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Jun 15 20:39:15 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Welcome to Inq Meeting 104
Jun 15 20:39:19 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Starting with old articles
Jun 15 20:39:24 <Tommy-Macaroni>	https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Battle_of_the_City_of_Bone
Jun 15 20:39:28 <Tommy-Macaroni>	https://starwars.wikia.com/index.php?diff=cur&oldid=8208876
Jun 15 20:39:32 <Tommy-Macaroni>	https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:Inq/Battle_of_the_City_of_Bone
Jun 15 20:39:38 <Tommy-Macaroni>	No change
Jun 15 20:39:39 <Imperators>	kill
Jun 15 20:39:39 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Kill
Jun 15 20:39:45 <exiledjedi>	kill
Jun 15 20:39:56 <Toprawa>	I have SE's vote
Jun 15 20:39:59 <Toprawa>	Kill²
Jun 15 20:40:03 <Tommy-Macaroni>	I have ecks'
Jun 15 20:40:21 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Battle of the City of Bone killed
Jun 15 20:40:27 <Tommy-Macaroni>	https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Rokur_Gepta
Jun 15 20:40:32 <Tommy-Macaroni>	https://starwars.wikia.com/index.php?diff=cur&oldid=8208877
Jun 15 20:40:36 <Tommy-Macaroni>	https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:Inq/Rokur_Gepta_(third_review)
Jun 15 20:40:39 <Tommy-Macaroni>	No change
Jun 15 20:40:42 <Toprawa>	Kill²
Jun 15 20:40:43 <Imperators>	poor Gepta. kill
Jun 15 20:40:47 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Kill²
Jun 15 20:40:48 <exiledjedi>	Kill
Jun 15 20:41:02 <Toprawa>	Should have stayed in whatever stupid corner of the galaxy he came from
Jun 15 20:41:35 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Rokur Gepta killed
Jun 15 20:41:39 <Tommy-Macaroni>	https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Freedon_Nadd
Jun 15 20:41:43 <Tommy-Macaroni>	https://starwars.wikia.com/index.php?diff=cur&oldid=8208878
Jun 15 20:41:47 <Tommy-Macaroni>	https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:Inq/Freedon_Nadd_(third_review)
Jun 15 20:41:54 <Tommy-Macaroni>	No change
Jun 15 20:41:55 *	Ralltiir (~Toprawa@wookieepedia/bureaucrat/Toprawa) has joined
Jun 15 20:41:55 *	ChanServ gives channel operator status to Ralltiir
Jun 15 20:41:58 <Imperators>	kill
Jun 15 20:42:02 <Ralltiir>	9_9
Jun 15 20:42:02 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Kill²
Jun 15 20:42:04 <exiledjedi>	Kill
Jun 15 20:42:07 <Ralltiir>	Kill²
Jun 15 20:42:23 <Tommy-Macaroni>	(I should say when I say no change I am excluding all the bot work that's gone on)
Jun 15 20:42:31 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Freedon Nadd killed
Jun 15 20:42:35 <Tommy-Macaroni>	https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Talon_Karrde
Jun 15 20:42:39 <Tommy-Macaroni>	https://starwars.wikia.com/index.php?diff=cur&oldid=8208879
Jun 15 20:42:42 <Tommy-Macaroni>	https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:Inq/Talon_Karrde_(second_review)
Jun 15 20:42:57 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Some changes
Jun 15 20:43:13 <Ralltiir>	Why do people even bother?
