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Unidentified Nightbrother village

  • Nominated by: AmazinglyCool CIS roundel.svg (talk) 21:10, 28 November 2021 (UTC)
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  1. ALMOST voted as an EC lol Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 06:52, 10 March 2022 (UTC)
  2. Nicely done.— Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol.svg 10:19, 6 April 2022 (UTC)

Object

Ecks
  • The intro starts off really repetitive. You don't need to say a village is a village. Furthermore, you could expand the intro with a sentence or two with content from the History section.
    • Removed repetition in the intro and added an extra sentence.
  • As the body of the article is independent from the introduction, you can't start the Description section with "It was built [...]".
    • Fixed.
  • Are there no applicable quotes?
    • Added a couple quotes.
  • The infobox says the village was destroyed after 19 BBY, but the article itself doesn't mention any destruction. 1358 (Talk) 20:54, 22 January 2022 (UTC)
    • This village is not the one mentioned as being destroyed in the infobox, and is instead the prior village. AmazinglyCool CIS roundel.svg (talk) 00:23, 23 January 2022 (UTC)
  • "The clan and their domesticated bane back spiders lived and trained." I'm not sure what this sentence is supposed to say. Is there a missing word or something?
    • Reworked the sentence
  • "In the waning years of the Galactic Republic, Order 66 survivor Jedi Master Taron Malicos crash landed on the planet, becoming entangled with the affairs of the clan." What's the significance of this? Did the Jedi visit the village during his stay on the planet? Clarification is needed.
    • Added more for clarification
  • The village being located on Dathomir needs to be mentioned in the description, and you probably should mention Dathomir's location in the Outer Rim there as well.
    • Added.
      • Just checking, can its location in the Outer Rim be sourced to Fallen Order? 1358 (Talk) 15:57, 24 January 2022 (UTC)
        • Wasn't sure so I sourced it to a different source. AmazinglyCool CIS roundel.svg (talk) 19:54, 24 January 2022 (UTC)
  • All references are treated as independent entities and need to be fully linked as applicable. 1358 (Talk) 09:39, 23 January 2022 (UTC)
  • Check your image caption punctuation.
    • Fixed.
      • Good catch there, but I was actually referring to the full stop at the end. Only full sentences get a period at the end. 1358 (Talk) 22:37, 1 February 2022 (UTC)
  • The infobox claims the village was built in 19 BBY, but the body does not actually say that; it only mentions that the prior village was destroyed in 19 BBY. 1358 (Talk) 21:29, 26 January 2022 (UTC)
  • The first sentence of the intro is a bit much. You could probably add a full stop after mentioning Dathomir and then slightly expand the resulting new sentence with something descriptive (maybe mention it was built into the cliffs or something).
    • The current sentence structure implies Malicos was built into the cliffs. If you can't make it work with the description part, you can just expand the intro with some additional detail from the History section. If I may suggest, you could have a complete intro sentence - maybe the second one - dedicated to describing the village (i.e. it was built into the cliffs and domesticated spiders hung out here, just like in the prior version you removed). 1358 (Talk) 18:58, 10 April 2022 (UTC)
      • I split up the sentence into two separate sentences. AmazinglyCool CIS roundel.svg (talk) 19:39, 10 April 2022 (UTC)
  • The Description section in general has very short, choppy sentences. Please see if you can do some merging and rewording for better flow.
  • The second paragraph of the History section has some confusing parts where it's not very clear who is being referred to. Did the Nightbrothers plot to kill Merrin or the ex-Jedi? Was it Viscus or the ex-Jedi who was killed? Please go through the entire paragraph and check for instances like this where clarification is needed.
  • Given you have four paragraphs in the History section - two related to Malicos and two to Kestis - you can subsection the History section and add more quotes and possibly images as appropriate. 1358 (Talk) 09:06, 30 March 2022 (UTC)
    • Adressed objections. AmazinglyCool CIS roundel.svg (talk) 21:03, 30 March 2022 (UTC)
      • Please see if you can find a more relevant image for the second section, which does not talk about Malicos at all. 1358 (Talk) 18:58, 10 April 2022 (UTC)
  • "Inside the village, homes lined with Dathomirian Glyphs were carved into the side of the rock walls, wooden cages hung from the ceiling, and torches lit up the village." Did wooden cages hang from the ceiling of village homes, or from the ceiling of the village? If it's the former, that needs to be clarified. If it's the latter, then that also needs to be rewritten for clarity - because then the latter half of the sentence isn't really related to the first half at all. 1358 (Talk) 18:58, 10 April 2022 (UTC)
  • A sentence on Kestis' adventures on Dathomir would be an approriate addition to the currently-short introduction.
    • You now have two consecutive sentences that start with "While trying". 1358 (Talk) 20:08, 26 April 2022 (UTC)
  • No quotes for the Description section?
  • Do we know what Kestis is doing on Dathomir to begin with? Is the Tomb of Kujet his goal? If so, that piece of context should probably be moved to a slightly earlier point.
  • "He used the Force ability of Psychometry to learn the story of Malicos and the Nightbrothers." When does he do this? Before or after leaving the village? Right now it comes out of the blue. 1358 (Talk) 16:12, 18 April 2022 (UTC)
    • Addressed objections. There are no quotes detailing the description of the village. AmazinglyCool CIS roundel.svg (talk) 22:41, 18 April 2022 (UTC)
  • The Jedi crash occurring during the "waning era of the Galactic Republic" is currently intro-exclusive. Furthermore, can we really be sure that it occurred during the Republic's reign and not after the Proclamation of a New Order? 1358 (Talk) 17:36, 19 May 2022 (UTC)
    • Since the game just states that he was crash-landed while running from Order 66, dont know if it was during or after and thus I have edited the article to reflect this. AmazinglyCool CIS roundel.svg (talk) 02:01, 21 May 2022 (UTC)
Manoof
  • Spiders are infobox and intro exclusive Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:28, 8 March 2022 (UTC)
  • Missing the fact it had a drawbridge and a narrow stone door that could be closed to prevent intruders Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:28, 8 March 2022 (UTC)
  • Should note that Cal Entered the village by climbing into the dungeon via the underside of the bridge Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:28, 8 March 2022 (UTC)
  • There's a couple of force echoes and I think you can get more detail around Malicos' origin as revealed by those echoes. eg in the dungeon, some nightbrothers contemplated killing the captive Malicos for the number of brothers he killed but ultimately decided to take him to Viscus. Also that Merrin warned of caution when they went to investigate the crash, sensing danger.
  • Also should note that, as Kestis explored the village searching for a route back to the surface, he used this force power in X areas of the village. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:28, 8 March 2022 (UTC)
  • Should note that the nightbrothers engaged Kestis in battle and were defeated, "Kestis eventually found himself at the village, passing through and continuing his journey." gives the impression he just walked through unchallenged Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:28, 8 March 2022 (UTC)
  • Review note: I was going to object regarding the 1st ref but figured tweaking it myself would probably be less confusing. Just make sure you're ok with it. Watched some of the trailers and man got some chills, this was such a great game! Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:28, 8 March 2022 (UTC)
    • Adressed objections. I love this game as well and I can't wait for the sequel! AmazinglyCool CIS roundel.svg (talk) 21:44, 8 March 2022 (UTC)
      • You can mention that Cal gained insight to Malicos' capture using force Psychometry whilst in the village, maybe after defeating the brothers. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:36, 9 March 2022 (UTC)
  • Remember to avoid the first names of characters, you've a Taron in History's second paragraph Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:36, 9 March 2022 (UTC)
  • Mix up the references to the characters a bit, for example you use "Malicos" a few times in the second paragraph of the history section. Should also mention that Malicos fell to the dark side, so you can then say "the former jedi" or something similar Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:36, 9 March 2022 (UTC)
  • The last three sentences in that second paragraph also have a similar sentence structure (Malicos did a thing), can you mix it up a bit? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:36, 9 March 2022 (UTC)
  • The last paragraph of the History section is beefy, feel free to split it Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:36, 9 March 2022 (UTC)
  • If you move the first image to the left, you can probably get a second image to the right with the last paragraph in History. You've a few options like Cal, a spider, Malicos, nightbrothers, have a think what you want :) Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:36, 9 March 2022 (UTC)
Shayanomer
  • Please check if the village is featured in these videos and add to Sources/update BTS as necessary. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 15:25, 2 May 2022 (UTC)
    • I have checked, the village is pictured in none of the videos.
  • Date of creation is infobox exclusive. Not only that, another note is used for the same date and event. Please use the same note for both instances.
    • Article body still doesn't say the village was built in the same year.
      • Have now added that information.
  • "While trying to reach the Zeffo Tomb of Kujet, Jedi Padawan Cal Kestis found himself knocked into the depths of Dathomir. On a journey to make his way back to the tomb, he passed through the village and learned the story of Malicos and the Nightbrothers." Both of these sentences start with the same point, please reword.
  • The Force Echoes are optional content, meaning that {{Gamemechanics}} is warranted here. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 16:08, 2 May 2022 (UTC)
  • JFO doesn't provide any dates, so Order 66 taking place in the same year needs a note. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 08:49, 4 May 2022 (UTC)

Comments


Tagge protoblade

  • Nominated by: YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his) ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol.svg (talk) 17:43, 10 January 2022 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:CO, Wookieepedia:WookieeProject Bounty Hunters

