Again, I see this problem in one of your articles. The intro is way too big. It's the same length as the Bio section. You have to fix this, not just in this article but in your future ones - the intro is just supposed to be a loose overview. For an article of this size, it shouldn't be more than a few sentences.IFYLOFD(Enter the Floydome) 23:33, May 19, 2013 (UTC)
I'm never sure what should/shouldn't be mentioned in the intro and should get the hang of it soon hopefully. However I've cut down the info should be good now I hope. DarthRevan1173 (Long live Lord Revan) 23:56, May 19, 2013 (UTC)
Intro looks much better, but it now sits at exactly 250 words. Let's try to bump up the word count a little bit: first, context for Shanra Immel in the intro.
Also you could extrapolate some info from your quote - such as the comment about his ability in null-racket, could go in P&T.IFYLOFD(Enter the Floydome) 01:34, May 22, 2013 (UTC)