Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations

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 * 12) &hellip;have all quotes and images sourced.
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 * 14) &hellip;include a "personality and traits" section on all character articles.
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 * 17) &hellip;pass review by the Inquisitorius review panel.
 * 18) &hellip;counting the introduction and "Behind the scenes" material, be at least 1000 words long (not including captions, quotes, or headers, etc).

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(5 Inqs/5 Users/10 total)
Support
 * I nominated this article because it seemed very good, and hope you like it!StarWarsDude 21:56, 20 October 2007 (UTC) (You didn't nominated the article. Also, single issue voter, struck per policy.  Greyman ( Paratus ) 04:31, 27 October 2007 (UTC))


 * 1) Sikon 17:24, 12 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) --Eyrezer 11:56, 13 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) Sikon, this is bloody good. I demand more FAs out of you, sonny! Thefourdotelipsis 02:38, 16 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) Per 4dot. Jorrel [[Image:Wiki-shrinkable.png|20px]] Fraajic 02:52, 25 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 5) Lord Hydronium 12:24, 30 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 6)  Greyman ( Paratus ) 15:24, 30 September 2007 (UTC)
 * Slash Z 19:29, 7 October 2007 (UTC) (single issue voter, struck per policy.  Greyman ( Paratus ))
 * 1) Cull Tremayne 01:39, 9 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) -- Dark Lord Xander  ( Embrace The Dark Side! )[[Image:MandalorianSymbol.jpg|20px]] 03:45, 14 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) Very nice. -- Ozzel 16:50, 23 October 2007 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) A few things:
 * 2) * The infobox image (Image:Kotor.jpg) has a Dark Horse watermark is generally low quality. Replace this.
 * 3) ** Replaced. - Sikon 08:51, 13 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) * The introduction needs a good rewrite. Things such as Dark Horse's other current Star Wars comics and the chronology of the series are best discussed in other sections.
 * 5) ** Addressed the issues you mentioned - tell me if something is still wrong. - Sikon 08:51, 13 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 6) * There's a few punctuation errors throughout the article: several instances of punctuation being placed outside quotation marks, and em dashes are erroneously surrounded by spaces.
 * 7) ** Corrected em dashes. - Sikon 08:51, 13 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 8) * The "2007: Days/Knights" subsection of "Production" has several two-sentence paragraphs. Rewrite if possible. Why is the section given the affix of "Days/Knights," when the 2006 section has no affix at all?
 * 9) ** Explained on IRC, also see below. - Sikon 08:51, 13 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 10) * The section "Core characters" should either cover only the core characters, or be renamed to "Major characters" or something similar.
 * 11) ** Renamed to just "Characters". - Sikon 08:51, 13 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 12) * The thin paragraph issue applies to most of the "Plot" section as well, particularly the subsections "Commencement" and "Days of Fear, Nights of Anger."
 * 13) ** Expanded small paragraphs. - Sikon 14:56, 13 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 14) * There's no reception section, and no mention of sales figures.
 * --Imperialles 17:50, 12 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 1) ** Added. - Sikon 14:56, 13 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) The core characters section needs to be wookified. At the very least, it needs a grammar cleanup.  Chack Jadson  Talk  20:09, 12 September 2007 (UTC)
 * Image:Kotorteam.jpg needs to be properly sourced with the Information template. --Eyrezer 23:07, 12 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 1) * Done. - Sikon 08:51, 13 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) From the Grey of Man:
 * 3) * Image:Kotor.jpg is currently tagged with . Please rectify if this is going to be used.
 * 4) ** Deleted. - Sikon 08:51, 13 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 5) * The infobox picture isn't really the best one that is out there, though I can understand why it was chosen. Maybe the following one, which I've linked to, would be better enjoyed by the community? Especially since it has full color. Image:Kotorhandbookcoverandtitle.jpg, just a suggestion.
 * 6) ** Done. - Sikon 08:51, 13 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 7) * None of the character information in the "Core character" section has any reference tags. Please source info from the necessary appearances/sources.
 * 8) * What's the source for "&hellip;abbreviated as KotOR&hellip;"? I know it is often referred to as that around here, but is there a source for it being used in the comics/interviews/media etc.?
 * 9) ** Sourced. - Sikon 08:51, 13 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 10) * The caption ("Dark Horse promotional image and preliminary issue 0 cover") is not needed below the picture in the infobox.
 * 11) ** Removed. - Sikon 08:51, 13 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 12) * Each entry in the Core Characters section needs to be expanded, IMO; and as already pointed out, needs to be cleaned up.
 * 13) ** See below about expansion. - Sikon 08:51, 13 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 14) * It may have been intentional, but Star Wars Knights of the Old Republic 0: Crossroads is not listed, along with the other comics, in the "Media" section. All of the other comics which were collected into the TPB Commencement are listed, and Crossroads was collected in it as well&mdash;please include.
 * 15) ** It's there, see below. - Sikon 08:51, 13 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 16) * Please completely source the "Continuity" section&mdash;only a few paragraphs and/or pieces of information are currently sourced. Even though some of the information may be obvious, it should still be sourced to comply with FAN standards.
 * 17) ** Sourced. - Sikon 08:51, 13 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 18) *** Better, but the first two paragraphs still need ref tags. The first paragraph needs at least one, if not more, ref tags of where the KotOR comics reference the TOTJ comics and the KOTOR games. The second paragraph simply needs a ref tag from either the Star Wars: Knights of the Old Republic video game or even the Strategy Guide since it details some of the information listed. Using both wouldn't be opposed to either. Greyman ( Paratus ) 15:38, 13 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 19) ****Reworded the first paragraph and restructured the section, so that the paragraph wouldn't require a reference (hopefully). As for the second, it openly says "in the game" and provides a link to said game, so I don't think it needs a reference - the game is established as the source for this information in the text itself, and I'm not a fan of having footnotes for the sake of them. - Sikon 12:20, 30 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 20) *****Neither am I a fan of having footnotes for the sake of having them, if it can be avoided&mdash;and your re-wording of that specific part clears up my objection, thanks. Greyman ( Paratus ) 15:24, 30 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 21) * Formatting for the "Notes and references" section should be a scroll box at the very least.
 * 22) ** Done. - Sikon 08:51, 13 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 23) * Once the writing objections listed by Imp, Chack, and myself have been looked after, I'll go through the actual writing of the article. I don't see any point in doing it before hand.
 * 24) * In the "Continuity" section, the first sentence says "Set in the years 3,964 BBY and 3,963 BBY, at a midpoint between Tales of the Jedi and the video games&hellip;". It needs to be made clear that that the video games are Star Wars: Knights of the Old Republic and Star Wars: Knights of the Old Republic II: The Sith Lords, as right now a wayward reader could mistake it for all the video games.  Greyman ( Paratus ) 15:38, 13 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 25) ** Addressed. - Sikon 12:20, 30 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 26) * I feel that introduction should make some mention about the fan reception of the series as well as any other relevant Real World impacts it has had&mdash;especially since it's an article about the overall series. Greyman ( Paratus ) 15:38, 13 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 27) ** There haven't been any significant real-world impacts, to my knowledge, besides Vector &mdash; which I have now mentioned in the intro. - Sikon 12:20, 30 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 28) **An interesting FAN which I could see becoming the template for future projects like it. Greyman ( Paratus ) 00:57, 13 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 29) From the beaker of Lord Hydronium:
 * 30) * Expand on a few things in "Plot Summary", particularly the second paragraph of "Commencement". First, some explanation of the knighting ceremony, and second, a few more details on the vision, like the figure you mention later.
 * 31) ** Expanded the Commencement section to clarify this. - Sikon 12:20, 30 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 32) * Nothing about Vector.
 * 33) ** Added a section about Vector and mentioned it in the intro. - Sikon 12:20, 30 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 34) *No other complaints here. - Lord Hydronium 09:16, 16 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 35) From the desk of Atarumaster88
 * 36) * Source handbook release.
 * 37) ** Done. - Sikon 12:32, 30 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 38) *Copyedit plot summary
 * 39) *This is not the easiest of objections to resolve, but I'd like the prose in the plot summaries to be a little better. Some of the word choices don't seem to quite line up- I think a "misled" in there is kind of awkward. Another example is the way the last sentence of Flashpoint reads- it doesn't seem to flow. Also, a bit more detail in some parts, e.g. "After Zayne learned this." What did he learn- that the banker was his father? That the banker had been captured? Both?
 * 40) * Maybe it's because it has been freshly released/not fully released, but the Daze of Hate section is abominably small and hard to read/follow.
 * 41) ** Expanded with #20 events and restructured. - Sikon 12:32, 30 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 42) *This is definitely not a hard and fast rule, but what about having an authors/pencillers/creators section on the page? Ozzel's SOTE soundtrack FA has a paragraph about McNeely and some of his background work, and I think that an entire series merits a section on the creators and their background, at least briefly.
 * 43) * Disambig link to other KotOR products needed.
 * 44) **Added. - Sikon 12:32, 30 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 45) *Have a Super Terrific Friendly Un-frustrating Day. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 18:24, 19 September 2007 (UTC)
 * 46) From the lair of Hobbes15
 * 47) *"Vision on the rogue moon"? What is this (the Lucien Draay section) ? As it isn't mentioned before, some mention should go in Draay's bio.
 * 48) *Does Characters need to be referenced? At the very least, the final paragraph of each character should be referenced, if not the main information area, IMO.
 * 49) *Per Ataru on the Plot Summary prose. ..."standing right there with lightsabers drawn", "misled"... the prose could most definitely be improved.
 * 50) *"the operation that eventually results in Arven being freed"? What operation? Some detail about it should be added.
 * 51) * Hobbes15 ( Tiger Headquarters ) 04:17, 4 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 52) The infobox needs to be sourced. --Imperialles 15:59, 28 October 2007 (UTC)

