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Pioku system

• Nominated by: Imperators II^(Talk) 21:55, September 10, 2019 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:

(3 ECs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 02:26, September 11, 2019 (UTC)
2. Ayrehead02 (talk) 20:23, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
3. --DarthRuiz30 (talk) 20:48, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
4. —spookywilloww^talk 12:12, September 15, 2019 (UTC)
5. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 06:27, September 16, 2019 (UTC)

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Ayrehead

• I think you can mention that the conflict must have taken place prior to 0 BBY since that's when Tagge dies. Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:13, September 12, 2019 (UTC)
  • Added both no-earlier-than and no-later-than dates. Imperators II^(Talk) 19:02, September 13, 2019 (UTC)

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Droid laser turret

• Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:56, September 12, 2019 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Chronologically, the first kills in the series goes to this thing.

(3 ECs/3 Users/6 Total)

Support

1. Fan26 (Talk) 14:39, September 12, 2019 (UTC)
2. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 16:05, September 12, 2019 (UTC)
3. Zed42 (talk) 08:52, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
4. --DarthRuiz30 (talk) 20:43, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
5. --Editoronthewiki (talk) 20:43, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
6. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 07:32, September 16, 2019 (UTC)

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AV

• I know the Journeys games are difficult to access these days (the Radiant VII's destruction isn't featured, though I'm unsure if it's mentioned in the profiles section), but have you checked the PT Graphic Novel for an appearance of the droid laser turret? I know the Radiant VII appears in that. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 23:35, September 12, 2019 (UTC)
  • I think you can actually see most of the Journeys stuff on Youtube. The graphic novel skips the ship's destruction. Ayrehead02 (talk) 23:42, September 12, 2019 (UTC)

Comments

Do we need to add this droid to Trade Federation Droid Army?--Editoronthewiki (talk) 16:50, September 12, 2019 (UTC)

• Since it's a stationary part of a starship I didn't treat it as such. Ayrehead02 (talk) 22:09, September 12, 2019 (UTC)

Gungan whistle

• Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:37, September 12, 2019 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: I wasted a lot of time looking for this in the Gungan parade before spotting it in the battle

(3 ECs/3 Users/6 Total)

Support

1. --Lewisr (talk) 16:41, September 12, 2019 (UTC)
2. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 17:15, September 12, 2019 (UTC)
3. Fan26 (Talk) 22:46, September 12, 2019 (UTC)
4. Zed42 (talk) 08:52, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
5. --DarthRuiz30 (talk) 20:45, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
6. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 07:33, September 16, 2019 (UTC)

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Fan

• I feel like I'm nitpicking here, but is it clear in the movie that the whistle is to signal the retreat? Fan26 (Talk) 16:57, September 12, 2019 (UTC)
  • I mean he sees the shield generator explode, blows the whistle and as soon as he blows it everyone turns and begins to retreat. I'd say it's pretty unambiguous that's what's happening. Ayrehead02 (talk) 22:08, September 12, 2019 (UTC)
    • Fair enough. Fan26 (Talk) 22:46, September 12, 2019 (UTC)

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Shirb system

• Nominated by: OtterSurf (talk) 08:33, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:

(2 ECs/0 Users/2 Total)

Support

1. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 02:11, September 15, 2019 (UTC)
2. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 12:53, September 16, 2019 (UTC)

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Zed

• The grid coordinates should be mentioned in the BTS since that's currently infobox-exclusive.
  • Done. OtterSurf (talk) 09:04, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
• This article formerly stated that the system was located on the Celanon Spur, as do the New Holgha and Celanon Spur articles. Is there a reason why it was removed?
  • I checked TEA, and it only lists Ciutric as being on the Spur. OtterSurf (talk) 09:00, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
• Is there a date for the invasion?
  • Added. OtterSurf (talk) 09:00, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
  • Done better. OtterSurf (talk) 09:14, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
    • The evidence in the reference note could still technically mean that the invasion happened in 26 ABY, if the start of the Yuuzhan Vong invasion occurred near the end of the year. Zed42 (talk) 09:28, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
      • The way I read it from the Chronology, the invasion began more or less at the start of 25 ABY. OtterSurf (talk) 11:00, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
• The BTS should also include the publication dates of the sources mentioned. Zed42 (talk) 08:50, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
  • Done. OtterSurf (talk) 09:02, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
• You can use the {{ID}} template rather than {{C}} in the Sources section. Zed42 (talk) 09:28, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
  • Done. OtterSurf (talk) 10:57, September 13, 2019 (UTC)

