Wookieepedia:Good article nominations

 This page is for the nomination of good articles. This is not a way to showcase the articles of your favorite characters, spaceships, or the like. For a list of Good articles, see Category:Wookieepedia good articles.

A Good article is an article that adheres to quality standards, but cannot reach FA status due to its limited content.


 * Good article nominations history
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An article must&hellip;


 * 1) &hellip;be well-written and detailed.
 * 2) &hellip;be unbiased, non-point of view.
 * 3) &hellip;be sourced with all available sources and appearances.
 * 4) &hellip;follow the Manual of Style, Layout Guide, and all other policies on Wookieepedia.
 * 5) &hellip;following the review process, be stable, i.e., does not change significantly from day to day and is not the subject of ongoing edit wars. This does not apply to vandalism and protection or semi-protection as a result of vandalism.
 * 6) &hellip;not be tagged with any sort of improvement tags (i.e. more sources, expand, etc).
 * 7) &hellip;have a proper lead that gives a good summary of the topic if the length of the article supports it. This is essential in articles over 1000 words but may not be appropriate on articles with limited content.
 * 8) &hellip;have no more than 3 redlinks for articles less than 500 words, no more than 5 redlinks for articles 500 words or more, and no redlinks in the introduction, infobox, or any templates.
 * 9) &hellip;have significant information, especially a biography for character articles. For articles under 1000 words in length, comprehensive detail is required with all information covered from all sources and appearances. For articles over 1000 words, broad coverage addressing all major aspects of the topic is sufficient.
 * 10) &hellip;be completely referenced for all available material and sources. See Sourcing for more information.
 * 11) &hellip;have all quotes and images sourced.
 * 12) &hellip;provide at least one quote on the article if available. A leading quote at the beginning of the article would be preferred, though not required if no quotes are available. Although quotes may be placed in the body of the article, a maximum of one quote is allowed at the beginning of each section.
 * 13) &hellip;ideally include a "personality and traits" section on all character articles if information is available.
 * 14) &hellip;ideally include a "powers and abilities" section on relevant character articles, especially for Force-sensitive characters where said powers and/or abilities are stipulated.
 * 15) &hellip;include a "Behind the scenes" section.
 * 16) &hellip;include a reasonable number of images of sufficient quality to illustrate the article, if said images are available.
 * 17) &hellip;counting the introduction and "Behind the scenes" material, be at least 250 words long (not including captions, quotes, or headers, etc). Alternatively, a comprehensive article cannot exceed 3000 words.

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 * 1) First, nominate an article you find is worthy of good status, putting it at the bottom of the list below. Nominated articles must meet all seventeen requirements stated above.
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 * 4) Others will object to the nomination if they disagree that the article is good enough; they will then supply reasons for doing so, and ways to improve the article (errors, style, organization, images, notability, sources).
 * 5) Supporters adjust the article until the objectors (with reasonable objections) are satisfied.

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 * 1) Before doing anything, be sure to read the article completely, keeping a sharp eye out for mistakes.
 * 2) Afterward, compare the article to the criteria listed above, and then either support or object the article's nomination.
 * 3) *If you object, please supply concrete reasons for doing so, and how it can be improved.
 * 4) As stated above, any objections will be looked upon by the nominator, supporters, and anyone willing to improve the article, and action will be taken to please the objectors. Do not strike other users' objections; it is up to the objector to review the changes and strike if they are satisfied.
 * 5) Once a nomination has a total of five votes, with at least three votes coming from AgriCorps or Inquisitorius members&mdash;one of which must be an AgriCorps vote&mdash;after at least a week since it was nominated (beginning the day of its nomination) and no objections (or the objections have been stricken or overridden), the article will be considered a "Good article" and tagged with the template. The talk page will also be tagged with the GA template. Alternatively, if a nomination receives a total of five AgriCorps votes with no outstanding objections before one week has passed, the nomination will be considered successful.
 * 6) The article is placed on the Good article list.

All nominations will be considered idle and are subject to removal by AgriCorps vote if objections are not addressed after a period of 3 weeks.

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Dor Gal-ram

 * Nominated by:  IFYLOFD  ( You will pay the price for your lack of vision! ) 02:50, September 29, 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: A double nom with Horak-mul.

