Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Battle droid commander (Dorin)


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Battle droid commander (Dorin)

 * Nominated by: Kreivi Wolter 01:25, May 9, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nomination comments: Roger Roger.

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 * 1) In the Characteristics section, you say "The droid's actions were devastating enough to please Grievous, who was known to greatly dislike the droids under his command." However, in the second clause, you need to identify where Grievous showed this, and source it. Also, can you find a different word to replace "devastating"? It doesn't work there.  JangFett  (Talk) 03:08, May 9, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) *Meh, the whole paragraph was little... weird. Removed. Kreivi Wolter 09:03, May 9, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) I'm seeing major issues with poor wording/phrasing and overall coherency in the article's writing, some POV issues, and also major sourcing mistakes. Jonjedigrandmaster  Jedi symbol.svg ( We seed the stars ) 04:45, May 9, 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) *Could you glarify what you mean by major sourcing mistakes? Kreivi Wolter 09:03, May 9, 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) **I mean that the article does not adhere to rules 4 and 10, in that it is inadequately sourced. Jonjedigrandmaster  Jedi symbol.svg ( We seed the stars ) 13:18, May 9, 2010 (UTC)
 * 6) Two things
 * 7) * "During the ongoing battle..." During already indicates that the battle is ongoing; no need for both.
 * 8) **Right. Kreivi Wolter 19:39, May 16, 2010 (UTC)
 * 9) * Some underlinking in the body.
 * 10) **Still? Kreivi Wolter 17:47, May 18, 2010 (UTC)
 * 11) *-- 1358  (Talk) 18:30, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Vote to remove nomination (AC only)

 * 1) Unaddressed objection for two weeks.  Jonjedigrandmaster  ( Talk ) 17:05, May 23, 2010 (UTC)
 * 2)  CC7567  (talk) 17:55, May 23, 2010 (UTC)
 * 3)  Grunny  ( talk ) 08:10, May 24, 2010 (UTC)