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Denal
Hey, QGJ,

It seems that I need a name is unavailable for comment regarding this matter. I would suggest that you do as you've said, and remove the statement entirely. That will satisfy my objection for now, but if you do end up conferring with INAN at some point regarding a source for that statement, then feel free to readd it to the article. Hope this helps, and thanks for submitting articles for Featured status review. I've enjoyed what I've read of your work thus far. —Tommy  ( Nine two eight one ) 16:36, 1 April 2009 (UTC)
 * With regard to the same article, it seems to me that the three tasks that Denal completes on Rodia should all be part of the same mission/battle, rather than three separate articles. I say this because there seems to be continuity between all three tasks, without Denal and co leaving the planet. The Battle of Jabiim, for instance, takes the same approach, describing the various events that took place over a week as one battle. It will also mean there is one article of some length/substance, rather than multiple smaller ones. It could even be a GA. --Eyrezer 21:24, 1 April 2009 (UTC)

Empire at War
Hello. Judging by your recent uploads I see that you have the game at this moment. Could you please provide some of the images needed for the following articles? I understand that it is quite a lot to ask, but most of those articles have no images at all and I don't have the game at the moment. Even some of the images would be appreciated. Mauser 09:37, 2 April 2009 (UTC)
 * Polus - Screenshot of a planet from space
 * Fac A-333 (Imperial Advanced Factory)
 * Res-a Technology Center (Research Facility)
 * MilBar F-221 (Alliance Barracks)
 * Fac L-83 (Alliance Light Vehicle Factory)
 * Fac H-65 (Alliance Heavy Vehicle Factory)
 * Edu A-46 (Alliance Officer Academy)
 * Com C-52 (Alliance Command Center)
 * Edu I-73 (Infiltrator Training Facility)
 * Alliance Space Station - All 5 classes
 * SLD-14 shield generator
 * Communications array
 * XX-10 turbolaser tower - need a better screenshot
 * Automated repair droid (Vehicle Repair Station)
 * X2-a series sensor node
 * Field bacta tank (Bacta Healing Station)
 * Abandoned Heavy Factory
 * CMC-RP05 resource pad
 * Orbital long range scanner
 * Merchant space dock - need a better screenshot
 * Black Sun pirate asteroid base - need a better screenshot

Timothy Zahn
Guess what? Timothy Zahn is going to write a new book to be released in 2011. Here is a link to the article on Star Wars.com: "Timothy Zahn Returns with a New Novel". It sounds like it has ties to "Alliegance."  ZEM  talk to me!   21:09, 5 April 2009 (UTC)

Pre-birth

 * I'm in favor of a limited section on that. There isn't any major precedent in terms of FAs, AFAIK, but it would merit inclusion of sorts. The vision, yes, most of the rest, yes. The one thing I don't like is the speculation about the conception, but other than that, good job. Atarumaster88  Jedi_Order.svg ( Talk page ) 00:32, 6 April 2009 (UTC)

Trask Lucan
Hey QGJ. I saw that you had removed Lucan's RPG stats as being game mechanics and I was wondering where you had read that? I'm not doubting you or anything, I'm simply curious to know, since that may mean I would have to do some rewrites. Thanks. Cylka  -talk- 23:03, 6 April 2009 (UTC)
 * I looked over the information, and I'm not sure that you had to remove it. The way I have always understood the game mechanics is that you couldn't say so-and-so could deal x amount of damage with a sword or blaster. That Lucan was mechanical is vague enough, and I actually think that you should add back in that he was a pilot, since that is important. I also don't consider the gambling a problem either. You could even probably add in that he knew how to talk to people based on his bargaining and streetwise knowledge. The whole thing with the RPG stats is finding a way to include them, without saying "he had 3D DEX and 5D dodge." Instead, I would say, "his physical conditioning was such that often, he could avoid his enemies' blows" or somesuch. In my opinion, I think it was fine the way you had it. Cylka  -talk- 23:55, 7 April 2009 (UTC)

