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Hello there, I'm not sure if you have a copy of ''[[Star Wars: The Ultimate Visual Guide: Updated and Expanded]],'' but I was flipping through it and noticed that [[2242]] appears in it. Since he was your GAN, I figured I would bring it to your attention. [[User:Corellian Premier|Corellian Premier]][[File:Robotech.jpg|20px]]<sup>[[User talk:Corellian Premier|<span style="color:black">All along the watchtower</span>]]</sup> 21:32, May 3, 2012 (UTC)
 
Hello there, I'm not sure if you have a copy of ''[[Star Wars: The Ultimate Visual Guide: Updated and Expanded]],'' but I was flipping through it and noticed that [[2242]] appears in it. Since he was your GAN, I figured I would bring it to your attention. [[User:Corellian Premier|Corellian Premier]][[File:Robotech.jpg|20px]]<sup>[[User talk:Corellian Premier|<span style="color:black">All along the watchtower</span>]]</sup> 21:32, May 3, 2012 (UTC)
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== [[Unidentified Jedi General (Altyr V)]] ==
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I got the feeling this passed unnoticed, so since you worte this article, would you maybe take a look at [[Talk:Unidentified Jedi General (Altyr V)#TCSWE|my objections]] concerning the source? Greetings, '''[[User:Jedi-Meister|<span style="font-family:Script MT Bold;font-size:15px;color:#6495ED">Jedi-Meister</span>]]''' <sup>[[User talk:Jedi-Meister|<span style="font-family:Script MT Bold;font-size:11px;color:#FF8C00">»'''!?'''«</span>]]</sup> 12:25, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Revision as of 12:25, May 6, 2012


New talk page

Finally found some time to archive the old stuff. Clone Commander Lee Talk 18:08, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re: MedStar II: Jedi Healer

Hey Lee, I'm afraid I don't currently have the Medstar duology with me; my brother has the books right now and it might be late February before I can get them back. Sorry that I can't help right now. Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 21:15, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Coburn

Hey, Lee. Would you mind if I take Coburn on as a project? I planned to work on him for a while, and I completely understand if you'd like to write him yourself, but I'd like to tackle him if I can. Thanks. CC7567 (talk) 07:33, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

  • Sure thing. Are you looking for any quotes at all that involve them? CC7567 (talk) 19:14, January 7, 2012 (UTC)
    • There's actually a text-searchable version of the book that can be found here. Might save us both some time, since it would take a while for me to get all of them. :P Hope that helps. CC7567 (talk) 02:15, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

Oz

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Oz (clone trooper) has been approved by the AgriCorps and awarded Good status. Feel free to add the {{User GA}} template to your userpage to acknowledge your hard work. The AgriCorps thanks you for your efforts, and looks forward to future nominations from you! — JangFett (Talk) 04:29, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

Unidentified Sith (Taalon's strike team)

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Unidentified Sith (Taalon's strike team) has been approved by the AgriCorps and awarded Good status. Feel free to add the {{User GA}} template to your userpage to acknowledge your hard work. The AgriCorps thanks you for your efforts, and looks forward to future nominations from you! — 1358 (Talk) 19:10, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

Neebo

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Neebo has been approved by the AgriCorps and awarded Good status. Feel free to add the {{User GA}} template to your userpage to acknowledge your hard work. The AgriCorps thanks you for your efforts, and looks forward to future nominations from you! — 1358 (Talk) 21:03, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Cookie

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Sarkli

I got around to fixing all of your issues with the article...DjMack 01:25, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

Near Indosa

Would you mind looking over the Near Indosa article, and if there are no more objections that you can find, could you archive the pages so that I can put the article on GAN. ~501st TupTcgaotc symbol(Communications) 21:06, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re:CC-1993

Lee, I'm aware of the objections, but I cannot look at them at this time because I'm busy. I'll try to take a look at them sometime next week. JangFett (Talk) 16:41, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

CR57

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CR57 has been approved by the AgriCorps and awarded Good status. Feel free to add the {{User GA}} template to your userpage to acknowledge your hard work. The AgriCorps thanks you for your efforts, and looks forward to future nominations from you! — 1358 (Talk) 23:26, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

