Wookieepedia:Good article nominations



This page is for the nomination of good articles. This is not a way to showcase the articles of your favorite characters, spaceships, or the like. For a list of good articles, see Category:Wookieepedia good articles.

What is a Good article?
A Good article is an article that adheres to quality standards, but cannot reach FA status due to its limited content.

A Good article has the following attributes.

1. It is well written. In this respect:


 * (a) it has compelling prose, and is readily comprehensible to non-specialist readers;
 * (b) it follows a logical structure, introducing the topic and then grouping together its coverage of related aspects; where appropriate, it contains a succinct lead section summarizing the topic, and the remaining text is organized into a system of hierarchical sections (particularly for longer articles);
 * (c) it follows the Manual of Style, Layout Guide, and all other policies;
 * (d) necessary technical terms or jargon are briefly explained in the article itself, or an active link is provided.

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable. In this respect:


 * (a) it provides references to any and all sources used for its material;
 * (b) sources should be selected in accordance with the guidelines for reliable sources;
 * (c) it contains no elements of original research.

3. It is broad in its coverage, addressing all major aspects of the topic (this requirement is slightly weaker than the "comprehensiveness" required by WP:FA, and allows shorter articles and broad overviews of large topics to be listed);.

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy. In this respect:


 * (a) viewpoints are represented fairly and without bias;
 * (b) all significant points of view are fairly presented, but not asserted, particularly where there are or have been conflicting views on the topic.

5. It is stable, i.e., it does not change significantly from day to day and is not the subject of ongoing edit wars. This does not apply to vandalism and protection or semi-protection as a result of vandalism.

6. It contains images, where possible, to illustrate the topic. In this respect:


 * (a) the images are properly sourced and have succinct and descriptive captions;
 * (b) a lack of images does not in itself prevent an article from achieving Good Article status.

Nomination of Good articles
To nominate an article for Good article status, list it here. Nominated articles must meet all six requirements stated above. If an article has a total of five votes after at least a week since it was nominated (beginning the day of its nomination) and no objections (or the objections have been stricken or overridden), the article will be considered a "Good article" and tagged with the template. The talk page will also be tagged with the GA template. For complete instructions on archiving nominations please see here. Also remember to add GAnom at the top of the article you are nominating.

Saba Sebatyne

 * Nominated by:Markrox91 10:50, 4 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:I've done alot of work on this article in the last few weeks,and i now believee it is of good quality; the introduction now gives a summary of the article, the actual article is much more comprehensive and is now much more adaquaetly referenced.--Markrox91 10:50, 4 July 2008 (UTC)

(+0)
Support
 * 1) Now if only we can GA Tesar.  Ifindyourlackoffaithdisturbing  ( You're all clear kid! )( Now let's blow this thing and go home! ) 21:20, 13 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) Wynssa Fel 15:48, 14 July 2008 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Needs Personality and traits section and one for Behind the scenes.  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  20:36, 4 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) Toprawa:
 * 3) *Everything must be sourced, including the infobox and every paragraph.
 * 4) **Some paragraphs are still missing sources, and the intro should not be sourced. Toprawa and Ralltiir 15:59, 17 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) * Quotes must not be located in the middle of a section, only at the top of sections
 * 6) * Ref notes should come after punctuation, not before, and not two spaces after punctuation
 * 7) *Certainly some more quotes could be found to head up these sections
 * 8) *Please use the Insider template for the appropriate sources.
 * 9) **And as a personal recommendation to both the nominator and those who have voted on this article so far, please read the rules at the top of the GAN page and familiarize yourselves with our Manual of Style before nominating or voting on articles. Do not just vote on something because you like the concept of an article. Thank you. Toprawa and Ralltiir 16:11, 19 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 10) ***I've addressed all of, or close to all, your concerns. And please don't think i nominated this article on pure whim; i worked very long and very hard on it. Congradulations on becoming an administrator, by the way =]--Markrox91 09:36, 15 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 11) ****You've still got a bit of work to do to satisfy the objections above. And thank you for your comment. :) Toprawa and Ralltiir 16:03, 17 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 12) Missing info from Enemy Lines. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 21:18, 27 July 2008 (UTC)

