Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Stormtrooper X


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Stormtrooper X

 * Nominated by: Xicer9 [[Image:atgar.svg|20px]]( Combadge) 05:04, April 13, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Ended up being longer than I expected.

(5 ACs/3 Users/8 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 18:08, April 13, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) One of those minor characters which I wish had more information revealed about him.  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  21:18, April 13, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) Interesting.  JangFett  (Talk) 00:41, April 14, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4)  Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 08:53, April 14, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 23:33, April 14, 2010 (UTC)
 * 6) Nice work.  Jonjedigrandmaster  Jedi symbol.svg ( We seed the stars ) 00:35, April 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * 7) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 10:46, April 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * 8) Cylka  -talk- 02:40, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Lee attacks
 * 2) * Stormtrooper X was an alias used by a dangerous mercenary: POV ?
 * 3) * build up a gang of at least a dozen other outlaws, each of them also considered dangerous: Also POV ?
 * 4) *That's all from me. Nice work.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 17:44, April 13, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) **To both objections, I changed up the wording a bit. It isn't POV if in-universe characters consider him dangerous. Xicer9 [[Image:atgar.svg|20px]]( Combadge) 18:03, April 13, 2010 (UTC)
 * 6) ***OK.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 18:08, April 13, 2010 (UTC)
 * 7) In the intro you say his identity was universally unknown, but in the bio you say it was only unknown to most. Which is correct?  Jonjedigrandmaster  Jedi symbol.svg ( We seed the stars ) 00:23, April 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * 8) *The text makes it incredibly vague but I'm hesitant to say that absolutely nobody knew his identity. Changed the part in the intro to "almost universally unknown." Xicer9 [[Image:atgar.svg|20px]]( Combadge) 00:34, April 15, 2010 (UTC)

Comments
 * I moved the Bts image to the right side as it was messing with the headers and overall formatting. Feel free to revert if you feel so. -- 1358  (Talk) 17:53, April 13, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nah, it's cool. I noticed the same thing, I just wasn't sure if it justified moving it to the right. Xicer9 [[Image:atgar.svg|20px]]( Combadge) 18:03, April 13, 2010 (UTC)