Tarsus Valorum/Legends
- Nominated by: Brandon Rhea(talk) 17:40, August 8, 2020 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: This article was voted to FA status in 2009 and had its status revoked in 2019 due to needing an update from The Complete Star Wars Encyclopedia. I've now made that update as well as updated the BTS to reflect its Legends status. - Brandon Rhea(talk) 17:40, August 8, 2020 (UTC)
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Shayanomer
- Reviewing note: Seeing as I linked the wrong guide in the edit summary, I'm going to correct it here. Per the Linking section in the Manual of Style, compound terms must not be separated when linking a subject's first instance, like what you did with "Emissary-class shuttle" here.
- I would remove the BTS image, there doesn't appear to be enough space for it. Shayanomer
(talk) 09:39, September 29, 2020 (UTC)
- Not enough space how? - Brandon Rhea(talk) 14:34, October 2, 2020 (UTC)
- Not only is it stretched all the way down to Sources, it's unnecessarily increasing the width of the BTS paragraph. This wouldn't be an issue if the BTS was longer, but that isn't the case here. Shayanomer (talk) 14:42, October 2, 2020 (UTC)
- I don't see any rules where this is explicitly stated. There are several FAs where this sort of format is used, including Kkkt, which you voted for. - Brandon Rhea(talk) 16:13, October 2, 2020 (UTC)
- Not only is it stretched all the way down to Sources, it's unnecessarily increasing the width of the BTS paragraph. This wouldn't be an issue if the BTS was longer, but that isn't the case here. Shayanomer
- Not enough space how? - Brandon Rhea(talk) 14:34, October 2, 2020 (UTC)
Comments
Some objections that were handled via the Legends channel on Discord:
- Addition of the {{CSWECite}} template.
- Removal of the GrS date in the infobox, per Wookieepedia:Layout Guide#Infobox.
- Addition of individual references for dates.
- Removal of full release date on books, only needing the year of publication.
- Removal of information about Tarsus Valorum's inclusion in canon from the BtS.
- Addition of the year that Valorum's time in office ended and who he was succeeded by.
- Addition of Darth Bane: Rule of Two (audiobook) and Darth Plagueis (audiobook) to the appearances.
Still to come:
- Fill in the Plagueis audiobook redlink.
- Find and cite a source that says Chris Trevas created the artwork for the character.
- Brandon Rhea(talk) 19:16, August 8, 2020 (UTC)
- Audiobook redlink has been filled in. I also added an Equipment section. I cannot, however, find a source that says Chris Trevas was the artist who created the image of Tarsus. Without that, I will opt to not include artist info on the page. - Brandon Rhea(talk) 20:25, August 8, 2020 (UTC)