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This page is for Good article nominations. A Good article is an article that adheres to certain quality standards but cannot reach Featured status due to its limited content. In turn, a Good article features more detail than a Comprehensive article. On this page, users can nominate articles that they believe are ready to be reviewed to achieve Good status.

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Aerin Dlarit

• Nominated by: ToRsO bOy (talk) 10:50, 23 July 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:NOVELS

(2 ACs/1 Users/3 Total)

(Votes required: 1 AC vote(s) required to reach minimum. Additional 1 user or 1 AC vote required to pass.)

Support

1. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 15:04, 2 September 2021 (UTC)
2. Shayanomer (talk) 18:24, 25 September 2021 (UTC)
3. MasterFred(talk) 22:17, 25 September 2021 (UTC)

Object

Shayanomer

• Please introduce this into the BTS.
  • Added.ToRsO bOy (talk) 17:11, 24 July 2021 (UTC)
    • What I mean is, name the series that the novel is a part of and which installment it is. Here's an example. Shayanomer (talk) 17:18, 24 July 2021 (UTC)
      • My mistake. Added. ToRsO bOy (talk) 17:53, 24 July 2021 (UTC)
• The date is still not sourced properly. In response to your question on the probation page, this exact date is not given by the novel, so it needs to be referenced with something that actually provides it.
  • Added source. ToRsO bOy (talk) 17:11, 24 July 2021 (UTC)
• You also should have investigated the abridged audiobook before adding it to Appearances. Please do that now. Shayanomer (talk) 10:59, 23 July 2021 (UTC)
  • I raised this question before on Discord but didn't get a reply: do we have a go-to person here for audiobooks? I searched online and couldn't find a copy for both audiobooks. ToRsO bOy (talk) 17:11, 24 July 2021 (UTC)
    • Here's one for the abridged version. Shayanomer (talk) 17:18, 24 July 2021 (UTC)
      • Thanks for the link. Added a mention only. ToRsO bOy (talk) 17:53, 24 July 2021 (UTC)
        • Please take note of the formatting. Shayanomer (talk) 17:55, 24 July 2021 (UTC)
• It would be prudent to check these sources for a mention of the subject.
  • Added the only source he appeared in. Would you happen to know who I can ask, or where I can get the info for The Official Star Wars Fact File 14? It's the only one I'm having trouble finding online. ToRsO bOy (talk) 13:30, 27 July 2021 (UTC)
    • Try asking around in Discord. Shayanomer (talk) 13:55, 27 July 2021 (UTC)
      • Confirmed no mention. ToRsO bOy (talk) 03:02, 31 July 2021 (UTC)
• Per this probation page:

• Dlarit family can receive an article of its own and documented here.
  • Added. ToRsO bOy (talk) 03:31, 25 July 2021 (UTC)
    • Is that the actual name or a conjectural one? Shayanomer (talk) 06:23, 25 July 2021 (UTC)
      • I think it's the actual name since the exact term the Dlarit family was used in the Bacta War. ToRsO bOy (talk) 13:30, 27 July 2021 (UTC)
• Essential Guide to Warfare should be checked. Shayanomer (talk) 18:01, 24 July 2021 (UTC)
  • Checked and no mention of Aerin. ToRsO bOy (talk) 03:31, 25 July 2021 (UTC)

• Date note mentions Krytos Trap, but there is no reference to the book anywhere in the article, and the subject appears in Bacta War instead. Also, the date note should mention the subject, per precedent. Shayanomer (talk) 18:29, 1 August 2021 (UTC)
  • The event when Isard took over Thyferra occurred in Krytos Trap. It was mentioned again in the Bacta War but the date wasn't given, so I used Krytos Trap to cover the period via its date on TNEC. For the other point, I've added Dlarit in the mention. ToRsO bOy (talk) 05:49, 4 August 2021 (UTC)
    • So then you should establish in the body when Bacta War takes place, and update the date note to include it, since currently there is no indication as to when those events take place after Krytos Trap. Shayanomer (talk) 06:53, 4 August 2021 (UTC)
      • Done ToRsO bOy (talk) 12:16, 5 August 2021 (UTC)
• Second Biography section can use an image (e.g. Elscol Loro). Shayanomer (talk) 18:43, 1 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Image added. ToRsO bOy (talk) 05:49, 4 August 2021 (UTC)
• Is it possible to get a higher quality version of that Erisi Dlarit illustration?
  • Handled by Cade Calrayn. Shayanomer (talk) 18:32, 10 September 2021 (UTC)
    • Thanks Cade! ToRsO bOy (talk) 16:40, 11 September 2021 (UTC)
• After reading through the article again, I really think the second Biography section needs a rewrite so that it's told from Dlarit's perspective. Right now, much of it only documents the character's history from the perspectives of others. Shayanomer (talk) 09:03, 31 August 2021 (UTC)
  • I'm not sure how that could be done since Aerin never gets a POV chapter or section in the novel. Everything that happened or is attributed to him is from the perspective of others. The first time we actually see him is when he's already been stunned in his chair. ToRsO bOy (talk) 14:40, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
    • The article should always be written from the subject's perspective. Here's an FA on a non-POV character. Shayanomer (talk) 14:44, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
      • Thanks for the sample. I rewrote the part, let me know if I'm in the right direction? ToRsO bOy (talk) 16:40, 11 September 2021 (UTC)
        • Much better. Shayanomer (talk) 16:53, 11 September 2021 (UTC)
• Looking at Erisi Dlarit's article, do you think this information seems significant enough to be documented here in some capacity? "To make matters worse for Dlarit, her Imperial colleagues made no effort to hide the news from her, nor conceal their contempt about the Corps personnel from her. This fueled Dlarit's desire to seek retribution against her enemies." Shayanomer (talk) 08:43, 25 September 2021 (UTC)
  • I added the word "open" besides contempt. For the rest, I double checked the novel and there's no mention of the Imperials not hiding the news from Erisi, or her using it as fuel to seek retribution. ToRsO bOy (talk) 18:20, 25 September 2021 (UTC)

Macaroni

• Dlarit family can be added as an affiliation in the infobox.
  • Added. ToRsO bOy (talk) 07:36, 22 August 2021 (UTC)
• Why the need for CSWE citations in the infobox but not body?
  • Added CSWE ref in the body. ToRsO bOy (talk) 07:36, 22 August 2021 (UTC)
    • Is it really necessary for Dlarit family in the infobox?
      • I don't understand. Do you want me to use a different reference for the Dlarit family? ToRsO bOy (talk) 07:16, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
        • I'm just unsure as to why it is necessary to cite CSWE in the infobox to source the Dlarit family affiliation. If the novel doesn't say that, it should be kept, but right now it's unclear if it's needed. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 23:05, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
          • Change ref to Bacta War instead.ToRsO bOy (talk) 01:58, 30 August 2021 (UTC)
• File:Elscol.jpg should be replaced with a digital version. If you need help with that, Dentface should be able to help. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 00:05, 19 August 2021 (UTC)
  • The file has been updated. :) Dentface (talk) 22:48, 21 August 2021 (UTC)
    • Thanks! :) ToRsO bOy (talk) 07:36, 22 August 2021 (UTC)
• Would you say that this Ashern strike team needs an article of its own?
  • Created and linked. ToRsO bOy (talk) 07:16, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
• You're linking to the canon version of Standard year/Legends. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 03:49, 25 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Replaced ToRsO bOy (talk) 07:16, 29 August 2021 (UTC)

Fred strikes back

• In the Bts, it could currently be read as if the entire series was published in 1997. It should be clearer that it was this novel specifically. MasterFred(talk) 23:08, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Reworded ToRsO bOy (talk) 01:58, 30 August 2021 (UTC)

Wishan

• Nominated by: Infectedzombieguy (talk) 21:45, 29 July 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Trying to get my first status article!
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:THR

(0 ACs/0 Users/0 Total)

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Object

Erebus

• Welcome to the GAN: first off there are a few things I've noticed in a quick look over of the page:
  • The intro should have more info than it already has in it.
  • Please remove the references from the intro, as they do not use references per the sourcing policy
  • The first History paragraph is too large. Please split it into smaller paragraphs.
    • Made a copy-edit.
  • Please avoid the use of "this" on in-universe pages.
  • The last paragraph should have more info instead of it just being a single sentence.
  • In the BTS, since there is no Legends version of this character, there's no need to indicate that Star Wars: Jedi Temple Challenge is a canon subject.
  • I don't think you need to include the month and date in the BTS, either, just the year. Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 21:56, 29 July 2021 (UTC)
    • All fixed except for the one about the last paragraph. What is under 'Equipment' is all the information there is without speculating about everything. I could leave it as is or get rid of that section since it is only a sentence long. Thoughts? Infectedzombieguy (talk) 22:41, 29 July 2021 (UTC)
      • I was referring to the last Biography paragraph, the Equipment section is fine.
        • Thanks for the clarification. Your concern has been addressed. Infectedzombieguy (talk) 23:12, 29 July 2021 (UTC)
• Is the usage of "monster" at the end of the last sentence in Biography paragraph two your wording or the book's? If it's not used in the book, please remove it per WP:NPOV.
• Please be careful of underlinking. Ex. Jabe Rann and the Force should be linked in the Biography, but remove the link to Rann's page from the P&T section. Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 22:50, 29 July 2021 (UTC)
  • Both fixed. Infectedzombieguy (talk) 23:12, 29 July 2021 (UTC)

Amazingly

• You don't need to state that he was mentioned again in The High Republic: The Rising Storm. AmazinglyCool (talk) 22:03, 29 July 2021 (UTC)
  • Fixed Infectedzombieguy (talk) 22:41, 29 July 2021 (UTC)

