Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Vrook Lamar's Padawan


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Vrook Lamar's Padawan

 * Nominated by: &mdash; 04:27, August 2, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: I feel sorry for this Jedi, I really do.

(2 ECs/4 Users/6 Total)
Support
 * 1) Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 16:08, August 2, 2012 (UTC)
 * 2) &mdash;MJ&mdash; War Room Thursday, August 2, 2012, 16:57 UTC
 * 3) You only have to source that her name was established one time, but whatevs. NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 17:36, August 3, 2012 (UTC)
 * 4) I'll support, but maybe you should add some context to the Mandalorion Wars, as they are mentioned multiple times in the article. 501st  dogma ( talk ) 18:45, August 8, 2012 (UTC)
 * 5) Amazing, I played through that game a lot of times, but I don't think that I ever found this.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg  (Greetings)  23:35, August 8, 2012 (UTC)
 * 6) Menkooroo (talk) 20:11, August 10, 2012 (UTC)

Object

Hanzo

 * No sourcing in the intro.
 * This may be a sofixit, but it appears this Padawan's gender is unclear, yet the intro mentions male gender.
 * Other than that, good job. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 04:48, August 2, 2012 (UTC)
 * Thanks for catching those, both were oversights on my part. If anything else is required, let me know.&mdash; 05:24, August 2, 2012 (UTC)

MY OBJECTION, HANZO! >:|

 * Traditionally, aren't Padawans not considered Jedi until they become Jedi Knights? NaruHina  Talk Anakinsolo.png 18:55, August 2, 2012 (UTC)
 * Fixed.&mdash; 19:07, August 2, 2012 (UTC)


 * 1) Oy
 * 2) * Like Naru said in his support comment, the bit about the battered droid playing the holorecording and mentioning Lamar's Padawan doesn't need to be mentioned in both the BTS and in the ref note. Just one of them is sufficient; both is overkill. Menkooroo (talk) 18:22, August 3, 2012 (UTC)
 * 3) **Please take a look at it.&mdash; 00:10, August 4, 2012 (UTC)
 * 4) * Reload your infobox, sucka!
 * 5) * Anything in ref [1] that isn't linked in the article should be linked in the ref note --- the protocol droid, etc. Menkooroo (talk) 19:46, August 6, 2012 (UTC)
 * 6) **Taken care of both.&mdash; 22:24, August 6, 2012 (UTC)
 * 7) ***Does the battered protocol droid have his own article? Also link something to holovid. I think the droid should be linked in the quote attribution, too, since he's not linked in the rest of the article (the references not counting as part of the article). Menkooroo (talk) 22:49, August 6, 2012 (UTC)
 * 8) ****No, he didn't, but it's created now. Taken care of.&mdash; 14:35, August 7, 2012 (UTC)
 * 9) Exiled Jedi
 * 10) * You might need to mention Vrook's coversation with Vandar in the article.
 * 11) **Done.&mdash; 22:25, August 8, 2012 (UTC)
 * 12) * Is there a quote you could get about Surik's master refusing to punish her. Seems to me that this would go well in the article. -- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  17:49, August 8, 2012 (UTC)
 * 13) **But the article is centered on the Padawan, not Surik or her Master. I don't see how it fits with the subject of the article, considering the Padawan was mentioned once in this holovid conversation.&mdash; 22:25, August 8, 2012 (UTC)
 * 14) ***Okay I see your point.-- Exiled Jedi  Oldrepublic crest.svg (Greetings)  23:35, August 8, 2012 (UTC)

Comments
 * Many thanks to for the pre-nom copy-edit & review.&mdash;  05:27, August 2, 2012 (UTC)