Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Umberbool City


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Umberbool City

 * Nominated by:  Commander Code-8  To say hi, press 42 07:08, November 16, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: I think I have this whole CA wrtiting thingy down pat. More Operation Battlegrounds.

(2 ECs/0 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1)  501st  dogma ( talk ) 13:08, November 19, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  18:36, November 23, 2012 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) 501st
 * 2) * Could you change the text up a bit? Right now, you are using practically the same text for both this and your other city nom. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 13:28, November 16, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) **There's other CAs that have very similar dialogue, such as Wanted Poster: Han Solo and Wanted Poster: Luke Skywalker.  Commander Code-8  To say hi, press 42 02:34, November 18, 2012 (UTC)
 * 4) ***It depends on the reviewer, and it's off and on usualy. However, I still think you should change it. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 00:18, November 19, 2012 (UTC)
 * 5) ****I've changed some words and reworded the odd sentence. Hope that works.  Commander Code-8  To say hi, press 42 05:04, November 19, 2012 (UTC)
 * 6) Exiled Jedi
 * 7) * You need to link to Gungan society somewhere in the article body. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  14:42, November 19, 2012 (UTC)
 * 8) **I've linked it to the second mention of Gungans since I couldn't find anywhere else.  Commander Code-8  To say hi, press 42 21:29, November 19, 2012 (UTC)

Comments
 * 1) Can't this be archived now, since it's got 2 EC votes?  Commander Code-8  To say hi, press 42 21:10, December 10, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) *An EC archiver will be with you shortly..... 501st  dogma ( talk ) 21:16, December 10, 2012 (UTC)