Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Vix


 * ''The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a comprehensive article nomination that was unsuccessful. Please do not modify it.

Vix

 * Nominated by:  OLIOSTER  (talk) 05:22, June 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: I'm back in it with a simple one.

(0 ECs/1 Users/1 Total)
Support
 * 1) He will. –Tm_T (Talk) 14:56, June 18, 2011 (UTC)

Object Comments
 * 1) Tm
 * 2) * With Gamemechanics, please define the game within the template, like.
 * 3) * Try not to link those disambig pages of colours, but Color instead.
 * 4) * Try if you could gather a reasonable P&t section. –Tm_T (Talk) 06:36, June 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) **All should be addressed.  OLIOSTER  (talk) 07:28, June 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) * Reload the infobox. (:
 * 7) * Also, I recall he didn't notice anything else than swoop racing even when he was poked while there were fighting going on in the cantina or was it after it, worth noting? –Tm_T (Talk) 09:02, June 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) **Addressed.  OLIOSTER  (talk) 09:53, June 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) Exiled Jedi
 * 10) * Context on Colonel Tobin.
 * 11) * You merely end the behind the scenes section with "He will". Please fix this.
 * 12) * You could add the company that produced the video game to the behind the scenes.
 * 13) * I do not think that you can assume from the game that his homeworld was Onderon. If there is a quote of his that supports this please let me know, otherwise I think that it is speculation. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  12:15, June 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 14) **Actually I think that's what we usually assume if person has ties to the planet or is presented like local, like in this case. –Tm_T (Talk) 14:56, June 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 15) ***That makes sense.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  15:10, June 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 16) **All addressed.  OLIOSTER  (talk) 23:16, June 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 17) Axinal
 * 18) *Excluding "He will," the article is at 229 words, and thus requires an attempt at an intro. It shouldn't be too difficult to bring this article to GA standards.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 20:55, June 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 19) **I keep forgetting this new policy, will work on it in a bit.  OLIOSTER  (talk) 23:16, June 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 20) **This nomination can be removed now. I'll be nomming it on the GAN later.  OLIOSTER  (talk) 06:53, June 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * Welcome back. (: –Tm_T (Talk) 09:02, June 18, 2011 (UTC)