Remember to never link the bolded text of an article's intro (in this case, the first instance of astromech droid). You can link it on the second mention, though.
"Unidentified" should generally only be used in an article's title, and possibly Behind the scenes. In the In-universe section, not so much --- just because Jaden doesn't know its name, doesn't mean nobody does.
Short-forms generally shouldn't be used --- ie, keep up "astromech droid" rather than "astro droid" throughout.
Should the power plant receive an article? It seems like a noteworthy enough location. If so, could it be added to the "affiliation" field of the infobox? That is, does the droid definitely work there?Menkooroo 15:09, July 10, 2011 (UTC)
Try that. The first article already had a link, it was just a redirect link. So I fixed it. Cal Jedi(Personal Comm Channel) 01:42, July 25, 2011 (UTC)
I think you can scale back a tad on the info about why Korr was in the plant. I'm not sure you need to mention Katarn at all, for instance.
If you're duck testing this droid to be an R2 unit, does that mean we can duck test his manufacturer as Industrial Automaton? If so, add them to the infobox and body somewhere.
Similarly, you can add height based on the stats in EGTD or NEGTD. (This probably doesn't apply for the equipment fields, since R2s were so highly customizable. But I'd guess height holds steady from model to model.)
I'm mostly unfamiliar with droid articles, but I think the "plating" field in the infobox is for the droid's paint scheme. At any rate, this droids coloration should be mentioned in the body even if there's not a place for it in the infobox. ~Savage 13:36, July 23, 2011 (UTC)