Comments
 * Nominated on Sikon's behalf per request on IRC. -- [[Image:AckbarSig.jpg|40px]] dmirableAckbar  ( It's A Trap! ) 17:24, 12 September 2007 (UTC)
 * Confirming the request on IRC. :) Plus some responses:
 * Sourced the "KotOR" abbreviation.
 * Replaced infobox picture per Greyman's suggestion, deleted Image:Kotor.jpg. Removed caption.
 * Removed references to other DH titles and specific years from the intro. Tell me if anything else needs to be done about it.
 * As I told Imp on IRC, 2007 has the "Days/Knights" subtitle because that's how Dark Horse refers to that meta-arc. There was no codename for 2006, hence no subtitle.
 * Renamed "Core characters" to just "Characters". But what is meant by "wookifying" this section? I'm not sure it needs to be expanded, either - it's an article about the overall series, so I tried to be as brief and concise as possible when describing the individual plot summaries and characters. Entries on individual arcs may have longer descriptions.
 * I still feel that the character entries should be longer, but I understand your reasoning and struck that particular objection. Greyman ( Paratus ) 15:38, 13 September 2007 (UTC)
 * Removed spaces around mdashes.
 * Reception section: I'll add it soon.
 * Thin paragraphs: I'll expand them.
 * Sourced the unsourced part of the "Continuity" section. Things without a reference footnote are sourced in-text - for example, "Alek references the Great Sith War in Star Wars Knights of the Old Republic 0: Crossroads."
 * Issue 0: Crossroads is already in the Media section, just out-of-order. Fourdot suggested listing everything by release date, and #0 was released after #1 and #2.
 * Put "Notes and references" in a scroll box, although I'm personally not a big fan of them.
 * Templatized the description for Image:Kotorteam.jpg.
 * - Sikon 07:48, 13 September 2007 (UTC)
 * Could someone strike Slash Z's vote, as he has no edits on the main namespace? Hobbes15 ( Tiger Headquarters ) 00:22, 8 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Not a opposed vote here, but I tried previewing the article with all the character images on the right instead of on the left, and I think the article looks better that way. Anybody else want to take look at it that way and see if they agree? - JMAS 18:56, 16 October 2007 (UTC)

(1 Inq/2 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) I put a lot of work into this one; I think it's accurate, interesting, concise and complete. I would definitely welcome any criticisms or suggestions, but I definitely think it is worthy of being a featured article. &mdash; Colinmcev Talk 03:00, 1 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Thefourdotelipsis 04:27, 7 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 3)  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  19:08, 11 October 2007 (UTC)

