Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations



This page is for the nomination of "comprehensive articles". For a list of "comprehensive articles", see Category:Wookieepedia comprehensive articles.


 * Comprehensive article nominations history
 * Comprehensive article nominations archiving checklist

What is a "comprehensive article?"

A "comprehensive article" is an article that contains all information regarding the topic. Often, "comprehensive articles" cannot reach Featured or Good Article status due to their limited content. This process is intended to recognize articles that contain all relevant canon information, yet are still under the 250 word limit required for a Good Article. The purpose of this is twofold&mdash;firstly, to help users distinguish what is a stub, and what is merely a short article with no further relevant material to be added, and, more importantly, to highlight for the reader when they are reading something that has been judged definitely "comprehensive"&mdash;that is, a guarantee to the reader that whatever they are reading contains the sum total of all available content.

Nominations and promotions of the Comprehensive article process are overseen by a collective of users known as the "EduCorps," which is made up of the Inquisitorius, the AgriCorps, and various other experienced users who are considered qualified to adequately judge the nominated material.

Lucasfilm Ltd. and its many licensees continue to expand the Star Wars universe. Since new information might become available, it may be necessary to revoke a "comprehensive article's" status. A forum will be used to nominate articles that have fallen out-of-date. Members of the EduCorps will then post a warning template on that page, and a grace period of one week will be instituted in which the article can be improved. If there is a significant amount of new information, it is likely that once updated, the article will become eligible for Good article status, and thereby ineligible for Comprehensive article status.

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An article must&hellip;


 * 1) &hellip;be well-written and detailed.
 * 2) &hellip;be unbiased, non-point of view.
 * 3) &hellip;be sourced with all available sources and appearances.
 * 4) &hellip;follow the Manual of Style, Layout Guide, and all other policies on Wookieepedia. This is, of course, within reason. If a topic only has a very limited degree of content that cannot be divided up into the relevant article sections, it is not required that it follow the Layout Guide precisely. This is to be judged on a case-by-case basis.
 * 5) &hellip;following the review process, be stable, i.e., does not change significantly from day to day and is not the subject of ongoing edit wars. This does not apply to vandalism and protection or semi-protection as a result of vandalism.
 * 6) &hellip;not be tagged with any sort of improvement tags (i.e. more sources, expand, etc).
 * 7) &hellip;have no redlinks.
 * 8) &hellip;have all relevant canon information presented.
 * 9) &hellip;be completely referenced for all available material and sources. See Sourcing for more information. While this is not required for an article possessing a singular source, it is encouraged, as it provides both uniformity and a good infrastructure should the topic be referenced in any future materials.
 * 10) &hellip;have all quotes and images sourced.
 * 11) &hellip;provide at least one relevant quote on the article if available.
 * 12) &hellip;include a "Behind the scenes" section for in-universe articles.
 * 13) &hellip;counting the introduction, the article body, and "Behind the scenes" material, must not exceed 250 words in length (not including captions, quotes, or headers, etc). Any articles exceeding the limit should be taken to the Good article nominations page for consideration.
 * 14) &hellip;if the nominated article reaches 200 words or greater, the nominator must either provide an intro or draft an intro and provide a link to the revision in the nomination, showing that the intro does not elevate the article over 250 words. Exceptions can be made for articles wherein the majority of the text is in the "Behind the scenes" section.

How to nominate:


 * 1) First, nominate an article you find is worthy of comprehensive status, putting it at the bottom of the list below. Nominated articles must meet all thirteen requirements stated above.
 * 2) Add CAnom at the top of the article you are nominating.
 * 3) Be sure to place sign in the "Nominated by" line when the nomination is posted for voting.
 * 4) Others will object to the nomination if they disagree that the article is good enough; they will then supply reasons for doing so, and ways to improve the article in accordance with the established rules.
 * 5) Nominators and supporters will adjust the article until the objectors (with reasonable objections) are satisfied. Objectors may also make alterations&mdash;if there is any reason for contention on a given point, it should be settled in a civil manner in the nomination field itself.
 * 6) Users may not vote on their own articles.
 * 7) There is no limit to the amount of nominations a given user can submit at any given time.