Comments
 * 1) Have added Personality and traits section, as well as the Behind the scenes one.--Markrox91 02:12, 5 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) I have written the German article about Saba and I think that she finished her jedi training before the Yuuzhan Vong war has begun. Wynssa Fel 20:35, 11 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) You are right! I've just taken care of it and placed the info about her Jedi training under Master Eelysa in an Early Life section =]--Markrox91 10:22, 13 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) Yeah I'm right!^^ I have there one more thing which I had already written on the discussion: In the introductory sentence stand, that Saba was promoted to a Jedi Master after the Yuuzhan Vong War but wasn't she in Star by Star at that rank? Wynssa Fel 21:14, 13 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) Nope, because she was the only Jedi Knight to be a member of the Galactic Alliance High Council which wasn't created until Destiny's Way.--Markrox91 10:57, 14 July 2008 (UTC)

Peshk Vri'syk

 * Nominated by: -- Colinmcev 05:28, 7 August 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination Comments: Another X-wing Bothan... -- Colinmcev 05:28, 7 August 2008 (UTC)

(+5)
Support
 * 1) -  Cavalier One ( Squadron channel ) 08:11, 11 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) --Eyrezer 04:08, 17 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 11:31, 29 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) Toprawa and Ralltiir 21:08, 29 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) Darth Xadún ( Consult the Holocron ) 12:59, 10 September 2008 (UTC)

Object
 * I think the first two sentences of the intro need to be reworkd. They sseem to repeat themselves. Also, are there any quotes said by Peshk himself? --Eyrezer 06:17, 7 August 2008 (UTC)
 * I think the only problem was repeating Rogue Squadron's name twice. I fixed it. Better? As for the quotes, there are literally NO quotes ever spoken by Peshk. It was hard enough finding things people said about him! lol -- Colinmcev 15:25, 7 August 2008 (UTC)
 * I've edited it myself so that the BMA bit is not sandwiched between info on Rouge Squadron. Let me know if that's alright. --Eyrezer 04:21, 15 August 2008 (UTC)
 * Tis fine. -- Colinmcev 12:29, 15 August 2008 (UTC)
 * I'd like to see a minor addition to the last section. In Isard's Revenge, Wedge remembers Peshk among the pilots who've perished who were closest to him, along with Ibtisam and a few others. It shows that Wedge never forgot him, and that he was fond of him. Other than that, good work as usual on a marginal X-wing character. :-D -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 15:31, 7 August 2008 (UTC)
 * Marginal X-wing character is my middle name! :D Added the reference; looks like it's still a few words shy of 1,000... -- Colinmcev 03:41, 8 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 1) From the squadron briefing of Cavalier One:
 * 2) * I'm not sure if linking the Bothan Combat Response Element is wise - there's no mention of it outside the DarkStryder Campaign as far as I know, and the only information given is that it is a Bothan fleet, under Bothan control, allied to the NR. The exact form of attachment is currently unknown. Unless specifically refered to in Rogue Squadron, I would remove that link.
 * 3) **Ok. -- Colinmcev 23:22, 8 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) * Did Vri'syk request the transfer, or was he put forward by the Bothans? - Cavalier One ( Squadron channel ) 13:09, 8 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) **Checked back and couldn't find a specific answer, so I changed the wording to be more vague. -- Colinmcev 23:22, 8 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 6) Xadún's Dun Möch - as requested.
 * 7) * "...pilot Asyr Sei'lar, who was his equal when they were trained" - Do we know this for certain, or is it just a claim made Sei'lar?
 * 8) **I suppose it's just her own claim. Added that to the article. -- Colinmcev 06:53, 19 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 9) * "Bothan politicians, particularly Borsk Fey'lya of the New Republic Provisional Council, were pushing for a member of their species to be placed in Rogue Squadron due to the assistance Bothan spies provided the Rebel Alliance with the plans for the Death Star II, which ultimately led to the Imperial battle station's destruction." This sentence doens't make grammatical sense. Also, didn't the Feyl'lya or another Bothan want a Rogue squadron pilot because of the prestige of the squadron's name? I seem to recall the Bothan Council wanting a part of than legacy that came with Rogue Squadron. Correct me if I'm wrong.
 * 10) **All the references I've found in the book are Bothans using the Death Star II thing as the leverage to get a pilot into Rogue Squadron, in addition to the neutrality thing I mentioned. Didn't see anything about the Bothan Council. I reworded the sentence. -- Colinmcev 06:53, 19 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 11) * I think you should mention the fact Vri'syk flew an X-wing much earlier than the "Death" section - I recommend incorporating it into the line about being designated Rogue Two.
 * 12) ** Added it to the Rogue Squadron section. -- Colinmcev 06:53, 19 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 13) * Any references available to previous piloting experience available? E.g. the sorts of ships he flew At the Bothan Academy.
 * 14) ** Not in the source material that includes Peshk, so I don't think it would be appropriate to include. -- Colinmcev 06:53, 19 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 15) * Is Vri'syk not mentioned in the Bacta War? Since Sei'lar Takes over his position, I thought their might be another appearence. Since the Opening Bio quote is from The Krytos Trap, I was a little curious.
 * 16) ** He's not mentioned, I looked all over. And actually, I think she took over his position in Krytos Trap, not Bacta War, which explains the lack of a mention. -- Colinmcev 06:53, 19 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 17) *I think this is better than Kre'fey. Keep up the good work, Col. Darth Xadún ( Consult the Holocron ) 08:48, 17 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 18) Toprawa:
 * 19) * Can we clarify/expand on this to explain why they were happy to see him after this mission? "and reacted apathetically to Horn after the Folor mission, while the other pilots were happy to see him." Toprawa and Ralltiir 02:18, 28 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 20) **I added that. A reference to the targeting data thing is in the story already, but if you feel it needs any further clarification, let me know or feel free to reword yourself. -- Colinmcev 23:25, 28 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 21) ***It's fine. I just like for P/T sections, etc., to reiterate information that may already be in the bio. Toprawa and Ralltiir 21:08, 29 August 2008 (UTC)

