Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations

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What is a "comprehensive article?"

A "comprehensive article" is an article that contains all information regarding the topic. Often, "comprehensive articles" cannot reach Featured or Good Article status due to their limited content. This process is intended to recognize articles that contain all relevant canon information, yet are still under the 250 word limit required for a Good Article. The purpose of this is twofold&mdash;firstly, to help users distinguish what is a stub, and what is merely a short article with no further relevant material to be added, and, more importantly, to highlight for the reader when they are reading something that has been judged definitely "comprehensive"&mdash;that is, a guarantee to the reader that whatever they are reading contains the sum total of all available content on that topic.

Nominations and promotions of the Comprehensive article process are overseen by a collective of users known as the "EduCorps," which is made up of the Inquisitorius, the AgriCorps, and various other experienced users who are considered qualified to adequately judge the nominated material.

Lucasfilm Ltd. and its many licensees continue to expand the Star Wars universe. Since new information might become available, it may be necessary to revoke a "comprehensive article's" status. A forum will be used to nominate articles that have fallen out-of-date. Members of the EduCorps will then post a warning template on that page, and a grace period of one week will be instituted in which the article can be improved. If there is a significant amount of new information, it is likely that once updated, the article will become eligible for Good article status, and thereby ineligible for Comprehensive article status.

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An article must&hellip;


 * 1) &hellip;be well-written and detailed.
 * 2) &hellip;be unbiased, non-point of view.
 * 3) &hellip;be sourced with all available sources and appearances.
 * 4) &hellip;follow the Manual of Style, Layout Guide, and all other policies on Wookieepedia. This is, of course, within reason. If a topic only has a very limited degree of content that cannot be divided up into the relevant article sections, it is not required that it follow the Layout Guide precisely. This is to be judged on a case-by-case basis.
 * 5) &hellip;following the review process, be stable, i.e., does not change significantly from day to day and is not the subject of ongoing edit wars. This does not apply to vandalism and protection or semi-protection as a result of vandalism.
 * 6) &hellip;not be tagged with any sort of improvement tags (i.e. more sources, expand, etc).
 * 7) &hellip;have no redlinks.
 * 8) &hellip;have all relevant canon information presented.
 * 9) &hellip;be completely referenced for all available material and sources. See Sourcing for more information.
 * 10) &hellip;have all quotes and images sourced.
 * 11) &hellip;provide at least one relevant quote on the article if available.
 * 12) &hellip;include a "Behind the scenes" section for in-universe articles.
 * 13) &hellip;counting the introduction, the article body, and "Behind the scenes" material, must not exceed 250 words in length (not including captions, quotes, or headers, etc). Any articles exceeding the limit should be taken to the Good article nominations page for consideration.
 * 14) &hellip;if the nominated article reaches 200 words or greater, the nominator must either provide an intro or draft an intro and provide a link to the revision in the nomination, showing that the intro does not elevate the article over 250 words. Exceptions can be made for articles wherein the majority of the text is in the "Behind the scenes" section.
 * 15) &hellip;if an article approaches the 250-word length for Good article nominations, it should not deliberately shortened in order to avoid meeting that word limit.

How to nominate:


 * 1) First, nominate an article you find is worthy of comprehensive status, putting it at the bottom of the list below. Nominated articles must meet all fifteen requirements stated above.
 * 2) Add CAnom at the top of the article you are nominating.
 * 3) Be sure to place your signature in the "Nominated by" line when the nomination is posted for voting.
 * 4) Others will object to the nomination if they disagree that the article is good enough; they will then supply reasons for doing so, and ways to improve the article in accordance with the established rules.
 * 5) Nominators and supporters will adjust the article until the objectors (with reasonable objections) are satisfied. Objectors may also make alterations&mdash;if there is any reason for contention on a given point, it should be settled in a civil manner in the nomination field itself.
 * 6) Users may not vote on their own articles.
 * 7) There is no limit to the amount of nominations a given user can submit at any given time.

How to vote:


 * 1) Before doing anything, be sure to read the article completely, keeping a sharp eye out for mistakes.
 * 2) Afterward, compare the article to the criteria listed above, and then either support or object the article's nomination.
 * 3) *If you object, please supply concrete reasons for doing so, and how it can be improved.
 * 4) As stated above, any objections will be looked upon by the nominator, supporters, and anyone willing to improve the article, and action will be taken to please the objectors. Do not strike other users' objections; it is up to the objector to review the changes and strike if they are satisfied.
 * 5) There are several ways in which an article can receive the required number of votes. Within a 48-hour period of nomination, only EduCorps votes will count towards the total, although anyone may choose to vote in that window. If four members of the EduCorps support a nomination in that window [0 to 48 hours post-nomination], and there are no outstanding objections, the article can be considered a "Comprehensive article" and be tagged with the template 48 hours after the initial nomination. The talk page will also be tagged with the  template. When the 48 hours are up, any user's votes will contribute towards the total. If two EduCorps member has voted for an article after a week, three regular votes will be required. After a week, an article can also pass with just three EduCorps votes.
 * 6) Once a nomination is successful, it will be placed on the Comprehensive article list. Instructions on how to archive nominations, successful or otherwise, can be found here. Anyone can archive a nomination&mdash;just make sure it has the correct number of votes, has been nominated for at least a week (or 48 hours if there are four EC votes), and that there are absolutely no outstanding objections. If you are not sure how to do this, just ask, and someone will likely be more than willing to help you. Also, if you think you can slip one past us, think again&mdash;someone is always watching you.

