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*Date reference could use some work, better explaining its relevance to the subject of the article and related events. Please look at [[Phobos|this]] for reference.
 
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**How is it now?--[[User:Vitus Infinitus|<b><span style="color: black">Vitus Infinitus</span></b>]]<sup>[[User talk:Vitus Infinitus|<b><span style="color: black">Talk</span></b>]]</sup> 22:28, January 15, 2020 (UTC)
 
*''...where the powerful Force wielder known as the Son confronts dark side spirits...'' This context on the Son should be moved to the first mention of him in the previous paragraph. <span style="font-variant: small-caps; font-family: Verdana; font-size: 12px">[[User:QuiGonJinn|<span style="color:#9ACD32;">'''QuiGonJinn'''</span>]]</span> [[File:Senate seal.svg|20px]]<sup>[[User talk:QuiGonJinn|(Talk)]]</sup> 06:40, January 15, 2020 (UTC)
 
*''...where the powerful Force wielder known as the Son confronts dark side spirits...'' This context on the Son should be moved to the first mention of him in the previous paragraph. <span style="font-variant: small-caps; font-family: Verdana; font-size: 12px">[[User:QuiGonJinn|<span style="color:#9ACD32;">'''QuiGonJinn'''</span>]]</span> [[File:Senate seal.svg|20px]]<sup>[[User talk:QuiGonJinn|(Talk)]]</sup> 06:40, January 15, 2020 (UTC)
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**Done--[[User:Vitus Infinitus|<b><span style="color: black">Vitus Infinitus</span></b>]]<sup>[[User talk:Vitus Infinitus|<b><span style="color: black">Talk</span></b>]]</sup> 22:28, January 15, 2020 (UTC)
   
 
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Revan

  • Nominated by: I don't know your name… but I take up your nomination. I will not remove your mask until there is justice— until the Mandalorians have been defeated once and for all. So swears… Vitus InfinitusTalk 23:52, January 7, 2020 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:

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Support

  1. Tomotron Revanchist Sith (talk) 03:30, January 8, 2020 (UTC)

Object

Hanzo
  • 376 words in the article, so too long for a CAN. Would have to be moved to GAN if the article is not reduced to 249 words or less. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 02:11, January 9, 2020 (UTC)
    • Hanzo, please take a look at CAN Rules 12 and 13. Thank you. Imperators II(Talk) 09:46, January 9, 2020 (UTC)
Winterz
  • Legends Revan needs some development in the Bts. Winterz (talk) 16:13, January 9, 2020 (UTC)
    • I personally think that there's really nothing more to add when it comes to Legends in the BTS. I could get into Revan's gender being revealed later and etc but that belongs on the Legends page in my opinion.--Vitus InfinitusTalk 16:54, January 9, 2020 (UTC)
      • Revan plays a big role in Legends. I think it's worth a brief sum up of his story in the Bts, which is meant just for that. The Legends page is irrelevant to this article. Winterz (talk) 18:47, January 9, 2020 (UTC)
Fan
  • In the first sentence: "that was thought of as". "Since we're talking about an individual I think "who" would work better than "that".
  • You identify the 3rd Legion as being named after Revan twice, in the first and second sentences. I think it's best to only do that once. My advice would be to move all the bit about Revan's name being given to the 3rd legion and all of the context for Sith troopers and the Sith Eternal into the second sentence. Fan26 (Talk) 16:12, January 11, 2020 (UTC)
Anil
  • I'd like to see some additions to the Behind the scenes section. For example, I believe you can add a brief history of the character's Legends background and how he became a popular/fan-favorite character. Something short and sweet like this should suffice.
  • I believe the same goes for The Clone Wars subsection. You can add that TCW Revan was modeled after his EU appearance, he was described as "uber evil influence guiding the Son," etc. The BTS for the article Darth Bane pretty much has all relevant information, in my opinion.
  • StarWars Ghosts of Mortis Episode Featurette on StarWars.com (backup link) and Star Wars: The Clone Wars The Complete Season Three should be added to the Sources list.
  • You should use {{TCWCite}} in the references. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 23:14, January 11, 2020 (UTC)
QGJ
  • Date reference could use some work, better explaining its relevance to the subject of the article and related events. Please look at this for reference.
  • ...where the powerful Force wielder known as the Son confronts dark side spirits... This context on the Son should be moved to the first mention of him in the previous paragraph. QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 06:40, January 15, 2020 (UTC)
Toqgers
  • Could use a more detailed explanation of why The Clone Wars scene was abandoned and how it conflicted with Filoni's and Lucas' understanding of the Force from The Ghosts of Mortis featurette. Toqgers (talk) 08:20, January 15, 2020 (UTC)

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