Comments

Lady Tarkin

 * Nominated by: Ozzel 01:18, 10 August 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: That's what I'm Tarkin about. -- Ozzel 01:15, 8 September 2008 (UTC)

(+2)
Support
 * 1) Darth Star... DC 15:57, 11 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) Colinmcev 05:12, 25 August 2008 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) POV-ish header: "Megonite megalomaniac." --Imperialles 01:20, 10 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) She the proceeded her banquet hall to host the Imperial Diplomatic Conclave, for guests such as Shea Hublin, Chancellor Qua of the Zenox Star Cluster, the Most High Proctor of Thebeon 8, and Darth Vader himself. By this do you mean She then proceeded to her banquet hall to host the Imperial Diplomatic Conclave for guests such as Shea Hublin, Chancellor Qua of the Zenox Star Cluster, the Most High Proctor of Thebeon 8 and Darth Vader himself? Soresumakashi 09:23, 10 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) *Indeed. Fixed. -- Ozzel 11:02, 10 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) Darth Star? Is this like a mistake or joke or something of that sort? =D DC 12:10, 10 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) *I think that was the original name. :-p Nah, I typed that once and then was clumsy enough to copy it, and then I didn't catch either one. -- Ozzel 21:39, 10 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 6) From the desk of Atarumaster88
 * 7) * The intro is a bit confusing with which Tarkin is being referenced.
 * 8) **Addressed. -- Ozzel 08:44, 22 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 9) *"Her fate is unknown". This must die on sight.
 * 10) **I'll think about this one some more. -- Ozzel 08:44, 22 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 11) *Have a Super Terrific Friendly Un-frustrating day. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 20:52, 11 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 12) Nice job with this, and cool subject. A few suggestions... -- Colinmcev 02:56, 13 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 13) * Could you try rewording "Lady Tarkin was the cousin of Commander Conan Motti—and it was for the connection to her powerful relatives such as he that Wilhuff Tarkin married the woman." You already mentioned the Motti family in the previous sentence, so perhaps something like "Wilhuff Tarkin married her due to her powerful family connections, such as her cousin, Commander Conan Motti" or something like that? -- Colinmcev 02:56, 13 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 14) **Done. -- Ozzel 08:44, 22 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 15) * I don't feel strongly about this objection, but I'm not sure this needs to be in the behind the scenes: "Also, no source has yet indicated whether or not she was aware of her husband's affair with Natasi Daala." -- Colinmcev 02:56, 13 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 16) **I wouldn't be crushed if it was removed, but I thought it was worth noting because it's a pretty major part of her character that we don't know. If she didn't know about Daala, then she was just blindly devoted to Wilhuff, but if she did, then that puts a different spin on things. And since the Biography was written with the knowledge of Daala, someone might just assume that she knew, so I thought it was best to make it clear that we don't know either way. -- Ozzel 08:44, 22 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 17) ***Fair enough. -- Colinmcev 05:12, 25 August 2008 (UTC)

