Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Ugor


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 * 1) -- [[Image:AckbarSig.jpg|40px]] dmirableAckbar  ( It's A Trap! ) 19:07, 30 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Jedimca0(Do or Do Not, There is No Try) 13:10, 31 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) supergeeky1 [[Image:BobaFett.jpg|20px]] The Cantina 21:46, 13 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) --Goodwood 20:59, 14 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 5) --Domlith 15:20, 23 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 1) From the Forest of Goodwood
 * 2) * Grammatical error in opening quote.
 * 3) **Fixed.
 * 4) * Prose issues in the introduction; "various shapes and positions because they had one single cell" needs to be rewritten.
 * 5) *Addressed.
 * 6) * Grammatical issue with the first paragraph of "Biology". The second sentence needs to be tweaked.
 * 7) **Addressed.
 * 8) * "because of the speed the exuded pseudopodia" needs to be rephrased.
 * 9) **Addressed.
 * 10) * In general, correct grammar needs to be applied to the uses of the proper name "Ugor" in the article, particularly in the possessive forms.
 * 11) **Addressed, I think, though I may have missed a few; I had to do it twice thanks to my beloved internet connection.
 * 12) * An overall prose readjustment wouldn't go amiss, but it's a good article, generally-speaking.--Goodwood 22:49, 10 September 2007 (UTC)

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