Shayanomer

• The Layout Guide states that television episodes in the BTS need to provide a full air date. Shayanomer (talk) 10:28, 30 July 2021 (UTC)
  • It has been fixed Infectedzombieguy (talk) 12:40, 30 July 2021 (UTC)
• Gender is missing from body.
• Wishan's weight gain is a biographical detail, shouldn't just be in Personality and traits.
  • Needs to be written from the subject's perspective, mention the info when talking about this character, not when discussing the actions of another. Shayanomer (talk) 06:55, 10 August 2021 (UTC)
    • Reworded things to fit your input. Thanks. infectedzombieguy(Talk to me!) 08:37, 10 August 2021 (UTC)
      • Still an issue. Mention that Wishan gained weight over the summer before talking about the sculpture, as this is Wishan's article. Shayanomer (talk) 08:56, 10 August 2021 (UTC)
        • Switched things around so the weight gain is mentioned prior to talking about the sculpting. infectedzombieguy(Talk to me!) 09:29, 10 August 2021 (UTC)
• With the way the body is structured, I'd rather you introduce the species in the Biography instead.
• Context for greater krayt dragon, Jabe Rann, and Valo. Shayanomer (talk) 11:01, 8 August 2021 (UTC)
  • All fixed except for placing his species under biography, I don't know how I would fit that in there without making sound awkward when reading it. Elaboration on that bullet point would be appreciated. infectedzombieguy(Talk to me!) 04:39, 10 August 2021 (UTC)
    • Here's one of countless examples of how it can be done. Also, you've sourced the everything before the mention of greater krayt dragon to Ultimate Star Wars. Shayanomer (talk) 06:55, 10 August 2021 (UTC)
      • Thank you for the example. I have addressed the issue. infectedzombieguy(Talk to me!) 08:37, 10 August 2021 (UTC)
        • Now that you've put it there, it can be removed from Personality and traits. Shayanomer (talk) 08:56, 10 August 2021 (UTC)
          • Removed infectedzombieguy(Talk to me!) 09:29, 10 August 2021 (UTC)
            • Eye and skin color need to be in that section though. Shayanomer (talk) 09:37, 10 August 2021 (UTC)
              • Fixed it. My bad. infectedzombieguy(Talk to me!) 10:29, 10 August 2021 (UTC)
• Tatooine and Coruscant need context. Shayanomer (talk) 08:56, 10 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Context added. infectedzombieguy(Talk to me!) 09:29, 10 August 2021 (UTC)
    • Doesn't Ultimate Star Wars put Tatooine in the Outer Rim? Also, please cite the latest edition of USW, per precedent. Shayanomer (talk) 09:37, 10 August 2021 (UTC)
      • Thanks for the reminder and for helping so much with this nomination. Fixed. infectedzombieguy(Talk to me!) 10:29, 10 August 2021 (UTC)

OOM

• Welcome to the GAN! A few issues I found on an initial skim:
  • Watch out for infobox-exclusive information, which is information presented in the infobox that is absent from the article body; everything in the infobox, just like everything in images and the intro, should also be mentioned in the body.
  • I recommend moving the Biography image one paragraph down. Currently, it pushes a bit of the text into a tiny gap beside the infobox.
  • Image captions should have a full stop (period) at the end if it's a complete sentence.
  • Please fix the archiveurl for {{SWKidsYoutube}}. OOM 224 11:51, 8 August 2021 (UTC)
    • Thanks for the input! All of your critiques have been fixed. infectedzombieguy(Talk to me!) 04:39, 10 August 2021 (UTC)

Ratts

• Welcome both to a first-time GAN writer and the first WP:THR nomination! Some initial objections:
  • For the quotes, you should attribute them to AD-3, since she's the one actually speaking.
  • And speaking of quotes, I'm sure there are at least a few more that can be added to relevant sections. I recall AD mentioning that he could "make anything," which would go nicely in the P&A section.
    • Biography is still missing a quote. RattsT (talk) 04:33, 25 August 2021 (UTC)
      • Whoops, I missed this objection. The quote has been added. infectedzombieguy(Talk to me!) 19:30, 3 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Some restructuring of the biography section is necessary. That first paragraph is a big one, with a greater word count then the next three combined. Likewise, the final paragraph of that section is only one sentence, which is generally avoided. Take a look into breaking up that big paragraph and combining some of the smaller ones. RattsT (talk) 06:19, 16 August 2021 (UTC)
    • All fixed except for your last bullet point about the last paragraph. I don't know how I would make that longer while still keeping the 'real life' portions of JTC vague. infectedzombieguy(Talk to me!) 15:45, 17 August 2021 (UTC)
      • Nothing says that last sentence has to be a paragraph on its own. I've restructured them to show you what I mean. You wanna aim for the sweetspot of paragraphs that are all roughly the same length without hurting the flow of the writing. RattsT (talk) 04:33, 25 August 2021 (UTC)
        • Okay, I understand thanks for the help. The restructure looks good.infectedzombieguy(Talk to me!) 04:40, 25 August 2021 (UTC)

Ecks Dee

• You have three instances of "at some/another point/time" in the intro in close succession, please reword. 1358 ^(Talk) 18:06, 31 August 2021 (UTC)
  • It's been rewordedinfectedzombieguy(Talk to me!) 20:44, 1 September 2021 (UTC)

Imp

• Please remove all duplicate links from the article. Imperators II^(Talk) 18:39, 31 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Removedinfectedzombieguy(Talk to me!) 20:44, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
• I'm still noticing some underlinking in the article. For example, in the first sentence of the Bio you should link "Duros", "male", "Jedi Master", "red", and "the Force". Keep in mind that 1) the infobox, 2) the intro, 3) the body of the article, and 4) each reference should all be fully linked, with each subject being linked upon its first mention. Imperators II^(Talk) 09:22, 9 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Is that better? Or do I need to add more links? infectedzombieguy(Talk to me!) 18:54, 11 September 2021 (UTC)
• The fact that Wishan enjoyed creating the sculptures would be better at home under Personality and traits.
  • Reworded infectedzombieguy(Talk to me!) 00:21, 20 September 2021 (UTC)
• A different thing that you could consider adding there, at the beginning of the body, is timeline placement - when was Wishan active? From that THR mention, do we know if he was alive at the time of the novel's events, or could it be at any point by 231 BBY?
  • I don't really understand how I would address this. It is stated in the biography that he created the incense around 231 BBY. We don't know when he made the incense, only that it existed by that time. infectedzombieguy(Talk to me!) 00:21, 20 September 2021 (UTC)
    • In the very first sentence, you could establish the timeline placement right away by saying something to the effect of "Wishan was active at some point by 231 BBY." Also, the mention of 231 BBY in the third paragraph should use "by" instead of "around", since there's no chance that Wishan developed the incense in 230 BBY, is there? Imperators II^(Talk) 13:04, 20 September 2021 (UTC)
• "After demonstrating his skills of sculpture making to Rann, he gave the Padawan seven lumps of clay, due to the fact that he had gained weight over the prior summer, and attempted to teach Rann how to sculpt with clay using the Force by instructing him to sculpt the Duros' likeness." — not sure if this was the intention, but this reads as if Wishan gaven Rann seven lumps because the former had gained weight. Can it be clarified as to how the number of lumps is connected to Wishan's gain in weight? Imperators II^(Talk) 12:28, 18 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Fixed infectedzombieguy(Talk to me!) 00:21, 20 September 2021 (UTC)

Fred strikes back

• We should use prose to describe "not the best looking" instead of simply quoting the quote that is right above it. MasterFred(talk) 22:28, 25 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments

• Added links to Sculptor per Lewisr's suggestion on Discord that that should be added given the fact that Wishan is categorized as a sculptor. infectedzombieguy(Talk to me!) 04:33, 13 August 2021 (UTC)
• Added info saying that the story of Wishan and Jabe Rann was told to Padawans by AD-3 per RattsT's suggestion on Discord. Elaboration about this change and our thought process behind it is on Talk:Wishan infectedzombieguy(Talk to me!) 03:02, 16 August 2021 (UTC)
• Housekeeping note: The first line of my objections was struck to keep in line with Cade's soon-to-be-released bot, not to retroactively take back that message. You are still welcomed, IZG :P RattsT (talk)

Grunta

• Nominated by: ToRsO bOy (talk) 14:44, 31 July 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:NOVELS

(2 ACs/2 Users/4 Total)

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Support

1. Shayanomer (talk) 06:56, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
2. Good work! LucaRoR ^(Talk) 16:54, 31 August 2021 (UTC)
3. MasterFred(talk) 21:58, 11 September 2021 (UTC)
4. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 04:01, 23 September 2021 (UTC)

Object

Shayanomer

• Date note needs to mention Grunta, where he died, and when. Shayanomer (talk) 11:32, 5 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Added Grunta mention, location and when. ToRsO bOy (talk) 03:51, 7 August 2021 (UTC)
• I see room for subsectioning and another quote.
  • Done ToRsO bOy (talk) 07:58, 9 August 2021 (UTC)
• Why is Grunta's profession mentioned at the very end of the Biography on the article that is supposed to be about Grunta himself?
  • Profession moved to the first paragraph ToRsO bOy (talk) 07:58, 9 August 2021 (UTC)
• In Personality and traits, I'm unable to see the relevance of the first paragraph's last sentence. Shayanomer (talk) 08:32, 7 August 2021 (UTC)
  • It shows how hated Grunta was, that a relative stranger would buy Han a drink just for killing him. ToRsO bOy (talk) 07:58, 9 August 2021 (UTC)
• Does the novel refer to Muunilinst as a "planet"? Shayanomer (talk) 09:25, 7 August 2021 (UTC)
  • It does. ToRsO bOy (talk) 07:58, 9 August 2021 (UTC)
• Too many sentences start with "Grunta did this...," can you introduce more variation?
  • Changed some of them. ToRsO bOy (talk) 11:15, 15 August 2021 (UTC)
• "Grunta himself also died in the short melee when the swoop's remains crashed into him, killing him instantly." Saying he died twice here is kind of redundant.
  • Removed the last line. ToRsO bOy (talk) 11:15, 15 August 2021 (UTC)
• "One Muun in particular, Chenik Kruun, was known to be cold-blooded and emotionless, yet it was said that he almost smiled when he heard of Grunta's demise..." How does the novel present this information? Shayanomer (talk) 09:12, 9 August 2021 (UTC)
  • '"We race for the Muun Chenik Kruun." Haari Ikreme unleashed a rapid string of chokes and coughs that Han suspected might be laughter. "A cold-blooded, emotionless sand snake if I ever saw one, but when he heard about Grunta's death, he nearly smiled. Nothing would make him happier than beating Nal Kenuun."' ToRsO bOy (talk) 11:15, 15 August 2021 (UTC)
    • Then it would be good to specify who's saying this in the body. Shayanomer (talk) 11:25, 15 August 2021 (UTC)
      • Done ToRsO bOy (talk) 12:25, 15 August 2021 (UTC)
• "When he was not racing, Grunta engaged in the armed robbery of individuals with the help of his Dug companions." I don't see how this is relevant in "Personality and traits," this is a biographical detail.
  • It works as an example for the line that precedes it, how Grunta had a talent for trouble. ToRsO bOy (talk) 06:49, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
• After going through the article again, I really think the reactions to Grunta's death are much better suited for the Biography rather than its current place. Shayanomer (talk) 10:48, 24 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Moved. ToRsO bOy (talk) 06:49, 29 August 2021 (UTC)

Minnabird

• "information on how to contact the Kenuun" Is this character really referred to as "the Kenuun"? I didn't want to do a copy-edit in case that's correct, but his article doesn't seem to use that.
  • Thanks for spotting that. "The" removed. ToRsO bOy (talk) 11:15, 15 August 2021 (UTC)
• The placement of Grunta's physical description feels kind of out of place, an afterthought at the end of an unrelated paragraph. Not sure what the fix is, as the description is so short; maybe stick it up at the top of the section, at the beginning of the first paragraph?
  • Done. ToRsO bOy (talk) 11:15, 15 August 2021 (UTC)
• I made some copy-edits, let me know if you approve. I also think you could stand to break up a few of the longer sentences, but that's really up to you. Minnabird ^(talk) 00:27, 10 August 2021 (UTC)
  • They look good. Thanks! 11:15, 15 August 2021 (UTC)

