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Unidentified assassin droid series

Things to do

• {{1stm}} merits a BTS mention.
  • Added. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 15:56, February 25, 2018 (UTC)
• Missing infobox parameters.
  • Reloaded the infobox. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 15:56, February 25, 2018 (UTC)
• Infobox image needs to be replaced or cropped to be more centered. MasterFred^(Whatever) 08:52, February 20, 2018 (UTC)
  • Image replaced. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 21:05, February 24, 2018 (UTC)
• "When the Trade Federation invaded the planet Naboo in the year 32 BBY in response to a trade dispute," — this, except just the date part, should be referenced to a source that mentions the assassin droids, for example, Star Wars: Obi-Wan, if the game mentions the invasion was in response to a trade dispute. Imperators II^(Talk) 11:38, February 26, 2018 (UTC)
  • Additional ref added. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 22:47, March 5, 2018 (UTC)
• "the assassin droids were deployed" — this begs context. Deployed where? Imperators II^(Talk) 11:38, February 26, 2018 (UTC)
  • Planet-wide, it seems. Context added. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 22:47, March 5, 2018 (UTC)
• Can the name of OOM-series battle droids really be sourced to the game? Imperators II^(Talk) 11:38, February 26, 2018 (UTC)
  • I suppose not; added ref. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 22:47, March 5, 2018 (UTC)
• It needs to be specified that "non-canon" is with respect to Legends. Imperators II^(Talk) 11:38, February 26, 2018 (UTC)
  • How's that? Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 22:47, March 5, 2018 (UTC)
• "Obi-Wan Kenobi destroyed the droid." — this is a really awkward sentence that I feel fails to properly give context for Kenobi. In fact, I'd argue most of History should receive some smoothing of writing. Imperators II^(Talk) 11:38, February 26, 2018 (UTC)
  • Should flow better. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 22:47, March 5, 2018 (UTC)
• "This," "these" and the like should be avoided in IU sections, as they imply present tense. Imperators II^(Talk) 11:38, February 26, 2018 (UTC)
  • Removed. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 22:47, March 5, 2018 (UTC)
• "An assassin droid had its first encounter with the Jedi Knights" — was it really stated in the game that Kenobi and Jinn were the first Jedi encountered by the droid series ever? If not, this should be reworded. Imperators II^(Talk) 11:38, February 26, 2018 (UTC)
  • Implied by the header quote. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 22:47, March 5, 2018 (UTC)

Removal of GA status

• Placed on probation at Meeting 101. MasterFred^(Whatever) 08:52, February 20, 2018 (UTC)
• Status kept at Meeting 102. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 22:21, March 10, 2018 (UTC)

Comments

I reviewed the history of the release in Insider 57 - which date should we consider to be released? Sent to subscribers in Nov, official release date Dec 1, and internal dating is Jan/Feb 2002. That will affect the "1st" tag. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 21:05, February 24, 2018 (UTC)

• The official newsstand date should always be used for magazines. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 22:46, February 24, 2018 (UTC)