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Support

  1. Interesting — Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol.svg 17:59, 28 April 2022 (UTC)

Object

Luca
Spooky
  • Is there any particular reason Board (by itself) is consistently capitalized after the initial usage of caps in the full term of Executive Board?
    • Should it not be? I assumed it would be (e.g. "Empire" for "Galactic Empire") -- YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his) linkWP:Chiss (talk) 18:47, 21 March 2022 (UTC)
      • Given it's a comic, it can't really be said whether Board is capitalized on it's own, I would think? Empire's different in the case of numerous sources capitalizing it on it's own, but say, a "board meeting" as a phrase is a pretty generic thing that's generally decapitalized.spookywillowwtalk 16:59, 22 March 2022 (UTC)
  • The third image's caption could mention that he's killed by said blade, though he's dying in the imagery, the image should be tied in.
  • I've noticed some dupe links and missing ones.
    • I removed dupes. What are missing? -- YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his) linkWP:Chiss (talk) 18:47, 21 March 2022 (UTC)
  • Context for Forthe. Seems unnecessary to have Silas' full company title twice as context as well, could that just be replaced with, "he pled for his life..."
    • Forthe context added
    • Re: Silas: done. -- YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his) linkWP:Chiss (talk) 18:47, 21 March 2022 (UTC)
  • With some wording rearranging, it might be nice to have (some very short) context that Silas himself was not the direct hirer of the mercenaries. While he certainly admitted to treachery, it reads as confusing without noting Crimson Dawn passed on the commission in the section where Boushh seems to attack the person employing him without recognition.spookywillowwtalk 02:10, 13 March 2022 (UTC)
  • Can part of that author statement about the blade's working be made into a quote?
    • Can I do that with Twitter? -- YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his) linkWP:Chiss (talk) 17:02, 28 March 2022 (UTC)
      • Yeah you can cite it to the archive link of the tweet.spookywillowwtalk 22:49, 29 March 2022 (UTC)
        • Done. Feel free to comment on or change the formatting. -- YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his) linkWP:Chiss (talk) 20:51, 8 April 2022 (UTC)
  • If you're going to mention the Legends connection, can it be known what source those originated from in that continuity?spookywillowwtalk 16:59, 22 March 2022 (UTC)
    • Uh, let me see about that. -- YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his) linkWP:Chiss (talk) 17:02, 28 March 2022 (UTC)
    • Done. Might need some tweaks to formatting, but the info is there. -- YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his) linkWP:Chiss (talk) 17:14, 28 March 2022 (UTC)
Ecks Dee
  • In the intro, the first two sentences both say that the protoblade was created; can we have some variation here?
    • Is "manufactured" better for the second? -- YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his) linkWP:Chiss (talk) 00:32, 24 April 2022 (UTC)
  • Some items in the introduction require slight context: Boussh, Acquisitor.
  • The article treason describes criminal action against a legitimate government (i.e. a legal/judicial term), not the general concept of betrayal. Is it really appropriate to link it here?
  • Please check your image caption punctuation. Complete sentences get a full stop.
  • What's the reason for stripping the default quote formatting in the Bts?
    • I assumed we treated real-world quotes differently at the time, but I've removed it. -- YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his) linkWP:Chiss (talk) 00:32, 24 April 2022 (UTC)
      • Please use single quotation marks (' ') for quotes within quotes, per the Manual of Style. 1358 (Talk) 20:51, 3 May 2022 (UTC)
  • Pardon me if this has been discussed already, but is there no applicable quote for the Description? 1358 (Talk) 15:35, 15 April 2022 (UTC)
    • I couldn't find one that didn't fit better under History. -- YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his) linkWP:Chiss (talk) 00:34, 24 April 2022 (UTC)
  • The Description section jumps back and forth quite a bit; for instance, you talk about its unpowered state in both the first and the second paragraph, and you discuss the gauntlet in both paragraphs, as well. See if you can make the section a bit more structured.
    • I tweaked it. Better, or should I do more? -- YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his) linkWP:Chiss (talk) 16:26, 23 May 2022 (UTC)
  • Third paragraph of Creation and testing: you first say the blade is too expensive and costly to mass-produce, then that the Empire will never buy it, and then again that it's costly to mass-produce. Please rewrite this for less repetition.
    • I removed the mention of Forthe, which seemed extraneous. Is it better now? -- YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his) linkWP:Chiss (talk) 16:26, 23 May 2022 (UTC)
  • Review note: quote attributions should generally be in present tense. 1358 (Talk) 17:50, 19 May 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Ithorian starfruit

  • Nominated by: Jade Moonstroller (talk) 11:04, 15 February 2022 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: My first GAN, so go easy on me :)
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  1. spookywillowwtalk 14:07, 19 March 2022 (UTC)
  2. Samonic Thrawns Chimaera.jpg (Talk) 10:43, 28 March 2022 (UTC)
  3. LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno.png (Talk) 05:17, 8 April 2022 (UTC)
  4. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 09:30, 24 May 2022 (UTC)

Object

Luca
  • Welcome to GAN! Nice work, just a few things:
  • Was Ben Skywalker Solo's Padawan? If that's the case, it can be pipelinked.
    • It was my understanding that the term 'Padawan' was not used after 19 BBY, but I can add that. Jade Moonstroller (talk) 16:01, 16 February 2022 (UTC)
      • After asking it on Discord, it looks like he can be considered a Padawan. LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno.png (Talk) 10:58, 19 February 2022 (UTC)
  • In the quote, the double "-" should be converted into an —
    • Even if the source includes the double dash? Jade Moonstroller (talk) 16:01, 16 February 2022 (UTC)
      • Yup, that's how old artciles and comics used to format em dashes. LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno.png (Talk) 10:58, 19 February 2022 (UTC)
  • Is there a relevant image for the article's body?
  • Please, give a look at my copy-edit. LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno.png (Talk) 14:26, 15 February 2022 (UTC)
  • Does this "Starfruit crème liqueur" deserve a page? LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno.png (Talk) 08:12, 26 March 2022 (UTC)
    • Well now, that's interesting. I suppose it couldn't hurt for it to have a page. This is the exact context in which it appears: "For a palate cleanser, Ithorian starfruit blended in a light creme liqueur." Also, looks like the dash above 'creme' is omitted. I'll need to adjust that on the article. I wonder how I missed that. Now, I believe it says 'Ithorian starfruit' because the starfruit is grown on Ithor and the other dishes put the planet of origin before the dish itself in the report. Jade Moonstroller (talk) 13:14, 27 March 2022 (UTC)
    • Page created. Starfruit creme liqueur. Jade Moonstroller (talk) 01:42, 30 March 2022 (UTC)
Shayanomer
  • Please ensure to manually fill out all relevant fields when using {{Cite_web}} (e.g. archive date if using archive.today, work, publisher etc.). See this to understand what I'm looking for. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 03:46, 18 February 2022 (UTC)
    • I don't understand. Do I need to archive that page again or what? Jade Moonstroller (talk) 06:36, 27 February 2022 (UTC)
      • Made an example edit for you, work field should be the Wookiepedia page, if unavailable then the wikipedia page and then the home page of the website if that's also unavailable. Quote added. archivedate just needs to be noted, it's top right of the webpage for archive.today. I didn't know this one either since I almost always use archive.org but it is noted on the template page. Let Shay or I know if you have any questions! Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 04:20, 28 February 2022 (UTC)
        • Okay, I hope that should suffice. Jade Moonstroller (talk) 03:01, 10 March 2022 (UTC)
          • Tweaked the references slightly, but good work. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 04:10, 11 March 2022 (UTC)
Spooky
  • The intro and description seem to have a lot of really short, choppy sentences. Mind giving it a one-over for flow?
  • It might be nice to specify that the bounty salad starfruit was a part of is a variant of the covado salad, tie in the quote a bit better contextually.
  • Technically, the fact that it was served in restaurants is intro-specific, as when Dex's Diner is mentioned, it's for Dex's context and not to say the establishment itself served it.
  • Would it suit to list Herd ship's bounty salad under dishes in the infobox?spookywillowwtalk 16:10, 8 March 2022 (UTC)
    • Eh, I don't know. Starfruit was just the garnish on that salad, not an essential ingredient. Jade Moonstroller (talk) 06:11, 17 March 2022 (UTC)
      • In doing a bit of research, it seems that the current precedent for food articles is that garnishes, and all ingredients that can be found, should be listed under dishes. Minor ingredients being added as an overall case can be seen in a lot of these older Dex's CAs, but also in more recent precedent such as Topato stew, which does add the bits referred to as garnish.spookywillowwtalk 00:48, 18 March 2022 (UTC)
Manoof
  • I hate to do this but I think this needs to be split between two articles based on the gem campaign: Starfruit and Ithorian starfruit, a type of starfruit. Reason being is that the gem campaign is worded such that the recipe there is a specific variety of starfruit, being Ithorian. The other mentions from what I can see don't specify this because it's insinuated by surrounding context to be Ithorian variety—Tiny death star has it in the Ithorian section, Obi-wan notes it specifically as Ithorian and Jettster mentions it in the context of Ithorian originated recipe. This could also explain the discrepancy in Betrayal if it isn't specified to be an Ithorian starfruit? Happy for others to weigh in especially ACs... Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 13:34, 9 April 2022 (UTC)
    • After reading through the body, I agree. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 03:52, 10 April 2022 (UTC)
      • I disagree, the body of the campaign lists the locale of the food before the food itself. It's an in-universe preparation for a dinner, so it advertises the foods in an appealing way. What if this page were just named Ithorian starfruit? Would that solve the "issues?" Jade Moonstroller (talk) 02:26, 11 April 2022 (UTC)
  • Ithorian starfruit are edible by other species based on those recipes but not listed or noted on this page. Hopefully this expands the article back up to GAN. I'd suggest noting the edible species in description per normal and history you can note that various species attended and were served the creme liquor. You should also note that it was served as a creme liquor in the infobox Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 04:29, 14 May 2022 (UTC)
    • I think that satisfies your requirements. Jade Moonstroller (talk) 16:47, 23 May 2022 (UTC)
      • Amazing great work!! Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 09:30, 24 May 2022 (UTC)
Macaroni
  • By my count, the body only has 152 words, so the introduction and sectioning will need to be removed, and this should instead be a CAN. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 20:35, 11 May 2022 (UTC)
    • You have got to be joking. This was originally a CAN at Starfruit, then expanded to GAN, and now I have to take it all back? Jade Moonstroller (talk) 05:56, 12 May 2022 (UTC)
      • Yes, it does happen sometimes that way. I'll make sure to review it as soon as you nominate though to try and get this process finished. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 21:34, 13 May 2022 (UTC)
        • Well, I added context for the Clone Wars, and then also Manoof gave some very helpful suggestions, so I think it'll still be good for a GAN. Jade Moonstroller (talk) 06:46, 14 May 2022 (UTC)
  • If the only thing that the ROTS novel says about it is its name, that's not enough to say it's from the planet Ithor.
  • The stuff about Dex's Diner and Coruscant should be able to be sourced to Dining at Dex's.
    • Isn't it? Or do you mean to remove the AOTC reference? Jade Moonstroller (talk) 16:47, 23 May 2022 (UTC)
      • Yeah, there's no need for it.
  • Since Dex compliments Ithorians' nature and then goes on to mention their starfruit, I think we can say that he was including the fruit in that statement, so that can be prosified in some way.
  • Context needed for the Gem of Alderaan.
    • I had some context, but I moved it closer to the name of the train. Jade Moonstroller (talk) 16:47, 23 May 2022 (UTC)
  • Can you add the 17 BBY date that's used on starfruit creme liqueur?
  • Since this article no longer directly shares a name with an OOU subject, mentioning the OOU fruit in the bts is probably unnecessary.
  • What makes you say that the game depicted it as "smooth?" I'm not seeing anything that would indicate that in the image. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 18:30, 22 May 2022 (UTC)
    • Well, the Ithorian starfruit is described as having ridges, so the fruit in the game doesn't, so I said it was smooth. It looks round. Jade Moonstroller (talk) 16:47, 23 May 2022 (UTC)