Jun 15 20:43:26 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Yeah nowhere near enough
Jun 15 20:43:27 <Tommy-Macaroni>	https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:Inq/Talon_Karrde_(second_review)
Jun 15 20:43:29 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Oops
Jun 15 20:43:32 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Kill²
Jun 15 20:43:39 <Imperators>	kill
Jun 15 20:43:40 <exiledjedi>	Kill
Jun 15 20:43:58 <Ralltiir>	I don't think the changes were in regard to this probe, though
Jun 15 20:44:02 <Ralltiir>	For the record
Jun 15 20:44:08 <Ralltiir>	Kill²
Jun 15 20:44:10 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Talon Karrde killed
Jun 15 20:44:11 <Tommy-Macaroni>	https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Armand_Isard/Legends
Jun 15 20:44:15 <Tommy-Macaroni>	https://starwars.wikia.com/index.php?diff=cur&oldid=8208880
Jun 15 20:44:19 <Tommy-Macaroni>	https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:Inq/Armand_Isard/Legends
Jun 15 20:44:28 <Tommy-Macaroni>	No change
Jun 15 20:44:30 <Imperators>	kill
Jun 15 20:44:32 <Ralltiir>	Kill²
Jun 15 20:44:35 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Kill²
Jun 15 20:44:45 <exiledjedi>	Kill
Jun 15 20:44:48 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Armand Isard/Legends killed
Jun 15 20:44:52 <Tommy-Macaroni>	https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Orman_Tagge
Jun 15 20:44:57 <Tommy-Macaroni>	https://starwars.wikia.com/index.php?diff=cur&oldid=8208881
Jun 15 20:45:00 <Tommy-Macaroni>	https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:Inq/Orman_Tagge_(third_review)
Jun 15 20:45:15 <Tommy-Macaroni>	No significant change
Jun 15 20:45:21 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Kill²
Jun 15 20:45:23 <Imperators>	kill
Jun 15 20:45:25 <Ralltiir>	Kill²
Jun 15 20:45:31 <exiledjedi>	Kill
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Jun 15 20:45:33 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Orman Tagge killed
Jun 15 20:45:38 <Tommy-Macaroni>	https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Tott_Doneeta
Jun 15 20:45:42 <Tommy-Macaroni>	https://starwars.wikia.com/index.php?diff=cur&oldid=8208882
Jun 15 20:45:46 <Tommy-Macaroni>	https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:Inq/Tott_Doneeta_(second_review)
Jun 15 20:45:53 <Tommy-Macaroni>	No change
Jun 15 20:45:57 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Kill²
Jun 15 20:45:59 <Ralltiir>	Kill²
Jun 15 20:46:02 <exiledjedi>	Kill
Jun 15 20:46:04 <Imperators>	kill
Jun 15 20:46:13 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Tott Doneeta killed
Jun 15 20:46:18 <Tommy-Macaroni>	https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Jon_(farmer)
Jun 15 20:46:18 *	Ralltiir is now known as Toprawa
Jun 15 20:46:21 <Tommy-Macaroni>	https://starwars.wikia.com/index.php?diff=cur&oldid=8208883
Jun 15 20:46:25 <Tommy-Macaroni>	https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:Inq/Jon_(farmer)_(second_review)
Jun 15 20:46:32 <Tommy-Macaroni>	No change
Jun 15 20:46:34 <Imperators>	kill
Jun 15 20:46:36 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Kill²
Jun 15 20:46:40 <exiledjedi>	KIll
Jun 15 20:46:42 <Toprawa>	Kill²
Jun 15 20:46:52 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Jon (farmer) killed
Jun 15 20:46:54 <Tommy-Macaroni>	So sad
Jun 15 20:46:58 <Tommy-Macaroni>	https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Chik_Apla
Jun 15 20:47:02 <Tommy-Macaroni>	https://starwars.wikia.com/index.php?diff=cur&oldid=8208884
Jun 15 20:47:06 <Tommy-Macaroni>	https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:Inq/Chik_Apla_(second_review)
Jun 15 20:47:14 <Tommy-Macaroni>	No change
Jun 15 20:47:18 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Kill²
Jun 15 20:47:18 <Imperators>	kill
Jun 15 20:47:18 <exiledjedi>	Kill
Jun 15 20:48:16 *	Ralltiir (~Toprawa@wookieepedia/bureaucrat/Toprawa) has joined
Jun 15 20:48:16 *	ChanServ gives channel operator status to Ralltiir
Jun 15 20:48:25 <Ralltiir>	9_9
Jun 15 20:48:35 <Ralltiir>	Did we kill Chik Apla?
