Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Fnessian


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Fnessian

 * Nominated by: --Eyrezer 21:18, March 10, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Enter a new gender...

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)
Support
 * 1) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 22:44, March 10, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Nice. Graestan ( Talk ) 05:07, March 11, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) Eyestalks! Eyestalks! --Skippy Farlstendoiro 16:59, March 13, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4)  Jonjedigrandmaster  Jedi symbol.svg ( We seed the stars ) 17:06, March 13, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5)  CC7567  (talk) 04:41, March 16, 2010 (UTC)
 * 6) Toprawa and Ralltiir 19:49, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Skippy keeping an eyestalk on alien species noms
 * 2) * a "dead or alive" bounty. Can you reword this so as to avoid the inverted commas? Something like "a bounty for either his capture or proof or his death"
 * 3) **I followed your wording. --Eyrezer 00:47, March 13, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) * You repeatedly say that Th'ronik stole the Morgannier and earned the ire of SoroSuub. Why? Did SoroSuub owned the Morgannier, or had subcontracted the ship?
 * 5) **That connection is never made in the source. It might be implied but it says no more than what I've written unfortunately.
 * 6) * undefined. Nice character but can't it be linked or anything? I mean, it's not obvious that it stands for "credits"; it might mean wupiupi or something.
 * 7) **Of course it stands for credits! :p I'm not sure if I can link it. I'll see. - Done, although not as a blue link.
 * 8) * More info on No Disintegrations if possible: Writer of the part mentioning Fnessians and artist drawing the depiction.
 * 9) **Unfortunately, while it is clear who wrote the various chapters, it doesn't say who wrote the appendix, nor are the artists identified. --Eyrezer 19:54, March 11, 2010 (UTC)
 * 10) *You do like eyestalks, don't you? Skippy Farlstendoiro 07:35, March 11, 2010 (UTC)

Comments


 * I actually feel that the phrase "Although not necessarily representative of the entire Fnessian species," needs to be there. It is not speculative in the OR sense and it provides a bit of an explanation as to why the following sentence is there. I'd like to put it back in... --Eyrezer 05:42, March 11, 2010 (UTC)