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This page is for Comprehensive article nominations. A Comprehensive article is an article that adheres to certain quality standards but cannot reach Good or Featured status due to its limited content. On this page, users can nominate articles that they believe are ready to be reviewed to achieve Comprehensive status.

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Limestone

(0 ECs/3 Users/3 Total)

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Support

  1. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 12:27, 26 August 2021 (UTC)
  2. Manoof (talk) 05:46, 28 August 2021 (UTC)
  3. Dentface (talk) 06:17, 5 September 2021 (UTC)

Object

Calcium carbonate
  • The quote from Aphra 2 should be included.
  • "Limestone could be confused with marble." I don't see how Detta's quote confuses the two, rather than says both are similar to bone. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 10:30, 26 August 2021 (UTC)
    • Both done, thanks! LucaRoR (Talk) 11:21, 26 August 2021 (UTC)
Manoof
  • Should there be an external link to wikipedia's limestone article? Manoof (talk) 13:57, 26 August 2021 (UTC)
    • Done (It was my first time using {{BookCite}}, it is possible that I've made a mistake, even though I've paid attention to do it correctly). LucaRoR (Talk) 14:41, 26 August 2021 (UTC)
      • Looks good! I actually meant you could add the wikipedia article for limestone under an External Link section, per WP:Layout Guide ;) Manoof (talk) 13:12, 27 August 2021 (UTC)
        • Oh right, added! LucaRoR (Talk) 13:43, 27 August 2021 (UTC)
  • As a stone, this should be in the Mineral category rather than Substance. Manoof (talk) 13:57, 26 August 2021 (UTC)
    • I'm not sure how this category works, but in real life stones and minerals are different things. In a stone (usually) there are minerals, but that doesn't make it a mineral. It's possible that the category minerals includes stones and I haven't noticed, though. LucaRoR (Talk) 14:41, 26 August 2021 (UTC)
      • You have stone in the infobox. Stone is in the minerals category, which is a subcategory of substance. If limestone is a stone and stone is a mineral then limestone is also a mineral. Also we always go with the subcategory. Manoof (talk) 13:12, 27 August 2021 (UTC)
        • Added, even though maybe I've expressed myself wrongly. A stone is composed by minerals and other substances, this doesn't make a stone a mineral. Is like water is made by Oxygen and Hydrogen , this doesn't mean that water is Oxygen, at least not completely. ;) LucaRoR (Talk) 13:42, 27 August 2021 (UTC)
Lewis
  • Sources such as the databank entry for Bogano, and trailers that depict the limestone are currently missing from the page. Regarding this also, unless you can see the limestone in an earlier trailer, this one for Cal's Mission currently would be the 1stp for limestone, so this would need to be reflected in the BTS Lewisr (talk) 15:47, 26 August 2021 (UTC)
    • I've checked all the official trailers, only in the one already linked by you limestone could be seen. Added to sources and updated the BTS. LucaRoR (Talk) 18:16, 26 August 2021 (UTC)
      • Sources are added in release order, except for the databank which is always at the bottom of the list Lewisr (talk) 20:26, 26 August 2021 (UTC)
        • Done, and fixed the BTS. LucaRoR (Talk) 10:25, 27 August 2021 (UTC)
Fan
  • Canon is doublelinked.
  • In the BTS you shouldn't format the Canto Bight short story like in the "Apperances" section. This is part of the article body, not a list, so it should say that Hear Nothing, See Nothing, Say Nothing is part of the Canto Bight novella collection. Fan26 (Talk) 02:31, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
    • Both done, thanks! LucaRoR (Talk) 04:26, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
      • I'm nitpicking here, I'm aware, but the short story was only part of the novella collection published in 2017, not published in the novella collection published in 2017. Fan26 (Talk) 02:11, 3 September 2021 (UTC)
Dent
Pastastone
  • Canto Bight is missing from the infobox.
  • The 3 ABY date ref says that the stone appeared in DA #2, but appearances says it was mentioned. Which is it?
  • Audiobook should not be mentioned in the bts.
  • Please link to Wikipedia by using Fandom's linking feature like this: limestone. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 23:42, 6 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Context and author for the TLJ dictionary.
  • Why nothing in the bts on the deleted scene? JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 16:28, 12 September 2021 (UTC)
    • How's that? LucaRoR CIS roundel.svg (Talk) 17:43, 12 September 2021 (UTC)
      • Please reference it to a source that contains the scene. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 23:33, 14 September 2021 (UTC)
        • Done. Could someone remeber me how I ended up nominating a CAN with 13 refernces? :P LucaRoR CIS roundel.svg (Talk) 05:18, 15 September 2021 (UTC)
          • That video needs to be listed in sources if it mentions/pictures the subject. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 02:55, 23 September 2021 (UTC)
            • Oh dang it, added, thanks. LucaRoR CIS roundel.svg (Talk) 19:20, 23 September 2021 (UTC)
OOM
  • The subject could probably use an image category OOM 224 20:58, 26 September 2021 (UTC)
    • Created and added. LucaRoR CIS roundel.svg (Talk) 04:49, 27 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments

  • Big thanks to Lewisr for all the sources he's checked for me! LucaRoR (Talk) 17:58, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
  • I need to check a couple more appearances/sources that Dentface kindly brought to my attention. When finished I will strike this comment. LucaRoR (Talk) 16:38, 31 August 2021 (UTC)


