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X2[]
- Nominated by: QuiGonJinn (Talk) 17:30, May 5, 2010 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: A 60 KB long single-source article? I bet this has never happened before…
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- Looks good to me. Great job, Qui-Gon.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 01:33, May 26, 2010 (UTC)
I like it. It's only got 2 red pages and its got plenty of detail. Definitely should be featured. Patchesthepuppy (comlink) 4:46, May 28, 2010 (UTC)(Vote struck per policy: Way less than 50 mainspace edits. -- Trak Nar Ramble on 20:54, May 28, 2010 (UTC))
- Thefourdotelipsis 01:02, June 9, 2010 (UTC)
- --Eyrezer 01:12, June 21, 2010 (UTC)
- Xicer9(Combadge) 14:54, June 29, 2010 (UTC)
- Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 10:59, July 1, 2010 (UTC)
- CC7567 (talk) 06:41, July 3, 2010 (UTC)
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In the early life section, you say that Grey was a Knight. However, the following sentence indicates that he was still under Kota's tutelage. The first sentence should say Grey was a Padawan, shouldn't it? Or was Kota his former Master when the Kaminoans stole Grey's DNA?- Grey was Kota's Padawan when the Kaminoans stole his DNA, but after that incident he became a Knight. I've tweaked the early life part to reflect this. QuiGonJinn (Talk) 12:54, May 18, 2010 (UTC)
- Thanks. I'll keep looking for more objections.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 19:47, May 18, 2010 (UTC)
- Grey was Kota's Padawan when the Kaminoans stole his DNA, but after that incident he became a Knight. I've tweaked the early life part to reflect this. QuiGonJinn (Talk) 12:54, May 18, 2010 (UTC)
Please capitalize all instances of "Master".- There's only one instance of "master", and I believe it's not incorrect. If the word's being used in the context of being a Padawan's master I'm not sure it should be capitalized, as it isn't a title; and you can be someone's master and not be a Jedi Master. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 14:53, May 16, 2010 (UTC)
- Ah, OK. Cool.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 12:34, May 17, 2010 (UTC)
- There's only one instance of "master", and I believe it's not incorrect. If the word's being used in the context of being a Padawan's master I'm not sure it should be capitalized, as it isn't a title; and you can be someone's master and not be a Jedi Master. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 14:53, May 16, 2010 (UTC)
- More to come, perhaps…--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 14:30, May 16, 2010 (UTC)
You're sitting on a new Khomeini?[]
The intro is a touch engorged, I think. If you could condense it down to the length of the three existing paragraphs, that would be ideal.- Done
A curious item appears in Star Wars Missions 1: Assault on Yavin Four—"Wedge Antilles and the other surviving starfighter pilots were also present." The event in question is a briefing held by Dodonna, and concerns an Imperial carrack cruiser entering the Yavin system. The cruiser is later downed and its captain, Skeezer, is captured by the Alliance. Since X2 is identified as one of those surviving pilots, I would think it counts as an appearance of sorts, but I'm curious to know what you think about this.- I think that's too much of an assumption. Many pilots survived the battle, and many more keep popping up as the battle is revisited in the EU. Retroactively assuming each mention of "the surviving pilots" to mean X2, Keyan Farlander, Rookie One, Ru Murleen, etc. is a bit of an overkill IMO. QuiGonJinn (Talk) 18:34, June 8, 2010 (UTC)
- Agreed. Just thought I'd mention it. :P Thefourdotelipsis 01:02, June 9, 2010 (UTC)
- I think that's too much of an assumption. Many pilots survived the battle, and many more keep popping up as the battle is revisited in the EU. Retroactively assuming each mention of "the surviving pilots" to mean X2, Keyan Farlander, Rookie One, Ru Murleen, etc. is a bit of an overkill IMO. QuiGonJinn (Talk) 18:34, June 8, 2010 (UTC)
- Otherwise, quite good. Although utter tosh. :P Thefourdotelipsis 02:55, May 29, 2010 (UTC)
Eyrezer[]
Under Early Life: "During this time, X1 and X2 were responsible for training their clone brethren.[3]" and under Clone Wars: "Taking their skills into account, the Galactic Republic assigned X1 and X2 to train new batches of clone troopers in the art of warfare.[3]" These seem a bit contradictory. When did they start training other clones? --Eyrezer 00:37, June 11, 2010 (UTC)- Both statements are correct. While on Kamino they trained their fellow clones. As the Clone Wars progressed, new batches of clone troopers were created, and X1 and X2 were assigned to train them as well.
I'm not familiar with the original source material. Is there any contradiction with other accounts of the battle of Coruscant or does this game largely mesh cleanly with LOE and the Clone Wars cartoon? --Eyrezer 03:05, June 11, 2010 (UTC)- There is no evident contradiction with the Clone Wars cartoon. I have not read Labyrinth of Evil, so I can't say for sure about any contradition with it. Anyway, I don't think the difference in the portrayal of the battle is relevant to this article.
"The battle was not over yet, as two AT-AT assaulted the Ewok village" What Ewok village?- Addressed.
Is there no strategy guide? --Eyrezer 13:44, June 12, 2010 (UTC)- Nope. QuiGonJinn (Talk) 11:03, June 20, 2010 (UTC)
Xicer[]
Given the rather large number of inconsistencies between the console versions, I suggest placing a {{Twoconflicting}} template at the top of the article.- I'd also support this. --Eyrezer 01:12, June 21, 2010 (UTC)
- Done. QuiGonJinn (Talk) 14:17, June 29, 2010 (UTC)
- I'd also support this. --Eyrezer 01:12, June 21, 2010 (UTC)
Intro: "Knowing that X1 was still roaming the galaxy, trying to rebuild the Empire" This assumes the reader is aware that the Empire was fragmented at the Battle of Endor. Might be a good idea to add that bit to the previous sentence.- Addressed.
Clone Wars: Second paragraph, you have two of the same ref cited consecutively. Was one of them meant to be a different ref? Or was there supposed to be another one in-between somewhere?- Should be fixed now.
Trials of a Jedi Knight: Context needed on the New Republic.- Addressed.
- Great work otherwise, especially with reconciling the two versions. Xicer9(Combadge) 23:22, June 20, 2010 (UTC)
- Thank you, it was quite a challenge :P QuiGonJinn (Talk) 14:17, June 29, 2010 (UTC)