back and clean up some of your edits, which were correct before you edited them. Thanks,  JangFett  (Talk) 20:50, October 12, 2010 (UTC)
 * While I do appreciate your efforts, Lee, as I currently don't have the time to update the dates myself, I have to echo Jang's sentiments. Please make sure to be careful when changing a multitude of articles at a time, as it's extremely easy for a horde of errors, however minor they are, to slip through. It's better to take more time and care than to hurry to change too many articles at once. Thank you.  CC7567  (talk) 08:29, October 14, 2010 (UTC)
 * I apologize, as I wasn't referring to any specific error, but I was just giving you a general tip about being careful when zipping through edits to multiple articles. I myself experience the same problem of frequently overlooking errors, so I was just trying to prevent you from doing the same thing; apologies if it came across as overtly direct.  CC7567  (talk) 02:37, October 16, 2010 (UTC)
 * I'm aware of that, Lee. I have ordered that young reader novel a few days ago.  JangFett  (Talk) 17:30, October 16, 2010 (UTC)
 * No need to apologize. :P I just have a lot of updates to complete.  JangFett  (Talk) 17:37, October 16, 2010 (UTC)
 * Just noticed that you did it to my GAs as well. Thanks. 1358  (Talk) 20:03, October 16, 2010 (UTC)

Re: Dorrs and Vulf
Sure thing, but since we don't have articles for them yet, I don't recall either of them, and I don't have a ton of time on my hands right now to browse through the whole book myself, could you let me know where exactly they appear and what they are so that I can expediate my search? Thanks. Jonjedigrandmaster ( Talk ) 14:51, October 16, 2010 (UTC) "Identicards, please."
 * Ah, you meant Dorss and Vult. I'll get right on it. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 14:53, October 16, 2010 (UTC)
 * Okay, Dorss is the only one with any actual lines, but one does at least relate to Vult. Here's all of the dialogue for them:

- Lieutenant Dorss

"I am Lieutenant Dorss, customs. This is Sergeant Vult. He will conduct a brief inspection of your craft. Are all compartments accessible?''" "''They are."

- Dorss and Luke

"Purpose of visit to Dorin?''" "Research. We seek an audience with the Baran Do Sages." "Information brokerage, then?" "I don't think so. I didn't plan to offer my credits for the information I'm looking for. Nor would I charge any for information I provide." "No trade goods? [Luke and Ben shake their heads] Tourism, then. Will you require accommodations?" "''No, for convenience's sake, we'll be keeping quarters aboard the yacht."

- Dorss and Luke

"All personal effects within categorical limits. Enjoy your stay on Dorin.''" "''Thank you."

- Dorss and Luke


 * Jonjedigrandmaster ( Talk ) 15:05, October 16, 2010 (UTC)

Re: Image
Done. QuiGonJinn (Talk) 18:32, October 18, 2010 (UTC)

Re: Shura
That's the only one relating to Shura. Jonjedigrandmaster ( Talk ) 18:53, October 18, 2010 (UTC)

TX-20
I know it's been over a month since this happened, but why did you revert my edit of TX-20 for Supply Lines? 75.11.46.106 23:44, November 3, 2010 (UTC)

Shura
That's Wookieepedia's 999th GA. :D 1358  (Talk) 18:15, November 9, 2010 (UTC)

GAN reviews
Hello, Lee. I was wondering if I could trade one review for two. :P Do you think you could review Arena Theme and General Grievous' Theme? Also, being an American, my native language is English. However, we're forced to take a foreign language (I enjoy it), so I took French. I also just decided to learn both Chinese languages on my own yesterday and can now write "Jesus" and "hello" and am learning "goodbye". I said that to say that I know how you feel with English being your second (or whatever number) language. If you ever need any help with grammar or spelling or need me to check an article for those, feel free to ask. Anyway, nice talking to ya. MasterFred (Whatever) 22:01, November 17, 2010 (UTC)

Congratulations, Wookieepedian of the Month!
Congrats, Lee! You're well deserving of this honor. You have an excellent work ethic on the GAN page and an exemplary attitude in handling objections from other users. Well done! Toprawa and Ralltiir 05:32, December 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * Congrats!  OLIOSTER  (talk) 05:33, December 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * Congrats Lee, keep up the hard work. :) Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 05:36, December 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * Congratulations. :) 1358  (Talk)  12:53, December 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * Congratulations, Lee! You really deserve it. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 22:17, December 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * Just thought I say congrats on your recent win. So...Congratulations! Bonslywizard Trade_Federation.svg( Send a transmission ) 00:09, December 3, 2010 (UTC)

