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Onager-class Star Destroyer

• Nominated by:--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 18:25, March 4, 2020 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Giving featured article nominations another try!

(0 Inqs/4 Users/4 Total)

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Support

1. Great job on fixing up the article! —Tomotron ^{(Star Forge)} 01:02, March 10, 2020 (UTC)
2. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 14:45, May 7, 2020 (UTC)
3. A fine read. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 23:09, May 29, 2020 (UTC)
4. Mr Star Wars Amino Republic talk 6:30 May 30, 2020 (UTC)

Object

Shayanomer

• Well done for the most part, however, you have some issues:

• "Navigation computer" seems to be infobox-exclusive.
  • Added--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 01:15, March 6, 2020 (UTC)
• Battle of Endor should be given a date in the intro
  • Added--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 01:15, March 6, 2020 (UTC)
• "During the Galactic Civil War, there were several examples of this class. Several ships were the Cataclysm, the Rakehell, the Sunder, and the Onager-class Testbed." This can be merged into one sentence to use the named ships as the examples specified in the first sentence.
  • Fixed--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 01:15, March 6, 2020 (UTC)
• "Beyond the end of the indentation but before the command tower structure were two deflector shield generator domes similar to those[3] found in Imperial-class Star Destroyers,[6] as well as several other deflector shield generators." I don't think you should use Rogue One as a source if it doesn't mention the deflector shield generator. I would suggest replacing the reference with the Blueprints from Card Trader (See the exact card used in the status articles Formidable and Adjudicator).
  • Thanks! Fixed!--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 01:15, March 6, 2020 (UTC)
    • Ok so for this, you'll need to make two separate references. For stuff like "solar ionization reactor" or "deflector shield," follow Rakehell, Sunder, and Cataclysm as examples. You don't need two separate references for that info. Secondly, the reference for the ISD should be the card directly, as you've currently used the same reference for both. Shayanomer (talk) 06:15, March 6, 2020 (UTC)
      • Fixed I think--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 15:19, March 6, 2020 (UTC)
• Second paragraph of the History section is missing a reference at the end.
  • Added--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 01:15, March 6, 2020 (UTC)
• Do the sources make the connection between the Mandator IV and the Onager? If they don't, then I don't think you can say the former functioned similarly to the latter. What you could say is that the concept of orbital bombardment weaponry aboard a Star Destroyer was implemented into the Mandator IV. Shayanomer (talk) 04:02, March 5, 2020 (UTC)
  • Reworded--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 01:15, March 6, 2020 (UTC)
• Galactic Civil War should be given dates. Shayanomer (talk) 04:07, March 5, 2020 (UTC)
  • Added--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 01:15, March 6, 2020 (UTC)

• Article needs to list all cards within the Expansion Pack that feature or mention the Onager instead of just linking the whole set like that. Shayanomer (talk) 01:25, 29 November 2020 (UTC)
  • Done --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 03:38, 8 December 2020 (UTC)
• Sources need to be listed chronologically, and a 1stID next to the source that identifies the ship by its full name.
  • Done --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 14:15, 8 December 2020 (UTC)
• The article says "Imperial Siege Breaker" while BTS and the Sources section say "Siege Breaker." Please correct this. Shayanomer (talk) 06:17, 8 December 2020 (UTC)
  • Done --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 14:15, 8 December 2020 (UTC)
• "Sometime between the years[2] 5 and 0 BBY[10] during the early rebellion against the Galactic Empire..." Since we determined that the Civil War starts by 4 BBY, I think you should just remove the "early rebellion" bit. Shayanomer (talk) 14:24, 8 December 2020 (UTC)
  • Fixed, though I added "Imperial Era" --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 00:48, 10 December 2020 (UTC)
• You will now have to list the Onager cards rereleased in Upgrade Card Collection. These are different from the original cards so you need to list them separately. Shayanomer (talk) 19:01, 9 December 2020 (UTC)
  • Added --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 00:48, 10 December 2020 (UTC)

Toprawa

• The size of the article warrants a larger intro than just one paragraph. Also, please fix the italicization formatting of this nomination. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 19:13, April 20, 2020 (UTC)
  • Expanded intro. I fixed italicization of the title of the nomination, is there anything else?--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 20:35, April 20, 2020 (UTC)
    • I'll let you know. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 20:39, April 20, 2020 (UTC)
      • Oop, I meant if there was anything else in terms of italicization! Haha sorry. Thank you.--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 20:40, April 20, 2020 (UTC)

QGJ

• You've got a few duplicate links.
  • Fixed--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 15:03, May 3, 2020 (UTC)
• Please fix image caption formatting. Remember that only full sentences get a period at the end.
  • I changed image captions, and I think I fixed the formatting--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 15:03, May 3, 2020 (UTC)
• Each ref note should have all available subjects linked to.
  • Done--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 15:03, May 3, 2020 (UTC)
• Can you reformat ref 4 to make it less cumbersome? It's really hard to understand what it's trying to get across at the moment. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 09:43, May 3, 2020 (UTC)
  • I think I made it better.--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 15:03, May 3, 2020 (UTC)
• There are instances of info sourced to two consecutive references. Those should be avoided unless absolutely necessary. And if they are necessary, then consecutive ref notes should always be arranged in ascending order. There are some refs that do not follow this rule. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 15:36, May 6, 2020 (UTC)
  • Done, can't find anymore instances--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 16:17, May 6, 2020 (UTC)

OOM

• Haxen Delto and Airen Cracken shouldn't be linked in the quote template.
  • Fixed--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 21:45, September 24, 2020 (UTC)
• The alternate names "Onager-class Destroyer and "Siege Breaker" are completely unnecessary. I see that when mentioned without -class, Onager isn't capitalised, but there's no point including it as an alternate title in the intro.
  • Removed--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 21:45, September 24, 2020 (UTC)
    • "Onager" still pending removal. - - - OOM 224 ༼༽^{talk}༼༽ 21:58, October 1, 2020 (UTC)
      • I don't agree that Onager should be removed, but I've removed it--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 13:51, October 8, 2020 (UTC)
• Same goes for the list of names in "General characteristics" section.
  • Removed--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 21:45, September 24, 2020 (UTC)
• Some of the images could be enlarged.
  • Done--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 21:45, September 24, 2020 (UTC)
• "Despite the Rebel victory at Endor […]" Not sure about the capitalisation of "rebel" here. Is it capitalised in the source?
  • Changed to Rebel Alliance--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 21:45, September 24, 2020 (UTC)
• Starter sentence for the Legacy section should connect with the previous line about the GCW. The Empire's ultimate defeat there should be mentioned in place of "after the fall of the Galactic Empire."
  • Done--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 21:45, September 24, 2020 (UTC)
• I found some linking of individual words of proper compound nouns while skimming through the article. (e.g. Death Star) There's probably a few more in the article that needs removing. - - - OOM 224 ༼༽^{talk}༼༽ 18:53, September 22, 2020 (UTC)
  • Thank you. I'll check through it and remove any more that I find--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 21:45, September 24, 2020 (UTC)
    • I can't find any more but I'll keep looking--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 17:52, September 25, 2020 (UTC)
      • Great. Striking so that the objection won't exceed the time limit. - - - OOM 224 ༼༽^{talk}༼༽ 21:58, October 1, 2020 (UTC)
• Not sure what this is about. Please reword with some formal language and without original research. "At one point during the Imperial Era, an Imperial moff ordered an Onager-class Star Destroyer to destroy a city from orbit, while in another moment an Alliance base was destroyed, though it was undetermined if the Empire had equipped a miniaturized Death Star superlaser on an Onager or if it was something else." - - - OOM 224 ༼༽^{talk}༼༽ 21:58, October 1, 2020 (UTC)
  • That is not original research, that's how it's worded in the source. I've slightly reworded to be more encyclopedic, but I'd appreciate it if you don't say that I'm using original research without checking first, thanks.--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 13:48, October 8, 2020 (UTC)
    • Sorry for the assumption. Does the source mention who was undetermined as to whether the Onager used DS technology? Also, I don't understand what "a different circumstance" is referring to; that the Onager could have been equipped with some other technology? - - -OOM 224 ༼༽^{talk}༼༽ 15:41, October 8, 2020 (UTC)
      • No worries! The source phrases the sentence as a question, so for that piece of information within the question I phrased it as being undetermined. Additionally, "a different circumstance" is the change I made to "something else" to make it more encyclopedic, since the source says "something else." The full statement is "Has the Empire successfully mounted a miniaturized Death Star superlaser on an Onager, or did something else destroyed the base?"--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 00:25, October 9, 2020 (UTC)
• The Mustafar DB entry doesn't say the action at Mustafar marked the beginning of the GCW, only that it was "one of the earliest rebel victories" of the war. Please revise the article accordingly. - - -OOM 224 ༼༽^{talk}༼༽ 15:41, October 8, 2020 (UTC)
  • Fixed--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 14:33, October 9, 2020 (UTC)
• The article body and intro states the alternative name is "Imperial Siege Breaker," while it's just "Siege Breaker" in bts.
  • It's because it was originally only identified as the Siege Breaker. Onager-class Star Destroyer and Imperial Siege Breaker originate from much later sources.--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 14:33, October 9, 2020 (UTC)
• Could the Onager's designation as a capital ship be included in the infobox? - - -OOM 224 ༼༽^{talk}༼༽ 13:55, October 9, 2020 (UTC)
  • I don't think so, since none of the other capital ship articles include it in the infobox, such as Secutor-class Star Destroyer, as well as that capital ship is not a class or role--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 14:33, October 9, 2020 (UTC)
• (Reviewing note) Links should be provided in individuals references; when used in ref notes, they don't count as duplicate links.
  • Thanks--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 18:58, October 16, 2020 (UTC)
• (Reviewing note) Twitter citations don't need an image link if a backup link is already provided.
  • Thanks, that was prior to the change--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 18:58, October 16, 2020 (UTC)
• The Legacy section could use an additional image. - - -OOM 224 ༼༽^{talk}༼༽ 11:47, October 16, 2020 (UTC)
  • Added--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 18:58, October 16, 2020 (UTC)
• The amount of text in the caption of the last image is a bit too much. Enlarging the image would help, but even then the text should be shortened. - - -OOM 224 ༼༽^{talk}༼༽ 14:50, 29 November 2020 (UTC)
  • Shortened --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 17:21, 29 November 2020 (UTC)

Fred strikes back

• Can we try to divide these massive sections up? A section should ideally be between 1-3 paragraphs. MasterFred(talk) 04:26, 12 November 2020 (UTC)
  • Would subsectioning work? --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 15:14, 17 November 2020 (UTC)
    • That would be the only way to do it while following the LG. MasterFred(talk) 07:59, 26 November 2020 (UTC)
      • Done --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 17:21, 29 November 2020 (UTC)
• To build off the last objection, with more sections, are there any more images or quotes that could be added? MasterFred(talk) 05:14, 2 December 2020 (UTC)
  • There's no other quotes but there is an image, though I don't really want to use it since there's no high quality version. File:SunderFFG.png. --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 14:58, 4 December 2020 (UTC)
    • That's fair. That image is definitely not suitable for a status article. MasterFred(talk) 03:55, 11 December 2020 (UTC)
• {{Mediacat}} should be placed inside the reference scrollbox. MasterFred(talk) 03:58, 11 December 2020 (UTC)
  • Fixed --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 03:09, 21 December 2020 (UTC)
    • Actually, it should go in "Sources," but since I misspoke, I went ahead and moved it. MasterFred(talk) 21:10, 25 December 2020 (UTC)
• Is there a reason you don't italicize "Onager" when on its own? MasterFred(talk) 06:29, 25 January 2021 (UTC)
  • Starships and Speeders doesn't italicize, so I didn't either. --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 20:02, 26 January 2021 (UTC)
• You shouldn't start a new section with a pronoun when referring to the subject of the article.
  • Fixed --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 20:02, 26 January 2021 (UTC)
• "Toward," "forward," "backward," and similar words are preferred without the "s" at the end.
  • Done, can't find any more examples. --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 20:02, 26 January 2021 (UTC)
• See here for an explanation on when to use "that" versus "which." You can see where I changed some in my copy-edit here, but that only covers the intro and first two sections. MasterFred(talk) 06:51, 25 January 2021 (UTC)
  • Seems like most of them were in the paragraphs you fixed. Done. --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 20:06, 26 January 2021 (UTC)

