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This page is for Good article nominations. A Good article is an article that adheres to certain quality standards but cannot reach Featured status due to its limited content. In turn, a Good article features more detail than a Comprehensive article. On this page, users can nominate articles that they believe are ready to be reviewed to achieve Good status.

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Ginder

  • Nominated by: OtterSurf (talk) 12:22, May 12, 2020 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:

(2 ACs/2 Users/4 Total)

(Votes required: 1 AC vote(s) required to reach minimum. No additional votes required to pass, please consider reviewing another article.)

Support

  1. QuiGonJinn Senate seal.svg(Talk) 09:57, May 26, 2020 (UTC)
  2. ACvote.png Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 13:13, July 6, 2020 (UTC)
  3. JediMasterMacaroniAdmiral Ackbar RH.png(Talk) 04:07, 23 May 2021 (UTC)
  4. ACvote.png MasterFredCommerce Guild.svg(talk) 21:51, 12 June 2021 (UTC)

Object

Imp
  • Publication date. Imperators II(Talk) 14:05, May 12, 2020 (UTC)
  • Implement {{WizardsCite}}. Imperators II(Talk) 14:05, May 12, 2020 (UTC)
    • Done. OtterSurf (talk) 18:27, May 12, 2020 (UTC)
      • In the reference, too. And move what you have under Sources to Appearances and remove the Sources section. Imperators II(Talk) 08:45, May 13, 2020 (UTC)
  • What evidence is there for placing the subject in the Rise of the Empire era? Imperators II(Talk) 14:05, May 12, 2020 (UTC)
    • The supplement outright states that it takes place then. OtterSurf (talk) 18:37, May 12, 2020 (UTC)
      • That may be, but the article needs to provide in-universe reasoning for that in the body. Imperators II(Talk) 08:45, May 13, 2020 (UTC)
        • Having re-checked the supplement, it actually states that Head Trip can take place in any era, so I'm now not sure the eras field even applies. OtterSurf (talk) 09:22, May 13, 2020 (UTC)
        • Never mind, fixed. OtterSurf (talk) 11:51, May 18, 2020 (UTC)
          • What you have there right now makes no sense. The adventure is explicitly set in the Rise of the Empire era, which is set between 1000 BBY and 0 BBY, so you can work from that. Is the Galactic Republic mentioned as existing in the adventure? If so, that narrows it down to 1000 BBY and 19 BBY. I believe the Living Force Campaign Guide also establishes a date for the colonization of the Cularin system, so that can be used as another boundary for the date range. And then you should try and determine whether the adventure ties in any way with the events of the Living Force campaign, which may tie down the events to before, during, or after 31 BBY. Imperators II(Talk) 17:43, May 25, 2020 (UTC)
            • Just reread the supplement, and I quote: "Note that while Head Trip takes place in the setting established in The Living Force Campaign Guide, the events, places, and individuals in this adventure don't come from the RPGA's Living Force campaign. The Cularin system holds a wealth of possibilities for exciting adventures, and Gamemasters shouldn't feel constrained by the Living Force campaign when designing their own home games. Head Trip is an example of how to put your own spin on the setting". So does that mean the era field doesn't even apply here, or what? OtterSurf (talk) 18:27, May 25, 2020 (UTC)
              • It does apply. Per the first sentence you quoted, I believe we can safely assume that the events of the adventure take place concurrently with the events of the Living Force. Take the date from the Living Force Campaign Guide and use it with "around." Imperators II(Talk) 18:38, May 25, 2020 (UTC)
                • Great. Done. OtterSurf (talk) 18:43, May 25, 2020 (UTC)
                  • The current ref note erroneously uses 32 BBY, not 31 BBY, and it doesn't mention the adventure at all. Imperators II(Talk) 07:51, May 26, 2020 (UTC)
  • The Essential Atlas does not mention Genarius, please revise your referencing. Imperators II(Talk) 14:05, May 12, 2020 (UTC)
    • Corrected. OtterSurf (talk) 18:27, May 12, 2020 (UTC)
      • That is not what you had to do, OtterSurf. Take a look at the articles you've previously brought to status to see what needs to be put there. Imperators II(Talk) 08:45, May 13, 2020 (UTC)
  • I'm seeing an error in the lead quote, so correct that and go through all the others and check them, too. Imperators II(Talk) 14:10, May 12, 2020 (UTC)
  • Our article for the droid model is named incorrectly, that needs to be corrected. Imperators II(Talk) 14:10, May 12, 2020 (UTC)
  • Please split up the largest paragraph of the article and add an image. Imperators II(Talk) 14:12, May 12, 2020 (UTC)
    • Paragraph split. What image can I use, though? Head Trip doesn't provide any. OtterSurf (talk) 18:27, May 12, 2020 (UTC)
      • You can use images of related subjects from other sources. For example, we have an image of Genarius. Imperators II(Talk) 08:45, May 13, 2020 (UTC)
Shayanomer
  • If the Bimm are a furred species, then specifying this in the article for a single Bimm is unnecessary. It's like saying Chewbacca was a hairy Wookiee.
    • Bimms come in two flavours: furry and humanoid. I have removed a redundant mention of it, though. OtterSurf (talk) 11:23, May 18, 2020 (UTC)
  • Attire goes into Equipment, not P&T.
  • Reviewing note: Equipment always goes under the P&T, and below Skills if present. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 09:31, May 18, 2020 (UTC)
  • Species comes before gender. Please reflect this in the article. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 12:08, July 6, 2020 (UTC)
  • The intro can be expanded slightly with more details on the events surrounding the head.
    • Added info about the cantina fight. OtterSurf (talk) 12:43, July 6, 2020 (UTC)
  • Does the source italicize "Falling Rodian"?
  • If a subject only has one appearance, then saying "first appeared" is unnecessary. See the recent EC meeting log for more details.
    • Done. Also reflected in the BTS. OtterSurf (talk) 12:31, July 6, 2020 (UTC)
      • Umm, you did not need to remove "1st" from Appearances, that was only for the BTS. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 12:47, July 6, 2020 (UTC)
  • Per precedent, you need to state that the article assumes the adventure plays out as described in the source. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 12:19, July 6, 2020 (UTC)
QGJ
  • Reference 2 provides a firm date for the adventure. This date is not present in the article itself. QuiGonJinn Senate seal.svg(Talk) 10:04, May 25, 2020 (UTC)
Tommy
  • Preliminaries:
    • Please implement an Oxford comma.
      • Done, I think. OtterSurf (talk) 15:54, June 8, 2020 (UTC)
        • No you haven't. Please take some time to research what an Oxford comma is and try again. The MoS would be a good place to start, although the first page of a google search of that term also explains it well.
          • I know what it is, thank you. I'm not sure where it applies here. I'll take another look. OtterSurf (talk) 08:58, June 9, 2020 (UTC)
          • Done. I've put it after "muzzle". OtterSurf (talk) 09:22, June 9, 2020 (UTC)
    • Please make the formatting of Head Trip consistent.
      • Done. OtterSurf (talk) 15:58, June 8, 2020 (UTC)
        • No you haven't. Sometimes it is italicised, sometimes it is in quotes. Which is correct? And I have no idea why you've removed the template from ref 2.
    • File links in the body should be formatted "file:name | thumb | location | size | caption."
      • Size? OtterSurf (talk) 15:54, June 8, 2020 (UTC)
        • Yes, that's what's missing. Please specify it.
    • Please implement — instead of —.
    • Watch out for formatting issues like double spaces. Tommy-Macaroni 18:11, June 6, 2020 (UTC)
      • I've been over the article with a fine tooth comb and can't find that. Where is it? OtterSurf (talk) 15:54, June 8, 2020 (UTC)
        • Yeah, I doubt that. You have two instances of double spaces in this article which can be easily found by using ctrl+f or your computer's equivalent. These are very simple objections Otter, they shouldn't be requiring this much effort from either of us. Tommy-Macaroni 22:04, June 8, 2020 (UTC)
          • I don't have that option available since I'm on an Android phone. This would move a lot faster if you just told me where the double spaces are. As above, I'll check again. OtterSurf (talk) 08:58, June 9, 2020 (UTC)
            • I appreciate the difficulty of you being on mobile, and that you may not have any choice in the matter, but I'm afraid this really isn't ideal for article nominations. I can see just from my previous objections here that you being on a phone has made addressing these far more difficult than they ought to be, and I'm afraid this will make nominations more lengthy and difficult for both you and reviewers. But regardless, while I could tell you were they are, that doesn't help you become a better writer for future projects. According to these two pages, a version of ctrl+f is available on android. Please do some research into this, as find text is an invaluable tool in article writing you really need to know how to perform. Tommy-Macaroni 12:02, June 9, 2020 (UTC)
              • Alright. Done that. Chrome tells me that there's only one double space in the article, but won't show me where it is. A visual scan of the marked page shows only single spaces. I'm starting to find this extremely frustrating. OtterSurf (talk) 12:43, June 12, 2020 (UTC)
                • Yeah don't get sassy with me, you chose to nominate this article on mobile and the restrictions that come with it, so you really shouldn't be surprised at the fact that you have to find ways to work around those restrictions. Now, I can assure you there are two instances of double spaces in the article. If Chrome isn't working properly, have you tried copy-pasting the contents of the article into another app, one with a better find text feature, or even better, a find and replace tool? I sympathise with the restrictions of mobile but, to be blunt, you don't seem to be trying very hard to find alternative solutions to those restrictions. You are a regular article nominator, so you knowing how to perform a text search is imperative. I can guarantee you will need to do so for future nominations. And yes, I could tell you where the double spaces are, that does nothing to help you as a writer. Self-sufficiency is a requirement of nominating, and it is not the job of reviewers to construct and modify articles for nominators who don't know how to or can't do it themselves. Your nomination is your responsibility. So, instead of complaining about my objection, please put some effort in and find a way for you to access a text search. Tommy-Macaroni 13:58, June 12, 2020 (UTC)
                  • Uh, I'm not getting sassy with you. Think you misread my comment. Anyway, I've run the text of the article through a double-space removal tool. All double spaces should be absent now. OtterSurf (talk) 15:35, June 12, 2020 (UTC)
Anil
  • There are at least two links that are not formatted properly.
    • Fixed. The Wizards one might still need doing, though. OtterSurf (talk) 15:38, June 12, 2020 (UTC)
      • Yes, there's another one in that Wizards reference note. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders.svg Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 15:48, June 12, 2020 (UTC)
        • I meant the WOTC pipelink. Fixed. OtterSurf (talk) 16:55, June 12, 2020 (UTC)
          • No, the one you've just changed was actually properly formatted before you changed it. I'm talking about the one in the reference note #2. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders.svg Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 17:27, June 12, 2020 (UTC)
            • Ah. Well, now it's fixed. OtterSurf (talk) 18:39, June 12, 2020 (UTC)
  • Please fix the placement of quotation marks in BTS, per this item of the Manual of Style: "Per standards of American English, double quotation marks (" ") should be used and the period (full stop), comma, question and exclamation marks should be within the quotation."
  • As far as I can see, Cularin system's criminal organization has its own article, which should be linked in this article. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders.svg Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 14:33, June 11, 2020 (UTC)
Ecks
  • While the order is different, the wording is essentially identical in the intro and the body: "while going through a shipment of scrap, Ginder came across the head of an L8O-series protocol droid." vs "Ginder came across the head of an L8O-series protocol droid, L8O-RC, while going through a shipment of scrap" Can we get some variation here please?
  • Are all Bimms furred? If so, is it really necessary to emphasize him being furred in the intro and the bio? 1358 (Talk) 15:26, 23 January 2021 (UTC)
  • "And the some other guys start following me" The Bio quote doesn't appear to be right, is that a typo or should it come with a [sic]? 1358 (Talk) 10:43, 21 March 2021 (UTC),
    • No, I just missed out a letter. Fixed. OtterSurf (talk) 13:06, 21 March 2021 (UTC)
Fred strikes back
  • You should mention that the soldiers and thugs are rivals.
  • You should mention that the third group following Ginder was unbeknownst to him.
  • You should mention that Ginder belongs to the more mammalian of the Bimm races. MasterFredCommerce Guild.svg(talk) 17:18, 10 April 2021 (UTC)
    • Both Bimm species are mammalian, so I'm not sure what you're asking for there. I've already stated in both intro and body that he was furred. OtterSurf (talk) 10:58, 11 April 2021 (UTC)
      • I'll be honest, I re-read the article, and I have no idea what this was about. I'll chalk it up to me reviewing it way past my bedtime and being slightly delirious. MasterFredCommerce Guild.svg(talk) 07:20, 15 April 2021 (UTC)
        • Heh, no problem mate. :D OtterSurf (talk) 12:45, 16 April 2021 (UTC)
  • It should state that Ginder's call for help was urgent. MasterFredCommerce Guild.svg(talk) 23:13, 7 June 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Drolen Antig

  • Nominated by: OtterSurf (talk) 09:45, May 20, 2020 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Smuggled a shipment of glitterstim through customs at Phindar Spaceport by hiding it up his backside, apparently

(0 ACs/1 Users/1 Total)

(Votes required: 3 AC vote(s) required to reach minimum. Additional 1 user or 1 AC vote required to pass.)

