Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Thon


 * ''The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a featured article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.

(5 Inqs/4 Users/7 Total)
Support
 * 1) Co-nominator.--  AdmirableAckbar  [Talk] 21:29, 22 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Co-nominator. &mdash;Graestan  [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( This party's over ) 21:29, 22 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) Jedimca0(Do or Do Not, There is No Try) 10:19, 25 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 4)  Greyman ( Paratus ) 20:54, 27 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 5) Thefourdotelipsis 00:08, 28 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 6) Imperialles 02:06, 28 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 7) Hobbes15 ( Tiger Headquarters ) 00:38, 31 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 8) Janeway 11:53, 1 November 2007 (UTC)
 * 9) --  Darth Culator  (Talk) 21:42, 4 November 2007 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) This image needs a better scan. --Eyrezer 01:12, 23 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) *Better image substituted. &mdash;Graestan [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( This party's over ) 04:10, 24 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) From the lair of Hobbes15
 * 4) * "However, after much time and effort Thon became thoroughly exhausted, and his ability to repel the attackers was diminishing. However, he devised a strategy to defeat the Sith, and swam out into the middle of Lake Natth,[3] the largest source of water on the planet.[5]" The two "however's" don't sound good together. Reword.
 * 5) **Addressed. I'll leave the others to Graestan because they're in his sections. --  AdmirableAckbar  [Talk] 11:41, 28 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 6) * Mention how the Jedi Masters counseled Qel-Droma against infiltrating the Krath.
 * 7) **Snippet added. &mdash;Graestan [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( This party's over ) 04:15, 29 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 8) * What was the result of the Krath attack on Coruscant? Explain who won.
 * 9) **Yeah, yeah. Done. &mdash;Graestan [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( This party's over ) 04:15, 29 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 10) * Two "But's" in a row to start sentences in Conclave at Exis Station.
 * 11) **Fixed. And there were more than you saw. But you know, it' not unacceptable to start sentences with "but" anymore. Sorry to be such a butt. &mdash;Graestan [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( This party's over ) 04:15, 29 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 12) ***But... I've never been against starting sentences with but :)! I did see the other ones, but didn't care, since they weren't pressed right against each other. This one was the only one I saw that sounded bad. Hobbes15 ( Tiger Headquarters ) 00:38, 31 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 13) *Other than those, great article, except it's TOTJ ;). Hobbes15 ( Tiger Headquarters ) 04:01, 28 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 14) **You might have noticed that our WookieeProject happens to be the most successful active project of its kind on the wiki, due to the dedication of myself and users such as Greyman and AdmirableAckbar. &mdash;Graestan [[Image:Jedi_Order.jpg|20px]] ( This party's over ) 04:15, 29 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 15) ***I have indeed&mdash;you three overwork me ;). I'm going to start reading TOTJ now, although I won't be able to buy any of them. The story's good: the epidemic of noms on it, however, is a bit insane for basically only three writers. You, Grey, and Acky have been doing great.  Hobbes15 ( Tiger Headquarters ) 22:04, 31 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 16) The refs need to be links. -- Ozzel 03:29, 30 October 2007 (UTC)
 * 17) *Linked --  AdmirableAckbar  [Talk] 12:27, 30 October 2007 (UTC)

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'''Approved by Inquisitorius 22:00, 4 November 2007 (UTC)
 * A joint venture by AdmirableAckbar and Graestan.