Talk:Padmé Amidala's wardrobe/Legends

I really don't see a need for this. I'm slapping a VFD tag on it. -- SFH 22:13, 5 April 2006 (UTC)

Yeah, really, it was more like something taken out of a bad newspaper article. Got my vote. Rutkowski 11:35, 7 April 2006 (PDT)

Add images, rewrite the text to better center on when she wore those customs and the article will be fine. - TopAce 18:41, 7 April 2006 (UTC)
 * There's a great deal of info on her various costumes in The Official SW Fact File, and I assume from Dressing a Galaxy. I'll try and gather some info - Kwenn 11:01, 17 May 2006 (UTC)

i say it needs more picture. most of us know what its referring to but still, it would make it a much more interesting read.

OK, Here we go with probably heavy editing and stuff.
I took the galleries out and inserted the pictures in with the text. I tried to ensure that the text would flow with the pictures, and had to add in a good bit of text so that the pictures stayed where I wanted them. This should be much better, and you can see what is being discussed without having to go hunt for it in the gallery. I think that makes it a better article--Amthyst fire 06:34, 10 March 2007 (UTC)

"The Thumbnails looked horrible" said JMAS, and I found my preferences tab, and was looking at it with a different skin, and yes, with some of the skins the thmbnails look horrible. I attribute that to a lack of text to keep the pictures alligned properly. --Amthyst fire 19:13, 10 March 2007 (UTC)

Sections
I propose fewer sections. The table of contents is WAY too long, and each section has so little in it. I suggest dividing up the sections differently, and then instead of headings use bold text for outfit titles. For sections I suggest: Let me know what y'all think.  Sarendipity  ( Talk to me ) 02:38, 11 March 2007 (UTC)
 * Royal attire (all of the gowns she wore in her official duties as Queen)
 * Disguises
 * Battle attire
 * Senator's attire (all of the dresses worn for official Senator's duties)
 * Travel attire (outfits worn at the Naboo retreat, etc.)
 * Nightgowns
 * Maternity clothes (outfits worn during her pregnancy, except Senator's attire and Nightgowns)
 * Wedding dress
 * Funeral attire


 * Something, anything. I think that this page has a horendous case of the uglies. --Amthyst fire 10:06, 11 March 2007 (UTC)
 * Fine, but they would still have to have some kind of heading to divide them up, or either have what article of clothing it is announced in the first sentance of each 'mini-section,' in order to avoid confusion. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  18:48, 11 March 2007 (UTC)
 * They can still have titles, just in bold text rather than using the usual headings.  Sarendipity  ( Talk to me ) 18:55, 11 March 2007 (UTC)
 * Sounds good to me. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  19:45, 11 March 2007 (UTC) EDIT: When I categorized according to the above, the other categories rendered 'Maternity clothes' moot, so it is not included. - Solus  (Bird of Prey)  20:16, 11 March 2007 (UTC)
 * I think this is a good idea. - JMAS 20:33, 11 March 2007 (UTC)
 * Looks great, Solus :)  Sarendipity  ( Talk to me ) 02:49, 12 March 2007 (UTC)
 * Thank you. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  15:25, 12 March 2007 (UTC)

Improving
Now, to get down to the dirty work, we can start a list of what needs to be done to this article. Feel free to add to it, as I'm not good at this kind of stuff.


 * Subsections or mini-sections (if the above proposal passes, which I think it will) need major expansion. Mostly needed by:
 * Peasant disguise
 * Senator gown
 * Loyalist gown
 * Packing dress
 * Picnic dress
 * Nightgown and robe
 * Tatooine cloak and attire
 * Tatooine blue dress
 * Wedding dress
 * Velvet cloak
 * Lavender nightdress
 * Delegation gown
 * Peacock dress
 * Visiting attire
 * Aqua nightgown
 * Senatorial gown
 * Revelation dress
 * Mustafar attire
 * Funeral gown
 * Ilum attire
 * Pink dress
 * Blue gown
 * Blue dress
 * Purple dress
 * Beaded gown
 * Coruscant nightgown
 * Birthing robe
 * Intro needs help. Seriously
 * Lead quote, if we can get one
 * Needs better picture of the Peasant disguise
 * The Dinner dress's background, though pleasant, bluntly blurrs the lines of her gown, and the lighting makes it difficult to tell where the dress begins and ends. This, however, can be tolerated if no other picture can be provided
 * The Battle dress picture's white background is somewhat distracting, though can be tolerated if need be
 * Loyalist gown actually needs a promo or a screenshot instead of an illustration
 * Geonosis attire's polka-dot background is very odd-looking in comparison to the other pictures, but can be tolerated if need be
 * The Visiting attire's picture could be better. There is a nice picture of it on p.197 of Dressing a Galaxy, for those with the time, the book, and a scanner
 * Needs a better picture of the Revelation dress, most of what we have now is her headpiece
 * Needs a main image
 * Pink dress, Blue gown, Blue dress, and Purple dress need renaming, if possible
 * I count one nasty little redlink. Can this be fixed?
 * The demon named 'sourcing.'