All nominations will be considered idle and are subject to instantaneous removal by EduCorps members if objections are not addressed, or at least not answered, after a period of 1 week.

Please remember to archive your nomination beforehand if you plan on taking it to the Good Article Nominations page.

Alderaanian tourist board Holoplay #2735

 * Nominated by: LelalMekha (talk) 10:24, December 28, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

(1 ECs/2 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:31, January 3, 2014 (UTC)
 * 2) If Emperor's satisfied. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 01:27, January 22, 2014 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Ayrehead
 * 2) * "and she watched it many times before she could mourn her loss completely" sounds a bit odd, could you rephrase to something like and watched in many times whilst she mourned the loss of her homeworld.
 * 3) **Fixed. --LelalMekha (talk) 10:36, January 3, 2014 (UTC)
 * 4) * I think it should be the holoplay not that holoplay at the start of the second sentence, I would change it myself but I'm not 100% sure. Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:27, December 30, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) **Changed. --LelalMekha (talk) 10:36, January 3, 2014 (UTC)


 * SE
 * 1) * Can you add in a release date in the bts? Supreme Emperor (talk) 04:00, January 6, 2014 (UTC)
 * 2) **Done. --LelalMekha (talk) 10:17, January 6, 2014 (UTC)
 * 3) *Can you give more detail about the regions it advertises? The panel gives a few more details. Supreme Emperor (talk) 13:43, January 6, 2014 (UTC)
 * 4) **More detail added. But I wouldn't add more than that, because it would ultimately lead to repeating everything that is on the panel. --LelalMekha (talk) 14:19, January 8, 2014 (UTC)
 * 5) ***I still feel like some more detail could be given, based on what the panel says. Supreme Emperor (talk) 04:38, January 13, 2014 (UTC)
 * 6) ****Still not good? --LelalMekha (talk) 01:08, January 22, 2014 (UTC)

Comments
 * As far as I'm aware, # is an invalid sign to use in titles, show it shouldn't be included in a .  Cade  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg  Calrayn  06:24, January 3, 2014 (UTC)
 * If it's not allowed, then I'll change it, but the # sign was explicitely used in the comic, so what should I do? --LelalMekha (talk) 10:36, January 3, 2014 (UTC)
 * You can use it in the article body, just don't use it in the Title, I believe... Cade  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg  Calrayn  19:20, January 6, 2014 (UTC)
 * Okay, then. Fixed. --LelalMekha (talk) 14:19, January 8, 2014 (UTC)

Gondar

 * Nominated by: Trip391 (talk) 06:43, January 5, 2014 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Novels and Barn-Burner

(5 ECs/0 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Corellian Premier Jedi symbol.svg Force will be with you always 23:16, January 7, 2014 (UTC)
 * 2)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 22:36, January 8, 2014 (UTC)
 * 3) ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 12:49, January 9, 2014 (UTC)
 * 4) Supreme Emperor (talk) 04:38, January 16, 2014 (UTC)
 * 5)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  05:06, January 23, 2014 (UTC)

