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This page is for Comprehensive article nominations. A Comprehensive article is an article that adheres to certain quality standards but cannot reach Good or Featured status due to its limited content. On this page, users can nominate articles that they believe are ready to be reviewed to achieve Comprehensive status.

The article-nomination process is not a way to showcase your favorite articles, but rather articles that are of high quality. Articles placed on this page will be extensively reviewed by experienced editors, including the presiding EduCorps review panel. The nomination process will require the article nominator to respond to objections and improve the article until the requisite number of users supports the nomination.

In undertaking a nomination on this page, the nominator is taking responsibility for their nominated article. This means they need to thoroughly read the following instructions, implement them into their nominated article, and respond to given objections. Nominators are encouraged to ask more experienced editors for guidance and assistance, but self-sufficiency is a requirement of the article-nomination process. It is not inherently the job of reviewers to rewrite elements of an article, but rather to guide nominators to be able to fix issues themselves.

Your nomination is your responsibility. Nominations that severely neglect the following rules or otherwise fall idle after one week will be subject to immediate removal.

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A Comprehensive article must…

  1. …be well-written and comprehensively detailed.
  2. …be unbiased, with a neutral point of view.
  3. …have comprehensive Appearances and Sources lists.
  4. …be fully referenced, including all quotes and images. See Wookieepedia:Sourcing for more information.
  5. …follow the Manual of Style, Layout Guide, and all other policies on Wookieepedia.
  6. …be stable during and following the review process. This means the article does not change significantly from day to day with new content and is not the subject of ongoing edit wars. This does not apply to vandalism or other administrative edits, such as page protection.
  7. …not be tagged with any sort of improvement tags (i.e. more sources, expand, etc).
  8. …have no redlinks.
  9. …provide at least one quote on the article if available. A leading quote at the beginning of the article is preferred but not required if no quotes are available. Although quotes may be placed in the body of the article, a maximum of one quote is allowed at the beginning of each section or subsection.
  10. …include a "Behind the scenes" section for in-universe articles.
  11. …include a reasonable number of images of the highest quality to illustrate the article, as source availability permits.
  12. …provide an introduction that gives a good summary of the topic if it reaches 165 words, not counting the "Behind the scenes" section (not including captions, quotes, headers, etc). Conversely, an article must not have an introduction if it is less than 165 words, not counting the "Behind the scenes" section. For clarification, please refer to this flowchart.
  13. …not exceed 250 words in length if it provides an introduction. This word total counts the introduction, the article body, and "Behind the scenes" material, but not captions, quotes, headers, etc. However, any article that does not provide an introduction per Rule #12 is eligible to be nominated for Comprehensive status regardless of word count. For clarification, please refer to this flowchart.
  14. …not be deliberately shortened if it approaches the 250-word limit.
  15. …be properly titled in accordance with Wookieepedia's treatment of Canon and Legends articles; i.e., no nomination may have "/Canon" in the title.

How to nominate:

  1. Select an article you feel is worthy of Comprehensive status. Nominated articles must meet all fifteen requirements stated above.
  2. Add {{CAnom}} at the top of the article you are nominating, and save the page. Please note that if the article you are nominating has been nominated for Comprehensive article status previously, you will need to specify the number of the nomination as a parameter (e.g. {{CAnom|second}}).
  3. Open the redlink in a new tab to create the nomination page, modifying the preloaded instructions as necessary.
  4. Copy the code provided to the bottom of this page.
  5. Purge the article to update the template.
  6. Other users will object to the nomination with issues and suggested improvements (errors, style, organization, images, notability, sources, etc).
  7. The nominator should then adjust the article until the objections are satisfied. The objector is responsible for striking their objection when it has been addressed, not the nominator. Additionally, reviewers will often copy-edit the article themselves as desired to fix any issues.
  8. Following their review, other users will vote to support the nomination. Users may not vote on their own nomination.
  9. Each user shall be limited to four active Comprehensive article nominations at any given time. Any additional nominations will be subject to immediate removal.
  10. Users must successfully complete one Comprehensive article nomination before they can have two nominations active on the CAN page at one time. Likewise, users must complete two successful CA nominations before they can have three, and three successful CA nominations before they can have four.

