Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/YV-100 light freighter


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YV-100 light freighter

 * Nominated by: 16:00, 18 May 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:From GA probation to FAN.

(5 Inqs/1 Users/6 Total/INQCON 5)
Support
 * 1) YV-100 Jorrel's FAN, everything checked here. Get ready to take off, and clear skies. --Skippy Farlstendoiro 09:45, 20 May 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) Insert funny message here. &mdash;  Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 22:23, 5 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) Good show. —Tommy9281  Dark side Master SWGTCG.jpg ( No quarter given, all exits sealed ) 00:24, 11 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 4)  Atarumaster88  Jedi_Order.svg ( Talk page ) 20:09, 11 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 5)  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  15:32, 14 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 6)  Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 09:18, 15 June 2009 (UTC)

Object Comments
 * 1) Unidentified YV-100, this is Farlstendoiro. Do not take off, repeat, do not take off
 * 2) * However, the YV-100 freighter offered was a modified craft; it wasn't until another RPG supplement, this time on Corellian Engineering Corporation products, was written by Owen K.C. Stephens and published in Star Wars Gamer 2. I think the second sentence needs some more words, something like "that the stats for an un-modified YV-100 were known", if you see what I mean.
 * 3) **I do see what you mean, and I have appropriately added such words. Good catch.
 * 4) * Can you provide a timeframe for the events under "Role"? The mission to Myrkr must have happened around 26-27 ABY, I guess; and I think we had decided Tempest Feud happened between 53 BBY and 18 BBY.
 * 5) **Well, I'm not sure if there's a standard for mentioning such a broad span of time (as in the case of the Tempest). I'm willing to put it in there, but I'd need some Inq input either way. I did clarify the other part (about Myrkr) by making sure I mentioned that it was during the Yuuzhan Vong War. If that's not specfific enough I'll toss the years in that mention too.
 * 6) ***I'll accept the Inq's decision; but if you simply say "during the last years of the Old Republic", it'll be enough for me.
 * 7) ****That works for me as well. Check it out now; added bit about the timeline. 09:40, 20 May 2009 (UTC)
 * 8) *Otherwise fine. --Skippy Farlstendoiro 08:31, 19 May 2009 (UTC)
 * 9) **Thanks for the read/review! 23:49, 19 May 2009 (UTC)
 * 10) From the Desk of Atarumaster88
 * 11) *" The ship was well-built and hardy" A bit POVish.
 * 12) **Changed to a more accurate description per sources.
 * 13) * "the modularity common in CEC lines; as such the YV-100," Uh . . . this is the YV-100. Clarify?
 * 14) * "not content with their huge successes with the YT series line, began the YV series." Some basic time frame would be good, if possible.
 * 15) **Gave it the best I could.
 * 16) * Last para of BTS smells faintly of Original Research.
 * 17) **Removed. Possible remnant of the original article, or from someone who said something about the image somewhere.
 * 18) *Have a Super Terrific Friendly Un-frustrating day. Atarumaster88  Jedi_Order.svg ( Talk page ) 19:57, 11 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 19) **Better now? 20:07, 11 June 2009 (UTC)