How to vote:


 * 1) Before doing anything, be sure to read the article completely, keeping a sharp eye out for mistakes.
 * 2) Afterward, compare the article to the criteria listed above, and then either support or object the article's nomination.
 * 3) *If you object, please supply concrete reasons for doing so, and how it can be improved.
 * 4) As stated above, any objections will be looked upon by the nominator, supporters, and anyone willing to improve the article, and action will be taken to please the objectors. Do not strike other users' objections; it is up to the objector to review the changes and strike if they are satisfied.
 * 5) There are several ways in which an article can receive the required number of votes. Within a 48-hour period of nomination, only EduCorps votes will count towards the total, although anyone may choose to vote in that window. If two members of the EduCorps support a nomination in that window, and there are no outstanding objections, the article can be considered a "Comprehensive article" and be tagged with the template 48 hours after the initial nomination.  The talk page will also be tagged with the CA template. When the 48 hours are up, any user's votes will contribute towards the total. If one EduCorps member has voted for an article after a week, three regular votes will be required. After the 48 hour period, an article can still also pass with just two EduCorps votes.
 * 6) Once a nomination is successful, it will be placed on the Comprehensive article list. Instructions on how to archive nominations, successful or otherwise, can be found here. Anyone can archive a nomination&mdash;just make sure it has the correct number of votes, has been nominated for at least a week (or 48 hours if there are two EC votes), and that there are absolutely no outstanding objections. If you are not sure how to do this, just ask, and someone will likely be more than willing to help you. Also, if you think you can slip one past us, think again&mdash;someone is always watching you.

All nominations will be considered idle and are subject to instantaneous removal by EduCorps members if objections are not addressed, or at least not answered, after a period of 1 week.

Please remember to archive your nomination beforehand if you plan on taking it to the Good Article Nominations page.

Battle of Slotern

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:45, August 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:I'm so sorry Lieutenant Blair.

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) SinisterSamurai 15:36, August 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  20:43, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) SinSam
 * 2) * This should link to either Slotern or Slotern system. Systems on the essential atlas (and companion) chart are named for their most famous feature. And Slotern system was added to the Online companion after comments re: battle of slotern in TFUII were made on the blog of Daniel Wallace. SinisterSamurai 02:07, August 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Done. I added the Slotern system and didn't create a Slotern since we don't know anything about it. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:57, August 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) Exiled Jedi
 * 5) * I think that you can say that it occured in the Rise of the Empire era. See my reasoning in the Blair nomination. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:58, August 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) **Done. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:12, August 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) ***You still need to mention the era in the body of the article.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  02:17, August 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) ****Done. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 20:40, August 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) Imperators II
 * 10) * The dates have to be sourced.  Imperators II (Talk) 12:16, August 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) **They have been. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:38, August 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 12) *** Now "during the height of the Galactic Empire" is unsourced (same as your other battle nom).  Imperators II (Talk) 19:12, August 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 13) ****Try that then. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:32, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Comments
 * I'm not going to strike my support, but you should mention the era in the article body. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:39, October 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * Took care of it.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:59, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Unidentified wingman

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:21, August 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Doing ya one better EJ.

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) Good work.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  20:40, August 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Excellent. Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 16:22, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * Please do the appearances section like you did in the Battle of Slotern article.
 * 3) **Got it.
 * 4) * Again I think you can say the era was Rise of the Empire.
 * 5) **Done.
 * 6) ***Please mention the era in the body of the article.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  02:21, August 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) ****Done. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 20:35, August 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) * In Blair's article you call them TIE starfighters, however, in this nomination and the Battle of Slotern nomination you call them TIE figters and link them to TIE series. Which is correct? -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  17:03, August 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) **All set. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:15, August 14, 2011 (UTC)


 * 1) Objection! Sustained!
 * 2) * I would prefer it if you added in the BTS that this wingman only appears in the databank, and not the actual game itself. Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 15:09, August 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Got it. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:45, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Comments
 * Again, please mention the era in the body of the article.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:40, October 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * Got this one, too.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:11, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Battle of Corrdair

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:29, August 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Well, I had to write it in order to CAnom Limm Nix. It's a good thing that there is no limit on CAnoms.

