Wookieepedia:Re-featured article nominations/Voren Na'al

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Voren Na'al

 * Originally nominated by:
 * Last featured on: August 13, 2007
 * Changes since last review: diff
 * Date placed on this page: May 15, 2011

(2 Inqs/2 Users/4 Total)
Support
 * 1) Menkooroo 15:30, June 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 2) Green Tentacle (Talk) 20:30, June 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * 3)  Trak Nar  Ramble on 03:15, June 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) Kilson ( Let's have a chat ) 14:33, June 25, 2011 (UTC)

Object
 * 1) Jeffrey
 * 2) * Intro seems way too short. It could easily be expanded with some mentions of some of his more noteworthy specific assignments.
 * 3) **Here's the part where I gripe lengthily about the length of intros in featured articles. Now, here's the part where I try and satisfactorily fix it anyway. jSarek 08:27, June 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 4) * I'm confused by ref [19] --- is "Academician" actually a term used in canon to describe Na'al? If so, ref [19] needs to state where in canon it's used. Menkooroo 17:29, June 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * 5) **Clarified that it's from the same source as the rest of the paragraph. jSarek 08:27, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

Comments
 * Checking the difference between versions, it amuses me that the old version was considered good to go when nothing in the infobox was sourced. =P  Trak Nar  Ramble on 03:15, June 23, 2011 (UTC)