Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Lone battle droid


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Lone battle droid

 * Nominated by: -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 00:06, 15 March 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Hopefully interesting. Has a companion GAN which is also worth a read.

(5 Inqs/1 Users/6 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  17:30, 21 March 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) Lord Hydronium 06:59, 6 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) Green Tentacle (Talk) 19:14, 7 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) Grand Moff Tranner [[Image:Imperial Department of Military Research.svg|20px]] (Comlink) 14:33, 8 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) &mdash;  Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 14:49, 8 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 6)  Graestan ( Talk ) 03:01, 14 April 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) You need to alter your quote formatting in "Desertion". Otherwise, geat work.  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  00:28, 15 March 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) *To a quote template, you mean? Generally, I would use in such situations, but I thought for here because they were both unnamed it would be more clear this way. Afaik, the quote template usage only applies to two line quotes; for longer quotes, it can be either/or. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 00:34, 15 March 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) Graestan the Merciless:
 * 4) * Calling him a B1 battle droid twice in such close succession in the intro is a bit of a no-no, in my opinion.
 * 5) * I don't see how the Creator and Manufacturer fields in the infobox are not synonymous in this case. I could see it for something like C-3PO, but not this droid, and not when Baktoid was a Confederate droid factory.
 * 6) * The first sentence in the bio is Ciceronian in its length. Please break it up for readers of less linguistic faculty than you or I possess.
 * 7) * "disarmed &hellip; taking off half the B1's arm" is a bit awkward, the figurative version followed by the literal one, leaving the reader to question which was meant.
 * 8) * More images.
 * 9) * Graestan ( Talk ) 15:15, 8 April 2009 (UTC)
 * 10) **Hope Acky doesn't mind...done, done, done, done, and done. - Lord Hydronium 02:56, 14 April 2009 (UTC)

Comments
 * More images incoming. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 00:06, 15 March 2009 (UTC)
 * Wow, I remember creating this article way back in the day. Amazed you got this thing to 1000 words.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 00:28, 15 March 2009 (UTC)
 * :-) -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 00:34, 15 March 2009 (UTC)
 * :-) -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 00:34, 15 March 2009 (UTC)