Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/W'iiri


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W'iiri

 * Nominated by: --Eyrezer 08:03, October 19, 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: One more

(4 ACs/3 Users/7 Total)
Support
 * 1)  JangFett  (Talk) 22:31, October 19, 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) Why is it when I read the word "scuttle" I instantly think of Doctor Zoidberg?  Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 09:04, October 27, 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) Hmm. I had no idea the Drall were first introduced in the Daley novels. ~ SavageBob 00:34, October 31, 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) --Skippy Farlstendoiro 10:18, November 4, 2009 (UTC)
 * 5)  Grunny  ( Talk ) 06:02, November 6, 2009 (UTC)
 * 6) Amazingly short and acceptable read.  CC7567  (talk) 05:13, November 13, 2009 (UTC)
 * 7)  Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 21:18, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Skippy Farlstendoiro.
 * 2) * Context for J'uoch.
 * 3) * History: "A number of W'iiri worked for J'ouch. (…) The W'iiri, being a trusted employee, was issued". You start talking about several W'iiri and then you seem to change your mind and talk about only one individual. Do you mean "One of the W'iiri, being a trusted employee"?
 * 4) *" Nearly all the other droids were destroyed shortly after." Doesn't seem relevant for the W'iiri. Could you reword this? Maybe "Allies of these W'iiri destroyed all the other droids shortly after" (if that's what happened).
 * 5) *That all. --Skippy Farlstendoiro 11:29, October 21, 2009 (UTC)
 * 6) **Dealt with the later two. --Eyrezer 04:36, November 1, 2009 (UTC)
 * 7) **And now the third too. --Eyrezer 10:10, November 4, 2009 (UTC)
 * 8) Does the article need to be sourced? There appears to be only one appearance. And I know it's not technically a requirement, but I'd like to see a stub for those redlinks :P  Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 01:27, November 9, 2009 (UTC)
 * Eh, there's no rule against sourcing articles as far as I can see, and I personally prefer a reference as it adds provides some specifics as to the location. I can add in a sentence from a second peripheral source if you'd like. --Eyrezer 06:52, November 15, 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) **See rule #5. It's up to you whether you want to add a second peripheral source, or just remove the sourcing. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 14:42, November 15, 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) ***Conclusionary sentence added back in. --Eyrezer 21:14, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

Comments


 * Not yet: see above sourcing objection. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 19:25, November 13, 2009 (UTC)