Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Rokak'k


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Rokak'k

 * Nominated by: Cavalier One [[Image:FarStar Logo.jpg|20px]]( Squadron channel ) 14:58, 20 February 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Project: Gree continues with a nom from scratch \o/. 334 words.

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
 * SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie ) 06:48, 21 February 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) --Eyrezer 03:24, 23 February 2009 (UTC)
 * 2)  Graestan ( Talk ) 14:33, 25 February 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) Cylka  -talk- 00:42, 5 March 2009 (UTC)
 * 4)  Grunny  ( Talk ) 02:56, 6 March 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Graestan the Merciless:
 * 2) * "around the various worlds of the Gree Enclave &hellip; circuited the worlds of the Enclave" is a bit repetitive in the intro.
 * 3) **Changed.
 * 4) * "Master" kinda needs more of an explanation in this article than it does in the one for his ship.
 * 5) **Context added.
 * 6) * Guild needs some context.
 * 7) **Context added.
 * 8) * "rudely" is POV without more of a frame of reference provided.
 * 9) **Removed.
 * 10) * Graestan ( Talk ) 04:29, 23 February 2009 (UTC)

Comments
 * Is there another category he could be placed in? Pilots or some such? --Eyrezer 03:24, 23 February 2009 (UTC)
 * I'd be loath to call him a pilot since his position in more akin to a captain. - Cavalier One [[Image:FarStar Logo.jpg|20px]]( Squadron channel ) 10:33, 24 February 2009 (UTC)