Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations

 This page is for the nomination of "comprehensive articles." For a list of "comprehensive articles," see Category:Wookieepedia comprehensive articles.


 * Comprehensive article nominations history
 * Comprehensive article nominations archiving checklist

What is a "comprehensive article?"

A "comprehensive article" is an article that contains all information regarding the topic. Often, "comprehensive articles" cannot reach Featured or Good Article status due to their limited content. This process is intended to recognize articles that contain all relevant canon information, yet are still under the 250 word limit required for a Good Article. The purpose of this is twofold&mdash;firstly, to help users distinguish what is a stub, and what is merely a short article with no further relevant material to be added, and, more importantly, to highlight for the reader when they are reading something that has been judged definitely "comprehensive"&mdash;that is, a guarantee to the reader that whatever they are reading contains the sum total of all available content on that topic.

Nominations and promotions of the Comprehensive article process are overseen by a collective of users known as the "EduCorps," which is made up of the Inquisitorius, the AgriCorps, and various other experienced users who are considered qualified to adequately judge the nominated material.

Lucasfilm Ltd. and its many licensees continue to expand the Star Wars universe. Since new information might become available, it may be necessary to revoke a "comprehensive article's" status. A forum will be used to nominate articles that have fallen out-of-date. Members of the EduCorps will then post a warning template on that page, and a grace period of one week will be instituted in which the article can be improved. If there is a significant amount of new information, it is likely that once updated, the article will become eligible for Good article status, and thereby ineligible for Comprehensive article status.

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An article must&hellip;


 * 1) &hellip;be well-written and detailed.
 * 2) &hellip;be unbiased, non-point of view.
 * 3) &hellip;be sourced with all available sources and appearances.
 * 4) &hellip;follow the Manual of Style, Layout Guide, and all other policies on Wookieepedia. This is, of course, within reason. If a topic only has a very limited degree of content that cannot be divided up into the relevant article sections, it is not required that it follow the Layout Guide precisely. This is to be judged on a case-by-case basis.
 * 5) &hellip;following the review process, be stable, i.e., does not change significantly from day to day and is not the subject of ongoing edit wars. This does not apply to vandalism and protection or semi-protection as a result of vandalism.
 * 6) &hellip;not be tagged with any sort of improvement tags (i.e. more sources, expand, etc).
 * 7) &hellip;have no redlinks.
 * 8) &hellip;have all relevant canon information presented.
 * 9) &hellip;be completely referenced for all available material and sources. See Sourcing for more information.
 * 10) &hellip;have all quotes and images sourced.
 * 11) &hellip;provide at least one relevant quote on the article if available.
 * 12) &hellip;include a "Behind the scenes" section for in-universe articles.
 * 13) &hellip;counting the introduction, the article body, and "Behind the scenes" material, must not exceed 250 words in length (not including captions, quotes, or headers, etc). Any articles exceeding the limit should be taken to the Good article nominations page for consideration.
 * 14) &hellip;if the nominated article reaches 200 words or greater, the nominator must either provide an intro or draft an intro and provide a link to the revision in the nomination, showing that the intro does not elevate the article over 250 words. Exceptions can be made for articles wherein the majority of the text is in the "Behind the scenes" section.

How to nominate:


 * 1) First, nominate an article you find is worthy of comprehensive status, putting it at the bottom of the list below. Nominated articles must meet all thirteen requirements stated above.
 * 2) Add CAnom at the top of the article you are nominating.
 * 3) Be sure to place sign in the "Nominated by" line when the nomination is posted for voting.
 * 4) Others will object to the nomination if they disagree that the article is good enough; they will then supply reasons for doing so, and ways to improve the article in accordance with the established rules.
 * 5) Nominators and supporters will adjust the article until the objectors (with reasonable objections) are satisfied. Objectors may also make alterations&mdash;if there is any reason for contention on a given point, it should be settled in a civil manner in the nomination field itself.
 * 6) Users may not vote on their own articles.
 * 7) There is no limit to the amount of nominations a given user can submit at any given time.