Object
 * SE
 * 1) * Needs a NOTOC
 * 2) **Done
 * 3) * Also, the article is short enough to not need an intro. Supreme Emperor (talk) 04:40, January 6, 2014 (UTC)
 * 4) **Done Trip391 (talk) 04:50, January 6, 2014 (UTC)
 * 5) 501st
 * 6) * Echoing SE's objection, the history section and the section above should be combined into one, with no header. Right now it looks like the top one, which I assume is the biology and appearance one, is the intro, which is not the case. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 19:12, January 6, 2014 (UTC)
 * 7) **Done
 * 8) * A BtS note mentioning how Gondars received an entry in TCSWE might be warranted as well. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 00:12, January 7, 2014 (UTC)
 * 9) **Forgot I did this yesterday Trip391 (talk) 06:02, January 8, 2014 (UTC)
 * 10) Savaged&hellip;
 * 11) * Rather than "poor-tasting coffee was compared to the sweat of a gondar," can you say who compared coffee to their sweat and when? In other words, I think Triv Pothman should be mentioned in the body as the one who made this comparison, and we should get a date for when it happened.
 * 12) **Done
 * 13) * I suspect the "appearances" list should be beefed up quite a bit. Any time Lando appears in that armor, we need a notation of it with "tusks only" off to the side. Take a look at User:SavageBob/Adaptations for some ideas of where to look. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 13:56, January 8, 2014 (UTC)
 * 14) **I looked through our category of images of Lando and added the sources obvious from there. I'd say be sure to check all visual adaptations of ROTJ (the comics, storybooks, etc.), and be sure to check things like Official Poster Monthly. There will likely be tons of appearances due to this being a movie critter (albeit only its tusks), so I'm happy to strike this objection if you check through the obvious visual tie-ins to ROTJ; people will continue to add new ones as time goes on. :) ~ Savage BOB sig.png 14:03, January 8, 2014 (UTC)
 * 15) **Got it. I'll get to trying to find them Trip391 (talk) 23:18, January 8, 2014 (UTC)
 * 16) ***Added the appearances I've been able to find
 * 17) * One other note I noticed in The Art of Return of the Jedi (p. 46): the Tamtel Skreej costume was designed by Nilo Rodis-Jamero and Aggie Guerard Rodgers, which means the tusks were their idea. This is probably BTS-worthy.
 * 18) **I don't have that source myself, but added what you said to the Bts, if you could double check that for me
 * 19) * And it's probably worth adding an image of the helmet somewhere with a caption saying it was the critter's tusks. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 23:54, January 8, 2014 (UTC)
 * 20) **Added Trip391 (talk) 00:47, January 9, 2014 (UTC)
 * 21) Exiled Jedi
 * 22) * Please use CSWECite for reference 5. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  04:40, January 18, 2014 (UTC)
 * 23) ** Done
 * 24) * I am also curious how the tusks are featured in Star Wars Galaxies, which I noticed was not mentioned anywhere in the article. My Galaxies knowledge is a little rusty, but it seems to me that if someone besides Lando wore a Gondar tusk mask or if they were featured in some other way, then it should be mentioned. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  04:47, January 18, 2014 (UTC)
 * 25) ** Done
 * 26) ***Just FYI: I added Galaxies, I believe, and the tusks are pictured because an image of Lando and the Max Rebo band is pictured: 30th Anniversary Bash. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 16:33, January 18, 2014 (UTC)
 * 27) ****Added a bit about that to the bts. Trip391 (talk) 07:18, January 19, 2014 (UTC)
 * 28) * The articles for the three Tales comics in the Non-canon section do not mention that they are non-canon. You should probably make sure that these are in the right place. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  05:23, January 18, 2014 (UTC)
 * 29) ** Done Trip391 (talk) 05:44, January 18, 2014 (UTC)

Comments
 * 1) Isn't "1stm" not needed if it first appeared in the film? Corellian Premier Jedi symbol.svg Force will be with you always 16:56, January 6, 2014 (UTC)
 * 2) *I figured it was like that before because only the tusks appeared in ROTJ, and it wasn't mentioned as a Gondar until Children of the Jedi, but I changed it to Mo. Trip391 (talk) 21:09, January 6, 2014 (UTC)
 * 3) Not an objection, but the image of Lando might go well in the infobox since the article's so small. You'd just have to force a caption, as was done with this article. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 12:49, January 9, 2014 (UTC)

Unidentified Dac sea monster

 * Nominated by: Cade  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg  Calrayn  15:17, January 7, 2014 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: The Codex Project Stage 3: Crewskills begins early.

(5 ECs/0 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1) Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:42, January 8, 2014 (UTC)
 * 2)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  00:45, January 11, 2014 (UTC)
 * 3)  Corellian Premier Jedi symbol.svg Force will be with you always 02:27, January 23, 2014 (UTC)
 * 4) ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 14:37, January 25, 2014 (UTC)
 * 5) Supreme Emperor (talk) 20:37, January 25, 2014 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Ayrehead
 * 2) * This sounds more like it should be an individual creature article not a species unless it talks about multiple dead monsters. Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:59, January 7, 2014 (UTC)
 * 3) **Fixed. Cade  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg  Calrayn  18:49, January 7, 2014 (UTC)
 * 4) *** I'm not sure it should be in the species of Dac or extinct species categories now. Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:02, January 8, 2014 (UTC)
 * 5) ****Well, the text implies that it's a unique or previously-unknown specimen, so I think that the Species of Dac category is at least valid. I've removed the extinct one though. Cade  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg  Calrayn  15:14, January 8, 2014 (UTC)


 * SE
 * 1) * You say biological samples were taken from the corpse, can anything be said about who took the samples?
 * 2) **Nein. Either faction.
 * 3) * Can you add a release date for TOR? Supreme Emperor (talk) 05:17, January 17, 2014 (UTC)
 * 4) **Meh. Done. Cade  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg  Calrayn  23:50, January 22, 2014 (UTC)

Comments

Gohai

 * Nominated by: Manoof (talk) 08:24, January 8, 2014 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: 1st nom

