Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Squib (redux review)

Squib (redux review)

 * Redux comments: Reduxed per meeting 44.
 * Date added: September 13, 2011
 * Changes since last review: diff

Support

 * 1) No spelling errors, no glaring grammar problems, no linking or redlink problems, referencing exceeds standards, and as silly as FOTJ is, this has kept up with it. Let's move this off Redux and fast-track its RFAN when its time comes. --  Darth Culator  (Talk) 14:47, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

 * Hey, folks. Here's the diff from the featured version to now: diff. For the most part, the changes have all been general updating for new appearances and sources. The more substantial stuff is in the following modes:
 * Reloading and switching to the Species infobox, per all alien articles;
 * Better linking;
 * Use of citation templates where appropriate;
 * Adding links to and stubbing pertinent articles (such as random Squibs mentioned in various sources);
 * A bit of reshuffling of info such that social/cultural stuff is discussed in "Society and culture" rather than "Biology and appearance";
 * Copy editing to remove demonstrative pronouns and adjectives, which we seem not to like anymore;
 * Implementation of "gamemechanics" templates where appropriate;
 * Indications of alternative scenarios from roleplaying material in the BTS;
 * As such, hopefully it's evident that this has all been maintenance and updating, not deterioration of the article. It was the Ascension info update that made me think that a redux might be necessary, since that book added a substantial amount of knowledge about the species. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 16:45, September 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * Note that the article now needs an update from Apocalypse. I'll try to get that done within the month. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 11:44, March 19, 2012 (UTC)
 * Now updated for Apocalypse! Here's the diff from the featured version to now: diff. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 13:44, April 5, 2012 (UTC)