Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations



This page is for the nomination of "comprehensive articles". For a list of "comprehensive articles", see Category:Wookieepedia comprehensive articles.


 * Comprehensive article nominations history
 * Comprehensive article nominations archiving checklist

What is a "comprehensive article?"

A "comprehensive article" is an article that contains all information regarding the topic. Often, "comprehensive articles" cannot reach Featured or Good Article status due to their limited content. This process is intended to recognize articles that contain all relevant canon information, yet are still under the 250 word limit required for a Good Article. The purpose of this is twofold&mdash;firstly, to help users distinguish what is a stub, and what is merely a short article with no further relevant material to be added, and, more importantly, to highlight for the reader when they are reading something that has been judged definitely "comprehensive"&mdash;that is, a guarantee to the reader that whatever they are reading contains the sum total of all available content.

Nominations and promotions of the Comprehensive article process are overseen by a collective of users known as the "EduCorps," which is made up of the Inquisitorius, the AgriCorps, and various other experienced users who are considered qualified to adequately judge the nominated material.

Lucasfilm Ltd. and its many licensees continue to expand the Star Wars universe. Since new information might become available, it may be necessary to revoke a "comprehensive article's" status. A forum will be used to nominate articles that have fallen out-of-date. Members of the EduCorps will then post a warning template on that page, and a grace period of one week will be instituted in which the article can be improved. If there is a significant amount of new information, it is likely that once updated, the article will become eligible for Good article status, and thereby ineligible for Comprehensive article status.

READ THIS FIRST!

An article must&hellip;


 * 1) &hellip;be well-written and detailed.
 * 2) &hellip;be unbiased, non-point of view.
 * 3) &hellip;be sourced with all available sources and appearances.
 * 4) &hellip;follow the Manual of Style, Layout Guide, and all other policies on Wookieepedia. This is, of course, within reason. If a topic only has a very limited degree of content that cannot be divided up into the relevant article sections, it is not required that it follow the Layout Guide precisely. This is to be judged on a case-by-case basis.
 * 5) &hellip;following the review process, be stable, i.e., does not change significantly from day to day and is not the subject of ongoing edit wars. This does not apply to vandalism and protection or semi-protection as a result of vandalism.
 * 6) &hellip;not be tagged with any sort of improvement tags (i.e. more sources, expand, etc).
 * 7) &hellip;have no redlinks.
 * 8) &hellip;have all relevant canon information presented.
 * 9) &hellip;be completely referenced for all available material and sources. See Sourcing for more information. While this is not required for an article possessing a singular source, it is encouraged, as it provides both uniformity and a good infrastructure should the topic be referenced in any future materials.
 * 10) &hellip;have all quotes and images sourced.
 * 11) &hellip;provide at least one relevant quote on the article if available.
 * 12) &hellip;include a "Behind the scenes" section for in-universe articles.
 * 13) &hellip;counting the introduction, the article body, and "Behind the scenes" material, must not exceed 250 words in length (not including captions, quotes, or headers, etc). Any articles exceeding the limit should be taken to the Good article nominations page for consideration.
 * 14) &hellip;if the nominated article reaches 200 words or greater, the nominator must either provide an intro or draft an intro and provide a link to the revision in the nomination, showing that the intro does not elevate the article over 250 words. Exceptions can be made for articles wherein the majority of the text is in the "Behind the scenes" section.

How to nominate:


 * 1) First, nominate an article you find is worthy of comprehensive status, putting it at the bottom of the list below. Nominated articles must meet all thirteen requirements stated above.
 * 2) Add CAnom at the top of the article you are nominating.
 * 3) Be sure to place sign in the "Nominated by" line when the nomination is posted for voting.
 * 4) Others will object to the nomination if they disagree that the article is good enough; they will then supply reasons for doing so, and ways to improve the article in accordance with the established rules.
 * 5) Nominators and supporters will adjust the article until the objectors (with reasonable objections) are satisfied. Objectors may also make alterations&mdash;if there is any reason for contention on a given point, it should be settled in a civil manner in the nomination field itself.
 * 6) Users may not vote on their own articles.
 * 7) There is no limit to the amount of nominations a given user can submit at any given time.