Comments

Lon Bennor

 * Nominated by: - Cavalier One ( Squadron channel ) 14:56, 21 August 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Short, sweet, maybe not particularly interesting, but not bad for a character who is only mentioned in one paragraph. - Cavalier One ( Squadron channel ) 14:56, 21 August 2008 (UTC)

(+4)
Support Oppose
 * 1) Jedimca0(Do or Do Not, There is No Try) 09:20, 22 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) Pixelle ( Talk! ) 16:15, 24 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) Toprawa and Ralltiir 21:20, 29 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) Don't you ever get tired of writing these things? ;)  Aqua  Unasi  00:27, 4 September 2008 (UTC)

Comments

Tren

 * Nominated by: Cavalier One ( Squadron channel ) 11:15, 22 August 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Another short, sweet, one paragraph mention character. - Cavalier One ( Squadron channel ) 11:15, 22 August 2008 (UTC)

(+4)
Support
 * 1) Nice little article. Pixelle ( Talk! ) 13:28, 28 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) Toprawa and Ralltiir 14:24, 30 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 3)  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  11:52, 1 September 2008 (UTC)
 * 4)  Aqua  Unasi  00:27, 4 September 2008 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) In the last sentence of the "Behind the scenes" you use the word 'adventure' three times. Is there a chance that that could be reworded a bit so as to get rid of some of the repetition?  Pixelle ( Talk! ) 16:10, 24 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) *Done. - Cavalier One ( Squadron channel ) 07:31, 28 August 2008 (UTC)

Comments

Kause

 * Nominated by: Cavalier One ( Squadron channel ) 17:10, 22 August 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination Comments: On a DarkStryder roll ... - Cavalier One ( Squadron channel ) 17:10, 22 August 2008 (UTC)

(+4)
Support Oppose
 * 1) A few minor fixes made, but overall a nice little article :) Pixelle ( Talk! ) 16:24, 24 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) - Kingpin13Cantina Battle Ground 11:47, 28 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) Toprawa and Ralltiir 20:48, 30 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 4)  Aqua  Unasi  00:27, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
 * 1) Kingpin:
 * 2) * Just a couple of things, firstly, can you make it a bit more Kause's story, rather than the council's? If not then could you just add "Kause and the council" in place of "the council".
 * 3) **Added in several cases.
 * 4) * And secondly, in the personality and traits section, could you change the wording slightly, so that instead of saying why he did certain things, you say that he had such and such personality, if that's not possible then that's fine.
 * 5) **Ah, the bane of documenting RPG characters! Unfortunately, Kause is given no specific personality traits since he is a minor NPC in the adventure. At lot of the information in the P&T only works in context.
 * 6) * A couple more things I've noticed since then: Does this person have a known surname?
 * 7) **No - Kause is the only name given for him, and since he is identified as Councilor Kause, I assume it is his surname.
 * 8) * And I presumed last time that there wasn't any images of him, just thought I should check that. If he doesn't have images of him please try and add images of related things.
 * 9) **No images of him at all, and the only image in the entire adventure is this one which I don't really think adds to the article since it is not related to Kause specifically.
 * 10) *Great article and I don't really see this as an objection, rather some things that could possibly be improved, if not then I'll still support this whole-heartedly - Kingpin13Cantina Battle Ground 11:47, 23 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 11) **Thanks for the review. - Cavalier One ( Squadron channel ) 08:11, 28 August 2008 (UTC)

Comments

Star Wars: Knights of the Old Republic

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk [[Image:Anakinsolo.png|20px]] 03:03, 25 August 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination Comments: I think it may finally be ready... NaruHina  Talk [[Image:Anakinsolo.png|20px]] 03:03, 25 August 2008 (UTC)

