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*''In the meantime, Qel-Droma became well known by the Alderaanian nobility, who largely disapproved of whatever he did and looked upon him with disdain.'' Why did they look at him with disdain? What did he do?
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*''Amanoa, a Force-sensitive herself, was hesitant to work with such young Jedi, but Qel-Droma quickly dismissed her concerns.'' Maybe go into detail as to why she was hesitant to work with young Jedi, and how Ulic dismissed her concerns?
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*''After the slaying of Satal Keto, Qel-Droma returned to within the Iron Citadel with his new flame, Aleema. While Qel-Droma recuperated from various injuries, Keto gave him a powerful Sith amulet which had originally belonged to Satal.'' Maybe reword this so that it specifies that Aleema's last name is Keto as well?
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*''As Toq and Cay went off to deal with the guards, Sunrider tried to convince Qel-Droma to leave Empress Teta with her, as she fended off Keto's dark illusions all the while.'' Again, maybe clarify that this is referring to Aleema Keto?
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*''Upon learning the Force Harvester's location on Raxus Prime from Qel-Droma's spirit, Dooku had the Harvester dug up, and began to charge it using a number of unsuspecting Republic targets.'' Does the source mention ''why'' Ulic would disclose that information, especially since he died as a redeemed Jedi? Did Dooku trick him into it? Is it an echo of Ulic's time as a Sith that Dooku was speaking to?
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*''The Jedi, having learned of Dooku's use of the Force Harvester...'' How?
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That is all. [[User:StarNeptune|<b><span style="color: teal">StarNeptune</span></b>]]<sup>[[User talk:StarNeptune|Talk to me!]]</sup> 01:21, January 5, 2012 (UTC)
 
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Ulic Qel-Droma

  • Nominated by: IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 02:20, November 29, 2011 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Do your worst.

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  • In the meantime, Qel-Droma became well known by the Alderaanian nobility, who largely disapproved of whatever he did and looked upon him with disdain. Why did they look at him with disdain? What did he do?
  • Amanoa, a Force-sensitive herself, was hesitant to work with such young Jedi, but Qel-Droma quickly dismissed her concerns. Maybe go into detail as to why she was hesitant to work with young Jedi, and how Ulic dismissed her concerns?
  • After the slaying of Satal Keto, Qel-Droma returned to within the Iron Citadel with his new flame, Aleema. While Qel-Droma recuperated from various injuries, Keto gave him a powerful Sith amulet which had originally belonged to Satal. Maybe reword this so that it specifies that Aleema's last name is Keto as well?
  • As Toq and Cay went off to deal with the guards, Sunrider tried to convince Qel-Droma to leave Empress Teta with her, as she fended off Keto's dark illusions all the while. Again, maybe clarify that this is referring to Aleema Keto?
  • Upon learning the Force Harvester's location on Raxus Prime from Qel-Droma's spirit, Dooku had the Harvester dug up, and began to charge it using a number of unsuspecting Republic targets. Does the source mention why Ulic would disclose that information, especially since he died as a redeemed Jedi? Did Dooku trick him into it? Is it an echo of Ulic's time as a Sith that Dooku was speaking to?
  • The Jedi, having learned of Dooku's use of the Force Harvester... How?

That is all. StarNeptuneTalk to me! 01:21, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

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