Fred strikes back

• Pilaan should really be introduced as his place of residence in the first sentence of the intro.
  • Added. ToRsO bOy (talk) 14:28, 11 September 2021 (UTC)
    • Remember to re-read the section you change. You had "the city of..." in two consecutive sentences after the change and a duplicate link for city. I've fixed it this time, but always double check your changes to make sure they don't cause other issues that need addressing. MasterFred(talk) 21:51, 11 September 2021 (UTC)
      • Appreciate the reminder. Cheers! ToRsO bOy (talk) 03:10, 12 September 2021 (UTC)
• You should mention Grunta's employment under Kenuun in the intro. MasterFred(talk) 22:42, 10 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Added. ToRsO bOy (talk) 14:29, 11 September 2021 (UTC)
• I added an image. Feel free to remove if you don't like the way it looks. MasterFred(talk) 21:58, 11 September 2021 (UTC)
  • That works. I actually should have thought of it myself, given that I worked on the other novel characters. Thanks! ToRsO bOy (talk) 03:08, 12 September 2021 (UTC)

Ecks Dee

• "After a short skirmish, the Dugs chose to retreat after one of their members was killed by Solo when he successfully shot the swoop's starboard engine, crashing it with a fiery explosion. Grunta himself also died in the short melee when the swoop's remains crashed into him." A little bit confused about the chronology here. In the first sentence, is the Dug member you mention Grunta or someone else? Do the Dugs decide to retreat after the first Dug is killed but before Grunta is killed? This part is a bit confusing right now. 1358 ^(Talk) 16:11, 12 September 2021 (UTC)
  • I've reworded the paragraph. ToRsO bOy (talk) 16:40, 12 September 2021 (UTC)

OOM

• Nice to see a Rebel Force nom. However, you'll want to vary the choice of words, such as "when" and "short," just to list a couple of examples. OOM 224 20:45, 23 September 2021 (UTC)
  • I've changed some of the words you mentioned. Thanks! ToRsO bOy (talk) 17:40, 25 September 2021 (UTC)

Karlini silk

• Nominated by: Minnabird ^(talk) 11:04, 10 August 2021 (UTC)
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Pasta silk

• You've linked retcon in the bts, but {{Ret}} is not being used. That being said, based on what I'm seeing in the article, I don't think we should be treating this as a retcon, so I'm going to recommend that that link be removed. Let me know if you disagree. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 03:39, 30 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Oh, no if that's not typically linked for this kind of thing, totally happy to remove it; looks like, taking another look at the article, Wook uses a pretty narrow definition of retcon. So yes: removed! Minnabird ^(talk) 19:01, 30 August 2021 (UTC)
• Please check your sourcing in "Fit for a queen." JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 17:08, 17 September 2021 (UTC)

CC-8

• We should avoid using the word this in article bodies
  • Adjusted that sentence in the intro. Minnabird ^(talk) 03:03, 16 September 2021 (UTC)
    • There's still one in the woven together section Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 06:01, 17 September 2021 (UTC)
      • Ah, didn't realize absolutely all instances of "this" were forbidden, still having trouble figuring out what the problem is so I can avoid tripping into it again when rephrasing. I think in this case a less passive phrasing helps? Lmk if that's closer to what you were thinking. Minnabird ^(talk) 17:35, 21 September 2021 (UTC)
        • To me I think the writing is smoother without it, its like the word refers back to the article when we should just be referring to the sources we're drawing from. It isn't forbidden but it's a strong preference that's held up for a while. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 03:20, 22 September 2021 (UTC)
• Needs context for Naboo in the intro Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 10:03, 7 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Done! Minnabird ^(talk) 03:03, 16 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments

• I have listed appearances of Black traveling gown and Flame-colored robes in the spirit of "it's easier to cut back than to expand," as it seems there isn't a consensus on whether to list things made out of a material in the material's appearances.

Bri'n

• Nominated by: LucaRoR ^(Talk) 19:36, 13 August 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: It was a CAN that exceeded the word limit of 250.
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1. Dentface (talk) 18:24, 14 August 2021 (UTC)
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4. Zed42 (talk) 09:33, 16 September 2021 (UTC)

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Braha

• Some context for Metal Clan in the intro would be beneficial. I think you should also specify them as Th'er's rivals as well.
  • Added. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 11:40, 21 August 2021 (UTC)
• The fact that the Metal Clan had recruited "powerful offworld allies" should be worked into the history.
  • How's that? LucaRoR ^(Talk) 11:40, 21 August 2021 (UTC)
• "Jinn helped Th’er to find allies in order to fight against the Metal Clan." He didn't, he advised her to make allies to support her cause. Please revise.
  • Fixed. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 11:40, 21 August 2021 (UTC)
• The history can benefit from an image.
  • Added. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 11:40, 21 August 2021 (UTC)
• I see nothing in the comic that actually states the horned species in native to the planet. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 23:04, 20 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Leaving aside the fact that all the people (aside the two Jedi) on that planet were of that species, Th'er often refers to it as "my planet" and even Yoda refers to it as "her planet". I think it is enough proof. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 11:40, 21 August 2021 (UTC)
    • For your first point, that could just as easily mean the horned species had colonised the place or something. For the second point, the planet being Th'er's could be of reference to it being her homeworld or the world she controlled. It doesn't speak for the species as a whole. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 19:03, 21 August 2021 (UTC)
      • Fair enough, I've changed it to "lived" since it's certainly true. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 19:15, 21 August 2021 (UTC)
• For the description quote, I think you should include what Th'er was replying to and specify in the attribution as to what about the world she is talking about. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 07:59, 22 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Added the attribution, writing what she is replying to doesn't really make sense for the "description" section since it is about possible allies. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 14:49, 22 August 2021 (UTC)

Z'ed

• You can note that the planet is terrestrial in the relevant infobox field and body section (like is done here, for example.)
• Per the Layout Guide, sentient inhabitants should be mentioned in a separate Inhabitants section. You can probably go into a bit more detail about the beliefs of Th'er and the Metal Clan in that section, too.
• It seems like the body quote is missing an "a" in "cutting down tree".
• The date reference should use the exact Card Trader citation rather than just linking the general Card Trader page.
• "Jinn felt uneasy due to the priestess accusing the Jedi of being cowards, and he discussed it with Jedi Grand Master Yoda, who reassured him that was not the case." Is this really relevant to Bri'n itself?
  • I'd say so since otherwise there would be Quote-exclusive content. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 18:11, 27 August 2021 (UTC)
    • I feel like it could probably be reworded, then. Jinn says in the comic that being called a coward was not what concerned him. How does something along the lines of "Though Th'er accused the Jedi of cowardice for leaving the planet, Grand Master Yoda later assured Jinn that it had been necessary." sound to you? Zed42 (talk) 08:22, 7 September 2021 (UTC)
      • Changed, thanks! LucaRoR ^(Talk) 13:11, 7 September 2021 (UTC)
• You should briefly talk about Th'er not wanting to leave her trees behind and her hesitance to seek help from outsiders. Zed42 (talk) 07:38, 27 August 2021 (UTC)
  • All done, thanks! LucaRoR ^(Talk) 11:14, 27 August 2021 (UTC)
• "The planet offered many natural resources that were valued by outsiders." Is that derived from the quote used in the Description section? If so, that quote sounds more like Th'er is saying that outsiders would strip the planet of everything Th'er's people valued (the trees), rather than that the outsiders valued something on Br'in.
• As stated by Qui-Gon in the comic: "By your own laws, by their own admission, they need your word or your blood to harm a single leaf." This fact seems to be relevant and notable enough to mention here.
• Regarding the Inhabitants section, nice work, but I have a couple more points:
  • Could you please add a quote to that section? I think there's several that would fit decently.
  • "while the Metal Clan wanted to use the resources that Bri'n offered to make a profit." How do we know that the Metal Clan wanted to profit from Bri'n's resources? All the comic tells us, AFAIK, is that they wanted to destroy her trees.
• So you're aware, Wookieepedia:Layout Guide#Images mandates that image captions that are complete sentences should end with a full stop. Both of your image captions are full sentences, so they need to abide by that rule. Zed42 (talk) 08:22, 7 September 2021 (UTC)
  • All done. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 13:11, 7 September 2021 (UTC)

Silver

• I took the liberty of doing a copy-edit: contractions like "didn't" should be avoided in the article body. Th'er's species should be mentioned in one of the infobox slots for native or immigrated sentient species. SilverSunbird (talk) 17:26, 6 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Thanks! Regarding the species, it is uknown if it's native or immigrated, hence, both would be speculation… LucaRoR ^(Talk) 17:29, 6 September 2021 (UTC)
    • The species still lives on Bri'n, though. Putting it in the immigrated slot would be less speculative if you're worried about that, because species residing on a planet should be included in the infobox. SilverSunbird (talk) 18:09, 7 September 2021 (UTC)
      • After a discussion on Discord, I've put it in the "native" field but the left the body as it is. MasterFred answered that: "If it’s a species we’ve never seen before and they have only appeared on this planet, it’s safe to put them in native in the infobox." while Imperators added: "per Fred, and you don't necessarily have to use the word "native" in the body. You can just say that members of a species resided on the planet." I think it meets the requirements. Thanks Imp and Fred :P. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 18:44, 9 September 2021 (UTC)

Brooke Vitale

• Nominated by: Dentface (talk) 18:10, 14 August 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: First a "let's see what happens" CAN is now a GAN. Weird stuff.
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LucaRoR

• I don't know how real-world articles work, but I think that this article could use an additional image, maybe of the cover of one of her publications. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 18:31, 14 August 2021 (UTC)
  • This single suggestion sent me down a day's worth rabbit hole! I hunted for a picture of some of her books all in a pile, rather than just adding a random cover off of Amazon. And in doing so, I uncovered this whole super rare quickly canceled book series. So.... your objection has been addressed (image added), and I added some new information to the article. Thanks! Dentface (talk) 02:30, 15 August 2021 (UTC)

Shayanomer

• Please remove the intro referencing.
• Birth name is intro-exclusive.
• Since the social media post is still available for this file but can't be archived properly, you can instead upload a screenshot of the post to the wiki. Shayanomer (talk) 09:26, 15 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Did not see that there was already a screenshot provided. Shayanomer (talk) 19:48, 15 August 2021 (UTC)
    • Done with all other objections. Dentface (talk) 19:51, 15 August 2021 (UTC)
• For a Biography of that size, the article needs a longer intro to go along with it. Shayanomer (talk) 18:56, 21 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Done. Is this sufficient? Dentface (talk) 21:55, 22 September 2021 (UTC)

