Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Kouhun


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Kouhun

 * Nominated by: Lord Hydronium 12:01, 21 June 2008 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: 1,047 1,117 Well over 1,000 words.

(6 Inqs/2 Users/8 Total)
Support
 * 1) -  Cavalier One ( Squadron channel ) 23:04, 21 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 2) Ozzel 03:00, 9 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 3) Cool. I made a few minor expansions to this article in my first month here. Enochf 18:33, 17 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) Green Tentacle (Talk) 18:01, 6 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 5)  Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 17:19, 7 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 6)  Graestan ( Talk ) 01:10, 10 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 7) Nice work. --Imperialles 01:17, 10 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 8)  Chack Jadson  (Talk)  13:38, 10 August 2008 (UTC)

Oppose
 * 1) From the squadron briefing of Cavalier One
 * 2) * In the intro - the term "less fatal" is used to describe the Kouhun's tail sting, but in the main body it is refered to as non-lethal. "Less fatal" is confusing in this instance, and should be reworded.
 * 3) **Well, nonfatal is less fatal than fatal. :P I changed it. - Lord Hydronium 22:47, 21 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 4) * Cavalier One ( Squadron channel ) 22:43, 21 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 5) I've just found that kouhun appear in Portrait of the Artist as a Young Rodian from the Living Force. I'm going to write an article for the adventure itself, so I will take care of that red link, but there is probably a small paragraph that can come from the adventure. --Eyrezer 21:30, 1 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 6) *Added the info. - Lord Hydronium 01:46, 6 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 7) From the desk of Atarumaster88
 * 8) * "the result of escaped kouhuns from assassins," Reword.
 * 9) * "They sometimes used the ability to dye a kouhun by coloring it with the dominant color of the environment that it would infiltrate." Reword please.
 * 10) *Otherwise a clean nom. Have a Super Terrific Friendly Un-frustrating day. Atarumaster88  [[Image:Jedi_Order.svg|20px]] ( Talk page ) 19:49, 8 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 11) **All addressed. - Lord Hydronium 01:46, 6 August 2008 (UTC)
 * 12) From the other desk of Chack Jadson:
 * 13) * "...almost all mammalian species, which in most intelligent species created symptoms resembling a heart attack or another natural manner of death." I think you should change this a bit. First you say mammals were vulnerable, and then you use all species.  Chack Jadson  (Talk) 13:20, 14 July 2008 (UTC)
 * 14) **I hope the "and" I added clears up that it's two separate ideas being talked about. - Lord Hydronium 01:46, 6 August 2008 (UTC)

Comments


 * "Centipedelike" is, in fact, a canon description. - Lord Hydronium 12:01, 21 June 2008 (UTC)