Haurgab trooper

Hi, since I'ce done some changes to the article I was wondering if you could check it over. The main things I've changed is I've deleted the homeworld note and changed his unit to the Haurgab garrison becasue as I reread the section both the 85th and 14th were part of the garrison, and the 14th did not join the 85th. This means he could have been from either unit. Thanks,---501st DogmaRepublic emblem(Comlink) 21:56, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Hello

Nice to see you still at it now that I am back. graestan(talk) 06:46, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Sarkli (continued)

Just to let you know I got around to your final objection, but the user who keeps adding the "update" tag for the TCG material won't respond to my requests to help with the source material. DjMack 23:36, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Interest in new WP

I've been throwing around the idea of starting a WookieeProject based on Category:Entertainment. I'm asking around to see if there is enough interest to justify starting it. Would you be in any way interested? MasterFredCommerce Guild(Whatever) 17:11, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

  • Since you showed interest in the project, I'm here to let you know that it is now official! MasterFredCommerce Guild(Whatever) 16:22, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

Nap

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Nap Lagard has been approved by the AgriCorps and awarded Good status. Feel free to add the {{User GA}} template to your userpage to acknowledge your hard work. The AgriCorps thanks you for your efforts, and looks forward to future nominations from you! — JangFett (Talk) 20:44, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Re:Jet

No problem, Lee. One of the things you can do in the future is use the preview button and proofread your own work. It will definitely help you out. JangFett (Talk) 16:00, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Onca

Hey, could you give me some suggestions on how to get rid of "Sorry about the mess" on Onca. Thanks. ~501st TupTcgaotc symbol(Communications) 18:42, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

CC-1993

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CC-1993 has been approved by the Inquisitorius and awarded Featured status. Please record your achievement here, and feel free to add the {{User featured}} template to your userpage to acknowledge your hard work. The Inquisitorius thanks you for your efforts, and looks forward to future nominations from you! — Toprawa and Ralltiir 21:39, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re:Balith Civil War

On page 124, "Off to War: The Nu-Class attack shuttle is a standard transport for Jedi and clones on Clone Wars business for the Republic. When Anakin and Captain Rex (you can now source it to guide that Rex commanded it with Anakin) are ordered to war-torn Balith to take charge of the Third Legion, Ahsoka is unhappy to find herself left behind, but still sees them off from the landing pad at the Jedi Temple."

A box pointing to the shuttle confirmed that Torrent Company also joined Anakin and Rex. I haven't seen the episode for a while and don't plan on watching it, but it shows another clone next to Anakin and Rex onboard the shuttle. Here's what the box says: "As Anakin says farewell to his Padawan, Rex and another trooper of Torrent Company prepare to take their seats in the troop hold inside the shuttle's well-armored belly."

Basically see what you can do with the new information given, albeit fluffless :P. Hope this helps, JangFett (Talk) 01:55, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

  • Sorry for the delay. Yeah, it says what Jang said above. CC7567 (talk) 04:26, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

CC-5869

You can see his article on the CWA wiki for the quote. In-game, he appears in the Training Room, just as a non-playable character and nothing else. The quote that he says to the Jedi Knight player character is on the CWA wiki page, so that should be all you need. CC7567 (talk) 23:48, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

Near Indosa

mind archiving Near Indosa as a failed good article please so that I can put it back on CAN. Thanks. ~501st TupTcgaotc symbol(Communications) 23:23, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Draa

Hi, since I am updating Draa to Good status, I was wondering something. Since his article is small due to the his brief appearence, should I add something in the BtS briefly saying that Hasbro made a figurine of Draa to sell? I know bigger articles such as CT-7567 will not have this due to the numerous figurines made, but I'm not sure about the less known clones. Thanks, 501st DogmaRepublic emblem(Comlink) 23:21, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

  • I was wondering if you could look over Draa on my workbench and see if you can spot anything major, for example grammar, that needs to be fixed before I move it to GAN. Thanks, 501st DogmaRepublic emblem(Comlink) 23:48, March 10, 2012 (UTC)
    • Permission granted to edit the workbench. Thanks again. 501st DogmaRepublic emblem(Comlink) 01:10, March 11, 2012 (UTC)
      • Thanks so much for thoroughly reviewing Draa. I really appreciate it. Thanks again, 501st DogmaRepublic emblem(Comlink) 15:27, March 13, 2012 (UTC)

WP:TOR

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"Our time has come."
Hello <insert name here>! So, it's been a little over three months since The Old Republic was released, and WookieeProject: The Old Republic, which was founded almost two years ago now, was in dire need of a revamp and update. Participation has slumped, but it's time to get back on the wagon and refocus our efforts. So here are some stats: currently, we have ten Featured Articles, thirty-one Good Articles, and thirty-four Comprehensive Articles. Cal Jedi and Coruscantfan have both been doing great work lately, but we need more users to start undertaking projects from the game and related materials. Comprehensive articles are a great way to get started, so take a leap, pick an article, and get crackin'.

