Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Ebon Squadron


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Ebon Squadron

 * Nominated by:  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 03:50, May 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: SWPM

(1 ECs/2 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 21:42, May 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Looks good. Smells good. Feels good. Nice job.&mdash; TK-999  Era-imp.png( Rise of the Empire ) 19:29, May 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) I made a small rewording; take a look. I'd also prefer if the article was intro + bts, but&hellip;  1358  (Talk)  06:42, May 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 02:04, May 30, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Axinal
 * 2) * Could you perhaps just specify that the supplement was called the Imperial Power-up Pack in the BTS?
 * 3) * Also, if the squadron's era is confirmed as the Rebellion era (as opposed to, say, the Rise of the Empire era or the New Republic era), it should be added to the infobox. If not, the tag should be removed.
 * 4) *Other than that, nice work.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 17:54, May 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) **Done and done.  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 18:01, May 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) *** My second objection, regarding the eras, has not been addressed.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 18:28, May 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) ****Oops. Thought I got it. Thanks for the catch.  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 21:21, May 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) *****No problem, nice work.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 21:42, May 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) Rubedo
 * 10) * Excuse me if this is in that PM database (I have dial-up and the specifics refuse to load), but does the card actually say they have the worst defensive capabilites in the Navy or is that just in comparison to the others in the set. If it is the latter, there's no proof that they are the worst in the entire Navy as nowhere near every squad is represented with a figure. That tidbit should be relegated to a BTS note if this is the case. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 01:51, May 29, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) **Sorry, I worded it poorly. They were by no means the worst in the entire Navy in terms of maneuverability and defense, but among the poorest. I have fixed the wording to be more accurate.  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 04:27, May 29, 2011 (UTC)
 * 12) ***Not a hundred percent on this, but OK. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 02:04, May 30, 2011 (UTC)

Comments
 * There you go, XD. Compacted and concise, intro and bts.  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 09:06, May 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * Much better; thanks. :) 1358  (Talk)  09:38, May 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * Thank you. And thanks for catching the tag I missed, as well.  Gethralkin  Hyperwave  15:57, May 27, 2011 (UTC)