Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/R4-K5

R4-K5

 * Nominated by: OtterSurf (talk) 18:19, July 17, 2019 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Been meaning to promote this little guy for a while now.

QGJ

 * Is there a way to get a wider crop of the infobox image, so that it fully fits the infobox?
 * I never really liked that image quite frankly. It looks shabby. There's a few images on the Hasbro site that would do a better job so I might upload a new one. OtterSurf (talk) 11:25, July 18, 2019 (UTC)
 * Found a new image. Does the job. OtterSurf (talk) 13:09, July 18, 2019 (UTC)
 * 19 BBY date in the first sentence cannot be sourced directly to Revenge of the Sith
 * The Knightfall article does just that, so I'd be willing to contest it. OtterSurf (talk) 11:23, July 18, 2019 (UTC)
 * The Knightfall article also gained its status in 2010, when our standards for referencing dates were not as strict. I'm sure it will eventually be probed by the AC, one of the reasons being the lack of proper date refs. It's just simple fact that the term "19 BBY" is never used in the film itself, therefore, according to current GA standards, it requires an external source. QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 14:32, July 18, 2019 (UTC)
 * Fixed. OtterSurf (talk) 19:08, July 18, 2019 (UTC)
 * You don't have to pipelink this entire passage to Operation: Knightfall. Just linking the word "ransacked" would be sufficient. "ransacked the Jedi Temple and killed most of the Jedi in residence"
 * Done. OtterSurf (talk) 08:43, July 18, 2019 (UTC)
 * You have successive duplicate refs [2] in the first paragraph of the bio, and refs [1] in the second paragraph.
 * Fixed. Ref 2 is now Ref 3. I broke up the two uses but I don't think I can structure the paragraph properly without using it twice. OtterSurf (talk) 11:22, July 18, 2019 (UTC)
 * Ref 3 is now Ref 4. OtterSurf (talk) 14:35, July 18, 2019 (UTC)
 * You are missing info from the databank entry, such as manufacturer and height. Using external sources, you can perhaps fill out additional parameters in the infobox, for example, the droid's degree. Please look at other Legends astromech GAs, for example R3-T2
 * Done. OtterSurf (talk) 08:43, July 18, 2019 (UTC)
 * Overall, the bio seems to be written from Vader's POV, instead of the droid's. For instance, the first paragraph should first establish that R4-K5 was stationed at the Jedi Temple in 19 BBY, before talking about Vader's attack. This sentence: "Vader would later choose the R4 unit as his new astromech" is better reworded to passive voice: "The R4 unit was later chosen by Vader as his new astromech"
 * Done. OtterSurf (talk) 13:15, July 18, 2019 (UTC)
 * Characteristics section needs to be added.
 * Done. OtterSurf (talk) 11:47, July 18, 2019 (UTC)
 * Please add publishing dates in the Bts. QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 07:32, July 18, 2019 (UTC)
 * Done. OtterSurf (talk) 11:59, July 18, 2019 (UTC)
 * Sensor color is now infobox-exclusive.
 * Fixed. OtterSurf (talk) 10:21, July 19, 2019 (UTC)
 * The databank entry does not state this anywhere. Therefore, this part needs a manual ref note, mentioning other source(s) from which this info is drawn. As with other R4-numbered astromechs used by the Jedi Order during the Clone Wars, R4-K5 featured an R2-series dome
 * I'll look for a definitive source. 'Til then, I'll just remove it. OtterSurf (talk) 10:21, July 19, 2019 (UTC)
 * Done. OtterSurf (talk) 18:26, July 19, 2019 (UTC)
 * Non-canon information from Star Wars: Visions of the Blade needs to be detailed in the Bts. QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 09:27, July 19, 2019 (UTC)
 * Done. OtterSurf (talk) 10:21, July 19, 2019 (UTC)
 * "Detailed" means that his role in the story needs to be described with the same level of detail that you would do for a biography, with the only exception being that it should be in present tense. QuiGonJinn  Senate seal.svg(Talk) 14:57, July 19, 2019 (UTC)
 * R4-K5 appears in one frame of the comic. OtterSurf (talk) 17:11, July 19, 2019 (UTC)

Anil

 * Category:Galactic Republic individuals and Category:Droids of the Galactic Empire should be added.
 * Done. OtterSurf (talk) 08:25, July 19, 2019 (UTC)
 * Why is Category:R4-series agromech droids added to the article and not mentioned in the article body? Are you sure it's an R4 unit?
 * No, and there's no source that says R4-K5 is, either. Category removed. OtterSurf (talk) 08:19, July 19, 2019 (UTC)
 * Sources must be listed in order of publication/release date.
 * Fixed. OtterSurf (talk) 08:24, July 19, 2019 (UTC)
 * Encyclopedia entries must be presented exactly as the entry title does, such as "Sith starfighter, Darth Vader's."
 * The 19 BBY info came from a timeline on one of the intro pages, not an entry per se. OtterSurf (talk) 08:27, July 19, 2019 (UTC)
 * I've gone with the New Essential Chronology. OtterSurf (talk) 09:17, July 19, 2019 (UTC)
 * I think it would be much easier to source that 19 BBY date directly to The New Essential Chronology.
 * If you're not happy with the explanation above, then that's cool. OtterSurf (talk) 08:27, July 19, 2019 (UTC)
 * Nevermind, done. OtterSurf (talk) 09:16, July 19, 2019 (UTC)
 * If The New Essential Chronology is where the droid was first pictured, should be added.
 * Done. OtterSurf (talk) 08:30, July 19, 2019 (UTC)
 * The article could use one or two more images.
 * While I wasn't fond of the former main image as such, I think it's okay for the article body. OtterSurf (talk) 09:11, July 19, 2019 (UTC)
 * Darth Vader's black Eta-2 Actis-class interceptor lists more Appearances and Sources that this article. Have you checked them all for a possible appearance of the droid? TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders.svg  Anıl Şerifoğlu  (talk) 05:47, July 19, 2019 (UTC)
 * Added another appearance. That's pretty much it, though. OtterSurf (talk) 08:50, July 19, 2019 (UTC)