Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Pelta-class frigate

Pelta-class frigate

 * Nominated by: Vitus Infinitus (talk) 01:39, November 20, 2017 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: A starship used by several factions during the Clone Wars and Imperial Era.

Support

 * 1)  B32  (Talk)I-find-this-atire-appealing.jpg 16:38, December 23, 2017 (UTC)

Ecks-class objections

 * I think the article would benefit from a separate "Role" section. The "Starship and vehicle class articles" section of Layout Guide indeed recommends such a section. Just by glancing at the infobox, it seems there should be more than enough material for a Role section.
 * Created-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 21:33, February 26, 2018 (UTC)
 * I don't suppose there's a reason why engagements is capitalized in the section heading "Early Engagements"?
 * Fixed!-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 21:33, February 26, 2018 (UTC)
 * Some of the paragraphs in the article are huge. Please split up some of them. I think the article could also benefit from one or even two more images in the history section.
 * Split paragraphs, going to add images soon-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 21:33, February 26, 2018 (UTC)
 * Additional images added-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 22:23, February 26, 2018 (UTC)
 * The Behind the scenes section needs to be sourced.
 * Sourced-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 21:33, February 26, 2018 (UTC)
 * Release dates need separate sources.
 * Added! I was under the impression that they didn't, sorry about that-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 02:53, March 1, 2018 (UTC)
 * Is this still an objection?-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 01:00, March 11, 2018 (UTC)
 * The article is currently in Category:Pages with missing permanent archival links. Please go through all citation templates and supply backup links. Instructions can be found on the template pages.
 * Backups added-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 21:45, February 26, 2018 (UTC)
 * I'm still seeing the category, I'm going to review again-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 21:46, February 26, 2018 (UTC)
 * Okay, found issue, all links are fixed-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 21:51, February 26, 2018 (UTC)
 * Please go through all dates in the article and provide a valid source for them. None of the TCW episodes mention "22 BBY", for instance. 1358  (Talk)  00:20, February 26, 2018 (UTC)
 * Done!-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 21:33, February 26, 2018 (UTC)
 * Please read the instructions for the different fields of Template:Starship class. What you have right now in "role" and "model" is incorrect.
 * Model section fixed. As for the roles, all except "supply ship" were stated to be roles of the frigate in Star Wars: The Rebel Files-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 02:53, March 1, 2018 (UTC)
 * Sorry, I was referring to the "class" field. 1358  (Talk)  23:18, March 1, 2018 (UTC)
 * Like so?-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 23:38, March 1, 2018 (UTC)
 * Did I properly fix the objection?-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 01:00, March 11, 2018 (UTC)
 * Imagecat should be placed somewhere in the article.
 * Added-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 02:53, March 1, 2018 (UTC)
 * The Description section definitely needs to include information about the interior, which, if my memory serves me correctly, was quite prominently featured in "Brain Invaders". 1358  (Talk)  23:05, February 28, 2018 (UTC)
 * Will be completing this soon-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 23:38, March 1, 2018 (UTC)
 * Added-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 01:38, March 3, 2018 (UTC)
 * As a result of the expansion, you can now fit another image somewhere in the Characteristics section. 1358  (Talk)  20:38, March 8, 2018 (UTC)
 * Added!-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 01:00, March 11, 2018 (UTC)
 * Are there no relevant quotes for the currently-quoteless sections? It's been a while since I saw "Brain Invaders", but I bet something applicable can be found there.
 * Quotes added-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 22:15, March 13, 2018 (UTC)
 * Please check your image caption punctuation. Full sentences get a full stop.
 * Fixed-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 22:15, March 13, 2018 (UTC)
 * Please note that some of the captions you punctuated are actually not full sentences and do not get a full stop. I've fixed it for you. In these cases, the verbs are in present participle and work as modifiers for the nouns. This is a bit of a tricky case, but generally if you have a single verb that ends in -ing in your sentence, it's participle. Let me know if this is unclear. 1358  (Talk)  22:59, March 14, 2018 (UTC)
 * All applicable articles need to be linked within individual references.
 * Done!-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 22:15, March 13, 2018 (UTC)
 * There are definitely more fields that you can fill in your cite web references. Authors, release dates, etc. Please also note that the displayed title should match that of the pages you're linking.
 * Fixed!-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 22:15, March 13, 2018 (UTC)
 * I'm not convinced that listing different release dates in the Bts is really needed in this article. All you're doing is create a need for more references. Just stick with the release year. 1358  (Talk)  19:34, March 12, 2018 (UTC)
