Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Quoreal


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Quoreal

 * Nominated by: -- —Harrar  ( Cut the comm chatter ) 18:00, 19 August 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: The Xim the Despot of the Yuuzhan Vong&mdash;never seen, only referenced. His story is brought together from snippets of information across several books and sources, so it should be a concise and non-narrative read. Reflecting the disparate nature of the info, I've referenced the article to page numbers, or chapters when describing big events. -- —Harrar  ( Cut the comm chatter ) 18:00, 19 August 2009 (UTC)

(5 Inqs/1 Users/6 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  22:47, 27 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 2)  CC7567  (talk) 18:48, September 18, 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) Menkooroo 23:20, September 22, 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) Now that this is finished, too. &mdash;  Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 16:31, November 27, 2009 (UTC)
 * 5)  Grunny  ( Talk ) 01:54, December 6, 2009 (UTC)
 * 6) --  Darth Culator  (Talk) 03:36, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Marinara:
 * 2) * Same thing as Lensi. Can you complete the succession box? &mdash; Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 16:46, 21 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) **Addressed. Sorry for the same mistake twice -- —Harrar  ( Cut the comm chatter ) 12:47, 25 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) ***No worries. It is easy to forget about. &mdash; Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 02:44, 27 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) Menkooroo 04:57, September 9, 2009 (UTC)
 * 6) * From the behind the scenes section: "In The New Jedi Order Sourcebook, published in 2002 when The New Jedi Order series was still four years away from its finale in 2005"... The last part of that sentence needs all kinds of changing. Menkooroo 04:57, September 9, 2009 (UTC)
 * 7) **Done. Thanks for checking it out. -- —Harrar  ( Cut the comm chatter ) 14:39, September 13, 2009 (UTC)
 * 8) Attack of the Clone
 * 9) * Are you entirely sure that every part of the intro currently in there is necessary? About a fourth of it is basically his legacy, and I can't see exactly why it needs that much detail. Please shorten it if possible.
 * 10) **I took out the last sentence and trimmed some fat, but I was largely making use of the precendent of Xendor for this FA, which is similarly structured due to the fact that more is known of the results of the character's actions than the actions themselves.
 * 11) * Please try to clarify earlier in the Bts what the "penultimate installment" of the NJO series actually is.
 * 12) **Done.
 * 13) * As with the intro, I'm going to ask you to check if all the detail in his legacy is necessary. Ultimately, I'm going to be relying on your judgment in the end, but please make sure that you feel that the current level of detail is appropriate.  CC7567  (talk) 05:20, September 18, 2009 (UTC)
 * 14) **I've removed several lines of what could be seen as extraneous, but indeed much of the character's life becomes relevant in the last two novels and in the story of the Yuuzhan Vong redemption, which is one of the over-arching storylines of The New Jedi Order. I'm a bit of a sucker for Legacy sections, but I don't feel I've overwrought this one. Most of the sentences pertain to mentions of Quoreal in the two novels. Thanks for the review -- —Harrar  ( Cut the comm chatter ) 17:23, September 18, 2009 (UTC)

Comments
 * Hopefully a better image of Zonama Sekot is included in the Atlas? If not I'll include the one on this article. Finally, this sentence on CUSWE "Others began to wonder if Quoreal had wanted to find a peace with the New Republic and learn more about Zonama Sekot, since the planet seemed to provide a linkage between the Yuuzhan Vong and the peoples of the Republic." no doubt has some grounding, but I can't find the reference following a mind-numbingly dull search of The Unifying Force. I'll keep looking, but for the time being I'd like to nominate him. -- —Harrar  ( Cut the comm chatter ) 18:00, 19 August 2009 (UTC)
 * As with Lensi; I'm away for two weeks from the 29th August and it is unlikely that I will be able to deal with objections pertaining to Quoreal. If things move fast and only a little thing is holding it up, however, one of the Inqs is free to make any changes they like to get the article off the queue. If there need to be sweeping changes though, I'll deal with them on my return. -- —Harrar  ( Cut the comm chatter ) 00:00, 29 August 2009 (UTC)