How to vote:


 * 1) Before doing anything, be sure to read the article completely, keeping a sharp eye out for mistakes.
 * 2) Afterward, compare the article to the criteria listed above, and then either support or object the article's nomination.
 * 3) *If you object, please supply concrete reasons for doing so, and how it can be improved.
 * 4) As stated above, any objections will be looked upon by the nominator, supporters, and anyone willing to improve the article, and action will be taken to please the objectors. Do not strike other users' objections; it is up to the objector to review the changes and strike if they are satisfied.
 * 5) There are several ways in which an article can receive the required number of votes. Within a 48-hour period of nomination, only EduCorps votes will count towards the total, although anyone may choose to vote in that window. If two members of the EduCorps support a nomination in that window, and there are no outstanding objections, the article can be considered a "Comprehensive article" and be tagged with the template 48 hours after the initial nomination.  The talk page will also be tagged with the CA template. When the 48 hours are up, any user's votes will contribute towards the total. If one EduCorps member has voted for an article after a week, three regular votes will be required. After the 48 hour period, an article can still also pass with just two EduCorps votes.
 * 6) Once a nomination is successful, it will be placed on the Comprehensive article list. Instructions on how to archive nominations, successful or otherwise, can be found here. Anyone can archive a nomination&mdash;just make sure it has the correct number of votes, has been nominated for at least a week (or 48 hours if there are two EC votes), and that there are absolutely no outstanding objections. If you are not sure how to do this, just ask, and someone will likely be more than willing to help you. Also, if you think you can slip one past us, think again&mdash;someone is always watching you.

All nominations will be considered idle and are subject to instantaneous removal by EduCorps members if objections are not addressed, or at least not answered, after a period of 1 week.

Please remember to archive your nomination beforehand if you plan on taking it to the Good Article Nominations page.

Argauun

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 10:32, November 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Never thought, that I would do a species...

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 17:30, November 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:00, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Are you sure it is not Aarguun? Also, is Talia Moonseeker described at all? --Eyrezer 08:50, November 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *Sir, no sir. The only mentions is as follows: Talia Moonseeker, a young Argauun only four months into her Jedi Knighthood, was kneeling beside her fallen former Master, Va'too, head bowed.. That is all about the species in the whole book.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 13:51, November 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) I think you should email Miller and ask her if this was intentionally a separate species. There's an email function on her website and she responds to most messages promptly. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 22:13, November 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) *This would be possible. However, I do not think it is neccessary. There is no species which is written so similiar that there is an error. You're welcome to do it, my own e-mail system has some problems and I don't know how it works.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 13:08, November 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) **I think in this case it's absolutely necessary. The difference between this and Aargauun is a single repeated letter. As it stands, even if this wasn't a mistake, the article at least needs a youmay tag. I've sent her an email asking, so we'll probably have this settled shortly. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 00:21, November 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) ***Ah sorry I was mislead by Eyrezer's spelling above. In that case, the check is neccessary and thanks for doing that. Let's see what she says and then we'll discuss the youmay tag.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 11:20, November 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) ****I totally agree with Naru, and had also emailed her as well asking Leland on the Dark Horse forums. --Eyrezer
 * 8) Bob
 * 9) * The length of Talia Moonseeker's article suggests at least a bit more description on her is warranted. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 23:17, November 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) **About her only two sentences. About her species, there is nothing more said or described, you can believe me.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:24, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) ***The novel does specify that Argauuns have heads, and that when experiencing grief they hang their head. --Eyrezer 06:03, November 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * 12) ****You can mention something like that? Wow, you can see I do not write species that often. Added and thanks.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 14:45, November 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * 13) ***** Besides this, you need to give a bit of detail on what Moonraker did in the book. From the lead to her own article, something like this: " Four months after her promotion, Moonseeker and her former Master were sent on a mission to rescue Jedi Master Obi-Wan Kenobi, Padawan Anakin Skywalker, and Senator Padmé Amidala from execution on the planet Geonosis. The rescue mission turned into the opening battle of the Clone Wars, and although Moonseeker survived it, her former Master was killed. Shaken by this loss, she mourned her deceased mentor on the battlefield." In other words, notable members of the species can't just be mentioned; their lives need to be summarized too. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 14:15, November 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 14) ******Please try it now.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 18:36, November 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * OK, one other thing: Do we know this is a species? Does the source say? It could be that this is merely a planetary demonym (like Corellian or Alderaanian), so I just wanted to make sure. If the source is unclear, you should rewrite accordingly and reclassify as an Category:Undefined social groups. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 04:27, November 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) **It is not clearly said. However, I think we should wait until Miller gives an answer to Naru. Maybe all get's cleared up then.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:05, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Gareth (TK329's son)

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 20:44, November 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: All tweets are canon.