(4 ECs/0 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1) Good job and well done for sticking with it! Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:09, January 14, 2014 (UTC)
 * 2)  Corellian Premier Jedi symbol.svg Force will be with you always 21:22, January 14, 2014 (UTC)
 * 3) Great to see you on the nom page. Supreme Emperor (talk) 05:25, January 17, 2014 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Ayrehead
 * 2) *Hi and welcome to the comprehensive nominations page! It's always great to see users starting to get articles to status. There's a few things you've not included in the article that are required for a status article which I'll run through below, but you may also want to read the manual of style and the layout guide for help with future articles. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:55, January 8, 2014 (UTC)
 * 3) **Thanks, i thought i had the hang of it but i guess not yet :P Manoof (talk) 10:52, January 9, 2014 (UTC)
 * 4) ***No worries it takes everyone time to learn the ropes. Ayrehead02 (talk) 23:17, January 9, 2014 (UTC)
 * 5) * The article needs a behind the scenes section stating what source it appeared in including date and author. This applies to your other two articles as well. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:55, January 8, 2014 (UTC)
 * 6) **Done for gohai, will work on the others immediately when I can.Manoof (talk) 10:52, January 9, 2014 (UTC)
 * 7) *** Could you include the author as well? Ayrehead02 (talk) 23:17, January 9, 2014 (UTC)
 * 8) ****Fixed Manoof (talk) 07:58, January 11, 2014 (UTC)
 * 9) * There's quite a lot more information you can add based on the creatures appearance in the image, e.g it has four limbs, a tail, two ears, black skin, a mouth with teeth and eyes. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:55, January 8, 2014 (UTC)
 * 10) **Added the only definite known thing to infobox and the rest to body. Is sharp teeth enough to assume it is carnivorous? Also image is sepia so would black skin be accurate? Manoof (talk) 10:52, January 9, 2014 (UTC)
 * 11) *** No avoid assumption as much as possible. Also if it's sepia then yeah I'd leave the color out. Ayrehead02 (talk) 23:17, January 9, 2014 (UTC)
 * 12) ****Fixed. Manoof (talk) 07:58, January 11, 2014 (UTC)
 * 13) * You need to add that it's a non-sentient species to the body and also add the article to the category non-sentient creatures. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:55, January 8, 2014 (UTC)
 * 14) **Done Manoof (talk) 10:52, January 9, 2014 (UTC)
 * 15) * Is there a quote you could add? If the bounty hunter book is anything like the Jedi and Sith ones then it has little scribbled notes which you can quote. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:55, January 8, 2014 (UTC)
 * 16) **Done. Attributed to the author of that chapter as it was in-text. Manoof (talk) 10:52, January 9, 2014 (UTC)
 * 17) *** In that case could you add into the text something like "bounty hunter Ro-San Borokki wrote about Gohai in her section of the Bounty hunters code" although using the chapter name. Ayrehead02 (talk) 23:17, January 9, 2014 (UTC)
 * 18) ****Fixed. Manoof (talk) 07:58, January 11, 2014 (UTC)
 * 19) ***** Could you add the info about the bounty hunters code into the body as well please. Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:07, January 11, 2014 (UTC)
 * 20) ******Fixed Manoof (talk) 22:41, January 11, 2014 (UTC)
 * 21) * Context is needed on Nexu and Gundark . Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:55, January 8, 2014 (UTC)
 * 22) **The only context is it's about the same size. text reads "If it's about your size: think gundark, nexu, or gohai. Manoof (talk) 10:52, January 9, 2014 (UTC)
 * 23) *** Context as in what they are, something like "comparable in size to a Gundark or Nexu, two large predatory species. Ayrehead02 (talk) 23:17, January 9, 2014 (UTC)
 * 24) ****Fixed. Manoof (talk) 07:58, January 11, 2014 (UTC)
 * 25) * The second sentence doesn't quite read right, I think "If they charged at a being, it was recommended the target dropped to the ground" would be clearer. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:55, January 8, 2014 (UTC)
 * 26) **Fixed. Manoof (talk) 10:52, January 9, 2014 (UTC)
 * 27) * The Bounty Hunters Code should be in a sources section not an appearances section as it is a sourcebook not a novel. It also needs a first mentioned tag next to the source. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:55, January 8, 2014 (UTC)
 * 28) **Fixed. Does it need a 1st pictured tag as well? Manoof (talk) 10:52, January 9, 2014 (UTC)
 * 29) *** First mentioned is different to first appearance you use the template 1stm instead of 1st. First mentioned includes pictured if it's the same source. Ayrehead02 (talk) 23:17, January 9, 2014 (UTC)
 * 30) ****Fixed Manoof (talk) 07:58, January 11, 2014 (UTC)
 * 31) * The information in the infobox also needs to be referenced like the body has been. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:55, January 8, 2014 (UTC)
 * 32) **Fixed. Manoof (talk) 10:52, January 9, 2014 (UTC)
 * 33) Exiled Jedi
 * 34) *"If they charged at a being, it was recommended the target drop to the ground." Is it known who recommended this?
 * 35) **I don't think so, we know the IU chapter author but like a real world book images and their captions would be added by the editor, which might be cradossk... Manoof (talk) 10:21, January 16, 2014 (UTC)
 * 36) ***You could say that the handbook recommended it.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:44, January 17, 2014 (UTC)
 * 37) ****Done Manoof (talk) 08:27, January 18, 2014 (UTC)
 * 38) * Could you mention the artist who created the image in the Behind the scenes section? -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  04:53, January 16, 2014 (UTC)
 * 39) **The artist isn't known, the book lists 10 illustrators, but doesn't specify which artist did which artwork. Manoof (talk) 10:21, January 16, 2014 (UTC)
 * 40) 501st
 * 41) *Mentioning that Gohai had a body would be nice.
 * 42) **Fixed. Manoof (talk) 08:27, January 18, 2014 (UTC)
 * 43) *Infobox needs to be expanded. You can mention body features in the distinction section, or noteworthy qualities. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 23:45, January 17, 2014 (UTC)
 * 44) **Hows that? Manoof (talk) 08:27, January 18, 2014 (UTC)