4-LOM's programmer

  • Nominated by: Liverpool92Ackbar HS.jpg 12:29, 2 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:
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(2 ECs/2 Users/4 Total)

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Support

  1. ECvote.png JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 23:30, 9 September 2021 (UTC)
  2. ECvote.png Commander Code-8 Hello There! 00:53, 18 September 2021 (UTC)
  3. Great job, thank the Maker! Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:22, 18 September 2021 (UTC)
  4. LucaRoR CIS roundel.svg (Talk) 11:23, 18 September 2021 (UTC)

Object

CC-8
  • Please bold change the bolding to the word individual and link Programmer
  • The date reference needs to say which events and source are being dated. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 01:35, 7 September 2021 (UTC)
    • Fixed.--Liverpool92Ackbar HS.jpg 02:59, 7 September 2021 (UTC)
      • I was meaning something more like this for the date. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 08:05, 7 September 2021 (UTC)
        • I don't see why when BMF states it as 9 BBY. There's also then no way to prove that it would takes place in exactly 9 BBY then if we don't use this way.--Liverpool92Ackbar HS.jpg 10:32, 7 September 2021 (UTC)
          • So the Helmet Collection states directly that Powered Down Part II takes place in 9 BBY rather than the events? In that case the wording would need to be along the lines of "Helmet collection places Powered Down Part II, which includes 4-LOM's recollection of his programmer, in 9 BBY." Commander Code-8 Hello There! 10:14, 8 September 2021 (UTC)
            • Yes there is an image of it shared on discord Lewisr sent it. Fixed.--Liverpool92Ackbar HS.jpg 11:17, 8 September 2021 (UTC)
              • Powered Down is not mentioned by name in that image, so the ref note still needs to be done like the first example I gave. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 06:34, 10 September 2021 (UTC)
                • It dates the whole run in with Han and Chewie too 9 BBY.--Liverpool92Ackbar HS.jpg 03:29, 11 September 2021 (UTC)
                  • That doesn't change the need for an expanded ref note like I've been describing. If the Helmet Collection directly mentioned 4-LOM's programmer the note as currently written would probably be suitable, but since it doesn't it just needs a little extension to say something along the lines of "Star Wars Helmet Collection 78 places the events of "Powered Down, Part II," which include 4-LOM's recollection of his programmer, in 9 BBY." Commander Code-8 Hello There! 12:02, 11 September 2021 (UTC)
                    • Lew sent me another screenshot of helmet collection that mentions the programmer. I'll dm it.-Liverpool92Ackbar HS.jpg 03:23, 12 September 2021 (UTC)
Manoof
  • Can we add some context on why 4-LOM reminisced about his programmer - that the legend was true. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 10:22, 16 September 2021 (UTC)
OOM
  • 4-LOM's programming is quite relevant to this article. OOM 224 21:07, 19 September 2021 (UTC)
    • What exactly do you want me to say?--Liverpool92Ackbar HS.jpg 00:50, 23 September 2021 (UTC)
      • You'll want to detail some information about 4-LOM's programming here OOM 224 20:26, 26 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments

3743 BBY

  • Nominated by: Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:53, 2 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: After the failed TC and clarification, I thought I'd work to bring it up to status.
  • WookieeProject (optional):

(1 ECs/0 Users/1 Total)

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Support

  1. ECvote.png Imperators II(Talk) 07:48, 27 September 2021 (UTC)

Object

Imp
  • Please fill in the relevant information in the infobox.
    • If you mean the events field, per the template "events: Key events during the year. Do not include every birth, death, or battle." hence why I didn't include it? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 13:16, 9 September 2021 (UTC)
      • Surely you should include a death if it is the only known event occurring in that year.
        • Ok no worries, I'm assuming that there were no other issues with the other fields Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:52, 10 September 2021 (UTC)
          • Remember that all the fields in infoboxes need to be sourced.
  • "Inter-Sith Wars period" is a conjectural title, so please do not use it in the article prose as-is.
    • Removed Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 13:16, 9 September 2021 (UTC)
      • That's not what I meant - it still has to be mentioned, otherwise it's infobox-exclusive. What I meant was you shouldn't use that exact capitalized term, but instead use something along "the time period between X and Y." Imperators II(Talk) 13:32, 9 September 2021 (UTC)
        • Ok, it's a bit awkward using the dates but it doesn't look right without them. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:52, 10 September 2021 (UTC)
  • The last sentence of the body doesn't really make sense grammatically, can you rework it? Imperators II(Talk) 09:43, 9 September 2021 (UTC)
    • Re-wrote it Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 13:16, 9 September 2021 (UTC)
      • "perished when the cargo bay of his starship and approximately four hundred of the queen's brood consumed them" — so both the queen's brood and the cargo bay consumed them?
        • Cargo ship hungry! Rewrote and fixed this Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 03:32, 22 September 2021 (UTC)
  • In addition, I'd like for you to try and reorder the information from TOR so that it's presented in chronological order. i.e., Hetuu and the Hutt did this and that, then something happened, and then they died. Imperators II(Talk) 14:41, 20 September 2021 (UTC)
    • Done Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 03:32, 22 September 2021 (UTC)
  • I've taken a look at the source myself, and I see you're missing info on the aftermath of the year's events - information that on older, longer year status articles would be placed into the Impact section. Imperators II(Talk) 14:16, 24 September 2021 (UTC)
    • Added the origination of the phrase and it's enduring for a century. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:26, 26 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Goodnight, But Not Goodbye

