Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Nek Bwua'tu

Nek Bwua'tu

 * Nominated by: Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 15:31, January 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Its been a while. I may be rusty.

The Dolphin Attacks
**In the infobox, only Ruweln should be mentioned as his homeworld, without saying that it's in the Bothan sector of the Mid Rim. You already mention that at the beginning of the Biography section, so it's unnecessary in the infobox. While details are good, I haven't seen any other character articles that do it this way, so it would be simpler just to have the planet's name. **You link to the galaxy in two consecutive sections: "Early years" and "Blockading the Utegetu Nebula". It should be linked only the first time. Also, in the first paragraph, the word "married" should be linked to "marriage". **In the latter paragraph, I see a few links missing: reporter Madhi Vaandt&hellip;slave revolts on Blaudu Sextus.
 * Wow&hellip;I planned to do a little bit of work on this article, but you've done a lot more than I ever would have dreamed. That being said, I have a few minor comments:
 * In the infobox, his affiliation should also state the Galactic Alliance Defense Fleet, in addition to the Defense Force.
 * In the "later career" section, an image of Kenth Hamner, such as this one, would fit well.
 * The opening quote is a great choice, but the descriptive line is too long. You could probably just shorten it to the names of the speakers and hearers, which is generally the convention for quotes, especially lead quotes.
 * This quote would work somewhere: "We all do what we must", which Bwua'tu says to Daala in Allies.
 * In the last section, when you mention Bwua'tu's brain response to Madhi Vaandt, there are a few small details that you could add, particularly mentioning how Daala first believed that Bwua'tu was stimulated by Vaandt's beauty, but that she then realized that there had to be something more.
 * Now, just remember that with the releases of future FOTJ novels, you might need to do a little bit of updating on this, if he dies or something.
 * Otherwise, that's about all I have to say, good job writing this!-- ID-21 Dolphin  DolphinJedi.png(Talk) 01:25, January 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * I'm not sure if you're aware of this, Dolphin, but the FAN page regulars have a certain informal clause we refer to as . Meaning that if someone finds little nitpicking grammar, punctuation, or formatting errors, including linking bits, in a nomination, they're expected to fix those issues themselves, rather than leaving a bunch of petty objections. Many of these objections you have listed here fall under the  clause. Toprawa and Ralltiir 01:31, January 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * Interesting. I have fixed some stuff myself in the past, but I was told not to. However, since this is all minor, I've fixed the stuff like grmmar and left the more substantial objections for the nominator to fix.