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Meeting 120
Americas
UTC−12	07:00 Saturday, September 28
UTC−11	08:00 Saturday, September 28
UTC−10 (Hawaii)	09:00 Saturday, September 28
UTC−9	10:00 Saturday, September 28
UTC−8 (AKDT)	11:00 Saturday, September 28
UTC−7 (PDT)	12:00 Saturday, September 28
UTC−6 (MDT)	13:00 Saturday, September 28
UTC−5 (CDT)	14:00 Saturday, September 28
UTC−4 (EDT)	15:00 Saturday, September 28
UTC−3 (ADT)	16:00 Saturday, September 28
UTC−2	17:00 Saturday, September 28
Europe and Africa
UTC−1	18:00 Saturday, September 28
UTC/GMT	19:00 Saturday, September 28
UTC+1 (BST)	20:00 Saturday, September 28
UTC+2 (CEST)	21:00 Saturday, September 28
Asia and Oceania
UTC+3 (EEST)	22:00 Saturday, September 28
UTC+4	23:00 Saturday, September 28
UTC+5	00:00 Sunday, September 29
UTC+6	01:00 Sunday, September 29
UTC+7	02:00 Sunday, September 29
UTC+8 (AWST)	03:00 Sunday, September 29
UTC+9 (KST)	04:00 Sunday, September 29
UTC+10 (AEST)	05:00 Sunday, September 29
UTC+11	06:00 Sunday, September 29
UTC+12 (NZST)	07:00 Sunday, September 29

[Source]

Ladies and gentlemen, welcome aboard this Chandrila Star Line flight AC120 to Probetown. We are completely on schedule today, with departure set for September 28 at 3 PM ET / 7 PM UTC and we will begin boarding shortly at gate 120, so please have your passport and boarding card ready. We will begin boarding with our AgriCorps Elite members, followed by the rest of the boarding groups. On behalf of Chandrila Star Line, I wish you all a very pleasant flight with us today.

AC120 • Probetown • Gate 120 • GO TO GATE

Boarding group 1

• Daimlo (diff • review)
• Vuchelle (diff • review)
• Boles Roor/Legends (diff • review)
• Baxton (diff • review)
• Zinn Toa/Legends (diff • review)
• Tol Cressa (diff • review)
• R3-T6/Legends (diff • review)
• Roo-Roo Page/Legends (diff • review)
• Jik'Tal (diff • review)
• Jarvashqiine (diff • review)

Boarding group 2

Expand as needed. Passenger manifest.

