Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations



This page is for the nomination of "comprehensive articles". For a list of "comprehensive articles", see Category:Wookieepedia comprehensive articles.


 * Comprehensive article nominations history
 * Comprehensive article nominations archiving checklist

What is a "comprehensive article?"

A "comprehensive article" is an article that contains all information regarding the topic. Often, "comprehensive articles" cannot reach Featured or Good Article status due to their limited content. This process is intended to recognize articles that contain all relevant canon information, yet are still under the 250 word limit required for a Good Article. The purpose of this is twofold&mdash;firstly, to help users distinguish what is a stub, and what is merely a short article with no further relevant material to be added, and, more importantly, to highlight for the reader when they are reading something that has been judged definitely "comprehensive"&mdash;that is, a guarantee to the reader that whatever they are reading contains the sum total of all available content.

Nominations and promotions of the Comprehensive article process are overseen by a collective of users known as the "EduCorps," which is made up of the Inquisitorius, the AgriCorps, and various other experienced users who are considered qualified to adequately judge the nominated material.

Lucasfilm Ltd. and its many licensees continue to expand the Star Wars universe. Since new information might become available, it may be necessary to revoke a "comprehensive article's" status. A forum will be used to nominate articles that have fallen out-of-date. Members of the EduCorps will then post a warning template on that page, and a grace period of one week will be instituted in which the article can be improved. If there is a significant amount of new information, it is likely that once updated, the article will become eligible for Good article status, and thereby ineligible for Comprehensive article status.

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An article must&hellip;


 * 1) &hellip;be well-written and detailed.
 * 2) &hellip;be unbiased, non-point of view.
 * 3) &hellip;be sourced with all available sources and appearances.
 * 4) &hellip;follow the Manual of Style, Layout Guide, and all other policies on Wookieepedia. This is, of course, within reason. If a topic only has a very limited degree of content that cannot be divided up into the relevant article sections, it is not required that it follow the Layout Guide precisely. This is to be judged on a case-by-case basis.
 * 5) &hellip;following the review process, be stable, i.e., does not change significantly from day to day and is not the subject of ongoing edit wars. This does not apply to vandalism and protection or semi-protection as a result of vandalism.
 * 6) &hellip;not be tagged with any sort of improvement tags (i.e. more sources, expand, etc).
 * 7) &hellip;have no redlinks.
 * 8) &hellip;have all relevant canon information presented.
 * 9) &hellip;be completely referenced for all available material and sources. See Sourcing for more information. While this is not required for an article possessing a singular source, it is encouraged, as it provides both uniformity and a good infrastructure should the topic be referenced in any future materials.
 * 10) &hellip;have all quotes and images sourced.
 * 11) &hellip;provide at least one relevant quote on the article if available.
 * 12) &hellip;include a "Behind the scenes" section for in-universe articles.
 * 13) &hellip;counting the introduction, the article body, and "Behind the scenes" material, must not exceed 250 words in length (not including captions, quotes, or headers, etc). Any articles exceeding the limit should be taken to the Good article nominations page for consideration.
 * 14) &hellip;if the nominated article reaches 200 words or greater, the nominator must either provide an intro or draft an intro and provide a link to the revision in the nomination, showing that the intro does not elevate the article over 250 words. Exceptions can be made for articles wherein the majority of the text is in the "Behind the scenes" section.

How to nominate:


 * 1) First, nominate an article you find is worthy of comprehensive status, putting it at the bottom of the list below. Nominated articles must meet all thirteen requirements stated above.
 * 2) Add CAnom at the top of the article you are nominating.
 * 3) Be sure to place sign in the "Nominated by" line when the nomination is posted for voting.
 * 4) Others will object to the nomination if they disagree that the article is good enough; they will then supply reasons for doing so, and ways to improve the article in accordance with the established rules.
 * 5) Nominators and supporters will adjust the article until the objectors (with reasonable objections) are satisfied. Objectors may also make alterations&mdash;if there is any reason for contention on a given point, it should be settled in a civil manner in the nomination field itself.
 * 6) Users may not vote on their own articles.
 * 7) There is no limit to the amount of nominations a given user can submit at any given time.

How to vote:


 * 1) Before doing anything, be sure to read the article completely, keeping a sharp eye out for mistakes.
 * 2) Afterward, compare the article to the criteria listed above, and then either support or object the article's nomination.
 * 3) *If you object, please supply concrete reasons for doing so, and how it can be improved.
 * 4) As stated above, any objections will be looked upon by the nominator, supporters, and anyone willing to improve the article, and action will be taken to please the objectors. Do not strike other users' objections; it is up to the objector to review the changes and strike if they are satisfied.
 * 5) There are several ways in which an article can receive the required number of votes. Within a 48-hour period of nomination, only EduCorps votes will count towards the total, although anyone may choose to vote in that window. If two members of the EduCorps support a nomination in that window, and there are no outstanding objections, the article can be considered a "Comprehensive article" and be tagged with the template 48 hours after the initial nomination.  The talk page will also be tagged with the CA template. When the 48 hours are up, any user's votes will contribute towards the total. If one EduCorps member has voted for an article after a week, three regular votes will be required. After the 48 hour period, an article can still also pass with just two EduCorps votes.
 * 6) Once a nomination is successful, it will be placed on the Comprehensive article list. Instructions on how to archive nominations, successful or otherwise, can be found here. Anyone can archive a nomination&mdash;just make sure it has the correct number of votes, has been nominated for at least a week (or 48 hours if there are two EC votes), and that there are absolutely no outstanding objections. If you are not sure how to do this, just ask, and someone will likely be more than willing to help you. Also, if you think you can slip one past us, think again&mdash;someone is always watching you.

