Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations

 This page is for the nomination of "comprehensive articles." For a list of "comprehensive articles," see Category:Wookieepedia comprehensive articles.


 * Comprehensive article nominations history
 * Comprehensive article nominations archiving checklist

What is a "comprehensive article?"

A "comprehensive article" is an article that contains all information regarding the topic. Often, "comprehensive articles" cannot reach Featured or Good Article status due to their limited content. This process is intended to recognize articles that contain all relevant canon information, yet are still under the 250 word limit required for a Good Article. The purpose of this is twofold&mdash;firstly, to help users distinguish what is a stub, and what is merely a short article with no further relevant material to be added, and, more importantly, to highlight for the reader when they are reading something that has been judged definitely "comprehensive"&mdash;that is, a guarantee to the reader that whatever they are reading contains the sum total of all available content on that topic.

Nominations and promotions of the Comprehensive article process are overseen by a collective of users known as the "EduCorps," which is made up of the Inquisitorius, the AgriCorps, and various other experienced users who are considered qualified to adequately judge the nominated material.

Lucasfilm Ltd. and its many licensees continue to expand the Star Wars universe. Since new information might become available, it may be necessary to revoke a "comprehensive article's" status. A forum will be used to nominate articles that have fallen out-of-date. Members of the EduCorps will then post a warning template on that page, and a grace period of one week will be instituted in which the article can be improved. If there is a significant amount of new information, it is likely that once updated, the article will become eligible for Good article status, and thereby ineligible for Comprehensive article status.

READ THIS FIRST!

An article must&hellip;


 * 1) &hellip;be well-written and detailed.
 * 2) &hellip;be unbiased, non-point of view.
 * 3) &hellip;be sourced with all available sources and appearances.
 * 4) &hellip;follow the Manual of Style, Layout Guide, and all other policies on Wookieepedia. This is, of course, within reason. If a topic only has a very limited degree of content that cannot be divided up into the relevant article sections, it is not required that it follow the Layout Guide precisely. This is to be judged on a case-by-case basis.
 * 5) &hellip;following the review process, be stable, i.e., does not change significantly from day to day and is not the subject of ongoing edit wars. This does not apply to vandalism and protection or semi-protection as a result of vandalism.
 * 6) &hellip;not be tagged with any sort of improvement tags (i.e. more sources, expand, etc).
 * 7) &hellip;have no redlinks.
 * 8) &hellip;have all relevant canon information presented.
 * 9) &hellip;be completely referenced for all available material and sources. See Sourcing for more information.
 * 10) &hellip;have all quotes and images sourced.
 * 11) &hellip;provide at least one relevant quote on the article if available.
 * 12) &hellip;include a "Behind the scenes" section for in-universe articles.
 * 13) &hellip;counting the introduction, the article body, and "Behind the scenes" material, must not exceed 250 words in length (not including captions, quotes, or headers, etc). Any articles exceeding the limit should be taken to the Good article nominations page for consideration.
 * 14) &hellip;if the nominated article reaches 200 words or greater, the nominator must either provide an intro or draft an intro and provide a link to the revision in the nomination, showing that the intro does not elevate the article over 250 words. Exceptions can be made for articles wherein the majority of the text is in the "Behind the scenes" section.

How to nominate:


 * 1) First, nominate an article you find is worthy of comprehensive status, putting it at the bottom of the list below. Nominated articles must meet all thirteen requirements stated above.
 * 2) Add CAnom at the top of the article you are nominating.
 * 3) Be sure to place sign in the "Nominated by" line when the nomination is posted for voting.
 * 4) Others will object to the nomination if they disagree that the article is good enough; they will then supply reasons for doing so, and ways to improve the article in accordance with the established rules.
 * 5) Nominators and supporters will adjust the article until the objectors (with reasonable objections) are satisfied. Objectors may also make alterations&mdash;if there is any reason for contention on a given point, it should be settled in a civil manner in the nomination field itself.
 * 6) Users may not vote on their own articles.
 * 7) There is no limit to the amount of nominations a given user can submit at any given time.

