Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Daeshara'cor


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Daeshara'cor

 * Nominated by: -- —Harrar  MR T.Lah.jpg ( Villip ) 21:37, 22 April 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: What with the Triage process bringing FANs down to a record low, I figured ole Daeshara wouldn't cause too much of a stir.

(5 Inqs/1 Users/6 Total/INQCON 5)
Support
 * 1) Thefourdotelipsis 23:42, 4 May 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) --Skippy Farlstendoiro 08:25, 8 May 2009 (UTC)
 * 3)  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  19:15, 3 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 4)  Atarumaster88  Jedi_Order.svg ( Talk page ) 01:08, 16 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) Great read, Harrar.  Grunny  ( Talk ) 07:06, 17 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 6)  Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 10:12, 17 June 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * IMHO: The quote opening "Death over Ithor" should specify who says each line. I had to look for a name, reach line 7, assume that the name Anakin is a vocative so it must have been said by the other party, and then re-read the quote to see who says the first line. Btw: Great article! -Skippy Farlstendoiro 10:25, 24 April 2009 (UTC)
 * I removed the top lines because a) I felt the quote was a bit too long and cumbersome b) It would have really suffered to have had Daeshara'cor and Anakin Solo in front of every line. I do agree that it was vague, however, so I strimmed it down so the first line is Daeshara'cor saying "Anakin" so it's more obvious. Is this okay? -- —Harrar  MR T.Lah.jpg ( Villip ) 08:52, 25 April 2009 (UTC)
 * Perfect, thanks. --Skippy Farlstendoiro 11:33, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) From the Desk of Atarumaster88
 * 2) * I've never seen Darksaber italicized. Please consult canon and confirm this.
 * 3) **Ce n'est canon pas. It is no longer italicised.
 * 4) * BTS needs referencing on Stackpole's interview. Please reference the entire second paragraph.
 * 5) **Sourced to the interview; I removed this bit &mdash; "The Durron and Skywalker divide was an over-arching element in The New Jedi Order series and Daeshara'cor provided a look at the plotline from the "rogue Jedi" angle." &mdash; as upon review it seemed a bit OR-y. I can put it back in if you don't have a problem with it.
 * 6) ***I prefer the bit to stay removed if there's no source specifically. Looks good. :) Atarumaster88  Jedi_Order.svg ( Talk page ) 01:08, 16 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 7) *Otherwise clean. Have a Super Terrific Friendly Un-frustrating day. Atarumaster88  Jedi_Order.svg ( Talk page ) 16:28, 15 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 8) **Thanks as always Ataru :) -- —Harrar  ( Cut the comm chatter ) 22:41, 15 June 2009 (UTC)

Comments
 * I tried new things &mdash; but if my short paragraphs are too short though then let me know. -- —Harrar  MR T.Lah.jpg ( Villip ) 21:37, 22 April 2009 (UTC)
 * Also, despite the fact that Ruin makes it clear that Daeshara does not quite fall to the dark side, the reference guides claim she does, and therefore I left her in the Fallen Jedi and Redeemed Jedi category despite the blatant contradictions. -- —Harrar  MR T.Lah.jpg ( Villip ) 21:42, 22 April 2009 (UTC)