  • Nominated by: Liverpool92Ackbar HS.jpg 05:34, 4 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: zzzzzzzz
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(2 ECs/3 Users/5 Total)

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Support

  1. ECvote.png Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 17:06, 20 September 2021 (UTC)
  2. LucaRoR CIS roundel.svg (Talk) 21:27, 24 September 2021 (UTC)
  3. Now canonize Ackmena singing it. Immi Thrax RainbowRebellion2.png (talk) 08:50, 25 September 2021 (UTC)
  4. ECvote.png JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 00:22, 27 September 2021 (UTC)
  5. Erebus Chronus (Talk) 01:31, 27 September 2021 (UTC)

Object

Luca, but not RoR
Pasta, But Not Noodles
  • I'm assuming that we don't know who considered it top five. If that is indeed the case, I think the word "considered" can just be removed.
  • Both sources mentioned in the bts should only mention the release year. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 03:45, 10 September 2021 (UTC)
    • Both fixed.--Liverpool92Ackbar HS.jpg 03:01, 11 September 2021 (UTC)
      • Release years should be self-sourcing. Please investigate both sources to make sure. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 23:35, 14 September 2021 (UTC)
        • What do you mean I think I already did that.--Liverpool92Ackbar HS.jpg 21:20, 17 September 2021 (UTC)
          • It would suprise me if AEYNTK does not have its release year in it, which would make the {{DK}} ref unnecessary. Is that year present in the book? JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 03:11, 23 September 2021 (UTC)
            • Yeah it was just something I missed.--Liverpool92Ackbar HS.jpg 00:44, 24 September 2021 (UTC)
CC-8
  • Music should be in the media type section of the infobox rather than genre
  • Quotation marks should be used around the title in the infobox
  • Could the band go in the authors field of the infobox as well?
  • Should specify that the holiday special was a television film
  • Might be worth saying that in Legends it was sung by Ackmena. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 01:37, 27 September 2021 (UTC)
    • All handled.--Liverpool92Ackbar HS.jpg 00:39, 28 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments

  • It needs an infobox. Specifically, this one: {{IU media}}. SilverSunbird (talk) 05:41, 4 September 2021 (UTC)
    • Thanks I didn't even know that was an infobox.--Liverpool92Ackbar HS.jpg 14:44, 4 September 2021 (UTC)


T-ST

  • Nominated by: Dat1899 (talk) 20:30, 16 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Thank you to User:Green tentacle and others for their help.
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(0 ECs/0 Users/0 Total)

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Object

OOM
  • Please vary the language in the prose. For instance, I count seven instances of "it" in the body alone. OOM 224 20:32, 16 September 2021 (UTC)
    • I reduced to "it"s to a minimum, anything else I could fix in relation to language?--Dat1899 (talk) 15:51, 17 September 2021 (UTC)
      • That's a lot better, thank you. Nothing more on language from me for now.
  • What is "Rebel Alliance Outpost"? Is there an existing article for whichever outpost this is referring to, or should a new article be created? OOM 224 16:26, 17 September 2021 (UTC)
    • The outpost featured in the combat training mission. I honestly don think it needs an article, given most of the other minor TIE Fighter locations currently don't. And for an outpost, it's really just a combination of several ships, nothing more.--Dat1899 (talk) 16:31, 17 September 2021 (UTC)
      • If it's unnamed and not significant to the plot then it's not notable and thus should not deserve an article. However, why is "Rebel Alliance Outpost" capitalised that way? OOM 224 16:34, 17 September 2021 (UTC)
        • No idea, but I uncapitalized the "outpost", if it helps.--Dat1899 (talk) 16:38, 17 September 2021 (UTC)
Erebus
Vergence
  • Welcome to the CAN! Is Utility Tug the correct capitalization, or is Utility tug? Both are used in the article.
    • it is "Utility Tug"--Dat1899 (talk) 15:53, 17 September 2021 (UTC)
  • I the BTS should be expanded slightly to explain the "third combat chamber mission of the TIE Bomber." As someone unfamiliar with the game, it is not really clear to me what it is. VergenceScatter (talk) 20:41, 16 September 2021 (UTC)
    • I created a quick explanation in the BTS Section, just to clear things up.--Dat1899 (talk) 15:53, 17 September 2021 (UTC)
Shayanomer
  • As I mentioned to you in Discord, I would like to see the referencing for ship specifications updated to match status article precedent. Here's one example, more can be found here and here. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 17:26, 20 September 2021 (UTC)
    • I'm not sure if I should tinker with that or not, as Glas, a TIE Fighter status article lists the ship's specs in the body as well.--Dat1899 (talk) 18:30, 21 September 2021 (UTC)
      • That article doesn't do it properly, the specifications shouldn't just be plainly referenced to other sources that the subject doesn't appear in. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 18:36, 21 September 2021 (UTC)
        • That has to be taken care of then. In the mean time, I will make adjustments to comply with your objection.--Dat1899 (talk) 18:40, 21 September 2021 (UTC)
          • I didn't ask you to remove information from the body. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 18:43, 21 September 2021 (UTC)
            • Misunderstanding. How does it look now? Is this the way?--Dat1899 (talk) 18:49, 21 September 2021 (UTC)
              • Take a look at the referencing for ship specifications in these GAs as an example. This is what I want to see. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 18:54, 21 September 2021 (UTC)
            • Well I hope this was done correctly. If not then I'm really sorry. Do you have any other objections?--Dat1899 (talk)
              • I'm afraid not. What I want to see is a note like this for example. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 19:48, 21 September 2021 (UTC)
              • Any better now? I tried to replicate that particular note. I'm sorry if this is bothering you. I just want to know if I did right.--Dat1899 (talk) 20:13, 21 September 2021 (UTC)
                • Getting closer. Now you may have noticed that we don't really specify the manufacturer for individual ships belonging to a ship class, which is what I want you to do here as well. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 14:55, 23 September 2021 (UTC)
              • Ok, take alook now.--Dat1899 (talk) 19:21, 23 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Imperial Pay Station RMH-1973