ZEM on YT
Hey QGJ, I wanted to tell you that I now have a YouTube account! I have made several Star Wars videos I thought you might like. Here is a link to my channel and my latest video: Channel: maddogmuttz New video: Attention Star Wars Fans - We need members!. Let me know how you like it. :)  ZEM  talk to me!   05:13, 16 April 2009 (UTC)
 * Thank you, glad you like it. :)  ZEM  talk to me!   14:13, 18 April 2009 (UTC)

Denal
Hi QuiGonJinn. I see you've put the wip tag backup on Denal. I presume it is in response to my objection on the FAN page re timing. If so, I encourage you to discuss it with other users, not just change to the way I suggested. Do you frequent the IRC channel at all? There should be some users there to talk it over. --Eyrezer 09:56, 19 April 2009 (UTC)
 * You don't actually need an account with IRC. Just use this link: http://irc.wikia.com/irc.cgi --Eyrezer 08:28, 20 April 2009 (UTC)
 * Hey QuiGon, are you still intending on working on the Unidentified pirate leader? It's been almsot 3 weeks with the wip template up and no activity. Can I remove the template? --Eyrezer 06:07, 21 April 2009 (UTC)
 * Cool. I periodically go through and remove the wip tag from articles that don't appear to be "in use". Re Denal, it sounds fair enough not to use the template. The non-bold words seem to fit Denal fine, but the bolded ones don't. Seeing as it's a subset of another objection, I will just strike that top one when Denal is ready. Is there any chance of getting some more screenshots from the mobile game? The unidentified Jedi could use one if possible. --Eyrezer 23:32, 21 April 2009 (UTC)
 * I've just approved Denal, so it will be queued shortly. Well done. With regard to images, is that shot of the Jedi from gameplay or a cutscene? I ask because I think its quality is fine, and so if it is from in game I think it would be great to get a screen shot of Denal and his troopers in action. It would convey the feel of the game a bit. Unfortunately I've only been able to play the demo, but that was actually quite fun! --Eyrezer 23:01, 24 April 2009 (UTC)

YouTube
I sent you a friend invite on YouTube, and wanted to let you know in case you log in here more often. By the way, I'm reading the Thrawn trilogy comics. What are you reading?  ZEM  talk to me!   01:21, 1 May 2009 (UTC) Alright, I'll take a look in a while. On a quick glance, it looks good, but I'll give it a good check over in a while and cast my vote then. :) -- Darth tom  (Imperial Intelligence)  14:16, 3 May 2009 (UTC)
 * A bit more expansion on the introduction would do it. Not reams, just a tad more. -- Darth tom Imperial Emblem.svg (Imperial Intelligence)  13:54, 3 May 2009 (UTC)

Re:Youtube
Thanks. I haven't read much lately either, I guess I'm getting ready for summer. What season is it over there? <font face="Arial"> ZEM  talk to me!   15:00, 3 May 2009 (UTC)

Requesting Permission
Requesting permission to edit your user page to fix "Hello, " to "Hello,", which is the thing that will make the visiting user's name appear instead of just .Obiwan3000 17:34, 3 May 2009 (UTC)

Well, it is the right thing, it just does not seem to work correctly anymore. You were right.Obiwan3000 20:35, 4 May 2009 (UTC)

Francis the Pink Wookiee
I addressed that last objection to my Francis GA nom. I guess you were right, we don't know for sure it's non-canon. Although honestly, I really doubt there is a pink Wookiee in the Star Wars Galaxy. :) Kilson Likes PIE (and pink Wookiees) 21:22, 05 May 09 (UTC)

Re:GAN

 * Oh whoops, sorry. I guess I accidentally missed that one.  IFYLOFD  ( You will pay the price for your lack of vision! ) 00:29, 11 May 2009 (UTC)

