Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Dobi Deene


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Dobi Deene

 * Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 23:02, November 22, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Another musical nom

(4 ECs/1 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 14:45, November 23, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) So is that the SW version of Michael Jackson?  Corellian Premier Jedi symbol.svg Force will be with you always 01:46, November 26, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) Winterz (talk) 01:22, December 4, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) Supreme Emperor (talk) 06:07, December 5, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) Trip391 (talk) 06:19, December 5, 2013 (UTC)

Object Comments
 * 1) You switch between referring to Dobi as they, and her. Keep it consistent, probably by just using they.  501st  dogma ( talk ) 13:47, November 23, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) *Damn thought I changed all of references to gender neutral, must of missed one. Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:05, November 23, 2013 (UTC)
 * SE
 * 1) * Can you find a way to add some context on sound slugs? Supreme Emperor (talk) 02:30, November 28, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) **Added although I'm not sure it reads that well but can't think of another way of including it. Ayrehead02 (talk) 23:54, December 2, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) ***That works. Supreme Emperor (talk) 06:07, December 5, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) Exiled Jedi
 * 5) *This article is at 223 words, so it needs an introduction.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  07:08, December 5, 2013 (UTC)
 * 6) **Added and still just under 250 by my count. Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:25, December 5, 2013 (UTC)
 * 7) ***I think you could easily expand the article to 250 words by adding a mention of the song's place on the charts in the intro.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  04:28, December 6, 2013 (UTC)
 * 8) ****Done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:02, December 6, 2013 (UTC)
 * 9) *****This will need to be taken to the GAN page.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  04:00, December 10, 2013 (UTC)
 * 10) * I believe the HoloNet News website was released in 2002 not 2005.
 * 11) **Whoops I have no idea how I mixed that up. Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:02, December 6, 2013 (UTC)
 * 12) * I removed all uses of they/their since they should only be used for plurals. While they is frequently used for undefined gender, it is not technically correct. Just something to keep in mind for the future. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  04:28, December 6, 2013 (UTC)
 * 13) **Ah thank you I didn't realise. I'll make sure it doesn't effect future articles. Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:02, December 6, 2013 (UTC)