Felucian Garden Spread

• Nominated by: Immi Thrax (talk) 02:03, 19 August 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: That fanon was pretty good, right?
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Spooky

• Context for Maz Kanata, Takodana, Felucia, and Batuu.—spookywilloww^talk 19:35, 20 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Done, I must remember this for other noms! Immi Thrax (talk) 22:49, 20 August 2021 (UTC)
    • Ah shit. There's me only just realising Spookly beat me to the context stuff xD. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 07:03, 21 August 2021 (UTC)

Braha'tok

• Context required for Takodana, Felucia and Batuu in the intro and sections. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 22:02, 20 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Great minds think alike, and done! Immi Thrax (talk) 22:49, 20 August 2021 (UTC)

Felucian Steak

• This dish appears to be vegan, not vegetarian. Please confirm and adjust the article accordingly. Stake black ^msg 04:44, 26 August 2021 (UTC) Per discussion on Discord. Stake black ^msg 05:50, 26 August 2021 (UTC)

The Tale of the Aiwha Pod

• Nominated by: Manoof (talk) 13:29, 20 August 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Fixed Synopsis per the previous objection Manoof (talk) 13:29, 20 August 2021 (UTC)
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1. Welcome back! JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 23:01, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
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Shayanomer

• Please implement {{Shortstory}} for the citation. Shayanomer (talk) 13:52, 20 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Well that's new! Added! Manoof (talk) 10:29, 21 August 2021 (UTC)
    • Appearances as well. Shayanomer (talk) 11:00, 21 August 2021 (UTC)
      • Oops, forgot that! All done and I went through using whatlinkshere to update elsewhere! Manoof (talk) 08:48, 22 August 2021 (UTC)

Macaroni

• Intro could use a paragraph break.
  • Done Manoof (talk) 10:29, 21 August 2021 (UTC)
• The intro still uses present tense.
  • Done Manoof (talk) 10:29, 21 August 2021 (UTC)
• Synopsis could use some subsectioning.
  • Not sure it was needed given it consisted of only 4 paragraphs, however i did split it into two sections of two paragraphs each. Manoof (talk) 10:29, 21 August 2021 (UTC)
    • Welcome to Wook 2021, Manoof :P
• Per precedent, the bts should mention the game guide publisher. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 20:10, 20 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Done Manoof (talk) 10:29, 21 August 2021 (UTC)
• No quotes for "Description" or "The arrogance and fall of Protas"?
  • Added some quotes Manoof (talk) 09:28, 22 August 2021 (UTC)
• Mythology is infobox-exclusive.
  • Added Manoof (talk) 09:28, 22 August 2021 (UTC)
• The intro doesn't make it clear what his claim was.
  • clarified Manoof (talk) 09:28, 22 August 2021 (UTC)
• We try to avoid using the words "this" and "these" for IU articles.
  • Fixed Manoof (talk) 09:28, 22 August 2021 (UTC)
• Room for another image.
  • Shifted the existing one and added a second. Manoof (talk) 11:07, 22 August 2021 (UTC)
• (Review note) Short stories get quotes rather than italics, so I've removed those in your citations. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 04:32, 22 August 2021 (UTC)

CC-8

• The youmay template looks very cumbersome, I don't think any details beyond the stories being in or out of universe are necessary. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 03:26, 25 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Copied the format of the IU one but yeah, I agree. Cleaned it up and jumped on the other one. Manoof (talk) 11:14, 25 August 2021 (UTC)
• Is the main quote the only info we have about the translation? If so that doesn't seem like confirmation that it was translated into basic
  • My understanding was written english = basic. So the written article as an IU souce would be considered to be written in Basic. This was accepted and not challenged on the related articles that already reached status which made this mention. Happy to update if the above is incorrect. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:51, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
• "The protagonist of the story was a god-beast named Protas, considered the most powerful and ruler of the oceans." Most powerful what?
  • Most powerful in the oceans I believe but will check. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:51, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
    • Ok so the wording says "Protas was strong, stronger than any living beast, and mystical. He had powers beyond comprehension." and later "There were many who sought to take his place, to claim the title and honors of being the most powerful beast of the open seas". The wording is supposed to convey he is both the most powerful and ruler of the oceans, wrote it a while back I think. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:50, 2 September 2021 (UTC)
      • So you should say he was the most powerful of all beasts or something similar. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 04:13, 3 September 2021 (UTC)
        • How's that? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:05, 3 September 2021 (UTC)
• It's not actual policy but I don't think pushing quotes out of alignment with images looks good Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 12:57, 30 August 2021 (UTC)
  • I actually thought it looked better, as I had the images under the quotes initially! Especially since the quote gets pushed by the infobox at the beginning of articles? *shrug* happy to move if you insist though! Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:51, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
    • I will have to insist, every other status article has them below quotes. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 04:13, 3 September 2021 (UTC)
      • Ah gotcha, consistency is definitely what we want. I've shifted them but the size of the first paragraph and image means it does cut over the second paragraph header/quote. The only other spot that could be better may be under the infobox opposite the contents but I'm not sure if it's possible to have it there. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:05, 3 September 2021 (UTC)

Attack on Mahranee

• Nominated by: Manoof (talk) 13:19, 23 August 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Former GA, previous issue was fixed but status not updated. Fixed a Cite_web and edits since status was removed are appropriate so it should be good to go. Had a look over and didn't notice anything.
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1. Shayanomer (talk) 12:37, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
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3. Fan26 (Talk) 21:40, 12 September 2021 (UTC)
4. Editoronthewiki (talk) 19:00, 15 September 2021 (UTC)

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Shayanomer

• In the date note, I'd like you to specify the sources the events are from when first introducing those events in the note.
  • That reference was terrible! should be ok now. Manoof (talk) 12:30, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
• Per precedent, the BTS doesn't need an extra ref explaining what Dark Disciple originally was. Shayanomer (talk) 07:42, 28 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Ok Removed the second line as not required. Need to dig for the first point. Manoof (talk) 11:25, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
    • You need to reintroduce that info. This event could have been featured in the original story arc. Shayanomer (talk) 11:47, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
      • Ah I gotcha, thanks! Manoof (talk) 12:30, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
• Per what we discussed on Discord, these sources should be investigated for mentions. Any new alternate names should be documented in the intro and the BTS. Shayanomer (talk) 09:10, 3 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Sources checked, massive thanks to User:Ayrehead02, User:CT-1742, User:Lewisr, User:LucaRoR and User:Immi_Thrax for sorting through them as well! Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 08:25, 12 September 2021 (UTC)

Editor

• The book notes, reffering to Dooku's voice, "Oh, she knew that voice. The Mahran had heard it uttering all sorts of pretty lies and promises that were never intended to be kept." So Dooku attempted some kind of dimplomatic approach. So that needs to be noted Editoronthewiki (talk) 16:21, 4 September 2021 (UTC)
  • "Count Dooku, the leader of the Confederacy, had unsuccessfully attempted to win the planet over using false promises and lies before planning an assault to take the planet's resources by force.". I also moved the context of Dooku being the Confederacy leader here as well as it should've been earlier in the piece to start with. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 05:49, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
• Events in the concurrent section of the infobox need proper date notes. The Mando civil war would use the Star Wars: The Clone Wars Chronological Episode Order link used in 19 BBY date, the Mygeeto campaign note just needs to describe how it starting in 21 BBY and not ending until the end of the war means its concurrent. Editoronthewiki (talk) 21:06, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Thanks for the assist, have a look and let me know if the wording is ok. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 09:02, 7 September 2021 (UTC)

Fan

• Plo Koon's quote in the prelude doesn't really feel relevant to the attack.
  • It's relevance is in establishing the timeline for the attack in the context of wider clone wars. It happens at the beginning of the book so there's not much there that I can see from google books. I did expand it to give it a bit more direct context. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 08:25, 12 September 2021 (UTC)
• "Though they failed to execute Dooku,[5] it was not until the Battle of Coruscant that Skywalker finally managed to kill him" The usage of "...it was not until..." feels really weird here, as if failing to kill Dooku somehow set the stage for Skywalker to kill the Count himself and it was strange for it to take until Coruscant. I think this sentence should be reworded. Fan26 (Talk) 21:41, 11 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Good call, it did imply one event led to the other. I've reworded to make it a bit more distinct. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 08:25, 12 September 2021 (UTC)

OOM

• There are some missing links here, especially in the reference notes
  • Better? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 09:35, 12 September 2021 (UTC)
• Intro could use a paragraph break
  • Broken Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 09:35, 12 September 2021 (UTC)
• Please fix the Quote formatting for the Prelude section OOM 224 08:32, 12 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Ah yes I see what happened! thanks! Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 09:35, 12 September 2021 (UTC)
• Also, please see my edit here and revise the date ref for the Mygeeto Campaign; one major issue there is that it mentions the attack on Mahranee but doesn't cite it to any source OOM 224 08:41, 12 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Gotcha, made it clearer! Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 09:35, 12 September 2021 (UTC)
• "19 BBY, the final year of the Clone War" isn't supported by the cited ref note. Since there's no need to mention that 19 BBY was the final year of the war, I would just reword it as "In 19 BBY, during the Clone Wars" OOM 224 11:36, 12 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Fixed Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:39, 12 September 2021 (UTC)
• "leading to the Mahran refugee craft being caught in the middle" — Is this referring to Chubor's frigate? The article doesn't make it clear
  • I've rewritten this to be more in-line with the book. It's not clear that the Marhan ships were caught in the middle, only that they were attempting to flee. Chubor's frigate was a republic vessel per the prior sentence so the combination should make this clear. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:39, 12 September 2021 (UTC)
• Finally, "who could assist in getting close to the elusive Sith Lord […] convinced her to take him on as a partner" — I believe this entire section is irrelevant to the subject at hand. The rest of the paragraph is enough for the purposes of this article. OOM 224 11:53, 12 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Done Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:39, 12 September 2021 (UTC)

Attack on the Paataatus

• Nominated by: YakovChaimTzvi (talk) 17:35, 23 August 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Yeet leggo
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01miki10

• Article needs to be properly sectioned.
• Infobox-exclusive information.
  • I think I got that all. -- YakovChaimTzvi (talk) 18:24, 23 August 2021 (UTC)
    • Nikardun conquests is still not mentioned in the body. 01miki10 ^{Open comlink} 18:29, 23 August 2021 (UTC)
      • Ah, good catch. I added that. -- YakovChaimTzvi (talk) 18:44, 23 August 2021 (UTC)
• Missing BTS.
• Duplicate links.
  • Removed -- YakovChaimTzvi (talk) 18:24, 23 August 2021 (UTC)
• Quote attributions shouldn't have links. 01miki10 ^{Open comlink} 17:47, 23 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Removed -- YakovChaimTzvi (talk) 18:24, 23 August 2021 (UTC)