 * 1) Savaged
 * 2) *The attribution of the opening quote is a bit long. Can it be pared down? I think you could say, "Bounty hunter Ro-San Borokki on gohai" and then discuss the fact that Borokki discussed them in "The Hunt" to the main body of the article.
 * 3) *The fact Borokki mentions in the opening quote should also be mentioned in the main body of the article.
 * 4) *There's a lot more to add about its physical appearance and anatomy. It has a well-muscled body, a broad maw with jaws that can open quite widely, a distinctly triangular-shaped pair of mandibles with their narrowest point jutting toward the creature's anterior, digitigrade limbs, a long and thick tail, a robust torso that comes to a peak between the shoulder blades, and a narrow waist. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 14:32, January 25, 2014 (UTC)

Comments

BAX-7 landspeeder

 * Nominated by: Manoof (talk) 08:35, January 8, 2014 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: 2nd nom

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support Object
 * 1) Supreme Emperor (talk) 23:10, January 18, 2014 (UTC)
 * 2) <- Omicron (Leave a message at the BEEP! ) 23:22, January 18, 2014 (UTC)
 * SE
 * 1) * Can we get some context on MandalMotors?
 * 2) **Fixed Manoof (talk) 08:30, January 18, 2014 (UTC)
 * 3) * Can you reword the last sentence a bit? Maybe something like "It required a crew of one, and could transport three passengers at a time." Supreme Emperor (talk) 05:28, January 17, 2014 (UTC)
 * 4) **Fixed Manoof (talk) 08:30, January 18, 2014 (UTC)
 * 5) Ayrehead
 * 6) *Could we have a little more information based on the picture? Stuff like color, windscreen etc. Ayrehead02 (talk) 20:19, January 21, 2014 (UTC)

Comments
 * Fixed as per comments above. Will upload an image when i can. Manoof (talk) 08:42, January 11, 2014 (UTC)
 * Image added Manoof (talk) 02:04, January 14, 2014 (UTC)

Jet-wing

 * Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:10, January 8, 2014 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: A brief break from creatures

(1 ECs/0 Users/1 Total)
Support
 * 1)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 14:59, January 11, 2014 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) 501st
 * 2) * "...jet-wings to avoid the sensors of the Separatist lead craft and breach its shields..." Could you elaborate a bit on what it is the lead of? 501st  dogma ( talk ) 22:41, January 8, 2014 (UTC)
 * 3) **Changed Ayrehead02 (talk) 00:00, January 9, 2014 (UTC)
 * 4) ***The sentence is run-on now. Break it up. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 22:33, January 9, 2014 (UTC)
 * 5) ****Done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:43, January 11, 2014 (UTC)


 * SE
 * 1) *After they breached the shields, how were they destroyed? Supreme Emperor (talk) 05:17, January 21, 2014 (UTC)
 * 2) **It isn't really clear, they just kind of explode after the Jedi get out and move away. Ayrehead02 (talk) 20:22, January 21, 2014 (UTC)

Comments
 * The article currently has a ground vehicle infobox which doesn't suit it, but I have no idea what to change it to. It isn't an aquatic, ground or repulsor lift vehicle and isn't a starship which are all of the vehicle infoboxes I can find. Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:12, January 8, 2014 (UTC)

Gall starfighter

 * Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:14, January 8, 2014 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Last inside job CA nom

