Changes: Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Yarkora homeworld

Revision as of 07:08, 18 May 2020

Nominated by: AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 20:00, May 10, 2020 (UTC)
Nomination comments: Funny how this was only really touched upon in a single source.

Shayanomer (talk) 19:24, May 12, 2020 (UTC)
Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 22:30, May 13, 2020 (UTC)
Fan26 (Talk) 23:21, May 14, 2020 (UTC)
Ben sc01t ^{(Hello there)} 21:40, May 16, 2020 (UTC)

~~Second sentence is a run-on that can be split from the scientists part.~~ Shayanomer (talk) 18:49, May 12, 2020 (UTC)
- Fixed. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 19:21, May 12, 2020 (UTC)

Surely the homeworld was "known" to the Yarkora themselves. Can we rephrase the first sentence to something like "unknown to the rest of the galaxy" or "unknown to the outsiders?" QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 07:08, May 18, 2020 (UTC)

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 *<s>Second sentence is a run-on that can be split from the scientists part.</s> [[User:Shayanomer|<span style="color:#DEB40D">'''Shayanomer'''</span>]] [[File:Din Djarin's clan.svg|15px]] ([[User talk:Shayanomer|<span style="color:#A06800">'''talk'''</span>]]) 18:49, May 12, 2020 (UTC)
 **Fixed. - [[User:AV-6R7|<b><span style="color: gray">AV-6R7</span></b>]]<sup>[[User talk:AV-6R7|<b><span style="color: black">Crew Pit</span></b>]]</sup> 19:21, May 12, 2020 (UTC)
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+*Surely the homeworld was "known" to the Yarkora themselves. Can we rephrase the first sentence to something like "unknown to the rest of the galaxy" or "unknown to the outsiders?" <span style="font-variant: small-caps; font-family: Verdana; font-size: 12px">[[User:QuiGonJinn|<span style="color:#9ACD32;">'''QuiGonJinn'''</span>]]</span> [[File:Senate seal.svg|20px]]<sup>[[User talk:QuiGonJinn|(Talk)]]</sup> 07:08, May 18, 2020 (UTC)
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