Tommy

• To clarify, is the relationship between the Onager and the Mandator IV directly mentioned in sources? Or is that a link you've made?
  • I have spoken with Vitus, and he has allowed me to adopt the nomination. Alright, I have not found any established connection between the two ships, nor with the Xyston. I can ask Vitus if you'd like me to, though. Erebus Chronus (talk) 18:35, 1 April 2021 (UTC)
    • I've spoken with Vitus, and the connection is established in the Rebel Files. It implies that the technology was used by the First Order. Erebus Chronus (talk) 21:05, 1 April 2021 (UTC)
• Please refer to the MoS section on linking. Tommy-Macaroni 13:46, 1 April 2021 (UTC)
  • I can't find any links you may be referring to. Erebus Chronus (talk) 18:35, 1 April 2021 (UTC)

Comments

• In reference to the Sunder image linked above, the card was recently released in Upgrade Card Collection in a larger size, meaning you can acquire a higher quality shot for the article. Shayanomer (talk) 10:22, 12 December 2020 (UTC)
  • I'll add it when I'm able to have access to that card --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 03:10, 21 December 2020 (UTC)
• I am taking a temporary personal leave from the site for the sake of my personal health and happiness, and I expect to return anywhere from one week to several weeks. --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 14:42, 28 March 2021 (UTC)
• I have returned :P --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 21:50, 2 April 2021 (UTC)

Waxer/Legends (Redux review)

• Redux comments: Reduxed per Meeting 114.
• Date added: April 11, 2020

(+2)

Support

1. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 23:37, April 11, 2020 (UTC)
2. Supreme Emperor (talk) 17:03, October 5, 2020 (UTC)

Object

Toprawa

• Two-speaker quotes get the Quote template, not Dialogue. There's at least one case of this being done incorrectly in the article. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 19:43, April 24, 2020 (UTC)
  • Fixed. 01miki10 ^{Open comlink} 21:07, April 28, 2020 (UTC)
• The intro seems pretty large relative to the rest of the size of the article, which isn't all that big. Just eying it up, it probably doesn't need to be any longer than the length of the infobox. Whoever is potentially maintaining this thing, see what you can do about cutting it down. Concentrate on unnecessary details that can be saved for the Bio. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 00:19, 2 February 2021 (UTC)
  • Sorry for the slow response. I have gone through the intro and removed some unneccessary detail. Please check if that is enough or if it needs more trimming. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 10:24, 20 February 2021 (UTC)
  • Objection(s) overridden by Inquisitorius 16:22, 20 April 2021 (UTC)

Shayanomer

• Since Waxer has several lines of dialogue on the wiki, a {{Soundcat}} would be good to have on the article. Shayanomer (talk) 07:58, May 10, 2020 (UTC)
  • Added. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 08:51, May 10, 2020 (UTC)

Fred strikes back

• Per other status articles on clones, the affiliation field in the infobox should also include the GAR and the 212th. MasterFred(talk) 20:46, 16 January 2021 (UTC)
  • It used to include those, but was changed in accordance with WP:LG, which states that: the "Affiliations" field of infoboxes shall list sub-bullets to a maximum depth of one. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 06:53, 18 January 2021 (UTC)
    • I was in discussion with Shay about this and we both thought that to be the case, but for some reason I completely missed that line when reading the infobox section in the LG. MasterFred(talk) 08:02, 18 January 2021 (UTC)

4-A7

• Nominated by:--Editoronthewiki (talk) 04:36, May 2, 2020 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: With the war coming to a close, I figured it would make sense to look back at something from its start.

(0 Inqs/3 Users/3 Total)

(Votes required: 3 Inqvote(s) required to reach minimum. Additional 1 user or 1 Inq vote required to pass.)

Support

1. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 06:56, May 29, 2020 (UTC)
2. --TheTrooperGuy (talk) 20:24, July 1, 2020 (UTC)
3. Cwedin^(talk) 15:14, 14 April 2021 (UTC)

Object

AV

• Citation 12 is broken. Looks like you left his Class One degree out of the info box.
  • How should I fix this?--Editoronthewiki (talk) 13:14, May 2, 2020 (UTC)
    • Okay, I did a little research and it doesn't look like you can site the RA-7 being a Class 1 droid to Droidography. Per the descriptions of the droid degrees from Droidography and the Visual Encyclopedia, the RA-7 would be a Class 3. I would add a note along the lines of "Star Wars: The Visual Encyclopedia establishes that protocol droids are third class droids. As the Star Wars: The Clone Wars film depicts 4-A7 as an RA-7 protocol droid, he must be a third class droid." to the infobox alongside Class 3, while changing citation 13 to match. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 17:06, May 2, 2020 (UTC)
      • I have fixed that, but it is still saying the reference is invalid?--Editoronthewiki (talk) 17:29, May 2, 2020 (UTC)
        • Tooks care of the degree field not displaying. As for the citation being invalid, make sure your capitalization matches that of the parent citation. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 17:44, May 2, 2020 (UTC)
          • Thank you. So, is this objection fully fixed?--Editoronthewiki (talk) 18:06, May 2, 2020 (UTC)
            • Yup, I'll mark it off. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 18:15, May 2, 2020 (UTC)
• Per the Star Wars dot com Encyclopedia entry for the Twilight, the ship belonged to Ziro's criminal organization. Given his part in the plot to kidnap Rotta, this might be worth mentioning in the article. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 05:15, May 2, 2020 (UTC)
  • Done?--Editoronthewiki (talk) 16:39, May 2, 2020 (UTC)
• 4-A7's model was reused as Unidentified RA-7 protocol droid (Coruscant), would be worth mentioning in the Bts. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 05:47, May 2, 2020 (UTC)
  • Sorry to interject here, but I've checked Evil Plans' episode guide and it doesn't say anything about that droid's model being repurposed from 4-A7. Until there is concrete evidence, like The Jedi Who Knew Too Much's guide, I say we should leave it out. Shayanomer (talk) 05:58, May 2, 2020 (UTC)
    • I took AV and Shay's points into account and simply noted it looks similar.--Editoronthewiki (talk) 16:51, May 2, 2020 (UTC)
      • Since 4-A7's character model was used a throughout the series for generic droids, I might see about taking the time to track down every time it was reused without alteration, rather than having the article pinpoint this single example. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 17:06, May 2, 2020 (UTC)
        • Should I describe what those droids do like I did for the Coruscant one, or simply list that they were there?--Editoronthewiki (talk) 17:46, May 2, 2020 (UTC)
          • Probsbly that they the model was present in whichever episodes. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 17:48, May 2, 2020 (UTC)
            • Based on what another objection is saying, I feel like it makes more sense for me to not list out every episode. Instead, I could note the similar looking droids exist and source it to several (maybe just three or so) episodes.--Editoronthewiki (talk) 00:16, May 21, 2020 (UTC)
              • Yeah, that makes sense, I agree with this change. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 22:27, May 21, 2020 (UTC)
                • Should I get into episodes that use the updated model?--Editoronthewiki (talk) 21:08, May 22, 2020 (UTC)
                  • No, I shouldn't think you need to mention that in the Bts beyond the fact that 4-A7's model was updated into R-A7. If R-A7's model was used elsewhere in the series, that should go on their page. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 21:11, May 22, 2020 (UTC)
                    • Then I am done with this objection?--Editoronthewiki (talk) 20:58, May 28, 2020 (UTC)
• 4-A7 has a sizeable section in Star Wars: Build Your Own R2-D2 11 that contains new information. You can chase down User:Ayrehead02 for access to the source. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 20:52, May 29, 2020 (UTC)
  • I need help figuring out the template for build your own--Editoronthewiki (talk) 19:13, June 11, 2020 (UTC)
    • done--Editoronthewiki (talk) 00:22, July 2, 2020 (UTC)

Shayanomer

• You can definitely cut down at least 2 of the big paragraphs, which would create room for sectioning. Shayanomer (talk) 05:38, May 2, 2020 (UTC)
  • By cut down do you mean reduce word count or split them into separate paragraphs? As I think sectioning means creating subheaders?--Editoronthewiki (talk) 18:11, May 2, 2020 (UTC)
    • Yes, split them and create subheadings, with quotes too. Shayanomer (talk) 18:15, May 2, 2020 (UTC)
      • done--Editoronthewiki (talk) 19:47, May 2, 2020 (UTC)
        • An additional quote would be nice. Shayanomer (talk) 19:50, May 2, 2020 (UTC)
          • done--Editoronthewiki (talk) 22:55, May 2, 2020 (UTC)
• In the sources, you need to the list the base episode guide, not the gallery.
  • Looks like Cwedin fixed this while I was writing the objection. Shayanomer (talk) 05:43, May 2, 2020 (UTC)
    • *hat tip* - Cwedin^(talk) 05:56, May 2, 2020 (UTC)
• You can definitely add info on 4A-7's model being reused for another droid in The Jedi Who Knew Too Much, according to that gallery. Here, the gallery itself will be used to source this information. Shayanomer (talk) 05:42, May 2, 2020 (UTC)
  • Look okay?--Editoronthewiki (talk) 17:17, May 2, 2020 (UTC)
    • Looks fine for now, but I feel that stuff like the episode seasons is a bit overkill. It doesn't really break the article in my opinion. Better to wait and see what other people think. Shayanomer (talk) 17:31, May 2, 2020 (UTC)
• Sourcing Jabba's species separately feels really unnecessary since we can clearly see him in the film.
  • Fixed that. Ultimate establishes the dark acolyte title and outright states Ventress kidnapped Rotta, so that is why it is used--Editoronthewiki (talk) 21:28, May 26, 2020 (UTC)
• I'm sure there's a more concrete source you can use to replace an old SWE entry for the Twilight.
  • I am not sure what you mean. It is only there to source it was part of Ziro's operation.--Editoronthewiki (talk) 21:28, May 26, 2020 (UTC)
    • I've checked the source and it doesn't really make it clear that Teth was occupied by the Separatists. The canon reference books I've checked all say it was within Hutt-controlled territory. Only the fortress was under Separatist control. Shayanomer (talk) 16:17, May 27, 2020 (UTC)
      • Then should I change it to saying the fortress was occupied?--Editoronthewiki (talk) 16:37, May 27, 2020 (UTC)
        • Yup, this can be sourced to the film itself. Shayanomer (talk) 16:38, May 27, 2020 (UTC)
          • Fixed--Editoronthewiki (talk) 16:53, May 27, 2020 (UTC)
• I'm also certain there are more quotes from 4-A7 you can include in the article, expanding existing quotes or replacing quotes from other characters.
  • Better?--Editoronthewiki (talk) 17:19, May 27, 2020 (UTC)
• "His gray body was also similar in appearance to the 3PO-series protocol droid." This is unnecessary and feels like speculation.
  • It is very similar to the 3PO series, and I feel like it should be included. There appear to be two in-universe models of RA-7s, those that have a similar body to 3POs and those that do not. As 4-A7 falls into the former category, it should be noted.--Editoronthewiki (talk) 16:01, May 27, 2020 (UTC)
    • Then in that case, every single RA-7 droid of that model has a similar body to a 3PO droid, which I believe would be redundant information on individual droid articles. Shayanomer (talk) 16:17, May 27, 2020 (UTC)
      • Fixed--Editoronthewiki (talk) 16:37, May 27, 2020 (UTC)
• "RA-7 was willing to answer and even warned him that the dungeons were dangerous" This is the first time in the article you mention "dungeons." Please elaborate on this.
  • Changed wording in second paragraph of the biography section to fix that--Editoronthewiki (talk) 16:40, May 27, 2020 (UTC)
• Per Layout Guide, the film only requires the release year in the BTS. This also means you can say that the novelizations came out "before the film."
  • Does that work?--Editoronthewiki (talk) 15:56, May 29, 2020 (UTC)
• Context for A New Hope. Shayanomer (talk) 10:07, May 24, 2020 (UTC)
  • Good?--Editoronthewiki (talk) 21:28, May 26, 2020 (UTC)
    • You still need to point out that the novels came out before the film. Shayanomer (talk) 16:17, May 27, 2020 (UTC)
• You've had the update tag and redlink on the article for quite a while. Have you finished updating the article? Shayanomer (talk) 05:59, June 9, 2020 (UTC)
  • Sorry for the delay. I just needed to double check if some information needed to be added. It is almost done.--Editoronthewiki (talk) 15:07, June 10, 2020 (UTC)
    • All info is added. Just need to solve the red link and add the template.--Editoronthewiki (talk) 19:21, June 11, 2020 (UTC)
      • done--Editoronthewiki (talk) 00:22, July 2, 2020 (UTC)
• Can you replace the SWE reference with something more recent? The precedent is to use it as sparingly as possible. Shayanomer (talk) 09:54, September 4, 2020 (UTC)
  • Fixed--Editoronthewiki (talk) 19:09, September 4, 2020 (UTC)
• So that this is official: Redlink needs to be cleared and the page updated. Shayanomer (talk) 18:39, October 13, 2020 (UTC)
  • Done--Editoronthewiki (talk) 20:41, October 16, 2020 (UTC)