How to vote:


 * 1) Before doing anything, be sure to read the article completely, keeping a sharp eye out for mistakes.
 * 2) Afterward, compare the article to the criteria listed above, and then either support or object the article's nomination.
 * 3) *If you object, please supply concrete reasons for doing so, and how it can be improved.
 * 4) As stated above, any objections will be looked upon by the nominator, supporters, and anyone willing to improve the article, and action will be taken to please the objectors. Do not strike other users' objections; it is up to the objector to review the changes and strike if they are satisfied.
 * 5) There are several ways in which an article can receive the required number of votes. Within a 48-hour period of nomination, only EduCorps votes will count towards the total, although anyone may choose to vote in that window. If four members of the EduCorps support a nomination in that window [0 to 48 hours post-nomination], and there are no outstanding objections, the article can be considered a "Comprehensive article" and be tagged with the template 48 hours after the initial nomination. The talk page will also be tagged with the  template. When the 48 hours are up, any user's votes will contribute towards the total. If two EduCorps member has voted for an article after a week, three regular votes will be required. After the 48 hour period, an article can still also pass with just three EduCorps votes.
 * 6) Once a nomination is successful, it will be placed on the Comprehensive article list. Instructions on how to archive nominations, successful or otherwise, can be found here. Anyone can archive a nomination&mdash;just make sure it has the correct number of votes, has been nominated for at least a week (or 48 hours if there are four EC votes), and that there are absolutely no outstanding objections. If you are not sure how to do this, just ask, and someone will likely be more than willing to help you. Also, if you think you can slip one past us, think again&mdash;someone is always watching you.

All nominations will be considered idle and are subject to instantaneous removal by EduCorps members if objections are not addressed, or at least not answered, after a period of 1 week.

Please remember to archive your nomination beforehand if you plan on taking it to the Good Article Nominations page.

Braxis

 * Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:22, June 6, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:And now for something completely different

(4 ECs/1 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1) -  Princess   GLG  20:45, June 6, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) Good work.  501st  dogma ( talk ) 15:09, June 7, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  23:43, June 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) I just imagine Ian Mcdrimaids evil voice and then a 5 year old child saying "But you promised"  Commander Code-8  You lost the game! 05:58, June 30, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) Supreme Emperor (talk) 03:07, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Princess
 * 2) * &mdash ; needs to be used in the quote (without the space).
 * 3) **I thought it would be but -- is used in the comic for some reason. However mdash looks better. Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:32, June 6, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Hmmm... I don't know how to handle that then. I'm not sure which way would be more correct. - Princess   GLG  20:45, June 6, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) * Nothing in the attribution of the quote needs to be linked unless it is not mentioned elsewhere in the article. I tried to find where this policy is stated, but it seems to be evading me at the moment. Nonetheless, you can see it in other CAs.
 * 6) **No need to find the rule I know it just forgot to apply it in this article although I did in my other noms. Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:32, June 6, 2013 (UTC)
 * 7) ***Yeah, I figured you knew it, but I kinda wanted to find out where the rule was just so I knew. - Princess   GLG  01:15, June 7, 2013 (UTC)
 * 8) * Check your linking. Your missing several and planet is linked twice.
 * 9) **Think I fixed it all. Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:32, June 6, 2013 (UTC)
 * 10) * Star Wars: Dark Times needs italicized in the Bts.
 * 11) **Fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:32, June 6, 2013 (UTC)
 * 12) * I don't think hologram needs to be linked in the Appearances as it is already linked in the article, but I'm not sure. - Princess   GLG  19:08, June 6, 2013 (UTC)
 * 13) **Hologram in the appearances is a template that automatically links hologram and I don't really know how to prevent it from doing so. Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:32, June 6, 2013 (UTC)
 * 14) ***Yeah, I guess I knew that just forgot. I don't remember it being linked in other articles but I must have never looked that close.


