Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Skirmish at Sinkhole Station


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Skirmish at Sinkhole Station

 * Nominated by: Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 03:22, 29 August 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: A battle; Abyss, of course

(5 Inqs/1 Users/6 Total)
Support
 * 1) Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research.svg (Comlink) 13:25, September 6, 2009 (UTC)
 * 2)  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  00:07, September 7, 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) Jedi Kasra (talk) 14:41, September 11, 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) An interesting read.  CC7567  (talk) 00:55, September 20, 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) Green Tentacle (Talk) 21:06, October 5, 2009 (UTC)
 * 6) --  —Harrar  ( Cut the comm chatter ) 22:34, October 12, 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) This is more of a comment. Vhai went to Dathomir after the duel, right? Did the Skywalkers talk about chasing her there? If so, I think you should add that bit to Aftermath.  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  11:34, September 5, 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) *They don't do that until Backlash (in the excerpt in the back of Abyss), but I added a little info to the aftermath. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 14:21, September 5, 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) "Ben felt Ship's presence searching for them and realized that their attackers must be Sith." How does Ben recognize Ship as a Sith vessel? Green Tentacle (Talk) 20:08, October 5, 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) *Addressed. Thanks for the review. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 20:35, October 5, 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) Harrar
 * 6) * The intro is simply far too long. It's coming up to the same size as something like Corran Horn or Tycho Celchu, which are vast articles in comparison. Please strip it down to essentials rather than over-detail.
 * 7) **Hopefully addressed. Let me know if you want me to try and cut it down more.
 * 8) *That's all. -- —Harrar  ( Cut the comm chatter ) 11:23, October 6, 2009 (UTC)
 * 9) **Thanks for the review. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 15:37, October 6, 2009 (UTC)

Comments
 * Spoilers for anyone who hasn't read Abyss yet. —Tommy9281 Dark side Master SWGTCG.jpg ( No truth in me ) 13:01, September 3, 2009 (UTC)
 * Can the Keshiri Sith with the lost hand get a link (or preferably, at least a stub)?  CC7567  (talk) 00:55, September 20, 2009 (UTC)
 * Sure thing: done. Thanks for the review. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Jedi Beacon ) 01:06, September 20, 2009 (UTC)