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Pax Chizzik

  • Nominated by: DFaceG (talk) 08:35, 21 March 2022 (UTC)
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  • Is Hanna Ding being the same age as Esterhazy notable info?
    • Info removed.DFaceG (talk) 08:26, 22 March 2022 (UTC)
  • " with it being stated that he was intelligent" Stated by whom? Fan26 (Talk) 04:34, 22 March 2022 (UTC)
    • Rephrased.DFaceG (talk) 08:26, 22 March 2022 (UTC)
  • "It was said that he was "born to play a dashing prince in some romantic epic of the last age." Said by who? Fan26 (Talk) 18:32, 3 April 2022 (UTC)
    • Rephrased. DFaceG (talk) 01:44, 4 April 2022 (UTC)
Spooky
  • The born c. 30 BBY is infobox exclusive.
  • Could references 3 and 4 not easily be merged into one by noting the competiton's dating after the knots as part of the novel's events? It seems repetitive to have the same, "this book occurs in 19 BBY according to..." in three references, when it could be done as two.spookywillowwtalk 23:10, 29 March 2022 (UTC)
  • The intro could use a bit of expansion given the overall article length.
    • Made an attempt at expanding it. DFaceG (talk) 18:45, 25 April 2022 (UTC)
  • In Appearances, the formatting of the audiobook should not include the parenthesis per precedent.
  • Does he have any dialogue that could be used as quotes for The Apprentice Tournament/After the tournament sections?
    • Added pretty much the only other quotes that he had of note. DFaceG (talk) 18:45, 25 April 2022 (UTC)
  • I'm feeling that the quote descriptions under Learning to be a Jedi and the P+T come across much more like image captions; perhaps those could be tweaked a bit to reflect who he's speaking to instead? Or to not be as sentence-like.
    • I personally disagree, because the descriptions provide context for when and why Pax had said those things and there is no reason for there to be an explicit disconnect between how image and quote captions are formatted. DFaceG (talk) 18:45, 25 April 2022 (UTC)
      • After the input gotten from when asked in Discord, it seems that the MOS states that the captions should not have periods at the end, and that other precedent would have the captions be presented in present tense. With the removal of the periods, that would solve my issue of them being sentence-like.spookywillowwtalk 19:23, 25 April 2022 (UTC)
  • "He was regarded as a natural leader.." - regarded by who?
    • Rephrased. DFaceG (talk) 18:45, 25 April 2022 (UTC)
  • In reading the P+T I think a lot of that content might be a better fit for a Skills and abilities section.
  • He should have an equipment section to reflect the lightsaber he wielded.
    • There isn't substantial information regarding the lightsaber. We know only that he used one. The section would be a brief sentence and nothing else. DFaceG (talk) 18:45, 25 April 2022 (UTC)
      • It seems like even if an Equipment section is short for Jedi, it's still denoted in it's own section because it doesn't change the fact that it is equipment that was wielded by the character. Nim Pianna comes to mind; can pull other examples if you'd like.spookywillowwtalk 19:23, 25 April 2022 (UTC)
  • The article should avoid the instances of contractions (spotted a wouldn't offhandedly).
  • {{CSWECite}} should be implemented.spookywillowwtalk 09:32, 25 April 2022 (UTC)
Luca
  • Context for Coruscant is missing.
    • Added. DFaceG (talk) 09:32, 12 May 2022 (UTC)
      • It's still missing in the intro. LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno.png (Talk) 17:45, 20 May 2022 (UTC)
  • The last sentence of the first biography paragraph isn't clear. Is it missing a "during" or something similar?
  • It is not clear to me how the quote under "Learning to be a Jedi" relates to the paragraph.
    • It entails how Chizzik applied what he learned in his training. I'll rephrase the caption to make this more clear. DFaceG (talk) 09:32, 12 May 2022 (UTC)
  • Additionally, the image next to the paragraph could/should be moved below since it does not have a connection to it.
  • The third reference could be simplified to something like this: "According to The Essential Reader's Companion, the events of Yoda: Dark Rendezvous, which include the Apprentice Tournament, occur in 19 BBY. As Enwandung-Esterhazy having assisted Chizzik in practicing the knots is described as having occurred prior to the events of the novel, it must have occurred by 19 BBY."
  • You use many pronouns in the second paragraph of the "The Apprentice Tournament" paragraph. It would be nice if you replaced a few of them with the names of the two Jedi.
    • Attempted to fix. DFaceG (talk) 09:32, 12 May 2022 (UTC)
  • A touch of context for the Agricultural Corps would be nice.
  • Since you already state that in Equipment, I see no need to say that he wielded "a green-bladed training lightsaber." in the body.
  • "Chizzik acts with honor" is this stated by the source? Otherwise, I'd suggest rewording it and using a more neutral sentence since honor can be subjective.
  • Similar reasoning applies to "egotistical" and "enormous spirit and charm."
    • Rephrased the former, but the latter is stated by the source. DFaceG (talk) 09:32, 12 May 2022 (UTC)
  • "Scout" is intro-exclusive and should be either reflected in the body or removed from the intro.
  • (Review note) Please, make sure to be ok with my copy-edit. LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno.png (Talk) 15:25, 10 May 2022 (UTC)
    • Looks good. DFaceG (talk) 09:32, 12 May 2022 (UTC)