(4 ACs/2 Users/6 Total)
Support
 * 1) Jedi Kasra (talk) 17:45, October 1, 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) --Eyrezer 20:42, October 27, 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) Nayayen [[Image:Old Republic military symbol.png|18px]](talk) 23:58, November 1, 2009 (UTC)
 * 4)  Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 03:23, November 20, 2009 (UTC)
 * 5)  CC7567  (talk) 01:18, November 30, 2009 (UTC)
 * 6) Toprawa and Ralltiir 04:48, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Same issue as my objection for Gorrm. He didn't appear in Conquest and Unification so he can't be listed as appearing in the whole story arc.  Nayayen [[Image:Old Republic military symbol.png|18px]](talk) 20:55, October 27, 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) *Addressed.
 * 3) The Grand Master
 * 4) * There seems to be a bit of superfluous information in the bio, that really just doesn't add anything to the article for Gal-Ram. (i.e. the extra info about the arrival of the Daragons and subsequent events could be condensed quite a bit to just the necessities)
 * 5) **I disagree; I believe this level of context is required to understand what is going on.
 * 6) ***Not really: it could easily be condensed to something along the lines of "Around this time, the arrival of two Humans, Gav and Jori Daragon, opened up a conflict between Kreesh and Sadow. Eventually, Sadow staged a Republic attack..." As it is now it consists mainly of fluffy detail with no pertinence to Gal-ram. We don't need to know that the Daragons arrived in the Starbreaker 12 during the Funeral of Marka Ragnos, that they arrived in the Valley of the Dark Lords, and that they were arrested and imprisoned. We don't need to know what both Sadow and Kreesh wanted to do with them and why. We just need to know that their arrival caused a rift which eventually led to Sadow's staged attack and self-declaration as Dark Lord, which caused Kreesh to rally his supporters, including Gal-ram.
 * 7) ****Addressed.
 * 8) * Also, the bio could be broken up into more than just the current two long paragraphs.
 * 9) **Addressed.
 * 10) *Nice work. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 18:14, November 4, 2009 (UTC)
 * 11) Attack of the Clone
 * 12) * "In 5,000 BBY, Sadow staged an attack on the Sith Empire by the Galactic Republic": the misuse of idioms here presents a rather noticeable lack of clarity.
 * 13) **Addressed.
 * 14) * "After the meeting, Naga Sadow staged a Republic attack on the Daragons' ship, the Starbreaker 12 's hangar on Ziost and stole the ship." This makes it sound like the hangar is the ship, and I still find it unclear how a Sith Lord can stage an attack on behalf of the Republic.
 * 15) **Addressed.
 * 16) *** First part still remains.  CC7567  (talk) 04:47, November 22, 2009 (UTC)
 * 17) * As you've done before, you make the reference to the Battle of Khar Delba so late that it's almost pointless to include it when it has no relevancy to Gal-ram in its current placement.  CC7567  (talk) 20:47, November 21, 2009 (UTC)
 * 18) **Addressed.
 * 19) Toprawa:
 * 20) * Please do a more specific job of linking to whatever the name of his flagship is here. If the article doesn't exist, please create one, since redlinks are not permitted in the introduction: "was killed in the battle when Sadow ordered the crew of Gal-ram's flagship to betray and kill him." And please link to this same article in the appropriate place in the biography.
 * 21) **Addressed.
 * 22) * I'm not sure what you're trying to say here, but something is wrong here both grammatically and with the syntax. Please clarify: "Sadow staged a Republic attack on the Daragons' ship, the Starbreaker 12 's hangar on Ziost and stole the ship"
 * 23) **Addressed.
 * 24) * No link for Sadow's citadel? "the site of Sadow's citadel."
 * 25) **Addressed.
 * 26) * Can we provide a more detailed description in the BTS to specify the actual issue in the comic series that the character makes his first appearance? This will require you to rewrite and expand the first BTS sentence, obviously. Toprawa and Ralltiir 05:47, November 24, 2009 (UTC)
 * 27) **Addressed.  IFYLOFD  ( You will pay the price for your lack of vision! ) 23:54, November 29, 2009 (UTC)
 * 28) ***Good job. Toprawa and Ralltiir 04:48, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

Comments

Metellos Exchange

 * Nominated by: Nayayen [[Image:Old Republic military symbol.png|18px]](talk) 12:17, October 26, 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: I didn't want to fluff it over 1000 words for FAN; it stands at just over 900. I also wasn't writing this with the intention of GAing it but, I wrote it like that anyway. Why not?