Cwedin

• Just a few things in the BTS:
  • Can you add the full release dates for the film and novels?
    • The film can out in Europe first. Should I put the US release date?--Editoronthewiki (talk) 17:40, May 2, 2020 (UTC)
      • Yes, I would use the film's wide release date (15 August).
        • Done--Editoronthewiki (talk) 18:05, May 2, 2020 (UTC)
  • "Malevolence" should be italicized.
    • done--Editoronthewiki (talk) 17:40, May 2, 2020 (UTC)
  • The novelization references should also be formatted. - Cwedin^(talk) 05:56, May 2, 2020 (UTC)
    • Fixed--Editoronthewiki (talk) 17:40, May 2, 2020 (UTC)
      • The junior novelization reference needs its parenthesis removed. - Cwedin^(talk) 17:49, May 2, 2020 (UTC)
        • done--Editoronthewiki (talk) 18:05, May 2, 2020 (UTC)
• More BTS:
  • Fourth sentence needs a full stop.
    • done--Editoronthewiki (talk) 02:30, May 3, 2020 (UTC)
  • "An animation model[18] that looks very similar to 4-A7's[2] was later used in the[18] Season Three [19] episode "Evil Plans" as a RA-7 protocol droid on[18] the Republic capital world[20] of Coruscant.[18] For the[21] Season Five[22] episode..." and so on: There's a lot of superfluous info here that could be trimmed down.
    • Good?--Editoronthewiki (talk) 02:30, May 3, 2020 (UTC)
      • Better. You can also remove the references in "For the[19] Season Five[20] episode..." since all of that can be sourced to [19]. - Cwedin^(talk) 02:52, May 3, 2020 (UTC)
        • fixed--Editoronthewiki (talk) 17:26, May 5, 2020 (UTC)
  • I'd also recommend splitting the BTS into two paragraphs. - Cwedin^(talk) 02:17, May 3, 2020 (UTC)
    • I still have some work to get done in it, but this has been done--Editoronthewiki (talk) 13:44, May 15, 2020 (UTC)
• Some minor things:
  • The links to Confederacy should be removed, since that's a real world disambiguation page.
    • Removed--Editoronthewiki (talk) 02:50, May 17, 2020 (UTC)
  • In the second intro paragraph, there's a stray "but."
    • Done--Editoronthewiki (talk) 22:26, May 16, 2020 (UTC)
  • In the bio: "a RA-7" --> "an RA-7."
    • Did I fix what you meant?--Editoronthewiki (talk) 22:26, May 16, 2020 (UTC)
      • Yep, that was it. - Cwedin^(talk) 22:36, May 16, 2020 (UTC)
  • The image captions should use characters' full names.
    • fixed--Editoronthewiki (talk) 02:50, May 17, 2020 (UTC)
  • In the BTS, I don't think it's necessary to mention every instance of a similar animation model. Maybe something like "Animation models used for the RA-7 series in the television series look very similar to 4-A7's model," and then reference that sentence with some of the episodes.
    • It's based on User:AV-6R7's objection above, but if anyone else objects then okay--Editoronthewiki (talk) 02:50, May 17, 2020 (UTC)
  • "Star Wars Legends" should be identified as a continuity. - Cwedin^(talk) 20:40, May 16, 2020 (UTC)
    • done--Editoronthewiki (talk) 12:22, May 19, 2020 (UTC)

Ben

• "The Jedi who knew too much" concept art gallery reference has no archival link. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 20:51, May 2, 2020 (UTC)
  • done--Editoronthewiki (talk) 22:09, May 5, 2020 (UTC)

QGJ

• The infobox death field can all be sourced with a single ref note, if you add a little additional context.
  • Good?--Editoronthewiki (talk) 22:14, May 21, 2020 (UTC)
• What exactly was "dangerous?" It's unclear what you are referring to here. Warning the Jedi Knight that it was dangerous
  • Like that?--Editoronthewiki (talk) 21:51, May 21, 2020 (UTC)
• Same thing in the "Characteristics." When the Jedi Knight asked where Rotta was, RA-7 was willing to answer and even warned him that it was dangerous.
  • Like that?--Editoronthewiki (talk) 21:51, May 21, 2020 (UTC)
• Do we need both refs for the release date of the two novelizations in the Bts? Can't we just stick with one?
  • Well, he first appeared in both, and they were released the same day. So I had figured it was needed.--Editoronthewiki (talk) 21:51, May 21, 2020 (UTC)
    • I meant this part: which were both released on July 26, 2008. It is currently sourced to both to the Year by Year book and the SW.com article. If both of those sources proviode the release date for the aforementioned books, we can just pick one source, having two refs is redundant in this case. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 09:51, May 25, 2020 (UTC)
      • Year by Year only provides the release date for the junior novel, so two refs are needed. But it looks like the SW.com reference doesn't actually mention the Del Rey novelization, so that should be replaced with an Amazon listing or something. - Cwedin^(talk) 17:39, May 27, 2020 (UTC)
        • Could someone help me with that Amazon link? I have the url, back up link, and title there, but I am doing something wrong.--Editoronthewiki (talk) 20:55, May 28, 2020 (UTC)
          • I've fixed this for you. You had some wrong parameter names. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 06:56, May 29, 2020 (UTC)
• Article is listed in Category:Espionage droids, but I don't see the term linked anywhere in the article. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 13:05, May 21, 2020 (UTC)
  • I had to use the term "spy droid," as that's the canon version.--Editoronthewiki (talk) 22:14, May 21, 2020 (UTC)
    • You are correct. I did not notice that the canon term is different, my bad. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 09:51, May 25, 2020 (UTC)

OOM

• Per this Layout Guide policy, the {{Imagecat}} template should be placed in the article.
  • Done--Editoronthewiki (talk) 12:31, July 16, 2020 (UTC)
• I don't think 4-A7's 3PO unit plating needs to be mentioned in the intro.
  • Done--Editoronthewiki (talk) 12:32, July 16, 2020 (UTC)
• (Reviewing note) Second mentions of "BBY" could be linked to Galactic calendar. (I have fixed this) - - - OOM 224 ༼༽^{talk}༼༽ 10:45, July 10, 2020 (UTC)
  • So this is done?--Editoronthewiki (talk) 12:32, July 16, 2020 (UTC)
    • Yup. Just a note. - - - OOM 224 ༼༽^{talk}༼༽ 13:14, July 18, 2020 (UTC)

Zed

• In the intro: "Turning her weapon against the protocol droid, 4-A7 told her to not dare kill him, only to then be swiftly decapitated." This wording seems to imply that 4-A7 is the one turning a weapon. Zed42 (talk) 10:14, September 4, 2020 (UTC)
  • Good?--Editoronthewiki (talk) 13:45, September 4, 2020 (UTC)

Macaroni

• Under errors, I don't see a reason to mention he didn't appear in the whole series, just the episode he's credited in should be fine. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 20:45, 26 February 2021 (UTC)
  • Fixed, only just saw this objection so glad I caught it on time Editoronthewiki (talk) 18:15, 7 March 2021 (UTC)
    • I had forgotten about it as well to be honest. :P JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 18:18, 7 March 2021 (UTC)

Comments

• There are several things I want community opinion on--Editoronthewiki (talk) 04:36, May 2, 2020 (UTC)
  • When Ahsoka lights her lightsaber after he calls her a servant girl, his arms are slightly raised, implying he was surprised/scared. I figure this is too much of an assumption, but I might as well ask.--Editoronthewiki (talk) 04:36, May 2, 2020 (UTC)
    • I think it would be safe to say he was startled by Ahsoka's actions. - JMAS ^{Hey, it's me!} 06:05, May 2, 2020 (UTC)
      • Should I put that in the characteristics section or biography?--Editoronthewiki (talk) 13:17, May 2, 2020 (UTC)
        • I don't think it was a characteristic, so I think the biography section. - JMAS ^{Hey, it's me!} 18:53, May 2, 2020 (UTC)
          • Well I put "seemingly" just in case it was part of his act. It probably was not, but just to be sure.--Editoronthewiki (talk) 23:26, May 2, 2020 (UTC)
  • When Ahsoka talks to him on the landing pad, he kind of seems nervous, but I also want community opinion to see if I should include that.--Editoronthewiki (talk) 04:36, May 2, 2020 (UTC)
  • I think I should continue to go through The Clone Wars episodes to see if his name appears in the credits of other episodes. I had just wanted this nomination up before Season Seven ended. Should I only be looking in the English credits? Disney plus does show some foreign credits at the end of episodes.--Editoronthewiki (talk) 04:36, May 2, 2020 (UTC)
    • Update on this: I checked the credits of all of season one and two. I will continue to go through and check each episode's credits in the coming days. I am only checking the blue credits that appear before the clip of R2-D2 presenting the logo.--Editoronthewiki (talk) 02:55, May 3, 2020 (UTC)
      • Well it has taken me too long to get back to this! I have gone through seasons three, four, and seven now. Sorry it has taken me so long to finish this part of the nomination.--Editoronthewiki (talk) 02:03, September 13, 2020 (UTC)
        • Done--Editoronthewiki (talk) 20:41, September 13, 2020 (UTC)
• What is the canon source for the name 4-A7? If the only canon source that names the character is the episode guide, then the page needs to be moved to 4A7 with no dashes. - JMAS ^{Hey, it's me!} 05:23, May 2, 2020 (UTC)
  • The 4-A7 spelling comes from the film credits. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 05:33, May 2, 2020 (UTC)
    • Thanks for clarifying. Since Disney+ sometimes changes the subtitles from the blu-ray releases, I did confirm that both the blu-ray and Disney+ credits list him as 4-A7. - JMAS ^{Hey, it's me!} 06:08, May 2, 2020 (UTC)
• Per a conversation I had via talk pages with User:DarthRuiz30, this article is now going with the assumption that the three battle droids were B1s. It will also make this project a lot easier.--Editoronthewiki (talk) 21:58, May 4, 2020 (UTC)
• After observing this article for a while, it's my observation that this article is not suitable for nomination currently. Sources have been added since the nomination's beginning. Rule 1 of the nomination policy states that the article must be "well-written and comprehensively detailed". In my opinion, 4-A7 hasn't reached that point as it is still undergoing more updates. Since the nomination began, the article has gained a whopping 16k bytes in size. Every time the article undergoes such a change, it has to reviewed all over again, and more copy-edits have to be made to eliminate grammar and formatting errors. Shayanomer (talk) 06:57, October 6, 2020 (UTC)

Silver Angel

• Nominated by: RattsT (talk) 05:18, May 6, 2020 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: My first FAN, hopefully this goes well!

