Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Nemrileo irm-Drocubac (third nomination)

Nemrileo irm-Drocubac

• Nominated by: Supreme Emperor (talk) 01:25, August 22, 2020 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:My apologies for missing those last 2 objections, both have been fixed and noted in the comments section below. Supreme Emperor (talk) 01:25, August 22, 2020 (UTC)

Support

1. Shayanomer (talk) 08:31, August 29, 2020 (UTC)
2. LordMominutiae (talk) 01:13, 31 October 2020 (UTC)

Object

Shayanomer

• I think the second paragraph in the Biography should be broken up, it's looking quite large. Shayanomer (talk) 13:35, August 22, 2020 (UTC)
  • Done. Thanks for the review. Supreme Emperor (talk) 18:20, August 23, 2020 (UTC)
• The precedent is to make date notes specific to the subject of the article, so you should do that with the 22 BBY date note. Shayanomer (talk) 08:54, August 26, 2020 (UTC)
  • Done. Supreme Emperor (talk) 22:18, August 28, 2020 (UTC)
• Talking book should presumably be added to Appearances, with its redlink filled in. Shayanomer (talk) 14:29, 24 October 2020 (UTC)
  • I have created the page, but this objection is long overdue. Shayanomer (talk) 07:11, 8 November 2020 (UTC)

Toprawa

• The article will need to add the Approaching Storm audiobook to the Appearances list and check that source for any missing information. For example, does the audiobook introduce any particular vocal details for the character, such as an accent? Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 00:07, September 16, 2020 (UTC)
  • I'll find a copy and check, thanks for the review. Supreme Emperor (talk) 02:16, September 24, 2020 (UTC)
    • I'll be listening to it over the next few days, and will advise if there is anything to note. Supreme Emperor (talk) 03:05, September 28, 2020 (UTC)
      • Nothing to note from it, I've added the audiobook to the appearances, just have to create the article. Supreme Emperor (talk) 02:27, October 2, 2020 (UTC)
        • So what does the character's voice sound like? Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 17:17, October 2, 2020 (UTC)
          • I didn't find anything particularly distinctive about it, a basic male voice. No distinct accent, identifying feature, if that makes sense. Supreme Emperor (talk) 01:19, October 9, 2020 (UTC)
            • Very well. Now you'll need to fill in that redlink. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 01:29, October 9, 2020 (UTC)
              • Done. Supreme Emperor (talk) 03:25, October 20, 2020 (UTC)

Comments

• Do we need two refs for the end of the bio? All the info seems simple, so I think a single ref should suffice.
  • The bio incorporates info from both sources, the details of his death from the novel, while the guide clarifies it was Separatist agents. I can do a ref explanation instead if you'd like.
• Please use the Oxford comma.
  • I believe I've gotten this one, please advise if I've missed anything. Supreme Emperor (talk) 01:25, August 22, 2020 (UTC)

LordMominutiae

• So just to be clear, irm-Drocubac was killed by Separatists (despite being a Separatist himself) because he dared to doubt Shu Mai's commitment to the Separatist movement? LordMominutiae (talk) 14:31, 24 October 2020 (UTC)
  • A combination of that, and having doubts and second thoughts about their plans for secession. Supreme Emperor (talk) 00:17, 31 October 2020 (UTC)

Vote to remove nomination (AC only)

1. Unaddressed objection from Shayanomer over 10 days old. Even though he noted the page had been created 9 days ago, the original objection still stands unaddressed, with The Approaching Storm (Talking Book Publishers Inc. audiobook) needing to be checked and added to appearances. Tommy-Macaroni 17:18, 17 November 2020 (UTC)
2. Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:02, 17 November 2020 (UTC)