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Jang Li-Li[]
Things to do[]
- Infobox-exclusive date.
- Sorry. Not sure what this means? ToRsO bOy (talk) 15:18, 16 July 2021 (UTC)
- It means the information is only presented in the infobox and nowhere else. Also, can this date be sourced directly to the novel? UberSoldat93 (talk) 15:39, 16 July 2021 (UTC)
- Do you mean I need to mention the date of death in the body as well? The novel doesn't give an exact date, but it was within the same year as Jai Maruk and Maks Leem's deaths. ToRsO bOy (talk) 03:18, 17 July 2021 (UTC)
- Yes, it must be included. Since the novel does not provide the date, you need to write a note explaining how it takes place in that year. UberSoldat93 (talk) 09:13, 17 July 2021 (UTC)
- Do you mean I need to mention the date of death in the body as well? The novel doesn't give an exact date, but it was within the same year as Jai Maruk and Maks Leem's deaths. ToRsO bOy (talk) 03:18, 17 July 2021 (UTC)
- It means the information is only presented in the infobox and nowhere else. Also, can this date be sourced directly to the novel? UberSoldat93 (talk) 15:39, 16 July 2021 (UTC)
- Sorry. Not sure what this means? ToRsO bOy (talk) 15:18, 16 July 2021 (UTC)
- Gender goes after species in writing.
- Second paragraph in Biography can use a break.
- Body can benefit from the inclusion of at least one image.
- Information should be presented in chronological order; details leading up to Li-Li's death should be discussed before the death itself.
- Ref 2 needs to use {{CSWECite}}.
- Unsourced BTS.
- Abridged audiobook should be investigated for a mention.
- Added. ToRsO bOy (talk) 15:18, 16 July 2021 (UTC)
- Since the audiobook was released on the same day as the novel, the Mo template should be removed and the audiobook should be added as a simultaneous first mention using the preexisting {{1stm}} instead (follow the linked instructions) OOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 15:50, 16 July 2021 (UTC)
- Only 1stm needs to be modified per Layout Guide, Mo can stay on the audiobook. UberSoldat93 (talk) 16:38, 16 July 2021 (UTC)
- Since the audiobook was released on the same day as the novel, the Mo template should be removed and the audiobook should be added as a simultaneous first mention using the preexisting {{1stm}} instead (follow the linked instructions) OOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 15:50, 16 July 2021 (UTC)
- Added. ToRsO bOy (talk) 15:18, 16 July 2021 (UTC)
- Location of death should be specified in the infobox. "Li-Li was flying her ship deep in space" Does this mean she died in deep-space? If so, then the infobox can be formatted like so
- Missing info on her being friends with Politrix, Leem wishing that she's safe and happy somewhere in the Force, and the whole vision about Jang as an eight year old.
- The quotes and the context in which they were spoken should be detailed in the article body itself.
- Language should be varied. There's multiple instances of words such as "first," "during," and "striking."
- Everything should be in past tense, so the word "now" should be avoided in the article body.
- Avoid copying the source's wording. There should be other ways to describe her "striking and steady" eyes.
- Details of her lightsaber should go under the "Equipment" section (see WP:LG)
- Powers and abilities section: "Amongst other things" Can this be elaborated on further? OOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 11:31, 24 July 2021 (UTC)
- Can now use subsections.
- Precise BBY date not needed in body.
- Last Biography paragraphs can use a break. UberSoldat93 (talk) 19:00, 31 July 2021 (UTC)
Removal of GA status[]
- Placed on probation at Meeting 141. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:29, 3 July 2021 (UTC)
- Probation extended at Meeting 142. Imperators II(Talk) 13:21, 3 August 2021 (UTC)
- Status kept at Meeting 143. MasterFred(talk) 04:44, 3 September 2021 (UTC)