All nominations will be considered idle and are subject to instantaneous removal by EduCorps members if objections are not addressed, or at least not answered, after a period of 1 week.

Please remember to archive your nomination beforehand if you plan on taking it to the Good Article Nominations page.

Argauun

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 10:32, November 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Never thought, that I would do a species...

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) &mdash; Axinal  Convocation Chamber 17:30, November 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:00, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Are you sure it is not Aarguun? Also, is Talia Moonseeker described at all? --Eyrezer 08:50, November 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *Sir, no sir. The only mentions is as follows: Talia Moonseeker, a young Argauun only four months into her Jedi Knighthood, was kneeling beside her fallen former Master, Va'too, head bowed.. That is all about the species in the whole book.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 13:51, November 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) I think you should email Miller and ask her if this was intentionally a separate species. There's an email function on her website and she responds to most messages promptly. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 22:13, November 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) *This would be possible. However, I do not think it is neccessary. There is no species which is written so similiar that there is an error. You're welcome to do it, my own e-mail system has some problems and I don't know how it works.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 13:08, November 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) **I think in this case it's absolutely necessary. The difference between this and Aargauun is a single repeated letter. As it stands, even if this wasn't a mistake, the article at least needs a youmay tag. I've sent her an email asking, so we'll probably have this settled shortly. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 00:21, November 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) ***Ah sorry I was mislead by Eyrezer's spelling above. In that case, the check is neccessary and thanks for doing that. Let's see what she says and then we'll discuss the youmay tag.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 11:20, November 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) ****I totally agree with Naru, and had also emailed her as well asking Leland on the Dark Horse forums. --Eyrezer
 * 8) Bob
 * 9) * The length of Talia Moonseeker's article suggests at least a bit more description on her is warranted. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 23:17, November 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) **About her only two sentences. About her species, there is nothing more said or described, you can believe me.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:24, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) ***The novel does specify that Argauuns have heads, and that when experiencing grief they hang their head. --Eyrezer 06:03, November 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * 12) ****You can mention something like that? Wow, you can see I do not write species that often. Added and thanks.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 14:45, November 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * 13) ***** Besides this, you need to give a bit of detail on what Moonraker did in the book. From the lead to her own article, something like this: " Four months after her promotion, Moonseeker and her former Master were sent on a mission to rescue Jedi Master Obi-Wan Kenobi, Padawan Anakin Skywalker, and Senator Padmé Amidala from execution on the planet Geonosis. The rescue mission turned into the opening battle of the Clone Wars, and although Moonseeker survived it, her former Master was killed. Shaken by this loss, she mourned her deceased mentor on the battlefield." In other words, notable members of the species can't just be mentioned; their lives need to be summarized too. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 14:15, November 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 14) ******Please try it now.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 18:36, November 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * OK, one other thing: Do we know this is a species? Does the source say? It could be that this is merely a planetary demonym (like Corellian or Alderaanian), so I just wanted to make sure. If the source is unclear, you should rewrite accordingly and reclassify as an Category:Undefined social groups. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 04:27, November 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) **It is not clearly said. However, I think we should wait until Miller gives an answer to Naru. Maybe all get's cleared up then.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 15:05, November 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) ***No reply yet? It's been quite a while, so we may need to change this to an undefined social group. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 16:14, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Comments
 * As there are some problems with recieving a clearing answer from Miller, it would be best to remove the nom and see If we get an answer in the future. Any thoughts?  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 10:01, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Vendaran

 * Nominated by: Eyrezer 10:28, November 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

(0 ECs/2 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:26, November 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2)  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 17:05, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Toprawa:
 * 2) *Do we have any establishment of whether it's "Near-Human" or "near-Human"? I see this alternating constantly across the wiki, and that article seems to capitalize more than not. Toprawa and Ralltiir 01:47, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Comments
 * Any post-New Republic history that can be gleaned from the Atlas? Since they're colonists, we can't assume anything about the pre-NR stuff, but for that period and later (or at least post-NR), there might be a factoid or two in the maps. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 14:49, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

Unidentified resistance group

 * Nominated by: -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 16:35, November 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:More from TFU II databank for WP:VG.