(1 ECs/4 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1) Indeed.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 13:52, November 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:29, November 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 00:58, November 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4)  Master Jonathan  &mdash; Jedi Council Chambers Sunday, November 13, 2011, 21:03 UTC
 * 5) Assuming Trayus is satisfied. Also, seeing one of the facts you cited has made me bring up an SH thread about the genders of some past stormtrooper CA's I worked on. Hanzo Hasashi 22:41, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Axinal
 * 2) * Kind of nitpicky since it's implied in the word "son," but you don't clarify that he's male in the body. Otherwise, nice work.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 21:47, November 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Rectified. Look's like you've got yourself a catchphrase there, Axe. ;) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 00:35, November 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Heh, I always wanted one of those. :P&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 00:58, November 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) Trayus
 * 6) *You should refer to "the Sickness" by the more time-appropriate term, Imperial bioweapons Project I71A. Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 00:55, November 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) **Went with Blackwing virus. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 20:22, November 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) From the Council Chambers:
 * 9) * Can you use Twitter to source to individual tweets?
 * 10) **Done. Do you want me to list what each tweet establishes in the notes? NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 20:22, November 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) ***I don't think that's necessary; it's fine the way it is now.  Master Jonathan &mdash; Jedi Council Chambers Sunday, November 13, 2011, 21:03 UTC
 * 12) * Can you give some kind of real-world time reference in the BTS, e.g. "leading up to the Death Troopers release in " or something like that?
 * 13) **Done. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 20:22, November 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 14) *Otherwise, looks nice.  Master Jonathan &mdash; Jedi Council Chambers Saturday, November 12, 2011, 01:28 UTC

Comments

Forr

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:23, November 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Yes they look pretty same, because it is the same small amount of info. And no, there are no spoken lines about him in the novel.

(1 ECs/2 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:21, November 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 13:07, November 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * Do: a deer. A female deer. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 02:55, November 16, 2011 (UTC)

Object Comments
 * Same objections again. I'll go through them all again once those objections have been taken care of. -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:31, November 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * Done.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 13:30, November 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * I don't see that the last sentence of the BTS is necessary. You could simply say he was "briefly mentioned" in the first sentence. Otherwise, nice work.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 21:54, November 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * That was part of my attempt to let the article look a little bit more different. Adressed and thanks for the review.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 11:14, November 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * Yes, of course.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 14:24, November 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) Jang
 * 2) * Reload your infobox
 * 3) **Done.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:55, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) * If he's a clone trooper, mentioning that he's a Human male is quite redundant here. And if he's a clone commando, it would be the same. I believe in this intro/bio paragrah, you can mention that he's was only a clone commando, and avoid mentioning the term clone trooper for consistency.
 * 5) **See above.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:55, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) ***Still remains  JangFett  (Talk) 17:10, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) * "However, Forr was killed during the war and later mourned, along with all other clone commandos who had died until that point, by the Mandalorian training sergeants Kal Skirata and Walon Vau in 19 BBY." I can see this sentence being separated into two sentences because as it stands it can be confusing. Mention that he died sometime during the war in one sentence, and then go ahead and say his death was mourned by ___
 * 8) * Is there any reason why you're mentioning his height in the can-approved intro? Creating a section wouldn't be too much for this. Also, for the nickname in the intro, his nickname is Forr, not "Forr" (notice the quotation marks). Keep the punctuation out of the wiki bold formatting.  JangFett  (Talk) 20:42, November 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) **See above.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:55, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) ***Still remains  JangFett  (Talk) 17:10, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * The book specifically states that he is a clone commando?-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:21, November 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * Yep.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 13:46, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

Baris

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:32, November 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: I hate something like that. Authors name seven characters in two lines and never mention them again. And people like me have to write articles about it. "Sigh"

