Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Hero of Tython

Hero of Tython

 * Nominated by: Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 07:23, November 4, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: May I present the culmination of almost eight months of work and dozens of rewrites: the Hero of Tython. This is officially the largest single article I have ever contributed, and I apologize about that in advance to all reviewers.

Winterz

 * Check for mentions of Warren Sedoru as a Jedi Master, a mistake you made early and might have forgotten to fix in all the spots. I've found it at least twice in the article, so there might be more.
 * None left.
 * How do you know that T-7 was the Knight's companion when he faced the Emperor? Pardon me if I missed the part :c
 * He's required&mdash;he's the only non-biological companion, so he won't be affected by the Emperor.
 * Add the explanation in the BtS section.
 * Done.
 * Like it was already mentioned, there's still too many redlinks.
 * Done.
 * I know that is isn't necessary, but there's still 2 redlinks and 1 redirect in case you want to deal with them. Winterz (talk) 19:57, November 7, 2012 (UTC)
 * Removed the redirect, I'll get to the redlinks in a little while.
 * I've been waiting for this for nearly 5 months. One of the Wiki's largest articles. Amazing work, Cade. Do you have your eyes on another class' project yet? Winterz (talk) 16:55, November 7, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nah, I'm gonna finish the rest of the project. Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 18:40, November 7, 2012 (UTC)
 * IMDB as a source? I've been told that it isn't exactly reliable, so I believe you should remove it. Plus I'm sure there are other more reliable sources for that sentence. Winterz (talk) 19:57, November 7, 2012 (UTC)
 * Eh, switched to the game itself. It's in the credits. Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 20:11, November 7, 2012 (UTC)

Driveby... of Tython

 * There are way too many images. In a situation like this, where there are no available images of the article's subject, it's better to use images of semi-relevant things sparingly --- it doesn't really add anything to the article to have an image of another new character every two paragraphs, especially when you consider that the article is about the Hero, not the events in which he participated. The relevance of some of the images seems like a pretty big stretch, anyway, with "Kira spent her childhood at the Sith Academy on Korriban" being the most glaring. The overabundance of images honestly detracts from the article rather than benefiting it; I think you'd be better off jettisoning a whole lot of them. Menkooroo (talk) 09:34, November 13, 2012 (UTC)
 * ... but... but.... fine. Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 05:03, November 27, 2012 (UTC)
 * I think you could have a feeewwwww more than what's there now. Every two paragraphs was too much, but with the long stretches of imageless text I see now, it seems like too little. Go for a happy medium! Menkooroo (talk) 05:40, November 27, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

 * There's too many redlinks! KILL. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 12:35, November 4, 2012 (UTC)
 * I don't feel this warrants an objection, but i think it would be good if the class images from the SWTOR website were used in the Bts, maybe even as a small gallery or something.  Commander Code-8  To say hi, press 42 09:43, November 6, 2012 (UTC)

Notes from MJ
I was asked to copy-edit this three months ago and am just now getting to it. I will leave myself notes here regularly to keep track of where I last stopped and may also use this section to ask Cade questions if needed. Actual objections, if any, will be placed in the proper section above.
 * Cade: please check that I correctly interpreted the last sentence of the intro. I slightly rephrased it to avoid the implication that the awards were themselves "despite the Emperor's power", but I'm unsure if the awards were for defeating him or for action in general over the course of the war.
 * No, that's fine. Cade   Calrayn  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg 01:40, November 26, 2012 (UTC)
 * Continue from Hero of Tython. &mdash;MJ&mdash; Training Room 05:07, November 25, 2012 (UTC)
 * Your "M" key stutters. :P
 * On a more serious note, I'm not finding much to change so far.
 * Continue from Hero_of_Tython. &mdash;MJ&mdash; Training Room 04:27, November 27, 2012 (UTC)
 * I'm not sure what this is supposed to mean (under "Ord Mantell"): "travel to either Taris and Nar Shaddaa". It should be either "both Taris and Nar Shaddaa" or "either Taris or Nar Shaddaa", but combining "either" with "and" doesn't work. Which is it?
 * Continue from Hero_of_Tython. &mdash;MJ&mdash; Council Chambers 04:16, November 30, 2012 (UTC)