Support

Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 16:04, September 1, 2020 (UTC)
  1. You know, I read that Wanted by Cracken entry three times to figure out how I was missing that bit about Phindar. -- Darth Culator (Talk) 15:03, 14 February 2021 (UTC)

Object

Shayanomer
  • The intro is way too short for three paragraphs in the biography. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 17:40, May 21, 2020 (UTC)
  • Do the sources state that he smuggled goods on those smuggling routes? If so, then the info on both of those can be combined better in the biography. Otherwise, split them into two sentences.
  • In the first paragraph, is there a reason to use two separate Sources to cite the info about Pirik after citing "Outer Rim"?
    • Yes. Only Corint City is mentioned in Antig's profile; where it is, namely Pirik, is from another source. OtterSurf (talk) 10:19, July 9, 2020 (UTC)
      • Then you will need to include a note stating that the source identifies the planet that the city is on as Pirik. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 10:51, July 9, 2020 (UTC)
  • You need to elaborate on the "technology" when it's first mentioned in the second paragraph instead of the third paragraph, as you call it a "valuable resource," which isn't explained very well there.
  • "The criminals needed a transport, and so Antig offered his own ship, the Trustworthy, for the job." Please restructure this sentence to improve its flow.
  • His work with the Advosze thieves should be mentioned before the heist, as all information needs to be in chronological order.
  • "The heist was a success, but Antig and his crew killed the Advosze..." This is the first and only time you mention any sort of "crew" in the biography separate from the Advosze.
  • "New Republic forces were quick to act, attempting to locate Antig, who had been spotted in the Ethav Regions after the heist, and resolving to retrieve the stolen components before Kuat Drive Yards could use the technology in designs for the Empire." Please restructure this to reduce it's run-on nature.
  • "He was not entirely trusted by his crew of thirty fellow lowlifes and criminals, and had stolen his trousers from a Corellian." This information should be in the biography, especially the composition of his crew. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 13:47, July 6, 2020 (UTC)
    • Done. This fixed the objection above as well. OtterSurf (talk) 10:35, July 9, 2020 (UTC)
  • The trousers can be added to Equipment.
  • "He ran with a crew of thirty lowlifes and criminals, none of whom entirely trusted the Nalroni, and had stolen his trousers from a Corellian." This sounds like the crew stole his trousers. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 10:51, July 9, 2020 (UTC)
    • Yeah, I read that back and it read poorly. I moved the trousers to Equipment per the objection above. OtterSurf (talk) 11:09, July 9, 2020 (UTC)
      • The fact that he "stole" something at one point is biographical information. Keep that info there. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 11:13, July 9, 2020 (UTC)
        • Added. The fact that Antig wore the trousers is mentioned in Equipment so it feels less redundant. OtterSurf (talk) 11:36, July 9, 2020 (UTC)
  • I'm certain you can add an image of some kind to the Biography (i.e. the location of the heist). Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 20:08, August 31, 2020 (UTC)
    • Done. OtterSurf (talk) 09:40, September 1, 2020 (UTC)
      • Can you position it lower and increase the size? Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 14:05, September 1, 2020 (UTC)
  • The subsectioning can be implemented better. Currently, each section is only one paragraph long.
  • The New Republic quote in the body can be moved to the section that actually mentions them and Cracken's report.
  • Third paragraph can use a break.
  • "The group of Advosze thieves with whom Antig had collaborated on Fresia was planning a heist on the Roche asteroid field[1] in the Mid Rim,[3] which had allied itself with the ascendant New Republic." Just confirming that I'm reading this correctly, the entire Mid Rim allied itself?
  • Unless I'm mistaken, I think you meant to link New Republic Special Forces instead of Alliance Special Forces/Legends.
  • Is there no article for the Roche heist?
  • Publication date for Journal 11 would be appreciated.
  • Please state in the BTS which source you are following in regards to his fur color. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 06:43, 23 May 2021 (UTC)
    • Fixed, done, added, the lot. OtterSurf (talk) 10:40, 24 May 2021 (UTC)
Zed
  • If he was spotted in the Ethav Regions after the heist, this should be added to the Biography.
  • His starship should be mentioned in the Equipment section.
  • Is the attribution of quotes to Pash Cracken correct? Other articles related to "Wanted by Cracken" (such as Ethav Regions or "Wanted by Cracken" itself) attribute quotes to Airen Cracken. Zed42 (talk) 21:13, May 21, 2020 (UTC)
    • Done, done, corrected. OtterSurf (talk) 09:00, May 22, 2020 (UTC)
  • As per pages such as Ethav Regions, quote attribution should include the in-universe document, and Antig's mention in the datafile should be included on the page. Zed42 (talk) 10:58, May 22, 2020 (UTC)
Spooky
  • I think the year for the Empire's defeat at Endor can be included in the intro, along with context for Endor.
    • Done. OtterSurf (talk) 10:32, May 24, 2020 (UTC)
    • This goes for the context in the intro and the Biography - Endor is a moon; pretty well established. I really don't think 'world' is the best context descriptor for it when we can specify.—spookywillowwtalk 04:04, May 26, 2020 (UTC)
  • Endor, Relarr system, Roche asteroid field, and Corint City need context in the Biography.
  • I think the location of the Kuat Drive Yards should be established.
  • The introduction should state Antig's gender.
    • Done. OtterSurf (talk) 10:32, May 24, 2020 (UTC)
      • The gender should always go after the species.—spookywillowwtalk 04:04, May 26, 2020 (UTC)
        • Flows better the other way round if you ask me, but okay. Done. OtterSurf (talk) 08:08, May 26, 2020 (UTC)
          • It's precedent on every status article that ever was :P —spookywillowwtalk 00:15, June 3, 2020 (UTC)
  • In the first paragraph of the Biography, "32" should be written out as "thirty-two".
  • "...in his adult life, and was known to have worked" Who knew he had worked with?
  • Similar case here, "which were believed to have been lost in a struggle with one of the Advosze he murdered" Who believed/said they were lost in such a struggle?
    • Omitted and fixed respectively. OtterSurf (talk) 10:34, May 24, 2020 (UTC)
  • The P&T seems to have run-on sentences overall. I also think subjective language such as "apparently", from "...apparently stole his trousers", should be removed.—spookywillowwtalk 03:01, May 24, 2020 (UTC)
Anil
  • Preliminaries:
    • Files and templates need to use underscores in place of spaces (eg [[File:Luke_Skywalker.jpg]], not [[File:Luke Skywalker.jpg]]).
    • Multiple poorly-formatted links.
    • The {{Journal}} template should be implemented for issue 11 as well.
    • Aren't those Wanted by Cracken entries sources rather than "appearances"?
    • The italicization and quotations of the real-life "Wanted by Cracken" are inconsistent in the article.
    • Publisher information missing in BTS. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders.svg Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 21:49, June 13, 2020 (UTC)
Toprawa
  • Does the source explicitly call his hair "orange-red"? Because the infobox image is anything but.
  • Why does Endor's astrographical position or status as a moon need to be mentioned here? Does this contain any relevance to the character? If it doesn't, just say "defeat at the Battle of Endor": "After the Galactic Empire's defeat at the Outer Rim moon of Endor"
  • Two consecutive sentences in the intro begin in the exact same way, which is redundant and poor wording. Please mix it up. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 20:28, September 28, 2020 (UTC)
    • Both done. OtterSurf (talk) 09:51, September 29, 2020 (UTC)
      • If you think changing "After" to "Following" is satisfactory, you're sadly missing the point of this objection. Please reword one of those sentences to avoid the redundant syntax. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 03:11, October 7, 2020 (UTC)
Imp
  • Okay, I wanted to review this, but it seems I need to pause right now since it's becoming very obvious to me that you haven't even bothered to include all the details from the source regarding the article's subject. I want you to go through the source again and add every detail concerning Drolen Antig. Imperators II(Talk) 11:43, 8 April 2021 (UTC)
    • There, that should be everything. I'll check over the source again though. Let me know if you think there's anything else missing. OtterSurf (talk) 12:23, 8 April 2021 (UTC)
    • Done. OtterSurf (talk) 13:30, 8 April 2021 (UTC)
      • I see you've added some stuff. Now please once again go through the source and add everything you're missing. Cracken's opinion of Antig, the precise details of the Kuat job (the article currently has at least one factual error), the details of his equipment, the author of the article, everything.
        • Added Cracken's opinion, will recheck the source to see where I went wrong, and I've added everything I can as far as I can see. OtterSurf (talk) 11:12, 15 April 2021 (UTC)
        • Could you be more specific about the factual error? OtterSurf (talk) 13:12, 15 April 2021 (UTC)
          • The article currently says the Advozse thieves were killed after Antig's ship landed, which is flat out wrong. Imperators II(Talk) 13:34, 15 April 2021 (UTC)
  • Some of the info regarding Antig's equipment can't be sourced to the Journal 10 article.
    • I don't understand this one. Why not? OtterSurf (talk) 11:12, 15 April 2021 (UTC)
  • Please add the location of the Ethav Regions.
  • I'm not seeing any reason not to treat the illustrator's depiction of Antig as canonical with respect to his fur color. Since the contradictory information comes from an in-universe source, that should be noted as an IU error. Imperators II(Talk) 11:41, 14 April 2021 (UTC)
  • Per Star Wars Adventure Journal 1, the Wanted by Cracken entries published in the Journal are updates to the original Wanted by Cracken document, which was published three years after Endor, per Wanted by Cracken. Imperators II(Talk) 09:53, 15 April 2021 (UTC)
    • Nope, I'm having trouble with that one. Where is that stated? OtterSurf (talk) 12:05, 15 April 2021 (UTC)
      • Every entry of the Wanted by Cracken series is from the document of the same name (stated at the top of every page), and in the very first sentence of the Journal 1 section talks about it being an update to the list of criminals that that document is. Imperators II(Talk) 12:24, 15 April 2021 (UTC)
        • Done. OtterSurf (talk) 12:59, 15 April 2021 (UTC)
          • There's no indication, however, that the updates are also set three years after Endor. They could have been published later. Imperators II(Talk) 09:40, 21 April 2021 (UTC)
            • Okay, so? OtterSurf (talk) 09:50, 21 April 2021 (UTC)
              • So the article currently assumes the updates were necessarily published in 7 ABY with respect to Antig's birth date. Imperators II(Talk) 10:01, 21 April 2021 (UTC)
                • Yeah, I thought that was reaching a bit. Removed. OtterSurf (talk) 10:12, 21 April 2021 (UTC)
                  • The 7 ABY date in the Biography should also be tweaked accordingly. Imperators II(Talk) 10:20, 21 April 2021 (UTC),
                    • Done. Given that, like you said, we have no concrete evidence of the date, I've taken it out. OtterSurf (talk) 10:38, 21 April 2021 (UTC)
  • Please subsection the Biography. Imperators II(Talk) 08:44, 21 April 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Maelstrom-class battle cruiser

  • Nominated by: --Vitus InfinitusTalk 23:47, 28 February 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Really wish there was no space in battle cruiser.