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) Good job.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:37, November 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 21:58, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Object Comments
 * Same objections from your other clone. -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:30, November 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * Done.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 13:28, November 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * Infobox still needs to be reloaded. :P -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:24, November 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * Aaaaannnnddd done :P  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 14:32, November 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) Jang
 * 2) * If he's a clone trooper, mentioning that he's a Human male is quite redundant here. And if he's a clone commando, it would be the same. I believe in this intro/bio paragrah, you can mention that he's was only a clone commando, and avoid mentioning the term clone trooper for consistency.
 * 3) **See above.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:58, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Still remains  JangFett  (Talk) 17:12, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) * "However, Baris was killed during the war and later mourned, along with all other clone commandos who had died until that point, by the Mandalorian training sergeants Kal Skirata and Walon Vau in 19 BBY." I can see this sentence being separated into two sentences because as it stands it can be confusing. Mention that he died sometime during the war in one sentence, and then go ahead and say his death was mourned by ___. Also be sure to paraphrase your wording, Lee.
 * 6) **See above.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:58, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) ***Still remains  JangFett  (Talk) 17:12, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) * Is there any reason why you're mentioning his height in the can-approved intro? Creating a section wouldn't be too much for this. Also, for the nickname in the intro, his nickname is Baris, not "Baris" (notice the quotation marks). Keep the punctuation out of the wiki bold formatting.  JangFett  (Talk) 20:42, November 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) **See above.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:58, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) ***Lee, I did not say to remove the quotation marks.  JangFett  (Talk) 17:12, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Red (clone)

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:37, November 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: I hate Karen Traviss

(1 ECs/2 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 19:39, November 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Wait, we have to read the articles before we vote? NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 20:32, November 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 22:01, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Object Comments
 * 1) We all hate her
 * 2) * You'll need to reload the infobox.
 * 3) **Done.
 * 4) * And there is some infobox-exclusive material.
 * 5) **Should be gone. Otherwise please say what, as I don't recognize anything missing.
 * 6) ***Cool stuff. Just mention that he's human and the years that he died. It's been a while since I read Order 66, but I'm pretty sure that you'll have to find a different source for the years of the war. Probably something like The New Essential Chronology would work.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:57, November 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) ****Done and no, Order 66 sources that.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 18:33, November 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) *****Ok. Cool beans.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 19:39, November 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) *Otherwise, good job.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:45, November 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) **Thanks for the review.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:52, November 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) Jang
 * 12) * If he's a clone trooper, mentioning that he's a Human male is quite redundant here. And if he's a clone commando, it would be the same. I believe in this intro/bio paragrah, you can mention that he's was only a clone commando, and avoid mentioning the term clone trooper for consistency.
 * 13) **See above.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:59, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 14) ***Still remains  JangFett  (Talk) 17:13, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 15) * "However, Red was killed during the war—which raged between 22 and 19 BBY—and was later mourned, along with many other clone commandos who had been killed in action, by the Mandalorian training sergeants Kal Skirata and Walon Vau." I can see this sentence being separated into two sentences because as it stands it can be confusing. Mention that he died sometime during the war in one sentence, and then go ahead and say his death was mourned by ___. Also be sure to paraphrase your wording, Lee.
 * 16) **See above.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:59, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 17) ***Still remains  JangFett  (Talk) 17:13, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 18) * Is there any reason why you're mentioning his height in the can-approved intro? Creating a section wouldn't be too much for this. Also, for the nickname in the intro, his nickname is Red, not "Red" (notice the quotation marks). Keep the punctuation out of the wiki bold formatting.  JangFett  (Talk) 20:42, November 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 19) **See above.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:59, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 20) ***Lee, I did not say to remove them.  JangFett  (Talk) 17:13, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Kef

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:46, November 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Last one (for today :P)