Jun 15 20:48:40 <Tommy-Macaroni>	No
Jun 15 20:48:43 <Ralltiir>	Kill²
Jun 15 20:48:46 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Yes
Jun 15 20:48:47 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Chik Apla killed
Jun 15 20:48:51 <Tommy-Macaroni>	https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Barpotomous_Drebble/Legends
Jun 15 20:48:54 <Tommy-Macaroni>	https://starwars.wikia.com/index.php?diff=cur&oldid=8208885
Jun 15 20:48:58 <Tommy-Macaroni>	https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:Inq/Barpotomous_Drebble/Legends
Jun 15 20:49:07 <Tommy-Macaroni>	No change
Jun 15 20:49:09 <Ralltiir>	Kill²
Jun 15 20:49:10 <Imperators>	kill
Jun 15 20:49:11 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Kill²
Jun 15 20:49:14 <exiledjedi>	Kill
Jun 15 20:49:19 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Barpotomous Drebble/Legends killed
Jun 15 20:49:23 <Tommy-Macaroni>	https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Scourge_(Sith)
Jun 15 20:49:28 <Tommy-Macaroni>	https://starwars.wikia.com/index.php?diff=cur&oldid=8208886
Jun 15 20:49:32 <Tommy-Macaroni>	https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:Inq/Scourge_(Sith)
Jun 15 20:49:38 <Tommy-Macaroni>	No chnage
Jun 15 20:49:38 <Imperators>	kill
Jun 15 20:49:43 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Kill²
Jun 15 20:49:47 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Ugh, english
Jun 15 20:49:52 <Ralltiir>	Kill²
Jun 15 20:49:53 <exiledjedi>	Kill
Jun 15 20:49:56 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Scourge (Sith) killed
Jun 15 20:50:01 <Tommy-Macaroni>	https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Lushros_Dofine
Jun 15 20:50:04 <Tommy-Macaroni>	https://starwars.wikia.com/index.php?diff=cur&oldid=8208887
Jun 15 20:50:08 <Tommy-Macaroni>	https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:Inq/Lushros_Dofine
Jun 15 20:50:17 <Tommy-Macaroni>	No change
Jun 15 20:50:19 <Imperators>	kill
Jun 15 20:50:21 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Kill²
Jun 15 20:50:23 <Ralltiir>	Kill²
Jun 15 20:50:28 <exiledjedi>	Kill
Jun 15 20:50:30 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Lushros Dofine killed
Jun 15 20:50:34 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Well that was fun
Jun 15 20:50:37 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Onto new stuff then
Jun 15 20:50:51 <Imperators>	ooh, look, Tope's unsatisfied with some articles again
Jun 15 20:50:58 <Tommy-Macaroni>	WOT
Jun 15 20:51:02 <Tommy-Macaroni>	SHOCK, HORROR
Jun 15 20:51:05 <Tommy-Macaroni>	https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Kam_Nale
Jun 15 20:51:10 <Ralltiir>	You should be grateful 
Jun 15 20:51:11 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Redlink.
Jun 15 20:51:11 <Tommy-Macaroni>	The sentence about Emissaries to Malastare and Jedi Quest: The Dangerous Games only has one ref tag to the latter, and the same for the sentence about Podracing Tales and The Not-so Magnificent Seven.
Jun 15 20:51:11 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Because Kam Nale only appears in 3 issues of the Jedi Quest: The Dangerous Games comic arc, should the behind the scenes sentence be reworded to only mention him appearing in a few comics? The sentence as is seems to make it sound like Kam Nale appears in all the issues of the comic. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 02:33, June 1, 2019 (UTC)
Jun 15 20:51:17 *	Toprawa has quit (Ping timeout: 245 seconds)
Jun 15 20:51:19 <Ralltiir>	You wouldn't have anything to do at this meeting if not for me
Jun 15 20:51:28 <Tommy-Macaroni>	This is true
Jun 15 20:51:30 <Imperators>	we are grateful
Jun 15 20:51:37 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Probe
Jun 15 20:51:46 <Imperators>	probe
Jun 15 20:52:00 <exiledjedi>	Probe
Jun 15 20:52:01 <Ralltiir>	Wait
Jun 15 20:52:15 <Ralltiir>	Hanzo's little things aren't even worth the time to probe something on
Jun 15 20:52:22 <Ralltiir>	If we're going to probe this article, let's get everything
Jun 15 20:53:02 <Ralltiir>	Most of the BBY dates are not referenced correctly
Jun 15 20:53:12 <Ralltiir>	The end of the article made this sudden referencing blitz to try and do so, funny enough
Jun 15 20:53:36 <Ralltiir>	Let's ditch this clown wording "Using simple math"
Jun 15 20:53:45 <Ralltiir>	"Therefore" works better
Jun 15 20:54:46 <Ralltiir>	Much of the BTS is just unnecessary, I think
Jun 15 20:54:59 <Ralltiir>	The second and third paragraphs are just regurgitating the Appearances section
Jun 15 20:55:11 <exiledjedi>	Yeah, it seems really useless.