Object Comments
 * 1) Just glanced at it, but the Personality and Traits should be at the end of the article, you know. Hobbes15 ( Tiger Headquarters ) 04:11, 2 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) *Fixed that.--Colinmcev 18:30, 2 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) Would be nice to have a BTS (Behind the scenes) section, covering stuff like who created the character, where he first appeared, any continuity errors, etc. Also, this would be a good place to include one of those wacky Galaxies pics. -- Ozzel 02:39, 3 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) *Added both. Thanks for the great suggestions!--Colinmcev 01:35, 3 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 5) From the Thoroughly Pounded Desk of Four Dot:
 * 6) * There's a little bit of POV in the intro, and "He betrayed Rogue Squadron during a covert mission and attempted to kill Corran Horn, but he was shot and killed by his lover, Inyri Forge." could probably be rephrased.
 * 7) **I reworked it a litlte bit and removed what I thought was the POV. If there is any left, or if you think it needs further rephrasing, please let me know or feel free to tweak it.--Colinmcev 01:27, 6 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 8) * "Zekka Thyne served on Black Sun" - Sounds dangerous. I think he just "served Black Sun", but I think "joined the Black Sun syndicate" would be better.
 * 9) **I agree! Fixed that.--Colinmcev 01:28, 6 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 10) * Just a general observation: There are a lot of unsightly "thin" paragraphs. Of course, you can "cheat" on this one and just merge a couple of the offending paragraphs together.
 * 11) **This is a bad habit of mine; in real life, I'm a reporter, and in newspaper articles small paragraphs are required. lol. I tightened them up a bit, but if you still think there are paragraphs that are too thin, please point out which ones and I'll make further fixes.--Colinmcev 01:38, 6 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 12) * Another observation: The end of every paragraph containing In-universe information should have a relevant citation.
 * 13) **Fixed that.--Colinmcev 01:41, 6 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 14) * "eliminate single targets and slaughtering informers and even their families." - This could be worded better.
 * 15) **Tightened the sentence altogether, I think it's better now.--Colinmcev 01:42, 6 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 16) * "In 7 BBY, Fliry Vorru, then a Moff in charge of the Corellian Sector, was sent to Kessel after being framed by Prince Xizor. This allowed Xizor to establish Zekka Thyne as his chief associate in Corellia." - How so? This might need more clarification.
 * 17) **Done.--Colinmcev 01:43, 6 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 18) * "However, he was well protected by his heavily protected fortress" - One of the "protected"'s needs to be replaced, methinks.
 * 19) **Yeesh, what a lame mistake. Fixed that.--Colinmcev 01:43, 6 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 20) * Even though you link to cutter, you might want to briefly explain what it is.
 * 21) **Done.--Colinmcev 01:44, 6 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 22) * Take the image of the Bothan Thyne out of the bio and put it in the BtS. Also, assume that they're separate characters. I cite Chertyl Ruluwoor as a precedent.
 * 23) **I don't necessarily agree that the SWG Thyne should be a seperate character since both are affiliated with Black Sun and are clearly meant to be one and the same; maybe it's just me, but I think just noting the Bothan discrepency is enough. But I did move the pic.--Colinmcev 01:49, 6 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 24) * "Although Loor attended the meeting during which the plan was formed, he started a confrontation with Corran Horn that resulted in Fliry Vorru punching him in his abdomen injury and smashing his head against the table." - Eh? You might have gotten you characters a bit mixed up there.
 * 25) **Yeah, that "Loor" should be a "Thyne." Fixed it.--Colinmcev 01:50, 6 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 26) * The preceding sentence also starts with "Although", which doesn't flow well.
 * 27) **Fixed that and redid much of the sentence altogether.--Colinmcev 01:52, 6 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 28) * "With this, Zekka Thyne died." - Too short a sentence, but I could be wrong. You'll want to integrate it into the preceding paragraph, though.
 * 29) **I think the short sentence works for effect, but I agree that it is WAY too short as an individual paragraph. Merged it with the previous one.--Colinmcev 01:53, 6 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 30) * Mention who the other spy was in the Post-death section.
 * 31) **Done.--Colinmcev 01:55, 6 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 32) *Best of luck with all that. It might take a bit of work, but I think there's some good foundation here. Thefourdotelipsis 09:36, 4 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 33) **If there's anything else, please don't hesitate to let me know. Thanks for the thorough look!--Colinmcev 01:56, 6 October 2007 (UTC)
 * OK, first things first: Don't strike other people's objections. It's frowned upon. However, you got most of them. I still have an issue with the paragraph spacing. Basically, in the first half of the article, merge every pair of paragraphs. It just looks a lot neater and, well, meatier. Thefourdotelipsis 23:27, 6 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 1) **I'm really sorry about that, I've never nominated an article before so I didn't really know the proper procedure. I tightened the paragraphs a bit, let me know if you think that looks better.--Colinmcev 23:21, 6 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) ***That's OK, you know now. Good work with this though. It looks fine to me now. Thefourdotelipsis 04:27, 7 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) Got some things here:
 * 4) * In the Appointment to Corellia section, it first says the Moff was framed by Xizor. Then it later syas it is widely believed he was framed. That sounds reptitive and contradicts the above info somewhat.
 * 5) **Actually, Moff Fliry Vorru was definitely framed, and accordingly that is definitively stated. But the person who is noted as "widely believed" to have been framed is the previous owner of the fortress. That isn't Vorru, it's someone else who is never identified in any of the source material. So the two references are not related, and I don't think there's an error there.--Colinmcev 01:58, 6 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 6) * Also, the protected fortress thing that Fourdot mentioned earlier needs fixing.
 * 7) **Right you are. Fixed that.--Colinmcev 01:58, 6 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 8) * In the Spy for Lorr section, the last paragraph needs to be ref'ed.
 * 9) **Done.--Colinmcev 01:58, 6 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 10) * In the Imperial scheme section, the second-to-last paragraph needs to be rephrased. It's too repetitive.
 * 11) **Good call. I think I fixed it, but if you still think it needs work, let me know or go ahead and rephrase it.--Colinmcev 02:00, 6 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 12) * The last paragraph int hat section needs to be sourced.
 * 13) **Done.--Colinmcev 02:00, 6 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 14) * In the Imprisonment paragraph, the "Maw" needs to be unlinked.
 * 15) **OK..--Colinmcev 02:02, 6 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 16) * The first paragraph needs to be sourced too.
 * 17) **Fixed it.--Colinmcev 02:02, 6 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 18) * In Presence on Coruscant, the first paragraph needs to be rephraes as it sounds repetitive.
 * 19) **I agree, big time. Fixed it.--Colinmcev 02:04, 6 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 20) * Also, change execute to shoot.
 * 21) **To be honest, I don't think this change is entirely necessary, but I made it anyway.--Colinmcev 02:05, 6 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 22) * In the Death section, "this new" should be "this news".
 * 23) **Another dumb mistake. Fixed.--Colinmcev 02:05, 6 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 24) * In P&T, the word "Wookiee" needs to be unlinked. Also, rearrange it so it flows, going from his perosnality to his appearance than his tastes, not jumping around.
 * 25) **I think it already is that way; the first paragraph is personality, then we have three paragraphs of appearance, and the last one about his art taste. If this isn't acceptable, can you give me some further clarification on how it could be rearranged?--Colinmcev 02:08, 6 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 26) * And everything from Release from Kessel to Post-death needs sourcing.
 * 27) **Done.--Colinmcev 02:08, 6 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 28) *Good luck.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 19:24, 5 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 29) **Thanks again, I really appreciate the thoroughness!--Colinmcev 02:09, 6 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 30) And now for something completely similar:
 * 31) *Source the rest of the infobox.
 * 32) *There's a few instances of redundant ref tags. If the whole paragraph is from the same source it only needs one ref at the end.
 * 33) **Removed those. Hobbes15 ( Tiger Headquarters ) 01:34, 13 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 34) *Include information about his quest in Galaxies.
 * 35) *Intro: "Although rumored to be the heir-apparent to Xizor's criminal organization..." Rumoured by who? This needs to be mentioned later in the article and sourced.
 * 36) *Imperial scheme and capture: Source the first paragraph.
 * 37) *Imprisonment on Kessel: "a spicer term used to describe close enough to a person that they could be trusted with cutting their spice" Can this be reworded?
 * 38) *Presence on Coruscant: Needs something to lead into second paragraph, even if it's just "Some time later..." As it is, it feels disjointed.
 * 39) *Presence on Coruscant: Second paragraph has a sentence starting with "but". Kill it if possible.
 * 40) *Presence on Coruscant: A brief mention of how the Rogues got involved in the Imperial raid would not go amiss.
 * 41) *Personality and traits: "one massive black eye that was slowly fading" is a quote from the narrative, not something in-universe. Lose the quotes and make it something like "Corran Horn thought that it gave the impression..." Green Tentacle (Talk) 19:58, 11 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 42) From the lair of Hobbes15
 * 43) *Per GT on the infobox.
 * 44) *Mention somewhere in the bio that he was born on Corellia, if this can be referenced.
 * 45) *Needs a mention of how Black Sun met its downfall.
 * 46) *The last sentence of Spy for Kirtan Loor seems a little out of place. Perhaps place it after the segment about the destruction (sort of) of Black Sun.
 * 47) *Ref the end of the first paragraph of 1.4.
 * 48) *The last bit of 1.4 that says Thrawn captured Thyne is a bit unclear. I thought it said the Horns captured him earlier; in addition, a little mention on what happened after Hal shot him would be nice.
 * 49) *"to describe close enough to a person that they could be trusted with cutting their spice"? This is unclear.
 * 50) *"Myda wanted to take the offer, Kassar insisted that Inyri must make her own decision, and even expressed hope that Inyri might be able to change Thyne for the better." Who the heck are are Myda and Kassar?
 * 51) *The first sentence of Presence on Coruscant makes no sense. When is Thyne talking to Horn? It is unclear what's happening there. All it says is that Thyne was about to be released, then next thing you know, he's psychologically attacking Horn.
 * 52) *"to look back and check on Inyri"? This could be reworded and made much clearer and more interesting than it is at the moment.
 * 53) *Mention why Loor feared Horn would try to kill him in 1.8.
 * 54) *Rogue Squadron Betrayal and Death is an unclear headline. Who's doing the betraying&mdash; Thyne or the Rogues?
 * 55) *First paragraph of this section is unclear and should be slightly reworded.
 * 56) *"Thyne instead told him there was at least one other spy in Rogue Squadron, although Thyne did not know that Rogue Squadron pilot Erisi Dlarit was the spy." This doesn't make sense, and Rogue Squadron is over-used in the sentence.
 * 57) *In Post-death, the article makes it seem like Horn died in his confrontation with Celchu, not in the battle following it.
 * 58) *In the P&T, could the three paragraphs regarding his appearance be merged into one?
 * 59) *Is it specifically said in Side Trip that Thyne's taste in art was considered questionable by most? If not, it needs a seperate reference.
 * 60) *Do you have a reference for the fact that Thyne was only referenced in the parts of the story written by Stackpole (BTS)?
 * If, as GT says, he has a specific role in Galaxies beyond a mere appearance, it does need to be mentioned.
 * 1) *And that's all. Good luck with those. Hobbes15 ( Tiger Headquarters ) 01:34, 13 October 2007 (UTC)
 * I finally got to read Side Trip and I expanded the section with a whole lot of info from that. As that was the final major source for Zekka, I think this article is pretty much as complete as possible.--Colinmcev 01:35, 3 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Colinmcev, I uncrossed Chack's objections, because, after checking the history, I realized that he didn't cross them out, you did. For future reference, the way these things work is that you make a comment when you've addressed an objection, the objecting user looks at the article, checks to see if the objection is fixed to his/her satisfaction, and then crosses it off. If they still see a problem, they'll point it out. Thank you, and good work with the objections ;). Hobbes15 ( Tiger Headquarters ) 02:24, 7 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Yeah, I'm sorry about that; as I said about, I've never nominated an article before so I didn't really know the proper procedure. I was basically crossing them off as I fixed them, but I'll make sure that doesn't happen again.--Colinmcev 23:21, 6 October 2007 (UTC)
 * It's fine. I'll try to look at the article later today.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 10:30, 10 October 2007 (UTC)

