Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Okinaa

Okinaa

• Nominated by: CometSmudge (talk) 17:29, 27 August 2024 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:
• Word count at nomination time: 826 words (87 introduction, 693 body, 46 behind the scenes)
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:Visions WP:Comics

(2 ACs/0 Users/2 Total)

(Votes required: 1 AC vote(s) required to reach minimum. Additional 2 user or 1 AC votes required to pass.)

Support

1. —spookywilloww^talk 01:28, 14 September 2024 (UTC)
2. Lewisr (talk) 00:21, 19 September 2024 (UTC)

Object

Lew

• I think that the intro makes it more clear that all of the villagers had died, the body just mentions it as those that had, would you mind tweaking it slightly to match? Lewisr (talk) 01:47, 18 September 2024 (UTC)
  • Tweaked, does this work? CometSmudge (talk) 17:05, 18 September 2024 (UTC)