(1 ECs/2 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 19:16, November 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2)  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 17:13, December 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Toprawa and Ralltiir 02:01, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) BIt of context needed on Slotern. Is it a planet, a city, a village? ~ Savage BOB sig.png 15:10, December 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *Sorry, but that's impossible. We don't know what Slotern is yet. All we know is that it's some location&mdash;whether that be planet, city, village, etc. we don't know.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:34, December 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **There's a Slotern system; is this a case of the Fooians of Foo, like we do on alien species articles? In other words, I'm not sure it's speculation to say Slotern is in the Slotern system. ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 01:12, December 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) ***I disagree with trying to assert this specific Slotern is one thing or another. We know from the details of the battle that portions took place in the air and on the ground, so we're obviously dealing with a planetary body here in some form. This could just as easily be the planet Slotern, or it could just as easily be a city named Slotern. We simply don't have enough detail, so we shouldn't be doing guesswork. Toprawa and Ralltiir 18:20, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Irid

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 22:35, November 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: There's a reason Big Bird's the only one you ever see nowadays.

(2 ECs/4 Users/6 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 12:02, November 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Beware! The Birds!-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:33, November 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) --Eyrezer 09:22, December 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4)  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 17:36, December 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) Tinwe (comlink) 07:40, December 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) Toprawa and Ralltiir 02:39, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) You need to mention that their plumage was yellow, as stated in the infobox and quote. Good job.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:59, November 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *Added. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 07:00, November 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Tinwe
 * 4) * I think you should specify (both in the article and the infobox) that it was the underside of the wings that was yellow, as the quote states. It would be a bit of a stretch to assume the whole plumage was the same color, as it's not explicitly stated.
 * 5) **Fixed. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 16:34, December 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) * The Qui-Gon & Tahl mission took place considerably earlier than 41 BBY. It's a flashback scene (which needs be noted in the Appearances section and maybe in Bts as well) that takes place not long after Xanatos fell to the dark side, so 53 BBY might be closer to the mark. Tinwe (comlink) 09:54, December 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) **Fixed. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 16:34, December 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) * Oh and one more thing: irid has an entry in the Complete Star Wars Encyclopedia. Tinwe (comlink) 11:02, December 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) **Does it add anything and what page is it on?
 * 10) ***Page 114; no new info there, it just states that they were avians native to Ragoon-6 and had yellow wings. Tinwe (comlink) 07:45, December 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) ****Updated. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 03:42, December 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * 12) Bob
 * 13) *Should that read "with impunity?" As it stands, they got punished for their attacks on their parents. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 15:17, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Spear Squadron

 * Nominated by:  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 15:50, November 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Needed doing. Similar in content to Ebon Squadron.

(1 ECs/2 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 16:08, November 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 20:40, November 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 15:18, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Salutations
 * 2) * Why are you linking to the gallery for a reference here? That doesn't say anything about indoctrination or the Navy as far as I can see. If that information is on the card, then the ref should be to the card. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 20:22, November 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **The gallery defines the icons on the miniature. The Imperial Fleet is represented on the miniature with the icon of the Empire printed on the stand. The official gallery defines the miniature "Type" as a space unit and the "Faction" icon on the unit as representing the Empire. As to the indoctrination, it's established in canon that TIE pilots are the best that Imperial academies offer and are indoctrinated to be loyal to the Emperor. However, I can go ahead and remove it since the citation does not encompass that fact.  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 16:12, November 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) ***I've added in the missed "trooper" icon reference. The icon defines group/swarming tactics.  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 16:52, November 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) ****Corrected the Bts error.  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 16:55, November 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) *****Hokay then. Just Template:Cite web that and you should be good to go. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 03:29, November 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) ******Done.  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 15:13, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Unidentified gladiator 1

 * Nominated by: -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:20, November 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Finally deciding to go on an idea from Fred, I'm starting my CAnom sweep of the Atlas.

(1 ECs/4 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 19:53, November 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) --Station7 18:35, November 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 02:48, November 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4)  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 18:01, December 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) Tinwe (comlink) 18:16, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) I'd hardly call this just a mention. He appeared in the picture.  NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 00:05, November 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *Done.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:14, November 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Bob
 * 4) * Is it right to call him "dark-skinned?" "Red-skinned" might be better.
 * 5) **Picky, picky, picky. :P
 * 6) * You should note that he was male and non-human somewhere. I'd say it's safe to duck test gender on this one. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 14:47, November 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) **Done.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:18, November 26, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) Station7
 * 9) * Could you add a conjecture template like all unidentified inviduals? --Station7 15:03, November 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) **Yup. Forgot it for some reason. Done.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:18, November 26, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) You probably know what I want here...  The same goes for the other gladiator, of course. :)  Tinwe (comlink) 16:06, December 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * 12) *Added for both.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:34, December 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * 13) ** One more thing (those always seem to crop up, eh?): Is there any specific reason as to why you're referring to the gladiator as "it" rather than "him?" Tinwe (comlink) 09:25, December 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 14) ***Just left over from when I was still deciding if we could duck test his gender or not. :P -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:47, December 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 15) Looks like both gladiator images have some whitespace at the bottom that should be trimmed off. The Espos, too; maybe check all of your Atlas images. Menkooroo 16:24, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Unidentified gladiator 2

 * Nominated by: -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:32, November 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Number 2.