  • Nominated by: Cade StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg Calrayn 16:55, 18 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:TOR

(2 ECs/1 Users/3 Total)

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Support

  1. ECvote.png Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 08:07, 25 September 2021 (UTC)
  2. Immi Thrax RainbowRebellion2.png (talk) 08:59, 25 September 2021 (UTC)
  3. ECvote.png Commander Code-8 Hello There! 13:16, 26 September 2021 (UTC)

Object

Shayanomer
  • If the first mention of the subject does not use its proper name, then it's an indirect mention. (Example) Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 17:07, 18 September 2021 (UTC)
OOM
  • This should be updated to reflect what's been done to the raid article OOM 224 20:27, 26 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments

  • Suggested rewording rather than a solid objection: I think the last sentences might work better as this: "A few years prior[1] to 3643 BBY,[3] the criminals Beryl Thorne and Risha Drayen orchestrated an armed heist of the pay station. The heist went sour; Thorne was captured,[1] and the Treasury Department issued a bounty of one million credits on "Risha Xanthous," the alias that Drayen was using at the time.[2]" Immi Thrax RainbowRebellion2.png (talk) 08:57, 25 September 2021 (UTC)


Imperial Treasury Department

  • Nominated by: Cade StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg Calrayn 16:56, 18 September 2021 (UTC)
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Support

  1. LucaRoR CIS roundel.svg (Talk) 06:08, 19 September 2021 (UTC)
  2. ECvote.png Commander Code-8 Hello There! 04:39, 23 September 2021 (UTC)
  3. ECvote.png Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 15:01, 23 September 2021 (UTC)
  4. ECvote.png Fan26 (Talk) 19:08, 27 September 2021 (UTC)

Object

Imperail Luca Department
  • You have double-referencing issure here: "and Beryl Thorne[2] a few years before[2]"
    • Result of some moving stuff around earlier. Fixed
  • Since Star Wars: The Old Republic came out before the Encyclopedia, shouldn't it be (First mentioned)? LucaRoR CIS roundel.svg (Talk) 20:26, 18 September 2021 (UTC)
    • .... huh. Someone added that in my hiatus; updated accordingly. Cade StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg Calrayn 01:08, 19 September 2021 (UTC)
Fan
  • Is that quote in the BtS because it only occurs if the player choses a certain conversation option, or does it only occur if the player is a Bounty hunter during that flashpoint? Fan26 (Talk) 15:49, 20 September 2021 (UTC)
    • Both, but primarily the latter. Cade StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg Calrayn 19:10, 20 September 2021 (UTC)
OOM
  • Same as the paystation CAN OOM 224 20:30, 26 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Reed flute

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  1. LucaRoR CIS roundel.svg (Talk) 13:14, 23 September 2021 (UTC)

Object

Luca
  • Since Star Wars: Absolutely Everything You Need to Know and Star Wars: Absolutely Everything You Need to Know, Updated and Expanded provide the same information, we usually refernce to the newest media, so you should change your referencing.
  • Author is required in the BTS.
  • You should add (Mentioned only) to Star Wars: Absolutely Everything You Need to Know, Updated and Expanded.
  • Does Star Wars: Absolutely Everything You Need to Know provide all that context for the Ewoks and for the moon of Endor?
  • These appearances and sources should be investigated for a mention.
  • Since there is no Legends counterpart, saying Star Wars Canon is redundant in the BTS. LucaRoR CIS roundel.svg (Talk) 05:57, 19 September 2021 (UTC)
CC-8
  • I've created a disambiguation page for Reed which should be linked in an otheruses template on this article Commander Code-8 Hello There! 13:39, 26 September 2021 (UTC)
OOM
  • Missing a couple of links OOM 224 21:02, 26 September 2021 (UTC)
  • AEYNTK says woodwinds such as this and the bird whistle make up the Ewok orchestra. This is significant info so it should be included.
  • It's obvious that the image to the right of the mention of reed flute in AEYNTK depicts a reed flute, even just by process of elimination—it's not a drum, it's not a trumpet, not a bird whistle nor xylophone nor an Ewok. Also, reed flutes exist in real-life, so it'd be appropiate to mention them here. Following up on this, I'd also mention reed (plant) and have a hunt of the instrument by going through the Endor scenes in ROTJ. OOM 224 21:15, 26 September 2021 (UTC)

