Wookieepedia:Inquisitorius/Log/2019 October 5

Oct 05 14:01:34  Welcome to Inq meeting 108 Oct 05 14:01:50  Starting with the old stuff Oct 05 14:02:02  No changes for any of this, save me typing it out 10 times Oct 05 14:02:07  https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Chameleon_droid Oct 05 14:02:07  https://starwars.fandom.com/index.php?diff=cur&oldid=8504857 Oct 05 14:02:07  https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:Inq/Chameleon_droid Oct 05 14:02:07  Kill Oct 05 14:02:16  Kill Oct 05 14:02:16 Kill Oct 05 14:02:39  Ping Anil Oct 05 14:03:07  Oh whatever, we have notes Oct 05 14:03:13  Chameleon droid killed Oct 05 14:03:21  https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/RX-Series_pilot_droid/Legends Oct 05 14:03:21  https://starwars.fandom.com/index.php?diff=cur&oldid=8504861 Oct 05 14:03:21  https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:Inq/RX-Series_pilot_droid/Legends Oct 05 14:03:21  Kill Oct 05 14:03:26 Kill Oct 05 14:03:34  We should record the absentee notes for each vote for the record Oct 05 14:03:38 <Toprawa> Since we need 4 votes to kill something Oct 05 14:03:49 <AnilSerifoglu> Kill Oct 05 14:03:55 <Toprawa> So count SE's absentee vote toward Chameleon droid Oct 05 14:03:57 <AnilSerifoglu> Sorry :P Oct 05 14:04:06 <Tommy-Macaroni> Okay got it Oct 05 14:04:11 <Tommy-Macaroni> No worries anil Oct 05 14:04:33 <Tommy-Macaroni> Tope? Oct 05 14:04:38 <Toprawa> Kill Oct 05 14:04:40 <Tommy-Macaroni> RX-Series pilot droid killed Oct 05 14:04:45 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/GU-series_%22Guardian%22_police_droid Oct 05 14:04:45 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/index.php?diff=cur&oldid=8504865 Oct 05 14:04:45 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:Inq/GU-series_%22Guardian%22_police_droid Oct 05 14:04:45 <Tommy-Macaroni> Kill Oct 05 14:04:49 <Toprawa> Kill Oct 05 14:04:50 Kill Oct 05 14:05:18 <Toprawa> SE votes Kill Oct 05 14:05:22 <Tommy-Macaroni> GU-series "Guardian" police droid killed Oct 05 14:05:28 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Lone_battle_droid Oct 05 14:05:28 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/index.php?diff=cur&oldid=8504867 Oct 05 14:05:28 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:Inq/Lone_battle_droid Oct 05 14:05:28 <Tommy-Macaroni> Kill Oct 05 14:05:32 <AnilSerifoglu> Kill Oct 05 14:05:33 Kill Oct 05 14:05:37 <Toprawa> Kill Oct 05 14:05:38 <Tommy-Macaroni> Lone battle droid killed Oct 05 14:05:42 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Doctor_(tactical_droid) Oct 05 14:05:42 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/index.php?diff=cur&oldid=8504869 Oct 05 14:05:43 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:Inq/Doctor_(tactical_droid) Oct 05 14:05:43 <Tommy-Macaroni> Kill Oct 05 14:05:45 <AnilSerifoglu> Kill Oct 05 14:05:46 <Toprawa> Kill Oct 05 14:06:01 Kill Oct 05 14:06:03 <Tommy-Macaroni> Doctor (tactical droid) Oct 05 14:06:07 <Tommy-Macaroni> Doctor (tactical droid) killed Oct 05 14:06:13 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Joruus_C%27baoth Oct 05 14:06:13 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/index.php?diff=cur&oldid=8504871 Oct 05 14:06:13 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:Inq/Joruus_C%27baoth Oct 05 14:06:13 <Tommy-Macaroni> Kill Oct 05 14:06:17 <Toprawa> Kill Oct 05 14:06:18 <AnilSerifoglu> Kill Oct 05 14:06:22 Kill Oct 05 14:06:24 <Tommy-Macaroni> Joruus C'baoth killed Oct 05 14:06:29 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Etro_Edthatt Oct 05 14:06:29 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/index.php?diff=cur&oldid=8504873 Oct 05 14:06:29 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:Inq/Etro_Edthatt