(2 ACs/2 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1) Wanna see more of these&hellip;--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 13:28, October 30, 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) I'm probably doing economics next year. Maybe then I'll have some idea what you wrote :P SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 10:00, November 4, 2009 (UTC)
 * 3)  CC7567  (talk) 20:06, November 26, 2009 (UTC)
 * 4)  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  23:47, November 28, 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) I'll review the article in full shortly. Taking a glance at it though, I do suggest you add a couple other images to it, such as one of Gryph as the professor, or something.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 17:08, October 27, 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) *Added File:Metellos 3.jpg and, to kill two birds with one stone, File:Slyssk confronts plaarvin.jpg. Thanks for the suggestion. Nayayen [[Image:Old Republic military symbol.png|18px]](talk) 19:25, October 27, 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) Here we go
 * 4) * ?In the intro, the second & third sentences begin with "It". Can you change one of them?
 * 5) **Changed the latter one.
 * 6) * The Mandalorian Wars need to be mentioned somewhere; I'd like to see it mentioned in both intro and body. For example, the Metellos Exchange was auctioning trade franchises with the planet Mandalore for after the war ended.
 * 7) **Mentioned in intro and body.
 * 8) * I would also like to see the fact that Nunk Plaarvin was a Ephant Mon. Perhaps in the intro, but definitely in the body.
 * 9) **I added the Ephant Mon link in the 3rd paragraph of "History", please try to move it in a earlier spot.
 * 10) ***Ephant Mon is an individual. He and Nunk are Chevin and that is mentioned in the first sentence of the "Concept" section. Nayayen [[Image:Old Republic military symbol.png|18px]](talk) 20:57, October 29, 2009 (UTC)
 * 11) ****(Smacks head). I apologize.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 13:26, October 30, 2009 (UTC)
 * 12) * I believe it wouldn't hurt to state that Jarael was a female Arkanian offshoot.
 * 13) **Done.
 * 14) * Context needed for Slyssk.
 * 15) **YEEP! I had already given him a bit of context (former member of Raff Syndicate) so I added that he was a Trandoshan. Nayayen [[Image:Old Republic military symbol.png|18px]](talk) 20:57, October 29, 2009 (UTC)
 * 16) ***Thanks, that's what I wanted to see.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 13:26, October 30, 2009 (UTC)
 * 17) *That's all I have for now. Gutsy move, nominating a corporation. Never could fully understand economics.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 13:53, October 29, 2009 (UTC)
 * 18) **Thanks for the review Kasra, luckily I study economics :P. Nayayen [[Image:Old Republic military symbol.png|18px]](talk) 20:57, October 29, 2009 (UTC)
 * 19) One thing:
 * 20) * "The disruption caused meant that Plaarvin would have to announce that Jarael's claim was correct and that Italbos was rich with minerals in order to make a profit to pay to the Raff Syndicate." But she claimed the opposite, right? Why would the disruption mean that he has to say that she is correct? Please explain this. If I'm missing something, please state it here.
 * 21) **No, Jarael's claim was that "...the place is richer than stink! I've seen it! All your mineral projections were low&mdash;way low!" I did miss out a little bit of info that said what the disruption actually was. Hopefully I've clarified it. Nayayen [[Image:Old Republic military symbol.png|18px]](talk) 10:52, November 19, 2009 (UTC)
 * 22) *Interesting concept.  Chack Jadson  (Talk)
 * 23) Attack of the Clone
 * 24) * Please try to clarify when this was set up before going off and detailing Hierogryph's exploits. It's not clear otherwise.
 * 25) **Everything to do with the set up is in the "Concept" section so it would just be repeating part of it again to include it in the history. I think I've added what you were looking for but I'm not quite sure.
 * 26) * "before the owners of the claims to it": please try to reword this; it's a little awkward wording.
 * 27) **I cannot find any other way to word it. "Claimants" wouldn't work IMO, or is that too picky?
 * 28) ***I'd like you to first clarify what you're trying to say so that I can help you find the best wording. I still find it hard to discern the meaning of the sentence.  CC7567  (talk) 23:00, November 21, 2009 (UTC)
 * 29) ****It should refer to the people who bought the claims to the various trade rights for Italbos. Because they are not purchasing the claims (to the rights), not claiming them, "claimants" cannot be used. Nayayen [[Image:Old Republic military symbol.png|18px]](talk) 23:57, November 21, 2009 (UTC)
 * 30) *****Hmm. Actually, I think it's clearer now with the clarification that you just provided; the only part that concerns me is the "claims to it," as this is not a proper idiom. Is it possible to state that those people bought the claims to Italbos's various trade rights through the Exchange before bringing Hierogryph and his friends into the mix? It seems like the best possible solution to this problem, as it will ease the amount of context that you have to give when you mention Hierogryph a little while later.  CC7567  (talk) 00:06, November 22, 2009 (UTC)
 * 31) ******I think I've got it now. Nayayen [[Image:Old Republic military symbol.png|18px]](talk) 13:51, November 24, 2009 (UTC)
 * 32) * "Luckily for Hierogryph and Carrick": please check WP:NPOV to see if this is appropriate to the article.
 * 33) **I wasn't sure if I could reword it without sounding clunky but the proper NPOV should be there now.
 * 34) *Watch your comma usage, please.  CC7567  (talk) 21:01, November 21, 2009 (UTC)
 * 35) **I'll try. Thanks for fixing some issues here and there as well as the review. Nayayen [[Image:Old Republic military symbol.png|18px]](talk) 22:49, November 21, 2009 (UTC)
 * 36) * Please rephrase the opening sentence of the History. The first clause is giving me the impression that you're trying to rush into detailing Hierogryph's conning instead of focusing on the Exchange as a whole, and it's also improperly worded. To clarify my previous objection: no, the Concept section did not clarify when it was set up.
 * 37) **Addressed, no specific date is given in the sources.
 * 38) * "Before Hierogryph and Carrick could hasten to the Negotiating Room to free their companions, Jarael and Dyre had already managed to free themselves with little harm done": please check both your verb tense and chronology here. Both are unclear because of the first issue.  CC7567  (talk) 23:00, November 21, 2009 (UTC)
 * 39) **Addressed. Nayayen [[Image:Old Republic military symbol.png|18px]](talk) 23:57, November 21, 2009 (UTC)
 * 40) * I recommend checking to see if everything currently in the Concept section is exclusively related to the section or should also be in the History as well. The distinction between both should be a little more defined.  CC7567  (talk) 00:06, November 22, 2009 (UTC)
 * 41) **I've shifted things around a bit so that it is now how the Exchange functioned in the Concept section and the information about when it was setup in the History section. Nayayen [[Image:Old Republic military symbol.png|18px]](talk) 13:51, November 24, 2009 (UTC)
 * 42) * Please be careful not to loose references when copying and pasting information, as the new Fact tag now indicates.  CC7567  (talk) 08:02, November 26, 2009 (UTC)
 * 43) **Fixed. Nayayen [[Image:Old Republic military symbol.png|18px]](talk) 12:22, November 26, 2009 (UTC)

Comments
 * Spoilers for KotOR 47: What with the release of Issue 47, would it be wise to change mentions of (spoiler: Rohlan Dyre to Demagol, in disguise as the former ), or similar wording? If so, I hope we don't have to do this for every article with (spoiler: Dyre ) in... Nayayen [[Image:Old Republic military symbol.png|18px]](talk) 22:49, November 21, 2009 (UTC)

Shar Dakhan

 * Nominated by:  IFYLOFD  ( You will pay the price for your lack of vision! ) 02:47, November 4, 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Heh. I was worried that I couldn't get this over 250 words.