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Purong

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  1. Great work! Hope to see a lot more out of this book. (I'd change the BTS a bit, but that is just my personal taste). LucaRoR CIS roundel.svg (Talk) 18:03, 20 September 2021 (UTC)
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Lucorng
  • Does Purong appear in ANH? Otherwise you should change your referencing.
  • City can be linked.
  • The BTS is unrefernced.
  • You need year of release for the The Mos Eisley Cantina Pop-Up Book.
  • I'd avoid using brackets, but it is just a stylistic choice (commas are better) and the "only" is unnecessary.
  • As Yakov pointed out, please provide an image (if they appear) or change the (First appearance) to (First mentioned) (if they don't). LucaRoR CIS roundel.svg (Talk) 05:46, 19 September 2021 (UTC)
    • Not sure, I will check on that. I think it's Bom Vimdin, which is where confusion comes from. The ANH reference was meant to work for Mos Eisley and Tatooine.
    • Yes, linked city.
    • Does the BTS referencing look good?
    • Removed brackets and 'only'.
    • There is an image, and I am looking into getting that sorted. Jade Moonstroller (talk) 15:19, 19 September 2021 (UTC)
      • You can probably reference the last senetnce to The Mos Esiley Cantina Pop-Up Book too. LucaRoR CIS roundel.svg (Talk) 15:45, 19 September 2021 (UTC)
  • As Imperators pointed out on Discord, the last two senetences of the BTS should be deleted since they are speculation. LucaRoR CIS roundel.svg (Talk) 17:37, 19 September 2021 (UTC)
Fan
  • "The Mos Eisley Cantina Pop-Up Book was released in 1995 and was written by Kevin J. Anderson and Rebecca Moesta and was illustrated by Ralph McQuarrie." Those repeated "and"s break up the sentence, condensing the information and using commas would work better. Fan26 (Talk) 18:06, 20 September 2021 (UTC)
    • Bingo bango, that does improve the flow for sure! Jade Moonstroller (talk) 18:46, 20 September 2021 (UTC)
      • I've condensed it further. Fan26 (Talk) 02:03, 21 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Missing links in date ref. Fan26 (Talk) 02:03, 21 September 2021 (UTC)
    • Alright alright, there we go! Jade Moonstroller (talk) 03:22, 21 September 2021 (UTC)
      • Still missing one or two links Fan26 (Talk) 03:38, 21 September 2021 (UTC)
        • Was the answer Death? Do I get a gold star or are there still links to find? It's like a search-and-find puzzle. Jade Moonstroller (talk) 03:42, 21 September 2021 (UTC)
          • You also missed Cantina/Legends, but good work nonetheless. Have yuour gold star :P Fan26 (Talk) 23:38, 21 September 2021 (UTC)
CC-8
  • The pale skin is infobox exclusive
  • Should specify that Purong used a blaster and some of the clothing should be described
  • Purong should be mentioned in the first sentence of the Bts to be consistent with the way other status articles are written Commander Code-8 Hello There! 04:50, 23 September 2021 (UTC)

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  • Is there any picture available? If not, I’ll vote in support immediately. If so, please add it. — YakovChaimTzvi ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol.svg (talk) 04:34, 19 September 2021 (UTC)


Grizmallti civil war/Legends

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Shayanomer
  • Article sources the expedition being in the middle of the war to Galactic Battlegrounds, which doesn't seem to be listed in Sources. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 09:36, 25 September 2021 (UTC)

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Hym Jemuro

  • Nominated by: DarthRuiz30 (talk) 04:20, 22 September 2021 (UTC)
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  1. ECvote.png Yeah, look at this guy! So bad for distrusting former soldiers of an authoritarian empire whose list of rulers consists entirely of mass-murdering psychopaths. How dare he! Fan26 (Talk) 03:21, 23 September 2021 (UTC)
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CC-8
  • Per the MoS rank titles shouldn't be capitalized when they aren't immediately preceeding a character's name
    • Removed
  • Might be worth specifying that the Eternal Alliance were the ones who fought the Eternal Empire, as a reader might not realize those are opposing factions Commander Code-8 Hello There! 02:00, 27 September 2021 (UTC)

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Blue-milk pancakes

  • Nominated by: D MCCG D MCCG.png (chat) 01:48, 23 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Galaxy's Edge better add this to their menu.