Jun 15 20:55:11 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Image formatting: needs underscores and thumb|right|size order
Jun 15 20:55:19 <Ralltiir>	Podracing Tales needs the SW.com citation template
Jun 15 20:55:33 <Ralltiir>	Format SW.com Databank names correctly
Jun 15 20:56:09 <Ralltiir>	Scroll boxes probably for the Sources and Notes
Jun 15 20:56:40 <Ralltiir>	There's a very good chance Clonehunter is going to try and save this article
Jun 15 20:56:47 <Ralltiir>	So we might as well get *everything*
Jun 15 20:57:32 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Thats fine, I'm happy to thoroughly go over it
Jun 15 20:57:39 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Although I think that's about it
Jun 15 20:57:48 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Templates need underscores
Jun 15 20:57:57 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Okay I'm happy with that
Jun 15 20:58:02 <Ralltiir>	I can see other little minor things, like the YJCCG template can be formatted to avoid the parentheses 
Jun 15 20:58:15 <Ralltiir>	If he really tries to save this thing, it's probably going to go to Redux, then we'll get into the nitty gritty
Jun 15 20:58:21 <Ralltiir>	You've been warned, Clonehunter :P
Jun 15 20:58:26 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Excellent
Jun 15 20:58:37 <Ralltiir>	One more
Jun 15 20:58:37 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Probe² then
Jun 15 20:58:41 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Shit
Jun 15 20:58:43 <Ralltiir>	Infobox-exclusive skin color, it seems
Jun 15 20:58:50 <Imperators>	definitely scrollboxes for Sources and References
Jun 15 20:59:17 <Imperators>	probe
Jun 15 20:59:19 <Ralltiir>	Ok, take it away :P
Jun 15 20:59:22 <exiledjedi>	Probe
Jun 15 20:59:29 <Imperators>	quick maffs
Jun 15 20:59:33 <Ralltiir>	Probe²
Jun 15 20:59:36 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Probe²
Jun 15 20:59:42 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Kam Nale probed
Jun 15 20:59:43 <Ralltiir>	quick maffs, indeed
Jun 15 20:59:50 <Tommy-Macaroni>	https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Windo_Nend
Jun 15 20:59:57 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Update needed
Jun 15 20:59:57 <Tommy-Macaroni>	I'm pretty certain the Republic comics can't be used as a straight source for 21 BBY. They simply say something like "fifteen months after the Battle of Geonosis."
Jun 15 20:59:57 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Infobox-exclusive information
Jun 15 20:59:57 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Intro could use a paragraph break
Jun 15 20:59:57 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Last Bio image doesn't fit well there in Wikia skin view
Jun 15 20:59:57 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Redlink
Jun 15 20:59:57 <Tommy-Macaroni>	BTS is unsourced
Jun 15 20:59:58 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Publication dates in BTS would be nice. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 17:33, June 15, 2019 (UTC)
Jun 15 21:00:27 <Imperators>	probe
Jun 15 21:00:30 <Ralltiir>	Probe²
Jun 15 21:00:36 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Probe²
Jun 15 21:00:40 <exiledjedi>	Probe
Jun 15 21:00:58 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Windo Nend probed
Jun 15 21:01:02 <Tommy-Macaroni>	https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Duel_in_the_Korriban_Academy
Jun 15 21:01:07 <Tommy-Macaroni>	1000 BBY is exclusive to the infobox and intro
Jun 15 21:01:07 <Tommy-Macaroni>	I'd like confirmation that 1000 BBY can indeed be sourced to the novel and doesn't need to be sourced to Essential Reader's Companion, for example
Jun 15 21:01:07 <Tommy-Macaroni>	This event is not mentioned in Essential Reader's Companion?