 * 1) CC-8
 * 2) * Article for the planet?  Commander Code-8  You lost the game! 11:50, June 25, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) **Hmm I guess his race isn't enough to assume it's Pho Ph'eah so I've created one. Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:55, June 25, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) Cadeth
 * 5) *Dude, you're missing commas and periods in the quote, and Senator is capitalized when it precedes a name, like "Senator Braxis". Cade  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg  Calrayn  03:03, July 2, 2013 (UTC)
 * 6) **Fixed the punctuation and capitalization. Ayrehead02 (talk) 06:32, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

StarMark III Hyperdrive

 * Nominated by: LelalMekha (talk) 14:57, June 19, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  21:54, June 20, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) Ayrehead02 (talk) 23:24, June 22, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) -  Princess   GLG  02:35, June 25, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 23:35, July 4, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * I agree with Ayrehead, I think that mentioning the purchase of the hyperdrive should be in the body. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  15:28, June 20, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) **There you are. --LelalMekha (talk) 21:45, June 20, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) How about a link for the spaceship? It seems important enough.  501st  dogma ( talk ) 12:36, June 22, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) *Done. It seems that I had missed that objection. --LelalMekha (talk) 16:20, July 4, 2013 (UTC)
 * 6) Ayrehead
 * 7) * Instead of saying he or she could you say they?
 * 8) **Well, I suppose so. --LelalMekha (talk) 15:29, June 22, 2013 (UTC)
 * 9) * I don't think we're meant to called unnamed characters unidentified in article bodies you should just say a spacer. Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:03, June 22, 2013 (UTC)
 * 10) **Fixed. --LelalMekha (talk) 15:29, June 22, 2013 (UTC)
 * 11) I'm not sure why, but I'm confused by the first sentence. Should it not be for spaceships? I also think perhaps you should specify that it is for interstellar travel in the body. (Although you don't have to if you don't think it's necessary, as I'm debating whether it is necessary myself.) -  Princess   GLG  22:20, June 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * 12) *I just fixed the "spaceship(s)" typo, but I don't think the addition you suggest is mandatory. After all, the body of the article already says it's an hyperdrive unit, a kind of device that is used for interestellar travel by definition. --LelalMekha (talk) 23:02, June 24, 2013 (UTC)

Comments
 * Is there any indication as to what ships this component could be compatible with? Does the game ever reveal what starship you use to get off Tatooine?  Stake black   msg 15:08, June 19, 2013 (UTC)
 * No. Your ship gets rebuilt from scratch. --LelalMekha (talk) 15:13, June 19, 2013 (UTC)
 * Shouldn't you say that a spacer purchased one whilst building a ship from scratch while attempting to get off Tatooine? In a 100% game completion template. Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:23, June 19, 2013 (UTC)
 * Yousa right. --LelalMekha (talk) 21:45, June 20, 2013 (UTC)

Unidentified Vrot (Cuipernam)

 * Nominated by: Supreme Emperor (talk) 04:10, June 20, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: About time I finished this :P For all the novels

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) As long as the second sentence is reworded like Ayrehead mentioned... -  Princess   GLG  22:07, June 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:43, June 28, 2013 (UTC)

Object Comments
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * The Vrots category is a redlink. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  15:35, June 20, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) **Oops, I thought I made that page a week ago :P
 * 4) * The era field of the infobox is a redlink. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  15:55, June 21, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) **Oops, I meant that it lacked a source.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  00:56, June 22, 2013 (UTC)
 * 6) ***Oops, done
 * 7) Princess
 * 8) * The era needs to be added to the infobox. - Princess   GLG  22:48, June 20, 2013 (UTC)
 * 9) **Fixed. Supreme Emperor (talk) 14:47, June 21, 2013 (UTC)
 * 10) *** Source? - Princess   GLG  23:44, June 21, 2013 (UTC)
 * 11) ****Done. Supreme Emperor (talk) 03:41, June 22, 2013 (UTC)
 * 12) * If you know that the weapon he had had a trigger, do you know anything else about what kind of weapon it was? (Mainly, was it a blaster?) - Princess   GLG  12:10, June 22, 2013 (UTC)
 * 13) **All I know is it had a trigger.
 * 14) ***Ok, just making sure. - Princess   GLG  22:07, June 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * 15) 501st
 * 16) * You should bold the Vrot in the beginning of the body.... 501st  dogma ( talk ) 12:38, June 22, 2013 (UTC)
 * 17) **Done
 * 18) *The first sentence seems a bit of a run on, because it has so many ands and such. Could you see if you could change it? 501st  dogma ( talk ) 23:55, June 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * 19) **Do you mean the second sentence? Supreme Emperor (talk) 15:34, June 28, 2013 (UTC)
 * 20) ***Bah. Fix that... 501st  dogma ( talk ) 20:02, June 28, 2013 (UTC)
 * 21) ****Broke up the sentence, do you want me to try breaking up the now slightly longer third sentence too? :P Supreme Emperor (talk) 03:06, June 30, 2013 (UTC)
 * 22) *****Yep. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 14:44, July 4, 2013 (UTC)
 * 23) Ayrehead
 * 24) * Couldn't you include breifly why the mercenaries were attacking the group? Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:06, June 22, 2013 (UTC)
 * 25) **How's this? Supreme Emperor (talk) 03:04, June 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * 26) *** The informations good but I think you need to change "during" to "he took part in" in the second sentence. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:01, June 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * 27) ****Done. Supreme Emperor (talk) 15:34, June 28, 2013 (UTC)

