Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Otavon XII's second moon


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Otavon XII's second moon

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 05:37, April 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Arbitrary numbering is arbitrary.

(2 ECs/3 Users/5 Total)
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 * 1) Nice.&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 00:22, April 29, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2)  Imperators II (Talk) 21:20, April 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Over the moon. ~  Savage  BOB sig.png 05:38, May 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4)  OLIOSTER   (talk) 23:54, May 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) Much better after that last change.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  18:29, May 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) I find the first sentence a bit lengthy. Do you think you could split it into two just for ease of reading, or maybe replace a couple of commas with emdashes?&mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 21:44, April 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *I subbed in Jon's version. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 00:00, April 29, 2011 (UTC)


 * 1) ExiledJedi
 * 2) * The first sentence made it sound like the moon orbited two planets, please reword. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  14:17, May 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Fixed. Nice catch. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 16:57, May 19, 2011 (UTC)

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