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Attack on Chewbacca's camp[]
- Nominated by: Commander Code-8 Hello There! 07:42, 28 February 2021 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Lets see if I can complete my long held sporadic efforts to write up every article from the Galactic Battlegrounds campaigns.
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Support[]
- UberSoldat93 (talk) 16:23, 1 March 2021 (UTC)
- DwartiiDelver (talk) 21:29, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
- Chewbacca and Obi-Wan: always a winning combination OOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 07:33, 5 April 2021 (UTC)
- I imagine their conversation in the Mos Eisley Cantina went something like "Holy shit, I remember you from that time we found a holocron, that was rad!" Commander Code-8 Hello There! 10:22, 5 April 2021 (UTC)
- 1358 (Talk) 20:59, 16 May 2021 (UTC)
- Tommy-Macaroni 16:02, 18 May 2021 (UTC)
- Imperators II(Talk) 09:45, 19 May 2021 (UTC)
Object[]
OOM[]
Since both Battle Droid Beta Version and the beetle droid are B1 battle droids, the links to droid and battle droid in the infobox, intro, and the article body should be changed to B1-Series battle droid.- Like that?
- Yes. I've also changed the first Droid/Legends link in the article body to Battle droid/Legends since the battle droid is a more specific classification for those droids, like how B1 battle droid is more specific than battle droid. OOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 12:33, 14 March 2021 (UTC)
- Like that?
Did LUH hold the rank of commander? If not, the links to Commander/Legends should be changed to Commanding officer/Legends.- No rank is given in the game, so changed.
What did LUH do during the attack?OOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 22:13, 13 March 2021 (UTC)- LUH-989 is just the name thrown in for the leader of the Trade Federation in the level, so the most that can be said is that he was leading the droids here. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 12:06, 14 March 2021 (UTC)
- Since LUH wasn't at the scene of attack, can you say that she (LUH is the female protagonist in THX 1138) commanded the droids remotely? OOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 12:33, 14 March 2021 (UTC)
- That should be okay. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 10:17, 15 March 2021 (UTC)
- Since LUH wasn't at the scene of attack, can you say that she (LUH is the female protagonist in THX 1138) commanded the droids remotely? OOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 12:33, 14 March 2021 (UTC)
- LUH-989 is just the name thrown in for the leader of the Trade Federation in the level, so the most that can be said is that he was leading the droids here. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 12:06, 14 March 2021 (UTC)
"Although" is preferred over "though" in formal writing.- Okay
"the player has four combat ready units, Chewbacca, two troopers and a mounted trooper" If I'm reading this correctly, are you trying to say that Chewbacca and the three other troopers constitute the "four combat ready units"? It's not very clear, has two items that are both called troopers—one of them is specified to be mounted whereas the other has no specification—and lacks an Oxford comma.The article says the attack also affected Shoran's camp, which makes me think the title "attack on Chewbacca's camp" should be changed to something more accurate.OOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 17:10, 15 March 2021 (UTC)- The only information about how Shoran's camp was affected is that he asked for resources to recover, as shown in the quote in the aftermath section. So if he needed to recover it's reasonable to claim that he was affected, but it would be going beyond what the game actually says about it to claim that he was actually attacked, which is what changing the title to something like "Attack on Chewbacca and Shoran's camps" would do. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 05:40, 16 March 2021 (UTC)
Last thing: I think it's worth mentioning the result of the war in the introOOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 07:17, 5 April 2021 (UTC)- How's that? Commander Code-8 Hello There! 07:28, 5 April 2021 (UTC)
Ecks Dee[]
"Shoran's camp was also affected by the attack." Does the game clarify how the camp was affected? Damage?1358 (Talk) 09:28, 30 April 2021 (UTC)- No, per above reply to OOM. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 11:29, 30 April 2021 (UTC)
Imp[]
Sorry, but given that the infobox bumps the image, I have to say there's no room for that image there. Please remove it.Imperators II(Talk) 16:15, 18 May 2021 (UTC)- Removed
Okay, so I understand the reasoning behind the "5-6 Wookiees" in the infobox. But why then does the bulleted list give a hard "2 others" figure?- An oversight. I've just removed that line since I can't find any other precedent to support it.
"The construction allowed Jinn's Padawan, Obi-Wan Kenobi, to arrive on Alaris Prime and collect a Jedi holocron found in Shoran's camp.[1]" — I'm not sure I understand why the construction of the temple allowed Kenobi to arrive on the moon? Did the temple have some kind of teleportation device? Did the delays caused by the construction allow for Kenobi's arrival?- Its game mechanics because the Obi-Wan unit can only be created at the temple. I can't think of a way to explain it in-universe.
Can you explain to me what has the necessity or non-necessity of garrisoning workers for their safety have to do with the size of of the team needed to repel the attack?Imperators II(Talk) 16:44, 18 May 2021 (UTC)- Reworded for clarity. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 00:37, 19 May 2021 (UTC)
Comments[]
- That useless scroll bar appeared after I made the nomination, anyone know what's causing it? Commander Code-8 Hello There! 07:53, 28 February 2021 (UTC)
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 09:45, 19 May 2021 (UTC)