(+1)
Support
 * 1) I strongly feel that this is a good nomination. KotOR's article page was in something of shambles several months ago with a badly written, inconsistently tensed synopsis, revealing of plot details at the beginning, etc. The fact of the matter is though, a large amount of improvement has been done since then and it is a muhc better article than it was then. While I don't think it's worthy of featured article status, I definitely see it as worthy of being a "good article." Niirfa-sa 23:58, 5 September 2008 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) An excess of redlinks and the synopsis needs to be written in present tense.  Drewton  [[Image:Era-old.png|20px]] ( Drewton's Holocron ) 14:14, 25 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) *There is no limit towards how many redlinks can be in a GA. DC 15:50, 25 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) **Additionally, in-universe articles are to be written in past tense, per the Manual of Style. // ~mikah~  01:44, 28 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) **Redlinks I was wrong about then, but a synopsis is always written in present tense. Look at the film articles. Drewton  [[Image:Era-old.png|20px]] ( Drewton's Holocron ) 13:49, 28 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) ***Again, directly from the Manual of Style itself, "All in-universe articles should be in past tense, per 'A long time ago in a galaxy far, far away...'" Only out-of-universe articles (ie, George Lucas, John Williams) should be written in present tense. Despite whatever tense the film articles are written in, if its not past tense, its wrong. // ~mikah~  14:09, 28 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 6) ****This is not an in-universe article. Stylistically, plot summaries for anything almost anywhere are in the present tense&mdash;the MoS doesn't contradict this in any way, because this is an OOU article. "In contrast, articles about books, movies, games, or other real-life Star Wars material should obviously be written from an out-of-universe perspective, but should still be noted as such." Our OOU FAs also use this system, and so should this article. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 14:20, 28 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 7) *****I see what you mean now, I misread what I was reading. So that would be a prominent problem with the article. I'll go ahead and try to fix as much as I can for now. And sorry about the confusion, Drewton. // ~mikah~  14:27, 28 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 8) ******Fixed NaruHina  Talk[[Image:Anakinsolo.png|20px]] 03:59, 30 August 2008 (UTC)
 * There is no mention I can see that the soundtrack was composed by Jeremy Soule --Jinzler 09:33, 31 August 2008 (UTC)
 * Addressed NaruHina  Talk [[Image:Anakinsolo.png|20px]] 06:39, 1 September 2008 (UTC)

Comments

Q-series droideka

 * Nominated by: -- Joe Butler (Obi Maul12)  (Chow) 01:28, 27 August 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination Comments: Attempt #2. -- Joe Butler (Obi Maul12)  (Chow) 01:28, 27 August 2008 (UTC)

(+1)
Support
 * 1) Seems good to me, somebody else might spot something, but at the moment I can't see anything, nice article. - Kingpin13Cantina Battle Ground 18:31, 27 August 2008 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) From the homework strewn Aqua Unasi
 * 2) *After my quick read through, it's a very good article, and for me the only issue is with the sourcing for it. It's tricky with it being a very similar variant of the droideka. It appears the sources and appearances list contains onones that specifically state Q-series Droideka, which is good. My question is, is there still information about droidekas in general in the article?
 * 3) **For example, there's the information in the article taken from Suvivor's Quest'. I just read Survivor's Quest and is the Q-series specifically in there? I don't believe so, plus Survivor's Quest is not on the appearances list. I would go through and make sure you only talk about what is known about the Q-series, not talking about things known just about the droideka in general.
 * 4) **Also, some things about the characteristics of the Q-series. Is it anywhere stated that all of the physical aspects of it were the same as the droidekas, or something like only this one thing is different and the rest are the same as other droidekas? It may very well be, but if it's not said, characteristics based solely off the droideka may have to be removed. Example: the height 1.83 meters in the infobox might not be able to be sourced by something referring only to droidekas unless you have proof that their characteristics are the same.
 * 5) *A good article and nice work - once these things are sorted through I'll support, though I may come back after looking at it with more detail. :P  Aqua  Unasi  18:42, 27 August 2008 (UTC)
 * Yeah, I see what you're saying. This is tricky business indeed here. While I can't find a specific source that says the Q-series had everything the original had, a simple comparison of the pictures shows this. Since this model is a variant of the original droideka, I believe the same facts regarding the original model should be allowed in the article unless a specific source states otherwise (e.g. that the Q-series were not 1.83 meters). -- Joe Butler (Obi Maul12)  (Chow) 22:40, 27 August 2008 (UTC)
 * Hm, I see what you are saying too. Any other users' opinoins on this?  Aqua  Unasi  02:23, 28 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 1) Toprawa:
 * 2) *You still need to handle the objections you failed to address the first time around, found here. Toprawa and Ralltiir 21:26, 29 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) **Okay, I've just addressed your objection relating to the eras. I'll deal with Ackbar's objection later. -- Joe Butler (Obi Maul12)  (Chow) 15:15, 30 August 2008 (UTC)