(1 ECs/0 Users/1 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  15:56, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * The quote doesn't seem to fit very well, it doesn't even mention the battle. Are there any other quotes?
 * 3) **The whole reason that the battle was mentioned in the databank was to give place to Limm Nix, so the battle is mentioned once in a two sentence databank entry. So, that's about the best that I can do.
 * 4) * "The Empire sent All Terrain Missile Platforms to attack the Alliance, including Major Limm Nix." makes it sound like Nix is a AT-MP. Please reword. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  12:16, August 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) **Heh, fixed. Thanks for the review EJ. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:35, August 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) Imperators II
 * 7) * "during the height of the Galactic Empire" has to be sourced.  Imperators II (Talk) 12:18, August 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) **Thanks for looking it over, but it is sourced. Someone really seriously messed this article up while I was sleeping, so you might have seen that result. But, take a look at it now. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:35, August 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) *** Uh, no, the statement is not sourced. It only has a note explaining the applicability of an OOU publishing era.  Imperators II (Talk) 19:09, August 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) ****Take a look now. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:25, August 16, 2011 (UTC)


 * 1) SinSam
 * 2) * Corrdair should be linked (Or Corrdair system). Comments on Dan Wallace's blog give me reason to believe that the next Atlas companion update will include Corrdair (and Polomie). SinisterSamurai 20:27, August 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **I don't know if that'd be wise. We don't know anything about Corrdair. For all we know it might be a city. So I think we should leave it blank until it is verified. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:39, August 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) *** Then it'll have to link to a stub, or just be a redlink. SinisterSamurai 00:35, August 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) ****Done. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:57, August 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) *****Welcome to hyper-inclusionism. :) SinisterSamurai 15:42, August 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) ******That's for me. :P Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:46, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Comments
 * Please mention the era in the body of the article.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:41, October 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * Done.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:12, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Nix

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 16:39, August 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Different Nix than my other CAnom.

(1 ECs/0 Users/1 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  19:25, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * Just a quick question: Was it not confirmed that he was killed by Terror Troopers? -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  13:28, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Yup. Fixed. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:32, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) * See my objection on the captain's nom. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  15:59, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) **Phew, I think I got them all. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 19:08, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Pend

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:07, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:I wrote this article so I could CAnom Band Light, but since I got this one done first, I'll nom this one first.

(1 ECs/0 Users/1 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  19:24, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * In the other articles you mention that he was searching for smuggled goods, please mention that here. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  13:26, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Alrighty. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:34, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) * See my objection on the captain's nom. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  15:58, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) **Done. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 19:07, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Red (Band Light)

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:31, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:And next on Blood, Gore, and Other Unfortunate Mishaps:Red, the man whose name matches his looks.

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)
Support
 * 1) Just a few minor problems that I fixed, good work.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  13:12, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * I need to pay better attention.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  13:23, August 17, 2011 (UTC)


 * 1) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 00:39, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Could you mention that the corridor he was killed in was near life support? -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  13:23, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *Done. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:36, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) See my objection on the captain's nomination. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  15:57, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) *Done. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 19:06, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) Does it say in the databank that he was eviscerated? Being impaled by a pipe doesn't remove your entrails unless canon says so.  NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 23:04, October 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) *Actually, it does say that he was eviscerated.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:30, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Band Light

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:42, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Finally doing the nom I was building up to.

