It is hard to relate the description of the quote in the body with the quote itself, since the Ice Demon image pushes the quote accross too far. Rearrange some stuff.
Stagorr dueled Logray when he arrived. Put in a little sentence about why Logray comes. All you've established is that Stagorr wants to lure him there, you haven't actually explained why Logray arrives.SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is the truth) 07:12, September 13, 2009 (UTC)
Can you explain what you mean on your first point? It looks fine for me on any computer I try. I've made a go at addressing your second point. ~ SavageBob 06:43, September 27, 2009 (UTC)
It is really minor I guess, but the first image, Stagorr1.jpg, pushes the quote, but not the quote description, to the right, making it harder to connect the two (at least it does on Monobook). SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is the truth) 05:57, September 28, 2009 (UTC)
I've played with it in edit mode, but really the only thing that solves it is to either remove the image altogether or to shrink it down a lot. The quote and quote description are together for me in Monobook, so I think it depends on your screen resolution. Still, let me know if you think the image should be removed completely. ~ SavageBob 15:27, September 28, 2009 (UTC)
I had the same issue as Soresu, but found out how to fix that. Apparently, making the image larger solves the problem with the quote (at least it did for me). QuiGonJinn(Talk) 16:01, September 28, 2009 (UTC)
The last few sentences of your "History" is really confusing. I thought the demon was still in the mountain? How did Wicket melt him? You jump right from "Logray gave up his staff" to "Wicket melted him", in essence. Chack Jadson(Talk) 00:06, September 18, 2009 (UTC)
Is it any better now? ~ SavageBob 06:43, September 27, 2009 (UTC)
Approved by AgriCorps 04:07, October 6, 2009 (UTC)
Thanks for the reviews so far, folks. I'm away from regular internet for at least another week, but I'll get on this when I get reconnected. ~ SavageBob 05:38, September 24, 2009 (UTC)
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