Comments

Tetrum

 * Nominated by: Cavalier One ( Squadron channel ) 18:54, 29 August 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination Comments: More DarkStryder. I hope everyone is paying attention - there will be a quiz later.

(+1)
Support
 * 1) Nice article, - Kingpin13Cantina Battle Ground 14:24, 10 September 2008 (UTC)

Oppose

Comments

Rainboh

 * Nominated by: Thefourdotelipsis 02:04, 30 August 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: I'm sorry, but that's all there is. All must experience the joy of Rainboh.

(+8)
Support
 * 1) All hail first-grade art!  Ifindyourlackoffaithdisturbing  ( Oya Manda! ) 02:09, 30 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 2)  NaruHina  Talk [[Image:Anakinsolo.png|20px]] 03:08, 30 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) All I have to say is....wow.... DC 03:20, 30 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) Now do Jeby! -- Darth Culator  (Talk) 05:18, 30 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) Fastest GA evar? -- Ozzel 08:26, 30 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 6) Somewhere, under the rainboh...I support temporarily waiving the FA length rules so this can be on the front page. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 12:02, 30 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 7) I love it. The article is good too. -- Zakor1138 00:50, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
 * 8) Very well written, considering the topic in question. I find it a shame the article is so short for such an interesting concept, though I suppose such is to be expected. Can't wait to use this to one of my future stories. // ~mikah~  01:54, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
 * 9) Star Wars planets: Make your own! - Kingpin13Cantina Battle Ground 10:57, 6 September 2008 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) Actually, can we get a mention of its canonicity? I believe Chee has mentioned this somewhere. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 14:25, 30 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) *I think that's stated on the Design an Alien page. Thefourdotelipsis 23:46, 31 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) **Surely it ought to be in the article as well. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 23:25, 5 September 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Well...I don't quite understand why this is a different case from anything else where the source's canonicity was thrown into question at some point...I certainly wouldn't ask it of a Marvel article. Convince me, Acky. :P Thefourdotelipsis 09:48, 8 September 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) ****Fair point. Given that it's a frequently asked question and far simpler to explain than Marvel, there can't be any harm adding it to an already bare bones article, and it might fit in with Wallace's comment, but it's your call. On a separate issue, a ref note is needed in the BtS for the art project stuff. Presumably it's from Galaxy but it isn't self-sourcing. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 12:04, 8 September 2008 (UTC)

Battle of the TIE Fighter Construction Facility

 * Nominated by: DjMack
 * Nomination comments: This would be my first real good article I wrote entirely by myself, just point out to me anything that needs fixing, I want to be criticized and become a better writer. SPOILERS FOR FORCE UNLEASHED, BEWARE.

(+3)
Support
 * 1) Good work. --Jedimca0(Do or Do Not, There is No Try) 11:02, 1 September 2008 (UTC)
 * :)  Aqua  Unasi  19:11, 1 September 2008 (UTC)
 * 1) DC 21:17, 2 September 2008 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) From the post-it of DC
 * 2) * Indecisive victory? For who?
 * 3) *You need an aftermath section for the battle.
 * 4) *This article was fantastic, DjMack, it was very well written. DC 18:09, 30 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) Aqua Unasi
 * 6) *Great article. Very well written indeed. A few things:
 * 7) ** You need an tag.
 * 8) ** A few things are unsourced: The first paragraph of Prelude, The two paragraphs in the Aftermath section, and a few things in the infobox.
 * 9) **Also, I went in and changed these for you, but a thing to remember for future articles is to put a tag on the article when nominating it. Also, don't forget to link to your references, and that they go immediately after punctuation, with no space between.
 * 10) *I hope to see more articles from you in the future! :)  Aqua  Unasi  19:27, 30 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 11) Xadún's Dun Moch:
 * 12) *Quotes?
 * 13) *A few linking issues. Remember, once in the intro and the first appearence in the main body.
 * 14) *Intro - "raised in the dark" makes it sound like Vader kept him in a small cupboard without light. Say he was was trained in the Dark Side and the Emperor knew nothing of him. that would be sufficient.
 * 15) *Does the novel not give any specifics for the battle of duel? particular strikes, sequences of fighting etc would make the duel section far better.
 * 16) *"He would spend his time in various bars, before Starkiller found him and asked for his help to gather the enemies of the Empire." Did Starkiller just want information or help to actually get the Rebels all in one place? what was this plan?
 * 17) *Not bad. Nice to see somone working on Battle GA's. Darth Xadún ( Consult the Holocron ) 13:27, 10 September 2008 (UTC)

