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Z23-Y75[]
- Nominated by: Commander Code-8 G'day, mate 22:12, April 3, 2013 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: In memory of LucasArts :(
(4 ECs/2 Users/6 Total)[]
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- Stake black msg 18:32, April 4, 2013 (UTC)
- Good-bye, LucasArts. :( Now, come on, Obsidian. Pick up the slack.—Cal Jedi (Personal Comm Channel) 18:41, April 4, 2013 (UTC)
- RIP. :( 501st dogma(talk) 21:51, April 5, 2013 (UTC)
- I was looking forward to 1313...--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 22:13, April 6, 2013 (UTC)
- Still waiting on Battlefront 3 :P Supreme Emperor (talk) 02:46, April 9, 2013 (UTC)
- Winterz (talk) 22:41, April 14, 2013 (UTC)
Object
The last sentence of the BtS is a little weird. I'm not sure what you meant. Stake black msg 02:23, April 4, 2013 (UTC)- I've re-written the sentence, that help? Commander Code-8 G'day, mate 08:01, April 4, 2013 (UTC)
"... to serve in the droid army of the galactic corporation; the Trade Federation." You're not using the semicolon right here. You probably want a colon instead, as the semicolon necessitates a sentence that is connected to the sentence before the semicolon.501st dogma(talk) 21:18, April 4, 2013 (UTC)- Done. Commander Code-8 G'day, mate 01:24, April 5, 2013 (UTC)
- Winterz
Considering the large explanation, you should probably ref the Bts ;)Winterz (talk) 15:30, April 7, 2013 (UTC)- Done. Commander Code-8 G'day, mate 22:16, April 7, 2013 (UTC)
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