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Uunu[]
Things to do[]
- Infobox should avoid including grammatical article in pipelink
- I find some of the intro to be poorly worded and presented. For example, saying she was "alive in 26 ABY" is so awkward and unspecific. Instead, say what this character was doing at that time; like "Uunu was a Yuuzhan Vong who participated in her species' invasion of the galaxy in 26 ABY" or something. For that matter, I would like to see that sentence framed instead from the perspective of the galaxy, which is much more familiar for our readers to understand. The wording "when the Yuuzhan Vong were invading a galaxy other than their own." is just so unusual.
- Correct me if I'm wrong, but I'm pretty sure the 26 ABY date can't be sourced straight to the NJO novel itself. That date is only present in the Star Wars Timeline at the beginning of the book. I'd recommend using Essential Reader's Companion instead.
- A four-paragraph Bio like this is typically perfect for two subsections of two paragraphs each, which allows for an additional image or quote if available
- BTS is unsourced. And fix redirect.
- I'm not sure if anything other than the first sentence of the BTS is actually necessary for inclusion
Removal of FA status[]
- Article put on probation at Meeting 109. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 06:52, November 3, 2019 (UTC)
- Status removed at Meeting 110. 1358 (Talk) 17:38, December 8, 2019 (UTC)