While I agree with your reasoning not to include a date of death, you should at least mention something about the time of his death in the body. If Batch fled following Imdaar Alpha's destruction in 3 ABY, he would have at least survived until after the Battle of Endor in 4 ABY, when Harrsk established Zero Command. (Mentioning Palpatine's death at Endor in the body would probably be a good idea, too.)
One other thing: You mention that Batch's crew (or just the Terror's crew?) were still loyal to Sarn, yet you don't mention what happened to the admiral.
Mentioned. Who's Who: Imperial Grand Admirals says Batch's crew.
Very nice. One step closer to having all the Grand Admirals reach featured status. Grand Moff Tranner(Comlink) 19:39, August 30, 2010 (UTC)
Thanks for the review :-). Just Thrawn to go. Grunny (talk) 21:22, August 30, 2010 (UTC)