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Support

  1. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 14:01, 19 May 2021 (UTC)
  2. Long as it is, good work. :P JediMasterMacaroniAdmiral Ackbar RH.png(Talk) 03:36, 14 June 2021 (UTC)

Object

Shayanomer
  • Please split up the opening sentence of the intro.
  • I am unable to see why Ref 2 needs to mention the Venator at all.
    • It's to ascertain a length for the Maelstrom. The Venator and the Acclamator are the only capital ships of the Republic that we know the size for, and the Venator is larger. Since they were both active in the onset of the war, and the Maelstrom was introduced at that time and said to be the biggest, my goal with the ref note was to explain that it would be larger than the length of the Venator.
      • All I'm able to gather from this note is: "Venator exists, so Maelstrom must be bigger than Venator." Why the Venator specifically? The ref note does a very poor job of answering that question. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 20:32, 1 March 2021 (UTC)
        • I reworded the ref. --Vitus InfinitusTalk 22:14, 1 March 2021 (UTC)
          • Unfortunately, I still don't see what the purpose is of introducing the Venator there. The question above is not satisfied. I would suggest removing this note entirely. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 06:53, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
            • I respectfully disagree, the reference note provides the length of the Maelstrom. Essentially, the Venator and the Maelstrom served at the same time and the Maelstrom was said to be the larger ship, then the Maelstrom must be larger than the Venator's length. Is there a way to reword the ref note to satisfy the objection? The information is perfectly relevant. --Vitus InfinitusTalk 07:01, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
              • I'll discuss with the ACs to see what can be done. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 07:13, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
                • Thank you, I really appreciate it! --Vitus InfinitusTalk 07:17, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
                  • After discussing with Tommy on IRC, we agreed that the note should state that both of them were capital ships in the Navy, so that a direct relation is established between the two ships. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 09:15, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
                    • Done. --Vitus InfinitusTalk 05:34, 3 March 2021 (UTC)
                      • The way the note is written currently implies that the Maelstrom being longer comes from Complete Vehicles. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 05:52, 3 March 2021 (UTC)
    • Rewrote the ref note. --Vitus InfinitusTalk 20:59, 4 March 2021 (UTC)
  • Erroneous grammar: "The Maelstroms were designed as much to inspire awe in allies as they were fear in enemies."
  • Considered by whom? "The cruisers were considered to be massive and imposing..."
    • Source doesn't specify. --Vitus InfinitusTalk 19:25, 1 March 2021 (UTC)
      • Then reword it. It's speculative wording unless it's explicitly made clear in the source. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 20:32, 1 March 2021 (UTC)
        • The source uses those words, I meant that the source doesn't specify who said so. --Vitus InfinitusTalk 22:14, 1 March 2021 (UTC)
  • You don't need to italicize "Maelstrom" on its own, this convention only applies to the ship class (Maelstrom-class).
  • I'm seeing partially linked proper compound nouns in the article, going against the Manual of Style. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 16:02, 1 March 2021 (UTC)
    • Okay, I think I got them all, but I'll continue reviewing to see if I missed any. --Vitus InfinitusTalk 19:25, 1 March 2021 (UTC)
      • Nope, you didn't get any of them. Please consult the Manual of Style to find what you need to remove. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 20:32, 1 March 2021 (UTC)
  • Please break up the Armament paragraph. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 20:32, 1 March 2021 (UTC)
  • Please avoid using words like "impressive," "staggering," and "innovative," this falls under NPOV.
    • These words are also from the source. --Vitus InfinitusTalk 00:10, 14 March 2021 (UTC)
      • We wouldn't write "The Republic are the good guys" just because a source says so, that's the purpose of the policy. In this example, the design may be impressive and innovative to the Republic but not to the Separatists. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 06:33, 14 March 2021 (UTC)
        • Fixed wording. --Vitus InfinitusTalk 18:53, 14 March 2021 (UTC)
          • Does the source use this wording?: "...considered to be the most impressive..." Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 09:06, 23 March 2021 (UTC)
            • Not specifically, simply the "most impressive" part. I understand NPOV, however, in this case I believe the wording is appropriate as it presents a critical understanding of the design of the vessel. If you'd like for me to remove it, however, I can go ahead and do so. --Vitus InfinitusTalk 13:57, 26 March 2021 (UTC)
              • It's subjective, so I would appreciate some rewording. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 15:22, 28 March 2021 (UTC)
                • Lead by Example does use the wording "Maelstroms were the largest, and arguably most impressive, vessels in the Republic Navy". So what would you like done? CIS roundel.svg Erebus Chronus (talk) 15:28, 28 March 2021 (UTC)
                  • Except for "impressive," the examples I pointed out above and any more you find in the article. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 16:09, 28 March 2021 (UTC)
  • "Deflector shield generator" in infobox-exclusive. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 08:37, 13 March 2021 (UTC)
  • There appears to be a 1st and 1stID on the Legends article that are not detailed in the BTS here. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 12:37, 30 April 2021 (UTC)
Erebus
  • Don't know if this is what Shayanomer was implying above, but is it necessary to state that the Venator was a ship of the Republic Navy in ref 2? Doesn't seem relevant to the Maelstrom. CIS roundel.svg Erebus Chronus (talk) 20:36, 1 March 2021 (UTC)
    • I tried clearing up the reference note. What I essentially want to say is that since the Maelstrom served at X time, and was the largest Republic ship at that time, then it must be larger than 1,137 meters since the Venator also served at X time. The Venator is the largest Republic ship we have a length for. --Vitus InfinitusTalk 22:23, 1 March 2021 (UTC)
      • The ref note looks better in my opinion, however, that sentence looks like you're saying, "Oh, by the way, the Venator is here, too." If you can't reword it, then I'd recommend removing it because it's not relevant to the topic. CIS roundel.svg Erebus Chronus (talk) 22:31, 1 March 2021 (UTC)
  • Welcome back, kept it warm for you. Anyway, I think you could add a date for the Clone Wars' onset. CIS roundel.svg Erebus Chronus (talk) 00:31, 3 April 2021 (UTC)
CC-8
Why is this article so long
  • "and had consumables for two years" -- wouldn't it be better to say they lasted for two years? Right now it could be read that after two years, the cruisers were no longer given consumables.
  • Galactic Atlas explicitly states the two dates you're sourcing it to, so I see no need for a written note.
  • The first sentence of the BTS implies that LBA was its first appearance anywhere, and not specifically in the new canon.
  • (Reviewing note) Short stories get quotes and not italics. JediMasterMacaroniAdmiral Ackbar RH.png(Talk) 02:04, 14 June 2021 (UTC)

Comments

  • I am taking a temporary personal leave from the site for the sake of my personal health and happiness, and I expect to return anywhere from one week to several weeks. --Vitus InfinitusTalk 14:41, 28 March 2021 (UTC)
  • Just a heads up, I'll be handling any further objections for this nomination. CIS roundel.svg Erebus Chronus (talk) 15:12, 28 March 2021 (UTC)
  • I want to start of with a huge thanks to Erebus who took care of things during my absence. I have returned and ready for more objections :P --Vitus InfinitusTalk 21:51, 2 April 2021 (UTC)


Infantry Support Platform

  • Nominated by: CanePlayz (talk) 14:11, 9 March 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: I was too busy to handle the objections on the last nomination (here) in time, so here we go again. Everything left open from the last nomination has been addressed.

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Support

  1. Great job putting your effort in that infobox image and addressing objections on Discord, here, and the previous GAN page. Keep it up! OOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 07:41, 30 April 2021 (UTC)
  2. Looks great to me! EthSch13 (talk) 17:36, 26 May 2021 (UTC)
  3. ACvote.png Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 19:52, 30 May 2021 (UTC)
  4. ACvote.png See my copy-edit for some grammatical fixes. Nice work! Love seeing prequel film topics on the GAN. MasterFredCommerce Guild.svg(talk) 22:50, 1 June 2021 (UTC)

Object

OOM
  • Good work handling the objections from last time. Note that the context for the Clone Wars is currently exclusive to the article introduction. Like the infobox, everything in the introduction should also be mentioned in the article body. OOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 14:21, 9 March 2021 (UTC)
    • Information is in the article body as well now. I didn't put the participating parties in there because they are already mentioned in that exact same sentence and still having them in the conext would have made it sound confusing and weird. CanePlayz (talk) 14:28, 9 March 2021 (UTC)
  • (Reviewing note: see here) Per WP:MOS, Wookieepedia uses Oxford commas, which means a comma should be added before "and" when listing more than two things.
    • Yeah, I was made aware of that with my Purrgil nomination just some days ago, thanks for letting me know. CanePlayz (talk) 01:53, 21 March 2021 (UTC)
  • Context (and link) needed for clones in the history section. I think a pipelink to clone trooper would be the most appropiate here.
  • Mentioning the Mid Rim is uneccessary and probably cannot be sourced to Episode III.
    • Mentioning it was one of the objections on the old nomination, so we might have to talk a bit more about that. CanePlayz (talk) 01:53, 21 March 2021 (UTC)
      • Removed it now, your explanation on Discord makes sense. CanePlayz (talk) 14:01, 21 March 2021 (UTC)
  • The article is quite lacking in links. I've already added three links in the Role section, but you should check the article to see if there's any more subjects to be linked to, such as planet, Wookiee, and droid.
    • I've looked through it again and found 4 new things I've linked to. CanePlayz (talk) 14:01, 21 March 2021 (UTC)
  • "They were present on the Outer Rim planet of Felucia when Order 66, an order identifying all Jedi as traitors to the Galactic Republic, was issued by Supreme Chancellor Sheev Palpatine." I don't think this is necessary. The previous sentence already covers the Battle of Felucia, which includes the execution of Order 66.
    • Now that I think about it, I think I can agree with you on that, removed that sentence. CanePlayz (talk) 01:53, 21 March 2021 (UTC)
  • The full name of a subject should be used in the first line of the BTS section.
  • The last sentence in the BTS could use some links to Wikipedia. OOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 08:03, 12 March 2021 (UTC)
  • "considered a lighter variant of the ISP" Does the source specify considered by whom?
    • The source says "A lighter variant of this model was the [...] BARC." So yeah, it's not really considered that way by anyone in-universe but rather n general and I think it would make sense to change the wording here and get away from the "considered", right? CanePlayz (talk) 21:24, 11 April 2021 (UTC)
  • The second paragraph of Characteristics should be split into two for readability.
  • "The unique turbofan could be reversed to provide a sudden stop and produced less noise than most ion thrusters"
    • Is unique really needed here? If so, it should be mentioned alongside the first instance of turbofan in the article.
      • The source explicitly has a heading calling it "Unique Turbofan," so I think it should be included and added it to the other instances of the turbofan in the server. CanePlayz (talk) 21:24, 11 April 2021 (UTC)
    • Is the turbofan an ion thruster? If so, the article should make that connection explicitly.
      • In the sources, that connection is never clearly made. CanePlayz (talk) 21:24, 11 April 2021 (UTC)
    • Also, is the sentence here saying that the noise produced from making a sudden stop is less than that of most ion thrusters?
      • Nope, the general noise. CanePlayz (talk) 21:24, 11 April 2021 (UTC)
  • Regarding "The speeders were especially strong in the fight against the," would "The speeders were especially strong when fighting against the" be more appropiate and accurate to the source here?
    • Not too sure, the source says "The front-mounted pair of twin blaster cannons are ltheal to enemy infantry, but can also prove highly effective against shielded enemy gunships, and Corporate Alliance Nr-N99 tank droids". CanePlayz (talk) 21:24, 11 April 2021 (UTC)
      • It would be more appropiate and accurate in this instance. The use of the word "the" before "fight" suggests that there was a specific fight when what you're wanting to say here is that the speeders do well against those droid tanks in general. OOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 21:44, 11 April 2021 (UTC)
        • I see, that makes sense. CanePlayz (talk) 14:41, 20 April 2021 (UTC)
  • A little bit of context for the NR-N99 Persuader-class droid enforcer would be nice. Was it a space station? A ship? (I know it's neither but it gets the point across :P) OOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 06:59, 3 April 2021 (UTC)
    • Yes, I get the point. :P Added. CanePlayz (talk) 21:24, 11 April 2021 (UTC)
  • We're almost there! "The ISP also had a forward-terrain laser scanner on both sides as well as two big mudshields on the front." This sentence is unsourced, and I want to confirm with you whether the source actually uses the word "big" (or an equivalent descriptor) in describing the mudshields.
    • Ah I see, that one became unsourced because I split the paragraphs. I've added a reference again. Turns out the source actually does not use the word "big" or anything similar when describing the mudshields, so I removed it from the article as well. CanePlayz (talk) 23:37, 29 April 2021 (UTC)
  • Since the BTS mentions publications released in different months of the same year, i.e. 2005's Episode III and Insider 83, you should specify the month Episode III was released in. OOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 17:56, 20 April 2021 (UTC)
Shayanomer
  • Can you specify that ISP is an abbreviation instead of placing it within parentheses? There seems to be no precedent for this.
  • Please add the full publication date for Insider, per Layout Guide. This also means a full release date for ROTS is also needed.
    • Added. CanePlayz (talk) 16:26, 22 May 2021 (UTC)
      • The dates are not sourced properly now. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 07:24, 23 May 2021 (UTC)
        • Whoops, done now. CanePlayz (talk) 17:25, 26 May 2021 (UTC)
          • And the film. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 17:28, 26 May 2021 (UTC)
            • I don't think it's neccessary to have the full date here, but to keep it consistent I added it. CanePlayz (talk) 18:31, 26 May 2021 (UTC)
  • Please investigate the ROTS novelization for a mention. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 11:10, 16 May 2021 (UTC)
    • I've already done that, there is no mention of it. CanePlayz (talk) 16:26, 22 May 2021 (UTC)
  • Please also include any filming information in the BTS. When were the Kashyyyk and Felucia scenes filmed? Is there anything on the ISP itself? (For starters, you'll want to investigate this). Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 18:20, 16 May 2021 (UTC)
    • Added everything I found. CanePlayz (talk) 20:07, 26 May 2021 (UTC)
Imp
  • I'm not seeing any benefit here in referencing the info in infobox and body to different sources; please introduce some consistency.
    • Sure, should be good now. CanePlayz (talk) 13:58, 12 June 2021 (UTC)
      • The length and the affiliation are still sourced to different media. Imperators II(Talk) 17:06, 13 June 2021 (UTC)
  • Since capacitors also store (electrical) energy in real life, I don't see the need to have that subclause here, especially since it comes with its own separate ref.
  • It is my understanding that a speeder is a specific type of repulsorcraft. If so, the infobox should specify "speeder" instead of the more generic "repulsorcraft" and the body should not use "repulsorcraft speeder" as that's redundant. Imperators II(Talk) 19:53, 2 June 2021 (UTC)
    • Ok, I've changed that to landspeeder since that is what the ISP is specified as in Complete Vehicles. CanePlayz (talk) 13:58, 12 June 2021 (UTC)
  • You should note that the BARC was a speeder bike (very different-looking than the ISP, btw). Imperators II(Talk) 20:07, 2 June 2021 (UTC)
  • I'm also not seeing any justification for the article's text consistently using the term "ISP speeder" to refer to the vehicle. That's not one of the alternate names listed in the article. Imperators II(Talk) 20:24, 2 June 2021 (UTC)
    • Makes sense, I've changed those mentions. CanePlayz (talk) 13:58, 12 June 2021 (UTC)
  • Please change the source for the ROTS date to a more solid Star Wars source. Here's one, for example. Or you can use a reference book, such as The Star Wars Archives: Episodes I–III, 1999–2005. Imperators II(Talk) 20:32, 2 June 2021 (UTC)
    • Sure, thanks for providing an example. CanePlayz (talk) 13:58, 12 June 2021 (UTC)

