Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Mission to Rodia


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Mission to Rodia

 * Nominated by:  CC7567  (talk) 22:20, 29 June 2009 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Part one of Capture of the Wealthworm. (Not a CloneProject, cuz this time there are others involved. :P) But by far, not my favorite when there's so much more interesting stuff out there.

(5 Inqs/1 Users/6 Total)
Support
 * 1)  JangFett  Talk 15:04, 13 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) Green Tentacle (Talk) 21:38, 21 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) One of the few episodes I've seen.  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  13:33, September 20, 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) CC's articles are too good to sit on the page this long. Toprawa and Ralltiir 19:40, October 6, 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) &mdash;  Fiolli  {Alpheridies University ComNet} 22:22, October 11, 2009 (UTC)
 * 6) --  Darth Culator  (Talk) 20:54, October 12, 2009 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Redlink in the intro.  Darth Trayus  Sith_Emblem.svg ( Trayus Academy ) 08:49, 24 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) *Ugh. Taken care of.  CC7567  (talk) 01:39, 25 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) Fett
 * 4) * "Binks discovered the Jedi robe belonging to the Jedi Knight Anakin Skywalker, Amidala's secret husband, in a chamber of the yacht." While it was Anakin's cloak, It wasn't mentioned in "Bombad Jedi". Possibly reword to say "a Jedi Robe, that belonged to Anakin Skywalker".
 * 5) **It was defined in the Decoded episode, hence why it is referenced as so. I see no reason for rewording.  CC7567  (talk) 07:36, 13 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 6) ***Oh okay, the latter is sourced to just "Bomdbad Jedi" rather than the decoded episode.
 * 7) * I see some minor pbp within the paragraphs of The "Bombad Jedi" section.
 * 8) **Addressed.  CC7567  (talk) 07:36, 13 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 9) *Excellent work CC. I do like the section title The "Bombad Jedi" :P  JangFett  Talk 03:46, 13 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 10) From the Chron-O-John of Green Tentacle:
 * 11) * "Binks, however, discovered that he was standing on a Kwazel Maw&hellip;" Did he land on it? If so, "discovered that he had landed on" would follow on better from him falling into the water.
 * 12) * "Back in the detention tower, Amidala tricked her battle droid guards into believing that the Jedi was rescuing her." The Jedi? Is that supposed to be Binks (she doesn't learn he's been mistaken for a Jedi until the next paragraph) or was she just making one up? Green Tentacle (Talk) 23:00, 19 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 13) **Both addressed; hopefully the second one has been clarified. Thanks for the review.  CC7567  (talk) 07:45, 21 August 2009 (UTC)

Comments
 * Check the BTS of the Bombad Jedi. The fact that Quinlan Vos was at some point going to present during those events should be mentioned in BTS.  Mauser  Comlink 23:10, 29 June 2009 (UTC)
 * Bah...forgot that. Addressed.  CC7567  (talk) 00:06, 30 June 2009 (UTC)
 * I'm not striking it since it wasn't a formal objection to begin with. :)  Mauser  Comlink 00:28, 30 June 2009 (UTC)