(1 ECs/0 Users/1 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  19:21, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 18:24, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Exiled Jedi
 * 2) * Does it say that the ship has a crew of four, or does it just mention four people on the ship and not mention whether there were more crew members or not? If it is the former, please say "At least four" in the infobox. Either way mention the crew in the main article. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  13:06, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **"Good catch" as you say. :p Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:39, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) * See my objection about the era in the nomination for the captain. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  15:56, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) **Done. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 19:05, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) Rubedo
 * 7) * Could you explicitly say that Red, Pend, and Nex were crewmembers in the prose? Right now it reads like the former two have no context. A list after saying "at least four" would suffice. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 19:11, September 29, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) **Fixed.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:50, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Comments
 * You forgot the era tag.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:43, October 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * Got it.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:16, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Unidentified captain of the Band Light

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:58, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:There should be a captain in there somewhere.

(1 ECs/0 Users/1 Total)
Support
 * 1)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  13:00, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * I missed something.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  13:20, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) You refer to the captain as "he" once. Is this a mistake or was the captain a male?-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  13:20, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *Yea, I did it out of force of habit. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:42, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) For all of the Force Unleashed II databank nominations, please mention that article's subject occured during the reign of the Galactic Empire. (Notice that this could place the articles in any era that has the Galactic Empire satisfying those who say that it is not confirmed to be in the Rise of the Empire era, and it also narrows down when the article's subject lived. What do you think of this idea?) -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  15:52, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * OK, I think I got them all. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 19:05, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) ** You missed the Unidentified wingman and Limm Nix. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  19:18, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) ***My apologies, you just forgot to remove the era tags. I took care of them for you, good work.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  19:30, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) ****Thanks. You might want to remove the strike on your vote now though. :) Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 19:39, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) *****Heh, sorry about that.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  21:45, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Comments
 * For consistency's sake, please check all of your nominations coming from the Force Unleashed II databank and remove the Rise of the Empire era from them. I have reconsiderd my reasoning and now think that it is not certain that the databank entries have to be from the Rise of the Empire era. Sorry for the confusion.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  13:00, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * It would be a good idea to say that it was during the time of the Galactic Empire, because that narrows it down a bit, though it still does not say an exact era.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  13:16, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Unidentified balding Human (Chalmun's Spaceport Cantina)

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 02:06, September 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:...and really bad Doctors. Drink up me hearties, YO-HO!!