Reply
Ah, sorry about that. Now fixed.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 18:40, 12 May 2009 (UTC)

Yun
Hey QGJ, Oops! I forgot I still had some outstanding. I'll take care of them in a few hrs when I get to a pc. Sorry for the delay. —Tommy9281  ( No quarter given, all exits sealed ) 20:40, 3 June 2009 (UTC)
 * Not sure which one you're referring to, as all appear to have been stricken. "Decent", meant decent job&mdash;it wasn't an objection. —Tommy9281 Dark side Master SWGTCG.jpg ( No quarter given, all exits sealed ) 16:28, 4 June 2009 (UTC)

Hand of Thrawn
I'm going to read the Hand of Thrawn Duology next... You've read those haven't you? They're gonna be good like the rest of Zahn's books. :) <font face="Arial"> ZEM  talk to me!   21:16, 8 June 2009 (UTC)
 * I'll let you know how I like them then... :) <font face="Arial"> ZEM  talk to me!   04:29, 11 June 2009 (UTC)
 * I really enjoyed "Specter of the Past" and I'm now reading "Vision of the Future." I also have managed to get myself in line for "FOTJ: Omen" at my library. :) <font face="Arial"> ZEM  talk to me!   16:58, 17 June 2009 (UTC)

NEC

 * I do, but it's not with me at the moment. I can check the book in about an hour if you're good with that; just let me know what you need. Atarumaster88  Jedi_Order.svg ( Talk page ) 16:33, 17 June 2009 (UTC)
 * Yun is alluded to. The relevant quote is:


 * Jor Drakas is not specifically mentioned. Atarumaster88  Jedi_Order.svg ( Talk page ) 17:56, 17 June 2009 (UTC)

Rahn
It says he's from Socorro, but no birth date is given. Hope that helps.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 18:03, 18 June 2009 (UTC)
 * No problem.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 20:47, 18 June 2009 (UTC)

Popular authors
I was wondering, who do you think the most popular Star Wars authors are? By the way, I am working on my Star Wars forum, and I am making more prominent sections for the most prominent authors. Timothy Zahn is a given, of course. :) <font face="Arial"> ZEM  talk to me!   06:57, 21 June 2009 (UTC)
 * Those are the ones I had in mind myself. Thank you for your opinion. :) <font face="Arial"> ZEM  talk to me!   15:31, 21 June 2009 (UTC)

Prima Guides

 * I personally don't have them, but I was able to get some info from them via Jaymach, though Eyrezer did a bunch of research to get the info also. Atarumaster88  Jedi_Order.svg ( Talk page ) 15:28, 6 July 2009 (UTC)

Recent reads
I've read the Hand of Thrawn trilogy as well as Survivor's Quest. They were cool. I also read the new book, Omen. BTW, I started a blog about 9 days ago you can check it out here: (ZEM's Projects Blog) if you would like. <font face="Arial"> ZEM  talk to me!   07:31, 11 July 2009 (UTC)

The Clone Wars mobile game
Hey QuiGonJinn. As you're one of the only people I know to have The Clone Wars mobile game, do you think you could recount to me what Rex does during the game, if there's anything that isn't related to Denal? Thanks very much.  CC7567  (talk) 01:49, 14 July 2009 (UTC)
 * Okay, thanks.  CC7567  (talk) 16:11, 14 July 2009 (UTC)

Re: Request
Sure, I'll try and catch him in IRC when I'm on.  CC7567  (talk) 16:15, 15 July 2009 (UTC)
 * "From this walk, you can see the prison cells on the lower level. If Obi-Wan stands in front of the cell and releases the prisoner by using the control, the prisoner gives Obi-Wan a thermal detonator. Do not follow his instructions to use it on the tank, however." From Jaymach; that's all there is on the merchant. Hope that helps.  CC7567  (talk) 22:32, 15 July 2009 (UTC)