How to vote:


 * 1) Before doing anything, be sure to read the article completely, keeping a sharp eye out for mistakes.
 * 2) Afterward, compare the article to the criteria listed above, and then either support or object the article's nomination.
 * 3) *If you object, please supply concrete reasons for doing so, and how it can be improved.
 * 4) As stated above, any objections will be looked upon by the nominator, supporters, and anyone willing to improve the article, and action will be taken to please the objectors. Do not strike other users' objections; it is up to the objector to review the changes and strike if they are satisfied.
 * 5) There are several ways in which an article can receive the required number of votes. Within a 48-hour period of nomination, only EduCorps votes will count towards the total, although anyone may choose to vote in that window. If four members of the EduCorps support a nomination in that window [0 to 48 hours post-nomination], and there are no outstanding objections, the article can be considered a "Comprehensive article" and be tagged with the template 48 hours after the initial nomination. The talk page will also be tagged with the  template. When the 48 hours are up, any user's votes will contribute towards the total. If two EduCorps member has voted for an article after a week, three regular votes will be required. After the 48 hour period, an article can still also pass with just three EduCorps votes.
 * 6) Once a nomination is successful, it will be placed on the Comprehensive article list. Instructions on how to archive nominations, successful or otherwise, can be found here. Anyone can archive a nomination&mdash;just make sure it has the correct number of votes, has been nominated for at least a week (or 48 hours if there are four EC votes), and that there are absolutely no outstanding objections. If you are not sure how to do this, just ask, and someone will likely be more than willing to help you. Also, if you think you can slip one past us, think again&mdash;someone is always watching you.

All nominations will be considered idle and are subject to instantaneous removal by EduCorps members if objections are not addressed, or at least not answered, after a period of 1 week.

Please remember to archive your nomination beforehand if you plan on taking it to the Good Article Nominations page.

Unidentified female Jedi Master (meditation)

 * Nominated by: DarthRevan1173 RevanTOR001.jpg (Long live Lord Revan) 02:01, July 7, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: For Project Novels

(2 ECs/1 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) Ayrehead02 (talk) 00:39, July 9, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  Commander Code-8  You lost the game! 06:51, August 2, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  13:26, August 2, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) CC-8'
 * 2) * I'm not a fan of the use of "this" in the into. "A" would probably be better.
 * 3) **Changed.
 * 4) * Sectioning off isn't really necessary here, the article isn't even that far over 100 words, and both sections seem to basically say the same thing, so a lot of words could be cut back anyway
 * 5) **Removed Bio since it is the same.
 * 6) * Perhaps say that she was in the Jedi Order before order 66, just as a small thing to show that she definitely wasn't in the NJO
 * 7) **Removed mention the order she was a part of since the novel doesn't identify which Jedi Order she is a part of.
 * 8) * The hideps/hidecs, whatever in the infobox shouldn't be there when they have filled in fields underneath them.  Commander Code-8  You lost the game! 07:45, July 8, 2013 (UTC)
 * 9) **Fixed.
 * 10) * Perhaps it should say a picture of her meditating was taken/made whatever before it says Luke saw it.
 * 11) **Mentioned.
 * 12) * Since the category of Post-Ruusan is used maybe put that in the article somewhere.
 * 13) **Removed as the novel doesn't confirm if she was part of the Pre or Post Ruusan Jedi.
 * 14) * Article for the picture
 * 15) **Linked and created.
 * 16) * Legacy era should be removed since she could have been dead at that point.  Commander Code-8  You lost the game! 11:07, July 17, 2013 (UTC)
 * 17) **Removed. DarthRevan1173 RevanTOR001.jpg (Long live Lord Revan) 06:18, July 18, 2013 (UTC)
 * 18) * Last one, find a different word to bold at the start.  Commander Code-8  You lost the game! 22:25, July 29, 2013 (UTC)
 * 19) **Changed. DarthRevan1173 RevanTOR001.jpg (Long live Lord Revan) 17:32, July 30, 2013 (UTC)


 * 1) Ayrehead
 * 2) * Actually to slightly contradict CC-8, given that the Jedi enclave on Corellia was built after the Yuzhan Vong War I'm not sure we can assume she was in the Jedi Order at all as it's more like she's in the New Jedi Order. To be safe you should probably just say she was a Jedi and not mention either order. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:44, July 8, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) **Removed mention the order she was a part of since the novel doesn't identify which Jedi Order she is a part of. DarthRevan1173 RevanTOR001.jpg (Long live Lord Revan) 00:10, July 9, 2013 (UTC)


 * 1) Winterz
 * 2) *You're missing the italics in the Bts section ;). Winterz (talk) 15:55, August 5, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) **Added. DarthRevan1173 RevanTOR001.jpg (Long live Lord Revan) 19:09, August 5, 2013 (UTC)


