Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Oro Dassyne


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Oro Dassyne

 * Nominated by:  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 16:30, 14 March 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: One of my most fun nominations ever, simply because I haven't written much lately, and it felt good to be back, doing a nice, easy character in a short amount of time.

(3 ACs/5 Users/8 Total)
Support
 * 1) Grand Moff Tranner [[Image:Imperial Department of Military Research.svg|20px]] (Comlink) 22:27, 14 March 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) CC7567  [ http://images1.wikia.nocookie.net/starwars/images/thumb/5/5f/Rex.png/20px-Rex.png] talk 00:08, 15 March 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) Cylka  -talk- 15:44, 16 March 2009 (UTC)
 * 4)  Pranay Sobusk  ~  Talk  16:43, 16 March 2009 (UTC)
 * SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie ) 04:30, 18 March 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) Nice job, the guys twitching eye kind of disturbed me when I first saw the episode though. Kilson Likes PIE 11:27, 22 March 09 (UTC)
 * 2) Thanks for making those changes. Lucius malfoy7 22:37, 23 March 2009 (UTC)
 * 3)  Graestan ( Talk ) 15:47, 24 March 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) *Lucius's Look
 * 2) ** .I don't know if another worthy image can be found, but if so, you should add that image to the bio.
 * 3) ***Added.
 * 4) ** I would split the biography in half.
 * 5) ***Trust me, that looks weird. The Bio is only four paragraphs, and to have two two paragraph sections would look odd.
 * 6) ** However, he was very arrogant, believing that he was invincible, and he lost his horn in a battle as a result of fighting in the front lines. Arrogant is a point of view, whether he was it or not. I would say "confident", or something like it, as he was that, but it isn't really as much of a "point of view" adjective.
 * 7) ***Changed to overconfident.
 * 8) **Otherwise, excellent job. Lucius malfoy7 22:22, 23 March 2009 (UTC)
 * 9) ***Thanks.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 22:30, 23 March 2009 (UTC)

Comments
 * Quick question: Is there nothing that can be referenced to either Chapter 22 or The New Essential Guide to Alien Species? Grand Moff Tranner [[Image:Imperial Department of Military Research.svg|20px]] (Comlink) 19:42, 14 March 2009 (UTC)
 * Ref'd a few things to NEGAS. As for Clone Wars, everything from there also appears in the Databank, and IMO, changing the sourcing on one of those refs would be unnecessary.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 21:57, 14 March 2009 (UTC)
 * I was wondering if it might be worthwhile to create an article about Dassyne's fortress. Or was the planet of Bomis Koori IV basically his whole fortress? Cylka  -talk- 15:44, 16 March 2009 (UTC)
 * There's very, very little info given about his fortress, and it might even be the whole (or at least a large part) of the planet.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 23:06, 16 March 2009 (UTC)