Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Romas Navander/Legends


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Support
 * 1) Toprawa and Ralltiir 17:57, 13 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 2)  Aqua  Unasi  01:56, 17 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) Cavalier One ( Squadron channel ) 18:55, 18 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) Man oh man, I'm DYING to know what happened to Navander after his capture! lol --Colinmcev 23:23, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) Jedimca0(Do or Do Not, There is No Try) 23:51, 28 July 2008 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Navander served to further illustrate the mantle of skilled pilots hailing from Corellia -who did he illustrate this to? The viewers and its out of universe? Or is it just to illustrate to his superiors?  Aqua  Unasi  20:19, 16 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) *I'm not sure I understand what you're looking for here. There is a very well-known stereotype among the IU galaxy of talented pilots hailing from Corellia. It's what Corellians are most known for. In the same ilk of Han Solo and Wedge Antilles, as this article references, Navander is also a skilled Corellian pilot. There's really nothing OOU about this. His skills as a pilot perpetuate this stereotype in general. Toprawa and Ralltiir 22:36, 16 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) ** - ah, sorry about that, I misunderstood that sentence. I understand him being a skilled pilot like many Corellians and that being an IU stereotype- it was more the use of the word "illustrate" that I was questioning. I just read the sentence wrong though, so nevermind on that objection. Sorry for being confusing --  Aqua  Unasi  01:56, 17 July 2008 (UTC)


 * 1) From the squadron briefing of Cavalier One
 * 2) * The first paragraph is only two lines. Can it and the second paragraph be joined up?
 * 3) **Yup, combined.
 * 4) * Context is needed on how the Empire discovered Echo Base.
 * 5) **Added some context.
 * 6) * After the Imperial discovery of Echo Base, Navander, working in the command center, detected the arrival of Death Squadron, Darth Vader's personal fleet of Imperial-class Star Destroyers, led by his flagship, the Star Dreadnought Executor, in the Hoth system. This sentence runs-on and is very jerky. Please consider revising. - Cavalier One ( Squadron channel ) 13:41, 17 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 7) **I tweaked it around a little bit, hopefully that works. Toprawa and Ralltiir 16:45, 18 July 2008 (UTC)

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