 * Removed-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 22:15, March 13, 2018 (UTC)
 * Reference 22 doesn't really work as is because "the events of this article" take place over a long period of time.
 * That's what's been used on all dates related to the first half of Rebels Season 2, should I still remove it?-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 23:27, March 14, 2018 (UTC)
 * The logic behind the reference should be fine, but you can't say "The events of this article" because the article covers a large timeline. 1358  (Talk)  23:37, March 14, 2018 (UTC)
 * Like so?-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 23:42, March 14, 2018 (UTC)
 * On a quick glance, I can spot at least two instances where the same reference is used consecutively within the same paragraph without any other references inbetween. Either one of those references is incorrect, or the first instance is unnecessary.
 * Fixed!-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 23:27, March 14, 2018 (UTC)
 * I don't think we can really assert that 900 was a standard crew size for Pelta-class vessels since the Databank instance explicitly refers to the Phoenix Home. However, we can include that Phoenix Home had a crew of 900.
 * Star Wars: The Rebel Files also states that it had a crew of 900, should I switch references?-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 23:20, March 14, 2018 (UTC)
 * Does it say Phoenix Home had 900, or Pelta-class ships in general? 1358  (Talk)  23:21, March 14, 2018 (UTC)
 * Pelta in general. It's in a section where the details of the frigate are listed like length and manufacturer-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 23:27, March 14, 2018 (UTC)
 * Yeah, switching to that sounds good. 1358  (Talk)  23:29, March 14, 2018 (UTC)
 * Done!-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 23:31, March 14, 2018 (UTC)
 * For consistency, you should probably use the same references for length and manufacturer etc in the infobox as in the body. 1358  (Talk)  23:37, March 14, 2018 (UTC)
 * Removed the reference all together as Rebel Files has all that info-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 23:42, March 14, 2018 (UTC)
 * I'm willing to bet at least some of the TCW quotes have audio files that can be added to the quotes. See Category:Audio files from Star Wars television series. 1358  (Talk)  22:59, March 14, 2018 (UTC)
 * Haven't found any relating to the quotes unfortunately-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 23:31, March 14, 2018 (UTC)
 * Reference 27 is throwing a citation error.
 * Oops, must have happened when I switched from the databank to Rebel Files, fixed-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 16:16, March 18, 2018 (UTC)
 * This just reads awkwardly due to the tense: "TB-73 arrives at the medical station; however, with no one at the controls, it is in danger of a collision." Go with something like "TB-73 arrives at the medical station with no one at the controls". 1358  (Talk)  16:00, March 18, 2018 (UTC)
 * Fixed-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 16:16, March 18, 2018 (UTC)
 * You should definitely work blockade runner 0-9-9 into the prose instead of leaving it as a link in a quote.
 * Added-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 02:03, March 21, 2018 (UTC)
 * The "Escape craft" field in the infobox has infobox-exclusive information.
 * Fixed-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 02:03, March 21, 2018 (UTC)
 * I'd go with just "Frigate" in the "class" field seeing as the "assault ship" part is really for the variant only.
 * Done-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 02:03, March 21, 2018 (UTC)
 * You're missing probably more than a few Databank entries from your Sources section. Barriss Offee's and Brain Worm's entries both mention a medical frigate. I'm willing to bet there are more Databank entries that contain at least a cursory mention of the medical frigate. 1358  (Talk)  23:17, March 20, 2018 (UTC)
 * In terms of databanks, I could only find those two, however, the episode guide for the Siege of Lothal has a ton of concept art and information, so I added that as a source as well, and I'm going to be adding the information tonight-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 02:03, March 21, 2018 (UTC)
 * Added information and additional images to supplement expansion-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 03:04, March 21, 2018 (UTC)
 * Please go through every single relevant TCW episode guide and check for mentions in not just the synopsis but also the trivia/episode/concept art galleries. The guide for "Brain Invaders" mentions the ship and currently you only have the "episode gallery" feature listed in the Sources. We've also been treating the old TCW episode guides as Canon seeing as the episode guides were all adapted directly from the (Canon) episode scripts (see Krix for precedent) so you'll want to go through those as well and see if anything can be added to the Sources.  1358  (Talk)  16:26, March 21, 2018 (UTC)

AV

 * I'd like it mentioned that the name "Pelta-class frigate" originated in The Clone Wars Campaign Guide in the Bts. -  AV-6R7  Crew Pit 02:57, March 1, 2018 (UTC)
 * Added-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 03:01, March 1, 2018 (UTC)

Comments
A surplus of interesting information combined with images and quotes on a "popular" ship is just astounding. -- B32  (Talk) 16:38, December 23, 2017 (UTC)