Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Senatorial arrests

Senatorial arrests

 * Nominated by:  Vitus Infinitus  Talk 04:32, February 22, 2018 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:A key moment in Palpatine's grab for power

Support

 * 1) I expect you to create the Legends version at some point. -  AV-6R7  Crew Pit 06:29, March 2, 2018 (UTC)
 * 2) &mdash;' Tommy-Macaroni ' Imperial Emblem.svg ( TAKE A SEAT ) 08:12, March 2, 2018 (UTC)
 * 3) Nice work! TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders.svg  AnilSerifoglu  (talk) 21:46, March 2, 2018 (UTC)
 * 4) --Lewisr (talk) 02:12, March 4, 2018 (UTC)

Tommy

 * I'd definitely like to see some background on Imperial Intelligence. &mdash;' Tommy-Macaroni ' Imperial Emblem.svg ( TAKE A SEAT ) 19:30, February 22, 2018 (UTC)
 * Done-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 21:31, February 22, 2018 (UTC)
 * Theta-class shuttle can't be sourced to TRF. &mdash;' Tommy-Macaroni ' Imperial Emblem.svg ( TAKE A SEAT ) 19:30, February 22, 2018 (UTC)
 * Fixed-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 21:31, February 22, 2018 (UTC)
 * "Before press time, a partial list of those arrested was released, revealing that senators Shea Sadashassa&hellip;and Tanner Cadaman of Feenix were several of those arrested." This needs to be rephrased, as "arrested" is repeated too much. &mdash;' Tommy-Macaroni ' Imperial Emblem.svg ( TAKE A SEAT ) 19:30, February 22, 2018 (UTC)
 * Fixed-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 21:31, February 22, 2018 (UTC)
 * You shouldn't have a full date ref in the BTS, as Tope said well here. Just because it's an unnecessary ref when just the year, title and author name can all be self-sourced. &mdash;' Tommy-Macaroni ' Imperial Emblem.svg ( TAKE A SEAT ) 19:30, February 22, 2018 (UTC)
 * Self sourced as in also using Star Wars: The Rebel Files instead of twitter?-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 21:31, February 22, 2018 (UTC)
 * Yes.&mdash;' Tommy-Macaroni ' Imperial Emblem.svg ( TAKE A SEAT ) 22:03, February 22, 2018 (UTC)
 * Done-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 22:07, February 22, 2018 (UTC)
 * And agin for Republic HoloNet News Special Inaugural Edition 16:5:241.&mdash;' Tommy-Macaroni ' Imperial Emblem.svg ( TAKE A SEAT ) 07:22, February 23, 2018 (UTC)
 * Fixed-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 15:22, February 23, 2018 (UTC)
 * Should "Files," when referring to the Rebel Files, be capitalised? &mdash;' Tommy-Macaroni ' Imperial Emblem.svg ( TAKE A SEAT ) 19:30, February 22, 2018 (UTC)
 * I believe that's the name of the documents, but if it's not supposed to be capitalized then I'll definitely change it.-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 21:31, February 22, 2018 (UTC)
 * That's fine then.&mdash;' Tommy-Macaroni ' Imperial Emblem.svg ( TAKE A SEAT ) 22:03, February 22, 2018 (UTC)

AV

 * I'd like to see it mentioned that those arrested were incarcerated in the Arrth-Eno Prison Complex. -  AV-6R7  Crew Pit 23:31, March 1, 2018 (UTC)
 * Added-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 23:46, March 1, 2018 (UTC)
 * You took care of my next objections before I could even make them; nice work! -  AV-6R7  Crew Pit 04:49, March 2, 2018 (UTC)
 * Thanks!-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 05:05, March 2, 2018 (UTC)
 * Is there any particular reason you've been captializing Senatorial? -  AV-6R7  Crew Pit 05:19, March 2, 2018 (UTC)
 * No, those were typos-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 05:57, March 2, 2018 (UTC)

