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Stewart McKenny[]
- Nominated by: Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 05:03, 15 December 2021 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: I know Stewart personally so hopefully that hasn't gotten in the way.
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Support[]
- Dentface (talk) 07:10, 22 December 2021 (UTC)
- UberSoldat93 (talk) 12:43, 27 January 2022 (UTC)
- LucaRoR (Talk) 12:11, 3 March 2022 (UTC)
- 1358 (Talk) 18:56, 6 March 2022 (UTC)
- OOM 224 21:21, 7 March 2022 (UTC)
Object[]
Dent[]
"unique ability to vary his art style makes his artwork popular. " sounds subjective. I'd remove that from both the intro and the biography.Dentface (talk) 06:16, 15 December 2021 (UTC)Please go back through the body and the intro to make sure everything is italicized properly. Most products with titles aren't properly italicized by my reading.Dentface (talk) 06:16, 15 December 2021 (UTC)- Done, I didn't italicise where I only mentioned the volume number, since that's not the actual title. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 09:32, 15 December 2021 (UTC)
Every instance of "Star Wars" needs to be italicized. Additionally, make sure your italicization of Star Wars Tales 18 in the first body paragraph does not italicize the issue number.Dentface (talk) 08:42, 17 December 2021 (UTC)
- Done, I didn't italicise where I only mentioned the volume number, since that's not the actual title. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 09:32, 15 December 2021 (UTC)
Is mentioning his work at Marvel really relevant, since it isn't tied to Star Wars?Dentface (talk) 06:16, 15 December 2021 (UTC)Your sources section should be formatted differently, using templates such as {{CWACite}}.Dentface (talk) 06:16, 15 December 2021 (UTC)In the first sentence in the first paragraph, there is an extra period.Dentface (talk) 08:42, 17 December 2021 (UTC)
Fan[]
"with a unique ability to change his drawing style, making his artwork popular." I think Dent was right to object to this. Even if the source says this, that is very clearly a subjective statement.Fan26 (Talk) 05:56, 18 December 2021 (UTC)- Removed the popular bit for now, can the statement about his drawing style change or is that also subjective? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 10:55, 20 December 2021 (UTC)
UberSoldat[]
Please see my copy-edit, and ensure that all punctuation goes within quotation marks.- Got a couple more. I know we do this and I absolutely 100% abhor it lol this is the one I struggle with most! :S Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 08:11, 24 January 2022 (UTC)
- American grammar for ya :P JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 03:47, 28 January 2022 (UTC)
- Got a couple more. I know we do this and I absolutely 100% abhor it lol this is the one I struggle with most! :S Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 08:11, 24 January 2022 (UTC)
As with my copy-edit above, I want to see all the other external citations formatted accordingly i.e. manually linked "work" fields, "publisher" containing copyright holder if found.- Thanks so much for the clarification on Discord! I made the updates, let me know if they're ok? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 08:52, 24 January 2022 (UTC)
- All good. UberSoldat93 (talk) 13:41, 24 January 2022 (UTC)
- Thanks so much for the clarification on Discord! I made the updates, let me know if they're ok? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 08:52, 24 January 2022 (UTC)
As per formal writing, please use the person's last name instead of their first on subsequent mentions.Though there's no Layout Guide rule for this, I would like to see full comic publication dates in the Biography, seeing as they're mandated everywhere else.UberSoldat93 (talk) 15:15, 23 January 2022 (UTC)- On second thought, not a good idea actually. UberSoldat93 (talk) 18:01, 23 January 2022 (UTC)
It's not necessary to go into plot details for his works, especially when he only illustrated them. See this objection for context.UberSoldat93 (talk) 18:06, 23 January 2022 (UTC)Him working for major publishers is currently intro-exclusive.Please use {{Short story}} for the Boba Fett stories under Bibliography.UberSoldat93 (talk) 14:36, 25 January 2022 (UTC)- I was confused because that's an infobox template lol I've added it and also used the template in Sources where appropriate :) Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 08:36, 27 January 2022 (UTC)
- Sorry for linking the wrong template. UberSoldat93 (talk) 12:40, 27 January 2022 (UTC)
- I was confused because that's an infobox template lol I've added it and also used the template in Sources where appropriate :) Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 08:36, 27 January 2022 (UTC)
Macaroni[]
Mark McKenna needs to be mentioned in a {{Youmay}} instead of Otheruses, as that's only for disambig pages.JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 05:00, 26 January 2022 (UTC)
Luca[]
In case of double references, they need to be put in ascending order.I think the last two paragraphs of "The Adventures" can be merged since they are pretty short.Please make sure to be ok with my copy-edit and good work!LucaRoR (Talk) 07:38, 3 March 2022 (UTC)
Ecks Dee[]
The lead quote of the article is not really a quote; it's a caption. Just like we wouldn't use captions or infoboxes from sourcebooks as quotes, I don't think a Twitter bio counts as quotable material. The Manual of Style -- although mostly written with IU articles in mind -- does define quotes and I as well as1358 (Talk) 22:10, 3 March 2022 (UTC)twoone other ACs I consulted don't think this one falls under the definition. The lead quote should be replaced with the body quote.- I had another dig and found another relevant quote, I missed it initially with all the generic "Stewart is coming to X convention he drew star wars" and "here's this (unofficial) star wars artwork i did!" posts.
FirstSecond time using Fbcite so let me know if it needs tweaking. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 01:57, 4 March 2022 (UTC)
- I had another dig and found another relevant quote, I missed it initially with all the generic "Stewart is coming to X convention he drew star wars" and "here's this (unofficial) star wars artwork i did!" posts.
Comments[]
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 21:21, 7 March 2022 (UTC)