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 19:40, November 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 22:07, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Object Comments
 * 1) There'll be another time...
 * 2) * Same objections as above.
 * 3) **See above.
 * 4) ***See above :P  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 18:34, November 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) * This seems to be a copy of the others. You even accidently called him "Red" once. :P You'll need to go through and reword the article some so it doesn't sound like an exact copy. -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:50, November 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) **Yes, it's pretty hard to write one article seven times. I tried to reword some parts, please take a look and say if it's fine.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:56, November 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) ***I know from experience that it can be a royal pain. Good job! Just take one more look above.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:59, November 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) Jang
 * 9) * If he's a clone trooper, mentioning that he's a Human male is quite redundant here. And if he's a clone commando, it would be the same. I believe in this intro/bio paragrah, you can mention that he's was only a clone commando, and avoid mentioning the term clone trooper for consistency.
 * 10) **See above.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 16:02, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) ***Still remains  JangFett  (Talk) 17:14, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 12) * "Kef was killed, however, during the war—which lasted between 22 and 19 BBY—and was later mourned, along with all other clone commandos who had been killed since the start of the war, by the Mandalorian training sergeants Kal Skirata and Walon Vau." I can see this sentence being separated into two sentences because as it stands it can be confusing. Mention that he died sometime during the war in one sentence, and then go ahead and say his death was mourned by ___. Also be sure to paraphrase your wording, Lee.
 * 13) **See above.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 16:02, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 14) ***Still remains  JangFett  (Talk) 17:14, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 15) * Is there any reason why you're mentioning his height in the can-approved intro? Creating a section wouldn't be too much for this. Also, for the nickname in the intro, his nickname is Kef, not "Kef" (notice the quotation marks). Keep the punctuation out of the wiki bold formatting.  JangFett  (Talk) 20:48, November 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 16) **See above.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 16:02, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 17) ***Lee, I did not say to remove them.  JangFett  (Talk) 17:14, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Silver Falcon

 * Nominated by: -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:29, November 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Quick appearance. No quote. WP:TOR.

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 01:34, November 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2)  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 11:05, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Could you tell us the year Korr entered the Falcon? Other than that, nice work.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 22:37, November 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *Yeah, I meant to add that before. Good catch!-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:22, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Bespin Dancer

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 11:29, November 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: I can't resist.

(1 ECs/2 Users/3 Total)
Support Object
 * 1) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 21:11, November 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 03:33, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) <- Omicron (Leave a message at the BEEP! ) 15:53, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Comments
 * I won't strike my objection over this, but was it confirmed to be a capital ship? If so, that info should be in the body; if not, the article would need a less specific category.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 21:26, November 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nope, we only know that it was part of a battle group. So it could also be a supply ship etc.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:28, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * Okay. I've changed the category to Category:Galactic Republic starships.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 15:41, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * Okay with me.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:51, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Breha Organa's cousin

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 11:38, November 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Quotes would be enough for a GA, but the info. Well I'll live it to you, if you think there is enough info for a P&T and bio, I'll be glad to do it. For now: 146 words.

(1 ECs/2 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 21:04, November 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Just take a quick look at my copy-edit. Good job.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 03:37, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 00:01, November 21, 2011 (UTC)

Object

Comments
 * Article looks pretty good, though I would advise you to be more attentive to grammar, spelling, and redirects.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 21:04, November 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * Allright.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:27, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Battle of New Cov

 * Nominated by: -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:42, November 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Quick little battle I've been wanting to do for a while now.

(1 ECs/2 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 13:47, November 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 20:48, November 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) What's wrong with that? I'd like to know. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 23:39, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Axinal
 * 2) * I'm not sure it's relevant to put the info about the Star Cruiser in the Outcome field in the infobox; unless the Cruiser's arrival marked the end of the battle, it doesn't really belong. Looks nice, otherwise.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 03:06, November 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **The arrival of the Cruiser is pretty much the last mention about the battle in the book, but I guess that isn't really an "outcome." Thanks for the review!-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:08, November 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) ***My pleasure. Nice work.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 20:48, November 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) Some people wanna fill the CAN with silly battles
 * 6) * "Battle of New Cov" is a conjectural title because it wasn't called that in the source. "Battle off" is not the same thing and it isn't a proper noun. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 22:03, November 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) **Fixed.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:54, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

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Tasjon

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 22:23, November 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Back to the HoloNet.

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 * 1) -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 23:29, November 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2)  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 10:59, November 16, 2011 (UTC)

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Droat milk

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 22:23, November 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: It's cerulean, I'm sure.

