Wookieepedia:Good article nominations

 This page is for the nomination of good articles. This is not a way to showcase the articles of your favorite characters, spaceships, or the like. For a list of Good articles, see Category:Wookieepedia good articles.

A Good article is an article that adheres to quality standards, but cannot reach FA status due to its limited content.


 * Good article nominations history
 * Good article checklist
 * Good article nomination rules

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An article must&hellip;


 * 1) &hellip;be well-written and detailed.
 * 2) &hellip;be unbiased, non-point of view.
 * 3) &hellip;be sourced with all available sources and appearances.
 * 4) &hellip;follow the Manual of Style, Layout Guide, and all other policies on Wookieepedia.
 * 5) &hellip;following the review process, be stable, i.e., does not change significantly from day to day and is not the subject of ongoing edit wars. This does not apply to vandalism and protection or semi-protection as a result of vandalism.
 * 6) &hellip;not be tagged with any sort of improvement tags (i.e. more sources, expand, etc).
 * 7) &hellip;have a proper lead that gives a good summary of the topic if the length of the article supports it. This is essential in articles over 1000 words but may not be appropriate on articles with limited content.
 * 8) &hellip;have no more than 3 redlinks for articles less than 500 words, no more than 5 redlinks for articles 500 words or more, and no redlinks in the introduction, infobox, or any templates.
 * 9) &hellip;have significant information, especially a biography for character articles. For articles under 1000 words in length, comprehensive detail is required with all information covered from all sources and appearances. For articles over 1000 words, broad coverage addressing all major aspects of the topic is sufficient.
 * 10) &hellip;be completely referenced for all available material and sources. See Sourcing for more information.
 * 11) &hellip;have all quotes and images sourced.
 * 12) &hellip;provide at least one quote on the article if available. A leading quote at the beginning of the article would be preferred, though not required if no quotes are available. Although quotes may be placed in the body of the article, a maximum of one quote is allowed at the beginning of each section.
 * 13) &hellip;ideally include a "personality and traits" section on all character articles if information is available.
 * 14) &hellip;ideally include a "powers and abilities" section on relevant character articles, especially for Force-sensitive characters where said powers and/or abilities are stipulated.
 * 15) &hellip;include a "Behind the scenes" section.
 * 16) &hellip;include a reasonable number of images of sufficient quality to illustrate the article, if said images are available.
 * 17) &hellip;counting the introduction and "Behind the scenes" material, be at least 250 words long (not including captions, quotes, or headers, etc). Alternatively, a comprehensive article cannot exceed 3000 words.

How to nominate:


 * 1) First, nominate an article you find is worthy of good status, putting it at the bottom of the list below. Nominated articles must meet all seventeen requirements stated above.
 * 2) Add GAnom at the top of the article you are nominating.
 * 3) Be sure to place sign in the "Nominated by" line when the nomination is posted for voting.
 * 4) Others will object to the nomination if they disagree that the article is good enough; they will then supply reasons for doing so, and ways to improve the article (errors, style, organization, images, notability, sources).
 * 5) Supporters adjust the article until the objectors (with reasonable objections) are satisfied.

How to vote:


 * 1) Before doing anything, be sure to read the article completely, keeping a sharp eye out for mistakes.
 * 2) Afterward, compare the article to the criteria listed above, and then either support or object the article's nomination.
 * 3) *If you object, please supply concrete reasons for doing so, and how it can be improved.
 * 4) As stated above, any objections will be looked upon by the nominator, supporters, and anyone willing to improve the article, and action will be taken to please the objectors. Do not strike other users' objections; it is up to the objector to review the changes and strike if they are satisfied.
 * 5) Once a nomination has a total of five votes, with at least three votes coming from AgriCorps or Inquisitorius members&mdash;one of which must be an AgriCorps vote&mdash;after at least a week since it was nominated (beginning the day of its nomination) and no objections (or the objections have been stricken or overridden), the article will be considered a "Good article" and tagged with the template. The talk page will also be tagged with the GA template. Alternatively, if a nomination receives a total of five AgriCorps votes with no outstanding objections before one week has passed, the nomination will be considered successful.
 * 6) The article is placed on the Good article list.

All nominations will be considered idle and are subject to removal by AgriCorps vote if objections are not addressed after a period of 3 weeks.

Good article nominations
To nominate an article for Good article status, list it here. Nominated articles must meet all seventeen requirements stated above. If an article has a total of five votes, with at least three votes coming from AgriCorps or Inquisitorius members&mdash;one of which must be an AgriCorps vote&mdash;after at least a week since it was nominated (beginning the day of its nomination) and no objections (or the objections have been stricken or overridden), the article will be considered a "Good article" and tagged with the template. The talk page will also be tagged with the GA template. For complete instructions on archiving nominations please see here. Also remember to add GAnom at the top of the article you are nominating.