Senatorial Anil

 * Archive.org has been lately unable to properly format archived versions of StarWars.com pages for some reason. For example, if you open up this article's link to the archive of the Darth Sidious Databank page, you'll see it ultimately just takes you to a blank white page that will never stop loading. For the most part, SW.com pages from early 2017 and before load fine, but any archive pages since the middle/end of 2017 to present will not work. So you need to find an archive.org capture that actually works, or save the page through WebCite. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders.svg  AnilSerifoglu  (talk) 12:14, March 2, 2018 (UTC)
 * I was able to use archive.is, link fixed!-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 15:56, March 2, 2018 (UTC)
 * Archive.is links work fine, but I find archive.org links much better, so I searched for working archive.org links and changed them if you don't mind :) TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders.svg  AnilSerifoglu  (talk) 21:46, March 2, 2018 (UTC)
 * I think it would be beneficial to have links for the Rebels Recon episode on The Siege of Lothal and the Bail Organa's Databank entry for people to directly access these sources in the references. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders.svg  AnilSerifoglu  (talk) 12:14, March 2, 2018 (UTC)
 * Like so?-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 15:57, March 2, 2018 (UTC)
 * This isn't mentioned in those sources so not sure including in the sources section works really --Lewisr (talk) 16:00, March 2, 2018 (UTC)
 * What I meant was to put the link instead of saying "the Rebels Recon episode on Star Wars Rebels: The Siege of Lothal," but I phrased it terribly. I have changed that for you, since you have already taken care of the others. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders.svg  AnilSerifoglu  (talk) 21:46, March 2, 2018 (UTC)
 * Thanks!-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 01:00, March 3, 2018 (UTC)

Lewisr

 * Can Palpatine's full name be sourced to the rebel files?
 * Properly sourced-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 01:03, March 3, 2018 (UTC)
 * There's a red link that needs creating in the aftermath section --Lewisr (talk) 00:58, March 3, 2018 (UTC)
 * That's odd, the link works-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 01:00, March 3, 2018 (UTC)
 * Strange! --Lewisr (talk) 01:01, March 3, 2018 (UTC)
 * I'm not sure how relevant the section starting with 'Decades after the end of the Galactic Civil War' is to the senatorial arrests --Lewisr (talk) 01:30, March 3, 2018 (UTC)
 * Made it a bit more relevant, but let me know if you think it's better to remove the GCW instead-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 01:41, March 3, 2018 (UTC)
 * Still not really sure how relevant to the actual event it is. It might be better to take it out and add some context as to what the rebel files are instead, you say Mon Mothma noted in the rebel files but you don't really say what the rebel files are --Lewisr (talk) 01:46, March 3, 2018 (UTC)
 * How is it now?-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 01:52, March 3, 2018 (UTC)
 * I removed the part but it looks fine to me now --Lewisr (talk) 02:00, March 3, 2018 (UTC)
 * Looks good to me as well, thanks!-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 02:01, March 3, 2018 (UTC)

Fred strikes back

 * The ref notes need to not use "we" in them. "We" don't say or do anything in our articles. It's best to use "It can be deduced..."
 * Oops, fixed!-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 22:06, March 28, 2018 (UTC)
 * I don't have the source, but does the HoloNet headline used as the main quote have a period at the end? It's kind of odd for a headline to have a period, so I'm just curious. MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg(Whatever) 21:59, March 28, 2018 (UTC)
 * Yeah doesn't have a period. How should I end the quote? With [sic]?-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 22:06, March 28, 2018 (UTC)
 * I would just have no punctuation before the quotation mark. MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg(Whatever) 19:43, March 29, 2018 (UTC)
 * Done-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 21:29, March 29, 2018 (UTC)

Imperatorial arrests

 * Ref 2 doesn't mention how the arrests are connected to the Proclamation of the New Order.
 * Fixed-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 13:09, March 29, 2018 (UTC)
 * For all we know, the duel on Mustafar could have been concurrent to the arrests. All we know it happened no later than 2 days AFE while the arrests happened no earlier than 1 day AFE.  Imperators II (Talk) 10:56, March 29, 2018 (UTC)
 * Fixed ref note-- Vitus Infinitus  Talk 13:09, March 29, 2018 (UTC)