(1 ECs/4 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 23:07, November 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) --Station7 18:34, November 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 02:49, November 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) Tinwe (comlink) 09:27, December 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5)  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 18:03, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) I don't think we can see enough of his features to call him a Human even by the duck test. It should probably be Humanoid.  NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 19:54, November 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *Changed.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:34, November 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Bob
 * 4) * "Humanoid" isn't a species, so you should probably change the infobox to say something like, "Humanoid species". Also, I don't think "humanoid" is normally capitalized. Finally, you call him "Humanoid" in the body but "Human" in the BTS. Due to the helmet, I don't know that we can assume Human on him. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 14:49, November 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) **Fixed.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:08, November 26, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) Station7
 * 7) * Could you add a conjecture template like all unidentified inviduals? --Station7 15:03, November 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) **Added.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:08, November 26, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Police probe

 * Nominated by: Coruscantfan 21:57, November 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Their version of big brother?

(0 ECs/3 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) Watch out for older brothers...-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 03:52, November 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2)  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 19:55, December 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Tinwe (comlink) 08:12, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Object Bob
 * Infobox needs to be reloaded. Otherwise, good job. -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:29, November 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * Reloaded meaning? Coruscantfan 03:08, November 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * Removing the infobox you have on there now, and replacing it with a new one. There are currently some places missing in the infobox.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 03:15, November 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * Is that what you were looking for? Because some of those sections I had hidden. I unhid them and filled in some of the info. Coruscantfan 03:37, November 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * No. I wasn't objecting to what you had in the infobox. I was saying that you need to remove the whole thing, and put the whole infobox back on there just as it is on the template page. (Droid infobox) There are several sections that have been deleted from the template that you have on this article. Even if they're not being used, they should still be there, just left blank. Does that make sense? If not, I'll show you what I mean.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 03:47, November 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * Oh, got it. Ok, I put a new one in. Coruscantfan 03:48, November 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * Looks good. :) -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 03:52, November 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * Cool, thanks! Coruscantfan 03:53, November 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * You know, Tom Kane voiced this guy. You should have it on the "behind the scenes" section.--Lord David 20:26, December 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * Added. Coruscantfan CSFsymbol.jpg (Talk) 02:13, December 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * You should add in how they were featured in "Evil Plans." Even if a probe just wanders by in the background, we need to know that fact.
 * Done.
 * The specific individual units that are featured in those two episodes need articles, since unique droids are treated as unique individuals on the Wook.
 * Done.
 * You currently make no mention of the droid's appearance. I think you need to describe its shape, its coloration, its accessories (like the three lights on the front, the antenna, the siren), and say that it hovered for its means of locomotion. It sounds like it could speak Basic? That's important to know too.
 * Done.
 * Unfortunately, all of this is likely to put you over 250 words, so you should consider taking this to GAN afterward. :) ~ Savage BOB sig.png 15:24, December 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * I want to first get the comprehensive since its made it this far, then go for GAN if I can expand it. One thing at a time if possible. :) Coruscantfan (Talk) 00:48, December 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * I understand the sentiment, but you're currently at 236 words, so the addition of an intro is likely to push you above 250. Besides, there's still a lot more to be said about the droid's appearance. They're not just round, they have two bowl-shaped halves joined together with a recessed trench in the middle, creating an overall ellipsoid body; the lights on top were truncated cones; the two lights in front projected from conical housings, as did the camera. And did it speak with a masculine or feminine voice? And is that paint or just plating? At any rate, there's no need to shoehorn this into CA when more can be said about it. We should treat droid model articles like species noms, with great attention to details of the characteristics of the model. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 01:19, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Sith tome (Dromund Kaas Academy)

 * Nominated by:  —Tommy  9281  Tuesday, November 22, 2011, 17:20 UTC 
 * Nomination comments: This was cool. Majorspoiler.

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:33, November 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) And with strange aeons, even death may die. ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 01:21, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Cal Jedi
 * 2) * There is some seemingly important infobox exclusive material. -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 20:33, November 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Be more specific please.  —Tommy  9281  Tuesday, November 22, 2011, 21:08 UTC 
 * 4) ***That it was manufactured and created by the Ancient Sith. That it was specifically a Sith Scroll. And that it was created more than ten thousand years before 3956 BBY.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:18, November 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) ****"Sith tome" denotes its manufacturer/creator. It was actually a book, which I changed in the infobox, but that is also mentioned in the article proper.  —Tommy  9281  Tuesday, November 22, 2011, 21:30 UTC 
 * 6) *****Looks good.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:33, November 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) Imperators II
 * 8) *The year 3,956 BBY can't really be sourced to the novel. A note should be added that explained how the date was derived.  Imperators II (Talk) 09:31, November 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) **That was the wrong year anyway. Addressed.  —Tommy  9281  Saturday, November 26, 2011, 21:24 UTC 
 * 10) ***A note on the year 3,954 BBY should be added, anyway, explaining how the date is derived.  Imperators II (Talk) 16:31, November 29, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) ****That is not necessary because the book indicates the events began with the year 3,954.  —Tommy  9281  Thursday, December 1, 2011, 00:02 UTC 
 * 12) Bob
 * 13) * More of a question really, but I'd think it best practice to spell out acronyms on first mention (e.g., MMORPG). ~ Savage BOB sig.png 15:30, December 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 14) **Addressed. Thanks for the review, Bob. Please advise if anything further is required.  —Tommy  9281  Wednesday, December 14, 2011, 00:43 UTC 
 * 15) Toprawa:
 * 16) *Two small things. One, since the article links to book in the infobox, I think we should try to link it somewhere in the article body as well. Perhaps by pipelinking it to "tome"?
 * 17) *Secondly, the article alternates between "the academy" and "the Academy." Please choose whichever one is correct and use throughout. Toprawa and Ralltiir 18:35, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Jizz-box

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 20:32, November 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: A sequel to Jizz-wail, and a crossover with Galactic Society of Recording Artists at that.