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Fan
  • We should be able to date this.
    • I'll start to work on a date note. ~ D MCCG D MCCG.png (chat) 10:39, 23 September 2021 (UTC)
    • Done. ~ D MCCG D MCCG.png (chat) 00:05, 24 September 2021 (UTC)
      • Please provide sourcing for the date note's assertion of the dates the films take place in, thanks. Fan26 (Talk) 15:07, 25 September 2021 (UTC)
        • Done ~ D MCCG D MCCG.png (chat) 18:19, 25 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Contextualise Derlin as a major of the alliance please. Fan26 (Talk) 03:25, 23 September 2021 (UTC)
    • Done, thanks. ~ D MCCG D MCCG.png (chat) 10:39, 23 September 2021 (UTC)
      • "...rescued Major of the Rebel Alliance, Bren Derlin," Just saying "Rebel Alliance Major Bren Derlin" is much less wordy. Fan26 (Talk) 15:07, 25 September 2021 (UTC)
        • Done. ~ D MCCG D MCCG.png (chat) 18:19, 25 September 2021 (UTC)
Blue Immi
  • Article is in the present tense--please change to past! (In the process of doing that, contractions should be eliminated.)
    • Done. ~ D MCCG D MCCG.png (chat) 18:19, 25 September 2021 (UTC)
      • The article is still in present tense where Kordi Freemaker comes in.
  • I often see mentions of blue milk followed by a mention of where it comes from, but is LEGO blue milk known to come from LEGO banthas? If so...
    • Done ~ D MCCG D MCCG.png (chat) 18:19, 25 September 2021 (UTC)
  • I'd suggest revising the second sentence for clarity, perhaps by splitting it, since right now it interrupts the topic of RO-GR and Hondo to explain the StarScavenger. Please let me know if you'd like specific suggestions on how to reword it.
    • I would like specific suggestions on how you want me to reword it. ~ D MCCG D MCCG.png (chat) 18:19, 25 September 2021 (UTC)
      • Here's a possibility: "In 4 ABY,[2] the Weequay pirate Hondo Ohnaka appeared on the starship called the StarScavenger that was owned by the B1-series battle droid R0-GR and his family of scavengers. R0-GR asked Ohnaka why he was on the StarScavenger, and Ohnaka said that the Freemakers sent him on a blue milk run." Immi Thrax RainbowRebellion2.png (talk) 04:17, 26 September 2021 (UTC)
        • Thanks for the suggestion, done. ~ D MCCG D MCCG.png (chat) 20:09, 26 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Right now, there's a Legends article for blue milk run but not a canon equivalent. Immi Thrax RainbowRebellion2.png (talk) 09:14, 25 September 2021 (UTC)
    • Since the canon blue milk run appeared in Battlefront II: Inferno Squad, I don't know what it is because I do not have the book, so I can't make the page because I don't have any info on it. ~ D MCCG D MCCG.png (chat) 18:19, 25 September 2021 (UTC)
      • If using the phrase "blue milk run" is important for this article, I'm sorry to say it'll likely mean having a redlink. Perhaps someone familiar with other uses of the phrase in canon could assist you with making that. Immi Thrax RainbowRebellion2.png (talk) 04:17, 26 September 2021 (UTC)
        • I'll try to get some more info and work on the page. ~ D MCCG D MCCG.png (chat) 20:09, 26 September 2021 (UTC)

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Neekoflight Pie

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Panna cake

  • Nominated by: JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 03:09, 23 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Continuing this mini-restoration project
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Rainbow Berry Pie

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Rainbow Immi
  • I'm finding the chronology on this confusing. Did Zephee make a rainbow berry pie for a particular Harvest Moon Feast, and at another time he made one with berries his children found? Or did the children find berries that he used for the Harvest Moon Feast? Immi Thrax RainbowRebellion2.png (talk) 09:22, 25 September 2021 (UTC)
    • Now that you mention it, the berries found by the woklings is kinda implied to be used in the pies but not explicitly connected, so I've removed that mention. Any better? Also, note that Zephee is a she. :) JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 02:54, 26 September 2021 (UTC)
      • Oop, confused her with someone else! Better, but still unclear to me if this was two events or one? If they're the same event, maybe reword "That night," to "At the Harvest Moon Feast that night,", or restructure in a different way: use the first paragraph to just describe the pie in general (ingredients, event it would be made for, no mention of Zephee) then the second for the particular time Zephee made one. Immi Thrax RainbowRebellion2.png (talk) 04:04, 26 September 2021 (UTC)
        • Gave it a couple tweaks. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 04:14, 26 September 2021 (UTC)
          • Almost there! For better ~flow~, I suggest switching the order of ideas in the first sentence, such as: "Rainbow Berry Bie was an Ewok pie made with rainbow berries. Ewoks on the Forest Moon of Endor made it and consumed it during their Harvest Moon Feast." Then you have the second paragraph as-is. Immi Thrax RainbowRebellion2.png (talk) 04:23, 26 September 2021 (UTC)

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Constant

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Jenny Parks

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Dentface
  • Maybe an introductory quote? Just glancing at the source for your quote in the body, it looks like Parks was quoted a decent amount. Also, please take note of my copy edit. Dentface (talk) 13:52, 23 September 2021 (UTC)
    • I added one, let me know if it's suitable. Note taken... I think! Immi Thrax RainbowRebellion2.png (talk) 14:15, 23 September 2021 (UTC)
Fan
  • Would that image of kneesa kicking imperial butt work in her Bio? Fan26 (Talk) 02:40, 24 September 2021 (UTC)
    • Not sure if it works, but have a look. Immi Thrax RainbowRebellion2.png (talk) 02:52, 24 September 2021 (UTC)
Macaroni

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  • Although she has an image category, she only has one image. Do I keep the Mediacat template for a single image?
    • I would say yes. Fan26 (Talk) 02:41, 24 September 2021 (UTC)
    • Seconded. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 21:04, 24 September 2021 (UTC)
      • Imagecat template should go, per recent CA/GA precedence: Kowakian crumb cake, Jerus Jannick, and Corrupter OOM 224 20:44, 26 September 2021 (UTC)
      • As for the reasoning, since the article here already features that one image listed in the category, it's more or less what Imp said for those first two articles I've linked: "the reader sees the imagecat link, which implicitly says "click here to see all images of this Canon subject" and then the category is all "lol nope there's only that one image"" OOM 224 20:48, 26 September 2021 (UTC)
        • I don't see an issue linking it since the category does exist, and it doesn't have an image that doesn't pertain to the article subject like Jannick would, but I'm fine either way. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 03:45, 27 September 2021 (UTC)


8t88

  • Nominated by: Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 09:00, 23 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Something made me look at the legends version and was surprised to see the was a canon version
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:FFGAMES I guess?

