Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Orkellian cave slug


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Orkellian cave slug

 * Nominated by:  Imperators II (Talk) 10:06, July 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: A blind one-liner slug. Poor creature.

(2 ECs/0 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) ~  Savage  BOB sig.png 13:34, July 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Snowball. Menkooroo 14:39, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Bob
 * 2) * I'd hedge a bit about saying they're "native" to the Orkellia system. Like banthas, what if these things are found all over the place? Maybe just hedge and say "found" in the Orkellia system?
 * 3) **Changed. Should I remove the info from the "Homeworld" field of the infobox?
 * 4) ***Yeah, just to be safe. ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 20:04, July 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) ****On second thought, Fry specifically referred to homeworlds in his posted intention. Doesn't homeworld mean that the slug is native to some world in the Orkellia system?  Imperators II (Talk) 13:32, July 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) *****Good point. While I don't necessarily think hedging negates that, his wording does mention homeworlds. Feel free to change it back to the old way and re-add the system to the infobox. ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 13:44, July 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) * I think there's a bit too much information on things not pertinent to the cave slug. I don't think we need so much context on what the two Sith were arguing about; it's enough to say one compared the other to a cave slug due to an inability to see the dark side or whatever it was. ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 14:57, July 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) **Removed unnecessary info. Is it better?  Imperators II (Talk) 16:28, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

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