Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Kaul


 * ''The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a comprehensive article nomination that was unsuccessful. Please do not modify it.

Kaul

 * Nominated by:  OLIOSTER  (talk) 19:18, March 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Another poor soul trapped in the Refugee Sector.

(1 ECs/0 Users/1 Total)
Support
 * 1) You can Kaul me any time, baby. Menkooroo 04:16, March 9, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Menkooroo
 * 2) * Linking to colors is fine; just make sure you do it in both the infobox and the bio.
 * 3) **Done.
 * 4) * Context on the Exchange, baby! Even just a coupla words.
 * 5) **Done.
 * 6) * Ref [3] appears twice in a row near the beginning --- is one of them meant to be something else?
 * 7) **Just referencing too much. Removed one of them.
 * 8) * Can you cut down on the description of his conversation with the Exile? It's always better to try to get the key points of a convo across rather than offering a recount of every line spoken. As a suggestion, "to which the Exile asked why Kaul didn't just grab the goods himself." could probably be jettisoned entirely. Menkooroo 00:37, March 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) **Done.  OLIOSTER  (talk) 00:51, March 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) Nayayen
 * 11) *You should mention that he refuses to get the loot: "If I had the skills needed for the task, I wouldn't be stuck here on Nar Shaddaa, now would I?"
 * 12) **I already did mention this but Menk suggested to excise that part. See his fourth objection.  OLIOSTER  (talk) 21:46, March 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * 13) ***I saw that, but he's pretty much saying here that he wouldn't be on Nar Shaddaa if he had such skills, nothing to do with the conversation really. NAYAYEN &mdash;it appears to be a frammistat 21:54, March 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * 14) ****Will that suffice?  OLIOSTER  (talk)
 * 15) * His conversation file in 302NAR_dlg.erf is named "kehvhen.dlg" [Kevin?]. I don't know if that is Bts worthy but it's the first time I've seen someone have a specific yet totally different name to their actual one. NAYAYEN &mdash;it appears to be a frammistat 21:31, March 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * 16) **Eh, seems too speculative to me.  OLIOSTER  (talk) 21:46, March 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * 17) Jujiggum
 * 18) *BTS explanation on game mechanics, pelase.
 * 19) *As the article is already at 229 words, the above addition will make it very, very easy for you to susbection the article appropriately per the LG and make it over 250 words, thus making the article GAN eligible. Please do so. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 22:03, March 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * 20) **I actually thought I should just go to the GAN with it, but I figured I'd try here first. Will work on it later.  OLIOSTER  (talk) 22:35, March 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * 21) ***Please do not use the CAN as an excuse to be lazy and not fully write out an article. You should write every article as comprehensively as possible, following all of the layout guide's and manual of style's guidelines. If it still unable to reach the GA word limit, only then should it be brought to the CAN. Please do not use the CAN as an excuse to avoid properly writing out articles. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 22:41, March 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * 22) ****My apologies. You can archive this if you wish and I shall work on the article later.  OLIOSTER  (talk) 23:05, March 10, 2011 (UTC)

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