(1 ECs/1 Users/1 Total)
Support
 * 1) -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 20:42, November 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2)  Put another cred in the jizz-box, baby! ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 02:51, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * There are only two sentences in the whole main section of the article. That last long sentence could be broken into at least two sentences, I think, so it would be a better read. Otherwise, good job. -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 20:38, November 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nonetheless, it was grammatically correct! :) Split. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 20:40, November 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * Sounds much better. :) -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 20:42, November 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * Bob
 * Are you sure it's a musical instrument? Sounds like the Star Wars equivalent to a juke box to me. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 14:45, November 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * I've been thinking so too the more I reread the scene... How does "musical device" sound? I could also work in how C-3PO was playing the music. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 18:07, November 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * Looks good to me! ~ Savage BOB sig.png 02:51, November 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) Toprawa:
 * 2) *I think the BTS ought to provide citation for the second sentence regarding jizz being created for the ANH film. That statement alone is not exactly self-sourcing. I believe the ANH novel mentions jizz within (the first source to do so), though I may be mistaken. Toprawa and Ralltiir 02:49, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

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Unidentified Espo 1

 * Nominated by: -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 04:44, November 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:First in a total of four in the set.

(2 ECs/4 Users/6 Total)
Support
 * 1) Coruscantfan 23:12, November 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  03:56, November 26, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Tinwe (comlink) 14:44, November 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) Great job!  NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 23:09, November 28, 2011 (UTC) ( Made you click! :P)
 * 5)  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 20:04, December 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 21:44, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * Please give some context on the Corporate Sector Authority and the Espos.
 * 3) **Done.
 * 4) * How exactly can you say that the weapon is a projectile weapon instead of a blaster weapon? -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  14:07, November 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) **You're right. I went ahead and replaced with "Gun".-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 23:09, November 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) Tinwe
 * 7) * You might want to add to the Bts that the illustration was made by Chris Trevas. The same goes for the other two Espos and the Trianii suspect, I'm just too lazy to copypaste this objection. :P Tinwe (comlink) 18:10, November 26, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) **I believe I hit them all.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 23:12, November 26, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) Rubedo
 * 10) * So far as I know, we aren't supposed to use acronyms in article titles. These three should be moved to either Unidentified Corporate Sector Authority Espo or just Unidentified Espo. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 20:38, November 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) **I debated about this when I wrote the article. The source specifically identifies him as a CSA Espo. Thus, I don't think there is any problem with naming him a CSA Espo. However, I don't intend to make a beef about this, and if you or someone else really wants it changed, I'll move it.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 02:25, November 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 12) ***I'm afraid I'll have to insist. It sounds like the caption identifies him as a "CSA Espo" like it was calling some soldier an "Alliance commando," in which case the government name is not part of the occupation title, but is actually just a statement that he belonged to that organization. In addition, other sources have the slang term as just "Espo" for the officers, not "CSA Espo." NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 10:14, November 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 13) ****Just to reiterate, the problem is that it's an acronym. You can spell out CSA if you want to. "Unidentified soldier" and "Unidentified Rebel soldier" are both acceptable titles. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 17:03, November 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 14) *****Move completed.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:17, November 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 15) * "A male Human with fair skin was a Corporate Sector Authority Espo, the security police for the CSA government of the Corporate Sector." Two things. The character was the security police? You can't contextify this way because "the Corporate Sector Authority government of the corporate sector" is grammatically incorrect. What I think you tried to do here was something like "the CSA, the government of the Corporate Sector," but that apositive would also be wrong because it would be within another apositive, the one explaining what an Espo is. This sentence needs rewording. (P.S. I never get to use colors! :D)
 * 16) **Congrats on being able to use colors, :P and reworded.
 * 17) * One last thing. You shouldn't bold his species. His job is what's notable about the character (why he rated an article), not his race. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 21:30, November 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 18) **I don't see anything particularly wrong with bolding his species, but meh. Whatever. Switched.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 02:36, November 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 19) Bob
 * 20) * I think you should retool the first couple sentences a bit. We're told that he's a Human twice (linked both times), but more importantly, you bold "Espo" with no explanation, when that's not a term someone unfamiliar with the source material will easily be able to parse.
 * 21) **See what you think.
 * 22) * The current prose also implies that the Trianii wore the armor and carried the gun.
 * 23) **Fixed.
 * 24) * Also, as a one-shot guy, you can probably ditch the word "first" in the BTS. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 15:35, December 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 25) **I don't see any problem with letting it stay, but whatever. Removed.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:49, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

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 * Apparently there's an article for the Espo Armor, you might want to link it. Also, the Espo is probably holding this gun, but it's hard to say for sure as the article on said weapon lacks an image... Tinwe (comlink) 17:46, November 29, 2011 (UTC)
 * Linked. Left out the gun part, though, since it's not confirmed. Thanks for finding that stuff.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:16, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Unidentified Espo 2

 * Nominated by: -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 20:52, November 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Number 2.

