Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Sate Pestage


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(5 Inq/5 Users/10 Total)
Support Oppose Comments
 * 1) Victorious on all fronts. - Lord Hydronium 21:40, 11 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Thefourdotelipsis 01:21, 12 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 3)  StarNeptune Talk to me! 02:04, 12 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) QuentinGeorge 03:17, 12 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 5) Let's not wait to FA Sate! Ozzel 02:22, 13 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 6) That was two-thirds of a pun, Ozzel - PU!--Goodwood 23:22, 13 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 7) Green Tentacle (Talk) 08:51, 15 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 8)  Greyman ( Paratus ) 02:45, 17 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 9)  Chack Jadson  Talk  18:30, 18 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 10) Hobbes15 ( Tiger Headquarters ) 21:58, 18 August 2007 (UTC)
 * Not much to complain about. Could use a bit of explanation as to what the heck the Imperial Tribunal was, as it just appears from nowhere. Also, I had to read the last paragraph of Flight to Ciutric a couple of times and I'm still not sure I understand it. Who's the tribune, Isard? Green Tentacle (Talk) 15:00, 14 August 2007 (UTC)
 * "Tribune" is a typo; I've fixed it to "Tribunal". I don't know if there was anything else that was confusing about that paragraph, but see if it makes more sense now. The comic doesn't really explain where the Tribunal came from (it just appears in Mandatory Retirement), but I tried to clear it up a little. - Lord Hydronium 01:11, 15 August 2007 (UTC)
 * Rephrase the second paragraph of P&T, as it's too similar to some things stated earlier in the article (such as the part about the Quarren who Pestage dismissed as an animal seems to be repeated there).  Chack Jadson  Talk 20:25, 17 August 2007 (UTC)
 * It's mentioned once in the context of the plot, and once to describe his personality. I don't see that as much of a problem, though perhaps you'd be fine if the wording were simply changed to be less similar? Don't know how to get around the "animal" thing, though, since that kind of sums up his views nicely. - Lord Hydronium 03:26, 18 August 2007 (UTC)
 * I like this nom, but my one problem is the lack of info on the final fate of Vocis Kenit. Once that gets a little mention, I'm happy to vote for it. Hobbes15 ( Tiger Headquarters ) 21:08, 18 August 2007 (UTC)
 * Appears to have been fixed. Hobbes15 ( Tiger Headquarters ) 21:58, 18 August 2007 (UTC)

'''Approved by Inquisitorius 23:07, 18 August 2007 (UTC)