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Waxer/Legends (Redux review)[]
- Redux comments: Reduxed per Meeting 114.
- Date added: April 11, 2020
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Support[]
- Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 23:37, April 11, 2020 (UTC)
- Supreme Emperor (talk) 17:03, October 5, 2020 (UTC)
- Imperators II(Talk) 18:52, 20 August 2021 (UTC)
- 1358 (Talk) 14:05, 2 September 2021 (UTC)
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Toprawa[]
Two-speaker quotes get the Quote template, not Dialogue. There's at least one case of this being done incorrectly in the article.Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 19:43, April 24, 2020 (UTC)- Fixed. 01miki10 Open comlink 21:07, April 28, 2020 (UTC)
The intro seems pretty large relative to the rest of the size of the article, which isn't all that big. Just eying it up, it probably doesn't need to be any longer than the length of the infobox. Whoever is potentially maintaining this thing, see what you can do about cutting it down. Concentrate on unnecessary details that can be saved for the Bio.Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 00:19, 2 February 2021 (UTC)- Sorry for the slow response. I have gone through the intro and removed some unneccessary detail. Please check if that is enough or if it needs more trimming. QuiGonJinn (Talk) 10:24, 20 February 2021 (UTC)
- Objection(s) overridden by Inquisitorius 16:22, 20 April 2021 (UTC)
UberSoldat[]
Since Waxer has several lines of dialogue on the wiki, a {{Soundcat}} would be good to have on the article.UberSoldat93 (talk) 07:58, May 10, 2020 (UTC)- Added. QuiGonJinn (Talk) 08:51, May 10, 2020 (UTC)
Fred strikes back[]
Per other status articles on clones, the affiliation field in the infobox should also include the GAR and the 212th.MasterFred(talk) 20:46, 16 January 2021 (UTC)- It used to include those, but was changed in accordance with WP:LG, which states that: the "Affiliations" field of infoboxes shall list sub-bullets to a maximum depth of one. QuiGonJinn (Talk) 06:53, 18 January 2021 (UTC)
- I was in discussion with Shay about this and we both thought that to be the case, but for some reason I completely missed that line when reading the infobox section in the LG. MasterFred(talk) 08:02, 18 January 2021 (UTC)
- It used to include those, but was changed in accordance with WP:LG, which states that: the "Affiliations" field of infoboxes shall list sub-bullets to a maximum depth of one. QuiGonJinn (Talk) 06:53, 18 January 2021 (UTC)
Imp[]
Per precedent of clone trooper status articles, traits such as hair color should not be assumed to be the same as Jango Fett's. This is with respect to ref 3 in both the infobox and the body.Imperators II(Talk) 22:02, 3 August 2021 (UTC)- Removed in QGJ's absence. UberSoldat93 (talk) 09:00, 4 August 2021 (UTC)
Species is infobox-exclusive.- Done.
The fact that the Twi'leks of Nabat were "enslaved" and Rex's rank are both intro-exclusive.- Removed "enslaved" and added rank.
Identical consecutive references in second and third paragraphs of "Landing on Ryloth".- Fixed.
Tally mark is a Canon article, so it should either be delinked or changed to a Legends one.- Removed.
I'm not really sold on the necessity of the Slaves of the Republic header template in this case. From the BTS it seems to me that Waxer's appearance in the comic series has been pretty much completely overridden. To compare, we don't put header templates saying "warning, this article contains non-canon information" at the top of articles that detail said information in the BTS.- Makes sense to me, removed.
Context for Skywalker, Tano, and Kenobi needed at their first mention in the body.- Added for all three.
- Can we pull Kenobi's rank of High Jedi General from the BTS and put it into the body? I'm asking because I don't know what kind of referencing would be needed to support it.
- Fixed.
- Can we pull Kenobi's rank of High Jedi General from the BTS and put it into the body? I'm asking because I don't know what kind of referencing would be needed to support it.
- Added for all three.
"Landing on Ryloth" introduces "the courtyard" but it is never explained what exactly that is - was it just a courtyard the clone quartet was in at the time of the splitting up, or some special location?- Switched to "a".
Can we get some quote formatting consistency for non-spoken parts between the "Liberating the Twi'leks" and "Umbara" sections?- Should be done.
"Umbara": "a Jedi transport" — do we have an article for this starship?- No, and after reviewing the episode, I don't think we need one. It's just a Republic gunship.
- Having not seen the episode, there's no way for me as a reader to quickly intuit that. Can we get that clarified, then?