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 * Oh, next time you nominate something that recently came out, just make sure to say that there are spoilers. DC 18:04, 30 August 2008 (UTC)
 * I added everything. DjMack 01:47, 31 August 2008 (UTC)

Recon-PK series droid

 * Nominated by: Thefourdotelipsis 01:59, 2 September 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: WTS series resumes.

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Support
 * 1)  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  22:39, 2 September 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) Great job.  Ifindyourlackoffaithdisturbing  ( Oya Manda! ) 22:54, 2 September 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) Cavalier One ( Squadron channel ) 08:19, 3 September 2008 (UTC)

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Ultimo Vista

 * Nominated by:
 * Nomination comments: This is what happens after a night of no sleep and the reinstallation of Vista (Before anyone asks, it was broken, and then repaired over the night of little sleep)

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Support
 * 1)  Ifindyourlackoffaithdisturbing  ( Oya Manda! ) 00:12, 5 September 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) Cavalier One ( Squadron channel ) 08:33, 5 September 2008 (UTC)
 * 3)  Aqua  Unasi  02:48, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
 * 4)  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  22:53, 9 September 2008 (UTC)

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 * 1) Refs?  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  21:22, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) *Hahaha oh wow. Told you this is what happens when I work on a random article without sleep. :| Fixed, by the way. 00:09, 5 September 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) Per Chack. Well written, but totally unsourced.  Ifindyourlackoffaithdisturbing  ( Oya Manda! ) 23:06, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) *See above. 00:09, 5 September 2008 (UTC)
 * No idea what possessed me to write this up. 20:25, 4 September 2008 (UTC)

Teyora Rekab

 * Nominated by: Thefourdotelipsis 08:52, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: If only I were writing about coolth suits.

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 * 1) I can't see anything wrong, except from the Harry Potter toy glasses and fish bowl ;D. (One thing actually, did you spell makeup right? (I think it's spelt make-up in English.)) - Kingpin13Cantina Battle Ground 10:53, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) Do we get a coolth suit GAN to go with this? - Cavalier One ( Squadron channel ) 14:07, 7 September 2008 (UTC)
 * 3)  Ifindyourlackoffaithdisturbing  ( Oya Manda! ) 01:30, 8 September 2008 (UTC)

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Asagov Raider

 * Nominated by: Cavalier One ( Squadron channel ) 14:04, 7 September 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: To go with my Miktiss FAN.

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Support
 * 1)  Ifindyourlackoffaithdisturbing  ( Oya Manda! ) 02:00, 8 September 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) - Kingpin13Cantina Battle Ground 14:42, 10 September 2008 (UTC)

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 * 1)  Kingpin :
 * 2) * I think the start of history needs to be reworded.
 * 3) **In what way? Is it not clear as it is?
 * 4) ***I've reworded it, but please check it. - Kingpin13Cantina Battle Ground 14:42, 10 September 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) * Why did Miktiss want to keep it safe? - Kingpin13Cantina Battle Ground 14:12, 10 September 2008 (UTC)
 * 6) **Because of the fear of losing the vessel to an Imperial ship, as detailed in the following sentence. - Cavalier One ( Squadron channel ) 14:34, 10 September 2008 (UTC)

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Steel Fist

 * Nominated by: Cavalier One ( Squadron channel ) 14:04, 7 September 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: To go with Kolig below.

