Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/X-45

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X-45

• Nominated by: QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 17:20, January 4, 2020 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. Tommy Macaroni 18:06, January 16, 2020 (UTC)
2. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 21:39, January 16, 2020 (UTC)
3. Shayanomer (talk) 18:48, January 19, 2020 (UTC)
4. Ayrehead02 (talk) 22:22, January 19, 2020 (UTC)
5. Zed42 (talk) 22:24, January 19, 2020 (UTC)

Object

Shayanomer

• Substitute repeated mentions of "Bossk" with something like "the Trandoshan" or "the bounty hunter".
  • Fixed.
• You should add the release date and publisher of the comic, sourced to the Marvel.com website. This is already on the comic's page so you can just copy that.
  • Done.
• I don't think a sound effect from a comic is a suitable quote.
  • Was on the fence regarding this myself. Felt like I needed one more quote besides the lead one, but couldn't find anything else relevant. Removed.
• It would be better to add the first Legends appearance in the BTS, which currently only includes the first mention. Shayanomer (talk) 18:01, January 4, 2020 (UTC)
  • Added. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 16:43, January 6, 2020 (UTC)
• I feel like the reference for the year could be trimmed down and/or substituted with another source, since the TROS VD was released after this comic. If it can't be done, let me know. Shayanomer (talk) 17:18, January 6, 2020 (UTC)
  • TROS VD helps us narrow it down to 4 ABY exactly, by providing the concrete date for the acquisition of the Boushh armor. Without the Visual Dictionary, our best estimation would be between 3 ABY and 4 ABY. That being said, I've reworded the ref note, cutting out unneccessary mentions of Maz Kanata and Leia losing her armor to Jabba. The comic clearly states that it takes place before Han's rescue, so there's no need for additional clarification there. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 18:30, January 11, 2020 (UTC)
    • Alright. Shayanomer (talk) 18:37, January 11, 2020 (UTC)

Spooky

• I think the intro could be a touch longer - maybe one more sentence, about the flaw?
  • Expanded.
• Wouldn't Bossk be considered an owner of a X-45, and have that in the infobox?—spookywilloww^talk 20:18, January 5, 2020 (UTC)
  • He definitely would be. Added. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 16:43, January 6, 2020 (UTC)

Tommy

• I think the intro can be expanded a little more, perhaps with Leia's exploitation of the weakness, or Bossk's hunt for Lando?
  • I went with the mention of Lando. The intro is now long-enough, IMO.
• Is the release date for Adventure Journal 3 self-sourcing? Tommy Macaroni 21:12, January 10, 2020 (UTC)
  • The AJ only says "August 1994". The exact date "August 1" is not provided, so I've sourced it to SW.com. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 08:38, January 16, 2020 (UTC)

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