Jun 15 21:01:07 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Maybe some images?
Jun 15 21:01:07 <Tommy-Macaroni>	BTS unsourced. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 17:33, June 15, 2019 (UTC)
Jun 15 21:01:13 <Imperators>	probe
Jun 15 21:01:20 <exiledjedi>	Probe
Jun 15 21:01:29 <Ralltiir>	All of these are pre-date-referencing FAs, so I'm skeptical about every date
Jun 15 21:01:33 <Ralltiir>	Probe²
Jun 15 21:01:49 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Probe²
Jun 15 21:02:01 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Duel in the Korriban Academy probed
Jun 15 21:02:06 <Tommy-Macaroni>	https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Niai_Fieso
Jun 15 21:02:11 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Underlinking throughout
Jun 15 21:02:11 <Tommy-Macaroni>	I feel like we could crop off a little bit from the top of the infobox image
Jun 15 21:02:11 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Infobox-exclusive info
Jun 15 21:02:11 <Tommy-Macaroni>	All Xexto are hairless, so it's not necessary to specify "None" for that infobox field
Jun 15 21:02:11 <Tommy-Macaroni>	32 BBY is not referenced correctly
Jun 15 21:02:12 <Tommy-Macaroni>	The backup link in reference 4 needs to be modified to point to a working archive version
Jun 15 21:02:12 <Tommy-Macaroni>	BTS is mostly unsourced. Sticking reference 5 onto the end of the first BTS paragraph doesn't work.
Jun 15 21:02:13 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Format SW.com Databank names correctly
Jun 15 21:02:13 <Tommy-Macaroni>	The link for the CCG card image isn't working. I think they moved around their URLs, so this will need to be updated for this link.
Jun 15 21:02:14 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Missing backup link(s). Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 17:33, June 15, 2019 (UTC)
Jun 15 21:02:20 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Probe²
Jun 15 21:02:22 <Imperators>	probe
Jun 15 21:02:27 <Ralltiir>	Probe²
Jun 15 21:02:45 <exiledjedi>	Probe
Jun 15 21:03:06 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Niai Fieso probed
Jun 15 21:03:09 <Tommy-Macaroni>	https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Sirak
Jun 15 21:03:14 <Tommy-Macaroni>	1000 BBY is infobox-exclusive. I'd also like confirmation that this date can be sourced to the novel and doesn't need to be sourced to Essential Reader's Companion.
Jun 15 21:03:14 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Some images?
Jun 15 21:03:14 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Publication date for novel in BTS would be nice
Jun 15 21:03:14 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Missing backup links. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 17:33, June 15, 2019 (UTC)
Jun 15 21:03:17 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Probe²
Jun 15 21:03:20 <Ralltiir>	Probe²
Jun 15 21:03:22 <Imperators>	probe
Jun 15 21:03:42 <exiledjedi>	Probe
Jun 15 21:03:43 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Sirak probed
Jun 15 21:03:45 <Tommy-Macaroni>	https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Dannl_Faytonni/Legends
Jun 15 21:03:53 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Infobox-exclusive information
Jun 15 21:03:53 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Underlinking throughout
Jun 15 21:03:53 <Tommy-Macaroni>	22 BBY date is not referenced correctly
Jun 15 21:03:53 <Tommy-Macaroni>	I'd like to see a more balanced subsectioning of the Biography. Sticking one little paragraph into the first subsection and the remainder of the Bio in a second doesn't look great.
Jun 15 21:03:53 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Quote in second subsection needs to use Quote template for two-speakers, not Dialogue
Jun 15 21:03:54 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Article looks like it could probably use an Equipment section
Jun 15 21:03:54 <Tommy-Macaroni>	BTS:
Jun 15 21:03:55 <Tommy-Macaroni>	This section just isn't written well. I'd like to see a more natural organization and flow to the chronological development of the character. Mention his first source first, with appropriate author and publication credits, then go into his film appearance.
