Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Breth Gart


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Breth Gart

 * Nominated by: Green Tentacle (Talk) 21:34, 25 April 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Not to be confused with Bret Hart.

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Support
 * 1)  Grunny  ( Talk ) 11:08, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) Fascinating. Thefourdotelipsis 00:03, 2 May 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) --Eyrezer 10:04, 4 May 2009 (UTC)
 * 4)  Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 17:16, 4 May 2009 (UTC)
 * 5)  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  20:59, 4 May 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) From the desk of Atarumaster88
 * 2) * One thing: "When he failed to show up for his post-mission debriefing, Commander Lagrane recommended the pilot for psychiatric evaluation." The "he" refers to Farlander, right?
 * 3) **Yes. Should be clarified now. Green Tentacle (Talk) 17:03, 4 May 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) * And one more: "Though he had little chance to get to know Farlander during training, Gart later formed a friendship with his fellow Agamarian and Farlander came to think of him like a younger brother" This sentence is rather out of place. Can you move it around to somewhere else in the P&T so it flows better?
 * 5) **Left it in place but tried to connect it to the previous bit a little better. Let me know if it needs more. Green Tentacle (Talk) 17:03, 4 May 2009 (UTC)
 * 6) *Other than that, superb, though he could've used some smoothness lessons from Lando. Have a Super Terrific Friendly Un-frustrating day. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 16:16, 4 May 2009 (UTC)
 * 7) **We could all use some smoothness lessons from Lando. Green Tentacle (Talk) 17:03, 4 May 2009 (UTC)

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