Wookieepedia:Re-featured article nominations/Oss Wilum

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Oss Wilum

 * Originally nominated by:
 * Last featured on: January 28, 2008
 * Changes since last review: diff
 * Date placed on this page: July 26, 2011

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Support

Object
 * 1) Jujiggum
 * 2) *Just at first glance, the intro should definitely be expanded.
 * 3) *Various grammar/tense mistakes.
 * 4) *No quotes for the P&A or for Early life?
 * 5) *"Nothing is known as to how he died" is complete speculation.
 * 6) *Various other speculative/OR wording
 * 7) *Very poor linking.
 * 8) *Lots of missing context.
 * 9) *I'll give it a full read-through once these are addressed. Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 15:58, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Comments
 * I'd most likely be the only one taking care of this, and since school will preclude my usually abundant Wook-time for the foreseeable future, I'm giving the O.K. to remove the nomination.  —Tommy  9281  Wednesday, September 28, 2011, 04:28 UTC 

Vote to remove nomination (Inq only)

 * 1) Jugs' objections remain unfixed for over a month already.  1358  (Talk)  05:26, September 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Menkooroo 05:31, September 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3)  CC7567  (talk) 03:09, September 23, 2011 (UTC)