Jun 15 21:03:55 <Tommy-Macaroni>	At least one paragraph break would also be nice to break up and organize the information better.
Jun 15 21:03:56 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Just align the image right. That always looks better for the BTS.
Jun 15 21:03:56 <Tommy-Macaroni>	The Clone Wars: Departure should use the SW.com template in the Appearances and referencing
Jun 15 21:03:57 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Redirect in Sources
Jun 15 21:03:57 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Format SW.com Databank names correctly. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 17:33, June 15, 2019 (UTC)
Jun 15 21:04:00 <Imperators>	probe
Jun 15 21:04:01 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Probe²
Jun 15 21:04:02 <Ralltiir>	Probe²
Jun 15 21:04:06 <exiledjedi>	Probe
Jun 15 21:04:15 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Dannl Faytonni/Legends probed
Jun 15 21:04:19 <Tommy-Macaroni>	https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Janus_Greejatus/Legends
Jun 15 21:04:30 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Reference 2 is going to need a little work. Firstly, I'd like to see it expanded to explain Greejatus's connection. The card says that the six Imperial Advisors who accompanied the Emperor to the Death Star were all killed. This reference needs to explain which source identifies Greejatus as one of these six Advisors, since he's not mentioned explicitly. Secondly, Endor is not mentioned on that card.
Jun 15 21:04:30 <Tommy-Macaroni>	The Office of the Supreme Chancellor is exclusive to the infobox. The article should find a way to at least pipelink this into the Bio someplace.
Jun 15 21:04:30 <Tommy-Macaroni>	With the exception of the Darth Plagueis references, none of the BBY or ABY dates are being sourced correctly in the article body or the succession box. This includes the 4 ABY pipelink.
Jun 15 21:04:30 <Tommy-Macaroni>	I don't believe any of the article's instances of multiple referencing (i.e., [1][10][11]) are necessary. Move ref links into sentences to source appropriate portions as necessary.
Jun 15 21:04:30 <Tommy-Macaroni>	There is at least one more image of the Imperial Advisors that could be worked into the article body
Jun 15 21:04:30 <Tommy-Macaroni>	An Equipment section could probably be had, along with a Powers and abilities, considering his Force abilities
Jun 15 21:04:30 <Tommy-Macaroni>	All of the Bio thumbnail images could be enlarged in Wikia skin
Jun 15 21:04:31 <Tommy-Macaroni>	BTS:
Jun 15 21:04:31 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Most of it isn't sourced correctly
Jun 15 21:04:32 <Tommy-Macaroni>	The second paragraph could definitely use at least one paragraph break, which means the entire section could probably be organized into two subsections, possibly even with another image?
Jun 15 21:04:32 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Add non-canon subsection to Appearances
Jun 15 21:04:33 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Format SW.com Databank name correctly
Jun 15 21:04:33 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Sources and Notes and references could probably use scroll boxes
Jun 15 21:04:34 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Refs 11 and 13 need citation templates
Jun 15 21:04:34 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Missing backup links. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 17:33, June 15, 2019 (UTC)
Jun 15 21:04:39 <Imperators>	probe
Jun 15 21:04:39 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Probe²
Jun 15 21:04:39 <Ralltiir>	Probe²
Jun 15 21:04:47 <exiledjedi>	Probe
Jun 15 21:04:49 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Janus Greejatus/Legends probed
Jun 15 21:04:56 <Tommy-Macaroni>	https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Faro_Argyus
Jun 15 21:05:02 <Tommy-Macaroni>	22 BBY cannot be sourced straight to Essential Reader's Companion for TCW stuff
Jun 15 21:05:02 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Infobox-exclusive information
Jun 15 21:05:02 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Underlinking
Jun 15 21:05:02 <Tommy-Macaroni>	None of the article's body images are placed well, which is a relic of Monobook. All of them are running into section headers or quotes or bleeding into another section.