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Support

1. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 07:17, June 4, 2020 (UTC)
2. Great job on maintaining the article. Shayanomer (talk) 09:48, June 4, 2020 (UTC)
3. Nice work.--TheTrooperGuy (talk) 20:17, July 1, 2020 (UTC)
4. JMAS ^{Hey, it's me!} 06:16, July 8, 2020 (UTC)
5. --Editoronthewiki (talk) 17:14, July 8, 2020 (UTC)
6. Cade999 (talk) 14:49, 4 January 2021 (UTC)

Object

Shayanomer

• "The job went awry, however, when Trace dumped the spice into hyperspace, fearful of what her sister's employers, the Pyke Syndicate, could do to her and her ship." Try to restructure this sentence to reduce the overuse of commas.
• Double reference for the last sentence in Description is unnecessary, only the episode guide can be used here.
• I don't think the info about Trace naming the ship can be sourced to the Databank, Deal No Deal would suffice here.
• Kessel being a planet will need a reference of its own.
• I believe the pilot who abandoned the spice delivery can have an article of its own.
• You can add more info about the military lane, specifically, the Venator that Yularen and Skywalker were on.
• Marg Krim can be introduced as the Pyke leader on his first mention in the article.
• The Kom'rk that follows the Angel is the Gauntlet, which is missing from this article.
• Ziro's escape from prison can be given a date.
• Context for Ghost and Rebels in the BTS.
• The concept artist(s) who illustrated the ship can be added to the BTS.
• Reviewing note: Take care with the placement of commas in quotations.
• Reviewing note: Be careful of underlinking in future nominations. Shayanomer (talk) 08:52, May 8, 2020 (UTC)
  • All objections handled, except for the date note. Not sure how to figure out the placement of that event. RattsT (talk) 19:38, May 8, 2020 (UTC)
    • Use Anza as a guide. Since Galactic Atlas doesn't date the hostage crisis, you'll have to find the two closest events in the episode order and work out an approximate date. Shayanomer (talk) 19:45, May 8, 2020 (UTC)
      • Added. RattsT (talk) 20:35, May 8, 2020 (UTC)
• You should reference the specific gallery that makes the connection between this ship and the Ghost, which is the trivia gallery in this case. This can be done using the site's search bar since the guide doesn't allow you to open the individual galleries separately. Shayanomer (talk) 19:50, May 8, 2020 (UTC)
  • Added. RattsT (talk) 20:51, May 8, 2020 (UTC)
• The name of the Gauntlet will need a reference of its own. Shayanomer (talk) 07:31, May 9, 2020 (UTC)
  • Added. RattsT (talk) 20:22, May 9, 2020 (UTC)
• Escape from Oba Diah is missing from the infobox. Shayanomer (talk) 09:06, May 10, 2020 (UTC)
  • Linked. RattsT (talk) 09:22, May 10, 2020 (UTC)
• Can you add some info on their capture in the intro as they tried to escape in the ship? Right now, it abruptly jumps to their escape from prison after dumping the spice.
• Hyperdrive, communications and shields are missing from the infobox.
• You've used "however" a lot in the article, can you introduce some variation in the wording?
• Maul's takeover of Mandalore will need to sourced to Shades of Reason. Shayanomer (talk) 08:27, June 4, 2020 (UTC)
• Missing Sources: Rafa and Ahsoka's Databank entries, this TV spot, Deal No Deal clip.
• Deal No Deal's concept art gallery shows that JP Balmet drew the ship's exterior, this is missing from the BTS. In addition, one of the images in that gallery depicts Kessel and Oba Diah's lighting concept with the ship in it, done by Jason Boesch. The gallery in Together Again also has more lighting concept artwork by Boesch. Shayanomer (talk) 08:40, June 4, 2020 (UTC)
  • Addressed all. RattsT (talk) 09:18, June 4, 2020 (UTC)
    • Great, just add little more in the intro about them attempting to escape from the palace before their capture and split it into two paragraphs. You also need to add a reference to Together Again's gallery with the specific slide. Shayanomer (talk) 09:25, June 4, 2020 (UTC)
      • Is it necessary to cite every appearance of concept art? The fact that Boesch did artwork for the ship is already sourced to the DND gallery. RattsT (talk) 09:33, June 4, 2020 (UTC)
        • For comprehensiveness, it doesn't hurt to include it. Shayanomer (talk) 09:36, June 4, 2020 (UTC)
          • Alright, added. RattsT (talk) 09:44, June 4, 2020 (UTC)

AV

• The TCW Season 7 OST provides the alternate spelling Silverangel in the second volume. I would recommend making some mention of this in the Bts. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 02:41, May 12, 2020 (UTC)
  • Gross, they misspelled "Pikes" too. Added. RattsT (talk) 03:37, May 12, 2020 (UTC)

QGJ

• This sentence makes it seem like Trace knew about Ahsoka's Jedi past right away, which wasn't the case. A little rewording is required. Martez was impressed with the former Jedi Padawan's eye for ships,
• Lokann's name should be spelled out, instead of pipelinked as "a criminal" like that.
• Please look into cutting some of the play-by-play details in the history. There are quite a lot of sentences, especially in the whole Oba Diah sequence, containing phrases such as "character X said this" and "character Y responded with that." This is always distracting, especially when the characters aren't even the focus of the article - the ship is.
  • I've excised some bits here and there, let me know if I can do more. I kept a bit between the sisters after their first escape because they're talking directly about the ship. RattsT (talk) 09:52, June 1, 2020 (UTC)
    • Looks better now, good job. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 08:58, June 3, 2020 (UTC)
• Both "Running spice" and "Escaping Oba Diah" sections look fairly long in the Oasis skin. Now this may change, depending on how much info you cut down. For now though, I feel like it's best to split those two sections and make them into three instead.
• Is it "Pyke Palace" or "the Pyke Palace?" Please check the sources for the correct spelling. If the sources use both, then just choose one spelling yourself for consistency.
• I feel like Maul deserves a tad more context upon first introduction, something like "former Sith Lord" should suffice.
• Also related to Maul. You need to establish that Maul was in control of Mandalore, to give context for Bo-Katan's desire to defeat him. they were interrupted by the Mandalorian Bo-Katan Kryze, who had followed them from Oba Diah to request Tano's help in defeating Maul. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 09:09, June 1, 2020 (UTC)
  • All other points addressed. RattsT (talk) 09:52, June 1, 2020 (UTC)
    • All that's left is to provide a quote for the "Escaping to Coruscant" section. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 08:58, June 3, 2020 (UTC)
      • Added. RattsT (talk) 09:26, June 3, 2020 (UTC)

Braha'tok enthusiast

• Would it be possible to mention Tano parting with the sisters in the intro? Even if it's only brief. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 13:01, July 7, 2020 (UTC)
  • Added. RattsT (talk) 06:06, July 8, 2020 (UTC)

OOM

• Images could be enlarged. - - - OOM 224 ༼༽^{talk}༼༽ 06:42, October 1, 2020 (UTC)
  • Done. RattsT (talk) 05:50, October 5, 2020 (UTC)
• I've updated the dates with information from The Star Wars Book. You might want to look over them. - - -OOM 224 ༼༽^{talk}༼༽ 07:19, October 5, 2020 (UTC)
  • They look fine to me. RattsT (talk) 08:12, October 8, 2020 (UTC)
• The intro is rather short for a FA. Information from the Description section is particularly lacking.
  • Expanded. RattsT (talk) 02:06, 8 November 2020 (UTC)
• "The two became quick friends, with Tano saving the young mechanic from the debt collector Pintu Son-El and assisting her in catching a renegade binary loadlifter" "Her" could easily be mistaken for referring to Pintu. - - -OOM 224 ༼༽^{talk}༼༽ 22:08, 4 November 2020 (UTC)
  • I disagree. I think readers will be able understand who "her" is referring to through context. RattsT (talk) 02:06, 8 November 2020 (UTC)
• The "(6)" of the engine unit field is infobox-exclusive. - - -OOM 224 ༼༽^{talk}༼༽ 08:19, 8 November 2020 (UTC)
  • Added. RattsT (talk) 06:43, 10 November 2020 (UTC)
• The last line of the second paragraph under the "The Clone Wars cancellation and revival" section is unsourced.
• The mention of the production of the "Twins" is exclusive to the BTS image captions. - - -OOM 224 ༼༽^{talk}༼༽ 12:28, 9 January 2021 (UTC)
  • I've removed much of the information related to the above two objections. It was added by another user and much of it was either improperly sourced, or irrelevant to this article. The source provided didn't even reference the ship. RattsT (talk) 04:09, 23 January 2021 (UTC)
• A Youmay linking to Black Ace should be added. - - -OOM 224 ༼༽^{talk}༼༽ 12:32, 9 January 2021 (UTC)
  • Added. RattsT (talk) 04:09, 23 January 2021 (UTC)
• "The crew attempted to deceive the Syndicate's leader, Marg Krim, and avoid his wrath […]" Would replacing "and" with "to" be appropiate here?
  • "To deceive and avoid" makes more grammatical sense to me than "To deceive to avoid." RattsT (talk) 08:22, 24 February 2021 (UTC)
• Quote attributions should provide full names.
  • As far as I can tell there's no rule stating this, seems to be up to individual writers. In fact, it's more inline with our writing standards to omit first names after their first usage, and I can point to several Featured Articles that do so. RattsT (talk) 08:22, 24 February 2021 (UTC)
    • I see, but for this article, it would be more informative/formal if the quote attributions, specifically the second one, provide full names instead of simply "Ahsoka" or "the Angel" OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 09:10, 24 February 2021 (UTC)
      • After thinking it over a bit I think I see where you're coming from a bit more and I've altered the second quotation. Seeing as that's the first quote used in the body, it makes sense to use the full names there. I'm still wary of using full names in every quote, however, as I feel it's redundant to the reader. RattsT (talk) 15:52, 24 February 2021 (UTC)
        • Sure; your FAN, your choice. OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 16:03, 24 February 2021 (UTC)
• Location (e.g. Outer Rim) of planets should be mentioned.
• Context for Clone Wars
• Context for Oba Diah
  • Above three objections addressed. RattsT (talk) 08:22, 24 February 2021 (UTC)
• Any specifics critcisms from Rafa and Ahsoka regarding the ship's name?
  • Not really, they just express some general distaste. RattsT (talk) 08:22, 24 February 2021 (UTC)
    • Ah, then "expressing distaste" would be more suitable here compared to "criticisms." OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 09:09, 24 February 2021 (UTC)
      • Adjusted. RattsT (talk) 15:52, 24 February 2021 (UTC)
• Can the specific model of Anakin's Venator be determined? If so, a link to that model should replace the Venator-class Star Destroyer pipelink, which should in turn replace the Star Destroyer link.
  • Assuming this is in reference to the recent reveals of the Venator I and Venator II-class variants, I don't believe we're currently able to differentiate the two, so for now, no. If that becomes more evident in the future I'll make the change. RattsT (talk) 08:22, 24 February 2021 (UTC)
• For the sake of consistency, please use either "Rafa and Tano" or "Tano and Rafa."
  • Handled. RattsT (talk) 08:22, 24 February 2021 (UTC)
• As they returned to Oba Diah, Rafa Martez hailed the Toongs from the Angel under the alias of "Transport 1519" and ordered the workers to perform a "special request pickup." I find this sentence unclear as to who "they" is referring to. Also, how could the workers load spice on to the Silver Angel as it is returning to Oba Diah?
  • Edited for clarity. RattsT (talk) 08:22, 24 February 2021 (UTC)
    • I made a copy-edit as I still found it a little confusing. OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 09:10, 24 February 2021 (UTC)
• The article does not mention how Ahsoka escaped from the Pykes in the "Escaping to Coruscant" section. OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 18:23, 22 February 2021 (UTC)
  • Ah, not sure how that happened. Fixed. RattsT (talk) 08:22, 24 February 2021 (UTC)
• I think the intro can be expanded a bit more, covering the events between the Angel's impoundment on Oba Diah and Ahsoka's escape with the help of the Martez sisters. OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 16:03, 24 February 2021 (UTC)
  • Expanded. RattsT (talk) 16:14, 24 February 2021 (UTC)
• The intro should also mention the reason why Ahsoka left with Bo-Katan. OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 16:30, 24 February 2021 (UTC)
  • I disagree. That's not really relevant for the intro. RattsT (talk) 17:08, 24 February 2021 (UTC)
    • On second thought, you're right. OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 18:16, 24 February 2021 (UTC)

EV-9D9

• Nominated by: AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 22:43, May 11, 2020 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: I have taken care of the leftover objections from the original nomination.