How to review:

  1. To review an article, users should read the article completely, keeping a sharp eye out for mistakes.
  2. The article should be reviewed with the criteria listed above, and any issues should be placed under the Object section of the article's nomination page. Objections should be clearly explained, and detail how the article can be improved.
  3. Objections should then be addressed by the nominator. Once the objector is satisfied, they should strike their objection. The nominator should not strike reviewers' objections for them.
  4. Once a reviewer is satisfied with the article, they can vote to support it. Please note that in order to support a nomination, you must have 50 mainspace edits.
  5. If a nomination has been active for over one week and has no active objections, it may pass with a total of either three EduCorps votes or two EduCorps and three user votes. Alternatively, if a nomination is between two and seven days old and has no active objections, it can pass with a total of four EduCorps votes.
  6. Once the nomination is successful, the article will be considered a "Comprehensive article." As such, an EduCorps member will archive the nomination, tag the article with the {{Eras|ca}} template, tag its talk page with the {{CA}} template, and place the article on the Comprehensive articles page. Only members of the EduCorps are allowed to perform these archiving tasks.
All nominations will be considered idle and are subject to immediate removal by EduCorps vote if objections are not addressed after a period of 1 week.

Note: Reduxed articles require only three support votes to maintain their Comprehensive status, all of which must come from EduCorps members. Reduxed articles will be subject to immediate removal if objections are not addressed after a period of 10 days, pending the support of at least three EduCorps members.


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Crisped inferno weed

  • Nominated by: Liverpool92 (talk) 19:00 21 December 2020 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: This is my first time doing this so its kind of a learning experience.

(0 ECs/1 Users/1 Total)

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Support

  1. Support: It's a good article, with in-depth knowledge, and no errors I can see. Harpsicorder (talk) 19:13, 21 December 2020 (UTC)

Object

Shayanomer
  • Hello and welcome to the CAN. Right off the bat, I must point out that the article does not comply with Rule 12, which states that an introduction should not be provided if the article body is under 165 words. Since the body of this article is only 153 words, it needs an overhaul to get rid of the introduction. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 19:18, 21 December 2020 (UTC)
    • Thank you for the feedback Shay. I have added a few more words which reach 165. Liverpool92 (talk) 00:21, 22 December (UTC)
      • The entire article is now above 250 words, the word limit for Comprehensive articles. There is still some stuff you can add such as context for some of the subjects in the article so it's unlikely the article can go below that word count. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 07:34, 22 December 2020 (UTC)
        • I have shortened it too 246 by condensing the info in the description and removing words that don’t relate to the food. Liverpool92 (talk) 12:51, 22 December 2020 (UTC)
          • I highly suggest you familiarize yourself with the nomination rules, as Rule 14 clearly states that an article should not be shortened like this to fall below the word limit. As I mentioned before, you can still provide some needed context for the subjects named in the article. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 13:54, 22 December 2020 (UTC)
            • So it’s too long for a comprehensive status but not up to par for a good status? Liverpool92 (talk) 14:46 22 December 2020
              • Yes. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 14:55, 22 December 2020 (UTC)
                • Ok then I will withdraw the nomination and add back the info. Liverpool92 (talk) 15:05 22 December 2020
                  • Only EduCorps members may take down nominations. I can do that for you. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 15:10, 22 December 2020 (UTC)
                    • Ok thanks. Liverpool92 (talk) 15:18 22 December 2020 (UTC)
                      • After going through the article content, I think the first paragraph in History should be removed entirely, there's not a single mention of the weed in there. This will bring the word count of the body below 165 words, and thus the introduction will need to be removed. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 15:26, 22 December 2020 (UTC)
                        • Ok I will remove it.Liverpool92 (talk) 15:35 22 December 2020
                          • Now you need to remove the sectioning (except for "Behind the scenes") and combine the info together. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 15:49, 22 December 2020 (UTC)
  • Current image is very low in quality, can you acquire a better one?
    • I tried putting it into a photo enhancer but it caused all the colors of the image to enhance and changing the color of the food. If I zoom the image out it makes it harder to see. Liverpool92 (talk) 12:17 23 December 2020 (UTC)
  • Context for Tunga Arpagion. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 05:52, 23 December 2020 (UTC)
    • Context added. Liverpool92 (talk) 12:15 23 December 2020 (UTC)
      • That's too much context. You only needed to describe Tunga (Species?). Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 12:23, 23 December 2020 (UTC)
Immora
  • Was Arpagion or Hubi offered this and ate it? It says Arpagion was impersonating Hubi, but then says Hubi is the one who ate it. Immora (talk) 19:28, 20 January 2021 (UTC)
  • Although you have linked time, that article is about time as a measurable concept; in context, "last time" was "last "occasion", so I would suggest de-linking time as irrelevant. Immora (talk) 19:40, 20 January 2021 (UTC)
Macaroni