Beyond status articles, there are a few other ways you can help WP: TOR with it's primary goals. Those of you who have a current subscription to the game are welcome to visit our new guild page, where we're setting up in-game groups to help catalogue and confirm information here on Wookieepedia. Aside from that, our article lists can always use expansions. We have some fun new programs and challenges coming to WP:TOR in the future, so take a look at our news and discussion area for updates, and always remember to add any of your new status article successes to the news board.
If you have any questions or comments, head on over to the forums or let me know on my talk page. Take a look around the updated project page, and happy hunting! Darth Trayus(Trayus Academy) 09:39, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Outbound Flight

Hi, I noticed that you own Outbound Flight. I know you said most of your books are in German and I was wondering if that was the case with this one? I need several quotes from it, but if it is in German I will have to find someone else who owns it. Thanks!- PrincessEra-impGLG 20:50, March 19, 2012 (UTC)

  • Okay thanks, I'll wait and see what Omicron can come up with.- PrincessEra-impGLG 17:44, March 20, 2012 (UTC)

Resolution

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Resolution (Venator-class) has been approved by the AgriCorps and awarded Good status. Feel free to add the {{User GA}} template to your userpage to acknowledge your hard work. The AgriCorps thanks you for your efforts, and looks forward to future nominations from you! — —Cal JediInfinite Empire (Personal Comm Channel) 03:06, March 21, 2012 (UTC)

I want to ask you questions!

Hey, Lee,

You've written sixty-five Good articles. That's a lot! Since you've written so many --- may I ask you a few questions about Good articles and Good article writing? Since we'll be putting Good articles on the Main Page soon, I want to write a post on Wookieepedia NewsNet about it. My hope is to let casual readers of Wookieepedia know more about what Good articles are, and I want a few Wookieepedians to help tell them. Would it be OK if I asked you a few questions about your experiences writing Good articles? I'd include your answers in the NewsNet post. If so, let me know if I should ask you here, or if we should do it by e-mail. If you want to do it by e-mail, e-mail me at gradualferguson@hotmail.com . Cheers! Menkooroo 02:38, March 22, 2012 (UTC)

  • Thanks so much! I have two questions for you. They're both about your experiences on Wookieepedia, writing and reviewing GAs. Feel free to make the answers as long or as short as you'd like. I'll hopefully have the final post written in about a week. :)
  1. Tell me about your experience writing GAs. Does writing more and more GAs make you a better writer?
  2. Is reviewing important, too? Does reviewing other GAs also help improve your own writing?

Thanks again! :D Menkooroo 04:29, March 26, 2012 (UTC)

WC

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Bulduga

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Bulduga has been approved by the AgriCorps and awarded Good status. Feel free to add the {{User GA}} template to your userpage to acknowledge your hard work. The AgriCorps thanks you for your efforts, and looks forward to future nominations from you! — —Cal JediInfinite Empire (Personal Comm Channel) 02:12, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re: Kep-She

I'm sorry, I'm just about to turn in for the night, and I don't currently have access to it. I believe Jang has access to it, though; you could try asking him. CC7567 (talk) 08:22, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

