As some of you know, I am quite heavily invested into my own Star Wars fan fiction. I know this isn’t a fanfic forum, I won’t be posting any excerpts of anything, but I am asking for advice. I’m awful at coming up with titles for my books, and I’m asking for any ideas. Something creative and subtle, that doesn’t spell out the plot by itself. So y’all can help me out, I’ll provide a synopsis. Note: these fanfics are loosely based off of the legends timeline, but I’ve added or replaced a number of story elements.
19 ABY: the Battle of Yaga Minor has ended, and famous New Republic pilot Kavlo Kermann is perceived by all to have been killed in the battle. He is in fact alive, but barely. The Dark Lady of the Sith, Lumiya, who had been hunting Kermann in the preceding novel because she had discovered his previously unknown Force sensitivity, has finally claimed her prize. Lumiya has taken the physically broken, totally paralyzed Kermann to her hideout in the region surrounding the Belkadan System, where she sustains him with the help of a contingent of One Sith, led by Darth Nyrhac, a lieutenant of the dormant Darth Krayt. The goal: break Kerman’s spirit, and turn him to the Dark Side. This process takes up much of the book, with Lumiya playing on Kerman’s past, his emotions, and the hopelessness of his current situation. Ultimately, Lumiya breaks Kermann by manipulating him to think his friends and family had betrayed him at Yaga Minor, resulting in his incapacitation and suffering. This causes Kermann to lash out with such an intense burst of hatred that he heals his body (except for some burns on his face, giving him a Dark Knight Two-Face kind of look—also, Shadows of the Empire is where I got that heal thing, Vader tried it multiple times during the book). He pledges himself to the Sith, becoming Darth Apollyon. For most of the rest of the book, Apollyon trains in the Dark Side, and he and Lumiya end up turning on the One Sith, killing Nyrhac and the others. The One Sith are too weak at this point to retaliate. The book ends with Lumiya presenting the “miraculously” healed Apollyon, assuming the role of Kermann, to Grand Admiral Pellaeon, who knows much about Kermann’s exploits, and appoints him as an Imperial Admiral on the spot. That’s where it ends.
If you took the time to carefully read that, thank you. Again, I’m not advertising myself, and I’m not posting my fanfics anywhere on this forum or the fanfic forum. I’m not asking for opinions on my plot summary either. I just need help with a title. So if y’all would be willing to oblige, that would be really helpful.