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Support
 * 1) Coruscantfan 23:22, November 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Tinwe (comlink) 06:58, November 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  17:34, November 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 23:10, November 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5)  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 20:05, December 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 21:45, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Context on the CSA and the Espos. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  14:08, November 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *Done.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 23:18, November 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Same as above regarding context on "Espo." Then we're golden. ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 15:36, December 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) *Done.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:50, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

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Unidentified Espo 3

 * Nominated by: -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:00, November 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Corporate Sector Jones and the Last Espo

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 * 1) Coruscantfan 23:29, November 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Tinwe (comlink) 06:58, November 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  17:42, November 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 23:10, November 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5)  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 20:05, December 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) A player on one of Pee-Wee Herman's favorite teams. ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 21:46, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Context on the CSA and the Espos. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  14:09, November 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *Fixed.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 23:27, November 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Bob
 * 4) * His Human-ness comes out of nowhere -- can you move that earlier in the article?
 * 5) **Moved.
 * 6) * Also, context on Espo. It's a baseball team from Montreal, right? ;P ~ Savage BOB sig.png 15:37, December 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) **No. I'm pretty sure that it's a hockey team from Detroit. :P -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:51, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

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Unidentified Trianii suspect

 * Nominated by: -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:21, November 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Number 4. The bad guy of the group.

(2 ECs/3 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * 1) Coruscantfan 23:34, November 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  03:49, November 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Tinwe (comlink) 06:59, November 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4)  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 20:07, December 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 15:03, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) It may be difficult to do the way you have it worded, but I believe that you should say something about what the CSA is and what Espos are. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  14:04, November 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *Fitted it in. Thanks for the reviews!-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 23:31, November 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Bob
 * 4) * The bit about "three CSA Expos" currently goes to a bunch of redirects. I'd SOFIXIT, but I'm not sure what the target articles are. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 16:09, December 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) **Yeah, added. Somehow I must have missed this guy when I switched the name of the Espos.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 19:59, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

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Guerrerite

 * Nominated by:  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  14:32, November 26, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Random article button do your stuff!

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 * 1) Go random article button!-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 23:05, November 26, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2)  Gethralkin  Hyperwave 20:19, December 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 16:30, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Bob
 * 2) * Is the plural Gektl or Gektls?
 * 3) **It's Gektls, fixed.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  17:33, December 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) * "Under Rahz's control, the Empire took control..." This is a bit confusing. Can you reword a bit?
 * 5) **Better?-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  17:33, December 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) * "...and enslaved the Gektl..." I take that to mean the other Gektl (i.e., not included Rahz)?
 * 7) **Clarified.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  17:33, December 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) * Is none of this information from Bring Me the Children? ~ Savage BOB sig.png 15:50, December 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) **All of the information I used was from the Complete Encyclopedia and Aliens in the Empire. I didn't think that Bring Me the Children had any information on the enslavement of the Gektls or the guerrerite. Unfortunately I do not have access to it so I can't check it for mentions of guerrerite, but from what I have been able to gather from Rahz's featured article, it seems that there wasn't any information about the Gektls enslavement or the guerrerite in the work.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  17:33, December 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) *** I think you might want to ask the person who rose Gektl to status (jSarek?) just to be sure -- I'd had to just assume there's no mention in the comic without checking. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 02:27, December 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) ****I asked jSarek about it on his talk page.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  21:37, December 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 12) *****As far as jSarek knows, there is no mention of Guerrerite in Bring Me the Children. He doesn't have access to the Hyperspace version, but he has a slightly different version and doesn't think that Guerrerite could be mentioned in the story.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  14:49, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

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 * No infobox for ores or metals?-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  14:32, November 26, 2011 (UTC)

Unidentified Herglic

 * Nominated by: -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:35, December 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

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 * 1)  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 13:49, December 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 15:41, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

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 * I'm not quite sure if we should include "None" in the infobox if there is no hair.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 10:03, December 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * I believe I got them all.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:40, December 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * Should we include it then in the bio/intro? I believe not.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 10:18, December 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * I think it's a matter of taste. I don't really care either way, so removed.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:58, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

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Unidentified Devaronian (coat)

 * Nominated by: -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:39, December 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

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 * 1)  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 13:49, December 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 20:30, December 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 01:22, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

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 * See above.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 10:03, December 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * Same as the Bothan. Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 14:55, December 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * Done.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:28, December 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) Bob
 * 2) * I think the color of his horns is pertinent to mention, so can you add that? But why mention two horns? That's the default for Devaronians, so I'd say it goes without mention unless it deviates from that norm. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 15:44, December 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Done.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:42, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