Jun 15 21:05:02 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Some of the P/T info needs to be reorganized into an Equipment section, which could also be expanded to detail his weaponry
Jun 15 21:05:02 <Tommy-Macaroni>	I'd like confirmation that 32 BBY can be sourced to Clone Wars Campaign Guide
Jun 15 21:05:02 <Tommy-Macaroni>	All of the TCW webcomic stories should employ the SW.com citation template
Jun 15 21:05:03 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Missing backup links. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 17:33, June 15, 2019 (UTC)
Jun 15 21:05:07 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Probe²
Jun 15 21:05:08 <Ralltiir>	Probe²
Jun 15 21:05:13 <Imperators>	probe
Jun 15 21:05:30 <exiledjedi>	Probe
Jun 15 21:05:31 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Faro Argyus probed
Jun 15 21:05:31 <Tommy-Macaroni>	https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Decimator_(war_machine)
Jun 15 21:05:38 <Tommy-Macaroni>	If the craft has deflector shields, this should be specified explicitly and linked in the infobox
Jun 15 21:05:38 <Tommy-Macaroni>	I don't know why reference 5 is at all necessary. Just source that straight to New Essential Chronology.
Jun 15 21:05:38 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Images:
Jun 15 21:05:38 <Tommy-Macaroni>	The "Role" image's caption is pretty weak
Jun 15 21:05:38 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Both body image thumbnail sizes could be expanded
Jun 15 21:05:38 <Tommy-Macaroni>	I'd like to see the History subsectioned, which creates enough room for another image and quote if available
Jun 15 21:05:38 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Redlink
Jun 15 21:05:39 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Publication date for first appearance in the BTS would be nice
Jun 15 21:05:39 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Not everything in BTS is properly referenced
Jun 15 21:05:40 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Ref 2 needs to use CSWECite. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 17:33, June 15, 2019 (UTC)
Jun 15 21:05:42 <Ralltiir>	Probe²
Jun 15 21:05:43 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Probe²
Jun 15 21:05:43 <Imperators>	probe
Jun 15 21:05:58 <exiledjedi>	Probe
Jun 15 21:06:02 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Decimator (war machine) probed
Jun 15 21:06:11 <Tommy-Macaroni>	https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/BesGas_Three
Jun 15 21:06:17 <Tommy-Macaroni>	22 BBY isn't referenced correctly and is infobox-exclusive
Jun 15 21:06:17 <Tommy-Macaroni>	If this thing's only appearances are ESB and Unseen Queen, I don't see how anything but the Rebellion and New Jedi Order eras can be presented in the Eras template
Jun 15 21:06:17 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Publication date for first appearance would be nice in BTS
Jun 15 21:06:17 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Missing backup links. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 17:33, June 15, 2019 (UTC)
Jun 15 21:06:21 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Probe²
Jun 15 21:06:28 <exiledjedi>	Probe
Jun 15 21:06:42 <Ralltiir>	Probe²
Jun 15 21:07:20 <Imperators>	probe
Jun 15 21:07:23 <Tommy-Macaroni>	BesGas Three probed
Jun 15 21:07:33 <Tommy-Macaroni>	OKay that's all of the ones on there
Jun 15 21:07:38 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Anyone have anything else?