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Support

1. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 20:45, June 26, 2020 (UTC)
2. Fantastic work! RattsT (talk) 01:38, June 27, 2020 (UTC)
3. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 17:33, July 1, 2020 (UTC)
4. --TheTrooperGuy (talk) 20:27, July 1, 2020 (UTC)
5. --Editoronthewiki (talk) 14:36, July 2, 2020 (UTC)
6. Impressive work! - - -OOM 224 ༼༽^{talk}༼༽ 20:30, October 17, 2020 (UTC)
7. Looking good! Infectedzombieguy (talk) 05:35, 10 November 2020 (UTC)
8. Cade999 (talk) 14:51, 4 January 2021 (UTC)

Object

TQG

• Can you please add her Topps Finest 2019 - Droids card from Star Wars Card Trader to the sources and check that it has no unique information (See here for more details+release date) Toqgers (talk) 06:43, May 17, 2020 (UTC)
  • It would be good to list this card in Sources even if it doesn't feature unique info. Shayanomer (talk)
    • She's also mentioned in the 8D8 card for the set. Should I make entries for both cards on the Card Trader wiki? - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 22:07, May 20, 2020 (UTC)
      • Why not? There's no harm in including them. Shayanomer (talk) 23:38, May 20, 2020 (UTC)
        • Added both cards to the sources section, made them entires in the Card Trader wiki, and added what new information there was to this article. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 21:03, May 22, 2020 (UTC)
          • You also need to upload images of the cards to that wiki, so that there's a permanent record of them. Also as a note, set names in the template must be italicized. Shayanomer (talk) 20:27, May 23, 2020 (UTC)
            • Added images to the Card Trader wiki. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 04:22, May 26, 2020 (UTC)
              • Great. Shayanomer (talk) 08:10, May 26, 2020 (UTC)

Editor

• The article says she is mentioned in Star Wars: How Not to Get Eaten by Ewoks and Other Galactic Survival Skills, so you need to include that she was mentioned in the in-universe text in the legacy section--Editoronthewiki (talk) 14:34, May 20, 2020 (UTC)
  • Added and created an article for the guide. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 22:41, May 20, 2020 (UTC)

Shayanomer

• "...a flaw many of her model shared." This reads a little confusing.
  • Reworded. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 03:41, May 26, 2020 (UTC)
• You need to state that Galactic Atlas also dates the Battle of Yavin to 0 BBY in the date note.
  • Added. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 03:41, May 26, 2020 (UTC)
• "When the Trandoshan bounty hunter Bossk, working to retrieve the droid for the Empire, tracked it to the palace, the supervisor droid explained that 261 had escaped, claiming that he would soon learn some respect." Please restructure this to reduce its run-on nature.
  • Rewritten. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 03:41, May 26, 2020 (UTC)
    • I still think you can do better, try something like "When Bossk tracked the droid to the palace after being hired by the Empire". Shayanomer (talk) 08:22, May 26, 2020 (UTC)
      • Rewritten. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 21:06, May 29, 2020 (UTC)
• Han Solo, R2-D2 and C-3PO need context in the body.
  • Added context for Han, R2 and 3PO already have context later in the paragraph. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 03:41, May 26, 2020 (UTC)
    • Per precedent, the context is always provided on their first mention. Shayanomer (talk) 08:22, May 26, 2020 (UTC)
      • Changed. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 21:06, May 29, 2020 (UTC)
• "C-3PO, a protocol droid, was made Jabba's new interpreter, as his last one was disintegrated after it had angered him, and was fitted with a restraining bolt before being returned to the palace's main audience chamber, and R2-D2, an astromech droid, was forced to serve drinks aboard Jabba's sail barge, the Khetanna." This is also too much of a run-on.
  • Split sentence. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 03:41, May 26, 2020 (UTC)
    • This will work with the above objection, moving the context will reduce this sentence's run-on nature. Shayanomer (talk) 08:22, May 26, 2020 (UTC)
      • Forgot to note I fixed this with a prior objection. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 05:02, June 2, 2020 (UTC)
• "...and some very nasty reprogramming." This doesn't sound so formal and encyclopedic.
  • Removed. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 03:41, May 26, 2020 (UTC)
• "She ordered the torture of any droid that disobeyed her commands and, more often than not, even those that obeyed her. EV-9D9 relished her role as taskmaster of all the palace's droids and loved disintegrating her subordinates." It looks like information on torturing subordinates/those who obeyed her is repeated here.
  • I disagree, the first sentence explains the circumstances under which she orders the torture of her subordinates. I've swapped the sentences to better clarify this. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 03:41, May 26, 2020 (UTC)
    • That works. Shayanomer (talk) 08:22, May 26, 2020 (UTC)
• If there's no relation between EV and the console behind her, then the Equipment section should be removed entirely.
  • Removed. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 03:41, May 26, 2020 (UTC)
• I think her appearance in the Battlefront games can be detailed in the BTS (i.e. name of the map where she can be found). Shayanomer (talk) 16:28, May 25, 2020 (UTC)
  • Added Battlefront info to Bts. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 02:21, May 30, 2020 (UTC)
    • Release dates for these content updates are needed too, with proper sources. Shayanomer (talk) 14:50, June 2, 2020 (UTC)
      • Added. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 04:47, June 16, 2020 (UTC)
        • The WebCitation link for Welcome to the Outer Rim isn't functioning properly. Can you use Internet Archive or another alternative? We're moving away from WebCitation for backup links as the site doesn't do its job properly. Shayanomer (talk) 04:54, June 16, 2020 (UTC)
          • I replaced it with an IA link, but the webpage doesn't seem to function properly when archived. However, the data is still accessible with the ctrl + u command. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 05:06, June 16, 2020 (UTC)
            • I found an archive.is link with the text and formatting intact. I think this is the best alternative we have. Shayanomer (talk) 05:10, June 16, 2020 (UTC)
              • Replaced. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 05:40, June 16, 2020 (UTC)
• Please check Star Wars Helmet Collection and other De Agostini magazines for appearances. I'm certain she's appeared somewhere since this is a prominent character. Shayanomer (talk) 19:05, May 25, 2020 (UTC)
  • Looks like she's mentioned in Star Wars Helmet Collection 16 at the very least. Would you happen to know anyone with access to this source? - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 07:07, May 28, 2020 (UTC)
    • I believe Ayrehead02 can provide that. Shayanomer (talk) 08:22, May 28, 2020 (UTC)
      • I asked them about it on their talk page. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 23:12, May 28, 2020 (UTC)
        • Added the De Agostini stuff I could find, will work to create those articles for those issues. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 21:56, May 29, 2020 (UTC)
          • Please implement {{BuildR2Cite}} and {{HelmetCollectionCite}} for the magazines. Shayanomer (talk) 14:50, June 2, 2020 (UTC)
            • Added templates. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 21:39, June 5, 2020 (UTC)
• You now have over five redlinks in the article. You'll need to create the pages for the magazines. Shayanomer (talk) 06:56, June 6, 2020 (UTC)
  • That should be all of the redlinks taken care of. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 03:33, June 16, 2020 (UTC)
• An {{Imagecat}} can be added. Shayanomer (talk) 13:48, June 19, 2020 (UTC)
  • Article already had one (down in external links due to how things used to be formatted), but I've moved it up to appearances. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 21:29, June 19, 2020 (UTC)
• Now that she's confirmed to be in The Mandalorian, can you add a set photo from the show in the BTS? (this can be taken from Practical) Shayanomer (talk) 13:48, June 19, 2020 (UTC)
  • JMAS hooked me up. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 05:56, June 23, 2020 (UTC)
• Please resolve the redlinks in the article. Shayanomer (talk) 06:13, June 23, 2020 (UTC)
  • Resolved. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 01:17, June 25, 2020 (UTC)
• I think it would be better to move the image of 3PO and R2 to "The fall of a criminal empire," and have the old infobox image in the first section. Shayanomer (talk) 06:22, June 23, 2020 (UTC)
  • Moved and added the old image back. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 07:16, June 23, 2020 (UTC)
    • Can you make some modifications so that the image does not indent the heading? Shayanomer (talk) 07:24, June 23, 2020 (UTC)
      • Adjusting the size did nothing, so I decided to move it up. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 08:03, June 23, 2020 (UTC)
• Please create a page for the card you just added on the Card Trader wiki as the link here is currently a redlink over there. Shayanomer (talk) 19:56, September 23, 2020 (UTC)
  • Created page for the card I didn't add. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 19:32, October 1, 2020 (UTC)
    • My bad. Shayanomer (talk) 19:37, October 1, 2020 (UTC)
• Return of the Jedi: Beware the Power of the Dark Side! audiobook missing from Appearances. Shayanomer (talk) 12:56, 27 October 2020 (UTC)
  • Added. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 19:16, 2 November 2020 (UTC)
• Article must include info from Chapter 5's concept art gallery. Shayanomer (talk) 12:41, 30 October 2020 (UTC)
  • How does that look? - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 19:16, 2 November 2020 (UTC)
    • Good enough. Shayanomer (talk) 19:22, 2 November 2020 (UTC)

QGJ

• Context for R2-D2 and C-3PO needed in the intro.
  • Added. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 01:09, June 16, 2020 (UTC)
• Some of the paragraphs look huge in the Oasis skin. Please introduce more paragraph breaks, especially in "Chief of Cyborg Operations", "Characteristics" and the Bts.
  • How does that look? - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 04:20, June 16, 2020 (UTC)
    • Much better. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 18:34, June 19, 2020 (UTC)
• "Characteristics" also desperately needs an image.
  • Added an image. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 04:20, June 16, 2020 (UTC)
• Bts could use subsectioning
  • Subsectioned. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 01:09, June 16, 2020 (UTC)
• I would move that concept art from Appearances to the Bts.
  • Moved. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 01:09, June 16, 2020 (UTC)
• Can you provide a quote for the "Galactic Civil War" section?
  • Moved quote from first section to second since its more relevant. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 01:09, June 16, 2020 (UTC)
• Speaking of that section. Even though it's called "Galactic Civil War," the actual term is not mentioned once in that section. Maybe it's worth renaming it to something more relevant to EV-9D9?
  • Renamed. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 01:09, June 16, 2020 (UTC)
• The quote in the Bts would benefit from some context on Anthony Daniels
  • Context added. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 01:09, June 16, 2020 (UTC)
• Is 261 supposed to be referred as "he" or "it?" There are instances of both pronouns. Please stick with one.
  • Fixed. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 21:55, June 5, 2020 (UTC)
• Her non-canon appearance in Disney Infinity 3.0 needs to be discussed in the Bts.
  • Added. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 05:00, June 16, 2020 (UTC)
    • I feel like this needs a tad more context. What is this Toy Box mode and what it involves? Just a few more words would suffice. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 18:34, June 19, 2020 (UTC)
      • Added some additional context. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 02:20, June 21, 2020 (UTC)
• If she appears in Star Wars: The Original Trilogy – A Graphic Novel, she is likely to appear in Star Wars: Return of the Jedi Graphic Novel Adaptation as well. Please check and add to the "Appearances" if necessary. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 13:27, June 5, 2020 (UTC)
  • Can confirm that her appearance from the OT graphic novel is intact in the standalone RotJ version. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 03:47, June 16, 2020 (UTC)

Tommy

• Just so this is a formal objection, this article needs to be updated with all missing Mandalorian content. Tommy-Macaroni 08:43, June 19, 2020 (UTC)
  • Completed. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 03:46, June 25, 2020 (UTC)
• Dup link.
  • Removed.
• Quotes should not contain links.
  • Even when the subject is not mentioned/linked anywhere else?
• As she's been mentioned in several Build Your Own R2-D2 issues, I just want to confirm that the issues listed on the page have been checked and the rest of the series has been examined for extra mentions. Tommy-Macaroni 12:58, 19 April 2021 (UTC)
  • Checking now. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 15:32, 19 April 2021 (UTC)
  • Finished checking. The article's only listing issues 20, 21, and 93 is accurate. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 18:03, 19 April 2021 (UTC)