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Yeet

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  1. A nostalgic meme. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 13:13, 26 March 2022 (UTC)
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  • Make sure the capitalization of Strike is consistent.
  • You don't need to have referencing in the intro, but you're missing refs in the first paragraph of the body.
  • Can the article be dated?
  • There's enough room for an image of a related subject. Fan26 (Talk) 02:11, 22 March 2022 (UTC)
YEEEET
  • "Kara Xoo was the Tempest Runner of Kara Xoo's Tempest." Besides the fact its stating the obvious, it's not got any mention of Yeet. I would be better to just say "Yeet's tempest" or something like that. Also it's the only mention of the title Tempest Runner in the whole article.
  • Context required for Avon Starros and children, Poisoned Barb, Dalna in the intro and Hynestia in the bio.
  • Got a source for that date?
  • "first appeared" is only used if there's multiple appearances (aside from the audiobooks), so "first" is not needed here.
  • "Sometime during 230 BBY, after arriving on the planet Dalna, the temporary stronghold of Kara Xoo's Tempest, Squib, a strike in the Tempest, entered the cargo hold of the Poisoned Barb, the flagship of Kara Xoo, the leader of the tempest, and pointed a blaster at the children inside, who had been kidnapped from their respective planets, ordering them to follow Yeet off the ship." Riiiight lets dissect this one. There's context for everything, that's good. Buuut, you've made so many clauses for it that it's just convoluted. So what I'm thinking is you move Kara Xoo's introduction up to that of the tempest and introduce them both together like "the tempest led by the Quarren Kara Xoo". With the children, you introduce them as "the" children as if we already know about. I'd say introduce them as something like "a group of kidnapped children" or "a group of children who had been…". And finally, you could just say "the strike Squib" to get rid of the extra clause. You contextualise stuff with clauses quite a lot so I, personally, would recommend trying to avoid (if there's a way to, of course) that just to keep the sentences less convoluted with parts. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 19:36, 24 March 2022 (UTC)
  • So Yeet's birth is dated to by the one time they appear. Does the book actually mention their birth? Otherwise the birthdate field shouldn't be filled. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 01:21, 25 March 2022 (UTC)
  • Most of Yeet's physical description is infobox exclusive. They can be mentioned down in a Personality and traits section.
  • Are their any quotes aimed at Yeet in the book? If so, they can go in the article. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 01:24, 25 March 2022 (UTC)
Spooky
  • I think there's quotes from the novel that could be added to the sections that don't have one. The one about tragically losing recruits in particular might suit the P+T nicely.
  • The novel describes her hair as ropey, which can be included.
    • added in p+t
  • The fact that Yeet had lost recruits prior to the Starros incident should be introduced in the article prior to the 230 BBY events, since she would've had to have lost them by or prior to that point.
    • added
  • It's unnecessary to repeat her gender and species both in the bio and P+T; should pick one to keep and remove the other.
    • removed from P+T
  • I believe the image could be moved up a paragraph so that it doesn't impact the P+T/BtS text.
    • donzo
  • I'm seeing varying missing links and over-used commas, please do a run through and check.
  • My copy-edit - for the future, it's good to be mindful for the capitalization in sector headings such as the P+T.spookywillowwtalk 09:51, 25 April 2022 (UTC)
Ecks
  • Image captions that constitute full sentences should get a full stop (period).
    • added
  • Just checking: is it intentional that you reference this entire part to the date reference? If you were only intending to source the date, then you should move the Mission to Disaster reference to just after "recruits". "According to Nihil Scientist Doctor Zadina Mkampa, Yeet had a tragic history of losing recruits. Sometime in 230 BBY,"
    • fixed
  • You have consecutive references to Mission to Disaster in the Personality and traits section. If the entire paragraph can be sourced to the same source, a reference at the very end will suffice. 1358 (Talk) 13:43, 22 May 2022 (UTC)
  • I think it'd be good to establish in the intro why the children were kidnapped. Right now it just comes out of the blue.
    • added
  • "On Dalna, Yeet and the other strikes began claiming children for their respective strikes" Not sure I understand this. Strikes are claiming children for their respective strikes? Does "strike" have another meaning or what is this supposed to say? Same issue seems to exist in the body as well. 1358 (Talk) 20:22, 27 May 2022 (UTC)
    • okay this is tricky. a strike is a person (the lowest rank in tje nihil) and also a group (the lowest ranking unit in the Nihil). there really isnt an easy way to diffrenciate in context, so i removed one mention of the strike (individual), if that works skywalkerZIARA (talk) 05:40, 28 May 2022 (UTC)

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1933

  • Nominated by: Erebus Chronus (Talk) 21:22, 22 March 2022 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Not WP:CIS unfortunately, but still pretty good :P
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  • The second paragraph under Capturing Theed reads that 1933 was present for the events of the capturing and that isn't depicted in the movie, as far as I know. NBDani (talk) 18:17, 24 March 2022 (UTC)
    • What do you mean? He was deployed along with the rest of the droid army. Doesn't have to be depicted since 2163 says that he was part of the invasion force.
  • "the battle droid was destroyed by Jedi Master Qui-Gon Jinn after they entered the hangar, which allowed them to board the starship and escape the planet with Queen Padmé Amidala and her entourage." This should be reworded as it appears the droid enetered the hangar. NBDani (talk) 18:17, 24 March 2022 (UTC)
Fan
  • "which allowed them to board the starship and escape the planet" It should clarify who 'them' is. So far in this particular sentence only the droid and Qui-Gon have been mentioned (one destroyed, the other male), and Padme and the handimaidens haven't been introduced until the next clause. This should be reworded. Fan26 (Talk) 17:09, 25 April 2022 (UTC)
Macaroni
  • It's a little unclear who "he" is here - Jinn or the droid, I'm assuming - "where he was shortly ordered to halt by 2163". JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 20:50, 11 May 2022 (UTC)
Ecks
  • Is it really relevant to this particular droid that Sidious was behind the invasion plan? Seems like mentioning Gunray would suffice.
  • "As a result, the Federation was able to capture the planet's capital of Theed, leading to its subsequent occupation and capture of its citizens." Two instances of the "capture" here, maybe reword one of them.
  • "After entering the hangar, Jinn steadily approached[4] 1933 and the other droids,[2] causing a brief moment of uncertainty between the droids as the Jedi assumed their positions,[4] where Jinn was shortly ordered to halt by 2163." The last clause here doesn't really connect well to the rest of the sentence; where exactly is Jinn ordered to halt? Maybe the clause could be moved to the next sentence where you talk about Jinn being halted, as well.
  • "However, before the droids could follow their orders and raise their blasters, Jinn activated his lightsaber and destroyed 2163, resulting in 1933's death in the Jedi's swing." If I'm understanding this correctly, 1933 and 2163 were killed in the same swing, right? If so, you could simply say "destroyed 2163 and 1933 in his swing", thus removing that last, somewhat choppy clause. 1358 (Talk) 17:42, 20 May 2022 (UTC)
  • One more: you basically say twice that droids were deployed to the surface, in consecutive sentences. Can we reword to remove this redundancy? 1358 (Talk) 20:34, 27 May 2022 (UTC)
Ayrehead
  • Your current wording says that 1933 was used in the invasion after the droid army landed on the planet, but I'd say the landing was part of the invasion as well so could you reword it to reflect this? Ayrehead02 (talk) 07:29, 21 May 2022 (UTC)
    • This should be fixed.
  • The article suggests that the droids were stationed to guard the starship before the pilots were captured and sent to the hangar, which I don't think you can source to the film and I don't remember seeing in any other source. Ayrehead02 (talk) 07:29, 21 May 2022 (UTC)
    • Changed some wording in both paragraphs there.
      • Still reads a bit odd to me, I'd change the start of the second paragraph to something like "The droids under 2163's command also guarded several members..." or something similar. We want to say they were guarding both things without implying one came after the other. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:23, 22 May 2022 (UTC)
  • Since you use it as the subsection heading you should mention that 1933 was beheaded in the body as well. Ayrehead02 (talk) 07:29, 21 May 2022 (UTC)
    • Is that right?
  • Precedent is apparently to source the name of Trade Federation Script to the film itself as we do for aurebesh. Ayrehead02 (talk) 07:29, 21 May 2022 (UTC)

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Philap Bygar

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"A" Squad

  • Nominated by: DFaceG (talk) 12:16, 25 March 2022 (UTC)
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  1. Nice work. Erebus Chronus (Talk) 17:45, 2 May 2022 (UTC)
  2. Nicely done, DFaceG! — Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol.svg 20:02, 11 May 2022 (UTC)

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Spooky
  • I think the last sentence of the intro was meant to be finished with something; is partial.spookywillowwtalk 17:30, 27 March 2022 (UTC)
Shayanomer
Erebus
  • Context for Sarrish.
  • Similarly to how star system and sector articles are written, you can remove the mention of it being a squad per its name. So it would become '"A" Squad served under...' or something similar.
  • Infoboxes don't indent asterisks more than twice, so the affiliations should only say Galactic Republic and 212th Attack Battalion.
  • You could probably say that the squad's phase II armor featured yellow markings.
  • The BTS should include Dark Horse Comics as the comics' publisher. It also doesn't need to include "first," since it only appears in one source. Erebus Chronus (Talk) 06:04, 13 April 2022 (UTC)

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Stalnus

  • Nominated by: Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 04:06, 26 March 2022 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Couldn't find any credit for the image - book notes "LFL" indicating it came from the archives, such as concept art from the OT.
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Unidentified clone trooper (Thrawn)