Jun 15 21:07:41 <Ralltiir>	You missed one
Jun 15 21:07:51 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Oh yeah
Jun 15 21:07:51 <Ralltiir>	BesGas wasn't the last one
Jun 15 21:07:53 <Tommy-Macaroni>	hahah
Jun 15 21:07:53 <Tommy-Macaroni>	https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Aarrba
Jun 15 21:07:59 <Tommy-Macaroni>	5000 BBY cannot be sourced straight to the TOTJ comics and is infobox-exclusive
Jun 15 21:07:59 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Other infobox-exclusive info
Jun 15 21:07:59 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Underlinking
Jun 15 21:07:59 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Hutts don't naturally have hair, so specifying "None" in that infobox field is unnecessary
Jun 15 21:07:59 <Tommy-Macaroni>	A Hutt wearing clothing is fairly unique and deserves to be detailed in the P/T or an Equipment section, depending on how it's being framed
Jun 15 21:07:59 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Just because he resided on Koros Major doesn't mean that's his homeworld, as the infobox is saying
Jun 15 21:07:59 <Tommy-Macaroni>	There's no reason for this double reference. Move ref notes into the sentence to cite individual portions as necessary: The Daragons were grateful, but the Hutt insisted that they keep his generosity a secret from the other customers.[4][3]
Jun 15 21:08:00 <Tommy-Macaroni>	If all of this article's material comes from comics, I don't see why another image can't be had for "The younger Daragons" subsection
Jun 15 21:08:00 <Tommy-Macaroni>	The Bio should be reorganized so the first paragraph is placed within a subsection
Jun 15 21:08:01 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Many redirects
Jun 15 21:08:01 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Articles need to be referenced by individual comic issue, not story arcs
Jun 15 21:08:02 <Tommy-Macaroni>	BTS unsourced. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 17:33, June 15, 2019 (UTC)
Jun 15 21:08:02 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Probe²
Jun 15 21:08:06 <Imperators>	probe
Jun 15 21:08:08 <Ralltiir>	Probe²
Jun 15 21:08:13 <exiledjedi>	Probe
Jun 15 21:08:15 <Tommy-Macaroni>	I'm too eager, had it on the clipboard
Jun 15 21:08:23 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Aarrba probed
Jun 15 21:08:31 <Tommy-Macaroni>	OKay, same question again :P
Jun 15 21:08:40 <Ralltiir>	Not today
Jun 15 21:09:10 <Imperators>	nothing from me
Jun 15 21:09:36 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Okay cool. Anyone have any discussion items then?
Jun 15 21:09:45 <exiledjedi>	I do not.
Jun 15 21:09:46 <Ralltiir>	Not today
Jun 15 21:14:27 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Okay, for duties:
Jun 15 21:14:33 <Tommy-Macaroni>	EJ does paperwork
Jun 15 21:14:47 <Tommy-Macaroni>	And I think we need a new set of meeting schedulers
Jun 15 21:15:02 <Tommy-Macaroni>	https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:Inq/Inquisitorius_bylaws
Jun 15 21:15:12 <Ralltiir>	We do.
Jun 15 21:15:17 <Ralltiir>	I can randomize the next four
Jun 15 21:15:17 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Anyone have a randomised to hand?
Jun 15 21:15:22 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Cool, thanks
Jun 15 21:15:29 <Ralltiir>	Things got pushed unevenly because of SE's paperwork penalties
Jun 15 21:15:44 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Yeah. But at least he had completed those now
Jun 15 21:15:48 <Imperators>	it's cool, SE's our Paperwork Man
Jun 15 21:15:49 <Tommy-Macaroni>	*has
Jun 15 21:16:01 <Ralltiir>	Next four meeting schedulers:
Jun 15 21:16:03 <Ralltiir>	Supreme Emperor
Jun 15 21:16:03 <Ralltiir>	Toprawa and Ralltiir*
Jun 15 21:16:03 <Ralltiir>	Xd1358*
Jun 15 21:16:03 <Ralltiir>	Exiledjedi*
Jun 15 21:16:13 <Tommy-Macaroni>	FUCK YES
Jun 15 21:16:41 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Okay, SE schedules meeting 105
Jun 15 21:16:54 <Tommy-Macaroni>	And thus concludes meeting 104
Jun 15 21:16:57 <Imperators>	thanks for hosting, Tommy. Good job. And Tope, as well. :P
Jun 15 21:16:59 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Thank you all for coming
Jun 15 21:17:05 <Ralltiir>	Thank you :P
Jun 15 21:17:07 <Ralltiir>	Thanks, Tommy
Jun 15 21:17:08 <Ralltiir>	Good job
Jun 15 21:17:21 <exiledjedi>	Thanks for hosting.
Jun 15 21:17:22 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Coolio, no problamo
Jun 15 21:17:48 <Ralltiir>	https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:Inq/Inquisitorius_bylaws#Paperwork_and_meeting_scheduling_duties
Jun 15 21:17:52 <Ralltiir>	So we're good through Meeting 108
Jun 15 21:17:55 <Ralltiir>	Then we'll randomize it again
Jun 15 21:18:08 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Nice
Jun 15 21:18:21 <Imperators>	I'll get the log
Jun 15 21:18:51 <Tommy-Macaroni>	Thanks Imp
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