Comments

As mentioned on the old nomination: I might be able to get an image for the characteristics section, but that is a different and complicated affair that has to be solved first. CanePlayz (talk) 14:11, 9 March 2021 (UTC)


Haash'n

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Support

  1. Reviewing this made me discover that Dressellians were part of the Home One briefing. OOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 14:48, 19 March 2021 (UTC)
  2. Liverpool92Ackbar HS.jpg 21:08, 31 May 2021 (UTC)
  3. ACvote.png Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 09:57, 5 June 2021 (UTC)

Object

OOM
  • Major is intro-exclusive.
  • In reply to your reply on the CAN page, that is not the order in which the Alliance leaders spoke.
    • Feel free to call me an idiot on that one :P.
      • This objection and the one about Humans below just goes to show how obsessed with Mon Calamari you are :P
  • I don't see how the context for Home One being Ackbar's flagship is necessary.
  • You should also mention that Humans, not just Mon Calamari, stood behind the Alliance leaders. OOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 23:18, 15 March 2021 (UTC)
  • Linking: Galactic Emperor/Legends should be used instead of Emperor/Legends, and missing links for Admiral Ackbar.
  • Flagship, Alliance Fleet are infobox/intro-exclusive, and Alliance High Command/Legends link is intro-exclusive.
  • You should replace the infobox image with a higher quality one by cropping the image in the article body. OOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 23:39, 15 March 2021 (UTC)
    • Fixed links, the Ackbar one was left from when I removed the bit about it being his flagship. If the image is still not to your liking, let me know so I can ask someone else to help me with it. JediMasterMacaroniAdmiral Ackbar RH.png(Talk) 02:47, 16 March 2021 (UTC)
  • CSWE only says Haash'n's homeworld was subjugated. I think saying that Dac was his homeworld is a reasonable assumption, but the name "Dac" need another reference note. Also, one's homeworld is not necessarily one's place of birth.
    • Updated the refs.
      • The ref note doesn't say that Dac was a planet, or that Haash'n was born on his homeworld, yet it's used to cite "Haash'n was born on the […] planet Dac." As I said earlier, one's homeworld is not necessarily one's place of birth. OOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 07:56, 17 March 2021 (UTC)
        • Fixed.
  • The card doesn't say that Haash'n was part of the Alliance Fleet.
    • I think that it's reasonable to assume that seeing as it says he piloted Star Cruisers, he was affiliated with the fleet of those cruisers. I also think it's reasonable to assume that the Star Cruisers it discusses are of the Rebel fleet. JediMasterMacaroniAdmiral Ackbar RH.png(Talk) 03:57, 17 March 2021 (UTC)
  • You could probably shorten the article body by ten, twenty words, which would bring the body's word count below 165. This means the introduction should be removed, and the behind the scenes would not be counted as part of the word count. OOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 07:54, 16 March 2021 (UTC)
Hanzo
  • I feel like his dream of piloting starships & goal of piloting Star Cruisers should just be in personality and traits. As is, you pretty much repeated the dream in both biography & personality and traits section. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 01:26, 20 March 2021 (UTC)
    • Fixed. Also, I can't promise an AC won't want me to move the species and gender info back. JediMasterMacaroniAdmiral Ackbar RH.png(Talk) 01:29, 20 March 2021 (UTC)
  • Please specify in the intro that he was on Home One during the Endor battle. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 15:51, 21 March 2021 (UTC)
Shayanomer
  • Can you specify that Haash'n served the Alliance as a major instead of introducing his rank with no context in the body?
    • Done.
  • Isn't an individual holding the rank of major an officer to begin with? If so, it's redundant to say he served as an officer after introducing his rank.
  • Reviewing note: Species comes before gender.
  • Reviewing note: Please spell out the full name of a character instead of just the last name on the first linking instance. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 15:51, 21 March 2021 (UTC)
  • WhatLinksHere shows me a source not listed here, The Rebel Alliance Scrapbook. You also need to investigate all sources that depict Home One's interior for any pictures of the character. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 16:59, 21 March 2021 (UTC)
    • Added, and found one more {{Po}}. I've checked the sources list of several status articles on the Home One in VI, and the only other thing that I need to check is Behind the Magic. JediMasterMacaroniAdmiral Ackbar RH.png(Talk) 17:58, 21 March 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Watcher Izax

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Support

  1. OOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 11:05, 11 April 2021 (UTC)
  2. Nothing from me, good work. JediMasterMacaroniAdmiral Ackbar RH.png(Talk) 17:55, 30 May 2021 (UTC)
  3. ACvote.png Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 10:04, 5 June 2021 (UTC)

Object

Fan
  • There's room enough in the body for a related image, perhaps of Cap'n Frem or a generic pic of the Knights. Fan26 (Talk) 02:16, 30 March 2021 (UTC)
  • Vaylin's festival should be dated. Fan26 (Talk) 13:27, 3 May 2021 (UTC)
    • I thought the first date ref implied the date of the festival but I've added another date ref to make it more clear. Cumulonimbus Cloud (Talk) 18:33, 3 May 2021 (UTC)
      • Oof, sorry for taking over a month to strike this. Fan26 (Talk) 17:16, 8 June 2021 (UTC)
Shayanomer
OOM
  • I've got to say I'm very pleased to see a nom with the Eternal Empire infobox and with information from ambient conversation. Regarding the latter, however, you should be using the TORcite format here.
  • "Many years prior to 3630 BBY" is not supported by the ref note since the ref doesn't use the word "many."
  • "He got his code name from the god Izax" this cannot sourced to the Codex entry for the Zakuulan gods, and I'm thinking that this might be speculation. It would be better if you can word it to the effect of: "He shared his codename with the god Izax"
  • "on the planet Zakuul" could use some context here to point out to readers unfamiliar with TOR that Zakuul was the capital of the Eternal Empire. OOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 07:28, 11 April 2021 (UTC)
    • We were really lacking in the KOTFE+ department so I decided to do something about it :). I've added the changes as well. Cumulonimbus Cloud (Talk) 08:50, 11 April 2021 (UTC)
  • "sleeper agent" is intro-exclusive OOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 09:19, 11 April 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Unidentified Zeltron

  • Nominated by: Liverpool92Ackbar HS.jpg 19:57, 12 April 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Was CAN became to big so now it's a GAN.

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Shayanomer
  • The body has just enough space for an image. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 12:51, 14 June 2021 (UTC)