Ecks Dee

• The article needs to be properly sectioned in accordance with the "Battle, mission, and duel articles" section of the Layout Guide. 1358 ^(Talk) 18:13, 23 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Done. -- YakovChaimTzvi (talk) 18:47, 23 August 2021 (UTC)
• You can definitely sneak in at least two relevant images in the body. 1358 ^(Talk) 09:07, 2 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Done. -- YakovChaimTzvi (talk) 19:31, 2 September 2021 (UTC)
• No relevant quotes for Prelude and The attack? 1358 ^(Talk) 20:03, 4 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Added. — YakovChaimTzvi (talk) 00:01, 5 September 2021 (UTC)

Luca

• I might be wrong, but I think the intro is too long compared to the body. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 19:00, 23 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Hmm, well, I just removed an unnecessary paragraph from the intro. How is it now? -- YakovChaimTzvi (talk) 19:07, 23 August 2021 (UTC)
    • Great! LucaRoR ^(Talk) 19:10, 23 August 2021 (UTC)

Shayanomer

• The date template states that Chaos Rising takes place "around" 19 BBY, contradicting what is stated in this article.
  • Took care of this in this article. Unfortunately, that’s going to cause a major chain of updates of 19 BBY to c. 19 BBY in a lot of Chaos Rising articles. — YakovChaimTzvi (talk) 03:41, 12 September 2021 (UTC)
• Many subjects need context in the body upon their first mentions, such as Paataatus, Nikardun Destiny, Nikardun, and Dioya.
  • Addressed those. — YakovChaimTzvi (talk) 03:41, 12 September 2021 (UTC)
• Here's my copy-edit in which I had to add links, fix various issues, and reword some rather informal language, which I'm still seeing in the article. I would advise you to go through it and ensure the content is written with an encyclopedic tone in mind. Shayanomer (talk) 19:43, 10 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Thank you, that copy edit is very helpful. I'll work on the other objections. -- YakovChaimTzvi (talk) 00:00, 12 September 2021 (UTC)

Gil Jaretto

• Nominated by: JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 18:53, 23 August 2021 (UTC)
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Zed

• I'd like to see the time period (High Republic Era) mentioned/linked somewhere.
• Could you provide brief reasoning for why the brawl broke out? Zed42 (talk) 23:39, 27 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Done and done, thanks Zed! JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 23:46, 27 August 2021 (UTC)
    • That's good, but context for the Drengir would be nice. Zed42 (talk) 10:21, 2 September 2021 (UTC)
      • Added.
• Partly a suggestion more than an outright objection, but what is your opinion on merging the last two paragraphs in the Biography? I think it'd work better with the flow of the article and bring it to around an even size with the first paragraph. Zed42 (talk) 10:21, 2 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Sure, done. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 20:16, 2 September 2021 (UTC)

OOM

• Tut tut, the Drengir are plant-like, but alas they are not plants. Otherwise, good work. OOM 224 20:50, 16 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Fixed, thanks. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 16:55, 17 September 2021 (UTC)

Fuzzy Tauntaun

• Nominated by: Immi Thrax (talk) 16:11, 24 August 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Look at that lovely infobox color coordination!
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4. OOM 224 20:52, 23 September 2021 (UTC)

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Ayrehead

• There's definitely room for some images in the body of the article, if not of the drink itself then Hondo and Bazine or something would work well. A screenshot from Sims for the BTS would also be nice. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:29, 26 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Added another image! I don't have The Sims 4, so I sourced another official SW:GE promo image instead. Immi Thrax (talk) 10:54, 26 August 2021 (UTC)
• It seems odd to pipelink in-universe to the words "real world" especially without context. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:29, 26 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Corrected it slightly, but we've been pipelinking "real-world" on various other SW:GE articles. I'm not sure what context is missing? Immi Thrax (talk) 10:54, 26 August 2021 (UTC)
• I've added a screenshot from Sims, but obviously feel free to play around with placement and the caption as you see fit. The only other thing of note from Sims is that it costs a whopping sixty credits! Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:06, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Thank you! :) And that looks fine to me. The image/placement/caption, that is, not the PRICE. I'm not sure about noting that. Immi Thrax (talk) 15:37, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Price done! Immi Thrax (talk) 19:41, 5 September 2021 (UTC)

Fuzzy Pasta

• The intro feels a touch too long for this article's size. Maybe lose the bit about Archex and keep it for the body? JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 00:14, 7 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Condensed, but let me know if it's still too lengthy. Immi Thrax (talk) 01:48, 7 September 2021 (UTC)
    • That looks better for sure. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 21:09, 10 September 2021 (UTC)

OOM

• Just a couple things with the infobox:
  • I recommend leaving out "fruity" from the |description= field since it's kinda redundant to "Fruit" in the next field
  • I don't think "alcohol" needs to be mentioned in |other= OOM 224 17:29, 21 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Made the suggested infobox edits! Immi Thrax (talk) 03:57, 22 September 2021 (UTC)

Interdictor-class

• Nominated by: --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 02:08, 25 August 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: This is the true Interdictor-class Star Destroyer, not this imposter.
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1. Looks good to me! — YakovChaimTzvi (talk) 02:23, 25 August 2021 (UTC)
2. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 07:02, 29 August 2021 (UTC)

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Shayanomer

• The image in the body is extremely blurry. Please acquire a higher quality shot.
  • This will be a bit difficult, I'll let you know if/when I'm able to get an HD image. --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 19:16, 25 August 2021 (UTC)
    • Managed to get an HD screenshot from a friend. Unfortunately it's still pretty dark since the bridge Karius is at doesn't produce much light, and it's more in the corner of the Windfall. I've brightened it up the best that I could. --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 22:29, 27 August 2021 (UTC)
      • What about the infobox? In-game screenshots will always be preferred over Youtube captures. Shayanomer (talk) 06:29, 28 August 2021 (UTC)
        • Okay, I'll let you know! --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 13:40, 28 August 2021 (UTC)
        • Done. I tried editing the image to increase the brightness but that only makes it worse. I think the game is darker on Oculus Quest 2 compared to the original Oculus Quest --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 14:11, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
          • Looks a lot better. Shayanomer (talk) 14:13, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
• BTS needs to document SW.com article appearance prior to game's release. Shayanomer (talk) 08:06, 25 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Added. Let me know if the wording is appropriate. --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 19:16, 25 August 2021 (UTC)
    • Needs publication date, and the fact that it comes from SW.com. Shayanomer (talk) 19:27, 25 August 2021 (UTC)
      • Fixed --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 19:57, 25 August 2021 (UTC)
• Full publication dates required for comic and magazine issues in BTS, if available. Writer and illustrator needed for the comic. Shayanomer (talk) 08:18, 25 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Added. --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 19:16, 25 August 2021 (UTC)
    • Please put the full comic release date in one place, right now the sentence reads really weird. Shayanomer (talk) 19:27, 25 August 2021 (UTC)
      • Done --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 19:57, 25 August 2021 (UTC)
• On the Front Lines does not have BBY/ABY dates, so the date note needs more elaboration.
  • Expanded --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 19:16, 25 August 2021 (UTC)
    • Take note of my copy-edit here. Shayanomer (talk) 19:27, 25 August 2021 (UTC)
      • That looks great, thank you. --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 19:57, 25 August 2021 (UTC)
• Please implement {{FFCite}} for Ref 10. Shayanomer (talk) 11:08, 25 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Done. --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 19:16, 25 August 2021 (UTC)
• I'd like you to investigate everything here as well as any promotional material that may not be listed to spot potential appearances. Shayanomer (talk) 15:38, 26 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Done --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 22:42, 26 August 2021 (UTC)
• I would move the Karius image down to History, enlarge it, and left-align it.
  • Done --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 14:49, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
• Currently, the first date note does not connect Secret Cargo and On the Front Lines together. Shayanomer (talk) 10:08, 4 September 2021 (UTC)
  • How is it now? --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 14:49, 5 September 2021 (UTC)

Braha'tok-class

• In Heir to the Jedi, during the passage where Luke is intercepted by an Interdictor cruiser, it mentions how Interdictor cruisers had stopped being produced and that the Empire was now putting gravity projectors in Star Destroyers. This seems like a reference to the Interdictor-class being produced in favour over the cruisers. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 10:12, 26 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Added --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 22:42, 26 August 2021 (UTC)
• The second history paragraph has a few issues:
  • Three sentences start with "after", it'd be better for only one of them to do that.
  • You refer to "Admiral Karius" twice in two consecutive sentences, I'd like to see at least the second instance altered.
  • Similar with the above point, you also got two sentences ending with "the Interdictor." Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 08:48, 27 August 2021 (UTC)
    • Fixed all --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 13:15, 27 August 2021 (UTC)

OOM

• Is there a reason why some of the components aren't given numbers in the "Card Trader" ref?
• Similarly, if those components require confirmation from another source, so should the gravity well projectors. OOM 224 17:03, 26 September 2021 (UTC)

Hewett sector

• Nominated by: Imperators II^(Talk) 09:52, 27 August 2021 (UTC)
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1. Fan26 (Talk) 00:01, 4 September 2021 (UTC)
2. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 15:08, 14 September 2021 (UTC)
3. Objection handled via Discord. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 17:29, 14 September 2021 (UTC)
4. OOM 224 20:52, 25 September 2021 (UTC)

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Fan

• Shouldn't the Mackar cataclysms also be mentioned in the history section? Fan26 (Talk) 02:57, 3 September 2021 (UTC)
  • The precedent for sector articles is only doing events in History that are related to the sector in general or have an importance to the wider galaxy, and mentioning other events under Locations as needed. The cataclysm on Mackar, imo, is isolated enough that it should be covered in the latter. Imperators II^(Talk) 07:39, 3 September 2021 (UTC)
    • Makes sense. Fan26 (Talk) 00:01, 4 September 2021 (UTC)

Skirmish in the Kinoss system

• Nominated by: YakovChaimTzvi (talk) 20:37, 27 August 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: I believe this is clean and good enough :)
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Fan

• Continuing from our discussion on Discord:
  • The infobox still notes the skirimish as taking place in both the Lioaoin and Kinoss systems. Given our discussion, I'd argue the actual skirmish proper only takes place in Kinoss.
    • Addressed. — YakovChaimTzvi (talk) 22:05, 4 September 2021 (UTC)
  • "Prior to the mission and skirmish, " in the "Prelude" section.
    • Addressed. — YakovChaimTzvi (talk) 22:05, 4 September 2021 (UTC)
  • A large part of the article body is taken up by a section detailing the mission to Lioaoin, of which a small subsection titled "The skirmish" is a part of. I think most of the info regarding Thrawn baiting the Lioaoins can be condensed a bit and moved to the prelude section. Fan26 (Talk) 23:58, 3 September 2021 (UTC)
    • I adjusted the sectioning and added a quote for the Skirmish. I’ll have to think about it if you think “the mission” part still needs to be condensed. — YakovChaimTzvi (talk) 22:37, 6 September 2021 (UTC)
      • "Qilori knew that the Lioaoin Regime was indeed supporting piracy, but was bound by Navigators' Guild confidentiality not to divulge such information to Thrawn. Furthermore, Qilori could sense some of his colleagues aboard Lioaoin pirate vessels through the Force. Qilori warned Thrawn that searching for pirates would be dangerous, and if the Regime should suspect he was hunting pirates, they would be in danger." This can be cut down to contextualising Quilori's warning by just saying he was worried about his colleagues aboard the Lioaoin ships. Apart from that, it all looks like neccesarry information Fan26 (Talk) 04:12, 16 September 2021 (UTC)
        • Addressed. -- YakovChaimTzvi (talk) 17:03, 17 September 2021 (UTC)

