Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Pernicar


 * ''The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a featured article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.

Pernicar

 * Nominated by:  IFYLOFD  ( You will pay the price for your lack of vision! ) 05:48, 17 August 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: WP:NSW to the rescue.

(5 Inqs/1 Users/6 Total/INQCON 5)
Support
 * 1) Absolutely. Love the character and the article. QuentinGeorge 07:08, 17 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 2)  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  00:15, 18 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 3)  Grunny  ( Talk ) 23:58, September 12, 2009 (UTC)
 * 4)  CC7567  (talk) 04:48, September 18, 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 11:03, September 18, 2009 (UTC)
 * 6) I can't believe nobody made the "Jedi so nice they killed him twice" joke yet. --  Darth Culator  (Talk) 00:10, September 21, 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Grunny:
 * 2) * Early life: "Pernicar had three brothers." This really just sticks out in the paragraph and doesn't flow. Can you find somewhere else to integrate it, maybe into a longer sentence?
 * 3) **Addressed.
 * 4) * Life as a Jedi: In the first two sentences of this section can you change one or more of the "rank"s?
 * 5) **Addressed.
 * 6) * Life as a Jedi: "Mortull, noticing his former master, ran toward Pernicar, smiling and laughing as he made his way toward Pernicar." Can you vary one of the "toward Pernicar"s?
 * 7) **Addressed.
 * 8) * While I'm guessing there's not enough info for a P&a, is there any info on his powers or abilities that could be given a mention in the P&t? Maybe if he was able to use a lightsaber or something.
 * 9) **There's really nothing of note.  IFYLOFD  ( You will pay the price for your lack of vision! ) 00:39, 28 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 10) * Grunny  ( Talk ) 08:01, 17 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 11) Attack of the Clone
 * 12) * "In 1,010 BBY, Pernicar fought in a battle against the Sith." Can this battle get an article? The lack of a known location shouldn't stop it from being at least linked.
 * 13) **No article; created and linked.
 * 14) * Please vary all the "after"s in Death and legacy.  CC7567  (talk) 07:18, September 11, 2009 (UTC)
 * 15) **Addressed.  IFYLOFD  ( You will pay the price for your lack of vision! ) 23:37, September 17, 2009 (UTC)

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