Context for Moncaladrome is needed. JediMasterMacaroniAdmiral Ackbar RH.png(Conversation) 00:44, 22 January 2021 (UTC)

Comments

The Sickener

  • Nominated by: TK-462 (talk) 01:12, 26 December 2020 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Fortunately, I'll only have the mud and barbed wire version of this.

(0 ECs/3 Users/3 Total)

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Support

  1. DwartiiDelver (talk) 17:05, 31 December 2020 (UTC)
  2. Good work, keep it up! - - -OOM 224 ༼༽{talk}༼༽ 10:35, 20 January 2021 (UTC)
  3. Erebus Chronus (talk) 03:12, 21 January 2021 (UTC)

Object

OOM
  • Affiliation is infobox-exclusive.
  • Category for location needed.
  • Please reword "Cuy'val Dar training Sergeant Kal Skirata's led his troops […]" I don't quite understand what it's trying to say.
  • The clones being born in 32 BBY and having taken part in the course could not mean the training course was built by 32 BBY. Please revise the date and the relevent reference note.
  • Would it be worth mentioning Kal Skirata threw up during/after going through The Sickener per the article's quote? - - -OOM 224 ༼༽{talk}༼༽ 23:03, 26 December 2020 (UTC)
    • Addressed all the above objections. TK-462 (talk) 00:33, 27 December 2020 (UTC)
  • Context should be given for Fi Skirata in the Quote template.
  • The "t" in "the Sickener" is not capitalised in the CSWE.
    • It is capitalized in both Hard Contact and Triple Zero, so I'm inclined to maintain that usage. TK-462 (talk) 21:48, 7 January 2021 (UTC)
  • The article does not establish Kal Skirata being a Mandalorian, so readers might not know who "the seasoned Mandalorian" is referring to. The term "Mandalorian" should either be replaced by something like "sergeant" or be also used earlier in the article to describe Skirata.
  • There's some missing info. from the CSWE. I'll DM you over on Discord. - - -OOM 224 ༼༽{talk}༼༽ 21:28, 1 January 2021 (UTC)
    • Fixed the above two objections, thank you. TK-462 (talk) 21:48, 7 January 2021 (UTC)
  • The mention of nerfs can't be sourced to CSWE.
  • There's still some CSWE information missing from the article.
    • The Sickener's name's origin
    • The instructors saying the course being nothing compared to what clones would encounter on an actual battlefield.
    • Skirata earning trust and respect
    • Skirata proving that he wouldn't put his clones through any hardship that he wasn't willing to endure himself. - - -OOM 224 ༼༽{talk}༼༽ 21:16, 14 January 2021 (UTC)
      • Fixed the above five objections, thank you for catching these. TK-462 (talk) 06:01, 20 January 2021 (UTC)
Shayanomer
  • CSWE reference needs to use {{CSWECite}}.
  • "Mandalorian Sergeant Kal Skirata of the Cuy'val Dar endured The Sickener before his troops, which caused the seasoned Mandalorian to vomit." Reads as if the troops caused Kal to vomit. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 18:53, 14 January 2021 (UTC)
    • Fixed both objections, thanks. TK-462 (talk) 06:01, 20 January 2021 (UTC)
  • Context for Tipoca City. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 07:34, 24 January 2021 (UTC)
Erebus

Comments

Kuvara

  • Nominated by: TK-462 (talk) 01:51, 27 December 2020 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:

(2 ECs/3 Users/5 Total)