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Onoam

  • Nominated by: Minnabird (talk) 05:02, 14 April 2021 (UTC)
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Erebus
  • Welcome to the GAN! First off, there are a few things I noticed missing from the article. Said on the Discord I would put them here as well:
    • Date note for 22 BBY in the first History paragraph
    • Reference notes for the ends of 3 paragraphs in the Vein of corruption subsection
    • "Considered severe enough" — considered by whom?
    • Since there is more than one source it is mentioned or appears in, the BTS should say "Onoam first appears [...]" Erebus Chronus (Talk) 05:22, 14 April 2021 (UTC)
    • Forgot to add these two: the moon's grid coordinates as well as its location in the system and sector are not documented in the body anywhere and only the infobox. Erebus Chronus (Talk) 05:26, 14 April 2021 (UTC)
      • This also exclusive to the intro.
        • There should now be references for these in the description section Minnabird (talk) 14:59, 14 April 2021 (UTC)
          • It's in the description, but not the intro. Erebus Chronus (Talk) 15:17, 14 April 2021 (UTC)
            • I took cues from a confirmed GA featuring a moon with known grid coordinates, Leesis, in rewording the intro. Can you let me know if that satisfies, or if I should incorporate the exact grid coordinates there, too? Minnabird (talk) 00:37, 16 April 2021 (UTC)
              • Just realized we took this conversation briefly to Discord, but I didn't document the change I made in response here. Brought intro in line with what we discussed on 4/15/21 (at least, in the Eastern time zone; presumably after the above addition). Minnabird (talk) 03:47, 22 April 2021 (UTC)
  • "Onoam's relationship with Naboo had long been strained" — Any reason as to how, and is "long" from you or the source?
    • "Long" is all my source gives me. I'll add detail about the source of the strain (Naboo rule vs mining quotas). Minnabird (talk) 14:59, 14 April 2021 (UTC)
      • Did some restructuring. Would welcome feedback on whether it's clearer. Minnabird (talk) 00:37, 16 April 2021 (UTC)
        • Just wondering, is the second sentence in the CW-era a continuation of the first sentence? Because if so, I wonder if you could merge them together to create one sentence, since the second seems like a run-on. Erebus Chronus (Talk) 01:15, 16 April 2021 (UTC)
          • "Onoam had a long history of tension with Naboo,[3] and the mining moons of Naboo found their loyalties torn between the rule of Naboo and their need to meet production quotas."? I'm trying to both transition between two sources and rephrase a sentence that packs a lot of ideas into it—that there's an unsteady equilibrium between economic drivers and Naboo's standards; that these are specifically opposed loyalties. (Original sentence from QS: "Unlike the mining moons, which struggled to maintain the balance between the rule of Naboo and their allegiance to filling their quotas, Karlinus was a place where prosperity began.") Minnabird (talk) 01:35, 16 April 2021 (UTC)
  • In veins of corruption, you should state at the beginning of the first paragraph that this was during the Empire's reign. Erebus Chronus (Talk) 14:51, 14 April 2021 (UTC)
  • In History, there's no context as to who Leia is.
  • (Reviewing note) Please be careful of underlinking. Erebus Chronus (Talk) 16:26, 14 April 2021 (UTC)
    • Definitely a big blind spot for me. I've linked everything I can think of - and revisited the rules and realized I needed to be linking for the first mention in intro AND body - but later paragraphs are looking a little sparse. Minnabird (talk) 00:38, 16 April 2021 (UTC)
Vergence
  • It's been a while since I've read the source, but I believe that instead of linking to mine in the intro you should link to Onoam mine.
  • The Onoam spaceport should be mentioned in the body.
    • Done (in description). Minnabird (talk) 05:05, 16 April 2021 (UTC)
  • I would rewrite the sentence "Many wealthy citizens of Naboo had second homes on Onoam, including the sector governor Quarsh Panaka's chalet and a home owned by Queen Dalné." Currently the first clause focuses on the citizens, while the second focuses on the houses themselves. VergenceScatter (talk) 04:19, 16 April 2021 (UTC)
    • Let me know how that looks? Minnabird (talk) 05:05, 16 April 2021 (UTC)
Shayanomer
  • Something weird is going on here: "Its grassy plains housed second homes for wealthy citizens of Naboo, while underground, miners extracted medicinal spice."
    • Whoops, these got lost in my e-mail. Addressed this with some wording changes; let me know if it reads more smoothly? Minnabird (talk) 03:43, 22 April 2021 (UTC)
  • Something weird is also going on with Ref 9. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 15:30, 17 April 2021 (UTC)
    • Also changed up the wording on this. Minnabird (talk) 03:43, 22 April 2021 (UTC)
  • The first visual depiction now needs to be detailed in the BTS. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 07:32, 8 May 2021 (UTC)
  • Intro says the Trailing Sectors was part of the Mid Rim, while the body says the Mid Rim was located there. Additionally, we don't really need two separate references for that information.
    • Cleaned up the sentence in the body, removed the RotS reference. Minnabird (talk) 13:58, 21 May 2021 (UTC)
  • No images suitable for the History?
    • Soon. The chapter of the webcomic with helpful images just released, waiting to hear back about potential screenshots. Minnabird (talk) 13:58, 21 May 2021 (UTC)
      • And they're up! Both sections of the history and the description now have images. Minnabird (talk) 23:55, 21 May 2021 (UTC)
  • You should establish that the Queen's palace was her secondary palace on its first mention in the body.
  • The Onoam mine should be introduced in the Description.
    • Also done; I changed the mine reference to link there, if that works? I couldn't find a good way to say "It had mines, including (unnamed mine distinguished only because Leia visited it, now I have to explain who Leia is here, too)." Minnabird (talk) 13:58, 21 May 2021 (UTC)
  • "..some officers took it too far.." Informal tone.
  • Context for Saw Gerrera. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 07:14, 21 May 2021 (UTC)
    • Done. Minnabird (talk) 13:58, 21 May 2021 (UTC)
      • You should establish that the bombs were planted first and introduce the Partisans there. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 14:20, 21 May 2021 (UTC)
        • Okay, I rearranged that a little bit. Minnabird (talk) 14:31, 21 May 2021 (UTC)
  • I would move note in ref 8 to cover "around that time" in History, while sourcing the rest of that sentence to whatever source has that information. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 12:54, 22 May 2021 (UTC)
    • Both the timing and the fact of the political violence are from LPOA; I added a note in the citation because "around that time" is an inference I made based on Leia saying it happened in the previous generation. Minnabird (talk) 13:01, 22 May 2021 (UTC)
      • Then "Around that time[8], etc etc<ref to LPOA>". That note exists to explain the timeframe, so that's an appropriate place for it. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 13:14, 22 May 2021 (UTC)
        • Just wanted to check that it was okay to reference LPOA two different places in that sentence! Changed the references as suggested. Minnabird (talk) 13:21, 22 May 2021 (UTC)
Fred strikes back
  • We have four named moons of Naboo, so should we not consider the "three moons" from Alliances to be a mistake? MasterFredCommerce Guild.svg(talk) 21:50, 4 June 2021 (UTC)
    • Removed the number and the Alliances reference per our Discord conversation; since canon is contradictory, might as well not open the can of worms that is "how many moons of Naboo are there and what are they called?" —Minnabird Naboo.svg (talk) 22:28, 4 June 2021 (UTC)
Zed
  • I believe it would be appropriate to implement Inhabitants and Locations sections, as per the Layout Guide, as most of that information is currently in the Description section, which should really just be about the characteristics of the moon itself.
    • I added the sections! I believe I leaned a little too heavily on looking at some GA moons for examples, which didn't have that kind of information. Looks much cleaner, thanks. —Minnabird Naboo.svg (talk) 04:30, 8 June 2021 (UTC)
      • Looks good. Are you able to get any quotes for those two sections? Zed42 (talk) 11:15, 9 June 2021 (UTC)
  • You can include "Terrestrial" under the class field of the infobox and place the page in the Terrestrial moons category. Zed42 (talk) 01:26, 6 June 2021 (UTC)
    • Added. Sourced to LPOA, since we know from that it has grassy plains. —Minnabird Naboo.svg (talk) 04:30, 8 June 2021 (UTC)
  • Given the length of the body, I think the intro can be expanded a bit. Zed42 (talk) 11:15, 9 June 2021 (UTC)
    • I added more. Please let me know if it needs to be expanded even further. Thanks! —Minnabird Naboo.svg (talk) 22:54, 11 June 2021 (UTC)

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Chewbacca's camp

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Macaroni
  • I don't see a need to mention that the only mention of the camp's name occurred in the Prima guide.
    • Removed.
  • You're in the settlements category, yet you never mention that the camp is a settlement/city or anything like that.
    • I've moved it to Colonies, which is subcategory of settlements.
  • Reviewing note: please remember to use the Oxford comma. JediMasterMacaroniAdmiral Ackbar RH.png(Talk) 21:23, 20 April 2021 (UTC)

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Unidentified chorus girl

  • Nominated by: DwartiiDelver (talk) 02:11, 21 April 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Star Wars needs more musical numbers

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CC-8
  • I've rewatched the scene and I'm sure you can elaborate on the dance sequence and moves performed by the dancer a lot more. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 11:39, 22 April 2021 (UTC)
  • I know I just voted support but I happened to have the episode on and I think our girl might be in the scene where Kenobi and Vos speak to the Hutts, standing to the left, but it might not be a sure thing given the lighting. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 12:08, 23 April 2021 (UTC)
    • I noticed that as well, however as they're leaving there are two Twi'leks dancing in the background with her same skin and headdress feather colors, so I'm not sure we can say she was present there for certain. DwartiiDelver (talk) 17:38, 23 April 2021 (UTC)
Shayanomer
  • Biography has space for another image. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 09:04, 15 June 2021 (UTC)

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  • It would be great to have audio for the quotes. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 09:04, 15 June 2021 (UTC)


Ramakak

  • Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:40, 22 April 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: More Adventures goons. We need more Talz characters.

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CC-8
  • You have head pipelinked to databank in the bio but not in the intro
  • The P&T could have a line about his loyalty to Zendiat and the fact that he took orders from him. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 11:22, 14 May 2021 (UTC)
    • Added something, does that work? Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:14, 14 May 2021 (UTC)

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Gorph/Legends

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CC-8
  • Everything that is linked in the intro needs to be restated and linked in the body
  • Duplicate linking of 3 ABY, though the practice I've seen recently is to pipelink the letters ABY on their second mention with Galactic Standard Calendar
  • Tongue colour and the fact that they had teeth could be added
    • Done. AmazinglyCool CIS roundel.svg (talk) 17:18, 23 April 2021 (UTC)
      • Good, just remember when you're adding a new element in you may need to keep track of your links to make sure they're done at the earliest reference, which happened with Color/Legends in this case. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 08:08, 24 April 2021 (UTC)
  • Can any assumptions about their height in comparison to Ewoks be added?
  • Clothing and weaponry could go in society and culture section.
    • Done. AmazinglyCool CIS roundel.svg (talk) 17:22, 23 April 2021 (UTC)
      • From Slugga's article she appears to have unique clothing indicating her status, which I think is relevant. Are there any other Gorph's that wear different things than the standard gear? Commander Code-8 Hello There! 08:08, 24 April 2021 (UTC)
      • Done. AmazinglyCool CIS roundel.svg (talk) 03:22, 25 April 2021 (UTC)
  • I'm sure there'll be some applicable quotes. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 16:31, 23 April 2021 (UTC)
    • Found and added some. AmazinglyCool CIS roundel.svg (talk) 11:05, 25 April 2021 (UTC)
      • I think the History quote could be moved to the top of the article and be replaced with something else. You can be loose with them, just be clear about their relevance in the attribution. Also per the opening quote section of our Layout guide links should not be used within quotes unless they cannot be used in the body. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 16:43, 25 April 2021 (UTC)
      • Done. AmazinglyCool CIS roundel.svg (talk) 18:16, 28 April 2021 (UTC)
  • Skin colour is infobox exclusive.
  • The first sentence in Society and culture can't all be sourced to the timeline reference. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 08:08, 24 April 2021 (UTC)
  • Gorphs' grotto is a conjectural title, so that should be pipelinked with the word grotto and rewritten to avoid presenting it as the official name. Same goes for the other tribe princesses.
  • Should include the author of Supernatural Encounters
  • In regards to the hopping there's a prominent sound effect there, I think that can be mentioned but I am having trouble thinking of a word to describe it.
  • This page is in Category:Aquatic sentient species but there's no portrayal of the Gorphs interacting with water.
  • The Encyclopedia uses frog-like to describe them, so that could be mentioned in the description
  • The dark green dots on their chins and their large chins themselves should be noted in the description.
  • A lot of your sentences in the first two sections are too short and disrupt the flow of the article, mainly ones that start with "they." Please go through and try combining some, you could look at other status species articles for guidance.
  • Should have at least another sentence in the intro. I also don't think you need to use any of the paragraph breaks you currently have given their length. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 16:43, 25 April 2021 (UTC)
  • I think another image could go in the body, from the clip I looked up there's a shot with a lot of Gorphs in the hall that I think would be appropriate.
  • In the Bts, who were the Gorphs defending Endor from? Commander Code-8 Hello There! 04:47, 29 April 2021 (UTC)
  • Since "known for their long tongues" comes from the encyclopedia it should be in the description as well. I think you should remove it from the intro and use that sentence to summarize the features they actually have.
  • The definition of grotto is that it's a type of cave, so calling it cave-like is redundant. I think it was underground in the episode so you could use that as an adjective.
  • I think that sentence about Slugga being queen in the society section only needs to be said in history.
  • The part about spears should say that it was the gorphs outside of the family who wielded them, unless either Slugga or Vork are portrayed with them too.
  • Should specify that it was two Gorphs that found Latara
  • Needs a more context about the Ewoks encounter with the gorphs, such as Latara having been faking her royal status and that the other characters were her friends.
  • Reviewing note: Be careful when inserting new references into paragraphs so that only the relevant information is sourced, I've taken care of the one in the description.
  • Some earlier objections that are unadressed and getting hard to see now:
  • I've just watched the episode again and you can be a lot more specific about it. I'd mention that the queen wanted to unite the tribes so she could rule them, and add at least a couple of sentences detailing the Ewoks escape. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 23:43, 8 May 2021 (UTC)
  • Per the Wookieepedia:Manual of Style#Ranks and Titles, titles such as "Queen" should only be capitalized when they immediately precede a characters name.
  • Should mentioned that their suits had gloves
  • When you first mention Kneesaa you should establish she was the real princess, to give context to Wicket throwing her crown later.
  • Should clarify exactly how many gorphs were driven into the pit.
  • "sending the Gorphs and Slugga into a hole, driving the Gorphs in to their own pit." I can't remember, was there another whole first or did they get sent tumbling straight into the pit? Commander Code-8 Hello There! 08:11, 18 May 2021 (UTC)
  • Missed that bit earlier about Slugga wanting to rule both tribes.
  • There's an earlier mention where color can be linked
  • Vork is in the group of gorphs that get thrown into the pit.
  • There's a quote from Wicket about their warty noses, that can be used in the description section and used in the body.
  • Had another look at the episode and there's stuff I think can go in here with a reasonable level of gaming, since it won't really be covered in other articles. The gorphs spy on the Ewoks before nabbing Latara. The queen threatens Latara by holding her over the pit with her tongue. Two gorphs hear the Ewoks moving in the grotto but realize its nothing, and inadvertently lead them to the wedding. The Ewoks also get found by a couple of guards before the wedding but escape. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 07:01, 20 May 2021 (UTC)
  • "who believe that Latara is a princess and will please Queen Slugga" is in the wrong tense.
  • Should specify how many other gorphs got knocked into the pit. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 06:40, 25 May 2021 (UTC)
  • I think its weird to single out Vork as not having a spear when Slugga doesn't have one either. You could just say the members of the royal family didn't use them.
  • Vork linked twice in the body.
  • Latara isn't linked on her first mention, you need to watch out for your linking when adding new information.
  • Wicket finds gorph tracks leading to the grotto when they find Latara's hood piece, that can be mentioned.
  • Should write that the Ewoks were overlooking the wedding and planning the rescue before being caught by the gorphs.
  • You can specify how the Ewoks escaped there, that Wicket tackled one gorph while Kneesa stomped on the foot of the gorph holding her.
  • Need to mention that the queen and her guards where chasing the Ewoks after Latara was rescued, and that they were bearing down on the Ewoks when Wicket threw the crown. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 00:43, 30 May 2021 (UTC)
  • Do the captions for the episode use the quotation marks around The Pit?
  • "Two Gorphs then found a group of Ewoks, who believed that Latara was a princess and would please Queen Slugga." this makes it sound like the Ewoks believed Latara was princess.
  • Just noticed that CSWE writes "gorphs" lower case, which is normally done for non-sentient species. So I believe that means sentience cannot be sourced to CSWE, and that contradiction should be written out in the Bts.
    • Added. AmazinglyCool CIS roundel.svg (talk) 13:57, 10 June 2021 (UTC)
      • Good start but there's some more to be done: You should source the decapitalization of gorphs to that specific entry.
      • I think you need a source for the characteristics of sentience, something like Essential Guide to Alien Species might be suitable.
      • The paragraph break is unnecessary. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 10:57, 13 June 2021 (UTC)
  • Still got two incorrect capitalizations of queen. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 03:05, 7 June 2021 (UTC)
  • The capitalization of "pit" is inconsistent, which one do the captions use?
  • Aside from the Bts the word "this" should be avoided.
  • The second intro sentence should be expanded with more info. I think with the size the history section you could have two full sentences summarizing it in the intro too. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 10:57, 13 June 2021 (UTC)
Imp
  • Since we don't know to what extent Bongiorno has modified his novella from the original manuscript, there's no way of telling what in the current novel is information from a canceled source and what is by now essentially Bongiorno's fan fiction. Therefore, I'm going to ask you to remove all the information relating to Supernatural Encounters from this article. Imperators II(Talk) 11:10, 6 May 2021 (UTC)
Macaroni

