Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Orley Vanicus


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Orley Vanicus

 * Nominated by: -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 17:20, 17 September 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

(5 Inqs/0 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1) -  Cavalier One ( Squadron channel ) 11:25, 18 September 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) No complaints from this guy.  Greyman ( Talk ) 12:57, 1 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 3)  Graestan ( Talk ) 22:47, 1 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) I was waiting for someone to tackle this guy. This is also assuming that wikia will fix the quotes. Cull Tremayne 03:53, 8 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 5)  Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 18:24, 8 October 2008 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) *From the squadron briefing of Cavalier One:
 * 2) * A little context on why Qel-Droma was leading pirates and turned to the Sith would be appreciated. The article goes from him as Jedi aiding the Republic to a Jedi against the Republic with no explanation. - Cavalier One ( Squadron channel ) 10:16, 18 September 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) **Added a tiny bit. Let me know if you'd like more. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 10:52, 18 September 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) From Graestan the Cruel:
 * 5) * "Hero" is a bit POV.
 * 6) **Added "was considered" to the relevant entries, though I really would rather not.
 * 7) * "good at" is, also, sadly.
 * 8) **Changed it to "specialized at." Does that work?
 * 9) * Ulic's switching of sides should be mentioned in the intro, for context.
 * 10) **Done.
 * 11) * Kun killed Vodo; please clarify in the intro.
 * 12) **Good spot.
 * 13) * I know you'll get better scans in coming months, but in the meantime Image:Vanicus at Foerost.jpg and Image:Vanicus at Onderon.jpg have visible frame that should be cropped out.
 * 14) **I've asked Redemption for rescans though I'm not sure what his status is these days in terms of activity. In the meantime I've cropped those two better.
 * 15) * Was it really the bulk of the Republic Navy Vanicus sent to Kemplex IX? Does the cited source state it, or does another?
 * 16) **Netus says the "main Republic fleet," so I'm not sure if that qualifies, really. I can change it if you wish.
 * 17) * Graestan ( Talk ) 23:05, 30 September 2008 (UTC)
 * 18) **Thanks for the review. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 12:27, 1 October 2008 (UTC)

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