  • Nominated by: YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his) linkWP:Chiss (talk) 18:58, 29 March 2022 (UTC)
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Samonic
  • For now, I've found the following:
    • Please strike this bullet or mark it as a review note so Jocasta doesn't smack me :P -- YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his) linkWP:Chiss (talk) 20:25, 8 April 2022 (UTC)
  • I would say his early life should be covered in the introduction, other clone trooper status articles do so, I know we know little of his early life, but it should still be covered.
    • Per Discord, precedent is to not do this, at least for GA-sized articles. -- YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his) linkWP:Chiss (talk) 21:04, 8 April 2022 (UTC)
  • It would be nice to add that the Imperial forces retreated at the end of the introduction. (it also gives some context on how Thrawn left)Samonic Thrawns Chimaera.jpg (Talk) 07:33, 30 March 2022 (UTC)
    • Not sure the relevance to this article (but I could probably be convinced)
    • Beyond that, I'm not sure how to incorporate it. -- YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his) linkWP:Chiss (talk) 20:25, 8 April 2022 (UTC)
Spooky
  • Though open to hear about the context of it if there is any, the quote presented in personality and traits seems not relevant to the article. It doesn't really have anything unique about the trooper's personality—seems a non-notable exclamation that doesn't need to be included.
  • If the missing comlink is to be mentioned, it'd make sense to mention the rest of what he stole too in that incident - (referring to novel) "Unfortunately, his blaster, power packs, and concussion grenades had."
    • Thrawn used the comlink, but not the others if my memory serves me right. How would you incorporate mention of them? -- YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his) linkWP:Chiss (talk) 19:14, 20 April 2022 (UTC)
      • Seems like the novel's chapter one details that Thrawn was knocking out perimeter troopers with the concussion grenades and causing other terror to the officers with the power packs, and as a result this trooper (and his squad) were sent to go subdue the Chiss when Barris' men failed. Though on rereading the chapter, it also seems like this specific trooper is said to be holding a blaster rifle as part of the ones sent out (which does match the comic's depiction) and could thus be in equipment.spookywillowwtalk 19:44, 20 April 2022 (UTC)
  • I might be completely missing in my read-overs but—where exactly in Thrawn or the comic specify that the this trooper was a clone? Or that he was wearing clone trooper armor (largely, not used by 16 BBY anyways especially given it's linking to Generation One armor there) instead of stormtrooper armor? I've seen them consistently called a stormtrooper, but not much else.spookywillowwtalk 07:20, 8 April 2022 (UTC)
    • I infer that he's a clone stormtrooper because of his clone trooper armor, yes. I believe Editoronthewiki was the first to do so. -- YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his) linkWP:Chiss (talk) 20:25, 8 April 2022 (UTC)
      • My main query was to question—what defines the depicted armor as not just stormtrooper armor and definitely clone trooper armor? From what I can see it visually looks exactly like stormtrooper armor (which given, is based on Phase II); and the novel text also calls the individuals searching only by stormtroopers, referring to the CW era stuff as mostly bygone relic. In canon, most of the clones had been phased out by this year given it's so late into the Imperial Era - I'm not doubting that there may be some cases of Imperial stormtroopers assumed to be clones especially in the initial period before the armor types were transferred and the clones were shifted out, but I'd like to hear more about the proof behind this trooper being a clone, specifically.spookywillowwtalk 20:37, 8 April 2022 (UTC)
        • All of the troopers on Thrawn's exile planet have helmets that are distinctly Phase II clone trooper armor and not stormtrooper armor. See e.g. File:CaptiveThrawn.png or File:Unidentified-planet-Thrawns-exile.png for examples. -- YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his) linkWP:Chiss (talk) 20:54, 8 April 2022 (UTC)
        • The black spots over the eyes are separate in stormtrooper armor, but in P2CT helmets, they connect and go down. -- YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his) linkWP:Chiss (talk) 20:55, 8 April 2022 (UTC)
          • In that case—only referencing to Thrawn 1 for that wouldn't be enough since; neither of the article's sources defines what Phase II armor is in prose or it's characteristics to then make the assumption off that trait that this character must be a clone. The reference note in turn would then need to source an entry/data of some kind (probably from USW or something) that details the characteristics of standard clone trooper armor, and state that it's the armor depicted in the comic, which would then make the character a clone, and not a normal trooper.spookywillowwtalk 21:02, 8 April 2022 (UTC)
            • I gave it a stab. Is this adequate? -- YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his) linkWP:Chiss (talk) 19:14, 20 April 2022 (UTC)
Erebus

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Force harmony

  • Nominated by: Goodmind (talk) 18:47, 31 March 2022 (UTC)
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Shayanomer
  • Last BTS paragraph should be eliminated, it's original research.
  • Not sure what's going on with Ref 13, it's a relic of a bygone era. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 03:52, 5 April 2022 (UTC)
Luca
  • Some paragraphs could use breaks.
    • Which ones? --Goodmind (talk) 10:57, 17 April 2022 (UTC)
      • The second one in "Biography" and possibly the "Applications" one. LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno.png (Talk) 18:09, 21 April 2022 (UTC)
        • I assume you meant "Description." Fixed. --Goodmind (talk) 08:23, 23 April 2022 (UTC)
  • Are there no additional images that can be added?
  • I've never seen {{C}} templates being used like that in "Sources," unless there is a policy or precendent that I'm unaware of, please remove them.
    • Seeing as we forbid page and chapter references, doing the same for section references is only natural as well. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 03:43, 14 April 2022 (UTC)
    • Removed --Goodmind (talk) 10:57, 17 April 2022 (UTC)
  • Linking to articles' subsections should be avoided.
    • Not sure that's possible here --Goodmind (talk) 10:57, 17 April 2022 (UTC)
      • Force sense/Legends has its own article. I'd say that, for the other two, you could link the Force power/Legends page once, and leave the other one without a link. LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno.png (Talk) 18:09, 21 April 2022 (UTC)
        • Force sense would be a specific power, not an aspect, and just linking to the Force power page would be weird --Goodmind (talk) 08:20, 23 April 2022 (UTC)
          • Well, for several reasons, including the fact that sections headers' names can be changed at any time, we should avoid pipelinking to sections. I don't understand how "linking to the Force power page would be weird," to be honest. LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno.png (Talk) 17:52, 1 May 2022 (UTC)
            • I don't think these sections would be changed any time soon --Goodmind (talk) 13:47, 4 May 2022 (UTC)
              • Imperators II created different pages for them. LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno.png (Talk) 08:42, 14 May 2022 (UTC)
  • The "Area" information is infobox-exclusive. LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno.png (Talk) 05:42, 8 April 2022 (UTC)
    • Fixed --Goodmind (talk) 10:57, 17 April 2022 (UTC)
      • They are now italicized in the body but not in the infobox. Which way is correct? LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno.png (Talk) 18:09, 21 April 2022 (UTC)
        • That seems to be how it's done on other Force power pages --Goodmind (talk) 08:20, 23 April 2022 (UTC)
          • Is there a satus precedent for this? I can't find it. LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno.png (Talk) 17:52, 1 May 2022 (UTC)
            • There are no status precedent for this, it's either infobox-exclusive or missing the Force power classification altogether ----Goodmind (talk) 13:46, 4 May 2022 (UTC)
              • If the source italicizes them, then they should be italicized in both the body and the infobox, otherwise they shouldn't be italicized in either. LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno.png (Talk) 08:05, 14 May 2022 (UTC)
                • And Imp fixed this too. LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno.png (Talk) 08:42, 14 May 2022 (UTC)

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Salline/Legends

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  • "to attack the Rebels at 0200." I assume this is in military time? Is there no way to further contextualise the timeframe in relation to when the rebels seized the city? Fan26 (Talk) 15:09, 4 April 2022 (UTC)
    • Added that it was around sunrise, but there's nothing else I can add. VergenceScatter (talk) 15:58, 4 April 2022 (UTC)
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  • Is it worth including either Government center (Salline) or Guildhead's Way in the |interest= template field? Seemed to be a primary Imperial objective to take that center of authority out.
  • Basing off the precedent of Imthitill seems like it may suit to have the |location= infobox field as Coastline or similar, since at least part of the city was on the coast, and it was designated as a port overall?
  • Dating things:
    • "As a result, between 2 and O BBY, Salline was occupied by the Alliance to Restore the Republic. The Galactic Empire immediately responded..." This reads slightly oddly, as it's saying the Empire immeadiately responded, while just prior saying that it's been occupied for a span of two years, which would make it not so. Perhaps suitable to add some form of 'at some point between' to refer to those years?
      • The city wasn't occupied for two years, the occupation occured during that time. Hopefully clarified.
    • In doing some cursory research, I noticed that there's The Promotion of Lieutenant Veers and Star Wars: Empire at War (which noted on Veers' page as documenting his promotion to Colonel). With those details, it seems like the date for the Salline pacification could be potentially narrowed to at some point between 1 BBY and 0 BBY; as it had to be while he was colonel.
    • To that end as well; unless a contradicting source says Veers was a general at the time, the Imperial Handbook has the report as while he's a colonel, which should be reflected in the article's prose.
      • Added.
        • Seems like the article still reflects that he was a general during the pacification; and the TEA ref registers as broken.spookywillowwtalk 20:22, 8 April 2022 (UTC)
          • Goddammit I fixed the intro but not the body. Should be good now. VergenceScatter (talk) 20:26, 8 April 2022 (UTC)
    • Battle of Yavin can be dated.
      • Done.
  • Would it be worth making an article for Chandrila's Imperial governor mentioned in the History?
    • There technically is one. However, I didn't link it as around that time Chandrila was ruled by Gerald Weizel. Since there's no reason to believe that it was him or someone else, it would be misleading to link it.
  • Given Mothma's homeworld is Chandrila and she was to some degree part of it's politics, it might have enough relevance to include the fact that she later obtained a copy of the handbook and wrote said note, so that it also wouldn't have to be linked in the quote caption.
    • Done
  • Given the article length, the intro could stand to be explanded slightly.
    • Done.
  • The detail of the Rebels fortifying the government center, if to be included, should precede the mentions of Veers going to attack it—as it had been done at least by the time he got there.
    • Done.
  • Was information on who the manual was intended to be distributed to ever noted? 'to its officers' or something, (if it has it; just to check).
    • Yes.
  • Can Salline being ruled by a governor be sourced to Strongholds of Resistance or was that reference intended to only specify what Chandrilan House was?
    • Apologies, was unclear; Salline itself does not appear to be in SoR itself, given the article only lists the handbook as a source. If SoR says all Chandrilan cities were ruled by a governor part of the Chandrilan House, then a separate ref note should state that since the handbook reveals Salline is a Chandrilan city, it must be ruled by a governor of that body due to the information about such cities in SoR—rather than just citing it to SoR without context.spookywillowwtalk 23:48, 8 April 2022 (UTC)
    • All cities on Chandrila are ruled by a governor.
  • I'm not terribly familar with Legends precedent on it but—should 'Pacification' be capitalized in the intro/quote caption, when referring to Pacification of Salline? Given that Veer's report titling is in all caps, it doesn't seem to indicate that Pacification itself needs to be so (in prose, specifically). Could be wrong on that, but thought to check.
    • Seems like a proper name to me.
  • I think it's worth noting that Salline was located near an ocean in the description (to specify that it's that rather than a lake/river/other body of water, since those have coastlines).
    • noted
  • It says hit by missile batteries—unless mentioned elsewhere, I'm not sure batteries would be accurate to say, as it's not in Veers' report, and doesn't resemble Missile Battery or anything closely.
    • The text specifically says missile batteries. I can send you the image on Discord if you want.
  • Seems like you're missing some varying links; I nicked a few, but it might be worth going over it again.spookywillowwtalk 06:29, 8 April 2022 (UTC)
Shayanomer
  • I don't think Empire At War supports the 1 BBY date.
    • Hmm, working on it
      • As discussed on Discord, the old note is the best we can do. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 17:29, 23 May 2022 (UTC)
  • I've removed the context for the book from the BTS since you've already established that in the body. I hope you're fine with that. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 09:27, 14 May 2022 (UTC)

