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Jeremoch Colton[]
- Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:10, 23 May 2022 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Not every day my GAs get retconned into doing things in two additional films.
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Support[]
- — Samonic 09:28, 28 May 2022 (UTC)
- ThrawnChiss7 (talk) 19:27, 28 June 2022 (UTC)
- Commander Code-8 Hello There! 09:47, 30 December 2022 (UTC)
- Supreme Emperor Holocomm 08:50, 31 December 2022 (UTC)
- Lovely. OOM 224 23:10, 2 January 2023 (UTC)
- Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 01:25, 3 January 2023 (UTC)
- BloodOfIrizi (talk) 19:20, 5 January 2023 (UTC)
Object[]
Braha'moch[]
Should there be a retcon label by Rogue One in the appearance section?Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 23:10, 23 May 2022 (UTC)- Yup, good catch. Ayrehead02 (talk) 00:13, 24 May 2022 (UTC)
I don't think Odyssey actually confirms Ukio, Roon, Kowak and Hypori as "worlds." Roon notably, does not have any source calling it a world. Given SA precedents link the term "world" with "planet." I don't think we should call that a group of worlds.Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 14:55, 24 October 2022 (UTC)- Removed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:04, 24 October 2022 (UTC)
Generalirius Samoch[]
Context for Order 66.— Samonic 08:56, 24 May 2022 (UTC)- Done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:16, 24 May 2022 (UTC)
- Intro: I would say "Galactic Republic" is too unspecific, could you specify? — Samonic 08:55, 25 May 2022 (UTC)
- In relation to Colton and especially in the intro I think that's sufficient. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:15, 25 May 2022 (UTC)
- Intro: I would say "Galactic Republic" is too unspecific, could you specify? — Samonic 08:55, 25 May 2022 (UTC)
- Done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:16, 24 May 2022 (UTC)
Context for Clone Wars, Accresker Jail, Crimson Dawn. I don't know if it's really necessary, but: Being completely new to the terms "Sava" and "Madelin Sun," I have absolutely no idea of what they are, could you supply further context?— Samonic 08:55, 25 May 2022 (UTC)- I've added the combatants of the Clone Wars and context for Crimson Dawn. Accresker Jail is self contextualizing as it has jail in the name, and Sava is a title and so is the context for Madeline Sun, an individual, in the same way that you'd say Captain Jeremoch Colton. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:15, 25 May 2022 (UTC)
Alright, thanks; perhaps specifying the prison's location would be nice?— Samonic 12:00, 25 May 2022 (UTC)- The prison is mobile so it doesn't have a location but I've added some additional context. Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:07, 25 May 2022 (UTC)
- I've added the combatants of the Clone Wars and context for Crimson Dawn. Accresker Jail is self contextualizing as it has jail in the name, and Sava is a title and so is the context for Madeline Sun, an individual, in the same way that you'd say Captain Jeremoch Colton. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:15, 25 May 2022 (UTC)
Thrawn[]
Can Allan Dean Foster ghostwriting of ANH really be sourced to the ANHN? George Lucas's name is on the cover. -ThrawnChiss7 (talk) 21:16, 23 June 2022 (UTC)- It isn't sourced to the novelization? Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:53, 23 June 2022 (UTC)
- So sorry, I don't know what I thought. -ThrawnChiss7 (talk) 19:27, 28 June 2022 (UTC)
- It isn't sourced to the novelization? Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:53, 23 June 2022 (UTC)
SE[]
"and had a long record of service to the royal family of the planet Alderaan, the House of Organa." Mind changing this to "and had a long record of service to the House of Organa, the royal family of the planet Alderaan".- Done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:00, 3 December 2022 (UTC)
"After the session and the Jedi's successful mission, the Tantive III left Coruscant again and carried Organa and Yoda to the Polis Massa asteroid field." Think it's worth noting that Polis Massa was in the Outer Rim?- Added. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:00, 3 December 2022 (UTC)
I'll presume this is a no, but we don't know anything about how the Tantive IV was damaged prior to Tatooine/have an article for that, correct?- Not as far as I'm aware based on all the Tantive IV sources I checked for this. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:00, 3 December 2022 (UTC)
Worth adding any context about the jail being mobile, to indicate that he wasn't held in one single location?Supreme Emperor Holocomm 00:10, 3 December 2022 (UTC)- Added. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:00, 3 December 2022 (UTC)
Comments[]
Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 19:27, 5 January 2023 (UTC)