(2 ECs/0 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  04:57, January 16, 2014 (UTC)
 * 2)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 20:48, January 25, 2014 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * Is there an article or enough information to create an article for the Separatists' lead craft?
 * 3) **Already made one just forgot to link it. Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:40, January 11, 2014 (UTC)
 * 4) * Context on Variable Geometry Self-Propelled Battle Droid, Mark I should probably be added. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  00:23, January 11, 2014 (UTC)
 * 5) **Added. Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:40, January 11, 2014 (UTC)
 * SE
 * 1) *The fourth sentence seems a bit run on to me, mind splitting or rewording? Supreme Emperor (talk) 05:53, January 21, 2014 (UTC)
 * 2) **Fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 20:24, January 21, 2014 (UTC)
 * 501
 * 1) * The armament section of the infobox needs to be filled in. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 01:13, January 22, 2014 (UTC)
 * 2) **Fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:49, January 25, 2014 (UTC)

Comments

Gampassa

 * Nominated by: Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 17:08, January 19, 2014 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: For the Barn-burner. Also my first not confirmed as canon article nom

(2 ECs/0 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) Supreme Emperor (talk) 20:09, January 21, 2014 (UTC)
 * 2) Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:47, January 25, 2014 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Ayrehead
 * 2) * Needs NOTOC. Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:39, January 20, 2014 (UTC)
 * 3) **Done.
 * 4) * Kill the redirect in the Bts. Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:39, January 20, 2014 (UTC)
 * 5) **Why does Wikia even autorecognize redirects? This seems to only serve to confuse users. :/
 * 6) * Could mention some of the other characteristics shown in the picture, its eyes, tail and mouth etc. Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:39, January 20, 2014 (UTC)
 * 7) **Expanded.
 * 8) * Is canceled the right tag? I think it should be cut content. Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:39, January 20, 2014 (UTC)
 * 9) **Changed.
 * 10) * It needs a 1stm or 1st somewhere. I'd assume on the season source. Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:39, January 20, 2014 (UTC)
 * 11) **And done. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 17:24, January 20, 2014 (UTC)

~ Savage  14:47, January 25, 2014 (UTC)
 * 1) Savaged
 * 2) *"used the Gampassa species' shield shell as a location" -- I'm unclear what this means. Do you mean that they use the shells of Gampassas to found cities? The singulars here make it confusing: "the Gampassa" and "a location." If there is only one city, this needs to be clarified. Also, are these Gampassas alive or dead?
 * 3) **The shells form an island, which I thought would have been explained clearly enough. Fixed that. And it seems quite akin to the real life myths such as the one mentioned in the blog entry where the turtle islands are alive, though the sources don't exactly say alive.
 * 4) *Is Gampassa capitalized in the original sources? Seems odd if it is.
 * 5) **The Blog capitalizes its one usage of the word.
 * 6) *Again, in BTS, "The Gampassa was intended to appear…" Is there only one Gampassa, or is this a species?
 * 7) **Species, fixed.
 * 8) *I noticed in your edit history, you changed all plurals to "Gampassa" since no plural is ever specified. Since the Wook is in English, it would make more sense to just pluralize per standard English conventions, i.e., Gampassas. Either way, it's probably worth noting in BTS that no plural has been specified in the sources.
 * 9) **Done.
 * 10) *You can give quite a bit more detail on its appearance and anatomy: a rounded and oblong body, a short and stubby tail that comes to a point at the back, the two forelimbs are much longer than the four other limbs, all the limbs are flipper-like and shaped like triangles with the point facing downward, wrinkled skin, gray skin with a brown shell. It's also notable in the drawing that they at least sometimes swim at the surface of the water such that their shell sticks out of the water like an island.
 * 1) **Done. As for the shell sticking out the surface on the island, I think it would be obvious that its entire time was spent that way given the Nautolans living on the shell. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 15:49, January 25, 2014 (UTC)

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Sez

 * Nominated by:  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  05:47, January 20, 2014 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: For the barn-burner

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 * 1) It's baby names all over again.  Corellian Premier Jedi symbol.svg Force will be with you always 14:41, January 20, 2014 (UTC)
 * 2) Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:34, January 20, 2014 (UTC)
 * 3) Another solid nom by EJ. Supreme Emperor (talk) 20:13, January 21, 2014 (UTC)
 * 4)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 01:15, January 22, 2014 (UTC)
 * 5) Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 01:20, January 22, 2014 (UTC)
 * 6) ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 14:49, January 25, 2014 (UTC)

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Giant squid

 * Nominated by: Corellian Premier Jedi symbol.svg Force will be with you always 19:42, January 20, 2014 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: I highly encourage you to check out Paul David's interview in the Scum & Villainy podcast.