Ratts

• Paragraph break needed in the intro.
  • Split. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 21:18, June 19, 2020 (UTC)
• Images need to be repositioned.
  • How do the images look now? - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 21:18, June 19, 2020 (UTC)
    • Pretty good. As of now the concept art image should be moved to the left, but I assume you'll add a picture from Gallery that will offset it anyway. RattsT (talk) 21:26, June 19, 2020 (UTC)
• A quote could be added to the first section of the bio. RattsT (talk) 20:31, June 19, 2020 (UTC)
  • Quote added. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 21:56, June 20, 2020 (UTC)
• In the Legacy section, can the capacity to which she's mentioned in Survival Skills be expanded?
  • Expanded. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 03:12, June 21, 2020 (UTC)
    • Now it's a run-on. You should break that sentence up. RattsT (talk) 03:51, June 21, 2020 (UTC)
      • How does that look? - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 04:04, June 21, 2020 (UTC)
        • Much better. RattsT (talk) 04:20, June 21, 2020 (UTC)
• Details of the changes between her appearances in Jedi and Mando can be included in Characteristics.
  • By changes, due you literally mean her appearance or her personality - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 01:32, June 23, 2020 (UTC)
    • I was referring to the physical changes, yeah; the photoreceptors changing from yellow to white, the insignia on her chestplate disappearing, etc; I don't know if we can really say her personality changed. Maybe just note that she was unhelpful to Djarin. RattsT (talk) 16:47, June 23, 2020 (UTC)
      • Her photoreceptors were always white in RotJ, but merch had them as yellow which has tripped us up for years. I rewatched the scene recently and they're white like in Mando. I'll add the symbols disappearing. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 17:48, June 23, 2020 (UTC)
        • Added info about her markings disappearing between 4 and 9 ABY. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 18:54, June 24, 2020 (UTC)
• Mando BTS can be expanded with "Connections" info.
  • Expanded. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 04:55, June 23, 2020 (UTC)
    • One minor thing, the clause of Mark voicing her should be as close as possible to the subject. RattsT (talk) 16:47, June 23, 2020 (UTC)
      • Reshuffled. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 17:48, June 23, 2020 (UTC)
• Some minor objections while the Inuse template remains up:
  • In the final paragraph of the "Fall of a criminal empire" section, it should be noted who tasked R2 with his task.
    • Added. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 02:05, June 21, 2020 (UTC)
  • Threepio's "Don't leave me!" quote is missing his "Oh!"
    • Added, as well as context for the "Oh!". - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 02:05, June 21, 2020 (UTC)
      • I don't think the context is really necessary. RattsT (talk) 02:15, June 21, 2020 (UTC)
        • I think it's fine since he audibly collides with something in the audio for the quote. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 02:59, June 21, 2020 (UTC)
  • Mark Hamill's name is misspelled in the "Connections" quote. RattsT (talk) 01:24, June 21, 2020 (UTC)
    • Fixed. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 02:05, June 21, 2020 (UTC)
  • "Tiny and basis, they were allowed her…" seems to have some grammatical mistakes. RattsT (talk) 00:50, June 25, 2020 (UTC)
    • Fixed. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 00:52, June 25, 2020 (UTC)
• Redlinks should be created. RattsT (talk) 16:47, June 23, 2020 (UTC)
  • Created. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 01:17, June 25, 2020 (UTC)

Braha'tok enthusiast

• Regarding the large paragraphs in the Characteristics and BtS sections:
  • Characteristics–I would recommend making the last two paragraphs in the characteristics a separate sub-section about EV's mechanical aspects (as that's what those two paragraphs describe) comprising of three paragraphs.
    • How does that look? - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 15:46, July 1, 2020 (UTC)
      • Is there a quote available for the Physical traits section? Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 15:55, July 1, 2020 (UTC)
        • I've basically exhausted all available quotes at this point unless you think Toro's "Think again, tin can." line would be fitting here. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 16:13, July 1, 2020 (UTC)
          • To be fair "tin can" would relate to "physical traits." I'd accept that. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 16:33, July 1, 2020 (UTC)
            • Added it. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 17:20, July 1, 2020 (UTC)
              • Very good, have a vote. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 17:33, July 1, 2020 (UTC)
  • BtS–The 13 line paragraph in the Conception and Portrayal part of the BtS should be split. It's looking very chunky. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 15:11, July 1, 2020 (UTC)
    • Split. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 15:46, July 1, 2020 (UTC)
      • Not the most proportional split, but it's smaller. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 15:55, July 1, 2020 (UTC)

OOM

• The images under "Bartending at Chalmun's" and "Conception and portrayal" could be enlarged. - - -OOM 224 ༼༽^{talk}༼༽ 07:36, October 14, 2020 (UTC)
  • How does that look? - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 19:06, October 17, 2020 (UTC)
    • Perfect. - - -OOM 224 ༼༽^{talk}༼༽ 20:30, October 17, 2020 (UTC)

Comments

• Just noting that she is in the reference book Star Wars: Extraordinary Droids, which I've added to the sources, but there doesn't appear to be any new information in her entry that you need to add. I haven't read it cover to cover yet, but I don't think she's mentioned elsewhere, since she's not in Artoo or Threepio's entry and 8D8 doesn't have an entry of his own. Toqgers (talk) 22:30, June 13, 2020 (UTC)
  • Thanks, I had no idea that book was a thing. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 05:46, June 14, 2020 (UTC)

Telosian Jedi Academy (Redux review)

• Redux comments: Reduxed per Meeting 118.
• Date added: October 4, 2020

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Object

Imp

• I'm not seeing the information from the image label on p. 31 of The Jedi Path presented in the article. Imperators II^(Talk) 08:06, October 21, 2020 (UTC)
  • Added along with other missing information from The Jedi Path. - - -OOM 224 ༼༽^{talk}༼༽ 13:58, 23 October 2020 (UTC)

Tommy

• I'd recommend subsectioning the BTS. Maybe something like Notable appearances and Alternate storylines?
• Some date are lacking their own ref note. I'd like both of these to be confirmed:
  • Can 1000 BBY be sourced to The Jedi Path?
  • Can 3956 BBY be sourced to Jedi vs. Sith: The Essential Guide to the Force?
• Please use — instead of —.
• Dashes should not have spaces around them when used in prose. Tommy-Macaroni 12:41, 13 March 2021 (UTC)
  • All addressed. I've added a new ref for 1000 BBY, but 3956 BBY can be sourced to Jedi vs. Sith. OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 13:26, 13 March 2021 (UTC)

Comments

• Updated article with Jedi vs Sith.
• I'm also currently expanding the article with some missing information from the Prima guide. Will update here when finished. - - -OOM 224 ༼༽^{talk}༼༽ 16:12, 23 October 2020 (UTC)
  • Completed. - - -OOM 224 ༼༽^{talk}༼༽ 17:33, 13 November 2020 (UTC)

Maximian Ajax

• Nominated by: Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 13:51, October 7, 2020 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: I love Twilight Company for the range of soldier personalities that it offers, and Ajax is like that cocky soldier that loves cracking jokes at his comrades.

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Support

1. Great work! VergenceScatter (talk) 16:13, 8 January 2021 (UTC)
2. OOM 224 ༼༽^{talk}༼༽ 09:22, 26 January 2021 (UTC)

Object

Shayanomer

• At least one image can be added to the article, specifically the 61st's logo. Shayanomer (talk) 10:29, October 11, 2020 (UTC)
  • Added the logo, not sure what else would really work as there's not many pictured things in Ajax's story. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 12:13, October 11, 2020 (UTC)
• There is a new precedent to use one ref note for birth and death years (see Winshur Bratt). Shayanomer (talk) 18:54, October 17, 2020 (UTC)
  • What do you want me to do? He doesn't have a birth date. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 22:03, October 17, 2020 (UTC)
    • In this case, a single ref for both year and place of death, instead of two separate refs. Shayanomer (talk) 06:29, October 18, 2020 (UTC)
      • Ok, done. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 08:29, October 18, 2020 (UTC)
• Please check pre-release excerpts of the novel to see if Ajax appears in any of them. Shayanomer (talk) 09:05, 23 March 2021 (UTC)
  • Objection handled via Discord. Shayanomer (talk) 09:28, 24 March 2021 (UTC)

Vergence

Overall, a really solid article, but a couple of things:

• Coyerti natives came to their aid. Since you were referring to Ajax alone earlier in the sentence, there is subject/verb disagreement here.
  • Fixed.
• This phrase is a little confusing: he was one of five survivors when the infantry group was obliterated, over four perishing as a result. If you're saying that there were at least four other members in the 32nd infantry, I would argue that that is unnecessary, since companies always have more than nine members.
  • Fixed. It was meant to say "four hundred."
• Howl is referred to by his first name a couple of times in the article body. VergenceScatter (talk) 05:34, 8 January 2021 (UTC)
  • The nickname Howl is only used one time in a quote, so I'm unsure as to what you're asking here. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 08:41, 8 January 2021 (UTC)
    • Not sure what I was thinking either. VergenceScatter (talk) 16:13, 8 January 2021 (UTC)

OOM

• Inconsistent capitalisation for "First Sergeant." - - -OOM 224 ༼༽^{talk}༼༽ 15:25, 25 January 2021 (UTC)
  • How so? I only capitalise it as a title. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 23:09, 25 January 2021 (UTC)
    • Ah, sorry. Does the source use "first sergeant" as opposed to "First Sergeant" when mentioning the rank independently, without it being prefixed to Namir? - - -OOM 224 ༼༽^{talk}༼༽ 23:31, 25 January 2021 (UTC)
      • It's not capitalised when used independently. For context, the rank is never used as a prefix for Namir, but he's mentioned to be a "first sergeant" at least twice—before and after all of Ajax's appearances. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 08:30, 26 January 2021 (UTC)
        • I see, that's fine then. - - -OOM 224 ༼༽^{talk}༼༽ 08:40, 26 January 2021 (UTC)