(1 ACs/2 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) Nostalgia. —Tommy9281  Dark side Master SWGTCG.jpg ( No truth in me ) 05:24, November 13, 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) Farl got everything I came up with already. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 11:02, November 13, 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) For Sandokan! --Skippy Farlstendoiro 11:21, November 13, 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) For Farlstendoiro!
 * 2) * No quotes? Rewording: As there are quotes available, would you consider adding one or more?
 * 3) **Quotes added.
 * 4) * ..."ruled over the world of Ch'hodos, which served as his central base,[1] located in the northern part of the Unknown Regions...[2]" I understand you want to reduce footnotes to a minimum, which is laudable, but I suggest rewording this sentence, as it seems that "his base is located in the northern part".
 * 5) **Addressed.
 * 6) *" were repelled and eventually defeated." This seems important, do we know any details? Battle, opposing commanders, anything?
 * 7) **Entire end of the bio has been changed.
 * 8) * Shar Dakhan? Related to San Dokan? --Skippy Farlstendoiro 07:20, November 4, 2009 (UTC)
 * 9) Tommy:
 * 10) * It appears that Shar Dakhan led the assault on Coruscant, so you might want to expand the article to reflect this.
 * 11) **Yeah, addressed.
 * 12) * To touch on Skippy's point above, there are quotes, as found in First Encounter.
 * 13) **Addressed.
 * 14) * As usual, there is some underlinking. A Wookieepedian of your caliber should not have to be reminded repeatedly of things like this. Please address.
 * 15) **Addressed.
 * 16) *That's all. —Tommy9281 Dark side Master SWGTCG.jpg ( No truth in me ) 16:00, November 6, 2009 (UTC)
 * 17) It isn't clear in the intro who wins the Battle of Coruscant: "Dakhan's forces were opposed by a numerically inferior group of Jedi and Republic soldiers, but they were defeated." "They" could refer to either group: please specify.  Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 22:40, November 13, 2009 (UTC)
 * 18) *Addressed.
 * 19) One more: "Dakhan later accompanied Sadow's invasion force in the Great Hyperspace War, and personally commanded the Sith attack on the Republic capital of Coruscant. Sadow demanded that Dakhan and the Sith force capture Coruscant..." The chronology here seems to be out of order. You say that he personally commanded the attack, and then you say that Sadow ordered him to attack. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 15:16, November 22, 2009 (UTC)
 * 20) **Addressed.  IFYLOFD  ( You will pay the price for your lack of vision! ) 23:58, November 29, 2009 (UTC)
 * 21) Is there a ref missing in the first sentence of the Bio? Surely that is not all from the Altas. --Eyrezer 03:10, November 23, 2009 (UTC)
 * 22) **My mistake. Addressed.  IFYLOFD  ( You will pay the price for your lack of vision! ) 23:58, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

Comments

Tandun III

 * Nominated by:Apotheoses Jedi 20:40, November 12, 2009 (UTC-6)
 * Nomination comments:

(0 ACs/0 Users/0 Total)
Support

Object
 * 1) Please go through and read all of the nomination rules at the top of this page. At the very least, the entire article needs to be properly sourced, not just a few random infobox items. Also, your intro is rather disproportionate to the article's size.  CC7567  (talk) 04:24, November 13, 2009 (UTC)

Comments

Llaban

 * Nominated by:  IFYLOFD  ( You will pay the price for your lack of vision! ) 04:11, November 14, 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Floyd strikes again!

(1 ACs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 10:41, November 23, 2009 (UTC)
 * 2)  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  23:59, November 28, 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Soresu, with a legato touch
 * 2) * Its unclear in the intro how he goes from Rebel leader to Tetan commander. Please clarify.
 * 3) **Addressed.
 * 4) *** Still confusing. You need to mention the amnesty, otherwise there seems to be no motive. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 05:21, November 20, 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) ****Addressed.
 * 6) * In the body, you haven't explained his motives for joining the Tetan forces, which according ot the quote is amnesty.
 * 7) **Addressed.
 * 8) * The large Sith fleet appeared and the sky, Doesn't make sense. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 09:30, November 17, 2009 (UTC)
 * 9) **Bah! Addressed.  IFYLOFD  ( You will pay the price for your lack of vision! ) 03:17, November 20, 2009 (UTC)
 * 10) Skippy, with a single objection
 * 11) *As seen in pic, Llaban had some tattoos, war paints or marks on his face. If their nature is known, this should be mentioned under P&T; if not, at least under BtS. --Skippy Farlstendoiro 14:05, November 24, 2009 (UTC)
 * 12) **Addressed.  IFYLOFD  ( You will pay the price for your lack of vision! ) 00:01, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

Comments

Saren Llalik

 * Nominated by: Skippy Farlstendoiro 15:36, November 17, 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Meet the designer of Lobot's cybernetic implant, according to West End Games.

