Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Viun Gaalan


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Viun Gaalan

 * Nominated by: —Tommy 9281 20:07, March 21, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Not FA worthy just yet, because he may make later appearances in the Fate of the Jedi series.

(3 ACs/4 Users/7 Total)
Support
 * 1) Nicely done. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 10:12, March 22, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Great work.  Jonjedigrandmaster  Jedi symbol.svg ( We seed the stars ) 17:43, March 22, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3)  JangFett  (Talk) 18:32, March 22, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) Cylka  -talk- 10:21, March 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) &mdash;fodigg  BlackRebelStarbird.png (talk) | 18:50, March 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * 6) After a small edit.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 09:56, March 31, 2010 (UTC)
 * 7) *Just to let you know your linking was not correct in two cases. You linked Lost Tribe of the Sith (novel series) instead of Lost Tribe of Sith.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 17:03, March 31, 2010 (UTC)
 * 8) **Thank you very much for fixing that. —Tommy 9281 00:06, April 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * 9)  CC7567  (talk) 07:14, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) The Grand Master
 * 2) * "Despite being initially taken aback by the Sith Lord's striking features" I don't think she was taken aback by his features. In the novel, it simply describes him, with Dresdema only reacting to the fact that he is male.
 * 3) **Addressed.
 * 4) * "Gaalan stayed behind with several others to personally deal with the arrival of Jedi Grand Master Luke Skywalker and two others." I thought he had just stayed behind to wait for Khai to fetch the other Nightsister; I don't think he intended to wait for the Jedi.
 * 5) **Check that out.
 * 6) * His dueling ability wasn't quite on par with Skywalker's. Skywalker's blade "came increasingly close to touching flesh," indicating that Skywalker was beginning to overpower him.
 * 7) **Addressed.
 * 8) *Very well done. Jonjedigrandmaster  Jedi symbol.svg ( We seed the stars ) 22:36, March 21, 2010 (UTC)
 * 9) **Thanks Jon for the review. Please advise if anything further is required. —Tommy 9281 05:35, March 22, 2010 (UTC)
 * 10) I just have one thing I would like cleared up. Were the Dathomir Witches led to believe that the Sith would be all female, or is that something that they assumed on their own? Otherwise, another interesting article, Tommy! Cylka  -talk- 23:29, March 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * 11) *They weren't led to believe that, they just kinda assumed that they would be. I changed the intro a bit so that that point is stated outright. Thanks for the review, Cylka. Please advise if anything further is required. —Tommy 9281 02:59, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

Comments


 * Backlash spoilers. —Tommy 9281 20:07, March 21, 2010 (UTC)
 * Not really objection-worthy, but can the "Duel with the Grand Master" quote be changed to include Gaalan's first statement, which you currently have as the main quote? Without it, Skywalker's reply doesn't make much sense. Jonjedigrandmaster  Jedi symbol.svg ( We seed the stars ) 22:36, March 21, 2010 (UTC)
 * Addressed. —Tommy 9281 05:35, March 22, 2010 (UTC)