Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Mission to Barab I


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Mission to Barab I

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 13:38, December 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Part Seven

(2 ECs/1 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) Nice work.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:21, December 31, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Fixed a minor spacing error. Good job. MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg(Whatever) 16:51, January 4, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  15:25, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Cal Jedi
 * 2) * One of the things in the infobox is not referenced.
 * 3) **Bah, I must be getting to tired :P Adressed.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 10:36, December 31, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Haha. Obviously, I know the feeling. :P -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:21, December 31, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) * "rumor of trouble" - Why is this in quotations in the body and infobox? I believe you can just remove the quotation marks. -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:21, December 31, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) **This is the way it is phrased in the novel. However, I agree and therefore removed the quotation marks. Thanks for the review.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 10:36, December 31, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) Exiled Jedi
 * 8) * "Mundi was defeated almost to death during his mission." This seems oddly worded to me, perhaps: "Mundi was defeated and nearly killed during his mission." In my opinion, this says the same thing in a much clearer way. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  02:46, January 2, 2012 (UTC)
 * 9) **Indeed, that was taken from the novel. Adressed and thanks.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 11:41, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

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