Anoat oat

 * Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:52, June 26, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Another piece of food from Dex's

(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 13:14, June 27, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) -  Princess   GLG  15:28, June 27, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  01:59, July 4, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 21:16, July 4, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * There seems to be something wrong with the infobox. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  14:30, July 2, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) **Fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:15, July 3, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) ***I'm not seeing any difference here.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  20:21, July 3, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) ****Huh that's odd, I must of not saved or something. Ayrehead02 (talk) 01:58, July 4, 2013 (UTC)
 * 6) NaruHina thought of bacon
 * 7) * With regards to "number 2 breakfast special," using numerals for numbers that small is usually avoided. It looks odd. If it wasn't considered a proper noun by the source, it would probably be better to just say "the second breakfast special" NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 19:08, July 3, 2013 (UTC)
 * 8) **Changed as suggested. I'll keep the advice in mind in future. Ayrehead02 (talk) 01:58, July 4, 2013 (UTC)
 * 9) ***Arrity. It made me happy to see some Dex's stuff. :) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 21:16, July 4, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Anzati snot garlic

 * Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:23, June 26, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:A particularly appetising vegetable...

(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1) Snot garlic?  501st  dogma ( talk ) 13:15, June 27, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) -  Princess   GLG  12:58, June 28, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  02:02, July 4, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 23:22, July 4, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * There seems to be something wrong with the infobox. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  14:33, July 2, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) **Fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 01:59, July 4, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) Naru
 * 5) * The last sentence of the body makes an explicit connection between the Anzat and the garlic, yet the BTS says that there is no confirmed connection between the two. Having written a number of "Dining at Dex's" articles myself, I'm aware of the ambiguity situation. However, I'm wondering why that note about the existence of the Anzat is in the IU body a all. As a concluding sentence, it reads as pretty random. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 21:31, July 4, 2013 (UTC)
 * 6) **Ok I've removed the sentence and expanded the sentence in the bts a bit. Ayrehead02 (talk) 23:04, July 4, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Yatooni Boska

 * Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 22:23, June 26, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:One of the Huttese drinks from the very strange Galactic phrase book.

(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 13:17, June 27, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) -  Princess   GLG  13:00, June 28, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  14:39, July 2, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 21:34, July 4, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Tatooni Junko

 * Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 22:31, June 26, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:One of several items on a list. I've tried to vary the text as much as I can but there's only so much I can do...

(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1) As long as you fix Princess's objection.  501st  dogma ( talk ) 13:46, June 28, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) -  Princess   GLG  12:10, July 1, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  14:43, July 2, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 21:36, July 4, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Princess
 * 2) * You might want to fix the first two words to reflect the title of the article. :P
 * 3) **Whoops shouldn't of copied and pasted :S Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:33, June 28, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Widows of Alderaan Educational Consortium

 * Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:39, June 27, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:While I've got the phrase book to hand might as well nom some more.