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Unidentified Black Sun agent

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CC-8
  • Needs a P&T section
    • Added, thank you! Please let me know if it's sufficient or has any issues. Immi Thrax RainbowRebellion2.png (talk) 22:49, 27 April 2021 (UTC)
      • It's all good, but would there be a quote available? Commander Code-8 Hello There! 09:11, 28 April 2021 (UTC)
        • Added another quote! I've now quoted almost all their dialogue, heh. Nothing said about their equipment/ship, though. Immi Thrax RainbowRebellion2.png (talk) 20:53, 28 April 2021 (UTC)
  • Would their ship and Ahsoka's freighter be notable enough for articles? Commander Code-8 Hello There! 08:18, 27 April 2021 (UTC)
Macaroni
  • The image caption should be modified to be relevant to the article subject. Its size can be increased a bit as well.
  • "Tano was unable to identify their species or their gender" implies to me that their gender is unspecified as opposed to being concretely non-binary, so I think that can be reworded.
  • I would mention their being non-binary in the intro.
  • Is ref 5 really necessary? It seems that it can just be sourced to the novel.
  • It seems that a pilots category would be appropriate. JediMasterMacaroniAdmiral Ackbar RH.png(Talk) 22:24, 24 May 2021 (UTC)
    • Made edits to address all of these—have a look! Perhaps ref 5 is overdoing it, but since the BTS quote is from it, I wanted to be sure there was also a ref to account for where the quote was from, if that makes sense? Immi Thrax RainbowRebellion2.png (talk) 23:14, 24 May 2021 (UTC)

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Jedi holocron (Alaris Prime)

  • Nominated by: Commander Code-8 Hello There! 15:24, 27 April 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Really thought this would have been a CAN, without the intro and Bts the body is only 256 words

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Dwartii
  • I assume "It had a circular gray" in the description is meant to say it had a circular gray base or something? Not entirely sure at the moment. DwartiiDelver (talk) 01:45, 10 May 2021 (UTC)
Macaroni

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Harrod's Planet system

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Hyabb

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  1. Sounds like a Nintendo protagonist sound bite. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 14:17, 19 May 2021 (UTC)
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Leyli

  • Nominated by: OtterSurf (talk) 08:17, 6 May 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Let's do this.

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CC-8
  • I think that body image is way too big.
  • Is there an article for Leyli's city?
  • I've skimmed through the comic and a few claims here seem quite speculative to me. "To avoid fear and panic in the community" "willing to bravely offer help"
  • As far as I know we don't include individuals in the affiliations field. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 14:43, 19 May 2021 (UTC)
    • All done. OtterSurf (talk) 15:19, 19 May 2021 (UTC)
      • Just jumping in here with regard to the last point, it may be worth mentioning Rigosso includes an individual in his affiliations field. While the article is no longer a GA, the individual was included in affiliations when the article was granted GA status. Not positive if there's any actual rule as to whether this should be done or not, however (and if there is, it's possible it's changed since Rigosso's article became a GA). DwartiiDelver (talk) 20:12, 19 May 2021 (UTC)
        • With that example I can see why it might be better to keep it. Striking the objection for now but this may be a bigger discussion.
  • "quite understandably" feels like a NPOV violation, I'd just remove that phrase. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 07:25, 20 May 2021 (UTC)
Shayanomer
  • Looking over the article, the images are too small. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 08:41, 15 June 2021 (UTC)
    • Done.
  • Also, is there another image you can use in the Biography to better illustrate the events described in that section? Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 08:55, 15 June 2021 (UTC)

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Hoclaw

  • Nominated by: Supreme Emperor (talk) 01:24, 8 May 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:Been far too long since I've done a nomination. For WP:Novels

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Macaroni
  • Duplicate links.
    • Done.
      • Links that are present in the body should not be linked in quotes.
        • Removed.
  • Name should not be bolded in body.
  • Species is infobox-exclusive.
    • Done.
      • Can be mentioned in the intro as well.
        • Added.
  • Can the dates be sourced straight to the novel?
    • It can, the novel itself contains a page noting the timeline placement of each novel in the series.
      • Just to clarify: does it use ABY dates?
        • Yes it does.
  • Bts should not regurgitate information from the sources section.
    • Done.
  • Bts should mention author of the novel.
    • Added.
  • Abridged audiobook should be checked for a mention/appearance. JediMasterMacaroniAdmiral Ackbar RH.png(Talk) 01:29, 8 May 2021 (UTC)
  • Homeworld/Legends should be linked in the body and then removed from the image caption.
    • Done.
  • You can increase your image sizes.
    • Adjusted.
  • Release month for the novel is not necessary. Once you can remove that, you can just source the whole Bts to the novel itself. JediMasterMacaroniAdmiral Ackbar RH.png(Talk) 03:59, 9 May 2021 (UTC)
  • Her being a Corellian is intro/infobox exclusive.
    • Fixed.
  • Can Corellian system be sourced to the novel?
    • Yes, got multiple mentions.
  • "Hoclaw nonetheless kept Solo occupied for some time, debating with him points such as the cost of rebuilding." Rebuilding what?
    • Per below, the novel doesn't specify.
  • "...what portion Corellia would be obligated to pay." What are they paying for? JediMasterMacaroniAdmiral Ackbar RH.png(Talk) 22:44, 11 May 2021 (UTC)
    • The novel actually doesn't specify, Leia overheard them discussing it, but the conversation itself is cut off, aside from the quote I've listed. Supreme Emperor Holocomm 23:21, 11 May 2021 (UTC)
  • I would mention the date somewhere in the intro.
  • You mention that Leia and Jacen were on the Anakin Solo--were they not at the same location as Hoclaw? If so, that should be mentioned earlier on. Also, some context is needed for the Anakin Solo. JediMasterMacaroniAdmiral Ackbar RH.png(Talk) 17:52, 14 May 2021 (UTC)
    • Context added, along with a mention earlier of the meeting taking place via holo. Supreme Emperor Holocomm 00:31, 26 May 2021 (UTC)
  • Date note should mention Hoclaw, her death, and her location of death. See Winshur Bratt as an example. JediMasterMacaroniAdmiral Ackbar RH.png(Talk) 03:22, 24 May 2021 (UTC)
Erebus
  • Welcome back to the GAN, SE! First off, there are a few things I've noticed on the article.
    • You could work the Death section into the Biography section, seeing as how it's part of his history.
      • Done.
    • In the Death paragraph, is the use of "Unfortunately" from you or the novel? Erebus Chronus (Talk) 02:14, 8 May 2021 (UTC)
      • I've changed that to something more appropriate. Thanks for reviewing. Supreme Emperor (talk) 03:53, 9 May 2021 (UTC)
Shayanomer
  • Unabridged audiobook should be added. The audiobooks should also be formatted in accordance with the Layout Guide. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 07:26, 8 May 2021 (UTC)
  • If she hails from Corellia, wouldn't that make her a Corellian?
    • I've added a mention in the intro, and already have her noted as Corellian native in the body.
  • The date needs a note.
    • What do you mean? The novel itself places the events of the book in 40 ABY.
      • Using the Galactic calendar? Just making sure. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 19:47, 9 May 2021 (UTC)
        • That's correct. The novel contains a timeline at the beginning that dates the events as 40 ABY. Supreme Emperor (talk) 23:36, 10 May 2021 (UTC)
  • Context for Jacen Solo and Leia Organa Solo.
    • Added.
  • "She was sent by Sadras Koyan, the Five World Prime Minister, as the head of a decoy fleet, sent to lure Jacen Solo into an ambush near Centerpoint Station, under the pretense of peace negotiations with the authority to negotiate a settlement, if possible." Feel very much like a run-on sentence.
    • Broken up.
  • "However, Solo refused this suggestion outright, indicating it was not on the table." "On the table" is an idiom here, which is generally avoided in formal writing.
    • Generally yes, however this was the term used by Solo.
  • Using "this" in in-universe text is frowned upon. "A long time ago in a galaxy far, far away..."
    • Changed.
  • I don't believe we use GrS dates in the infobox anymore. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 07:26, 9 May 2021 (UTC)
Imp
  • Please switch to using a manual date ref using The Essential Reader's Companion to date the novel's events, per ample status article precedent.
  • Since the P&T doesn't mention at all the fact that Hoclaw commanded a Victory Star Destroyer, I find that image to be somewhat distracting and unillustrative there; please remove it.
  • We should be running like hell from using in status articles as poorly-edited images as the Corellia one you're currently using is, especially when there are several beautiful alternatives. Imperators II(Talk) 18:33, 12 May 2021 (UTC)
  • The infobox of our Centerpoint Station says that it was armed with a hyperspace tractor beam. Is this the same repulsor weapon you're describing here?
    • Fixed.
  • The intro claims Hoclaw's efforts at stalling Solo failed, but the body doesn't actually support this. You should note that Solo made it out of the ambush alive.
    • Added a note of both his and the Anakin Solo escaping.
  • The location (deep space) is infobox-exclusive.
    • Added.
  • Please add context for the Confederation.
    • Done.
  • You should be consistent about whether you use the definite article with Centerpoint Station or not. What do the sources say?
    • Removed the.
  • Swarm War is not directly mentioned in Fury. Is it an {{Imo}}?
    • I've just removed that part.
  • Second Galactic Civil War, on the other hand, is intro-exclusive.
    • Added to the body.
  • So did the entire meeting happen over holocam transmission? Would that mandate the use of {{Hologram}} in Appearances?
    • Holocam yes, but not hologram.
  • You mention "rebuilding" both in Bio and P&T, but what is that rebuilding from?
    • The novel doesn't specify, likely any damages from the Second Galactic Civil War, but I don't want to speculate. Supreme Emperor Holocomm 19:21, 8 June 2021 (UTC)
  • It feels to me like more context for the Centerpoint Station is in order. Its location in the same system as Corellia, its armament with its superweapon, and its operational status should all be briefly described close to where you first introduce it in the Bio.
    • Added some context on what it was and it's location, I think the mention of it's operational status is fine where is, but let me know what you think.
  • I feel like the "While she was never meant to reach a peace agreement with Solo" statement from P&T is at odds with the "had the authority to negotiate a settlement if possible" bit from the Bio.
    • Seems that way, that's how the novel presents it. She had the authority to negotiate a settlement, but was never expected to get one. Supreme Emperor Holocomm 00:29, 14 June 2021 (UTC)
  • I'm seeing some more pieces of information in Hoclaw's CSWE entry that should all be incorporated:
    • It specifically says that Hoclaw was given command of the Valorum when Corellia joined the Confederation.
    • It also establishes that the goal of the ostensible negotiations was to discuss Corellia's return into the GA's fold.
    • It's mentioned that Solo expected to meet with Koyan personally, not just any higher-up officer.
    • Finally, the entry also says that Hoclaw "wasted little time" in demanding that Solo step down. Imperators II(Talk) 21:52, 6 June 2021 (UTC)

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  1. As an fyi, I should be back home in the next two days, all objections will be addressed after that. Supreme Emperor Holocomm 15:58, 21 May 2021 (UTC)


Nub

  • Nominated by: ComicalNinja [Talk] 15:18, 13 May 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: I'm getting back into editing, I've worked on this page a lot and I feel it's ready for nomination. Nub/Legends is already a GA, this is for the Canon article.