Tandun III

 * Nominated by:Apotheoses Jedi 20:40, November 12, 2009 (UTC-6)
 * Nomination comments:

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Support

Object
 * 1) Please go through and read all of the nomination rules at the top of this page. At the very least, the entire article needs to be properly sourced, not just a few random infobox items. Also, your intro is rather disproportionate to the article's size.  CC7567  (talk) 04:24, November 13, 2009 (UTC)

Comments

Llaban

 * Nominated by:  IFYLOFD  ( You will pay the price for your lack of vision! ) 04:11, November 14, 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Floyd strikes again!

(1 ACs/2 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 10:41, November 23, 2009 (UTC)
 * 2)  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  23:59, November 28, 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) Empress, I'm receiving another vote! --Skippy Farlstendoiro 11:16, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Soresu, with a legato touch
 * 2) * Its unclear in the intro how he goes from Rebel leader to Tetan commander. Please clarify.
 * 3) **Addressed.
 * 4) *** Still confusing. You need to mention the amnesty, otherwise there seems to be no motive. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 05:21, November 20, 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) ****Addressed.
 * 6) * In the body, you haven't explained his motives for joining the Tetan forces, which according ot the quote is amnesty.
 * 7) **Addressed.
 * 8) * The large Sith fleet appeared and the sky, Doesn't make sense. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 09:30, November 17, 2009 (UTC)
 * 9) **Bah! Addressed.  IFYLOFD  ( You will pay the price for your lack of vision! ) 03:17, November 20, 2009 (UTC)
 * 10) Skippy, with a single objection
 * 11) * As seen in pic, Llaban had some tattoos, war paints or marks on his face. If their nature is known, this should be mentioned under P&T; if not, at least under BtS. --Skippy Farlstendoiro 14:05, November 24, 2009 (UTC)
 * 12) **Addressed.  IFYLOFD  ( You will pay the price for your lack of vision! ) 00:01, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

Comments

Saren Llalik

 * Nominated by: Skippy Farlstendoiro 15:36, November 17, 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Meet the designer of Lobot's cybernetic implant, according to West End Games.

(2 ACs/2 Users/4 Total)
Support Object
 * 1) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 05:22, November 20, 2009 (UTC)
 * 2)  Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 16:25, November 23, 2009 (UTC)
 * 3)  JangFett  (Talk) 13:52, November 26, 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) Very clean now. --Eyrezer 00:06, November 29, 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) Soresu
 * 2) * The intro is way too short. 1 sentence for an 750 word (guess) article?
 * 3) * Expand on some of her other appearances in the BTS.
 * 4) * Any other quotes? SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 04:52, November 18, 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) **All done. --Skippy Farlstendoiro 08:18, November 18, 2009 (UTC)
 * 6) Skippy, please go back and check the sizes of your paragraphs. For instance, I see a short sentence for the intro, followed by two paragraphs. This occurs in the bio as well. Please keep the sizes consistent.  JangFett  (Talk) 21:34, November 18, 2009 (UTC)
 * 7) *Other than quotes, all paragraphs are now 3-4 lines, except for two (one 2-liner, one 5-liner) that I cannot imagine how to avoid. --Skippy Farlstendoiro 09:26, November 19, 2009 (UTC)
 * 8) The Grand Master
 * 9) * "Alliance General Airen Cracken considered himself to be in debt with Llalik." Why/how was he in debt to her? Without this information, this statement's placement in the intro doesn't make sense; it doesn't really fit in.
 * 10) **Done. --Skippy Farlstendoiro 14:38, November 23, 2009 (UTC)
 * 11) * "She considered Nashiak was wrong serving the Empire, probably not considering the Imperial's atrocities." The meaning here is unclear; I assume you are trying to say that Saren thought that her sister wasn't considering the Imperial atrocities, but this is somewhat ambiguous. Also, why the uncertainty here? "Probably?" Was it the reason, or wasn't it? If it can't be confirmed, it must be removed.
 * 12) **Done. --Skippy Farlstendoiro 14:38, November 23, 2009 (UTC)
 * 13) *More to come. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 15:28, November 20, 2009 (UTC)
 * 14) A few more
 * 15) * Could you make an article for Director of Prosthetic Design?
 * 16) **Done.
 * 17) * Early in the bio, you say she joined the Rebellion with her oldest brother, and later, in the third paragraph, you say she was secretly a member. If she joined secretly, this should be said upon the first mention of her joining the Alliance. Also, did her oldest brother join secretly, too? (If the circumstances of her brother's enlistment is unknown, then don't worry about it)
 * 18) **Modified; info on older brother is scarce.
 * 19) * "an engineer with no known political ideas..." This isn't completely clear: do you mean no political affiliations? Either way, this seems to be superfluous. Is it really necessary?
 * 20) **Modified. OS suggests Alaras's views and actions are important for Alliance Intelligence; I've already ommitted all the really superfluous info.
 * 21) * "At that point, she was well-respected because of her engineering work that provided the soldiers with new items." What new items? Do you still mean cyborg technologies? What soldiers? (You refer to "the soldiers", but you have yet to mention any soldiers in the bio.)
 * 22) **Modified.
 * 23) * "including alien species, security, and even forgery." How was she knowledgable in alien species? And in what kinds of security and forgery was she knowledgeable? Please clarify. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 15:11, November 23, 2009 (UTC)
 * 24) **General knowledge on specialized fields; it's a reading of her RPG stats. "Alien species 5D" is high enough to deserve a mention. --Skippy Farlstendoiro 15:31, November 23, 2009 (UTC)
 * 25) * You should probably add her connection with Nashiak (i.e. her wish for them to work together, etc.) to the P&t.
 * 26) **Done; reword if you feel it's needed.
 * 27) * You should also mention her written reports in the intro. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 15:52, November 23, 2009 (UTC)
 * 28) **Done. --Skippy Farlstendoiro 16:10, November 23, 2009 (UTC)
 * 29) Toprawa:
 * 30) *Two things. Firstly, does the source literally say that these were qualities atypical of an engineer? If not, this is technically original research and should be removed or rewritten: "She was also knowledgeable in other skills that were less common for an engineer, including alien species, security, and even forgery."
 * 31) *Secondly, concerning your referencing. You include a page number for the TABS reference but don't do so for any other reference. I don't mind this new page-number-referencing kick you guys are on, since more specific referencing is good, but if you're going to do it for one reference note in the article, you might as well do it for all of them. Please be consistent with your referencing. Either one way or another. Toprawa and Ralltiir 04:56, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