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 * 1) -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 23:30, November 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Daala, Tarkin, milk...  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 10:59, November 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Menkooroo 08:20, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

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 * An indication of the year/timeframe is in order, else the only info in the infobox doesn't appear in the body. Menkooroo 12:54, November 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * Done. Please remember to look over Ven and see if I satisfied your objections. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 23:09, November 16, 2011 (UTC)

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Battle of Kessel (Clone Wars)

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 12:16, November 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: I...just...can't...resist

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 * 1) -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 16:11, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

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 * The body needs to have the Clone Wars mentioned in there since it is mentioned in the infobox.
 * Adressed.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 18:33, November 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * The Appearances section needs a 1stm template.
 * Very stupid, done.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 18:33, November 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * I also gave you a redlink that you'll have to write.
 * Per this I would rather prefer not to.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 18:33, November 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * I still think that it needs to be written. Just because a Good article doesn't have an article for that group, doesn't mean that this shouldn't either. I think that that Good article needs to have that group red-linked, but that'll be something for the ACs to talk about. For this, if they were fighting an anti-Republic group, then it needs to have an article. It's still canon, even if it's only mentioned. If you have some other reason of why it shouldn't be written, please let me know.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 02:25, November 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * Created.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:04, November 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * Please note my copy-edit to see what I fixed up.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:36, November 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * Thank you.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 18:33, November 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * Good job. :) -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 16:11, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

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White Panther

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 18:58, November 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Hm.

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 * 1) Aleena awesomeness.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 16:12, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

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 * "...the name of the retrofitted podracer of Aleena podracer pilot." This sentence sounds like it ends right in the middle of something. Could you fix it so it sounds more complete and understandable?
 * Fixed.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk
 * Again, this article needs a 1stm template.
 * Added.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:00, November 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * Otherwise, good job.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 02:32, November 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * Thanks.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:00, November 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * Rubedo
 * He was not "mentioned" in the book. He appeared on a viewscreen.
 * Boba Fett recognizing Kador and the craft should be in the article.
 * The name isn't italicized in the source? Do you have a physical copy? NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 21:51, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

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Slotern

 * Nominated by: -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 04:02, November 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Continuing on with WP:VG CAnoms.

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 * 1)  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 14:33, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

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Director of Sienar Marketing Relations

 * Nominated by: -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 04:26, November 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:No quotes.

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 * 1)  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 14:33, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

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Vendaran

 * Nominated by: Eyrezer 10:28, November 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

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 * 1) -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:26, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

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 * Any post-New Republic history that can be gleaned from the Atlas? Since they're colonists, we can't assume anything about the pre-NR stuff, but for that period and later (or at least post-NR), there might be a factoid or two in the maps. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 14:49, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

Unidentified resistance group

 * Nominated by: -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 16:35, November 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:More from TFU II databank for WP:VG.

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 * 1)  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 19:16, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

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Unidentified joyrider

 * Nominated by: -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 17:02, November 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Every little bit is canon.

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 * 1)  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 19:17, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

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Casieck Akinslesh

 * Nominated by: Tinwe (comlink) 10:19, November 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Might as well nominate this, since this is all the info we have on the character at this point.

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 * 1) Exactly what I thought.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 10:58, November 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 21:53, November 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Good work, Tinwe. :) -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:37, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

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 * 1) The fact that Orykan was temporarily assigned to Tahl in the aftermath of Akinsleesh's death is relevant enough to warrant at least a small mention. QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 22:05, November 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *Addressed. Tinwe (comlink) 09:10, November 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) The infobox needs to be reloaded. -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 02:10, November 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) *I hope I don't sound too stupid, but how do you do that? Tinwe (comlink) 09:10, November 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) **Nevermind, I think I figured it out. Addressed, I believe. Tinwe (comlink) 09:19, November 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) ***Heh, no worries. The first time someone asked me to reload the infobox, I had no clue what they were talking about. :P -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:37, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

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 * There's possibly enough info for a P&T section, but it would turn out pretty repetitive if you ask me. I'll let you decide. Tinwe (comlink) 10:19, November 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * Added Star Wars: Jedi—The Dark Side 2 to Appearances section, I forgot that Akinslesh was indirectly mentioned there as Orykan's master. Tinwe (comlink) 09:10, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

Battle of T'olan

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 21:39, November 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Cause here I go~ agaaaaaaain~!

