Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Unidentified Gungan master songwriter


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Unidentified Gungan master songwriter

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 09:33, December 2, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: I'd give 9 to 10 he'd shoot Justin Bieber

(1 ECs/3 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1) Sneaky :).  OLIOSTER  (talk) 23:46, December 2, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Darth Morrt 11:53, December 12, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) ~ SavageBob 21:45, January 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) Menkooroo 02:30, January 12, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * Two things: First, I'm a bit wary of the word "penned." I know you're trying for a synonym of "wrote," but "penned" indicates pen to paper, which we can't assume in Star Wars. Perhaps "composed"? Second, I'm not sure what's meant by "which was available in 1.5 ABY." Available for purchase? Only one copy available? Multiple copies available? Just a bit more explanation, and it's good. :) ~ SavageBob 21:44, December 18, 2010 (UTC)
 * Done. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 00:46, January 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * Better! :) But is there only one copy of the painting, or can multiple people purchase it and display it simultaneously? ~ SavageBob 02:52, January 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * The painting is given out freely to any player who asks for it in Mos Eisley, so anyone can get it.  OLIOSTER  (talk) 19:51, January 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * I've tried to clarify this; please revert if it's no longer correct. ~ SavageBob 21:45, January 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * See my objection to Trevor Flume's mother. How do you feel about changing up the "this" ? Menkooroo 05:09, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

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