(3 Inqs/5 Users/8 Total)
Support
 * 1) --  AdmirableAckbar  [Talk] 17:23, 10 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Jedimca0(Do or Do Not, There is No Try) 18:14, 10 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) I think the BtS could be meatier, and "cruel" strikes me as POV, but it's not enough to object. Thefourdotelipsis 07:50, 11 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 4)  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  19:08, 11 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 5)  &mdash;Graestan  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( This party's over ) 16:17, 12 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 6) Hobbes15 ( Tiger Headquarters ) 13:45, 13 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 7) Green Tentacle (Talk) 22:19, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 8) Ozzel 23:25, 27 October 2007 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) From the lair of Hobbes15
 * 2) * As Crumb's death is mentioned in the intro, Pic's should be as well.
 * 3) **Done.
 * 4) * "Kowakian monkey-lizards[1]"? What's the ref for?
 * 5) **No idea. Removed.
 * 6) *And that's all I've got on this nom. Simus, Teek, and now monkey-lizards? I hate to think what'll be next ;). Hobbes15 ( Tiger Headquarters ) 02:02, 13 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 7) **My next projects will be rather more serious, I'm afraid.--  AdmirableAckbar  [Talk] 09:50, 13 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 8) ***All TOTJ!? NOOOO! ;). Hobbes15 ( Tiger Headquarters ) 13:45, 13 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Image:Kowakian Monkey Lizard Ultimate Adversaries.jpg The airbrush job there ain't too hot, and the scan's not great to begin with. -- Ozzel 04:39, 27 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 1) *I couldn't get a better scan so I've replaced it with another image --  AdmirableAckbar  [Talk] 20:53, 27 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) **I still liked the image, but fair enough. -- Ozzel 23:25, 27 October 2007 (UTC)

Comments
 * I know it looks like it should be longer based on the amount of appearances, but most of them were just Crumb and had no info on the species --  AdmirableAckbar  [Talk] 17:23, 10 October 2007 (UTC)

(3 Inqs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1) Thefourdotelipsis 04:52, 16 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 2)  &mdash;Graestan  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( This party's over ) 03:34, 20 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) Hobbes15 ( Tiger Headquarters ) 01:26, 25 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) Ozzel 04:48, 27 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 5) Imperialles 13:50, 27 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 6) Grinch. --  AdmirableAckbar  [Talk] 00:08, 28 October 2007 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) A couple minor objections:
 * 2) * Did the spacer succeed in killing Thar'lyat?
 * 3) **Context added.
 * 4) * Is there any more about him? If not, add some sort of concluding sentence, ie "His fate after Jabba's death is unknown."
 * 5) **We tend not to like such things. If it's unknown, we just don't mention it. Thefourdotelipsis 11:57, 24 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 6) ***I see. I'm fine with that, I guess. Hobbes15 ( Tiger Headquarters ) 01:26, 25 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 7) * Hobbes15 ( Tiger Headquarters ) 02:24, 24 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 8) There's some info in Secrets of Tatooine that could be added. --  AdmirableAckbar  [Talk] 13:45, 27 October 2007 (UTC)

Comments
 * Part 2 of the cane saga. Next up, Michael Caine. Oh...damn. Thefourdotelipsis 04:52, 16 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Not an objection, but perhaps a mention of the placing of the panel thingy (for Ree-Yees to track the shipments of the bomb parts) under one of Bubo's warts could be added. --  AdmirableAckbar  [Talk] 23:10, 18 October 2007 (UTC)

(4 Inqs/1 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1) Thefourdotelipsis 11:28, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 2)  &mdash;Graestan  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( This party's over ) 03:36, 24 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 3)  Greyman ( Paratus ) 05:08, 24 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) That's right Drake&mdash; save that shopping mart! Hobbes15 ( Tiger Headquarters ) 00:27, 26 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 5) Imperialles 16:04, 28 October 2007 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) At a glance:
 * 2) * Image:DrakeHeadshot2.JPG, Image:LogaanCradleCorobb.JPG, Image:DrakeCombatFelucia.JPG, Image:DrakePraji.JPG, Image:DrakeTremayneDuel.JPG, Image:DrakeSurrounded.JPG and Image:DrakeTraining.jpg lack descriptions.
 * 3) **That's nice. I'm not nominating the images for FA, though. Thefourdotelipsis 01:27, 18 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) ***They still have to comply with the image policy. --Imperialles 14:22, 18 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 5) ****They've got descriptions. Thefourdotelipsis 22:49, 18 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 6) * Antinnis Tremayne is referred to as "Treymayne" in the lead quote. Is this correct?
 * 7) **Yes. Thefourdotelipsis 01:27, 18 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 8) * Punctuation is placed outside of quotation marks on several occasions.
 * 9) **Fixed. Thefourdotelipsis 01:31, 18 October 2007 (UTC)
 * --Imperialles 20:57, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 1) Pointless information in the infobox. If his place of birth is unknown, it should not be included. --Imperialles 14:22, 18 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) *That was re-added by someone else. To avoid edit warring, I'd rather not remove it. Actually, I can't even remember removing it in the first place... Thefourdotelipsis 22:49, 18 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) Per rule 15, any chance of getting a Powers and abilities section? From having read the article, I don't think it would be too difficult, though I could be wrong in my assumption.  Greyman ( Paratus ) 06:43, 23 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) *Yah, he got one of dem now. Thefourdotelipsis 07:28, 23 October 2007 (UTC)