(1 ECs/2 Users/3 Total)
Support
 * 1) To the sum of my knowledge, though I don't know about this man's adaptation appearances, however I see Menkooroo will help you out on those. Hanzo Hasashi 18:17, September 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) I would have gone with "Unidentified Human with cup," but that's just me. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 03:10, September 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Just a couple of minor tweaks.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  22:59, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) If it's his table that Evazan throws Luke into, chances are good he's in some of A New Hope adaptations (comic, special edition comic, photocomic, manga, etc). As tedious as it seems, any film character --- whether protagonist or random background extra --- requires a check through said adaptations, even if just to yield several  appearances. I can help ya out with these guys on that front. Menkooroo 02:48, September 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *I have the comic, but I might need some help with the others. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 03:19, September 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Well, he isn't in the this comic. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:23, September 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Cool tools. I have scans of a bunch of the other comics on my external hard drive, so I'll be able to check 'em for you tomorrow when I get home from work. Menkooroo 15:49, September 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) ****Great, thanks. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 16:02, September 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) *****Thanks for the patience. I couldn't find him in anything, but I found the Rodians in a few. Menkooroo 03:46, September 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) ******Thanks you! I appreciate your help. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 03:55, September 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) *******Did you happen to see the above nom in anything? Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 03:59, September 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) ********I'll check through some ROTJ adaptations today. I sincerely doubt if he's in any of 'em, but I'll look. Menkooroo 04:13, September 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) *********Actually, I'll need you to tell me where to look. Where in the Palace, and on the Sail barge, is he standing? Menkooroo 09:18, September 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) **********In Jabba's Palace, he's standing in the background when Luke is standing before Jabba and 3PO is talking about the Sarlacc. He's just standing in the background of the Sail Barge next to a type of window. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 23:06, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Comments
 * I would agree with Menkooroo's objection with all of these obscure characters you've done. Also, for the ANH characters, is sourcing 0 BBY really necessary, considering it happened the year of the Battle of Yavin? Not making that an objection though. Hanzo Hasashi 12:53, September 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * I agree with what you said about the ANH sourcing, and originally I had it sourced to the movie. But I had several users that disagreed, so I switched it. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:03, September 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * I'm going to edit to just source the date to the film too. I'll leave the RotJ nom as is though. Hanzo Hasashi 18:17, September 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * Okey-Dokey. Thanks. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 12:57, September 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * You can't really source dates to the films because there are not dates ever mentioned in the films. ~ Savage BOB sig.png 12:21, September 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * I don't see why not. We source it 0 BBY (Battle of Yavin), and we know that the Battle of Yavin happened in the movie, so common sense would say that it would be 0 BBY. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 02:57, September 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * I explained to you why not and you said you saw how it worked. We can't go by common sense, and I know that's phrased terribly. We know that KOTOR takews place in 3,946 BBy, yet we source it to the KOTORCG because the year is never mentioned in the source. Episode IV doesn't get a pass on that rule just because it's the epoch. That it's the epoch of any timeline would have to be sourced to something ese because the BBY system was established in 25 ABY. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 19:33, September 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * I know that you explained it to me, and I still don't really have a problem with doing it like this. But then where do we draw the line on common sense? The new CT that just passed about the BTS was pretty much all about common sense, and if we can use common sense for that, why not for the years? Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 23:34, September 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * Too many quality articles about movie characters, events, droids, vehicles/ships, etc. have just flat out sourced the year to the movie as well. Also a similar debate is sourcing the names of other characters or whatnot not named in the films; some people in their quality articles have reffed it to the source naming them; others just the movie itself. Hanzo Hasashi 00:48, September 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * An example of my previous point, some people would also source Evazan's name to something. IMHO it is fine as is though. Hanzo Hasashi 00:51, September 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * I think that I would have a bigger problem if it was something from ROTJ, since it doesn't flat out say "Blah-blah years after Episode IV". But this is the movie where the Battle of Yavin happened. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:53, September 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * You do make a good point. However, I found that there are no official rules against not properly sourcing a date regardless of movie. Nonetheless in the future if I ever get objections about year sourcing for a film article I will source to something, probably The New Essential Chronology. Hanzo Hasashi 01:00, September 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * A note on Evazan: any article that sources his name to the movie is actually in the wrong. It's not even an issue of common sense. He isn't given a name in the movie. Those need to be fixed and sourced to something else. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 21:14, September 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * What do you think we should reference Evazan to then? Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:02, September 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * As with any fact, just to any source that identifies him by that name. The Official Star Wars Fact File 51 or Star Wars Character Encyclopedia for example. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 00:42, September 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * Naru: That's not actually how we do things at all. Simply refer to... well, overwhelming precedent. Cal: Ref [3] is pretty erroneous, and is actually something I would object to. See here for some more discussion on it. Menkooroo 03:46, September 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * Wait, so I'm lost. :P What is the final verdict here. It seems like it's been switched ten times! :P Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 03:55, September 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * Just some food for thought: If some Legacy character is lurking in the background of a comic, such as Oron Jaeger in Issue 23, an article can mention that he was there without sourcing his name to another comic. Conan Antonio Motti mentions Cassio Tagge without referencing something other than A New Hope, and that's just one of many similar ANH-based status articles that do something similar. I firmly believe that it's best to keep sourcing as simple (yet still accurate) as possible, and the current ref [3] just seems erroneous. Menkooroo 04:10, September 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * Sooo, bottom line is to source it to ANH again? Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 04:15, September 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * I'll fold on the name cite. Sorry for the confusion. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 04:48, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Tedonian wine

 * Nominated by: Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:15, September 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Continuing with the Get-all-my-created-articles-to-status project.