Another Broadside heading
Added an image of Broadside at the Third Battle of Kamino, and also linked to that battle in that section of his article. Take a look to make sure you don't object. -  JMAS  Jolly Trooper.png Hey, it's me! 19:19, December 2, 2010 (UTC)

Lumpy
Lee! I'm wondering if you can help me out. I noticed that you have Star Wars: The Complete Visual Dictionary, and I'm wondering if there's any chance you could look through it and let me know any and all information it has on Lumpy. I'm currently gathering sources for a project of mine, and any help at all would be greatly appreciated. If so, you are amazing, and if not, you are still amazing! Thank you. Menkooroo 19:06, December 3, 2010 (UTC)
 * I don't know where in the book it would be, but my guess would be Chewie's entry in either the Episode III section or the classic trilogy section. Menkooroo 19:08, December 3, 2010 (UTC)
 * That's amazing! Thank you so much. :D Out of curiosity, was that from the Episode III section? The only reason I ask is because if it was, it means it was copied verbatim from Revenge of the Sith: The Visual Dictionary, which I would then need to add to his Sources list. Menkooroo 03:57, December 4, 2010 (UTC)
 * Merci. :) Menkooroo 11:25, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

Help
Where is the deletion log??72.229.183.70 05:18, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

WP:TCW
Hey Clone Commander Lee. As a holder of a reserved project (or projects) for WP:TCW, I'd like to notify you that all reserved projects that have not seen any recent activity are being removed in an attempt to do some "cleaning" for the new year. You are welcome to reclaim any projects by re-entering them on the list; this is just an attempt to clear out those projects that may never see any work at all. Please contact me with any questions you may have, and have a happy new year. :)  CC7567  (talk) 23:15, December 31, 2010 (UTC)

Jurokk
Well, I do own it, but I don't have access to it atm. I don't recall anything about him in it but it's been years; I could easily be mistaken. Sorry about that.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 22:53, January 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * Sure.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 20:45, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

RC-5093
Hey Lee, I believe your old CA RC-5093 is in need for some expansion. In fact, if my ideas are correct, you could make it long enough for you to GA. I wanted to give a chance to work on it so we don't have to go through the hassle of the CA redux page. Could we coordinate a time we can meet on the IRC to talk over these ideas? Thanks man. Kilson 22:43, April 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * Well, first you had some reference issues, but I already fixed those for you. Second, you need to mention in the body that he was from Kamino (no infobox only stuff), and finally and most importantly, if you look at his quote in Hard Contact you will notice that when the clone retired he was 22 standard years old, but his biological age was 60 due to the advanced aging process of clones. Also, an intro and P&a could be added the Bts expanded. Kilson 17:36, April 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * I was able to expand the article to well beyond the 250 mark, and I think I could still add some to the P&t and Bts section. You could easily GA this if you want. If you are too busy, I could do it. Kilson 21:22, April 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * A co-nom would be great. Unfortunately, I already have four noms already on the GA page, so we can't put up anything until one of those noms passes. Until then, we can continue to work on it. Kilson Likes PIE ( The Bakery ) 19:39, April 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * OK, I nomed it. Feel free to add anything to the nomination comments section or to address any of the objections. Kilson Likes PIE ( The Bakery ) 23:45, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re:Oki
Hey Lee, there really isn't too much info&mdash;after Ahsoka, O-Mer, and Jinx are rescued from Trandoshan hunters on Wasskah by a band of Wookiees, they are taken to the Jedi Temple on Coruscant. Oki is on the landing platform with Windu, Yoda, Koon, and Skywalker to greet them when they arrive (ferried there by Sugi in the Halo). Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 16:36, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

Match Master
Thanks for the info. I just need a few more things. What was the context of the game Bralor presided over and did the book establish that all Match Masters had those assistants? NaruHina Talk  23:44, April 24, 2011 (UTC)

Jayfon
Yes, I own it, and it's great. Jayfon doesn't do anything in particular, he's just a purchasable Free Play character called "Senate Commando (Captain)" who you can buy after completing the "Hostage Crisis" mission. I don't think he actually appears in the mission, or otherwise he's just one of many generic Senate Commandos. Just mentioning "He is available for purchase for Free Play in the game" or simply leaving it as is would be fine IMO; there are other FAs and GAs like Katuunko that just mention the character's appearance in the game in the BTS section, or just list it as an appearance.