Comment

(3 Inq/1 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1) To continue the pattern of LucasArts flight-sim games characters. And because he's awesome. Jorrel [[Image:Wiki-shrinkable.png|20px]] Fraajic 19:44, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) "Your father just died, but that is a cool gift you were given in the last mission!" Thefourdotelipsis 22:46, 18 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 3)  Greyman ( Paratus ) 21:29, 21 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) Green Tentacle (Talk) 17:19, 22 October 2007 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) At a glance:
 * 2) * Infobox: Source everything. And provide a proper link to his droid model.
 * 3) * Introduction: Remove the whole "Marko" thing. It's both irrelevant to the introduction and pure speculation.
 * 4) * Introduction: "He often accompanied Ace Azzameen during the latter's life," Who's the latter? Only Ace has been mentioned previously to this sentence.
 * 1: Image:Marko.jpg&mdash;why is this here? It's just a random image, and does nothing to support the text.
 * 1) **Removed. Thought it provided a nice shot of MK, but it is indeed unnecessary.
 * 2) * 1.1: Two one-sentence paragraphs? Come on. At least merge the paragraphs together.
 * 3) **Addressed.
 * 4) * 1.2.1: Header: "Business" in "Family Business" needs to be decapitalized.
 * 5) **Addressed
 * 6) * 1.3: "Further developments" is a pretty awkward title. Any way to reword it?
 * 7) **That was a problem I couldn't find a solution to. Any suggestions?
 * 8) ***"Further exploits"? --Imperialles 13:14, 20 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 9) * 1.3.4: "Unknown fate" sentence needs to be removed.
 * 10) * 2.1: Merge a few paragraphs together. There's some excessive linebreaks.
 * 3: What's the relevance of the quote to the section, other than the fact that the droid himself uttered it?
 * 1) **Well, it's non-canon, so it wouldn't fit elsewhere... I can remove if you don't think it's necessary.
 * 2) ***Yes, please.--Imperialles 13:14, 20 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 3: The three one-sentence paragraphs need to either be expanded enough to warrant separate paragraphs or be merged together.
 * 1) **Partly addressed. Still can't figure out the voice actor issue.
 * --Imperialles 20:48, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Addressed some of your concerns, as well as offered insight to why some are there. Jorrel [[Image:Wiki-shrinkable.png|20px]] Fraajic 21:35, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 1) From the Heavily Pounded Desk of Four Dot
 * 2) ** Obsidian is in Kuati space?
 * 3) ***Addressed. Misread my information, I guess.
 * 4) ** Might want to add a note about Complete Cross-Sections contradiction with the Tydirium thing.
 * 5) ***Footnoted.
 * 6) ** I kinda assumed that his room was aboard the Sabra and Otana judging by the composition...
 * 7) ***Others may not know, though. Not everone has played the game.
 * 8) **That's all. Thefourdotelipsis 10:45, 18 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 9) ***I believe I addressed all of your concerns, 4dot. Jorrel [[Image:Wiki-shrinkable.png|20px]] Fraajic 16:31, 18 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 10) From the  of Green Tentacle:
 * 11) * Copilot or co-pilot. I don't care, but consistency would be nice.
 * 12) **Which is more grammar-friendly?
 * 13) ***Dictionary says copilot. Green Tentacle (Talk) 16:08, 20 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 14) * Family training: What ship are they in for all this stuff?
 * 15) **Addressed.
 * 16) * Either link Aeron again here or remove the link to Emon. Poor girl. :P
 * 17) **Linked.
 * 18) * New Republic era doesn't start straight after Endor does it?
 * 19) **Already removed, though I would like to know what the era from the time of the Battle of Endor to the foundation of the New Republic is.
 * 20) * Stationed aboard the Liberty, paragraph 3: Could be a little clearer what they were after.
 * 21) **You mean the warheads? Done.
 * 22) * Stationed aboard the Liberty, paragraph 4: "During his tour, the Rebellion enlisted Ace's squadron to investigate an Imperial sensor station and research facility located in Kuati space, which Ace and company made off with success." Maybe it's just me but the end of that doesn't seem to make sense.
 * 23) **Hmm. It doesn't. Fixed.
 * 24) * Stationed aboard the Liberty, paragraph 4: Source please.
 * 25) **Sourced.
 * 26) * Stationed aboard the Liberty, paragraph 7: "Ace, MK-09, and Aeron left in the Otana and rendezvoused with Aeron" Aeron rendezvoused with herself?
 * 27) **Fixed.
 * 28) * Darker times for the family, paragraph 2: "Ace finally piloted the ship close enough to get enough radio signal" Enough with the enoughs. :P
 * 29) **I too have had enough. ENOUGH.
 * 30) * Darker times for the family, paragraph 3: "The pair of ships then arrived in the proximity of the station, leaving Ace and Emkay responsible for dropping off the container close, but not too close, to the station, leaving it for the tugs to collect, and went and joined Dunari's ship in waiting for the boom." Can you break up that sentence? It goes wandering half way through.
 * 31) **Addressed
 * 32) * Alliance service, paragraph 6: "Emkay left with Ace in the Sabra, filled with a team of commandos. The team made their way to the customs station located just inside Zhar space, where they transmitted a fake manifesto of the cargo aboard the YT-2000." The Sabra isn't a YT-2000.
 * 33) **You're right. I missed that in my edit.
 * 34) * A new source of hope, paragraph 2: Remove the link to I have a bad feeling about this since it's OOU.
 * 35) **I did have a bad feeling about that.
 * 36) * Characteristics, paragraph 1: Needs a source.
 * 37) **2 for the price of one: Sourced.
 * 38) *Not so much an objection but where is the Ace's transfer to the Independence mentioned since it'd be worth mentioning in the Independence article.
 * 39) **That, GT, is mentioned at the finale of the Battle of Endor sequence, in the post-mission briefing.
 * 40) ***UPDATE: Actually, no, it is not (as you pointed out). But it is in there, in the form of a random audio cue on the concourse screen after the Battle of Endor. If you want an exact recording, I can get it for you, but that would involve extra work. ;-)
 * 41) *Green Tentacle (Talk) 22:24, 18 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 42) **Addressed all but the first of your objections. Anything else? Jorrel [[Image:Wiki-shrinkable.png|20px]] Fraajic 02:49, 19 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 43) ***Addressed all now. Jorrel [[Image:Wiki-shrinkable.png|20px]] Fraajic 17:02, 22 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 44) Please source the Azzameen family affiliation in the infobox&mdash;that's the only thing I've seen wrong after reading it.  Greyman ( Paratus ) 13:51, 21 October 2007 (UTC)

Comments
 * History. I didn't realize this article took so long to make. Sheesh. Jorrel [[Image:Wiki-shrinkable.png|20px]] Fraajic 19:44, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Update. Jorrel [[Image:Wiki-shrinkable.png|20px]] Fraajic 23:30, 24 October 2007 (UTC)

