Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Cephalon


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Cephalon

 * Nominated by: Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 21:05, November 7, 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: A rather odd species from Street of Shadows

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)
Support
 * 1) --Eyrezer 03:22, November 10, 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) Skippy/Several people/Noone votes/has voted/is voting/will vote/shall vote for this article/several articles/other article/no article.--Skippy Farlstendoiro 08:28, November 10, 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) Looks good! I tried to switch out some passive voice for active; please make sure I didn't introduce any inaccuracy. ~ SavageBob 21:43, November 11, 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) *I had to change a few things that could be misinterpreted the wrong way (Cephalons probably didn't employ the computers themselves, as the wording suggested) or were not completely confirmed, but thanks for the review! Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 21:53, November 11, 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) I certainly need to write a sentient species article. :P  JangFett  (Talk) 23:30, November 11, 2009 (UTC)
 * 6)  Grunny  ( Talk ) 16:34, November 21, 2009 (UTC)
 * 7)  CC7567  (talk) 21:28, November 21, 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Looking at the CUSWE entry on this species, it seems to have some information that is missing from this article. For instance, the rumor of an Inquisator going nuts, the term "hypermanifold", "electro-receptive" matrix. If these are in the novel, can you flesh it out a bit more? --Eyrezer 04:51, November 8, 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) *Checked SoS, and I did have a two things missing, which I've added (one of them about the "electroceptive matrice," (the "electro-receptive matrix" referred to in the CUSWE). Also, as the Imperial was only rumored to have gone mad trying to understand Cephalons' four-dimensional consciousness, I figured this wasn't hard enough fact to put in the article. However, I will add it if you think I should. Also, the "hypermanifold" simply describes the Cephalon's state of perception in four-dimensions: According to I-5, "They conceptualize space and time as a four-dimensional hypermanifold." As such, I don't think it's really necessary, but I'll add it too, if you think I should. Thanks for the review. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 14:17, November 8, 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) **Yep, I'd like the rumor added. It adds a bit of flavour. It would be nice to have "hypermanifold" in there - sounds like a a nice technical term to include. --Eyrezer 05:00, November 9, 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) ***No problem; done. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 16:42, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

Comments


 * Shouldn't the article be at "electroreceptive matrix" rather than "electroreceptive matrice"? ~ SavageBob 23:24, November 11, 2009 (UTC)
 * Well, the novel refers to them as "electroceptive matrices". Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 23:28, November 11, 2009 (UTC)
 * FWIW, "matrices" is the plural of "matrix" so it should be moved to the singular form. Nayayen [[Image:Old Republic military symbol.png|18px]](talk) 23:35, November 11, 2009 (UTC)
 * Oops, ok, done. Lol sorry about that :P Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 23:39, November 11, 2009 (UTC)