• Dawn Pyramid of Aargau
  • Article was never checked for possible update from Jewel of Yavin
  • Underlinking, particularly in reference notes
  • The Description section should omit mentioning OOU grid coordinates
  • The use of double reference notes in the intro for the year and Sharu seems unnecessary. All of that information can be combined into a single note.
  • BTS unsourced. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:03, September 24, 2019 (UTC)
• Transe Decar
  • As straightforward as it is, reference 2 should really make some kind of basic explanation with source evidence that 2 ABY precedes 3 ABY.
  • The article says that Zaloriis is in the Outer Rim, which is apparently incorrect. The Atlas Online Companion places Zaloriis in the Expansion Region.
  • Can Darth Vader being "the Dark Lord of the Sith and Supreme Commander of the Imperial Fleet, who had been hunting the Alliance Fleet since the loss of the Empire's planet-destroying superweapon, the Death Star, at the Battle of Yavin." all actually be sourced to Galactic Battlegrounds? The Supreme Commander part is particularly suspect.
  • How do we know he was "unafraid"? He could have privately been shaking in his boots. Extrapolation isn't good. "Decar was unafraid to betray the Empire"
  • Portions of the P/T should be moved into an Equipment section. I would also like to see that section detail his uniform a little more. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:30, September 24, 2019 (UTC)
• Teelo Vang
  • I would suggest removing the following from this article:
    • "...an ecumenopolis located in the Coruscant sector of the Core Worlds." This is unnecessary fluff that adds no real extra significance to the article subject.
    • "Given that Teelo Vang is only mentioned in passing, there is no indication of either gender or species. Of the five individuals who received promotions in The Admiral's List, Vang was the only one not given an entry in The Complete Star Wars Encyclopedia." Trivial BTS fluff.
      • The removal of this content places the article at 246 words, by my count.
  • The 3963 BBY date can't be sourced to "The Admiral's List." Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 20:33, September 25, 2019 (UTC)
• Owen Delstar
  • I would suggest removing the following from this article as unnecessary fluff that adds no real extra significance to the article subject: "...an ecumenopolis located in the Coruscant sector of the Core Worlds." Likewise, describing Coruscant as "the capital planet" can't be sourced to "The Admiral's List."
    • The removal of this content places the article at 246 words, by my count.
  • The 3963 BBY date can't be sourced to "The Admiral's List." Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 20:33, September 25, 2019 (UTC)
• Bask Modl
  • I would suggest removing the following from this article:
    • "...a high-gravity world of rocky islands, located in the Inner Rim." This is unnecessary fluff that adds no real extra significance to the article subject.
    • "Modl was a courageous soldier, and consequently recognized by the Republic Navy for his heroic efforts during the Onslaught." This is unnecessary extrapolation and regurgitation for the sake of populating a P/T section. Nothing in the source says Modl was a courageous soldier.
    • "Given that Bask Modl is only mentioned in passing, there is no indication of his species; however, Bestine has elsewhere been described as having Human colonists, albeit in a period 4,000 years after these events." Unnecessary theorizing.
      • The removal of this content places the article at 229 words, by my count.
  • The 3963 BBY date can't be sourced to "The Admiral's List." Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 20:33, September 25, 2019 (UTC)
• Dias Athacorr
  • I would suggest removing the following from this article:
    • "...a snowy world located in the Colonies." This is unnecessary fluff that adds no real extra significance to the article subject.
    • "While the original source only gave Athacorr a homeworld, The Complete Star Wars Encyclopedia specified the officer was of the Arkanian species." It's not necessary to detail and document in the BTS every new piece of information created by a source.
      • The removal of this content places the article at 242 words, by my count.
  • The 3963 BBY date can't be sourced to "The Admiral's List." Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 21:09, September 25, 2019 (UTC)
• Jerrit
  • I would suggest removing the following from this article:
    • "...an ocean-covered planet located in the Calamari sector of the Outer Rim Territories." This is unnecessary fluff that adds no real extra significance to the article subject.
    • "Jerrit was a courageous soldier, and consequently recognized by the Republic Navy for his heroic efforts during the Onslaught." Nothing in the cited source says Jerrit was a courageous soldier.
    • "In the original source, Jerrit was not given either a species or gender; however, a subsequent entry in The Complete Star Wars Encyclopedia specified both." It's not necessary to detail and document in the BTS every new piece of information created by a source.
  • The 3963 BBY date can't be sourced to "The Admiral's List." Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 21:09, September 25, 2019 (UTC)
• Gor/Legends
  • Essential Reader's Companion can't be used as a straight source for the 22 BBY date.
  • The History section is well suited for being subdivided into two subsections of two paragraphs each, which will allow for another quote and image.
  • It would be appropriate to mention the episode air date for his first appearance in TCW.
  • Half of the BTS is not sourced.
  • The BTS image is weirdly placed between the first and second subsections, which should be revised.
  • Likewise, the P/T image should be placed in a more natural position below that section's quote. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 21:41, September 25, 2019 (UTC)
• Geoff f'Tuhns
  • 1 BBY can't be sourced to "The Stormtrooper's Tale"
  • General underlinking, and article needs to avoid linking to disambiguation pages
  • BTS things:
  • Unsourced
    • Format short story title correctly
    • Mention author
    • Remove the Essential Guide to Characters sentence as unnecessary
  • Reference note needs to implement {{Shortstory}}. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 21:41, September 25, 2019 (UTC)
• Kulless
  • Why does the intro refer to species as just "Kulless" while the rest of the article uses "the Kulless"?
  • General underlinking
  • This is really just unnecessary and doesn't add any extra significance to the article subject: "...region of the galaxy and in the general region of the Dragonflower Nebula"
  • In accordance with the Layout Guide, much of the History section should be moved into a "[Species] in the galaxy" section.
  • BTS is unsourced and can just remove the CSWE sentence.
  • Reference 2 should avoid combining multiple sources
  • Reference 4 needs to avoid citing page numbers, per WP:S
  • 24 BBY can't be sourced straight to the video game. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 21:41, September 25, 2019 (UTC)

Final call

Expand as needed.

• 1000+-word GAs that are grandfathered in. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 23:50, September 25, 2019 (UTC)

Welcome aboard

Business class cabin

1. Imperators II^(Talk) 13:48, August 28, 2019 (UTC)
2. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 17:58, August 28, 2019 (UTC)
3. MasterFred^(Whatever) 22:57, August 28, 2019 (UTC)
4. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 23:51, August 28, 2019 (UTC)
5. Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:57, September 8, 2019 (UTC)

Flying cattle class

1. I'm going to be out of town that weekend. I'll leave notes closer to the meeting.--Exiled Jedi (talk) 18:38, September 7, 2019 (UTC)
2. 1358 ^(Talk) 19:33, September 18, 2019 (UTC)

Travel magazine readings

Seat 1A

• Kill all the old, probe all the new. Imperators gets my vote on anything else. 1358 ^(Talk) 16:36, September 27, 2019 (UTC)

Seat 1B

• Kill all of the old articles.
• Probe all of the new articles.
• Tope gets my vote for anything else that comes up.--Exiled Jedi (talk) 04:49, September 28, 2019 (UTC)

But I don't want to sit by the window

• Per above gentlemen. Imperators II^(Talk) 08:35, September 28, 2019 (UTC)

Minutes

• Log
• Paperwork duties: Exiledjedi

Attendance

• AnilSerifoglu
• Ayrehead02
• Master Fredcerique
• Tommy9281
• Toprawa and Ralltiir
• Xd1358

Articles that had their status removed

• Daimlo
• Vuchelle
• Boles Roor/Legends
• Baxton
• Zinn Toa/Legends
• Tol Cressa
• R3-T6
• Roo-Roo Page/Legends
• Jik'Tal
• Jarvashqiine

Articles that were up for review, but were not voted on

• Jev Sunrider

Articles that were put on probation

• Dawn Pyramid of Aargau
• Transe Decar
• Teelo Vang
• Owen Delstar
• Bask Modl
• Dias Athacorr
• Jerrit
• Gor/Legends
• Geoff f'Tuhns
• Kulless

Other items

• 1000+ words GAs are no longer grandfathered in and are subject to probation and removal.
• AgriCorps adopts the Inq policy on meeting attendance.