Toprawa

• This is such an unspecific, ambiguous statement, they "made bad choices." What does this mean? "...where he and another soldier named Twitch made bad choices." Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 20:54, 26 January 2021 (UTC)
  • Does this look better? Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 21:05, 26 January 2021 (UTC)
    • Maybe. Can you type out or otherwise show me what the source says about this? Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 21:11, 26 January 2021 (UTC)
      • From the first bio quote: "Chenodra. Came up to me during the cleanup. Thought I'd messed up bad, with what Ajax and me had done." Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 21:22, 26 January 2021 (UTC)
• What does this mean, "have a chance at the governor"? Please clarify: "and speculated that she might have a chance at the governor."
  • Does this work? Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 08:25, 27 January 2021 (UTC)
• What hunting trip? This needs some better explanation/clarification: "knowing Ajax was going to talk about his former lovers and their hunting trip."
  • I have tweaked the sentence. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 08:25, 27 January 2021 (UTC)
    • The sentence still isn't clear as to whether it's referring to a hunting trip Ajax took with Namir or his former lovers. Please clarify. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 22:46, 27 January 2021 (UTC)
      • That should clarify it. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 23:13, 27 January 2021 (UTC)
• In the "War stories" section quote, the audio clearly says "cannon" and not "cannons." Is this a discrepancy between the novel and audiobook? Additionally, you should fix that audio clip to eliminate the popping sounds where you edited out the narrations.
  • The novel does not pluralise cannon, that was purely my mistake. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 20:40, 27 January 2021 (UTC)
    • Ok. Still waiting on the audio clip fix. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 22:46, 27 January 2021 (UTC)
• Again, context is needed here. Why is Sairgon begging them to stop wasting grenades? "and Lieutenant Sairgon, Evon's second-in-command, begged Ajax and his comrades to stop wasting grenades."
  • Reworded. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 08:25, 27 January 2021 (UTC)
• I was somewhat confused by the wording here, so I made an effort to clarify, but I'm not sure if this is perfectly accurate or not. Please confirm: "...setting up a choke point in one of the main passageways while most of the other squads pushed toward the engineering section to clear a path for..."
  • I've corrected it slightly to say that his squad was part of the push. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 20:40, 27 January 2021 (UTC)
• So was the Imperial freighter raid successful? The article never says.
  • Fixed. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 08:25, 27 January 2021 (UTC)
• I find the entirety of the P/T to be really poorly written. That section isn't telling me anything about the character's personality. All it's doing is just listing off several disjointed incidents with no flow or meaning. I feel like I'm reading a bulleted list of incidents without being given any real understanding of what it's supposed to mean with regard to this character's personality. Don't just jump from one event to the next without some transitioning. Use the P/T in the Winshur Bratt article as a model.
  • I've tried to structure it better. He doesn't have a detailed character development like Bratt so it's mainly his habits and preferences that I have to work with. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 20:40, 27 January 2021 (UTC)
• Audio clip issues:
  • The clips in "A game of cards" and Skills and abilities should be cleaned up to remove the audible popping sounds where you edited out the narrations
    • Popping has now been removed from all of the audio used. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:54, 1 February 2021 (UTC)
  • The Equipment section clip could use a cleaner fade out at the very end so that the cut isn't so tightly on the end of the word "grenades"
    • It's been updated, courtesy of Shay, so it's not abruptly ending now. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 08:09, 28 January 2021 (UTC)
• The Ajax's squad article suggests that this squad of his was in action during the Coyerti campaign, while this article only introduces the squad during the freighter raid. Which is correct? Additionally, that article goes into greater detail on the events of the Coyerti campaign, which I feel like this article insufficiently glosses over. Namely, things like the presence of a dozen other squads, being pinned down by the AT-ST, being rescued by the Coyerti, and lobbing grenades until begged to stop (which pretty much goes back to my previous objection asking for context on this). I'd like to see all of these details expanded on in this article. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 02:36, 27 January 2021 (UTC)
  • Ajax only refers to the people he was with on Coyerti as "us," so I've concluded that the info added to the squad article is assumption based. As for the dozen squads part, that was a confusion with this battle, for which I formally thought the target was the same as the garrison. I have removed all speculation. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 08:25, 27 January 2021 (UTC)
    • Ok, but were Ajax and his men or whoever pinned down by the AT-ST, and were they rescued by the Coyerti? That should be mentioned if so. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 22:46, 27 January 2021 (UTC)
      • The quote says the walker stared them down, which is why I used "confronted." As for the Coyerti, Ajax didn't say that they were rescuing the rebels, just that they arrived and left the garrison "on fire." Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 23:13, 27 January 2021 (UTC)
• With regards to your recent edit, you say that Namir was not the commanding officer of Twilight Company until well after Ajax's death. But the article explicitly introduces Namir as Ajax's commanding officer (First Sergeant Hazram Namir, the troopers' commanding officer...), which is why I added that detail into the Skills section. So which is it? Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 22:48, 27 January 2021 (UTC)
  • I missed that when reviewing OOM's copy-edits, apologies. For some extra context, the novel describes Namir's position as first sergeant as being a "high ranking grunt." It's corrected now. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 23:13, 27 January 2021 (UTC)

Dawson (Tynnan)

• Nominated by: OtterSurf (talk) 13:38, 13 November 2020 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Ooh, my first FA nomination! Again.

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Tommy

• My image quality objection from the last nomination doesn't seem to have been addressed. Tommy-Macaroni 09:57, 17 February 2021 (UTC)
  • There's nothing I can do on that front, sadly. I did try cropping the images from the PDF I obtained, but they look worse than what's here already. There's also no way to get a physical copy of the magazine in the UK. OtterSurf (talk) 10:09, 17 February 2021 (UTC)
    • Please check your Discord messages. Tommy-Macaroni 10:43, 17 February 2021 (UTC)
      • Thanks for the link; I was able to open the file with a CBR reader. Unfortunately the scan is extremely low-res. OtterSurf (talk) 11:07, 17 February 2021 (UTC)
        • Looking at it myself I think this scan offers a higher quality version of the image used in the body. Tommy-Macaroni 13:57, 17 February 2021 (UTC)
          • Okey-doke, then, I'll see what I can do. OtterSurf (talk) 14:02, 17 February 2021 (UTC)
          • Done. OtterSurf (talk) 15:21, 17 February 2021 (UTC)

Shayanomer

• I'm noticing many instances of informal language in the body e.g. "Dawson preferred to play the game of water-wall and find ever more creative ways to cause explosions.," "Dawson was somewhat dismayed when he was apprised of the timeframe for the job." Please revise the article. Shayanomer (talk) 07:05, 17 March 2021 (UTC)
  • Done! OtterSurf (talk) 14:15, 8 April 2021 (UTC)
• Link to disambiguation page in the body ("the Bimm Ritinki"). Please resolve this.
  • No can do. The source doesn't specify the species of Bimm to which Ritinki belongs. OtterSurf (talk) 18:39, 12 April 2021 (UTC)
    • It needs to be removed, as mandated by the Manual of Style. Shayanomer (talk) 18:49, 12 April 2021 (UTC)
      • Alright. OtterSurf (talk) 18:51, 12 April 2021 (UTC)
• "...Noone's crew were to steal a valuable box from Guttu's rival, the Bimm Ritinki, at a meeting between him and Rodian kingpin Vop." Who's "him" referring to? Guttu or the rival?
  • Ritinki. OtterSurf (talk) 18:39, 12 April 2021 (UTC)
• Is "herdship" being lowercase supported by the source?
  • Yup. OtterSurf (talk) 18:51, 12 April 2021 (UTC)
• "He succeeded with a combination of fusion cutter and Nergon-14 explosive..." Did he use a single Nergon-14 explosive or multiple?
  • Four pellets. OtterSurf (talk) 18:51, 12 April 2021 (UTC)
• Are there no articles for the heist, Noone's crew, and the Ithorian vacsuit (this is also named inconsistently between the Biography and the Equipment sections)?
  • Fixed the vacsuit thing, I'll check on the articles. OtterSurf (talk) 18:56, 12 April 2021 (UTC)
  • Nope, no such articles exist. I take it they need to be created? OtterSurf (talk) 19:03, 12 April 2021 (UTC)
    • Done! OtterSurf (talk) 09:04, 20 April 2021 (UTC)
      • The crew needs to be added to the infobox Affiliations now. Shayanomer (talk) 09:29, 20 April 2021 (UTC)
        • Of course. Done. OtterSurf (talk) 09:46, 20 April 2021 (UTC)
• "He was also relatively strong..." Strong in what sense? Shayanomer (talk) 17:19, 12 April 2021 (UTC)
  • Physically. Done. OtterSurf (talk) 18:42, 12 April 2021 (UTC)

Purrgil

• Nominated by: CanePlayz (talk) 23:48, 6 December 2020 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Nomination for WookieeProject: Rebels

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Shayanomer

• My objections from the previous nomination are unaddressed, namely expanding the intro and investigating Poe Dameron: Free Fall and The Art of Star Wars Rebels.
• Introduce some sectioning. You can at least split Rebels and pre-Rebels info.
• "At some point, an artist encountered a group of purrgil. He later drew one of them in his journal and commented that he was surprised by their sudden appearance around his ship." This is sourced entirely to a date note. Shayanomer (talk) 07:21, 7 December 2020 (UTC)
  • I've already expanded the intro, I get that you want me to expand it more, but currently I don't really know in which direction, so clarification on that point would be great. Free Fall and Art of Rebels have already been addressed as well.
    • You can briefly talk about physical features and behavior in the first paragraph, and talk about notable events in the second. Shayanomer (talk) 09:21, 7 December 2020 (UTC)
      • Okay, I'll see what's the most relevant and not in the introduction yet. CanePlayz (talk) 10:02, 7 December 2020 (UTC)
        • Split and expanded the intro. I think it should be good now. CanePlayz (talk) 16:04, 13 December 2020 (UTC)
  • Regarding the intro? Then I would also know what to expand upon (Rebels stuff since that is not enough yet to have its own section).
    • No, the History section. Introductions are meant to briefly summarize the contents of the article to the reader. Shayanomer (talk) 09:21, 7 December 2020 (UTC)
      • Oh okay, so the stuff we talked about earlier. At first I thought you meant splitting the intro into two paragraphs but now I get it. CanePlayz (talk) 10:02, 7 December 2020 (UTC)
        • The intro can use that split after you've sufficiently expanded it with the requested details. Shayanomer (talk) 10:05, 7 December 2020 (UTC)
          • Sure, I was planning on that. CanePlayz (talk) 10:06, 7 December 2020 (UTC)
            • Should be done, that's the best way of sectioning that I was able to come up with. CanePlayz (talk) 13:28, 13 December 2020 (UTC)
  • Fixed. CanePlayz (talk) 09:16, 7 December 2020 (UTC)
• Per precedent on species Featured articles, the skins colors should be presented as a bulleted list.
  • Changed. CanePlayz (talk) 23:15, 26 December 2020 (UTC)
• "Some of them were as large as a small starship while the size of others reached up to massive." This isn't grammatically sound.
  • Changed, hope the new one is fine. CanePlayz (talk) 23:15, 26 December 2020 (UTC)
• Please connect Hera Syndulla with the Spectres in the intro.
  • Added a connection to Hera and Ezra regarding the Spectres. CanePlayz (talk) 23:15, 26 December 2020 (UTC)
• "Purrgil ranged in size from as large as a small starship to massive..." This also isn't grammatically sound.
  • Changed, hope the new one is fine. CanePlayz (talk) 23:15, 26 December 2020 (UTC)
• "Although few people actually witnessed their special ability to attain lightspeed, the purrgil became the stuff of legend for smugglers and pilots across the galaxy." Although this wording is used in the source, the tone is not "encyclopedic."
  • Changed. CanePlayz (talk) 23:15, 26 December 2020 (UTC)
• Context for Han Solo and Tivoche Bilure.
  • Added some context. Let me know if you want more. CanePlayz (talk) 23:15, 26 December 2020 (UTC)
• Tivoche Bilure's journal also needs an article. Shayanomer (talk) 07:23, 26 December 2020 (UTC)
  • Just found the article and linked to it, I'll expand it once I get my hands on Tales from Vandor. CanePlayz (talk) 23:15, 26 December 2020 (UTC)

Prelate Vergence

• The sentence One of those leaders was referred to as the Purrgil King,[12] another one was called Purrgil Ultra is grammatically incorrect.
  • At first I didn't know what the issue was (probably because I'm not a native English speaker), but it was pointed out to me that the second part should not follow a comma as it's an independent sentence so I seperated them with a semicolon instead. CanePlayz (talk) 10:00, 7 January 2021 (UTC)
    • I'll try to be more clear in the future.
• completely wiped out Thrawn's Seventh Fleet blockade of Lothal and damaged three Star Destroyers—The fleet wasn't completely wiped out if several ships were only damaged.VergenceScatter (talk) 05:36, 7 January 2021 (UTC)
  • They wiped out the blockade which consisted of most of the Seventh Fleet and damaged three star destroyers which were also part of the Fleet but were hovering above the city (they were not part of the blockade). But I see that my formulation there was unclear. I've rephrased bit now, let me know if you are fine with it, should at least help to make the distinction clearer! CanePlayz (talk) 10:00, 7 January 2021 (UTC)
    • Looks good, thanks. VergenceScatter (talk) 15:06, 7 January 2021 (UTC)

Macaroni

• You should refer to Ezra by his last name to make it formal. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 02:37, 1 March 2021 (UTC)
  • Of course, done. CanePlayz (talk) 11:16, 2 March 2021 (UTC)

Tommy

• Contractions should never be used in formal writing.
  • All of them should be gone by now. CanePlayz (talk) 19:12, 16 March 2021 (UTC)
• Please utilise the Oxford comma in your writing.
  • I wasn't really aware of how that is done in English, should be good now. CanePlayz (talk) 19:12, 16 March 2021 (UTC)
• Missing some context in quite a few places. Who are Mart, Wolffe, and Vizago? Who is Thrawn and what is the 7th fleet (some info on which is intro exclusive). What is Lothal? What is the Graf Archive? You get the idea. Please go through the article and give context to proper nouns if it's unclear what they are.
  • I've added some context, I hope I got everything. CanePlayz (talk) 19:12, 16 March 2021 (UTC)
• I appreciate your use of "cold embrace," but I don't think it applies to Ezra, only Thrawn was trapped.
  • You're right, that slipped in somehow. CanePlayz (talk) 19:12, 16 March 2021 (UTC)
• Please link to Purrgil King. Tommy-Macaroni 13:45, 7 March 2021 (UTC)
  • I forgot to add that link back after I'd restructured something. It's back now. CanePlayz (talk) 19:12, 16 March 2021 (UTC)

Ben Quadinaros

• Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 20:24, 6 February 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: An extremely late birthday present for Fred! Thanks to Corellian Premier for providing information from the Insider's Guide.