(1 Inq/2 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) --Harrar 23:53, 17 October 2007 (GMT)
 * 2) Perhaps a pic of the Shadow Academy? Thefourdotelipsis 23:26, 20 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 3)  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  23:36, 20 October 2007 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) From the tentatively pounded desk of Four Dot
 * 2) * Things like "However, there appears to be no direct evidence" do not belong. Adopt a better tone, please.
 * 3) * "almost certainly" - Weasel words. "Possibly" is better.
 * 4) *That's all. Thefourdotelipsis 11:40, 18 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 5) **Think I've addressed all of those but act at your disgression -- Harrar 23:53, 17 October 2007 (GMT)
 * 6) From the squalid cubicle of Graestan:
 * 7) *Please go over the entire article and make sure the wording, sentence structure, and general flow are correct.
 * 8) *Speculative information should be removed and either placed in the BtS, footnotes, or left out entirely. "Partnership with Lomi Plo" in particular needs to be reworked.
 * 9) *Article needs to be relinked. Either one link for the whole thing, or one each for the intro and article. Either style is fine, if consistent. All applicable links should be added to images.
 * 10) *Quotes are either inappropriately placed or overly explained. Also, do not include a period in quote attribution.
 * Image:ShadowAcademy.jpg should be cropped and reuploaded; I'm fine with losing negligible portions of the edge of the station in order to get rid of the hair.
 * 1) *Please go into more detail about the Mission to Myrkr, including more background of the strike team's mission.
 * 2) *BedaGorog could use an article. Do you know enough about it to create one? If so, please do. If not, explain here.
 * 3) * &mdash;Graestan [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( This party's over ) 01:36, 27 October 2007 (UTC)

Comments
 * In my defence, should anyone think I deleted them, the templates at the bottom of the page were already gone when I put this nom up!Harrar 23:53, 17 October 2007 (GMT)

(3 Inqs/3 Users/6 Total)
Support
 * 1) --  AdmirableAckbar  [Talk] 22:29, 18 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) -- Livingston [[Image:Jedi Order2.jpg|25px]] ( The Force will be with you. Always. ) 00:35, 20 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) Nice work. I like. Thefourdotelipsis 01:54, 21 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) Jedimca0(Do or Do Not, There is No Try) 14:15, 24 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 5)  &mdash;Graestan  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( This party's over ) 00:16, 27 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 6)  Greyman ( Paratus ) 20:52, 27 October 2007 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) Only one thing I have a problem with after a few minor edits...
 * 2) *At the end of the article under Powers and abilities you pronounce his strength in lightsaber combat, then say that his armor was cumbersome and made him slow. This alone seems a contradiction, but then the next paragraph says that his armor was above all what made him a difficult adversary for any oponent, even though you had just finished explaining that it was due to his armor that Ulic was able to defeat him.
 * 3) **One can still be a good duelist with a cumbersome suit. Basically every suit of armour that has ever existed has been cumbersome, yet people could still be good swordsmen. "Although it granted him a great many advantages, Warb Null's cumbersome suit of armor meant his moves were slow." The armour gave off dark side energies, so to speak, which made him difficult for Jedi to fight, yet still had its disadvantages. Anyway, I've clarified it a bit. --  AdmirableAckbar  [Talk] 15:35, 19 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) ***I completely understand what you are saying and I agree, it was mostly in the way that you were saying it and a few words you used that made it seem contradicting. The edit you did fixed it right up. :)
 * 5) * BTW: Feel free to use a word other than defeat, but murdered certainly isn't the appropriate word, as Ulic was working as a peace officer for the government, and to murder someone is to kill someone in a situation where it is against the law.
 * 6) **I know what you're saying, but I beg to differ. It doesn't really matter; defeat is fine. I'd also prefer if you would not object to something you've already fixed. Feel free to contact me on my talk page if you want to discuss this issue, but this isn't really the place. --  AdmirableAckbar  [Talk] 15:35, 19 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 7) ***Well I wasn't sure if you would be happy with "defeated" as you seemed to want to stress the fact that Ulic killed Null, and defeated doesn't automatically mean killed. I only wanted to make minor surface edits to the article as you did a terrific job on it otherwise, so I wasn't sure if you would consider that edit to be something that would change the meaning of your words, which is something I didn't want to do without your further input.
 * 8) * Livingston [[Image:Jedi Order2.jpg|25px]] ( The Force will be with you. Always. ) 14:56, 19 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 9) **Thank you for your comments and input --  AdmirableAckbar  [Talk] 15:35, 19 October 2007 (UTC)

Comments

(2 Inqs/3 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1) Havac 02:24, 19 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Jorrel [[Image:Wiki-shrinkable.png|20px]] Fraajic 17:25, 20 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) Thefourdotelipsis 02:52, 21 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) Ozzel 05:44, 27 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 5) Janeway 13:49, 28 October 2007 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) From the unknown location of Jorrel Fraajic,
 * 2) * No mention of C-3PX?
 * 3) **Wasn't in any of his listed sources. Source me. Havac 22:07, 19 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) ***NEGtD. Not sure where it gets its information from, though.
 * 5) * "To that end, Sienar assumed a series of false identities and took work with competing firms, moving through the management of the Corellian Engineering Corporation, Baktoid Armor Workshop, Incom Corporation, and even the Trade Federation, where he gained firsthand experience undercover, without the distraction of his family name, and picked up various techniques from his competitors." - Seems long and unwieldy. I do know what you're saying, but others may not.
 * 6) **Do not question the long sentences! I'll split it. Havac 22:07, 19 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 7) * "Sienar was highly successful, however, paying minute attention to the market, closely and effectively managing his employees, and keeping his facilities small and centralized on Coruscant, where Sienar maintained an apartment in the elite 500 Republica building." - Same as the objection above.
 * 8) **Hmmm. Maybe just because I'm the crazy bastard who wrote it, but I'm not seeing too much of a problem there. I did have to stick the 500 Republica thing on there just to keep it from being a dangling fact, but I don't think the sentence suffers too much from it. Havac 22:07, 19 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 9) ***Like I said, I do know what you're saying, I'm just not sure others will. But, I am appeased. Struck.
 * That looks like it to me. Good work, and a very interesting read. Jorrel [[Image:Wiki-shrinkable.png|20px]] Fraajic 15:26, 19 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 1) That younger Tarkin image has some awful scanner artifact action going on. -- Ozzel 05:02, 27 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) *Fixed. -- Ozzel 05:44, 27 October 2007 (UTC)

Comments

(3 Inqs/1 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1) --Eyrezer 02:00, 20 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Thefourdotelipsis 03:09, 21 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) Well-executed. &mdash;Graestan  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( This party's over ) 02:05, 27 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) Nicely done, Ey.  Greyman ( Paratus ) 20:52, 27 October 2007 (UTC)

Oppose Comments
 * 1) Shouldn't the appearances and sources sections list where it first appeared, where it was first mentioned and so forth? It's all in the Behind the scenes section, but it should be more clear. --LtNOWIS 05:21, 20 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) *Good point. Fixed. --Eyrezer 01:57, 21 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 1) A higher quality scan of the Talz village and the Imperial mines would be appreciated. --Eyrezer 20:17, 21 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) *Taken care of! --Eyrezer 01:42, 27 October 2007 (UTC)

(2 Inqs/1 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) Ugh... Thefourdotelipsis 06:17, 20 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) What an interesting little droid. Knock-off of Artoo.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 23:51, 20 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 3)  &mdash;Graestan  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( This party's over ) 03:36, 24 October 2007 (UTC)

Oppose

Comments
 * It currently has two first appearances? Did they come out at the same time or what? --Eyrezer 02:01, 21 October 2007 (UTC)
 * They came in the same bundle, yes. Thefourdotelipsis 04:39, 21 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Ok, sweet. --Eyrezer 08:22, 21 October 2007 (UTC)

