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Jang Li-Li[]

Things to do[]

  • Infobox-exclusive date.
    • Sorry. Not sure what this means? ToRsO bOy (talk) 15:18, 16 July 2021 (UTC)
      • It means the information is only presented in the infobox and nowhere else. Also, can this date be sourced directly to the novel? Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 15:39, 16 July 2021 (UTC)
        • Do you mean I need to mention the date of death in the body as well? The novel doesn't give an exact date, but it was within the same year as Jai Maruk and Maks Leem's deaths. ToRsO bOy (talk) 03:18, 17 July 2021 (UTC)
          • Yes, it must be included. Since the novel does not provide the date, you need to write a note explaining how it takes place in that year. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 09:13, 17 July 2021 (UTC)
  • Gender goes after species in writing.
  • Second paragraph in Biography can use a break.
  • Body can benefit from the inclusion of at least one image.
  • Information should be presented in chronological order; details leading up to Li-Li's death should be discussed before the death itself.
    • Edited. ToRsO bOy (talk) 15:18, 16 July 2021 (UTC)
      • What did Ventress use to shoot her ship? Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 15:43, 16 July 2021 (UTC)
        • Added mention of Assaj's starship. ToRsO bOy (talk) 03:18, 17 July 2021 (UTC)
  • Ref 2 needs to use {{CSWECite}}.
  • Unsourced BTS.
  • Abridged audiobook should be investigated for a mention.
    • Added. ToRsO bOy (talk) 15:18, 16 July 2021 (UTC)
      • Since the audiobook was released on the same day as the novel, the Mo template should be removed and the audiobook should be added as a simultaneous first mention using the preexisting {{1stm}} instead (follow the linked instructions) OOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 15:50, 16 July 2021 (UTC)
        • Only 1stm needs to be modified per Layout Guide, Mo can stay on the audiobook. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 16:38, 16 July 2021 (UTC)
          • To clarify, is there anything I need to do, or leave it as it is? ToRsO bOy (talk) 03:18, 17 July 2021 (UTC)
  • Location of death should be specified in the infobox. "Li-Li was flying her ship deep in space" Does this mean she died in deep-space? If so, then the infobox can be formatted like so
    • Edited. Didn't want to assume she was flying a Jedi Starfighter so I just put in starfighter. ToRsO bOy (talk) 15:25, 24 July 2021 (UTC)
  • Missing info on her being friends with Politrix, Leem wishing that she's safe and happy somewhere in the Force, and the whole vision about Jang as an eight year old.
    • Not sure adding her being friends with Politrix is relevant since it was only mentioned in one line. I did add the part about Leem wishing her to be one with the Force and happy, and making rainbows. ToRsO bOy (talk) 15:25, 24 July 2021 (UTC)
      • Even if it's only mentioned once, it's relevant to her character and thus should be mentioned in the article. OOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 15:36, 24 July 2021 (UTC)
  • The quotes and the context in which they were spoken should be detailed in the article body itself.
    • Added the 1st quote into the body, all other quotes are already mentioned. ToRsO bOy (talk) 15:25, 24 July 2021 (UTC)
  • Language should be varied. There's multiple instances of words such as "first," "during," and "striking."
    • Changed some of the words.ToRsO bOy (talk) 15:25, 24 July 2021 (UTC)
  • Everything should be in past tense, so the word "now" should be avoided in the article body.
  • Avoid copying the source's wording. There should be other ways to describe her "striking and steady" eyes.
  • Details of her lightsaber should go under the "Equipment" section (see WP:LG)
    • Equipment section added. ToRsO bOy (talk) 15:25, 24 July 2021 (UTC)
  • Powers and abilities section: "Amongst other things" Can this be elaborated on further? OOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 11:31, 24 July 2021 (UTC)
    • Removed the wording. I thought it was a good way to connect the next sentence.ToRsO bOy (talk) 15:25, 24 July 2021 (UTC)
  • Can now use subsections.
  • Precise BBY date not needed in body.
  • Last Biography paragraphs can use a break. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 19:00, 31 July 2021 (UTC)

Removal of GA status[]

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