- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a featured article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
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Seviss Vaa[]
- Nominated by: Thefourdotelipsis 03:06, July 14, 2010 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: It was a graveyard smash.
(4 Inqs/2 Users/6 Total)[]
Support[]
- Very well done.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 18:34, July 14, 2010 (UTC)
- —Tommy 9281 20:46, July 15, 2010 (UTC)
- Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 15:19, August 30, 2010 (UTC)
- Green Tentacle (Talk) 19:40, September 14, 2010 (UTC)
- --Eyrezer 05:18, September 16, 2010 (UTC)
- Read through it, made a small adjustment to the intro wording to eliminate some redundancy, fixed the spelling, and defaultsorted the article. Looks pretty solid to me. Trak Nar Ramble on 05:28, September 16, 2010 (UTC)
Object[]
Monstahs![]
In the intro it sounds like Vaa intended the creature to go berserk at the sight of a lightsaber, whereas in the bio it sounds like that was an unintended side-effect.- Given it a bit of a tweak, let us know if it's OK.
- Nice work, as usual. Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 15:36, July 25, 2010 (UTC)
- Danke. Thefourdotelipsis 05:13, August 30, 2010 (UTC)
Comments[]
Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 05:38, September 16, 2010 (UTC)