Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Cassus Fett


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Cassus Fett

 * Nominated by: Lord Hydronium 02:13, 31 August 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: A preview of Fetts to come.

(6 Inqs/3 Users/9 Total)
Support
 * 1) This article looks very clean and interesting, I had myself reading most of it non-stop. -- Lord EggHead  (No, I am your father!) 17:31, 31 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) DC 02:25, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 21:34, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
 * 4)  Cavalier One ( Squadron channel ) 10:55, 5 September 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) NaruHina  Talk [[Image:Anakinsolo.png|20px]] 04:58, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
 * 6)  Graestan ( Talk ) 01:34, 14 September 2008 (UTC)
 * 7)  Greyman ( Talk ) 08:58, 29 September 2008 (UTC)
 * 8) Cull Tremayne 20:52, 1 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 9)  Jaina Solo ( Talk ) [[Image:Jainasolosig.gif |25px]] 22:51, 5 October 2008 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) DC
 * 2) * In both the intro and the body, the massacre of the Cathar needs to be linked.
 * 3) **'Tis now.
 * 4) * Why did Fett consider Pulsipher his rival?
 * 5) **Not stated.
 * 6) ***Alright.
 * 7) * Again: the Mandalorian invasion of Taris needs to linked.
 * 8) **Link added.
 * 9) * In the P&T, a lot of the info in the beginning of the section has nothing to do with Fett's personality. Instead, you could put that info into a Skills and Abilities section, which would fit perfectly in the article.
 * 10) **They are traits, though, and stuff like the influence he had isn't really a skill or ability. I think the only pure skill part is the languages, since even the tactics thing ties into personality. - Lord Hydronium 19:23, 1 September 2008 (UTC)
 * 11) ***I have to disagree. Though I do know what you mean by the influence he held, I still think a comprehensible Skills and Abilties section can be made out of the languages he knew and the talents he had commanding the Mandalorian fleets. DC 19:52, 2 September 2008 (UTC)
 * 12) ****Objection struck per IRC discussion with Lord Hydronium. DC 02:25, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
 * 13) *Amazing article. I can't wait for Boba. DC 18:39, 1 September 2008 (UTC)
 * 14) From the moffship of AdmirableAckbar:
 * 15) * "In a series of skirmishes on the Outer Rim, Fett engaged the forces of the Galactic Republic in a series of battles, including a massacre of the Cathar people" &mdash; there's repetitive wording here, but it seems kind of redundant. In some minor battles, he engaged the Republic in some battles. A rewording would be prudent, possibly with a bit of explanation for the first part.
 * 16) * "attempted to invade the planet Alderaan" &mdash; did he actually attempt it? I don't think it went further than the planning stages.
 * 17) * If you're going to explain who Demagol is, you should probably do the same for Pulsipher, even if we don't know much about his relationship with Fett.
 * 18) * I'd like to see a quote in the P&T section, as well as an addition. We know he's ordered a few BDZish planetary attacks, so he doesn't have too great a regard for non-Mandalorian life, and an explanation/mention of the "To stop the infection, Cassus amputated the limb. Very like him" quote.
 * 19) **Great work. Mandalorians can be cool when used properly. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 17:24, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
 * 20) ***All addressed except part of last. I can't find a suitable quote, and the quote you mention is the source of the penultimate sentence in the first paragraph, just rephrased to more specifically apply to the situation. - Lord Hydronium 20:48, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
 * 21) ****Okay, fair enough. One possibility would be to move Rohlan's quote from the Jebble section to the P&T and replace it with another, though I don't mind. I do think that sentence in the P&T could be beefed up a bit and explained more, but I won't object on it. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 21:34, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
 * 22) I think it needs some updating from Interference. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 20:00, 3 October 2008 (UTC)

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