Welcome, Gardek! Edit
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The main problem is that parts of it read sort of like an advertisement for the site. Constant references to "us"/"our" are unencyclopedic; there are also things like "SW" abbreviated, there are POV issues ("some hilarious HES members acting as go-go's wearing SW costumes were some of the activities the audience could enjoy"), unencyclopedic things like "and, of course, music of SW saga," etc. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 21:46, 16 July 2008 (UTC)
- OK, I've taken it into account. If you see more things that should be edited, just tell me, and I'd do my best to correct it. --Gardek 16:07, 17 July 2008 (UTC)
Can anyone help me with HTML in my user page?--Gardek 16:44, 17 July 2008 (UTC)