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Flame-colored robes[]
- Nominated by: Minnabird (talk) 18:03, 11 August 2021 (UTC)
- Nomination comments:
- WookieeProject (optional): WP:NOVELS
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Support[]
- Objections, suggestions, and a lot of screaming about Padmé and Naboo fashion addressed via Discord. Immi Thrax (talk) 23:57, 15 August 2021 (UTC)
- Great work! Editoronthewiki (talk) 21:54, 10 September 2021 (UTC)
- I think we're ready to go. Fantastic section header names. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 00:41, 15 September 2021 (UTC)
- YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his) (talk) 02:08, 7 November 2021 (UTC)
- Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 09:25, 27 November 2021 (UTC)
Object[]
Macaroni[]
Really great work here, just a couple things: for one, it isn't super clear to me if "The handmaidens often wore hoods" is connected to the article subject. If that's the case, it can be made a little clearer."..." should be replaced with "…"When you say Parasitti used the disguise against her, I think it should be explicitly mentioned that when she shapeshifted into a handmaiden, she was disguised in the robes. The article kind of implies it right now but doesn't state it."All over the galaxy" is intro-exclusive."At least one other queen's retinue also wore similar robes." — It should be made clear that this retinue was also of the Royal House of Naboo.JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 18:40, 12 August 2021 (UTC)Context needed for Anakin.Any reason you didn't mention a date for Raiders of the Lost Gundark?- Popping my head in to note there's no available date, just a range of "sometime while she's queen." Immi Thrax (talk) 00:01, 11 September 2021 (UTC)
All of the stuff in "Remembered in light" takes place before the last paragraph of "Banked embers", so that needs to be re-ordered.JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 22:39, 10 September 2021 (UTC)
Lewis[]
Missing appearances, I pointed them out to you on the Discord server before and guessing you forgot to add themLewisr (talk) 16:31, 13 August 2021 (UTC)
Manoof[]
There's two purposes in the intro not noted in the infobox: "complement several of the queen's outfits and help the handmaidens fade to the background." Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:52, 4 November 2021 (UTC)Does the robe have red in it? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:52, 4 November 2021 (UTC)- Will tackle the other objection later but: I suspect where you're seeing red is the under-robe and sash. They're described variously as red and orange in secondary material iirc but since the in-universe references call them orange, I've opted for that. It seems to be such a hot red-orange that simply categorizing as one or the other is kind of trusting your perceptions and throwing a dart. Minnabird (talk) 13:28, 4 November 2021 (UTC)
UberSoldat[]
- Added some more sources. Are Appearances/Sources still incomplete? UberSoldat93 (talk) 20:21, 1 December 2021 (UTC)
Comments[]
Vote to remove nomination (Inq only)[]
- Until Minna could return and handle objections herself again, removing for Manoof's objection that has been left unaddressed for over three weeks. OOM 224 18:58, 26 November 2021 (UTC)
- UberSoldat93 (talk) 19:04, 26 November 2021 (UTC)
- Imperators II(Talk) 19:34, 15 December 2021 (UTC)