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Sumari[]
- Nominated by: Cade Calrayn 03:20, August 3, 2012 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Does anyone know what those little cones on the sides of Twi'leks' heads are? Are they supposed to be ears?
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Support[]
- Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 00:22, August 22, 2012 (UTC)
- I'm pretty sure I had sign this, strange..Winterz (talk) 00:58, August 22, 2012 (UTC)
- IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 22:32, August 30, 2012 (UTC)
- Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 10:18, September 4, 2012 (UTC)
- CC7567 (talk) 18:43, September 14, 2012 (UTC)
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Winterz[]
"She does not appear again, but dies of her illness while the player" on Behind the scenes section. I don't know if it's just me but the 'but' there, doesn't seem to make any lexical sense.- Fixed.
Also isn't there a subspecies name for green twi'leks? If there is, I'd recommend adding it. Everything else, 'perfecto'.Winterz (talk) 20:59, August 9, 2012 (UTC)
Exiled Jedi[]
"Succeeding Kolovish as leader of the Twi'lek Pilgrims, Sumari brought her daughter Ranna Tao'Ven with her to Tython, where she succeeded Matriarch Kolovish as leader of her people." Please remove the repeat information from this sentence.- Done.
"when the native Flesh Raiders began to attack in greater numbers." Please specify who is being attacked.- Done.
Please mention why she is angry with the Jedi in the biography section.- Done, and added some context in the form of info about the Consular storyline that I missed.
Please provides links for the missions in between the apprentice's times in the village.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 03:28, August 19, 2012 (UTC)
Floyd[]
Article for the stone tower?- Done.
Context for the Fount crisis.- Done.
Context on the Tythonian Gnarls.- IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 23:04, August 26, 2012 (UTC)
Attack of the Clone[]
Color disambig pages should not be linked to in IU sections.- Linked to Color instead.
Should Ranna be referred to her surname, Tao'Ven? We usually use surnames for formality unless there's a surname overlap (between family, for example), which isn't the case here. Please clarify.CC7567 (talk) 17:56, September 14, 2012 (UTC)- Well, it's rather weird with the surname, so i fixed it so that she's referred to as her daughter or Ranna Tao'Ven. Cade Calrayn 18:13, September 14, 2012 (UTC)
Comments[]
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 18:43, September 14, 2012 (UTC)
- To answer your question about the Twi'leks cones with a sentence from the article: "Males had humanoid ears, and among females there was equal biological evidence for humanoid ears and ear 'cones'. ". They have ears like the males but about the cones, I guess it's part of females-only morphology, no idea about its usefulness though. Winterz (talk) 20:51, August 9, 2012 (UTC)