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Unidentified Wookiee base (shipyard)[]
- Nominated by: Commander Code-8 Hello There! 11:40, January 20, 2020 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Level 5 complete
(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)[]
Support[]
- LordMominutiae (talk) 21:14, January 21, 2020 (UTC)
- UberSoldat93 (talk) 16:19, January 24, 2020 (UTC)
- 1358 (Talk) 18:09, March 10, 2020 (UTC)
- Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:06, March 21, 2020 (UTC)
- Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 20:28, March 26, 2020 (UTC)
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"The base was built between" As far as I understand, the base is not mentioned in the NEC, so you'll have to source this part to the game.- "The location was chosen for its proximity to a Trade Federation outpost where B1 battle droids were produced, which the Wookiee leader Chewbacca planned to destroy." This reads very awkward right now; specifically, the part after the comma. Chewbacca intended to destroy the outpost, not the B1 battle droids.
"A transport ship was built at the shipyard, which the speeder scouts boarded and left on the other side of the river." Similar to above. Reads like the speeder scouts boarded the shipyard.- I'll look over it once more after you fix these. 1358 (Talk) 18:52, February 24, 2020 (UTC)
- All done. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 14:11, March 2, 2020 (UTC)
You have consecutive [3] references in the Bts.1358 (Talk) 18:23, March 4, 2020 (UTC)- Done. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 12:42, March 6, 2020 (UTC)
"At the shipyard, a transport ship was built, which the speeder scouts boarded and left on the other side of the river." Did they leave the ship on the other side of the river, or did they leave with the ship for the other side of the river?1358 (Talk) 20:27, March 6, 2020 (UTC)- How's that? Commander Code-8 Hello There! 10:37, March 9, 2020 (UTC)
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"The game's strategy guide, which was published by Prima Games shortly before the release of Galactic Battlegrounds" Unless the strategy guide says something like "soon-to-be-released game," I think you need a source for that.Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 19:12, March 14, 2020 (UTC)- So sorry for the delay, the strategy guide has no such statement. I've just removed the mentions of the release timing since it's not totally relevant to the article. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 14:46, March 23, 2020 (UTC)
- Normally I'd agree. But since the guide was released before the game, isn't the guide the subject's first mention? If so, it should be noted with a {{1stm}} tag in the Sources, which should also be clarified in BTS. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 21:49, March 24, 2020 (UTC)
- Silly that I forgot that tag. Corrected. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 04:41, March 25, 2020 (UTC)
- Good, but now my original objection still stands. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 20:23, March 25, 2020 (UTC)
- Are you saying I need to have a reference to confirm that one source was released before another? I've never seen anything like that done here. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 06:01, March 26, 2020 (UTC)
- On second thought, nevermind. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 20:28, March 26, 2020 (UTC)
- Are you saying I need to have a reference to confirm that one source was released before another? I've never seen anything like that done here. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 06:01, March 26, 2020 (UTC)
- Good, but now my original objection still stands. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 20:23, March 25, 2020 (UTC)
- Silly that I forgot that tag. Corrected. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 04:41, March 25, 2020 (UTC)
- Normally I'd agree. But since the guide was released before the game, isn't the guide the subject's first mention? If so, it should be noted with a {{1stm}} tag in the Sources, which should also be clarified in BTS. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 21:49, March 24, 2020 (UTC)
- So sorry for the delay, the strategy guide has no such statement. I've just removed the mentions of the release timing since it's not totally relevant to the article. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 14:46, March 23, 2020 (UTC)
Comments[]
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 20:28, March 26, 2020 (UTC)