Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Leyli

Leyli

 * Nominated by: OtterSurf (talk) 16:20, September 20, 2019 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: This particular Lady deserves some recognition.

Imp

 * Full publication date for the comic, please.  Imperators II (Talk) 17:19, September 20, 2019 (UTC)
 * Does the comic itself actually provide the full publication date? If not, you should use a source that does.  Imperators II (Talk) 18:00, September 20, 2019 (UTC)
 * CSWECite should be implemented in the corresponding reference.  Imperators II (Talk) 17:19, September 20, 2019 (UTC)
 * OtterSurf, if you're going to nominate articles for status, you need to familiarize yourself with our site's policies governing the composition of those articles. Please read what the Manual of Style has to say about the usage of . Imperators II (Talk) 18:00, September 20, 2019 (UTC)
 * "Shortly after the Battle of Endor" doesn't necessarily correspond to 4 ABY. Please revise the wording. And please note that references should be written as if they were self-contained micro-articles themselves, so phrasing like "this year" or "after this" should be avoided.  Imperators II (Talk) 17:19, September 20, 2019 (UTC)
 * I'd still like to see the date for Endor.  Imperators II (Talk) 18:00, September 20, 2019 (UTC)
 * Context for Rogue Squadron, Vader, Palpatine, Luke, Wedge, please.  Imperators II (Talk) 17:19, September 20, 2019 (UTC)
 * Vader and Palpatine were Dark Lords of the Sith, not just any Sith Lords. Please pipelink accordingly.  Imperators II (Talk) 18:00, September 20, 2019 (UTC)
 * Please link Weir to the Empire and the Empire's "defeat" to the Battle of Endor.  Imperators II (Talk) 17:19, September 20, 2019 (UTC)
 * All sorted. OtterSurf (talk) 17:44, September 20, 2019 (UTC)
 * I think you should refer to the Empire as the Galactic Empire upon its first mention.  Imperators II (Talk) 18:00, September 20, 2019 (UTC)