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Support
 * 1) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 04:42, September 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) I have Tedonian wine with my nerf-steak thank you...-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  23:12, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Object Comments
 * 1) Rubedo
 * 2) * "be as careful with the shipments of Tedonian wine as Tohrm was." Rephrase this. It's word-for-word.
 * 3) **Try that then.
 * 4) ***It's still pretty much the phrase. You should give Tohrm context as their comrade, rather than providing his species. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 03:24, September 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) ****Try that.
 * 6) *****I changed it a touch more. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 04:42, September 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) * I think the mention of the Tedonia system should be relegated to a BTS note a la the previous food articles. Unless she says it comes from there, in which case it needs to be entioned in the body.
 * 8) **See how that looks.
 * 9) ***I meant saying something to the effect of that there is canonically a system called Tedonia but that Allies does not explicitly say that the wine originated from there. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 03:24, September 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) ****See how that works then. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 04:12, September 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) * Tohrm should be given context on his first mention, which could be fixed with my first objection.
 * 12) **Check it out.
 * 13) *This is just a question. So Ackmena was in an anti-slavery organization when she was one hundred years old? ?.? NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 02:38, September 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 14) **When one hundred years old you reach, look as good you will not. Hmm?? Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 02:44, September 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 15) ***The writers officially need to be told to remember scale. People shouldn't be having kids at 70. It's just ridiculous. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 03:24, September 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 16) Exiled Jedi
 * 17) *Do we know for sure that this was a real kind of wine? -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  22:50, September 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * 18) **I think that it can be safely assumed. Since the Flight people were trying to keep the conversation inconspicuous, I think that they would use the name of a real wine. Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 23:00, September 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * 19) ***Good point.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  23:12, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Unidentified Twi'lek female (Upper City)

 * Nominated by:  OLIOSTER  (talk) 02:08, October 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Short and simple

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 * 1) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 16:31, October 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Hooray for "Unidentified"s!!-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 00:23, October 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:45, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

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 * Anyone think it would be safe to assume she died in the bombardment?  OLIOSTER  (talk) 02:23, October 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * If Calo Nord survived the bombardment, then other people could have survived as well. Saying that someone died in the bombardment would be speculation.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  11:29, October 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * Ya, we can't say that. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 16:31, October 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * That's what I thought but wanted other opinions.  OLIOSTER  (talk) 21:04, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Battle of Nouane

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 17:05, October 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: What do you mean this wasn't part of Mandalorian Triumph?

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Support
 * 1) -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:14, October 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  16:46, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * In the BTS you say that the battle was mentioned in TEA. If that's true, then the Mo template needs to be added to the "Sources" section. -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:27, October 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * should never be used in the "Sources" section. Sources are, by definition, . Menkooroo 15:41, October 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * Menk is right. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 15:56, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

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Jinsol

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 17:22, October 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: And this isn't even a battle! What's going on?

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Support
 * 1) -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:15, October 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Portaak leaf?-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  16:48, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

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 * Again, the 1stm and 1st templates need to be used for the novel and TCSWE respectively. -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:31, October 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * Not . If something is in an "Appearance" prior to a "Source," then its appearance is its first mention and its first appearance. only applies if the subject has never "appeared" before. Menkooroo 15:43, October 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * It did not actually appear in Shatterpoint. I forgot the template. Fixed. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 15:56, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

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Unidentified Ithorian male (Upper City)

 * Nominated by:  OLIOSTER  (talk) 01:18, October 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: A shameless copy