Comments

TX-21

 * Nominated by:  JangFett  (Talk) 15:19, November 21, 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Another dim-headed tactical droid. :P

(0 ACs/1 Users/1 Total)
Support
 * 1) -- Xd1358  Talk 20:07, November 21, 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Xd: Minor objection, I might read through it later.
 * 2) * Mention the Clone Wars both in the intro and the body.
 * 3) *-- Xd1358  Talk 15:20, November 21, 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) **Addressed.  JangFett  (Talk) 15:23, November 21, 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) * The only thing I noticed was that you could vary TX-21 in the body with the "droid" and/or the "tactical droid". Otherwise, great work. -- Xd1358  Talk 19:34, November 21, 2009 (UTC)
 * 6) **Addressed; thanks for the review. :)  JangFett  (Talk) 19:55, November 21, 2009 (UTC)
 * 7) Attack of the Clone
 * 8) *Mentioning the battle in both the intro and body without specifying the Republic's intention of attacking the foundry makes mentioning the battle at all close to pointless. The intro in particular does not do a very good job at this, while the body needs to be phrased better.
 * 9) *In the intro, please make it clearer that both Poggle and TX-21 confronted the Padawans.
 * 10) *"While the ongoing events continued" is extremely redundant. I've already changed this, but please keep this in mind.
 * 11) *Quote captions are not sentences.
 * 12) *The Galaxy at War info is in the infobox and yet never mentioned in the body. Please fix this.
 * 13) *"The Galactic Republic force mounted an attack on Poggle's new droid foundry, which concerned the Geonosian Archduke." Lack of clarity here.
 * 14) *"on their adversary" is not a proper English idiom.
 * 15) *"of the intruders that breached the foundry": I don't see the point of specifying the "intruders" at their second mention instead of their first.
 * 16) *Please get in the objective of the Padawans' mission.
 * 17) *"TX-21 next to Poggle the Lesser" is an image caption extremely borderlining an IU perspective. Please fix this.
 * 18) *Saying "near TX-21" is a detail that needs to have more clarification. It seems irrelevant otherwise.
 * 19) *"TX-21 showed his gratitude toward the Geonosian Archduke." How?
 * 20) *The Characteristics section is rambling a lot, and overall, you need to do a better job of linking his noteworthy actions to his characteristics.
 * 21) *"On his chest, TX-21 has bug-like markings, which fitted his role as a Geonosian adviser." Please rephrase this and find the error that should be standing out like a flashing siren.
 * 22) *"The droid made its debut": is it a "he" or "it"? Please make up your mind.
 * 23) *The reason that most of these objections seem like they're is because they are. Jang, I know that you can do a better job and that I shouldn't have to ask you to clarify anything in your writing anymore. The rest of what I have to say is what I've already said to you: please work on your proofreading skills, as a lot of these errors could have been caught by them.  CC7567  (talk) 21:04, November 22, 2009 (UTC)
 * 24) *Jang, please note that the reason I may not have checked over these and my IRC objections is because I'm waiting for you to clarify that you've fixed them. I want you to be confident that the article is perfect before I take another look.  CC7567  (talk) 18:39, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

Comments

CT-327

 * Nominated by:  JangFett  (Talk) 19:52, November 21, 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: A minor clone; part of my Rookies project.

