Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Ravager


 * ''The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a featured article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.

Ravager
Support
 * 1) - Solus (Bird of Prey)  22:56, 9 April 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) .  .  .  .  00:36, 10 April 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) Mesa supporten dissen. KEJ 08:02, 10 April 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) -- Shaelas (Ahto High Court)[[Image:Czerka Logo.JPG|30px]] 23:12, 10 April 2007 (UTC)
 * 5) Lord Hydronium 21:32, 17 April 2007 (UTC)
 * 6) --Eyrezer 10:29, 19 April 2007 (UTC)

Oppose Comments
 * Infobox image of poor quality. Rule 15.-- Shaelas (HoloConference)[[Image:Czerka Logo.JPG|30px]] 23:19, 9 April 2007 (UTC)
 * I know, I searched around to try and find better, but I am unable to take screencaps. I'll ask Redemption about it. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  23:44, 9 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Redemption replaced it with a beautiful picture, many thanks to him.- Solus (Bird of Prey)  00:14, 10 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Original research in BTS: "Like the Leviathan, the appearance of the Ravager was clearly influenced by the later Star Destroyers of the films." You need to find a source other than the films themselves. -- Imp http://images.wikia.com/starwars/images/e/e5/ATATatarismall.png 12:02, 14 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Since I couldn't find a source, I changed it to "Like the Leviathan, the appearance of the Ravager is similar to the Star Destroyers of the films." Does this suffice, or shall I remove it entirely? - Solus (Bird of Prey)  15:12, 14 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Some unencyclopedic/flowery prose. Some examples (there's a bit more of it, but if you want I can list it elsewhere rather than crowd out this section):
 * "The halls, shaped either rectangular or diamond-like, wound aimlessly through empty rooms, several leading out into nothing but space beyond broken walls, echoing with the dead, lifeless, eerie sounds of a once vibrant way of life."
 * "Barracks still bore beds and quarters, though the beds were frayed and the lights were almost out, killing the warm feel of camaraderie that once filled the room."
 * "...when Darth Nihilus snatched it out of its slumber and once again willed it with the power to fly and destroy..." - Lord Hydronium 03:20, 17 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Heh, I was hoping to get away with that. At any rate, I believe that has been taken care of. It didn't hurt as much as I thought. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  11:40, 17 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Looks good. - Lord Hydronium 21:32, 17 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Thank you. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  00:53, 18 April 2007 (UTC)

'''Approved by Inquisitorius - Inq:Ravager 23:33, 19 April 2007 (UTC)
 * My most promising little baby. For the Wookiee-Cast thingy. BIG IMPORTANT NOTE: I do not have permission to have a mike so I cannot win anyway. Just entering for fun. Mostly to prove I can do it. Do I pass the test? ;) Seriously, I will try and see if I can get a mike before Sunday, though. Not definite. - Solus (Bird of Prey)  22:56, 9 April 2007 (UTC)
 * A few more images please.-- Shaelas (HoloConference)[[Image:Czerka Logo.JPG|30px]] 23:11, 9 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Wouldn't be able to fit anymore. And sometimes it's better for an article to have less. Ever heard the saying "do more with less"? -- Redemption [[Image:Redemptionusersymbol.png|20px]] Talk 23:16, 9 April 2007 (UTC)
 * True.-- Shaelas (HoloConference)[[Image:Czerka Logo.JPG|30px]] 23:19, 9 April 2007 (UTC)
 * More quotes are available I think.-- Shaelas (HoloConference)[[Image:Czerka Logo.JPG|30px]] 23:23, 9 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Yes, there are more quotes; I wrote them down. There is a quote beneath each subheading except the 'Behind the scenes' because I couldn't find one that pertained to the BtS of the Ravager. Adding quotes in the middle of subsections looks messy.- Solus (Bird of Prey)  23:44, 9 April 2007 (UTC)
 * This has been deemed an appropriate submission for the Wookiee-Cast Featured Article Competition. .  .  .  .  00:36, 10 April 2007 (UTC)
 * There's nothing technically wrong with it, but I cannot in good conscience vote for it until this ceases to exist. -- Darth Culator  (Talk)(Kills) 02:30, 10 April 2007 (UTC)
 * That thing existed? &hellip; with the included stuff, does it not render the other article, and thus, the category, moot? And thus, can an admin blast it into oblivion? - Solus (Bird of Prey)  02:42, 10 April 2007 (UTC)
 * This article's no longer associated with the category, which has been put up for speedying along with the other article. You may start your voting.KEJ 08:27, 10 April 2007 (UTC)