Imp

• The Essential Atlas places the Shirb system in grid square N-5 and designates that entire square as part of the New Territories. This must be reflected in the infobox and the body. Imperators II^(Talk) 12:41, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
  • Done. OtterSurf (talk) 13:46, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
    • Right now, you're referencing "that contained the world of New Holgha" to the Online Companion. That doesn't work. Imperators II^(Talk) 16:21, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
      • Fixed. OtterSurf (talk) 17:16, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
• Please upload an image for the infobox and create an image category for it. The Yuuzhan Vong War maps of the Atlas depict the system, and I'd go with one of the maps depicting the latter phases of the conflict given they show the system's environs more clearly. Imperators II^(Talk) 12:41, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
  • Done. OtterSurf (talk) 13:58, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
    • I'm not seeing the image category. Imperators II^(Talk) 16:21, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
      • Never mind, it should be category of images of New Holgha. Imperators II^(Talk) 17:01, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
• Also, those maps clearly place the system on the Celanon Spur. Imperators II^(Talk) 12:41, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
  • Yup. OtterSurf (talk) 13:46, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
    • This is not reflected in the article proper. Imperators II^(Talk) 16:21, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
      • Done. OtterSurf (talk) 17:06, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
        • Context for the hyperlane, please. Imperators II^(Talk) 17:11, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
          • Fixed. OtterSurf (talk) 17:40, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
• There's ample precedent on our site, when describing a star system, to mention any known arrivals/departures in/from that system. For example, if Boba Fett: A Practical Man mentions Boba Fett was on New Holgha, you should mention that Fett traveled to New Holgha. Imperators II^(Talk) 12:41, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
  • Mm-hm. OtterSurf (talk) 13:46, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
• The Atlas listing the Shirb system as "New Holgha" in the Appendix is not "incorrect". It is named like that for convenience, and that's not meant to replace the system's canonical name. See here. Therefore, that bit should be removed from the BTS. Imperators II^(Talk) 12:41, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
  • Done. OtterSurf (talk) 13:46, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
• The mention of the Online Companion in the BTS adds no new information and should be removed. Imperators II^(Talk) 12:41, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
  • Fixed. OtterSurf (talk) 13:46, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
• Context for Boba Fett. Imperators II^(Talk) 16:21, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
  • Done. OtterSurf (talk) 17:00, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
    • I'd prefer something clearer to the casual reader who might not be well-versed in Mando'a, i.e., leader of the Mandalorian Protectors or something to that effect. Imperators II^(Talk) 17:05, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
      • Clarified. OtterSurf (talk) 17:41, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
        • You can pipelink to Manda'lor there. Imperators II^(Talk) 17:47, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
        • You've added a redirecting link there. I suggest you go to your Preferences and enable highlighting all redirects. That will allow you to see when you're adding redirects in the future. Imperators II^(Talk) 17:47, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
          • Fixed. OtterSurf (talk) 17:51, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
• Please see item No. 5 here regarding the first sentence of the article. Imperators II^(Talk) 16:21, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
• The Atlas Yuuzhan Vong War maps contain information that should be reflected: 1) in the Affiliation field of the article's infobox, and 2) as an affiliation category for the article. Imperators II^(Talk) 16:21, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
  • Added. OtterSurf (talk) 17:07, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
    • Regarding categorization, the same goes for Yuuzhan Vong. Imperators II^(Talk) 17:11, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
      • There's no such category. OtterSurf (talk) 17:35, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
        • That means you should create it. Imperators II^(Talk) 17:38, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
          • Created! OtterSurf (talk) 17:45, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
            • Good, now go back to that category you've created and 1) add an appropriate category to that category, and 2) add more (at least one more) pages to that category. Imperators II^(Talk) 17:49, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
              • Done and done. Think I've found a new addiction. OtterSurf (talk) 17:57, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
• The table of contents should only be utilized when there are sections in the in-universe sections of the article. Since this article only has out-of-universe (BTS and further) sections, you should hide the TOC by specifying {{Eras|type=legends|notoc=1}}. Imperators II^(Talk) 16:21, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
  • Done! OtterSurf (talk) 17:00, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
• The semi-colon is unnecessary in this article, please make do without it. Imperators II^(Talk) 16:21, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
  • Fixed. OtterSurf (talk) 16:58, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
• I can't find the mention of the Shirb system in the New Essential Chronology. Could you provide the page number please? Imperators II^(Talk) 16:53, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
  • I added it as a source because of the 25 ABY information. If it's not apropos I'll remove it. OtterSurf (talk) 16:58, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
    • That's not how the Sources section on our site works, OtterSurf. You only list media under Appearances/Sources if they actually feature/mention the article's subject. Imperators II^(Talk) 17:05, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
      • I'll fix it. OtterSurf (talk) 17:07, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
• The lead sentence is too long, please split it up. I feel like any mention of the objects contained within the system should follow the description of where the system is located, anyway. Imperators II^(Talk) 17:51, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
  • Fixed. OtterSurf (talk) 18:00, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
• Please mention what systems the Shirb system was immediately linked to via the hyperlane. Imperators II^(Talk) 18:19, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
  • Done. OtterSurf (talk) 18:50, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
    • Please change the mentions of the planets to mentions of star systems, as I requested on my original objection. The Atlas doesn't provide information on those worlds, just their systems. Imperators II^(Talk) 18:59, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
      • Done. OtterSurf (talk) 19:06, September 13, 2019 (UTC)