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Support
 * 1) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 15:53, October 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:17, October 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  02:10, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Object Comments
 * 1) As much as I personally dislike it, because I still see it as impractical, we aren't allowed to carbon copy articles for status anymore. You have to change up the wording in this one so it's not so similar to the Twi'lek. The BTS is exempt from this.  NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 02:55, October 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *Are those superficial wording changes I made good enough? :P  OLIOSTER  (talk) 02:03, October 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) **Honestly... no. Make more than a superficial effort. You can get the same info across by using completely different sentences. Menkooroo 05:34, October 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) ***Is that better?  OLIOSTER  (talk) 05:48, October 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) ****The article looks good to me, but I don't see why the BTS section should be exempt. IMO, like Menk said, you can get the same idea across by using different words and sentences. Thoughts?-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 15:08, October 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) *****The BTS generally comes down to one sentence of limited breadth and wracking your mind trying to reword this when most articles on this page follow a structure anyway ("It appeared in this book written by this person") would be unnecessarily tedious, eventually culminating in wordiness we don't need. For the courtesy of rewording whole articles that could otherwise be the same, it's a small exchange to allow the BTS to remain constant. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 15:50, October 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) ******That's fine by me, then. It makes it easier for me. ;) -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 20:59, October 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) More of a question I suppose: does this edit make the year the subject of the sentence? I mean, making the first sentence be POV of the year, not the Ithorian. –Tm_T (Talk) 06:45, October 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) *Better?  OLIOSTER  (talk) 07:36, October 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) **Better in terms of POV yes. It's choppy sentence (or two) now, though. –Tm_T (Talk) 07:55, October 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * 11) ***All one sentence now.  OLIOSTER  (talk) 08:10, October 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * 12) For this article and your Twi'lek nom, please mention their lack of hair in the infobox and the body. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  16:51, October 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * 13) *Why?  OLIOSTER  (talk) 18:10, October 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * 14) **Yeah, I guess it really isn't necessary, sorry about that.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  02:10, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Cioral

 * Nominated by: MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg(Whatever) 13:04, October 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Number 3!

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Support
 * 1) TEA incoming!!!-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:06, October 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Menkooroo 12:52, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

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 * You have two sources, so one of them has to be tagged for what came first. The same for your other TEA noms. -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 13:04, October 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * Should I use 1st or 1stm or what? MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg(Whatever) 13:10, October 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * If I understand the LG correctly, according to this "If (First appearance) has not been used by this point, then the first actual appearance would get the 1st template."  then if the online companion came out first, that would receive a  and the Atlas would receive a .-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 13:21, October 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * I read the LG, but that's not how I got it. Since the Atlas is no a narrative, it should get the tag. The Companion shouldn't get anything except the  tag it already has.  MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg(Whatever) 13:25, October 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * I wasn't positive which way it meant. :P Let's go with that, then.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 13:31, October 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * I've added it to all my noms. MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg(Whatever) 13:43, October 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * Just to make sure that there's no confusion in the future: should never be used in the "Sources" section.  is only for "Appearances." Menkooroo 14:16, October 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * Alrighty, thanks Menk.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:28, October 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) Whoa!
 * 2) * There's something unsourced in the infobox! Ahhhh!
 * 3) **omg!!! I fixed it. We're saved!!
 * 4) * Every sentence in the body begins with "It was" or "Cioral was." How about some variety? Menkooroo 04:27, October 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) **Haha Yeah, it should be varied a little now. MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg(Whatever) 14:07, October 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) *Thanks for the review. :) MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg(Whatever) 14:07, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

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Copero

 * Nominated by: MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg(Whatever) 13:25, October 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Number 4.

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Support
 * 1) -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:08, October 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Menkooroo 12:52, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Yo!
 * 2) * Same "it was," "the planet was" objection as above, aaaand...
 * 3) **Fixed.
 * 4) * How about an article for the Copero shipyards? We have plenty of other shipyard articles. Also, is it a conjectural title, or is "Copero shipyard" named in the source? If that's the official name, I'd like to see it explicitly named in the article body. Menkooroo 04:30, October 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) **Article created. The name is conjectural. And Cal, why you missing all dis?! :P MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg(Whatever) 14:58, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Comments
 * I've got a question about sourcing the online guide. Is it required, or is sourcing the Atlas enough? MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg(Whatever) 13:25, October 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * Since it's its own separate source, I believe that it should receive a listing also.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 13:35, October 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * Is there a set way to source it? Say, a template? MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg(Whatever) 13:38, October 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * It was cited like this Star Wars: The Essential Atlas Online Companion on The Essential Atlas page. You might want to check around a little more first, though. I thought I saw it cited as a template once, but that might have been something else.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 14:23, October 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * I believe I've seen SWArchive used, and it's the only applicable template on Template messages/Sources of articles, so I added it to all my CANs. MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg(Whatever) 15:39, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Cormit

 * Nominated by: MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg(Whatever) 13:38, October 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Number 5...

