Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Xendor


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Xendor

 * Nominated by: Thefourdotelipsis 10:34, 11 June 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

(5 Inqs/0 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1) -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 12:13, 15 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 2)  Greyman ( Talk ) 23:22, 23 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 3)  Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 13:56, 25 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) Lord Hydronium 11:20, 26 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) Toprawa and Ralltiir 16:42, 28 June 2008 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) Minions of Ackbar!:
 * 2) * The penultimate three sentences in the intro all start with "during." Please reword.
 * 3) **That's all. Nice work. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 12:02, 15 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) From the desk of Atarumaster88
 * 5) * An appropriate link will need to be made about Arden Lyn's confrontation with that Jedi guy.
 * 6) **Well, there's a link...I can't guarantee its blueness, though.
 * 7) * It should be clarified that Padawan whatserface wasn't the only survivor of the battle ... I'm presuming some of those Jedi types survived, no?
 * 8) **No, he was the only survivor of the battle. Thefourdotelipsis 01:28, 25 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 9) * The sentence that starts "she was eventually hunted down" could and should be a little clearer.
 * 10) **Yah, fixed.
 * 11) *Have a Super Terrific Friendly Un-frustrating day. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 16:22, 24 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 12) **Thanks for the review. Thefourdotelipsis 01:28, 25 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 13) Toprawa:
 * 14) * As I read through this sentence, this mention of her Teras Kasi mastery just seems kind of extraneous. Mentioning that she fought the Jedi with the Talisman does enough to describe the battle: "a master of the Teräs Käsi martial art"
 * 15) **Gotcha. It's out.
 * 16) * A brief descriptor for Wavlud would be good: "but had been decried by Ingo Wavlud" Toprawa and Ralltiir 05:02, 27 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 17) **Called him a historian. Thanks for the review. Thefourdotelipsis 11:35, 28 June 2008 (UTC)

Comments


 * Dude, consistently forgetting to link to Jedi Order? For shame. :P Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 16:22, 24 June 2008 (UTC)