Hope that helps.-- ID-21 Dolphin  (Talk) 19:55, April 25, 2011 (UTC)

Gaarn
May I ask why do you keep removing detail from Gaarn's BTS? It is not too lengthy, yet contains sufficient information, and I don't see a reason to remove parts of that. Of course, there might be other factors I am unaware of.&mdash; TK-999  ( Rise of the Empire ) 18:15, May 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * Oh, I see. Thanks for the explanation.&mdash; TK-999  Era-imp.png( Rise of the Empire ) 17:32, May 17, 2011 (UTC)

Kae Kwaad TC
Hey Lee, just letting you know that a new voting option has been created on the Kae Kwaad TC per general demand. Jonjedigrandmaster ( Talk ) 14:37, June 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re:Dao
Well, Lee, personally I would advice you to concentrate on your current noms before you nominate other articles. You currently have 10ish CANs and 1 GAN currently active. Unless, of course, you can handle all those without prostrating, then it would be different. I just remember when you last nominated Dao, you left unaddressed objections for several weeks and completely avoided the nom. However, if I have time, I'll give Dao another look.  JangFett  (Talk) 20:36, June 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re: Chankar Kim
Hey Lee, I'm afraid that my brother (who lives in a different State) actually has my copy right now, so I can't be of much help. Apologies, Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 17:23, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

Chankar Kim
Hey CC Lee. Are you still looking for quotes on Chankar? I might be able to help. ToRsO bOy 21:44, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

"I'll let you come along on the next mission," Master Kim had said with a smile. "Let's polish off a few more of those rough edges first. You can come next time, I promise."

- Chankar Kim

"I don't know what Chankar saw in her.''" "''We'll never know now."

- Mace Windu and Jai Maruk on Scout


 * Here you go. This is the only one for both of them. --ToRsO bOy 21:12, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

"Your second?''" "''Third. Rees Alrix was my first. She is fighting with the clone troops at Sullust. My second... my second was Eremin Tarn,"

- Yoda and Maks Leem

Re: Jet
Sure thing. It might take me a few days, though, so please remind me if you don't hear back from me soon. Off the top of my head, I do remember that he has a purchasable outfit set in the Clone Wars Adventures video game Shop, so I'll get you that too.  CC7567  (talk) 06:55, June 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * I don't have the Hasbro set for Jet (CW38), so you're probably going to have to do some Googling (try "Hasbro Commander Jet") to see what the description of the set says, which will be what you can use as source material. You can check the rest of the Hasbro sets listed under the Second Battle of Geonosis article's Sources; the links are to rebelscum.com, which has descriptions for the linked sets. The CWA Shop set says that Jet specifically customized his clone armor for the Second Battle of Geonosis, though I still have to access the Shop and see exactly what it says; I'll pass it on to you when I get the chance. The Official Episode Guide Series 1 & 2 says this: "Formally known as CC-1993, Jet serves under Ki-Adi-Mundi, and leads his flame troopers into battle against the winged warriors of the Geonosian hives." I still need to check the UK Comics and The Complete Season Two for potential info, but I'll leave you with these for now.  CC7567  (talk) 02:53, June 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * I'm aware of that, but since it's going to be published around this time, you should be able to find a description of the set.  CC7567  (talk) 18:36, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Bomber
No problem. I've archived the CAnom for you. As soon as the inuse tag is off the article and you're finished updating it, I'll be more than happy to give 'er a prenommer. Let me know! Menkooroo 06:08, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Jurokk
"Master Ti and Gate Master Jurokk will direct the Temple's defense"

- Mace Windu

"Anakin! Anakin, what happened? Where are the Masters?''" "Where is Shaak Ti?" "''In the meditation chambers-we felt something happen in the Force, something awful. She's searching the Force in deep meditation, trying to get some feel for what's going on.... Something has happened, hasn't it?"

- Jurokk and Anakin Skywalker

That quote preceded the one in the article. ToRsO bOy 00:53, June 19, 2011 (UTC)

Re:Coruscant NIghts I
Hi :). I checked that and Zippa is mentioned, but Bilk is not. I often use Amazon to search inside books :). Sorry for my English and have a nice day :D. ShaakTi1138 07:41, June 19, 2011 (UTC)