(3 ECs/0 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) -  Princess   GLG  13:10, June 28, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 13:47, June 28, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  23:14, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Gardulla (drink)

 * Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:53, June 27, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Another from the list

(3 ECs/0 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 13:50, June 28, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) -  Princess   GLG  15:01, July 1, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  23:17, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Acid-beet salad

 * Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 17:56, June 28, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Thought I might as well follow up my Acid-beet nom.

(3 ECs/0 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 13:35, June 30, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) -  Princess   GLG  16:35, July 1, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  23:20, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Agamar slider

 * Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:24, June 28, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:This one took more research than I expected

(3 ECs/0 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) -  Princess   GLG  19:32, July 1, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 14:47, July 4, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  15:40, July 4, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 501
 * 1) * "a trans-shipped medium-density food-board." Article for this?
 * 2) * 501st dogma ( talk ) 13:38, June 30, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) **I've put in a link to the foodboard article that alread exists, is that enough or do you want me to make a more specific article? Ayrehead02 (talk) 06:28, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Nuyu's

 * Nominated by: 501st  dogma ( talk ) 23:43, June 28, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: A tattoo parlor

(2 ECs/1 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) Ayrehead02 (talk) 23:53, June 28, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) -  Princess   GLG  19:36, July 1, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  02:11, July 4, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Weezo

 * Nominated by: 501st  dogma ( talk ) 13:44, June 29, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: She has an eye patch

(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1) Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:27, June 29, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) -  Princess   GLG  19:41, July 1, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3)  Commander Code-8  You lost the game! 03:59, July 2, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  14:58, July 4, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * Since you include the merchant's category, shouldn't you link to merchant in the article somewhere? -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  02:16, July 4, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) **There. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 14:49, July 4, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Duurga

 * Nominated by:  Commander Code-8  You lost the game! 11:00, June 30, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Last minute BB6 entry