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Object
 * 1) The Grand Master
 * 2) *I'm seeing multiple grammatical errors throughout the article.
 * 3) *"While most clone troopers stationed on the listening post were rookies, inexperienced and younger troopers, CT-327 was given the task of guarding the base outside, while the rest of the stationed clones were inside the listening post." This jumps around from one subject to the next and reads rather confusingly.
 * 4) *"While most of the clones stationed at the station were rookies, or "shinies," inexperienced and younger troopers who were pressed into service due to the need of clones in the war, the clone troopers stationed at the Republic listening post had to watch for Confederare activity in the Outer Rim and warn the Republic fleet near Kamino of any attack." Once again, this jumps around and reads rather confusingly.
 * 5) *"As he removed his visor to check the nearby object that suddenly appeared..." What nearby object? The droid that had just popped up beside him? This series of events is confusing. Please clarify.
 * 6) *In the intro you say one of the droids shocked him, while in the bio you imply that multiple droids shocked him. Which is correct?
 * 7) *"Listening post" is repetitive in the first sentence of the P&T.
 * 8) *"After the commando droids left their boarding ships, the clone failed to destroy one of the commando droids that surprised attacked him." You make it sound as if he tried to attack them, which, IIRC, he didn't get the chance to do. Also, does this really belong in the P&T? And check your grammar, please
 * 9) * Jonjedigrandmaster ( Jedi Beacon ) 00:16, November 23, 2009 (UTC)

Comments

Alexem

 * Nominated by: ~ SavageBob 21:33, November 22, 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Random Squib geezer.

(2 ACs/1 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) Nice. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 09:12, November 25, 2009 (UTC)
 * 2)  CC7567  (talk) 21:25, November 26, 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) --Eyrezer 00:14, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Attack of the Clone
 * 2) * "Alexem urged caution and sent warriors to escort the strangers to him": bit awkward and unclear wording here. It sounds as if you're trying to say that he sent warriors to bring the strangers back to him, but your wording implies otherwise, especially with "escort," as it implies that the strangers were already on their way to him and that the warriors were simply sent to lead them to their destination, which you don't clarify.
 * 3) * Please check your grammar and dash usage in "not for violence—yet", as I'm not sure what you're trying to say.
 * 4) *Please also watch your infobox formatting, particularly with Refs.  CC7567  (talk) 20:20, November 26, 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) **Thanks for the review! I have tried to clarify how and why the heroes visit the Squib village. It's more of an invitation/escort thing in the "best-case-scenario" of the adventure, so I've made that more explicit. As for the dashed "yet," it was supposed to mean that he would decide whether violence was warranted after speaking to them, but I've made that more explicit too. And sorry about the refs in the infobox; it's an older article from before I knew that trick, so I didn't think to check that I had done it. Does everything check out now? ~ SavageBob 21:17, November 26, 2009 (UTC)
 * 6) ***I've done some rewording based on your clarification. Please check it to see if it's acceptable. (Also, I mainly cited WP:DASH for the proper formatting of dashes, which I've now corrected.)  CC7567  (talk) 21:25, November 26, 2009 (UTC)
 * 7) ****Ah, gotcha. Again, legacy of this being one of my earlier articles. Thanks for the help! ~ SavageBob 21:44, November 26, 2009 (UTC)

Comments

Hyena-class bomber

 * Nominated by:-RC 1138 20:38, November 23, 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Another droid starfighter

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Object Comments
 * 1) The Grand Master
 * 2) *The intro needs to be expanded; it should summarize the article's contents, and right now there is quite a bit of information missing.
 * 3) *Please source the Proton bombs in the infobox.
 * 4) *Remember, everything in these areas that is linkable should be linked once in the intro, once in the infobox, and once in the bio. Make sure that you don't have missing or multiple links.
 * 5) *More to come. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 02:41, November 24, 2009 (UTC)
 * 6) Preliminaries for now
 * 7) *Please make sure you're confident that the article adheres to all of the nomination rules at the top of this page before even considering nominating it, particularly the Manual of Style, Layout Guide, and Sourcing policy. That last one means that Ref tags are only supposed to be used in the infobox and in templates, not the body of the article.
 * 8) *I would particularly recommend rewatching "Liberty on Ryloth" and keeping track of what facts you take from it and what you assume and speculate in the article. "Hyena bombers generally operated in Squads of four to maximize damage and protection" is in no way attributable to the episode.
 * 9) *Conjecturally-titled battles cannot be referred to as such. If they have no canonical name, you cannot make one up for them in other articles.
 * 10) *Your History in general needs to be written much better in terms of context and paragraph size. You cannot assume that the reader is familiar with The Clone Wars series in any way, and the current level of detail is rather inaccurate; you need to detail the situations more.
 * 11) **This in particular is still in need of major work.  CC7567  (talk) 17:19, November 30, 2009 (UTC)
 * 12) *Bypassing overall writing, the combination of Jonjedigrandmaster's objections and those from me make up the very basics of the standards for an article to pass or even be considered for the GAN. I would recommend working as much as you can on this over the next few days.  CC7567  (talk) 05:14, November 24, 2009 (UTC)
 * 13) *Please note that just because its first chronological appearance was on Falleen, that in no way means it was its first usage. You're going to have to provide the source that explicitly states so. Furthermore, please note that both Jon and I are waiting for you to clarify that you've fixed these objections; otherwise, this nomination will expire from inactivity in due time.  CC7567  (talk) 17:19, November 30, 2009 (UTC)
 * I believe that I have fixed it to your expectations.--RC 1138 20:58, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