 * 1) SE
 * 2) *Can you add in prior to 41 ABY at the end of the first sentence? Supreme Emperor (talk) 12:55, August 11, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) **Added. DarthRevan1173 RevanTOR001.jpg (Long live Lord Revan) 05:34, August 12, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Strained keebadas

 * Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:36, July 8, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Back to Hutt foods

(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 12:26, July 11, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  22:26, July 14, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) Winterz (talk) 16:08, August 5, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) Supreme Emperor (talk) 12:58, August 11, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) "...although the insects are not mentioned in the original RPG material." Insects?  501st  dogma ( talk ) 17:50, July 8, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) *Whoops fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:19, July 8, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Scurrier tips

 * Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:47, July 8, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Another from the list

(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 12:27, July 11, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  23:15, July 13, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) Winterz (talk) 16:07, August 5, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) Supreme Emperor (talk) 13:02, August 11, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) 501st
 * 2) * The second sentence is reading a bit weird, around the part where it says the Baobab wants other humans to try it. Please fix this. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 17:55, July 8, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) **I split it does it make more sense now? Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:20, July 8, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Unidentified Kilmaulsi guard

 * Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:13, July 8, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:A subpage for the soon to be nominated Kilmaulsi article.

(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 12:28, July 11, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  22:25, July 14, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) Winterz (talk) 18:38, August 5, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) Supreme Emperor (talk) 03:11, August 12, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 501
 * 1) * The skin section of the infobox needs to say orange as well as green. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 17:59, July 8, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) **Added. Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:15, July 8, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) Exiled Jedi
 * 4) * Are the black, spiky things around his neck feathers/hair? If so, I think that they should be mentioned in the article. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  23:13, July 13, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) **Added. Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:49, July 14, 2013 (UTC)


 * 1) Winterz
 * 2) * Please, decrease the size of that quote's description. Repeating what already says in the article is utterly unnecessary. Winterz (talk) 16:08, August 5, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) **Shortened. Ayrehead02 (talk) 17:38, August 5, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Adrell

 * Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:45, July 11, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Decided I wanted to Nom a Moff

(2 ECs/1 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 13:45, July 12, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  23:10, July 13, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) Supreme Emperor (talk) 03:18, August 12, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Tyloor Bronk

 * Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:02, July 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Sub-page for Dewell Bronk who I plan to nom soon.

(2 ECs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Commander Code-8  You lost the game! 11:12, July 17, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  20:30, July 20, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) Jinzler (talk) 12:21, August 10, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) Supreme Emperor (talk) 03:23, August 12, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) One minor thing: Each sentence in the body uses the verb lost, or a variation of it. Switch it up a bit please. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 11:35, July 18, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) *Changed two of the three. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:08, July 20, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) While the infobox states that he was affiliated with the Republic, it is not currently made clear in the body of the article that he was affiliated with and fought on the side of the Republic. --Jinzler (talk) 12:07, August 10, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) *Added to body. Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:15, August 10, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Good Neighbor of the Year award

 * Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:58, July 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Another Incognito nom

(3 ECs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1) Reminds me of a SpongeBob episode.  Commander Code-8  You lost the game! 11:11, July 17, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 11:35, July 18, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  13:22, July 18, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 17:33, July 20, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) Supreme Emperor (talk) 03:24, August 12, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * The titles of short stories like "Incognito" (see that page, if you like) are quoted in prose, not italicized. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 19:41, July 19, 2013 (UTC)
 * Fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:05, July 20, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Coruscant Benevolent Society

 * Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:58, July 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Not really sure what this society would actually do...

(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Commander Code-8  You lost the game! 11:09, July 17, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 11:37, July 18, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  13:24, July 18, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) Supreme Emperor (talk) 03:26, August 12, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Milos Brejik

 * Nominated by: Cade  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg  Calrayn  02:51, July 19, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: The Codex Project presents a continuity conundrum, courtesy of the Codex. (That's a lot of c's.)

(2 ECs/2 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1) Keep your own story straight BioWare!-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  06:12, July 19, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:18, July 20, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 13:34, July 20, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) Supreme Emperor (talk) 03:28, August 12, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Darth Gorgos

 * Nominated by: Cade  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg  Calrayn  14:52, July 19, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: The Codex Project returns, again. Time for a flash flood of noms!