  • Here you go: "Page 91 - The Malastare crisis scaled after the [Corporate] Alliance hired Sikurdian pirates to seize Malastare's duel tankers. Trench then gathered a fleet of Alliance Fantail-class destroyers and Sikurdian privateers and blockaded the Malastare Narrows, seeking to force a settlement on the Alliance's terms. After attempts to find a diplomatic solution failed, Malastare appealed to Supreme Channcelor Valorum to intervene. Publicly, Valorum demurred. But he also feared that the Alliance might prevail in a shooting war, because the Dustig Sector Dorces were weakened by corruption and neglect. Behind the scenes, he cajoled the neighboring Tyus and Var Haden sectors to support Malastare, funneled credits to Dugs to hire privateers, and dispatched military "observers" to the scene—including the Jedi Kep-She and a capable officer named Wullf Yularen, who'd fought Skiyrd pirates with the Kwymar Sector Forces." JangFett (Talk) 12:51, April 9, 2012 (UTC)
    • Lee, there's some issues with the article that I like to point out if you don't mind. Mainly that Yularen was sent with Kep-She, as said above, and perhaps you could supply a date for the Christophsis battle. JangFett (Talk) 17:23, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Kesla Vein duel

Hey Lee, I saw you have First duel in Kesla Vein currently {{inuse}}. Would you mind adding the {{Lost Tribe of Sith resurgence}} template to the bottom of the page? Thanks, Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 23:20, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

  • No problem :P And yes, you're right: the first duel is up to the point that Tola blows up the speeder/runs away. We don't actually see the beginning of the second duel; all we know is that at some point she gets more Sith reinforcements, attack the Jedi again, and chase them until they flee with Nilitz. Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 14:36, April 10, 2012 (UTC)
    • Haha, I'll certainly allow it. :P Here are all of the quotes from that scene:
Tola: "Vestara Khai."
Ben: "It's for you."
Vestara: "You're not helping."
―Tola Annax and the Sith locate Vestara Khai and the Skywalkers[src]
"Who are you?"
"You know me, traitor. And it's time for your companions to die, and for you to be taken to your father for questioning."
"Tola Annax."
"Your brains haven't seized up completely, Vestara. Now surrender like a good girl. We need to take you back to your father so you can experience only the most carefully thought-out torture and explain which of you cut down Lord Taalon. If you didn't do it, you clearly conspired with his killer—you're not their prisoner."
"He had to die. He was…changing. He was no longer fit to lead us."
"Oh, we're aware of the genetic mutations he was experiencing. Accelerated changes, grotesque mutations…you might even be acquitted of complicity because of them. If you surrender."
"Of course. Come down here and I'll give you my weapon personally."
―Vestara Khai and Tola Annax[src]
"Have you found Abeloth yet? We have some justice in mind for her, too."
―Tola Annax, to Vestara Khai[src]

Then the duel breaks out. When the Sith are killed, leaving just Tola:

"How about you surrender to our justice?"
"Some other time."
―Vestara Khai and Tola Annax[src]

Then as Tola uses a cable to climb the ravine, and Ben reaches out to use the Force:

"Not worth it, Ben. Consequences."
"I forgot."
―Luke and Ben Skywalker, after letting Tola Annax escape to avoid causing damage to the world by using the Force[src]
Ben: "You know her, huh?"
Vestara: "She works for my father."
Ben: "Dad, she was doing what you did with me at the temple on Dorin. A Master hanging back to watch her students fight an enemy so she'd learn about them."
Luke: "Though she seemed perfectly content to sacrifice them."
Vestara: "You're a big prize, Master Skywalker. Well worth the sacrifice of a few Sabers and apprentices."
Ben: "I wonder how they traced us here."
Luke: "It doesn't matter how they did. I'm just grateful that they did."
Ben: "You weren't hit by debris to the head, were you, dad?"
Luke: "Trust me on this, Ben. Sometimes it's actually a good thing to run into your enemies. The people from Kesla Vein are going to be here in a few minutes to investigate the blast. We'd better be gone when they arrive. Let's get going."
―Ben Skywalker, Vestara Khai, and Luke Skywalker, following the duel[src]

Of course, feel free to separate these into smaller quotes as you see fit. I look forward to your nom; let me know if you have any more questions. :) Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 18:18, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

