Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Vahla


 * ''The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.

Vahla

 * Nominated by:jSarek 10:11, December 4, 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Seems it's Grunny's turn to rope me into nominating one of my past articles. :-p

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1) Happy to support. ~ SavageBob 18:08, December 10, 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 22:50, December 11, 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) --Eyrezer 07:18, December 14, 2009 (UTC)
 * 4)  Grunny  ( Talk ) 07:18, December 15, 2009 (UTC)
 * 5)  Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 21:32, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Prepare to be savaged...
 * 2) * Just a few things, and I think this one's good to go. First off, consider making an article for the Vahla homeworld. Even if it's unknown to them, it presumably exists, no? I faced this same problem with the Morseerians and Ugors, so you can check out those articles if you need an explanation of what I'm talking about.
 * 3) **Done. jSarek 08:44, December 10, 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) * "Twisted, decadent people" sounds POV; is there a way to skirt this? That's it! ~ SavageBob 05:53, December 8, 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) **Hopefully, successfully skirted. jSarek 08:44, December 10, 2009 (UTC)
 * 6) Soresu
 * 7) * Just a small objection: what does fiery tests mean? Literally related to fire, filled with hardship, or what?
 * 8) **The original text says "a number of dangerous and fiery trials." Given the nature of the Ember of Vahl, that *probably* means literally, but I hesitate to say with any certainty. jSarek 08:44, December 10, 2009 (UTC)
 * 9) * I like the writing style :). SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 02:05, December 9, 2009 (UTC)
 * 10) **I was going to make some snarky comment about this not being a valid objection, but they all came out sounding mean. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :-) jSarek 08:44, December 10, 2009 (UTC)
 * 11) ***If you don't like the objection, then I'll strike it. I take back what I said about the writing style :D SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 22:50, December 11, 2009 (UTC)

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