(2 ECs/3 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  15:35, July 19, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:20, July 20, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 13:35, July 20, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) Jinzler (talk) 12:01, August 10, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) Supreme Emperor (talk) 03:30, August 12, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Darth Gorgos's apprentice

 * Nominated by: Cade  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg  Calrayn  14:52, July 19, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: The Codex Project

(2 ECs/1 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 13:36, July 20, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  20:27, July 20, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) Supreme Emperor (talk) 03:33, August 12, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * Could you change it so that it does not use the Spire's completion twice in the same sentence. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  15:42, July 19, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) **Done. Cade  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg  Calrayn  15:45, July 19, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Battle of Velmor

 * Nominated by: Cade  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg  Calrayn  15:15, July 19, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: The Codex Project

(2 ECs/1 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  15:46, July 19, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:22, July 20, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 13:37, July 20, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Operation: Red Cell

 * Nominated by: Cade  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg  Calrayn  15:15, July 19, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: The Codex Project

(2 ECs/1 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:27, July 20, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 14:14, July 20, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  20:27, July 20, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * It seems to me that you should create an article for the Fixer rank in Imperial Intelligence. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:22, July 19, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) **Done. Cade  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg  Calrayn  15:40, July 20, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Bardian Aelto

 * Nominated by: Cade  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg  Calrayn  15:15, July 19, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: The Codex Project

(2 ECs/1 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) Junior chemist makes me think of some kid with a chemistry set.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  16:26, July 19, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:28, July 20, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 00:04, July 24, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Tiran

 * Nominated by: Cade  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg  Calrayn  15:15, July 19, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: The Codex Project

(2 ECs/1 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:29, July 20, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  22:22, July 20, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 00:06, July 24, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Conraddas Vindicator

 * Nominated by: Cade  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg  Calrayn  15:15, July 19, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: The Codex Project

(2 ECs/1 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:15, July 20, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  22:27, July 20, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 00:07, July 24, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Exar Kun: The Lesson, The Warning

 * Nominated by: Cade  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg  Calrayn  15:15, July 19, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: The Codex Project

(2 ECs/1 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:16, July 20, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  16:26, July 21, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 00:08, July 24, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * Wasn't the Cold War more than three centuries after the Great Sith War? -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  22:36, July 20, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) **Done. Cade  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg  Calrayn  06:15, July 21, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Aidan Vurt

 * Nominated by: Cade  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg  Calrayn  15:15, July 19, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: The Codex Project

(2 ECs/1 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:20, July 20, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  22:39, July 20, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 00:09, July 24, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Attack of the Clones (painting)

 * Nominated by: Gal-icon.jpg  OLIOSTER  (talk) 21:52, July 29, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Cloning blues....

(0 ECs/0 Users/0 Total)
Support

Object Comments
 * 1) You could probably add that it shows droids, clones, and gunships as well. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 23:30, July 31, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) *The texture is such low quality I had to look at the actual poster image to see them clearly. Added. Gal-icon.jpg  OLIOSTER  (talk) 17:32, August 3, 2013 (UTC)
 * 199 words but most of it is in the BTS. Gal-icon.jpg  OLIOSTER  (talk) 21:52, July 29, 2013 (UTC)
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) *I may be wrong, but I do not think that you can source the names and titles of the people and objects on the poster to the game. If the game included all of this information, then you can leave it how it is.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  02:27, August 12, 2013 (UTC)

Sand gizzars

 * Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:55, July 31, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:To be honest not an appealing sounding dish

(2 ECs/0 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) I eat these for breakfast everyday.  501st  dogma ( talk ) 23:34, July 31, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  22:24, August 5, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) 501st
 * 2) * WAIT -- 207 words, needs intro. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 23:37, July 31, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) **I would of gotten away with it too if it wasn't for you meddlin' kids! Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:19, August 1, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Braised fork tart

 * Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:55, July 31, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Nearly finished all the weird phrase book foods

(2 ECs/0 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 20:11, August 2, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  22:25, August 5, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Naughty Ayrehead, trying to sneak it past with 217 words with no intro.... FIX!  501st  dogma ( talk ) 23:35, July 31, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) *Fixed here as well, I always forget wordcount :/ Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:24, August 1, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Mubasa hock

 * Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:19, August 2, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:The final Galactic phrase guide dish (at least in the Huttese section)

(2 ECs/0 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) Yes! No more! :)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 14:52, August 3, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  22:28, August 5, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Unidentified T-series tactical droid (Coruscant)

 * Nominated by:  Darth Pythonis  CIS roundel.svg (Talk) 00:21, August 3, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: An important enough droid to the Republic since its in prison rather than decapitated like previous tactical droids.

