m (→OOM) |
No edit summary |
||
| Line 19: | Line 19: | ||
**In the interest of reducing clutter, I think the context in the quote attributions in the BTS section should just be removed |
**In the interest of reducing clutter, I think the context in the quote attributions in the BTS section should just be removed |
||
**Similarly, it's not necessary to say the context in which Lanter said things within the prose. Specifically, I'm looking at the mentions of SYFY and ''Star Wars Insider'' here [[User:OOM 224|<span style="color:#d1a111">'''OOM'''</span>]] [[User talk:OOM 224|<span style="color:#d1a111;font-family:franklin gothic">224</span>]] 22:15, 2 December 2021 (UTC) |
**Similarly, it's not necessary to say the context in which Lanter said things within the prose. Specifically, I'm looking at the mentions of SYFY and ''Star Wars Insider'' here [[User:OOM 224|<span style="color:#d1a111">'''OOM'''</span>]] [[User talk:OOM 224|<span style="color:#d1a111;font-family:franklin gothic">224</span>]] 22:15, 2 December 2021 (UTC) |
||
| + | ***All addressed. [[User:Braha'tok enthusiast|<span style="color:#0047ab; font-family:Trebuchet MS;">Braha'tok enthusiast</span>]] <sup>[[User talk:Braha'tok enthusiast|<span style="color:#0047ab; font-family:Trebuchet MS;">Hello there</span>]]</sup> 11:08, 3 December 2021 (UTC) |
||
====Comments==== |
====Comments==== |
||
Revision as of 11:08, 3 December 2021
Lant Davan
- Nominated by: Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 11:31, 1 December 2021 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: When I first watched A New Hope, one of my favourite costumes was that of the Alderaanian fleet troopers at the start. So when I first saw Matt 'freaking' Lanter play an updated version of the trooper in The Mandalorian, he became my favourite minor character from the show so far. Successfully GANing this article was one of my prouder moments of 2020 on the Wook as it was the first live-action article I was able to bring to such a high standard. Although further updates brought it above GAN length, I feel ready to bring it to the next stage. So here's to round two.
- WookieeProject (optional): WP:TMND
(0 Inqs/0 Users/0 Total)
(Votes required: 3 Inq vote(s) required to reach minimum. Additional 4 user or 2 Inq votes required to pass.)
Support
Object
OOM
- Preliminaries
- Duplicate links
- Place of death isn't supported by that ref note
- Inconsistency between Bothan-5 and Bothan-Five
- "50 year sentence" — numbers below 100 should be spelled out
- Context for Karthon Chop Fields
- "that resembled those of an Imperial stormtrooper" — is this being pointed out because the prop shoes are virtually identical to those worn by stormtroopers, or is it just because they're both white shoes that seem to be featureless on the surface? Comparing the concept art and images of stormtrooper prop shoes, the details seem to vary, and it's not good practice to point out connections when there may be in fact no direct links.
- Context for A New Hope
- In the interest of reducing clutter, I think the context in the quote attributions in the BTS section should just be removed
- Similarly, it's not necessary to say the context in which Lanter said things within the prose. Specifically, I'm looking at the mentions of SYFY and Star Wars Insider here OOM 224 22:15, 2 December 2021 (UTC)
- All addressed. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 11:08, 3 December 2021 (UTC)