Maxis

• Nominated by: Dentface (talk) 11:34, 28 August 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Why do I go down rabbit holes like this?
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• I tried to base how much non-Star Wars content is in the article off of the decision made in this CT forum. The CT says to state birth/death information but no other non-Star Wars info. I tried to carry that over to a company as best as possible. I included only the founding of the company and its acquisition by EA and no other information. Dentface (talk) 11:34, 28 August 2021 (UTC)

Deactivated Camp

• Nominated by: Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 01:00, 30 August 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: The game does use this capitalization
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1. Shayanomer (talk) 17:50, 4 September 2021 (UTC)
2. D MCCG (chat) 17:52, 4 September 2021 (UTC)
3. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 00:31, 7 September 2021 (UTC)
4. OOM 224 15:28, 17 September 2021 (UTC)

Moogan Tea

• Nominated by: Immi Thrax (talk) 06:37, 30 August 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: MoOoOoogan Tea
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Dent

• Regarding the paragraph about Padmé, does Thrawn: Alliances as a source explicitly say that she is human? Dentface (talk) 04:33, 31 August 2021 (UTC)
  • After doublechecking, yes, it does! Thanks for raising that point. Immi Thrax (talk) 08:17, 31 August 2021 (UTC)

Pasta Tea :P

• Outer Rim should not be mentioned in the infobox.
  • I'll come back to this one; discussing the fields in the food infobox on Discord. Immi Thrax (talk) 05:47, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
  • The infobox discussion wasn't clearly resolved, so I've removed the Outer Rim since it doesn't match the current term "homeworld." Immi Thrax (talk) 21:11, 10 September 2021 (UTC)
• Duplicate refs in the description.
  • Fixed! Immi Thrax (talk) 05:47, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
• Bts should mention the episode's season and the number of episode in that season.
  • Done! Immi Thrax (talk) 05:47, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
• Why the Falernum note? Seems unneeded.
  • Cut it. Immi Thrax (talk) 05:47, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
• Bts could also use some subsectioning. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 04:12, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
  • How is it now? Immi Thrax (talk) 05:47, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
• "When Moogan Tea and Black Spire Brew were first pictured" -- I'd specify where they were pictured.
  • Done! Immi Thrax (talk) 21:11, 10 September 2021 (UTC)
• "The non-canon video game expansion The Sims 4 Star Wars: Journey to Batuu also mistakenly depicts Moogan Tea and Black Spire Brew with the other's appearance." -- It's unclear to me which drink is mistakenly depicted by which. Were they switched? JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 20:58, 10 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Is it clear now? Immi Thrax (talk) 21:11, 10 September 2021 (UTC)
    • Yup.
• Missing a {{Mediacat}}. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 22:33, 12 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Totally forgot to add that! Must've been distracted going "pasta... tea?!" :P (Actually it's because I forgot my note to self to fix the image category caps. Fixed now!) Immi Thrax (talk) 22:59, 12 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments

• I feel like a {{Ret}} is called for since Ardees Beverage was retroactively made a separate thing, but where to put it? Immi Thrax (talk) 06:37, 30 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Not really sure if a retcon appearance qualifies. Addressing it in the BTS like you have is sufficient in my opinion. Dentface (talk) 07:32, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
    • {{Ret}} is used to signify an appearance that was retroactively established to be the subject, like Puck Naeco/Legends. I don't think there's a place for it here. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 04:14, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
    • Thanks for the feedback! :) Immi Thrax (talk) 05:47, 5 September 2021 (UTC)

Harte Secur Airbase

• Nominated by: Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 02:24, 31 August 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Wonder how much volleyball got played here
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1. God damn, I love me some Nabooan architecure Fan26 (Talk) 04:22, 21 September 2021 (UTC)

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Fan

• I think an image of OOM-9 could be added to the body. Fan26 (Talk) 03:30, 13 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Added Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 11:03, 14 September 2021 (UTC)

Amden vor Keioidian

• Nominated by: Dentface (talk) 14:18, 31 August 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Resurrected CAN is now a GAN
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Mac vor Roni

• Can you split up the opening quote so that there's a quote for the bio section? JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 00:16, 28 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Done. Dentface (talk) 01:14, 28 September 2021 (UTC)

Aftab Ackbar's starship

• Nominated by: Liverpool92 14:24, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: First GAN in a while
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Unidentified stormtrooper (Bogano)

• Nominated by: RattsT (talk) 02:07, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Empire absolutely would have won with more troops like this one. Luke and Leia went out like chumps.
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Fan

• "who had come to Bogano in the hopes of establishing a base for the Alliance" "in the hopes of" is used for when there's more than one hope, not when there's more than one person hoping, so it should be "in the hope of" here. Fan26 (Talk) 03:59, 12 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Fixed. RattsT (talk) 18:58, 15 September 2021 (UTC)

Wookiee

• Small thing, but "Category:Humans" should be changed to "Category:Unidentified humans." KingWookiee (talk) 02:32, 21 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Added. RattsT (talk) 15:21, 21 September 2021 (UTC)

Lewis

• Stormtrooper Corps should be added to the infobox, I assume you didn't add it because of having to link it? Though per the layout guide you don't actually need to 'Organizations in any character infobox that are inherently implied by a stated role (examples: Stormtrooper Corps does not need to be linked within a character article body if the article states that the character is a stormtrooper)' Lewisr (talk) 04:18, 21 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Added. RattsT (talk) 15:21, 21 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments

• Note that there are other stormtroopers that appear in both this story and its predecessor, but it's impossible to determine if this specific stormtrooper is one of them. RattsT (talk) 02:07, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
• I love this I haven’t properly vetted the article yet so I can’t actually cast a support vote, but I appreciate this greatly. — YakovChaimTzvi (talk) 02:53, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
• The article uses the term "smuggle". Does the source material use this word as well? Stake black ^msg 08:18, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
  • It does not, no. RattsT (talk) 17:08, 5 September 2021 (UTC)

Unidentified clone trooper (Rex's false grave)

• Nominated by: SilverSunbird (talk) 06:39, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Having never done this before, I have a good feeling about this.
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1. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 17:03, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
2. Looks great! Editoronthewiki (talk) 19:05, 5 September 2021 (UTC)

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Luca

• Planet is double linked.
• We avoid using the word "this" in IU articles.
• Is there no relvant quote? LucaRoR ^(Talk) 07:13, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Got rid of the double link and most instances of "this"; there's one in the BTS that I think still works for the wording. I could not find any relevant quotes: the scene in Ahsoka where the trooper is mentioned has no dialogue, and I am not aware of any more potential quote material that could fit on this page from any other sources. SilverSunbird (talk) 07:22, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
    • I’ll back Silver up here: there is no material with quotable dialogue. — YakovChaimTzvi (talk) 07:25, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
    • There are still two "this" in IU parts of the article: on in P&T and one in a reference. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 09:42, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
      • Fixed, down to just the one in the BTS I mentioned. SilverSunbird (talk) 16:17, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
• In the 2nd refernce you should link died earlier in the sentence.
• Is the continuity error really an error? I mean, I think that clones have more than only one armor, I might be wrong though. (Fell free to ignore this objection).
• Does Star Wars: The Clone Wars – "Old Friends Not Forgotten" identifie Mandalore as a planet?
• Did the trooper explictly die during the Sige or was he killed during Order 66? LucaRoR ^(Talk) 16:29, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
  • I found a source that does say Mandalore is a planet. As for how this guy died, the novel implies it was during the Siege but does not say so outright, so I reworded it. SilverSunbird (talk) 16:36, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Regarding the armour, the exact quote from the novel is "And you couldn't tell clones apart when they were dead, especially not if they were buried in another's set of armor." It does imply that this trooper was buried in Rex's entire set of armour, not just some pieces of it, which is something that has always bugged me since it never quite gelled with Rebels, where Rex still has several pieces of his armour including his helmet, which is a custom job that would be difficult, if not impossible, to replicate at short notice. SilverSunbird (talk) 16:40, 5 September 2021 (UTC)

Lewisr

• In line with point 6 of Wookieepedia:Sourcing#Rules, you should try cutting down on the amount of references used. For example, the novel establishes the clones were forced to comply with Order 66 due to the chip, and that Ahsoka wasn't a Jedi at that point Lewisr (talk) 16:35, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
  • References have been streamlined. SilverSunbird (talk) 16:48, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
    • You can further streamline, Mandalore being a planet is sourceable to the Galactic Atlas, and the specifics of Order 66 could more than likely be sourced to one of the pre-existing references rather than introduce a whole new in Episode III, though it'd be best to check first Lewisr (talk) 17:20, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
      • Done. I'm leaving in Revenge of the Sith, though, because it has a more thorough explanation of Order 66 than the book does. SilverSunbird (talk) 17:28, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
• Does the Star Wars Book say this trooper is a member of the 332nd Division? Currently the article says it does
• You don't need a full release date, just the year being sourced to the novel will do.
  • Added a note for the 332nd, streamlined the release date. SilverSunbird (talk) 17:28, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
• See precedent on Mixer for how information regarding the databank and clones is presented Lewisr (talk) 17:50, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Done. SilverSunbird (talk) 17:53, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
• Reference notes need to be fully linked Lewisr (talk) 18:11, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Added several links. Is that sufficient, or do I need to add more? SilverSunbird (talk) 18:15, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
    • The 2nd and 3rd need to be fully linked as well, each individual note needs to be fully linked like any article would be following the same rules Lewisr (talk) 18:25, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
      • Done. SilverSunbird (talk) 18:32, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
• Looking at the BTS, "The Lost Commanders" can be dated to fifteen years after the end of the war, I just updated the date note on that episode's page Lewisr (talk) 18:25, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
  • I have taken the liberty of stealing your note from there to use here. SilverSunbird (talk) 18:32, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
• There's mention that before Ahsoka went to her ship that 'She placed a hand on the grave marker and allowed herself one more moment to think about the man who was buried there and about the man who wasn't.' This should be added Lewisr (talk) 16:50, 7 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Done. SilverSunbird (talk) 16:54, 7 September 2021 (UTC)