Oct 05 14:06:29 <Tommy-Macaroni> Kill Oct 05 14:06:32 <Toprawa> Kill Oct 05 14:06:43 <AnilSerifoglu> Kill Oct 05 14:06:48 Kill Oct 05 14:06:50 <Tommy-Macaroni> Etro Edthatt killed Oct 05 14:06:55 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Emperor%27s_Retreat Oct 05 14:06:55 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/index.php?diff=cur&oldid=8504876 Oct 05 14:06:55 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:Inq/Emperor%27s_Retreat Oct 05 14:06:55 <Tommy-Macaroni> Kill Oct 05 14:06:57 <AnilSerifoglu> Kill Oct 05 14:07:07 <Toprawa> Kill Oct 05 14:07:18 Kill Oct 05 14:07:21 <Tommy-Macaroni> Emperor's Retreat killed Oct 05 14:07:27 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/The_Drunk_Side Oct 05 14:07:27 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/index.php?diff=cur&oldid=8504878 Oct 05 14:07:27 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:Inq/The_Drunk_Side Oct 05 14:07:27 <Tommy-Macaroni> Kill Oct 05 14:07:29 <Toprawa> Kill Oct 05 14:07:29 <AnilSerifoglu> Kill Oct 05 14:07:53 Kill Oct 05 14:07:59 <Tommy-Macaroni> The Drunk Side killed Oct 05 14:08:02 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wampa/Legends Oct 05 14:08:03 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/index.php?diff=cur&oldid=8504881 Oct 05 14:08:03 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:Inq/Wampa/Legends Oct 05 14:08:03 <Tommy-Macaroni> Kill Oct 05 14:08:07 <AnilSerifoglu> Kill Oct 05 14:08:09 <Toprawa> Kill Oct 05 14:08:11 <Toprawa> Goodbye, old friend Oct 05 14:08:18 Kill Oct 05 14:08:20 <Tommy-Macaroni> Wampa/Legends killed Oct 05 14:08:25 <Tommy-Macaroni> Okay, new stuff: Oct 05 14:08:36 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Uthar_Wynn Oct 05 14:08:36 <Tommy-Macaroni> One of several KotOR articles using IMDB citations for voice credits, up until I replaced that with a citation needed tag. —Unsigned comment by Hanzo Hasashi (talk • contribs). Oct 05 14:08:36 <Tommy-Macaroni> Infobox-exclusive information Oct 05 14:08:36 <Tommy-Macaroni> Images in article body should be repositioned so they're in more aesthetically appropriate places; i.e., not running into section headers and quotes, etc. This is a relic of Monobook. Oct 05 14:08:36 <Tommy-Macaroni> There are certainly more opportunities for additional images in the article, assuming they're available Oct 05 14:08:37 <Tommy-Macaroni> Could use an Equipment section Oct 05 14:08:37 <Tommy-Macaroni> His death year in the infobox cannot be sourced straight to KOTOR Campaign Guide if he's not even mentioned in that source. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 20:20, October 4, 2019 (UTC) Oct 05 14:08:38 <Tommy-Macaroni> Probe Oct 05 14:08:41 <AnilSerifoglu> Probe Oct 05 14:08:42 <Toprawa> Probe Oct 05 14:08:54 Probe Oct 05 14:08:56 <Tommy-Macaroni> Uthar Wynn probed Oct 05 14:09:03 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Darth_Bandon Oct 05 14:09:03 <Tommy-Macaroni> Same as above. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 02:18, September 17, 2019 (UTC) Oct 05 14:09:03 <Tommy-Macaroni> Infobox-exclusive information Oct 05 14:09:03 <Tommy-Macaroni> Could use an Equipment section Oct 05 14:09:03 <Tommy-Macaroni> Format SW.com Databank entries correctly Oct 05 14:09:04 <Tommy-Macaroni> Missing backup links Oct 05 14:09:04 <Tommy-Macaroni> Reference 21 can implement a cleaner and expanded use of Citeweb fields Oct 05 14:09:05 <Tommy-Macaroni> Reference 22 needs to implement relevant citation template Oct 05 14:09:05 <Tommy-Macaroni> General underlinking throughout article Oct 05 14:09:06 <Tommy-Macaroni> Avoid use of OOU term "Unidentified" in infobox. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 20:20, October 4, 2019 (UTC) Oct 05 14:09:06 <Tommy-Macaroni> Probe Oct 05 14:09:07 <AnilSerifoglu> Probe Oct 05 14:09:08 <Toprawa> Probe Oct 05 14:09:20 Probe Oct 05 14:09:21 <Tommy-Macaroni> Darth Bandon probed Oct 05 14:09:28 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Pacithhip/Legends Oct 05 14:09:28 <Tommy-Macaroni> Redlinks and redirects Oct 05 14:09:28 <Tommy-Macaroni> Resolve referencing-by-page-number Oct 05 14:09:28 <Tommy-Macaroni> Missing backup links Oct 05 14:09:28 <Tommy-Macaroni> General underlinking Oct 05 14:09:28 <Tommy-Macaroni> Not all the BBY/ABY dates are referenced correctly Oct 05 14:09:28 <Tommy-Macaroni> Paragraph breaks needed for second "Pacithhip in the galaxy" paragraph and first two BTS paragraphs Oct 05 14:09:29 <Tommy-Macaroni> Some BTS wording needs to be updated for Legends Oct 05 14:09:29 <Tommy-Macaroni> Format SW.com Databank entry names correctly Oct 05 14:09:30 <Tommy-Macaroni> There's one instance where the article varies between "Pacithhip" and "Pacithhip" for plural use Oct 05 14:09:30 <Tommy-Macaroni> Instances of misordered ref notes; example: [7][2]. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 20:06, October 4, 2019 (UTC) Oct 05 14:09:31 <Tommy-Macaroni> Probe Oct 05 14:09:32 <AnilSerifoglu> Probe Oct 05 14:09:32 <Toprawa> Probe Oct 05 14:09:41 Probe Oct 05 14:09:43 <Tommy-Macaroni> Pacithhip/Legends probed Oct 05 14:09:50 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/ARC-77 Oct 05 14:09:50 <Tommy-Macaroni> Intro seems like it could be expanded relevant to the size of the Biography Oct 05 14:09:50 <Tommy-Macaroni> Infobox-exclusive information Oct 05 14:09:50 <Tommy-Macaroni> BBY dates are not referenced correctly Oct 05 14:09:50 <Tommy-Macaroni> BTS should mention original air date for first CW appearance Oct 05 14:09:51 <Tommy-Macaroni> Instance of misordered ref notes; example: [5][2]. Oct 05 14:09:51 <Tommy-Macaroni> Format SW.com Databank entry name correctly Oct 05 14:09:52 <Tommy-Macaroni> Remove period from quote caption Oct 05 14:09:52 <Tommy-Macaroni> Cleanup BTS for italics/quotes in titles. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 20:06, October 4, 2019 (UTC) Oct 05 14:09:53 <Tommy-Macaroni> Probe Oct 05 14:09:54 <Toprawa> Probe Oct 05 14:09:54 <AnilSerifoglu> Probe Oct 05 14:10:15 Probe Oct 05 14:10:17 <Tommy-Macaroni> ARC-77 probed Oct 05 14:10:23 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Walex_Blissex Oct 05 14:10:23 <Tommy-Macaroni> Missing backup links Oct 05 14:10:23 <Tommy-Macaroni> Format SW.com Databank entry names correctly Oct 05 14:10:23 <Tommy-Macaroni> None of the BBY/ABY dates appear to be referenced correctly Oct 05 14:10:23 <Tommy-Macaroni> Revise images for better placement within subsections; some of them are weirdly placed as a result of old Monobook formatting Oct 05 14:10:23 <Tommy-Macaroni> Could use an Equipment section Oct 05 14:10:23 <Tommy-Macaroni> BTS unsourced. Publication dates and authors would be nice there as well. Oct 05 14:10:24 <Tommy-Macaroni> Resolve page-number-referencing in ref 4. Oct 05 14:10:24 <Tommy-Macaroni> Fact Files and Starships & Vehicles issues should specify sections in all instances. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 20:06, October 4, 2019 (UTC) Oct 05 14:10:25 <Tommy-Macaroni> Probe Oct 05 14:10:25 <AnilSerifoglu> Probe Oct 05 14:10:29 <Toprawa> Probe Oct 05 14:10:42 Probe Oct 05 14:10:46 <Tommy-Macaroni> Walex Blissex probed Oct 05 14:10:50 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Crimson_Jack Oct 05 14:10:50 <Tommy-Macaroni> Remove links from quote captions Oct 05 14:10:50 <Tommy-Macaroni> Could use an Equipment section Oct 05 14:10:50 <Tommy-Macaroni> Infobox-exclusive information Oct 05 14:10:50 <Tommy-Macaroni> None of the BBY/ABY dates are referenced correctly Oct 05 14:10:50 <Tommy-Macaroni> Redlink Oct 05 14:10:50 <Tommy-Macaroni> Format SW.com Databank entry names correctly Oct 05 14:10:51 <Tommy-Macaroni> BTS partly unsourced. Publication date(s) would be nice there. Oct 05 14:10:51 <Tommy-Macaroni> Paragraph breaks would be advised for some of the larger paragraphs Oct 05 14:10:52 <Tommy-Macaroni> All of the comic images should be digitized. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 20:06, October 4, 2019 (UTC) Oct 05 14:10:52 <Tommy-Macaroni> Probe Oct 05 14:10:53 <AnilSerifoglu> Probe Oct 05 14:10:56 Probe Oct 05 14:11:04 <Toprawa> Probe Oct 05 14:11:05 <Tommy-Macaroni> Crimson Jack probed Oct 05 14:11:10 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Lott_Dod/Legends Oct 05 14:11:10 <Tommy-Macaroni> Redlink and redirects Oct 05 14:11:10 <Tommy-Macaroni> Missing backup links Oct 05 14:11:10 <Tommy-Macaroni> Infobox-exclusive information Oct 05 14:11:10 <Tommy-Macaroni> Not all of the BBY dates are referenced correctly Oct 05 14:11:11 <Tommy-Macaroni> There's no reason for there to be a reference note in the P/T image caption. Anything exclusive there should be referenced in the article body itself. Oct 05 14:11:11 <Tommy-Macaroni> There's certainly enough room for a few more images, which I presume are available. It looks like this article was formatted originally for Monobook. Oct 05 14:11:12 <Tommy-Macaroni> BTS unsourced. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 20:06, October 4, 2019 (UTC) Oct 05 14:11:12 <Tommy-Macaroni> Probe Oct 05 14:11:17 <Toprawa> Probe Oct 05 14:11:17 <AnilSerifoglu> Probe Oct 05 14:11:38 Probe Oct 05 14:11:39 <Tommy-Macaroni> Lott Dod/Legends probed Oct 05 14:11:44 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Todr_Fel Oct 05 14:11:44 <Tommy-Macaroni> I'd like to request someone look into that the images are as high-quality digital versions as they can be. I believe they are digital versions, but (and maybe it's just me) they kind of look like they could be a little sharper, which is possible if obtained from a newer digital source, such as Marvel. Oct 05 14:11:44 <Tommy-Macaroni> General underlinking Oct 05 14:11:44 <Tommy-Macaroni> Infobox-exclusive information Oct 05 14:11:44 <Tommy-Macaroni> Two-speaker quotes get Quote template, not Dialogue Oct 05 14:11:45 <Tommy-Macaroni> None of the BBY/ABY dates appear to be referenced correctly Oct 05 14:11:45 <Tommy-Macaroni> Reference 3 needs to cite specific Fact File section Oct 05 14:11:46 <Tommy-Macaroni> Reference 4 needs to cite by individual issue(s), not story arc Oct 05 14:11:46 <Tommy-Macaroni> BTS should mention publication date(s) and comic illustrator(s) Oct 05 14:11:47 <Tommy-Macaroni> In the BTS, is this claim even referenced properly? "...and his more famous brother Soontir." Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 20:06, October 4, 2019 (UTC) Oct 05 14:11:47 <Tommy-Macaroni> Probe Oct 05 14:11:47 <AnilSerifoglu> Probe Oct 05 14:11:51 <Toprawa> Probe Oct 05 14:12:02 Probe Oct 05 14:12:04 <Tommy-Macaroni> Todr Fel probed Oct 05 14:12:09 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Hart-and-Parn_Gorra-Fiolla Oct 05 14:12:09 <Tommy-Macaroni> General underlinking Oct 05 14:12:09 <Tommy-Macaroni> Infobox-exclusive information Oct 05 14:12:09 <Tommy-Macaroni> None of the BBY/ABY dates are referenced correctly Oct 05 14:12:09 <Tommy-Macaroni> Reference 2 needs to use CSWECite Oct 05 14:12:09 <Tommy-Macaroni> References 5 and 6 need to use appropriate citation templates Oct 05 14:12:09 <Tommy-Macaroni> Remove link from bold name in intro Oct 05 14:12:10 <Tommy-Macaroni> Intro seems pretty skimpy for size of Biography Oct 05 14:12:10 <Tommy-Macaroni> Could use an Equipment section Oct 05 14:12:11 <Tommy-Macaroni> "Relationships" is not sanctioned by the Layout Guide and needs to be incorporated into P/T Oct 05 14:12:11 <Tommy-Macaroni> BTS unsourced and could be expanded in detail. Publication date(s), author(s), and illutrator(s) would be nice. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 20:06, October 4, 2019 (UTC) Oct 05 14:12:12 <Tommy-Macaroni> Probe Oct 05 14:12:13 <AnilSerifoglu> Probe Oct 05 14:12:14 <Toprawa> Probe Oct 05 14:12:22 Probe Oct 05 14:12:24 <Tommy-Macaroni> Hart-and-Parn Gorra-Fiolla probed Oct 05 14:12:28 <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Cay_Qel-Droma Oct 05 14:12:28 <Tommy-Macaroni> Fix redirects Oct 05 14:12:28 <Tommy-Macaroni> General underlinking throughout article Oct 05 14:12:28 <Tommy-Macaroni> Infobox-exclusive information Oct 05 14:12:28 <Tommy-Macaroni> Should have a well-detailed Equipment section Oct 05 14:12:29 <Tommy-Macaroni> Digitize all comic images Oct 05 14:12:29 <Tommy-Macaroni> Format all quote and image captions correctly Oct 05 14:12:30 <Tommy-Macaroni> None of the BBY dates appear to be referenced correctly Oct 05 14:12:30 <Tommy-Macaroni> The intro looks like it's pretty skimpy compared to the size of the Biography Oct 05 14:12:31 <Tommy-Macaroni> The article looks like it has a few opportunities for additional images, which is mostly a relic of Monobook formatting Oct 05 14:12:31 <Tommy-Macaroni> Additionally, images should be adjusted so they're placed in more aesthetically appropriate places, not running into subsection titles or quotes, etc. This is also a Monobook relic. Oct 05 14:12:32 <Tommy-Macaroni> BTS: Oct 05 14:12:32 <Tommy-Macaroni> Should introduce publication date(s), author(s), and illustrator(s) where appropriate Oct 05 14:12:33 <Tommy-Macaroni> Masters of the Force sentence is trivial and should be removed Oct 05 14:12:33 <Tommy-Macaroni> Second paragraph is unsourced Oct 05 14:12:34 <Tommy-Macaroni> Starships & Vehicles Collection item in Sources list should list individual section, similar to Fact Files Oct 05 14:12:34 <Tommy-Macaroni> Reference 11 needs to implement citation template Oct 05 14:12:35 <Tommy-Macaroni> Article needs to be referenced by individual comic issue, not story arc. In other words, this entire article's referencing needs to be overhauled. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 20:06, October 4, 2019 (UTC) Oct 05 14:12:35 <Tommy-Macaroni> Probe Oct 05 14:12:36 <Toprawa> Probe Oct 05 14:12:37 <AnilSerifoglu> Probe Oct 05 14:12:57 Probe Oct 05 14:12:59 <Tommy-Macaroni> Cay Qel-Droma probed Oct 05 14:13:12 <Tommy-Macaroni> That's it for the ones on the page, anyone have any more? Oct 05 14:13:21 <Toprawa> That's enough paperwork for one meeting :P Oct 05 14:13:29 <Tommy-Macaroni> Cool Oct 05 14:13:31 <AnilSerifoglu> We have some at the bin, I believe Oct 05 14:13:37 <Tommy-Macaroni> Any discussion items Oct 05 14:13:53 <Tommy-Macaroni> I mean, I think 10 is probably enough for paperwork Oct 05 14:14:03 <Toprawa> Just that people should make an effort to keep the attendance section on meeting pages updated so we know whether you're attending or not Oct 05 14:14:12 <Toprawa> Which is the whole point of last Inqmoot's Bylaws amendment Oct 05 14:14:29 <Toprawa> It does us no good to say you're attending but then leave absentee notes Oct 05 14:14:49 <Tommy-Macaroni> Let's hope who needs to see that does Oct 05 14:14:52 <Toprawa> Indeed Oct 05 14:14:59 <Tommy-Macaroni> Okay, that concluded meeting 108 Oct 05 14:15:06 <Tommy-Macaroni> EJ on paperwork and scheduling Oct 05 14:15:08 <AnilSerifoglu> Thanks for hosting, Tommy Oct 05 14:15:10 <Tommy-Macaroni> Thanks all for coming Oct 05 14:15:12 <Toprawa> Thanks, Tommy. Efficient. :P Oct 05 14:15:14 Thanks for hosting. Oct 05 14:15:21 More paperwork!