Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Battle of Deneba


 * ''The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a featured article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.

(5 Inqs/3 Users/8 Total)
Support
 * 1) Nominated.  Greyman ( Talk ) 04:16, 24 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) Also nicely done. --Squishy Vic (discussion) (contributions) 00:34, 25 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) Well done. Toprawa and Ralltiir 04:16, 26 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) Addressed via IRC.  Master Aban Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 00:49, 28 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) How do I get suckered into reading these?  Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 02:02, 29 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 6) *All I'm admitting to is the number "20" :P Greyman  http://images.wikia.com/central/images/9/9c/Jan.png ( Talk ) 02:15, 29 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 7) -- Goodwood [[Image:Redstarbird.svg|20px]] ( Alliance Intelligence ) 07:54, 29 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 8) Cull Tremayne 21:53, 1 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 9) --  Darth Culator  (Talk) 18:37, 2 April 2008 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) From the desk of Atarumaster88
 * 2) * Outcome: Decrease in Jedi morale??? That's sketchy at best, and certainly not something that should go in the infobox.
 * 3) **I beg to differ, especially since it's in the sources, but I've removed it for ya :) Greyman  http://images.wikia.com/central/images/9/9c/Jan.png ( Talk ) 01:57, 29 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) * "The Dark Lords of the Sith audio drama brought the dramatic events of the Battle of Deneba, only previously experienced on comic pages, into a much more vivid light." That flowery and repetitive BTS sentence needs to be either cited as a direct quote, or removed. The idea of an audio drama being "much more vivid" is POV on the part of the writer.
 * 5) **Remoooooved. Greyman  http://images.wikia.com/central/images/9/9c/Jan.png ( Talk ) 01:57, 29 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 6) * Your casualties field is incorrect; many more Jedi were lost, not just Jeth. The little symbol should not be on Arca Jeth either-it's redundant.
 * 7) **I added the part of the other Jedi&mdash;an oversight on my part. The symbol, however, is used to denote that Jeth was killed. Casualty doesn't necessarily mean "killed". Greyman  http://images.wikia.com/central/images/9/9c/Jan.png ( Talk ) 01:57, 29 March 2008 (UTC)
 * 8) *Have a Super Terrific Friendly Un-frustating day. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 01:46, 29 March 2008 (UTC)
 * Image:JfleetDeneba.JPG is fairly artifacty. Image:Swdl3.jpg is just not very well scanned. Both need to be redone. --Imperialles 12:51, 2 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 1) *I've re-scanned both, and preformed some cleanup on them. Hopefully they are better. Greyman  http://images.wikia.com/central/images/9/9c/Jan.png ( Talk ) 19:07, 2 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) **Image:JfleetDeneba.JPG seems very blurry. If you can get me a raw scan, I'll try and see if I can improve it somehow. --Imperialles 22:53, 2 April 2008 (UTC)

Comments
 * Continuation of WP:TOTJ. Greyman ( Talk ) 04:16, 24 March 2008 (UTC)