Wookieepedia:Inq/Rune Haako (second review)

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Rune Haako

 * Status: Article (other options are "featured article nom", "featured article", and "former featured article")

Things to do

 * Needs an update from the Star Wars Character Encyclopedia
 * Outstanding issues from the RFAN page (objections originally left by ):
 * 1) *Dates should be moved from image texts and subheads to the bio. Kreivi Wolter 17:27, June 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *All dates also needs better sourcing. For example, The Phantom Menace is not a proper source, since the date isn't clearly mentioned in the movie. Kreivi Wolter 17:27, June 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) *Links from image texts could be deleted. They are rather unnecessary. Kreivi Wolter 17:27, June 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) *The intro needs major expanding, and it could be formated more, how to say... chronologically? Kreivi Wolter 17:27, June 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) *P&t could also use some work. For example; "By the end of the Clone Wars, Rune appeared to be somewhat more courageous compared to most Neimoidians, as he tried to order Vader to stop his massacre of the Separatist leaders, rather than blubber mercy pleas like most of the other council members." Menkooroo 00:21, July 24, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

 * provided the necessary info from the Character Encyclopedia:
 * Height: 1.96 meters
 * Weight: 89 kilograms
 * Weapons: Poison-tipped knife
 * Nervous Trade Federation lawyer far more confident in the courtroom than on the battlefield. Menkooroo 00:21, July 24, 2011 (UTC)