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Bakkar[]

  • Nominated by: JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 21:49, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: FAN #2, canon this time. Thanks to Fred for help with the GE parts!
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:GE, WP:NOVELS

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  1. Inqvote.png OOM 224 17:30, 17 November 2021 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote.png MasterFredCommerce Guild.svg(talk) 07:24, 17 January 2022 (UTC)

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OOM[]
  • One thing that stands out to me here (other than that redlink :P) is that the intro doesn't mention Bakkar's P&T, so I think that should be mentioned
    • What are you interested in being mentioned? Already got his fanhood of podracing in there. And redlink done.
      • Ah, sorry. I missed that and only saw the part about the talkative droid OOM 224 18:28, 16 November 2021 (UTC)
  • Grammatical errors in the last sentence, BTS OOM 224 22:09, 14 November 2021 (UTC)
    • Not sure of what you speak. Please elaborate. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 04:09, 15 November 2021 (UTC)
      • "like used in The Official Black Spire Outpost Cookbook,[2] this article presents the former's as the canonical depiction." — "Like used" and "former's" don't work in this line here. OOM 224 18:28, 16 November 2021 (UTC)
  • Please see if you're okay with this edit of mine OOM 224 22:38, 16 November 2021 (UTC)
    • I am, thanks. Just a reminder though, I prefer to leave this type of sentence without a ref.
      • Sure OOM 224 17:30, 17 November 2021 (UTC)
  • Also, "dreaming of selling his family's famous meat on another Outer Rim Territories planet" sounds like good P&T material OOM 224 22:43, 16 November 2021 (UTC)
Fred strikes back[]
  • Is there an "on" missing in the quote used for "Skills and abilities"? MasterFredCommerce Guild.svg(talk) 04:40, 15 January 2022 (UTC)

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