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Macaroni
  • Article body should explicitly mention that Nub is a nickname and not his actual name. That can be mentioned in the intro as well.
  • Your body image can be increased in size.
  • You've got some incorrect tense in the first body paragraph.
  • 22 BBY needs to be sourced the ref note in the body.
  • You should mention the location of death in the date ref note so that only one is required for that infobox field. See Mixer as an example.
  • You can't directly source all of the information to the DB entry for clones—it needs a note. Again, see Mixer as an example. JediMasterMacaroniAdmiral Ackbar RH.png(Talk) 15:27, 13 May 2021 (UTC)
Lewis
  • The info about his armor in P&T should be moved to an equipment section, if he wielded any weapons that should also be included.
    • Wrote an Equipment section. ComicalNinja [Talk] 18:30, 13 May 2021 (UTC)
      • I think you can just mention the armor, unless sleek is used in a source? Also if he didn't use any weapons then the second sentence is unnecessary.
        • I presume that whoever wrote "sleek" was referring to the armor's shininess/glossiness, which is a rather important thing to note. Also, I think the second sentence is necessary because you'd think he would have a blaster like other clones but he doesn't. Besides, if you remove the sentence, then the equipment section seems like it's missing things. ComicalNinja [Talk] 19:18, 13 May 2021 (UTC)
          • I spoke with Shayanomer and Imperators about the second sentence in the equipment section, both agreed that including the sentence was unnecessary, and that we don't document what someone didn't have at a particular time or the non-existence of things. Also spoke with Shay regarding the sleek part, just saying he wore phase 1 armor was sufficient, and then adding it onto the armor page if a source mentions it was sleek.
  • As mentioned on discord, 'His nickname is an acronym originating from military jargon that stands for "Non-Useful Body."' needs to be amended to reflect what the older episode guide says, and then sourced to the guide.
    • Done. The episode guide said nothing about "military jargon" so I just removed that part. ComicalNinja [Talk] 15:53, 14 May 2021 (UTC)
  • General underlinking throughout the article, I'd recommend going through again Lewisr (talk) 16:17, 13 May 2021 (UTC)
    • I just realized the Manual of Style says you can use links from the introduction again in the body paragraphs. I've just gone through and added links where they are needed. ComicalNinja [Talk] 18:30, 13 May 2021 (UTC)
      • Still missing links such as listening post, shiny etc. The links should also be at the first mention so you should move the Confederacy link to the first instance of Separatist being mentioned.
  • Since there are clones who have no hair (Chopper) and a different eye color (Sketch) from what Jango has, we shouldn't be assuming that Nub has the same as him. Lewisr (talk) 18:47, 13 May 2021 (UTC)
    • It's not an assumption, when Nub has his helmet off for a brief instance we can see that he has black hair and brown eyes. ComicalNinja [Talk] 19:18, 13 May 2021 (UTC)
      • Sorry about that, totally had a dumb moment and thought he was in full armor and helmet! The info should to be added to the infobox in that case Lewisr (talk) 20:01, 13 May 2021 (UTC)
  • Per the manual of style 'Do not place grammatical articles (such as a, an, and the) in pipelinks' I can see at least two instances where you have done this, one in the intro and another in the first paragraph of biography.
  • 'The clone trooper known as "Nub" was enlisted in the Republic Military during the Clone Wars. Like all clone troopers of the Grand Army of the Republic, he had been grown on the Kaminoan cloning facilities using the DNA of bounty hunter Jango Fett. Nub's nickname was an acronym that stood for "Non-Useful Body."' Can all of this information be sourced to the episode guide? If not, then you should look at Mixer and see how the same sort of information was referenced on that page and implement it onto Nub's.
    • Sourced everything there to the corresponding source. ComicalNinja [Talk] 02:46, 15 May 2021 (UTC)
  • You should move the clone trooper databank and note reference to the homeworld field, as per Mixer like JMM linked above. Lewisr (talk) 16:48, 14 May 2021 (UTC)
    • Done. I had two references for that source, one with a note and one without, so I combined them into one with the note. ComicalNinja [Talk] 02:46, 15 May 2021 (UTC)
Amazingly
  • The refrence note for the clones DB entry is explicitly about the height. Make another ref note for the homeworld and species, as "{{Databank|clone-troopers|Clone Troopers|archivedate=20200310191153}}."AmazinglyCool CIS roundel.svg (talk) 16:39, 13 May 2021 (UTC)
    • Okay, done, did I do it correctly? ComicalNinja [Talk] 18:30, 13 May 2021 (UTC)
      • Update: I decided to combine them into one reference since they’re the same source. The note is there. ComicalNinja [Talk] 02:46, 15 May 2021 (UTC)
Erebus
  • Upon a first read of the first paragraph in Biography, I'd say you could trim some of that down a bit, there's a little too much unnecessary context. Same can be done for the third paragraph.
    • Reworded/rewrote the first and third paragraphs. ComicalNinja [Talk]
      • There's still some unnecessary context. What I'm referring to in the first paragraph is this line "In 22 BBY, Nub, along with CT-327 and the members of Domino Squad," this could be changed to "In 22 BBY, Nub, along with several other clone troopers, was assigned to the Rishi Station." You also do not need to mention that the Rishi Moon was located in the Rishi system, that has no bearing to Nub, so you could reword that to just say that it was a listening post on the Rishi Moon. Now in the last paragraph, the last two sentences have some somewhat irrelevant information. All that could be changed to say "Despite Nub's death, however, the remaining clone troopers were able to escape and destroy the station in order to alert the Republic of Grievous's attack." Erebus Chronus (Talk) 13:24, 17 May 2021 (UTC)
  • Your current wording in the second sentence of the third Bio paragraph seems to be suggesting that there are two separate squads of commando droids, please reword this.
  • Context for the Clone Wars.
  • Please reword your first Bio sentence. The current wording is suggesting that clone troopers, and Nub, chose to join the Republic instead of being created to serve the GAR. Erebus Chronus (Talk) 04:07, 15 May 2021 (UTC)
  • With some additional trimming, paragraphs 2, 3 and possibly 4 in Biography could all be merged together. Erebus Chronus (Talk) 04:11, 22 May 2021 (UTC)
    • Sorry for the late response. What parts of those paragraphs do you think I should trim? I've already changed and rewrote that part of the article a lot. I don't feel like it needs to be condensed any further, or it won't be enough information. ComicalNinja [Talk] 12:42, 1 June 2021 (UTC)

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Dud Bolt

  • Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:30, 14 May 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Always one of my favourite podracers.

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  1. This article wasn't a dud :P JediMasterMacaroniAdmiral Ackbar RH.png(Talk) 22:44, 14 May 2021 (UTC)
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From the desk of Macaroni
  • Can you mention his gender in the intro?
  • "Now a Jedi" is not exactly using past tense. I think you can reword.
  • Please fix the link on ref 14. JediMasterMacaroniAdmiral Ackbar RH.png(Talk) 22:09, 14 May 2021 (UTC)
Tomeito
  • I think Dud's human mechanic is Mat Rags. Mat is introduced in CVD New Edition as one of the "pod mechanics" and it's obvious from his clothes.Tomeito (talk) 19:46, 29 May 2021 (UTC)
    • I've always been very hesitant to ID any of the pod mechanics since there are multiple people in the same costume for each of them; however, after looking at the colors of all the bits and pieces in his jacket I think you can actually use them to clearly distinguish between Rags and the other person in that costume (who is visible when Anakin celebrates after the race). I've added Mat to the article. Ayrehead02 (talk) 20:33, 29 May 2021 (UTC)

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Squintpipe

  • Nominated by: Imperators II(Talk) 20:00, 16 May 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Starships are collections of systems traveling through space, so basically they're "star systems", right?

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  2. Nicely written. Braha'tok enthusiast (Hello there) 13:20, 2 June 2021 (UTC)

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TJ-912

  • Nominated by: DwartiiDelver (talk) 04:08, 17 May 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Love the "lipstick"

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Botor system

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  1. Nearly a dozen BBY/ABY dates on only two refs, impressive. JediMasterMacaroniAdmiral Ackbar RH.png(Talk) 06:36, 6 June 2021 (UTC)
    Ladies and gentlemen, let's give a round of applause to Wallace and Fry! Imperators II(Talk) 07:31, 6 June 2021 (UTC)
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Vall Kumauri's flagship

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Night of a Thousand Tears

  • Nominated by: Editoronthewiki (talk) 23:51, 17 May 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:So when during the siege did Rex allow his troops to massacre Maul's super commandos from the air?

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  1. Remember when the Siege of Mandalore was a Good article…Commander Code-8 Hello There! 15:12, 31 May 2021 (UTC)
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B…raha'tok
  • "Gideon's knowledge of the night and other information about Djarin and his allies—former New Republic shock trooper Carasynthia Dune and former Magistrate Greef Karga—was starling to the three of them." Two things:
"Rex commits a war crime"
  • I think an image with more connection to the event than a guy who knew about it would be appropriate, could be one of Mandalore, a repeating blaster, or the actual Siege.
    • I couldn't decide between an image of Mandalore or an image of the actual siege. So, I chose an image of both Mandalore and the siege Editoronthewiki (talk) 14:08, 31 May 2021 (UTC)
  • Standard day can be pipelinked in mentions of night, and music with songs
  • Mandalorian Civil War is infobox exclusive. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 13:25, 31 May 2021 (UTC)

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L'cayo Llem

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  • In the intro, you should mention that Llem served at Echo Base before you go into the part about the battle of Hoth.
  • "A male soldier in the ground forces of the Rebel Alliance during the Galactic Civil War against the Galactic Empire, L'cayo Llem was stationed on the Outer Rim ice planet Hoth at Echo Base, a secret installation that served as the Rebellion's headquarters, by 3 ABY." I'd recommend splitting this sentence, I'm not into the duel time placement in one sentence especially.
  • "During the base's evacuation, the journalist Corwi Selgrothe backed into Llem, as she had been trying to reach Commander Luke Skywalker for propaganda footage, much to the annoyance of Llem. After she picked up a bag he dropped, the journalist tried to apologize but was cut off when Llem asked her if she knew her assigned GR-75 medium transport." this part flows a little rough so there's couple ways I think this can be tweaked:
    • I'd advise splitting the "annoyance" part into a separate sentence where you mention him dropping his bag rather than bringing the latter part up after it's happened.
    • The second sentence should be centred around Llem rather than Corwi.
    • These changes alright with you? Braha'tok enthusiast (Hello there) 06:46, 30 May 2021 (UTC)
  • "if he was annoyed at all" this part isn't needed. Feel free to snap you Thanos glove.
  • "Selgrothe considered him, like she did all rebels, to be a hero." I feel like this would be better in the bio. It's more Corwi's opinion on him than his personality really. Braha'tok enthusiast (Hello there) 08:24, 29 May 2021 (UTC)
  • The equipment quote also doesn't belong here; it's not related enough to the actual bag (and to be honest, I'm on the fence about removing the whole section because it's just a small sentence on him having a bag, but I think an AC's opinion on that might be more valid than mine). Snap it Thanos :P Braha'tok enthusiast (Hello there) 06:46, 30 May 2021 (UTC)
    • Removed quote, and i think the sentence is fine. if we have equipment sections to simply say "x character wore clothing" noting he had a bag is fine. Editoronthewiki (talk) 13:04, 30 May 2021 (UTC)
      • I and some other ACs agree that holding a bag is not enough to merit an Equipment section. One can argue that mentioning an otherwise unnotable bag is unnecessary levels of detail (that is my personal opinion on it), but it could also be integrated into the Biography, if appropriate. 1358 (Talk) 16:05, 30 May 2021 (UTC)
  • The Bio and P&T start with the same thing. I think it'd be best to remove the P&T's first sentence as that just provides a repeat of the context given in the Bio. Braha'tok enthusiast (Hello there) 22:49, 9 June 2021 (UTC)

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Attack on the Trade Federation listening array

  • Nominated by: Commander Code-8 Hello There! 13:37, 19 May 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Anyone who's ever played this level would use Obi-Wan in this battle, but because the strategy guide didn't think of it we don't get to say it canonically 😡

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Caitken

  • Nominated by: JediMasterMacaroniAdmiral Ackbar RH.png(Talk) 18:50, 19 May 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Is it an awful idea to do a GAN while finals are making me stressed? Probably.