(2 ACs/2 Users/4 Total)
Support Object
 * 1) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 05:22, November 20, 2009 (UTC)
 * 2)  Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 16:25, November 23, 2009 (UTC)
 * 3)  JangFett  (Talk) 13:52, November 26, 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) Very clean now. --Eyrezer 00:06, November 29, 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) Soresu
 * 2) * The intro is way too short. 1 sentence for an 750 word (guess) article?
 * 3) * Expand on some of her other appearances in the BTS.
 * 4) * Any other quotes? SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 04:52, November 18, 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) **All done. --Skippy Farlstendoiro 08:18, November 18, 2009 (UTC)
 * 6) Skippy, please go back and check the sizes of your paragraphs. For instance, I see a short sentence for the intro, followed by two paragraphs. This occurs in the bio as well. Please keep the sizes consistent.  JangFett  (Talk) 21:34, November 18, 2009 (UTC)
 * 7) *Other than quotes, all paragraphs are now 3-4 lines, except for two (one 2-liner, one 5-liner) that I cannot imagine how to avoid. --Skippy Farlstendoiro 09:26, November 19, 2009 (UTC)
 * 8) The Grand Master
 * 9) * "Alliance General Airen Cracken considered himself to be in debt with Llalik." Why/how was he in debt to her? Without this information, this statement's placement in the intro doesn't make sense; it doesn't really fit in.
 * 10) **Done. --Skippy Farlstendoiro 14:38, November 23, 2009 (UTC)
 * 11) * "She considered Nashiak was wrong serving the Empire, probably not considering the Imperial's atrocities." The meaning here is unclear; I assume you are trying to say that Saren thought that her sister wasn't considering the Imperial atrocities, but this is somewhat ambiguous. Also, why the uncertainty here? "Probably?" Was it the reason, or wasn't it? If it can't be confirmed, it must be removed.
 * 12) **Done. --Skippy Farlstendoiro 14:38, November 23, 2009 (UTC)
 * 13) *More to come. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 15:28, November 20, 2009 (UTC)
 * 14) A few more
 * 15) * Could you make an article for Director of Prosthetic Design?
 * 16) **Done.
 * 17) * Early in the bio, you say she joined the Rebellion with her oldest brother, and later, in the third paragraph, you say she was secretly a member. If she joined secretly, this should be said upon the first mention of her joining the Alliance. Also, did her oldest brother join secretly, too? (If the circumstances of her brother's enlistment is unknown, then don't worry about it)
 * 18) **Modified; info on older brother is scarce.
 * 19) * "an engineer with no known political ideas..." This isn't completely clear: do you mean no political affiliations? Either way, this seems to be superfluous. Is it really necessary?
 * 20) **Modified. OS suggests Alaras's views and actions are important for Alliance Intelligence; I've already ommitted all the really superfluous info.
 * 21) * "At that point, she was well-respected because of her engineering work that provided the soldiers with new items." What new items? Do you still mean cyborg technologies? What soldiers? (You refer to "the soldiers", but you have yet to mention any soldiers in the bio.)
 * 22) **Modified.
 * 23) * "including alien species, security, and even forgery." How was she knowledgable in alien species? And in what kinds of security and forgery was she knowledgeable? Please clarify. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 15:11, November 23, 2009 (UTC)
 * 24) **General knowledge on specialized fields; it's a reading of her RPG stats. "Alien species 5D" is high enough to deserve a mention. --Skippy Farlstendoiro 15:31, November 23, 2009 (UTC)
 * 25) * You should probably add her connection with Nashiak (i.e. her wish for them to work together, etc.) to the P&t.
 * 26) **Done; reword if you feel it's needed.
 * 27) * You should also mention her written reports in the intro. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 15:52, November 23, 2009 (UTC)
 * 28) **Done. --Skippy Farlstendoiro 16:10, November 23, 2009 (UTC)

Comments

TX-21

 * Nominated by:  JangFett  (Talk) 15:19, November 21, 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Another dim-headed tactical droid. :P

(0 ACs/1 Users/1 Total)
Support
 * 1) -- Xd1358  Talk 20:07, November 21, 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Xd: Minor objection, I might read through it later.
 * 2) * Mention the Clone Wars both in the intro and the body.
 * 3) *-- Xd1358  Talk 15:20, November 21, 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) **Addressed.  JangFett  (Talk) 15:23, November 21, 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) * The only thing I noticed was that you could vary TX-21 in the body with the "droid" and/or the "tactical droid". Otherwise, great work. -- Xd1358  Talk 19:34, November 21, 2009 (UTC)
 * 6) **Addressed; thanks for the review. :)  JangFett  (Talk) 19:55, November 21, 2009 (UTC)
 * 7) Attack of the Clone
 * 8) *Mentioning the battle in both the intro and body without specifying the Republic's intention of attacking the foundry makes mentioning the battle at all close to pointless. The intro in particular does not do a very good job at this, while the body needs to be phrased better.
 * 9) *In the intro, please make it clearer that both Poggle and TX-21 confronted the Padawans.
 * 10) *"While the ongoing events continued" is extremely redundant. I've already changed this, but please keep this in mind.
 * 11) *Quote captions are not sentences.
 * 12) *The Galaxy at War info is in the infobox and yet never mentioned in the body. Please fix this.
 * 13) *"The Galactic Republic force mounted an attack on Poggle's new droid foundry, which concerned the Geonosian Archduke." Lack of clarity here.
 * 14) *"on their adversary" is not a proper English idiom.
 * 15) *"of the intruders that breached the foundry": I don't see the point of specifying the "intruders" at their second mention instead of their first.
 * 16) *Please get in the objective of the Padawans' mission.
 * 17) *"TX-21 next to Poggle the Lesser" is an image caption extremely borderlining an IU perspective. Please fix this.
 * 18) *Saying "near TX-21" is a detail that needs to have more clarification. It seems irrelevant otherwise.
 * 19) *"TX-21 showed his gratitude toward the Geonosian Archduke." How?
 * 20) *The Characteristics section is rambling a lot, and overall, you need to do a better job of linking his noteworthy actions to his characteristics.
 * 21) *"On his chest, TX-21 has bug-like markings, which fitted his role as a Geonosian adviser." Please rephrase this and find the error that should be standing out like a flashing siren.
 * 22) *"The droid made its debut": is it a "he" or "it"? Please make up your mind.
 * 23) *The reason that most of these objections seem like they're is because they are. Jang, I know that you can do a better job and that I shouldn't have to ask you to clarify anything in your writing anymore. The rest of what I have to say is what I've already said to you: please work on your proofreading skills, as a lot of these errors could have been caught by them.  CC7567  (talk) 21:04, November 22, 2009 (UTC)
 * 24) *Jang, please note that the reason I may not have checked over these and my IRC objections is because I'm waiting for you to clarify that you've fixed them. I want you to be confident that the article is perfect before I take another look.  CC7567  (talk) 18:39, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

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CT-327

 * Nominated by:  JangFett  (Talk) 19:52, November 21, 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: A minor clone; part of my Rookies project.