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LtCA
  • Per Manual of Style we avoid using the pronoun "they" for individuals of unspecified gender.
    • Can you please be specific, the only use of the pronoun "them" is clearly referring to the human that was double crossed. The human is a male by appearance so I can change it to "him" if needed. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 15:20, 23 September 2021 (UTC)
      • Yeah, I was talking about that, you can either change it to "him" if you're sure that he is male, or reword the snetnce to remove the pronoun. (Signed a few minutes late) LucaRoR CIS roundel.svg (Talk) 15:51, 23 September 2021 (UTC)
        • Done Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 20:49, 23 September 2021 (UTC)
  • In the BTS first sentence, you should probably specify "in the new Canon" or "in the Star Wars Canon." Also, can the fact that he was voiced by Denny Delk be refernced to the game itself? LucaRoR CIS roundel.svg (Talk) 13:53, 23 September 2021 (UTC)
    • Given that the canon continuity is default and this IS a star wars site, I don't believe either is correct and it simply serves to distinguish from Legends material. Denny is in the game credits. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 15:20, 23 September 2021 (UTC)
      • Done Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 20:49, 23 September 2021 (UTC)
  • You should link him and don't link it in BTS to avoid a double-link.
    • Oop good catch Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:34, 26 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Has 8t88 masculine programming? If yes, it should be reflected in the body, if no, you should use the pronoun "it" in the BTS when referring to 8t88 (obviously only when discussing Canon). LucaRoR CIS roundel.svg (Talk) 06:22, 25 September 2021 (UTC)
    • Thought I fixed this when I got the answer on Discord :) Canon 8t88 = gender unspecified. Legends 8t88 = male. Should be ok now :) Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:34, 26 September 2021 (UTC)
D MCCG
  • On the 8t88 card it says 8t88 is a mercenary, so add the category Mercenaries and say that 8t88 was a mercenary in the body. ~ D MCCG D MCCG.png (chat) 18:29, 25 September 2021 (UTC)
    • Oh, good catch. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:42, 26 September 2021 (UTC)
Fan
  • Please italicise the Jedi Knight game.
    • Done, missed it with the ref right there too. How embarrassing! Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:42, 26 September 2021 (UTC)
  • "where he was a main villain voiced by Denny Delk." I'm nitpicking over the wording here-it almost makes it sound like he was one of several villains all voiced by Denny Delk. Would you mind rewording this? Fan26 (Talk) 00:33, 26 September 2021 (UTC)
    • I think that's better, let me know :) Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:42, 26 September 2021 (UTC)

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Blatterborn

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Kalarba pirates

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Tofen's Raiders

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Fan
  • I wouldn't say "Ace pilot unit" is really a military unit type; I think the infobox should just say that it's a pilot unit. Fan26 (Talk) 01:12, 26 September 2021 (UTC)

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Viv Tanner

  • Nominated by: Dentface (talk) 15:10, 23 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:
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  1. Yay for seeing another real person article in the CAN, and of course, yay for a WP:PRIDE to support :) Immi Thrax RainbowRebellion2.png (talk) 15:25, 25 September 2021 (UTC)

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Vergence
Immi Thrax
  • Please include a page quote related to their work on the book—doesn't have to be from a Lucasfilm source :)
  • I spotted a couple of duplicate links to unlink. Do you have "Highlight duplicate links" enabled? If not, we have some instructions in Discord that can be searched for, super helpful tool. Immi Thrax RainbowRebellion2.png (talk) 09:27, 25 September 2021 (UTC)
    • Quote: Not much out there, but I did find a small one. Added.
    • Yeah, I do have highlight duplicate links enabled, I'm just a dum dum and didn't check before CANing this page. :') Fixed now. Dentface (talk) 14:16, 25 September 2021 (UTC)
  • There's a bumping happening with the Qi'ra image and the Published works header. See what option you like for de-bumping it (change size, change alignment, position higher...) Immi Thrax RainbowRebellion2.png (talk) 15:15, 25 September 2021 (UTC)
    • Moved to the right. Better? Dentface (talk) 15:21, 25 September 2021 (UTC)

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Bettok

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Hanod system

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Harrandarr

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Yrica Quell's boyfriend

  • Nominated by: YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his) ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol.svg (talk) 21:12, 23 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Immi Thrax told me this article is under the scope of WP:PRIDE 🏳️‍🌈❤️ And it’s Bi visibility day and Yrica had at least one male and at least one female partner :)
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Luca
  • The article is almost an exact copy of this. Changing the wording a bit would be nice. : ) LucaRoR CIS roundel.svg (Talk) 21:32, 24 September 2021 (UTC)
    • Better now, or do you prefer more differences? — YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his) ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol.svg (talk) 06:20, 26 September 2021 (UTC)
      • Much better! LucaRoR CIS roundel.svg (Talk) 07:26, 26 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Is there no quote? I'm thinking about the one in which Yrica Quell tells to the droid that she is willing to discuss her first boyfriend. Not owning the book, however, I'm not sure. LucaRoR CIS roundel.svg (Talk) 07:26, 26 September 2021 (UTC)
Immi Thrax, called out

