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Tarsus Valorum[]
- Nominated by: Brandon Rhea(talk)(he/him/his) 20:41, 27 March 2025 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Canon side of the coin to go along with the FA re-nom for Tarsus Valorum/Legends.
- Date Archived: 20:49, 8 May 2025 (UTC)
- Final word count: 507 words (95 introduction, 268 body, 144 behind the scenes)
- Word count at nomination time: 465 words (90 introduction, 264 body, 111 behind the scenes)
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Support votes[]
—spookywillowwtalk 01:16, 3 May 2025 (UTC)
Lewisr (talk) 18:59, 6 May 2025 (UTC)
OOM 224 15:53, 8 May 2025 (UTC)
- StarWarsFan327 (talk) 20:32, 8 May 2025 (UTC)
- Booply (talk) 20:48, 8 May 2025 (UTC)
Objections[]
Skifffy[]
Needs context for CoruscantSkifffy (talk) 23:28, 27 March 2025 (UTC)- Done! - Brandon Rhea(talk)(he/him/his) 10:17, 28 March 2025 (UTC)
spookly[]
Seems like a little bit of dupe linking going on; perhaps catching that with the tool for dupelinks might sort that.There's admittedly not really enough substance here to justify subsectioning; one-paragraph subsections are avoided whenever possible. And these don't seem quite long enough to break up as they are, either; it would look like any normal three paragraph no-section biography with it removed.If the Legends image is being used in the BTS, it would generally lean (in precedent) to then document the Legends 1st pictured (in this case TEA) to give the reader further context for the image. Its worth noting that 1stp isn't always documented in canon BTSs (only sometimes), but, it commonly tends to be when the Legends image is used, hence this note.—spookywillowwtalk 02:29, 31 March 2025 (UTC)- All of these are done. And thanks for the head's up that there's a duplicate links tool - that's really helpful! - Brandon Rhea(talk)(he/him/his) 16:56, 31 March 2025 (UTC)
- Is the illustrator on the file page for that image correct? (Chris Trevas; if so, worth tucking in.—spookywillowwtalk 23:22, 2 April 2025 (UTC)
- I was never (between this and the past Legends nom) able to find a source confirming that. He's one of the artists on The Essential Atlas but the book doesn't have specific credits per image. I've looked around for a source but never came across one online either. - Brandon Rhea(talk)(he/him/his) 01:54, 3 April 2025 (UTC)
- Fair, have nicked it off the file page then until it can be, if ever.—spookywillowwtalk 02:13, 11 April 2025 (UTC)
- Sounds good to me. Thanks Spooky! - Brandon Rhea(talk)(he/him/his) 03:50, 11 April 2025 (UTC)
- Fair, have nicked it off the file page then until it can be, if ever.—spookywillowwtalk 02:13, 11 April 2025 (UTC)
- I was never (between this and the past Legends nom) able to find a source confirming that. He's one of the artists on The Essential Atlas but the book doesn't have specific credits per image. I've looked around for a source but never came across one online either. - Brandon Rhea(talk)(he/him/his) 01:54, 3 April 2025 (UTC)
- Is the illustrator on the file page for that image correct? (Chris Trevas; if so, worth tucking in.—spookywillowwtalk 23:22, 2 April 2025 (UTC)
- All of these are done. And thanks for the head's up that there's a duplicate links tool - that's really helpful! - Brandon Rhea(talk)(he/him/his) 16:56, 31 March 2025 (UTC)
Was browsing around the maintenance category tree and noticed this (and the Legends one, actually) are in the unpopulated family parameters maint cat.—spookywillowwtalk 23:22, 2 April 2025 (UTC)- Fixed! - Brandon Rhea(talk)(he/him/his) 01:54, 3 April 2025 (UTC)
Lew[]
Would like to see the 1032 BBY date in the introLewisr (talk) 23:14, 23 April 2025 (UTC)- Added. - Brandon Rhea(talk)(he/him/his) 18:22, 29 April 2025 (UTC)
I don't see a mention of House Valorum being from Coruscant in Rise of the Separatists, do you know where that is?Lewisr (talk) 23:14, 23 April 2025 (UTC)- My bad, that was the wrong citation. It's in the Helmet Collection source, so I've changed that. - Brandon Rhea(talk)(he/him/his) 18:22, 29 April 2025 (UTC)
There's room in the biography for a subject relevant imageLewisr (talk) 23:14, 23 April 2025 (UTC)- Added! - Brandon Rhea(talk)(he/him/his) 18:22, 29 April 2025 (UTC)
Would recommend looking at something like Oro Dassyne, for BTS notes for ones regarding Rise of the SeparatistsLewisr (talk) 23:14, 23 April 2025 (UTC)- Done! - Brandon Rhea(talk)(he/him/his) 18:22, 29 April 2025 (UTC)
Wok[]
Copyedit for review, did some sentence reorganizingOffice of the Chancellor is infobox exclusive and should be linked in the body.Wok142 (talk) 20:23, 26 April 2025 (UTC)- Added - and thanks for the copyedit! - Brandon Rhea(talk)(he/him/his) 18:22, 29 April 2025 (UTC)
Comments[]
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 20:49, 8 May 2025 (UTC)