I know the expansion of some of the sections or mini-sections will be difficult, but we can work to cram as much in there as we can. When I or anyone else addresses these issues, please strike through them. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  18:48, 11 March 2007 (UTC)


 * Should her outfits from the Clone Wars cartoon series be included as well?  Sarendipity  ( Talk to me ) 18:55, 11 March 2007 (UTC)
 * I'm not sure on that one. It's fine with me, though it would look awkward amongst promos and screenshots. I'm just not sure. I've found several quotes that might do for the main quote. They're all from the Ep II novelization and are thoughts by Anakin, so some of them may be a bit corny:

"She could be wearing anything, he realized, and still be beautiful."

- Anakin's thoughts, referring to Padmé

"All of the decorations of her Queenly outfits had been beautifully designed, but still could only detract from the more beautifully designed Padmé."

- Anakin's thoughts, referring to Padmé

"This was the way Anakin wanted to see her, where her clothing was just a finishing touch."

- Anakin's thoughts, referring to Padmé

What's the verdict? - Solus (Bird of Prey)  19:07, 11 March 2007 (UTC)


 * The second one seems most fitting to me.  Sarendipity  ( Talk to me ) 02:49, 12 March 2007 (UTC)
 * Yes... I don't know if I should put it up now or not, though. For, though it is a 'majority' (Two out of two) I don't know if it's 'consensus'. I can put it up there and if there are any objections, we'll see how it works itself out. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  15:27, 12 March 2007 (UTC)
 * I think we should include Clone Wars content. Also, I think quote 2 is best, but #1 is also good. -LtNOWIS 16:41, 12 March 2007 (UTC)
 * Okay. However, I have not seen Clone Wars, so I am not aware of all of her attire within it, so I will need help. I have tried to expand the introduction, is it good enough to cross off of the to-do list? Secondly, what should we do for the main image? Here are some proposals, if anyone else has any pics they want to suggest (not already used in the article), then feel free to add some, as right now its just the planning stage.

IMHO, I prefer the Funeral one or the Villa one. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  16:04, 13 March 2007 (UTC)EDIT: I have begun sourcing, and I will need someone to look it over to make sure I have not assigned the fact the wrong source. Thank you. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  18:10, 13 March 2007 (UTC)EDIT:I have sourced most of it, but I need information on where these pieces of information are from, as I have looked at The Compete Visual Dictionary and quickly skimmed through Dressing a Galaxy to find them.

Where did it say that...
 * The costumes designed for Padmé in The Phantom Menace were widely admired, and were featured in a Vogue magazine spread. (A link to the magazine article would do, but I wouldn't know where to look)
 * For some viewers, Padmé's costumes were the most memorable part of [Episode I]
 * Several words used to describe her costumes as Queen of Naboo were coined by archeologist Dr. David Reynolds, to imbue the costumes with a sense of imaginative history
 * The actual headdress of the Plapatine's quarters gown was cut from a 1910 dress
 * The Geonosis attire was meant to parallel the Hoth costume Leia wears in Episode V
 * Some critics viewed [the costumes] simply as a marketing ploy to bring more feminine viewers to an action movie

I'll continue to look, but any help would be great. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  01:24, 14 March 2007 (UTC)

Expansion
You guys need to expand this text-wise as well; at the moment it's just a thinly veiled gallery (and galleries are a no-no). -- http://images.wikia.com/starwars/images/e/e5/ATATatarismall.png 18:48, 13 March 2007 (UTC)
 * I know... we're working on it. That's why the template's still there. - Solus  (Bird of Prey)  18:49, 13 March 2007 (UTC)
 * I know you're working on it. Just a friendly reminder before galleries start getting deleted in a few weeks. -- http://images.wikia.com/starwars/images/e/e5/ATATatarismall.png 18:51, 13 March 2007 (UTC)
 * Thank you. I'll try and get it up to speed. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  18:54, 13 March 2007 (UTC)