Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Unidentified Imperial scout


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Unidentified Imperial scout

 * Nominated by: -- Cull Tremayne 02:06, 8 October 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: 1023 words. Might be possible to squeeze in a sentence or two about his early career, due to his familiarity with Seoul architecture, but this is the bare minimum.

(5 Inqs/0 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1) Now I've got "The Gambler" stuck in my head again. We'll see how many weeks it is this time.  Graestan ( Talk ) 02:25, 8 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) Toprawa and Ralltiir 23:51, 11 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 3)  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  19:08, 16 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 4)  —Xwing328 (Talk) 02:41, 23 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) Green Tentacle (Talk) 20:07, 23 October 2008 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Toprawa:
 * 2) * I'm going to assume this is my understanding of whatever this game's lingo is, but can we clarify was a "full system" is? "The Imperial scout played his final hand, a full system," Toprawa and Ralltiir 20:50, 11 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) **We don't really know anything about the game or how its played, but based on the context, it seems that a "full system" is one of the better hands in the game. Nothing else is really known. I added some minor wording about how a "full system" is a good hand. Cull Tremayne 23:03, 11 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) ***That works. Toprawa and Ralltiir 23:51, 11 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) "The scout returned to Imperial space, but before he could find time to return with a larger ship, the Galactic Civil War began. As a result, the scout was unable to accumulate enough resources to return to Seoul 5." You mention in the intro that he was going to buy the ship but not here. It could also be clearer that he was planning to get the stuff for himself and not the Empire. Green Tentacle (Talk) 18:29, 23 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 6) *Added his intent to buy a larger ship. I'm not sure how much can be added about how selfish his real purpose for the stuff is. Just because he doesn't say much about it. Cull Tremayne 19:31, 23 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 7) **Meh. Buying a ship for it implies unofficialness enough. Green Tentacle (Talk) 20:07, 23 October 2008 (UTC)

Comments


 * Not a complete objection, but I don't like how "was" is used 3 times in the 2nd sentence. —Xwing328 (Talk) 02:41, 23 October 2008 (UTC)