Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/C'borp


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C'borp

 * Nominated by:  IFYLOFD  ( Floyd's crib ) 04:29, March 12, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: All power to the mighty Slugman.

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)
Support
 * 1) —Tommy  9281 07:28, March 14, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) Heil to the Slugman! --Skippy Farlstendoiro 09:10, March 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3)  Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 11:33, March 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 22:04, March 16, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 23:18, March 18, 2010 (UTC)
 * 6) Toprawa and Ralltiir 22:29, March 19, 2010 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Skippy laughed out loud with the Nomination Comment
 * 2) * Per the Bio quote, C'borp is on a first-name basis with his captain; I think this deserves mention as it suggests either a personal friendship with him or a lack of professionality of the crew (depending on the behievor of other crewbeings)
 * 3) **Eh. I wouldn't assume anything. It's C'borp's only quote in all of the Star Wars canon, and its nowhere stated that C'borp has a personal friendship with Stonebone.
 * 4) * Three sources are not referenced in the body. No new info from any of those? Seriously?
 * 5) **Nope. None. They're all just short rehashes of what he did on the Starjacker.
 * 6) *Skippy Farlstendoiro 09:34, March 12, 2010 (UTC)
 * 7) Cav:
 * 8) * Due to knowledge gained from a previous excursion to Ambria - do we have an article for this event? If so, it must be linked to. If not, and it is notable enough, it should be created and linked to.
 * 9) **I created an article yesterday, but I forgot to link it. Done.
 * 10) * Some information on the ultimate resolution to the mission after C'borp's death would be appreciated. - Cavalier One FarStar Logo.jpg( Squadron channel ) 17:01, March 14, 2010 (UTC)
 * 11) **Added.
 * 12) Naru
 * 13) * "Although Dreebo quickly moved to attack the Marauder Starjacker, every shot he fired missed; taking the opportunity, C'borp fired back at Dreebo, destroying the enforcer's starfighter." The semicolon seems misplaced here. Rephrase, perhaps?
 * 14) **Nah, I think its fine there. The reason I put it there was to split the sentence without making them into two, choppy individual sentences.
 * 15) * NaruHina Talk Anakinsolo.png 19:15, March 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * 16) NaruHina... hmmm... Soresakashi? Makaresu? Sigh. Soresu will have to do for now.
 * 17) * While serving on the Marauder Starjacker, C'borp took his position at the laser turrets to fire on an Ithullian ore hauler commanded by Captain Gruna. Could you provide a dab on context as to how at complete random starts to fire at the hauler? Maybe just explain that they were attempting to steal the ore it contained? SoresuMakashi ( Everything I tell you is a lie  the truth  ) 08:14, March 16, 2010 (UTC)
 * 18) **Addressed.
 * 19) Toprawa:
 * 20) * Who knew of this? Please specify: "it was known that the Adegan crystals were being kept" Toprawa and Ralltiir 23:54, March 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 21) **Addressed.

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