Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Paouoish Rahhdool


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Paouoish Rahhdool

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 16:10, June 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: One-mention-Jedi Master

(2 ECs/2 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1) Good work.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  17:04, June 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 01:13, July 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:34, July 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) Menkooroo 13:58, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * You need to mention his affiliation to the Republic and the Jedi Order in the body of the article. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:17, June 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Done.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 16:51, June 30, 2011 (UTC)

Comments
 * 1) Cal Jedi
 * 2) * "He discovered the infant Shistavanen Voolvif Monn abandoned near the Arah asteroid belt. " This makes it sound like he found the infant in space. Was the infant in a starship? or on a planet near the asteroid belt? Please specify. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:43, June 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Done.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 14:44, July 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) * Maybe this is too picky, but do you know what the name of the world is where he found the infant? Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:15, July 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) * Since this Master is not mentioned much, there probably isn't really any relevant quotes. But if there is one, you need to put it on there. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:18, July 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) **No.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:27, July 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) * This should be the last thing, but do you know what species this master is? Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:20, July 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) **No. All info about him is in the article.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:27, July 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) Please reload the infobox. Even if they're not used, every field should be present. Handy link. Menkooroo 07:19, July 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) *Indeed. Done and thanks for the review.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 17:42, July 7, 2011 (UTC)