  • A few things: there are a handful of missing links
    • Indeed, I found a lot.
  • You should probably mention in the intro that Annax survived
    • Done.
  • It's probably worth mentioning in the prelude why Vestara was outcast from the Sith, especially since the quote for the duel has Annax calling her a traitor. And in the interests of keeping the prelude short, you can probably remove the info about the alliance; it doesn't correspond directly to this duel, so probably isn't completely necessary.
    • Done.
      • Just a brief elaboration on why she killed a superior officer would be good here. Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 14:23, April 12, 2012 (UTC)
        • Better?
  • "Khai dispatched several Sith Sabers to the planet in order to find and capture Abeloth and his daughter as well as killing the Skywalkers." Bit of verb confusion ("killing" is incorrect); and IIRC, Operation: Shieldfall was supposed to capture/kill Abeloth, not Annax. I think Annax's team was just sent down ahead of time to kill the Skywalkers and locate Abeloth for the rest of the Sith in Shieldfall
    • Tweaked.
  • After you mention Gavar Khai, make sure you specify which Khai you're referring to, instead of just saying "Khai" every time, or the reader may be confused
    • Done.
  • Who's the "Keshiri Saber"? (I know; but the reader might not)
    • Adressed.
  • Why is part of the duel not in chronological order? ("Seconds earlier"—why not mention what happened earlier first?)
    • Tweaked.
  • "Led by the Sith Saber Tola Annax, a group consisting of four Sabers" makes it sound like it Annax was in command of four other Sabers.
    • Done.
  • Their speeder actually exploded after the duel, to help cover Annax's escape
    • Done.
  • The Grand Master didn't convince Kandra to meet with them; Kandra had to convince the Jedi.
    • Adressed.
  • That's it; there are a couple of tiny wording tweaks to make, but nothing that isn't "sofixit"-worthy of me. (I didn't do a copy-edit since you still have the inuse tag up; do you have a preference of whether I do that now or after you nom it?) Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 15:14, April 11, 2012 (UTC)
    • Thanks.
  • Oh, and for the infobox: the mission to Klatooine and Jedi Queen project are concurrent with this duel, and IIRC the Funeral of Kenth Hamner is the last event before this one, so should go in the "prev=" field. Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 15:18, April 11, 2012 (UTC)
    • Done.
  • Sorry to message again, but: Trial of Tahiri Veila was actually also concurrent. Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 15:40, April 11, 2012 (UTC)
    • np. Done.
  • No problem :) Here's all I caught left: "Both sides were searching for the dark side entity Abeloth, which led to a duel between the two factions." I'm not entirely sure that's accurate; it was part of it, but there was also the fact that the Sith just wanted to kill the Skywalkers and capture Ves.
    • I agree but Annax's question about Abeloth makes me believe that finding her was at least a secondary goal. However, if you disagree I'm fine to change it.
      • Yeah, it was definitely a secondary goal, but it didn't lead to the duel. Her intent to kill the Skywalkers/capture Vestara led to the duel. Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 13:00, April 13, 2012 (UTC)
  • It might be enough to just say that Tola ordered her surrender and Ves refused (you could probably remove the bit saying they "exchanged some words").
    • Done.
  • Do we know for certain that the petty officer was only a former petty officer? Could Gavar not have just sent him down for this one mission without relieving him of his duty?
    • That's indeed false, it is only stated that he is a petty officer. Corrected.
  • I think you could put a bit more in the aftermath from the Sith perspective: maybe just give a brief mention that they then pushed forward with Operation Shieldfall. Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 14:23, April 12, 2012 (UTC)
    • Better?
      • Link for the confrontation please. :P And yep, a "one-against-one duel" works as a term (usually we say "one-on-one," but "one-against-one" works, too). Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 13:00, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Good article article

Hey, Lee. Thanks again for answering those questions I asked you a few weeks ago. The article that I wrote for Wookieepedia: NewsNet is now on the Main Page of Wookieepedia; check it out! Menkooroo 16:56, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

GAN Objections

Hey, Lee, just wanted to remind you that you have some objections on my GAN's for Ozurist, Galen Besk, and Vastil that are over three weeks old. I'd love it if you could take a look when you got a chance, and seeing as all three say "More to come", could you check if there are any other errors that catch your eye? Thanks. Cade Calrayn StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit 03:41, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Updated Ultimate Guide

Hello there, I'm not sure if you have a copy of Star Wars: The Ultimate Visual Guide: Updated and Expanded, but I was flipping through it and noticed that 2242 appears in it. Since he was your GAN, I figured I would bring it to your attention. Corellian PremierRobotechAll along the watchtower 21:32, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Unidentified Jedi General (Altyr V)

I got the feeling this passed unnoticed, so since you worte this article, would you maybe take a look at my objections concerning the source? Greetings, Jedi-Meister »!?« 12:25, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

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