(1 Inq/3 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1) --Harrar 18:04, 20 October 2007 (GMT)
 * 2) The All-knowing Sith&#39;ari 14:33, 22 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) Thefourdotelipsis 10:04, 25 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) --I agree --Manuelin 14:15, 27 October 2007 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) The word "murdered" is POV. I don't think Alema Rar should be listed as a commander. And finally, I think the last sentence runs on. -LtNOWIS 02:18, 21 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) *Murdered to eliminated, Alema Rar removed as commander, last sentence reshuffled. Thanks for t'input--Harrar 12:11, 21 October 2007 (GMT)
 * 3) Not to be picky, but... I'm not so sure we can say they "eliminated Jedi Masters [plural] at Ossus" if only Kam Solusar died. -LtNOWIS 21:14, 21 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) *Hah, you speak the truth...corrected--Harrar 00:16, 22 October 2007 (GMT)
 * 5) There is a broken reference (see the article's notes and references), and the infobox information needs to be sourced as well. Greyman ( Paratus ) 23:25, 21 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 6) *I can't spot the broken ref, sorry. I mean I know it's there but I can't find it. Also, since every single piece of info in the infobox is from inferno, can I group it in one big reference or do I have to put one after every point? thanks --Harrar 00:04, 24 October 2007 (GMT)
 * 7) **Fixed the broken ref. Hobbes15 ( Tiger Headquarters ) 02:52, 24 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 8) From the Severely Pounded Desk of Four Dot
 * 9) * "The Battle of Kashyyyk took place in 40 ABY during the Confederation-Galactic Alliance War and, on the orders of Chief of State Jacen Solo, saw the attempted subjugation and punishment of a member-world by the Galactic Alliance. " - member-world of what?
 * 10) * We need a bit more extrapolation of the duel. Actually, I'd kinda like to see it merged, but that's just personal preference. As it is, explain it in more detail, and elaborate on the fact that Luke and Ben escape, that Jacen was at his mercy, blah, blah, blah.
 * 11) * A behind the scenes section would be great, stating that Troy Denning created the battle, and it is used as the climax of Inferno.
 * 12) *All in all, good work. Thefourdotelipsis 10:48, 22 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 13) **Ok opening point addressed but I'm not sure how well...added a Main article link into the text's body for the anakin solo duel and did a bit of info...but I feel with the encyclopedaic attitude it's dwelling too much on the actions of the characters rather than the battle itslef. The duel article is such a joke anyway it's basically been written by someone with the book in one hand and a keyboard at the other, so I hope that doesn't impact on the article's FA journey. Finally, I added a little in the Bts section. Thanks Four Dot. Keep the FAs coming yourself btw, great job! --Harrar 00:38, 24 October 2007 (GMT)

Comments
 * Well it ain't a character! --Harrar 18:04, 20 October 2007 (GMT)

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Support
 * --StarWarsDude 22:08, 20 October 2007 (UTC) (Vote struck per single issue voters policy.  Greyman ( Paratus ))

Oppose
 * 1) Insufficient citations (Rules 6, 11). Also, Image:Sidiouslightsaberside.jpg, Image:ST Lightsaber.jpg, and Image:Snapshot20060105004320.jpg is not properly sourced (Rule 12). -LtNOWIS 22:19, 20 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Galleries? Lists? No. Please remove, reformat, and rewrite the lists please, so that they are prose. Thefourdotelipsis 23:22, 20 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) No references in the infobox, and the citations are almost nonexistent elsewhere. Hobbes15 ( Tiger Headquarters ) 00:31, 21 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) Unsourced quotes and images. -- Ozzel 21:20, 21 October 2007 (UTC)

Comments
 * Can the Inqs hold a vote to remove this?  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 01:34, 28 October 2007 (UTC)

(5 Inqs/3 Users/8 Total)
Support Oppose
 * 1) Imperialles 03:30, 21 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Nicely done.  Greyman ( Paratus ) 15:37, 21 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) --Eyrezer 20:33, 21 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) Excellent work, sadiq. Thefourdotelipsis 11:01, 22 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 5) Green Tentacle (Talk) 18:39, 23 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 6) "deet deet deet" &mdash;Graestan  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( This party's over ) 15:39, 24 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 7) I love articles like this. "Yada did this. Yada did that. Yada was an utterly fascinating person. Then he died a faceless statistic in a Rebel terrorist attack. Oh well." --  Darth Culator  (Talk) 20:41, 24 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 8) Not a bad guy for a stormtrooper. Hobbes15 ( Tiger Headquarters ) 23:39, 25 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 1) Intro says he killed Relt, body says a stray torpedo did. Green Tentacle (Talk) 18:20, 23 October 2007 (UTC)

Comments

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Support
 * 1) Complement to Sienar. Hopefully. Thefourdotelipsis 08:24, 21 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Imperialles 14:01, 27 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) Look on the bright side. Sure, they never referenced him again, but would you really want him referenced in recent EU? Imagine if Denning was a continuity hound like Luceno. Daxar Ies. And that's all I got to say about that. --  Darth Culator  (Talk) 22:53, 27 October 2007 (UTC)

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Comments

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Support Oppose
 * 1) I've never done a species article before...be nice. Thefourdotelipsis 07:09, 22 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Imperialles 20:21, 22 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) --  AdmirableAckbar  [Talk] 12:26, 24 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) Green Tentacle (Talk) 22:21, 24 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 5) --  Darth Culator  (Talk) 22:53, 27 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 6) Hobbes15 ( Tiger Headquarters ) 02:55, 28 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 1) The last (and, coincidentally, first) time I read Jedi Prince was years ago, but wasn't the Ysanne Isard thing a retcon? If so, the source for that should be reffed, as the Prince books don't say that. Apart from that shameless nitpicking, good work, and I'm almost ready to support. --  AdmirableAckbar  [Talk] 16:21, 23 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) *Yah, that be fixed. Thefourdotelipsis 23:49, 23 October 2007 (UTC)

Comments

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Support
 * 1) --  AdmirableAckbar  [Talk] 07:39, 22 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Thefourdotelipsis 22:42, 22 October 2007 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) From the Maliciously Pounded Desk of Four Dot
 * 2) * Surely a better infobox image can be found. At the very least, a tighter crop and higher resolution scan of the current shot.
 * 3) **Greyman is going to get me a better scan, which I will crop. That's the best image for Stonebone as far as detail and size in concerned, at least IMHO.
 * 4) * "mosquito-like" - Eh, that's not how it's spelled IU. Msqito, my friend. Msqito.
 * 5) **It's spelled mosquito(es) in Tales of the Jedi, though I've changed it anyway.
 * 6) ***It is? Where's Mosquito then? :P
 * 7) * "mighty" is POV.
 * 8) **Reworded.
 * 9) * Enforcer One links to a disambig page.
 * 10) **Addressed.
 * 11) * It's TOTJ. I've had enough of it!
 * 12) **Just for you, I'm doing Ood Bnar next. :) --  AdmirableAckbar  [Talk] 12:06, 22 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 13) ***OK. But I see Thon down below...
 * 14) ****I finished my work on Thon a good while ago. Though I did do another article...(not a TOTJ one though so it doesn't count) :P --  AdmirableAckbar  [Talk] 15:27, 23 October 2007 (UTC)
 * OK, that's enough. Thefourdotelipsis 11:14, 22 October 2007 (UTC)