(0 ECs/1 Users/1 Total)
Support
 * 1) Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:12, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Ayrehead
 * 2) * Could you fix all the redirects?
 * 3) **Done.
 * 4) * There's a Luke Skywalker link that also needs fixing.
 * 5) **Not sure what you mean
 * 6) ***Don't worry I think someone else fixed it.
 * 7) * Could you make the context for Luuke a little clearer? The whole part about pretending to be the original because he was dead is a little confusing. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:14, June 30, 2013 (UTC)
 * 8) **Any better now?  Commander Code-8  You lost the game! 23:46, July 2, 2013 (UTC)
 * 9) ***Good job! Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:12, July 3, 2013 (UTC)
 * 10) Exiled Jedi
 * 11) *Unless the story mentions Duurga as having a masculine personality, I do not think you can assume it based of Durga since Hutts can change from a male to a female personality.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  22:26, July 3, 2013 (UTC)
 * 12) **Done.  Commander Code-8  You lost the game! 01:25, July 8, 2013 (UTC)
 * 13) Naru smells clones
 * 14) *Because of the context of "An Apology," Duurga would have had to die before the events of Darksaber, or 12 ABY, when the clone impersonating Durga at that time died. There's no guarantee that that clone was Duuurga, but a BTS note should be added to his article, too. There are no misplaced "u"s in this post. (booya!)
 * 15) **Hold on, you've lost me, there's no confirmation that Duurga died in "An Apology", I'll need a bit more of an explanation.
 * 16) ***It's because of the context of "An Apology." I'll try to be clear, but do say again if you need more clarification. This may end up repetitive, but I'm just going to go slowly to follow the logic, so here goes. OK, so in "An Apology" Thrawn was creating clones to replace people. The story says that this became his pet project after Luuke was born, 9 ABY, and the article currently reflects that. Good. Everything appearance of a character in true canon after they were cloned and replaced was done by the clone. Luke Skywalker in Jedi Quest, Legacy of the Force, The Unifying Force? Luuke Skywalker. Boba Fett during (and before) Fate of the Jedi? Booba Fett. Savvy? After that unspecified point at which Durga was cloned, he would have been a clone created by Thrawn in disguise. All of the true canon actions of Durga after that point were actually a clone in the "Apology" continuity. That means that in 12 ABY, when Durga died during Darksaber, that was a clone. Because Duurga died at the hands of Chewbaaca in a markedly different way than the true canon events and another took his place, Duurga had to have died before Darksaber events, or before 12 ABY. On the other hand, this does not confirm that the clone who died during Darksaber was Duuurga, but a note that he took control before 12 ABY would be necessary. HOLD THE PHONE. First off, I realized that I had gotten it in my head that Duurga had died. I was wrong, and I don't know what happened there. BUT I REALIZED. "An Apology" states that Duurga was paired with Chewbaaca for arm wrestling after the clone Wookiee's creation in the wake of Chewbacca's death during Vector Prime in 25 ABY. That means that Duurga had to have lost his his arm during or after 25 ABY. "But after Chewbaacca pulled one of Duurga’s arms out of its socket, he stopped those bouts. He hasn’t let Chewbaacca anywhere near Duuurga since" also indicates that Duuurga and Chewbaaca were allowed to mingle before the event, which means that Duuurga coexisted with Duurga. That means that he had to have been born before Duurga lost his arm, meaning that his birth range is some point between "after 9 ABY" and "circa 25 ABY" (simplified from "before circa 'after 25 ABY'"). Moreover, Luuke writes about Duuurga in the present tense there, indicating that at least Duuurga survived through Fate of the Jedi into 44 ABY. All of this means that, in the "An Apology" universe, the original Durga lived his fully canonical life and died during Darksaber, and was replaced by Duurga, who has only one additional vowel and is thereby the first clone, during or after 12 ABY. That doesn't necessarily mean that Duurga was born in 12 ABY, but it means he was alive after that point. Although, since Durga's death was final in the canon universe and he never did anything after that point canonically, the practical reason for Durga clones to exist at all is unclear. Neither clone did anything to affect the greater galaxy before 44 ABY, the point at which point "An Apology" spins off into Son of Clone Wars. That means that at least Duuurga's BTS needs to include a tidbit about his surviving into the rebranding of the Star Wars universe into Son of Clone Wars. &hellip;I'm going to summarize that into a list so it's clearer. Here are the events that the article needs to incorporate:
 * 17) ****The source, Durga, died in 12 ABY, per Darksaber. This may be best handled as a BTS note.
 * 18) ****Duurga, the first clone because of the one extra "u," was alive after Durga's death in 12 ABY, so the article needs to mention that date explicitly somehow.
 * 19) ****Chewbaaca was born during or after 25 ABY, in the wake of the Battle of Sernpidal. At this point, Duurga and Duuurga were definitely alive. That means his birth year has a definite latest point, "during or after 25 BBY." "Circa" would probably work, too.
 * 20) ****Sometime during or after 25 ABY, Chewbaaca tore off Duurga's arm.
 * 21) ****(For Duuurga only) In 44 ABY, when Luuke wrote "An Apology," Duuurga was alive and he would thereby be alive at the start of the unending series, Son of Clone Wars, so that needs describing in his BTS.
 * 22) *****These are all simple conclusions from the dates and the extra vowel naming convention, which has plenty of examples. Questions? NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 07:12, July 8, 2013 (UTC)
 * 23) * Also, as an addendum to EJ's objection above mine, though I think we could take it on as a duck test since the whole point of the clone replacements was to not change anything about the character, a BTS note about Durga's sex would be required if that tidbit were removed from the body. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 23:34, July 4, 2013 (UTC)
 * 24) **Done.  Commander Code-8  You lost the game! 01:25, July 8, 2013 (UTC)
 * 25) ***The revelation that they lived after the original Durga invalidated the duck test anyway. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 07:12, July 8, 2013 (UTC)

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 * Unsure whether the Besadi Tai part should be added to the title, Any thoughts?  Commander Code-8  You lost the game! 11:00, June 30, 2013 (UTC)
 * If it's not given as his full name in the source then I'd leave it to be honest. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:14, June 30, 2013 (UTC)

Duuurga

 * Nominated by:  Commander Code-8  You lost the game! 23:37, June 30, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Ditto

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 * 1) Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:09, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

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 * 1) Ayrehead
 * 2) * Could you kill the redirects here as well please? Ayrehead02 (talk) 23:40, June 30, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) **Done.  Commander Code-8  You lost the game! 09:26, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

