Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Luwingo


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Luwingo

 * Nominated by: Xicer9 [[Image:atgar.svg|20px]]( Combadge) 02:06, April 23, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: The Chewbacca to Lo Khan's Han Solo.

(5 Inqs/2 Users/7 Total)
Support
 * 1)  IFYLOFD  ( Floyd's crib ) 21:31, April 25, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) --Skippy Farlstendoiro 09:42, April 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) --Eyrezer 04:59, April 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) Great. The only thing that irked me was "commandoes," but that just comes down to preference. Byss soon? --Imperialles 06:06, May 4, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5)  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  21:16, May 5, 2010 (UTC)
 * 6) Toprawa and Ralltiir 17:34, May 6, 2010 (UTC)
 * 7) —Tommy  9281 23:02, May 6, 2010 (UTC)

Object Comments
 * 1) Farlstendoiro: Hck hk hk!
 * 2) * In the intro you say the pirates kidnapped Luwingo's family. In the bio, they kidnap Luwingo's children, which might or might not be all of his family. Please avoid discrepancies.
 * 3) **For some reason, the DESB likes to use "children" and "family" interchangeably. I changed that sentence in the Bio to include the rest of his family as well.
 * 4) * Why was he odd as a smuggler?
 * 5) **Good question, the DESB is also vague on this. Perhaps there weren't many Yaka in that line of work? I don't really want to speculate though.
 * 6) * What the kriff does he speak? . If OS doesn't say, at least you can mention that he spoke something other than Basic but he could understand Basic.
 * 7) **Doesn't say, but I'll add your second suggestion.
 * 8) *"Hdoogkva!" Skippy Farlstendoiro 07:46, April 26, 2010 (UTC)
 * 9) **Thanks for the review! Xicer9 [[Image:atgar.svg|20px]]( Combadge) 16:49, April 26, 2010 (UTC)
 * 10) Eyrezer: Can you add a bit more to the BTS re other mentions? Also add something about his emotional attachment to the starship, as implied by the O&T quote. --Eyrezer 04:45, April 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * 11) *Done, and the review is much appreciated. Xicer9 [[Image:atgar.svg|20px]]( Combadge) 04:58, April 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * 12) Toprawa:
 * 13) *No objections, but a few reviewing notes. I changed the instances of "Khan and Luwingo" to "Luwingo and Khan" just to reflect the central focus on the article subject. Also, I removed the "Clear" white space provided for the bio article, since it doesn't look so great that way, and as far as I know we've typically tried to avoid that. You're welcome to move the image around as you like best. Toprawa and Ralltiir 17:34, May 6, 2010 (UTC)
 * 14) Just one thing: "which he never found particularly challenging, and who beat often." Who beat often? Not sure what or who you might be referring to there, please clarify. Good work otherwise. —Tommy  9281 21:25, May 6, 2010 (UTC)
 * 15) *I actually left that, intending the "who" to refer to the individual droid, as I understood it to mean. Feel free to revise to your liking, Xicer. Toprawa and Ralltiir 21:27, May 6, 2010 (UTC)
 * 16) **Rephrased it slightly, check it out now. Xicer9 [[Image:atgar.svg|20px]]( Combadge) 22:50, May 6, 2010 (UTC)


 * The "commandoes" thing was my bad. I fixed it for Zev's article but totally forgot it here. Done. Xicer9 [[Image:atgar.svg|20px]]( Combadge) 20:41, May 4, 2010 (UTC)