Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Gerran


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Gerran

 * Nominated by: Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 18:51, January 10, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: A minor character mentioned in Dynasty of Evil

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1) Good job. Short and sweet. Toprawa and Ralltiir 02:22, January 12, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 21:48, January 14, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 15:34, January 16, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4)  Grunny  ( Talk ) 11:16, January 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) Graestan ( Talk ) 02:23, January 21, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Toprawa:
 * 2) * This rather vague statement really leaves the reader asking for more regarding what exactly about Serra's past has Gerran's father so concerned. I feel a little bit more is needed here to flesh this out for clarity; perhaps alternatively some kind of brief mention in the biography so we know what this is meant to reference once we come to the P/T: "Although his father's efforts to learn anything about Serra's past turned up no information, Gerran accepted that Serra's past was unimportant." Toprawa and Ralltiir 02:01, January 12, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) **Added background info to the bio. Thanks for the review! Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 02:20, January 12, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) Soresu
 * 5) * Is there any indication as to where the airspeeder was when it was destroyed? If known (I assume that it was on Doan, although it's not clear from reading the article), it should be in the "died" section of the infobox. SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 07:22, January 14, 2010 (UTC)
 * 6) **Unfortunately it's not known. I also would assume it was on Doan, but it wasn't stated in the novel (for all we know, they may have been on a neighboring moon or something). Thanks for the review Soresu Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 15:34, January 14, 2010 (UTC)
 * 7) Info in the P&T regarding Serra's actions following Gerran's death probably belongs in the bio as well, maybe a new, small paragraph entailing her and Lucia's actions both.  Graestan ( Talk ) 00:12, January 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * 8) *Done; thanks for the review, Grae :) Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 21:08, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

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