Re: Spilik's Aide Article
I was just wondering if you created the article "Spiliks Aide." I'm just trying to contact who ever made the article. Thank You. --Gmalek 18:41, 16 July 2009 (UTC)

Battle of Kiros
Hey man, the Battle of Kiros article is looking great :) I was going to suggest to replace "Rex" and "Cody" in the infobox with CC-7567 and CC-2224. So it would be:
 * Captain CC-7567
 * Commander CC-2224
 * Anytime QGJ :) <span style="font-variant: small-caps; font-family: Verdana; font-size: 12px"

> JangFett  Talk 16:24, 18 July 2009 (UTC)

Re: Battle of Kiros
Sure.


 * 1) Please watch underlinking; I've gotten what I can, but I suggest that you read through it once more to check.
 * 2) Can the intro be shortened slightly? Three paragraphs is a bit long for a battle this short; you might want to try shuffling around where you start new paragraphs, but there's a bit too much focus on Kenobi's fight with Ugg.
 * 3) "The Republic troops arrived too late" sounds like they immediately lost the battle, and it's rather unspecific.
 * 4) "However" is used slightly more than necessary in the last intro paragraph.
 * 5) "With Kiros liberated, the Jedi set off there": unclear; please check.
 * 6) "One day" is a bit storybookish; please try to reword it.
 * 7) The prelude section is rather choppy; please see if you can merge some of the sentences. Also, you might want to try using only one paragraph instead of a skimpy first one and a longer second.
 * 8) In the second paragraph of "The battle", can you try to shorten Ugg's communication with the holographic figure a bit? The article is on the battle, and while this part is indeed important, there's a tad of excess emphasis with the detail.
 * 9) Can there be more focus on the disarming of the bombs during "The battle"? It's rather scanty at the moment, and although I don't mean for you to list how they disarmed every single one, more detail would be nice.
 * 10) What was the original point of the mission to the remains of the Shi'kar homeworld? I don't think they decided off the bat to steal a Zygerrian ship.

I think the rest can wait till the GAN page; good job so far. I'm definitely never going to touch the comic battles, so you're welcome to take the rest. :P  CC7567  (talk) 23:21, 18 July 2009 (UTC)
 * I'll take another look at Kiros later today when I get the chance.  CC7567  (talk) 18:31, 20 July 2009 (UTC)

Second look

 * 1) "During the Clone Wars, the Togrutan colony world of Kiros preferred to stay neutral and avoid allying itself with either the Confederacy of Independent Systems or the Galactic Republic until the Confederacy launched an invasion against Kiros." That last part is extremely sudden; can you try to give more buildup? You're suggesting that Kiros immediately allied itself when the Confederacy arrived, and while that is close to true, it's rather unspecific right now.
 * 2) "Skywalker and Tano immediately settled up": can you check this? It's not making much sense.
 * 3) Other than that, it looks good enough to go; I may give it another once-over, but good work.  CC7567  (talk) 16:24, 21 July 2009 (UTC)

Request
Hey QuiGon, could you do me a favor? All of the pages that linked to Unidentified Shaman of the Whills did so through a redirect, 'Unnamed Shaman of the Whills.' I fixed all of them save for the redirect on User:QuiGonJinn/sandbox. Would you mind changing 'Unnamed Shaman of the Whills' to 'Unidentified Shaman of the Whills,' as you asked that no one edit it? Thanks a lot! - <font color="#1A2BBB">Brandon Rhea  <font color="#1A2BBB">(talk) 18:16, 27 July 2009 (UTC)


 * Awesome, thanks. - <font color="#1A2BBB">Brandon Rhea Alliance Starbird.svg <font color="#1A2BBB">(talk) 18:25, 27 July 2009 (UTC)

