Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Rikel's wife


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Rikel's wife

 * Nominated by: Trip391 (talk) 22:24, September 1, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: For Project Novels

(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1) Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:14, September 6, 2013 (UTC)
 * 2) Gone through and corrected some minor details. Feel free to check them.  Commander Code-8  You lost the game! 09:04, September 10, 2013 (UTC)
 * 3) Just so you know, the page numbers in the CSWE template are only used for references.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  18:39, September 13, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4)  1358  (Talk)  10:21, September 21, 2013 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) CC-8
 * 2) * Context for Rikel in the first sentence.
 * 3) **Done
 * 4) * Briefly mention who the civil war was between pls.
 * 5) **Done
 * 6) * Can you get rid of the break that's after the second sentence.
 * 7) **Done
 * 8) * was arrested during a security sweep on Coruscant, and her dead body was later positively identified can you say directly that she died rather than jumping to her body being identified.
 * 9) **Done
 * 10) * Context for Centrepoint station
 * 11) **Done
 * 12) ***Given that this is a small article I don't think a sentence that is their purely for context is appropriate, I'd get rid of it and just say that it could do a lot of damage
 * 13) ****Done
 * 14) * Can you put NOTOC in.
 * 15) **Someone else took care of it
 * 16) * Mention that her species was not specified in the Bts.  Commander Code-8  You lost the game! 09:20, September 3, 2013 (UTC)
 * 17) **Done Trip391 (talk) 20:22, September 3, 2013 (UTC)
 * 18) ***It should probably be in a separate sentence rather than just being chucked on the end of that one.  Commander Code-8  You lost the game! 07:34, September 7, 2013 (UTC)
 * 19) ****Done Trip391 (talk) 19:47, September 7, 2013 (UTC)
 * 20) Ayrehead
 * 21) * Could you split up the first sentence?
 * 22) **Done
 * 23) * Context for Coruscant. Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:03, September 5, 2013 (UTC)
 * 24) **Done Trip391 (talk) 20:51, September 5, 2013 (UTC)
 * 25) Exiled Jedi
 * 26) * Can you use Template:CSWECite for the sources section? -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  14:28, September 11, 2013 (UTC)
 * 27) **Done Trip391 (talk) 19:30, September 11, 2013 (UTC)

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