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Support

  1. ECvote.png Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 07:12, 8 January 2021 (UTC)
  2. ECvote.png Fan26 (Talk) 01:56, 9 January 2021 (UTC)
  3. VergenceScatter (talk) 00:22, 10 January 2021 (UTC)
  4. DwartiiDelver (talk) 21:41, 16 January 2021 (UTC)
  5. Jedi Order.svg ImpacticForce (Talk) 02:39, 23 January 2021 (UTC)

Object

Shayanomer
  • "The fruit was edible plain or dried, with the latter form being known to be stewed with merlie, a creature also found on Qiilura." Does the novel specifically use this type of wording? Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 10:40, 30 December 2020 (UTC)
    • Nope, thanks for the catch. I've adjusted it to be more specific now. TK-462 (talk) 20:49, 7 January 2021 (UTC)
Imp
  • The species the fruit was edible by is currently infobox-exclusive. Imperators II(Talk) 22:36, 13 January 2021 (UTC)
    • Fixed, thanks. TK-462 (talk) 20:48, 16 January 2021 (UTC)
  • Looking at the source, there's actually more information that you should add to the article, e.g., how Darman treated the dried fruit and Etain's reactions and attitude toward it. Imperators II(Talk) 08:32, 18 January 2021 (UTC)
    • Awesome, thanks for catching that. TK-462 (talk) 05:17, 20 January 2021 (UTC)
      • Well, go ahead and add the rest of it, too - Etain's reaction to the offer and her reason for declining it. Imperators II(Talk) 08:33, 20 January 2021 (UTC)
        • Added, sorry about that. Too many late nights. TK-462 (talk) 16:23, 20 January 2021 (UTC)
  • Please elaborate on "short lifetime" and "such foods".
  • If Darman offered Etain the dried variety of kuvara, please mention so. Imperators II(Talk) 16:46, 20 January 2021 (UTC)
    • Fixed the two above objections. TK-462 (talk) 21:39, 22 January 2021 (UTC)
Ayrehead
  • I don't think the date needs to be given twice, I'd just keep the second one. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:53, 19 January 2021 (UTC)
    • Fixed, thank you. TK-462 (talk) 05:17, 20 January 2021 (UTC)

Comments

DwartiiDelver
  • Not listing this as an objection, but I wonder if it might be possible to replace one of the instances of "also" with another word that gets the same meaning across, or reword that sentence in a way that doesn't require two instances of the word—I feel it may read a little better without using "also" twice (especially with each usage being in such close proximity to one another). DwartiiDelver (talk) 15:32, 11 January 2021 (UTC)
    • Good point, that did look bad. I've fixed the issue now. TK-462 (talk) 20:48, 16 January 2021 (UTC)


Yavin Code

  • Nominated by: DwartiiDelver (talk) 15:13, 31 December 2020 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: First the Convention, now the Code. Not directly Dwartii-related, but still from the same time period.

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Support

  1. Objection handled on discord. Ben sc01t (Hello there) 20:02, 31 December 2020 (UTC)
  2. Jedi Order.svg ImpacticForce (Talk) 20:04, 31 December 2020 (UTC)
  3. VergenceScatter (talk) 04:49, 17 January 2021 (UTC)

Object

Fan
  • Same as Yavin Convention re: Yavin Prime name. Fan26 (Talk) 15:52, 10 January 2021 (UTC)
    • Noted. DwartiiDelver (talk) 20:44, 10 January 2021 (UTC)
      • Please identify it as being in the Outer Rim. Fan26 (talk) 15:03, 11 January 2021 (UTC)
        • Done. DwartiiDelver (talk) 15:24, 11 January 2021 (UTC)
            • Same as Yavin Convention, I've removed the location.
  • Can Ultimate Star Wars also be used to cite Yavin Prime's name? It'd be nice to not have so many refs right in one sentence. Fan26 (talk) 18:34, 11 January 2021 (UTC)
    • Unfortunately, USW never identifies it as "Yavin Prime." DwartiiDelver (talk) 18:43, 11 January 2021 (UTC)
Shayanomer
  • "Jedi Master Obi-Wan Kenobi was known to cite the Yavin Code,..." Known by whom? Please avoid such wording if it's not used in the source. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 19:40, 15 January 2021 (UTC)
    • Known to by Anakin, who says "Let me guess, citing the Yavin Code again?" Should I add "according to Anakin Skywalker" before that? DwartiiDelver (talk) 19:50, 15 January 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Carni chip