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 * 1) The Grand Master
 * 2) *I'm seeing multiple grammatical errors throughout the article.
 * 3) *"While most clone troopers stationed on the listening post were rookies, inexperienced and younger troopers, CT-327 was given the task of guarding the base outside, while the rest of the stationed clones were inside the listening post." This jumps around from one subject to the next and reads rather confusingly.
 * 4) *"While most of the clones stationed at the station were rookies, or "shinies," inexperienced and younger troopers who were pressed into service due to the need of clones in the war, the clone troopers stationed at the Republic listening post had to watch for Confederare activity in the Outer Rim and warn the Republic fleet near Kamino of any attack." Once again, this jumps around and reads rather confusingly.
 * 5) *"As he removed his visor to check the nearby object that suddenly appeared..." What nearby object? The droid that had just popped up beside him? This series of events is confusing. Please clarify.
 * 6) *In the intro you say one of the droids shocked him, while in the bio you imply that multiple droids shocked him. Which is correct?
 * 7) *"Listening post" is repetitive in the first sentence of the P&T.
 * 8) *"After the commando droids left their boarding ships, the clone failed to destroy one of the commando droids that surprised attacked him." You make it sound as if he tried to attack them, which, IIRC, he didn't get the chance to do. Also, does this really belong in the P&T? And check your grammar, please
 * 9) * Jonjedigrandmaster ( Jedi Beacon ) 00:16, November 23, 2009 (UTC)

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Alexem

 * Nominated by: ~ SavageBob 21:33, November 22, 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Random Squib geezer.

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 * 1) Nice. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 09:12, November 25, 2009 (UTC)
 * 2)  CC7567  (talk) 21:25, November 26, 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) --Eyrezer 00:14, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

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 * 1) Attack of the Clone
 * 2) * "Alexem urged caution and sent warriors to escort the strangers to him": bit awkward and unclear wording here. It sounds as if you're trying to say that he sent warriors to bring the strangers back to him, but your wording implies otherwise, especially with "escort," as it implies that the strangers were already on their way to him and that the warriors were simply sent to lead them to their destination, which you don't clarify.
 * 3) * Please check your grammar and dash usage in "not for violence—yet", as I'm not sure what you're trying to say.
 * 4) *Please also watch your infobox formatting, particularly with Refs.  CC7567  (talk) 20:20, November 26, 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) **Thanks for the review! I have tried to clarify how and why the heroes visit the Squib village. It's more of an invitation/escort thing in the "best-case-scenario" of the adventure, so I've made that more explicit. As for the dashed "yet," it was supposed to mean that he would decide whether violence was warranted after speaking to them, but I've made that more explicit too. And sorry about the refs in the infobox; it's an older article from before I knew that trick, so I didn't think to check that I had done it. Does everything check out now? ~ SavageBob 21:17, November 26, 2009 (UTC)
 * 6) ***I've done some rewording based on your clarification. Please check it to see if it's acceptable. (Also, I mainly cited WP:DASH for the proper formatting of dashes, which I've now corrected.)  CC7567  (talk) 21:25, November 26, 2009 (UTC)
 * 7) ****Ah, gotcha. Again, legacy of this being one of my earlier articles. Thanks for the help! ~ SavageBob 21:44, November 26, 2009 (UTC)

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Gree Baaker

 * Nominated by: --Eyrezer 10:28, November 23, 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: A planet

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 * 1)  Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 13:24, November 23, 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) A vote. --Skippy Farlstendoiro 16:30, November 23, 2009 (UTC)
 * 3)  Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 02:36, November 24, 2009(UTC)
 * 4) -- Xd1358  Talk 15:02, November 26, 2009 (UTC)
 * 5)  CC7567  (talk) 20:22, November 26, 2009 (UTC)

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 * 1) An objection (by Skippy)
 * 2) * his mother tired to help him escape and create a new identify  All this sentence is confusing, but this part is specially so (Was she tired because he was too insistent? Or did she feel physically exhausted by doing this? What the heck did she created? Did she created it or only helped him to create it?). I strongly suggest you to revise it looking for possible important typos. Maybe you could reword the sentence if you feel it'd help (I feel that). --Skippy Farlstendoiro 10:36, November 23, 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) **Tired should have been tried. --Eyrezer 10:45, November 23, 2009 (UTC)

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Hyena-class bomber

 * Nominated by:-RC 1138 20:38, November 23, 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Another droid starfighter

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 * 1) The Grand Master
 * 2) *The intro needs to be expanded; it should summarize the article's contents, and right now there is quite a bit of information missing.
 * 3) *Please source the Proton bombs in the infobox.
 * 4) *Remember, everything in these areas that is linkable should be linked once in the intro, once in the infobox, and once in the bio. Make sure that you don't have missing or multiple links.
 * 5) *More to come. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 02:41, November 24, 2009 (UTC)
 * 6) Preliminaries for now
 * 7) *Please make sure you're confident that the article adheres to all of the nomination rules at the top of this page before even considering nominating it, particularly the Manual of Style, Layout Guide, and Sourcing policy. That last one means that Ref tags are only supposed to be used in the infobox and in templates, not the body of the article.
 * 8) *I would particularly recommend rewatching "Liberty on Ryloth" and keeping track of what facts you take from it and what you assume and speculate in the article. "Hyena bombers generally operated in Squads of four to maximize damage and protection" is in no way attributable to the episode.
 * 9) *Conjecturally-titled battles cannot be referred to as such. If they have no canonical name, you cannot make one up for them in other articles.
 * 10) *Your History in general needs to be written much better in terms of context and paragraph size. You cannot assume that the reader is familiar with The Clone Wars series in any way, and the current level of detail is rather inaccurate; you need to detail the situations more.
 * 11) *Bypassing overall writing, the combination of Jonjedigrandmaster's objections and those from me make up the very basics of the standards for an article to pass or even be considered for the GAN. I would recommend working as much as you can on this over the next few days.  CC7567  (talk) 05:14, November 24, 2009 (UTC)

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Karpette

 * Nominated by: Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 02:13, November 24, 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Quick n' easy Rodian female to go along with the quick n' easy Bothan female ;) . Another GAS trooper