Editor

• Hey, silver! welcome to the GAN! I just have two minor things to request before casting my vote
  • I think the sentence starting with "in order to fake their deaths" can be the start of a new paragraph
  • You could fit File:TanoAndRexMedBay.png in the biography section and File:332nd-grave-yard.png in the behind the scenes to ensure the article has some images. Editoronthewiki (talk) 18:20, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
    • Added the paragraph break and one picture. I think leaving out images of the SW:TCW depiction of Ahsoka's Order 66 experience in the main article body is for the best considering how different it is to the novel, given that the novel's version of events subtly implies Rex already had his chip removed. SilverSunbird (talk) 18:24, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
      • I understand the concern, though the image would be more for showcasing the characters involved. If you don't want to still, feel free to use an image of Mandalore, or just an image of Ahsoka or Rex on their own or something (like maybe File:The Shadow of Umbara Rex.jpg, to ensure there is another picture Editoronthewiki (talk) 18:34, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
        • It just occurred to me that a picture of Ahsoka and Rex on Mandalore from "Old Friends Not Forgotten" or "The Phantom Apprentice" would, IMO, be best in the article body. Just have to get one and put it in. SilverSunbird (talk) 18:37, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
        • It's from "Shattered", actually, but I found a picture. SilverSunbird (talk) 18:52, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
          • There's also File:Ahsoka-Rex-talk-Mandalore.png if you want one during the siege. Nevertheless, either works Editoronthewiki (talk) 19:05, 5 September 2021 (UTC)

Shayanomer

• "during or after the Siege of Mandalore" This implies that the character could have died after 19 BBY, when the siege takes place.
• Image captions should connect with the subject of this article. Shayanomer (talk) 19:33, 6 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Reworded the note to be more clear. Ahsoka does not specify whether the trooper died directly during the Siege or during Ahsoka and Rex's escape from Order 66, only that she isn't the person who killed him. I also rewrote the caption for the image used in "Biography". SilverSunbird (talk) 23:01, 6 September 2021 (UTC)
    • Oh, by the way, is there any particular reason why you pipelinked Sith Lord to Dark Lord of the Sith? There's not that much of a difference in meaning, and I'm curious. SilverSunbird (talk) 04:52, 7 September 2021 (UTC)
      • We link to the most specific term on the first linking instance. In this case, "Dark Lord of the Sith" refers to one of the two active Sith Lords at a time. Shayanomer (talk) 09:44, 7 September 2021 (UTC)
        • Another question: why did you twice remove the link to Siege of Mandalore in the article body — the only link to the battle's name in the article body, I might add — on the grounds of "compliance with the Manual of Style"? Because frankly, that doesn't actually make any sense and I would appreciate if you could leave it alone. SilverSunbird (talk) 16:31, 7 September 2021 (UTC)
          • An honest mistake. Shayanomer (talk) 16:34, 7 September 2021 (UTC)
            • All good then. Happens to everyone. SilverSunbird (talk) 16:36, 7 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments

• Good work. It’s half past midnight so I’m not ready to cast an official support vote, but it looks pretty good to me. I’ll vet it further in the morning. — YakovChaimTzvi (talk) 07:18, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
• Just wanted to second the fantastic work, it's great seeing your name on here! Supreme Emperor ^Holocomm 00:07, 7 September 2021 (UTC)

Moralan

• Nominated by: Imperators II^(Talk) 09:18, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
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Nar Bo Sholla

• Nominated by: Imperators II^(Talk) 09:17, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
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2. Do the Wanted by Cracken noms ever stop? JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 15:45, 24 September 2021 (UTC)
3. OOM 224 16:52, 27 September 2021 (UTC)

Prazhi

• Nominated by: Imperators II^(Talk) 09:20, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
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Thomork

• Nominated by: Imperators II^(Talk) 09:19, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
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Yobshrimp Noodle Salad

• Nominated by: Immi Thrax (talk) 18:37, 6 September 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: If a "yob" is a rude person, are yobshrimp rude shrimp?
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Macaroni Salad (hey, a real thing)!

• The first two image captions need to be made more relevant to the article subject. On top of that, why is the other image of the salad only in the bts?
  • I had my reasons, but I've swapped them and rewriten the captions. Immi Thrax (talk) 04:35, 25 September 2021 (UTC)
• Not sure that this is self-sourcing: "As the availability of the dish at the theme parks has fluctuated with real-world events..."
  • Added a reference note, possibly an overly long one. Have a look and let me know! Immi Thrax (talk) 04:35, 25 September 2021 (UTC)
• You say that Eloc Throno mentioned the dish in his book, but the bts says that the salad is not mentioned there. Are we treating the Surabat salad as the same thing or not? JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 16:40, 24 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Discussed with other invested parties in the WP:GE channel, which seems to lean towards treating as the same thing, so I've revised the explanation to clarify that contradiction. Immi Thrax (talk) 04:35, 25 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments

• Requesting a Sims 4 screenshot for the BTS, please! Immi Thrax (talk) 18:37, 6 September 2021 (UTC)

Oxon City

• Nominated by: Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 03:19, 7 September 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Fun range of sources to draw from
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Shayanomer

• Magazines Like Gamer need full publication date in the BTS. Shayanomer (talk) 20:37, 17 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Done Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 01:17, 18 September 2021 (UTC)

Hemi

• Nominated by: Liverpool92 15:00, 8 September 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: First Mon Calamari character GAN
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Vitus

• To begin with, I think we can split the History paragraph --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 15:26, 8 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Fixed through discord.--Liverpool92 03:09, 11 September 2021 (UTC)

Braha

• Article currently falls under this category Category:Marvel usages with archived URLs not in Archive. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 21:16, 9 September 2021 (UTC)
  • For the record, this maintenance category is Cade's fault; the article does provide backup links as mandated by the sourcing policy. Nothing that can be fixed in the article, really. 1358 ^(Talk) 19:13, 10 September 2021 (UTC)
    • Ok I'll just ignore it for now then.--Liverpool92 03:09, 11 September 2021 (UTC)
      • Fair enough. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 07:46, 11 September 2021 (UTC)

Macaroni

• Context for the Executor.
• Species and gender should be mentioned in the bio or P+T, not both.
• Skin and eye color should only be mentioned in the P+T.
• File:Hemi and Dodonna.png can use some cropping, and the stuff to the left of Dodanna doesn't seem necessary. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 21:23, 10 September 2021 (UTC)
  • All fixed.--Liverpool92 03:41, 11 September 2021 (UTC)

Fan

• Alliance Fleet links to the legends page for Rebel Alliance Navy.
• "The Mon Calamari told General Dodonna that the Alliance Fleet had escaped, but their shields were failing." Specify that it was the Republic's shields which were failing here, as this sentence could be misinterpreted as the shields of all rebel ships that escaped Mako-Ta failing at once.
• Starship should be linked to in the body.
• "When the starships were able to get back and running" Back from what?
• "Hemi was at Dodanna's side when he ordered the fleet to scatter" specify that Dodonna was the one who ordered the fleet to scatter. Fan26 (Talk) 03:35, 11 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Handled. For the first objection the link wasn't needed to begin with and the fourth one I reworded the whole sentence.--Liverpool92 03:57, 11 September 2021 (UTC)

Ayrehead02

• I think you can expand the start of the bio to include a couple of sentences of description of what is happening during the Assault on the Mako-Ta Space Docks and the Republic's part in it. For example, it sounds awkward to say "the Star Destroyers were converging on them as they had used the MC80A as bait" and "override codes to get the Shu-Torun technologies that rendered them useless" as you're referring back to information that should ideally have been established up front. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:08, 13 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Added.--Liverpool92 21:43, 17 September 2021 (UTC)

Gureni Telsij

• Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:04, 12 September 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: I look forward to regularly updating with this with more sources that misidentify Telsij as Yong
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1. Good work. Up until now, I had always thought he was flying a B-wing due to the helmet. OOM 224 21:01, 19 September 2021 (UTC)
2. Same tbh Fan26 (Talk) 03:50, 21 September 2021 (UTC)
3. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 15:41, 24 September 2021 (UTC)

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Macaroni

• The second bio paragraph feels a bit long for not mentioning Gureni at all, maybe could use some trimming?
  • I considered this when writing the article, but I think all of this info is relevant given that Telsij is one of the pilots taking part in all that stuff and I think it sets up the context for his shock as they're overwhelmed by an unexpected amount of TIEs. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:37, 23 September 2021 (UTC)
    • Alright, I suppose there's no harm in it. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 15:41, 24 September 2021 (UTC)
• (Review note) American English, Ayre... :P JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 03:50, 23 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Curse your Zs! Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:37, 23 September 2021 (UTC)

Ryle Torsin

• Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:28, 12 September 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Hopefully we'll get the correct spelling of his name at some point and a new callsign.
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Arbo (Ewok)

• Nominated by: JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 14:46, 14 September 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: This CA by Bob was wrongly killed; after cleanup we're at 252 words.
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OOM

• I would mention Arbo's position(s) in the tribe in the intro since it's pretty important to the character OOM 224 14:38, 24 September 2021 (UTC)

Nano-spray paint

• Nominated by: LucaRoR ^(Talk) 18:26, 14 September 2021 (UTC)
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1. Great job! ~ D MCCG (chat) 21:35, 25 September 2021 (UTC)

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Shayanomer

• Body can use an image.
• I've added a pre-release SW.com post to the article, meaning that the BTS is in need of an update. Shayanomer (talk) 19:03, 14 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Both done, I've added an infobox per Erebus request (thanks Erebus). LucaRoR ^(Talk) 05:03, 15 September 2021 (UTC)
    • Needs publication date as well. Shayanomer (talk) 13:52, 15 September 2021 (UTC)
      • Added. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 14:03, 15 September 2021 (UTC)

Steadfast (Venator-class)

• Nominated by: Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 19:28, 14 September 2021 (UTC)
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Uba IV

• Nominated by: Shayanomer (talk) 08:52, 16 September 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: I would say I should eat my own words, but I'm glad to see this getting more exposure in canon.
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1. Zed42 (talk) 10:40, 16 September 2021 (UTC)
2. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 11:56, 16 September 2021 (UTC)
3. Always glad to see Boushh-related content. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 16:43, 16 September 2021 (UTC)
4. OOM 224 18:03, 16 September 2021 (UTC)
5. Didn't realize you had enough votes before reviewing, but here's an extra one anyway :P JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 04:48, 17 September 2021 (UTC)

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Braha

• It's my understanding that the five Ubese are a crew, I'd like to at least see that linked somehow. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 11:21, 16 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Yes, it is. Shayanomer (talk) 11:37, 16 September 2021 (UTC)

Luca

• I do not think this article can be considered stable (per rule 6) since Domina Tagge is offering the crew to return to their planet, an event that would certainly change the article's "History" section. If you believe it is actually stable, then I'll be more than happy to support it. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 16:29, 16 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Struck per Discord conversation. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 16:43, 16 September 2021 (UTC)