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Support
 * 1) - Kingpin13Cantina Battle Ground 14:14, 10 September 2008 (UTC)

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 * 1)  Kingpin :
 * 2) * You say "the vessel" a lot in the intro, could this be substituted?
 * 3) **Some instances changed.
 * 4) * You haven’t got any tags on the appearances and sources, are these needed?
 * 5) **Added.
 * 6) * Also see my second objection to Kolig, I presume you don't have information on what happened next but I'll ask anyway - Kingpin13Cantina Battle Ground 14:00, 10 September 2008 (UTC)
 * 7) **Context added. - Cavalier One ( Squadron channel ) 14:11, 10 September 2008 (UTC)

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Kolig

 * Nominated by: Cavalier One ( Squadron channel ) 14:04, 7 September 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Awesome twirling moustachio.

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Support
 * 1) - Kingpin13Cantina Battle Ground 14:10, 10 September 2008 (UTC)

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 * 1)  Kingpin :
 * 2) * Could you say why the group was named Qulok's Fist?
 * 3) **No details on that I'm afraid.
 * 4) * If known, could you say how FarStar fared (i.e. Did it survive, did they kill or injure any crew, why did they withdraw instead of finishing it off, etc.) - Kingpin13Cantina Battle Ground 13:49, 10 September 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) **Some context added. - Cavalier One ( Squadron channel ) 14:06, 10 September 2008 (UTC)

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Kyli Ned'Ix

 * Nominated by: Cavalier One ( Squadron channel ) 12:36, 10 September 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: There's a pattern to my noms ...

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Support
 * 1) Another great article - Kingpin13Cantina Battle Ground 13:47, 10 September 2008 (UTC)

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 * 1)  Kingpin :
 * 2) * Just one thing, in BtS you say he was created as a comical character, but you don’t say anything about this in personality and traits (I think), maybe you should? - Kingpin13Cantina Battle Ground 13:30, 10 September 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) **There's nothing in his personality that indicates he is "funny" - the comic relief is intended to come from situation comedy such as him turning up at exactly the wrong moment, or as springboard for a light-hearted original adventure. I've added a little to the BTS to reflect this. - Cavalier One ( Squadron channel ) 13:36, 10 September 2008 (UTC)

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Fxz'Et

 * Nominated by: Cavalier One ( Squadron channel ) 12:36, 10 September 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: ... but I can't quite figure out ...

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Support
 * 1) Couldn't spot anything wrong with this one, it's almost disappointing ;D Great work with all of these - Kingpin13Cantina Battle Ground 13:20, 10 September 2008 (UTC)

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Veild-danol

 * Nominated by: Cavalier One ( Squadron channel ) 12:36, 10 September 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: ... what the connection between them all is ...

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Support
 * Well written, interesting article - Kingpin13Cantina Battle Ground 13:18, 10 September 2008 (UTC)

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 * 1)  Kingpin :
 * 2) * In "Biography" do you mean to say "to the planet Galtea" or "past the planet Galtea", which ever, please fix.
 * 3) **Should be "to". Added.
 * 4) * Also is The DarkStryder Campaign a source or appearance? - Kingpin13Cantina Battle Ground 13:08, 10 September 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) **It's a source, since Veild-danol is only refered to in the character bio section, and is never used in any of the in-narrative adventures. - Cavalier One ( Squadron channel ) 13:13, 10 September 2008 (UTC)

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Jarell

 * Nominated by: Cavalier One ( Squadron channel ) 12:36, 10 September 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: ... if there is one at all.

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Support
 * 1) That was quick :D Great piece - Kingpin13Cantina Battle Ground 13:15, 10 September 2008 (UTC)

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 * 1)  Kingpin :
 * 2) * Seems good, just two things. Firstly, could you reword the start of “Biology and appearance”, I don’t understand if they can have all three colours or if they can have just one (or both). I see in the image it’s purple and white but please reword.
 * 3) **Rewritten - hopefully it's clearer now.
 * 4) * Secondly shouldn’t the “Sources” section be renamed “Appearances”? Otherwise a great article. - Kingpin13Cantina Battle Ground 12:57, 10 September 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) **No, since the Jarell do not appear in a narrative piece of work. Information from The DarkStryder Campaign is all behind the scenes bio information, and the Vision of the Future reference is to the language only. They do not technically "appear" in those works. - Cavalier One ( Squadron channel ) 13:11, 10 September 2008 (UTC)

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