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====Support====
 
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#<span style="font-size:0.9em;font-family:flama-book, monaco">''[[User:VDO|'''VDO''']]''</span> <sup>[[User talk:VDO|<small>talk</small>]]</sup> 16:47, January 17, 2016 (UTC)
 
#<span style="font-size:0.9em;font-family:flama-book, monaco">''[[User:VDO|'''VDO''']]''</span> <sup>[[User talk:VDO|<small>talk</small>]]</sup> 16:47, January 17, 2016 (UTC)
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====Object====
 
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*VDO: Per your request, some apparent "so fix it" issues will be noted so that the changes can be made by you:
 
*VDO: Per your request, some apparent "so fix it" issues will be noted so that the changes can be made by you:
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***Those changes are all good, thanks for the review! '''[[User:Nayayen|<span style="color:#0C307A;">nayayen</span>]][[User talk:Nayayen|<span style="color:#256BB1;">★talk</span>]]''' 16:31, January 17, 2016 (UTC)
 
***Those changes are all good, thanks for the review! '''[[User:Nayayen|<span style="color:#0C307A;">nayayen</span>]][[User talk:Nayayen|<span style="color:#256BB1;">★talk</span>]]''' 16:31, January 17, 2016 (UTC)
 
****Sweet. <span style="font-size:0.9em;font-family:flama-book, monaco">''[[User:VDO|'''VDO''']]''</span> <sup>[[User talk:VDO|<small>talk</small>]]</sup> 16:47, January 17, 2016 (UTC)
 
****Sweet. <span style="font-size:0.9em;font-family:flama-book, monaco">''[[User:VDO|'''VDO''']]''</span> <sup>[[User talk:VDO|<small>talk</small>]]</sup> 16:47, January 17, 2016 (UTC)
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=====Toprawa=====
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*Infobox objections: The character's hair, eye, and skin color should all be detailed in the infobox if possible. This information should then additionally be detailed in a Personality and traits section.
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*The article misspells "archaeological" in the main quote. Is this your error or the game's? [[User:Toprawa and Ralltiir|Toprawa and Ralltiir]] ([[User talk:Toprawa and Ralltiir|talk]]) 01:02, January 27, 2016 (UTC)
   
 
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Revision as of 01:02, January 27, 2016

Casus Sandral

  • Nominated by: nayayen★talk 14:55, January 17, 2016 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: I'm not dead! This guy is though. I haven't done this in years, so please treat this more like a first time nominator...

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Support

  1. VDO talk 16:47, January 17, 2016 (UTC)

Object

  • VDO: Per your request, some apparent "so fix it" issues will be noted so that the changes can be made by you:
    1. Pipe links should be removed from all quotes.
    2. The "Behind the scenes" section should also be completely sourced. (looks like it needs to be sourced to KotOR)
      • It's self-sourcing with the direct attribution in the text, but doesn't hurt to add I guess. nayayen★talk 16:31, January 17, 2016 (UTC)
    • This last line is not an objection, just wanted to let you know I've gone through and made some small changes to things that stuck out to me. If you disagree with them feel free to revert, I felt they flowed better and didn't seem to run-on this way. VDO talk 15:56, January 17, 2016 (UTC)
      • Those changes are all good, thanks for the review! nayayen★talk 16:31, January 17, 2016 (UTC)
        • Sweet. VDO talk 16:47, January 17, 2016 (UTC)
Toprawa
  • Infobox objections: The character's hair, eye, and skin color should all be detailed in the infobox if possible. This information should then additionally be detailed in a Personality and traits section.
  • The article misspells "archaeological" in the main quote. Is this your error or the game's? Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 01:02, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

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