  • Nominated by: Fan26 (Talk) 18:23, 10 January 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:

(1 ECs/2 Users/3 Total)

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Support

  1. VergenceScatter (talk) 04:15, 11 January 2021 (UTC)
  2. DwartiiDelver (talk) 01:39, 12 January 2021 (UTC)
  3. ECvote.png Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 07:56, 15 January 2021 (UTC)

Object

Vergence
  • served at midmeal the Canto Casino Hotel Is this supposed to be in the Canto Casino Hotel? VergenceScatter (talk) 03:33, 11 January 2021 (UTC)
    • Fixed. For future reference, reviewers are free to make minor corrections like that themselves under the banner of a copy-edit. Fan26 (Talk) 03:46, 11 January 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Narthax

(2 ECs/1 Users/3 Total)

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Support

  1. VergenceScatter (talk) 20:08, 16 January 2021 (UTC)
  2. ECvote.png Fan26 (Talk) 23:42, 16 January 2021 (UTC)
  3. ECvote.png Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 17:08, 23 January 2021 (UTC)

Object

Shayanomer
  • Please introduce a paragraph break in the body.
    • Done.
  • The Official Starships & Vehicles Collection issue can use {{StarshipsVehiclesCite}}. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 20:02, 22 January 2021 (UTC)
    • Need to verify if their picture appears in associated entry, or just cover. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 23:29, 22 January 2021 (UTC)
      • And fixed. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 16:14, 23 January 2021 (UTC)
        • Body is now at 177 words, meaning it requires sectioning. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 16:18, 23 January 2021 (UTC)
          • IU information added in error because of a misunderstanding of a different image. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 16:49, 23 January 2021 (UTC)

Comments

  • Note I include the Visual Dictionary in behind the scenes as, even though Behind the Magic is the first source for Narthax—provided we can't confirm the set photos are linked to One Step Ahead—the Visual Dictionary is the first to bring him into canon. Also FWIW it's a full mention because it's the photo accompanying the snowtrooper entry. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 22:59, 12 January 2021 (UTC)


Bursk

(2 ECs/1 Users/3 Total)

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Support

  1. ECvote.png Fan26 (Talk) 23:51, 16 January 2021 (UTC)
  2. VergenceScatter (talk) 00:40, 17 January 2021 (UTC)
  3. ECvote.png Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 17:09, 23 January 2021 (UTC)

Object

Shayanomer
  • Like Narthax, the body can benefit from a paragraph break.
    • Done.
  • The Official Starships & Vehicles Collection issue can use {{StarshipsVehiclesCite}}. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 20:02, 22 January 2021 (UTC)
    • I need to verify the nature of if they're only on the cover (Cover only) tag, or if they're also pictured in the associated entry. I know there's no new info though. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 23:29, 22 January 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Kazza-Ki Sagree

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Support

  1. ECvote.png Fan26 (Talk) 16:29, 17 January 2021 (UTC)
  2. VergenceScatter (talk) 17:04, 17 January 2021 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Thanks to JMAS for helping me clean up the image. JediMasterMacaroniAdmiral Ackbar RH.png(Conversation) 04:41, 22 January 2021 (UTC)


Nanofoil

(0 ECs/2 Users/2 Total)

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Support

  1. VergenceScatter (talk) 05:56, 15 January 2021 (UTC)
  2. Good work! Jedi Order.svg ImpacticForce (Talk) 16:44, 19 January 2021 (UTC)

Object

Vergence
Shayanomer
Impactic
  • Some context on the time period and planet could be added. Jedi Order.svg ImpacticForce (Talk) 00:27, 18 January 2021 (UTC)
    • We've never had to establish whether it's the Republic Era or the Imperial Era before. It seems satisfactory to say that she possessed a scarf made from nanofoil during her time at the Elphrona Outpost. For the planet, I don't know what else could be added to describe Elphrona. Mr Star Wars Amino Republic (talk) 05:49, January 18, 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Unidentified coral

  • Nominated by: VergenceScatter (talk) 04:15, 15 January 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Short and sweet