Comments

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Support
 * 1) Co-nominator.--  AdmirableAckbar  [Talk] 21:29, 22 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Co-nominator. &mdash;Graestan  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( This party's over ) 21:29, 22 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) Jedimca0(Do or Do Not, There is No Try) 10:19, 25 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 4)  Greyman ( Paratus ) 20:54, 27 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 5) Thefourdotelipsis 00:08, 28 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 6) Imperialles 02:06, 28 October 2007 (UTC)

Oppose Comments
 * 1) This image needs a better scan. --Eyrezer 01:12, 23 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) *Better image substituted. &mdash;Graestan [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( This party's over ) 04:10, 24 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) From the lair of Hobbes15
 * 4) *"However, after much time and effort Thon became thoroughly exhausted, and his ability to repel the attackers was diminishing. However, he devised a strategy to defeat the Sith, and swam out into the middle of Lake Natth,[3] the largest source of water on the planet.[5]" The two "however's" don't sound good together. Reword.
 * 5) **Addressed. I'll leave the others to Graestan because they're in his sections. --  AdmirableAckbar  [Talk] 11:41, 28 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 6) *Mention how the Jedi Masters counseled Qel-Droma against infiltrating the Krath.
 * 7) *What was the result of the Krath attack on Coruscant? Explain who won.
 * 8) *Two "But's" in a row to start sentences in Conclave at Exis Station.
 * 9) *Other than those, great article, except it's TOTJ ;). Hobbes15 ( Tiger Headquarters ) 04:01, 28 October 2007 (UTC)
 * A joint venture by AdmirableAckbar and Graestan.

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Support
 * 1) Thefourdotelipsis 23:06, 22 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) --  AdmirableAckbar  [Talk] 12:08, 24 October 2007 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) I'm not an expert, but I'd say bloodthirsty is POV. There's also a bit of repetition in the intro/main body: "carving out a slice" and "carve out a piece," one of which could be rephrased. "...actually a cell that allowed powered ships" -- I might be reading this wrong, but could that be clarified a little. Also, perhaps a minor explanation of who Teek is? (I know I'm rather biased). Other than those few minor things, I enjoyed reading it. :) --  AdmirableAckbar  [Talk] 15:55, 23 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) *Fixerised. Thefourdotelipsis 23:52, 23 October 2007 (UTC)

Comments
 * And on... Thefourdotelipsis 23:06, 22 October 2007 (UTC)

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Support
 * 1) --  AdmirableAckbar  [Talk] 15:27, 23 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Thefourdotelipsis 00:31, 28 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 3)  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  01:34, 28 October 2007 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) The infobox image needs to be cropped to remove the black line across the top. --Eyrezer 02:22, 24 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) From the fjord of Imperialles:
 * 3) * Introduction: "notorious" is POV.
 * 4) **Addressed.
 * 5) * Introduction: "Unknown fate" statements are discouraged.
 * 6) **Didn't know that, but yeah, fixed.
 * 7) * Early life: A bit too much info on Yag'Dhul, there. Far too much info on the Givin in general as well.
 * 8) **Cut down a lot of it.
 * --Imperialles 19:44, 25 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Thank you for your comments and input --  AdmirableAckbar  [Talk] 19:50, 25 October 2007 (UTC)

Comments
 * Created from a redlink. --  AdmirableAckbar  [Talk] 15:27, 23 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Minor, but could you possibly expand the "Fractal heresy" stuff? Is it stated what that exactly was? If so please add it. And as a side note, there's no page for that. Should there be one (I know that's irrelevant to this article's FA status)?  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 23:35, 23 October 2007 (UTC)
 * No more info on that one I'm afraid. I've linked it anyway. --  AdmirableAckbar  [Talk] 20:22, 24 October 2007 (UTC)

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Support
 * :D Thefourdotelipsis 15:31, 24 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 1) "Master torturer," indeed. &mdash;Graestan  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( This party's over ) 01:23, 28 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 2)  Greyman ( Paratus ) 03:03, 28 October 2007 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) "Dark Vendetta featured Tremayne as the central character, and it provided a degree back story for the High Inquisitor" What is a degree backstory? --Eyrezer 03:15, 25 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) *It's a mistake. Fixed. Thefourdotelipsis 04:16, 25 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) As per previous Consensus Track's, cut content is to be included in the main body with the Cutstart and Cutend templates surrounding it. &mdash;Jaymach Ral'Tir (talk) 06:18, 25 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) *Could you please cite which CTs these were? I'm honestly curious. Thefourdotelipsis 06:25, 25 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 5) **The last CT I know of ended in no consensus. Which in that case meant to keep doing what we've been doing. So per precedent, the cut content should be integrated. -- Darth Culator  (Talk) 02:07, 27 October 2007 (UTC)
 * It shouldn't have to come to this, but I'll have to formally oppose on rule 9 until the cut content is properly integrated. -- Darth Culator  (Talk) 02:35, 27 October 2007 (UTC)

Comments

(1 Inq/2 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) --  AdmirableAckbar  [Talk] 22:43, 24 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Thefourdotelipsis 00:39, 28 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 3)  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  01:34, 28 October 2007 (UTC)

Oppose

Comments
 * Single source nomination --  AdmirableAckbar  [Talk] 22:43, 24 October 2007 (UTC)

(1 Inq/2 User/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) --  AdmirableAckbar  [Talk] 20:27, 26 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Thefourdotelipsis 01:33, 28 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) Janeway 14:47, 28 October 2007 (UTC)

Oppose Comments
 * Image:Oodbnar.jpg needs sourcing. --Eyrezer 00:26, 27 October 2007 (UTC)
 * This is one of those rare TOTJ nominations :P --  AdmirableAckbar  [Talk] 20:27, 26 October 2007 (UTC)

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Support
 * 1) Nomination by Master Aban Fiolli (Alpheridies University ComNet) [[Image:NewRepublic.png|20px]] 21:59, 26 October 2007 (UTC)

Oppose
 * OK, you might need to follow the sectioning precedent set by Arbra. Thefourdotelipsis 01:15, 28 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 1) *Is this better? I tried to emulate the Arbra entry more, but I am not certain if this is what you were looking for. Thanks. Master Aban Fiolli (Alpheridies University ComNet) [[Image:NewRepublic.png|20px]] 04:16, 28 October 2007 (UTC)

Comments
 * Not only is this my first FA nom, it is a restoration project. I'll try to fix any objections as quickly as possible. Master Aban Fiolli (Alpheridies University ComNet) [[Image:NewRepublic.png|20px]] 21:59, 26 October 2007 (UTC)

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Support
 * 1) A Force-sensitive farm boy from Tatooine who joins the Rebels and fights the Death Star. Why didn't anybody think of that before? Green Tentacle (Talk) 23:12, 26 October 2007 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) Unsourced BTS statements. "Rookiee One's tench run in non-continuity." would tend to suggest the whole thing. Thefourdotelipsis 02:00, 28 October 2007 (UTC)

Comments

(1 Inq/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) --  AdmirableAckbar  [Talk] 21:49, 27 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Thefourdotelipsis 02:29, 28 October 2007 (UTC)

Oppose

Comments

(2 Inqs/1 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) Nominated.  Greyman ( Paratus ) 03:00, 28 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) It's like the TOTJ New Testament. &mdash;Graestan  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( This party's over ) 03:03, 28 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) Nice work on this. Master Aban Fiolli (Alpheridies University ComNet) [[Image:NewRepublic.png|20px]] 04:50, 28 October 2007 (UTC)

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Comments
 * A complete rewrite and expansion. Currently sitting at 128KB long&hellip;just to give you an idea ;) Greyman ( Paratus ) 03:00, 28 October 2007 (UTC)