Changes: Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Casus Sandral

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The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was unsuccessful. Please do not modify it.

Casus Sandral

Nominated by: nayayen ★talk 14:55, January 17, 2016 (UTC)
Nomination comments: I'm not dead! This guy is though. I haven't done this in years, so please treat this more like a first time nominator...

(0 ACs/2 Users/2 Total)

Support

VDO ^talk 16:47, January 17, 2016 (UTC)
Cwedin^(talk) 05:35, February 17, 2016 (UTC)

Object

VDO: Per your request, some apparent "so fix it" issues will be noted so that the changes can be made by you:
1. ~~Pipe links should be removed from all quotes.~~
  - Done, QOTD fooled me. nayayen ★talk 16:31, January 17, 2016 (UTC)
2. ~~The "Behind the scenes" section should also be completely sourced. (looks like it needs to be sourced to KotOR)~~
  - It's self-sourcing with the direct attribution in the text, but doesn't hurt to add I guess. nayayen ★talk 16:31, January 17, 2016 (UTC)
- This last line is not an objection, just wanted to let you know I've gone through and made some small changes to things that stuck out to me. If you disagree with them feel free to revert, I felt they flowed better and didn't seem to run-on this way. VDO ^talk 15:56, January 17, 2016 (UTC)
  - Those changes are all good, thanks for the review! nayayen ★talk 16:31, January 17, 2016 (UTC)
    - Sweet. VDO ^talk 16:47, January 17, 2016 (UTC)

Toprawa

Infobox objections: The character's hair, eye, and skin color should all be detailed in the infobox if possible. This information should then additionally be detailed in a Personality and traits section.
- I can do, although while we have nothing to indicate his appearance wasn't like the generic corpse, I'm hesitant to state it as if it was. Would wording it as "his corpse had grey hair etc" be inappropriate?
  - That seems overly circumspect, especially since, as you say, there's nothing suggesting his appearance would change for any reason. You would be fine just stating his appearance as normal. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:39, February 2, 2016 (UTC)
    - I thought that'd be the case, but wanted to double check. Added to infobox and new P&T section. nayayen ★talk 20:20, February 5, 2016 (UTC)
The article misspells "archaeological" in the main quote. Is this your error or the game's? Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 01:02, January 27, 2016 (UTC)
- From the game; they use both spellings throughout. nayayen ★talk 22:59, January 27, 2016 (UTC)
  - In that case, you should mark it as a misspelling in the original text by placing [sic] in the quote after the misspelled word. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:39, February 2, 2016 (UTC)
    - Added. nayayen ★talk 20:20, February 5, 2016 (UTC)

Ayrehead02

Could you give context for Ahlan when he is first introduced in the bio please? Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:23, April 4, 2016 (UTC)
An article needs to be made for his mother. Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:23, April 4, 2016 (UTC)

Comments

Vote to remove nomination (AC only)

Unaddressed objections from April, user absent since February. - Sir Cavalier of One^{(Squadron channel)} 15:52, June 3, 2016 (UTC)
IFYLOFD ^(Talk) 22:55, June 3, 2016 (UTC)
Exiled Jedi (talk) 00:54, June 10, 2016 (UTC)

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 ==[[Casus Sandral]]==
 *'''Nominated by''': '''[[User:Nayayen|<span style="color:#0C307A;">nayayen</span>]][[User talk:Nayayen|<span style="color:#256BB1;">★talk</span>]]''' 14:55, January 17, 2016 (UTC)
 *'''Nomination comments''': I'm not dead! This guy is though. I haven't done this in years, so please treat this more like a first time nominator...
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 ====Support====
 #<span style="font-size:0.9em;font-family:flama-book, monaco">''[[User:VDO|'''VDO''']]''</span> <sup>[[User talk:VDO|<small>talk</small>]]</sup>  16:47, January 17, 2016 (UTC)
+#[[User:Cwedin|<span style="color: #3366BB;">'''Cwedin'''</span>]]<sup>[[User_talk:Cwedin|<span style="color: #3366BB;">(talk)</span>]]</sup> 05:35, February 17, 2016 (UTC)
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 =====Toprawa=====
 *Infobox objections: The character's hair, eye, and skin color should all be detailed in the infobox if possible. This information should then additionally be detailed in a Personality and traits section.
+**I can do, although while we have nothing to indicate his appearance ''wasn't'' like the generic corpse, I'm hesitant to state it as if it was. Would wording it as "his corpse had grey hair etc" be inappropriate?
+***That seems overly circumspect, especially since, as you say, there's nothing suggesting his appearance would change for any reason. You would be fine just stating his appearance as normal. [[User:Toprawa and Ralltiir|Toprawa and Ralltiir]] ([[User talk:Toprawa and Ralltiir|talk]]) 18:39, February 2, 2016 (UTC)
+****I thought that'd be the case, but wanted to double check. Added to infobox and new P&T section. '''[[User:Nayayen|<span style="color:#0C307A;">nayayen</span>]][[User talk:Nayayen|<span style="color:#256BB1;">★talk</span>]]''' 20:20, February 5, 2016 (UTC)
 *The article misspells "archaeological" in the main quote. Is this your error or the game's? [[User:Toprawa and Ralltiir|Toprawa and Ralltiir]] ([[User talk:Toprawa and Ralltiir|talk]]) 01:02, January 27, 2016 (UTC)
+**From the game; they use both spellings throughout. '''[[User:Nayayen|<span style="color:#0C307A;">nayayen</span>]][[User talk:Nayayen|<span style="color:#256BB1;">★talk</span>]]''' 22:59, January 27, 2016 (UTC)
+***In that case, you should mark it as a misspelling in the original text by placing [sic] in the quote after the misspelled word. [[User:Toprawa and Ralltiir|Toprawa and Ralltiir]] ([[User talk:Toprawa and Ralltiir|talk]]) 18:39, February 2, 2016 (UTC)
+****Added. '''[[User:Nayayen|<span style="color:#0C307A;">nayayen</span>]][[User talk:Nayayen|<span style="color:#256BB1;">★talk</span>]]''' 20:20, February 5, 2016 (UTC)
+=====Ayrehead02=====
+*Could you give context for Ahlan when he is first introduced in the bio please? [[User:Ayrehead02|Ayrehead02]] ([[User talk:Ayrehead02|talk]]) 14:23, April 4, 2016 (UTC)
+*An article needs to be made for his mother. [[User:Ayrehead02|Ayrehead02]] ([[User talk:Ayrehead02|talk]]) 14:23, April 4, 2016 (UTC)
 ====Comments====
+===Vote to remove nomination (AC only)===
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+#{{AC}} Unaddressed objections from April, user absent since February. - [[User:Cavalier One|<span style="color:black">'''Sir Cavalier of One'''</span>]][[File:FarStar.svg|20px]]<sup>([[User talk:Cavalier One|<span style="color:black">''Squadron channel''</span>]])</sup> 15:52, June 3, 2016 (UTC)
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+#{{AC}} '''[[User:Ifindyourlackoffaithdisturbing|<span style="color:darkorange">IFYLOFD</span>]]''' <sup>([[User Talk:Ifindyourlackoffaithdisturbing|<span style="color:black">Talk</span>]])</sup> 22:55, June 3, 2016 (UTC)
+#{{AC}} [[User:Exiledjedi|<b><span style="color: brown">Exiled Jedi</span></b>]] ([[User talk:Exiledjedi|<span style="color: brown">talk</span>]]) 00:54, June 10, 2016 (UTC)