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 * 1)  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 12:01, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

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 * The infobox needs to be reloaded.
 * Done. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 07:03, November 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * In the infobox, it appears that you say that the battle occurred during the years 22 and 21 BBY. Yet in the body, you make no mention of a date other than that it was early in the Clone Wars. If the battle occurred for both years, please state that in the body. If not, please fix the infobox.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 02:06, November 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * Remedied. It's circa 22-21 BBY. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 07:03, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

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Irid

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 22:35, November 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: There's a reason Big Bird's the only one you ever see nowadays.

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 * 1)  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 12:02, November 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Beware! The Birds!-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:33, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

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 * 1) You need to mention that their plumage was yellow, as stated in the infobox and quote. Good job.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:59, November 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *Added. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 07:00, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

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Odin Nesloor

 * Nominated by: -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 03:07, November 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Since I'm not sure if I'll have much time to edit in December, I've decided to start my end of the barn-burner early. Fred hasn't transferred the BB page to the SH yet, but I'll add my sign up information as soon as he does. Hopefully no one objects to this early start, and here we go: Barner-burner 3: Project The Phantom Menace first nomination!

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 * Based on the comments in the visual dictionary, I think that this guy's appearance in the film is working in the garage before the podrace, not walking the streets of Mos Espa. There's also some general info about the podracing mechanics next to his picture in the visual dictionary that seems like valid info for this article. The Visual Dictionary is definitely more than for this guy. Menkooroo 03:32, November 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * I've added the info about him being in the garage, but I have to disagree about his mechanic aspect. The VD pictures him along with some other beings in the podrace section. IMO, that doesn't confirm that he was a mechanic. He could have just been wondering around the hangar at the time. And because it doesn't specifically mention any of the mechanics, I still think that it's still just a . Does that make any sense?-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 04:24, November 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * Not really, no. The info about the mechanics is text that accompanies pictures of him and three other people. It's basically a caption to their pictures. One would be hard-pressed to argue that it isn't them the text is talking about.

As far as vs. goes, I've always treated a picture & indirect mention-combo as a direct mention. A picture of Han & Leia with text only reading "Jaina's parents" would be a pretty direct mention of both Han & Leia, IMO. That's my interpretation and isn't set in stone, but the Visual Dictionary is, at the very least, an indirect mention for Odin. Menkooroo 07:49, November 20, 2011 (UTC) Comments
 * As for the first part, you're right. I guess I just got a little overzealous in my battle against speculation. :P I've added that he was a podrace mechanic at the time of the Boonta Eve Classic, but that's about it. The paragraph that accompanies these mechanics says that "often" they are experts and they are "largely" unsung geniuses. IMO, this sounds like it could apply to some, but not all of, the mechanics. Since it doesn't necessarily say that "the above mechanics were geniuses and experts," I don't think we can say that Nesloor was an expert and a genius. As for the Po and Mo thing, I've changed it to Mo. Even if it hasn't been made a rule, that makes sense.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 20:29, November 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * A quick thing to think about: There is a miniature from Star Wars Miniatures: Bounty Hunters called the Dark Hellion Swoop Gang Member that looks like he is based on this guy's appearance. What do you think that should be done about this? At the very least there should probably be a behind the scenes note.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  03:21, November 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * Just from what you've said, I think the best thing to do would be to just place a BTS note about it. Even in real life, there are many people who look like one another and are two separate people. But, do we have any pictures of this particular miniature so I could take a better look at it?-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 03:25, November 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * Here is an image of him that I just uploaded.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  03:38, November 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * Okay, thanks. I'll add that to the BTS.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 03:47, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

Spear Squadron

 * Nominated by:  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 15:50, November 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Needed doing. Similar in content to Ebon Squadron.

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 * 1) Salutations
 * 2) *Why are you linking to the gallery for a reference here? That doesn't say anything about indoctrination or the Navy as far as I can see. If that information is on the card, then the ref should be to the card. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 20:22, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

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Unidentified gladiator 1

 * Nominated by: -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:20, November 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Finally deciding to go on an idea from Fred, I'm starting my CAnom sweep of the Atlas.

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Unidentified gladiator 2

 * Nominated by: -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:32, November 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Number 2.

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Police probe

 * Nominated by: Coruscantfan 21:57, November 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Their version of big brother?

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