Re:Transfer
Thanks for letting me know :) I did nominate it, but I'll quickly go back and correct it. Thanks QGJ  JangFett  Talk 18:55, 27 July 2009 (UTC)
 * Hey Qui-Gon, could you give Transfer a copyedit and make sure it's in present tense? I went back and replaced words like "was" with "is", "had" with "have".  JangFett  Talk 18:59, 27 July 2009 (UTC)
 * Thanks again Qui-Gon :)  JangFett  Talk 19:39, 27 July 2009 (UTC)

Denal
Done so. I set it to expire in two weeks, so if it keeps occurring after that expires, just let me know and I'll reprotect it for longer.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 09:08, 28 July 2009 (UTC)

AAT driver battle droid
Geez, I forget to add the WTCWtalk template and people jumps on it before I can add it in myself. :p Kidding of course. Thanks for catching that and adding it. -  JMAS  Hey, it's me! 19:15, 29 July 2009 (UTC)

The Gauntlet of Death
Are you going to promote articles of Gauntlet of Death (e.g. Gwarrk, Cooker, clone commander, Rishi) to good status ? If you wnat I can help you a bit by I only own the preview. --Clone Commander Lee 11:44, 30 July 2009 (UTC)
 * Well, I searched a little bit but I didn't found anything, but I can possiblke take some info form your article. --Clone Commander Lee 18:25, 30 July 2009 (UTC)

Re: Visual Guide
Yeah, I have it. However, I can't find anything on Denal except a picture of him with Rex and the other troopers with Skywalker and Tano as they're about to jump off the Twilight. (This darned book isn't what I'd call "comprehensive".) I think 1stp might be the best for the article, but I'm not sure as again, he isn't identified by name. Hope that helps.  CC7567  (talk) 22:00, 2 August 2009 (UTC)
 * None in The Visual Guide, and before you have to ask (:P), they're not in Art of Star Wars: The Clone Wars.  CC7567  (talk) 21:41, 6 August 2009 (UTC)

Re:Re:Recent reads
Sorry it took me so long to respond, I've been really busy. I haven't been reading much either. No, I haven't ever seen Babylon 5, but have you ever seen Primeval? In case you're wondering it has nothing to do with anything else named "Primeval." <font face="Arial"> ZEM  talk to me!   21:14, 5 August 2009 (UTC)

Re: Nist
The box only has a limited cast list, smaller in-fact than the one we have one the audio drama page, so no, Xecr Nist isn't credited with a voice. If it helps any I'm almost 100% sure he was voiced by Jim Ward, the same guy who voiced Sedriss. Their voices are almost identical. Sorry I couldn't be of more help. Xicer9 ( Combadge) 14:08, 12 August 2009 (UTC)

Broadside
Broadside objections fixed. --Clone Commander Lee 18:41, 12 August 2009 (UTC)
 * Last objection also fixed. Thanks for the review. -- Clone Commander Lee  Talk 12:05, 14 August 2009 (UTC)

The Gauntlet of Death
Were did you get the picture of your battle Rishi article. I nned some pictures for my articles (Gwarrk, Cooker, Clone Commander). Also could you possible give me a pre-no perview of Gwarrk ? You're the only one I know who has read the comic. -- Clone Commander Lee  Talk 11:20, 19 August 2009 (UTC)
 * First. Thank you very much for the review. Your objections are fixed and Cooker is ready. I'll add both some quotes. -- Clone Commander Lee  Talk 14:12, 19 August 2009 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the second review. Objections are fixed. I need an image of Cooker for his article. -- Clone Commander Lee  Talk 10:52, 20 August 2009 (UTC)
 * Thanks, Master Jinn. Objections fixed. -- Clone Commander Lee  Talk 13:45, 20 August 2009 (UTC)
 * Thanks, Qui-Gon. Objections fixed. -- Clone Commander Lee  Talk 11:46, 22 August 2009 (UTC)

Re: Bothawui
As far as I know, Waxer and Boil are the only ones in there, but there's no new info.  CC7567  (talk) 17:12, 25 August 2009 (UTC)