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 * 1) Quick n' easy indeed. I'm developing a taste for them. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 09:16, November 25, 2009 (UTC)
 * 2)  CC7567  (talk) 20:25, November 26, 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) Just for the record, Jon, she was not easy or quick. I had to tie her down, and then gag her. ;)  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  00:06, November 29, 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) Would someone get this walking Karpette out of my way? :p Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 16:33, November 29, 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) Toprawa and Ralltiir 23:52, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

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Unidentified Duros lieutenant

 * Nominated by: Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 02:13, November 24, 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: The last GAS trooper! JujiggumProject:Galactic Alliance Security members is ovah! (For now, anyway)

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 * 1) At least 'til Backlash comes out.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 18:01, November 24, 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) Somehow, I just don't believe you. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 02:27, November 26, 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) *Haha I wouldn't either... But I do actually have to wait for Backlash; this really is the last known GAS trooper for now :P Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 02:30, November 26, 2009 (UTC)
 * 4)  Grunny  ( Talk ) 10:35, November 26, 2009 (UTC)
 * 5)  CC7567  (talk) 20:28, November 26, 2009 (UTC)
 * 6) Though I am sadden to hear that this will be the last GAS trooper for some time. :p Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 16:41, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

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 * 1) Soresu
 * 2) * Its a little unclear how the Solos and company capture the two Jedi, but apparently helped prevent their arrest as well. Please clarify. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 09:23, November 25, 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) **Addressed, thanks for the review. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 13:17, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

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R5-M2

 * Nominated by: Toprawa and Ralltiir 04:41, November 25, 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Echo Base droid. 360 (not counting intro) of the easiest words you've ever read!

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 * 1) Nice job, Toprawa. Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 14:05, November 25, 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) Nice and clean.  Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 21:13, November 25, 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) --Skippy Farlstendoiro 07:16, November 26, 2009 (UTC)
 * 4)  CC7567  (talk) 20:32, November 26, 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 04:58, November 27, 2009 (UTC)
 * 6) Jawaman No, I did NOT steal your droid! 14:16, November 28, 2009 (UTC)

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 * 1) Skippy, the Jedi Droid… I mean… Whatever
 * 2) * R5-M2 was "chirping melodically" and its owner Valdez was a known musician. Are those two facts related? Did Valdez program R5-M2 to chirp, or encourage this behavior? Or is this simply a coincidence?
 * 3) **If the information was related, don't you think I would have specified? :) There's nothing unusual about the sounds R5-M2 makes in the film and nothing to connect the information to Valdez. I hadn't even made the connection that you are here, but it seems to me that perhaps "melodically" is not the best word choice. I have changed it to "melodiously," which has a slightly different meaning. Toprawa and Ralltiir 18:10, November 25, 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) * R5-M2 seems to use the body of an R2 unit instead of the usual R5 frame. This should be mentioned, even if canon doesn't specify why it's modified. I think some source said that R5 units are easy to customize with this kind of ideas.
 * 5) **I don't really see the need for that to be mentioned, since all R5 units seem to have the same body as R2 units. There's nothing uniquely significant to R5-M2 here. Perhaps that should be mentioned on the R5-series page. Toprawa and Ralltiir 18:10, November 25, 2009 (UTC)
 * 6) *Beep. Skippy Farlstendoiro 09:03, November 25, 2009 (UTC)
 * 7) **Thank you for the review. Toprawa and Ralltiir 18:10, November 25, 2009 (UTC)
 * 8) Soresu
 * 9) * routine scouting mission of the base's exterior with Luke Skywalker in which Skywalker ultimately went missing after falling prey to an ambush. A little confusing, since it sounds like Luke was with Han personally, yet he was ambushed. In fact, this really doesn't need to be mentioned at all. Han returning from a scouting mission is all the context that is needed. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 03:25, November 26, 2009 (UTC)
 * 10) **It does actually need to be in there so the reader knows what the article is talking about. That specific scouting mission was rather notable for obvious reasons. And if that isn't explained in the article, then it could refer to any scouting mission Solo went on in general, and the whole point of what is being described is lost. Toprawa and Ralltiir 04:08, November 26, 2009 (UTC)
 * 11) *** The first part of the objection though, still stands. The beginning of the sentence makes it seem as if Luke returned with Solo together, before you go on to explain that Luke was ambushed. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 05:20, November 26, 2009 (UTC)
 * 12) ****I have tweaked the sentence to read "from conducting a routine scouting mission...with Luke Skywalker," thus avoiding any syntax confusion. Toprawa and Ralltiir 17:49, November 26, 2009 (UTC)

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Larrim

 * Nominated by: SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 08:54, November 25, 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Last notable KotOR NPC that appears solely in the South Apartments

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 * 1) "Wanna vote, Skippy?" "Well, of course not, don't be ridiculous, Cousin Larrim!" --Skippy Farlstendoiro 09:30, November 25, 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) Good job.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 18:34, November 25, 2009 (UTC)
 * 3)  CC7567  (talk) 20:37, November 26, 2009 (UTC)

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 * 1) Skippy found a possible typo
 * 2) * BtS: Therefore, it is undetermined whether Revan ever interacted with Kadir and, if so, (…) Do you mean with Larrim ? Skippy Farlstendoiro 09:03, November 25, 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) **Doh! The BTS was mostly a cut-and-paste, and I managed to miss that. Fixed. Thanks for the review Farl. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 09:26, November 25, 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) The Grand Master
 * 5) *Is it explicitly stated that his homeworld is Taris? If so, this should be specified in the bio; and if not, it should be removed from the infobox.
 * 6) **No it isn't stated. Removed.
 * 7) *"Therefore, it is undetermined whether Revan ever interacted with Larrim and, if so, the exact form that the conversation took." Please check your grammar here.
 * 8) **It reads fine to me. What in particular sounds incorrect?
 * 9) ***Due to the ordering, the last bit essentially reads: "it is undetermined the exact form that the conversation took."
 * 10) ****Addressed, hopefully. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 04:42, November 30, 2009 (UTC)
 * 11) *Nice work. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 15:13, November 28, 2009 (UTC)
 * 12) **Thanks for the review. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 02:10, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

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Retwin

 * Nominated by: Toprawa and Ralltiir 22:20, November 25, 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Executor ESB character. That cheeky fellow who turns to look at Vader at the end of the film.