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  • Hopefully I got the level of detail on the Pacification of Salline right, but if I need to add or remove anything please let me know. VergenceScatter (talk) 00:14, 4 April 2022 (UTC)


Danta Belissa

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Trax Bonkik

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  • The intro is longer than half of the Biography. Even FAs have shorter intros by comparison. Please trim the fat. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 10:08, 14 May 2022 (UTC)
    • Hopefully I fixed now. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 14:10, 14 May 2022 (UTC)
      • Personally, I think all the important details can be summarized in a single paragraph. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 18:48, 17 May 2022 (UTC)
  • Are "Podrace" and "Podracer" supposed to be capitalized like that?
  • Would like the date reference converted into a note mentioning the podrace.
    • Podrace/Podracer capitalized per the source. Fixed date note. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 19:17, 17 May 2022 (UTC)
  • Copy-edit. Made some presentation changes, hope you're okay with them. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 19:11, 17 May 2022 (UTC)
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  • Context for Rodia is missing.
  • It is unclear to me, if Pagalies later freed the two brothers.
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  • Please, make sure to be ok with my copy-edit and nice work! LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno.png (Talk) 14:17, 24 May 2022 (UTC)
    • Rodia context added. Source material doesn't specify anything beyond what I ended the article with. Copy-edit is ok for me. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 15:15, 24 May 2022 (UTC)

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Kwilaan restaurant

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  • "Signal Interruption is designed to be completed with the playable characters from the Invasion of Theed Adventure Game in the role of the agents hired by Daal, and the first two encounters take place inside the restaurant, using pieces from the roleplaying game." Not entirely sure what "pieces" is referring to and which clause it's related to. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 09:54, 14 May 2022 (UTC)
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  • "door pieces"? Is that meant to be "door tokens" or "door miniatures"?
  • "This article follows the description of events provided in scenario." — not sure what info exactly is this sentence supposed to convey, because every article on Wookieepedia is supposed to follow descriptions of events provided in sources where possible. :P Imperators II(Talk) 10:36, 26 May 2022 (UTC)

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Lah Zhima

  • Nominated by: JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 21:13, 14 April 2022 (UTC)
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Chiss Ascendancy's northeast-zenith sector

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  1. A pleasure to review a longer Chiss article. I hope to see more from you. Great work.— Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol.svg 18:04, 27 April 2022 (UTC)
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  • "During the Around 18 BBY, as part of the Chiss Ascendancy crisis, two skirmishes occurred in the sector." Please clean that up.
  • "And the second was a sneak attack on the Orisson as it was entering the system in order to prove that the Dasklo families where manufacturing fake warships." Could you establish who made the sneak attack?
  • Description and history are missing several links. Everything that can be linked should be linked at the first mention (In the intro, and in the body).
  • Context for Grayshrike, Orisson, Dasklo family, Core name for Clarr'ivl'exow, Clarr'os'culry and context for Jixtus. See Kilji homeland for an example on Jixtus' context if you wish.
  • Is "a Grysk warship" linking to the intended model? I don't think the same model from Thrawn: Alliances and Thrawn: Treason appeared in the Star Wars: The Ascendancy Trilogy at all.
  • Hyperspace should not be capitalized.
  • (Review note) — Use the "highlight duplicate links" tool to highlight duplicate links.— Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol.svg 16:57, 16 April 2022 (UTC)
    • I think I got that all. How do I use the "highlight duplicate links" tool? --ThrawnChiss7 (talk) 22:41, 16 April 2022 (UTC)
      • Go here, and click on "Highlight duplicate links in articles," then, in your toolbar (bottom right) click in "Customize" and add the duplicate links highlighting tool.— Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol.svg 08:16, 17 April 2022 (UTC)
      • Context is still missing (intro), links too. (Examples: Sector, ornfra system, Nine)Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol.svg 08:19, 17 April 2022 (UTC)
        • Forgot that you needed to link in the body and the head; links are in both now and context for Jixtus, the Orrisson the Grayshike and core names for Clarr'ivl'exow and Clarr'os'culry have been added.—ThrawnChiss7 (talk) 19:45, 18 April 2022 (UTC)
  • Please remove the double reference in the infobox (Stations parameter), and format it correctly. Also, remove "temporarily". Would be: "One asteroid missile platform (c. 18 BBY)[2]"Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol.svg 08:21, 17 April 2022 (UTC)
    • The references has been removed and formatted correctly.—ThrawnChiss7 (talk) 19:45, 18 April 2022 (UTC)
      • Good work.
  • Lacks images (1 would be enough, such as the CEDF's logo) — Lacks quotes, you could add one for each skirmish or for Ornfra.
  • (Review note) Make sure you are OK with my copy-edit (this).— Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol.svg 09:16, 23 April 2022 (UTC)
Imp
  • I don't believe the section break is actually necessary in the current version of the article. Each of the subsections is just a single paragraph, which usually looks on the short side, plus it gives the impression that the subsectioning is done merely to add more quotes.
  • Please double-check the quote punctuation. Imperators II(Talk) 21:31, 24 April 2022 (UTC)
    • I removed the section breaks and fixed the quote punctuation. -ThrawnChiss7 (talk) 01:26, 27 April 2022 (UTC)
  • "They destroyed the Grysk freighter" — who is "they"? The Defense Fleet or the Clarr family? Can you clarify?
  • And you mention "the Grysk freighter" although you previously only mention the Grysk Hegemony, so the freighter that by this point in the article is supposedly familiar to the reader in fact isn't. Please revise.
  • "to prove that the Dasklo family was manufacturing fake starships" — er, can we get a bit of further context for this? What exactly does "fake starships" mean in this case, and why would a Chiss Patriarch need someone to prove this? Imperators II(Talk) 15:44, 10 May 2022 (UTC)
  • In the body, you describe the first skirmish in Ornfra as involving four parties; in the intro, you just mention two of them. Please address this discrepancy. Imperators II(Talk) 09:11, 13 May 2022 (UTC)
    • The discrepancy has been resolved. -ThrawnChiss7 (talk) 00:09, 15 May 2022 (UTC)

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Marwigo

  • Nominated by: JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 17:38, 20 April 2022 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Extra sources sent it over the CA limit
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Unidentified Killik Sith warrior

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  2. As always, I read "Kilji" instead of "Killik" :P — Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol.svg 18:26, 29 April 2022 (UTC)
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Sister

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  1. Very well done.— Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol.svg 07:07, 26 April 2022 (UTC)
  2. Fantastic work. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 10:09, 29 April 2022 (UTC)
    Beautiful work. I'm so excited to see her shine through your work. Go Spooky! NBDani (talk) 01:00, 3 May 2022 (UTC)
  3. Very proud of this article, even prouder to see this become a good article. Great work. --Vitus InfinitusTalk 19:37, 3 May 2022 (UTC)
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Fan stans our trans trooper queen
  • Just wanna make sure you're cool with this copy-edit. Fan26 (Talk) 17:14, 23 April 2022 (UTC)
Dani
  • "Saddened by the deaths resulting from the battle, Sister arranged the helmets of her fallen comrades beneath a tree as a memorial." Should this specify it was clone deaths, or even specifically her brothers, since there were nonClones in the army? NBDani (talk) 15:32, 29 April 2022 (UTC)
  • Should we specify Jango as a male? NBDani (talk) 15:32, 29 April 2022 (UTC)
  • For the BTS, should drawing of Sticks be linked to the art in question? See Lando's BTS, 5th para, for an example. NBDani (talk) 15:32, 29 April 2022 (UTC)
    • It's an interesting concept - but is there SA precedent for linking to images in body text? It seems a bit odd to me quite honestly, more of a thing that has little relevance to Sister in this case when it'd be covered in the other character's Behind the scenes.spookywillowwtalk 23:58, 2 May 2022 (UTC)

