Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Armitage


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Armitage

 * Nominated by: Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 06:42, March 20, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: A guest nom for WP:AMB. I'm giving you all a break before I do a TCW spree.

(5 Inqs/0 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1)  IFYLOFD  ( Floyd's crib ) 02:51, March 26, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2)  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  20:55, April 13, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3)  CC7567  (talk) 04:17, April 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) Trayus's articles are nice and clean. Toprawa and Ralltiir 23:44, May 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) &mdash;  Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 20:18, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Per MOS, thoughts are not quotes. Thus, you'll have to change your quote for P&T. Otherwise, very nice work.  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  17:56, April 3, 2010 (UTC)
 * Aw, nuts. It's been removed, but there are no other relevant quotes. Thanks for the review! Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 07:11, April 4, 2010 (UTC)
 * 1) I know that you state in the article that his first and only appearance was in Death Troopers, but shouldn't you still add the "" thing to the Appearances section? Duchess Jade  Republic Emblem.svg (Completely Coruscanti) 00:36, April 21, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) *I don't think its necessary, as there's only the one appearance, but I've added it just in case. Thanks for the review. Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 02:44, April 21, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) Toprawa:
 * 4) * No link for this joint, both in the intro and body? "while transporting prisoners to the corrections facility on the detention moon Gradient Seven"
 * 5) **Um.. I don't understand the objection. What needs to be linked?
 * 6) ***Joint. n. Slang 1. a place or establishment. 2. a prison. -- Unless you have a reason for not doing so, please provide a link for this prison. Toprawa and Ralltiir 23:14, May 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * 7) ****Ah I'm sorry, I thought you were saying I needed a link to Gradient Seven, which is already there. It's been linked in both places, and sorry for the misunderstanding. Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 23:42, May 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * 8) *****No problem. ;) Good work on the article. Toprawa and Ralltiir 23:44, May 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * 9) * What does this mean exactly? That he wished to paint the vat right there aboard the Star Destroyer, or to do so after he returned from his mission? This is a little vague. Can we clarity at all? "Entirely hypnotized by the sight, Armitage committed himself to painting the vat" Toprawa and Ralltiir 21:52, May 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * 10) **I've clarified. The first objection is still a bit unclear, but regardless, thanks for the review. Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 21:58, May 1, 2010 (UTC)

Comments
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