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 * 1)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 23:45, January 24, 2014 (UTC)

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 * 1) 501st
 * 2) * I think you could describe the creature a bit more, definitely given that you have a picture. Mention of the main body of the squid would be nice.
 * 3) **Added a bit about the head. Corellian Premier Jedi symbol.svg Force will be with you always 02:20, January 22, 2014 (UTC)
 * 4) * Context on Mon Cala?
 * 5) **Right, contextified. Corellian Premier Jedi symbol.svg Force will be with you always 02:20, January 22, 2014 (UTC)
 * 6) * It should be mentioned in the BtS that its sentience is undefined.
 * 7) **Sure thing. Corellian Premier Jedi symbol.svg Force will be with you always 02:20, January 22, 2014 (UTC)
 * 8) * A link to Cephalopoid would be nice, since you have it as a category. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 01:20, January 22, 2014 (UTC)
 * 9) **It already exists :) Thanks for looking it over. Corellian Premier Jedi symbol.svg Force will be with you always 02:20, January 22, 2014 (UTC)
 * 10) Savaged&hellip;
 * 11) *Context on Cap'n Dunwell.
 * 12) **Sure, contextified. Corellian Premier Jedi symbol.svg Force will be with you always 01:25, January 26, 2014 (UTC)
 * 13) *You can give a bit more detail on its anatomy: its head is not entirely conical, as it has an arrow-shaped pair of fins at the end of its mantle; the mantle itself is spotted; and its tentacles flare out into sagittiform tips. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 14:59, January 25, 2014 (UTC)
 * 14) **Uhm, added. Corellian Premier Jedi symbol.svg Force will be with you always 01:25, January 26, 2014 (UTC)

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 * 1) Not a Project Video Games nom for once; it's for the ze Barn-Burner. Corellian Premier Jedi symbol.svg Force will be with you always 19:42, January 20, 2014 (UTC)

Admiral (soldier)

 * Nominated by: Clonehunter(Report your W.M.D.) 18:04, January 21, 2014 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: More DF2 MP characters. I recently learned of Gamecameo, and used it here. I'm wondering if I should add it to the others, and if it even belongs here.

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 * I have treated Cabbel's multiplayer-only appearance in Star Wars: Jedi Knight II: Jedi Outcast as non-canon, given the fact he does not appear in a storyline event. That was what an objection I got when I nominated Cabbel for GAN, so I would believe the same needs to be done with this character. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 01:14, January 22, 2014 (UTC)
 * Perhaps, but the thing with Admiral is that he was created as a MP avatar, as opposed to Cabbel's likeness being used for the Imperial Officer in JO. I'd also wonder about how that would affect the Ambig tag as well as Rugar's, Santiago's, Veamon's, Krugon's, and One-Eye's pages. --Clonehunter(Report your W.M.D.) 15:24, January 22, 2014 (UTC)

Tularan Skyway

 * Nominated by: Cade  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg  Calrayn  23:49, January 22, 2014 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Prepare yourselves, children! The Codex Project is coming!

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 * 1) I am an EC. This threshold is mine. I claim it for my own. Bring on your noms, one at a time or all in a rush. I don't give a damn. All shall pass.  Corellian Premier Jedi symbol.svg Force will be with you always 02:31, January 23, 2014 (UTC)
 * 2)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  03:53, January 23, 2014 (UTC)
 * 3) Ayrehead02 (talk) 20:27, January 24, 2014 (UTC)

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Unidentified platoon

 * Nominated by: Cade  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg  Calrayn  23:49, January 22, 2014 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: The Codex Project. A grimacing Ewok meme might be appropriate here....

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 * 1)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  04:00, January 23, 2014 (UTC)
 * 2)  Corellian Premier Jedi symbol.svg Force will be with you always 14:25, January 24, 2014 (UTC)
 * 3) Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:30, January 24, 2014 (UTC)

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Besberra arena

 * Nominated by: Cade  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg  Calrayn  23:49, January 22, 2014 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: The Codex Project

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 * 1)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  04:05, January 23, 2014 (UTC)
 * 2)  Corellian Premier Jedi symbol.svg Force will be with you always 14:26, January 24, 2014 (UTC)
 * 3) Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:28, January 24, 2014 (UTC)

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Unidentified Kaleesh chieftain

 * Nominated by: Cade  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg  Calrayn  23:49, January 22, 2014 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: The Codex Project

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 * 1)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  04:10, January 23, 2014 (UTC)
 * 2) Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:26, January 24, 2014 (UTC)

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Cathington's Disorder

 * Nominated by: Cade  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg  Calrayn  23:49, January 22, 2014 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: The Codex Project

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 * 1)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  04:25, January 23, 2014 (UTC)
 * 2) Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:26, January 24, 2014 (UTC)

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Shassa Dalle

 * Nominated by: Cade  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg  Calrayn  23:49, January 22, 2014 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: The Codex Project

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 * 1) Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:25, January 24, 2014 (UTC)
 * 2)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  03:02, January 25, 2014 (UTC)

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 * Exiled Jedi
 * "Furious that Drayen had seduced his wife and ran away with her, Hixan made numerous attempts to win back Dalle from Drayen over the years, but his attempts ultimately caused Dalle's accidental death[2] sometime before 3653 BBY[1] and earned Drayen Hixan's eternal hatred." Could you break this up? -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  04:38, January 23, 2014 (UTC)
 * Done. Cade  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg  Calrayn  05:38, January 23, 2014 (UTC)

