Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Chief gunnery officer


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Chief gunnery officer

 * Nominated by: Darth Morrt 01:47, November 5, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: A very underused rank from the ANH novel.

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1)  OLIOSTER  (talk) 11:31, November 8, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) ~ SavageBob 16:08, November 9, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 02:44, November 10, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Is that much detail on Hija really warranted? I can't imagine an article on Admiral going into all of Ackbar's actions in any appearance he's ever had, since that would be unwieldy. ~ SavageBob 16:30, November 8, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) *I just thought to fill the space beside the image. If I would expand the list of Admirals, I wouldn't add much more info even for Ackbar. Shoud I shorten Hija's section to 2-3 sentence? Darth Morrt 17:00, November 8, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) **I'd reduce it if it were me, but I guess it's OK as is. Carry on, sir! ~ SavageBob 16:08, November 9, 2010 (UTC)

Comments
 * Hija's section is the intro of his page. Should I reword it?
 * Yeah, even if you just paraphrase, it needs to be distinctly different wording than that of another article. Darth Trayus ( Trayus Academy ) 07:29, November 5, 2010 (UTC)
 * Ok, rephrased. Darth Morrt 10:56, November 5, 2010 (UTC)