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Support Object
 * 1) "And Fred will be having fun, fun, fun 'til Chee takes the TEA away...."-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:10, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

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Z

 * Nominated by: NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 16:14, October 4, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Don't act so shocked. A|You knew this was coming.

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Support
 * 1) Two down. Twenty-four to go.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 13:10, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

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Csaus

 * Nominated by: MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg(Whatever) 14:02, October 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Number 6...

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 * 1) -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:12, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

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Jamiron

 * Nominated by: MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg(Whatever) 14:12, October 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Number 7...

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Support
 * 1) Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 00:30, October 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:20, October 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3) Menkooroo 05:06, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Jeffers
 * 2) * Never link to Wikipedia articles in In-Universe prose. If the Wookieepedia articles doesn't exist, you can create it.
 * 3) **Ah, I did not know this.
 * 4) **OK, I created the article. MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg<sup style="color:green">(Whatever) 15:53, October 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) * Is there an applicable picture from the Atlas? Menkooroo 14:19, October 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 6) **All these planets are on the same map, which I should finally be able to scan today. MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg<sup style="color:green">(Whatever) 15:21, October 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * 7) ***OK, I uploaded an image for each except Celwis. I'm waiting on JMAS for that one since I can't fit it on my scanner. MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg<sup style="color:green">(Whatever) 22:43, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Comments
 * 1) Added a bit to the infobox and fixed the links. Corellian PremierRobotech.jpg along the watchtower 00:30, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Limbala sector

 * Nominated by:  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  03:43, October 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Love Is a Warm Blaster!

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Support
 * 1) My blaster's so nice and warm...-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 13:08, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * In the Iinfobox you have the native species space filled in, but in the article, you just mention the senator that was from that region. Perhaps start out the article with something like "The Limbala sector was a sector in the galaxy that contained some members of the Turian species." Just something like that and it would also fix the rather short opening to the article.
 * Done.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:25, October 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * Any idea when the short story was supposed to be released? If so, you should add it to the BTS.
 * I forgot to do that, thanks for catching it.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  16:25, October 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * Otherwise, nice job.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 13:09, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Comments
 * I am not sure if my sourcing is adequate. Anyone have any tips for dealing with an article that is completely cut content?-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  03:43, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

HJ-377

 * Nominated by: -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 20:45, October 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:More from the insane asylum.

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Support
 * 1)  Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  02:13, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) I am pretty sure that unidentified gender is not a correct category for this guy. Did you mean to have Category:Individuals of unidentified species as a category instead? -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  22:42, October 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) *Yup. Got it.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 01:51, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

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Guybrush Threepkiller

 * Nominated by: -- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 22:36, October 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments:Monkey Island meets WP:VG.

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Support
 * 1) Looks good to me. MasterFred Commerce Guild.svg<sup style="color:green">(Whatever) 22:47, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Green Tentacle
 * 2) *This guy has to be worth a mention in BTS.
 * 3) **Done.
 * 4) *Per this screenshot, is he actually called "Threepwood" or "Threepkiller" in the game?
 * 5) **Moved.
 * 6) *"Guybrush Threepwood is the main character in the LucasArts Monkey Island video game, which was first released in 1990." Reads like there's only one game. The Secret of Monkey Island was the 1990 one.
 * 7) **Got it.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:15, October 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 8) *The Ron Gilbert fact can't be sourced to the film itself since he's not on the credits. Try or . Green Tentacle (Talk) 20:11, October 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 9) **And done.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:42, October 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * 10) The most interesting nom the CAN page has ever seen
 * 11) *"Behind the scenes" has good info but reads a bit like a series of disjointed facts strewn together into a paragraph. I'd like to see some reshuffling done (it should mention TFU II and the downloadable skin first before going into what the character was based off of), and some connecting words like "also" added throughout the rest of the bts in order to connect the various strings together. Take a shot at it! Menkooroo 15:57, October 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 12) **See how it looks now.-- Cal Jedi Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 18:41, October 14, 2011 (UTC)

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