Finis Valorum Memorial

• Nominated by: Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 07:38, 17 September 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: He died but he lived
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Darrb

• Nominated by: NBDani (talk) 21:18, 17 September 2021 (UTC)
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Yakov

• Welcome to the GAN, Dani!!! Glad to see you here. Quick things you'll have to fix: <ref> tags go after periods, commas, and other punctuation; not before them. -- YakovChaimTzvi (talk) 21:21, 17 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Thank you for the welcome :) Done NBDani (talk) 17:54, 26 September 2021 (UTC)
• Also, every paragraph, bullet point or table row needs at least one citation. -- YakovChaimTzvi (talk) 21:21, 17 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Done NBDani (talk) 17:54, 26 September 2021 (UTC)
• Not including the infobox, the intro should not contain citations. Everything stated in the article's intro should appear in the body, with an appropriate citation. I think you're good on that as long as his bio mentions selling fruits and veggies. If that's the case, you can remove the citations from the intro. -- YakovChaimTzvi (talk) 21:25, 17 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Removed the citations in Intro and made it clear in Bio that the wares were fruits/vegetables. NBDani (talk) 21:38, 17 September 2021 (UTC)

Vergence

• The intro is a little short, and doesn't describe the events mentioned in the bio section.
  • Expanded. Thoughts? NBDani (talk) 22:05, 17 September 2021 (UTC)
• Please split the second sentence of the BTS.
  • Done. NBDani (talk) 22:05, 17 September 2021 (UTC)
• Reviewing note: for future reference, there should always be a space between the intro and the bio section. Also, image captions shouldn't end in a period if they aren't a full sentence. VergenceScatter (talk) 21:46, 17 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Thank you for this information, trying to break the habit of the need to remove "unnecessary" spaces. NBDani (talk) 22:05, 17 September 2021 (UTC)

Manoof

• Just with your referencing, each reference needs to support ALL of the information preceding it. The first sentence of the biography for example attributes all the information to ref 4, You should have other references to identify what said he was male, what said he was Gabdorin, what said he was a vendor in the vargo spaceport, etc. Same goes for the actual names, so if the episode doesn't actually call it the Vargo Spaceport, you'd have to separately reference it. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 00:41, 19 September 2021 (UTC)
  • I Think I added (and removed) references in the right places. Let me know what you think please. The Missing Agent ID'd him as a Vendor and the town as Vargo Spaceport. Breakout ID'd the planet as a planet but no name and Darrb as his name and male gender. I included the Databank for the planet for the name. NBDani (talk) 22:57, 19 September 2021 (UTC)
    • Much better, just check that you're not using DIFFERENT references needlessly. For example, the last paragraph for BTS stood out as I read it recently and can be fully referenced to reference 7, so you wouldn't need reference 1 in the middle (it may be that it can be completely referenced to 1). This is per point 6 of WP:Sourcing Rules. I'll go into each reference in detail once this is done :) almost there! Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 04:37, 21 September 2021 (UTC)
      • Really good catch. I looked at where else I used the Youtube link and found I could use Bucket's List there too so the Youtube is gone completely.NBDani (talk) 10:50, 21 September 2021 (UTC)
        • Ok I'm happy with it all bar one. Just some consistency on what you use to reference things and keeping that same reference for that thing. So the infobox has a different reference for his gender than in the article body, so the infobox should be updated to match. Don't forget to add the full reference when you move it so you don't get a broken ref (I've done that a few times). Just check the others are consistent too (ie across the sections/infobox) Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 09:33, 24 September 2021 (UTC)
          • I switched all physical description notes from Bucket's List to The Missing Agent, including species. I had to add a The Missing Agent to another point in the BTS (source for appearing in the 12th episode, prior it was sourced to the episode's air date source)
• Can we add a location of the Vargo Spaceport? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 00:41, 19 September 2021 (UTC)
  • I specify it's on the Planet Varkana. That's all the info available on it.
    • That's fine :) Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 07:01, 20 September 2021 (UTC)
• Can we get a species for Kaz and Yeagar? Can that use an existing reference or something else? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 00:41, 19 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Added Human for Kaz and Yeager. Mirialan for Synara. Not sure if it should be Occupation>Species>Name or Species>Occupation>Name.
    • Just tweak the wording to maybe say "Human resistance members Kaz and Yeager, along with their astromech droid and mirialan..." and then maybe run it through a word processor to check spelling/grammar. Always worth a check when you do substantial edits throughout :) Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 07:01, 20 September 2021 (UTC)
      • I struggled to find a good phrasing of this sentence that included their species and looked to other GANs for inspiration. It seemed for characters passing by the species weren't mentioned just the occupation. I think on that basis and just the general wordiness of that sentence with the species included, I should not include the species descriptor for Kaz, Jarek, and Synara. -- I have run the article through an outside word processor and caught some more errors, thank you. NBDani (talk) 17:34, 20 September 2021 (UTC)
• "following a resistance distress call" sounds like the distress call shifted locations. What does the actual source say? Is tracking a better word? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 00:41, 19 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Kaz asks CB-23 to hone in on the signal. I changed the wording to match
    • Perfect
• "could hide in the his home" needs a grammar check ;) Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 00:41, 19 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Missed this when changing non-gendered wording to he/him. Fixed. NBDani (talk) 15:09, 19 September 2021 (UTC)
    • Easy to do :) Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 07:01, 20 September 2021 (UTC)
• I can't remember the episode but do the stormtroopers pass and then Darrb stomps on the foot or is there a bit of time between the two events? Article indicates some time passed Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 00:41, 19 September 2021 (UTC)
  • I removed the word eventually. NBDani (talk) 22:57, 19 September 2021 (UTC)
• Can this be explained any better? "shot the door open" could mean they shot the control panel and the door opened, they shot the actual door and blew it open, etc Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 00:41, 19 September 2021 (UTC)
  • I reworded it (it was the control panel) and expanded too. NBDani (talk) 22:57, 19 September 2021 (UTC)
• "He tried to signal that the spies were behind them" Try to drop the he and them as its not 100% clear on first reading who "he" or "them" is. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 00:41, 19 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Reworded.
• P&T can be expanded to note his personality traits in how he treated the spies and the stormtroopers. Was he gruff? rude? friendly? Can also drop the double ref that is currently there, one episode is sufficient to establish what he looked like :) Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 00:41, 19 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Expanded. NBDani (talk) 14:42, 19 September 2021 (UTC)
• Context in BTS for Star Wars Resistance being a comic, movie, tv show, book? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 00:41, 19 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Context and more added. NBDani (talk) 14:42, 19 September 2021 (UTC)
• This article has some BTS relevant info and needs to be added as an IMO https://www.starwars.com/news/buckets-list-extra-breakout-star-wars-resistance Amleto should be linked here. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 00:41, 19 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Done NBDani (talk) 00:45, 20 September 2021 (UTC)
• You've introduced a redirect in the BTS with Basic, which also redirects to the Legends article. Need to replace it like so: [[Galactic Basic Standard|Basic]]. If the above link isn't orange, check preferences -> Gadgets as there's an option to highlight redirects :) Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 07:01, 20 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Fixed and Gadgets updated (huge thank you) NBDani (talk) 15:20, 20 September 2021 (UTC)
• I've tweaked the P&T, so just check it's still correct to the sources and you're happy with it :) Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 09:33, 24 September 2021 (UTC)

Macaroni

• That intro is definitely too small at the moment for the article size.
  • Expanded. NBDani (talk) 13:17, 24 September 2021 (UTC)
• The infobox image is fairly low quality, any chance you can improve it?
  • I'm unable to take screenshots of D+ at the moment but am in pursuit of an alternative, stay tuned. NBDani (talk) 13:17, 24 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Done!!! NBDani (talk) 15:58, 24 September 2021 (UTC)
    • To be honest I think the other shot worked better and had better lighting, the issue I had with it was the resolution. Can you try to get a high-quality version of that screenshot? JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 16:33, 24 September 2021 (UTC)
      • Done NBDani (talk) 18:05, 24 September 2021 (UTC)
• The Varkana Databank entry is listed in Sources, but Darrb is not mentioned there from what I can see. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 21:13, 23 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Sorry, had to use it as a reference and put it there without thinking it through. Fixed.NBDani (talk) 13:17, 24 September 2021 (UTC)
    • No worries. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 16:33, 24 September 2021 (UTC)
• The links to home and vendor incorrect, please remove them. Merchant works for vendor, though.
  • Correct. NBDani (talk) 03:19, 28 September 2021 (UTC)
• The year should be mentioned in the intro.
• Just because Station to Station is before SW:GE doesn't mean it's in 34 ABY. The date note will need elaboration.
• Who are they carrying here? "carrying him inside without approval."
  • Changed and clarified another pronoun before this one as well. NBDani (talk) 03:19, 28 September 2021 (UTC)
• The {{Cite_web}} should not be listed in Sources either. If it mentions Darrb it can be moved to an External links section, but if not it should be removed.
  • Removed. NBDani (talk) 03:19, 28 September 2021 (UTC)
• (Reviewing note) Here's my copy-edit of the article. Be sure to watch out for underlinking next time. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 22:29, 27 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Thank you for this lesson, I have ideas to prevent underlinking for myself in the future. NBDani (talk) 03:19, 28 September 2021 (UTC)

Celegia/Legends

• Nominated by: Imperators II^(Talk) 11:04, 18 September 2021 (UTC)
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Verre Sydia

• Nominated by: Cade Calrayn 17:35, 18 September 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: I am exhausted and vaguely dehydrated from my bike ride so I may have missed something but here
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Unidentified archaeologist

• Nominated by: DarthRuiz30 (talk) 20:20, 18 September 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Originally a CAN that reached 270 word count. Both objections have addressed. Removal of the contractions and sectioning.
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Horville

• Nominated by: JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 03:18, 19 September 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: This episode has lots of fun stuff, this'll be the Wook's fourth status article from it
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Shayanomer

• If Horville's species doesn't have a page of its own, then filling out the species infobox field isn't necessary. Shayanomer (talk) 06:42, 19 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Or better yet, just change it to "Alien," like this. Shayanomer (talk) 14:42, 20 September 2021 (UTC)
    • Fixed. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 02:59, 23 September 2021 (UTC)

Skynara system

• Nominated by: Imperators II^(Talk) 09:25, 20 September 2021 (UTC)
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Berason

• Nominated by: Imperators II^(Talk) 11:07, 22 September 2021 (UTC)
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Steelious

• Nominated by: Imperators II^(Talk) 19:10, 23 September 2021 (UTC)
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Raskane IV

• Nominated by: Imperators II^(Talk) 13:43, 24 September 2021 (UTC)
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Jez Planchet

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Battle of the Phu system

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• I think you can fit an image of the Malevolence in the prelude section. Maybe File:Malevolence profile.png. Editoronthewiki (talk) 16:49, 27 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Added. Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 16:57, 27 September 2021 (UTC)