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Arjur

 * Nominated by: Cade  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg  Calrayn  23:49, January 22, 2014 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: The Codex Project

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 * 1)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  04:40, January 23, 2014 (UTC)
 * 2) Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:22, January 24, 2014 (UTC)
 * 3)  Corellian Premier Jedi symbol.svg Force will be with you always 02:11, January 26, 2014 (UTC)

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Horoth Gendi

 * Nominated by: Cade  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg  Calrayn  23:49, January 22, 2014 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: The Codex Project

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 * 1)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  04:53, January 23, 2014 (UTC)
 * 2) Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:19, January 24, 2014 (UTC)
 * 3) The "Niktofather" Corellian Premier Jedi symbol.svg Force will be with you always 02:03, January 26, 2014 (UTC)

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Horoth Gendi's master

 * Nominated by: Cade  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg  Calrayn  23:49, January 22, 2014 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: The Codex Project

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 * 1)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  04:55, January 23, 2014 (UTC)
 * 2) Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:17, January 24, 2014 (UTC)

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Horoth Gendi's gang

 * Nominated by: Cade  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg  Calrayn  23:49, January 22, 2014 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: The Codex Project

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 * 1) Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:17, January 24, 2014 (UTC)
 * 2)  Corellian Premier Jedi symbol.svg Force will be with you always 02:03, January 26, 2014 (UTC)

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Warhammer

 * Nominated by: Cade  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg  Calrayn  23:49, January 22, 2014 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: The Codex Project

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 * 1) Unlike Pete, the Republic got a dreadnaught. Corellian Premier Jedi symbol.svg Force will be with you always 02:31, January 23, 2014 (UTC)
 * 2) *Bro, you're not holding your threshold. Dat lack of EC. Cade  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg  Calrayn  04:08, January 23, 2014 (UTC)

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 * 1) Is it the Republic's first confirmed sighting? Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:37, January 24, 2014 (UTC)
 * 2) *Done. Cade  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg  Calrayn  02:00, January 26, 2014 (UTC)

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Unidentified Balmorran island chain

 * Nominated by: Cade  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg  Calrayn  23:49, January 22, 2014 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: The Codex Project

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 * 1)  —Tommy   9281  Thursday, January 23, 2014, 01:55 UTC 
 * 2)  Corellian Premier Jedi symbol.svg Force will be with you always 01:57, January 26, 2014 (UTC)

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Just 1

 * "Around 4250 BBY, explorers unknowingly brought both creatures to the Balmorran mainland, which gave rise to large populations of both predator and prey on the mainland until the Great Galactic War between the Galactic Republic and the Sith Empire, when Imperial bombardment wiped out the mainland maweater population" is a runon sentence. Please break up.  —Tommy  9281  Thursday, January 23, 2014, 00:33 UTC 
 * Done. Cade  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg  Calrayn  01:20, January 23, 2014 (UTC)


 * 1) Ayrehead
 * 2) *In the Balmorran maweater article you said all of the species was wiped out not just on the island chain. Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:34, January 24, 2014 (UTC)
 * 3) *You might want to merge this with Unidentified Balmorra island chain. Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:34, January 24, 2014 (UTC)
 * 4) **D'oh. Cade  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg  Calrayn  01:44, January 26, 2014 (UTC)

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Phobis Core

 * Nominated by: Cade  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg  Calrayn  23:49, January 22, 2014 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: The Codex Project

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 * 1) Ayrehead
 * 2) *Is it possible to add some kind of time frame to the body? Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:31, January 24, 2014 (UTC)

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Karssk

 * Nominated by: Cade  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg  Calrayn  23:49, January 22, 2014 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: The Codex Project

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 * 1) Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:28, January 24, 2014 (UTC)

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Loovria arena

 * Nominated by: Cade  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg  Calrayn  23:49, January 22, 2014 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: The Codex Project

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 * 1) Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:43, January 25, 2014 (UTC)
 * 2)  Corellian Premier Jedi symbol.svg Force will be with you always 01:37, January 26, 2014 (UTC)

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 * 1) Ayrehead
 * 2) * "were present at in the stands" is this meant to just be "were present in the stands" or "were present sat in the stands". I wasn't sure otherwise I would of fixed it myself. Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:27, January 24, 2014 (UTC)
 * 3) **Changed my mind halfway through the sentence. Fixed. Cade  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg  Calrayn  18:29, January 24, 2014 (UTC)

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Rist

 * Nominated by: Cade  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg  Calrayn  23:49, January 22, 2014 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: The Codex Project. There, I think that's enough for today. I WILL BE BACK.

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 * 1) Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 05:21, January 23, 2014 (UTC)
 * 2) Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:24, January 24, 2014 (UTC)
 * 3)  Corellian Premier Jedi symbol.svg Force will be with you always 01:28, January 26, 2014 (UTC)

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