Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Daroe

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Daroe

• Nominated by: Hanzo Hasashi 19:25, April 28, 2012 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Another obscure card game-created Jawa.

(2 ECs/2 Users/4 Total)

Support

1. Jawas are awesome. 501st dogma^(talk) 00:06, May 1, 2012 (UTC)
2. Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 18:45, May 1, 2012 (UTC)
3. ~Savage 15:43, May 2, 2012 (UTC)
4. Already looked it over. Corellian Premier^{All along the watchtower} 16:58, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

Object

1. You need to clearly mention that he was a male in the introduction and in the body of the article.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 01:43, May 1, 2012 (UTC)
   • Sorry, you just need to include it in the intro, since there is no biography section.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 01:45, May 1, 2012 (UTC)
     • Addressed. However, I have seen quality articles that never mention the species or gender period, or just mention one without the other, in both intro and bio. Hanzo Hasashi 17:12, May 1, 2012 (UTC)
       • Hmmm, well I believe that those articles should mention it as well, since everything in the infobox needs to be in the body of the article.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 18:45, May 1, 2012 (UTC)
2. Savaged…
   • The first sentence is a bit confusing; it makes it sound like he only hailed from Tatooine during the GCW but later hailed from somewhere else. Can you rephrase? ~Savage 14:44, May 2, 2012 (UTC)
     • Hope my edit is what you were looking for. Hanzo Hasashi 15:32, May 2, 2012 (UTC)
       • Perfect. ~Savage 15:43, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

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