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Support

  1. Good work! ~ D MCCG (talk) 20:12, 15 January 2021 (UTC)
  2. JediMasterMacaroniAdmiral Ackbar RH.png(Conversation) 18:26, 18 January 2021 (UTC)

Object

Macaroni

Does SoR specify its sentience? If not, Category:Species of undefined sentience would need to be added. JediMasterMacaroniAdmiral Ackbar RH.png(Conversation) 18:05, 15 January 2021 (UTC)

D MCCG

Does it have an image? If it does please add one. D MCCG (talk) 18:22, 15 January 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Sol'aa

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Object

Shayanomer
  • Context for Pazaak.
  • "When Revan questioned Sol'aa's identity, he was dismissive, hoping to keep his privacy." Who's dismissive here? It's not clear.
  • "...but instead spoke in his native tongue of Twi'leki." If his homeworld is listed as Dantooine, then specifying that Twi'leki was the native language is incorrect. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 05:58, 16 January 2021 (UTC)
    • Fixed. Jedi Order.svg ImpacticForce (Talk) 06:19, 16 January 2021 (UTC)
      • Is Pazaak stated to be popular at that point in time? Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 06:26, 16 January 2021 (UTC)
        • Pazaak is not explicitly stated to be popular, which I fixed. I reworded the sentences. I hope they're more clear now. Jedi Order.svg ImpacticForce (Talk) 16:34, 16 January 2021 (UTC)
  • Is the interaction with this character mandatory for the game to progress? If not, you need to implement {{Gamemechanics}} and note the option in the BTS. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 11:40, 16 January 2021 (UTC)
    • Added. Jedi Order.svg ImpacticForce (Talk) 16:34, 16 January 2021 (UTC)
      • In the BTS, you need to state that the interaction is optional. "Undetermined/unknown" type statements in this context are generally frowned upon. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 16:45, 16 January 2021 (UTC)
  • Eye color is currently infobox-exclusive. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 16:45, 16 January 2021 (UTC)
    • If you don't mind me asking, what does that mean exaclty? There is no mention of eye color in the article body. Jedi Order.svg ImpacticForce (Talk) 16:55, 16 January 2021 (UTC)
      • It means the eye color is only present in the infobox and is missing from the body, which shouldn't be the case. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 17:33, 16 January 2021 (UTC)
Macaroni

Comments

Hearth House

  • Nominated by: VergenceScatter (talk) 18:27, 16 January 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: This one should be an acceptable length

(0 ECs/0 Users/0 Total)

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Support

Object

Comments

First Supreme Chancellor

(1 ECs/3 Users/4 Total)

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Support

  1. OOM 224 ༼༽{talk}༼༽ 09:43, 18 January 2021 (UTC)
  2. It's a shame they don't have an official name. VergenceScatter (talk) 19:42, 18 January 2021 (UTC)
  3. ECvote.png Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 08:35, 19 January 2021 (UTC)
  4. Jedi Order.svg ImpacticForce (Talk) 00:15, 20 January 2021 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Anx Minor system

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)

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Support

  1. VergenceScatter (talk) 17:59, 18 January 2021 (UTC)
  2. ECvote.png Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 08:42, 19 January 2021 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Gonda

  • Nominated by: DarthRuiz30 (talk) 10:37, 18 January 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: WP:GE—WP:AST nom

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)

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  1. ECvote.png Imperators II(Talk) 08:25, 20 January 2021 (UTC)
  2. VergenceScatter (talk) 04:32, 21 January 2021 (UTC)

Object

Imp
  • A thing we've been doing for a while now with astrographical articles is to treat the use of the preposition "on" with astronomical objects as an implication that the said object has a physical surface and is therefore terrestrial. Please add this to the body, the infobox, and the categories.
  • Can we get a bit of context for L3, Lando, and Hutt? Imperators II(Talk) 11:12, 19 January 2021 (UTC)
    • Let me know if that's enough--DarthRuiz30 (talk) 22:31, 19 January 2021 (UTC)

Comments

  • You may want to add "[sic]" after the capitalized "Sabacc" in the quote. Imperators II(Talk) 11:12, 19 January 2021 (UTC)


Bernilla

  • Nominated by: DarthRuiz30 (talk) 10:37, 18 January 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:

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Davnar

  • Nominated by: DarthRuiz30 (talk) 10:37, 18 January 2021 (UTC)
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  1. VergenceScatter (talk) 18:38, 18 January 2021 (UTC)

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Imp
  • This exists, please add a link to it to the article.
  • Han Solo at Stars' End is only an {{Mo}}, please add the Legends Davnar's first full appearance. Imperators II(Talk) 11:23, 19 January 2021 (UTC)
    • I will need to double check if SW:X-wing really featured Davnar, otherwise SW Rebellion would be the 1st appearance.--DarthRuiz30 (talk) 02:57, 20 January 2021 (UTC)
      • Changed to Star Wars: Rebellion--DarthRuiz30 (talk) 05:28, 24 January 2021 (UTC)
  • Is Traveler's Guide to Batuu 100% presented from an IU perspective, or does it have OOU sections, too?
    • Yup, Its an IU book--DarthRuiz30 (talk) 02:57, 20 January 2021 (UTC)
      • In that case, does the mention of Davnar being Throno's homeworld come in a form that can be used to add a quote to the article? Imperators II(Talk) 08:28, 20 January 2021 (UTC)
        • Added--DarthRuiz30 (talk) 03:10, 21 January 2021 (UTC)
          • Can you also note the fact that Davnar was specifically mentioned in the book in the body? Imperators II(Talk) 07:43, 21 January 2021 (UTC)
  • Looking at the map from which the image is cropped, it looks to me as if a crop can be obtained that does not cut off any of the map labels currently present. Imperators II(Talk) 11:26, 19 January 2021 (UTC)

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Oshira

  • Nominated by: DarthRuiz30 (talk) 10:37, 18 January 2021 (UTC)
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  1. ECvote.png Imperators II(Talk) 08:26, 20 January 2021 (UTC)

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Imp
  • I've added a redlink for you to fill out.
  • Sharing a name with something is more intrinsic to the subject than being depicted in an IU medium, so please reorder the sentences so that the more intrinsic info is presented first. Same goes the Bernilla nom. Note that this will also create an opportunity for you to avoid the awkward "the planet Batuu. The planet shared [...]" repetition. Imperators II(Talk) 11:01, 19 January 2021 (UTC)

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Bakisian Drift/Legends

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Tooka (Jedi)

  • Nominated by: Jedi Order.svg ImpacticForce (Talk) 22:58, 19 January 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Another tiny character from KOTOR.

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RC-8028

  • Nominated by: TK-462 (talk) 05:42, 20 January 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Trying to hit 20 CANs before I ship to boot camp. 18 days till I go as of this nomination!

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Shayanomer
  • Body says he died, yet the note mentioning his death is in the "birth" field of the infobox. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 06:31, 21 January 2021 (UTC)
    • Fixed, thanks. TK-462 (talk) 19:52, 21 January 2021 (UTC)

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Endorian chicken pot pie

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Apple slug sauce

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Zoph

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  1. Objections addressed via Discord. TK-462 (talk) 04:59, 21 January 2021 (UTC)

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  • "Zoph was a distant planet located in the galaxy's Outer Rim Territories." Noting what Zoph was distant from would be better here.
    • Rise of the Separatists doesn't actually specify what Zoph is distant from, so what would you like me to do? Erebus Chronus (talk) 04:10, 21 January 2021 (UTC)
  • Context for Ilum and its crystals, please. TK-462 (talk) 03:53, 21 January 2021 (UTC)

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TQ3-R1

  • Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:47, 20 January 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Shame that they didn't include this guy in the Hasbro astromech pack for TROS

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Shayanomer
  • Do you think it's fair to extrapolate the degree since it's stated to be an astromech droid? Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 06:49, 21 January 2021 (UTC)
    • Thinking about it, the Visual Dictionary doesn't even say it's an astromech, it just looks so similar to one I hadn't even considered otherwise. I've now removed that info entirely. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:29, 21 January 2021 (UTC)

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Cortilium Major

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Simon Jabesq

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  • Note that I am not 100% sure about the final behind the scenes sentence, but because it appears to have corrected a previous error, I did make a note accordingly. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 00:21, 25 January 2021 (UTC)


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