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 * 1) Could we have a picture of Retwin turning to gaze Vader? (Suggestion, not objection) --Skippy Farlstendoiro 08:06, November 26, 2009 (UTC)
 * 2)  Grunny  ( Talk ) 10:15, November 26, 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 10:36, November 26, 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 16:16, November 26, 2009 (UTC)
 * 5)  CC7567  (talk) 20:42, November 26, 2009 (UTC)

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 * 1) One minor objection: In the intro, the "after" and "following" in the same sentence make the chronology confusing: "After serving in Ralltiir's defense forces as an Imperial sympathizer, Retwin joined the Empire following the Imperial subjugation of his homeworld shortly prior to the Battle of Yavin in 0 BBY." Other than that, great work. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 14:03, November 26, 2009 (UTC)

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Mikka Reekeene

 * Nominated by: Skippy Farlstendoiro 14:31, November 26, 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Bearded guy in background of obscure webcomic. Like everyone else in Star Wars, he has a detailed history.

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 * 1) Before I take a detailed look, you need to make your paragraphs larger in size. ATM, your average para length is 2 sentences, making the article seem like a list of trivia items or something. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 07:56, November 30, 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) *Done for Mikka; tried for the others but it's not easy to increase the avg over 2.3 sentences/paragraph with the existing information. --Skippy Farlstendoiro 09:17, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

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Tura Raftican

 * Nominated by: Skippy Farlstendoiro 14:31, November 26, 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Other girls from '' Rebellion couldn't reach 250 words.

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Thar'quan

 * Nominated by: Skippy Farlstendoiro 14:31, November 26, 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Gimme some air ← and this is the reason why I'm nominating this. Serious.

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 * 1) Soresu
 * 2) *I have noticed that in a number of previous noms and also some of your current ones, the intro has not been sufficiently long. Please make it bigger. Check your other noms for the same problem. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 07:55, November 30, 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) **Try now. --Skippy Farlstendoiro 09:17, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

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Tarr Seirr

 * Nominated by: Kreivi Wolter 16:14, November 28, 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Lets try this out.

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 * 1) The Grand Master
 * 2) *Please check your grammar throughout the article.
 * 3) *Missing P&a section.
 * 4) **Yeah, actually I tried to write that, but it was awfully short. There really isn't much fact to put on that.--Kreivi Wolter 20:30, November 28, 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) ***The section is required by the LG. If there's anything that can be put there, it should be there. His Force-sensitvity and any particular Force Powers that he exhibited, the fact that he was skilled enough to became a Knight, his skill with a lightsaber, and any other skills he may have possessed can and should be mentioned here. Even if the secion is very small, it is required.
 * 6) ****Good now?--Kreivi Wolter 21:58, November 28, 2009 (UTC)
 * 7) *More to come. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 19:01, November 28, 2009 (UTC)

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 * If someone knows the source that identifes him as general, then please tell me.Kreivi Wolter 20:30, November 28, 2009 (UTC)
 * And if someone knows which source first identifies him as Tarr Seirr, please tell that one too. Im not sure is it his Databank entry. Kreivi Wolter 13:11, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

Bodo Baas's Master

 * Nominated by: Darth Morrt 08:33, November 29, 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: This is my first try. Tell me if my English is too weird and I will stay at regular editing.

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 * 1) The Grand Master, round one
 * 2) *Right now, there is simply too much information in the article that is irrelevant to Bodo Baas' master himself/herself. For example, the beginning of the biography is basically a history lesson that is completely unneeded for this article: "By 1000 BBY the New Sith Wars, thousand years of conflict between the Jedi and the Sith, which lasted from approximately 2,000 to 1,000 BBY, was over. The Ruusan Reformation reconstructed the government of the Galactic Republic taking power from the Supreme Chancellor to the Galactic Senate. Simultaneously, the Republic and the Jedi Order disbanded their armies and navies. The Order centralized the Jedi training on Coruscant and allowed only one Padawan per Master. Years of reconstuction began after the Dark Age."
 * 3) *Also, please work on your grammar. It is a requirement for GANs per the first part of rule number 1: an article must be well-written.
 * 4) * Jonjedigrandmaster ( Jedi Beacon ) 14:34, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

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Lyunesi

 * Nominated by: --Eyrezer 09:28, November 29, 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: A species hunted by Boba Fett. Thanks to Borsk and Cav for supplying some sources.

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Ragoons

 * Nominated by: --Eyrezer 11:47, November 29, 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: I thought I'd try a Jedi Apprentice/Jedi Quest species.

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Hrym Mawarr

 * Nominated by: Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 14:59, November 29, 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: The last of the special-missions force bounty hunters. No available quotes directly related to him, though

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Fw'Sen

 * Nominated by: --Eyrezer 06:56, November 30, 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: This one a non-sentient species of ~260 words.

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Zinn Toa

 * Nominated by: Darth Trayus  Sith_Emblem.svg ( Trayus Academy ) 08:59, November 30, 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Hey baby.

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 * I'm working on getting some body images - as for the infobox, that's the best you're going to get. Darth Trayus  Sith_Emblem.svg ( Trayus Academy ) 09:00, November 30, 2009 (UTC)