Unidentified Duros lieutenant

 * Nominated by: Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 02:13, November 24, 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: The last GAS trooper! JujiggumProject:Galactic Alliance Security members is ovah! (For now, anyway)

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1) At least 'til Backlash comes out.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 18:01, November 24, 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) Somehow, I just don't believe you. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 02:27, November 26, 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) *Haha I wouldn't either... But I do actually have to wait for Backlash; this really is the last known GAS trooper for now :P Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 02:30, November 26, 2009 (UTC)
 * 4)  Grunny  ( Talk ) 10:35, November 26, 2009 (UTC)
 * 5)  CC7567  (talk) 20:28, November 26, 2009 (UTC)
 * 6) Though I am sadden to hear that this will be the last GAS trooper for some time. :p Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 16:41, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Soresu
 * 2) * Its a little unclear how the Solos and company capture the two Jedi, but apparently helped prevent their arrest as well. Please clarify. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 09:23, November 25, 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) **Addressed, thanks for the review. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 13:17, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

Comments

R5-M2

 * Nominated by: Toprawa and Ralltiir 04:41, November 25, 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Echo Base droid. 360 (not counting intro) of the easiest words you've ever read!

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)
Support
 * 1) Nice job, Toprawa. Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 14:05, November 25, 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) Nice and clean.  Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 21:13, November 25, 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) --Skippy Farlstendoiro 07:16, November 26, 2009 (UTC)
 * 4)  CC7567  (talk) 20:32, November 26, 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 04:58, November 27, 2009 (UTC)
 * 6) Jawaman No, I did NOT steal your droid! 14:16, November 28, 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Skippy, the Jedi Droid… I mean… Whatever
 * 2) * R5-M2 was "chirping melodically" and its owner Valdez was a known musician. Are those two facts related? Did Valdez program R5-M2 to chirp, or encourage this behavior? Or is this simply a coincidence?
 * 3) **If the information was related, don't you think I would have specified? :) There's nothing unusual about the sounds R5-M2 makes in the film and nothing to connect the information to Valdez. I hadn't even made the connection that you are here, but it seems to me that perhaps "melodically" is not the best word choice. I have changed it to "melodiously," which has a slightly different meaning. Toprawa and Ralltiir 18:10, November 25, 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) * R5-M2 seems to use the body of an R2 unit instead of the usual R5 frame. This should be mentioned, even if canon doesn't specify why it's modified. I think some source said that R5 units are easy to customize with this kind of ideas.
 * 5) **I don't really see the need for that to be mentioned, since all R5 units seem to have the same body as R2 units. There's nothing uniquely significant to R5-M2 here. Perhaps that should be mentioned on the R5-series page. Toprawa and Ralltiir 18:10, November 25, 2009 (UTC)
 * 6) *Beep. Skippy Farlstendoiro 09:03, November 25, 2009 (UTC)
 * 7) **Thank you for the review. Toprawa and Ralltiir 18:10, November 25, 2009 (UTC)
 * 8) Soresu
 * 9) * routine scouting mission of the base's exterior with Luke Skywalker in which Skywalker ultimately went missing after falling prey to an ambush. A little confusing, since it sounds like Luke was with Han personally, yet he was ambushed. In fact, this really doesn't need to be mentioned at all. Han returning from a scouting mission is all the context that is needed. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 03:25, November 26, 2009 (UTC)
 * 10) **It does actually need to be in there so the reader knows what the article is talking about. That specific scouting mission was rather notable for obvious reasons. And if that isn't explained in the article, then it could refer to any scouting mission Solo went on in general, and the whole point of what is being described is lost. Toprawa and Ralltiir 04:08, November 26, 2009 (UTC)
 * 11) *** The first part of the objection though, still stands. The beginning of the sentence makes it seem as if Luke returned with Solo together, before you go on to explain that Luke was ambushed. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 05:20, November 26, 2009 (UTC)
 * 12) ****I have tweaked the sentence to read "from conducting a routine scouting mission...with Luke Skywalker," thus avoiding any syntax confusion. Toprawa and Ralltiir 17:49, November 26, 2009 (UTC)

Comments

Larrim

 * Nominated by: SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 08:54, November 25, 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Last notable KotOR NPC that appears solely in the South Apartments

(2 ACs/2 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1) "Wanna vote, Skippy?" "Well, of course not, don't be ridiculous, Cousin Larrim!" --Skippy Farlstendoiro 09:30, November 25, 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) Good job.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 18:34, November 25, 2009 (UTC)
 * 3)  CC7567  (talk) 20:37, November 26, 2009 (UTC)
 * 4)  Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 17:19, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Skippy found a possible typo
 * 2) * BtS: Therefore, it is undetermined whether Revan ever interacted with Kadir and, if so, (…) Do you mean with Larrim ? Skippy Farlstendoiro 09:03, November 25, 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) **Doh! The BTS was mostly a cut-and-paste, and I managed to miss that. Fixed. Thanks for the review Farl. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 09:26, November 25, 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) The Grand Master
 * 5) * Is it explicitly stated that his homeworld is Taris? If so, this should be specified in the bio; and if not, it should be removed from the infobox.
 * 6) **No it isn't stated. Removed.
 * 7) * "Therefore, it is undetermined whether Revan ever interacted with Larrim and, if so, the exact form that the conversation took." Please check your grammar here.
 * 8) **It reads fine to me. What in particular sounds incorrect?
 * 9) ***Due to the ordering, the last bit essentially reads: "it is undetermined the exact form that the conversation took."
 * 10) ****Addressed, hopefully. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 04:42, November 30, 2009 (UTC)
 * 11) *Nice work. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 15:13, November 28, 2009 (UTC)
 * 12) **Thanks for the review. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 02:10, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

