Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Nal Kenuun


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Nal Kenuun

 * Nominated by: ToRsO bOy 01:48, April 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Nal Kenuun is a nasty Muun.

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1) Watch your verb tense, please, though.  CC7567  (talk) 21:10, May 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2)  IFYLOFD  ( Floyd's crib ) 00:25, May 2, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 06:14, May 6, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4)  Jonjedigrandmaster  Jedi symbol.svg ( We seed the stars ) 18:08, May 6, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5)  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 11:50, May 7, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) The Grand Master
 * 2) * "Kenuun was taller and slimmer compared to most Muuns" Any reason this is in the bio and not the P&T?
 * 3) **I didn't know appearances were to be relegated to P&T. Added. ToRsO bOy 05:42, May 6, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Since it's about his physical appearance, which is considered a trait, it's generally more appropriate to put such things in the P&T. Jonjedigrandmaster  Jedi symbol.svg ( We seed the stars ) 18:08, May 6, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) * Could Grunta's death be mentioned sooner in the bio? Right now it seems like an afterthought.
 * 6) **Added. ToRsO bOy 05:42, May 6, 2010 (UTC)
 * 7) * I would also suggest mentioning in the P&T that Kenuun saw beings such as Grunta as his own property.
 * 8) **Added. ToRsO bOy 05:42, May 6, 2010 (UTC)
 * 9) *That's all. Nice work. Jonjedigrandmaster  Jedi symbol.svg ( We seed the stars ) 23:40, May 5, 2010 (UTC)
 * 10) **Thanks for the review. ToRsO bOy 05:42, May 6, 2010 (UTC)
 * 11) Soresu
 * 12) * never failing to demand a replacement or a suitable payment be made in the instances in which his properties were destroyed. This seems to be contradicted by the destruction of Grunta's podracer.
 * 13) **There's a line near the end of the bio about Kenuun collecting the bounties on Solo and X-7 to replace the crashed podracer. ToRsO bOy 05:42, May 6, 2010 (UTC)
 * 14) ***And that's why I don't review FANs: I start missing stuff I wouldn't otherwise. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 06:14, May 6, 2010 (UTC)
 * 15) *Nice. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 04:26, May 6, 2010 (UTC)
 * 16) **Much appreciated. ToRsO bOy 05:42, May 6, 2010 (UTC)

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