Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Jhoram Bey


 * ''The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a featured article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.

(5 Inq/2 Users/6 Total)
Support
 * 1) As Culator said, these issues utterly failed to suck. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 14:19, 26 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) Goodwood  [[Image:Redstarbird.svg|20px]] ( Alliance Intelligence ) 20:14, 27 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 3)  Graestan ( Talk ) 23:40, 27 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 4)  Master Aban Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 16:02, 5 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) Toprawa and Ralltiir 18:13, 7 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 6) --  Darth Culator  (Talk) 15:27, 11 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 7) The 50 FA Club is lonely at the moment. Also, Cade-less Legacy is good. Thefourdotelipsis 11:35, 12 May 2008 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) "Bey served under Admiral Gar Stazi and his flagship, the Indomitable" He served under the command of a starship? :-) Also, a link to flagship is desired. -- Goodwood  [[Image:Redstarbird.svg|20px]] ( Alliance Intelligence ) 01:36, 27 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) *Altered. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 14:54, 27 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) The outcome of the battle is slightly hazy&mdash;I am not sure if you say what the outcome was, specifically, just that the Alliance had only lost some pilots, etc. Could you spell it out a little?  Graestan ( Talk ) 02:41, 27 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) *Better? -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 14:54, 27 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) From the Merciless Hammer of Toprawa:
 * 6) * For the sake of consistency and not being too confusing, I would say just refer to the planet as Mon Calamari, rather than Dac: "The Alliance fleet gathered near Dac, ready to attack the planet's shipyards"
 * 7) ** And, that being said, please change all subsequent mentions of "Dac"
 * 8) ***Done and done.
 * 9) * Your links to the Indomitable lead to a disambig page. Please rectify
 * 10) **Done.
 * 11) * Little context, please: "left Ronto alone against two fighters"
 * 12) **Better?
 * 13) ***Yup.
 * 14) *Excellent, Acky. You're refining your work to a point that my objections are almost negligible. Toprawa and Ralltiir 06:37, 6 May 2008 (UTC)
 * 15) **Thank you. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 17:39, 7 May 2008 (UTC)

Comments


 * I'll update it when Bey inevitably shows up again. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 14:19, 26 April 2008 (UTC)
 * Random fact: this'll probably be my fiftieth FA. :/ -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 23:05, 26 April 2008 (UTC)