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Retwin

 * Nominated by: Toprawa and Ralltiir 22:20, November 25, 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Executor ESB character. That cheeky fellow who turns to look at Vader at the end of the film.

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 * 1) Could we have a picture of Retwin turning to gaze Vader? (Suggestion, not objection) --Skippy Farlstendoiro 08:06, November 26, 2009 (UTC)
 * 2)  Grunny  ( Talk ) 10:15, November 26, 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 10:36, November 26, 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 16:16, November 26, 2009 (UTC)
 * 5)  CC7567  (talk) 20:42, November 26, 2009 (UTC)
 * 6) Nice work.  Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 03:04, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

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 * 1) One minor objection: In the intro, the "after" and "following" in the same sentence make the chronology confusing: "After serving in Ralltiir's defense forces as an Imperial sympathizer, Retwin joined the Empire following the Imperial subjugation of his homeworld shortly prior to the Battle of Yavin in 0 BBY." Other than that, great work.  Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 14:03, November 26, 2009 (UTC)

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Mikka Reekeene

 * Nominated by: Skippy Farlstendoiro 14:31, November 26, 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Bearded guy in background of obscure webcomic. Like everyone else in Star Wars, he has a detailed history.

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 * 1) Before I take a detailed look, you need to make your paragraphs larger in size. ATM, your average para length is 2 sentences, making the article seem like a list of trivia items or something. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 07:56, November 30, 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) *Done for Mikka; tried for the others but it's not easy to increase the avg over 2.3 sentences/paragraph with the existing information. --Skippy Farlstendoiro 09:17, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

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Tura Raftican

 * Nominated by: Skippy Farlstendoiro 14:31, November 26, 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Other girls from '' Rebellion couldn't reach 250 words.

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 * 1) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 10:04, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

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Thar'quan

 * Nominated by: Skippy Farlstendoiro 14:31, November 26, 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Gimme some air ← and this is the reason why I'm nominating this. Serious.

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 * 1) Soresu
 * 2) *I have noticed that in a number of previous noms and also some of your current ones, the intro has not been sufficiently long. Please make it bigger. Check your other noms for the same problem. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 07:55, November 30, 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) **Try now. --Skippy Farlstendoiro 09:17, November 30, 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) *other scars due to his work with Rebel agent Sasnak Toxis while working for Hctaqsas Metals. Work/working a little repetitive. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 09:59, November 30, 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) **I love Thesaurus. Look now. Skippy Farlstendoiro 10:27, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

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Tarr Seirr

 * Nominated by: Kreivi Wolter 16:14, November 28, 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Lets try this out.

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 * 1) Good now! :) Skippy Farlstendoiro 15:47, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

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 * 1) The Grand Master
 * 2) *Please check your grammar throughout the article.
 * 3) *Missing P&a section.
 * 4) **Yeah, actually I tried to write that, but it was awfully short. There really isn't much fact to put on that.--Kreivi Wolter 20:30, November 28, 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) ***The section is required by the LG. If there's anything that can be put there, it should be there. His Force-sensitvity and any particular Force Powers that he exhibited, the fact that he was skilled enough to became a Knight, his skill with a lightsaber, and any other skills he may have possessed can and should be mentioned here. Even if the secion is very small, it is required.
 * 6) ****Good now?--Kreivi Wolter 21:58, November 28, 2009 (UTC)
 * 7) *****Please check your grammar. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 17:39, November 30, 2009 (UTC)
 * 8) *More to come. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 19:01, November 28, 2009 (UTC)
 * 9) Skippy vs the Cerean guy
 * 10) * Early life: During the growing Separatist Crisis, members of the Council found themselves too occupied, and Mundi relinquished his position as Watchman to Seirr, who had also became a Jedi Knight. This part could be improved using a chronological order: Seirr became a Knight; then Separatist Crisis; then Mundi relinquished Watchmanship, then Seirr is promoted to Watchman.
 * 11) **Good now? Kreivi Wolter 15:40, November 30, 2009 (UTC)
 * 12) * Attack on Hypori: General Daakman Barrek uncovered Add more context: Mention that Barrek was a Jedi, or the reader could assume that Barrek was Separatist.
 * 13) **Good now? Kreivi Wolter 15:40, November 30, 2009 (UTC)
 * 14) * Final duel: Are you sure K'Kruhk was a Jedi Master at this point? Because I am not so sure at all. Can you source that particular word, or remove it?
 * 15) **Good now? Kreivi Wolter 15:40, November 30, 2009 (UTC)
 * 16) *Skippy Farlstendoiro 12:35, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

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 * If someone knows the source that identifes him as general, then please tell me.Kreivi Wolter 20:30, November 28, 2009 (UTC)
 * And if someone knows which source first identifies him as Tarr Seirr, please tell that one too. Im not sure is it his Databank entry. Kreivi Wolter 13:11, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

Bodo Baas's Master

 * Nominated by: Darth Morrt 08:33, November 29, 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: This is my first try. Tell me if my English is too weird and I will stay at regular editing.