(1 ECs/0 Users/1 Total)
Support
 * 1)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 11:59, August 9, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) If it appears, get an image. Cade  StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg  Calrayn  00:26, August 3, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) *It might be hard to get a good enough image of the tactical droid since it's barely shown. Plus you can only see it through the security screen. I'll see if JMAS can probably get a good enough view.  Darth Pythonis  CIS roundel.svg (Talk) 20:26, August 3, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) **It's barely noticeable, but I've got an image in place now. -  JMAS  Jolly Trooper.png Hey, it's me! 03:00, August 12, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) 501st
 * 5) * You need a behind the scenes.
 * 6) **Added
 * 7) ***Its up to you if you want to keep mention of the first droid. You can get away with just saying that in appeared in episode "so and so." If you choose to keep mention of the other droid, context on Florrum will be necessary. Just saying that it is a planet will suffice. On that not, please state in the body that Geonosis, Ryloth, and the other one are all worlds/planets.
 * 8) ****I made the bts section more simpler.
 * 9) *****You might want to mention his appearance in the episode guide on Star Wars.com. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 00:32, August 5, 2013 (UTC)
 * 10) ******Added.  Darth Pythonis  CIS roundel.svg (Talk) 16:48, August 5, 2013 (UTC)
 * 11) * Mention of its height needs to be in body.
 * 12) **I don't know where to put that information since it's more of a characteristic. You're welcome to add it if you would like.
 * 13) ***You should do it, as this is your nomination. Just start a sentence off with "Standing (x) meters in height, this tactical droid....." or something like that. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 23:06, August 3, 2013 (UTC)
 * 14) ****I found a place for this and added it in the biography.  Darth Pythonis  CIS roundel.svg (Talk) 19:39, August 4, 2013 (UTC)
 * 15) * Technically, you do not need an intro, as it is not over 200 words. Keep it or kill it, your choice.
 * 16) **I'll just keep it since we might see the droid later on.
 * 17) ***Never mind, do to your addition the article is over 200 words, which requires and intro.
 * 18) * Add to the top of the page to kill the table of contents, as it is unneeded in articles of this size.
 * 19) **Added
 * 20) *Good work. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 00:44, August 3, 2013 (UTC)
 * 21) **Thank you.  Darth Pythonis  CIS roundel.svg (Talk) 20:26, August 3, 2013 (UTC)

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Barlen

 * Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:00, August 4, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Old TOR article I wrote up ages ago an never nom'd

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 * 1) Looks good.  501st  dogma ( talk ) 00:36, August 5, 2013 (UTC)

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 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) *Did the guy speak Basic in the game? If he didn't, you need to use the translation quote template.
 * 3) *Did you check Star Wars: The Old Republic Explorer's Guide: Prima Official Game Guide to see if the guy was located on the maps in the book? From what I've seen about the book, it is supposed to mention the location of vendors, even if they are just mentioned indirectly as "weapons vendor".-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  21:52, August 11, 2013 (UTC)

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Unidentified Sienar Fleet Systems board member

 * Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 23:16, August 9, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:A sub nom for MI-726

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 * 1)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 12:40, August 10, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  Commander Code-8  You lost the game! 07:30, August 11, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  02:20, August 12, 2013 (UTC)

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 * 1) 501st
 * 2) * "An male individual worked a board member of the starship design company..." You might want to re-read this spot for errors...
 * 3) * Alphabetize categories. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 00:06, August 10, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) **Both corrected. Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:14, August 10, 2013 (UTC)

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MI-series security droid

 * Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 23:18, August 9, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:A slightly more interesting MI-726 subnom

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 * 1)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 11:59, August 10, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  Commander Code-8  You lost the game! 08:05, August 12, 2013 (UTC)

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 * 1) You've managed to put the word allow in the Bts in a spot that makes less sense than the mind of someone who loves Phantom Menace :)  Commander Code-8  You lost the game! 07:29, August 11, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) *We can't allow such nonsense around here :P Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:45, August 11, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) Exiled Jedi
 * 4) *The body of the article does not pin down the timeframe as the Rebellion era.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  02:18, August 12, 2013 (UTC)

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Attack on Sienar Fleet Systems board member's home

 * Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:39, August 10, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:probably my longest article title...

