Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Scepter of Ragnos

Scepter of Ragnos

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:58, August 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Here we go. My first GAnom for the Barn-burner and my first GAnom for WP:VG.

Support

 * 1) Good work.-- Talrrivanian  JaingHead.svg ( Headquarters ) 06:58, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Prepare to be savaged&hellip;

 * You can go into much greater detail about how it looks, based on the image: The spikes at the top are not just spikes, they're part of an elaborate crest, for instance. I also note a striated handle, a double pommel guard (with the inside guard shorter than the outside one), a striated tip, a fuller in the center, and an overall slate and silver coloration. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 14:18, August 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * See how that looks. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:17, August 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * Better. But I'm not sure what you mean by the colors. Parts of it look slate-gray, other parts look silver. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 00:20, August 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * I tried to describe the colors as best I could. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 03:12, August 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * I think a lot of what you were seeing was simply lighting effects on metal. I've tried to reword things a bit, but take a look. (Note I'll be traveling tomorrow, and won't be able to check the nom again for a few days. AC folks: I am no longer an oppose! :) ~ Savage BOB sig.png 04:12, August 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * Looks great. Thanks Bob. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:37, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

The Premier

 * 1) The BTS section needs a little expansion and context. What do you mean by "trapped" and "blasted" in the second-to-last sentence? Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 14:42, August 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *Hmm, not sure what you want here. It seems pretty clear to me. But, see how this works. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:33, August 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) I'm guessing there is information about the scepter in the game's guide. There is a Senate Hall page where you can request information.
 * 4) *There isn't always info about stuff in the game guide, but I'll ask anyway. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:33, August 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) **Alright. I finally found out that there is no relevant info. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 16:13, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Talrrivanian

 * First of all the Description section cannot be sourced to just the one reference. At least three more are needed.
 * I got it all from the one source I have on there.
 * In the History section you need to source several facts. For instance, how do we know that the info about Axmis creating the cult thing is not some made-up joke?
 * It says it in the game. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 23:29, August 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * In the History section, at the beginning you need to ref 14 ABY, and the sentence it is located in.
 * I got that info from the game, too.
 * You need to ref the sentence in the history section that states that the scepter can reanimate cells.
 * Ref this sentence also: Tavion used this ability to create an army of Force-sensitives from the ranks of the Disciples of Ragnos, mainly the Sith Cultists. It is located in the History section.
 * I believe all the stuff I got in there is correctly sourced. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 23:34, August 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * Maybe more later. -- Talrrivanian JaingHead.svg ( Headquarters ) 17:08, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

This giant woman will devour us all!

 * A few prelims: The name "Scepter of Ragnos" and the description of it as an "artifact" don't appear anywhere in the "Characteristics" or "History" sections. Always remember that the introduction is an abstract of the rest of the article, and that anything stated in the intro needs to be stated in the body, too.
 * Got it.
 * The intro states that it once belonged to Marka Ragnos --- if that's true, then the "History" section should begin during Ragnos's life and state that he owned it before his death.
 * Fixed. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:32, August 29, 2011 (UTC)
 * There's a lot of info in "History" that should really be in "Characteristics:" the stuff about reanimating cells, resurrecting spirits, and granting Force-sensitivity to muggles. Menkooroo 05:21, August 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * I think I got it all. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:39, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

 * 1) Just remember to keep an eye on the links; i added several I felt were appropriate. As a reminder, things are linked once in the intro, once in the infobox, and once in the body. Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 14:54, August 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *Yea, I just didn't know that "sarcophagus" had a link. :P Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:33, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

Vote to remove nomination (AC only)

 * 1) Either the current objections haven't yet been addressed properly or haven't been properly checked. In any case, one objection is nearing three weeks of inactivity.  CC7567  (talk) 03:08, September 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *My apologies. I believe that the objection you refer to is the one about the Prima Guide. I have been looking for someone that has it. I finally found out that has it, but he hasn't given me the information yet. If you could give me a little more time to ask him again, I'd appreciate it.  Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:58, September 5, 2011 (UTC)