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 * 1) Your first vote. Not that hard, true? --Skippy Farlstendoiro 14:44, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

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 * 1) The Grand Master, round one
 * 2) * Right now, there is simply too much information in the article that is irrelevant to Bodo Baas' master himself/herself. For example, the beginning of the biography is basically a history lesson that is completely unneeded for this article: "By 1000 BBY the New Sith Wars, thousand years of conflict between the Jedi and the Sith, which lasted from approximately 2,000 to 1,000 BBY, was over. The Ruusan Reformation reconstructed the government of the Galactic Republic taking power from the Supreme Chancellor to the Galactic Senate. Simultaneously, the Republic and the Jedi Order disbanded their armies and navies. The Order centralized the Jedi training on Coruscant and allowed only one Padawan per Master. Years of reconstuction began after the Dark Age."
 * 3) * Also, please work on your grammar. It is a requirement for GANs per the first part of rule number 1: an article must be well-written.
 * 4) * Jonjedigrandmaster ( Jedi Beacon ) 14:34, November 29, 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) **Better now? Darth Morrt 10:49, November 30, 2009 (UTC)
 * 6) Skippy wants to read this
 * 7) * Source all the infobox.
 * 8) * who will face the Dark Side, while the future of all the Jedi is at stake. Use past tense: "who would face" "the future [...] was/would be at stake".
 * 9) * Consider avoiding the string "he/she", using instead "the Master", "this Jedi Master", "this person"... For what we know, Baas's Master might well be neither male or female.
 * 10) * "he surely knew" "Maybe this led". Speculation; the Master did or did not.
 * 11) * The history mentions the writing of a prophecy, but it could also include that the prophecy was then stored on a Holocron (as I deduce from a later paragraph).
 * 12) * Consider adding an image of Baas, captioned to indicate it was the Master's apprentice.
 * 13) *Quite good for a first; when's the second one coming? :) Skippy Farlstendoiro 12:17, November 30, 2009 (UTC)
 * 14) **Done. I searched similar GA/FA articles as a model, like Unidentified Jedi (Sacking of Coruscant). My next will be the Tedryn Holocron, but only after this one is GA. Darth Morrt 14:39, November 30, 2009 (UTC)
 * 15) QGJ
 * 16) *First of all, was it explicitly stated that this individual was a Jedi Master? Having a Padawan does not necessarily equal a Master's title, and Jedi Knight could also be referred to as "master" by his Padawan.
 * 17) **It is not explicitly stated, but I think the Master is a Jedi Master because: 1. He/she lived quite long to be a Master - I know this is speculation. 2. He trained Bodo Baas - it is still possible not to be a Master, but unlikely. 3. As far as I know, the theory of master-who-not-a-Master comes from the Preques. I think pre-Phantom-Menace sources that say master or Master intended to say Jedi Master. 4. TEGTTF says "written by his own Master" on page five, Master capitalized. Darth Morrt 00:51, December 1, 2009 (UTC)
 * 18) *In the biography, please follow the chronology. You jump from the master making a prophecy, to Bodo Baas telling it to Leia, then back to the master taking Bodo as a Padawan.
 * 19) *As per the established rules, the Master took a Krevaaki Padawan, Bodo Baas, descendant of Vodo-Siosk Baas. By 590 BBY, the training was complete, and Baas was assigned to the Adega system, where he served with a group of other Jedi. I'm pretty sure that Dark Empire 5: Emperor Reborn is not a source for all of this.
 * 20) *Context on Vodo-Siosk Baas and Anakin Solo.
 * 21) *How are the quotes in the biography and the P&A relevant to the master? They are just random statements about the Force.
 * 22) **Bio quote is not really relevant, deleted. P&A quote is added because the most important thing we know about the Master is his prophecy, seeing the future. I moved it to Bio. Darth Morrt 00:51, December 1, 2009 (UTC)
 * 23) *"Legacy" should be a subsection in the biography.
 * 24) *The Master first appeared in the sixth issue of the Dark Empire comic series&hellip; No, he did not; he was only mentioned.
 * 25) *In the appearances, list the specific issue(s) of Dark Empire in which the master is mentioned.
 * 26) *Have you checked all sources that might mention the master, including The Complete Star Wars Encyclopedia and those listed in the Tedryn Holocron's and Bodo Baas' articles?
 * 27) *Please watch your linking. Each item must me linked once in the intro, once in the infobox, and once in the main body of the article.
 * 28) *Has a little too flowery prose and excessive details to my liking, but overall, quite good for a first try. QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 17:08, November 30, 2009 (UTC)
 * 29) **Mostly done. Checking sources, but not all is availible for me. Darth Morrt 00:51, December 1, 2009 (UTC)
 * 30) The Grand Master, round two
 * 31) * If something is "unknown" it should not be placed in the article: (i.e. "It is unknown if the Master fought in the New Sith Wars...")
 * 32) * If it actually is confirmed that this prophecy came from an actual Force Vision, than this should be mentioned in the biography, and not just the Powers and abilities section. If this is not confirmed, then it cannot be put in the article.
 * 33) * In the BTS you refer to the Master as "him/her." Is the Master's gender unknown? If this is so, then you should go through the article and remove all of the references to the master's gender. If it is actually confirmed that this master is male, then this should be stated in the infobox as well as the article body.
 * 34) *Also, just because the prophecy was written around 990 BBY doesn't mean the master was born before that time. As the date is "approximate," the master could easily have been born shortly after 990 BBY and have had the prophecy early enough in life to still make it approximately one thousand years before 10 ABY. While it is likely that the master was born beforehand, it is still speculative, and therefore cannot be put in the article.
 * 35) **This cannot go in the infobox, either.
 * 36) ***Deleted. He could be born much earlier too. Around 990 BBY is not good for birth date. Darth Morrt 01:34, December 1, 2009 (UTC)
 * 37) * Jonjedigrandmaster ( Jedi Beacon ) 18:05, November 30, 2009 (UTC)
 * 38) **Done Darth Morrt 00:51, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