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  • More a suggestion than an objection as I think it's fine either way - The intro quote feels like a retelling of history and I think belongs in Biography and the Biography quote feels more of a quote that capture's her identity, something I feel belongs in the Intro. What are your thoughts on switching the two? NBDani (talk) 15:36, 23 April 2022 (UTC)
  • The page will need updating per Brotherhood Lewisr (talk) 17:40, 10 May 2022 (UTC)


Maxet Institute of Technology

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Althon

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Luca
  • Do we really need that note to say "that year?"
    • I think it's helpful since the previous bit about the date only mentions an event that took place by that year.
  • "The governor then tripled the amount for their disobedience," I assume he tripled the amount of taxes they had to pay. If that is the case, what would you say about specifying it?
    • Done.
  • The first sentence of the third paragraph is pretty long; could you maybe divide it into two smaller sentences?
    • Done.
  • The full release date for the comic is needed in the BTS. LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno.png (Talk) 08:02, 1 May 2022 (UTC)

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Moggee (second nomination)

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  • If there are three members of Moggee's species, why don't we have a page?
  • You don't specify his species on the body.Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol.svg 15:16, 29 April 2022 (UTC)
    • There is a page I had it linked in intro and infobox just not body.--Liverpool92Ackbar HS.jpg 02:39, 8 May 2022 (UTC)
      • Sorry for the delay.— Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol.svg 19:58, 11 May 2022 (UTC)
Brahhee
  • The intro and bio, which cover the same thing, have less than 100 words difference in word count, considering that the intro is 174 words. I think the intro should be trimmed a bit for that reason. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 12:51, 24 May 2022 (UTC)
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  • Species only needs to be mentioned once, not in both Bio and P+T.
  • The image caption should indicate which one is Moggee. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 17:58, 24 May 2022 (UTC)

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Time of Suffering/Legends

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  • I don't see a need to mention dating in the bts.
  • {{ID}} should be used in the Appearances and Sources sections. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 21:00, 25 May 2022 (UTC)

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  • We know that Naboo joined the Republic during this period but I'm hesitant to add that to this article, given that no sources have mentioned both events in tandem Commander Code-8 Hello There! 01:26, 30 April 2022 (UTC)
  • Searched for a long time but I cannot find the relevant quest title for the Star Wars Galaxies information, so I've sourced it to the character instead Commander Code-8 Hello There! 08:18, 18 May 2022 (UTC)


Cosmic Turbine

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Freedom's Run

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  1. Love me an MC80. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 12:10, 9 May 2022 (UTC)
  2. Run for it! :P Nicely done. — Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol.svg 21:34, 14 May 2022 (UTC)

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  • I don't think we need another source to say it's a "Star Cruiser" since you already established that it is an "MC80 Star Cruiser."
  • It would be nice if you specified that the GCW was fought against the Empire already in the first sentence of History.
  • Rather than: "Shortly prior to the attack on the Outer Rim's Moddell sector moon Endor[2] in 4 ABY,[4] against the Galactic Empire" what would you say about something like: "Shortly prior to the Battle of Endor, a moon in the Outer Rim Territories,[2] fought in 4 ABY[4] against the Galactic Empire, […]"
  • I don't understand how the last sentence in "History" is relevant to the article's subject.
  • Maybe an image of Ackbar would fit in the body. LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno.png (Talk) 05:51, 3 May 2022 (UTC)
Samonic's Run for it
Shayanomer
  • The extra information about Rebel Files being buried and excavated isn't really relevant here since there are no additional notes from the Resistance (e.g. Zorbia). Removing the information will bring the body below 165 words. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 08:52, 28 May 2022 (UTC)

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Allen Neff

  • Nominated by: Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 14:40, 2 May 2022 (UTC)
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Shayanomer
  • The first instance of the character's name should be cited to the source that uses it.
  • You source the first instance of 3 ABY to NEC but don't do it for the next one. If Rogues Gallery supports the date then the NEC reference can go.
  • The BTS could use an image.
  • No source supports the novelization release date.
  • Link to Star Wars Insider.
  • Please alphabetize the authors.
    • All addressed.
      • Alphabetization was pending but I've done myself now. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 15:44, 28 May 2022 (UTC)
  • Does Neff's scene in Star Wars Infinities: The Empire Strikes Back 1 play out the same as the film? Either way, it requires documentation since this is an alternate history. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 09:10, 28 May 2022 (UTC)
    • It does, and literally I'm not quite seeing how it needs to be documented when it doesn't alter the events at hand. We wouldn't document LEGO games when the only nature of the subject appearing doesn't contradict or offer new information. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 14:26, 28 May 2022 (UTC)
      • FWIW, the scene in question has different dialogue between the other characters in the scene, acknowledging the different events being played out, but Neff remains without any lines, and as such, nothing different with him individually. Comparatively adaptations in similar situations, with characters saying different things in the scenes, or even different events around the characters, aren't documented. For Wuher, as an example, the LEGO games wouldn't be noted in behind the scenes for how, while he's in the cantina, unlike in the movie, Obi-Wan kills Ponda Baba, and doesn't attack Evazan, who just runs away, differing from how he injures both in the film. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 14:36, 28 May 2022 (UTC)
  • Speaking of LEGO games, it's unnecessary to mention omissions from them in the BTS, per precedent. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 15:44, 28 May 2022 (UTC)

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Voth Vassakka

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  • Nomination comments: I've always liked this fella's pose with his oversized cannon in one of my TOR screenshots. A shame it's too low-quality.
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  • No page for cryo grenades? Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 19:48, 2 May 2022 (UTC)
  • Is the Equipment image really necessary? There's hardly any space to begin with. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 08:45, 3 May 2022 (UTC)
    • It doesn't affect the text around it much, so I see no harm in including it. OOM 224 09:00, 3 May 2022 (UTC)
      • In that case, I would like to see a caption connecting to this subject. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 10:45, 4 May 2022 (UTC)
        • Done OOM 224 10:48, 4 May 2022 (UTC)
Ecks
  • You have consecutive [3] references in the Biography. Is one of them meant to be another citation? 1358 (Talk) 09:03, 20 May 2022 (UTC)
    • 'Twas a missing ref in the middle of the sentence. I've added it back. OOM 224 12:34, 20 May 2022 (UTC)

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Unidentified Twi'lek male server

  • Nominated by: NBDani (talk) 20:54, 7 May 2022 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: First nomination with a BTS of the like. This is also like my 3rd deceased nom. Damn.
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Samonic has been looking forward to this
  • Can we add an "Skills and abilities" section? (Intro and body)
    • I don't think this character deserves such a section. Is there something in particular you think warrants it? What do you mean about intro and body? NBDani (talk) 02:58, 8 May 2022 (UTC)
      • Sorry, I wrote this just before going to sleep—perhaps him cleaning helmets? I have not seen anyone doing this in Star Wars The intro and body thing is for the objection below this comment. — Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol.svg 06:46, 8 May 2022 (UTC)
        • We don't actually see him clean the helmets. It's done off screen so he could be the cleaner or the middle-man. I don't think cleaning helmets is a noteworthy skill as well. NBDani (talk) 10:20, 8 May 2022 (UTC)
  • Could you establish he worked under Garsa Fwip before you mention her sanctuary?
  • "Assassination attempt"'s links shouldn't be separated, both words should link to Ambush outside of the Sanctuary.
  • "Fwip attempt to calm the Wookiee down, and the Wookiee ripping an arm off one of the gamblers and departing.[7]" This sentence does not make much sense to me.
    • Changed the tense of ripping. NBDani (talk) 02:58, 8 May 2022 (UTC)
  • Everything that can be linked should be linked.Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol.svg 21:01, 7 May 2022 (UTC)
    • Is there something in mind you think I'm missing? I saw one missing link. NBDani (talk) 02:58, 8 May 2022 (UTC)
      • Standard day for example.
        • The day used in the BTS is about a day in OOU terms. I shouldn't link to the IU terms off of the OOU use. NBDani (talk) 10:20, 8 May 2022 (UTC)
          • Shouldn't "night" link to day?
            • Ah yes, those are two sides of the same coin :P Done. NBDani (talk) 22:22, 8 May 2022 (UTC)
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  • Think it's worth mentioning that Boba is a new crime lord, since the series is based around the fact that he's new to the Tatooine scene.
  • "Fwip attempt to calm the Wookiee down, and the Wookiee rip an arm off one of the gamblers." Rip is present tense.
    • Reworded with your help.NBDani (talk) 13:48, 9 May 2022 (UTC)
  • Mos Espa and Jabba need context, I would also recommend moving the first used of cantina to be the context for the Sanctuary.
  • The BtS could benefit from an image. Since it doesn't appear he is in Gallery, I'd go with an image of the actor. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 11:37, 9 May 2022 (UTC)
    • The two above are done now. NBDani (talk) 13:45, 11 May 2022 (UTC)

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Vixus Squadron

  • Nominated by: Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 13:58, 9 May 2022 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Twilight Company never really had a true nemesis unit. However, the biggest contender for it would definitely be Vixus Squadron, who shot down their beloved Thunderstrike (though having two separate encounters with the 204th does put them up there as well).
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  • Is "Bothawei" spelled like that in the source? If it is, you should probably add a [sic] there.
  • I'd like to see an article for that Jedi Master. Imperators II(Talk) 10:36, 10 May 2022 (UTC)

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OM-7

  • Nominated by: Erebus Chronus (Talk) 17:32, 10 May 2022 (UTC)
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Checkbox

