Forum:SH:typos and verb errors in Ep VII aricle

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In Star Wars: Episode VII The Force Awakens,
 * Han's freighter, the Eravana is been boarded
 * should probably be


 * Han's freighter, the Eravana, is boarded
 * or


 * Han's freighter Eravana is boarded.

In Star Wars: Episode VII The Force Awakens, should darksider be two words?

In Star Wars: Episode VII The Force Awakens,
 * Captain Phasma, who they force to disable the shields
 * should use whom, and


 * Poe finds an opening in the thermal oscillator and enters, while a following TIE crashed
 * should use crashes.

...unless Manual of Style means this whole article needs to be rewritten in past tense? But then it would conflict with the present tense of the Opening crawl...

In Star Wars: Episode VII The Force Awakens, descision should be decision.

When i tried to preview this post, i needed to edit it some more, but when i tried to resume editing, i had no scroll bar to get to the part of the page where i could edit it. This has happened at least three times in a row.

Thank you for your attention to these matters.

--71.121.143.180 20:18, December 15, 2017 (UTC)