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Lyunesi

 * Nominated by: --Eyrezer 09:28, November 29, 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: A species hunted by Boba Fett. Thanks to Borsk and Cav for supplying some sources.

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 * 1) Skippy having a look
 * 2) * Bio: Frail? You mean physically fragile, mentally fragile, easily broken, infirm...? Could you please give more info?
 * 3) * S&C: "Skill" used twice in a row. Please replace one.
 * 4) * In the galaxy: Any further information on Dinnid's death? The previous sentences suggest that the Shell Hutts were happy with Dinnid's services. Was he executed for some reason, or accidentally?...
 * 5) * Skippy Farlstendoiro 11:59, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

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Ragoon

 * Nominated by: --Eyrezer 11:47, November 29, 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: I thought I'd try a Jedi Apprentice/Jedi Quest species.

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 * 1) Looks good after a copyedit. It's nice to see someone else doing something from Jude Watson's books, as it's an area that is severely neglected. &mdash;Master Jonathan(Jedi Council Chambers) 03:49, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

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 * 1) Skippy, always on species noms
 * 2) *You say the image shows Jinn and Vos, but I seem to remember it's Kenobi and Vos. Please check your sources and, if needed, change the caption.
 * 3) *The image shows Quinlan Vos. Please, explain the presence of Vos and whoever-he-was-with in the History.
 * 4) *Skippy Farlstendoiro 12:03, November 30, 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) **Silly mistake re caption. I've added a little bit more about the Jedi missions, but it seems the Jedi did not normally encounter the Ragoons while there, only on the particular occasion detailed, so for that reason I've kept it brief. Thanks for the review. --Eyrezer 21:21, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

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Hrym Mawarr

 * Nominated by: Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 14:59, November 29, 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: The last of the special-missions force bounty hunters. No available quotes directly related to him, though

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 * 1) A Welsh Skakoan, whaddaknow.  Graestan ( Talk ) 03:04, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

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 * 1) Skippy's single objection: Do you know where was Skywalker captured? If so, the article could use that data. Skippy Farlstendoiro 12:24, November 30, 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) *Added. Thanks for the review. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 18:09, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

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Fw'Sen

 * Nominated by: --Eyrezer 06:56, November 30, 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: This one a non-sentient species of ~260 words.

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 * 1) Skippy-suggestion: Consider adding this at the end of the intro ", named after the Fw'sen species." --Skippy Farlstendoiro 12:05, November 30, 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) *I have purposely avoided saying that as the sources don not say that explicitly. --Eyrezer 00:54, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

Zinn Toa

 * Nominated by: Darth Trayus  Sith_Emblem.svg ( Trayus Academy ) 08:59, November 30, 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Hey baby.

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 * I'm working on getting some body images - as for the infobox, that's the best you're going to get. Darth Trayus  Sith_Emblem.svg ( Trayus Academy ) 09:00, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

Neimoidian controller (Saak'ak)

 * Nominated by: Kreivi Wolter 22:30, November 30, 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Finally! I have wait a long time for this. Lets not screw it up.

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 * 1) Please work on your grammar. This is a requirement per GAN Rule 1: an article must be well-written, and "well-written" includes good grammar. Incorrect grmmar furthermore makes it difficult to review articles, as it often makes the meaning of certain phrases confusing. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 22:55, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

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Battle of Primus Goluud

 * Nominated by:  IFYLOFD  ( You will pay the price for your lack of vision! ) 03:24, December 1, 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Yep.

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