- Fixed after Discord discussion.
- Having not seen the episode, there's no way for me as a reader to quickly intuit that. Can we get that clarified, then?
- No, and after reviewing the episode, I don't think we need one. It's just a Republic gunship.
Have I gathered it correctly (I haven't watched the relevant episodes) that Krell planned to defect from the Republic? If so, I believe it would make more sense to note that as Krell's motivation for setting the Umbara events in motion, as opposed to him falling to the dark side, which doesn't sound like it has much to do with pitting two clone units against each other.- He planned to defect but not to the CIS; he had foreseen that a new power would rise in place of the Jedi, so he planned to join Dooku to be there when it happened.
- Then his plans to join Dooku, the leader of the CIS—as opposed to falling to the dark side—would still make more sense here as context for Krell's actions.
- How's that?
- Then his plans to join Dooku, the leader of the CIS—as opposed to falling to the dark side—would still make more sense here as context for Krell's actions.
- He planned to defect but not to the CIS; he had foreseen that a new power would rise in place of the Jedi, so he planned to join Dooku to be there when it happened.
The Personality and traits section could use some logical restructuring, since right now it begins a new paragraph by discussing the chronologically next information on Waxer's personality but then kind of awkwardly and confusingly discusses his physical traits before once again proceeding chronologically with his personality traits.- Reordered.
It would be helpful it the type of the battle droid that was depicted on Waxer's helmet could be noted.- Finally found a good shot of the helmet, added. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 01:03, 17 August 2021 (UTC)
I'd like to see release dates for Complete S1 and the Slaves of the Republic episodes.- Added. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 19:08, 19 August 2021 (UTC)
Right now, the "Slaves of the Republic adaptation" section introduces the "Slaves of the Republic story arc" while giving zero information on what that actually is. (I suppose it's a remnant from the comic issue titles previously containing that name...?)- How's that?
Both the quote caption and the image caption in that section should specify the name of the comic series that is being mentioned there.- Added. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 18:22, 16 August 2021 (UTC)
"However, as Waxer had just died in the previous episode, his role during the Battle of Kiros was filled by Boil in the episode "Kidnapped."" — I assume that this really can't all be sourced to just "Kidnapped". Waxer's death should probably be sourced to "Carnage of Krell" and [Waxer's] role during Kiros should be sourced to TCW 1.- Ref added.
- This has actually not been addressed at all...
- Oops, should be done now :P
- This has actually not been addressed at all...
- Ref added.
I'm not seeing what all the Zygerria stuff has to do with Waxer, that paragraph can just end at "The battle is ultimately won by the Republic" with no loss of relevant information.- Removed.
I'm curious about that very last paragraph about bounty hunters being able to capture Waxer on Ryloth. Do we know when/where/how does this happen?- It's on Ryloth, like the article says. I've added some details regarding his "capture." JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 02:42, 13 August 2021 (UTC)
Should The Clone Wars 1 not be listed under Non-canon appearances in this case?Imperators II(Talk) 23:42, 12 August 2021 (UTC)- Is there a precedent for retconned material being placed there? That's why you ask, right? JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 02:19, 13 August 2021 (UTC)
- I mean, in light of the retcon, are any of the events of that arc canonical at all? If not, it would make sense for it to go under Non-canon appearances. Imperators II(Talk) 11:08, 20 August 2021 (UTC)
- Implemented {{Nc}} after Discord discussion. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 18:14, 20 August 2021 (UTC)
- I mean, in light of the retcon, are any of the events of that arc canonical at all? If not, it would make sense for it to go under Non-canon appearances. Imperators II(Talk) 11:08, 20 August 2021 (UTC)
- Is there a precedent for retconned material being placed there? That's why you ask, right? JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 02:19, 13 August 2021 (UTC)
Ecks Dee[]
The intro can be trimmed a bit. Some of the level of detail is unnecessary for an intro: "On Ryloth, Ghost Company—led by General Kenobi—was assigned to destroy the Confederate proton cannons in the city of Nabat in order to allow the Galactic Republic Acclamator-class assault ships to land." The proton cannons are mentioned later on and don't need to be mentioned twice.- Cut down a bit, anything else you saw that needed trimming?
Furthermore, the second intro paragraph break is not really working well. Keep Umbara in one paragraph.1358 (Talk) 08:11, 31 August 2021 (UTC)- Moved Umbara info. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 01:37, 1 September 2021 (UTC)