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 * 1)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  02:14, August 12, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  Commander Code-8  You lost the game! 08:04, August 12, 2013 (UTC)

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 * 1) CC-8
 * 2) * Infobox has raid written instead of attack.  Commander Code-8  You lost the game! 07:25, August 11, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) **Fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:45, August 11, 2013 (UTC)

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Jesef

 * Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:44, August 10, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:One of several Smugglers code articles I've been meaning to nom.

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 * 1)  Commander Code-8  You lost the game! 23:06, August 10, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  21:54, August 11, 2013 (UTC)

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Ocuvox

 * Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:52, August 10, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:An infestation of these would actually be quite nice. Better than pigeons.

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 * 1)  Commander Code-8  You lost the game! 23:04, August 10, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  21:57, August 11, 2013 (UTC)

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Attack on unidentified Imperial factory

 * Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:22, August 10, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Get ready for three super fun articles!

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Support
 * 1)  Commander Code-8  You lost the game! 23:02, August 10, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) *While the article should mention the guard's claims, I think that mentioning the possible accomplices in the infobox is too speculative.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  22:00, August 11, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) **Removed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:31, August 12, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) *The rebellion era is not referenced in the article besides the era tag.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  22:03, August 11, 2013 (UTC)

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Unidentified Imperial factory

 * Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:22, August 10, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Here's the second!

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 * 1)  Commander Code-8  You lost the game! 23:01, August 10, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) *The Rebellion era is not mentioned outside of the infobox and era tag.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  22:04, August 11, 2013 (UTC)

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Unidentified security guard

 * Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:22, August 10, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Hope you enjoyed the first two!

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 * 1) Just remember to bold the intro in the future :)  Commander Code-8  You lost the game! 23:00, August 10, 2013 (UTC)

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 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) *Please mention the Rebellion era in the body, currently you only mention the reign of the Empire which could occur in the Rise of the Empire era.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  01:59, August 12, 2013 (UTC)

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Dorbus Kyrullus

 * Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 20:45, August 10, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:A named character makes a nice change.

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 * 1) Had to make a tiny change, hope you don't mind.  Commander Code-8  You lost the game! 22:58, August 10, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) *This article also needs a reference to the era in the body.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  02:02, August 12, 2013 (UTC)

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Devidia Vennsiol's father

 * Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 20:45, August 10, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Reminds me of Veruca Salt's father

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 * 1) Veruca Salt went to military school?  Commander Code-8  You lost the game! 22:55, August 10, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) *This article also needs a reference to the era in the body.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  02:04, August 12, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) * The military school article makes it sound like she did the majority of her charming of men there, while this article says that she started before, which I guess would be before she was a teenager? This seems kind of odd to me.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  02:08, August 12, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) **Oops, I misread the school article, but the part about here being sent to military school when she became a teenager makes the charming of men still seem rather odd. Is there any explanation in the source?-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  02:10, August 12, 2013 (UTC)
 * 5) ***Changed it to boys which what the article says and just as a teenager not as soon as she became one. Slightly less creepy now? :P Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:37, August 12, 2013 (UTC)

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Unidentified Safidine Industries laboratory

 * Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 20:45, August 10, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Oddly the of is missing from the quote in the OS

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 * 1)  Commander Code-8  You lost the game! 22:54, August 10, 2013 (UTC)

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 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) *This article also needs a reference to the era in the body.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  02:06, August 12, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) **Added. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:14, August 12, 2013 (UTC)

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Unidentified military school

 * Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 20:45, August 10, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:I may have gone slightly over board on the nominations...

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Support
 * 1) Man, if Cade sees this...  Commander Code-8  You lost the game! 22:53, August 10, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) *This article also needs a reference to the era in the body.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  02:11, August 12, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) **Changed "during the reign of Empire" to during the Galactic Civil War which is slightly more specific. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:13, August 12, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Actually looking over the article again I'm not sure there is any evidence that the bounties are during the Rebellion era. I originally put that era due to the Stormtrooper X and Vooz Nooxoo Una articles we have already at status listing this era, but there doesn't seem to be any time frame more specific than the reign of the Empire suggested by the article. As such I'll remove the era tag from all of the articles and add a bit of info to behind the scenes. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:23, August 12, 2013 (UTC)

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