Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Unidentified henchman (the Cauldron)

Henchman

• Nominated by: OOM 224 ༼༽^{talk}༼༽ 23:23, May 19, 2020 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: First status article. Was going for CA, but I've exceeded the word count.

Object

Fan

• That image belong somewhere else in the body, not in the BtS, as it relates to in-universe information, not OOU information.
  • Fixed. - - - OOM 224 ༼༽^{talk}༼༽ 05:17, May 20, 2020 (UTC)
• A 'Sources' section, with the Starwars.com cast list page included and marked with {{1stID}}, should be added. Fan26 (Talk) 01:08, May 20, 2020 (UTC)
  • Done. - - - OOM 224 ༼༽^{talk}༼༽ 05:17, May 20, 2020 (UTC)

Shayanomer

• Episode air date required, with the appropriate source.
  • I went through the 2003 Homing Beacon, Hyperspace, and the EU News Archive on IA, as well as the Cartoon Network schedules, but I can't find anything. I'll keep searching, but do anyone know of an archived web page for CW Season One dates? - - - OOM 224 ༼༽^{talk}༼༽ 08:21, May 20, 2020 (UTC)
    • Tv.com can be used as a valid source. Shayanomer (talk) 08:29, May 20, 2020 (UTC)
      • Ah, there we go. Thanks. - - - OOM 224 ༼༽^{talk}༼༽ 08:48, May 20, 2020 (UTC)
• "22 BBY–21 BBY" is unnecessary, it should be replaced with something like "at some point between 22 and 21 BBY" per precedent. Shayanomer (talk) 07:16, May 20, 2020 (UTC)
  • Done. - - - OOM 224 ༼༽^{talk}༼༽ 08:21, May 20, 2020 (UTC)
• You should expand the intro a bit. Currently it's pretty short.
  • How about now? I've also expanded the body to include Ventress proving herself a warrior and becoming Dooku's acolyte since it's related to Henchman's preparations (of the arena) and assassination. - - - OOM 224 ༼༽^{talk}༼༽ 05:58, May 21, 2020 (UTC)
    • Great, now just combine it into one paragraph. Shayanomer (talk) 07:08, May 21, 2020 (UTC)
      • Got it. - - - OOM 224 ༼༽^{talk}༼༽ 08:22, May 21, 2020 (UTC)
• "...wherein gladiators demonstrated their prowess before the Sith Lord in search of an acolyte." This makes it seem like the gladiators were looking for an acolyte.
  • Fixed. - - - OOM 224 ༼༽^{talk}༼༽ 05:58, May 21, 2020 (UTC)
• Dooku's line on Henchman's death can be added as a quote in the Biography. Shayanomer (talk) 20:39, May 20, 2020 (UTC)
  • Roger Roger. - - - OOM 224 ༼༽^{talk}༼༽ 05:58, May 21, 2020 (UTC)
• Context for Clone Wars in intro and body.
  • Provided. - - - OOM 224 ༼༽^{talk}༼༽ 20:53, May 23, 2020 (UTC)
    • Still missing from the intro. Only the warring parties needs to be listed for context, there is too much of it in the body right now. Shayanomer (talk) 12:31, May 24, 2020 (UTC)
      • Fixed both intro and body. - - - OOM 224 ༼༽^{talk}༼༽ 19:10, May 24, 2020 (UTC)
• "Thus, the adept proved herself a capable assassin, one, Dooku remarked, Henchman would have applauded." Some formal wording here would be nice.
  • Reworded the latter half of the intro. - - - OOM 224 ༼༽^{talk}༼༽ 20:53, May 23, 2020 (UTC)
• In the BTS, you should start with the character's appearance; it currently starts with the voice actor and episode air date. Shayanomer (talk) 20:15, May 23, 2020 (UTC)
  • Fixed. - - - OOM 224 ༼༽^{talk}༼༽ 20:53, May 23, 2020 (UTC)
• If the name of the character is a nickname, then you need to put quotations around it in the intro and state as such there. Shayanomer (talk) 10:33, May 26, 2020 (UTC)

Comments

• Won't make an objection out of this, but audio files would be useful for readers who wish to know what the character sounds like. Shayanomer (talk) 20:16, May 23, 2020 (UTC)
  • Noted. Unfortunately, I can't add them since I don't have the DVDs. - - - OOM 224 ༼༽^{talk}༼༽ 20:53, May 23, 2020 (UTC)
    • Try to find someone who has access to the show. Shayanomer (talk) 12:31, May 24, 2020 (UTC)