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Unidentified Gotal (Vratix)

 * Nominated by: -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:41, December 10, 2011 (UTC)
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 * 1)  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 10:04, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

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Unidentified Vratix

 * Nominated by: -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:42, December 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

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 * 1)  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 13:50, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

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 * See above.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 10:04, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

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Unidentified Zabrak (drink)

 * Nominated by: -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:45, December 10, 2011 (UTC)
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 * 1)  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 10:05, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

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Unidentified Wookiee (belt)

 * Nominated by: -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:47, December 10, 2011 (UTC)
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 * 1)  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 10:05, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

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Unidentified Bothan (drink)

 * Nominated by: -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:49, December 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

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 * 1)  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 10:06, December 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 04:11, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

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 * 1) To better link the sentences, could you change "on at least one occasion" to "on that occasion" ? Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 03:38, December 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *Switched.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 03:45, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

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Unidentified Ithorian (holochess)

 * Nominated by: -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:51, December 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Thanks to and  for finding the source for the BTS.

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 * 1)  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 10:06, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

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Unidentified Baragwin (holochess)

 * Nominated by: -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:54, December 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Thanks to and  for finding the source for the BTS.

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 * 1)  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 10:07, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

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Unidentified Human (holochess)

 * Nominated by: -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:56, December 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Thanks to and  for finding the source for the BTS.

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 * 1)  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 10:07, December 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) I love it that he's essentially wearing a hybrid-version of Ponda Baba's and this jacket. He must get all the chicks. ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 03:38, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) *Human Scoundrel Miniature.jpg
 * 3) *Could you mention that he was pictured in The New Essential Guide to Alien Species. He is the picture on the Human page in the book.
 * 4) **Added. Is it confirmed that it is him? Or does it just resemble him? Also, is there any context to describe the picture in the book?
 * 5) *Also, there is a miniature called a "Human Scoundrel that resembles this guy from the Star Wars Miniatures: Legacy of the Force set. Here he is:-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  13:25, December 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) **Thanks. Added.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:53, December 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) Bob
 * 8) * This is the same guy who appears on the "Human" entry of The New Essential Guide to Alien Species, as seen here. NEGAS (beyond the first couple pages) is an in-universe document, so his appearance there needs to be noted in the in-universe section of the article. I'm not sure if we have an article for the in-universe version of the book, but we should. The information in it is based on the research of retired Senior Anthropologies Mammon Hoole combined with the observations of the unnamed (in-uni) authors. The publication date is sometime during the Yuuzhan Vong War. You can also speak more about his full outfit from that image.
 * 9) **How's it look?
 * 10) *** Better! I think you should note that he was featured in NEGAS as a representative example of the Human species, not just that he was pictured there, though. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 03:22, December 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) ****Added.
 * 12) * Here's the card for the Human scoundrel: blah. You might glean some info from it. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 15:01, December 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * 13) **Alrighty. Thanks.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 02:37, December 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 14) *** Should you change the article title to Unidentified Human scoundrel, and note his scoundrel-ness in the body of the article? ~ Savage BOB sig.png 03:22, December 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 15) ****I added that info about him in the body, but I think the title is probably fine since it is conjectural anyway.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 03:30, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

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Unidentified Duros (chop shop)

 * Nominated by: -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:58, December 10, 2011 (UTC)
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 * 1)  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 13:51, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

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 * See above.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 10:08, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

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Unidentified Verpine (chop shop)

 * Nominated by: -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:00, December 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

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 * 1)  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 13:52, December 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 18:44, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

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 * See above.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 10:08, December 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * Could you mention he worked in a chop shop in the article? Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 14:52, December 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * Added.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:29, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

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Unidentified Herglic (chop shop)

 * Nominated by: -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:03, December 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

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 * 1)  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 13:52, December 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 18:46, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * See above.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 10:09, December 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * Please get a better scan of the picture. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  13:31, December 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * This didn't go here.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  13:32, December 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * Same as the Bothan. Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 14:50, December 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * Done.
 * Could you mention that he worked in a chop shop in the article? Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 14:50, December 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * For all of these objections about the chop shop, I've added that he was in a chop shop, since we don't know that he was working there. He could have just been watching a friend work. :P -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:30, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

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Unidentified Gran (race)

 * Nominated by: -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:05, December 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:

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 * 1)  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 13:47, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

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 * See above.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 10:09, December 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * Please get a better scan of the picture.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  13:33, December 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * Thanks to JMAS again, they've been changed.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:31, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

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Unidentified Devaronian (race)

 * Nominated by: -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:06, December 10, 2011 (UTC)
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 * 1)  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 13:44, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

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 * See above.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 10:09, December 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * A better scan of the picture would be nice.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  13:30, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

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Unidentified Zabrak (race)

 * Nominated by: -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:08, December 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:There we go! I believe I got them all. Go for it, reviewers!

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 * 1)  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 10:10, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

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 * 1) Could you get a better scan of the picture? -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  13:29, December 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) I guess you could mention that she had a green flag when starting the race.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  21:34, December 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) *Added.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:39, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

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Battle of Carida (Clone Wars)

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 11:05, December 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Part One of "TCW Wild Space Battle Project". Inspired by Cal's magnificent attempt above.