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1. Objections handled via IRC. Thanks for the birthday gift! MasterFred(talk) 21:00, 27 March 2021 (UTC)
2. Very enjoyable read. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 19:09, 1 April 2021 (UTC)
3. My all-time favourite podracer OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 11:20, 4 April 2021 (UTC)
4. Ben? Ben Quadinaros? Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 03:54, 12 April 2021 (UTC)

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Macaroni

• Perhaps the info currently in P+T about his podracing inexperience could be moved to a skills and abilities section? JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 03:26, 8 February 2021 (UTC)
  • Split out the description of his skill level. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:50, 8 February 2021 (UTC)
• I think you should mention the misspelling in the DB entry for Tund system in the BTS. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 19:33, 5 March 2021 (UTC)
• Context for Bith.
  • Done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:11, 20 March 2021 (UTC)
• Jabba being a crime lord is intro-exclusive.
  • Done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:11, 20 March 2021 (UTC)
• Just checking to make sure you're fine with this copy-edit. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 03:59, 19 March 2021 (UTC)
  • Looks good to me, thanks. Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:11, 20 March 2021 (UTC)

OOM

• "produced under the name Codenka Mafurias, which was assumed to be the alias of an art workshop bankrolled by Marlo the Hutt." Assumed by who?
  • Added. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:19, 28 February 2021 (UTC)
• The two instances of Ben cursing can be mentioned in the article body.
  • Done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:19, 28 February 2021 (UTC)
• "Quadinaros has appeared in various non-canon LEGO media, most prominently featuring in […]" Citation needed.
  • Removed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:19, 28 February 2021 (UTC)
• Whichever language Ben speaks in The Freemaker Adventures should be mentioned in the LEGO subsection, and the language he speaks in TPM should be mentioned in Personality and traits. OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 10:24, 28 February 2021 (UTC)
  • No source has clarified what language he's speaking in either appearance. I've added that he spoke something other than basic. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:19, 28 February 2021 (UTC)
• It's worth mentioning his three antennae in the Personality and traits section. There's little visual depictions of Toong in canon other than Ben himself, and other sources I've seen depict Toong without antennae. OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 11:27, 28 February 2021 (UTC)
  • Added. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:36, 28 February 2021 (UTC)
• Inconsistency between "Quadinaros'" and "Quadinaros's"
  • Fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:01, 4 April 2021 (UTC)
• "Later career" could use a brief description of the locale depicted in the Ben v Sebulba poster. I also think that the language of the poster should be mentioned.
  • I've added the landscape but the fact that poster is in aurebesh is something that I feel can just be included on the poster's page. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:01, 4 April 2021 (UTC)
    • Fair enough OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 11:20, 4 April 2021 (UTC)
• While this isn't said in any policy, I think the MOS clause "quotes taken from comics should not mimic emphasized boldfaced wording. Instead, only italics are to be used for emphasis." should apply for an IU poster such as the one mentioned above, so I think "edge" should be italicised in the *"Later career" quote.
  • That makes sense, done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:01, 4 April 2021 (UTC)
• The Sport's Greatest Rivalry should be italicised.
  • Done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:01, 4 April 2021 (UTC)
• I'm not sure about including the TCW poster in the BTS section. That's not significant in terms of the development of the character.
  • Removed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:01, 4 April 2021 (UTC)
• Also, I think that first BTS paragraph should be split into two for better readability. OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 20:28, 3 April 2021 (UTC)
  • Done, also added some bits and pieces I discovered that I'd missed while researching Dud Bolt. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:01, 4 April 2021 (UTC)

Dwartii

• "As other racers took flight"—is there any precedent for "flight" (or flying in general) being used in reference to podracers? It just reads a little strangely to me. DwartiiDelver (talk) 04:31, 21 April 2021 (UTC)

Vizam

• Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 23:34, 9 February 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Having spotted Vizam lurking in the shadows in a new scene, it seems like the right time for my first film GAN to move up to the big leagues.

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1. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 04:11, 6 April 2021 (UTC)
2. OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 16:30, 9 April 2021 (UTC)

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OOM

• Are the refs "SW:CV" and "Complete Cross-Sections" referring to the same source? OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 16:15, 9 April 2021 (UTC)
  • They are indeed, good catch. Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:27, 9 April 2021 (UTC)

Unidentified Republic soldier (Falang Minor)

• Nominated by: Imperators II^(Talk) 12:25, 15 February 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:

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1. Cool stuff, feels like a World War Z character. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 03:39, 12 April 2021 (UTC)

Hintaro/Legends

• Nominated by: Imperators II^(Talk) 10:46, 17 February 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: 1003 words by my count. Also, of course this is merely a knockoff of Tope's Kintaro FA.

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1. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 21:30, 24 March 2021 (UTC)
2. Reminds me of the time my friends worked out how to play Liar's Dice from Pirates of the Caribbean for some reason.Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 12:41, 31 March 2021 (UTC)

Comments

• I've created articles for the hintaro die and the hintaron role, but not for the individual symbols on the dice or the winning combinations. Those I've turned into redirects to this article. Imperators II^(Talk) 10:46, 17 February 2021 (UTC)
• You could have an image of Keth or Bespin in the history section and one of a chance cube in the description, or is there a reason you haven't included any? Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 12:16, 31 March 2021 (UTC)
  • Sure, added. Imperators II^(Talk) 12:38, 31 March 2021 (UTC)

S-R6

• Nominated by: Imperators II^(Talk) 12:57, 1 April 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: While writing the Trevura article, this guy just grew on me.

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1. A very interesting read OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 21:36, 3 April 2021 (UTC)
2. Fan26 (Talk) 16:52, 19 April 2021 (UTC)

Object

OOM

• Could use some variation with the word "eventually"
  • Should be better now.
• I'm assuming that the source doesn't say Essar escaped from Trevura, only that he escaped, so I think it's best that the article specifies that Essar escaped from his hideout. Otherwise, readers might think the intent was that Essar left the planet. OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 08:13, 3 April 2021 (UTC)
  • Sure, added. Imperators II^(Talk) 09:00, 3 April 2021 (UTC)

Fan

• ASP-series labor droid is a canon link. Fan26 (Talk) 15:17, 19 April 2021 (UTC)
  • Fixed, thanks. Imperators II^(Talk) 16:51, 19 April 2021 (UTC)

Blue Max

• Nominated by: IFYLOFD ^(Talk) 02:58, 8 April 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Yeah why the hell not man let's get it rolling

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Shayanomer

• Infobox-exclusive information.
• It's unnecessary to specify "None" for armaments.
• To fit with the Oasis skin, article can really use some paragraph breaks, which will make way for more subsectioning.
  • Still needs subsectioning. The second-to-last Biography paragraph can be cut down. See Simus to understand how this should look. Shayanomer (talk) 20:27, 10 April 2021 (UTC)
    • Done. IFYLOFD ^(Talk) 03:46, 16 April 2021 (UTC)
      • Looking better, "Signing on with Han Solo" and "Hunting the slavers" can be subsectioned further. Are there more images you can add? Shayanomer (talk) 05:45, 16 April 2021 (UTC)
• Date cannot be sourced straight to the novel.
  • A note specific to the events of the novel and the character would be appreciated, look to Simus again as well as Krdys Mordi to see how it should read. Shayanomer (talk) 20:27, 10 April 2021 (UTC)
    • I personally don't see why that's necessary. The date is directly found in the Reader's Companion. There's no real elaboration to give. IFYLOFD ^(Talk) 21:25, 12 April 2021 (UTC)
• Abridged audiobooks for Rebel Dawn and New Jedi Order will need to be checked for mentions, while unabridged audiobooks (1, 2, 3) should presumably be listed in Appearances.
  • I'm assuming he's mentioned in those audiobooks since the templates are missing. Also, nothing in the abridged versions? Shayanomer (talk) 20:27, 10 April 2021 (UTC)
    • I haven't found any indication that he's mentioned in the abridged versions. Do you know of any good way to access them? IFYLOFD ^(Talk) 21:19, 12 April 2021 (UTC)
      • Rebel Dawn and NJO. Shayanomer (talk) 05:59, 13 April 2021 (UTC)
        • Checked both, they've been added. IFYLOFD ^(Talk) 02:08, 15 April 2021 (UTC)
          • Still missing the associated templates (Mo/Imo in this case). Shayanomer (talk) 05:56, 15 April 2021 (UTC)
            • Added. IFYLOFD ^(Talk) 03:22, 16 April 2021 (UTC)
• Missing full comic publication date.
  • Can this be sourced straight to the comic? It also needs to include the day as well per Layout Guide. Shayanomer (talk) 20:27, 10 April 2021 (UTC)
    • Since it's a comic strip, yes, it should be self-sourcing. Day added. IFYLOFD ^(Talk) 22:06, 18 April 2021 (UTC)
• Missing {{1stp}}. Shayanomer (talk) 06:28, 8 April 2021 (UTC)
  • All of these should be addressed. IFYLOFD ^(Talk) 20:12, 10 April 2021 (UTC)

Alaris Prime colonial war

• Nominated by: Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 03:31, 13 April 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: After seven years I return to the FAN page.

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Fan

• The Thalmussen should be contexualized as a transport.
• "[Attichitcuk] established a small camp north of the landing site, leaving behind markers so that his fellow Wookiees could find him easily" I would say "...the other Wookiees" works better. Less wordy is always a good choice.
• "Shortly afterwards a Trade Federation B1 battle droid named OOL-2 discovered the remains of the power core destroyed by Chewbacca and Shoran and reported its destruction to the Trade Federation Viceroy Nute Gunray, attributing the destruction to the gundarks." "the destruction" -> "it". Again, less wordy is probably better.
• "With a force of eleven Wookiees, including Chewbacca,[7] the Wookiees marched towards Attichitcuk's position," I reccomend switching to "A force of eleven Wookiees, including Chewbacca, marched..." Fan26 (Talk) 17:16, 19 April 2021 (UTC)
  • All addressed. Thank you. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 06:17, 20 April 2021 (UTC)

Larry

• Nominated by: Cwedin^(talk) 21:25, 13 April 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Larry, from the planet Brooklyn.

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1. "I once knew a man with three eyes, purple fur, clinical depression, and a nose like Wario." "Ooh, what did you call him?" "…Larry." Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 11:50, 16 April 2021 (UTC)
2. You forgot to mention his flashlight in the equipment section. :P JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 04:04, 20 April 2021 (UTC)
3. AmazinglyCool (talk) 16:08, 21 April 2021 (UTC)

Object

CC-8

• Can the timeline reference really be used to source all of the first half of the first paragraph?
  • Good catch, fixed.
• I think the physical description in the P&T should elaborate on the position of his eyes, how two were in his face while one was in an upper stalk. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 14:59, 14 April 2021 (UTC)
  • Done. - Cwedin^(talk) 15:07, 14 April 2021 (UTC)
• The distinct colour on his arms and foot could be mentioned as well, is there anything to indicate that they are hairy too? Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 00:17, 15 April 2021 (UTC)
  • I've been treating it all as skin, since the model sheet just has the label "flesh." - Cwedin^(talk) 02:25, 15 April 2021 (UTC)

Macaroni

• Can you mention his gender in the intro?
  • Done.
• Do you think it's worth mentioning the blanket in the equipment section? JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 19:48, 19 April 2021 (UTC)
  • Sure, done. - Cwedin^(talk) 03:02, 20 April 2021 (UTC)

Ginivex-class fanblade starfighter

• Nominated by: DwartiiDelver (talk) 18:36, 18 April 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Always loved this ship. Also, my first FAN!

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