Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Grael


 * ''The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a featured article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.

Grael

 * Nominated by: -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 01:52, 7 August 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Force-sensitive commando, meter tall, furry skin, short nom, nice story, what's not to like?

(6 Inqs/0 Users/6 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Greyman ( Talk ) 07:01, 10 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) Now, if they canonize him as the Ewok Jedi, that would be great! -  Cavalier One ( Squadron channel ) 15:27, 10 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 3)  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  20:04, 15 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) Toprawa and Ralltiir 18:21, 29 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 5)  Master Aban Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 01:37, 31 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 6) --  Darth Culator  (Talk) 01:47, 31 August 2008 (UTC)

Oppose Comments
 * I'm fairly certain there is another image of Grael out there... --Eyrezer 06:19, 7 August 2008 (UTC)
 * Yes, there are two more. I'll try to get Culator to scan them soon. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 12:35, 7 August 2008 (UTC)
 * Images have been added, courtesy of Darth Culator. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 16:07, 30 August 2008 (UTC)
 * Sweet potatoes, and I second Cav. --Eyrezer 06:52, 31 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 1) From the squadron briefing of Cavalier One:
 * 2) * Is there an article for the Tribe Panshee village? If so, it needs to be linked to. If not, then it should be created. - Cavalier One ( Squadron channel ) 08:13, 8 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) **Linked to and created. :-) -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 21:48, 8 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) Stuff:
 * 5) * Context on yootak in the body.
 * 6) **Added.
 * 7) * Anything you can link to for "long-armed black creatures"?
 * 8) **Nothing to link to, but I added a description.
 * 9) * Context on location of the prison in the body when first mentioned.
 * 10) **Changed it a bit; is that what you're looking for?
 * 11) *Very nice job. This light-hearted story seems pretty funny.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 19:00, 12 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 12) **Thank you. Yep, it is certainly entertaining. :) -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 19:11, 12 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 13) Toprawa:
 * 14) * Very redundant, please reword/condense: "There, he was introduced to a golden protocol droid, which was fluent in Ewokese. Grael introduced himself to the droid"
 * 15) **Reworded.
 * 16) * Some kind of context is needed for his flute/musical abilities here. Nothing in the biography really establishes that he has this flute, or why: "Grael still had possession of his flute"
 * 17) **Better?
 * 18) * After going through and linking some things, you now have some redlink issues. Please kill the musician red link in the intro, and I think you still may have 4 in the bio. Toprawa and Ralltiir 19:16, 25 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 19) **Created musician and bread; "Balis-Baurgh system" didn't need to be linked because Balis-Baurgh is the system, oddly enough. Should only be three left. Thanks for the review. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 19:20, 28 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 20) Powers and abilities section needed? --Eyrezer 07:09, 31 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 21) *I wouldn't say so. All we really know is that he could use the Force to sense his prey, etc, and that he was a talented musician and hunter. It's all mentioned in the bio/P&T, and a P&A would be quite repetitive and short, I think. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 11:37, 31 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 22) **Sounds good enough for me. --Eyrezer 23:14, 31 August 2008 (UTC)