Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Touler


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Touler

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 02:19, July 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Takin' a break from Deceived to do a single mention from TFU2.

(2 ECs/2 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 18:25, July 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Menkooroo 14:12, July 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Looks good.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  15:37, July 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 02:22, July 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) ~  Savage  BOB sig.png 20:47, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Hey, I wanted to take him :P
 * 2) * First, the infobox needs to be the Imperial character infobox.
 * 3) **Fixed.
 * 4) * Then you have to hide the biographical part.
 * 5) **Done.
 * 6) * What source say that Touler is a Human Male? The only mention of him is the quote and there is no other source which says that.
 * 7) **Oops, got a little ahead of myself there.
 * 8) * The info about him could use some context on Vader, Kamino and the events of the battle (stationed over Kamino, battled the Rebels, Imperials loose at the end).
 * 9) **How's that?
 * 10) *Please remember to check all those things mentioned above before you nominate an article. But nice work anyway.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 17:38, July 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) **Yea, normally I wouldn't let such big mistakes get through, but I just wasn't paying attention. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 18:22, July 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 12) Source for 1 BBY?  NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 06:15, July 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 13) *Fixed. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:58, July 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * 14) Post-support objection
 * 15) * A fan-made timeline can't be used as a source. And 3 BBY can't be correct, if TFU I is in 2 BBY. Do you have any recent novels that include a novel timeline in the front? Menkooroo 03:52, July 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 16) **Check this. If this works, I'll have to change it on my other TFUII noms. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 04:27, July 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 17) ***It can't be 3 BBY if it takes place after TFU I (2 BBY). Try to find an official source --- the front of a recent novel, Leland Chee on facebook/twitter, etc. Menkooroo 04:49, July 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 18) ****Just saw the SH thread: the quote from the Gamepro magazine here states 'This game is several months after the first game." So by "about a year before," it means "about a year before ANH," not "about a year before TFU." Ta-da! 1 BBY. :) Menkooroo 05:06, July 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 19) *****Aahhh, what a forgetful person I am. :) Changed to 1 BBY. Does that source format look OK? Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 16:24, July 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 20) ******Like with Lexi Dio above, it's probably best to go with the comic. Menkooroo 14:15, July 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * 21) *******Fixed. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 17:00, July 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * 22) Bob
 * 23) * Perhaps add the line above Vader's line in the introductory quote to give some context for what Vader is responding to.
 * 24) **Fixed.
 * 25) * You should probably create an Unidentified signals officer when that guy gets mentioned.
 * 26) **Got it.
 * 27) * Similarly, in the body, what event prompted Vader to order the battle to begin? ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 13:47, July 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * 28) **Got it. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 17:00, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

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