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 * 1) 501st
 * 2) *"As a Hutt he was a hermaphrodite with a masculine personality." This says because he is a Hutt, he is male. Fix please.
 * 3) **Done.
 * 4) ***Wait, he chose to be male? Can Hutts do that? 501st  dogma ( talk ) 14:46, July 4, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) ****Yup, that's how Hutts work, but don't worry to much because of the below objection.  Commander Code-8  You lost the game! 01:27, July 8, 2013 (UTC)
 * 6) * I would suggest mentioning in the BtS that the story was non-canon directly. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 14:19, July 2, 2013 (UTC)
 * 7) **Done.  Commander Code-8  You lost the game! 09:26, July 3, 2013 (UTC)
 * 8) Exiled Jedi
 * 9) *Unless the story mentions Duuurga as having a masculine personality, I do not think you can assume it based of Durga since Hutts can change from a male to a female personality.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  22:26, July 3, 2013 (UTC)
 * 10) **Done.  Commander Code-8  You lost the game! 01:27, July 8, 2013 (UTC)

Just Armor

 * Nominated by: 501st  dogma ( talk ) 00:41, July 1, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

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 * 1) Supreme Emperor (talk) 03:29, July 1, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:02, July 1, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) When I want armor I just make a crafting table.  Commander Code-8  You lost the game! 03:48, July 2, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) -  Princess   GLG  14:04, July 2, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  22:06, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

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Lumablast rocket

 * Nominated by:  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  03:43, July 4, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: I needed to nom something...

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 * 1) Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:39, July 4, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) -  Princess   GLG  13:01, July 5, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3)  Commander Code-8  You lost the game! 07:36, July 8, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 17:48, July 8, 2013 (UTC)

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Unidentified female Jedi Master (meditation)

 * Nominated by: DarthRevan1173 RevanTOR001.jpg (Long live Lord Revan) 02:01, July 7, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: For Project Novels

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 * 1) CC-8'
 * 2) *I'm not a fan of the use of "this" in the into. "A" would probably be better.
 * 3) *Sectioning off isn't really necessary here, the article isn't even that far over 100 words, and both sections seem to basically say the same thing, so a lot of words could be cut back anyway
 * 4) *Perhaps say that she was in the Jedi Order before order 66, just as a small thing to show that she definitely wasn't in the NJO
 * 5) *The hideps/hidecs, whatever in the infobox shouldn't be there when they have filled in fields underneath them.  Commander Code-8  You lost the game! 07:45, July 8, 2013 (UTC)
 * 6) Ayrehead
 * 7) *Actually to slightly contradict CC-8, given that the Jedi enclave on Corellia was built after the Yuzhan Vong War I'm not sure we can assume she was in the Jedi Order at all as it's more like she's in the New Jedi Order. To be safe you should probably just say she was a Jedi and not mention either order. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:44, July 8, 2013 (UTC)

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Unidentified Twi'lek female dancer (Dealer's Den)

 * Nominated by: DarthRevan1173 RevanTOR001.jpg (Long live Lord Revan) 02:01, July 7, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:For Project Novels

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 * 1) Ayrehead
 * 2) *This doesn't need to be split, the intro and Bio can be merged.
 * 3) *Can you mention what planet the Dealer's Den is on? Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:49, July 8, 2013 (UTC)

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Strained keebadas

 * Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:36, July 8, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Back to Hutt foods

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 * 1) "...although the insects are not mentioned in the original RPG material." Insects? 501st  dogma ( talk ) 17:50, July 8, 2013 (UTC)

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Scurrier tips

 * Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:47, July 8, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Another from the list

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 * 1) 501st
 * 2) *The second sentence is reading a bit weird, around the part where it says the Baobab wants other humans to try it. Please fix this. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 17:55, July 8, 2013 (UTC)

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Unidentified Kilmaulsi guard

 * Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:13, July 8, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:A subpage for the soon to be nominated Kilmaulsi article.

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 * 501
 * 1) *The skin section of the infobox needs to say orange as well as green. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 17:59, July 8, 2013 (UTC)

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