Fan

• "It was invaded by the Yuuzhan Vong during their invasion of the galaxy in 25 ABY." You use a form of invade twice in one sentence. I think the battle pipelink can be switched to "attacked" or something similar. Fan26 (Talk) 17:22, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
  • Done. OtterSurf (talk) 17:37, September 13, 2019 (UTC)

Anil

• Does the novella confirm that the Shirb system, or the planet New Holgha, was aligned with the New Republic? If so, it should be reflected in the article as well. The system's NR allegiance is only mentioned in the article's infobox and categories anyway. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 21:18, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
  • It does state that the New Republic didn't act on Mandalorian intel to defend or evacuate the planet, so the New Republic was at least supposedly responsible for protecting New Holgha. There's no assertion that it was independent, either. OtterSurf (talk) 08:54, September 14, 2019 (UTC)
  • I've reflected this as best I can in the article. OtterSurf (talk) 09:22, September 14, 2019 (UTC)
    • I'm afraid that doesn't satisfy my objection. The New Republic failing to protect a planet doesn't mean the world was a member of the Republic. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 17:22, September 14, 2019 (UTC)
      • I'll remove it then. There's no other info. OtterSurf (talk) 17:23, September 14, 2019 (UTC)

AV

• I'd mention in the body that the Shirb system was also known as the New Holgha system, per The Essential Atlas and Online Companion. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 21:34, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
  • Sorry to interject here, but the names from the Appendix and Online Companion are not meant to override previously canonically established names. Imperators II^(Talk) 06:01, September 14, 2019 (UTC)
    • So we don't consider these names to exist in-universe? - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 06:25, September 14, 2019 (UTC)
      • We do for systems that don't have canonical names established elsewhere. Imperators II^(Talk) 07:26, September 14, 2019 (UTC)
        • While I still believe that these alternate Atlas names are valid, though definitely not what an article title should sit at, that's a discussion for another time so I'll strike this objection. —Unsigned comment by AV-6R7 (talk • contribs).
• The CSWE entry for New Holgha specifies that it's a planet, so the article should be updated to reflect that. In case you don't have that source, it's volume II, page 374, and the entry is called "New Holgha". - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 22:08, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
  • I have it, but thanks anyway. Done. OtterSurf (talk) 08:59, September 14, 2019 (UTC)
    • I'm going to repeat what I told you above, OtterSurf. You only list a medium under Sources if it actually mentions the subject. Imperators II^(Talk) 09:10, September 14, 2019 (UTC)
      • I could do without people giving me the wrong information. OtterSurf (talk) 09:39, September 14, 2019 (UTC)
        • First off, you just said yourself that you have the book, so you have absolutely no right to accuse other users of providing you with "wrong" information that you could just have checked yourself. Secondly, I believe you're misreading AV's objection, as it has to do with updating the article body's wording. Imperators II^(Talk) 09:48, September 14, 2019 (UTC)
          • I see an objection and I act on it. I thought that was how this was supposed to work. In any case, I've already specified that New Holgha was a planet. OtterSurf (talk) 09:56, September 14, 2019 (UTC)

QGJ

• "Vong" was considered a derogatory term by the Yuuzhan Vong species, therefore its usage violates WP:NPOV. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 07:47, September 16, 2019 (UTC)
  • Fixed. OtterSurf (talk) 08:03, September 16, 2019 (UTC)

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Sivad

• Nominated by: Zed42 (talk) 09:31, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:

(3 ECs/2 Users/5 Total)

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1. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 14:03, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
2. Fan26 (Talk) 17:25, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
3. --DarthRuiz30 (talk) 20:51, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
4. —spookywilloww^talk 16:51, September 14, 2019 (UTC)
5. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 07:49, September 16, 2019 (UTC)

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Sindee's refueling station

• Nominated by OtterSurf (talk) 12:16, September 14, 2019 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:

(4 ECs/0 Users/4 Total)

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1. Imperators II^(Talk) 10:05, September 15, 2019 (UTC)
2. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 11:35, September 15, 2019 (UTC)
3. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 08:26, September 16, 2019 (UTC)
4. Fan26 (Talk) 14:11, September 16, 2019 (UTC)

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Imp

• "bound for Ord Gertoth" — is this phrase from the SW.com article what you're basing the "somewhere between R-Duba and Ord Gertoth" on? Because that's not enough. Ord Gertoth could just as easily have been, say, in the same direction from the station as R-Duba. For all we know, Gertoth could have even been on the other side of the galaxy from the station. Imperators II^(Talk) 12:40, September 14, 2019 (UTC)
  • Removed. OtterSurf (talk) 12:51, September 14, 2019 (UTC)
• Isn't there some way to narrow down the "during the early years of the Galactic Empire" to at least a range of dates? Surely the Droids series is dated, and maybe there's some indication as to where the appearance of the station was with the respect to the series? Imperators II^(Talk) 12:40, September 14, 2019 (UTC)
  • Done. OtterSurf (talk) 13:26, September 14, 2019 (UTC)

Anil

• (Reviewing note) "One-man" literally means "just one individual," so that's not an error.
  • I'll correct that. OtterSurf (talk) 07:05, September 15, 2019 (UTC)
  • Nevermind. Thanks! OtterSurf (talk) 08:17, September 15, 2019 (UTC)
• I personally believe that an article should be named as "unidentified" as last resort, so I think the article would do better at Sindee's refueling station. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 23:49, September 14, 2019 (UTC)
  • I was thinking that as well. Move? OtterSurf (talk) 07:05, September 15, 2019 (UTC)
  • Done. OtterSurf (talk) 08:16, September 15, 2019 (UTC)

Fan

• I think the second sentence can be broken up into two; one about the droids getting abandoned and one about R2 learning dejarik. Fan26 (Talk) 23:12, September 15, 2019 (UTC)
  • Done. OtterSurf (talk) 08:09, September 16, 2019 (UTC)

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Unidentified Sullustan farmer

• Nominated by: —spookywilloww^talk 22:50, September 15, 2019 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:

(1 ECs/0 Users/1 Total)

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1. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 02:19, September 16, 2019 (UTC)

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Fan

• I think you can just say 'Months after...' at the beginning of the second sentence. Fan26 (Talk) 23:05, September 15, 2019 (UTC)
  • Actually, since the date ref firmly places the events of the novel in 34 ABY, I think the mention of the Hosnian Cataclysm can be removed since it doesn't seem necessary in the context. Fan26 (Talk) 23:08, September 15, 2019 (UTC)
    • Think this'll work.—spookywilloww^talk 23:49, September 15, 2019 (UTC)
      • In my experience, it's only been necessary to say "By such-and-such year' if the event cannot be concretely determined to take place in that year and might take place prior to it. Unless I'm wrong, I think it could be changed, as the book is proven to take place in 34 ABY. Fan26 (Talk) 13:03, September 16, 2019 (UTC)
        • Altered; took out that 34 ABY entirely to work in two objections in one sentence tweak, since it's also mentioned later on.—spookywilloww^talk 18:41, September 16, 2019 (UTC)

QGJ

• She was born in 21 ABY. Such a short sentence feels choppy and doesn't flow well. See if you can integrate it better with the rest of the text. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 12:56, September 16, 2019 (UTC)
  • Amended.—spookywilloww^talk 18:41, September 16, 2019 (UTC)

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Tourani system

• Nominated by: Imperators II^(Talk) 19:21, September 16, 2019 (UTC)
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(1 ECs/0 Users/1 Total)

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1. Fan26 (Talk) 19:25, September 16, 2019 (UTC)

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V'shar system

• Nominated by: Imperators II^(Talk) 19:21, September 16, 2019 (UTC)
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Marzoon system

• Nominated by: Imperators II^(Talk) 19:22, September 16, 2019 (UTC)
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