Obligatory review ;)

  • The first sentence and the second sentence have ideas that belong together to explain what makes him the "last" boyfriend (the last before her defection, the last relative to the particular conversation, rather than the definitely last ever boyfriend). I'd like to see either the word "last" not used in the first, or bring those ideas together, please. Immi Thrax RainbowRebellion2.png (talk) 09:32, 25 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Might want to clarify that Quell told the droid she was willing/claimed to be willing to discuss anything... (that wasn't actually true) Immi Thrax RainbowRebellion2.png (talk) 02:59, 26 September 2021 (UTC)
    • Good catch! Addressed — YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his) ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol.svg (talk) 03:17, 26 September 2021 (UTC)

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Air shrimp

  • Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:06, 24 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Someone requested some information checked on the talk page, so thought I might as well finish the article up while checking sources
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  1. Air shrimp gumbo, air shrimp creole... Immi Thrax RainbowRebellion2.png (talk) 15:19, 25 September 2021 (UTC)
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Shayanomer
  • New Edition should be cited if it contains the same info as the original. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 09:16, 24 September 2021 (UTC)
Immi Shrimps
  • Does Galactic Atlas state that their eyes are brown? I don't think that can be concluded from the illustration, if that's what's being used for the color.
    • Huh they looked brown to me, but eye dropper reveals that they're black. Changed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:38, 25 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Grammar-related things: "predators like the rawwk which would chase air shrimp schools" should be either "predators like the rawwk, which would chase air shrimp schools" or "predators like the rawwk that would chase air shrimp schools". The phrase "travelers tales"—"travelers' tales" if it's multiple travelers or "a traveler's tales" if it was one.
  • The details about their schools would suit the first paragraph (describing them) better than the second (history). Immi Thrax RainbowRebellion2.png (talk) 09:42, 25 September 2021 (UTC)
    • Hmm, I generally try and go for a more even split but it's not too bad here so done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:38, 25 September 2021 (UTC)

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Crab glider

  • Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:43, 24 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Might as well do a few of the other easy Atlas creatures
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  1. I hope to not think about these horrors again! Immi Thrax RainbowRebellion2.png (talk) 15:23, 25 September 2021 (UTC)
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Immi Thrax

What the heck do not want

  • The sentence sentence either needs a commn between "upper atmosphere" and "it attracted" or needs to be restructured.
  • As with my air shrimps note, I don't think eye color can be concluded from the illustration, if that's what's being used for it. Similarly, the lighter patch isn't coming off as "brown" to me.
    • Changed the colors, how's it look now? Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:46, 25 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Air shrimps-style again, the descriptive info currently in the second paragraph would fit better in that first paragraph. Immi Thrax RainbowRebellion2.png (talk) 09:48, 25 September 2021 (UTC)

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Rawwk

  • Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:47, 24 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Last of the CAN length Bespin creatures from Atlas
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Immi Thrax
  • The feedback I gave on the other two (about the paragraphs) applies to this one, too :)
  • The infobox says they have "tan" skin and "tan and blue" feathers, sourced to Galactic Atlas, but the article body states they are "blue-and-red" per USWNE. Please reconcile this. Immi Thrax RainbowRebellion2.png (talk) 09:51, 25 September 2021 (UTC)
    • USWNE just has "blue and red tipped rawwks" without any further context for what it's referring to which is why I've left it vague in the article and stuck to the coloration we have context for in the infobox. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:43, 25 September 2021 (UTC)
      • Perhaps in behind the scenes as a discrepancy? Right now, it strikes me as a conflict, but that may be because it's the first set of colors presented in the body, rather than those from the infobox. Immi Thrax RainbowRebellion2.png (talk) 15:22, 25 September 2021 (UTC)

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Karavis system

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  • Is that sentence about the Battle of Endor really neccesary info? Fan26 (Talk) 00:25, 26 September 2021 (UTC)
    • Yes, because it specifies the time for the mission to Miko - while the Empire was preparing for the Battle of Endor. Imperators II(Talk) 07:42, 26 September 2021 (UTC)
      • I must be missing something here, because to me that seems like unnecesarry context-the article could just say that the attack on Miko happened in 4 ABY Fan26 (Talk) 21:03, 26 September 2021 (UTC)
        • I've shortened it a bit and integrated it so that it better connects with the bit directly concerning the system. Imperators II(Talk) 21:14, 26 September 2021 (UTC)

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Viril Shu

  • Nominated by: Cade StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg Calrayn 14:59, 25 September 2021 (UTC)
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  1. LucaRoR CIS roundel.svg (Talk) 15:12, 25 September 2021 (UTC)
  2. ECvote.png Fan26 (Talk) 23:43, 25 September 2021 (UTC)

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Luca
  • Giving a date to the Galactic War would be nice.
    • It's a lengthy war, that's never been a requirement before. It's sufficient to just use it as a time period.
      • I just asked that because, as it is now, the article has no dates, but I get your point. LucaRoR CIS roundel.svg (Talk) 15:12, 25 September 2021 (UTC)
  • The fact that Viril Shu was male should be clarified. (If it is not sure, Category:Males should be removed.) LucaRoR CIS roundel.svg (Talk) 15:05, 25 September 2021 (UTC)
    • Don't believe I added that; removed. Cade StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit.svg Calrayn 15:09, 25 September 2021 (UTC)

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Rainboh

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