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Battle of Garos IV (Clone Wars)

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 11:14, December 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Part Two

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Battle of Selonia

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 11:32, December 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Part Three

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Battle of Korriban (Clone Wars)

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 11:10, December 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Part Four

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Battle of Lanos

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 11:58, December 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Part Five

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Ambrian cheroot

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 12:35, December 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Short break from the battles. Other Wild Space stuff

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 * No infobox for spices, drugs and medicine?  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 12:35, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Larbo Nelik

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 12:56, December 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Another short break

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Battle of Ord Mantell (Clone Wars)

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 13:07, December 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Back to the battles. Part Six.

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Mission to Barab I

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 13:38, December 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Part Seven

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Unidentified Gungan observer

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 08:45, December 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: What can I say. I like Gungans. And those from MedStar especially.

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Battle of Anoth (Clone Wars)

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 09:26, December 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Part Eight.

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Battle of Bakura (Clone Wars)

 * Nominated by:  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 09:35, December 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Part Nine.

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 * 1) Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 14:46, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

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 * 1) Two things, I guess. This battle is during the flashback and not after the main part, right? Otherwise we might have to say its in 21 BBY, per SW Annual 2011. And should the traitor go in the infobox under the CIS? Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 15:40, December 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * No, a clear date is given by the novel itself. And for the traitor: We don't know if he is really someone who participated in or if he just gave information to Grievous. Therefore he is not in the infobox.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 13:42, December 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) **Got it, thanks for clearing that up. Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 14:46, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

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Unidentified Swokes Swokes 1 (Yeb Yeb Adem'thorn)

 * Nominated by:  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  00:14, December 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: A Swokes Swokes

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 * 1) It looks perfect now. Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 04:13, December 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Vote now! Vote now! ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 21:48, December 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) I actually kinda liked TPM's Senate scenes. Menkooroo 16:17, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

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 * 1) Is it possible to move the last sentence further up in the Bio? As it stands, the article talks about the Vote, then goes back to talking about the aide. Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 01:36, December 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *I kind of combined it with the first sentence.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  04:09, December 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Bob
 * 4) * Does any source explicitly call this dude an aide? I mean, Orn Free Taa was accompanied in his pod by slave girls and whatnot, not only aides. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 15:47, December 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) **Moved and fixed.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  21:32, December 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) Hi!
 * 7) * Sorry if this is nitpicky, but "ended Valorum's career" might not be the best wording if you're going to keep the sourcing to The Phantom Menace. Mentioning that he lost the election is probably more accurate, as the film doesn't indicate that his political career is over.
 * 8) **Fixed.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  13:41, December 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) * Is the detail about Amidala protesting the Invasion of Naboo necessary? For the purposes of this individual, simply mentioning that Amidala called a vote of no confidence might be enough. It's your call, but that might be some good detail to cut if you want to keep it below 200 words and still address my next objection...
 * 10) **I thought that this might be too much context, removed.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  13:41, December 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) * Mention something about his vigorous arm-raising! Surely we can infer that he agreed with Amidala or something? :D Menkooroo 08:46, December 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 12) **I mentioned the arm raising, but I felt that saying that he agreed with Amidala might be a bit speculative. (He may have just been raising his arms since Adem'thorn was.)-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  13:41, December 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 13) ***Good stuff. I trimmed a little bit of repetition at the end; feel free to further tweak it and stuff. Menkooroo 16:17, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

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 * It appears that this guy, or his partner, is pictured in the CSWE. I'm not a hundred percent sure, though, so that's why I'm wondering if maybe you could tell if there was a silver protocol droid in the pod with them? The picture in the CSWE just shows the back of a Swokes Swokes that looks like one of these aides with a silver protocol droid standing next to him.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:38, December 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * What volume/page is this picture on, I only know about the Swokes Swokes entry that has a picture of one of them that seems to be the aide sitting to Adem'thorn's left (The second aide.)-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  15:44, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Kamino Station X

 * Nominated by: Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 15:02, December 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Probably the same as Kamino Station I. Probably.

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 * 1) Provided Cal's objections are dealt with. ~ Savage  BOB sig.png 15:48, December 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) "X rarely marks the spot" - Indiana Jones.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 23:37, December 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * Hey, per Cal.  Clone Commander Lee  Talk 13:04, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

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 * An infobox can be added since we at least know the era.
 * Well, to me it seems like having an infobox with only one entry doesn't look right in the article. Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 18:42, December 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * Well, like it or not, an infobox is required even if there is only one entry.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:51, December 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * Right, my mistake. Added a location infobox. Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 23:30, December 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * The fact that it was the PS3/360 databank should be mentioned in the BTS, I think, so people don't get it confused with the Wii/DS version. If you want an example of how it's been done before, see here.
 * To be more specific, I think what databank entry it appeared in should be mentioned, too. -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:41, December 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review...entry specified. Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 18:42, December 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * Looks good, though.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:38, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

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 * 1) The Force Unleashed 2 Databank.