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Amazingly
  • I'm not sure if following orders is a "Skill or ablity," moreso a character trait. AmazinglyCool CIS roundel.svg (talk) 15:12, 21 May 2021 (UTC)
    • His willingness to follow orders is a character trait, but efficiency can go in that section.
  • In this image, Caitken is using a device. Does it have a name? If so, add it to the "Equipment" section. AmazinglyCool CIS roundel.svg (talk) 15:16, 21 May 2021 (UTC)
    • That's part of the Profundity and also not really visible enough to ID. JediMasterMacaroniAdmiral Ackbar RH.png(Talk) 15:33, 21 May 2021 (UTC)
Shayanomer
  • Full release dates required for the film and the blog post in the BTS. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 15:31, 21 May 2021 (UTC)
  • Some sources you'll want to investigate: These, everything here, and anything from Insider. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 15:37, 21 May 2021 (UTC)
    • Dates added. Most of the multimedia and trailers have been checked, but I found one more TV spot and will check the last couple magazines as well as Insider. JediMasterMacaroniAdmiral Ackbar RH.png(Talk) 19:44, 21 May 2021 (UTC)
    • Finished checking. JediMasterMacaroniAdmiral Ackbar RH.png(Talk) 00:25, 22 May 2021 (UTC)
  • Now you need to clear the redlinks. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 07:31, 23 May 2021 (UTC)
EthSch13
  • Perhaps the equipment section could use some work? I think that the article could benefit from a more thorough description of his clothing. Other than that, it's definitely worthy of the nomination. EthSch13 (talk) 00:04, 25 May 2021 (UTC)
    • Thanks for saying so. I have added a bit more detail on the uniform, not sure if there's anything else you had in mind. JediMasterMacaroniAdmiral Ackbar RH.png(Talk) 00:18, 25 May 2021 (UTC)
      • Nice, yeah that's definitely an improvement. I can't really think of anything else that would be worth adding, so it seems good to me! EthSch13 (talk) 00:24, 25 May 2021 (UTC)
        • Great. Feel free to strike your objection (*<s>Objection</s>) if you're satisfied. JediMasterMacaroniAdmiral Ackbar RH.png(Talk) 02:46, 25 May 2021 (UTC)
VergenceScatterbrained
  • It seems unnecessary to state that he's not Force-sensitive.
  • If you disagree with this, it's fine, but I personally don't believe that you start a section with just "he."

VergenceScatter (talk) 04:36, 12 June 2021 (UTC)

    • I did that to try to introduce some variation in all of the non-bio sections starting with "Caitken was" or "Caitken wore," but if you'd really like me to switch it up that's fine. JediMasterMacaroniAdmiral Ackbar RH.png(Talk) 17:29, 13 June 2021 (UTC)

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Grievous's frigate

  • Nominated by: Erebus Chronus (Talk) 16:24, 25 May 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: First Munificent nom!

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  • First paragraph of the history section should be tweaked to be more centred around the frigate rather than Grievous and his fleet as a whole. Something like, …the Munificent-class star frigate served under the Kaleesh separatist General Grievous as part of a fleet of… and so on.
  • "resulting in his Padawan Ahsoka Tano ordering a force of All Terrain Tactical Enforcers that had been positioned throughout the asteroid field to reveal themselves. As a result, the frigates, which had directed all power to their forward deflector shields, were destroyed by the Republic walkers" I think it'd be worth mentioning that the walkers opened fire.
  • Is Skywalker's fleet and the fleet of three Venators the same? They are introduced as if they're different fleets.
  • Just to check you're fine with these the changes I made on my copy-edit? Braha'tok enthusiast (Hello there) 07:54, 29 May 2021 (UTC)
DFaceG
  • Instances of simply "Munificent," "Munificents," or "Munificent's" should be changed to "Munificent-class," "Munificent-classes," or "Munificent-class's" respectively for formality. DFaceG (talk) 15:10, 7 June 2021 (UTC)
    • Consider this objection a review note rather than a formal objection, I should have probably filed it under comments instead of objections. DFaceG (talk) 15:18, 7 June 2021 (UTC)
Battle droid enthusiast
  • Episode guide reveals that Grievous's decision to move through the asteroids is an unusual tactic, I think that is relevant to this page
  • The ship moves through Zone six all the way through zone three, may be worth noting
  • Unidentified OOM command battle droid (Bothawui) taking control of the ship after Grievous begins to flee should be mentioned
  • I think you should note that Grievous took on control of another Munificent after its destruction
  • You should note that wreckage of the battle was left to float in space Editoronthewiki (talk) 21:27, 13 June 2021 (UTC)
  • Build falcon 75 says Grievous needed to use Munificents as his flagships because he lost the Malevolence Editoronthewiki (talk) 21:32, 13 June 2021 (UTC)
  • You can move the "move our ships" quote to the flagship subsection, while another quote can be fit into destruction. maybe the "get us out of here" quote or ahsoka telling anakin that the fleet is destroyed Editoronthewiki (talk) 22:23, 13 June 2021 (UTC)
    • Done.
  • Build falcon 75 also notes that the frigates used by Grievous were "endlessly disposable" Editoronthewiki (talk) 22:30, 13 June 2021 (UTC)

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TC-14

  • Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 06:16, 29 May 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Did literally the entire crew of the Saak'ak swap on to the Vuutun Palaa?

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  1. I think because of the Phatom Menace visual dictionary I have an attachment to all the minor characters like her. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 07:50, 4 June 2021 (UTC)
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CC-8
  • Naboo system is infobox exclusive.
  • Her duties should be reiterated in the characteristics sections. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 08:31, 3 June 2021 (UTC)
    • I've moved the info from the body. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:38, 3 June 2021 (UTC)

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Nacronis (Redux review)

  • Redux comments: Reduxed at Meeting 140.
  • Date added: May 29, 2021

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Ottilie

  • Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 17:27, 30 May 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: If I'm nominating one person who mainly just carried a tray of glasses, why not a second?

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Dwartii
  • Unless it's stated in the novel as well and I somehow missed it, the first sentence of the personality and traits section should instead be sourced to The Official Guide. Additionally, the guide only uses one "not". DwartiiDelver (talk) 20:28, 31 May 2021 (UTC)
    • Ah yes I was missing a ref, nice catch. Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:26, 31 May 2021 (UTC)

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Yanjon Zelmar

  • Nominated by: DwartiiDelver (talk) 03:12, 31 May 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Sage #2. Basically Faya but reworded slightly.

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  • There's a couple of instances where you give characters full names when only last names are necessary. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 04:07, 7 June 2021 (UTC)
    • My main reasoning for that was simply due to their surnames not being given until some time after the sources in question (and even then, they've only been used outside of GE in that SW.com article), only to better represent how they were referred to in those earlier sources. If you still feel these should be changed, however, I can do so (and update Faya's page as needed as well). DwartiiDelver (talk) 04:30, 7 June 2021 (UTC)
      • I can see that logic but I think it's better to be consistent with our encyclopedic style. As far as I know it's fine to change it without adding extra referencing, though I welcome any other input. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 02:19, 9 June 2021 (UTC)
        • Removed a few first names. Look all right now, or were there other instances you were thinking of as well? DwartiiDelver (talk) 02:30, 9 June 2021 (UTC)
  • The 1stID template in apperances should use the full name.
    • Is that necessary? I know some status articles which had first/last names identified in a different source, such as Gilad Pellaeon and L'ulo L'ampar, only include the name that was confirmed in that source.
  • I think Era of the Sith can be linked early on. i don't have the source for it but is the Republic's ousting from Corscuant notable enough for an article? Might depend on if it's phrased as a conflict or not. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 07:09, 9 June 2021 (UTC)
    • Linked Era of the Sith over on Faya's page but forgot to do so here. The source only mentions a "devastating ouster," however to be pedantic it doesn't explicitly state that the Sith ousted the Republic from Coruscant. Currently, there is an article for the battle in which the Sith took over Coruscant, though to be pedantic again I'm not entirely certain we can say this was the same event where the Republic was driven from Coruscant. DwartiiDelver (talk) 22:26, 9 June 2021 (UTC)

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Erilnar

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  1. Nice. --Vitus InfinitusTalk 21:55, 8 June 2021 (UTC)
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Fan26
  • The article IDs Kulbart Zamoon as a human, but his article says he's a near-human Centran. Fan26 (Talk) 04:47, 10 June 2021 (UTC)
    • That's because non-status articles are largely crap Corrected that other article. Imperators II(Talk) 07:37, 10 June 2021 (UTC)
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Trade Federation listening array

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Nette

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  2. Props to Freed for making the ambiguity due to the awkwardness of such situations IRL and Quell's own uncertainty rather than just quietly implying a lesbian relationship without showing like so many creators sometimes do. Fan26 (Talk) 14:44, 14 June 2021 (UTC)

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CC-8
  • I think around is a preferable word to replace "during or around" with. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 08:23, 10 June 2021 (UTC)
    • Around to me means 'that year' with an uncertainty of '+1 year', whereas the date note says it can only be during or after. It feels like the best option to me. Braha'tok enthusiast (Hello there) 08:50, 10 June 2021 (UTC)
  • Could use an image in the body, Yrica Quell is probably the most relevant depicted subject.
    • Done.
  • Her first flashback appearance in Shadow Fall needs to be acknowledged in the Bts
    • Also done.
  • "Quell chose to join the Imperial Academy for Nette to receive flight training to join the Rebellion." This sounds like Quell was trying to get Nette flight trained.
    • Reworded.
  • The page is in the Alliance members category, but doesn't have that in the affiliations. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 10:44, 13 June 2021 (UTC)
    • Removed the category. We know Nette left to join them but we don't know if she was successful. Braha'tok enthusiast (Hello there) 10:54, 13 June 2021 (UTC)

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8th Sector Army

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OOM
  • Please go over the article and remove links relevant to this clause of WP:MOS#Linking: But do not link individual words within proper compound nouns (examples: [[Death]] [[Star]], [[Color|Azure]] [[Dianoga]] [[Cantina]], [[The galaxy|Galactic]] Empire, ''[[Bantha]]''-class assault shuttle) OOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 21:35, 5 June 2021 (UTC)
  • (Review note: please see this copy-edit) OOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 13:56, 8 June 2021 (UTC)

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Rafa XI

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Bashrar

  • Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:35, 8 June 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Ayrehead making Legends nominations? Whatever next?

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  1. Apologies if I've inadvetently reminded you why TOR is so frustrating to write for :P Fan26 (Talk) 00:47, 9 June 2021 (UTC)
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Fan26 is seeing new TOR noms and loving it
  • Per precedent (see here for a current example) it is acceptable to just link to TORdates and offer a quick explanation of why a given event can be placed in a given year, since otherwise the date refs would baloon to an unholy size. Fan26 (Talk) 13:45, 8 June 2021 (UTC)
    • Ah makes sense, how's that look? Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:54, 8 June 2021 (UTC)
      • Yah, that's good. Fan26 (Talk) 14:38, 8 June 2021 (UTC)
  • it says Bashrar spoke Sullestese-does that mean there are potential quotes somewhere? Based on my experience with TOR, I assume he spouts off taunts during battle or something like that. Fan26 (Talk) 14:38, 8 June 2021 (UTC)
    • No quotes just battle grunts which according to Jedipedia use the Sullustan voice files. Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:50, 8 June 2021 (UTC)
      • In that case would you say it needs to be sourced to Jedipedia a la this precedent for citing Jedipedia-exclusive info, if that's the only source that identifies those as the sullustan voice files, or do you think that's unneccesary. Fan26 (Talk) 16:58, 8 June 2021 (UTC)
        • That makes sense, done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 22:22, 8 June 2021 (UTC)
          • I think that info is fine to be included in the body rather than the BTS. While ol' Gorvy's page includes the Jedipedia info in the BtS, that's because his hair and eye colors are obscured in-game and only availble through Jedipedia. On the other hand, assuming Bashrar grunts during combat, then I think that actually counts as him speaking Sullestese in-game, meaning in the body it can say he spoke the language, just citing that to Jedipedia. Fan26 (Talk) 23:53, 8 June 2021 (UTC)

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  • Checked the Explorer's Guide and Encyclopedia and found nothing. Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:35, 8 June 2021 (UTC)


Sunberry pie

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  1. There are 40 pie articles on Wookieepedia, let's get them all to status. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 15:58, 15 June 2021 (UTC)

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Seftin Vanik

  • Nominated by: Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 15:44, 10 June 2021 (UTC)
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Humat

  • Nominated by: Imperators II(Talk) 19:00, 12 June 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: I'm just glad that a nineteen-millennia-old eccentric Jedi collector got to influence the modern theme of the site. :P

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  1. Why would he store all that at the Galactic Capital of all places? Fan26 (Talk) 14:28, 14 June 2021 (UTC)
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