  • Nominated by: JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 21:26, 10 May 2022 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: SE asked for it
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  1. Check the checked checkbox! — Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol.svg 12:12, 17 May 2022 (UTC)
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A check for Checkbox
  • What's the context for knowing Checkbox has a helmet? The Equipment section appears awfully skint so if there's a better way to introduce the helmet I'd highly recommend that. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 09:12, 11 May 2022 (UTC)
    • He leans against the box while listening in, and the story describes his helmet touching the box. I think including it in the bio will read a little play-by-play. What do you think? JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 17:22, 11 May 2022 (UTC)
      • I'm unsure where else it would go, so I'll leave it to a more experienced reviewer to make the call if anyone sees fit. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 18:33, 20 May 2022 (UTC)
Checked the checkbox
  • "During the Clone Wars against the Confederacy of Independent Systems, Checkbox was stationed aboard the Arquitens-class light cruiser Stellar Rise.[2]"; could you establish the Galactic Republic fought againast the Confederacy of Independent Systems?Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol.svg 13:49, 11 May 2022 (UTC)
    • I think it's clear that the Republic is the other side since that's who's discussed in the sentence prior. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 17:22, 11 May 2022 (UTC)
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Needle (maneuver)

  • Nominated by: Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 10:24, 11 May 2022 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: One cool feature of Alphabet Squadron's rivalry with the 204th is recognising the closer enemies, and their habits, along the way.
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Samonic's Needle (not a maneuver)
  • Everything that can be linked should be linked.Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol.svg 13:55, 11 May 2022 (UTC)
    • I found one extra thing worth linking, but I'd recommend you specify what you think I missed, since I'm not seeing the same picture as you are here. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 01:58, 12 May 2022 (UTC)
      • Indeed. My bad, after all, linking is a "sofixit" (or something) or so I have read.— Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol.svg 18:52, 20 May 2022 (UTC)

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Republic Security Council

  • Nominated by: --Vitus InfinitusTalk 18:02, 11 May 2022 (UTC)
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Erebus
  • Context for Cato Neimoidia.
  • The image should make it clear as to which of those people are Palpatine.
  • Republic Commando series should be included in the BTS.
  • A mention about the Security Council's role in making recommendations to the Senate should be included somewhere, unless you've reworded it slightly. There could also be one regarding how military spending and efficacy were handled by the Military Oversight Committee.
    • Fixed, but I've rewritten the article to include a section dedicated to the Security Council's characteristics. --Vitus InfinitusTalk 18:01, 13 May 2022 (UTC)
  • Just wanted to make sure, but I assume there wasn't anything more to the quote?
  • Please make sure you're alright with this copy-edit. Erebus Chronus (Talk) 17:28, 13 May 2022 (UTC)
    • The copy edit was fine, but per above, I had to do some unrelated rewriting --Vitus InfinitusTalk 18:01, 13 May 2022 (UTC)
      • That's fine.
  • That final sentence in History doesn't really seem like it belongs there. Erebus Chronus (Talk) 22:13, 13 May 2022 (UTC)
    • I think it does since it's related to the Security Council's authority and is covered in the description --Vitus InfinitusTalk 19:15, 14 May 2022 (UTC)
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  • I think it's worth clarifying that Anakin was Padme's secret husband. I don't have Brotherhood so I don't know whether the fact can be sourced to the novel. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 00:15, 24 May 2022 (UTC)

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Quell

  • Nominated by: Erebus Chronus (Talk) 14:40, 13 May 2022 (UTC)
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I sense something; a presence I've not felt since…
  • Review note: "during the Clone Wars fought between the Galactic Republic and the Confederacy of Independent Systems" is the preferred wording, emphasis mine.
  • Review note: while I removed this part as part of my copy-edit, "the Twi'lek's flagship" — it wouldn't hurt to repeat "the Liberty" here. Plus, readers might not get the hint that Secura was a Twi'lek.
  • Gonna have to ask you to shorten "Confederacy of Independent Systems" and "T-series military strategic analysis and tactics droid," given the wordiness of the intro and the fact that their full, formal titles aren't relevant.
  • I don't believe the "from across the galaxy" tidbit is relevant.
  • "Skywalker launched from his flagship in order to board the Liberty" — he launched what? I recommend rewording this to "Skywalker boarded the Liberty." OOM 224 21:48, 16 May 2022 (UTC)
    • Resolved via Discord OOM 224 22:30, 16 May 2022 (UTC)

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S-43 enforcer droid

  • Nominated by: Erebus Chronus (Talk) 16:41, 13 May 2022 (UTC)
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Mallop

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  • Just two things: (Review note)
    • Can you establish that he was male in the intro?
    • "Mallop was a male TIE pilot Flight Commander in the Imperial Navy by[1] 3 ABY. That year,[2] he flew a TIE/LN starfighter, and Flight Lieutenant Rignik reported to him.[1] In 3 ABY" — Why do you establish (see bold) that it was during that year when it is already established?Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol.svg 07:48, 16 May 2022 (UTC)

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Chespea

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Lozz Beraf

  • Nominated by: JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 18:41, 18 May 2022 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: The Galactic Tales series continues
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Luca
  • Is it necessary to provide context for Ree-Di again in the second paragraph? I feel like it only makes the sentence less fluent.
    • Forgot she's mentioned there, removed.
  • In the intro, "led" doesn't seem like the correct verb to me. How about something like: "forced Grevious to leave the ship"? LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno.png (Talk) 09:05, 21 May 2022 (UTC)
    • I don't see an issue with that verb - it's completely accurate. Added that detail, though. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 04:09, 22 May 2022 (UTC)

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Lillibanca

  • Nominated by: Supreme Emperor Holocomm 02:06, 19 May 2022 (UTC)
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  • Right away, title needs to be bolded in the intro.
    • Done.
  • Please implement the Oxford comma.
    • Fixed.
  • Context on Han Solo, the Falcon, Kashyyyk, and Jagged Fel.
    • Added.
      • Still missing for Solo.
      • I'd still like to see who Solo is mentioned as opposed to just what he was doing during these events.
        • Added what he was described as in the dramatis personae section at the intro of the book. Supreme Emperor Holocomm 04:29, 25 May 2022 (UTC)
  • Your last two paragraphs are too small and should probably be merged.
    • Merged
  • A little more context on what the heck the Battle of Kashyyyk was would be appreciated.
    • Added.
  • Duplicate link.
    • Removed.
  • Your C+C quote seems like it can go in History, which is a more important section than C+C anyway.
    • Moved.
  • Random House audiobook is missing from the appearances section, and since we outlawed the other ones, it should be the only one reference there. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 02:59, 19 May 2022 (UTC)
  • Jedi Order is not the correct link for Jedi - that's referring to an organization, not an individual Jedi.
    • Changed to Jedi Knight.
  • Was Kashyyyk controlled by the GA? If so, that seems relevant to add when discussing the Confed's attempts to seize it. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 17:48, 19 May 2022 (UTC)
Samonic
  • Are quotes formatted correctly? Ship names are usually italicized.Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol.svg 06:38, 19 May 2022 (UTC)
    • WP:QUOTE: "In quote templates, emphasis is achieved by removing italics." 1358 (Talk) 10:31, 19 May 2022 (UTC)
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Crofyp's task force

  • Nominated by: — Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol.svg 11:28, 21 May 2022 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Well, here we go, I've been looking forward to this. First GAN related to the "glorious" Kilji Illumine and eighth nomination on it. I have tried to apply most of the feedback received on my previous nomination to this one, let's see if I have been at least somewhat succesful…
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Hininbirg

  • Nominated by: Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 18:21, 23 May 2022 (UTC)
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Braha
  • "cargo ferry group Sela" so upon a visit to the group's page, it appears to me that the ships are individually named Sela and not the group, Sela group. Unless the Sela group page is incorrect, are you able to reflect that info better? Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 23:59, 23 May 2022 (UTC)
    • "cargo ferry Sela" is what the game uses for the group, as evidenced by the audio of the lead quote. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 06:39, 24 May 2022 (UTC)

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J.J. Kirby

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Samonic
  • Any reason for the birth date to be separated from the birthplace?Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol.svg 08:50, 24 May 2022 (UTC)
    • Normally, if there's a fuller birth date with a month and day, it gets its own separate line. But honestly, now that you pointed it out, it looks really weird to have the year alone on its own line like that. I have changed it. If anyone from AgriCorps thinks it should be reverted, please let me know. Dentface (talk) 09:27, 24 May 2022 (UTC)

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  • Yes, Kirby's latest cover is still forthcoming, but historically, he hasn't commented on his Star Wars work, so I don't expect there to be much more information coming out. Either way, anything new will be added to the article promptly. Dentface (talk) 08:46, 24 May 2022 (UTC)


Star Wars: Imperial Commando

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NanoLuuke

I've already copy-edited the references during the review, and I just did a check on major video game webpress (IGN, GameInformer, GameSpot, Kotaku, RPS and Polygon, and only Polygon did a report on the Cinelinx info btw) to see if I could dig anything else, which turned nothing. However, I did found a complete archive of the twitter exchange: https://archive.ph/M3961 and you might want to update the article accordingly. NanoLuukeCloning facility 13:57, 24 May 2022 (UTC)

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  1. Previous CA, over the word limit. Corellian PremierRogue Squadron.svgMTFBWY 13:26, 24 May 2022 (UTC)


ROCKET

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Unidentified Sith artifact (Jagomir)

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